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Original:  The lawsuit was filed last Tuesday by three former professors who claim " they were wrongfully dismissed after reporting the school' s involvement in a local political race.
Revised:  In addition, a " they were wrongfully dismissed after reporting the school' s involvement in a local political race.
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Original: Richard Roberts, is the son of university founder and former faith healer Oral Roberts.
Revised: Richard has been president of ORU since his father, Oral Roberts university founder and former faith healer Oral Roberts.
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Original:  homework, remodeling his home 11 times in the past 14 years, and a purchasing red Mercedes convertible and a Lexus SUV for Lindsay  . Lindsay is also accused of spending tens of thousands of dollars on clothes billed to the university, awarding thirteen nonacademic scholarships to friends'
Revised:  homework, remodeling his home 11 times in the past 14 years, and a purchasing red Mercedes convertible and a Lexus SUV for Lindsay . Lindsay is also accused of spending tens of thousands of dollars on clothes billed to the university, awarding thirteennonacademic scholarships to friends'
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Original:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Revised:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Revised:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males , " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Revised:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " and firing a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Revised:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" at ORU her "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" of Roberts' wife could have the job.
Revised:  children despite poor scores, and sending text messages on university-issued cell phones to people described in the lawsuit as "underage males . " In addition, a "longtime maintenance employee" was fired so an "underage male friend" could have the job.
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Original:  Also accused is one Roberts' children is accused of vandalizing and removing athletic department equipment from ORU property  .
Revised:  In addition one Roberts' children is accused of vandalizing and removing athletic department equipment from ORU property .
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Original: Politicial accusations Tim Brooker, one the former professors suing ORU, was employed by ORU starting 2001 when he was recruited by the Republican National Committee (RNC) "in an effort to further Republican efforts."
Revised: Political accusations Tim Brooker, one the former professors suing ORU, was employed by ORU starting 2001 when he was recruited by the Republican National Committee (RNC) "in an effort to further Republican efforts."
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Original:  The leader of an important rebel group in the Darfur region of Sudan has threatened to withdraw from scheduled peace talks if more than two other rebel groups are invited to the talks.
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Original:  SLM leader Abdel Wahed Mohammed el-Nur has refused to take part in the negotiations until a UN force is deployed in Darfur, and the pro-government militias are disarmed.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He has also chastised the choice of location of the peace talks, saying his group was not consulted and that a more neutral site should have been chosen.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Mr. Natsios said that this has not happened, and that the north and south Sudanese governments are still opponents unable to find common ground.
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Revised: %DIFDELCMD < \\%%% \ --__%DIFDELCMD < \\ %%% : e x \ \/ _--~~ ~--__| \ | x * \ \_-~ ~-_\ | * g \_ \ _.--------.
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se The leader of an important rebel group in the Darfur region of Sudan has threatened to withdraw from scheduled peace talks if more than two other rebel groups are invited to the talks. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se Khalil Ibrahim,leader of the Justice and Equality Movement (JEM), said that only the JEM, the Sudanese Liberation Movement (SLM), and the Sudanese government should be involved in the procedures. He expressed displeasure with the way the peace talks are being handled, and said that the United Nations-African Union leadership is currently unprepared for the talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se "The AU and UN mediation until now have failed to detail very precisely who will be invited to the peace talks," Reuters news agency quotes him as saying. "If the mediation fails to take this decision by 27 October, then JEM is not attending the peace talks. We don't want to start with chaos." Ibrahim also said the SLM had to "reform itself and make one delegation and one position". 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se When the conflict in Darfur began in 2003, there were only two rebel groups opposing the Sudanese military. In the past four years, the rebel movement has splintered into more than 15 disparate groups, some of which are nothing more than armed outlaws. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se SLM leader Abdel Wahed Mohammed el-Nur has refused to take part in the negotiations until a UN force is deployed in Darfur, and the pro-government militias are disarmed. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se He has also chastised the choice of location of the peace talks, saying his group was not consulted and that a more neutral site should have been chosen. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se "Even if we were to attend the negotiations it will not be Tripoli," he said. "We think that any negotiation is supposed to happen in a place which is not related to the conflict." Libya has been an important influence in the Darfur conflict. They are believed to have first armed militias with weapons and Pan-Arab ideology in the 1980's, militias which became the current Janjaweed. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se Meanwhile, Andrew Natsios, the US Special Envoy to Sudan, has said that the relationship between the governments of north and south Sudan is growing increasingly toxic. He added that the two-year-old Comprehensive Peace Agreement would have to be discussed at the peace talks before the situation grew more dire. The agreement, signed in 2005, was aimed at bringing the two governments together as allies and partners in peace. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se Mr. Natsios said that this has not happened, and that the north and south Sudanese governments are still opponents unable to find common ground. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se "We are deeply concerned with the health of the CPA. The important deadlines have been missed... and trust is slowly being lost," said Mr. Natsios. 
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Original:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se           
Revised:  ______\| | g o \ \______// _ ___ _ (_(__> \ | o a \ . C ___) ______ (_(____> | / a t /\ | C ____)/ \ (_____> |_/ t s / /\| C_____) | (___> / \ s e | ( _C_____)\______/ // _/ / \ e x | \ |__%DIFDELCMD < \\%%% _________// (__/ | x * | \ \____) `---- --'| * g | \_ ___\ /_ _/ | g o | / | | \ | o a | | / \ \ | a t | / / | | \ |t s | / / \__/\___/ | |s e | / | | | |e x | | | | | |x * g o a t s e x * g o a t s e x * g o a t se Speculation on the peace talks also includes questions about the deployment of the 26,000 strong force of The United Nations African Union Mission in Darfur (UNAMID). The deployment of the force has been delayed because Khartoum and the AU have rejected non-African troops, and not enough African nations with well-trained and well-equipped soldiers have pledged to help
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Original:  According to reports, American biologist Craig Venter is going to announce that he has created the first ever "artificial life form" on earth at the J. Craig Venter Institute, a U.S. laboratory and research center, using synthetic chromosomes made from chemicals.
Revised:  According to reports, American biologist Craig Venter is going to announce that he has created the first ever "artificial life form" on Earth at the J. Craig Venter Institute, a U.S. laboratory and research center, using synthetic chromosomes made from chemicals.
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Original:  The Guardian Unlimited reports that Venter may announce the historical discovery on Monday, but could publish the report within a few weeks.
Revised:  The Guardian Unlimited reports that Venter may announce the discovery on Monday, but could publish the report within a few weeks.
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Original: The discovery was made by 20 scientists on a team that was lead by microbiologist Hamilton O. Smith which created the synthetic chromosome.
Revised: The discovery was made by 20 scientists on a team that was led by microbiologist Hamilton O. Smith which created the synthetic chromosome.
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Original:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank over  myspace.com.
Revised:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank over the social networking website, myspace.com.
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Original:  Virginia State Police said Mitchell was arrested outside of Winchester without incident at a  "The Flying J Truck Stop." Grady Judd, the Polk County Sheriff, told CNN that Mitchell told Frank he was 24.
Revised:  Virginia State Police said Mitchell was arrested outside of Winchester without incident at a "The Flying J Truck Stop." 
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Original:  Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abducter .
Revised:  Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abducter .
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Original:  Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abducter .
Revised:  Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abductor .
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Original:  You keep your hands off our children.  
Revised:  You keep your hands off our children. " 
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Original:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank over the social networking website, myspace.com.
Revised:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank to a meeting using the social networking website, myspace.com.
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Original:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank to a meeting using the social networking website, myspace.com.
Revised:  Authorities allege the registered sex offender lured 15-year-old Alyssa Frank over the social networking website, myspace.com.
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Original: Sheriff Judd told CNN that Mitchell told Frank he was 24, not 46.
Revised: Sheriff Judd told CNN that Mitchell said he was 24, not 46.
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Original:  We don't know everything," he said  Sheriff Judd warned others who might be trying to take advantage of children, "We'll hunt you down like the felon and criminal you are.
Revised:  We don't know everything," he said . Sheriff Judd warned others who might be trying to take advantage of children, "We'll hunt you down like the felon and criminal you are.
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Original: 250px|Logo for social networking website myspace.com Grady Judd, the Polk County Sheriff, said that Frank left her house in Bartow, Florida in the early hours Monday morning to meet Mitchell.
Revised:  Grady Judd, the Polk County Sheriff, said that Frank left her house in Bartow, Florida in the early hours Monday morning to meet Mitchell.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Virginia State Police said Mitchell was arrested outside of Winchester without incident at a gas station named "The Flying J Truck Stop." Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abductor.
Revised:  Virginia State Police said Mitchell was arrested outside of Winchester without incident at a gas station named "The Flying Gay Truck Stop." Frank was found earlier this week at a Wal-Mart in DeFuniak Springs, Florida, after allegedly being abandoned by a suspected abductor.
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