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Original:  ]] According to the European Space Agency (ESA), satellites 200  images from the Danish National Space Center (DNSC) indicate that the Arctic ice levels are at an all time low, since the first images taken in 1978, and as a result have completely opened up the Northwest Passage for the first time since humans began to record history.
Revised:  ]] According to the European Space Agency (ESA), 200 images from the Danish National Space Center (DNSC) indicate that the Arctic ice levels are at an all time low, since the first images taken in 1978, and as a result have completely opened up the Northwest Passage for the first time since humans began to record history.
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Original:  ]] According to the European Space Agency (ESA), 200 satellite images from the Danish National Space Center (DNSC) indicate that the Arctic ice levels are at an all time low, since the first images taken in 1978, and as a result have completely opened up the Northwest Passage  for the first time since humans began to record history.
Revised:  ]] According to the European Space Agency (ESA), 200 satellite images from the Danish National Space Center (DNSC) indicate that the Arctic ice levels are at an all time low, since the first images taken in 1978, and as a result the Northwest Passage for the first time since humans began to record history.
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Original:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased"  than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
Revised:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased" more than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
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Original:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased"  than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
Revised:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased" than previously thought and that by 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
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Original:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased"  than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
Revised:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased" than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the summer ice could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
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Original:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased"  than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with all the region being completely ice free by 2070.
Revised:  The images have shown the melting of the ice has "dramatically increased" than previously thought and that in 2030, all of the ice summer could be gone with the region being completely ice free by 2070.
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Original:  Researchers call an it an "extreme" situation and  that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square k.m. from 2005.
Revised:  Researchers call it an "extreme" situation and that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square k.m. from 2005.
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Original:  Researchers call an it an "extreme" situation and  that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square k.m. from 2005.
Revised:  Researchers call an it an "extreme" situation and say that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square k.m. from 2005.
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Original:  Researchers call an it an "extreme" situation and  that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square k.m. from 2005.
Revised:  Researchers call an it an "extreme" situation and that the ice is now shrinking at a level of about three million square kilometers a year, up from one million square kilometers per year in 2005.
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Original: Denmark, Norway, and Russia all also lay claim to the vast amounts of minerals, natural gas, and oil . Santa Claus reportedly lost Rudolph and several of his elves are reported to have drowned due to global warming over the past year or so.
Revised: Denmark, Norway, and Russia all also lay claim to the vast amounts of minerals, natural gas, and oil Santa Claus reportedly lost Rudolph and several of his elves are reported to have drowned due to global warming over the past year or so.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled  
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled . 
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Original: Microsoft has announced  a low-cost Windows XP Starter Edition is to be launched in Brazil.
Revised: Microsoft has announced that a low-cost Windows XP Starter Edition is to be launched in Brazil.
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Original:  Windows XP Starter Edition has been previously released in several other countries in Asia ;
Revised:  Windows XP Starter Edition has been previously released in several other countries in Asia ,
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home  but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home  but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home  but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  Brazil has been increasingly adopting Open Source Software for IT projects , rather than using Microsoft products.
Revised:  Brazil has been increasingly in favor of open-source software for IT projects , rather than using Microsoft products.
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Original:  Brazil has been increasingly adopting Open Source Software for IT projects , rather than using Microsoft products.
Revised:  Brazil has been increasingly adopting Open Source Software for IT projects over Microsoft products.
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Original: Microsoft has announced that a low-cost Windows XP Starter Edition is to be launched in Brazil.
Revised: Microsoft has announced a low-cost Windows XP Starter Edition is to be launched in Brazil.
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Original:  Windows XP Starter Edition has been previously released in several other countries in Asia , such as Russia.
Revised:  Windows XP Starter Edition has been previously released in several other countries in Asia ; such as Russia.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800x600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
Revised:  The edition is quite similar to Windows XP Home Edition but with some restrictions: Only three applications may be run concurrently, 800×600 is the maximum display resolution and home networking is disabled.
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Original:  Brazil has been increasingly in favor of open-source software for IT projects over Microsoft products.
Revised:  Brazil has been increasingly adopting open source software for IT projects over Microsoft products.
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Original:  Brazil has been increasingly in favor of open-source software for IT projects over Microsoft products.
Revised:  Brazil has been increasingly in favor of open-source software for IT projects , rather than using Microsoft products.
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Original:  These editions are sold only as a low-cost OEM bundle , and Windows XP Starter Edition .
Revised:  These editions are sold only as a low-cost OEM bundle .
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Original:  Ballot papers will be sent in seven days, with the aim of shutting down live broadcasting of sports events including the Wimbledon Tennis tournement and the Football Association Cup final.
Revised:  Ballot papers will be sent in seven days, with the aim of shutting down live broadcasting of sports events including the Wimbledon Tennis tournament and the Football Association Cup final.
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Original:  Luke Crawly of Bectu said that it was unrealistic to expect 100\% programme quality from 80\% of staff.
Revised:  Luke Crawly of BECTU said that it was unrealistic to expect 100\% programme quality from 80\% of staff.
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Original:  The BBC's rival Independent Television (ITV ) is experiencing strike action over wages at production companies London Weekend Television (LWT), Yorkshire TV, Granada and 3sixtymedia, that has led to prerecording of shows and has forced ITV to borrow studios at the BBC's Television Centre
Revised:  The BBC's rival ITV is experiencing strike action over wages at production companies London Weekend Television (LWT), Yorkshire TV, Granada and 3sixtymedia, that has led to prerecording of shows and has forced ITV to borrow studios at the BBC's Television Centre
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Original: Safer communities and more police:  Secure borders and controlled immigration:   The manifesto has been criticised by Labour Chancellor Gordon Brown for being unrealistic in its extimates of savings, and in predictions of economic growth resulting from tax cuts, calculating that there would be approximately £18 billion annual deficits.
Revised: Safer communities and more police: Secure borders and controlled immigration: The manifesto has been criticised by the Labour Chancellor, Gordon Brown, for being unrealistic in its extimates of savings, and in predictions of economic growth resulting from tax cuts, calculating that there would be approximately £18 billion annual deficits.
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Original:    Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats  Sir Menzies Campbell  claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic  .
Revised:  The Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats Sir Menzies Campbell claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic .
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Original:    Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats  Sir Menzies Campbell  claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic  .
Revised:  Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats , Sir Menzies Campbell claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic .
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Original:    Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats  Sir Menzies Campbell  claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic  .
Revised:  Deputy leader of the Liberal Democrats Sir Menzies Campbell , claimed that claimed that £5.5 to 8 billion of cuts were unrealistic .
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Original: Lower tax and value for money: The party plans to make up to £12 billion of savings anually by reducing beurocracy such as quangos.
Revised: Lower tax and value for money: The party plans to make up to £12 billion of savings annually by reducing beurocracy such as quangos.
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Original:  Flexible childcare and school disipline : The manifesto promised an increase in maternity pay and more choice of childcare.
Revised:  Flexible childcare and school discipline : The manifesto promised an increase in maternity pay and more choice of childcare.
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-76 (Sehwag, 5.5 ov), 2-77 (Uthappa, 6.3 ov)  Did not bat: India: A B Agarkar, M S Dhoni (capt, wkt), G Gambhir, Harbhajan Singh, K D Karthik, I K Pathan, V Sehwag, R P Singh, S Sreesanth, R V Uthappa, Yuvraj Singh Man of the Match: TBA
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-76 (Sehwag, 5.5 ov), 2-77 (Uthappa, 6.3 ov) India: A B Agarkar, M S Dhoni (capt, wkt), G Gambhir, Harbhajan Singh, K D Karthik, I K Pathan, V Sehwag, R P Singh, S Sreesanth, R V Uthappa, Yuvraj Singh Man of the Match: TBA
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Original: One month into the strike, the union received support from another major Turkish labor union, Petrol-İş, which asked the public to contact FMC regarding the abuses at FMC Board Member Dr. Emanuele Gatti, emamunele.gati@fmc-ag.com, Executive Manager Dr. Massimo Fini, massimo.fini@fmc-ag.com and Logistics and International Production Manager Antonio Raffa, antonio.raffa@fmc-ag.com.
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Original:  Often from rural areas and unaware of their rights, in a setting with high unemployment rates, left unprotected by their nation-state, and already oppressed by the harsher patriarchal conditions of their societies, women workers in a transnational factory have little choice other than to accept the questionable work conditions imposed on them  
Revised:  Often from rural areas and unaware of their rights, in a setting with high unemployment rates, left unprotected by their nation-state, and already oppressed by the harsher patriarchal conditions of their societies, women workers in a transnational factory have little choice other than to accept the questionable work conditions imposed on them . 
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Original:  During work hours, there is only a 15-minutes break and a 25-minutes lunch break.
Revised:  During work hours, there is only a 15-minute break and a 25-minutes lunch break.
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Original:  During work hours, there is only a 15-minutes break and a 25-minutes lunch break.
Revised:  During work hours, there is only a 15-minutes break and a 25-minute lunch break.
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Original:  Litvinenko, who was a critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin who had taken refuge in Britain , was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
Revised:  A critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin who had taken refuge in Britain , was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
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Original:  Litvinenko, who was a critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin who had taken refuge in Britain , was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
Revised:  Litvinenko, who was a critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin , Litvinenko had taken refuge in Britain , was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
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Original:  Litvinenko, who was a critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin who had taken refuge in Britain , was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
Revised:  Litvinenko, who was a critic of Russian President Vladimir Putin who had taken refuge in Britain and was murdered after he was fed the radioactive substance polonium-210.
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Original: Simpson with his daughter Sydney Brooke in 1986. O.J. Simpson has been arrested at the Palms Hotel and Casino on armed robbery charges.
Revised:  O.J. Simpson has been arrested at the Palms Hotel and Casino on armed robbery charges.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Two guns have been confiscated by the Las Vegas Metropolitan Police Department, as well as some of the sports memorabilia.
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Original: O.J. Simpson has been arrested at the Palms Hotel and Casino on charges related to an alledged armed robbery on Thursday.
Revised: O.J. Simpson has been arrested at the Palms Hotel and Casino on charges related to an alleged armed robbery on Thursday.
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Original:  Related Wikinew 
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Original:  Tonga overturned a six point deficit at half time to go second in the pool, ahead of a faltering England side who both teams are yet to play  .
Revised:  Tonga overturned a six point deficit at half time to go second in the pool, ahead of a faltering England side who are yet to play .
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Original:  Canada are bottom of the group with no points, one short of Japan     .
Revised:  Canada are bottom of the group with no points, one short of Japan . .
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Original:  French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner  warned on Sunday  the possibility of a war over Iran's nuclear programme.
Revised:  French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner warned on Sunday of the possibility of a war over Iran's nuclear programme.
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Original:  He also highlighted the importance of negotiations with Iran, stating these should continue "right to the end," though he underlined that if Iran possesed real nuclear weapons, this would pose "a real danger for the whole world".
Revised:  He also highlighted the importance of negotiations with Iran, stating these should continue "right to the end," though he underlined that if Iran possessed real nuclear weapons, this would pose "a real danger for the whole world".
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Original:  The United States has also not ruled out the option of military actions towards Iran, if the nuclear program continue
Revised:  The United States has also not ruled out the option of military actions towards Iran, if the nuclear program continues
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Original:  Meiwes seeks a reduction in sentence to 5 years, while the prosecution believes the cutting and dismembering deserves not just the full 8 1/2 years already assessed against the defendant, but a life sentence  
Revised:  Meiwes seeks a reduction in sentence to 5 years, while the prosecution believes the cutting and dismembering deserves not just the full 8 1/2 years already assessed against the defendant, but a life sentence . 
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Original: Yes, he carved up and ate another human being, but it was not without the victim’s express consent—so goes the defense of Armin Meiwes, known as the ‘German cannibal,’ following appeals by both sides, defense and prosecution, of the verdict.
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Original:  While Meiwes was convicted to 8 ½ years in prison for the manslaughter killing and eating of another human, Bernd Juergen Brandes, he argues that the victim had volunteered to be eaten, advertising the fact that he wanted someone to take part in “slaughter and consumption” on the Internet.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Testimony in the case showed that Brandes wanted to die a stabbing death after imbibing a bottle of cold medicine to lose consciousness.
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Original:  Meiwes seeks a reduction in sentence to 5 years, while the prosecution believes the cutting and dismembering deserves not just the full 8 ½ years already passed against the defendant, but a life sentence.
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Original: Ganapathi deity Ganapathi deity This September 15, 2007, being the birthday of Lord Ganesha, marks the important festival of Ganesh Chaturthi for Hindus in India and world wide.
Revised: Ganapathi deity This September 15, 2007, being the birthday of Lord Ganesha, marks the important festival of Ganesh Chaturthi for Hindus in India and world wide.
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Original:  Lord Ganesha occupies a special god status in hindu tradition, and is considered as the bestower of all auspiciousness and destroyer of all negativity.
Revised:  Lord Ganesha occupies a special god status in Hindu tradition, and is considered as the bestower of all auspiciousness and destroyer of all negativity.
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Original:  Typically these festive celebrations last from one to eleven days concluding with a Nimajjan ceremony (immersing the deity in the waters of lake/pond/river/sea/ocean etc).
Revised:  Typically these festive celebrations last from one to 11 days, concluding with a Nimajjan ceremony (immersing the deity in the waters of lake/pond/river/sea/ocean etc).
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Original:  However several Indian hindu communities spread across the globe from Australia to North America have celebrated with no less pomp.
Revised:  However ; several Indian Hindu communities spread across the globe from Australia to North America have celebrated with no less pomp.
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Original:  Notable ones were the celebration in the scandinavian towns of Roskilde and Skovde, where due to the unavailability of Ganesh Maharaj statue (which are readily available in India), the organizers made a deity with black sticky clay soil collected from local farmlands with no added artificial colours.
Revised:  Notable ones were the celebration in the Scandinavian towns of Roskilde and Skovde, where due to the unavailability of Ganesh Maharaj statue (which are readily available in India), the organizers made a deity with black sticky clay soil collected from local farmlands with no added artificial colours.
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Original:  Notable ones were the celebration in the scandinavian towns of Roskilde and Skovde, where due to the unavailability of Ganesh Maharaj statue (which are readily available in India), the organizers made a deity with black sticky clay soil collected from local farmlands with no added artificial colours.
Revised:  Notable ones were the celebration in the scandinavian towns of Roskilde and Skovde, where due to the unavailability of Ganesh Maharaj statue (which are readily available in India), the organizers made a deity with black sticky clay soil collected from local farmlands with no added artificial colors.
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Original:  This celebration besides having its own religious significance has an added flavour demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  This celebration besides having its own religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
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Original:  This celebration besides having its own religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having its own religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
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