wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Critics of the Attorney General, most notably Harry Reid, majority leader for the US Senate, have welcomed the announcement, as Gonzales had been one of the most controversial members of the Bush Administration  
Revised:  Critics of the Attorney General, most notably Harry Reid, majority leader for the US Senate, have welcomed the announcement, as Gonzales had been one of the most controversial members of the Bush Administration . 
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Original:  US Attorney General Alberto Gonzales, after several months of controversy, today announced his resignation after 13 years of public service.
Revised: Image:Alberto Gonzales - official DoJ photograph.jpg|Alberto Gonzales, official Department of Justice portrait. US Attorney General Alberto Gonzales, after several months of controversy, today announced his resignation after 13 years of public service.
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Original: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said The thing went up about 400 feet  122m  in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
Revised: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said The thing went up about 400 feet ( 122m in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
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Original: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said The thing went up about 400 feet  122m  in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
Revised: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said The thing went up about 400 feet 122m ) in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
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Original: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said The thing went up about 400 feet (122m) in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
Revised: Witness Don Randall, who photographed the accident, said the thing went up about 400 feet (122m) in the air at which point it melted enough of the balloon it collapsed.
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Original:  She says the passengers then got straight into the balloon, an unusual occurence.
Revised:  She said the passengers then got straight into the balloon, an unusual occurence.
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Original:  "Normally the pilot gets in and tests the gun twice and then everybody gets in , " she said.
Revised:  "Normally the pilot gets in and tests the gun twice and then everybody gets in . " she said.
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Original:  "Normally the pilot gets in and tests the gun twice and then everybody gets in , " she said.
Revised:  "Normally the pilot gets in and tests the gun twice and then everybody gets in , " 
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Original:  Finland said that the country could not commit to send the aircraft any sooner without arrangements being made to cover their removal from service, as otherwise safety in Finland would be severely jeopardised, with emergency aircraft unavailable should Finland experience any fires of it's own.
Revised:  Finland said that the country could not commit to send the aircraft any sooner without arrangements being made to cover their removal from service, as otherwise safety in Finland would be severely jeopardised, with emergency aircraft unavailable should Finland experience any fires of its own.
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Original:  While Utah had the lowest ranking at 8.5 percent.
Revised:  Utah had the lowest ranking at 8.5 percent.
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Original:  Not a single state showed a decline in obesity rates in the latest report released today.
Revised:  Not one state showed a decline in obesity rates in the latest report released today.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Colorado continued to hold the title as the most lean state in the U.S., with less than 18 percent of its' residents considered to be obese.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Colorado continued to hold the title as the leanest state in the U.S., with less than 18 percent of its' residents considered to be obese.
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Original:  Utah had the lowest ranking at 8.5 percent .
Revised:  Utah had the lowest ranking at 8.5 \% .
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Original:  The organization 's director Jeffrey Levi said the government needs to become more involved in preventing obesity.
Revised:  The TFAH 's director Jeffrey Levi said the government needs to become more involved in preventing obesity.
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Original:  However, Levi acknowledged many people believe obesity is based on personal decision making  .
Revised:  However, Levi did acknowledge that many people believe obesity is based on personal decision making .
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Original:  However, Levi acknowledged many people believe obesity is based on personal decision making  .
Revised:  However, Levi acknowledged many people believe obesity results from personal decision making .
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Original: Mississippi became the first state to have more than 30 percent of its ' residents considered to be obese.
Revised: Mississippi became the first state to have more than 30 percent of its residents considered to be obese.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Colorado continued to hold the title as the leanest state in the U.S., with less than 18 percent of its ' residents considered to be obese.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Colorado continued to hold the title as the leanest state in the U.S., with less than 18 percent of its residents considered to be obese.
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Original:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees , being put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year , and serving 10 days in jail .
Revised:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees and serving 10 days in jail, and has been put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year , and serving 10 days in jail .
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Original:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees , being put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year , and serving 10 days in jail .
Revised:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees , being put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year .
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Original:  I was trying to handle this matter myself quickly and expeditiously"  
Revised:  I was trying to handle this matter myself quickly and expeditiously" . 
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Original: Craig was arrested on June 11th after au undercover police officer reported lewd conduct in one of the men's restrooms , by tapping his foot in a pattern used to solicit gay sex .
Revised: Craig was arrested on June 11th after an undercover police officer reported lewd conduct in one of the men's restrooms , by tapping his foot in a pattern used to solicit gay sex .
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Original: Craig was arrested on June 11th after au undercover police officer reported lewd conduct in one of the men's restrooms , by tapping his foot in a pattern used to solicit gay sex .
Revised: Craig was arrested on June 11th after au undercover police officer reported lewd conduct in one of the men's restrooms .
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Original:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees and serving 10 days in jail, and has been put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year.
Revised:  He has been forced to pay US$575 in fees and serve 10 days in jail, and has been put on unsupervised probation for a period of one year.
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Original: Australia's main wagering company Tabcorp Holdings LTD announced it has lost an estimated A $150 million after the cancellation of last weekends, this caused it share price to drop 4\% on monday.
Revised: Australia's largest wagering company Tabcorp Holdings LTD announced it has lost an estimated A $150 million after the cancellation of last weekends, this caused it share price to drop 4\% on monday.
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Original:  Domenici was taken to Albuquerque Hospital where he was pronounced dead.
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Original: The vehicle was traveling at a high of speed when it hit a curb, then crashed into a tree.
Revised: The vehicle was traveling at a high speed when it hit a curb, then crashed into a tree.
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the Albuquerque Police Department, Trish Hoffman, said the one vehicle crash was under investigation and "it 's way too soon " to pinpoint a cause
Revised:  Trish Hoffman, of the Albuquerque Police Department, Trish Hoffman, said the one vehicle crash was under investigation and "it 's way too soon " to pinpoint a cause
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the Albuquerque Police Department, Trish Hoffman, said the one vehicle crash was under investigation and "it 's way too soon " to pinpoint a cause
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the Albuquerque Police Department, said the single vehicle crash was under investigation and "it 's way too soon " to pinpoint a cause
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Original:  A spokeswoman for the Albuquerque Police Department, Trish Hoffman, said the one vehicle crash was under investigation and "it 's way too soon " to pinpoint a cause
Revised:  A spokeswoman for the Albuquerque Police Department, Trish Hoffman, said the one vehicle crash was under investigation and that it was still too soon to pinpoint a cause
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Original: A police officer was killed after an motorcycle accident in Albuquerque, New Mexico.
Revised: A police officer was killed after a motorcycle accident in Albuquerque, New Mexico.
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Original: The stockline plastics operators in Glasgow have been fined £400,000, for the explosion which ripped through the firm's Glasgow plant.
Revised: The stockline plastics operators in Glasgow have been fined £400,000, for the explosion which ripped through the firms Glasgow plant.
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Original:  The company lawyer read a statement by the factory firm, however, when asked a question, claimed she had 'no further comments'  &
Revised:  The company lawyer read a statement by the factory firm, however, when asked a question, claimed she had 'no further comments' . &
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Original: The Stockline Plastics operators in Glasgow, ICL Plastics and ICL Tech, have been fined £400,000, for the explosion which ripped through the firms Glasgow plant.
Revised: The Stockline Plastics operators in Glasgow, ICL Plastics and ICL Tech, have been fined £400,000, for the explosion which ripped through the firm's Glasgow plant.
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Original:  The director of the H&SE in Scotland said lessons were to be learnt from this inciden
Revised:  The director of the H&SE in Scotland said lessons were to be learnt from this incident
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Original:  Citizens in the Australian city of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales have turned out in the hundreds on top of Mount Panorama to observe tonight's lunar eclipse .
Revised:  Citizens in the Australian city of in Central-Western New South Wales have turned out in the hundreds on top of Mount Panorama to observe tonight's lunar eclipse .
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Original:  Citizens in the Australian city of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales have turned out in the hundreds on top of Mount Panorama to observe tonight's lunar eclipse .
Revised:  Citizens in the Australian city of Bathurst in Central-Western have turned out in the hundreds on top of Mount Panorama to observe tonight's lunar eclipse .
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Original:  Citizens in the Australian city of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales have turned out in the hundreds on top of Mount Panorama to observe tonight's lunar eclipse .
Revised:  Citizens in the Australian city of Bathurst in Central-Western New South Wales have turned out in the hundreds on top of to observe .
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Original:  AEST the eclipse began to be visible with the Earth beginning to shadow the Moon , by 8:37 p.m.
Revised:  the eclipse began to be visible with the Earth beginning to shadow the Moon , by 8:37 p.m.
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Original:  AEST the eclipse began to be visible with the Earth beginning to shadow the Moon , by 8:37 p.m.
Revised:  AEST the eclipse began to be visible with the beginning to shadow the Moon , by 8:37 p.m.
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Original:  AEST the eclipse began to be visible with the Earth beginning to shadow the Moon , by 8:37 p.m.
Revised:  AEST the eclipse began to be visible with the Earth beginning to shadow the , by 8:37 p.m.
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Original:  Operators have 24 hours in which they must inspect the wing slat assemblies of their 737s .
Revised:  Operators must complete an initial inspection of the wing slat assemblies of their 737s .
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Original:  Our justice system appears to be totally inflexible in the sentences that judges can impose following breaches of health and safety legislation.  
Revised:  Our justice system appears to be totally inflexible in the sentences that judges can impose following breaches of health and safety legislation. " 
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Original: The missile was develped exclusively in Pakistan, and, according to the statement, has been built specifically with Pakistan's existing air force platforms in mind, in order to give these 'a strategic stand-off capability on land and at sea,'.
Revised: The missile was developed exclusively in Pakistan, and, according to the statement, has been built specifically with Pakistan's existing air force platforms in mind, in order to give these 'a strategic stand-off capability on land and at sea,'.
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Original:  Sevilla midfielder Antonio Puerta died on Tuesday , three days after collapsing during a Primera Liga match.
Revised:  Sevilla midfielder Antonio Puerta died on Tuesday 
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Original:  The 22-year-old Spanish international had been in a critical condition in the Virgen del Rocio hospital in Seville since being admitted on Saturday.
Revised:  The 22-year-old Spanish international had been in a critical condition in Virgen del Rocio hospital in Seville since being admitted on Saturday.
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Original:  Sevilla said that Puerta's body would be taken to the club's Sanchez Pizjuan stadium where fans could pay their respects and that the player would be buried on Thursday.
Revised:  Sevilla said that Puerta's body will be taken to the club's Sanchez Pizjuan stadium where fans could pay their respects and that the player would be buried on Thursday.
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Original:  Sevilla said that Puerta's body would be taken to the club's Sanchez Pizjuan stadium where fans could pay their respects and that the player would be buried on Thursday.
Revised:  Sevilla said that Puerta's body would be taken to the club's stadium where fans could pay their respects and that the player would be buried on Thursday.
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Original:  The player  was due to become a father in under two months, Spanish media reported . Puerta's condition has completely overshadowed the Sevilla squad's preparations for the Champions League third qualifying round second leg against AEK Athens in Greece on Tuesday.
Revised:  The player was due to become a father in under 2 months . Puerta's condition has completely overshadowed the Sevilla squad's preparations for the Champions League third qualifying round second leg against AEK Athens in Greece on Tuesday.
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Original:  The player  was due to become a father in under two months, Spanish media reported . Puerta's condition has completely overshadowed the Sevilla squad's preparations for the Champions League third qualifying round second leg against AEK Athens in Greece on Tuesday.
Revised:  The player was due to become a father in under two months, Spanish media reported . The Champions League 3rd qualifying round 2nd leg against AEK Athens in Greece on Tuesday.
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Original:  The player  was due to become a father in under two months, Spanish media reported . Puerta's condition has completely overshadowed the Sevilla squad's preparations for the Champions League third qualifying round second leg against AEK Athens in Greece on Tuesday.
Revised:  The player was due to become a father in under two months, Spanish media reported . Puerta's condition has completely overshadowed the Sevilla squad's preparations for the Champions League third qualifying round second leg against AEK Athens in 
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Original:  The club's radio reported that UEFA had agreed to postpone the game and the Spanish Football League also called off the league game at Osasuna on Monday.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An AEK spokesman said the Champions League tie would be played on Monday Sept. 3. AC Milan, Sevilla's opponents in Friday's European Super Cup, expressed their condolences at the player's death, saying they were prepared to call off the game if necessary.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An AEK spokesman said the Champions League tie would be played on AC Milan, Sevilla's opponents in Friday's European Super Cup, expressed their condolences at the player's death, saying they were prepared to call off the game if necessary.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An AEK spokesman said the Champions League tie would be played on Monday Sept. 3. AC Milan, Sevilla's opponents in Friday's European Super Cup, expressed their condolences at the player's death, saying they were prepared to call off the game if necessary.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An AEK spokesman said the Champions League tie would be played on Monday Sept. 3. 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'AC Milan... grieve at the passing of Antonio Puerta and share the pain of our friends at Sevilla and the player's family,' the club said in a statement.
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Original:  'Milan are ready to stand by any decision adopted by UEFA about the playing or not of the European Super Cup.'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Puerta collapsed after jogging back towards his own goal 35 minutes into the game against Getafe at the Sanchez Pizjuan on Saturday night.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Puerta collapsed after jogging back towards his own goal 35 minutes into the game against Getafe at the Sanchez Pizjuan on Saturday night.
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Original:  'Milan are ready to stand by any decision adopted by UEFA about the playing or not of the European Super Cup.'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Puerta collapsed after jogging back towards his own goal 35 minutes into the game against Getafe at the Sanchez Pizjuan on Saturday night.
Revised:  'Milan are ready to stand by any decision adopted by UEFA about the playing or not of the European Super Cup.'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Team mates and medical staff immediately rushed to his side and were seen preventing him from swallowing his tongue as he lost consciousness, but he was able to walk from the pitch.
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Original:  Puerta has been in a critical condition in Virgen del Rocio hospital since his calapsing during a game against Getafe.
Revised:  Puerta has been in a critical condition in Virgen del Rocio hospital since collapsing during a game against Getafe.
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Original:  Puerta's body will be taken to the club's stadium where fans could pay their respects and that the player would be buried on Thursday.
Revised:  Puerta's body will be taken to the club's stadium where fans could pay their respects . He will be buried on Thursday.
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Original:  Puerta collapsed after jogging back towards his own goal  35th minute of the game.
Revised:  Puerta collapsed after jogging back towards his own goal in the 35th minute of the game.
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Original: The  Champions League 3rd qualifying round 2nd leg against AEK Athens in Athens today has been postponed.
Revised: The UEFA Champions League 3rd qualifying round 2nd leg against AEK Athens in Athens today has been postponed.
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Original:  Mr Kvasov argued that although no royalties had been paid to the music industry, the site did pay the 15\% of its profits required by the Russian Organization for Multimedia and Digital Systems (Roms).
Revised:  Mr Kvasov argued that although no royalties had been paid to the music industry, the site did pay the 15\% of its profits required by the (Roms).
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Original:  The court ruling disappointed many including the International Federation of the Phonographic Industry (IFPI).
Revised:  The court ruling disappointed many including the (IFPI).
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Original: 220px|A file photo of an MD-83 similar to the one involved in the incident Sweeden has suspended all commercial flights in and out of Iraq amid allegations that an attempt was made to shoot down a Nordic Airways passenger jet.
Revised: 220px|A file photo of an MD-83 similar to the one involved in the incident Sweden has suspended all commercial flights in and out of Iraq amid allegations that an attempt was made to shoot down a Nordic Airways passenger jet.
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Original:  On August 8 a Nordic Airways McDonnell Douglas MD-83 took off on a flight between Sulaimaniyah, northern Iraq to Stockholm, Sweeden , carrying 130 passengers.
Revised:  On August 8 a Nordic Airways McDonnell Douglas MD-83 took off on a flight between Sulaimaniyah, northern Iraq to Stockholm, Sweden , carrying 130 passengers.
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Original:  Sweeden 's decision to ban services from Iraq affects two ailines, one being Nordic Airways, who operates a weekly service between Sulaimaniyah and Stockholm, and the other being Viking Airlines, which runs a service between Stockholm and Irbil four times a week.
Revised:  Sweden 's decision to ban services from Iraq affects two ailines, one being Nordic Airways, who operates a weekly service between Sulaimaniyah and Stockholm, and the other being Viking Airlines, which runs a service between Stockholm and Irbil four times a week.
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Original: Jean-Claude Darcheville and Lee McCulloch shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied Ognjen Koroman to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate .
Revised: Jean-Claude Darcheville and Lee McCulloch shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied Ognjen Koroman to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate 
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Original: Rangers survived a testing match in Belgrade to progress through to the group-stages of the UEFA Champions League.
Revised:  survived a testing match in Belgrade to progress through to the group-stages of the UEFA Champions League.
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Original:  Allan McGregor was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying Red Star Belgrade striker, Igor Burzanović ,  twice in the first half.
Revised:  was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying Red Star Belgrade striker, Igor Burzanović , twice in the first half.
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Original:  Allan McGregor was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying Red Star Belgrade striker, Igor Burzanović ,  twice in the first half.
Revised:  Allan McGregor was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying striker , twice in the first half.
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Original:  Allan McGregor was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying Red Star Belgrade striker, Igor Burzanović ,  twice in the first half.
Revised:  Allan McGregor was Rangers' hero twice in the opening 45 minutes denying Red Star Belgrade striker, Igor Burzanović , , twice in the first half.
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Original:  Jean-Claude Darcheville and Lee McCulloch shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied Ognjen Koroman to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate
Revised:  and shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied Ognjen Koroman to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate
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Original:  Jean-Claude Darcheville and Lee McCulloch shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied Ognjen Koroman to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate
Revised:  Jean-Claude Darcheville and Lee McCulloch shot close for Rangers in the second half, whilst McGregor denied to preserve the 0-0 draw, and the 1-0 lead on aggregate
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