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Original:  Disbandment By the end of 1919, the units of the South African Overseas Expeditionary Force had returned to South Africa and were demobilised at camps at Cape Town, Durban, Pretoria and Potchefstroom.
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Original: South Africa's participation in the First World War occurred automatically when the British Government declared war on Germany in August 1914.
Revised: outh Africa's participation in the First World War occurred automatically when the British Government declared war on Germany in August 1914.
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Original:  Unfortunately due to South African racial policies, employment support and official gratitude was never given to the Coloured, Black and Indian racial groups that had served.
Revised:  Due to South African racial policies, employment support and official gratitude was never given to the Coloured, Black and Indian racial groups that had served.
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Original:  Andrew Beauchamp-Proctor VC, South Africa's highest-scoring fighter ace during the First World War As early as 1912, the Union Defence Force established a flying school at Alexandersfontein, nearly Kimberley, to train pilots for the proposed South African Aviation Corps (SAAC).
Revised:  Andrew Beauchamp-Proctor VC, South Africa's highest-scoring fighter ace during the First World War As early as 1912, the Union Defence Force established a flying school at Alexandersfontein, near Kimberley, to train pilots for the proposed South African Aviation Corps (SAAC).
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Original:  South Africa’s first military pilot was Kenneth van der Spuy who qualified on 2 June 1914, with four others following him a few days later.
Revised:  South Africa’s first military pilot was Kenneth van der Spuy who qualified on 2 June 1914, with four others following him days later.
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Original:  Soon after the outbreak of war, the need for airpower in Southern Africa became acute after German reconnaissance aircraft were routinely spotted  and advancing South African columns being attacked by hostile aircraft.
Revised:  Soon after the outbreak of war, the need for airpower in Southern Africa became acute after German reconnaissance aircraft were routinely spotted , and advancing South African columns being attacked by hostile aircraft.
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Original:  Concerns over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French . due to the problems of wooden British planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
Revised:  Issues over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French . due to the problems of wooden British planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
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Original:  Concerns over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French . due to the problems of wooden British planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
Revised:  Concerns over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French due to the problems of wooden British planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
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Original:  Concerns over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French . due to the problems of wooden British planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
Revised:  Concerns over the use of wooden aircraft from Britain and the USA had dictated the need to buy French . due to the concerns of wooden planes in the hot dry climate of Southern Africa.
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Original:  The independent squadron flew close reconnaissance and observer missions throughout the campaign until February 1918 when it was withdrawn back to Cape Town and  disbanded on 8 July 1918.
Revised:  The independent squadron flew close reconnaissance and observer missions throughout the campaign until February 1918 when it was withdrawn to Cape Town and disbanded on 8 July 1918.
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Original:  The independent squadron flew close reconnaissance and observer missions throughout the campaign until February 1918 when it was withdrawn back to Cape Town and  disbanded on 8 July 1918.
Revised:  The independent squadron flew close reconnaissance and observer missions throughout the campaign until February 1918 when it was withdrawn back to Cape Town and later disbanded on 8 July 1918.
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Original:  Although the SAAC and the No. 26 Squadron was engaged in German South West Africa and East Africa, thousands of South Africans travelled to the United Kingdom and volunteered for service within the Royal Flying Corps directly.
Revised:  Although the SAAC and the No. 26 Squadron was engaged in German South West Africa and East Africa, thousands of South Africans travelled to Britain and volunteered for service within the Royal Flying Corps directly.
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Original:  Although the SAAC and the No. 26 Squadron was engaged in German South West Africa and East Africa, thousands of South Africans travelled to the United Kingdom and volunteered for service within the Royal Flying Corps directly.
Revised:  Although the SAAC and the No. 26 Squadron was engaged in German South West Africa and East Africa, thousands of South Africans travelled to the United Kingdom and volunteered for service with the Royal Flying Corps directly.
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Original:  Between 1918 and 1920, South African pilots even took part in the Russian Civil War in Eastern Europe.
Revised:  Between 1918 and 1920, South African pilots took part in the Russian Civil War in Eastern Europe.
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Original:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, helping in local mine clearance  in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917, and defending shore establishments.
Revised:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, and engaging in local mine clearance in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917, and defending shore establishments.
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Original:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, helping in local mine clearance  in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917, and defending shore establishments.
Revised:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, helping in local mine clearance - particularly in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917, and defending shore establishments.
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Original:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, helping in local mine clearance  in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917, and defending shore establishments.
Revised:  Under Royal Navy jurisdiction, the RNVR (SA) manned a small number of converted vessels that patrolled the South African coast against German surface raiders, helping in local mine clearance in response to the operations of the highly successful raider SMS Wolf in 1917.
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Original:  The heaviest loss of life caused by Wolf was the sinking of the Spanish mail steamer SS Carlos de Eizaguirre which struck a mine just off Cape Town on 26 May 1917, with 134 passengers and crew killed and 25 survivors.
Revised:  The heaviest loss of life caused by Wolf was the sinking of the Spanish mail steamer SS Carlos de Eizaguirre which struck a mine off Cape Town on 26 May 1917, with 134 passengers and crew killed and 25 survivors.
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Original:  A total of 412 South Africans served in the RNVR (SA) during the war, with 164 members volunteering for the Royal Navy itself . Many would see service in British and Mediterranean waters, whilst others would participate in the land campaigns of South West Africa and East Africa against German forces.
Revised:  A total of 412 South Africans served in the RNVR (SA) during the war, with 164 members volunteering for the Royal Navy directly . Many would see service in British and Mediterranean waters, whilst others would participate in the land campaigns of South West Africa and East Africa against German forces.
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Original:  A total of 412 South Africans served in the RNVR (SA) during the war, with 164 members volunteering for the Royal Navy itself . Many would see service in British and Mediterranean waters, whilst others would participate in the land campaigns of South West Africa and East Africa against German forces.
Revised:  A total of 412 South Africans served in the RNVR (SA) during the war, with 164 members volunteering for the Royal Navy itself . Many would see service in British and Mediterranean waters, whilst others participated in the support of the land campaigns of South West Africa and East Africa against German forces.
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Original:  In conjunction with the rather limited manpower contributions, South Africa offered to the Allies the crucial strategic position of controlling the Cape Sea Route - a key chokepoint in maritime trade and sea control.
Revised:  In conjunction with limited manpower contributions, South Africa offered to the Allies the crucial strategic position of controlling the Cape Sea Route - a key chokepoint in maritime trade and sea control.
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Original:  Similarly, Cape Town and Durban were also equally important to the war effort.
Revised:  Similarly, Cape Town and Durban were equally important to the war effort.
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Original:  As rest stops, refuelling stations, and offering repair facilities, the Imperial sea lanes to the Middle East, the British Raj, and Australasia were kept open and secure .
Revised:  As rest stops, refuelling stations, and offering repair facilities, the Imperial sea lanes to the Middle East, the British Raj, and Australasia were kept open .
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Original:  South African contributions and casualties Delville Wood South African National Memorial, Longueval, France With a population of roughly 6 million, between 1914 - 1918, over 250,000 South Africans of all races voluntarily served their country.
Revised:  South African contributions and casualties Delville Wood South African National Memorial, Longueval, France With a population of roughly 6 million, between 1914-1918 over 250,000 South Africans of all races voluntarily served their country.
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Original:  It is likely that around 50\% of white men of military age served during the war.
Revised:  It is probable that near 50\% of white men of military age served during the war.
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Original:  More than 146,000 whites, 83,000 black Africans and 2,500 Coloureds and Asians also served in either German South-West Africa, East Africa, the Middle East, or on the Western Front in Europe.
Revised:  More than 146,000 whites, 83,000 black Africans and 2,500 Coloureds and Asians served in either German South-West Africa, East Africa, the Middle East, or on the Western Front in Europe.
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Original:  Suffering roughly 19,000 casualties, over 7,000 South Africans were killed , and nearly 12,000 were wounded during the course of the war.
Revised:  Suffering roughly 19,000 casualties, over 7,000 South Africans were killed and nearly 12,000 were wounded during the course of the war.
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Original:  South Africa’s ports and harbours on the Home Front were a crucial strategic asset when conducting a war on a global scale.
Revised:  South Africa’s ports and infrastructure on the Home Front were a crucial strategic asset when conducting a war on a global scale.
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Original:  South Africa’s ports and harbours on the Home Front were a crucial strategic asset when conducting a war on a global scale.
Revised:  South Africa’s ports and harbours on the Home Front were a crucial strategic asset for war on a global scale.
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Original:  Providing important rest and refuelling stations, the Royal Navy could ensure vital sea lane connections to the British Raj , and the Far East stayed open.
Revised:  Providing important rest and refuelling stations, the Royal Navy could ensure vital sea lane connections to the British Raj and the Empire in the Far East stayed open.
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Original:  At the start of the war, Bank of England officials in London worked with South Africa to block gold shipments to Germany , and force mine owners to sell only to the British Treasury, at prices set by the Treasury.
Revised:  At the start of the war, Bank of England officials in London worked with South Africa to block gold shipments to Germany and force mine owners to sell only to the British Treasury, at prices set by the Treasury.
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Original:  This facilitated purchases of munitions and food in the United States and  neutral countries.
Revised:  This facilitated purchases of munitions and food from the United States and neutral countries.
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Original:  This facilitated purchases of munitions and food in the United States and  neutral countries.
Revised:  This facilitated purchases of munitions and food in the United States and other neutral countries.
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Original: outh Africa's participation in the First World War occurred automatically when the British Government declared war on Germany in August 1914.
Revised: South Africa's participation in the First World War occurred automatically when the British Government declared war on Germany in August 1914.
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Original: Joakim Rakovac was born in the village of Rakovci (Rahovci) about ten kilometers from Poreč.
Revised: Joakim Rakovac was born in the village of (Rahovci) about ten kilometers from Poreč.
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Original:  As a councilor, he participated to the multi-party Third Session of ZAVNOH in May 1944.
Revised:  As a councilor, he participated to the multi-party in May 1944.
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Original:  The circumstances of his death and the identity of his murderers are very debated, and he is thought by many to have been murdered by the Yugoslav partisans.
Revised:  The circumstances of his death and the identity of his murderers are debated, and he is thought by many to have been murdered by the Yugoslav partisans.
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Original:  The circumstances of his death and the identity of his murderers are very debated, and he is thought by many to have been murdered by the Yugoslav partisans.
Revised:  The circumstances of his death and the identity of his murderers are very debated, and he is thought by some to have been murdered by the Yugoslav partisans.
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Original: Istrapedia J. Bratulić: Narodnjaci (pristupljeno 3. studenoga 2015.) Due to all this, the identity of Rakovac's killers remains extremely debated to this day.
Revised: Istrapedia J. Bratulić: Narodnjaci (pristupljeno 3. studenoga 2015.) Due to all this, the identity of Rakovac's killers remains debated to this day.
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Original: Istrapedia D. Dukovski: Povijest (Povijest Istre od 1918.- 2000. g.), (pristupljeno 3. studenoga 2015.  )
Revised: Istrapedia D. Dukovski: Povijest (Povijest Istre od 1918.- 2000. g.), (pristupljeno 3. studenoga 2015. ) (Istrapedia )
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Original:  Rakovac only went to Italian school and had never had the opportunity to write in the Croatian language before), published under the title "Sretni i ponosni pošli smo u našu vojsku" (Happy and Proud We Went to Our Army), describes the preparation for joining the partisans;
Revised:  Rakovac only went to Italian school and had never had the opportunity to write in Croatian before), published under the title "Sretni i ponosni pošli smo u našu vojsku" (Happy and Proud We Went to Our Army), describes the preparation for joining the partisans;
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Original:  Biathlon orienteering or orienteering shooting (Norwegian: orienteringsskyting, Swedish: orienteringsskytte, Danish: biathlon orientering) is a multisport consisting of shooting and orienteering.
Revised:  Biathlon orienteering or orienteering shooting is a multisport consisting of shooting and orienteering.
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Original: Point oreienteering A point oreienteering is usually 3 km long, and the map only provides the first checkpoint.
Revised: Point orienteering A point orienteering is usually 3 km long, and the map only provides the first checkpoint.
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Original: Freestyle/classic orientering In freestyle orienteering the participant must follow a given route.
Revised: Freestyle/classic orienteering In freestyle orienteering the participant must follow a given route.
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Original: Literature File:Cover_art_from_first_edition_of_The_Dollmaker_by_H_Arnow_published_by_MacMillan_1954.jpg||Cover of the first edition of The Dollmaker, 1954.
Revised: Literature 
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Original:  It obtained its current title in 2004, when Aubrey de Grey took over as editor-in-chief. </ref>
Revised:  It obtained its current title in 2004, when Aubrey de Grey took over as editor-in-chief. 
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Original:  The journal exhibited unusual levels of self-citation and its journal impact factor of 2019 was suspended from Journal Citation Reports in 2020, a sanction which hit 34 journals in total.
Revised:  The journal exhibited unusual levels of self-citation and its journal impact factor of 2019 was suspended from Journal Citation Reports in 2020, a sanction which hit 33 journals in total.
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Original: Biography From a family Carlist , as a young man he was a primary education teacher.
Revised: Biography A member of the a Carlist family , as a young man he was a primary education teacher.
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Original: Artwork Documentos Medievales artajoneses, Pamplona, 1968.
Revised: Works Documentos Medievales artajoneses, Pamplona, 1968.
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Original:  Historia de Pamplona, 1974-1975 . Navarra jamás dijo no al estatuto vasco, 1977.
Revised:  Historia de Pamplona, 1974-1975 . 
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Original:  In 1970 he asked to leave the priesthood.
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Original:  In 1970 he asked to left priesthood.
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Original:  Awards He received the Sabino Arana Foundation award in 1997, the Manuel Lekuona Award in 1998 and the Navarra Gold Medal posthumously in 2015.
Revised:  Awards 1997 Sabino Arana Foundation award in 1997, the Manuel Lekuona Award in 1998 and the Navarra Gold Medal posthumously in 2015.
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Original:  Awards He received the Sabino Arana Foundation award in 1997, the Manuel Lekuona Award in 1998 and the Navarra Gold Medal posthumously in 2015.
Revised:  Awards He received the Sabino Arana Foundation award in 1997, the Manuel Lekuona Award in 1998 and the Navarra Gold Medal (posthumously)
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Original: File: An up-close picture of a curious male domestic shorthair tabby cat .jpg|Photo of a male tabby]] Cat intelligence is the capacity of the domesticated cat to solve problems and adapt to its environment.
Revised: File: An up-close picture of a curious male domestic shorthair tabby cat .jpg|Photo of a female tabby]] Cat intelligence is the capacity of the domesticated cat to solve problems and adapt to its environment.
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Original: File: A Tabby Cat Lying on a Map .jpg|Photo of a female tabby]] Cat intelligence is the capacity of the domesticated cat to solve problems and adapt to its environment.
Revised: File: A Tabby Cat Lying on a Map .jpg|Photo of a male tabby]] Cat intelligence is the capacity of the domesticated cat to solve problems and adapt to its environment.
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Original:  the cat both feral and domesticated  is likely to be maintained in an evolutionary stasis by its niche position in the food web
Revised:  the cat both feral and domesticated , is likely to be maintained in an evolutionary stasis by its niche position in the food web
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Original:  Recent research has determined that cats are, indeed, smarter than Ryan David Kennedy.
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Original:  She has been a researcher at the Center for International Studies and Research (CNRS and Sciences Po) and has written various articles on water sharing, conflict and negotiations in the Middle URL Books Le partage des eaux entre la Syrie, l'Irak et la Turquie : négociation, sécurité et asymétrie des pouvoirs (CNRS éditions).
Revised:  She has been a researcher at the Center for International Studies and Research (CNRS and Sciences Po) and has written various articles on water sharing, conflict and negotiations in the Middle East. Books Le partage des eaux entre la Syrie, l'Irak et la Turquie : négociation, sécurité et asymétrie des pouvoirs (CNRS éditions).
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Original:  (2005 Ernest Lémonon Award of the Académie des Sciences Morales et Politiques) The Origins of the Syrian Conflict: Climate Change and Human Security (Cambridge University URL
Revised:  (2005 Ernest Lémonon Award of the Académie des Sciences Morales et Politiques) The Origins of the Syrian Conflict: Climate Change and Human Security (Cambridge University Press)
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Original:  Shan Shan The Empress Dowager (1975) Return of the Crazy Bumpkin (1975) - [deleted scene] Big Brother Cheng (1975) The Super Inframan (1975) - Witch Eye The Taxi Driver (1975) - Guang's horny passenger Fearful Interlude (1975) - Miss Peifang Black Magic (1975) - Mistress cursed by Shan's patron #1 Thief of Thieves (1975) - Chai's clan member Girl with the Long Hair (1975) - Dana Beautiful Vixen (1976) - Mrs.
Revised:  Shan Shan The Empress Dowager (1975) Return of the Crazy Bumpkin (1975) - [deleted scene] Big Brother Cheng (1975) The Super Inframan (1975) - Witch URL The Taxi Driver (1975) - Guang's horny passenger Fearful Interlude (1975) - Miss Peifang Black Magic (1975) - Mistress cursed by Shan's patron #1 Thief of Thieves (1975) - Chai's clan member Girl with the Long Hair (1975) - Dana Beautiful Vixen (1976) - Mrs.
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Original: Robert Eugene Pearlman ( born September 16, 1939 ) is an American explorer, graphic designer, author and publisher.
Revised: Robert Eugene Pearlman ( September 16, 1939 ) is an American explorer, graphic designer, author and publisher.
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Original:  Pearlman lives on Martha's Vineyard, MA and in San Miguel de Allende, MX. 
Revised:  Pearlman lived on Martha's Vineyard, MA and in San Miguel de Allende, MX. 
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Original:  He is primarily known for his work with the Maasai people of Kenya, where he conducted several cultural outreach expeditions in the late 20th and early 21st century.
Revised:  He was primarily known for his work with the Maasai people of Kenya, where he conducted several cultural outreach expeditions in the late 20th and early 21st century.
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Original:  He is a past board member of The Explorers Club and a 1998 recipient of the club's Sweeney Medal.
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Original:  He is a past director of the Charles A. and Anne Morrow Lindbergh Foundation.
Revised:  He was a past director of the Charles A. and Anne Morrow Lindbergh Foundation.
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