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Original:  In September 1966, he went to Seoul to attend a regional meeting of the Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations, representing the Hong Kong and the United Kingdom government .
Revised:  In September 1966, he went to Seoul to attend a regional meeting of the Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations, representing the Hong Kong and United Kingdom governments .
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Original:  In July 1965, he went to London to attend the Commonwealth Agricultural Bureau review meeting, representing Hong Kong and other territories.
Revised:  In July 1965, he went to London to attend the Commonwealth Agricultural Bureaux review meeting, representing Hong Kong and other territories.
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Original:  In October 1945, he pursed further studies in Queens' College and obtained a diploma in agricultural science.
Revised:  In October 1945, he pursued further studies in Queens' College and obtained a diploma in agricultural science.
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Original: Edward Hewitt Nichols , (, 29 December 1925 – 29 January 2016) , was a British colonial agriculture and aquaculture official.
Revised: Edward Hewitt Nichols (, 29 December 1925 – 29 January 2016) , was a British colonial agriculture and aquaculture official.
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Original: Edward Hewitt Nichols , (, 29 December 1925 – 29 January 2016) , was a British colonial agriculture and aquaculture official.
Revised: Edward Hewitt Nichols , (, 29 December 1925 – 29 January 2016) was a British colonial agriculture and aquaculture official.
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Original:  300x300px| The surrounding of Fanling Lodge has a lot of arable land.
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Original:  (1973) 300x300px| The seas of Hong Kong were filled with wind-powered fishing boats.
Revised:  (1973) The seas of Hong Kong were filled with wind-powered fishing boats.
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Original:  260x260px| The Tai Tam Country Park was established in 1977. 260x260px| Early logo of Hong Kong country parks in Plover Cove Country Park, before the addition of the lower waves representing oceans.
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Original:  260x260px| The Tai Tam Country Park was established in 1977. 260x260px| Early logo of Hong Kong country parks in Plover Cove Country Park, before the addition of the lower waves representing oceans.
Revised:  260x260px| The Tai Tam Country Park was established in 1977. Early logo of Hong Kong country parks in Plover Cove Country Park, before the addition of the lower waves representing oceans.
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Original:  The rhizosphere and phyllosphere communities are on the outside of the plant, while the endosphereic community is inside the plant. 50px Material was copied from this source, which is available under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License.
Revised:  The rhizosphere and phyllosphere communities are on the outside of the plant, while the endosphere community is inside the plant. 50px Material was copied from this source, which is available under a Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 International License.
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Original:  There is increasing evidence that shows that plant endophytes have coevolved with their host.
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Original:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute .
Revised:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Squatting in South Korea Category:History of South Kor
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Squatting in South Korea Category:History of South Kor
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Original: South Korea on globe (dark green ) | alt = refer to caption | right  Squatting in South Korea is the occupation of land or buildings without the permission of the relevant authorities.
Revised: South Korea on globe (dark green ) | alt = refer to caption | right ' Squatting in South Korea is the occupation of land or buildings without the permission of the relevant authorities.
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Original: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | 엄지 | 권리 ' Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 판자촌%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
Revised: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | ' Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 판자촌%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
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Original: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | 엄지 | 권리 ' Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 판자촌%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
Revised: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | 엄지 | 권리 right Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 판자촌%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
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Original: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | 엄지 | 권리 ' Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 판자촌%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
Revised: 지구상의 한국 (진한 녹색 )|alt= 캡션 참조 | 엄지 | 권리 ' Squatting in South Korea ' 는 관계 당국의 허가없이 토지 또는 건물을 점유하는 것을 말합니다. 1950 년대부터 판자촌이라 불리는 %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% 이 도시, 특히 수도 서울 주변에 형성되었습니다.
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Original:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute   
Revised:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute . 
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Original:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute   
Revised:  Also, the SsangYong Motor factory in Pyeongtaek was occupied for 77 days by over 1,000 workers in an industrial dispute References 
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Original:  It resembled a television set, but had a record player on the top.
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Original:  It resembled a television set, but had a record player on the top.
Revised:  It resembled a television set, but has a record player on the top.
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Original:  The slide strips, a flat plastic key 11 inches long containing a strip of 16mm color film, was inserted into the top of the device.
Revised:  The slide strips, a flat plastic key 11 inches long containing a strip of 16mm color film, are inserted into the top of the device.
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Original:  As the record played (typically telling a story), the slide strip, through which the images were projected on the screen, would automatically advance to illustrate it.
Revised:  As the record played (typically telling a story), the slide strip, through which the images were projected on the screen, automatically advance to illustrate it.
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Original:  The mechanism by which the slide advanced was purely mechanical, and was based on the rotation of the turntable, so proper operation required manually spinning it a few revolutions before beginning the presentation.
Revised:  The mechanism by which the slide advanced is purely mechanical, and was based on the rotation of the turntable, so proper operation required manually spinning it a few revolutions before beginning the presentation.
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Original:  When businesses depend directly on nature for operations,
Revised: " When businesses depend directly on nature for operations,
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Original:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity  When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance  When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks 
Revised:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity " " When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks 
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Original:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity  When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance  When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks 
Revised:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance " " When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks 
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Original:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity  When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance  When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks 
Revised:  supply chain performance, real estate asset values, physical security and business continuity When the direct and indirect impacts of business activities on nature loss can trigger negative consequences, such as losing customers or entire markets, legal action and regulatory changes that affect financial performance When nature loss causes disruption to society and the markets within which businesses operate, which can manifest as both physical and market risks "
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Original: Natural risks or nature risks become material for businesses in the following three ways:
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Original:  Nature risks impact: They could increase policy and regulatory intervention.
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Original:  Nature risks impact: They could increase policy and regulatory intervention.
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Original:  As consumers and the market react to nature risks, leading to supply and demand patterns shifted, many products/services, technologies and business models are emerged and disrupted the established business community.
Revised:  As consumers and the market react to nature risks, leading to supply and demand patterns shifted, novel products/services, technologies and business models are emerged and disrupted the established business community.
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Original:  As consumers and the market react to nature risks, leading to supply and demand patterns shifted, many products/services, technologies and business models are emerged and disrupted the established business community.
Revised:  As consumers and the market react to nature risks, leading to supply and demand patterns shifted, many products/services, technologies and business models emerge and may disrupt the established business community.
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Original:  See also Crisis management Key risk indicators Risk management Risk management tools Risk modeling Country risk Model risk Political risk Valuation risk Moral hazard Reputational risk
Revised:  See also Crisis management Key risk indicators Risk management tools Risk modeling Country risk Model risk Political risk Valuation risk Moral hazard Reputational risk
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Original: Life Education Margaret Dillard was born and raised in Oklahoma.
Revised: Life and education Margaret Dillard was born and raised in Oklahoma.
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Original:  In 2019, Dillard was highlighted in the Thrive Traditions series on Chicasaw TV.
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Original:  Also in 2019, she won third place for a painting titled "Jannie's Boy" at the Artesian Arts Festival in Sulphur, OK .
Revised:  Also in 2019, she won third place for a painting titled "Jannie's Boy" at the Artesian Arts Festival in Sulphur, Oklahoma .
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Original:  She completed an associate degree in Art at Rose State College, attended The University of Science and Arts of Oklahoma for fine and studio arts (from 1981 to 1982), and completed a bachelor's degree the University of Central Oklahoma.
Revised:  She completed an associate degree in art at Rose State College, attended The University of Science and Arts of Oklahoma for fine and studio arts (from 1981 to 1982), and completed a bachelor's degree the University of Central Oklahoma.
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Original:  During the course of her adult live and artistic career, Dillard has worked to reconnect with her Chickasaw heritage.
Revised:  During the course of her adult life and artistic career, Dillard has worked to reconnect with her Chickasaw heritage.
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Original:  Work Dillard 's work builds on an indigenous painting tradition, while incorporating contemporary materials and techniques .
Revised:  Art career Dillard focuses on naturalistic, representational portraits in oil and acrylics .
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Original:  Though predominantly a figurative painter, Dillard also sometimes works in small  hanging sculptures.
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Original:  Though predominantly a figurative painter, Dillard also sometimes works in small  hanging sculptures.
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Original:  Dillard's work was exhibited at the Chickasaw Nation Welcome Center in 2016, in conjunction with an exhibition of the work by Muskogee Creek Nation member Danny Beaver.
Revised:  Dillard's work was exhibited at the Chickasaw Nation Welcome Center in 2016, in conjunction with an exhibition of the work by Muscogee (Creek) Nation member Danny Beaver.
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Original:  Also in 2019, she won third place for a painting titled "Jannie's Boy" at the Artesian Arts Festival in Sulphur, Oklahoma.
Revised:  In 2019, she won third place for a painting titled "Jannie's Boy" at the Artesian Arts Festival in Sulphur, Oklahoma.
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Original: Lomboko refers to a slave factory ;
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Original:  The area was controlled by Spanish slave merchants  , within the then-British colony and modern-day country of Sierra Leone.
Revised:  Spanish slave merchants , within the then-British colony and modern-day country of Sierra Leone.
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Original:  By 1839, about 2,000 slaves a year were coming out of the Gallinas River, despite the fact that the slave trade had been made illegal.
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Original:  By 1839, about 2,000 slaves a year were coming out of the Gallinas River, despite the fact that the slave trade had been made illegal.
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Original:  In 1849, a British Royal Navy expedition attacked the slave factory: all the slaves found in the fortress were freed by Royal Marines , and Lomboko was then completely destroyed .
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Original:  It consisted of several large holding depots or barracoons for slaves brought from the interior, as well as several palatial buildings for Blanco 's use, to hold his wives and concubines, and house his employees.
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Original:  By 1839, about 2,000 slaves a year were coming out of the Gallinas River, despite that the slave trade was illegal.
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Original:  By 1839, about 2,000 slaves a year were coming out of the Gallinas River, despite that the slave trade was illegal.
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Original:  It consisted of several large holding depots or barracoons for slaves brought from the interior, as well as several palatial buildings for Blanco to hold his wivesand concubines, and house his employees.
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Original:  It consisted of several large holding depots or barracoons for slaves brought from the interior, as well as several palatial buildings for Blanco to hold his wivesand concubines, and house his employees.
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Original:  In 1849, a British Royal Navy expedition attacked the slave factory: the Royal Marines freed all the slave inside and then destroyed Lomboko completely.
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Original: Lomboko refers to a slave factory, a fortress stockade created by the infamous Spanish slave trader Pedro Blanco.
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Original:  Lomboko was scattered across several small islands at the mouth of the Gallinas river , near Sulima on the Gallinas coast.
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Original:   References (Spanish) URL (Original font) The Slave Trade: The History of the Atlantic Slave Trade 1440–1870 By Hugh Thomas ISBN 0684835657%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL URL
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Original:   References (Spanish) URL (Original font) The Slave Trade: The History of the Atlantic Slave Trade 1440–1870 By Hugh Thomas ISBN 0684835657%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL URL
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Original:   References (Spanish) URL (Original font) The Slave Trade: The History of the Atlantic Slave Trade 1440–1870 By Hugh Thomas ISBN 0684835657%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL URL
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Original: Lomboko refers to a slave factory , a fortress stockade controlled by the infamous Spanish slave trader Pedro Blanco.
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Original:  In the field of elections  for example, 18 experts have worked with the Independent High Authority for Elections, with the Prime Minister as a key entry point.
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Original: Training After primary studies in Sidi Lakhdar (formerly  Lavarande, Aïn Defla Province) and secondary studies at the Lycée Mustapha Ferroukhi in Miliana, Belhocine obtained his Baccalaureate in 1970.
Revised: Training After primary studies in Sidi Lakhdar (formerly known as Lavarande, Aïn Defla Province) and secondary studies at the Lycée Mustapha Ferroukhi in Miliana, Belhocine obtained his Baccalaureate in 1970.
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Original:  He continued his university studies in Medicine at the University of Algiers until obtaining his medical graduation diploma in March 1976.
Revised:  He continued his university studies in Medicine at the University of Algiers where he obtained his medical graduation diploma in March 1976.
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Original:  After two years of military service in the Central Hospital of Instruction of the Algerian Army (HCI/ANP), he joined the hospital of Beni Messous as  Assistant Master in 1982.
Revised:  After two years of military service in the Central Hospital of Instruction of the Algerian Army (HCI/ANP), he joined the hospital of Beni Messous as the Assistant Master in 1982.
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Original:  Having defended this thesis in 1986, he was appointed  Doctor of Medical Sciences.
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Original:  In 1994, he was appointed  Professor of Medicine (Clinical professor) on the basis of qualifications and work.
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Original:  In addition to his course in internal medicine, Belhocine enrolled in 1983-84 and 1986 at the University of Paris VI to study, at a distance, statistics applied to clinical research (methodology, basic bio-statistics, clinical trials)  then to epidemiology (sampling, epidemiological surveys).
Revised:  In addition to his course in internal medicine, Belhocine enrolled in 1983-84 and 1986 at the University of Paris VI to study, at a distance, statistics applied to clinical research (methodology, basic bio-statistics, clinical trials) and then to epidemiology (sampling, epidemiological surveys).
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Original:  Belhocine was  Assistant Teacher at CHU Algiers Ouest from 1982 to 1990, first at Beni Messous Hospital, then at Zéralda Hospital.
Revised:  Belhocine was the Assistant Teacher at CHU Algiers Ouest from 1982 to 1990, first at Beni Messous Hospital, then at Zéralda Hospital.
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