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Original:  Some politicians and government officials chose this as an opportunity to promote their parties and campaign coalitions ahead of the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
Revised:  Some politicians and government officials chose these events as an opportunity to promote their parties and campaign coalitions ahead of the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
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Original:  Some politicians and government officials chose this as an opportunity to promote their parties and campaign coalitions ahead of the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
Revised:  Some politicians and government officials chose this as an opportunity to promote their parties and campaign-coalitions ahead of the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
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Original:  At pan-bluse side , 2008 vice-presidential candidate  Vincent Siew participated the opening of  Taipei Audio Video Fair in Grand Hotel.
Revised:  From the Pan-Blue Coalition , 2008 vice-presidential candidate Vincent Siew participated the opening of Taipei Audio Video Fair in Grand Hotel.
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Original:  At pan-bluse side , 2008 vice-presidential candidate  Vincent Siew participated the opening of  Taipei Audio Video Fair in Grand Hotel.
Revised:  At pan-bluse side , 2008 vice-presidential candidate Vincent Siew participated the opening of the Taipei Audio Video Fair in Grand Hotel.
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Original:  At pan-bluse side , 2008 vice-presidential candidate  Vincent Siew participated the opening of  Taipei Audio Video Fair in Grand Hotel.
Revised:  At pan-bluse side , 2008 vice-presidential candidate Vincent Siew participated the opening of Taipei Audio Video Fair at The Grand Hotel.
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Original:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ]  't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
Revised:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruling party ] 't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
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Original:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ]  't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
Revised:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ] doesn 't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
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Original:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ]  't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
Revised:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ] 't have a good track record , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
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Original:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ]  't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
Revised:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ] 't have good performances , and some industries weren 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
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Original:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ]  't have good performances , and some industries can 't be promoted in time so that they lost some opportunities.
Revised:  He criticized on the economy policy and remarked: "The ruler (DPP) don ] 't have good performances , and some industries can 't be supported in timely manner so that they lost some opportunities.
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Original:  I sincerely hope the ruler can appropriately associate audio and video industry to market good brand and products to the world."
Revised:  I sincerely hope the government can appropriately assist the audio and video industry to market good brand and products to the world."
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Original:  I sincerely hope the ruler can appropriately associate audio and video industry to market good brand and products to the world."
Revised:  I sincerely hope the ruler can appropriately associate audio and video industries in marketing good brands and products to the world."
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Original:  Also, current DPP Legislator Shih-chien Wang was invited to have a violin performance and sing a Taiwanese song today.
Revised:  Also, current Democratic Progressive Party legislator Wang Chien-shien was invited to have a violin performance and sing a Taiwanese song today.
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Original:  Also, current DPP Legislator Shih-chien Wang was invited to have a violin performance and sing a Taiwanese song today.
Revised:  Also, current DPP Legislator Shih-chien Wang was invited to give a violin performance and sing a Taiwanese song today.
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Original:  Those events above caused a simple show in Taipei World Trade Center become a good promotional stage before 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
Revised:  Those events above caused a simple show in Taipei World Trade Center proved to be quite a platform for the candidates running in the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections.
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Original: Thursday, November 8, two trade shows, namely MEDIPHAR Taipei at the Taipei World Trade Center and Taipei Audio Video Fair at the The Grand Hotel, opened in Taipei, Taiwan.
Revised: Thursday, November 8, two trade shows, named MEDIPHAR Taipei at the Taipei World Trade Center and Taipei Audio Video Fair at the The Grand Hotel, opened in Taipei, Taiwan.
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Original: Pakistani police have arrested former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto  and have ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
Revised: Pakistani police have served former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and have ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
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Original: Pakistani police have served former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto  with a temporary detention notice and have ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
Revised: Pakistani police have served former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto . Police had served her with a temporary detention notice and have ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
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Original: Pakistani police have served former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto  with a temporary detention notice and have ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
Revised: Pakistani police have served former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto with a temporary detention notice and ordered her to serve 30 days of house arrest.
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Original:  Bhutto has not yet been detained by police.
Revised:  Bhutto was not detained by the police.
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Original:  The move comes as Bhutto planned to attend a protest , but she was stopped by troops who were ordered to surround and block off her home located in Islamabad.
Revised:  The move came as Bhutto planned to attend a protest , but she was stopped by troops who were ordered to surround and block off her home located in Islamabad.
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Original:  Police claim that they are protecting Bhutto from a possible suicide bomb attack because "some suicide attackers have come to Islamabad," added Bhutto.
Revised:  Police claimed that they are protecting Bhutto from a possible suicide bomb attack because "some suicide attackers have come to Islamabad," added Bhutto.
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Original:  The murder occurred at 7pm in the family house .
Revised:  The massacre took place in the family house .
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Original:  The murder occurred at 7pm in the family house .
Revised:  The murder occurred at 7pm in the family 's home .
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Original:  After committing the murders, Damir walked in the street nervously for an hour waiting for his 16-year-old son, but before his son arrived he went to a police station to surrender and confessed : "I killed them all".
Revised:  Damir turned himself in to police about an hour and confessed to them "I killed them all".
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Original:  Dollar General is the latest American company to have to recall unsafe Chinese-made products.
Revised:  Dollar General is the latest American company to recall unsafe Chinese-made products.
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Original:  Dizzy Ducks Music Box About 1,300 units have been made by Schylling Associates of Rowley, Massachusetts.
Revised: Curious George Plush Dolls About 175,000 units have been made by Marvel Toys of New York, New York. The reason for the recall is "Surface paint on the toy’s plastic face and construction hat contain excessive levels of lead, which violates the federal lead paint standard." Consumers should immediately take the recalled toys away from children and contact Marvel Toys to receive a full refund. For additional information, contact Marvel Toys at (800) 352-2064 between 7 a.m. and 6 p.m. CT Monday through Friday, or visit the firm’s Web site at www.regcen.com/curiousgeorge Dizzy Ducks Music Box About 1,300 units have been made by Schylling Associates of Rowley, Massachusetts.
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Original:  The reason for the recall is "Surface paint on the toy’s plastic face and construction hat contain excessive levels of lead, which violates the federal lead paint standard."   Consumers should immediately take the recalled toys away from children and contact Marvel Toys to receive a full refund.
Revised:  The reason for the recall is "Surface paint on the toy’s plastic face and construction hat contain excessive levels of lead, violating the federal lead paint standard." Consumers should immediately take the recalled toys away from children and contact Marvel Toys to receive a full refund.
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Original:     "Big Red" Wagons About 7,200 units have been made by Northern Tool & Equipment Co., of Burnsville, Minnesota.
Revised:  Products affected "Big Red" Wagons About 7,200 units have been made by Northern Tool & Equipment Co., of Burnsville, Minnesota.
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Original:  [[ [[  The U.S Consumer Product Safety Commission has recalled more products over the last few days, though not all because of excessive lead.
Revised:  --208.71.72.2 15:53, 20 November 2007 (UTC)--208.71.72.2 15:53, 20 November 2007 (UTC)--208.71.72.2 15:53, 20 November 2007 (UTC)[[ [[ The U.S Consumer Product Safety Commission has recalled more products over the last few days, though not all because of excessive lead.
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Original:  [[ [[  The U.S Consumer Product Safety Commission has recalled more products over the last few days, though not all because of excessive lead.
Revised:  [[ [[ | The U.S Consumer Product Safety Commission has recalled more products over the last few days, though not all because of excessive lead.
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Original:  This follows a previous recall of circus, Thomas and Friends, and Curious George  brand tops back in August, by the same company
Revised:  This follows a previous recall of circus, Thomas and Friends, and Curious George '' brand tops back in August, by the same company
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Original:  Nine people, including the gunman, were killed when Pekka-Eric Auvinen, 18, went on a shooting spree at his local school  
Revised:  Nine people, including the gunman, were killed when Pekka-Eric Auvinen, 18, went on a shooting spree at his local school . 
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Original:  Currently, the law stipulates that Finns may apply for a gun permit at age 15 
Revised:  Currently, the law stipulates that Finns may apply for a gun permit at age 15. 
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Original:  Holmlund told the press that the intention is now to raise the age for ownership to 18, and require those aged 15-18 to be under parental supervision when carrying or using a firearm          
Revised:  Holmlund told the press that the intention is now to raise the age for ownership to 18, and require those aged 15-18 to be under parental supervision when carrying or using a firearm . 
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Original: Ministry spokesman Ilkka Salmi agreed that a potential change in legislation was being considered months before hand , but added that  "It's obvious that this kind of tragic incident has probably sped up the decision."
Revised: Ministry spokesman Ilkka Salmi agreed that a potential change in legislation was being considered months beforehand , but added that "It's obvious that this kind of tragic incident has probably sped up the decision."
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Original: Ministry spokesman Ilkka Salmi agreed that a potential change in legislation was being considered months before hand , but added that  "It's obvious that this kind of tragic incident has probably sped up the decision."
Revised: Ministry spokesman Ilkka Salmi agreed that a potential change in legislation was being considered months before hand , but added that , "It's obvious that this kind of tragic incident has probably sped up the decision."
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Original:  Auvinen had obtained a liscence for his .22 caliber handgun via a local shooting club just weeks prior to the attack, on October 19.
Revised:  Auvinen had obtained a license for his .22 caliber handgun via a local shooting club just weeks prior to the attack, on October 19.
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Original:  He opened fire on students and staff shortly before lunch break was due to start, killing five students and two staff members with the gun, which he called 'Catherine' in internet discusions , before turning it on himself.
Revised:  He opened fire on students and staff shortly before lunch break was due to start, killing five students and two staff members with the gun, which he called 'Catherine' in internet discussions , before turning it on himself.
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Original:  Police have commented that he had aparantly acted with intent to kill as many as possible, but selected his victims at random.
Revised:  Police have commented that he had apparently acted with intent to kill as many as possible, but selected his victims at random.
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Original:  Finnish gun ownership per head of population is the third highest in the world, due largely to a long tradition of huntig sports in the country, but fatal attacks are exceedingly rare.
Revised:  Finnish gun ownership per capita is the third highest in the world, due largely to a long tradition of huntig sports in the country, but fatal attacks are exceedingly rare.
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Original:  Finnish gun ownership per head of population is the third highest in the world, due largely to a long tradition of huntig sports in the country, but fatal attacks are exceedingly rare.
Revised:  Finnish gun ownership per head of population is the third highest in the world, due largely to a long tradition of hunting sports in the country, but fatal attacks are exceedingly rare.
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Original: Image:Jokela school November 8th.jpg|Jokela School  the scene of the shooting]] Finland is considering toughening gun legislation in light of this week's Jokela school shooting.
Revised: Image:Jokela school November 8th.jpg|Jokela School , the scene of the shooting]] Finland is considering toughening gun legislation in light of this week's Jokela school shooting.
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Original:  Suzanne Culpepper, the Roberts' former nanny, said Linday (Richard' second wife) and Richard spent money wildly.
Revised:  Suzanne Culpepper, the Roberts' former nanny, said Lindsay (Richard' second wife) and Richard spent money wildly.
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Original: date|November 11, 2007 Poppies on a War memorial Millions of people in the United Kingdom, Canada and many other Commonwealth countries observed two minutes silence in memory of the millions who died fighting for their countries during the First World War  . The UK ceremony was held in Whitehall, London .
Revised:  Poppies on a War memorial Millions of people in the United Kingdom, Canada and many other Commonwealth countries observed two minutes silence in memory of the millions who died fighting for their countries during the First World War . The UK ceremony was held in Whitehall, London .
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Original:  The Prime Minister Gordon Brown and representatives from the Army, Navy and the Royal Air Force amognst others participated in the service which was watched by many thousands across the world.
Revised:  The Prime Minister Gordon Brown and representatives from the Army, Navy and the Royal Air Force amongst others participated in the service which was watched by many thousands across the world.
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Original:   The two minutes silence  was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Pos
Revised:  The two minutes silence was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Post
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Original: Britain's oldest known veteran, Henry Allingham aged 111 years, old laid a wreath in France as part of the international cermeonies which are also taking place in Iraq, Afghanistan and Sri Lanka.
Revised: Britain's oldest known veteran, Henry Allingham aged 111 years, old laid a wreath in France as part of the international ceremonies which are also taking place in Iraq, Afghanistan and Sri Lanka.
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Original:  The two minutes silence at the UK cermony was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Post
Revised:  The two minutes silence at the UK ceremony was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Post
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Original:  The two minutes silence at the U.K. ceremony was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Post  
Revised:  The two minutes silence at the U.K. ceremony was marked by the firing of a field gun on Horse Guards Parade to begin and end the silence, followed by Royal Marines buglers, playing the Last Post . 
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Original:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something , at Yuanshan because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed the Secretary General of TCA Enoch Du.
Revised:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something at Yuanshan, because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed the Secretary General of TCA Enoch Du.
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Original: Wang: In the past, some Taiwanese companies had agencies and foundries to international factories.
Revised: Wang: In the past, some Taiwanese companies served as agencies and foundries to international factories.
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Original:  In the present , self-made brands and products with good quality or awards progressively marked to the world for the good appraisal by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
Revised:  In the present , self-made brands and products with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world for the good appraisal by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
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Original:  In the present , self-made brands and products with good quality or awards progressively marked to the world for the good appraisal by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
Revised:  In the present , self-made brands and products with good quality or awards progressively marked to the world , receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
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Original:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something at Yuanshan, because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed  the Secretary General of TCA Enoch Du . Both of those mentioned the recent issue of traffic problems.
Revised:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something at Yuanshan, because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed Enoch Du, the Secretary General of TCA Enoch Du . Both of those mentioned the recent issue of traffic problems.
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Original:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something at Yuanshan, because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed  the Secretary General of TCA Enoch Du . Both of those mentioned the recent issue of traffic problems.
Revised:  Rico Shen: I just forgot to say something at Yuanshan, because TAITRA and Taipei Computer Association (TCA) ever held "Exhibitors' Coordination of 2008 Computex Taipei" last month, and I interviewed the Secretary General of TCA . Both of those mentioned the recent issue of traffic problems.
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Original:  Recently, self-made brands and products in Taiwan can be seen progressively world-wide .
Revised:  Taiwan-made brands and products in Taiwan can be seen progressively world-wide .
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Original:  Recently, self-made brands and products in Taiwan can be seen progressively world-wide .
Revised:  Recently, self-made brands and products , such as this LaVEA television, can increasingly be found around the world .
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Original:  They have pursued becoming original design manufacturers (ODM)  . Now, self-made brands and products  with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
Revised:  They used original design manufacturers (ODM) . Now, self-made brands and products with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
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Original:  They have pursued becoming original design manufacturers (ODM)  . Now, self-made brands and products  with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
Revised:  They have pursued becoming original design manufacturers (ODM) . Now, self-made brands and products with good quality are increasingly marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
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Original:  They have pursued becoming original design manufacturers (ODM)  . Now, self-made brands and products  with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class and professional medias outside of Taiwan.
Revised:  They have pursued becoming original design manufacturers (ODM) . Now, self-made brands and products with good quality or awards are progressively marketed to the world, receiving praise by world-class professional media outside of Taiwan.
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Original: Noway 's whaling season started on Monday with the highest quota in over a decade.
Revised: Norway 's whaling season started on Monday with the highest quota in over a decade.
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Original: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
Revised:  Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
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