wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Matthew Locke, an Australian special forces soldier with the Special Air Service Regiment (SAS) has been shot and killed while performing a 300-man special operatives attack against the Taliban in Afghanistan.
Revised:  Matthew Locke, an Australian special forces soldier with the Special Air Service Regiment (SAS) has been shot and killed while taking part in a 300-man special operatives attack against the Taliban in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The death, Australia's third soldier death since the Vietnam War, is the second Australian death to occur in October.
Revised:  The death, Australia's third soldier death since the Vietnam War, is the second to occur in October.
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Original:  They also state that the images show a facility much like the on in North Korea at Yongbyon.
Revised:  They also state that the images show a facility much like the one in North Korea at Yongbyon.
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Original:  They face a total of 355 charges for their 200 robberies .
Revised:  They face a total of 355 charges for over 200 robberies .
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Original:  They face a total of 355 charges for their 200 robberies .
Revised:  They face a total of 355 charges for their 200 robberies 
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Original:  The police caught them after they received an "unrelated call in the neighbourhood"
Revised:  totalling in CAD 250,000
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Original:   14 people  were killed in the crash in September last year.
Revised:  All 14 people were killed in the crash in September last year.
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Original:  Nimrods were grounded after the crash, but were subsequently phased back into operation, and are currently back in full service flying regular reconasance missions in Afghanistan   
Revised:  Nimrods were grounded after the crash, but were subsequently phased back into operation, and are currently back in full service flying regular reconasance missions in Afghanistan . 
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Original:  Nimrods were grounded after the crash, but were subsequently phased back into operation, and are currently back in full service flying regular reconasance missions in Afghanistan.    
Revised:  Nimrods were grounded after the crash, but were subsequently phased back into operation, and are currently back in full service flying regular reconasance missions in Afghanistan. "If we didn't have confidence in the aircraft, we would not continue to fly them. 
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Original:  The other thing they tell you when you go to Cuba  to bring aspirin and all these things that are in short supply there.
Revised:  The other thing they tell you when you go to Cuba is to bring aspirin and all these things that are in short supply there.
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Original:  “Can I get somebody to moonlight for me for a little bit?” “Well no, we can’t give you one of our people, but he has got a cousin over here, who’s working part-time at Kentucky Fried Chicken and you can see him after  . So this is how I met this fellow from Yale.
Revised:  “Can I get somebody to moonlight for me for a little bit?” “Well no, we can’t give you one of our people, but he has got a cousin over here, who’s working part-time at Kentucky Fried Chicken and you can see him after " . So this is how I met this fellow from Yale.
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Original:  Or if I want to write about Unto The Suns , which is my book about my ancestry in Italy, I have to read all these book about Naples or 20th Century Mafia in Palermo or the English writers who were the great travel writers of the 19th century
Revised:  Or if I want to write about Unto The Sons , which is my book about my ancestry in Italy, I have to read all these book about Naples or 20th Century Mafia in Palermo or the English writers who were the great travel writers of the 19th century
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Original:  An analogy would be as if you had children and they only watched Bette Davis and Joan Crawford movies and then the film genre , would wither because young people found it difficult to relate to it.
Revised:  An analogy would be as if you had children and they only watched Bette Davis and Joan Crawford movies and then the film genre would wither because young people found it difficult to relate to it.
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Original:  Talese himself told NPR he rejects this label ("The term new journalism became very fashionable on college campuses in the 1970s and some of its practitioners tended to be a little loose with the facts.
Revised:  Talese himself told National Public Radio he rejects this label ("The term new journalism became very fashionable on college campuses in the 1970s and some of its practitioners tended to be a little loose with the facts.
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Original:  They ’ re not there because there ’ s no conscription.
Revised:  They ' re not there because there ’ s no conscription.
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Original:  They ’ re not there because there ’ s no conscription.
Revised:  They ’ re not there because there ' s no conscription.
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Original:  "It so happens there is someone that ’ s working on such a thing right now for me," the 75-year-old legendary journalist and author told David Shankbone.
Revised:  "It so happens there is someone that ' s working on such a thing right now for me," the 75-year-old legendary journalist and author told David Shankbone.
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Original: GT: No, it ’ s Southern Italian.
Revised: GT: No, it ' s Southern Italian.
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Original:  It ’ s the total of both.
Revised:  It ' s the total of both.
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Original:  That ’ s my ancestry.
Revised:  That ' s my ancestry.
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Original: GT: I pay attention to it when it ’ s in the headlines.
Revised: GT: I pay attention to it when it ' s in the headlines.
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Original:  No. I don ’ t know that the Italians much care about politics.
Revised:  No. I don ' t know that the Italians much care about politics.
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Original:  I think it ’ s a country of family influences.
Revised:  I think it ' s a country of family influences.
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Original:  They ’ ve had a mistrust of government ever since the fall of Rome.
Revised:  They ' ve had a mistrust of government ever since the fall of Rome.
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Original:  I mean they ’ re really clans.
Revised:  I mean they ' re really clans.
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Original:  It used to be they were stuck in the hills and they didn ’ t have any means of getting from one part of the mountain to the other so they were insular.
Revised:  It used to be they were stuck in the hills and they didn ' t have any means of getting from one part of the mountain to the other so they were insular.
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Original:  Now, it ’ s different, but it ’ s still not a country that ’ s a unified country.
Revised:  Now, it ' s different, but it ’ s still not a country that ’ s a unified country.
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Original:  Now, it ’ s different, but it ’ s still not a country that ’ s a unified country.
Revised:  Now, it ’ s different, but it ' s still not a country that ’ s a unified country.
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Original:  Now, it ’ s different, but it ’ s still not a country that ’ s a unified country.
Revised:  Now, it ’ s different, but it ’ s still not a country that ' s a unified country.
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Original:  I mean Italy is called a nation, but …. DS: They can ’ t seem to do anything politically.
Revised:  I mean Italy is called a nation, but .... DS: They can ’ t seem to do anything politically.
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Original:  I mean Italy is called a nation, but …. DS: They can ’ t seem to do anything politically.
Revised:  I mean Italy is called a nation, but …. DS: They can ' t seem to do anything politically.
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Original:  They can ’ t save Venice …. GT: They can ’ t do anything.
Revised:  They can ' t save Venice …. GT: They can ’ t do anything.
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Original:  They can ’ t save Venice …. GT: They can ’ t do anything.
Revised:  They can ’ t save Venice .... GT: They can ’ t do anything.
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Original:  They can ’ t save Venice …. GT: They can ’ t do anything.
Revised:  They can ’ t save Venice …. GT: They can ' t do anything.
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Original:  There ’ s a kind of underground economy that ’ s been there, probably for centuries.
Revised:  There ' s a kind of underground economy that ’ s been there, probably for centuries.
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Original:  There ’ s a kind of underground economy that ’ s been there, probably for centuries.
Revised:  There ’ s a kind of underground economy that ' s been there, probably for centuries.
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Original:  But underneath, there ’ s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ’ s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ’ t shown.
Revised:  But underneath, there ' s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ’ s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ’ t shown.
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Original:  But underneath, there ’ s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ’ s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ’ t shown.
Revised:  But underneath, there ’ s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ' s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ’ t shown.
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Original:  But underneath, there ’ s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ’ s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ’ t shown.
Revised:  But underneath, there ’ s a core management this kind of internal management of mercenary affairs, or family connections, or ways of gaining what is known on the surface, but underneath there ’ s a whole mysterious way of prosperity in Italy that isn ' t shown.
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Original:  It ’ s very interesting.
Revised:  It ' s very interesting.
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Original:  I don ’ t exactly ever see it and I ’ ve traveled a lot.
Revised:  I don ' t exactly ever see it and I ’ ve traveled a lot.
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Original:  I don ’ t exactly ever see it and I ’ ve traveled a lot.
Revised:  I don ’ t exactly ever see it and I ' ve traveled a lot.
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Original:  I haven ’ t traveled very much in the last ten years in Europe.
Revised:  I haven ' t traveled very much in the last ten years in Europe.
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Original:  I think Iran is another good example, where we are consistently fed images and notions about a people and a culture that aren ’ t really accurate.
Revised:  I think Iran is another good example, where we are consistently fed images and notions about a people and a culture that aren ' t really accurate.
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Original:  A little lazy and also they ’ re spoon-fed information, such as the weapons of mass destruction back in 2003.
Revised:  A little lazy and also they ' re spoon-fed information, such as the weapons of mass destruction back in 2003.
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Original:  It ’ s easy.
Revised:  It ' s easy.
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Original:  Whether it ’ s the gun lobby or the Israeli lobby or the Taiwan lobby, whatever the hell it is, you have these people who create a package of news, develop it as a story line, a scenario, and they find, as Mailer once said about the press, that they're like a donkey.
Revised:  Whether it ' s the gun lobby or the Israeli lobby or the Taiwan lobby, whatever the hell it is, you have these people who create a package of news, develop it as a story line, a scenario, and they find, as Mailer once said about the press, that they're like a donkey.
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Original:  GT: Well the media …. DS: But people are still consuming what they ’ re throwing out there though.
Revised:  GT: Well the media .... DS: But people are still consuming what they ’ re throwing out there though.
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Original:  GT: Well the media …. DS: But people are still consuming what they ’ re throwing out there though.
Revised:  GT: Well the media …. DS: But people are still consuming what they ' re throwing out there though.
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Original: GT: Yeah, they are, because they ’ re getting stories.
Revised: GT: Yeah, they are, because they ' re getting stories.
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Original:  I wouldn ’ t have journalists embedded if I had any power!
Revised:  I wouldn ' t have journalists embedded if I had any power!
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Original:  You don ’ t have to have military protection.
Revised:  You don ' t have to have military protection.
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Original:  There are stories you can do that aren ’ t done.
Revised:  There are stories you can do that aren ' t done.
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Original:  I ’ ve said that many times.
Revised:  I ' ve said that many times.
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Original:  Well even if you ’ re stuck in the Green Zone you can do stories.
Revised:  Well even if you ' re stuck in the Green Zone you can do stories.
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Original:  GT: Supposed you don ’ t have to go out there?
Revised:  GT: Supposed you don ' t have to go out there?
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Original:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
Revised:  Here 's what' s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
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Original:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
Revised:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ' s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
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Original:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
Revised:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ' s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
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Original:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
Revised:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ' s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
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Original:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ’ s been invaded.
Revised:  Here ’s what’ s important: In times of occupation of every historical event involving the United States, whether it ’ s World War II, whether it ’ s the war in Vietnam, Korea, occupation of Japan after World War II, World War I, there ’ s always been a private relationship with the people of the country that ' s been invaded.
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Original: GT: No, I haven ’ t been there.
Revised: GT: No, I haven ' t been there.
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Original:  I ’ d like to go.
Revised:  I ' d like to go.
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Original: DS: Why haven ’ t you?
Revised: DS: Why haven ' t you?
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Original:  DS: That shouldn ’ t be too hard for you.
Revised:  DS: That shouldn ' t be too hard for you.
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Original: GT: Sure it is, because you think The New York Times, the Time Magazine, Newsweek Magazine …. ?DS: Esquire?
Revised: GT: Sure it is, because you think The New York Times, the Time Magazine, Newsweek Magazine .... ?DS: Esquire?
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Original: GT: It so happens there is someone that ’ s working on such a thing right now for me.
Revised: GT: It so happens there is someone that ' s working on such a thing right now for me.
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Original:  I haven ’ t heard from them yet.
Revised:  I haven ' t heard from them yet.
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Original:  And they ’ re not going to underwrite me as a freelancer.
Revised:  And they ' re not going to underwrite me as a freelancer.
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Original:  Obviously you have to be covered by health and all this …. DS: I think you ’ re underrating your stature.
Revised:  Obviously you have to be covered by health and all this .... DS: I think you ’ re underrating your stature.
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Original:  Obviously you have to be covered by health and all this …. DS: I think you ’ re underrating your stature.
Revised:  Obviously you have to be covered by health and all this …. DS: I think you ' re underrating your stature.
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Original: GT: The point is, I ’ m not there, okay.
Revised: GT: The point is, I ' m not there, okay.
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Original:  But I ’ m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ’ m there, I ’ m now here.
Revised:  But I ' m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ’ m there, I ’ m now here.
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Original:  But I ’ m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ’ m there, I ’ m now here.
Revised:  But I ’ m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ' m there, I ’ m now here.
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Original:  But I ’ m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ’ m there, I ’ m now here.
Revised:  But I ’ m trying to get back to what I was saying before, whether or not I ’ m there, I ' m now here.
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Original:  I mean I ’ m quoting myself as to what kind of stories.
Revised:  I mean I ' m quoting myself as to what kind of stories.
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Original:  Well now he ’ s in Baghdad as one of these civilian contractors.
Revised:  Well now he ' s in Baghdad as one of these civilian contractors.
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Original:  That ’ s my little thing that I have in the offing.
Revised:  That ' s my little thing that I have in the offing.
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Original:  But he told me that the worst thing, not kicking down the doors, but they go in there and they open the locks of what we ’ ll call the hope chests of women who hope to marry.
Revised:  But he told me that the worst thing, not kicking down the doors, but they go in there and they open the locks of what we ' ll call the hope chests of women who hope to marry.
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Original:  The soldiers go in and they just break open the locks of these women ’ s hope chests or whatever you call them and that is really the ultimate insult.
Revised:  The soldiers go in and they just break open the locks of these women ' s hope chests or whatever you call them and that is really the ultimate insult.
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Original:  It ’ s like raping the women right there.
Revised:  It ' s like raping the women right there.
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Original:  GT: The journalists define news and their editors want news …. DS: It fits a template.
Revised:  GT: The journalists define news and their editors want news .... DS: It fits a template.
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Original:  The war hasn ’ t affected America as a person.
Revised:  The war hasn ' t affected America as a person.
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Original:  That ’ s all.
Revised:  That ' s all.
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Original: DS: It hasn ’ t affected you then?
Revised: DS: It hasn ' t affected you then?
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Original:  It hasn ’ t.
Revised:  It hasn ' t.
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Original:  It hasn ’ t affected you either.
Revised:  It hasn ' t affected you either.
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Original:  It hasn ’ t affected anybody!
Revised:  It hasn ' t affected anybody!
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Original:  DS: It ’ s affected me.
Revised:  DS: It ' s affected me.
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Original: GT: It ’ s affected you?
Revised: GT: It ' s affected you?
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Original:  DS: That ’ s what Charles Rangel says.
Revised:  DS: That ' s what Charles Rangel says.
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Original: GT: He ’ s the only voice in Congress that ever said that and he said it five years ago.
Revised: GT: He ' s the only voice in Congress that ever said that and he said it five years ago.
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Original:  I don ’ t know of any other voice.
Revised:  I don ' t know of any other voice.
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Original:  Right now what ’ s the involvement?
Revised:  Right now what ' s the involvement?
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Original:  The ridiculous stickers, ‘Support Your Troops ’ on the back of an SUV?
Revised:  The ridiculous stickers, ‘Support Your Troops ' on the back of an SUV?
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Original: DS: That ’ s the only thing that does seem to motivate people to be against the war is to be paying more at the gas pump.
Revised: DS: That ' s the only thing that does seem to motivate people to be against the war is to be paying more at the gas pump.
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Original:  GT: They don ’ t care.
Revised:  GT: They don ' t care.
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Original:  Don ’ t care.
Revised:  Don ' t care.
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Original:  There ’ s no sacrifice.
Revised:  There ' s no sacrifice.
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Original:  Americans are unaffected, except those in the military or related to military people, doesn ’t matter…
Revised:  Americans are unaffected, except those in the military or related to military people, doesn 't matter...
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Original:  I go out. I mean, yes you can have conversations at dinner parties about this, but it ’ s very political.
Revised:  I go out. I mean, yes you can have conversations at dinner parties about this, but it ' s very political.
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Original:  It ’ s about whether McCain says this or Hillary says this and what ’ s the position of somebody in the defense department.
Revised:  It ' s about whether McCain says this or Hillary says this and what ’ s the position of somebody in the defense department.
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Original:  It ’ s about whether McCain says this or Hillary says this and what ’ s the position of somebody in the defense department.
Revised:  It ’ s about whether McCain says this or Hillary says this and what ' s the position of somebody in the defense department.
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