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Original: A new study released in the New England Journal of Medicine, states that in about a third of cardiac arrest cases inside hospitals in the United States, doctors and nurses do not respond quickly enough  thus increasing the risk of brain damage and death.
Revised: A new study published in the New England Journal of Medicine, states that in about a third of cardiac arrest cases inside hospitals in the United States, doctors and nurses do not respond quickly enough thus increasing the risk of brain damage and death.
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Original: A new study released in the New England Journal of Medicine, states that in about a third of cardiac arrest cases inside hospitals in the United States, doctors and nurses do not respond quickly enough  thus increasing the risk of brain damage and death.
Revised: A new study released in the New England Journal of Medicine, states that in about a third of cardiac arrest cases inside hospitals in the United States, doctors and nurses do not respond quickly enough , thus increasing the risk of brain damage and death.
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Original:  This could contribute to the deaths of thousands every year.
Revised:  Potentially, this contributes to the deaths of thousands every year.
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Original: In Brooklyn New York, an 8 month old boy, Andrew  was attacked and killed by a doberman pincher.
Revised: In Brooklyn New York, an eight-month old boy, Andrew was attacked and killed by a doberman pincher.
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Original: In Brooklyn New York, an 8 month old boy, Andrew  was attacked and killed by a doberman pincher.
Revised: In Brooklyn New York, an 8 month old boy, Andrew , was attacked and killed by a doberman pincher.
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Original:  The dog was a 3 years old named mackabee who is also nutered .
Revised:  The dog was a three-year old named Mackabee who is also nutered .
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Original:  The dog was a 3 years old named mackabee who is also nutered .
Revised:  The dog was a 3 years old named mackabee who is also neutered .
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Original:  As the neighbor took the dog off the boy and rescued him and brought to his house to try and perform cpr on the boy .
Revised:  The neighbor took the dog off the boy and rescued him and brought to his house to try and perform cpr on the boy .
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Original:  Police said the babies head was in bad shape and the dog broke the boy's skull.
Revised:  Police said the baby's head was in bad shape and the dog broke the boy's skull.
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Original:  The doctors tried to save his life by working on him for nearly an hour . Center where the boy died at 3:06 pm.
Revised:  The doctors tried to save his life by working on him for nearly an hour , but the boy died at 3:06 pm.
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Original:  As the Department of Health will try and find out how this happened.
Revised:  The Department of Health will try and find out how this happened.
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Original:  The dog may have to be put down or face other charges
Revised:  The dog may have to be put down 
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Original:  The dog was a three-year old named Mackabee who is also neutered.
Revised:  The dog was a three-year old named Mackabee who is neutered.
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Original: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed by a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
Revised: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, attacked and killed by a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
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Original: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed by a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
Revised: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
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Original: An eight-month old boy, Andrew,  attacked and killed  a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
Revised: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
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Original: An eight-month old boy, Andrew,  attacked and killed  a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
Revised: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, attacked and killed by a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
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Original: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed by a Doberman pincher in Brooklyn, New York.
Revised: An eight-month old boy, Andrew, was attacked and killed by a Doberman pinscher in Brooklyn, New York.
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Original: According to the US Centers for Disease Control, the Doberman Pinscher is not frequently involved in  attacks on humans in comparison to several other dog breeds such as German Shepherd Dogs, Rottweilers and others .
Revised: According to the US Center for Disease Control, the Doberman Pinscher is not frequently involved in attacks on humans in comparison to several other dog breeds such as German Shepherd Dogs, Rottweilers and others .
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Original:  The fuel sensors are part of a system to prevent the shuttle from running on an empty tank, which could cause pumps in the engine of break and possibly trigger an disastrous explosion.
Revised:  The fuel sensors are part of a system to prevent the shuttle from running on an empty tank, which could cause pumps in the engine of break and possibly trigger a disastrous explosion.
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Original:  Biden and Dodd have now withdrawn from the race due to the outcome of the rac
Revised:  Biden and Dodd have now withdrawn from the race due to the outcome of the caucus
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Original:  As of 10:10 pm local Central Time the standings were  Huckabee (34\%), Mitt Romney (25\%), Fred Thompson (13\%), John McCain (13\%), Ron Paul (10\%), Rudy Giuliani (4\%), and Duncan Hunter (1\%).
Revised:  As of 10:10 pm local Central Time the standings were Mike Huckabee (34\%), Mitt Romney (25\%), Fred Thompson (13\%), John McCain (13\%), Ron Paul (10\%), Rudy Giuliani (4\%), and Duncan Hunter (1\%).
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Original: 100px| Republican winner: Mike Huckabee Former Governor of Arkansas Mike Huckabee, an ordained Southern Baptist minister, won the Iowa Republican caucus due at least in part to a large outcome of support from evangelical voters , receiving 34\% from Republican caucus goers.
Revised: 100px| Republican winner: Mike Huckabee Former Governor of Arkansas Mike Huckabee, an ordained Southern Baptist minister, won the Iowa Republican caucus , receiving 34\% from Republican caucus goers.
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Original:  Huckabee beat out 6 other Republican candidates in the often turbulent campaign which often focused on issues of religion and negativism rather than on more substantive platform issues .
Revised:  Huckabee beat out 6 other Republican candidates in the often turbulent campaign .
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Original:  100px| Democratic winner: Barack Obama Meanwhile, Illinois senator Barack Obama won the Iowa Democratic caucus, drawing support from younger voters and getting 38\% percent of the vote despite a close race with John Edwards and Hillary Clinton.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Illinois senator Barack Obama won the Iowa Democratic caucus, drawing support from younger voters and getting 38\% percent of the vote despite a close race with John Edwards and Hillary Clinton.
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Original:  The state is now getting ready for elections in Feb 2008.
Revised:  The state is now getting ready for elections in February 2008.
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Original:  Nagaland. On December 13 Nagaland Chief Minister Rio had survived a no-confidence motion in state assembly with count 23-19 in the 60-member House.
Revised:  Nagaland. On December 13 Chief Minister of Nagaland Rio had survived a no-confidence motion in state assembly with count 23-19 in the 60-member House.
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Original:  The speaker of the house had barred 3 independents from taking part in voting and had declared that the votes of 9 dissident ruling NPF members were invalid.
Revised:  The speaker of the house had barred 3 independents from taking part in voting and had declared that the votes of 9 dissident of ruling NPF were invalid.
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Original:  You have the civil war also and on the DRC there is plenty of corruption problems also.  
Revised:  You have the civil war also and on the DRC there is plenty of corruption problems also. " 
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Original:  He says international flights to and from Africa are not the problem, most of the plane crashes and deaths take place during internal flights in Africa by small, dangerous carriers  
Revised:  He says international flights to and from Africa are not the problem, most of the plane crashes and deaths take place during internal flights in Africa by small, dangerous carriers . 
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Original:  The other was the crash of UTair Flight 471, a Tupolev Tu-134 which crashed whilst attempting to land at Samara Kurumoch Airport, Russia, killing six of the 57 passengers on board  
Revised:  The other was the crash of UTair Flight 471, a Tupolev Tu-134 which crashed whilst attempting to land at Samara Kurumoch Airport, Russia, killing six of the 57 passengers on board . 
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Original:  It says this is 28 less crashes than 2006, and also a 25\% decrease in fatalities.
Revised:  It says this is 28 fewer crashes than 2006, and also a 25\% decrease in fatalities.
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Original:  The disaster was one of just two fatal commercial passenger aircraft accidents that did not either ocur in the third world or involve an aircraft registered there.
Revised:  The disaster was one of just two fatal commercial passenger aircraft accidents that did not either occur in the third world or involve an aircraft registered there.
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Original:  The other was the crash of UTair Flight 471, a Tupolev Tu-134 which crashed whilst attempting to land at Samara Kurumoch Airport, Russia, killing six of the 57 passengers on board.
Revised:  The other was the crash of UTair Flight 471, a Tupolev Tu-134 which crashed while attempting to land at Samara Kurumoch Airport, Russia, killing six of the 57 passengers on board.
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Original:  an Airbus A340-600 was destroyed after it rammed a wall during ground testing in Toulouse, but was not counted because the new aircraft was still with Airbus and was yet to be delivered t its first owner, Etihad Airways.
Revised:  an Airbus A340-600 was destroyed after it rammed a wall during ground testing in Toulouse, but was not counted because the new aircraft was still with Airbus and was yet to be delivered to its first owner, Etihad Airways.
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Original: United States Senator Christopher Dodd left the Presidential race last night with his head "held high", thanking  the Dodd Squad  and his supporters for their efforts and passion.
Revised: United States Senator Christopher Dodd left the Presidential race last night with his head "held high", thanking " the Dodd Squad and his supporters for their efforts and passion.
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Original: United States Senator Christopher Dodd left the Presidential race last night with his head "held high", thanking  the Dodd Squad  and his supporters for their efforts and passion.
Revised: United States Senator Christopher Dodd left the Presidential race last night with his head "held high", thanking the Dodd Squad " and his supporters for their efforts and passion.
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Original:  Dodd recalled advice from his father, imparted nearly forty years ago: "There's no other calling in life where you can do as much for as many people as you can through public service.
Revised: Selections from his speech Dodd recalled advice from his father, imparted nearly forty years ago: "There's no other calling in life where you can do as much for as many people as you can through public service.
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Original:  Surprisingly though , neither Gravel or Kucinich conceeded , only Dodd and Joe Biden, who won the votes of 23 state delegates, or 1\% of the vote.
Revised:  However , neither Gravel or Kucinich conceeded , only Dodd and Joe Biden, who won the votes of 23 state delegates, or 1\% of the vote.
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Original:  Surprisingly though , neither Gravel or Kucinich conceeded , only Dodd and Joe Biden, who won the votes of 23 state delegates, or 1\% of the vote.
Revised:  Surprisingly though , neither Gravel or Kucinich conceded , only Dodd and Joe Biden, who won the votes of 23 state delegates, or 1\% of the vote.
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Original: Image:Let L-410.jpg|A file photo of a Russian Let L-410MU, an earlier version somewhat comparable to the one involved]] An aircraft owned and operated by Transaven Airlines has crashed into the sea off the coast of Venezuela.
Revised: Image:Let L-410.jpg|A file photo of a Russian Let L-410MU, an earlier version somewhat comparable to the one involved]] An aircraft owned and operated by Transaven Airlines is believed to have crashed into the sea off the coast of Venezuela.
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Original: Image:Let L-410.jpg|A file photo of a Russian Let L-410MU, an earlier version somewhat comparable to the one involved  ]] An aircraft owned and operated by Transaven Airlines is believed to have crashed into the sea off the coast of Venezuela.
Revised: Image:Let L-410.jpg|A file photo of a Russian Let L-410MU, an earlier version somewhat comparable to the one involved . ]] An aircraft owned and operated by Transaven Airlines is believed to have crashed into the sea off the coast of Venezuela.
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Original: The dual-engined Czechoslovakian-built (in 1987) Let L-410UVP-E3 plane had departed from Simon Bolivar International Airport near Carcas on its scheduled domestic flight to Los Roques Airport and is believed to have subsequently crashed into the ocean approximately 24 miles (39 km) short of its destination in the Los Roques archipelago, according to General Antonio Rivero, emergency management director for Venezuela.
Revised: The dual-engined Czechoslovakian-built (in 1987) Let L-410UVP-E3 plane had departed from Simon Bolivar International Airport near Caracas on its scheduled domestic flight to Los Roques Airport and is believed to have subsequently crashed into the ocean approximately 24 miles (39 km) short of its destination in the Los Roques archipelago, according to General Antonio Rivero, emergency management director for Venezuela.
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Original:  The decision came as a result as part of the continuing decline of the American dollar, falling 11 percent in 2007 and now valued around 39 rupees  
Revised:  The decision came as a result as part of the continuing decline of the American dollar, falling 11 percent in 2007 and now valued around 39 rupees . 
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Original:  Due to the declining value of the US dollar, tourism officals in Indian have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of one of the seven wonders of the world and a 120 other Indian historical sites.
Revised:  Due to the declining value of the US dollar, tourism officals in India have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of one of the seven wonders of the world and a 120 other Indian historical sites.
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Original:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal must now fork over 500 Indian rupees ($12.80 US at the current exchange rate  to get in and receive a free bottle of water.
Revised:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal must now fork over 500 Indian rupees ($12.80 US at the current exchange rate to get in and receive a free bottle of water.
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Original:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal must now fork over 500 Indian rupees ($12.80 US at the current exchange rate  to get in and receive a free bottle of water.
Revised:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal must now fork over 500 Indian rupees ($12.80 US at the current exchange rate ) to get in and receive a free bottle of water.
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Original:  Due to the declining value of the US dollar, tourism officals in India have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of one of the seven wonders of the world, the Taj Mahal and 120 other Indian historical sites.
Revised:  Due to the declining value of the United States dollar, tourism officals in India have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of one of the seven wonders of the world, the Taj Mahal and 120 other Indian historical sites.
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Original:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal will pay over 500 Indian rupees (  $12.80 US at the current exchange rate) to be allowed in and additionally receive a free bottle of water.
Revised:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal will pay over 500 Indian rupees ( US $12.80 US at the current exchange rate) to be allowed in and additionally receive a free bottle of water.
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Original:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal will pay over 500 Indian rupees (  $12.80 US at the current exchange rate) to be allowed in and additionally receive a free bottle of water.
Revised:  The monument has refused to take dollars since November, as such, any American tourist wishing to visit the white domed marble mausoleum of Mughal emperor Shah Jahan for his wife Mumtaz Mahal will pay over 500 Indian rupees ( $12.80 at the current exchange rate) to be allowed in and additionally receive a free bottle of water.
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Original: The Taj Mahal has not accepeted American dollars since November 2007.
Revised: The Taj Mahal has not accepted American dollars since November 2007.
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Original:  Due to the declining value of the United States dollar, tourism officals in India have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of one of the seven wonders of the world, the Taj Mahal and 120 other Indian historical sites.
Revised:  Due to the declining value of the United States dollar, tourism officals in India have decided to no longer accept the American currency at the site of the Taj Mahal and 120 other Indian historical sites.
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Original: The settlers accuse the Israeli government of betrayal, saying it is caving in to the dictates of the Unites States.
Revised: The settlers accuse the Israeli government of betrayal, saying it is caving in to the dictates of the United States.
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Original:  In a Thursday interview with the Reuters news service, Mr. Bush said he and his economic team are considering all their options and he probably will not decide whether to act until his State of the Union address later this month.
Revised:  In a Thursday interview with the Reuters news service, Mr. Bush said he and his economic team are considering all their options and he probably will not decide whether to act until his State of the Union Address later this month.
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Original: Legal attacks, death threats and physical attacks against the workers  been increasing, reports Marie Trigona for Grupo Alavío.
Revised: Legal attacks, death threats and physical attacks against the workers have been increasing, reports Marie Trigona for Grupo Alavío.
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Original:  She confirms an UpsideDownWorld.org report that a month ago that violence and torture were being used against the workers is confirmed, and says the woman who was abducted and tortured has continued to suffer persecution.
Revised:  She confirms an UpsideDownWorld.org report that a month ago violence and torture were being used against the workers is confirmed, and says the woman who was abducted and tortured has continued to suffer persecution.
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Original:  She confirms an UpsideDownWorld.org report that a month ago violence and torture were being used against the workers is confirmed , and says the woman who was abducted and tortured has continued to suffer persecution.
Revised:  She confirms an UpsideDownWorld.org report that a month ago violence and torture were being used against the workers , and says the woman who was abducted and tortured has continued to suffer persecution.
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Original: Magnani indicates incumbent President Néstor Kirchner might defend Zanor . "One of Kirchner’s flags is human rights.
Revised: Magnani indicates incumbent President Néstor Kirchner might defend Zanon . "One of Kirchner’s flags is human rights.
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Original:   Trigona apparently holds no such hope: " The national government has also acted as an accomplice in the Zanon conflict.
Revised:  " The national government has also acted as an accomplice in the Zanon conflict.
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Original:  " Subway workers, train workers, airline workers, other recuperated businesses and many other sectors have made it clear that the employees at Zanon will not be alone."
Revised:  Subway workers, train workers, airline workers, other recuperated businesses and many other sectors have made it clear that the employees at Zanon will not be alone."
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Original:  Says one Zanon worker, "We are willing to defend the factory with our lives.  
Revised:  Says one Zanon worker, "We are willing to defend the factory with our lives. " 
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Original:  Other sources consulted about Sobisch behavior in the past do not reflect a record of overt violence against the workers.
Revised:  Other sources consulted about the past record of behavior by Sobisch do not reflect a record of overt violence against the workers.
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Original:  Georgia will hold a snap presidential election on Saturday in which six candidates are challenging incumbent Mikhail Saakashvili, who is accused of rigging the process in his favor.
Revised:  Georgia will hold a snap presidential election on Saturday in which six candidates are challenging incumbent Mikheil Saakashvili, who is accused of rigging the process in his favor.
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Original:  The benefits would include about  $35 USD per month to all unemployed persons, as well as 100 kilowatts of electricity and 100 cubic meters of gas each month to needy families.
Revised:  The benefits would include about US $35 USD per month to all unemployed persons, as well as 100 kilowatts of electricity and 100 cubic meters of gas each month to needy families.
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Original:  The benefits would include about  $35 USD per month to all unemployed persons, as well as 100 kilowatts of electricity and 100 cubic meters of gas each month to needy families.
Revised:  The benefits would include about $35 per month to all unemployed persons, as well as 100 kilowatts of electricity and 100 cubic meters of gas each month to needy families.
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Original: The fighting comes just a week before United States President George  Bush arrives in the region to discuss Israeli-Palestinian relations.
Revised: The fighting comes just a week before United States President George W. Bush arrives in the region to discuss Israeli-Palestinian relations.
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