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Original:  Cavallo's predecessor Osterloh describes her as "strong leadership, empathic and so strategically thinking that many will be surprised . "  The head of the car manufacturer's employee representatives stood.
Revised:  Cavallo's predecessor Osterloh describes her as "strong leadership, empathic and so strategically thinking that many will be surprised . " . The head of the car manufacturer's employee representatives stood.
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Original: Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on most trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons it became possible to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry far from cell towers.
Revised: Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on named trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons it became possible to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry far from cell towers.
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Original:  They can be set alone or in groups, and in either an unsupported (with no outside aid) or  supported style, where aid from a crew or commercial sources is allowed.
Revised:  There are multiple categories for records depending on how the trail is tackled: either an unsupported (with no outside aid) or supported style, where aid from a crew or commercial sources is allowed.
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Original:  They can be set alone or in groups, and in either an unsupported (with no outside aid) or  supported style, where aid from a crew or commercial sources is allowed.
Revised:  They can be set alone or in groups, and in either an unsupported (with no outside aid) or a supported style, where aid from a crew or commercial sources is allowed.
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Original:  Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on named trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons it became possible to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry far from cell towers .
Revised:  Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on named trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons made it significantly easier and more reliable to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry far from cell towers .
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Original:  Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on named trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons it became possible to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry far from cell towers .
Revised:  Informal, unverified speed records have long existed on named trails, but with the invention of handheld GPS devices such as GPS watches or personal locator beacons it became possible to collect and compare fastest times on a route even in the backcountry .
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Original:  Unlike most endurance sports competitions like road marathons , FKTs are self-organized and generally done alone or in small groups.
Revised:  Unlike most endurance sports competitions such as marathon world records , FKTs are self-organized and generally done alone or in small groups.
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Original:  FKTs are most popular on long trails suitable for thru-hiking or ultramarathon trail running such as the Appalachian Trail, the Pennine Way, or the John Muir Trail.
Revised:  FKTs are most popular on long trails suitable for thru-hiking or ultramarathon trail running such as the Appalachian Trail, the Pennine Way, and the John Muir Trail.
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Original:  There are multiple categories for records depending on how the trail is tackled: either an unsupported (with no outside aid) or a supported style, where aid from a crew or commercial sources is allowed.
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Original:  While there is no governing body for certifying FKTs, Bakwin and Burrell's site acts as an informal arbiter for standards, requiring additional certification like photographs and pre-announcing your intent to attempt a record  
Revised:  While there is no governing body for certifying FKTs, Bakwin and Burrell's site acts as an informal arbiter , sometimes requiring additional certification like photographs and pre-announcing your intent to attempt a record 
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Original:  While there is no governing body for certifying FKTs, Bakwin and Burrell's site acts as an informal arbiter for standards, requiring additional certification like photographs and pre-announcing your intent to attempt a record  
Revised:  While there is no governing body for certifying FKTs, Bakwin and Burrell's site acts as an informal arbiter for standards, requiring additional certification like photographs and pre-announcing your intent to attempt a record . 
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Original:  It was erected by the pilots of the New York in memory of their comrade Thomas Freeborn.
Revised:  It was erected by the New York pilots in memory of their comrade Thomas Freeborn.
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Original:   Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to shore.
Revised:  Pilot Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to shore.
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Original:  Freeborne ran into trouble on the John Minturn when trying to guide the ship in bad weather.
Revised:  Freeborne ran into trouble when trying to guide the ship in bad weather.
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Original:  Thirty-eight out of fifty-one persons perished including Pilot Thomas Freeborne.
Revised:  Thirty-eight out of fifty-one persons perished including Thomas Freeborne.
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Original:  The monument was built by James D. Smillie in 1847 and is located at Battle Avenue on the top of Battle Hill at the Green-Wood Cemetery.
Revised:  The monument was built in 1847 and is located at Battle Avenue on the top of Battle Hill at the Green-Wood Cemetery.
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Original:  The monument was built by James D. Smillie in 1847 and is located at Battle Avenue on the top of Battle Hill at the Green-Wood Cemetery.
Revised:  The monument was built by James D. Smillie in 1847 and is located at Battle Avenue on the top of Battle Hill in the Green-Wood Cemetery.
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Original:  John Minturn On February 14, 1846, he was on the pilot boat Blossom, cruising at sea outside Mantoloking, New Jersey, when he sighted the packet ship John Minturn  . Pilot Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to port but ran into trouble when trying to guide the ship in bad weather .
Revised:  Thomas Freeborn On February 14, 1846, he was on the pilot boat Blossom, cruising at sea outside Mantoloking, New Jersey, when he sighted the packet ship John Minturn . Pilot Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to port but ran into trouble when trying to guide the ship in bad weather .
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Original:  John Minturn On February 14, 1846, he was on the pilot boat Blossom, cruising at sea outside Mantoloking, New Jersey, when he sighted the packet ship John Minturn  . Pilot Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to port but ran into trouble when trying to guide the ship in bad weather .
Revised:  John Minturn On February 14, 1846, Freeborn was on the pilot boat Blossom, cruising at sea outside Mantoloking, New Jersey, when he sighted the packet ship John Minturn . Pilot Freeborn went on board the John Minturn to guide her safely to port but ran into trouble when trying to guide the ship in bad weather .
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Original:  The front of the sarcophagus is surrounded with representative sea storm and shipwreck.
Revised:  The front of the sarcophagus is surrounded with a representative of the actual sea storm and shipwreck.
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Original:  Upon this rests a ship's capstan and cable coiled about it, which is broken  .
Revised:  Upon this rests a ship's capstan and cable coiled about it, which is broken at the end .
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Original:  A pillar rises from the capstan  cutoff mast and and crowned with a figure of "hope." regaining her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & 
Revised:  A pillar rises from the capstan cutoff mast and crowned with a figure of "hope." regaining her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & 
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Original:  A pillar rises from the capstan  cutoff mast and and crowned with a figure of "hope." regaining her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & 
Revised:  A pillar rises from the capstan cutoff mast and and crowned with a figure of Hope still holding on to her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & 
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Original:  A pillar rises from the capstan  cutoff mast and and crowned with a figure of "hope." regaining her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & 
Revised:  A pillar rises from the capstan cutoff mast and and crowned with a figure of "hope." regaining her anchor and pointing to the URL Gleason's pictorial & Ives
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Original: ]] The Pilot's Monument consists of a mrable shaft 40 feet in height, set on a solid massive square sarcophagus made of marble.
Revised: ]] The Pilot's Monument consists of a marble shaft 40 feet in height, set on a solid massive square sarcophagus made of marble.
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Original:  Upon this rests a ship's capstan and cable coiled about it, which is broken at the end.
Revised:  Upon this rests a ship's capstan and cable coiled about it, which is severed at the end.
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Original:  Nathaniel Currier of Currier Ives%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dedication The Monument was dedicated on 1846.
Revised:  Ives%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dedication The Monument was dedicated on 1846.
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Original:  Nathaniel Currier of Currier Ives%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dedication The Monument was dedicated on 1846.
Revised:  Nathaniel Currier of Currier %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dedication The Monument was dedicated on 1846.
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Original:  Nathaniel Currier of Currier Ives%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dedication The Monument was dedicated on 1846.
Revised:  Nathaniel Currier of Currier Ives%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Two editions of the piece sold for $ 30,600 USD at auctions to significant media attention in 2021.
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Original:  Two editions of the piece sold for $ 30,600 USD at auctions to significant media attention in 2021.
Revised:  Two editions of the piece sold for $ 30,600 USD at auctions to significant media attention in 
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Original:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
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Original:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
Revised:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
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Original:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
Revised:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
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Original:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 works Category:Conceptual art Category:Sculpture Category:Works by Italian peop
Revised:  Links Comedian (artwork) Fountain (Duchamp)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category: 2021 
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Original:  It is a member of the UCI and the UEC .
Revised:  It is a member of the International Cycling Union and the European Cycling Union .
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Original:  The federation operates the Yerevan Velodrome, where its headquarters is located.
Revised:  The federation operates the Yerevan Velodrome, where its headquarters are located.
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Original:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armenia Category:Cycle racing organizations Cycling Category:Cycle racing in Armen
Revised:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armenia Category:Cycle racing organizations Cycling Category:Cycle racing in Armen
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Original:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armenia Category:Cycle racing organizations Cycling Category:Cycle racing in Armen
Revised:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armenia Category:Cycle racing organizations Cycling Category:Cycle racing in Armen
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Original:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Armenia Category:Cycle racing organizations Cycling Category:Cycle racing in Armen
Revised:  Armenian track cyclist Edgar Stepanyan competed successfully at the 2015 and 2018 European Track Championships, where he won two gold medals at junior and under-23 level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: In the Ming dynasty, the bijia was long in length and would reached below the knee level.
Revised: In the Ming dynasty, the bijia was long in length and would reach below the knee level.
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Original:  As Ming dynasty women sought for the impression of slendernessas the desired body image, bijia was worn as it facilitated the creation of a slender body image .
Revised:  Bijia created an illusion of slenderness, which women in the Ming dynasty sought after .
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Original:  The bijia remained one of the most common form of female clothing worn in the 17th and 18th century.
Revised:  The bijia remained one of the most common forms of female clothing worn in the 17th and 18th century.
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Original:  Theatrical beixin The Chinese opera beixin (), also known as kanjian, majia, and beida, were sleeveless vests which originated from both the Ming dynasty's long-length bijia worn by women from the lower-middle class and from the Qing dynasty's majia (), a type of vest which were worn by the Manchu  
Revised:  Theatrical beixin The Chinese opera beixin (), also known as kanjian, majia, and beida, were sleeveless vests which originated from both the Ming dynasty's long-length bijia worn by women from the lower-middle class and from the Qing dynasty's majia (), a type of vest which were worn by the Manchu . 
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Original: During this time, she also served for a number of years as artistic director of the imagineNATIVE Film and Media Arts Festival.
Revised: During this time, she served for a number of years as artistic director of the imagineNATIVE Film and Media Arts Festival.
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Original:  Category:1977 births Category:  21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian women screenwriters Category:Canadian women film directors Category:Film directors from Saskatchewan Category:First Nations filmmakers Category:Métis filmmakers Category:Cree people Category:Living peop
Revised:  Category:1977 births Category: Living people Category: 21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian women screenwriters Category:Canadian women film directors Category:Film directors from Saskatchewan Category:First Nations filmmakers Category:Métis filmmakers Category:Cree people Category:Living peop
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Original:  Category:1977 births Category:  21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian women screenwriters Category:Canadian women film directors Category:Film directors from Saskatchewan Category:First Nations filmmakers Category:Métis filmmakers Category:Cree people Category:Living peop
Revised:  Category:1977 births Category: 21st-century Canadian screenwriters Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category:21st-century First Nations writers Category:Canadian women screenwriters Category:Canadian women film directors Category:Film directors from Saskatchewan Category:First Nations filmmakers Category:Métis filmmakers Category:Cree peop
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Original: Pfuel was born in Jahnsfelde  (now part of Müncheberg) , Brandenburg .
Revised: Pfuel was born in Jahnsfelde (now part of Müncheberg) .
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Original:  He served as commander of Cologne and the Prussian sector of Paris from 1814-1815 during the Napoleonic Wars.
Revised:  He served as commander of Cologne and the Prussian sector of Paris from 1814-15 during the Napoleonic Wars.
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Original: Ernst Heinrich Adolf von Pfuel ( November 3 , 1779 – December 3 , 1866) was a Prussian general, as well as Prussian Minister of War and later Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised: Ernst Heinrich Adolf von Pfuel ( 3 , 1779 – December 3 , 1866) was a Prussian general, as well as Prussian Minister of War and later Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original: Ernst Heinrich Adolf von Pfuel ( November 3 , 1779 – December 3 , 1866) was a Prussian general, as well as Prussian Minister of War and later Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised: Ernst Heinrich Adolf von Pfuel ( November 3 , 1779 – 3 , 1866) was a Prussian general, as well as Prussian Minister of War and later Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original:  Pfuel was born in Jahnsfelde, Prussia ( now part of Müncheberg  ).
Revised:  Pfuel was born in Jahnsfelde, Prussia ( present-day Müncheberg ).
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Original:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised:  Pfuel later served as governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
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Original:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 ) . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
Revised:  Pfuel later served as Governor of Berlin and Governor of the Prussian Canton of Neuchâtel in Switzerland . Pfuel replaced Karl Wilhelm von Willisen as the Royal Special Commissioner of King Frederick William IV of Prussia during the Greater Poland Uprising ( 1848 revolution . He was a member of the Prussian National Assembly of 1848 and later that year , served as Prussian Minister of War from 7 September to 2 November, as well as Prime Minister of Prussia.
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