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Original:  Another airline, Porter Airlines, which operates the type exclusively against any others, have pinted out that their aircraft have not undertaken enough flights to be affected by the measures.
Revised:  Another airline, Porter Airlines, which operates the type exclusively against any others, have pointed out that their aircraft have not undertaken enough flights to be affected by the measures.
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Original: On September 9, Scandinavian Airlines Flight 1209 suffered a right landing gear failure during landing at Aalborg Airport, Denmark.
Revised:  Scandinavian Airlines Flight 1209 suffered a right landing gear failure during landing at Aalborg Airport, Denmark.
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Original:  One industry analyst, Cameron Doerksen, said that he felt that although the incidents and groundings obviously constitute bad publicity, he feels it would not influence the desicion of a carrier considering wether to purchase Q400s.
Revised:  One industry analyst, Cameron Doerksen, said that he felt that although the incidents and groundings obviously constitute bad publicity, he feels it would not influence the decision of a carrier considering wether to purchase Q400s.
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Original:  The cost to SAS alone is estimated at 10-15 million Swedish kroner per day
Revised:  The cost to SAS alone is estimated at 10-15 million Swedish kronor per day
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Original:  The second landing gear failure on a Scandanavian Airlines System (SAS) de Havilland Canada Dash 8 (also known as a Bombardier Q400 following Bombardier's purchase of de Havilland Canada from Boeing) within the space of a week has prompted the grounding of many of the twin-engined turboprops.
Revised:  The second landing gear failure on a Scandinavian Airlines System (SAS) de Havilland Canada Dash 8 (also known as a Bombardier Q400 following Bombardier's purchase of de Havilland Canada from Boeing) within the space of a week has prompted the grounding of many of the twin-engined turboprops.
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Original: 250px|A file photo of an Ausberg Airways Q400, with the landing gear deployed.
Revised: 250px|A file photo of an Ausburg Airways Q400, with the landing gear deployed.
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Original:  The cost to SAS alone is estimated at 10-15 million Swedish kronor per day  
Revised:  The cost to SAS alone is estimated at 10-15 million Swedish kronor per day . 
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Original:  Fiji stretched their lead to 11 points after Kele Leawere scored a try, and a last minute Luke Thompson try was not enough to snatch the win for Japan      .
Revised:  Fiji stretched their lead to 11 points after Kele Leawere scored a try, and a last minute Luke Thompson try was not enough to snatch the win for Japan . .
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Original:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0:  Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0:  Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0:  Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0:   Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4:  Pirates 7, Brewers 4:  Royals 6, Twins 3:  Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn:  Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 3rd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0: Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0: Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0: Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0: Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4: Pirates 7, Brewers 4: Royals 6, Twins 3: Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn: Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
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Original:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0:  Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0:  Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0:  Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0:   Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4:  Pirates 7, Brewers 4:  Royals 6, Twins 3:  Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn:  Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Top 6th : Tigers 2, Rangers 0: Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0: Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0: Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0: Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4: Pirates 7, Brewers 4: Royals 6, Twins 3: Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn: Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
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Original:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0:  Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0:  Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0:  Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0:   Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4:  Pirates 7, Brewers 4:  Royals 6, Twins 3:  Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn:  Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0: Top 4th: Yankees 4 , Blue Jays 0: Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0: Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0: Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4: Pirates 7, Brewers 4: Royals 6, Twins 3: Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn: Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
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Original:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0:  Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0:  Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0:  Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0:   Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4:  Pirates 7, Brewers 4:  Royals 6, Twins 3:  Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn:  Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0: Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0: Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 4th: Angels 8 , Orioles 0: Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0: Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4: Pirates 7, Brewers 4: Royals 6, Twins 3: Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn: Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
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Original:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0:  Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0:  Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0:  Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 3rd: Rockies 0 , Phillies 0:   Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4:  Pirates 7, Brewers 4:  Royals 6, Twins 3:  Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn:  Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 2nd : Devil Rays 4, Red Sox 0: Bot 3rd : Tigers 2, Rangers 0: Top 3rd: Yankees 2 , Blue Jays 0: Bot 3rd: Cardinals 0 , Reds 0: Bot 2nd: Angels 6 , Orioles 0: Bot 3rd: Braves 0, Mets 0: Top 4th: Rockies 4 , Phillies 0: Completed games White Sox 7, Indians 4: Pirates 7, Brewers 4: Royals 6, Twins 3: Nationals 5, Marlins 4, 12 inn: Later tonight Cubs at Astros, 8:05 ET.
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Original:  Bot 4th: Angels 8, Orioles 0 : Garret Anderson is 2-3 with 4 RBI, including a two-run homer (16) and a bases-loaded double  .
Revised:  Bot 4th: Angels 8, Orioles 0 : Garret Anderson is 2-3 with 4 RBI, including a two-run homer (16) , a bases-loaded double .
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Original:  Top 8th: Tigers 5, Rangers 1: Gary Sheffield hit a two-run homer (25), and Magglio Ordonez hit a three-run homer (27) for the Tigers.
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Original:  Bot 6th : Mets 3, Braves 1: Marlon Anderson broke a 1-1 tie in the 5th with a solo homer (3) . Top 8th : Rockies 11, Phillies 0: Matt Holliday hit a three-run homer (30) for the Rockies in the 3rd, and Todd Helton hit a bases-loaded, three-run double in the 4th.
Revised:  Bot 8th : Mets 3, Braves 1: Marlon Anderson broke a 1-1 tie in the 5th with a solo homer (3) . Top 8th : Rockies 11, Phillies 0: Matt Holliday hit a three-run homer (30) for the Rockies in the 3rd, and Todd Helton hit a bases-loaded, three-run double in the 4th.
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Original:  Bot 8th: Yankees 4, Blue Jays 0: The Yankees' Hideki Matsui hit an RBI double in the 1st, and Robinson Cano hit a two-run single in the 4th.
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Original:  Bot 8th: Mets 3   , Braves 3: The Braves  tied up the game  with a Jeff Francoeur two-run single in the 8th .
Revised:  Bot 8th: Mets 3 , Braves 3: The Braves tied up the game with a Jeff Francoeur two-run single in the 8th 
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Original:  Matt Albers (4-8) gave up seven hits and three runs in six innings for the loss.
Revised:  Matt Albers (4-8) gave up seven hits and three runs for the loss.
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Original:  Ryan Dempster gave a shaky performance, but earned his 26th save, giving up two hits and one run in the 9th.
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Original:  Games in progress Top 8th: Athletics 5, Mariners 4 Top 9th: Dodgers 6, Padres
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 8th: Athletics 5, Mariners 4 Top 9th: Dodgers 6, Padres
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Original:   Games in progress Bot 8th : Athletics 5, Mariners 
Revised:  Games in progress Bot 8th : Athletics 5, Mariners 5
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Original: Updated: 1:23 a.m. ET.
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Original:  Daniel Barone (1-2) pitched a perfect 12th for the win, while Saul Rivera (4-6) pitched 2/3 inning, giving up two hits and one run for the loss . Games in progress Top 9th: Athletics 5, Mariners 5
Revised:  Daniel Barone (1-2) pitched a perfect 12th for the win, while Saul Rivera (4-6) pitched 2/3 inning, giving up two hits and one run for the loss Games in progress Top 9th: Athletics 5, Mariners 5
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Original:  “I won’t find it easy, if I am reelected , to retire.
Revised:  “I won’t find it easy, if I am re-elected , to retire.
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Original: VIPs at Press Conference RFID solution by Tekho Inc.
Revised: VIPs at Press Conference 
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Original: Two people have been shot  after an attempted bank robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton, UK.
Revised: Two people have been shot after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton, UK.
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Original:  At least one died and the second is thought to have died on route to the hospital.
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Original:  No local people were thought to have been hurt.
Revised:  No local people or employees have been hurt.
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Original:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is now thought to be very low, with police on scene in large numbers
Revised:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is now very low, with police on scene in large numbers
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Original: Two people have been shot and killed  after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton , UK . A third person is thought to have escaped in a blue coloured Volvobut this has still not been confirmed.
Revised: Two people have been shot and killed after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton . A third person is thought to have escaped in a blue coloured Volvobut this has still not been confirmed.
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Original: Two people have been shot and killed  after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton , UK . A third person is thought to have escaped in a blue coloured Volvobut this has still not been confirmed.
Revised: Two people have been shot and killed after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton , UK . A third person is believed to have fled the scene in a blue coloured Volvobut this has still not been confirmed.
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Original: Two people have been shot and killed  after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton , UK . A third person is thought to have escaped in a blue coloured Volvobut this has still not been confirmed.
Revised: Two people have been shot and killed after an attempted robbery in Chandler's Ford, near Southampton , UK . A third person is thought to have escaped in a blue Volvo, though this has still not been confirmed.
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Original:  The robbers were thought to have been followed to the site as part of a Metropolitan Police operation and were shot by members of the Flying Squad after they attempted to rob an armoured van.
Revised:  The suspects were thought to have been followed to the site as part of a Metropolitan Police operation and were shot by members of the Flying Squad after they attempted to rob an armoured van.
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Original:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is now very low, with police on scene in large numbers
Revised:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is low, with police on scene in large numbers
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Original:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is low, with police on scene in large numbers  
Revised:  Local schools in the area have been locked down although the threat to the local area is low, with police on scene in large numbers . 
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Original: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
Revised: 4W PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
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Original: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
Revised: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
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Original: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
Revised: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% , moving toward the north-northeast at seven knots. The diameter of the eye was ten nautical miles, with maximum sustained winds predicted to be 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
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Original: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 KT WITH GUSTS TO 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
Revised: 4W AT 13/0515Z POSITION ACCURATE WITHIN 10 NM PRESENT MOVEMENT TOWARD THE NORTH-NORTHEAST OR 30 DEGREES AT 7 KT%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ESTIMATED MINIMUM CENTRAL PRESSURE 992 MB EYE DIAMETER 10 NM MAX SUSTAINED WINDS 70 knots with gusts to 85 KT. 64 KT. ...... 15NE 0SE 0SW 0NW. 50 KT....... 25NE 25SE 0SW 0NW. 34 KT....... 50NE 50SE 20SW 20NW. 12 FT SEAS..
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Original: Import ban of chinese products due to safety concerns The European Commission considers to impose an embargo on chinese toys and consumer products.
Revised: Import ban of chinese products due to safety concerns The European Commission (EU) is considering the imposition of an embargo on chinese toys and consumer products.
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Original: Import ban of chinese products due to safety concerns The European Commission considers to impose an embargo on chinese toys and consumer products.
Revised: Import ban of chinese products due to safety concerns The European Commission considers to impose an embargo on Chinese toys and consumer products.
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Original:  The EU Commissioner for consumer protection , Meglena Kuneva, aims at increasing the pressure on the chinese government to make them intensify their controls of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
Revised:  The EU Commissioner for Consumer Protection , Meglena Kuneva, aims at increasing the pressure on the chinese government to make them intensify their controls of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
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Original:  The EU Commissioner for consumer protection , Meglena Kuneva, aims at increasing the pressure on the chinese government to make them intensify their controls of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
Revised:  The EU Commissioner for consumer protection , Meglena Kuneva, said the aim is to increase pressure on the chinese government to make them intensify their controls of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
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Original:  The EU Commissioner for consumer protection , Meglena Kuneva, aims at increasing the pressure on the chinese government to make them intensify their controls of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
Revised:  The EU Commissioner for consumer protection , Meglena Kuneva, aims at increasing the pressure on the Chinese government to intensify its quality control in the manufacture of toys, toothpaste and certain food that is exported to the European Union and is believed to be unsafe.
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Original:  The world's biggest toy producing company Mattel has recently launched a massive product recall of Chinese-made products due to manufacturing errors (Wikinews reported).
Revised:  The world's largest toy producer, recently launched a massive product recall of Chinese-made products due to manufacturing errors (Wikinews reported).
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Original:  China has to respond until october presenting a detailed plan how to increase their product reliability and safety;
Revised:  China has until October to respond with a detailed plan how to increase their product reliability and safety;
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Original:  China has to respond until october presenting a detailed plan how to increase their product reliability and safety;
Revised:  China has to respond until october presenting a detailed plan on how it will increase its monitoring of product safety;
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Original:  if not, Kuneva has announcedthat some products will be banned.
Revised:  if it fails to respond, Kuneva announced, some products will be banned.
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Original:  On the twelfth of September Kuneva hold a speech in front of the European Parliament and underlined the necessity to protect children from possible risks : "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.
Revised:  On the twelfth of September , Kuneva underlined the necessity to protect children from possible risks : "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.
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Original:  On the twelfth of September Kuneva hold a speech in front of the European Parliament and underlined the necessity to protect children from possible risks : "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.
Revised:  On the twelfth of September Kuneva hold a speech in front of the European Parliament and underlined the necessity to protect children from possible harm : "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.
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Original:  In testimony before the European Parliament on the twelfth of September, Kuneva underlined the necessity to protect children from possible harm: "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.  
Revised:  In testimony before the European Parliament on the twelfth of September, Kuneva underlined the necessity to protect children from possible harm: "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake. " 
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Original:  In testimony before the European Parliament on the twelfth of September, Kuneva underlined the necessity to protect children from possible harm: "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake.  
Revised:  In testimony before the European Parliament on the twelfth of September, Kuneva underlined the necessity to protect children from possible harm: "My main message to our Chinese counterparts was that Europe does not and would not accept compromises when the safety of consumers, and in particular of children, is at stake. Related new
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Original: India are playing Scotland in Group D of the 2007 Twenty20 World Championship at Kingsmead, Durban, South Africa  .
Revised: The match between India and Scotland in Group D of the 2007 Twenty20 World Championship at Kingsmead, Durban, South Africa .
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Original:  The start of the match has been delayeddue to rain . After yesterday's   defeat by Pakistan , Scotland need to win this match to avoid being knocked out of the tournament.
Revised:  The start of the match being delayed . After yesterday's defeat by Pakistan , Scotland need to win this match to avoid being knocked out of the tournament.
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Original:   Scotland: J A R Blain, D R Brown, G M Hamilton, R M Haq, N F I McCallum, J D Nel, N S Poonia, C J O Smith (wkt), R R Watson (capt), D F Watts, C M Wright Man of the Match: TBA
Revised:  Scotland: J A R Blain, D R Brown, G M Hamilton, R M Haq, N F I McCallum, J D Nel, N S Poonia, C J O Smith (wkt), R R Watson (capt), D F Watts, C M Wright 
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Original: However the rain continued to fall as the prospects of play starting became more remote.
Revised: However the rain continued to fall and the prospects of play starting became more remote.
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Original:  External links Ontario NDP: Sheila White Elections Ontario
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Original:  Police have spotted the car parked in a parking lot at a Cutler Ridge strip mall after they received what the believed to be a very credible tip
Revised:  Police have spotted a car parked in a parking lot at a Cutler Ridge strip mall after they received what the believed to be a very credible tip
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