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Original: In the recent UK general election Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency in an attempt to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's  complicity in Uzbek CIA torture.
Revised: In the recent UK general election Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency in an attempt to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's alleged complicity in Uzbek CIA torture.
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Original:  He lost his job in Uzbekistan after he publicly decried the widespread use of torture in that country .
Revised:  He was withdrawn from Uzbekistan after he publicly decried the widespread use of torture in that country .
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Original:  According to the program confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda would have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
Revised:  According to the program confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
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Original:  Information extracted under torture is widely known to be unreliable because prisoners can be coerced to say anything.
Revised:  Information extracted under torture is known to be unreliable because prisoners can be coerced to say anything.
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Original:  Critics have argued that such information should not have been relied upon as evidence for the invasion of Iraq.
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Original:  One television news report specifically covered the campaign for the Blacburn seat which failed to even mention Craig Murray's name
Revised:  One television news report which covered the campaign for the Blacburn seat which failed to even mention Craig Murray's name
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Original:  One television news report which covered the campaign for the Blacburn seat which failed to even mention Craig Murray's name
Revised:  One television news report which covered the campaign for the Blackburn seat failed to even mention Craig Murray's name
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Original: According to the program  confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
Revised: According to the program , confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
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Original: According to the program  confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
Revised: According to the program confessions from tortured prisoners that suggested a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
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Original: According to the program  confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case for war in Iraq.
Revised: According to the program confessions from tortured prisoners suggesting a link between Iraq and Al Qaeda could have contributed towards the case built by the government for going to war in Iraq.
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Original: In the recent UK general election, Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency in an attempt to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's alleged complicity in Uzbek CIA torture.
Revised: In the recent UK general election, Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency . Murray was attempting to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's alleged complicity in Uzbek CIA torture.
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Original:  Straw retained his seat with 17,562 votes (42\%) ;
Revised:  Straw retained his seat with 17,562 votes (42\%) , while
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Original:  Murray came fifth wih 2,082 votes (5\%).
Revised:  Murray came fifth with 2,082 votes (5\%).
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Original:  The Foreign and Commonwealth Office (FCO) stated at the time that "It's now felt it's no longer possible Mr. Murray can do his job effectively so he's been withdrawn." Mr. Murray was recieving medical treatment at the time for on-going ill health, including a near-fatal pulmonary embolism.
Revised:  The Foreign and Commonwealth Office (FCO) stated at the time that "It's now felt it's no longer possible Mr. Murray can do his job effectively so he's been withdrawn." Mr. Murray was receiving medical treatment at the time for on-going ill health, including a near-fatal pulmonary embolism.
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Original:  A claim which, according to the program , has never been denied.
Revised:  The Foreign Office released a statement to the program , has never been denied.
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Original: In the recent UK general election, Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency.
Revised: In the recent UK general election, stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency.
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Original: In the recent UK general election, Craig Murray stood as candidate against Jack Straw in the Blackburn constituency.
Revised: In the recent UK general election, Craig Murray stood as candidate against in the constituency.
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Original:  Murray was attempting to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's alleged complicity in Uzbek CIA torture.
Revised:  Murray was attempting to bring about public debate and public knowledge of Straw's alleged complicity in Uzbek torture.
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Original:  Craig Murray was British Ambassador to Uzbekistan in 2002 and 2003.
Revised:  Craig Murray was British Ambassador to in 2002 and 2003.
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Original:  He was quoted in the Financial Times as claiming the MI6 used intelligence gained by the Uzbek authorities by torture.
Revised:  He was quoted in the as claiming the MI6 used intelligence gained by the Uzbek authorities by torture.
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Original:  He was quoted in the Financial Times as claiming the MI6 used intelligence gained by the Uzbek authorities by torture.
Revised:  He was quoted in the Financial Times as claiming the used intelligence gained by the Uzbek authorities by torture.
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Original:  Two months before the UK election Channel Four premiered the program "Torture:The Dirty Business" which showed that the Uzbekistan government routinely uses torture to interrogate prisoners.
Revised:  Two months before the UK election premiered the program "Torture:The Dirty Business" which showed that the Uzbekistan government routinely uses torture to interrogate prisoners.
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Original:  It showed that CIA had sent prisoners to that country to be tortured in a procedure known as rendition .
Revised:  It showed that CIA had sent prisoners to that country to be tortured in a procedure known as .
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Original:  The program alleged that UK's MI5 received information obtained by torture.
Revised:  The program alleged that UK's received information obtained by torture.
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777,  putting it down on the grass just within Heathrow's perimeter fence  at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, putting it down within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Members of the Air Accident Investigation Branch (AAIB) have been working on Speedbird 038 continuously since the crash-landing to determine the cause of the fault .
Revised:  Members of the Air Accident Investigation Branch (AAIB) have been working on Speedbird 038 continuously since the crash-landing to determine the cause of the failure .
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, putting it down within Heathrow's perimeter fence on the grass and just short of the runway,  at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, putting it down on the grass and just short of the runway, at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, putting it down within Heathrow's perimeter fence on the grass and just short of the runway,  at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, putting it down within Heathrow's perimeter fence on the grass and just short of the runway, within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM,  putting it down on the grassand just short of the runway , within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down on the grassand just short of the runway , within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM,  putting it down on the grassand just short of the runway , within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, putting it down on the grassand just short of the runway threshold, and within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" just 400 metres short of the runway threshold, and  within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday  .
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" 400 metres short of the runway threshold, and within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday .
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" just 400 metres short of the runway threshold, and  within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday  .
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" just 400 metres short of the runway threshold, and just within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday .
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Original:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" 400 metres short of runway 27L threshold, and just within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
Revised:  Coward landed the Boeing 777, registration G-YMMM, by putting it down with a "series of thuds as it bounced along the grass" 400 metres short of the runway threshold, and just within Heathrow's perimeter fence at Hatton Cross last Thursday.
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Original:  Mr Coward was under the command of Captain Peter Burkill, who said Mr Coward had done a "most remarkable job" in landing the aircraft and praised him and all the crew for showing "the highest standards of skill and professionalism".
Revised:  Mr Coward was under the command of Captain Peter Burkill, who said Mr Coward had done a "most remarkable job" in landing the aircraft and praised him and all his crew for showing "the highest standards of skill and professionalism".
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Original: ]] Following four days of prayer and discussions among the 217 men representing more than 19,000 members worldwide, the Society of Jesus, whose members are also known as Jesuits, chose Adolfo Nicolás yesterday as their new Superior General.
Revised: ]] Following four days of prayer and discussions among the 217 electors representing more than 19,000 members worldwide, the Society of Jesus, whose members are also known as Jesuits, chose Adolfo Nicolás yesterday as their new Superior General.
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Original:  It is forbidden to lobby for the post, and anyone actively seeking to obtain  job is automatically disqualified
Revised:  It is forbidden to lobby for the post, and anyone actively seeking to obtain the job is automatically disqualified
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Original: 240px|2008 Mumbai Marathon The Standard Chartered Marathon, named as "The Greatest Race on Earth", held the third stage at Mumbai, India today.
Revised: 240px|2008 Mumbai Marathon The Standard Chartered Marathon, nicknamed "The Greatest Race on Earth", held the third stage at Mumbai, India today.
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Original: 240px|2008 Mumbai Marathon The Standard Chartered Marathon, named as "The Greatest Race on Earth", held the third stage at Mumbai, India today.
Revised: 240px|2008 Mumbai Marathon The Standard Chartered Marathon, named as "The Greatest Race on Earth", held its third stage in Mumbai, India today.
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Original:  Because of the ancient culture and scorching hot weather in India, marathon runners adapted to the weather to overcome the challenge.
Revised:  Because of the scorching hot weather in India, marathon runners adapted to the weather to overcome the challenge.
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Original:  Because of the ancient culture and scorching hot weather in India, marathon runners adapted to the weather to overcome the challenge.
Revised:  Because of the ancient culture and scorching hot weather in India, marathon runners had to adapt to the weather to overcome the challenge.
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Original:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
Revised:  More than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
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Original:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
Revised:  Not only more than 30,000 runners participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
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Original:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
Revised:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race , joined by local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
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Original:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disables came to participate in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
Revised:  Not only more than 30,000 experts participated in this race but also local NGOs and disabled who participated in a special charity short-distance running including 4.3 km senior and 2.6km wheel-chair classes.
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Original:  Gabriela Szabo, former Romanian Olympic Gold Medalist, named as charity ambassador of the race, satisfied the participation from experts and NGOs.
Revised:  Gabriela Szabo, former Romanian Olympic Gold Medalist, named as charity ambassador of the race, was pleased by the participation from experts and NGOs.
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Original:  After an hour 's race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi started their leading phase, but Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai crossed over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
Revised:  An hour into the race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi started their leading phase, but Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai crossed over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
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Original:  After an hour 's race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi started their leading phase, but Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai crossed over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
Revised:  After an hour 's race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi took the lead, but then Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai crossed over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
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Original:  After an hour 's race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi started their leading phase, but Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai crossed over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
Revised:  After an hour 's race, former champion Daniel Rono and Joseph Kimisi started their leading phase, but Tariku Jifar from Ethiopia and defending champion John Ekiru Kelai took over Rono and Kimisi from 2nd leading phase as they were unsteady afterward.
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Original:  After the 40KM, Kelai increased the difference ahead and finally retained his champion in the race at 2H12m22s .
Revised:  After the 40KM, Kelai increased the difference ahead and finally retained his champion title in 2 hours 12 minutes 22 seconds .
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Original: 55'29"North East AsiaChin-chi Chiang (Chinese Taipei)2:33'33"Xin Zhang (China)2:53'59"South Asia and Middle EastAjith Bandara Adikari Mudiyanselage (Sri Lanka)2:24'07"Lakmini Anuradhi Bogahawatta (Sri Lanka)3:04'21"AfricaJohn Ekiru Kelai (Kenya B)2:12'22"Irene Kemunto Mogaka (Kenya B)2:32'50"Europe and OceaniaOleg Kharitonov (Russia)2:30'55"Helen Stanton (Australia)2:52'33" AmericaPaulino Canchanya Canchanya (Peru )2: 28 '13"Rosangela Figueredo Silva (Brazil)2:58'16"
Revised: 55'29"North East AsiaChin-chi Chiang (Chinese Taipei)2:33'33"Xin Zhang (China)2:53'59"South Asia and Middle EastAjith Bandara Adikari Mudiyanselage (Sri Lanka)2:24'07"Lakmini Anuradhi Bogahawatta (Sri Lanka)3:04'21"AfricaJohn Ekiru Kelai (Kenya B)2:12'22"Irene Kemunto Mogaka (Kenya B)2:32'50"Europe and OceaniaOleg Kharitonov (Russia)2:30'55"Helen Stanton (Australia)2:52'33" AmericaPaulino Canchanya Canchanya (Peru )2: 20 '13"Rosangela Figueredo Silva (Brazil)2:58'16"
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Original:  Yale's student newspaper, , has reported that SWAT teams have been spotted on campus  
Revised:  Yale's student newspaper, , has reported that SWAT teams have been spotted on campus . 
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Original: At 10:17 am EST , a message was sent to Yale's students from the university saying that the New Haven Police had received an anonymous phone call from a public pay phone on Columbus Avenue saying that a person with a gun was loose on the Yale campus.
Revised: At 10:17 AM (EST) , a message was sent to Yale's students from the university saying that the New Haven Police had received an anonymous phone call from a public pay phone on Columbus Avenue saying that a person with a gun was loose on the Yale campus.
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Original:  At 1:45 pm EST , Yale's emergency alert system said that the lockdown was still in place, and that police officers were planning to do a door-to-door search of Yale University starting with student residences
Revised:  At 1:45 PM (EST) , Yale's emergency alert system said that the lockdown was still in place, and that police officers were planning to do a door-to-door search of Yale University starting with student residences
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Original:  At 1:45 pm EST , Yale's emergency alert system said that the lockdown was still in place, and that police officers were planning to do a door-to-door search of Yale University starting with student residences
Revised:  At 1:45 pm EST , Yale's emergency alert system indicated the lockdown was still in place, and that police officers were planning to do a door-to-door search of Yale University starting with student residences
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Original: in , , has alerted students that a gunman is loose on campus.
Revised: in , , alerted students today that a gunman is loose on campus.
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Original: in , , has alerted students that a gunman is loose on campus.
Revised: in , , has alerted students that a gunman was loose on campus.
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Original:  The university has asked students to "shelter in place" and warned students who are off-campus to stay away from the university.
Revised:  The university asked students to "shelter in place" and warned students who are off-campus to stay away from the university.
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Original:   At 10:17 AM ( EST ), a message was sent to Yale's students from the university saying that the New Haven Police had received an anonymous phone call from a public pay phone on Columbus Avenue saying that a person with a gun was loose on the Yale campus.
Revised:  At 10:17 AM ( ), a message was sent to Yale's students from the university saying that the New Haven Police had received an anonymous phone call from a public pay phone on Columbus Avenue saying that a person with a gun was loose on the Yale campus.
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Original: Korean Peninsula According to American and foreign officials, White House and Pentagon officials are closely monitoring spy satellites imagery of North Korea, also known as the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (DPRK).
Revised: Korean Peninsula According to American and foreign officials, White House and Pentagon officials are closely monitoring spy satellite imagery of North Korea, also known as the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (DPRK).
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Original: United States officials warned that the intentions of North Korean leader Kim Jong Il , are unknown, and the constructions may turn out to be a show.
Revised: United States officials warned that the intentions of North Korean leader Kim Jong Il are unknown, and the constructions may turn out to be a show.
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Original:  Lazare Ponticelli becomes the last known surviving WW I veteran from France
Revised:  Lazare Ponticelli has become the last known surviving WW I veteran from France
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Original: Scoring summary 1st Quarter 1st Quarter TD or FG Time Team Play PAT Score NE-SDFG 2:
Revised: Scoring summary 1st Quarter 1st Quarter TD or FG Time Team Play Score NE-SDFG 2:
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Original:  A 2 dollar wager on the winning horse paid $ 102.60   
Revised:  A 2 dollar wager on the winning horse paid $ 102.60 . 
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Original: Poll made by Gallup for World Economic Forum (WEF) indicates a believe in muslim and western countries that the widen between them is increasing.
Revised: Poll made by Gallup for World Economic Forum , suggests that most people believe there are widening divisions between the Islamic and the Western world.
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Original:  According to the poll, the majority of respondents in USA, Canada and Israel believse the west and the muslim worldwould benefit from an increased interaction , whereas European countries generally considered an increased interaction a threat to their cultural identities .
Revised:  The survey also finds that increased interaction with the Muslim world is perceived as a "threat" by 60\% of many European countries, but not so in Israel or America .
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Original:  Gallup surveyed about 1, 000 people in each of the 21 countries
Revised:  Additionally, the report found that in Muslim and non-Muslim majority nations, there tends to be a wide-spread belief that the "other side" is not committed to improving relations
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