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Original: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2021 Category:Massacres in Ethiopia Category: Tigray War Category:February 2021 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2021 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2021 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:February 2021 events in Afri
Revised: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2021 Category:Massacres of the Tigray War Category:February 2021 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2021 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2021 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:February 2021 events in Afri
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Original:  " Primary nursing: A return to the concept of "my nurse" and "my patient".
Revised:  Primary nursing: A return to the concept of "my nurse" and "my patient".
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Original:  " A dialogue on primary nursing " . Nursing Forum 9 (4): 356–379. doi:10.1111/j.1744-6198.1970.tb01048.x. Manthey, Marie (1973).
Revised:  A dialogue on primary nursing " . Nursing Forum 9 (4): 356–379. doi:10.1111/j.1744-6198.1970.tb01048.x. Manthey, Marie (1973).
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Original:  " A dialogue on primary nursing " . Nursing Forum 9 (4): 356–379. doi:10.1111/j.1744-6198.1970.tb01048.x. Manthey, Marie (1973).
Revised:  " A dialogue on primary nursing . Nursing Forum 9 (4): 356–379. doi:10.1111/j.1744-6198.1970.tb01048.x. Manthey, Marie (1973).
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Original:  " Primary Care is Alive and Well in the Hospital " . American Journal of Nursing 73 (1).
Revised:  Primary Care is Alive and Well in the Hospital " . American Journal of Nursing 73 (1).
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Original:  " Primary Care is Alive and Well in the Hospital " . American Journal of Nursing 73 (1).
Revised:  " Primary Care is Alive and Well in the Hospital . American Journal of Nursing 73 (1).
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Original:  and/or nursing assistant (NA), who together provide complete care for a group of patients throughout their stay in a hospital unit or URL While the patient is on the nurses' unit, the primary nurse accepts responsibility for administering some and coordinating all aspects of the patient's nursing care, with the support of other members of the nursing staff.
Revised:  and/or nursing assistant (NA), who together provide complete care for a group of patients throughout their stay in a hospital unit or department. While the patient is on the nurses' unit, the primary nurse accepts responsibility for administering some and coordinating all aspects of the patient's nursing care, with the support of other members of the nursing staff.
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Original: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College, Calcutta of the University of Calcutta in the city of Kolkata .
Revised: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College, Kolkata ( University of Calcutta in the city of Kolkata .
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Original: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College, Calcutta of the University of Calcutta in the city of Kolkata .
Revised: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College, Calcutta of the University of Calcutta ) .
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Original: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College , Kolkata (University of Calcutta).
Revised: Education Chaudhuri studied at St. Xavier's College (University of Calcutta).
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Original: General Jayanto Nath Chaudhuri , (10 June 1908 – 6 April 1983) was a General Officer in the Indian Army.
Revised: General Jayanto Nath Chaudhuri (10 June 1908 – 6 April 1983) was a General Officer in the Indian Army.
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Original: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2021 Category:Massacres in Ethiopia Category: Tigray War Category:March 2021 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2021 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2021 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:March 2021 events in Afri
Revised: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2021 Category:Massacres of the Tigray War Category:March 2021 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2021 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2021 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:March 2021 events in Afri
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Original:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (  Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza (  Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (  Rosa Robalino).
Revised:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez ( from Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza ( Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado ( Rosa Robalino).
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Original:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (  Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza (  Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (  Rosa Robalino).
Revised:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez ( Inés María Jiménez ), Manuel Esparza ( Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado ( Rosa Robalino).
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Original:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (  Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza (  Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (  Rosa Robalino).
Revised:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez ( Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza ( from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado ( Rosa Robalino).
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Original:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (  Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza (  Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (  Rosa Robalino).
Revised:  The women's assumed names were Manuel Jiménez ( Inés María Jimenez ), Manuel Esparza ( Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado ( from Rosa Robalino).
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Original:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (from Inés María Jiménez) , Manuel Esparza (from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (from Rosa Robalino) .
Revised:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez , Manuel Esparza (from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (from Rosa Robalino) .
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Original:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (from Inés María Jiménez) , Manuel Esparza (from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (from Rosa Robalino) .
Revised:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (from Inés María Jiménez) , Manuel Esparza and Manuel Jurado (from Rosa Robalino) .
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Original:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (from Inés María Jiménez) , Manuel Esparza (from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado (from Rosa Robalino) .
Revised:  Their assumed names were Manuel Jiménez (from Inés María Jiménez) , Manuel Esparza (from Gertrudis Esparza), and Manuel Jurado respectively .
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Original:  He attended the University of Pretoria, from which he graduated with a Bachelor of Commerce degree in 1974, a Bachelor of Commerce (Honours) in 1975, a Master of Commerce  in 1979 and a Doctor of Commerce  in 1982.
Revised:  He attended the University of Pretoria, from which he graduated with a Bachelor of Commerce degree in 1974, a Bachelor of Commerce (Honours) in 1975, a Master of Commerce degree in 1979 and a Doctor of Commerce in 1982.
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Original:  He attended the University of Pretoria, from which he graduated with a Bachelor of Commerce degree in 1974, a Bachelor of Commerce (Honours) in 1975, a Master of Commerce  in 1979 and a Doctor of Commerce  in 1982.
Revised:  He attended the University of Pretoria, from which he graduated with a Bachelor of Commerce degree in 1974, a Bachelor of Commerce (Honours) in 1975, a Master of Commerce in 1979 and a Doctor of Commerce degree in 1982.
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Original:  He was ranked 87th on the ANC's national list  , and returned to parliament as an ANC member  .
Revised:  He was ranked 87th on the ANC's national list , and returned to parliament as an ANC member after the election .
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Original:  Loyola University Chicago  have since instituted a scholarship, Class Of 1960 Sister Fidelis Thaliath, MD, Medical Student Scholarship Fund, in her honor.
Revised:  Loyola University Chicago , her alma mater, have since instituted a scholarship, Class Of 1960 Sister Fidelis Thaliath, MD, Medical Student Scholarship Fund, in her honor.
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Original: Cause of Canonization Thaliath is reported to have performed several miracles which are being considered and verified by Roman Catholic Church and her social and religious contributions were considered by the Church while deciding upon initiation of her canonization process.
Revised: Cause of canonization Thaliath is reported to have performed several miracles which are being considered and verified by Roman Catholic Church and her social and religious contributions were considered by the Church while deciding upon initiation of her canonization process.
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Original:  He was replaced at fullback by T Bramley.
Revised:  He was replaced at fullback by Trevor Bramley.
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Original:  He would later be killed in action during World War 2. In the Marist game with City Bob Banham went off injured in the first half for City, while Jack Rata and Jackson went off in the second half.
Revised:  He would later be killed in action during World War 2. In the Marist game with City Bob Banham went off injured in the first half for City, while Jackie Rata and Jackson went off in the second half.
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Original:  Remarkably in the North Shore v Papakura match the referee was Ted Mincham who had spent the first half of the season playing for Mount Albert Seniors .
Revised:  Remarkably in the North Shore v Papakura match the referee was Ted Mincham who had spent the first half of the season playing for Mount Albert seniors .
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Original:  In the match between Mount Albert and City  J Tristram and Bob Banham were ordered off from each team respectively after an incident between them.
Revised:  In the match between Mount Albert and City , J Tristram and Bob Banham were ordered off from each team respectively after an incident between them.
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Original:  Anderson, Hemi, and Smith all went on the New Zealand tour of Australia mid-season which meant they missed 6 Fox Memorial games so their point titles were significantly below than what they would have been.
Revised:  Anderson, Hemi, and Smith all went on the New Zealand tour of Australia mid-season which meant they missed 6 Fox Memorial games so their point totals were significantly below than what they would have been.
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Original: BroadheadRichmond102M HansonMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jack RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
Revised: BroadheadRichmond102Martin HansenMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jack RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
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Original: BroadheadRichmond102M HansonMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jack RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
Revised: BroadheadRichmond102M HansonMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jackie RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
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Original: BroadheadRichmond102M HansonMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jack RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
Revised: BroadheadRichmond102M HansonMount Albert102Gordon MidgleyMarist102Brian RileyMarist106Jack BrodrickManukau96R WilsonManukau98John AndersonMarist88Merv DevineRichmond88W McKenzieNewton88R TaylorNewton8 RankPlayerTeamTriesConPenDropPoints1John AndersonMarist819100822Jack HemiManukau22880782J McInnesPapakura411220784Jack SmithNorth Shore08210585Des HerringMount Albert61160525Jack RataCity06191527Frank FurnellRichmond11860518Tom ChaseManukau5950439J HutchinsonCity312404110Wilfred BrimbleNewton2115038
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Original: Albert110038Des HerringMount Albert110038Pita RirinuiManukau110038Jack SatherleyRichmond210038Harold TetleyRichmond110038Wally TittletonRichmond1100319Tom ChaseManukau2001219Verdun ScottNorth Shore1010221Peter MahimaManukau2000021Wilfred BrimbleNewton1000021Alf BroadheadRichmond1000021Merv DevineRichmond1000021GloverMarist1000021HaslamMarist1000021Bert LeatherbarrowRichmond1000021Jack McLeodRichmond1000021E MorganPonsonby1000021Brian RileyPonsonby1000021Richard ShadboltMount Albert10000
Revised: Albert110038Des HerringMount Albert110038Pita RirinuiManukau110038Jack SatherleyRichmond210038Harold TetleyRichmond110038Wally TittletonRichmond1100319Tom ChaseManukau2001219Verdun ScottNorth Shore1010221Peter MahimaManukau2000021Wilfred BrimbleNewton1000021Alf BroadheadRichmond1000021Merv DevineRichmond1000021GloverMarist1000021R HaslamMarist1000021Bert LeatherbarrowRichmond1000021Jack McLeodRichmond1000021E MorganPonsonby1000021Brian RileyPonsonby1000021Richard ShadboltMount Albert10000
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Original: Victims The “Tigray: Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 16 victims of this massacre,, travellers mention a total of 26 (of whom 25 in Inda Teka Tesfay and 5 in May Megelta  , and MSF mentions four of whom they witnessed the execution.
Revised: Victims The “Tigray: Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 16 victims of this massacre,, travellers mention a total of 26 (of whom 25 in Inda Teka Tesfay and 5 in May Megelta ) , and MSF mentions four of whom they witnessed the execution.
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Original:  Only one has been identified : TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources Welday Gidey
Revised:  Only one has been identified . TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources Welday Gidey
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Original:  Only one has been identified : TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources Welday Gidey
Revised:  Only one has been identified : TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources 
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Original: Storr Rock Hoard The Storr Rock Hoard is a collection of silver coins dating from the 10th century with some originating from central Asia, found on the Isle of Skye in northern Scotland.
Revised:  The Storr Rock Hoard is a collection of silver coins dating from the 10th century with some originating from central Asia, found on the Isle of Skye in northern Scotland.
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Original:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) for the entire recordkeeping guidelines.
Revised:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) for the entire record-keeping guidelines.
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Original:  The SOII excludes all work–related fatalities as well as nonfatal work injuries and illnesses to the self–employed;
Revised:  The SOII excludes all work-related fatalities as well as nonfatal work injuries and illnesses to the self–employed;
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Original:  SOII provides estimates for nonfatal cases of work-related injuries and illnesses from participating States and Territories that are recorded by employers under Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) recordkeeping guidelines.
Revised:  SOII provides estimates for nonfatal cases of work-related injuries and illnesses from participating States and Territories that are recorded by employers under Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) record keeping guidelines.
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Original:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) USA Safety Standard, for the entire record-keeping guidelines and National Examination Board in Occupational Safety and Health (NEBOSH) United Kingdom .
Revised:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) for the entire record-keeping guidelines and National Examination Board in Occupational Safety and Health (NEBOSH) United Kingdom .
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Original:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) USA Safety Standard, for the entire record-keeping guidelines and National Examination Board in Occupational Safety and Health (NEBOSH) United Kingdom .
Revised:  See the Occupational Safety and Health Administration (OSHA) USA Safety Standard, for the entire record-keeping guidelines .
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Original: LOn 11 November 1958, Ameziane of the PDI and two other members from the Rif, Abdel Sadaq Khattabi and Abdelkrim al-Khattabi's son, Rachid, presented an 18-point programme for the Rif to Mohammed V.
Revised: On 11 November 1958, Ameziane of the PDI and two other members from the Rif, Abdel Sadaq Khattabi and Abdelkrim al-Khattabi's son, Rachid, presented an 18-point programme for the Rif to Mohammed V.
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Original:  In 2021, Antilef was elected to the Chilean Constitutional Convention to represent the Mapuche people, who are entitled to seven reserved seats on the newly-formed body.
Revised:  In 2021, Antilef was elected to the Chilean Constitutional Convention to represent the Mapuche people, who are entitled to seven reserved seats on the newly formed body.
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Original: A professor of intercultural education, Antilef has attended events hosted by institutions such as the Austral University of Chile and the University of La Frontera to promote Mapuche cultural knowledge.
Revised: A teacher of intercultural education, Antilef has attended events hosted by institutions such as the Austral University of Chile and the University of La Frontera to promote Mapuche cultural knowledge.
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Original:    On the subject of plurinationalism, Mamani has expressed concern that proposals for a "plurinational state" would amount to a mere recognition of indigenous autonomy without taking meaningful steps towards emboldening native communities.
Revised:  Political views On the subject of plurinationalism, Mamani has expressed concern that proposals for a "plurinational state" would amount to a mere recognition of indigenous autonomy without taking meaningful steps towards emboldening native communities.
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Original: Perks Perks of military service typically include adventurous training, subsidised accommodation, meals and travel, and a pension.
Revised: Benefits Benefits and perks of military service typically include adventurous training, subsidised accommodation, meals and travel, and a pension.
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Original: Overview Those who serve in a typical large  land force are soldiers, making up an army.
Revised: Overview Those who serve in a typical large ground or land force are soldiers, making up an army.
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Original:  Their roles, pay, and obligations differ according to their military branch (army, navy, marines, air force, space force, and sometimes coast guard), rank (officer, non-commissioned officer, or enlisted recruit), and their military task when deployed on operations and on exercise.
Revised:  Their roles, pay, and obligations differ according to their military branch (army, navy, marines, air force, space force, and coast guard), rank (officer, non-commissioned officer, or enlisted recruit), and their military task when deployed on operations and on exercise.
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Original:  In the 20th century, the development of powered flight aircraft prompted the development of air forces, serviced by airmen and women .
Revised:  In the 20th century, the development of powered flight aircraft prompted the development of air forces, serviced by airmen .
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Original:  Marines or naval infantry serve in a marine corps.
Revised:  naval infantry or Marines serve in land and sea, and their branch is the marine corps.
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Original: upright=1.2|Soldiers of US 1st Cavalry Division during re-enlistment ceremony at Camp TAJI, Iraq, October 2009 Military personnel – soldiers, are members of the state's armed forces.
Revised: upright=1.2|Soldiers of US 1st Cavalry Division during re-enlistment ceremony at Camp TAJI, Iraq, October 2009 Military personnel are members of the state's armed forces.
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Original: Personnel who join as officers tend to be upwardly-mobile young adults from age 18.
Revised: Personnel who join as officers tend to be upwardly mobile young adults from age 18.
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Original: Mahmudul Hasan shohag infront of Liberation War Memorial Sculpture  Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) is a sculpture Made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
Revised: Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in front of the Liberation War Memorial Sculpture Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) is a sculpture Made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
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Original: Mahmudul Hasan shohag infront of Liberation War Memorial Sculpture  Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) is a sculpture Made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
Revised: Mahmudul Hasan shohag infront of Liberation War Memorial Sculpture The Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) is a sculpture Made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
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Original: Mahmudul Hasan shohag infront of Liberation War Memorial Sculpture  Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) is a sculpture Made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
Revised: Mahmudul Hasan shohag infront of Liberation War Memorial Sculpture Liberation War Memorial Sculpture (Bengali: মুক্তিযুদ্ধের স্মৃতি ভাস্কর্য) was made by Mahmudul Hasan Shohag in on 2010.
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