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Original:  These plumes , form a homogeneous deep chimney.
Revised:  These plumes form a homogeneous deep chimney.
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Original:  Effects of global warming on ocean convection According to Brodeau et al. (2015), deep convective activity in the Labrador Sea has decreased and become shallower since the beginning of the 20th century due to how infrequently the NAO changes .
Revised:  Effects of global warming on ocean convection Deep convective activity in the Labrador Sea has decreased and become shallower since the beginning of the 20th century due to how infrequently the NAO changes .
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Original:  Effects of global warming on ocean convection According to Brodeau et al. (2015), deep convective activity in the Labrador Sea has decreased and become shallower since the beginning of the 20th century due to how infrequently the NAO changes .
Revised:  Effects of global warming on ocean convection According to Brodeau et al. (2015), deep convective activity in the Labrador Sea has decreased and become shallower since the beginning of the 20th century due to low-frequency variability of the North Atlantic oscillation .
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Original:  The freshening of the surface waters due to enhanced meltwater from the Greenland Ice Sheet, have less density, making it more difficult for oceanic convection to occur. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Therefore, the reduction of the deep wintertime convective mixing in the North Atlantic results the weakening of AMOC.
Revised:  The freshening of the surface waters due to enhanced meltwater from the Greenland Ice Sheet, have less density, making it more difficult for oceanic convection to occur. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Reduction of the deep wintertime convective mixing in the North Atlantic results the weakening of AMOC.
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Original:  Additionally, it is one of the most important phenomenon that controls the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
Revised:  Additionally, it is one of the most important phenomena that control the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
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Original: Convection exists under certain conditions which are be promoted by strong atmospheric forcing due to thermal or haline surface fluxes.
Revised: Convection exists under certain conditions which are promoted by strong atmospheric forcing due to thermal or haline surface fluxes.
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Original:  This may be observed in oceans which are adjacent to boundaries, where either dry and cold winds or ice surfaces blow over water, inducing large latent heat and moisture fluxes.
Revised:  This may be observed in oceans which are adjacent to boundaries, where either dry or cold winds blow over water, inducing large latent heat and moisture fluxes.
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Original:  Additionally, it is one of the most important phenomena that control the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
Revised:  It is also an important phenomena that control the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
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Original:  Additionally, it is one of the most important phenomena that control the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
Revised:  Additionally, it is one of the most important phenomena that controls the intensity of the Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC).
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Original:  This may be observed in oceans which are adjacent to boundaries , where either dry or cold winds blow over water , inducing large latent heat and moisture fluxes.
Revised:  This may be observed in oceans adjacent to boundaries , where either dry or cold winds blow over water , inducing large latent heat and moisture fluxes.
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Original: In 1950 , together with his wife Margarida Trindade and sociologist Edison Carneiro, he founded the Teatro Popular Brasileiro (TPB), a popular theater group inspired by Brazilian Afro and indigenous cultural traditions .
Revised: In 1950 , together with his wife Margarida Trindade and sociologist Edison Carneiro, he founded the Teatro Popular Brasileiro (TPB), a popular theater group inspired by Brazilian Black and indigenous cultural traditions .
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Original: The offence, which carried across in the English colonisation of the Americas, was punished by fines and increasingly less often by ways intended to humiliate in public: dunking : (being arm-fastened into a chair and dunked into a river or pond, or paraded through the street on wheels);
Revised: The offence, which carried across in the English colonisation of the Americas, was punished by fines and increasingly less often by ways intended to humiliate in public: dunking (being arm-fastened into a chair and dunked into a river or pond, or paraded through the street on wheels);
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Original:  In The Queen v . Foxby, 6 Mod. 11 (1704), counsel for the accused stated that he knew of no law for the dunking of scolds.
Revised:  In The Queen v Foxby, 6 Mod. 11 (1704), counsel for the accused stated that he knew of no law for the dunking of scolds.
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Original: Sleep efficacy is often described as the ratio between time spent asleep ("total sleep time (STS)"), and time spent "in bed" ("time in bed (TIB)"), however, TIB does not encompass "non-sleep-related activities" done in bed (e.g. reading, watching television, etc.)  . Clinical importance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
Revised: Sleep efficacy is often described as the ratio between time spent asleep ("total sleep time (STS)"), and time spent "in bed" ("time in bed (TIB)"), however, TIB does not encompass "non-sleep-related activities" performed in bed (e.g. reading, watching television, etc.) . Clinical importance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
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Original: Sleep efficacy is often described as the ratio between time spent asleep ("total sleep time (STS)"), and time spent "in bed" ("time in bed (TIB)"), however, TIB does not encompass "non-sleep-related activities" done in bed (e.g. reading, watching television, etc.)  . Clinical importance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
Revised: Sleep efficacy is often described as the ratio between time spent asleep ("total sleep time (STS)"), and time spent "in bed" ("time in bed (TIB)"), however, TIB does not encompass "non-sleep-related activities" done in bed (e.g. reading, watching television, etc.) as the phrase may seem to suggest . Clinical importance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
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Original:  SE is greatly reduced in insomnia;
Revised:  SE is significantly reduced in insomnia;
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Original:  SE is therefore an important clinical parameter in insomnia investigations . SE declines with age and low SE is common in the elderly.
Revised:  SE is therefore an important clinical parameter in clinical investigations of insomnia . SE declines with age and low SE is common in the elderly.
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Original: Clinical importance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
Revised: Clinical significance Apparently long sleep duration may in fact be a sign of low sleep efficiency.
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Original:  Research Reduced SE was found to be associated with increased frequency of nightmares in one study   .
Revised:  Research Reduced SE was found to be associated with increased frequency of nightmares in one study . .
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Original: alt=Prof. Kaweh Mansouri wearing a headset giving a presentation at the Oertli "Come and See" Meeting, 2018"|Kaweh Mansouri in 2018 Kaweh Mansouri is a prominent Iranian-Austrian ophthalmologist and researcher in glaucoma.
Revised: alt=Prof. Kaweh Mansouri wearing a headset giving a presentation at the Oertli "Come and See" Meeting, 2018"|Kaweh Mansouri in 2018 Kaweh Mansouri is an Iranian-Austrian ophthalmologist and researcher in glaucoma.
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Original:  He has been voted twice as a Top 40 under 40 ophthalmologist by his peers in the journal “The URL and is ranked among the Top 15 glaucoma scientists worldwide by URL Career Mansouri is considered to be the leading international expert in the field of continuous intraocular pressure (IOP) monitoring.
Revised:  Career Mansouri is considered to be the leading international expert in the field of continuous intraocular pressure (IOP) monitoring.
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Original:  He has been voted twice as a Top 40 under 40 ophthalmologist by his peers in the journal “The URL and is ranked among the Top 15 glaucoma scientists worldwide by URL Career Mansouri is considered to be the leading international expert in the field of continuous intraocular pressure (IOP) monitoring.
Revised:  He has been voted twice as a Top 40 under 40 ophthalmologist by his peers in the journal “The URL and is ranked among the Top 15 glaucoma scientists worldwide by URL Career Mansouri is an expert in the field of continuous intraocular pressure (IOP) monitoring.
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Original:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma URL and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research URL Mansouri is the first ophthalmologist to give a TEDx talk in 2012.
Revised:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma URL and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research URL 
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Original:  He pioneered the clinical development of the first smart contact lens for the continuous measurement of IOP (Sensimed Triggerfish, Switzerland), which gained FDA approval in 2013 as well as the Eyemate intraocular sensor (Implandata AG, Germany).
Revised:  He pioneered the clinical development of the first smart contact lens for the continuous measurement of IOP (Sensimed Triggerfish, Switzerland), as well as the Eyemate intraocular sensor (Implandata AG, Germany).
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Original:  He has co-authored over 160 peer-reviewed publications and has an h-index of 34 (Google Scholar) .
Revised:  He has co-authored over 160 peer-reviewed publications .
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Original:  Honors%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mansouri has been the recipient of several international awards, including the prestigious Boberg-Ans from the Danish Ophthalmological Society, the MGS Alcon International Lecture, the American Academy of Ophthalmology (AAO) Achievement Award and AAO International Scholar Award, among others.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mansouri has been the recipient of several international awards, including the prestigious Boberg-Ans from the Danish Ophthalmological Society, the MGS Alcon International Lecture, the American Academy of Ophthalmology (AAO) Achievement Award and AAO International Scholar Award, among others.
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Original:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma URL and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research URL
Revised:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma Association and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research URL
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Original:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma URL and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research URL
Revised:  He serves as the Associate Executive Vice President of the World Glaucoma URL and is President of the Swiss Glaucoma Research Foundation.
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Original: Early life and education Mansouri was born in Vienna, Austria, and moved to Lausanne, Switzerland in 2003.
Revised:  Mansouri was born in Vienna, Austria, and moved to Lausanne, Switzerland in 2003.
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Original:  Bjerknes extended the concept to also hold for inviscid, geostrophic and baroclinic fluids     .
Revised:  Bjerknes extended the concept to inviscid, geostrophic and baroclinic fluids .
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Original: In fluid mechanics, topographic steering is  effect of potential vorticity conservation on the motion of a fluid parcel.
Revised: In fluid mechanics, topographic steering is the effect of potential vorticity conservation on the motion of a fluid parcel.
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Original:  This means that the fluid parcels will not only react to physical obstacles in their path, but also  changes in topography or latitude.
Revised:  This means that the fluid parcels will not only react to physical obstacles in their path, but also to changes in topography or latitude.
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Original:  Fluid parcels will always move along lines of constant potential vorticity.
Revised:  Fluid parcels will move along lines of constant potential vorticity.
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Original:  On of the most famous examples of this are the so called Colorado lows, troughs originating from air passing over the Rocky Mountains.
Revised:  One example of this are the so called Colorado lows, troughs originating from air passing over the Rocky Mountains.
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Original: Oceans Example of topographic steering in the Antarctic Ocean Because the scale of large flows in the oceans is much larger than the depth of the ocean, the shallow water approximation and thus (1) can often be used.
Revised: Oceans Because the scale of large flows in the oceans is much larger than the depth of the ocean, the shallow water approximation and thus (1) can often be used.
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Original:  This potential vorticity is also called the Ertel potential vorticity              .
Revised:  This potential vorticity is also called the Ertel potential vorticity . .
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Original:  This potential vorticity is also called the Ertel potential vorticity              .
Revised:  This potential vorticity is also called the Ertel potential vorticity , .
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Original: In 2015, she became Grand Chief of Manitoba Keewatinowi Okimakanak, the first women to hold the URL She was named one of Chatelaine’s top 30 women of URL In November 2016, she appealed to federal Prime Minister Justin Trudeau to accept an invitation to visit Shamattawa First Nation after a fire destroyed the only grocery store in the nation.
Revised: In 2015, she became Grand Chief of Manitoba Keewatinowi Okimakanak, the first women to hold the position. She was named one of Chatelaine’s top 30 women of URL In November 2016, she appealed to federal Prime Minister Justin Trudeau to accept an invitation to visit Shamattawa First Nation after a fire destroyed the only grocery store in the nation.
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Original:  She was conferred  the Lifetime Achievement Award at the 13th Manipur State Film Awards 2020.
Revised:  She was conferred with the Lifetime Achievement Award at the 13th Manipur State Film Awards 2020.
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Original:  Her first play was Jadonang (  September 1969), where she played the role of Rani Gaidinliu in Aryan Theatre, Imphal.
Revised:  Her first play was Jadonang ( staged in September 1969), where she played the role of Rani Gaidinliu in Aryan Theatre, Imphal.
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Original:  Gaidinliu herself saw the play and praised Rashi's performance.
Revised:  Gaidinliu saw the play and praised Rashi's performance.
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Original: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical)  An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system  which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
Revised: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical) An algae bloom is the enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
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Original: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical)  An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system  which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
Revised: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical) An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system , which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
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Original: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical)  An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system  which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
Revised: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical) An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system which manifests itself as a clear change of water color . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
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Original: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical)  An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system  which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily removes the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
Revised: Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical) An algae bloom is an enhanced growth of photosynthetic organisms in a water system which manifests itself as a clear change of colour of the water . Algal blooms are often caused by an (local) enrichment of the water system with nutrients, which temporarily remove the limiting growth factor of photosynthetic organisms like cyanobacteria.
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Original:  Areas with a higher concentration of algae near the surface have a distinct different colour which is captured by the sensor and is represented as a high green and near-infrared radiation reflectance and low red light reflectance.
Revised:  Areas with a higher concentration of algae near the surface have a distinct different colour which is captured by the sensor as a high green and near-infrared radiation reflectance and low red light reflectance.
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Original:  To map the algal bloom thresholding is used in combination with a spectral index like the Normalized Difference Vegetation Index (NDVI).
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Original:   Mapping and tracking of algal blooms (Optical) [[File:NDVI figure algal bloom.tif| 838x838px |Panel containing a NDWI, RGB and NDVI remote sensing image of an algal bloom in the San Roque lake in Córdoba Argentina derived from Sentinel-2 level 2a optical data of 2017-02-22.
Revised:  Mapping of algal blooms (Optical) [[File:NDVI figure algal bloom.tif| 838x838px |Panel containing a NDWI, RGB and NDVI remote sensing image of an algal bloom in the San Roque lake in Córdoba Argentina derived from Sentinel-2 level 2a optical data of 2017-02-22.
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Original:  Algae are characterized by their green colour  caused by the absorption spectra of the chlorophyll-a in these organisms.
Revised:  Algae are characterized by their green colour , caused by the absorption spectra of the chlorophyll-a in these organisms.
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Original:  In one observation the intensity and location of the algal bloom can be recorded  and with a separate observation over roughly the same area the same computation can be done to measure the displacement and intensity change of the algal bloom .
Revised:  In one observation the intensity and location of the algal bloom can be recorded , and with a separate observation over roughly the same area the same computation can be done to measure the displacement and intensity change of the algal bloom .
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Original:  In one observation the intensity and location of the algal bloom can be recorded  and with a separate observation over roughly the same area the same computation can be done to measure the displacement and intensity change of the algal bloom .
Revised:  In one observation the intensity and location of the algal bloom can be recorded and with a second observation at a different time the displacement and intensity change of the algal bloom .
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Original:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, upwelling and river outflows  which all bring nutrients to surface waters  . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters  making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
Revised:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, up-welling and river outflows which all bring nutrients to surface waters . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
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Original:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, upwelling and river outflows  which all bring nutrients to surface waters  . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters  making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
Revised:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, upwelling and river outflows , which all bring nutrients to surface waters . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
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Original:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, upwelling and river outflows  which all bring nutrients to surface waters  . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters  making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
Revised:  Since algea activity is directly related to the availabillity algal blooms are used to study internal wave structures, upwelling and river outflows which all bring nutrients to surface waters . Pollution often coincides with high nutrient waters , making algal blooms good indicators for the severity and impact of water pollution.
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Original:  Sea surface height /sea level rise (RADAR altimetry) RADAR altimiters send microwave pulses to the surface to catch the reflection intensity over a short time period and thereby measure the two-way travel time of the signal.
Revised:  Sea surface height (RADAR altimetry) RADAR altimiters send microwave pulses to the surface to catch the reflection intensity over a short time period and thereby measure the two-way travel time of the signal.
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