wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The gene mediates a crucial step in the Krebs cycle , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate, the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one works out to hard.
Revised:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate, the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one works out to hard.
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Original:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
Revised:  The gene mediates a crucial rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
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Original:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
Revised:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, with much less production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
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Original:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
Revised:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate (a chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
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Original:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one excecises .
Revised:  The gene mediates the rate controlling step of gluconeogenesis , making more energy available to muscle through the burning of fatty acids, without the production of lactate , the chemical that leads to sore muscles when one exercises) .
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Original: The changes were created by adding an extra copy of a single gene, PEPCK-C , which is already present in the mouse genome, but in a modified version that is highly active in skeletal muscle rather than the liver .
Revised: The changes were created by adding an extra copy of a single gene, PEPCK-C . This gene is already present in the mouse genome, but in a modified version that is highly active in skeletal muscle rather than the liver .
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Original: The changes were created by adding an extra copy of a single gene, PEPCK-C , which is already present in the mouse genome, but in a modified version that is highly active in skeletal muscle rather than the liver .
Revised: The changes were created by adding an extra copy of a single gene, PEPCK-C , which is already present in the mouse genome, but the modified gene is designed to be strongly active (transcribed) in skeletal muscle rather than the liver .
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Original:  These alterations increased strength rather than endurance through the genetic modification of myostatin and follistatin, or by injection of normal mice with a soluble form of the activin type IIB receptor
Revised:  These alterations increased strength rather than endurance through the genetic modification of myostatin and follistatin, or by injection of a soluble form of the activin type IIB receptor
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Original:  The change does not represent a leap forward in the evolution of the mouse , which in fact produces tiny amounts of PEPCK-C naturally in skeletal muscle, but rather a shift in regulation of the natural metabolism to favor performance over efficiency .
Revised:  This is not as major a change to the mouse genome as it might seem to the layperson. The PEPCK-C naturally in skeletal muscle, but rather a shift in regulation of the natural metabolism to favor performance over efficiency .
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Original:  Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge.  
Revised:  Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge. " 
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Original:  30 years ago, w: Gerard Majax during a french tv show called w: Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a french tv show called w: Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
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Original:  30 years ago, w: Gerard Majax during a french tv show called w: Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, w: Gerard Majax during a french tv show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
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Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a french tv show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician, even better than Geller
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Original:  Then the last contestant appear to which Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
Revised:  Then the last contestant appeared to which Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
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Original: James Randi, a former magician and had previously worked with Angel, is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics.
Revised: James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel, is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics.
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Original: On Halloween night, October 31  during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan that "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in here right now."
Revised: On Halloween night, October 31 , during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan that "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in here right now."
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Original: On Halloween night, October 31  during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan that "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in here right now."
Revised: On Halloween night, October 31 during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan , "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in here right now."
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Original: On Halloween night, October 31  during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan that "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in here right now."
Revised: On Halloween night, October 31 during a 2-hour long live episode of NBC show Phenomenon, famed magician Criss Angel told Uri Geller and Jim Callahan that "I will give you a million dollars of my personal money right now if either one of you can tell me specific details of what’s in this envelope right now."
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Original:  While Geller ignored Angel's challenge, Callahan started to confront Angel in a hostile manner  as host Tim Vincent held him back and Geller held Angel back.
Revised:  While Geller ignored Angel's challenge, Callahan started to confront Angel in a hostile manner , as host Tim Vincent held him back and Geller held Angel back.
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Original:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special  Angel told Larry King : " no one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
Revised:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special , Angel told Larry King : " no one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
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Original:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special  Angel told Larry King : " no one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
Revised:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special Angel told Larry King , " no one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
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Original:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special  Angel told Larry King : " no one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
Revised:  For example, on the day before the Halloween special Angel told Larry King : " No one has the ability, that I'm aware of, to do anything supernatural, psychic, talk to the dead.
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Original:  In the midst of the confrontation  the TV show cut to commerical and then Vincent said the show was not "Jerry Springer."
Revised:  In the midst of the confrontation , the TV show cut to commerical and then Vincent said the show was not "Jerry Springer."
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Original:  In the midst of the confrontation  the TV show cut to commerical and then Vincent said the show was not "Jerry Springer."
Revised:  In the midst of the confrontation the TV show cut to a commercial break. Vincent said the show was not "Jerry Springer."
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Original:  Then the last contestant appeared to which Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
Revised:  When the last contestant appeared to which Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
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Original:  Then the last contestant appeared to which Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
Revised:  Then the last contestant appeared Angel said it was "a hell of a lot more entertaining than the previous act."
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Original:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
Revised:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel and a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
Revised:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics , wrote of the incident, "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
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Original:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
Revised:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' — though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
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Original:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom – and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
Revised:  James Randi, a former magician who had previously worked with Angel , is a long standing critic of Geller and psychics . Randi wrote "Criss Angel said, in his rather lengthy comments, '[Callahan] demonstrated something that is unexplainable to some' - though to whom that might have applied, I cannot fathom — and Criss is beginning to sound very much like that chap James Randi, tossing about a million-dollar challenge."
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Original:  It's not the first time that Uri Geller is challenged by a professional magician.
Revised:  This is not the first time that Uri Geller is challenged by a professional magician.
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Original:  It's not the first time that Uri Geller is challenged by a professional magician.
Revised:  It's not the first time that Uri Geller has been challenged by a professional magician.
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Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  Thirty years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse , Gerard Majax demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" powers shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse  demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician , even better than Geller
Revised:  30 years ago, Gerard Majax during a French television show called Droit de réponse demonstred that all "so called" power shown previously during the show by Geller himself could be reproduced by a magician even more convincingly than Geller
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Original: Barry Prime has been appointed the new National Performance Director of Swim Ireland, the governing body of swimming in Ireland.
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Original: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 120px A recent flurry of e-mails claiming cell phone users should add their number to the U.S. do-not-call registry and the establishment of a new cell phone database prompted the FCC to issue a consumer advisory  April 15.
Revised: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 120px In response to a recent flurry of e-mails claiming cell phone users should add their number to the U.S. do-not-call registry and the establishment of a new cell phone database prompted the FCC to issue a consumer advisory April 15.
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Original: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 120px A recent flurry of e-mails claiming cell phone users should add their number to the U.S. do-not-call registry and the establishment of a new cell phone database prompted the FCC to issue a consumer advisory  April 15.
Revised: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 120px A recent flurry of e-mails claiming cell phone users should add their number to the U.S. do-not-call registry and the establishment of a new cell phone database prompted the FCC to issue a consumer advisory on April 15.
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Original:  In a paper titled The Truth about Cell Phones and the National do not call Registry, the FCC clarifies the pre-existing prohibition against automated telemarketer calls to cell phone numbers .
Revised:  In a paper titled The Truth about Cell Phones and the National do not call Registry, the FCC clarified the prohibition against telemarketers using automated dialers to contact cell phone users .
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Original:  An FCCrequirement became effective on  Jan. 1, 2005  requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
Revised:  An FCCrequirement became effective on On Jan. 1, 2005 requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
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Original:  An FCCrequirement became effective on  Jan. 1, 2005  requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
Revised:  An FCCrequirement became effective on Jan. 1, 2005 an FCC requirement became effective requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
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Original:  Newer regulations also will require marketers to unblock their numbers so users of caller ID will know when a telemarketer calls . Since the registry’s 2003 October launch, the do-not-call registry has, in the FCC’s own words, been an “overwhelmingly popular initiative.”
Revised:  Newer regulations also will require marketers to unblock their numbers so users of caller ID will know when a telemarketer calls Since the registry’s 2003 October launch, the do-not-call registry has, in the FCC’s own words, been an “overwhelmingly popular initiative.”
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Original:  The paper notes the federal government itself does not maintain a national cell phone registry an that users of the registry can, if they choose to, add cell numbers in addition to traditional land-line listings.
Revised:  The paper notes the federal government itself does not maintain a national cell phone registry and that users of the registry can, if they choose to, add cell numbers in addition to traditional land-line listings.
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Original:  In a paper titled The Truth about Cell Phones and the National do not call Registry, the FCC clarified the prohibition against telemarketers using automated dialers to contact U.S. cell phone users  .
Revised:  In a paper titled The Truth about Cell Phones and the National do not call Registry, the FCC clarified that a prohibition against telemarketers using automated dialers to contact U.S. cell phone users .
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Original:  The paper notes the federal government itself does not maintain a national cell phone registry and that users of the registry can, if they choose to, add cell numbers in addition to traditional land-line listings.
Revised:  The paper notes the federal government itself does not maintain a national cell phone registry . Users of the registry can, if they choose to, add cell numbers in addition to traditional land-line listings.
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Original:  The registry serves as an option for consumers to stop unwanted telemarketing calls and currently contains over 80 million subscribers.
Revised:  It serves as an option for consumers to stop unwanted telemarketing calls and currently contains over 80 million subscribers.
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Original:  On Jan. 1, 2005 an FCC requirement became effective requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
Revised:  In January of 2005 an FCC requirement became effective requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
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Original:  On Jan. 1, 2005 an FCC requirement became effective requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
Revised:  On Jan. 1, 2005 , a new FCC requirement became effective requiring telemarketers to scrub their call lists against the national registry once each month.
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