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Original: The reason for the service is that Britain is one of the biggest illegal downloader of film and television programmes in the world, with many are on the PCs as soon as the shown in the United States.
Revised: The reason for the service is that Britain is one of the biggest illegal downloader of film and television programmes in the world, with many are on the PCs as soon as they are shown in the United States.
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Original: 175px London – Britain's largest, and the world's third largest , supermarket chainTesco, has announced it would like to start a film downloading service on the back of its successful music download service in the United Kingdom.
Revised: 175px The world's third largest , supermarket chainTesco, has announced it would like to start a film downloading service on the back of its successful music download service in the United Kingdom.
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Original: 175px London – Britain's largest, and the world's third largest , supermarket chainTesco, has announced it would like to start a film downloading service on the back of its successful music download service in the United Kingdom.
Revised: 175px London – Britain's largest, and the world's third largest supermarket chain, Tesco of Britain, announced intentions to start a film downloading service on the back of its successful music download service in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Tesco already takes a 10\% share in the download market in the UK , even though they are a late comer in the download market .
Revised:  Tesco takes a 10\% share in the download market in the UK , even though they are a late comer in the download market .
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Original:  Tesco already takes a 10\% share in the download market in the UK , even though they are a late comer in the download market .
Revised:  Tesco already takes a 10\% share in the UK download market , even though they are a late comer in the download market .
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Original:  Tesco already takes a 10\% share in the download market in the UK , even though they are a late comer in the download market .
Revised:  Tesco already takes a 10\% share in the download market in the UK , even though they are a late comer .
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Original: The reason for the service is that Britain is one of the largest illegal downloaders of film and television programmes in the world, with many on PCs as soon as they are shown in the United States.
Revised: The reason for the service is that Britain is one of the largest illegal downloaders of film and television programmes in the world, with many TV shows copied to PCs as soon as they are shown in the United States.
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Original:  Copies of the Simpsons, the OC , Desperate Housewives and even Lost which is not available yet in the UK are found on p2p servers like Kazaa and BitTorrent.
Revised:  Copies of The Simpsons, The O.C. , Desperate Housewives and even Lost which is not available yet in the UK are found on p2p servers like Kazaa and BitTorrent.
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Original:  This is not the first company who has decided to start a film download service as the entertainment giant Sony has asked for such a service, plus the music downloader Wippet has already decided to introduce film downloading in the UK
Revised:  This is not the first company who has decided to start a film download service . The entertainment giant Sony has asked for such a service, plus the music downloader Wippet has already decided to introduce film downloading in the UK
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Original: tummb |Artist's conception of Smith's Cloud approaching our galaxy.
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Original: tumb| Artist's conception of Smith's Cloud approaching our galaxy.
Revised:  Artist's conception of Smith's Cloud approaching our galaxy.
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Original:  A duck hunter in Alabama has found the body of the one of the four  children allegedly thrown off a bridge by their father . Danny Luong, the youngest of the children at four months old, was discovered  in a marshy area near Bayou La Batre, about 5 miles west of the 80 foot high Dauphin Island Bridge.
Revised:  A duck hunter in Alabama has found the body of the one of the four children allegedly thrown off a bridge by their father . Danny Luong, the youngest of the children at four months old, was discovered in a marshy area in Bayou la Batre, about 5 miles west of the 80 foot high Dauphin Island Bridge.
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Original:  She was being comforted by an associate pastor from a Vietnamese church   .
Revised:  She was being comforted by an associate pastor from a Vietnamese church . .
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Original:  The search  for the other two children continues.
Revised:  The search continues for the other two children continues.
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Original:  Barton Bay is about 10 miles miles northwest of the bridge.
Revised:  Barton Bay is about 10 miles northwest of the bridge.
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Original:  The New England Patriots will either face the Indianapolis Colts or the San Diego Chargers at Foxborough 
Revised:  The New England Patriots will face the San Diego Chargers at Foxborough 
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Original: Randy Moss and Rodney Harrison celebrate after Harrison caught an interception The New England Patriots won their divisional playoff match against Jacksonville Jaguars , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
Revised:  The New England Patriots won their divisional playoff match against Jacksonville Jaguars , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
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Original: Randy Moss and Rodney Harrison celebrate after Harrison caught an interception The New England Patriots won their divisional playoff match against Jacksonville Jaguars , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
Revised: Randy Moss and Rodney Harrison celebrate after Harrison caught an interception The won their divisional playoff match against Jacksonville Jaguars , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
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Original: Randy Moss and Rodney Harrison celebrate after Harrison caught an interception The New England Patriots won their divisional playoff match against Jacksonville Jaguars , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
Revised: Randy Moss and Rodney Harrison celebrate after Harrison caught an interception The New England Patriots won their divisional playoff match against , 31-20 in Foxborough, Massachusetts.
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Original:  Tom Brady set a record with 26 out of 28 pass attempts completed, which is an NFL record as 92.9 percent in the regular season and playoffs.
Revised:  Tom Brady set a record with 26 out of 28 pass attempts completed, which is an record as 92.9 percent in the regular season and playoffs.
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Original:  The New England Patriots are only two games away from becoming the second team after the 1972 Miami Dolphins to have a perfect record and win the Super Bowl .
Revised:  The New England Patriots are only two games away from becoming the second team after the to have a perfect record and win the Super Bowl .
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Original:  The New England Patriots are only two games away from becoming the second team after the 1972 Miami Dolphins to have a perfect record and win the Super Bowl .
Revised:  The New England Patriots are only two games away from becoming the second team after the 1972 Miami Dolphins to have a perfect record and win the .
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Original:  The New England Patriots will face the San Diego Chargers at Foxborough on January 20
Revised:  The New England Patriots will face the at Foxborough on January 20
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Original:  One of this year's top winners was the story "What Goes Up Must Come Down" which received an 8.0 rating and 8929 votes.
Revised:  One of this year's top winners was "What Goes Up Must Come Down" which received an 8.0 rating and 8929 votes.
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Original:  Tied for a top score of 8.0 with 4212 votes was "The Enema Within", an account of a Texas man who absorbed alcohol by means of enema because of a throat condition which made swallowing painful.
Revised:  Tied for a top score of 8.0 with 4212 votes was "The Enema Within", an account of a Texas man who absorbed alcohol by means of enema because his throat condition made swallowing painful.
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Original:  It  was one of four seats that the UUP lost in the election , the others being Lagan Valley, South Antrim, and East Antrim.
Revised:  It was one of four seats lost by the UUP lost in the election , the others being Lagan Valley, South Antrim, and East Antrim.
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Original:  David Simpson of the Democratic Unionist Party said that his victory in Upper Bann "sends out a very, very clear signal that push-over unionism has gone forever".
Revised:  David Simpson of the DUP said that his victory in Upper Bann "sends out a very, very clear signal that push-over unionism has gone forever".
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Original:  Beaten by a margin of over 5,000 votes by his Democratic Unionist Party opponent, David Simpson, Trimble is expected to resign .
Revised:  Beaten by a margin of over 5,000 votes by his Democratic Unionist Party opponent, David Simpson, Trimble resigned .
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Original:  Beaten with a margin of over 5,000 votes by his Democratic Unionist Party opponent , David Simpson , Trimble resigned.
Revised:  Beaten with a margin of over 5,000 votes by his opponent David Simpson of the Democratic Unionist Party , Trimble resigned.
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Original:  San Jose law enforcement officials picked up Ayala from the Clark County Detention Center in Las Vegas at about 6:00 a.m. local time on Friday, and transported her to San Jose, arriving at 1:30 p.m local time.
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Original:  "It gives us the opportunity to look at the discovery material the prosecution is compelled to provide us and now we can move forward to prove her innocence   ."
Revised:  "It gives us the opportunity to look at the discovery material the prosecution is compelled to provide us and now we can move forward to prove her innocence ." ."
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Original: Arraignment next week Ayala will likely be arraigned on Monday or Tuesday at the Santa Clara County Superior Court, according to David Boyd, a prosecutor for the Santa Clara County District Attorney . "The press has treated this like she's Hannibal Lecter in `Silence of the Lambs," Ayala's sister, Mary, told Knight Ridder on Friday.
Revised: Arraignment next week Ayala will likely be arraigned on Monday or Tuesday at the Santa Clara County Superior Court, according to Santa Clara County District Attorney . "The press has treated this like she's Hannibal Lecter in `Silence of the Lambs," Ayala's sister, Mary, told Knight Ridder on Friday.
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Original: "This  raw scientific exploration and the suspense is building by the day.
Revised: "This is raw scientific exploration and the suspense is building by the day.
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Original:  Insertion will be accomplished with a fourth Mercury encounter in 2011 
Revised:  Insertion will be accomplished with a fourth Mercury encounter in 2011. 
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Original:  Insertion will be accomplished with a fourth Mercury encounter in 2011.
Revised:  Insertion will be accomplished with a fourth Mercury encounter in 
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Original:  Nasa points cameras at galaxy´s hottest plane
Revised:  2011
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Original:  Only 30\% of the fishing fleet actually complied  both mitigation and offal management requirements.
Revised:  Only 30\% of the fishing fleet actually complied with both mitigation and offal management requirements.
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Original:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port , from sub-Antarctic waters , of the entire fleet of New Zealand's squid fishing boats, 35 boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
Revised:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port from sub-Antarctic waters , of the entire fleet of New Zealand's squid fishing boats, 35 boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
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Original:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port , from sub-Antarctic waters , of the entire fleet of New Zealand's squid fishing boats, 35 boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
Revised:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port , from sub-Antarctic waters of the entire fleet of New Zealand's squid fishing boats, 35 boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
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Original:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port , from sub-Antarctic waters , of the entire fleet of New Zealand's squid fishing boats, 35 boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
Revised:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port , from sub-Antarctic waters , of the entire fleet of New Zealand's 35 squid fishing boats, on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
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Original:   The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port from sub-Antarctic waters of the entire fleet of New Zealand's 35 squid fishing boats , on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
Revised:  In order to save the lives of seabirds, The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port from sub-Antarctic waters of the entire fleet of New Zealand's 35 squid fishing boats , on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
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Original:   The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall to port from sub-Antarctic waters of the entire fleet of New Zealand's 35 squid fishing boats , on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
Revised:  The government of New Zealand has ordered the recall from sub-Antarctic waters of the entire fleet of New Zealand's 35 squid fishing boats , on the grounds of saving the lives of seabirds.
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Original:  He reported that observations from an Air Force aeroplane , sent on a tour of inspection last month , revealed that, contrary to the agreed code of practice: 46\% of the fishing fleet were not using equipment to scare sea birds away from vessels, with a further 8\% only using it intermittently.
Revised:  An Air Force aeroplane , sent on a tour of inspection last month , revealed that, contrary to the agreed code of practice: 46\% of the fishing fleet were not using equipment to scare sea birds away from vessels, with a further 8\% only using it intermittently.
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Original: U.S. President George Bush has arrived in Saudi Arabia, where he is expected to attempt to encourage support for Israeli-Palestinian peace talks and U.S.-led efforts to contain Iran.
Revised: United States President George Bush has arrived in Saudi Arabia, where he is expected to attempt to encourage support for Israeli-Palestinian peace talks and U.S.-led efforts to contain Iran.
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Original:  According to many reporters George Bush has kept a strong relationship with the Saudi royal family, who are often considered as allies of the United States  President Bush is due to leave Saudi Arabia on Tuesday for Egypt, the final stop on his Mideast tour before his return to Washington  on Wednesday
Revised:  According to many reporters George Bush has kept a strong relationship with the Saudi royal family, who are often considered as allies of the United States . President Bush is due to leave Saudi Arabia on Tuesday for Egypt, the final stop on his Mideast tour before his return to Washington on Wednesday
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Original:  According to many reporters George Bush has kept a strong relationship with the Saudi royal family, who are often considered as allies of the United States  President Bush is due to leave Saudi Arabia on Tuesday for Egypt, the final stop on his Mideast tour before his return to Washington  on Wednesday
Revised:  According to many reporters George Bush has kept a strong relationship with the Saudi royal family, who are often considered as allies of the United States President Bush is due to leave Saudi Arabia on Tuesday for Egypt, the final stop on his Mideast tour before his return to Washington , D.C. on Wednesday
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Original:  Tehran denies such allegations and accuses Washington of trying to spread anti-Iranian sentiment in the region.
Revised:  Iran denies such allegations and accuses Washington of trying to spread anti-Iranian sentiment in the region.
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Original:  PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclincation of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
Revised:  PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
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Original:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) . Ref: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Photos: UR
Revised:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) Ref: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Photos: UR
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Original:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) . Ref: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Photos: UR
Revised:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Photos: UR
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Original:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) . Ref: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Photos: UR
Revised:  HAMSAT is a Micro-satellite for providing satellite based Ameteur Radio services to the Indian as well as International community of Amateur Radio Operators (HAM) . Ref: URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: MAY, 7 India's recently launched satellites, the 1560 Kg Indian Remote Sensing satellite, CARTOSAT-1 for stereoscopic cartographic applications and 42.5 Kg HAMSAT will have a longer life as per the Project Director, PSLV, N Narayana Murthy.
Revised:  India's recently launched satellites, the 1560 Kg Indian Remote Sensing satellite, CARTOSAT-1 for stereoscopic cartographic applications and 42.5 Kg HAMSAT will have a longer life as per the Project Director, PSLV, N Narayana Murthy.
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Original:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 05 , 2005 10:15 IST  May 05, 04:45 UT  . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
Revised:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 5 , 2005 10:15 IST May 05, 04:45 UT . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
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Original:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 05 , 2005 10:15 IST  May 05, 04:45 UT  . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
Revised:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 05 , 2005 10:15 IST ( May 05, 04:45 UT . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
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Original:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 05 , 2005 10:15 IST  May 05, 04:45 UT  . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
Revised:  PSLV-C6 was launched by Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO) on May 05 , 2005 10:15 IST May 05, 04:45 UT ) . PSLV-C6 placed both the satellites in polar Sun Synchronous Orbit (SSO) at an altitude of 632 x 621 km with an inclination of 97.8 deg with respect to the equator.
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Original: "When we saw the first contractions we were speechless." - Dr. Doris Taylor Scientists from the University of Minnesota have successfully created a beating heart in the lab.
Revised: "When we saw the first contractions we were speechless." - Dr. Doris Taylor Scientists from the University of Minnesota have successfully created a beating heart in a lab.
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Original:  The resulting non-living masses, called extracellular matrices or ECMs, contain no cells and therefore will not be rejected by its new owners.
Revised:  The resulting non-living mass, called an extracellular matrix or ECM, contains no cells and therefore will not be rejected by its new owners.
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Original:  New muscle and endothelial cells were then injected into the ECM and stimulated electrically.
Revised:  New muscle and endothelial cells are then injected into the ECM and stimulated electrically.
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Original:  He takes his nickname from the character Bobby on television's The Brady Bunch  
Revised:  He takes his nickname from the character Bobby on television's The Brady Bunch . 
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Original:  Several attractions have been swopped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite fee
Revised:  Several attractions have been swopped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite feed
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Original: Sleeping Beauty Castle decorated for the celebration Category:United StatesCategory:Culture and entertainment The American theme park Disneyland celebrated it's golden anniversary on Thursday, in Anaheim, California.
Revised: Sleeping Beauty Castle decorated for the celebration The American theme park Disneyland celebrated it's golden anniversary on Thursday, in Anaheim, California.
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Original:  The celebration involves the ten other theme parks around the globe carrying the Walt Disney benchmark . Several attractions have been swopped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite feed
Revised:  Disney is calling it "The Happiest Celebration on Earth" . Several attractions have been swopped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite feed
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Original:  The celebration involves the ten other theme parks around the globe carrying the Walt Disney benchmark . Several attractions have been swopped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite feed
Revised:  The celebration involves the ten other theme parks around the globe carrying the Walt Disney benchmark . Several attractions have been swapped between parks, and the four main Disney theme parks (the Magic Kingdom, Tokyo Disneyland, Disneyland Paris and Hong Kong Disneyland) gave a salute to Disneyland via live satellite feed
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Original:  According to Sea Shepherd's international director, Jonny Vasic, the men were not allowed to leave the Yushin Maru vessel.
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