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Original:  " Well, we now know the attorney general did change that advice and the question is what or who changed it."
Revised:  . Well, we now know the attorney general did change that advice and the question is what or who changed it."
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Original:  Foreign Secretary Jack Straw, in a statement read in Parliament , defended initially censoring the letter on privacy grounds, and then later omitting the two revealing lines "because their content concerned the provision of legal advice in relation to the use of force against Iraq."
Revised:  Foreign Secretary Jack Straw, in a statement read in Parliament , defended initially censoring the letter on privacy grounds, and the later omission of the two revealing lines "because their content concerned the provision of legal advice in relation to the use of force against Iraq."
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Original:  Although Ms Wilmshurst describes the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith's 13-page, March 7 letter as being different to his previously expressed view against the war , it expressed serious misgivings, according to both Channel 4 and the Guardian.
Revised:  Although Ms Wilmshurst describes the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith's 13-page, March 7 letter as being a change to his previously expressed view against the war , it expressed serious misgivings, according to both Channel 4 and the Guardian.
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Original:  Then further refinements brought the advice to a short 300 word 'summary' delivered to cabinet on March 17, giving his go-ahead for an invasion.
Revised:  Further refinements brought his advice to a short 300 word 'summary' delivered to cabinet on March 17, giving his go-ahead for an invasion.
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Original:  Then further refinements brought the advice to a short 300 word 'summary' delivered to cabinet on March 17, giving his go-ahead for an invasion.
Revised:  Then further refinements brought the advice to a short 300 word 'summary' delivered to cabinet on March 17, giving a full go-ahead for an invasion.
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Original:  But in the longer, March 7 version, the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith wrote , "I remain of the opinion that the safest legal course would be to secure the adoption of a further resolution to authorise the use of force."
Revised:  But in the earlier and longer version, the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith wrote , "I remain of the opinion that the safest legal course would be to secure the adoption of a further resolution to authorise the use of force."
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Original:  But in the longer, March 7 version, the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith wrote , "I remain of the opinion that the safest legal course would be to secure the adoption of a further resolution to authorise the use of force."
Revised:  But in the longer, March 7 version, the Attorney General Lord Goldsmith had written , "I remain of the opinion that the safest legal course would be to secure the adoption of a further resolution to authorise the use of force."
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Original:  A statement Foreign Secretary on March 24 confirms that no member of cabinet questioned whether Iraq was in breach.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Security Council disputed that Saddam was in material breach of his obligations under SCR 1441 and the preceding resolutions."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " N%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ot a single member of the Ministerial%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  Calipari became a national hero for Italians after he threw his own body across hers as the firing from heavy artillery continued, killing him and seriously injuring Sgrena with few bullets in her back.
Revised:  Calipari became a national hero for Italians after he threw his own body across hers as the firing continued, killing him and seriously injuring Sgrena with few bullets in her back.
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Original:  Ms. Sgrena repeated her statement that the car in which she, Calipari and another agent, the driver, were traveling had “no warning signal…
Revised:  Ms. Sgrena repeated her statement that the car in which she, Calipari and another agent, the driver, were travelling had “no warning signal…
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Original:  Calipari became a national hero for Italians after he  threw his own body across hers as the firing continued, killing him and seriously injuring Sgrena with few bullets in her back.
Revised:  Calipari became a national hero for Italians after he bravely threw his own body across hers as the firing continued, killing him and seriously injuring Sgrena with few bullets in her back.
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Original: An international group of journalists, “Reporters without borders” (Reporters sans frontiers ), said they were “very surprised” at Tuesday’s report released by the U.S. Army.
Revised: An international group of journalists, “Reporters without borders” (Reporters sans frontières ), said they were “very surprised” at Tuesday’s report released by the U.S. Army.
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Original: Ms. Sgrena, a hostage in February In an escalating controversy that has contributed to Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's political problems and created a national uproar in Italy, Italian prosecutors began their own independent probe on Wednesday of the death of Nicola Calipari.
Revised:  In an escalating controversy that has contributed to Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's political problems and created a national uproar in Italy, Italian prosecutors began their own independent probe on Wednesday of the death of Nicola Calipari.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Berlusconi said that Italy would "never endorse" a report on the shooting by US soldiers of an Italian intelligence agent if it was unconvincing.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% An international group of journalists, “Reporters without borders” (Reporters sans frontières), said they were “very surprised” at Tuesday’s report released by the U.S. Army.
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Original:  “We are not convinced that everything possible has been done to establish what happened in this tragedy or to determine the responsibility of all those involved, and we reiterate our appeal for an independent international enquiry by US and Italian authorities," the press freedom organization said.
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Original:  "We will see then what official reaction comes from the Italian government, which has a right to demand sanctions," it said.
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Original:  The position of the U.S. high command, that soldiers had followed procedures, has remained unchanged since they first asserted this shortly after the incident occurred.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% U.S. Secretary of Defense, Donald Rumsfeld said of the report and its investigators, "My latest information is that they the Americans and Italians%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% have not come to a final agreement on a joint report...
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% the Americans and Italians%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% have not come to a final agreement on a joint report...
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Original:  However, he stills upholds the illegality of the war and the way it began, and the apparent lies on the part of the Prime Minister to the people as primary reasons to vote for his party   .
Revised:  However, he stills upholds the illegality of the war and the way it began, and the apparent lies on the part of the Prime Minister to the people as primary reasons to vote for his party . .
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Original: See Also | Was the Iraq war legal?
Revised: See Also Was the Iraq war legal?
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Original:  | Kennedy attacks election system | Question Time Websi
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Original:  | Kennedy attacks election system | Question Time Websi
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Original:  With the UK general election on May 5th , three party leaders from the largest parties in the election were asked questions live on the BBC at 8.30pm this evening.
Revised:  With the UK general election on May 5 , three party leaders from the largest parties in the election were asked questions live on the BBC at 8.30pm this evening.
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Original:  Charles Kennedy (Liberal Democrats), Michael Howard (Conservative  , currently Opposition) and Tony Blair (Labour  , incumbent) were asked questions by an audience representive of the British public, and had no idea of the questions that were asked during this time.
Revised:  Charles Kennedy (Liberal Democrats), Michael Howard (Conservative Party , currently Opposition) and Tony Blair (Labour , incumbent) were asked questions by an audience representive of the British public, and had no idea of the questions that were asked during this time.
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Original:  Charles Kennedy (Liberal Democrats), Michael Howard (Conservative  , currently Opposition) and Tony Blair (Labour  , incumbent) were asked questions by an audience representive of the British public, and had no idea of the questions that were asked during this time.
Revised:  Charles Kennedy (Liberal Democrats), Michael Howard (Conservative , currently Opposition) and Tony Blair (Labour Party , incumbent) were asked questions by an audience representive of the British public, and had no idea of the questions that were asked during this time.
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Original:  Charles Kennedy's period in the 'hot chair' was notable for the largely benevolent questions posed to him, and considerable support evident from applause and cheering at the end of several points made.
Revised:  Charles Kennedy's period in the "hot chair" was notable for the largely benevolent questions posed to him, and considerable support evident from applause and cheering at the end of several points made.
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Original:  He attacked the British 'first past the post' electoral system was 'perverse' and would support a proportional voting system if he got into power.
Revised:  He attacked the British First Past the Post electoral system as "perverse" and said that he would support a proportional voting system if he got into power.
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Original:  Toward the end of the discussion, interruptions by individuals in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program. 
Revised:  Toward the end of the discussion, individuals in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program. 
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Original:   In contrast, the opposition leader entered accompanied with less enthusiasm .
Revised:  When questioned as to whether, upon pressure from the US, he would go to war again in the Middle East without sufficient evidence, he replied strongly "No." Further, he said he could not see the Liberal Democrats in another coalition with any other party that may come into power. In contrast, the opposition leader entered accompanied with less enthusiasm .
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Original:   In contrast, the opposition leader entered accompanied with less enthusiasm .
Revised:  In contrast, the opposition leader entered accompanied with less enthusiasm 
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Original:   Toward the end of the discussion, individuals in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program   .
Revised:  Toward the end of the discussion, hecklers in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program .
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Original:   Toward the end of the discussion, individuals in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program   .
Revised:  Toward the end of the discussion, individuals in the front row interrupted the rounding up of the program . .
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Original: This afternoon the Italian government, led by Silvio Berlusconi, received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate, after it received the confidence from the House yesterday.
Revised: This afternoon the Silvio Berlusconi's government received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate, after it received the confidence from the House yesterday.
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Original: This afternoon the Italian government, led by Silvio Berlusconi, received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate, after it received the confidence from the House yesterday.
Revised: This afternoon the Italian government, led by Silvio Berlusconi, received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate, after it earning the confidence of the House yesterday.
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Original:  The  tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
Revised:  The Semate's tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
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Original:  The  tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
Revised:  The tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared announce these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
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Original:  The  tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
Revised:  The tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence demostrate of the strength and coherence of his coaliction .
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Original:  The  tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coaliction .
Revised:  The tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared that these votes of confidence are demostration of the strongness and coherence of his coalition .
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Original:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise  and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
Revised:  He also declared that he wanted a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
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Original:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise  and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
Revised:  He also declare that he want a change in the electoral law so a bipartisam polical system would rise and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
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Original:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise  and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
Revised:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise , and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
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Original:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise  and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
Revised:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise and that he wants to form a majority government after the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
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Original:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise  and that he want for the next election an unique Party instead of a coaliction
Revised:  He also declare that he want a change in the elctoral law so that a a bipartisam polical system would rise and that he want for the next election .
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Original:  The Senate's tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions  Berlusconi declared these votes of confidence demonstrate the strength and coherence of his coalition.
Revised:  The Senate's tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions . Berlusconi declared these votes of confidence demonstrate the strength and coherence of his coalition.
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Original:  The Senate's tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions  Berlusconi declared these votes of confidence demonstrate the strength and coherence of his coalition.
Revised:  The Senate's tally was 170 pros, 117 cons and no abstentions Berlusconi declared these votes of confidence as demonstrating the strength and coherence of his coalition.
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Original:  He also declared that he wanted a change in the electoral law so  a bipartisan political system would rise , and that he wants to form a majority government after the next election.
Revised:  He also declared that he wanted a change in the electoral law so that a bipartisan political system would rise , and that he wants to form a majority government after the next election.
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Original:  He also declared that he wanted a change in the electoral law so  a bipartisan political system would rise , and that he wants to form a majority government after the next election.
Revised:  He also declared that he wanted a change in the electoral law so a bipartisan political system would srise , and that he wants to form a majority government after the next election.
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Original: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's government received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate Thursday, after it earned the confidence of the House yesterday.
Revised: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's government received a vote of confidence from the Thursday, after it earned the confidence of the House yesterday.
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Original: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's government received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate Thursday, after it earned the confidence of the House yesterday.
Revised: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi's government received a vote of confidence from the Italian Senate Thursday, after it earned the confidence of the yesterday.
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Original: Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long feared extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker, has been found in Arkansas.
Revised: Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker, has been found in Arkansas.
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Original:  There was thought to be only 22 of them left in 1938.
Revised:  There were thought to be only 22 of them left in 1938.
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Original: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago  The birds inhabited a wide swath of American bottomlands and mountain pine forests until the latter part of the 1800's .
Revised: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago The birds inhabited a wide swath of American bottomlands and mountain pine forests until the latter part of the 1800s .
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Original: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker , has been found in Arkansas .
Revised:  Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker , has been found in Arkansas .
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Original: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker , has been found in Arkansas .
Revised: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the , has been found in Arkansas .
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Original: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker , has been found in Arkansas .
Revised: Last confirmed sighting was 60 years ago Wildlife scientists confirmed on Thursday that a bird long thought extinct, the Ivory-billed woodpecker , has been found in .
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Original:  In addition, it has been reported that thousands more are exploding in central Denmark   
Revised:  In addition, it has been reported that thousands more are exploding in central Denmark . 
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Original:  Since there is a hole in the toad's body, entrails and blood explod out of the enlarged hole  
Revised:  Since there is a hole in the toad's body, entrails and blood explod out of the enlarged hole . 
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Original: Scientists in Hamburg  are baffled by what appears to be a widespread case of "Exploding toad".
Revised: Scientists in Hamburg , Germany are baffled by what appears to be a widespread case of "Exploding toad".
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Original:  In addition, it has been reported that thousands more are exploding in central Denmarl , in a town called Låsby located in Mid-Jutland.
Revised:  In addition, it has been reported that thousands more are exploding in central Denmark , in a town called Låsby located in Mid-Jutland.
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Original:  One German scientist is theorizing that the toads are being terrorized by crows who are attempted to peck at their livers.
Revised:  One German scientist is theorizing that the toads are being terrorized by crows who are attempted to peck at the toad's livers.
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Original: Scientists in Hamburg, Germany are baffled by what appears to be a widespread case of "Exploding toad ".
Revised: Scientists in Hamburg, Germany are baffled by what appears to be a widespread case of "Exploding toads ".
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Original:  One German scientist is theorizing that the toads are being terrorized by crows who are attempted to peck at the toad' s livers.
Revised:  One German scientist is theorizing that the toads are being terrorized by crows who attempt to peck at the toad' s livers.
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