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Original:  It is believed that the motorcade was waved through security checkpoints on Macquarie Street and ended up just metres from the hotel where United States President George W. Bush  . Police moved in on the group when one of the pranksters emerged from a vehicle dressed as Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  It is believed that the motorcade was waved through security checkpoints on Macquarie Street and ended up just metres from the hotel where United States President George W. Bush was staying . Police moved in on the group when one of the pranksters emerged from a vehicle dressed as Osama bin Laden.
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Original: Police commissioner Andrew Scipone said the prank could have resulted in someone being injured.
Revised: Police commissioner Andrew Scipione said the prank could have resulted in someone being injured.
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Original:  Two of them , lieutenant Nicolae Grigore while and lead-soldier Alex Zafiu, were transported by helicopter to a Kandahar military hospital, a Romanian Defense Ministry release informs.
Revised:  Two of the soldiers , lieutenant Nicolae Grigore while and lead-soldier Alex Zafiu, were transported by helicopter to a Kandahar military hospital, a Romanian Defense Ministry release informs.
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Original:  Two of the soldiers, lieutenant Nicolae Grigore while and lead-soldier Alex Zafiu, were transported by helicopter to a Kandahar military hospital, a Romanian Defense Ministry release informs.
Revised:  Two of the soldiers, lieutenant Nicolae Grigore and lead-soldier Alex Zafiu, were transported by helicopter to a Kandahar military hospital, a Romanian Defense Ministry release informs.
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Original:  The pilot had already spoken to the passengers through the intercom about the turbulance.
Revised:  The pilot had already spoken to the passengers through intercom about the turbulance.
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Original:  Nurses aboard the plane  treated the injured passengers until the plane landed.
Revised:  Nurses aboard the plane and treated the injured passengers until the plane landed.
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Original:  The pilot had already spoken to the passengers through intercom about the turbulance .
Revised:  The pilot had already spoken to the passengers through intercom about the turbulence .
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Original:  As soon as the seatbelt light came on it was too late for many passengers and the plane, at once, started dropping.
Revised:  As soon as the seat belt light came on it was too late for many passengers and the plane, at once, started dropping.
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Original:  Registered nurse Kathi Nelson and licenced practical nurse Nancy Powers, both from British Columbia, were aboard the plane and treated the injured passengers until the plane landed.
Revised:  Registered nurse Kathi Nelson and licensed practical nurse Nancy Powers, both from British Columbia, were aboard the plane and treated the injured passengers until the plane landed.
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Original: A measure to ban the use of lead bullets in California was moved forward by the California state senate yesterday.
Revised: A measure to ban the use of lead bullets in California was moved forward by the California State Senate yesterday.
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Original:  “ I am elated that the fight to save the condor, North America’s largest bird, is one step closer to reality, ” stated Nava.
Revised:  " I am elated that the fight to save the condor, North America’s largest bird, is one step closer to reality, ” stated Nava.
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Original:  “ I am elated that the fight to save the condor, North America’s largest bird, is one step closer to reality, ” stated Nava.
Revised:  “ I am elated that the fight to save the condor, North America’s largest bird, is one step closer to reality, " stated Nava.
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Original:  “The California condor is a national treasure and with the recent death of a California condor at the Los Angeles Zoo last week from lead poisoning, further highlights the urgent need for my legislation so that our children and grandchildren can know and see these magnificent birds in the wild .” Bill opponents, primarily groups that support hunting and the right to bear arms, argued that lead bullets were not a significant source of the threat to California condors.
Revised:  "The California Condor is a national treasure and with the recent death of a California condor at the Los Angeles Zoo last week from lead poisoning, further highlights the urgent need for my legislation so that our children and grandchildren can know and see these magnificent birds in the wild .” Bill opponents, primarily groups that support hunting and the right to bear arms, argued that lead bullets were not a significant source of the threat to California condors.
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Original:  “The California condor is a national treasure and with the recent death of a California condor at the Los Angeles Zoo last week from lead poisoning, further highlights the urgent need for my legislation so that our children and grandchildren can know and see these magnificent birds in the wild .” Bill opponents, primarily groups that support hunting and the right to bear arms, argued that lead bullets were not a significant source of the threat to California condors.
Revised:  “The California condor is a national treasure and with the recent death of a California condor at the Los Angeles Zoo last week from lead poisoning, further highlights the urgent need for my legislation so that our children and grandchildren can know and see these magnificent birds in the wild ," added Nava. Bill opponents, primarily groups that support hunting and the right to bear arms, argued that lead bullets were not a significant source of the threat to California condors.
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Original:  A statement posted on the web site of the National Rifle Association states, " The most recent scientific review provided to the Commission revealed that previous science attempting to show a link between lead ammunition and condor mortality is severely flawed."
Revised:  A statement posted on the web site of the National Rifle Association states, " the most recent scientific review provided to the Commission revealed that previous science attempting to show a link between lead ammunition and condor mortality is severely flawed."
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Original:  "All of the California condors which die in the wild are brought to us to determine the cause of death . " stated Allison Alberts, Director of Conservation and Research for the Zoological Society of San Diego.
Revised:  "All of the California condors which die in the wild are brought to us to determine the cause of death , " stated Allison Alberts, Director of Conservation and Research for the Zoological Society of San Diego.
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Original:  Studies indicate that this lead is coming from bullet fragments and shot that have been ingested when eating carcasses . " 
Revised:  Studies indicate that this lead is coming from bullet fragments and shot that have been ingested when eating carcasses , " 
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Original:  Studies indicate that this lead is coming from bullet fragments and shot that have been ingested when eating carcasses . " 
Revised:  Studies indicate that this lead is coming from bullet fragments and shot that have been ingested when eating carcasses . " added Alberts.
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Original: A measure to ban the use of lead bullets in California was moved forward by the California State Senate yesterday.
Revised: A measure to ban the use of lead bullets in California was moved forward by the State's Senate yesterday.
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Original:  The bill, which was sponsored by Assemblyman Pete Nava and has letters of support from a number of conservation and environmental groups, was passed by a slim majority of 23 to 15.
Revised:  The bill, which was sponsored by Assemblyman Pete Nava and has letters of support from a number of conservation and environmental groups, was passed by a majority of 23 to 15.
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Original:  Image courtesy of APEC 2007 Taskforce Australian Prime Minister John Howard has announced that leaders of APEC nations have agreed on "aspirational goals" on climate change.
Revised:  Australian Prime Minister John Howard has announced that leaders of APEC nations have agreed on "aspirational goals" on climate change.
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Original:  Image courtesy of APEC 2007 Taskforce 200px|APEC Leaders dress in Driza-Bones to represent Australia's costume.
Revised:  200px|APEC Leaders dress in Driza-Bones to represent Australia's costume.
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Original:  Image courtesy of APEC 2007 Taskforce Leaders attending the APEC summit in Sydney, Australia have worn Driza-Bone coats for their traditional group photo in front of the Sydney Opera House.
Revised:  Leaders attending the APEC summit in Sydney, Australia have worn Driza-Bone coats for their traditional group photo in front of the Sydney Opera House.
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Original: President Băsescu, who was elected in December 2004, has recently recalled many Romanian ambassadors, the latest being the four representatives to Austria, Lithuania, Greece and Croatia Romanian President Traian Băsescu signed an order yesterday recalling Romania's ambassadors to three European Union countries - Austria, Lithuania and Greece, as well as Croatia.
Revised:  Romanian President Traian Băsescu signed an order yesterday recalling Romania's ambassadors to three European Union countries - Austria, Lithuania and Greece, as well as Croatia.
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Original:  The Minister of Foreign Affairs, Mihai Răzvan Ungureanu, said that the recall was not based on political criteria, or as a way of politically undermining the choices of the previous administration, but rather on the efficiency of the diplomats as well as their age, seeing as many of them are past retirement age.
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Original: THe mostly peaceful demonstration marched from Sydney's Town Hall to Hyde Park where they were greeted with a carnival atmosphere.
Revised: The mostly peaceful demonstration marched from Sydney's Town Hall to Hyde Park where they were greeted with a carnival atmosphere.
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Original:  Mr Scipione credited the huge numbers of police and poor weather for the succesusful outcome of the rally.
Revised:  Mr Scipione credited the huge numbers of police and poor weather for the successful outcome of the rally.
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Original:  Commissioner Scipione said  all allegations of police misconduct would be investigated".
Revised:  Commissioner Scipione said " all allegations of police misconduct would be investigated".
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Original: 300px| Police constructing a security perimeter at the rally An anti-APEC rally through the streets of Sydney has attracted around 5000 demonstrators, with up to 18 arrests and two police injured.
Revised:  Police constructing a security perimeter at the rally An anti-APEC rally through the streets of Sydney has attracted around 5000 demonstrators, with up to 18 arrests and two police injured.
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Original:  The demonstrators protested against the 2003 Iraq invasion, climate change, workers' rights and globalisation with many blowing whistles, yelling chants and beating drums.
Revised:  The demonstrators protested against the 2003 Ryan invasion, climate change, workers' rights and globalisation with many blowing whistles, yelling chants and beating drums.
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Original:  "But more importantly, I think it was the combination of the show of force , the police were out there in big numbers, and we don't apologise for that.
Revised:  "But more importantly, I think it was the combination of the show of ass , the police were out there in big numbers, and we don't apologise for that.
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Original:  There have been complaints about the conduct of police which are alleged to of misused special search powers which only apply to the fenced zone surrounding APEC facilities and of heavy-handedness by police.
Revised:  There has been much bitching about the conduct of police which are alleged to of misused special search powers which only apply to the fenced zone surrounding APEC facilities and of heavy-handedness by police.
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Original:  "It's so important - this meeting that happened, 21 leaders - great, but don't just discuss about trade , discuss about human rights, environmental problems that can really impact on a global scale," he said.
Revised:  "It's so important - this meeting that happened, 21 leaders - great, but just discuss about trade , discuss about human rights, environmental problems that can really impact on a global scale," he said.
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Original:  Around 150 people were on board when the driver lost control on a sharp bend near the village of Nagbavji,  smashing through a concrete crash barrier and continueing down into the valley, coming to rest inverted     
Revised:  Around 150 people were on board when the driver lost control on a sharp bend near the village of Nagbavji, smashing through a concrete crash barrier and continueing down into the valley, coming to rest inverted . 
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Original: A minimum of 85 Hindu pilgrims have been killed in India and 64 injured after their lorry and trailer plunged 24m (80ft) into a river gorge late last night.
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Original:  Around 150 people were on board when the driver lost control on a sharp bend near the village of Nagbavji, Rajasthan, smashing through a concrete crash barrier and continueing down into the valley, coming to rest inverted.
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Original: At least two of the soldiers suffered non-life threatening injuries, while the other five were unhurt who are being kept in the hospital for further evaluation.
Revised: At least two of the soldiers suffered non-life threatening injuries, while the other five were unhurt and are being kept in the hospital for further evaluation.
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Original: The performers each mimed one song of their chice , and improvised to one set by a jury.
Revised: The performers each mimed one song of their choice , and improvised to one set by a jury.
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Original:  The surprise finalist was local female Oulo resident Hilkka "Gore Kitty" Suvanto, who has twice previously received the lowest score in qualifying.
Revised:  The surprise finalist was local female Oulu resident Hilkka "Gore Kitty" Suvanto, who has twice previously received the lowest score in qualifying.
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Original: The local government of Arad county in western Romania today launched a project calling for the creation of a new industrial area in the commune of Zimandul Nou.
Revised: The local government of Arad County in western Romania today launched a project calling for the creation of a new industrial area in the commune of Zimandul Nou.
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Original:   The industrial area will be located on the outskirts of the Zimandul Nou commune, which is a fairly small, rural area .
Revised:  The industrial area will be located on the outskirts of the Zimandul Nou commune, which is a fairly small, rural town .
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Original:  Al Queda supporters are enthused by the video coinciding with the 6th anniversary of the September 11, 2001 attacks, but other parts of the Muslim world seemed worried that the video may spawn new attacks creating more instability than there already is
Revised:  Al Qaeda supporters are enthused by the video coinciding with the 6th anniversary of the September 11, 2001 attacks, but other parts of the Muslim world seemed worried that the video may spawn new attacks creating more instability than there already is
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Original:  Al Qaeda supporters are enthused by the video coinciding with the 6th anniversary of the September 11, 2001 attacks, but other parts of the Muslim world seemed worried that the video may spawn new attacks creating more instability  than there already is
Revised:  Al Qaeda supporters are enthused by the video coinciding with the 6th anniversary of the September 11, 2001 attacks, but other parts of the Muslim world seemed worried that the video may spawn new attacks creating more instability in the region than there already is
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Original:  A 52-year-old man is missing in Kanagawa Prefecture, beleived to be dead, and at least 60 people have been injured by the storm.
Revised:  A 52-year-old man is missing in Kanagawa Prefecture, believed to be dead, and at least 60 people have been injured by the storm.
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Original:  Japan Airlines and All Nippon Airways, Japan's two largest air carriers, both said 240 domestic and eight international flights have been cancelled as a direct result of the storm, which is expected to be immediatly followed by Tropical Storm Danas.
Revised:  Japan Airlines and All Nippon Airways, Japan's two largest air carriers, both said 240 domestic and eight international flights have been cancelled as a direct result of the storm, which is expected to be immediately followed by Tropical Storm Danas.
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Original:  According to Kerneltrap.org, on April 7, Torvalds noted, "I detest the centralized SCM model, but if push comes to shove, and we just _can't_ get a reasonable parallell  merge thing going in the short timeframe (ie month or two), I'll use something like SVN on a trusted site with just a few committers . . ."
Revised:  According to Kerneltrap.org, on April 7, Torvalds noted, "I detest the centralized SCM model, but if push comes to shove, and we just _can't_ get a reasonable parallell (sic) merge thing going in the short timeframe (ie month or two), I'll use something like SVN on a trusted site with just a few committers . . ."
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Original:  The program, resting at version 0.04 as of April 13, is, according to Torvalds's README file , a stupid (but extremely fast) directory content manager.
Revised:  The program, resting at version 0.04 as of April 13, is, according to Torvalds's README file : " a stupid (but extremely fast) directory content manager.
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Original: England have beaten India by seven wickets in the seventh and final One-Day International of the series at Lord's, London  England.
Revised: England have beaten India by seven wickets in the seventh and final One-Day International of the series at Lord's, London , England.
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Original:  India, having chosen to bat first , struggled with the bat.
Revised:  India, having won the toss , struggled with the bat.
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Original:  During a recent visit by Chinese Premier Wen Jiabao to the Indian capital of Delhi , a border was finally agreed on paper.
Revised:  During a recent visit by Chinese Premier Wen Jiabao to the Indian capital of , a border was finally agreed on paper.
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Original:  A new cross-border trade route would be allowed through Nathula , in Sikkim, and significant road work was to facilitate higher traffic, at least on the Chinese side.
Revised:  A new cross-border trade route would be allowed through , in Sikkim, and significant road work was to facilitate higher traffic, at least on the Chinese side.
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Original: Image:Mulroney Memoirs.jpg|200px|Book Cover On Sunday Memoirs: 1939-1993 a memoir written by former Prime Minister of Canada Brian Mulroney will be released.
Revised:  On Sunday Memoirs: 1939-1993 a memoir written by former Prime Minister of Canada Brian Mulroney will be released.
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Original:  Image:MulroneyTrudeau.jpg|Mulroney and Trudeau%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mulroney allocates a fair amount of text commenting on his antogonist the late and former Prime Minister Pierre Elliot Trudeau.
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Original:  Mulroney insinuates that the young Trudeau had anti-Semitic beliefs at that time , "This is a man who questioned the Allies when the Jews were being sacrificed and when the great extermination program was on, he was marching around Outremont, Quebec on the other side of the issue."
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Original:  I think these are debates that are best left to some of the people who were around then and academics."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Trudeau's former piers and friends have rallied behind his legacy and made public comments to dampen Mulroney's accusations.
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Original:  a gallant political warrior who loved his country,' Mr. Mulroney would seem to be at such odds with his own views."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tom Axworthy's, response to Mulroney was that Trudeau should be judged by his actions once his values matured and he entered public life, not by "ridiculous" thoughts he entertained briefly in his teens and early twenties.
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Original:  John R. English stated, Trudeau's youthful views must be put in the context of the times, when most Quebecers were so virulently anti-British and opposed to what they saw as a British war that they were blinded to the evils of Hitler's Nazism
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Original:  The 1,152 page tomb outlines Mulroney's version of events during his time as prime minister.
Revised:  The 1,152 page tome outlines Mulroney's version of events during his time as prime minister.
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Original:  [[Image: MulroneyTrudeau .jpg|Mulroney and Trudeau ]]
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Original:  Australia and tournament favourites New Zealand comprehensively defeated their opposition, while defending champions England produced an  unimpressive display to overcome a determined American team.
Revised:  Australia and tournament favourites New Zealand comprehensively defeated their opposition, while defending champions England produced an comparatively unimpressive display to overcome a determined American team.
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Original:  Australia and tournament favourites New Zealand comprehensively defeated their opposition, while defending champions England produced an  unimpressive display to overcome a determined American team.
Revised:  Australia and tournament favourites New Zealand comprehensively defeated their opposition, while defending champions England produced an unimpressive display to overcome the American team.
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Original:  In contrast to the day's earlier matches, an unspectacular England team overcame the United States by just eight points.
Revised:  In contrast to the day's earlier matches, the England team overcame the United States by just eight points.
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