wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Texas Senate Bill 6 requires foster agencies to inquire adopting couples of their sexual preference , causing distress to many, especially among the gay and lesbian community.
Revised: Texas Senate Bill 6 requires foster agencies to inquire of adopting couples their sexual preference , causing distress to many, especially among the gay and lesbian community.
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Original: Texas Senate Bill 6 requires foster agencies to inquire adopting couples of their sexual preference , causing distress to many, especially among the gay and lesbian community.
Revised: Texas Senate Bill 6 requires foster agencies to inquire adopting couples of their sexual preference . This bill has caused distress to many, especially among the gay and lesbian community.
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Original:  And on the other hand, the congressman says that sexual orientation is a choice for the parents: "If they choose to be homosexual or lesbian, that's their choice when they turn 18," he says, regarding the same-sex couples.
Revised:  Talton has also stated that sexual orientation is a choice for the parents: "If they choose to be homosexual or lesbian, that's their choice when they turn 18," he says, regarding the same-sex couples.
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Original:  At least 69 other individuals are being kept at hospitals for observation, after having come in close contact with Mr. Lu  . Lu's death brings the total number of those killed in China by the H5N1 virus to 17 with 26 total being infected in China since 2003
Revised:  At least 69 other individuals are being kept at hospitals for observation, after having come in close contact with Mr. Lu . Lu's death brings the total number of those infected in China by the H5N1 virus to 17 with 26 total being infected in China since 2003
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Original:  At least 69 other individuals are being kept at hospitals for observation, after having come in close contact with Mr. Lu  . Lu's death brings the total number of those killed in China by the H5N1 virus to 17 with 26 total being infected in China since 2003
Revised:  At least 69 other individuals are being kept at hospitals for observation, after having come in close contact with Mr. Lu . Lu's death brings the total number of those killed in China by the H5N1 virus 26 total being infected in China since 2003
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Original:  Chinese officials have confirmed that a man admitted to a hospital on November 27, died on Sunday from the deadly H5N1 Avian Flu virus.
Revised:  Chinese officials have confirmed that a man admitted to a hospital on November 27, died on Sunday from the H5N1 Avian Flu virus.
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Original:  Rudd has become the 26th Prime Minister since Australia's federation in 1901 
Revised:  Rudd has become the 26th Prime Minister since Australia's federation in 1901. 
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Original:  Mr Howard lost his seat that he held for 33 years, 11 as Prime Minister, to Labor candidate Maxine McKew   
Revised:  Mr Howard lost his seat that he held for 33 years, 11 as Prime Minister, to Labor candidate Maxine McKew . 
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Original: After the ceremony Mr. Rudd signed documents to ratify the Kyoto Protocol on climate change calling it the first official act of the new Australian government.
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Original: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs  with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
Revised: In the 3rd day of the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
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Original: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs  with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
Revised: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month , Notebooks and PCs with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
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Original: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs  with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
Revised: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs contained with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
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Original: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs  with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad-core processor launched.
Revised: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month was in the 3rd day , Notebooks and PCs with AMD Phenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad core processor launched.
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Original:  And Intel Taiwan successively held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at TWTC Hall 1 & 3. And their child-company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
Revised:  And Intel Taiwan held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at TWTC Hall 1 & 3. And their child-company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
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Original:  And Intel Taiwan successively held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at TWTC Hall 1 & 3. And their child-company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
Revised:  And Intel Taiwan successively held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 & 3. And their child-company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
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Original:  And Intel Taiwan successively held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at TWTC Hall 1 & 3. And their child-company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
Revised:  And Intel Taiwan successively held two road shows for some DIY experts successively at December 1 & 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at TWTC Hall 1 & 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center. And their subsidiary company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
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Original:  Really, don't be fooled by a NB's price , just consider functionality first!
Revised:  Sincerely, I recommend a consumer not be fooled by a NB's price , just consider functionality first!
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Original:  Really, don't be fooled by a NB's price , just consider functionality first!
Revised:  Really, don't be fooled by a NB's price nut to consider its functionality first!
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Original:  As they battled on some factors like performance and high-definition, some partners answered as Wikinews Reporter Brock questioned : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
Revised:  As they battled on some factors like performance and high-definition, some partners answered as Wikinews Reporter Brock interviewed : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
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Original: In the 3rd day of the 2007 Taipei IT Month , Notebooks and PCs contained with AMDPhenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad core processor launched .
Revised: In the third day of the 2007 Taipei IT Month , Notebooks and PCs contained with AMDPhenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad core processor launched .
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Original: In the 3rd day of the 2007 Taipei IT Month , Notebooks and PCs contained with AMDPhenom and Intel Penryn apparently battled on consumer's market after their own quad core processor launched .
Revised: In the 3rd day of the 2007 Taipei IT Month , Notebooks and PCs contained with AMDPhenom and Intel Penryn processor openly battled for the consumer-market after each company launched their quad core processors .
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Original:  First to Intel , even though they didn't plan to exhibit in IT Month, some partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo still promoted PCs with Core 2 Quad and Notebooks with Centrino Duo .
Revised:  Intel with partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo still promoted PCs with Core 2 Quad and Notebooks with Centrino Duo .
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Original:  First to Intel , even though they didn't plan to exhibit in IT Month, some partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo still promoted PCs with Core 2 Quad and Notebooks with Centrino Duo .
Revised:  First to Intel , even though they didn't plan to exhibit in IT Month, some partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo promoted their desktops with Core 2 Quad and Notebooks with Centrino Duo .
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Original:  First to Intel , even though they didn't plan to exhibit in IT Month, some partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo still promoted PCs with Core 2 Quad and Notebooks with Centrino Duo .
Revised:  First to Intel , even though they didn't plan to exhibit in IT Month, some partners like Acer, Genuine, ASUS, and Lenovo still promoted PCs with Core 2 Quad and notebooks with Centrino Duo .
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for DIY experts. One was on December 1 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1 8. AMD, on the other hand, put on a showcase for IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with a "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth-style exhibit at halls 1 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 and 3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1  8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with  "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1  3 in the Taipei World Trade Center.
Revised:  And IntelTaiwan held two road shows for some DIY expertssuccessively at December 1 8. On the opposite way, AMD showcased in IT Month with "Bee Movie" booth style at Hall 1 3 of the Taipei World Trade Center.
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Original:  And their subsidiary company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
Revised:  AMD's subsidiary company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
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Original:  And their subsidiary company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a newly graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
Revised:  And their subsidiary company ATI showcased HDMI and Full HD with a demonstration of a new graphic card named "Radeon HD2000".
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Original:  As they battled on some factors like performance and high-definition, some partners answered as Wikinews Reporter Brock interviewed : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
Revised:  As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, some partners answered as Wikinews Reporter Brock interviewed : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
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Original: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners  : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
Revised: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners : "No matter whether the consumer chooses a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
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Original: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners  : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
Revised: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, the consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
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Original: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners  : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider on its functionality and practically before purchasing.
Revised: As the two rivals postured over factors like performance and high-definition, Wikinews reporter Rico Shen interviewed some of their partners : "No matter what a consumer will choose a computer with AMD or Intel, a consumer should consider it based on functionality and practically before purchasing.
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Original:  As some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show, NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Revised:  Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show, NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
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Original:  Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show , NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Revised:  For example, some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show , NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
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Original:  Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show , NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Revised:  Some low-price notebook computers (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show , NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
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Original:  Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show , NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Revised:  Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show because notebook computer manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
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Original:  Sincerely, I recommend a consumer not be fooled by a NB's price but to consider its functionality first!"
Revised:  Sincerely, I recommend a consumer not be fooled by a its price but to consider its functionality first!"
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Original:  Responsibility for running a strong Australian economy now falls to Treasurer Wayne Swann , one of Prime Minister Rudd's most trusted lieutenants.
Revised:  Responsibility for running a strong Australian economy now falls to Treasurer Wayne Swan , one of Prime Minister Rudd's most trusted lieutenants.
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Original: In a new study published in Systematics and Biodiversity, researchers describe a new rodent species called the Laotian rock rat .
Revised: In a new study published in Systematics and Biodiversity, researchers describe a new rodent species called the Laotian Rock Rat .
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Original: Researchers in mammalogy have just discovered a new species of rodent that is unlike anything they've ever seen before .
Revised: Researchers in mammalogy have just discovered a new species of rodent that is unlike anything previously identified .
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Original:  They brought it to London, Vermont, Wisconsin, and Gloucestershire, UK for a closer look at its skeleton and DNA.
Revised:  The researchers brought it to London, Vermont, Wisconsin, and Gloucestershire, UK for a closer look at its skeleton and DNA.
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Original:  They found that it wasn't particularly related to anything .
Revised:  Researchers found that the speciman was not particularly related to anything .
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Original:  The last time a new mammal family was created to accommodate a new  discovery was in 1974 when the bumblebee bat was discovered.
Revised:  The last time a new mammal family was created to accommodate a new species discovery was in 1974 when the bumblebee bat was discovered.
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Original:  The researchers think the Laotian rock rats may have split off  a long time ago and porcupines and guinea pigs evolved after that split.
Revised:  The researchers think the Laotian rock rats may have split off a long time ago , with porcupines and guinea pigs evolved after that split.
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Original:  The researchers think the Laotian rock rats may have split off  a long time ago and porcupines and guinea pigs evolved after that split.
Revised:  The researchers think the Laotian rock rats may have split off a long time ago and porcupines and guinea pigs evolving after that split.
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Original:  How did guinea pigs and their relatives get to South America at a time when it was surrounded by water .
Revised:  How did guinea pigs and their relatives get to South America at a time when it was surrounded by water ?
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Original:  Understanding how the guinea pig's new Asian relative is connected to the rest of the family might help explain things
Revised:  Understanding how the guinea pig's new Asian relative is connected to the rest of the family may help to explain this mystery
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Original:  The researchers brought it to London , Vermont, Wisconsin, and Gloucestershire, UK for a closer look at its skeleton and DNA.
Revised:  The researchers brought it to London for a closer look at its skeleton and DNA.
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Original: The former Mayor of Sefton in the United Kingdom has been gaoled for fraudulantly obtaining state benefits.
Revised: The former Mayor of Sefton in the United Kingdom has been jailed for fraudulantly obtaining state benefits.
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Original:  His wife, Catie Walker, was gaoled for eight months for the DLA offence and a concurrent four months for the Income Support swindle
Revised:  His wife, Catie Walker, was jailed for eight months for the DLA offence and a concurrent four months for the Income Support swindle
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Original: The former Mayor of Sefton in the United Kingdom has been jailed for fraudulantly obtaining state benefits.
Revised: The former Mayor of Sefton in the United Kingdom has been gaoled for fraudulantly obtaining state benefits.
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Original:  He was jailed for 15 months for conspiring to defraud £32,871.85 in Disability Living Allowance together with a six months concurrently sentence for conspiracy to defraud £4,000.25 in Income Support.
Revised:  He was gaoled for 15 months for conspiring to defraud £32,871.85 in Disability Living Allowance together with a six months concurrently sentence for conspiracy to defraud £4,000.25 in Income Support.
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Original:  His wife, Catie Walker, was jailed for eight months for the DLA offence and a concurrent four months for the Income Support swindle
Revised:  His wife, Catie Walker, was gaoled for eight months for the DLA offence and a concurrent four months for the Income Support swindle
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Original:  Jarmo Honkamaa, director of Neste's biofuel sector, countered these claims with his beleif that the gas balance remains positive and points to Neste statistics which say biodiesel diesel produces 40-60\% less greenhouse gas emissions than standard diesel.
Revised:  Jarmo Honkamaa, director of Neste's biofuel sector, countered these claims with his belief that the gas balance remains positive and points to Neste statistics which say biodiesel diesel produces 40-60\% less greenhouse gas emissions than standard diesel.
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Original:  Earlier this year  Greenpeace attempted to stop a palm oil tanker ship destined to Neste's existing biodiesel plant in Porvoo, Finland, but failed to stop the delivery.
Revised:  Earlier this year , Greenpeace attempted to stop a palm oil tanker ship destined to Neste's existing biodiesel plant in Porvoo, Finland, but failed to stop the delivery.
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Original:  "The new plantations are to be set up mainly in Indonesia, and increasingly in swamp rain forests ", said Greenpeace's Lauri Myllyvirta.
Revised:  "The new plantations are to be set up mainly in Indonesia, and increasingly in swamp rain forests ," said Greenpeace's Lauri Myllyvirta.
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Original:  Another potential problem has been highlighted by Citigroup, who voiced concerns that Neste may not be able to complete the project on time and to the intended budget.
Revised:  Another potential problem has been highlighted by Citigroup, who voiced concerns that Neste may not be able to complete the project on time and within the intended budget.
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Original:  Construction will start on the third facility  early next year, and is scheduled to end in 2010.
Revised:  Construction on the third facility early next year, and is scheduled to end in 2010.
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Original:  Construction will start on the third facility  early next year, and is scheduled to end in 2010.
Revised:  Construction will start on the third facility will start early next year, and is scheduled to end in 2010.
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