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Original: Pakistan's parliament is scheduled to dissolve itself at midnight Thursday to make way for a new caretaker government to oversee January elections.
Revised: Pakistan's parliament is to dissolved itself at midnight Thursday to make way for a new caretaker government to oversee January elections.
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Original:    Dawn and a few other stations have agreed to abide by a new code of conduct that bars news coverage that directly criticizes President Musharraf , the army or the judiciary.
Revised:  Dawn and a few other stations have agreed to abide by a new code of conduct that bars news coverage that directly criticizes the president , the army or the judiciary.
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Original: Senate chairman and member of the ruling Pakistan Muslim League (PML-Q), Mohammadmian Soomro, was appointed by Musharraf as interim Prime Minister.
Revised: Senate chairman and member of the ruling Pakistan Muslim League (PML-Q), Muhammad mian Soomro, was appointed by Musharraf as interim Prime Minister.
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Original: Senate chairman and member of the ruling Pakistan Muslim League (PML-Q), Muhammad mian Soomro, was appointed by Musharraf as interim Prime Minister.
Revised: Senate chairman and member of the ruling Pakistan Muslim League (PML-Q), Muhammad Mian Soomro, was appointed by Musharraf as interim Prime Minister.
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Original: U.S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a  bankruptcy reform bill,  S.256 , that will wipe out chances for 30,000 to 210,000 families per year to obtain relief from overwhelming debt , according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
Revised: U.S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a bankruptcy reform bill, S.256 , that will wipe out chances for 30,000 to 210,000 families per year , according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
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Original:  The legislation was strongly opposed by consumer advocates who said it  will end a chance for a fresh start in the financial lives of  people by keeping them forever in the yoke of collection agencies, as well as credit card companies and banks who have made it all too easy to obtain high credit limits  .
Revised:  The legislation was strongly opposed by consumer advocates who said it will end a chance for a fresh start in the financial lives of people by keeping them in debt to collection agencies, as well as credit card companies and banks who have made it all too easy to obtain high credit limits .
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Original:  The legislation was strongly opposed by consumer advocates who said it  will end a chance for a fresh start in the financial lives of  people by keeping them forever in the yoke of collection agencies, as well as credit card companies and banks who have made it all too easy to obtain high credit limits  .
Revised:  The legislation was strongly opposed by consumer advocates who said it will end a chance for a fresh start in the financial lives of people by keeping them forever in the yoke of collection agencies, as well as credit card companies and banks who have made it easy to obtain high credit limits .
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Original:  Those who are unable to file for Chapter 7 bankruptcy will then be forced to file under Chapter 13, which requires payment of some debts  based on the financial resources of the debtor.
Revised:  Those who are unable to file for Chapter 7 bankruptcy will then be forced to file under Chapter 13, which requires payment of some debts by order of a judge based on the financial resources of the debtor.
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Original:  Bush disagreed, saying the law was “ restoring integrity to the bankruptcy process .” New personal bankruptcy filings have increased from 172,423 in 1978 to 1,599,986 last year, an increase of 828\%  .
Revised:  In his remarks before signing the bill, which he supported, Bush said, "The bipartisan bill I'm about to sign makes common-sense reforms to our bankruptcy laws. By restoring integrity to the bankruptcy process .” New personal bankruptcy filings have increased from 172,423 in 1978 to 1,599,986 last year, an increase of 828\% .
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Original:  It allowed judges and debtors to come to terms with the unpayable medical bills that can follow a relative’s death, or a family illness.
Revised:  It allowed judges and debtors to come to terms with the costly medical bills that can follow a relative’s death, or a family illness.
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Original:  Such cases formed nearly half of all bankruptcies filed in the USA, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
Revised:  Such cases form nearly half of all bankruptcies filed in the USA, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
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Original:  Now , most of those people will have to work out repayment plans suitable to creditors instead of having debts erased by a judge, according to the new reform , which takes effect in six months.
Revised:  Now many of those people will have to work out repayment plans suitable to creditors instead of having debts erased by a judge, according to the new reform , which takes effect in six months.
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Original:  Now , most of those people will have to work out repayment plans suitable to creditors instead of having debts erased by a judge, according to the new reform , which takes effect in six months.
Revised:  Now , most of those people will have to work out repayment plans suitable to creditors instead of having debts erased by a judge, according to the new law , which takes effect in six months.
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Original:  The new law stipulates that a graph, showing the poorest people in whichever state the consumer is living will be the criteria.
Revised:  The new law stipulates that a graph, showing the poverty level in whichever state the consumer is living will be the criteria.
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Original:  Additionally, a provision that allowed debtors to file their own Chapter 7 fresh start bankruptcy has been changed to require a lawyer, paid by the debtor,  do the filing.
Revised:  Additionally, a provision that allowed debtors to file their own Chapter 7 fresh start bankruptcy has been changed to require a lawyer, paid by the debtor, to do the filing.
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Original:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," exposing his proclivity to make bankruptcy filings more scarce, a demand of the credit industry . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in  bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets - will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
Revised:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," meeting demands of the credit industry . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets - will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
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Original:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," exposing his proclivity to make bankruptcy filings more scarce, a demand of the credit industry . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in  bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets - will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
Revised:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," exposing his proclivity to make bankruptcy filings more scarce, a demand of the credit card companies which they have been pressing for the last eight years . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets - will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
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Original:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," exposing his proclivity to make bankruptcy filings more scarce, a demand of the credit industry . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in  bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets - will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
Revised:  But Bush said that credit will “be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," exposing his proclivity to make bankruptcy filings more scarce, a demand of the credit industry . About 4 percent to 20 percent of those who dissolve their debts in bankruptcy each year in exchange for forfeiting some assets will be disqualified from doing so under the law, according to the American Bankruptcy Institute.
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Original:  Bankruptcy lawyers anticipate a rush to the courthouse to beat the 6 month window before the new reforms take effect.
Revised:  Bankruptcy lawyers anticipate a rush to the courthouse to beat the six-month window before the new reforms take effect.
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Original: The legislation was strongly opposed by some consumer advocates and by  Democrats in Congress, who complained  the lack of debate on exemptions they attempted to introduce  .
Revised: The legislation was strongly opposed by some consumer advocates and by some Democrats in Congress, who complained the lack of debate on exemptions they attempted to introduce .
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Original: The legislation was strongly opposed by some consumer advocates and by  Democrats in Congress, who complained  the lack of debate on exemptions they attempted to introduce  .
Revised: The legislation was strongly opposed by some consumer advocates and by Democrats in Congress, who complained about the lack of debate on exemptions they attempted to introduce .
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Original:  It allowed judges and debtors to come to terms with the costly medical bills that can follow a relative ’ s death, or a family illness.
Revised:  It allowed judges and debtors to come to terms with the costly medical bills that can follow a relative ' s death, or a family illness.
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Original:  In the past, a judge or court representative would calculate an individual ’ s income and subtract necessities of life to come up with a practical repayment plan of some debt.
Revised:  In the past, a judge or court representative would calculate an individual ' s income and subtract necessities of life to come up with a practical repayment plan of some debt.
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Original:  The new law also erased “usury” provisions in lending laws, with some lawmakers saying that paying 30 percent interest was not too much when a debtor was behind on payments.
Revised:  The new law also erased "usury" provisions in lending laws, with some lawmakers saying that paying 30 percent interest was not too much when a debtor was behind on payments.
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Original:  But Bush said that credit will “ be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," meeting demands of the credit card companies which they have been pressing for the last eight years.
Revised:  But Bush said that credit will " be more affordable because when bankruptcy is less common, credit can be extended to more people at better rates," meeting demands of the credit card companies which they have been pressing for the last eight years.
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Original:  “ The big winners under the new law will be the special interests that literally wrote it, particularly the credit card industry," said Travis B. Plunkett, legislative director of the Consumer Federation of America.
Revised:  " The big winners under the new law will be the special interests that literally wrote it, particularly the credit card industry," said Travis B. Plunkett, legislative director of the Consumer Federation of America.
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Original:  But Mallory Duncan, a lawyer for the National Retail Federation, said “ Bankruptcy has gone from a stigma to a financial planning tool for many. ”
Revised:  But Mallory Duncan, a lawyer for the National Retail Federation, said " Bankruptcy has gone from a stigma to a financial planning tool for many. ”
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Original:  But Mallory Duncan, a lawyer for the National Retail Federation, said “ Bankruptcy has gone from a stigma to a financial planning tool for many. ”
Revised:  But Mallory Duncan, a lawyer for the National Retail Federation, said “ Bankruptcy has gone from a stigma to a financial planning tool for many. "
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Original:  People who fail (refuse) to pay or refuse to go to court will punished by a fine and or arrest warrant made out in thier name.
Revised:  People who fail (refuse) to pay or refuse to go to court will punished by a fine and or arrest warrant made out in their name.
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Original: 180px|US President George W. Bush U .S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a major bankruptcy reform bill, making the most sweeping changes to the laws of personal bankruptcy in the past two decades.
Revised: 180px|US President George W. U .S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a major bankruptcy reform bill, making the most sweeping changes to the laws of personal bankruptcy in the past two decades.
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Original: 180px|US President George W. Bush U .S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a major bankruptcy reform bill, making the most sweeping changes to the laws of personal bankruptcy in the past two decades.
Revised: 180px|US President George W. Bush BushU .S. President George W. Bush signed into law Wednesday a major bankruptcy reform bill, making the most sweeping changes to the laws of personal bankruptcy in the past two decades.
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Original:  Paramedics arrived at the scene, but were unable to revive him and pronounced him dead , from excited delirium .
Revised:  Paramedics arrived at the scene, but were unable to revive him and pronounced him dead .
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Original: A video showing a man being tasered by police and subsequently dying at the Vancouver International Airport has been released to the media.
Revised: A video showing a man being by police and subsequently dying at the Vancouver International Airport has been released to the media.
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Original: A video showing a man being tasered by police and subsequently dying at the Vancouver International Airport has been released to the media.
Revised: A video showing a man being tasered by police and subsequently dying at the Vancouver has been released to the media.
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Original:  Robert Dziekanski, 40, was immigrating from Pieszyce , Poland to live with his mother, Zofia Cisowski, in Kamloops , British Columbia.
Revised:  Robert Dziekanski, 40, was immigrating from , Poland to live with his mother, Zofia Cisowski, in Kamloops , British Columbia.
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Original:  Robert Dziekanski, 40, was immigrating from Pieszyce , Poland to live with his mother, Zofia Cisowski, in Kamloops , British Columbia.
Revised:  Robert Dziekanski, 40, was immigrating from Pieszyce , Poland to live with his mother, Zofia Cisowski, in , British Columbia.
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Original:  The incident is being investigated by the RCMP, the British Columbia Coroner's Service, the Vancouver International Airport Authority, and the Commission for Public Complaints Against the RCMP  
Revised:  The incident is being investigated by the RCMP, the British Columbia Coroner's Service, the Vancouver International Airport Authority, and the Commission for Public Complaints Against the RCMP . 
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Original: Police in Amery, Wisconsin state that they have arrested a former teacher's aide that used to work for Amery School District, charged with having sex with one of her 16 year old students.
Revised: Police in Amery, Wisconsin say that they have arrested a former teacher's aide that used to work for Amery School District, charged with having sex with one of her 16 year old students.
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Original:   The margin of error is plus or minus 1.5 percent.
Revised:  Studies pertaining to drugs are often flawed because of their use of a self-reporting methodology. It is very easy for participants in a non-scientific study-- especially teenagers-- to under, over, or misreport their data. The margin of error is plus or minus 1.5 percent.
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Original: The 17th annual Partnership for a Drug-Free America study on teen drug abuse was released this Thursday morning.
Revised: The 17th annual Partnership for a Drug-Free America study on teen drug abuse released its findings Thursday morning.
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Original:  It was only the second year that the survey had studied abuse of legal drugs, and this year it asked for the first time about the use of over-the counter products to get high.
Revised:  This is the second year that the survey had studied abuse of legal drugs, and this year it asked for the first time about the use of over-the counter products to get high.
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Original:  It was only the second year that the survey had studied abuse of legal drugs, and this year it asked for the first time about the use of over-the counter products to get high.
Revised:  It was only the second year the survey studied the abuse of legal drugs, and this year it asked for the first time about the use of over-the counter products to get high.
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Original:  It was only the second year that the survey had studied abuse of legal drugs, and this year it asked for the first time about the use of over-the counter products to get high.
Revised:  It was only the second year that the survey had studied abuse of legal drugs, and the first year it looked into the the use of over-the counter products to get high.
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Original:  This is a part of a serious effort by the operators and regulators to improve our aviation safety and meet international standards," Transport Minister Djusman Syafii Djamal told Radio Elshinta of Jakarta after the ceremonial signing of the document, adding hopes that the deal would cause the removal of the EU ban   .
Revised:  This is a part of a serious effort by the operators and regulators to improve our aviation safety and meet international standards," Transport Minister Djusman Syafii Djamal told Radio Elshinta of Jakarta after the ceremonial signing of the document, adding hopes that the deal would cause the removal of the EU ban . .
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Original:  Indonesia has since been taking steps recently to improve it's air safety, having already started ranking airlines on safety and signing a deal with the International Civil Aviation Organisation to set up an independant regulatory body and improve Air Traffic Control operations.
Revised:  Indonesia has since been taking steps recently to improve it's air safety, having already started ranking airlines on safety and signing a deal with the ICAO to set up an independant regulatory body and improve Air Traffic Control operations.
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Original: The   ban was orriginally placed after three accidents involving Indonesian airliners - the New Year's Day crash of Adam Air Flight 574, which killed 102 people, the subsequent accident involving Adam Air Flight 172, which cracked in half on a hard landing but held together, preventing serious injury, and the March crash of state-run Garuda Indonesia Flight 200, which claimed 23 lives.
Revised: The The ban was orriginally placed after three accidents involving Indonesian airliners - the New Year's Day crash of Adam Air Flight 574, which killed 102 people, the subsequent accident involving Adam Air Flight 172, which cracked in half on a hard landing but held together, preventing serious injury, and the March crash of state-run Garuda Indonesia Flight 200, which claimed 23 lives.
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Original:  The deal will be delivered to the European Commission ahead of a November 19 meeting  to review the placement of all 51 of Indonesia's airlines on the list of air carriers banned in the EU in June after a string of aviation accidents earlier in the year.
Revised:  The deal will be delivered to the European Commission ahead of a November 19 meeting in Brussels to review the placement of all 51 of Indonesia's airlines on the list of air carriers banned in the EU in June after a string of aviation accidents earlier in the year.
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Original: 25 of Indonesia's 45 air carriers as well as some airport managment companies signed a safety deal with the Indonesian government yesterday.
Revised: 45 of Indonesia's 45 air carriers as well as some airport managment companies signed a safety deal with the Indonesian government yesterday.
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Original:  All the accidents involved ageing Boeing 737 aircraft.
Revised:  All the accidents involved aging Boeing 737 aircraft.
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Original:  Despite orriginally threatening a retaliatory ban on European airlines in Indonesian airspace, Indonesia quickly admitted to a poor safety record.
Revised:  Despite originally threatening a retaliatory ban on European airlines in Indonesian airspace, Indonesia quickly admitted to a poor safety record.
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Original:  Indonesia has since been taking steps recently to improve it's air safety, having already started ranking airlines on safety and signing a deal with the ICAO to set up an independant regulatory body and improve Air Traffic Control operations.
Revised:  Indonesia has since been taking steps recently to improve it's air safety, having already started ranking airlines on safety and signing a deal with the ICAO to set up an independent regulatory body and improve Air Traffic Control operations.
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Original: The Iranian Ministry of Culture and Islamic Guidance issued an order banning Al-Jazeera from working in Iran starting on Monday, April 18, 2005.
Revised: The Iranian Ministry of Culture and Islamic Guidance issued an order banning Al-Jazeera from working in Iran starting Monday, April 18, 2005.
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Original:  This is not the first time AlJazeera has crossed paths with regimes in the Middle East.
Revised:  This is not the first time Al Jazeera has crossed paths with regimes in the Middle East.
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Original: This is not the first time Al Jazeera has crossed paths with regimes in the Middle East.
Revised: This is not the first time Al Jazeera has crossed paths with governments in the Middle East.
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Original:  Iraq and Saudi Arabia currently do not allow the channel  operate within their borders.
Revised:  Iraq and Saudi Arabia currently do not allow the channel to operate within their borders.
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Original: Aidan White, IFJ ’ s General Secretary wrote, "This closure is a spiteful act of censorship and a blatant attempt by the authorities to make media the scapegoat for civil unrest.
Revised: Aidan White, IFJ ' s General Secretary wrote, "This closure is a spiteful act of censorship and a blatant attempt by the authorities to make media the scapegoat for civil unrest.
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Original:  According Donald Vance, a professor of Bible studies, said that when no one person at the meeting stood, Oral Roberts asked one of them, "'Are you not ready to start over?'"
Revised:  Donald Vance, a professor of Bible studies, said that when no one person at the meeting stood, Oral Roberts asked one of them, "'Are you not ready to start over?'"
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