wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886,  international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— was embraced in Paris by Louis Pasteur , who granted him an entire floor for research once the Pasteur Institute, the globe's first biomedical institute, opened in 1888.
Revised:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886, international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— was embraced in Paris by Louis Pasteur , who granted him an entire floor for research once the Pasteur Institute, once it opened in 1888.
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Original:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
Revised:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first yogurt cultures for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
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Original:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
Revised:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to suppress the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
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Original:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
Revised:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms , which allegedly fostered the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
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Original:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage , a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
Revised:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage causing degenerative disease, the putative phenomenon termed autointoxication.
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Original:   Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"— that is, constipation— allegedly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
Revised:  Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to identify "chronic intestinal stasis"— that is, constipation— allegedly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
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Original:   Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"— that is, constipation— allegedly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
Revised:  Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"— in lay terms, intractable constipation— allegedly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
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Original:   Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"— that is, constipation— allegedly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
Revised:  Abdominal surgery's pioneer, Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London, drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"— that is, constipation— presumbly , "flooding of the circulation with filthy material".
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Original:  Near 1905, Lane introduced colon bypass and colectomy to treat it , but in the 1920s , abandoning surgery, Lane promoted prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle  . Since 1875, in the American state Michigan, physician John Harvey Kellogg had targeted "bowel sepsis"—an allegedly prime cause of degeneration and disease—at his huge treatment resort, Battle Creek Sanitarium.
Revised:  Near 1905, Lane introduced colon bypass and colectomy to treat it , but in the 1920s , abandoning surgery, Lane began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle . Since 1875, in the American state Michigan, physician John Harvey Kellogg had targeted "bowel sepsis"—an allegedly prime cause of degeneration and disease—at his huge treatment resort, Battle Creek Sanitarium.
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Original:  Near 1905, Lane introduced colon bypass and colectomy to treat it , but in the 1920s , abandoning surgery, Lane promoted prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle  . Since 1875, in the American state Michigan, physician John Harvey Kellogg had targeted "bowel sepsis"—an allegedly prime cause of degeneration and disease—at his huge treatment resort, Battle Creek Sanitarium.
Revised:  Near 1905, Lane introduced colon bypass and colectomy to treat it , but in the 1920s , abandoning surgery, Lane promoted prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle . Since 1875, in the American state Michigan, physician John Harvey Kellogg had targeted "bowel sepsis"—an allegedly prime cause of degeneration and disease—at his health resort, Battle Creek Sanitarium.
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Original:  Kellogg , in fact, had coined the term sanitarium, and Kellogg 's own—yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
Revised:  Having , in fact, had coined the term sanitarium, and Kellogg 's own—yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
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Original:  Kellogg , in fact, had coined the term sanitarium, and Kellogg 's own—yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
Revised:  Kellogg , in fact, coined the term sanitarium, and Kellogg 's own—yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
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Original:  Kellogg , in fact, had coined the term sanitarium, and Kellogg 's own—yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
Revised:  Kellogg , in fact, had coined the term sanitarium, Kellogg yearly received several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities — advertised as the "University of Health".
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Original:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— American doctors who recognized "focal infection" connoted a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like layperson Sylvester Graham.
Revised:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— medical doctors who identified "focal infection" connoted a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like layperson Sylvester Graham.
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Original:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— American doctors who recognized "focal infection" connoted a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like layperson Sylvester Graham.
Revised:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— American doctors who recognized "focal infection" implied a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like layperson Sylvester Graham.
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Original:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— American doctors who recognized "focal infection" connoted a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like layperson Sylvester Graham.
Revised:  A I Tauber, "The two faces of medical education: Flexner and Osler revisited", J R Soc Med, 1992 Oct;85(10):598–602, especially pp 599–600.— American doctors who recognized "focal infection" connoted a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like minister Sylvester Graham.
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Original:  In 1910, lecturing in Montreal at McGill University, he claimed , "The worst cases of anemia, gastritis, colitis, obscure fevers, nervous disturbances of all kinds from mental depression to actual lesions of the cord, chronic rheumatic infections, kidney diseases are those which owe their origin to or are gravely complicated by the oral sepsis produced by these gold traps of sepsis."
Revised:  In 1910, lecturing in Montreal at McGill University, Hunter declared , "The worst cases of anemia, gastritis, colitis, obscure fevers, nervous disturbances of all kinds from mental depression to actual lesions of the cord, chronic rheumatic infections, kidney diseases are those which owe their origin to or are gravely complicated by the oral sepsis produced by these gold traps of sepsis."
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Original:  Focal infection mainstreamed Since 1889, in the American state Minnesota, brothers William Mayo and Charles Mayo had built an international reputation for surgical skill at their Mayo Clinic, by 1906 performing some 5,000 surgeries a year, over 50\% intra-abdominal, a tremendous number at the time, with unusually low mortality and morbidity."
Revised:  Preeminent recognition Since 1889, in the American state Minnesota, brothers William Mayo and Charles Mayo had built an international reputation for surgical skill at their Mayo Clinic, by 1906 performing some 5,000 surgeries a year, over 50\% intra-abdominal, a tremendous number at the time, with unusually low mortality and morbidity."
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Original:  Around 1908, as treatment, Lane introduced colon bypass, and would later introduce colon removal, but  in 1925, abandoning surgery, Lane began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane sealed his reputation as a crank.
Revised:  Around 1908, Lane eventually offered total colon removal, but in 1925, abandoning surgery, Lane began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane sealed his reputation as a crank.
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Original:  Around 1908, as treatment, Lane introduced colon bypass, and would later introduce colon removal, but  in 1925, abandoning surgery, Lane began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane sealed his reputation as a crank.
Revised:  Around 1908, as treatment, Lane introduced colon bypass, and would later introduce colon removal, but in 1925, abandoning surgery, began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane sealed his reputation as a crank.
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Original:  But in the 1910s, as North American medical schools adopted the German academic model—that is, "scientific medicine"
Revised:  But in the 1910s, as North American medical schools emulated the German model—that is, "scientific medicine"
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Original: —medical doctors who identified "focal infection" implied a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like minister Sylvester Graham.
Revised: —medical doctors who recognized "focal infection" implied a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like minister Sylvester Graham.
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Original: —medical doctors who identified "focal infection" implied a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like minister Sylvester Graham.
Revised: —medical doctors who identified "focal infection" were hinting a scientific basis versus the older, alleged "health faddists" like medical doctor Kellogg and like minister Sylvester Graham.
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Original:  Reporting surgical treatment in 1908, Lane eventually offered total colon removal, but eventually favored surgical release of colonic "kinks", and in 1925, abandoning surgery, began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane secured his contemporary reputation as a crank.
Revised:  Reporting surgical treatment in 1908, Lane eventually offered total colon removal, but later favored simply surgical release of colonic "kinks", and in 1925, abandoning surgery, began promoting prevention and intervention by diet and lifestyle, how Lane secured his contemporary reputation as a crank.
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Original:  By the 1970s, however, it was established that antibiotics could trigger bacteria 's switch to their L phase.
Revised:  By the 1970s, however, it was established that antibiotics could trigger bacteria switch to their L phase.
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Original:  Yet until the 1980s, such researchers were scarce, largely via scarce funding for such investigations.
Revised:  Yet until the 1980s, such researchers were scarce, largely due to scarce funding for such investigations.
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Original: The ultimate object of a Bratachari is, therefore, the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life - physical, mental, moral and social;
Revised: The ultimate object of a Bratachari is, therefore, the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life – physical, mental, moral and social;
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Original:  The movement aimed at raising the self-esteem and national awareness among people of undivided India irrespective of religion, caste, sex or age.
Revised:  The movement aimed to raise the self-esteem and national awareness among people of undivided India irrespective of religion, caste, sex or age.
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Original:  The movement aimed at raising the self-esteem and national awareness among people of undivided India irrespective of religion, caste, sex or age.
Revised:  The movement aimed at raising the self-esteem and national awareness of people of undivided India irrespective of religion, caste, sex or age.
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Original:  The movement aimed at raising the self-esteem and national awareness among people of undivided India irrespective of religion, caste, sex or age.
Revised:  The movement aimed at raising the self-esteem and national awareness among people of undivided India regardless of their religion, caste, sex or age.
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Original:  It was a comprehensive programme of physical, mental, and intellectual culture based on the best folk traditions of physical exercise, art, dance, drama, music, singing and social service.
Revised:  It was a comprehensive programme of physical, mental, and intellectual culture , based on folk traditions of physical exercise, art, dance, drama, music, singing and social service.
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Original: "Brata" signifies a solemn or sacred purpose, ideal or objective which is pursued as a joyous rhythmic ritual simultaneously through an integrated employment of thought, word, and physical movement, and is also used to signify the combined joyous integrated ritual itself.
Revised: "Brata" signifies a solemn or sacred purpose, ideal or objective which is pursued as a joyous rhythmic ritual simultaneously through an integrated use of thought, word, and physical movement, and is also used to signify the combined joyous integrated ritual itself.
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Original:  According to the Bratachari, the whole of life should be regarded as a Brata and should be pursued as a complete wholeand as an integrated ritual, inspired by a noble purpose which is at once spiritual and practical.
Revised:  According to the Bratachari, the whole of life should be regarded as a Brata and should be pursued as a complete whole and as an integrated ritual, inspired by a noble purpose which is at once spiritual and practical.
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Original:  The five Bratas are: Knowledge, Labour, Truth, Unity and Joy.
Revised:  The five bratas are: Knowledge, Labour, Truth, Unity and Joy.
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Original:  The name Bratachari thus denotes one who has solemnly undertaken the duty of buildingt up his or her life through the systematic and integrated pursuit to the five Bratas .
Revised:  The name Bratachari thus denotes one who has solemnly undertaken the duty of buildingt up his or her life through the systematic and integrated pursuit to the five bratas .
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Original:  The ultimate object of a Bratachari is , therefore, the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life– physical, mental, moral and social;
Revised:  Therefore the ultimate goal of a Bratachari is , therefore, the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life– physical, mental, moral and social;
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Original:  The ultimate object of a Bratachari is , therefore, the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life– physical, mental, moral and social;
Revised:  The ultimate object of a Bratachari is the attainment of the ideal of the complete man by attaining perfection in self-development in all spheres of life– physical, mental, moral and social;
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Original:  It is, at the same time  an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
Revised:  It is, at the same time , it is an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
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Original:  It is, at the same time  an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
Revised:  It is, at the same time an essential principle of the Bratachari teaching that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
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Original:  It is, at the same time  an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
Revised:  It is, at the same time an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the world , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
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Original:  It is, at the same time  an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, in the first instance, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
Revised:  It is, at the same time an essential principle of the Bratachari creed that before one can be a complete citizen of the World , one must, be a complete citizen of a particular regional unit.
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Original:  The movement seeks to create in each country a Nation-wide discipline of common citizenship among persons of both sexes, of all castes and creeds and of all ages, by developing a high standard of character, physical fitness in ideal and practice, the pursuit of constructive work, an observance of the dignity of labour and a joyous community spirit through common participation in national dances and songs as well as community dances and community songs.
Revised:  The movement seeks to create in each country a Nation-wide discipline of common citizenship among persons of both sexes, of all castes and creeds and of all ages, by developing a high character, physical fitness in ideal and practice, the pursuit of constructive work, an observance of the dignity of labour and a joyous community spirit through common participation in national dances and songs as well as community dances and community songs.
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Original: Gurusaday Dutt, the founder of the movement, in his book "The Bratachari Synthesis"(first published in 1937) wrote  The Movement The movement was propagated by the Bengal Bratachari Society which was started by Gurusaday Dutt.
Revised: Gurusaday Dutt, the founder of the movement, in his book "The Bratachari Synthesis"(first published in 1937) wrote : The Movement The movement was propagated by the Bengal Bratachari Society which was started by Gurusaday Dutt.
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Original:  The Banglaladeshi group started their rally on 19/12/2006 from Birasri in Sylhet, the birthplace of Gurusaday Dutt, and ran for the next 3 days until they reached Banapol port on the border of India.
Revised:  The Bangladeshi group started their rally on 19/12/2006 from Birasri in Sylhet, the birthplace of Gurusaday Dutt, and ran for the next 3 days until they reached Banapol port on the border of India.
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Original:   Bratachari purports to present a complete synthesis of life, an integrated system of culture consisting of a complete philosophy of life, coupled with and expressed through a simple scheme of practical training and discipline for the building up of the inner life and character as well as the body, or in other words, for the simultaneous and harmonious cultivation of the body and soul of man.
Revised:  Bratachari Dance Bratachari Dance Bratachari purports to present a complete synthesis of life, an integrated system of culture consisting of a complete philosophy of life, coupled with and expressed through a simple scheme of practical training and discipline for the building up of the inner life and character as well as the body, or in other words, for the simultaneous and harmonious cultivation of the body and soul of man.
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