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Original:  Ex situ programmes can complement in situ activities in a number of ways including maintaining genetically and demographically viable populations while threats are either better understood or mitigated in the wild .
Revised:  Ex situ programmes can complement in situ activities in a number of ways including maintaining genetically and demographically viable populations while threats are either better understood or mitigated in the wild 
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Original:  Australasian Regional Association of Zoological Parks and Aquaria in Europe, by the European Endangered Species Program;
Revised:  in Europe, by the European Endangered Species Program;
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Original:  European Association of Zoos and Aquaria and in Japan, South Asia, and South East Asia, by the Japanese Association of Zoos and Aquariums, the South Asian Zoo Association for Regional Cooperation, and the South East Asian Zoo Association.
Revised:  and in Japan, South Asia, and South East Asia, by the Japanese Association of Zoos and Aquariums, the South Asian Zoo Association for Regional Cooperation, and the South East Asian Zoo Association.
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Original:  Programmes » EazaAnimal Care Manuals | Association of Zoos Aquariums Sometimes animals are unable to perform certain behaviors in zoos, like seasonal migration or traveling over large distances.
Revised:  Aquariums Sometimes animals are unable to perform certain behaviors in zoos, like seasonal migration or traveling over large distances.
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Original:  Programmes » EazaAnimal Care Manuals | Association of Zoos Aquariums Sometimes animals are unable to perform certain behaviors in zoos, like seasonal migration or traveling over large distances.
Revised:  Programmes » EazaAnimal Care Manuals | Association of Zoos Sometimes animals are unable to perform certain behaviors in zoos, like seasonal migration or traveling over large distances.
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Original:  How and Why Animals Migrate - NatureWorks However a proper zoo enclosure never runs out of food or water, and in case of unfavorable temperatures or weather animals are provided with (indoor) shelter.
Revised:  However a proper zoo enclosure never runs out of food or water, and in case of unfavorable temperatures or weather animals are provided with (indoor) shelter.
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Original:  The UK Animal Welfare Act of 2006, for example, states that prey must be killed for feeding, unless this threatens the health of the URL Some zoos had already adopted such practices prior to the implementation of such policies.
Revised:  The UK Animal Welfare Act of 2006, for example, states that prey must be killed for feeding, unless this threatens the health of the predator. Some zoos had already adopted such practices prior to the implementation of such policies.
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Original: See Association of Zoos & Aquariums, 2020Daniel E. Bender, The Animal Game: Searching for Wildness at the American Zoo (Harvard University Press, 2016).
Revised: See Association of Zoos & Aquariums, 2020 Daniel E. Bender, The Animal Game: Searching for Wildness at the American Zoo (Harvard University Press, 2016).
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Original: Ian Jared Miller, and Harriet Ritvo, The Nature of the Beasts: Empire and Exhibition at the Tokyo Imperial Zoo (2013) pp. 4, 99–105. excerptAso Noriko, Public Properties: Museums in Imperial Japan (Duke UP, 2014).
Revised: Ian Jared Miller, and Harriet Ritvo, The Nature of the Beasts: Empire and Exhibition at the Tokyo Imperial Zoo (2013) pp. 4, 99–105. excerpt Aso Noriko, Public Properties: Museums in Imperial Japan (Duke UP, 2014).
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Original: The expedition was led by the brothers Bartolomé (Pontevedra, 1574-1622 ) and Gonzalo García del Nodal (Pontevedra, 1569 - 1622), with the cosmographer Diego Ramírez de Arellano Chamás serving as pilot (chief navigator).
Revised: The expedition was led by the brothers Bartolomé (Pontevedra, 1574–1622 ) and Gonzalo García del Nodal (Pontevedra, 1569 - 1622), with the cosmographer Diego Ramírez de Arellano Chamás serving as pilot (chief navigator).
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Original: The expedition was led by the brothers Bartolomé (Pontevedra, 1574-1622 ) and Gonzalo García del Nodal (Pontevedra, 1569 - 1622), with the cosmographer Diego Ramírez de Arellano Chamás serving as pilot (chief navigator).
Revised: The expedition was led by the brothers Bartolomé (Pontevedra, 1574-1622 ) and Gonzalo García del Nodal (Pontevedra, 1569 – 1622), with the cosmographer Diego Ramírez de Arellano Chamás serving as pilot (chief navigator).
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Original:  They passed into the Atlantic on March 13, and on they returned to Spain  July 7, 1619.
Revised:  They passed into the Atlantic on March 13, and they returned to Spain July 7, 1619.
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Original:  They passed into the Atlantic on March 13, and on they returned to Spain  July 7, 1619.
Revised:  They passed into the Atlantic on March 13, and on they returned to Spain on July 7, 1619.
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Original:  London Hodder & Stoughton "The Blinds Horn's Hate" by Richard Hough. 163-173
Revised:  London Hodder & Stoughton "The Blinds Horn's Hate" by Richard Hough. 163–173
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Original:  So an average animal of 300 pounds (136 kg) can carry around 75 pounds (34 kg) of equipment in its packs. 
Revised:  So an average animal of 300 pounds (136 kg) can carry around 75 pounds (34 kg) of equipment in its packs. hi
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Original: File:A Quechua girl and her Llama.jpg|A Quechua child with a llama in Cuzco]] Llama hiking, also known as llama trekking or llama caravanning, is an activity where llamas accompany people on walking expeditions, including eco-tourism.
Revised: File:A Chicken girl and her Llama.jpg|A Quechua child with a llama in Cuzco]] Llama hiking, also known as llama trekking or llama caravanning, is an activity where llamas accompany people on walking expeditions, including eco-tourism.
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Original: File:A Quechua girl and her Llama.jpg|A Quechua child with a llama in Cuzco]] Llama hiking, also known as llama trekking or llama caravanning, is an activity where llamas accompany people on walking expeditions , including eco-tourism.
Revised: File:A Quechua girl and her Llama.jpg|A Quechua child with a llama in Cuzco]] Llama hiking, also known as llama trekking or llama caravanning, is an activity where llamas accompany people on hiking and walking trips , including eco-tourism.
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Original:  Llamas have padded feet similar to  a dog, which lets them easily traverse steep and rocky paths while being more environmentally friendly to the ground than horse hooves.
Revised:  Llamas have padded feet similar to those of a dog, which lets them easily traverse steep and rocky paths while being more environmentally friendly to the ground than horse hooves.
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Original:  Llamas have both a thick undercoat and a wooly topcoat which protects them from the cold.
Revised:  Llamas have both a thick undercoat and a woolly topcoat which protects them from the cold.
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Original:  The expeditions can last from as little as a few hours to several days.
Revised:  Expeditions can last from as little as a few hours to several days.
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Original: Therapeutic value [[File:Alpaca trekking (geograph 6126680).jpg| Alpaca trekking at Flanders Moss National Nature Reserve, Scotland.
Revised: Therapeutic value [[File:Alpaca trekking (geograph 6126680).jpg| Walking with an alpaca at Flanders Moss National Nature Reserve, Scotland.
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Original:  Llama trekking is a popular therapeutic activity for disabled children.
Revised:  Llama walks are a popular therapeutic activity for disabled children.
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Original: Therapeutic value [[File:Alpaca trekking (geograph 6126680).jpg|Walking with an alpaca at Flanders Moss National Nature Reserve, Scotland.
Revised: Therapeutic walks [[File:Alpaca trekking (geograph 6126680).jpg|Walking with an alpaca at Flanders Moss National Nature Reserve, Scotland.
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Original: Llamas' excellent endurance combined with biddable and peaceful natures makes them suitable pack animals for hill walking, including for people not used to dealing with more stubborn animals such as mules.
Revised: Llamas' excellent endurance combined with biddable and peaceful natures makes them suitable pack animals for hill walking, unlike more stubborn animals such as mules.
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Original:  Llamas hiking can appeal to people that might not usually participate in endurance walking , such as couples looking for an unusual way to enjoy some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
Revised:  People that might not usually participate in endurance walking , such as couples looking for an unusual way to enjoy some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
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Original:  Llamas hiking can appeal to people that might not usually participate in endurance walking , such as couples looking for an unusual way to enjoy some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
Revised:  Llamas hiking can appeal to people that might not usually participate in endurance walking go llamas hiking, including couples looking for an unusual way to enjoy some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
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Original:  Llamas hiking can appeal to people that might not usually participate in endurance walking , such as couples looking for an unusual way to enjoy some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
Revised:  Llamas hiking can appeal to people that might not usually participate in endurance walking , such as couples looking for some romantic time together, or walking parties that include disabled children.
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Original: Buh, who settled in Trarza in the 1870s, developed a following in St. Louis, and began a pattern of visits to the peanut basin and river valley.
Revised: Buh, who settled in Trarza in the 1870s, developed a following in St. Louis, and began a pattern of visits to the peanut basin and river valley.
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Original:   Saad Buh was to perform many services for the French including at numerous times saving French explorers from the hands of local bands.
Revised:  Sheikh Saad Buh was to perform many services for the French including at numerous times saving French explorers from the hands of local bands.
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Original: Sheikh Saad Buh  was a Moorish, Qadiriyya, Fadiliyya Sufi from Mauritania.
Revised: Sheikh Saad Buh () was a Moorish, Qadiriyya, Fadiliyya Sufi from Mauritania.
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Original:  It was in the late 1860s that Buh established ties with the French administration who were busy in their venture to conquer the Senegalo-Mauritanian zone .
Revised:  It was in the late 1860s that Buh established ties with the French administration who were at the time trying to conquer the Senegalo-Mauritanian zone .
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Original:  He became a dominant figure in a configuration of teachers, schools and zawiyas (lodges) that stretched across the Sahel and Sahara.
Revised:  He became a dominant figure in a configuration of teachers, schools and zawiyas (lodges) across the Sahel and Sahara.
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Original:  Sheikh Saad Buh was to perform many services for the French including at numerous times saving French explorers from the hands of local bands.
Revised:  Buh several times saved French explorers from the hands of local bands.
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Original:  Sheikh Saad Buh was to perform many services for the French including at numerous times saving French explorers from the hands of local bands.
Revised:  Sheikh Saad Buh was to perform many services for the French including at numerous times saving French explorers from local bands.
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Original:  Soleillet was rescued from a local band who pillaged his possessions.
Revised:  Soleillet was rescued from a local band that pillaged his possessions.
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Original:  Buh advised the traveller not to attempt to journey any further into the dangerous Sahelian zone.
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Original:  He would go on diplomatic missions for them- such as trying to convince Lat-Dior to let the French build their railway, or to dissuade Ma Ba from warring with the French- he would counsel them as best how to advance in their conquest and he would become an intermediary between the Frenchcolonial government and his disciples (talibes).
Revised:  He went on diplomatic missions for them- such as trying to convince Lat-Dior to let the French build their railway, or to dissuade Ma Ba from warring with the French- he would counsel them as best how to advance in their conquest and he would become an intermediary between the Frenchcolonial government and his disciples (talibes).
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Original:  In return for his aid to the French Buh would seek services from them such as free travel, gifts and aid for his camps in Mauritania.
Revised:  In return for his aid to the French Buh sought free travel, gifts and aid for his camps in Mauritania.
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Original:  He gained permission from the French to tour Senegal (which was comparatively richer than Mauritania) in order to collect gifts, alms which he re-distributed to his disciples in Mauritania.
Revised:  He gained permission from the French to tour Senegal (which was comparatively richer than Mauritania) in order to collect gifts, alms which he gave to his disciples in Mauritania.
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Original:  In 1910 he wrote a letter of counsel  to Ma El Inin urging him not to wage war on the French and pointing out that French stability had allowed Islam to spread and acquire stability in the region.
Revised:  In 1910 he wrote a letter of counsel to Ma El Inin urging him not to wage war on the French , saying that French stability had allowed Islam to spread and acquire stability in the region.
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Original:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
Revised:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to argue that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
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Original:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
Revised:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
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Original:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
Revised:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . He was said to be extremely fat and at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
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Original:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled but very smart indeed .
Revised:  He very cleverly used sources from the Koran to demonstrate that Islam should be a pacifist religion and his example would set a precedent to all those marabouts to follow him, who would indulge in similar tactics to prove their allegiance to the French . As a person it is said that he was extremely fat, at times disgruntled .
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Original:  Museum and Botanic Garden,
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Original:  Esperance, NY Missouri Botanical Garden, St. Louis, MO The Morton Arboretum, Lisle, IL Mt. Cuba Center, Inc., Greenville, DE Norfolk Botanic Garden, Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum, Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum, San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden, Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College, Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum, Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA
Revised:  Esperance, NY Missouri Botanical Garden, St. Louis, MO The Morton Arboretum, Lisle, IL Mt. Cuba Center, Inc., Greenville, DE Norfolk Botanical Garden, Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum, Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum, San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden, Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College, Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum, Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA
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Original: PlantCollections ™ - A Community Solution is an Institute of Museum and Library Services (IMLS) National Leadership grant in the Building Digital Resources category that accesses the data found in plant records databases of botanic gardens and arboreta through distributed queries.
Revised: PlantCollections is an electronic database which will combine and store documented records of the diverse living plant collections of 16 botanical gardens and arboreta through distributed queries.
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Original:  BG-Base, a manufacturer of proprietary software applications for the botanic garden community has created an export module for participants utilizing their software applications  .  Sixteen botanic gardens have agreed to participate in 2 phases to develop, test and implement an open source software applications .
Revised:  BG-Base, a manufacturer of proprietary software applications for the botanic garden community has created an export module for participants utilizing their software applications . Sixteen botanic gardens have agreed to participate in two phases to develop, test and implement an open source software applications .
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Original:  BG-Base, a manufacturer of proprietary software applications for the botanic garden community has created an export module for participants utilizing their software applications  .  Sixteen botanic gardens have agreed to participate in 2 phases to develop, test and implement an open source software applications .
Revised:  BG-Base, a manufacturer of proprietary software applications for the botanic garden community has created an export module for participants utilizing their software applications . Sixteen botanic gardens have agreed to participate in 2 phases to develop, test and implement the project .
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Original:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications   to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
Revised:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
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Original:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications   to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
Revised:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
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Original:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications   to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
Revised:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
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Original:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College , Swarthmore, PA United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications   to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
Revised:  Norfolk, VA The North Carolina Arboretum , Asheville, NC San Francisco Botanical Garden and Strybing Arboretum , San Francisco, CA Santa Barbara Botanic Garden , Santa Barbara, CA Scott Arboretum of Swarthmore College United States National Arboretum , Washington, DC University of Washington Botanic Gardens, Seattle, WA The software applications to be utilized include Web Applications for the Semantic Architecture of Biodiversity Information (WASABI) -
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