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Original:  The surge is expected to cause little damage and only localised flooding , however the Thames Barrier is expected to be closed.
Revised:  The surge is expected to cause little damage , however the Thames Barrier is expected to be closed.
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Original: Image:Thames.barrier.5.london.arp.jpg|The Thames Barrier in London United Kingdom]] A 1.5m tidal surge is expected tonight in the United Kingdom and could lead to localised flooding on the Kent coast.
Revised: Image:Thames.barrier.5.london.arp.jpg|The Thames Barrier in London United Kingdom]] A 1.5m tidal surge is expected tonight in the United Kingdom and could lead to flooding on the Kent coast.
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Original: Image:Thames.barrier.5. london.arp.jpg|The Thames Barrier in London United Kingdom A 1.5m tidal surge is expected tonight in the United Kingdom and could lead to flooding on the Kent coast.
Revised:  A 1.5m tidal surge is expected tonight in the United Kingdom and could lead to flooding on the Kent coast.
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Original:  The Environment Agency have said that there is "extreme danger to life and property" and have evacuated 200 people on the coast. 1,300 hundred properties are thought to be in the affected area.
Revised:  The Environment Agency have said that there is "extreme danger to life and property" and have evacuated 200 people on the coast. 1,300 properties are thought to be in the affected area.
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Original:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
Revised:  Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
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Original:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
Revised:  * Hugo References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
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Original:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
Revised:  * Hugo Chavez %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
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Original:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
Revised:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
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Original:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Demonstrations Category:Central America Category:November 8, 20
Revised:  * Hugo Chavez References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Venezuela demonstrations Chave
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Original: The proposed amendments would remove any limits on presidential terms, allow the president to control the Central Bank and enable him create new provinces governed by his own appointees .
Revised: The proposed amendments would remove any limits on presidential terms, allow the president to control the Central Bank and enable him create new provinces governed by his own appointees 
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hugo Chave
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hugo Chave
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Original: In November 2007, tens of thousands of Venezuelans participated in a march in Caracas to protest Venezuela President Hugo Chavez 's efforts to change the Constitution of Venezuela.
Revised: In November 2007, tens of thousands of Venezuelans participated in a march in Caracas to protest President Hugo Chávez 's efforts to change the Constitution of Venezuela.
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Original:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Merida , Maracaibo, Puerto La Cruz, San Cristobal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
Revised:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Mérida , Maracaibo, Puerto La Cruz, San Cristobal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
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Original:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Merida , Maracaibo, Puerto La Cruz, San Cristobal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
Revised:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Merida , Maracaibo, Puerto la Cruz, San Cristobal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
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Original:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Merida , Maracaibo, Puerto La Cruz, San Cristobal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
Revised:  Demonstrations occurred in the cities of Merida , Maracaibo, Puerto La Cruz, San Cristóbal , Barquisimeto and Valencia on Wednesday.
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Original:  Chavez is seeking to enact a number of controversial reforms, but is seeking to submit them for a public approval via a national referendum on December 2.
Revised:  Chávez is seeking to enact a number of controversial reforms, but is seeking to submit them for a public approval via a national referendum on December 2.
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Original:  There are concerns that the protests could disrupt the arrangements for the referendum .
Revised:  There are concerns that the protests could disrupt the arrangements for the referendum 
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Original:  The proposed amendments would remove any limits on presidential terms, allow the president to control the Central Bank of Venezuela and enable him to create new provinces governed by his own appointees
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Original:  A BBC source said: "This is being discussed at the highest level."
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Original: It is believed that the BBC had hoped  a surplus in its pension fund could be used to bridge the  £50 million gap — but the trustees of the fund have said "no".
Revised: It is believed that the BBC had hoped that a surplus in its pension fund could be used to bridge the £50 million gap — but the trustees of the fund have said "no".
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Original:  In recent years members of the BBC pension scheme have been asked to increase their contributions , the BBC  having reduced its contribution  when the stock market was doing well .
Revised:  In recent years members of the BBC pension scheme have seen their contributions into it increase regularly , the BBC having reduced its contribution when the stock market was doing well .
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Original:  In recent years members of the BBC pension scheme have been asked to increase their contributions , the BBC  having reduced its contribution  when the stock market was doing well .
Revised:  In recent years members of the BBC pension scheme have been asked to increase their contributions , the BBC — like many other employers — having reduced its contribution when the stock market was doing well .
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Original:  BECTU general secretary, Gerry Morrissey is quoted as saying: "If the BBC gets less than £50 million for BBC Resources then how can it fulfil  its duty of care to licence fee payers?"
Revised:  BECTU general secretary, Gerry Morrissey is quoted as saying: "If the BBC gets less than £50 million for BBC Resources then how can it fulfil sic its duty of care to licence fee payers?"
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Original:  As of the 2nd Day of 2007 BWC , Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending their own games each other with their aggressive batting potential as they thought them just warming-up matches.
Revised:  As of the 2nd Day of 2007 BWC . Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending their own games each other with their aggressive batting potential as they thought them just warming-up matches.
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Original:  As of the 2nd Day of 2007 BWC , Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending their own games each other with their aggressive batting potential as they thought them just warming-up matches.
Revised:  As of the 2nd Day of 2007 BWC , Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending early the games against their opponents as their aggressive batting made it look like batting practice.
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Original:  Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending early the games against their opponents as their aggressive batting made it look like batting practice.
Revised:  Italy, Chinese Taipei, Japan, and Canada easily won by ending early the games against their opponents as their aggressive hitting made it look like batting practice.
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Original:  South Korea vs Venezuela With they closed their own opponents' batting to win, it became a truly pitching game.
Revised:  South Korea vs Venezuela With both pitchers shutting down their opponents' batting to win, it became a truly pitching game.
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Original:  Before the 6th inning, a 0-0 duel is still uphold .
Revised:  Before the 6th inning, a 0-0 double shutout was still holding .
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Original:  But at the top of 7th inning, with Kim Joo Chan and Lee Seung Hwa successively hit HRs and some effective battings, Korea finally beat Venezuela with  4-0.
Revised:  But at the top of 7th inning, with Kim Joo Chan and Lee Seung Hwa successively hit HRs and some effective battings, Korea finally beat Venezuela with a final score of 4-0.
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Original: USA vs Panama With Mexico's errors and some progressive battings, USA won Mexico with 3-0 last night .
Revised: USA vs Panama Last night, assisted by Mexico's errors and some progressive battings, USA won Mexico with 3-0 last night .
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Original: USA vs Panama With Mexico's errors and some progressive battings, USA won Mexico with 3-0 last night .
Revised: USA vs Panama With Mexico's errors and some key hits, USA defeated Mexico with 3-0 last night .
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Original: USA vs Panama With Mexico's errors and some progressive battings, USA won Mexico with 3-0 last night .
Revised: USA vs Panama With Mexico's errors and some progressive battings, USA won Mexico with 3-0 .
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Original:  Today, they faced Panama, who won Spainwith 5-0 at yesterday's opening match.
Revised:  Today, the Americans faced Panama, who won Spainwith 5-0 at yesterday's opening match.
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Original:  Today, they faced Panama, who won Spainwith 5-0 at yesterday's opening match.
Revised:  Today, they faced Panama, who beat Spain, 5-0 at yesterday's opening match.
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Original:  Today, they faced Panama, who won Spainwith 5-0 at yesterday's opening match.
Revised:  Today, they faced Panama, who won Spainwith 5-0 , in yesterday's opening match.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  Starting pitcher, Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, and relief pitchers, Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens , effectively closed down Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's offense. USA scored 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 runs in the first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
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Original:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings , USA finally won Mexico with 7-0.
Revised:  With starting pitcher Matt Wright, relief pitchers Chris Perez and Jeff Stevens effectively closed Panama's batting, and USA scores 4 RBIs at first two innings and on to a comfortable victory at 7-0.
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Original: Netherlands vs Australia After Australia was reversed by Cuba's 2 HRs  yesterday, even though they have rights to reverse the game at the bottom of 9th inning, but Netherlands shouldn't be looked down.
Revised: Netherlands vs Australia After Australia was reversed by Cuba's 2 HRs , yesterday, even though they have rights to reverse the game at the bottom of 9th inning, but Netherlands shouldn't be looked down.
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Original:  Before the 6th inning, they drew with 2-2.
Revised:  Before the 6th inning, the teams were tied 2-2.
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Original:  The 9th inning was finally the key inning, even though Netherlands scored first , but the caused errorsand Australian player Trent Oeltjen reversed this gamewith 4-3 by hitting a game-winning hit with 1 RBI .
Revised:  The game was decided in the 9th inning. The Netherlands scored first , but the caused errorsand Australian player Trent Oeltjen reversed this gamewith 4-3 by hitting a game-winning hit with 1 RBI .
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Original:  The 9th inning was finally the key inning, even though Netherlands scored first , but the caused errorsand Australian player Trent Oeltjen reversed this gamewith 4-3 by hitting a game-winning hit with 1 RBI .
Revised:  The 9th inning was finally the key inning, even though Netherlands scored first , but the caused errorsand Australian player Trent Oeltjen secured the game, 4-3 by hitting a game-winning hit with 1 RBI .
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Original: Auvinen had no previous criminal convictions, and had received his gun liscence several weeks previously.
Revised: Auvinen had no previous criminal convictions, and had received his gun license several weeks previously.
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Original:  "I, as a natural selector, will eliminate all who I see unfit, disgraces of human race and failures of natural selection.  
Revised:  "I, as a natural selector, will eliminate all who I see unfit, disgraces of human race and failures of natural selection. " 
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Original: "He died at 22h14 of a one-bullet injury in the head," said traumatology physician Eero Hirvensalochief of the Helsinki University Hospital.
Revised: "He died at 22h14 of a one-bullet injury in the head," said traumatology physician Eero Hirvensalo, chief of the Helsinki University Hospital.
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Original:  He was an active member of a local shooting club, where he was highly recommended as a sharp shooter source? . He purchased his gun on October 19.
Revised:  He was an active member of a local shooting club, where he was highly recommended as a sharp shooter . He purchased his gun on October 19.
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Original: Auvinen, 18, murdered his headmistress , school nurse and six students, as well as wounding one other victim, before turning his gun on himself.
Revised: Auvinen, 18, shot the principal , school nurse and six students, as well as wounding one other victim, before turning his gun on himself.
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Original: Auvinen, 18, murdered his headmistress , school nurse and six students, as well as wounding one other victim, before turning his gun on himself.
Revised: Auvinen, 18, murdered his headmistress , school nurse and six students, as well as wounding one other victim, before turning the gun on himself.
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Original:  When police special units arrived on-scene and entered the school  they were initially shot at, but when they reached Auvinen he was already unconscious, and no rounds were fired by the police.
Revised:  When police special units entered the school they were initially shot at, but when they reached Auvinen he was already unconscious, and no rounds were fired by the police.
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Original:  When police special units arrived on-scene and entered the school  they were initially shot at, but when they reached Auvinen he was already unconscious, and no rounds were fired by the police.
Revised:  When police special units arrived on-scene and entered the school area they were initially shot at, but when they reached Auvinen he was already unconscious, and no rounds were fired by the police.
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Original: Dark Floors, acted in English by a largely Finnish cast, cost  4.2 million euros (approximately $6 million) to make.
Revised: Dark Floors, acted in English by a largely Finnish cast, cost € 4.2 million euros (approximately $6 million) to make.
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Original: Dark Floors, acted in English by a largely Finnish cast, cost  4.2 million euros (approximately $6 million) to make.
Revised: Dark Floors, acted in English by a largely Finnish cast, cost 4.2 million (approximately US $6 million) to make.
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Original:  It will make it's full premiere in Finland on February 8, 2007, although advance screenings  begin this year.
Revised:  It will make it's full premiere in Finland on February 8, 2007, although advance screenings will begin this year.
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Original:  Lordi recently attended the Cannes Film Festival to promote the movie, where the band's lead vocalist and frontman described it as a "traditional modern horror" and promised "horrific scenes ".
Revised:  Lordi recently attended the Cannes Film Festival to promote the movie, where the band's lead vocalist and frontman described it as a "traditional modern horror" and promised "horrific scenes ."
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Original:  The cost of the device is set as £269 on a minimum £35 per month contract and will be sold at w: Carphone Warehouse, O2 and Apple stores across the UK.
Revised:  The cost of the device is set as £269 on a minimum £35 per month contract and will be sold at The Carphone Warehouse, O2 and Apple stores across the UK.
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Original:  The phone launches tommorrow at 6.02pm GMT (UTC +0) exclusively onto the O2 network amid controvesy.
Revised:  The phone launches tommorrow at 6.02pm UTC exclusively onto the O2 network amid controvesy.
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Original: Chemists from the w: University of Delaware, Newark, in collaboration with the Wisconsin-Madison, recently reported their preparation of a complex containing two chromium atoms connected by the shortest ever metal-metal bond, 1.8028 Å (0.l nm) long.
Revised: Chemists from the University of Delaware, Newark, in collaboration with the Wisconsin-Madison, recently reported their preparation of a complex containing two chromium atoms connected by the shortest ever metal-metal bond, 1.8028 Å (0.l nm) long.
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Original:  The first compound with a quintuple bond was not found until 2005.
Revised:  The first compound with a quintuple bond was found in 2005.
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Original:  Klaus H. Theopold and graduate student Kevin A. Kreisel, believe the compound contains a quintuple bond, i.e., five bonds between the two chromiums .
Revised:  Klaus H. Theopold and graduate student Kevin A. Kreisel, believe the compound contains a quintuple bond, i.e., five bonds between the two chromium atoms .
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Original:  The first compound with a quintuple bond was found in 2005.
Revised:  The first compound with a quintuple bond was reported in 2005.
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Original:  The bond length is 0.026 Å shorter than the previous record, a chromium-chromium complex prepared in 1978 by F.
Revised:  The bond length is 0.026 Å shorter than the previous record, a dichromium complex reported in 1978 by F.
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Original:  Albert Cotton , which contained a quadruple bond 1.828 Å long
Revised:  Albert Cotton and coworkers, which featured a quadruple bond 1.828 Å long
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Original: For the governmental people, after the "Taipei International Flower Exhibition" and "UN for Taiwan" torch relay ended last week, President of R.O.C. Shui-bian Chen , Premier of Republic of China Chun-hsiung Chang , and Spokesman of Executive Yuan of R.O.C. Jung-tai Cho visited  two shows successively and was focused by media in Taiwan.
Revised: For the governmental people, after the "Taipei International Flower Exhibition" and "UN for Taiwan" torch relay ended last week, President of R.O.C. Shui-bian Chen , Premier of Republic of China Chang Chun-hsiung, and spokesman for the Executive Yuan Jung-tai Cho visited two shows successively and was focused by media in Taiwan.
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Original: For the governmental people, after the "Taipei International Flower Exhibition" and "UN for Taiwan" torch relay ended last week, President of R.O.C. Shui-bian Chen , Premier of Republic of China Chun-hsiung Chang , and Spokesman of Executive Yuan of R.O.C. Jung-tai Cho visited  two shows successively and was focused by media in Taiwan.
Revised: For the governmental people, after the "Taipei International Flower Exhibition" and "UN for Taiwan" torch relay ended last week, President of R.O.C. Shui-bian Chen , Premier of Republic of China Chun-hsiung Chang , and Spokesman of Executive Yuan of R.O.C. Jung-tai Cho visited the two shows successively and was focused by media in Taiwan.
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Original:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, cared by Sheng-mao Hou ( Minister of Health , Executive Yuan) .
Revised:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, overseen by Sheng-mao Hou ( Minister of Health , Executive Yuan) .
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Original:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, cared by Sheng-mao Hou ( Minister of Health , Executive Yuan) .
Revised:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, cared by Sheng-mao Hou , Minister of Health , Executive Yuan) .
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Original:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, cared by Sheng-mao Hou ( Minister of Health , Executive Yuan) .
Revised:  With the recent issue of prices on commodities , President Chen avoided to answer those questions than medical industry development, cared by Sheng-mao Hou ( Minister of Health .
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Original:  Those events above caused a simple show in Taipei World Trade Center become a good promotional stage before 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections  
Revised:  Those events above caused a simple show in Taipei World Trade Center become a good promotional stage before 2008 Taiwan Presidential Elections . 
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