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Original:  Soon afterwards Jonny Wilkinson kicked a penalty to equalize for England but Montgomery restored South Africa's lead just three minutes later.
Revised:  Soon afterwards Jonny Wilkinson kicked a penalty to equalise for England but Montgomery restored South Africa's lead just three minutes later.
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Original: The 1st edition of the Old Firm Derby  ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic which brought the 2 clubs level  at the top of the table today .
Revised: The first Old Firm Derby ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic which brought the 2 clubs level at the top of the table today .
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Original: The 1st edition of the Old Firm Derby  ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic which brought the 2 clubs level  at the top of the table today .
Revised: The 1st edition of the Old Firm Derby ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic . at the top of the table today .
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Original:    Walter Smith had claimed last season's derby victories meant nothing because Celtic were already Scottish champions in theory.
Revised:  Rangers manager Walter Smith had claimed last season's derby victories meant nothing because Celtic were already Scottish champions in theory.
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Original:    Walter Smith had claimed last season's derby victories meant nothing because Celtic were already Scottish champions in theory.
Revised:  Walter Smith had claimed last season's derby victories over Celtic meant nothing, because Celtic were already Scottish champions in theory.
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Original:  But this result could determine if Rangers win the championship .
Revised:  This result could determine if Rangers win the championship .
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Original:  The 1st chance of the match fell to Celtic when Scott McDonald, who played as a lone striker, tried overhead kick which tipped wide.
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Original: The first Old Firm Derby of the 2007-08 Scottish Premier League ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic.
Revised: The first of the ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic.
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Original: The first Old Firm Derby of the 2007-08 Scottish Premier League ended in a 3-0 victory for Rangers over Celtic.
Revised: The first Old Firm Derby of the 2007-08 Scottish Premier League ended in a 3-0 victory for over Celtic.
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Original:  However Rangers took the lead when Nacho Novo headed a goal just inside the half hour mark.
Revised:  However Rangers took the lead when headed a goal just inside the half hour mark.
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Original:  Barry Ferguson scored Rangers' second goal soon after half time, while Novo scored a penalty to add their third with ten minutes remaining.
Revised:  scored Rangers' second goal soon after half time, while Novo scored a penalty to add their third with ten minutes remaining.
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Original:  GUS is to pay Littlewoods STG £44m (EUR€64m / US$83m ) for the 33 stores.
Revised:  GUS is to pay Littlewoods STG £44m (EUR€64m / USD 83 million ) for the 33 stores.
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Original:  Littlewoods is owned by Sir Frederick and Sir David Barclay who bought the business in 2002 for STG £750m .
Revised:  Littlewoods is owned by Sir Frederick and Sir David Barclay who bought the business in 2002 for STG GBP 750 million .
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Original:  Speculation is now rift that the firm may also sell its largest asset;
Revised:  Speculation is now rife that the firm may also sell its largest asset;
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Original:  The firm revealed that it had made accumulated losses at the Index chain of more than £100m in their 20-year history.
Revised:  The firm revealed that it had made accumulated losses at the Index chain of more than 
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Original:  Littlewoods is owned by Sir Frederick and Sir David Barclay who bought the business in 2002 for STG GBP 750 million  . Speculation is now rife that the firm may also sell its largest asset — the 119 Littlewoods stores chain 
Revised:  Littlewoods is owned by Sir Frederick and Sir David Barclay who bought the business in 2002 for GBP 750 million . Speculation is now rife that the firm may also sell its largest asset — the 119 Littlewoods stores chain 
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Original: frame|An Index catalogue Liverpool - The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3 , 200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
Revised: frame|An Index catalogue Liverpool - The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3 200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
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Original: frame|An Index catalogue Liverpool - The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3 200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
Revised: frame|An Index catalogue The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3 200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Littlewoods is owned by Sir Frederick and Sir David Barclay who bought the business in 2002 for GBP 750 million (EUR 1.1 billion, US$ 1.42 billion).
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Original:  The company is one in a line of retailers feeling the pinch of consumers spending including Allders and The Gadget Shop.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There are rumours around that the Littlewoods chain of stores is also going soon, possibly to the Associated British Foods-owned discount clothing retailer Primark
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There are rumours around that the Littlewoods chain of stores is also going soon, possibly to the Associated British Foods-owned discount clothing retailer Primark
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Original: frame|An Index catalogue The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3,200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
Revised:  The large UK retail group Littlewoods is set to make 3,200 staff redundant and close 126 of its Index catalogue-based shops.
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Original:  This will pave the way for more business-ready productivity tools.   
Revised:  This will pave the way for more business-ready productivity tools. ” 
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Original: Customers have four options, and can implement all or any one of them: * Core Office Communication Server 2007 – provides instant messaging and on-premise Microsoft Live Meeting.
Revised: Customers have four options, and can implement all or any one of them: Core Office Communication Server 2007 – provides instant messaging and on-premise Microsoft Live Meeting.
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Original:  * Office Communication Server: Telephony – enables call routing tracking and management, VoIP gateway and public branch exchange (PBX) integration.
Revised:  Office Communication Server: Telephony – enables call routing tracking and management, VoIP gateway and public branch exchange (PBX) integration.
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Original:  * Audio and Video Conferencing – allows point-to-point conference, video conference and VoIP audio conference.
Revised:  Audio and Video Conferencing – allows point-to-point conference, video conference and VoIP audio conference.
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Original:  * Exchange Unified Messaging – provides voicemail, e-mail and fax in Microsoft Outlook, and anywhere access of Microsoft Outlook Inbox and Calendar
Revised:  Exchange Unified Messaging – provides voicemail, e-mail and fax in Microsoft Outlook, and anywhere access of Microsoft Outlook Inbox and Calendar
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Original: Dell Inc. is partnering up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to break into the Unified Communications and VoIP businesses .
Revised: Dell Inc. anounced on Tuesday that it will partner up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to break into the Unified Communications and VoIP businesses .
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Original: Dell Inc. is partnering up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to break into the Unified Communications and VoIP businesses .
Revised: Dell Inc. is partnering up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to sell Unified Communications and VoIP businesses .
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Original: Dell Inc. is partnering up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to break into the Unified Communications and VoIP businesses .
Revised: Dell Inc. is partnering up with the Microsoft-Nortel Innovative communications alliance (ICA) team to break into the Unified Communications and VoIP products .
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Original:  The partnership with both manufacturers will allow Dell to provide a completely pre-integrated turn key solution.
Revised:  The partnership with both manufacturers allows Dell to provide a completely pre-integrated turn key solution.
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Original:  The partnership with both manufacturers will allow Dell to provide a completely pre-integrated turn key solution.
Revised:  The partnership with both manufacturers will allow Dell to provide a pre-integrated turn key solution.
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Original:  The partnership with both manufacturers will allow Dell to provide a completely pre-integrated turn key solution.
Revised:  The partnership with both manufacturers will allow Dell to provide a completely pre-integrated solution.
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Original:  Customers have four options , and can implement all or any one of them : Core Office Communication Server 2007 – provides instant messaging and on-premise Microsoft Live Meeting.
Revised:  Customers have four options : Core Office Communication Server 2007 – provides instant messaging and on-premise Microsoft Live Meeting.
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Original: The partnership with both manufacturers allows Dell to provide a pre-integrated solution.
Revised: The partnership with both manufacturers should allow Dell to provide a pre-integrated solution.
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Original:  Exchange Unified Messaging – provides voicemail, e-mail and fax in Microsoft Outlook, and anywhere access of Microsoft Outlook Inbox and Calendar  
Revised:  Exchange Unified Messaging – provides voicemail, e-mail and fax in Microsoft Outlook, and anywhere access of Microsoft Outlook Inbox and Calendar . 
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Original: After intense campaigning lduring the week, yesterday at GAA Congress delegates voted to open Croke Park to Soccer and Rugby by 227 votes to 97.
Revised: After intense campaigning during the week, yesterday at GAA Congress delegates voted to open Croke Park to Soccer and Rugby by 227 votes to 97.
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Original: Image:Bobby Jindal, official 109th Congressional photo.jpg|Bobby Jindal, member of the United States House of Representatives and newly elected Governor of Louisiana  ]] . On Saturday, it was announced that the first non-white Governor had been elected for the State of Louisiana in the United States in over 100 years.
Revised: Image:Bobby Jindal, official 109th Congressional photo.jpg|Bobby Jindal, member of the United States House of Representatives and newly elected Governor of Louisiana . ]] . On Saturday, it was announced that the first non-white Governor had been elected for the State of Louisiana in the United States in over 100 years.
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Original: Image:Bobby Jindal, official 109th Congressional photo.jpg|Bobby Jindal, member of the United States House of Representatives and newly elected Governor of Louisiana  ]] . On Saturday, it was announced that the first non-white Governor had been elected for the State of Louisiana in the United States in over 100 years.
Revised: Image:Bobby Jindal, official 109th Congressional photo.jpg|Bobby Jindal, member of the United States House of Representatives and newly elected Governor of Louisiana ]] On Saturday, it was announced that the first non-white Governor had been elected for the State of Louisiana in the United States in over 100 years.
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Original: Bobby Jindal, 36, an Indian-American and Republican, won the election receiving 54\% of the votes, with the nearest opponent, Walter Boassa having only 18\% of all votes.
Revised: Bobby Jindal, 36, an Indian-American and Republican, won the election receiving 54\% of the votes, with the nearest opponent, Walter Boasso having only 18\% of all votes.
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Original:  He plans to improve education throughout the state and cut taxes  
Revised:  He plans to improve education throughout the state and cut taxes . 
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Original: Ahvaz location in Iran.
Revised: Ahwaz location in Iran.
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Original: GNU map Over 20 Arab protesters in Ahwazi are dead, 500 injured and 250 arrested, in the wake of protests in the border province of Khuzestan in Iran this weekend, says the British Ahwazi Friendship Society (BAFS).
Revised: GNU map Over 20 Arab protesters in Ahwaz are dead, 500 injured and 250 arrested, in the wake of protests in the border province of Khuzestan in Iran this weekend, says the British Ahwazi Friendship Society (BAFS).
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Original:  It was Ferrari who catched the Constructors' championship at Belgian Grand Prix from McLaren team and now ended their drivers domination     
Revised:  It was Ferrari who catched the Constructors' championship at Belgian Grand Prix from McLaren team and now ended their drivers domination . 
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Original:  On ... , Turkey approved a measure that would send troops into Iraq to take out PKK militants, but on Sunday an official said that the incursion into Iraq was not urgent.
Revised:  On ... , Turkey approved a measure that authorized sending troops into Iraq to take out PKK militants, but on Sunday an official said that the incursion into Iraq was not urgent.
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Original:  Leaders in the Kurdish controlled areas of Iraq state that any attack on them would be met with retaliation  
Revised:  Leaders in the Kurdish controlled areas of Iraq state that any attack on them would be met with retaliation . 
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Original: In an interview with CNN, U.S. Representative Jane Harman (D-Calif.) said that Cheney's threatening language was "very dangerous" and recommended stronger U.N. sanctions as an alternative to "war-mongering threats."
Revised: In an interview with CNN, U.S. Representative Jane Harman (D-Calif.) said the language being used by the Bush administration is "very dangerous" and recommended stronger U.N. sanctions as an alternative to "war-mongering threats."
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Original: In Bahrain, two unnamed United States Navy soldiers  killed and one other was seriously injured when they were shot inside their barracks at around 5:00 a.m. (local time) at the naval base located in Bahrain.
Revised: In Bahrain, two unnamed United States Navy soldiers were killed and one other was seriously injured when they were shot inside their barracks at around 5:00 a.m. (local time) at the naval base located in Bahrain.
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Original: Bahrain is home to the Fifth Fleet which is par of the U.S. Naval Forces Central Command.
Revised: Bahrain is home to the Fifth Fleet which is part of the U.S. Naval Forces Central Command.
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Original:  At least 3,000 soldiers men are stationed there, but that number does not include the soldiers on ships currently docked at the base's port
Revised:  At least 3,000 soldiers are stationed there, but that number does not include the soldiers on ships currently docked at the base's port
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Original:  The Navy states that the incident is isolated and is not considered an act of terrorism.
Revised:  The Navy has stated that the incident is isolated and is not considered an act of terrorism.
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Original:  At least 3,000 soldiers are stationed there, but that number does not include the soldiers on ships currently docked at the base's port
Revised:  At least 3,000 soldiers are stationed there, but that number does not include the troops on ships currently docked at the base's port
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Original:  She has asked school officials to wipe her son's permanent school record "expunged" of the incident.
Revised:  She has asked school officials to "expunge" her son's permanent school record "expunged" of the incident.
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Original:  She has asked school officials to wipe her son's permanent school record "expunged" of the incident.
Revised:  She has asked school officials to wipe her son's permanent school record of the incident.
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Original:  The Longmen Grottoes (or Longmen Caves), another historic site containing thousands of Buddhist sculptures, is located a few kilometers south of there.
Revised:  The Longmen Grottoes (or Longmen Caves), another historic site containing thousands of Buddhist sculptures, are located a few kilometers south of there.
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Original: Manchester United, the holders always dominated the game and it only took 19 minutes for Ruud Van Nistelrooy to break the deadlock.
Revised: Manchester United, the holders always dominated the game and it only took 19 minutes for Ruud van Nistelrooy to break the deadlock.
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Original:  A minute later and Newcastle scored through Shola Ameobi, but all hopes of a Newcastle come back were quashed when Christiano Ronaldo capitalised on Van Nistelrooy's generosity to shoot home to make it 4-1 to the reds.
Revised:  A minute later and Newcastle scored through Shola Ameobi, but all hopes of a Newcastle come back were quashed when Christiano Ronaldo capitalised on van Nistelrooy's generosity to shoot home to make it 4-1 to the reds.
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Original:  Goals: Van Nistelrooy 19, Scholes 45, van Nistelrooy 58, Ronaldo 76.
Revised:  Goals: van Nistelrooy 19, Scholes 45, van Nistelrooy 58, Ronaldo 76.
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Original:  It appeared that the referee Mike Reilly had awarded a penalty to the red devils, but it was a freekick Newcastle's way for Christiano Ronaldo's dive.
Revised:  It appeared that the referee Mike Reilly had awarded a penalty to the red devils, but it was a freekick Newcastle's way for Cristiano Ronaldo's dive.
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Original:  A minute later and Newcastle scored through Shola Ameobi, but all hopes of a Newcastle come back were quashed when Christiano Ronaldo capitalised on van Nistelrooy's generosity to shoot home to make it 4-1 to the reds.
Revised:  A minute later and Newcastle scored through Shola Ameobi, but all hopes of a Newcastle come back were quashed when Cristiano Ronaldo capitalised on van Nistelrooy's generosity to shoot home to make it 4-1 to the reds.
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Original: Reports say that the leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden  has released a new audiotape.
Revised: Al Jazeera is reporting that the leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden has released a new audiotape.
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Original: Reports say that the leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden  has released a new audiotape.
Revised: Reports say that the leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden , has released a new audiotape.
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Original:  On the tape, he reportedly calls for unity among insurgents in Iraq   
Revised:  On the tape, he reportedly calls for unity among insurgents in Iraq "Some of you have been lax in one duty, which is to unite your ranks. Beware of division ... The Muslim world is waiting for you to gather under one banner," said bin Laden on the tape. 
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Original: Al Jazeera is reporting that the leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden, has released a new audiotape  . "Some of you have been lax in one duty, which is to unite your ranks.
Revised: The leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden, has released a new audiotape . "Some of you have been lax in one duty, which is to unite your ranks.
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Original:  The Muslim world is waiting for you to gather under one banner  ," said bin Laden on the tape.
Revised:  The Muslim world is waiting for you to gather under one banner . The interest of the Islamic nation surpasses that of a group. The strength of faith is in the strength of the bond between Muslims and not that of a tribe or nationalism ," said bin Laden on the tape.
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Original:  The tape is entitled Letter to the people of Iraq. 
Revised:  The tape is entitled Letter to the people of Iraq. The world is forced to watch bad acting. It is clearly staged.
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Original: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to as President Oral Roberts University  on October 22.
Revised: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to as President Oral Roberts University (ORU) on October 22.
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Original:  They say Robert's temporary leave of absence "isn't enough.  
Revised:  They say Robert's temporary leave of absence "isn't enough. " 
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Original: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to as President  Oral Roberts University (ORU) on October 22.
Revised: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to as President of Oral Roberts University (ORU) on October 22.
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Original:  His son Richard Roberts, who served as president since 1993, stepped down last week amid  illegal political and financial wrongdoing.
Revised:  His son Richard Roberts, who served as president since 1993, stepped down last week amid allegations of illegal political and financial wrongdoing.
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Original: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to as President of Oral Roberts University (ORU) on October 22.
Revised: Former faith healer and televangelist Oral Roberts returned to Oral Roberts University (ORU) on October 22.
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Original:  Related More allegations filed against Oral Roberts University Oral Roberts University president accused of illegal political donations and financial misappropriation Richard Roberts takes leave of absence from Oral Roberts Universit
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Original: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy . :Category:North America :Category:Canada :Category:Sports%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of teams - pick appropriate teams to fill in blanks when the championship games are completed on 18 November 2007.
Revised: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy :Category:North America :Category:Canada :Category:Sports%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of teams - pick appropriate teams to fill in blanks when the championship games are completed on 18 November 2007.
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Original: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy . :Category:North America :Category:Canada :Category:Sports%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of teams - pick appropriate teams to fill in blanks when the championship games are completed on 18 November 2007.
Revised: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of teams - pick appropriate teams to fill in blanks when the championship games are completed on 18 November 2007.
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Original: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy . :Category:North America :Category:Canada :Category:Sports%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of teams - pick appropriate teams to fill in blanks when the championship games are completed on 18 November 2007.
Revised: The Grey Cup, first awarded in 1909, is Canada's most significant football trophy . :Category:North America :Category:Canada :Category:Sports%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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