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Original:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 18 victims of this massacre, whereas “Tghat” identified 22 victims :
Revised:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 18 victims of this massacre, whereas “Tghat” identified 22 victims .
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Original: Situation Report EEPA HORN No. 123 - 09 April 2021 In line with historical studies of massacres, including those committed during the Armenian genocide, a massacre can be defined as a conflict incident in which at least five unarmed civilians were killed on the same day at the same location.
Revised: Situation Report EEPA HORN No. 123 - 09 April 2021 
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Original:  Situation Report EEPA HORN No. 123 - 09 April 2021 In line with historical studies of massacres, including those committed during the Armenian genocide, a massacre can be defined as a conflict incident in which at least five unarmed civilians were killed on the same day at the same location.
Revised:  In line with historical studies of massacres, including those committed during the Armenian genocide, a massacre can be defined as a conflict incident in which at least five unarmed civilians were killed on the same day at the same location.
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Original: EuroNews, 2 April 2021 – See film embedded in the news item: G7 'seriously concerned' about human rights violations in Ethiopia's Tigray regionCBC , 2 April 2021: As It Happens: The Friday Edition (from 28:00 to 35:30) Tigray, Ethiopia MassacreThe Guardian, 2 April 2021: Ethiopia: 1,900 people killed in massacres in Tigray identified
Revised: EuroNews, 2 April 2021 – See film embedded in the news item: G7 'seriously concerned' about human rights violations in Ethiopia's Tigray region CBC , 2 April 2021: As It Happens: The Friday Edition (from 28:00 to 35:30) Tigray, Ethiopia MassacreThe Guardian, 2 April 2021: Ethiopia: 1,900 people killed in massacres in Tigray identified
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Original: EuroNews, 2 April 2021 – See film embedded in the news item: G7 'seriously concerned' about human rights violations in Ethiopia's Tigray regionCBC , 2 April 2021: As It Happens: The Friday Edition (from 28:00 to 35:30) Tigray, Ethiopia MassacreThe Guardian, 2 April 2021: Ethiopia: 1,900 people killed in massacres in Tigray identified
Revised: EuroNews, 2 April 2021 – See film embedded in the news item: G7 'seriously concerned' about human rights violations in Ethiopia's Tigray regionCBC , 2 April 2021: As It Happens: The Friday Edition (from 28:00 to 35:30) Tigray, Ethiopia Massacre The Guardian, 2 April 2021: Ethiopia: 1,900 people killed in massacres in Tigray identified
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Original:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 22 victims of this massacre, all of whom have been identified :
Revised:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions 22 victims of this massacre, all of whom have been identified .
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Original:  TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources in Hambera (ቁሸት ሓምበራ)
Revised:  TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources 
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Original:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
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Original:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
Revised:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
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Original:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
Revised:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Godefa Tewelde
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Original:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown Godefa Tewelde
Revised:  Alembirhan Tesfay (Deacon) Fisseha Legesse Zemichael Tadesse Abadi Gezae Gebrewahid Haile Birhane Hagos Teklu Priest Abraha Teklu Gebremedhin Weldu Fisseha Tesfay Priest Tesfay Hagos Gebremariam Tewelde Gebremedhin Tareqe Gebreeyesus Fisseha%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% in Fanqelit (ቁሸት ፍንቅሊት) Priest Hagos Birhane Gedamu%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Precise village unknown 
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Original:  Lazy Bones was originally a comic strip in the British comic Whizzer and Chips.
Revised: see Lazybones (disambiguation) Lazy Bones was originally a comic strip in the British comic Whizzer and Chips.
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Original:  Until 1986 the strip was drawn by Colin Whittock , and moved to Buster in 1990 after Whizzer and Chips ended.
Revised:  Until 1986 the strip was drawn by Colin Whittock URL and moved to Buster in 1990 after Whizzer and Chips ended.
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Original:  157x157px|Song Dynasty Empress of Qinzong wearing pearl huadian.
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Original:  The company 9emeArt+, organizing the festival , first denied sexism, then included six female nominees, before permanently changing the selection method, leaving authors to elect their peers: each Member of the Academy gets a free vote.
Revised:  The festival then included six female nominees, before permanently changing the selection method, leaving authors to elect their peers: each Member of the Academy gets a free vote.
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Original:   Medalists by country  2020 Tokyo Rank NationGoldSilverBronze Total122372align=20022002411245110211027102381001100110022411020212010101010101150022  
Revised:  Medalists by country after Summer Olympic Tokyo 2020 Tokyo Rank NationGoldSilverBronze Total122372align=20022002411245110211027102381001100110022411020212010101010101150022 
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Original:  The men's time trials was first held at the 1912, an than again in 1996 Summer Olympics after profesional and amateur cykling connection in one .
Revised:  The men's time trials was first held at the 1912, and then again in 1996 Summer Olympics after profesional and amateur cykling connection in one .
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Original:  The men's time trials was first held at the 1912, an than again in 1996 Summer Olympics after profesional and amateur cykling connection in one .
Revised:  The men's time trials was first held at the 1912, an than again in 1996 Summer Olympics after professional and amateur cycling made a resurgence in popularity .
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Original: The band Faiyen fled to Thailand's neighbor, Laos, after a military government took power in 2014THAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
Revised:  Faiyen fled to Thailand's neighbor, Laos, after a military government took power in 2014THAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
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Original: Faiyen fled to Thailand's neighbor, Laos, after a military government took power in 2014THAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
Revised: Faiyen fled to Thailand's neighbor, Laos, after a military junta took power in 2014THAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
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Original:  The songs' content refer about Thai political, critics to Thai government and anti-monarchist in ThailandTHAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
Revised:  The songs' content refer about Thai political, critics to Thai government and anti-monarchy in ThailandTHAI MUSICIANS IN EXILE FOR THEIR SONGS FEAR FOR THEIR LIVES.
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Original:  The members of the band have launched a “Save Faiyen” campaign appealing for asylum in an unspecified countryThai exiles in fear after murders and disappearances.
Revised:  The members of the band have launched a "Save Faiyen" campaign appealing for asylum in an unspecified countryThai exiles in fear after murders and disappearances.
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Original:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
Revised:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon – Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
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Original:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
Revised:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri – Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
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Original:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
Revised:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul – Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
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Original:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom - Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
Revised:  Members Trairong "Kunthong" Sinseubphon - Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri - Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul - Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom – Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar
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Original:  In 2016, they  became known by a single " Khan Daeng Salaeng Jai " , sang by Romchalee Somboonratanakul who member of the band.
Revised:  In 2016, they became known by a single " Khan Daeng Salaeng Jai ') , sang by Romchalee Somboonratanakul who member of the band.
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Original:     Thai exiles in fear after murders and disappearances The members of the band have launched a "Save Faiyen" campaign appealing for asylum in an unspecified country.
Revised:  Thai exiles in fear after murders and disappearances The members of the band launched a "Save Faiyen" campaign appealing for asylum in an unspecified country.
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Original: Thai Dissident Musicians Celebrate Getting French Haven  On   5 March 2020, Parinya Cheewinkulprathom was arrested by Royal Thai Police on lèse majesté in his hometown neighborhood Udom Suk, Bangkok.
Revised: Thai Dissident Musicians Celebrate Getting French Haven On On 5 March 2020, Parinya Cheewinkulprathom was arrested by Royal Thai Police on lèse majesté in his hometown neighborhood Udom Suk, Bangkok.
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Original:  Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri – Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul – Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom – Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar  References Category:Thai rock music groups Category:Thai expatriates in France Category:Musical groups established in 2011 Category:2011 establishments in Thailand Category:Thai republicans Category:Anti-monarchists Category:Thai socialists Category:Thai political satire Category:Political music artis
Revised:  Lead vocals Electronic keyboard Nithiwat "Chom" Wannasiri – Vocal Romchalee "Yam" Somboonratanakul – Vocal Parinya "Poach" Cheewinkulprathom – Vocal and Lead guitar, Bass guitar References Category:Thai rock music groups Category:Thai expatriates in France Category:Musical groups established in 2011 Category:2011 establishments in Thailand Category:Thai republicans Category:Anti-monarchists Category:Thai political satire Category:Political music artis
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Original:  Voces para el Chile 2030 (2015) Modernización del Ministerio de Relaciones Exteriores: un paso necesario (2017) Pequeñas letras (2017) Diagnóstico político para la acción (2017) Lineamientos Estratégicos sobre Política Nacional de Puertos (2018) Mi primo Karim (2019)
Revised:  Voces para el Chile 2030 (2015) Modernización del Ministerio de Relaciones Exteriores: un paso necesario (2017) Pequeñas letras (2017) Diagnóstico político para la acción (2017) Lineamientos Estratégicos sobre Política Nacional de Puertos (2018) 
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Original:      Construction and design  The design of the liangmao reflects its functions as a hat designed for farming and fishing: The liangmao is made of a flat disc of woven bamboo and/or straw.
Revised:  History Construction and design The design of the liangmao reflects its functions as a hat designed for farming and fishing: The liangmao is made of a flat disc of woven bamboo and/or straw.
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Original:  In summer, the cotton cloth could be removed, and the hat would be secured by attaching ties through the loops that were attached to the central hole .
Revised:  In summer, the cotton cloth could be removed, and the hat would be secured by attaching ties through the loops that were attached to the central hole 
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Original:  History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Popularity and decline Gankeng town is the home of Liangmao village.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Popularity and decline Gankeng town is the home of Liangmao village.
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Original:  Provincial intangible cultural heritage In 2013, the Hakka hat-making craft was added to the Guangdong's provincial intangible cultural heritage list.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Monuments Liangmao Baby - a statue of an ethnic Hakka girl wearing liangmao was erected on the 29th September 2016 in Gankeng New Town, Longgang district of Shenzen, Guangdong province, as a new mascot
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Liangmao Baby - a statue of an ethnic Hakka girl wearing liangmao was erected on the 29th September 2016 in Gankeng New Town, Longgang district of Shenzen, Guangdong province, as a new mascot
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Monuments Liangmao Baby - a statue of an ethnic Hakka girl wearing liangmao was erected on the 29th September 2016 in Gankeng New Town, Longgang district of Shenzen, Guangdong province, as a new mascot
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Original:  Liangmao (), also referred as Hakka hat  , is a traditional bamboo and/or straw hat worn by the Hakka people who perform manual work, such as farming and fishing.
Revised:  Liangmao (), also known as Hakka hat , is a traditional bamboo and/or straw hat worn by the Hakka people who perform manual work, such as farming and fishing.
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Original:  Provincial intangible cultural heritage In  2013, the Hakka hat-making craft was added to the Guangdong's provincial intangible cultural heritage list    .
Revised:  Intangible cultural heritage 2013, the Hakka hat-making craft was added to the Guangdong's provincial intangible cultural heritage list .
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Original:  Provincial intangible cultural heritage In  2013, the Hakka hat-making craft was added to the Guangdong's provincial intangible cultural heritage list    .
Revised:  Provincial intangible cultural heritage In 2013, the Hakka hat-making craft was added to the Guangdong's provincial intangible cultural heritage list . .
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Original:  In 1980, she went to Holland to attend the Russell Tribunal where she identified discriminatory aspects of the Indian Act.
Revised:  In 1980, she went to the Netherlands to attend the Russell Tribunal where she identified discriminatory aspects of the Indian Act.
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Original: Why foundational skills matter Since the 1990s, major players in the international community have acknowledged the critical importance of ensuring the acquisition of foundational skills among children across the world.
Revised: The global focus on foundational skills Since the 1990s, major players in the international community have acknowledged the critical importance of ensuring the acquisition of foundational skills among children across the world.
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Original:  The case for universal , early, conceptual and procedural mastery of foundational skills Why universal, early, conceptual and procedural mastery (UECPMFS) matters.
Revised:  Universal , early, conceptual and procedural mastery of foundational skills Why universal, early, conceptual and procedural mastery (UECPMFS) matters.
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Original: The global focus on foundational skills Since the 1990s, major players in the international community have acknowledged the critical importance of ensuring the acquisition of foundational skills among children across the world.
Revised: The global focus on foundational skills Since the 1990s, major players in the international community have placed importance on ensuring the acquisition of foundational skills among children across the world.
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Original:  URL But why have all of these institutions identified foundational skills as such an important area of focus ?
Revised:  URL There are several reasons why these organizations have placed such a strong focus on foundational skills:
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Original:  Source: Abadzi Helen Foundational skills are such an important aspect of education because human learning is a cumulative process.
Revised:  Source: Abadzi Helen Acquisition of foundational skills receives widespread attention because human learning is a cumulative process.
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Original:  2020/021. URL Negative externalities of a lack of foundational skills Children failing to acquire foundational skills has several negative implications on their lives.
Revised:  2020/021. URL Consequences of a lack of foundational skills Children failing to acquire foundational skills has several negative implications on their lives.
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Original:  Source: RISE Given the importance of foundational skills in enabling children to learn in the future, education systems should prioritize universal, early, conceptual and procedural mastery of foundational skills (UECPMFS).
Revised:  Source: RISE Given the importance of foundational skills in enabling children to learn in the future, education systems , education researchers have emphasized the need to cultivate universal, early, conceptual and procedural mastery of foundational skills (UECPMFS).
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Original:  The rationale for each of these components is as follows: Why 'universal' ? Why 'early' ? Evidence from learning profiles shows that learning gaps emerge early—and when children fall behind early, they rarely catch up.
Revised:  The rationale for each of these components is as follows: 'Universal' Why 'early' ? Evidence from learning profiles shows that learning gaps emerge early—and when children fall behind early, they rarely catch up.
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Original:  The rationale for each of these components is as follows: Why 'universal' ? Why 'early' ? Evidence from learning profiles shows that learning gaps emerge early—and when children fall behind early, they rarely catch up.
Revised:  The rationale for each of these components is as follows: Why 'universal' ? 'Early' Evidence from learning profiles shows that learning gaps emerge early—and when children fall behind early, they rarely catch up.
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Original:  World Bank Policy Research Working Paper No. 8566, Available at SSRN: URL Why 'conceptual and procedural' ? Children must gain conceptual knowledge (i.e., understanding the principles within a particular domain such as literacy or numeracy), as well as procedural knowledge (i.e., being able to fluently complete tasks in the domain), neither of which can be achieved through rote learning.
Revised:  World Bank Policy Research Working Paper No. 8566, Available at SSRN: URL 'Conceptual and procedural' ? Children must gain conceptual knowledge (i.e., understanding the principles within a particular domain such as literacy or numeracy), as well as procedural knowledge (i.e., being able to fluently complete tasks in the domain), neither of which can be achieved through rote learning.
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Original:  World Bank Policy Research Working Paper No. 8566, Available at SSRN: URL Why 'conceptual and procedural' ? Children must gain conceptual knowledge (i.e., understanding the principles within a particular domain such as literacy or numeracy), as well as procedural knowledge (i.e., being able to fluently complete tasks in the domain), neither of which can be achieved through rote learning.
Revised:  World Bank Policy Research Working Paper No. 8566, Available at SSRN: URL Why 'conceptual and procedural' Children must gain conceptual knowledge (i.e., understanding the principles within a particular domain such as literacy or numeracy), as well as procedural knowledge (i.e., being able to fluently complete tasks in the domain), neither of which can be achieved through rote learning.
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Original:  Why 'mastery' ? For student learning to be meaningful and practicable, it needs to develop to a certain level of mastery.
Revised:  'Mastery' For student learning to be meaningful and practicable, it needs to develop to a certain level of mastery.
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Original:  In a similar vein, foundational skills have been likened to the foundations of a skyscraper  :
Revised:  In a similar vein, foundational skills have been likened to the foundations of a skyscraper , without which further learning cannot take place :
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Original:  Mastery of foundational skills involves the instant, fluent, speedy execution of tasks—such as instantly comprehending a word that is perceived, fluently pronouncing a sentence that is read, and speedily computing a simple arithmetical operatation (e.g., 2+2=4).
Revised:  Mastery of foundational skills involves the instant, fluent, speedy execution of tasks—such as instantly comprehending a word that is perceived, fluently pronouncing a sentence that is read, and speedily computing a simple arithmetical operation (e.g., 2+2=4).
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