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Original: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
Revised: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, the President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
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Original: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
Revised: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
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Original: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri (Jalpaigudi) ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
Revised: Jalpaiguri, India: Jugal Kishore Raibir, who was the all-India President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council -a political party in India ) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri ,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6th, 2007 after a three months battle with cancer.
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Original:  The funeral of Raibir, who was Prominent social activist and leader of dalit and adivasi people, was held in Jalpaiguri Wednesday (November 7th, 2007) evening.
Revised:  The funeral of Raibir, who was Prominent social activist was held on Wednesday evening.
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Original:  Thousands of people gathered at the Samata Centre, the residence of Kishore, who was very much popular particularly among farmers and teagarden workers.
Revised:  Thousands of people gathered at the Samata Centre, the residence of Kishore, who was very popular particularly among farmers and teagarden workers.
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Original:  Thousands of people gathered at the Samata Centre, the residence of Kishore, who was very much popular particularly among farmers and teagarden workers.
Revised:  Thousands of people gathered at the Samata Centre, the residence of Kishore, who was very much popular particularly among farmers and tea garden workers.
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Original:  Senior Socialist leaders like Vinod Prasad Singh, Yogendra Yadav, Shivapoojan Singh, Somnath Tripathi, Viswanath Bagi and Thousands of people visited the Samata Centre at Jadeswar in Jalpaiguri to pay their homage
Revised:  Senior Socialist leaders like Vinod Prasad Singh, Yogendra Yadav, Shivapoojan Singh, Somnath Tripathi, Viswanath Bagi and thousands of people visited the Samata Centre at Jadeswar in Jalpaiguri to pay their homage
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Original:  Senior Socialist leaders like Vinod Prasad Singh, Yogendra Yadav, Shivapoojan Singh, Somnath Tripathi, Viswanath Bagi and Thousands of people visited the Samata Centre at Jadeswar in Jalpaiguri to pay their homage
Revised:  Senior Socialist leaders like Vinod Prasad Singh, Yogendra Yadav, Shivapoojan Singh, Somnath Tripathi, Viswanath Bagi and Thousands of people visited the Samata Centre to pay their homage
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Original: Jugal Kishore Raibir : All-India President of the Indian Socialist Party Jugal Kishore Raibir , the President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6, 2007 after a three month battle with cancer.
Revised: Jugal Kishore Raibir , the President of the Samajawadi Jana Parishad (Socialist People's Council) passed away at Sadar Hospital in Jalpaiguri,West Bengal on Tuesday November 6, 2007 after a three month battle with cancer.
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Original:  The three candidates for PASOK's presidency are the current president - and president of the Socialist International  George Papandreou, the MP and former Minister Dr.Evangelos Venizelos and the former Secretary of the party Kostas Skandalides.
Revised:  The three candidates for PASOK's presidency are the current president - and president of the Socialist International , George Papandreou, the MP and former Minister Dr.Evangelos Venizelos and the former Secretary of the party Kostas Skandalides.
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Original:  Last September, the pasty lost the elections from the conservative New Democracy
Revised:  Last September, the party lost the elections from the conservative New Democracy
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Original:  PASOK (Pan-Hellenic Socialist Movement) party members and voters will decide tomorrow for party's president, in a wide election throughout Greece.
Revised:  (Pan-Hellenic Socialist Movement) party members and voters will decide tomorrow for party's president, in a wide election throughout Greece.
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Original:  Yesterday, the candidates concluded their pre-election campaigns with public speeches in Athens, Thessaloniki and Kos respectively.
Revised:  Yesterday, the candidates concluded their pre-election campaigns with public speeches in Athens, and respectively.
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Original:  Last September, the party was defeated in the 2007 parliamentary elections from the conservative New Democracy .
Revised:  Last September, the party was defeated in the 2007 parliamentary elections from the conservative .
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Original:  Although the victims were not dressed in military garb , they were thought to have been heading home for a holiday marking the birthday of the prophet Muhammad when abducted by insurgents.
Revised:  Although the victims were not dressed in military garb . They were thought to have been heading home for a holiday marking the birthday of the prophet Muhammad when abducted by insurgents.
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Original: Newly-elected Iraqi President Jalal Talabaniimage:VOA Iraqi President Jalal Talabani in a press conference to reporters Wednesday was quoted saying: "More than 50 bodies have been brought out from the Tigris and we have the full names of those who were killed and those criminals who committed these crimes.
Revised:  "More than 50 bodies have been brought out from the Tigris and we have the full names of those who were killed and those criminals who committed these crimes.
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Original: Newly-elected Iraqi President Jalal Talabaniimage:VOA Iraqi President Jalal Talabani in a press conference to reporters Wednesday was quoted saying: "More than 50 bodies have been brought out from the Tigris and we have the full names of those who were killed and those criminals who committed these crimes.
Revised: Newly-elected Iraqi President Jalal Talabaniimage:VOA Iraqi President Jalal Talabani in a press conference to reporters Wednesday was quoted saying: 
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Original:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to accentuate the anti-blasphemy in the criminal code illegal has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
Revised:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to strengthen the anti-blasphemy in the criminal code illegal has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
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Original:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to accentuate the anti-blasphemy in the criminal code illegal has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
Revised:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to accentuate the anti-blasphemy provisions of the criminal code illegal has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
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Original:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to accentuate the anti-blasphemy in the criminal code illegal has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
Revised:  The proposal from Dutch Minister of Justice Piet Hein Donner to accentuate the anti-blasphemy in the criminal code has been rejected by a majority of the Tweede Kamer, the country's parliament.
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Original:  According to Dutch broadcaster RTL, Member of Parliament Medy van der Laan (D66), will move a motion on November 17 to have the article removed entirely from the criminal code.
Revised:  According to Dutch broadcaster RTL, Member of Parliament Medy van der Laan (D66), will make a motion on November 17 to have the article removed entirely from the criminal code.
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Original:  Australian football's controlling body, w: Football Federation Australia, will launch an investigation into reported crowd violence at an A-League match between Melbourne Victory and Sydney FC on November 10.
Revised:  Australian football's controlling body, Football Federation Australia, will launch an investigation into reported crowd violence at an A-League match between Melbourne Victory and Sydney FC on November 10.
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Original: The match at Telstra Dome in Melbourne, Australia, which attracted more than 30, 000 spectators, ended in a 0-0 draw . According to reports from the Fairfax Media publications, fans threw seats at their rivals at the conclusion of the match .
Revised: The match at Telstra Dome in Melbourne, Australia, which attracted more than 30, 000 spectators, ended in a 0-0 draw . According to reports from the Fairfax Media publications, fans threw seats at their rivals at the end of the day .
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters  "invaded the pitch and set fire to items on the field", also after the match . Police were reportedly forced to react with capsicum spray to de-esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters "invaded the pitch and set fire to items on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with capsicum spray to de-esculate the situation.
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters  "invaded the pitch and set fire to items on the field", also after the match . Police were reportedly forced to react with capsicum spray to de-esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters "invaded the pitch and set fire to items on the field", also after the match . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
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Original:  Rob Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police  and security companies employed at the event.
Revised:  Roberto Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police and security companies employed at the event.
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Original:  Abernethy also condemned the alleged behaviour, questioning whether the people involved should be considered 'supporters'.
Revised:  Abernethy also condemned the alleged behaviour, questioning whether the clowns involved should be considered 'supporters'.
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Original: The match at Telstra Dome in Melbourne, Australia, which attracted more than 3 fans, ended in a 0-0 win for the sydney side .
Revised: The match at Telstra Dome in Melbourne, Australia, which attracted more than 30,000 spectators, ended in a 0-0 win for the sydney side .
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Original:  According to reports from the Fairfax Media publications, fans threw marshmellows, sold by vendors at the ground, at their rivals at the end of the day .
Revised:  According to reports from the Fairfax Media publications, fans threw marshmellows, sold by vendors at the ground, at their rivals at the conclusion of the match .
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to items on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the match . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
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Original:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with new moves to esculate the situation.
Revised:  It has also been reported that a number of Melbourne supporters known as the aussie clowns "invaded the pitch and set fire to themselves on the field", also after the day had commenced . Police were reportedly forced to react with capsicum spray to de-esculate the situation.
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Original:  Although Sydney fans had been relocated to New South Wales an area separate from the home supporters, reports suggest they were provoked and retaliated by using the cabbages as projectiles.
Revised:  Although Sydney fans had been relocated into an area separate from the home supporters, reports suggest they were provoked and retaliated by using the cabbages as projectiles.
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Original:  Roberto Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police , admin and security companies employed at the event.
Revised:  Rob Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police , admin and security companies employed at the event.
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Original:  Roberto Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police , admin and security companies employed at the event.
Revised:  Roberto Abernethy, who was appointed head of A-League operations by the FFA, said that the governing body had requested reports from the Telstra Dome, the Melbourne Victory Football Club, as well as the police and security companies employed at the event.
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Original:  Abernethy also condemned the alleged behaviour, questioning whether the clowns involved should be considered 'supporters'.
Revised:  Abernethy also condemned the alleged behaviour, questioning whether the people involved should be considered 'supporters'.
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Original: It  wasn't their day for two Cross-Strait (China Taiwan) baseball teams because they were eliminated by a great losing streak at Konami Cup 2007.
Revised: It just wasn't their day for two Cross-Strait (China Taiwan) baseball teams because they were eliminated by a great losing streak at Konami Cup 2007.
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Original: It  wasn't their day for two Cross-Strait (China Taiwan) baseball teams because they were eliminated by a great losing streak at Konami Cup 2007.
Revised: It wasn't their day for Taiwan) baseball teams because they were eliminated by a great losing streak at Konami Cup 2007.
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Original:  The final of Konami Cup will take place by SK Wyverns and Chunichi Dragons.
Revised:  The final of Konami Cup will take place between SK Wyverns and Chunichi Dragons.
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Original:  Before the 5th inning, they tied with 1-1.
Revised:  For 5 innings, the game was tied at 1-1.
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Original:  It 's amazing that the starting pitcher Jiangang Lu (China Stars) closed Dragons' batting with Dragons only get 1 score.
Revised:  It was amazing that starting pitcher Jiangang Lu (China Stars) closed Dragons' batting with Dragons only get 1 score.
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Original:  But in the bottom of 6th inning, Masahiro Araki hit a solo HR so that Lu undertake the lost of this game, Dragons ' won China Stars with  9-1 finally .
Revised:  But in the bottom of 6th by hitting a solo HR so that Lu undertake the lost of this game, Dragons ' won China Stars with 9-1 finally .
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Original:  Uni-President Lions (Taiwan) vs SK Wyverns (South Korea) This game determined Uni Lions and SK Wyverns who can qualify the final after Dragons won China Stars.
Revised:  Uni-President Lions (Taiwan) vs SK Wyverns (South Korea) This game would determine whether the Uni Lions or the SK Wyverns would qualify for the final after Dragons won China Stars.
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Original:  Uni-President Lions (Taiwan) vs SK Wyverns (South Korea) This game determined Uni Lions and SK Wyverns who can qualify the final after Dragons won China Stars.
Revised:  Uni-President Lions (Taiwan) vs SK Wyverns (South Korea) This game determined Uni Lions and SK Wyverns who can qualify the final after the Dragons defeated the China Stars.
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Original:  But in the start of this game, SK scored 13 points at first 4 innings.
Revised:  But SK eliminated all the suspense by scoring 13 points at first 4 innings.
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Original:  But in the start of this game, SK scored 13 points at first 4 innings.
Revised:  But in the start of this game, SK scored 13 runs in the first 4 innings.
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Original:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though the Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang belted a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, the SK Wyverns routed their opponent with a score of 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 in a shortened affair and promptly qualified for the showdown with the final with Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the final with Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang hit a solo HR, but SK Wyverns won with 13A-1 by ending early this game against Lions and steadily qualified the Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though the Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang belted a solo HR, the SK Wyverns routed their opponent with a score of 13A-1 in a shortened affair and promptly qualified for the showdown with the Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though the Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang belted a solo HR, the SK Wyverns mercy-ruled their opponent with a score of 13A-1 in a shortened affair and promptly qualified for the showdown with the Chunichi Dragons
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Original:  Even though the Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang belted a solo HR, the SK Wyverns routed their opponent with a score of 13A-1 in a shortened affair and promptly qualified for the showdown with the Chunichi Dragons
Revised:  Even though the Lions' fielder Sung-sian Yang belted a solo HR, the SK Wyverns routed their opponent with a score of 13A-1 and promptly advanced to a showdown with the Chunichi Dragons
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Original: It is believed that the incident is a major embarrassment for the Pentagon leaving American military chiefs "dumbstruck" and " red-faced, " in the opinion of British tabloid , the Daily Mail.
Revised: It is believed that the incident is a major embarrassment for the Pentagon leaving American military chiefs dumbfounded and red-faced, " in the opinion of British tabloid , the Daily Mail.
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Original: It is believed that the incident is a major embarrassment for the Pentagon leaving American military chiefs "dumbstruck" and " red-faced, " in the opinion of British tabloid , the Daily Mail.
Revised: It is believed that the incident is a major embarrassment for the Pentagon leaving American military chiefs "dumbstruck" and " red-faced, according to United Kingdom newspaper , the Daily Mail.
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Original:  One NATO figure was reported to have said that the effect was " as big a shock as the Russians launching Sputnik."
Revised:  One NATO figure was reported to have said that the effect was " 
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