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Original:  Eventually  some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
Revised:  Eventually , some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
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Original:  Eventually  some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
Revised:  Eventually some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement arcades , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
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Original:  Eventually  some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
Revised:  Eventually some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and copyright infringement . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
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Original:  Eventually  some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
Revised:  Eventually some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores , but they risked hardware failure and violation of the law . But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just used songs from other arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
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Original:  The upcoming game will benefit mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
Revised:  The upcoming game will benefit Mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
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Original:  The upcoming game will benefit mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
Revised:  The upcoming game will benefit mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some secrets behind the development of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
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Original:  Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
Revised:  Wikinews reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait  (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait  (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait  (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait  (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) in special .
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's differ from past series because the NBGI enrolled several mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially .
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Original:  When you enroll them, what 's the factors to decide ?
Revised:  When you choose them, what 's the factors to decide ?
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Original:  When you enroll them, what 's the factors to decide ?
Revised:  When you enroll them, what factors go into the decision ?
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Original:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita: We (the NBGI) enrolled those different songs by their own performances and rankings from Cross-Strait countries.
Revised:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita: We (the NBGI) enrolled those various songs based on their own performances and rankings from Cross-Strait countries.
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Original:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song into a game, not only in rhythm game , but also games from other types.
Revised:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song for a game, not only in rhythm game , but also games from other types.
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Original:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song into a game, not only in rhythm game , but also games from other types.
Revised:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song into a game, not only in rhythm games , but also games from other types.
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Original:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song into a game, not only in rhythm game , but also games from other types.
Revised:  I believe that a developer should know some copyright coordinations before choosing a song into a game, not only in rhythm game , but also games of other types.
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Original:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from  original singers and composers.
Revised:  For instance, I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from original singers and composers.
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Original:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from  original singers and composers.
Revised:  Especially I know that some controversy erupted in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from original singers and composers.
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Original:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from  original singers and composers.
Revised:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some covers of Japanese songs were recorded in other languages without agreements from original singers and composers.
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Original:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from  original singers and composers.
Revised:  Especially I know that some controversies ever took place in Taiwan after some Japanese songs was re-covered in other languages without agreements from the original singers and composers.
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Original:  Before the release of this upcoming game, have you done coordinations with album companies about the copyright issue?
Revised:  Before the release of this upcoming game, have you coordinated with record companies about the copyright issue?
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Original:  Yabushita: Everyone should respect on copyright as you said.
Revised:  Yabushita: Everyone should respect copyrights, as you said.
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Original:  I guaranteed that every song from "Taiko no Tatsujin" series in console and arcade versions are licensed after several coordinations with those companies.
Revised:  I guarantee that every song from "Taiko no Tatsujin" series in console and arcade versions are licensed after several coordinations with those companies.
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Original:  I guaranteed that every song from "Taiko no Tatsujin" series in console and arcade versions are licensed after several coordinations with those companies.
Revised:  I guaranteed that every song from "Taiko no Tatsujin" series in console and arcade versions is licensed through coordination with those companies.
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Original:  Some gamers may be strange because the console version  "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available in PS2.
Revised:  Some gamers may be confused because the console version "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available in PS2.
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Original:  Some gamers may be strange because the console version  "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available in PS2.
Revised:  Some gamers may be strange because the console version of "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available in PS2.
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Original:  Some gamers may be strange because the console version  "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available in PS2.
Revised:  Some gamers may be strange because the console version "Taiko no Tatsujin" series is only available for PS2.
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Original:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release its different versions in different countries equaled with the same releasing models from "Taiko Drum Master", designed for American and European gamers?
Revised:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release different versions in different countries equaled with the same releasing models from "Taiko Drum Master", designed for American and European gamers?
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Original:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release its different versions in different countries equaled with the same releasing models from "Taiko Drum Master", designed for American and European gamers?
Revised:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release its different versions in different countries similar to the way "Taiko Drum Master", designed for American and European gamers?
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Original:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release its different versions in different countries equaled with the same releasing models from "Taiko Drum Master", designed for American and European gamers?
Revised:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release its different versions in different countries equaled with the same releasing models from "Taiko Drum Master", was released with special designs for American and European gamers?
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Original:  Yabushita: Currently, we'll focus our developments on  arcade version and temporarily not to consider different releases to different countries.
Revised:  Yabushita: Currently, we'll focus our developments on the arcade version and temporarily not to consider different releases to different countries.
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Original:  Yabushita: Currently, we'll focus our developments on  arcade version and temporarily not to consider different releases to different countries.
Revised:  Yabushita: Currently, we'll focus our developments on arcade version and temporarily not to consider different releases for different countries.
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Original:  Because we will evaluate opinions from amusement stores and gamers after its release.
Revised:  This is because we will evaluate opinions from amusement stores and gamers after its release.
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Original:  Summary  "Taiko no Tatsujin" series became a hot topic after amusement stores imported several arcade machines in Taiwan.
Revised:  "Taiko no Tatsujin" series became a hot topic after amusement stores imported several arcade machines in Taiwan.
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Original:  Even though the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" will benefit for countries in mandarin language.
Revised:  The release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" will benefit for countries in mandarin language.
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Original:  A representative for the organisaton said "We [The UNHCR] are left only with one choice, much to our regret, which is to relocate most staff out of Guereda area, as we cannot continue to perform our activities in favor of refugees.  
Revised:  A representative for the organisaton said "We [The UNHCR] are left only with one choice, much to our regret, which is to relocate most staff out of Guereda area, as we cannot continue to perform our activities in favor of refugees. " 
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Original:  The commander of EUFOR in Chad said he did not consider a danger to EUFOR and he said that he would not consider it a danger "unless during their offensive they threaten or attack civilians, or the non-governmental organisations, or UN personnel.  
Revised:  The commander of EUFOR in Chad said he did not consider a danger to EUFOR and he said that he would not consider it a danger "unless during their offensive they threaten or attack civilians, or the non-governmental organisations, or UN personnel. " 
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Original: According to AFP The European Union force (EUFOR) has suspended all flights to Chad, although it was made clear that this was only a temporary delay.
Revised: According to AFP , the European Union force (EUFOR) has suspended all flights to Chad, although it was made clear that this was only a temporary delay.
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Original: The  ]   UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) has said in a press release that "a series of armed attacks on the UN refugee agency and other aid organisations has forced UNHCR to evacuate most of its staff from its office in Guereda in eastern Chad."
Revised: The ] The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) has said in a press release that "a series of armed attacks on the UN refugee agency and other aid organisations has forced UNHCR to evacuate most of its staff from its office in Guereda in eastern Chad."
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Original:  " The chief of the Chadian military has said that the battle has ended with the rebels being "entirely destroyed this column after 40 minutes of fighting," a claim which has been denied by the rebel groups
Revised:  The chief of the Chadian military has said that the battle has ended with the rebels being "entirely destroyed this column after 40 minutes of fighting," a claim which has been denied by the rebel groups
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Original:  " The chief of the Chadian military has said that the battle has ended with the rebels being "entirely destroyed this column after 40 minutes of fighting," a claim which has been denied by the rebel groups
Revised:  " 
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Original: Violence between Rebels and the Chadian military have started in Chad as rebel groups are continuing to advance on the N'djamena, the capital of Chad.
Revised: Violence between Rebels and the Chadian military started in Chad as rebel groups are continuing to advance on the N'djamena, the capital of Chad.
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Original:  A representative for the organisation said "We [ The UNHCR] are left only with one choice, much to our regret, which is to relocate most staff out of Guereda area, as we cannot continue to perform our activities in favor of refugees."
Revised:  A representative for the organisation said "We [ the UNHCR] are left only with one choice, much to our regret, which is to relocate most staff out of Guereda area, as we cannot continue to perform our activities in favor of refugees."
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Original: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries - including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia - is believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January.
Revised: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries - including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia - are believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January.
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Original: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries - including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia - are believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January .
Revised: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries — including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia - are believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January .
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Original: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries - including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia - are believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January .
Revised: The cables, SEA-ME-WE 4 and FLAG, which provide communications services for various countries - including India, Pakistan, Egypt, and Saudi Arabia — are believed to have been damaged by a ship attempting to moor off Egypt on Wenesday 30th January .
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Original:  One day later, on February 1, 2008, the FALCON cable was also reported cut 56 km off Dubai.
Revised:  One day later, on February 1, the FALCON cable was also reported cut 56 km off Dubai.
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Original:  Repair ships have been sent to both breaks, with capacity to India expected to reach 80\% of its usual speed by Friday 2nd February
Revised:  Repair ships have been sent to both breaks, with capacity to India expected to reach 80\% of its usual speed by Friday , February 2
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Original:  Repair ships have been sent to both breaks, with capacity to India expected to reach 80\% of its usual speed by Friday, February 2 
Revised:  Repair ships have been sent to both breaks, with capacity to India expected to reach 80\% of its usual speed by Friday, February 2. 
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Original:  The Commercial Appeal, a Memphis newspaper, also reports that Grizzlies forward Stromile Swift will be traded to the New Jersey Nets for center Jason Collins in a deal expected to be finalized on Monday.
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Original:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people whixh they believe could leed to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution,  also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
Revised:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people whixh they believe could leed to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution, and also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
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Original:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people whixh they believe could leed to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution, and also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
Revised:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people which they believe could leed to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution, and also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
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Original:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people whixh they believe could leed to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution, and also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
Revised:  Bishops argue that this chapter violates the fundamental rights of the poorest people whixh they believe could lead to more people taking part in criminal activities . Protesters also burned a tractor in front of the Monument to the Revolution, and also demanded the dismissal of Alberto Cardenas ,the head of Livestock, Rural Development, Fisheries and Food in Mexico
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Original:  Other fixes include one which prevents another method of running code without permission on a user's computer .
Revised:  Other fixes include one which prevents another method of running code without permission on a user's computer 
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Original:  Several passengers were injured in the accident, and all on board were taken to hospitals for checks  
Revised:  Several passengers were injured in the accident, and all on board were taken to hospitals for checks . 
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