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Original: Australian treasurer Peter Costello has seized on Rudd's mistake showed he was a fraud.
Revised: Australian treasurer Peter Costello has seized on the opposition leaders mistake claiming it showed Rudd was a fraud.
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Original:  Mr Rudd wrongly said that the top tax rate starts at AUD$175,000.
Revised:  Mr Rudd said that he thought the top tax rate starts at AUD$175,000.
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Original:  Australian treasurer Peter Costello  has seized on the opposition leaders mistake claiming it showed Rudd was a fraud.
Revised:  Australian treasurer Peter Costello has seized on the opposition leader's uncertainty claiming that
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Original:  Mr Costello also took the opportunity to demand that the opposition release their taxation policy.
Revised:  Mr Costello demanded that the opposition release their taxation policy.
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Original:  "Since the Labor Party demands an election to be called on a daily basis, you would think they might have the decency of releasing a policy so that people can know what it is," said Costello  
Revised:  "Since the Labor Party demands an election to be called on a daily basis, you would think they might have the decency of releasing a policy so that people can know what it is," said Costello . 
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Original:  Speaking in Queenbeyan , New South Wales earlier today, Mr Rudd was asked if he could name the current tax rates and the thresholds at which they kick in.
Revised:  Speaking in Queanbeyan , New South Wales earlier today, Mr Rudd was asked if he could name the current tax rates and the thresholds at which they kick in.
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Original: 200px|The Australian opposition leader's economic credentials have been attacked by his political opponents after being uncertain about the exact threshold of Australia's highest tax bracket.
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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) a magnitude 6.1 earthquake has stuck Sumatra, Indonesia.
Revised:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) a magnitude 6.1 earthquake has struck Sumatra, Indonesia.
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Original:  Even in mathematics sometimes when I want to be up to date on something I look at Wikipedia   
Revised:  Even in mathematics sometimes when I want to be up to date on something I look at Wikipedia . 
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Original:  I sometimes use it, even in mathematics it's becoming such a reach encyclopedia and so up to date.
Revised:  I sometimes use it, even in mathematics it's becoming such a rich encyclopedia and so up to date.
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip a "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza  a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consulations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consulations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip a "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza  a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consulations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip a "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza , a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consulations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip a "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza  a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consulations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip a "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza a move in which Hamas, the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war." "Following extensive legal consultations , Israel has decided to declare Gaza as a hostile entity, with all the international implications.
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Original:  Ehud Barak, the  Minister of Defense for Israel said the "objective is to weaken Hamas."
Revised:  Ehud Barak, the Israeli Minister of Defense for Israel said the "objective is to weaken Hamas."
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Original:  Ehud Barak, the  Minister of Defense for Israel said the "objective is to weaken Hamas."
Revised:  Ehud Barak, the Minister of Defense said the "objective is to weaken Hamas."
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Original:  Barak also said that Israel is preparing for a military operation in the Gaza Strip saying that "every day that passes brings us closer to an operation in Gaza.
Revised:  Barak also said that Israel is considering a military operation in the Gaza Strip saying that "every day that passes brings us closer to an operation in Gaza.
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move in which Hamas , the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war. "
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war." Hamas is the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war. "
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move in which Hamas , the governing body of Gaza and also labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war. "
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move in which Hamas , the governing body of Gaza , and is labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by the United States Department of State, calls a "declaration of war. "
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continuing firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war."
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continued firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza, a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war."
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continued firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza , a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war."
Revised:  The Israeli government has declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continued firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza , a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war."
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Original:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continued firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza , a move which Hamas calls a "declaration of war."
Revised:  The Israeli government has reportedly declared the Gaza Strip an "enemy entity" due to the continued firing of rockets into Israel from Gaza . Gaza's ruling Hamas party has stated that it considers the announcement a "declaration of war."
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Original:  Hamas is the governing body of Gaza, and is labeled a "foreign terrorist organization" by Israel, the United States, the European Union, Canada and others.
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Original:  The declaration means that Israel could stop supplying Gaza with fuel, electricity and other commodities.
Revised:  The definition means that Israel could stop supplying Gaza with fuel, electricity and other commodities.
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Original: They aim to starve our people and force them to accept humiliating formulas that could emerge from the so-called November peace conference," said Hamas spokesman Fawzi Barhoum.
Revised: They aim to starve our people and force them to accept humiliating formulas that could emerge from the so-called November peace conference," 
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Original:  Ehud Barak , the Israeli Minister of Defense said the "objective is to weaken Hamas."
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Original:  Barak also said that Israel is considering a military operation in the Gaza Strip saying that "every day that passes brings us closer to an operation in Gaza.  
Revised:  Barak also said that Israel is considering a military operation in the Gaza Strip saying that "every day that passes brings us closer to an operation in Gaza. " 
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Original: Hyman's crime, as reported in wikinews: UK_PM's Speechwriter Awaits Sentence last month, was calculated to send an innocent father to prison by providing him with a faked Court of Appeal judgment .
Revised: Hyman's crime, as reported in wikinews: UK_PM's Speechwriter Awaits Sentence last month, was calculated to send an innocent father to prison by providing him with a faked Court of Appeal judgment 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% PARTICULARS OF OFFENCE BRUCE ANTHONY HYMAN between the 1st day of September 2006 and the 28th day of September 2006 with intent to pervert the course of public justice, did a series of acts which had a tendency to pervert the course of public justice in that%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (a)
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BRUCE ANTHONY HYMAN between the 1st day of September 2006 and the 28th day of September 2006 with intent to pervert the course of public justice, did a series of acts which had a tendency to pervert the course of public justice in that%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (a)
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% PARTICULARS OF OFFENCE BRUCE ANTHONY HYMAN between the 1st day of September 2006 and the 28th day of September 2006 with intent to pervert the course of public justice, did a series of acts which had a tendency to pervert the course of public justice in that%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (a)
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% PARTICULARS OF OFFENCE %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (a)
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Original: Bruce Hyman, the UK barrister who pleaded guilty to perverting the course of justice in August was sentenced to one year in prison at Bristol Crown court yesterday.
Revised: Bruce Hyman, the UK barrister who pleaded guilty to perverting the course of justice in August was sentenced to one year in prison at Bristol Crown Court yesterday.
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Original:  After having pleaded in mitigation to be suffering from agitated depression and presenting a character reference from Sir Mark Potter, Head of the Family Division of the High court , Hyman will now serve about six months with remission.
Revised:  After having pleaded in mitigation to be suffering from agitated depression and presenting a character reference from Sir Mark Potter, Head of the Family Division of the High Court , Hyman will now serve about six months with remission.
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Original:  striking a victory for Republicans . Democrats  needed at least 60 votes in order for the bill to allow detainees to fight and they only received 56, which included six Republicans.
Revised:  striking a victory for Republicans . Democrats needed at least 60 votes in order for the bill to allow detainees to fight but received only 56, which included six Republicans.
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Original:  "[The bills failure to pass] calls into question the United States' historic role of defender of human rights in the world.
Revised:  "[The bill's failure to pass] calls into question the United States' historic role of defender of human rights in the world.
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Original:  This is America? , " said Democratic Senator for Vermont, Patrick J. Leahy.
Revised:  This is America? " said Democratic Senator for Vermont, Patrick J. Leahy.
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Original:  Republicans claim that to allow detainees those rights, the U.S. would have the potential to be engulfed in an endless line of lawsuits.
Revised:  Republicans claim that to allow detainees those rights, the U.S. would potentially be engulfed in an endless line of lawsuits.
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Original: The new transit system, South Lake Union Streetcar (SLUS) has had an unofficial change in its abbreviation to ' S.L.U.T ' by local residents.
Revised: The new transit system, South Lake Union Streetcar (SLUS) has had an unofficial change in its abbreviation to " S.L.U.T ' by local residents.
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Original: The new transit system, South Lake Union Streetcar (SLUS) has had an unofficial change in its abbreviation to ' S.L.U.T ' by local residents.
Revised: The new transit system, South Lake Union Streetcar (SLUS) has had an unofficial change in its abbreviation to ' S.L.U.T ." by local residents.
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Original:  Some have even designed and sold more than 100 t-shirts saying "Ride the S.L.U.T."  The project, bring built by Vulcan Development, is costing US$50.5 million to build
Revised:  Some have even designed and sold more than 100 t-shirts saying "Ride the S.L.U.T." The project, built by Vulcan Development, is costing US$50.5 million to build
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Original:  City officials admit that they were aware of the notion before they named the system, but didn't care enough to rename it and didn't give the acronym 'streetcar' to avoid the outcome.
Revised:  City officials admit that they were aware of the notion before they named the system, but did not care enough to rename it and didn't give the acronym 'streetcar' to avoid the outcome.
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Original: Image:Dan Rather 2006-04-25.jpg|Rather at University of California, Berkeley on April 25, 2006. ]] Former CBS Evening News anchor Dan Rather has filed a US$70 million  against CBS, three former co-workers and the "corporate parent of CBS.
Revised: Image:Dan Rather 2006-04-25.jpg|Rather at University of California, Berkeley on April 25, 2006. ]] Former CBS Evening News anchor Dan Rather has filed a US$70 million lawsuit against CBS, three former co-workers and the "corporate parent of CBS.
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Original: Image:Dan Rather 2006-04-25.jpg|Rather at University of California, Berkeley on April 25, 2006. ]] Former CBS Evening News anchor Dan Rather has filed a US$70 million lawsuit against CBS, three former co-workers and the "corporate parent  of CBS.
Revised: Image:Dan Rather 2006-04-25.jpg|Rather at University of California, Berkeley on April 25, 2006. ]] Former CBS Evening News anchor Dan Rather has filed a US$70 million lawsuit against CBS, three former co-workers and the "corporate parent " of CBS.
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Original:  The Hindustan Times indicates that the Prime Minister might be failing in his efforts to bring the Maoists back to the government while Reuters has a more optimistic outlook
Revised:  The Hindustan Times indicates that the Prime Minister might be failing in his efforts to bring the Maoists back to the government , Reuters has a more optimistic outlook
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Original: The bloc presented their resignations to Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala on Tuesday (September 18, 2007).
Revised: The bloc presented their resignations to Prime Minister Girija Prasad Koirala on Tuesday , September 18.
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Original:  The Hindustan Times indicates that the Prime Minister might be failing in his efforts to bring the Maoists back to the government , Reuters has a more optimistic outlook
Revised:  The Hindustan Times indicates that the Prime Minister might be failing in his efforts to bring the Maoists back to the government 
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Original:  The Hindustan Times suggests that discussions are faltering, while Reuters seems more optimistic on reconciliation  
Revised:  The Hindustan Times suggests that discussions are faltering, while Reuters seems more optimistic on reconciliation . 
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Original: The World Health Organization (WHO) issued a warning to approximately 6,400 laboratories in the United States and 17 other countries around the world, instructing them to destroy samples of the deadly H2N2 Asian influenza virus , that was mistakenly sent to them last fall by the College of American Pathologists, US company Meridian Bioscience and several other organizations responsible for testing laboratory proficiency  , as soon as possible.
Revised: The World Health Organization (WHO) issued a warning to approximately 6,400 laboratories in the United States and 17 other countries around the world, instructing them to destroy samples of the deadly H2N2 Asian influenza virus that was mistakenly sent to them last fall by the College of American Pathologists, US company Meridian Bioscience and several other organizations responsible for testing laboratory proficiency , as soon as possible.
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Original: The World Health Organization (WHO) issued a warning to approximately 6,400 laboratories in the United States and 17 other countries around the world, instructing them to destroy samples of the deadly H2N2 Asian influenza virus , that was mistakenly sent to them last fall by the College of American Pathologists, US company Meridian Bioscience and several other organizations responsible for testing laboratory proficiency  , as soon as possible.
Revised: The World Health Organization (WHO) issued a warning to approximately 6,400 laboratories in the United States and 17 other countries around the world, instructing them to destroy samples of the deadly H2N2 Asian influenza virus , that was mistakenly sent to them last fall by the College of American Pathologists, US company Meridian Bioscience and several other organizations responsible for testing laboratory proficiency worldwide , as soon as possible.
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Original:   H2N2 , killed between 1 million and 4 million people in 1957 and is thought to have become extinct in the wild in 1968.
Revised:  The H2N2 , killed between 1 million and 4 million people in 1957 and is thought to have become extinct in the wild in 1968.
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Original:  The WHO stated that the virus strain should never have been circulated, because of the risk that it could cause a pandemic among people born after 1968, who would probably have little or no immunity to the strain, as it is not contained in current flu vaccines.
Revised:  The WHO stated that the virus strain should never have been circulated, because of the risk that it could cause a pandemic among people born after 1968, who would probably have little or no immunity to it, as the strain is not contained in current flu vaccines.
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Original:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the probability of an outbreak, and confirm no signs of contagion as yet.
Revised:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the possibility of an outbreak, and confirm no signs of contagion as yet.
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Original:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the probability of an outbreak, and confirm no signs of contagion as yet.
Revised:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the probability of an outbreak, and confirmed no signs of contagion as yet.
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Original:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the possibility of an outbreak , and confirmed no signs of contagion as yet .
Revised:  Officials of both organizations have assigned a low but real risk to the possibility of an outbreak . No-one has actually become infected .
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Original: Motion Picture Association of America has also filed several lawsuits, against students, but has declined to comment on the number of students sued.
Revised: The MPAA has also filed several lawsuits, against students, but has declined to comment on the number of students sued.
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Original:  The penalty increases for a second offense, $ 1000 or up to 6 months in jail, and increases again for a third offense, $2500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  The penalty increases for a second offense, $ 1000 or 6 months in jail, and increases again for a third offense, $2500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  The penalty increases for a second offense, $ 1000 or up to 6 months in jail, and increases again for a third offense, $2500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  The penalty increases for a second offense, $ 1000 or up to 6 months in jail, and for a third offense, $2500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  This means for a Spotsylvania County dog owner, if he cannot abide a new law that might fine him $ 250 dollars because his dog bit the mailman, he can move to a nearby county where no such law exists.
Revised:  This means for a Spotsylvania County dog owner, if he cannot abide a new law that might fine him $ 250 because his dog bit the mailman, he can move to a nearby county where no such law exists.
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Original:  While this proposal is mainly a reaction to a tragic and isolated incident  , there is no reason to think that  , say a bird owner, should feel immune.
Revised:  While this proposal is mainly a reaction to a tragic and isolated incident , there is no reason to think that any keeper of a pet, say of a bird , say a bird owner, should feel immune.
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Original:  While this proposal is mainly a reaction to a tragic and isolated incident  , there is no reason to think that  , say a bird owner, should feel immune.
Revised:  While this proposal is mainly a reaction to a tragic and isolated incident , there is no reason to think that , should feel immune.
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Original:  How are we to know which is worse , being bitten by a dog, or being bitten by a bird?
Revised:  How are we to know which is worse : being bitten by a dog, or being bitten by a bird?
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Original:  How are we to know which is worse , being bitten by a dog, or being bitten by a bird?
Revised:  How are we to know which is worse , being bitten by a dog, or by a bird?
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Original:  The legal wording the county would use in drafting the legislation would not , nor should it concern itself with the species of pet.
Revised:  The legal wording the county would use in drafting the legislation does not concern itself with the species of pet.
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Original:  What it needs to concern itself with , is what meets the definition of a pet, and exactly what negligence is.
Revised:  What it needs to concern itself with is what meets the definition of a pet, and exactly what negligence is.
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