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Original:  Johann Munthe's association with Yuan Shikai proved advantageous , and he advanced in rank to lieutenant general and advisor to the Ministry of War;
Revised:  Johann Munthe's association with Yuan Shikai proved advantageous . He advanced in rank to lieutenant general and advisor to the Ministry of War;
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Original:  General Munthe was an avid collector of Chinese works of arts, and his collection includes porcelain, paintings, costumes, and statues in bronze and marble.
Revised:  Munthe was an avid collector of Chinese works of arts, and his collection includes porcelain, paintings, costumes, and statues in bronze and marble.
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Original:  The Jordan Schnitzer Museum of Art at the University of Oregon also holds a large number of works collected by General Munthe and later acquired by the Museum's founder, Gertrude Bass Warner  . General Munthe was the stepfather of Sir Alexander Grantham , Governor of Hong Kong from 1947 to 1957. 
Revised:  The Jordan Schnitzer Museum of Art at the University of Oregon also holds a large number of works collected by Munthe and later acquired by the Museum's founder, Gertrude Bass Warner . General Munthe was the stepfather of Sir Alexander Grantham , Governor of Hong Kong from 1947 to 1957. 
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Original:  Their day to day duties include blood typing, cross-matching and antibody identification.
Revised:  Their day-to-day duties include blood typing, cross-matching and antibody identification.
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Original:  Immunohematologist  
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Original: Immunohematology , more commonly known as blood banking is a branch of hematology which studies antigen-antibody reactions and analogous phenomena as they relate to the pathogenesis and clinical manifestations of blood disorders.
Revised: Immunohematology is a branch of hematology which studies antigen-antibody reactions and analogous phenomena as they relate to the pathogenesis and clinical manifestations of blood disorders.
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Original:  Other research avenues are in the field of stem cell researches, regenerative medicine and cellular therapy .
Revised:  Other research avenues are in the field of stem cell researches, regenerative medicine and cellular therapy 
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Original: ]] Urban wilds, particularly those of several acres or more, are often intact ecological systems that can provide essential ecosystem functions such as the filtering of urban run-off, the storing and slowing the flow of stormwater, amelioration of the warming effect of urban development, and are generally beneficial to air quality.
Revised: ]] Urban wilds, particularly those of several acres or more, are often intact ecological systems that can provide essential ecosystem functions such as the filtering of urban run-off, the storing and slowing the flow of stormwater, amelioration of the warming effect of urban development, and generally benefiting local air quality.
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Original:  Urban wilds are vital to those species of migratory birds that have nested in a given area since before to its urbanization.
Revised:  Urban wilds are vital to species of migratory birds that have nested in a given area since before to its urbanization.
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Original:  Urban wilds are vital to those species of migratory birds that have nested in a given area since before to its urbanization.
Revised:  Urban wilds are vital to those species of migratory birds that have nested in a given area since prior to its urbanization.
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Original: Category:Nature Image:Shea circle.jpg|400px|Pedestrian entrance to Franklin Park, Boston where several major streets and the Arborway connect.
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Original: Category:Nature Image:Shea circle.jpg|400px|Pedestrian entrance to Franklin Park, Boston where several major streets and the Arborway connect.
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Original:  Preservation Image:Bluff_Creek_and_Playa_Vista.jpg|333px|New development on the Ballona Wetlands, Los Angeles, California Without formal protection, urban wilds are vulnerable to development.
Revised:  Preservation Without formal protection, urban wilds are vulnerable to development.
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Original: The Forty Group was a Kenyan society or organization of the mid-twentieth century constituted primarily of members of the Kenya African Union who joined with the aim of using violence to make their voice heard.
Revised: The Forty Group was a Kenyan society or organisation of the mid-twentieth century constituted primarily of members of the Kenya African Union who joined with the aim of using violence to make their voice heard.
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Original:  The organization was also called Kiama kia 40 translating to The [political] party of 40.
Revised:  The organisation was also called Kiama kia 40 translating to The [political] party of 40.
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Original:  The organization consisted mainly of men fresh from service in World War II.
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Original:  The organisation was also called Kiama kia 40 translating to The political party of 40.
Revised:  The organisation was also called Kiama kia 40 translating to The (political) party of 40.
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Original: 1950 deaths Category:People from Jackson County, Wisconsin Category:United States Marines Category:Military personnel from Wisconsin Category:American Marine Corps personnel of World War II Category:United States Army Medal of Honor recipients Category:United States Army soldiers Category:American military personnel killed in the Korean War Category:Native American United States military personnel Category:Ho-Chunk people Category:Korean War recipients of the Medal of Hon
Revised: 1950 deaths Category:People from Jackson County, Wisconsin Category:United States Marines Category:Military personnel from Wisconsin Category:American Marine Corps personnel of World War II Category:United States Army Medal of Honor recipients Category:United States Army soldiers Category:American military personnel killed in the Korean War Category:Native American United States military personnel Category:Ho-Chunk people Category:Korean War recipients of the Medal of Honor Category:American army personnel of the Korean W
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Original:  This "acidic electrolyzed water" can be raised in pH by mixing in the desired amount of hydroxide ion solution from the cathode compartment, yielding a solution of Hypochlorous acid (HOCl) and sodium hydroxide (NaOH).
Revised:  This "acidic electrolyzed water" can be raised in pH by mixing in the desired amount of hydroxide ion solution from the cathode compartment, yielding a solution of hypochlorous acid (HOCl) and sodium hydroxide (NaOH).
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Original:  The resulting water  can be used as a disinfectant.
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Original:  This "acidic electrolyzed water" can be raised in pH by mixing in the desired amount of hydroxide ion solution from the cathode compartment, yielding a solution of hypochlorous acid (HOCl) and sodium hydroxide (NaOH).
Revised:  This "acidic electrolyzed water" can be raised in pH by mixing in the desired amount of hydroxide ion solution from the cathode compartment, yielding a solution of Hypochlorous acid (HOCl) and sodium hydroxide (NaOH).
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Original:  See also Degree of ionization Disinfectant Electrochemical engineering Electrodeionization Electrolysis of water Mixed oxidant Water ionizer
Revised:  See also Disinfectant Electrolysis of water Mixed oxidant Water ionizer
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Original:  See also Degree of ionization Disinfectant Electrochemical engineering Electrodeionization Electrolysis of water Mixed oxidant Water ionizer
Revised:  See also Degree of ionization Disinfectant Electrochemical engineering Electrodeionization Electrolysis of water Water ionizer Electrodeionization Electrochemical engineering Degree of ionization Mixed oxidant
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Original:  But, acidic ionized water (a byproduct of electrolysis) will store indefinitely (until it's used up or evaporated).
Revised:  But, acidic ionized water (a byproduct of electrolysis) will store indefinitely (until used or evaporated).
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Original:  The electrolysis of such salt solutions produces a solution of hypochlorous acid and sodium hydroxide , despite the impossibility of hypochlorous acid coexisting with sodium hydroxide in solution .
Revised:  The electrolysis of such salt solutions produces a solution of hypochlorous acid and sodium hydroxide .
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Original: Hijas del Sol (Spanish for Daughters of the Sun), namely Piruchi Apo Botupá and Paloma Loribo Apo, are an aunt and niece duo from the island of Bioko in Equatorial Guinea who write, sing and perform songs in both Bubi and Spanish.
Revised: Hijas del Sol (Spanish for Daughters of the Sun), namely Piruchi Apo Botupá and Paloma Loribo Apo, are an aunt and niece duo from the island of Bioko in Equatorial Guinea who write, sing and perform songs in both Bube and Spanish.
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Original:  Their debut album Sibèba (1995) is a blend of more traditional Bubi music and their own compositions, sung in both Bubi and Spanish.
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Original:  Their debut album Sibèba (1995) is a blend of more traditional Bubi music and their own compositions, sung in both Bubi and Spanish.
Revised:  Their debut album Sibèba (1995) is a blend of more traditional Bubi music and their own compositions, sung in both Bube and Spanish.
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bubi culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
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Original:  Hijas del Sol Category:Equatoguinean Roman Catholics Category: Bubi people Category:Equatoguinean expatriates in Spain Category:Spanish people of Equatoguinean desce
Revised:  Hijas del Sol Category:Equatoguinean Roman Catholics Category: Bube people Category:Equatoguinean expatriates in Spain Category:Spanish people of Equatoguinean desce
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best"  and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995  and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. 
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" URL and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. 
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best"  and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995  and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. 
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 URL and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. 
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best"  and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995  and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. 
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan. References
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Original: They first performed together in 1992 for a competition in el Centro Cultural Hispano Guineano, where they won prizes for best original song and best choreography URL year they also performed for the first time in Spain at both the Expo de Sevilla and in the Festival de la OTI.
Revised: They first performed together in 1992 for a competition in el Centro Cultural Hispano Guineano, where they won prizes for best original song and best choreography .That year they also performed for the first time in Spain at both the Expo de Sevilla and in the Festival de la OTI.
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" URL and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 URL and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 URL and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" URL and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 URL and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" URL and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA, Canada and Japan.
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Original: Hijas del Sol (Spanish for Daughters of the Sun), namely Piruchi Apo Botupá and Paloma Loribo Apo, are an aunt and niece duo from the island of Bioko in Equatorial Guinea who write, sing, and perform songs in both Bube and Spanish.
Revised: Hijas del Sol (Spanish , Daughters of the Sun), namely Piruchi Apo Botupá and Paloma Loribo Apo, are an aunt and niece duo from the island of Bioko in Equatorial Guinea who write, sing, and perform songs in both Bube and Spanish.
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Original:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the USA , Canada and Japan.
Revised:  Sibèba ("aquello que se quiere conseguir"), can be translated as, "a place of salvation reserved for the best" and the album tells of the traditions of both Bube culture and Catholics religion as well as the problems that immigrants encounter in modern-day Spain. fRoots placed the album at No.1 in its annual listing for 1995 and the album was also released throughout Europe, the US , Canada and Japan.
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Original:   See also Father complex Fathers' rights movement Paternal age effect Patricide Paternal bond Putative father Putative father registry Responsible fatherhood Shared Earning/Shared Parenting Marriage Sociology of fatherhood "Father" can also refer metaphorically to a person who is considered the founder of a body of knowledge or of an institution.
Revised: Many species, though, display little or no paternal role in caring for offspring. The male leaves the female soon after mating and long before any offspring are born. It is the females who must do all the work of caring for the young. A male bear leaves the female shortly after mating and will kill and sometimes eat any bear cub he comes across, even if the cub is his. Bear mothers spend much of their cubs' early life protecting them from males. (Many artistic works, such as advertisements and cartoons, depict kindly "papa bears" when this is the exact opposite of reality.) Domesticated dog fathers show little interest in their offspring, and unlike wolves, are not monogamous with their mates and are thus likely to leave them after mating. Male lions will tolerate cubs, but only allow them to eat meat from dead prey after they have had their fill. A few are quite cruel towards their young and may hurt or kill them with little provocation. A male who kills another male to take control of his pride will also usually kill any cubs belonging to that competing male. However, it is also the males who are responsible for guarding the pride while the females hunt. However the male lions are the only felines that actually have a role in fatherhood. Male rabbits generally tolerate kits but unlike the females, they often show little interest in the kits and are known to play rough with their offspring when they are mature, especially towards their sons. This behaviour may also be part of an instinct to drive the young males away to prevent incest matings between the siblings. The females will eventually disperse from the warren as soon as they mature but the father does not drive them off like he normally does to the males. Horse stallions and pig boars have little to no role in parenting, nor are they monogamous with their mates. They will tolerate young to a certain extent, but due to their aggressive male nature, they are generally annoyed by the energetic exuberance of the young, and may hurt or even kill the young. Thus, stud stallions and boars are not kept in the same pen as their young or other females. See also Father complex Fathers' rights movement Paternal age effect Patricide Paternal bond Putative father Putative father registry Responsible fatherhood Shared Earning/Shared Parenting Marriage Sociology of fatherhood "Father" can also refer metaphorically to a person who is considered the founder of a body of knowledge or of an institution.
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Original:  Biological fatheror just "Father"
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Original: Fatherhood in the Western World Father and children in Florida, United States| A father and his children in Florida In the West, the image of the married father as the primary wage-earner is changing.
Revised: Fatherhood in the Western World A father and his children in Florida In the West, the image of the married father as the primary wage-earner is changing.
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Original: Amitav Ghosh is an Indian banker.
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Original:  He  served for 20 days from 15 January – 4 February 1985, as the 16th governor of the Reserve Bank of India.
Revised:  He had served for 20 days from 15 January – 4 February 1985, as the 16th governor of the Reserve Bank of India.
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Original:  He passed away at 90.
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Original:  Category:Indian bankers Category:Indian civil servants Category:Governors of the Reserve Bank of India Category: Living people Category: Bengali people Category:Businesspeople from Kolkata Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
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Original:  Category:Indian bankers Category:Indian civil servants Category:Governors of the Reserve Bank of India Category: Living people Category: Bengali people Category:Businesspeople from Kolkata Category:Year of birth missing (living peopl
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Original: Deshmukh Award Following Partition, the division of income tax revenue and jute export duty between the Union  and the states of India had to be decided based on the changed geographical realities.
Revised: Deshmukh Award Following Partition, the division of income tax revenue and jute export duty between the Union government and the states of India had to be decided based on the changed geographical realities.
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Original:  Recipients of the Padma Vibhushan in public affairs Category:Companions of the Order of the Indian Empire Category: Knights Bachelor Category:Ramon Magsaysay Award winners Category:1896 births Category:1982 deaths Category: Vice-Chancellors of the University of Delhi Category: Candidates for President of India Category: People from Raigad district Category: 20th-century Indian businesspeople Category: Businesspeople from Maharashtra Category: Ministers_for_Corporate_Affai
Revised:  Recipients of the Padma Vibhushan in public affairs Category:Companions of the Order of the Indian Empire Category: Knights Bachelor Category:Ramon Magsaysay Award winners Category:1896 births Category:1982 deaths Category: Vice-Chancellors of the University of Delhi Category: Candidates for President of India Category: People from Raigad district Category: Businesspeople from Maharashtra Category: Ministers_for_Corporate_Affai
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