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Original:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use and to graze their cattle on . Villagers gained profit from each additional cattle on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the cattle depleting the grass.
Revised:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use and to graze their cattle on . Villagers gained profit from each additional cattle on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the animals depleting the grass.
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Original:  Ground-water is a natural resource that can be difficult to assign property rights to and is needed by all individuals.
Revised:  Groundwater is a natural resource that can be difficult to assign property rights to and is needed by all individuals.
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Original:  Private firms and everyday consumers will extract groundwater for their own use.
Revised:  Private firms as well as everyday consumers will extract groundwater for their own use.
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Original:  The water is then diminished resulting in a tragedy of the commons and a loss of utility for everyone that uses the ground-water (communized costs).
Revised:  The water supply is diminished, resulting in a tragedy of the commons and a loss of utility for everyone that uses the ground-water (communized costs).
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Original:  The water is then diminished resulting in a tragedy of the commons and a loss of utility for everyone that uses the ground-water (communized costs).
Revised:  The water is then diminished resulting in a tragedy of the commons and a loss of utility for everyone that uses the groundwater (communized costs).
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Original:  Every individual will come to this same conclusion and the natural resource will be diminished .
Revised:  Every individual will come to this same conclusion and the natural resource will be depleted .
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Original:  Where there are two individuals making separate choices to either defect and privatize benefits and commonize costs, or to cooperate and refrain from personal gain in order to preserve a resource.
Revised:  Where there are two individuals making separate choices to defect by privatizing benefits and commonizing costs, or to cooperate and refrain from personal gain in order to preserve a resource.
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Original:  However, their fishing depletes the amount of fish in the ocean, hurting the environment and other individuals.
Revised:  However, their overfishing depletes the amount of fish in the ocean, hurting the environment and other individuals.
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Original:  Hardin argues that the owners of mining companies profit from their workers, while workers suffer the negative health effects of mining such as respiratory damage, chronic lead poisoning, mercury poisoning, the " black lung disease " , and poisoning by radon gas in uranium mines.
Revised:  Hardin argues that the owners of mining companies profit from their workers, while workers suffer the negative health effects of mining such as respiratory damage, chronic lead poisoning, mercury poisoning, black lung disease " , and poisoning by radon gas in uranium mines.
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Original:  Hardin argues that the owners of mining companies profit from their workers, while workers suffer the negative health effects of mining such as respiratory damage, chronic lead poisoning, mercury poisoning, the " black lung disease " , and poisoning by radon gas in uranium mines.
Revised:  Hardin argues that the owners of mining companies profit from their workers, while workers suffer the negative health effects of mining such as respiratory damage, chronic lead poisoning, mercury poisoning, the " black lung disease , and poisoning by radon gas in uranium mines.
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Original:   Later in his career, Hardin argued that a strict individual responsibility could preserve the commons.
Revised:  However later in his career, Hardin argued that a strict individual responsibility could preserve the commons.
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Original:  He describes systems of accountability for policy makers in order to preserve the commons for their constituents.
Revised:  He described systems of accountability for policy makers in order to preserve the commons for their constituents.
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Original:  This puts the responsibility for preserving the commons onto the political system   .
Revised:  This puts the responsibility for preserving the commons onto the political system . .
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Original:  White blood cells are not commonly used during transfusion, but are part of the immune system, and fight infections.
Revised:  White blud cells are not commonly used during transfusion, but are part of the immune system, and fight infections.
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Original:   Nd:YAG laser can also then break up the cataract as in phacoemulsification. as PDF The authors declare a financial interest in a company producing femtosecond laser equipment.
Revised:  A Nd:YAG laser can also then break up the cataract as in phacoemulsification. as PDF The authors declare a financial interest in a company producing femtosecond laser equipment.
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Original:  Category: Ophthalmology Category:Eye Category:Vision Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Disorders of lens Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa  Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
Revised:  Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Disorders of lens Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
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Original:  Category: Ophthalmology Category:Eye Category:Vision Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Disorders of lens Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa  Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
Revised:  Category: Ophthalmology Category:Eye Category:Vision Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
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Original:  Category: Ophthalmology Category:Eye Category:Vision Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Disorders of lens Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa  Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
Revised:  Category: Ophthalmology Category:Eye Category:Vision Category: Aging-associated diseases Category:Blindness Category: Disorders of lens Category: Diseases of the eye and adnexa Category:Disorders of lens Category:Eye Category:Ophthalmology Category:Vision Category:Wikipedia medicine articles ready to translate Category:Wikipedia neurology articles ready to transla
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Original: Prabhakar had enacted in Khotachiwadi when he spend some time at Ramju Purshottam Chawl - V.P. Road.
Revised: Prabhakar had enacted in Khotachiwadi when he spend some time at Ramji Purshottam Chawl - V.P. Road.
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Original:  Plato's use of such an analogy can be interpreted for many different reasons in philosophy.
Revised: Analysis Plato's use of such an analogy can be interpreted for many different reasons in philosophy.
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Original:  The sun is a metaphor for the nature of reality and knowledge concerning it.
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Original:  Facing stiffer opposition and trying to make a name for himself, he lost a fight against Miguel Santana in February 1992, but won all his other 5 fights in 1991 and 1992.
Revised:  Facing stiffer opposition and trying to make a name for himself, he lost a fight against Miguel Santana in February 1992, but won all five of his other fights in 1991 and 1992.
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Original:  It said: Quantity As analytical chemistry became more powerful and able to detect smaller and quantities of chemicals, and as chemicals became more widely used, regulatory agencies had an increasingly difficult time administering the Delaney Clause as it "recognizes no distinctions based on carcinogenic potency and, at least in theory, it applies equally to additives used in large amounts and to those present at barely detectable levels.
Revised:  It said: As analytical chemistry became more powerful and able to detect smaller and quantities of chemicals, and as chemicals became more widely used, regulatory agencies had an increasingly difficult time administering the Delaney Clause as it "recognizes no distinctions based on carcinogenic potency and, at least in theory, it applies equally to additives used in large amounts and to those present at barely detectable levels.
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Original:  The list of food additives which were "generally recognized as safe" was first compiled in 1958, and all additives introduced after this time had to be evaluated by new standards.
Revised:  The concept of food additives which were "generally recognized as safe" was first compiled in 1958, and all additives introduced after this time had to be evaluated by new standards.
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Original:  The list of food additives which were "generally recognized as safe" was first compiled in 1958, and all additives introduced after this time had to be evaluated by new standards.
Revised:  The list of food additives being "generally recognized as safe" was first compiled in 1958, and all additives introduced after this time had to be evaluated by new standards.
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Original: As analytical chemistry became more powerful and able to detect smaller and quantities of chemicals, and as chemicals became more widely used, regulatory agencies had an increasingly difficult time administering the Delaney Clause as it "recognizes no distinctions based on carcinogenic potency and, at least in theory, it applies equally to additives used in large amounts and to those present at barely detectable levels.
Revised: As analytical chemistry became more powerful and able to detect smaller quantities of chemicals, and as chemicals became more widely used, regulatory agencies had an increasingly difficult time administering the Delaney Clause as it "recognizes no distinctions based on carcinogenic potency and, at least in theory, it applies equally to additives used in large amounts and to those present at barely detectable levels.
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Original:  The amendment established the designation of "  generally recognized as safe" , which refers to chemicals or substances which can be used as food additives without further evaluation or testing just because they have been long used and there is broad acceptance of their use .
Revised:  The amendment established an exemption from the " generally recognized as safe" , which refers to chemicals or substances which can be used as food additives without further evaluation or testing just because they have been long used and there is broad acceptance of their use .
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Original: PTV Rozi TV 
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Original: Hello Hello TV show PTV Intezar Farmaye TV show PTV Dollar Man TV show PTV Makan No 47 TV drama PTV Bandar Road Sey Kemari TV drama PTV Aangan Tehra Sitcom PTV Baby TV drama PTV Rafta Rafta TV drama PTV Guum TV drama TV One Hariyale Banney TV drama Geo Tv Kuch Kuch Such Much Sitcom Geo Tv Such Much Ki Eid Sitcom telefilm Geo Tv Such Much Ka Election Sitcom telefilm NTM Nokar Key Agey Chaaker TV drama PTV Choun Chan Ahoo TV drama PTV Kia Bane Baat TV drama PTV Bakra Qiston Pe TV comedy show
Revised: Hello Hello TV show PTV Intezar Farmaye TV show PTV Dollar Man TV show PTV Makan No 47 TV drama PTV Bandar Road Sey Kemari TV drama PTV Aangan Terha Sitcom PTV Baby TV drama PTV Rafta Rafta TV drama PTV Guum TV drama TV One Hariyale Banney TV drama Geo Tv Kuch Kuch Such Much Sitcom Geo Tv Such Much Ki Eid Sitcom telefilm Geo Tv Such Much Ka Election Sitcom telefilm NTM Nokar Key Agey Chaaker TV drama PTV Choun Chan Ahoo TV drama PTV Kia Bane Baat TV drama PTV Bakra Qiston Pe TV comedy show
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Original: Talk shows In the talk-show Loose Talk(Pakistani TV series)|Loose Talk , which began in 2005 on ARY Digital, he appeared as a different character in each episode with a total of over 400 episodes interviewed by the TV host Anwar Maqsood, who was also the writer of the programme.
Revised: Talk shows In the talk-show Loose Talk , which began in 2005 on ARY Digital, he appeared as a different character in each episode with a total of over 400 episodes interviewed by the TV host Anwar Maqsood, who was also the writer of the programme.
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Original: Moin Akhter (also: "معین اختر" Moin Akhtar), (24 December 1950 – 22 April 2011) was a Pakistani television, film and stage artist, humorist, comedian, impersonator, host, writer, singer, director and producer who rose to fame in the era of Radio Pakistan along with his co-actors Anwer Maqsood and Bushra Ansari.
Revised: Moin Akhter (also: "معین اختر" Moin Akhtar), (24 December 1950 – 22 April 2011) was a Pakistani television, film and stage artist, humorist, comedian, impersonator, host, writer, singer, director and producer who rose to fame in the era of Radio Pakistan along with his co-actors Anwar Maqsood and Bushra Ansari.
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Original:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar  , at the age of 92, was born in Muradabad , in the modern-day state of Uttar Pradesh in India , and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
Revised:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar was born , at the age of 92, was born in Muradabad , in the modern-day state of Uttar Pradesh in India , and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
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Original:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar  , at the age of 92, was born in Muradabad , in the modern-day state of Uttar Pradesh in India , and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
Revised:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar , at the age of 92, was born in Karachi , in the modern-day state of Uttar Pradesh in India , and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
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Original:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar was born , at the age of 92, was born in Karachi, in the modern-day state of Sindh in Pakistan, and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
Revised:  His father, Muhammad Ibrahim Mehboob, who died a few months after Akhtar passed away , at the age of 92, was born in Karachi, in the modern-day state of Sindh in Pakistan, and after settling in Karachi as a result of the Partition, "passed his life in his own printing press and as a contractor in the garments business.
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Original:  A Sun and Crown stamp of 1890 Imperial British East Africa Company administration  The Imperial British East Africa Company was the first company holding a Royal Charter allowing operation of a postal system, for both local and international mail, to use their company name on their stamps.
Revised:  Imperial British East Africa Company administration The Imperial British East Africa Company was the first company holding a Royal Charter allowing operation of a postal system, for both local and international mail, to use their company name on their stamps.
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Original:  Examples of modern volatile anaesthetics that may be considered sleeping gases are BZ, halothane vapour (Fluothane), methyl propyl ether (Neothyl), methoxyflurane (Penthrane), and the undisclosed fentanyl derivative delivery system used by the FSB in the Moscow theater hostage crisis.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Sleeping gas alarm retail package.jpg|Picture of a sleeping gas alarm on sale in Finland.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Sleep Category:Dream Category:Chemical weapons Category:Gas
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Original:  To provide technical assistance and monitor the entire electoral process ;
Revised:  To provide technical assistance and monitor the entire electoral process in order to go smoothly planned.
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Original:  To provide technical assistance and monitor the entire electoral process in order to go smoothly planned.
Revised:  To provide technical assistance and monitor the entire electoral process ;
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Original: The Military Committee for National Recovery ( Arabic: المجلس العسكري للإنعاش الوطني ) was a short-lived military government of the Islamic Republic of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Mukthar Ould Daddah  on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
Revised: The Military Committee for National Recovery ( Arabic: المجلس العسكري للإنعاش الوطني ) was a short-lived military government of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Mukthar Ould Daddah on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
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Original: The Military Committee for National Recovery ( Arabic: المجلس العسكري للإنعاش الوطني ) was a short-lived military government of the Islamic Republic of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Mukthar Ould Daddah  on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
Revised: The Military Committee for National Recovery ( Arabic: المجلس العسكري للإنعاش الوطني ) was a short-lived military government of the Islamic Republic of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Mukthar Ould Daddah in a coup on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
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Original:  It was headed by Col.
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Original:  It was followed by a second junta, the Military Committee for National Salvation (CSMN) . See also Military Committee for National Salvation (CMSN) - Military government 1979–92.
Revised:  It was followed by a second junta, the Military Committee for National Salvation (CSMN) See also Military Committee for National Salvation (CMSN) - Military government 1979–92.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:History of Mauritania Category:Military dictatorshi
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Original:  , CMRN) was a short-lived military government of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Mukthar Ould Daddah in a coup on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
Revised:  , CMRN) was a short-lived military government of Mauritania after the coup d'état that removed long-time President Moktar Ould Daddah on July 10, 1978, until a second coup on April 6, 1979.
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Original:  Dawson's reluctance to be enshrined as an Expo stemmed, in part, from the breakdown of his relationship with the team during MLB's collusion scandal of 1986–87, when he claims the team not only "threw him out" of Montreal, but tried to prevent other teams from signing him as a free agent.
Revised:  Dawson's reluctance to be enshrined as an Expo stemmed, in part, from the breakdown of his relationship with the team during MLB's collusion scandal of 1986–87, when he claimed the team not only "threw him out" of Montreal, but tried to prevent other teams from signing him as a free agent.
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Original:  As of 2019 , Dawson, Willie McCovey, Jeff King, Alex Rodriguez, and Edwin Encarnacion are the only five players who had hit two home runs in one inning twice.
Revised:  As of 2019 , Dawson, Willie McCovey, Jeff King, Alex Rodriguez, and Edwin Encarnación are the only five players who had hit two home runs in one inning twice.
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Original:  As of 2019 , Dawson, Willie McCovey, Jeff King, Alex Rodriguez, and Edwin Encarnacion are the only five players who had hit two home runs in one inning twice.
Revised:  As of 2019 , Dawson, Willie McCovey, Jeff King, Alex Rodriguez, and Edwin Encarnacion are the only five players to hit two home runs in one inning twice.
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Original: Montreal Expos players Category:National Baseball Hall of Fame inductees Category:National League All-Stars Category:National League home run champions Category:National League Most Valuable Player Award winners Category:National League RBI champions Category:Quebec Metros players Category:Silver Slugger Award winners Category:Sportspeople from Miami Category:National College Baseball Hall of Fame inductees Category:21st-century African-American  peop
Revised: Montreal Expos players Category:National Baseball Hall of Fame inductees Category:National League All-Stars Category:National League home run champions Category:National League Most Valuable Player Award winners Category:National League RBI champions Category:Quebec Metros players Category:Silver Slugger Award winners Category:Sportspeople from Miami Category:National College Baseball Hall of Fame inductees Category:21st-century African-American people Category:20th-century African-American peop
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Original:  Even though he writes left-handed, he bats and throws right-handed.
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Original:  Escritores.org Panero Turbado, Leopoldo (In Spanish)
Revised:  Biography and Study on Leopoldo Panero (In Spanish)
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Original:  In the fall of 1929 he fell ill of tuberculosis and spent eight months recovering in Sanatorium Royal de la Sierra de Guadarrama.
Revised:  In the fall of 1929 he fell ill of tuberculosis and spent eight months recovering in Guadarrama.
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Original:  Biography and Study on Leopoldo Panero published in El Catoblepas (In Spanish)
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Original: Leopoldo Panero , Spanish poet born in Astorga in 1909 and deceased in 1962.
Revised: Leopoldo Panero was Spanish poet, born in Astorga in 1909 and deceased in 1962.
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Original:  Father of the poets Leopoldo María Panero and Juan Luis Panero.
Revised:  He was the father of the poets Leopoldo María Panero and Juan Luis Panero.
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Original:  Usman dan Fodio Shaihu Usman dan Fodio () (also referred to as Shaikh Usman Ibn Fodio, Shehu Uthman Dan Fuduye, or Shehu Usman dan Fodio, 1754–1817) was a writer, preacher, Islamic reformer and Sultan of Sokoto.
Revised:  Usman dan Shaihu Usman dan Fodio () (also referred to as Shaikh Usman Ibn Fodio, Shehu Uthman Dan Fuduye, or Shehu Usman dan Fodio, 1754–1817) was a writer, preacher, Islamic reformer and Sultan of Sokoto.
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Original: Benin Republic (Different from Benin Kingdom of Nigeria ) The Bight of Benin (Republic of Benin)'s shore was part of the so-called "Slave Coast", from where many West Africans were sold (usually by local rulers) to foreign slave traders.
Revised: Benin Kingdom of Nigeria ) The Bight of Benin (Republic of Benin)'s shore was part of the so-called "Slave Coast", from where many West Africans were sold (usually by local rulers) to foreign slave traders.
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