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Original: Definitions "The emic approach investigates how local people think  " (Kottak, 2006): How they perceive and categorize the world, their rules for behavior, what has meaning for them, and how they imagine and explain things.
Revised: Definitions "The emic approach investigates how local people think " . How they perceive and categorize the world, their rules for behavior, what has meaning for them, and how they imagine and explain things.
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Original:   The etic (scientist-oriented) approach shifts the focus from local observations, categories, explanations, and interpretations to those of the anthropologist.
Revised:  " The etic (scientist-oriented) approach shifts the focus from local observations, categories, explanations, and interpretations to those of the anthropologist.
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Original:  An 'emic' account is a description of behavior or a belief in terms meaningful (consciously or unconsciously) to the  actor;
Revised:  An 'emic' account is a description of behavior or a belief in terms meaningful (consciously or unconsciously) to the subject/ actor;
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pike, Harris, and others have argued that cultural " insiders " and " outsiders " are equally capable of producing emic and etic accounts of their culture.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pike, Harris, and others have argued that cultural " insiders " and " emic " are equally capable of producing emic and etic accounts of their culture.
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Original:   Margaret Mead was an anthropologist who studied the patterns of adolescence in Samoa.
Revised:  Cultural research Margaret Mead was an anthropologist who studied the patterns of adolescence in Samoa.
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Original: Explanation Etymology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The terms were coined in 1954 by linguist Kenneth Pike, who argued that the tools developed for describing linguistic behaviors could be adapted to the description of any human social behavior.
Revised:  Etymology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The terms were coined in 1954 by linguist Kenneth Pike, who argued that the tools developed for describing linguistic behaviors could be adapted to the description of any human social behavior.
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Original: Explanation Etymology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The terms were coined in 1954 by linguist Kenneth Pike, who argued that the tools developed for describing linguistic behaviors could be adapted to the description of any human social behavior.
Revised: Explanation %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The terms were coined in 1954 by linguist Kenneth Pike, who argued that the tools developed for describing linguistic behaviors could be adapted to the description of any human social behavior.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Definitions "The emic approach investigates how local people think…
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Definitions "The emic approach investigates how local people think…
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Original:  Mirror for Humanity, p. 47. McGraw-Hill, New York. . Insider vs outsider and uni-cultural vs cross-cultural Some researchers use " etic" to refer to objective or outsider accounts, and "emic " to refer to subjective or insider accounts.
Revised:  Mirror for Humanity, p. 47. McGraw-Hill, New York. . Although emics and etics are sometimes regarded as inherently in conflict and one can be preferred to the exclusion of the other, the complementarity of emic and etic approaches to anthropological research has been widely recognized, especially in the areas of interest concerning the characteristics of human nature as well as the form and function of human social systems.Jingfeng, Xia (2013). An Anthropological Emic-Etic Perspective on Open Access Practices Academic Search Premier. Some researchers use " etic" to refer to objective or outsider accounts, and "emic " to refer to subjective or insider accounts.
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Original: Pike, Harris, and others have argued that cultural " insiders" and " outsiders " are equally capable of producing emicand etic accounts of their culture.
Revised: Pike, Harris, and others have argued that cultural " insiders" and " emic " are equally capable of producing emicand etic accounts of their culture.
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Original:  An 'emic' account is a description of behavior or a belief in terms meaningful (consciously or unconsciously) to the subject/ actor;
Revised:  An 'emic' account is a description of behavior or a belief in terms meaningful (consciously or unconsciously) to the actor;
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Original:  Combining emic and etic research provides richer understanding When these two approaches are combined, the "richest" view of a culture or society can be understood.
Revised:  When these two approaches are combined, the "richest" view of a culture or society can be understood.
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Original:  " As explained below, the term " emic " originated from the specific linguistic term " phonemic " , from phoneme, which is a language-specific way of abstracting speech sounds. ..
Revised:  " and " emic " originated from the specific linguistic term " phonemic " , from phoneme, which is a language-specific way of abstracting speech sounds. ..
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Original:  Cultural research Margaret Mead was an anthropologist who studied the patterns of adolescence in Samoa.
Revised:  Margaret Mead was an anthropologist who studied the patterns of adolescence in Samoa.
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Original:  Print. Psychology research Carl Jung, a Swiss psychoanalyst, is a researcher who took an etic approach in his studies.
Revised:  Print. Carl Jung, a Swiss psychoanalyst, is a researcher who took an etic approach in his studies.
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Original:  Cross-cultural psychology research Emic and etic approaches are important to understanding personality because problems can arise "when concepts, measures, and methods are carelessly transferred to other cultures in attempts to make cross-cultural generalizations about personality."
Revised:  Importance as regards personality Emic and etic approaches are important to understanding personality because problems can arise "when concepts, measures, and methods are carelessly transferred to other cultures in attempts to make cross-cultural generalizations about personality."
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Original:  See also %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Exonym and endonym Citations Further reading External links %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Emic and Etic Standpoints for the Description of Behavior, chapter 2 in Language in Relation to a Unified Theory of the Structure of Human Behavior, vol 2, by Kenneth Pike (published in 1954 by Summer Institute of Linguistics)
Revised:  See also %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Exonym and endonym Further reading External links %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Emic and Etic Standpoints for the Description of Behavior, chapter 2 in Language in Relation to a Unified Theory of the Structure of Human Behavior, vol 2, by Kenneth Pike (published in 1954 by Summer Institute of Linguistics)
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Original:  The SBR is part of the genomics network " OUEST-genopole " and runs a genomics platform "sequencingand mass spectrometryapplied to biology" .
Revised:  The SBR is part of the network " OUEST-genopole " and runs a genomics platform "sequencingand mass spectrometryapplied to biology" .
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Original:  The SBR is part of the genomics network " OUEST-genopole " and runs a genomics platform "sequencingand mass spectrometryapplied to biology" .
Revised:  The SBR is part of the genomics network " OUEST-genopole " and give access to different technological platforms as sequencing, mass spectrometry, microscopy and bioinformatics .
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Original: Andre Cornelius Botha (born 12 September 1975) is a former South African-born Irish cricketer.
Revised: Andre Cornelius Botha (born 12 September 1975) is a former Irish cricketer.
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Original:  Some antiwar Republicans used it, such as Virginia Congressman John Randolph of Roanoke , Donald R. Hickey, "War Hawks": Using Newspapers to Trace a Phrase, 1792-1812" Journal of Military History (2014) 78#2 pp 725-740.
Revised:  Some antiwar Republicans used it, such as Virginia Congressman John Randolph of Roanoke . Donald R. Hickey, "War Hawks": Using Newspapers to Trace a Phrase, 1792-1812" Journal of Military History (2014) 78#2 pp 725-740.
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Original:  The term "liberal hawk" is a derivation of the traditional phrase, in the sense that it denotes an individual with "socially liberal" inclinations coupled with an aggressive outlook on foreign policy   .
Revised:  The term "liberal hawk" is a derivation of the traditional phrase, in the sense that it denotes an individual with "socially liberal" inclinations coupled with an aggressive outlook on foreign policy . .
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Original:  The leader of this faction was Speaker of the House Henry Clay of Kentucky.
Revised:  The leader of this faction was Speaker of the U.S. House of Representatives|Speaker of the House Henry Clay of Kentucky.
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Original:  Both of these men became major players in American politics for decades .
Revised:  Both of these men became major players in Americas .
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Original: A war hawk, or simply hawk, is a term used in politics for someone who favors war or continuing to escalate an existing conflict as opposed to other solutions.
Revised: In politics, a war hawk, or simply hawk, is a term used in politics for someone who favors war or continuing to escalate an existing conflict as opposed to other solutions.
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Original: A war hawk, or simply hawk, is a term used in politics for someone who favors war or continuing to escalate an existing conflict as opposed to other solutions.
Revised: A war hawk, or simply hawk, is someone who favors war or continuing to escalate an existing conflict as opposed to other solutions.
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Original:  to their progeny dates back to the early 20th Century , when a French researcher, Lt. Col. J. J. Vullier, published a study on the subject (called Dosage), which was subsequently modified by an Italian breeding expert, Dr. Franco Varola, in two books he authored, entitled Typology Of The Race Horse and The Functional Development Of The Thoroughbred.
Revised:  to their progeny dates back to the early 20th century , when a French researcher, Lt. Col. J. J. Vullier, published a study on the subject (called Dosage), which was subsequently modified by an Italian breeding expert, Dr. Franco Varola, in two books he authored, entitled Typology Of The Race Horse and The Functional Development Of The Thoroughbred.
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Original: The index itself is compiled by noting the presence of certain influential sires, known as chefs-de-race (French for "chiefs of racing , "  or, more esoterically, "masters of the breed") in the first four generations of a horse's pedigree.
Revised: The index itself is compiled by noting the presence of certain influential sires, known as chefs-de-race (French for "chiefs of racing " or, more esoterically, "masters of the breed") in the first four generations of a horse's pedigree.
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Original: The index itself is compiled by noting the presence of certain influential sires, known as chefs-de-race (French for "chiefs of racing , "  or, more esoterically, "masters of the breed") in the first four generations of a horse's pedigree.
Revised: The index itself is compiled by noting the presence of certain influential sires, known as chefs-de-race (French for "chiefs of racing , " , or, more esoterically, "masters of the breed") in the first four generations of a horse's pedigree.
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Original:  Category:Horse racin
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Original: From specimen collection pakyu Most causes of in vitro hemolysis are related to specimen collection.
Revised: From specimen collection Most causes of in vitro hemolysis are related to specimen collection.
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Original:  Hemolysins damage the red blood cell's cytoplasmic membrane, causing lysis and eventually cell death. to many things
Revised:  Hemolysins damage the red blood cell's cytoplasmic membrane, causing lysis and eventually cell death. 
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Original: Georgy Apollonovich Gapon ( 1870 – 1906 ) was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the Russian Revolution of 1905.
Revised: Georgy Apollonovich Gapon ( – 1906 ) was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the Russian Revolution of 1905.
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Original: Georgy Apollonovich Gapon ( 1870 – 1906 ) was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the Russian Revolution of 1905.
Revised: Georgy Apollonovich Gapon ( 1870 – ) was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the Russian Revolution of 1905.
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Original: Russian Eastern Orthodox priests Category: 19th-century Eastern Orthodox priests Category:20th-century Eastern Orthodox priests Category:Christian anarchists Category: Russian anarchists Category:Russian people of Ukrainian descent Category:Tolstoyans Category:People of the 1905 Russian Revolution Category: Double agents Category:Okhrana informants Category:Extrajudicial killings Category:Murdered Eastern Orthodox priests Category:Unsolved murders in the Russian Empi
Revised: Russian Eastern Orthodox priests Category: 19th-century Eastern Orthodox priests Category:20th-century Eastern Orthodox priests Category:Christian anarchists Category: Russian anarchists Category:Russian people of Ukrainian descent Category:Tolstoyans Category:People of the 1905 Russian Revolution Category: Russian anarchists Category:Russian Eastern Orthodox priests Category:Russian people of Ukrainian descent Category:Tolstoyans Category:Unsolved murders in the Russian Empi
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Original: Georgy Apollonovich Gapon ( –)   was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the 1905 Russian Revolution.
Revised: Georgy Gapon was a Russian Orthodox priest and a popular working-class leader before the 1905 Russian Revolution.
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Original: Dance hosts on cruise ships are  almost exclusively gentlemen, typically between the ages of 40 and 70, who excel in social ballroom dancing.
Revised: Dance hosts on cruise ships are people who fill an unpaid position on cruise ships. They are almost exclusively gentlemen, typically between the ages of 40 and 70, who excel in social ballroom dancing.
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Original:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free . Candidates for dance host positions can contact agencies such as Sixth Star Entertainment, which runs a program called "Distinguished Gents".
Revised:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free Candidates for dance host positions can contact agencies such as Sixth Star Entertainment, which runs a program called "Distinguished Gents".
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Original:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free . Candidates for dance host positions can contact agencies such as Sixth Star Entertainment, which runs a program called "Distinguished Gents".
Revised:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Qualification procedures include a background check, a dance audition with a local dance instructor or video audition, and a written biography with a photograph which can be used as an introduction and conversation starter once onboard .
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Original:  They are almost exclusively gentlemen, typically between the ages of 40 and 70, who excel in social ballroom dancing.
Revised:  They are almost exclusively gentlemen, typically between the ages of 40 and 70, who excel in social ballroom URL
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Original:  Ideal applicants come from well travelled and well educated backgrounds who find it easy to converse on a variety of subjects.
Revised:  Ideal applicants come from well traveled and well educated backgrounds who find it easy to converse on a variety of subjects.
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Original:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free.
Revised:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for URL
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Original:  The film Out to Sea, a comical interpretation of the position, is basically a guide of what not to URL A host must have an inherent love for dancing and socializing and not consider his responsibilities a job, because he'd be disappointed to learn that dance hosting is not a paid position.
Revised:  The film Out to Sea, a comical interpretation of the position, is basically a guide of what not to do. A host must have an inherent love for dancing and socializing and not consider his responsibilities a job, because he'd be disappointed to learn that dance hosting is not a paid position.
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Original:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for URL
Revised:  There are often perks associated with this position including paid airfare for some long sailings, discounts for laundry, bar tabs, and internet, and opportunities to serve as an escorts for shore excursions - which means they may join in on $150+ land-based itineraries for free.
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Original: The French Voulet-Chanoine Mission, led by the captains Paul Voulet and Julien Chanoine, had been dispatched in 1898 to Africa by the French government with the mission to conquer the territories between the Niger River and Lake Chad and join in uniting French territories in West Africa.
Revised: The French Voulet-Chanoine Mission, led by the captains Paul Voulet and Julien Chanoine, had been dispatched in 1898 to Africa by the French government with the mission to conquer the territories between the Nigger River and Lake Chad and join in uniting French territories in West Africa.
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Original:  Paul Joalland called "one of the hottest moment of the campaign".
Revised:  Paul Joalland called "one of the hottest moments of the campaign".
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Original:  After the Azna had started to sisperse under the French gunfire, their lines broke when hit by three grapeshot balls;
Revised:  After the Azna had started to disperse under the French gunfire, their lines broke when hit by three grapeshot balls;
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Original:  so it was decideed to assault the bush, but being careful to leave a way of escape for the Azna open, so to avoid a too deadly confrontation that could cost too much blood.
Revised:  so it was decided to assault the bush, but being careful to leave a way of escape for the Azna open, so to avoid a too deadly confrontation that could cost too much blood.
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Original:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs 4 were killed and 6 wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consummed .
Revised:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs 4 were killed and 6 wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consumed .
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Original:  Determinated to bar the expedition's road, Sarraounia wrote to Voulet a provocative letter full of insults;
Revised:  Determined to bar the expedition's road, Sarraounia wrote to Voulet a provocative letter full of insults;
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Original:  the French took up the challenge, and on April 15 left the camp  marching towards the villages of Lougou and Tougana, where Sarraounia had concentrated her forces.
Revised:  the French took up the challenge, and on April 15 left the camp , marching towards the villages of Lougou and Tougana, where Sarraounia had concentrated her forces.
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Original:  The French met a strong resistance, killing 2 riflemen and wounding 4 , but were at the end successful and forced the Azna to escape.
Revised:  The French met a strong resistance, killing two riflemen and wounding 4 , but were at the end successful and forced the Azna to escape.
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Original:  The French met a strong resistance, killing 2 riflemen and wounding 4 , but were at the end successful and forced the Azna to escape.
Revised:  The French met a strong resistance, killing 2 riflemen and wounding four , but were at the end successful and forced the Azna to escape.
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Original:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs 4 were killed and 6 wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consumed.
Revised:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs four were killed and 6 wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consumed.
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Original:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs 4 were killed and 6 wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consumed.
Revised:  The battle had protracted itself till 13:00, and among the French tirailleurs 4 were killed and six wounded, with 7,000 cartridges consumed.
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Original:  the French took up the challenge, and on April 15  left the camp, marching towards the villages of Lougou and Tougana, where Sarraounia had concentrated her forces.
Revised:  the French took up the challenge, and on 15 left the camp, marching towards the villages of Lougou and Tougana, where Sarraounia had concentrated her forces.
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Original:  After leaving French Sudan in January 1899, they ruthlessly subjected the native peoples, meeting little resistance.
Revised:  After leaving French Sudan in January 1899, they ruthlessly subjugated the native peoples, meeting little resistance.
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Original: Arnaldo T. Ochoa Sánchez (1930 in Cacocum, Cuba – July 13, 1989) was a prominent Cuban general who was executed by the government of Fidel Castro after being found guilty of a variety of crimes including drug smuggling and treason.
Revised: Arnaldo T. Ochoa Sánchez (1930 in Cacocum, Cuba – July 13, 1989) was a Cuban general who was executed by the government of Fidel Castro after being found guilty of a variety of crimes including drug smuggling and treason.
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Original: Arnaldo T. Ochoa Sánchez (1930 in Cacocum, Cuba – July 13, 1989) was a Cuban general who was executed by the government of Fidel Castro after being found guilty of a variety of crimes including drug smuggling and treason.
Revised: Arnaldo Tomás Ochoa Sánchez (1930 in Cacocum, Cuba – July 13, 1989) was a Cuban general who was executed by the government of Fidel Castro after being found guilty of a variety of crimes including drug smuggling and treason.
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