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Original:  The EVA finished at 22:12 GMT , having lasted seven hours and fifty-eight minutes
Revised:  The EVA finished at 22:12 UTC , having lasted seven hours and fifty-eight minutes
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Original: The spacewalk, or EVA , began at 14:13 UTC, with the astronauts leaving the Quest airlock of the Space Station, and starting work to install an attachment point on top of the Columbus module, to allow it to be moved by the Station's robotic arm.
Revised: The spacewalk, or extra-vehicular activity (EVA) , began at 14:13 UTC, with the astronauts leaving the Quest airlock of the Space Station, and starting work to install an attachment point on top of the Columbus module, to allow it to be moved by the Station's robotic arm.
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Original:  The town of Kiryat Yam in Israel is suing Internet corporation Google over an alleged inaccuracy in its Google Earth software, which claims the town was built over the ruins of a Arab village.
Revised:  The town of Kiryat Yam in Israel is suing Internet corporation Google over an alleged inaccuracy in its Google Earth software, which claims the town was built over the ruins of an Arab village.
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Original:  However, town official Naty Keyzilberman says this "obviously cannot be true, because Kiryat Yam was founded in 1945".
Revised:  However, town 's spokesman Naty Key Zilberman says this "obviously cannot be true, because Kiryat Yam was founded in 1945".
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Original:  Adelaide Brisbane Canberra Darwin Hobart Melbourne Perth Sydney 1,000 people gathered to watch the live telecast at the Redfern Community Centre in Redfern, an inner city suburb of Sydney.
Revised:  In Sydney, 1,000 people gathered to watch the live telecast at the Redfern Community Centre in Redfern, an inner city suburb of Sydney.
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Original:  Adelaide Brisbane Canberra Darwin Hobart Melbourne Perth Sydney 1,000 people gathered to watch the live telecast at the Redfern Community Centre in Redfern, an inner city suburb of Sydney.
Revised:  Adelaide Brisbane Canberra Darwin Hobart Melbourne Perth Sydney 1,000 people gathered the Redfern Community Centre in Redfern, an inner city suburb of Sydney.
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Original:  Instead, from the nation’s parliament there has been a stony, stubborn and deafening silence for more than a decade," he said.
Revised:  Instead, from the nation’s parliament there has been a stony, stubborn and amusing silence for more than a decade," he said.
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Original:  Instead, from the nation’s parliament there has been a stony, stubborn and amusing silence for more than a decade," he said.
Revised:  Instead, from the nation’s parliament there has been a stony, stubborn and deafening silence for more than a decade," he said.
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Original: In an opinion piece in today's  Sydney Morning Herald, Tony Abbott defended John Howards legacy.
Revised: In an opinion piece in today's The Sydney Morning Herald, Tony Abbott defended John Howards legacy.
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Original: In an opinion piece in today's  Sydney Morning Herald, Tony Abbott defended John Howards legacy.
Revised: In an opinion piece in today's Sydney Morning Herald, Tony Abbott defended John Howard's legacy.
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Original:  The wording of the apology will be revealed after 5pm AEDT (UTC+11) today, and will be read in parliament tomorrow at 9am AEDT (UTC+11) .
Revised:  The wording of the apology will be revealed after 5pm AEDT (UTC+11) today, and will be read in parliament tomorrow at 9am AEDT .
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Original:  According to the CSO the Consumer Price Index is made up of Over 55,000 prices consisting of 613 headings which cover over 1,000 different items
Revised:  According to the CSO the Consumer Price Index is made up of over 55,000 prices consisting of 613 headings which cover over 1,000 different items
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Original:  The the break was discovered in the gift shop area of the house but quickly began to flood other areas near the shop as firefighters had a difficult time locating the main shut off valves.
Revised:  The the breaks were discovered in the gift shop area of the house but quickly began to flood other areas near the shop as firefighters had a difficult time locating the main shut off valves.
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Original: The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years  such as vandalism.
Revised: The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years , experiencing problems such as vandalism.
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Original:  At the time of the call, the temperature was only 10 (F ) with a wind chill of 4 (F ) above zero.
Revised:  At the time of the call, the temperature was only 10 °F with a wind chill of 4 (F ) above zero.
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Original:  At the time of the call, the temperature was only 10 (F ) with a wind chill of 4 (F ) above zero.
Revised:  At the time of the call, the temperature was only 10 (F ) with a wind chill of 4 °F above zero.
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Original:  On Sunday the temperature was only 3 (F ) with a wind chill of -23 (F) . The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years, experiencing problems such as vandalism.
Revised:  On Sunday the temperature was only 3 °F with a wind chill of -23 (F) . The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years, experiencing problems such as vandalism.
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Original:  On Sunday the temperature was only 3 (F ) with a wind chill of -23 (F) . The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years, experiencing problems such as vandalism.
Revised:  On Sunday the temperature was only 3 (F ) with a wind chill of -23 °F . The house, designed by Frank Lloyd Wright, has seen rough times over the years, experiencing problems such as vandalism.
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Original:  The first half of the complex was built in 1903 and 'completed' in 1905.
Revised:  The first half of the complex was built in 1903 and finished in 1905.
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Original:  Protesters were pictured with signs that said "Remember Lisa McPherson" and "Ask Scienntology Why Lisa McPherson Died", other protesters had posters with her picture on it.
Revised:  Protesters were pictured with signs that said "Remember Lisa McPherson" and "Ask Scientology Why Lisa McPherson Died", other protesters had posters with her picture on it.
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Original:  I don't believe they have much recruiting ability, nor that many members (maybe 100,000 worldwide  ) Also their ruthlessness gives them power.
Revised:  I don't believe they have much recruiting ability, nor that many members (maybe 100,000 worldwide . ) Also their ruthlessness gives them power.
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Original:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings  used on farms to catch vermin and herd cattle, noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
Revised:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings , used on farms to catch vermin and herd cattle, noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
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Original:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin and herd cattle,  noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
Revised:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin , herd cattle, noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
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Original:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin, herd cattle, and as a guard dog  noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
Revised:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin, herd cattle, and as a guard dog , noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
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Original:  the Beauceron, a herding dog orignally bred to herd flocks of sheep in France, later used to sniff out landmines and send messages during the World Wars;
Revised:  the Beauceron, a herding dog originally bred to herd flocks of sheep in France, later used to sniff out landmines and send messages during the World Wars;
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Original:  This year, four breeds of dogs are competing for the first time in the Westminster Kennel Club Dog Show, at Madison Square Garden in New York City  .
Revised:  This year, four breeds of dogs are competing for the first time in the Westminster Kennel Club Dog Show, at Madison Square Garden in New York City , United States .
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Original:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin, herd cattle, and as a guard dog, noted for it's double coat and harness markings.
Revised:  and the Swedish Vallhund, a breed dating back to the time of the Vikings, used on farms to catch vermin, herd cattle, and as a guard dog, noted for its double coat and harness markings.
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Original: Seven people were killed and over 76 injured in the first three days of anti-US protests in Afghanistan.
Revised: Seven people were killed and over 76 injured in the first three days of anti-U.S. protests in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The protests are a response to a published report that states US guards in Guantanamo Bay defiled the Koran.
Revised:  The protests are a response to a published report that states U.S. guards in Guantanamo Bay defiled the Koran.
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Original:  US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice said on Thursday that "respect for religious freedom for all individuals is one of the founding principles of the United States" and that if allegations are proven right, the US will take "appropriate actions".
Revised:  US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice said on Thursday that "respect for religious freedom for all individuals is one of the founding principles of the United States" and that if allegations are proven , the U.S. government will take "appropriate actions".
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Original: Mosque in Afghanistan Seven people were killed and over 76 injured in the first three days of anti-U.S. protests in Afghanistan.
Revised:  Seven people were killed and over 76 injured in the first three days of anti-U.S. protests in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The protests are a response to a published report that states U.S. guards in Guantanamo Bay defiled the Koran .
Revised:  The protests are a response to a published report that states U.S. guards in Guantanamo Bay defiled the .
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Original:  Demonstrations have been reported in at least 12 Afghan cities, but have also spread to neighbouring Pakistan .
Revised:  Demonstrations have been reported in at least 12 Afghan cities, but have also spread to neighbouring .
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Original:  Imams in Kabul expressed their support for demonstrators, but vowed for non-violence
Revised:  in Kabul expressed their support for demonstrators, but vowed for non-violence
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Original:  With the preview exhibition, the reading ages will be expanded widely in Taiwan.
Revised:  With the preview exhibition, the reading population will expand rapidly and widely in Taiwan.
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Original:    Showcases with varied cultures in different countries To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from Frankfurt Book Fair.
Revised:  3 Showcases with varied cultures in different countries To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from Frankfurt Book Fair.
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Original:  Gallery from Huashan Preview Show at Feb 2 3 Showcases with varied cultures in different countries "Books from Our Backyard" special showcase at Australia Pavilion.
Revised:  3 Showcases with varied cultures in different countries "Books from Our Backyard" special showcase at Australia Pavilion.
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Original:  Gallery from Huashan Preview Show at Feb 2 3 Showcases with varied cultures in different countries "Books from Our Backyard" special showcase at Australia Pavilion.
Revised:  Gallery from Huashan Preview Show at Feb 2 Showcases with varied cultures in different countries "Books from Our Backyard" special showcase at Australia Pavilion.
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Original:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at  Taipei World Trade Center  Hall 1 & 3 and  Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
Revised: The 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at Taipei World Trade Center Hall 1 & 3 and Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
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Original:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at  Taipei World Trade Center  Hall 1 & 3 and  Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
Revised:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start tomorrow and end next Monday (Feb. 18) at Taipei World Trade Center Hall 1 & 3 and Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
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Original:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at  Taipei World Trade Center  Hall 1 & 3 and  Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
Revised:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at the Taipei World Trade Center Hall 1 & 3 and Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
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Original:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at  Taipei World Trade Center  Hall 1 & 3 and  Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
Revised:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at Taipei World Trade Center in Hall 1 & 3 and Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
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Original:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at  Taipei World Trade Center  Hall 1 & 3 and  Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
Revised:  2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition (TIBE 2008), organized by Taipei Book Fair Foundation (TBFF), will start from tomorrow (Feb. 13) until next Monday (Feb. 18) at Taipei World Trade Center Hall 1 & 3 and in the Taipei Show (TWTC Hall 2).
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Original:  Before the opening of the main show, the TIBE changed vary as it ever begins . Return of the preview exhibition before the main show Libraries in Taiwan became a key factor as the reading population expanded rapidly.
Revised:  Before the opening of the main show, the TIBE changed very much . Return of the preview exhibition before the main show Libraries in Taiwan became a key factor as the reading population expanded rapidly.
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Original:  Since the Preview Exhibition was ever held at 1992 in Jhonghe City, Taipei County with  "History of books in China" theme, the preview exhibition wasn't eventually held before the main show every year.
Revised:  Since the Preview Exhibition was held in 1992 in Jhonghe City, Taipei County with "History of books in China" theme, the preview exhibition wasn't eventually held before the main show every year.
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Original:  Since the Preview Exhibition was ever held at 1992 in Jhonghe City, Taipei County with  "History of books in China" theme, the preview exhibition wasn't eventually held before the main show every year.
Revised:  Since the Preview Exhibition was ever held at 1992 in Jhonghe City, Taipei County with the "History of books in China" theme, the preview exhibition wasn't eventually held before the main show every year.
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Original:  This pre-main-show exhibition style was ever replaced by a consuming battle between bookstores from actual to virtual (via Internet) and reading festival from municipal libraries in Taiwan since the Ministry of Education of the Republic of China promoted.
Revised:  This pre-main-show exhibition style was replaced by a consuming battle between bookstores from actual to virtual (via Internet) and reading festival from municipal libraries in Taiwan since the Ministry of Education of the Republic of China promoted.
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Original:  But in 2008, After the TBFF was regrouped last year, the preview exhibition finally returned on Feb 2 & 3 with  "Book Market" and "Arts and Crafts".
Revised:  But in 2008, after the TBFF was regrouped last year, the preview exhibition finally returned on Feb 2 & 3 with "Book Market" and "Arts and Crafts".
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Original:  But in 2008, After the TBFF was regrouped last year, the preview exhibition finally returned on Feb 2 & 3 with  "Book Market" and "Arts and Crafts".
Revised:  But in 2008, After the TBFF was regrouped last year, the preview exhibition finally returned on Feb 2 & 3 with the "Book Market" and "Arts and Crafts".
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Original:  With the preview exhibition, the reading population will expand rapidly and widely in Taiwan.
Revised:  With the preview exhibition, the reading population is expected to expand rapidly and widely in Taiwan.
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Original:  To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from  publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from  Frankfurt Book Fair.
Revised:  To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from the publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from Frankfurt Book Fair.
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Original:  To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from  publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from  Frankfurt Book Fair.
Revised:  To gather on different cultures, the TBFF not only arranged a variety of seminars from book-cover designing, changes of publishing industry, publishing style, and strategies from global publishing industry, but also invited executives from publishing industry world-wide such as Michel Le Bris, Gilles Lapouge, Shaun Tan, Markus Zusak, Tony Wheeler, and Maruen Wheeler and executives from the Frankfurt Book Fair.
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Original:  And two book design awards by TBEE named  "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced at Feb 13 & 14.
Revised:  Two book design awards by TBEE named "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced at Feb 13 & 14.
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Original:  And two book design awards by TBEE named  "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced at Feb 13 & 14.
Revised:  And two book design awards by TBEE named the "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced at Feb 13 & 14.
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Original:  And two book design awards by TBEE named  "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced at Feb 13 & 14.
Revised:  And two book design awards by TBEE named "2008 TIBE Prize" and "2008 Golden Butterfly Award" will be successively announced on Feb 13 & 14.
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Original:  Not only  book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose  opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and  closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
Revised:  Not only on book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
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Original:  Not only  book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose  opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and  closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
Revised:  Not only book-designing and pavilions, even though Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
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Original:  Not only  book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose  opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and  closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
Revised:  Not only book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose the opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
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Original:  Not only  book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose  opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and  closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
Revised:  Not only book-designing and pavilions, even though the Australia was named as the main international pavilion, the TBFF chose opening movie "What My Eyes Have Seen" from France and a closing movie named "The Edge of Heaven" from Germany, those selected movies including the opening and closing ones will be screened at the movie pavilion.
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