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Original: Hudson filed the complaint citing an financial report from July in which Thompson had raised nearly US$3.5 million but had spent just $625,000.
Revised: Hudson filed the complaint citing a financial report from July in which Thompson had raised nearly US$3.5 million but had spent just $625,000.
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Original:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike .
Revised:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike 
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Original:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike    
Revised:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike . 
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Original:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike    
Revised:  After opening at 13,078.51 points and then dropping below the 13000 mark, the Dow Jones Industrial Average bounced back in late trading to above 13100, but on lower volume than the previous trading day in what looked like a cover spike * * * * 
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Original:  John Key, leader of New Zealand's National Party, has openly admitted to visiting a strip club  
Revised:  John Key, leader of New Zealand's National Party, has openly admitted to visiting a strip club . 
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Original:  When he did go to the strip club, Key was working in the financial industry  
Revised:  When he did go to the strip club, Key was working in the financial industry . 
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Original:  This caused many people to ask their countries politicians.
Revised:  This caused many people to ask their country's politicians.
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Original:  When he did go to the two strip clubs , Key was working in the financial industryin New York . Helen Clark, prime minister of New Zealand, refused to comment on the visits by Key and Rudd, but did say she, as a woman, saw it as inappropriate entertainment  
Revised:  When he did go to the two strip clubs , Key was working in the financial industryin New York . Helen Clark, prime minister of New Zealand, refused to comment on the visits by Key and Rudd, but did say she, as a woman, saw it as inappropriate entertainment . 
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Original:  When he did go to the two strip clubs , Key was working in the financial industryin New York . Helen Clark, prime minister of New Zealand, refused to comment on the visits by Key and Rudd, but did say she, as a woman, saw it as inappropriate entertainment  
Revised:  When he did go to the two strip clubs , Key was working in the financial industryin New York . Helen Clark, prime minister of New Zealand, refused to comment on the visits by Key and Rudd, but did say she, as a woman, saw it as inappropriate entertainment Key takes the position, however, that he would never visit a strip club now
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Original: A huge political storm has erupted around Australia after labor leader Kevin Rudd was found to have gone to several strip clubs during taxpayer funded trips .
Revised: A huge political storm has erupted around Australia after labor leader Kevin Rudd was found to have gone to a strip club during a taxpayer funded trip .
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Original:  This caused many people to ask their country's politicians  . John Key, leader of New Zealand's National Party, has openly admitted to visiting a strip club after being posed the question by reporters.
Revised:  This caused many people to ask their country's politicians questions . John Key, leader of New Zealand's National Party, has openly admitted to visiting a strip club after being posed the question by reporters.
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Original:  Police Chief Supt Scully has warned people away from the area as it is now being treated as a crime scen
Revised:  Police Chief Supt Scully has warned people away from the area as it is now being treated as a crime scene
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Original:  The Italian ministry of defence reported that the soldiers are currently in a serious condition, and they are currently hospitalized at a French field hospital in the Afghan capital, Kabul.
Revised:  The Italian Ministry of Defence reported that the soldiers are currently in a serious condition, and they are currently hospitalized at a French field hospital in the Afghan capital, Kabul.
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Original:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last name , Hurricane Dean made landfall as a category five storm on Mexico's Yucatan coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning.
Revised:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last night , Hurricane Dean made landfall as a category five storm on Mexico's Yucatan coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning.
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Original:  However, hurricane-force winds were felt over 60 miles  from the center  , and tropical storm conditions impacted areas 175 miles away.
Revised:  However, hurricane-force winds were felt over 60 miles away from the center , and tropical storm conditions impacted areas 175 miles away.
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Original:  However, hurricane-force winds were felt over 60 miles  from the center  , and tropical storm conditions impacted areas 175 miles away.
Revised:  However, hurricane-force winds were felt over 60 miles from the center of the storm , and tropical storm conditions impacted areas 175 miles away.
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Original:  The hurricane has killed at least 12 people already . Related new
Revised:  The hurricane has killed at least 12 people already Related new
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Original:  The hurricane has killed at least 12 people already . Related new
Revised:  The hurricane has killed at least 12 people already . 
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Original:  At 5 a.m. EDT , Dean's winds were clocked at 165 mph, and the center of the storm was about 35 miles east-northeast of Chetumal, moving west-northwest at about 20 mph.
Revised:  At 5 a.m. , Dean's winds were clocked at 165 mph, and the center of the storm was about 35 miles east-northeast of Chetumal, moving west-northwest at about 20 mph.
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Original: At 5 a.m., Dean's winds were clocked at 165 mph, and the center of the storm was about 35 miles east-northeast of Chetumal, moving west-northwest at about 20 mph.
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Original:  Some areas were bracing for up to 20 inches of rain.
Revised:  Some areas braced for up to 20 inches of rain.
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Original:  Dean has currently weakened to a Category 2 storm, with top sustained winds at 105 mph.
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Original:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last night, Hurricane Dean made landfall as a Category 5 storm on Mexico's Yucatan coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning (EDT).
Revised:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last night, Hurricane Dean made landfall as a Category 5 storm on Mexico's Yucátan coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning (EDT).
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Original:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last night, Hurricane Dean made landfall as a Category 5 storm on Mexico's Yucátan coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning (EDT).
Revised:  After gaining strength in the western Caribbean last night, Hurricane Dean made landfall as a Category 5 storm on Mexico's Yucatán coast at about 4:30 a.m. this morning (EDT).
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Original:  The remains of the last missing person following the bridge collapse in Minneapolis was recovered on Monday.
Revised:  The remains of the last missing person following the bridge collapse in Minneapolis were recovered on Monday.
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Original:  Quarterback Michael Vick plead guilty to federal conspiracy charges involving an illegal dogfighting operation yesterday.
Revised:  Atlanta Flacons quarterback Michael Vick plead guilty to federal conspiracy charges involving an illegal dogfighting operation yesterday.
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Original:  Quarterback Michael Vick plead guilty to federal conspiracy charges involving an illegal dogfighting operation yesterday.
Revised:  Quarterback Michael Vick plead guilty to federal charges sorrounding illegal dogfighting yesterday.
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Original:  Arthur Blank, the owner of the Atlanta Falcons, told the NFL Network he is, "not really surprised" by the news of his quarterback's plea.
Revised:  Arthur Blank, owner of the Atlanta Falcons, told the NFL Network he is, "not really surprised" by the news of his quarterback's plea.
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Original:  However, Blank said he could not speculate on the topic of Vick's future as a Falcon 
Revised:  However, Blank could not talk about Vick's future as a Falcon 
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Original:  However, Blank said he could not speculate on the topic of Vick's future as a Falcon 
Revised:  However, Blank said he could not speculate on the topic of Vick's future as a Falcon player
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Original:  However , NASA says the Edwards Air Force Base in California is  not expected to be used.
Revised:  Also , NASA says the Edwards Air Force Base in California is not expected to be used.
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Original:  A usual third possibility , White Sands in New Mexico will not be used  .
Revised:  Another usual back-up , White Sands in New Mexico will not be used .
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Original: The shuttle will actually come in on top of Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida.
Revised: The shuttle will come in on top of Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida.
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Original:  But the shuttle will be way too high to feel its winds.
Revised:  But the shuttle will be too high to feel its winds.
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Original:  Another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico  will not be used, NASA says.
Revised:  Another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says.
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Original:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
Revised:  The three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
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Original:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
Revised:  A three-inch gash in the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
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Original:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
Revised:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and should not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
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Original:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires a lengthy repair, NASA said.
Revised:  A three-inch gash into the shuttle's belly is not a safety risk, and will not lead to damage that requires any lengthy repair, NASA said.
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Original:  The shuttle will come in over Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida.
Revised:  The shuttle will come in on top of Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida.
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Original:  The threat of Dean heading toward Texas earlier last week prompted NASA to cut the mission a few days short in the case that Dean tracked north toward Texas and potentially disabling operations at Houston's Mission Control Center 
Revised:  The threat of Dean heading toward Texas earlier last week prompted NASA to cut the mission a few days short in the case that Dean tracked north toward Houston's Mission Control Center 
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Original: 200px|A shot of the damage to Space Shuttle Endeavor 's thermal protective tiles.
Revised: 200px|A shot of the damage to Space Shuttle Endeavour 's thermal protective tiles.
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Original:  Space Shuttle Endeavor is scheduled to touchdown at 12:32 p.m. EDT today in Cape Canaveral, Florida.
Revised:  Space Shuttle Endeavour is scheduled to touchdown at 12:32 p.m. EDT today in Cape Canaveral, Florida.
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Original:  A final decision has to be made about an hour before the landing, so the rockets can be fired to slow down the shuttle .
Revised:  Rockets were fired to slow down the shuttle .
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Original:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says . Comander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead to prepare to return to Earth after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
Revised:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico are not expected to be used . Comander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead to prepare to return to Earth after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
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Original:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says . Comander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead to prepare to return to Earth after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
Revised:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says . Commander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead to prepare to return to Earth after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
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Original:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says . Comander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead to prepare to return to Earth after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
Revised:  Nasa says that another usual back-up, White Sands in New Mexico , will not be used, NASA says . Comander Scott Kelly was given the go-ahead for re-entry preparations after evaluation of the shuttle's wings and nose was completed .
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Original:  The shuttle will come in on top of Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida .
Revised:  The shuttle will pass above Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida .
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Original:  But the shuttle will be too high to feel its winds .
Revised:  But the shuttle will be too high to be affected .
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Original:  The threat of Dean heading toward Texas earlier last week prompted NASA to cut the mission a few days short in the case that Dean tracked north toward Houston's Mission Control Center and potentially disabling operations
Revised:  The threat of Dean heading toward Texas earlier last week prompted NASA to cut the mission a few days short in the case that Dean tracked north toward Houston's Mission Control Center , potentially disabling operations
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Original:  The landing will take place as long as the crosswind at the landing strip is not too strong.
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Original:  The shuttle will pass above Hurricane Dean on its way to Florida, but the shuttle will be too high to be affected.
Revised:  The shuttle will pass above Hurricane Dean on the approach to Florida, but the shuttle will be too high to be affected.
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Original: 200px|A shot of the damage to Space Shuttle Endeavour's thermal protective tiles.
Revised: High-resolution image showing the damage to Space Shuttle Endeavour's thermal protective tiles.
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Original: 200px|A shot of the damage to Space Shuttle Endeavour's thermal protective tiles.
Revised: 200px|A shot of the damage to the tiles.
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Original:  West Virginia University has regained it's title as "number 1 party school" by the Princeton Review.
Revised:  West Virginia University has once again been named "number 1 party school" by the Princeton Review.
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Original:  However, school administrators say they are disappointed, because they have been trying to curb underage drinking and such rowdy behavior.
Revised:  School administrators say they are disappointed, because they have been trying to curb underage drinking and such rowdy behavior.
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Original:  The school has made the infamous list seven times in the past fifteen years.
Revised:  The school has made the list seven times in the past fifteen years.
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Original:  But, some WVU students, like Senior Katie O'Hara , says it is nothing but an honor , "No matter what kind of party you want it's here -- bars, fraternities, house parties."
Revised:  WVU senior Katie O'Hara , says it is nothing but an honor , "No matter what kind of party you want it's here -- bars, fraternities, house parties."
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Original: School administrators say they are disappointed, because they have been trying to curb underage drinking and such rowdy behavior.
Revised: School administrators say they are disappointed, because they have been trying to curb underage drinking and rowdy behavior.
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Original:  31 people were in the office at the time of the fire, including eight PNSC security guards and six other PNSC personel , the rest working for private companies.
Revised:  31 people were in the office at the time of the fire, including eight PNSC security guards and six other PNSC personnel , the rest working for private companies.
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Original:  1 Although there is widespread speculation, AMP Capital chief economist Shane Oliver told Australian Associated Press that the strong job market did not necessarily mean that the Reserve Bank of Australia would hike up interest rates.
Revised:  4 Although there is widespread speculation, AMP Capital chief economist Shane Oliver told Australian Associated Press that the strong job market did not necessarily mean that the Reserve Bank of Australia would hike up interest rates.
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Original:  1 The still-large under-employed category defined by the ABS includes a wide range of persons — anyone employed for less than 35 hours a week, willing and available to work additional hours.
Revised:  5 The still-large under-employed category defined by the ABS includes a wide range of persons — anyone employed for less than 35 hours a week, willing and available to work additional hours.
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Original:  5 Less were long-term unemployed in February than at the same time last year.
Revised:  9 Less were long-term unemployed in February than at the same time last year.
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Original:  In 2004 there were 1.43 long-term unemployed for every short-term unemployed, while in 2005 there were 1.34 3. But ten years ago, there were fewer long-term unemployed than short-term, with 1.07 short-term unemployed to every long-termer 3
Revised:  In 2004 there were 1.43 long-term unemployed for every short-term unemployed, while in 2005 there were 1.34 3. But ten years ago, there were fewer long-term unemployed than short-term, with 1.07 short-term unemployed to every long-termer 11
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Original: Roughly 60\% of the half-million-odd eligible for Penis unemployment benefits in February were denoted as long-term unemployed, according to the Department of Employment and Workplace Relations.
Revised: Roughly 60\% of the half-million-odd eligible for unemployment benefits in February were denoted as long-term unemployed, according to the Department of Employment and Workplace Relations.
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Original:  The Russian aircrafts will fly among French and U.S. planes .
Revised:  The Russian aircraft will fly alongside French and United States aircraft .
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Original: The storms moved into Ohio on Tuesday, flooding a seven-mile stretch of Interstat 75 in northwestern Ohio.
Revised: The storms moved into Ohio on Tuesday, flooding a seven-mile stretch of Interstate 75 in northwestern Ohio.
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Original:  On Monday, the heavy rain flooded street, streams, and even a sewage treatment plant in Iowa.
Revised:  On Monday, the heavy rain flooded street, streams, and a sewage treatment plant in Iowa.
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov)    
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov) India: S R Tendulkar, S C Ganguly, G Gambhir, R Dravid (capt), Yuvraj Singh, K D Karthik, M S Dhoni (wkt), Piyush Chawla, A B Agarkar, R P Singh, Z Khan 
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov)    
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov) Man of the Match: I R Bell (England) 
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov)    
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-15 (Ganguly, 2.3 ov), 2-19 (Gambhir, 5.6 ov), 3-34 (Tendulkar, 11.1 ov), 4-34 (Yuvraj Singh, 11.5 ov), 5-102 (Dhoni, 30.3 ov), 6-105 (Dravid, 31.4 ov), 7-129 (Agarkar, 38.5 ov), 8-145 (Piyush Chawla, 42.1 ov), 9-183 (Khan, 48.3 ov), 10-184 (Singh, 49.6 ov) Umpires: M R Benson and B R Doctrove (West Indies) TV Umpire: I J Gould Match Referee: R S Mahanama (Sri Lanka) Reserve Umpire: N J Llong
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Original: Finland's unemployment rate has continued falling steadily, as it has been doing for two years, and hit a 16-year low in July at 5.9\%, it has been anounced .
Revised: Finland's unemployment rate has continued falling steadily, as it has been doing for two years, and hit a 16-year low in July at 5.9\%, it has been announced .
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Original:  The dramatic decrease is being fueled by strang economic growth in the country.
Revised:  The dramatic decrease is being fueled by strong economic growth in the country.
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Original:  But the attachment broke before the performance and Blackner tried to fix it using extra-strong glue , but unfortunately only let it dry for 20 seconds instead of the usual 20 minutes required.
Revised:  But the attachment broke before the performance and when Blackner attempted a repair, he neglected to let the extra-strong glue , but unfortunately only let it dry for 20 seconds instead of the usual 20 minutes required.
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Original:  But the attachment broke before the performance and Blackner tried to fix it using extra-strong glue , but unfortunately only let it dry for 20 seconds instead of the usual 20 minutes required.
Revised:  But the attachment broke before the performance and Blackner tried to fix it using extra-strong glue dry for the recommended 20 seconds instead of the usual 20 minutes required.
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