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Original:  918 - 983) was a minister of the Liao dynasty.
Revised:  918 – 983) was a minister of the Liao dynasty.
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Original:  Han Dechong (韩德冲 or 韓德崇 ), 6th son – a Grand Commandant (太尉;
Revised:  Han Dechong (韩德冲 ), 6th son – a Grand Commandant (太尉;
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Original:  He wrote "The Epitaph of Han Kuangsi" (韩匡嗣墓志) that was discovered by the Bairin Left Banner in 1995.
Revised:  He wrote "The Epitaph of Han Kuangsi" (韩匡嗣墓志) , discovered in the Bairin Left Banner in 1995.
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Original:  Han Kuangsi was a good physician who served in Changle Palace (长乐宫) so Empress Shulü Ping regarded him as her son.
Revised:  Han Kuangsi was a physician who served in Changle Palace (长乐宫) so Empress Shulü Ping regarded him as her son.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Han also befriends with Yelü Xian and later help him to ascended the throne as Emperor Jingzong of Liao.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Han also befriended Yelü Xian and later help him to ascended the throne as Emperor Jingzong of Liao.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Han also befriends with Yelü Xian and later help him to ascended the throne as Emperor Jingzong of Liao.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Han also befriends with Yelü Xian and later helped him to ascend to the throne as Emperor Jingzong of Liao.
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Original:  He also served him in Beijing and stayed in Nanjing as a Southwest secret envoy also handled the Jinchang Army Jiedu Envoy (晋昌军节度使等).
Revised:  He also served him in Beijing and stayed in Nanjing as a Southwest secret envoy , also handling the Jinchang Army Jiedu Envoy (晋昌军节度使等).
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Original:  Because of this contribution, Han Kuangsi then honoured as King of Fengyan (封燕王) and later King of Qin (秦王).
Revised:  Because of this contribution, Han Kuangsi was honoured as King of Fengyan (封燕王) and later King of Qin (秦王).
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Original:  In October, along with Yelü Xiuge and Yelü Sha, Han fought with led the 50,000 horses to attack Zhenzhou and Song dynasty's soldiers in Mancheng.
Revised:  In October, along with Yelü Xiuge and Yelü Sha, Han led 50,000 horses to attack Zhenzhou and Song dynasty's soldiers in Mancheng.
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Original:  However, Han made a wrong command and then his armies was defeated , Yelü Xiuge also retreats from the enemy.
Revised:  However, Han made a wrong command and then his armies was defeated ; Yelü Xiuge also retreats from the enemy.
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Original:  However, Han made a wrong command and then his armies was defeated , Yelü Xiuge also retreats from the enemy.
Revised:  However, Han made a wrong command and then his armies was defeated , Yelü Xiuge also retreated from the enemy.
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Original:  Heard this, the Emperor Jingzong ordered Han Jusi (韩巨嗣) to changed him, rewarded Xiuge the title Great King of the Northern (为北院大王).
Revised:  Hearing this, the Emperor Jingzong ordered Han Jusi (韩巨嗣) to changed him, rewarded Xiuge the title Great King of the Northern (为北院大王).
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Original: Ramiro Valdés Menéndez (born 28 April 1932 , in Artemisa in the province of Havana ) is a Cuban politician.
Revised: Ramiro Valdés Menéndez (born 28 April 1932 ) is a Cuban politician.
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Original:  In March 2019, Millabur's son Licán Millabur was found dead at the age of 24 at his home near Lake Lleulleu, with signs pointing to a possible suicid 
Revised:  In March 2019, Millabur's son Licán Millabur was found dead at the age of 24 at his home near Lake Lleulleu, with signs pointing to a possible suicide. 
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Original:  In March 2019, Millabur's son Licán Millabur was found dead at the age of 24 at his home near Lake Lleulleu, with signs pointing to a possible suicid 
Revised:  In March 2019, Millabur's son Licán Millabur was found dead at the age of 24 at his home near Lake Lleulleu, with signs pointing to a possible suicid Reference
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Original: upIn his 1939 book The Twenty Years' Crisis, Carr attacked Norman Angell as a utopian thinker on international relations In The Twenty Year's Crisis, Carr divided thinkers on international relations into two schools, which he labelled the utiopians and the realists.
Revised: upIn his 1939 book The Twenty Years' Crisis, Carr attacked Norman Angell as a utopian thinker on international relations In The Twenty Year's Crisis, Carr divided thinkers on international relations into two schools, which he labelled the utopians and the realists.
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Original:  In the late 1960s, Carr was one of the few British professors to be supportive of the New Left student protestors, who , he hoped, might bring about a socialist revolution in Britain.
Revised:  In the late 1960s, Carr was one of the few British professors to be supportive of the New Left student protestors, whom , he hoped, might bring about a socialist revolution in Britain.
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Original:  (1961), a book based upon his series of G. M. Trevelyan lectures, delivered at the University of Cambridge between January–March 1961.
Revised:  (1961), a book based upon his series of G. M. Trevelyan lectures, delivered at the University of Cambridge in January-March 1961.
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Original:  Towards the end of 1944  Carr decided to write a complete history of Soviet Russia from 1917 comprising all aspects of social, political and economic history to explain how the Soviet Union withstood the German invasion.
Revised:  Towards the end of 1944 , Carr decided to write a complete history of Soviet Russia from 1917 comprising all aspects of social, political and economic history to explain how the Soviet Union withstood the German invasion.
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Original: Hughes-Warrington, pp. 24–25 The resulting work was his 14-volume History of Soviet Russia , which took the story up to 1929.
Revised: Hughes-Warrington, pp. 24–25 The resulting work , his 14-volume History of Soviet Russia , which took the story up to 1929.
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Original: Davies, "Edward Hallett Carr", p. 493 Carr's friend and close associate, the British historian R. W. Davies, was to write that Carr belonged to the anti-Cold-War school of history, which regarded the Soviet Union as the major progressive force in the world, and the Cold War as a case of American aggression against the Soviet Union.
Revised: Davies, "Edward Hallett Carr", p. 493 
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Original: Hughes-Warrington, p. 25 The first part of a History of Soviet Russia comprised three volumes entitled The Bolshevik Revolution, published in 1950, 1952, and 1953, and traced Soviet history from 1917 to 1922.
Revised: Hughes-Warrington, p. 25 The first part of the History of Soviet Russia comprised three volumes entitled The Bolshevik Revolution, published in 1950, 1952, and 1953, and traced Soviet history from 1917 to 1922.
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Original: Laqueur, pp. 116–117 The second part was  intended to comprise three volumes called The Struggle for Power, which was intended to cover 1922–28, but Carr instead decided to publish a single volume labelled The Interregnum that covered the events of 1923–24, and another four volumes entitled Socialism in One Country, which took the story up to 1926.
Revised: Laqueur, pp. 116–117 The second part was originally intended to comprise three volumes called The Struggle for Power, which was intended to cover 1922–28, but Carr instead decided to publish a single volume labelled The Interregnum that covered the events of 1923–24, and another four volumes entitled Socialism in One Country, which took the story up to 1926.
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Original: Laqueur, pp. 116–117 The second part was  intended to comprise three volumes called The Struggle for Power, which was intended to cover 1922–28, but Carr instead decided to publish a single volume labelled The Interregnum that covered the events of 1923–24, and another four volumes entitled Socialism in One Country, which took the story up to 1926.
Revised: Laqueur, pp. 116–117 The second part was intended to comprise three volumes called The Struggle for Power, covering 1922–28, but Carr instead decided to publish a single volume labelled The Interregnum that covered the events of 1923–24, and another four volumes entitled Socialism in One Country, which took the story up to 1926.
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Original: Laqueur, p. 118 The final volumes in the series were entitled The Foundations of the Planned Economy, which covered the years until 1929.
Revised: Laqueur, p. 118 Carr's final volumes in the series were entitled The Foundations of the Planned Economy, which covered the years until 1929.
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Original: Laqueur, p. 118 The final volumes in the series were entitled The Foundations of the Planned Economy, which covered the years until 1929.
Revised: Laqueur, p. 118 The final volumes in the series were entitled The Foundations of the Planned Economy, and covered the years until 1929.
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Original:  Originally, Carr had planned to take the series up to Operation Barbarossa in 1941 and the Soviet victory of 1945, but his death in 1982 put an end to the project.
Revised:  Carr had planned to take the series up to Operation Barbarossa in 1941 and the Soviet victory of 1945, but his death in 1982 put an end to the project.
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Original:  Originally, Carr had planned to take the series up to Operation Barbarossa in 1941 and the Soviet victory of 1945, but his death in 1982 put an end to the project.
Revised:  Originally, Carr had planned to take the series up to Operation Barbarossa in 1941 and the Soviet victory of 1945, but died before he could complete the project.
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Original:  The volumes of Carr's  History of Soviet Russia were received with mixed reviews.
Revised:  Carr's History of Soviet Russia were received with mixed reviews.
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Original:  Michael Cox, London: Pargrave, 2000 p. 3 A book that was not part of the History of Soviet Russia series, though closely related due to common research in the same archives, was Carr's 1951 book German-Soviet Relations Between the Two World Wars, 1919–1939.
Revised:  Michael Cox, London: Pargrave, 2000 p. 3 Another book that was not part of the History of Soviet Russia series, though closely related due to common research in the same archives, was Carr's 1951 book German-Soviet Relations Between the Two World Wars, 1919–1939.
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Original:  Michael Cox, London: Pargrave, 2000 p. 3 A book that was not part of the History of Soviet Russia series, though closely related due to common research in the same archives, was Carr's 1951 book German-Soviet Relations Between the Two World Wars, 1919–1939.
Revised:  Michael Cox, London: Pargrave, 2000 p. 3 A book that was not part of the History of Soviet Russia series, though closely related due to common research in the same archives, was Carr's 1951 German-Soviet Relations Between the Two World Wars, 1919–1939.
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Original:  <ref name="Carr, E.H. 1951, p. 136">Carr, German-Soviet Relations " , p. 136 </ref> In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
Revised:  Carr, German-Soviet Relations " , p. 136 </ref> In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
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Original:  <ref name="Carr, E.H. 1951, p. 136">Carr, German-Soviet Relations " , p. 136 </ref> In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
Revised:  <ref name="Carr, E.H. 1951, p. 136">Carr, German-Soviet Relations , p. 136 </ref> In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
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Original:  <ref name="Carr, E.H. 1951, p. 136">Carr, German-Soviet Relations " , p. 136 </ref> In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
Revised:  <ref name="Carr, E.H. 1951, p. 136">Carr, German-Soviet Relations " , p. 136 In 1955, a major scandal that damaged Carr's reputation as a historian of the Soviet Union occurred when he wrote the introduction to Notes for a Journal, the supposed memoir of the former Soviet Foreign Commissar Maxim Litvinov that was shortly thereafter exposed as a KGB forgery.
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Original:  Another related book that Carr was unable to complete before his death, and was published posthumously in 1984, was The Comintern and the Spanish Civil War .Davies,  " Edward Hallett Carr " , p. 507 Drinan, Patrick Review of The Russian Revolution: From Lenin to Stalin, 1917–1929 pages 100–101 from Military Affairs, Volume 44, Issue # 2, April 1980.
Revised:  Another related book that Carr was unable to complete before his death, and was published posthumously in 1984, was The Comintern and the Spanish Civil War .Davies, Carr was well known in the 1950s as an outspoken admirer of the Soviet Union. His friend and close associate, the British historian R. W. Davies, was to write that Carr belonged to the anti-Cold-War school of history, which regarded the Soviet Union as the major progressive force in the world, and the Cold War as a case of American aggression against the Soviet Union. The volumes of Carr's History of Soviet Russia were received with mixed reviews. It was " Edward Hallett Carr " , p. 507 Drinan, Patrick Review of The Russian Revolution: From Lenin to Stalin, 1917–1929 pages 100–101 from Military Affairs, Volume 44, Issue # 2, April 1980.
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Original:  Review of The Conditions of Peace pages 164–167 from The American Economic Review  , Volume.
Revised:  Review of The Conditions of Peace pages 164–167 from The American Economic Review '' , Volume.
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Original:  From 1941 to 1946, Carr worked as an assistant editor at The Times, where he was noted for his leaders (editorials) urging a socialist system and an Anglo-Soviet alliance as the basis of a post-war order.
Revised:  From 1941 to 1946, Carr worked as an assistant editor at The Times, where he was noted 
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Original: Fellows of Trinity College, Cambridge Category:Historiographers Category:International relations scholars Category:  Marxist journalists Category:People educated at Merchant Taylors' School, Northwood Category:Philosophers of history Category:Political realists Category:Scholars of nationalism Category:Writers about the Soviet Union Category:Writers from London Category:Historians of Russia Category:20th-century British historians Category:Fellows of the British Acade
Revised: Fellows of Trinity College, Cambridge Category:Historiographers Category:International relations scholars Category: British Marxist journalists Category:People educated at Merchant Taylors' School, Northwood Category:Philosophers of history Category:Political realists Category:Scholars of nationalism Category:Writers about the Soviet Union Category:Writers from London Category:Historians of Russia Category:20th-century British historians Category:Fellows of the British Acade
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Original: History: FoodAl Marmoom Ultramarathon also known as AMUM is an annual series of desert endurance races hosted by Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve in Dubai, United Arab Emirates since 2018.
Revised: Al Marmoom Ultramarathon also known as AMUM is an annual series of desert endurance races hosted by Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve in Dubai, United Arab Emirates since 2018.
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Original:  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map70KM AMUM in 2018 270 KM Series YearMale winnerTime (h:m:s)Female WinnerTime (h:m:s) 201831 :17:2936:27:59    
Revised:  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map70KM AMUM in 2018 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:m:s)Female WinnerTime (h:m:s) 201831 :17:2936:27:59 
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Original:  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map70KM AMUM in 2018
Revised:  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018
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Original:  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 History The Al Marmoom desert ultra-race was first held in 2018 as the world's longest desert race.
Revised:  History The Al Marmoom desert ultra-race was first held in 2018 as the world's longest desert race.
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Original:  Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves 
Revised:  Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018
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Original:  The gruelling five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres.
Revised:  The grueling five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres.
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Original:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
Revised:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ' s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
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Original:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
Revised:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
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Original:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
Revised:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
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Original:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
Revised:  Al Marmoom Ultramarathon is regarded as the world ’ s longest desert ultramarathon. . The Venue Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve was launched in 2018 under the initiative of UAE Vice President and Prime Minister and Ruler of Dubai Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashid Al Maktoum.
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Original:  The reserve spans 10\% of the emirate of Dubai ’ s total area.
Revised:  The reserve spans 10\% of the emirate of Dubai ' s total area.
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Original:  The Al Marmoom Reserve, the largest sustainable environment, tourism and recreational project in the United Arab Emirates  History The Al Marmoom desert ultra-race was first held in 2018 as the world's longest desert race.
Revised:  The Al Marmoom Reserve, the largest sustainable environment, tourism and recreational project in the United Arab Emirates . History The Al Marmoom desert ultra-race was first held in 2018 as the world's longest desert race.
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Original:  The grueling five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
Revised:  The five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
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Original:  The grueling five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
Revised:  The grueling five-day race covered a distance of 270 kilometres . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
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Original:  The grueling five-day epic race covered a distance of 270 kilometres . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves  The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
Revised:  The grueling five-day epic race covered a distance of . Organized under the umbrella of Dubai Sports Council, AMUM was created to support Al Marmoom Desert Conservation Reserve ’s environmental commitment as one of the world’s leading eco desert sports and tourism destinations and wildlife conservation preserves The inaugural 270KM AMUM in 2018 The inaugural 270KM AMUM route map in 2018 Winners 270 KM Series DateMale winnerTime (h:
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