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Original: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as  "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy (aircraft) from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian (in Europe) , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
Revised: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as : "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy (aircraft) from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian (in Europe) , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
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Original: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as  "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy (aircraft) from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian (in Europe) , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
Revised: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy aircraft from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian (in Europe) , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
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Original: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as  "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy (aircraft) from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian (in Europe) , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
Revised: "We do not need to buy aircraft from Europe as long as the flying ban stays unrevoked," Detik.com quoted mr Djamal as saying, although Xinhua gave the quote as "As long as the ban is still in place, it is better we do not buy (aircraft) from Europe." "If aircraft are purchased and registered as Indonesian in Europe , we are worried the planes won't be able to fly to Indonesia because Indonesian airlines' aircraft are banned from flying over Europe," he continued.
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Original:  He is concerned that instead new European planes would have to be flown into Indonesia prior to registration, with higher costs incurred as a result.
Revised:  Djamal is concerned that instead new European planes would have to be flown into Indonesia prior to registration, with higher costs incurred as a result.
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Original: Two car-rigged explosions in Baghdad killed 15 , injuring nearly 40 people beside a Shiite Ahl al-Bait mosque  .
Revised: Two car-rigged explosions in Baghdad killed 15 and injured nearly 40 people beside a Shiite Ahl al-Bait mosque .
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Original:  In Tikrit, 140km northeast of Baghdad, there were 6  killed and nearly 26 injured in two suicide bombings.
Revised:  In Tikrit, 140km northeast of Baghdad, 6 killed and nearly 26 injured in two suicide bombings.
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Original:  In Tikrit, 140km northeast of Baghdad, there were 6  killed and nearly 26 injured in two suicide bombings.
Revised:  In Tikrit, 140km northeast of Baghdad, there were 6 were killed and nearly 26 injured in two suicide bombings.
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Original:  The first bomb was followed by the second blast after witnesses to the first blast rushed in to help survivors.
Revised:  The first bomb was followed by the second blast after witnesses to the first bomb rushed in to help survivors.
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Original:  Sunday's anti-coalition insurgency  inflicted its heaviest toll since the national elections held January 30.
Revised:  The anti-coalition insurgency inflicted its heaviest toll since the national elections held January 30.
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Original:  The violence, aimed mostly at Iraqi security forces  , is partly blamed on the struggling National Assembly's efforts to gain  consensus in forming a new government.
Revised:  The violence, aimed mostly at Iraqi security forces , is partly blamed on the struggling National Assembly's efforts to gain a consensus in forming a new government.
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Original:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry,  against the requirement of the law.
Revised:  The lack of leadership has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry, against the requirement of the law.
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Original:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry,  against the requirement of the law.
Revised:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to appointments of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry, against the requirement of the law.
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Original:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry,  against the requirement of the law.
Revised:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials with no concent from the Interior Ministry, against the requirement of the law.
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Original:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry,  against the requirement of the law.
Revised:  The lack of leadership from the top has led to the appointment of police and security officials without the concent of the Interior Ministry, and is against the requirement of the law.
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Original:  The lack of authority hurts Iraqi efforts to put down and pursue rebels forces.
Revised:  The lack of authority diminishess Iraqi efforts to put down and pursue rebels forces.
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Original:  The lack of authority diminishess Iraqi efforts to put down and pursue rebels forces.
Revised:  The lack of authority diminishes Iraqi efforts to put down and pursue rebels forces.
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Original:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in  top cabinet posts from the Sunni parlimentary group led by former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned  .
Revised:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in contentious top cabinet posts from the Sunni parlimentary group led by former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned .
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Original:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in  top cabinet posts from the Sunni parlimentary group led by former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned  .
Revised:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in top cabinet posts with Sunni parlimentarians led by the former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned .
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Original:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in  top cabinet posts from the Sunni parlimentary group led by former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned  .
Revised:  By late Sunday, reports indicate Iraqi Prime Minister-designate Ibrahim al-Jaafari was ready to name a cabinet as early as tomorrow or Tuesday . Efforts to include candidates in top cabinet posts from the Sunni parlimentary group led by former PM Iyad Allawi may be abandoned to speed filling the positions .
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Original:  To many, total exclusion of the Sunni group in post such as defense or interior minister, or either oil and finance minister, is untenable  .
Revised:  To many, exclusion of the Sunni group in post such as defense or interior minister, or either oil and finance minister, is untenable .
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Original:  To many, total exclusion of the Sunni group in post such as defense or interior minister, or either oil and finance minister, is untenable  .
Revised:  To many, total exclusion of the Sunni representatives in posts such as defense or interior minister, or either oil and finance minister, is untenable .
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Original:  2 US soldiers and 2 civilians wounded in convoy attack in east Baghdad, several other US convoys were attacked Sunday no one hurt in explosion near a US patrol in western Baghdad  1 US sailor killed Saturday and announced today, when the Marine convoy he travelled with was attacked by roadside bomb near Fallujah Mishan al-Juburi, leader of the reconciliation and liberation bloc, survived a booby-trapped car bomb
Revised:  2 US soldiers and 2 civilians wounded in convoy attack in east Baghdad, several other US convoys were attacked Sunday no one hurt in explosion near a US patrol in western Baghdad Mishan al-Juburi, leader of the reconciliation and liberation bloc, survived a booby-trapped car bomb 1 US sailor killed Saturday and announced today, when the Marine convoy he travelled with was attacked by roadside bomb near Fallujah Mishan al-Juburi, leader of the reconciliation and liberation bloc, survived a booby-trapped car bomb
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Original:  2 US soldiers and 2 civilians wounded in convoy attack in east Baghdad, several other US convoys were attacked Sunday no one hurt in explosion near a US patrol in western Baghdad  1 US sailor killed Saturday and announced today, when the Marine convoy he travelled with was attacked by roadside bomb near Fallujah Mishan al-Juburi, leader of the reconciliation and liberation bloc, survived a booby-trapped car bomb
Revised:  2 US soldiers and 2 civilians wounded in convoy attack in east Baghdad, several other US convoys were attacked Sunday no one hurt in explosion near a US patrol in western Baghdad 1 US sailor killed Saturday and announced today, when the Marine convoy he travelled with was attacked by roadside bomb near Fallujah 
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Original:  A car bomber drove into assembled police in an academy compound , and a second car bomber attacked a nearby army liaison office  .
Revised:  A car bomber drove into police assembled in an academy compound , and a second car bomber attacked a nearby army liaison office .
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Original:  The lack of leadership has led to appointments of police and security officials with no concent from the Interior Ministry, and is against the requirement of the law.
Revised:  The lack of leadership has led to appointments of police and security officials with no consent from the Interior Ministry, and is against the requirement of the law.
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Original: The trailer to Joss Whedon's new movie "Serenity " is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) according to his announcement on the "Official Serenity Movie Site" Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but quickly canceled after only one season.
Revised: The trailer for w:Joss Whedon’s new feature film, w:Serenity (movie), is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) according to his announcement on the "Official Serenity Movie Site" Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but quickly canceled after only one season.
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Original: The trailer to Joss Whedon's new movie "Serenity " is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) according to his announcement on the "Official Serenity Movie Site" Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but quickly canceled after only one season.
Revised: The trailer to Joss Whedon's new movie "Serenity " is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) . Joss Whedon, the creator of such w:Prime Time television successes as w:Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel (TV series), is promoting his latest movie with the official Serenity movie web site and a formal announcement. Joss Whedon has also warned fans of the w:Firefly (television series) to avoid viewing the trailer, as it may be a spoiler for the movie, and may ruin their enjoyment. Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but quickly canceled after only one season.
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Original: The trailer to Joss Whedon's new movie "Serenity " is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) according to his announcement on the "Official Serenity Movie Site" Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but quickly canceled after only one season.
Revised: The trailer to Joss Whedon's new movie "Serenity " is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th) according to his announcement on the "Official Serenity Movie Site" Serenity is a follow-up to the Sci-Fi-Western TV series"Firefly " which ] debuted on the FOX network on September 20, 2002, but was quickly cancelled after one season.
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Original: The trailer for w: Joss Whedon’s new feature film, w:Serenity(movie) , is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th).
Revised: The trailer for Joss Whedon’s new feature film, w:Serenity(movie) , is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th).
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Original: The trailer for w: Joss Whedon’s new feature film, w:Serenity(movie) , is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th).
Revised: The trailer for w: Joss Whedon’s new feature film, Serenity , is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th).
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Original:  Joss Whedon, the creator of such w: Prime Time television successes as w: Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel (TV series)  , is promoting his latest movie with the official Serenity movie web site and a formal announcement.
Revised:  Joss Whedon, the creator of such Prime Time television successes as w: Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel (TV series) , is promoting his latest movie with the official Serenity movie web site and a formal announcement.
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Original:  Joss Whedon, the creator of such w: Prime Time television successes as w: Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel (TV series)  , is promoting his latest movie with the official Serenity movie web site and a formal announcement.
Revised:  Joss Whedon, the creator of such w: Prime Time television successes as Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel (TV series) , is promoting his latest movie with the official Serenity movie web site and a formal announcement.
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Original:  Joss Whedon has also warned fans of the w:Firefly (television series) to avoid viewing the trailer, as it may be a spoiler for the movie, and may ruin their enjoyment.
Revised:  Joss Whedon has also warned fans of the Firefly show to avoid viewing the trailer, as it may be a spoiler for the movie, and may ruin their enjoyment.
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Original:  This popular television writer and creator developed Serenity as a follow up to w:Firefly(television series) , a genre defining [[w:Science fiction television|Sci-Fi]-Western that has received critical acclaim among science fiction enthusiasts, but failed to capture the interest of the typical prime time viewer.
Revised:  This popular television writer and creator developed Serenity as a follow up to Firefly , a genre defining [[w:Science fiction television|Sci-Fi]-Western that has received critical acclaim among science fiction enthusiasts, but failed to capture the interest of the typical prime time viewer.
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Original:  Serenity uses many of the same lead actors and characters as the original w:Firefly (television series) .
Revised:  Serenity uses many of the same lead actors and characters as the original television series .
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Original:  In an interview with Firefly actor w: Alan Tudyk, Serenity is the first film in a three-picture Firefly contract with w: Universal Studios
Revised:  In an interview with Firefly actor Alan Tudyk, Serenity is the first film in a three-picture Firefly contract with w: Universal Studios
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Original:  In an interview with Firefly actor w: Alan Tudyk, Serenity is the first film in a three-picture Firefly contract with w: Universal Studios
Revised:  In an interview with Firefly actor w: Alan Tudyk, Serenity is the first film in a three-picture Firefly contract with Universal Studios
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Original:  Firefly debuted on the FOX network on September20 , 2002, but was quickly cancelled after one season.
Revised:  Firefly debuted on the FOX network in September , 2002, but was quickly cancelled after one season.
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Original: The trailer for Joss Whedon’s new feature film, Serenity, is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26th ).
Revised: The trailer for Joss Whedon’s new feature film, Serenity, is expected to be released today (Tuesday, April 26 ).
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Original:  On Wednesday, Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith said bluntly that the Japanese hunt was not science, but "the slaughter of whales.  
Revised:  On Wednesday, Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith said bluntly that the Japanese hunt was not science, but "the slaughter of whales. " 
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Original: 180px|Natalia Deeva, who ever broke 3 world records in the same day of 2007 World Deaf Swimming Championships, was named as "2007 Deaf Sportswoman of the Year".
Revised: 180px|Natalia Deeva, who broke 3 world records in the same day of 2007 World Deaf Swimming Championships, was named as "2007 Deaf Sportswoman of the Year".
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Original:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes,  International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 athletes of the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award Finalists ".
Revised:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes, the International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 athletes of the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award Finalists ".
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Original:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes,  International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 athletes of the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award Finalists ".
Revised:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes, International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 finalists for the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award Finalists ".
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Original:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes,  International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 athletes of the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award Finalists ".
Revised:  To encourage performances for deaf athletes, International Committee of Sports for the Deaf (ICSD) recently announced the top 10 athletes of the "2007 WIDEX Sportsman and Sportswomen Award ".
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Original:  Finally, Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named  as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" in this jury .
Revised:  Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" in this jury .
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Original:  Finally, Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named  as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" in this jury .
Revised:  Finally, Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named by the jury as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" in this jury .
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Original:  Finally, Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named  as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" in this jury .
Revised:  Finally, Rajeev Bagga and Natalia Deeva were named as "Deaf Sportsman and Sportswoman of the Year" .
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Original:  According to some information from icCoventry from England and ICSD, Bagga performed his excellence from recent badminton matches, and he never lost important matches as he got involved in some international matches from 1989, and he always accepted referees'
Revised:  According to icCoventry from England and ICSD, Bagga performed his excellence from recent badminton matches, and he never lost important matches as he got involved in some international matches from 1989, and he always accepted referees'
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Original:  According to some information from icCoventry from England and ICSD, Bagga performed his excellence from recent badminton matches, and he never lost important matches as he got involved in some international matches from 1989, and he always accepted referees'
Revised:  According to some information from icCoventry from England and ICSD, Bagga performed excellently in recent badminton matches, and he never lost important matches as he got involved in some international matches from 1989, and he always accepted referees'
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Original:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, he determined to give up his silver medal at men's single class after he heard a tragedy news from his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
Revised:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, Bagga offered to give up his silver medal at men's single class after he heard a tragedy news from his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
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Original:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, he determined to give up his silver medal at men's single class after he heard a tragedy news from his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
Revised:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, he determined to give up his silver medal in men's single class after he heard a tragedy news from his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
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Original:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, he determined to give up his silver medal at men's single class after he heard a tragedy news from his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
Revised:  judgments although their judgments are wrong to show his sportsmanship . Recently in the 2nd World Deaf Badminton Championships in Germany, he determined to give up his silver medal at men's single class after the tragic news of his former Lithuanian teammate Andirus Jankus dead from a car accident.
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