wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Portuguese diplomats Category:Portuguese Renaissance writers Category:Portuguese travel writers Category:Portuguese expatriates in China Category:Ambassadors of Portugal to China Category:History of Malaysia Category:Portuguese colonialism in Indonesia Category:1460s births Category:16th-century deaths Category:16th-century explorers Category:Explorers of Asia Category:People from Lisbon Category:16th-century Portuguese people Category:15th-century Portuguese people Category:Date of death unkno
Revised: Portuguese diplomats Category:Portuguese Renaissance writers Category:Portuguese travel writers Category:Portuguese expatriates in China Category:Ambassadors of Portugal to China Category:History of Malaysia Category:Portuguese colonialism in Indonesia Category:1460s births Category:16th-century deaths Category:16th-century explorers Category:Explorers of Indonesia Category:People from Lisbon Category:16th-century Portuguese people Category:15th-century Portuguese people Category:Date of death unkno
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Original:  It is important to understand that evaporation is not the same as condensation although evaporation in an enclosed environment can subsequently lead to the condition of condensation as evaporated moisture is "condensed" out of the air and is reverted to a liquid stage.
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Original:  Evaporation ponds at contaminated sites remove the water from hazardous waste, which greatly reduces its weight and volume and allows the waste to be more easily transported, treated and stored.
Revised:  Evaporation ponds at contaminated sites remove the water from hazardous waste, which significantly reduces its weight and volume and allows the waste to be more easily transported, treated and stored.
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Original:  Evaporation ponds at contaminated sites remove the water from hazardous waste, which greatly reduces its weight and volume and allows the waste to be more easily transported, treated and stored.
Revised:  Evaporation ponds at contaminated sites remove the water from hazardous waste, which greatly reduces its weight and volume while allowing the waste to be more easily transported, treated and stored.
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Original:  Studies show that exploring these new options are cost effective as opposed to the current pond expansion.
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Original:  Notable contributions were made by Henry Taylor at the University of Minnesota, Scandinavian scientists Per-Olof Åstrand and Bengt Saltin in the 1950s and 60s, the Harvard Fatigue Laboratory, German universities, and the Copenhagen Muscle Research Centre among others .
Revised:  Key contributions were made by Henry Taylor at the University of Minnesota, Scandinavian scientists Per-Olof Åstrand and Bengt Saltin in the 1950s and 60s, the Harvard Fatigue Laboratory, German universities, and the Copenhagen Muscle Research Centre among others .
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Original:  Notable contributions were made by Henry Taylor at the University of Minnesota, Scandinavian scientists Per-Olof Åstrand and Bengt Saltin in the 1950s and 60s, the Harvard Fatigue Laboratory, German universities, and the Copenhagen Muscle Research Centre among others .
Revised:  Notable contributions were made by Henry Taylor at the University of Minnesota, Scandinavian scientists Per-Olof Åstrand and Bengt Saltin in the 1950s and 60s, the Harvard Fatigue Laboratory, German universities, and the Copenhagen Muscle Research Centre .
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Original: Limiting factors The factors affecting V̇O2 are often divided into supply and demand.
Revised: Limiting factors The factors affecting V̇O2 may be separated into supply and demand.
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Original:  Of these, the supply factor is often considered to be the limitingone .
Revised:  Of these, the supply factors may be more limiting .
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Original:  Cardiac output, pulmonary diffusion capacity, oxygen carrying capacity, and the peripheral limitations of muscle diffusion capacity, mitochondrial enzymes, and capillary density are all examples of V̇O2 max determinants.
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Original:  If one of these factors is sub-par, then the whole system loses its normal capacity to function properly .
Revised:  If one of these factors is sub-par, then the whole system 's normal capacity is reduced .
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:VO2 max}} V̇O2 max (also maximal oxygen consumption , maximal oxygen uptake or maximal aerobic capacity) is the maximum rate of oxygen consumption measured during incremental exercise;
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:VO2 max}} V̇O2 max (also maximal oxygen conshushumption , maximal oxygen uptake or maximal aerobic capacity) is the maximum rate of oxygen consumption measured during incremental exercise;
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Original:  Based on the measured distance, an estimate of V̇O2 max [in mL/(kg·min)] is: where d12 is distance (in metres) covered in 12 minutes.
Revised:  Based on the measured distance, an estimate of V̇O2 max [in mL/(kg·min)] is: 
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Original: Cooper test Kenneth H. Cooper conducted a study for the United States Air Force in the late 1960s.
Revised: Cooper test Kenneth H. Cooper conducted a study for the f***ingUnited States Air Force in the late 1960s.
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Original: Two important contributors, Carroll and Porter, in their study of cloning the human C4 gene , which consists of 3 subparts (α, β, and γ subunits), showed that all six of their clones contained the same C4 gene.
Revised: Two important contributors, Carroll and Porter, in their study of cloning the human C4 gene showed that all six of their clones contained the same C4 gene.
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Original:  Regarding the subunits , the α-, β-, and γ-chains were before found to have molecular weights (MWs) of ~95,000, 78,000, and 31,000, respectively , all joined by interchain disulfide bridges.
Revised:  The C4 protein consists of 3 subunits (α, β, and γ) having molecular weights (MWs) of ~95,000, 78,000, and 31,000, respectively , all joined by interchain disulfide bridges.
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Original:  Regarding the subunits , the α-, β-, and γ-chains were before found to have molecular weights (MWs) of ~95,000, 78,000, and 31,000, respectively , all joined by interchain disulfide bridges.
Revised:  Regarding the subunits , the α-, β-, and γ-chains were before found to have molecular weights (MWs) of ~95,000, 78,000, and 31,000, respectively and they are all joined by interchain disulfide bridges.
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Original: The Arlberg technique was the primary method of instruction in alpine skiing (downhill) from around 1910 to the 1960s, and little changed into the 1990s.
Revised: The Arlberg technique was the primary method of instruction in alpine skiing (downhill) from around 1910 into the 1990s.
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Original:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method  that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
Revised:  The system was developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
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Original:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method  that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
Revised:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method The Arlberg technique is a progressive system that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
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Original:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method  that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
Revised:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method that takes the skier from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
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Original:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method  that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn , into the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
Revised:  Developed by Hannes Schneider and based on the stem Christie turn, the Arlberg technique was a progressive method that takes the skier through stages from the snowplough turn to the parallel Christie through measured stages of improvement.
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Original:  The name was taken from the Arlberg mountains in Austria, where Schneider worked as a ski instructor.
Revised:  The 
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Original:  However, modern ski equipment is also capable of a more efficient turning style known as carving that uses entirely different techniques and movements.
Revised:  Modern ski equipment is also capable of a more efficient turning style known as carving that uses entirely different techniques and movements.
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Original:  Over time, the later became much more popular, and the more athletic telemark has remained a niche technique since the 1900s.
Revised:  Over time, the latter became much more popular, and the more athletic telemark has remained a niche technique since the 1900s.
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Original: In 1921 the German filmmaker Arnold Fanck visited Arlberg and produced the world's first instructional ski film, Das Wunder des Schneeschuhs .
Revised: In 1921 the German filmmaker Arnold Fanck visited Arlberg and produced the world's first instructional ski film, .
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Original:    See also CouchSurfing, a website designed to help arrange couch surfing
Revised:  Homelessness A dependence on couch surfing is a for of homelessness. Couch surfing is usually missed by homeless counts and is therefore a type of hidden homelessness. For example, in 2017, HUD counted 114 thousand children as homeless in the United States in their homeless count, while surveys conducted by the Department of Education concluded there was 1.3 million. Couch surfing is especially common among those under the age of 25, including children. In Britain, 1 in 5 young people have couch surfed at least once each year and almost half of those have done so for more than a month. See also CouchSurfing, a website designed to help arrange couch surfing
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Original:  Those who couch surfer often sleep in the rough after leaving their accommodations.
Revised:  Those who couch surf often sleep in the rough after leaving their accommodations.
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Original:   Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes, and environmental attributes before, during and after an injury or death.
Revised:  Doordarshan Malayalam channel on different days of the week. This program which has garnered impressive TRP ratings is eagerly looked forward to by viewers every week and is watched by people from all walks of life. Dr. R. Baratharaja has also scripted a book on screen printing for which he has been conferred an honorary doctorate from Sri Lanka. Archanah Academy is into commercial printing of saris for reputed clothing stores like Pothys, Karalkada in Trivandrum, Ayappas, Parthas etc. We also have a 15,000 sq feet factory at our Thiruvanathapuram and Chennai offices exclusively to process bulk orders for the export and local markets. In summary, Archanah Academy aims at empowering various sections of the society through their textile printing program. Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes, and environmental attributes before, during and after an injury or death.
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Original: Attitudes Impairment Police EnforcementRoadworthiness Lighting Braking Speed ManagementRoad design and road layout Speed limits Pedestrian facilities CrashUse of restraints ImpairmentsOccupant restraints Other safety devices Crash-protective designCrash-protective roadside objects Post-CrashFirst-aid skills Access to medicsEase of access Fire riskRescue facilities Congestion Preventing injuries%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (These ten items are often called "Haddon's Strategies.
Revised: Attitudes Impairment Police EnforcementRoadworthiness Lighting Braking Speed ManagementRoad design and road layout Speed limits Pedestrian facilities CrashUse of restraints ImpairmentsOccupant restraints Other safety devices Crash-protective designCrash-protective roadside objects Post-CrashFirst-aid skills Access to medicsEase of access Fire riskRescue facilities Congestion %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% (These ten items are often called "Haddon's Strategies.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Sources%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL URL Category: Safe
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% URL URL Category: Safe
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Original:  By utilizing this framework, one can then think about evaluating the relative importance of different factors and  design interventions.
Revised:  By utilizing this framework, one can then think about evaluating the relative importance of different factors and nm design interventions.
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Original: Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes , and environmental attributes  before, during and after an injury or death.
Revised: Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes and environmental attributes before, during and after an injury or death.
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Original: Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes , and environmental attributes  before, during and after an injury or death.
Revised: Developed by William Haddon in 1970, the matrix looks at factors related to personal attributes, vector or agent attributes , and environmental attributes ; before, during and after an injury or death.
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Original:  A typical Haddon Matrix : Phase Human Factors Vehicles and Equipment Factors Environmental Factors Pre-crashInformation Attitudes Impairment Police EnforcementRoadworthiness Lighting Braking Speed ManagementRoad design and road layout Speed limits Pedestrian facilities CrashUse of restraints ImpairmentsOccupant restraints Other safety devices Crash-protective designCrash-protective roadside objects Post-CrashFirst-aid skills Access to medicsEase of access Fire riskRescue facilities Congestion
Revised:  A typical Haddon Matrix : Phase Human Factors Vehicles and Equipment Factors Environmental Factors Pre-crashInformation Attitudes Impairment Police EnforcementRoad Worthiness Lighting Braking Speed ManagementRoad design and road layout Speed limits Pedestrian facilities CrashUse of restraints ImpairmentsOccupant restraints Other safety devices Crash-protective designCrash-protective roadside objects Post-CrashFirst-aid skills Access to medicsEase of access Fire riskRescue facilities Congestion
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Original:  Provide treatment and rehabilitation for the host.
Revised:  Provide treatment and rehabilitation fojufr the host.
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Original:  Online clubs exist in the shape of Internet forums, Yahoo Groups, e-mail mailing lists, dedicated websites, such as OnlineBookClub.org and Goodreads.com,Goodreads.
Revised:  Online clubs exist in the shape of Internet forums, Yahoo Groups, e-mail mailing lists, dedicated websites, such as Goodreads.com,Goodreads.
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Original: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol " self-defense " spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
Revised: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol self-defense " spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
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Original: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol " self-defense " spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
Revised: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol " self-defense spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
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Original:   Studies suggest that reptiles are insensitive to capsicum-based products.
Revised:  Historically, "Chemical mace" was the development of irritant with the active ingredient called phenacyl chloride (CN) to incapacitate others whereas the term "Mace" is a trademarked term for use on personal defense sprays. URL Studies suggest that reptiles are insensitive to capsicum-based products.
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Original:  Category:American inventions Category:Brands that became generic Category:Lachrymatory agents Category:Products introduced in 1965 Category:Self-defen
Revised:  Category:American inventions Category:Lachrymatory agents Category:Products introduced in 1965 Category:Self-defen
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Original:  The first commercial product of its type, Litman's design packaged phenacyl chloride (CN) tear gas dissolved in hydrocarbon solvents into a small aerosol spray can, usable in many environment and strong enough to act as a credible deterrent and incapacitant when sprayed in the face.
Revised:  The first commercial product of its type, Litman's design packaged phenacyl chloride (CN) tear gas dissolved in hydrocarbon solvents into a small aerosol spray can, usable in many environment and strong enough to act as a deterrent and incapacitant when sprayed in the face.
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Original:  Chemical Mace was originally developed in the 1960s by Allan Lee Litman and his wife, Doris Litman, after one of Doris's female colleagues was mugged in Pittsburgh.
Revised:  Chemical Mace was originally developed in the 1960s by Allan Lee Litman and his wife, Doris Litman, after one of Doris's female colleagues was robbed in Pittsburgh.
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Original:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term URL URL URL  Though the design has been expanded on, the original Chemical Mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
Revised:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term URL Though the design has been expanded on, the original Chemical Mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
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Original:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term URL URL URL  Though the design has been expanded on, the original Chemical Mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
Revised:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term URL URL URL Though the design has been expanded on, the original chemical mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
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Original: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol self-defense spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
Revised: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol self-defense spray invented by Allan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
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Original: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol self-defense spray invented by Allan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
Revised: Mace is the brand name of an early type of aerosol self-defense spray invented by Alan Lee Litman in the 1960s.
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Original:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term URL Historically, "chemical mace"
Revised:  Smith & Wesson subsequently transferred ownership to Jon E. Goodrich along with the rest of the chemical division in what is now Mace Security International, which also owns federal trademark registrations for the term "mace". Historically, "chemical mace"
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Original:  was the development of irritant with the active ingredient called phenacyl chloride (CN) to incapacitate others whereas the term "Mace" is a trademarked term for use on personal defense URL Though the design has been expanded on, the original chemical mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
Revised:  was the development of irritant with the active ingredient called phenacyl chloride (CN) to incapacitate others whereas the term "Mace" is a trademarked term for use on personal defense sprays. Though the design has been expanded on, the original chemical mace formula using only CN has since been discontinued.
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Original:  The first commercial product of its type, Litman's design packaged phenacyl chloride (CN) tear gas dissolved in hydrocarbon solvents into a small aerosol spray can, usable in many environment and strong enough to act as a deterrent and incapacitant when sprayed in the face.
Revised:  The first commercial product of its type, Litman's design packaged phenacyl chloride (CN) tear gas dissolved in hydrocarbon solvents into a small aerosol spray can, usable in many environments and strong enough to act as a deterrent and incapacitant when sprayed in the face.
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Original:  Its popularity led to the name "mace" being used commonly for other defense sprays regardless of their composition, and for the term "maced" to be used to reference being pepper sprayed.
Revised:  Its popularity led to the name "mace" being commonly used for other defense sprays regardless of their composition, and for the term "maced" to be used to reference being pepper sprayed.
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Original: File:Leghemoglobin 1FSL.png|280px|Leghemoglobin from soybean.
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Original:  The 3/3-fold type contains Classes I and II of angiosperm phytoglobins, and is the one common to all eukaryotes ( presumably acquired by HGT from a bacterial flavohemoglobin).
Revised:  The 3/3-fold type contains Classes I and II of angiosperm phytoglobins, and is the one common to all eukaryotes ( HGT of a bacterial flavohemoglobin).
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Original:  The 2/2-fold "TrHb2" type contains class III in angiosperm nomenclature, and appears to be acquired from Chloroflexi by the ancestor of land plants .
Revised:  The 2/2-fold "TrHb2" type contains class III in angiosperm nomenclature, and appears to be acquired from Chloroflexi by the ancestor of land plants 
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Original:  One important function of phytoglobin is its nitric oxide dioxygenase activity .
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