wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0.0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0.0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 189 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: style
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 13 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7  4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8  8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0  0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total  1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 16 48 4 59 21 13 0
Revised: 37 1.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 5 0 0 0 2001 NE 15 76 55 21 2.0 3 1 0 2 7 4 4 0 3 0 9 0 2002 NE 11 67 47 20 4.5 1 0 0 2 75 38 48 2 7 2 0 0 2003 NE 16 133 81 52 2.0 3 1 0 3 26 9 18 2 14 6 0 0 2004 NE 16 124 78 46 3.5 3 0 0 3 70 23 36 0 6 5 0 0 2005 NE 9 63 37 26 2.0 1 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 3 1 0 0 2006 NE 15 112 53 59 1.5 0 2 0 1 8 8 8 0 6 2 4 0 2007 NE 16 92 64 28 2.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 2 1 1 0 2008 NE 13 76 38 38 0.0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 0 1 4 8 0 Total Total 1074 680 394 30.5 18 7 0 12 187 15.6 48 4 59 21 13 0
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  born June 9, 1973) is a former professional American football player who was a linebacker in the National Football League (NFL) for 13 seasons, who currently serves as the special assistant to the head coach at University of a Arizona.
Revised:  born June 9, 1973) is a former professional American football player who was a linebacker in the National Football League (NFL) for 13 seasons, who currently serves as the special assistant to the head coach at University of Arizona.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He suffered from a patent foramen ovale, a congenital heart defect that leaves a small hole in the wall separating the left and right atria of the heart . Bruschi experienced partial paralysis and was admitted to Massachusetts General Hospital . After several months of rehabilitation working with Spaulding Rehabilitation Hospital in Boston, Bruschi announced he would sit out the 2005 NFL season.
Revised:  He suffered from a patent foramen ovale, a congenital heart defect that leaves a small hole in the wall separating the left and right atria of the heart . After several months of rehabilitation working with Spaulding Rehabilitation Hospital in Boston, Bruschi announced he would sit out the 2005 NFL season.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  He was takent to Massachusetts General Hospital, where he diagnosed with an ischemic stroke, caused by a blocked artery in the brain.
Revised:  He was taken to Massachusetts General Hospital, where he diagnosed with an ischemic stroke, caused by a blocked artery in the brain.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: American sportspeople of Italian descent Category:American sportspeople of Filipino descent Category:Arizona Wildcats football players Category:College Football Hall of Fame inductees Category:ESPN people Category:National Football League announcers Category:New England Patriots players Category:Sportspeople from San Francisco Category:People with congenital heart defects Category:Players of American football from California Category:21st-century American journalis
Revised: American sportspeople of Italian descent Category:American sportspeople of Filipino descent Category:Arizona Wildcats football players Category:College Football Hall of Fame inductees Category:ESPN people Category:National Football League announcers Category:New England Patriots players Category:Sportspeople from San Francisco Category:People with congenital heart defects Category:Players of American football from San Francisco Category:21st-century American journalis
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Captain Hydara was turtured and killed in prison.
Revised:  Captain Hydara was tortured and killed in prison.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Col. Jammeh won the elections, and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of The Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Revised:  Col. Jammeh won the elections, and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Armed Forces Provisional Ruling Council (AFPRC) gained control of Gambia in July 1994, in a military coup d'état.
Revised: The Armed Forces Provisional Ruling Council (AFPRC) gained control of Gambia in July 1994, in a military coup d'état.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Lieutenant Yahya A.J.J. Jammeh, chairman of the AFPRC, became head of state.
Revised:  Lieutenant Yahya Jammeh, chairman of the AFPRC, became head of state.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara  who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali  deputy leader of the AFPRC  were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Revised:  A few months later, Captain Sadibou Hydara who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali deputy leader of the AFPRC were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara  who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali  deputy leader of the AFPRC  were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Revised:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara , who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali deputy leader of the AFPRC were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara  who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali  deputy leader of the AFPRC  were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Revised:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali , deputy leader of the AFPRC were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara  who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali  deputy leader of the AFPRC  were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Revised:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali deputy leader of the AFPRC , were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara  who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali  deputy leader of the AFPRC  were accused by president Jammeh of an alleged coupplot .
Revised:  Few months later Captain Sadibou Hydara who was the spokesperson of the AFPRC, and Captain Sabali deputy leader of the AFPRC were accused by Jammeh of plotting a coup .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  It was believed that Captain Hydara who was the most educated among the original members of the AFPRC was in favor of returning the country to civilian rule, and strongly objected to president Jammeh's candidacy.
Revised:  It was believed that Captain Hydara who was the most educated among the original members of the AFPRC was in favor of returning the country to civilian rule, and strongly objected to Jammeh's candidacy.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Col. Jammeh won the elections , and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Revised:  Jammeh won the elections , and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Col. Jammeh won the elections , and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Revised:  Col. Jammeh won the elections and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Col. Jammeh won the elections , and was sworn into office as President of the Republic of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Revised:  Col. Jammeh won the elections , and was sworn into office as President of the Gambia on November 6, 1996.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  "Thousands protest peacefully at murder of journalist", IRIN, December 22, 2004.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Politics of the Gambia Military of the Gambia History of the Gambia
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Politics of the Gambia Military of the Gambia History of the Gambia
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Country Report on Human Rights Practices for The Gambia, U.S. Department of State, March 4, 2002. <ref>
Revised: Country Report on Human Rights Practices for The Gambia, U.S. Department of State, March 4, 2002. 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  He was officially sworn in as Governor of Primorsky Krai on June 25, 2001 in succession to Governor Yevgeny Ivanovich Nazdratenko, who resigned on February 5, 2001 after imperative request of the President Putin and having a heart attack.
Revised:  He was sworn in as Governor of Primorsky Krai on June 25, 2001 in succession to Governor Yevgeny Ivanovich Nazdratenko, who resigned on February 5, 2001 after imperative request of the President Putin and having a heart attack.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He is to hold his position until 2010, when a new governor will be appointed.
Revised:  He held this position until 2010, when a new governor will be appointed.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:      Hip protectors are either of the "crash helmet type" or "energy-absorbing type".
Revised:  Types Hip protectors are either of the "crash helmet type" or "energy-absorbing type".
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Hip protectors have the advantage of having no important adverse effects . Clinical studies of hip protector effectiveness vary in terms of proper and consistent use.
Revised:  Hip protectors have the advantage of having no important adverse effects Clinical studies of hip protector effectiveness vary in terms of proper and consistent use.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  such as D3O that absorb around 75\% of the impact, typically twice that of previous devices that used soft materials such as textiles or foam pads in an airtight bag, but comparable to the best of the energy-shunting devices, which have now largely disappeared from the market because of a slight tendency to cause pelvic fractures when the energy is transferred Another study showed that hip protectors' design and mechanical properties vary drastically among commercially available hip protectors.
Revised:  such as D3o that absorb around 75\% of the impact, typically twice that of previous devices that used soft materials such as textiles or foam pads in an airtight bag, but comparable to the best of the energy-shunting devices, which have now largely disappeared from the market because of a slight tendency to cause pelvic fractures when the energy is transferred Another study showed that hip protectors' design and mechanical properties vary drastically among commercially available hip protectors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Monsters! (ca .1976 ) based on a design by Ken St.
Revised:  Monsters! (ca . 1976 ) based on a design by Ken St.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He was a 1974 graduate of Rice University,"Rice University Class of 1974 Commencement program" where he was a resident of Baker College before moving to Sid Richardson College when it opened in 1971.
Revised:  Education Steve Jackson is a 1974 graduate of Rice University,"Rice University Class of 1974 Commencement program" where he was a resident of Baker College before moving to Sid Richardson College when it opened in 1971.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Honors    His role-playing game GURPS and card game Munchkin were named to the Origins Hall of Fame for 1999 and 2012 respectively.
Revised:  Personal interests His role-playing game GURPS and card game Munchkin were named to the Origins Hall of Fame for 1999 and 2012 respectively.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Jackson is an avid collector of pirate-themed Lego sets.
Revised: Jackson is an avid collector of Lego (especially pirate-themed ) sets.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Education Steve Jackson is a 1974 graduate of Rice University, "Rice University Class of 1974 Commencement program" where he was a resident of Baker College before moving to Sid Richardson College when it opened in 1971.
Revised: Education Steve Jackson is a 1974 graduate of Rice University, where he was a resident of Baker College before moving to Sid Richardson College when it opened in 1971.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   SJG filed a successful lawsuit against the government, which went to trial in 1993 as Steve Jackson Games, Inc. v. United States Secret Service , which was made possible through the newly created civil-rights organization Electronic Frontier Foundation .
Revised:  Through the newly created civil-rights organization Electronic Frontier Foundation, SJG filed a successful lawsuit against the government, which went to trial in 1993 as Steve Jackson Games, Inc. v. United States Secret Service , which was made possible through the newly created civil-rights organization Electronic Frontier Foundation .
Edit intent: coherence