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Original:  From his critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, he has demonstrated his unique style and ability to cross the genre lines and do the unexpected .
Revised:  His critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, he has demonstrated his unique style and ability to cross the genre lines and do the unexpected .
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Original:  From his critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, he has demonstrated his unique style and ability to cross the genre lines and do the unexpected .
Revised:  From his critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, was first to demonstrate his unique style and ability to cross the genre lines and do the unexpected .
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Original:  From his critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, he has demonstrated his unique style and ability to cross the genre lines and do the unexpected .
Revised:  From his critically acclaimed 1970 debut release, Entrance, he has demonstrated his unique style of non-sequitir, genre-blending musicianship .
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Original:  Winter also kept busy doing session work, playing saxophone on 'Meat Loaf's "All Revved Up with No Place to Go", Dan Hartman's solo hit "Instant Replay", Tina Turner's "Simply the Best" and David Lee Roth's remake of "Just a Gigolo", as well as appearing on material by Rick Derringer, Johnny Winter, Ronnie Montrose, Todd Rundgren, Michael McDonald and many others.
Revised:  Winter also kept busy doing session work, playing saxophone on 'Meat Loaf's "All Reved Up and Nowhere to Go", Dan Hartman's solo hit "Instant Replay", Tina Turner's "Simply the Best" and David Lee Roth's remake of "Just a Gigolo", as well as appearing on material by Rick Derringer, Johnny Winter, Ronnie Montrose, Todd Rundgren, Michael McDonald and many others.
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Original:  He has appeared in the film Netherworld, and the TV shows The Cape, Mysterious Ways,  David Letterman, and Jimmy Kimmel Live!.
Revised:  He has appeared in the film Netherworld, and the TV shows The Cape, Mysterious Ways, Late Show with David Letterman, and Jimmy Kimmel Live!.
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Original:  He is known for being a multi-instrumentalist —keyboardist, guitarist, saxophonist and percussionist— as well as a singer .
Revised:  He is known for being a multi-instrumentalist , playing the keyboard, guitar, saxophone, and percussion, as well as a singer .
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Original:  He is known for being a multi-instrumentalist —keyboardist, guitarist, saxophonist and percussionist— as well as a singer .
Revised:  He is known for being a multi-instrumentalist —keyboardist, guitarist, saxophonist and percussionist— as well as singing .
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Original:  Citation needed|date=2021-10-22 Edgar followed Entrance with two hit albums backed by his group White Trash, a group originally composed of musicians from Texas and Louisiana.
Revised:  Edgar followed Entrance with two hit albums backed by his group White Trash, a group originally composed of musicians from Texas and Louisiana.
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Original:  Citation needed|date=22 October 2021 Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the  album Mission Earth (1986) .
Revised:  Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the album Mission Earth (1986) .
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Original:  Citation needed|date=22 October 2021 Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the  album Mission Earth (1986) .
Revised:  Citation needed|date=22 October 2021 Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the 1986 album Mission Earth (1986) .
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Original:  Citation needed|date=22 October 2021 Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the  album Mission Earth (1986) .
Revised:  Citation needed|date=22 October 2021 Mission Earth Winter also produced, arranged, and performed on the album Mission Earth .
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Original:  This album's words and music were written by Scientology founder L. Ron Hubbard.
Revised:  This album's lyrics and music were written by Scientology founder L. Ron Hubbard.
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Original:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" is featured as "Runnin (Dying to Live)  " in the film Tupac Resurrection,the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
Revised:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" as "Runnin (Dying to Live) " in the film Tupac Resurrection,the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
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Original:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" is featured as "Runnin (Dying to Live)  " in the film Tupac Resurrection,the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
Revised:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" is featured as "Runnin (Dying to Live) , " in the film Tupac Resurrection,the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
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Original:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in his ninth All-Starr Band in 2006 , in his tenth All-Starr Band in 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band in 2010– 11.
Revised:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in the ninth ( 2006 , in his tenth All-Starr Band in 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band in 2010– 11.
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Original:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in his ninth All-Starr Band in 2006 , in his tenth All-Starr Band in 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band in 2010– 11.
Revised:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in his ninth All-Starr Band in 2006 ), tenth ( 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band in 2010– 11.
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Original:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in his ninth All-Starr Band in 2006 , in his tenth All-Starr Band in 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band in 2010– 11.
Revised:  Winter also played with Ringo Starr in his ninth All-Starr Band in 2006 , in his tenth All-Starr Band in 2008 and in his eleventh All-Starr Band . The 2010– 11.
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Original:  On the 2010– 11 tour , Winter would play with Rick Derringeragain .
Revised:  On the 2010– 11 tour featured the reunion of Winter and Rick Derringer .
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Original:  From August to early-September 2017, The Edgar Winter Band toured as the opening act for both Deep Purple and Alice Cooper , for several North American tour dates as part of The Long Goodbye Tour.
Revised:  From August to early-September 2017, The Edgar Winter Band toured as the opening act for both Deep Purple and Alice Cooper as they performed several North American tour dates as part of The Long Goodbye Tour.
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Original:  The couple have no children and Winter stated in an interview: "I can see how that would be a wonderful rewarding thing, but I think there are enough people in the world" and that "It might have been more problematical if I had children with a career and all of it.
Revised:  The couple have no children . Winter stated in an interview: "I can see how that would be a wonderful rewarding thing, but I think there are enough people in the world" and that "It might have been more problematical if I had children with a career and all of it.
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Original:  In addition, the DVD includes a 30 minute documentary, Edgar Winter: The Man and His Music.
Revised:  In addition, the DVD includes a 30-minute documentary, Edgar Winter: The Man and His Music.
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Original:  It was in many ways a revival of the Second Republic, which was in place between 1979 and 1983 and suffers many of the same problems, such as multiple ministries which made policy planning difficult.
Revised:  It was in many ways a revival of the Second Republic, which was in place between 1979 and 1983 and suffers many of the same problems, such as multiple ministries screw you made policy planning difficult.
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Original: The Fourth Republic is the  republican government of Nigeria.
Revised: The Fourth Republic is the current republican government of Nigeria.
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Original: Founding (1999) Following the death of military dictator and de facto ruler of Nigeria, General Sani Abacha in 1998, his successor General Abdusalami Abubakar initiated the transition which heralded Nigeria's return to democratic rule in 1999.
Revised: Founding (1999) Following the death of military dictator and de facto ruler of Nigeria, General Sani Abacha in 1998, his successor General Abdulsalami Abubakar initiated the transition which heralded Nigeria's return to democratic rule in 1999.
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Original: APC Political parties Africa Action Congress (AAC)
Revised: APC – presentAPC Political parties
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Original:   All Progressives Congress (APC)
Revised:  Major parties All Progressives Congress (APC)
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Original:  All People's Party (APP) All Progressives Grand Alliance Democratic   People's Alliance (DPA) National Democratic Party (NDP) New Democrats (ND) People's Democratic Party (PDP) Progressive Peoples Alliance ( PPA) People's Redemption Party (PRP) People's Salvation Party (PSP) United Nigeria People's Party (UNPP) Fresh Democratic Party (FDP) National Conscience Party (NCP) Justice Party (JP) Masses Movement of Nigeria (MMN) Labour Party (LP) Kowa party Social Democratic Party (SDP) 
Revised:  All People's Party (APP) All Progressives Grand Alliance Democratic People's Party ( PPA) People's Redemption Party (PRP) People's Salvation Party (PSP) United Nigeria People's Party (UNPP) Fresh Democratic Party (FDP) National Conscience Party (NCP) Justice Party (JP) Masses Movement of Nigeria (MMN) Labour Party (LP) Kowa party Social Democratic Party (SDP) 
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Original:  Brit HaBirionim (Hebrew: ברית הבריונים, The Strongmen Alliance (Alliance of ThugsAssaf Sharon,'The Moral Siege,' Boston Review August 05, 2014.)) was a clandestine, self-declared fascist faction of the Revisionist Zionist Movement (ZRM) in  Palestine, active between 1930 and 1933.
Revised:  Brit HaBirionim (Hebrew: ברית הבריונים, The Strongmen Alliance (Alliance of ThugsAssaf Sharon,'The Moral Siege,' Boston Review August 05, 2014.)) was a clandestine, self-declared fascist faction of the Revisionist Zionist Movement (ZRM) in Mandatory Palestine, active between 1930 and 1933.
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Original: Abba Ahimeir, Uri Zvi Greenberg, and Joshua Yeivin.
Revised: Abba Ahimeir, Uri Zvi Greenberg, and Yehoshua Yeivin.
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Original: Background The 1929 Arab riots and the Haganah's inability to successfully prevent the 1929 Hebron massacre and the Safed massacre led to the creation of the first militant organization characterized by its complete disassociation from the existing Zionist establishment dominated by the Labor Zionist movement.
Revised: History The 1929 Arab riots and the Haganah's inability to successfully prevent the 1929 Hebron massacre and the Safed massacre led to the creation of the first militant organization characterized by its complete disassociation from the existing Zionist establishment dominated by the Labor Zionist movement.
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Original:  Activities 200px|Abba Ahimeir ( the man in handcuffs ) and other members of Brit HaBirionim, among them Haim Dviri, as being brought before a court of law by law enforcement in Jerusalem.
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Original:  Activities 200px|Abba Ahimeir ( the man in handcuffs ) and other members of Brit HaBirionim, among them Haim Dviri, as being brought before a court of law by law enforcement in Jerusalem.
Revised:  Activities 200px|Abba Ahimeir ( handcuffed ) and other members of Brit HaBirionim, among them Haim Dviri, as being brought before a court of law by law enforcement in Jerusalem.
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Original:  Activities 200px|Abba Ahimeir ( the man in handcuffs ) and other members of Brit HaBirionim, among them Haim Dviri, as being brought before a court of law by law enforcement in Jerusalem.
Revised:  Activities 200px|Abba Ahimeir ( the man in handcuffs ) and other members of Brit HaBirionim, among them Haim Dviri, being brought to court in Jerusalem.
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Original:  The culture that produced Chankillo is called the Casma/Sechin culture or the Sechin Complex. Atwood
Revised:  The culture that produced Chankillo is called the Casma/Sechin culture or the Sechin Complex. 
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Original: The Thirteen Towers solar observatory Thirteen Towers of Chankillo, viewed from the fortress The regularly-spaced thirteen towers of Chankillo were constructed atop the ridge of a low hill running near north to south, forming a "toothed" horizon with narrow gaps at regular intervals.
Revised: The Thirteen Towers solar observatory The regularly-spaced thirteen towers of Chankillo were constructed atop the ridge of a low hill running near north to south, forming a "toothed" horizon with narrow gaps at regular intervals.
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Original:  He is a significant figure in the history of Klein-Venedig (1528–1546), the concession of Venezuela Province  to the Welser banking family by Charles I of Spain . Life Nikolaus Federmann was born in Ulm (Baden-Württemberg) around 1505.
Revised:  He is a significant figure in the history of Klein-Venedig (1528–1546), the concession of Venezuela Province that Charles I of Spain granted to the Welser banking family by Charles I of Spain . Life Nikolaus Federmann was born in Ulm (Baden-Württemberg) around 1505.
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Original:  He is a significant figure in the history of Klein-Venedig (1528–1546), the concession of Venezuela Province  to the Welser banking family by Charles I of Spain . Life Nikolaus Federmann was born in Ulm (Baden-Württemberg) around 1505.
Revised:  He is a significant figure in the history of Klein-Venedig (1528–1546), the concession of Venezuela Province to the Welser banking family . Life Nikolaus Federmann was born in Ulm (Baden-Württemberg) around 1505.
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Original:  As an agent of the Welser family Federmann brought settlers and miners from Seville to Coro in Venezuela in 1529 and 1530.
Revised:  As an agent of the Welser family , Federmann took settlers and miners from Seville to Coro in Venezuela in 1529 and 1530.
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Original:  As governor Ehinger temporarily handed over authority to Federmann, because he had to leave to Hispaniola for health reasons.
Revised:  Governor Ehinger temporarily handed over authority to Federmann, because he had to leave to Hispaniola for health reasons.
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Original:  As governor Ehinger temporarily handed over authority to Federmann, because he had to leave to Hispaniola for health reasons.
Revised:  As governor Ehinger temporarily handed over authority to Federmann, because he had to go Hispaniola for health reasons.
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Original:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" the Pacific), with 110-foot soldiers, 16 riders , and 100 Indians.
Revised:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" -the Pacific), with 110-foot soldiers, 16 riders , and 100 Indians.
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Original:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" the Pacific), with 110-foot soldiers, 16 riders , and 100 Indians.
Revised:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" the Pacific), with 110 foot soldiers, 16 riders , and 100 Indians.
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Original:  Because of the unauthorised expedition Federmann was banished to Europe for a period of four years by Ehinger .
Revised:  Because of the unauthorised expedition , Ehinger banished Federmann to Europe for a period of four years by Ehinger .
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Original:  Because of the unauthorised expedition Federmann was banished to Europe for a period of four years by Ehinger .
Revised:  Because of the unauthorised expedition Federmann was banished to Europe for a period of four years .
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Original:  He returned to Augsburg, where he wrote " Indianische Historia.
Revised:  Whwn he returned to Augsburg, where he wrote " Indianische Historia.
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Original:  He returned to Augsburg, where he wrote " Indianische Historia.
Revised:  He returned to Augsburg, he wrote Indianische Historia.
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Original:  Ein schöne kurtzweilige Historia Niclaus Federmanns des Jüngern von Ulm erster raise " (published in 1557).
Revised:  Ein schöne kurtzweilige Historia Niclaus Federmanns des Jüngern von Ulm erster raise (published in 1557).
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Original:  First he travelled along the east edges of the Cordillera, then he crossed the icy Andes mountains, following the salt trade route, and encountered the advanced culture of the Muisca , whose realm had already been largely conquered and occupied by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
Revised:  First he travelled along the east edges of the Cordillera, then he crossed the icy Andes mountains, following the salt trade route, and encountered the advanced culture of the Muisca . Their realm had already been largely conquered and occupied by Gonzalo Jiménez de Quesada.
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Original:  Together with Sebastián de Belalcázar, Federmann re-founded the city of Bogotá on 27 April 1539 after Jiménez de Quesada  failed to fulfill the official requirements of the Spanish Crown concerning the founding of a settlement when he attempted to establish a first Bogotá on 6 August 1538.
Revised:  Together with Sebastián de Belalcázar, Federmann re-founded the city of Bogotá on 27 April 1539. Jiménez de Quesada failed to fulfill the official requirements of the Spanish Crown concerning the founding of a settlement when he attempted to establish a first Bogotá on 6 August 1538.
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Original:  Together with Sebastián de Belalcázar, Federmann re-founded the city of Bogotá on 27 April 1539 after Jiménez de Quesada  failed to fulfill the official requirements of the Spanish Crown concerning the founding of a settlement when he attempted to establish a first Bogotá on 6 August 1538.
Revised:  Together with Sebastián de Belalcázar, Federmann re-founded the city of Bogotá on 27 April 1539 after Jiménez de Quesada had failed to fulfill the official requirements of the Spanish Crown concerning the founding of a settlement when he attempted to establish a first Bogotá on 6 August 1538.
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Original:  On 8 July 1539 Federmann left the New World and traveled back to Europe via Jamaica and Cuba.
Revised:  On 8 July 1539 Federmann left the New World and sailed back to Europe via Jamaica and Cuba.
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Original:  In Europe Federmann was intercepted by the Welser family, who accused him of breaching his contract and the suppression of funds.
Revised:  In Europe Federmann was intercepted by the Welser family, who accused him of breaching his contract and o suppressing funds.
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Original:  He defended himself with counter-lawsuits and accused the Welser family , among other things, of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the  king.
Revised:  He filed counter-lawsuits and accused the Welser family , among other things, of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the king.
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Original:  He defended himself with counter-lawsuits and accused the Welser family , among other things, of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the  king.
Revised:  He defended himself with counter-lawsuits , accusing the Welser family , among other things, of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the king.
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Original:  He defended himself with counter-lawsuits and accused the Welser family , among other things, of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the  king.
Revised:  He defended himself with counter-lawsuits and accused the Welser family of evading taxes and acting against the interests of the king.
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Original:  The Welser family abandoned their financial revendications  and Federmann ceded the property rights of his lands in Colombia.
Revised:  The Welser family abandoned their financial revendications , and Federmann ceded the property rights of his lands in Colombia.
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Original: Explored route of Federmann in South America indicated in pink Nikolaus Federmann (, ) (c. 1505, Ulm – February 1542, Valladolid) was a German adventurer and conquistador in the colonies of Venezuela and Colombia.
Revised:  Nikolaus Federmann (, ) (c. 1505, Ulm – February 1542, Valladolid) was a German adventurer and conquistador in the colonies of Venezuela and Colombia.
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Original:  In 1529  he was sent to Santo Domingo by the Welser family of Augsburg, who had signed an agreement to explore the territory of Venezuela.
Revised:  In 1529 , he was sent to Santo Domingo by the Welser family of Augsburg, who had signed an agreement to explore the territory of Venezuela.
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Original:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" -the Pacific), with 110 foot soldiers, 16 mounted soldiers, and 100 Indians .
Revised:  Without the authorisation of the Real Audiencia of Santo Domingo, Federmann undertook an expedition in September 1530 in the northern river basin of the Orinoco, searching for the "South Sea" -the Pacific), with 110 foot soldiers, 16 mounted soldiers, and 100 natives .
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Original:  Because of the unauthorised expedition, Ehinger banished Federmann to Europe for a period of four years.
Revised:  Because of the unauthorized expedition, Ehinger banished Federmann to Europe for a period of four years.
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Original:  Whwn he returned to Augsburg, he wrote Indianische Historia.
Revised:  When he returned to Augsburg, he wrote Indianische Historia.
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Original:  Miscellaneous As a homage to his figure, there is a neighbourhood in Bogotá named Nicolás de Federmán, the Spanish rendering of his own name and as he was known by his fellow Spanish conquistadores .  External links Nikolaus Federmann: "Indianische Historia" online (In German) Literature from and about Nikolaus Federmann (In German) Category:German conquistadors Category:  1500s births Category:1542 deat
Revised:  Miscellaneous As a homage to his figure, there is a neighborhood in Bogotá named Nicolás de Federmán, the Spanish rendering of his own name and as he was known by his fellow Spanish conquistadores . External links Nikolaus Federmann: "Indianische Historia" online (In German) Literature from and about Nikolaus Federmann (In German) Category:German conquistadors Category: 1500s births Category:1542 deat
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Original:  Miscellaneous As a homage to his figure, there is a neighbourhood in Bogotá named Nicolás de Federmán, the Spanish rendering of his own name and as he was known by his fellow Spanish conquistadores .  External links Nikolaus Federmann: "Indianische Historia" online (In German) Literature from and about Nikolaus Federmann (In German) Category:German conquistadors Category:  1500s births Category:1542 deat
Revised:  Miscellaneous As a homage to his figure, there is a neighbourhood in Bogotá named Nicolás de Federmán, the Spanish rendering of his own name and as he was known by his fellow Spanish conquistadors . External links Nikolaus Federmann: "Indianische Historia" online (In German) Literature from and about Nikolaus Federmann (In German) Category:German conquistadors Category: 1500s births Category:1542 deat
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