wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: In chatrooms , on bulletin boards, Macintosh users and the Macintosh-curious are buzzing about Tiger, the newest version of  Mac OS X . Apple's open-source operating system, Darwin, plus all the features of their proprietary Quartz user interface  , software, and system utilities have passed through their next phase of upgrading and scrutiny, and have been shipping for more than a week now.
Revised: In chatrooms , on bulletin boards, Macintosh users and the Macintosh-curious are buzzing about Tiger, the newest version of Apple Computer's Mac OS X . Apple's open-source operating system, Darwin, plus all the features of their proprietary Quartz user interface , software, and system utilities have passed through their next phase of upgrading and scrutiny, and have been shipping for more than a week now.
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Original: In chatrooms , on bulletin boards, Macintosh users and the Macintosh-curious are buzzing about Tiger, the newest version of  Mac OS X . Apple's open-source operating system, Darwin, plus all the features of their proprietary Quartz user interface  , software, and system utilities have passed through their next phase of upgrading and scrutiny, and have been shipping for more than a week now.
Revised: In chatrooms , on bulletin boards, Macintosh users and the Macintosh-curious are buzzing about Tiger, the newest version of Mac OS X . Apple's open-source operating system, Darwin, plus all the features of Apple's proprietary Quartz user interface , software, and system utilities have passed through their next phase of upgrading and scrutiny, and have been shipping for more than a week now.
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Original:  Entirely new features have  been rolled out in this release: Spotlight integrates search in the core of the OS, and utilizes meta-data in its algorithm.
Revised:  Entirely new features have also been rolled out in this release: Spotlight integrates search in the core of the OS, and utilizes meta-data in its algorithm.
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Original:  Dashboard provides a sandbox for widgets, handy tools like calculator, sticky notes, and a dictionary  .
Revised:  Dashboard provides a sandbox for widgets, handy tools like calculator, sticky notes, and a dictionary , made available at the stroke of a key .
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Original:  Automator, a graphical scripting interface that enables non-programmers to develop powerful tools .
Revised:  Automator, a graphical scripting interface that enables non-programmers to automate repetitive tasks .
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Original:  And inter-operability, long a strength of Macintosh to work with other operating systems and networks, has had a few bugs - such as reports of issues with Server Message Block (SMB) and Active Directory.
Revised:  And inter-operability, long a strength of Macintosh to work with other operating systems and networks, has had a few bugs — such as reports of issues with Server Message Block (SMB) and Active Directory.
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Original:  Another issue for some will be that Cisco System's VPN does not work with Tiger , but Cisco has promised a compatible release before the end of the month.
Revised:  Another issue for some is the fact that Cisco System's VPN does not work with Tiger , but Cisco has promised a compatible release before the end of the month.
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Original:  Another issue for some will be that Cisco System's VPN does not work with Tiger , but Cisco has promised a compatible release before the end of the month.
Revised:  Another issue for some will be that Cisco System's VPN does not work with Tiger . Cisco has promised a compatible release before the end of the month.
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Original:  The biggest technology breakthrough is the Spotlight.
Revised:  The biggest technology breakthrough is Spotlight.
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Original:  Smart folders let you correlate files in meta hierarchies, without ever moving files on the hard drive, so you can collect all your photos, receipts, and webpages about your summer vacation  while still keeping things ordered on your hard drive.
Revised:  Smart folders let you correlate files in meta hierarchies, without ever moving files on the hard drive, so you can collect all your photos, receipts, and webpages about your summer vacation , for example, while still keeping things ordered on your hard drive.
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Original:  This alone is worth the US$ 129, according to PC World.
Revised:  This alone is worth the US$ 129.
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Original:  This constant development program has occasionally been accused of being aimed at forcing users to constantly pay out for not-inexpensive new software, but the returns of regular releases have been quick bug fixes and leading edge technology
Revised:  This constant development program has occasionally been accused of being aimed at forcing users to constantly pay out for expensive new software, but the returns of regular releases have been quick bug fixes and leading edge technology
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Original:  Macintosh has been on a semi-regular release pattern since moving to Mac OS X, with four versions released in 5 years.
Revised:  Apple Computer has been on a semi-regular release pattern since moving to Mac OS X, with four versions released in 5 years.
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Original: In a victory that has come as a surprise to commentators, George Galloway, candidate for the the RESPECT The Unity Coalition party, has won the election in Bethnal Green and Bow in the UK general election, 2005.
Revised: In a victory that has come as a surprise to commentators, George Galloway, candidate for the RESPECT The Unity Coalition party, has won the election in Bethnal Green and Bow in the UK general election, 2005.
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Original:  RESPECT also took second place in East Ham and West Ham, pushing the Conservative Party into third place in both constituencies, and in w: Birmingham Sparkbrook and Small Heath (UK Parliament constituency)| , pushing the Liberal Democrats into third place.
Revised:  RESPECT also took second place in East Ham and West Ham, pushing the Conservative Party into third place in both constituencies, and in Birmingham Sparkbrook and Small Heath (UK Parliament constituency)| , pushing the Liberal Democrats into third place.
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Original:  RESPECT also took second place in East Ham and West Ham, pushing the Conservative Party into third place in both constituencies, and in w: Birmingham Sparkbrook and Small Heath (UK Parliament constituency)| , pushing the Liberal Democrats into third place.
Revised:  RESPECT also took second place in East Ham and West Ham, pushing the Conservative Party into third place in both constituencies, and in w: Birmingham Sparkbrook and Small Heath , pushing the Liberal Democrats into third place.
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Original: Category:United KingdomCategory:Politics and conflictsCategory:Elections In a victory that has come as a surprise to commentators, George Galloway, candidate for the RESPECT The Unity Coalition party, has won the election in Bethnal Green and Bow in the UK general election, 2005 with a majority of just 823.
Revised:  In a victory that has come as a surprise to commentators, George Galloway, candidate for the RESPECT The Unity Coalition party, has won the election in Bethnal Green and Bow in the UK general election, 2005 with a majority of just 823.
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Original:  It currently has 28 outlets in Poland, 7 in Latvia (trading under the brand name Coffee Nation) and 3 in the Czech Republi  
Revised:  It currently has 28 outlets in Poland, 7 in Latvia (trading under the brand name Coffee Nation) and 3 in the Czech Republic. 
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Original:  It currently has 28 outlets in Poland, 7 in Latvia (trading under the brand name Coffee Nation) and 3 in the Czech Republi  
Revised:  It currently has 28 outlets in Poland, 7 in Latvia (trading under the brand name Coffee Nation) and 3 in the Czech Republi References 
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Original:  The Rail, Tram and Bus Union says that the incident occurred because the children had been misbehaving and racially taunting the driver  . Parents of some of the  children have conceded that this did occur.
Revised:  The Rail, Tram and Bus Union said the the incident occurred because the children had been misbehaving and racially taunting the driver . Parents of some of the children have conceded that this did occur.
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Original:  The Rail, Tram and Bus Union says that the incident occurred because the children had been misbehaving and racially taunting the driver  . Parents of some of the  children have conceded that this did occur.
Revised:  The Rail, Tram and Bus Union says that the incident occurred because the children were misbehaving and racially taunting the driver . Parents of some of the children have conceded that this did occur.
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Original: Category:AustraliaCategory:OceaniaCategory:Crime and law Sydney Australia skyline A Sydney bus driver dropped off a group of Mater Maria Catholic College school children at a Brookvale bus depot on Thursday, rather than following the normal route near their homes.
Revised:  A Sydney bus driver dropped off a group of Mater Maria Catholic College school children at a Brookvale bus depot on Thursday, rather than following the normal route near their homes.
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Original: Romania's new road traffic laws were approved by the Senate after being approved by the Chamber of Deputies Romania's new road traffic laws have been approved by the Senate, with the laws being in accordance with European Union legislation and updating a previous law from 1999.
Revised: Romania's new road traffic laws Romania's new road traffic laws have been approved by the Senate, with the laws being in accordance with European Union legislation and updating a previous law from 1999.
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Original: Romania's new road traffic laws were approved by the Senate after being approved by the Chamber of Deputies Romania's new road traffic laws have been approved by the Senate, with the laws being in accordance with European Union legislation and updating a previous law from 1999.
Revised: Romania's new road traffic laws were approved by the Senate after being approved by the Chamber of Deputies have been approved by the Senate, with the laws being in accordance with European Union legislation and updating a previous law from 1999.
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Original: Image:Road-sibiu.jpg|A road in Sibiu county, Romania The new traffic laws include many important changes.
Revised:  The new traffic laws include many important changes.
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Original: She came into contact with New South Wales police after a car accident.
Revised: The woman had come into contact with New South Wales police after a car accident.
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Original:  She spoke little Englishand was sent to the Philippines consulate in Brisbane .
Revised:  Speaking but little English, she was then sent to the Philippines consulate in Brisbane .
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Original:  She spoke little Englishand was sent to the Philippines consulate in Brisbane .
Revised:  She spoke little Englishand was sent to the Philippines consulate in Brisbane 
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Original:  Her marriage to an Australian man had broken down, and like one-in-five Australians, was believed to be suffering from a mental illness.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% She was deported by immigration officials  in 2001.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% She was deported by immigration officials , in 2001.
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Original:   Parallels have been drawn between this incident and the case of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who spent 10 months in immigration detention, including a number of months at Baxter Detention Centre, before her identity was revealed  
Revised:  Parallels have been drawn between this incident and the case of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who spent 10 months in immigration detention, including a number of months at Baxter Detention Centre, before her identity was revealed . 
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Original:  The answer was due on April 8, according to Greens Senator Kerry Nettle  
Revised:  The answer was due on April 8, according to Greens Senator Kerry Nettle . 
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Original: Delta Air Lines may enter merge discusions with one of two other major United States air carriers - Northwest Airlines or United Airlines.
Revised: Delta Air Lines may enter merge discussions with one of two other major United States air carriers - Northwest Airlines or United Airlines.
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Original:  It is known that Chief Executive Richard Anderson has asked for authorisation to begin talks, and believed executives have held a meeting at which permison was sought to enter discusion with one of the two airlines, but the results are yet to be confirmed.
Revised:  It is known that Chief Executive Richard Anderson has asked for authorisation to begin talks, and believed executives have held a meeting at which permission was sought to enter discusion with one of the two airlines, but the results are yet to be confirmed.
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Original:  It is known that Chief Executive Richard Anderson has asked for authorisation to begin talks, and believed executives have held a meeting at which permison was sought to enter discusion with one of the two airlines, but the results are yet to be confirmed.
Revised:  It is known that Chief Executive Richard Anderson has asked for authorisation to begin talks, and believed executives have held a meeting at which permison was sought to enter discussion with one of the two airlines, but the results are yet to be confirmed.
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Original: Speaking in Putney, London, where the Conservative candidate won the seat from Labour, Michael Howard has announced that he will not fight  the next General Election.
Revised: Speaking in Putney, London, where the Conservative candidate won the seat from Labour, Michael Howard has announced that he will not fight in the next General Election.
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Original:  Howard stated that he would be 67 or 68 by the time of the next election, an age he believed to be too old to lead a party into power.
Revised:  The Conservative leader stated that he would be 67 or 68 by the time of the next election, an age he believed to be too old to lead a party into power.
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Original:  However Howard stated that he would first reform the selection process for a new party leader before resigning  .
Revised:  Howard stated that he would first reform the selection process for a new party leader before resigning .
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Original:   Many of the Tory party members and journalists gathered at Putney expressed their suprise at his decision.
Revised:  Many of the Tory party members and journalists gathered at Putney expressed their surprise at his decision.
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Original:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
Revised:  Members of the voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
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Original:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
Revised:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 – 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
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Original:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
Revised:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
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Original:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise marriage between partners of the same sex .
Revised:  Members of the Scottish Parliament voted 98 — 15 in a free vote yesterday to approve the , which seeks to legalise .
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Original:  If the legislation is passed, Scotland may start allowing same-sex couples to marry in 2015.
Revised:  If the legislation is passed, may start allowing same-sex couples to marry in 2015.
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Original:  Scottish government ministers have attempted to reassure religious groups that oppose same-sex marriage that they will not be required by law to conduct them, but may "opt in" to conduct ceremonies for same-sex partners.
Revised:  Scottish government ministers have attempted to reassure groups who oppose same-sex marriage that they will not be required by law to conduct them, but may "opt in" to conduct ceremonies for same-sex partners.
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Original:  Alex Neil , the Scottish government health secretary, said that the bill "will create a more tolerant society in Scotland and will mean that, in respect of marriage, there is genuinely equal rights right across the entire community".
Revised:  , the Scottish government health secretary, said that the bill "will create a more tolerant society in Scotland and will mean that, in respect of marriage, there is genuinely equal rights right across the entire community".
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Original:  Jim Hume from the Liberal Democrats said the vote was "a demonstration that our Scottish society values everyone - no matter their sexuality".
Revised:  from the said the vote was "a demonstration that our Scottish society values everyone - no matter their sexuality".
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Original:  Jim Hume from the Liberal Democrats said the vote was "a demonstration that our Scottish society values everyone - no matter their sexuality".
Revised:  Jim Hume from the Liberal Democrats said the vote was "a demonstration that our Scottish society values everyone — no matter their sexuality".
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Original:  From the Labour party, Mary Fee argued against the claim that existing civil partnership legislation was satisfactory: "I ask the opponents of the bill who comment that civil partnerships were introduced for LGBT people whether the suffragettes were happy when the Representation of the People Act 1918 was introduced, allowing women over 30 to vote.
Revised:  From the , argued against the claim that existing civil partnership legislation was satisfactory: "I ask the opponents of the bill who comment that civil partnerships were introduced for LGBT people whether the suffragettes were happy when the Representation of the People Act 1918 was introduced, allowing women over 30 to vote.
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Original:  From the Labour party, Mary Fee argued against the claim that existing civil partnership legislation was satisfactory: "I ask the opponents of the bill who comment that civil partnerships were introduced for LGBT people whether the suffragettes were happy when the Representation of the People Act 1918 was introduced, allowing women over 30 to vote.
Revised:  From the Labour party, Mary Fee argued against the claim that existing civil partnership legislation was satisfactory: "I ask the opponents of the bill who comment that civil partnerships were introduced for people whether the suffragettes were happy when the Representation of the People Act 1918 was introduced, allowing women over 30 to vote.
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Original:  Elaine Smith , also a Labour MSP, said she feared that MSPs opposing same-sex marriage were being "bounced" into supporting the bill for fear of being branded . "Since indicating that I did not intend to support the redefinition of marriage, my religion's been disparaged, I've been branded homophobic and bigoted, I've been likened to the Ku Klux Klan and it was suggested that I be burnt at the stake as a witch", Smith claimed.
Revised:  , also a Labour MSP, said she feared that MSPs opposing same-sex marriage were being "bounced" into supporting the bill for fear of being branded . "Since indicating that I did not intend to support the redefinition of marriage, my religion's been disparaged, I've been branded homophobic and bigoted, I've been likened to the Ku Klux Klan and it was suggested that I be burnt at the stake as a witch", Smith claimed.
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Original:  Elaine Smith , also a Labour MSP, said she feared that MSPs opposing same-sex marriage were being "bounced" into supporting the bill for fear of being branded . "Since indicating that I did not intend to support the redefinition of marriage, my religion's been disparaged, I've been branded homophobic and bigoted, I've been likened to the Ku Klux Klan and it was suggested that I be burnt at the stake as a witch", Smith claimed.
Revised:  Elaine Smith , also a Labour MSP, said she feared that MSPs opposing same-sex marriage were being "bounced" into supporting the bill for fear of being branded . "Since indicating that I did not intend to support the redefinition of marriage, my religion's been disparaged, I've been branded homophobic and bigoted, I've been likened to the and it was suggested that I be burnt at the stake as a witch", Smith claimed.
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Original:  The Roman Catholic Church and the Church of Scotland both oppose the Bill.
Revised:  The and the both oppose the Bill.
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Original:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
Revised:  In July, the passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
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Original:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
Revised:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
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Original:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
Revised:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in and . Related new 
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Original:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related new 
Revised:  In July, the Marriage (Same Sex Couples) Bill passed into law in Westminster and will allow same-sex couples to marry in England and Wales . Related news 
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Original: Scottish government ministers have attempted to reassure groups who oppose same-sex marriage that they will not be required by law to conduct them, but may "opt in" to conduct ceremonies for same-sex partners.
Revised: Scottish government ministers have attempted to reassure groups who oppose same-sex marriage they will not be required by law to conduct them, but may "opt in" to conduct ceremonies for same-sex partners.
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Original:  , the Scottish government health secretary, said that the bill "will create a more tolerant society in Scotland and will mean that, in respect of marriage, there is genuinely equal rights right across the entire community".
Revised:  , the Scottish government health secretary, said the bill "will create a more tolerant society in Scotland and will mean that, in respect of marriage, there is genuinely equal rights right across the entire community".
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Original:  We have an opportunity today to tell our nation ’ s children that, no matter where they live and no matter who they love, there is nothing that they cannot do.
Revised:  We have an opportunity today to tell our nation ' s children that, no matter where they live and no matter who they love, there is nothing that they cannot do.
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