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Original:  Anto Joseph is married to Neena Pinto and they have two children named Andrea Neeta Anto and Avarachan Neeta Anto.
Revised:  Anto Joseph is married to Neeta Pinto and they have two children named Andrea Neeta Anto and Avarachan Neeta Anto.
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Original: Early life and family Anton Joseph was born on 1972 June 1, as the son of P M Joseph and Molly Joseph.
Revised: Early life and family Anto Joseph was born on 1972 June 1, as the son of P M Joseph and Molly Joseph.
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Original: In 2007 he started his career as a film produced and served as one of the producers of the Mammootty starrer movie Big B. Later launched his own film production company named "Anto Joseph Film Company" and produced films like Malik, Take Off, The Priest URL He is currently serving as the general secretary of Kerala Film Producers Association. URL
Revised: In 2007 he started his career as a film producer and served as one of the producers of the Mammootty starrer movie Big B. Later launched his own film production company named "Anto Joseph Film Company" and produced films like Malik, Take Off, The Priest URL He is currently serving as the general secretary of Kerala Film Producers Association. URL
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Original:  Article 22(1) enshrines the right of data subjects not to be subject to decisions, which have legal or other significant effects, being based solely on automatic individual decision making  
Revised:  Article 22(1) enshrines the right of data subjects not to be subject to decisions, which have legal or other significant effects, being based solely on automatic individual decision making . 
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Original:  Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
Revised: Recommendation systems Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
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Original:  Many recommender systems provide autonomy to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user  .
Revised:  Many recommender systems provide autonomy to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user . .
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Original: Recommendation systems Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
Revised:  Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
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Original:  This includes music and video streaming platformssuch as Spotify, Youtube and Netflix, academic publishingdatabases such as Web of Science and Scopus, news and digital journalism platforms such as Buzzfeed, health advice, product databases and search engines.
Revised:  This includes music and video platforms, academic publishing, health advice, product databases and search engines.
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Original:  Many recommender systems provide autonomy to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user. . Bia
Revised:  Many recommender systems provide autonomy to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user. Bia
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Original:  Q48816548 As ADMS become more ubiquitous there is greater need to address the ethical challenges to ensure good governance in information societies.
Revised:  As ADMS become more ubiquitous there is greater need to address the ethical challenges to ensure good governance in information societies.
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Original:  ADM involves large-scale data sourced from databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech  that is processed using a range of technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
Revised:  ADM involves large-scale data from a range of sources, such as databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech that is processed using a range of technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
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Original:  ADM involves large-scale data sourced from databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech  that is processed using a range of technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
Revised:  ADM involves large-scale data sourced from databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech , that is processed using a range of technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
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Original:  ADM involves large-scale data sourced from databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech  that is processed using a range of technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
Revised:  ADM involves large-scale data sourced from databases, text, social media, sensors, images or speech that is processed using various technologies including computer software, algorithms, machine learning, natural language processing, artificial intelligence, augmented intelligence and robotics.
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Original:  Data and Technologies Automated decision-making uses a range of data sources and technologies to make decisions that drive the behaviour of complex systems in many different contexts including self-driving cars, robotics, security systems, public administration, health, law and commerce.
Revised:  Data and Technologies Automated decision-making uses a range of data sources and technologies to make decisions that drive the behaviour of humans and machines in many different contexts including self-driving cars, robotics, security systems, public administration, health, law and commerce.
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Original:   In legal systems around the world, algorithmic tools such as risk assessment instruments (RAI), are being used to supplement or replace the human judgment of judges, civil servants and police officers in many contexts.
Revised:  Law In legal systems around the world, algorithmic tools such as risk assessment instruments (RAI), are being used to supplement or replace the human judgment of judges, civil servants and police officers in many contexts.
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Original:   Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
Revised:  Entertainment Digital information and entertainment platforms increasingly provide automated recommendations (recommender systems) to users based on demographic information, previous selections, collaborative filtering or content-based filtering.
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Original:  Many recommender systems provide autonomy to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user.
Revised:  Many recommender systems provide some agency to users in accepting recommendations and incorporate data-driven algorithmic feedback loops based on the actions of the system user.
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Original:   Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control, ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
Revised:  Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control, ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
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Original:   The German government established an ‘Ethics Commission on Automated and Connected Driving’ in 2016 which presented a report with 20 ethical rules for the adaptation of automated and connected driving.
Revised:  In 2016 The German government established an ‘Ethics Commission on Automated and Connected Driving’ in 2016 which presented a report with 20 ethical rules for the adaptation of automated and connected driving.
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Original:   The German government established an ‘Ethics Commission on Automated and Connected Driving’ in 2016 which presented a report with 20 ethical rules for the adaptation of automated and connected driving.
Revised:  The German government established an ‘Ethics Commission on Automated and Connected Driving’ which recommended 20 ethical rules for the adaptation of automated and connected driving.
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Original: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control , ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
Revised: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport which use automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control , ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
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Original: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control , ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
Revised: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems to replace various aspects of human control , ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
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Original: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control , ranging from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
Revised: Transport Autonomous vehicles such as self-driving cars and other forms of transport is another area where automated decision-making systems are being used to replace various aspects of human control of the vehicle. This can range from level 0 (complete human driving) to level 5 (completely autonomous).
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Original:    Ethical and legal issues There are many social, ethical and legal implications of automated decision-making systems.
Revised:  Surveillance Automated digital data collections via sensors, cameras, online transactions and social media have significantly expanded the scope, scale, and goals of surveillance practices and institutions in government and commercial sectors. As a result there has been a major shift from targeted monitoring of suspects to the ability to monitor entire populations. The level of surveillance now possible as a result of automated data collection has been described as surveillance capitalism or surveillance economy to indicate the way digital media involves large-scale tracking and accumulation of data on every interaction. Ethical and legal issues There are many social, ethical and legal implications of automated decision-making systems.
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Original:  Bias ADMSs may incorporate algorithmic bias arising from: Data sources, where data inputs are bias in their collection or selection Technical design of the algorithm, for example where assumptions have been made about how a person will behave Emergent bias, where the application of the ADMS in unanticipated circumstances creates a biased outcom 
Revised:  Bias ADMSs may incorporate algorithmic bias arising from: Data sources, where data inputs are biased in their collection or selection Technical design of the algorithm, for example where assumptions have been made about how a person will behave Emergent bias, where the application of the ADMS in unanticipated circumstances creates a biased outcom 
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Original:  Bias ADMSs may incorporate algorithmic bias arising from: Data sources, where data inputs are bias in their collection or selection Technical design of the algorithm, for example where assumptions have been made about how a person will behave Emergent bias, where the application of the ADMS in unanticipated circumstances creates a biased outcom 
Revised:  Bias ADMSs may incorporate algorithmic bias arising from: Data sources, where data inputs are bias in their collection or selection Technical design of the algorithm, for example where assumptions have been made about how a person will behave Emergent bias, where the application of the ADMS in unanticipated circumstances creates a biased outcome 
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Original: Susan Claire Van den Heever is a South African atmospheric scientist and Professor at Colorado State University.
Revised: Susan Claire Van den Heever is a South African atmospheric scientist who is a Professor at Colorado State University.
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Original:  Early life and education van den Heever is from South Africa.
Revised:  Early life and education Van den Heever is from South Africa.
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Original:  She remained at the University of the Witwatersrand for a further year, where she completed an honorary diploma in education.
Revised:  She remained at the University for a further year, where she completed an honorary diploma in education.
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Original:  After earning her diploma, she worked as a mathematics teacher at a high school in Johannesburg.
Revised:  She then worked as a mathematics teacher at a high school in Johannesburg.
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Original:  Specifically, she studied El Niño–Southern Oscillation and south African drought. van den Heever eventually moved to the United States as a doctoral researcher.
Revised:  Specifically, she studied El Niño–Southern Oscillation and south African drought. Van den Heever eventually moved to the United States as a doctoral researcher.
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Original:  She completed her PhD at the Colorado State University, where she investigated supercell storms.
Revised:  She completed her PhD at Colorado State University, where she investigated supercell storms.
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Original:  After earning her doctorate  van den Heever worked as a postdoctoral scholar and then research scientist at Colorado State University.
Revised:  After earning her doctorate , van den Heever worked as a postdoctoral scholar and then research scientist at Colorado State University.
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Original:  Research and career In 2008  van den Heever joined the faculty at Colorado State University in 2008.
Revised:  Research and career In 2008 , van den Heever joined the faculty at Colorado State University in 2008.
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Original:  Research and career In 2008  van den Heever joined the faculty at Colorado State University in 2008.
Revised:  Research and career In 2008 van den Heever joined the faculty at Colorado State University .
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Original:  Her research considers storm systems and the impacts of air pollution on cloud formation.
Revised:  Van den Heever's research considers storm systems and the impacts of air pollution on cloud formation.
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Original:  Awards and honours 2002 NASA Group Achievement Award to CRYSTAL-FACE Science Team 2013 Colorado State University Outstanding Professor of the Year Award 2015 Colorado State University Outstanding Professor of the Year Award 2016 American Geophysical Union ASCENT Award 2018 Edward N. Lorenz Teaching Excellence Award 2021 Massachusetts Institute of Technology Houghton Lectureship 2021 Fellow of the American Meteorological Society Select publications
Revised:  Awards and honours 2002 NASA Group Achievement Award to CRYSTAL-FACE Science Team 2013 Colorado State University Outstanding Professor of the Year Award 2015 Colorado State University Outstanding Professor of the Year Award 2016 American Geophysical Union ASCENT Award 2018 Edward N. Lorenz Teaching Excellence Award 2021 Massachusetts Institute of Technology Houghton Lectureship 2021 Fellow of the American Meteorological Society Selected publications
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Original: Glenn Conway LeBleu, known as Conway LeBleu (October 4, 1918 – October 11, 2007), was Louisiana politician who served in the Louisiana House of Representatives from 1964 to 1988.
Revised: Glenn Conway LeBleu, known as Conway LeBleu (October 4, 1918 – October 11, 2007), was an American politician from Louisiana who served in the Louisiana House of Representatives from 1964 to 1988.
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Original: Ranchers from Louisiana Category:Louisiana Democrats Category:Parish jurors and commissioners in Louisiana Category:Members of the Louisiana House of Representatives Category:McNeese State University alumni Category:Colorado State University alumni Category:Louisiana State University alumni Category: American army personnel of World War II Category:United States Army Air Forces personnel Category:Cajun people Category:20th-century American politicians Category:Burials in Louisia
Revised: Ranchers from Louisiana Category:Louisiana Democrats Category:Parish jurors and commissioners in Louisiana Category:Members of the Louisiana House of Representatives Category:McNeese State University alumni Category:Colorado State University alumni Category:Louisiana State University alumni Category: United States Army personnel of World War II Category:United States Army Air Forces personnel Category:Cajun people Category:20th-century American politicians Category:Burials in Louisia
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Original:   In 1299 or 1300 he was promoted as viceroy of Damascus after the defection of his predecessor there, Qibjak, to the Baghdad-based Mongol Ilkhanate.
Revised:  Viceroy of Damascus In 1299 or 1300 he was promoted as viceroy of Damascus after the defection of his predecessor there, Qibjak, to the Baghdad-based Mongol Ilkhanate.
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Original:   ] ]  Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad ()  . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
Revised:  in Damascus] ] Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad () . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
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Original:   ] ]  Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad ()  . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
Revised:  ] capital of the sultanate] Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad () . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
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Original:   ] ]  Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad ()  . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
Revised:  ] ]". Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad () . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
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Original:   ] ]  Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad ()  . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
Revised:  ] ] Viewing himself of high stature, he attempted to marry the Ilkhanid princess El Qutlugh Khatun during his rule over Damascus, as marrying into Mongol royalty was rare and considered prestigious. She rebuffed his entreaties, however, and it is not mentioned in the sources that he married a Mongol woman. Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad () . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
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Original:   ] ]  Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zamr al-Zardkash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad ()  . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
Revised:  ] ] Defection to the Ilkhanate Aqqush fled the Mamluk realm with his father-in-law Aydamur al-Zardakash and the high-ranking emir Qarasunqur in 1312 due to fears of punishment by Sultan al-Nasir Muhammad () . They were welcomed by the Ilkhanid khan Oljeitu, who appointed Aqqush governor of Hamadan.
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Original: Viceroy of Damascus In 1299 or 1300 he was promoted as viceroy of Damascus after the defection of his predecessor there, Qibjak, to the Baghdad-based Mongol Ilkhanate.
Revised: Viceroy of Damascus In 1299 or 1300 he was promoted as viceroy of Damascus . This followed the defection of his predecessor there, Qibjak, to the Baghdad-based Mongol Ilkhanate.
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Original:  The tribal Mizos had great respect for Pathian as he was believed to be kind hearted and would always help them.
Revised:  The tribal Mizos had great respect for Pathian as he was believed to be kind-hearted and would always help them.
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Original:  Khuavang bestows on humans a large number of children and a long married life.
Revised:  Khuavang bestows on humans a large number of children and long married life.
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Original:  Breaking this string was a serious offence for the Mizos, possibly as serious as breaking the sacred tread for Hindus.
Revised:  Breaking this string was a serious offense for the Mizos, possibly as serious as breaking the sacred tread for Hindus.
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Original:  Revival Hnam sakhua is a modernised traditional Mizo religion that places a special emphasis on the Mizo culture and seeks to revive traditional Mizo values while opposing the influence of Christianity on the Mizo people.
Revised:  Revival Hnam sakhua is a modernized traditional Mizo religion that places a special emphasis on the Mizo culture and seeks to revive traditional Mizo values while opposing the influence of Christianity on the Mizo people.
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