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Original:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked ok ." After that  all you have to do is run some software Ballinger says . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
Revised:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked ok ." After that all you have to do is run some software , according to Ballinger . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
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Original:  " However, he cannot use  the inbuilt YouTube application and cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to  Post Office Protocol.
Revised:  However, he cannot use the inbuilt YouTube application and cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to Post Office Protocol.
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Original:  " However, he cannot use  the inbuilt YouTube application and cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to  Post Office Protocol.
Revised:  " However, he cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to Post Office Protocol.
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Original:  " However, he cannot use  the inbuilt YouTube application and cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to  Post Office Protocol.
Revised:  " However, he cannot use the inbuilt YouTube application and cannot use the email applications as it will not connect to the Post Office Protocol.
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Original:  "I can use all of them via the web browser but none by the inbuilt iPhone applications... but I am sure there will be an app you can install that will fix this or a new hack or its just me."
Revised:  "I can use all of them via the web browser but none by the inbuilt iPhone applications... but I am sure there will be an app you can install that will fix this or a new hack or it's just me."
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Original:  He can also only get the Internet if there is a wifi connection, " Vodafone NZ has 3G but no EDGE and I cannot get the slower GPRS working.
Revised:  He can also only get the Internet if there is a Wi-Fi connection, as Vodafone NZ has 3G but no EDGE and I cannot get the slower GPRS working.
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Original:  " "If there was a 3G phone then this phone would be amazing!"
Revised:  "If there was a 3G phone then this phone would be amazing!"
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Original:  He says he "really really" does love the iPhone due to being small , quiet, doesn't get hot, etc .
Revised:  He says he "really really" does love the iPhone due to its small size, its quietness, and the fact that it does not get hot .
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Original: However, he cannot use either the built-in YouTube application or the email applications as it will not connect to the Post Office Protocol  . "I can use all of them via the web browser but none by the inbuilt iPhone applications... but I am sure there will be an app you can install that will fix this or a new hack or it's just me."
Revised: However, he cannot use the built-in YouTube application or the email applications as it will not connect to the Post Office Protocol . "I can use all of them via the web browser but none by the inbuilt iPhone applications... but I am sure there will be an app you can install that will fix this or a new hack or it's just me."
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Original:   IGNORE THIS Devil Rays 8, Yankees 2: Alex Rodriguez went 3-4, with a home run and a double, and   4 RBI before being removed in the eighth inning.
Revised:  Royals 8, Yankees 2: Alex Rodriguez went 3-4, with a home run and a double, and 4 RBI before being removed in the eighth inning.
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Original:  With the win, Arizona (76-61) remains tied with the San Diego Padres (75-50) at the top of the NL West standings.
Revised:  With the win, Arizona (76-61) remains tied with the San Diego Padres (75-50) at the top of the NL 
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Original:  Boof Bonser (6-12) pitched 1 2/3 innings, allowing five runs for the loss.
Revised:  Boof Bonser (6-12) pitched 1 2/3 innings, allowing 
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Original: The same surplus of milk was true back when Monsanto introduced their genetically engineered recombinant Bovine Growth Hormone (rBGH) to the marketplace a couple of years ago.
Revised: The same surplus of milk was traced back to Monsanto which introduced their genetically engineered recombinant Bovine Growth Hormone (rBGH) to the marketplace a couple of years ago.
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Original:  He also said that cloning the cattle from United States, where genetic breeding is more advanced, could save developing countries 50 years of breeding.
Revised:  He also said that cloning cattle from the United States, where genetic breeding is more advanced, could save developing countries 50 years of breeding.
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Original:  As the Washington Post reports, some critics are asking why it is necessary to clone cows that produce huge amounts of milk when surpluses, rather than shortages, are the main problem facing the U.S. dairy industry today .
Revised:  As the Washington Post reports, some critics are asking why it is necessary to clone cows that produce huge amounts of milk when surpluses, rather than shortages, are the main problem facing the U.S. dairy industry today 
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Original:  As BBC News reports, the scientists, led by Professor Jerry Yang from the University of Connecticut, compared the produce from two beef and four dairy clones, all derived from a single Holstein dairy cow and a single Japanese black bull, with the produce from normal animals of similar age and breed.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cloning livestock may one day increase yields by copying those animals that are especially productive and especially resistant to disease.
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Original:  Wired News reports that companies like ViaGen and Cyagra, which offer livestock-cloning services, have also been waiting for several years for a final say from the FDA.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "For the United States agricultural industry, (cloning) can reduce the number of cows necessary for milking," said Jerry Yang "They can have a pleasant environment and produce even more milk."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "For the United States agricultural industry, (cloning) can reduce the number of cows necessary for milking," said Jerry Yang "They can have a pleasant environment and produce even more milk."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As the Washington Post reports, some critics are asking why it is necessary to clone cows that produce huge amounts of milk when surpluses, rather than shortages, are the main problem facing the U.S. dairy industry today.
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Original:  External Link
Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 21391054
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Original: Soay- the last island in Strangeway's collection Andy Strangeway,  a painter and decorator from Yorkshire, has completed his quest to sleep on every Scottish island with an area of over 40 hectares.
Revised:  Andy Strangeway, a painter and decorator from Yorkshire, has completed his quest to sleep on every Scottish island with an area of over 40 hectares.
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Original:  Strangeway is the first person to complete this feat, and is currently writing a book about his experience . Category:Scotlan
Revised:  Strangeway is the first person to complete this feat, and is currently writing a book about his experience Category:Scotlan
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Original:  Soay- the last island in Strangeway's collection The quest took four years, and was completed on September 3, after Strangeway spent the night on the uninhabited island of Soay in the St  Kilda archipelago.
Revised:  Soay- the last island in Strangeway's collection The quest took four years, and was completed on September 3, after Strangeway spent the night on the uninhabited island of Soay in the St . Kilda archipelago.
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Original:  Strangeway is the first person to complete this feat, and is currently writing a book about his experience and will be available in stores in October
Revised:  Strangeway is the first person to complete this feat, and is currently writing a book about his experience that will be available in stores in October
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Original:  Soay- the last island in Strangeway's collection The quest  took four years , and was completed on September 3, after Strangeway spent the night on the uninhabited island of Soay in the St. Kilda archipelago.
Revised:  Soay- the last island in Strangeway's collection The quest took four years and was completed on September 3, after Strangeway spent the night on the uninhabited island of Soay in the St. Kilda archipelago.
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Original: Republican Fred Thompson is expected to make his US Presidential bid annoucement on Jay Leno's The Tonight Show Wednesday, September 5th.
Revised: Republican Fred Thompson is expected to make his US Presidential bid announcement on Jay Leno's The Tonight Show Wednesday, September 5th.
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Original:  Thompson's advisor Mary Matalin, appearing Sunday's Meet The Press, said the decision was made because Leno had more people watching than the debates noting, "This is a message-driven campaign, and we want to drive people, and the biggest place to do that was Jay Leno."
Revised:  Thompson's adviser Mary Matalin, appearing Sunday's Meet The Press, said the decision was made because Leno had more people watching than the debates noting, "This is a message-driven campaign, and we want to drive people, and the biggest place to do that was Jay Leno."
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Original: Republican Fred Thompson is expected to make his US Presidential bid announcement on Jay Leno's The Tonight Show  Wednesday, September 5th.
Revised: Republican Fred Thompson is expected to make his US Presidential bid announcement on Jay Leno's The Tonight Show on Wednesday, September 5th.
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Original:  But efforts are being made to eradicate the  fatal virus.
Revised:  But efforts are being made to eradicate the potentially fatal virus.
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Original: A million tadpoles caused a traffic jam on Inland Island Highway, between Campbell River and Courtney, B.C. on Saturday.
Revised: A million tadpoles caused a traffic jam on Inland Island Highway, between Campbell River and Courtney, British Columbia on Saturday.
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Original:  Several years ago, after another toad incident, a fence was built east of the highway, were the toads come from, to guide them under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a foresty area in the west side , where they mature .
Revised:  Several years ago, after another toad incident, a fence was built east of the highway, were the toads come from, to guide them under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a foresty area in the west side .
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Original:  After they mature they go back to their old location and breed.
Revised:  After they mature and go back to their old location and breed.
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Original:  An interesting fact is that when they come back they do not use the highway, they cross at streams and rivers instead.
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Original:  It has been happening for several weeks now and local volunteers and conservation groups have been helping to put them in buckets and free them on the other side .
Revised:  It has been happening for several weeks now .
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Original:  The Ministry built a 45-centimetre plastic fence along the highway so the tadpoles could jump into buckets and they could bring the tadpoles across the road into the Millar Creek area.
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Original:  Once we've made a full sweep of the fence, we'll then take them across the highway and let them go," Paul said . "Right now we're estimating we've transported about a million toadlets across the highway to the other side," said environmental technician Kate Paul.
Revised:  Once we've made a full sweep of the fence, we'll then take them across the highway and let them go," said Paul . "Right now we're estimating we've transported about a million toadlets across the highway to the other side," said environmental technician Kate Paul.
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Original:  Once we've made a full sweep of the fence, we'll then take them across the highway and let them go," Paul said . "Right now we're estimating we've transported about a million toadlets across the highway to the other side," said environmental technician Kate Paul.
Revised:  Once we've made a full sweep of the fence, we'll then take them across the highway and let them go," Paul said . "Right now we're estimating we've transported about a million toadlets across the highway to the other side," said Paul.
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Original: A million tadpoles caused a traffic jam on Inland Island Highway, between Campbell River and Courtney, British Columbia on Saturday.
Revised: A million toads caused a traffic jam on Inland Island Highway, between Campbell River and Courtney, British Columbia on Saturday.
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Original:  Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence, built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a foresty area on the west side.
Revised:  Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence, built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a forestry area on the west side.
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Original:  The west side is higher and that's were the tadpoles hibernate until winter.
Revised:  The west side is higher and that's where the tadpoles hibernate until winter.
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Original:  After  , they mature and go back to their old location to breed.
Revised:  After that , they mature and go back to their old location to breed.
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Original: Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence,  built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a forestry area on the west side.
Revised: Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence, was built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a forestry area on the west side.
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Original: Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence , was built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a forestry area on the west side.
Revised: Several years ago, after another toad incident, a 45-centimetre plastic fence was built east of the highway by the Ministry of Transportation, where the toads come from, to guide them safely under the highway into the Millar Creek area, a forestry area on the west side.
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Original: According to the Canadian Press, the recent tadpoles also escaped from the local wetlands into the highway instead of using the fence that guides them.
Revised: According to the Canadian Press, the recent young toads also escaped from the local wetlands into the highway instead of using the fence that guides them.
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Original:  An interesting fact is that when the tadpoles come back in the winter they do not use the highway, they cross at streams and rivers instead.
Revised:  An interesting fact is that when the toads come back in the winter they do not use the highway, they cross at streams and rivers instead.
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Original: The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collabarativly to achieve comman goals democraticaly and without violence.
Revised: The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collabarativly to achieve common goals democraticaly and without violence.
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Original:  One key reccomendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independant , neutral organisation to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
Revised:  One key reccomendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independent , neutral organisation to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
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Original: The talks, organised by Finnish non-profit NGO WCrisis Management Initiative (CMI), took place over four days in a secret location in Finland.
Revised: The talks, organized by Finnish non-profit NGO WCrisis Management Initiative (CMI), took place over four days in a secret location in Finland.
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Original:  The discusions were aimed at demonstrating to the two sides what lessons could be learned from succesful peace talks in Northern Ireland and South Africa, and were attended by more than 30 participants, of whom 16 were from Iraq and the rest from Northern Ireland and South Africa.
Revised:  The discussions were aimed at demonstrating to the two sides what lessons could be learned from succesful peace talks in Northern Ireland and South Africa, and were attended by more than 30 participants, of whom 16 were from Iraq and the rest from Northern Ireland and South Africa.
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Original:  The discusions were aimed at demonstrating to the two sides what lessons could be learned from succesful peace talks in Northern Ireland and South Africa, and were attended by more than 30 participants, of whom 16 were from Iraq and the rest from Northern Ireland and South Africa.
Revised:  The discusions were aimed at demonstrating to the two sides what lessons could be learned from successful peace talks in Northern Ireland and South Africa, and were attended by more than 30 participants, of whom 16 were from Iraq and the rest from Northern Ireland and South Africa.
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Original:  The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collabarativly to achieve common goals democraticaly and without violence.
Revised:  The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collaboratively to achieve common goals democraticaly and without violence.
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Original:  The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collabarativly to achieve common goals democraticaly and without violence.
Revised:  The CMI has now released a document called the "Helsinki Agreement", detailing agreements reached between the two groups to work collabarativly to achieve common goals democratically and without violence.
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Original:  One key reccomendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independent, neutral organisation to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
Revised:  One key recommendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independent, neutral organisation to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
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Original:  One key reccomendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independent, neutral organisation to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
Revised:  One key reccomendation in the Helsinki Agreement, which one Northern Irish lawmaker Jeffrey Donaldson described as a "road map" to Iraqi peace, is that the groups will disarm, and that the disarmament process will be overseen by an independent, neutral organization to ensure it is conducted "in a verifiable manner".
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Original:  Although no Iraqi participants have been positivly identified, reports suggest they included representatives of the radical Shiite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr, the leader of the largest Sunni Arab political group, Adnan al-Dulaimi and Humam Hammoudi, the Shiite chairman of the Iraqi parliament's foreign affairs committee.
Revised:  Although no Iraqi participants have been positively identified, reports suggest they included representatives of the radical Shiite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr, the leader of the largest Sunni Arab political group, Adnan al-Dulaimi and Humam Hammoudi, the Shiite chairman of the Iraqi parliament's foreign affairs committee.
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Original:  Another vital agreement reached was that the groups would unite against militia groups, forming "an effective national force," and encourage armed organisations "not classified as terrorist" to instead adopt "peaceful political means", the reward for which would be positions within the state administration
Revised:  Another vital agreement reached was that the groups would unite against militia groups, forming "an effective national force," and encourage armed organizations "not classified as terrorist" to instead adopt "peaceful political means", the reward for which would be positions within the state administration
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Original:  Mets 10, Reds 4: Braves 5, Phillies 1:  Rockies 7, Giants 4: Nationals 6, Marlins 3: Devil Rays 9, Orioles 7: Angels 9, Athletics 5: Royals 8, Rangers 1
Revised:  Braves 5, Phillies 1: Rockies 7, Giants 4: Nationals 6, Marlins 3: Devil Rays 9, Orioles 7: Angels 9, Athletics 5: Royals 8, Rangers 1
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Original: Martinez reached 3,000 strikeouts Mets 10, Reds 4: In his first start of the year, Pedro Martinez (1-0) reached 3,000 strikeouts in the second inning, becoming only the 15th major league player to reach the milestone.
Revised: Martinez reaches 3,000 strikeouts Mets 10, Reds 4: In his first start of the year, Pedro Martinez (1-0) reached 3,000 strikeouts in the second inning, becoming only the 15th major league player to reach the milestone.
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Original: The 46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately reanimated by one of her fellow heart specialists.
Revised: The 46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately revived by one of her fellow heart specialists.
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Original:  The woman was transferred to the general hospital in Vienna, were she died later that day.
Revised:  The woman was transferred to the general hospital in Vienna, where she died later that day.
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Original:  The 46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately revived by one of her fellow heart specialists .
Revised:  46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately revived by one of her fellow heart specialists .
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Original:  In the past however, the movement has repeatedly denied the allegations against them
Revised:  In the past however, the movement has repeatedly denied the allegations against the
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