wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Incriminating their execution, rather, his American critics lobbied for stricter dental licensing requirements . Still, Hunter's lecture—as later recalled—"ignited the fires of focal infection".
Revised:  Incriminating their execution, rather, his American critics lobbied for stricter requirements on dentistry licensing . Still, Hunter's lecture—as later recalled—"ignited the fires of focal infection".
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Original:  And yet, read carefully, his lecture asserts a sole cause of the sepsis: dentists who instruct patients to never remove partial dentures.
Revised:  And yet, read carefully, his lecture asserts a sole cause of oral sepsis: dentists who instruct patients to never remove partial dentures.
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Original:    Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions claimed to have cured infections of distant organs.
Revised:  Billings Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions claimed to have cured infections of distant organs.
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Original:    Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions claimed to have cured infections of distant organs.
Revised:  Rosenow Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions claimed to have cured infections of distant organs.
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Original:    Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions claimed to have cured infections of distant organs.
Revised:  Focal infection theory's modern era really began with physician Frank Billings, based in Chicago, and his case reports of tonsillectomies and tooth extractions that apparently cured infections of distant organs.
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Original:   Since 1889, in  American state Minnesota, brothers William Mayo and Charles Mayo had built an international reputation for surgical skill at their Mayo Clinic, by 1906 performing some 5,000 surgeries a year, over 50\% intra-abdominal, a tremendous number at the time, with unusually low mortality and morbidity."
Revised:  Since 1889, in the American state Minnesota, brothers William Mayo and Charles Mayo had built an international reputation for surgical skill at their Mayo Clinic, by 1906 performing some 5,000 surgeries a year, over 50\% intra-abdominal, a tremendous number at the time, with unusually low mortality and morbidity."
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Original:  Rosenow influenced Charles Mayo, who by 1914 published to support focal infection theory alongside Billings and Rosenow.
Revised:  Rosenow influenced Charles Mayo, who by 1914 published to support focal infection theory alongside Rosenow.
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Original:  Although many of Hopkins' medical faculty remained skeptics, Barker's colleague William Thayer"
Revised:  Although many of the Hopkins medical faculty remained skeptics, Barker's colleague William Thayer"
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Original:  In 1921, British surgeon  Hunter announced that oral sepsis was "coming of age".
Revised:  In 1921, British surgeon William Hunter announced that oral sepsis was "coming of age".
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Original:  Reception by dentistry  In 1923, upon some 25 years of researches, dentist Weston Andrew Price of Cleveland, Ohio, published a landmark book,Weston A Price, Dental Infections, Oral and Systemic, Vol 1 & Vol 2 (Cleveland: Penton Publishing, 1923). then a related article in the Journal of the American Medical Association in 1925.
Revised:  Dental reception In 1923, upon some 25 years of researches, dentist Weston Andrew Price of Cleveland, Ohio, published a landmark book,Weston A Price, Dental Infections, Oral and Systemic, Vol 1 & Vol 2 (Cleveland: Penton Publishing, 1923). then a related article in the Journal of the American Medical Association in 1925.
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Original:  Textbook authors relied on Price's 1923 treatise into the late 1930s .
Revised:  Into the late 1930s, textbook authors relied on Price's 1923 treatise into the late 1930s .
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Original:  Textbook authors relied on Price's 1923 treatise into the late 1930s .
Revised:  Textbook authors relied on Price's 1923 treatise .
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Original:  Unsuspected periapical disease was first revealed by dental X-ray in 1911, the year that Frank Billings lectured on focal infection to the Chicago Medical Society  .
Revised:  In 1911, the year that Frank Billings lectured on focal infection to the Chicago Medical Society .
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Original:  Unsuspected periapical disease was first revealed by dental X-ray in 1911, the year that Frank Billings lectured on focal infection to the Chicago Medical Society  .
Revised:  Unsuspected periapical disease was first revealed by dental X-ray in 1911, the year that Frank Billings lectured on focal infection to the Chicago Medical Society , unsuspected periapical disease was first revealed by dental X-ray .
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Original:  Cotton routinely prescribed surgery to clean not only the nasal sinuses and to extract the tonsils and the teeth, but also to remove the appendix, gall bladder, spleen, stomach, colon, cervix, ovaries, and testicles, while Cotton claimed up to 85\% cure rate.
Revised:  Cotton routinely prescribed surgery not only to clean the nasal sinuses and to extract the tonsils and the teeth, but also to remove the appendix, gall bladder, spleen, stomach, colon, cervix, ovaries, and testicles, while Cotton claimed up to 85\% cure rate.
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Original:  The New York Times praised his accomplishments and heralded "high hope".
Revised:  The New York Times heralded "high hope".
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Original:  Despite scepticism within his profession, psychiatrists were under pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied successful intervention .
Revised:  Despite skepticism in the profession, psychiatrists were under pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied successful intervention .
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Original:  Despite scepticism within his profession, psychiatrists were under pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied successful intervention .
Revised:  Despite scepticism within his profession, psychiatrists sustained pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied successful intervention .
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Original:  Despite scepticism within his profession, psychiatrists were under pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied successful intervention .
Revised:  Despite scepticism within his profession, psychiatrists were under pressure to match Cotton's treatments, as patients would ask why they were being denied curative treatment .
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Original:  Other patients , ostensibly for their own good, were pressured or compelled into  treatment without their own consent.
Revised:  Other patients were pressured or compelled into treatment without their own consent.
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Original:  Other patients , ostensibly for their own good, were pressured or compelled into  treatment without their own consent.
Revised:  Other patients , ostensibly for their own good, were pressured or compelled into the treatment without their own consent.
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Original:  Morris called for facts and explanation from scientists before physicians continued investing so steeply in it, already triggering vigorous disputes and embittering division among clinicians as well as uncertainty among patients.
Revised:  Morris called for facts and explanation from scientists before physicians continued investing so steeply in it, already triggering vigorous disputes and embittering divisions among clinicians as well as uncertainty among patients.
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Original:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells  delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
Revised:  In 1919, the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
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Original:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells  delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
Revised:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association 's forerunner, the National Dental Association, held in New Orleans its annual meeting, where C Edmund Kells delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
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Original:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells  delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
Revised:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells , the originator and pioneer of dental X-ray, delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
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Original:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells  delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the Association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
Revised:  In 1919, in New Orleans, at the annual meeting of the National Dental Association(forerunnerof the American Dental Association ), dental X-ray originator and pioneer C Edmund Kells delivered a lecture, published in 1920 in the association 's journal,C Edmund Kells, "X-ray in dental practice", Journal of the National Dental Association, 1920 Mar;7(3):241–72 [JADA provides the article free in two parts (1 & 2 )]. largely discussing focal infection theory, which Kells condemned as a "crime".
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Original:  Yet the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was standard at the time—except in New York City.
Revised:  Still, the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was standard at the time—except in New York City.
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Original:  Yet the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was standard at the time—except in New York City.
Revised:  Yet the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was normal at the time—except in New York City.
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Original:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and  Kirby concluded Cotton's psychiatric surgeries ineffective: patients who improved were already prognosed to , and others improved without surgery.
Revised:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and Kirby concluded Cotton's psychiatric surgeries ineffective: those who improved were already prognosed to , and others improved without surgery.
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Original:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and  Kirby concluded Cotton's psychiatric surgeries ineffective: patients who improved were already prognosed to , and others improved without surgery.
Revised:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and Kirby concluded Cotton's psychiatric surgeries ineffective: patients who improved were already so prognosed , and others improved without surgery.
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Original:  They published two papers, and presented the findings at the American Psychiatric Association's 1922 and 1923 annual meetings.
Revised:  Publishing two papers, and presented the findings at the American Psychiatric Association's 1922 and 1923 annual meetings.
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Original:  They published two papers, and presented the findings at the American Psychiatric Association's 1922 and 1923 annual meetings.
Revised:  They published two papers, the team presented the findings at the American Psychiatric Association's 1922 and 1923 annual meetings.
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Original:  As early as 1927, Weston Price's researches were criticized for allegedly "faulty bacterial technique".
Revised:  By 1927, Weston Price's researches were criticized for allegedly "faulty bacterial technique".
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Original:  As early as 1927, Weston Price's researches were criticized for allegedly "faulty bacterial technique".
Revised:  As early as 1927, Weston Price's researches had been criticized for allegedly "faulty bacterial technique".
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Original:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Edward Rosenow and of Price as flawed by insufficient controls, by massive doses of bacteria, and by contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
Revised:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Price and of Edward Rosenow as flawed by insufficient controls, by massive doses of bacteria, and by contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
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Original:  Sometimes forming elsewhere in bones after injury or ischemia,Leon Chaitow, Cranial Manipulation: Theory and Practice, 2nd edn (Edinburgh, London, New York, elsewhere : Elsevier, 2005), pp 348– 49.  jawbone cavitations are recognized as foci also in osteopathy and in alternative medicine,Examples: Ellen Hodgson Brown, Healing Joint Pain Naturally: Safe and Effective Ways to Treat Arthritis, Fibromyalgia, and Other Joint Diseases (New York: Broadway Books, 2001);
Revised:  Sometimes forming elsewhere in bones after injury or ischemia,Leon Chaitow, Cranial Manipulation: Theory and Practice, 2nd edn (Edinburgh, London, New York, etc. : Elsevier, 2005), pp 348– 49. jawbone cavitations are recognized as foci also in osteopathy and in alternative medicine,Examples: Ellen Hodgson Brown, Healing Joint Pain Naturally: Safe and Effective Ways to Treat Arthritis, Fibromyalgia, and Other Joint Diseases (New York: Broadway Books, 2001);
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Original:  Sometimes forming elsewhere in bones after injury or ischemia,Leon Chaitow, Cranial Manipulation: Theory and Practice, 2nd edn (Edinburgh, London, New York, elsewhere : Elsevier, 2005), pp 348– 49.  jawbone cavitations are recognized as foci also in osteopathy and in alternative medicine,Examples: Ellen Hodgson Brown, Healing Joint Pain Naturally: Safe and Effective Ways to Treat Arthritis, Fibromyalgia, and Other Joint Diseases (New York: Broadway Books, 2001);
Revised:  Sometimes forming elsewhere in bones after injury or ischemia,Leon Chaitow, Cranial Manipulation: Theory and Practice, 2nd edn (Edinburgh, London, New York, elsewhere : Elsevier, 2005), pp 348– 49 jawbone cavitations are recognized as foci also in osteopathy and in alternative medicine,Examples: Ellen Hodgson Brown, Healing Joint Pain Naturally: Safe and Effective Ways to Treat Arthritis, Fibromyalgia, and Other Joint Diseases (New York: Broadway Books, 2001);
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Original:  Shirley MacLaine, Sage-ing While Age-ing (New York: Atria Books, 2007). but conventional dentists generally conclude them to be nonexistent.
Revised:  Shirley MacLaine, Sage-ing While Age-ing (New York: Atria Books, 2007). but conventional dentists generally conclude them nonexistent.
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Original:  Although the International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology claims that the scientific evidence establishing the existence of jawbone cavitations is overwhelming , and even published in textbooks, the diagnosis and related treatment remain controversial,IAOMT, "IAOMT position paper on jawbone osteonecrosis", International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology, 27 Jul 2014. and allegations of quackery persist.
Revised:  Although the International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology claims that the scientific evidence establishing existence of jawbone cavitations is overwhelming , and even published in textbooks, the diagnosis and related treatment remain controversial,IAOMT, "IAOMT position paper on jawbone osteonecrosis", International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology, 27 Jul 2014. and allegations of quackery persist.
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Original:  Although the International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology claims that the scientific evidence establishing the existence of jawbone cavitations is overwhelming , and even published in textbooks, the diagnosis and related treatment remain controversial,IAOMT, "IAOMT position paper on jawbone osteonecrosis", International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology, 27 Jul 2014. and allegations of quackery persist.
Revised:  Although the International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology claims that the scientific evidence establishing the existence of jawbone cavitations is overwhelming and even published in textbooks, the diagnosis and related treatment remain controversial,IAOMT, "IAOMT position paper on jawbone osteonecrosis", International Academy of Oral Medicine & Toxicology, 27 Jul 2014. and allegations of quackery persist.
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Original:  Boyd Haley and Curt Pendergrass found especially high levels of bacterial toxins in root-filled teeth.
Revised:  Boyd Haley and Curt Pendergrass reporting finding especially high levels of bacterial toxins in root-filled teeth.
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Original: In ancient Greece, Hippocrates reported cure of an arthritis case by tooth extraction.
Revised: In ancient Greece, had reported cure of an arthritis case by tooth extraction.
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Original:  In 1877,  Karl Weigert reported "dissemination of 'tuberculosis poison' ".
Revised:  In 1877, when Karl Weigert reported "dissemination of 'tuberculosis poison' ".
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Original:  In  1890,  Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and  a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to those infectious, oral diseases .
Revised:  In 1890, Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and attributed a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to those infectious, oral diseases .
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Original:  In  1890,  Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and  a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to those infectious, oral diseases .
Revised:  In 1890, Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to the oral infections .
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Original:  In 1894, Miller became the first to reveal bacteria in samples of dental pulp.
Revised:  In 1894, Miller became the first to identify bacteria in samples of dental pulp.
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Original:  In 1894, Miller became the first to reveal bacteria in samples of dental pulp.
Revised:  In 1894, Miller became the first to reveal bacteria in samples of tooth pulp.
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Original:  Yet ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology, a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
Revised:  Yet ancient and folk concepts, entrenched as Galenic principles of humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology, a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
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Original:  Yet ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology, a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
Revised:  Yet ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlet in medical bacteriology, a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
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Original:  Around 1900, British surgeons, still knife-happy, urged "surgical bacteriology".
Revised:  Around 1900, British surgeons, still knife-happy, were urging "surgical bacteriology".
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Original:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886,  international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— was embraced in Paris by Louis Pasteur , who granted him an entire floor for research once the Pasteur Institute, the globe's first biomedical institute, opened in 1888.
Revised:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886, international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— whom Pasteur granted an entire floor for research once the Pasteur Institute, the globe's first biomedical institute, opened in 1888.
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Original:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886,  international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— was embraced in Paris by Louis Pasteur , who granted him an entire floor for research once the Pasteur Institute, the globe's first biomedical institute, opened in 1888.
Revised:  Emigrating from Russia to France in 1886, international scientific celebrity Elie Metchnikoff—discoverer of phagocytes, mediating innate immunity— was embraced in Paris by Louis Pasteur , who granted him an entire floor of the Pasteur Institute, the globe's first biomedical institute, opened in 1888.
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