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Original:  After nine rounds ending with a tie, it was Pascal Dupuis who scored on Martin Brodeur.
Revised:  After nine rounds ending with a tie, it was who scored on Martin Brodeur.
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Original:  Rostislav Olesz made his return to the Panthers lineup after injuring his hand on January 16, and scored the first goal 5:52 into the game.
Revised:  made his return to the Panthers lineup after injuring his hand on January 16, and scored the first goal 5:52 into the game.
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Original:  Alexander Semin would score on an a Washington power-play early in the second period to tie the score at one goal a piece.
Revised:  would score on an a Washington power-play early in the second period to tie the score at one goal a piece.
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Original:  Tomas Fleischmann earned his two-year contract extension by giving Washington their first lead of the game in the opening minute of the third period, his 7th of the season.
Revised:  earned his two-year contract extension by giving Washington their first lead of the game in the opening minute of the third period, his 7th of the season.
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Original:  Nathan Horton would re-tie the score 3 minutes later, but the Panthers would retake the lead on a Kamil Kreps goal at 8:27 in the third.
Revised:  would re-tie the score 3 minutes later, but the Panthers would retake the lead on a Kamil Kreps goal at 8:27 in the third.
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Original:  Nathan Horton would re-tie the score 3 minutes later, but the Panthers would retake the lead on a Kamil Kreps goal at 8:27 in the third.
Revised:  Nathan Horton would re-tie the score 3 minutes later, but the Panthers would retake the lead on a goal at 8:27 in the third.
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Original:  David Booth would salt the Panthers victory with an empty net goal in the final minute of the game.
Revised:  would salt the Panthers victory with an empty net goal in the final minute of the game.
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Original:  Rick Nash put the Jackets on the board first, and Fredrik Modin added another for Columbus a few minutes later, assisted by Nash.
Revised:  put the Jackets on the board first, and Fredrik Modin added another for Columbus a few minutes later, assisted by Nash.
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Original:  Rick Nash put the Jackets on the board first, and Fredrik Modin added another for Columbus a few minutes later, assisted by Nash.
Revised:  Rick Nash put the Jackets on the board first, and added another for Columbus a few minutes later, assisted by Nash.
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Original:  It was then Nikolai Zherdev who put the Blue Jackets ahead by 3 less than two minutes later.
Revised:  It was then who put the Blue Jackets ahead by 3 less than two minutes later.
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Original:  Pavel Datsyuk would put Detroit on the board early in the 3rd period with a power-play goal.
Revised:  would put Detroit on the board early in the 3rd period with a power-play goal.
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Original:  Teemu Selanne made his return to the Honda Center after coming out of retirement during Anaheim's 9 game road-trip.
Revised:  made his return to the Honda Center after coming out of retirement during Anaheim's 9 game road-trip.
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Original:  Chris Kunitz put the Ducks on the board first early in the game.
Revised:  put the Ducks on the board first early in the game.
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Original:  Mike Ribeiro scored on a 5-on-3 power-play to tie the score for the Stars.
Revised:  scored on a 5-on-3 power-play to tie the score for the Stars.
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Original:  Kunitz would score his second goal, which deflected off the skate of Stars defender Nicklas Grossman and past goaltender Marty Turco , to cut the lead in half.
Revised:  Kunitz would score his second goal, which deflected off the skate of Stars defender and past goaltender Marty Turco , to cut the lead in half.
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Original:  Kunitz would score his second goal, which deflected off the skate of Stars defender Nicklas Grossman and past goaltender Marty Turco , to cut the lead in half.
Revised:  Kunitz would score his second goal, which deflected off the skate of Stars defender Nicklas Grossman and past goaltender , to cut the lead in half.
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Original:  An empty-net goal by Steve Ott in the final seconds of the game iced the Stars 8th victory in 9 games, and snapped Anaheim's 5 game winning streak.
Revised:  An empty-net goal by in the final seconds of the game iced the Stars 8th victory in 9 games, and snapped Anaheim's 5 game winning streak.
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Original:  Kevin Dallman started the scoring for the Kings, his first goal of this NHL season, his second career goal as a King.
Revised:  started the scoring for the Kings, his first goal of this NHL season, his second career goal as a King.
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Original:  Anze Kopitar would also score for the Kings, assisted by O'Sullivan, to give Los Angeles a 4 goal lead just after the halfway point of the game.
Revised:  would also score for the Kings, assisted by O'Sullivan, to give Los Angeles a 4 goal lead just after the halfway point of the game.
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Original:  Pittsburgh Penguins will be playing without center Kris Beech , who was placed on injured reserve on Friday with a broken wrist.
Revised:  will be playing without center Kris Beech , who was placed on injured reserve on Friday with a broken wrist.
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Original:  Pittsburgh Penguins will be playing without center Kris Beech , who was placed on injured reserve on Friday with a broken wrist.
Revised:  Pittsburgh Penguins will be playing without center , who was placed on injured reserve on Friday with a broken wrist.
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Original:  He was hit by Carolina Hurricanes player Glen Wesley late in the third period in Pittsburgh's 2-4 loss to the Hurricanes Thursday.
Revised:  He was hit by player late in the third period in Pittsburgh's 2-4 loss to the Hurricanes Thursday.
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Original:  Carolina captain Rod Brind'Amour was also injured in this game with a torn ligament in his knee.
Revised:  Carolina captain was also injured in this game with a torn ligament in his knee.
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Original:  The first game he would be eligible to play in is the February 21 game against the Tampa Bay Lightning
Revised:  The first game he would be eligible to play in is the February 21 game against the 
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Original:  "I think the criminal investigation comes to an end," says Moszkowicz, "That does not mean that I understand, or agree with that"  
Revised:  "I think the criminal investigation comes to an end," says Moszkowicz, "That does not mean that I understand, or agree with that" . 
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Original:  On her behalf  Dutch lawyer Bram Moszkowicz is investigating whether Van der Sloot can be charged with unlawful action.
Revised:  On her behalf , Dutch lawyer Bram Moszkowicz is investigating whether Van der Sloot can be charged with unlawful action.
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Original:  Related newsitems Van der Sloot not re-arrested in Holloway cas
Revised:  Related news Van der Sloot not re-arrested in Holloway cas
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Original: Moszkowicz claims that there are two reasons for starting a civil procedure: first there is the shock after Van der Sloot's confessions, en second his keeping silent on the details.
Revised: Moszkowicz claims that there are two reasons for starting a civil procedure: first there is the shock after Van der Sloot's confessions, and second his keeping silent on the details.
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Original: THE INTERNET HAS TAKEN ME CAPTIVE! Press the green button.!
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Original:  It has not yet been rated by the ESRB  
Revised:  It has not yet been rated by the ESRB . 
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Original: ]] This weekend kicks off the start of the motorcycle rallying held annually in the U.S. eastern seacoast town of Myrtle Beach.
Revised: ]] This weekend the kick-off for motorcycle rallies held annually in the U.S. eastern seacoast town of Myrtle Beach.
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Original: ]] This weekend  the kick-off for  motorcycle rallies held annually in the U.S. eastern seacoast town of Myrtle Beach.
Revised: ]] This weekend is the kick-off for motorcycle rallies held annually in the U.S. eastern seacoast town of Myrtle Beach.
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Original:  Enthusiasts this year are expected to meet or exceed last year’s 170,000 that arrived in droves to the small resort town of 23, 000 year-round residents.
Revised:  Enthusiasts this year are expected to meet or exceed the 170,000 that arrived in droves to the small resort town of 23, 000 year-round residents.
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Original:  Enthusiasts this year are expected to meet or exceed last year’s 170,000 that arrived in droves to the small resort town of 23, 000 year-round residents.
Revised:  Enthusiasts this year are expected to meet or exceed last year’s 170,000 that arrived in droves to the small resort town of 23, 000.
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Original:  Festivities span two weeks, and will extend into the Memorial Day weekend this season .
Revised:  Festivities span two weeks, and will extend into the Memorial Day .
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Original: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, followed the week after by the BikeFestrally .
Revised: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, which then will be followed in the next week by BikeFest .
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Original:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
Revised:  In and around town, both day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
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Original:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
Revised:  In and around town, the day and night are punctured by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
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Original:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
Revised:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines gunned and revved at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
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Original:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights . Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
Revised:  In and around town, the day and night is punctuated by the sounds of bike engines being gunned and reved in parkings lots and at stop lights and in parkings lots, while groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
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Original:  “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said Ranjan Patel of the ‘’ Super 8 ’’ motel in Myrtle Beach.
Revised:  “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said Ranjan Patel of the Super 8 ’’ motel in Myrtle Beach.
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Original:  “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said Ranjan Patel of the ‘’ Super 8 ’’ motel in Myrtle Beach.
Revised:  “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said Ranjan Patel of the ‘’ Super 8 motel in Myrtle Beach.
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Original: “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said Ranjan Patel of the Super 8 motel in Myrtle Beach.
Revised: “By Friday night, the front parking lot will be a full line of motorcycles to the corner.” said motel owner Ranjan Patel. The Super 8 motel in Myrtle Beach.
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Original:  The motel takes up half a block  in the heart of the  motel strip.
Revised:  The motel takes up half a block and is located in the heart of the motel strip.
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Original:  The motel takes up half a block  in the heart of the  motel strip.
Revised:  The motel takes up half a block in the heart of the town's motel strip.
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Original:  The Super 8 motel takes up half a block and is located in the heart of the town's motel strip.
Revised:  The Super 8 motel takes up half a block at its location in the heart of the town's motel strip.
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Original:  The Super 8 motel takes up half a block and is located in the heart of the town's motel strip.
Revised:  The Super 8 motel takes up half a block and is located in the heart of the downtown motel strip.
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Original:  Highly accesorised bikes, decked with chome and cleaned to show it, flashed the townscape.
Revised:  The highly accesorised bikes, decked with chome and cleaned to show it, flashed the townscape.
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Original:  Highly accesorised bikes, decked with chome and cleaned to show it, flashed the townscape.
Revised:  Highly accesorised bikes, decked with chome and polished to show it, flashed the townscape.
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Original:  During BikeFest last year, the mostly black crowd that came  on the heels of the largely white Harley rally  , were faced with confusion when the two-lane Ocean Blvd was made one-way.
Revised:  During BikeFest last year, the mostly black crowd that came in on the heels of the largely white Harley rally , were faced with confusion when the two-lane Ocean Blvd was made one-way.
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Original:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants  .
Revised:  A branch of the NAACP in Conway, the next town over from Myrtle Beach, alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants .
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Original:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants  .
Revised:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police . They claimed authorities and police used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants .
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Original:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants  .
Revised:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, combined with a restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants .
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Original:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants  .
Revised:  A branch of the NAACP in the nearby town of Conway alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police , claiming they used an overwhelming and aggressive police presence, with the restrictive one-way traffic pattern, to intimidate and discourage the participants in the rally .
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Original:  Myrtle Beach city lawyers immediately filed an appeal to the ruling with the Fourth U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals on Wednesday , saying "the trial court erroneously determined that the plaintiffs would likely succeed on the merits;
Revised:  Myrtle Beach city lawyers immediately filed an appeal to the ruling at the Fourth U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals on Wednesday , saying "the trial court erroneously determined that the plaintiffs would likely succeed on the merits;
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Original:  Myrtle Beach city lawyers immediately filed an appeal to the ruling with the Fourth U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals on Wednesday , saying "the trial court erroneously determined that the plaintiffs would likely succeed on the merits;
Revised:  Myrtle Beach city lawyers immediately filed an appeal to the ruling with the Fourth U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals , saying "the trial court erroneously determined that the plaintiffs would likely succeed on the merits;
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Original:  Traffic control and safety was an apparent concern on the 4-lane divided highway heading southbound on US 17 out of Myrtle Beach on Friday . Large flashing road signs on each side of the highway warned cars to use the passing lane.
Revised:  Traffic control and safety measures were in full swing Friday morning on US-17. Both directions of the 4-lane divided highway heading southbound on US 17 out of Myrtle Beach on Friday . Large flashing road signs on each side of the highway warned cars to use the passing lane.
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Original:  Traffic control and safety was an apparent concern on the 4-lane divided highway heading southbound on US 17 out of Myrtle Beach on Friday . Large flashing road signs on each side of the highway warned cars to use the passing lane.
Revised:  Traffic control and safety was an apparent concern on the 4-lane divided highway south of Myrtle Beach on Friday . Large flashing road signs on each side of the highway warned cars to use the passing lane.
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Original:  The  right lane was flashed for motorcycle use only , where pull-offs to popular attractions were  in the immediate vicinity
Revised:  The right lane was for motorcycle use only , where pull-offs to popular attractions were in the immediate vicinity
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Original:  The  right lane was flashed for motorcycle use only , where pull-offs to popular attractions were  in the immediate vicinity
Revised:  The right lane was flashed for motorcycle use only . Police monitored the pull-offs to popular attractions were in the immediate vicinity
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Original:  The  right lane was flashed for motorcycle use only , where pull-offs to popular attractions were  in the immediate vicinity
Revised:  The right lane was flashed for motorcycle use only , where pull-offs to popular attractions were set-up in the immediate vicinity
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Original: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, which then will be followed in the next week by BikeFest.
Revised: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, followed by the next week by BikeFest.
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Original: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, which then will be followed in the next week by BikeFest.
Revised: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, which then will be followed in the next week 's BikeFest.
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Original:  In and around town, both day and night are punctured by the sounds of bike engines gunned and revved at stop lights and in parkings lots, while groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
Revised:  In and around town, both day and night are punctured by the sounds of bike engines gunned and revved at stop lights and in parking lots. Groups of cycle riders dominate the streets.
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Original:  The highly accesorised bikes, decked with chome and polished to show it, flashed the townscape.
Revised:  The highly accesorised bikes, decked with chrome and polished to show it, flashed the townscape.
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Original:  A branch of the NAACP in Conway, the next town over from Myrtle Beach, alledged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police.
Revised:  A branch of the NAACP in Conway, the next town over from Myrtle Beach, alleged discrimination by Horry County and Myrtle Beach Police.
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Original:  "We certainly don't think the judge has ruled erroneously," Navarre said, according to ‘’ The Sun News ’’ .
Revised:  "We certainly don't think the judge has ruled erroneously," Navarre said, according to The Sun News ’’ .
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Original:  "We certainly don't think the judge has ruled erroneously," Navarre said, according to ‘’ The Sun News ’’ .
Revised:  "We certainly don't think the judge has ruled erroneously," Navarre said, according to ‘’ The Sun News .
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Original: Former President George H. W. Bush Former 2008 Presidential candidate Mitt Romney Former President George H. W. Bush is reported to offer his endorsement to Senator John McCain on Monday, February 18.
Revised: Former President George H. W. Bush Former 2008 Presidential candidate Mitt Romney Former President George H. W. Bush is reported to have offered his endorsement to Senator John McCain on Monday, February 18.
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Original: Former President George H. W. Bush Former 2008 Presidential candidate Mitt Romney Former President George H. W. Bush is reported to offer his endorsement to Senator John McCain on Monday, February 18.
Revised: Former President George H. W. Bush Former 2008 Presidential candidate Mitt Romney Former President George H. W. Bush is reported to offer his endorsement to Senator John McCain in the 2008 U.S. presidential election.
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Original:  Romney  who once referred to McCain as a "liberal Democrat"  had a change of heart as he stood by the Senator's side and described McCain as "...a man capable of leading our country at a dangerous hour."
Revised:  Romney , who once referred to McCain as a "liberal Democrat" had a change of heart as he stood by the Senator's side and described McCain as "...a man capable of leading our country at a dangerous hour."
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Original:  Romney  who once referred to McCain as a "liberal Democrat"  had a change of heart as he stood by the Senator's side and described McCain as "...a man capable of leading our country at a dangerous hour."
Revised:  Romney who once referred to McCain as a "liberal Democrat" , had a change of heart as he stood by the Senator's side and described McCain as "...a man capable of leading our country at a dangerous hour."
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Original:  However, a correlation may exist from the proximity of the endorsements as the Washington Post reports that Bush gave "indications" earlier in the race that he was on Romney's side, citing the facts that many Bush aides worked for Romney and that Romney's  Faith in America Speech was set at the George H. W. Bush presidential library.
Revised:  However, a correlation may exist from the proximity of the endorsements as the Washington Post reports that Bush gave "indications" earlier in the race that he was on Romney's side, citing the facts that many Bush aides worked for Romney and that Romney's " Faith in America Speech was set at the George H. W. Bush presidential library.
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