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Original:  With the help of her diary, Patty realized she didn't kill Richard Hightower , however, Adam snuck into the mental institution to once again mess with Patty's mind in making her believe she did kill Richard Hightower and switched notes in her diary while Patty was asleep.
Revised:  With the help of her diary, Patty realized she did not kill Richard Hightower , however, Adam snuck into the mental institution to once again mess with Patty's mind in making her believe she did kill Richard Hightower and switched notes in her diary while Patty was asleep.
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Original:  With the help of her diary, Patty realized she didn't kill Richard Hightower , however, Adam snuck into the mental institution to once again mess with Patty's mind in making her believe she did kill Richard Hightower and switched notes in her diary while Patty was asleep.
Revised:  With the help of her diary, Patty realized she didn't kill Richard Hightower ; however, Adam snuck into the mental institution to once again mess with Patty's mind in making her believe she did kill Richard Hightower and switched notes in her diary while Patty was asleep.
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Original:  On August 6, 2010, Patty called Paul saying that she wasn't going to return to Genoa City and that she loves him.
Revised:  On August 6, 2010, Patty called Paul saying that she was not going to return to Genoa City and that she loves him.
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Original:  While having her face bandaged, Jack tries to talk to Myrna, but she wouldn't answer him.
Revised:  While having her face bandaged, Jack tries to talk to Myrna, but she would not answer him.
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Original:  As she later reveals her face to Genevieve it 's seen that Myrna is in fact Patty.
Revised:  As she later reveals her face to Genevieve it is seen that Myrna is in fact Patty.
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Original:  Genevieve brings him home to rest, where "Myrna" then creates a diversion  causing Genevieve to leave.
Revised:  Genevieve brings him home to rest, where "Myrna" then creates a diversion , causing Genevieve to leave.
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Original:  Genevieve has Ronan investigate the bizarre occurrences at her house and he requests to speak with "Myrna" , however Patty continues to divert him, one time by posting a ripped page from Diane's diary on his windshield to keep him from questioning her.
Revised:  Genevieve has Ronan investigate the bizarre occurrences at her house and he requests to speak with "Myrna" ; however, Patty continues to divert him, one time by posting a ripped page from Diane's diary on his windshield to keep him from questioning her.
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Original:  Shortly after Patty's brother Paul arrives at Genevieve's house to question "Myrna", however  she had already fled the house, leaving behind the laptop she used while working for Genevieve.
Revised:  Shortly after Patty's brother Paul arrives at Genevieve's house to question "Myrna", however , she had already fled the house, leaving behind the laptop she used while working for Genevieve.
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Original:  Patty then steals Genevieve's wedding dress and arrives at the church attempting to convince the delivery man she is Jack's personal assistant , however he does not believe her and she knocks him unconscious.
Revised:  Patty then steals Genevieve's wedding dress and arrives at the church attempting to convince the delivery man she is Jack's personal assistant ; however, he does not believe her and she knocks him unconscious.
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Original:  Patty, who had been witnessing Dr. Anderson's actions, was repeatedly silenced and locked up by other orderlies so that she wouldn't reveal what Dr.
Revised:  Patty, who had been witnessing Dr. Anderson's actions, was repeatedly silenced and locked up by other orderlies so that she would not reveal what Dr.
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Original:  As a result, Patty escapes Fairview in order to find Dylan McAvoy, her newfound nephew and Sharon's husband, at a Halloween party at the Newman Enterprises tower and tell him that Sharon isn't really pregnant and Dr. Anderson is purposely mistreating her.
Revised:  As a result, Patty escapes Fairview in order to find Dylan McAvoy, her newfound nephew and Sharon's husband, at a Halloween party at the Newman Enterprises tower and tell him that Sharon is not really pregnant and Dr. Anderson is purposely mistreating her.
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Original:  When a fire breaks out in the tower, panic ensues and Jack later informs Paul that he and Phyllis encountered Patty, leading to a search for her, but when her body isn't found, she is presumed dead.
Revised:  When a fire breaks out in the tower, panic ensues and Jack later informs Paul that he and Phyllis encountered Patty, leading to a search for her, but when her body is not found, she is presumed dead.
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Original:  Soon after, Patty and Ian are seen in a motel room, where he tells her she must come up with a new name for herself if she 's going to go along with him.
Revised:  Soon after, Patty and Ian are seen in a motel room, where he tells her she must come up with a new name for herself if she is going to go along with him.
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Original:  Sharon, however, manages to steal the cell phone Patty was using so that she won't be able to contact her or anyone else further, hoping that would put an end to the threats.
Revised:  Sharon, however, manages to steal the cell phone Patty was using so that she would not be able to contact her or anyone else further, hoping that would put an end to the threats.
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Original:  While initially a rather small and politically unstable entity, the Empire managed to expand significantly under the crusades of Amda Seyon I (1314–1344) and Yeshaq I (1414–1429), temporarily becoming the dominant force of the African Horn.
Revised:  While initially a rather small and politically unstable entity, the Empire managed to expand significantly under the crusades of Amda Seyon I (1314–1344) , becoming the dominant force of the African Horn.
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Original:  Under the rule of Zara Yaqob (1434–1468),  the Hadiya Sultanate was invaded by Ethiopia and the captured Hadiya princess Eleni converted to Christianity leading to her marriage to Zara Yacob.
Revised:  Under the rule of Zara Yaqob (1434–1468), the Hadiya Sultanate was crushed and the Hadiya princess Eleni converted to Christianity leading to her marriage to Zara Yacob.
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Original:  Muslims in the region as well as Adal Sultanate rejected the marriage alliance and repeatedly invaded Ethiopia, finally succeeding under Imam Mahfuz.
Revised:  Muslims in Adal Sultanate raided the eastern provinces of under Imam Mahfuz.
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Original:  Emperor YeshaqI 's reign was however challenged by the sons of Sultan Sa'ad ad-Din II who all, despite their initial successes, got crushed at his hands one after another.
Revised:  Yeshaq 's reign was however challenged by the sons of Sultan Sa'ad ad-Din II who all, despite their initial successes, got crushed at his hands one after another.
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Original:  Emperor YeshaqI 's reign was however challenged by the sons of Sultan Sa'ad ad-Din II who all, despite their initial successes, got crushed at his hands one after another.
Revised:  Emperor YeshaqI 's reign was however challenged by Sultan Jamal ad-Din II who all, despite their initial successes, got crushed at his hands one after another.
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Original:  75 According to Egyptian chronicler al-Maqrizi, However, Yeshaqwas said to have died in the last battle in which his forces scored a resounding victory that crushed the sultan Jamal ad-Din II. . Under the rule of Zara Yaqob (1434–1468), a rebellion by the Hadiya Sultanate was crushed and the Hadiya princess Eleni converted to Christianity leading to her marriage to Zara Yacob.
Revised:  75 According to Egyptian chronicler al-Maqrizi, However, Yeshaqwas said to have died in the last battle in which his forces scored a resounding victory that crushed the sultan Jamal ad-Din II. . Under the rule of Zara Yaqob (1434–1468), the Hadiya Sultanate was crushed and the Hadiya princess Eleni converted to Christianity leading to her marriage to Zara Yacob.
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Original:  Mahfuz was killed in a duel by a follower Emperor Lebna Dengel in 1516.
Revised:  Mahfuz 's ambush and defeat by Emperor Lebna Dengel in 1516.
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Original:  In the early 16th-century Ottoman-backed Jihads were conducted by the Adalite Imam Ahmed Gran, who got defeated and killed in 1543 with the help of the Portuguese.
Revised:  In the early 16th-century Jihad of the Adalite Imam Ahmed Gran, who got defeated and killed in 1543 with the help of the Portuguese.
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Original:  In the early 16th-century Ottoman-backed Jihads were conducted by the Adalite Imam Ahmed Gran, who got defeated and killed in 1543 with the help of the Portuguese.
Revised:  In the early 16th-century Ottoman-backed Jihads were conducted by the Adalite Imam Ahmed Gran, who was only defeated in 1543 with the help of the Portuguese.
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Original: Yang Rongguo ( 1907-1978 ) was a Chinese academic and philosopher who was involved in the Criticize Lin, Criticize Confucius campaign of the Cultural Revolution.
Revised: Yang Rongguo ( , 1907–1978 ) was a Chinese academic and philosopher who was involved in the Criticize Lin, Criticize Confucius campaign of the Cultural Revolution.
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Original:  Despite being a commercial success, the film was a critical failure (particularly for the casting of white actors as the protagonists, while the villains were played by actors who were South Asian and Arabs) and Patel even received a Razzie Award nomination as Worst Supporting Actor that year, although his role was well received, and was considered by many to be one of the film's positive aspects.
Revised:  Despite being a commercial success, the film was a critical failure and Patel even received a Razzie Award nomination as Worst Supporting Actor that year, although his role was well received, and was considered by many to be one of the film's positive aspects.
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Original: Early life and education Dev Patel was born on 23 April 1990 in Harrow, the son of Anita, a care worker, and Raju, an IT consultant .
Revised: Early life and education Dev Patel was born on 23 April 1990 in Harrow, the son of Anita, a care worker, and Raju, an IT-consultant .
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Original:  The characterisation of Anwar was partly based on Patel's personality and the role was written specifically for him after he was cast in Skins.
Revised:  The characterization of Anwar was partly based on Patel's personality and the role was written specifically for him after he was cast in Skins.
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Original:  He also worked at a call centre for a day and in a hotel, where he washed dishes.
Revised:  He also worked at a call-center for a day and in a hotel, where he washed dishes.
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Original:  2011–present: Further film and television work and Lion Patel co-starred in The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel (2012), (and subsequently in its 2015 sequel, The Second Best Exotic Marigold Hotel) directed by John Madden, which received positive reviews and was a box office success, grossing $136 million.
Revised:  2011–present: Further film- and television-work and Lion Patel co-starred in The Best Exotic Marigold Hotel (2012), (and subsequently in its 2015 sequel, The Second Best Exotic Marigold Hotel) directed by John Madden, which received positive reviews and was a box office success, grossing $136 million.
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Original:  His parents are Gujarati Indian Hindus, though they were both born in Nairobi, Kenya, where there is a significant Indian community;
Revised:  His parents are Indian Gujarati Hindus, though they were both born in Nairobi, Kenya, where there is a significant Indian community;
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Original:  He completed his AS Levels in PE, Biology, History, and Drama in 2007 at Whitmore High School while working on Skins.
Revised:  He completed his A Levels in PE, Biology, History, and Drama in 2007 at Whitmore High School while working on Skins.
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Original: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica (English: New Carthage and the%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Rich Coast) was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
Revised: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica the%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Rich Coast) was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
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Original: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica (English: New Carthage and the%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Rich Coast) was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
Revised: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica (English: New Carthage and %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Rich Coast) was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
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Original: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica (English: New Carthage and the%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Rich Coast) was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
Revised: Nuevo Cartago y Costa Rica (English: New Carthage and the%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% was a province of the Kingdom of Guatemala, created in 1540 during the reign of Charles V, Holy Roman Emperor (King Charles I of Spain).
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Original:  Systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) URL Sjögren's syndrome URL Interstitial pulmonary fibrosis Hepatitis B, Chronic liver disease and chronic hepatitis Essential mixed cryoglobulinemia Primary biliary cirrhosis Infectious mononucleosis and any chronic viral infection URL Bacterial endocarditis Leprosy Sarcoidosis URL Tuberculosis Syphilis Visceral leishmaniasis Malaria Leukemia Dermatomyositis Systemic sclerosis After vaccination/transfusion in normal individuals
Revised:  Systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) URL Sjögren's syndrome URL Interstitial pulmonary fibrosis Hepatitis B, chronic liver disease, and chronic hepatitis Essential mixed cryoglobulinemia Primary biliary cirrhosis Infectious mononucleosis and any chronic viral infection URL Bacterial endocarditis Leprosy Sarcoidosis URL Tuberculosis Syphilis Visceral leishmaniasis Malaria Leukemia Dermatomyositis Systemic sclerosis After vaccination/transfusion in normal individuals
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Original: Rheumatoid factor (RF) is the autoantibody (antibody directed against an organism's own tissues) that was first found in rheumatoid arthritis.
Revised: Rheumatoid factor (RF) is the autoantibody that was first found in rheumatoid arthritis.
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Original:  It is defined as an antibody against the Fc portion of IgG (an antibody against an antibody) and different RFs can recognize different parts of the IgG-Fc.
Revised:  It is defined as an antibody against the Fc portion of IgG and different RFs can recognize different parts of the IgG-Fc.
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Original:  Systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) Juvenile Idiopathic Arthritis Sjögren syndrome Interstitial pulmonary fibrosis Hepatitis B  , chronic liver disease, and chronic hepatitis Essential mixed cryoglobulinemia Primary biliary cirrhosis Infectious mononucleosis and any chronic viral infection Bacterial endocarditis Leprosy Sarcoidosis Tuberculosis Syphilis Visceral leishmaniasis Malaria Leukemia Dermatomyositis Systemic sclerosis After vaccination/transfusion in normal individuals
Revised:  Systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) Juvenile Idiopathic Arthritis Sjögren syndrome Interstitial pulmonary fibrosis Hepatitis B and C , chronic liver disease, and chronic hepatitis Essential mixed cryoglobulinemia Primary biliary cirrhosis Infectious mononucleosis and any chronic viral infection Bacterial endocarditis Leprosy Sarcoidosis Tuberculosis Syphilis Visceral leishmaniasis Malaria Leukemia Dermatomyositis Systemic sclerosis After vaccination/transfusion in normal individuals
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Original: References: Portal about safety fieldbus communication - University Reutlingen, Germany Literature Winfried Gräf: Maschinensicherheit.
Revised:  Literature Winfried Gräf: Maschinensicherheit.
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Original: External links Organizations: Safety Network International e.V. Safety Network International USA (Regional organization for USA) Literature Winfried Gräf: Maschinensicherheit.
Revised:  Literature Winfried Gräf: Maschinensicherheit.
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Original:   It meets SIL level SIL 3 according to IEC 61508 and safety category Cat.
Revised:  It meets SIL 3 according to IEC 61508 and safety category Cat.
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Original:   It meets SIL level SIL 3 according to IEC 61508 and safety category Cat.
Revised:  It meets SIL level SIL 3 of IEC 61508 and safety category Cat.
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Original:   It meets SIL level SIL 3 according to IEC 61508 and safety category Cat.
Revised:  It meets SIL level SIL 3 according to IEC 61508 and Category
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Original:  4 of EN 954-1  Origins SafetyBUS p has been developed during the years 1995 to 1999 by the company Pilz GmbH & Co. KG (Germany).
Revised:  4 of EN 954-1 Origin SafetyBUS p was developed by Pilz GmbH & Co. KG (Germany).
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Original:  It was the target to enable a field bus for safe communication in terms of safety in machinery . Since 1999 there is an installation basis of approx. 10,000 applications with a total of about 150,000 safe field devices (per 2006).
Revised:  It was the target to enable a field bus for safe communication in terms of machinery safety . Since 1999 there is an installation basis of approx. 10,000 applications with a total of about 150,000 safe field devices (per 2006).
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Original:  It was the target to enable a field bus for safe communication in terms of safety in machinery . Since 1999 there is an installation basis of approx. 10,000 applications with a total of about 150,000 safe field devices (per 2006).
Revised:  It was the target to enable a field bus for safe communication in terms of safety in machinery . Since 1999 
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Original:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.)  . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
Revised:  the technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.) . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
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Original:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.)  . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
Revised:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been managed by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.) . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
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Original:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.)  . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
Revised:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organisation Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.) . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
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Original:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.)  . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
Revised:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( formally SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.) . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
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Original:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.)  . 70 companies world wide have so far joined the user organization (per 2006) and contribute to the SafetyBUS ptechnology.
Revised:  The technology of SafetyBUS p has been administered since 1999 by the user organization Safety Network International e.V. ( previously SafetyBUS p Club International e.V.) . 
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Original:  Usage The main use of SafetyBUS p is the communication of data with safety relevant content.
Revised:  Application The main application of SafetyBUS p is the communication of data with safety relevant content.
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Original:  Usage The main use of SafetyBUS p is the communication of data with safety relevant content.
Revised:  Usage The main use of SafetyBUS p lies in the communication of data with safety relevant content.
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Original:  Usage The main use of SafetyBUS p is the communication of data with safety relevant content.
Revised:  Usage The main use of SafetyBUS p is the communication of data with safety-related content.
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Original:  In this respect risks may affect life or health, but as well the protection of valuables or machinery .
Revised:  In this respect risks may affect life or health, but as well the protection of economic assets .
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Original:  Typical applications are: Factory automation (e.g. automotive production, press lines) Transport systems (like  cable cars, fun rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
Revised:  Typical application areas are: Factory automation (e.g. automotive production, press lines) Transport systems (like cable cars, fun rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
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Original:  Typical applications are: Factory automation (e.g. automotive production, press lines) Transport systems (like  cable cars, fun rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
Revised:  Typical applications are: Factory automation (e.g. car production, presses) cable cars, fun rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
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Original:  Typical applications are: Factory automation (e.g. automotive production, press lines) Transport systems (like  cable cars, fun rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
Revised:  Typical applications are: Factory automation (e.g. automotive production, press lines) Transport systems (like cable cars, fairground rides) In general, all applications with safety requirements up to SIL 3 of IEC 61508 or Cat.
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Original:  4 of EN 954-1 are possible, as long as the system possesses a safe state (this is not to be mistaken for a high availability system, which typically has no such state, but which is as well classified by SIL levels) .
Revised:  4 of EN 954-1 .
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