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Original:  This party finally ended with a queue of "VT" lines and a historical countersigning record of 2 million signs, and it might be a variably factor at the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election
Revised:  This party finally ended with a queue of "VT" lines and a historical countersigning record of 2 million signs, and it might become a variable in the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election
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Original: Even though Frank Hsieh still insisted on the slogan of "Using MIT (Made in Taiwan) Products" during the celebration party in Taipei, mini torch lights held by supporters were "Made in China" and  the "MIC" mark, according to Eastern Television in Taiwan.
Revised: Even though Frank Hsieh still insisted on the slogan of "Using MIT (Made in Taiwan) Products" during the celebration party in Taipei, mini torch lights held by supporters were "Made in China" and featured the "MIC" mark, according to Eastern Television in Taiwan.
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Original: After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" activity comes back to Taipei today at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
Revised: After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" activity came back to Taipei today at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
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Original:  除了「名人公益路跑」接力賽與「媒體公益路跑」的活動，主辦單位特別邀請台北市立松山高中的籃球隊，進行「一分鐘內完成單圈裡程」的目標挑戰賽，並設下「每位選手200元捐款」的成功條件，最終，松山高中籃球隊完成這項任務，並將真正的實力，展現給與會的貴賓、媒體，及參與這項盛會的國小校隊，達成了募款的目標。 在壓軸的「校際盃路跑賽」中，號召了2 4 所台北市內的學校參與這項盛會，當中，有部分小學生，也在各地舉辦暖身賽兒童組中，屢獲佳績，可謂競爭激烈，因此，主辦單位也以抽籤的方式，分四梯次進行計時接力賽，並從本次比賽中，獎勵前十名校隊。最終，東湖國小、福德國小、葫蘆國小拿下前三名，並與四─ 六名的仁愛國小、興雅國小、三興國小等校隊，一同晉級下個月的正式賽兒童組賽事。 根據冠名贊助的ING安泰人壽表示，公益基金分配款，是將各組的總完成人數與該組的隸屬里程進行相乘，加上本次公益路跑賽的加碼捐款，而得其總和，而各單位獲得的額度，則是根據本次「名人公益路跑」的比賽結果，來進行分配。另外，台北市政府陳永仁副秘書長，也在接受記者Brock採訪時表示：
Revised:  除了「名人公益路跑」接力賽與「媒體公益路跑」的活動，主辦單位特別邀請台北市立松山高中的籃球隊，進行「一分鐘內完成單圈裡程」的目標挑戰賽，並設下「每位選手200元捐款」的成功條件，最終，松山高中籃球隊完成這項任務，並將真正的實力，展現給與會的貴賓、媒體，及參與這項盛會的國小校隊，達成了募款的目標。 At the end of this activity, ING Antai invited 24 elementary schools from Taipei City for the "Kids Running Championship". Before this event, some participants ever won good places at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung warming-up running matches. Due to the actual strength of participants were too close, the organizer decided to split 4 所台北市內的學校參與這項盛會，當中，有部分小學生，也在各地舉辦暖身賽兒童組中，屢獲佳績，可謂競爭激烈，因此，主辦單位也以抽籤的方式，分四梯次進行計時接力賽，並從本次比賽中，獎勵前十名校隊。最終，東湖國小、福德國小、葫蘆國小拿下前三名，並與四─ 六名的仁愛國小、興雅國小、三興國小等校隊，一同晉級下個月的正式賽兒童組賽事。 根據冠名贊助的ING安泰人壽表示，公益基金分配款，是將各組的總完成人數與該組的隸屬里程進行相乘，加上本次公益路跑賽的加碼捐款，而得其總和，而各單位獲得的額度，則是根據本次「名人公益路跑」的比賽結果，來進行分配。另外，台北市政府陳永仁副秘書長，也在接受記者Brock採訪時表示：
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Original:  除了「名人公益路跑」接力賽與「媒體公益路跑」的活動，主辦單位特別邀請台北市立松山高中的籃球隊，進行「一分鐘內完成單圈裡程」的目標挑戰賽，並設下「每位選手200元捐款」的成功條件，最終，松山高中籃球隊完成這項任務，並將真正的實力，展現給與會的貴賓、媒體，及參與這項盛會的國小校隊，達成了募款的目標。 在壓軸的「校際盃路跑賽」中，號召了2 4 所台北市內的學校參與這項盛會，當中，有部分小學生，也在各地舉辦暖身賽兒童組中，屢獲佳績，可謂競爭激烈，因此，主辦單位也以抽籤的方式，分四梯次進行計時接力賽，並從本次比賽中，獎勵前十名校隊。最終，東湖國小、福德國小、葫蘆國小拿下前三名，並與四─ 六名的仁愛國小、興雅國小、三興國小等校隊，一同晉級下個月的正式賽兒童組賽事。 根據冠名贊助的ING安泰人壽表示，公益基金分配款，是將各組的總完成人數與該組的隸屬里程進行相乘，加上本次公益路跑賽的加碼捐款，而得其總和，而各單位獲得的額度，則是根據本次「名人公益路跑」的比賽結果，來進行分配。另外，台北市政府陳永仁副秘書長，也在接受記者Brock採訪時表示：
Revised:  除了「名人公益路跑」接力賽與「媒體公益路跑」的活動，主辦單位特別邀請台北市立松山高中的籃球隊，進行「一分鐘內完成單圈裡程」的目標挑戰賽，並設下「每位選手200元捐款」的成功條件，最終，松山高中籃球隊完成這項任務，並將真正的實力，展現給與會的貴賓、媒體，及參與這項盛會的國小校隊，達成了募款的目標。 在壓軸的「校際盃路跑賽」中，號召了2 4 sections by a group draw. Finally, Dong-hu Elementary School won the champion and qualified the main competition. 根據冠名贊助的ING安泰人壽表示，公益基金分配款，是將各組的總完成人數與該組的隸屬里程進行相乘，加上本次公益路跑賽的加碼捐款，而得其總和，而各單位獲得的額度，則是根據本次「名人公益路跑」的比賽結果，來進行分配。另外，台北市政府陳永仁副秘書長，也在接受記者Brock採訪時表示：
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Original: 「這項比賽的交通品質，會逐漸被接受，雖然在往年，曾遭到外國人士的抨擊，但在主辦、承辦等單位的多次協調後，我們（台北市政府）承諾，會給參賽者一個很好的交通品質。 
Revised: 「這項比賽的交通品質，會逐漸被接受，雖然在往年，曾遭到外國人士的抨擊，但在主辦、承辦等單位的多次協調後，我們（台北市政府）承諾，會給參賽者一個很好的交通品質。 2005. With several coordination between supervisors, organizers, and sponsors, we (TCG) promised participants and runners for a great traffic condition at 2007 ING Taipei Marathon.
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Original:  After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" activity came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
Revised: The intensity of Charity Running. After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" activity came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
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Original:  After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" activity came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
Revised:  After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" event came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
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Original:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
Revised:  Before the event , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
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Original:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
Revised:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan to add their signatures to the "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
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Original:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
Revised:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the official website of the 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
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Original:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
Revised:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition will renew the scale of participants again next month.
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Original:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participants again next month.
Revised:  Before the activity , John Wylie (President & CEO of ING Antai) encouraged citizens in Taiwan countersigning "Charity Ambassador of ING Taipei Marathon" on the Official Web of 2007 ING Taipei Marathon and hoped this competition can renew the scale of participation again next month.
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Original: After the "Charity Running" for charity organizations and medias in Taiwan, ING Antai held  a  " one minute within a lap running" special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
Revised: After the charity race to benefit charity organizations and media in Taiwan, ING Antai held a " one minute within a lap running" special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
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Original: After the "Charity Running" for charity organizations and medias in Taiwan, ING Antai held  a  " one minute within a lap running" special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
Revised: After the "Charity Running" for charity organizations and medias in Taiwan, ING Antai held " a " one minute within a lap running" special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
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Original: After the "Charity Running" for charity organizations and medias in Taiwan, ING Antai held  a  " one minute within a lap running" special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
Revised: After the "Charity Running" for charity organizations and medias in Taiwan, ING Antai held a " special challenge for the Basketball Team of Taipei Municipal Songshan Senior High School.
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Original:  With their excellence performance, they finally succeeded this target .
Revised:  With their excellent performance, the team succeeded in meeting this challenge .
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Original:  After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kids Running" event came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
Revised:  After a series warm-up matches at Hualien, Kaohsiung, and Taichung, the special "Charity and Kid Workers Running" event came back to Taipei yesterday at Taipei Municipal Datung Senior High School.
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Original:  Within the past week alone, for the first time, scholars have read parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenios, an epic poem by Archilocus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod , mostly Greek writers living sometime between the 3rd century BC and the 7th century AD .
Revised:  Among the items currently being worked on are parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenios, an epic poem by Archilocus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod , mostly Greek writers living sometime between the 3rd century BC and the 7th century AD .
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Original:  Within the past week alone, for the first time, scholars have read parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenios, an epic poem by Archilocus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod , mostly Greek writers living sometime between the 3rd century BC and the 7th century AD .
Revised:  Within the past week alone, for the first time, scholars have read parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenios, an epic poem by Archilocus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod .
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Original:  Among the items currently being worked on are parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenius of Nicaea, an elegiac poem by Archilochus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod  .
Revised:  Within the past week alone, for the first time, scholars have read parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenius of Nicaea, an elegiac poem by Archilochus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod .
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Original:  Among the items currently being worked on are parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenius of Nicaea, an elegiac poem by Archilochus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod  .
Revised:  Among the items currently being worked on are parts of a play by Sophocles, a lost novel by Lucian, mythological poetry by Parthenios, an epic poem by Archilocus , and other writings by Euripides and Hesiod .
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Original: 250px|An example of a papyrus from Oxyrhynchus, mostly readable but with a few worm-holes Papyrologists at Oxford University in England last week reported major literary finds in examining old fragments of papyrus with a new technique: multi-spectral imaging (MSI).
Revised:  Papyrologists at Oxford University in England last week reported major literary finds in examining old fragments of papyrus with a new technique: multi-spectral imaging (MSI).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Multi-Spectral Imaging Multi-Spectral Imaging (MSI) is based on technology originally developed by NASA to photograph features of other worlds in bands beyond the visible spectrum, both infrared and ultraviolet.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Multi-Spectral Imaging (MSI) is based on technology originally developed by NASA to photograph features of other worlds in bands beyond the visible spectrum, both infrared and ultraviolet.
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Original:  Oxyrhynchus%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Oxyrhynchus, whose name means "sharp-nose", was a town located along a tributary of the Nile in ancient Egypt and populated largely by Greek immigrants.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Oxyrhynchus, whose name means "sharp-nose", was a town located along a tributary of the Nile in ancient Egypt and populated largely by Greek immigrants.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The site was explored in the late 19th century by Bernard Grenfell and Arthur Hunt of Oxford University, during which about 100,000 fragments of papyrus were unearthed, which today are stored at Sackler Library, Oxford, in the largest collection of its kind in the world.
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Original:  Classical and Christian Writings%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Oxyrhynchus was not noted as a center of learning, and 90\% of the fragments found there are expected to be mundane yet useful in reconstructing ancient daily life, including such things as "codes, edicts, registers, official correspondence, census-returns, tax-assessments, petitions, court-records;
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Oxyrhynchus was not noted as a center of learning, and 90\% of the fragments found there are expected to be mundane yet useful in reconstructing ancient daily life, including such things as "codes, edicts, registers, official correspondence, census-returns, tax-assessments, petitions, court-records;
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Original:  sales, leases, wills, bills, accounts, inventories, horoscopes, and%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% private letters".
Revised:  sales, leases, wills, bills, accounts, inventories, horoscopes, %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% private letters".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Given that Oxyrhynchus was also the site of a discovery of portions of the Gospel of Thomas (although that discovery was later overshadowed by the discovery of a more complete copy among the Dead Sea Scrolls), many classical scholars are excited by the new discoveries.
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Original:  “The material will shed light on virtually every aspect of life in Hellenistic and Roman Egypt and, by extension, in the classical world as a whole.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The amount of new material, estimated to be around 5 million words, could expand the entire storehouse of classical writings by as much as 20\%.
Revised:  “The material will shed light on virtually every aspect of life in Hellenistic and Roman Egypt and, by extension, in the classical world as a whole.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: 210px A magnitude 5.8 earthquake has struck in a place where earthquakes are rare, but sometimes large.
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Original:  The quake was reported at a depth of 7.5 k.m. (4.7 miles), but the USGS says it was "poorly constrained."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Had any civilization existed on the frozen ice cap, the USGS says that damage could be "light to moderate."
Revised:  The quake was reported at a depth of 7.5 k.m. (4.7 miles), but the USGS says it was "poorly constrained."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Antarctica's biggest earthquake was a magnitude 8.1 which occurred on March 25, 1998 near the Balleny Islands of Antarctica
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Original:  After leeding the women's race almost all the way, she managed to shake off Ethiopian Gete Wami, who challenged her in the last mile.
Revised:  After leading the women's race almost all the way, she managed to shake off Ethiopian Gete Wami, who challenged her in the last mile.
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Original:  Colom, runner up in the previous election, won the Presidency with 52.23\% of the second round vote after having come in first with 28.23\% in the first round, defeating runner up former General Otto Perez Molina of the w:Patriotic Party|Patriotic Party who claimed 23.51\% in the first round and 47.24 in the second.
Revised:  Colom, runner up in the previous election, won the Presidency with 52.23\% of the second round vote after having come in first with 28.23\% in the first round, defeating runner up former General Otto Perez Molina of the who claimed 23.51\% in the first round and 47.24 in the second.
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Original:  Colom, runner up in the previous election, won the Presidency with 52.23\% of the second round vote after having come in first with 28.23\% in the first round, defeating runner up former General Otto Perez Molina of the w:Patriotic Party|Patriotic Party who claimed 23.51\% in the first round and 47.24 in the second.
Revised:  Colom, runner up in the previous election, won the Presidency with 52.23\% of the second round vote after having come in first with 28.23\% in the first round, defeating runner up former General Otto Perez Molina of the w:Patriotic Party|Patriotic Party Patriotic Partywho claimed 23.51\% in the first round and 47.24 in the second.
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Original:  The country, listed last among Latin American nations on the UN human development index, faces issues of growing textile jobs, corruption  and a tax base inadequate to maintain basic social services
Revised:  The country, listed last among Latin American nations on the UN human development index, faces issues of growing textile jobs, corruption , and a tax base inadequate to maintain basic social services
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Original: President-Elect Álvaro Colom Caballeros.
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Original: ' Now is not the time to replace an experienced government on economic issues with an inexperienced government, ' Howard warned today.
Revised: " Now is not the time to replace an experienced government on economic issues with an inexperienced government, ' Howard warned today.
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Original: ' Now is not the time to replace an experienced government on economic issues with an inexperienced government, ' Howard warned today.
Revised: ' Now is not the time to replace an experienced government on economic issues with an inexperienced government, " Howard warned today.
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Original:  Lo Piccolo is believed to have strengthened the links between the Sicilian and American mafia.
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Original:  These bosses had been reined in by Provenzano when he put an end to the Riina-driven war against the state that claimed the lives of Mafia crusaders Giovanni Falcone and Paolo Borsellino in 1992.   
Revised:  These bosses had been reined in by Provenzano when he put an end to the Riina-driven war against the state that claimed the lives of Mafia crusaders Giovanni Falcone and Paolo Borsellino in 1992. " 
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Original:  Sicilian families, who were forced to flee the island in the 1980s after losing the power struggle with the w:CorleonesiCorleonesi , were being brought back from the US to fill the void left by the arrests of Provenzano and many of his lieutenants.
Revised:  Sicilian families, who were forced to flee the island in the 1980s after losing the power struggle with the Corleonesi , were being brought back from the US to fill the void left by the arrests of Provenzano and many of his lieutenants.
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Original:  According to investigators, the trans-Atlantic alliance uncovered in August involved drug trafficking and money laundering  
Revised:  According to investigators, the trans-Atlantic alliance uncovered in August involved drug trafficking and money laundering . 
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Original:   自2005年8月首度辦理，並獲得產官學界迴響的「中國信託全球領袖論壇」，今（5）日在台北新舞臺登場，地主中國信託在本次演講中，邀請了阿里巴巴集團創辦人暨董事長馬雲，暢談兩岸電子商務，並與雅虎國際資訊的洪小玲總經理、中信金控的尚瑞強執行長，探討電子商務的未來走向與趨勢。而這項演講，吸引了近千位產官學界人士與會，也成為台灣產業界的一項盛事。 適逢阿里巴巴集團將在明（6）日於香港掛牌上市的前夕，馬雲也在記者會中，對於未來與合作夥伴發展的前景表示樂觀，在此演講前，他向媒體表示：「今後是誰越靈活越成功，而不是誰規模越大越成功。」而這一段話，也呼應他在論壇中所言的：「真正的財富，並不是靠錢財，而是要透過團隊的合作與經驗的累積而凝聚，因為許多東西，不是有了錢就可以買，而是要有長遠的經營計畫，甚至，在一場商戰中，某商家需要有別於他人的產品，以及更優質的服務，才能確保成功之路。」 而他不但說明了電子商務時代的經營策略，甚至鑑古知今，引用三國時代與唐朝的歷史故事，點出經商者應當留意的要點，更表示「眼光」、「胸懷」、「實力」等三要素，會決定一個領導者是否成功
Revised:  自2005年8月首度辦理，並獲得產官學界迴響的「中國信託全球領袖論壇」，今（5）日在台北新舞臺登場，地主中國信託在本次演講中，邀請了阿里巴巴集團創辦人暨董事長馬雲，暢談兩岸電子商務，並與雅虎國際資訊的洪小玲總經理、中信金控的尚瑞強執行長，探討電子商務的未來走向與趨勢。而這項演講，吸引了近千位產官學界人士與會，也成為台灣產業界的一項盛事。 而他不但說明了電子商務時代的經營策略，甚至鑑古知今，引用三國時代與唐朝的歷史故事，點出經商者應當留意的要點，更表示「眼光」、「胸懷」、「實力」等三要素，會決定一個領導者是否成功
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Original:   自2005年8月首度辦理，並獲得產官學界迴響的「中國信託全球領袖論壇」，今（5）日在台北新舞臺登場，地主中國信託在本次演講中，邀請了阿里巴巴集團創辦人暨董事長馬雲，暢談兩岸電子商務，並與雅虎國際資訊的洪小玲總經理、中信金控的尚瑞強執行長，探討電子商務的未來走向與趨勢。而這項演講，吸引了近千位產官學界人士與會，也成為台灣產業界的一項盛事。 適逢阿里巴巴集團將在明（6）日於香港掛牌上市的前夕，馬雲也在記者會中，對於未來與合作夥伴發展的前景表示樂觀，在此演講前，他向媒體表示：「今後是誰越靈活越成功，而不是誰規模越大越成功。」而這一段話，也呼應他在論壇中所言的：「真正的財富，並不是靠錢財，而是要透過團隊的合作與經驗的累積而凝聚，因為許多東西，不是有了錢就可以買，而是要有長遠的經營計畫，甚至，在一場商戰中，某商家需要有別於他人的產品，以及更優質的服務，才能確保成功之路。」 而他不但說明了電子商務時代的經營策略，甚至鑑古知今，引用三國時代與唐朝的歷史故事，點出經商者應當留意的要點，更表示「眼光」、「胸懷」、「實力」等三要素，會決定一個領導者是否成功
Revised:  自2005年8月首度辦理，並獲得產官學界迴響的「中國信託全球領袖論壇」，今（5）日在台北新舞臺登場，地主中國信託在本次演講中，邀請了阿里巴巴集團創辦人暨董事長馬雲，暢談兩岸電子商務，並與雅虎國際資訊的洪小玲總經理、中信金控的尚瑞強執行長，探討電子商務的未來走向與趨勢。而這項演講，吸引了近千位產官學界人士與會，也成為台灣產業界的一項盛事。 適逢阿里巴巴集團將在明（6）日於香港掛牌上市的前夕，馬雲也在記者會中，對於未來與合作夥伴發展的前景表示樂觀，在此演講前，他向媒體表示：「今後是誰越靈活越成功，而不是誰規模越大越成功。」而這一段話，也呼應他在論壇中所言的：「真正的財富，並不是靠錢財，而是要透過團隊的合作與經驗的累積而凝聚，因為許多東西，不是有了錢就可以買，而是要有長遠的經營計畫，甚至，在一場商戰中，某商家需要有別於他人的產品，以及更優質的服務，才能確保成功之路。」 He not only taught some strategies but also cited Chinese stories on Three Kingdoms and Tang Dynasty to point out key factors (visions, ambitions, bosoms, and actual strengths) which decided a leader or a company meet success or not
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Original:   With Alibaba Group enter the market in Hong Kong today, Ma looked a bright side with partners' cooperation.
Revised:  Jack Ma. With Alibaba Group enter the market in Hong Kong today, Ma looked a bright side with partners' cooperation.
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Original: ]] With a great success of "Chinatrust Global Leaders ' Forum" at 2005, Chinatrust Commercial Bank (CTCB), the forum organizer, invited Jack Ma, Founder of Alibaba Group, for the main topic of "Cross-Strait e-Commerce Development" yesterday.
Revised: ]] Following the success of "Chinatrust Global Leaders ' Forum" at 2005, Chinatrust Commercial Bank (CTCB), the forum organizer, invited Jack Ma, Founder of Alibaba Group, for the main topic of "Cross-Strait e-Commerce Development" yesterday.
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Original: ]] With a great success of "Chinatrust Global Leaders ' Forum" at 2005, Chinatrust Commercial Bank (CTCB), the forum organizer, invited Jack Ma, Founder of Alibaba Group, for the main topic of "Cross-Strait e-Commerce Development" yesterday.
Revised: ]] With a great success of "Chinatrust Global Leaders Forum" at 2005, Chinatrust Commercial Bank (CTCB), the forum organizer, invited Jack Ma, Founder of Alibaba Group, for the main topic of "Cross-Strait e-Commerce Development" yesterday.
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