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Original:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show, they (Microsoft) preliminary moved their new game launch from  3C store to the TWTC again  since 2007.
Revised:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show, they (Microsoft) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again since 2007.
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Original:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show, they (Microsoft) preliminary moved their new game launch from  3C store to the TWTC again  since 2007.
Revised:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show, they (Microsoft) preliminary moved their new game launch from 3C store to the TWTC again , since 2007.
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Original:  After a battle between  two main world-class companies, Microsoft & Sony not only showed different cultures from exhibition arrangements and product presentations, but they successfully marketed their indicative products in consuming and high-definition markets.
Revised:  After a battle between the two main world-class companies, Microsoft & Sony not only showed different cultures from exhibition arrangements and product presentations, but they successfully marketed their indicative products in consuming and high-definition markets.
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Original:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created from past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with  Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and  Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
Revised:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created in the past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
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Original:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created from past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with  Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and  Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
Revised:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created from past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with the Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
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Original:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created from past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with  Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and  Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
Revised:  Not only a "Show", but also mixed with "Charity" Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created from past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and the Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
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Original:  As of TCA's information, company members from  TGIA adopted several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show  since 2007.
Revised:  As of TCA's information, company members from the TGIA adopted several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show since 2007.
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Original:  As of TCA's information, company members from  TGIA adopted several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show  since 2007.
Revised:  As of TCA's information, company members from TGIA adopted several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show , since 2007.
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Original: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday (January 28) , and was different than the past year's show;
Revised: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday , and was different than the past year's show;
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Original: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday (January 28) , and was different than the past year's show;
Revised: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday (January 28) , and was different than last year's show;
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Original:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating not only in the trade (B2B) area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
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Original: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday, and was differ from past years' show;
Revised: The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday, and was different from past years' show;
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Original:  Gaming population progressively grown up Game Adventure Island.
Revised:  Gaming population progressively maturing Game Adventure Island.
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Original:  Excellences from participants Microsoft vs.
Revised:  Excellence from participants Microsoft vs.
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Original:  And also , they invited their spokespeople "Mayday" to get more visitors to visit the show.
Revised:  Also , they invited their spokespeople "Mayday" to get more visitors to visit the show.
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Original:  As of TCA's information , since 2007, company members from the TGIA adopted several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show.
Revised:  As of TCA's information , since 2007, corporate participants of the TGIA have "adopted" several orphans and accompanied them to grow up in healthy conditions before the show.
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Original:  The companies and organizers were successful in turning the  image of the Taipei Game Show from "a simple consuming show" to "a mixed show with welfare and charity" this year.
Revised:  The companies and organizers were successful in turning the public image of the Taipei Game Show from "a simple consuming show" to "a mixed show with welfare and charity" this year.
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Original:  The companies and organizers were successful in turning the  image of the Taipei Game Show from "a simple consuming show" to "a mixed show with welfare and charity" this year.
Revised:  The companies and organizers were successful in turning the image of the Taipei Game Show from "a simple consumer show" to "a mixed show with welfare and charity" this year.
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Original:  Hamilton will go through to play Aberdeen in the now delayed Sixth Round at w: Pittodrie.
Revised:  Hamilton will go through to play Aberdeen in the now delayed Sixth Round at Pittodrie.
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Original: Hamilton Academical filed a complaint about the incident to the SFA and they decided to stage a replay of the match.
Revised: Hamilton Academical filed a complaint about the incident to the Scottish Football Association (SFA) and they decided to stage a replay of the match.
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Original: The harsh weather will make travel difficult for many in China .
Revised: A bus in China during a 2006 winter storm .
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Original: China's consumer price index rose nearly five percent for all of 2007, and was up six-point-five percent in December alone.
Revised: China's consumer price index rose nearly 5 percent for all of 2007, and was up six-point-five percent in December alone.
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Original: China's consumer price index rose nearly five percent for all of 2007, and was up six-point-five percent in December alone.
Revised: China's consumer price index rose nearly five percent for all of 2007, and was up 6.5 percent in December alone.
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Original: Red Star (Crvena Zvezda) Belgrade advanced to  Serbia and Montenegro football cup finals, after defeating Partizan Belgrade with  2:0 yesterday.
Revised: Red Star (Crvena Zvezda) Belgrade advanced to the Serbia and Montenegro football cup finals, after defeating Partizan Belgrade with 2:0 yesterday.
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Original: Red Star (Crvena Zvezda) Belgrade advanced to  Serbia and Montenegro football cup finals, after defeating Partizan Belgrade with  2:0 yesterday.
Revised: Red Star (Crvena Zvezda) Belgrade advanced to Serbia and Montenegro football cup finals, after defeating Partizan Belgrade with a score of 2:0 yesterday.
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Original:  The first goal was scored by Nikola Žigić in  10'  . Krivokapić scored the other goal in the final moments of the match - 90'.
Revised:  The first goal was scored by Nikola Žigić in the tenth minute ( 10' . Krivokapić scored the other goal in the final moments of the match - 90'.
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Original:  The first goal was scored by Nikola Žigić in  10'  . Krivokapić scored the other goal in the final moments of the match - 90'.
Revised:  The first goal was scored by Nikola Žigić in 10' ) . Krivokapić scored the other goal in the final moments of the match - 90'.
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Original:  Red Star's fans were forbidden from performing their traditional choreography at the begining of the match, probably due to riots that took place the last time Red Star and Partizan played a regular league game.
Revised:  Red Star's fans were forbidden from performing their traditional choreography at the beginning of the match, probably due to riots that took place the last time Red Star and Partizan played a regular league game.
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Original:  Libi is said to be the number 3 person in al-Qaeda.
Revised:  Libi is said to have been the third highest ranking member of al-Qaeda.
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Original: Authorities had to evacuate at least on building in Tustin and shut down a street in Glendale while they examined the substance.
Revised: Authorities had to evacuate at least one building in Tustin and shut down a street in Glendale while they examined the substance.
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Original: The Church of Scientology in southern California have received several envelopes containing a white powder which authorities say ended up being wheat germ and corn starch.
Revised: The Church of Scientology in southern California 
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Original:  We will also work to assess what threat, if any, was associated with the mailings and determine whether any federal statutes were violated ," said Laura Eimiller, a spokeswoman for the FBI.
Revised:  We will also work to ass wailings and dine whether any fated ," said Laura Eimiller, a spokeswoman for the FBI.
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Original:  We will also work to assess what threat, if any, was associated with the mailings and determine whether any federal statutes were violated ," said Laura Eimiller, a spokeswoman for the FBI.
Revised:  We will also work to assess what threat, if any, was associated with the mailings and determine whether any federal statutes were violated ," said Laura Eimiller, a span for the FBI.
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Original:  The Church has not issued a statement regarding the incidents and no one has yet claimed responsibility for sending the envelopes .
Revised:  The Church has not issued a sing the its and no one has yet claimed responsibility for sending the envelopes .
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Original:  The Church has not issued a statement regarding the incidents and no one has yet claimed responsibility for sending the envelopes .
Revised:  The Church has not issued a statement regarding the incidents and no one has yet copes .
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Original:  This comes just before a scheduled protest which an Internet group called 'Anonymous' has organized, set to take place on February 10 at Church locations across the globe.
Revised:  This comes just bore a scheduled pest which an Internet group called 'Anonymous' has organized, set to take place on February 10 at Church locations across the globe.
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Original: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy search giant Yahoo! for US$44 billion or US$ 31 a share , significantly above the stock's current price .
Revised: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy search giant Yahoo! for US$44 billion or US$ 31 a share .
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Original:  If accepted by Yahoo's shareholders, the deal, which is half in cash and half in stock,  would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
Revised:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
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Original: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy  search giant Yahoo! for $44 billion or $ 31 a share.
Revised: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy search giant Yahoo! for US$44 billion or approximately US$ 31 a share.
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Original: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy  search giant Yahoo! for $44 billion or $ 31 a share.
Revised: United States software giant Microsoft has launched a bid to buy search giant Yahoo! for $44 billion or $ 31 per share.
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Original:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo  's shareholders would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
Revised:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo ! 's shareholders would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
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Original:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo  's shareholders would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
Revised:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo 's shareholders , could create a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
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Original:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo  's shareholders would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant that currently dominates the Internet search market
Revised:  The deal, which is half in cash and half in stock, if accepted by Yahoo 's shareholders would end up creating a major competitor to Google, the search giant which currently dominates the Internet search market
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Original:  Tatsuhisa Yabushit
Revised:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita to talk about some background of this upcoming game
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Original:  In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games including rhythm games, eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like Wii,  PS2  , and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores.
Revised:  In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games including rhythm games, eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like Wii, PS2 ) , and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores.
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Original:  But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just collected some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from collected songs.
Revised:  But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just enrolled some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from collected songs.
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Original:  But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just collected some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from collected songs.
Revised:  But before those modifications happened in Taiwan, many rhythm games just collected some songs into different arcade machines due to copyright issue from enrolled songs.
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Original:  As the upcoming game will benefit for mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" , as of those factors in mind, Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
Revised:  As the upcoming game will benefit for mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" . As of those factors in mind, Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
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Original: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games  including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like  Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Revised: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported large quantities of arcade games including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
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Original: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games  including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like  Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Revised: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games , including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
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Original: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games  including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like  Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Revised: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games including rhythm games . Eventually some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games  including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like  Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Revised: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified codes from several game consoles like Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games  including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like  Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
Revised: In fact, several managers from amusement stores in Taiwan frequently imported lots of arcade games including rhythm games , eventually, some slot machine developers modified some codes from several game consoles like the Wii, PlayStation 2 (PS2), and Sega Saturn to fulfill needs for amusement stores .
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Original:  As the upcoming game will benefit for mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
Revised:  The upcoming game will benefit for mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
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Original:  As the upcoming game will benefit for mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
Revised:  As the upcoming game will benefit mandarin-language gamers after its release, but it may hide some unveiled factors from the developments of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version".
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Original:  As of those factors in mind, Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
Revised:  Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen recently interviewed the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
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Original: Image:2008TaipeiGameShow Day1 NBGI Interview.jpg|300px|Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen (left)  the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
Revised: Image:2008TaipeiGameShow Day1 NBGI Interview.jpg|300px|Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen (left) with the producer of "Taiko no Tatsujin"
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Original:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Before the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) recently showcased the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show , many rhythm gamers anticipated for this upcoming game .
Revised:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Many rhythm gamers are anicipating the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) recently showcased the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show , many rhythm gamers anticipated for this upcoming game .
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Original:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Before the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) recently showcased the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show , many rhythm gamers anticipated for this upcoming game .
Revised:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Before the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show , many rhythm gamers anticipated for this upcoming game .
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Original:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Before the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) recently showcased the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show , many rhythm gamers anticipated for this upcoming game .
Revised:  Tatsuhisa Yabushita (right) of NBGI at 2008 Taipei Game Show.]] Before the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) recently showcased the beta version at 2008 Taipei Game Show .
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