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Original:  Others These other anomaliesare not classified in the above categories, which includes severe early-onset intrauterine growth restriction, isolated hypospadias, congenital hypogonadotropic  , hypogonadism and cryptorchidism in males, Malformation syndromes, Müllerian agenesis/hypoplasia, uterine anomalies, vaginal atresia and labial adhesions in females . Causes Sexual anomalies are often caused by genetic reasons.
Revised:  Others These other anomaliesare not classified in the above categories, which includes severe early-onset intrauterine growth restriction, isolated hypospadias, congenital hypogonadotropic , hypogonadism and cryptorchidism . In females, this includes Malformation syndromes, Müllerian agenesis/hypoplasia, uterine anomalies, vaginal atresia and labial adhesions in females . Causes Sexual anomalies are often caused by genetic reasons.
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Original:  Others These other anomaliesare not classified in the above categories, which includes severe early-onset intrauterine growth restriction, isolated hypospadias, congenital hypogonadotropic  , hypogonadism and cryptorchidism in males, Malformation syndromes, Müllerian agenesis/hypoplasia, uterine anomalies, vaginal atresia and labial adhesions in females . Causes Sexual anomalies are often caused by genetic reasons.
Revised:  Others These other anomaliesare not classified in the above categories, which includes severe early-onset intrauterine growth restriction, isolated hypospadias, congenital hypogonadotropic , hypogonadism and cryptorchidism in males, Malformation syndromes, Müllerian agenesis/hypoplasia, uterine anomalies, vaginal atresia and labial adhesions . Causes Sexual anomalies are often caused by genetic reasons.
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Original:  These genetic abnormalities stem from the prenatal stage of the individual as a result of their genetics.
Revised:  These genetic abnormalities occur during the prenatal stage of the individual as a result of their genetics.
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Original:  The general causes of sexual anomalies can not be outlined due to the high variability of each individual's situations , thus the cause of each specific anomaly has to be studied independently.
Revised:  The general causes of sexual anomalies can not be outlined due to the high variability of each individual's situations . Thus, the cause of each specific anomaly has to be studied independently.
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Original:  The initial steps of sexual differentiation begin with the development of the gonads and genitals and this process is consistent with both genders spanning over the course of the first 6 weeks following conception . During this time the embryo remains pluripotent.
Revised:  The initial steps of sexual differentiation begin with the development of the gonads and genitals . This process is consistent with both genders spanning over the course of the first 6 weeks following conception . During this time the embryo remains pluripotent.
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Original:  The initial steps of sexual differentiation begin with the development of the gonads and genitals and this process is consistent with both genders spanning over the course of the first 6 weeks following conception . During this time the embryo remains pluripotent.
Revised:  The initial steps of sexual differentiation begin with the development of the gonads and genitals and this process is consistent with both genders spanning over the course of the first 6 weeks following conception , during which the embryo remains pluripotent.
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Original:  Differentiation of the gonads begins after the 6th week and the major regulatory gene controlling this process is the sex-determining region Y (SRY) gene which remains in the Y chromosome.
Revised:  Differentiation of the gonads begins after the 6th week , which is determined by the sex-determining region Y (SRY) gene which remains in the Y chromosome.
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Original:  Differentiation of the gonads begins after the 6th week and the major regulatory gene controlling this process is the sex-determining region Y (SRY) gene which remains in the Y chromosome.
Revised:  Differentiation of the gonads begins after the 6th week and the major regulatory gene controlling this process is the sex-determining region Y (SRY) gene in the Y chromosome.
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Original:  Following its development , hormones synthesized within the testes regulate the differentiation of both internal and external parts of the genitals.
Revised:  Following the development of the testes , hormones synthesized within the testes regulate the differentiation of both internal and external parts of the genitals.
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Original:  Genetic abnormalities or environmental factors that influence these procedures may lead to the incomplete development of the gonads , the internal parts of the genitals and /or the external parts of the genitals.
Revised:  Genetic abnormalities or environmental factors that influence these procedures may lead to the incomplete development of the gonads and the genitals.
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Original:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual  leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
Revised:  These malformations can occur any time during the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
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Original:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual  leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
Revised:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, manifesting as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
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Original:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual  leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
Revised:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual , leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
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Original:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual  leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, resulting in infertility or an early occurrence of menopause.
Revised:  These malformations can occur any time from the development or the birth of the embryo, being interpreted as ambiguous genitals or dissonance within the genotypic and phenotypic sex of the individual leading to a late onset of puberty, amenorrhea, a lack of or excess virilization, or later in life, infertility or early occurrence of menopause.
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Original:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
Revised:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( prenatal) 236x236px|Human male karyotype Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
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Original:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
Revised:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign . Hence, an early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
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Original:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
Revised:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be conducted . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
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Original:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
Revised:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
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Original:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping , and it helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
Revised:  Diagnosis and symptoms First line diagnostic tests ( pre-natal) Family history Symptoms such as infertility, early menopause, amenorrhea or sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS) could be a sign and early check-up should be done . 236x236px|Human karyotype (male) Analysis of karyotype Peripheral blood is collected for karyotyping . This helps classify the patient in one of the three main categories of DSD: chromosomal variation, gonadal development disorders and abnormal genital development.
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Original:  The presence of gonads, uterus and vagina should be monitored , and can be done through abdominal ultrasounds.
Revised:  The presence of gonads, uterus and vagina should be monitored . This can be done through abdominal ultrasounds.
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Original:  However, the lack of detection of such organs does not ensure their absence due to the difficulties in identification.
Revised:  However, the absence of these sex organs will lead to difficulties in gender identification.
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Original:  Second line diagnostic tests ( post-natal ) Inspection of the genitalia with care and palpation must be done, bearing the following points in mind.
Revised:  Second line diagnostic tests ( postnatal ) Inspection of the genitalia with care and palpation must be done, bearing the following points in mind.
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Original:  Second line diagnostic tests ( post-natal ) Inspection of the genitalia with care and palpation must be done, bearing the following points in mind.
Revised:  Second line diagnostic tests ( post-natal ) Inspection of the genitalia with care and palpation must be conducted with the following points in mind.
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Original:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In females , the Prader staging system should be used  if the karyotyping  .
Revised:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In a female fetus , the Prader staging system should be used if the karyotyping .
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Original:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In females , the Prader staging system should be used  if the karyotyping  .
Revised:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In females , the Prader scale should be used if the karyotyping .
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Original:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In females , the Prader staging system should be used  if the karyotyping  .
Revised:  Determining the degree of virilization or masculinisation: In females , the Prader staging system should be used to assess the extent of the virilisation if the karyotyping .
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Original:  Hydration and blood pressure assessment should be done .
Revised:  Hydration and blood pressure assessment should be conducted .
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Original:  Additional dysmorphic features should be ruled out , as genitalia malformations would occur if the patient suffers from multiple malformation syndromes.
Revised:  Additional dysmorphic features should be ruled out because genitalia malformations would occur if the patient suffers from multiple malformation syndromes.
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Original:  17-Hydroxyprogesterone can be used to screen for congenital adrenal hyperplasia (CAH) , commonly found in patients with 46, XX DSD.
Revised:  17-Hydroxyprogesterone can be used to screen for congenital adrenal hyperplasia (CAH) . This is commonly found in patients with 46, XX DSD.
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Original:  The hormone levels of newborn children with bilateral cryptorchidism or genital ambiguity.
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Original:  Dehydroepiandrosterone (DHEA) in addition to progesterone allows for the diagnosis of a more uncommon form of CAH and other inherited disorders.
Revised:  Dehydroepiandrosterone (DHEA) in addition to progesterone allows for the diagnosis of more uncommon forms of CAH and other inherited disorders.
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Original:  Tests are conducted within 36 hours of birth to days 15-90 days post birth which is a time frame in which can be amplified to 6 months of age.
Revised:  These tests are conducted within 36 hours of birth to days 15-90 days post birth which is a time frame in which can be amplified to 6 months of age.
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Original:  Tests are conducted within 36 hours of birth to days 15-90 days post birth which is a time frame in which can be amplified to 6 months of age.
Revised:  Tests are conducted within the timeframe of thirty hours post-birth to anywhere between fifteen to ninety days post-birth. This data collected within time frame can be used to gauge the growth of the fetus when it reaches six months of age.
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Original:  A urinary steroid profile shows the ratio of precursor metabolites within measured urine concentrations and the resultant products produced with the enzyme causing the sexual defect.
Revised:  A urinary steroid profile shows the ratio of precursor metabolites within measured urine concentrations and the resultant products produced indicates the enzyme is the cause of a sexual defect.
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Original:  Treatment and management The treatment and/or management of DSDs with atypical genitalia will vary from person-to-person .
Revised:  Treatment and management The treatment and/or management of DSDs with atypical genitalia will vary from person to person .
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Original:  Medical treatment Hormonal treatment is generally an accepted standardised approach to treat different congenital sexual anomalies.
Revised:  Medical treatment Hormonal treatment is an accepted and standardised approach to treat different congenital sexual anomalies.
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Original:  Surgical treatment Surgical procedures are an alternative to hormonal treatment available for patients to correct genital anomalies and improve the body’s sexual functions.
Revised:  Surgical treatment Surgical procedures are an alternative to hormonal treatment available for patients to address genital anomalies and improve the body’s sexual functions.
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Original:  In most cases, surgical procedures result in permanent changes to the patient’s appearance and function  .
Revised:  In most cases, surgical procedures result in permanent changes to the appearance and function .
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Original:  The most idealistic situation would be to include the patient as part of the decision-making process.
Revised:  The most ideal situation would be to include the patient as part of the decision-making process.
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Original:  Controversy and implications Even though the term disorder of sex development (DSD) is widely accepted by the medical community, its appropriateness and usefulness to represent these individuals is criticised by many support and advocacy groups.
Revised:  Controversy and implications Even though the term disorder of sex development (DSD) is widely accepted by the medical community, its suitability and adequacy to represent these individuals is criticised by many support and advocacy groups.
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Original:  Controversy and implications Even though the term disorder of sex development (DSD) is widely accepted by the medical community, its appropriateness and usefulness to represent these individuals is criticised by many support and advocacy groups.
Revised:  Controversy and implications Even though the term disorder of sex development (DSD) is widely accepted by the medical community, its appropriateness and usefulness to represent these individuals are criticised by many support and advocacy groups.
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Original:  People who live with conditions regarding sexual abnormalities may encounter various mental and physical health problems.
Revised:  Furthermore, people who live with conditions regarding sexual abnormalities may encounter various mental and physical health problems.
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Original: Persona life She is married.
Revised: Persona life Amoding is married.
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Original: Persona life Amoding is married.
Revised: Personal life Amoding is married.
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Original:  She attended Namilyango Girls Primary School , in Mukono District, graduating with a Primary Leaving Examination Certificate from there , in 1993.
Revised:  She attended Namilyango Girls Primary School in Mukono District, graduating with a Primary Leaving Examination Certificate from there , in 1993.
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Original:  She attended Namilyango Girls Primary School , in Mukono District, graduating with a Primary Leaving Examination Certificate from there , in 1993.
Revised:  She attended Namilyango Girls Primary School , in Mukono District, graduating with a Primary Leaving Examination Certificate from there in 1993.
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Original:  She went on to obtain her O-Level education from Tororo Girls ' School, graduating with a Uganda Certificate of Education, in 1997.
Revised:  She went on to obtain her O-Level education from Tororo Girls School, graduating with a Uganda Certificate of Education, in 1997.
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Original: Fan Hongwei () is a Chinese entrepreneur and billionaire who is the chair and CEO of the chemical fiber company Hengli Petrochemical (恒力石化) and vice chair of its parent company Hengli Group (恒力集团).
Revised: Fan Hongwei () is a Chinese entrepreneur and billionaire who is the chair and CEO of the chemical fiber company Hengli Petrochemical (恒力石化) and vice chair of its holding company Hengli Group (恒力集团).
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Original:  In 1994, Fan and her husband Chen Jianhua (陈建华) bought a failing weaving factory , restructured the company , and grew it into China's largest fiber producer and one of the largest weaving companies in the world.
Revised:  In 1994, Fan and her husband Chen Jianhua (陈建华) bought a failing weaving factory , restructured the company and grew it into China's largest fiber producer and one of the largest weaving companies in the world.
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Original:  The company, now known as Hengli Group, also refines petroleum to produce polyester.
Revised:  The company is now known as Hengli Group, also refines petroleum to produce polyester.
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Original:  He is the chair of Hengli's holding company .
Revised:  He is the chair and director of Hengli Group .
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Original:   Hengli Petrochemical became publicly traded through a backdoor listing on the Shanghai Stock Exchange in 2016.
Revised:  According to the company, Hengli Petrochemical became publicly traded through a backdoor listing on the Shanghai Stock Exchange in 2016.
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Original: Aftermath and legacy In 1853, Florian was chief editor of the Brașov Telegraful român newspaper, where he launched a sustained campaign in favor of a national culture and of the Romanian language.
Revised: Aftermath and legacy In 1853, Florian was chief editor of the Brașov Telegraful Român newspaper, where he launched a sustained campaign in favor of a national culture and of the Romanian language.
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