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Original:  In 1868 Denkyira entered the Fante Confederacy to fight for Great Britain against the alliance of the Asante Empire and the Dutch people.
Revised:  In 1868 Denkyira entered the Fante Confederacy to fight for Great Britain against the alliance of the Ashanti people and the Dutch people.
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Original:   Category: Asante Empire Category:Akan Category:Akan people Category:Former countries in Africa Category:History of Ghana Category:1500s establishments in Afri
Revised:  Category: Ashanti Empire Category:Akan Category:Akan people Category:Former countries in Africa Category:History of Ghana Category:1500s establishments in Afri
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Original: Denkyira was a powerful nation of Akan people that existed on the Ashantiland peninsula from the 1620s, in what is now modern-day Ghana.
Revised: Denkyira was a powerful nation of Akan people that existed in the Ashantiland region from the 1620s, in what is now modern-day Ghana.
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Original: Asantes were subjects and tributary to Denkyira Kingdom until 1701, when with the help of Okomfo Anokye, the Asante defeated Denkyira at the Battle of Feyiase, and Denkyira became a tributary to the Asante Empire.
Revised: Asantes were subjects and tributary to Denkyira Kingdom until 1701, when with the help of Okomfo Anokye, the Asante defeated Denkyira at the Battle of Feyiase, and Denkyira became a tributary to the Ashanti Empire.
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Original:  American educators Category: Central State University faculty Category:Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicia
Revised:  Central State University faculty Category:Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicia
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Original: Central State University faculty Category:Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American  politicia
Revised: Central State University faculty Category:Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicia
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Original:   McLin received her Bachelor of Arts in sociology and secondary education from Parsons College and her Master of Education in guidance counseling from Xavier University.
Revised:  Career McLin received her Bachelor of Arts in sociology and secondary education from Parsons College and her Master of Education in guidance counseling from Xavier University.
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Original:   In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr., died, Rhine McLin was appointed to serve the remainder of his term.
Revised:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr., died, Rhine McLin was appointed to serve the remainder of his term.
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Original:   In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr., died, Rhine McLin was appointed to serve the remainder of his term.
Revised:  In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr., died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term.
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Original:  Rhine McLin's political career has been full of firsts.
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Original:  As of 2012, McLin serves as the Vice Chairwoman of the Ohio Democratic Party.
Revised:  Since 2012, McLin serves as the Vice Chairwoman of the Ohio Democratic Party.
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Original:  As of 2012, McLin serves as the Vice Chairwoman of the Ohio Democratic Party.
Revised:  As of 2012, McLin has served as the Vice Chairwoman of the Ohio Democratic Party.
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Original:  In August 2012, McLin was tipped as a possible candidate to fill the Ohio state representative seat vacated by Clayton Luckie, but she ultimately declined to run.
Revised:  In August 2012, McLin was mentioned as a possible candidate to fill the Ohio state representative seat vacated by Clayton Luckie, but she ultimately declined to run.
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Original:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr. , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term  .
Revised:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, C. J. McLin Jr. , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term .
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Original:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr. , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term  .
Revised:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term .
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Original:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr. , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term  .
Revised:  Career In 1988, when McLin's father, Ohio House of Representatives C. J. McLin Jr. , died, Rhine was appointed to serve the remainder of his term in the Ohio House of Representatives .
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Original: Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicia
Revised: Embalmers Category:Funeral directors Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Dayton, Ohio Category:Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicians Category:American women academi
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Original: Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicians Category:American women academics Category:20th-century African-American  wom
Revised: Members of the Ohio House of Representatives Category:Ohio state senators Category:Xavier University alumni Category:Women mayors of places in Ohio Category:Ohio Democrats Category:Women state legislators in Ohio Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:20th-century American politicians Category:20th-century American women politicians Category:American women academics Category:20th-century African-American women Category:21st-century African-American wom
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Original:  Metallak was  the youngest son of Pial , chief of the tribe.
Revised:  Metallak was , by at least one account, the youngest son of Pial , chief of the tribe.
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Original:  Metallak was  the youngest son of Pial , chief of the tribe.
Revised:  Metallak was the youngest son of Piel , chief of the tribe.
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Original:   Metallak, biodiesel engine number 5, Mount Washington Cog Railway External links Koasek (Cowasuck) Band of Abenaki A first person account remembering Metallak Short biography of Metallak and other Native Americans in the area
Revised:  External links Koasek (Cowasuck) Band of Abenaki A first person account remembering Metallak Short biography of Metallak and other Native Americans in the area
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Original:   Metallak, biodiesel engine number 5, Mount Washington Cog Railway External links Koasek (Cowasuck) Band of Abenaki A first person account remembering Metallak Short biography of Metallak and other Native Americans in the area
Revised:  Metallak, biodiesel engine number 5, Mount Washington Cog Railway Further reading
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Original: New Hampshire historical marker in Stewartstown Metallak, biodiesel engine number 5, Mount Washington Cog Railway Metallak was the last survivor of a band of Native Americans known as the Androscoggin, Cowasuck or, more properly, the Arosaguntacook.
Revised: New Hampshire historical marker in Stewartstown Metallak, biodiesel engine number 5, Mount Washington Cog Railway Metallak was a member of the band of Native Americans known as the Androscoggin, Cowasuck or, more properly, the Arosaguntacook.
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Original: Oliveira P.F.M., Baron M., Chamayou André-Barrès C., Guidetti B., Baltas M.,  RSC Adv. (2014), 4, 56736-56742, DOI : 10.1039/c4ra10489g.
Revised: Oliveira P.F.M., Baron M., Chamayou André-Barrès C., Guidetti B., Baltas M., RSC Adv. (2014), 4, 56736-56742, doi : 10.1039/c4ra10489g.
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Original: Oliveira P.F.M., Baron M., Chamayou  André-Barrès C., Guidetti B., Baltas M., Solvent-free mechanochemical route for green synthesis of pharmaceutically attractive phenol-hydrazones, RSC Adv. (2014), 4, 56736-56742, doi: 10.1039/c4ra10489g.
Revised: Oliveira P.F.M., Baron M., Chamayou A., André-Barrès C., Guidetti B., Baltas M., Solvent-free mechanochemical route for green synthesis of pharmaceutically attractive phenol-hydrazones, RSC Adv. (2014), 4, 56736-56742, doi: 10.1039/c4ra10489g.
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Original:  Soc. Rev., 2013,42, 7571-7637, DOI: 10.1039/C3CS35468G The mechanochemical process was used recently as a green one to synthesize pharmaceutically attractive phenol hydrazones.
Revised:  Soc. Rev., 2013,42, 7571-7637, DOI: 10.1039/C3CS35468G Mechanochemistry is radically different from the traditional way of dissolving, heating and stirring chemicals in a solution. Because it eliminates the need for many solvents, mechanochemistry could help make many chemical processes used by industry more environmentally friendly. For example, the mechanochemical process has been used as an environmentally preferable way to synthesize pharmaceutically-attractive phenol hydrazones.
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Original: Second Sino-Japanese War Ma himself stayed abroad in the Soviet Union, Germany and Italy only returning in June 1933.
Revised: Second Sino-Japanese War Ma himself stayed abroad in the Soviet Union, Germany , and Italy, only returning in June 1933.
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Original:  After the Marco Polo Bridge Incident, Ma Zhanshan was appointed as Commander of the Northeastern Advance Force  in charge of the four northeastern provinces Liaoning, Jilin, Heilongjiang and Rehe.
Revised:  After the Marco Polo Bridge Incident, Ma Zhanshan was appointed as Commander of the Northeastern Advance Force , in charge of the four northeastern provinces Liaoning, Jilin, Heilongjiang and Rehe.
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Original:  Ma Zhanshan established a headquarters in Datong in August 1937 and led his troops to fight the Japanese in Chahar, Suiyuan Datong and Shanxi and he cooperated with Fu Zuoyi's troops in the defense of Suiyuan and in the Yinshan War.
Revised:  Ma Zhanshan established a headquarters in Datong in August 1937 , led his troops to fight the Japanese in Chahar, Suiyuan Datong and Shanxi and he cooperated with Fu Zuoyi's troops in the defense of Suiyuan and in the Yinshan War.
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Original:  Ma Zhanshan established a headquarters in Datong in August 1937 and led his troops to fight the Japanese in Chahar, Suiyuan Datong and Shanxi and he cooperated with Fu Zuoyi's troops in the defense of Suiyuan and in the Yinshan War.
Revised:  Ma Zhanshan established a headquarters in Datong in August 1937 and led his troops to fight the Japanese in Chahar, Suiyuan Datong and Shanxi , and cooperated with Fu Zuoyi's troops in the defense of Suiyuan and in the Yinshan War.
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Original:  He visited Yanan in 1939 in order reach an accommodation with the Eighth Route Army.
Revised:  He visited Yan'an in 1939 in order reach an accommodation with the Eighth Route Army.
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Original:  He attended the inaugural ceremony of Pu Yi as Emperor of Manchukuo in March the same year, and was appointed as War Minister of Manchukuo and Governor of Heilongjiang Province under the new government.
Revised:  He attended the inaugural ceremony of Pu Yi as Regent of Manchukuo in March the same year, and was appointed as War Minister of Manchukuo and Governor of Heilongjiang Province under the new government.
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Original: Republic of China warlords from Jilin Category:Hui people Category:National Revolutionary Army generals from Jilin Category:People's Republic of China politicians from Jilin Category:Chinese people of World War II Category: People of Manchukuo Category:Chinese Nationalist military figures Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:People from Siping Category:Generals of Manchukuo Category:Chinese collaborators with Imperial Japan Category:Kuomintang collaborators with Imperial Jap
Revised: Republic of China warlords from Jilin Category:Hui people Category:National Revolutionary Army generals from Jilin Category:People's Republic of China politicians from Jilin Category:Chinese people of World War II Category: Government ministers of Manchukuo Category:Chinese Nationalist military figures Category:Members of the Kuomintang Category:People from Siping Category:Generals of Manchukuo Category:Chinese collaborators with Imperial Japan Category:Kuomintang collaborators with Imperial Jap
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Original: The Al-i Muhtaj  or Muhtajids (also known as the Chaghanids) was an Iranian or Iranicized Arab ruling family of the small principality of Chaghaniyan.
Revised: The Al-i Muhtaj () or Muhtajids (also known as the Chaghanids) was an Iranian or Iranicized Arab ruling family of the small principality of Chaghaniyan.
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Original: upHakim in 2008 Another production, 2001's Pasir Berbisik (Whispering Sands), went more smoothly.
Revised:  Another production, 2001's Pasir Berbisik (Whispering Sands), went more smoothly.
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Original: In 2003, Hakim began  work with RCTI and Metro TV on the TV show Untukmu Guru (For You, Teacher).
Revised: In 2003, Hakim began to work with RCTI and Metro TV on the TV show Untukmu Guru (For You, Teacher).
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Original:  2014) Ibu Maafkan Aku (2016) Boven Digoel (2016) Kartini (2016) Perias Mayat (2017) Dancing In The Rain (2018) Perempuan Tanah Jahanam (2019)
Revised:  2014) Ibu Maafkan Aku (2016) Boven Digoel (2016) Kartini (2016) Perias Mayat (2017) Dancing in the Rain (2018) Perempuan Tanah Jahanam (2019)
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Original:  2014) Ibu Maafkan Aku (2016) Boven Digoel (2016) Kartini ( 2016 ) Perias Mayat (2017) Dancing in the Rain (2018) Perempuan Tanah Jahanam (2019) A Perfect Fit (2021)
Revised:  2014) Ibu Maafkan Aku (2016) Boven Digoel (2016) Kartini ( 2017 ) Perias Mayat (2017) Dancing in the Rain (2018) Perempuan Tanah Jahanam (2019) A Perfect Fit (2021)
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Original:  They live in Cibubur, East Jakarta, with Hakim's mother and adopted daughter Shena;
Revised:  They live in Cibubur, East Jakarta, with Hakim's mother and daughter Shena;
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Original:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice  in India's history at 7 years and 4 months.
Revised:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice in India's history for 7 years and 4 months.
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Original:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice of India in India's history for 7 years and 4 months.
Revised:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice in India's history for 7 years and 4 months.
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Original:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice of India in India's history for 7 years and 4 months.
Revised:  Born in Pune in the Bombay Presidency, he was first appointed Judge to the Supreme Court of India on 28 August 1972 and is the longest-serving Chief Justice of India in India's history at 7 years and 4 months.
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Original: An ophthalmic medical practitioner is a registered medical practitionerin the UK with a qualification in ophthalmology who is employed to carry out medical eye examinations and prescribe glasses, contact lenses, eyepatches and other orthoptic treatment.
Revised: An ophthalmic medical practitioner (OMP) is a medical practitioner. In the UK they are registered with a qualification in ophthalmology who is employed to carry out medical eye examinations and prescribe glasses, contact lenses, eyepatches and other orthoptic treatment.
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Original:  Their day-to-day work is essentially that of an optometrist or orthoptist.
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Original: An ophthalmic medical practitioner (OMP) is a medical practitioner.
Revised: An Ophthalmic Medical Practitioner (OMP) is a medical practitioner.
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Original: History In 1962 Douglas C. Engelbart released the report  Augmenting Human Intellect: A Conceptual Framework  which introduced, and laid the groundwork for, augmented cognition.
Revised: History In 1962 Douglas C. Engelbart released the report " Augmenting Human Intellect: A Conceptual Framework which introduced, and laid the groundwork for, augmented cognition.
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Original: History In 1962 Douglas C. Engelbart released the report  Augmenting Human Intellect: A Conceptual Framework  which introduced, and laid the groundwork for, augmented cognition.
Revised: History In 1962 Douglas C. Engelbart released the report Augmenting Human Intellect: A Conceptual Framework " which introduced, and laid the groundwork for, augmented cognition.
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Original:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
Revised:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time cognitive state detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
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Original:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
Revised:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time cognitive state manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
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Original:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
Revised:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous cognitive state manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
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Original:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation Demonstration and Transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
Revised:  As of 2002, the program vision is divided into four phases: Phase 1: Real-time Cognitive State Detection Phase 2: Real-time Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 3: Autonomous Cognitive State Manipulation Phase 4: Operation demonstration and transition Proof of concept was carried out in two phases: near real time monitoring of the user's cognitive activity, and subsequent manipulation of the user's cognitive state.
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Original:  Translation Engines Thad Starner, and the American Sign Language (ASL) Research Group at Georgia Tech, have been researching systems for the recognition of ASL.
Revised:  Translation engines Thad Starner, and the American Sign Language (ASL) Research Group at Georgia Tech, have been researching systems for the recognition of ASL.
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Original:  Privacy Concerns The increasing sophistication of brain-reading technologies has led many to investigate their potential applications for lie detection.
Revised:  Privacy concerns The increasing sophistication of brain-reading technologies has led many to investigate their potential applications for lie detection.
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Original:  Human Augmentation Many of the same arguments in the debate around human enhancement can be analogized to augmented cognition.
Revised:  Human augmentation Many of the same arguments in the debate around human enhancement can be analogized to augmented cognition.
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