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Original:  About 1979 he helped complete a set of documentaries covering Portrayal of Native Americans in film called "Images of Indians" with Robert Hagoplan.
Revised:  In 1979 he helped complete a set of documentaries covering Portrayal of Native Americans in film called "Images of Indians" with Robert Hagoplan.
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Original:  "Images of Indians" is a five-part series on the Indian stereotype portrayed in movies and questions what the effect of this Hollywood image has been on Indians' own self-image.
Revised:  "Images of Indians" is a five-part series on the Indian stereotype portrayed in movies and questions the impact of Hollywood image on Indians' own self-image.
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Original:  In particular  Lucas and Hagoplan made the first of the series - "The Great Movie Massacre" - about the myth of the "savage indian " vs Buffalo Bill and similar stories.
Revised:  In particular , Lucas and Hagoplan made the first of the series - "The Great Movie Massacre" - about the myth of the "savage indian " vs Buffalo Bill and similar stories.
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Original:  In particular  Lucas and Hagoplan made the first of the series - "The Great Movie Massacre" - about the myth of the "savage indian " vs Buffalo Bill and similar stories.
Revised:  In particular Lucas and Hagoplan made the first of the series - "The Great Movie Massacre" - about the myth of the "savage Indian " vs Buffalo Bill and similar stories.
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Original:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea  stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
Revised:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them anymore . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
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Original:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea  stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
Revised:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary conveys the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
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Original:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea  stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
Revised:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of alcoholic Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
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Original:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea  stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
Revised:  "It began with their seven-year-old daughter telling them she didn't want to live with them any more . Using interviews and dramatic reenactments, this 1986 two-tape documentary tells the story of the how alcoholics Phyllis Chelsea and her husband Andy Chelsea , who stopped drinking and then led the Alkali Lake Indian Band on a years-long, but ultimately successful struggle out of alcoholism that had been devastating the community of the Shuswap Reserve in British Columbia."
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Original:  Married for over 25 yrs to Nancy Gross of Bellevue who, with Phil, produced 4 children: Amy, Jason, Jessy  and Sara.
Revised:  Married for over 25 yrs to Nancy Gross of Bellevue who, with Phil, produced 4 children: Amy, Jason, Jessy , and Sara.
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Original:  Lucas returned to American West and took up filmmaking after surviving the 1972 earthquake in Managua, Nicaragua. 
Revised:  Lucas returned to American West and took up filmmaking after surviving the 1972 earthquake in Managua, Nicaragua. l
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Original:  Lucas returned to American West and took up filmmaking after surviving the 1972 earthquake in Managua, Nicaragua. l
Revised:  Lucas returned to American West and took up filmmaking after surviving the 1972 earthquake in Managua, Nicaragua. 
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Original: Religion and Community The Curumsey Damjee Community Hall at the Dariya Sthan (Kutchi Lohana Mahajan) Masjid Bunder, Mumbai was named after him.
Revised: Religion and community The Curumsey Damjee Community Hall at the Dariya Sthan (Kutchi Lohana Mahajan) Masjid Bunder, Mumbai was named after him.
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Original:  Page 112 Charity and Scholarship
Revised:  Page 112 Charity and scholarship
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Original: Curumsey Damjee (also spelled Karamsi or Kasamshi Damji) JP, Rai Bahadur (1844-1918) Rao Bahadur Sheth Curumsey Damjee (1844-1918) was a noted businessman.
Revised: Curumsey Damjee (also spelled Karamsi or Kasamshi Damji) JP, Rai Bahadur (1844-1918) was a noted businessman.
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Original: He instituted three Public Charitable Trusts.
Revised: Damjee instituted three Public Charitable Trusts.
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Original: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay There is an asphalt parcourse( remodeled in 2012 ), that projects into the Bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
Revised: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay An asphalt parcourse, remodeled in 2012 ), that projects into the Bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
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Original: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay There is an asphalt parcourse( remodeled in 2012 ), that projects into the Bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
Revised: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay There is an asphalt parcourse( remodeled in 2012 , projects into the Bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
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Original: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay There is an asphalt parcourse( remodeled in 2012 ), that projects into the Bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
Revised: San Francisco Bay Area East Bay There is an asphalt parcourse( remodeled in 2012 ), that projects into the bay in Marina Park in San Leandro.
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Original:  Section Two of the Lafayette-Moraga Regional Trail is an asphalt paved parcourse in Moraga .
Revised:  Section Two of the Lafayette-Moraga Regional Trail has an asphalt parcourse .
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Original:  Under the BART right-of-way along Masonic Ave. , in Albany.
Revised:  Under the BART right-of-way along Masonic Avenue , in Albany.
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Original:  There are two parcourse trails in Pleasanton;
Revised:  Pleasanton has two parcourse trails in Pleasanton;
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Original:  one borders the northern side of Bernal Corporate Park, paralleling the Arroyo Valle , and the second is on the Owens Drive loop west of Johnson Drive.
Revised:  one borders the northern side of Bernal Corporate Park, paralleling the Arroyo Valle . The other is on the Owens Drive loop west of Johnson Drive.
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Original:  In Missouri City, A more compact course is located behind the LA Fitness at 5402 Texas 6, on Cross Lakes Boulevard.  
Revised:  In Missouri City, A more compact course is located behind the LA Fitness at 5402 Texas 6, on Cross Lakes Boulevard. Vermont 
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Original: Wisconsin In Madison, Wisconsin The Parcourse Fitness Circuit begins on the west side of the UW Natatorium and encircles the far west fields, some stations along the Lakeshore Path . Eighteen stations are spread around the approximately 2.5 mile course.
Revised: Wisconsin In Madison, Wisconsin The Fitness Trail begins on the west side of the UW Natatorium and encircles the far west fields, some stations along the Lakeshore Path . Eighteen stations are spread around the approximately 2.5 mile course.
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Original: In museums and archives, the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog ).
Revised: In museums and archives, the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalogue (or collections catalog ).
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Original: In museums and archives, the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog ).
Revised: In museums and archives, the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalogue ).
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Original: In museums and archives , the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog).
Revised: In museums , the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog).
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Original: In museums and archives , the collection of objects or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog).
Revised: In museums and archives , the collection of cultural property or material is normally catalogued in a collection catalog (or collections catalog).
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Original: " Self-love is the love of your 'self', by your 'self', for your 'self'".- Chetanya Pandey Self-love , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
Revised:  Self-love is the love of your 'self', by your 'self', for your 'self'".- Chetanya Pandey Self-love , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
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Original: " Self-love is the love of your 'self', by your 'self', for your 'self'".- Chetanya Pandey Self-love , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
Revised: " Self-love Self-love , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
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Original: " Self-love is the love of your 'self', by your 'self', for your 'self'".- Chetanya Pandey Self-love , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
Revised: " Self-love is the love of your 'self', by your 'self', for your 'self'".- Chetanya Pandey , defined as "love of self" or "regard for one's own happiness or advantage", has been conceptualized both as a basic human necessityMaslow's hierarchy of needs and as a moral flaw, akin to vanity and selfishness,B.
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Original:  A few modern examples of self-love promotion platforms include: Dove Campaign for Real Beauty Slut Walk To Write Love on Her Arms The Tragedy of Coins Origins of Self-love by Willy Zayas in 2019.
Revised:  A few modern examples of self-love promotion platforms include: Dove Campaign for Real Beauty Slut Walk To Write Love on Her Arms Origins of Self-love by Willy Zayas in 2019.
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Original:  "In the Beginning" The Tragedy of Coins by Chetanya Pandey in 2020
Revised:  "In the Beginning" 
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Original: Views Laozi ( 601–530 BC) and Taoism believes that people being completely natural (ziran) is very important.
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Original:  However, this is balanced with karuṇā (compassion   ).
Revised:  However, this is balanced with karuṇā (compassion ). ).
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Original:  This post-war community was left very vulnerable to persuasion but began encouraging freedom, harmony  and the possibility of a brighter, non-violent future.
Revised:  This post-war community was left very vulnerable to persuasion but began encouraging freedom, harmony , and the possibility of a brighter, non-violent future.
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Original:  These protests took place on almost all continents and included countries such as the United States (primarily New York City and California), England  and Australia.
Revised:  These protests took place on almost all continents and included countries such as the United States (primarily New York City and California), England , and Australia.
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Original:  Their dedication, perseverance  and empathy towards human life defined this generation as being peace advocates and carefree souls.
Revised:  Their dedication, perseverance , and empathy towards human life defined this generation as being peace advocates and carefree souls.
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Original: Mental health Lack of self-love increases risk of suicide according to the American Association of Suicidology , Drapeau, C. W., & McIntosh, J. L. (for the American Association of Suicidology).
Revised: Mental health Lack of self-love increases risk of suicide according to the American Association of Suicidology . Drapeau, C. W., & McIntosh, J. L. (for the American Association of Suicidology).
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Original:  coastal polynyas that are found year round near the coast of Antarctic and Arctic and are mainly created by strong winds pushing the ice away from the coast.
Revised:  coastal polynyas that are found year-round near the coast of Antarctic and Arctic and are mainly created by strong winds pushing the ice away from the coast.
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Original: File:Antarctic shelf ice hg.png|Coastal polynyas are produced in the Antarctic by katabatic winds]] Katabatic wind spilling off an ice shelf A polynya is an area of open water surrounded by sea ice.
Revised: File:Antarctic shelf ice hg.png|Coastal polynyas are produced in the Antarctic by katabatic winds]] Katabatic wind spilling off an ice shelf A polynya () is an area of open water surrounded by sea ice.
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Original:  1991. Extent of Polynyas in the Bering and Chukchi Seas It is now used as  geographical term for an area of unfrozen sea within the ice pack .
Revised:  1991. Extent of Polynyas in the Bering and Chukchi Seas It is now used as a geographical term for an area of unfrozen sea within the ice pack .
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Original:  It is a loanword from (polynya ), which refers to a natural ice hole , and was adopted in the 19th century by polar explorers to describe navigable portions of the sea.
Revised:  It is a loanword from (polynya ), which refers to a natural ice hole and was adopted in the 19th century by polar explorers to describe navigable portions of the sea.
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Original:  coastal polynyasthat are found year-round near the coast of Antarctic and Arctic  and are mainly created by strong winds pushing the ice away from the coast .
Revised:  coastal polynyasthat are found year-round near the Antarctic and Arctic and are mainly created by strong winds pushing the ice away from the coast .
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Original:  The other type is mid-sea or open-ocean polynyas that are found in the middle of the ice pack in certain locations  especially around Antarctica.
Revised:  The other type is mid-sea or open-ocean polynyas that are found in the middle of ice pack in certain locations especially around Antarctica.
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Original:  The other type is mid-sea or open-ocean polynyas that are found in the middle of the ice pack in certain locations  especially around Antarctica.
Revised:  The other type is mid-sea or open-ocean polynyas that are found in the middle of the ice pack in certain locations , especially around Antarctica.
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Original:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya  which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
Revised:  One of the most famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
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Original:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya  which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
Revised:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynyas is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
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Original:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya  which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
Revised:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya , which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
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Original:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya  which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the seamount Maud Rise .
Revised:  For example, one of the famous mid-sea polynya is the Weddell Polynya or the Maud Rise Polynya which occurs in the Lazarev Sea over the Maud Rise seamount .
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Original:  It was spotted first in September 1973 and have lasted over multiple winters (1974–1976) and recently reoccurred in September 2017.
Revised:  It was first spotted in September 1973 and have lasted over multiple winters (1974–1976) and recently reoccurred in September 2017.
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Original:  It was spotted first in September 1973 and have lasted over multiple winters (1974–1976) and recently reoccurred in September 2017.
Revised:  It was spotted first in September 1973 and persisted through multiple winters (1974–1976) and recently reoccurred in September 2017.
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Original:  It was spotted first in September 1973 and have lasted over multiple winters (1974–1976) and recently reoccurred in September 2017.
Revised:  It was spotted first in September 1973 and have lasted over multiple winters (1974–1976) , and recently recurred in September 2017.
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Original: Weddell Polynya, NASA, 1999[12] Formation Coastal Polynyas are formed through two main processes: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sensible heat polynya : this is thermodynamically driven, and typically occurs when warm water upwelling keeps the surface water temperature at or above the freezing point.
Revised: Weddell Polynya, NASA, 1999[12] Formation Coastal polynyas are formed through two main processes: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sensible heat polynya : this is thermodynamically driven, and typically occurs when warm water upwelling keeps the surface water temperature at or above the freezing point.
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Original: Weddell Polynya, NASA, 1999[12] Formation Coastal Polynyas are formed through two main processes: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sensible heat polynya : this is thermodynamically driven, and typically occurs when warm water upwelling keeps the surface water temperature at or above the freezing point.
Revised: Weddell Polynya, NASA, 1999[12] Formation Coastal Polynyas are formed through two main processes: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A sensible heat polynya is thermodynamically driven, and typically occurs when warm water upwelling keeps the surface water temperature at or above the freezing point.
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Original:  Latent heat polynya : is formed through the action of katabatic wind which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary , such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
Revised:  A latent heat polynya is formed through the action of katabatic wind which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary , such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
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Original:  Latent heat polynya : is formed through the action of katabatic wind which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary , such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
Revised:  Latent heat polynya : is formed through the action of katabatic winds, which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary , such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
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Original:  Latent heat polynya : is formed through the action of katabatic wind which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary , such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
Revised:  Latent heat polynya : is formed through the action of katabatic wind which act to drive ice away from a fixed boundary such as a coastline, fast ice, or an ice bridge.
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Original:  The polynya forms initially by the first year pack ice being driven away from the coast, which leaves an area of open water within which new ice is formed.
Revised:  The polynya forms initially when first-year pack ice is driven away from the coast, which leaves an area of open water within which new ice is formed.
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Original:  This new ice is then also herded downwind toward the first year pack ice.
Revised:  This new ice is then also herded downwind toward the first-year pack ice.
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Original:  When it reaches the pack ice  the new ice is consolidated onto the pack ice.
Revised:  When it reaches the pack ice , the new ice is consolidated onto the pack ice.
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Original:  This process continues over time , thus naming the latent heat polynyas as a major source of sea ice production in the Antarctic.
Revised:  This process continues over time . Latent heat polynyas are therefore a major source of sea ice production in the Antarctic.
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Original:  The latent heat polynya is the open water region between the coast and the ice pack.
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Original:  Mid-sea Polynyas are formed when specific atmospheric conditions occur over the preconditioned oceanographic areas.
Revised:  Mid-sea polynyas are formed when specific atmospheric conditions occur over the preconditioned oceanographic areas.
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Original:  Mid-sea Polynyas are formed when specific atmospheric conditions occur over the preconditioned oceanographic areas.
Revised:  Mid-sea Polynyas are formed when specific atmospheric conditions occur over preconditioned oceanographic areas.
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