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Original:  Police have spotted a car parked in a parking lot at a Oakland Park shopping center , and have detained a man of interest, after they received what the believed to be a very credible tip
Revised:  Police have detained a car in a parking lot at a Oakland Park shopping center , and have detained a man of interest, after they received what the believed to be a very credible tip
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Original: Police began a search for a black Pontiac Vibe that contained a man, woman , and two children after they received a tip that a man who looked like the suspect was driving the vehicle .
Revised: Police began a search for a black Pontiac Vibe that contained a man, woman , and two children .
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Original:  The vehicle, however, does not belong to the suspect.
Revised:  The driver of the vehicle was not the suspect.
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Original:  1-0 (Ouma, 0.3 ov), 2-20 (Odhiambo, 2.6 ov), 3-42 (Mishra, 9.1 ov), 4-47 (Tikolo, 10.1 ov), 5-50 (CO Obuya, 10.4 ov), 6-66 ( Obanda , 14.3 ov), 7-81 ( DO Obuya , 17.2 ov), 8-83 (Kamande, 18.2 ov), 9-88 (Ongondo, 19.3 ov) Did not bat:
Revised:  1-0 (Ouma, 0.3 ov), 2-20 (Odhiambo, 2.6 ov), 3-42 (Mishra, 9.1 ov), 4-47 (Tikolo, 10.1 ov), 5-50 (CO Obuya, 10.4 ov), 6-66 ( DO Obuya , 14.3 ov), 7-81 ( DO Obuya , 17.2 ov), 8-83 (Kamande, 18.2 ov), 9-88 (Ongondo, 19.3 ov) Did not bat:
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Original:  1-0 (Ouma, 0.3 ov), 2-20 (Odhiambo, 2.6 ov), 3-42 (Mishra, 9.1 ov), 4-47 (Tikolo, 10.1 ov), 5-50 (CO Obuya, 10.4 ov), 6-66 ( Obanda , 14.3 ov), 7-81 ( DO Obuya , 17.2 ov), 8-83 (Kamande, 18.2 ov), 9-88 (Ongondo, 19.3 ov) Did not bat:
Revised:  1-0 (Ouma, 0.3 ov), 2-20 (Odhiambo, 2.6 ov), 3-42 (Mishra, 9.1 ov), 4-47 (Tikolo, 10.1 ov), 5-50 (CO Obuya, 10.4 ov), 6-66 ( Obanda , 14.3 ov), 7-81 ( Obanda , 17.2 ov), 8-83 (Kamande, 18.2 ov), 9-88 (Ongondo, 19.3 ov) Did not bat:
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Original: Sri Lanka have beaten Kenya by 172 runs in Group C of the  2007 Twenty20 World Championship  at Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg, South Africa.
Revised: Sri Lanka have beaten Kenya by 172 runs in Group C of the w: 2007 Twenty20 World Championship at Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg, South Africa.
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Original:  Chaminda Vaas immediately made a breakthrough , dismissing opening batsman Maurice Ouma for a duck.
Revised:  Chaminda Vaas immediately made a breakthrough dismissing opening batsman Maurice Ouma for a duck.
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Original:  The win , by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
Revised:  The win by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
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Original:  The win , by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
Revised:  The win , by 172 runs is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
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Original:  The win , by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
Revised:  The win , by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
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Original:  Toss: Kenya won, and chose to field first.
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Original: Sri Lanka have beaten Kenya by 172 runs in Group C of the w: 2007 Twenty20 World Championship in 2007 20 World Championship at Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg, South Africa.
Revised: Sri Lanka have beaten Kenya by 172 runs in Group C of the w: 2007 Twenty20 World Championship at Wanderers Stadium, Johannesburg, South Africa.
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Original:  Chaminda Vaas immediately made a breakthrough  dismissing opening batsman Maurice Ouma for a duck.
Revised:  Chaminda Vaas immediately made a breakthrough , dismissing opening batsman Maurice Ouma for a duck.
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Original:  The win  by 172 runs  is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
Revised:  The win , by 172 runs is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
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Original:  The win  by 172 runs  is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
Revised:  The win by 172 runs , is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
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Original:  The win  by 172 runs  is the largest margin of victory in a 20 international.
Revised:  The win by 172 runs is the largest margin of victory in a Twenty20 international.
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Original:  " toss" Kenya won, and chose to field first.
Revised:  Toss: Kenya won, and chose to field first.
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Original: from BullionVault NERVOUS SAVERS formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early Friday, after the $5.4 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
Revised:  NERVOUS SAVERS formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early Friday, after the $5.4 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
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Original:  The Price of Gold for British investors rose towards this week's 16-month highs above £351 per ounce .
Revised:  The Price of Gold for British investors rose towards this week's 16-month highs above £351 per ounce 
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Original:  Calm Urged NERVOUS SAVERS formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early Friday , after the $5.4 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
Revised:  Calm Urged Nervous savers formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early Friday , after the $5.4 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
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Original:  The Price of Gold for British investors rose towards this week's 16-month highs above £351 per ounce
Revised:  The price of Gold for British investors rose towards this week's 16-month highs above £351 per ounce
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Original: Nervous savers formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early today , after the £2.68 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
Revised: Nervous savers have re-formed queues this morning outside many branches of Northern Rock early today , after the £2.68 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
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Original: Nervous savers formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock early today , after the £2.68 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
Revised: Nervous savers formed queues outside many branches of Northern Rock , after the £2.68 billion bank took an emergency loan from the Bank of England, the UK central bank.
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Original:  Shares in the bank  dropped 25\% by lunchtime  in London – and stood nearly 60\% lower from their high of February – after the Bank of England acted in its capacity as "lender of last resort" to provide Northern Rock with short-term financing to enable it to continue operations.
Revised:  Shares in the bank had dropped 25\% by lunchtime in London – and stood nearly 60\% lower from their high of February – after the Bank of England acted in its capacity as "lender of last resort" to provide Northern Rock with short-term financing to enable it to continue operations.
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Original:  All three teams in the group have two points with one win and one defeat each, but Australia and England progress as Zimbabwe have an inferior we are proud of both of the teamsnet run rate.
Revised:  All three teams in the group have two points with one win and one defeat each, but Australia and England progress as Zimbabwe have an inferior net run rate.
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Original: Fleischer , 79, a member of the Peabody Institute's music faculty, is a pianist who lost use of his right hand in 1965 due to a neurological condition.
Revised: Fleisher , 79, a member of the Peabody Institute's music faculty, is a pianist who lost use of his right hand in 1965 due to a neurological condition.
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Original: Film director Martin Scorsese is among the honorees.photo: David ShankboneThe Kennedy Center announced that its 30th presentation of the Kennedy Center Honors would go to pianist Leon Fleisher, comedian Steve Martin, singer Diana Ross, director Martin Scorsese and musician Brian Wilson.
Revised: The Kennedy Center announced that its 30th presentation of the Kennedy Center Honors would go to pianist Leon Fleisher, comedian Steve Martin, singer Diana Ross, director Martin Scorsese and musician Brian Wilson.
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Original:  With the advent of Botox therapy , he regained the use of his right hand and began two-hand performances in 2004, his first in four decades.
Revised:  With the advent of Botox therapy , he regained the use of his right hand . With the advent of Botox therapy, he was once more able to undertake two-hand performances in 2004, his first in four decades.
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Original: Scorsese, is one of the most accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed '' , for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director, his first.
Revised: Scorsese, is one of the most accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed , for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director, his first.
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Original:  Their 1966 album Pet Sounds is considered one of the most influential recordings in American music.
Revised:  Their 1966 album Pet Sounds is considered one of the most 
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Original:  Scorsese, is one of the most accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed, for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director, his first.
Revised:  accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed, for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director, his first.
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Original:  Scorsese said, "I'm very honored to be receiving this recognition from the Kennedy Center and proud to be joining the company of the very distinguished individuals who have received this honor in years past.  
Revised:  Scorsese said, "I'm very honored to be receiving this recognition from the Kennedy Center and proud to be joining the company of the very distinguished individuals who have received this honor in years past. " 
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Original:  Schwarzman said the entertainers had "  transformed the way we, as Americans, see, hear and feel the performing arts."
Revised:  Schwarzman said that " transformed the way we, as Americans, see, hear and feel the performing arts."
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Original:  Film director MartinScorsese is among the honorees.photo: David Shankbone Martin , 62, a comedian who has written books and essays in addition to his acting and stand-up comedy career, rose to fame during his work on the American television program Saturday Night Live in the 1970's.
Revised:  Martin , 62, a comedian who has written books and essays in addition to his acting and stand-up comedy career, rose to fame during his work on the American television program Saturday Night Live in the 1970's.
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Original:  Scorsese, 64, is one of the most accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed, for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director , his first . Scorsese said, "I'm very honored to be receiving this recognition from the Kennedy Center and proud to be joining the company of the very distinguished individuals who have received this honor in years past."
Revised:  Scorsese, 64, is one of the most accomplished directors the United States ever produced, whose work includes Mean Streets, Taxi Driver, GoodFellas, Cape Fear, The Last Temptation of Christ and The Departed, for which he won a 2006 Academy Award for Best Director after being nominated eight times . Scorsese said, "I'm very honored to be receiving this recognition from the Kennedy Center and proud to be joining the company of the very distinguished individuals who have received this honor in years past."
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Original:  Their 1966 album Pet Sounds is considered one of the most influential recordings in American music 
Revised:  Their 1966 album Pet Sounds is considered one of the most influential recordings in American music . "This is something so unexpected and I feel extremely fortunate to be in the company of such great artists," said Wilson, who is currently on tour
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Original:  "This is something so unexpected and I feel extremely fortunate to be in the company of such great artists," said Wilson, who is currently on tour  
Revised:  "This is something so unexpected and I feel extremely fortunate to be in the company of such great artists," said Wilson, who is currently on tour . 
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Original:  President Bush and first lady Laura Bush will attend the center's presentation at its opera house on December 2, 2007, which will broadcast on December 26 on CBS.
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Original:  A wide variety of people were under consideration, including Emanuel Ax, Evgeny Kissin, Renee Fleming, Laurence Fishburne, Francis Ford Coppola, Melissa Etheridge and Kenny Chesney  
Revised:  A wide variety of people were under consideration, including Emanuel Ax, Evgeny Kissin, Renee Fleming, Laurence Fishburne, Francis Ford Coppola, Melissa Etheridge and Kenny Chesney . 
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Original:  Solutions on the Trend of Product Life Cycle Brock: As of the Press Conference by SEMI on Tuesday, some of exhibitors remarked that lots of companies and enterprises in Taiwan should obtain new materials and upgrade production technologies because of trend of tracing new ideas and following the fashion by consumers, with those trends, how will Siemens have to do    
Revised:  Solutions on the Trend of Product Life Cycle Brock: As of the Press Conference by SEMI on Tuesday, some of exhibitors remarked that lots of companies and enterprises in Taiwan should obtain new materials and upgrade production technologies because of trend of tracing new ideas and following the fashion by consumers, with those trends, how will Siemens have to do ? 
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Original: Huang: Iin this exhibition, we provide solutions based on power supply, RFID technology, automation and sensor, each industry has its unique own solution.
Revised: Huang: In this exhibition, we provide solutions based on power supply, RFID technology, automation and sensor, each industry has its unique own solution.
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Original:  Northern Rock, based in Newscastle, is one of the UK's largest mortgage lenders
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Original: Miss Marina Souza, aged 43, was kidnapped last Saturday, November 6, in Praia Grande, São Paulo , during a barbecue with her relatives.
Revised: Miss Marina Souza, aged 43, was kidnapped last Saturday, November 6, in Praia Grande, , during a barbecue with her relatives.
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Original:  "I hope this all finishes well and that I can go back to playing football again," he was quoted by Reuters on November 9.
Revised:  "I hope this all finishes well and that I can go back to playing football again," he was quoted by on November 9.
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Original:  Students at a maths lecture at the Helsinki University of Technology The cross-party Council for Equality between Men and Women in Finland dates back to the 1970s;
Revised:  Students at a maths lecture at the The cross-party Council for Equality between Men and Women in Finland dates back to the 1970s;
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Original: Boys and girls were neck and neck with high scores in their 2009 maths tests, both averaging around 550.
Revised: Boys and girls were neck and neck with high scores in their 2009 maths tests, both averaging around 540.
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Original:  The proportion of women at least 25\% of the time has risen from around 8\% in 2000-1 to 10\% in 2005;
Revised:  The proportion of women at least 25\% of the time has risen from around 8\% in 2000–1 to 10\% in 2005;
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Original:  the male figure was at 10\% in 2005 and is now 15-20 \%.
Revised:  the male figure was at 10\% in 2005 and is now 15–20 \%.
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Original:  From 2006-9 services accounted for 87\% of female and 55\% of male employment.
Revised:  From 2006–9 services accounted for 87\% of female and 55\% of male employment.
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Original:  From 2006–9 services accounted for 87\% of female and 55 \% of male employment.
Revised:  From 2006–9 services accounted for 87\% of female and 56 \% of male employment.
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Original:  Your activity took place in the comfort of your own home, no doubt at the time feeling safe in the knowledge that you would never be caught." 
Revised:  Your activity took place in the comfort of your own home, no doubt at the time feeling safe in the knowledge that you would never be caught." Related new
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Original: British comedy actor Chris Langham has been sentenced to ten months imprisonment for downloading indicent images of children from the internet, less 43 days for the time he served in custody.
Revised: British comedy actor Chris Langham has been sentenced to ten months imprisonment for downloading indecent images of children from the internet, less 43 days for the time he served in custody.
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Original:  Langham, 58, most famous for his award-winning role in the sitcom The Thick of It was found guilty of 15 counts of downloading of child abuse, including sadism and non-consenual sex between adults and children.
Revised:  Langham, 58, most famous for his award-winning role in the sitcom The Thick of It was found guilty of 15 counts of downloading of child abuse, including sadism and non-consensual sex between adults and children.
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Original:  Langham was however, found not guilty of sexually assulting a teenage girl and two counts of a serious sexual offence.
Revised:  Langham was however, found not guilty of sexually assaulting a teenage girl and two counts of a serious sexual offence.
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Original:  Pakistan lost three wickets in quick succession, when Salman Butt was caught behind on 16 followed by Kamran Akmal run out for 15 and Younis Khan bowled by Irfan Pathan in the next over.
Revised:  Pakistan lost three wickets in quick succession, when Salman But was caught behind on 16 followed by Kamran Akmal run out for 15 and Younis Khan bowled by Irfan Pathan in the next over.
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Original:  Pakistan lost three wickets in quick succession, when Salman But was caught behind on 16 followed by Kamran Akmal run out for 15 and Younis Khan bowled by Irfan Pathan in the next over.
Revised:  Pakistan lost three wickets in quick succession, when Salman Butt was caught behind on 16 followed by Kamran Akmal run out for 15 and Younis Khan bowled by Irfan Pathan in the next over.
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Original:  Mohammad Asif caught and bowled Gautam Gambhir in the first over and dismissed Virinder Sehwag, Yuvraj Singh and Dinesh Karthik cheaply, finishing with figures of 4-18.
Revised:  Mohammad Asif caught and bowled Gautam Gambhir in the first over and dismissed Virender Sehwag, Yuvraj Singh and Dinesh Karthik cheaply, finishing with figures of 4-18.
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Original:  Virinder Sehwag, Harbhajan Singh and Robin Uthappa all hit the target for India while Pakistan's Yasir Arafat, Umar Gul and Shahid Afridi missed.
Revised:  Virender Sehwag, Harbhajan Singh and Robin Uthappa all hit the target for India while Pakistan's Yasir Arafat, Umar Gul and Shahid Afridi missed.
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Original: The aircraft, a Bombardier Q400 (alternatively known as a de Havilland Canada Dash 8), crashed due to a landing gear failure after a nut worked loose, due in turn to rusting on the threads of it's bolt, according to the SLV's aircraft accident investigation committee report on Scandinavian Airlines Flight 1209.
Revised: The aircraft, a Bombardier Q400 (alternatively known as a de Havilland Canada Dash 8), crashed due to a landing gear failure after a nut worked loose, due in turn to rusting on the threads of its bolt, according to the SLV's aircraft accident investigation committee report on Scandinavian Airlines Flight 1209.
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Original: One of the tree south-african tries.
Revised: One of the three south-african tries.
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Original: One of the three south-african tries.
Revised: One of the three South African tries.
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Original: The show is thought to have been attended by about 20,000 people, and was delayed by a bout 30 minutes after the crash.
Revised: The show is thought to have been attended by about 20,000 people, and was delayed by about 30 minutes after the crash.
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Original: Authorities could not confirm any injuries or fatalities, but two Spitfires flew the missing man formation  shortly after the crash.
Revised: Authorities could not confirm any injuries or fatalities, but the missing man formation shortly after the crash.
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-8 (Nazimuddin, 1.1 ov), 2-24 (Tamim Iqbal, 2.1 ov), 3-34 (Mohammad Ashraful, 2.4 ov), 4-58 (Aftab Ahmed, 4.2 ov), 5-77 (Shakib Al Hasan, 7.2 ov), 6-101 (Mashrafe Mortaza, 10.4 ov), 7-119 (Alok Kapali, 15.3 ov), 8-131 (Farhad Reza, 17.2 ov), 9-134 (Mushfiqur Rahim, 18.3 ov), 10-144 (Syed Rasel, 19.3 ov)  
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-8 (Nazimuddin, 1.1 ov), 2-24 (Tamim Iqbal, 2.1 ov), 3-34 (Mohammad Ashraful, 2.4 ov), 4-58 (Aftab Ahmed, 4.2 ov), 5-77 (Shakib Al Hasan, 7.2 ov), 6-101 (Mashrafe Mortaza, 10.4 ov), 7-119 (Alok Kapali, 15.3 ov), 8-131 (Farhad Reza, 17.2 ov), 9-134 (Mushfiqur Rahim, 18.3 ov), 10-144 (Syed Rasel, 19.3 ov) Did not bat: M V Boucher, S M Pollock, J J van der Wath, V D Philander, M Ntini, M Morkel
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Original: Hamas, the current controlling government of Gaza is claiming that the Israel Defense Forces are preparing for an incursion into Gaza, and they are preparing for any such attempt, performing military exercises and drills to "surprise" Israeli forces with "ferocious fighting."
Revised: Hamas, the current terror movement controlling Gaza is claiming that the Israel Defense Forces are preparing for an incursion into Gaza, and they are preparing for any such attempt, performing military exercises and drills to "surprise" Israeli forces with "ferocious fighting."
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Original:  The U.S. also labels Fatah as a "terrorist organization."
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Original: New Zealand, one of the tournament favourites,  Portugal by 95 points.
Revised: New Zealand, one of the tournament favourites, defeated Portugal by 95 points.
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Original:  Wales are second with five points, ahead of Fiji on points difference, while Japan have one point and Canada are bottom of the group with no points     .
Revised:  Wales are second with five points, ahead of Fiji on points difference, while Japan have one point and Canada are bottom of the group with no points . .
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Original:  He added that the fire apeared to be an isolated incident.
Revised:  He added that the fire appeared to be an isolated incident.
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Original:  A fire broke out two decks below main deck, but was quickly extuiguished .
Revised:  A fire broke out two decks below main deck, but was quickly extuinguished .
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Original:  The ship has been layed up for repairs and modernising since may
Revised:  The ship has been layed up for repairs and modernizing since May
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