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Original: Raichō Hiratsuka (, transliterated according to the historical kana orthography, February 10, 1886 – May 24, 1971) was a writer, journalist, political activist, anarchist and pioneering Japanese feminist.
Revised: Hiratsuka Raichō (, transliterated according to the historical kana orthography, February 10, 1886 – May 24, 1971) was a writer, journalist, political activist, anarchist and pioneering Japanese feminist.
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Original:  Life Born Haru Hiratsuka (平塚 明 Hiratsuka Haru ) in Tokyo in 1886, the second daughter of a high ranking civil servant, and educated at Japan Women's University () in 1903, Hiratsuka came to be influenced by contemporary currents of European philosophy, as well as Zen Buddhism, of which she would become a devoted practitioner.
Revised:  Life Born Hiratsuka Haru (平塚 明 Hiratsuka Haru ) in Tokyo in 1886, the second daughter of a high ranking civil servant, and educated at Japan Women's University () in 1903, Hiratsuka came to be influenced by contemporary currents of European philosophy, as well as Zen Buddhism, of which she would become a devoted practitioner.
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Original:  Life Born Haru Hiratsuka (平塚 明 Hiratsuka Haru ) in Tokyo in 1886, the second daughter of a high ranking civil servant, and educated at Japan Women's University () in 1903, Hiratsuka came to be influenced by contemporary currents of European philosophy, as well as Zen Buddhism, of which she would become a devoted practitioner.
Revised:  Life Born Haru Hiratsuka (平塚 明 ) in Tokyo in 1886, the second daughter of a high ranking civil servant, and educated at Japan Women's University () in 1903, Hiratsuka came to be influenced by contemporary currents of European philosophy, as well as Zen Buddhism, of which she would become a devoted practitioner.
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Original:  Viljoen, who acted as  leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge.
Revised:  Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge.
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Original:  He served as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries in the cabinet of President Jacob Zuma from 2009 to 2014.
Revised:  He served as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries in the Cabinet of President Jacob Zuma from 2009 to 2014.
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Original:  He served as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries in the cabinet of President Jacob Zuma from 2009 to 2014.
Revised:  He served as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries in the cabinet of President Jacob Zuma from 2009-14.
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Original:  He completed his high school education at the Riebeeck High School in Randfontein, where he was headboy and Victor Ludorum in athletics.
Revised:  He completed his secondary education at Riebeeck High School in Randfontein, where he was headboy and Victor Ludorum in athletics.
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Original:  He completed his high school education at the Riebeeck High School in Randfontein, where he was headboy and Victor Ludorum in athletics.
Revised:  He completed his high school education at the Riebeeck High School in Randfontein, where he was head boy and Victor Ludorum in athletics.
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Original:  The son of former cabinet minister Connie Mulder, the young Mulder first worked as a lecturer at the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education, before being promoted to head of the university's communications department.
Revised:  The son of former Cabinet minister Connie Mulder, the young Mulder first worked as a lecturer at the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education, before being promoted to head of the university's communications department.
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Original:  The son of former cabinet minister Connie Mulder, the young Mulder first worked as a lecturer at the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education, before being promoted to head of the university's communications department.
Revised:  The son of former cabinet minister Connie Mulder, Pieter first worked as a lecturer at the Potchefstroom University for Christian Higher Education, before being promoted to head of the university's communications department.
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Original:  During the elections of 1994, the Freedom Front won nine seats in the National Assembly.
Revised:  At the election in 1994, the Freedom Front won nine seats in the National Assembly.
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Original:  This number was slashed to just three during the 1999 elections . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge .
Revised:  This number was slashed to just three at the 1999 elections . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge .
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Original:  This number was slashed to just three during the 1999 elections . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge .
Revised:  This number was slashed to just three during the 1999 general election . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge .
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Original:  This number was slashed to just three during the 1999 elections . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and left Mulder in charge .
Revised:  This number was slashed to just three during the 1999 elections . Viljoen, who acted as the leader since the party's founding, retired from politics in 2001 and Mulder succeeded him .
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Original:  During the elections in 2004  , the new "Freedom Front Plus" managed to gain four seats in the National Assembly.
Revised:  At the 2004 , the new "Freedom Front Plus" managed to gain four seats in the National Assembly.
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Original:  On 10 May 2009  President Jacob Zuma announced his appointment of Mulder as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries.
Revised:  On 10 May 2009 , President Jacob Zuma announced his appointment of Mulder as the Deputy Minister of Agriculture, Forestry and Fisheries.
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Original:  Mulder stepped down as leader of the Freedom Front Plus in late 2016 , and was replaced by fellow MP Pieter Groenewald.
Revised:  Mulder stepped down as leader of the Freedom Front Plus in late-2016 , and was replaced by fellow MP Pieter Groenewald.
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Original:  This number was slashed to just three at the 1999 general election.
Revised:  This number was reduced to three at the 1999 general election.
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Original: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), formerly known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
Revised: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), also known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
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Original: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), also known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
Revised: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), previously known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
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Original: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), previously known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
Revised:  Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
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Original: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), previously known as Wegener's granulomatosis (WG), is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
Revised: Granulomatosis with polyangiitis (GPA), previously known as Wegener's granulomatosis is an extremely rare long-term systemic disorder that involves the formation of granulomas and inflammation of blood vessels (vasculitis).
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Original:  Directive sentences: presents or suggests , in positive terms, a response or choice of responses to a situation or concept.
Revised:  Directive sentences: present or suggest , in positive terms, a response or choice of responses to a situation or concept.
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Original:  Affirmative sentences: enhances the meaning of statements and may express a commonly shared value or opinion.
Revised:  Affirmative sentences: enhance the meaning of statements and may express a commonly shared value or opinion.
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Original:  Control sentences: identifies personal strategies the individual will use to recall and apply information.
Revised:  Control sentences: identify personal strategies the individual will use to recall and apply information.
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Original:  Partial sentences: encourages the individual to make guesses regarding the next step in a situation, the response of another individual, or his/her own response.
Revised:  Partial sentences: encourage the individual to make guesses regarding the next step in a situation, the response of another individual, or his/her own response.
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Original: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( Autistic Spectrum Disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could “ interact in an effective and appropriate manner ” . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
Revised: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( autistic spectrum disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could “ interact in an effective and appropriate manner ” . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
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Original: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( Autistic Spectrum Disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could “ interact in an effective and appropriate manner ” . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
Revised: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( Autistic Spectrum Disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could " interact in an effective and appropriate manner ” . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
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Original: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( Autistic Spectrum Disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could “ interact in an effective and appropriate manner ” . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
Revised: Social Stories were devised as a tool to help individuals with ASD ( Autistic Spectrum Disorder ) better understand the nuances of interpersonal communication so that they could “ interact in an effective and appropriate manner " . Although the prescribed format was meant for high functioning people with basic communication skills,
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Original:  According to Attwood, “ A social story is written with the intention of providing information and tuition on what people in a given situation are doing, thinking or feeling, the sequence of events, the identification of significant social cues and their meaning, and the script of what to do or say;
Revised:  According to Attwood, " A social story is written with the intention of providing information and tuition on what people in a given situation are doing, thinking or feeling, the sequence of events, the identification of significant social cues and their meaning, and the script of what to do or say;
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Original:  in other words, the what, when, who and why aspects of social situations ” . It breaks down a challenging social situation into understandable steps by omitting irrelevant information and by being highly descriptive to help an individual with an ASD understand the entirety of a situation.
Revised:  in other words, the what, when, who and why aspects of social situations " . It breaks down a challenging social situation into understandable steps by omitting irrelevant information and by being highly descriptive to help an individual with an ASD understand the entirety of a situation.
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Original:  taking another ’ s point of view;
Revised:  taking another ' s point of view;
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Original:  Targeted use of social stories
Revised:  Targeted use 
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Original:  Nowadays modern diagnostic tools exist which allow physicians to easily locate and visualize all kinds of intracranial lesions without having to rely on indirect effects to make a complete diagnosis.
Revised:  Nowadays modern diagnostic tools exist which allow physicians to easily locate and visualize all kinds of intracranial lesions without having to rely on indirect effects to make a reliable diagnosis.
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Original:  Hence in those days, the mass effect of these abnormalities on surrounding structures was sometimes used to indirectly infer the existence of the primary abnormalities themselves, for example by using a cerebral angiography to observe the secondary vascular displacement caused by a subdural hematoma pushing on the brain, or by looking for a distortion caused by a tumor on the normal outline of the ventricles as depicted on a pneumoencephalogram.
Revised:  Therefore in those days, the mass effect of these abnormalities on surrounding structures was sometimes used to indirectly infer the existence of the primary abnormalities themselves, for example by using a cerebral angiography to observe the secondary vascular displacement caused by a subdural hematoma pushing on the brain, or by looking for a distortion caused by a tumor on the normal outline of the ventricles as depicted on a pneumoencephalogram.
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Original:  Unfortunately, these studies were often invasive and uncomfortable for patients and provided only a partial assessment of the condition being examined .
Revised:  Unfortunately, these studies were often invasive and uncomfortable for patients and provided only a partial assessment of the primary condition being evaluated .
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Original: In neurology,  mass effect is a general term applied to the effects exerted by any mass, including, for example, an evolving intracerebral hemorrhage (a bleeding within the skull) presenting with a clinically significant hematoma.
Revised: In neurology, a mass effect is a general term applied to the effects exerted by any mass, including, for example, an evolving intracerebral hemorrhage (a bleeding within the skull) presenting with a clinically significant hematoma.
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Original: In neurology,  mass effect is a general term applied to the effects exerted by any mass, including, for example, an evolving intracerebral hemorrhage (a bleeding within the skull) presenting with a clinically significant hematoma.
Revised: In neurology, mass effect is the effect exerted by any mass, including, for example, an evolving intracerebral hemorrhage (a bleeding within the skull) presenting with a clinically significant hematoma.
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Original:  (retrieved 21 Nov 2009) He joined the Saskatchewan arts community in 1973 and worked on community programming at the Norman MacKenzie Art Gallery in Regina until the mid-1970s.
Revised:  (retrieved 21 Nov 2009) He joined the Saskatchewan arts community in 1973 and worked on community programming at the Norman Mackenzie Art Gallery in Regina until the mid-1970s.
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Original: Wright, "Store Plan Insensitive", Regina Leader-Post, August 17, 2011. 
Revised: Wright, "Store Plan Insensitive", Regina Leader-Post, August 17, 2011. monkey
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Original: The Professor 200px|Statue of Toribio Rodriguez de Mendoza%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% His interest in education run in his family.
Revised:  200px|Statue of Toribio Rodriguez de Mendoza%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% His interest in education run in his family.
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Original: The Professor 200px|Statue of Toribio Rodriguez de Mendoza%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% His interest in education run in his family.
Revised: The Professor %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% His interest in education run in his family.
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Original:  He was the son of William Henry Purdon and Eliza Purdon ( nee' Tarr) who had come to the Cape Colony as children with the 1820 British Settlers.
Revised:  He was the son of William Henry Purdon and Eliza Purdon ( née Tarr) who had come to the Cape Colony as children with the 1820 British Settlers.
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Original:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Summerpride Foods at www.summerpride.co.za Port Alfred Off The Beaten Path Tips by PEE-WEE - VirtualTourist.com at members.virtualtourist.co
Revised:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Summerpride Foods at www.summerpride.co.za Port Alfred Off The Beaten Path Tips by PEE-WEE - VirtualTourist.com at members.virtualtourist.co
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Original:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Summerpride Foods at www.summerpride.co.za Port Alfred Off The Beaten Path Tips by PEE-WEE - VirtualTourist.com at members.virtualtourist.co
Revised:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Summerpride Foods at www.summerpride.co.za Port Alfred Off The Beaten Path Tips by PEE-WEE - VirtualTourist.com at members.virtualtourist.co
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Original:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Summerpride Foods at www.summerpride.co.za Port Alfred Off The Beaten Path Tips by PEE-WEE - VirtualTourist.com at members.virtualtourist.co
Revised:  The fruit had been brought by ship to Durban by a sailor having returned from Brazil . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: In 1790, a group of illustrated young people formed the Sociedad Académica de Amantes del País , with the purpose of discussing the national matters.
Revised:  Sociedad Académica de Amantes del País , with the purpose of discussing the national matters.
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Original:  therefore, it is interesting to us to know the participation of the doctors of the epoch and the content of the medical topics in this publicatio  
Revised:  therefore, it is interesting to us to know the participation of the doctors of the epoch and the content of the medical topics in this publication. 
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Original:  therefore, it is interesting to us to know the participation of the doctors of the epoch and the content of the medical topics in this publicatio  
Revised:  therefore, it is interesting to us to know the participation of the doctors of the epoch and the content of the medical topics in this publicatio Publications 
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Original: This group, which recognized as  founder Joseph Rossi and Ruby , was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
Revised: This group, which recognized as its founder Joseph Rossi and Ruby , was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
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Original: This group, which recognized as  founder Joseph Rossi and Ruby , was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
Revised: This group, which recognized as founder Joseph Rossi , was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
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Original:  On January 2, 1791  there went out the first number of the Peruvian Mercury and had a good reception, being counted 220 subscribers.
Revised:  On January 2, 1791 , there went out the first number of the Peruvian Mercury and had a good reception, being counted 220 subscribers.
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Original:  In effect, on June 12, 1791  the Critical Weekly paper appeared , for work of the Spanish Franciscan Brother Antonio Olavarrieta.
Revised:  In effect, on June 12, 1791 , the Critical Weekly paper appeared , for work of the Spanish Franciscan Brother Antonio Olavarrieta.
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Original:  In effect, on June 12, 1791  the Critical Weekly paper appeared , for work of the Spanish Franciscan Brother Antonio Olavarrieta.
Revised:  In effect, on June 12, 1791 the Critical Weekly paper appeared for work of the Spanish Franciscan Brother Antonio Olavarrieta.
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Original: This group, which recognized as its founder Joseph Rossi , was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
Revised: Joseph Rossi founded the group, which was shaped by José Maria Egaña, Demetrio Guasque, Hipólito Unanue and Jacinto Calero y Moreira.
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Original:  The four first ones together with another two acquaintances for the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto , more three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, three years had met behind during little less than one year, forming the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
Revised:  Together with two acquaintances under the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto , more three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, three years had met behind during little less than one year, forming the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
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Original:  The four first ones together with another two acquaintances for the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto , more three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, three years had met behind during little less than one year, forming the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
Revised:  The four first ones together with another two acquaintances for the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto and three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, three years had met behind during little less than one year, forming the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
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Original:  The four first ones together with another two acquaintances for the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto , more three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, three years had met behind during little less than one year, forming the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
Revised:  The four first ones together with another two acquaintances for the pseudonyms of Mindirido and Agelasto , more three ladies known as Dorálice, Florida and Egeria, had previously formed the Society Harmonica , to discuss literature and the public news.
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