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Original: The Premier of the state of Western Australia  , Dr Geoff Gallop, gave an apology to children physically and sexually abused in institutional care in the state between the 1920s and 1970s, in reaction to a federal senate inquiry into institutional child abuse published last year.
Revised: The Premier of the state of Western Australia (WA) , Dr Geoff Gallop, gave an apology to children physically and sexually abused in institutional care in the state between the 1920s and 1970s, in reaction to a federal senate inquiry into institutional child abuse published last year.
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Original: The Premier of the state of Western Australia  , Dr Geoff Gallop, gave an apology to children physically and sexually abused in institutional care in the state between the 1920s and 1970s, in reaction to a federal senate inquiry into institutional child abuse published last year.
Revised: The Premier of the state of Western Australia , Dr Geoff Gallop, gave an apology to children physically and sexually abused in institutional care in the state between the 1920s and 1970s, in reaction to an Australian Senate inquiry into institutional child abuse published last year.
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Original:  The inquiry also found that an apology was important symbolism in recognising past wrongs and helping victims gain closure  .
Revised:  The inquiry had found that an apology was important symbolism in recognising past wrongs and helping victims gain closure .
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Original: Wikinews reached out  to former U.S. and 2014 Colorado Tom Tancredo earlier this week for his response to the secessionist proposal of eight counties.
Revised: Wikinews reached out earlier this week to former U.S. and 2014 Colorado Tom Tancredo earlier this week for his response to the secessionist proposal of eight counties.
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Original: Wikinews reached out  to former U.S. and 2014 Colorado Tom Tancredo earlier this week for his response to the secessionist proposal of eight counties.
Revised: Wikinews reached out to former U.S. and 2014 Colorado Tom Tancredo for his response to the secessionist proposal of eight counties.
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Original:  The secession idea came about last week as the commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest in withdrawing from Colorado due to differences with the state government over gun control , agricultural regulation, and oil and gas regulation .
Revised:  The secession idea came about last week as the commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest in withdrawing from Colorado due to differences with the state government over gun control and the perceived overregulation of agriculture and the oil and gas regulation .
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Original:  The secession idea came about last week as the commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest in withdrawing from Colorado due to differences with the state government over gun control , agricultural regulation, and oil and gas regulation .
Revised:  The secession idea came about last week as the commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest in withdrawing from Colorado due to differences with the state government over gun control , agricultural regulation, and oil and gas industries .
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Original:  In response to the proposal, Governor Hickenlooper's spokesman Eric Brown declared the states'policies as "   popular with rural and urban voters.
Revised:  In response to the proposal, Governor Hickenlooper's spokesman Eric Brown conceded that " popular with rural and urban voters.
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Original:  In response to the proposal, Governor Hickenlooper's spokesman Eric Brown declared the states'policies as "   popular with rural and urban voters.
Revised:  In response to the proposal, Governor Hickenlooper's spokesman Eric Brown declared the states'policies as " n popular with rural and urban voters.
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Original:  Not everyone agrees, of course, but we keep trying.
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Original:  " According to Tancredo, he should be given "a chance to change the relationship between rural and urban Colorado ... because I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
Revised:  " According to Tancredo, Hickenlooper's policies impose barriers on rural Colorodans, which he would remove as governor. Tancredo feels he can better address the rift between rural and urban Colorado ... because I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
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Original:  " According to Tancredo, he should be given "a chance to change the relationship between rural and urban Colorado ... because I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
Revised:  " According to Tancredo, he should be given "a chance to change the relationship between rural and urban Colorado because I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
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Original:  " According to Tancredo, he should be given "a chance to change the relationship between rural and urban Colorado ... because I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
Revised:  " According to Tancredo, he should be given "a chance to change the relationship between rural and urban Colorado ... because, " I do not believe that rural Coloradans are, as Governor Hickenlooper has called them, 'backward thinkers.
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Original: '" Tancredo refers to Governor Hickenlooper's 2010 comments, which accused rural Coloradans and other Westerners of "backwards thinking" for their views on LGBT issues   .
Revised: '" Tancredo refers to Governor Hickenlooper's 2010 comments, which accused rural Coloradans and other Westerners of "backwards thinking" for their views on LGBT issues . .
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Original: According to Tancredo, Hickenlooper's policies impose barriers on rural Colorodans that he plans to remove if elected governor.
Revised: According to Tancredo, Hickenlooper's policies impose barriers on rural Coloradans that he plans to remove if elected governor.
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Original:  Stunt pilot and Marine veteran Jim LeRoy, age 46, died on Saturday, 28 July 2007 at the Dayton Air Show in Ohio,  while performing in his signature  Bulldog Pitts aircraft, with his companion pilot in a stunt routine.
Revised:  Stunt pilot and Marine veteran Jim LeRoy, age 46, died on Saturday, 28 July 2007 at the Dayton Air Show in Ohio, United States, while performing in his signature Bulldog Pitts aircraft, with his companion pilot in a stunt routine.
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Original:  The two planes executed a looping cross near to the ground, but while LeRoy's companion pulled up, the Bulldog never did, hitting the ground and skidding to a stop, engulfed in flames.
Revised:  The two planes executed a looping cross near to the ground, but while LeRoy's companion pulled up, LeRoy's Bulldog never did, hitting the ground and skidding to a stop, engulfed in flames.
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Original:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to 'remove cars as fast as possible' . External links Video of the aftermath LeRoy's official websit
Revised:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to 'remove cars as fast as possible' External links Video of the aftermath LeRoy's official websit
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Original:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to 'remove cars as fast as possible' . External links Video of the aftermath LeRoy's official websit
Revised:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to 'remove cars as fast as possible' . 
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Original:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to ' remove cars as fast as possible '
Revised:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to " remove cars as fast as possible '
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Original:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to ' remove cars as fast as possible '
Revised:  The show was then closed for the day, to allow the investigation to continue, and airport police stood by to ' remove cars as fast as possible .
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Original:  LeRoy unfortunately died while the helicopter was making its way to Miami Valley Hospital.
Revised:  LeRoy died while the helicopter was making its way to Miami Valley Hospital.
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Original: [[Image:AlbertoContador.jpg|Alberto Contador on the streets of Albi, France during stage 13. ]] Alberto Contador of Spain has won the 2007 Tour de France general classification.
Revised: [[Image:AlbertoContador.jpg|Alberto Contador on the streets of Albi, France during stage 13. ]] Alberto aontador of Spain has won the 2007 Tour de France general classification.
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Original: [[Image:AlbertoContador.jpg|Alberto Contador on the streets of Albi, France during stage 13. ]] Alberto aontador of Spain has won the 2007 Tour de France general classification.
Revised: [[Image:AlbertoContador.jpg|Alberto Contador on the streets of Albi, France during stage 13. ]] Alberto Contador of Spain has won the 2007 Tour de France general classification.
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Original:  Although its passengers escaped uninjured, the attack  injured four other people, including a policeman.
Revised:  While its passengers escaped uninjured, the attack injured four other people, including a policeman.
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Original:  Although its passengers escaped uninjured, the attack  injured four other people, including a policeman.
Revised:  Although its passengers escaped uninjured, the attack is understood to have injured four other people, including a policeman.
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Original:  While its passengers escaped unhurt, the attack is understood to have injured four other people, including a policeman.
Revised:  Whilst its passengers escaped unhurt, the attack is understood to have injured four other people, including a policeman.
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Original:  The service, the first of its kind in almost 60 years, transported 31 Pakistani Kashmiris into the Indian controlled section of Kashmir as it passed the cease fire line between India and Pakistan, dubbed the 'Line of Control'.
Revised:  The service, the first of its kind in almost 60 years, transported Pakistani and Indian Kashmiris across the conflict torn region, passing the cease fire line between India and Pakistan, dubbed the 'Line of Control'.
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Original:  The bus trips  are seen as a major step forward in the growing peaceful relations between India and Pakistan , as the two nuclear powers both seek to control the Kashmir region .
Revised:  The bus trips are seen as a major step forward in the growing peaceful relations between India and Pakistan . The two nuclear powers both seek to control the Kashmir region .
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Original:  The divided region has been a flashpoint for  over 50 years.
Revised:  The divided region has been a flashpoint for conflict for over 50 years.
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Original:  "A door has opened," said Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh today as the bus set off on its journey . "Pakistan and especially President General Pervez Musharraf have helped us open this door and without their support, the door would not have opened.
Revised:  "A door has opened," said Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh today as the bus set off from Srinagar . "Pakistan and especially President General Pervez Musharraf have helped us open this door and without their support, the door would not have opened.
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Original:  Observe Russia, China and Cuba  " Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes tryed to reduce the impact of Dom Scheid declarations this Wednesday.
Revised:  Observe Russia, China and Cuba . " Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes tryed to reduce the impact of Dom Scheid declarations this Wednesday.
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Original:  According to Dom Scheid the succession of John Paul II is not a subject to be treated by the President 
Revised:  According to Dom Scheid the succession of John Paul II is not a subject to be treated by the President .
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Original: The Brazilian cardinal Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid did harsh critics to the Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva after arriving in Rome , this Tuesday.
Revised: The Brazilian cardinal Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid did harsh critics to the Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva after arriving in Rome on Tuesday.
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Original:  The critics were an answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo after he asking if it is time of Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The criticisms were in answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo after he asking if it is time of Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  The critics were an answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo after he asking if it is time of Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The critics were an answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it is time of Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  The critics were an answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo after he asking if it is time of Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The critics were an answer to a jornalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo after he asking if it is now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  You will mess everything because he and the Holly Spirit don't agree very well.
Revised:  You will mess everything because he and the Holy Spirit don't agree very well.
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President  opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio  interview.
Revised:  He commented on the Brazilian President 's opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio interview.
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President  opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio  interview.
Revised:  He commented on the Brazilian President opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio interview.
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President  opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio  interview.
Revised:  He commented on the Brazilian President opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government declined to comment on Dom Eusébio interview.
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President  opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio  interview.
Revised:  He commented on the Brazilian President opinions about the new Pope: "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunchs ." The Brazilian government didn't want to comment on Dom Eusébio 's interview.
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Original:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes tryed to reduce the impact of Dom Scheid declarations this Wednesday.
Revised:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes , Archbishop of São Paulo, tried to play down Dom Scheid statements on Wednesday.
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Original:  Dom Eusébio said that the interview was made in an inappropriate occasion, after a fatigued airplane trip.
Revised:  Dom Eusébio said that the interview was made in an inappropriate occasion, after a fatiguing airplane trip.
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Original:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid , 73, is the Archbishop of Rio de Janeiro.
Revised:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid is 73.
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Original:  Dom Cláudio Hummes, 71, is Archbishop of São Paulo and he is seen as a serious Latin-American candidate to the sucession of Pope John Paul II
Revised:  Dom Cláudio Hummes, 71, is seen as a serious Latin-American candidate to the sucession of Pope John Paul II
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Original:  The criticisms were in answer to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it is now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The criticism was in response to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it is now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  The criticisms were in answer to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it is now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The criticisms were in answer to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it was now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  You will mess everything because he and the Holy Spirit don't agree very well.
Revised:  You 'll mess up everything because he and the Holy Spirit don't agree very well.
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Original:  You will mess everything because he and the Holy Spirit don't agree very well.
Revised:  You will mess everything because he and the Holy Spirit don't agree that well.
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope : "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
Revised:  Commenting on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope : "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
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Original:  He commented on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope : "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
Revised:  He commented on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope he said "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
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Original:  His attitudes are not logic under our faith.
Revised:  His attitudes are not logical under our faith.
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Original:  Lula is not catholic , he is chaotic."
Revised:  Lula is not Catholic , he is chaotic."
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Original:  He criticized the government: " He is very badly  advised.
Revised:  He went on to criticize the government, saying " He is very badly advised.
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Original:  We are almost in a dictatorship because everybody is from PT [Workers' Party].
Revised:  We are almost under a dictatorship because everybody is from PT [Workers' Party].
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Original:  (...) I have some doubts about the Lula's words.
Revised:  (...) I have some doubts about Lula's words.
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Original:  Politicians say something during a time and they say other thing another day ." And he criticized the current Brazilian external politics : "It is extremely towards  left.(...) I think [about the visit of President Lula da Silva to Fidel Castro in Cuba] that they were two fools meeting each other.
Revised:  Politicians say something during a time and they say other things later ." And he criticized the current Brazilian external politics : "It is extremely towards left.(...) I think [about the visit of President Lula da Silva to Fidel Castro in Cuba] that they were two fools meeting each other.
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Original:  Politicians say something during a time and they say other thing another day ." And he criticized the current Brazilian external politics : "It is extremely towards  left.(...) I think [about the visit of President Lula da Silva to Fidel Castro in Cuba] that they were two fools meeting each other.
Revised:  Politicians say something during a time and they say other thing another day ." And he criticized the current Brazilian external politics : "It is extremely towards the left.(...) I think [about the visit of President Lula da Silva to Fidel Castro in Cuba] that they were two fools meeting each other.
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Original:  Who does want to be Pope?"
Revised:  Who want to be Pope?"
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Original:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes, Archbishop of São Paulo, tried to play down Dom Scheid's statements on Wednesday.
Revised:  Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid and Dom Cláudio Hummes, Archbishop of São Paulo, tried to play down Scheid's statements on Wednesday.
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Original:  According to Dom Scheid  the succession of John Paul II is not a subject to be treated by the President . Dom Cláudio Hummes said that President Lula da Silva is Catholic, in his way.
Revised:  According to Dom Scheid , the succession of John Paul II is not a subject to be treated by the President . Dom Cláudio Hummes said that President Lula da Silva is Catholic, in his way.
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Original:  According to Dom Scheid  the succession of John Paul II is not a subject to be treated by the President . Dom Cláudio Hummes said that President Lula da Silva is Catholic, in his way.
Revised:  According to Dom Scheid the succession of John Paul II is not a subject which the President should address. Dom Cláudio Hummes said that President Lula da Silva is Catholic, in his way.
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Original: The Brazilian cardinal Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid, Archbishop of Rio de Janeiro, harshly criticized the Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva after arriving in Rome on Tuesday.
Revised: The Brazilian cardinal Dom Eusébio Oscar Scheid, Archbishop of Rio de Janeiro, harshly criticized Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva after arriving in Rome on Tuesday.
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Original:  The criticism was in response to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who had asked if it was now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
Revised:  The criticism was in response to a journalist from the Brazilian newspaper O Estado de São Paulo who asked if it was now time for Brazil to have a Pope after having a worker President.
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Original:  Dom Eusébio said: "No, don't put Lula [  Brazilian Presidente Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva] in this story, not yet.
Revised:  Dom Eusébio said: "No, don't put Lula [ the Brazilian Presidente Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva] in this story, not yet.
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Original:  Commenting on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope he said "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
Revised:  Commenting on the Brazilian President's opinions about the new Pope , said "Lula shouldn't try to interfere or give hunches."
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Original:  Furthermore, Archbishop Eusébio said : " Lula doesn't have a straight faith.
Revised:  He also added that, " Lula doesn't have a straight faith.
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Original:  Furthermore, Archbishop Eusébio said : " Lula doesn't have a straight faith.
Revised:  Furthermore, Archbishop Eusébio said : " Lula doesn't have a straight faith.
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Original:  He went on to criticize the government, saying " Lula is very poorly advised.
Revised:  He went on to criticize the government, saying " Lula is very poorly advised.
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