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Original:  In a war of position, a counterhegemonic movement attempts through persuasion or propaganda to increase the number of people who share its view on the hegemonic order whereas in a war of movement the counterhegemonic tendencies which have grown large enough  overthrow, violently or democratically, the current hegemony and establish themselves as a new historic bloc.
Revised:  In a war of position, a counterhegemonic movement attempts through persuasion or propaganda to increase the number of people who share its view on the hegemonic order whereas in a war of movement the counterhegemonic tendencies which have grown large enough to overthrow, violently or democratically, the current hegemony and establish themselves as a new historic bloc.
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Original:  Furthermore, Karl Polanyi, Karl Marx, Max Weber, Niccolò Machiavelli, Max Horkheimer, Theodor Adorno and Michel Foucault are cited as major sources within the critical theory of IR.
Revised:  Karl Polanyi, Karl Marx, Max Weber, Niccolò Machiavelli, Max Horkheimer, Theodor Adorno and Michel Foucault are cited as major sources within the critical theory of IR.
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Original: Infobox basketball biography | name = Carlos Loyzaga | image = File:CarlosLoyzaga.jpg | number = 41 | position = Guard | league = | team = | nationality = Filipino | birth_date = | birth_place = Pampanga, Commonwealth of the Philippines | death_date = | death_place = Manila, Philippines | height_ft = 5 | height_in = 10 | weight_kg = | college = | career_start = | career_end = | years1 = | team1 = | highlights = Carlos Velasco Badion (August 16, 1935 –
Revised:  | highlights = Carlos Velasco Badion (August 16, 1935 –
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Original: Infobox basketball biography | name = Carlos Loyzaga | image = File:CarlosLoyzaga.jpg | number = 41 | position = Guard | league = | team = | nationality = Filipino | birth_date = | birth_place = Pampanga, Commonwealth of the Philippines | death_date = | death_place = Manila, Philippines | height_ft = 5 | height_in = 10 | weight_kg = | college = | career_start = | career_end = | years1 = | team1 = | highlights = Carlos Velasco Badion (August 16, 1935 –
Revised: Infobox basketball biography | name = Carlos Loyzaga | image = File:CarlosLoyzaga.jpg | number = 41 | position = Guard | league = | team = | nationality = Filipino | birth_date = | birth_place = Pampanga, Commonwealth of the Philippines | death_date = | death_place = Manila, Philippines | height_ft = 5 | height_in = 10 | weight_kg = | college = | career_start = | career_end = | years1 = | team1 = Carlos Velasco Badion (August 16, 1935 –
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Original: Basketball players from Metro Manila Category:  People from Pampanga  Category:Asian Games medalists in basketball Category:Basketball players at the 1958 Asian Games Category:Philippines men's national basketball team players Category:Filipino men's basketball players Category:Crispa Redmanizers players Category:Mapúa University alumni Category:Asian Games gold medalists for the Philippines Category:Medalists at the 1958 Asian Games Category:20th-century Filipino businesspeop
Revised: Basketball players from Metro Manila Category: Basketball players from Pampanga Category: People from Pampanga Category:Asian Games medalists in basketball Category:Basketball players at the 1958 Asian Games Category:Philippines men's national basketball team players Category:Filipino men's basketball players Category:Crispa Redmanizers players Category:Mapúa University alumni Category:Asian Games gold medalists for the Philippines Category:Medalists at the 1958 Asian Games Category:20th-century Filipino businesspeop
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Original:  Portable Surgical Hospitals (PSH) were a type of field hospital.
Revised: Within the United States Army during World War II, Portable Surgical Hospitals (PSH) were a type of field hospital.
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Original:  The PSH were units of the United States Army Medical Corps designed to be man-portable by the team manning the hospital.
Revised:  They were units of the United States Army Medical Corps designed to be man-portable by the team manning the hospital.
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Original:   Chief Surgeon of the US Army Forces,
Revised:  the Chief Surgeon of the US Army Forces,
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Original:  What really marked a radical departure was that all of the unit's equipment, medical and surgical supplies, and rations could weigh no more than the 29 men could personally transport.
Revised:  A radical departure was that all of the unit's equipment, medical and surgical supplies, and rations could weigh no more than the 29 men could personally transport.
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 Notes 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Edit intent: fluency
Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 Shock Treatment 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
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Original: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 | style="text-align:center;"| –
Revised: AUS !Can Top 100 ! Notes |- | 1972 | They Only Come Out at Night | style="text-align:center;"| 3 | style="text-align:center;"| 28 | style="text-align:center;"| 4 | US: 2x Platinum |- | 1974 | Shock Treatment | style="text-align:center;"| 13 –
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Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
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Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – 6 cd compilation set |-
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set |-
Revised:  | style="text-align:center;"| 9 | US: Gold #69 Can Year End |- | 1975 | The Edgar Winter Group with Rick Derringer | style="text-align:center;"| 124 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | |- | 2018 | I've Got News for You, 1971–1977 | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | style="text-align:center;"| – | 6 cd compilation set 
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Original: Winter also kept busy doing session work, playing saxophone on 'Meat Loaf's "All Revved Up with No Place to Go", Dan Hartman's solo hit "Instant Replay", Tina Turner's "Simply the Best" and David Lee Roth's remake of "Just A Gigolo", as well as appearing on material by Rick Derringer, Johnny Winter, Ronnie Montrose, Todd Rundgren, Michael McDonald and many others.
Revised: Winter also kept busy doing session work, playing saxophone on 'Meat Loaf's "All Revved Up with No Place to Go", Dan Hartman's solo hit "Instant Replay", Tina Turner's "Simply the Best" and David Lee Roth's remake of "Just a Gigolo", as well as appearing on material by Rick Derringer, Johnny Winter, Ronnie Montrose, Todd Rundgren, Michael McDonald and many others.
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Original:  Edgar Winter with Ringo Starr in 2011 Winter's music has been used in many film and television projects, including Netherworld, Air America, Dazed and Confused, My Cousin Vinny, Encino Man, Son in Law, What's Love Got to do With It, Wayne's World 2, Starkid, Wag the Dog, Knockabout Guys, Duets, Radio, The Simpsons, Queer as Folk, and Tupac Resurrection.
Revised:  Edgar Winter with Ringo Starr in 2011 Winter's music has been used in many film and television projects, including Netherworld, Air America, Dazed and Confused, My Cousin Vinny, Encino Man, Son in Law, What's Love Got to Do with It, Wayne's World 2, Starkid, Wag the Dog, Knockabout Guys, Duets, Radio, The Simpsons, Queer as Folk, and Tupac Resurrection.
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Original:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" is featured as "Runnin " (Dying To Live) in the film Tupac Resurrection, the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
Revised:  Winter's song "Dying to Live" is featured as "Runnin (Dying to Live)" in the film Tupac Resurrection, the biography on the life of rapper Tupac Shakur.
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Original:  In 2017, Cherry Red released a four-CD remastered compilation of all of the Edgar Winter solo albums from 1970 until 1980, entitled Tell Me In A Whisper: The Solo Albums 1970 - 1980.
Revised:  In 2017, Cherry Red released a four-CD remastered compilation of all of the Edgar Winter solo albums from 1970 until 1980, entitled Tell Me in a Whisper: The Solo Albums 1970 - 1980.
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Original:  In 2018, Cherry Red also released a remastered six-CD compilation of the Edgar Winter: White Trash Band and the Edgar Winter Band albums entitled I've Got News For You: Featuring the Edgar Winter Group & Edgar Winter's White Trash 1971 - 1977.
Revised:  In 2018, Cherry Red also released a remastered six-CD compilation of the Edgar Winter: White Trash Band and the Edgar Winter Band albums entitled I've Got News for You: Featuring the Edgar Winter Group & Edgar Winter's White Trash 1971 - 1977.
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Original: By the time Edgar Winter left his hometown in 1963, he was already a proficient musician . Career 200px|The Edgar Winter Group, Oct.1, 1975- L to R: Chuck Ruff, Rick Derringer, Dan Hartman, Edgar Winter.
Revised: Winter had already mastered numerous instruments and written music before he left his family home . Career 200px|The Edgar Winter Group, Oct.1, 1975- L to R: Chuck Ruff, Rick Derringer, Dan Hartman, Edgar Winter.
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Original:  Winter 's music encompasses many different genres, including rock, jazz, blues, and pop.
Revised:  Winter composed and performed songs of numerous genres, including rock, jazz, blues, and pop.
Edit intent: clarity