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Original:  There are many different dimensions of land change science , ranging from quantifying the ecological effects of land cover change  to understanding the socio-environmental drivers for land-use decisions at an institutional level.
Revised:  There are many different dimensions of land change science , ranging from quantifying the ecological effects of land cover change , to understanding the socio-environmental drivers for land-use decisions at an institutional level.
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Original:  In the course of monitoring and assessing land cover and land use changes, scientists look at several factors, including where are land-cover and land-use changing, what is the extent and over what time scale and how do the changes vary from year to year.
Revised:  In the course of monitoring and assessing land cover and land use changes, scientists look at several factors, including where land-cover and land-use changing, what is the extent and over what time scale and how do the changes vary from year to year.
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Original:  In the course of monitoring and assessing land cover and land use changes, scientists look at several factors, including where are land-cover and land-use changing, what is the extent and over what time scale and how do the changes vary from year to year.
Revised:  In the course of monitoring and assessing land cover and land use changes, scientists look at several factors, including where are land-cover and land-use are changing, the extent and over what time scale and how do the changes vary from year to year.
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Original:  These tools, particularly satellite imaging, can allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and therefore create a consistent, long-term data record which can then be used quantify change variability over time.
Revised:  These tools, particularly satellite imagery, allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and therefore create a consistent, long-term data record which can then be used quantify change variability over time.
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Original:  These tools, particularly satellite imaging, can allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and therefore create a consistent, long-term data record which can then be used quantify change variability over time.
Revised:  These tools, particularly satellite imaging, can allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and create a consistent, long-term data record which can then be used quantify change variability over time.
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Original:  These tools, particularly satellite imaging, can allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and therefore create a consistent, long-term data record which can then be used quantify change variability over time.
Revised:  These tools, particularly satellite imaging, can allow land change scientists to accurately monitor land-change rates and therefore create a consistent, long-term record to quantify change variability over time.
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Original:  By better understanding patterns in changes in land cover , scientists can determine the consequences of these changes and predict the impact of future changes in land management.
Revised:  Through observing patterns in land cover changes , scientists can determine the consequences of these changes and predict the impact of future changes in land management.
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Original:  By better understanding patterns in changes in land cover , scientists can determine the consequences of these changes and predict the impact of future changes in land management.
Revised:  By better understanding patterns in changes in land cover , scientists can determine the consequences of these changes , predict the impact of future changes in land management.
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Original: ]] An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
Revised: ]] The rapid decline of the Aral Sea is an example how local-scale land use and land change can have compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
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Original: ]] An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
Revised: ]] An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural climatic cycles, how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
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Original: ]] An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
Revised: ]] An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study such changes .
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Original:  However, as a result of a water diversion project  undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan,  the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
Revised:  However, a water diversion project undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
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Original:  However, as a result of a water diversion project  undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan,  the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
Revised:  However, as a result of a water diversion project , undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
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Original:  However, as a result of a water diversion project  undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan,  the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
Revised:  However, as a result of a water diversion project undertaken by the Soviet Union to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
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Original:  However, as a result of a water diversion project  undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan,  the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
Revised:  However, as a result of a water diversion project undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, resulted in the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
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Original:  However, as a result of a water diversion project  undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan,  the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
Revised:  However, as a result of a water diversion project undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, the Aral Sea losing 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume.
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Original:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Sea 's fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands  .
Revised:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the sea 's fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands .
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Original:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Sea 's fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands  .
Revised:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Sea 's fishing industry and the salinization of agricultural lands .
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Original:  This use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of  land change science.
Revised:  This use of modeling and satellite imagery to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of land change science.
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Original:  This use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of  land change science.
Revised:  This use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of the scope of land change science.
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Original:  Risk and vulnerability Modeling risk and vulnerability is also one of the many practical applications of land change science .
Revised:  Risk and vulnerability Modeling risk and vulnerability is also one of land change science .
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Original:  The ability to develop accurate predictions of how human activity will influence land cover change over time and the impact that these changes will have on both ecological sustainability and human societies can inform the creation of policy designed to address these changes.
Revised:  The ability to develop accurate predictions of how human activity will influence land cover change over time , as well as the impact that these changes will have on both ecological sustainability and human societies can inform the creation of policy designed to address these changes.
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Original:  The ability to develop accurate predictions of how human activity will influence land cover change over time and the impact that these changes will have on both ecological sustainability and human societies can inform the creation of policy designed to address these changes.
Revised:  The ability to develop accurate predictions of how human activity will influence land cover change over time and the impact that such changes have on the sustainability of ecological and human systems, can inform the creation of policy designed to address these changes.
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Original:  Modeling risk and vulnerability requires analyses of community sensitivity to hazards as well as an understanding of geographic distributions of people and infrastructure, coupled with an ability to calculate the likelihood of occurrence for specific disturbance factors . Land change modeling A key method for studying risk and vulnerability in the context of land change science is land change modeling (LCM), which can be used to simulate changes and land use and land cover.
Revised:  Modeling risk and vulnerability requires analyses of community sensitivity to hazards , an understanding of geographic distributions of people and infrastructure, coupled with an ability to calculate the likelihood of occurrence for specific disturbance factors . Land change modeling A key method for studying risk and vulnerability in the context of land change science is land change modeling (LCM), which can be used to simulate changes and land use and land cover.
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Original:  Modeling risk and vulnerability requires analyses of community sensitivity to hazards as well as an understanding of geographic distributions of people and infrastructure, coupled with an ability to calculate the likelihood of occurrence for specific disturbance factors . Land change modeling A key method for studying risk and vulnerability in the context of land change science is land change modeling (LCM), which can be used to simulate changes and land use and land cover.
Revised:  Modeling risk and vulnerability requires analyses of community sensitivity to hazards as well as an understanding of geographic distributions of people and infrastructure, and accurate calculation of the probability of specific disturbances occurring . Land change modeling A key method for studying risk and vulnerability in the context of land change science is land change modeling (LCM), which can be used to simulate changes and land use and land cover.
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Original:  LCMs can be used to predict how land use and land cover may change under alternate circumstances, which is useful for risk assessment because it can be used to predict impact and inform policy changes , albeit with some uncertainty.
Revised:  LCMs can be used to predict how land use and land cover may change under alternate circumstances, which is useful for risk assessment because it can be used to inform policy decisions , albeit with some uncertainty.
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Original:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves a great deal of quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover in order to identify patternsthat emerge from this data , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary and also includes social and economic components.
Revised:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover in order to identify patternsthat emerge from this data , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary and also includes social and economic components.
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Original:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves a great deal of quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover in order to identify patternsthat emerge from this data , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary and also includes social and economic components.
Revised:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves a great deal of quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover and the analysis of emergent patterns , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary and also includes social and economic components.
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Original:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves a great deal of quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover in order to identify patternsthat emerge from this data , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary and also includes social and economic components.
Revised:  Human impact and land change science Although land change science involves a great deal of quantifying the location, extent, and variability of land change cover in order to identify patternsthat emerge from this data , it remains fundamentally interdisciplinary , including social and economic components.
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Original:  Moreover, human altering of ecosystem services in order to reap short term benefits has now affected the ability of biological systems to support human needs.
Revised:  More generally, maximizing natural resources and ecosystem services for short-term benefits often hinders the long-term resilience of ecosystems and in turn, their ability to support human needs.
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Original:  Given the important role that humans play in land cover change, and in order to understand land change patterns and how they affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
Revised:  Given the important role that humans play in land cover change, and to understand land change patterns and how they affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
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Original:  Given the important role that humans play in land cover change, and in order to understand land change patterns and how they affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
Revised:  Given the important role that humans play in land cover change, and in order to understand land change patterns and their affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
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Original:  Below are some examples of land use and land cover change that play a key role in the social and economic components of land change science.
Revised:  Below are some examples of land use and land cover change that play a key role in the social and economic dimensions of land change science.
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Original: Deforestation in terms  of land change science  is the systematic and permanent conversion of previously forested land for other uses.
Revised: Deforestation in terms of land change science , is the systematic and permanent conversion of previously forested land for other uses.
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Original:  Forests are a vital part of the global ecosystem , and are essential to carbon capture, ecological processes, and biodiversity.
Revised:  Forests are a vital part of the global ecosystem and are essential to carbon capture, ecological processes, and biodiversity.
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Original:  Furthermore , tropical forests in particular support at least two-thirds of the world's biodiversity, and sustained changes in land cover in these regions is believed to be contributing to a mass extinction.
Revised:  Further , tropical forests in particular support at least two-thirds of the world's biodiversity, and sustained changes in land cover in these regions is believed to be contributing to a mass extinction.
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Original:  Furthermore , tropical forests in particular support at least two-thirds of the world's biodiversity, and sustained changes in land cover in these regions is believed to be contributing to a mass extinction.
Revised:  Furthermore , tropical forests in particular support at least two-thirds of the world's biodiversity, and sustained changes in land cover in these regions are believed to be contributing to a mass extinction.
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Original:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
Revised:  Given the severe ecological consequences resulting from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
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Original:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
Revised:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven forest land use conversion , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
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Original:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
Revised:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the continuing downward trend in forest cover, to effectively model and evaluate patterns of land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
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Original:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
Revised:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover , as well as the knowledge that forest covercontinues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change , scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
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Original:  For instance,  deforestation is often thought of as the product of the development of industrial agriculture.
Revised:  For instance, deforestation is often viewed as the product of the development of industrial agriculture.
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Original:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
Revised:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forest deforestation is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
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Original:  As land cover changes and forest is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which in turn prompts people to move again to previously untouched forestand restart the process of deforestation.
Revised:  As forest cover is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which in turn prompts people to move again to previously untouched forestand restart the process of deforestation.
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Original:  As land cover changes and forest is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which in turn prompts people to move again to previously untouched forestand restart the process of deforestation.
Revised:  As land cover changes and forest is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which prompts people to move again to previously untouched forestand restart the process of deforestation.
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