wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Pseudohyperkalemia Pseudohyperkalemia occurs when the measured potassium levels is falsely elevated.
Revised: Pseudohyperkalemia Pseudohyperkalemia occurs when the measured potassium level is falsely elevated.
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Original:  This condition is usually suspected when  patient is clinically well without any ECG changes.
Revised:  This condition is usually suspected when the patient is clinically well without any ECG changes.
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Original:  Mechanical trauma during blood drawing can cause potassium leakage out of the red blood cells due to haemolysed blood sample.
Revised:  Mechanical trauma during blood drawing can cause potassium leakage out of the red blood cells due to haemolysis of the blood sample.
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Original:  Since exercise can cause elevated potassium levels, repeated fist clenching can cause transient rise in potassium levels.
Revised:  Repeated fist clenching during the blood draw can cause a transient rise in potassium levels.
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Original:  Hyperkalemia may only become apparent when a person's platelet concentration is more than 500,000/microL in a clotted blood sample (serum blood sample).
Revised:  Hyperkalemia may become apparent when a person's platelet concentration is more than 500,000/microL in a clotted blood sample (serum blood sample).
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Original:  High white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in patient with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases  red blood cells fragility , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
Revised:  A high white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in patient with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases red blood cells fragility , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
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Original:  High white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in patient with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases  red blood cells fragility , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
Revised:  High white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in people with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases red blood cells fragility , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
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Original:  High white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in patient with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases  red blood cells fragility , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
Revised:  High white cell count (greater than 120,000/microL) in patient with chronic lymphocytic leukemia increases red blood cells , thus causing pseudohyperkalemia during blood processing.
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Original:  This problem can be avoided by processing serum samples, because formation of clot protect the cells from haemolysis during processing.
Revised:  This problem can be avoided by processing serum samples, because clot formation protects the cells from haemolysis during processing.
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Original:  A familial form of pseudohyperkalemia may also be present, and is characterised by increased serum potassium in whole blood stored at or below room temperature, without additional hematological abnormalities .
Revised:  A familial form of pseudohyperkalemia , a benign condition characterised by increased serum potassium in whole blood stored at or below room temperature, without additional hematological abnormalities .
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Original: Medications that interferes with urinary excretion by inhibiting the renin–angiotensin system is one of the most common causes of hyperkalemia.
Revised: Medications that interfere with urinary excretion by inhibiting the renin–angiotensin system is one of the most common causes of hyperkalemia.
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Original:  As a result of the influx of Loyalists from the American Revolutionary War, the Province of Quebec was divided into two new colonies, consisting of Lower , and Upper Canada.
Revised:  As a result of the influx of Loyalists from the American Revolutionary War, the Province of Quebec was divided into two new colonies, consisting of Lower and Upper Canada.
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Original:  The creation of Upper Canada was a in response to the influx of United Empire Loyalist settlers, who desired a colonial administration modelled under British institutions and common law, especially British laws of land tenure.
Revised:  The creation of Upper Canada was in response to the influx of United Empire Loyalist settlers, who desired a colonial administration modelled under British institutions and common law, especially British laws of land tenure.
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Original: The Canadas is the collective name for the provinces of Lower Canada and Upper Canada, two historical British colonies in present-day Canada.
Revised: The Canadians is the collective name for the provinces of Lower Canada and Upper Canada, two historical British colonies in present-day Canada.
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Original: The Canadians is the collective name for the provinces of Lower Canada and Upper Canada, two historical British colonies in present-day Canada.
Revised: The Canadas is the collective name for the provinces of Lower Canada and Upper Canada, two historical British colonies in present-day Canada.
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Original: Alma Vivian Powell ( née Johnson;
Revised: Alma Vivian Powell ( Johnson;
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Original:  born October 27, 1937) is an American audiologist and the wife of military and political figure Colin Powell, whom she married on August 25, 1962.
Revised:  born October 27, 1937) is an American audiologist and the widow of military and political figure Colin Powell, whom she married on August 25, 1962.
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Original: Technological advancement File:Bucher Citycat in Jyväskylä.jpg|A Bucher CityCat 5000 street sweeper in Jyväskylä, Finland in October 2009 The goal of simple debris removal did not change until the 1970s, when policymakers begun to reflect concern for water quality.
Revised: Technological advancement The goal of simple debris removal did not change until the 1970s, when policymakers begun to reflect concern for water quality.
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Original: Chainline is the angle of a bicycle chain relative to the centerline of the bike's frame.
Revised: Chainline is the angle of a bicycle chain relative to the centerline of the bicycle frame.
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Original:  A bicycle is said to have perfect chainline if the chain is parallel to the  frame, which means that the rear sprocket is directly behind the front sprocket .
Revised:  A bicycle is said to have perfect chainline if the chain is parallel to the frame, which means that the rear sprocket is directly behind the front chainring .
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Original:  Chainline also refers to the distance between a sprocket and the centerline of the bike .
Revised:  Chainline also refers to the distance between a sprocket and the centerline of the frame .
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Original:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
Revised:  Bicycles without a straight chainline are slightly less efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
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Original:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
Revised:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
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Original:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
Revised:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain at an angle between them .
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Original:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between them .
Revised:  Bicycles with straighter chainline are more efficient due to the frictional losses incurred by running the chain straight around both sprockets but at an angle between the front chainring and rear sprocket .
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Original:  He was known as Deshparan because of his work for the country and for his efforts in the Swadeshi movement.
Revised:  He was known as Deshpran because of his work for the country and for his efforts in the Swadeshi movement.
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Original: Revolutionary activities For political reasons, Midnapore district was proposed to divided into two by British Raj and Biren Sasmal started protested against it.
Revised: Revolutionary activities For political reasons, Midnapore district was proposed to divided into two by British Raj and Biren Sasmal started protesting against it.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, seven were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, five Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, five military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, three military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, two military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, four secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, one elementary school, and 1 hospital.
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Original:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and 1 hospital.
Revised:  Of these 42 true enclaves, 14 were related to military logistics, 7 were military communications sites, 5 Federal Aviation Administration facilities, 5 military housing enclaves, 3 military base areas, 2 military research facilities, 4 secondary school parcels, 1 elementary school, and one hospital.
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Original:  The New York Times, April 20, 1978, U. S. Was Prepared to Defend the Canal  .
Revised:  The New York Times, April 20, 1978, U. S. Was Prepared to Defend the Canal '' .
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Original:  The issue had been highlighted by the a blue-ribbon commission headed by Ambassador Sol Linowitz.
Revised:  The issue had been highlighted by a blue-ribbon commission headed by Ambassador Sol Linowitz.
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Original: In the year preceding the final transfer of canal assets there was an effort in the United States Congress, notably House Joint Resolution 77 (HJR 77) introduced by Helen Chenoweth-Hage , to declare the Carter–Torrijos treaties null and void.
Revised: In the years preceding (and following) the final transfer of canal assets there was an effort in the United States Congress, notably House Joint Resolution 77 (HJR 77) introduced by Helen Chenoweth-Hage , to declare the Carter–Torrijos treaties null and void.
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Original: In the year preceding the final transfer of canal assets there was an effort in the United States Congress, notably House Joint Resolution 77 (HJR 77) introduced by Helen Chenoweth-Hage , to declare the Carter–Torrijos treaties null and void.
Revised: In the year preceding the final transfer of canal assets there were efforts to declare the Carter–Torrijos treaties null and void, e.g. House Joint Resolution 77 (HJR 77) introduced by Helen Chenoweth-Hage , to declare the Carter–Torrijos treaties null and void.
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Original:  In 1968, before Torrijos seized political control  , Panama's foreign debt was less than $200 million.
Revised:  In 1968, before Torrijos seized political control of the country , Panama's foreign debt was less than $200 million.
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Original:  The United States' s surrender of the Canal would allow American banks to receive payments from their debtor.
Revised:  The United States' surrender of the Canal would allow American banks to receive payments from their debtor.
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Original:  When used in conjunction with a stopwatch  a paceband can assist athletes in maintaining a steady pace throughout the race.
Revised:  When used in conjunction with a stopwatch , a paceband can assist athletes in maintaining a steady pace throughout the race.
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Original: frame| Paceband.org example frame| An example commercial pre-printed paceband A paceband is a wristband, sometimes made of a strip of waterproof paper, that lists expected split times for a running race.
Revised: frame| An example commercial pre-printed paceband A paceband is a wristband, sometimes made of a strip of waterproof paper, that lists expected split times for a running race.
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Original:  In 1971, President Salvador Allende asked that the celebration become more ecumenical, encompassing the diverse religious beliefs throughout the country.
Revised:  In 1971, President juice wrld asked that the celebration become more ecumenical, encompassing the diverse religious beliefs throughout the country.
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Original:  This ceremony, which is organized by the Catholic Church and led by the Archbishop of Santiago, has taken place since 1811 when it was started by [[ lil dickey ]].
Revised:  This ceremony, which is organized by the Catholic Church and led by the Archbishop of Santiago, has taken place since 1811 when it was started by [[ LiL Dickey) ]].
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Original: Being widespread in rural areas of Chile Mexican corrido is often played in Fiestas Patrias alongside cumbia .
Revised: Being widespread in rural areas of Chile Mexican corrido is often played in Fiestas Patrias .
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Original:  In popular celebrations traditional Chilean music such as cueca and tonada are not as common as the foreign styles of common as corrido and cumbia.
Revised:  In popular celebrations traditional Chilean music such as cueca and tonada are not as common as the foreign music styles of corrido and cumbia.
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Original:  The filling of these empanadas consist of pino, a mixture of chopped beef and onion, as well as half of a hard-boiled egg, raisins, and an olive.
Revised:  The filling of these empanadas consist of pino, a mixture of chopped beef and onion, as well as half of a hard-boiled egg, and an olive.
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Original: In 1991, the French government awarded Brasseaux the title of Chevalier in l' Order des Palmes Académiques, an honor reserved for those whose scholarly pursuits are deemed to contribute significantly to French culture.
Revised: In 1991, the French government awarded Brasseaux the title of Chevalier in the Order des Palmes Académiques, an honor reserved for those whose scholarly pursuits are deemed to contribute significantly to French culture.
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Original:  Louisiana Writer Award The award was presented to him by then Lieutenant Governor Kathleen Blanco, on November 8, 2003, at a ceremony held at the 2nd annual Louisiana Book Festival in Baton Rouge.
Revised:  The award was presented to him by then Lieutenant Governor Kathleen Blanco, on November 8, 2003, at a ceremony held at the 2nd annual Louisiana Book Festival in Baton Rouge.
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Original:  Oubre] (1994) The Founding of New Acadia: The Beginnings of Acadian Life in Louisiana, 1765-1803 (1987) French, Cajun, Creole, Houma: A Primer on Francophone Louisiana (2005) "Scattered to the Wind": Dispersal and Wanderings of the Acadians, 1755-1809 (1991) Stir the Pot: A History of Cajun Cuisine [with Marcelle Bienvenu and Ryan A. Brasseaux] (2005) Brasseaux is the editor of the two-volume A Dictionary of Louisiana Biography (1988), a tool for researchers in multiple fields of study.
Revised:  Oubre] (1994) The Founding of New Acadia: The Beginnings of Acadian Life in Louisiana, 1765-1803 (1987) French, Cajun, Creole, Houma: A Primer on Francophone Louisiana (2005) "Scattered to the Wind": Dispersal and Wanderings of the Acadians, 1755-1809 (1991) Stir the Pot: A History of Cajun Cuisine [with Marcelle Bienvenu and Ryan A. Brasseaux] (2005) 
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Original: Carl Anthony Brasseaux (  born August 19, 1951) is a retired historian of French Colonial North America, and particularly of Louisiana and the Cajun people.
Revised: Carl Anthony Brasseaux ( born August 19, 1951) is a retired historian of French Colonial North America, particularly of Louisiana and the Cajun people.
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Original:  Background and  education Brasseaux was born  in Opelousas, the seat of St. Landry Parish, in south Louisiana.
Revised:  Background and education Brasseaux was born in Opelousas, the seat of St. Landry Parish, in southern Louisiana.
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Original:  He  grew up in the prairie Cajun town of Sunset .
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Original:  He received  his Bachelor of Arts and Master of Arts degrees from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette , then named the University of Southwestern Louisiana  .
Revised:  He received his Bachelor of Arts and Master of Arts degrees from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette ( then named the University of Southwestern Louisiana .
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Original:  He received  his Bachelor of Arts and Master of Arts degrees from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette , then named the University of Southwestern Louisiana  .
Revised:  He received his Bachelor of Arts and Master of Arts degrees from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette , then named the University of Southwestern Louisiana ) .
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Original:  Career Brasseaux was director of the Center for Louisiana Studies, as well as of the Center for Cultural and Eco-Tourism, both located at UL Lafayette.
Revised:  Career Brasseaux served at the University of Louisiana at Lafayette from 1975 until 2010; where his roles at the university included the assistant director of Center for Cultural and Eco-Tourism, both located at UL Lafayette.
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Original:  This massive collection includes the Center for Acadian and Creole Folklore — regarded as the largest compilation of media resources pertaining to these two south Louisiana ethnic groups.
Revised:  This large collection includes the Center for Acadian and Creole Folklore — regarded as the largest compilation of media resources pertaining to these two south Louisiana ethnic groups.
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Original:  This massive collection includes the Center for Acadian and Creole Folklore — regarded as the largest compilation of media resources pertaining to these two south Louisiana ethnic groups.
Revised:  This massive collection includes the Center for Acadian and Creole Folklore , which is regarded as the largest compilation of media resources pertaining to these two south Louisiana ethnic groups.
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Original:  He has written fiction under the pseudonym Antoine Bourque.
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Original:  Awards Brasseaux received the 2003 Louisiana Writer Award for his enduring contribution to the "literary intellectual heritage of Louisiana."
Revised:  Brasseaux received the 2003 Louisiana Writer Award for his enduring contribution to the "literary intellectual heritage of Louisiana."
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Original:  Works Brasseaux has published more than 30 books,  including: Acadian to Cajun: Transformation of a People, 1803-1877 (1992) Creoles of Color in the Bayou Country with Keith Fontenot and Claude F.
Revised:  Works Brasseaux has published more than 30 books, including: with Keith Fontenot and Claude F.
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