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Original:  In Commonwealth realms other than the United Kingdom, they may be signed by the Governor-General , the representative of the monarch of that realm, who is also Commander-in-Chief in and over that realm.
Revised:  In Commonwealth realms other than the United Kingdom, they may be signed by the governor-general , the representative of the monarch of that realm, who is also Commander-in-Chief in and over that realm.
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Original:  In Commonwealth realms other than the United Kingdom, they may be signed by the Governor-General , the representative of the monarch of that realm, who is also Commander-in-Chief in and over that realm.
Revised:  In Commonwealth realms other than the United Kingdom, they may be signed by the Governor-General , the representative of the monarch of that realm, who is also commander-in-chief in and over that realm.
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Original:  The wording used prior to 1982 in translation would be;
Revised:  hereby appointed an Officer in Her Majesty's Canadian Armed ForcesWith Seniority of the .... day of ......... ....
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Original:  United Kingdom The following is typical of the wording of a British commission, and comes from the Royal Naval Reserve: The above would be signed by the Queen (although a facsimile signature may be used) and countersigned by two members of the Admiralty Board.
Revised:  The above would be signed by the Queen (although a facsimile signature may be used) and countersigned by two members of the Admiralty Board.
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Original:  United Kingdom The following is typical of the wording of a British commission, and comes from the Royal Naval Reserve: The above would be signed by the Queen (although a facsimile signature may be used) and countersigned by two members of the Admiralty Board.
Revised:  United Kingdom The following is typical of the wording of a British commission, and comes from the Royal Naval Reserve: WE reposing especial Trust and Confidence in your Loyalty, Courage and Integrity do by these Presents Constitute and Appoint you to be an Officer in our Canadian Armed Forces. You are therefore carefully and diligently to discharge your Duty as such in the Rank of .............. or in such other Rank as We may from time to time hereafter be pleased to promote or appoint you to, and you are in such manner and on such occasions as may be prescribed by us to exercise and well discipline both the Inferior Officers and Non-Commissioned Members serving under you and use your best endeavour to keep them in good Order and Discipline, and We do hereby Command them to Obey you as their Superior Officer, and you to observe and follow such Orders and Directions as from time to time you shall receive from Us, or any other your Superior Officer according to Law, in pursuance of the Trust hereby Reposed in you.IN WITNESS Whereof our Governor General of Canada hath hereunto set her hand and Seal at Our Government House in the City of Ottawa this .... day of .......... in the Queen (although a facsimile signature may be used) and countersigned by two members of the Admiralty Board.
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Original:  United Kingdom The following is typical of the wording of a British commission, and comes from the Royal Naval Reserve: The above would be signed by the Queen (although a facsimile signature may be used) and countersigned by two members of the Admiralty Board.
Revised:  United Kingdom The following is typical of the wording of a British commission, and comes from the Royal Naval Reserve: The above would be signed by the Year of our Lord ................... and in the .... Year of Our Reign.
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Original:  United States Article II, section 3, of the U.S. Constitution provides  that the President "shall Commission all the Officers of the United States, " including officers of the uniformed services as well as civilian officers.
Revised:  United States Article II, section 3, of the U.S. Constitution provides that the President commission all officers of the United States, " including officers of the uniformed services as well as civilian officers.
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Original: Commissions of officers in the armed services are issued in the name of the President, although authority to sign on the President's behalfis generally exercised by the secretary of the department in which the officer is being commissioned.
Revised: Commissions of officers in the armed services are issued in the name of the President, either under his own signature or that of an official delegated to act on his behalf, and under either the Great Seal of the United States or, the seal of the executive department in which the officer is being commissioned.
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Original:  The commission of a newly commissioned officer reads: States A person applying for a license to be a notary public receives a commission  , generally indicating what political jurisdiction (state or District of Columbia) issued it, when it is valid (usually four years from issue) and the signature of the issuing authorities (usually the Governor and countersigned by the Secretary of State).
Revised:  For heads of executive departments and independent agencies, the Seal of the United States and the signature of the Secretary of State appears, but if the position is subordinate to the head of a different executive department, the seal of said executive department appears instead of the Seal of the United States and the signature of beforementioned head replaces the Secretary of State. States A person applying for a license to be a notary public receives a commission , generally indicating what political jurisdiction (state or District of Columbia) issued it, when it is valid (usually four years from issue) and the signature of the issuing authorities (usually the Governor and countersigned by the Secretary of State).
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Original:  The commission of a newly commissioned officer reads: States A person applying for a license to be a notary public receives a commission  , generally indicating what political jurisdiction (state or District of Columbia) issued it, when it is valid (usually four years from issue) and the signature of the issuing authorities (usually the Governor and countersigned by the Secretary of State).
Revised:  The commission of a newly commissioned officer reads: States A person applying for a license to be a notary public receives a commission '' , generally indicating what political jurisdiction (state or District of Columbia) issued it, when it is valid (usually four years from issue) and the signature of the issuing authorities (usually the Governor and countersigned by the Secretary of State).
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Original: Grafting refers to a surgical procedure to move tissue from one site to another on the body, or from another creature, without bringing its own blood supply with it.
Revised: Grafting refers to a surgical procedure to move tissue from one site to another on the ffcffithout bringing its own blood supply with it.
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Original:  Allografts and xenografts are recognized as foreign by the recipient and are rejected.
Revised:  Allografts and xenografts may be recognized as foreign by the recipient and are rejected.
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Original:  Allografts and xenografts are recognized as foreign by the recipient and are rejected.
Revised:  Allografts and xenografts are recognized as foreign by the recipient and rejected.
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Original: mam Grafting refers to a surgical procedure to move tissue from one site to another on the body, or from another creature, without bringing its own blood supply with it.
Revised:  Grafting refers to a surgical procedure to move tissue from one site to another on the body, or from another creature, without bringing its own blood supply with it.
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Original:  Benedetto Croce KOCI, COSML (;
Revised: Ttyychhjhhuiikkkk Benedetto Croce KOCI, COSML (;
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Original:  Croce's famous commentary on Hegel, What is Living and What is Dead in the Philosophy of Hegel, was published in 1907.
Revised:  Croce's famous commentary on Hegel, What is Living and What is Dead of the Philosophy of Hegel, was published in 1907.
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Original:  He 's also noted for his "major contributions to the rebirth of Italian democracy."
Revised:  He is also noted for his "major contributions to the rebirth of Italian democracy."
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Original:  Di Rienzo Eugenio Besides writing in his periodical, Croce used other means to express his anti - racism and to make public statements against the persecution of the Jews.
Revised:  Di Rienzo Eugenio Besides writing in his periodical, Croce used other means to express his anti-racism and to make public statements against the persecution of the Jews.
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Original:  For about a month in the so-called Second Badoglio government and again for a month in the Second Bonomi government.
Revised:  for about a month in the so-called Second Badoglio government and again for a month in the Second Bonomi government.
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Original:  The 1941 English translation is accessible online through Questia.
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Original:  It may refer specifically to the theory of poetry, although some speakers use the term so broadly as to denote the concept of "theory" itself.
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Original:  During the romantic era, poetics tended toward expressionism and emphasized the perceiving subject.
Revised:  During the Romantic era, poetics tended toward expressionism and emphasized the perceiving subject.
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term poetics derived from the Ancient Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " ; also "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " and " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " productive " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " ." " poetic".
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Original: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." " poetic".
Revised: History The term "poetics " comes from the Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry , " literally "creative , productive, " from ποιητός poietos " made, " verbal adjective of ποιεῖν poiein "to make ." poetic".
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Original:  Scholar T. V. F. Brogan identifies three major movements in Western poetics over the past 3,000 years , beginning with the formalist, objectivist Aristotelian tradition (see Poetics).
Revised:  In 3,000 years , beginning with the formalist, objectivist Aristotelian tradition (see Poetics).
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Original:  The 20th century witnessed a return to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward metacriticality, or the establishment of a  theory of poetics.
Revised:  Twentieth-century poetics returned to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward metacriticality, or the establishment of a theory of poetics.
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Original:  The 20th century witnessed a return to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward metacriticality, or the establishment of a  theory of poetics.
Revised:  The 20th century witnessed a return to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward meta-criticallity, and the establishment of a theory of poetics.
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Original:  Eastern poetics developed primarily with reference to the lyric , as opposed to the mimetic .
Revised:  Eastern poetics developed lyric poetry, rather than the representational mimetic poetry of the Western world .
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Original: History The term poetics derived from the Ancient Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry";
Revised: History The term poetics derives from the Ancient Greek ποιητικός poietikos "pertaining to poetry";
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Original:  In 3, 000 years of history, Western poetics has had three major artistic movements , (i) the formalist, (2) the objectivist, and (iii) the Aristotelian tradition (see Poetics).
Revised:  In the Western world, the development and evolution of poetics featured three artistic movements concerned with poetical composition: (i) the formalist, (2) the objectivist, and (iii) the Aristotelian tradition (see Poetics).
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Original:  Twentieth-century poetics returned to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward meta-criticallity , and the establishment of a contemporary theory of poetics.
Revised:  Twentieth-century poetics returned to the Aristotelian paradigm, followed by trends toward meta-criticality , and the establishment of a contemporary theory of poetics.
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Original: Accident, as used in philosophy, is an attribute which may or may not belong to a subject, without affecting its essence.
Revised: An accident, in philosophy, is an attribute which may or may not belong to a subject, without affecting its essence.
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Original: Accident, as used in philosophy, is an attribute which may or may not belong to a subject, without affecting its essence.
Revised: Accident, as used in philosophy, is an attribute that may or may not belong to a subject, without affecting its essence.
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Original:  Catholic theologians such as Thomas Aquinas have employed the Aristotelian concepts of substance and accident in articulating the theology of the Eucharist, particularly the transubstantiation of bread and wine into body and blood.
Revised:  Thomas Aquinas and other Catholic theologians have employed the Aristotelian concepts of substance and accident in articulating the theology of the Eucharist, particularly the transubstantiation of bread and wine into body and blood.
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Original:  Anti-Essentialism argues that every property is an accident.
Revised:  Non-essentialism argues that every property is an accident.
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Original:  Modal Necessitarianism argues that all properties are essential and no property is an accident.
Revised:  Modal necessitarianism argues that all properties are essential and no property is an accident.
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Original: There are two opposed philosophical positions that also impact the meaning of this term: Anti-Essentialism (associated with Willard Van Orman Quine) argues that there are no essential properties at all, and therefore every property is an accident.
Revised: There are two opposed philosophical positions that also impact the meaning of this term: Anti-essentialism (associated with Willard Van Orman Quine) argues that there are no essential properties at all, and therefore every property is an accident.
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Original:  Modal Necessitarianism (associated with Saul Kripke), argues for the veracity of the modal system "Triv" (If P is true, then P must be true).
Revised:  Modal necessitarianism (associated with Saul Kripke), argues for the veracity of the modal system "Triv" (If P is true, then P must be true).
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Original: To take another example, all bachelors are unmarried: this is a necessary or essential property of what it means to be a bachelor.
Revised: To take another example, all bachelors are unmarried: this is the necessary or essential property of what it means to be a bachelor.
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Original:  And this distinction is independent of experimental verification: even if for some reason all the unmarried men with non-brown hair were killed, and every single existent bachelor had brown hair, the property of having brown hair would still be accidental , since it would still be logically possible for a bachelor to have hair of another color.
Revised:  And this distinction is independent of experimental verification: even if for some reason all the unmarried men with non-brown hair were killed, and every single existent bachelor had brown hair, the property of having brown hair would still be accidental since it would still be logically possible for a bachelor to have hair of another color.
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Original: An accident, in philosophy, is an attribute that may or may not belong to a subject, without affecting its essence.
Revised: An accident, in philosophy, is a property that the entity or substance has contingently, without which the substance can still retain its identity. An accident does not affect its essence.
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Original:  In a Pakistan arrest of Al-Qaeda operatives agents found some 51 compact discs, dating from 2001, of reports and targeting research allegedly compiled by Barot.
Revised:  In a Pakistan arrest of al-Qaeda operatives agents found some 51 compact discs, dating from 2001, of reports and targeting research allegedly compiled by Barot.
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Original:  In May 2007  his sentence was reduced to 30 years.
Revised:  In May 2007 , his sentence was reduced to 30 years.
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Original:  Prison attacks In July 2007  Barot was admitted to Newcastle's Royal Victoria Infirmary for five days after being badly injured by other inmates at HMP Frankland.
Revised:  Prison attacks In July 2007 , Barot was admitted to Newcastle's Royal Victoria Infirmary for five days after being badly injured by other inmates at HMP Frankland.
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Original:  In the first attack  boiling water was poured on to his back and a fight ensued, in the second attack another prisoner poured boiling oil over his head.
Revised:  In the first attack , boiling water was poured on to his back and a fight ensued, in the second attack another prisoner poured boiling oil over his head.
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Original:  born  December 1971) is a convicted Indian-born British terrorist.
Revised:  born 1 December 1971) is a convicted Indian-born British terrorist.
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Original:  He was defeated by incumbent New Democratic Member of Parliament Yvon Godin in the riding of Acadie-Bathurst .
Revised:  He was defeated by incumbent New Democratic Member of Parliament Yvon Godin in the riding of Acadie—Bathurst .
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Original:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, who  include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while sometimes it is also applied to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai  .
Revised:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, who include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while in ancient times it referred to to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai .
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Original:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, who in modern times include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while in ancient times it referred to to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai, though the later  is rarer today.
Revised:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, whom in modern times include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while in ancient times it referred to to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai, though the later is rarer today.
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Original:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, who in modern times include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while in ancient times it referred to to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai, though the later  is rarer today.
Revised:  ; ), Uriankhan (, урианхан) or Uriankhat (, урианхад), is a term of address applied by the Mongols to a group of forest peoples of the North, who in modern times include the Turkic-speaking Tuvans and Yakuts, while in ancient times it referred to to the Mongolian-speaking Altai Uriankhai, though the later usage is rarer today.
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Original: Elevated potassium Hyperkalemia develops when there is excessive production (oral intake, tissue breakdown) or ineffective elimination of potassium.
Revised: Elevated potassium Hyperkalemia develops when there is excess production (oral intake, tissue breakdown) or ineffective elimination of potassium.
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Original:  The word "hyperkalemia " is from hyper- meaning high;
Revised:  The word hyperkalemia comes from hyper- meaning high;
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Original:  and -emia , meaning "in the blood " .
Revised:  and -emia 'blood condition' .
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Original:  Sodium polystyrene sulfonate and sorbitol (combined as Kayexalate) are occasionally used on an ongoing basis to maintain lower serum levels of potassium though the safety of long-term use of sodium polystyrene sulfonate for this purpose is not well understood. 
Revised:  Sodium polystyrene sulfonate and sorbitol (combined as Kayexalate) are occasionally used on an ongoing basis to maintain lower serum levels of potassium though the safety of long-term use of sodium polystyrene sulfonate for this purpose is not well understood. carson
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