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Original:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of  these heavy elements  before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
Revised:  Familiar examples of such processes include nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of these heavy elements before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
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Original:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of  these heavy elements  before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
Revised:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae to "store" energy in the creation of these heavy elements before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
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Original:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of  these heavy elements  before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
Revised:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), and nuclear decay, a process in which energy is released that was originally stored in these heavy elements before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
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Original:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of  these heavy elements  before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
Revised:  Familiar examples of such processes include nuclear decay, in which energy is released that was originally "stored" in heavy isotopes (such as uranium and thorium), by nucleosynthesis, a process ultimately using the gravitational potential energy released from the gravitational collapse of supernovae , to store energy in the creation of these heavy elements , before they were incorporated into the solar system and the Earth.
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Original: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles  which carry momentum , exchange by which and with real particles , and are responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
Revised: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles , which carry momentum , exchange by which and with real particles , and are responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
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Original: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles  which carry momentum , exchange by which and with real particles , and are responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
Revised: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles which carry momentum . The exchange of virtual particles with real particles , and are responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
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Original: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles  which carry momentum , exchange by which and with real particles , and are responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
Revised: In particle physics, this inequality permits a qualitative understanding of virtual particles which carry momentum , exchange by which and with real particles is responsible for the creation of all known fundamental forces (more accurately known as fundamental interactions).
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Original:  Virtual photons are also responsible for  electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb  law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
Revised:  Virtual photons are also responsible for the electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
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Original:  Virtual photons are also responsible for  electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb  law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
Revised:  Virtual photons are also responsible for electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb 's law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
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Original:  Virtual photons are also responsible for  electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb  law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
Revised:  Virtual photons are also responsible for electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb law), for spontaneous radiative decay of excited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
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Original:  Virtual photons are also responsible for  electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb  law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for van der Waals bond forces and some other observable phenomena.
Revised:  Virtual photons are also responsible for electrostatic interaction between electric charges (which results in Coulomb law), for spontaneous radiative decay of exited atomic and nuclear states, for the Casimir force, for the Van der Waals force and some other observable phenomena.
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Original: > 57CO2 + 55H2O and some of the energy is used to convert ADP into ATP: ADP + HPO42− → ATP + H2O The rest of the chemical energy is turned into O2 and the carbohydrate or fat is converted into heat: the ATP is used as a sort of "energy currency", and some of the chemical energy it contains is used for other metabolism when ATP reacts with OH groups and eventually splits into ADP and phosphate (at each stage of a metabolic pathway, some chemical energy is converted into heat).
Revised: > 57CO2 + 55H2O and some of the energy is used to convert ADP into ATP: ADP + HPO42− → ATP + H2O The rest of the chemical energy of O2 and the carbohydrate or fat is converted into heat: the ATP is used as a sort of "energy currency", and some of the chemical energy it contains is used for other metabolism when ATP reacts with OH groups and eventually splits into ADP and phosphate (at each stage of a metabolic pathway, some chemical energy is converted into heat).
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Original: > 57CO2 + 55H2O and some of the energy is used to convert ADP into ATP: ADP + HPO42− → ATP + H2O The rest of the chemical energy of O2 and the carbohydrate or fat is converted into heat: the ATP is used as a sort of "energy currency", and some of the chemical energy it contains is used for other metabolism when ATP reacts with OH groups and eventually splits into ADP and phosphate (at each stage of a metabolic pathway, some chemical energy is converted into heat).
Revised: > 57CO2 + 55H2O and some of the energy is used to convert ADP into ATP: The rest of the chemical energy of O2 and the carbohydrate or fat is converted into heat: the ATP is used as a sort of "energy currency", and some of the chemical energy it contains is used for other metabolism when ATP reacts with OH groups and eventually splits into ADP and phosphate (at each stage of a metabolic pathway, some chemical energy is converted into heat).
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Original:  Often, however, the conversion of mass to energy is forbidden by conservation laws.
Revised:  Often, however, the complete conversion of matter (such as atoms) to non-matter (such as photons) is forbidden by conservation laws.
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Original:  The meaning of the symbol 'percent' is '1/100' , therefore the accurate meaning of the notation 'mg\%' is 'mg/100', which is a unit of mass, not a concentration.
Revised:  The meaning of the symbol 'percent' is , therefore the accurate meaning of the notation 'mg\%' is 'mg/100', which is a unit of mass, not a concentration.
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Original:  Therefore, for Dimensional Analysis purposes, when denoting a concentration of mass divided by volume, one should use units such as 'mg/dL' or the International System of Units equivalent.
Revised:  Therefore, for dimensional analysis purposes, when denoting a concentration of mass divided by volume, one should use units such as 'mg/dL' or the International System of Units equivalent.
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Original:  For example, a plasma ethanol concentration incorrectly denoted as 0.1 mg\% can be written as '0.1 mg/dL' (or ' 1mg /L', etc.) meaning a mass of 0.1 milligrams of ethyl alcohol per 100 milliliter volume of solution.
Revised:  For example, a plasma ethanol concentration incorrectly denoted as 0.1 mg\% can be written as '0.1 mg/dL' (or ' 1 mg /L', etc.) meaning a mass of 0.1 milligrams of ethyl alcohol per 100 milliliter volume of solution.
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Original: Milligram per cent is a traditional yet inappropriate symbol used to denote a unit of measure of concentration.
Revised: Milligram per cent is a traditional symbol used to denote a unit of measure of concentration.
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Original:  The traditional (and inaccurate) use of the 'mg\%' symbol was meant to indicate the mass (in milligrams) of that chemical in 100 milliliters of solution (e.g., blood).
Revised:  The traditional use of the 'mg\%' symbol was meant to indicate the mass (in milligrams) of that chemical in 100 milliliters of solution (e.g., blood).
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Original:  Therefore, for dimensional analysis purposes, when denoting a concentration of mass divided by volume, one should use units such as 'mg/dL' or the International System of Units equivalent.
Revised:  Therefore, for dimensional analysis purposes, when denoting a concentration of mass divided by volume, it has largely been replaced by units such as 'mg/dL' or the International System of Units equivalent.
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Original: Biography Akhmadov was born on December 19, 1960 in Kazakhstan, where most of the Chechen nation - including his family - was exiled by Stalin's government in 1944.
Revised: Biography Akhmadov was born on December 19, 1960 in Kazakhstan, where most of the Chechen nation — including his family - was exiled by Stalin's government in 1944.
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Original: Biography Akhmadov was born on December 19, 1960 in Kazakhstan, where most of the Chechen nation - including his family - was exiled by Stalin's government in 1944.
Revised: Biography Akhmadov was born on December 19, 1960 in Kazakhstan, where most of the Chechen nation - including his family — was exiled by Stalin's government in 1944.
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Original:  In 1996 , when the Chechens defeated the poorly organised Russian army, he retired to private life.
Revised:  In 1996 he retired to private life.
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Original: Self-exile On July 29, 1999, a month before the beginning of the Second Chechen War, the President of Ichkeria Aslan Maskhadov appointed Ilyas Akhmadov as Foreign Minister.
Revised: Exile On July 29, 1999, a month before the beginning of the Second Chechen War, the President of Ichkeria Aslan Maskhadov appointed Ilyas Akhmadov as Foreign Minister.
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Original:  As of 2011 he worked as a scout for Blackburn URL
Revised:  As of 2011 he worked as a scout for Blackburn Rovers.
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Original:  born 3 January 1961) is a Russian billionaire, entrepreneur and oligarch.
Revised:  born 3 January 1961) is a Russian business oligarch.
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Original: Human offspring (descendants) are referred to as children (without reference to age, thus one can refer to a parent's " minor children" or "adult children" or "infant children" or "teenage children" depending on their age);
Revised: Human offspring (descendants) are referred to as children (without reference to age, thus one can refer to a parent's " m "teenage children" depending on their age);
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Original: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living organisms , produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
Revised: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living Funny , produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
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Original: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living Funny , produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
Revised: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living organisms , produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
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Original: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction , two organisms.
Revised: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case o , two organisms.
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Original: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young born of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
Revised: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
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Original: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young  of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
Revised: File:Frog in frogspawn.jpg|A frog in frogspawn]] In biology, offspring are the young creation of living organisms, produced either by a single organism or, in the case of sexual reproduction, two organisms.
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Original: In an isotonic contraction, tension changes and the muscle's length changes.
Revised: In an isotonic contraction, tension remains the same, whilst the muscle's length changes.
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Original:  This suggests that skeletal muscles are very resistant to lengthening, thereby allowing very high levels of tension to develop as can occur in isometric exercise.
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Original: There are two types of isotonic contractions: (1) concentric and (2) eccentric.
Revised: There aretwo types of isotonic contractions: (1) concentric and (2) eccentric.
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Original:  First, the absolute tensions achieved can be very high relative to the muscle's maximum tetanic tension generating capacity (you can set down a much heavier object than you can URL Second, the absolute tension is relatively independent of lengthening velocity.
Revised:  First, the absolute tensions achieved can be very high relative to the muscle's maximum tetanic tension generating capacity (you can set down a much heavier object than you can lift). Second, the absolute tension is relatively independent of lengthening velocity.
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Original: Variable volume in time models Variable volume pharmacokinetic models can be drug centered models that imply a volume of drug distribution to be that volume in which the drug is distributed at that elapsed time following drug administration.
Revised:  Variable volume pharmacokinetic models can be drug centered models that imply a volume of drug distribution to be that volume in which the drug is distributed at that elapsed time following drug administration.
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Original:  The other man had committed murder by shooting an unarmed prostitute in the back (and then taking money from his victim after shooting him), and then had violated his parole by repeatedly testing positive for cocaine use over a period of several years, breaking through the glass door of a woman's home to confront her in a dispute, living with at least two men who had multiple criminal convictions, and being arrested for  cocaine possession while driving a congressman's car.
Revised:  The other man had committed murder by shooting an unarmed prostitute in the back (and then taking money from his victim after shooting him), and had then violated his parole by repeatedly testing positive for cocaine use over a period of several years, breaking through the glass door of a woman's home to confront her in a dispute, living with at least two men who had multiple criminal convictions, and being arrested for cocaine possession while driving a congressman's car.
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Original: Press attention Brown's case was contrasted in the press with the case of an influential white defendant who was sentenced by the same judge  .
Revised: Press attention Brown's case was contrasted in the press with the case of an influential white defendant ; both defendants were sentenced by the same judge .
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Original: Tyrone Brown (born 1973) is an African-American Texan who, in 1990, was sentenced to a life term in a Texas maximum security prison and was kept incarcerated for 17 years after testing positive once for smoking marijuana while on probation for robbing a man of two dollars at the age of 17.
Revised: Tyrone Brown (born 1973) is a Texas Nig who, in 1990, was sentenced to a life term in a Texas maximum security prison and was kept incarcerated for 17 years after testing positive once for smoking marijuana while on probation for robbing a man of two dollars at the age of 17.
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Original:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio, Victor, Jesusa, Alfonso and Eugenia , Jr.
Revised:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio, Victor, Jesusa, Alfonso and Eugenia 
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Original:  He was also later inducted into Upsilon Sigma Phi as an honorary member .
Revised:  He was also later inducted into Upsilon Sigma Phi .
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Original:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio  , Victor, Jesusa, Alfonso and Eugenia
Revised:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio (deceased) , Victor, Jesusa, Alfonso and Eugenia
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Original: Gil Juco Puyat Sr. (September 1, 1907 – March 22, 1981) was a Filipino statesman and businessman who served as a Senator of the Philippines from 1951 until 1972 when Marcos shut congress down and declared Martial Law, and as Senate President from 1967 to 1972.
Revised: Gil Juco Puyat Sr. (September 1, 1907 – March 22, 1981) was a Filipino statesman and businessman who served as a Senator of the Philippines from 1951 until 1972 , when President Ferdinand Marcos shut Congress down and declared Martial Law, and as Senate President from 1967 to 1972.
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Original:  From 1967  he was the Senate President.
Revised:  From 1967 , he was the Senate President.
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Original:  As a legislator, Puyat created a little reforms and other things involving the dispensation of public works funds.
Revised:  As a legislator, Puyat created a few reforms and other things involving the dispensation of public works funds.
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Original:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio (deceased), Victor, Jesusa  , Alfonso and Eugenia
Revised:  They had seven children – Gil, Jr. (deceased), Vicente (deceased), Antonio (deceased), Victor, Jesusa (deceased) , Alfonso and Eugenia
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Original:  He became an active member of the business-oriented Pan Xenia Fraternity .
Revised:  He was a member of the business-oriented Pan Xenia Fraternity .
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Original: References Luis Madureira.
Revised:  Luis Madureira.
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Original:  In Malacca and Cochin he avidly collected and documented information on the Malay-Indonesia area, and personally visited Java, Sumatra (the two dominant islands of modern-day Indonesia) and Maluku.
Revised:  In Malacca and Cochin he avidly collected and documented information on the Malay-Indonesia area, and personally visited Java, Sumatra and Maluku.
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Original: It is the first European description of Malaysia and the oldest and most extensive description of the Portuguese East.
Revised: It is the first European description of the Malay Archipelago and the oldest and most extensive description of the Portuguese East.
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Original:  In Malacca and Cochin he avidly collected and documented information on the Malay-Indonesia area, and personally visited Java, Sumatra and Maluku.
Revised:  In Malacca and Cochin he avidly collected and documented information on the Malay-Indonesian area, and personally visited Java, Sumatra and Maluku.
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Original: –1524 or 1540)Madureira, 150–151. was a Portuguese apothecary from Lisbon who spent 1512 to 1515 in Malacca immediately after the Portuguese conquest, at a time when Europeans were only first arriving in South East Asia.
Revised: –1524 or 1540)Madureira, 150–151. was a Portuguese apothecary from Lisbon who spent 1512 to 1515 in Malacca immediately after the Portuguese conquest, at a time when Europeans were only first arriving in Southeast Asia.
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