wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Eanes and Baldaia sailed as far south as Angra dos Ruivos (Garnet Bay  , named after the shoals of sea robin ( ruivo ) they found there), some 50 leagues (250 km) south of Cape Bojador.
Revised: Eanes and Baldaia sailed as far south as Angra dos Ruivos (Garnet Bay ) , named after the shoals of sea robin ( ruivo ) they found there), some 50 leagues (250 km) south of Cape Bojador.
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Original: Eanes and Baldaia sailed as far south as Angra dos Ruivos (Garnet Bay  , named after the shoals of sea robin ( ruivo ) they found there), some 50 leagues (250 km) south of Cape Bojador.
Revised: Eanes and Baldaia sailed as far south as Angra dos Ruivos (Garnet Bay , named after the shoals of sea robin ( ) they found there), some 50 leagues (250 km) south of Cape Bojador.
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Original: Besides heredity, focal infection and autointoxication was psychiatry's predominant explanation of schizophrenianear the turn of the 20th century.
Revised: Near the turn of the 20th century, psychiatry's predominant explanation of schizophrenianear the turn of the 20th century.
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Original:  Henry Andrews Cotton , the director starting in 1907 of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and  manic depression (now bipolar disorder) , drawing influence from the medical popularity of focal infection theory .
Revised:  Henry Andrews Cotton became director of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and manic depression (now bipolar disorder) , drawing influence from the medical popularity of focal infection theory .
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Original:  Henry Andrews Cotton , the director starting in 1907 of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and  manic depression (now bipolar disorder) , drawing influence from the medical popularity of focal infection theory .
Revised:  Henry Andrews Cotton , the director starting in 1907 of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and of manic depression (now bipolar disorder) , drawing influence from the medical popularity of focal infection theory .
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Original:  Henry Andrews Cotton , the director starting in 1907 of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and  manic depression (now bipolar disorder) , drawing influence from the medical popularity of focal infection theory .
Revised:  Henry Andrews Cotton , the director starting in 1907 of the psychiatric asylum at Trenton State Hospital in the American state of New Jersey, identified focal infections as the main causes of dementia praecox (now schizophrenia) and manic depression (now bipolar disorder) .
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Original:  Cotton routinely prescribed surgery to clean  the nasal sinuses and to extract the tonsils and dentition.
Revised:  Cotton routinely prescribed surgery to clean not only the nasal sinuses and to extract the tonsils and dentition.
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Original:  Seeking to clean the entire body of focal infections, Cotton frequently prescribed surgical removal of the  appendix, gall bladder, spleen, stomach, colon, cervix, ovaries, testicles, and thereby claimed up to 85\% cure rate.
Revised:  Seeking to clean the entire body of focal infections, Cotton frequently prescribed surgical removal of the appendix, gall bladder, spleen, stomach, colon, cervix, ovaries, and testicles, while Cotton claimed up to 85\% cure rate.
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Original:  Despite the death rate of some 30\%, Cotton's fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of paying patients.
Revised:  Despite Cotton's death rate of some 30\%, Cotton's fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of paying patients.
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Original:  Despite the death rate of some 30\%, Cotton's fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of paying patients.
Revised:  Despite the death rate of some 30\%, his fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of paying patients.
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Original:  Despite the death rate of some 30\%, Cotton's fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of paying patients.
Revised:  Despite the death rate of some 30\%, Cotton's fame rapidly spread through America and Europe, and the asylum drew influx of patients.
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Original:  By the 1930s, however, focal infection fell from psychiatry as an explanation.
Revised:  In the 1930s, however, focal infection fell from psychiatry as an explanation.
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Original: Focal infection theory's elegance suggested simple application, but the applications brought meager "cure" rate, occasional disease worsening, and inconsistent experimental results , although the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was standard at the time—except in New York City.
Revised: Focal infection theory's elegance suggested simple application, but the applications brought meager "cure" rate, occasional disease worsening, and inconsistent experimental results . Yet the lack of controlled clinical trials, among present criticism, was standard at the time—except in New York City.
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Original:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and Kirby found no effectiveness of Cotton's psychiatric surgeries , as patients who improved already had that prognosis and others did so without surgeries.
Revised:  In two controlled clinical trials with alternate allocation of patients, Kopeloff, Cheney, and Kirby concluded Cotton's psychiatric surgeries , as patients who improved already had that prognosis and others did so without surgeries.
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Original:  Most of Cotton's data were questioned at Johns Hopkins University by Phyllis Greenacre , who later helped steer American psychiatry into psychoanalysis.
Revised:  Most of Cotton's data were questioned at Johns Hopkins University , Phyllis Greenacre questioned most of Cotton's data, and later helped steer American psychiatry into psychoanalysis.
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Original:  Colectomy for psychosis vanished except in Trenton until Cotton—who used publicity and word of mouth, kept the 30\% death rate unpublicized, and passed a 1925 investigation by New Jersey Senate—died by heart attack in 1933.
Revised:  Antipsychotic colectomy vanished except in Trenton until Cotton—who used publicity and word of mouth, kept the 30\% death rate unpublicized, and passed a 1925 investigation by New Jersey Senate—died by heart attack in 1933.
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Original:  As early as 1927, Weston Price's researches were criticized for  "faulty bacterial technique".
Revised:  As early as 1927, Weston Price's researches were criticized for allegedly "faulty bacterial technique".
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Original:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Edward Rosenow and of Price as flawed by insufficient controls,  massive doses of bacteria, and  contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
Revised:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Edward Rosenow and of Price as flawed by insufficient controls, by massive doses of bacteria, and contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
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Original:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Edward Rosenow and of Price as flawed by insufficient controls,  massive doses of bacteria, and  contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
Revised:  In the 1930s and 1940s, researchers and editors dismissed the studies of Edward Rosenow and of Price as flawed by insufficient controls, massive doses of bacteria, and by contamination of endontically treated teeth during extraction.
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Original:  In 1939, E W Fish  implanted bacteria into guinea pigs' jaws  and reported that four zones develop.
Revised:  In 1939, E W Fish implanted bacteria into guinea pigs' jaws , and reported that four zones develop.
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Original:  Fish theorized that by removing the infectious nidus, dentists would permit recovery from the infection , and Fish's reasoning and conclusion  became the basis for successful root canal treatment.
Revised:  Fish theorized that by removing the infectious nidus, dentists would permit recovery from the infection This reasoning and conclusion became the basis for successful root canal treatment.
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Original:  Fish theorized that by removing the infectious nidus, dentists would permit recovery from the infection , and Fish's reasoning and conclusion  became the basis for successful root canal treatment.
Revised:  Fish theorized that by removing the infectious nidus, dentists would permit recovery from the infection , and Fish's reasoning and conclusion became the basis for successful root-canal treatment.
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Original:  Recasting  Hunter's views of 30 years earlier as widely misinterpreted, they summarized that "the removal of infectious dental focal infections in the hope of influencing remote or general symptoms of disease must still be regarded as an experimental procedure not devoid of hazard".
Revised:  Recasting Hunter's landmark pronouncements of 30 years earlier as widely misinterpreted, they summarized that "the removal of infectious dental focal infections in the hope of influencing remote or general symptoms of disease must still be regarded as an experimental procedure not devoid of hazard".
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Original:  By 1940, Louis I Grossman's textbook Root Canal Therapy flatly rejected the methods and conclusions made earlier by  Price and especially by  Rosenow.
Revised:  By 1940, Louis I Grossman's textbook Root Canal Therapy flatly rejected the methods and conclusions made earlier by Price and especially by Edward Rosenow.
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Original:   Easlick's 1951 review in the Journal of the American Dental Association notes, "Many authorities who formerly felt that focal infection was an important etiologic factor in systemic disease have become skeptical and now recommend less radical procedures in the treatment of such disorders".
Revised:  K A Easlick's 1951 review in the Journal of the American Dental Association notes, "Many authorities who formerly felt that focal infection was an important etiologic factor in systemic disease have become skeptical and now recommend less radical procedures in the treatment of such disorders".
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Original:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci , many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evidence focus of infection , foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
Revised:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci ", that " many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evidence focus of infection , foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
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Original:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci , many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evidence focus of infection , foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
Revised:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci , many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evident focus of infection , foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
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Original:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci , many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evidence focus of infection , foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
Revised:  A 1952 editorial in Journal of the American Medical Association tolled the era's end by stating that "many patients with diseases presumably caused by foci of infection have not been relieved of their symptoms by removal of the foci , many patients with these same systemic diseases have no evidence focus of infection ", and that " foci of infection are as common in apparently healthy persons as in those with disease".
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Original:  Some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 yet focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and  was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
Revised:  Although some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 yet focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
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Original:  Some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 yet focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and  was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
Revised:  Some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
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Original:  Some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 yet focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and  was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
Revised:  Some support extended into the late 1950s,Joseph M Dougherty & Anthony J Lamberti, Textbook of Bacteriology, 3rd edn (St Louis: Mosby, 1954), p 231 yet focal infection vanished as the primary explanation of chronic, systemic diseases, and the theory was generally abandoned in the 1950s.
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Original:  In 1890, Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to those infectious  oral diseases.
Revised:  In 1890, Willoughby D Miller attributed a set of oral diseases to infections, and a set of general diseases—as of lung, stomach, brain abscesses, and other conditions—to those infectious , oral diseases.
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Original:  In 1894, Miller became the first to reveal existence of bacteria in samples of dental pulp.
Revised:  In 1894, Miller became the first to reveal bacteria in samples of dental pulp.
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Original:  Yet focal infection theory met a cultural climate where ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology — a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
Revised:  Yet ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology — a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
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Original:  Yet focal infection theory met a cultural climate where ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology — a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
Revised:  Yet focal infection theory met a cultural climate where ancient and folk ideas, long entrenched via Galenic humoral medicine, found new outlets through bacteriology , a pillar of the new "scientific medicine".
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Original: Alfred I Tauber & Leon Chernyak, Metchnikoff and the Origins of Immunology: From Metaphor to Theory (New York: Oxford University Press, 1991), pp viii, 11. Later the Institute 's director and  1908 Nobelist, Metchnikoff believed, as did his rival Paul Ehrlich—theorist on antibody, mediating acquired immunity—and as did Pasteur, that nutrition influenced immunity.
Revised: Alfred I Tauber & Leon Chernyak, Metchnikoff and the Origins of Immunology: From Metaphor to Theory (New York: Oxford University Press, 1991), pp viii, 11. Later the institute 's director and 1908 Nobelist, Metchnikoff believed, as did his rival Paul Ehrlich—theorist on antibody, mediating acquired immunity—and as did Pasteur, that nutrition influenced immunity.
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Original: Alfred I Tauber & Leon Chernyak, Metchnikoff and the Origins of Immunology: From Metaphor to Theory (New York: Oxford University Press, 1991), pp viii, 11. Later the Institute 's director and  1908 Nobelist, Metchnikoff believed, as did his rival Paul Ehrlich—theorist on antibody, mediating acquired immunity—and as did Pasteur, that nutrition influenced immunity.
Revised: Alfred I Tauber & Leon Chernyak, Metchnikoff and the Origins of Immunology: From Metaphor to Theory (New York: Oxford University Press, 1991), pp viii, 11. Later the Institute 's director and a 1908 Nobelist, Metchnikoff believed, as did his rival Paul Ehrlich—theorist on antibody, mediating acquired immunity—and as did Pasteur, that nutrition influenced immunity.
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Original:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage,  autointoxication.
Revised:  Sharing Pasteur's view of science as a means to suppress the problems plaguing humankind, Metchnikoff brought into France its first cultures of yogurt for probiotic microorganisms to foster health and longevity by suppressing the colon's putrefactive microorganisms alleged to foster the colon's toxic seepage, a putative phenomenon altogether termed autointoxication.
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Original:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, famed for an emergency appendectomy performed on England's royalty , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— its "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" and causing autointoxication, which Lane then treated with colon bypass and colectomy .
Revised:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, based in London , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— its "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" and causing autointoxication, which Lane then treated with colon bypass and colectomy .
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Original:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, famed for an emergency appendectomy performed on England's royalty , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— its "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" and causing autointoxication, which Lane then treated with colon bypass and colectomy .
Revised:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, famed for an emergency appendectomy performed on England's royalty , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" and causing autointoxication, which Lane then treated with colon bypass and colectomy .
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Original:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, famed for an emergency appendectomy performed on England's royalty , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— its "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" and causing autointoxication, which Lane then treated with colon bypass and colectomy .
Revised:  Surgical pioneer Sir Arbuthnot Lane, famed for an emergency appendectomy performed on England's royalty , drew from Metchnikoff and clinical observation to issue dire warnings about "chronic intestinal stasis"—that is, constipation— its "flooding of the circulation with filthy material" . Near 1905, Lane introduced colon bypass and colectomy .
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Original:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease had been targeted since 1875 by John Harvey Kellogg in Michigan at his huge  Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium  —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities , and advertising itself as the "University of Health".
Revised:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease — at his huge Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities , and advertising itself as the "University of Health".
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Original:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease had been targeted since 1875 by John Harvey Kellogg in Michigan at his huge  Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium  —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities , and advertising itself as the "University of Health".
Revised:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease had been targeted since 1875 by John Harvey Kellogg in Michigan at his huge treatment resort, Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities , and advertising itself as the "University of Health".
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Original:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease had been targeted since 1875 by John Harvey Kellogg in Michigan at his huge  Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium  —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities , and advertising itself as the "University of Health".
Revised:  In America, alleged bowel sepsiswreaking degeneration and disease had been targeted since 1875 by John Harvey Kellogg in Michigan at his huge Battle Creek Sanitarium —he coined the term sanitarium —yearly receiving several thousand patients, including US Presidents and celebrities —advertised as the "University of Health".
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Original:   In 1900, British surgeon William Hunter blamed many disease cases on oral sepsis.
Revised:  Hunter on "oral sepsis" In 1900, British surgeon William Hunter blamed many disease cases on oral sepsis.
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Original:  He apparently indicted dental restorations.
Revised:  Thus, he apparently indicted dental restorations.
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