wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night , " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " he said. The area is on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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Original:  The mayor of the town on the Rwandan side of the border also commented on the earthquake, he saidthat "The houses that came down are mainly those devastated by the February 3 earthquake."
Revised:  The mayor of the town on the Rwandan side of the border said, "The houses that came down are mainly those devastated by the February 3 earthquake."
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Original:  This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the 2 previous earthquakes, which had measure 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale
Revised:  This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the two previous earthquakes, which had measure 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale
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Original:  This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the 2 previous earthquakes, which had measure 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale
Revised:  This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the 2 previous earthquakes, which measured 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale
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Original: Lake Kivu on the western border of Rwanda Lake Kivu, which is on the border between the Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC) and Rwanda, has been hit by an earthquake that measured 5.4 on the Richter Scale.
Revised:  Lake Kivu, which is on the border between the Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC) and Rwanda, has been hit by an earthquake that measured 5.4 on the Richter Scale.
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Original:  This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the two previous earthquakes, which measured 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale
Revised:  yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Original:  Mozilla Firefox is an open source web browser developed by the non-profit Mozilla Foundation in collaboration with a team of volunteers.
Revised:  Mozilla Firefox is an open-source web browser developed by the non-profit Mozilla Foundation in collaboration with a team of volunteers.
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Original:  While Firefox  market share continues to increase, its growth rate has slowed and it may not reach its target of 10\% overall market share by the end of 2005.
Revised:  While Firefox 's market share continues to increase, its growth rate has slowed and it may not reach its target of 10\% overall market share by the end of 2005.
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Original:  Microsoft's new release may be late, as some corporations take steps towards promoting Firefox as an alternative to Internet Explorer.
Revised:  Microsoft's new release may be late, as some corporations are taking steps towards promoting Firefox as an alternative to Internet Explorer.
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Original:  IBM is also promoting other open source technologies such as the free Linux operating system.
Revised:  IBM is also promoting other open-source technologies such as the free Linux operating system.
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Original:  ' There are objective facts which counteract what he has said, ' said Van Rooij
Revised:  " There are objective facts which counteract what he has said, ' said Van Rooij
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Original:  ' There are objective facts which counteract what he has said, ' said Van Rooij
Revised:  ' There are objective facts which counteract what he has said, " said Van Rooij
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Original:  The Aruban appeal court says that, while Joran van der Sloot is still an important suspect, the tapes don't reveil enough new evidence to bring him back into custody.
Revised:  The Aruban appeal court says that, while Joran van der Sloot is still an important suspect, the tapes don't reveal enough new evidence to bring him back into custody.
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Original: Today, Defense Secretary Donald Rumsefeld announced the closure of 33 major military facilities in 22 states around the US.
Revised: Today, United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld announced the closure of 33 major military facilities in 22 states around the US.
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Original:  When word of the plans to shuffle facilities, thus closing some and expanding others, many community leaders shuddered.
Revised:  When word of the plans to shuffle facilities, closing some and expanding others, many community leaders shuddered.
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Original:  Many military cities like San Antonio, Texas for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, feared economic effects.
Revised:  Military cities like San Antonio, Texas for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, feared economic effects.
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Original:  Many military cities like San Antonio, Texas for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, feared economic effects.
Revised:  Many military cities like San Antonio, Texas for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, fear economic effects.
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Original:  In this example , however,  the city of San Antonio will prosper with the expansion of Ft.
Revised:  In this example , however, benefits the city of San Antonio will prosper with the expansion of Ft.
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Original:  In this example , however,  the city of San Antonio will prosper with the expansion of Ft.
Revised:  In this example , however, the city of San Antonio with the expansion of Ft.
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Original:  Groton, Connecticut, on the other hand will face the closure of a submarine base.
Revised:  Groton, Connecticut, on the other hand faces the closure of a submarine base.
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Original:  As is evident, many communities around the nation are losing, while others win  as a result of today's re-shuffle
Revised:  Many communities around the nation are losing, while others win as a result of today's re-shuffle
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Original:  As is evident, many communities around the nation are losing, while others win  as a result of today's re-shuffle
Revised:  As is evident, many communities around the nation are losing, while others win , as a result of today's re-shuffle
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Original: Cities like San Antonio, Texas, for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, fear  economic effects.
Revised: Cities like San Antonio, Texas, a town built on the back of military establishments, fear economic effects.
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Original: Cities like San Antonio, Texas, for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, fear  economic effects.
Revised: Cities like San Antonio, Texas, for example, a town built on the back of military establishments, fear the possible economic effects.
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Original:  If the city's bases were closed, the city and local businesses would be crippled, it is feared .
Revised:  If the city's bases were closed, the city and local businesses could be crippled .
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Original:  Many communities around the nation are losing , while others win , as a result of today's re-shuffle
Revised:  Many communities around the nation stand to lose , while others win , as a result of today's re-shuffle
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Original:  Many communities around the nation are losing , while others win , as a result of today's re-shuffle
Revised:  Many communities around the nation are losing , while others could end up winners , as a result of today's re-shuffle
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Original:  Many communities around the nation are losing , while others win , as a result of today's re-shuffle
Revised:  Many communities around the nation are losing , while others win , as a result of the announced re-shuffle
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Original:  When they start to define themselves with their appearance, they loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders.  
Revised:  When they start to define their personality with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders. 
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Original:  When they start to define themselves with their appearance, they loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders.  
Revised:  When they start to define themselves with their appearance, they loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders. " 
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Original: Tom ter Bogt was appointed today as professor at the University of Utrecht in popmusic and youth-culture.
Revised: Tom ter Bogt was instated today as professor at the University of Utrecht in popmusic and youth-culture.
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Original:  "There is no reason for a moral panic," Ter Bogt says, "young people need to expiriment with sex.
Revised:  "There is no reason for a moral panic," Ter Bogt says, "young people need to experiment with sex.
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Original:  But these expiriments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationship in these video's  not based on equality.
Revised:  But these experiments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationship in these video's not based on equality.
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Original:  But these expiriments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationship in these video's  not based on equality.
Revised:  But these expiriments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationships in these video's not based on equality.
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Original:  But these expiriments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationship in these video's  not based on equality.
Revised:  But these expiriments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationship in these video's are not based on equality.
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Original:  When they start to define their personality with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders."
Revised:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders."
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Original:  This research shows that parents are a major influence in how girls get their self-image
Revised:  Their research shows that parents are a major influence in how girls get their self-image
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Original: Sexy videoclips have a more negative influence on girls than on boys, says Dutch popprofessor Tom ter Bogt.
Revised: Sexy video clips have a more negative influence on girls than on boys, says Dutch popprofessor Tom ter Bogt.
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Original: Sexy videoclips have a more negative influence on girls than on boys, says Dutch popprofessor Tom ter Bogt.
Revised: Sexy videoclips have a more negative influence on girls than on boys, says Dutch pop professor Tom ter Bogt.
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Original:  Ter Bogt investigated the influence of sexy  clips on the thoughts, behaviour and selfimage of 13 to 16 year old children.
Revised:  Ter Bogt investigated the influence of sexy clips on the thoughts, behaviour and self-image of 13 to 16 year old children.
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Original:  An equally-sized group whatched the concertregistrations of the same songs.
Revised:  An equally-sized group watched the concert performances of the same songs.
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Original:  After seeing the video's the girls in the testgroup tended to act and dress more like the models in the clips, and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
Revised:  After seeing the video's the girls in the test group tended to act and dress more like the models in the clips, and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the videos did not affect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups as much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behavior and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, contrary to previous beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy videos to participate in group-rapes .
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Original:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group-rapes .
Revised:  Unexpectedly the video's did not effect the boys in the groups that much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, this contrary to beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy video's to participate in group rapes .
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Original:  Tom ter Bogt was instated today as professor at the University of Utrecht in popmusic and youth-culture . "There is no reason for a moral panic," Ter Bogt says, "young people need to experiment with sex.
Revised:  Tom ter Bogt was instated today as professor at the University of Utrecht in pop music and youth culture . "There is no reason for a moral panic," Ter Bogt says, "young people need to experiment with sex.
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Original:  But these experiments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationships in these video's are not based on equality.
Revised:  But these experiments must be based on equality between men and women, and the relationships in these videos are not based on equality.
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Original:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders ."
Revised:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may lose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders ."
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Original:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders ."
Revised:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform worse in school, and will suffer more from eating-disorders ."
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Original:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating-disorders ."
Revised:  When they start to define their identity with their looks, they may loose self-confidence, will perform less in school and will suffer more from eating disorders ."
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Original:  After viewing the clips, girls tend to dress more sexy than before, and are less resolute in in denying permissive sex.
Revised:  After viewing the clips, girls felt that outward appearance was more important, they were less satisfied with their own appearance, and they became less resolute in in denying permissive sex.
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Original:  After viewing the clips, girls tend to dress more sexy than before, and are less resolute in in denying permissive sex.
Revised:  After viewing the clips, girls tend to dress more sexy than before, and are less resolute in denying permissive sex.
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Original:  In his research Ter Bogt showed  sexy videos from well-known popartists 50 Cent, Amanda Wilson ft.
Revised:  In his research Ter Bogt showed sexy videos from well-known pop-artists 50 Cent, Amanda Wilson ft.
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Original:  After seeing the video's the girls in the test group tended to act and dress more like the models in the clips , and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
Revised:  After seeing the videos the girls in the test group tended to act and dress more like the models in the clips , and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
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Original:  After seeing the video's the girls in the test group tended to act and dress more like the models in the clips , and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
Revised:  After seeing the video's the girls in the test group felt more strongly that outward appearance was important for girls , and they tended to be less satisfied about their own appearances.
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Original:  Unexpectedly the videos did not affect the boys in the groups as much, their behavior and self-image was more or less unchanged, contrary to previous beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy videos to participate in group rapes.
Revised:  Unexpectedly the videos did not affect the boys in the groups as much, their behaviour and self-image was more or less unchanged, contrary to previous beliefs that boys can be influenced by sexy videos to participate in group rapes.
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Original:  Their research shows that parents are a major influence in how girls get their self-image
Revised:  Their research shows that parents have a major influence in how girls get their self-image
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Original:  Their research shows that parents are a major influence in how girls get their self-image
Revised:  Their research shows that parents are a major influence in their girls' self-image
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Original:  There were protests in Jakarta demanding his release and dozens of pilots accross the nation also campaigned   .
Revised:  There were protests in Jakarta demanding his release and dozens of pilots accross the nation also campaigned . .
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Original:  He is thought to be the first pilot to be prosecuted over a crash in Indonesian history, which also contains a oor aviation safety record.
Revised:  He is thought to be the first pilot to be prosecuted over a crash in Indonesian history, which also contains a poor aviation safety record.
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Original:  He has had his pilot's liscence suspended
Revised:  He has had his pilot's license suspended
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Original: The Indonesian Pilot's Association has also said that the criminal prosecution should be avoided, arguing that the only people who can judge wether mistakes were made in aviation are those professionally involved and not the police.
Revised: The Indonesian Pilot's Association has also said that the criminal prosecution should be avoided, arguing that the only people who can judge whether mistakes were made in aviation are those professionally involved and not the police.
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Original:  The person may not win, but if enough people do this a message will get sent that even the major parties will have to listen to eventually  
Revised:  The person may not win, but if enough people do this a message will get sent that even the major parties will have to listen to eventually . 
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Original:  No. I will be looking for someone who is smart, wants what is best for all Americans, is a moderate, a fiscal conservative and will put forth the time and effort to run in a real campaign.
Revised:  I will be looking for someone who is smart, wants what is best for all Americans, is a moderate, a fiscal conservative and will put forth the time and effort to run in a real campaign.
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Original:  Just because the Democrats have this person and the Republicans have that person doesn’t mean there isn ’ t someone else better out there.
Revised:  Just because the Democrats have this person and the Republicans have that person doesn’t mean there isn ' t someone else better out there.
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Original: Two astronauts have performed the third and final spacewalk, or Extra-vehicular Activity (EVA), of the STS- 122 mission.
Revised: Two astronauts have performed the third and final spacewalk, or Extra-vehicular activity (EVA), of the STS- 122 mission.
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Original:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender Chris Osgood, for the second straight game, with their backup goalie James Howard (Dominik Hasek, who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
Revised:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender Chris Osgood, for the second straight game, with their backup goalie Jim Howard (Dominik Hasek, who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
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Original: New Jersey scored first on a Zack Parise goal late in the first period.
Revised: New Jersey scored first on a Zach Parise goal late in the first period.
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Original: New Jersey scored first on a Zach Parise goal late in the first period.
Revised: New Jersey scored first on a goal late in the first period.
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Original:  Brian Gionta would give the Devils a 2 goal lead in the second period, but Atlanta would cut their deficit in half less than a minute later with an Ilya Kovalchuk goal.
Revised:  would give the Devils a 2 goal lead in the second period, but Atlanta would cut their deficit in half less than a minute later with an Ilya Kovalchuk goal.
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