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Original:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a simlar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, and Iraq , and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay  and Abu Ghraib  .
Revised:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a simlar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, Iraq and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay and Abu Ghraib .
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Original:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a simlar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, and Iraq , and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay  and Abu Ghraib  .
Revised:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a simlar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, and Iraq , and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay and Abu Ghraib Prison in Iraq .
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Original:  Iran's parliament also cited the CIA's role in training the mujahideen during the Soviet Union's occupation of Afghanistan.
Revised:  Iran's parliament also cited the CIA's role in training the Mujahideen during the Soviet Union's occupation of Afghanistan.
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Original:  If ratified, the resolution would become law, but would likely have little political effect given that the United States and Iran do not have diplomatic relations
Revised:  If ratified, the resolution would become law, but would likely have little political effect given that the U.S. and Iran do not have diplomatic relations
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Original: "   Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, Iraq and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay detention camp in Guantánamo Bay, Cuba and Abu Ghraib Prison in Iraq.
Revised: " " Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, Iraq and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay detention camp in Guantánamo Bay, Cuba and Abu Ghraib Prison in Iraq.
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Original:  If ratified, the resolution would become law, but would likely have little political effect given that the U.S. and Iran do not have diplomatic relations  
Revised:  If ratified, the resolution would become law, but would likely have little political effect given that the U.S. and Iran do not have diplomatic relations . 
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Original: Image:Ahmadinejad Cropped.jpg|This resolution from the Iranian Parliament comes after the recent and highly publicised visit of President Mahmoud Ahmedijenad to New York]] On Saturday, Majlis of Iran, Iran's parliament, approved a non-binding resolution designating the United States Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
Revised: Image:Ahmadinejad Cropped.jpg|This resolution from the Iranian Parliament comes after the recent and highly publicised visit of President Mahmoud Ahmedinejad to New York]] On Saturday, Majlis of Iran, Iran's parliament, approved a non-binding resolution designating the United States Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
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Original:  The peacekeeping force has failed to slow the fighting in western Darfur , and do not have the ability to defend themselves from attack.
Revised:  The peacekeeping force has failed to slow the fighting in the region , and do not have the ability to defend themselves from attack.
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Original:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October.--  ]] [[
Revised:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October.-- > ]] [[
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Original:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October .--> Category:<Africa>%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Category:<Politics and conflicts
Revised:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October Category:<Africa>%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Category:<Politics and conflicts
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Original:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October .--> Category:<Africa>%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Category:<Politics and conflicts
Revised:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October .--> %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Category:<Politics and conflicts
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Original: A force of 1,000 rebels believed to be from the Sudan Liberation Army attacked one of the African Union's peacekeeping bases in Darfur , said AU officials Sunday.
Revised: A force of 1,000 rebels believed to be from the Sudan Liberation Army attacked one of the African Union's peacekeeping bases in the Darfur region of Sudan , said AU officials Sunday.
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Original:  Some sources have said that  was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
Revised:  Some sources have said that the attacl was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
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Original:  Some sources have said that the attacl was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
Revised:  Some sources have said that the attack was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
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Original:  Some sources have said that the attack was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
Revised:  Some sources have said that was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
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Original:  Some sources have said that the attack was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27th in Libya.
Revised:  Some sources have said that the attack was orchestrated by JEM rebels in an attempt to gain supplies, recognition, and input in the peace talks scheduled for October 27 in Libya.
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Original:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong UN force, whose first units will arrive in October
Revised:  They will soon be merged with the 26,000 strong United Nations force, whose first units will arrive in October
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Original: According to the Pacific Tsunami Warning Center in Honolulu, Hawaii, none of the quakes were expected to cause a tsunami or any significant damages, as the epicenters of the quakes were located away from land.
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Original:  He played in both 1992 and '94 AFL premierships, was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL due to injury at the end of 1999 season.
Revised:  He played in both 1992 and '94 AFL premierships, was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
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Original:  He worked mostly in sports reporting for local radio stations before taking on a presenter role with Channel Seven Pert 
Revised:  He worked mostly in sports reporting for local radio stations before taking on a presenter role with Channel Seven Perth. 
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Original:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 both as well as  their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
Revised:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 as well as their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
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Original:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 both as well as  their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
Revised:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 both as well as in both their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
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Original:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 both as well as  their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 retired from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
Revised:  He played in the Eagles first Grand final in 1991 both as well as their 1992 and '94 AFL premierships , was name All-Australian 1991 and '96 , retiring from AFL at the end of 1999 season.
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Original:  Mainwaring played one more season for East Fremantle before hanging up his boots before becoming a journalist.
Revised:  Mainwaring played one more season for East Fremantle before hanging up his boots and becoming a journalist.
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Original:  He worked mostly in sports reporting for local radio stations before taking on a presenter role with Channel Seven Perth.
Revised:  He worked in sports reporting for local radio stations before taking on a presenter role with Channel Seven Perth.
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Original:  He worked mostly in sports reporting for local radio stations before taking on a presenter role with Channel Seven Perth.
Revised:  He worked mostly in sports reporting for local radio stations before becoming a successful sports presenter with Channel Seven Perth.
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Original:  He was placed in the care of a neighbour and return home.
Revised:  He was placed in the care of a neighbour and returned home.
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Original:  The street has been close off and police are interviewing neighbours.
Revised:  The street has been closed off and police are interviewing neighbours.
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Original:  The woman slipped off the edge only about 4 meters from where a woman fell to her death in the summer of 2006 
Revised:  The woman slipped off the edge only about 4 meters from where a woman fell to her death in the summer of 2006. 
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Original:   32-year old Harrison and a 39-year old male friend from Los Angeles were traveling through the park, and had stopped to take pictures at a pullout in the Calcite Springs area just north of Tower Falls when the incident occurred.
Revised:  Yellowstone National Park 32-year old Harrison and a 39-year old male friend from Los Angeles were traveling through the park, and had stopped to take pictures at a pullout in the Calcite Springs area just north of Tower Falls when the incident occurred.
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Original: 150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returns from the United States to the Netherlands today because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
Revised: 150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returned to the Netherlands, from the United States to the Netherlands today because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
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Original: 150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returns from the United States to the Netherlands today because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
Revised: 150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returns from the United States because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
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Original:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
Revised:  The Dutch government has stopped paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
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Original:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
Revised:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the U.S. as of October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
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Original:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
Revised:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
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Original:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to take over these costs .
Revised:  The Dutch government stops paying for her protection in the United States on October 1, 2007 and the American government isn't willing to pay for her security any longer .
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Original:  Now she's back in the Netherlands , she'll continue her activities for this American think tank.
Revised:  Now she's back in the Netherlands and she'll continue her activities for this American think tank.
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Original:  Now she's back in the Netherlands , she'll continue her activities for this American think tank.
Revised:  Now she's back in the Netherlands , she'll continue for the American think tank.
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Original:  Here the Dutch government is willing to pay for her protection because she 's on Dutch soil now . Hirsi Ali needs protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats 
Revised:  The Dutch government has agreed to continue paying for her protection because she 's on Dutch soil now . Hirsi Ali needs protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats 
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Original:  Here the Dutch government is willing to pay for her protection because she 's on Dutch soil now . Hirsi Ali needs protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats 
Revised:  Here the Dutch government is willing to pay for her protection because she 's on Dutch soil . Hirsi Ali needs protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats 
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Original: 150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returned to the Netherlands, from the United States because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
Revised:  Former Dutch politician Ayaan Hirsi Ali returned to the Netherlands, from the United States because she cannot longer be protected in that country.
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Original:  Now she 's back in the Netherlands and she 'll continue for the American think tank.
Revised:  Now she has returned back to the Netherlands and she 'll continue for the American think tank.
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Original:  Now she 's back in the Netherlands and she 'll continue for the American think tank.
Revised:  Now she 's back in the Netherlands and she will continue for the American think tank.
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Original:  Hirsi Ali needs protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats.
Revised:  Hirsi Ali has needed protection because she has been uttering critical remarks on Islam for which she received several threats.
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Original:  Shortly after, Theo Van Gogh  the creator of the film was assassinated by Muslim extremists who also threatened to kill Ali
Revised:  Shortly after, Theo Van Gogh , the creator of the film was assassinated by Muslim extremists who also threatened to kill Ali
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Original:  150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali The Dutch government has stopped paying for her protection in the U.S. as of October 1, and the American government is not willing to pay for her security any longer .
Revised:  150px|Ayaan Hirsi Ali The Dutch government has stopped paying for her protection in the U.S. as of October 1, and the American government is not willing to pay for her security .
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Original: Pictures have surfaced claiming that thousands of dead Monks have been dumped inside the Burmese jungles ranging in the thousands . Many of the Monks who managed to escape capture from troops, have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
Revised: Pictures have surfaced claiming that thousands of dead Monks have been dumped inside the Burmese jungles . Many of the Monks who managed to escape capture from troops, have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
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Original:  A unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claim that at least 40 Monks were beatened to death, then their bodies were burned.
Revised:  An unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claim that at least 40 Monks were beatened to death, then their bodies were burned.
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Original: Several reports are coming out of Burma today that thousands of Monks involved in protests against the Burmese government will "be sent away" to prisons out of the capital city of Rangoon.
Revised: Several reports are coming out of Burma today that thousands of monks involved in protests against the Burmese government will "be sent away" to prisons out of the capital city of Rangoon.
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Original:  Other reports are also stating that the amount of Monks killed by Burmese troops numbers in the thousands.
Revised:  Other reports are also stating that the amount of monks killed by Burmese troops numbers in the thousands.
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Original:  According to reports by BBC News, at least 4,000 or more Monks have been arrested and questioned by government authorities in their recent crackdown on protests favoring democracy for the nation.
Revised:  According to reports by BBC News, at least 4,000 or more monks have been arrested and questioned by government authorities in their recent crackdown on protests favoring democracy for the nation.
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Original:   The monks have not been allowed to wear their robes and are in shackles, many of whom have been beaten.
Revised:  The monks have not been allowed to wear their robes and are in shackles, and many of them have been beaten.
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Original:  Many of those Monks have refused to eat, engaging in a hunger strike .
Revised:  Many have also engaged in a hunger strike .
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Original:  Although the Burmese government reports only 10 Monks to have been killed, other reports from activists and media agencies say that the death toll is in the thousands.
Revised:  Although the Burmese government reports only 10 monks to have been killed, other reports from activists and media agencies say that the death toll is in the thousands.
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Original:  Pictures have surfaced claiming that thousands of dead Monks have been dumped inside the Burmese jungles.
Revised:  Pictures have surfaced claiming that thousands of dead monks have been dumped inside the Burmese jungles.
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Original:  Many of the Monks who managed to escape capture from troops , have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
Revised:  Many of the monks who managed to escape capture from troops , have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
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Original:  Many of the Monks who managed to escape capture from troops , have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
Revised:  Many of the Monks who managed to escape capture from troops have dressed in civilian clothing and have begun to hide inside their temples or have fled Rangoon.
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Original:  The bodies can be counted in several thousand," said a deserter of the Burmese army and a former intelligence officer, Hla Win who also states that he deserted the army when he was ordered to kill Monks in what he called a "massacre of holy men."
Revised:  The bodies can be counted in several thousand," said a deserter of the Burmese army and a former intelligence officer, Hla Win . He also states that he deserted the army when he was ordered to kill Monks in what he called a "massacre of holy men."
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Original:  The bodies can be counted in several thousand," said a deserter of the Burmese army and a former intelligence officer, Hla Win who also states that he deserted the army when he was ordered to kill Monks in what he called a "massacre of holy men."
Revised:  The bodies can be counted in several thousand," said a deserter of the Burmese army and a former intelligence officer, Hla Win who also states that he deserted the army when he was ordered to kill monks in what he called a "massacre of holy men."
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Original:  An unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claim that at least 40 Monks were beatened to death, then their bodies were burned.
Revised:  An unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claims that at least 40 Monks were beatened to death, then their bodies were burned.
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Original:  An unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claim that at least 40 Monks were beatened to death, then their bodies were burned.
Revised:  An unnamed diplomatic official from Sweden also claim that at least 40 monks were beaten to death, then their bodies were burned.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Ibrahim Gambari, an envoy for the United Nations is in Burma attempting to resolve the issues there and meet with government officials, but so far Gambari has not been successful in meeting with officials, and new reports say that the government is making Gambari wait another day before there will be the possibility of a meeting.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Ibrahim Gambari, an envoy for the United Nations is in Burma attempting to resolve the issues there and meet with government officials, but he has been unsuccessful so far in arranging a meeting. New reports say that the government is making Gambari wait another day before there will be the possibility of a meeting.
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Original:  Gambari is waiting to meet with Senior General Than Shwe, the head leader of the junta  to urge a resolution to the violence.
Revised:  Gambari is waiting to meet with Senior General Than Shwe, the head of the junta to urge a resolution to the violence.
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Original:  Gambari is waiting to meet with Senior General Than Shwe, the head leader of the junta  to urge a resolution to the violence.
Revised:  Gambari is waiting to meet with Senior General Than Shwe, the head leader of the junta , to urge a resolution to the violence.
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Original:  The monks have not been allowed to wear their robes and are in shackles, and many of them have been beaten.
Revised:  The monks have not been allowed to wear their robes and are in shackles, and some of them have been beaten.
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