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Original:  The coverage, which began earlier on Monday on the Space Shuttle program, "The STS-114 Return to Flight Gallery," will air daily at 1 to 3 p.m. EDT and the launch of the next, and return of the present ,  International Space Station crew in Expedition 11.
Revised:  The coverage, which began earlier on Monday on the Space Shuttle program, "The STS-114 Return to Flight Gallery," will air daily at 1 to 3 p.m. EDT and the launch of the next, and return of the present , International Space Station crew 
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Original:  The coverage, which began earlier on Monday on the program, "The STS-114 Return to Flight Gallery," will air daily at 1 to 3 p.m. EDT featuring video related to the launch of the Discovery , such as full-length interviews with crew members .
Revised:  The coverage, which began earlier on Monday on the program, "The STS-114 Return to Flight Gallery," will air daily at 1 to 3 p.m. EDT featuring video related to the launch of the Discovery .
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Original:  The crew of Expedition 11 is Commander Sergei Krikalev and Flight Engineer and NASA Station Science Officer John Phillips, is scheduled to launch from the Baikonur Cosmodrome, Kazakhstan, at 8:46 p.m. EDT, April 14.
Revised:  Commander Sergei Krikalev and Flight Engineer and NASA Station Science Officer John Phillips, is scheduled to launch from the Baikonur Cosmodrome, Kazakhstan, at 8:46 p.m. EDT, April 14.
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Original:  European Space Agency (ESA) Astronaut Roberto Vittori of Italy joins them aboard their Soyuz spacecraft.
Revised:  European Space Agency (ESA) Astronaut Roberto Vittori of Italy will be joining them aboard their Soyuz spacecraft.
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Original:  Shuttle Discovery has a launch window of no earlier than May 15 to June 3, this year
Revised:  Shuttle Discovery has a possible launch window from May 15 to June 3, this year
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Original:  The two missions are known as Expedition 10, which is the present International Space Station crew, and Expedition 11, the crew being sent to replace them .
Revised:  And the second mission is Expedition 10. This will send replacement Russians to the ICC--International Space Station--crew .
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Original: And the second mission is Expedition 10.
Revised: The second mission is Expedition 10.
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Original: Victory Park, , Queensland — Conversions were a rarity as Noosa defeated Nambour in a four try to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
Revised: Victory Park, , Queensland — were a rarity as Noosa defeated Nambour in a four try to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
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Original: Victory Park, , Queensland — Conversions were a rarity as Noosa defeated Nambour in a four try to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
Revised: Victory Park, , Queensland — Conversions were a rarity as defeated in a four try to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
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Original: Victory Park, , Queensland — Conversions were a rarity as Noosa defeated Nambour in a four try to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
Revised: Victory Park, , Queensland — Conversions were a rarity as Noosa defeated Nambour in a four to two round 18 Sunshine Coast Rugby Union match in , Australia.
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Original:  The final marigin was eleven points in Noosa's favour.
Revised:  The final margin was eleven points in Noosa's favour.
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Original:  ]  The threats take place against a backdrop of political debate in the state over legalizing same-sex marriage, with the possibility of the Illinois House and Senate addressing the issue during their fall session.
Revised:  ...] The threats take place against a backdrop of political debate in the state over legalizing same-sex marriage, with the possibility of the Illinois House and Senate addressing the issue during their fall session.
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Original:  Filling out the top shows:   " Miss Congeniality 2: Armed and Fabulous, " which falls from # 5 to # 7 with more than $4.1 million "The Pacifier," which drops from #6 to #8 with more than $3 million;
Revised:  Filling out the top shows: " The Pacifier," which drops from # 5 to # 7 with more than $4.1 million "The Pacifier," which drops from #6 to #8 with more than $3 million;
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Original:  Filling out the top shows:   " Miss Congeniality 2: Armed and Fabulous, " which falls from # 5 to # 7 with more than $4.1 million "The Pacifier," which drops from #6 to #8 with more than $3 million;
Revised:  Filling out the top shows: " Miss Congeniality 2: Armed and Fabulous, " which falls from # 5 to # 8 with more than $4.1 million "The Pacifier," which drops from #6 to #8 with more than $3 million;
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Original:  The total was $ 10 million less than the debut Sin Citythe previous week .
Revised:  The total was $ 10 million less than Sin City, the top film of the previous week, made in its debut .
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Original: State and Federal investigations of Tom DeLay DeLay is under investigation by the Travis County (Texas) district attorney Ronnie Earles (D) who has already indicted three members of DeLay's organization, Texans for a Republican Majority Political Action Committee (TRMPAC), on charges of money laundering and accepting illegal campaign contributions.
Revised: State and Federal investigations of Tom DeLay DeLay is under investigation by the Travis County (Texas) district attorney Ronnie Earle (D) who has already indicted three members of DeLay's organization, Texans for a Republican Majority Political Action Committee (TRMPAC), on charges of money laundering and accepting illegal campaign contributions.
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Original:  DeLay and his supporters contended that this investigation and the indictments were politically motivated maneuvers by the Democratic Travis County, Texas District Attorney Ronnie Earle whom has been characterized as a controversial and colorful political figure with a history of pursuing unconventional indictments against elected officials including Sen. Kay Bailey Hutchison.
Revised:  DeLay and his supporters contended that this investigation and the indictments were politically motivated maneuvers by the Democratic Travis County, Texas District Attorney Ronnie Earle . Earle has been characterized as a controversial and colorful political figure with a history of pursuing unconventional indictments against elected officials including Sen. Kay Bailey Hutchison.
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Original:  But his record shows that he has indicted more Democrats than Republicans.
Revised:  However, his record shows that he has indicted more Democrats than Republicans.
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Original:  There is only one major political law on the books in Texas, and that forbids politicians from accepting contributions from corporations.
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Original: But Christopher Shays, (R-Connecticut) , a Republican moderate, told the Associated Press that DeLay’s "conduct is hurting the Republican Party" and "hurting any Republican who is up for re-election [in 2006]." Senator Chris Dodd, (D-Conn) advised his Republican colleagues strongly to “Be careful about how closely you embrace Mr. DeLay, as long as he's there, he's going to become a pretty good target."
Revised: But Christopher Shays, a Republican form Connecticut , a Republican moderate, told the Associated Press that DeLay’s "conduct is hurting the Republican Party" and "hurting any Republican who is up for re-election [in 2006]." Senator Chris Dodd, (D-Conn) advised his Republican colleagues strongly to “Be careful about how closely you embrace Mr. DeLay, as long as he's there, he's going to become a pretty good target."
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Original: But Christopher Shays, (R-Connecticut) , a Republican moderate, told the Associated Press that DeLay’s "conduct is hurting the Republican Party" and "hurting any Republican who is up for re-election [in 2006]." Senator Chris Dodd, (D-Conn) advised his Republican colleagues strongly to “Be careful about how closely you embrace Mr. DeLay, as long as he's there, he's going to become a pretty good target."
Revised: But Christopher Shays, (R-Connecticut) , a Republican moderate, told the Associated Press that DeLay’s "conduct is hurting the Republican Party" and "hurting any Republican who is up for re-election [in 2006]." Senator Chris Dodd, a Democrat from Connecticut, advised his Republican colleagues strongly to “Be careful about how closely you embrace Mr. DeLay, as long as he's there, he's going to become a pretty good target."
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Original:  State and Federal investigations of Tom DeLay DeLay is under investigation by the Travis County (Texas) district attorney Ronnie Earle (D) who has already indicted three members of DeLay's organization, Texans for a Republican Majority Political Action Committee (TRMPAC), on charges of money laundering and accepting illegal campaign contributions.
Revised:  State and Federal investigations of Tom DeLay DeLay is under investigation by the Travis County (Texas) district attorney , Democrat Ronnie Earle, who has already indicted three members of DeLay's organization, Texans for a Republican Majority Political Action Committee (TRMPAC), on charges of money laundering and accepting illegal campaign contributions.
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Original:  Loyalty has a price Both Chris Shays and Joel Hefley, R-Colorado , the past chairman of the House ethics committee who sanctioned DeLay three times, have signed a resolution, crafted by Democrats, that would end some of the rules changes that their own party pushed through to help DeLay only three months ago.
Revised:  Loyalty has a price Both Chris Shays and Joel Hefley, a Republican from Colorado , the past chairman of the House ethics committee who sanctioned DeLay three times, have signed a resolution, crafted by Democrats, that would end some of the rules changes that their own party pushed through to help DeLay only three months ago.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay 's ( member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), alleged ethical lapses began to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, have led some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party are beginning to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay ’s , a member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), ethical lapses begin to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, even some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay's (  member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), alleged ethical lapses began to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, have led some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay's ( Republican member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), alleged ethical lapses began to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, have led some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original: ]] As Tom DeLay's (  member of the U.S. House of Representatives (Republican from Texas), alleged ethical lapses began to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, have led some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
Revised: ]] As Tom DeLay's ( member of the U.S. House of Representatives from Texas), alleged ethical lapses began to dominate American political news stories and the Sunday talk shows, have led some Republican members of the Majority Leader’s own party to question the reasoning for his refusal to account for his actions or resign.
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Original:  The Honda's 51-year-old female driver and two female passengers aged 49 and 46 were also treated for minor injuries at the same hospital.
Revised:  The Honda's 51-year-old female driver and two female passengers aged 49 and 46.
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Original:  "Ambulance personnel and police officers worked closely with our team throughout the incident but sadly one passenger from each car lost their life , "  the spokesperson continued.
Revised:  "Ambulance personnel and police officers worked closely with our team throughout the incident but sadly one passenger from each car lost their life " the spokesperson continued.
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Original:  "Ambulance personnel and police officers worked closely with our team throughout the incident but sadly one passenger from each car lost their life , "  the spokesperson continued.
Revised:  "Ambulance personnel and police officers worked closely with our team throughout the incident but sadly one passenger from each car lost their life , " , the spokesperson continued.
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Original:  Having been out played for most of the game, Fraser Coast scored three tries to University's two in the final 20 minutes.
Revised:  Having been out played for most of the game, Fraser Coast scored three to University's two in the final 20 minutes.
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Original:  University would finish the match with an intercept try right on full time The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one conversion ).
Revised:  University finished the match with an intercept try right on full time The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one conversion ).
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Original:  University would finish the match with an intercept try right on full time The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one conversion ).
Revised:  University would finish the match with an intercept try right on full time The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one ).
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Original: A view of first half play at the southern end of the University of the Sunshine Coast rugby field. , , , — has defeated 70 points to twenty in their round 19 match.
Revised: A view of first half play at the southern end of the University of the Sunshine Coast rugby field. , , , — has defeated 70 points to 20 in their round 19 match.
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Original: University finished the match with an intercept try right on full time  The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one ).
Revised: University finished the match with an intercept try right on full time . The final score — University 70 (13 tries, six conversions), Fraser Coast 19 (three tries, one ).
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Original:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red car at approximately 0915 (0815 ) yesterday  
Revised:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red car at approximately 0915 (0815 ) yesterday . 
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Original: The woman died after being taken to in Glasgow  .
Revised: The woman was taken to in Glasgow .
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Original:  The 34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure  
Revised:  The 34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure . 
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Original:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red Toyota car at approximately 0915 (0815 ) yesterday.
Revised:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red Toyota car at approximately 9:15am (0815 ) yesterday.
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Original: An 87-year-old man and his 84-year-old wife have died after a car hit them in in Scotland.
Revised: A man and his 84-year-old wife have died after a car hit them in in Scotland.
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Original:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red Toyota car at approximately 9:15am (0815 ) yesterday.
Revised:  The couple, who have yet to be publicly identified, were walking across Greenock Road in the town of when they were hit by a red Toyota at approximately 9:15am (0815 ) yesterday.
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Original:  The woman was taken to in Glasgow , where she died several hours later.
Revised:  The woman was taken to in Glasgow . She died several hours later.
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Original:  The  34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure .
Revised:  The Toyota driver, a 34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure .
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Original:  The  34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure .
Revised:  The 34-year-old woman , was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure .
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Original:  The  34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but taken to as a precautionary measure .
Revised:  The 34-year-old woman driving the Toyota was uninjured but as a precaution was taken to .
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Original:  In the end, the group was detained for "more than an hour.   
Revised:  In the end, the group was detained for "more than an hour. " 
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Original:  But lies were told, threats were made and the idea was to intimidate.  
Revised:  But lies were told, threats were made and the idea was to intimidate. " 
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Original: According to a press release from Antioch College , the group was initially detained by two off-duty police officers who were under the employ of ExxonMobil but dressed in their police uniforms.
Revised: According to a press release from Antioch , the group was initially detained by two off-duty police officers who were under the employ of ExxonMobil but dressed in their police uniforms.
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Original:  thus far, the report has not been corroborated by Wikinews        
Revised:  thus far, the report has not been corroborated by Wikinews . 
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Original:  thus far, the report has not been corroborated by Wikinews . A group of 13 students from Antioch New England Graduate School in Keene, New Hampshire, USA, were detained by security officers as they photographed an ExxonMobil chemical plant in Baton Rouge, Louisiana.
Revised:  thus far, the report has not been corroborated by Wikinews A group of 13 students from Antioch New England Graduate School in Keene, New Hampshire, USA, were detained by security officers as they photographed an ExxonMobil chemical plant in Baton Rouge, Louisiana.
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Original:  The full text of Fontenot's statement is reproduced here.
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Original:  One of the professors, Abigail Abrash Walton told the Keene Sentinel that one of the officers, "aggressively told us that he’d be calling in the Homeland Security people, whatever that meant, and to expect to be with them all night."
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Original:  “ Current information suggests that Al-Qaeda and affiliated organisations continue to plan terrorist attacks both in the region and beyond, and they may focus efforts to conduct attacks in the period between now and the end of August,” a United States (U.S.) department statement said.
Revised:  " Current information suggests that Al-Qaeda and affiliated organisations continue to plan terrorist attacks both in the region and beyond, and they may focus efforts to conduct attacks in the period between now and the end of August,” a United States (U.S.) department statement said.
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Original:  “ Current information suggests that Al-Qaeda and affiliated organisations continue to plan terrorist attacks both in the region and beyond, and they may focus efforts to conduct attacks in the period between now and the end of August,” a United States (U.S.) department statement said.
Revised:  “ Current information suggests that Al-Qaeda and affiliated organisations continue to plan terrorist attacks both in the region and beyond, and they may focus efforts to conduct attacks in the period between now and the end of August,” a United States department statement said.
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Original: frameless| The City of Islamabad Pakistani officials placed the capital, , on red alert after they received information of possible terrorist attacks on headquarters in Islamabad.
Revised:  The City of Islamabad Pakistani officials placed the capital, , on red alert after they received information of possible terrorist attacks on headquarters in Islamabad.
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Original: The City of Islamabad Pakistani officials placed the capital, , on red alert after they received information of possible terrorist attacks on headquarters in Islamabad .
Revised: The City of Islamabad Pakistani officials placed the capital, , on red alert after they received information of possible terrorist attacks on headquarters .
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