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Original:  At the onset of the struggle, he had underestimated the Akyem because they were few in number, going into battle without his usual "magical amulets , "  and even leaving some of his body armor back at Kumasi, his capital.
Revised:  At the onset of the struggle, he had underestimated the Akyem because they were few in number, going into battle without his usual "magical amulets , " , and even leaving some of his body armor back at Kumasi, his capital.
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Original: Osei Kofi Tutu I ( – ) was one of the founders of the Ashanti Empire, aided by Okomfo Anokye, his chief priest and distant relative.
Revised: Osei Kofi Tutu I ( – ) was one of the founders of the Ashanti Empire, aided by Okomfo Anokye, his Chief Priest and distant relative.
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Original:  Most movements require a force far below what a muscle could potentially generate, and barring pathological nervous fatigue , is seldom an issue.
Revised:  Most movements require a force far below what a muscle could potentially generate, and nervous fatigue is seldom an issue.
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Original:  But in extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) , in which the nerve signal weakens , can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
Revised:  But , during extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) , in which the nerve signal weakens , can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
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Original:  But in extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) , in which the nerve signal weakens , can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
Revised:  But in extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) — in which the nerve signal weakens , can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
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Original:  But in extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) , in which the nerve signal weakens , can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
Revised:  But in extremely powerful contractions that are close to the upper limit of a muscle's ability to generate force, nervous fatigue (enervation) , in which the nerve signal weakens — can be a limiting factor in untrained individuals.
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Original:  There is no sensation of pain or discomfort, the muscle appears to simply ‘stop listening’ and gradually cease to move , often going backwards.
Revised:  There is no sensation of pain or discomfort, the muscle appears to simply ‘stop listening’ and gradually cease to contract , often going backwards.
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Original:  As there is insufficient stress on the muscles and tendons , there will often be no delayed onset muscle soreness following the workout.
Revised:  Often there is insufficient stress on the muscles and tendons , there will often be no delayed onset muscle soreness following the workout.
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Original:  As there is insufficient stress on the muscles and tendons , there will often be no delayed onset muscle soreness following the workout.
Revised:  As there is insufficient stress on the muscles and tendons to cause delayed onset muscle soreness following the workout.
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Original:  It is this neural training that causes several weeks worth of rapid gains in strength, which level off once the nerve is generating maximum contractions and the muscle reaches its physiological limit.
Revised:  This neural training can cause several weeks of rapid gains in strength, which level off once the nerve is generating maximum contractions and the muscle reaches its physiological limit.
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Original: Nervous fatigue Nerves are responsible for controlling the contraction of muscles, determining the number, sequence and force of muscular contraction.
Revised: Neural fatigue Nerves are responsible for controlling the contraction of muscles, determining the number, sequence and force of muscular contraction.
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Original: Muscle cells work by detecting a flow of electrical impulses from the brain which signals them to contract through the release of calcium by the sarcoplasmic reticulum.
Revised: Muscle celles work by detecting a flow of electrical impulses from the brain which signals them to contract through the release of calcium by the sarcoplasmic reticulum.
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Original: Muscle celles work by detecting a flow of electrical impulses from the brain which signals them to contract through the release of calcium by the sarcoplasmic reticulum.
Revised: Muscle cells work by detecting a flow of electrical impulses from the brain which signals them to contract through the release of calcium by the sarcoplasmic reticulum.
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Original: Muscle fatigue is the decline in ability of a muscle to generate force.
Revised: Muscle fatigue is the decline in ability of muscles to generate force.
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Original:  Lactic acid also has a negating effect on the chloride ions in the muscles, reducing their inhibition of contraction and leaving potassium ions as the only restricting influence on muscle contractions, though the effects of potassium are much less than if there were no lactic acid to remove the chloride ions.
Revised:  Lactic acid also has a negating effect on the chloride ins in the muscles, reducing their inhibition of contraction and leaving potassium ions as the only restricting influence on muscle contractions, though the effects of potassium are much less than if there were no lactic acid to remove the chloride ions.
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Original:  Lactic acid also has a negating effect on the chloride ins in the muscles, reducing their inhibition of contraction and leaving potassium ions as the only restricting influence on muscle contractions, though the effects of potassium are much less than if there were no lactic acid to remove the chloride ions.
Revised:  Lactic acid also has a negating effect on the chloride ions in the muscles, reducing their inhibition of contraction and leaving potassium ions as the only restricting influence on muscle contractions, though the effects of potassium are much less than if there were no lactic acid to remove the chloride ions.
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Original:  Since the swastika is a cockade of the deeply counter-revolutionary German organization Orgesch, and has recently acquired the character of a symbolic sign of the entire fascist reactionary movement, artists are warned in not to use this ornament under any circumstances as it induces a deeply negative impression, especially in URL
Revised:  Since the swastika is a cockade of the deeply counter-revolutionary German organization Orgesch, and has recently acquired the character of a symbolic sign of the entire fascist reactionary movement, artists are warned in not to use this ornament under any circumstances as it induces a deeply negative impression, especially in foreigners.
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Original:  The   Russian Provisional Government of 1917 printed a number of new bank notes with right-facing, diagonally rotated swastikas in their centres The banknote design was initially intended for the Mongolian national bank but was re-purposed for Russian ruble after the February revolution.
Revised:  The The Russian Provisional Government of 1917 printed a number of new bank notes with right-facing, diagonally rotated swastikas in their centres The banknote design was initially intended for the Mongolian national bank but was re-purposed for Russian ruble after the February revolution.
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Original:  A popular tourist destination, Amiens is protected as a UNESCO World Heritage site .
Revised:  A popular tourist destination, Amiens is protected as a UNESCO World Heritage Site .
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Original: Schmitteroth, Linda & Rosteck, Mary Kay People of the Holocaust, U-X-L: Detroit, 1998 page 202 This is all a lie cause no one knows Dorothy Thompson, the first American journalist to be expelled from Nazi Germany (in 1934), made an impassioned 14 November broadcast to an estimated five million listeners in defence of Grynszpan and noted that the Nazis had made heroes of the assassins of Austrian Chancellor Engelbert Dollfuss and German-Jewish Foreign Minister Walther Rathenau:
Revised: Schmitteroth, Linda & Rosteck, Mary Kay People of the Holocaust, U-X-L: Detroit, 1998 page 202 Dorothy Thompson, the first American journalist to be expelled from Nazi Germany (in 1934), made an impassioned 14 November broadcast to an estimated five million listeners in defence of Grynszpan and noted that the Nazis had made heroes of the assassins of Austrian Chancellor Engelbert Dollfuss and German-Jewish Foreign Minister Walther Rathenau:
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Original:  Abraham said he had little to spare and was incurring financial costs and legal risks by harbouring his nephew, an undocumented alien and unemployed youth.
Revised:  Abraham said he had little to spare and was incurring financial costs and legal risks by harbouring his nephew, an illegal immigrant and unemployed youth.
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Original:  Rath's assassination was used to justify planned antisemitic pogroms in Germany.
Revised:  Rath's assassination was used to justify antisemitic pogroms in Germany.
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Original:  Guardian, mystery-jewish-assassin-kristallnacht
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Original:  He is the subject of The Short, Strange Life of Herschel Grynszpan, a book by Jonathan Kirsch and the novels Champion, by Stephen Deutsch and Everyone Has Their Reasons by Joseph Matthews.
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Original:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac' (The Lombard and Snail)Testamentum asini (The Piglet 's Testament)Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament)Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare)Altercacio aranee et musce'' (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
Revised:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac' (The Lombard and Snail)Testamentum asini (The Donkey 's Testament)Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament)Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare)Altercacio aranee et musce'' (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
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Original:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac ' (The Lombard and Snail) Testamentum asini (The Donkey's Testament) Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament) Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare) Altercacio aranee et musce '' (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
Revised:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac (The Lombard and Snail) Testamentum asini (The Donkey's Testament) Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament) Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare) Altercacio aranee et musce '' (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
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Original:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac ' (The Lombard and Snail) Testamentum asini (The Donkey's Testament) Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament) Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare) Altercacio aranee et musce '' (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
Revised:  Flete, canes (Weep, Dogs) Pulicis et musce iurgia (Quarrel of the Flea and the Fly) De asino ad episcopum ducto (The Ass Brought before the Bishop) Gallus et vulpes (The Cock and the Fox) De pulice (The Flea) De Lombardo et lumac ' (The Lombard and Snail) Testamentum asini (The Donkey's Testament) Testamentum porcelli (The Piglet's Testament) Altercatio nani et leporis (Altercation of the Dwarf and Hare) Altercacio aranee et musce (Altercation of the Spider and the Fly) References
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Original:  In structure, a beast poem can be as humble as one speech by a bird struggling to fly home safely... but then again it can intertwine a dozen main stories and another dozen visions, reminiscences, and divagations... . The beast poems were created for many occasions and audiences... to be pored over in the library...
Revised:  In structure, a beast poem can be as humble as one speech by a bird struggling to fly home safely... but then again it can intertwine a dozen main stories and another dozen visions, reminiscences, and divagations... The beast poems were created for many occasions and audiences... to be pored over in the library...
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Original:  , read aloud, sung, and staged . ...
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Original: Louis Drouin Sr  , father of Louis Drouin  Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin  Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr  Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
Revised: Louis Drouin Sr . , father of Louis Drouin Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
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Original: Louis Drouin Sr  , father of Louis Drouin  Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin  Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr  Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
Revised: Louis Drouin Sr , father of Louis Drouin Jr. Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
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Original: Louis Drouin Sr  , father of Louis Drouin  Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin  Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr  Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
Revised: Louis Drouin Sr , father of Louis Drouin Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin Jr. Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
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Original: Louis Drouin Sr  , father of Louis Drouin  Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin  Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr  Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
Revised: Louis Drouin Sr , father of Louis Drouin Louise Degraff, his wife Guy Drouin, brother of Louis Drouin Alice Drouin, sister of Louis Drouin Jr . Gérard Guilbaud, Alice's husband Mrs.
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Original:  (85 years old), mother of Guy and Victor Villedrouin Victor Villedrouin Roseline Drouin, Guy Villedrouin's wife and sister of Louis Drouin Jr  Fernande Villedrouin, sister of Guy and Victor Guy Villedrouin, brother of Victor Villedrouin Adeline Chassagne, Victor Villedrouin's wife Lisa Villedrouin(18 years old), their daughter Frantz Villedrouin (16 years old)
Revised:  (85 years old), mother of Guy and Victor Villedrouin Victor Villedrouin Roseline Drouin, Guy Villedrouin's wife and sister of Louis Drouin Jr . Fernande Villedrouin, sister of Guy and Victor Guy Villedrouin, brother of Victor Villedrouin Adeline Chassagne, Victor Villedrouin's wife Lisa Villedrouin(18 years old), their daughter Frantz Villedrouin (16 years old)
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Original:  It took place after a group of 13 young Haitians calling themselves "Jeune Haiti" landed on August 6, 1964 at Petite-Rivière-de-Dame-Marie with the intention of overthrowing the regime of François ' Pap Doc' Duvalier.
Revised:  It took place after a group of 13 young Haitians calling themselves "Jeune Haiti" landed on August 6, 1964 at Petite-Rivière-de-Dame-Marie with the intention of overthrowing the regime of François ' Papa Doc' Duvalier.
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Original:  They were Max Armand, his brother Jacques Armand, Gérald Marie Brierre, Miko Chandler, Louis Drouin, Charles Forbin, Jean Gerdes, Réginald Jourdan, Yvon Laraque, Marcel Numa, Roland Rigaud, Gusley Villedrouin and Jacques Wadestrand.
Revised:  They 13 were: Max Armand, his brother Jacques Armand, Gérald Marie Brierre, Miko Chandler, Louis Drouin, Charles Forbin, Jean Gerdes, Réginald Jourdan, Yvon Laraque, Marcel Numa, Roland Rigaud, Gusley Villedrouin and Jacques Wadestrand.
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Original:  The members of "Jeune Haiti" were killed one by one in combat with Haiti's army, until the last two survivors, Louis Drouin and Marcel Numa, out of ammunition, were captured alive, brought back to Port-au-Prince and shot in public against the cemetery wall on November 12, 1964.
Revised:  The members of "Jeune Haiti" were killed one by one in combat with Haiti's army, until the last two survivors, Louis Drouin and Marcel Numa, out of ammunition, were captured alive, brought back to Port-au-Prince and shot in public against the cemetery wall on November 12, 
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Original:  External links Fordi9.com - The 13 of "Jeune Haiti"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 1964 in Haiti Category:History of Haiti Category:Mass murder in 1964 Category:Massacres in Hai
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 1964 in Haiti Category:History of Haiti Category:Mass murder in 1964 Category:Massacres in Hai
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Original:  External links Fordi9.com - The 13 of "Jeune Haiti"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 1964 in Haiti Category:History of Haiti Category:Mass murder in 1964 Category:Massacres in Hai
Revised:  External links Fordi9.com - The 13 of "Jeune Haiti"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1964 in Haiti Category:History of Haiti Category:Mass murder in 1964 Category:Massacres in Hai
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Original:  External links Fordi9.com - The 13 of "Jeune Haiti"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 1964 in Haiti Category:History of Haiti Category:Mass murder in 1964 Category:Massacres in Hai
Revised:  External links Fordi9.com - The 13 of "Jeune Haiti"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: 1964 
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Original:  daughter of Pierre Edith Laforest, Louise Laforest's sister Jean-Pierre Sansaricq (6 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Stéphane Sansaricq (4 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Régine Sansaricq (2 years old), daughter of Jean-Claude and Graziela Pierre-Richard Sansaricq Alphonze Bazile, Son of Pierre and Vesta Bazile
Revised:  daughter of Pierre Edith Laforest, Louise Laforest's sister Jean-Pierre Sansaricq (6 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Stéphane Sansaricq (4 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Régine Sansaricq (2 years old), daughter of Jean-Claude and Graziela Pierre-Richard Sansaricq Alphonze Bazile, son of Pierre and Vesta Bazile
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Original: The  Jérémie Vespers refer to a massacre that took place in August, September and October 1964 in the Haitian town of Jérémie.
Revised: The term Jérémie Vespers refer to a massacre that took place in August, September and October 1964 in the Haitian town of Jérémie.
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Original: The  Jérémie Vespers refer to a massacre that took place in August, September and October 1964 in the Haitian town of Jérémie.
Revised: The Jérémie Vespers refers to a massacre that took place in August, September and October 1964 in the Haitian town of Jérémie.
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Original:  Outcome The massacre was called the "vespers" because many of the families killed by the regime are remembered as the families who took many aforementioned "vesper" picnic excursions.
Revised:  Terminology The massacre was called the "vespers" because many of the families killed by the regime are remembered as the families who took many aforementioned "vesper" picnic excursions.
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Original:   Several of the group were from the town of Jérémie.
Revised:  Victims Several of the group were from the town of Jérémie.
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Original:  daughter of Pierre Edith Laforest, Louise Laforest's sister Jean-Pierre Sansaricq (6 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Stéphane Sansaricq (4 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Régine Sansaricq (2 years old), daughter of Jean-Claude and Graziela Pierre-Richard Sansaricq Alphonze Bazile, son of Pierre and Vesta Bazile The members of "Jeune Haiti"
Revised:  daughter of Pierre Edith Laforest, Louise Laforest's sister Jean-Pierre Sansaricq (6 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Stéphane Sansaricq (4 years old), son of Jean-Claude and Graziela Régine Sansaricq (2 years old), daughter of Jean-Claude and Graziela Pierre-Richard Sansaricq Alphonze Bazile, son of Pierre and Vesta The members of "Jeune Haiti"
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Original:  Localized disease refers to an infectious or neoplastic process that is confined to one organ system or general area in the body.
Revised:  disease is a term referring to an infectious or neoplastic process that is confined to one organ system or general area in the body.
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Original: Localized disease is a term referring to an infectious or neoplastic process that is confined to one organ system or general area in the body.
Revised: A localized disease is an infectious or neoplastic process that is confined to one organ system or general area in the body.
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Original:  Tumors that are non-hematologic in origin but extend into the bloodstream or lymphatic system are known as metastati 
Revised:  Tumors that are non-hematologic in origin but extend into the bloodstream or lymphatic system are known as metastatic. 
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Original:  W.B.Saunders, Harcourt Brace & Company such as a sprained ankle, a boil on the hand, an abscess of finger. 
Revised:  W.B.Saunders, Harcourt Brace & Company such as a sprained ankle, a boil on the hand, an abscess of finger. ..........
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Original:   Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
Revised:  #) Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
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Original: Gh he h)463673( #) Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
Revised:  #) Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
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Original: Gh he h)463673( #) Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
Revised: Gh he h)463673( Ansel Easton Adams (February 20, 1902 – April 22, 1984) was an American landscape photographer and environmentalist known for his black-and-white images of the American West.
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Original:  According to  Petrosyan, hay has been used to mean "husband, chief of family" in several Armenian dialects.
Revised:  According to Armen Petrosyan, hay has been used to mean "husband, chief of family" in several Armenian dialects.
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