wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Martin Luther King , Jr., Research and Institute Institute Maude married Leonard Ballou, a music instructor who was a friend and fraternity brother of Martin Luther King , Jr. They moved to Montgomery, Alabama in 1952.
Revised: The Martin Luther King Jr., Research and Institute Institute Maude married Leonard Ballou, a music instructor who was a friend and fraternity brother of Martin Luther King , Jr. They moved to Montgomery, Alabama in 1952.
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Original: The Martin Luther King , Jr., Research and Institute Institute Maude married Leonard Ballou, a music instructor who was a friend and fraternity brother of Martin Luther King , Jr. They moved to Montgomery, Alabama in 1952.
Revised: The Martin Luther King , Jr., Research and Institute Institute Maude married Leonard Ballou, a music instructor who was a friend and fraternity brother of Martin Luther King Jr. They moved to Montgomery, Alabama in 1952.
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Original:  Civil rights activism Beginning in 1955, Ballou worked as Martin Luther King , Jr.'s personal secretary.
Revised:  Civil rights activism Beginning in 1955, Ballou worked as Martin Luther King Jr.'s personal secretary.
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Original: The Martin Luther King  Jr., Research and Institute Institute
Revised: The Martin Luther King , Jr., Research and Institute Institute
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Original:  She and her husband were personal friends of Martin Luther King Jr. , and she worked as King's secretary between 1955 and 1960.
Revised:  She and her husband were personal friends of Martin Luther King Jr. and she worked as King's secretary between 1955 and 1960.
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Original:  Her work included editing early versions of King's iconic  I Have a Dream  speech, which King delivered at churches around the South.
Revised:  Her work included editing early versions of King's iconic " I Have a Dream speech, which King delivered at churches around the South.
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Original:  Her work included editing early versions of King's iconic  I Have a Dream  speech, which King delivered at churches around the South.
Revised:  Her work included editing early versions of King's iconic I Have a Dream " speech, which King delivered at churches around the South.
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Original:  immortal" ) said to have lived during the Han dynasty (202 BCE-220 CE ).
Revised:  immortal" ).
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Original:  Following the civil rights movements of the 1960s and 1970s some ethnographers became more politically active and experimented in various ways to incorporate emancipatory political projects into their research.
Revised:  Following the movements for civil rights of the 1960s and 1970s some ethnographers became more politically active and experimented in various ways to incorporate emancipatory political projects into their research.
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Original:  In the spirit of critical theory, this approach seeks to determine symbolic mechanisms, to extract ideology from action, and to understand the cognition and behaviour of research subjects within historical, cultural, and social frameworks.
Revised:  of critical theory, this approach seeks to determine symbolic mechanisms, to extract ideology from action, and to understand the cognition and behaviour of research subjects within historical, cultural, and social frameworks.
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Original:  Newbury Park, CA: Sage.  of critical theory, this approach seeks to determine symbolic mechanisms, to extract ideology from action, and to understand the cognition and behaviour of research subjects within historical, cultural, and social frameworks.
Revised:  Newbury Park, CA: Sage. In the spirit of critical theory, this approach seeks to determine symbolic mechanisms, to extract ideology from action, and to understand the cognition and behaviour of research subjects within historical, cultural, and social frameworks.
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Original: Salamat Ali Khan (12 Dec 1934 11 July 2001) was a Pakistani vocalist and touring artist known for his contribution to the Hindustani classical music.
Revised: Salamat Ali Khan (12 December 1934 11 July 2001) was a Pakistani vocalist and touring artist known for his contribution to the Hindustani classical music.
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Original: Prior to migrating to Multan, he appeared in Harballabh Sangeet Sammelan in 1941 and todi.
Revised: Prior to migrating to Multan, he appeared in Harballabh Sangeet Sammelan in 1941.
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Original:  Midstream (GB) the Leading sire in Australia 1947-48%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 1950-52 and sire of the champions Shannon, Delta and Murray Stream 1945 1947 AJC Metropolitan Handicap.
Revised:  Midstream (GB) the Leading sire in Australia 1947-48%DIFDELCMD < & %%% 1947 AJC Metropolitan Handicap.
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Original: Stable Isotopes Sea turtle eggs being laid by the mother.
Revised: Stable isotopes Sea turtle eggs being laid by the mother.
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Original: Importance SeaTag-GEO on a turtle carrier platform for turtle tagging Electronic tags are giving scientists a complete, accurate picture of migration patterns.
Revised: Importance Electronic tags are giving scientists a complete, accurate picture of migration patterns.
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Original: Technologies [[File:Monarch Butterfly Danaus plexippus Tagged Closeup 3008px.jpg|A monarch butterfly shortly after tagging at the Cape May Bird Observatory Cape May Bird Observatory is one of the organizations that has a monarch identification tagging program.
Revised: Technologies [[File:Monarch Butterfly Danaus plexippus Tagged Closeup 3008px.jpg|A monarch butterfly shortly after tagging at the Cape May Bird Observatory Cape May Bird Observatory is one of the organizations that has a monarc identification tagging program.
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Original: Scientists today still attach tags, such as metal bands, to track movement of animals.
Revised: Scientists today still attach tags, such as meta bands, to track movement of animals.
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Original: Scientists today still attach tags, such as meta bands, to track movement of animals.
Revised: Scientists today still attach tags, such as metal bands, to track movement of animals.
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Original:   One of the many goals of animal migration research has been to determine where the animals are going;
Revised:  With the Emergence of IoT the ability to make devices specific to the species or what is to be tracked is possible. One of the many goals of animal migration research has been to determine where the animals are going;
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Original:  This involves the use of electronic tags that emit sound in order for the researchers to track and monitor an animal within three dimensions, which is helpful in instances when large quantities of a species are being tracked at a time.  ] 
Revised:  This involves the use of electronic tags that emit sound in order for the researchers to track and monitor an animal within three dimensions, which is helpful in instances when large quantities of a species are being tracked at a time. edit] 
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Original:  Lady Hitara died of illness on 5 March 1797, having been Empress for barely a year.
Revised:  Lady Hitara died of illness on 5 March 1797, having been empress for barely a year.
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Original:  According to Qing dynasty imperial medical records, Empress Xiaoshurui was of good health 
Revised:  According to Qing dynasty imperial medical records, Empress Xiaoshurui was of good health .
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Original: His Royal Majesty, Oba Alayeluwa Saheed Ademola Elegushi, Kusenla III, a Nigerian monarch (born 10 April 1976), is the 21st Elegushi of  Ikate-Elegushi Kingdom.
Revised: His Royal Majesty, Oba Alayeluwa Saheed Ademola Elegushi, Kusenla III, a Nigerian monarch (born 10 April 1976), is the 21st Elegushi of the Ikate-Elegushi Kingdom.
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Original:  Oba Elegushi was presented with the staff of office by the Government of Lagos State on the 27th of April , 2010.
Revised:  Oba Elegushi was presented with the staff of office by the Government of Lagos State on 27 April 2010.
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Original:  In 1912, the South African Native National Congress - later renamed the ANC - was founded in Bloemfontein as an organisation that could defend and advance black rights and freedoms on a national scale.
Revised:  In 1912, the South African Native National Congress - later renamed the African National Congress - was founded in Bloemfontein as an organisation that could defend and advance black rights and freedoms on a national scale.
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Original: The declaration of the war was cause for subdued patriotic fervour by some races and outright rebellion by others . Predominantly, English-speaking whites were by far the most supportive, strongly backing Britain and volunteering in their tens of thousands.
Revised: The declaration of the war was met with a wide variety of public opinions . Predominantly, English-speaking whites were by far the most supportive, strongly backing Britain and volunteering in their tens of thousands.
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Original: The declaration of the war was cause for subdued patriotic fervour by some races and outright rebellion by others . Predominantly, English-speaking whites were by far the most supportive, strongly backing Britain and volunteering in their tens of thousands.
Revised: The declaration of the war was cause for subdued patriotic fervour by some races and outright rebellion by others . Predominantly, English-speaking whites were by far the most supportive, strongly backing the mother country and volunteering in their tens of thousands.
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Original:  Some pro-republican Afrikaners, outraged by British influence in South Africa, staged an armed rebellion against the Government in 1914 in an attempt to re-establish their independence.
Revised:  Some pro-republican Afrikaners, outraged by British influence over South Africa, staged an armed rebellion against the Government in 1914 in an attempt to re-establish their independence.
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Original:  Some pro-republican Afrikaners, outraged by British influence in South Africa, staged an armed rebellion against the Government in 1914 in an attempt to re-establish their independence.
Revised:  Some pro-republican Afrikaners, outraged by British influence in South Africa, staged an armed rebellion against the Government in 1914 in an attempt to re-establish independence.
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Original:  Although barred by racial legislation from being allowed to carry weapons, many still joined the national labour service and thousands were deployed to France as non-combatants to undertake manual work in the Western Front .
Revised:  Although barred by racial legislation from being allowed to carry weapons, many still joined the National Labour Service with thousands being deployed to France as non-combatants to undertake manual work in the Western Front .
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Original:  Although barred by racial legislation from being allowed to carry weapons, many still joined the national labour service and thousands were deployed to France as non-combatants to undertake manual work in the Western Front .
Revised:  Although barred by racial legislation from being allowed to carry weapons, many still joined the national labour service and thousands were deployed to France as non-combatants .
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Original:  Between 1914 and 1918, over 250,000 South Africans of all races, out of a population of 6 million, volunteered to serve their country .
Revised:  Between 1914 and 1918, over 250,000 South Africans of all races, from a population of 6 million, volunteered to serve their country .
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Original:  Between 1914 and 1918, over 250,000 South Africans of all races, out of a population of 6 million, volunteered to serve their country .
Revised:  Between 1914 and 1918, over 250,000 South Africans of all races, out of a population of 6 million, volunteered to serve .
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Original:  Thousands more served in the British Army directly, with over 3,000 joining the British Royal Flying Corps.
Revised:  Thousands more enlisted the British Army directly, with over 3,000 joining the British Royal Flying Corps.
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Original:  Eight South Africans won the Victoria Cross for gallantry, the Empire’s highest and  prestigious military medal.
Revised:  Eight South Africans won the Victoria Cross for gallantry, the Empire’s highest and most prestigious military medal.
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Original:  Outbreak of war Following the British declaration of war against Germany on 4 August 1914, South Africa was consequently automatically entangled in the conflict due to her status as a Dominion within the British Empire.
Revised:  Outbreak of war Following the British declaration of war against Germany on 4 August 1914, South Africa was consequently part of the conflict due to her status as a Dominion within the British Empire.
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Original:  Although with significant levels of self-government  South Africa, along with Australia, New Zealand, and Canada for example, were only semi-independent and could not exercise an autonomous foreign policy separate to that of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Although with significant levels of self-government , South Africa, along with Australia, New Zealand, and Canada for example, were only semi-independent and could not exercise an autonomous foreign policy separate to that of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  It was seen by South African Prime Minister , Louis Botha , that the war offered an opportunity for territorial expansion, and that South Africa could possibly incorporate the small neighbouring colonies of Basutoland (Lesotho), Bechuanaland (Botswana) and Swaziland.
Revised:  It was seen by South African Prime Minister Louis Botha that the war offered an opportunity for territorial expansion, and that South Africa could possibly incorporate the small neighbouring colonies of Basutoland (Lesotho), Bechuanaland (Botswana) and Swaziland.
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Original:  Although Britain refused to cede colonies to South Africa  and was equally reluctant to discuss any post-war territorial claims, Prime Minister Botha and General Smuts became active and trusted members of the British Imperial War Cabinet.
Revised:  Although Britain refused to cede colonies to South Africa , and was equally reluctant to discuss any post-war territorial claims, Prime Minister Botha and General Smuts became active and trusted members of the British Imperial War Cabinet.
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Original:  Although Britain refused to cede colonies to South Africa  and was equally reluctant to discuss any post-war territorial claims, Prime Minister Botha and General Smuts became active and trusted members of the British Imperial War Cabinet.
Revised:  Although Britain refused to cede colonies to South Africa and was equally reluctant to discuss any post-war territorial claims, Prime Minister Botha and General Smuts quickly became trusted and energetic members of the British Imperial War Cabinet.
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Original: Ian van der Waag (2012) "All splendid, but horrible: The Politics of South Africa's Second "Little Bit" and the War on the Western Front, 1915-1918", Scientia Militaria, volume 40, number 3, pp71–108 Led by the former Boer veteran Louis Botha, the SAP pursued a reconciliatory relationship with Britain, was favourable to South Africa being a self-governing Dominion within the Empire, and  generally supported by moderates of all races .
Revised: Ian van der Waag (2012) "All splendid, but horrible: The Politics of South Africa's Second "Little Bit" and the War on the Western Front, 1915-1918", Scientia Militaria, volume 40, number 3, pp71–108 Led by the former Boer veteran Louis Botha, the SAP pursued a reconciliatory relationship with Britain, was favourable to South Africa being a self-governing Dominion within the Empire, and was generally supported by moderates of all races .
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Original:  In the immediate years before the First World War, South Africa routinely used force to suppress both black and white labour unrest, particularly in the economically vital mines .
Revised:  In the immediate years before the First World War, South Africa routinely used force to suppress both black and white labour unrest, particularly in the economically important mining industry .
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Original:  With increasing violence and death being reported in Johannesburg, martial law was declared after public property was destroyed and troops responded with live fire.
Revised:  With increased violence and death being reported in Johannesburg, martial law was declared after public property was destroyed and troops responded with live fire.
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Original:  More than 20 people were killed and fears were so great that  Johannesburg and critical mine infrastructure would be destroyed, that Botha and Smuts hurried from Pretoria to negotiate with the strikers directly .
Revised:  More than 20 people were killed and fears were so great that it was thought that Johannesburg and critical mine infrastructure would be destroyed, that Botha and Smuts hurried from Pretoria to negotiate with the strikers directly .
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Original:  J.B.M. Hertzog, another Boer veteran and former Minister of Justice under Botha, formed the National Party (NP) which gained 20 new seats in the 1915 October election - forcing the SAP to become a minority government for the rest of the war with parliamentary support from the pro-British , Natal based Unionist Party.
Revised:  J.B.M. Hertzog, another Boer veteran and former Minister of Justice under Botha, formed the National Party (NP) which gained 20 new seats in the 1915 October election - forcing the SAP to become a minority government for the rest of the war with parliamentary support from the pro-British Natal based Unionist Party.
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Original: By the end of 1914, disillusioned Afrikaners increasingly resented the support that South Africa was giving Britain, and British imperialism, during the First World War, as well the perception that Afrikaner culture was being neglected and should be developed separately from English-speaking whites .
Revised: By the end of 1914, disillusioned Afrikaners increasingly resented the support that South Africa was giving Britain, and British imperialism, during the First World War, as well the perception that Afrikaner culture was being neglected and should be developed separately from English-speaking white South Africans .
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Original: The SAOEF consisted of several arms of service: 1st South African Infantry Brigade.
Revised:  1st South African Infantry Brigade.
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Original:  two infantry battalions and a labour battalion Engineer, signals, supply and transport, medical, and veterinary units South African Native Labour Corps German East Africa Campaign (1916-1918)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The East African Campaign was a series of battles and guerrilla actions which occurred in German East Africa, before spreading to areas within Portuguese Mozambique, Northern Rhodesia, British East Africa, the Uganda Protectorate and the Belgian Congo.
Revised:  two infantry battalions and a labour battalion Engineer, signals, supply and transport, medical, and veterinary units South African Native Labour Corps %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The East African Campaign was a series of battles and guerrilla actions which occurred in German East Africa, before spreading to areas within Portuguese Mozambique, Northern Rhodesia, British East Africa, the Uganda Protectorate and the Belgian Congo.
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Original:  Egypt Campaign (1916) In the summer of 1915, the Ottoman Empire persuaded the Grand Senussi Ahmed Sharif, who held lands in formerly Ottoman Libya, to invade British-occupied Egypt from the west and encourage mass insurrection in support of the Ottoman offensive against the Suez Canal in the east.
Revised:  Egypt Campaign (1916) 
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Original:  During December 1915, it was decided to deploy the 1st South African Brigade, which had been training in Britain since August, to Egypt to fight alongside Imperial forces against the Senussi due to the South African’s having recent desert experience.
Revised:  The 1st South African Brigade, which had been training in Britain since August, to Egypt to fight alongside Imperial forces against the Senussi due to the South African’s having recent desert experience.
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Original:  Western Front Campaign (1916–1918) From April 1916 until the war in Europe ended on 11 November 1918, South Africa fought alongside other Allied nations at battles of the Somme in 1916;
Revised:  Western Front Campaign (1916–1918) From April 1916 until the war in Europe ended on 11 November 1918. They fought in the battles of the Somme in 1916;
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Original:  Two events of the campaign  are still commemorated today and are a symbol of remembrance - the Battle of Delville Wood  , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
Revised:  The two events of the campaign are still commemorated today and are a symbol of remembrance - the Battle of Delville Wood , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
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Original:  Two events of the campaign  are still commemorated today and are a symbol of remembrance - the Battle of Delville Wood  , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
Revised:  Two events of the campaign that are still commemorated today and are a symbol of remembrance - the Battle of Delville Wood , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
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Original:  Two events of the campaign  are still commemorated today and are a symbol of remembrance - the Battle of Delville Wood  , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
Revised:  Two events of the campaign are still commemorated are the Battle of Delville Wood , and the sinking of the troopship SS Mendi .
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Original:  Two South Africans, Private  William Frederick Faulds and Lance Corporal William Henry Hewitt, would also go on to win the Victoria Cross - the Empire’s highest medal for gallantry.
Revised:  Two South Africans, Private William Frederick Faulds and L Cpl William Henry Hewitt, would also go on to win the Victoria Cross - the Empire’s highest medal for gallantry.
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Original:  Two South Africans, Private  William Frederick Faulds and Lance Corporal William Henry Hewitt, would also go on to win the Victoria Cross - the Empire’s highest medal for gallantry.
Revised:  Two South Africans, Private William Frederick Faulds and Lance Corporal William Henry Hewitt, won the Victoria Cross - the Empire’s highest medal for gallantry.
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Original:  Two South Africans, Private  William Frederick Faulds and Lance Corporal William Henry Hewitt, would also go on to win the Victoria Cross - the Empire’s highest medal for gallantry.
Revised:  Two South Africans, Private William Frederick Faulds and Lance Corporal William Henry Hewitt, would also go on to win the Victoria Cross for gallantry.
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Original:  Palestine Campaign (1918)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On 19 April 1918, the first battalion of the South African Cape Corps, which had fought in East Africa, disembarked at Port Suez in Egypt.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On 19 April 1918, the first battalion of the South African Cape Corps, which had fought in East Africa, disembarked at Port Suez in Egypt.
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Original:  Intelligence had suggested that, although defended, enemy strength would not be considerable and a strong artillery bombardment of five minutes would suffice.
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Original:  After the offensive against the Ottomans, the Cape Corps was later withdrawn to Alexandria where it suppressed an Egyptian Nationalist uprising, until returning to South African in September 1919.
Revised:  Disbandment The SAOEF units and formations were disbanded in 1919.
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