wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Prior to the submission of the Report, Mesmer had been the toast of Paris, dealing with many wealthy patrons . . . Following publication of the Report, Mesmer was a focus of public scorn and ridicule . . . " –
Revised:  Prior to the submission of the Report, Mesmer had been the toast of Paris, dealing with many wealthy patrons . . . Following publication of the Report, Mesmer was a focus of public scorn and ridicule . . . –
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Original: Gould (1989), pp .16.
Revised: Gould (1989), p .16.
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Original:  Melton, 2001a, p.319, 2001b, pp.989-990, etc.), clairvoyance (seeing persons/events distant in time or place: see Melton, 2001a, p .297-301), psychical rapport (able to read operator's thoughts, and be mesmerised from a distance: see Crabtree, 2008, p.569), and ecstasy ("immersed in an elevated state of consciousness with an awareness of spiritual things": see Crabtree, 1988, p.xxiv;
Revised:  Melton, 2001a, p.319, 2001b, pp.989-990, etc.), clairvoyance (seeing persons/events distant in time or place: see Melton, 2001a, pp .297-301), psychical rapport (able to read operator's thoughts, and be mesmerised from a distance: see Crabtree, 2008, p.569), and ecstasy ("immersed in an elevated state of consciousness with an awareness of spiritual things": see Crabtree, 1988, p.xxiv;
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Original:  (Forrest, p.67). and noting that "observations over the centuries prove & Physicians themselves recognize, that Nature alone & without the help of medical treatment cures a great number of patients", Salas Salas (1996), p.71;
Revised:  (Forrest, p.67). and noting that "observations over the centuries prove & Physicians themselves recognize, that Nature alone & without the help of medical treatment cures a great number of patients", Salas (1996), p.71;
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Original:  Salas & Salas (1996), p .70-71;
Revised:  Salas & Salas (1996), pp .70-71;
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Original:  and from the detail that M. Deslon [sic] has made to them respecting the interior construction of the ["baquet"], they cannot infer any physical agent, capable of contributing to the imputed effects of the magnetism." – "Franklin" Report (p.5.)Translation taken from Godwin (1785), p .24-25: other translations at: Anon (1911/1912), p.79;
Revised:  and from the detail that M. Deslon [sic] has made to them respecting the interior construction of the ["baquet"], they cannot infer any physical agent, capable of contributing to the imputed effects of the magnetism." – "Franklin" Report (p.5.)Translation taken from Godwin (1785), pp .24-25: other translations at: Anon (1911/1912), p.79;
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Original:  If it was organic, the result of physical damage to the tissue, he considered it, following [his] Proposition 23,Namely: "We can see from the fact is this principle, in accordance with the practical rules I shall set forth, can cure nervous ailments directly and other ailments indirectly" -
Revised:  If it was organic, the result of physical damage to the tissue, he considered it, following [his] Proposition 23,Namely: "We can see from the facts that this principle, in accordance with the practical rules I shall set forth, can cure nervous ailments directly and other ailments indirectly" -
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Original:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
Revised:  2002, p.323), Franklin ' s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
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Original:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
Revised:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ' s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
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Original:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
Revised:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ' s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
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Original:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ’ s glass armonica.
Revised:  2002, p.323), Franklin ’ s first encounter with Mesmer was not long after Mesmer ’ s arrival in Paris -- when Franklin accompanied the accomplished composer and celebrated clavichord player, , "one of the most beautiful women in France who was very close to Franklin during his time in Paris and whom Franklin was pursuing strongly" (p.323), on a visit to Mesmer ’ s establishment specifically to observe Mesmer's use of Franklin ' s glass armonica.
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Original: In other words, the initial, apparent, "from a first impression" plausibility -- in contrast to so-called "pro tanto ("to that extent") plausibity", a state of affairs in which later empirical experience shows that the " plausibilty " involved is far deeper than simply superficial.
Revised: In other words, the initial, apparent, "from a first impression" plausibility -- in contrast to so-called "pro tanto ("to that extent") plausibity", a state of affairs in which later empirical experience shows that the " plausibility " involved is far deeper than simply superficial.
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Original:  He received only one reply: that from the Berlin Academy: "The Academy ’ s reply was negative and, in Mesmer ’ s view, showed a complete misunderstanding of animal as distinguished from mineral magnetism" (Pattie, 1994, p.42).
Revised:  He received only one reply: that from the Berlin Academy: "The Academy ' s reply was negative and, in Mesmer ’ s view, showed a complete misunderstanding of animal as distinguished from mineral magnetism" (Pattie, 1994, p.42).
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Original:  He received only one reply: that from the Berlin Academy: "The Academy ’ s reply was negative and, in Mesmer ’ s view, showed a complete misunderstanding of animal as distinguished from mineral magnetism" (Pattie, 1994, p.42).
Revised:  He received only one reply: that from the Berlin Academy: "The Academy ’ s reply was negative and, in Mesmer ' s view, showed a complete misunderstanding of animal as distinguished from mineral magnetism" (Pattie, 1994, p.42).
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Original:  For details of the Academy ’ s reply see Mesmer, 1784, pp.21-22 (translated at Pattie, 1994, pp.45-46).
Revised:  For details of the Academy ' s reply see Mesmer, 1784, pp.21-22 (translated at Pattie, 1994, pp.45-46).
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Original:  150px|John Haygarth The "Franklin" Commissions' legacy 160px|Modern facsimiles of a standard pair of Perkins' Patent Tractors (one made of steel, the other brass) The "classic" structure of the investigations undertaken by the "Franklin" CommissionIn 2002, McConkey and Perry (p.329) observed that "the Franklin Commission ’ s scientific findings on the nature of animal magnetism remain intact and unchallenged".
Revised:  150px|John Haygarth The "Franklin" Commissions' legacy 160px|Modern facsimiles of a standard pair of Perkins' Patent Tractors (one made of steel, the other brass) The "classic" structure of the investigations undertaken by the "Franklin" CommissionIn 2002, McConkey and Perry (p.329) observed that "the Franklin Commission ' s scientific findings on the nature of animal magnetism remain intact and unchallenged".
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Original:  Four years later, by mid-1843, further experiments that had been conducted by Collyer himself had conclusively proved to his own satisfaction that he was mistaken, and Collyer concluded that that there was no such thing as phreno-magnetism at all.
Revised:  Four years later, by mid-1843, further experiments that had been conducted by Collyer himself had conclusively proved to his own satisfaction that he was mistaken, and Collyer concluded that there was no such thing as phreno-magnetism at all.
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Original:   Reign Abdullah and his elder brother, Salman bin Ahmad Al Khalifa , began to rule the country together in 1796 when their father, Ahmad, died in Manama, and this joint rulership continued until 1821 when Salman died.
Revised:  The joint rulership of Abdullah and Salman continued until 1821 when Salman died.
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Original:   Reign Abdullah and his elder brother, Salman bin Ahmad Al Khalifa , began to rule the country together in 1796 when their father, Ahmad, died in Manama, and this joint rulership continued until 1821 when Salman died.
Revised:  Reign Abdullah and his elder brother, Salman bin Ahmad Al Khalifa , began to rule the country together in 1796 when their father, Ahmad, died in Manama, and this joint rulership continued until 1821 when the latter died.
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Original:  Motika was a prolific painter, who left behind him great legacy.
Revised:  Motika was a prolific painter, who left behind a great legacy.
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Original:  Motika and Picasso met on two occasions, in Murano and Basel. 
Revised:  Motika and Picasso met on two occasions, in Murano and Basel. Gallery
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Original: Although he occasionally painted with oil on canvas, Motika generally preferred watercolor or gouache, whose application he preceded with a series of preparatory drawings in pencil or charcoal.
Revised: Although he occasionally painted with oil on canvas, he generally preferred watercolor or gouache, whose application he preceded with a series of preparatory drawings in pencil or charcoal.
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Original:  The exhibition has become the main topic of theoretical and ideological discussion among the Croatian critics.
Revised:  The exhibition has become the main topic of theoretical and ideological discussion among Croatian critics.
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Original: Biography Untitled painting by Motika , Antun Motika Collection Motika was one of four children of Anka (Ana), originally from Bakar, who was from a family of sailors, and Antun Motika, who was from Motiki, near Orbanići, Marčana.
Revised: Biography Motika was one of four children of Anka (Ana), originally from Bakar, who was from a family of sailors, and Antun Motika, who was from Motiki, near Orbanići, Marčana.
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Original:  Flowers on the Window, Modern Gallery, Zagreb In Mostar, Motika created works with a specific lyrical atmosphere, full of light and "saturated tonal atmosphere."
Revised:  In Mostar, Motika created works with a specific lyrical atmosphere, full of light and "saturated tonal atmosphere."
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Original: |200px|left He became a professor in Mostar, where he lived and painted from 1929 to 1940 (the so-called "Mostar period").
Revised:  He became a professor in Mostar, where he lived and painted from 1929 to 1940 (the so-called "Mostar period").
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Original: Gallery Sources D. Schneider, Antun Motika 1927–1974, Zagreb 1974–75.
Revised:  Sources D. Schneider, Antun Motika 1927–1974, Zagreb 1974–75.
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Original:              International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
Revised:  Another aspect that influences the uptake of parental leave is gender dynamics at home and work. In households with a positive association between fatherhood involvement and egalitarian values, the father utilization of parental leave is increased. Workplace environments that promote parental leave for fathers as essential create a greater likelihood of these dads taking parental leave for a longer duration. In contrast, a workplace culture that views paternal leave as an indicator of poor work habits and as "feminine" causes fathers in that environment to be less likely to participate in parental leave. International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
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Original:              International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
Revised:  Eligibility and Uptake of Parental Leave For Mothers: The eligibility and uptake of parental leave programs are not consistent among all demographics of expecting mothers. Research by Marynissen, Wood and Neels (2021) found that 26.37\% of mothers in Belgium are not eligible for parental leave. This is due to the employment-based eligibility criteria present with the country's parental program. By utilizing an employment-based measure, scholars have noted that this creates barriers for currently unemployed mothers to receive an opportunity to take time off looking for a job and care for their child. Another limitation present with employment-based criteria is that in some countries(such as Belgium, Denmark and Czech republic), self-employed individuals are not eligible for parental benefits. There are also a certain number of hours an employee must meet before being eligible for employment-based parental leave. These various factors limit access to parental care for expecting mothers. Expecting parents who are the most affected by this criteria are usually younger, single, less educated and/or are from migrant backgrounds. International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
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Original:              International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
Revised:  Eligibility of Parental Leave For Same Sex Couples: Among the thirty-four OECD countries, thirty-three countries provided paid leave for expectant parents. Research found that in nineteen countries, same sex female couples received the same amount of parental leave benefits as different sex couples. While parental leave was given to same-sex female couples in nineteen OECD countries, two nations (Slovakia and Austria) did not allow two mothers to receive paid leave. Instead, the biological mother was granted parental leave benefits. In the remaining fourteen OECD countries, same-sex female couples received shorter duration and fewer benefits from parental leave- due to the restrictive language present in the policies. International minimum standards The Maternity Protection Convention, 2000 requires at least 14 weeks of maternity leave.
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Original:  In these countries, same-sex couples may have one person in the relationship adopt their child as a single parent (Wong et al 2020) .
Revised:  In these countries, same-sex couples may have one person in the relationship adopt their child as a single parent .
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Original: Razmik Khachikovich Mouradian (  born May 20, 1938) is an Russian-Armenian monumentalist sculptor.
Revised: Razmik Khachikovich Mouradian ( born May 20, 1938) is a Russian-Armenian monumentalist sculptor.
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Original:  Initially, Mourdian 's sculptures were portraits, exclusively in wood and marble but later, in the 1970s, he began to make  figures and statues out of bronze.
Revised:  Initially, Mouradian 's sculptures were portraits, exclusively in wood and marble but later, in the 1970s, he began to make figures and statues out of bronze.
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Original:  His art has been displayed in galleries worldwide and is featured in permanent exhibits at the Tretyakov Gallery and the Russian Museum.
Revised:  Mouradian's art has been displayed in galleries worldwide and is featured in permanent exhibits at the Tretyakov Gallery and the Russian Museum.
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Original:  Sound intensity, measured in Watts per meters-squared, represents the flow of sound over a particular area.
Revised:  Sound intensity, measured in Watts per meters-squared, represents the period flo of sound over a particular area.
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Original:  The logarithmic scale accommodates the vast range of sound heard by the human ear.  396x396px|Depiction of frequency weighting Frequency, or pitch, is measured in Hertz (Hz) and reflects the number of sound waves propagated through the air per second.
Revised:  The logarithmic scale accommodates the vast range of sound heard by the human ear. hi 396x396px|Depiction of frequency weighting Frequency, or pitch, is measured in Hertz (Hz) and reflects the number of sound waves propagated through the air per second.
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Original:  Noise Pollution and Abatement Act of 1972.
Revised:  Noise Polution and Abatement Act of 1972.
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Original: ]] Noise pollution, also known as environmental noise or sound pollution, is the propagation of noise with ranging impacts on the activity of human or animal life, most of them harmful to a degree.
Revised: ]] Noise pollution, also known environmental noise or sound pollution, is the propagation of noise with ranging impacts on the activity of human or animal life, most of them harmful to a degree.
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Original: ]] Noise pollution, also known  environmental noise or sound pollution, is the propagation of noise with ranging impacts on the activity of human or animal life, most of them harmful to a degree.
Revised: ]] Noise pollution, also known as environmental noise or sound pollution, is the propagation of noise with ranging impacts on the activity of human or animal life, most of them harmful to a degree.
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Original:  Biography Carpick received his Bachelor's degree in Physics from the University of Toronto in 1991, and his Master's Degree and Doctor of Philosophy in Physics from the University of California, Berkeley in 1997.
Revised:  Education Carpick received his Bachelor's degree in Physics from the University of Toronto in 1991, and his Master's Degree and Doctor of Philosophy in Physics from the University of California, Berkeley in 1997.
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Original:  In 2009, he was awarded the ASME Burt L. Newkirk Award .
Revised:  In 2009, he was awarded the ASME Burt L. Newkirk Award 
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Original:  According to Google Scholar, as of 2021, his work had been cited over 16,000 occasions .
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Original:  According to Google Scholar, as of 2021, his work had been cited  over 16,000 occasions.
Revised:  According to Google Scholar, as of 2021, his work had been cited on over 16,000 occasions.
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Original:   When the Derg seized power in 1974  she and her husband Dr Haelegiorgis, mayor of Addis Ababa, were both imprisoned.
Revised:  When the Derg seized power in 1974 , both she and her husband Dr Haelegiorgis, mayor of Addis Ababa, were both imprisoned.
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Original:   When the Derg seized power in 1974  she and her husband Dr Haelegiorgis, mayor of Addis Ababa, were both imprisoned.
Revised:  When the Derg seized power in 1974 she and her husband were imprisoned.
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Original:  She then studied nursings at Tunbridge Wells School of Nursing, becoming a registered nurse in 1965.
Revised:  She then studied nursing at Tunbridge Wells School of Nursing, becoming a registered nurse in 1965.
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Original: often used in technical terms to refer to broken down flat screen t.v's. especialy when the person talking has other things ocupying there mind.
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Original: I fail to see how the term 'Flannel Panel' is in any way elevating.
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Original:  She grew up in the Lutheran faith and was thoroughly instructed by her mother in its catechism  .
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Original:  Publications  Saviour Figures in Modern German Literature  (1917) The Influence of Nietzsche on the Intellectual and Spiritual Development of John Davidson (1928) Nietzsche in English and American Estimation up to 1918 (1929) Harriet Martineau – Her Moral and Religious Attitudes (1941)
Revised:  Publications Saviour Figures in Modern German Literature ) (1917) The Influence of Nietzsche on the Intellectual and Spiritual Development of John Davidson (1928) Nietzsche in English and American Estimation up to 1918 (1929) Harriet Martineau – Her Moral and Religious Attitudes (1941)
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Original:  Other parts of the Bijapur library are in the Raza Library, Rampur, the Salar Jung Museum, Hyderabad, the Bibliothèque nationale de France, St. Petersburg,  Museum of Islamic Art, Doha, and the University of St Andrews Library.
Revised:  Other parts of the Bijapur library are in the Raza Library, Rampur, the Salar Jung Museum, Hyderabad, the Bibliothèque nationale de France, St. Petersburg, the Museum of Islamic Art, Doha, and the University of St Andrews Library.
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Original:  Items in the Marathi language collected by Ch. d' Ocha in the Deccan are held in the BnF.S. G. Tulpule, "Un catalogue descriptif des manuscrits marathi dans la collection de Charles d'Ochoa de la Bibliothèque nationale Paris," Bulletin de l'Ecole française d'Extrême-Orient 75 (1986): 105-123.
Revised:  Items in the Marathi language collected by Ch. d' Ochoa in the Deccan are held in the BnF.S. G. Tulpule, "Un catalogue descriptif des manuscrits marathi dans la collection de Charles d'Ochoa de la Bibliothèque nationale Paris," Bulletin de l'Ecole française d'Extrême-Orient 75 (1986): 105-123.
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