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Original:  Thomas Hearns — In what has been called "the biggest and most anticipated fight in welterweight history , "  Leonard was behind Hearns after the 12th round, though rallying to win in the 14th.
Revised:  Thomas Hearns — In what has been called "the biggest and most anticipated fight in welterweight history " Leonard was behind Hearns after the 12th round, though rallying to win in the 14th.
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Original:  Thomas Hearns — In what has been called "the biggest and most anticipated fight in welterweight history , "  Leonard was behind Hearns after the 12th round, though rallying to win in the 14th.
Revised:  Thomas Hearns — In what has been called "the biggest and most anticipated fight in welterweight history , " , Leonard was behind Hearns after the 12th round, though rallying to win in the 14th.
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Original:  Sugar Ray Leonard — Before the match, it was believed that Leonard's decision to challenge Hagler, the World Middleweight Champion, was a dangerous mistake that seemed destined to result in "a brutal knockout loss . "  However, Leonard prevented Hagler from scoring by repeatedly dodging Hagler's heavy hits for the surprising upset victory by points.
Revised:  Sugar Ray Leonard — Before the match, it was believed that Leonard's decision to challenge Hagler, the World Middleweight Champion, was a dangerous mistake that seemed destined to result in "a brutal knockout loss " However, Leonard prevented Hagler from scoring by repeatedly dodging Hagler's heavy hits for the surprising upset victory by points.
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Original:  Sugar Ray Leonard — Before the match, it was believed that Leonard's decision to challenge Hagler, the World Middleweight Champion, was a dangerous mistake that seemed destined to result in "a brutal knockout loss . "  However, Leonard prevented Hagler from scoring by repeatedly dodging Hagler's heavy hits for the surprising upset victory by points.
Revised:  Sugar Ray Leonard — Before the match, it was believed that Leonard's decision to challenge Hagler, the World Middleweight Champion, was a dangerous mistake that seemed destined to result in "a brutal knockout loss . " . However, Leonard prevented Hagler from scoring by repeatedly dodging Hagler's heavy hits for the surprising upset victory by points.
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Original:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , "  who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , "  when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
Revised:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion " who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , " when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
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Original:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , "  who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , "  when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
Revised:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , " , who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , " when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
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Original:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , "  who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , "  when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
Revised:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , " who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance " when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
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Original:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , "  who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , "  when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
Revised:  In Command & Conquer: Yuri's Revenge, Sylvester Stallone (voice impersonated) is featured as an in-game celebrity character, "Sammy Stallion , " who frequently says, "I'm goin' the distance , " , when directed to move in the battlefield of the Hollywood mission.
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Original:  However, as before, it should be noted the trainers worked with the 12-round rule, and based their strategies on the 36-minute distance, compared to the 45-minute distance.
Revised:  As before, the trainers worked with the 12-round rule, and based their strategies on the 36-minute distance, compared to the 45-minute distance.
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Original: Aeneid, viii Virgil states that he named the city in honour of his Arcadian ancestor, Pallas, although Pausanias, LivyAb Urbe Condita, 1.5.1 and Dionysius of HalicarnassusRoman Antiquities, i. 31 say that Evander was originally Evander's birth city was Pallantium in Arcadia, after which he named the new city.
Revised: Aeneid, viii Virgil states that he named the city in honour of his Arcadian ancestor, Pallas, although Pausanias, LivyAb Urbe Condita, 1.5.1 and Dionysius of HalicarnassusRoman Antiquities, i. 31 say that originally Evander's birth city was Pallantium in Arcadia, after which he named the new city.
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Original:  In the Aneid , it is said that Evander took possession of the country Italy by force, murdering king Herilus, the king of Praeneste.
Revised:  In the Aeneid , it is said that Evander took possession of the country Italy by force, murdering king Herilus, the king of Praeneste.
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Original: Dionysius of Halicarnassus, Roman Antiquities, 2.1 Strabo writes that the Romans honour the mother of Evander, regarding her as one of the nymphs, and have renamed her Carmenta (a derivation of the latin word for song).
Revised: Dionysius of Halicarnassus, Roman Antiquities, 2.1 Strabo writes that the Romans honour the mother of Evander, regarding her as one of the nymphs, and have renamed her Carmenta (a derivation of the Latin word for song).
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Original:  Servius, however recounts that Evander's mother persuaded him to murder his father, Hermes  leading to the pair being banished from Arcadia, although other commentators have it that Evander killed his mother.
Revised:  Servius, however recounts that Evander's mother persuaded him to murder his father, Hermes , leading to the pair being banished from Arcadia, although other commentators have it that Evander killed his mother.
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Original:  Dionysis describes a civil unrest in Arcadia which led to Evander and his people being forced to leave;
Revised:  Dionysius describes a civil unrest in Arcadia which led to Evander and his people being forced to leave;
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Original:  They settled in Pallantium where it is said Evander killed Erulus, the king of Italy, three times in one day, prior to becoming the most powerful King of Italy.
Revised:  Evander settled in Pallantium where it is said Evander killed Erulus, the king of Italy, three times in one day, prior to becoming the most powerful King of Italy.
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Original:   Servius, however  recounts that Evander's mother persuaded him to murder his father, Hermes, leading to the pair being banished from Arcadia, although other commentators have it that Evander killed his mother.
Revised:  Servius, however , recounts that Evander's mother persuaded him to murder his father, Hermes, leading to the pair being banished from Arcadia, although other commentators have it that Evander killed his mother.
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Original: Icelanders established the country of Iceland in mid 930 A.D. when the Althingi (Parliament) met for the first time.
Revised: Icelanders established the country of Iceland in mid 930 A.D. when the Althing (Parliament) met for the first time.
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Original: The Icelandic Age of Settlement ( Icelandic: Landnámsöld ) is considered to have lasted from 874 to 930, at which point most of the island had been claimed and the Alþingi (), the assembly of the Icelandic Commonwealth, was founded at Þingvellir.
Revised: The Icelandic Age of Settlement ( ) is considered to have lasted from 874 to 930, at which point most of the island had been claimed and the Alþingi (), the assembly of the Icelandic Commonwealth, was founded at Þingvellir.
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Original: The Icelandic Age of Settlement ( Icelandic: Landnámsöld ) is considered to have lasted from 874 to 930, at which point most of the island had been claimed and the Alþingi (), the assembly of the Icelandic Commonwealth, was founded at Þingvellir.
Revised: The Icelandic Age of Settlement ( Icelandic: Landnámsöld ) is considered to have lasted from 874 to 930, at which point most of the island had been claimed and the (), the assembly of the Icelandic Commonwealth, was founded at Þingvellir.
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Original: Icelanders established the country of Iceland in mid 930 A.D. when the Althing (Parliament) met for the first time.
Revised: Icelanders established the country of Iceland in mid 930 AD when the Althing (Parliament) met for the first time.
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Original:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
Revised:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of Dharma Raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
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Original:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
Revised:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were Bharani Thirunal Parvathi Bayi and Uthram Thirunal Umayamma Bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
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Original:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
Revised:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of Avittom Thirunal. These princesses were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
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Original:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of chathayam nal mahaprabha amma .
Revised:  Two ranis where adopted during the reign of dharma raja . they were bharani thirunal parvathy bayi and uthram thrunal umayamma bayi as the sisters of avittom thirunal. these princes were the daughters of Chathayam Nal Mahaprabha Amma .
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Original: His great grand daughter was the wife of vishakham thirunal .
Revised: His great grand daughter was the wife of Vishakham Thirunal .
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Original:  His great grand daughter was the wife of Vishakham Thirunal.
Revised:  His great-granddaughter was the wife of Vishakham Thirunal.
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Original:  His great grand daughter was the wife of Vishakham Thirunal.
Revised:  His great grand daughter was the wife of Visakham Thirunal.
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Original: Avittom Thirunal Bala Rama Varma (c. 17827 Nov 1810) was a ruler of the Indian princely state of Travancore from 1798 to 1810, succeeding his uncle Maharajah Dharma Raja on 12February 1798.
Revised: Avittom Thirunal Bala Rama Varma (c. 17827 November 1810) was a ruler of the Indian princely state of Travancore from 1798 to 1810, succeeding his uncle Maharajah Dharma Raja on 12February 1798.
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Original:  Nicknamed "Prime Evil" The voice of ' Prime Evil' , BBC News, 28 October 1998'De Kock must rot in jail', Times Live, 29 January 2012Let Prime Evil go, Mail & Guardian, 11 January 2010 by the press, De Kock was the commanding officer of C10, a counter-insurgency unit of the SAP that kidnapped, tortured, and murdered numerous anti-apartheid activists from the 1980s to the early 1990s.
Revised:  Nicknamed "Prime URL The voice of ' Prime Evil' , BBC News, 28 October 1998'De Kock must rot in jail', Times Live, 29 January 2012Let Prime Evil go, Mail & Guardian, 11 January 2010 by the press, De Kock was the commanding officer of C10, a counter-insurgency unit of the SAP that kidnapped, tortured, and murdered numerous anti-apartheid activists from the 1980s to the early 1990s.
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Original:  Nicknamed "Prime URL The voice of 'Pri Legend'], BBC News, 28 October 1998'De Kock must rot in jail', Times Live, 29 January 2012Let Prime Evil go, Mail & Guardian, 11 January 2010 by the press, De Kock was the commanding officer of C10, a counter-insurgency unit of the SAP that kidnapped, tortured, and murdered numerous anti-apartheid activists from the 1980s to the early 1990s.
Revised:  Nicknamed URL The voice of 'Pri Legend'], BBC News, 28 October 1998'De Kock must rot in jail', Times Live, 29 January 2012Let Prime Evil go, Mail & Guardian, 11 January 2010 by the press, De Kock was the commanding officer of C10, a counter-insurgency unit of the SAP that kidnapped, tortured, and murdered numerous anti-apartheid activists from the 1980s to the early 1990s.
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Original: 2008 deaths Category:People from Kanpur Category: People from Karachi Category: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani writers Category:Pakistani literary critics Category:Pakistani linguists Category:Pakistani academics Category:Urdu non-fiction writers Category:Urdu-language writers Category:Urdu scholars Category:Linguists of Urdu Category:Urdu critics Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:Osaka University faculty Category:Writers from Karac
Revised: 2008 deaths Category:People from Kanpur Category: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani writers Category:Pakistani literary critics Category:Pakistani linguists Category:Pakistani academics Category:Urdu non-fiction writers Category:Urdu-language writers Category:Urdu scholars Category:Linguists of Urdu Category:Urdu critics Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:Osaka University faculty Category:Writers from Karac
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Original: Cosmic Consciousness: A Study in the Evolution of the Human Mind is a 1901 book by the psychiatrist Richard Maurice Bucke, in which the author explores the concept of cosmic consciousness, which he defines as "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary person ".
Revised: Cosmic Consciousness: A Study in the Evolution of the Human Mind is a 1901 book by the psychiatrist Richard Maurice Bucke, in which the author explores the concept of cosmic consciousness, which he defines as "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary man ".
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Original:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the  of humanity's future".
Revised:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and mankind Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the of humanity's future".
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Original:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the  of humanity's future".
Revised:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by mankind , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the of humanity's future".
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Original:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the  of humanity's future".
Revised:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary man " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the of humanity's future".
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Original:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the  of humanity's future".
Revised:  Simple consciousness, possessed by both animals and living beings Self-consciousness, possessed by living beings , encompassing thought, reason, and imagination Cosmic consciousness, which is "a higher form of consciousness than that possessed by the ordinary people " He regarded Walt Whitman as "the climax of religious evolution and the harbinger of humanity's future".
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Original:  James understood "cosmic consciousness" to be a collective consciousness, a "larger reservoir (a large supply of something) of consciousness", which manifests itself in the minds of men and remains intact after the dissolution of the individual.
Revised:  James understood "cosmic consciousness" to be a collective consciousness, a "larger reservoir of consciousness", which manifests itself in the minds of men and remains intact after the dissolution of the individual.
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Original: External links URL Richard M. Bucke, Cosmic Consciousness] In Search of Walt Whitman (2020)  a film that explores cosmic consciousness and Bucke's theory Paglia, Camille.
Revised: External links URL Richard M. Bucke, Cosmic Consciousness] In Search of Walt Whitman (2020) , a film that explores cosmic consciousness and Bucke's theory Paglia, Camille.
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Original: External links URL Richard M. Bucke, Cosmic Consciousness] In Search of Walt Whitman (2020), a film that explores cosmic consciousness and Bucke's theory Paglia, Camille.
Revised: External links URL Richard M. Bucke, Cosmic Consciousness] Paglia, Camille.
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Original: There are mainly seven levels of consciousness which make up the path of spiritual development, are: The state of waking consciousness;
Revised:  The state of waking consciousness;
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Original:  Moores pointed out that, for scholars of the purist camp, the experience of cosmic consciousness is incomplete without the element of love, "which is the foundation of mystical consciousness" :
Revised:  Moores pointed out that, for scholars of the purist camp, the experience of cosmic consciousness is incomplete without the element of love, "which is the foundation of mystical consciousness" .
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Original: Influence Some modern psychologists and theologians have made reference to Bucke’s work.
Revised:  Some modern psychologists and theologians have made reference to Bucke’s work.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Others who have used the concept of cosmic consciousness, as introduced by Bucke in 1901, include Albert Einstein, Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, and Alan Watts. See also
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Original: Supian Ependiyev was a veteran correspondent and editor-in-chief for the independent Chechen weekly Groznensky Rabochy, who was killed while covering a Russian Ground Forces ballistic missile attack on the Chechen capital, Grozny.
Revised: Supian Ependiyev was a veteran correspondent for the independent Chechen weekly Groznensky Rabochy, who was killed while covering a Russian Ground Forces ballistic missile attack on the Chechen capital, Grozny.
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Original:  Correspondent killed in Grozny rocket attack (According to other sources, he died two days later.
Revised:  (According to other sources, he died two days later.
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Original: 1935 deaths Category:People from Bergen Category:Norwegian Army personnel Category:Norwegian art collectors Category:Collectors of Asian art Category:20th-century art collectors Category:Norwegian expatriates in China Category:Customs officials Category:People of the First Sino-Japanese War Category:Military personnel of the Boxer Rebellion Category:People of the Xinhai Revolution Category:Qing dynasty generals Category:Norwegian generals Category:Recipients of the Order of St.
Revised: 1935 deaths Category:People from Bergen Category:Norwegian Army personnel Category:Norwegian art collectors Category:Collectors of Asian art Category:20th-century art collectors Category:Norwegian expatriates in China Category:Customs officials Category:People of the First Sino-Japanese War Category:Military personnel of the Boxer Rebellion Category:People of the Xinhai Revolution Category:Qing dynasty generals Category:Norwegian generals Category:Recipients of the Cross of St.
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Original:  George of the Fourth Degree Category:Commanders of the Order of St.
Revised:  George Category:Commanders of the Order of St.
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Original:  After a military education in the cavalry, he emigrated to China in 1886, and started working as a customs officer .
Revised:  He received a military education in the cavalry, he emigrated to China in 1886, and started working as a customs officer .
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Original:  After a military education in the cavalry, he emigrated to China in 1886, and started working as a customs officer .
Revised:  After a military education at the Cavalry Cadet School (Kavaleriets underoffiserskole) in Trondheim. He emigrated to China in 1886, and started working as a customs officer .
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Original:  He enlisted in the Chinese army in the war against Japan (1894–95) , and remained as a cavalry instructor under general Yuan Shikai.
Revised:  He enlisted in the Chinese army in the war against Japan (1894–95) , and remained as a cavalry instructor under General Yuan Shikai.
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Original:  Johann Munthe's association with Yuan Shikai proved advantageous , and he advanced in rank to lieutenant general and advisor to the Ministry of War;
Revised:  Munthe's association with Yuan Shikai proved advantageous , and he advanced in rank to lieutenant general and advisor to the Ministry of War;
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