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Original:   SJG filed a successful lawsuit against the government, which went to trial in 1993 as Steve Jackson Games, Inc. v. United States Secret Service , which was made possible through the newly created civil-rights organization Electronic Frontier Foundation .
Revised:  SJG filed a lawsuit against the government, which went to trial in 1993 as Steve Jackson Games, Inc. v. United States Secret Service , which was made possible through the newly created civil-rights organization Electronic Frontier Foundation .
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Original: Global Challenges in Gerontological Nursing In 2017 global population aged 60 years or older reached more than 962 million;
Revised: Global Challenges in Gerontological Nursing In 2017 global population aged 60 years and older reached more than 962 million;
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Original:  In an attempt to do this, it is recommended that healthcare organizations implement the use of the Transitional Care Model (TCM), which is designed to to enhance continuity of care and ultimately improve patient outcomes (Hirschman, Shaid, McCauley, Pauly and Naylor, 2015) .
Revised:  In an attempt to do this, it is recommended that healthcare organizations implement the use of the Transitional Care Model (TCM), which is designed to to enhance continuity of care and ultimately improve patient outcomes .
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Original:  Physical stressors, such as frequent heavy lifting, and emotional stressors, such as regularly encountering death, all contribute    .
Revised:  Physical stressors, such as frequent heavy lifting, and emotional stressors, such as regularly encountering death, all contribute . .
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Original:  In the early days of nursing research, 1930-1960, the main focus was on identifying the components of nursing care that influenced patient recovery and the nursing skills required for positive patient outcomes  A writer in 1956 requested that nurses refocus their research to include major health issues of the time and how to support the frail elderly.
Revised:  In the early days of nursing research, 1930-1960, the main focus was on identifying the components of nursing care that influenced patient recovery and the nursing skills required for positive patient outcomes . A writer in 1956 requested that nurses refocus their research to include major health issues of the time and how to support the frail elderly.
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Original:  Hirschman, K., Shaid, E., McCauley, K., Pauly, M., Naylor, M. (2015).
Revised:  Naylor, M. (2015).
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Original:  Boutin, C. T., Fryer, A. M., Oot-Hayes, M., Welsh, D. (2019).
Revised:  Welsh, D. (2019).
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Original:  Sharp, T., Weil, J., Snyder, A., Dunemn, K., Milbrath, G., McNeill, J., Gilbert, E. (2019).
Revised:  Gilbert, E. (2019).
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Original:  Nurse leaders play a critical role in mediating between owners-managers and facility staff, and are also keenly aware of the need for geriatrics training among staffHawkley, L. C., Long, M., Kostas, T., Levine, S., Molony, J., Thompson, K. (2018).
Revised:  Nurse leaders play a critical role in mediating between owners-managers and facility staff, and are also keenly aware of the need for geriatrics training among Thompson, K. (2018).
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Original:  T. The New York Times: Book Review of Fire From the Mountain, Volume 91: July 13 '86, p .34. Randall, Margaret.
Revised:  T. The New York Times: Book Review of Fire From the Mountain, Volume 91: July 13 '86, p . 34. Randall, Margaret.
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Original:  Willimantic: Curbstone Press, 1984: pp. 119-139.
Revised:  Willimantic: Curbstone Press, 1984: pp. 119–139.
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Original:  He has Alzheimer’s disease which is the only way he could get a clear conscience. Notes
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Original:  In its publication A Guide to Good Prescribingde Vries TPG, Henning RH, Hogerzeil HV, Fresle DA (1994) Guide to good precribing . WHO/DAP. 11: 1-108 the process is outlined as: define the patient's problem specify the therapeutic objectives verify whether your personal treatment choice is suitable for this patient start the treatment give information, instructions and warnings monitor (stop) the treatment.
Revised:  In its publication A Guide to Good Prescribingde Vries TPG, Henning RH, Hogerzeil HV, Fresle DA (1994) Guide to Good Prescribing . WHO/DAP. 11: 1-108 the process is outlined as: define the patient's problem specify the therapeutic objectives verify whether your personal treatment choice is suitable for this patient start the treatment give information, instructions and warnings monitor (stop) the treatment.
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Original:  The majority work to performanace-related incentives.
Revised:  The majority work to performance-related incentives.
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Original:  Poverty may force patients to purchase one day's supply of medicines at a time, so it is important to ensure that antibiotics are used rationally and not just for one or two day' s treatment.
Revised:  Poverty may force patients to purchase one day's supply of medicines at a time, so it is important to ensure that antibiotics are used rationally and not just for one or two days' treatment.
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Original:  Fridge space is often inadequate and refrigerators unreliable.
Revised:  Refrigerator space is often inadequate and refrigerators unreliable.
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Original: The open-question argument is a philosophical argument put forward by British philosopher G. E. Moore in §13 of Principia Ethica (1903),. to refute the equating of the property of goodness with some non-moral property, X, whether naturalistic (e.g. pleasure) or meta-physical (e.g. God's command).
Revised: The open-question argument is a philosophical argument put forward by British philosopher G. E. Moore in §13 of Principia Ethica (1903),. to refute the equating of the property of goodness with some non-moral property, X, whether naturalistic (e.g. pleasure) or supernatural (e.g. God's command).
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Original:  It ’s still controversial whether good is the same thing as pleasure, etc.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if you define good as pleasure (or any other naturalistic property) you could substitute “good” for “pleasure” anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure (or any other naturalistic property) you could substitute “good” for “pleasure” anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if you define good as pleasure (or any other naturalistic property) you could substitute “good” for “pleasure” anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if you define good as pleasure (or any other naturalistic property) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  However, “ pleasure is good ” is a meaningful, informative statement;
Revised:  However, " pleasure is good ” is a meaningful, informative statement;
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Original:  However, “ pleasure is good ” is a meaningful, informative statement;
Revised:  However, “ pleasure is good " is a meaningful, informative statement;
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Original:  but “ good is good ” (after making the substitution) is an empty, non-informative tautology.
Revised:  but " good is good ” (after making the substitution) is an empty, non-informative tautology.
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Original:  but “ good is good ” (after making the substitution) is an empty, non-informative tautology.
Revised:  but “ good is good " (after making the substitution) is an empty, non-informative tautology.
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Original:  the question cannot be deduced from the conceptual terms alone.
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Original:  Put another way, what Moore is saying is that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
Revised:  Put another way, Moore is saying is that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
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Original:  Put another way, what Moore is saying is that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
Revised:  Put another way, what Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
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Original:  it is given in language itself that the two terms mean the same thing);
Revised:  that is, the two terms mean the same thing);
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Original:  but "good is good" (after making the substitution) is an empty, non-informative tautology. 
Revised:  but "good is good" (after making the substitution) is a non-informative tautology. 
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Original: The open-question argument claims that any attempt to identify morality with some set of observable, natural properties will always be  an open question, and that if this is true, then moral facts cannot be reduced to natural properties and that therefore ethical naturalism is false.
Revised: The open-question argument claims that any attempt to identify morality with some set of observable, natural properties will always be liable to an open question, and that if this is true, then moral facts cannot be reduced to natural properties and that therefore ethical naturalism is false.
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Original:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
Revised:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a natural property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
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Original:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because all definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
Revised:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a naturalistic property fails because such definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical;
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Original:  It is still controversial whether good is the same thing as pleasure, etc.
Revised:  It can still be questioned whether good is the same thing as pleasure, etc.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure (or any other naturalistic property) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure (or any other natural property) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  Seadowns (talk) 23:47, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
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Original:  otherwise the question is closed.
Revised:  otherwise it is closed.
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Original:  the answer cannot be deduced from the conceptual terms alone.
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Original:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a natural property fails because such definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical ;
Revised:  Put another way, Moore is saying that any attempt to define good in terms of a natural property fails because such definitions can be transformed into closed questions (the subject and predicate being conceptually identical ,
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore  said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore had said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore  said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure , or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore  said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property , "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
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Original:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore  said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" anywhere it occurs.
Revised:  Shortly before (in section §11), Moore said if good is defined as pleasure ( or any other natural property ) "good" may be substituted for "pleasure" , or that other property, anywhere where it occurs.
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Original:  but "good is good" (after making the substitution) is a non-informative tautology.
Revised:  but "good is good" (after making the substitution) is an uninformative tautology.
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Original:  the answer cannot be determined from the conceptual terms alone.
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Original: Dolieb Hill was a mission station established by the American Inland Mission in southern Sudan, located approximately 10 miles south of the city of Malakal, on the northern bank of the Sobat river, in Upper Nile province, southern Sudan.
Revised: Doleib Hill was a mission station established by the American Inland Mission in southern Sudan, located approximately 10 miles south of the city of Malakal, on the northern bank of the Sobat river, in Upper Nile province, southern Sudan.
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Original:  Established during the  condominium period, in the early part of the 20th century, it developed into an important educational and religious center among the Shilluk people of the region.
Revised:  Early years condominium period, in the early part of the 20th century, it developed into an important educational and religious center among the Shilluk people of the region.
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Original:  Established during the  condominium period, in the early part of the 20th century, it developed into an important educational and religious center among the Shilluk people of the region.
Revised:  Established during the condominium period, in the early part of the 20th century, and developed into an important educational and religious center among the Shilluk people of the region.
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Original: In 1991 the Lou Nuer Anyanya-2 militia was based near Doleib Hill under Yahannis Yoal Both when it declared for Riek Machar's breakaway SPLA-Nasir.
Revised: In 1991 the Lou Nuer Anyanya-2 militia was based near Doleib Hill under Yohannes Yual when it declared for Riek Machar's breakaway SPLA-Nasir.
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Original: Doleib Hill was a mission station established by the American Inland Mission in southern Sudan, located approximately 10 miles south of the city of Malakal, on the northern bank of the Sobat river, in Upper Nile province , southern Sudan.
Revised: Doleib Hill was a mission station established by the American Inland Mission in southern Sudan, located approximately south of the city of Malakal, on the northern bank of the Sobat river, in Upper Nile province , southern Sudan.
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Original: An Edo figure from the reign of the oba Esigie (c. 1504-1550 ) Brooklyn Museum.
Revised: An Edo figure from the reign of the oba Esigie (c. 1504 - 1550 ) Brooklyn Museum.
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Original: An Edo figure from the reign of the oba Esigie (c. 1504 - 1550) Brooklyn Museum.
Revised: An Edo figure from the reign of the oba Esigie (c. 1504 – 1550) Brooklyn Museum.
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Original: Esigie started a tradition in Benin by investing his mother with the title of Iyoba (  Queen Mother) and providing the Eguae-Iyoba (Palace of the Queen Mother) in lower Uselu for her use.
Revised: Esigie started a tradition in Benin by investing his mother with the title of Iyoba ( or Queen Mother) and providing the Eguae-Iyoba (Palace of the Queen Mother) in lower Uselu for her use.
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Original:  Following a bitter power struggle with Aruaran , and with major assistance and support from his mother Queen Idia, "Esigie gathered the Benin army at Unuame on the river Osse and from there launched an attack which finally destroyed the might of Udo and his half-brother Arhuanran" (Egharevba, 1968: 26).
Revised:  Following a bitter power struggle with Arhuaran , and with major assistance and support from his mother Queen Idia, "Esigie gathered the Benin army at Unuame on the river Osse and from there launched an attack which finally destroyed the might of Udo and his half-brother Arhuanran" (Egharevba, 1968: 26).
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Original:  He is currently a Clinical Professor Emeritus at the University of California-San Francisco.
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Original:  From 1992 to 2005, he was director of the International Center for Occupational Medicine at the University of California, San Francisco .
Revised:  And was director of the International Center for Occupational Medicine at the University of California, San Francisco .
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Original:  From 1992 to 2005, he was director of the International Center for Occupational Medicine at the University of California, San Francisco .
Revised:  From 1992 to 2005, he was director of the International Center for Occupational Medicine at UCSF .
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Original:  As a result , Mao Yuanxin became the Chairman's liaison with the Politburo in 1975 ,Glossary of Names and Identities in Mao's Last Revolution, by Roderick MacFarquhar and Michael Schoenhals, Harvard University Press 2006. and contributed to the temporary fall of Deng Xiaoping in 1976, as well as a series of other political manuoevers of the Gang of Four.
Revised:  As a result , Mao Yuanxin became the Chairman's liaison with the Politburo ,Glossary of Names and Identities in Mao's Last Revolution, by Roderick MacFarquhar and Michael Schoenhals, Harvard University Press 2006. and contributed to the temporary fall of Deng Xiaoping in 1976, as well as a series of other political manuoevers of the Gang of Four.
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Original:  By 1975, when Mao was ailing from complications of Alzheimer's Disease and was no longer able to attend Central Committee meetings on a regular basis, Mao Yuanxin became the Chairman's liaison with the Politburo,Glossary of Names and Identities in Mao's Last Revolution, by Roderick MacFarquhar and Michael Schoenhals, Harvard University Press 2006. and  contributed to the temporary fall of Deng Xiaoping in 1976, as well as a series of other political manuoevers of the Gang of Four.
Revised:  By 1975, when Mao was ailing from complications of Alzheimer's Disease and was no longer able to attend Central Committee meetings on a regular basis, Mao Yuanxin became the Chairman's liaison with the Politburo,Glossary of Names and Identities in Mao's Last Revolution, by Roderick MacFarquhar and Michael Schoenhals, Harvard University Press 2006. and he contributed to the temporary fall of Deng Xiaoping in 1976, as well as a series of other political manuoevers of the Gang of Four.
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Original:  He was released from prison in October 1993 after serving his 17 years sentence.
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Original:  Filters Against Folly, How to Survive despite Economists, Ecologists, and the Merely Eloquent, Viking Penguin, The concept is a formalism of the closely related phenomenon known as the tragedy of the commons,Hardin, G. (1968).
Revised:  Filters Against Folly, How to Survive despite Economists, Ecologists, and the Merely Eloquent, Viking Penguin, The concept is Hardin’s interpretation of the closely related phenomenon known as the tragedy of the commons,Hardin, G. (1968).
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Original:  Science 162, 1243–1248. and is referred to in political discourse as "privatizing profits and socializing losses ".  Players of the CC–PP Game aim to commonize the costs (or externalities) generated by their activities across the wider community, while privatizing all profits (financial or otherwise) to themselves          .
Revised:  Science 162, 1243–1248. and is referred to in political discourse as "privatizing profits and socializing losses ." Players of the CC–PP Game aim to commonize the costs (or externalities) generated by their activities across the wider community, while privatizing all profits (financial or otherwise) to themselves .
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Original:  Science 162, 1243–1248. and is referred to in political discourse as "privatizing profits and socializing losses ".  Players of the CC–PP Game aim to commonize the costs (or externalities) generated by their activities across the wider community, while privatizing all profits (financial or otherwise) to themselves          .
Revised:  Science 162, 1243–1248. and is referred to in political discourse as "privatizing profits and socializing losses ". Players of the CC–PP Game aim to commonize the costs (or externalities) generated by their activities across the wider community, while privatizing all profits (financial or otherwise) to themselves . The individual does not broadcast that they are playing the game in order to continue profiting. .
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Original: Hardin uses the original example of the commons as a pasture in preindustrial England to explain the CC–PP Game.
Revised: Hardin uses the original conception of the commons as a pasture in preindustrial England to explain the CC–PP Game.
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Original: Hardin uses the original example of the commons as a pasture in preindustrial England to explain the CC–PP Game.
Revised: Hardin uses the original example of the commons as a pasture in preindustrial England ."
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Original:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use and to graze their cattle on . Villagers gained profit from each additional cattle on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the cattle depleting the grass.
Revised:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use to grave their livestock . Villagers gained profit from each additional cattle on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the cattle depleting the grass.
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Original:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use and to graze their cattle on . Villagers gained profit from each additional cattle on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the cattle depleting the grass.
Revised:  The pasture was a public space for any villager to use and to graze their cattle on . Villagers gained profit from each additional animal on the pasture, but did not have to pay the costs of the cattle depleting the grass.
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