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Original:  These negotiations resulted in the 1894 British-Congolese Treaty, signed on 12 May, under which the British leased all of the Nile basin south of the ten ° north latitude to King Leopold II of the Belgians for the period of his lifetime.
Revised:  These negotiations resulted in the 1894 British-Congolese Treaty, signed on 12 May, under which the British leased all of the Nile basin south of the 10 ° north latitude to King Leopold II of the Belgians for the period of his lifetime.
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Original:  Under the 1894 Anglo-Congolese Treaty, the Enclave's territory was dictated as " ... bounded by a line starting from a point situated on the west shore of Lake Albert, immediately to the south of Mahagi, to the nearest point of the frontier defined in paragraph (a) of the preceding Article.
Revised:  Under the 1894 Anglo-Congolese Treaty, the Enclave's territory was dictated as " bounded by a line starting from a point situated on the west shore of Lake Albert, immediately to the south of Mahagi, to the nearest point of the frontier defined in paragraph (a) of the preceding Article.
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Original: Winston Churchill travelled through the Enclave, declaring it "present(ed) splendid and alluring panoramas . "  Churchill, p. 45.
Revised: Winston Churchill travelled through the Enclave, declaring it "present(ed) splendid and alluring panoramas " Churchill, p. 45.
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Original: Winston Churchill travelled through the Enclave, declaring it "present(ed) splendid and alluring panoramas . "  Churchill, p. 45.
Revised: Winston Churchill travelled through the Enclave, declaring it "present(ed) splendid and alluring panoramas . " . Churchill, p. 45.
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Original:  Additionally, the Lado Enclave was also a popular attraction for the wealthy classes, with reports stating that "still more exhilarating was to be taken to the Lado Enclave, East Africa's equivalent to the badlands . "  Lake, p. 66.
Revised:  Additionally, the Lado Enclave was also a popular attraction for the wealthy classes, with reports stating that "still more exhilarating was to be taken to the Lado Enclave, East Africa's equivalent to the badlands " Lake, p. 66.
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Original:  Additionally, the Lado Enclave was also a popular attraction for the wealthy classes, with reports stating that "still more exhilarating was to be taken to the Lado Enclave, East Africa's equivalent to the badlands . "  Lake, p. 66.
Revised:  Additionally, the Lado Enclave was also a popular attraction for the wealthy classes, with reports stating that "still more exhilarating was to be taken to the Lado Enclave, East Africa's equivalent to the badlands . " . Lake, p. 66.
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Original:  and, apart from the grave-yard business, the inhabitants were rumored to be a pretty queer race." , "The Curse of Simba", the World's News, 15 July 1936, p. 24.
Revised:  and, apart from the grave-yard business, the inhabitants were rumored to be a pretty queer race." "The Curse of Simba", the World's News, 15 July 1936, p. 24.
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Original:  As part of this offer, the English agreed to remove their troops from the area while Leopold considered the offer.
Revised:  As part of this offer, the British agreed to remove their troops from the area while Leopold considered the offer.
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Original: On 10 June 1910, following Leopold ’ s death, the district officially became a province of the Anglo-Egyptian Sudan, with British Army veteran Captain Chauncey Hugh Stigand appointed administrator.
Revised: On 10 June 1910, following Leopold ' s death, the district officially became a province of the Anglo-Egyptian Sudan, with British Army veteran Captain Chauncey Hugh Stigand appointed administrator.
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Original:  but although he had instructed Chaltin to continue on towards Khartoum, Chaltin did not have the forces to do so,Degefu, p. 39. and instead chose to heavily fortify Lado (which had ceased to exist under the Mahdists),Gleichen, p. 279. Rejaf,Pakenham, p. 527. Kiro, Loka, and Yei, and occupied Dufile  By 1899, the British Government was claiming that the Congo State had not fullilled its obligations of the Anglo-Congolese Treaty and therefore had no right to claim the Bahr-el-Ghazal.
Revised:  but although he had instructed Chaltin to continue on towards Khartoum, Chaltin did not have the forces to do so,Degefu, p. 39. and instead chose to heavily fortify Lado (which had ceased to exist under the Mahdists),Gleichen, p. 279. Rejaf,Pakenham, p. 527. Kiro, Loka, and Yei, and occupied Dufile . By 1899, the British Government was claiming that the Congo State had not fullilled its obligations of the Anglo-Congolese Treaty and therefore had no right to claim the Bahr-el-Ghazal.
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Original:  but although he had instructed Chaltin to continue on towards Khartoum, Chaltin did not have the forces to do so,Degefu, p. 39. and instead chose to heavily fortify Lado (which had ceased to exist under the Mahdists),Gleichen, p. 279. Rejaf,Pakenham, p. 527. Kiro, Loka, and Yei, and occupied Dufile  By 1899, the British Government was claiming that the Congo State had not fullilled its obligations of the Anglo-Congolese Treaty and therefore had no right to claim the Bahr-el-Ghazal.
Revised:  but although he had instructed Chaltin to continue on towards Khartoum, Chaltin did not have the forces to do so,Degefu, p. 39. and instead chose to heavily fortify Lado (which had ceased to exist under the Mahdists),Gleichen, p. 279. Rejaf,Pakenham, p. 527. Kiro, Loka, and Yei, and occupied Dufile By 1899, the British Government was claiming that the Congo State had not fulfilled its obligations of the Anglo-Congolese Treaty and therefore had no right to claim the Bahr-el-Ghazal.
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Original:   Communist writers Category:1900 births Category:1990 deaths Category:20th-century Australian poets Category:Australian male writers Category:People from Castle Hedingham Category:Anti-fascists Category:Writers of historical fiction set in antiquity Category:Writers of historical fiction set in the early modern period Category:20th-century memoirists Category:British Army personnel of World War II Category:Royal Corps of Signals soldiers Category:Fellows of the Royal Society of Literatu
Revised:  British Communist writers Category:1900 births Category:1990 deaths Category:20th-century Australian poets Category:Australian male writers Category:People from Castle Hedingham Category:Anti-fascists Category:Writers of historical fiction set in antiquity Category:Writers of historical fiction set in the early modern period Category:20th-century memoirists Category:British Army personnel of World War II Category:Royal Corps of Signals soldiers Category:Fellows of the Royal Society of Literatu
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Original:  Estudios sobre historia de la ciencia y de la técnica: IV Congreso de la Sociedad Española de Historia de las Ciencias y de las Técnicas: Valladolid, 22–27 de Septiembre de 1986, 1988, , pags . 223– 228
Revised:  Estudios sobre historia de la ciencia y de la técnica: IV Congreso de la Sociedad Española de Historia de las Ciencias y de las Técnicas: Valladolid, 22–27 de Septiembre de 1986, 1988, , pp . 223– 228
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Original:  Estudios sobre historia de la ciencia y de la técnica: IV Congreso de la Sociedad Española de Historia de las Ciencias y de las Técnicas: Valladolid, 22–27 de Septiembre de 1986, 1988, , pags . 223– 228
Revised:  Estudios sobre historia de la ciencia y de la técnica: IV Congreso de la Sociedad Española de Historia de las Ciencias y de las Técnicas: Valladolid, 22–27 de Septiembre de 1986, 1988, , pags . 223– 228.
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Original: Etymology The word comes from  Ancient Greek σπάω spao "to draw out" and ἀγείρω ageiro "to gather".
Revised: Etymology The word comes from the Ancient Greek σπάω spao "to draw out" and ἀγείρω ageiro "to gather".
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Original: John Craig, A New Universal Etymological, Technological and Pronouncing Dictionary of the English Language, Volume 2, London: G H Collins, 1849, p .730Alexander Reid, A Dictionary of the English Language, New York: D Appleton & Co  , 1845, p.383, p.476, p.516 It is a term probably first coined by Paracelsus.
Revised: John Craig, A New Universal Etymological, Technological and Pronouncing Dictionary of the English Language, Volume 2. London: G H Collins, 1849, p .730Alexander Reid, A Dictionary of the English Language, New York: D Appleton & Co , 1845, p.383, p.476, p.516 It is a term probably first coined by Paracelsus.
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Original: John Craig, A New Universal Etymological, Technological and Pronouncing Dictionary of the English Language, Volume 2, London: G H Collins, 1849, p .730Alexander Reid, A Dictionary of the English Language, New York: D Appleton & Co  , 1845, p.383, p.476, p.516 It is a term probably first coined by Paracelsus.
Revised: John Craig, A New Universal Etymological, Technological and Pronouncing Dictionary of the English Language, Volume 2, London: G H Collins, 1849, p .730Alexander Reid, A Dictionary of the English Language, New York: D Appleton & Co . , 1845, p.383, p.476, p.516 It is a term probably first coined by Paracelsus.
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Original: Spagyric most commonly refers to a plant  tincture to which has also been added the ash of the calcined plant.
Revised: Spagyric most commonly refers to a plant pop tincture to which has also been added the ash of the calcined plant.
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Original:  Spagyric is a word in English that means "alchemy".
Revised: Italic text''''Bold text'Bold text''' Spagyric is a word in English that means "alchemy".
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Original: Italic text''''Bold text'Bold text''' Spagyric is a word in English that means "alchemy".
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Original:  These processes were in use in medieval alchemy generally for the separation and purification of metals from ores (see Calcination), and salts from brines and other aqueous solutions. b. bv'ughiug;lxtudfyiguofy;itdlufy;gu'y;ftuldyfy;gufy;dtulf;ygu'hogiyftudlyfyguoy;t Etymology The word comes from the Ancient Greek σπάω spao "to draw out" and ἀγείρω ageiro "to gather".
Revised:  These processes were in use in medieval alchemy generally for the separation and purification of metals from ores (see Calcination), and salts from brines and other aqueous solutions. Etymology The word comes from the Ancient Greek σπάω spao "to draw out" and ἀγείρω ageiro "to gather".
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Original:  In practice%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spagyric most commonly refers to a plant tincture to which has also been added the ash of the calcined plant.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Spagyric most commonly refers to a plant tincture to which has also been added the ash of the calcined plant.
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Original:  The word spagyrici is inscribed on the coffin-plate of the English Paracelsian physician Sir Thomas Browne (1605-82).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Bibliography M. C. Ramos Sánchez, F. J. Martín Gil, J. Martín Gil.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography M. C. Ramos Sánchez, F. J. Martín Gil, J. Martín Gil.
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Original: Veterinary anatomical pathology Anatomical pathology (Commonwealth) or Anatomic pathology (U.S.) is concerned with the diagnosis of disease based on the gross , microscopic, and molecular examination of organs, tissues, and whole bodies (necropsy).
Revised: Veterinary anatomical pathology Anatomical pathology (Commonwealth) or Anatomic pathology (U.S.) is concerned with the diagnosis of disease based on the gross examination , microscopic, and molecular examination of organs, tissues, and whole bodies (necropsy).
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Original: Veterinary pathologists are doctors of veterinary medicine who specialize in the diagnosis of diseases through the examination of animal tissue and body URL Like medical pathology, veterinary pathology is divided into two branches, anatomical pathology and clinical pathology.
Revised: Veterinary pathologists are doctors of veterinary medicine who specialize in the diagnosis of diseases through the examination of animal tissue and body fluids. Like medical pathology, veterinary pathology is divided into two branches, anatomical pathology and clinical pathology.
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Original:  Other than the diagnosis of disease in food-producing animals, companion animals, zoo animals and wildlife, veterinary pathologists also have an important role in drug discovery and safety as well as scientific URL
Revised:  Other than the diagnosis of disease in food-producing animals, companion animals, zoo animals and wildlife, veterinary pathologists also have an important role in drug discovery and safety as well as scientific research.
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Original: Veterinary pathologists are doctors of veterinary medicine who specialize in the diagnosis of diseases through the examination of animal tissue and body fluids.
Revised: Veterinary pathologists are veterinarians who specialize in the diagnosis of diseases through the examination of animal tissue and body fluids.
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Original:  See also Veterinary Medicine Pathology  External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists French Diploma of Specialized Veterinary Studies in Veterinary Pathology For more Info go to URL Reference
Revised:  See also Veterinary Medicine External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists French Diploma of Specialized Veterinary Studies in Veterinary Pathology For more Info go to URL Reference
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Original:  See also Veterinary Medicine Pathology  External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists French Diploma of Specialized Veterinary Studies in Veterinary Pathology For more Info go to URL Reference
Revised:  See also Veterinary Medicine Pathology External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists For more Info go to URL Reference
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Original:  See also Veterinary Medicine Pathology  External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists French Diploma of Specialized Veterinary Studies in Veterinary Pathology For more Info go to URL Reference
Revised:  See also Veterinary Medicine Pathology External links American College of Veterinary Pathologists European College of Veterinary Clinical Pathology European College of Veterinary Pathologists French Diploma of Specialized Veterinary Studies in Veterinary Pathology Reference
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Original: Noteworthy Events of Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  18 July 1741 – Vice Admiral Edward Vernon, with 3,000 British troops under General Wentworth, arrived at Guantánamo Bay to begin an unsuccessful campaign against Santiago.
Revised:  18 July 1741 – Vice Admiral Edward Vernon, with 3,000 British troops under General Wentworth, arrived at Guantánamo Bay to begin an unsuccessful campaign to capture Santiago.
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Original:  After his secondary education, he worked for a year as a junior assessment clerk in the Local District Office and thereafter went to work at his alma mater as a teacher.
Revised:  Upon graduation, he clerked briefly in the Local District Office and thereafter went to work at his alma mater as a teacher.
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Original:  After his secondary education, he worked for a year as a junior assessment clerk in the Local District Office and thereafter went to work at his alma mater as a teacher.
Revised:  After his secondary education, he worked for a year as a junior assessment clerk in the Local District Office before returning to his alma mater as a teacher.
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Original:  In 1937, he was employed by Bata Shoe Company as an accounting clerk ;
Revised:  In 1937, he gained employment at Bata Shoe Company as an accounting clerk ;
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Original:  while working as a clerk, he also took his time to study bookkeeping and accounting.
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Original:  In 1944, Bata transferred him to Lagos as a Chief Clerk and the West Coast Accountant.
Revised:  In 1944, Bata transferred him to Lagos as a Chief Clerk and West Coast Accountant.
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Original:  He was in Lagos for a year before returning to Sapele to become Deputy Manager of Sapele branch of the shoe company .
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Original:  Before his change of ethnicity , he was Chief Festus Samuel Edah.
Revised:  Before his change of name , he was Chief Festus Samuel Edah.
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