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Original:  Agreement was reached on the so called Bali roadmap, but opinions differed on the substance of this, and other documents that were decided upon  
Revised:  Agreement was reached on the so called Bali roadmap, but opinions differed on the substance of this, and other documents that were decided upon . 
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Original:  This agreement is expected to include the setting, for industrialized nations, of reduction targets for greenhouse gas (GHG) emissions, amongst other things  
Revised:  This agreement is expected to include the setting, for industrialized nations, of reduction targets for greenhouse gas (GHG) emissions, amongst other things . 
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Original:  There was also consensus on a number of current issues, such as the setting up of an expanded adaptation fund, and the necessity of accelerating the transfer and development of "climate friendly" technology  
Revised:  There was also consensus on a number of current issues, such as the setting up of an expanded adaptation fund, and the necessity of accelerating the transfer and development of "climate friendly" technology . 
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Original:  Agreement was reached on the so called Bali roadmap, but opinions differed on the substance of this , and other documents that were decided upon.
Revised:  Agreement was reached on the so called Bali roadmap, but opinions differed on the substance of this and other documents that were decided upon.
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Original:  Opinions Perspectives on the outcome varied  with some non governmental organizations (NGOs) like Greenpeace International being generally happy that an agreement was achieved, but stating that a stronger mandate for the post 2012 negotiations had been wished for, and that current issues were not all addressed satisfactorily either.
Revised:  Opinions Perspectives on the outcome varied , with some non governmental organizations (NGOs) like Greenpeace International being generally happy that an agreement was achieved, but stating that a stronger mandate for the post 2012 negotiations had been wished for, and that current issues were not all addressed satisfactorily either.
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Original:       But it was not just the future that was talked about.
Revised:  Current matters But it was not just the future that was talked about.
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Original:  The range was however included in the preable of the document agreed on by the members of the Kyoto Protocol.
Revised:  The range was however included in the preamble of the document agreed on by the members of the Kyoto Protocol.
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Original:  Herzog, 22, defeated New York City waitress Courtney Yates and former Miss Montana  Amanda Kimmel in the final vote.
Revised:  Herzog, 22, defeated New York City waitress Courtney Yates and former Miss Montana USA Amanda Kimmel in the final vote.
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Original: Details will be given by the UK transport secretary (Ruth Kelly) in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC .
Revised: Details were be given by the UK transport secretary (Ruth Kelly) in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC .
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Original:  This is most of the informtion was released to the public   .
Revised:  This is most of the information was released to the public .
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Original:  This is most of the informtion was released to the public   .
Revised:  This is most of the informtion was released to the public . .
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Original: Details were be given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
Revised: Details were given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
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Original: The details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the theory part of their Driving test has been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
Revised: Some personal details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the theory part of their Driving test has been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
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Original: The details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the theory part of their Driving test has been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
Revised: The details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the 'theory test' component of their Driving test has been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
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Original: The details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the theory part of their Driving test has been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
Revised: The details of 3 million British learner drivers who had applied for the theory part of their Driving licence have been lost in Iowa, in the USA.
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Original:  The data was lost on a hard drive that was owned by  a private contractor ( to the UK driving standards agency ) . Details were given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
Revised:  The data was lost on a hard drive that was owned by a private contractor to the UK driving standards agency ) . Details were given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
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Original:  The data was lost on a hard drive that was owned by  a private contractor ( to the UK driving standards agency ) . Details were given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
Revised:  The data was lost on a hard drive that was owned by a private contractor ( to the UK driving standards agency . Details were given by the UK Transport Secretary, Ruth Kelly, in the House of Commons at 1730 UTC today.
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Original:  This is most of the information that was released to the public.
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Original:  It is the first major loss of data in the UK since  25 million people 's data was lost by HM Revenue and Customs a few months ago .
Revised:  It is the first major loss of data in the UK since 25 million people was lost by HM Revenue and Customs a few months ago .
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Original:  In the announcement Ruth Kelly said: Pearson were the private contractors The government try to keep personal dataas secure as possible No bank account details were compromised Date of Birth was not in the personal data lost She defended the use of private contractors Driver's signature was not lost People are informed it their datais held abroad 
Revised:  In her statement to MPs, Ruth Kelly confirmed that no banking information was contained within the lost data, nor were individuals' dates of birth. She highlighted that security measures had been taken, and that the information that had been stored was not in the personal data lost She defended the use of private contractors Driver's signature was not lost People are informed it their datais held abroad 
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Original:  In the announcement Ruth Kelly said: Pearson were the private contractors The government try to keep personal dataas secure as possible No bank account details were compromised Date of Birth was not in the personal data lost She defended the use of private contractors Driver's signature was not lost People are informed it their datais held abroad 
Revised:  In the announcement Ruth Kelly said: Pearson were the private contractors The government try to keep personal dataas secure as possible No bank account details were compromised Date of Birth was not in a format "readily usable or accessible" by standard means. 
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Original: It is the first major loss of data in the UK since information on 25 million people was lost by HM Revenue in October.
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Original: A Canadian father has sold a hard-to-find video game, which he bought for $90, for $9000, after finding his son smoking pot.
Revised: Newspapers and online sources today reported that a Canadian father sold a hard-to-find video game, which he bought for $90, for $9000, after finding his son smoking pot.
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Original:  According to the The Daily Telegraph, the purchaser was an Australian father  
Revised:  According to the The Daily Telegraph, the purchaser was an Australian father . 
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Original: Pussian President Vladimir Putin accepts Dmirty Medvedev's proposition for him to become future Prime Minister of Russian Federation if Medvedev wins presidential election in this country scheduled on March 2, 2008.
Revised: Pussian President Vladimir Putin accepts Dmitry Medvedev's proposition for him to become future Prime Minister of Russian Federation if Medvedev wins presidential election in this country scheduled on March 2, 2008.
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Original:  Meanwhile, United Russia ruling party, which is backed by Putin, officially nominated Medvedev for presidency today at its meeting .
Revised:  Meanwhile, United Russia ruling party, which is backed by Putin, officially nominated Medvedev for presidency today .
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Original:  The next day Medvedev, who is the current deputy prime minister of the Russian government and the chairman in the board of directors of Gazprom gas giant, offered Putin the Prime Minister position in case of winning the election (which is commonly forecasted to happen)   .
Revised:  The next day Medvedev, who is the current deputy prime minister of the Russian government and the chairman in the board of directors of Gazprom gas giant, offered Putin the Prime Minister position in case of winning the election (which is commonly forecasted to happen) . .
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Original:  However, I keep hoping     
Revised:  However, I keep hoping ." 
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Original:  According to a contract from 1998, both states contributed with experiments which were tranported into space as a workload.
Revised:  According to a contract from 1998, both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
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Original:  The mission during which the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) is a joint project between Brazil and Argentina.
Revised:  The mission during which the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) was a joint project between Brazil and Argentina.
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Original:  The missionduring which the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) was a  joint project between Brazil and Argentina .
Revised:  During the mission, which lasted, nine minutes and 25 seconds, the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) was a joint project between Brazil and Argentina .
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Original:  The missionduring which the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) was a  joint project between Brazil and Argentina .
Revised:  The missionduring which the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers (lasting nine minutes and 25 seconds) was a The joint project between Brazil and Argentina .
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Original:  According to a contract from 1998,  both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
Revised:  According to a contract from 1998, under which both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
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Original:  During the mission, which lasted , nine minutes and 25 seconds, the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers according to Xinhua, but only 120 km according to Associated Press.
Revised:  During the mission, which lasted nine minutes and 25 seconds, the rocket reached a height of 150 kilometers according to Xinhua, but only 120 km according to Associated Press.
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Original:  The joint project between Brazil and Argentina , was in accordance with a contract from 1998, under which both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
Revised:  The joint project between Brazil and Argentina was in accordance with a contract from 1998, under which both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
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Original:  The joint project between Brazil and Argentina , was in accordance with a contract from 1998, under which both states contributed with experiments which were transported into space as a workload.
Revised:  The joint project between Brazil and Argentina , was in accordance with a contract from 1998, under which both states contributed with experiments that were transported into space as a workload.
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Original:  After its recovery  the evaluation of the experiments will take place in Buenos Aires
Revised:  After its recovery , the evaluation of the experiments will take place in Buenos Aires
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Original:  The rocket was launched at 9:15 am CET from the spaceport located in Boca do Infierno in the Brazilian state of Rio Grande do Norte.
Revised:  The rocket was launched at 9:15 am CET from the spaceport located in Boca do Inferno in the Brazilian state of Rio Grande do Norte.
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Original:  Paul's goal for the fourth quarter fund raising bid was $10 million, but so far has managed to raise nearly $ 20 million.
Revised:  Paul's goal for the fourth quarter fund raising bid was US$10 million, but so far has managed to raise nearly US$ 20 million.
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Original: United States presidential candidate Ron Paul, has broke a fund raising record by raising over US$6,000,000 on the internet in 24 hours on December 16, setting the record for the most money raised in a single day online.
Revised: United States presidential candidate Ron Paul, has broken a fund raising record by raising over US$6,000,000 on the internet in 24 hours on December 16, setting the record for the most money raised in a single day online.
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Original:  On November 5, Paul raised nearly US$ 5 million in 24 hours  
Revised:  On November 5, Paul raised nearly US$ 5 million in 24 hours . 
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Original:  Plans to redo the traffic are coming soon.
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Original:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5.
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Original:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5. External links Lakewood Crossing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:Washington Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate External links Lakewood Crossing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:Washington Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5. External links Lakewood Crossing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:Washington Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:Washington Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5. External links Lakewood Crossing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:Washington Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  Twin Lakes Avenue NE will be extended and a freeway ramp will be added soon, along with a bridge across Interstate 5. External links Lakewood Crossing%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  100px|right Plans to redo the traffic are coming soon.
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Original:  National Party, Māori, ACT, UnitedFuture and independent Taito Phillip Field voted against, with Labour, Greens, New Zealand First and Progressive  .
Revised:  National Party, Māori, ACT, UnitedFuture and independent Taito Phillip Field voted against, with Labour, Greens, New Zealand First and Progressive voting for .
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Original:  The law will come into effect on January 1, 2008 - the start of election year in New Zealand - after receiving royal assent by the Queen representative in New Zealand, Governor-General Anand Satyanand.
Revised:  The law will come into effect on January 1, 2008 - the start of election year in New Zealand - after receiving royal assent by the Queens representative in New Zealand, Governor-General Anand Satyanand.
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Original:  The law will come into effect on January 1, 2008 - the start of election year in New Zealand - after receiving royal assent by the Queens representative in New Zealand, Governor-General Anand Satyanand.
Revised:  The law will come into effect on January 1, 2008 - the start of election year in New Zealand - after receiving royal assent by the Queen's representative in New Zealand, Governor-General Anand Satyanand.
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Original: Acceptance Speech During his acceptance speech he said "I want the Liberal Democrats to be the future of politics," and that he hoped his leadership of the Liberal Democrats would be about ambition and change.
Revised:  During his acceptance speech he said "I want the Liberal Democrats to be the future of politics," and that he hoped his leadership of the Liberal Democrats would be about ambition and change.
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Original:  His acceptance speech took place in a central London hotel   .
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Original:  He became an Member of Parliament (for Sheffield Hallam)in the UK General Election in May 2005 after quitting his job as an MP in 2002.
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Original:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrat and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging  
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Original:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrat and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging  
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Original:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrat and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging  
Revised:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrats and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging 
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Original:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrat and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging  
Revised:  He was also made the spokesman for Trade and Industry spokesman for the European Liberal Democrat and Reform group as well as campaigning to end illegal logging . 
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Original:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision had been retracted and that the full song would be played  in future
Revised:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision "wrong" and that the full song would be played in future
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Original:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision had been retracted and that the full song would be played  in future
Revised:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision had been retracted and that the full song would be played un-edited in future
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Original:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision  "wrong" and that the full song would be played un-edited in future
Revised:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however in the last half-hour a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision was "wrong" and that the full song would be played un-edited in future
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Original: The Radio 1 management made the initial decision saying "We are playing an edited version because some members of the audience might find it offensive" and thus the word faggot was disguised from "you scum bag , you maggot, you cheap lousy faggot".
Revised: The Radio 1 management made the initial decision saying "We are playing an edited version because some members of the audience might find it offensive" and thus the word faggot was disguised from "you scumbag , you maggot, you cheap lousy faggot".
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Original: 200px BBC Radio 1 bosses have today reversed their decision to censor the word "faggot" from the 20 year old Fairytale of New York song by The Pogues .
Revised: 200px bosses have today reversed their decision to censor the word "faggot" from the 20 year old Fairytale of New York song by The Pogues .
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Original: 200px BBC Radio 1 bosses have today reversed their decision to censor the word "faggot" from the 20 year old Fairytale of New York song by The Pogues .
Revised: 200px BBC Radio 1 bosses have today reversed their decision to censor the word "faggot" from the 20 year old song by .
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Original:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however at around 18.00 (UTC) a breaking news bulletin, from Andy Parfitt the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision was "wrong" and that the full song would be played un-edited in future
Revised:  A further meeting was held today in which the management decided to stick by their initial decision, however at around 18.00 (UTC) a breaking news bulletin, from the controller of Radio 1, was read out during the Scott Mills show, saying that the decision was "wrong" and that the full song would be played un-edited in future
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