wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Nobel committee cited "for their efforts to build up and disseminate greater knowledge about man-made climate change, and to lay the foundations for the measures that are needed to counteract such change" as the reasons for awarding the prize.
Revised:  The Nobel committee cited "for their efforts to build up and disseminate greater knowledge about man-made climate change, and to lay the foundations for the measures that are needed to contribute to such change" as the reasons for awarding the prize.
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Original:   The Nobel Peace Prize The Nobel Peace Prize (Swedish and Norwegian: Nobels fredspris) is the name of one of five Nobel Prizes bequeathed by the Swedish industrialist and inventor Alfred Nobel.
Revised:  About The Nobel Peace Prize The Nobel Peace Prize (Swedish and Norwegian: Nobels fredspris) is the name of one of five Nobel Prizes bequeathed by the Swedish industrialist and inventor Alfred Nobel.
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Original:  By the provisions of Nobel's will, the Nobel Peace Prize is awarded "to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between the nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norwegian Nobel Committee Image:Norske nobelinstiutt 1.jpg|The Nobel Institute in Oslo, Norway.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norwegian Nobel Committee Image:Norske nobelinstiutt 1.jpg|The Nobel Institute in Oslo, Norway.
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Original:  By the provisions of Nobel's will, the Nobel Peace Prize is awarded "to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between the nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norwegian Nobel Committee Image:Norske nobelinstiutt 1.jpg|The Nobel Institute in Oslo, Norway.
Revised:  By the provisions of Nobel's will, the Nobel Peace Prize is awarded "to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between the nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Image:Norske nobelinstiutt 1.jpg|The Nobel Institute in Oslo, Norway.
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Original:  By the provisions of Nobel's will, the Nobel Peace Prize is awarded "to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between the nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norwegian Nobel Committee Image:Norske nobelinstiutt 1.jpg|The Nobel Institute in Oslo, Norway.
Revised:  By the provisions of Nobel's will, the Nobel Peace Prize is awarded "to the person who shall have done the most or the best work for fraternity between the nations, for the abolition or reduction of standing armies and for the holding and promotion of peace congresses."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Norwegian Nobel Committee 
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Original: The annual report shows Kordia Group Limited's net profit, after tax, was NZ$11.9 million, the 2006 result was $9.8 million.
Revised: The annual report shows Kordia Group Limited's net profit, after tax, at NZ$11.9 million, the 2006 result was $9.8 million.
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Original:  Orcon is being operating at arms-length to the rest of the company.
Revised:  Orcon is being operated at arms-length to the rest of the company.
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Original:  Revenue was up from NZ $201 million in the 2006 financial year to $264 million this year;
Revised:  Revenue was up from $201 million in the 2006 financial year to $264 million this year;
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Original:  The Government will recieve a total dividend of $8.4 million;
Revised:  The Government will receive a total dividend of $8.4 million;
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Original:  $6.8 millin in 2006.
Revised:  $6.8 million in 2006.
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Original:  A $3 million dividend had already been recieved by the Government so a payment of only $ 5.4 million was made.
Revised:  A $3 million dividend had already been received by the Government so a payment of only $ 5.4 million was made.
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Original:  Other advances includes New Zealand's new digital television service, Freeview with it set to start terristeral transmission next year.
Revised:  Other advances includes New Zealand's new digital television service, Freeview with it set to start terrestrial transmission next year.
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Original:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media   
Revised:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successful : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media 
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Original:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media   
Revised:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and over 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media 
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Original:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media   
Revised:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of every traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media 
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Original:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media   
Revised:  With scientific books, this move already was quite successfull : Publishing house Springer for example, offering over 40,000 ebooks and ober 1700 electronic magazines, of which over 1200 are still actively continued with Springer, nowadays does an ebook-variant of everya traditional scientific book they print - and already has the largest part of their cash-flow from digital media . 
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Original: ]] Digital content can also be used as a marketing-tool with the "Search Inside" from Amazon.com, where the full text of a book is visible but only small parts of the book are shown at a time  
Revised: ]] Digital content can also be used as a marketing-tool with the "Search Inside" from Amazon.com, where the full text of a book is visible but only small parts of the book are shown at a time . 
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Original: The internet is very present at the Frankfurt Book Fair 2007, not just, like in previous years, as a means for the journalists who have 80 worklaces for their own notebooks to report on the fair, but like before as a chance - and as a threat for right-owners of digital media.
Revised: The internet is very present at the Frankfurt Book Fair 2007, not just, like in previous years, as a means for the journalists who have 80 workplaces for their own notebooks to report on the fair, but like before as a chance - and as a threat for right-owners of digital media.
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Original: The internet is very present at the Frankfurt Book Fair 2007, not just, like in previous years, as a means for the journalists who have 80 worklaces for their own notebooks to report on the fair, but like before as a chance - and as a threat for right-owners of digital media.
Revised: The internet is very present at the Frankfurt Book Fair 2007, not just, like in previous years, as a means for the journalists who have 80 worklaces for their own notebooks to report on the fair, but like before as a chance - and as a threat for rights-owners of digital media.
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Original:  Three of the bloggers write in english language, two english language podcasts are done, to widen the reach of the Book Fair 2.0.
Revised:  Three of the bloggers write in English, two English language podcasts are done, to widen the reach of the Book Fair 2.0.
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Original:  Both servives had to answer questions as to how they will protect the content from unpaid exploitation, as probably fewer and fewer users will be willing to pay for a digital eBook when they can read the content for free, up to twenty pages at a time.
Revised:  Both services had to answer questions as to how they will protect the content from unpaid exploitation, as probably fewer and fewer users will be willing to pay for a digital eBook when they can read the content for free, up to twenty pages at a time.
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Original:  The freeloader mentality of many internet users was seen as a threat by many of the publishers
Revised:  The freeloader mentality of many Internet users was seen as a threat by many of the publishers
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Original:  The freeloader mentality of many Internet users was seen as a threat by many of the publishers   [[ 
Revised:  The freeloader mentality of many Internet users was seen as a threat by many of the publishers . [[ 
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Original:  Sideprofits possible in the music business are not possible for audiobooks: concerts are not the same as the public readings, which are often a deficit affair, and noone wants to pay for audiobook ringtones.
Revised:  Sideprofits possible in the music business are not possible for audiobooks: concerts are not the same as the public readings, which are often a deficit affair, and no one wants to pay for audiobook ringtones.
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Original: Scotland took a step closer to qualifying for Euro 2008 as a 3-1 win against Ukraine kept them top of Group B in UEFA EURO 2008 qualifying.
Revised: Scotland took a step closer to qualifying for Euro 2008 as a 3-1 win against Ukraine kept them top of Group B in UEFA Euro 2008 qualifying.
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Original:  James McFadden secured the win in the 68th minute.
Revised:  secured the win in the 68th minute.
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Original: At approximately 11:00 p.m. (pacific time), two semi truck collided and at least 13 other trucks smashed into the wreckage causing a massive fire.
Revised: At approximately 11:00 p.m. (pacific time), two semi trucks collided and at least 13 other trucks smashed into the wreckage causing a massive fire.
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Original:  At least two people have died and at least eight to ten were injured after two semi trucks collided in a truck tunnel on  Interstate 5 (Newhall Pass) between Los Angeles and Santa Clarita California, United States, causing the tunnel to be completely shut down on both north and southbound lanes.
Revised:  At least two people have died and at least eight to ten were injured after two semi trucks collided in a truck tunnel on w: Interstate 5 (Newhall Pass) between Los Angeles and Santa Clarita California, United States, causing the tunnel to be completely shut down on both north and southbound lanes.
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Original: One of the dead has been named as Frank Iero from the popular rock band My Chemical Romance.
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Original: This also marks a historical moment , being the first time ever that a sitting U.S. President will appear with the Dalai Lama at a public event.
Revised: This also marks a historical moment as it is the first time ever that a sitting U.S. President will appear with the Dalai Lama at a public event.
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Original:  China objected  accusing the Dalai Lama of "separatist activities."
Revised:  China objected , accusing the Dalai Lama of "separatist activities."
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Original:  The U.S. decided to award the Dalai Lama with the medal because "his many enduring and outstanding contributions to peace, nonviolence, human rights and religious understanding."
Revised:  The U.S. decided to award the Dalai Lama with the medal due to "his many enduring and outstanding contributions to peace, nonviolence, human rights and religious understanding."
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Original:  The 14th Dalai Lama, Tenzin Gyatso will arrive in the United States and on Tuesday is going to meet with U.S. President George W. Bush and then on Wednesday he will attend a ceremony in his honor where he will be awarded the highest honor in the U.S. for a civilian, the Congressional Gold Medal.
Revised:  The 14th Dalai Lama, Tenzin Gyatso will arrive in the United States on Tuesday and will meet with U.S. President George W. Bush and then on Wednesday he will attend a ceremony in his honor where he will be awarded the highest honor in the U.S. for a civilian, the Congressional Gold Medal.
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Original:  The 14th Dalai Lama, Tenzin Gyatso will arrive in the United States and on Tuesday is going to meet with U.S. President George W. Bush and then on Wednesday he will attend a ceremony in his honor where he will be awarded the highest honor in the U.S. for a civilian, the Congressional Gold Medal.
Revised:  The 14th Dalai Lama, Tenzin Gyatso will arrive in the United States and on Tuesday is going to meet with U.S. President George W. Bush . On Wednesday he will attend a ceremony in his honor where he will be awarded the highest honor in the U.S. for a civilian, the Congressional Gold Medal.
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Original: 14th Dalai Lama, Tenzin Gyatso.
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Original:  On October 12, the U.N. Security Council released a  statement saying that it "strongly deplores" Burma's response to the protests.
Revised:  On October 12, the U.N. Security Council released a simple statement saying that it "strongly deplores" Burma's response to the protests.
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Original:  On October 12, the U.N. Security Council released a simple statement saying that it "strongly deplores" Burma's response to the protests.
Revised:  On October 12, the U.N. Security Council released a statement saying that it "strongly deplores" Burma's response to the protests.
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Original:  "The right leadership has the experience to further expand the the prosperity of the Australian economy.   
Revised:  "The right leadership has the experience to further expand the the prosperity of the Australian economy. " 
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Original:  Consequently following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote ( voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
Revised:  Consequently following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote , as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
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Original:  Consequently following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote ( voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
Revised:  Consequently following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote ( voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections 
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Original:  Consequently  following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote, as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections
Revised:  Consequently , following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote, as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections
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Original:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote , as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections 
Revised:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote ( voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections 
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Original:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote , as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections 
Revised:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote , as voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
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Original:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote (voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
Revised:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote . Voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
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Original:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote (voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections )
Revised:  Consequently, following recent changes to the electoral act, Australians have until that date to ensure that they are on the electoral rolls and are able to have their vote (voting is compulsory in Australian Federal elections 
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Original:  Having begun at  6:45am Hawaii Standard Time with a 2.4 mile swim, followed by 112 mile bicycle race, and a 26.2 mile marathon ;
Revised:  Having begun at The 6:45am Hawaii Standard Time with a 2.4 mile swim, followed by 112 mile bicycle race, and a 26.2 mile marathon ;
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Original:  Having begun at  6:45am Hawaii Standard Time with a 2.4 mile swim, followed by 112 mile bicycle race, and a 26.2 mile marathon ;
Revised:  Having begun at 6:45am Hawaii Standard Time start to the 2.4 mile swim, followed by 112 mile bicycle race, and a 26.2 mile marathon ;
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Original:  and the sidelining of Luke Bell due to a leg injury.
Revised:  and Luke Bell was sidelined with a leg injury.
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Original:  But  "normal" returned  as many of the 1,788 starters completed before the October 14, 2007 12:00am deadline
Revised:  But a sense of "normal" returned as many of the 1,788 starters completed before the October 14, 2007 12:00am deadline
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Original:   "Earlier in 2006, Samsung donated lots of funds to help the process of 2009 Summer Deaflympics in Taipei.
Revised:  Charity Donation Ceremony. "Earlier in 2006, Samsung donated lots of funds to help the process of 2009 Summer Deaflympics in Taipei.
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Original:  One example cited in the lawsuit was that ORU allowed a man with three convictions of sexual abuse, including "exposing himself to a 15-year-old boy in a school locker room," was allowed to ORU mentor college students.
Revised:  One example cited in the lawsuit was that ORU allowed a man with three convictions of sexual abuse, including "exposing himself to a 15-year-old boy in a school locker room," was allowed to mentor ORU college students.
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Original:  The filing also said she was photographed with a boy after Tulsa curfew 29 times, including a picture of her and the boy smoking at her house.
Revised:  The filing also said she was photographed with a boy after Tulsa curfew 29 times, and this includes a picture of her and the boy smoking at her house.
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Original: On friday three fired professors filed more charges in their lawsuit against Oral Roberts University, university President Richard Roberts, and his wife, Lindsay Roberts.
Revised: On Friday three fired professors filed more charges in their lawsuit against Oral Roberts University, university President Richard Roberts, and his wife, Lindsay Roberts.
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Original: On friday three fired professors filed more charges in their lawsuit against Oral Roberts University, university President Richard Roberts, and his wife, Lindsay Roberts.
Revised: On friday three fired professors filed more charges in their lawsuit against Oral Roberts University, University president Richard Roberts, and his wife, Lindsay Roberts.
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Original:  One example cited in the lawsuit was that ORU allowed a man with three convictions of sexual abuse, including "exposing himself to a 15-year-old boy in a school locker room," was allowed to mentor ORU college students.
Revised:  One example cited in the lawsuit was that ORU allowed a man with three convictions of sexual abuse, including "exposing himself to a 15-year-old boy in a school locker room," to mentor ORU college students.
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Original: In addition  the report attached to the lawsuit contained fresh allegations that Lindsay Roberts, 51, stayed overnight nine times with an "underage male" at a ORU "guest home".
Revised: In addition , the report attached to the lawsuit contained fresh allegations that Lindsay Roberts, 51, stayed overnight nine times with an "underage male" at a ORU "guest home".
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Original: Colombia and Brazil opened their 2010 FIFA World Cup QUalification campaign with a 0-0 draw.
Revised: Colombia and Brazil opened their 2010 FIFA World Cup Qualification campaign with a 0-0 draw.
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Original: South Africa  will face defending champions England in the final, in a repeat of an earlier pool match which South Africa won 36 - 0. Meanwhile, Argentina will play hosts France in the third place match.
Revised: South Africa will face defending champions England in the final, a repeat of an earlier pool match which South Africa won 36 - 0. Meanwhile, Argentina will play hosts France in the third place match.
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Original:  Syria's President Bashar al-Assad had previously said that Israeli jets had dropped bombs on an unused military building.
Revised:  Syria's President Bashar al-Assad previously said that Israeli jets had dropped bombs on an unused military building.
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Original: According to The New York Times article's sources, the Bush administration was divided at the time over whether to support the Israeli attack.
Revised: According to The New York Times sources, the Bush administration was divided at the time over whether to support the Israeli attack.
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