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Original: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Rejinald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
Revised: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
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Original: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
Revised: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Rejinald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
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Original:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services . Recent hearsay indicates that a Taliban elite has been wounded and the doctor has been abducted to look into the matter
Revised:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services Recent hearsay indicates that a Taliban elite has been wounded and the doctor has been abducted to look into the matter
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Original:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services . Recent hearsay indicates that a Taliban elite has been wounded and the doctor has been abducted to look into the matter
Revised:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services . 
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Original: On the eve of December 7,  Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
Revised: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan , was kidnapped along with his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
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Original: On the eve of December 7,  Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
Revised: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while returning from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
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Original: On the eve of December 7,  Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip from Dera Ismail Khan.
Revised: On the eve of December 7, Dr. Reginald Humayun, a Christian doctor working for Pennell Memorial Christian Hospital in Bannu, Pakistan was kidnapped alongwith his driver while coming from a trip to Dera Ismail Khan.
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Original:  The doctor being a medical superintendant at the said hospital was also the General Secretary of the Church of Pakistan.
Revised:  The doctor, a medical superintendent at that hospital, was also the General Secretary of the Church of Pakistan.
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Original:  Dar Ali Khatak, leading the investigation by the Bannu Police has expressed deep concerns and vows to find the hostages though until now no progress has been seen to have formulated .
Revised:  Dar Ali Khatak, leading the investigation by the Bannu Police has expressed deep concerns and vows to find the hostages though until now no progress has been seen .
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Original:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services
Revised:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian service
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Original:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian service
Revised:  With the recent state of politics in Pakistan, it is becoming increasingly difficult for those who are providing humanitarian services
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Original: St Petersburg, Florida police were caught on video handcuffing a five-year-old kindergarten student who had earlier torn papers off a bulletin board and punched an assistant principal.
Revised: St Petersburg, Florida police were taped on video handcuffing a five-year-old kindergarten student who had earlier torn papers off a bulletin board and punched an assistant principal.
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Original: So sad. St Petersburg, Florida police were taped on video handcuffing a five-year-old kindergarten student who had earlier torn papers off a bulletin board and punched an assistant principal.
Revised:  St Petersburg, Florida police were taped on video handcuffing a five-year-old kindergarten student who had earlier torn papers off a bulletin board and punched an assistant principal.
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Original:  In the side of Cross-Strait, several teams proformed traditional 在今年刷新展覽規模的「第十五屆台北國際旅展」，今日正式開幕。在上午的同業參訪時段，兩岸三地的旅遊業者、台灣的政院高層、以及外國大使（包含帛琉總統湯米·雷蒙傑索等），都相繼前來參訪展覽，為旅展加油打氣。 上午的開幕典禮分成兩部分進行，在兩岸展區部分，除了安排了中國傳統技藝，包含高風險的「少林武功」，另外，在昨天，兩岸三地的旅遊界菁英，也在「海峽兩岸旅展」的迎賓晚宴中，宣示協助推動兩岸之間的觀光產業，以協助改善兩岸三地間的關係。
Revised:  In the side of Cross-Strait, several teams proformed traditional 上午的開幕典禮分成兩部分進行，在兩岸展區部分，除了安排了中國傳統技藝，包含高風險的「少林武功」，另外，在昨天，兩岸三地的旅遊界菁英，也在「海峽兩岸旅展」的迎賓晚宴中，宣示協助推動兩岸之間的觀光產業，以協助改善兩岸三地間的關係。
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Original: In the main opening ceremony, Premier of the Republic of China Chun-hsiung Chang not only announced the premiums of "2008-2009 Visit Taiwan Year" but also said: "We ( meant to the official, the Executive Yuan) will still encourage foreign visitors visit Taiwan and also provide premiums for groups with a charter airline. with our '2008-2009 Visit Taiwan Year' in the future".
Revised: In the main opening ceremony, Premier of the Republic of China Chun-hsiung Chang not only announced the premiums of "2008-2009 Visit Taiwan Year" but also said: "We ( the Executive Yuan) will still encourage foreign visitors visit Taiwan and also provide premiums for groups with a charter airline. with our '2008-2009 Visit Taiwan Year' in the future".
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Original:  Not only Cjhun-hsiung Chang, Minister of Transportation and Communications Duei Tsai, Commissioner of Tourism Bureau of MOTC Janice Lai, and the current President of Palau Thomas Esang Remengesau, Jr. visited this show , governments in several divisions participated in this show to showcase traditional cultures from several divisions with unlimited potentials on tourism industry in Taiwan
Revised:  Not only Chun-hsiung Chang, Minister of Transportation and Communications Duei Tsai, Commissioner of Tourism Bureau of MOTC Janice Lai, and the current President of Palau Thomas Esang Remengesau, Jr. visited this show , governments in several divisions participated in this show to showcase traditional cultures from several divisions with unlimited potentials on tourism industry in Taiwan
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Original:  Not only Cjhun-hsiung Chang, Minister of Transportation and Communications Duei Tsai, Commissioner of Tourism Bureau of MOTC Janice Lai, and the current President of Palau Thomas Esang Remengesau, Jr. visited this show , governments in several divisions participated in this show to showcase traditional cultures from several divisions with unlimited potentials on tourism industry in Taiwan
Revised:  Not only Cjhun-hsiung Chang, Minister of Transportation and Communications Duei Tsai, Commissioner of Tourism Bureau of MOTC Janice Lai, and the current President of Palau Thomas Esang Remengesau, Jr. visited this show . Governments in several divisions participated in this show to showcase traditional cultures from several divisions with unlimited potentials on tourism industry in Taiwan
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Original:  The Roadmap establishes a time frame and scope for reaching an agreementby 2009 on midterm goals for greenhouse gas emission reductions after 2012, amongst other things.
Revised:  The Roadmap establishes a time frame and scope for reaching a post-2012 climate change agreement. This includes setting, for industrialized nations, targets for reductions of greenhouse gas (GHG) emissions. Numerous observers and parties had voiced that they see this as being of great importance prior to and during the conference.
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Original:  The objection regarded the phrasing of how nations with developing industries are to take action to slow and reduce their Greenhouse Gas (GHG ) emissions.
Revised:  The objection regarded the phrasing of how nations with developing industries are to take action to slow and reduce their GHG emissions.
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Original:  Some time later, after a number of other nations voiced their opinions and the American delegation could be seen busily debating and writing, the US then said they would agree to the consensus position after all.
Revised:  Some time later, after a number of other nations voiced their opinions and the American delegation could be seen busily debating and writing, the US said they would agree to the consensus position after all.
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Original:  Ministerial negotiations had continued through the night until the early morning hours yesterday and the climate conference was scheduled to decide on the last outstanding items this morning.
Revised:  Ministerial negotiations had continued through the night until the early morning hours yesterday and the climate conference had been scheduled to decide on the last outstanding items this morning.
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Original:  With almost all open matters having been agreed on by a group of 40 ministers, one of the last outstanding points  was still the question of guideline numbers for GHG cuts.
Revised:  With almost all open matters having been agreed on by a group of 40 ministers, one of the last outstanding points then was still the question of guideline numbers for GHG cuts.
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Original:  The draft decision proposed by the President of the Conference today  no longer included the numbers, but did make reference to the latest report by the international body of scientists that is charged with assessing the current state of knowledge on climate change.
Revised:  The draft decision proposed by the President of the Conference today however, no longer included the numbers, but did make reference to the latest report by the international body of scientists that is charged with assessing the current state of knowledge on climate change.
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Original:  "The other man was found near the door. 
Revised:  "The other man was found near the door. " There were no indications of a forced entry
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Original: The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy  and Kiran Kumar Allam, who hailed from Andhra Pradesh.
Revised: The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy and Kiran Kumar Allam, both of whow hailed from Andhra Pradesh.
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Original:  The bodies were discovered after Allam's pregnant wife called emergency 911 to request urgent medical aid.
Revised:  The bodies were discovered after Allam's pregnant wife called emergency 9-1-1 to request urgent medical aid.
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Original:  There were no indications of a forced entry  
Revised:  There were no indications of a forced entry . 
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Original: The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy Komma and Kiran Kumar Allam, both of whow hailed from Andhra Pradesh.
Revised: The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy Komma and Kiran Kumar Allam, both of who hailed from Andhra Pradesh.
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Original:  This appears to be the first killings on the campus since the early 1990s.
Revised:  These appear to be the first killings on the campus since the early 1990s.
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Original:  The homicides occurred at the Edwards Gay Apartments on the school's campus  and police have been searching for three suspects.
Revised:  The homicides occurred at the Edwards Gay Apartments on the school's campus , and police have been searching for three suspects.
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Original:  Officers and medical personnel were immediately dispatched to the scene , the University officials gathered the latest information and sent out an emergency text message to the members of the LSU community who had previously registered their phone numbers with the university's emergency text-messaging system.
Revised:  Officers and medical personnel were immediately dispatched to the scene . The University officials gathered the latest information and sent out an emergency text message to the members of the LSU community who had previously registered their phone numbers with the university's emergency text-messaging system.
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Original:  The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy Komma and Kiran Kumar Allam, both of who hailed from Andhra Pradesh  .
Revised:  The deceased students have been identified as Chandrashekhar Reddy Komma and Kiran Kumar Allam, both of who hailed from Andhra Pradesh , India .
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Original: On Friday December 14, 2007 the Tropical Storm Olga death count became 38.
Revised:  Tropical Storm Olga death count became 38.
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Original:  The highest winds are 60 miles per hour.
Revised:  The highest winds recorded were 60 miles per hour.
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Original:  This storm is the fifteenth in the 2007 Atlantic hurricane season.
Revised:  This storm was the fifteenth in the 2007 Atlantic hurricane season.
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Original:  Prior to it moving ashore, the government of Haiti issued a tropical storm warning for its northern coastline, and later a tropical storm warning was issued for the Turks and Caicos Islands, as well as the southeastern Bahamas .
Revised:  Prior to it moving ashore, the government of Haiti issued a tropical storm warning for its northern coastline, and later a tropical storm warning was issued for the Turks and Caicos Islands, as well as the southeastern Bahamas 
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Original:  External sources News Article WIkipedia Aric
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Original: Milan Michalek, Patrick Marleau and Joe Pavelski scored for the Sharks, who won consecutive home games for just the second time all season to stay in a first-place tie with Dallas in the Pacific Division, passing Vancouver for second place in the conference standings.
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Original:  Three Stars of the Game #1 - Patrick Marleau, C, SAN - 1 Goal #2 - Joe Thornton, C, SAN - 1 Goal, 1 Assist #3 - Craig Rivet, D, SAN - 1 Assist External Links NHL.com San Jose Sharks Official Website Vancouver Canucks Official Websit
Revised:  Three Stars of the Game #1 - Patrick Marleau, C, SAN - 1 Goal #2 - Joe Thornton, C, SAN - 1 Goal, 1 Assist #3 - Craig Rivet, D, SAN - 1 External Links NHL.com San Jose Sharks Official Website Vancouver Canucks Official Websit
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Original:  However backers say nuclear power will help mee the 60\% cut by 2050 target.
Revised:  However backers say nuclear power will help meet the 60\% cut by 2050 target.
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Original: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight and was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
Revised: A YouTube user, "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight and was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
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Original: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight and was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
Revised: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" , was with a partner on the flight and was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
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Original: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight and was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
Revised: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight . The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video .
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Original:  The clip received nearly 120 000 views  as of 17:30 UTC Saturday 
Revised:  The clip received nearly 120 000 views ( as of 17:30 UTC Saturday 
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Original:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video , which received nearly 120 000 views (as of 17:30 UTC Saturday) since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
Revised:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video which received nearly 120 000 views (as of 17:30 UTC Saturday) since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
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Original:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video , which received nearly 120 000 views (as of 17:30 UTC Saturday) since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
Revised:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video , which received nearly 120 000 views since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
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Original: A YouTube user, "2003tiburon" , was with a partner on the flight .
Revised: However, a video of the incident was broadcast on YouTube by "2003tiburon" , was with a partner on the flight .
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Original: A YouTube user, "2003tiburon" , was with a partner on the flight .
Revised: A YouTube user, "2003tiburon" who with his partner was on the flight .
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Original:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video which received nearly 120 000 views since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
Revised:  The duo was close enough to the incident to capture a video . The clip received nearly 120 000 views since it was posted to the video sharing website on Wednesday
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Original:  This incident , however, has since become the subject of a hit video this week.
Revised:  This incident became the subject of a hit video this week.
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Original:  "You may see an awful lot of articles about Viagra ," said Wales.
Revised:  "You may see an awful lot of articles about viagra ," said Wales.
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Original:  Testing is being carried out by an invitation-only group of participants    
Revised:  Testing is being carried out by an invitation-only group of participants . 
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Original: Woman missing in California Bay Area  San Jose, CA resident Ann Lisa Nguyen  was reported missing Monday, 10th December 2007.
Revised: Woman missing in California Bay Area A San Jose, CA resident Ann Lisa Nguyen was reported missing Monday, 10th December 2007.
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Original: Woman missing in California Bay Area  San Jose, CA resident Ann Lisa Nguyen  was reported missing Monday, 10th December 2007.
Revised: Woman missing in California Bay Area San Jose, CA resident Ann Lisa Nguyen , was reported missing Monday, 10th December 2007.
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Original:  As of Saturday, December 15, 2007, the search continues.
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Original:  Nguyen's family says they had last seen her Friday Dec 7, when she went to have dinner and see a movie, however according to a flier given out by her friends, she was last seen in front of an apartment building at Alvin Avenue on Dec 8
Revised:  Nguyen's family says they had last seen her on December 7, when she went to have dinner and see a movie, however according to a flier given out by her friends, she was last seen in front of an apartment building at Alvin Avenue on Dec 8
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Original:  Nguyen's family says they had last seen her Friday Dec 7, when she went to have dinner and see a movie, however according to a flier given out by her friends, she was last seen in front of an apartment building at Alvin Avenue on Dec 8
Revised:  Nguyen's family says they had last seen her Friday Dec 7, when she went to have dinner and see a movie, however according to a flier given out by her friends, she was last seen in front of an apartment building at Alvin Avenue on December 8
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Original: Woman missing in California Bay Area An example of a crime scene A San Jose, California, USA resident, Ann Lisa Nguyen, was reported missing on Monday.
Revised: Woman missing in California Bay Area A San Jose, California, USA resident, Ann Lisa Nguyen, was reported missing on Monday.
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Original: Woman missing in California Bay Area An example of a crime scene A San Jose, California, USA resident, Ann Lisa Nguyen, was reported missing on Monday.
Revised: Woman missing in California Bay Area An example of a crime scene A San Jose, California, United States resident, Ann Lisa Nguyen, was reported missing on Monday.
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Original:  Comparison to last year, the starting control is apparently better than last year     
Revised:  Comparison to last year, the starting control is apparently better than last year . 
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Original:  Comparison to last year, the starting control is apparently better than last year.
Revised:  Comparison to last year, the starting control was apparently better than last year.
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Original:  Finally, Hillary Bett from Kenya and Tabitha Tsatsa from Zimbabwe won the title at this race, and local runners Yu-fang Hsu and Wen-chien Wu broke records of local runners to win the Taiwan Champions.
Revised:  Finally, Hillary Bett from Kenya and Tabitha Tsatsa from Zimbabwe won the title at this race, and Yu-fang Hsu and Wen-chien Wu broke records of local runners to win the Taiwan Champions.
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Original: Two light aircraft are reported to have collided in mid-air, near East Midlands Airport in Leicestershire.
Revised: Two light aircraft have collided in mid-air, near East Midlands Airport in Leicestershire.
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Original:  One of the aircraft was able to land at the airport , while the other crashed in Staffordshire.
Revised:  One of the aircraft is believed to have been able to land at the airport , while the other crashed in Staffordshire.
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Original:   The airport has been closed, and all flights to the airport have been diverted to Birmingham, and Manchester .
Revised:  The airport has been closed, and all flights to the airport have been diverted to Birmingham, and Manchester 
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Original:  One of the aircraft is believed to have been able to land at the airport after suffering damage to its landing gear.
Revised:  One of the aircraft crashed land at the airport after suffering damage to its landing gear.
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Original:  Two people are believed to have been killed when two light aircraft have collided in mid-air, near East Midlands Airport in Leicestershire.
Revised:  Two people are believed to have been killed when two light aircraft collided in mid-air, near East Midlands Airport in Leicestershire.
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Original:  The airport has subsequently re-opened .
Revised:  The airport has subsequently re-opened 
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Original:  The pilot of the plane which made it to the airport reported that he hit something, but didn't know what, and saw burning debris below him .
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Original: The climate conference that had been held for the last two weeks in Bali came to a conclusion on Saturday.
Revised: The climate conference that was held for the last two weeks in Bali came to a conclusion on Saturday.
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