wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Heavy rains on Friday seemingly impacted the opening day attendance, with very few attendees present at 4pm local time.
Revised:  Heavy rains beforehand seemingly impacted the opening day attendance, with very few attendees present at 4pm local time.
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Original: File  photo of a in , . For its 98th consecutive year, the East  opened for operations on Friday in  , Texas in the  .
Revised: File photo of a in , . For its 98th consecutive year, the East opened for operations on Friday in , Texas in the United States .
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Original:  While according to the report this trend is spreading nationally, the overall number off excess females deaths dropped by 8,000 from 265,000 in 1990 to 257,000 in 2008.
Revised:  While according to the report this trend is spreading nationally, the overall number of excess females deaths dropped by 8,000 from 265,000 in 1990 to 257,000 in 2008.
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Original:  This includes using women's self-help groups focused on taking best practices from research and applying them in in the state of . Self Employed Women’s Association has assisted women in Gujarat by providing childcare.
Revised:  This includes using women's self-help groups focused on in in the state of . Self Employed Women’s Association has assisted women in Gujarat by providing childcare.
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Original:  The report also encourages strengthening ownership and land rights, which should also address the agricultural productivity gender-gap . Sister link
Revised:  The report also encourages strengthening ownership and land rights, which should also address the agricultural productivity gender-gap Sister link
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Original:  The report also encourages strengthening ownership and land rights, which should also address the agricultural productivity gender-gap . Sister link
Revised:  The report also encourages strengthening ownership and land rights, which should also address the agricultural productivity gender-gap . 
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Original:  The poorest 20\% average  4 children.
Revised:  The poorest 20\% average about 4 children.
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Original:  This includes using women's self-help groups focused on in in the state of .  Self Employed Women’s Association has assisted women in Gujarat by providing childcare.
Revised:  This includes using women's self-help groups focused on in in the state of . The Self Employed Women’s Association has assisted women in Gujarat by providing childcare.
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Original:  The creation of an all women 's police force in Tamil Nadu led to increased reporting of crimes against women and general comfort in going to the police to report a problem.
Revised:  The creation of an all-women 's police force in Tamil Nadu led to increased reporting of crimes against women and general comfort in going to the police to report a problem.
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Original: School girls from Mumbi Nationally, the report found that a woman's income correlated positively with the number of years her children spent in school.
Revised: School girls from Nationally, the report found that a woman's income correlated positively with the number of years her children spent in school.
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Original:  Female activists from Bundelkhand, Uttar Pradesh Indian women are having fewer children.
Revised:  Female activists from , Indian women are having fewer children.
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Original:  In discussing Iceland , it suggests mandatory paid parental leave for mother and father have played an important role in changing norms in the country.
Revised:  In discussing , it suggests mandatory paid parental leave for mother and father have played an important role in changing norms in the country.
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Original:  Iceland's boys and girls mean scores for the mathematics test were nearly identical with boys just edging out girls with a score of approximately 509 to 508.
Revised:  Iceland's boys and girls scores for the mathematics test were nearly identical with boys just edging out girls with a score of approximately 509 to 508.
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Original:  One of the reasons the report cites for Iceland's relatively low mortality rate is it not located in a conflict country or in an HIV/AIDs affected country.
Revised:  One of the reasons the report cites for Iceland's relatively low mortality rate is it not located in a conflict country or in an affected country.
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Original:  Margrét Sverrisdóttir, a female Icelandic politician Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people between the ages of 15 and 60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 722.
Revised:  Margrét Sverrisdóttir, a female Icelandic politician Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people aged 15 and 60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 722.
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Original:  Margrét Sverrisdóttir, a female Icelandic politician Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people between the ages of 15 and 60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 722.
Revised:  Margrét Sverrisdóttir, a female Icelandic politician Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people between the ages of 15 – 60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 722.
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Original:  Icelandic women in both the private and public sector earn approximately 22\% less than their male counter parts .
Revised:  Icelandic women in both the private and public sector earn approximately 22\% less than their male counterparts .
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Original:  Despite this slight disadvantage for Icelandic women, it is much better than some countries where the percentages are much greater.
Revised:  Despite this slight disadvantage for Icelandic women, it is much better than some countries where the percentage differences are much greater.
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Original:  Margrét Sverrisdóttir, a female Icelandic politician Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people aged 15–60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 772.
Revised:  Mortality rates in Iceland for 1,000 people aged 15–60 sits at 56, significantly better than the United States at 107, China at 113, India at 213, Iraq at 285, Afghanistan at 479, Malawi at 481 and Zimbabwe at 772.
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Original:  For Jamaica , the report highlights a number of negative gender issues for the nation's men.
Revised:  For , the report highlights a number of negative gender issues for the nation's men.
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Original:  In 2008, girls outnumber boys in secondary school by a ratio of 1.04:1.
Revised:  In 2008, girls outnumbered boys in secondary school by a ratio of 1.04:1.
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Original:  They are low self-esteem, limited future employment opportunities, lack of discipline  and masculine identities that eschew education.
Revised:  They are low self-esteem, limited future employment opportunities, lack of discipline , and masculine identities that eschew education.
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Original: Tuesday, World Bank released the 2012 World Development Report on Gender Equality and Development.
Revised: On Tuesday the World Bank released the 2012 World Development Report on Gender Equality and Development.
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Original:  The only area where boys outperformed girls were vocational subjects and physics.
Revised:  Boys outperformed girls only in vocational subjects and physics.
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Original:  The report cites four four key challenges in boys's development.
Revised:  The report cites four key challenges in boys's development.
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Original:  This is not in line with other countries like Pakistan that uses cash incentives to encourage girls to stay in school.
Revised:  This is not in line with other countries like Pakistan use cash incentives to encourage girls to stay in school.
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Original:  Jamaica's program though has resulted an  increase in boy's attending school by an average of 0.5 days a month.
Revised:  Jamaica's program has resulted an increase in boy's attending school by an average of 0.5 days a month.
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Original:  Jamaica's program though has resulted an  increase in boy's attending school by an average of 0.5 days a month.
Revised:  Jamaica's program though has resulted an average increase in boy's attending school by an average of 0.5 days a month.
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Original:  Jamaica's program though has resulted an  increase in boy's attending school by an average of 0.5 days a month.
Revised:  Jamaica's program though has resulted an increase in boy's attending school by 0.5 days a month.
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Original:  A group of 11th grade students and their teacher at in Jamaica The report claims that getting an education in Jamaica is viewed as primarily a female activity.
Revised:  A group of students and their teacher at in Jamaica The report claims that getting an education in Jamaica is viewed as primarily a female activity.
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Original:  The storm did, however, rip two roofs off at least two homes and a popular concert venue was demolished  
Revised:  The storm did, however, rip two roofs off at least two homes and a popular concert venue was demolished . 
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Original:  At least 4 people are dead and there are several crushed vehicles under the mounds of debris, say officials  
Revised:  At least 4 people are dead and there are several crushed vehicles under the mounds of debris, say officials . 
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Original:   Just yesterday, former General Sir Mike Jackson called Donald Rumsfeld's approach to the U.S. presence in Iraq "intellectually bankrupt"  
Revised:  Just yesterday, former General Sir Mike Jackson called Donald Rumsfeld's approach to the U.S. presence in Iraq "intellectually bankrupt" . 
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Original: The accident occured on the first day of the two-day show, which had begun that morning.
Revised: The accident occurred on the first day of the two-day show, which had begun that morning.
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Original:  Four planes from the Zelazny air team were performing aerobatic manoeuvres in front of a crowd consisting of thousands of spectators when two of them collided head on in mid-air.
Revised:  Four planes from the Zelazny air team were performing aerobatic maneuvers in front of a crowd consisting of thousands of spectators when two of them collided head on in mid-air.
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Original:  Both planes were travelling at 300km/h when they collided, and disintegrated on impact.
Revised:  Both planes were traveling at 300km/h when they collided, and disintegrated on impact.
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Original:  All further activities at this year's Radam Air Show were cancelled , and the Radom city mayor declared three days of mourning as a result of the crash
Revised:  All further activities at this year's Radam Air Show were canceled , and the Radom city mayor declared three days of mourning as a result of the crash
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Original:  All further activities at this year's Radam Air Show were canceled, and the Radom city mayor declared three days of mourning as a result of the crash
Revised:  All further activities at this year's Radam Air Show are canceled, and the Radom city mayor declared three days of mourning as a result of the crash
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Original: This image shows the remains of one of the aircraft immediately after falling to the ground.
Revised: 250px|One of the craft falls through the sky
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Original:  Image from several seconds after the impact, showing the remnants of the planes.
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Original: The pilots, both of whom came from Zielona Góra , Western Poland, were killed in the accident.
Revised: The pilots, both of whom came from Zielona Góra in western Poland, were killed in the accident.
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Original: 250px| One of the craft falls through the sky  Two pilots were killed Saturday, September 1st, 2007, in an accident at the Radom Air Show in Poland.
Revised:  One of the craft falls through the sky Two pilots were killed Saturday, September 1st, 2007, in an accident at the Radom Air Show in Poland.
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Original:  This image shows the remains of one of the aircraft immediately after falling to the ground.
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Original: Nineteen South Korean Christians are released from insurgents after being held captive for six weeks.
Revised: Nineteen South Korean Christians are released from after being held captive for six weeks.
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Original:  The 19 South Koreans return to a nation that is glad the hostage situation has been resolved and is over.
Revised:  The 19 South Koreans return to a nation that is glad the situation has been resolved and is over.
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Original:  The South Korean government promised to send no more Christian missionaries into the country.
Revised:  The South Korean government promised to send no more Christian into the country.
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Original:  According to a provincial doctor, Jean-Constatin Kanow, the epidemic has affected four villages: Kampungu, Makonono, Kaluamba and Mombo, but was spreading.
Revised:  According to a provincial doctor, Jean-Constatin Kanow, the epidemic has affected four villages: w:Kampungu, w:Makonono, w:Kaluamba and w: Mombo, but was spreading.
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Original:  According to a provincial doctor, Jean-Constatin Kanow, the epidemic has affected four villages: w:Kampungu, w:Makonono, w:Kaluamba and w: Mombo, but was spreading.
Revised:  According to a provincial doctor, Jean-Constatin Kanow, the epidemic has affected four villages: Kampungu, Makonono, Kaluamba and Mombo, but was spreading.
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Original: In a press release, WHO described the symptoms as "fever, headache, diarrhoea or colicky abdominal pain, and vomiting."
Revised: In a press release, WHO described the symptoms as "fever, headache, diarrhea or colicky abdominal pain, and vomiting."
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Original: The illness, first thought to be typhoid fever but now more likely a haemorrhagic fever , was first noticed in early June in Kasai Occidental province in the DRC.
Revised: The illness, first thought to be typhoid fever but now more likely a , was first noticed in early June in Kasai Occidental province in the DRC.
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Original: The illness, first thought to be typhoid fever but now more likely a haemorrhagic fever , was first noticed in early June in Kasai Occidental province in the DRC.
Revised: The illness, first thought to be typhoid fever but now more likely a haemorrhagic fever , was first noticed in early June in province in the DRC.
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Original:  Measures have been put in place to control the outbreak, such as improvements to drinking water quality, hygiene , and the promotion of safer burial practices
Revised:  Measures have been put in place to control the outbreak, such as improvements to drinking water quality, , and the promotion of safer burial practices
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Original:  The crewmembers on the Shelly were all foreign, with one of the deceased being an Ukrainian and the other being an Indonesian.
Revised:  The crew members on the Shelly were all foreign, with one of the deceased being an Ukrainian and the other being an Indonesian.
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Original:  The disaster triggered an oil spill that spread down the Israeli coast, propmting officials to issue a warning against bathing at the nearby Zvulun beach.
Revised:  The disaster triggered an oil spill that spread down the Israeli coast, prompting officials to issue a warning against bathing at the nearby Zvulun beach.
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Original:  Her crew will be interviewed by police in order to determin the cause of the accident.
Revised:  Her crew will be interviewed by police in order to determine the cause of the accident.
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Original: The Israeli cargo ship Shelly sank after being dtruck by Cypriot passenger vessel Salamis Glory where she was anchored two miles from the coast.
Revised: The Israeli cargo ship Shelly sank after being struck by Cypriot passenger vessel Salamis Glory where she was anchored two miles from the coast.
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Original:  Not one of nearly 700 people on the Salamis Glory was harmed, but two of the Shelly '''s thirteen-man crew were unable to escape the sinking vessel.
Revised:  None of the nearly 700 people on the Salamis Glory was harmed, but two of the Shelly '''s thirteen-man crew were unable to escape the sinking vessel.
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Original:  None of the nearly 700 people on the Salamis Glory was harmed, but two of the Shelly '''s thirteen-man crew were unable to escape the sinking vessel.
Revised:  None of the nearly 700 people on the Salamis Glory were harmed, but two of the Shelly '''s thirteen-man crew were unable to escape the sinking vessel.
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Original:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock about two minutes late
Revised:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock about two minutes later
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Original: A moderate earthquake occurred in southern California at 10: 29AM PDT (1729 UTC) on the morning of Sunday , 2 September .
Revised: According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) a moderate earthquake occurred in southern California at 10: 29AM PDT (1729 UTC) on the morning of Sunday , 2 September .
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Original:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock  about two minutes later  
Revised:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock then occurred about two minutes later 
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Original:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock  about two minutes later  
Revised:  It was followed by a 2.5 aftershock about two minutes later . 
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Original: According to democrat leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a democrat , whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
Revised: According to Democrat leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a democrat , whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
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Original: According to democrat leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a democrat , whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
Revised: According to democrat leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a Democrat , whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
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Original: According to Democrat leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a Democrat, whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
Revised: According to Democratic leaders, they let Vitter stay in as he would be replaced with a Democrat, whereas Craig will be replaced with a Republican.
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Original:  The republicans have responded stating that Vitter had not been found guilty or charged, only accused.
Revised:  The Republicans have responded stating that Vitter had not been found guilty or charged, only accused.
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Original:  So there's a pretty big distinction here." said Ed Gillespie, President George Bush's counselor and ex-republican party leader.
Revised:  So there's a pretty big distinction here." said Ed Gillespie, President George Bush's counselor and ex-Republican party leader.
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Original:  It has been moving through the warm caribbean waters, and has already damaged many dutch islands.
Revised:  It has been moving through the warm caribbean waters, and has already damaged many Dutch islands.
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Original:  "A few things were quess work as well ."
Revised:  "A few things were quess work ."
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Original: The unlocked Apple iPhone working on Vodafone New Zealand's network. . Freelance journalist , Gabriel Pollard , interviewed John Ballinger who has , what is to believed , the first unlocked iPhone working in New Zealand on the Vodafone New Zealand GSM network.
Revised: The unlocked Apple iPhone working on Vodafone New Zealand's network. . Freelance journalist Gabriel Pollard interviewed John Ballinger who has , what is to believed , the first unlocked iPhone working in New Zealand on the Vodafone New Zealand GSM network.
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Original: The unlocked Apple iPhone working on Vodafone New Zealand's network. . Freelance journalist , Gabriel Pollard , interviewed John Ballinger who has , what is to believed , the first unlocked iPhone working in New Zealand on the Vodafone New Zealand GSM network.
Revised: The unlocked Apple iPhone working on Vodafone New Zealand's network. . Freelance journalist , Gabriel Pollard , interviewed John Ballinger who has what is believed to be the first unlocked iPhone working in New Zealand on the Vodafone New Zealand GSM network.
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Original:  He says though that the spelling mistakes are noticeable it will result in file not found error . "A few things were quess work."
Revised:  He says that the spelling mistakes are noticeable it will result in file not found error . "A few things were quess work."
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Original:  He says though that the spelling mistakes are noticeable it will result in file not found error . "A few things were quess work."
Revised:  He says though that the spelling mistakes are noticeable and can result in file-not-found errors . "A few things were quess work."
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Original:  He says though that the spelling mistakes are noticeable it will result in file not found error . "A few things were quess work."
Revised:  He says though that the spelling mistakes are noticeable it will result in file not found error . "A few things were guess work."
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Original:  It took Ballinger around four and five hours to complete all necessary steps.
Revised:  It took Ballinger around four to five hours to complete all necessary steps.
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Original:  However  half of this time was trying to get the case of the iPhone open.
Revised:  However , half of this time was trying to get the case of the iPhone open.
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Original:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked ok ." After that  all you have to do is run some software Ballinger says . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
Revised:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked okay ." After that all you have to do is run some software Ballinger says . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
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Original:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked ok ." After that  all you have to do is run some software Ballinger says . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
Revised:  He also didn't want to scratch the case, unlike others, so he used plastic tools "used to replace iPod batteries that worked ok ." After that , all you have to do is run some software Ballinger says . "The software part is pretty simple, follow the instructions and it could be made even easier if all the files were in one download.
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