wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewארמנים (Armenim) ארמניה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
Revised:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewאַרְמֶנְים (Armenim) ארמניה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
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Original:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewארמנים (Armenim) ארמניה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
Revised:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewארמנים (Armenim) אַרְמֶנְיָה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
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Original:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewאַרְמֶנְים (Armenim) אַרְמֶנְיָה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
Revised:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewאַרְמֶנִים (Armenim) אַרְמֶנְיָה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
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Original:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewאַרְמֶנְים (Armenim) אַרְמֶנְיָה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
Revised:  ܐܪܡܝܢܝܐ (Armīniyā)AvarЦӏамухъ (C̣amuq̄)ЦIамгIалал (C̣amghalal)Azerbaijani Ermənilər ErmənistanChechenЭрмалой (Ermaloy)Эрмалойчоь (Ermaloyçö)Mandarin Chinese亞美尼亞人 (yàměiníyàrén)亞美尼亞 (yàměiníyà)FrencharméniensArménieGeorgianსომხები (Somkhebi)სომხეთი (Somkhet'i)GreekΑρμένιοι (Arménios)Αρμενία (Armenía) Hebrewאַרְמֶנְים (Armenim) אַרְמֶנִיָה (Armeniya)KurdishErmeniErmenistan Persian ارمنی (Armani) ارمنستان (Armanestan) Russian армяне (armyane) Армения (Armeniya) Turkish Ermeniler Ermenistan
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Original:  The fellowship is aimed at EU medical practitioners, public-health nurses, microbiologists, veterinarians and other health professionals with previous experience in Public Health and a keen interest in URL Bosman, Schimmer, Coulombier.
Revised:  The fellowship is aimed at EU medical practitioners, public-health nurses, microbiologists, veterinarians and other health professionals with previous experience in Public Health and a keen interest in epidemiology. Bosman, Schimmer, Coulombier.
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Original:  The fellowship is aimed at EU medical practitioners, public-health nurses, microbiologists, veterinarians and other health professionals with previous experience in Public Health and a keen interest in epidemiology.
Revised:  The fellowship is aimed at EU medical practitioners, public-health nurses, microbiologists, veterinarians and other health professionals with previous experience in public health and a keen interest in epidemiology.
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Original:  Aims The aims of the prog ramme are:
Revised:  Aims The aims of the programme are:
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Original:  Premiados em 2013 | |- | 2014 | Melhores do Ano | Melhor Ator Coadjuvante | Geração Brasil| International Filmmaker Festival of New York | |- | 2018 | International Filmmaker Festival of New York | outstanding achievement in acting | THE KISS| | |- | 2018 | International Filmmaker Festival of New York | Best actor | THE KISS''
Revised:  Premiados em 2013 | |- | 2014 | Melhores do Ano | Melhor Ator Coadjuvante | Geração Brasil| | |- | 2018 | International Filmmaker Festival of New York | outstanding achievement in acting | THE KISS| | |- | 2018 | International Filmmaker Festival of New York | Best actor | THE KISS''
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Original:  Ó| Confira os indicados e ganhadores do prêmio 2007 | |- | 2007 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Co-starring Actor | Cidade Baixa| | |- | 2007 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Actor | A Máquina| | |- | 2007 | Meus Prêmios Nick | Favourite Actor | Cobras & Lagartos| | |- | 2007 | Emmy Internacional | Best Actor | Cobras & Lagartos| | |- | 2008 | Troféu Imprensa | Best Actor | Duas Caras| | |- | 2008 | Prêmio Contigo!
Revised:  Ó| | |- | 2007 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Co-starring Actor | Cidade Baixa| | |- | 2007 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Actor | A Máquina| | |- | 2007 | Meus Prêmios Nick | Favourite Actor | Cobras & Lagartos| | |- | 2007 | Emmy Internacional | Best Actor | Cobras & Lagartos| | |- | 2008 | Troféu Imprensa | Best Actor | Duas Caras| | |- | 2008 | Prêmio Contigo!
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Original:  de TV | Best Romantic Couple | Duas Caras| | with Débora Falabella |- | 2008 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Actor | Ó Paí, Ó| | |- | 2008 | Prêmio Festnatal | Best Actor | Duas Caras| Festnatal - ganhadores | |- | 2008 | Troféu Super Cap De Ouro | Best Actor | Duas Caras| | |- | 2008 | Prémio Ariel | Best Actor | O Cobrador| | |- | 2009 | Prêmio Qualidade Brasil | Best Actor in a Series | Ó Paí, Ó| ganhadores do prêmio 2009 | |- | 2009 | Prêmio Contigo!
Revised:  de TV | Best Romantic Couple | Duas Caras| | with Débora Falabella |- | 2008 | Grande Prêmio Cinema Brasil | Best Actor | Ó Paí, Ó| | |- | 2008 | Prêmio Festnatal | Best Actor | Duas Caras| Festnatal - ganhadores | |- | 2008 | Troféu Super Cap De Ouro | Best Actor | Duas Caras| | |- | 2008 | Prémio Ariel | Best Actor | O Cobrador| | |- | 2009 | Prêmio Qualidade Brasil | Best Actor in a Series | Ó Paí, Ó| | |- | 2009 | Prêmio Contigo!
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Original:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Dublador 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Dublador 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Dublador
Revised:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Voice only 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Dublador 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Dublador
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Original:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Dublador 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Dublador 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Dublador
Revised:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Dublador 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Spanish dub 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Dublador
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Original:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Voice only 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Spanish dub 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Spanish dub
Revised:  Filme 2014 As Aventuras do Avião Vermelho ChocolateFilme Voice only 2015 O Vendedor de Passados Vicente Filme Sorria, Você Está Sendo Filmado - O Filme Geneton 2018 The Grinch Grinch Brazilian dub 2019 Spies in Disguise Lance Sterling Spanish dub
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Original: Luís Lázaro Sacramento Ramos (born November 1, 1978) is a Brazilian actor,  presenter, director, writer  and voice actor.
Revised: Luís Lázaro Sacramento Ramos (born November 1, 1978) is a Brazilian actor, presenter, director, writer , and voice actor.
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Original: Dorothea Elizabeth Orem ( July 15, 1914 – June 22, 2007), born in Baltimore, Maryland, was a nursing theorist and creator of the self-care deficit nursing theory, also known as the Orem model of nursing.
Revised: Dorothea Elizabeth Orem ( June 15, 1914 – June 22, 2007), born in Baltimore, Maryland, was a nursing theorist and creator of the self-care deficit nursing theory, also known as the Orem model of nursing.
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Original: Features Riot police using non-lethal weapons against FTAA protesters|right The Miami model carries the distinctive features of crowd control techniques used in Miami, which included large scale pre-emptive arrests, heavily armed sometimes unidentifiable law enforcement, the collection of intelligence from protesters, and the "embedding" of corporate media with the police.
Revised: Features Riot police using less-lethal weapons against FTAA protesters|right The Miami model carries the distinctive features of crowd control techniques used in Miami, which included large scale pre-emptive arrests, heavily armed sometimes unidentifiable law enforcement, the collection of intelligence from protesters, and the "embedding" of corporate media with the police.
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Original:  Mousave replied, “We repressed them” 
Revised:  Mousavi replied, “We repressed them” 
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Original: The Wartenberg wheel is also used as a BDSM or sensation sex toy, sometimes while connected to a violet wand electrical device.
Revised: The Wartenberg wheel is also used as a BDSM or sensation toy, sometimes while connected to a violet wand electrical device.
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Original: The Wartenberg wheel is also used as a BDSM or sensation  toy, sometimes while connected to a violet wand electrical device.
Revised: The Wartenberg wheel is also used as a BDSM or sensation sex toy, sometimes while connected to a violet wand electrical device.
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Original:  Robert Wartenberg (1887–1956) designed the wheel to test nerve reactions (sensitivity) as it rolled systematically across the skin.
Revised:  It was designed the wheel to test nerve reactions (sensitivity) as it rolled systematically across the skin.
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Original:  It was designed the wheel to test nerve reactions (sensitivity) as it rolled systematically across the skin.
Revised:  The wheel was designed to test nerve reactions (sensitivity) as it rolled systematically across the skin.
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Original:  A stepped profile would show dramatic decreases in height - this     may be caused by the type of underlying bedrock changing allowing the river to erode vertically, horizontally or diagonally  See also Long profile Category:Rive
Revised:  A stepped profile would show dramatic decreases in height - this may be caused by changes in the height of the underlying bedrock. See also Long profile Category:Rive
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Original:  It was confirmed in March 2012 that the treatment had been effective in halting Kösen's growth.
Revised:  It was confirmed in March 2012 that the treatment was effective in halting Kösen's growth.
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Original:  On 13 November 2014, as part of Guinness World Records Day, Kösen met, for the first time, the world's shortest man ever, Chandra Bahadur Dangi  , at an event in London.
Revised:  On 13 November 2014, as part of Guinness World Records Day, Kösen met, for the first time, the world's shortest man ever, Chandra Bahadur Dangi ( , at an event in London.
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Original: Flash drama is a type of theatrical play that does not exceed 10 minutes in duration, hence the name Flash drama.
Revised: Flash drama is a type of theatrical play that does not exceed ten minutes in duration, hence the name Flash drama.
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Original:  One Act Plays Monologues Ten-Minute Plays at One Act Play Depot
Revised:  One Act Plays 
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Original:  When referring to the day-to-day operations of museums, other European languages typically use derivatives of the Latin “museographia” (French: muséographie, Spanish: museografía, German: Museographie, Italian: museografia, Portuguese: museografia), while English speakers typically use the term “museum practice” or “operational museology”
Revised:  When referring to the day-to-day operations of museums, other European languages typically use derivatives of the Greek “museographia” (French: muséographie, Spanish: museografía, German: Museographie, Italian: museografia, Portuguese: museografia), while English speakers typically use the term “museum practice” or “operational museology”
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Original:  There are various tests of kidney function, some of which are measures of renal thresholds for various substances  
Revised:  There are various tests of kidney function, some of which are measures of renal thresholds for various substances . 
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Original: In physiology, the renal threshold is that concentration of a blood substance above which the kidneys begin to pass it through into the urine.
Revised: In physiology, the renal threshold is the concentration of a blood substance above which the kidneys begin to pass it through into the urine.
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Original: In physiology, the renal threshold is that concentration of a blood substance above which the kidneys begin to pass it through into the urine.
Revised: In physiology, the renal threshold is that concentration of a substance dissolved in the blood above which the kidneys begin to pass it through into the urine.
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Original: In physiology, the renal threshold is that concentration of a blood substance above which the kidneys begin to pass it through into the urine.
Revised: In physiology, the renal threshold is that concentration of a blood substance above which the kidneys begin to remove it into the urine.
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Original:  Kidneys function by selectively passing dissolved blood substances into the urine, thus removing them from the body.
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Original:  The renal thresholds for various substances can be altered by many drugs and also change in characteristic ways during illnesses, as for example infections of various types .
Revised:  The renal thresholds for various substances can be altered by many drugs , and may change in characteristic ways during illnesses, as for example infections of various types .
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Original:  The renal thresholds for various substances can be altered by many drugs and also change in characteristic ways during illnesses, as for example infections of various types .
Revised:  The renal thresholds for various substances can be altered by many drugs and also change in characteristic ways during certain illnesses .
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Original:  Taken together, the collection of renal thresholds a kidneyexhibits essentially defines much of its function in renal physiology.
Revised:  Taken together, the collection of a kidney's renal thresholds essentially define much of its function in renal physiology.
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Original:  There are various tests of kidney function , some of which are measures of renal thresholds for various substances.
Revised:  Many tests of kidney function , some of which are measures of renal thresholds for various substances.
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Original:  There are various tests of kidney function , some of which are measures of renal thresholds for various substances.
Revised:  There are various tests of kidney function amount to measures of renal thresholds for various substances.
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Original:  When the renal threshold of a substance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal renal tubuli is incomplete;
Revised:  When the renal threshold of a substance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal convoluted tubule is incomplete;
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Original:  When the renal threshold of a substance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal convoluted tubule is incomplete;
Revised:  When the renal threshold of a subsvance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal convoluted tubule is incomplete;
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Original:  When the renal threshold of a subsvance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal convoluted tubule is incomplete;
Revised:  When the renal threshold of a substance is exceeded, reabsorption of the substance by the proximal convoluted tubule is incomplete;
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Original:  Indeed, the most common reason for the glucose renal threshold ever being exceeded is diabetes, whish is called glycosuria.
Revised:  Indeed, the most common reason for the glucose renal threshold ever being exceeded is diabetes, which is called glycosuria.
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Original:  The younger Joker has graduated from the British School Manila in 2006, and Yale University and 2010.
Revised:  The younger Joker has graduated from the British School Manila in 2006, and Yale University in 2010.
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Original: Early life Joker Arroyo was born on January 5, 1927, in Naga, Camarines Sur to Ceferino Barrameda Arroyo, Sr. (c. 1884 in Baao, Camarines Sur - January 7, 1949 in Sampaloc, Manila)Zeferino Arroyo's Death Certificate and Eusebia Bance Paz (born c. 1898 in Baao, Camarines Sur).
Revised: Early life Joker Arroyo was born on January 5, 1927, in Naga, Camarines Sur to Ceferino Barrameda Arroyo, Sr. (c. 1884 in Baao, Camarines Sur – January 7, 1949 in Sampaloc, Manila)Zeferino Arroyo's Death Certificate and Eusebia Bance Paz (born c. 1898 in Baao, Camarines Sur).
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Original:  He was in caucus with the PDP-Laban .
Revised:  He was in caucus with the PDP–Laban .
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Original: Manuel "Lito" Mercado Lapid (  born October 25, 1955) is a Filipino actor and politician who served as Senator of the Philippines from 2004 to 2016, and serving again since 2019.
Revised: Manuel "Lito" Mercado Lapid ( ; born October 25, 1955) is a Filipino actor and politician who served as Senator of the Philippines from 2004 to 2016, and serving again since 2019.
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Original:  born October 25, 1955) is a Filipino actor and politician who served as Senator of the Philippines from 2004 to 2016, and serving again since 2019.
Revised:  born October 25, 1955) is a Filipino actor and politician who served as Senator of the Philippines from 2004 to 2016.
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Original: Early life Qoshqarbaev was born on 19 October 1924 in the village of Akmolinsk within the Kirghiz ASSR (Later KazakhSSR ), currently located within the present-day city of Astana.
Revised: Early life Qoshqarbaev was born on 19 October 1924 in the village of Akmolinsk within the Kirghiz ASSR (Later Kazakh SSR ), currently located within the present-day city of Astana.
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Original: Rakhimzhan Qoshqarbaev ( Kazakh: Рақымжан Қошқарбаев, Raqımjan Qoşqarbayev ;
Revised: Rakhimzhan Qoshqarbaev ( , Raqymjan Qoshqarbaev ;
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Original:  none of them were present  re-creation of the event in the photo Raising a Flag over the Reichstag taken on 2 May by Yevgeny Khaldei.
Revised:  none of them were present during the re-creation of the event in the photo Raising a Flag over the Reichstag taken on 2 May by Yevgeny Khaldei.
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Original: Early life Qoshqarbaev was born on 19 October 1924 in the village of Akmolinsk within the Kirghiz ASSR ( Later Kazakh SSR), currently located within the present-day city of Astana.
Revised: Early life Qoshqarbaev was born on 19 October 1924 in the village of Akmolinsk within the Kirghiz ASSR ( later Kazakh SSR), currently located within the present-day city of Astana.
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Original:  Russian: Рахимжан Кошкарбаев) was the first soldier to raise the Soviet Flag at the Reichstag building in Berlin, having become so after placing the flag by a staircase in the opera hall after sneaking into the building.
Revised:  Russian: Рахимжан Кошкарбаев) was the first soldier to raise the Soviet Flag at the Reichstag building in Berlin, having placed the flag by a staircase in the opera hall after sneaking into the building.
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Original: Early life Born in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan to a shoemaker, Manshuk Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
Revised: Early life Born in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan to a shoemaker, Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
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Original: Early life Born  in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan to a shoemaker , Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
Revised: Early life Born to a shoemaker in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan to a shoemaker , Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
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Original: Early life Born  in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan to a shoemaker , Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
Revised: Early life Born in the Ural region of what is now Kazakhstan , Mametova spent her childhood in Alma-Ata under the care of her aunt Amina Mametova.
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Original:  The barrage of shelling and mortar attacks killed off the rest of her machine gun crew who briefly came to her aid, so she moved her gun to a different position and continued firing on wave after wave of Wehrmacht Heer forces alone, inflicting heavy casualties on the enemy.
Revised:  The barrage of shelling and mortar attacks killed off the rest of her machine gun crew who briefly came to her aid, so she moved her gun to a different position and continued firing on wave after wave of fascists alone, inflicting heavy casualties on the enemy.
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Original: Manshuk Zhiengalikyzy Mametova (, Mánshúk Jıenǵalıqyzy Mámetova ;
Revised: Manshuk Zhiengalikyzy Mametova (, Mänşük Jienğaliqyzy Mämetova ;
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Original: The United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) is  United Nations protectorate to solve decades long East Timorese crisis in the area occupied by Indonesian military.
Revised: The United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) is a United Nations protectorate to solve decades long East Timorese crisis in the area occupied by Indonesian military.
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Original: The United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) is a United Nations protectorate to solve decades long East Timorese crisis in the area occupied by Indonesian military.
Revised: The United Nations Transitional Administration in East Timor (UNTAET) was a United Nations protectorate to solve decades long East Timorese crisis in the area occupied by Indonesian military.
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