wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: ]] Richard Stanek addressed reporters in a news conference on Friday morning, officially revising the death toll from the collapse of an I-35W bridge to five, up from four.
Revised: ]] Richard Stanek addressed reporters in a news conference on Friday morning, officially revising the death toll from the collapse of the I-35W bridge to five, up from four.
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Original: Bai Yun, a Giant Panda, has given birth Friday at the San Diego Zoo , after two and a half hours in labor.
Revised: Bai Yun, a Giant Panda, has given birth Friday at the , after two and a half hours in labor.
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Original:  Since these pandas posess extremely low hormonal desires for sex, scientists in China have recently developed a method involving "panda porn" to induce the animals into mating.
Revised:  Since these pandas possess extremely low hormonal desires for sex, scientists in China have recently developed a method involving "panda porn" to induce the animals into mating.
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Original:  The body was found in an area already searched  for the tourist, but  was previously covered in snow . Mr Sorensen was a Danish tourist backpacking aroung Australia as part of a half year round the world holiday.
Revised:  The body was found in an area already searched for the tourist, but the area was previously covered in snow . Mr Sorensen was a Danish tourist backpacking aroung Australia as part of a half year round the world holiday.
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Original:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but method will depend on the coroner's decission
Revised:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but the method of identifcation will depend on the coroner's decission
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Original: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather  . A recovery  on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather  .
Revised: A body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather . A recovery on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather .
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Original: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather  . A recovery  on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather  .
Revised: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather . A recovery begun on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather .
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Original: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather  . A recovery  on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather  .
Revised: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather . A recovery on thursday the 2 August was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather .
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Original: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather  . A recovery  on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather  .
Revised: The body found in the Cradle Mountain national park on the 2nd of August has yet to be recovered because of rough weather . A recovery on thursday the 2nd was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather conditions .
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Original:  The body was found in an area already searched by recuers for the tourist, but the area was previously covered in thick snow with heavy storms.
Revised:  The body was found in an area already searched by rescuers for the tourist, but the area was previously covered in thick snow with heavy storms.
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Original:  Mr Sorensen was a Danish tourist backpacking aroung Australia as part of a half year round the world holiday.
Revised:  Mr Sorensen was a Danish tourist backpacking around Australia as part of a half year round the world holiday.
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Original:  A recovery begun on thursday the 2 August was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather conditions.
Revised:  A recovery begun on Thursday the 2 August was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather conditions.
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Original:  A recovery begun on thursday the 2 August was disscontinued because of unfaviourable weather conditions.
Revised:  A recovery begun on thursday the 2 August was discontinued because of unfavourable weather conditions.
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Original:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but the method of identifcation will depend on the coroner's decission
Revised:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but the method of identification will depend on the coroner's decission
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Original:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but the method of identifcation will depend on the coroner's decission
Revised:  Inspector Brian Edmonds from the Tasmanian Police said to ABC Radio, that when retrieved the body will have to be formally identified by the coroner, but the method of identifcation will depend on the coroner's decision
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Original:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
Revised: On the second day of Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
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Original:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
Revised:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
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Original:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
Revised:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, while the Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
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Original:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 " Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
Revised:  Wikimania 2007 in Taipei proceeded the Second Day , Group Session still continued, but the " Virtual i.d.ea Interactive Net Art 2007 Exhibition attracted visitors and participants.
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Original:  This exhibition shows the creation of interactions by using creative contents , and 4 college teams and 2 people participated as exhibitors .
Revised:  This exhibition shows the creation of interactions by using creative contents . Four college teams and 2 people participated as exhibitors .
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Original:  This exhibition shows the creation of interactions by using creative contents , and 4 college teams and 2 people participated as exhibitors .
Revised:  This exhibition shows the creation of interactions by using creative contents , and 4 college teams and two individuals exhibited their work .
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Original:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art , visitors can friendly interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", these explored ID , information and community behavior through re-assembling and re-presentation fake-change, fake-debate, and fake-recognize to the reality idea of net virtually .
Revised:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art . Visitors can interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", these explored ID , information and community behavior through re-assembling and re-presentation fake-change, fake-debate, and fake-recognize to the reality idea of net virtually .
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Original:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art , visitors can friendly interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", these explored ID , information and community behavior through re-assembling and re-presentation fake-change, fake-debate, and fake-recognize to the reality idea of net virtually .
Revised:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art , visitors can friendly interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", which explored identity , information and community behavior through re-assembling and re-presentation fake-change, fake-debate, and fake-recognize to the reality idea of net virtually .
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Original:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art , visitors can friendly interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", these explored ID , information and community behavior through re-assembling and re-presentation fake-change, fake-debate, and fake-recognize to the reality idea of net virtually .
Revised:  This exhibition is mainly focused on Interactive Net Art , visitors can friendly interact with those artworks, such as "Many Me", "Not One Less", and "One Million Heartbeats", these explored ID , information and community behavior .
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Original:  On the other hand, Kevin Lam from Hong Kong and Marius Watz from Norway also brought "Mobile Brush" and "Neon Organic / Electro Plastique" artworks to show the culture of freedom of Interactive Net Art.
Revised:  Kevin Lam from Hong Kong and Marius Watz from Norway also brought "Mobile Brush" and "Neon Organic / Electro Plastique" artworks to show the culture of freedom of Interactive Net Art.
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Original:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
Revised:  The Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
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Original:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
Revised:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still in progress , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
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Original:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
Revised:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline being 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
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Original:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
Revised:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) . Wikimania Award winners will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
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Original:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony of Wikimania 2007.
Revised:  This Wikimania 2007 Conference will ended on August 5, and participation of Wikimania Awards is still proceeding , the deadline of Wikimania Awards is 8:00am August 5 (Taipei Time) , and winners of Wikimania Awards will be announced at the Closing Ceremony 
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Original:  Environment Secretary Hilary Benn also returned from holiday in Italy  
Revised:  Environment Secretary Hilary Benn also returned from holiday in Italy . 
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Original:  It resulted in the slaughtering of up to 10 million animals, and losses estimated at £8bn  
Revised:  It resulted in the slaughtering of up to 10 million animals, and losses estimated at £8bn . 
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Original:  All cattle on the farm will be slaughtered and incinerated.
Revised:  All livestock on the farm will be slaughtered and incinerated.
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Original:  All cattle on the farm will be slaughtered and incinerated.
Revised:  All cattle on the farm have been slaughtered and incinerated.
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Original: Cattle at a farm in Surrey, UK , have tested positive for foot-and-mouth disease.
Revised: Cattle at a farm in Surrey, UK have tested positive for foot-and-mouth disease.
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Original: The mission is the first in NASA's Mars Scout programme .
Revised: The mission is the first in NASA's Mars Scout programm .
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Original:  It was originally scheduled to launch on 3 August , but was delayed 24 hours due to a weather concern preventing second stage fuelling on 1 August .
Revised:  It was originally scheduled to launch on August 3 , but was delayed 24 hours due to a weather concern preventing second stage fuelling on 1 August .
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Original:  It was originally scheduled to launch on 3 August , but was delayed 24 hours due to a weather concern preventing second stage fuelling on 1 August .
Revised:  It was originally scheduled to launch on 3 August , but was delayed 24 hours due to a weather concern preventing second stage fueling on August 1.
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Original: The mission is the first in NASA's Mars Scout programm .
Revised: The mission is the first in NASA's Mars Scout program .
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Original: Ferrari itself got a poor results - Felipe Massa suffered a car problem, his engine stalled at the far end of the pit-lane, he was unable to compete in the final qualifying session and will start only 14th.
Revised: Ferrari itself got poor results - Felipe Massa suffered a car problem, his engine stalled at the far end of the pit-lane, he was unable to compete in the final qualifying session and will start only 14th.
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Original:  The weekend started with a reminiscent of the spionage allegation scandal between McLaren and Ferrari teams, when Alonso was freed up from the FIA's official press conference
Revised:  The weekend started reminiscent of the spionage allegation scandal between McLaren and Ferrari teams, when Alonso was freed up from the FIA's official press conference
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Original: Relief Efforts UNICEF is working with the governments of affected nations to coordinate aid, providing water purification tablets, emergency medical supplies, and various MRE's (Meals Ready to Eat).
Revised: Relief efforts UNICEF is working with the governments of affected nations to coordinate aid, providing water purification tablets, emergency medical supplies, and various MRE's (Meals Ready to Eat).
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Original: Brazilian President Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.8 billion reals (  $ 3.61 billion) investment to bring running water,  improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in  his country.
Revised: Brazilian President Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.8 billion reals ( some $ 3.61 billion) investment to bring running water, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in his country.
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Original:  The project, part of the Program for the Acceleration of Growth , is aimed also  at weakening the grip of drug traffickers and other criminal organizations on life in the slums.
Revised:  The project, part of the Program for the Acceleration of Growth , is aimed also The project is also aimed at weakening the grip of drug traffickers and other criminal organizations on life in the slums.
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Original:  Brazilian President Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.86 billion reals (some $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
Revised: A favela in Rio de Janeiro. Brazilian President Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.86 billion reals (some $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
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Original:  Brazilian President Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.86 billion reals (some $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
Revised:  Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.86 billion reals (some $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
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Original:  Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a 6.86 billion reals (some 3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
Revised:  Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a R$ 6.86 billion (about $ 3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
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Original:  "This phase of the PAC has tree aspects: environmental, of public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and of income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff .
Revised:  "This phase of the PAC has three aspects: environmental, of public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and of income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff .
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Original:  So we want to compete with organized crime, and we are sure that we will beat it when we manage to bring benefits to the poorest places," President Lula da Silva said last month in São Bernardo do Campo, just days after 19 were killed in clashes between police and gangsters in a slum.
Revised:  So we want to compete with organized crime, and we are sure that we will beat it when we manage to bring benefits to the poorest places," President Lula da Silva said last month in São Bernardo do Campo, just days after 19 were killed in clashes between police and criminals in a slum.
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Original:  Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a R$ 6.86 billion (about $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 provinces of his country.
Revised:  Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva on Friday announced a R$ 6.86 billion (about $3.6 billion) investment to bring running water, roads, improved housing, sewage and other services to the so-called favelas, or metropolitan slum areas in 13 states of his country.
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Original:  The federal government would contribute 5.9 billion reals (3.14 billion USD), the rest would come from local governments.
Revised:  The federal government would contribute 5.9 billion Reais (3.14 billion USD), the rest would come from local governments.
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Original:  The total program would involve 504 billion reals (268 billion USD).
Revised:  The total program would involve 504 billion Reais (268 billion USD).
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Original:  "This phase of the PAC has three aspects: environmental, of public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and of income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff.
Revised:  "This phase of the PAC has three aspects: environmental, public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and of income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff.
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Original:  "This phase of the PAC has three aspects: environmental, of public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and of income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff.
Revised:  "This phase of the PAC has three aspects: environmental, of public health, with the decrease of illnesses, and income, improving the incomes of the population of those cities," explained the President's Chief of Cabinet, Dilma Rousseff.
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Original:  In Rio de Janeiro alone, 20\% of the city  , or 1.5 million inhabitants, are estimated to live in one of the 752 favelas
Revised:  In Rio de Janeiro alone, 20\% of the city 's population , or 1.5 million inhabitants, are estimated to live in one of the 752 favelas
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Original: H Sheikh Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani The Emir of Qatar, , decided Monday to hand over the reins of power to his son, the Crown Prince .
Revised: H Sheikh Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani The Emir of Qatar, , would hand over the reins of power to his son, the Crown Prince .
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Original: H Sheikh Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani Qatari officials announced Monday that the Emir of Qatar, , would hand over the reins of power to his son, the Crown Prince .
Revised: H Sheikh Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani Qatari officials announced Monday that the Emir of Qatar, , would abdicate in favor of his son, the Crown Prince .
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Original:  The outgoing leader  met with the ruling family along with several key people in the country and confirmed that Sheikh Hamad informed those invited of his decision to hand over the reins of power to Sheikh Tamim bin Hamad Al Thani .
Revised:  The outgoing leader Sheikh Hamad met with the ruling family along with several key people in the country and confirmed that Sheikh Hamad informed those invited of his decision to hand over the reins of power to Sheikh Tamim bin Hamad Al Thani .
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