wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to reports, her then 2-week old son and 14-year old daughter were with her when she was arrested in March  
Revised:  According to reports, her then 2-week old son and 14-year old daughter were with her when she was arrested in March . 
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Original:  Blognation jokes that it is supposed to be Jimmy Wales, the site's founder  
Revised:  Blognation jokes that it is supposed to be Jimmy Wales, the site's founder . 
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Original: If you live behind the "Great Firewall of China", you don't have direct access to Wikipedia, a popular internet encyclopedia.
Revised: People living behind the "Great Firewall of China", you don't have direct access to Wikipedia, a popular internet encyclopedia.
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Original: If you live behind the "Great Firewall of China", you don't have direct access to Wikipedia, a popular internet encyclopedia.
Revised: If you live behind the "Great Firewall of China", do not have direct access to Wikipedia, a popular internet encyclopedia.
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Original:  But you can eat Wikipedia.
Revised:  But they can eat Wikipedia.
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Original: Even its Chinese name 维百客 (pinyin: wei bǎi kē) is similar to the encyclopedia's 维基百科 (wei ji bǎi kē);
Revised: Even its Chinese name 维百科 (pinyin: wei bǎi kē) is similar to the encyclopedia's 维基百科 (wei ji bǎi kē);
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Original:  Blognation jokes that it is supposed to be Jimmy Wales, the site's founder .
Revised:  Blognation jokes that it is supposed to be Jimmy Wales, the site's co-founder .
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Original: Two scientists working at McGill University in Canada, reporting on their research and the research of other scientists, state in Scientific American that vitamin D may have many uses in the human body besides building strong bones.
Revised: Two scientists working at McGill University in Canada, reporting on their research and the research of other scientists, state in Scientific American that Vitamin D may have many uses in the human body besides building strong bones.
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Original:  They do caution, however, that there is a level at which vitamin D becomes toxic  
Revised:  They do caution, however, that there is a level at which vitamin D becomes toxic . 
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Original:  ( One study indicated that as much as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels. )
Revised:  One study indicated that as much as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels. )
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Original:  ( One study indicated that as much as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels. )
Revised:  ( One study indicated that as much as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels. 
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Original: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than those with lighter skins--almost half of African-American women may be seriously vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
Revised: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than Americans with lighter skins--almost half of African-American women may be seriously vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
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Original: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than Americans with lighter skins . Almost half of African-American women may be seriously Vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
Revised: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than crackers . Almost half of African-American women may be seriously Vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
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Original: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than crackers . Almost half of African-American women may be seriously Vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
Revised: The problem is far worse among African-Americans than caucasians . Almost half of African-American women may be seriously Vitamin D deficient, with presumably still another fraction deficient.
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Original:  One study indicated that as much as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of Vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels.
Revised:  One study indicated that as many as 92\% of adolescent girls in Northern Europe may have deficient levels of Vitamin D and 37\% have severely deficient levels.
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Original:  Deployment is about 75 percent complete with 25 of 31 bays deployed . P6 is at far right of current ISS diagram .
Revised:  Deployment is about 75 percent complete with 25 of 31 bays deployed .
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Original:  Wearing a jacket similar to official Yarra Trams uniforms, the boy was caught on Sunday night by police in east suburban Kew, 15km from where the tram was stolen, when electricity was shut off to the route.
Revised:  Described as wearing a jacket similar to official Yarra Trams uniforms, the boy was caught on Sunday night by police in east suburban Kew, 15km from where the tram was stolen, when electricity was shut off to the route.
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Original: Yarra Trams yesterday said it would still consider hiring a 15-year old who allegedly stole two trams over the weekend — once he's old enough.image: Adam Carr of Wikipedia A 15-year-old boy who allegedly stole a Melbourne tram and drove for 40 minutes picking up and setting down passengers, may yet be allowed to work as a tram driver, despite his nine charges related to the incident.
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Original:  "We have a very good recruiting policy and anybody who passes the mustard%DIFDELCMD < [%%% sic? for our recruiting policy we'd be glad to offer a job to, provided he's old enough to hold a driver's license," Yarra Trams Deputy Chief Executive, Dennis Cliche, told Australian Associated Press on Monday.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% sic? for our recruiting policy we'd be glad to offer a job to, provided he's old enough to hold a driver's license," Yarra Trams Deputy Chief Executive, Dennis Cliche, told Australian Associated Press on Monday.
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Original:  "We have a very good recruiting policy and anybody who passes the mustard%DIFDELCMD < [%%% sic? for our recruiting policy we'd be glad to offer a job to, provided he's old enough to hold a driver's license," Yarra Trams Deputy Chief Executive, Dennis Cliche, told Australian Associated Press on Monday.
Revised:  "We have a very good recruiting policy and anybody who passes the mustard%DIFDELCMD < [%%% for our recruiting policy we'd be glad to offer a job to, provided he's old enough to hold a driver's license," Yarra Trams Deputy Chief Executive, Dennis Cliche, told Australian Associated Press on Monday.
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Original:  "We have a very good recruiting policy and anybody who passes the mustard%DIFDELCMD < [%%% sic? for our recruiting policy we'd be glad to offer a job to, provided he's old enough to hold a driver's license," Yarra Trams Deputy Chief Executive, Dennis Cliche, told Australian Associated Press on Monday.
Revised:  "We have a very good recruiting policy and anybody who passes the mustard%DIFDELCMD < [%%% sic? 
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Original:  Described as wearing a jacket similar to official Yarra Trams uniforms, the boy was caught on Sunday night by police in east suburban Kew, 15km from where the tram was stolen, when electricity was shut off to the route.
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Original:  The lad was thought to have picked up the keys from Box Hill depot three weeks ago, said Detective Senior Constable Hills.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "There are safety systems built in that he would have had to study and know how to drive this tram without engaging the safety systems, which are designed to shut the tram down," said Mr Cliche.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "So ... this is someone who's spent a lot of time and a lot of effort to go about this."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "When somebody takes one of our vehicles unauthorised it's of grave concern to us and we are conducting a full investigation - whether he's a 'trammie' or an individual who cares for trams, it makes no difference whatsoever," he said.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  A full report on all depots, which would also look at the potential impact of terrorism, was due for release in three weeks.
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Original: In an ambush on a convoy Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan  forces called in US troops and air power for support.
Revised: In an ambush on a convoy Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan forces called in U.S. air power for support.
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Original:  There were no reported coalition casualties   
Revised:  There were no reported coalition casualties . 
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Original:  U.S. ground forces were also invovled in the fighting where several weapons and two satellite phones were also seized from the rebels.
Revised:  U.S. ground forces were also invovled in the fighting where several weapons and two satellite phones were seized from the rebels.
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Original: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 image:Zabul Province.png| US-led coalition has 18,000 troops in Afghanistan  In an ambush on a convoy Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
Revised: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 US-led coalition has 18,000 troops in Afghanistan In an ambush on a convoy Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
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Original: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 US-led coalition has 18,000 troops in Afghanistan GNU Map In an ambush on a convoy Monday in southeastern Afghanistan  , 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
Revised: April 19, 2005 Category:April 19, 2005 US-led coalition has 18,000 troops in Afghanistan GNU Map In a convoy ambush in southeastern Afghanistan , 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured when Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
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Original: US-led coalition has 18,000 troops in Afghanistan GNU Map In a convoy ambush Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured after a fire fight that ended after Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
Revised:  In a convoy ambush Monday in southeastern Afghanistan, 8 Taliban rebels were killed and 16 captured after a fire fight that ended after Afghan coalition forces called in U.S. air power for support.
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Original: AP changes fee structure for online users The growing power of the Internet is clearly reflected in the decision, announced Tuesday, for the Associated Press to begin charging newspapers and broadcasters to post wire stories, photos, and other content on their online editions.
Revised:  The growing power of the Internet is clearly reflected in the decision, announced Tuesday, for the Associated Press to begin charging newspapers and broadcasters to post wire stories, photos, and other content on their online editions.
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Original:  As the Internet draws more news consumers from traditional repositories of data, increasing numbers are demanding the stories on the Internet reflect the quick updating and coverage of a large wire network such as  Associated Press.
Revised:  As the Internet draws more news consumers from traditional repositories of data, increasing numbers are demanding the stories on the Internet reflect the quick updating and coverage of a large wire network such as the Associated Press.
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Original:  The AP has a computer database of news paraphernalia under development which includes stories, photos, graphics, audio and video.
Revised:  The AP is creating a computer database of news paraphernalia under development which includes stories, photos, graphics, audio and video.
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Original:  The AP has a computer database of news paraphernalia under development which includes stories, photos, graphics, audio and video.
Revised:  The AP has a computer database of news paraphernalia which includes stories, photos, graphics, audio and video.
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Original:  As the Internet draws more news consumers from traditional repositories of data, increasing numbers are demanding the stories on the Internet reflect the quick updating and coverage of a large wire network such as the Associated Press.
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Original: Gay Poll: Deep Dissatisfaction with GLAAD In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate (** ) , some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation, or GLAAD.
Revised:  In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate (** ) , some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation, or GLAAD.
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Original: Gay Poll: Deep Dissatisfaction with GLAAD In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate (** ) , some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation, or GLAAD.
Revised: Gay Poll: Deep Dissatisfaction with GLAAD In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate , some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation, or GLAAD.
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Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a huge vote of non-confidence (58.5\% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes"), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence (58.5\% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes"), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
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Original:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically--some might say mysteriously--shifted in the opposite direction (62.6\% "Yes" to 35.9\% "No").
Revised:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction (62.6\% "Yes" to 35.9\% "No").
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Original:  The Advocate poll contains plenty of comments from constituents who approve of GLAAD, and these are readily found among the poll results --- but this is hardly news .
Revised:  The Advocate poll contains plenty of comments from constituents who approve of GLAAD, and these are readily found among the poll results .
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Original:  What is new is the realization that GLAAD's constituency is outraged over the organization for a long list of reasons: 2. Executive pay "And why, praytell, does Joan Garry make so much money?
Revised:  What is new is the realization that GLAAD's constituency is upset with the organization for a long list of reasons: 2. Executive pay "And why, praytell, does Joan Garry make so much money?
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with  its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Revised: In a recent online poll conducted by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with  its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Revised: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation (GLAAD) . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with  its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Revised: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with a vocal minority of its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with  its constituency, as gauged by the firestorm of criticism from others responding to the online poll.
Revised: In an unscientific poll conducted this week by The Advocate, some respondents spoke of their appreciation for the Gay and Lesbian Alliance Against Defamation , or GLAAD . But the organization, which has recently seen the resignation of its director, Joan Garry, has a lot of fences to mend with its constituency, as gauged by criticism from some who responded to the poll.
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Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence with 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 percent voting "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" and 39\% per cent "Yes " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% percent saying "Yes " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes  " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
Revised:  On April 18, 2005 at 9:21 AM, the tally of 2294 votes showed a vote of non-confidence ( 58.5 \% "No" to 39\% per cent "Yes . " ), and this result was reflected in a high proportion of critical comments.
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Original:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No  " ).
Revised:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 votes reported showed 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No " ).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No  " ).
Revised:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 percent voting "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No " ).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No  " ).
Revised:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 percent voting "No " ).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No  " ).
Revised:  By 8:43 PM, however, a tally of 4055 was reported by The Advocate to have dramatically shifted in the opposite direction ( 62.6 \% "Yes" to 35.9 \% "No . " ).
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Original:  What is new is the realization that  GLAAD's constituency is upset with the organization for a long list of reasons : 1. Perceived greed"Every single week is another plea for money.
Revised:  What is new is the realization that some in GLAAD's constituency is upset with the organization for a long list of reasons : 1. Perceived greed"Every single week is another plea for money.
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Original:  What is new is the realization that  GLAAD's constituency is upset with the organization for a long list of reasons : 1. Perceived greed"Every single week is another plea for money.
Revised:  What is new is the realization that GLAAD's constituency is upset with the organization for 1. Perceived greed"Every single week is another plea for money.
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Original:  Outrageously high ." 3. Waste "GLAAD wastes money on big lavish events and has become almost impotent when it comes to advocating for the fair portrayal of LGBT people."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4. Perceived laziness "You've got a million dollar plus budget and put out a couple 'I Do' commercials".
Revised:  Outrageously high ." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4. Perceived laziness "You've got a million dollar plus budget and put out a couple 'I Do' commercials".
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