wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  During the First World War, she was initially employed as a translator in the War Office from 1915 to 1917, then until 1919 as a private secretary in the Air Ministry.
Revised:  During the First World War, she was employed as a translator in the War Office from 1915 to 1917, then until 1919 as a private secretary in the Air Ministry.
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Original:  died 24 March 2004 in Zurich) and lived from then on in Zurich.
Revised:  died 24 March 2004 in Zurich) and they lived in Zurich.
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Original:  Mary Hottinger worked first as a lecturer in English language at the University of Zurich.
Revised:  Mary Hottinger worked as a lecturer in English language at the University of Zurich.
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Original:  She wrote articles on English topics for the  Neue Schweizer Rundschau and the Schweizer Annalen.
Revised:  She wrote articles on English topics for the publications Neue Schweizer Rundschau and the Schweizer Annalen.
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Original:  She became acquainted with the Mann family in the 1930s: she translated lectures into English for Thomas Mann and practiced with him before his first lecture tour through the USA, and she translated the non-fiction book Escape to Life for the siblings Erika and Klaus Mann . German Culture in Exile (1939) into English.
Revised:  She became acquainted with the Mann family in the 1930s: she translated lectures into English for Thomas Mann and practiced with him before his first lecture tour through the USA, and she translated the non-fiction book Escape to Life for siblings Erika and Klaus Mann . German Culture in Exile (1939) into English.
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Original:  She became acquainted with the Mann family in the 1930s: she translated lectures into English for Thomas Mann and practiced with him before his first lecture tour through the USA, and she translated the non-fiction book Escape to Life for the siblings Erika and Klaus Mann . German Culture in Exile (1939) into English.
Revised:  She became acquainted with the Mann family in the 1930s: she translated lectures into English for Thomas Mann and practiced with him before his first lecture tour through the USA, and she translated the non-fiction book Escape to Life for the siblings Erika and Klaus Mann as German Culture in Exile (1939) into English.
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Original:  During the Second World War, she worked as a spokesperson for English-language programs for the regional broadcaster Beromünster as part of the intellectual defense of the country . After the Second World War, she was initially a lecturer in English literature at the Adult Education Center in Zurich, before concentrating on her work as an editor of anthologies from 1950, especially for the Diogenes Verlag in Zurich.
Revised:  During the Second World War, she worked as a spokesperson for English-language programs for the regional broadcaster Beromünster as part of the intellectual defence of the country . After the Second World War, she was initially a lecturer in English literature at the Adult Education Center in Zurich, before concentrating on her work as an editor of anthologies from 1950, especially for the Diogenes Verlag in Zurich.
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Original:  During the Second World War, she worked as a spokesperson for English-language programs for the regional broadcaster Beromünster as part of the intellectual defense of the country . After the Second World War, she was initially a lecturer in English literature at the Adult Education Center in Zurich, before concentrating on her work as an editor of anthologies from 1950, especially for the Diogenes Verlag in Zurich.
Revised:  During the Second World War, she worked as a spokesperson for English-language programs for the regional broadcaster Beromünster as part of the intellectual defense of the country . After the Second World War, she was initially a lecturer in English literature at the Adult Education Center in Zurich, before concentrating on her work as an editor of anthologies from 1950, especially for the Diogenes Verlag Zurich.
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Original: Marie (Mary) Donald Hottinger, née Mackie (born June 20 , 1893 in Liverpool ;
Revised: Marie (Mary) Donald Hottinger, née Mackie (born 20 , 1893 in Liverpool ;
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Original: Marie (Mary) Donald Hottinger, née Mackie (born June 20 , 1893 in Liverpool ;
Revised: Marie (Mary) Donald Hottinger, née Mackie (born June 20 June 1893 in Liverpool ;
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Original:  died December 6 , 1978 in Zurich ), was a Scottish translator and editor.
Revised:  died 6 , 1978 in Zurich ), was a Scottish translator and editor.
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Original:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
Revised:  On 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
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Original:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
Revised:  On December 24 , 1926 she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
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Original:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
Revised:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
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Original:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on August 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
Revised:  On December 24 , 1926 , she married the Swiss lawyer Markus Heinrich Hottinger (born March 10 , 1899 in Richterswil, died on 29 , 1982 in Zurich).
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Original: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia  in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
Revised: The ATAMIC border was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
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Original: Chilean proposal of 1975 [[File:Acuerdos de Charaña.svg| Map with Augusto Pinochet's proposal for a Bolivian corridornext to the Chile-Peru border.
Revised: Chilean proposal of 1975 [[File:Acuerdos de Charaña.svg| Pinochet's proposal for a Bolivian corridornext to the Chile-Peru border.
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Original: Chilean proposal of 1975 [[File:Acuerdos de Charaña.svg| Map with Augusto Pinochet's proposal for a Bolivian corridornext to the Chile-Peru border.
Revised: Chilean proposal of 1975 [[File:Acuerdos de Charaña.svg| Map with Augusto Pinochet's proposed corridor
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Original: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
Revised: The Atacama border dispute is a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
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Original: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
Revised: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia that stems from the transfer of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
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Original: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Bolivia's ally Peru through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
Revised: The Atacama border dispute was a dispute between Chile and Bolivia in the 19th century that ended in the transfer to Chile of all of the Bolivian Coast and the southern tip of Peru to Chile in the 19th century through the Treaty of Ancón with Peru and the Treaty of Peace and Friendship of 1904 between Chile and Bolivia after the War of the Pacific (1879–1883).
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Original:  Some consider the dispute is still ongoing as Bolivia still claims a sovereign access to the Pacific Ocean.
Revised:  The dispute is considered to be ongoing because Bolivia still claims a sovereign access to the Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  From the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879  the Puna de Atacama dispute arose due to Bolivian transfers of land to both Argentina and Chile, this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
Revised:  Due to a transfer of land to both Argentina and Chile during the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879 the Puna de Atacama dispute arose due to Bolivian transfers of land to both Argentina and Chile, this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
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Original:  From the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879  the Puna de Atacama dispute arose due to Bolivian transfers of land to both Argentina and Chile, this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
Revised:  From the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879 , the Puna de Atacama dispute arose due to Bolivian transfers of land to both Argentina and Chile, this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
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Original:  From the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879  the Puna de Atacama dispute arose due to Bolivian transfers of land to both Argentina and Chile, this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
Revised:  From the Chilean annexation of the Bolivian coast in 1879 the Puna de Atacama dispute — this spin-off dispute was settled in 1899.
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Original: Recently, Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue and declared to pursue the issue in litigation via the international courts.
Revised:  Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue and declared to pursue the issue in litigation via the international courts.
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Original: Recently, Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue and declared to pursue the issue in litigation via the international courts.
Revised: Recently, Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue , opting instead to pursue the issue in litigation via the international courts.
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Original: Recently, Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue and declared to pursue the issue in litigation via the international courts.
Revised: Recently, Bolivian president Evo Morales decided to break off all dialogue with Chile on the maritime issue and declared to pursue the issue in litigation in international courts.
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Original:  He thus broke an OAS resolution in 2012 when the majority of countries in the OAS encouraged Bolivia to pursue the issue via bilateral dialogue with Chile.
Revised:  He thus broke an OAS resolution in 2012 wherein the majority of countries in the OAS encouraged Bolivia to pursue the issue via bilateral dialogue with Chile.
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Original:  He thus broke an OAS resolution in 2012 when the majority of countries in the OAS encouraged Bolivia to pursue the issue via bilateral dialogue with Chile.
Revised:  He thus broke an OAS resolution in 2012 when the majority of member states encouraged Bolivia to pursue the issue via bilateral dialogue with Chile.
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Original:  Former Chilean President Sebastian Piñera has pleaded with Evo Morales to continue with the dialogue but to no avail.
Revised:  Chilean president Sebastian Piñera has pleaded with Evo Morales to continue with the dialogue but to no avail.
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Original:  Former Chilean President Sebastian Piñera has pleaded with Evo Morales to continue with the dialogue but to no avail.
Revised:  Former Chilean President Sebastian Piñera pleaded with Evo Morales to continue with the dialogue but to no avail.
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Original:  Surprisingly, the case does not challenge the border treaties signed by both countries which Evo Morales has always been against.
Revised:  Surprisingly, the case did not challenge the border treaties signed by both countries which Evo Morales has always been against.
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Original:  The basis of the case stems from two bilateral negotiations in the 1970s and 1950s where a sovereign route to the pacific was allegedly promised by Chile but never eventuated.
Revised:  The basis of the case stemmed from two bilateral negotiations in the 1970s and 1950s where a sovereign route to the pacific was allegedly promised by Chile but never eventuated.
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Original:  The basis of the case stems from two bilateral negotiations in the 1970s and 1950s where a sovereign route to the pacific was allegedly promised by Chile but never eventuated.
Revised:  The basis of the case stems from two bilateral negotiations in the 1970s and 1950s where a sovereign route to the Pacific was allegedly promised by Chile but never eventuated.
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Original:  Bolivia argues "the rights of expectations" for their case which is a legal commercial term that's never been used in the ICJ.
Revised:  Bolivia argues "the rights of expectations" for their case which is a commercial law term that had never been used in the ICJ.
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Original:  In March 2021, Bolivian President Luis Arce, on occasion of Día del Mar, said that the dispute is "open and pending" issue between the two countries and offered a nine-point plant to establish diplomatic negotiations with Chile to solve the dispute.
Revised:  In March 2021, Bolivian president Luis Arce, on occasion of Día del Mar, said that the dispute is "open and pending" issue between the two countries and offered a nine-point plant to establish diplomatic negotiations with Chile to solve the dispute.
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Original:  The Chilean government responded that it was willing to establish dialogue but that the issue had already been settled by the International Criminal Court .
Revised:  The Chilean government responded that it was willing to establish dialogue but that the issue had already been settled by the International Court of Justice .
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Original:  Pontificia Universidad Catolica de Chile Chile claimed that the border treaty of 1874 did not allow for such a tax URL The company complained the increased payments were illegal.
Revised:  Pontificia Universidad Catolica de Chile Chile claimed that the border treaty of 1874 did not allow for such a tax hike. The company complained the increased payments were illegal.
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Original: The 1139 Ganja earthquake was a very deadly seismic event which affected modern-day Azerbaijan and Georgia.
Revised: The 1139 Ganja earthquake is one of the worst seismic events in history. It affected modern-day Azerbaijan and Georgia.
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Original:  The earthquake had an estimated magnitude of 6.3 and a maximum intensity of IX (Violent) to XI (Extreme) on the Mercalli intensity scale  .
Revised:  The earthquake had an estimated magnitude of 6.3 and a maximum intensity of IX (Violent) to XI (Extreme) on the Mercalli intensity scale was assigned to this earthquake .
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Original:  The estimated death toll of this earthquake is somewhere between 230,000 and 300,000 therefore is one of the deadliest earthquakes in history.
Revised:  The estimated death toll of this earthquake is somewhere between 230,000 and 300,000 making it one of the deadliest earthquakes in history.
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Original:  The estimated death toll of this earthquake is somewhere between 230,000 and 300,000 making it one of the deadliest earthquakes in history  .
Revised:  The estimated death toll from this earthquake is somewhere between 230,000 and 300,000 making it one of the deadliest earthquakes in history .
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Original:  When  Second World War erupted, the ICW president Marthe Boël from Belgium was detained and unable to perform her duties, so Renée Girod was determined to serve as interim president during the German occupation of Belgium in the years after 1940.
Revised:  When the Second World War erupted, the ICW president Marthe Boël from Belgium was detained and unable to perform her duties, so Renée Girod was determined to serve as interim president during the German occupation of Belgium in the years after 1940.
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Original:  When the Second World War erupted, the ICW president Marthe Boël from Belgium was detained and unable to perform her duties, so Renée Girod was determined to serve as interim president during the German occupation of Belgium in the years after 1940.
Revised:  When the Second World War erupted, the ICW president Marthe Boël from Belgium was detained and unable to perform her duties, so Renée Girod served as interim president during the German occupation of Belgium in the years after 1940.
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Original:  There is acute pain, redness, swelling, and disability of one or multiple joints.
Revised:  There is pain, redness, swelling, and disability of one or multiple joints.
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Original:  The large joints are most commonly involved  . Constitutionally, there may or may not be a fever, and swelling of the joints.
Revised:  The most commonly involved . Constitutionally, there may or may not be a fever, and swelling of the joints.
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Original:  Attacks may become more frequent with time but there is no joint damage after attacks.
Revised:  The frequency of attacks may be variable over the course but there is no joint damage after attacks.
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Original:  The problem usually presents with mono- or oligo-articular flares , which have onset over hours and last days to weeks, before subsiding .
Revised:  The problem usually presents with mono- or oligo-articular involvement , which have onset over hours and last days to weeks, before subsiding .
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Original: Anti-citrullinated protein antibody is frequently associated.
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Original: Martin Ndayahoze (died 30 April 1972) was a Burundian military officer and government official who served variously as Minister of Information, Minister of Economy, and Deputy Chief of Staff of the Burundi National Army.
Revised: Martin Ndayahoze (died 30 April 1972) was a Burundian military officer and government official who served variously as Minister of Information, Minister of Economy, and Deputy Chief of Staff of the Burundian National Army.
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Original:  Career Upon the completion of his studies at Saint-Cyr in 1965, Ndayahoze returned to Burundi and was commissioned as a second lieutenant in the Burundi National Army.
Revised:  Career Upon the completion of his studies at Saint-Cyr in 1965, Ndayahoze returned to Burundi and was commissioned as a second lieutenant in the Burundian National Army.
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Original: No movement explicitly promoting Kapampangan independence has existed historically, with Kapampangans voluntarily supporting the Spanish  and American regimes in succession.
Revised: No movement explicitly promoting Kapampangan independence has existed historically, with Kapampangans voluntarily supporting the Spanish . and American regimes in succession.
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Original:  He has warned that Tagalog culture and language threaten Kapampangans, with loan words and Tagalog mentalities fast encroaching . Pampanga and Tarlac also lead in Human Development, attaining 9th and 16th places, respectively.
Revised:  He has warned that Tagalog culture and language threaten Kapampangans, with loan words and Tagalog mentalities fast encroaching Pampanga and Tarlac also lead in Human Development, attaining 9th and 16th places, respectively.
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Original:   Literacy, health systems, and quality of life have high standards in these provinces.
Revised:  . Literacy, health systems, and quality of life have high standards in these provinces.
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Original:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country . Reference 
Revised:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country Reference 
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Original:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country . Reference 
Revised:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country . References 
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Original:  ) is a regionalist , separatist idea promoting independence for the province of Pampanga and surrounding territories where the Kapampangan people reside.
Revised:  ) is a regionalist and separatist idea promoting independence for the province of Pampanga and surrounding territories where the Kapampangan people reside.
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Original:  This sentiment intensified with proposals for Federalism in the Philippines and the creation of the Bangsamoro Autonomous Region  . Dissatisfaction at the proposed Federal Constitution, anger at perceived special treatment for Bangsamoro, and growing awareness of historical Kapampangan economic, political, and social institutions all contributed to growing resentment for the government in Manila.
Revised:  This sentiment intensified with proposals for federalism in the Philippines and the creation of the Bangsamoro Autonomous Region . Dissatisfaction at the proposed Federal Constitution, anger at perceived special treatment for Bangsamoro, and growing awareness of historical Kapampangan economic, political, and social institutions all contributed to growing resentment for the government in Manila.
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Original:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country  
Revised:  Education also takes priority, with four universities entering the top 100 in the country . 
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Original:  However, recent years have seen increased Kapampangan regionalist sentiment, with Michael Pangilingan's founding of the Center for Kapampangan Studies being a landmark for Kapampangan culture.
Revised:  However, recent years have seen increased Kapampangan regionalist sentiment, with founding of the Center for Kapampangan Studies being a landmark for Kapampangan culture.
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Original: Bill Kouélany (born 31 October 1965 in Brazzaville) is a Congolese artist, writer , set designerand author .
Revised: Bill Kouélany (born 31 October 1965 in Brazzaville) is a Congolese artist, writer and set designer .
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