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Original: Yuan Chonghuan (  6 June 1584 – 22 September 1630), courtesy name Yuansu or Ziru, was a politician, military general and writer who served under the Ming dynasty.
Revised: Yuan Chonghuan ( ; 6 June 1584 – 22 September 1630), courtesy name Yuansu or Ziru, was a politician, military general and writer who served under the Ming dynasty.
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Original:  As a general, Yuan Chong huan excelled as a cannoneer and sought to incorporate European cannon designs into the Ming arsenal.
Revised:  As a general, Yuan Chonghuan excelled as a cannoneer and sought to incorporate European cannon designs into the Ming arsenal.
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Original: U.S. Department of State – International Religious Freedom Report 2012 – LiechtensteinFlag of Liechtenstein|210px Even though it was sandwiched between neutral Switzerland and Nazi-controlled Austria, Liechtenstein still had some room to manoeuvre . Liechtenstein accepted mainly rich Jews, who were expected to spend their money in the country or who created jobs by establishing companies in the principality.
Revised: U.S. Department of State – International Religious Freedom Report 2012 – LiechtensteinFlag of Liechtenstein|210px Even though it was sandwiched between neutral Switzerland and Nazi-controlled Austria, Liechtenstein still had some room to maneuver . Liechtenstein accepted mainly rich Jews, who were expected to spend their money in the country or who created jobs by establishing companies in the principality.
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Original: U.S. Department of State – International Religious Freedom Report 2012 – LiechtensteinFlag of Liechtenstein |210px
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Original: From 2001 to 2005  an international team of six historians (including Dan Michman and Peter Geiger) investigated the matter for the World Jewish Congress.
Revised: From 2001 to 2005 , an international team of six historians (including Dan Michman and Peter Geiger) investigated the matter for the World Jewish Congress.
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Original:  Chicago:  University of Chicago Press  [ first published in French in 1962 . George P.
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Original:  Chicago:  University of Chicago Press  [ first published in French in 1962 . George P.
Revised:  Chicago: University of Chicago Press [ First published in French in 1962 . George P.
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Original:   Rik Pinxten (1976)  "Epistemic Universals: A Contribution to Cognitive Anthropology, " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought , R. Pinxten (ed.).
Revised:  Rik Pinxten (1976) . "Epistemic Universals: A Contribution to Cognitive Anthropology, " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought , R. Pinxten (ed.).
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Original:   Rik Pinxten (1976)  "Epistemic Universals: A Contribution to Cognitive Anthropology, " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought , R. Pinxten (ed.).
Revised:  Rik Pinxten (1976) "Epistemic universals: A contribution to cognitive anthropology. " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought , R. Pinxten (ed.).
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Original:   Rik Pinxten (1976)  "Epistemic Universals: A Contribution to Cognitive Anthropology, " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought , R. Pinxten (ed.).
Revised:  Rik Pinxten (1976) "Epistemic Universals: A Contribution to Cognitive Anthropology, " in Universalism Versus Relativism in Language and Thought .
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Original:  This allows outside influence to be an explanation for cultural universals as well .
Revised:  This allows outside influence to be an explanation for some cultural universals .
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Original: A cultural universal (also called an anthropological universal or human universal), as discussed by Carl G.Jung, Emile Durkheim, George Murdock, Claude Lévi-Strauss, Donald Brown and others, is an element, pattern, trait, or institution that is common to all human cultures worldwide.
Revised: A cultural universal (also called an anthropological universal or human universal), as discussed by Emile Durkheim, George Murdock, Claude Lévi-Strauss, Donald Brown and others, is an element, pattern, trait, or institution that is common to all human cultures worldwide.
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Original:  These microorganisms are important sources of bioactive molecules against various diseases due to the extreme environment they inhabit, giving potential to an increasing number of drugs in clinical trails .
Revised:  These microorganisms are important sources of bioactive molecules against various diseases due to the extreme environment they inhabit, giving potential to an increasing number of drugs in clinical trials .
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Original:  When an organism enters a brine pool  they attempt to "breathe" the environment and experience cerebral hypoxia due to the lack of oxygen and toxic shock due to the hyper-salinity.
Revised:  When an organism enters a brine pool , they attempt to "breathe" the environment and experience cerebral hypoxia due to the lack of oxygen and toxic shock due to the hyper-salinity.
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Original:  When an organism enters a brine pool  they attempt to "breathe" the environment and experience cerebral hypoxia due to the lack of oxygen and toxic shock due to the hyper-salinity.
Revised:  When an organism enters a brine pool they attempt to "breathe" the environment and experience cerebral hypoxia due to the lack of oxygen and toxic shock from the hyper-salinity.
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Original:  If organisms cannot escape they eventually die.
Revised:  If organisms cannot surface long enough to retreat to the rim, they quickly die.
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Original:  When observed by submarines or Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROV), brine pools are found to be  littered with dead fish, crabs, amphipods, and other organisms that ventured too far into the brine.
Revised:  When observed by submarines or Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROV), brine pools are found to be eerily littered with dead fish, crabs, amphipods, and other organisms that ventured too far into the brine.
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Original:  When observed by submarines or Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROV), brine pools are found to be  littered with dead fish, crabs, amphipods, and other organisms that ventured too far into the brine.
Revised:  When observed by submarines or Remotely Operated Vehicles (ROV), brine pools are found to be littered with dead fish, crabs, amphipods, and various organisms that ventured too far into the brine.
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Original:  A novel genus and species of bivalves  known as Apachecorbula muriatica  have been found along the edge of the "Valdiva Deep" brine pool in the Red Sea.
Revised:  A novel genus and species of bivalves , known as Apachecorbula muriatica have been found along the edge of the "Valdiva Deep" brine pool in the Red Sea.
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Original:  A novel genus and species of bivalves  known as Apachecorbula muriatica  have been found along the edge of the "Valdiva Deep" brine pool in the Red Sea.
Revised:  A novel genus and species of bivalves known as Apachecorbula muriatica , have been found along the edge of the "Valdiva Deep" brine pool in the Red Sea.
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Original:  Infauna such as gastropods, capitellid polychaetes, and top snails have also been found to be associated with brine pools in the Red Sea.
Revised:  In fauna like gastropods, capitellid polychaetes, and top snails have also been found to be associated with brine pools in the Red Sea.
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Original:  One possible reason for this is that underwater landslides can impact brine pools and cause waves of hypersaline brine to spill out into surrounding basins, thus negatively effecting the biological communities which live there.
Revised:  One possible reason for this is that underwater landslides can impact brine pools and cause waves of hypersaline brine to spill out into surrounding basins, thus negatively affecting the biological communities which live there.
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Original:  Deep sea brine pools often coincide with cold seep activity allowing for chemosynthetic life to thrive.
Revised:  Deep-sea brine pools often coincide with cold seep activity allowing for chemosynthetic life to thrive.
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Original: A brine pool, sometimes called an underwater, a deepwater lake, or a brine lake, is a volume of brine collected in a seafloor depression.
Revised: A brint pool, sometimes called an underwater, a deepwater lake, or a brine lake, is a volume of brine collected in a seafloor depression.
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Original:  Brine rejection on a oceanic scale is associated with the formation of North Atlantic Deep Water (NADW) and Antarctic Bottom Water (AAW) that play a large role in global thermohaline circulation (THC).
Revised:  Brine rejection on an oceanic scale is associated with the formation of North Atlantic Deep Water (NADW) and Antarctic Bottom Water (AAW) that play a large role in global thermohaline circulation (THC).
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Original: A brine pool, sometimes called an underwater, a deepwater lake, or a brine lake, is a volume of brine collected in a seafloor depression.
Revised: A brine pool, sometimes called an underwater, deepwater or brine lake, is a volume of brine collected in a seafloor depression.
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Original:  Patchy, reddish layers can be observed floating above the dense brine interface due  high densities of halophilic archaea that are supported by these environments.
Revised:  Patchy, reddish layers can be observed floating above the dense brine interface due to high densities of halophilic archaea that are supported by these environments.
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Original: To address the absence of measures of Dark triad traits (i.e., narcissism, Machiavellianism , and psychopathy), Michael Ashton and Kibeom Lee proposed the addition of a sixth factor to the Five Factor Model.
Revised: To address the absence of measures of Dark triad traits (i.e., narcissism, machiavellianism , and psychopathy), Michael Ashton and Kibeom Lee proposed the addition of a sixth factor to the Five Factor Model.
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Original: Agreeableness is a personality trait manifesting itself in individual behavioral characteristics that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
Revised: Agreeableness are personality trait individual behavioral characteristic that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
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Original: Agreeableness are personality trait individual behavioral characteristic that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
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Original: Agreeableness is a personality trait manifesting itself in individual behavioral characteristics that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
Revised: Agreeableness are personality trait and individual behavioral characteristics that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
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Original: Agreeableness are personality trait and individual behavioral characteristics that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
Revised: Agreeableness are personality traits and individual behavioral characteristics that are perceived as kind, sympathetic, cooperative, warm, and considerate.
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Original:  The earliest description of altitude sickness is attributed to a Chinese text from around 30 BCE which describes "Big Headache Mountains", possibly referring to the Karakoram Mountains around Kilik Pass.
Revised:  The earliest description of altitude sickness is attributed to a Chinese text from around 30 BC which describes "Big Headache Mountains", possibly referring to the Karakoram Mountains around Kilik Pass.
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Original:  The earliest description of altitude sickness is attributed to a Chinese text from around 30 BC which describes "Big Headache Mountains", possibly referring to the Karakoram Mountains around Kilik Pass.
Revised:  The earliest description of altitude sickness is attributed to a Chinese text from around 30 BCE which describes "Big Headache Mountains", possibly referring to the Karakoram Mountains around Kilik Pass.
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Original:  Exertion may aggravate the symptoms .
Revised:  Exertion may aggravate the symptoms !
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Original:  Exertion may aggravate the symptoms !
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Original:  Disordered System Symptoms Gastrointestinal Loss of appetite, nausea, or vomiting, excessive flatulation Nervous Fatigue or weakness, headache with or without dizziness or lightheadedness, insomnia, “pins and needles” sensation Locomotory Peripheral edema (swelling of hands, feet, and face) Respiratory Nose bleeding, shortness of breath upon exertion Cardiovascular Persistent rapid pulse Other General malaise
Revised:  Disordered System Symptoms Gastrointestinal Loss of appetite, nausea, vomiting, excessive flatulation Nervous Fatigue or weakness, headache with or without dizziness or lightheadedness, insomnia, “pins and needles” sensation Locomotory Peripheral edema (swelling of hands, feet, and face) Respiratory Nose bleeding, shortness of breath upon exertion Cardiovascular Persistent rapid pulse Other General malaise
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Original:  The 17th century Dutch painters was the first artists in history to transform genre painting into a  sophisticated and respected art form, in its own right.
Revised:  The 17th century Dutch painters was the first artists in history to transform genre painting into a highly sophisticated and respected art form, in its own right.
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Original:  The 17th century Dutch painters was the first artists in history to transform genre painting into a highly sophisticated and respected art form, in its own right.
Revised:  The 17th century Dutch painters were the first artists in history to transform genre painting into a highly sophisticated and respected art form, in its own right.
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Original:  (Yale University Press, 2017, ]] Genre painting , also called petit genre , depicts aspects of everyday life by portraying ordinary people engaged in common activities.
Revised:  (Yale University Press, 2017, ]] Genre painting (or petit genre), a form of genre art , depicts aspects of everyday life by portraying ordinary people engaged in common activities.
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Original:  [[File:Wybrand Hendriks - Interieur met naaiende vrouw.jpg|Interior with Sewing Woman, c. 1800-1810 by Wybrand Hendriks ]] Adriaen and Isaac van Ostade, Jan Steen, Adriaan Brouwer, David Teniers, Aelbert Cuyp, Johannes Vermeer and Pieter de Hooch were among the many painters specializing in genre subjects in the Low Countries during the 17th century.
Revised:  [[File:Wybrand Hendriks - Interieur met naaiende vrouw.jpg|Interior with Sewing Woman, c. 1800-1810 by Wybrand Hendriks ]] Adriaen and Isaac van Ostade, Jan Steen, Adriaan Brouwer, David Teniers, Aelbert Cuyp, Johannes Vermeer and Pieter de Hooch were among the many painters specializing in genre subjects in Holland during the 17th century.
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Original: The Low Countries dominated the field until the 18th century, and in the 17th century both Flemish Baroque painting and Dutch Golden Age painting produced numerous specialists who mostly painted genre scenes.
Revised: The both Flemish Baroque painting and Dutch Golden Age painting produced numerous specialists who mostly painted genre scenes.
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Original:  Ballet composers Category:
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Original:   He was the son of the composer Yakov Andreyevich Eshpai, and the father of the filmmaker Andrei Andreyevich Eshpai.
Revised:  He was the son of the composer Yakov Eshpai, and the father of the filmmaker Andrei Andreyevich Eshpai.
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Original:   People from Kozmodemyansk Category:
Revised:  20th-century composers Category:20th-century pianists Category:21st-century composers Category:21st-century pianists Category: People from Kozmodemyansk Category:
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Original:   People's Artist of the USSR (1981).
Revised:  He was awarded the title of People's Artist of the USSR (1981).
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Original:   People's Artist of the USSR (1981).
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Original:  He was the son of the composer Yakov Eshpai, and the father of the filmmaker Andrei Andreyevich Eshpai.
Revised:  Eshpai was the son of the composer Yakov Eshpai, and the father of the filmmaker Andrei Andreyevich Eshpai.
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Original:  Principal works Stage Nobody Is Happier Than Me, operetta (1968–1969);
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Original: Russian classical musicians Category:Russian classical pianists Category:Russian film score composers Category:Russian male composers Category:Russian music educators Category:Russian pianists Category:Soviet classical musicians Category:Soviet classical pianists Category:Soviet film score composers Category:Soviet male composers Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet music educators Category:Soviet pianists Category:Burials at Novodevichy Cemete
Revised: Russian classical musicians Category:Russian classical pianists Category:Russian film score composers Category:Russian male composers Category:Russian music educators Category:Russian pianists Category:Soviet classical musicians Category:Soviet classical pianists Category:Soviet film score composers Category:Soviet male composers Category:Soviet military personnel of World War II Category:Soviet music educators Category:Soviet pianists Category:Burials at Novodevichy Cemetery Category:Albany Records artis
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Original:  Some believe Birthday cards originated in England over 100 years ago, however, there is little evidence to support this claim.
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Original: History Origins There is evidence that the ancient Egyptians and the ancient Greeks celebrated certain days as the birthday of particular gods and the book of Genesis contains the description of a pharaoh’s birthday party, but it was the Romans who began the custom of celebrating the birth of ordinary men.
Revised: History There is evidence that the ancient Egyptians and the ancient Greeks celebrated certain days as the birthday of particular gods and the book of Genesis contains the description of a pharaoh’s birthday party, but it was the Romans who began the custom of celebrating the birth of ordinary men.
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Original: Notable sylvan theaters Europe Bosquet du Théâtre d’Eau ("Water Theater Grove"), Versailles, France ( 1671-74 ) The Sylvan Theater, Killruddery House and Gardens, Bray, County Wicklow, Ireland.
Revised: Notable sylvan theaters Europe Bosquet du Théâtre d’Eau ("Water Theater Grove"), Versailles, France ( 1671–74 ) The Sylvan Theater, Killruddery House and Gardens, Bray, County Wicklow, Ireland.
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Original: JPG|250px| Sylvan Theater on the Sylvan Green, South Dakota State University, Brookings, South Dakota, USA]] File:Parc floral des Thermes aix-les-bains 1.jpg|250px|Parc floral des Thermes, Aix-les-Bains, France A sylvan theater—sometimes called a greenery theater ()—is a type of outdoor theater situated in a wooded (sylvan) setting.
Revised: JPG|250px| Sylvan Theater on the Sylvan Green, South Dakota State University, Brookings, South Dakota, USA]] A sylvan theater—sometimes called a greenery theater ()—is a type of outdoor theater situated in a wooded (sylvan) setting.
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Original: JPG|Westfalenpark in Dortmund]] Notable sylvan theaters Europe Bosquet du Théâtre d’Eau ("Water Theater Grove"), Versailles, France (1671–74) The Sylvan Theater, Killruddery House and Gardens, Bray, County Wicklow, Ireland.
Revised: JPG|Westfalenpark in Dortmund]] Bosquet du Théâtre d’Eau ("Water Theater Grove"), Versailles, France (1671–74) The Sylvan Theater, Killruddery House and Gardens, Bray, County Wicklow, Ireland.
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Original: Notable sylvan theaters Europe [[File: Dalhalla 1997.jpg|Dalhalla 1997, in Sweden File: Dortmund Westfalenpark Seebühne.
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Original: Notable sylvan theaters Europe [[File: Dalhalla 1997.jpg|Dalhalla 1997, in Sweden File: Dortmund Westfalenpark Seebühne.
Revised: Notable sylvan theaters Europe [[File: Dalhalla 1997.jpg|Dalhalla 1997, in Sweden Dortmund Westfalenpark Seebühne.
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Original:  Ireland has been inhabited for about 33,000  years according to archaeological studies (see Prehistoric Ireland).
Revised:  There have been humans in Ireland for about 33,000 years according to archaeological studies (see Prehistoric Ireland).
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Original:  Ireland has been inhabited for about 33,000  years according to archaeological studies (see Prehistoric Ireland).
Revised:  Ireland has been inhabited for about 33,000 years (see Prehistoric Ireland).
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Original:  Anglo-Normans conquered parts of Ireland in the 12th century, while England's 16th/17th-century conquest and colonisation of Ireland brought many English and Lowland Scots people to parts of the island, especially the north.
Revised:  Anglo-Normans conquered parts of Ireland in the 12th century, while England's 16th/17th-century conquest and colonisation of Ireland brought many English and Lowland Scots to parts of the island, especially the north.
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Original: The Enterprise of Ulster which pitted Shane O'Neill (Irish chieftain) against Queen Elizabeth I was a total failure Martin Marix Evans;
Revised: The Enterprise of Ulster which pitted Shane O'Neill (Irish chieftain) against Queen Elizabeth I was a total failureMartin Marix Evans;
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Original:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, George Bernard Shaw, Bram Stoker, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, C.S. Lewis , Seamus Heaneyand Nuala Ní Dhomhnaill . Notable Irish explorers include Brendan the Navigator, Sir Robert McClure, Sir Alexander Armstrong, Sir Ernest Shackleton and Tom Crean.
Revised:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, George Bernard Shaw, Bram Stoker, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, C.S. Lewis and Seamus Heaney . Notable Irish explorers include Brendan the Navigator, Sir Robert McClure, Sir Alexander Armstrong, Sir Ernest Shackleton and Tom Crean.
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Original:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, George Bernard Shaw, Bram Stoker, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, C.S. Lewis and Seamus Heaney.
Revised:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, C.S. Lewis and Seamus Heaney.
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Original:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, George Bernard Shaw, Bram Stoker, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, C.S. Lewis and Seamus Heaney.
Revised:  Famous Irish writers include Oscar Wilde, W. B. Yeats, Samuel Beckett, George Bernard Shaw, Bram Stoker, James Joyce, Máirtín Ó Cadhain, and Seamus Heaney.
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Original: Measuring [[File: Crown-rump length by gestational age.png|300px|Diagram showing crown-rump length by gestational age.
Revised: Measuring [[File: Crown-rumf length by gestational age.png|300px|Diagram showing crown-rump length by gestational age.
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