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Original:  Though little about Amenhotep's early life is known prior to his entering civil service, it is believed that he learnt to read and write at the local library and scriptorium.
Revised:  Though little about Amenhotep's early life is known prior to his entering civil service, it is believed that he learned to read and write at the local library and scriptorium.
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Original:  He was also revered as a healer and eventually worshipped as a god of healing, like his predecessor Imhotep ( the latter and Amenhotep being the only two commoners ever deified in the history of ancient Egypt ).
Revised:  He was also revered as a healer and eventually worshipped as a god of healing, like his predecessor Imhotep ( ).
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Original:  Excavated in 1934 or 1935, it measures 45 × 110 metres and is surrounded by three shrines.
Revised:  Excavated in 1934 or 1935, it measures metres and is surrounded by three shrines.
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Original:  His first courtyard contained a 25 x 26 m water basin of considerable depth, fed by groundwater from the Nile.
Revised:  His first courtyard contained a water basin of considerable depth, fed by groundwater from the Nile.
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Original:  The personage 's visage produces stupor and astonishment in whom they contemplate it, because of the pupils that look fixedly like auscultating the mental intimacies of the spectato 
Revised:  The personage 's visage produces stupor and astonishment in whom they contemplate it, because of the pupils that look fixedly like auscultating the mental intimacies of the spectator. 
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Original:  This is not only due to the fact that they passed through San Antonio hurriedly, but because all the paintings are only perceptible clearly at certain hours of the day, when the sunlight does not illuminate them directly.
Revised:  This is not only because they passed through San Antonio hurriedly, but because all the paintings are only perceptible clearly at certain hours of the day, when the sunlight does not illuminate them directly.
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Original:  The cave painting of San Antonio was not seen by the experts who went along formerly along the place, as Langlois or the archaeologists Reichlen.
Revised:  The cave pain'''ting of San Antonio was not seen by the experts who went along formerly along the place, as Langlois or the archaeologists Reichlen.
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Original:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas and Carlos Gates  .  250px|Stucco used as an exterior coating on a residential building.
Revised:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas and . 250px|Stucco used as an exterior coating on a residential building.
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Original:   Nevertheless, it is possible to perceive the main part of the represented scene, as well as also the details of the principal images that integrate it.
Revised:  ''' Nevertheless, it is possible to perceive the main part of the represented scene, as well as also the details of the principal images that integrate it.
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Original:  The cave pain'''ting of San Antonio was not seen by the experts who went along formerly along the place, as Langlois or the archaeologists Reichlen.
Revised:  The cave painting of San Antonio was not seen by the experts who went along formerly along the place, as Langlois or the archaeologists Reichlen.
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Original:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas and Carlos GatesChávez|Carlos Gates .
Revised:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas Carlos GatesChávez|Carlos Gates .
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Original:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas and Carlos GatesChávez|Carlos Gates .
Revised:  the first references were received by Carlos Torres Mas and and Carlos Gates .
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Original:  Image:Stucco_wall.jpg| 250px|Stucco used as an exterior coating on a residential building.
Revised:  250px|Stucco used as an exterior coating on a residential building.
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Original:  ''' Nevertheless, it is possible to perceive the main part of the represented scene, as well as also the details of the principal images that integrate it.
Revised:  Nevertheless, it is possible to perceive the main part of the represented scene, as well as also the details of the principal images that integrate it.
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Original: San Antonio's cave paintings is affected by time.
Revised: San Antonio's cave paintings are affected by time.
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Original:  The painted wall is a part of what, perhaps from its origin was only a wall of ceremonial character in the shape of an semicircle.
Revised:  The painted wall is a part of what, perhaps from its origin was only a wall of ceremonial character in the shape of a semicircle.
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Original:  The wall is opened opposite the caves of existing sarcofagi in the hill that raises to the other side of the gorge, some of these are still untouched by the man due to the difficulty of the access that the ravine presents.
Revised:  The wall is opened opposite the caves of existing sarcofagi in the hill that raises to the other side of the gorge, some of these are still untouched by man due to the difficulty of the access that the ravine presents.
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Original:  Men differ because their pompous hairdo , imitating apparently the horn of cervids . Some of the women exhibit a type of hairstyle that reminds the one used by some feminine figures presented in Pajatén: composed by two oblique segments that the author has interpreted as symbolic wings.
Revised:  Men differ because their pompous hairstyle , imitating apparently the horn of cervids . Some of the women exhibit a type of hairstyle that reminds the one used by some feminine figures presented in Pajatén: composed by two oblique segments that the author has interpreted as symbolic wings.
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Original:  Men differ because their pompous hairdo , imitating apparently the horn of cervids . Some of the women exhibit a type of hairstyle that reminds the one used by some feminine figures presented in Pajatén: composed by two oblique segments that the author has interpreted as symbolic wings.
Revised:  Men differ because their pompous hairdo , imitating apparently the horn of deer . Some of the women exhibit a type of hairstyle that reminds the one used by some feminine figures presented in Pajatén: composed by two oblique segments that the author has interpreted as symbolic wings.
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Original:  Modern political history of the Balkans from 1796 onwards.
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Original: 200px| Posible Slavic migrations to the Balkans, per Relja Novaković (1981)  Croats (;
Revised: 200px| Posible Slavic migrations to the Balkans, per Relja Novaković (1981) The Croats (;
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Original: 200px| Posible Slavic migrations to the Balkans, per Relja Novaković (1981) The Croats (;
Revised:  The Croats (;
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Original:  UNESCO list of the Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity in Croatia "Bećarac singing and playing from Eastern Croatia";
Revised:  UNESCO | Intangible Cultural Heritage of Humanity in Croatia "Bećarac singing and playing from Eastern Croatia";
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Original:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper  and digital information channels in Subotica .
Revised:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper Subotica and digital information channels in Subotica .
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Original:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper  and digital information channels in Subotica .
Revised:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper and digital information channels .
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Original:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper  Subotica and digital information channels.
Revised:  Its speakers largely use the Latin alphabet, as is illustrated in their locally published newspaper in Subotica and digital information channels.
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Original:   The Rise and Fall of the American Teenager . HarperCollins.
Revised:  " The Rise and Fall of the American Teenager . HarperCollins.
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Original:   The Rise and Fall of the American Teenager . HarperCollins.
Revised:  The Rise and Fall of the American Teenager " HarperCollins.
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Original:   Teenage Attitude of the 1950s  . Red Oak, Texas.
Revised:  " Teenage Attitude of the 1950s . Red Oak, Texas.
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Original:   Teenage Attitude of the 1950s  . Red Oak, Texas.
Revised:  Teenage Attitude of the 1950s " . Red Oak, Texas.
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Original: The socioemotional  network Temple University psychologist Laurence Steinberg suggests that "stopping systems within the brain make adolescents more susceptible to engaging in risky or dangerous behavior."
Revised: The socioemotional The socio-emotional network Temple University psychologist Laurence Steinberg suggests that "stopping systems within the brain make adolescents more susceptible to engaging in risky or dangerous behavior."
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Original:  Steinberg states that " systematic research does not support the stereotype of adolescents as irrational individuals who believe they are invulnerable and who are unaware, inattentive to, or unconcerned about the potential harms of risky behavior.
Revised:  Steinberg states that " research does not support the stereotype of adolescents as irrational individuals who believe they are invulnerable and who are unaware, inattentive to, or unconcerned about the potential harms of risky behavior.
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Original: Doyle, J (2016) “Rock Around The Clock – Bill Haley: 1951-1981” Retrieved from URL Considering the film and music industries, the specialist John Storey defines popular culture as something that arises from the people rather than imposed upon them , that is to say , popular culture is shaped and designed by its consumers and that is why it is, without exception, intervened with teenage rebellion.
Revised: Doyle, J (2016) “Rock Around The Clock – Bill Haley: 1951-1981” Retrieved from URL Considering the film and music industries, the specialist John Storey defines popular culture as something that arises from the people rather than imposed upon them . In other words , popular culture is shaped and designed by its consumers and that is why it is, without exception, intervened with teenage rebellion.
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Original: Teenage rebellion is a part of human development in young adults in order for them to develop an identity independent from their parents or family and a capacity for independent decision-making.
Revised: Teenage rebellion is a part of human development in adolescents in order for them to develop an identity independent from their parents or family and a capacity for independent decision-making.
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Original: Historical background The word teenager was seldom used until 1939 when it was mentioned in a headline in the Journal of Education for a review on a book study entitled Adolescence: A Study in the Teen Age, albeit it was hyphenated as URL Even though a lot of publications came out during the 1950s, trying to explain this adolescence change, it wasn’t until the twentieth century that historians began to analyze this phenomenon.
Revised: Historical background The word teenager was seldom used until 1939 when it was mentioned in a headline in the Journal of Education for a review on a book study entitled Adolescence: A Study in the Teen Age, albeit it was hyphenated as Teen-Agers. Even though a lot of publications came out during the 1950s, trying to explain this adolescence change, it wasn’t until the twentieth century that historians began to analyze this phenomenon.
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Original:  He received an envelope with a framed quotation by President Abraham Lincoln at the ceremony from Secretary Harold Brown's protocol officer, Stuart Purviance , the note enclosed of which read that Powell would become Chief of Staff of the United States Army.
Revised:  At the ceremony, he received from Secretary Harold Brown's protocol officer, Stuart Purviance , the note enclosed of which read that Powell would become Chief of Staff of the United States Army.
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Original:  Neumann said, "I am not accusing Powell of anything, but these are words that the antisemites will use in the future ” . In November the president "forced Powell to resign", according to Walter LaFeber.
Revised:  Neumann said, "I am not accusing Powell of anything, but these are words that the antisemites will use in the future " . In November the president "forced Powell to resign", according to Walter LaFeber.
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Original:  He had been asked to resign by the president 's chief of staff, Andrew Card.
Revised:  Bush's desire for Powell to resign was communicated to Powell via a phone call by Bush 's chief of staff, Andrew Card.
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Original:  he was the chairman of the Board of Trustees for Eisenhower Fellowships  In 2006, The Harry S. Truman Research Institute for the Advancement of Peace at The Hebrew University of Jerusalem awarded Colin Powell with the Truman Peace Prize for his efforts to conduct the "war against terrorism", through diplomatic as well as military means, and to avert regional and civil conflicts in many parts of the world.
Revised:  he was the chairman of the Board of Trustees for Eisenhower Fellowships . In 2006, The Harry S. Truman Research Institute for the Advancement of Peace at The Hebrew University of Jerusalem awarded Colin Powell with the Truman Peace Prize for his efforts to conduct the "war against terrorism", through diplomatic as well as military means, and to avert regional and civil conflicts in many parts of the world.
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Original:  Powell announced that he would stay on until the end of Bush's first term or until his replacement's confirmation by Congress.
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Original: The story cycle around Kae and Sinilau is a well known entity in Polynesian mythology, found back on several places (see notes).
Revised: The story cycle around Kae and Sinilau is well known in Polynesian mythology, found back on several places (see notes).
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Original: The story cycle around Kae and Sinilau is a well known entity in Polynesian mythology, found back on several places (see notes).
Revised: The story cycle around Kae and Sinilau is a well known entity in Polynesian mythology, found in several places (see notes).
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Original:  Loau It started all with Loau from Haamea, one of the many Loau known in Tongan history.
Revised:  Loau It starts with Loau from Haamea, one of the many Loau known in Tongan history.
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Original:  Haamea may be the place of his lepa in central Tongatapu, or it is an alternative for Sāmoa (Haamoa in Tongan).
Revised:  Haamea may be the place of his lepa in central Tongatapu, or it may be an alternative name for Sāmoa (Haamoa in Tongan).
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Original:  He ran a famous navigation school on an artificial lake (lepa) near Fualu , This lake has now silted up, but parts of the depression can still be seen west of Fatai, towards Matangiake and Nafualu (where Siaatoutai theological college is);
Revised:  He ran a famous navigation school on an artificial lake (lepa) near Fualu . This lake has now silted up, but parts of the depression can still be seen west of Fatai, towards Matangiake and Nafualu (where Siaatoutai theological college is);
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Original:  One day Loau got tired of people taunting him all the time  when he would go for a real trip.
Revised:  One day Loau got tired of people taunting him all the time about when he would go for a real trip.
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Original:  So he had his big canoe dragged to the sea and told his matāpule ( chiefly attendants) Kae and Longopoa, to accompany him to some nearby islands.
Revised:  So he had his big canoe dragged to the sea and told his matāpule ( chief attendants) Kae and Longopoa, to accompany him to some nearby islands.
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Original:  But when they passed Haapai, Loau told  to 'sail on past the shore'.
Revised:  But when they passed Haapai, Loau told them to 'sail on past the shore'.
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Original:  They are not on a straight track, but did (do) represent increasing far distances in the Tongan mind.
Revised:  They are not on a straight track, but did (do) represent increasingly far distances in the Tongan mind.
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Original:  No one knew that Loau had already decided silently from the beginning to go beyond the horizon and not to return.
Revised:  No one realised that Loau had already decided silently from the beginning to go beyond the horizon and not to return.
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Original:  No one knew that Loau had already decided silently from the beginning to go beyond the horizon and not to return.
Revised:  No one knew that Loau had already decided from the beginning to go beyond the horizon and not to return.
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Original:  They came at a white sea;
Revised:  They came to a white sea;
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Original:  they came at a floating pumice sea;
Revised:  they came to a floating pumice sea;
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Original:  they came at a slimy sea.
Revised:  they came to a slimy sea.
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Original:  Did Loau try to reach New Zealand, but was he drifting towards Antarctica, coming through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
Revised:  Perhaps Loau tried to reach New Zealand, but was he drifting towards Antarctica, coming through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
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Original:  Did Loau try to reach New Zealand, but was he drifting towards Antarctica, coming through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
Revised:  Did Loau try to reach New Zealand, but was drifting towards Antarctica, coming through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
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Original:  Did Loau try to reach New Zealand, but was he drifting towards Antarctica, coming through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
Revised:  Did Loau try to reach New Zealand, but was he drifting towards Antarctica, passing through snow, icebergs and a sea full of krill ?
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Original:  There  is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood  .
Revised:  There there is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood .
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Original:  There  is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood  .
Revised:  There is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, where the waters go in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood .
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Original:  There  is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood  .
Revised:  There is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is an ebb tide in Tonga, and coming out at flood .
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Original:  There  is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood  .
Revised:  There is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and the waters come out at flood .
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Original:  There  is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood  .
Revised:  There is a hole in the sky and a great whirlpool in the ocean, because of the waters going in when there is ebb in Tonga, and coming out at flood tide .
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Original:  The mast of the ship got stuck in the branches of the tree and was to be freed.
Revised:  The mast of the ship got stuck in the branches of the tree and had to be freed.
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Original:  It was done with a push, and that push caused the ship either to disappear in the whirlpool or through the opening in the sky, lost in space, never to be seen back anymore . Kae and Longopoa did not await this happening.
Revised:  This was done with a push, and that push caused the ship either to disappear in the whirlpool or through the opening in the sky, lost in space, never to be seen back anymore . Kae and Longopoa did not await this happening.
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Original:  It was done with a push, and that push caused the ship either to disappear in the whirlpool or through the opening in the sky, lost in space, never to be seen back anymore . Kae and Longopoa did not await this happening.
Revised:  It was done with a push, and that push caused the ship either to disappear in the whirlpool or through the opening in the sky, lost in space, never to be seen again . Kae and Longopoa did not await this happening.
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Original:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the stone . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they better found a way to escape from the island, everybody for himself.
Revised:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the rock . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they better found a way to escape from the island, everybody for himself.
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Original:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the stone . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they better found a way to escape from the island, everybody for himself.
Revised:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the stone . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they should find a way to escape from the island, everybody for himself.
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Original:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the stone . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they better found a way to escape from the island, everybody for himself.
Revised:  They had agreed to desert this foolish trip and they made it back to the reef, Kae clinging to the tree, and Longopoa to the stone . Kae When it got dark and the flood current came out again, Kae suggested Longopoa that they better found a way to escape from the island, every man for himself.
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Original:  (other sources tell: many days later).
Revised:  (other sources say many days later).
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Original:  He saw 8 dead whales on the shores and hundreds on neiufi fish, or (according to others) less whales but 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
Revised:  He saw eight dead whales on the shores and hundreds on neiufi fish, or (according to others) less whales but 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
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Original:  He saw 8 dead whales on the shores and hundreds on neiufi fish, or (according to others) less whales but 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
Revised:  He saw 8 dead whales on the shore and hundreds of neiufi fish, or (according to others) less whales but 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
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