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Original: None of the accounts have been compromised and GE  that the tape does not contain enough information one one individual to open another card account.
Revised: None of the accounts have been compromised and GE said that the tape does not contain enough information one one individual to open another card account.
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Original: None of the accounts have been compromised and GE said that the tape does not contain enough information one one individual to open another card account.
Revised: None of the accounts have been compromised and GE said that the tape does not contain enough information on one individual to open another card account.
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Original: Card holder data from J.C. Penny and at least 100 other major retailing outlets went missing in October and was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance.
Revised: Card holder data from J.C. Penney and at least 100 other major retailing outlets went missing in October and was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance.
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Original: The data belonging to 650,000 credit card holders from up to 100 U.S. retailer stores is reported to be lost.
Revised: Information on 650,000 credit card holders from up to 100 U.S. retailer stores is reported to be lost.
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Original: The data belonging to 650,000 credit card holders from up to 100 U.S. retailer stores is reported to be lost.
Revised: The data belonging to 650,000 credit card holders held by U.S. retailer stores is reported to be lost.
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Original: The data belonging to 650,000 credit card holders from up to 100 U.S. retailer stores is reported to be lost.
Revised: The data belonging to 650,000 credit card holders from up to 100 U.S. retail stores is reported to be lost.
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Original:  Some of that data also includes 150,000 social security numbers.
Revised:  The lost data includes 150,000 social security numbers.
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Original:  Card holder data from J.C. Penney and the other outlets went missing in October and was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance  .
Revised:  Card holder data from J.C. Penney and at least 100 other major retailing outlets was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance .
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Original:  None of the accounts have been compromised and GE said that the tape does not contain enough information on one individual to open another card account.
Revised:  None of the accounts have been compromised and GE says that the tape does not contain enough information on one individual to open another card account.
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Original: Card holder data from J.C. Penney and at least 100 other major retailing outlets was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance and went missing in October.
Revised: Card holder data from J.C. Penney and other major retailing outlets was being stored on a backup computer tape owned by GE Consumer Finance and went missing in October.
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Original:  It is reported that he died in Iceland at a hospital in Reykjavik.
Revised:  It is said that he died in Iceland at a hospital in Reykjavik.
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Original:  [His death] very sad news," said Garry Kasparov a former world champion of chess  
Revised:  [His death] very sad news," said Garry Kasparov a former world champion of chess . 
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Original:  Dubbed as being one of the world's greatest chess players of all-time, Bobby Fischer has died at the age of 64 from kidney failure, according to his spokesman Gardar Sverrisson.
Revised:  Dubbed as one of the world's greatest chess players of all-time, Bobby Fischer has died at the age of 64 from kidney failure, according to his spokesman Gardar Sverrisson.
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Original:  He died in Iceland at a hospital in Reykjavik .
Revised:  He died in Iceland at a hospital in Reykjavík .
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Original:  He became a grand master in August of 1958 at the young age of 15.
Revised:  He became a Grandmaster in August of 1958 at the young age of 15.
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Original:  [His death  ] very sad news," said Garry Kasparov a former world champion of chess.
Revised:  [His death is ] very sad news," said Garry Kasparov a former world champion of chess.
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Original: Fischer was also a fugitive of the U.S. after violating the terms of United Nations sanctions by going  an island of the former country of Yugoslavia in 1992 to play Spassky in a rematch, and won.
Revised: Fischer was also a fugitive of the U.S. after violating the terms of United Nations sanctions by going to an island of the former country of Yugoslavia in 1992 to play Spassky in a rematch, and won.
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Original: Fischer in 2005.
Revised: Fischer in his younger days.
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Original: Wednesday November 17, 2004, United Kingdom.
Revised:  November 17, 2004, United Kingdom.
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Original:  The manual is a 93-page slide-show aiming to teach diplomats how to identify and aid victims of torture, with a section on U.S. interrogation techniques including forced nudity, hooding, isolation, and sleep deprivation.
Revised:  The manual aims to teach diplomats how to identify and aid victims of torture, with a section on U.S. interrogation techniques including forced nudity, hooding, isolation, and sleep deprivation.
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Original:  "For us to be on a list like that is just ridiculous   ."
Revised:  "For us to be on a list like that is just ridiculous ." ."
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Original: The United States found itself  on a Canadian list of countries where foreigners risk torture and abuse , alongside Afghanistan, China, Iran, Israel, Mexico, Saudi Arabia, Syria, and others . Both Israel and the United States are officially allies  .
Revised: The United States found itself on a Canadian list of countries where foreigners risk torture and abuse . The country is listed alongside countries such as Afghanistan, China, Iran, Israel, Mexico, Saudi Arabia, Syria, and others . Both Israel and the United States are officially allies .
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Original:  The list is in a 93-page internal training manual format by the Foreign Affairs Department for Canadian diplomats that was accidentally leaked to Amnesty International lawyers.
Revised:  The manual is a 93-page internal training manual format by the Foreign Affairs Department for Canadian diplomats that was accidentally leaked to Amnesty International lawyers.
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Original:  It was developed as part of a "torture awareness workshop" in response to the case of Maher Arar , a Canadian-Syrian citizen who was detained by the United States on suspected ties to terrorism, and deported to Syria where he was tortured.
Revised:  It was developed as part of a "torture awareness workshop" in response to the case of Maher Arar . Arar is a Canadian-Syrian citizen who was detained by the United States on suspected ties to terrorism, and deported to Syria where he was tortured.
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Original:  Arar was eventually returned to Canada, where he was awarded $11.5 million in compensation by the Canadian government.
Revised:  He was eventually returned to Canada, where he was awarded $11.5 million in compensation by the Canadian government.
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Original: The United States found itself Thursday on a Canadian list of countries where foreigners risk torture and abuse .
Revised: An internal training manual developed by the Canadian foreign affairs department lists the United States as a country where foreigners risk torture and abuse .
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Original:  The country is listed alongside countries such as Afghanistan, China, Iran, Israel, Mexico, Saudi Arabia, and Syria in a leaked internal training manual .
Revised:  The country is listed alongside countries such as Afghanistan, China, Iran, Israel, Mexico, Saudi Arabia, and Syria .
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Original: In an attempt to pacify some Canadian allies Foreign Affairs Minister Maxime Bernier was quoted in saying the manual "contains a list that wrongly includes some of our closest allies." and "I regret the embarrassment caused by the public disclosure of the manual used in the department's torture awareness training," Canadian officials disclaimed its significance.
Revised:  Canadian officials disclaimed its significance.
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Original:  As such it does not convey the government's views or positions," said Marina Wilson, spokeswoman for the Department of Foreign Affairs in Ottawa  [  .
Revised:  As such it does not convey the government's views or positions," said Marina Wilson, spokeswoman for the Department of Foreign Affairs in Ottawa . [ .
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Original:  As such it does not convey the government's views or positions," said Marina Wilson, spokeswoman for the Department of Foreign Affairs in Ottawa  [  .
Revised:  As such it does not convey the government's views or positions," said Marina Wilson, spokeswoman for the Department of Foreign Affairs in Ottawa [s .
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Original:  He said that his belif was that by passing the package through congess quickly would "provide a shot in the arm to keep a fundamentally strong economy healthy.
Revised:  He said that his belief was that by passing the package through congess quickly would "provide a shot in the arm to keep a fundamentally strong economy healthy.
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Original:  He said that his belif was that by passing the package through congess quickly would "provide a shot in the arm to keep a fundamentally strong economy healthy.
Revised:  He said that his belif was that by passing the package through congress quickly would "provide a shot in the arm to keep a fundamentally strong economy healthy.
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Original: Democrats want the tax refunds to cover payroll taxes paid by lower-income groups and be combined with more unemployment benefits, food stamps and federal aid to states.
Revised: Democrats want the tax refunds to cover payroll taxes paid by the employers of low-wage workers and be combined with more unemployment benefits, food stamps and federal aid to states.
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Original: Democrats want the tax refunds to cover payroll taxes paid by the employers of low-wage workers and be combined with more unemployment benefits, food stamps and federal aid to states.
Revised: Democrats want the tax refunds to cover payroll taxes paid by employers should be credited to low-wage workers and be combined with more unemployment benefits, food stamps and federal aid to states.
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Original: Democrats want the tax refunds to be available  to those who pay no income taxes  , arguing that payroll taxes paid by employers should be credited to low-wage workers  .
Revised: Democrats want the tax refunds to be available even to those who pay no income taxes , arguing that payroll taxes paid by employers should be credited to low-wage workers .
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Original:  It warned against bundling proposals to make  Bush's first term tax cuts permanent with the stimulus package , and the Bush administration has separated the two in this proposal.
Revised:  They also don't want the stimulus bundled with proposals to make Bush's first term tax cuts permanent with the stimulus package , and the Bush administration has separated the two in this proposal.
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Original:  It warned against bundling proposals to make  Bush's first term tax cuts permanent with the stimulus package , and the Bush administration has separated the two in this proposal.
Revised:  It warned against bundling proposals to make Bush's first term , and the Bush administration has separated the two in this proposal.
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Original:  The popular video website YouTube has been blocked in Turkey by the prehistoric minds of the ruling AKP, once more.
Revised:  The popular video website YouTube has been blocked in Turkey once more.
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Original:  There was some controversy over the fact that some at-large Democratic caucuses would be held in casinos, giving casino workers a chance to vote, the Nevada State Education Association and six individuals filed a lawsuit claiming this was unfair and would give more delegates then other locations and violate state law.
Revised:  There was some controversy over the fact that some at-large Democratic caucuses would be held in casinos, giving casino workers a chance to vote, the Nevada State Education Association and six individuals filed a lawsuit claiming this was unfair and would give more delegates then other locations and that this violates state law.
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Original:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders  endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
Revised:  Due to the fact that some of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
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Original:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders  endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
Revised:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders have endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
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Original:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders  endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
Revised:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
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Original:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders  endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, leading some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
Revised:  Due to the fact that several of the Nevada State Education Association's leaders endorsed Clinton and that the fact the lawsuit it was filed two days after the Culinary Workers Union Local 226 endorsed Obama, lead some political commentators to state it was a proxy battle between Obama and Clinton
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Original:  Democrats also cast votes Saturday, with results expected later in the afternoon .
Revised:  Democrats also held caucuses in Nevada Saturday .
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Original:  There was some controversy over the fact that some at-large Democratic caucuses would be held in casinos, giving casino workers a chance to vote , the Nevada State Education Association and six individuals filed a lawsuit claiming this was unfair and would give more delegates then other locations and that this violates state law.
Revised:  There was some controversy over the fact that some at-large Democratic caucuses would be held in casinos, giving casino workers a chance to vote . The Nevada State Education Association and six individuals filed a lawsuit claiming this was unfair and would give more delegates then other locations and that this violates state law.
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Original:  A full investigation has been ordered by Andre Luis Brandao, Angola's transport minister  
Revised:  A full investigation has been ordered by Andre Luis Brandao, Angola's transport minister . 
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Original:  A full investigation has been ordered by Andre Luis Brandao , Angola's transport minister   .
Revised:  A full investigation has been ordered by André Luís Brandão , Angola's transport minister .
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Original:  The moves come as the result of unexpected financial difficulties   
Revised:  The moves come as the result of unexpected financial difficulties . 
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Original: Current Arizona senator , John McCain is projected winner of the Republican South Carolina presidential primary for president of the United States.
Revised: Current Arizona senator John McCain won the South Carolina presidential primary for president of the United States.
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Original: Current Arizona senator , John McCain is projected winner of the Republican South Carolina presidential primary for president of the United States.
Revised: Current Arizona senator , John McCain is projected winner of the Republican South Carolina presidential primary in his bid to become the Republican candidate for President of the United States.
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Original:  Current Arizona senator John McCain won the South Carolina presidential primary in his bid to become the Republican candidate for President of the United States.
Revised: John McCain Current Arizona senator John McCain won the South Carolina presidential primary in his bid to become the Republican candidate for President of the United States.
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Original:     The South Carolina primaries largely overshadowed the Nevada caucuses, being held he same day.
Revised:  The South Carolina primaries largely overshadowed the Nevada caucuses, being held the same day.
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Original:  Earlier that day in Nevada, former Governor Mitt Romney and former First Lady Hilary Clinton won the Republican and Democratic party primaries respectively.
Revised:  Earlier that day in Nevada, former Governor Mitt Romney and former First Lady Hillary Clinton won the Republican and Democratic party primaries respectively.
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Original:  Alain Jaubert, director from a famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative à la Télévision Européenne (ARTE} was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and  French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" yesterday in Taipei City.
Revised:  Alain Jaubert, director from the famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative à la Télévision Européenne (ARTE} was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" yesterday in Taipei City.
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Original:  Alain Jaubert, director from a famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative à la Télévision Européenne (ARTE} was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and  French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" yesterday in Taipei City.
Revised:  Alain Jaubert, director from a famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative à la Télévision Européenne (ARTE} was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and the French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" yesterday in Taipei City.
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Original:  He also exchanged some experiences and talked about functionalities on art programs with  Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
Revised:  He also talked about some experiences and talked about functionalities on art programs with Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
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Original:  He also exchanged some experiences and talked about functionalities on art programs with  Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
Revised:  He also exchanged some experiences and about functionalities on art programs with Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
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Original:  He also exchanged some experiences and talked about functionalities on art programs with  Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
Revised:  He also exchanged some experiences and talked about functionalities on art programs with the Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
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Original: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert ever made his first attempt to the production of "Palettes" in 1984  but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
Revised: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert failed at his first attempt to the production of "Palettes" in 1984 but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
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Original: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert ever made his first attempt to the production of "Palettes" in 1984  but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
Revised: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert ever made his first attempt to produce "Palettes" in 1984 but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
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Original: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert ever made his first attempt to the production of "Palettes" in 1984  but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
Revised: According to PTS Taiwan, Jaubert ever made his first attempt to the production of "Palettes" in 1984 , but finally succeeded in 1987 after his proposal was recalled and Jaubery tried another production style to introduce history and background on establishments of a notable picture to Europe.
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Original:  Before the Executive Panel, the PTS Taiwan screened highlights from some art programs included "Pelettes" by ARTE and "Avant Guard Liberation" by Mingchuan Huang.
Revised:  Before the Executive Panel, the PTS Taiwan screened highlights from some art programs including "Pelettes" by ARTE and "Avant Guard Liberation" by Mingchuan Huang.
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Original:  He also talked about some experiences and about functionalities on art programs with the Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
Revised:  He also talked about some experiences and functionalities on art programs with the Chairman of National Culture and Arts Foundation Mingchuan Huang.
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Original: Wikinews has learned that according to an internet posting made just over 24 hours ago, the Church of Scientology's website is being attacked by hackers, causing the site to shut down.
Revised: Wikinews has learned that according to an internet posting made just over 24 hours ago, the Church of Scientology's website was being attacked by hackers, causing the site to shut down.
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Original:  Some individuals report that when they are able to reach the site, all they get is a message stating, "The word scientology means search for truth..."  .
Revised:  Some individuals reported that when they are able to reach the site, all they get is a message stating, "The word scientology means search for truth..." .
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