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Original:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT (Nationalist) and CCP, which in the 1930s and 40s were involved in a bloody civil war, in which the CCP under Mao Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
Revised:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT (Nationalist) and CCP, which in the 1930s and 40s were involved in a bloody civil war, in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
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Original:  This is the second stop of Lien Chan's "peace journey   
Revised:  This is the second stop of Lien Chan's "peace journey ". 
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Original: Taiwan Kuomintang leader Lien Chan (連戰)  met Chinese Communist Party General Secretary and Chinese President Hu Jintao (胡錦濤) in the Chinese People's Hall in Beijing  .
Revised: Taiwan Kuomintang leader Lien Chan (連戰) met Chinese Communist Party General Secretary and Chinese President Hu Jintao in the Chinese People's Hall in Beijing .
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Original:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( Nationalist ) and CCP , which in the 1930s and 40s  were involved in a bloody civil war , in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
Revised:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( or Nationalist Party ) and CCP , which in the 1930s and 40s were involved in a bloody civil war , in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
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Original:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( Nationalist ) and CCP , which in the 1930s and 40s  were involved in a bloody civil war , in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
Revised:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( Nationalist ) and CCP . In the 1930s and 40s were involved in a bloody civil war , in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
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Original:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( Nationalist ) and CCP , which in the 1930s and 40s  were involved in a bloody civil war , in which the CCP under Zedong won, and the KMT retreating to Taiwan.
Revised:  The visit marks the process of ending 60 years of hostilities between the KMT ( Nationalist ) and CCP , which in the 1930s and 40s were involved in a bloody civil war 
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Original:  This is the second stop of Lien Chan's  " peace journey "   . External Links People's Daily Online -- Feature: LienChan takes historical bus to make " journey of peac 
Revised:  This is the second stop of Lien Chan's " peace journey " . People's Daily Online -- Feature: LienChan takes historical bus to make " journey of peac 
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Original:  The agreements made by Lien will only take effect if ratified by Taiwan's government (which is unlikely, since Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian opposes the accord and favors Taiwanese independence), or if the Nationalists regain control of the government in future elections
Revised:  The agreements made by Lien will only take effect if ratified by Taiwan's government (which is unlikely, since President Chen opposes the accord and favors Taiwanese independence), or if the Nationalists regain control of the government in future elections
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Original:  The negotations fails and all-out war soon ensued.
Revised:  The negotiations fails and all-out war soon ensued.
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Original:  However, an important hurdle has been cleared with the official support of the state government of Uttaranchal, and the comments of other interested parties who favor spreading the knowledge of Hindu philosophy by popular means.
Revised:  However, an important hurdle has been cleared with the official support of the state government of Uttaranchal, and positive comments have been received from other interested parties who favor spreading the knowledge of Hindu philosophy by popular means.
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Original:  Also places are to be provided for for visiting non-resident Indians (NRIs) to set up "remote poojas" and other rituals over the Internet  Some of the park proceeds are said to be set aside for various charities.
Revised:  Also places are to be provided for for visiting non-resident Indians (NRIs) to set up "remote poojas" and other rituals over the Internet . Some of the park proceeds are said to be set aside for various charities.
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Original:  If the park is successful, the Sagar Group plans to build similar Dhams around the world, in Asia, Oceania, South America, or perhaps even in places such as London  or Orlando, Florida , USA
Revised:  If the park is successful, the Sagar Group plans to build similar Dhams around the world, in Asia, Oceania, South America, or perhaps even in places such as London or Orlando, Florida in the United States
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Original: 250px|Lord Ram Source: Wikipedia Shiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
Revised: 250px|Lord Ram Source: Shiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
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Original: 250px|Lord Ram Source: Wikipedia Shiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
Revised: 250px|Lord Ram Source: Wikipedia WikipediaShiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
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Original:  Also places are to be provided for for visiting non-resident Indians (NRIs) to set up "remote poojas" and other rituals over the Internet.
Revised:  Also places are to be provided for visiting non-resident Indians (NRIs) to set up "remote poojas" and other rituals over the Internet.
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Original: 250px|Lord Ram Source: WikipediaShiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
Revised: Shiv Sagar, the grandson of a popular Indian TV and movie producer, is planning to build an infotainment theme park called Ganga-Dham on the banks of the Ganges River within the next two or three years.
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Original: Serbian army and volunteers are helping the locals , building a dike and saving the animals, but the villagers are short on drinking water and other supplies.
Revised: Serbian army and volunteers are helping local residents , building a dike and saving the animals, but the villagers are short on drinking water and other supplies.
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Original: A meeting room in Victoria Palace, the headquarters of the Romanian Government, where the law ratifying Romania's Accession Treaty to the European Union was passed The government passed a law on Friday ratifying Romania's accession treaty to the European Union, after the Treaty was signed in a ceremony in Luxembourg in April 25, which was attended by the heads of state of all 25 current EU member states.
Revised:  The government passed a law on Friday ratifying Romania's accession treaty to the European Union, after the Treaty was signed in a ceremony in Luxembourg in April 25, which was attended by the heads of state of all 25 current EU member states.
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Original:  By the end of 2005, the number of Romanian mobile phone subscribers is expected to reach 11.5 to 12 millio  
Revised:  By the end of 2005, the number of Romanian mobile phone subscribers is expected to reach 11.5 to 12 million. 
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Original:  By the end of 2005, the number of Romanian mobile phone subscribers is expected to reach 11.5 to 12 millio  
Revised:  By the end of 2005, the number of Romanian mobile phone subscribers is expected to reach 11.5 to 12 millio References 
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Original: Heavy rain has washed away a 20-metre stretch of National Highway 75, in Alba County , western Romania, leaving only one of the lanes open to traffic.
Revised: Heavy rain has washed away a 20-metre stretch of National Highway 75, in Alba county , western Romania, leaving only one of the lanes open to traffic.
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Original:  Parts of Timiş County remain heavily flooded, along with the northern Serbian region of Vojvodina.
Revised:  Parts of Timiş county remain heavily flooded, along with the northern Serbian region of Vojvodina.
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Original:  "These are the same colors of the Palestinian flag, as well as the base for other Arab nation's flags, I think that whoever did this thing is on the palestinian side  
Revised:  "These are the same colors of the Palestinian flag, as well as the base for other Arab nation's flags, I think that whoever did this thing is on the palestinian side ." 
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Original: This friday, 29th of April at 4pm, pro-palestinian graffiti was sprayed on the outside wall of Israeli Embassy in Denmark claiming "Break down the Wall" (Danish: "Riv muren ned").
Revised: This friday, 29th of April at 4pm, pro-Palestinian graffiti was sprayed on the outside wall of Israeli Embassy in Denmark claiming "Break down the Wall" (Danish: "Riv muren ned").
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Original:  "These are the same colors of the Palestinian flag, as well as the base for other Arab nation's flags, I think that whoever did this thing is on the palestinian side."
Revised:  "These are the same colors of the Palestinian flag, as well as the base for other arab nation's flags, I think that whoever did this thing is on the palestinian side."
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Original:  The couples, their parents, their children, all who have waited for this moment.  
Revised:  The couples, their parents, their children, all who have waited for this moment. " 
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Original: The Illinois General Assembly voted 61–54 on Tuesday to approve a law allowing for same-sex marriage.
Revised: The voted 61–54 on Tuesday to approve a law allowing for same-sex marriage.
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Original:  Rep. Greg Harris , the sponsor of the bill, said: "what this bill is about is love, it's about family, it's about commitment".
Revised:  , the sponsor of the bill, said: "what this bill is about is love, it's about family, it's about commitment".
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Original:  The Catholic Conference of Illinois released a statement "deeply disappointed that members of the General Assembly chose to redefine what is outside of its authority: a natural institution like marriage.
Revised:  The Conference of Illinois released a statement "deeply disappointed that members of the General Assembly chose to redefine what is outside of its authority: a natural institution like marriage.
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Original: The governor, Pat Quinn,  is expected to sign the bill.
Revised: The governor, Pat Quinn, who is expected to sign the bill.
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Original: File photo of Illinois Governor Pat Quinn , who is expected to sign the bill.
Revised: File photo of Illinois Governor Pat Quinn , who is expected suck bill.
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Original:  Bernard Cherkasov from the gay rights group Equality Illinois welcomed the passing of the bill.
Revised:  Bernard Cherkasov from the gay rights group Equality Illinois welcomed the passi
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Original:  " The first thought that popped into my mind was all those families around the state that I've met over the past five years in fighting for marriage equality.
Revised:  " I never meant to string u alone, if that's was what u first thought that popped into my mind was all those families around the state that I've met over the past five years in fighting for marriage equality.
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Original:  The  voted 61–54 yesterday to approve a law allowing for  . Governor is expected to sign the bill and ceremonies for same-sex couples are expected to start in June of next year.
Revised:  The voted 61–54 yesterday to approve a law allowing for same-sex marriage . Governor is expected to sign the bill and ceremonies for same-sex couples are expected to start in June of next year.
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Original:  George Bush in the Middle East today  It was made clear that Haniyeh did not support Bush's visit he said "Bush gave Israel all the required pledges to solidify its occupation and to wipe out basic Palestinian rights and sacred issues, while he gave the Palestinians more illusions and slogans, and loose words that only express the deception which has characterized this visit."
Revised:  George Bush in the Middle East today . It was made clear that Haniyeh did not support Bush's visit he said "Bush gave Israel all the required pledges to solidify its occupation and to wipe out basic Palestinian rights and sacred issues, while he gave the Palestinians more illusions and slogans, and loose words that only express the deception which has characterized this visit."
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Original:  Togo is a former German colony . "If they refuse tomorrow, I hope that they will decide to join us the next day," said Gnassingbé to France's Le Monde in their Friday edition (the official language of Togo is French, as the country was passed from Germany to Britain and France in 1918 and gained its independence as recently as 1960) . "Reconciliation is a long process.
Revised:  Togo is a former German colony , but the official language of the country is French, since it was passed to Brian and France in 1918 and only gained its independence in 1960. "If they refuse tomorrow, I hope that they will decide to join us the next day," said Gnassingbé to France's Le Monde in their Friday edition (the official language of Togo is French, as the country was passed from Germany to Britain and France in 1918 and gained its independence as recently as 1960) . "Reconciliation is a long process.
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Original:  Togo is a former German colony . "If they refuse tomorrow, I hope that they will decide to join us the next day," said Gnassingbé to France's Le Monde in their Friday edition (the official language of Togo is French, as the country was passed from Germany to Britain and France in 1918 and gained its independence as recently as 1960) . "Reconciliation is a long process.
Revised:  Togo is a former German colony . "If they refuse tomorrow, I hope that they will decide to join us the next day," said Gnassingbé to France's Le Monde in their Friday edition . "Reconciliation is a long process.
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Original: 250px|Location map of Togo Immediately after the provisional election returns in the West African nation of Togo were given last Tuesday, violence and chaos erupted with security forces beating and shooting protesters, who object to the fairness of the Togolese elections and allege widespread fraud.
Revised:  Immediately after the provisional election returns in the West African nation of Togo were given last Tuesday, violence and chaos erupted with security forces beating and shooting protesters, who object to the fairness of the Togolese elections and allege widespread fraud.
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Original:  You can't jump overnight from a regime that lasted for 38 years to a new one," he continued  
Revised:  You can't jump overnight from a regime that lasted for 38 years to a new one," he continued . 
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Original: Byetta, or exenatide  is produced by Amylin Pharmaceuticals.
Revised: Byetta, or exenatide , is produced by Amylin Pharmaceuticals.
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Original: The British Food Standards Agency  has announced a recall of foods containing banned dyes which increase the risk of cancer.
Revised: The British Food Standards Agency (FSA) has announced a recall of foods containing banned dyes which increase the risk of cancer.
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Original:  Tesco also found that their 130g package of BBQ rice cakes (expiration November and December 2005) contained both Para Red and Sudan I   .
Revised:  Tesco also found that their 130g package of BBQ rice cakes (expiration November and December 2005) contained both Para Red and Sudan I . .
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Original: Over that past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the w: 2006 Football Worldcup as coach of the German national team.
Revised: Over that past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the 2006 Football Worldcup as coach of the German national team.
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Original: Over that past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the w: 2006 Football Worldcup as coach of the German national team.
Revised: Over that past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the w: 2006 Football World Cup as coach of the German national team.
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Original: Over that past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the 2006 Football World Cup as coach of the German national team.
Revised: Over the past few months Klinsmann was being considered for various coach positions after reforming the German national team and finishing 3rd at the 2006 Football World Cup as coach of the German national team.
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