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Original:  This celebration besides having its own religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  This celebration besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
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Original:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  These celebrations in scandinavia besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
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Original:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having the usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
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Original:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environment awareness in nordic countries.
Revised:  This celebrations in scandinavia besides having its usual religious significance has an added flavor demonstrating the environmental awareness in nordic countries.
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Original: The results seem to indicate a substantial demand for greater awareness of student's religious and spiritual pursuits by the colleges and universities they attend.
Revised: The results seem to indicate a substantial demand for greater support of student's religious and spiritual pursuits by the colleges and universities they attend.
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Original:  Representatives of the big coalition differed about the question if it should be allowed to shoot down a hijacked plane.
Revised:  Representatives of the grand coalition differed about the question if it should be allowed to shoot down a hijacked plane.
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Original:  Representatives of the big coalition differed about the question if it should be allowed to shoot down a hijacked plane.
Revised:  Representatives of the big coalition differed about the question whether it should be allowed to shoot down a hijacked plane.
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Original:  Meanwhile Jung was supported by members of his own party which underlined the necessity of shooting down a hijacked plane in order to rescue thousands of lives.
Revised:  Jung was supported by members of his own party which underlined the necessity of shooting down a hijacked plane in order to rescue thousands of lives.
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Original:  Meanwhile Jung was supported by members of his own party which underlined the necessity of shooting down a hijacked plane in order to rescue thousands of lives.
Revised:  Meanwhile Jung was supported by members of his own party which underlined the necessity of shooting down a hijacked plane in order to save thousands of lives.
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Original:  Though the dispute between the two coalition partners concerning new laws to ensure the security of Germany remains unresolved.
Revised:  The dispute between the two coalition partners concerning new laws to ensure the security of Germany remains unresolved.
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Original:  In the United States and other european countries such as France, Great Britain or Czechia laws were passed which give the permission to shoot down a passenger plane under the control of terrorists  
Revised:  In the United States and other european countries such as France, Great Britain or Czechia laws were passed which give the permission to shoot down a passenger plane under the control of terrorists . 
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Original:  Representatives of the grand coalition differed about the questionwhether it should be allowed to shoot down a hijacked plane .
Revised:  Representatives of the grand coalition differed in their views regarding this question .
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Original:  A member of the Social Democrat Party disagreed with Jung and advised him against contradicting the court's judgement .
Revised:  A member of the Social Democrat Party disagreed with Jung and advised him against contradicting the court's judgment .
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Original:  In the United States and other European countries such as France, Great Britain or Czechia laws were passed which give the  permission to shoot down a passenger plane under the control of terrorists.
Revised:  In the United States and other European countries such as France, Great Britain or Czechia laws were passed which give the government permission to shoot down a passenger plane under the control of terrorists.
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Original:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the testing methodology used by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice being farmed and sold illegally in the world's biggest rice producer.
Revised:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the tests used by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice being farmed and sold illegally in the world's biggest rice producer.
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Original:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the tests used by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice being farmed and sold illegally in the world's biggest rice producer .
Revised:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the integrity of tests conducted by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice being farmed and sold illegally in the world's biggest rice producer .
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Original:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the tests used by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice being farmed and sold illegally in the world's biggest rice producer .
Revised:  (File photo) Authorities in China today questioned the tests used by Greenpeace, the environmental awareness organisation that says it has found genetically engineered (GE) rice .
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Original: Yesterday at in Madrid, Real Madrid lost 1-0 to crosstown rival in this year's edition of the Madrid derby.
Revised: Yesterday at in Madrid, Real Madrid lost 1–0 to crosstown rival in this year's edition of the Madrid derby.
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Original: Yesterday at in Madrid, Real Madrid lost 1–0 to crosstown rival in this year's edition of the Madrid derby .
Revised: Yesterday at in Madrid, Real Madrid lost 1–0 to crosstown rival in this year's edition of the .
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Original:  It was the first time since 1999 that Atlético de Madrid  defeated Real Madrid in La Liga play . scored the game's only goal, following an early ten minutes where Real Madrid dominated on possession.
Revised:  Atlético de Madrid defeated Real Madrid in La Liga play . scored the game's only goal, following an early ten minutes where Real Madrid dominated on possession.
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Original:  Following the goal, Real Madrid was unable to keep up possession and Atlético was able to successfully shut down much of Real Madrid's passing game.
Revised:  Following the goal, Real Madrid was unable to keep up possession and Atlético successfully shut down much of Real Madrid's passing game.
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Original:  If confirmed by the Senate, Mukasey, a former Chief Judge for the Southern District of New York, will replace Alberto Gonzales  
Revised:  If confirmed by the Senate, Mukasey, a former Chief Judge for the Southern District of New York, will replace Alberto Gonzales . 
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Original:   Michael B.
Revised: New York Senator Chuck Schumer, who was among those who sought the ouster of Gonzales, said Mukasey "is certainly conservative," but "seems to be the kind of nominee who would put rule of law first and show independence from the White House - our most important criteria." Michael B.
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Original:   Michael B.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Senate Majority Leader Harry Reid said: "A man who spent 18 years on the federal bench surely understands the importance of checks and balances and knows how to say no to the president when he oversteps the Constitution, but there should be no rush to judgment. The Senate Judiciary Committee must carefully examine Judge Mukasey's views on the complex legal challenges facing the nation." Michael B.
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Original:  Mukasey as Attorney General .
Revised:  Mukasey as .
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Original:  If confirmed by the Senate, Mukasey, a former Chief Judge for the Southern District of New York , will replace Alberto Gonzales.
Revised:  If confirmed by the Senate, Mukasey, a former for the , will replace Alberto Gonzales.
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Original:  The Senate Judiciary Committee must carefully examine Judge Mukasey's views on the complex legal challenges facing the nation."
Revised:  The must carefully examine Judge Mukasey's views on the complex legal challenges facing the nation."
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Original:  He took the bench in 1988 and served in that position for 18 years, including a 6-year tenure as Chief Judge of the Southern District of New York from 2000 to July 2006 
Revised:  He took the bench in 1988 and served in that position for 18 years, including a 6-year tenure as Chief Judge of the Southern District of New York from 2000 to July 2006. 
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Original:  ]] The Firm, a company which pop singer Britney Spears hired to manage the pop-star just over one month ago, wishes to no longer manage Spears, and has terminated the services they were providing her to promote her new record.
Revised:  ]] The Firm, a company which pop singer Britney Spears hired to manage her career just over one month ago, wishes to no longer manage Spears, and has terminated the services they were providing her to promote her new record.
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Original:  Jeff Kwatinetz was the manager for Spears. 
Revised:  Jeff Kwatinetz was the manager for Spears. It is not yet known what circumstances caused the company to sever their ties with Spears.
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Original:  ]] The Firm, a company which pop singer Britney Spears hired to manage her career just over one month ago, wishes to no longer manage Spears, and has terminated the services they were providing her to promote her new record.
Revised:  ]] The Firm, a company which pop singer Britney Spears hired to manage her career just over one month ago, no longer wishes to manage Spears, and has terminated the services they were providing her to promote her new record.
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Original: Image:Britney-Spears082.jpg|Spears performing in Los Angeles, California.
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Original:  Spears is releasing a new album, scheduled to be put on shelves in November, and her record label, Jive Records , has stated that the recent incident will not delay the release of her record.
Revised:  Spears is releasing a new album, scheduled to be put on shelves in November, and her record label, , has stated that the recent incident will not delay the release of her record.
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Original: Yesterday, 's scored his team's only goal in their 1-0 victory in La Liga play over cross town rivals at in Madrid.
Revised: Yesterday, 's scored his team's only goal in their 1–0 victory in La Liga play over cross town rivals at in Madrid.
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Original:  The goal came in the 10th minute after a pass from .
Revised:  The goal came in the tenth minute after a pass from .
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Original:  His goal ended Real Madrid's 34 game home winning streak, and happened the same week he was invited to play on the .
Revised:  His goal ended Real Madrid's 34-game home winning streak, and happened the same week he was invited to play on the .
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Original:  The home team crowd responded to Costa's play with chants of "Costa is not Spanish.  
Revised:  The home team crowd responded to Costa's play with chants of "Costa is not Spanish. " 
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Original:  The home team crowd responded to Costa's play with chants of "Costa is not Spanish.  
Revised:  The home team crowd responded to Costa's play with chants of "Costa is not Spanish. Related new
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Original:  It ended Real Madrid's 30-plus–game home winning streak , and happened the same week he was invited to play on the .
Revised:  It ended Real Madrid's 30-plus–game home winning streak .
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Original: Hassan Hashash, a Palestinian boy aged 15, was arrested tuesday in the Hawara roadblock with five explosive charges under his coat .
Revised: Hassan Hashash, a Palestinian aged 15, was arrested tuesday in the Hawara roadblock with five explosive charges under his coat .
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Original:  "The boy pulled out a matchbox, held up a pipe bomb, and attempted to detonate it," said a soldier known as Muli.
Revised:  "The boy pulled out a matchbox, held up a pipe bomb, and attempted to detonate it," said Muli.
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Original:  "We aimed our weapons at him and told him to move away from us . "  After taking him to an isolated area they searched him and found the remaining 4 explosives.
Revised:  "We aimed our weapons at him and told him to move away from us " After taking him to an isolated area they searched him and found the remaining 4 explosives.
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Original:  "We aimed our weapons at him and told him to move away from us . "  After taking him to an isolated area they searched him and found the remaining 4 explosives.
Revised:  "We aimed our weapons at him and told him to move away from us . " After taking him to an isolated area they searched him and found another four explosives.
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Original:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
Revised:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] ," said Muli. " I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
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Original:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
Revised:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes : he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
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Original:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
Revised:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death . " said Muli.
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Original:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " said Muli.
Revised:  "You could see it's a young child who was sent [by someone] . I looked into his eyes , he was on the brink of tears and scared to death , " 
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Original:  " God could not be reached for comment
Revised:  God could not be reached for comment
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Original:  Mr Chambers complaint consists of in part, "despite reasonable efforts to effectuate personal service on Defendent [God] ('Come out, come out, wherever you are') has been unable to do so.  
Revised:  Mr Chambers complaint consists of in part, "despite reasonable efforts to effectuate personal service on Defendent [God] ('Come out, come out, wherever you are') has been unable to do so. " 
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Original:   Are the property taxes in your riding at a fair level for the amount of services received in the municipality?
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Original:  He was then tasered .
Revised:  He was then eaten .
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Original:  Mr. Meyer was charged with breaking the peace and was detained overnight by local police .
Revised:  Mr. Meyer was digested over night by the police department.
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Original:  Mr. Meyer was digested over night by the police department.
Revised:  Mr. Meyer was charged with breaking the peace and was detained overnight by local police.
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Original: __NOTOC__ 250px The 1st day of UEFA Champions League started today.
Revised: __NOTOC__ 250px The 1st day of started today.
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Original: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamMilan2-1BenficaShakhtar Donetsk2-0Celtic }} Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
Revised: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting Team2-1 }} Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
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Original: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamMilan2-1BenficaShakhtar Donetsk2-0Celtic }} Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
Revised: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamMilan2-1BenficaShakhtar Donetsk2-0Celtic w|Shakhtar Donetsk}} Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
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Original: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamMilan2-1BenficaShakhtar Donetsk2-0Celtic }} Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
Revised: Group C Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamReal Madrid2-1Werder BremenOlympiacos1-1Lazio Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group C PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Real Madrid10021132Lazio01011012Olympiacos01011014Werder Bremen00112-10 Group D Scores Home Team Score Visiting TeamMilan2-1BenficaShakhtar Donetsk2-0Celtic }}||align=center|2-0|| Standings Standings at the end of Matchday 1 for Group D PosTeamWDLFAGDPts1Shakhtar Donetsk10020232Milan10021133SL Benfica00112-104Celtic00102-2
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Original:   Response    
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Original: An exhaused Charles Kennedy returned to the election campaign to launch a twenty page Liberal Democrat manifesto targeted at disaffected Labour voters, promising a fairer tax system and withdrawl from Iraq.
Revised: An exhausted Charles Kennedy returned to the election campaign to launch a twenty page Liberal Democrat manifesto targeted at disaffected Labour voters, promising a fairer tax system and withdrawl from Iraq.
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Original:  The Liberal Democrats were the only parliamentry party which consistantly voted against the Iraq war, and the manifesto has promised an exit strategy with a phased withdrawl of Britain's 8,000 troops still in the country.
Revised:  The Liberal Democrats were the only parliamentry party which consistantly voted against the Iraq war, and the manifesto has promised an exit strategy with a phased withdrawal of Britain's 8,000 troops still in the country.
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Original:  A Guardian/ICM opinion poll yesterday found that while the Conservative's policy on immigration was populat with tradition Conservative voters, it was unpopular with undecided voters, and was failing to win voters  from other parties.
Revised:  A Guardian/ICM opinion poll yesterday found that while the Conservative's policy on immigration was popular with traditional Conservative voters, it was unpopular with undecided voters, and was failing to win voters from other parties.
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Original:  A Guardian/ICM opinion poll yesterday found that while the Conservative's policy on immigration was populat with tradition Conservative voters, it was unpopular with undecided voters, and was failing to win voters  from other parties.
Revised:  A Guardian/ICM opinion poll yesterday found that while the Conservative's policy on immigration was populat with tradition Conservative voters, it was unpopular with undecided voters, and was failing to win voters over from other parties.
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Original: An exhausted Charles Kennedy returned to the election campaign to launch a twenty page Liberal Democrat manifesto targeted at disaffected Labour voters, promising a fairer tax system and withdrawl from Iraq.
Revised: An exhausted Charles Kennedy returned to the election campaign to launch a twenty page Liberal Democrat manifesto targeted at disaffected Labour voters, promising a fairer tax system and withdrawal from Iraq.
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Original: The Auckland High Court injunction will prohibit footage being used on Sky programmes The Cup, and Reunion.
Revised: The High Court injunction will prohibit footage being used on Sky programmes The Cup, and Reunion.
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Original:  Sky-owned free-to-air channel, Prime Television , is also prohibited from using footage for The Crowd Goes Wild.
Revised:  Sky-owned free-to-air channel, , is also prohibited from using footage for The Crowd Goes Wild.
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Original:  MediaWorks has won their suit against the only pay television operator in New Zealand, Sky Network Television .
Revised:  has won their suit against the only pay television operator in New Zealand, Sky Network Television .
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Original:  MediaWorks has won their suit against the only pay television operator in New Zealand, Sky Network Television .
Revised:  MediaWorks has won their suit against the only pay television operator in New Zealand, .
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Original:  The injunction was first filed due to Sky broadcasting too much coverage of the Rugby World Cup, which TV3 ,  owned by MediaWorks, has the exclusive television rights to in New Zealand.
Revised:  The injunction was first filed due to Sky broadcasting too much coverage of the , owned by MediaWorks, has the exclusive television rights to in New Zealand.
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Original:  The injunction was first filed due to Sky broadcasting too much coverage of the Rugby World Cup, which TV3 ,  owned by MediaWorks, has the exclusive television rights to in New Zealand.
Revised:  The injunction was first filed due to Sky broadcasting too much coverage of the Rugby World Cup, which TV3 , which , owned by MediaWorks, has the exclusive television rights to in New Zealand.
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Original:  Sky-owned free-to-air channel, , is also prohibited from using footage for The Crowd Goes Wild .
Revised:  Sky-owned free-to-air channel, , is also prohibited from using footage for .
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