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Original:  They are currently gearing up for touring as support for Finnish symphonic power metal band Nightwish, as well as  a slot at the internationally famous Wacken Open Air festival in Germany.
Revised:  They recently provided support for Finnish symphonic power metal band Nightwish, as well as a slot at the internationally famous Wacken Open Air festival in Germany.
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Original:  They are currently gearing up for touring as support for Finnish symphonic power metal band Nightwish, as well as  a slot at the internationally famous Wacken Open Air festival in Germany.
Revised:  They are currently gearing up for touring as support for Finnish symphonic power metal band Nightwish, as well as receiving a slot at the internationally famous Wacken Open Air festival in Germany.
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Original:  Category (:)Interview Category(:)Europe Category(:)Germany Category(:) Culture and entertainment Category (:) Mus
Revised:  Category :Interview Category:Europe Category:Germany Category: Culture and entertainment Category (:) Mus
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Original:  Category (:)Interview Category(:)Europe Category(:)Germany Category(:) Culture and entertainment Category (:) Mus
Revised:  Category (:)Interview Category(:)Europe Category(:)Germany Category(:) Culture and entertainment Category : Mus
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Original:  Hailing from Germany, van Canto are what is called an a capella metal band, a pioneer of this as yet fairly unknown genre.
Revised:  Hailing from Germany, van Canto are what is called an a capella metal band, the pioneers of this new genre.
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Original:  Exactly a year later, van Canto anounced a worldwide signing to Gun Records/Sony BMG, and their debut was released worldwide on December 14.
Revised:  Exactly a year later, van Canto anounced a global signing to Gun Records/Sony BMG, and their debut was released worldwide on December 14.
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Original:  Van Canto are now going from strength to strength .
Revised:  Van Canto are now experiencing considerable success .
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Original:  In light of the band's recent success , van Canto have given their first interview in English, all previous interviews being in German or Italian.
Revised:  In light of recent events , van Canto have given their first interview in English, all previous interviews being in German or Italian.
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Original:   When A Storm to Come was first released, did you expect the rapid success you subsequently received?
Revised:  Bastian is my long time band mate since 12 years now. We played together in all our bands, only interrupted by the first van canto year, when he lived in China for one year. After he returned he was the first and only choice to follow up Strilli. When A Storm to Come was first released, did you expect the rapid success you subsequently received?
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Original:   How did you come to be selected for the Nightwish tour at such an early stage in the band's career?
Revised:  To be honest, from time to time we hoped it, but didn’t expect it. If you put that much time in a personal hobby and you notice that the result, the first songs, sound really great, of course you hope that other people like it as well. But the fact that we receive that much positive feedback in shortest time, without any support from a company or management makes us very happy. It shows that metal still works, there are thousands of people out there waiting for new music, fanzine authors working hours and hours on reviews and interviews without getting any money for it. It’s unbelievably great. How did you come to be selected for the Nightwish tour at such an early stage in the band's career?
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Original:   How easy or hard was it to get your world record deal?
Revised:  Of course! We played in front of 15.000 People within 24 hours and every magazine was there to see the first show of the new Nightwish singer in Germany. This was a great experience for us and the audience welcomed us very kindly. How easy or hard was it to get your world record deal?
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Original:   On the new album  When do you expect it to be released?
Revised:  We did this on our own as well. A friend of ours did all the writing, cutting and effects. We only had to pay a cameraman, a lighting technican and a make-up artist for 13 hours. It was great to see how many professional people have fun doing their work and not demand thousands of euros of a new formed band. On the new album When do you expect it to be released?
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Original:   Can you give us an idea of what to expect from the new material?
Revised:  That’s up to the record company, I think it will be released in summer, so that the Wacken crowd can sing out the new songs. Can you give us an idea of what to expect from the new material?
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Original:   Do you expect to release any singles this time round?
Revised:  Great. He’s a great guy with a very high musical understanding. Having worked with Blind Guardian he definitely knows how to push voices, and many of them, in the right direction. Do you expect to release any singles this time round?
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Original:   Do you anticipate comparable success with this album?
Revised:  It’s too early to tell, we will first finish the recordings and then see what we can do around the songs. Do you anticipate comparable success with this album?
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Original:   On Wacken Open Air  What about in terms of style?
Revised:  We wait for nothing but are thankful for everything happened so far and everything that is about to happen. Let’s see. On Wacken Open Air What about in terms of style?
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Original:   On Wacken Open Air  What about in terms of style?
Revised:  On Wacken Open Air Not daunted, but really exited. If we can really manage to shake hand with Iron Maiden I’m sure not being able to speak one comprehensible word, haha. But I guess every band playing on this year’s Wacken will try to shake hands with them so I better not too disappointed if it doesn’t work out. What about in terms of style?
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Original:   What are your opinions on the other acts there?
Revised:  On every festival we played so far, people were first irritated, then a little bit amused and not later than the third song we played most of the people were enthusiastic about our songs. I hope this will be the way it turns out to be in Wacken. What are your opinions on the other acts there?
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Original:   Will we see more new material than anything, or will you perform a mix?
Revised:  We don’t know yet. Will we see more new material than anything, or will you perform a mix?
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Original:   On the future of metal  Do you expect other bands to be influenced and encouraged by your success?
Revised:  This depends on how long our slot is, but I think the focus will be on the second album then. On the future of metal Do you expect other bands to be influenced and encouraged by your success?
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Original:   On the future of metal  Do you expect other bands to be influenced and encouraged by your success?
Revised:  On the future of metal I don’t know. I think it would be great if other bands tried out so we can share our experience and do not have to find out everything on our own, haha. Do you expect other bands to be influenced and encouraged by your success?
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Original:   Do you think the industry should be more accepting of fresh or unusual ideas?
Revised:  I hope so. When we get mails from musicians or metalbands influenced by our style of songwriting our by the courage for doing something new we feel really great. I only started playing music because I was inspired by other bands as a teenager, it would be great if we could inspire other musicians, too. Do you think the industry should be more accepting of fresh or unusual ideas?
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Original:   One subject that's been in the news a lot recently is bands complaining they feel exploited and/or by their record labels.
Revised:  I think the term “the industry” is too general for that kind of question. I think that today the chances to get heard are better than 10 years ago. Everybody can produce an “ok-sounding” album and put up a video in youtube. And if it’s done well and the idea sticks out, the industry will contact the band, which is their job, actually. One subject that's been in the news a lot recently is bands complaining they feel exploited and/or by their record labels.
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Original:   Another common complaint is about illegal downloading "killing" the indutry.
Revised:  We all had bad experiences with former bands and former record labels, but most of these labels have been one- or two-man-companies that didn’t have much money to invest. That’s why we decided to do everything on our own until we get a partner that is able to do all the things we do, only better. Another common complaint is about illegal downloading "killing" the indutry.
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Original:   What trends do you think we will see in metal over the next decade?
Revised:  Illegal downloading is not only killing the industry but also the bands behind. You can’t earn much money with music today, so of course I’m not happy when I read a comment under our youtube video saying “who can rip me the record? Where can I download it?”. I think we offer many possibilities for people who just want to check out one song: We have the youtube video, we have a stream player on our website and you can find lots of live bootlegs in the web. So if you really like the music you should buy a CD to give us the possibility to continue. But I think in metal most people act this way, they really buy CDs because they like to own the cover, the booklet and everything. It’s ok for us. What trends do you think we will see in metal over the next decade?
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Original:   What advice do you have for artists of any genre strugling to find acceptance from the industry? 
Revised:  I don’t know and that’s the interesting part of it. Metal has been declared being dead about 1000 times and every year there are new bands with new ideas, great musicians and lots of people listening. I think there is much more to come. What advice do you have for artists of any genre strugling to find acceptance from the industry? 
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Original: Related news Viewers can expect some of their favorite shows back on the airwaves this spring.
Revised: Related Viewers can expect some of their favorite shows back on the airwaves this spring.
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Original: Related news Executive producers for TV series, sometimes called show runners, are heading back to work before the guild takes a final vote.
Revised:  Executive producers for TV series, sometimes called show runners, are heading back to work before the guild takes a final vote.
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Original:  They are allowed back at work Monday under the stipulation that their work only consists of producer related tasks  
Revised:  They are allowed back at work Monday under the stipulation that their work only consists of producer related tasks . 
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Original: Local bar patrons have been evacuated away from the danger zone, as  20 fire engines and over 60 firefighters attempt to contain the blaze, which is shooting flames "30 feet in the air".
Revised: Local bar patrons have been evacuated away from the danger zone, as over 20 fire engines and over 60 firefighters attempt to contain the blaze, which is shooting flames "30 feet in the air".
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Original: Local bar patrons have been evacuated away from the danger zone, as  20 fire engines and over 60 firefighters attempt to contain the blaze, which is shooting flames "30 feet in the air".
Revised: Local bar patrons have been evacuated away from the danger zone, as 20 fire engines and over 60 firefighters attempt to contain the blaze, which has shooting flames "30 feet in the air".
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Original:  At least nine people in Baghdad, Iraq have become sick after eating cake poisoned with thallium and at least two children have died.
Revised: Thallium. At least nine people in Baghdad, Iraq have become sick after eating cake poisoned with thallium and at least two children have died.
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Original: Thallium. At least nine people in Baghdad, Iraq have become sick after eating cake poisoned with thallium and at least two children have died .
Revised: Thallium. At least nine people in Baghdad, Iraq have died after eating cake poisoned with thallium and at least two children have died .
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Original:  Two officials at the club then took the cake home, where members of the families at it.
Revised:  Two officials at the club then took the cake home, where members of the families ate it.
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Original:  We are urgently trying to discover how much thallium is out there and who would know how to utilise it," added the spokesman.
Revised:  We are urgently trying to discover how much thallium is out there and who would know how to utilize it," added the spokesman.
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Original:  Former Iraqi dictator Saddam Hussein used the poison against most of his enemies and it has not been used since his rule of the country.
Revised:  Former Iraqi dictator Saddam Hussein used the poison against many of his enemies and it has not been used since his rule of the country.
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Original:  Former Iraqi dictator Saddam Hussein used the poison against many of his enemies  and it has not been used since his rule of the country.
Revised:  Former Iraqi dictator Saddam Hussein used the poison against many of his enemies , and it has not been used since his rule of the country.
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Original: The German noble family of Waldburg-Wolfegg has sold the manuscript known as the "Medieval Housebook " to an unknown buyer.
Revised: The German noble family of Waldburg-Wolfegg has sold the manuscript known as the The Housebook to an unknown buyer.
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Original:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck Jr. and that the price paid was 20 million Euro .
Revised:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck and that the price paid was 20 million Euro .
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Original:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck Jr. and that the price paid was 20 million Euro .
Revised:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck Jr. and that the price paid was 20 million euro .
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Original:  The "Medieval Housebook " of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 for an unknown collector by the so-called „ Master of the Housebook “ (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
Revised:  The Housebook of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 for an unknown collector by the so-called „ Master of the Housebook “ (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
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Original:  The "Medieval Housebook " of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 for an unknown collector by the so-called „ Master of the Housebook “ (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
Revised:  The "Medieval Housebook " of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 by an artist known as the " Master of the Housebook “ (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
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Original:  The "Medieval Housebook " of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 for an unknown collector by the so-called „ Master of the Housebook “ (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
Revised:  The "Medieval Housebook " of Wolfegg is an illustrated manuscript that was created after 1480 for an unknown collector by the so-called „ Master of the Housebook " (or Master of the Amsterdam Cabinet) and possibly other artists.
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Original: It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the Regierungspräsium Tübingen which has the control according the law of "Fideikommiss" dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
Revised: It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the Regierungspräsidium Tübingen which has the control according the law of "Fideikommiss" dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
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Original:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck and that the price paid was  20 million euro .
Revised:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck and that the price paid was € 20 million euro .
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Original:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck and that the price paid was  20 million euro .
Revised:  There is speculation in the German press that it was purchased by Baron August von Finck and that the price paid was 20 million .
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Original:  It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the Regierungspräsidium Tübingen which has the control according the law of "Fideikommiss" dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
Revised:  It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the government of Tübingen which has the control according the law of "Fideikommiss" dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
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Original:  It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the Regierungspräsidium Tübingen which has the control according the law of "Fideikommiss" dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
Revised:  It is unclear whether the purchase is in fact legally valid because the manuscript was sold without the permission of the Regierungspräsidium Tübingen required by the law of fideikommiss dissolution (similar to the common law institution Fee tail).
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Original: Despite these wins it is still a close and tight race between the two Democratic candidates with Hillary Clinton showing a narrow lead over Obama in delegates.
Revised: Despite these wins it is still a close and race between the two Democratic candidates with Hillary Clinton showing a narrow lead over Obama in delegates.
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Original:  Either needs a simple majority of 2,025 delegates to secure the nomination   .
Revised:  Either needs a simple majority of 2,025 delegates to secure the nomination . .
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Original: Despite these wins it is still a close and race between the two Democratic candidates, with Obama showing a lead in pledged delegates, and Hillary Clinton showing a narrow lead when w:superdelegates are taken into account.
Revised: Despite these wins it is still a close and race between the two Democratic candidates, with Obama showing a lead in pledged delegates, and Hillary Clinton showing a narrow lead when super delegates are taken into account.
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Original:  Obama repeating many of the things he had said earlier in his "Yes We Can" speech, this time with detailed policy proposals as well as "hope-mongering" .
Revised:  Obama repeating many of the things he had said earlier in his "Yes We Can" speech, this time with detailed policy proposals as well as "hope-mongering" 
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Original:  The two candidates were in Maine today doing last minute campaigning before tomorrow's Democratic caucuses there and are also preparing for the "Potomac primary" which will involve the nation's capital of Washington, D.C. and the bordering states of Maryland and Virginia to be held on February 12
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Original:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play , ” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 or 1-800-621-3362 to find out the help that is available.”
Revised:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play ” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 or 1-800-621-3362 to find out the help that is available.”
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Original:  Later in the speech Mr.Bush said that he’s “sorry you're going through what you're going through,” to the residents of Macon County, where he was visiting.
Revised:  Later in the speech Mr.Bush said that he’s “sorry you're going through what you're going through,” to the residents of Macon County, which he was visiting.
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Original:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 or 1-800-621-3362 to  find out the help that is available.”
Revised:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 or 1-800-621-3362 to " find out the help that is available.”
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Original:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 or 1-800-621-3362 to "find out the help that is available.”
Revised:  In the visit Mr.Bush said that “the government has got a role to play” in repairing the damage from the tornado and that anyone who has been affected should call 1-800-621-3362 to "find out the help that is available.”
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Original: Barry Nielson, a Squardon leader with the RAF was quoted (BBC News) as saying "It's unusual, that's probably the best way to describe it.
Revised: Barry Nielson, a Squadron leader with the RAF was quoted (BBC News) as saying "It's unusual, that's probably the best way to describe it.
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Original: As the interiors of the Gate is off-limits to civilians, the Korean Fire Department initially eliminated the possibility of arson, and stated that an electric leakage from the night-time lights could have been the possible cause.
Revised: As the interiors of the Gate is off-limits to civilians, the Korean Fire Department initially eliminated the possibility of arson, and stated that an electric short or spark from the lighting could have been the possible cause.
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Original: At about 12:40 a.m. of the 11th, the second floor had collapsed  , and at 1: 30 a.m. the fire had spread to the first floor .
Revised: At about 12:40 a.m. of the 11th, the second floor had collapsed , and at 1: 30 a.m. the first floor collapsed .
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Original:  As the interiors of the  Gate is off-limits to civilians, the Korean Fire Department initially eliminated the possibility of arson, and stated that an electric short or spark from the  lighting could have been the possible cause.
Revised:  As the interiors of the Gate is off-limits to civilians, the Korean Fire Department initially eliminated the possibility of arson, and stated that an electric short or spark from the electric lighting could have been the possible cause.
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Original:  A taxi driver , identified by his surname Lee, has reported seeing a man in his fifties, climb up the staircase carrying a shopping bag, and Lee had alerted authorities after seeing sparks like fireworks inside the gate.
Revised:  A taxi driver , identified by his surname Lee, has reported seeing a man in his fifties, climb up the staircase carrying a shopping bag, shortly after seeing sparks like fireworks inside the gate.
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