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Original: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded  Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
Revised: Several British troops who received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
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Original: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded  Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
Revised: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen troops who fought and were wounded Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
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Original: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded  Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
Revised: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded in Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
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Original: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded  Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
Revised: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for HIV as well as Chagas, Hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
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Original: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded  Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV , and syphilis .
Revised: Several British troops have received blood transfusions from American emergency front-line donors which may have been contaminated with HIV, the virus known to cause AIDS and other possible diseases . Eighteen of the troops who fought and were wounded Afghanistan and Iraq are being tested for the virus and other illnesses such as Chagas, hepatitis B, HTLV and Syphilis .
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Original:  Grant, who had been staying at the Hollywood Roosevelt Hotel, was found dead in his bed by members of his staff around 7:00PM Wednesday (January 9th) evenin
Revised:  Grant, who had been staying at the Hollywood Roosevelt Hotel, was found dead in his bed by members of his staff around 7:00PM Wednesday (January 9th) evening
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Original: The death of longtime Los Angeles civic personality and honourary mayor Johnny Grant, who often presided at the installation of new stars at the Hollywood Walk of Fame, has been reported.
Revised: The death of longtime Los Angeles civic personality and honorary mayor Johnny Grant, who often presided at the installation of new stars at the Hollywood Walk of Fame, has been reported.
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Original:  The government blames Islamic militants linked to al-Qaida for the attacks.
Revised:  The government blames Islamic militants linked to al-Qaeda for the attacks.
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Original: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bomber was aiming at police , who were deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday , preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
Revised: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bombing was aiming at police , who were deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday , preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
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Original: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bomber was aiming at police , who were deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday , preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
Revised: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bomber was aiming at police deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday , preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
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Original: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bomber was aiming at police , who were deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday , preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
Revised: Lahore Police Chief Malik Iqbal says the bomber was aiming at police , who were deployed outside the Lahore courthouse Thursday preparing for an anti-government protest by lawyers.
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Original:  Two weeks ago , opposition leader and former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto was assassinated in a bomb and gunfire attack , as she left an election rally in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Two weeks ago opposition leader and former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto was assassinated in a bomb and gunfire attack , as she left an election rally in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Two weeks ago , opposition leader and former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto was assassinated in a bomb and gunfire attack , as she left an election rally in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Two weeks ago , opposition leader and former Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto was assassinated in a bomb and gunfire attack as she left an election rally in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  President Pervez Musharraf declared a state of emergency , last November , and suspended the constitution.
Revised:  President Pervez Musharraf declared a state of emergency last November and suspended the constitution.
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Original:  THAICOM, a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hizbullah propaganda network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
Revised:  THAICOM, a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbullah network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
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Original:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a major blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hizbullah on all fronts .
Revised:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hizbullah on all fronts .
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Original:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a major blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hizbullah on all fronts .
Revised:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a major blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hezbullah .
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Original:  The station was launched by Hizbollah in 1991 with the help of Iranian funds.
Revised:  The station was launched by Hezbollah in 1991 with the help of Iranian funds.
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Original:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hizbollah 's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the "$100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hizbollah itself.
Revised:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hezbollah 's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the "$100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hizbollah itself.
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Original:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hizbollah 's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the "$100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hizbollah itself.
Revised:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hizbollah 's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the "$100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hezbollah itself.
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Original:  Al-Manar officials strongly deny this, saying they are subsidized by the Hizbollah party and donations from other Muslms, not by Iran.
Revised:  Al-Manar officials strongly deny this, saying they are subsidized by the eizbollah party and donations from other Muslms, not by Iran.
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Original:  The self-proclaimed "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) , is a key player in what Hizbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
Revised:  Al-Manar calls itself the "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) , is a key player in what Hizbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
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Original:  The self-proclaimed "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) , is a key player in what Hizbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
Revised:  The self-proclaimed "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) and is a key player in what Hizbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
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Original:  The self-proclaimed "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) , is a key player in what Hizbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
Revised:  The self-proclaimed "Station of the Resistance" (qanat al-muqawama) , is a key player in what Hezbollah calls its "psychological warfare against the Zionist enemy"
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Original: The flag of Hezbullah which runs Al-Manar.
Revised: The flag of Hezbollah which runs Al-Manar.
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Original:  THAICOM, a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbullah network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
Revised:  THAICOM, a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbollah network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
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Original:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hezbullah . Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hizbullah , which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider terrorist organization.
Revised:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hezbollah . Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hizbullah , which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider terrorist organization.
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Original:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hezbullah . Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hizbullah , which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider terrorist organization.
Revised:  Al-Manar now can be viewed in Asia, Australia, Africa, the Middle East, and most of Europe, a blow to Israel who is trying to fight Hezbullah . Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hezbollah , which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider terrorist organization.
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Original:  Al-Manar is Hizbullah 's main communication tool, through which it spreads anti-Israeli, anti-Semitic, and anti-American incitement.
Revised:  Al-Manar is Hezbollah 's main communication tool, through which it spreads anti-Israeli, anti-Semitic, and anti-American incitement.
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Original: THAICOM , a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbollah network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
Revised: Thaicom , a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbollah network Al-Manar, much to Israel's discontent.
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Original:  THAICOM considers Al-Manar programming as "news and entertainment."
Revised:  Thaicom considers Al-Manar programming as "news and entertainment."
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Original:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hezbollah's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the "  $100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hezbollah itself.
Revised:  Critics claim al-Manar's agenda is influenced by Iran by virtue of the "significant portion" of Hezbollah's budget shortfall that is covered by Iran, via some of the " US $100 and $200 million a year" Iran provides to Hezbollah itself.
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Original:  Al-Manar officials strongly deny this, saying they are subsidized by the eizbollah party and donations from other Muslms , not by Iran.
Revised:  Al-Manar officials strongly deny this, saying they are subsidized by the eizbollah party and donations from other Muslims , not by Iran.
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Original:  Erlich is the head of the Terrorism Information Center in Herzliya, Israel  He added that the fact that Al-Manar can now be seen in south-east Asia, means that Indonesia and Malaysia, two countries with a large Muslim population, are open to its messages of hatred.
Revised:  Erlich is the head of the Terrorism Information Center in Herzliya, Israel . He added that the fact that Al-Manar can now be seen in south-east Asia, means that Indonesia and Malaysia, two countries with a large Muslim population, are open to its messages of hatred.
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Original:  THAICOM said it is considering its response and will only offer a formal reaction over the weekend adding the decision to transmit Al-Manar broadcasts was a "purely business decision, which had nothing to do with politics.
Revised:  Thaicom said it is considering its response and will only offer a formal reaction over the weekend adding the decision to transmit Al-Manar broadcasts was a "purely business decision, which had nothing to do with politics.
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Original:  Thaicom , a Thai satellite company has begun airing Hezbollah network Al-Manar , much to Israel's discontent.
Revised:  Thaicom , a Thai satellite company has begun airing network , much to Israel's discontent.
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Original:  Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hezbollah, which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider a terrorist organization .
Revised:  Many fear this will increase support and recruiting for Hezbollah, which the United States, Israel and some other countries consider a .
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Original:  Erlich is the head of the Terrorism Information Center in Herzliya , Israel.
Revised:  Erlich is the head of the Terrorism Information Center in , Israel.
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Original:  However, due to the Writers Guild of America strike, the traditional awards ceremony will not take place ;
Revised:  Due to the Writers Guild of America strike, the traditional awards ceremony will not take place ;
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Original:  However, due to the Writers Guild of America strike, the traditional awards ceremony will not take place ;
Revised:  However, due to the Writers Guild of America strike, the traditional awards ceremony will not take place 
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
Revised:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
Revised:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC 2
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). 2
Revised:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% instead, the winners will be announced at a news conference at 9:00 pm EST on that day (02:00 January 14 UTC ). . Were the winners will be announced.
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Original: |January 10, 2008 The 65th Golden Globe Awards, honoring the best in film and television of 2007, were scheduled to be presented by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association on January 13, 2008.
Revised:  The 65th Golden Globe Awards, honoring the best in film and television of 2007, were scheduled to be presented by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association on January 13, 2008.
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Original:  and a one-hour edition of Access Hollywood visiting sites of the various previously-scheduled parties, starting at 10:00pm EST. 3 The nominees were announced on December 13, 2007. 4 
Revised:  and a one-hour edition of Access Hollywood visiting sites of the various previously-scheduled parties, starting at 10:00pm EST. 3 4 
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Original:  Winners The televised event will be replaced by a news conference on Sunday at the Hilton hotel in Beverly Hills, California  .
Revised:  Winners The televised event will be replaced by a news conference at the Hilton hotel in Beverly Hills, California .
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Original:  The annual Golden Globe Awards are conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association (HFPA) and honour television and motion picture achievements.
Revised:  The Golden Globe Awards are conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association (HFPA) and honour television and motion picture achievements.
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Original:  They are a prelude to next month's next month's Academy Awards , whose ceremony and telecast are also in jeopardy if the strike continues.
Revised:  They are a prelude to next month's next month's Academy Awards whose ceremony and telecast are also in jeopardy if the strike continues.
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Original:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today  at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) of an Heart Attack .
Revised:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) of an Heart Attack .
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Original:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today  at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) of an Heart Attack .
Revised:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) .
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Original:  Sir Hillary is survived by his second wife, Lady June Mulgrew, and the other children from his first marriage, Peter and Sarah.
Revised:  Sir Edmund is survived by his second wife, Lady June Mulgrew, and the other children from his first marriage, Peter and Sarah.
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Original:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13)  .
Revised:  ]] New Zealand mountaineer Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) .
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Original:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13)  .
Revised:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died of a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) .
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Original:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at age 88 at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13)  .
Revised:  ]] New Zealand mountain-climber Sir Edmund Hillary died today from a heart attack at the Auckland City Hospital at 9am NZDT (UTC+13) .
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Original:  Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay were the first two to reach the summit of Mount Everest, the tallest mountain on earth.
Revised:  Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay became the first climbers to attain the summit of Mount Everest, the tallest mountain on earth.
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Original:  Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay were the first two to reach the summit of Mount Everest, the tallest mountain on earth.
Revised:  Sir Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay were the first two to reach the summit of Mount Everest, the tallest peak on earth.
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Original:  After summiting Everest, Sir Hillary was , among other recognition, made a Knight Commander of Order of the British Empire and a member of the Order of New Zealand.
Revised:  Hillary was made a Knight Commander of Order of the British Empire and a member of the Order of New Zealand.
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Original:  He was made an honorary citizen of Nepal in 2003 for his humanitarian work for the people of Nepal.
Revised:  He was awarded honorary citizenship of Nepal in 2003 for his humanitarian work for the people of Nepal.
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Original: Hillary was made a Knight Commander of  Order of the British Empire and a member of the Order of New Zealand.
Revised: Hillary was made a Knight Commander of the Order of the British Empire and a member of the Order of New Zealand.
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Original:  A spokesman said the group would  gather material in the Syrian capital before heading to Beirut.
Revised:  A spokesman said the group would first gather material in the Syrian capital before heading to Beirut.
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Original:  Verifying the troop withdrwal will be the fairly simple.
Revised:  Verifying the troop withdrawal will be fairly simple.
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Original:  The more difficult task will be identifying whether if all the intelligence assets are gone.
Revised:  The more difficult task will be identifying whether all the intelligence assets are gone.
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Original:  These are not the uniformed groups, but members of the security services found at all levels of Lebanese society , the social, political and military echelons.
Revised:  These are not the uniformed groups, but members of the security services found at all levels of Lebanese society ; the social, political and military echelons.
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Original:  Lebanon region mapGNU The Lebanese government, led by Bashar al-Assad, needs to make quick political reforms to ensure the survival of his regime .
Revised:  Lebanon region mapGNU The Lebanese government, led by Bashar al-Assad, will need to make quick political reforms to ensure the survival of his regime .
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Original:  Lebanon region mapGNU The Lebanese government, led by Bashar al-Assad, needs to make quick political reforms to ensure the survival of his regime .
Revised:  Lebanon region mapGNU The Lebanese government, led by Bashar al-Assad, needs to make quick political reforms if his regime is to survive .
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