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Original:  According to Nicoletta Mantovani, Pavarotti's wife, he has also been receiving radiation treatments.
Revised:  According to Nicoletta Mantovani, Pavarotti's wife, he had also been receiving radiation treatments.
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Original:  The cause of the fever was unknown, however some reports stated that he was being treated for pneumonia.
Revised:  The cause of the fever was unknown, however some 
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Original: 200px| Pavarotti in 1983.
Revised: 200px| Luciano Pavarotti
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Original:  In fitting with the approach that characterised his life and work, he remained positive until finally succumbing to the last stages of his illness," said Terri Robson, Pavarotti's manager in a statement to the press.
Revised:  In fitting with the approach that characterized his life and work, he remained positive until finally succumbing to the last stages of his illness," said Terri Robson, Pavarotti's manager in a statement to the press.
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Original:  The opera house where he performed for the first time 40 years ago, La Scala opera house in Milan, stated it will organise a singing contest in honour of the Italian tenor.
Revised:  The opera house where he performed for the first time 40 years ago, La Scala opera house in Milan, stated it will organize a singing contest in honour of the Italian tenor.
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Original:  The opera house where he performed for the first time 40 years ago, La Scala opera house in Milan, stated it will organise a singing contest in honour of the Italian tenor.
Revised:  The opera house where he performed for the first time 40 years ago, La Scala opera house in Milan, stated it will organise a singing contest in honor of the Italian tenor.
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Original:  Oil prices have been close to record levels recently, but light sweet crude fell $1.85 to US$51.86 on Tuesday, after the International Energy Agency issued a prediction that interest rates and fuel costs would slow down demand for oil  
Revised:  Oil prices have been close to record levels recently, but light sweet crude fell $1.85 to US$51.86 on Tuesday, after the International Energy Agency issued a prediction that interest rates and fuel costs would slow down demand for oil . 
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Original: The Chaser had tried unsuccessfully yesterday to breach security when they dressed up as a NSW Police horse .
Revised: The Chaser had tried unsuccessfully yesterday to breach security when they dressed up as a NSW Police horse 
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Original:  On April 25, 2007 The Chaser successfully asked Jimbo Wales 10 questions during his visit to Sydney as a part of a segment for The Chaser's War on Everything series
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Original: One week into campaigning in the United Kingdom general election, the leader of the Liberal Democratic party, Charles Kennedy , has become a father.
Revised: One week into campaigning in the United Kingdom general election, the leader of the Liberal Democratic party, Charles Kenedy , has become a father.
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Original:  Kenedy 's wife, Sarah, was taken to St Thomas' Hospital, London, yesterday, and Donald James Kennedy was born just after midnight.
Revised:  Kennedy 's wife, Sarah, was taken to St Thomas' Hospital, London, yesterday, and Donald James Kennedy was born just after midnight.
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Original:  Deputy leader, Menzies Campbell, and other senior candidates were relieving Mr Kennedy of campaign duties
Revised:  Deputy leader, Menzies Campbell, and other senior candidates relieved Kenedy of campaign dutues
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Original: One week into campaigning in the United Kingdom general election, the leader of the Liberal Democratic party, Charles Kenedy , has become a father.
Revised: One week into campaigning in the United Kingdom general election, the leader of the Liberal Democratic party, Charles Kennedy , has become a father.
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Original: "There are reports that I was in the hospital this weekend , Kevin and I just want everyone to know that all is well," she says.
Revised: "There are reports that I was in the hospital this weekend . Kevin and I just want everyone to know that all is well," she says.
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Original:  Her publicist, Sonia Muckle, confirmed the singer's pregnancy Tuesday  gave no further information.
Revised:  Her publicist, Sonia Muckle, confirmed the singer's pregnancy Tuesday but gave no further information.
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Original:  The happy couple met last year when he was a backup dancer on her tour and his girlfriend was pregnant with their so
Revised:  He met Spears last year when he was a backup dancer on her tour and his girlfriend was pregnant with their so
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Original:  The happy couple met last year when he was a backup dancer on her tour and his girlfriend was pregnant with their so
Revised:  The happy couple met last year when he was a backup dancer on her tour and his girlfriend was pregnant with their son
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Original: Britney, 23, is preggers . "There are reports that I was in the hospital this weekend.
Revised: Britney, 23, is pregnant . "There are reports that I was in the hospital this weekend.
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Original: 200px|Britney Spears performs on the National Mall ''Source: US Navy file photo Following weeks of speculation in the gossip mills, and sneaky photographers following her moves through maternity shops, the facts have hit the fans.
Revised: 200px|Britney Spears performs on the National Mall ''Source: US Navy file photo Following weeks of speculation in some media quarters, it has been announced that
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Original: 200px|Britney Spears performs on the National Mall ''Source: US Navy file photo Following weeks of speculation in some media quarters, it has been announced that Britney  , 23, is pregnant.
Revised: 200px|Britney Spears performs on the National Mall ''Source: US Navy file photo Following weeks of speculation in some media quarters, it has been announced that Britney Spears , 23, is pregnant.
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Original:  In a posting on her Web site, Spears told fans that she and husband, Kevin Federline, 27, were expecting their first child together.
Revised:  In a posting on her Web site, Spears announced that she and husband, Kevin Federline, 27, were expecting their first child together.
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Original:  Other characters came from the Belgian comic albums of Tintin, from the fairy tale Peter Pan, there was a Roman soldier, a Tarzan look-a-like, a Chiquita Banana, and more    
Revised:  Other characters came from the Belgian comic albums of Tintin, from the fairy tale Peter Pan, there was a Roman soldier, a Tarzan look-a-like, a Chiquita Banana, and more . 
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Original:  Other characters came from the Belgian comic albums of Tintin, from the fairy tale Peter Pan, there was a Roman soldier, a Tarzan look-a-like, a Chiquita Banana, and more    
Revised:  Other characters came from the Belgian comic albums of Tintin, from the fairy tale Peter Pan, there was a Roman soldier, a Tarzan look-a-like, a Chiquita Banana, and more Gallery 
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Original:  The eight Russian Tupolev Tu-95 Bear aircraft where flight a losse formation in pairs
Revised:  The eight Russian Tupolev Tu-95 Bear aircraft where flighing a losse formation in pairs
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Original: The UK 's Royal Air Force has launched fighter jets to intercept eight Russian military planes  flying in airspace patrolled by NATO, UK officials say.
Revised: The UK 's Royal Air Force to intercept Russian military planes flying in airspace patrolled by NATO, UK officials say.
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Original: Game in progress Bot 6th: Cardinals 14, Pirates 3 : Rick Ankiel is 3-4 with 7 RBI , including a three-run and a two-run homer (8, 9), and a two-run double.
Revised: Game in progress Bot 6th: Cardinals 14, Pirates 3 : Rick Ankiel led the Cardinals, going 3-4 with 7 RBI , including a three-run and a two-run homer (8, 9), and a two-run double.
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Original:  Game in progress Bot 3rd : Indians 1, Angels 0: The only run of the game was a 3rd inning  RBI double by Kelly Shoppach 
Revised:  Game in progress Bot 3rd : Indians 1, Angels 0: The only run of the game was a 3rd inning off an RBI double by Kelly Shoppach 
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Original:  The Tigers (75-65) trail the Indians by 6.5 games, pending the results of the Indians-Angels game, and trail the Yankees by 3 games in the AL Wild Card race.
Revised:  The Tigers (75-65) trail the Indians by 6 games, pending the results of the Indians-Angels game, and trail the Yankees by 3 games in the AL Wild Card race.
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Original:  Strangely, the neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, said that dog's could cut their feet.
Revised:  A local neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, said that dog's could cut their feet.
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Original:  Strangely, the neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, said that dog's could cut their feet.
Revised:  Strangely, the neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, worried that dogs could cut their feet.
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Original: Durham Regional Police are now investigating what they refer to as an "incident", and what lobby group B'nai Brith Canada has argued constitutes a "hate crime"  A local neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, worried that dogs could cut their feet.
Revised: Durham Regional Police are now investigating what they refer to as an "incident", and what lobby group B'nai Brith Canada has argued constitutes a "hate crime" . A local neighbour, who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, worried that dogs could cut their feet.
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Original:  She said the tenants were private people    .
Revised:  She said the tenants were private people . .
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Original: The terms "Kike", "Fuck Jews," and "White Power" were graffitied in white around the house, as well as a large green swastika  .
Revised: The terms "Kike", "Fuck Jews," and "White Power" were graffitied in the house, as well as a large green swastika .
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Original:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre, to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . Bought to start an antique store, the Schwarz 's started a cattle business instead and later rented it out.
Revised:  The house was purchased by Joe Schwarz, Mrs. Schwarz's husband for a 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . Bought to start an antique store, the Schwarz 's started a cattle business instead and later rented it out.
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Original:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre, to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . Bought to start an antique store, the Schwarz 's started a cattle business instead and later rented it out.
Revised:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre, to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . The location was to be an antique store, the Schwarz 's started a cattle business instead and later rented it out.
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Original:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre, to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . Bought to start an antique store, the Schwarz 's started a cattle business instead and later rented it out.
Revised:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre, to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it . Bought to start an antique store, but due to health issues, Mrs. Schwarz instead decided to rent it out.
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Original:   Ten years ago their tenant started to rent the house, just five months ago he stopped paying rent saying he was on welfare .Ms. Schwarz offered to lower his rent.
Revised:  Ten years ago their tenant started to rent the house, just five months ago he stopped paying rent saying he couldn't afford the rent anymore .Ms. Schwarz offered to lower his rent.
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Original:  He vandalised and fled, with his son and daughter, from the house on Tuesday morning, the day he was to be evicted.
Revised:  When they visited the house on Tuesday morning, the day he was to be evicted.
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Original:  He vandalised and fled, with his son and daughter, from the house on Tuesday morning, the day he was to be evicted.
Revised:  He vandalised and fled, with his son and daughter, from the house on the day he was to be evicted.
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Original:  They never anticipated ever facing the same kind of symbolism they had to leave Germany for ."
Revised:  This is the first time they have ever had to contend with hatred ."
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Original:  The Schwarz's have been in the cattle business in the Bowmanville, Ontario area since 1938.
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Original: 82-year-old Jewish Bowmanville, Ontario woman Ms. Marion Schwarz's house has been found vandalised with graffiti showing neo-Nazism expressions, as well as swastikas.
Revised: 82-year-old Jewish Bowmanville, Ontario woman Ms. Marion Schwarz's house has been found vandalized with graffiti showing neo-Nazism expressions, as well as swastikas.
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Original:  The terms "Kike", "Fuck Jews," and "White Power" were graffitied in white around the house, as well as a large green swastika.
Revised:  The terms "Kike", "Fuck Jews," and "White Power" were written in white around the house, as well as a large green swastika.
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Original:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's centre , to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it.
Revised:  The woman's husband Mr. Allan Schwarz, was returning home to their house on King Street East, the town's center , to bring home a present for their 40th wedding anniversary when he found the house not the way he left it.
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Original:  He vandalised and fled, with his son and daughter, from the house on Tuesday morning, the day he was to be evicted.
Revised:  He vandalized and fled, with his son and daughter, from the house on Tuesday morning, the day he was to be evicted.
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Original:  A local neighbour , who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, worried that dogs could cut their feet.
Revised:  A local neighbor , who asked not to be named, swept glass from the broken windows off the sidewalk, worried that dogs could cut their feet.
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Original:  Trudeau and Mulroney are both from Quebec.
Revised:  Both prime ministers were from Quebec.
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Original:  " I wasn't angry when I read it;
Revised:  I wasn't angry when I read it;
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Original:  " I just think it's sad that this former prime minister (Mulroney) is still so consumed by his predecessor that he's spending time attacking a man who's dead rather than talking about his own accomplishments.
Revised:  I just think it's sad that this former prime minister (Mulroney) is still so consumed by his predecessor that he's spending time attacking a man who's dead rather than talking about his own accomplishments.
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Original:  Initially broken by Wired, the articles highlighted edits from network addresses assigned to Diebold , and the CIA  and encouraged readers to reveal and share their findings.
Revised:  Initially broken by Wired, the articles highlighted edits from network addresses assigned to Diebold and the CIA and encouraged readers to reveal and share their findings.
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Original:  Initially broken by Wired, the articles highlighted edits from network addresses assigned to Diebold , and the CIA  and encouraged readers to reveal and share their findings.
Revised:  Initially broken by Wired, the articles highlighted edits from network addresses assigned to Diebold , and the CIA , and encouraged readers to reveal and share their findings.
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Original:  Some of the edits could be characterized as an attempt conceal criticism voiced in the documentary Outfoxed: Rupert Murdoch's War on Journalism which alleging bias by FOX News.
Revised:  Some of the edits could be characterized as an attempt conceal criticism voiced in the documentary Outfoxed: Rupert Murdoch's War on Journalism which alleges bias by FOX News.
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Original:  There has been no photos released of bin Laden since 2004, and the last known audio message he recorded is reported to have been made over a year ago.
Revised:  There have been no photos released of bin Laden since 2004, and the last known audio message he recorded is reported to have been made over a year ago.
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Original: Osama bin Laden The leader of al-Qaeda, Osama bin Laden is expected to release videotaped message to the American people on or before next week's sixth anniversary of the September 11 attacks on the United States in 2001.
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Original:  The SITE Institute and IntelCenter, two U.S. based terrorist monitoring groups have stated an announcement, in the name of al-Qaeda's media-production arm, As-Sahab, seen on an Islamist website this week indicates the new al-Qaeda video is about to be released.
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Original:  The U.S. states that capturing Bin Laden is still a top priority.
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Original:  Townsend also stated that the videotape is likely propaganda, but the U.S. will still monitor the situation
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Original:  They also flew into Syria just before they began an armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon  .
Revised:  They also flew into Syria just before the armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon .
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Original:  They also flew into Syria just before they began an armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon  .
Revised:  They also flew into Syria just before they began an armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon has begun .
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Original:  They also flew into Syria just before the armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon has begun.
Revised:  They also flew into Syria just before the armed conflict with Hezbollah in Lebanon had begun.
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Original: The NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
Revised: The *NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
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Original: The *NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
Revised: The NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
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Original: The NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
Revised: The NFLNFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
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Original: The NFLNFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
Revised: The NFL Season has kicked off as the Indianapolis Colts hosted the New Orleans Saints.
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Original: On 13 September, w:JAXA plans to launch the w: SELENE lunar orbiter and several smaller satellites from Tanegashima, on an w:H-IIA rocket.
Revised: An H-IIA rocket, carrying the SELENE lunar orbiter and several smaller satellites from Tanegashima, on an w:H-IIA rocket.
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Original:  The launch, conducted at 01:31 GMT by Mitsubishi Heavy Industries for the Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency  , begins the voyage of SELENE to the Moon.
Revised:  The launch, conducted at 01:31 GMT by Mitsubishi Heavy Industries for the Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency (JAXA) , begins the voyage of SELENE to the Moon.
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Original:  The launch, conducted at 01:31 GMT by Mitsubishi Heavy Industries for the Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency (JAXA), begins the voyage of SELENE to the Moon  . JAXA was   forced to delay the launch by two days, with the launch originally scheduled to occur on September 11th, 2007
Revised:  The launch, conducted at 01:31 GMT by Mitsubishi Heavy Industries for the Japan Aerospace Exploration Agency (JAXA), begins the voyage of SELENE to the Moon . JAXA was forced to delay the launch by two days, with the launch originally scheduled to occur on September 11
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Original: Cast and crew of Australian TV Show, The Chaser's War on Everything could have been shot during a prank staged in Sydney where they breached APEC security , the highest ranking police officer in NSW said today .
Revised: According to the highest ranking police officer in New South Wales, the cast and crew of Australian TV Show, The Chaser's War on Everything could have been shot during a prank staged in Sydney where they breached APEC security , the highest ranking police officer in NSW said today .
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Original: Cast and crew of Australian TV Show, The Chaser's War on Everything could have been shot during a prank staged in Sydney where they breached APEC security , the highest ranking police officer in NSW said today .
Revised: Cast and crew of Australian TV Show, The Chaser's War on Everything could have been shot during a prank staged in Sydney where they breached APEC security .
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Original:  It is believed that the motorcade was waved through security checkpoints on Macquarie Street and ended up just metres from the hotel where US President George W. Bush.
Revised:  It is believed that the motorcade was waved through security checkpoints on Macquarie Street and ended up just metres from the hotel where United States President George W. Bush.
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Original:  Police became suspicious when one of the pranksters emerged from The convoy was waved through security checkpoints on Macquarie Street and came within metres of the hotel where US President George W. Bush is staying.
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Original:  Police moved in on the group when one of the pranksters emerged from a vehicle dressed as Osama bin Laden.
Revised:  moved in on the group when one of the pranksters emerged from a vehicle dressed as Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  "The people that were involved were told - we told them, we sent them maps, " " We made it very clear that they shouldn't do stunts, particularly those that were going to be dangerous," said Mr Scipione.
Revised:  "The people that were involved were told - we told them, we sent them maps, " We made it very clear that they shouldn't do stunts, particularly those that were going to be dangerous," said Mr Scipione.
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Original:  "The people that were involved were told - we told them, we sent them maps, " " We made it very clear that they shouldn't do stunts, particularly those that were going to be dangerous," said Mr Scipione.
Revised:  "The people that were involved were told - we told them, we sent them maps, " ... We made it very clear that they shouldn't do stunts, particularly those that were going to be dangerous," said Mr Scipione.
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