wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Reporters Without Borders secretary-general Jean-François Julliard said at the release of the 2009 Press Freedom Index , "It is disturbing to see European democracies such as France, Italy and Slovakia fall steadily in the rankings year after year [...] Europe should be setting an example as regards civil liberties.
Revised:  Reporters Without Borders secretary-general Jean-François Julliard said at the release of the 2009 Press Freedom Index : "It is disturbing to see European democracies such as France, Italy and Slovakia fall steadily in the rankings year after year [...] Europe should be setting an example as regards civil liberties.
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Original:  Asia The press is censored in the People's Republic of China by the Golden Shield Project , known colloquially as the Great Firewall of China.
Revised:  Asia The press is censored in the People's Republic of China through the Golden Shield Project , known colloquially as the Great Firewall of China.
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Original:  Asia The press is censored in the People's Republic of China by the Golden Shield Project , known colloquially as the Great Firewall of China.
Revised:  Asia The press is censored in the People's Republic of China by the Golden Shield Project known worldwide as the Great Firewall of China.
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Original:  Both countries exhibit little journalistic freedom and are both known for their unstable transitional governments and near constant warfare.
Revised:  Both countries exhibit little journalistic freedom and are infamous for their unstable transitional governments and near constant warfare.
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Original:  URL & URL Struggles Where newspapers used to represent an exclusive connection between readers and advertisers, print media must now compete with the power of the entire Internet.
Revised:  URL & URL Struggles Where newspapers used to represent an exclusive connection between readers and advertisers, print media now competes with the power of the entire Internet.
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Original:  URL & URL Struggles Where newspapers used to represent an exclusive connection between readers and advertisers, print media must now compete with the power of the entire Internet.
Revised:  URL & URL Struggles Where newspapers used to represent an exclusive connection between readers and advertisers, print media must now compete with the power of the Internet.
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Original:  Some  have speculated that the youth today are more visually inclined, and are therefore less likely to be influenced by written political news or propaganda.
Revised:  Some old people out there have speculated that the youth today are more visually inclined, and are therefore less likely to be influenced by written political news or propaganda.
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Original:  One Pew Center study found that 28\% of this generation read the paper on a given day, and average only 10 minutes of reading time.
Revised:  One Pew Center study found that 28\% of this generation read the paper in a day, and average only 10 minutes of reading time.
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Original:  Harvard Professor Thomas Patterson has said: "What's happened over time is that we have become more of a viewing nation than a reading nation, and the internet is a little of both.
Revised:  Harvard Professor Thomas Patterson said: "What's happened over time is that we have become more of a viewing nation than a reading nation, and the internet is a little of both.
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Original: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a major modern Western PMC, with respect to the decline of representative political and legal processes and the consequent erosion of and dangers to the public interest in a Western democracy, is captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
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Original:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of the UK parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
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Original:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
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Original:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the organization on the former two institutions.
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Original:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the former two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK ) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( NI UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the latter organization on the two institutions.
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Original:  The debate was precipitated by the some of the information procurement methods found to have been used by the now-defunct major British Sunday newspaper News of the World, which was owned by NI.
Revised:  The debate was precipitated by some of the information procurement methods found to have been used by the now-defunct major British Sunday newspaper News of the World, which was owned by NI.
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Original:  The debate was precipitated by the some of the information procurement methods found to have been used by the now-defunct major British Sunday newspaper News of the World, which was owned by NI.
Revised:  The debate was precipitated by the some of the information procurement methods found to have been used by the now-defunct British Sunday newspaper News of the World, which was owned by NI.
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Original:  The Parliamentary turmoil resulted in the UK government instituting a three-pronged public judicial examination known as the Leveson Inquiry into the relations and interactions between the media and the public, the media and the police and the media and the politicians.
Revised:  The Parliamentary scandal resulted in the UK government instituting a three-pronged public judicial examination known as the Leveson Inquiry into the relations and interactions between the media and the public, the media and the police and the media and the politicians.
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Original:  While the Leveson findings are oriented toward the PMC of the UK, some commentators argued that its findings will have global implications through their relevance to similar existing networks in other countries . Noam Chomsky reaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Linguist and dissident Noam Chomsky warned that naming (as a "complex")
Revised:  While the Leveson findings are oriented toward the PMC of the UK, some commentators argued that its findings will have global implications through their relevance to similar existing networks in other countries Noam Chomsky reaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Linguist and dissident Noam Chomsky warned that naming (as a "complex")
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Original:  While the Leveson findings are oriented toward the PMC of the UK, some commentators argued that its findings will have global implications through their relevance to similar existing networks in other countries . Noam Chomsky reaction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Linguist and dissident Noam Chomsky warned that naming (as a "complex")
Revised:  While the Leveson findings are oriented toward the PMC of the UK, some commentators argued that its findings will have global implications through their relevance to similar existing networks in other countries . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Linguist and dissident Noam Chomsky warned that naming (as a "complex")
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Original:  Chomsky discusses the military-industrial complex (MIC) and argues that its embedded behavior is not just about the "military" but also the modern economy, of which that behavior is at the heart and does not have much to do with freedom (of choice) or democracy.
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Original:  Political writer George Orwell noted " a%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ll the papers that matter live off their advertisements and the advertisers exercise an indirect censorship over the news."
Revised:  Political writer George Orwell noted " %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% ll the papers that matter live off their advertisements and the advertisers exercise an indirect censorship over the news."
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Original:  The influence corporations exert on the media through advertising (corroboration of Herman and Chomsky's propaganda model filters through advertising) were illustrated in the closure of News International's 168-year-old flagship Sunday title, the News of the World when major advertisers boycotted the paper as a consequence of the "phone hacking scandal", as they did not wish to be associated with a paper whose production was based on frequent engagement in serious criminal activity.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% From Chomsky's perspective, whatever set of interactions is being referred to as the politico-media complex represents the propaganda model to manufacture consent in the service of the industrial system
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Original: National cinema One of the film's most powerful political and sociological forms is national cinema, for which there are entire books for individual countries and varying definitions.
Revised: National cinema One of the film's most powerful forms is national cinema, for which there are entire books for individual countries and varying definitions.
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p. 3 Through the national cinema, ideological groups within specific countries can construct and reinforce their collective identities through film, as well as the identities of foreigners .
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p. 3 Through the cinema, ideological groups within specific countries can construct and reinforce their collective identities through film, as well as the identities of foreigners .
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft said that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i in the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more transnationally powerful, assertive and successful than others.
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p.22-26 Cultural politics Ulf Hedetoft observed that " i n the real world of politics and influence, certain nationalisms, cultures, ideas, and interpretations are more powerful, assertive and successful than others.
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Original:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p. 280 He goes on, however, to say that these more transnationally powerful films actually become de-nationalized as a result of its "national-cultural currency" more widely and easily dispersed, mixing with other cultures, becoming either a "positive admixture" to other countries' cultures and identities or a "model for emulation."
Revised:  New York: Routledge, 2000. p. 280 He also said that the same films actually become de-nationalized as a result of its "national-cultural currency" more widely and easily dispersed, mixing with other cultures, becoming either a "positive admixture" to other countries' cultures and identities or a "model for emulation."
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Original:  Leif Furhammar and Folke Isaksson credit Russian producers Sergei Eisenstein and Vsevolod Pudovkin  with the birth of propaganda aesthetics, for which the underlying assumption was that by manipulating cinematic images representing reality, they could manipulate spectators' concepts of reality.
Revised:  Russian producers Sergei Eisenstein and Vsevolod Pudovkin with the birth of propaganda aesthetics, for which the underlying assumption was that by manipulating cinematic images representing reality, they could manipulate spectators' concepts of reality.
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Original:  Leif Furhammar and Folke Isaksson credit Russian producers Sergei Eisenstein and Vsevolod Pudovkin  with the birth of propaganda aesthetics, for which the underlying assumption was that by manipulating cinematic images representing reality, they could manipulate spectators' concepts of reality.
Revised:  Leif Furhammar and Folke Isaksson credit Russian producers Sergei Eisenstein and Vsevolod Pudovkin are credited with the birth of propaganda aesthetics, for which the underlying assumption was that by manipulating cinematic images representing reality, they could manipulate spectators' concepts of reality.
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Original: Furhammar, p. 152. Documentaries can be an even more effective form of propaganda than other genre films because the form of representation claims to mirror reality, making obfuscation of manipulating an audience easier.
Revised: Furhammar, p. 152. Documentaries can be an even more effective form of propaganda than other genre films because the form of representation claims to mirror reality, making obfuscation of brainwashing an audience easier.
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Original:  2008. After World War I  radio was introduced to broader civilian audiences when Westinghouse released the Aeriola Jr. in 1919, and the Radio Corporation of America (RCA) released the Radiola in 1920.
Revised:  2008. After World War I , radio was introduced to broader civilian audiences when Westinghouse released the Aeriola Jr. in 1919, and the Radio Corporation of America (RCA) released the Radiola in 1920.
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Original:  The close politico-media complex between government and radio was finalized in 1924 when the Republican and Democratic National Conventions were covered, and candidates made the eve of election speeches, the first instance of radio broadcasting that was meant to affect the American political process.
Revised:  The close politico-media complex between government and radio was evident in 1924 when the Republican and Democratic National Conventions were covered, and candidates made the eve of election speeches, the first instance of radio broadcasting that was meant to affect the American political process.
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Original: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political  class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major reappraisal of the relationship between a political class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political  class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political elite/ class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political  class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debate in 2011House of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
Revised: The first major switch-up of the relationship between a political class and the media in a Western country was captured in excerpts from three contributions to an emergency three-hour debateHouse of Commons Hansard Debates for 06 July 2011, Phone Hacking Column 1534.
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Original:  These comments refer to the  effects of the relationships between the members of the UK parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International (  UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the  organization on the  two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the apparent effects of the relationships between the members of the UK parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the organization on the two institutions.
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Original:  These comments refer to the  effects of the relationships between the members of the UK parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International (  UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the  organization on the  two institutions.
Revised:  These comments refer to the effects of the relationships between the members of (the UK) parliament and those that form the UK Government, the Metropolitan Police and News International ( UK subsidiary of News Corporation ) and the influence of the organization on the two institutions.
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