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Original:  155 passengers and an unknown number of crew on board a Lloyd Aereo Boliviano (LAB) Boeing 727-200 have escaped after the aircraft crash landed in a swamp in Bolivia.
Revised:  155 passengers and an unknown number of crew on board a Lloyd Aereo Boliviano (LAB) Boeing 727-200 have escaped after the aircraft crash landed in swampland in Bolivia.
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Original:  The plane was severely damaged, with the New York Times reporting that photographs of the scene showed ne wing of the aicraft to have seperated from the fuselage. 
Revised:  The plane was severely damaged, with the New York Times reporting that photographs of the scene showed at least one wing of the aicraft to have seperated from the fuselage. 
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Original:  French radio station RTL announced today that President Nicolas Sarkozy has married his Italian girlfriend Carla Bruni at the Élysée Palace.
Revised: President Nicolas Sarkozy. French radio station RTL announced today that President Nicolas Sarkozy has married his Italian girlfriend Carla Bruni at the Élysée Palace.
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Original: If confirmed, Sarkozy would be the first French President to marry during his office, after already becoming the first one to divorce.
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Original:  Bruni, 40, is a former model who started a carrier as a singer.
Revised:  Bruni, 40, is a former model who started a career as a singer.
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Original:  Each year, for the past 118 years, thousands and thousands of people have traveled to the Pennsylvania town of Punxsutawney ( about 65 miles northeast of Pittsburgh ) on February 2nd to see if the groundhog named Phil predicted more winter weather or an early spring.
Revised:  Each year, for the past 118 years, thousands and thousands of people have traveled to the Pennsylvania town of Punxsutawney ( about 65 miles northeast of Pittsburgh , on February 2nd to see if the groundhog named Phil predicted more winter weather or an early spring.
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Original:  The crowd of nearly 30,000 people was one of the largest in the event's history  
Revised:  The crowd of nearly 30,000 people was one of the largest in the event's history . 
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Original:  Each was presented with a rose, which was placed in front of a granite memorial bearing the names of the 24  
Revised:  Each was presented with a rose, which was placed in front of a granite memorial bearing the names of the 24. 
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Original:  He learned in our school.   
Revised:  He learned in our school. " 
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Original:   NASA officials, astronauts, schoolchildren and family members attended the ceremony, which was held just miles from Columbia  's intended landing site.
Revised:  NASA officials, astronauts, schoolchildren and family members attended the ceremony, which was held just miles from Columbia '' 's intended landing site.
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Original:  May God bless the crew of Columbia.   
Revised:  May God bless the crew of Columbia. " 
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Original:  He proceded to read a letter from United States President George W. Bush praising "the seven brave astronautsof Columbia, " which was then presented to Husband-Thompson.
Revised:  He proceded to read a letter from United States President George W. Bush praising the astronauts, which was then presented to Husband-Thompson.
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Original:   Griffin also noted the importance of learning from mistakes, adding "Americans don't quit and we won't quit.
Revised:  "Space exploration is a dream deeply rooted in humanity, and the seven brave astronauts of Columbia sacrificed their lives so the rest of mankind could realize that dream," said Bush's letter. "They assumed great risk so they could understand what lies beyond the heavens. We are greatful for their service and they will be always be cherished." Griffin also noted the importance of learning from mistakes, adding "Americans don't quit and we won't quit.
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Original: All of the candidates are dishing out some big bucks for TV advertising this weekend, including Senator McCain whose ads will air in 20 states this weekend.
Revised: Most of the candidates are dishing out some big bucks for TV advertising this weekend, including Senator McCain whose ads will air in 20 states this weekend.
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Original:  The Campaign Media Analysis Group estimates that spending on political ads alone could reach an unprecedented $20 million   .
Revised:  The Campaign Media Analysis Group estimates that spending on political ads alone could reach an unprecedented $20 million . .
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Original: Alan Keyes, one of the Republican candidates who has not received little media attention over the past few months, shifted his campaign efforts to Texas, where he is this weekend.
Revised: Alan Keyes, one of the Republican candidates who has received little media attention over the past few months, shifted his campaign efforts to Texas, where he is this weekend.
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Original: Most of the candidates are making money for TV advertising this weekend, including Senator McCain whose ads will air in 20 states this weekend.
Revised: Most of the candidates are raising funds for TV advertising this weekend, including Senator McCain whose ads will air in 20 states this weekend.
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Original: Democratic Senator Hilary Clinton is spending Saturday in the delegate-rich state of California, while rival Senator Barack Obama is making stops in Idaho, Minnesota, and Missouri today.
Revised: Democratic Senator Hilary Clinton is spending Saturday in the state of California, while rival Senator Barack Obama is making stops in Idaho, Minnesota, and Missouri today.
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Original:  He was also fined $10,000 and ordered to pay $61,183 in civil penalties . publis
Revised:  He was also fined $10,000 and ordered to pay $61,183 in civil penalties publis
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Original:  He was also fined $10,000 and ordered to pay $61,183 in civil penalties . publis
Revised:  He was also fined $10,000 and ordered to pay $61,183 in civil penalties . 
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Original:  She also noted the large salt pile in Chelsea used for the deicing of highways in the Commonwealth and said that it is located there "illegally." 300px|Senator John Kerry makes an appearance via DVD.
Revised:  She also noted the large salt pile in Chelsea used for the deicing of highways in the Commonwealth and said that it is located there "illegally." 
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Original: 300px|Congressman John Tierney talks about the enviroment Two weeks ago, on February 1st, it was the second day of the national enviromental Focus the Nation teach-in.
Revised: 300px|Congressman John Tierney Two weeks ago, on February 1st, it was the second day of the national enviromental Focus the Nation teach-in.
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Original:  She also noted the large salt pile in Chelsea used for the deicing of highways in the Commonwealth and said that it is located there "illegally." 250px|Massachusetts Senator made an appearance via DVD She further noted the company, Energy Management Inc., behind the controversial Cape Wind project, proposed building a diesel power plant across the street from a Chelsea elementary school and that air quality in Chelsea is bad.
Revised:  She also noted the large salt pile in Chelsea used for the deicing of highways in the Commonwealth and said that it is located there "illegally." She further noted the company, Energy Management Inc., behind the controversial Cape Wind project, proposed building a diesel power plant across the street from a Chelsea elementary school and that air quality in Chelsea is bad.
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Original:  Grady did not identify the names or ages of the victims, as their families are still in the process of being notified.
Revised:  Grady did not identify the names of the victims, as their families are still in the process of being notified.
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Original:  Grady believes the shooter is no longer in the immediate area    .
Revised:  Grady believes the shooter is no longer in the immediate area . .
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Original:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
Revised:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
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Original:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
Revised:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles searched for the gunman.
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Original:  "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said.
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Original:  Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her 5-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." Grady did not identify the names of the victims, as their families are still in the process of being notified.
Revised:  Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her five-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." Grady did not identify the names of the victims, as their families are still in the process of being notified.
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Original:  When police arrived, they found all five victims lying dead in a back room of the store.
Revised:  When police arrived, they found all five victims lying in a back room of the store.
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Original:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers  armed with pistols and rifles  searched for the gunman.
Revised:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles searched for the gunman.
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Original:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers  armed with pistols and rifles  searched for the gunman.
Revised:  Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
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Original:   Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her five-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said.
Revised:  "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said. Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her five-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said.
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Original:   Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her five-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said.
Revised:  Selena Kujawa, who was inside the Target with her 5-year old son when police entered, said, "I was so scared I couldn't think." "Every store was immediately canvassed and a search by air too has given us every indication that the offender has left the scene," Grady said.
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Original:  However, the victims have now been identified as ranging between ages 22 and 37, and at least one is believed to be a store manager.
Revised:  However, the victims have now been identified as ranging between ages 22 and 37, and at least one is believed to be a store employee.
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Original:  According to a February 3rd article on the British newspaper Website telegraph.co.uk, "Police said that security cameras in the shopping complex area%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% had allowed them to tentatively identify the man, who is understood to have a history of armed robbery and a murder conviction."
Revised:  in the shopping complex area%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% had allowed them to tentatively identify the man, who is understood to have a history of armed robbery and a murder conviction."
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Original:  According to a February 3rd article on the British newspaper Website telegraph.co.uk, "Police said that security cameras in the shopping complex area%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% had allowed them to tentatively identify the man, who is understood to have a history of armed robbery and a murder conviction."
Revised:  According to a February 3rd article on the British newspaper Website telegraph.co.uk, "Police said that security cameras in the shopping complex area%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original: Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
Revised: Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers — armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
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Original: Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles - searched for the gunman.
Revised: Other stores in the strip mall, including a Target, were temporarily locked down as police officers - armed with pistols and rifles — searched for the gunman.
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Original:  This kind of violence is unacceptable -- not just in a shopping center where we're supposed to feel safe, but wherever it occurs.
Revised:  This kind of violence is unacceptable — not just in a shopping center where we're supposed to feel safe, but wherever it occurs.
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Original: Pilot gets sixth months for smuggling Chinese immigrants Christian Delgado Gomez, a San Antonio pilot, was sentenced to six months and was forced to pay a $500 fine for smuggling four undocumented Chinese immigrants.
Revised:  Christian Delgado Gomez, a San Antonio pilot, was sentenced to six months and was forced to pay a $500 fine for smuggling four undocumented Chinese immigrants.
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Original:  The Chinese immigrants where deported
Revised:  The Chinese immigrants were deported
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Original:  The officers who arrested him where acting on a tip that two planes, one from Laredo and another from Eagle Pass  would be carrying illicit cargo.
Revised:  The officers who arrested him where acting on a tip that two planes, one from Laredo and another from Eagle Pass , would be carrying illicit cargo.
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Original:  Since the opening of the world's largest fashion show on Friday , many designers have unveiled their newest designs , including turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
Revised:  Since Friday's opening of what is the world's largest fashion show on Friday , many designers have unveiled their newest designs , including turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
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Original:  Since the opening of the world's largest fashion show on Friday , many designers have unveiled their newest designs , including turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
Revised:  Since the opening of the world's largest fashion show , many designers have unveiled their newest designs , including turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
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Original:  Since the opening of the world's largest fashion show on Friday , many designers have unveiled their newest designs , including turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
Revised:  Since the opening of the world's largest fashion show on Friday , many designers have unveiled their newest designs . These include turtleneck sweaters and miniskirts.
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Original: Major labels Nicole Miller, Lacoste, BCBG, and Baby Phat debuted their styles in the first two days of Fashion Week, which is the  official unveiling of the Fall 2008 styles , leading up to similar fashion shows in Los Angeles, London, Paris and Milan.
Revised: Major labels Nicole Miller, Lacoste, BCBG, and Baby Phat debuted their styles in the first two days of the official unveiling of the Fall 2008 styles , leading up to similar fashion shows in Los Angeles, London, Paris and Milan.
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Original: Major labels Nicole Miller, Lacoste, BCBG, and Baby Phat debuted their styles in the first two days of Fashion Week, which is the  official unveiling of the Fall 2008 styles , leading up to similar fashion shows in Los Angeles, London, Paris and Milan.
Revised: Major labels Nicole Miller, Lacoste, BCBG, and Baby Phat debuted their styles in the first two days of Fashion Week, which is the official unveiling of the Fall 2008 styles and leading up to similar fashion shows in Los Angeles, London, Paris and Milan.
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Original:  If the first two days of Fashion Week are any indication, another year of miniskirts are in vogue, partnered with tights, which were widely considered to go out of fashion for 2008.
Revised:  If the first two days of Fashion Week are any indication, another year of miniskirts are in vogue, partnered with tights, which were widely expected to go out of fashion for 2008.
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Original: The first day kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show , in order to educate people on the dangers of heart disease.
Revised: Day one kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show , in order to educate people on the dangers of heart disease.
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Original: The first day kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show , in order to educate people on the dangers of heart disease.
Revised: The first day kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show . Aimed at educating people on the dangers of heart disease.
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Original:  Talk of a budding recession in the United States has sparked fears in the couture world, in which a lackluster fashion season can make or break many designers, whether they are up-and-comers or established names.
Revised:  Talk of a budding recession in the United States has sparked fears in the couture world, in which a lackluster fashion season can make or break many designers, both up-and-comers or established names.
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Original:  Talk of a budding recession in the United States has sparked fears in the couture world, in which a lackluster fashion season can make or break many designers, whether they are up-and-comers or established names.
Revised:  Talk of a budding recession in the United States has sparked fears in the couture world, in which a lackluster fashion season can make or break many designers, whether they are up-and-comers and established names.
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Original:  Among the designers yet to unveil their fall lines include Oscar de la Renta, Anna Sui, Bill Blass, Michael Kors, Vera Wang, and Diane von Furstenberg
Revised:  Designers yet to unveil their fall lines include Oscar de la Renta, Anna Sui, Bill Blass, Michael Kors, Vera Wang, and Diane von Furstenberg
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Original: Day one kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show . Aimed at educating people on the dangers of heart disease.
Revised: Day one kicked off with a Red Dress Campaign fashion show , aimed at educating people on the dangers of heart disease.
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Original: New York 's Fashion Week runs until Friday.
Revised: New York Fashion Week runs until Friday.
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Original: Rita Moreno at the Red Dress Campaign fashion show on Friday.
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Original:  Designers yet to unveil their fall lines include Oscar de la Renta, Anna Sui, Bill Blass, Michael Kors, Vera Wang, and Diane von Furstenberg
Revised:  Designers yet to unveil their fall lines include Oscar de la Renta, Anna Sui, Bill Blass, Michael Kors, Vera Wang, and Diane von Fürstenberg
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Original: "      This is the greatest feeling in professional sports.
Revised: " " This is the greatest feeling in professional sports.
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Original:   The law enforcement and intelligence community collaboration is excellent."
Revised:  . The law enforcement and intelligence community collaboration is excellent."
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Original:  The U.S. 's border with Canada is 4, 000-miles , twice as long its border with Mexico.
Revised:  The U.S. border with Canada is 4, 000-miles , twice as long its border with Mexico.
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Original:  The U.S. 's border with Canada is 4, 000-miles , twice as long its border with Mexico.
Revised:  The U.S. 's border with Canada is 4, 000 miles long , twice as long its border with Mexico.
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Original:  Since 9/ 11, $8 billion has been spent by Canada on border security improvements and Canada plans to spend an additional $ 1 billion in the coming year
Revised:  Since September 11, $8 billion has been spent by Canada on border security improvements and Canada plans to spend an additional $ 1 billion in the coming year
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Original:  In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada on May 11th, Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted the view that Canada's security system is weak.
Revised: right In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada on May 11th, Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted the view that Canada's security system is weak.
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Original: 300px In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada on May 11th , Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted the view that Canada's security system is weak.
Revised: 300px In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada on May 11th , Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted a view that the Canadian border security system is weak.
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Original:  Rather, he had praise for Canada's role in protecting the U.S./Canadian border.
Revised:  Rather, he praised the role of Canada in protecting the U.S./Canadian border.
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Original: Category:CanadaCategory:United StatesCategory:Crime and law Canadian flag In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada Wednesday, Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted a view that the Canadian border security system is weak.
Revised:  Canadian flag In a speech to business leaders in Toronto, Canada Wednesday, Former Homeland Security Secretary Tom Ridge contradicted a view that the Canadian border security system is weak.
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Original: Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu (Oseltamivir), the World Health Organisation said on Friday.
Revised: Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu (Oseltamivir), the World Health Organization said on Friday.
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Original:  Similar trends had already been reported in Europe.
Revised:  Similar trends have been reported earlier in Europe.
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Original: 200px Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu ( Oseltamivir ), the World Health Organization  said on Friday.
Revised: 200px Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu ( oseltamivir ), the World Health Organization said on Friday.
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Original: 200px Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu ( Oseltamivir ), the World Health Organization  said on Friday.
Revised: 200px Some flu viruses in the United States and Canada have shown increased levels of resistance to the antiviral drug Tamiflu ( Oseltamivir ), the World Health Organization (WHO) said on Friday.
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