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Original: Surveillance is the monitoring of behavior,  activities, or information for the purpose of information gathering, influencing, managing or directing.
Revised: Surveillance is the monitoring of behavior, many activities, or information for the purpose of information gathering, influencing, managing or directing.
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Original: Court Cases Riley vs.
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Original:  California (2014) was a  Supreme Court case in which a man was arrested for his involvement in a drive-by shooting.
Revised:  California (2014) was a U.S. Supreme Court case in which a man was arrested for his involvement in a drive-by shooting.
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Original:  His debut novel Naalukettu (Ancestral Home- translated to English as The Legacy), wrote at the age of 23, won the Kerala Sahitya Akademi Award in 1958.
Revised:  His debut novel Naalukettu (Ancestral Home- translated to English as The Legacy), written at the age of 23, won the Kerala Sahitya Akademi Award in 1958.
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Original: Madath Thekkepaattu Vasudevan Nair (born 15 July 1933), popularly known as MT, is an Indian author, screenplay writer and film director.
Revised: Madath Thekkepaattu Vasudevan Nair (born 1933), popularly known as MT, is an Indian author, screenplay writer and film director.
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Original:  It was a short story delineating the pathetic plight of the artists in circus .
Revised:  It was a short story delineating the pathetic plight of circus artistes .
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Original:  The numerous stories which followed dealt with themes culled from widely different milieus and contexts but were uniformly successful and popular.
Revised:  The numerous stories that followed dealt with themes culled from widely different milieus and contexts but were uniformly successful and popular.
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Original:  9 August 189913 December 1958) was a Chinese linguist.
Revised:  9 August 1899 – 13 December 1958) was a Chinese linguist.
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Original:  In 1929, along with Y.R. Chao and Li Fang-kuei, he became a researcher at the Institute of History and Philology (歷史語言研究所) of the Academia Sinica (then located at Beijing, i.e. the now Chinese Academy of Sciences ).
Revised:  In 1929, along with Y.R. Chao and Li Fang-kuei, he became a researcher at the Institute of History and Philology (歷史語言研究所) of Academia Sinica (then located at Beijing, i.e. the now Chinese Academy of Sciences ).
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Original:  He also served as director of the Research Institute of Linguistics at the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences until his death in 1958.
Revised:  He also served as director of the Institute of Linguistics at the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences until his death in 1958.
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Original:  He also served as director of the Research Institute of Linguistics at the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences until his death in 1958.
Revised:  He also served as director of the Research Institute of Linguistics at the Chinese Academy of Sciences until his death in 1958.
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Original:  "Alliance of Forest People discuss deforestation" Timothy Treadwell was an activist for the protection of grizzly bears in Alaska.
Revised:  Timothy Treadwell was an activist for the protection of grizzly bears in Alaska.
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Original:  Niall Evans of Gosport England Another well-known British "eco-warrior" is Daniel Hooper, who is also known as Swampy.
Revised:  Another well-known British "eco-warrior" is Daniel Hooper, who is also known as Swampy.
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Original: Bobby Lounge (born Dub Brock, 1950) is an American singer-songwriter from McComb, Mississippi  . Lounge began playing for house parties while attending Louisiana Tech University in northern Louisiana in the mid 1970s.
Revised: Bobby Lounge (born Dub Brock, 1950) is an American singer-songwriter from McComb, Mississippi , United States . Lounge began playing for house parties while attending Louisiana Tech University in northern Louisiana in the mid 1970s.
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Original:  External links Authorized Website www.
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Original:  BobbyLounge.com  Category:Living people Category:People from McComb, Mississippi Category:People with chronic fatigue syndrome Category:American blues singers Category:Songwriters from Mississippi Category:American blues singer-songwriters Category:Blues musicians from Mississippi Category:Singers from Mississippi Category:American blues musicians Category:American blues pianists Category:1950 births Category:Louisiana Tech University alum
Revised:  BobbyLounge.com Category:Living people Category:People from McComb, Mississippi Category:People with chronic fatigue syndrome Category:American blues singers Category:Songwriters from Mississippi Category:American blues singer-songwriters Category:Blues musicians from Mississippi Category:Singers from Mississippi Category:American blues pianists Category:1950 births Category:Louisiana Tech University alum
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Original:  His last duty before he became Marschal of the Royal Household was at the Central Administration of the Belgian Foreign Ministry, where he was appointed as special envoy for the Great Lakes (Central Africa).
Revised:  His last duty before he became Marshal of the Royal Household was at the Central Administration of the Belgian Foreign Ministry, where he was appointed as special envoy for the Great Lakes (Central Africa).
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Original:  As Marschal of the Royal Household he was also head of the management council of the Royal Trust.
Revised:  As Marshal of the Royal Household he was also head of the management council of the Royal Trust.
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Original:  Grand Cross of the Order of the Crown, b y royal decree of 19 December URL Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Pius IX Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Merit, decree of URL
Revised:  Grand Cross of the Order of the Crown, by royal decree of 19 December URL Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Pius IX Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Merit, decree of URL
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Original: The Dublin Core Schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc.), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks.
Revised: The Dublin Core schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc.), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks.
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Original:  The original set of 15 classic metadata terms, known as the Dublin Core Metadata Element Set (DCMES), is endorsed in the following standards documents: Background "Dublin" refers to Dublin, Ohio, USA where the schema originated during the 1995 invitational OCLC/NCSA Metadata Workshop, hosted by the OCLC (  Online Computer Library Center), a library consortium based in Dublin, and the National Center for Supercomputing Applications (NCSA).
Revised:  The original set of 15 classic metadata terms, known as the Dublin Core Metadata Element Set (DCMES), is endorsed in the following standards documents: Background "Dublin" refers to Dublin, Ohio, USA where the schema originated during the 1995 invitational OCLC/NCSA Metadata Workshop, hosted by the OCLC ( known at that time as Online Computer Library Center), a library consortium based in Dublin, and the National Center for Supercomputing Applications (NCSA).
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Original: 220px|Logo image of DCMI, which formulates Dublin Core The Dublin Core schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe  digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc . ), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks .
Revised:  The Dublin Core schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc . ), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks .
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Original: 220px|Logo image of DCMI, which formulates Dublin Core The Dublin Core schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe  digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc . ), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks .
Revised: 220px|Logo image of DCMI, which formulates Dublin Core The Dublin Core schema is a small set of vocabulary terms that can be used to describe digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc ), as well as physical resources such as books or CDs, and objects like artworks .
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Original:  IETF RFC 5013The Dublin Core Metadata Element Set, Dublin Core Metadata Initiative, August 2007 ISO Standard 15836-1:2017 NISO Standard Z39.85%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dublin Core metadata may be used for multiple purposes, from simple resource description to combining metadata vocabularies of different metadata standards, to providing interoperability for metadata vocabularies in the linked data cloud and Semantic Web implementations.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dublin Core metadata may be used for multiple purposes, from simple resource description to combining metadata vocabularies of different metadata standards, to providing interoperability for metadata vocabularies in the linked data cloud and Semantic Web implementations.
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Original:  The resources described using the Dublin Core may be digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc.) as well as physical resources such as books or works of art .220px|Logo image of DCMI, which formulates Dublin CoreDublin Core metadata may be used for multiple purposes, from simple resource description to combining metadata vocabularies of different metadata standards, to providing interoperability for metadata vocabularies in the linked data cloud and Semantic Web implementations.
Revised:  The resources described using the Dublin Core may be digital resources (video, images, web pages, etc.) as well as physical resources such as books or works of art . Dublin Core metadata may be used for multiple purposes, from simple resource description to combining metadata vocabularies of different metadata standards, to providing interoperability for metadata vocabularies in the linked data cloud and Semantic Web implementations.
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Original:   1993 deaths Category:
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Original:   1993 deaths Category:
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Original: Rubinstein began dating Tiffany Bresciani, a prostitute who worked on Houston Street and danced in strip clubs around the city.
Revised: Rubinstein began dating Tiffany Bresciani, a sex worker who worked on Houston Street and danced in strip clubs around the city.
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Original:  Bresciani financially supported the couple and their drug habit with prostitution . Rubinstein often waited for Bresciani while she serviced a customer, and then accompanied her to buy drugs.
Revised:  Bresciani financially supported the couple and their drug habit with sex work . Rubinstein often waited for Bresciani while she serviced a customer, and then accompanied her to buy drugs.
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Original: American punk rock singers Category:Anarcho-punk musicians Category:Drug-related suicides in New York (state) Category:Jews in punk rock Category:Jewish American musicians Category:Lobotomised people Category:People from Queens, New York Category:Singers from New York City Category:Reagan Youth members Category:20th-century  male singers Category:American anti-fascists Category:Jewish anti-fascists Category:Forest Hills High School (New York) alumni Category:1993 deat
Revised: American punk rock singers Category:Anarcho-punk musicians Category:Drug-related suicides in New York (state) Category:Jews in punk rock Category:Jewish American musicians Category:Lobotomised people Category:People from Queens, New York Category:Singers from New York City Category:Reagan Youth members Category:20th-century American male singers Category:American anti-fascists Category:Jewish anti-fascists Category:Forest Hills High School (New York) alumni Category:1993 deat
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Original: American punk rock singers Category:Anarcho-punk musicians Category:Drug-related suicides in New York (state) Category:Jews in punk rock Category:Jewish American musicians Category:Lobotomised people Category:People from Queens, New York Category:Singers from New York City Category:Reagan Youth members Category:20th-century American male singers Category:American anti-fascists Category:Jewish anti-fascists Category:Forest Hills High School (New York) alumni Category:1993 deat
Revised: American punk rock singers Category:Anarcho-punk musicians Category:Drug-related suicides in New York (state) Category:Jews in punk rock Category:Jewish American musicians Category:Lobotomised people Category:People from Queens, New York Category:Singers from New York City Category:Reagan Youth members Category:20th-century American male singers Category:American anti-fascists Category:Jewish anti-fascists Category:Forest Hills High School (New York) alumni Category:1993 deaths Category:20th-century American Je
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Original: Awards 2005 Mondi Magazine Award for "Commentary and Critique" . 2005 ATKVeertjie award from the Afrikaanse Taal en Kultuurvereniging (Afrikaans Language and Cultural Society), for magazine journalism.
Revised: Awards 2005 Mondi Magazine Award for "Commentary and URL 2005 ATKVeertjie award from the Afrikaanse Taal en Kultuurvereniging (Afrikaans Language and Cultural Society), for magazine journalism.
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Original:  2006 ATKVeertjie for magazine journalism .
Revised:  2006 ATKVeertjie for magazine URL
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Original:  2006 ATKVeertjie for magazine URL
Revised:  2006 ATKVeertjie for magazine journalism.
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Original:  He is also the younger brother of Lt Gen Sathish Nambiar.
Revised:  He is also the younger brother of Lt .Gen. Satish Nambiar.
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Original:  born August 1943) is a veteran Indian diplomat and currently serves as the UN Secretary General's Special Advisor on Myanmar.
Revised:  born August 1943) was an Indian diplomat and currently serves as the UN Secretary General's Special Advisor on Myanmar.
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Original:  born August 1943) is a veteran Indian diplomat and currently serves as the UN Secretary General's Special Advisor on Myanmar.
Revised:  born August 1943) is a veteran Indian diplomat and served as the UN Secretary General's Special Advisor on Myanmar.
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Original: Afrikaner Calvinism is a theoretical cultural and religious development among Afrikaners that combined elements of seventeenth-century Calvinist doctrine with a "chosen people" ideology similar to that espoused by proponents of the Jewish nation movement.
Revised: Afrikaner Calvinism is a cultural and religious development among Afrikaners that combined elements of seventeenth-century Calvinist doctrine with a "chosen people" ideology similar to that espoused by proponents of the Jewish nation movement.
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Original:  A number of modern studies have argued that this gave rise to the Great Trek while serving to legimitise the subordination of other South African ethnic groups , thus laying the foundation for modern Afrikaner nationalism and apartheid.
Revised:  A number of modern studies have argued that Boers gathered for the Great Trek while serving to legimitise the subordination of other South African ethnic groups , thus laying the foundation for modern Afrikaner nationalism and apartheid.
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Original:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not in fact play a significant role in Afrikaner society until  the trauma of the Second Boer War , citing the fact that early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
Revised:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not play a significant role in Afrikaner society until the trauma of the Second Boer War , citing the fact that early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
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Original:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not in fact play a significant role in Afrikaner society until  the trauma of the Second Boer War , citing the fact that early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
Revised:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not in fact play a significant role in Afrikaner society until after they suffered the trauma of the Second Boer War , citing the fact that early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
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Original:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not in fact play a significant role in Afrikaner society until  the trauma of the Second Boer War , citing the fact that early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
Revised:  Dissenting scholars have asserted that Calvinism did not in fact play a significant role in Afrikaner society until the trauma of the Second Boer War . Early settlers dwelt in isolated frontier conditions and lived much closer to pseudo-Christian animist beliefs than organised religion.
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Original:  White settlement in South Africa may be traced to the 1652 arrival of the Dutch East India Company at the Cape of Good Hope, seeking to establish a refreshment station.
Revised:  White settlement in South Africa is traced to the 1652 arrival of the Dutch East India Company at the Cape of Good Hope, seeking to establish a refreshment station.
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Original:  The Company had its headquarters in Amsterdam and it was there that it recruited and equipped voyages for the Orient.
Revised:  The Company had its headquarters in Amsterdam , the Company recruited crew and equipped voyages for the Orient.
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Original:  Most of its Dutch employees were Protestant Calvinists supplemented by Lutheran Germans, Scandinavians, and a large exodus of French Huguenot refugees fleeing persecution at home .
Revised:  Most of its Dutch employees were Protestant Calvinists supplemented by Lutheran Germans, Scandinavians, and numerous French Huguenot refugees fleeing persecution at home .
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Original:  Among their Afrikaner descendants, individual religious communities such as the Doppers became known for establishing their own doctrine in rifts with the Nederduitse Gereformeerde Kerk (Dutch Reformed Church) , leading to the formation of the separatist Gereformeerde Kerk in the late nineteenth century. 
Revised:  Among their Afrikaner descendants, individual religious communities such as the Doppers became known for establishing their own doctrine in rifts with the Nederduitse Gereformeerde Kerk (Dutch Reformed Church) . By the late nineteenth century, the separatist churches of Gereformeerde Kerk had developed in South Africa. 
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Original:  The key to this success was the establishment of strict rules of trade between the settlement and the native population.
Revised:  The Company established strict rules for trade between the settlement and the native population.
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Original:  No trade or Christian missionary ventures among the Africans were permitted without the permission of the company administrator.
Revised:  Only a Company administrator could authorize trade or Christian missionary ventures among the Africans were permitted without the permission of the company administrator.
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Original:  Stealing or shooting cattle was especially forbidden as a cause of inevitable conflict with the natives .
Revised:  Stealing or shooting cattle , which were a form of wealth and sustainability for the Africans .
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Original:  The early Europeans were appalled by the appearance and the customs of the Africans , and false rumours that the natives were cannibals reinforced their motive to avoid unnecessary contact.
Revised:  The early Europeans were appalled by the appearance and the customs of the Africans . False rumours that the natives were cannibals reinforced their motive to avoid unnecessary contact.
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Original:  The early Europeans were appalled by the appearance and the customs of the Africans , and false rumours that the natives were cannibals reinforced their motive to avoid unnecessary contact.
Revised:  The early Europeans were appalled by the appearance and the customs of the Africans , and false rumours that the natives were cannibals reinforced the motive to avoid unnecessary contact.
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Original:  Yet, many of the settlers had arrived with a missionary motive .
Revised:  But many settlers believed they had a had arrived with a missionary motive .
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Original:  The synthesis of these attitudes of strict avoidance and a missionary conscience resulted in the widespread practice of indenturing the native Khoisan population , and within that master/servant relationship,  to teach the Bible to them in hope that the message would filter back through the servant's family (along with reports of the superiority of European life) and thus bring about conversion.
Revised:  The synthesis of these attitudes of strict avoidance and a missionary conscience resulted in the widespread practice of indenturing the native Khoisan population to serve as workers and servants. Within that master/servant relationship, to teach the Bible to them in hope that the message would filter back through the servant's family (along with reports of the superiority of European life) and thus bring about conversion.
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Original:  The farmers who lived outside of the physical walls of the towns had a different arrangement than the townspeople.
Revised:  The farmers who lived outside the physical walls of the towns had a different arrangement than the townspeople.
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Original:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced these assumptions of ownership and its rights when the wandering hunters or herding tribes would cross the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
Revised:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced their assumptions about ownership and its rights when the wandering hunters or herding tribes would cross the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
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Original:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced these assumptions of ownership and its rights when the wandering hunters or herding tribes would cross the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
Revised:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced these assumptions of ownership and its rights against the wandering hunters or herding tribes would cross the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
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Original:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced these assumptions of ownership and its rights when the wandering hunters or herding tribes would cross the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
Revised:  As they settled into the seemingly unoccupied territories surrounding the Cape, they enforced these assumptions of ownership and its rights when the wandering hunters or herding tribes who crossed the Fish River into farm territories in search of grazing land or game.
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