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Original:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles : starting from punctualism and concrete music early in his career, in the 1950s . Later he started researching in the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
Revised:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles . Starting in punctualism and concrete music early in his career, in the 1950s . Later he started researching in the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
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Original:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles : starting from punctualism and concrete music early in his career, in the 1950s . Later he started researching in the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
Revised:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles : starting from punctualism and concrete music early in his career, during the 1950s . Later he started researching in the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
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Original:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles : starting from punctualism and concrete music early in his career, in the 1950s . Later he started researching in the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
Revised:  During his life as a musician, Stockhausen explored most different genres and styles : starting from punctualism and concrete music early in his career, in the 1950s , he proceeded to research the electronic music area, which at the time was in an embryonic state.
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Original:  In the 1960s  he composed works of choral music, putting side by side the chorus and the use of electronics facilities.
Revised:  In the 1960s , he composed works of choral music, putting side by side the chorus and the use of electronics facilities.
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Original:  In the 1960s  he composed works of choral music, putting side by side the chorus and the use of electronics facilities.
Revised:  In the 1960s he composed works of choral music, putting side-by-side the chorus and the use of electronics facilities.
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Original:  In the 1960s  he composed works of choral music, putting side by side the chorus and the use of electronics facilities.
Revised:  In the 1960s he composed works of choral music, putting side by side the chorus and the use of electronic facilities.
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Original:  In the 1970s  he dedicated himself to serialism.
Revised:  In the 1970s , he dedicated himself to serialism.
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Original:  Between 1977 and 2003  he committed himself in one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die seben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
Revised:  Between 1977 and 2003 , he committed himself in one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die seben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
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Original:  Between 1977 and 2003  he committed himself in one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die seben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
Revised:  Between 1977 and 2003 he committed himself to one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die seben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
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Original:  Between 1977 and 2003  he committed himself in one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die seben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
Revised:  Between 1977 and 2003 he committed himself in one of his most ambitious projects: a cycle of thematic works named Licht: Die sieben Tage der Woche (Light: the Seven Days of the Week).
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Original:  Various artists have stated that they were influenced by Stokhausen, including artists as varied as Frank Zappa, Björk, Miles Davis, as well as Roger Waters and Rick Wright , two Pink Floyd members.
Revised:  Various artists have stated that they were influenced by Stokhausen, including artists as varied as Frank Zappa, Björk, Miles Davis, as well as Roger Waters and Rick Wright —two of the Pink Floyd members.
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band . Italian singer/ songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato dedicated Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries to the composer . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . While being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen became a focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics after he stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" . He later explained the meaning of his statements and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries  . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements  and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
Revised:  Pepper's Lonely Hearts Club Band , while the Italian singerand songwriter Franco Battiato has dedicated to the composer one of his first albums: Sulle corde di Aries . Being a controversial artist, Stockhausen had recently been in the focus of polemics due to having stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 2001 were "works of art" , even if he later explained the meaning of his statements , and said that they had been, according to him, out-of-context and misquoted
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Original: While being a controversial artist, Stockhausen became a focus of polemics after he stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11  2001  were "works of art".
Revised: While being a controversial artist, Stockhausen became a focus of polemics after he stated that the September 11 2001 were "works of art".
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Original: While being a controversial artist, Stockhausen became a focus of polemics after he stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11  2001  were "works of art".
Revised: While being a controversial artist, Stockhausen became a focus of polemics after he stated that the terrorists attacks of September 11 , 2001 were "works of art".
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Original:  He has grew up in Altenberg  where he started taking piano lessons.
Revised:  He grew up in Altenberg where he started taking piano lessons.
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Original:  He has grew up in Altenberg  where he started taking piano lessons.
Revised:  He has grew up in Altenberg , where he started taking piano lessons.
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Original:  He studied piano and music pedagogy at the Musikhochschule of Cologne.
Revised:  He studied piano and music pedagogy at the Musikhochschule in Cologne.
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Original: It was at w:University of Cologne|%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , he later studied musicology, philosophy and Germanics.
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Original: It was at w:University of Cologne|%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , he later studied musicology, philosophy and Germanics.
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Revised: NO NOOKS.... ] He was influenced by musicians such as Oliver Messiaen, Edgard Varèse, and Anton Webern, but also by painters such as Piet Mondrian and Paul Klee. Stockhausen's works often departed from usual music styles. 
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Original:  It was at w: University of Cologne | , he later studied musicology, philosophy and Germanics.
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Original:  It was at w: University of Cologne | , he later studied musicology, philosophy and Germanics.
Revised:  It was at w: University of Cologne , he later studied musicology, philosophy and Germanics.
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Original:  The case was sent back to be tried agai
Revised:  The case was sent back to be tried again
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Original: A large tanker carrying a crane has collided with a barge named the Hebei Spirit off the coast of South Korea spilling more than 10,000 metric tons of oil (1.8 million barrels of oil ) into the sea in what is being called the country's worst oil spill.
Revised: A large tanker carrying a crane has collided with a barge named the Hebei Spirit off the coast of South Korea spilling more than 10,000 metric tons of oil (1.8 million barrels ) into the sea in what is being called the country's worst oil spill.
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Original: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and oil has since began to come ashore south of Seoul with residents describing the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
Revised: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and the spill has since began to come ashore south of Seoul with residents describing the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
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Original: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and oil has since began to come ashore south of Seoul with residents describing the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
Revised: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and oil has since began to wash ashore south of Seoul with residents describing the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
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Original: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and oil has since began to come ashore south of Seoul with residents describing the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
Revised: The tanker has suffered at least three large gashes on its hull and oil has since began to come ashore south of Seoul . Residents described the water as all black and officials are trying to avoid a "ecological disaster.
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Original:  " Nearly 60 miles (100 kilometers) of shoreline are at risk of being destroyed
Revised:  Nearly 60 miles (100 kilometers) of shoreline are at risk of being destroyed
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Original:  " Nearly 60 miles (100 kilometers) of shoreline are at risk of being destroyed
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Original:  We have 40 vessels out there fighting the oil spill.  
Revised:  We have 40 vessels out there fighting the oil spill. " 
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Original: w: Human Rights Watch's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google new saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
Revised:  Human Rights Watch's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google new saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
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Original: Human Rights Watch's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google new saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
Revised: Human Rights Watch's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google news saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
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Original:   's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google news saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
Revised:  Human Rights Watch 's Senior Counterterrorism Counsel commented to Google news saying, "The CIA was well aware that its interrogations crossed a line considered by many to be torture.
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Original:  At the  , spokeswoman said  only learned of the matter two days ago, after he was briefed by CIA Director Hayden.
Revised:  At the White House , spokeswoman said only learned of the matter two days ago, after he was briefed by CIA Director Hayden.
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Original: Mamadou Dia, The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today  at the age of AGE.
Revised: Mamadou Dia, The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today in at the age of AGE.
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Original:  Dia died in Dakar, the capitol of Senegal 
Revised:  Dia died in Dakar, the capitol of Senegal .
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Original: Mamadou Dia, The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today in at the age of 98.
Revised: Mamadou Dia, The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today at the age of 98.
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Original: Mamadou Dia Mamadou Dia , The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today at the age of 99.
Revised: Mamadou Dia , The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today at the age of 99.
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Original: Mamadou Dia , The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today at the age of 99.
Revised:  , The first Prime Minister of Senegal has died today at the age of 99.
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Original:  Dia died in Dakar , the capitol of Senegal.
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Original:  Dia started life in politics as a leader in the Afrique occidentale française (AOF) in 1948, shortly before being elected as a senator in 1949.
Revised:  Dia started life in politics as a leader in the (AOF) in 1948, shortly before being elected as a senator in 1949.
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Original:  He retired his senate seat in 1955 when he was appointed prime minister by the French National Assembly to serve alongside the newly elected president Léopold Sédar Senghor.
Revised:  He retired his senate seat in 1955 when he was appointed prime minister by the to serve alongside the newly elected president Léopold Sédar Senghor.
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Original:  His time served as prime minister was often controversial and his radical socialist views often clashed with those of the more moderate Senghor.
Revised:  His time served as prime minister was often controversial and his radical views often clashed with those of the more moderate Senghor.
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Original:  The song was one of two recorded last month, and was released by Sony BMG Finland  .
Revised:  The song was one of two recorded last month, and will be released by Sony BMG Finland .
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Original: ( )Date|December 24, 2007%DIFDELCMD < }} %%% <-- In theory.
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Original: ( )Date|December 24, 2007%DIFDELCMD < }} %%% <-- In theory.
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Original: ( )Date|December 24, 2007%DIFDELCMD < }} %%% <-- In theory.
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Original:  The song was one of two recorded last month, and will be released by Sony BMG Finland as an actual CD on January 8 (aparantly) .
Revised:  The song was one of two recorded last month, and will be released by Sony BMG Finland as an actual CD on January 8 .
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Original:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall. haveyoursay( )
Revised:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall. )
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Original:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall. haveyoursay( )
Revised:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall. haveyoursay( 
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Original: Image:Image-Lordi performing at the ESC 2007 (2).jpg|Lordi opening This year's Eurovision Song Contest Finnish theatrical hard rock band Lordi have released Beast Loose in Paradise - which will be the soundtrack to the band's upcoming horror movie Dark Floors - as a downloadable single.
Revised: Lordi opening this year's Eurovision Song Contest Finnish theatrical hard rock band Lordi have released Beast Loose in Paradise - which will be the soundtrack to the band's upcoming horror movie Dark Floors - as a downloadable single.
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Original:  " " Our music is not gonna get any brutal or heavier, but not any lighter (either) ...
Revised:  " Our music is not gonna get any brutal or heavier, but not any lighter (either) ...
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Original:  " " Our music is not gonna get any brutal or heavier, but not any lighter (either) ...
Revised:  " " Our music is not gonna get any brutal or heavier, but not any lighter either ...
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Original:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall  .
Revised:  And Studs and Leather is basically Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall .
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Original:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire meets (Accept song) Balls To The Wall  .
Revised:  And Studs and Leather is basically (KISS song) Heaven's on Fire (KISS song) meets Balls To The Wall .
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Original:  GNER, the previous operator, had their contact terminated early when parent company Sea Containers Ltd encountered financial difficulties    .
Revised:  GNER, the previous operator, had their contact terminated early when parent company Sea Containers Ltd encountered financial difficulties . .
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