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Original:  In 1991 the Pontifical Urbanian University awarded him a Bachelor’s degree for his studies while in Kenya.
Revised:  In 1991 the Pontifical Urban University awarded him a Bachelor’s degree for his studies while in Kenya.
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Original:  He was the education secretary for Catholic schools in the Diocese of Embu .
Revised:  He was the education secretary for Catholic schools in Embu Diocese .
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Original:  The following decade, he became the regular inker on most of the issues (through 2013) of the DC/Vertigo series Fables, penciled by Mark Buckingham, for which they won the Eisner Award for "Best Penciller/Inker Team" in 2007.
Revised:  The following decade, he became the regular inker on most of the issues of the DC/Vertigo series Fables, penciled by Mark Buckingham, for which they won the Eisner Award for "Best Penciller/Inker Team" in 2007.
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Original: Early life and career [[Image:Spwm108.jpg|180px|Cover for Spider-Woman #8 (November 1978).
Revised: Early life [[Image:Spwm108.jpg|180px|Cover for Spider-Woman #8 (November 1978).
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Original: ]] Steve Leialoha was born in San Francisco, California and his father was a Native Hawaiian .
Revised: ]] Steve Leialoha was born in San Francisco, California , the son of a Native Hawaiian .
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Original:   Steve Leialoha's professional career began in 1975 with the early independent comic book Star*Reach, drawing the five-page story "Wooden Ships on the Water", adapted by writer Mike Friedrich from the song by David Crosby, Stephen Stills, and Paul Kantner, in issue #3 (Sept. 1975).
Revised:  Career Steve Leialoha's professional career began in 1975 with the early independent comic book Star*Reach, drawing the five-page story "Wooden Ships on the Water", adapted by writer Mike Friedrich from the song by David Crosby, Stephen Stills, and Paul Kantner, in issue #3 (Sept. 1975).
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Original:   Steve Leialoha's professional career began in 1975 with the early independent comic book Star*Reach, drawing the five-page story "Wooden Ships on the Water", adapted by writer Mike Friedrich from the song by David Crosby, Stephen Stills, and Paul Kantner, in issue #3 (Sept. 1975).
Revised:  Steve Leialoha's career began in 1975 with the early independent comic book Star*Reach, drawing the five-page story "Wooden Ships on the Water", adapted by writer Mike Friedrich from the song by David Crosby, Stephen Stills, and Paul Kantner, in issue #3 (Sept. 1975).
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Original:  Strange Encounters #1 (1998) Warlock #9–14 (1975–1976) Web of Spider-Man #33 (1987) X-Factor #200 (2010 
Revised:  Strange Encounters #1 (1998) Warlock #9–14 (1975–1976) Web of Spider-Man #33 (1987) X-Factor #200 (2010 )
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Original:  He has said that he has always wanted to become an ornithologist.
Revised:  He has said that he always wanted to become an ornithologist.
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Original:  He attended high school in Italy  before moving to the United States for college.
Revised:  He attended high school in Italy , before moving to the United States for college.
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Original:  It was in the States that he really started focussing on birds, and the differences between the brains of different species.
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Original:  After graduating  Hauber moved to the University of California, Berkeley as a postdoctoral research fellow.
Revised:  After graduating , Hauber moved to the University of California, Berkeley as a postdoctoral research fellow.
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Original:  Research and career In 2003  Hauber moved to New Zealand, where he joined the faculty at the University of Auckland.
Revised:  Research and career In 2003 , Hauber moved to New Zealand, where he joined the faculty at the University of Auckland.
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Original:  Whilst in New Zealand  he studied psychology, and earned a Doctor of Science on avian recognition systems.
Revised:  Whilst in New Zealand , he studied psychology, and earned a Doctor of Science on avian recognition systems.
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Original:  Here he established the Cowbird Laboratory, which investigates the evolution of recognition systems.
Revised:  He established the Cowbird Laboratory, which investigates the evolution of recognition systems.
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Original:  For example, Hauber has studied the colour and shape of eggs that "host" birds will accept in their nests.
Revised:  For example, Hauber has studied the color and shape of eggs that "host" birds will accept in their nests.
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Original:  He has shown that pointy eggs are more likely to survive being in a birds'cliffside nest Hauber focussed his research on parasitic birds and the impact of climate change.
Revised:  He has shown that pointy eggs are more likely to survive being in a bird's cliffside nest. Hauber focused his research on parasitic birds and the impact of climate change.
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Original:  Select publications Personal life Hauber came out as gay after moving to the United States.
Revised:  Selected publications Personal life Hauber came out as gay after moving to the United States.
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Original:  He is a member of the grassroots organisation 500 Queer Scientists.
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Original: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2020 Category:Massacres in Ethiopia Category: Tigray War Category:November 2020 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2020 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2020 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:November 2020 events in Afri
Revised: Wars involving Eritrea Category:Wars involving Ethiopia Category:Massacres in 2020 Category:Massacres of the Tigray War Category:November 2020 crimes in Africa Category:Massacres in the 2020s Category:2020 crimes in Ethiopia Category:2020 murders in Africa Category:2020s murders in Ethiopia Category:Extrajudicial killings in Ethiopia Category:Mass murder in Africa Category:History of Ethiopia Category:Attacks in Ethiopia Category:November 2020 events in Afri
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Original:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions nine victims of this massacre, Tghat mentions 16 identified victims :
Revised:  Atlas of the humanitarian situation” mentions nine victims of this massacre, Tghat mentions 16 identified victims .
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Original:  TGHAT, A compilation of the verified list of civilian victims from different sources Assene Abraha Beyra Berhe Haso Etsay Bieidu Tesfay Gesese Atsbeha Mehari Girmay Abraha Habey Haftom Hagos Hagos Abraha Weldecherkos Halefom Tsegay Demewoz Kiros Haftu Gebru Kiros Kinfe Negasi Weldegiorgis Hagos Niguse Gebrekidan Abadi Seyoum Shega'i Redae Tekle Gebre Tekle Gebrekidan Tsigabu Haftom
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Original:  In line with historical studies of massacres, including those committed during the Armenian genocide, a massacre can be defined as a conflict incident in which at least five unarmed civilians were killed on the same day at the same location.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Living people Category:Indian footballe
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Original:  He was awarded the award Banga Bhushan by the Government of West Bengal in 2014
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Original:  He was awarded the Banga Bhushan by the Government of West Bengal in 2014
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Original: Gautam Sarkar, also spelt as Goutam Sarkar and known as by the nickname "Indian Beckenbauer", (born on 8 January 1950) is an Indian Bengali international footballer and football coach from West Bengal.
Revised: Gautam Sarkar, also spelt as Goutam Sarkar and known as by the nickname "Indian Beckenbauer", (born on 8 January 1950) is a former Indian Bengali international footballer and football coach from West Bengal.
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Original: JOURNAL ARTICLE THE TRADITIONAL RELIGION OF PRE-COLONIAL AKWA IBOM AND ITS IMPACT Dominus Okon Essien URL  Oron Traditional Ritual Vase
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Original: JOURNAL ARTICLE THE TRADITIONAL RELIGION OF PRE-COLONIAL AKWA IBOM AND ITS IMPACT Dominus Okon Essien URL frame| Oron Traditional Ritual Vase
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Original:  Among the best ones whose influences went beyond their villages were 'Abanga Nlak Umume', 'Atiabang Okuko ', 'Awai Uboro-Oro ', 'Ukit-eti Eyo-Bassey ', 'Atakpa Udung-Uko', 'Okpokim Edikor  ', 'Enweme of  Ubotong people', 'Etifit of Eyukut all in Enwang', 'Olughu Ubuoho of Eyotong' Olughu Mkpok Okwong of Okossi, and 'Otokpor of Udesi' and so on.
Revised:  Among the best ones whose influences went beyond their villages were 'Abanga Nlak Umume', 'Atiabang Okuko ', 'Awai Uboro Oro ', 'Ukit-eti Eyo-Bassey ', 'Atakpa Udung-Uko', 'Okpokim Edikor ', 'Enweme of Ubotong people', 'Etifit of Eyukut all in Enwang', 'Olughu Ubuoho of Eyotong' Olughu Mkpok Okwong of Okossi, and 'Otokpor of Udesi' and so on.
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Original:  Among the best ones whose influences went beyond their villages were 'Abanga Nlak Umume', 'Atiabang Okuko ', 'Awai Uboro-Oro ', 'Ukit-eti Eyo-Bassey ', 'Atakpa Udung-Uko', 'Okpokim Edikor  ', 'Enweme of  Ubotong people', 'Etifit of Eyukut all in Enwang', 'Olughu Ubuoho of Eyotong' Olughu Mkpok Okwong of Okossi, and 'Otokpor of Udesi' and so on.
Revised:  Among the best ones whose influences went beyond their villages were 'Abanga Nlak Umume', 'Atiabang Okuko ', 'Awai Uboro-Oro ', 'Ukit-eti Eyo Abasi ', 'Atakpa Udung-Uko', 'Okpokim Edikor ', 'Enweme of Ubotong people', 'Etifit of Eyukut all in Enwang', 'Olughu Ubuoho of Eyotong' Olughu Mkpok Okwong of Okossi, and 'Otokpor of Udesi' and so on.
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Original:  On 10 June 1997, she was severely wounded after an undetonated bomb from the First Gulf War exploded in her family's garden.
Revised:  On 10 June 1997, she was severely wounded after an undetonated bomb dating back to the Gulf War exploded in her family's garden.
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Original:  Al-Eqabi and her family  emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
Revised:  Al-Eqabi and her family subsequently emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
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Original:  Al-Eqabi and her family  emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
Revised:  Al-Eqabi and her family emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degree in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
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Original:  Al-Eqabi and her family  emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
Revised:  Al-Eqabi and her family emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013. In 2017, Al-Eqabi completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
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Original:  Al-Eqabi and her family  emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom in 2017.
Revised:  Al-Eqabi and her family emigrated to the United Arab Emirates in 2001, and she went on to graduate from the University of Sharjah with a degre in pharmacy in 2013, and subsequently completed postgraduate studies in International Social Work at Durham University in the United Kingdom .
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Original:  An athlete, Al-Eqabi completed two triathlons as a cyclist in the United Arab Emirates and received press attention when she  completed the 2020 Dubai Fitness Challenge, which included hauling a Jeep.
Revised:  As an athlete, she has completed two triathlons as a cyclist in the United Arab Emirates and received press attention when she completed the 2020 Dubai Fitness Challenge, which included hauling a Jeep.
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Original:  An athlete, Al-Eqabi completed two triathlons as a cyclist in the United Arab Emirates and received press attention when she  completed the 2020 Dubai Fitness Challenge, which included hauling a Jeep.
Revised:  An athlete, Al-Eqabi completed two triathlons in the United Arab Emirates and received press attention when she completed the 2020 Dubai Fitness Challenge, which included hauling a Jeep.
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Original:  She received press attention in 2016 when she trained to become a scuba diver.
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Original:  On 10 June 1997, she was severely wounded after an undetonated bomb dating back to the Gulf War exploded in her family's garden.
Revised:  In June 1997, she was severely wounded after an undetonated bomb dating back to the Gulf War exploded in her family's garden.
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Original:  Al-Eqabi featured in Nike's 2020 Victory Swim marketing campaign, alongside Maha Al-Ameri and Manal Rosto  
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Original:  Al-Eqabi featured in Nike's 2020 Victory Swim marketing campaign, alongside Maha Al-Ameri and Manal Rosto  
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Original: Miss International 2021 As the winner of Binibining Pilipinas International 2021, Arnold will represent the Philippines at the Miss International 2022 pageant.
Revised: Miss International 2022 As the winner of Binibining Pilipinas International 2021, Arnold will represent the Philippines at the Miss International 2022 pageant.
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Original:  Following Molinari  death in November 1999, Vargas expressed her fear that the traditional Kawésqar culture would die with her:"The Kawésqar people are leaving with her, because she was the only person who maintained the customs and traditions of her people"
Revised:  Following Molinari 's death in November 1999, Vargas expressed her fear that the traditional Kawésqar culture would die with her:"The Kawésqar people are leaving with her, because she was the only person who maintained the customs and traditions of her people"
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Original: In line with historical studies of massacres, including those committed during the Armenian genocide, a massacre can be defined as a conflict incident in which at least five unarmed civilians were killed on the same day at the same location.
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Original:  Pamapanga in the Philippine Revolution remained almost wholly loyal to Spanish suzerainty, with only few noble Kapampangan families defecting to the Katipunan.
Revised:  Pampanga in the Philippine Revolution remained almost wholly loyal to Spanish suzerainty, with only few noble Kapampangan families defecting to the Katipunan.
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Original:  By August 1897, Katipunero infiltrators establishes a cell in Guagua to perform acts of terrorism.
Revised:  By August 1897, Katipunero infiltrators had established a cell in Guagua to perform acts of terrorism.
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Original:  For their fervor in fighting for Spain, Governor Jose Canovas petitioned the Spanish crown to award all of Pampanga a title for service.
Revised:  For their fervor in fighting for Spain, Governor Jose Canovas petitioned the governor-general to award all of Pampanga a title for service.
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Original:   Once American forces had reached Pampanga, many Kapampangans enlisted into the American army en masse to revenge their losses.
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Original:  By August 1897, Katipunero infiltrators had established a cell in Guagua to perform acts of terrorism .
Revised:  By August 1897, Katipunero infiltrators had established a cell in Guagua .
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Original: General Primo de Rivera, “Memorial to the Spanish Cortes, August, 1898, ” in Taylor, I, 38 LY. Spanish Capitulation Kapampangans enlisting en masse into the US Army.
Revised: General Primo de Rivera, “Memorial to the Spanish Cortes, August, 1898, ” in Taylor, I, 38 LY. Spanish Capitulation Kapampangans enlisting into the US Army.
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Original:  Kapampangan soldiers would capture Emilio Aguinaldo in Isabela and help American forces establish peace and order in the whole country.
Revised:  Kapampangan soldiers would capture Emilio Aguinaldo in Isabela and help American forces occupy the country.
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Original:   Kapampangan soldiers would capture Emilio Aguinaldo in Isabela and help American forces occupy the country.
Revised:  Notably, Kapampangan soldiers would capture Emilio Aguinaldo in Isabela and help American forces occupy the country.
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Original:  Land disputes, like those which Jose Rizal encountered, happened mostly in Tagalog regions.
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Original:  Only a few dedicated families such as the Alejandrinos of Arayat and the Jovens of Bacolor actively supported the Propagandists, and, in general, the problems of colonial policy and practice merited little attention in the province.
Revised:  Only a few dedicated families such as the Alejandrinos of Aráyat and the Jovens of Bacolor actively supported the Propagandists, and, in general, the problems of colonial policy and practice merited little attention in the province.
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Original:  Only a few dedicated families such as the Alejandrinos of Arayat and the Jovens of Bacolor actively supported the Propagandists, and, in general, the problems of colonial policy and practice merited little attention in the province.
Revised:  Only a few dedicated families such as the Alejandrinos of Arayat and the Jovens of Bácolor actively supported the Propagandists, and, in general, the problems of colonial policy and practice merited little attention in the province.
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Original:  When war broke out in and around Manila, Governor-General Ramon Blanco declared martial law in eight provinces, including Pampanga and Tarlac.
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Original:  These forces consisted of volunteers, Los Voluntarios Pampangos , and enlisted personnel.
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Original:  Governor-General Camilio de Polavieja remarked that a "belt of fire" surrounded Pampanga for the Kapampangans had refused to join the rebel forces.
Revised:  Governor-General Camilo de Polavieja remarked that a "belt of fire" surrounded Pampanga for the Kapampangans had refused to join the rebel forces.
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Original:  For their fervor in fighting for Spain, Governor Jose Canovas petitioned the governor-general to award all of Pampanga a title for service.
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Original:  Later that month, a Doctor Santa Maria of Guagua and his family, and all other Spaniards of Guagua were killed by Katipunero infiltrators.
Revised:  Later that month, a Dr. Santa María of Guagua and his family, and all other Spaniards of Guagua were killed by Katipunero infiltrators.
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Original:  Spanish Capitulation Kapampangans enlisting into the US Army.
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Original:  General Jose Alejandrino took command of the province and ordered forcible enlistment into the Republic's army.
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Original:  Because of the war's destruction, the Americans would move the capital of Pampanga from Bacolor to San Fernando.
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Original:  Meanwhile, San Fernando went to become a premier city in Pampanga, hosting the provincial Archdiocese , numerous government offices, and commercial development.
Revised:  Meanwhile, San Fernando went to become a premier city in Pampanga, hosting the provincial archdiocese , numerous government offices, and commercial development.
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Original:  Kapampangans would be denounced as dugong aso  by Tagalogs for their role in fighting the revolution.
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Original:  On 17 September, the Inter-American Commission on Human Rights (IACHR) urged the Honduran government to conduct a due diligence investigation into her murder, but to this day her case remains unpunished . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  On 17 September, the Inter-American Commission on Human Rights (IACHR) urged the Honduran government to conduct a due diligence investigation into her murder, but to this day her case remains unpunished . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  Category:1748 births Category:1775 deaths Category:Surveyors Category:Members of the American Philosophical Socie 
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