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Original:  A central factor that contributes to these silencing methods is the trivialization of the lexicon and speech patterns that is often used to describe female activities     .
Revised:  A central factor that contributes to these silencing methods is the trivialization of the lexicon and speech patterns that is often used to describe female activities Ritual .
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Original:  A central factor that contributes to these silencing methods is the trivialization of the lexicon and speech patterns that is often used to describe female activities     .
Revised:  A central factor that contributes to these silencing methods is the trivialization of the lexicon and speech patterns that is often used to describe female activities Control .
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Original:  This is because language is man made .
Revised:  This is because language is man-made .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Strategies of Resistance MGT offers ways to change the muting status quo, i.e., naming the strategies of silencing, reclaiming, elevating and celebrating women's discourse, and creating new languages based on the experience of the marginalized group.
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Original:  In fact, he also drew on his personal experience as a sensitive (intellectual) boy among hearty (sportive) boys in an all boys London secondary school.
Revised:  In fact, he also drew on his personal experience as a sensitive (intellectual) boy among hearty (sportive) boys in an all-boys London secondary school.
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Original:  MGT has often been challenged.
Revised:  The theory has been criticized, one of the reasons is that it assumes all men or women are essentially same in their own groups. The difference is between men and women, not among men or women. Therefore, both groups are misunderstood to some extent.
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Original:   Deborah Tannen, the theorist that created Genderlect Theory, criticizes feminist scholars like Kramarae for assuming that men are trying to control women.
Revised:  In addition, Deborah Tannen, the theorist that created Genderlect Theory, criticizes feminist scholars like Kramarae for assuming that men are trying to control women.
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Original: Radhika Chopra’s makeup Most researchers would consider men as the dominant group in MGT.
Revised: Radhika Chopra’s Makeup Most researchers would consider men as the dominant group in MGT.
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Original:  According to the research, women’s voice can be ridicule even in a medical context.
Revised:  According to the research, women’s voice can be ridiculed even in a medical context.
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Original:  Researchers found that women’s voice can also be censored by social rituals, which advocating the subordination of women.
Revised:  Researchers found that women’s voice can also be censored by social rituals, which advocate the subordination of women.
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Original:  Scholars pointed out that many social decisions are controlled by men, including history books contents, mainstream media, communication practices, etc.
Revised:  Scholars pointed out that many social decisions are controlled by men, including history book contents, mainstream media, communication practices, etc.
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Original:  Harassment happens in public spaces such as  street, workplace, or even campus .
Revised:  Harassment happens in public spaces such as on the street, workplace, or even campus .
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Original:  Harassment happens in public spaces such as  street, workplace, or even campus .
Revised:  Harassment happens in public spaces such as street, workplace, or even in educational contexts .
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Original:  Create new words to the language system that are inclusive of marginalized groups and gendered words and experiences.
Revised:  Create new words for the language system that are inclusive of marginalized groups and gendered words and experiences.
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Original:  Use media platforms (traditional and new) to voice groups.
Revised:  Use media platforms (traditional and new) to give voice to these groups.
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Original: Muted group theory (MGT), created by Jumong Yeager Edwin Ardener and Shirley Ardener in 1975, is a communication theory that focuses on how marginalized groups are muted and excluded via the use of language.
Revised: Muted group theory (MGT), created by Edwin Ardener and Shirley Ardener in 1975, is a communication theory that focuses on how marginalized groups are muted and excluded via the use of language.
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Original:  In 1948, preceding events of the Korean War, the United Nations appointed him the Chairman of the UN Commission on Korea URL Early life K. P. S. Menon was born in   Travancore, British India (present-day Kerala, India) in 1898 in a distinguished aristocratic family.
Revised:  In 1948, preceding events of the Korean War, the United Nations appointed him the Chairman of the UN Commission on Korea URL Early life K. P. S. Menon was born in , Travancore, British India (present-day Kerala, India) in 1898 in a distinguished aristocratic family.
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Original: Early life K. P. S. Menon was born in Kottayam , Travancore, British India (present-day Kerala, India) in 1898 in a distinguished aristocratic family.
Revised: Early life K. P. S. Menon was born in Kottayam , Travancore, British India (present-day Kerala, India) in 1898 in a distinguished aristocratic family.
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Original:  He served as Sub-Collector of Tirupattur, Vellore District, then as District Magistrate in Trichy, Agent of the Government of India in the North West Frontier Province and Ceylon, then as Resident General of India in Hyderabad State.
Revised:  He served as Sub-Collector of Tirupattur, Vellore District, then as District Magistrate in Trichy, Agent of the Government of India in the North West Frontier Province and Ceylon, then as Resident of India in Hyderabad State.
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Original:  See Introduction in Patel Memorial Lectures, Publications Division Government of India March 1963 Menon married Saraswathi Amma , the daughter of C. Sankaran Nair.
Revised:  See Introduction in Patel Memorial Lectures, Publications Division Government of India March 1963 Menon married Saraswathi , the daughter of C. Sankaran Nair.
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Original:  His son, who bore the same name as him, served as envoy to China and his maternal grandson Shivshankar Menon was the Foreign Secretary and later the National Security Advisor.
Revised:  His son, who bore the same name as him, served as envoy to China and his grandson Shivshankar Menon was the Foreign Secretary and later the National Security Advisor.
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Original:  After independence, he was India's first Foreign Secretary from 1948 to 1952, then Ambassador of India to the Soviet Union, Hungary and Poland from 1952 to 1961, being the last foreigner to see the alive Stalin in person (on February 13, 1953). . On retirement, he was a member and later Chairperson of the Union Public Service Commission.
Revised:  After independence, he was India's first Foreign Secretary from 1948 to 1952, then Ambassador of India to the Soviet Union, Hungary and Poland from 1952 to 1961, being the last foreigner to see the alive Stalin in person (on February 13, 1953). On retirement, he was a member and later Chairperson of the Union Public Service Commission.
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Original:  He attended Madras Christian College and then Christ Church, University of Oxford, where he was a contemporary of the future Prime Minister Anthony Eden and served as co-officers of the Asiatic Society.
Revised:  He attended Madras Christian College and thenUniversity of Oxford, where he was a contemporary of the future Prime Minister Anthony Eden and served as co-officers of the Asiatic Society.
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Original:  He attended Madras Christian College and thenUniversity of Oxford, where he was a contemporary of the future Prime Minister Anthony Eden and served as co-officers of the Asiatic Society.
Revised:  He attended Madras Christian College and then University of Oxford, where he was a contemporary of the future Prime Minister Anthony Eden and served as co-officers of the Asiatic Society.
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Original:  This was one  the "honorary professorships and doctorate degrees" that were issued by Professor Clyde Rivers, the International Commissioner of the Latin University of Theology, based in Inglewood, California.
Revised:  This was one of the "honorary professorships and doctorate degrees" that were issued by Professor Clyde Rivers, the International Commissioner of the Latin University of Theology, based in Inglewood, California.
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Original:  It served as the home of the University of Santo Tomas (1611), Colegio de San Juan de Letran (1620), Ateneo de Manila University (1859), Lyceum of the Philippines University and the Mapua Institute of Technology .
Revised:  It served as the home of the University of Santo Tomas (1611), Colegio de San Juan de Letran (1620), Ateneo de Manila University (1859), Lyceum of the Philippines University and Mapúa University .
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Original: Name (Prewar) Image Name (Postwar) Image Note Churches National Shrine of Our Lady of Lourdes (1892-1945) El Amanecer Building 150px San Francisco Church(1739-1945) 150px Mapúa University Campus(Since 1956) 150px San Ignacio Church and Convent(1899-1945) 150px Museo de Intramuros(Since 2018) 150px The church and convent is being reconstructed as the Museo de Intramuros.
Revised: Name (Prewar) Image Name (Postwar) Image Note Churches Lourdes Church (1892-1945) El Amanecer Building 150px San Francisco Church(1739-1945) 150px Mapúa University Campus(Since 1956) 150px San Ignacio Church and Convent(1899-1945) 150px Museo de Intramuros(Since 2018) 150px The church and convent is being reconstructed as the Museo de Intramuros.
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Original: Intramuros (Latin for " within the walls") is the historic walled area within the city of Manila, the capital of the Philippines.
Revised: Intramuros (Latin for " inside the walls") is the historic walled area within the city of Manila, the capital of the Philippines.
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Original:  Dumesle's cousin, Charles Riviere-Hérard , led the Revolution of 1843 which forced President Boyer to flee the country.
Revised:  Dumesle's cousin, Charles Rivière-Hérard , led the Revolution of 1843 which forced President Boyer to flee the country.
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Original:  Riviere-Hérard then succeeded Boyer as President of Haiti.
Revised:  Rivière-Hérard then succeeded Boyer as President of Haiti.
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Original:  After an 1844 coup d'état, both Dumesle and Riviere-Hérard were forced into exile.
Revised:  After an 1844 coup d'état, both Dumesle and Rivière-Hérard were forced into exile.
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Original:   Dumesle, a mulatto, opposed the government of Jean Pierre Boyer and formed a group of like-minded young mulattoes called the Society for the Rights of Man and of the Citizen.
Revised:  Politics Dumesle, a mulatto, opposed the government of Jean Pierre Boyer and formed a group of like-minded young mulattoes called the Society for the Rights of Man and of the Citizen.
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Original:   As a poet, Dumesle's most remembered work is the historical Macanda.
Revised:  Works As a poet, Dumesle's most remembered work is the historical Macanda.
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Original: Living people Category:People from Bugulma Category:Bashkir people Category:Volga Tatars Category:Musicians from Tatarstan Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants of 2000 Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants for Russia Category:Russian female singers Category:21st-century Russian singers Category:Russian pop singers Category:World Music Awards winners Category:MTV EMA winners Category:Russian Muslims Category:21st-century women singers Category:English-language singers from Russ
Revised: Living people Category:People from Bugulma Category:Bashkir people Category:Volga Tatar people Category:Musicians from Tatarstan Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants of 2000 Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants for Russia Category:Russian female singers Category:21st-century Russian singers Category:Russian pop singers Category:World Music Awards winners Category:MTV EMA winners Category:Russian Muslims Category:21st-century women singers Category:English-language singers from Russ
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Original: Living people Category:People from Bugulma Category:Bashkir people Category:Volga Tatar people Category:Musicians from Tatarstan Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants of 2000 Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants for Russia Category:Russian female singers Category:21st-century Russian singers Category:Russian pop singers Category:World Music Awards winners Category:MTV EMA winners Category:Russian Muslims Category:21st-century  women singers Category:English-language singers from Russ
Revised: Living people Category:People from Bugulma Category:Bashkir people Category:Volga Tatar people Category:Musicians from Tatarstan Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants of 2000 Category:Eurovision Song Contest entrants for Russia Category:Russian female singers Category:21st-century Russian singers Category:Russian pop singers Category:World Music Awards winners Category:MTV EMA winners Category:Russian Muslims Category:21st-century Russian women singers Category:English-language singers from Russ
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Original:  Her father, Ralif Rafilovich Safin, who is of Bashkir descent, is an oligarch, a former LUKoil executive and a current member of the Federal Council, the upper chamber of the Russian parliament.
Revised:  Her father, Ralif Rafilovich Safin, who is of Bashkir descent, is a former LUKoil executive and a current member of the Federal Council, the upper chamber of the Russian parliament.
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Original:  At 5 years old Alsou asked her parents for a piano.
Revised:  At age five, Alsou asked her parents for a piano.
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Original:  Ferdinand and Merit :  Knight of the Garter, 11 October 1844Shaw, Wm. A. (1906) The Knights of England, I, London, p. 57
Revised:  Ferdinand and Merit : Stranger Knight of the Garter, 11 October 1844Shaw, Wm. A. (1906) The Knights of England, I, London, p. 57
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Original:  He followed conservative policies, especially under the influence of French statesman François Guizot during the period 1840– 48.
Revised:  He followed conservative policies, especially under the influence of French statesman François Guizot during the period 1840– 1848.
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Original:  The concept is essentially equivalent to the modern idea of unknowingly living in a simulated reality.
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Original:  It is the first of various other hypothetical beings often referred to as demons, such as Maxwell's demon and Laplace's demons, among others, that have motivated scientists to perform new experiments and develop new technologies.
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Original:  I shall consider myself as not having hands or eyes, or flesh, or blood or senses, but as falsely believing that I have all these things." * — originally published as:
Revised:  I shall consider myself as not having hands or eyes, or flesh, or blood or senses, but as falsely believing that I have all these things." — originally published as:
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Original: The evil demon, also known as Descartes' demon , malicious demon and evil genius, is an epistemological concept that features prominently in Cartesian philosophy.
Revised: The evil demon, also known as Descartes' ang , malicious demon and evil genius, is an epistemological concept that features prominently in Cartesian philosophy.
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Original: Sombhu Mitra (22 August 1915 – 19 May 1997) was a legendary Indian film and stage actor, director, playwright, reciter and an Indian theatre personality, known especially for his involvement in Bengali theatre, where he is considered a pioneer.
Revised: Sombhu Mitra (22 August 1915 – 19 May 1997) was an Indian film and stage actor, director, playwright, reciter and an Indian theatre personality, known especially for his involvement in Bengali theatre, where he is considered a pioneer.
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Original:  In 1944, several old theatrical conventions were broken when the play Navanna written by Bijon Bhattacharya and co-directed by Sombhu Mitra for IPTA was staged.
Revised:  In 1944, several old theatrical conventions were broken when the play Nabanna written by Bijon Bhattacharya and co-directed by Sombhu Mitra for IPTA was staged.
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Original:  In 1948, Sombhu Mitra formed a new theatre group, Bohurupee in Kolkata, which ushered the group-theatre movement in West Bengal. 
Revised:  In 1948, Sombhu Mitra formed a new theatre group, Bohurupee in Kolkata, which ushered the group-theatre movement in West Bengal. Shri Mitra added new and innovative dimension to bengali drama with his exemplary mastery over every aspect of "drama" production. His series of lecture on bengali drama at University of Calcutta should be a "must" reading by any performing drama artist. Unfortunately, his contribution to bengali drama was not noted by either the contemporary ruling government or private entrepreneur and as a result none of his productions were captured in either celluloid in form of documentary or in video and thereby create a big "void" in the history of bengali drama. A man of uncompromising attitude towards art who completely dedicated his life and livelihood for the sake of art is rare to find in all times.
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Original: Famous Indian Theatre Practitioner Sombhu Mitra (22 August 1915 – 19 May 1997) was an Indian film and stage actor, director, playwright, reciter and an Indian theatre personality, known especially for his involvement in Bengali theatre, where he is considered a pioneer.
Revised:  Sombhu Mitra (22 August 1915 – 19 May 1997) was an Indian film and stage actor, director, playwright, reciter and an Indian theatre personality, known especially for his involvement in Bengali theatre, where he is considered a pioneer.
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Original: International career Rava appeared in 30 international matches with the Italian national team between 1936 and 1946, losing only one game, and becoming the Italy captain in 1940.
Revised: International career Rava appeared in 30 international matches with the Italian national team between 1935 and 1946, losing only one game, and becoming the Italy captain in 1940.
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Original: C. Cuneo 1905 managers Category:People from the Province of Alessandria Category:Olympic medalists in football Category:Medalists at the 1936 Summer Olympics Category:Neurological disease deaths in Piedmo
Revised: C. Cuneo 1905 managers Category:People from the Province of Alessandria Category:Olympic medalists in football Category:Medalists at the 1936 Summer Olympi
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Original: Rockestra was a McCartney-led supergroup of at least thirty English rockers.
Revised: Rockestra was a McCartney-led supergroup of at least 30 English rockers.
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Original:  (The credited list appears at the bottom of the back cover of the LP ).
Revised:  The back cover of the LP ).
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Original:  The event was organized by Paul McCartney and Kurt Waldheim,CBC.ca – Arts – Music – Charity Begins and it involved artists such as McCartney and The Who as well as punk acts like The Clash and the Pretenders.
Revised:  The event was organised by Paul McCartney and Kurt Waldheim,CBC.ca – Arts – Music – Charity Begins and it involved artists such as McCartney and The Who as well as punk acts like The Clash and the Pretenders.
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Original: Atsugewi traditional narratives include myths, legends, tales, and oral histories preserved by the Atsugewi people of the Pit River basin of northeastern California.
Revised: Atsugewi traditional narratives include myths, legends, tales, and oral histories preserved by the Atsugewi people of the Pit River basin of Northeastern California.
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Original:  Atsugewi oral literature reflects the transitional position of Atsugewi culture between central California, Northwest Coast, Plateau, and Great Basin regions . (See also Traditional narratives (Native California).)
Revised:  Atsugewi oral literature reflects the transitional position of Atsugewi culture between Central California, Northwest Coast, Plateau, and Great Basin regions . (See also Traditional narratives (Native California).)
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Original:  Atsugewi oral literature reflects the transitional position of Atsugewi culture between central California, Northwest Coast, Plateau, and Great Basin regions . (See also Traditional narratives (Native California).)
Revised:  Atsugewi oral literature reflects the transitional position of Atsugewi culture between central California, Northwest Coast, Plateau, and Great Basin regions 
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Original:  Category:Traditional narratives (Native California) Category:Folklo
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Original: Bukhar-zhirau Kalmakanov (also: Bukhar-zhyrau Qalmaqanuly , ;
Revised: Bukhar-zhirau Kalmakanov (also: Bukhar-zhyrau Qalqamanuly , ;
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Original:  Although his primary activity was entertaining the court through poetry and singing, Kalmakanov also acted as an advisor to the Khan.
Revised:  Although his primary activity was law-making, poetry and singing, Kalmakanov also acted as an advisor to the Khan.
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Original:  History of Kazak Literature).
Revised:  History of Kazakh Literature).
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Original:  Maghauuin, Mukhtar, ed. (1971) Aldaspan: XV–XVIII ghasyrlardaghy qazaq aqyn, zhyraularynyng shygharmalar zhyynaghy (The Scimitar: A Collection of Poems by Kazak Aqyns and Zhyraus Category:1693 births Category:1789 deaths Kalmakanov, Bukharzhrau Category:Kazakhstani peop
Revised:  Maghauuin, Mukhtar, ed. (1971) Aldaspan: XV–XVIII ghasyrlardaghy qazaq aqyn, zhyraularynyng shygharmalar zhyynaghy (The Scimitar: A Collection of Poems by Kazakh Aqyns and Zhyraus Category:1693 births Category:1789 deaths Kalmakanov, Bukharzhrau Category:Kazakhstani peop
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Original:  His period of activity at the court lasted from 1711 until 1781, during the reign of the Abylay Khan.
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Original:  His period of activity at the court lasted from 1711 until 1781, during the reign of the Abylay Khan.
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Original:  His period of activity at the court lasted from 1711 until 1781, during the reign of the Abylay Khan.
Revised:  His period of activity at the court lasted from 1711 until 1781, during the reign of the Ablai Khan.
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Original:  References  Gabdullin, M. G., et al., eds. (1968–1979) Istoriia kazakhskoi literatury (trans.
Revised:  References Further reading Gabdullin, M. G., et al., eds. (1968–1979) Istoriia kazakhskoi literatury (trans.
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Original:  Maghauuin, Mukhtar, ed. (1971) Aldaspan: XV–XVIII ghasyrlardaghy qazaq aqyn, zhyraularynyng shygharmalar zhyynaghy (The Scimitar: A Collection of Poems by Kazakh Aqyns and Zhyraus Sources Encyclopedic Biography of Kalmakanov Category:1693 births Category: 1789 deaths Kalkaman Uly, Bukhar-Zhirau Category:Ethnic Kazakh peop
Revised:  Maghauuin, Mukhtar, ed. (1971) Aldaspan: XV–XVIII ghasyrlardaghy qazaq aqyn, zhyraularynyng shygharmalar zhyynaghy (The Scimitar: A Collection of Poems by Kazakh Aqyns and Zhyraus Category:1693 births Category: 1789 deaths Kalkaman Uly, Bukhar-Zhirau Category:Ethnic Kazakh peop
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