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Original: A two-year-old girl was found dead inside a car yesterday in Union Township, Clermont County, Ohio The car was parked outside the Glen Este Middle School with all windows rolled up.
Revised:  The car was parked outside the Glen Este Middle School with all windows rolled up.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A friend of the family said the child was Cecelia Slaby, however police are not reporting any personal information.
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Original: Three soldiers of the United Kingdom  part of NATO's mission in Afghanistan, ISAF, were killed in what is thought to have been a "friendly fire" incident, according to the UK ministry of defence .
Revised: Three soldiers of the United Kingdom , part of NATO's mission in Afghanistan, ISAF, were killed in what is thought to have been a "friendly fire" incident, according to the UK ministry of defence .
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Original: Three soldiers of the United Kingdom  part of NATO's mission in Afghanistan, ISAF, were killed in what is thought to have been a "friendly fire" incident, according to the UK ministry of defence .
Revised: Three soldiers of the United Kingdom part of NATO's mission in Afghanistan, ISAF, were killed in what is thought to have been a "friendly fire" incident, according to the UK Ministry of Defence .
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Original:  The ministry said that '' during the intense engagement that ensued, close air support was called in from two US F-15 aircraft to repel the enemy.
Revised:  The ministry said that " during the intense engagement that ensued, close air support was called in from two US F-15 aircraft to repel the enemy.
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Original:  One bomb was dropped and it is believed the explosion killed the three soldiers. '
Revised:  One bomb was dropped and it is believed the explosion killed the three soldiers. "
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Original: The software lock that binds the iPhone exclusively to the AT&T mobile network has been cracked  |thumb George Hotz, age 17, confirmed on Friday that he has cracked the lock that joins the Apple iPhone to AT&T's wireless network and was using it on T-Mobile's network—the only other major U.S. carrier compatible with iPhone technology.
Revised: The software lock that binds the iPhone exclusively to the AT&T mobile network has been cracked . |thumb George Hotz, age 17, confirmed on Friday that he has cracked the lock that joins the Apple iPhone to AT&T's wireless network and was using it on T-Mobile's network—the only other major U.S. carrier compatible with iPhone technology.
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Original: The software lock that binds the iPhone exclusively to the AT&T mobile network has been cracked  |thumb George Hotz, age 17, confirmed on Friday that he has cracked the lock that joins the Apple iPhone to AT&T's wireless network and was using it on T-Mobile's network—the only other major U.S. carrier compatible with iPhone technology.
Revised: The software lock that binds the iPhone exclusively to the AT&T mobile network has been cracked |thumb George Hotz, 17, confirmed on Friday that he has cracked the lock that joins the Apple iPhone to AT&T's wireless network and was using it on T-Mobile's network—the only other major U.S. carrier compatible with iPhone technology.
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Original:  This crack has opens up the phone, which is only being sold in the U.S., to use on overseas networks.
Revised:  This crack opens up the phone, which is only being sold in the U.S., to use on overseas networks.
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Original: Hotz places hacked iPhone for auction on Ebay George Hotz who done the iPhone hack has placed a second hacked iPhone for sale on Ebay.
Revised: Hacked iPhone for auction on Ebay George Hotz who done the iPhone hack has placed a second hacked iPhone for sale on Ebay.
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Original: Hotz places hacked iPhone for auction on Ebay George Hotz who done the iPhone hack has placed a second hacked iPhone for sale on Ebay.
Revised: Hotz places hacked iPhone for auction on George Hotz who done the iPhone hack has placed a second hacked iPhone for sale on Ebay.
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Original: Hacked iPhone for auction on eBay A second phone, which was also hacked by Hotz, was placed for sale on eBay, with bids now reaching US$50,100 after starting at $540, although bids up to $99,999,999 were cancelled .
Revised: Hacked iPhone for auction on eBay A second phone, which was also hacked by Hotz, was placed for sale on eBay, with bids now reaching US$50,100 after starting at $540, although bids up to $99,999,999 were canceled .
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Original:  However, Hotz also commented on the excessive bids showing up on ebay . "I'm sure these most recent bids are fake.
Revised:  However, Hotz also commented on the excessive bids showing up on eBay . "I'm sure these most recent bids are fake.
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Original:  However,Hotz also commented on the excessive bids showing up on eBay.
Revised:  However,Hotz also commented on the excessive bids , stating
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Original: thumb Mahatma Gandhi's grandson, Arun Manilal Gandhi, was interviewed by Peter Sissons of the BBC News 24.
Revised: thumb Mahatma Gandhi's grandson, Arun Manilal Gandhi, was interviewed by Peter Sissons on behalf of BBC News 24.
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Original:  A memorial dedicated to restore wrongs against an UK community remembering friends and family close to Heidi H. Although settled through WIPO, the languished outcome has fueled bitter feelings and unresolved heated disputes against The Laurel Pub Company Limited, owner of the Hogshead chain.
Revised:  A memorial dedicated to restore wrongs against an UK community remembering friends and family close to Heidi H. Although settled through WIPO, the languished outcome has fuelled bitter feelings and unresolved heated disputes against The Laurel Pub Company Limited, owner of the Hogshead chain.
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Original:  Fasting is practiced in many religious traditions and spiritual practices.
Revised:  Fasting is practised in many religious traditions and spiritual practices.
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Original:  Heidi is experienced in distributing thetruth and deeply involved with an ongoing Campaign Committee  Hogshead.tv Publicity .
Revised:  Heidi is experienced in distributing thetruth and deeply involved with an ongoing Campaign Committee the Hogshead.tv Publicity .
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Original:  Yuvraj Singh and Rahul Dravid added 63 runs before Singh was dismissed for 49 runs.
Revised:  Yuvraj Singh and Rahul Dravid added 63 runs before Singh was dismissed for 49.
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Original:  The Miami Herald acknowledged the flurry of rumors with a new article posted today, yet remained wary of the validity of the rumors                                                                                                                                                      
Revised:  The Miami Herald acknowledged the flurry of rumors with a new article posted today, yet remained wary of the validity of the rumors . 
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Original: Rumors of Castro's death began circulating today .
Revised: Rumors began circulating today .
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Original:  Rumors began circulating today in Miami, Florida that Fidel Castro, the President of Cuba, may be dead.
Revised: Cuban President, Fidel Castro. Rumors began circulating today in Miami, Florida that Fidel Castro, the President of Cuba, may be dead.
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Original:  The rumor has been reported to have started on Wallstreet .
Revised:  The rumor has been reported to have started on Wall Street in New York City .
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Original:  The 33 year old was caught driving his Porshe 911 on the A420 during a routine speed check by Thames Valley Police near Oxford.
Revised:  The 33 year old was caught driving his Porsche 911 on the A420 during a routine speed check by Thames Valley Police near Oxford.
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Original:  It was several hours before BNZ (Bank of New Zealand) were notified, but not before dozens of customers, mostly backpackers, exploited the  ATM with several people making up to 40 transactions.
Revised:  Dozens of customers, mostly backpackers, exploited the ATM with several people making up to 40 transactions.
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Original:  A contractor incorrectly stacked the (NZ) $10 note slot with $20 notes, and vice versa.
Revised:  A contractor incorrectly stacked the NZ $10 note slot with $20 notes, and vice versa.
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Original:  It had already received orders from as far away as Australia.
Revised:  It has already received orders from as far away as Australia.
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Original:  It had already received orders from as far away as Australia.
Revised:  It had already received orders internationally, including Australia.
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Original: Since Friday monrning , around 170 fires have been burning, many of which are believed to be caused by arson.
Revised: Since Friday morning , around 170 fires have been burning, many of which are believed to be caused by arson.
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Original:  Source: Lotus R In southern Greece today, huge forest fires continue to burn on destroying homes and causing severe damage to the region.
Revised:  In southern Greece today, huge forest fires continue to burn on destroying homes and causing severe damage to the region.
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Original: World's oldest tiny zircon at 4.4 billion years A tiny piece of rock 4.4 billion years old went on display in Wisconson (USA) Sunday for one day only.
Revised:  A tiny piece of rock 4.4 billion years old went on display in Wisconson (USA) Sunday for one day only.
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Original: World's oldest tiny zircon at 4.4 billion years A tiny piece of rock 4.4 billion years old went on display in Wisconson (USA) Sunday for one day only.
Revised: World's oldest tiny zircon at 4.4 billion years A tiny piece of rock 4.4 billion years old went on display in , Sunday for one day only.
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Original:  A jazz band played music, with rocks for percussion, which they said might be appropriate for displaying the bit of zircon crystal, barely two human hairs wide.
Revised:  A jazz band played music, with rocks for percussion, which they said might be appropriate for displaying the bit of crystal, barely two human hairs wide.
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Original:  The tiny sliver will return to Australia with a professor from Curtin University of Technology in Perth , who discovered it in 1984.
Revised:  The tiny sliver will return to Australia with a professor from in , who discovered it in 1984.
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Original:  It is the slain couple's vehicleand they suspect that Imeson has stolen it
Revised:  It is the slain couple's vehicle and they suspect that Imeson has stolen it
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Original:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horse in New South Wales  . Equine flu is highly contagious though its not infectious to humans.
Revised:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horse in New South Wales (NSW) . Equine flu is highly contagious though its not infectious to humans.
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Original:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horse in New South Wales  . Equine flu is highly contagious though its not infectious to humans.
Revised:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horse in New South Wales . Equine flu is highly contagious though it is not infectious to humans.
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Original:  Breaches of these restriction could result in fines of upto A$44,000 and/or imprisonment for up to 12 months.
Revised:  Breaches of these restriction could result in fines of up to A$44,000 and/or imprisonment for up to 12 months.
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Original:  The normally unrestricted travel of horses between Australia and New Zealand has been suspendend and New Zealand authorities are checking all horse that have entered the country since the beginning of August
Revised:  The normally unrestricted travel of horses between Australia and New Zealand has been suspended and New Zealand authorities are checking all horse that have entered the country since the beginning of August
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Original:  Also, an appeal to all those with ponies or recreational horses or work horses not to leave their properties..." Equine flu was first detected in a stallion at Eastern Creek Quarantine station after arriving from the northern hemisphere.
Revised:  Also, an appeal to all those with ponies , recreational horses or work horses not to leave their properties..." Equine flu was first detected in a stallion at Eastern Creek Quarantine station after arriving from the northern hemisphere.
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Original:  There are 80 horse currently in quarantine at either Eastern Creek in New South Wales or at the Soptswood quarantine station in Victoria.
Revised:  There are 80 horses currently in quarantine at either Eastern Creek in New South Wales or at the Soptswood quarantine station in Victoria.
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Original:  There are 80 horse currently in quarantine at either Eastern Creek in New South Wales or at the Soptswood quarantine station in Victoria.
Revised:  There are 80 horse currently in quarantine at either Eastern Creek in New South Wales or at the Spotswood quarantine station in Victoria.
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Original:  These horse are thoroughbreds brought into Australia for the spring breading season.
Revised:  These horses are thoroughbreds brought into Australia for the spring breading season.
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Original:  These horse are thoroughbreds brought into Australia for the spring breading season.
Revised:  These horse are thoroughbreds brought into Australia for the spring breeding season.
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Original:  The movement ban caused the cancellation of race meeting across the country, resulting in lost of tens of millions of dollars.
Revised:  The movement ban caused the cancellation of race meeting across the country, resulting in losses of tens of millions of dollars.
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Original:  The normally unrestricted travel of horses between Australia and New Zealand has been suspended and New Zealand authorities are checking all horse that have entered the country since the beginning of August
Revised:  The normally unrestricted travel of horses between Australia and New Zealand has been suspended and New Zealand authorities are checking all horses that have entered the country since the beginning of August
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Original: 250px|Thoroughbred race meeting The Honourable Peter McGauran  Federal Minister for Agriculture  has issued a 72 hour Australia wide travel ban on all Equine  species.
Revised: 250px|Thoroughbred race meeting The Honourable Peter McGauran , Federal Minister for Agriculture has issued a 72 hour Australia wide travel ban on all Equine species.
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Original: 250px|Thoroughbred race meeting The Honourable Peter McGauran  Federal Minister for Agriculture  has issued a 72 hour Australia wide travel ban on all Equine  species.
Revised: 250px|Thoroughbred race meeting The Honourable Peter McGauran Federal Minister for Agriculture , has issued a 72 hour Australia wide travel ban on all Equine species.
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Original:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horse in New South Wales (NSW).
Revised:  This follows earlier restrictions placed on horses in New South Wales (NSW).
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Original:  Thoroughbred race meeting  Mr McGauran said "There will be a 72-hour ban on all race meetings for both thoroughbreds and harness..."
Revised:  Thoroughbred race meeting . Mr McGauran said "There will be a 72-hour ban on all race meetings for both thoroughbreds and harness..."
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Original: Bayern Munich steadily increased their dominance after the quarter-hour mark and were rewarded on 28 minutes when Altintop fed Bastian Schweinsteiger , the Germany man delivering a superb pass for Toni to advance into the box and drive past Enkefrom 12 yards.
Revised: Bayern Munich took the lead in the 28th minute when Bastian Schweinsteiger fed Luca Toni a pass into the penalty box and scored against Hannover goalkeeper Robert Enke.
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Original:  Quotes Standings Standings after Saturday games of Week 3 PosTeamGPWDLFAGDPts1Bayern Munich33001001092Arminia Bielefeld321057373Bochum321064274Hamburg320132165Schalke211063346Bayer Leverkusen311131247Eintracht Frankfurt211032148Stuttgart301145-149Werder Bremen311136-3410Wolfsburg2101440311MSV Duisburg310245-1312Hertha Berlin310234-1313Borussia Dortmund310257-2314Karlsruhe310135-2315Nürnberg310224-2316Hannover310225-3313Energie Cottbus 301215-4117Hansa Rostock200215-4
Revised:  Standings Standings after Saturday games of Week 3 PosTeamGPWDLFAGDPts1Bayern Munich33001001092Arminia Bielefeld321057373Bochum321064274Hamburg320132165Schalke211063346Bayer Leverkusen311131247Eintracht Frankfurt211032148Stuttgart301145-149Werder Bremen311136-3410Wolfsburg2101440311MSV Duisburg310245-1312Hertha Berlin310234-1313Borussia Dortmund310257-2314Karlsruhe310135-2315Nürnberg310224-2316Hannover310225-3313Energie Cottbus 301215-4117Hansa Rostock200215-4
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Original: A military plane flying over the Kodori gorge has been shot down, some residents of the Kodori gorge told Georgia's Rustavi 2 television by telephone on Friday evening.
Revised: A military plane flying over the Kodori gorge has been shot down, some residents of the Kodori Gorge told Georgia's Rustavi 2 television by telephone on Friday evening.
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Original:  The Georgian Interior Ministry has confirmed the incident, saying that fire was opened at a plane that intruded into the Georgian airspace over the Kodori gorge .
Revised:  The Georgian Interior Ministry has confirmed the incident, saying that fire was opened at a plane that intruded into the Georgian airspace over the Kodori Gorge .
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Original:  The incident, reportedly, occurred late on August 23, but the news broke  day later.
Revised:  The incident, reportedly, occurred late on August 23, but the news broke a day later.
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Original:  Of the South African bowlers, Dale Steyn took 3-65 and Morne Morkel  2-39.
Revised:  Of the South African bowlers, Dale Steyn took 3-65 and Morne Morkel took 2-39.
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Original: Two explosions have been reported in the southern Indian city of Hyderabad, killing some 40 people.
Revised:  have been reported in the southern Indian city of Hyderabad, killing some 40 people.
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Original:  The first explosion took place at Lumbini Park near the state secretariat at around 20:00 and another at Gokul Chat Bhandar 15 minutes later, they said.
Revised:  The first explosion took place at near the state secretariat at around 20:00 and another at Gokul Chat Bhandar 15 minutes later, they said.
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Original:  The first explosion took place at Lumbini Park near the state secretariat at around 20:00 and another at Gokul Chat Bhandar 15 minutes later, they said.
Revised:  The first explosion took place at Lumbini Park near the state secretariat at around 20:00 and another at 15 minutes later, they said.
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Original: Efforts to salvage  Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she is grounded on the Sunshine Coast of Queensland, Australia have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
Revised: Efforts to salvage the Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she is grounded on the Sunshine Coast of Queensland, Australia have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
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Original: Efforts to salvage  Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she is grounded on the Sunshine Coast of Queensland, Australia have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
Revised: Efforts to salvage Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she ran aground on the Sunshine Coast of Queensland, Australia have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
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Original: Efforts to salvage  Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she is grounded on the Sunshine Coast of Queensland, Australia have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
Revised: Efforts to salvage Indonesian naval vessel Arung Samudera from where she is grounded on the Sunshine Coast Queensland, have been delayed due to poor weather conditions.
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Original:  A salvage contractor has being brought in to rescue the stricken vessel, although her hull is intact and it is believed the ship is in no imminent danger of breaking apart.
Revised:  A salvage contractor has being brought in to rescue the stricken vessel, her hull is intact and it is believed the ship is in no imminent danger of breaking apart.
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Original:  It is still hoped the ship can be repaired in time for it to attend a summit next month in Sydney, but Australia has acknowledged this to be unlikely.
Revised:  It is still hoped the ship can be repaired in time for it to attend a summit next month in Sydney, but this to be unlikely.
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Original:  A decision on whether to take her to Brisbane or Gladstone for repairs is expected to be made on Monday , to coincide with the beginning of salvage operations
Revised:  A decision on whether to take her to Brisbane or Gladstone for repairs is expected to be made on Monday 
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Original:  Reports indicate the truck driver was travelling northbound when he and his vehicle came up behind the group and collided with many of them.
Revised:  Reports indicate the truck driver was traveling northbound when he and his vehicle came up behind the group and collided with many of them.
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Original:  Montreal Transit Corporation workers issued confused directions during the day, as some had not been informed of a provisionary bus service to replace the lost subway service.
Revised:  Montreal Transit Corporation workers issued directions during the day, as some had not been informed of a provisionary bus service to replace the lost subway service.
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Original:  Montreal Transit Corporation workers issued confused directions during the day, as some had not been informed of a provisionary bus service to replace the lost subway service.
Revised:  Montreal Transit Corporation workers issued confused directions during the day, though some may not have been informed of a provisionary bus service to replace the lost subway service.
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Original:  The downtown area remains closed for at least the weekend, along with portions of the underground city, or RESO.
Revised:  The downtown area is intended to remain closed for at least the weekend, along with portions of the underground city, or RESO.
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Original:  Still, he pushed hard on Robert Kubica and Nick Heidfeld and, as he mentioned himself on the post-race press conference, the race started for him after the first pit-stop, when he overtook both BMW's  
Revised:  Still, he pushed hard on Robert Kubica and Nick Heidfeld and, as he mentioned himself on the post-race press conference, the race started for him after the first pit-stop, when he overtook both BMW's . 
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Original:  Brendan Taylor added 43 runs, and shared a partnership of 109 runs with Tatenda Taibu.
Revised:  Brendan Taylor added 43 runs, and shared a partnership of 109 with Tatenda Taibu.
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Original:  However it was not enough to revive Zimbabwe's run chase and they finished on 295-7, 28 runs short of South Africa's total.
Revised:  However it was not enough to boost Zimbabwe's run chase and they finished on 295-7, 28 runs short of South Africa's total.
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