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Original: Artist / painter Wood advocated for the Native Americans, but he also painted them.
Revised: Artist and painter Wood advocated for the Native Americans, but he also painted them.
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Original:  Later years Entry to "The Cats"  From 1925 until his death in 1944  Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats . "  His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger  and John Steinbeck.
Revised:  Later years Entry to "The Cats" From 1925 until his death in 1944 , Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats . " His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger and John Steinbeck.
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Original:  Later years Entry to "The Cats"  From 1925 until his death in 1944  Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats . "  His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger  and John Steinbeck.
Revised:  Later years Entry to "The Cats" From 1925 until his death in 1944 Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats " His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger and John Steinbeck.
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Original:  Later years Entry to "The Cats"  From 1925 until his death in 1944  Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats . "  His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger  and John Steinbeck.
Revised:  Later years Entry to "The Cats" From 1925 until his death in 1944 Wood lived with his second wife, Sara Bard Field, in Los Gatos in a house named "The Cats . " His friends included Chief Joseph, Emma Goldman, Eugene Debs, Ansel Adams, Robinson Jeffers, Clarence Darrow, Childe Hassam, Margaret Sanger , and John Steinbeck.
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Original:  At the time of his death  Wood was West Point's oldest living graduate.
Revised:  At the time of his death , Wood was West Point's oldest living graduate.
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Original:  From where the sun now stands, I will fight no more URL The two men became close friends.
Revised:  From where the sun now stands, I will fight no more forever." The two men became close friends.
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Original:  the same category is held by other non-state entities such as the International Olympic Committee and International Committee of the Red URL
Revised:  the same category is held by other non-state entities such as the International Olympic Committee and International Committee of the Red Cross.
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Original: The supreme head of the Order is the Prince and Grand Master, who is elected for life by the Council Complete of State , holds the precedence of a cardinal of the Church  since 1630  and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
Revised: The supreme head of the Order is the Prince and Grand Master, who is elected for life by the Council Complete of State , holds the precedence of a cardinal of the Church , since 1630 and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
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Original: The supreme head of the Order is the Prince and Grand Master, who is elected for life by the Council Complete of State , holds the precedence of a cardinal of the Church  since 1630  and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
Revised: The supreme head of the Order is the Prince and Grand Master, who is elected for life by the Council Complete of State , holds the precedence of a cardinal of the Church since 1630 , and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
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Original:  The Grand Master ranks, in terms of honor and privilege (though their vows are as lay religious, they are not ordained clergy- bishops, priests, or deacons- or part of an actual religious order), directly below the most junior cardinal of the Church , since 1630 , and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
Revised:  The Grand Master ranks, in terms of honor and privilege (though their vows are as lay religious, they are not ordained clergy- bishops, priests, or deacons- or part of an actual religious order), directly below the most junior cardinal of the Church since 1630 , and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
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Original:  The Grand Master ranks, in terms of honor and privilege (though their vows are as lay religious, they are not ordained clergy- bishops, priests, or deacons- or part of an actual religious order), directly below the most junior cardinal of the Church , since 1630 , and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
Revised:  The Grand Master ranks, in terms of honor and privilege (though their vows are as lay religious, they are not ordained clergy- bishops, priests, or deacons- or part of an actual religious order), directly below the most junior cardinal of the Church , since 1630 and received the rank of Prince of the Holy Roman Empire in 1607.
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Original:  He trained under Kaniyamparambil Kurien Cor Episcopa achen and studied Syriac.
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Original:  He was the President of the National Council of Churches in India, Senior President of CCA, and the chairman of CASA . Joseph Mar Thoma was the president of the World Syriac Conference .
Revised:  He was the President of the National Council of Churches in India, Senior President of CCA, and the chairman of CASA .
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Original: Early life P.T. Joseph was born on 27 June 1931, as the son of Palakunnathu T. Lukose of Maramon Palakunnathu Kadon House and Mariamma, also of Maramon Puthoor House (now both deceased) .
Revised: Early life P.T. Joseph was born on 27 June 1931, as the son of Palakunnathu T. Lukose of Maramon Palakunnathu Kadon House and Mariamma, of Maramon Puthoor House (now both deceased) .
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Original: Early life P.T. Joseph was born on 27 June 1931, as the son of Palakunnathu T. Lukose of Maramon Palakunnathu Kadon House and Mariamma, also of Maramon Puthoor House (now both deceased) .
Revised: Early life P.T. Joseph was born on 27 June 1931, as the son of Palakunnathu T. Lukose of Maramon Palakunnathu Kadon House and Mariamma, also of Maramon Puthoor House .
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Original:  After his education at Maramon and Kozhencherry, he joined Union Christian College  Aluva where he also played for the college basketball team.
Revised:  After his education at Maramon and Kozhencherry, he joined Union Christian College , Aluva where he also played for the college basketball team.
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Original:  After his education at Maramon and Kozhencherry, he joined Union Christian College  Aluva where he also played for the college basketball team.
Revised:  After his education at Maramon and Kozhencherry, he joined Union Christian College Aluva where he played for the college basketball team.
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Original:  The Rev. V.T. Koshy, Easow Mar Timotheos, was also ordained on the same day.
Revised:  Rev. V.T. Koshy, Easow Mar Timotheos, was also ordained on the same day.
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Original:  He continues as Valiya Metropolitan (Metropolitan Emeritus) .
Revised:  He continued as 'Valiya Metropolitan' or Metropolitan Emeritus .
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Original:  His activities included growing sanctions of building many socio-spiritual centers with megalithic monuments.
Revised:  His activities included sanctions of building many socio-spiritual centers with megalithic monuments.
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Original:  Introduction of music and other attractive worship styles to target the younger generation (via DSMC studio, Blogs, Camps , Channel... etc. ).
Revised:  Introduction of music and other attractive worship styles to target the younger generation (via DSMC studio, Blogs, Camps ).
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Original:  Category: 1932 births Category:Mar Thoma Syrian Church Category:People from Pathanamthitta district Category:Saint Thomas Christians Category:Malayali people Category:Metropolitans of the Mar Thoma Syrian Church Category:Pakalomattam family Category:Christian clergy from Kerala Category:2020 deaths Category:Deaths from pancreatic cancer Category:Deaths from cancer in Ind
Revised:  Category: 1930 births Category:Mar Thoma Syrian Church Category:People from Pathanamthitta district Category:Saint Thomas Christians Category:Malayali people Category:Metropolitans of the Mar Thoma Syrian Church Category:Pakalomattam family Category:Christian clergy from Kerala Category:2020 deaths Category:Deaths from pancreatic cancer Category:Deaths from cancer in Ind
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Original: Laboratory testing Because newborn screening programs test for a number of different conditions, a number of different laboratorial methodologies are used, as well as bedside testing for hearing loss using evoked auditory potentials and congenital heart defects using pulse oximetry.
Revised: Laboratory testing Because newborn screening programs test for a number of conditions, a number of different laboratorial methodologies are used, as well as bedside testing for hearing loss using evoked auditory potentials and congenital heart defects using pulse oximetry.
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Original: Laboratory testing Because newborn screening programs test for a number of different conditions, a number of different laboratorial methodologies are used, as well as bedside testing for hearing loss using evoked auditory potentials and congenital heart defects using pulse oximetry.
Revised: Laboratory testing Because newborn screening programs test for a number of different conditions, a number of laboratorial methodologies are used, as well as bedside testing for hearing loss using evoked auditory potentials and congenital heart defects using pulse oximetry.
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Original: Amino acid disorders Newborn screening originated with an amino acid disorder, phenylketonuria (PKU), which can be easily treated by dietary modifications, but causes severe mental retardation if not identified and treated early.
Revised: Amino acid disorders Newborn screening originated with an amino acid disorder, phenylketonuria (PKU), which can be easily treated by dietary modifications, but causes a severe Intellectual disability if not identified and treated early.
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Original: Amino acid disorders Newborn screening originated with an amino acid disorder, phenylketonuria (PKU), which can be easily treated by dietary modifications, but causes a severe Intellectual disability if not identified and treated early.
Revised: Amino acid disorders Newborn screening originated with an amino acid disorder, phenylketonuria (PKU), which can be easily treated by dietary modifications, but causes severe Intellectual disability if not identified and treated early.
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Original:  Since December 2018 all US´states perform SCID URL As the first country in Europe, Norway started nationwide SCID screening January URL Identification of infants with SCID is done by detecting T-cell receptor excision circles (TRECs) using real-time polymerase chain reaction (qPCR).
Revised:  Since December 2018 all US´states perform SCID screening. As the first country in Europe, Norway started nationwide SCID screening January URL Identification of infants with SCID is done by detecting T-cell receptor excision circles (TRECs) using real-time polymerase chain reaction (qPCR).
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Original:  Since December 2018 all US´states perform SCID URL As the first country in Europe, Norway started nationwide SCID screening January URL Identification of infants with SCID is done by detecting T-cell receptor excision circles (TRECs) using real-time polymerase chain reaction (qPCR).
Revised:  Since December 2018 all US´states perform SCID URL As the first country in Europe, Norway started nationwide SCID screening January 2018. Identification of infants with SCID is done by detecting T-cell receptor excision circles (TRECs) using real-time polymerase chain reaction (qPCR).
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Original:  These ritual purification practices are prescribed as how humans should comport themselves in the presence of sacred things.
Revised:  These ritual purification practices are prescribed as how humans should comfort themselves in the presence of sacred things.
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Original:  These ritual purification practices are prescribed as how humans should comfort themselves in the presence of sacred things.
Revised:  These ritual purification practices are prescribed as how humans should comport themselves in the presence of sacred things.
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Original: As part of South Sudan Pastoral strategies Hussein Abdelbagi, Vice President of South Sudan Ajak Mayol Bior, a fierce defence lawyer and former child soldier Deng Adut, defence lawyer and former child soldier Abel Alier, known as "Abel Alier Kwai", the first southerner former president of High Executive Council of Southern Sudan and Vice President of Sudan (1972-1982).
Revised:  Pastoral strategies Hussein Abdelbagi, Vice President of South Sudan Ajak Mayol Bior, a fierce defence lawyer and former child soldier Deng Adut, defence lawyer and former child soldier Abel Alier, known as "Abel Alier Kwai", the first southerner former president of High Executive Council of Southern Sudan and Vice President of Sudan (1972-1982).
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Original: As part of South Sudan Pastoral strategies Hussein Abdelbagi, Vice President of South Sudan Ajak Mayol Bior, a fierce defence lawyer and former child soldier Deng Adut, defence lawyer and former child soldier Abel Alier, known as "Abel Alier Kwai", the first southerner former president of High Executive Council of Southern Sudan and Vice President of Sudan (1972-1982).
Revised: As part of South Sudan Pastoral strategies Hussein Abdelbagi, Vice President of South Sudan Deng Adut, defence lawyer and former child soldier Abel Alier, known as "Abel Alier Kwai", the first southerner former president of High Executive Council of Southern Sudan and Vice President of Sudan (1972-1982).
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Original:  Dinka man with personal cattle They number around 4.5 million people according to the 2008 Sudan census, constituting about 18\% of the populationAncient Historical Society Virtual Museum, 2010 of the entire country, and the largest ethnic tribe in South Sudan.
Revised:  They number around 4.5 million people according to the 2008 Sudan census, constituting about 18\% of the populationAncient Historical Society Virtual Museum, 2010 of the entire country, and the largest ethnic tribe in South Sudan.
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Original:  URL Southern Sudan has been described as "a large basin gently sloping northward", ( Roth 2003 ) through which flow the Bahr el Jebel River, the (White Nile), the Bahr el Ghazal (Nam) River and its tributaries, and the Sobat, all merging into a vast barrier swamp.
Revised:  URL Southern Sudan has been described as "a large basin gently sloping northward", Roth 2003 ) through which flow the Bahr el Jebel River, the (White Nile), the Bahr el Ghazal (Nam) River and its tributaries, and the Sobat, all merging into a vast barrier swamp.
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Original:  URL Southern Sudan has been described as "a large basin gently sloping northward", ( Roth 2003 ) through which flow the Bahr el Jebel River, the (White Nile), the Bahr el Ghazal (Nam) River and its tributaries, and the Sobat, all merging into a vast barrier swamp.
Revised:  URL Southern Sudan has been described as "a large basin gently sloping northward", ( Roth 2003 through which flow the Bahr el Jebel River, the (White Nile), the Bahr el Ghazal (Nam) River and its tributaries, and the Sobat, all merging into a vast barrier swamp.
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Original:  Beswick, S.F. (1994) JAAS XXIX, 3-4 (c) E. J. Brill, Leiden Religious Beliefs
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Original:  the First President of the Republic of South Sudan, Commander in Chief of Sudan People's Liberation Army and Chairman of Sudan People's Liberation Movement Marial Shayok, current NBA player Alek Wek, fashion model Nyuol Lueth Tong, writer and Forbes 30 Under 30 , Bol Bol, current NBA player and son of Manute Bol Grace Bol, fashion model Adut Akech, fashion model Thomas Deng, current football player Chok Dau, current football player Chok Kuai Akol engineering student at Suez university
Revised:  the First President of the Republic of South Sudan, Commander in Chief of Sudan People's Liberation Army and Chairman of Sudan People's Liberation Movement Marial Shayok, current NBA player Alek Wek, fashion model Nyuol Lueth Tong, writer and Forbes 30 Under 30 Bol Bol, current NBA player and son of Manute Bol Grace Bol, fashion model Adut Akech, fashion model Thomas Deng, current football player Chok Dau, current football player Chok Kuai Akol engineering student at Suez university
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Original: Dhū Nuwās, (),  Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar  (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr),  Yosef Nu'as  (), or  Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
Revised: Dhū Nuwās, (), Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar " (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr), Yosef Nu'as (), or Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
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Original: Dhū Nuwās, (),  Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar  (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr),  Yosef Nu'as  (), or  Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
Revised: Dhū Nuwās, (), Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr), " Yosef Nu'as (), or Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
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Original: Dhū Nuwās, (),  Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar  (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr),  Yosef Nu'as  (), or  Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
Revised: Dhū Nuwās, (), Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr), Yosef Nu'as " (), or Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
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Original: Dhū Nuwās, (),  Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar  (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr),  Yosef Nu'as  (), or  Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
Revised: Dhū Nuwās, (), Yūsuf Asʾar Yathʾar (Musnad: 𐩺𐩥𐩪𐩰 𐩱𐩪𐩱𐩧 𐩺𐩻𐩱𐩧, Yws¹f ʾs¹ʾr Yṯʾr), Yosef Nu'as (), or " Yūsuf Ibn Sharhabeel ()The Complete History, written by Ali ibn al-Athir, page 19 (وقال ابن عباس: كان بنجران ملك من ملوك حمير يقال له ذو نواس واسمه يوسف بن شرحبيل)Syriac Masruq;
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Original:  Greek Dounaas (Δουναας) , was a Jewish king of Himyar between 517 and 525-27 CE , who came to renown on account of his military exploits against people of other religions, notably Christians, living in his kingdom.
Revised:  Greek Dounaas (Δουναας) , was a Jewish king of Himyar between 517 and 525–527 C.E. , who came to renown on account of his military exploits against people of other religions, notably Christians, living in his kingdom.
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Original:  Sources and names The name Yūsuf ’As’ar Yath’ ar (believed to be Joseph Dhū-Nuwas) appears in an old South Arabian inscription.
Revised:  Sources and names The name Yūsuf 'As'ar Yath' ar (believed to be Joseph Dhū-Nuwas) appears in an old South Arabian inscription.
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Original:  However, in the Sabaean inscriptions describing these events, it is reported that by the month Dhu-Madra'an (between July and September) there were “ 1000 killed, 1500 prisoners [taken] and 10,000 head of cattle.
Revised:  However, in the Sabaean inscriptions describing these events, it is reported that by the month Dhu-Madra'an (between July and September) there were " 1000 killed, 1500 prisoners [taken] and 10,000 head of cattle.
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Original:  ” Jacques Ryckmans, La persécution des chrétiens himyarites au sixième siècle, Nederlands Historisch-Archaeologisch Instituut in het Nabije Oosten:
Revised:  " Jacques Ryckmans, La persécution des chrétiens himyarites au sixième siècle, Nederlands Historisch-Archaeologisch Instituut in het Nabije Oosten:
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Original:  Jacques Ryckmans, who deciphered the Sabaean inscriptions, writes in his La Persécution des Chrétiens Himyarites, that Sarah'il Yaqbul-Yaz'an was both the tribal chief and the lieutenant of Yûsuf ’As’ ar (the king) at the time of the military campaign, and that he was sent out by the king to take the city of Najran, while the king watched for a possible Abyssinian/Ethiopian incursion along the coastal plains of Yemen near Mokhā (al-Moḫâ) and the strait known as Bāb al-Mandab.
Revised:  Jacques Ryckmans, who deciphered the Sabaean inscriptions, writes in his La Persécution des Chrétiens Himyarites, that Sarah'il Yaqbul-Yaz'an was both the tribal chief and the lieutenant of Yusuf 'As' ar (the king) at the time of the military campaign, and that he was sent out by the king to take the city of Najran, while the king watched for a possible Abyssinian/Ethiopian incursion along the coastal plains of Yemen near Mokhā (al-Moḫâ) and the strait known as Bāb al-Mandab.
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Original:  It is to be noted that the Ethiopian church in Ẓafâr , which had been built by the Himyarite King some years earlier following the proselytizing mission of Theophilos the Indian and another church built by him in Aden (see: Ecclesiastical History of Philostorgius, Epitome of Book III, chapter 4), had been seen by Constantius II during the embassage to the land of the Ḥimyarites (i.e. Yemen) in circa 340 CE.
Revised:  It is to be noted that the Ethiopian church in Ẓafar , which had been built by the Himyarite King some years earlier following the proselytizing mission of Theophilos the Indian and another church built by him in Aden (see: Ecclesiastical History of Philostorgius, Epitome of Book III, chapter 4), had been seen by Constantius II during the embassage to the land of the Ḥimyarites (i.e. Yemen) in circa 340 CE.
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Original:  Dhi Yazan leader, Samu Yafa' (سميفع أشوع), become the successor of Yusuf in 527 and the Abyssinian forces led by Abraha had invaded Yemen again in 531. Notes
Revised:  Dhi Yazan leader, Samu Yafa' (سميفع أشوع), become the successor of Yusuf in 527 and the Abyssinian forces led by Abraha had invaded Yemen again in 531. References
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Original:  Many modern historians, though Christopher Haasis an exception , have argued that her son's conversion was a matter of tactical opportunism, since Judaism would have provided him with an ideological counterweight to the religion of his adversary, the Kingdom of Aksum, and also allowed him to curry favour with the Sassanid shahanshah.
Revised:  Many modern historians, with the exception of Christopher Haas , have argued that her son's conversion was a matter of tactical opportunism, since Judaism would have provided him with an ideological counterweight to the religion of his adversary, the Kingdom of Aksum, and also allowed him to curry favour with the Sassanid shahanshah.
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