wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The UK prime minister, Gordon brown has announced that donations made to his political party, the Labour Party were "not lawfully declared" as they were donated through a middleman.
Revised: The Prime Minister of the United Kingdom, Gordon Brown has announced that donations made to his political party, the Labour Party were "not lawfully declared" as they were donated through a middleman.
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Original:  This is unlawful because under UK law all donations over £50,000 must be declared along with the name of the donator and all donations made through middlemen must declare the original donator.
Revised:  According to UK law all donations over £50,000 must be declared along with the name of the donator and all donations made through middlemen must declare the original donator.
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Original:  Mr Brown said that although this practice has happened for some years, he was first aware of it on Saturday evening.
Revised:  Brown said that although this practice has happened for some years, he was first aware of it on Saturday evening.
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Original:  As well as returning the money  the general secretary of the Labour Party has stood down as a result of this incident , which has happened just months after it was announced there will be no charges in the cash for honours inquiry, which was related to donations to the Labour Party as well as other political parties.
Revised:  As well as returning the money , the general secretary of the Labour Party has stood down as a result of this incident , which has happened just months after it was announced there will be no charges in the cash for honours inquiry, which was related to donations to the Labour Party as well as other political parties.
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Original:  As well as returning the money  the general secretary of the Labour Party has stood down as a result of this incident , which has happened just months after it was announced there will be no charges in the cash for honours inquiry, which was related to donations to the Labour Party as well as other political parties.
Revised:  As well as returning the money the general secretary of the Labour Party has stood down as a result of this incident . This scandal emerged just months after it was announced there will be no charges in the cash for honours inquiry, which was related to donations to the Labour Party as well as other political parties.
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Original:  This will be another blow to the Labour Party, who appear to be facing a sharp decline in popularity, with some polls suggesting they are even less popular than in the last days of Blair's premiership, despite a large surge in popularity when Brown came to power.
Revised:  This could be another blow to the Labour Party, who appear to be facing a sharp decline in popularity, with some polls suggesting they are even less popular than in the last days of Blair's premiership, despite a large surge in popularity when Brown came to power.
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Original:  According to UK law  all donations over £50,000 must be declared along with the name of the donator and all donations made through middlemen must declare the original donator.
Revised:  According to UK law , all donations over £50,000 must be declared along with the name of the donator and all donations made through middlemen must declare the original donator.
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Original:   This could be another blow to the Labour Party, who appear to be facing a sharp decline in popularity, with some polls suggesting they are even less popular than in the last days of  Blair's premiership, despite a large surge in popularity when Brown came to power.
Revised:  This could be another blow to the Labour Party, who appear to be facing a sharp decline in popularity, with some polls suggesting they are even less popular than in the last days of Tony Blair's premiership, despite a large surge in popularity when Brown came to power.
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Original:  David Abraham officially donated the money, which totaled almost £600,000, although the donations were from Ray Ruddick who donated £196,850 since 2003, Janet Kidd, who has donated £185,000 since 2003 and John McCarthy, who has donated £202,125 since 2004.
Revised:  David Abraham officially donated the money, which totalled almost £600,000, although the donations were from Ray Ruddick who donated £196,850 since 2003, Janet Kidd, who has donated £185,000 since 2003 and John McCarthy, who has donated £202,125 since 2004.
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Original:  David Abraham officially donated the money, which totalled almost £600,000, through 3 third parties.
Revised:  David Abraham officially donated the money, which totaled almost £600,000, through 3 third parties.
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Original:  The acting leader of the Liberal Democrats, Vince Cable, whose party suffered from the increase in Labour's popularity said "an enourmous can of worms had been opened up" and that the UK government should have introduced new regulations on the fuding of political parties
Revised:  The acting leader of the Liberal Democrats, Vince Cable, whose party suffered from the increase in Labour's popularity said "an enormous can of worms had been opened up" and that the UK government should have introduced new regulations on the fuding of political parties
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Original:  The acting leader of the Liberal Democrats, Vince Cable, whose party suffered from the increase in Labour's popularity said "an enourmous can of worms had been opened up" and that the UK government should have introduced new regulations on the fuding of political parties
Revised:  The acting leader of the Liberal Democrats, Vince Cable, whose party suffered from the increase in Labour's popularity said "an enourmous can of worms had been opened up" and that the UK government should have introduced new regulations on the funding of political parties
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Original:  The hard-hitting safety was a Pro Bowl selection last season, and is second in the National Football League (NFL) this season in interceptions, with five.
Revised:  The hard-hitting safety was a Pro Bowl selection last season, and was second in the National Football League (NFL) this season in interceptions, with five.
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Original: Redskins' owner Daniel Snyder said  "This is the worst imaginable tragedy.
Revised: Redskins' owner Daniel Snyder said , "This is the worst imaginable tragedy.
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Original:  Our thoughts and prayers are with Sean's family.     
Revised:  Our thoughts and prayers are with Sean's family. " 
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Original:  It was not able to take photographs of the South Pole due to its orbit path, yet lower-resolution images fill in the gap.
Revised:  It was not able to take photographs of the South Pole due to its orbit path, so lower resolution
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Original:  Robert Bindschadler who is the chief scientist for the Hydrospheric and Biospheric Sciences at NASA said "This innovation is like watching high-definition TV in living color versus watching the picture on a grainy black-and-white television," on this project .
Revised:  Robert Bindschadler who is the chief scientist for the Hydrospheric and Biospheric Sciences at NASA said "This innovation is like watching high-definition TV in living color versus watching the picture on a grainy black-and-white television," on this project 
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Original: The Landsat 7 satellite will continue to document Antarctica from outer space through 2011.
Revised: The Landsat 7 satellite will continue to document Antarctica from space through to 2011.
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Original:  Information from both missions will update the map
Revised:  Information from both projects will update the map
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Original:  The National Science Foundation contributed nearly one million dollars to create the website, available at URL and at hhtp://lima.nasa.gov
Revised:  The National Science Foundation contributed nearly one million dollars to create the website, available at URL and at URL
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Original:  NASA' S Landsat 7 satellite took 10,000 photographs of the continent over a period of two years, from 1999 to 2001. 1,100 pictures were chosen to form the mosaic map.
Revised:  NASA' s Landsat 7 satellite took 10,000 photographs of the continent over a period of two years, from 1999 to 2001. 1,100 pictures were chosen to form the mosaic map.
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Original:  The National Science Foundation contributed nearly one million dollars to create the website , available at URL and at URL
Revised:  The National Science Foundation contributed nearly one million dollars to create the website .
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Original: High-resolution image of McMurdo Station taken by Landsat 7. Scientists at NASA have just released the most detailed map of Antarctica ever.
Revised: High-resolution image of McMurdo Station taken by Landsat 7. Scientists at NASA have recently released the most detailed map of Antarctica ever.
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Original: Stretching 1, 200km from Nyhamna, Norway to Easington, Britain, the pipeline will eventually carry 70m cubic metres per day.
Revised: Stretching 1, 200 km from Nyhamna, Norway to Easington, Britain, the pipeline will eventually carry 70m cubic metres per day.
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Original: Stretching 1, 200km from Nyhamna, Norway to Easington, Britain, the pipeline will eventually carry 70m cubic metres per day.
Revised: Stretching 1, 200km from Nyhamna, Norway to Easington, Britain, the pipeline will eventually carry 70 cubic metres per day.
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Original:  The construction of the pipeline will consume over 1m tonnes of concrete and about the same amount of steel.
Revised:  The construction of the pipeline will consume over 1 million tonnes of concrete and about the same amount of steel.
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Original:  Wikinews, in another exclusive report, has obtained a a DHS video of a recording from the briefing on the report, which is presented by Steven Maebus, a representative for the DHS and ex U.S. army intelligence officer of 21 years.
Revised:  Wikinews, in another exclusive report, has obtained a DHS video of a recording from the briefing on the report, which is presented by Steven Maebus, a representative for the DHS and ex U.S. army intelligence officer of 21 years.
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Original: Maebus also goes on to claim that there is no evidence that al-Qaeda is responsible for the bombs of oil pipelines and the kidnappings of oil workers in Nigeria, but that al-Qaeda is coming down from the northern part of Africa to get involved with or take over terrorist operations in that country.
Revised: Maebus also goes on to claim that there is no evidence that al-Qaeda is responsible for the bombings of oil pipelines and the kidnappings of oil workers in Nigeria, but that al-Qaeda is coming down from the northern part of Africa to get involved with or take over terrorist operations in that country.
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Original: Image:Stgw_90.jpg|The soldier used his army weapon, Sturmgewehr 90 assault rifle to kill the randomly selected victim from distance.
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Original:  A 16 year old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night on a bus stop in Zurich, while waiting with her companion .
Revised: Zurich - A 16 year old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night on a bus stop in Zurich, while waiting with her companion .
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Original:  A 16 year old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night on a bus stop in Zurich, while waiting with her companion .
Revised:  A 16 year old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night .
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Original:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim from distance of 60-100 meters.
Revised:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim from 60-100 meters.
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Original: ]] Zurich - A 16 year old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night.
Revised: ]] A 16-year-old girl was shot dead from distance by a Swiss Army recruit on Friday night.
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Original:  The victim was waiting with her companion on a bus stop in Zurich at 10 pm, next to the Hoenggerberg campus of Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, a technical university.
Revised:  The victim was waiting with her companion at a bus stop in Zurich at 10 pm, next to the Hoenggerberg campus of Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, a technical university.
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Original:  The victim was waiting with her companion on a bus stop in Zurich at 10 pm, next to the Hoenggerberg campus of Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, a technical university.
Revised:  The victim was waiting with her companion on a bus stop in Zurich at 10 pm, next to the Hönggerberg campus of Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, a technical university.
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Original:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim from 60-100 meters .
Revised:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim at a distance of 60-100 meters .
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Original:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim from 60-100 meters .
Revised:  The shooter used his army-assigned assault rifle to shoot the victim from 60-100 metres .
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Original:  With a shot wound in her upper body, the girl died in the arms of her companion before the medical help could arrive.
Revised:  With a gunshot wound in her upper body, the girl died in the arms of her companion before the medical help could arrive.
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Original:  "Yes, it was me who was shooting ",confirmed the 21 years old Swiss recruit of Chilean roots, who freshly finished his recruit school on the same day.
Revised:  "Yes, it was me who was shooting ," confirmed the 21-years-old Swiss recruit of Chilean roots, who freshly finished his recruit school on the same day.
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Original:  "Yes, it was me who was shooting ",confirmed the 21 years old Swiss recruit of Chilean roots, who freshly finished his recruit school on the same day.
Revised:  "Yes, it was me who was shooting ",confirmed the 21 years old Swiss recruit of Chilean ancestry, who had just finished his training at recruit school on the same day.
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Original:  He didn't know his victim, a 16 year old hairdresser apprentice.
Revised:  He did not know his victim, a 16 year old hairdresser apprentice.
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Original:  He didn't know his victim, a 16 year old hairdresser apprentice.
Revised:  He didn't know his victim, who was a 16-year-old hairdresser apprentice.
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Original:  The state attorney assumes that the shooter has picked up his victim randomly.
Revised:  The state attorney assumes that the shooter has picked his victim randomly.
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Original:  There is a heated debate whether the soldiers go on keeping their firearms at homes .
Revised:  There is an ongoing domestic debate whether soldiers should continue to keep their firearms at homes .
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Original:  There is a heated debate whether the soldiers go on keeping their firearms at homes .
Revised:  There is a heated debate whether the soldiers go on keeping their firearms at home .
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Original:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias,  army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
Revised:  According to a study by Martin Killias, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
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Original:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias,  army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
Revised:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths annualy in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
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Original:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias,  army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
Revised:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two-thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
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Original:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias,  army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-assigned firearms
Revised:  According to a study by a Lausanne criminologist Martin Killias, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths yearly in Switzerland and two thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-issued firearms
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Original:  According to a study by Martin Killias, a criminologist at the School of Forensic Sciences and Criminology in Lausanne, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths annualy in Switzerland and two-thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-issued firearms
Revised:  According to a study by Martin Killias, a criminologist at the School of Forensic Sciences and Criminology in Lausanne, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths annually in Switzerland and two-thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-issued firearms
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Original:  According to a study by Martin Killias, a criminologist at the School of Forensic Sciences and Criminology in Lausanne, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths annualy in Switzerland and two-thirds of firearms used for suicides are army-issued firearms
Revised:  According to a study by Martin Killias, a criminologist at the School of Forensic Sciences and Criminology in Lausanne, army-issued firearms are responsible for 300 deaths annualy in Switzerland and two-thirds of suicides-by-firearm are committed with army-issued firearms
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Original:  Any other use than this , or even unsealing  is strictly forbidden.
Revised:  Any other use , or even unsealing is strictly forbidden.
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Original:  Any other use than this , or even unsealing  is strictly forbidden.
Revised:  Any other use than this , or even unsealing the box, is strictly forbidden.
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Original:  The killer soldier used ammunition from a different source.
Revised:  The killer used ammunition from a different source.
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Original:  [[Image:Stgw_90.jpg|The soldier used his army weapon, SIG SG 550 assault rifle to kill the randomly selected victim from distance.]]
Revised:  [[Image:Stgw_90.jpg|The soldier used his army weapon, SIG SG 550 assault rifle to kill the victim from distance.]]
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Original:  As far as the immediate future, it said: "President Abbas and Prime Minister Olmert will continue to meet on a bi-weekly basis to follow up the negotiations in order to offer all necessary assistance for their advancement."
Revised:  Regarding the immediate future, it said: "President Abbas and Prime Minister Olmert will continue to meet on a bi-weekly basis to follow up the negotiations in order to offer all necessary assistance for their advancement."
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Original:  As far as the immediate future, it said: "President Abbas and Prime Minister Olmert will continue to meet on a bi-weekly basis to follow up the negotiations in order to offer all necessary assistance for their advancement."
Revised:  As far as the immediate future, the joint statement said: "President Abbas and Prime Minister Olmert will continue to meet on a bi-weekly basis to follow up the negotiations in order to offer all necessary assistance for their advancement."
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Original:  The statement also set a target for an agreement: "We agree to engage in vigorous, ongoing and continuous negotiations, and shall make every effort to conclude an agreement before the end of 2008."
Revised:  It also set a target for an agreement: "We agree to engage in vigorous, ongoing and continuous negotiations, and shall make every effort to conclude an agreement before the end of 2008."
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Original: 5 men, including Portsmouth manager Harry Redknapp and former Portsmouh chairman Milan Mandaric (now at Leicester City) have been arrested by British police in an investigation into alleged corruption in British football transfers.
Revised: 5 men, including Harry Redknapp, the manager of the English football club Portsmouth, and former Portsmouh chairman Milan Mandaric (now at Leicester City) have been arrested by British police in an investigation into alleged corruption in British football transfers.
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Original: 5 men, including Harry Redknapp, the manager of the English football club Portsmouth, and former Portsmouh chairman Milan Mandaric (now at Leicester City) have been arrested by British police in an investigation into alleged corruption in British football transfers.
Revised: Five men, including Harry Redknapp, the manager of the English football club Portsmouth, and former Portsmouh chairman Milan Mandaric (now at Leicester City) have been arrested by British police in an investigation into alleged corruption in British football transfers.
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Original:  The opponents of this Bill share the same common ground that it severely restricts free speech.
Revised:  The opponents of this Bill share the same common ground that they consider the bill to be severely restrictive of free speech.
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Original:  Individual or groups of New Zealanders face restriction on what they can say for or against a political party under the threat of the Bill.
Revised:  Under, individual or groups of New Zealanders face restriction on what they can say for or against a political party under the threat of the Bill.
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Original:  Once an organisation has spent over NZ $12,000 on a campaign, they must register and then face "draconian restrictions or requirements" including a limit of $ 120,000 says John Boscawen . "At a time when political parties are free to spend millions and millions of dollars promoting their own views - both from their own money, and taxpayer's money.
Revised:  Once an organisation has spent over NZ $12,000 on a campaign, they must register and then face "draconian restrictions or requirements" including a limit of $ 120,000 says . "At a time when political parties are free to spend millions and millions of dollars promoting their own views - both from their own money, and taxpayer's money.
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Original:  Bex Thomas, Logan Ellis, and Josh Nelson all said that they are against the Bill because of the restrictions it places on the free speech.
Revised:  Bex Thomas, Logan Ellis, and Josh Nelson all said that they are against the Bill because of the restrictions it places on free speech.
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Original: Under , individual or groups of New Zealanders face restriction on what they can say for or against a political party under the threat of the Bill . Once an organisation has spent over NZ $12,000 on a campaign, they must register and then face what opponent John Boscawen"draconian restrictions or requirements" including a limit of $ 120, 000 says.
Revised: Under this Bill, individuals or groups of New Zealanders face restriction on what they can say for or against a political party under the threat of the Bill . Once an organisation has spent over NZ $12,000 on a campaign, they must register and then face what opponent John Boscawen"draconian restrictions or requirements" including a limit of $ 120, 000 says.
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