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Original:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region  Thermohalince circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in the thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
Revised:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region . Thermohalince circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in the thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
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Original:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region  Thermohalince circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in the thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
Revised:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region Thermohaline circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in the thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
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Original:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region  Thermohalince circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in the thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
Revised:  One possible explanation is that the shedding of the rings occurs because of incoming eddies from upstream regions , another possible explanation is that the ring shedding is caused by barotropic instabilities in the Agulhas retroflection region Thermohalince circulation Ring shedding might play an important role in thermohaline circulation, depending on the location.
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Original: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with Napalm , after French technicians were taken as prisoners of war in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron Mining| mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed).
Revised: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with napalm , after French technicians were taken as prisoners of war in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron Mining| mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed).
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Original: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with Napalm , after French technicians were taken as prisoners of war in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron Mining| mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed).
Revised: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with Napalm , after French technicians were taken as prisoners of war in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron ore mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed).
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Original:  The bombings were targeted in the rail route from the iron mines in Zouerat to the coast of Nouadibou , which were obstructed by Polisario.
Revised:  The bombings were targeted in the rail route from the iron mines in Zouérat to the coast of Nouadibou , which were obstructed by Polisario.
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Original:  The bombings were targeted in the rail route from the iron mines in Zouerat to the coast of Nouadibou , which were obstructed by Polisario.
Revised:  The bombings were targeted in the rail route from the iron mines in Zouerat to the coast of Nouadhibou , which were obstructed by Polisario.
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Original: The disastrous performance in the war was a major reason for the Mauritian armed forces to overthrow Moktar Ould Daddah, the President of Mauritania in 1979 and an immediate cease-fire with the Polisario.
Revised: The disastrous performance in the war was a major reason for the Mauritanian armed forces to overthrow Moktar Ould Daddah, the President of Mauritania in 1979 and an immediate cease-fire with the Polisario.
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Original: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with napalm, after French civilian technicians were taken as otages in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron ore mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed, although a French physician and his wife were killed during the attack).
Revised: Lamantin operation In December 1977, President Giscard d'Estaing ordered the French Air Force to deploy in Mauritania and start bombing Polisario columns with napalm, after French civilian technicians were taken as hostages in a Polisario raid on the Zouerate iron ore mines, Mauritania's most precious economic asset (they were later released unharmed, although a French physician and his wife were killed during the attack).
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Original: Opération Lamatin (French for manatee) was a December 1977 – July 1978 military intervention by France on the behalf of the Mauritanian government, in its war against Sahrawi guerrilla fighters of the Polisario Front, seeking independence for Western Sahara.
Revised: Opération Lamantin (French for manatee) was a December 1977 – July 1978 military intervention by France on the behalf of the Mauritanian government, in its war against Sahrawi guerrilla fighters of the Polisario Front, seeking independence for Western Sahara.
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Original: Илья Вельджанов от «красной девицы» Lost his parents early, and was brought up in an orphanage.
Revised: Илья Вельджанов от «красной девицы» He lost his parents early, and was brought up in an orphanage.
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Original: Lieutenant General Ilýa Weljanowiç Weljanow (Cyrillic: Илья Вельджанович Вельджанов) is a Soviet-Turkmen politician and diplomat, as well as a Belarusian public figure.
Revised: Lieutenant General Ilýa Weljanowiç Weljanow (Cyrillic: Илья Вельджанович Вельджанов) was a Soviet-Turkmen politician and diplomat, as well as a Belarusian public figure.
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Original:  Early life and education Hw was born on January 17, 1934 in Kyzyl-Arvat.
Revised:  Early life and education He was born on January 17, 1934 in Kyzyl-Arvat.
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Original:   He retired from the army in 1992.
Revised:  In the late 1980s, Saparmurat Niyazov (then the First Secretary of the Turkmen Communist Party) traveled to Azerbaijan for a political event. At that time, Weljanow was the Deputy Commander of the Transcaucasian Military District, and was assigned to accompany him in Baku. Niyazov, surprised at the sight of an ethnic Turkmen general, became acquainted with Weljanow. He retired from the army in 1992.
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Original:  At the moment he is the head of the Minsk City Branch of the Belarusian Union of Officers.
Revised:  He became the head of the Minsk City Branch of the Belarusian Union of Officers.
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Original:  He is also an honorary professor at the Belarusian National Technical University.
Revised:  He was also an honorary professor at the Belarusian National Technical University.
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Original:  Personal life He has lived and worked in Minsk since 1984.
Revised:  Personal life He lived and worked in Minsk since 1984.
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Original: Lorella Flego , (born 3 July 1974) is an Slovenian television presenter.
Revised: Lorella Flego (born 3 July 1974) is an Slovenian television presenter.
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Original: Lorella Flego , (born 3 July 1974) is an Slovenian television presenter.
Revised: Lorella Flego , (born 3 July 1974) is a Slovenian television presenter.
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Original:  She has presented several national selection for Eurovision for her country .
Revised:  She has presented several national selections for the Eurovision Song Contest for her country .
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Original:  She will be the spokesperson for Slovenias jury votes in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 on May 22.
Revised:  She will be the spokesperson for Slovenia's jury votes in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 on May 22.
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Original:  She will be the spokesperson for Slovenias jury votes in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2021 on May 22.
Revised:  She will be the spokesperson for Slovenias jury votes in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2021.
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Original:  She has presented several national selections for the Eurovision Song Contest for her country and was the spokesperson for Slovenia 's jury votes in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest  2021.
Revised:  She has presented several national selections for the Eurovision Song Contest for her country and was the spokesperson for Slovenia in the final of the Eurovision Song Contest 2021.
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Original:  With Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election .
Revised:  Like Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election .
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Original:  Like Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election , using scientific sampling methodologies that proved far more accurate than the Literary Digest's straw polling , which had notoriously predicted Franklin D. Roosevelt's defeat (he won in a landslide).
Revised:  Like Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election . The pollsters used scientific sampling methodologies that proved far more accurate than the Literary Digest's straw polling , which had notoriously predicted Franklin D. Roosevelt's defeat (he won in a landslide).
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Original:  Like Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election , using scientific sampling methodologies that proved far more accurate than the Literary Digest's straw polling , which had notoriously predicted Franklin D. Roosevelt's defeat (he won in a landslide).
Revised:  Like Elmo Roper and George Gallup, Crossley successfully predicted the outcome of the 1936 United States presidential election , using scientific sampling methodologies that proved far more accurate than the Literary Digest's straw poll , which had notoriously predicted Franklin D. Roosevelt's defeat (he won in a landslide).
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Original:  After Crossley, Roper, and Gallup all wrongly predicted the outcome of the 1948 U.S. presidential election, they developed industry standards for public opinion polls, shifting from quota to probability sampling.
Revised:  After Crossley, Roper, and Gallup all wrongly predicted the outcome of the 1948 U.S. presidential election, they developed industry standards for public opinion polls, inaugurating an industry-wide shift from quota sampling to probability sampling.
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Original:  It is also used in George Kubler's book, The Shape of Time as a reference to individuals who create works of art. page 10
Revised:  It is also used in George Kubler's book, The Shape of Time as a reference to individuals who create works of art. 
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Original: In Latin literature, Appius Claudius Caecus uses this term in his Sententiæ, referring to the ability of man to control his destiny and what surrounds him: Homo faber suae quisque fortunae (  Every man is the artifex of his destiny  ).
Revised: In Latin literature, Appius Claudius Caecus uses this term in his Sententiæ, referring to the ability of man to control his destiny and what surrounds him: Homo faber suae quisque fortunae ( " Every man is the artifex of his destiny ).
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Original: In Latin literature, Appius Claudius Caecus uses this term in his Sententiæ, referring to the ability of man to control his destiny and what surrounds him: Homo faber suae quisque fortunae (  Every man is the artifex of his destiny  ).
Revised: In Latin literature, Appius Claudius Caecus uses this term in his Sententiæ, referring to the ability of man to control his destiny and what surrounds him: Homo faber suae quisque fortunae ( Every man is the artifex of his destiny " ).
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Original:  In older anthropology theories , Homo faber, as the "working man", is confronted with Homo ludens, the "playing man", who is concerned with amusements, humor, and leisure.
Revised:  In older anthropological discussions , Homo faber, as the "working man", is confronted with Homo ludens, the "playing man", who is concerned with amusements, humor, and leisure.
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Original:  Notable examples include the 2005 Epsom Derby winner Motivator, owned by the Royal Ascot Racing Club, 2003 Kentucky Derby winner Funny Cide, owned by a group of 10 partners organized as Sackatoga Stable . 2008 Kentucky Derby winner Big Brown, owned by IEAH stables, a horse racing hedgefund organization.
Revised:  Notable examples include the 2005 Epsom Derby winner Motivator, owned by the Royal Ascot Racing Club, 2003 Kentucky Derby winner Funny Cide, owned by a group of 10 partners organized as Sackatoga Stable , and 2008 Kentucky Derby winner Big Brown, owned by IEAH stables, a horse racing hedgefund organization.
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Original: Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally racehorses have been breed an owned by very wealthy individuals dude to the cost of breeding and blood lines.
Revised: Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally racehorses have been owned by very wealthy individuals dude to the cost of breeding and blood lines.
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Original: Thoroughbred horse racing is a sport and industry involving the racing and hound racing of Thoroughbred horses.
Revised: Thoroughbred horse racing is a sport and industry involving the racing of Thoroughbred horses.
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Original: Thoroughbred horse racing is a sport and industry involving the racing of Thoroughbred horses.
Revised: Thoroughbred racing is a sport and industry involving the racing of Thoroughbred horses.
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Original:  Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally  racehorses have been owned by very wealthy individuals.
Revised:  Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally , racehorses have been owned by very wealthy individuals.
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Original:  Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally  racehorses have been owned by very wealthy individuals.
Revised:  Ownership and training of racehorses Traditionally racehorses have been owned by wealthy individuals.
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Original:  There are two forms of the sport – flat racing and jump racing, the latter known as National Hunt racing in the UK and steeplechasing in the US. Jump racing can be further divided into hurdling and steeplechasing .
Revised:  There are two forms of the sport – flat racing and jump racing, the latter known as National Hunt racing in the UK and steeplechasing in thedfxf US. Jump racing can be further divided into hurdling and steeplechasing .
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Original:  There are two forms of the sport – flat racing and jump racing, the latter known as National Hunt racing in the UK and steeplechasing in the US. Jump racing can be further divided into hurdling and steeplechasing .
Revised:  There are two forms of the sport – flat racing and jump racing, the latter known as National Hunt racing in the UK and steeplechasing in the US. Jump racing can be further divided into hurdling and plp .
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Original: Faruk Sümer, «Ak Koyunlular», Türk Dünyası Araştırmaları,İstanbul, «Şubat», 198  
Revised: Faruk Sümer, «Ak Koyunlular», Türk Dünyası Araştırmaları,İstanbul, «Şubat», 198 References 
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Original:   BEC is termed an ecosystem classification as the approach integrates site, soil, and vegetation characteristics to develop and characterize all units.
Revised:  . BEC is termed an ecosystem classification as the approach integrates site, soil, and vegetation characteristics to develop and characterize all units.
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Original:  These included the American tradition of community change and climax, the state factor concept of Jenny, the Braun-Blanquet approach, the Russian biogeocoenose, and environmental grids, and the European microscopic pedology approach .
Revised:  These included the American tradition of community change and climax, the state factor concept of Jenny, the Braun-Blanquet approach, the Russian biogeocoenose, and environmental grids, and the European microscopic pedology approach 
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Original: Biogeoclimatic Ecosystem Classification (BEC) is an ecological classification framework used in British Columbia to define, describe, and map ecosystem-based units at various scales, from broad, ecologically-based climatic regions down to local ecosystems or sites. . BEC is termed an ecosystem classification as the approach integrates site, soil, and vegetation characteristics to develop and characterize all units.
Revised: Biogeoclimatic Ecosystem Classification (BEC) is an ecological classification framework used in British Columbia to define, describe, and map ecosystem-based units at various scales, from broad, ecologically-based climatic regions down to local ecosystems or sites. BEC is termed an ecosystem classification as the approach integrates site, soil, and vegetation characteristics to develop and characterize all units.
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Original: Dr Vanlalthlana is a Zoram People's Movement politician from Mizoram  and resides at Ramhlun North, Aizawl, Mizoram.
Revised: Dr Vanlalthlana is a Zoram People's Movement politician from Mizoram State in North India. and resides at Ramhlun North, Aizawl, Mizoram.
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Original: Dr Vanlalthlana is a Zoram People's Movement politician from Mizoram State in North India. and resides at Ramhlun North, Aizawl, Mizoram.
Revised:  Vanlalthlana is a Zoram People's Movement politician from Mizoram State in North India. and resides at Ramhlun North, Aizawl, Mizoram.
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Original:  He has been elected to the Mizoram Legislative Assembly from Aizawl North 2 Constituency.
Revised:  He was elected to the Mizoram Legislative Assembly from Aizawl North 2 Constituency.
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Original:   Vanlalthlana is the son of a church minister Rev. C. Biakmawia, who had served as Moderator of the Mizoram Presbyterian Church Synod and Principal of Aizawl Theological College.
Revised:  Family Vanlalthlana is the son of a church minister Rev. C. Biakmawia, who had served as Moderator of the Mizoram Presbyterian Church Synod and Principal of Aizawl Theological College.
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Original:   Vanlalthlana studied commerce and completed M.Com and PhD from Mizoram University.
Revised:  Education Vanlalthlana studied commerce and completed M.Com and PhD from Mizoram University.
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Original: 385x385px Operation Alaska, Finalaska or New Finland was a proposed plan by some US officials to take Finnish refugees into Alaska if the Soviet Union would have conquered Finland, there were plans to take Finns into Alaska, both during the winter war and the continuation war.
Revised:  Operation Alaska, Finalaska or New Finland was a proposed plan by some US officials to take Finnish refugees into Alaska if the Soviet Union would have conquered Finland, there were plans to take Finns into Alaska, both during the winter war and the continuation war.
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Original:  During the continuation war there was also a plan to take Finnish refugees, however on a larger scale, because America was ready to Evacuate the whole Finnish population  .
Revised:  During the continuation war there was also a plan to take Finnish refugees, however on a larger scale, because America was ready to evacuate the whole Finnish population .
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Original: Operation Alaska, Finalaska or New Finland was a proposed plan by some US officials to take Finnish refugees into Alaska if the Soviet Union would have conquered Finland, there were plans to take Finns into Alaska, both during the winter war and the continuation war .
Revised: Operation Alaska, Finalaska or New Finland was a proposed plan by some US officials to take Finnish refugees into Alaska if the Soviet Union would have conquered Finland, there were plans to take Finns into Alaska, both during the Winter War and the Continuation War .
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Original:  It causes reduced growth of the foetus, and leads to miscarriage in nearly 1 in 3 pregnancies  .
Revised:  It causes reduced growth of the foetus, and leads to miscarriage in nearly 1 in 3 pregnancies affected .
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Original:  Recurrence In mothers who have already experienced it, there is a high risk of recurrence.
Revised:  In mothers who have already experienced it, there is a high risk of recurrence.
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Original:  It may also be linked to maternal syphilis infection, and antiphospholipid syndrome  .
Revised:  It may also be linked to maternal syphilis infection, and antiphospholipid syndrome , among other conditions .
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Original:  It causes premature birth in 33\% of pregnancies, and neonatal death in 31\% of pregnancies   .
Revised:  It causes premature birth in 33\% of pregnancies, and neonatal death in 31\% of pregnancies . .
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Original:  337–370) was a state of Xianbei ethnicity during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
Revised:  337–370) was a state of ruled by the Xianbei during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
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Original:  337–370) was a state of ruled by the Xianbei during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
Revised:  337–370) was a state ruled by the Xianbei during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
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Original:  337–370) was a  state ruled by the Xianbei during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
Revised:  337–370) was a dynastic state ruled by the Xianbei during the era of Sixteen Kingdoms in China.
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Original:  Initially, Murong Huang and his son Murong Jun claimed the Jin Dynasty (266–420)-created title "Prince of Yan," but subsequently, in 352, after seizing most of the former Later Zhao territory, Murong Jun would declare himself emperor, and after that point, the rulers of the Former Yan declared themselves "emperors".
Revised:  Initially, Murong Huang and his son Murong Jun claimed the Jin dynasty-created title "Prince of Yan," but subsequently, in 352, after seizing most of the former Later Zhao territory, Murong Jun would declare himself emperor, and after that point, the rulers of the Former Yan declared themselves "emperors".
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Original:  This was the first drug development initiative in Public–private partnership model in India.
Revised:  This was the first drug development initiative of a Public–private partnership model in India.
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Original:  ]  The World Health Organization (WHO) launched a global program to eliminate Lymphatic Filariasis in 2000.
Revised:  with] The World Health Organization (WHO) launched a global program to eliminate Lymphatic Filariasis in 2000.
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