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Original:  Character breakdowns may also be created, and are used in casting calls .
Revised:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script. This is then organized into strips, and is more easily done nowadays on the computer with Final Draft Tagger, or Movie Magic Screenwriter than done manually. The computer software comes in both Microsoft and Mac versions. This whole process of the script breakdown however is not to be confused with Character breakdowns utilized with casting calls, this is an entire different process with similar names, however administered by two entirely separate departments .
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Original: Film and Television In film and television, a script breakdown is an analysis of a screenplay in which all of the production elements are reduced to lists.
Revised: Film and Television In film and television, a script breakdown is an analysis of a screenplay in which all of the production elements are reduced into lists.
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Original:  Within these lists, are in essence the foundation of creating a production board, which is fundamental in creating a production schedule and production budget of the entire production with any film or television program in pre production.
Revised:  Within these lists, are in essence the foundation of creating a production board, which is fundamental in creating a production schedule and production budget of an entire production of any film or television program in pre production.
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Original:  This process is a very tedious and complex task, and is usually the responsibility of the Assistant Director or first or 1AD within the production staff , of any given the production company.
Revised:  This process is a very tedious and complex task, and is usually the responsibility of the Assistant Director or first or 1AD within the production staff of any given the production company.
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Original:  This process is a very tedious and complex task, and is usually the responsibility of the Assistant Director or first or 1AD within the production staff , of any given the production company.
Revised:  This process is a very tedious and complex task, and is usually the responsibility of the Assistant Director or first or 1AD within the production staff , of any given production company.
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Original:  However, many film directors, film producers and screenwriters have the knowledge of breaking down a script.
Revised:  However, many film directors, film producers and screenwriters have knowledge of breaking down a script.
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Original:  In particular, literally Breaking down the script is a very a thorough and detailed creative analysis of dramatic action in filmmaking, highlighting the reciprocal struggle, theme, and design elements of a screenplay.
Revised:  In particular, literally breaking down the script is a very a thorough and detailed creative analysis of dramatic action in filmmaking, highlighting the reciprocal struggle, theme, and design elements of a screenplay.
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Original:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley  film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
Revised:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up and hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
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Original:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley  film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
Revised:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, special equipment and or cameras, ADR, Foley film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
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Original:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley  film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
Revised:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley , film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
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Original:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley  film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down into colored highlights within the shooting script.
Revised:  Which is to code the entire cast, extras, props, special effects, stunts, wranglers, picture cars, wardrobe, make-up with includes hair stylists, any special equipment or cameras, ADR, Foley film scores and soundtracks etc., which are all broken-down with different colored marker highlights within a shooting script.
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Original:  This whole process of the script breakdown however is not to be confused with Character breakdowns utilized with casting calls, this is an entire different process with similar names, however administered by two entirely separate departments.
Revised:  This whole process of the script breakdown however is not to be confused with character breakdowns utilized with casting calls, this is an entire different process with similar names, however administered by two entirely separate departments.
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Original:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
Revised:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
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Original:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
Revised:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
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Original:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
Revised:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
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Original:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Theatre Category:Film production Category:Comics terminology Category:Television terminolo
Revised:  Cartoonists who both write and draw their own work sometimes begin with a script and do their own breakdowns, and sometimes work through drawings without a separate script . see also Storyboard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Glossary for Introduction to Screenwriting%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  However, many film directors, film producers and screenwriters have knowledge of breaking down a script.
Revised:  However, many film directors, film producers and have knowledge of breaking down a script.
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Original:  However, many film directors, film producers and have knowledge of breaking down a script.
Revised:  However, many film directors, film producers have knowledge of breaking down a script.
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Original:  However, many film directors, film producers have knowledge of breaking down a script. 2nd 2nd
Revised:  However, many film directors, film producers have knowledge of breaking down a script. 
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Original:  Therefore, he concludes, this may be also called a “statelike entity ”.
Revised:  Therefore, he concludes, this may be also called a “statelike entity .”
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Original:  He also analyzes the proposal "utilitarianism for animals, Kantianism for people  "  .
Revised:  He also analyzes the proposal "utilitarianism for animals, Kantianism for people , " .
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Original: Equality, envy, and exploitation Nozick presses "the major objection" to theories that bestow and enforce positive rights to various things such as equality of opportunity, life, and so on.
Revised: Equality, Envy, Exploitation, Etc. Nozick presses "the major objection" to theories that bestow and enforce positive rights to various things such as equality of opportunity, life, and so on.
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Original: A framework for Utopia The utopia mentioned in the title of Nozick's first book is a meta-utopia, a framework for voluntary migration between utopias tending towards worlds in which everybody benefits from everybody else's presence.
Revised: A Framework for Utopia The utopia mentioned in the title of Nozick's first book is a meta-utopia, a framework for voluntary migration between utopias tending towards worlds in which everybody benefits from everybody else's presence.
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Original:  Proponents of this ultraminimal state don't defend it on the grounds of trying to minimize the total of (weighted) violations of rights (what he calls utilitarianism of rights ).
Revised:  Proponents of this ultraminimal state don't defend it on the grounds of trying to minimize the total of (weighted) violations of rights (what he calls utilitarianism of rights .)
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Original:  He starts by asking broadly what if someone "crosses a boundary" (for instance, physical harm ).
Revised:  He starts by asking broadly what if someone "crosses a boundary" (for instance, physical harm .)
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Original: A squib is a brief satirical or witty piece of writing or speech, though unlike a lampoon( a short, sometimes humorous piece in a newspaper or magazine, used as a filler ) a squib uses humor to express a true fact.
Revised: A squib is a brief satirical or witty piece of writing or speech, like a lampoon, or a short, sometimes humorous piece in a newspaper or magazine, used as a filler ) a squib uses humor to express a true fact.
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Original:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of real and theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often more substantial than this and factual (see Daily Squib().
Revised:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often more substantial than this and factual (see Daily Squib().
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Original:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of real and theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often more substantial than this and factual (see Daily Squib().
Revised:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of real and theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often less substantial than this and factual (see Daily Squib().
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Original:  The online journal Snippets is dedicated to this type of squib .
Revised:  The online journal Snippets is dedicated to this type of squib 
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Original:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see Daily Squib( ).
Revised:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry , but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see The Daily Squib ).
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Original:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance - e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry, but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see The Daily Squib).
Revised:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance — e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry, but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see The Daily Squib).
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Original:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance —e.g., see MIT Press's journal, Linguistic Inquiry, but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see The Daily Squib).
Revised:  It can be intended to ignite thinking and discourse by others on topics of theoretical importance , but is often less substantial than this and just humorous (see The Daily Squib).
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Original: Body of work Dermoût is arguably one of the great "what-ifs" of twentieth-century literature: she turned to writing early in life, but remained largely unpublished until she was 63.
Revised: Body of work Dermoût turned to writing early in life, but remained largely unpublished until she was 63.
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Original:  She wrote two novels, both of which were not published until she was in her sixties: The Ten Thousand Things (De tienduizend dingen  1955) and Days Before Yesterday — also published as Just Yesterday (Nog pas gisteren  1951).
Revised:  She wrote two novels, both of which were not published until she was in her sixties: The Ten Thousand Things (De tienduizend dingen , 1955) and Days Before Yesterday — also published as Just Yesterday (Nog pas gisteren 1951).
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Original:  She wrote two novels, both of which were not published until she was in her sixties: The Ten Thousand Things (De tienduizend dingen  1955) and Days Before Yesterday — also published as Just Yesterday (Nog pas gisteren  1951).
Revised:  She wrote two novels, both of which were not published until she was in her sixties: The Ten Thousand Things (De tienduizend dingen 1955) and Days Before Yesterday — also published as Just Yesterday (Nog pas gisteren , 1951).
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Original:  As things stand, she is viewed as one of the giants among Dutch-Indies literary writers, and The Ten Thousand Things in particular is widely regarded as an idiosyncratic masterpiece.
Revised:  She is viewed as one of the giants among Dutch-Indies literary writers, and The Ten Thousand Things in particular is widely regarded as an idiosyncratic masterpiece.
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Original: Maria Dermoût ( June 15 , 1888 – June 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
Revised: Maria Dermoût ( 15 , 1888 – June 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
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Original: Maria Dermoût ( June 15 , 1888 – June 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
Revised: Maria Dermoût ( June 15 June 1888 – June 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
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Original: Maria Dermoût ( June 15 , 1888 – June 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
Revised: Maria Dermoût ( June 15 , 1888 – 27 , 1962), was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
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Original: Maria Dermoût (15 June 1888 – 27 June 1962) , was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
Revised: Maria Dermoût (15 June 1888 – 27 June 1962) was an Indo-European novelist, considered one of the greats of Dutch literature and as such an important proponent of Dutch Indies literature.
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Original:  5: 186-189) describes the initiative as follows: Measures The Bamako Initiative proposed decentralising health decision making to local levels and establishing realistic national drug policies to enhance the provision of essential drugs for Sub-Saharan Africans    .
Revised:  5: 186-189) describes the initiative as follows: Measures The Bamako Initiative proposed decentralising health decision making to local levels and establishing realistic national drug policies to enhance the provision of essential drugs for Sub-Saharan Africans . .
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Original:  5: 186-189) describes the initiative as follows: Measures The Bamako Initiative proposed decentralising health decision making to local levels and establishing realistic national drug policies to enhance the provision of essential drugs for Sub-Saharan Africans    .
Revised:  5: 186-189) describes the initiative as follows: Measures The Bamako Initiative proposed decentralising health decision making to local levels and establishing realistic national drug policies to enhance the provision of essential drugs for Sub-Saharan Africans Challenges .
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Original: The idea as proposed by UNICEF's executive director, James  Grant, was for UNICEF and other donors to supply drugs to countries which would be sold a little above cost.
Revised: The idea as proposed by UNICEF's executive director, James P. Grant, was for UNICEF and other donors to supply drugs to countries which would be sold a little above cost.
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Original: Hasaitic is an Old North Arabian dialect attested in inscriptions in the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia at Thaj, Hinna, Qatif, Ras Tanura, Abqaiq in the al-Hasa region, Ayn Jawan, Mileiha and at Uruk.
Revised: Hasaitic is an Ancient North Arabian dialect attested in inscriptions in the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia at Thaj, Hinna, Qatif, Ras Tanura, Abqaiq in the al-Hasa region, Ayn Jawan, Mileiha and at Uruk.
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Original: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 They are written in the South Arabian script and date to the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
Revised: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 It is written in the South Arabian script and date to the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
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Original: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 They are written in the South Arabian script and date to the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
Revised: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 They are written in the South Arabian script and date from the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
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Original:  Refecences M. C. A. Macdonald, Reflections on the linguistic map of pre-Islamic Arabia, Arabian archaeology and epigraphy 11 (2000), 28-79.
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Original: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 It is written in the Ancient North Arabian script and date from the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
Revised: William Facey, The Story of the Eastern Province of Saudi Arabia, 1994, ISBN 1-900988-18-6 It is written in the Ancient North Arabian script and dates from the 3rd to 2nd centuries BC.
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Original: Drawing is a form of visual art in which an artist uses instruments to mark paper or other two-dimensional surface.
Revised: Drawing is drawung in which when an artist uses instruments to mark paper or other two-dimensional surface.
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Original: Drawing is drawung in which when an artist uses instruments to mark paper or other two-dimensional surface.
Revised: Drawing is drawing in which when an artist uses instruments to mark paper or other two-dimensional surface.
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Original:  Using a digital device to transfer a digital medium to a physical medium is known as digital printing.
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Original: Écriture féminine translates from the French as " feminine writing", though it is often translated as " women's writing".
Revised: Écriture féminine translates from the French as " women's writing".
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Original:  A. S. Byatt offers a gentle pastiche of the more pretentiously academic celebration of écriture féminine : "There is a marine and salty female wave-water to be...read as a symbol of female language, which is partly suppressed, partly self-communing, dumb before the intruding male and not able to speak out...thus mirroring those female secretions which are not inscribed in our daily use of language (langue, tongue)".
Revised:  A. S. Byatt offers : "There is a marine and salty female wave-water to be...read as a symbol of female language, which is partly suppressed, partly self-communing, dumb before the intruding male and not able to speak out...thus mirroring those female secretions which are not inscribed in our daily use of language (langue, tongue)".
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Original: Further criticisms of écriture féminine include its essentialist view of the body ;
Revised: Further criticisms of écriture féminine include what some claim is an essentialist view of the body ;
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