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Original:  States may also designate which methods and equipment are and are not legally permissible for taking game, such as listing the approved firearms for hunting or prohibiting the taking of juveniles       .
Revised:  States may also designate which methods and equipment are and are not legally permissible for taking game, such as listing the approved firearms for hunting or prohibiting the taking of juveniles Taking of game is generally a divisive topic, with levels of support and opposition varying significantly depending on the region of the world. For example, the United States generally has higher support for hunting and/or taking of game relative to other nations such as the United Kingdom. There are myriad factors that contribute to the vast differences in cultural attitudes towards taking of game observed around the world. .
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Original: Take (hunting) In hunting, take, or taking, as outlined by the United States Endangered Species Act of 1973, refers to any action that adversely affects a species, particularly killing individuals of that species.
Revised:  In hunting, take, or taking, as outlined by the United States Endangered Species Act of 1973, refers to any action that adversely affects a species, particularly killing individuals of that species.
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Original: In hunting, take , or taking , as outlined by the United States Endangered Species Act of 1973, refers to any action that adversely affects a species, particularly killing individuals of that species .
Revised: In hunting, take , or taking , as outlined by the United States to refer to any action that adversely affects a species, particularly killing individuals of that species .
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Original:  Many proponents of hunting argue , however, that taking game is humane and benefits the environment by managing wildlife populations  .
Revised:  Many proponents of hunting argue that taking game is humane and benefits the environment by managing wildlife populations .
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Original:  Many proponents of hunting argue , however, that taking game is humane and benefits the environment by managing wildlife populations  .
Revised:  Many proponents of hunting argue , however, that taking game is "humane" and benefits the environment by managing wildlife populations .
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Original: Creative services are a subsector of the creative industries, a part of the economy that creates wealth by offering creativity for hire to other businesses.
Revised: Creative services are a subsector of the creative industries, a part of the economy that creates wealthy by offering creativity for hire to other businesses.
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Original: Creative services are a subsector of the creative industries, a part of the economy that creates wealthy by offering creativity for hire to other businesses.
Revised: Creative services are a subsector of the creative industries, a part of the economy that creates wealth by offering creativity for hire to other businesses.
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Original: Here Absalon pushed out into the open sea through the eastern gap at Dziwnow.
Revised:  Absalon pushed out into the open sea through the eastern gap at Dziwnow.
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Original:  As they turned east so did the winds, which blew water from the shoals that lie there  so the ships could by no means get through.
Revised:  As they turned east so did the winds, which blew water from the shoals that lie there , so the ships could by no means get through.
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Original: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but dealt a heavy blow so decisive that Valdemar would not  deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule and laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
Revised: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule and laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
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Original: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but dealt a heavy blow so decisive that Valdemar would not  deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule and laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
Revised: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but dealt a heavy blow so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule and laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
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Original:  With both his lands and the lands of Denmark 's allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
Revised:  With both the lands of Denmark 's allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
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Original:  With both his lands and the lands of Denmark 's allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
Revised:  With both his lands and the lands of Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
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Original:  With the help of his new ally and advisor, Absalon, Valdemar I began to reorganize the civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
Revised:  With the help of Absalon, Valdemar I began to reorganize the civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
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Original:  With both the lands of  Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
Revised:  With the lands of Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
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Original:  With both the lands of  Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
Revised:  With both the lands of both Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
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Original:  With the help of Absalon, Valdemar I began to reorganize the civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
Revised:  With the help of Absalon, Valdemar I began to reorganize civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
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Original:  In the late 1160s Valdemar and Absalon conquered Rügen, and used the isle as a base to launch further raids.
Revised:  In the late 1160s Valdemar and Absalon conquered Rügen, and used the island as a base to launch further raids.
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Original:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdermar I assumed the Danish throne  and the bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
Revised:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdemar I of Denmark assumed the Danish throne and the bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
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Original:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdermar I assumed the Danish throne  and the bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
Revised:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdermar I assumed the Danish throne , and the bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
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Original:  Battle%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by the fleet and the army of Casimir, who was recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by the fleet and the army of Casimir, who was recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:History of Denmark Category:History of Pomerania Category:History of Poland Category:Battles involving Denma
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:History of Denmark Category:History of Pomerania Category:History of Poland Category:Battles involving Denma
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Battle When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by the fleet and the army of Casimir, who was recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by the fleet and the army of Casimir, who was recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:History of Denmark Category:History of Pomerania Category:History of Poland Category:Battles involving Denma 
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:History of Denmark Category:History of Pomerania Category:History of Poland Category:Battles involving Denma 
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Original: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule and laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
Revised: Aftermath The Danes not only escaped, but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule . It also laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
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Original:  The Danish fleet under the leadership of Valdemar I and Absalon , met the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked much of central and western Denmark.
Revised:  The Danish fleet was led by Valdemar I and Absalon , met the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked much of central and western Denmark.
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Original:  The Danish fleet under the leadership of Valdemar I and Absalon , met the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked much of central and western Denmark.
Revised:  The Danish fleet under the leadership of Valdemar I and Absalon and fought the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked much of central and western Denmark.
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Original:  The Danish fleet under the leadership of Valdemar I and Absalon , met the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked much of central and western Denmark.
Revised:  The Danish fleet under the leadership of Valdemar I and Absalon , met the army and fleet of Casimir and Bogislaw I. Background During the Danish Civil War, Wendish raiders, in alliance with Sweyn III, attacked central and western Denmark.
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Original:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdemar I of Denmark assumed the Danish throne, and the bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
Revised:  After Sweyn's defeat and beheading at the Battle of Grathe Heath, his cousin Valdemar I of Denmark assumed the Danish throne, and bishop Absalon repulsed a Wendish raid on Zealand.
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Original:  With the lands of both Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon joined in a new alliance.
Revised:  With the lands of both Denmark and its allies harassed by these raids, Valdemar and Absalon formed an alliance.
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Original:  With the help of Absalon , Valdemar I began to reorganize civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
Revised:  With Absalon's help , Valdemar I began to reorganize civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
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Original:  With the help of Absalon , Valdemar I began to reorganize civil war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
Revised:  With the help of Absalon , Valdemar I began to reorganize war-ravaged Denmark and the Danish armed forces by reinventing Viking tactics that were better optimized for fighting heavy cavalry and carrying out amphibious assaults.
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Original:  They raided and plundered all the villages and towns they passed.
Revised:  They raided and plundered the villages and towns they passed.
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Original:  As they turned east so did the winds, which blew water from the shoals that lie there, so the ships could by no means get through .
Revised:  As they turned east so did the winds, which blew water from the shoals that lie there, so the ships could not pass .
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Original:  This is what the Wends under Casimir had counted on, using fifty ships to block the Danes' only exit , the Julin Bridge.
Revised:  This is what the Wends under Casimir had counted on, using fifty ships to block the Danes' only exit at the Julin Bridge.
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Original:  When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by the fleet and the armyof Casimir, who was recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
Revised:  When the Danes arrived at Julin bridge they were met by Casimir's fleet and army, recently reinforced by his brother Bogislaw.
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Original:  The Danish soldiers and nobles berated Absalon for his plan and were very much in despair over the size of the Wendish forces.
Revised:  The Danish soldiers and nobles berated Absalon in despair over the size of the Wendish forces.
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Original:  Valdemar stoutly defended his old friend and said: "It ill becomes men and soldiers in an hour of need to belabour others with reproaches like a lot of women;
Revised:  Valdemar stoutly defended his friend and said: "It ill becomes men and soldiers in an hour of need to belabour others with reproaches like a lot of women;
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Original:  Absalon did indeed have a plan;
Revised:  Absalon did have a plan;
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Original:  He wanted to smuggle all the Danish cavalry onto the shore under the leadership of Valdemar.
Revised:  He wanted to smuggle the Danish cavalry onto the shore under the leadership of Valdemar.
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Original:  To Casimir and his men the outcome seemed inevitable, so he and his men feasted in celebration of their coming victory.
Revised:  Expecting victory, Casimir and his men the outcome seemed inevitable, so he and his men feasted in celebration of their coming victory.
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Original:  To Casimir and his men the outcome seemed inevitable, so he and his men feasted in celebration of their coming victory.
Revised:  To Casimir and his men feasted in celebration of their coming victory.
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Original:  However the feasting Wends were interrupted by the Danish fleet who were on the move .
Revised:  However the feasting Wends were interrupted by the Danish fleet 's advance .
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Original:  The Wends hastily embarked onto their own vessels presumably half-drunk to go and prevent a breakthrough, as the army once more assembled at the neck of the outlet from which they shot at the Danish force's frontline.
Revised:  The Wends hastily embarked onto their own vessels to go and prevent a breakthrough, as the army once more assembled at the neck of the outlet from which they shot at the Danish force's frontline.
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Original:  The Wends hastily embarked onto their own vessels presumably half-drunk to go and prevent a breakthrough, as the army once more assembled at the neck of the outlet from which they shot at the Danish force's frontline.
Revised:  The Wends hastily embarked onto their own vessels presumably half-drunk to go and prevent a breakthrough, and the army reassembled at the neck of the outlet from which they shot at the Danish force's frontline.
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Original:  A reimagination of the Battle The Wendish projectiles did little against the fully armoured Danish frontline, in turn the Danish archers assembled behind the frontline and rained arrows upon them, which sufficiently distracted the Wends.
Revised:  A reimagination of the Battle The Wendish projectiles did little against the fully armoured Danish frontline, while the Danish archers assembled behind the frontline and rained arrows upon them, which sufficiently distracted the Wends.
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Original:  The Wends were therefore surprised to see all the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank and routing their army.
Revised:  The Wends were then surprised to see all the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank and routing their army.
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Original:  The Wends were therefore surprised to see all the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank and routing their army.
Revised:  The Wends were therefore surprised to see the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank and routing their army.
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Original:  The Wends were therefore surprised to see all the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank and routing their army.
Revised:  The Wends were therefore surprised to see all the Danish cavalry crashing into their flank , routing their army.
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Original:  This caused the Wendish navy to panic and their once impressive numerical superiority became a burden as their ships crashed into each other in an attempt to flee.
Revised:  This caused the Wendish navy to panic and their numerical superiority became a burden as their ships crashed into each other in an attempt to flee.
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Original:  The Wends were either slain, scattered or hiding behind the walls of their town with their camp looted.
Revised:  The Wends were either slain, scattered or hid behind the walls of their town with their camp looted.
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Original:   Aftermath The Danes not only escaped , but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
Revised:  --> Aftermath The Danes not only escaped , but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
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Original:   Aftermath The Danes not only escaped , but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
Revised:  Aftermath The Danes escaped after a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
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Original:   Aftermath The Danes not only escaped , but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with any Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
Revised:  Aftermath The Danes not only escaped , but won a victory so decisive that Valdemar would not need to deal with Wendish raiders for the rest of his rule.
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Original:  It also laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
Revised:  It laid the groundwork for the later conquests of his sons and successors.
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Original: British Nutrition Foundation, The Public Health Responsibility Deal, published, accessed 20 April 2021
Revised: British Nutrition Foundation, The Public Health Responsibility Deal, accessed 20 April 2021
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Original:  Several areas of public policy were covered by deals made between the coalition government of 2010-2015 and various business sectors: The Public Health Responsibility Deal, launched in March 2011 "to tap into the potential for businesses and other organisations to improve public health through their influence on food, alcohol, physical activity behaviours and health in the workplace.
Revised: Examples Several areas of public policy were covered by deals made between the coalition government of 2010-2015 and various business sectors: The Public Health Responsibility Deal, launched in March 2011 "to tap into the potential for businesses and other organisations to improve public health through their influence on food, alcohol, physical activity behaviours and health in the workplace.
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Original: According to XIVth century sources, the 'Cross of Alcoraz' traditionally originated with the Battle of Alcoraz, (in 1096), which associated it with the miraculous intervention of Saint George in the reconquista of Huesca.
Revised: According to XIVth century sources, the 'Cross of Alcoraz' traditionally originated with the Battle of Alcoraz, (in 1096), as a war flag, associated with the legendary miraculous intervention of Saint George in the reconquista of Huesca.
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Original:  The earliest depiction , of 1281, shows four Moor' s heads with beards but no head bands (or bandages).
Revised:  The earliest depiction , of 1281, shows four Moors' heads with beards but no head bands (or bandages).
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Original:  Throughout the Middle Ages and Modern Age several Aragonese variants have either turned the disposition of the Moor's heads, making them face each other symmetrically or have depicted them as the heads of  kings with open crowns.
Revised:  Throughout the Middle Ages and Modern Age several Aragonese variants have either turned the orientation of the Moor's heads, making them face each other symmetrically or have depicted them as the heads of kings with open crowns.
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Original:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was  adopted as the royal ensign of the Kingdom of sardina from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon  .
Revised:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was also adopted as the royal ensign of the Kingdom of sardina from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon .
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Original:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was  adopted as the royal ensign of the Kingdom of sardina from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon  .
Revised:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was adopted as the royal standard of the Kingdom of sardina from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon .
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Original:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was  adopted as the royal ensign of the Kingdom of sardina from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon  .
Revised:  This heraldic coat of arms was directly attributed to the Kingdom of Aragon from the mid XVth century, and was adopted as the royal ensign of the Kingdom of Sardinia from the second half of the XVth century, when the island was a territory of the Crown of Aragon .
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