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Original:   This risk exists in all eye surgery procedures and is not unique for IOLs. glaucoma, astigmatism, remaining near or far sightedness, rotation of the lens inside the eye one or two days after surgery.
Revised:  This risk exists in all eye surgery procedures and is not unique to IOLs.) glaucoma, astigmatism, remaining near or far sightedness, rotation of the lens inside the eye one or two days after surgery.
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Original:  If the natural lens is left in the eye, The IOL is known as phakic, othwise it is a pseudophakic, or false lens.
Revised:  If the natural lens is left in the eye, The IOL is known as phakic, otherwise it is a pseudophakic, or false lens.
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Original:  EDOF stands for extended depth of focus  lenses.
Revised:  EDOF stands for extended depth of focus (EDOF) lenses.
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Original:  Surgeons annually implant more than 6 million lenses  .
Revised:  More than 6 million lenses .
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Original:  The procedure can be done under local anesthesia or topical anesthesia with the patient awake throughout the operation.
Revised:  The procedure can be done under local or topical anesthesia with the patient awake throughout the operation.
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Original:  These reading glasses can be avoided if Multifocal IOLs, Trifocal IOLs or EDOF lenses are used.
Revised:  These reading glasses may be avoided if Multifocal IOLs, Trifocal IOLs or EDOF lenses are used.
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Original:  In contrast, cytopathology examines (1) free cells or (2) tissue micro-fragments (as "cell blocks").
Revised:  In contrast, cytopathology examines free cells or (2) tissue micro-fragments (as "cell blocks").
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Original:  In contrast, cytopathology examines (1) free cells or (2) tissue micro-fragments (as "cell blocks").
Revised:  In contrast, cytopathology examines (1) free cells or tissue micro-fragments (as "cell blocks").
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Original:  These procedures above are also carried out in the laboratory under scrutiny and precision by a trained specialist Medical laboratory scientist ( Histoscientist) Digital cameras are increasingly used to capture histopathological images.
Revised:  These procedures above are also carried out in the laboratory under scrutiny and precision by a trained specialist medical laboratory scientist ( Histoscientist) Digital cameras are increasingly used to capture histopathological images.
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Original:  These procedures above are also carried out in the laboratory under scrutiny and precision by a trained specialist Medical laboratory scientist ( Histoscientist) Digital cameras are increasingly used to capture histopathological images.
Revised:  These procedures above are also carried out in the laboratory under scrutiny and precision by a trained specialist Medical laboratory scientist ( a histoscientist). Digital cameras are increasingly used to capture histopathological images.
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Original:  The tissue is removed from the body or plant, and then ... often following expert dissection in the fresh state ... placed in a fixative which stabilizes the tissues to prevent decay.
Revised:  The tissue is removed from the body or plant, and then , often following expert dissection in the fresh state ... placed in a fixative which stabilizes the tissues to prevent decay.
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Original:  The tissue is removed from the body or plant, and then ... often following expert dissection in the fresh state ... placed in a fixative which stabilizes the tissues to prevent decay.
Revised:  The tissue is removed from the body or plant, and then ... often following expert dissection in the fresh state , placed in a fixative which stabilizes the tissues to prevent decay.
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Original: The most commonly used stain in histopathology is a combination of hematoxylin and eosin (often abbreviated H&E).
Revised: The most commonly used stain in histology is a combination of hematoxylin and eosin (often abbreviated H&E).
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Original:  Microscopic visual artifacts can potentially cause misdiagnosis of samples .
Revised:  Microscopic visual artifacts can potentially cause misdiagnosis of samples 
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Original:  In myocardial infarction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% After a myocardial infarction (heart attack), no histopathology is seen the first ~30 minutes.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% After a myocardial infarction (heart attack), no histopathology is seen the first ~30 minutes.
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Original: Lupo III Centule (Basque: Otsoa Wasco, French: Loup Centulle, Gascon: Lop Centullo, Latin: Lupus Centullus, Spanish: Lope or Lobo Centulo, Catalan: Llop Centoll) (died circa 820) was the Duke of Gascony briefly from 818 until his deposition by Pepin I of Aquitaine in 819.
Revised: Lupo III Centule (Basque: Otsoa Wasco, French: Loup Centulle, Gascon: Lop Centullo, Latin: Lupus Centullus, Spanish: Lope or Lobo Centulo, Catalan: Llop Centoll) (died ca. 820) was the Duke of Gascony briefly from 818 until his deposition by Pepin I of Aquitaine in 819.
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Original: The Siva Afi was Originally performed with the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club ) which is very dangerous as the steel of the Nifo oti heats up and burns .
Revised: The Siva Afi was originally performed with the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club ) which is very dangerous as the steel of the Nifo oti heats up and burns .
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Original: The Expulsion of The Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki (King of Tonga) The Birth of Malietoa (King of Samoa)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ancient Samoan Legend speaks of hundreds of warriors whom would practice ailao with the ends of their weapons on fire the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club )as part of their training.
Revised: The The Birth of Malietoa (King of Samoa)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ancient Samoan Legend speaks of hundreds of warriors whom would practice ailao with the ends of their weapons on fire the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club )as part of their training.
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Original: The Expulsion of The Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki (King of Tonga) The Birth of Malietoa (King of Samoa)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ancient Samoan Legend speaks of hundreds of warriors whom would practice ailao with the ends of their weapons on fire the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club )as part of their training.
Revised: The Expulsion of The Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki (King of Tonga) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ancient Samoan Legend speaks of hundreds of warriors whom would practice ailao with the ends of their weapons on fire the Nifo Oti ( Samoan war club )as part of their training.
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Original: Malietoa The young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance, to eventually bring it home to Samoa.
Revised: Malietoa young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance, to eventually bring it home to Samoa.
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Original: Fire was   added to the knife in 1946 by a Samoan knife dancer named Freddie Letuli, later to become Paramount Chief Letuli Olo Misilagi.
Revised: Fire was . , That is added to the knife in 1946 by a Samoan knife dancer named Freddie Letuli, later to become Paramount Chief Letuli Olo Misilagi.
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Original: Fire was   added to the knife in 1946 by a Samoan knife dancer named Freddie Letuli, later to become Paramount Chief Letuli Olo Misilagi.
Revised: Fire was added to the knife Tin 1946 by a Samoan knife dancer named Freddie Letuli, later to become Paramount Chief Letuli Olo Misilagi.
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Original:  The towels are set afire during the dances thus explaining the name.
Revised:  The towels are set afire during the dances , hence the name.
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Original:  These Nifo Oti war clubs which were often edged with sharks teeth and saw fishand also sharp serrated edge teeth of other sea creatures such as the sword fish .
Revised:  These war clubs were often edged with sharks teeth and saw fishand also sharp serrated edge teeth of other sea creatures such as the sword fish .
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Original:  These Nifo Oti war clubs which were often edged with sharks teeth and saw fishand also sharp serrated edge teeth of other sea creatures such as the sword fish .
Revised:  These Nifo Oti war clubs which were often edged with the teeth of sharks, saw fish, swordfish, and other sea creatures such as the sword fish .
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Original:  These Nifo Oti war clubs which were often edged with sharks teeth and saw fishand also sharp serrated edge teeth of other sea creatures such as the sword fish .
Revised:  These Nifo Oti war clubs which were often edged with sharks teeth and saw fishand also sharp serrated edge teeth of other sea creatures .
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Original:  The ' ailao could be performed with any warclub, and some colonial accounts confirm that women also performed ' ailao at the head of ceremonial processions, especially daughters of high chiefs.
Revised:  The ailao could be performed with any warclub, and some colonial accounts confirm that women also performed ' ailao at the head of ceremonial processions, especially daughters of high chiefs.
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Original:  The ' ailao could be performed with any warclub, and some colonial accounts confirm that women also performed ' ailao at the head of ceremonial processions, especially daughters of high chiefs.
Revised:  The ' ailao could be performed with any warclub, and some colonial accounts confirm that women also performed ailao at the head of ceremonial processions, especially daughters of high chiefs.
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Original:  Ancient legend speaks of 400 warriors whom trained with their Nifo Oti , the serrated edge Samoan war club.
Revised:  Ancient legend speaks of 400 warriors who trained with their Nifo Oti , the serrated edge Samoan war club.
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Original:  Ancient legend speaks of 400 warriors whom trained with their Nifo Oti , the serrated edge Samoan war club.
Revised:  Ancient legend speaks of 400 warriors whom trained with their Nifo Oti .
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Original:  Before the introduction of metals, the most common clubs that were wielded and displayed in the ' ailao fashion were elaborately carved heirloom clubs called "anava".
Revised:  Before the introduction of metals, the most common clubs that were wielded and displayed in the ailao fashion were elaborately carved heirloom clubs called "anava".
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Original:  These ' anava  were frequently carved with serrated edges and jagged "teeth" which characterized the unique Samoan weapon called the "nifo'oti".
Revised:  These ' anava . These anava were frequently carved with serrated edges and jagged "teeth" which characterized the unique Samoan weapon called the "nifo'oti".
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Original:  For approximately 200 years  the Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki established a long-term residence  ata Safotu, Savai'i, Samoa.
Revised:  For approximately 200 years , the Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki established a long-term residence ata Safotu, Savai'i, Samoa.
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Original:  For approximately 200 years  the Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki established a long-term residence  ata Safotu, Savai'i, Samoa.
Revised:  For approximately 200 years the Tu'i Tonga Talakaifaiki established a long-term residence in ata Safotu, Savai'i, Samoa.
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Original:  The three brothers and their nephew eventually leading the wide-scale campaign of civil disobedience  which ultimately escalated into the military overthrow of Talakaifaiki.
Revised:  The three brothers and their nephew eventually lead a wide-scale campaign of civil disobedience which ultimately escalated into the military overthrow of Talakaifaiki.
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Original:  The three brothers and their nephew eventually leading the wide-scale campaign of civil disobedience  which ultimately escalated into the military overthrow of Talakaifaiki.
Revised:  The three brothers and their nephew eventually leading the wide-scale campaign of civil disobedience , which ultimately escalated into the military overthrow of Talakaifaiki.
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Original:  The Manu'a warriors were renown throughout Eastern Polynesia for their strength and ferocity.
Revised:  The Manu'a warriors were renowned throughout Eastern Polynesia for their strength and ferocity.
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Original:  As  the Festivities and party progressed, and more "bush gin" was consumed, as night set in the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
Revised:  As night set in, the Festivities and party progressed, and more "bush gin" was consumed, as night set in the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
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Original:  As  the Festivities and party progressed, and more "bush gin" was consumed, as night set in the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
Revised:  As the Festivities and party progressed, more "bush gin" was consumed, as night set in the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
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Original:  As  the Festivities and party progressed, and more "bush gin" was consumed, as night set in the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
Revised:  As the Festivities and party progressed, and more "bush gin" was consumed, and the Samoan warriors "performed" for the king.
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Original:  They had wrapped both ends of their nifo-oti with dry palm sennit  which was then dipped into the fires to create a blaze on one end of the knife.
Revised:  They had wrapped both ends of their nifo-oti with dry palm sennit , which was then dipped into the fires to create a blaze on one end of the knife.
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Original:  They danced and pointed out the locations of the buried weapons , to other Samoan warriors who waited, in small paopaos (canoes) offshore.
Revised:  They danced and pointed out the locations of the buried weapons to other Samoan warriors who waited, in small paopaos (canoes) offshore.
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Original:  They danced and pointed out the locations of the buried weapons , to other Samoan warriors who waited, in small paopaos (canoes) offshore.
Revised:  They danced and pointed out the locations of the buried weapons , to other Samoan warriors , who were waiting in small paopaos (canoes) offshore.
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Original:  There was fierce fighting all the way to the sea  whereon the Tu'i Tonga reached his superior navy vessels and called out to those on the land.
Revised:  There was fierce fighting all the way to the sea , whereon the Tu'i Tonga reached his superior navy vessels and called out to those on the land.
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Original:  The Tongans whom were not killed , eventually boarded boats and left Samoa for good.
Revised:  The Tongans who were not killed , eventually boarded boats and left Samoa for good.
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Original:  The Tongans whom were not killed , eventually boarded boats and left Samoa for good.
Revised:  The Tongans whom were not killed eventually boarded boats and left Samoa for good.
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Original:  Upon his departure, the Tongan monarch delivered a short speech which praised the brave fighting qualities of the Samoan warriors and conceded victory to his once-subjects.
Revised:  Upon his departure, the Tongan monarch delivered a short speech that praised the brave fighting qualities of the Samoan warriors and conceded victory to his once-subjects.
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Original:   When European and American whalers and traders began commercial ventures in Samoa, they introduced the natives to the long-handled blubber knife and the hooked cane knife.
Revised:  Etymology When European and American whalers and traders began commercial ventures in Samoa, they introduced the natives to the long-handled blubber knife and the hooked cane knife.
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Original:  according to Samoan grammar  the term "nifo'oti" would actually mean "dead tooth", hardly as intimidating as the former translation.
Revised:  according to Samoan grammar , the term "nifo'oti" would actually mean "dead tooth", hardly as intimidating as the former translation.
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Original:  as a verb, 'oti means "to cut" as in 'otiulu ("hair cut") or as a noun  it refers to the domestic goat.
Revised:  as a verb, 'oti means "to cut" as in 'otiulu ("hair cut") , or, as a noun it refers to the domestic goat.
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Original:  as a verb, 'oti means "to cut" as in 'otiulu ("hair cut") or as a noun  it refers to the domestic goat.
Revised:  as a verb, 'oti means "to cut" as in 'otiulu ("hair cut") or as a noun , it refers to the domestic goat.
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Original:   The young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance , to eventually bring it home to Samoa from Hawai'i.
Revised:  Revival The young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance , to eventually bring it home to Samoa from Hawai'i.
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Original:   The young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance , to eventually bring it home to Samoa from Hawai'i.
Revised:  The young man Tavita Vaoifi revived the Samoan ailao Siva Afi dance to eventually bring it home to Samoa from Hawai'i.
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Original:  This was while WWII was being fought in part , in his beloved South Pacific.
Revised:  This was while WWII was being fought in part in his beloved South Pacific.
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Original:  When he was able to come to America  he went to school, worked, and danced.
Revised:  When he was able to come to America , he went to school, worked, and danced.
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Original:  This story stuck him deeply, because he had never heard of this from his elders.
Revised:  This story struck him deeply, because he had never heard of this from his elders.
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Original:  There were no towels used  only palm fronds and dry leaves.
Revised:  There were no towels used , only palm fronds and dry leaves.
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Original:  The crowd , that came to find out what he had discovered about Samoa, in America were frightened when they saw him whirling the fire.
Revised:  The crowd , that came to find out what he had discovered about Samoa, were frightened when they saw him whirling the fire.
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Original:  The Superintendent of the Morman school , where Tavita was teaching , at the time , was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
Revised:  The Superintendent of the Mormon school where Tavita was teaching , at the time , was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
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Original:  The Superintendent of the Morman school , where Tavita was teaching , at the time , was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
Revised:  The Superintendent of the Morman school , where Tavita was teaching at the time , was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
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Original:  The Superintendent of the Morman school , where Tavita was teaching , at the time , was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
Revised:  The Superintendent of the Morman school , where Tavita was teaching , at the time was able to calm the audience and assure them that no harm would come to them.
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Original:  In 2010  the event expanded to four nights including a two-night, three-person final competition.
Revised:  In 2010 , the event expanded to four nights including a two-night, three-person final competition.
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Original:  Because of the close familial Tribal ties with the aforementioned Islands and the Samoa Islands, the fire knife dance has almost become homogenized as part of those Islands  own culture.
Revised:  Because of the close familial tribal ties with the aforementioned Islands and the Samoa Islands, the fire knife dance has almost become homogenized as part of those Islands own culture.
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Original:  Because of the close familial Tribal ties with the aforementioned Islands and the Samoa Islands, the fire knife dance has almost become homogenized as part of those Islands  own culture.
Revised:  Because of the close familial Tribal ties with the aforementioned Islands and the Samoa Islands, the fire knife dance has almost become homogenized as part of those Islands ' own culture.
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Original:  Over time  the performing implement has changed.
Revised:  Over time , the performing implement has changed.
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Original:  Now, when one travels to Hawaii, it is quite common to see commercial  Fire Knife Dancing  performed with wooden or aluminum poles wrapped in towels.
Revised:  Now, when one travels to Hawaii, it is quite common to see commercial ' Fire Knife Dancing performed with wooden or aluminum poles wrapped in towels.
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Original:  Now, when one travels to Hawaii, it is quite common to see commercial  Fire Knife Dancing  performed with wooden or aluminum poles wrapped in towels.
Revised:  Now, when one travels to Hawaii, it is quite common to see commercial Fire Knife Dancing ' performed with wooden or aluminum poles wrapped in towels.
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Original: He eventually returned to Samoa to bring back this part of the Samoan Culture that was unheard of until he preformed .
Revised: He eventually returned to Samoa to bring back this part of the Samoan Culture that was unheard of until he performed .
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Original:  The French government sent several hundred troops to help eradicate mosquitoes.
Revised:  The French government sent hundred troops to help eradicate mosquitoes.
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Original:  Other countries in the southwest Indian Ocean reported cases as well, including Mauritius and the Seychelles,Chikungunya in La Réunion Island (France), World Health Organization, 17 February  2006 and in Madagascar, the Comoros, and Mayotte.
Revised:  <ref> 2006 and in Madagascar, the Comoros, and Mayotte.
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Original: By mid-January 2014, a number of cases had been confirmed in five countries: St. Martin, St. Barthelemy , Martinique, Guadeloupe, and the British Virgin Islands.
Revised: By mid-January 2014, a number of cases had been confirmed in five countries: St. Martin, Saint Barthélemy , Martinique, Guadeloupe, and the British Virgin Islands.
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Original: José Antonio de Mendoza Caamaño y Sotomayor, 3rd Marquis of Villagarcía de Arousa (sometimes marqués de Villa García) (1667 , Spain – December 17, 1746 , Cape Horn) was a Spanish colonial administrator in the Americas.
Revised: José Antonio de Mendoza Caamaño y Sotomayor, 3rd Marquis of Villagarcía de Arousa (sometimes marqués de Villa García) (1667 in Spain – December 17, 1746 , Cape Horn) was a Spanish colonial administrator in the Americas.
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Original: José Antonio de Mendoza Caamaño y Sotomayor, 3rd Marquis of Villagarcía de Arousa (sometimes marqués de Villa García) (1667 , Spain – December 17, 1746 , Cape Horn) was a Spanish colonial administrator in the Americas.
Revised: José Antonio de Mendoza Caamaño y Sotomayor, 3rd Marquis of Villagarcía de Arousa (sometimes marqués de Villa García) (1667 , Spain – December 17, 1746 in Cape Horn) was a Spanish colonial administrator in the Americas.
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Original: Car-free.org is the website for CAT-Coalition for Appropriate Transportation, a group in Lehigh Valley, Pennsylvania, USA formed in 1992 that promotes alternatives to single-occupant automobiles.
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Original: Transportation Alternative' s Annual Commuter Race pits a bicyclist against both a subway rider and a cab rider in a race from Queens to Manhattan.
Revised: Transportation Alternatives' Annual Commuter Race pits a bicyclist against both a subway rider and a cab rider in a race from Queens to Manhattan.
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