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Original:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25  killing one and severely injuring two visitors in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside its habitat.
Revised:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25 , killing one and severely injuring two visitors in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside its habitat.
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Original:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25  killing one and severely injuring two visitors in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside its habitat.
Revised:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25 killing one and severely injuring two humans in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside its habitat.
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Original:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25  killing one and severely injuring two visitors in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside its habitat.
Revised:  Zoo officials are now saying that a Siberian tiger that escaped its enclosure at the San Francisco Zoo in San Francisco, California on December 25 killing one and severely injuring two visitors in the Terrace cafe, may have climbed or jumped over the walls that kept the tiger inside her habitat.
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Original:  There was no way out through the door," said Robert Jenkins, the Zoo 's director of animal care and conservation.
Revised:  There was no way out through the door," said Robert Jenkins, the zoo 's director of animal care and conservation.
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Original:  Despite the Zoo's claims, Police, who shot and killed the tiger , are considering the incident a "crime scene" until they can determine if foul play may have been involved.
Revised:  Police, who shot and killed the tiger , are considering the incident a "crime scene" until they can determine if foul play may have been involved.
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Original:  The tiger's enclosure is surrounded by two things to stop them from escaping;
Revised:  The tigers at the zoo are held captive by the combination of
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Original:  After the incident, all  animals were counted and accounted for after the zoo was locked down, including the three other tigers that were in the cage.
Revised:  After the incident, all captive animals were counted and accounted for after the zoo was locked down, including the three other tigers that were in the cage.
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Original:  Reports say that Carlos Sousa, 17, is the individual who was killed by the tiger , but the names of those injured have not yet been released.
Revised:  Reports say that Carlos Sousa, 17, is the human who was killed by the tiger , but the names of those injured have not yet been released.
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Original:  The  victims were all male  aged from their late teens to mid twenties.
Revised:  The human victims were all male aged from their late teens to mid twenties.
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Original:  The  victims were all male  aged from their late teens to mid twenties.
Revised:  The victims were all male , aged from their late teens to mid twenties.
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Original:  It was earlier reported that one of the victims may have been a Zoo worker, but later reports say that all three were visitors.
Revised:  It was earlier reported that one of the human victims might have been a Zoo worker, but later reports say that all three were visitors.
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Original:  It was earlier reported that one of the victims may have been a Zoo worker, but later reports say that all three were visitors.
Revised:  It was earlier reported that one of the victims may have been a zoo worker, but later reports say that all three were visitors.
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Original:  Animal experts don't believe that the tiger attacked people because it was looking for food.
Revised:  Animal experts don't believe that the tiger attacked for food.
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Original:  Both of the Zoo's exhibits on tigers remain closed while the investigation continues. n The Zoo now has two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
Revised:  The zoo's two surviving tigers remain unexhibited while the investigation continues. n The Zoo now has two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
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Original:  Both of the Zoo's exhibits on tigers remain closed while the investigation continues. n The Zoo now has two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
Revised:  Both of the Zoo's exhibits on tigers remain closed while the investigation continues. The zoo now has two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
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Original:   Director Emeritus of the Columbus Zoo in Powell, Ohio states that its possible someone may have "taunted" or "teased Tatiana."
Revised:  Jack Hanna, Director Emeritus of the Columbus Zoo in Powell, Ohio states that its possible someone may have "taunted" or "teased Tatiana."
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Original:  The zoo now currently two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
Revised:  The zoo currently has two species of tigers, one Siberian and one Sumatran tiger.
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Original: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 -  Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer  gave evidence in front of the investigation committeetodays forenoon .
Revised: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 - Today Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer gave evidence in front of the investigation committeetodays forenoon .
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Original: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 -  Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer  gave evidence in front of the investigation committeetodays forenoon .
Revised: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 - Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer gave evidence in front of an investigation committee .
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Original:  In the second part the investigation committee could ask Joschka Fischer.
Revised:  In the second part the investigation committee asked Joschka Fischer.
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Original:  Fischer noted that his visa practice was succeed from the government Kohl.
Revised:  Fischer noted that his visa practice was mainly succeed from government Kohl.
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Original:  The german embrassy in Kiew gave thousands of visas which were abused by criminals.
Revised:  The german embassy in Kiev gave thousands of visas which were abused by criminals.
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Original:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes and accussed the conservative opposition of exagerating the problem to campaign against him and the government.
Revised:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes and accussed the conservative opposition of exaggerating the problem to campaign against him and the government.
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Original:  In the second part the investigation committee asked Joschka Fischer.
Revised:  In the second part the investigation committee questioned Joschka Fischer.
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Original:  Fischer noted that his visa practice was mainly succeed from government Kohl.
Revised:  Fischer noted that his visa practice was mainly a succession from the previous government under Kohl.
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Original:  Furthermore, Fischer said that a liberal handling of the visa practice was a political decission .
Revised:  Furthermore, Fischer said that a liberal handling of the visa practice was a political decision .
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Original:  For the first time  sessions of an investigation committee are  broadcasted live on television
Revised:  For the first time , sessions of an investigation committee are broadcasted live on television
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Original:  For the first time  sessions of an investigation committee are  broadcasted live on television
Revised:  For the first time sessions of an investigation committee are being broadcasted live on television
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Original: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 - Today Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer, a leading figure in the German Green Party, gave evidence in front of an investigation committee.
Revised: Berlin (Germany), 25.04.2005 - Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs Joschka Fischer, a leading figure in the German Green Party, gave evidence in front of an investigation committee.
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Original:  First Fischer gave a speech, which took two hours, explaining the visa practice from his point of view .
Revised:  Fischer opened with a two hour speech explaining the visa practice from his point of view .
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Original:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes and accussed the conservative opposition of exaggerating the problem to campaign against him and the government.
Revised:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes . He accused the conservative opposition of exaggerating the problem to campaign against him and the government.
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Original:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes and accussed the conservative opposition of exaggerating the problem to campaign against him and the government.
Revised:  The Federal Minister for Foreign Affairs accepted responsibility for mistakes and accussed the conservative opposition of exagerating the problem and campaigning against him and the government.
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Original:  In the second part the investigation committee questioned Joschka Fischer .
Revised:  The investigation committee questioned Joschka Fischer .
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Original:  [..  ] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you’re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
Revised:  [.. . ] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you’re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
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Original: File photo of U.S. Marine Corps hats are displayed during a memorial service Following incorrect statements by media organizations that include and the earlier in the week that the were changing their hats in order to make them more asexual, the Corps issued a statement today countering the claim  saying they are only changing the dress hat for women.
Revised: File photo of U.S. Marine Corps hats are displayed during a memorial service Following claims by media organizations that include and the earlier in the week that the were changing their hats in order to make them more asexual, the Corps issued a statement today countering the claim saying they are only changing the dress hat for women.
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Original: File photo of U.S. Marine Corps hats are displayed during a memorial service Following incorrect statements by media organizations that include and the earlier in the week that the were changing their hats in order to make them more asexual, the Corps issued a statement today countering the claim  saying they are only changing the dress hat for women.
Revised: File photo of U.S. Marine Corps hats are displayed during a memorial service Following incorrect statements by media organizations that include and the earlier in the week that the were changing their hats in order to make them more asexual, the Corps issued a statement today countering the claim , saying they are only changing the dress hat for women.
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Original:  Commandant of the Marine Corps Gen. James F.
Revised:  Commandant of the Marine Corps General James F.
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Original:  "Our sailors ’ safety is our primary concern here. [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you ’ re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
Revised:  "Our sailors ' safety is our primary concern here. [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you ’ re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
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Original:  "Our sailors ’ safety is our primary concern here. [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you ’ re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
Revised:  "Our sailors ’ safety is our primary concern here. [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you ' re assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
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Original:  The quote follows media claims that the directed the Marine Corps to make a change to the more "girly" dress hat.
Revised:  The quote follows media claims the directed the Marine Corps to make a change to the more "girly" dress hat.
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Original:  Admiral Bill Gortney , the head of Fleet Forces Command , is quoted in the as saying.
Revised:  Admiral , the head of Fleet Forces Command , is quoted in the as saying.
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Original:  Admiral Bill Gortney , the head of Fleet Forces Command , is quoted in the as saying.
Revised:  Admiral Bill Gortney , the head of , is quoted in the as saying.
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Original:  The quote follows media claims the directed the Marine Corps to make a change to the more "girly" dress hat.
Revised:  The quote follows media claims the directed the Marine Corps to make a change to a more "girly" dress hat.
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Original:  You combine this with our existing flash hoods and gloves and you tuck your leg pants in [...] it will provide the fire-resistant capability that we think is needed.  
Revised:  You combine this with our existing flash hoods and gloves and you tuck your leg pants in [...] it will provide the fire-resistant capability that we think is needed. " 
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Original:  You combine this with our existing flash hoods and gloves and you tuck your leg pants in [...] it will provide the fire-resistant capability that we think is needed.  
Revised:  You combine this with our existing flash hoods and gloves and you tuck your leg pants in [...] it will provide the fire-resistant capability that we think is needed. Sister link
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Original:  "Our sailors' safety is our primary concern here . [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you're assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
Revised:  "Our sailors' safety is our primary concern here [...] If you’re on board a ship and a fire breaks out, you rush to that scene, you escape that scene or you're assisting a shipmate in whatever you’re wearing.
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Original: Israel has announced two new housing projects in East Jerusalem and the West Bank, continuing to expand it's settlements.
Revised: Israel has announced two new housing projects in East Jerusalem and the West Bank, continuing to expand its settlements.
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Original: Last month, both Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert signed a statement of " join understanding" at the 2007 Annapolis Conference in Maryland.
Revised: Last month, both Palestinian leader Mahmoud Abbas and Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert signed a statement of " joint understanding" at the 2007 Annapolis Conference in Maryland.
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Original:  At least twenty motorcyclists, car drivers and passengers are thought to be dead, but as of midnight, no bodies had been recovered  
Revised:  At least twenty motorcyclists, car drivers and passengers are thought to be dead, but as of midnight, no bodies had been recovered . 
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Original:  The Red Cross commented that 45,000 East Javanese people have been similarly displaced  
Revised:  The Red Cross commented that 45,000 East Javanese people have been similarly displaced . 
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Original:  He also confirmed that they currently have no access to heavy equipment  
Revised:  He also confirmed that they currently have no access to heavy equipment . 
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Original:  20 remain missing.
Revised:  28 remain missing.
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Original:  The 69-year-old served two years after being linked to the 2002 Bali bombings, before having his conviction overturned last year   
Revised:  The 69-year-old served two years after being linked to the 2002 Bali bombings, before having his conviction overturned last year . 
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Original:  Chris Dodd 26-year-member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee Senator Chris Dodd commented: Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented:   Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented     :
Revised:  Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented: Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented :
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Original:  Chris Dodd 26-year-member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee Senator Chris Dodd commented: Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented:   Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented     :
Revised:  Chris Dodd 26-year-member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee Senator Chris Dodd commented: Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented: Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented : :
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Original:  Chris Dodd 26-year-member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee Senator Chris Dodd commented: Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented:   Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented     :
Revised:  Chris Dodd 26-year-member of the Senate Foreign Relations Committee Senator Chris Dodd commented: Brownback U.S. Senator Sam Brownback, formerly the chairman of the Senate Foreign Relations subcommittee with responsibility for Southeast Asia, commented: Kucinich Democrat Dennis Kucinich commented Romney :
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Original: Arbitrators at the WTO have granted the Caribbean country of Antigua a special dispensation to ignore US copyright law.
Revised: Arbitrators at the World Trade Organization (WTO) have granted the Caribbean country of Antigua a special dispensation to ignore US copyright law.
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Original: Arbitrators at the WTO have granted the Caribbean country of Antigua a special dispensation to ignore US copyright law.
Revised: Arbitrators at the WTO have granted the Caribbean country of Antigua a special dispensation to ignore United States copyright law.
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Original:  In their report issued today , the WTO panel stated that Antigua posessed "no effective trade sanctions against the USA" and agreed to allow the country to ignore up to $21 million worth of US copyrights a year.
Revised:  In their report , the WTO panel stated that Antigua posessed "no effective trade sanctions against the USA" and agreed to allow the country to ignore up to $21 million worth of US copyrights a year.
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Original:  In their report, the WTO panel stated that Antigua posessed "no effective trade sanctions against the USA" and agreed to allow the country to ignore up to $21 million (US Dollars) worth of US copyrights a year.
Revised:  In their report, the WTO panel stated that Antigua possessed "no effective trade sanctions against the USA" and agreed to allow the country to ignore up to $21 million (US Dollars) worth of US copyrights a year.
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Original:  The asked to have this penalty assessed as permission to copy US intellectual property, since there was no trade embargo that Antigua could impose on the US to collect the amount for itself.
Revised:  They asked to have this penalty assessed as permission to copy US intellectual property, since there was no trade embargo that Antigua could impose on the US to collect the amount for itself.
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Original:  Today, the panel agreed that Antigua had no way to collect punitive damages through trade sanctions.
Revised:  The panel agreed that Antigua had no way to collect punitive damages through trade sanctions.
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Original:  However, they lowered the amount of damages to  $21 million (US dollars) per year
Revised:  However, they lowered the amount of damages to $21 million per year
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Original:  Although the affect was generally to decrease values, lower risk investments, such as gold, went up in demand  
Revised:  Although the affect was generally to decrease values, lower risk investments, such as gold, went up in demand . 
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Original:  According to officials, unrest sine her death has resulted in 32 deaths, including those of four police officers.
Revised:  According to officials, unrest since her death has resulted in 32 deaths, including those of four police officers.
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Original:  Meanwhile, violence has erupted accross the nation in protest to the 54-year-old opposition leader's death.
Revised:  Meanwhile, violence has erupted across the nation in protest to the 54-year-old opposition leader's death.
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Original:  The Pakistani government has claimed to have evidence to suggest that al Qaeda were reponsible for attacking her at the end of her address to an election rally.
Revised:  The Pakistani government has claimed to have evidence to suggest that al Qaeda were responsible for attacking her at the end of her address to an election rally.
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Original:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted crimminals . Soilders were told to shoot to kill violent protestors on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
Revised:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted criminals . Soilders were told to shoot to kill violent protestors on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
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Original:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted crimminals . Soilders were told to shoot to kill violent protestors on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
Revised:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted crimminals . Soldiers were told to shoot to kill violent protestors on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
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Original:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted crimminals . Soilders were told to shoot to kill violent protestors on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
Revised:  Mehsud, believed to be in Pakistan near the border with Afghanistan, is one of Pakistan's most wanted crimminals . Soilders were told to shoot to kill violent protesters on sight, as scores of people set up roadblocks and torched hundreds of cars, trucks and busses .
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