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Original:   Admiral William J. Fallon, the commanding officer of United States Central Command which is responsible for the Middle East, East Africa and Central Asia, speaking in Monday's Financial Times, said that a strike againt Iran is "not in the offing." "None of this is helped by the continuing stories that just keep going around and around and around that any day now there will be another war which is just not where we want to go," Fallon continued.
Revised:  A strike is "not in the offing" - William J. Fallon Admiral William J. Fallon, the commanding officer of United States Central Command which is responsible for the Middle East, East Africa and Central Asia, speaking in Monday's Financial Times, said that a strike againt Iran is "not in the offing." "None of this is helped by the continuing stories that just keep going around and around and around that any day now there will be another war which is just not where we want to go," Fallon continued.
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Original:  The US continues to be accused of using exaggerated and/or fabricated evidence to build its case against Iraq prior to the war . Category: Politics and conflicts Category: Middle East Category: Iran Category: United State
Revised:  The US continues to be accused of using exaggerated and/or fabricated evidence to build its case against Iraq prior to the war Category: Politics and conflicts Category: Middle East Category: Iran Category: United State
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Original:  The US continues to be accused of using exaggerated and/or fabricated evidence to build its case against Iraq prior to the war . Category: Politics and conflicts Category: Middle East Category: Iran Category: United State
Revised:  The US continues to be accused of using exaggerated and/or fabricated evidence to build its case against Iraq prior to the war . 
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Original: Location of Iran A top US commander responding to reports says that the United States is not planning a preemptive attack on Iran  .
Revised: Location of Iran A top US commander says that the United States is not planning a preemptive attack on Iran .
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Original:  The article by The Observer  said most military intelligence officers refused to comment but said that one said "The message is, 'Got to find a link with Iran, got to find a link with Iran.'
Revised:  The article by The Observer said most military intelligence officers refused to comment but that one said "The message is, 'Got to find a link with Iran, got to find a link with Iran.'
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Original:  He found particularly worrisome a statement by Presidential candidate Rudy Giuliani in October that "If I am President of the United States, I guarantee you, we will never find out what they will do if they get nuclear weapons, because they are not going to get a nuclear weapon . " The United States government accuses Iran of arming insurgents in neighbouring Iraq.
Revised:  He found particularly worrisome a statement by Presidential candidate Rudy Giuliani in October that "If I am President of the United States, I guarantee you, we will never find out what they will do if they get nuclear weapons, because they are not going to get a nuclear weapon . The United States government accuses Iran of arming insurgents in neighbouring Iraq.
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Original:  And this is really a intensive match with the stating pitchers George Kenneth Rayborn from SK versus Daisuke Yamai.
Revised:  And this is really a intensive match with starting pitchers George Kenneth Rayborn from SK versus Daisuke Yamai.
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Original:  Finally, the relief pitcher Hitoki Iwase successfully shut down SK's offenses and tied the score to the end to win the champion.
Revised:  Finally, the relief pitcher Hitoki Iwase successfully shut down SK's offense and tied the score to the end to win the champion.
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Original:  With this quote advertised on TV commercials in Taiwan, 25 divisions in Taiwan  held the walking events of "Taiwan Walking Day" in the same time yesterday.
Revised:  With this quote advertised on TV commercials in Taiwan, 25 divisions in Taiwan held the walking events of "Taiwan Walking Day" yesterday.
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Original:  This recreational activity by Sports Affairs Council (SAC) and Ministry of Health (MOH) of Executive Yuan R.O.C. is the 2nd national event after the "Taiwan National Bicycle Day" promoted by SAC on May 5 this year in Taiwan .
Revised:  This recreational activity by Sports Affairs Council (SAC) and Ministry of Health (MOH) of Executive Yuan R.O.C. is the 2nd national event after the "Taiwan National Bicycle Day" promoted by SAC on May 5 this year .
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Original:  In the main arena of  Taipei Municipal Chungshan Football Stadium, with the conjunction of "2007 Taiwan Walking Festival" by Republic of China Alpine Association held at Saturday (Nov. 10), this national event in Taipei attracted more than 5 thousand people including VIPs from "2007 Master Forum on Walking in Taiwan", world-wide walking and mountaineering professionals, and local publics . Nuan-hsuen Ho (Chairman of Taiwan Post Co., Ltd.)
Revised:  In the main arena of the Taipei Municipal Chungshan Football Stadium, with the conjunction of "2007 Taiwan Walking Festival" by Republic of China Alpine Association held at Saturday (Nov. 10), this national event in Taipei attracted more than 5 thousand people including VIPs from "2007 Master Forum on Walking in Taiwan", world-wide walking and mountaineering professionals, and local publics . Nuan-hsuen Ho (Chairman of Taiwan Post Co., Ltd.)
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Original:  In the main arena of  Taipei Municipal Chungshan Football Stadium, with the conjunction of "2007 Taiwan Walking Festival" by Republic of China Alpine Association held at Saturday (Nov. 10), this national event in Taipei attracted more than 5 thousand people including VIPs from "2007 Master Forum on Walking in Taiwan", world-wide walking and mountaineering professionals, and local publics . Nuan-hsuen Ho (Chairman of Taiwan Post Co., Ltd.)
Revised:  In the main arena of Taipei Municipal Chungshan Football Stadium, with the conjunction of "2007 Taiwan Walking Festival" by Republic of China Alpine Association held at Saturday (Nov. 10), this national event in Taipei attracted more than 5 thousand people including VIPs from "2007 Master Forum on Walking in Taiwan", world-wide walking and mountaineering professionals, and local public figures . Nuan-hsuen Ho (Chairman of Taiwan Post Co., Ltd.)
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Original:  Sheng-mao Ho (Ministry of Health) talk to the media.
Revised:  Sheng-mao Ho (Ministry of Health) told the media.
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Original:  By the way, to promote advantages of recreation sports and health improvement, Jongher Yang (Commissioner of SAC) hope the public changes the oral-greetings from "Have you eaten yet?" to "Have you done sports yet?".
Revised:  By the way, to promote advantages of recreation sports and health improvement, Jongher Yang (Commissioner of SAC) hopes the public will change the greeting from "Have you eaten yet?" to "Have you done sports yet?".
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Original:  In the national event, Police Radio System in Taiwan had a live radio SNG to some participated divisions, and some magistrate hoped the public  do more recreational sports to realize the conception of "Taiwan Walking Day".
Revised:  In the national event, Police Radio System in Taiwan had a live radio SNG to some participated divisions, and some magistrate hoped the public would do more recreational sports to realize the conception of "Taiwan Walking Day".
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Original:  In the national event, Police Radio System in Taiwan had a live radio SNG to some participated divisions, and some magistrate hoped the public  do more recreational sports to realize the conception of "Taiwan Walking Day".
Revised:  In the national event, Police Radio System in Taiwan had a live radio SNG to some participated divisions, and some magistrate hoped the public do more recreational sports to fullfil the goal of "Taiwan Walking Day".
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Original:  Other Results of Day 5 Group A Italy 8-0 South Africa Mexico 9-5 Chinese Taipei USA 12A-2 Spain Panama 2-6 Japan Group B Canada 7-1 Netherlands Thailand 0-2 German
Revised:  Other Results at Day 5 Group A Italy 8-0 South Africa Mexico 9-5 Chinese Taipei USA 12A-2 Spain Panama 2-6 Japan Group B Canada 7-1 Netherlands Thailand 0-2 German
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Original: Currently, Australia and Cuba qualified the Quarter Final of the 2007 Baseball World Cup.
Revised: Currently, Australia and Cuba have qualified for the Quarter Final of the 2007 Baseball World Cup.
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Original:  There was only one match taken place between Chinese Taipei and Italy today in Tianmu Baseball Stadium.
Revised:  There was only one game taking place today between Chinese Taipei and Italy today in Tianmu Baseball Stadium.
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Original:  There was only one match taken place between Chinese Taipei and Italy today in Tianmu Baseball Stadium.
Revised:  There was only one match taken place between Chinese Taipei and Italy in Tianmu Baseball Stadium.
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Original:  With previous match at past 6 days of this series, there'll be more conflicts at next 2 days with every team want to qualify the Quarter Final taken place at this Friday (Nov. 15).
Revised:  After 6 days of this series, there'll be more conflicts at next 2 days with every team want to qualify the Quarter Final taken place at this Friday (Nov. 15).
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Original:  Most RBIs in a half inning: 12 RBIs in the top of 3rd inning.
Revised:  Most RBIs in a half inning: 12 in the top of 3rd inning.
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Original:  Most Hits in a game: 30 hits.
Revised:  Most Hits in a game: 30 
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Original:  But there was only a 2-run HR hit by Australian Infielder Glenn Williams.
Revised:  But there was only a 2-run shot by the Australian infielder Glenn Williams.
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Original:  South Korea vs Australia This game battled in a pitching duel with a 1-1 draw before the 8th inning.
Revised:  Australia wins thriller against S Korea This game developed into a pitching duel with a 1-1 draw before the 8th inning.
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Original:  They closed their opponent's offenses each other and two teams tied 0-0 before the 8th inning .
Revised:  They closed their opponent's offense as two teams were held scoreless for the first 8 innings .
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Original: Currently, Australia and Cuba have qualified for the Quarter Final of the 2007 Baseball World Cup.
Revised:  Australia and Cuba have qualified for the Quarter Final of the 2007 Baseball World Cup.
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Original:  Yet amazingly this rout only featured one home run, a 2-run shot by the Australian infielder Glenn Williams.
Revised:  Yet this rout only featured one home run, a 2-run shot by the Australian infielder Glenn Williams.
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Original:  Tomorrow's Fixtures Group A South Africa vs USA Japan vs Italy Spain vs Mexico Chinese Taipei vs Panama Group B Cuba vs Thailand Germany vs Australia Venezuela vs Canada Netherlands vs South Kore
Revised:  Tomorrow's fixtures Group A South Africa vs USA Japan vs Italy Spain vs Mexico Chinese Taipei vs Panama Group B Cuba vs Thailand Germany vs Australia Venezuela vs Canada Netherlands vs South Kore
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Original:  The two ships were carrying a total of around 7,150 tons of sulfur, according to Sergei Petrov, Russia's Emergency Situations Ministry regional spokesperson.
Revised:  The two ships were carrying a total of around 7,150 tons of sulfur, according to Sergei Petrov, Russia's Ministry of Emergency Situations regional spokesperson.
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Original:  The tanker spilled at least 560, 00 gallons of fuel into a strait which leads to the Black Sea, and officials say it may take years to clean up.
Revised:  The tanker spilled at least 560, 000 gallons of fuel into a strait which leads to the Black Sea, and officials say it may take years to clean up.
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Original:  The decommissioning is scheduled for completion by the summer of 2005 
Revised:  The decommissioning is scheduled for completion by the summer of 2005. 
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Original:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ". Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Middle East Category:Iran Category:United States Related New
Revised:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ." Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Middle East Category:Iran Category:United States Related New
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Original:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ". Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Middle East Category:Iran Category:United States Related New
Revised:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ". Related New
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Original:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ". Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Middle East Category:Iran Category:United States Related New
Revised:  Brose denied being asked to manufacture evidence, but stated that "if a detainee wants to tell me what I want to hear so he can get out of jail ... you know what I'm saying ". Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Middle East Category:Iran Category:United States Related new
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Original: Location of Suffolk within England Health officials in the United Kingdom are confirming that the H5 strain of the Avian Flu have been found in turkeys on Redgrave Park Farm in Suffolk, England.
Revised: Location of Suffolk within England Health officials in the United Kingdom are confirming that the H5 strain of the Avian Flu has been found in turkeys on Redgrave Park Farm in Suffolk, England.
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Original:  Any birds remaining on the farm are being kept indoors and away from any other wild birds.
Revised:  Birds on farms nearby are being kept indoors and away from any other wild birds.
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Original:  So far there is no confirmation that the strain found is the deadly H5N1 flu virus, but officials say that they will know "within 24 hours."
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Original: In February, poultry producer Bernard Matthews' farm in Suffolk had more than 160,000 birds killed after they were infected with the H5N1 virus.
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Original:  "Everybody needs to be concerned, this is avian influenza.
Revised: Officials also say that it is likely that the virus arrived in the U.K. by way of migrating birds and that the virus resembles the H5N1 strain that was discovered in August in Germany. Other possibilities of infection are currently being investigated by officials such as infected turkey foos or being brought overseas by humans. "Everybody needs to be concerned, this is avian influenza.
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Original: Location of Suffolk within England Health officials in the United Kingdom have confirmed that the H5N1 strain of the Avian Flu has been found in turkeys on Redgrave Park Farm in Suffolk, England.
Revised:  Health officials in the United Kingdom have confirmed that the H5N1 strain of the Avian Flu has been found in turkeys on Redgrave Park Farm in Suffolk, England.
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Original:  Born on August 31, 1907, Shreveport, Louisiana, He served as the first African American from California in the United States Congress, where he sponsored the Humphrey-Hawkins Full Employment Act. he was a Democratic member of the State Assembly in 1935 to 1963;
Revised:  Born on August 31, 1907, Shreveport, Louisiana, he served as the first African American from California in the United States Congress, where he sponsored the Humphrey-Hawkins Full Employment Act. he was a Democratic member of the State Assembly in 1935 to 1963;
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Original:  Born on August 31, 1907, Shreveport, Louisiana, He served as the first African American from California in the United States Congress, where he sponsored the Humphrey-Hawkins Full Employment Act. he was a Democratic member of the State Assembly in 1935 to 1963;
Revised:  Born on August 31, 1907, Shreveport, Louisiana, He served as the first African American from California in the United States Congress, where he sponsored the Humphrey-Hawkins Full Employment Act. Hawkins was a Democratic member of the State Assembly in 1935 to 1963;
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Original: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the 2nd generation quad core technology produced with a High-K metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and Lead disadvantaged for environment .
Revised: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the second generation quad core technology produced with a High-K metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and Lead disadvantaged for environment .
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Original: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the 2nd generation quad core technology produced with a High-K metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and Lead disadvantaged for environment .
Revised: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the 2nd generation quad core technology produced with a high-k metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and Lead disadvantaged for environment .
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Original: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the 2nd generation quad core technology produced with a High-K metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and Lead disadvantaged for environment .
Revised: 45 nanometer Intel and IT companies in Taiwan have launched server and PC products with processors built in "Penryn" technology, the 2nd generation quad core technology produced with a High-K metal Hafnium ingredients which replaced halogen materials and lead, which is not environmentally friendly .
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which enhanced computing efficiency, and " Deep Power Down Technology " for energy saving .
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and " Deep Power Down Technology " for energy saving .
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which enhanced computing efficiency, and " Deep Power Down Technology " for energy saving .
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which enhanced computing efficiency, and " deep power down " for energy saving .
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which enhanced computing efficiency, and " Deep Power Down Technology " for energy saving .
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on "Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4)" compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares, "Radix 16" which enhanced computing efficiency, and " Deep Power Down Technology " technology for energy efficiency .
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Original:  For the ISSE4 feature, this will benefit markets on high-definition and AV-media especially the topics on HDMI and 1080p support.
Revised:  For the SSE4 feature, this will benefit markets on high-definition and AV-media especially the topics on HDMI and 1080p support.
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Original:  For the ISSE4 feature, this will benefit markets on high-definition and AV-media especially the topics on HDMI and 1080p support.
Revised:  For the ISSE4 feature, this will benefit makers of high-definition and AV-media especially the topics on HDMI and 1080p support.
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Original:  For the ISSE4 feature, this will benefit markets on high-definition and AV-media especially the topics on HDMI and 1080p support.
Revised:  For the ISSE4 feature, this will benefit markets on high-definition and AV-media , as HDMI and 1080p support.
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Original:  Some participated companies who joined the exhibition of Taiwan Informonth next month announced that some products with "Penryn" technology will be in the market .
Revised:  Companies that will particpate in the Taiwan Informonth exhibition next month, announced that some products with "Penryn" technology will be in the market .
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on " Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) " compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) " compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on " Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) " compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on " Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
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Original: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on " Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) " compatible with video decoding (encoding) softwares , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
Revised: This new 45 nanometer (45nm) process technology included features on " Intel Streaming SIMD Extensions 4 (SSE4) " compatible with video decoding (encoding) software , "Radix 16" which increased computing efficiency, and "deep power down" technology for energy efficiency.
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Original:  For the SSE4 feature, this will benefit makers of high-definition and AV-media, as  HDMI and 1080p support .
Revised:  For the SSE4 feature, this will benefit makers of high-definition and AV-media, as both HDMI and 1080p support .
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Original:  For the SSE4 feature, this will benefit makers of high-definition and AV-media, as  HDMI and 1080p support .
Revised:  For the SSE4 feature, this will benefit makers of high-definition and AV-media, as HDMI and 1080p are supported .
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Original:  The new processors will be made in Typay, Tywon.
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Original:  In society, it is alright .
Revised:  In society, it is all right .
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