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Original: Speaker John Boehner Both the and agreed to a bill yesterday to end the government shutdown and to raise the debt limit of the federal government.
Revised: Speaker John Boehner Both the United States House of Representatives and Senate agreed to a bill yesterday to end the government shutdown and to raise the debt limit of the federal government.
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Original:  This committee is due to report back to  in December.
Revised:  This committee is due to report back to Congress in December.
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Original: Speaker John Boehner Both the United States House of Representatives and Senate agreed to a bill yesterday to end the government shutdown and to raise the debt limit of the federal government.
Revised: Speaker John Boehner Both the and agreed to a bill yesterday to end the government shutdown and to raise the debt limit of the federal government.
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Original:  President Barack Obama has signed the bill into law.
Revised:  President has signed the bill into law.
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Original:  In a statement, the House Speaker, John Boehner , said the Republicans would continue to fight Obama's healthcare law: "Our drive to stop the train wreck that is the president's health care law will continue.
Revised:  In a statement, the House Speaker, , said the Republicans would continue to fight Obama's healthcare law: "Our drive to stop the train wreck that is the president's health care law will continue.
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Original:  In a statement, the House Speaker, John Boehner , said the Republicans would continue to fight Obama's healthcare law: "Our drive to stop the train wreck that is the president's health care law will continue.
Revised:  In a statement, the House Speaker, John Boehner , said the would continue to fight Obama's healthcare law: "Our drive to stop the train wreck that is the president's health care law will continue.
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Original:  The Democratic Leader in the House, Nancy Pelosi , said on Twitter : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
Revised:  The Leader in the House, Nancy Pelosi , said on Twitter : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
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Original:  The Democratic Leader in the House, Nancy Pelosi , said on Twitter : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
Revised:  The Democratic Leader in the House, , said on Twitter : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
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Original:  The Democratic Leader in the House, Nancy Pelosi , said on Twitter : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
Revised:  The Democratic Leader in the House, Nancy Pelosi , said on : "The unnecessary shutdown America endured for 16 days has come to an end.
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Original:  The Chairman of HMRC, Paul Gray, has resigned over the affair, and critics are calling for Darling to do likewise  
Revised:  The Chairman of HMRC, Paul Gray, has resigned over the affair, and critics are calling for Darling to do likewise . 
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Original:  The discs were created by a junior official at the HMRC in response to a request for information by the NAO, and were sent unregistered and unrecorded in the departments' internal mail system on 18 October .
Revised:  The discs were created by a junior official at the HMRC in response to a request for information by the NAO, and were sent unregistered and unrecorded in the departments' internal mail system .
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Original:  The database contains details of all families in the UK who receive Child Benefit — all families with children up to 16 years of age, and up to 20 years old if they are in full-time education or training , estimated to contain 25 million individuals in 7.25 million families.
Revised:  The database contains details of all families in the UK who receive Child Benefit — all families with children up to 16 years of age, and up to 20 years old if they are in full-time education or training — estimated to contain 25 million individuals in 7.25 million families.
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Original:  When it was found that these discs had not arrived for audit at the NAO, a further copy of this data was made and sent — this time by registered post — and this package did arrive.
Revised:  When it was found that the discs had not arrived for audit at the NAO, a further copy of this data was made and sent — this time by registered post — and this package did arrive.
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Original:  When it was found that these discs had not arrived for audit at the NAO, a further copy of this data was made and sent — this time by registered post — and this package did arrive.
Revised:  When it was found that these discs had not arrived for audit at the NAO, a further copy of this data was made and sent — this time by registered mail — and this package did arrive.
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Original:  The discs were password protected, but none of the sensitive information on them had been encrypted.
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Original:  The violation of data protection laws involved in the creation of the discs has lead to strong attacks on the government's competence to create the proposed National Identity Register, when all UK residents will have an identity card.
Revised:  The violation of data protection laws involved in the creation of the discs has lead to strong attacks on the government's competence to establish the proposed National Identity Register, when all UK residents will have an identity card.
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Original:  This is the third recent data embarrassment for HMRC  — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh , and last month a laptop with data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
Revised:  This is the third data embarrassment for HMRC — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh , and last month a laptop with data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
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Original:  This is the third recent data embarrassment for HMRC  — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh , and last month a laptop with data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
Revised:  This is the third recent data embarrassment for HMRC — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh — and last month a laptop with data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
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Original:  This is the third recent data embarrassment for HMRC  — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh , and last month a laptop with data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
Revised:  This is the third recent data embarrassment for HMRC — earlier this month the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers were put on a disc and lost by a courier en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh , and last month a laptop containing the data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to someone from HMRC
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Original: The violation of data protection laws involved in the creation of the discs has lead to strong attacks on the government's competence to establish the proposed National Identity Register, when all UK residents will have an identity card.
Revised: The violation of data protection laws involved in the creation of the discs has led to strong attacks on the government's competence to establish the proposed National Identity Register, when all UK residents will have an identity card.
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Original: JPG|Alistair Darling British Chancellor of the Exchequer Alistair Darling announced to a shocked House of Commons today that two password-protected — but not encrypted — computer disks containing the entire Child Benefit database have been lost in transit between the offices of Her Majesty's Revenue and Customs (HMRC) in Washington, Tyne%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Wear and the National Audit Office (NAO) in London, in what has been described as "one of the world’s biggest ID protection failures".
Revised: JPG|Alistair Darling %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Wear and the National Audit Office (NAO) in London, in what has been described as "one of the world’s biggest ID protection failures".
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Original:  Conservative Shadow Chancellor George Osborne described the loss of data as "catastrophic" and said "They%DIFDELCMD < [%%% the government simply cannot be trusted with people's personal information".
Revised:  Conservative Shadow Chancellor George Osborne described the loss of data as "catastrophic" and said "They%DIFDELCMD < [%%% simply cannot be trusted with people's personal information".
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Original:  Conservative Shadow Chancellor George Osborne described the loss of data as "catastrophic" and said "They%DIFDELCMD < [%%% the government simply cannot be trusted with people's personal information".
Revised:  Conservative Shadow Chancellor George Osborne described the loss of data as "catastrophic" and said "They%DIFDELCMD < [%%% the government 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Chairman of HMRC, Paul Gray, has resigned over the affair, and critics are calling for Darling to do likewise.
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Original:  This is the third data embarrassment for HMRC in recent weeks — earlier this month it was reported that the details of over 15,000 Standard Life customers had been put on disk, and then lost en route from HMRC in Newcastle to Standard Life in Edinburgh — and last month a laptop containing the data of 400 people with high-value ISAs was stolen from the boot of a car belonging to a HMRC official who had been carrying out a routine audit
Revised:  Did you know that there are German cars there
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Original:  Dr. Cox has a job       
Revised:  Dr. Cox has a job . 
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Original:  The demonstration took place at the opening night of the 2005 Boston Cyberarts Festival.
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Original: Officials for the city of Amsterdam and the Anne Frank Museum state that the tree is infected with a fungus and was posing a public health hazard as they argue that it was in imminent danger of falling over.
Revised: Officials for the city of Amsterdam and the Anne Frank Museum state that the tree is infected with a fungus and poses a public health hazard as they argue that it was in imminent danger of falling over.
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Original:  People have even begun to sell the tree's chestnuts internet on auctions websites like eBay where one of the nuts reportedly reached a bid of US$10,000
Revised:  People have even begun to sell the tree's chestnuts on auction websites like eBay where one of the nuts reportedly reached a bid of US$10,000
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Original: Anne Frank statue in Amsterdam .
Revised: Panoramic view of Amsterdam. The Anne Frank Tree is visible in the lower right .
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Original:  The Anne Frank Tree is visible in the lower right .
Revised:  The Anne Frank Tree .
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Original:  It has yet to pass in the Spanish Senate, although political commentators are speculating that this will be simply a formality, and fully expect the bill to become law.
Revised:  It has yet to pass in the Spanish Senate, although political commentators are speculating this will be simply a formality, and fully expect the bill to become law.
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Original:  Pope Benedict XVI has reponsded to this first test of his papacy , coming out strongly against the actions.
Revised:  Pope Benedict XVI reponsded to this first test of his papacy , coming out strongly against the actions.
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Original:  Pope Benedict XVI has reponsded to this first test of his papacy , coming out strongly against the actions.
Revised:  Pope Benedict XVI has reponsded to this first test of his papacy by coming out strongly against the actions.
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Original:  One senior Vatican offical, the head of the Pontifical Council on the Family, Cardinal Alfonso Lopez Trujillo, came out against the bill , commenting that it was "iniquitous".
Revised:  One senior Vatican offical, the head of the Pontifical Council on the Family, Cardinal Alfonso Lopez Trujillo, commented that the bill was "iniquitous".
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Original:  If passed, the Spanish law will include the ability for same-sex couples to adopt children
Revised:  Spain's Socialist Prime Minister José Luis Rodríguez Zapatero, took office in April last year intending to create a secularlized state
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Original:  One senior Vatican offical, the head of the Pontifical Council on the Family , Cardinal Alfonso Lopez Trujillo, commented that the bill was "iniquitous" .   
Revised:  One senior Vatican offical, the head of the Pontifical Council on the Family Cardinal Alfonso Lopez Trujillo, commented that the bill was "iniquitous" . 
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Original: Category:SpainCategory:Politics and conflictsCategory:Religion A goverment-backed bill to allow same-sex couples to marry and to adopt children has passed the Spanish Congress of Deputies.
Revised:  A goverment-backed bill to allow same-sex couples to marry and to adopt children has passed the Spanish Congress of Deputies.
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Original:  Calling on municipal offices asked to permform gay marriages to object, he said, "They should exercise the same conscientious objection asked of doctors and nurses against a crime such as abortion.
Revised:  Calling on municipal offices asked to perform gay marriages to object, he said, "They should exercise the same conscientious objection asked of doctors and nurses against a crime such as abortion.
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Original:  But unlike other same-sex marriage countries, Spain's proposal will allow for child adoption.
Revised:  Unlike other same-sex marriage countries, Spain's proposal will allow for child adoption.
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Original:  New language to Spanish Civil Law would read: "Matrimony shall have the same requisites and effects regardless of whether the persons involved are of the same or different sex." Pope Benedict XVI responded to this first test of his papacy by coming out strongly against the actions .
Revised:  New language to Spanish Civil Law would read: "Matrimony shall have the same requisites and effects regardless of whether the persons involved are of the same or different sex." Pope Benedict XVI responded to this first test of his papacy by coming out strongly against the passage of the bill .
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Original:  Traditional Catholics look to the new pope with hopes his moral authority can restore to the faithful the principles of birth control and exclusion of those who remarry from partaking in communion.
Revised:  Traditional Catholics look to the new pope with the hope that his moral authority can restore to the faithful the principles of birth control and exclusion of those who remarry from partaking in communion.
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Original:  The parliament passed the bill with 183 for , and 136 against.
Revised:  The parliament passed the bill with 183 for and 136 against.
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Original:  Upon adoption, the law would make Spain the third European country to allow gay marriage, joining Belgium and The Netherlands.
Revised: The Congress altered existing law governing marriage by adding this sentence: "Marriage will have the same requirements and results when the two people entering into the contract are of the same sex or of different sexes." This bill is now passed on to the Senate, which has a greater number of conservative members, making unlikely its passage. However, in the Spanish legal system the Senate's rejection is not binding. Upon adoption, the law would make Spain the third European country to allow gay marriage, joining Belgium and The Netherlands.
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Original:  New language to Spanish Civil Law would read: "Matrimony shall have the same requisites and effects regardless of whether the persons involved are of the same or different sex."
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Original: An air force base in Katunayake , Sri Lanka that was storing fighter jets, was attacked by the rebel forcesof the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam by at  least two aircraft  on Monday at 12:4 a.m. local time.
Revised: An air force base in Katunayake , Sri Lanka that was storing fighter jets, was attacked by the rebel forcesof the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam by at At least two aircraft on Monday at 12:4 a.m. local time.
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Original:  As many as 3 members of the air force were killed, and 17 injured during the early morning attack when at least 2 bombs were dropped on the base  .
Revised:  As many as 3 members of the air force were killed, and 17 injured during the attack when at least 2 bombs were dropped on the base .
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Original:  As many as 3 members of the air force were killed, and 17 injured during the attack when at least 2 bombs were dropped on the base , which was .
Revised:  As many as 3 members of the air force were killed, and 17 injured during the attack when at least 2 bombs were dropped on the base .
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Original:  A previous ground attack in 2001  by the LTTE on the airport itself left half of the country's national airline fleet destroyed
Revised:  In 2001 by the LTTE on the airport itself left half of the country's national airline fleet destroyed
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Original:  A previous ground attack in 2001  by the LTTE on the airport itself left half of the country's national airline fleet destroyed
Revised:  A previous ground attack in 2001 , a ground attack by the LTTE on the airport itself left half of the country's national airline fleet destroyed
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Original:  More attacks of the same nature will follow," said Rasiah Ilanthiraiyan, a spokesman for the rebel group ,
Revised:  More attacks of the same nature will follow," said Rasiah Ilanthiraiyan, a spokesman for the rebel group .
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Original: Hughes had already received six penalty points on his licence from previous speeding convictions and a conviction for failing to identify the speeding driver of one of his force's vehicles in 2006.
Revised: Hughes had already received six penalty points on his license from previous speeding convictions and a conviction for failing to identify the speeding driver of one of his force's vehicles in 2006.
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Original:  Matthew Elliot, the Chief Executive of the TaxPayers' Alliance, criticised Hughes for wasting Court time at the taxpayer's expense.
Revised:  Matthew Elliot, the Chief Executive of the TaxPayers' Alliance, criticized Hughes for wasting Court time at the taxpayer's expense.
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Original: The area where he was caught speeding) The Chief Constable of South Yorkshire Police, Meredydd Hughes was due to appear before Wrexham Magistrates court on November 21, 2007.
Revised: The area where the Chief Constable was caught speeding) The Chief Constable of South Yorkshire Police, Meredydd Hughes was due to appear before Wrexham Magistrates court on November 21, 2007.
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Original:  He had received a citation for driving at 90 mph on a stretch of the A5 where the legal limit was 60 mph.
Revised:  He had received a citation for driving at 90 mph where the speed limit was 60 mph.
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Original:      Hughes had already received six penalty points on his license from previous speeding convictions and a conviction for failing to identify the speeding driver of one of his force's vehicles in 2006.
Revised:  "He doesn't seek to make any excuse about this matter. He totally accepts that the police have a duty to do. He is no exception and he accepts that he must be punished for the offence." Hughes had already received six penalty points on his license from previous speeding convictions and a conviction for failing to identify the speeding driver of one of his force's vehicles in 2006.
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Original:  Wrexham Magistrates Court has adjourned the case until December 5, 2007, as Meredydd Hughes  claimed that he has still not yet found a solicitor to represent him.
Revised:  Wrexham Magistrates Court had adjourned the case until December 5, 2007, as Meredydd Hughes claimed that he has still not yet found a solicitor to represent him.
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Original:  The incident could potentially be embarrassing  , as Hughes , being the Chair of ACPO's road policing enforcement committee, has responsibility for developing police policies about how speed cameras are used.
Revised:  The incident could potentially be embarrassing , as Hughes was the Chair of ACPO's road policing enforcement committee, has responsibility for developing police policies about how speed cameras are used.
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Original:  The incident could potentially be embarrassing  , as Hughes , being the Chair of ACPO's road policing enforcement committee, has responsibility for developing police policies about how speed cameras are used.
Revised:  The incident could potentially be embarrassing , as Hughes , being the Chair of ACPO's road policing enforcement committee, with responsibility for developing police policies about how speed cameras are used.
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Original: The area where the Chief Constable was caught speeding ) .
Revised: The area where the Chief Constable was caught speeding .
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Original: 開幕中，剛上任台灣精品品牌協會理事長的謝子仁，就開宗明義地說：「台灣製造不代表『便宜』，反而象徵優良品質的『價值』。」隨後，經濟部長陳瑞隆呼應謝理事長的致詞，並表示：「隨著品牌的創新、研究與發展，眾多自創品牌都走入了精緻化路線，優良的品牌甚至世界知名。但是，品牌的經營，不一定會成功，因為中小企業陸續竄出的情況下，要培養好的品牌形象，需要長時間的經營。」  240px|The "Smiling Curve" by Stan Shih.
Revised: 開幕中，剛上任台灣精品品牌協會理事長的謝子仁，就開宗明義地說：「台灣製造不代表『便宜』，反而象徵優良品質的『價值』。」隨後，經濟部長陳瑞隆呼應謝理事長的致詞，並表示：「隨著品牌的創新、研究與發展，眾多自創品牌都走入了精緻化路線，優良的品牌甚至世界知名。但是，品牌的經營，不一定會成功，因為中小企業陸續竄出的情況下，要培養好的品牌形象，需要長時間的經營。」 D, and new ideas. Lots of good MIT brands became notable world-wide in the presence. But it's uncertain to determine success or failure when a company manages its brand because companies with small-business scale were grown up. A brand needs a long-period management to keep it in a good image." 240px|The "Smiling Curve" by Stan Shih.
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