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Original:  But the attachment broke before the performance and Blackner tried to fix it using extra-strong glue , but unfortunately only let it dry for 20 seconds instead of the usual 20 minutes required.
Revised:  But the attachment broke before the performance and Blackner tried to fix it using extra-strong glue , but unfortunately only let it dry for 20 minutes required.
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Original: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" was ready to perform at the ' Circus of Horrors ', which is known for its oddball , offbeat performances.
Revised: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" performed at the Circus of Horrors ', which is known for its oddball , offbeat performances.
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Original: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" was ready to perform at the ' Circus of Horrors ', which is known for its oddball , offbeat performances.
Revised: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" was ready to perform at the ' Circus of Horrors , known for its oddball , offbeat performances.
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Original: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" was ready to perform at the ' Circus of Horrors ', which is known for its oddball , offbeat performances.
Revised: Daniel Blackner, known as "Captain Dan the Demon Dwarf" was ready to perform at the ' Circus of Horrors ', which is known for its oddball and offbeat performances.
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Original:  But the attachment broke before the performance and when Blackner attempted a repair, he neglected to let the extra-strong glue dry for the recommended 20 minutes , instead utilizing it for the performance just 20 seconds after.
Revised:  However, the vacuum cleaner was broken before a performance and performer Blackner placed extra-strong glue dry for the recommended 20 minutes , instead utilizing it for the performance just 20 seconds after.
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Original:  But the attachment broke before the performance and when Blackner attempted a repair, he neglected to let the extra-strong glue dry for the recommended 20 minutes , instead utilizing it for the performance just 20 seconds after.
Revised:  But the attachment broke before the performance and when Blackner attempted a repair, he neglected to let the extra-strong glue on the attachment to fix it, neglecting to wait the entire 20 minutes , instead utilizing it for the performance just 20 seconds after.
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Original:  He was then rushed to the accident and emergency  department of Edinburgh Royal Infirmary, where nurses struggled for an hour to free him.
Revised:  After being rushed to the accident and emergency department of Edinburgh Royal Infirmary, where nurses struggled for an hour to free him.
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Original:  He was then rushed to the accident and emergency  department of Edinburgh Royal Infirmary, where nurses struggled for an hour to free him.
Revised:  He was then rushed to the A department of Edinburgh Royal Infirmary, where nurses struggled for an hour to free him.
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Original:  The U.S. military in Iraq says that mechanical failure is being blamed on the crash.
Revised:  The U.S. military in Iraq are blaming mechanical failure for the crash.
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Original:  The military says that this is the worst crash of its kind in Iraq since 2005.
Revised:  The military says that this is the worst crash of its kind in Iraq since 2005 when
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Original: Image: Black hawk.jpg |A  UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter flying from Bagram Air Base to Ghazni in Afghanistan .]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Tikrit, Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed.
Revised: Image: Black hawk.jpg |A UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter in Iraq .]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Tikrit, Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed.
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Original: JPG |A file phot of a downed UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter in Iraq .]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Tikrit, Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed.
Revised: JPG |A UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter in Iraq .]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Tikrit, Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed.
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Original: ]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Tikrit, Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed  .
Revised: ]] At least 14 United States troops, four crew and 10 passengers, were killed in Iraq when their UH-60 Black Hawk helicopter crashed .
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Original: Image:Black hawk.jpg|A UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter flying from Bagram Air Base to Ghazni in Afghanistan.
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Original: Image:Tornado.ze342.arp.jpg|An RAF Tornado F3]] Typhoon Eurofighters shadowed a Russian Tupolev Tu-95 "Bear-bomber" reconnaissance aircraft last Friday, which turned back before it reached UK skies.
Revised: Image:Tornado.ze342.arp.jpg|An RAF Tornado F3]] Eurofighter Typhoons shadowed a Russian Tupolev Tu-95 "Bear-bomber" reconnaissance aircraft last Friday, which turned back before it reached UK skies.
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Original: Image:Tornado.ze342.arp.jpg|An RAF Tornado F3 Eurofighter Typhoons shadowed a Russian Tupolev Tu-95 "Bear-bomber" reconnaissance aircraft last Friday, which turned back before it reached UK skies.
Revised: One of the jets shadowing the bomber Eurofighter Typhoons shadowed a Russian Tupolev Tu-95 "Bear-bomber" reconnaissance aircraft last Friday, which turned back before it reached UK skies.
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Original:  Although it is unclear which CMI personnel will take part in discusions , it has been confirmed that Ahtisaari himself, currently the UN envoy for Kosovo, will play no direct role.
Revised:  Although it is unclear which CMI personnel will take part in discussions , it has been confirmed that Ahtisaari himself, currently the UN envoy for Kosovo, will play no direct role.
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Original:  CMI officials are continueing to remain annonymous, citing their reasons for doing so as the sensitive nature of the arrangements in the context of current tensions in Iraq.
Revised:  CMI officials are continuing to remain annonymous, citing their reasons for doing so as the sensitive nature of the arrangements in the context of current tensions in Iraq.
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Original:  The CMI is also refusing to refer to the planned meeting as a negotiation, refering instead to descirbe it as "bringing experiences from other crisis areas in the form of a seminar".
Revised:  The CMI is also refusing to refer to the planned meeting as a negotiation, referring instead to describe it as "bringing experiences from other crisis areas in the form of a seminar".
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Original:  It is understood that a third major faction in Iraqi violence, the large Kurdish minority, will have no involvement in the discusions .
Revised:  It is understood that a third major faction in Iraqi violence, the large Kurdish minority, will have no involvement in the discussions .
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Original:  The Iraqi government| is simmilarly not involved, although some of the other "key actors" arriving from Iraq are party representatives and parliamentarians.
Revised:  The Iraqi government| is similarly not involved, although some of the other "key actors" arriving from Iraq are party representatives and parliamentarians.
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Original:  The Finnish Ministry for Foreign Affairs has made it clear that Finland will not technicaly be a party to the meeting, but is merely acting to arrange it.
Revised:  The Finnish Ministry for Foreign Affairs has made it clear that Finland will not technically be a party to the meeting, but is merely acting to arrange it.
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Original:  The CMI did not specify the exact location of the meetings, nor could it tell reporters how long negotiations will last, saying that the length will depend on how succesful the talks are.
Revised:  The CMI did not specify the exact location of the meetings, nor could it tell reporters how long negotiations will last, saying that the length will depend on how successful the talks are.
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Original:  Some organisers have said that the worst case scenario is that there will only be one meeting.
Revised:  Some organizers have said that the worst case scenario is that there will only be one meeting.
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Original:  The last time the CMI arranged international discusions in Finland was in 2005, when political leaders from Indonesia and the province of Aceh succesfuly negotiated a peace deal.
Revised:  The last time the CMI arranged international discussions in Finland was in 2005, when political leaders from Indonesia and the province of Aceh succesfuly negotiated a peace deal.
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Original: Mediators will meet in Finland next week aiming towards ending violence in Iraq between Iraqi Shi'ites and Sunnis, two of Iraq 's largest population groups.
Revised: Mediators will meet in Finland next week with the aim of ending violence in Iraq between Iraqi Shi'ites and Sunnis, two of Iraq 's largest population groups.
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Original: Mediators will meet in Finland next week aiming towards ending violence in Iraq between Iraqi Shi'ites and Sunnis, two of Iraq 's largest population groups.
Revised: Mediators will meet in Finland next week aiming towards ending violence in Iraq between Iraqi Shi'ites and Sunnis, two of the country 's largest population groups.
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Original:  CMI officials are continuing to remain annonymous , citing their reasons for doing so as the sensitive nature of the arrangements in the context of current tensions in Iraq.
Revised:  CMI officials are continuing to remain anonymous , citing their reasons for doing so as the sensitive nature of the arrangements in the context of current tensions in Iraq.
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Original:  Following bands have performed their music on that stage: On Friday - Blue Raincoat, Lao Che, Dezerter, Ścianka, Low Freqency in Stereo and Architecture in Helsinki on Saturday - 19 Wiosen, O.S.T.R, Tymon & Transistors, Bassisters Orchestra, Pogodno, Nosowska i Electrelane.
Revised:  Following bands have performed their music on that stage: On Friday - Blue Raincoat, Lao Che, Dezerter, Ścianka, Low Freqency in Stereo and Architecture in Helsinki On Saturday - 19 Wiosen, O.S.T.R, Tymon & Transistors, Bassisters Orchestra, Pogodno, Nosowska i Electrelane.
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Original:  Concerts on the both scenes took place alternatingly  & 
Revised:  Concerts on the both scenes took place alternatingly . & 
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Original:  the German fans shouted in English to taunt the home fans Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
Revised:  to taunt the home fans Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
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Original: at Wimbley Stadium in a friendly match. the German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans  Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
Revised: at new Wembley Stadium in a friendly match. the German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
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Original: at Wimbley Stadium in a friendly match. the German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans  Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
Revised: at Wimbley Stadium in a friendly match. The German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
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Original: at Wimbley Stadium in a friendly match. the German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans  Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
Revised: at Wimbley Stadium in a friendly match. the German fans shouted in English There's only one team at Wembley! to taunt the home fans . Other scores Friendly matches Home Team Score Visiting TeamJapan2-0CameroonRussia2-2PolandUkraine2-1UzbekistanBrazil2-0AlgeriaBulgaria0-1WalesBosnia and Herzegovina3-5CroatiaNorway2-1ArgentinaDenmark0-4IrelandRomania2-0TurkeyAustria1-1Czech RepublicGreece2-3SpainSwitzerland2-1NetherlandsSweden1-0United StatesHungary3-1ItalyScotland1-0South AfricaSlovakia0-1France
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Original: London, Emgland Frank Lampard open scoring in the 9th minute to give himself his first international goal in 12 months.
Revised: London, England Frank Lampard open scoring in the 9th minute to give himself his first international goal in 12 months.
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Original: London, Emgland Frank Lampard open scoring in the 9th minute to give himself his first international goal in 12 months.
Revised: London, Emgland Frank Lampard opened the scoring in the 9th minute to give himself his first international goal in 12 months.
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Original:  Hurricane Dean hit the coast of Mexico 's mainland today as a Category 2 hurricane, with winds sustained at 100 mph.
Revised:  Hurricane Dean hit the coast of 's mainland today as a Category 2 hurricane, with winds sustained at 100 mph.
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Original:  Dean moved across the Bay of Campeche , eyeing over 100 oil platforms and several oil ports in the center of the country's oil industry.
Revised:  Dean moved across the , eyeing over 100 oil platforms and several oil ports in the center of the country's oil industry.
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Original:  At least nine fossilized teeth, one canine  and 8 molars, of a previously unknown species of apes found in Africa were discovered by a team of researchers from Ethiopia and Japan who then compared the 3-D make up of the teeth to other fossils that date back as far as 8 million years and found that the fossils are likely a "direct ancestor" of apes currently living in Africa and that the new ape fossils were that of a species of gorilla who at mostly plants high in fiber.
Revised:  At least nine fossilized teeth, one canine tooth and 8 molars, of a previously unknown species of apes found in Africa were discovered by a team of researchers from Ethiopia and Japan who then compared the 3-D make up of the teeth to other fossils that date back as far as 8 million years and found that the fossils are likely a "direct ancestor" of apes currently living in Africa and that the new ape fossils were that of a species of gorilla who at mostly plants high in fiber.
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Original: Researchers say that new, 10 million year old fossils found in Ethiopia, prove that the theory that humans may have evolved from a species of great apes 8 million years ago, may not be true, but that humans may have split from apes as long as 10.5 million years ago.
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Original:  At least nine fossilized teeth, one canine tooth and 8 molars, of a previously unknown species of apes found in Africa were discovered by a team of researchers from Ethiopia and Japan who then compared the 3-D make up of the teeth to other fossils that date back as far as 8 million years and found that the fossils are likely a "direct ancestor" of apes currently living in Africa and that the new ape fossils were that of a species of gorilla who ate mostly plants high in fiber.
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Original:  Despite the finds, other researchers are not convinced that the findings are correct.
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Original:  Researchers have named the newly discovered species Cororapithecus abyssinicus whose remains were found in the Afar Region of Ethiopia, the same place where the remains of Lucy were discovered in 1974
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Original: August 22, 2007 The Texas Rangers rounded the bases at a dizzying pace and became the first team in 110 years to score 30 runs in a game, setting an American League record Wednesday in a 30-3 rout of the Baltimore Orioles at Camden Yards.
Revised:  The Texas Rangers rounded the bases at a dizzying pace and became the first team in 110 years to score 30 runs in a game, setting an American League record Wednesday in a 30-3 rout of the Baltimore Orioles at Camden Yards.
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Original:  He earned a save by "pitching effectively for at least three innings " , shutting out the Orioles in the final three innings while his teammates scored another 16 insurance runs.
Revised:  He earned a save by pitching for at least three innings " , shutting out the Orioles in the final three innings while his teammates scored another 16 insurance runs.
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Original:  He earned a save by "pitching effectively for at least three innings " , shutting out the Orioles in the final three innings while his teammates scored another 16 insurance runs.
Revised:  He earned a save by "pitching effectively for at least three innings , shutting out the Orioles in the final three innings while his teammates scored another 16 insurance runs.
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Original:  The gum is a lump of w ;
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Original:  The gum is a lump of w: birch bark tar, and still has visible tooth marks.
Revised:  The gum is a lump of birch bark tar, and still has visible tooth marks.
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Original: 200px|Michael Vick, of the Atlanta Falcons scrambles past Colts defensive end Dwight Freeney in the 2006 Pro Bowl.
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Original: In Kentucky, a fire broke out at an electricity substation, forcing the Tennessee Valley Authority to request major electrical cuonsumers to reduce their power use.
Revised: In Kentucky, a fire broke out at an electricity substation, forcing the Tennessee Valley Authority to request major electrical consumers to reduce their power use.
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Original:  The extreme heat wave is now expected to move into Ohio, a state where very heavy rainfall caused evacuations and lots of structural damage.
Revised:  The extreme heat wave is now expected to move into Ohio, a state where very heavy rainfall caused evacuations and considerable structural damage.
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Original: Finland have defeated Kazakhstan 2-1 in a home qualifying game for Euro 2008 championship.
Revised: Finland has defeated Kazakhstan 2-1 in a home qualifying game for Euro 2008 championship.
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Original:  13,000 people attended the match, which was refereed by Hungary's Viktor Kassai.
Revised:  13,000 people attended the match, which was refereed by Hungarian Viktor Kassai.
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Original:  Finland continued to have the main possesion of the ball, but were continually thwarted by Kazakhstan goalkeeper David Loriya, only scoring again in the 59th minute.
Revised:  Finland continued to have the main possession of the ball, but were continually thwarted by Kazakhstan goalkeeper David Loriya, only scoring again in the 59th minute.
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Original:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from Dimitriy Byakov, taking Finland goalkeeper Jussi Jaaskelainen by surprise.
Revised:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from Dimitriy Byakov, taking Finland goalkeeper Jussi Jääskeläinen by surprise.
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Original:  13,000 people attended the match, which was refereed by Hungarian Viktor Kassai .
Revised:  13,000 people attended the match, which was refereed by Hungarian .
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Original:  Finland had taken the lead as early as the 13th minute with a goal from Alexei Eremenko .
Revised:  Finland had taken the lead as early as the 13th minute with a goal from .
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Original:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from Dimitriy Byakov , taking Finland goalkeeper Jussi Jääskeläinen by surprise.
Revised:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from , taking Finland goalkeeper Jussi Jääskeläinen by surprise.
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Original:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from Dimitriy Byakov , taking Finland goalkeeper Jussi Jääskeläinen by surprise.
Revised:  This was equalised by Kazakhstan in the 23rd minute by a header from Dimitriy Byakov , taking Finland goalkeeper by surprise.
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Original:  Finland continued to have the main possession of the ball, but were continually thwarted by Kazakhstan goalkeeper David Loriya , only scoring again in the 59th minute.
Revised:  Finland continued to have the main possession of the ball, but were continually thwarted by Kazakhstan goalkeeper , only scoring again in the 59th minute.
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Original:  Today's tremor struck 70 miles southwest of Padang, a city in western Sumatra, and no damage has so far been reported . Scientists are cautious that another major earthquake could occur along the Indian Ocean faultline, which has seen a number of minor tremors since the December 26 disaster .
Revised:  Today's tremor struck 70 miles southwest of Padang, a city in western Sumatra, yet no damage has so far been reported . Scientists are cautious that another major earthquake could occur along the Indian Ocean faultline, which has seen a number of minor tremors since the December 26 disaster .
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Original:  Today's tremor struck 70 miles southwest of Padang, a city in western Sumatra, and no damage has so far been reported . Scientists are cautious that another major earthquake could occur along the Indian Ocean faultline, which has seen a number of minor tremors since the December 26 disaster .
Revised:  Today's tremor struck 70 miles southwest of Padang, a city in western Sumatra, and no damage has been reported so far . Scientists are cautious that another major earthquake could occur along the Indian Ocean faultline, which has seen a number of minor tremors since the December 26 disaster .
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