wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Second Honduran Civil War (Spanish: Segunda guerra civil hondureña) or the Reclamation Revolution (Spanish: Revolución Reivindicatoria) was the most cruel and violent armed conflict that took place in the Republic of Honduras in 1924.
Revised: The Second Honduran Civil War (Spanish: Segunda guerra civil hondureña) or the Reclamation Revolution (Spanish: Revolución Reivindicatoria) was the armed conflict that took place in the Republic of Honduras in 1924.
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Original:  This was the first conflict in Honduras where airplanes were used for aerial bombardment, and new war tactics inherited from the First World War were employed , given that until 1919 the Honduran army still maintains many elements from the middle of the last century .
Revised:  This was the first conflict in Honduras where airplanes were used for aerial bombardment, and new war tactics inherited from the First World War were employed .
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Original:  The "terrible conditions" she endured as a worker echoed that of other textile mill workers: cotton lint filled the air, and temperatures were stifling .
Revised:  The "terrible conditions" she endured as a worker echoed that of other textile mill workers: cotton lint filled the air, and temperatures were stifling 
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Original: Lucille Thornburgh was born on September 18, 1908  in Strawberry Plains, Tennessee.
Revised: Lucille Thornburgh was born on September 18, 1908 , in Strawberry Plains, Tennessee.
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Original: Lucille Thornburgh was born on September 18, 1908 , in Strawberry Plains, Tennessee.
Revised: Lucille Thornburgh was born on September 18, 1908 in Strawberry Plains, Tennessee.
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Original:  The "terrible conditions" she endured as a worker echoed that of other textile mill workers: cotton lint filled the air, and temperatures were stifling  Even when women achieved the skills necessary for higher-paying positions, they were not permitted to fill permanent positions.
Revised:  The "terrible conditions" she endured as a worker echoed that of other textile mill workers: cotton lint filled the air, and temperatures were stifling . Even when women achieved the skills necessary for higher-paying positions, they were not permitted to fill permanent positions.
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Original:   Rebeca completed high school at the Central Women’s Institute in Medellin.
Revised:  Education Rebeca completed high school at the Central Women’s Institute in Medellin.
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Original:   Rebeca married him and they set up home in Calin, set up a factory, and had a son.
Revised:  Personal life Rebeca married him and they set up home in Calin, set up a factory, and had a son.
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Original:  Ultimately two daughters became engineers (Rebeca and Guillermina Uribe Bone ) another became a doctor, a fourth sister Maria Teresa began to study architecture before an early marraige .
Revised:  Ultimately two daughters became engineers (Rebeca and Guillermina Uribe Bone ) another became a doctor, a fourth sister Maria Teresa began to study architecture before an early marriage .
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Original:  The brother became a pilot, lawyer and an architect.
Revised:  Their brothers became a pilot, lawyer and an architect.
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Original:   As a new graduate, she began working in the Bavarian quality department, and before completing her first year as a chemical engineer, she met the son of a friend of her father’s.
Revised:  He sister Guillermina said in 2004, “Mi papá estaba adelantado para la época, por eso nos estimuló muchísimo. Él tenía un pensamiento sobre la mujer más amplio”. "My father was ahead of his time, which is why he encouraged us so much. He had wider expectations about women." As a new graduate, she began working in the Bavarian quality department, and before completing her first year as a chemical engineer, she met the son of a friend of her father’s.
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Original:  The garnet amphibolite also borders the southern margin of an olivine metagabbro formation.
Revised:  The garnet amphibolite also borders the southern margin of an olivine meta-gabbro formation.
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Original: Geographic Situation The Gore Mountain Garnet outcrop is located in the south central Adirondack mountains in northern New York.
Revised: Geography The Gore Mountain Garnet outcrop is located in the south central Adirondack mountains in northern New York.
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Original:  Recent studies suggest the abnormal size of the garnets is attributed to high temperatures and fluid flow introduced by faults.
Revised:  The abnormal size of the garnets is attributed to high temperatures and fluid flow introduced by faults.
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Original:  Hornblende and biotite growing bigger with the garnets Mn concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Li in the whole rock and overall depletion of Cu,
Revised:  Hornblende and biotite growing bigger with the garnets Mn concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Lithium (Li) in the whole rock and overall depletion of Cu,
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Original:  Cs, Th, and U Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions Structures The garnet amphibolite has several structures, including mineral inclusions, tectonic parting, faults, and lineation.
Revised:  Cs, Th, and U Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions Structures The 
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Original:  The garnets bear the inclusions in this rock unit, which range from minerals such as acicular rutile, pyrite, plagioclase, pyroxene, hornblende, ilmenite, apatite, and biotite.
Revised:  garnets bear the inclusions in this rock unit, which range from minerals such as acicular rutile, pyrite, plagioclase, pyroxene, hornblende, ilmenite, apatite, and biotite.
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Original:  Lineation in the garnet amphibolite is formed by the parallel alignment of hornblende, elongate mafic and felsic minerals, plagioclase pressure shadows, and few instances of elongate garnet .
Revised:  Lineation in the garnet amphibolite is formed by the parallel alignment of hornblende, elongate mafic and felsic minerals, plagioclase pressure shadows, and few instances of elongate garnet 
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Original:  1036. URL Fluid flow induced ion mobility and plasticity, as well as enriching the whole rock chemistry with lithium  and thorium and depleting cesium  .
Revised:  1036. URL Fluid flow induced ion mobility and plasticity, as well as enriching the whole rock chemistry with lithium and depleting cesium .
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Original:  The first growth phase was homogenous, while the second phase was marked by the enrichment of Yttrium (Y) and Titanium (Ti) in the garnets.
Revised:  The first growth phase was homogenous, while the second phase was marked by the enrichment of yttrium (Y) and Titanium (Ti) in the garnets.
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Original:  The first growth phase was homogenous, while the second phase was marked by the enrichment of Yttrium (Y) and Titanium (Ti) in the garnets.
Revised:  The first growth phase was homogenous, while the second phase was marked by the enrichment of Yttrium (Y) and titanium (Ti) in the garnets.
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Original:  Trace element geochemistry The garnet amphibolite is strongly enriched in Li and depleted in Cu , Cs, Th, and U . Hornblende and biotite growing bigger with the garnets Manganese (Mn)
Revised:  Trace element geochemistry The garnet amphibolite is strongly enriched in Li and depleted in Copper (Cu) , Cs, Th, and U . Hornblende and biotite growing bigger with the garnets Manganese (Mn)
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Original:  concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Lithium (Li ) in the whole rock and overall depletion of Copper (Cu), Cesium (Cs), Thorium (Th), and Uranium (U ) Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions
Revised:  concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Li in the whole rock and overall depletion of Copper (Cu), Cesium (Cs), Thorium (Th), and Uranium (U ) Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions
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Original:  concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Lithium (Li ) in the whole rock and overall depletion of Copper (Cu), Cesium (Cs), Thorium (Th), and Uranium (U ) Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions
Revised:  concentrations increasing towards the outer rim of garnets due to reabsorption Enrichment of Y and Ti during garnet growth Depletion of Ti and enrichment of Y during garnet reabsorption Overall enrichment of Lithium (Li ) in the whole rock and overall depletion of Cu, Cs, Th, and U Green-spinel included plagioclase becoming white plagioclase with no inclusions
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Original:  The mountains themselves, which are part of the Canadian Grenville Province, are comprised of three main parts, the first of which is a dome of anorthosite.
Revised:  The mountains themselves, which are part of the Canadian Grenville Province, are composed of three main parts, the first of which is a dome of anorthosite.
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Original:  An ophthalmic technician also performs administrative tasks like ordering inventory , calibrating equipment, and other office tasks .
Revised:  An ophthalmic technician also performs administrative tasks like ordering inventory and calibrating equipment .
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Original:  After getting certified, it is required that you work a minimum of 2,000 hours (one year full time) as a COA  under the supervision of an ophthalmologist.
Revised:  After getting certified, a minimum of 2,000 hours (one year full time) as a COA under the supervision of an ophthalmologist.
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Original:  After getting certified, it is required that you work a minimum of 2,000 hours (one year full time) as a COA  under the supervision of an ophthalmologist.
Revised:  After getting certified, it is required that you work a minimum of 2,000 hours (one year full time) as a COA is required under the supervision of an ophthalmologist.
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Original:  These hours must be completed within two years of submitting your application to become an ophthalmic technician.
Revised:  These hours must be completed within two years of submitting the application to become an ophthalmic technician.
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Original:  You must also earn 12 JCAHPO Group A credits  within one year of submitting your application .
Revised:  Twelve JCAHPO Group A credits within one year of submitting your application .
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Original:  You must also earn 12 JCAHPO Group A credits  within one year of submitting your application .
Revised:  You must also earn 12 JCAHPO Group A credits must be earned within one year of submitting your application .
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Original:  In the process of earning certified ophthalmic technician certification, you must maintain certification as a COA.
Revised:  In the process of earning certified ophthalmic technician certification, the applicant must maintain certification as a COA.
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Original:  This application requires the signature of an ophthalmologist to verify that you meet the requirements.
Revised:  This application requires the signature of an ophthalmologist to verify that the applicant meets the requirements.
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Original:  Once you pass both portions , you are now a certified ophthalmic technician.
Revised:  Both portions of the exam must be passed to become a certified ophthalmic technician.
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Original:  There are many programs that offer an Ophthalmic Medical Technician Associate Degree.
Revised:  Many programs offer an Ophthalmic Medical Technician Associate Degree.
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Original:  Some of the coursework for these programs include ocular anatomy and physiology, ophthalmic optics, ocular motility  and diseases of the eye.
Revised:  Some of the coursework for these programs include ocular anatomy and physiology, ophthalmic optics, ocular motility , and diseases of the eye.
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Original:  By going to school , the need to work as an ophthalmic assistant for one year is eliminated .
Revised:  Going to school eliminates the need to work as an ophthalmic assistant for one year is eliminated .
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Original:  By going to school , the need to work as an ophthalmic assistant for one year is eliminated .
Revised:  By going to school , the need to work as an ophthalmic assistant for one year .
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Original: Ophthalmic technicians, also known as ophthalmic medical technicians, certified ophthalmic technicians (COT), and allied ophthalmic personnel , are skilled medical professionals who work alongside ophthalmologists to perform eye exams, diagnose diseases and administer treatments in caring for patients' eyes and eyesight.
Revised: Ophthalmic technicians, also known as ophthalmic medical technicians, certified ophthalmic technicians (COT), or allied ophthalmic personnels , are skilled medical professionals who work alongside ophthalmologists to perform eye exams, diagnose diseases and administer treatments in caring for patients' eyes and eyesight.
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Original:  Many programs offer an Ophthalmic Medical Technician Associate Degree .
Revised:  Many programs offer an Ophthalmic Medical Technician associate degree .
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Original:  In its heyday, the emirate of Say was widely known from Gao to Gaya as a center for Islamic learning and piety.
Revised:  In its heyday, the emirate was widely known from Gao to Gaya as a center for Islamic learning and piety.
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Original:  It is reputed to have had at one time 30,000 inhabitants and to have launched its own trans-Saharan caravans.
Revised:  It is reputed to have launched its own trans-Saharan caravans.
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Original:  Hernâni Marques, a board member of the Swiss chapter of Chaos Computer Club, called for "solidarity" with Kottmann.  ]
Revised:  Hernâni Marques, a board member of the Swiss chapter of Chaos Computer Club, called for "solidarity" with Kottmann. w]
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Original: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999 ), also known as deletescape, is a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
Revised: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999 ), also known as deletescape, was a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
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Original:  Possibility of extradition or trial in Switzerland Kottmann has expressed confidence that she will not be extradited to the United States.
Revised:  Possibility of extradition or trial in Switzerland Kottmann had expressed confidence that she will not be extradited to the United States.
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Original:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed    ] 
Revised:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed . ] 
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Original:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed    ] 
Revised:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed Death ] 
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Original:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed    ] 
Revised:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed Tillie] 
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Original: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999-July 23rd, 2021 ), also known as deletescape, was a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
Revised: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999 ), also known as deletescape, was a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
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Original: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999-July 23rd, 2021 ), also known as deletescape, was a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
Revised: Tillie Kottmann (born August 7, 1999-July 23rd, 2021 ), also known as deletescape, is a Swiss developer and computer hacker.
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Original:  Possibility of extradition or trial in Switzerland Kottmann had expressed confidence that she will not be extradited to the United States.
Revised:  Possibility of extradition or trial in Switzerland Kottmann has expressed confidence that she will not be extradited to the United States.
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Original:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
Revised:  because of the privacy issue it exposed Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
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Original:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
Revised:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
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Original:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
Revised:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
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Original:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " Tillie%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
Revised:  because of the privacy issue it exposed . Death%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% On July 23rd, 2021, multiple close friends and associates reported Tillie was severely injured in a forklift accident at a Lucerne IKEA, with one of her close friends stating " %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% tried to lay underneath a pallet of Blåhaj for a photo when the forklift gave out and slammed down".
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Original:  They had access to the network for 36 hours.
Revised:  The group had access to the network for 36 hours.
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Original:  The group collected about 5 gigabytes of data, including live security camera footage and recordings from more than 150,000 cameras in places like a Tesla factory, a jail in Alabama, a Halifax Health hospital, and residential homes.
Revised:  They collected about 5 gigabytes of data, including live security camera footage and recordings from more than 150,000 cameras in places like a Tesla factory, a jail in Alabama, a Halifax Health hospital, and residential homes.
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Original:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed  
Revised:  Hernâni Marques said that "much of what Tillie Kottmann did would not be punishable in Switzerland," pointing out that much of the data Kottmann leaked was publicly available on the internet and arguing that the hack of Verkada was "legitimate and useful for society" because of the privacy issue it exposed . 
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Original:  She is also known as "deletescape"  and "  tillie crimew" .
Revised:  She is also known as "deletescape" , "tillie crimew", and " tillie crimew" .
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Original:  She is also known as "deletescape"  and "  tillie crimew" .
Revised:  She is also known as "deletescape" and " tillie crimew" 
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Original:  It charges her with counts of computer fraud and abuse, wire fraud, and identity theft.
Revised:  It charged her with counts of computer fraud and abuse, wire fraud, and identity theft.
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Original:  In October 2021, Zeit Magazin reported that while Interpol does not publicize most of its investigations, it was likely that an international  warrant had been issued for Kottmann, which would potentially render her unable to leave Switzerland
Revised:  In October 2021, Zeit Magazin reported that while Interpol does not publicize most of its investigations, it was likely that an international arrest warrant had been issued for Kottmann, which would potentially render her unable to leave Switzerland
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Original:  She is known for having leaked source code and other data from companies such as Intel and Nissan and was part of a group that hacked into Verkada in March 2021 and accessed more than 150,000 cameras.
Revised:  He is known for having leaked source code and other data from companies such as Intel and Nissan and was part of a group that hacked into Verkada in March 2021 and accessed more than 150,000 cameras.
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