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Original:  Honduras had already declared war on the German Empire on July 18, 1918 , after entering to World War I, however by 1930, the Weimar Republic and the Republic of Honduras decide to establish formal diplomatic relations.
Revised:  Honduras had already declared war on the German Empire on July 18, 1918 after entering to World War I, however by 1930, the Weimar Republic and the Republic of Honduras decide to establish formal diplomatic relations.
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Original:  Honduras had already declared war on the German Empire on July 18, 1918 , after entering to World War I, however by 1930, the Weimar Republic and the Republic of Honduras decide to establish formal diplomatic relations.
Revised:  Honduras had already declared war on the German Empire on July 18, 1918 , after entering to World War I, but by 1930, the Weimar Republic and the Republic of Honduras decide to establish formal diplomatic relations.
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Original:  Added to the fact that at that time the country had a considerable German immigrant population distributed throughout the territory.
Revised:  This move was also partly influenced by the fact that at that time the country had a considerable German immigrant population distributed throughout the territory.
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Original:  Added to the fact that at that time the country had a considerable German immigrant population distributed throughout the territory.
Revised:  Added to the fact that at that time , Honduras had a considerable German immigrant population distributed throughout the territory.
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Original:  It is worth mentioning that thanks to the dissemination of scientific racism, in the 1920s a proposal appeared for a project that consisted of creating a new miscegenation in the Central American country , which tried to provoke the racial mixture of Honduran farmers and indigenous people with white European immigrants, mainly from Scandinavian, German, French and English origin.
Revised:  It is worth mentioning that thanks to the dissemination of scientific racism, in the 1920s a proposal appeared for a project that consisted of creating a new miscegenation in the Central American country . The aim of the plan was to encourage the racial mixture of Honduran farmers and indigenous people with white European immigrants, mainly from Scandinavian, German, French and English origin.
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Original:  This would be the most effective means of building a new "race" of Hondurans who, in the words of the architects of this proposal, would be more enterprising, industrious, honest, physically better alike, among other things .2 Therefore, between the 20s and 30s the arrival of more European immigrants to Honduran soil was promoted.
Revised:  This would be the most effective means of building a new "race" of Hondurans who, in the words of the architects of this proposal, would be more enterprising, industrious, honest, physically more alike, among other things .2 Therefore, between the 20s and 30s the arrival of more European immigrants to Honduran soil was promoted.
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Original:  This would be the most effective means of building a new "race" of Hondurans who, in the words of the architects of this proposal, would be more enterprising, industrious, honest, physically better alike, among other things .2 Therefore, between the 20s and 30s the arrival of more European immigrants to Honduran soil was promoted.
Revised:  This would be the most effective means of building a new "race" of Hondurans who, in the words of the architects of this proposal, would be more enterprising, industrious, honest, physically better alike, among other things . To accomplish this, in the 1920s and 1930s the arrival of more European immigrants to Honduran soil was promoted.
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Original:  Diplomatic relations between Honduras and the Axis nations would remain in place until 1941, even though after 1939 relations between Honduras and Germany began to deteriorate after the Third Reich decided to invade  Polish republic together with the Soviet Union and enter the war with the United Kingdom launched airstrikes on London.
Revised:  Diplomatic relations between Honduras and the Axis nations would remain in place until 1941, even though after 1939 relations between Honduras and Germany began to deteriorate after the Third Reich decided to invade the Polish republic together with the Soviet Union and enter the war with the United Kingdom launched airstrikes on London.
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Original:  Diplomatic relations between Honduras and the Axis nations would remain in place until 1941, even though after 1939 relations between Honduras and Germany began to deteriorate after the Third Reich decided to invade  Polish republic together with the Soviet Union and enter the war with the United Kingdom launched airstrikes on London.
Revised:  Diplomatic relations between Honduras and the Axis nations would remain in place until 1941, even though after 1939 relations between Honduras and Germany began to deteriorate after the Third Reich decided to invade Polish republic together with the Soviet Union and enter the war with the United Kingdom by launching airstrikes on London.
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Original:  This country, which was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras , in addition to both already had diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
Revised:  Poland was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras , in addition to both already had diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
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Original:  This country, which was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras , in addition to both already had diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
Revised:  This country, which was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras in addition to both already had diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
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Original:  This country, which was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras , in addition to both already had diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
Revised:  This country, which was one of the main commercial partners of Honduras , in addition to having diplomatic agreements dating from the nineteenth century , this added to the Anglo-Saxon Honduran community that was extensive on the north coast in the Bay Islands.
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Original:  Also in April 1941, the German consul in Teguciglapa, Christian Zinsser, was expelled under a series of controversial events and under reports of having ties to the Gestapo.
Revised:  In April of 1941, the German consul in Teguciglapa, Christian Zinsser, was expelled under a series of controversial events and under reports of having ties to the Gestapo.
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Original:  Finally, the country would end up declaring war on the Axis poweres on December 8, 1941, along with other Central American nations  as Nicaragua, El Salvador, Guatemala, and Costa Rica .
Revised:  Honduras, along with other Central American nations as Nicaragua, El Salvador, Guatemala, and Costa Rica .
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Original:  Finally, the country would end up declaring war on the Axis poweres on December 8, 1941, along with other Central American nations  as Nicaragua, El Salvador, Guatemala, and Costa Rica .
Revised:  Finally, the country would end up declaring war on the Axis poweres on December 8, 1941, along with other Central American nations such as Nicaragua, El Salvador, Guatemala, and Costa Rica .
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Original:  That same day  the Japanese would capture a merchant ship belonging to Honduras in the Republic of China that would be renamed by the japanese as the Ekkai Maru.
Revised:  That same day , the Japanese would capture a merchant ship belonging to Honduras in the Republic of China that would be renamed by the japanese as the Ekkai Maru.
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Original:  That same day  the Japanese would capture a merchant ship belonging to Honduras in the Republic of China that would be renamed by the japanese as the Ekkai Maru.
Revised:  That same day the Japanese would capture a merchant ship belonging to Honduras in the Republic of China that would be renamed by the Japanese as the Ekkai Maru.
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Original:  It was rumored that several Hondurans  were sympathizing with the axcis cause had helped some German submariners in La Moskitia to obtain food and fuel, which raised suspicions of Nazi infiltration in the country.
Revised:  It was rumored that several Hondurans who were sympathizing with the axcis cause had helped some German submariners in La Moskitia to obtain food and fuel, which raised suspicions of Nazi infiltration in the country.
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Original:  It was rumored that several Hondurans  were sympathizing with the axcis cause had helped some German submariners in La Moskitia to obtain food and fuel, which raised suspicions of Nazi infiltration in the country.
Revised:  It was rumored that several Hondurans were sympathizing with the axis cause had helped some German submariners in La Moskitia to obtain food and fuel, which raised suspicions of Nazi infiltration in the country.
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Original:  One of the planes of the Honduran air force that was carrying out patrols on the north coast disappeared on August 22 of the same year, which is said to have been killed by anti-aircraft fire from a submarine, this being the first Honduran casualty . officer during the war .
Revised:  One of the planes of the Honduran air force that was carrying out patrols on the north coast disappeared on August 22 of the same year, which is said to have been killed by anti-aircraft fire from a submarine, this being the first Honduran casualty .
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Original: Background 227x227px|Tiburcio Carias Andino established diplomatic retations with Nazi Gemrnay , The Empre of Japan, and Fascist Italy.
Revised: Background 227x227px|Tiburcio Carias Andino established diplomatic retations with Nazi Germany , The Empre of Japan, and Fascist Italy.
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Original:  In April of 1941, the German consul in Teguciglapa , Christian Zinsser, was expelled under a series of controversial events and under reports of having ties to the Gestapo.
Revised:  In April of 1941, the German consul in Tegucigalpa , Christian Zinsser, was expelled under a series of controversial events and under reports of having ties to the Gestapo.
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Original:  For this reason, this form of contact dermatitis is usually associated only with areas of skin which are left uncovered by clothing, and it can be soundly defeated by avoiding exposure to sunlight.
Revised:  For this reason, this form of contact dermatitis is usually associated only with areas of skin that are left uncovered by clothing, and it can be soundly defeated by avoiding exposure to sunlight.
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Original:  Other common causes of irritant contact dermatitis are harsh , alkaline soaps, detergents, and cleaning products.
Revised:  Other common causes of irritant contact dermatitis are harsh alkaline soaps, detergents, and cleaning products.
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Original:  The rash isn't contagious or life-threatening, but it can be very uncomfortable.
Revised:  The rash is not contagious or life-threatening, but it can be very uncomfortable.
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Original:  is a Filipino De La Salle Brother who was the President of De La Salle University-Manila and the De La Salle University System from 1998–2003,
Revised:  is a Filipino De La Salle Brother who was the President of De La Salle University and the De La Salle University System from 1998–2003,
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Original: Rolando R. Dizon President ofTaguig City University2010 Member of the Consultative Commission on Charter Change2005 Chairman of theCommission on Higher Education2003–2004 President ofDe La Salle University-Manila andthe De La Salle University System1998–2003 Acting Brother Visitor of theDe La Salle Brothers in the Philippines1976–1977 Born: October 31, 1944Bacolod, Negros Occidental Died: April 25, 2012Dasmariñas City, Cavite Rolando Ramos Dizon (October 31, 1944 –
Revised: Rolando R. Dizon President ofTaguig City University2010 Member of the Consultative Commission on Charter Change2005 Chairman of theCommission on Higher Education2003–2004 President ofDe La Salle University andthe De La Salle University System1998–2003 Acting Brother Visitor of theDe La Salle Brothers in the Philippines1976–1977 Born: October 31, 1944Bacolod, Negros Occidental Died: April 25, 2012Dasmariñas City, Cavite Rolando Ramos Dizon (October 31, 1944 –
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Original:  The letters A and B at the top correspond to the line labeled AB on the smaller map.
Revised:  The letters A and B at the top correspond to the line labeled A--B on the smaller map.
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Original:   They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view to help visualize the 3-dimensional structure of the area .  Cross sections are typically constructed by extrapolating observations about a region's geological characteristics.
Revised:  They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view , which can help to visualize the 3-dimensional structure of the area . Cross sections are typically constructed by extrapolating observations about a region's geological characteristics.
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Original:   They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view to help visualize the 3-dimensional structure of the area .  Cross sections are typically constructed by extrapolating observations about a region's geological characteristics.
Revised:  They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view to help visualize the 3-dimensional structure of the area . Cross sections are made by interpreting and extrapolating a broad range of information about a region's geological characteristics.
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Original:  This can involve interpreting a broad range of data from the surface, subsurface, and existing geologic maps.
Revised:  This can include data from the surface, subsurface, and existing geologic maps.
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Original:  Because much of the extrapolated information cannot be directly observed, there is more uncertainty in the final product than in maps of the surface . Reference  
Revised:  Because much of the extrapolated information cannot be directly observed, there is an inherent amount of uncertainty about the accuracy of the final product . Reference 
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Original:  Because much of the extrapolated information cannot be directly observed, there is more uncertainty in the final product than in maps of the surface . Reference  
Revised:  Because much of the extrapolated information cannot be directly observed, there is more uncertainty in the final product than in maps of the surface . References 
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Original:  Note the exaggerated vertical scale]] A Geologic Cross Section is a diagram representing the geologic features intersecting a vertical plane, and is used to illustrate an area’s structure and stratigraphy that would otherwise be hidden underground.
Revised:  Note the exaggerated vertical scale]] A cross section, in geology, is a diagram representing the geologic features intersecting a vertical plane, and is used to illustrate an area’s structure and stratigraphy that would otherwise be hidden underground.
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Original:  They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view, which can help to visualize the 3-dimensional structure of the region and clarify the relationships between features.
Revised:  They often accompany geologic maps, complementing the overhead view with a side-on view, which can help to visualize the three-dimensional structure of the region and clarify the relationships between features.
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Original:  Biography Charles Jacot-Guillarmod  Born in La Chaux-de-Fonds, he lived in Vevey with his parents before he went to Zurich studying to become a surveying engineer at Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, where he graduated in 1890.
Revised:  Charles Jacot-Guillarmod Born in La Chaux-de-Fonds, he lived in Vevey with his parents before he went to Zurich studying to become a surveying engineer at Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, where he graduated in 1890.
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Original:  Charles Jacot-Guillarmod Biography Born in La Chaux-de-Fonds, he lived in Vevey with his parents before he went to Zurich studying to become a surveying engineer at Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, where he graduated in 1890.
Revised:  Biography Born in La Chaux-de-Fonds, he lived in Vevey with his parents before he went to Zurich studying to become a surveying engineer at Swiss Federal Institute of Technology, where he graduated in 1890.
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Original: File:Juan_Vicente_Gómez.jpg|Juan Vicente Gómez, dictador de Venezuela durante la Primera Guerra Mundial . Gómez mantuvo una posición de neutralidad durante el conflicto .]] During World War I, Venezuela maintained a position of neutrality in the four years of the conflict during the dictatorship of Juan Vicente Gómez.
Revised: File:Juan_Vicente_Gómez.jpg|Juan Vicente Gómez, dictator of Venezuela during World War I . Gómez mantuvo una posición de neutralidad durante el conflicto .]] During World War I, Venezuela maintained a position of neutrality in the four years of the conflict during the dictatorship of Juan Vicente Gómez.
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Original: File:Juan_Vicente_Gómez.jpg|Juan Vicente Gómez, dictador de Venezuela durante la Primera Guerra Mundial . Gómez mantuvo una posición de neutralidad durante el conflicto .]] During World War I, Venezuela maintained a position of neutrality in the four years of the conflict during the dictatorship of Juan Vicente Gómez.
Revised: File:Juan_Vicente_Gómez.jpg|Juan Vicente Gómez, dictador de Venezuela durante la Primera Guerra Mundial . Gómez maintained a position of neutrality during the conflict .]] During World War I, Venezuela maintained a position of neutrality in the four years of the conflict during the dictatorship of Juan Vicente Gómez.
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Original:  She is best known for the roles in the television serials such as Abo Mzala, MTV Shuga and Imbewu.
Revised:  She is best known for her roles in the television serials such as Abo Mzala, MTV Shuga and Imbewu.
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Original:  She is best known for the roles in the television serials such as Abo Mzala, MTV Shuga and Imbewu.
Revised:  She is best known for the roles in the television series Abo Mzala, MTV Shuga and Imbewu.
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Original:  Synchrony during communication occurs in a number of brain frequencies and regions, notably alpha and gamma bands, the temporal parietal junction, and inferior frontal regions.
Revised:  Synchrony during communication occurs in a number of brain frequencies and regions, notably alpha and gamma bands, the temporal parietal junction, and inferior frontal areas.
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Original:  Greater synchrony across brains, particularly in the predictive anticipatory responses, indicated better scores on comprehension measures.
Revised:  Greater synchrony across brains, especially in the predictive anticipatory responses, indicated better scores on comprehension measures.
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Original:  Network structure dynamics also play a role in neural synchrony, such that central figures, like conversation leaders, tend to show greater neural synchrony  with other discussion partners than non-leaders . Research shows that neural synchrony is indicative of the similarity in people’s narrative recall and understanding, even for ambiguous narratives.
Revised:  Network structure dynamics also play a role in neural synchrony, such that central figures, like conversation leaders, tend to show greater neural synchrony than non-leaders with other discussion partners than non-leaders . Research shows that neural synchrony is indicative of the similarity in people’s narrative recall and understanding, even for ambiguous narratives.
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Original:  Network structure dynamics also play a role in neural synchrony, such that central figures, like conversation leaders, tend to show greater neural synchrony  with other discussion partners than non-leaders . Research shows that neural synchrony is indicative of the similarity in people’s narrative recall and understanding, even for ambiguous narratives.
Revised:  Network structure dynamics also play a role in neural synchrony, such that central figures, like conversation leaders, tend to show greater neural synchrony with other discussion partners . Research shows that neural synchrony is indicative of the similarity in people’s narrative recall and understanding, even for ambiguous narratives.
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Original:  The connection between neural synchrony and similarity in comprehension reliably occurs across other types of narratives, including listening to stories and free viewing of visual content, and persists throughout different stages of the narrative, such as consuming the story, recalling the story, and listening to another person recall the story.
Revised:  This connection between neural synchrony and similarity in comprehension reliably occurs across other types of narratives, including listening to stories and free viewing of visual content, and persists throughout different stages of the narrative, such as consuming the story, recalling the story, and listening to another person recall the story.
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Original:  A review of hyperscanning research shows that neural synchrony approaches have explored coordination through a diverse range of paradigms, including joint attention, movements, ideas, and tasks , and these findings show synchronization across a variety of brain areas associated with sharing actions and mentalizing, namely  inferior and temporal parietal areas, and alpha band frequencies in particular.
Revised:  A review of hyperscanning research shows that neural synchrony approaches have explored coordination through a range of paradigms, including joint attention, movements, ideas, and tasks , and these findings show synchronization across a variety of brain areas associated with sharing actions and mentalizing, namely inferior and temporal parietal areas, and alpha band frequencies in particular.
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Original:  A review of hyperscanning research shows that neural synchrony approaches have explored coordination through a diverse range of paradigms, including joint attention, movements, ideas, and tasks , and these findings show synchronization across a variety of brain areas associated with sharing actions and mentalizing, namely  inferior and temporal parietal areas, and alpha band frequencies in particular.
Revised:  A review of hyperscanning research shows that neural synchrony approaches have explored coordination through a diverse range of paradigms, including joint attention, movements, ideas, and tasks . These findings also demonstrate synchronization across a variety of brain areas associated with sharing actions and mentalizing, namely inferior and temporal parietal areas, and alpha band frequencies in particular.
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