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Original:  It was published in the original Italian in 1891 by Rene de Mas Latrie, son of French historian Louis de Mas Latrie and has been resently published in an English translation from the Italian by Nicolas Coureas and Peter Edbury.
Revised:  It was published in the original Italian in 1891 by Rene de Mas Latrie, son of French historian Louis de Mas Latrie and has been recently published in an English translation from the Italian by Nicolas Coureas and Peter Edbury.
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Original: The Chronicle of ‘Amadi’ is an Anonymous chronicle written c. 1520 AD in Italian prose with some Venetian traits that detailed the history of Cyprus from the Byzantine Emperor Heraclius to the wedding of the king of Cyprus John II of Lusignan with Helena Palaiologina on 3 February 1441.
Revised: The Chronicle of ‘Amadi’ is an anonymous chronicle written c. 1520 AD in Italian prose with some Venetian traits that detailed the history of Cyprus from the Byzantine Emperor Heraclius to the wedding of the king of Cyprus John II of Lusignan with Helena Palaiologina on 3 February 1441.
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Original: The Chronicle of ‘Amadi’ is an anonymous chronicle written c. 1520 AD in Italian prose with some Venetian traits that detailed the history of Cyprus from the Byzantine Emperor Heraclius to the wedding of the king of Cyprus John II of Lusignan with Helena Palaiologina on 3 February 1441.
Revised: The Chronicle of ‘Amadi’ is an anonymous chronicle written c. 1520 AD in Italian prose with some Venetian traits that detailed the history of Cyprus from the Byzantine Emperor Heraclius to the wedding of King John II with Helena Palaiologina on 3 February 1441.
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Original:  Although fossil fuel burning is the primary driver of present-day climate change, prior to the Industrial Revolution, deforestation and irrigation were the largest sources of human-driven greenhouse gas emissions.
Revised:  Although the burning of fossil fuels is the primary driver of present-day climate change, prior to the Industrial Revolution, deforestation and irrigation were the largest sources of human-driven greenhouse gas emissions.
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Original: ]] Further, local land change and land use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles.
Revised: ]] Further, local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles.
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Original:  The rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands , is a good example of the coupled effect of human activities on landscapes and ecosystems, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes .
Revised:  An example of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands , is a good example of the coupled effect of human activities on landscapes and ecosystems, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes .
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Original:  The rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands , is a good example of the coupled effect of human activities on landscapes and ecosystems, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes .
Revised:  The rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands .
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Original:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Aral Sea fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands.
Revised:  The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Sea's fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands.
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Original:  The use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of land change science.
Revised:  This use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of land change science.
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Original:  Given its close association with the study of climate change, land change science is also at its core sustainability research and the scientific knowledge it produces is used to influence the development of sustainable agriculture, land use practices and policies.
Revised:  Given its close association with the study of climate change, land change science is inherently sustainability research and the scientific knowledge it produces is used to influence the development of sustainable agriculture, land use practices and policies.
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Original:  Although it has ties to social and cultural sciences in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth systems and environmental systems and their effects on land change  independent of human activity.
Revised:  Although it has ties to social and cultural sciences in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systems and their effects on land change independent of human activity.
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Original:  Although it has ties to social and cultural sciences in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth systems and environmental systems and their effects on land change  independent of human activity.
Revised:  Although it has ties to social and cultural sciences in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth systems and environmental systems and their effects on land change , independent of human activity.
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Original:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover, as well as the knowledge that forest cover continues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also look to the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
Revised:  Given the severe ecological consequences that are shown to result from human-driven conversion of forest land cover, as well as the knowledge that forest cover continues to trend downward, in establishing patterns and modeling land use change over time land change scientists must also study the social and economic drivers of deforestation itself.
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Original:  There are several reasons behind this continued migration . Poverty-driven lack of available farmland and high costs may lead to an increase in farming intensity on existing farmland.
Revised:  There are several reasons behind this continued migration : poverty-driven lack of available farmland and high costs may lead to an increase in farming intensity on existing farmland.
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Original:  This then leads to overexploitation of the farmland, which in turn leads to desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and therefore unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
Revised:  This then leads to overexploitation of the farmland, and down the line results in desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and therefore unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
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Original:  File:AralSea1989 2014.jpg|304x304px|Remote sensing images show changes to the extent of the Aral Sea from 1989 (left) to 2014 (right).
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Original:  Although it has ties to social and cultural sciences in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systems and their effects on land change, independent of human activity.
Revised:  Although it has ties to social and cultural studies in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systems and their effects on land change, independent of human activity.
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Original:  Land use and land cover change resulting from deforestation is primarily the effect of large-scale social and economic processes.
Revised:  Land use and land cover change resulting from deforestation is primarily the effect of large-scale socio-economic processes.
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Original:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forest, which contains a wealth of biodiversity , is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
Revised:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity , is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
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Original:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forest, which contains a wealth of biodiversity , is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
Revised:  However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forest, which contains a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
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Original:  Land cover monitoring and assessments File:AralSea1989 2014.jpg|297x297px|Remote sensing images show changes to the extent of the Aral Sea from 1989 (left) to 2014 (right).
Revised:  Land cover monitoring and assessments 
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Original:  File:AralSea1989 2014.jpg|297x297px|Remote sensing images show changes to the extent of the Aral Sea from 1989 (left) to 2014 (right).
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Original:   Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation strategies.
Revised:  . Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation strategies.
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Original:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience  Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
Revised:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience History Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
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Original:   ]] Risk and vulnerability Modeling risk and vulnerability is also one of the many practical applications of land change science.
Revised:  ]]An example how local land change and use can have substantial, compounded impacts on regional climate systems, particularly when human activities heavily disrupt natural cycles of this, as well as how land change science can be used to map and study these changes, is seen through the rapid decline of the Aral Sea, which in turn caused events such as the wind-caused spreading of salt from the dry seabed on adjacent agricultural lands. In 1960, the Aral Sea, located in Central Asia, was the world's fourth largest lake. However, as a result of a water diversion project undertaken by the Soviet Union in order to irrigate arid plains in what is now Kazakhstan, Uzbekistan, and Turkmenistan, the Aral Sea has since lost 85\% of its land cover and 90\% of its volume. The loss of the Aral Sea has had a significant effect on human-environment interactions in the region, including the decimation of the Sea's fishing industry and the aforementioned salinization of agricultural lands. Additionally, scientists have been able to use technology such as NASA's Moderate Resolution Imaging Spectroradiometer (MODIS) to track changes to the Aral Sea and its surrounding climate over time. This use of modeling and satellite imaging to track human-caused land cover change is characteristic of land change science. Risk and vulnerability Modeling risk and vulnerability is also one of the many practical applications of land change science.
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Original:   Given the important role that humans play in land change cover , and in order to understand land change patterns and how they affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
Revised:  Given the important role that humans play in land cover change , and in order to understand land change patterns and how they affect the climate, land change scientists must identify the social and economic drivers of historic land change.
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Original:  Deforestation is often thought of as the product of the development of industrial agriculture , however, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
Revised:  Importantly, there is rarely one direct or underlying cause for deforestation. Rather, deforestation is the result of intertwining systemic forces working simultaneously or sequentially to change land cover. For instance, deforestation is often thought of as the product of the development of industrial agriculture , however, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
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Original:  Deforestation is often thought of as the product of the development of industrial agriculture , however, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
Revised:  Deforestation is often thought of as the product of the development of industrial agriculture . However, in actuality a great deal of deforestation of old-growth forests containing a wealth of biodiversity is the result of small-scale migrant farming.
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Original:   Phenomena such as economic insecurity and rural migration are not necessarily quantitative, but they nevertheless provide valuable information to land change science models that attempt to predict future land cover change and its consequences     
Revised:  Phenomena such as economic insecurity and rural migration are not necessarily quantitative, but they nevertheless provide valuable information to land change science models that attempt to predict future land cover change and its consequences . 
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Original:   Phenomena such as economic insecurity and rural migration are not necessarily quantitative, but they nevertheless provide valuable information to land change science models that attempt to predict future land cover change and its consequences     
Revised:  Phenomena such as economic insecurity and rural migration are not necessarily quantitative, but they nevertheless provide valuable information to land change science models that attempt to predict future land cover change and its consequences Urban heat islands Another way in which urbanization affects land cover and thus land change science is through the urban heat island effect. Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures such as buildings and roads that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas. Heat islands can cause increased energy consumption, which results in higher rates of emission for greenhouse gases. The high temperatures associated with heat islands can also compromise human health, particularly in low-income areas. 
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Original:  The purpose of land change science is to contribute to existing knowledge of climate change regarding the development of sustainable resource management . Land change science addresses land use as a  human-environment system that can be used to understand interconnected environmental and social consequences .
Revised:  The purpose of land change science is to contribute to existing knowledge of climate change and to the development of sustainable resource management . Land change science addresses land use as a human-environment system that can be used to understand interconnected environmental and social consequences .
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Original:  The purpose of land change science is to contribute to existing knowledge of climate change regarding the development of sustainable resource management . Land change science addresses land use as a  human-environment system that can be used to understand interconnected environmental and social consequences .
Revised:  The purpose of land change science is to contribute to existing knowledge of climate change regarding the development of sustainable resource management . Land change science addresses land use as a human-environment system to understand the impacts of interconnected environmental and social consequences .
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Original:  The reshaping of landscapes to serve human needs, such as the clearing of forest for farmland, can have long-term effects on earth systems and exacerbate the causes of climate change.
Revised:  The reshaping of landscapes to serve human needs, such as the deforestation for farmland, can have long-term effects on earth systems and exacerbate the causes of climate change.
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Original:  Currently, almost 50\% of Earth’s non-ice land surface has been transformed by human activities, with approximately 40\% of that land used for agriculture, surpassing natural systems as the principal source of nitrogen emissions. . Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation strategies.
Revised:  Currently, almost 50\% of Earth’s non-ice land surface has been transformed by human activities, with approximately 40\% of that land used for agriculture, surpassing natural systems as the principal source of nitrogen emissions. Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation strategies.
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Original:  Some scholars argue that the discipline of land change science is loosely derived from German concepts of landscape as the total amount of things within a given territory.
Revised:  Some scholars assert that the discipline of land change science is loosely derived from German concepts of landscape as the total amount of things within a given territory.
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Original:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change by helping scientists better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate by examining land cover and land use changes in conjunction with changes in climate over the same period of time  . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
Revised:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change , and through the examination of land cover and land use changes in conjunction with changes in climate over the same period of time . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
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Original:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change by helping scientists better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate by examining land cover and land use changes in conjunction with changes in climate over the same period of time  . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
Revised:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change by helping scientists better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate by examining land cover and land use changes in conjunction with climatic changes over the same period of time . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
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Original:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change by helping scientists better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate by examining land cover and land use changes in conjunction with changes in climate over the same period of time  . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
Revised:  It is meant to supplement the study of climate change by helping scientists better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate by examining land cover and land use changes in conjunction with changes in climate over the same period of time , scientists can better understand how human land use practices contribute to a changing climate . Given its close association with the study of climate change,
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Original:  land change science is inherently sustainability research and the scientific knowledge it produces is used to influence the development of sustainable agriculture,  land use practices and policies.
Revised:  land change science is inherently sustainability research and the scientific knowledge it produces is used to influence the development of sustainable agriculture, and sustainable land use practices and policies.
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Original:  Dimensions Land change science predominantly operates within the international scientific research frameworks from which its fundamental questions were developed.
Revised:  Dimensions Land change science mainly operates within the international scientific research frameworks from which its fundamental questions were developed.
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Original:  Although it has ties to social and cultural studies in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systemsand their effects on land change, independent of human activity.
Revised:  Although the field has ties to social and cultural studies in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systemsand their effects on land change, independent of human activity.
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Original:  Although it has ties to social and cultural studies in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on the structure and function of earth and environmental systemsand their effects on land change, independent of human activity.
Revised:  Although it has ties to social and cultural studies in its understanding of land and land change as a human-environment system, land change science also focuses on ecosystems and earth systems' structure, function, and effects on land change, independent of human activity.
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Original:  There are many different dimensions of land change science , ranging from quantifying the ecological effects of land cover change  to understanding the socio-environmental drivers for land-use decisions at an institutional level.
Revised:  Land change science encompasses a broad scope of dimensions , ranging from quantifying the ecological effects of land cover change to understanding the socio-environmental drivers for land-use decisions at an institutional level.
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