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Original:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for  monitoring the time the medication was taken, and symptoms or Quality of Life data were recorded  . Patient diaries are  way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
Revised:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for automatically monitoring the time the medication was taken, and symptoms or Quality of Life data were recorded . Patient diaries are way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
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Original:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for  monitoring the time the medication was taken, and symptoms or Quality of Life data were recorded  . Patient diaries are  way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
Revised:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for monitoring the time the entry was made. . Patient diaries are way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
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Original:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for  monitoring the time the medication was taken, and symptoms or Quality of Life data were recorded  . Patient diaries are  way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
Revised:  An Electronic Patient Diary registers the diary in a storage device and allows for monitoring the time the medication was taken, and symptoms or Quality of Life data were recorded . Patient diaries are also way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
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Original: With the wide spread usage of mobile technologies,  Mobile Patient Diary system has become a part of electronic patient diary , ensuring real time data capture with clean and consistent patient information .
Revised: With the wide spread usage of mobile technologies, the Mobile Patient Diary system has become a part of electronic patient diary , ensuring real time data capture with clean and consistent patient information .
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Original: With the wide spread usage of mobile technologies,  Mobile Patient Diary system has become a part of electronic patient diary , ensuring real time data capture with clean and consistent patient information .
Revised: With the wide spread usage of mobile technologies, Mobile Patient Diary system has become a part of electronic patient diaries , ensuring real time data capture with clean and consistent patient information .
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Original:  It  is a mobile based patient reported outcome  which guides the patients in taking the right dosage at the right time, adhering to the trial protocol, reporting actual out comes on the schedule time frames and diligently going for site visits .
Revised:  It is a mobile based patient reported outcome capturing system which guides the patients in taking the right dosage at the right time, adhering to the trial protocol, reporting actual out comes on the schedule time frames and diligently going for site visits .
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Original: With the wide spread usage of mobile technologies, the Mobile Patient Diary system has become a part of electronic patient diaries , ensuring real time data capture with clean and consistent patient information, operating within a secure and compliant environment.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Patient diaries are also way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Patient diaries are also way to find out if a patient takes the medication according to the treatment schedule, which is an important problem during clinical trials and the treatment of degenerative diseases with relatively few symptoms.
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Original: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets,  Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn in 1917.
Revised: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn in 1917.
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Original: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets,  Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn in 1917.
Revised: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn .
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Original: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
Revised: Schoenberg, p. 28 In 1917, with the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
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Original: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
Revised: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, Yale opened the Harvard Inn bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
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Original: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island known as the Harvard Inn . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
Revised: Schoenberg, p. 28 With the proceeds from these rackets, in 1917 Yale opened a bar on Seaside Walk in Coney Island . Hoping to capitalize on the collegiate name of his bar, he began using the name Yale.
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Original:  January 22, 1893 – July 1, 1928), known as Frankie Yale or Frankie Uale, was an Italian-American gangster based in Brooklyn and second employer of Al Capone.
Revised:  January 22, 1893 – July 1, 1928), known as Frankie Yale or Frankie Uale, was an Italian-born American gangster based in Brooklyn and second employer of Al Capone.
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Original: Personal life Soon after the Harvard Inn opened, Yale married Maria Delapia, with whom he would have two daughters, Rosa and Isabella.
Revised: Personal life Soon after the Harvard Inn opened, Yale married Maria Delapia, with whom he had two daughters, Rosa and Isabella.
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Original:  It is characteristic of terrestrial planets, such as Mercury, Venus and Mars.
Revised:  It is characteristic of terrestrial planets, such as Venus and Mars.
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Original:  Secondary atmospheres are relatively thin when compared to primary atmospheres like the one found on Jupiter. 
Revised:  Secondary atmospheres are relatively thin when compared to primary atmospheres like the one found on Jupiter. References
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Original:  It is of characteristic of terrestrial planets, which includes Earth, and the other terrestrial planets in the Solar System: Mercury, Venus and Mars.
Revised:  It is characteristic of terrestrial planets, which includes Earth, and the other terrestrial planets in the Solar System: Mercury, Venus and Mars.
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Original:  It is characteristic of terrestrial planets, which includes Earth and the other terrestrial planets in the Solar System: Mercury, Venus, and Mars.
Revised:  It is characteristic of terrestrial planets, which includes the other terrestrial planets in the Solar System: Mercury, Venus, and Mars.
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Original:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere - for example by life - can produce a tertiary atmosphere like Earth.
Revised:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere , for example by life - can produce a tertiary atmosphere like Earth.
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Original:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere - for example by life - can produce a tertiary atmosphere like Earth.
Revised:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere - for example by the processes of biological life, can produce a tertiary atmosphere like Earth.
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Original:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere - for example by life - can produce a tertiary atmosphere like Earth.
Revised:  Further processing of a secondary atmosphere - for example by life - can produce a tertiary atmosphere , such as that of Earth.
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Original:  The orienting system involves the Superior Colliculus , magno cells in the Pulvimar(Thalamus ) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
Revised:  The orienting system involves the superior colliculus , magno cells in the Pulvimar(Thalamus ) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
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Original:  The orienting system involves the Superior Colliculus , magno cells in the Pulvimar(Thalamus ) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
Revised:  The orienting system involves the Superior Colliculus , magno cells in the pulvinar (thalamus ) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
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Original:  This pathway projects first to the auperior colliculus and then to the pulvinar of the thalamus before projecting mainly to the posteria parietal area, but here are also projections that fan out to points along the V1 and V4 pathway.
Revised:  This pathway projects first to the auperior colliculus and then to the pulvinar of the thalamus before projecting mainly to the posteria parietal area, but there are also projections that fan out to points along the V1 and V4 pathway.
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Original:  The superifical or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analyses for location of hte a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
Revised:  The superifical or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analysed for location of hte a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
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Original:  The superifical or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analyses for location of hte a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
Revised:  The superifical or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analyses for location of the a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
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Original:  This movement sensitive system in important.
Revised:  This movement-sensitive system is important.
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Original:  Source: David Andrews, ' From theory to practice  
Revised:  References David Andrews, ' From theory to practice 
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Original:  Source: David Andrews, ' From theory to practice  
Revised:  Source: David Andrews, " From theory to practice 
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Original:  Source: David Andrews, ' From theory to practice  
Revised:  Source: David Andrews, ' From theory to practice ." 
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Original:  This pathway projects first to the auperior colliculus and then to the pulvinar of the thalamus before projecting mainly to the posteria parietal area, but there are also projections that fan out to points along the V1 and V4 pathway.
Revised:  This pathway projects first to the superior colliculus and then to the pulvinar of the thalamus before projecting mainly to the posteria parietal area, but there are also projections that fan out to points along the V1 and V4 pathway.
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Original:  The superifical or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analysed for location of the a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
Revised:  The superficial or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analysed for location of the a target, which is passed on to the cortex.
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Original:  References David Andrews, "From theory to practice. "
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Original:  The Cree Government decides what are the priorities .
Revised:  The Cree Government decides what the priorities are .
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Original:  The Paix des Braves brought big controversy but also many economic and social benefits to the Crees.
Revised:  The Paix des Braves brought great controversy, but also many economic and social benefits to the Crees.
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Original:  The approval was over 65\%  with a majority voter turnout.
Revised:  The approval was over 65\% , with a majority voter turnout.
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Original:  The Paix des Braves now in its sixth year provides 77 million dollars per year to the Cree Communities from the Quebec Government.
Revised:  The Paix des Braves now provides 77 million dollars per year to the Cree Communities from the Quebec Government.
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Original:  These payments from the Quebec Government will be replaced with payments from a Cree Heritage fund set up by the Cree by investing 15\% of the present payments from  Quebec Government.
Revised:  These payments from the Quebec Government will be replaced with payments from a Cree Heritage fund set up by the Cree by investing 15\% of the present payments from the Quebec Government.
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Original: Chief Moses was instrumental in obtaining formal recognition for the James Bay Crees as a Non-Governmental Organization in consultative status to the United Nations.
Revised:  Moses was instrumental in obtaining formal recognition for the James Bay Crees as a Non-Governmental Organization in consultative status to the United Nations.
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Original:  As a matter of fact, he currently serves as the Ambassador of the Council at the UN.
Revised:  He currently serves as the Ambassador of the Council at the UN.
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Original: Ted Moses was born in Eastmain, in the James Bay region of Quebec.
Revised:  Moses was born in Eastmain, in the James Bay region of Quebec.
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Original:  He is active on the international stage, speaking at numerous events about aboriginals and tolerance.
Revised:  Moses is active on the international stage, speaking at numerous events about aboriginals and tolerance.
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Original:  Hilliard was a pioneer in the rediscovery of the African roots of modern civilization and a leading proponent of an Afrocentric school curriculum that emphasized the historical achievements of blacks to promote students' self-esteem.
Revised:  Hilliard was a pioneer in the fabrication of the African roots of modern civilization and a leading proponent of an Afrocentric school curriculum that emphasized the historical achievements of blacks to promote students' self-esteem.
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Original:  “Dr. Asa Grant Hilliard, III,” Africa Within, URL (accessed November 14, 2007).
Revised:  “Dr. Asa 
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Original:  “Dr. Asa G. Hilliard, III Biography,” College of Education, Georgia State University, URL (accessed November 15, 2007).
Revised:  G. Hilliard, III Biography,” College of Education, Georgia State University, URL (accessed November 15, 2007).
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Original:  “Dr. Asa Grant Hilliard, III, Pan-Africanist, Educator, Historian and Psychologist, Has Passed from This Life,” Asa G. Hilliard , URL (accessed November 15, 2007).
Revised:  “Dr. Asa Grant Hilliard, III, Pan-Africanist, Educator, Historian and Psychologist, Has Passed from This Life,” Asa G. Hilliard 
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Original:  “Maintaining the Faith in Teachers' Ability to Grow: An Interview with Asa Hilliard,” Africa Within , URL (accessed November 15, 2007).
Revised:  , URL (accessed November 15, 2007).
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Original: African-American psychologists Category:American social scientists Category:American psychologists Category:American social sciences writers Category:Historians of Africa Category:American pan-Africanists Category:Infectious disease deaths in Egypt Category:Deaths from malaria Category:Afrocentrists Category:Academics from Texas Category:American academic administrators Category:African-American educators Category:20th-century psychologists Category:20th-century African-American  peop
Revised: African-American psychologists Category:American social scientists Category:American psychologists Category:American social sciences writers Category:Historians of Africa Category:American pan-Africanists Category:Infectious disease deaths in Egypt Category:Deaths from malaria Category:Afrocentrists Category:Academics from Texas Category:American academic administrators Category:African-American educators Category:20th-century psychologists Category:20th-century African-American people Category:21st-century African-American peop
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Original:  This led to the development of an additional internal "push layer" made of material (a swellable polymer) that would expand as it absorbed water, which then pushed the drug layer (which incorporates a viscous polymer for suspension of poorly soluble drugs) out of the exit hole at a controlled rate.
Revised:  This led to the development of an additional internal "push layer" comprised of material (a swellable polymer) that would expand as it absorbed water, which then pushed the drug layer (which incorporates a viscous polymer for suspension of poorly soluble drugs) out of the exit hole at a controlled rate.
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Original: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised:  Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised: OROS (Osmotic %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% System ) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised: OROS (Osmotic Controlled%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Release Oral Delivery%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Osmotic Controlled-release Oral Delivery System is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original:  OROS is a trademarked name owned by ALZA Corporation, which  pioneered the use of osmotic pumps for oral drug delivery.
Revised:  OROS ® is a tradmark owned by ALZA Corporation, which pioneered the use of osmotic pumps for oral drug delivery.
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Original: Osmotic Controlled-release Oral Delivery System is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
Revised: The osmotic-controlled release oral delivery system (OROS) is an advanced controlled release oral drug delivery system in the form of a rigid tablet with a semi-permeable outer membrane and one or more small laser drilled holes in it.
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Original:  OROS ® is a tradmark owned by ALZA Corporation, which derives from osmotic controlled-release oral delivery system.
Revised:  OROS is a trademarked name owned by ALZA Corporation, which derives from osmotic controlled-release oral delivery system.
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Original:  This led to the development of an additional internal "push layer" comprised of material (a swellable polymer) that would expand as it absorbed water, which then pushed the drug layer (which incorporates a viscous polymer for suspension of poorly soluble drugs) out of the exit hole at a controlled rate.
Revised:  This led to the development of an additional internal "push layer" composed of material (a swellable polymer) that would expand as it absorbed water, which then pushed the drug layer (which incorporates a viscous polymer for suspension of poorly soluble drugs) out of the exit hole at a controlled rate.
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Original:  As the tablet passes through the body, water is absorbed through the semipermeable membrane via osmosis, and the resulting osmotic pressure is used to push the active drug through the opening(s) in the tablet . OROS is a trademarked name owned by ALZA Corporation, which pioneered the use of osmotic pumps for oral drug delivery.
Revised:  As the tablet passes through the body, water is absorbed through the semipermeable membrane via osmosis, and the resulting osmotic pressure is used to push the active drug through the opening(s) in the gastrointestinal tract . OROS is a trademarked name owned by ALZA Corporation, which pioneered the use of osmotic pumps for oral drug delivery.
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