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Original: Peter Annin, "Slumbering Around", Newsweek, November 4, 1996 . Emily Wax, "Coed All-Nighters Put Trust on Line;
Revised: Peter Annin, "Slumbering Around", Newsweek, November 4, 1996. Emily Wax, "Coed All-Nighters Put Trust on Line;
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Original: The following is a list of rulers of the Akan autonomous paramountcy of Akuapem Anafo (Akuapem South) in Ghana :   TenureIncumbentNotesAkuapemhene (Rulers)Asona Dynasty<small>26 March 1994 to presentNana Gyan Kwasi III,Gilbert, Michelle: 'No Condition Is Permanent': Ethnic Construction and the Use of History in Akuapem.
Revised:  Akuapem Anafo (Akuapem South) in Ghana : TenureIncumbentNotesAkuapemhene (Rulers)Asona Dynasty<small>26 March 1994 to presentNana Gyan Kwasi III,Gilbert, Michelle: 'No Condition Is Permanent': Ethnic Construction and the Use of History in Akuapem.
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Original: The following is a list of rulers of the Akan autonomous paramountcy of Akuapem Anafo (Akuapem South) in Ghana :   TenureIncumbentNotesAkuapemhene (Rulers)Asona Dynasty<small>26 March 1994 to presentNana Gyan Kwasi III,Gilbert, Michelle: 'No Condition Is Permanent': Ethnic Construction and the Use of History in Akuapem.
Revised: The following is a list of rulers of the Akan autonomous paramountcy of Akuapem Anafo (Akuapem South) in Ghana : List of rulers of the Akuapem Anafo TenureIncumbentNotesAkuapemhene (Rulers)Asona Dynasty<small>26 March 1994 to presentNana Gyan Kwasi III,Gilbert, Michelle: 'No Condition Is Permanent': Ethnic Construction and the Use of History in Akuapem.
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Original:  Africa: Journal of the International African Institute, Vol. 67, No. 4 (1997), pp. 501-533 (snippet view at findarticles.com) <small>Akuapemhene<small   
Revised:  Africa: Journal of the International African Institute, Vol. 67, No. 4 (1997), pp. 501-533 (snippet view at findarticles.com) <small>Akuapemhene<small > 
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Original:  The district is a suburb of the city .
Revised:  The district is a suburb of the capital, Bissau .
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Original:  It was staged against the murder of former Navy chief, Mohamed Lamine Sanha.
Revised:  It was staged against the murder of former Navy Chief of Staff Mohamed Lamine Sanha.
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Original: Protesters shot in Guinea-Bissau Al-Jazeera English, 7 January 2007 References
Revised: Protesters shot in Guinea-Bissau Al-Jazeera English, 7 January 2007 
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Original:  Studies on vigilance have been conducted on various animals including the scaly-breasted munia .
Revised:  Studies on vigilance have been conducted on various animals including the scaly-breasted munia 
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Original:  Cocaine is also used to increase alertness , as is caffeine .
Revised:  Caffeineis also used to increase alertness , as is caffeine .
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Original:  Cocaine is also used to increase alertness , as is caffeine .
Revised:  Cocaine is also used to increase alertness .
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Original:  The hexaxial reference system is  diagram based on the first six leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram.
Revised:  The hexaxial reference system is a diagram based on the first six leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram.
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Original:   To use the hexaxial reference system, locate the most isoelectric (or equiphasic) lead (I, II, III, aVR, aVL, or aVF) on a diagnostic quality ECG with proper lead placement.
Revised:  An alternative use is to locate the most isoelectric (or equiphasic) lead (I, II, III, aVR, aVL, or aVF) on a diagnostic quality ECG with proper lead placement.
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Original:  The most practical way of using this is by arranging extremity leads according to the Cabrera system, reversing polarity of lead aVL and presenting ECG complexes in the order (aVL, I, -aVR, II, aVF, III).
Revised:  The most practical way of using this is by arranging extremity leads according to the Cabrera system, reversing polarity of lead aVR and presenting ECG complexes in the order (aVL, I, -aVR, II, aVF, III).
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Original:  The hexaxial reference system, also known as the Cabrera system  is a convention to present the extremity leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram, that provides an illustrative logical sequence that helps interpretation of the ECG, especially to determine the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
Revised:  The hexaxial reference system, also known as the Cabrera system , is a convention to present the extremity leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram, that provides an illustrative logical sequence that helps interpretation of the ECG, especially to determine the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
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Original:  Cabrera circle (captions in German) Diagram showing how the polarity of the QRS complex in leads I, II, and III can be used to estimate the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
Revised:  Cabrera circle Diagram showing how the polarity of the QRS complex in leads I, II, and III can be used to estimate the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
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Original:  The hexaxial reference system, also known as the Cabrera system, is a convention to present the extremity leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram, that provides an illustrative logical sequence that helps interpretation of the ECG, especially to determine the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
Revised:  The hexaxial reference system, better known as the Cabrera system, is a convention to present the extremity leads of the 12 lead electrocardiogram, that provides an illustrative logical sequence that helps interpretation of the ECG, especially to determine the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
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Original:  Cabrera circle Diagram showing how the polarity of the QRS complex in leads I, II, and III can be used to estimate the heart's electrical axis in the frontal plane.
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Original: Ivalid ski jumping world record The longest ski jump in history.
Revised: Invalid ski jumping world record The longest ski jump in history.
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Original:  Aliu Mahama, then Vice President of Ghana, vehemently refused to comment  the matter.
Revised:  Aliu Mahama, then Vice President of Ghana, vehemently refused to comment on the matter.
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Original:  his first son and caretaker overlord of Dagbon.
Revised:  his first son and caretaker king of Dagbon.
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Original: Yaa Naa Yakubu Andani II (1945–2002) was the King of Dagboŋ , the traditional kingdom of the Dagomba people in northern Ghana, from 31 May 1974 until his assassination on 27 March 2002.
Revised: Yaa Naa Yakubu Andani II (1945–2002) was the King of Dagbon , the traditional kingdom of the Dagomba people in northern Ghana, from 31 May 1974 until his assassination on 27 March 2002.
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Original: Na Gbewa is regarded as the founder of Dagbon . Dagomba are one of the ethnic groups with a sophisticated oral tradition woven around drums and other musical instruments.
Revised: Na Gbewaa is regarded as the founder of Dagbon . Dagomba are one of the ethnic groups with a sophisticated oral tradition woven around drums and other musical instruments.
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Original: Na Gbewaa is regarded as the founder of Dagboŋ.
Revised: Naa Gbewaa is regarded as the founder of Dagboŋ.
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Original:  According to oral tradition, the political history of Dagbon has its origin in the life story of a legend called Tohazie (translated as "red hunter").
Revised:  According to oral tradition, the political history of Dagboŋ has its origin in the life story of a legend called Tohazie (translated as "red hunter").
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Original:  According to oral tradition, the political history of Dagbon has its origin in the life story of a legend called Tohazie (translated as "red hunter").
Revised:  According to oral tradition, the political history of Dagbon has its origin in the life story of a legend called Tohaʒie (translated as "red hunter").
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Original:  Although the Mossi-Dagomba states have the same grandfather (Na Gbewa), the Dagomba are traditionally regarded as "senior" to the Mossi states of Ouagadougou, Yatenga and Fada N' Gourma .
Revised:  Although the Mossi-Dagomba states have the same grandfather (Na Gbewa), the Dagomba are traditionally regarded as "senior" to the Mossi states of Ouagadougou, Yatenga and Fada N' Gurma .
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Original:  There are around 1to 2 million speakers of Dagbani.
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Original:  In Dagbon, chiefs traditionally sit on a stack of skins 
Revised:  In Dagbon, chiefs traditionally sit on a stack of skins .
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Original:  According to Dr Illiasu (1971) in his work The Origins of the Mossi-Dagomba states, the second period of the Mossi-Dagomba success came to an end with the restoration of Imperial Songhai power towards the close of the 15th century.
Revised:  According to Illiasu (1971) in his work The Origins of the Mossi-Dagomba states, the second period of the Mossi-Dagomba success came to an end with the restoration of Imperial Songhai power towards the close of the 15th century.
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Original:  The four interdependent links in the chain of survival are early access, early CPR, early defibrillation, and early advanced cardiac life support. 
Revised:  The four interdependent links in the chain of survival are early access, early CPR, early defibrillation, and early advanced cardiac life support. that
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Original:  Early access  Ideally, someone must recognize an impending cardiac arrest or otherwise witness the cardiac arrest and activate the EMS system as early as possible with an immediate call to the emergency services.
Revised:  Early access to emergency medical care Ideally, someone must recognize an impending cardiac arrest or otherwise witness the cardiac arrest and activate the EMS system as early as possible with an immediate call to the emergency services.
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Original:  In communities with survival rates > 20\%, a minimum of two of the rescuers are trained to the advanced level     
Revised:  In communities with survival rates > 20\%, a minimum of two of the rescuers are trained to the advanced level . 
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Original:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, used the chain of survival as a slogan for the 1988 Conference on Citizen CPR, which she described in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and  promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
Revised:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, developed the chain of survival as a slogan for the 1988 Conference on Citizen CPR, which she described in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
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Original:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, used the chain of survival as a slogan for the 1988 Conference on Citizen CPR, which she described in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and  promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
Revised:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, used the chain of survival metaphor and first described it in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
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Original:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, used the chain of survival as a slogan for the 1988 Conference on Citizen CPR, which she described in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and  promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
Revised:  Mary M. Newman, co-founder and President/CEO of the Sudden Cardiac Arrest (SCA) Foundation and previous Executive Director of the National Center for Early Defibrillation at the University of Pittsburgh, used the chain of survival as a slogan for the 1988 Conference on Citizen CPR, which she described in an article she wrote for the Journal of Emergency Medical Services in 1989, and further promoted in an editorial she wrote for the first issue of Currents in Emergency Cardiac Care in 1990.
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Original: Jonathan Fiifii'i was born in 1921 (died october 1989) , as a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
Revised: Jonathan Fiifii'i was born in 1921 (died October 1989) , as a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
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Original: Jonathan Fiifii'i was born in 1921 (died october 1989) , as a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
Revised: Jonathan Fiifii'i was born in 1921 (died october 1989) was a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
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Original: Jonathan Fiifii'i was born in 1921 (died October 1989) was a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
Revised: Jonathan Fiifii'i (1921 - October 1989) was a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
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Original: Jonathan Fiifii'i (1921 - October 1989) was a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
Revised: Jonathan Fiifii'i (1921 – October 1989) was a Kwaio at Ane'emae near Oloburi, Malaita, Solomon Islands.
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Original:   He was a founder member of Maasina Ruru in 1945, the independence movement which he started with Nori and Aliki Nono'oohimae whom he met while serving in the Solomon Islands Labour Corps during World War 2. After being arrested and held by the British administration as a political prisoner he was released he continued to be involved in politics .
Revised:  Biography He was a founder member of Maasina Ruru in 1945, the independence movement which he started with Nori and Aliki Nono'oohimae whom he met while serving in the Solomon Islands Labour Corps during World War 2. After being arrested and held by the British administration as a political prisoner he was released he continued to be involved in politics .
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Original:   He was a founder member of Maasina Ruru in 1945, the independence movement which he started with Nori and Aliki Nono'oohimae whom he met while serving in the Solomon Islands Labour Corps during World War 2. After being arrested and held by the British administration as a political prisoner he was released he continued to be involved in politics .
Revised:  He was a founder member of Maasina Ruru in 1945, the independence movement which he started with Nori and Aliki Nono'oohimae whom he met while serving in the Solomon Islands Labour Corps during World War II. After being arrested and held by the British administration as a political prisoner he was released he continued to be involved in politics .
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Original:  Sources From pig-theft to parliament: My life between two worlds Translated and edited by Roger Keesing.
Revised:  References From pig-theft to parliament: My life between two worlds Translated and edited by Roger Keesing.
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Original:  Retrieved 2011-10-25.
Revised:  Retrieved October 25, 2011.
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Original:  AllMusic. Retrieved 2011-10-25.
Revised:  AllMusic. Retrieved October 25, 2011.
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Original:  Deicide has been banned from playing in several venues (such as Valparaiso, Chile over a promotional poster featuring Jesus Christ with a bullet hole in his forehead) and with various festivals such as Hellfest, after several graves had been spray-painted with "When Satan Rules His World", a reference to a song from Deicide's 1995 album Once Upon the Cross.
Revised:  Deicide has been banned from playing in several venues (such as Valparaiso, Chile over a promotional poster featuring Jesus Christ with a bullet hole in his forehead) and with various festivals such as Hellfest, after several graves had been spray-painted with "When Satan Rules His World", a reference to a song from Deicide's 1995 album Once upon the Cross.
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Original:  Once Upon the Cross(1995)
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Original:  In the Minds of Evil(2013) Overtures of Blasphemy(2018)Bass/vocalsGlen BentonGuitarsEric HoffmanRalph SantollaKevin QuirionBrian HoffmanJack OwenMark EnglishDrumsSteve Asheim Deicide (1990) Legion (1992) Once Upon the Cross (1995) Serpents of the Light (1997) Insineratehymn (2000) In Torment in Hell (2001) Scars of the Crucifix (2004) The Stench of Redemption (2006) Till Death Do Us Part (2008) To Hell with God (2011) In the Minds of Evil (2013) Overtures of Blasphemy (2018)
Revised:  In the Minds of Evil(2013) Overtures of Blasphemy(2018)Bass/vocalsGlen BentonGuitarsEric HoffmanRalph SantollaKevin QuirionBrian HoffmanJack OwenMark EnglishDrumsSteve Asheim Deicide (1990) Legion (1992) Once upon the Cross (1995) Serpents of the Light (1997) Insineratehymn (2000) In Torment in Hell (2001) Scars of the Crucifix (2004) The Stench of Redemption (2006) Till Death Do Us Part (2008) To Hell with God (2011) In the Minds of Evil (2013) Overtures of Blasphemy (2018)
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Original:  Entitled Till Death Do Us Part, the follow-up to The Stench of Redemption, promised to be the band's "most savage and aggressive [offering] to date , "  according to a press release.
Revised:  Entitled Till Death Do Us Part, the follow-up to The Stench of Redemption, promised to be the band's "most savage and aggressive [offering] to date " according to a press release.
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