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Original: Tooth Fairies ice sculpture  The Saint Paul Winter Carnival  suffered a brief thaw on Monday, with Monday's 41°F afternoon temperature plummeting below zero twenty four hours later.
Revised: Tooth Fairies ice sculpture . The Saint Paul Winter Carnival suffered a brief thaw on Monday, with Monday's 41°F afternoon temperature plummeting below zero twenty four hours later.
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Original: Tooth Fairies ice sculpture  The Saint Paul Winter Carnival  suffered a brief thaw on Monday, with Monday's 41°F afternoon temperature plummeting below zero twenty four hours later.
Revised: Tooth Fairies ice sculpture The Saint Paul Winter Carnival in Saint Paul, Minnesota suffered a brief thaw on Monday, with Monday's 41°F afternoon temperature plummeting below zero twenty four hours later.
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Original:  ]] The brief warmth made for comfortable skating on the Wells Fargo Winterskate rink next to Landmark Center in downtown Saint Paul , Minnesota .
Revised:  ]] The brief warmth made for comfortable skating on the Wells Fargo Winterskate rink next to Landmark Center in downtown Saint Paul .
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Original:  He is one of 14 players to have won the Cy Young more than once, in 2004 and 2006, and he was a MLB All-Star in 2005, 2006, and 2007 
Revised:  He is one of 14 players to have won the Cy Young more than once, in 2004 and 2006, and he was a MLB All-Star in 2005, 2006, and 2007. 
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Original:  They have both pledged to me and more importantly through me to America, that they will make ending poverty central to their campaign for the presidency," he continued  
Revised:  They have both pledged to me and more importantly through me to America, that they will make ending poverty central to their campaign for the presidency," he continued . 
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Original:  They have both pledged to me and more importantly through me to America, that they will make ending poverty central to their campaign for the presidency," he continued .
Revised:  They have both pledged to me and more importantly through me to America, that they will make ending poverty central to their campaign for the presidency," he continued 
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Original:  According to an aide, Edwards has no current plans to endorse either Obama or Clinton, but may do so in the future
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Original:  There are at least two victims of forced labour per 1,000 people 
Revised:  There are at least two victims of forced labor for every 1,000 people 
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Original:  There are at least two victims of forced labour per 1,000 people 
Revised:  There are at least two victims of forced labour per 1,000 people worldwide
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Original:  An estimated 2.4 million of them are victims of slave trafficking, and their combined labour generates profits of over 32 billion dollars annually.
Revised:  An estimated 2.4 million of them are victims of slave trafficking, and their combined labor generates profits of over 32 billion dollars annually.
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Original:  There are at least two victims of forced labor for every 1,000 people worldwide  
Revised:  There are at least two victims of forced labor for every 1,000 people worldwide . 
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Original: Category:WorldCategory:Politics and conflictsCategory:Economy and business Background 50px|none|Wikipedia Wikipedia, Wikinews' sibling project, has in-depth background articles on: slavery trafficking in human beings slave trade international labour standards The International Labour Organization released a major report Wednesday, finding that currently more than 12.3 million people are enslaved worldwide.
Revised:  Background 50px|none|Wikipedia Wikipedia, Wikinews' sibling project, has in-depth background articles on: slavery trafficking in human beings slave trade international labour standards The International Labour Organization released a major report Wednesday, finding that currently more than 12.3 million people are enslaved worldwide.
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Original:  The report breaks down slaves by continent: 9.5 million forced laborers are in Asia, which is the region with the highest number ;
Revised:  The report breaks down slaves by continent: 9.5 million forced laborers are in Asia, which is the region with the highest number 
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Original:  1.3 million in Latin America and the Caribbean ;
Revised:  1.3 million in Latin America and the Caribbean 
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Original:  660,000 in sub-Saharan Africa ;
Revised:  660,000 in sub-Saharan Africa 
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Original:  260,000 in the Middle East and North Africa ;
Revised:  260,000 in the Middle East and North Africa 
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Original:  It also reveals that slavery is present in all regions and in all types of economies.
Revised:  The study also reveals that slavery is present in all regions and in all types of economies.
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Original: Background 50px|none|Wikipedia Wikipedia, Wikinews' sibling project, has in-depth background articles on: slavery trafficking in human beings slave trade international labour standards The International Labour Organization  released a major report Wednesday, finding that currently more than 12.3 million people are enslaved worldwide.
Revised: Background 50px|none|Wikipedia Wikipedia, Wikinews' sibling project, has in-depth background articles on: slavery trafficking in human beings slave trade international labour standards The International Labour Organization (ILO) released a major report Wednesday, finding that currently more than 12.3 million people are enslaved worldwide.
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Original:  Somavia also added, " forced  labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
Revised:  " forced labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
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Original:  Somavia also added, " forced  labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
Revised:  Somavia also added, " F labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
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Original:  Somavia also added, " forced  labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
Revised:  Somavia also added, " forced labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour , " 
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Original:  Somavia also added, " forced  labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " 
Revised:  Somavia also added, " forced labor represents the underside of globalization and denies people their basic rights and dignity... to achieve a fair globalization and decent work for all, it is imperative to eradicate forced labour . " added Somavia.
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Original: The opposition party of Zimbabwe, the Movement for Democratic Change (MDC) has announced that it wishes for constitutional reform to take place before the planned March  .
Revised: The opposition party of Zimbabwe, the Movement for Democratic Change (MDC) has announced that it wishes for constitutional reform to take place before the planned March election .
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Original:  " He also said that "As a party, we [the MDC] remain faithful to the dialogue process and the electoral process but a lot of sticking issues should be resolved as a matter of urgency.  
Revised:  " He also said that "As a party, we [the MDC] remain faithful to the dialogue process and the electoral process but a lot of sticking issues should be resolved as a matter of urgency. ” 
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Original: The   MDC has not stated that it will  definitely boycott the elections and it has encouraged people who are eligible to register to vote.
Revised: The The MDC has not stated that it will definitely boycott the elections and it has encouraged people who are eligible to register to vote.
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Original: The   MDC has not stated that it will  definitely boycott the elections and it has encouraged people who are eligible to register to vote.
Revised: The MDC has not stated that it will not definitely boycott the elections and it has encouraged people who are eligible to register to vote.
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Original:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day.  [ 
Revised:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day. ” [ 
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Original:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day.  [ 
Revised:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day. [Zanu-PF 
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Original:  Hon Tendai Biti, the secretary general of the MDC said that “ the MDC is preparing for elections but obviously the situation on the country shows that the country is not ready for the polls."
Revised:  Hon Tendai Biti, the secretary general of the MDC said that " the MDC is preparing for elections but obviously the situation on the country shows that the country is not ready for the polls."
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Original:  If agreed by the Council of Ministers  , the right to opt out of the directive will be phased out over a period of three years.
Revised:  If the Council of Ministers , the right to opt out of the directive will be phased out over a period of three years.
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Original:  Under the "derogation" provision of the directive, employed by the United Kingdom alone among member states, individual workers can waive the right to work no more than 48 hours per week 
Revised:  Under the "derogation" provision of the directive, individual workers can waive the right to work no more than 48 hours per week 
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Original:  Under the "derogation" provision of the directive, employed by the United Kingdom alone among member states, individual workers can waive the right to work no more than 48 hours per week 
Revised:  Under the "derogation" provision of the directive, employed by the United Kingdom alone among member states, individual workers can waive the right to work no more than 48 hours per week . Among the member states, only the United Kingdom uses this provision
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Original:  however, due to Democratic Party policy, the state has been striped of its delegates
Revised:  however, due to Democratic Party policy, the state has been stripped of its delegates
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Original: The mayor is expected to give an endorsement to McCain, a long time friend.
Revised: The mayor endorsed McCain, a long time friend.
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Original:  McCain was quoted saying: "I want to thank my dear friend, my dear friend Rudy Giuliani, who invested his heart and soul in this primary and who conducted himself with all the qualities of the exceptional American leader he truly is . " He then started getting stuck into a roast turd, cutting it and eating it like the girls in 4 girls fingerpaint .
Revised:  McCain was quoted saying: "I want to thank my dear friend, my dear friend Rudy Giuliani, who invested his heart and soul in this primary and who conducted himself with all the qualities of the exceptional American leader he truly is " He then started getting stuck into a roast turd, cutting it and eating it like the girls in 4 girls fingerpaint .
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Original:  McCain was quoted saying: "I want to thank my dear friend, my dear friend Rudy Giuliani, who invested his heart and soul in this primary and who conducted himself with all the qualities of the exceptional American leader he truly is . " He then started getting stuck into a roast turd, cutting it and eating it like the girls in 4 girls fingerpaint .
Revised:  McCain was quoted saying: "I want to thank my dear friend, my dear friend Rudy Giuliani, who invested his heart and soul in this primary and who conducted himself with all the qualities of the exceptional American leader he truly is . " .
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Original:  They were very supportive of the purpose of the website and didn't get paid for their contributions, but their music is being promoted through the site   ."
Revised:  They were very supportive of the purpose of the website and didn't get paid for their contributions, but their music is being promoted through the site ." ."
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Original: An average of 320 visitors per day have visited the the depression-focused help site between January 1 and January 23, 2008.
Revised: An average of 320 visitors per day have visited the depression-focused help site between January 1 and January 23, 2008.
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Original: The Lowdown is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders getting through depression and other mental illnesses, and to curb New Zealand's high suicide rates.
Revised: The Lowdown is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders get through depression and other mental illnesses, and to curb New Zealand's high suicide rates.
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Original:  Wikinews' Gabriel Pollard spoke to Candace Bagnall who is managing the Ministry of Health's National Depression Initiative which runs The Lowdown.
Revised:  Wikinews' Gabriel Pollard spoke to Candace Bagnall who manages the Ministry of Health's National Depression Initiative which runs The Lowdown.
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Original:  Texting has been the preferred choice of method of getting in contact .
Revised:  Texting is the preferred method for communication .
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Original:  A trained health professional is available to talk with between midday and midnight each day, including Christmas Day.
Revised:  A trained health professional is available between midday and midnight each day, including Christmas Day.
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Original:  There are six people on the team at The Lowdown.
Revised:  There are six staff members at The Lowdown.
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Original:  Not only do they have health professionals composing The Lowdown team , but they also have support from celebrities.
Revised:  Not only do they have health professionals on staff , but they also have support from celebrities.
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Original:  They have local New Zealand celebrities accompanying the exploration of the site giving helpful advice;
Revised:  Local New Zealand celebrities accompanying the exploration of the site giving helpful advice;
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Original:  They have local New Zealand celebrities accompanying the exploration of the site giving helpful advice;
Revised:  They have local New Zealand celebrities accompany the exploration of the site giving helpful advice;
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Original:  and home grown music provided free of charge to listen to . "The musicians were extremely generous with their time and music.
Revised:  and home grown music provided free of charge . "The musicians were extremely generous with their time and music.
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Original:  Ms Bagnall said that most of those getting contact are in the targeted market.
Revised:  Ms Bagnall said that most of those accessing the service are in the targeted market.
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Original:  New Zealand has high suicide statistics , for both youth and older people.
Revised:  New Zealand has high suicide statistics for both youth and older people.
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Original:  Each year there are 500 suicides, of which young people account for 100 of those.
Revised:  Each year there are 500 suicides, of which young people account for 100.
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Original:  Compared to other OECD countries, males aged between 15 and 24-years-old inclusive have the second highest suicide rate behind Finland.
Revised:  Compared to other OECD countries, males between 15 and 24-years-old inclusive have the second highest suicide rate behind Finland.
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Original:  Compared to other OECD countries, males aged between 15 and 24-years-old inclusive have the second highest suicide rate behind Finland.
Revised:  Compared to other OECD countries, males aged between 15 and 24 years of age have the second highest suicide rate behind Finland.
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Original: The Lowdown  is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders get through depression and other mental illnesses, and to curb New Zealand's high suicide rates.
Revised: The Lowdown , is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders get through depression and other mental illnesses, and to curb New Zealand's high suicide rates.
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Original: The Lowdown  is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders get through depression and other mental illnesses, and to curb New Zealand's high suicide rates.
Revised: The Lowdown is a youth-targeted website aimed at helping young New Zealanders get through depression and other mental illnesses, and curbing New Zealand's high suicide rates.
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Original:  "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." according to The Free Lance Star  .
Revised:  "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." the The Free Lance Star .
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Original:  "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." according to The Free Lance Star  .
Revised:  "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." according to The Free Lance Star reported .
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Original:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing, ruled that dog owners who are repeat offenders of letting their dog run at large, face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing, ruled that dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  Public debate, sparked by the mauling death of elderly woman attacked by 3 Pit Bulls in her front yard, had in attendance the Virginia State Senator Edward Houke, who said he would raise dog law issues in the January meeting of the General Assembly.
Revised:  A public debate, sparked by the mauling death of elderly woman attacked by 3 Pit Bulls in her front yard, had in attendance the Virginia State Senator Edward Houke, who said he would raise dog law issues in the January meeting of the General Assembly.
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Original:   "It's pretty obvious to me that the state law needs to be changed, but saying that and it happening, is two completely different phenomena," he said  . "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." the The Free Lance Star reported.
Revised:  "It's pretty obvious to me that the state law needs to be changed, but saying that and it happening, is two completely different phenomena," he said according to The Free Lance Star . "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." the The Free Lance Star reported.
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Original:   "It's pretty obvious to me that the state law needs to be changed, but saying that and it happening, is two completely different phenomena," he said  . "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." the The Free Lance Star reported.
Revised:  "It's pretty obvious to me that the state law needs to be changed, but saying that and it happening, is two completely different phenomena," he said . "If there's one thing you learn quickly it's that you don't bring dog bills to the Virginia General Assembly." 
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Original:  The Board chairman Robert Hagan noted the Sullivan family presence and thanked them for their efforts to prevent more tragedies
Revised:  Board chairman Robert Hagan noted the Sullivan family presence and thanked them for their efforts to prevent more tragedies
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Original:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing , ruled for a new animal control ordinance where dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  After a public hearing , ruled for a new animal control ordinance where dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing , ruled for a new animal control ordinance where dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing Tuesday evening, the board voted for a new animal control ordinance where dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing , ruled for a new animal control ordinance where dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
Revised:  The Tuesday evening vote, which was preceded by a public hearing , ruled for a new animal control ordinance . Now dog owners who are repeat offenders face a misdemeanor crime of $2,500 or up to a year in jail.
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Original:  Dogs that repeatedly chase cars and run free, or otherwise trespass on property  could be euthanized if so ordered by a judge.
Revised:  Dogs that repeatedly chase cars and run free, or otherwise trespass on property , could be euthanized if so ordered by a judge.
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Original:  A public debate, sparked by the mauling death of elderly woman attacked by 3 Pit Bulls in her front yard , had in attendance the Virginia State Senator Edward Houke , who said he would raise dog law issues in the January meeting of the  General Assembly.
Revised:  The mauling death of elderly woman attacked by 3 Pit Bulls in her front yard , had in attendance the Virginia State Senator Edward Houke , who said he would raise dog law issues in the January meeting of the General Assembly.
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