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Original:   Cethegus was first a supporter of Gaius Marius but when Lucius Cornelius Sulla returned from the East after having beaten Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined Sulla. (Appian, B. C. i. 60 62, 80. ) Cethegus was known for a notorious bad life and for untrustworthiness but nonetheless he managed to accumulate great power and influence after Sulla's death, to the amount that even Lucius Licinius Lucullus was forced to sue Cethegus'
Revised:  Cethegus was first a supporter of Gaius Marius but when Lucius Cornelius Sulla returned from the East after having defeated Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined Sulla. (Appian, B. C. i. 60 62, 80. ) Cethegus was known for a notorious bad life and for untrustworthiness but nonetheless he managed to accumulate great power and influence after Sulla's death, to the amount that even Lucius Licinius Lucullus was forced to sue Cethegus'
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Original:   Cethegus was first a supporter of Gaius Marius but when Lucius Cornelius Sulla returned from the East after having beaten Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined Sulla. (Appian, B. C. i. 60 62, 80. ) Cethegus was known for a notorious bad life and for untrustworthiness but nonetheless he managed to accumulate great power and influence after Sulla's death, to the amount that even Lucius Licinius Lucullus was forced to sue Cethegus'
Revised:  Cethegus was first a supporter of Gaius Marius but when Lucius Cornelius Sulla returned from the East after having beaten Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined Sulla. (Appian, B. C. i. 60 62, 80. Cethegus was known for a notorious bad life and for untrustworthiness but nonetheless he managed to accumulate great power and influence after Sulla's death, to the amount that even Lucius Licinius Lucullus was forced to sue Cethegus'
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Original: Publius Cornelius Cethegus, was a Senator active in the time of Gaius Marius and Lucius Cornelius Sulla.
Revised: Publius Cornelius Cethegus, was a Roman politician active in the time of Gaius Marius and Lucius Cornelius Sulla.
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Original:  He belonged to the stirps Cethegus of the gens Cornelia.
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Original: Syme, "Missing Senators", Historia: Zeitschrift für Alte Geschichte, 4 (1955), p. 60 Cethegus was first a supporter of Marius but when Sulla returned from the East after having defeated Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined Sulla .
Revised: Syme, "Missing Senators", Historia: Zeitschrift für Alte Geschichte, 4 (1955), p. 60 Cethegus was first a supporter of Marius but when Sulla returned from the East after having defeated Mithridates Eupator, Cethegus deserted the cause of the populares and joined him .
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Original: Appian, Bellum Civilis i. 60  62, 80. Category:1st-century BC Romans Category:Cornelii Cethegi Category:Roman patricia
Revised: Appian, Bellum Civilis i. 60 , 62, 80. Category:1st-century BC Romans Category:Cornelii Cethegi Category:Roman patricia
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Original:  Symes believes Cethegusdied not longer after  74 BC  . See also Cornelia gens Category:  1st-century BC Romans Publius (public enemy) Category:Roman patricia
Revised:  Symes believes Cethegusdied not longer after 74 BC Another recorded act of Cethegus that same year was the help he gave to a senator, Aelius Staienus, who had been accused of corruption. The two men were said to dislike each other, but Staienus was desperate enough to pay for Cethegus's help, which turned out to be useless advice. Although Cethegus's action was later denounced as deceitful by Cicero (by which time Cethegus was probably dead), others believed that Staienus's position was hopeless anyway and Cethegus's advice was the best that could be offered. Syme believed Cethegus died not long after this incident . See also Cornelia gens Category: 1st-century BC Romans Publius (public enemy) Category:Roman patricia
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Original: Political boss (70s BC) Although Cethegus was regarded as low of moral character and distasteful in his lifestyle choices, he acquired much influence in the Roman Senate during the post-Sullan era as a master of intrigue and manipulation.
Revised: Political boss (70s BC) Although Cethegus was regarded as low of moral character and unsavory in his lifestyle choices, he acquired much influence in the Roman Senate during the post-Sullan era as a master of intrigue and manipulation.
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Original:  Keaveney takes this to mean that Cethegus used his political skill to successfully co-opt the inconsequential rank-and-file members of the Senate  .
Revised:  Keaveney takes this to mean that Cethegus achieved this by co-opting the rank-and-file members of the Senate .
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Original:  They had significantly increased in number during Sulla's dictatorship, and Keaveney argues that Cethegus provided these politically unskilled newcomers with guidance in return for them voting in the house according to his wishes . Syme notes that Cethegus "was the author of (or was subsequently credited with) various pieces of jobbery in the year 74".
Revised:  They had significantly increased in number during Sulla's dictatorship, providing Cethegus with a large voting base in the house according to his wishes . Syme notes that Cethegus "was the author of (or was subsequently credited with) various pieces of jobbery in the year 74".
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Original:  They had significantly increased in number during Sulla's dictatorship, and Keaveney argues that Cethegus provided these politically unskilled newcomers with guidance in return for them voting in the house according to his wishes . Syme notes that Cethegus "was the author of (or was subsequently credited with) various pieces of jobbery in the year 74".
Revised:  They had significantly increased in number during Sulla's dictatorship, and Keaveney argues that Cethegus provided these politically unskilled newcomers with guidance in return for them voting in the house . Syme notes that Cethegus "was the author of (or was subsequently credited with) various pieces of jobbery in the year 74".
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Original:  Cethegus was also courted by many men who wished to obtain the vacant governorship of Cilicia.
Revised:  Several men also paid court to Cethegus in hope using his influence for obtaining the vacant governorship of Cilicia.
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Original:  Another recorded act of Cethegus that same year was the help he gave to a senator, Aelius Staienus, who had been accused of corruption.
Revised:  Another recorded act of Cethegus that same year was the help he gave to a senator, Staienus, who had been accused of corruption.
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Original: Publius Cornelius Cethegus (c. 131 BC – before 66 BC) was a Roman politician . During the civil wars of the 80s BC, he was originally a partisan of Gaius Marius, but survived the purges of the political class by defecting to the eventual victor, Sulla, whose favor he endeavored to win by treacherously abetting in the massacre of several thousand prisoners of war.
Revised: Publius Cornelius Cethegus (c. 131 BC – before 66 BC) was a politician of the Roman Republic . During the civil wars of the 80s BC, he was originally a partisan of Gaius Marius, but survived the purges of the political class by defecting to the eventual victor, Sulla, whose favor he endeavored to win by treacherously abetting in the massacre of several thousand prisoners of war.
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Original: 200px |Cameroon 1901–1972 Neukamerun (German for New Cameroon ) was the name of Central African territories ceded by France to Germany in 1911.
Revised: 200px |Cameroon 1901–1972 New Cameroon ( ) was the name of Central African territories ceded by France to Germany in 1911.
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Original:  Upon taking office in 1907, Theodor Seitz, governor of German Kamerun , advocated the acquisition of territories from the French Congo.
Revised:  Upon taking office in 1907, Theodor Seitz, governor of German Cameroon , advocated the acquisition of territories from the French Congo.
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Original: Ngoh 74. Germany's only major river outlet from its Central African possessions was the Congo River, and more territories to the east of Kamerun would allow for better access to that waterway.
Revised: Ngoh 74. Germany's only major river outlet from its Central African possessions was the Congo River, and more territories to the east of German Cameroon would allow for better access to that waterway.
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Original:  France agreed to cede part of the French Congo to Germany in exchange for German recognition of France's rights to MoroccoDeLancey and DeLancey 200. and a strip of land in northeastern Kamerun between the Logone and Chari rivers.
Revised:  France agreed to cede part of the French Congo to Germany in exchange for German recognition of France's rights to MoroccoDeLancey and DeLancey 200. and a strip of land in northeastern German Cameroon between the Logone and Chari rivers.
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Original:  Upon taking office in 1907, Theodor Seitz, governor of German Cameroon , advocated the acquisition of territories from the French Congo.
Revised:  Upon taking office in 1907, Theodor Seitz, governor of Kamerun , advocated the acquisition of territories from the French Congo.
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Original: Ngoh 74. Germany's only major river outlet from its Central African possessions was the Congo River, and more territories to the east of German Cameroon would allow for better access to that waterway.
Revised: Ngoh 74. Germany's only major river outlet from its Central African possessions was the Congo River, and more territories to the east of Kamerun would allow for better access to that waterway.
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Original:  France agreed to cede part of the French Congo to Germany in exchange for German recognition of France's rights to MoroccoDeLancey and DeLancey 200. and a strip of land in northeastern German Cameroon between the Logone and Chari rivers.
Revised:  France agreed to cede part of the French Congo to Germany in exchange for German recognition of France's rights to MoroccoDeLancey and DeLancey 200. and a strip of land in northeastern Kamerun between the Logone and Chari rivers.
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Original: Neukamerun was the name of Central African territories ceded by France to Germany in 1911.
Revised: Neukamerun was the name of Central African territories ceded by France to the German Empire in 1911.
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Original: Neukamerun was the name of Central African territories ceded by the Third Franch Republic to the German Empire in 1911.
Revised: Neukamerun was the name of Central African territories ceded by the Third French Republic to the German Empire in 1911.
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Original:  His father Leo, a captain in the National Guard, retired in 1941, and Jorge as well as his two sisters grew up on his family's coffee farm at Santa María de Ostuma in the city of Matagalpa.
Revised:  His father Leo, a captain in the National Guard, retired in 1941, and Jorge along with his two sisters grew up on his family's coffee farm at Santa María de Ostuma in the city of Matagalpa.
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Original:  His father Leo, a captain in the National Guard, retired in 1941, and Jorge along with his two sisters grew up on his family's coffee farm at Santa María de Ostuma in the city of Matagalpa.
Revised:  His father Leo, a captain in the National Guard, retired in 1941, and Jorge along with his two sisters grew up on the family's coffee farm at Santa María de Ostuma in the city of Matagalpa.
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Original:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes, of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small-scale .
Revised:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes, of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale .
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Original:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted " fijnschilders " - that is "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
Revised:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted " Fijnschilders " - that is "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
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Original:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted " fijnschilders " - that is "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
Revised:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted " fijnschilders " – "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
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Original:  Watteau, Fragonard and other French 18th century artists produced many small works, generally emphasizing spirit and atmosphere rather than a detailed finish.
Revised:  Watteau, Fragonard and other French 18th-century artists produced many small works, generally emphasizing spirit and atmosphere rather than a detailed finish.
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Original:  30 × 50 cm]]
Revised:  31 × 50 cm]]
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Original:  Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet, a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house), to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
Revised:  From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet, a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house), to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
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Original:  They also offered more privacy from servants or other household members or visitors.
Revised:  They offered more privacy from servants or other household members or visitors.
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Original:  They also offered more privacy from servants or other household members or visitors.
Revised:  They also offered more privacy from servants or other household members and visitors.
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Original:  Typically, such a room would be for the use of a single individual , so that a house might have at least two (his and hers) and often more.
Revised:  Typically, a cabinet would be for the use of a single individual , so that a house might have at least two (his and hers) and often more.
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Original:  Typically, such a room would be for the use of a single individual , so that a house might have at least two (his and hers) and often more.
Revised:  Typically, such a room would be for the use of a single individual ; a large house might have at least two (his and hers) and often more.
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Original:  Names varied: cabinet, closet, study (from the Italian studiolo), office and others.
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Original:  Later such paintings might be housed in a display case, which might also be called a cabinet, but the term cabinet arose from the name (originally in Italian) of the room, not the piece of furniture.
Revised:  Later , cabinet paintings might be housed in a display case, which might also be called a cabinet, but the term cabinet arose from the name (originally in Italian) of the room, not the piece of furniture.
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Original:  Later such paintings might be housed in a display case, which might also be called a cabinet, but the term cabinet arose from the name (originally in Italian) of the room, not the piece of furniture.
Revised:  Later such paintings might be housed in a display case, also known as a cabinet, but the term cabinet arose from the name (originally in Italian) of the room, not the piece of furniture.
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Original:  Other small  precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, small sculptures and so on, might also be  in the room.
Revised:  Other small precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, or small sculptures might also be in the room.
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Original:  There is a rare surviving cabinet with its contents probably little changed since the early eighteenth century  at Ham House in Richmond, London.
Revised:  A rare example of a surviving cabinet with its contents probably little changed since the early eighteenth century at Ham House in Richmond, London.
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Original:  There is a rare surviving cabinet with its contents probably little changed since the early eighteenth century  at Ham House in Richmond, London.
Revised:  There is a rare surviving cabinet with its contents probably little changed since the early eighteenth century is at Ham House in Richmond, London.
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Original:  It is less than ten feet square, and leads off from the Long Gallery , which is well over a hundred feet long by about twenty wide, giving a rather startling change in scale and atmosphere.
Revised:  It is less than ten feet square, and leads off from the Long Gallery which is over a hundred feet long by about twenty wide, giving a rather startling change in scale and atmosphere.
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Original:  It is less than ten feet square, and leads off from the Long Gallery , which is well over a hundred feet long by about twenty wide, giving a rather startling change in scale and atmosphere.
Revised:  It is less than ten feet square, and leads off from the Long Gallery , which is well over a hundred feet long and twenty feet wide, giving a rather startling change in scale and atmosphere.
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Original:  As is often the case, it has an excellent view of the front entrance to the house, so that comings and going can be observed.
Revised:  As is often the case, it has an excellent view of the front entrance to the house, so that passerby and daily activities can be observed.
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Original:  Most surviving large houses or palaces, especially from before 1700, have such rooms, but they are very often not displayed  to visitors.
Revised:  Most surviving large houses or palaces, especially from before 1700, have such rooms, but they are often not displayed to visitors.
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Original:  Most surviving large houses or palaces, especially from before 1700, have such rooms, but they are very often not displayed  to visitors.
Revised:  Most surviving large houses or palaces, especially from before 1700, have such rooms, but they are very often not displayed or accessible to visitors.
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Original:  The magnificent Mannerist Studiolo of Francesco I Medici in Florence is rather larger than most examples , and rather atypical in that most of the paintings were commissioned for the room.
Revised:  The magnificent Mannerist Studiolo of Francesco I Medici in Florence is larger than most examples , and rather atypical in that most of the paintings were commissioned for the room.
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Original:  The magnificent Mannerist Studiolo of Francesco I Medici in Florence is rather larger than most examples , and rather atypical in that most of the paintings were commissioned for the room.
Revised:  The magnificent Mannerist Studiolo of Francesco I Medici in Florence is rather larger than most examples and rather atypical in that most of the paintings were commissioned for the room.
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Original: Metropolitan Timeline of Art History These  were designed to be picked up and handled, even fondled.
Revised: Metropolitan Timeline of Art History These sculptures were designed to be picked up and handled, even fondled.
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Original:  Small antiquities were also very commonly displayed in such rooms, including coins . Small paintings have been produced at all periods of Western art, but some periods and artists are especially noticeable for them.
Revised:  Small antiquities were also very commonly displayed in such rooms, including rare coinage . Small paintings have been produced at all periods of Western art, but some periods and artists are especially noticeable for them.
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Original:  Small antiquities were also very commonly displayed in such rooms, including coins . Small paintings have been produced at all periods of Western art, but some periods and artists are especially noticeable for them.
Revised:  Small antiquities were also very commonly displayed in such rooms, including coins . Small paintings have been produced during all periods of Western art, but some periods and artists are especially noticeable for them.
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Original:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted "Fijnschilders" – "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
Revised:  The painters of the Leiden School were especially noted "Fijnschilders" or "fine painters" producing highly finished small works.
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Original:  The term is not as common as it was in the 19th century, but remains in use among art historians.
Revised:  In modern times the term is not as common as it was in the 19th century, but remains in use among art historians.
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Original:  As is often the case, it has an excellent view of the front entrance to the house, so that passerby and daily activities can be observed.
Revised:  As is often the case, it has an excellent view of the front entrance to the house, so that passersby and daily activities can be observed.
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Original:  A "cabinet miniature" is a larger portrait miniature, usually full-length and typically up to about ten inches ( 25.5 cm ) high.
Revised:  A "cabinet miniature" is a larger portrait miniature, usually full-length and typically up to about ten inches ( 25cm ) high.
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Original:  He subsequently accepted an offer of amnesty granted by Ne Win and returned to Burma on 29 July 1980. (The news item that ' former Prime Minister U Nu and wife Mya Yi arrving [sic?] back at Rangoon airport at 3:30 pm in the afternoon of 29 July 1980 ' can be read in the 30 July 1980 issues of the Rangoon Guardian and the Working People's Daily).
Revised:  He subsequently accepted an offer of amnesty granted by Ne Win and returned to Burma on 29 July 1980. (The news item that " former Prime Minister U Nu and wife Mya Yi arrving [sic?] back at Rangoon airport at 3:30 pm in the afternoon of 29 July 1980 ' can be read in the 30 July 1980 issues of the Rangoon Guardian and the Working People's Daily).
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Original:  He subsequently accepted an offer of amnesty granted by Ne Win and returned to Burma on 29 July 1980. (The news item that ' former Prime Minister U Nu and wife Mya Yi arrving [sic?] back at Rangoon airport at 3:30 pm in the afternoon of 29 July 1980 ' can be read in the 30 July 1980 issues of the Rangoon Guardian and the Working People's Daily).
Revised:  He subsequently accepted an offer of amnesty granted by Ne Win and returned to Burma on 29 July 1980. (The news item that ' former Prime Minister U Nu and wife Mya Yi arrving [sic?] back at Rangoon airport at 3:30 pm in the afternoon of 29 July 1980 " can be read in the 30 July 1980 issues of the Rangoon Guardian and the Working People's Daily).
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Original:  He was the first Prime Minister of Burma under the provisions of the 1947 Constitution of the Union of Burma, from 4 January 1948 to 12 June 1956, again from 28 February 1957 to 28 October 1958, and finally from 4 April 1960 to 2 March 1962.
Revised:  He was the first Prime Minister of Myanmar under the provisions of the 1947 Constitution of the Union of Burma, from 4 January 1948 to 12 June 1956, again from 28 February 1957 to 28 October 1958, and finally from 4 April 1960 to 2 March 1962.
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