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Original:  Leslie Phillips Ian Wilmut , Genetics pioneer Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter , Nuala O'Loan
Revised:  Leslie Phillips Ian Wilmut , Genetics pioneer Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan
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Original: Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Kylie Minouge , Singer Brian Ashton, England Rugby coach Jasper Conran,Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber, Industrial designer Des Lynam, TV Sports presenter.
Revised: Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Kylie Minogue , Singer Brian Ashton, England Rugby coach Jasper Conran,Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber, Industrial designer Des Lynam, TV Sports presenter.
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Original:   Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Kylie Minogue, Singer Brian Ashton, England Rugby coach Jasper Conran, Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber, Industrial designer Des Lynam, TV Sports presenter.
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton, England Rugby coach Jasper Conran, Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber, Industrial designer Des Lynam, TV Sports presenter.
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Original:  Leslie Phillips Ian Wilmut , Genetics pioneer Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan Marjorie Wallace, Michele Elliott Alasdair Macdonald, Headmaster Professor Sir Timothy O'Shea, Vice Chancellor of Edinburgh university .
Revised:  Leslie Phillips Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan Marjorie Wallace, Michele Elliott Alasdair Macdonald, Headmaster Professor Sir Timothy O'Shea, Vice Chancellor of Edinburgh university .
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Original:  Leslie Phillips Ian Wilmut , Genetics pioneer Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan Marjorie Wallace, Michele Elliott Alasdair Macdonald, Headmaster Professor Sir Timothy O'Shea, Vice Chancellor of Edinburgh university .
Revised:  Leslie Phillips Ian Wilmut , Genetics pioneer Nicholas Kenyon, BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins, Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan Marjorie Wallace, Michele Elliott Alasdair Macdonald, Headmaster Professor Sir Timothy O'Shea, Vice Chancellor of Edinburgh university 
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Original:  The list also includes honours for those involved in flood rescue work during 2007 such as Capt Tracey Palmer
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted, Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian Mckellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour, which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted, Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour, which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original: A contentious part of his sentence was a ban , or gag-order, placed on Hicks to prevent him from speaking with the media for a period of one year from the time he pleaded guilty, which was in March, 2007.
Revised: A contentious part of his sentence was a ban placed on Hicks to prevent him from speaking with the media for a period of one year from the time he pleaded guilty, which was in March, 2007.
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Original:  On his release Saturday, Hicks indicated that he intended to comply with the gag-order .
Revised:  On his release Saturday, Hicks indicated that he intended to comply with the suppression order .
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Original:  In 2006 he was apointed captain, and in April the following year, upon the expiration of his original contract, signed a new one as a player-coach    
Revised:  In 2006 he was apointed captain, and in April the following year, upon the expiration of his original contract, signed a new one as a player-coach . 
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Original:  Obviously from the club's point of view, we'll gather round to give his family as much support as they need.   "
Revised:  Obviously from the club's point of view, we'll gather round to give his family as much support as they need. " "
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Original:  Attempts were made in the ambulance to revive him, but these failed and he was pronounced dead at 1718 GMT, having been taken to Wishaw General Hospital 
Revised:  Attempts were made in the ambulance to revive him, but these failed and he was pronounced dead at 17:18 GMT, having been taken to Wishaw General Hospital 
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Original:  Attempts were made in the ambulance to revive him, but these failed and he was pronounced dead at 1718 GMT, having been taken to Wishaw General Hospital 
Revised:  Attempts were made in the ambulance to revive him, but these failed and he was pronounced dead at 1718 GMT, having been taken to Wishaw General Hospital .
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Original: Scottish football player Phil O'Donnell has died today after collapsing during a game in which his team Motherwell F.C.,  which he was captain of , were playing Dundee United in a Scottish Premier League match.
Revised: Scottish football player Phil O'Donnell has died today after collapsing during a game in which his team Motherwell F.C., of which he was captain of , were playing Dundee United in a Scottish Premier League match.
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Original: Scottish football player Phil O'Donnell has died today after collapsing during a game in which his team Motherwell F.C.,  which he was captain of , were playing Dundee United in a Scottish Premier League match.
Revised: Scottish football player Phil O'Donnell has died today after collapsing during a game in which his team Motherwell F.C., which he was captain , were playing Dundee United in a Scottish Premier League match.
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Original:  He received treatment for around five minutes , before being stretchered off and transfered to a waiting ambulance.
Revised:  He received treatment for around five minutes before being stretchered off and transfered to a waiting ambulance.
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Original:  David Clarkson, O'Donnell's nephew, was also playing at the time  but was taken off due to being visibly distressed by O'Donnel's collapse , having already scored twice . Born on March 25, 1972 O'Donnell made his debut for Motherwell in 1990, and scored the following year in the final of the Scottish Cup, which Motherwell defeated Dundee United 4-3 in.
Revised:  David Clarkson, O'Donnell's nephew, was also playing at the time and had scored twice but was taken off due to being visibly distressed by O'Donnel's collapse , having already scored twice . Born on March 25, 1972 O'Donnell made his debut for Motherwell in 1990, and scored the following year in the final of the Scottish Cup, which Motherwell defeated Dundee United 4-3 in.
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Original:  David Clarkson, O'Donnell's nephew, was also playing at the time  but was taken off due to being visibly distressed by O'Donnel's collapse , having already scored twice . Born on March 25, 1972 O'Donnell made his debut for Motherwell in 1990, and scored the following year in the final of the Scottish Cup, which Motherwell defeated Dundee United 4-3 in.
Revised:  David Clarkson, O'Donnell's nephew, was also playing at the time but was taken off due to being visibly distressed by O'Donnel's collapse . Born on March 25, 1972 O'Donnell made his debut for Motherwell in 1990, and scored the following year in the final of the Scottish Cup, which Motherwell defeated Dundee United 4-3 in.
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Original:  In 1993 he earned his only international cap for Scotland , as a substitute in a World Cup qualification match against Switzerland.
Revised:  In 1993 he earned his only international cap for Scotland as a substitute in a World Cup qualification match against Switzerland.
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Original: Pakistani President Pervez Musharraf has ordered security forces to take firm action against rioters following the assassination of opposition leader Benazir Bhutto.
Revised: Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf has ordered security forces to take firm action against rioters following the assassination of opposition leader Benazir Bhutto.
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Original: Thursday's assassination of Ms. Bhutto has plunged the Pakistani nation into  crisis, with bloody protests across the country.
Revised: Thursday's assassination of Ms. Bhutto has plunged the Pakistani nation into crisis, with violent protests across the country.
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Original:  Officials say the violence has also caused tens-of-millions of dollars in damages.
Revised:  Officials say the violence has also caused tens of millions of dollars in damages.
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Original:  Most of the deaths have occurred in southern Sindh province,  Ms. Bhutto's political stronghold.
Revised:  Most of the deaths have occurred in southern Sindh province, which is Ms. Bhutto's political stronghold.
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Original:  The only other team to have achieved this feat were the Miami Dolphins in 1972, who were 14-0 due to a different regular season structure at the time.
Revised:  The only other team to have achieved this feat was the Miami Dolphins in 1972, who were 14-0 due to a different regular season structure at the time.
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Original: It has been announced that Bilawal Bhutto  , 19, the son of former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto will take her place as the head of the Pakistan People's Party (PPP) and lead the party alongside his father Asif Ali Zardari.
Revised: It has been announced that Bilawal Bhutto Zardari , 19, the son of former Pakistani Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto will take her place as the head of the Pakistan People's Party (PPP) and lead the party alongside his father Asif Ali Zardari.
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Original:  Despite that, Zardari states that he will be answering questions from the media and politicians because Bhutto is still "of a tender age.  
Revised:  Despite that, Zardari states that he will be answering questions from the media and politicians because Bhutto is still "of a tender age. " 
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Original:  Despite that, Zardari states that he will be answering questions from the media and politicians because Bhutto is still "of a tender age.  
Revised:  Despite that, Zardari states that he will be answering questions from the media and politicians because Bhutto is still "of a tender age. Related new
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Original:  The resolution says that they would like the United Kingdom to help with the investigation, and that the PP does not trust any investigations performed by the government of Pakistan.
Revised:  The resolution says that they would like the United Kingdom to help with the investigation, and that the PPP does not trust any investigations performed by the government of Pakistan.
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Original:  Bhutto spoke in English as reports say he was attempting not to cry.
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Original:   His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering to Chechnya .
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering to Chechnya 
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Original:  The major thrust of his address sought to reassure the small property holder class, rather than big business and other elite investors .
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Original:  Putin spoke ideologically and was critical of the lack of progress  implementing his reform proposals.
Revised:  Putin was critical of the lack of progress implementing his reform proposals.
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Original:  Putin spoke ideologically and was critical of the lack of progress  implementing his reform proposals.
Revised:  Putin spoke ideologically and was critical of the lack of progress in implementing his reform proposals.
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Original:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” , he was also critical of the bureaucratic attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
Revised:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors were “terrorizing business” , he was also critical of the bureaucratic attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
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Original:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” , he was also critical of the bureaucratic attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
Revised:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” . He was also critical of the bureaucratic attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
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Original:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” , he was also critical of the bureaucratic attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
Revised:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” , he was also critical of a bureaucracy attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
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Original: Russian President Vladimir Putin spoke live Monday on state television in his annual state-of-the-nation address using high ideological rhetoric  calling on lawmakers and the public to strengthen democracy saying, “ First and foremost it is worth acknowledging that the demise of the Soviet Union was the greatest geopolitical catastrophe of the century.
Revised: Russian President Vladimir Putin spoke live Monday on state television in his annual state-of-the-nation address using high ideological rhetoric when calling on lawmakers and the public to strengthen democracy saying, “ First and foremost it is worth acknowledging that the demise of the Soviet Union was the greatest geopolitical catastrophe of the century.
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Original:  ”   The major thrust of his address sought to reassure the small property holder class, rather than big business and other elite investors.
Revised:  ” The thrust of his address sought to reassure the small property holder class, rather than big business and other elite investors.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering to Chechnya.
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Original:  Putin called for proposals to index wages to inflation over the next two years, and for the introduction of a flat 13\% tax on undeclared earnings in the shadow economy, a slice that represents nearly 35\% of the nation’s economy, by legalizing what was previous defined as illegal income.
Revised:  Putin called for proposals to index wages to inflation over the next two years, and for the introduction of a flat 13\% tax on undeclared earnings in the shadow economy, a slice that represents nearly 35\% of the nation’s economy, by legalizing what was previously defined as illegal income.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering recent upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, as "a real drama" which stranded millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , a referance to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, as "a real drama" which stranded millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering recent upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, as "a real drama" which stranded millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering recent upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" which stranded millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering recent upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, as "a real drama" which stranded millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin’s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “epidemic of collapse” , refering recent upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, as "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  Brushing off what was probably taken as criticism during the visit last week by Condoleezza Rice who commented the Kremlin ran a "managed democracy", Putrin stressed that "Russia ... will decide for itself the pace, terms and conditions of moving towards democracy."
Revised:  Brushing off what was probably taken as criticism during last week's visit by Condoleezza Rice who commented the Kremlin ran a "managed democracy", Putrin stressed that "Russia ... will decide for itself the pace, terms and conditions of moving towards democracy."
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Original:  The thrust of his address sought to reassure the small property holder class, rather than big business and other elite investors.
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Original:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors were “terrorizing business” .
Revised:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” .
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Original:  He was also critical of a bureaucracy attitude that “state service as some type of business”.
Revised:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “state service as some type of business”.
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Original:  Putin signaled to the bureaucratic caste they should promote partisanship and civil society who are on the eve of their upcoming parliamentary and presidential elections  
Revised:  Putin signaled to the bureaucratic caste they should promote partisanship and civil society who are on the eve of their upcoming parliamentary and presidential elections . 
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Original:  Saying, “ First and foremost it is worth acknowledging that the demise of the Soviet Union was the greatest geopolitical catastrophe of the century.
Revised:  Saying, " First and foremost it is worth acknowledging that the demise of the Soviet Union was the greatest geopolitical catastrophe of the century.
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Original:  ” He sees the need for strengthening the legal system and the political environment to assure a more just society in avoiding a replay of a Russian downfall.
Revised:  " He sees the need for strengthening the legal system and the political environment to assure a more just society in avoiding a replay of a Russian downfall.
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Original:  On politics, he pointedly abandoned the much-used ‘stability ’ catch phrase of the bureaucracy.
Revised:  On politics, he pointedly abandoned the much-used ‘stability ' catch phrase of the bureaucracy.
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Original:  She had only anounced her pregnancy earlier this month, and the child is expected in spring or summer next year  
Revised:  She had only anounced her pregnancy earlier this month, and the child is expected in spring or summer next year . 
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Original:  American actress Jessica Alba, 26, has anounced her engagement to producer, and father of their unborn child  Cash Warren.
Revised:  American actress Jessica Alba, 26, has anounced her engagement to producer, and father of their unborn child , Cash Warren.
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Original: The electoral commission of Pakistan is scheduled to hold a meeting today to decide whether the general election of Pakistan will go ahead as planned next week on Saturday January 8, 2008.
Revised: The electoral commission of Pakistan is scheduled to hold a meeting today to decide whether the general election of the country will go ahead as planned next week on Saturday January 8, 2008.
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Original:  combined with the aftermath of the state of emergency only recently lifted by President Gen.
Revised:  combined with the aftermath of the state of emergency only recently lifted by President 
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Original: Following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto, violent civil unrest has been occurring throughout Pakistan and has now been drawing to a close;
Revised: Following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto, violent civil unrest throughout Pakistan and has now been drawing to a close;
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Original: Following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto, violent civil unrest has been occurring throughout Pakistan and has now been drawing to a close;
Revised: Following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto, violent civil unrest has been occurring throughout Pakistan and is now been drawing to a close;
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Original:  however his father, Asif Ali Zardari, has declared an intention to handle party affairs on behalf of his son, on the grounds that Bhutto is still "of a tender age" at 19 years old.
Revised:  however his father, Asif Ali Zardari, has declared an intention to handle party affairs on behalf of his son, on the grounds that he is still "of a tender age" at 19 years old.
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Original: The electoral commission of Pakistan is scheduled to hold a meeting today to decide whether the general election of the country will go ahead as planned next week on Saturday January 8, 2008.
Revised: The electoral commission of Pakistan held a meeting today to decide whether the general election of the country will go ahead as planned next week on Saturday January 8, 2008.
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Original:  Mr. Zardari has stated that the PPP will contest the poll .
Revised:  Mr. Zardari has stated that the PPP will contest the poll 
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Original:  At this time the electoral commission has not commented .
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Original:  however, according to CNN, Election Commission Secretary Kanwar Dilashad told The Associated Press that the recommendation has been made to the Government to delay the election.
Revised:  however, according to CNN, Election Commission Secretary Kanwar Dilashad told The Associated Press that a recommendation has been made to the Government to delay the election.
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