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Original:  He saw 8 dead whales on the shores and hundreds on neiufi fish, or (according to others) less whales but 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
Revised:  He saw 8 dead whales on the shores and hundreds on neiufi fish, or (according to other sources) fewer whales and 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
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Original:  The bird returned to his nest in the morning.
Revised:  The bird returned to its nest in the morning.
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Original:  When it was preening its feathers, Kae emerged and clung to one of its legs (or the feathers of its breast according to some, or of its wing according to some).
Revised:  While it was preening its feathers, Kae emerged and clung to one of its legs (or the feathers of its breast according to some, or of its wing according to some).
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Original:  The place were he landed was on the coralsand beach of Akana (Aana in Sāmoan), the western part of Upolu.
Revised:  The place were he landed was on the coral sand beach of Akana (Aana in Sāmoan), the western part of Upolu.
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Original:  He was friendly received by the high chief of the area, Sinilau, who gave him status, more than he ever had gotten in Tonga, but not enough to enter the kava circle.
Revised:  He was friendlily received by the high chief of the area, Sinilau, who gave him status, more than he ever had gotten in Tonga, but not enough to enter the kava circle.
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Original:  But leave them in deep water at the weathercoast .
Revised:  But leave them in deep water at the coast .
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Original:  Which was a very modest request, and Kae agreed.
Revised:  This was a very modest request, and Kae agreed.
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Original:  He left the whales in shallow water a speeded to Haamea.
Revised:  He left the whales in shallow water and sped to Haamea.
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Original:  with his back full with spears, and without the promised items.
Revised:  with his back full of spears, and without the promised items.
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Original:  Quite much more than Haamea only, see List of islands in Tonga.
Revised:  A lot more than Haamea only, see List of islands in Tonga.
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Original:  So it was done, and Kae was brought into Sinilau's boatshed, he even did not wake up.
Revised:  So it was done, and Kae was brought into Sinilau's boatshed, he did not even wake up.
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Original:  Night was awaiting the dawn , a rooster crowed.
Revised:  As dawn was approaching , a rooster crowed.
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Original:  "That stupid rooster", Kae mumbled half asleep, "he just crows like Sinilau's rooster.
Revised:  "That stupid rooster", Kae mumbled half asleep, "he crows like Sinilau's rooster.
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Original:  He was only missing one tooth, as the Tongans had brought thatwhaletooth ivory (lei) was in Tonga as valuable and royal as gold in Western culture. as a gift to the Tui Tonga in Mua, which had made it  even for the gods untouchable . Sinilau suggested that Tununga should not try to smile too much.
Revised:  He was only missing one tooth, as the Tongans had brought thatwhaletooth ivory (lei) was in Tonga as valuable and royal as gold in Western culture. as a gift to the Tui Tonga in Mua, which had made it untouchable even for the gods untouchable . Sinilau suggested that Tununga should not try to smile too much.
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Original:  He was only missing one tooth, as the Tongans had brought thatwhaletooth ivory (lei) was in Tonga as valuable and royal as gold in Western culture. as a gift to the Tui Tonga in Mua, which had made it  even for the gods untouchable . Sinilau suggested that Tununga should not try to smile too much.
Revised:  He was only missing one tooth, as the Tongans had brought thatwhaletooth ivory (lei) was in Tonga as valuable and royal as gold in Western culture. as a gift to the Tui Tonga in Mua, which had made it even for the gods . Sinilau suggested that Tununga should not try to smile too much.
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Original:  Longopoa Meanwhile we still have Longopoa left behind on his rock at the end of the world.
Revised:  Longopoa Meanwhile Longopoa was left behind on his rock at the end of the world.
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Original:  Do not go to see your relatives first, because if you plant this branch after the day has dawned, it will grow to just an ordinary tree."
Revised:  Do not go to see your relatives first, because if you plant this branch after the day has dawned, it will only grow to be just an ordinary tree."
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Original:  And at Niuatoputapu  still not full.
Revised:  And at Niuatoputapu it was still not full.
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Original:  Haamea may be the place of his lepa in central Tongatapu, or it may be an alternative name for Sāmoa (Haamoa in Tongan).
Revised:  Haamea may be the place of his lepa in central Tongatapu, or it may be an alternative name for Samoa (Haamoa in Tongan).
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Original:  The place where he landed was on the coral sand beach of Akana (Aana in Sāmoan ), the western part of Upolu.
Revised:  The place where he landed was on the coral sand beach of Akana (Aana in Samoan ), the western part of Upolu.
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Original:  Sinilau called all the gods of Sāmoa to a council and ordered them to assemble at both Hunga Haapai and Hunga Tonga.
Revised:  Sinilau called all the gods of Samoa to a council and ordered them to assemble at both Hunga Haapai and Hunga Tonga.
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Original:  But when daylight had come he saw that he was there no longer but in a certain boatshed in Sāmoa .
Revised:  But when daylight had come he saw that he was there no longer but in a certain boatshed in Samoa .
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Original:  He saw eight dead whales on the shore and hundreds of neiufi fish, or (according to other sources) fewer whales and 2 huge man eating sharks, luckily also dead.
Revised:  He saw eight dead whales on the shore and hundreds of neiufi fish, or (according to other sources) fewer whales and 2 huge man-eating sharks, luckily also dead.
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Original: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible for the successful creation and delivery of the company's product to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
Revised: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible creating creation creation and delivery of the company's product to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
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Original: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible for the successful creation and delivery of the company's product to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
Revised: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible for the successful creation and delivery of the company's weapons to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
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Original: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible creating creation creation and delivery of the company's weapons to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
Revised: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible for the successful creation and delivery of the company's weapons to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
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Original: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible creating creation creation and delivery of the company's weapons to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
Revised: Software In software development, a technical director is typically responsible creating creation creation and delivery of the company's product to the marketplace by managing technical risks and opportunities;
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Original:  == Television == The technical director works in a production control room of a television studio and operates the video switcher and associated devices as well as serving as the chief of the television crew.
Revised:  Television The technical director works in a production control room of a television studio and operates the video switcher and associated devices as well as serving as the chief of the television crew.
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Original:  It is the TD's job to ensure all positions are manned and all equipment and facilities are checked out and ready  the recording session or live broadcast begins.
Revised:  It is the TD's job to ensure all positions are manned and all equipment and facilities are checked out and ready before the recording session or live broadcast begins.
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Original:  '''Italic text The terminology in the UK differs in some respects from the above description: The production control room is called a "gallery", a mobile production truck is called an "OB van" or a "scanner" (a BBC term).
Revised:  The terminology in the UK differs in some respects from the above description: The production control room is called a "gallery", a mobile production truck is called an "OB van" or a "scanner" (a BBC term).
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Original: A technical director (TD) is usually a senior technical person within e.g. a software company, engineering firm, film studio, theatrical company or television studio.
Revised: A technical director (TD) is usually a senior technical person within e.g. a software company, engineering firm, film studio, theatre company or television studio.
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Original:  This person usually possesses the highest level of skill within a specific technical field.
Revised:  This person usually has the highest level of skill within a specific technical field.
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Original:  For a remote broadcast outside of the studio, the TD will perform the same duties in a mobile production truck.
Revised:  For a remote broadcast outside the studio, the TD will perform the same duties in a mobile production truck.
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Original: "Technical director" can also refer to the in-house chief designer or master carpenter for a smaller theater company.
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Original: Film and games In visual effects (VFX) (Industrial Light and Magic, Sony Pictures Imageworks), feature animation (Pixar, Dreamworks Animation) and game development (Naughty Dog), a technical director's responsibilities vary from studio to studio and as such, the term is not very well defined.
Revised: Film In visual effects (VFX) (Industrial Light and Magic, Sony Pictures Imageworks), feature animation (Pixar, Dreamworks Animation) and game development (Naughty Dog), a technical director's responsibilities vary from studio to studio and as such, the term is not very well defined.
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Original:  Categorization of technical directors in film and games Frequently, the role of a TD is more precisely defined.
Revised:  Categorization of technical directors in film Frequently, the role of a TD is more precisely defined.
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Original:  He migrated to Pakistan in 1947 from his home town of Muzaffarnagar in India’s Uttar Pradesh state.
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Original:  An exhibition of his best photo pictures was organised in 2003 by the Pakistan National Council of the Arts . Category:Muhajir people Category:People from Muzaffarnagar Category:Pakistani photographers Category:Pakistani Zaydis Category: 1930 births Category:2006 deat
Revised:  is a Pakistani social activist and a student of class 10th. He is a man of his word and does good things towards his society and for his homeland. Mr. Zaidi is diligent and hardworking activist and doing efforts day in and day out for the youth of Pakistan . Category:Muhajir people Category:People from Muzaffarnagar Category:Pakistani photographers Category:Pakistani Zaydis Category: 1930 births Category:2006 deat
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Original: Mr Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his extraordinary contribution to the profession of photo journalism.
Revised:  Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his extraordinary contribution to the profession of photo journalism.
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Original:  He made his mark during his stints with the Daily Jang in Rawalpindi and later with the Pakistan Times and daily Musawat.
Revised:  He made his mark working with the Daily Jang in Rawalpindi and later with the Pakistan Times and daily Musawat.
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Original:  He had also been the personal photographer of the late Zulfikar Ali Bhutto and Benazir Bhutto when they held the office of prime minister.
Revised:  He was also the personal photographer of the late Zulfikar Ali Bhutto and Benazir Bhutto when they held the office of prime minister.
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Original:  Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his extraordinary contribution to the profession of photo journalism . Some of his best pictures related to the period of President Ayub Khan, Pakistan’s 1965 war with India, the 1970 elections, Mr Bhutto’s tenure as prime minister, the 1972 Shimla peace accord between Pakistan and India and the 1974 Islamic summit conference held in Lahore.
Revised:  Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his contribution to the profession of photo journalism . Some of his best pictures related to the period of President Ayub Khan, Pakistan’s 1965 war with India, the 1970 elections, Mr Bhutto’s tenure as prime minister, the 1972 Shimla peace accord between Pakistan and India and the 1974 Islamic summit conference held in Lahore.
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Original:  Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his extraordinary contribution to the profession of photo journalism . Some of his best pictures related to the period of President Ayub Khan, Pakistan’s 1965 war with India, the 1970 elections, Mr Bhutto’s tenure as prime minister, the 1972 Shimla peace accord between Pakistan and India and the 1974 Islamic summit conference held in Lahore.
Revised:  Zaidi was given the President’s Pride of Performance award in 1991 for his extraordinary contribution to the profession of photojournalism . Some of his best pictures related to the period of President Ayub Khan, Pakistan’s 1965 war with India, the 1970 elections, Mr Bhutto’s tenure as prime minister, the 1972 Shimla peace accord between Pakistan and India and the 1974 Islamic summit conference held in Lahore.
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Original:  An exhibition of his best photo pictures was organised in 2003 by the Pakistan National Council of the Arts.
Revised:  An exhibition of his photographs was organised in 2003 by the Pakistan National Council of the Arts.
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Original: Later Years In 1960 she became the chairwoman of the new party formed with the merger of the Forward Bloc (Subhasist) and the Praja Socialist Party but was disappointed with its working.
Revised: Later years In 1960 she became the chairwoman of the new party formed with the merger of the Forward Bloc (Subhasist) and the Praja Socialist Party but was disappointed with its working.
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Original: Leela Roy née Nag ( ;
Revised: Leela Roy née Nag ( 
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Original:  2 October 1900 – 11 June 1970), was a progressive woman Indian politician and reformer, and a close associate of Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose.
Revised:  2 October 1900 – 11 June 1970), was a progressive Indian woman politician and reformer, and a close associate of Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose.
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Original: Leela Roy née Nag (2 October 1900 – 11 June 1970), was a progressive Indian woman politician and reformer, and a close associate of Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose.
Revised: Leela Roy (2 October 1900 – 11 June 1970), was a progressive Indian woman politician and reformer, and a close associate of Netaji Subhash Chandra Bose.
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Original: Hydrazine is highly toxic unless handled in solution as e.g. , hydrazine hydrate (). , the world hydrazine hydrate market amounted to $350 million.
Revised: Hydrazine is highly toxic unless handled in solution as , for example , hydrazine hydrate (). , the world hydrazine hydrate market amounted to $350 million.
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Original:  Other variants of hydrazine that are used as rocket fuel are monomethylhydrazine, (CH3)NH(NH2) ( also known as MMH  ), and unsymmetrical dimethylhydrazine, (CH3)2N(NH2) ( also known as UDMH  ).
Revised:  Other variants of hydrazine that are used as rocket fuel are monomethylhydrazine, (CH3)NH(NH2) , also known as MMH ), and unsymmetrical dimethylhydrazine, (CH3)2N(NH2) ( also known as UDMH ).
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Original:  Other variants of hydrazine that are used as rocket fuel are monomethylhydrazine, (CH3)NH(NH2) ( also known as MMH  ), and unsymmetrical dimethylhydrazine, (CH3)2N(NH2) ( also known as UDMH  ).
Revised:  Other variants of hydrazine that are used as rocket fuel are monomethylhydrazine, (CH3)NH(NH2) ( also known as MMH ), and unsymmetrical dimethylhydrazine, (CH3)2N(NH2) , also known as UDMH ).
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Original: Chlorine-based oxidations In the Olin Raschig process, chlorine-based oxidants oxidize ammonia without the presence of a ketone.
Revised: Chlorine-based oxidations The Olin Raschig process, chlorine-based oxidants oxidize ammonia without the presence of a ketone.
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Original:  Hydrazine is produced in the Olin-Raschig process from sodium hypochlorite (the active ingredient in many bleaches) and ammonia , a process announced in 1907.
Revised:  first announced in 1907, produces hydrazine from sodium hypochlorite (the active ingredient in many bleaches) and ammonia , a process announced in 1907.
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Original:  This in turn inhibits gastric motility and the secretion of gastric acid (HCl) .1
Revised:  This in turn inhibits gastric motility and the secretion of gastric acid (HCl) .
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Original:  The enterogastric reflex is stimulated in the duodenum by a pH of 3-4 and in the stomach by a pH of 1.5  . Upon initiation of the reflex, the release of gastrin by G-cells in the antrum of the stomach is shut off.
Revised:  The enterogastric reflex is stimulated in the duodenum by a pH of 3-4 in the duodenum and by a pH of 1.5 . Upon initiation of the reflex, the release of gastrin by G-cells in the antrum of the stomach is shut off.
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Original:  The enterogastric reflex is stimulated in the duodenum by a pH of 3-4 and in the stomach by a pH of 1.5  . Upon initiation of the reflex, the release of gastrin by G-cells in the antrum of the stomach is shut off.
Revised:  The enterogastric reflex is stimulated in the duodenum by a pH of 3-4 and in the stomach by a pH of 1.5 in the stomach . Upon initiation of the reflex, the release of gastrin by G-cells in the antrum of the stomach is shut off.
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Original:  Emptying inhibitory factors The stomach's contents are inhibited from emptying into the small intestine by: duodenal acidic pH duodenal distension duodenal hypertonicity sympathetic stimulation intense pain increased osmolarity of gastric chyme
Revised:  Emptying inhibitory factors The stomach's contents are inhibited from emptying into the small intestine by: duodenal distension duodenal acidic pH duodenal hypertonicity sympathetic stimulation intense pain increased osmolarity of gastric chyme
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Original: Geriatric care management (also known as " Aging Life Care™," " elder care management", "senior health care management" and "professional care management") is the process of planning and coordinating care of the elderly and others with physical and/or mental impairments to meet their long term care needs, improve their quality of life, and maintain their independence for as long as possible.
Revised: Geriatric care management (also known as " elder care management", "senior health care management" and "professional care management") is the process of planning and coordinating care of the elderly and others with physical and/or mental impairments to meet their long term care needs, improve their quality of life, and maintain their independence for as long as possible.
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Original: External links National Association of Professional Geriatric Care Managers National Academy of Certified Care Managers Florida Geriatric Care Managers Association National Care Planning Council Florida Care Planning Coulcil Custom Care Management New York Times blog The Thin Edge of Dignity Moving presentation about one man's experience in an assisted living facility.
Revised: External links National Association of Professional Geriatric Care Managers National Academy of Certified Care Managers Florida Geriatric Care Managers Association National Care Planning Council Florida Care Planning Coulcil New York Times blog The Thin Edge of Dignity Moving presentation about one man's experience in an assisted living facility.
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Original: Geriatric care management (also known as "elder care management", "senior health care management" and "professional care management") is the process of planning and coordinating care of the elderly and others with physical and/or mental impairments to meet their long term care needs, improve their quality of life, and maintain their independence for as long as possible.
Revised: Geriatric care management is the process of planning and coordinating care of the elderly and others with physical and/or mental impairments to meet their long term care needs, improve their quality of life, and maintain their independence for as long as possible.
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Original: Miloš Jakeš (12 August 1922Profile of Miloš Jakeš – 10 July 2020) was a Czech communist politician.
Revised: Miloš Jakeš (12 August 1922 – 10 July 2020) was a Czech communist politician.
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Original:  He was the founder secretary of the Eastern India Motion Pictures Association EIMPA official website in Calcutta, India - a fraternity of film personnel which is an interface between the entertainment industry of eastern India and the Government.
Revised:  He was the founder secretary of the Eastern India Motion Pictures Association in Calcutta, India - a fraternity of film personnel which is an interface between the entertainment industry of eastern India and the Government.
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Original:  His interactions with many a revolutionary (due to his father's involvement with the Congress and the Satyagraha movement at Raigunj), the explosive air of the times, and the inspiration from a famous alumni (The Oaten Affair - Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose assaulted Prof Oaten due to the latter's derogatory comment on Indians ) Subhas Chandra Bose assaults Oaten, 1916 probably drove him to antagonize an Indian-loathing teacher at Scottish Church College, and follow Bose's suit.
Revised:  His interactions with many a revolutionary (due to his father's involvement with the Congress and the Satyagraha movement at Raigunj), the explosive air of the times, and the inspiration from a famous alumni (The Oaten Affair - Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose assaulted Prof Oaten due to the latter's derogatory comment on Indians ) probably drove him to antagonize an Indian-loathing teacher at Scottish Church College, and follow Bose's suit.
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Original:  Kolkata Mayors : KMC Out of his literary inclinations, he associated with literary conferences and Bengali literature fora.
Revised:  Out of his literary inclinations, he associated with literary conferences and Bengali literature fora.
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Original:  A Bengali folk rhyme Bengali folk rhyme captures this World War II event: Sa-re-ga-ma-pa-dha-ni [Do re me fa so la ti] Bom(b) phelechhe Japani, the Japanese have dropped a bomb Bomer modhye keute shap There is a cobra in the bombs British bole bapre-bap.
Revised:  A Bengali folk rhyme captures this World War II event: Sa-re-ga-ma-pa-dha-ni [Do re me fa so la ti] Bom(b) phelechhe Japani, the Japanese have dropped a bomb Bomer modhye keute shap There is a cobra in the bombs British bole bapre-bap.
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