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Original:  After quit from Home Affairs, he joined with the fifth season of eKasi: Our Stories and played the role  "Tata".
Revised:  After quit from Home Affairs, he joined with the fifth season of eKasi: Our Stories and played the role of "Tata".
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Original:  In 2014, he played the role  "Bab' Jacob" in the eighth season of soapie Soul City.
Revised:  In 2014, he played the role of "Bab' Jacob" in the eighth season of soapie Soul City.
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Original:  In 2016, he joined with season two of SABC1 sitcom Sgudi 'Snaysi and played the role  "Derek".
Revised:  In 2016, he joined season two of SABC1 sitcom Sgudi 'Snaysi and played the role "Derek".
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Original:  In 2016, he joined with season two of SABC1 sitcom Sgudi 'Snaysi and played the role  "Derek".
Revised:  In 2016, he joined with season two of SABC1 sitcom Sgudi 'Snaysi and played the role of "Derek".
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Original:  In 2017, he played the supportive role  "Rev Phiri" in the SABC2 drama series Bone of My Bones.
Revised:  In 2017, he played the supportive role of "Rev Phiri" in the SABC2 drama series Bone of My Bones.
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Original:  In 2019, he appeared in the 1Magic thriller serial iThemba with the role  "Tat'
Revised:  In 2019, he appeared in the 1Magic thriller serial iThemba with the role of "Tat'
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft  .
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft .
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft  .
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft .
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft  .
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft .
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft  .
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 November 2021 (UTC):6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth Orbit :14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth Orbit :14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, only by naming their main project and their space craft only .
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Original:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body, so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system would not count here anymore.
Revised:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body, so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
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Original:  Orbit Date (UTC)from Locationchangeto LocationMain ProjectSpace CraftProviderHumans totalrecordsref note9  Nov 2021ISS- 4Gulf of MexicoExchange of ISS crewEndeavourSpaceX617 Oct 2021ISS- 3Kazakh Steppe“Challenge”
Revised:  Orbit Date (UTC)from Locationchangeto LocationMain ProjectSpace CraftProviderHumans totalrecord notes Nov 2021ISS- 4Gulf of MexicoExchange of ISS crewEndeavourSpaceX617 Oct 2021ISS- 3Kazakh Steppe“Challenge”
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos 1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan center + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong stationbegin of 6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic east of FloridaInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan centerreturn after 3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021KSC Florida + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time max This list may be extended further into the past.
Revised:  film-crewSoyuz MS-18Roscosmos1015 Oct 2021Jiuquan SLC + 3Tiangong space station6-months stayShenzhou 13CMSA135 Oct 2021Baikonur Cosmodrome + 3ISS“Challenge” film-crewSoyuz MS-19Roscosmos1018 Sep 2021its own 585 km orbit- 4Atlantic ocean, USAInspiration4ResilienceSpaceX717 Sep 2021Tiangong space station- 3Jiuquan SLC3-months stayShenzhou 12CMSA1116 Sep 2021Florida KSC + 4its own 585 km orbitInspiration4Dragon ResilienceSpaceX14all time maximum This list may be extended further into the past.
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
Revised: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
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Original: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, called geocentric orbit, by naming their main project and their space craft only.
Revised: Humans in Earth orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC) :6Maximum of humans ever at once in Earth orbit:14Maximum of humans 2021 at once in Earth orbit:14 This page is intended to count humans who are or were in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit. It is naming their main project and their space craft only.
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Original:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body , so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
Revised:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as long as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body , so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body , so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
Revised:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body . Hence a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body , so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system might not count here anymore.
Revised:  Any orbit around Earth is counted here as log as the barycenter of the orbit is inside of the Earth's body , so a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system will not count here anymore.
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Original: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
Revised: Today by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
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Original: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
Revised: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page counts the human population in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
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Original: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, also called Earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
Revised: 6people in orbit by end of 9 Nov 2021 (UTC)14humans had been all-time maximum14humans had been 2021 maximum This page is intended to count humans in an orbit around Earth, also called earth orbit or geocentric orbit.
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Original:  It is naming their main project and their space craft only.
Revised:  It is naming their main project and the flight name only.
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Original:  Hence a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system will not count here anymore . Humans on the way to Earth orbit are counted here only after reaching their first stable Earth orbit, and then as positive in the column "change" , increasing the total amount .
Revised:  Hence a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system will not count here anymore . Humans on the way to Earth orbit are counted as positive in the column "change" , increasing the total amount .
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Original:  Hence a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system will not count here anymore . Humans on the way to Earth orbit are counted here only after reaching their first stable Earth orbit, and then as positive in the column "change" , increasing the total amount .
Revised:  Hence a far out orbit around the Earth-Moon system will not count here anymore . Humans on the way to Earth orbit are counted here only after reaching their first stable Earth orbit, and then as positive in the column "change" at the time reaching their first stable Earth orbit .
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Original:  Once people reach a transfer orbit that leaves Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" , decreasing the total amount .
Revised:  Once reaching a transfer orbit that leaves Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" , decreasing the total amount .
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Original:  Once people reach a transfer orbit that leaves Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" , decreasing the total amount .
Revised:  Once people reach a transfer orbit that is leaving Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" , decreasing the total amount .
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Original:  Once people reach a transfer orbit that leaves Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" , decreasing the total amount .
Revised:  Once people reach a transfer orbit that leaves Earth orbit, no matter it is to the ground or to a transfer away from Earth, they appear as minus in the column "change" .
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Original:  Hence, humans on a direct flight from Earth ground to Moon or a Moon orbit will not be counted here, unless the craft in-between went into a stable Earth orbit at least for a short moment whith propulsion being off.
Revised:  Hence, humans on a direct flight from Earth ground to Moon or a Moon orbit will not be counted here, unless the craft in-between went into a stable Earth orbit at least for a short moment after propulsion being turned off.
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Original:  Orbit Date (UTC) from Locationchangeto LocationMain ProjectSpace CraftProviderHumans totalrecord notes references+ Table of population growth and decline -
Revised:  Orbit date (UTC) from Locationchangeto LocationMain ProjectSpace CraftProviderHumans totalrecord notes references+ Table of population growth and decline -
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Original: Personal life Mlengana was born in 28 September 1962 in Port St. John's, Eastern Cape, South Africa.
Revised: Personal life Mlengana was born on 28 September 1962 in Port St. John's, Eastern Cape, South Africa.
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Original:  He was dropped out of school in grade 11 because of teenage pregnancy.
Revised:  She dropped out of school in grade 11 because of teenage pregnancy.
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Original:  The she started to sell clothes and groceries for living.
Revised:  Then she started to sell clothes and groceries for living.
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Original:  After the divorce, she had depression, but did not treated.
Revised:  After the divorce, she had depression, but was not treated.
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Original:  In 2014, she made auditions for a new role in the third season of popular SABC1 soap opera Skeem Saam.
Revised:  In 2014, she had auditions for a new role in the third season of popular SABC1 soap opera Skeem Saam.
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Original:  After that, she got the opportunity to play the role  "Sis Ouma" in the soapie.
Revised:  After that, she got the opportunity to play the role of "Sis Ouma" in the soapie.
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Original:  In that way, Jackson arrived to the National Congress in Valparaíso arround 01:25 AM, moment where he quickly voted.
Revised:  In that way, Jackson arrived to the National Congress in Valparaíso arround 01:25 AM, moment which he quickly voted.
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Original: Prince Tungi (née Sitiveni Polu Le'uligana ;
Revised:  Sitiveni Polu Le'uligana ;
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