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Original:  In 1999 his work in Baker v. Vermont  led to the creation of civil unions , and since 2002, when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
Revised:  In 1999 he worked on Baker v. Vermont led to the creation of civil unions , and since 2002, when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
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Original:  In 1999 his work in Baker v. Vermont  led to the creation of civil unions , and since 2002, when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
Revised:  In 1999 his work in Baker v. Vermont led to the creation of civil unions ; and since 2002, when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
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Original:  In 1999 he worked on Baker v. Vermont, the case that led to the creation of civil unions  ;
Revised:  In 1999 he contributed to Baker v. Vermont, the case that led to the creation of civil unions ;
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Original:  In 1999 he contributed to Baker v. Vermont, the case that led to the creation of civil unions;
Revised:  In 1999 , Wolfson contributed to Baker v. Vermont, the case that led to the creation of civil unions;
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Original:  he was co-counsel in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to gay marriage in Massachusetts;
Revised:  advised the lead attorneys in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to gay marriage in Massachusetts;
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Original:  he was co-counsel in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to gay marriage in Massachusetts;
Revised:  he was co-counsel in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to marriage for gay people in Massachusetts;
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Original:  and since 2002 , when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
Revised:  and since 2003 , when he founded the primary umbrella organization coordinating the efforts to win marriage for gay people, Freedom to Marry, Wolfson has played a role in every gay marriage case in the United States.
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Original: EW:  ' I think ending the different sex restriction on who can marry and ending sex discrimination in marriage would significantly help people who are transgender, people who are gay and people who fall in love with somebody of the same sex.
Revised: EW: '' ' I think ending the different sex restriction on who can marry and ending sex discrimination in marriage would significantly help people who are transgender, people who are gay and people who fall in love with somebody of the same sex.
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Original:  advised the lead attorneys in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to marriage for gay people in Massachusetts;
Revised:  advised the lead attorneys in Goodridge v. Department of Public Health, the case that led to same-sex marriage in Massachusetts;
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Original:  And others always know when they see Evan coming what it is that he is going to ask for .
Revised:  And others always know when they see Evan coming what it is that he wants .
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Original:  The second important change was ending government interference in personal choices, such as whether or not to engage in sex with a married partner and whether to use contraception the Supreme Court's Griswold decision%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Many opponents of gay people’s right to marry have never accepted that fundamental principle as a matter of law, even though they exert it in their own life, often hypocritically, behind closed doors.
Revised:  the Supreme Court's Griswold decision%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Many opponents of gay people’s right to marry have never accepted that fundamental principle as a matter of law, even though they exert it in their own life, often hypocritically, behind closed doors.
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Original:  The second important change was ending government interference in personal choices, such as whether or not to engage in sex with a married partner and whether to use contraception the Supreme Court's Griswold decision%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Many opponents of gay people’s right to marry have never accepted that fundamental principle as a matter of law, even though they exert it in their own life, often hypocritically, behind closed doors.
Revised:  The second important change was ending government interference in personal choices, such as whether or not to engage in sex with a married partner and whether to use contraception %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . Many opponents of gay people’s right to marry have never accepted that fundamental principle as a matter of law, even though they exert it in their own life, often hypocritically, behind closed doors.
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Original:  Domestic partnerships and civil unionsDS  : Why are domestic partnerships or civil unions not adequate?
Revised:  Domestic partnerships and civil unions : Why are domestic partnerships or civil unions not adequate?
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Original:  Domestic partnerships and civil unionsDS  : Why are domestic partnerships or civil unions not adequate?
Revised:  Domestic partnerships and civil unionsDS DS : Why are domestic partnerships or civil unions not adequate?
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Original:  EW: ' I think ending the different sex restriction on who can marry and ending sex discrimination in marriage would significantly help people who are transgender, people who are gay and people who fall in love with somebody of the same sex.
Revised:  EW: I think ending the different sex restriction on who can marry and ending sex discrimination in marriage would significantly help people who are transgender, people who are gay and people who fall in love with somebody of the same sex.
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Original:  So ending discrimination in marriage would help all '' of us, but of course ending discrimination in marriage doesn’t solve every problem for everybody.
Revised:  So ending discrimination in marriage would help all of us, but of course ending discrimination in marriage doesn’t solve every problem for everybody.
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Original:  The more important role Freedom to Marry plays is to remind all of us in this movement that winning a lawsuit, winning a legislative battle, winning a ballot measure and winning the hearts and minds of the public are not things to be done in an isolated fashion. we need to integrate all the work of what Martin Luther King called the methodologies of social change.
Revised:  The more important role Freedom to Marry plays is to remind all of us in this movement that winning a lawsuit, winning a legislative battle, winning a ballot measure and winning the hearts and minds of the public are not things to be done in an isolated fashion. We need to integrate all the work of what Martin Luther King called the methodologies of social change.
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Original:  It became the first race on this circuit since 1977, when James Hunt won the race for McLaren-Ford    
Revised:  It became the first race on this circuit since 1977, when James Hunt won the race for McLaren-Ford . 
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Original: Adrian Sutil done his best for Spyker, finishing ahead of both Hondas.
Revised: Adrian Sutil did his best for Spyker, finishing ahead of both Hondas.
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Original:  When the pace car finally turned of the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly made a gap from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and so a heavier car.
Revised:  When the pace car finally turned off the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly made a gap from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and so a heavier car.
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Original:  It became the first race on this circuit since 1977, when James Hunt won the race for McLaren-Ford.
Revised:  It was the first race on this circuit since 1977, when James Hunt won the race for McLaren-Ford.
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Original:  A rainy and foggy weekend at Fuji appeared to be very hard for all drivers as the race held longer then expected and the drivers have to be more concentrated due to severe weather conditions.
Revised:  A rainy and foggy weekend at Fuji appeared to be very hard for all drivers as the race ran longer then expected and the drivers have to be more concentrated due to severe weather conditions.
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Original:  A rainy and foggy weekend at Fuji appeared to be very hard for all drivers as the race held longer then expected and the drivers have to be more concentrated due to severe weather conditions.
Revised:  A rainy and foggy weekend at Fuji appeared to be very hard for all drivers as the race held longer then expected and the drivers have to concentrate more due to severe weather conditions.
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Original:  Both Ferrari drivers, who managed to get the second row on the starting grid in the saturday qualifying session were out of the game on the first laps due to their tyre selection mistake - drivers were forced to change to extreme wet tyres after a few driving errors.
Revised:  Both Ferrari drivers, who managed to get the second row on the starting grid in the Saturday qualifying session were out of the game on the first laps due to their tyre selection mistake - drivers were forced to change to extreme wet tyres after a few driving errors.
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Original:  When the pace car finally turned off the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly made a gap from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and so a heavier car.
Revised:  When the pace car finally turned off the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly got away from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and so a heavier car.
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Original:  When the pace car finally turned off the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly made a gap from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and so a heavier car.
Revised:  When the pace car finally turned off the lights giving the drivers a clear road Hamilton quickly made a gap from his teammate, Fernando Alonso, who had more fuel on board and thus had a heavier car.
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Original:  Alonso was out after 41 laps due to a driving accident.
Revised:  Alonso would be eliminated after 41 laps due to a driving accident.
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Original:  Alonso was out after 41 laps due to a driving accident.
Revised:  Alonso was out after 41 laps in a driving accident.
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Original:  Heikki Kovalainen driving for Renault finally leads to a first podium finish for the team in this season,  Finn managed to get to the second place.
Revised:  Heikki Kovalainen driving for Renault finally leads to a first podium finish for the team in this season, the Finn managed to get to the second place.
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Original:  Heikki Kovalainen driving for Renault finally leads to a first podium finish for the team in this season,  Finn managed to get to the second place.
Revised:  Heikki Kovalainen driving for Renault finally leads to a first podium finish for the team in this season, Finn managed to get second place.
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Original:  On the dying laps of the race he masterly defended his position from Kimi Räikkönen, who returned to the battle for podium after the Ferrari start failure.
Revised:  On the final laps of the race he masterly defended his position from Kimi Räikkönen, who returned to the battle for podium after the Ferrari start failure.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber both nearly finished on the podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between their Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull sponsored vehicles took them out of the race . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars did well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finishing in 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th places . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after some dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, causing the Polish driver to be rolled back to the 7th place.
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Original:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between  Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th  . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to the 7th place.
Revised:  Sebastian Vettel and Mark Webber had a high chances to be on a podium, but a collision between Toro Rosso and Red Bull spoiled their chances . Renault-engined cars done well in the race with David Coulthard and Giancarlo Fisichella finished 4th and 5th . Robert Kubica got a drive through the pit-lane penalty after his dangerous driving and a collision with Hamilton, Polish driver rolled back to 7th place.
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Original:  Felipe Massa took 6th place for Ferrari in the hard battle with Kubica upon the finish line.
Revised:  Felipe Massa took 6th place for Ferrari in his hard battle with Kubica upon the finish line.
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Original:  Felipe Massa took 6th place for Ferrari in the hard battle with Kubica upon the finish line.
Revised:  Felipe Massa took 6th place for Ferrari in the hard battle with Kubica in the sprint to the finish line.
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Original:  Vitantonio Liuzzi closed the top eight for Toro Rosso.
Revised:  Vitantonio Liuzzi rounded out the top eight for Toro Rosso.
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Original:  It was confirmed that Spyker will change owners in the next season to be the first India national Formula One team in history.
Revised:  It was confirmed that Spyker will change owners next season becoming the first Indian national Formula One team in history.
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Original: Vitantonio Liuzzi rounded out the top eight for Toro Rosso, but was later penalised for overtakingAdrian Sutil under a yellow flag on lap 55 of Sunday’s race.
Revised: Vitantonio Liuzzi rounded out the top eight for Toro Rosso, but was later penalised for overtaking Adrian Sutil under a yellow flag on lap 55 of Sunday’s race.
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Original:  Alex's bosy is already in Wales, and his funeral is scheduled for Monday
Revised:  Alex's body is already in Wales, and his funeral is scheduled for Monday
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Original: Jones, who's family flew to Thailand in order to be with her, never regained consciousness after the crash, which left her in critical condition with burns across more than 50\% of her body.
Revised: Jones, whose family flew to Thailand in order to be with her, never regained consciousness after the crash, which left her in critical condition with burns across more than 50\% of her body.
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Original:  Iran's parliament also cited the CIA's role in training the mujahideen during the Soviet Union's occupation of Afghanistan  
Revised:  Iran's parliament also cited the CIA's role in training the mujahideen during the Soviet Union's occupation of Afghanistan . 
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Original: On Saturday, Iran's parliament approved a nonbinding resolution designating the U.S. Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
Revised: On Saturday, Iran's parliament approved a non-binding resolution designating the U.S. Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
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Original: On Saturday, Iran's parliament approved a nonbinding resolution designating the U.S. Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
Revised: On Saturday, Iran's parliament approved a nonbinding resolution designating the United States Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) and the U.S. Army as "terrorist organizations", in what is seen as a largely symbolic move.
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Original:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a simlar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, and Iraq , and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay  and Abu Ghraib  .
Revised:  Earlier in the week, the U.S. Senate had passed a resolution giving a similar designation to Iran's Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps . "Terrorist" acts cited by Iran's parliament included the U.S. Army's use of atomic bombs against Japan in World War II, its use of depleted uranium munitions in the Balkans, Afghanistan, and Iraq , and its use of torture against prisoners in Guantanamo Bay and Abu Ghraib .
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