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Original:  "I support the understandings of what she's saying", he said, referring to a previous interview with Archer which revealed an apparent split between Russell Means and other members of the Lakota Freedom Delegation.
Revised:  "I support the understandings of what she's saying", he said, referring to a previous interview with Archer which revealed an apparent split between and other members of the Lakota Freedom Delegation.
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Original:  With regard to Russell Means, who has declared himself Chief Facilitator of the Republic of Lakotah , he said, "I've worked with my uncle Russell Means in positive venues.
Revised:  With regard to Russell Means, who has declared himself Chief Facilitator of the , he said, "I've worked with my uncle Russell Means in positive venues.
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Original:  It was "genocide", he said, that of all the races of humanity, American Indians are not represented at the United Nations .
Revised:  It was "genocide", he said, that of all the races of humanity, American Indians are not represented at the .
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Original: Craig Bryson, spokesman for the Road Commission for Oakland County in Detroit , United States, reports problems on unpaved roads as well.
Revised: Craig Bryson, spokesman for the Road Commission for Oakland County in Michigan , United States, reports problems on unpaved roads as well.
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Original:  China's military, the People's Liberation Army (PLA), has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by US military experts.
Revised: The People's Republic of China's military, the People's Liberation Army (PLA), has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by US military experts.
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Original: The People's Republic of China's military, the People's Liberation Army (PLA) , has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by US military experts.
Revised: The People's Liberation Army (PLA) , has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by US military experts.
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Original: The People's Republic of China's military, the People's Liberation Army (PLA) , has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by US military experts.
Revised: The People's Republic of China's military, the People's Liberation Army (PLA) , has a plan to seize North Korea's nuclear weapons if it becomes necessary, says a report by American military experts.
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Original:  US military experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
Revised:  American military experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
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Original:  The report says that China would try and coordinate it's efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
Revised:  The report says that China would try and coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
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Original:  The report however goes on to state that China would intervene earlier if " he international community did not react in a timely manner as the internal order in North Korea deteriorated rapidly".
Revised:  The report however goes on to state that China would intervene earlier if " the international community did not react in a timely manner as the internal order in North Korea deteriorated rapidly".
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Original: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers  who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea  the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
Revised: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers , who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
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Original: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers  who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea  the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
Revised: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea , the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
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Original: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers  who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea  the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
Revised: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea the Chinese military would be dispatched to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
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Original: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers  who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea  the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons the North Korean military has developed over the past years.
Revised: CSIS experts have been talking to Chinese military researchers who claimed that in the case of instability in neighboring North Korea the Chinese military would dispatch the military to obtain the nuclear weapons developed by North Korea over the past years.
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Original:  The report says that  China would try and coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
Revised:  The report says that in such a case, China would try and coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
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Original:  The report says that  China would try and coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
Revised:  The report says that China would try to coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
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Original:  The report says that  China would try and coordinate its efforts in such a case with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
Revised:  The report says that China would try and coordinate its efforts with the international community, primarily the United Nations.
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Original:  The report however goes on to state that China would intervene earlier if "the international community did not react in a timely manner as the internal order in North Korea deteriorated rapidly".
Revised:  However, the report goes on to state that China would intervene earlier if "the international community did not react in a timely manner as the internal order in North Korea deteriorated rapidly".
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Original:  Jiang Yu, a spokeswomen for the Foreign Ministry of the People's Republic of China , one of the five nations on the UN Security Council and a legitimate nuclear power in accordance with the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty from 1968, said she was unaware of such plans, she also did not deny the existence of such a plan.
Revised:  Jiang Yu, a spokeswomen for the Foreign Ministry of the People's Republic of China said she was unaware of such plans, she also did not deny the existence of such a plan.
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Original:  Jiang Yu, a spokeswomen for the Foreign Ministry of the People's Republic of China , one of the five nations on the UN Security Council and a legitimate nuclear power in accordance with the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty from 1968, said she was unaware of such plans, she also did not deny the existence of such a plan.
Revised:  Jiang Yu, a spokeswomen for the Foreign Ministry of the People's Republic of China , one of the five nations on the UN Security Council and a legitimate nuclear power in accordance with the Nuclear Non-Proliferation Treaty from 1968, said she was unaware of such plans, but did not deny the existence of such a plan.
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Original: The "pensioners", as seniors are often referred to in Britain , spend most of the year saving for Christmas gifts.
Revised: The pensioners , spend most of the year saving for Christmas gifts.
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Original: The pensioners , spend most of the year saving for Christmas gifts.
Revised: The pensioners spend most of the year saving for Christmas gifts.
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Original:  It was like that scene in ' Pretty Woman, ' where the women on Rodeo Drive think Julia Roberts is going to shoplift.
Revised:  It was like that scene in Pretty Woman, ' where the women on Rodeo Drive think Julia Roberts is going to shoplift.
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Original:  It was like that scene in ' Pretty Woman, ' where the women on Rodeo Drive think Julia Roberts is going to shoplift.
Revised:  It was like that scene in ' Pretty Woman, where the women on Rodeo Drive think Julia Roberts is going to shoplift.
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Original:  They are broken hearted regarding "the morbidity of people watching" the breakdown  
Revised:  They are broken hearted regarding "the morbidity of people watching" the breakdown . 
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Original: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
Revised: A Midland, Michigan, USA newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
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Original: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
Revised: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly due a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
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Original: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
Revised: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder . When the envelope was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
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Original: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT on Tuesday .
Revised: A Midland, Michigan, United States of America newspaper was shut down briefly today after a suspicious letter with white powder suggested that the envelope might have contained the deadly poision anthrax was opened at the offices around 17:00 GMT Tuesday, the presence of powder aroused alarm the envelope might contain the deadly poision anthrax .
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Original:  The office, as well as restraunts and businesses around the downtown newspaper office were also quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
Revised:  The news office, along with restraunts and businesses around the downtown newspaper office were also quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
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Original:  The office, as well as restraunts and businesses around the downtown newspaper office were also quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
Revised:  The office, as well as restraunts and businesses near the downtown newspaper office were also quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
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Original:  The office, as well as restraunts and businesses around the downtown newspaper office were also quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
Revised:  The office, as well as restraunts and businesses around the downtown newspaper were quarantined as a safety precaution shortly after the letter's arrival.
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Original:  When the envelope was opened at the Midland Daily News offices around 17:00 GMT Tuesday, the presence of powder aroused alarm the envelope might contain the deadly poision anthrax.
Revised:  When the envelope was opened at the Midland Daily News offices around 17:00 GMT Tuesday, the presence of powder aroused alarm the envelope might contain the deadly poison anthrax.
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Original:  When the envelope was opened at the Midland Daily News offices around 17:00 GMT Tuesday, the presence of powder aroused alarm the envelope might contain the deadly poison anthrax.
Revised:  When the envelope was opened at the Midland Daily News offices around 17:00 GMT Tuesday, the presence of powder aroused alarm the envelope might contain the deadly disease anthrax.
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Original: For the past few months, National Geographic Kids (NGK) has been collecting used running shoes from across the country , in hopes of creating the world's longest chain of shoes.
Revised: For the past few months, National Geographic Kids (NGK) has been collecting used running shoes from across the United States , in hopes of creating the world's longest chain of shoes.
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Original:  NG KIDS / Set a Guinness World Record P.O. Box 98001 (RB) Washington, DC 20090-8001 
Revised:  NG KIDS / Set a Guinness World Record P.O. Box 98001 (RB) Washington, DC 20090-8001 United States of America
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Original: The People's Republic of China has , in what Reuters calls a surprising move, banned free plastic shopping bags in a move to take effect from June 1, 2008.
Revised: The People's Republic of China has banned free plastic shopping bags in a move to take effect from June 1, 2008.
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Original: Free plastic shopping bags are banned in China from June 1.
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Original: Following a discussion with Ehud Olmert, the Israeli Prime Minister  George Bush said he would provide pressure if necessary.
Revised: Following a discussion with Ehud Olmert, the Israeli Prime Minister , George Bush said he would provide pressure if necessary.
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Original:  Like President Bush, Israeli Prime Minister Ehoud Olmert kept his comments at the arrival ceremony broad in nature, avoiding any direct reference to issues related to the peace process.
Revised:  Like President Bush, Israeli Prime Minister Ehud Olmert kept his comments at the arrival ceremony broad in nature, avoiding any direct reference to issues related to the peace process.
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Original: It fell to Israeli President President Bush, Israel's largely ceremonialhead of state , to offer some tough talk.
Revised: It fell to Israeli President President Bush, who is considered by some to be largely ceremonial , to offer some tough talk.
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Original: It fell to Israeli President President Bush, Israel's largely ceremonialhead of state , to offer some tough talk.
Revised: It fell to Israeli President President Bush, Israel's largely ceremonialhead of state , to offer some tougher talk.
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Original:  Tickets became availible today at www.Lippupalvelu.fi  
Revised:  Tickets became availible today at www.Lippupalvelu.fi . 
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Original:  Blabbermouth reports that the film is expected to become an international success.
Revised:  The film is expected to become an international success.
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Original:  The film is expected to become an international success.
Revised:  Blabbermouth reports that the film is expected to become an international success.
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Original:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of  0.99 cents and 9.99 Euros , according to Times Online.
Revised:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of € 0.99 cents and 9.99 Euros , according to Times Online.
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Original:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of  0.99 cents and 9.99 Euros , according to Times Online.
Revised:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of 0.99 and € 9.99 Euros , according to Times Online.
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Original:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of  0.99 cents and 9.99 Euros , according to Times Online.
Revised:  At the moment songs are sold for £0.79 per song and £7.99 per album which after the price cut will on average be reduced to £0.74 and £7.48 to match the EU prices of 0.99 cents and 9.99 , according to Times Online.
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Original:  According to The Register  Apple will be demanding that the record labels lower their prices in the UK in respect to this forced price cut
Revised:  According to The Register , Apple will be demanding that the record labels lower their prices in the UK in respect to this forced price cut
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Original:  According to The Register, Apple will be demanding that the record labels lower their prices in the UK in respect to this forced price cut  
Revised:  According to The Register, Apple will be demanding that the record labels lower their prices in the UK in respect to this forced price cut . 
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Original:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of whom he was the biological father of three and raised all four of them as his own , into the water.
Revised:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of which he was the biological father of three and raised all four of them as his own , into the water.
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Original:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of whom he was the biological father of three and raised all four of them as his own , into the water.
Revised:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of whom he was the biological father of three , into the water.
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Original:  Luongs wife, Ngoc Phan, is at the family home that they shared which they shared with her mother.
Revised:  Luong's wife, Ngoc Phan, is at the family home that they shared which they shared with her mother.
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Original:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of which he was the biological father of three, into the water.
Revised:  The Associated Press say that the authorities believe that Dauphin Island Bridge is where Luong threw the four children, of which he was the biological father of three, into the water.
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Original: Lam Luong, a 37 year old shrimp fisherman from Irvington, Bayou La Batre, Alabama,  has confessed to throwing his four children off a 80 feet high bridge after a fight with his wife the day before.
Revised: Lam Luong, a 37 year old shrimp fisherman from Irvington, Bayou La Batre, Alabama, United States, has confessed to throwing his four children off a 80 feet high bridge after a fight with his wife the day before.
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Original:  Luong's wife, Ngoc Phan, is at the family home that they shared which they shared with her mother.
Revised:  Luong's wife, Ngoc Phan, is at the family home which they shared with her mother.
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Original:  Russia's highest court has judged that Tartars living in the federal state of Tatarstan may not apply the Latin alphabet to their language without permission from the federal government in Moscow.
Revised:  Russia's highest court has judged that Tatars living in the federal state of Tatarstan may not apply the Latin alphabet to their language without permission from the federal government in Moscow.
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Original:  The Tartars had instituted legal proceedings because their Turkic language differs greatly from Russian, so the BBC reports.
Revised:  The Tatars had instituted legal proceedings because their Turkic language differs greatly from Russian, so the BBC reports.
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Original:  The Tartars had instituted legal proceedings because their Turkic language differs greatly from Russian, so the BBC reports.
Revised:  The Tartars had instituted legal proceedings because their Turkic language differs greatly from Russian, the BBC reports.
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Original:  The Russian federal government has been cited to consider the use of a non-Cyrillic alphabet by federal states a ' separist tendency'.
Revised:  The Russian federal government has been cited to consider the use of a non-Cyrillic alphabet by federal states a ' 
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Original:  References BBC, November 16, 2004: Russian Court sticks to letter law%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Russ
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Original: The quake struck at 01:37 (UTC) and its epicenter was located 242 kilometers (151 miles) west, northwest of Barview , O. R..
Revised: The quake struck at 01:37 (UTC) and its epicenter was located 242 kilometers (151 miles) west, northwest of Barview .
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Original: Firefighters in Bandon report that they didn't even feel the trembler and police say that no one has yet called to report any quake related incidents.
Revised: Firefighters in Bandon report that they didn't even feel the temblor and police say that no one has yet called to report any quake related incidents.
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Original:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) a large preliminary magnitude 6.4 earthquake has struck off the coast of Oregon in the United States.
Revised:  According to the United States Geological Survey (USGS) , a preliminary magnitude 6.4 earthquake has struck off the coast of Oregon in the United States.
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Original: Firefighters in Bandon report that they didn't even feel the temblor and police say that no one has yet called to report any quake related incidents.
Revised: Firefighters in Bandon report that they didn't even feel the tremor and police say that no one has yet called to report any quake related incidents.
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