wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It is unclear how long this electoral delay will be  . Violent civil unrest  occurred across Pakistan following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto;
Revised:  It has not been stated how long this electoral delay will be . Violent civil unrest occurred across Pakistan following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto;
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Original:  It is unclear how long this electoral delay will be  . Violent civil unrest  occurred across Pakistan following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto;
Revised:  It is unclear how long this electoral delay will be . Violent civil unrest has occurred across Pakistan following the assassination of Pakistan People’s Party (PPP) leader Benazir Bhutto;
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Original: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the w: Kikiyu and Odinga by the w: Luo.
Revised: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the Kikiyu and Odinga by the w: Luo.
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Original: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the w: Kikiyu and Odinga by the w: Luo.
Revised: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the w: Kikiyu and Odinga by the Luo.
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Original:  His opinion was clear in a speech, in which he said that "there is no difference between him Mwai Kibaki%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% and Idi Amin and other military dictators who have seized power through the barrel of the gun.
Revised:  His opinion was clear in a speech, in which he said that "there is no difference between him %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% and Idi Amin and other military dictators who have seized power through the barrel of the gun.
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Original: Kibera, the slum in Nairobi  has been sealed off by riot police and paramilitary troops to contain violence.
Revised: Kibera, the slum in Nairobi , has been sealed off by riot police and paramilitary troops to contain violence.
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Original:  Odinga also announced that he wants a mass rally to take place later today in the main park of Nairobi.
Revised:  150px|Opposition leader Raila Odinga Odinga also announced that he wants a mass rally to take place later today in the main park of Nairobi.
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Original:  Odinga also announced that he wants a mass rally to take place later today in the main park of Nairobi.
Revised:  Odinga also announced that he wanted a mass rally to take place later today in the main park of Nairobi.
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Original:  Odinga also announced that he wants a mass rally to take place later today in the main park of Nairobi.
Revised:  Odinga also announced that he wants a mass rally to take place later in the day in the main park of Nairobi.
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Original:  The violence led to an announcement by Kenyan police which stated  any person caught outside their homes in the slums of Nairobi will be shot dead on the spot.
Revised:  The violence led to an announcement by Kenyan police which stated that any person caught outside their homes in the slums of Nairobi will be shot dead on the spot.
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Original:  In the riots some residents of Kenya who believed the vote was rigged took extreme .
Revised:  In the riots , some residents who believed the vote was rigged took extreme .
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Original:  For example houses have been burned down . Some people even had the intention of killing people
Revised:  For example houses have been burned down , and some people have had the intention of killing people
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Original:  For example houses have been burned down . Some people even had the intention of killing people
Revised:  For example houses have been burned down . Some people even had the intention of killing others
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Original: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the Kikiyu and Odinga by the Luo.
Revised: The clashes have been along tribal lines, with Kibaki backed by the Kikuyu and Odinga by the Luo.
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Original:  H5N1 has killed two other Egyptian women already this week, bringing the total dead of the virus in Egypt to ??   
Revised:  H5N1 has killed two other Egyptian women already this week, bringing the total dead of the virus in Egypt to ?? . 
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Original:  the United Nations health agency says that on December 24 a 50-year-old woman was hospitalised and remains in critical condition, whilst a chicken seller, 22, is recovering from the infection in intensive care  
Revised:  the United Nations health agency says that on December 24 a 50-year-old woman was hospitalised and remains in critical condition, whilst a chicken seller, 22, is recovering from the infection in intensive care . 
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Original:  Most of the cases, including the latest death, were females who had daily contact with chickens or turkeys, most keeping the animals in their back yards  
Revised:  Most of the cases, including the latest death, were females who had daily contact with chickens or turkeys, most keeping the animals in their back yards . 
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Original:  Egypt is one of the worst-hit non-Asian countries  .
Revised:  Egypt is one of the worst-hit non-Asian countries , due in part to a combination of it's location along the paths taken by many migratory birds and the fact that many people keep fowl close to their homes .
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Original:   Abdul Razzak was also accused of being a leader of anti-coalition forces, and of being a member of the Hezb-e-Islami Gulbuddin, an older militia, lead by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar , the politician who had been the last Prime Minister of Afghanistan, prior to ousting the last King of Afghanistan, and had become its first President in 1973.
Revised:  Abdul Razzak was also accused of being a leader of anti-coalition forces, and of being a member of the Hezb-e-Islami Gulbuddin, an older militia, lead by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar , the politician who had been the last Prime Minister of Afghanistan, prior to ousting the last King of Afghanistan, in 1973.
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Original:  During the civil war that followed the Soviet ouster, they acquired a reputation for ruthlessness  .
Revised:  This militia acquired a reputation for ruthlessness .
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Original:  In 1979 this militia split, has has been lead, since then, by by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar.
Revised:  In 1979 this militia split, and has been lead, since then, by by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar.
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Original:  In 1979 this militia split, has has been lead, since then, by by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar.
Revised:  In 1979 this militia split, has has been lead, since then, by Gulbuddin Hekmatyar.
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Original: Moore tried to assassinate Ford  by firing one shot at his head which missed because a bystander grabbed Moore's arms just seconds before she fired the gun.
Revised: Moore tried to assassinate Ford by firing one shot , which missed because a bystander grabbed Moore's arms just seconds before she fired the gun.
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Original:  The bullet missed hitting Ford  by inches.
Revised:  The bullet missed hitting Ford in the head by inches.
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Original:  Many believe that should it emerge that there were indeed doubts, the failure of the Prime Minister to inform the public of them constitutes a violation of trust - with Liberal Democrats claiming that the election must become a refurendum on Iraq and the trustworthiness of Mr Blair  
Revised:  Many believe that should it emerge that there were indeed doubts, the failure of the Prime Minister to inform the public of them constitutes a violation of trust - with Liberal Democrats claiming that the election must become a refurendum on Iraq and the trustworthiness of Mr Blair . 
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Original:  This stance has been echoed by the head of the civil service, Sir Andrew Turnbull, in his words to the public administration select committee  
Revised:  This stance has been echoed by the head of the civil service, Sir Andrew Turnbull, in his words to the public administration select committee . 
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Original: Controversy The memo, allegedly prepared for the Prime Minister by Lord Goldsmith on the 7th of March 2003 and containing reservations about the legality of entering into war without a second UN resolution, is considered by opposition leaders and anti-war groups to lend proof to allegations that Mr Blair misled the cabinet, the department of defence and the British public before the 2003 invasion.
Revised: Controversy The memo, allegedly prepared for the prime minister by Lord Goldsmith on the 7th of March 2003 and containing reservations about the legality of entering into war without a second UN resolution, is considered by opposition leaders and anti-war groups to lend proof to allegations that Mr Blair misled the cabinet, the department of defence and the British public before the 2003 invasion.
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Original:  The Daily Mail claimed that six different reservations were laid out by the Attorney General in his legal advice.
Revised:  The Daily Mail claimed that six different reservations were laid out by the attorney general in his legal advice.
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Original:  Many believe that should it emerge that there were indeed doubts, the failure of the Prime Minister to inform the public of them constitutes a violation of trust - with Liberal Democrats claiming that the election must become a refurendum on Iraq and the trustworthiness of Mr Blair.
Revised:  Many believe that should it emerge that there were indeed doubts, the failure of the prime minister to inform the public of them constitutes a violation of trust - with Liberal Democrats claiming that the election must become a refurendum on Iraq and the trustworthiness of Mr Blair.
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Original:  The controversy hinges on whether the Government honestly reflected the opinion of the Attorney General in its press releases before, during and since the war.
Revised:  The controversy hinges on whether the Government honestly reflected the opinion of the attorney general in its press releases before, during and since the war.
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Original: Officials and biologists for several federal state and local agencies including the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) and the Mote Marine Laboratory are currently observing a 30 foot Sperm whale off Florida's west coast that maybe stranded.
Revised: Officials and biologists for several federal state and local agencies including the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) and the Mote Marine Laboratory are currently observing a 30 foot Sperm whale off Florida's west coast that may be stranded.
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Original:  Currently it is swimming in just nine feet of water less than a half a mile off shore and officials are currently determining how to proceed with the situation.
Revised:  Currently it is swimming in just nine feet of water less than half a mile off shore and officials are currently determining how to proceed with the situation.
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Original:  Currently it is swimming in just nine feet of water less than a half a mile off shore and officials are currently determining how to proceed with the situation.
Revised:  Currently it is swimming in just nine feet of water less than a half a mile off shore and officials are determining how to proceed with the situation.
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Original:  Officials have not yet determined its sex .
Revised:  Its sex has not yet been determined .
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Original: South Australian Premier Mike Rann says that David Hick , a convicted terrorism supporter, should appologise unconditionally to the Australian public for his actions.
Revised: South Australian Premier Mike Rann . South Australian Premier Mike Rann has said that David Hicks , a convicted terrorism supporter, should appologise unconditionally to the Australian public for his actions.
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Original: South Australian Premier Mike Rann says that David Hick , a convicted terrorism supporter, should appologise unconditionally to the Australian public for his actions.
Revised: South Australian Premier Mike Rann says that David Hick , a convicted terrorism supporter, should apologise unconditionally to the Australian public for his actions.
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Original:  Hicks, who was released from Yatala Labour Prison in Adelaide, was expected to make an apology apon release, but his lawyer read a prepared statement instead.
Revised:  Hicks, who was released from Yatala Labour Prison in Adelaide, was expected to make an apology upon release, but his lawyer read a prepared statement instead.
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Original:  Mr  Rann says it would be appropriate for Hicks to apologise.
Revised:  Mr . Rann says it would be appropriate for Hicks to apologise.
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Original:  "Rather than working for the Taliban, I think it's appropriate for Mr  Hicks to make an apology to the people of Australia . " 
Revised:  "Rather than working for the Taliban, I think it's appropriate for Mr . Hicks to make an apology to the people of Australia . " 
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Original:  "Rather than working for the Taliban, I think it's appropriate for Mr  Hicks to make an apology to the people of Australia . " 
Revised:  "Rather than working for the Taliban, I think it's appropriate for Mr Hicks to make an apology to the people of Australia , " 
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Original:  Kieran McNamara director general of the Department of Environment and Conservation  admitted that it had been caught out its decision to reopen the road at 8pm(wst) on 30th December.
Revised:  Kieran McNamara director general of the Department of Environment and Conservation (DEC) admitted that it had been caught out its decision to reopen the road at 8pm(wst) on 30th December.
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Original:  All efforts were focused on building fire breaks with heavy machinery to contain the fire, that fire appliances on the scene were there to defend the bulldozers  
Revised:  All efforts were focused on building fire breaks with heavy machinery to contain the fire, that fire appliances on the scene were there to defend the bulldozers . 
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Original:  The fire is still burning on a 150km(90mi) front, DEC spokesman says firefirghters are hoping to bring the fire under control with an expected cool change on wednesday.
Revised:  The fire is still burning on a 150km(90mi) front, DEC spokesman says fire fighters are hoping to bring the fire under control with an expected cool change on wednesday.
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Original: The driver of another truck in the convoy that was destroyed escaped with burns to his hands and was rushed through the fire front by firefighters to Yellowdine, another driver was rescued uninjured an return to Coolgardie, a spokesman for Whiteline transport the owners of this truck were thankful their driver survived unharmed and said the cost of the vehicle lost was about AU$400,000 plus cargo.
Revised: The driver of another truck in the convoy that was destroyed escaped with burns to his hands and was rushed through the fire front by firefighters to Yellowdine, another driver was rescued uninjured and return to Coolgardie, a spokesman for Whiteline transport the owners of this truck were thankful their driver survived unharmed and said the cost of the vehicle lost was about AU$400,000 plus cargo.
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Original: The driver of another truck in the convoy that was destroyed escaped with burns to his hands and was rushed through the fire front by firefighters to Yellowdine, another driver was rescued uninjured an return to Coolgardie, a spokesman for Whiteline transport the owners of this truck were thankful their driver survived unharmed and said the cost of the vehicle lost was about AU$400,000 plus cargo.
Revised: The driver of another truck in the convoy that was destroyed escaped with burns to his hands and was rushed through the fire front by firefighters to Yellowdine, another driver was rescued uninjured an return to Coolgardie, a spokesman for Whiteline transport the owners of this truck were thankful their driver survived unharmed saying the cost of the vehicle lost was about AU$400,000 plus cargo.
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Original:  The Weather Bureau has forecast temperatures to return above 40°C(105°F) by thursday  
Revised:  The Weather Bureau has forecast temperatures to return above 40°C(105°F) by thursday . 
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Original: A fire in the Borrabbin National Park between Southern Cross and Coolgardie Western Australia, so far 29,000 hectares and killed three truck drivers when the convoy they were travelling in was engulf by the flames.
Revised: A fire in the Borrabbin National Park between Southern Cross and Coolgardie Western Australia, so far 29,000 hectares and killed three truck drivers when the convoy they were travelling in was engulfed by the flames.
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Original:  Nonetheless, Cypriot Euro coins are inscribed in both Greek and Turkish.
Revised:  Cypriot Euro coins are inscribed in both Greek and Turkish.
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Original:  110px|Cypriot €1 coin The Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus, the de facto independent Turkish-controlled area in the north of Cyprus, will not join the Eurozone.
Revised:  The Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus, the de facto independent Turkish-controlled area in the north of Cyprus, will not join the Eurozone.
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Original:  The designs were jointly created by Tatiana Soteropoulos and Erik Maell. 110px|Maltese €1 coin The Maltese euro coins' national sides will also feature national motifs.
Revised:  The designs were jointly created by Tatiana Soteropoulos and Erik Maell. The Maltese euro coins' national sides will also feature national motifs.
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Original: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
Revised:  210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
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Original: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
Revised: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
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Original: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
Revised: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small in the and former , adopted the euro as their official currency;
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Original: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the euro as their official currency;
Revised: Image:Eurozone.svg| 210px|Map showing the Eurozone Today at midnight, the Republic of Cyprus and the Republic of Malta, both small island states in the Mediterranean and former British colonies , adopted the as their official currency;
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Original:  Because Cyprus and Malta are in different time zones , Cyprus adopted the euro one hour before Malta did the same.
Revised:  Because Cyprus and Malta are in different , Cyprus adopted the euro one hour before Malta did the same.
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Original:  In both countries the euro was welcomed with outdoor celebrations, including a fireworks display in Malta's capital Valletta .
Revised:  In both countries the euro was welcomed with outdoor celebrations, including a fireworks display in Malta's capital .
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Original:  The Central Bank of Cyprus will exchange coins until the end of 2009 and banknotes until the end of 2017.
Revised:  The will exchange coins until the end of 2009 and banknotes until the end of 2017.
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Original:  This conversion rate had been fixed on 10 July 2007 by Ecofin , the council comprising the finance ministers of the EU Member States.
Revised:  This conversion rate had been fixed on 10 July 2007 by , the council comprising the finance ministers of the EU Member States.
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Original:  This conversion rate had been fixed on 10 July 2007 by Ecofin , the council comprising the finance ministers of the EU Member States.
Revised:  This conversion rate had been fixed on 10 July 2007 by Ecofin , the council comprising the of the EU Member States.
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Original:  All EU Member States are required to join the Eurozone once certain conditions are fulfilled, except Denmark and the United Kingdom which have negotiated a so-called opt-out that allows them not to adopt the single currency.
Revised:  All are required to join the Eurozone once certain conditions are fulfilled, except Denmark and the United Kingdom which have negotiated a so-called opt-out that allows them not to adopt the single currency.
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Original:  All EU Member States are required to join the Eurozone once certain conditions are fulfilled, except Denmark and the United Kingdom which have negotiated a so-called opt-out that allows them not to adopt the single currency.
Revised:  All EU Member States are required to join the Eurozone once certain conditions are fulfilled, except Denmark and the United Kingdom which have negotiated a so-called that allows them not to adopt the single currency.
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Original:  The Turkish Republic of Northern Cyprus , the de facto independent Turkish-controlled area in the north of Cyprus, will not join the Eurozone.
Revised:  The , the de facto independent Turkish-controlled area in the north of Cyprus, will not join the Eurozone.
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Original:  Northern Cyprus is not part of the European Union and is recognised only by Turkey .
Revised:  Northern Cyprus is not part of the European Union and is recognised only by .
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Original:  As a result, the Turkish lira will remain the official currency in the north of the island;
Revised:  As a result, the will remain the official currency in the north of the island;
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Original:  however, TIME reports that "many Turkish Cypriot merchants will also accept euros along with Turkish lira."
Revised:  however, reports that "many Turkish Cypriot merchants will also accept euros along with Turkish lira."
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Original:  The euro will also be legal tender in the Sovereign Base Areas , British military bases in Cyprus.
Revised:  The euro will also be legal tender in the , British military bases in Cyprus.
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Original:  The national sides of the Cypriot Euro coins feature three separate designs for the three series of coins.
Revised:  The national sides of the feature three separate designs for the three series of coins.
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Original:  The 1, 2 and 5-cent coins will feature the altar of the Mnajdra temple grouping,
Revised:  The 1, 2 and 5-cent coins will feature the altar of the temple grouping,
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Original:  The designs of Maltese engraver Noel Galea Bason were selected after two rounds of public consultations in which people were invited to vote via SMS .
Revised:  The designs of Maltese engraver Noel Galea Bason were selected after two rounds of public consultations in which people were invited to vote via .
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