wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Most places visited by the Doulos and its sister ship Logos II (which travels North and South America) receive them with an enthusiastic welcome.
Revised:  Most places visited by the Doulos and its sister ship (which travels North and South America) receive them with an enthusiastic welcome.
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Original:  Said bin Ali to the Daily Times , "We are absolutely delighted to have a roving library second to none, busy inculcating reading habits among people at a time when it matters most."
Revised:  Said bin Ali to the , "We are absolutely delighted to have a roving library second to none, busy inculcating reading habits among people at a time when it matters most."
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Original:  One of the largest drawings was a reproduction of Hokusai's "In The Hollow of a Wave off the Coast at Kanagawa," often known colloquially as "The Wave   ."
Revised:  One of the largest drawings was a reproduction of Hokusai's "In The Hollow of a Wave off the Coast at Kanagawa," known colloquially as "The Wave ."
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Original:  One of the largest drawings was a reproduction of Hokusai's "In The Hollow of a Wave off the Coast at Kanagawa," often known colloquially as "The Wave   ."
Revised:  One of the largest drawings was a reproduction of Hokusai's "In The Hollow of a Wave off the Coast at Kanagawa," often known colloquially as "The Wave ." ."
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Original: Several bands played in succession on a stage set up in front of the offices of Dewey, Cheetham  and Howe.
Revised: Several bands played in succession on a stage set up in front of the offices of Dewey, Cheetham , and Howe.
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Original:   The 22nd annual Mayfair took place in Harvard Square in Cambridge, Massachusetts, today.
Revised: 200px| 200px| 200px| 200px| The 22nd annual Mayfair took place in Harvard Square in Cambridge, Massachusetts, today.
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Original:   The 22nd annual Mayfair took place in Harvard Square in Cambridge, Massachusetts, today.
Revised:  200px| 200px| 200px| 200px| The 22nd annual Mayfair took place in Harvard Square in Cambridge, Massachusetts, today.
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Original: Baseball commisioner Bub Selig proposed a new steroid policy for the game in an April 25 letter to players union chief Don Fehr.
Revised: Baseball commissioner Allan H. "Bud" Selig proposed a new steroid policy for the game in an April 25 letter to players union chief Don Fehr.
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Original: Baseball commissioner Allan H. "Bud" Selig proposed a new steroid policy for the game in an April 25 letter to players union chief Don Fehr.
Revised: Baseball commissioner Allan H. "Bud" Selig proposed a new steroids use policy for the game in an April 25 letter to players union chief Don Fehr.
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Original:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
Revised:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension of a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
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Original:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
Revised:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive for the first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
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Original:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
Revised:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and on a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
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Original:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out on a lifetime ban from the game.
Revised:  The plan calls for a 50-game suspension for a player testing positive a first time, a 100-game ban for a second offense, and for a third violation the player is out with a lifetime ban from the game.
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Original:  So far this season, four lesser-known major league players have been suspended under the current policy, each for 10 games.
Revised:  So far this season, four less-than-big-name major league players have been suspended under the current policy, each for 10 games.
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Original:  So far this season, four lesser-known major league players have been suspended under the current policy, each for 10 games.
Revised:  So far this season, four lesser-known major league players have been suspended . Under the current policy, each for 10 games.
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Original:  So far this season, four lesser-known major league players have been suspended under the current policy, each for 10 games.
Revised:  So far this season, four lesser-known major league players have been suspended under the current policy, each player is forced to sit out 10 games.
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Original:  The ball now is now thrown to Don Fehr, who said over the weekend the union was not ready to discuss it.
Revised:  The ball now is now thrown to Fehr, who said over the weekend the union was not ready to discuss it.
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port  133 people have been injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
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Original:  Additionally  10 crew members were also injured, however  no deaths have been reported so far .
Revised:  Additionally , 10 crew members were also injured, however no deaths have been reported so far .
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Original:  Additionally  10 crew members were also injured, however  no deaths have been reported so far .
Revised:  Additionally 10 crew members were also injured, however , no deaths have been reported so far .
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Original:  Additionally  10 crew members were also injured, however  no deaths have been reported so far .
Revised:  Additionally 10 crew members were also injured, however no deaths have been reported .
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau and vice-versa collided in heavy fog.
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, after two high-speed ferries that were heading between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog.
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Original:  The accident is not the first, as thick fog in Shanghai had already caused a ferry accident that left 10 people missing.
Revised:  This accident is not the first, as thick fog in Shanghai had already caused a ferry accident that left 10 people missing.
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Original:  Another ferry was reported to have run ground at Zhuhai near Macao, 66 people had to be rescued
Revised:  Another ferry was reported to have run aground at Zhuhai near Macao, 66 people had to be rescued
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Original:  Another ferry was reported to have run ground at Zhuhai near Macao, 66 people had to be rescued
Revised:  Another ferry was reported to have run ground at Zhuhai near Macau, after which 66 people had to be rescued
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog .
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, nineteen of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog .
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog .
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries travelling between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog .
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau , collided in heavy fog .
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port On Friday, 133 people were injured, 19 of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries , travelling between Hong Kong and Macau collided in heavy fog .
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Original:  Additionally, 10 crew members were also injured , however, no deaths have been reported.
Revised:  Additionally, 10 crew members were also injured but no deaths have been reported.
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Original:  The two high-speed  ferries, operated by Hong Kong-based ShunTak-China Travel Ship Management Limited, collided 5 nautical miles away from Macau at around 8: 30pm local time.
Revised:  The two high-speed ferries, operated by Hong Kong-based ShunTak-China Travel Ship Management Limited, collided five nautical miles away from Macau at around 8: 30pm local time.
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Original:  The two high-speed  ferries, operated by Hong Kong-based ShunTak-China Travel Ship Management Limited, collided 5 nautical miles away from Macau at around 8: 30pm local time.
Revised:  The two high-speed ferries, operated by Hong Kong-based ShunTak-China Travel Ship Management Limited, collided 5 nautical miles away from Macau at around 8: 30 p.m. local time.
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Original:  Both ferries were TurboJet hydrofoil ferries.
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Original:  Another ferry was reported to have run aground at Zhuhai near Macau, after which 66 people had to be rescued
Revised:  Another ferry ran aground at Zhuhai near Macau, after which 66 people had to be rescued
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port A hundred and thirty three people were injured, nineteen of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries travelling between Hong Kong and Macau collided in heavy fog on Friday.
Revised:  A hundred and thirty three people were injured, nineteen of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries travelling between Hong Kong and Macau collided in heavy fog on Friday.
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Original: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port A hundred and thirty three people were injured, nineteen of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries travelling between Hong Kong and Macau collided in heavy fog on Friday.
Revised: 200px|The same type of ferry involved in the accident docking at Macao Port One hundred and thirty three people were injured, nineteen of them seriously, when two high-speed ferries travelling between Hong Kong and Macau collided in heavy fog on Friday.
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Original:  Another ferry ran aground at Zhuhai near Macau , and sixty six people had to be rescued
Revised:  Another ferry ran aground at Zhuhai near Macau 
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Original:  Averaged with the performance of American Dad, a cartoon produced by Family Guy creator Seth MacFarlane, FOX earned a mere 5.8/9 for the hou 
Revised:  Averaged with the performance of American Dad, a cartoon produced by Family Guy creator Seth MacFarlane, FOX earned a mere 5.8/9 for the hour. 
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Original: However, the season premiere of Family Guy and the series debut of American Dad (which helped usher in what the network termed "The New Fox Sunday") helped bring FOX to the #2 spot out of five networks in the crucial 18 to 49 demographic, one of the most important to advertisers in the key May sweeps period.
Revised: However, the season premiere of Family Guy and the series debut of American Dad (which helped usher in what the network termed "The New FOX Sunday") helped bring FOX to the #2 spot out of five networks in the crucial 18 to 49 demographic, one of the most important to advertisers in the key May sweeps period.
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Original:  Averaged with the performance of American Dad, a cartoon produced by Family Guy creator Seth MacFarlane, FOX earned a mere 5.8/9 for the hour   .
Revised:  Averaged with the performance of American Dad, a cartoon produced by Family Guy creator Seth MacFarlane, FOX earned a mere 5.8/9 for the hour . .
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Original:  This translates into a little more than 6.9 million households whose sets were tuned into Family Guy, as recorded by the sample of "Nielsen families," who record their viewing habits and essentially contribute to the ratings process the US uses 
Revised:  This translates into a little more than 6.9 million households whose sets were tuned into Family Guy, as recorded by the sample of "Nielsen families," who record their viewing habits and contribute to the ratings process the US uses 
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Original:  To get the movie back, Gibson kidnaps Lois and keeps her captive on top of Mount Rushmore, which leads to a scene in which the three battle on top of the monument, in an homage to the film North by Northwest.
Revised:  To get the movie back, Gibson kidnaps Lois and keeps her captive on top of Mount Rushmore, which leads to a scene in which the three battle on top of the monument, in a homage to the film North by Northwest.
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Original:  To get the movie back, Gibson kidnaps Lois and keeps her captive on top of Mount Rushmore, which leads to a scene in which the three battle on top of the monument, in a homage to the film North by Northwest .
Revised:  To get the movie back, Gibson kidnaps Lois and keeps her captive on top of Mount Rushmore, which leads to a scene in which the three battle on top of the monument, in a homage to the film North by Northwest 
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Original:  The rocket is known as a 'sounding rocket', designed to explore the upper region's of Earth's atmosphere
Revised:  The rocket is known as a 'sounding rocket', designed to explore the upper regions of Earth's atmosphere
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Original:  28 days after the returning officer has seen proof of the death of the candidate , a by-election will be called .
Revised:  28 days after the returning officer has seen proof of the death of the candidate .
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Original:  Because the death occurred after the close of nominations, and because postal voting has already commenced, the election in that constituency has been delayed, and will now take place 28 days after the returning officer has seen proof of the death of the candidate   .
Revised:  Because the death occurred after the close of nominations, and because postal voting has already commenced, the election in that constituency has been delayed, and will now take place 28 days after the returning officer has seen proof of the death of the candidate . .
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Original:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis  contracted salmonella poisoning from eating at the restaurant.
Revised:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis allegedly contracted salmonella poisoning from eating at the restaurant.
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Original:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis allegedly contracted salmonella poisoning  from eating at the restaurant.
Revised:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis contracted salmonella poisoning from eating at the restaurant.
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Original:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis allegedly contracted salmonella poisoning  from eating at the restaurant.
Revised:  Ayala successfully won her suit for medical expenses against the national El Pollo Loco chicken-chain, a previous employer, after her daughter Genesis allegedly contracted salmonella poisoning , allegedly from eating at the restaurant.
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Original: Ayala arrested On Thursday the 21st of April, Anna Ayala was arrested at or near her home in Las Vegas on Thursday evening, in connection with the case, shortly after Wendy's finished it's own internal investigation.
Revised: Ayala arrested On Thursday the 21st of April, Anna Ayala was arrested at or near her home in Las Vegas on Thursday evening, in connection with the case, shortly after Wendy's finished its own internal investigation.
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Original: Opposition treasury spokesman, Malcolm Turnbull claimed the treasurer showed inexperience, saying he was "all over the shop." HSBC chief economist  John Edwards said "It is all a learning experience for him but it is very difficult to say anything that is less than critical about the banks.
Revised: Opposition treasury spokesman, Malcolm Turnbull claimed the treasurer was "all over the shop." HSBC chief economist John Edwards said "It is all a learning experience for him but it is very difficult to say anything that is less than critical about the banks.
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Original: Opposition treasury spokesman, Malcolm Turnbull claimed the treasurer showed inexperience, saying he was "all over the shop." HSBC chief economist  John Edwards said "It is all a learning experience for him but it is very difficult to say anything that is less than critical about the banks.
Revised: Opposition treasury spokesman, Malcolm Turnbull claimed the treasurer showed inexperience, saying he was "all over the shop." HSBC chief economist Dr John Edwards said "It is all a learning experience for him but it is very difficult to say anything that is less than critical about the banks.
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Original: Australia's opposition critics laid blame for recent interest rate increases at the feet of new federal treasurer Wayne Swan.
Revised: Australia's Opposition Party laid blame for recent interest rate increases at the feet of new federal treasurer Wayne Swan.
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Original:  Following  National Australia Bank (NAB) lifting its rates 0.12 percent independently of the Reserve Bank of Australia, Swan consulted with Australian Prudential Regulation Authority (APRA), which monitors bank liquidity, and was advised that rises of around 0.1 percent were reasonable.
Revised:  Following the National Australia Bank (NAB) lifting its rates 0.12 percent independently of the Reserve Bank of Australia, Swan consulted with Australian Prudential Regulation Authority (APRA), which monitors bank liquidity, and was advised that rises of around 0.1 percent were reasonable.
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Original:  However, following his moderate response to NAB's rise, Australia and New Zealand Banking Group (ANZ ) announced a 0.2\% rise, prompting Swan's warning.
Revised:  However, following his moderate response to NAB's rise, ANZ Bank announced a 0.2\% rise, prompting Swan's warning.
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Original:  Press advocacy groups in Africa are beginning a new campain to remove "insult laws" from the books that protect political figures from criticism.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Press advocacy groups in Africa are beginning a new campain to remove "insult laws" from the books that protect political figures from criticism.
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Original:  Press advocacy groups in Africa are beginning a new campain to remove "insult laws" from the books that protect political figures from criticism.
Revised:  Press advocacy groups in Africa are beginning a new campaign to remove "insult laws" from the books that protect political figures from criticism.
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Original:  The laws, which are found to restrict freedom of expression to varying degrees of severity in 48 out of 53 African nations, result in the imprisonment of many political reporters for what they feel is necessary criticsm of their governments.
Revised:  The laws, which are found to restrict freedom of expression to varying degrees of severity in 48 out of 53 African nations, result in the imprisonment of many political reporters for what they feel is necessary criticism of their governments.
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Original:  "Five: Tadjikistan , rising from the ashes of civil war.
Revised:  "Five: Tajikistan , rising from the ashes of civil war.
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Original:  The stories are listed on the new Ten Stories space on the U.N. website  
Revised:  The stories are listed on the new Ten Stories space on the U.N. website . 
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Original: NASA's Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter (MRO), the latest robotic spacecraft destined for Mars, arrived at Kennedy Space Center's Shuttle Landing Facility on April 30 aboard a C-17 cargo plane and was delivered to the Payload Hazardous Servicing Facility to begin processing.
Revised: NASA's Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter (MRO), the latest robotic spacecraft destined for Mars, arrived at Kennedy Space Center's Shuttle Landing Facility on April 30 aboard a C-17argo plane and was delivered to the Payload Hazardous Servicing Facility to begin processing.
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Original: In an eerie echo of the Wendy's chili finger case, a North Carolina man found a severed finger tip in his frozen custard on Monday  .
Revised: In an eerie echo of the Wendy's chili finger case, a man found a severed finger tip in his frozen custard on Monday .
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Original:  Another  case is the Single Point Urban Interchange, in which opposing streams of left-turning traffic pass each other on the left.
Revised:  Another related case is the Single Point Urban Interchange, in which opposing streams of left-turning traffic pass each other on the left.
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