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Original:  The company , which Techworld claims is racing against Toshiba to get its new drives to market first, has developed technology to implement a recording method known as perpendicular recording, which allowed the increase in density above the current ~130 GB/in2 limit.
Revised:  The company has developed technology to implement a recording method known as perpendicular recording, which allowed the increase in density above the current ~130 GB/in2 limit.
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Original:   According to Hitachi, they expect, "to ship [their] first perpendicular recording product in 2005 on a 2.5-inch hard drive ...
Revised:  According to Hitachi, they expect, "to ship [their] first perpendicular recording product in 2005 on a 2.5-inch hard drive 
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Original:  "  Toshiba is also planning to ship a drive in 2005 that uses perpendicular recording.
Revised:  " . Toshiba is also planning to ship a drive in 2005 that uses perpendicular recording.
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Original:  While the animation features some whimsical moments with bits and disk platters that speak English (not possible with today's technology), it also contains realistic details such as the Texas Instruments' UC5608DWP chips visible briefly in the background.
Revised:  While the animation features some whimsical moments with bits and disk platters that speak English (not possible with today's technology), it also contains realistic details . Of no importance to the viewer, but perhaps of interest to some, the animation shows Texas Instruments' UC5608DWP chips visible briefly in the background.
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Original:  While TI's UC5608DWP chips, which are 18-line SCSI terminators, have been made obsolete by the new UCC5618, the chips are indeed designed for use in hard drives
Revised:  While TI's UC5608DWP 18-line SCSI terminators, have been made obsolete by the new UCC5618, the chips are indeed designed for use in hard drives
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Original:  While TI's UC5608DWP chips, which are 18-line SCSI terminators, have been made obsolete by the new UCC5618, the chips are indeed designed for use in hard drives
Revised:  While TI's UC5608DWP chips, which are 18-line SCSI terminator chips have been made obsolete by the new UCC5618, the chips are indeed designed for use in hard drives
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Original: ]] Hitachi Global Storage Technologies, the San Jose, California-based joint venture of Japanese storage vendor Hitachi and U.S. technology giant IBM, has set a new record for storage density at 230 gigabits per square inch ( GB /in2).
Revised: ]] Hitachi Global Storage Technologies, the San Jose, California-based joint venture of Japanese storage vendor Hitachi and U.S. technology giant IBM, has set a new record for storage density at 230 gigabits per square inch ( Gb /in2).
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Original:  The company has developed technology to implement a recording method known as perpendicular recording, which allowed the increase in density above the current ~130 GB /in2 limit.
Revised:  The company has developed technology to implement a recording method known as perpendicular recording, which allowed the increase in density above the current ~130 Gb /in2 limit.
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Original: At 5 a.m. EST , the center of Hurricane Dean was about 240 miles south-southwest of San Juan, Puerto Rico, and 660 miles east-southeast of Kingston, Jamaica, and was moving west at 14 mph.
Revised: At 5 a.m. EDT , the center of Hurricane Dean was about 240 miles south-southwest of San Juan, Puerto Rico, and 660 miles east-southeast of Kingston, Jamaica, and was moving west at 14 mph.
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Original:  A Category 5 hurricane means the storm packs winds of over 155 mph and has the potential to cause "catastrophic" damage.
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Original:  The National Hurricane Center in Miami is calling Hurricane Dean "extremely dangerous," saying that the storm is gaining strength and will likely become a Category 5 storm.
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Original:  The National Hurricane Center in Miami is calling Hurricane Dean "extremely dangerous," saying that the storm is gaining strength and will likely become a Category 5 storm.
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Original:  Rick Perry , the Governor of Texas, said the hurricane is an "imminent threat," saying the state is preparing for its arrival.
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Original:  Governor Kathleen Blanco of Louisiana declared a state of emergency yesterday so local governments can move forward with emergency plans if necessary.
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Original:  A hurricane watch has been issued for Haiti from the Haiti/Dominican Republic border to Port-au-Prince.
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Original:  Jamaica has opened all shelters and Cuba has declared a "state of alert" in preparation for the storm.
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Original:  A tropical storm warning remains in effect for the U.S. and Spanish Virgin Islands and Puerto Rico.
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Original:  Hurricane Dean could force NASA to cut short Endeavour 's flight.
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Original:  Lucia, Dominica and Martinique.
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Original:  Philipp Lahm switched flanks to free up the right-back berth for Lell.
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Original: Bayern Munich took the lead in an evenly matched first period as Francy Ribéry scored on a penalty after Luca Toni went fouled by Petri Pasanen in the 31st minute.
Revised: Bayern Munich took the lead in an evenly matched first period as Francy Ribéry scored on a penalty after Luca Toni was fouled by Petri Pasanen in the 31st minute.
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Original:  Midfielders w:Jurica Vranjes| Jurica Vranjes and Daniel Jensen replaced Carlos Alberto and Leon Andreasen.
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Original:  Midfielders Jurica Vranjes and Daniel Jensen replaced Carlos Alberto and Leon Andreasen  . Striker Hugo Almeida replace Kevin Schindler in attack.
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Original:  Midfielders Jurica Vranjes and Daniel Jensen replaced Carlos Alberto and Leon Andreasen  . Striker Hugo Almeida replace Kevin Schindler in attack.
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Original: Materazzi said in a interview with the TV Sorrisi e Canzoni magazine that ' I prefer the whore that is your sister.
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Original:  ' The Interview is set to be released on Monday.
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Original:  Approximately 100 students from Rwanda, Burundi and the Congo will share ideas about the past and present in Rwanda as well as the future for the Great Lakes Regio   
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Original:  It could go in Developing stories tomorrow ?) Original reporting tag - see talk page for more detai
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Original:   "New Zealand's relationship with Britain dated back to the 18th century, and Captain James Cook's exploration of New Zealand,  she said.
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Original:   "New Zealand's relationship with Britain dated back to the 18th century, and Captain James Cook's exploration of New Zealand,  she said.
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Original:  " Our peoples are close, they come and go between our two countries as much as ever, we invest in each others' economies, we share culture and sport - where friends become rivals." "We set the memorial in a position where the main pedestrian route runs through the memorial so that visitors will walk amongst the sculptures, encouraging people to stop and explore.
Revised:  Our peoples are close, they come and go between our two countries as much as ever, we invest in each others' economies, we share culture and sport - where friends become rivals." "We set the memorial in a position where the main pedestrian route runs through the memorial so that visitors will walk amongst the sculptures, encouraging people to stop and explore.
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Original:  Through the words and images, any New Zealander visiting the memorial will recognise home, and British people may learn something of the relationship between our two countries ” The memorial is located at Hyde Park Corner, diagonally opposite the Australian War Memorial which was completed in 2003.
Revised:  Through the words and images, any New Zealander visiting the memorial will recognise home, and British people may learn something of the relationship between our two countries ." The memorial is located at Hyde Park Corner, diagonally opposite the Australian War Memorial which was completed in 2003.
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Original: Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II of New Zealand, New Zealand’s Head of State today, unveiled the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner , in London.
Revised: Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II of New Zealand, New Zealand’s Head of State unveiled the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner , in London.
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Original: Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II of New Zealand, New Zealand’s Head of State today, unveiled the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner , in London.
Revised: Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II of New Zealand, New Zealand’s Head of State today, unveiled the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner today in London.
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Original:  The NZ $3 million memorial was funded by the New Zealand Government and consists of 16 cross-shaped vertical bronze 'standards' set out in formation across the north east corner of Hyde Park Corner in central London.
Revised:  The $3 million memorial was funded by the New Zealand Government and consists of 16 cross-shaped vertical bronze 'standards' set out in formation across the north east corner of Hyde Park Corner in central London.
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Original: The New Zealand Head of State, Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth II of New Zealand, unveiled the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner today in London.
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Original:  Her Majesty told the audience that New Zealanders had written themselves into a special place in the history books.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Many of them for deeds of exceptional bravery and sacrifice." "But most of them for simply giving their all in duty, in courage and in dogged determination to fight for peace and freedom from tyranny."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Many of them for deeds of exceptional bravery and sacrifice." "But most of them for simply giving their all in duty, in courage and in dogged determination to fight for peace and freedom from tyranny."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The striking memorial named 'The Southern Stand', commemorates the "strong and enduring" relationship between New Zealand and the United Kingdom, and serve as a focus of remembrance of the shared sacrifice during the two World Wars and other military engagements from the South African War to the present day.
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Original:  The dedication of the New Zealand Memorial at Hyde Park Corner featured cultural performances, a fly past of aircraft and famous New Zealanders from the world of sport and music.
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Original:  Among the New Zealand celebrities that attended are former national rugby captain Sean Fitzpatrick, ex-international cricketer Chris Cairns and pop singer Daniel Bedingfield who was born in the country.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Singer-songwriter Dave Dobbyn and soprano Hayley Westenra performed during the ceremony.
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Original:  The $3 million memorial was funded by the New Zealand Government and consists of 16 cross-shaped vertical bronze 'standards' set out in formation across the north east corner of Hyde Park Corner in central London.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Each standard weighs up to 700kg and through text, patterns and small sculptures commemorates the shared sacrifice of British and New Zealand ex-servicemen, while also celebrating the wider social, cultural and economic ties of the two countries.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% New Zealand Prime Minister Helen Clark said she hoped it could be a part of London that New Zealanders could always call home.
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Original:  "It's genesis lay in the desire to commemorate the shared sacrifice of New Zealanders in times of war, alongside the people of Britain," Helen Clark said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "New Zealand's relationship with Britain dated back to the 18th century, and Captain James Cook's exploration of New Zealand," she said.
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Original:  Through the words and images, any New Zealander visiting the memorial will recognise home, and British people may learn something of the relationship between our two countries."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The memorial is located at Hyde Park Corner, diagonally opposite the Australian War Memorial which was completed in 2003.
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Original: The event began with a Royal Guard of Honour formed by the largest contingent of New Zealand forces to be seen in the UK since Her Majesty ’ s Coronation in 1953.
Revised: The event began with a Royal Guard of Honour formed by the largest contingent of New Zealand forces to be seen in the UK since Her Majesty ' s Coronation in 1953.
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Original:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:London Category:New Zealand Category:Europe category:Oceania category :England Category: Wor
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Original:  You-cheng Liu does a nazi salute while taking an oath for the best competition of this championship.
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Original:  You-cheng Liu take an oath for the best competition of this championship.
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Original:  "The Rock", as the center will be called, is expected to cost $7.3 million, and Cooper hopes that conctruction work will begin on the site, currently a grassy area near the Grand Canyon University, will have begun by November.
Revised:  "The Rock", as the center will be called, is expected to cost $7.3 million, and Cooper hopes that construction work will begin on the site, currently a grassy area near the Grand Canyon University, will have begun by November.
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Original:  "The Rock", as the center will be called, is expected to cost $7.3 million, and Cooper hopes that conctruction work will begin on the site, currently a grassy area near the Grand Canyon University, will have begun by November.
Revised:  "The Rock", as the center will be called, is expected to cost $7.3 million, and Cooper hopes that conctruction work will begin on the site, currently a grassy area near the Grand Canyon University, by November.
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Original: TTC StreetcarThe Toronto Transit Commission is expected to strike monday .
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Original:  With a huge turnout the union-members voted against accepting the offer with a 99\% majority according to a press release by the union . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:Canada Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  With a huge turnout the union-members voted against accepting the offer with a 99\% majority according to a press release by the union References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:Canada Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  With a huge turnout the union-members voted against accepting the offer with a 99\% majority according to a press release by the union . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:Canada Category:Economy and busine
Revised:  With a huge turnout the union-members voted against accepting the offer with a 99\% majority according to a press release by the union . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:Canada Category:Economy and busine
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Original:  Silesian language is second registered language on Silesia, first was Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction 
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Original:  Silesian language exists.
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Original:  The Library of Congress  registered the Silesian language in  list of languages of world.
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Original:  The Library of Congress  registered the Silesian language in  list of languages of world.
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Original:  The Library of Congress  registered the Silesian language in  list of languages of world.
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Original:  International linguistic organization as well registered Silesian language and attributed him code ISO : "szl".
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Original:  International linguistic organization as well registered Silesian language and attributed him code ISO : "szl".
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Original:  By several years the Alliance of Population of Silesian Nation and  Silesian Autonomy Movement to try official registering this language.
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Original:  By several years the Alliance of Population of Silesian Nation and  Silesian Autonomy Movement to try official registering this language.
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Original:  By several years the Alliance of Population of Silesian Nation and  Silesian Autonomy Movement to try official registering this language.
Revised:  By several years the Alliance of Population of Silesian Nation and Silesian Autonomy Movement have been seeking for official recognition of this language.
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Original:   Silesian language is  second registered language on Silesia, first was Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction)
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Original:   Silesian language is  second registered language on Silesia, first was Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction)
Revised:  Silesian language is now the second registered language on Silesia, first was Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction)
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Original:   Silesian language is  second registered language on Silesia, first was Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction)
Revised:  Silesian language is second registered language in Silesia, the first was the Lower Silesian language (at present on extinction)
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Original:  The Library of Congress has  registered the Silesian language in its list of languages of the world .
Revised:  The Library of Congress has officially registered the Silesian language in its list of languages of the world .
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Original:  The Library of Congress has  registered the Silesian language in its list of languages of the world .
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Original:  Additionally, the International linguistic organization has registered the Silesian language and attributed it the ISO code "szl".
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Original:  For several years the Alliance of Population of Silesian Nation and the Silesian Autonomy Movement have been seeking for official recognition of this language.
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