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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gene expression%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Extended Central Dogma with Enzymes.jpg| 300px | right | The extended central dogma of molecular biology includes all the processes involved in the flow of genetic information.
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Original:  Gene products are often proteins, but in non-protein-coding genes such as transfer RNA (tRNA) and small nuclear RNA (snRNA), the product is a functional non-coding RNA. Gene regulation Regulation of various stages of gene expression The regulation of gene expression (or gene regulation) by environmental factors and during different stages of development can occur at each step of the process such as transcription, RNA splicing, translation, and post-translational modification of a protein.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In addition to regulatory events involving the promoter, gene expression can also be regulated by epigenetic changes to chromatin, which is a complex of DNA and protein found in eukaryotic cells.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Genomes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Composition of the human genome A genome is an organism's complete set of DNA, including all of its genes.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Biotechnology%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% Image: recombinant formation of plasmids.svg | thumb | right | Construction of recombinant DNA, in which a foreign DNA fragment is inserted into a plasmid vector.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% DNA fragments used in molecular cloning procedures can also be used to create a genomic library.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Evolution Evolutionary processes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Mutation and selection diagram.svg|Natural selection for darker traits.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Speciation%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Speciation modes.svg|Comparison of allopatric, peripatric, parapatric and sympatric speciation%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% A species is a group of organisms that mate with one another and speciation is the process by which one lineage splits into two lineages as a result of having evolved independently from each other.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Speciation%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Speciation modes.svg|Comparison of allopatric, peripatric, parapatric and sympatric speciation%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% A species is a group of organisms that mate with one another and speciation is the process by which one lineage splits into two lineages as a result of having evolved independently from each other.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Phylogeny%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A phylogeny is an evolutionary history of a specific group of organisms or their genes.
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Original:  Recommendation 60F%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% History of life%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The history of life on Earth traces the processes by which organisms have evolved from the earliest emergence of life to present day.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Diversity Bacteria and Archaea%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Gemmatimonas aurantiaca.jpg| left | Bacteria – Gemmatimonas aurantiaca (-=1 Micrometer)%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bacteria are a type of cell that constitute a large domain of prokaryotic microorganisms.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Diversity Bacteria and Archaea%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Gemmatimonas aurantiaca.jpg| left | Bacteria – Gemmatimonas aurantiaca (-=1 Micrometer)%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bacteria are a type of cell that constitute a large domain of prokaryotic microorganisms.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Halobacteria.jpg| left | Archaea – Halobacteria%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Archaea constitute the other domain of prokaryotic cells and were initially classified as bacteria, receiving the name archaebacteria (in the Archaebacteria kingdom), a term that has fallen out of use.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Protists%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Diversity of protists Eukaryotes are hypothesized to have split from archaea, which was followed by their endosymbioses with bacteria (or symbiogenesis) that gave rise to mitochondria and chloroplasts, both of which are now part of modern day eukaryotic cells.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Plant diversity%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Diversity of plants Plants are mainly multicellular organisms, predominantly photosynthetic eukaryotes of the kingdom Plantae, which would exclude fungi and some algae.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Plant form and function Plant body%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Plant.svg| Root and shoot systems in a eudicot.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Plant nutrition and transport%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The xylem (blue) transports water and minerals from the roots upwards whereas the phloem (orange) transports carbohydrates between organs.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Plant reproduction%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File: Figure 11 02 03.jpg |thumb |right |Reproduction and development in sporophytes%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% Most angiosperms (or flowering plants) engage in sexual reproduction.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Animal form and function General features%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:105 Negative Feedback Loops.jpg | Negative feedback is necessary for maintaining homeostasis such as keeping body temperature constant.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Water and salt balance%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Diffusion of water and ions in and out of a freshwater fish An animal's body fluids have three properties: osmotic pressure, ionic composition, and volume.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nutrition and digestion%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Different digestive systems in marine fishes Animals are heterotrophs as they feed on other organisms to obtain energy and organic compounds.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Breathing%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File: Cranial sinus and postcranial air sac systems in birds.svg | thumb | right | Respiratory system in a bird.
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Original:  Muscle and movement%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Asynchronous muscles power flight in most insects. a: Wings b: Wing joint c: Dorsoventral muscles power upstrokes d: Dorsolongitudinal muscles power downstrokes.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nervous system%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:GFPneuron.png| Mouse pyramidal neurons (green) and GABAergic neurons (red).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hormonal control%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Hormones are signaling molecules transported in the blood to distant organs to regulate their function.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Animal reproduction%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Odonata copulation.jpg | thumb | right | Sexual reproduction in dragonflies.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Animal development%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Cleavage.png|Cleavage in zebrafish embryo.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Immune system%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Processes in the primary immune response The immune system is a network of biological processes that detects and responds to a wide variety of pathogens.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Animal behavior%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 150px|Brood parasites, such as the cuckoo, provide a supernormal stimulus to the parenting species.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Populations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Reaching carrying capacity through a logistic growth curve A population is the number of organisms of the same species that occupy an area and reproduce from generation to generation.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Biosphere%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Carbon cycle.jpg|250px| Fast carbon cycle showing the movement of carbon between land, atmosphere, and oceans in billions of tons per year.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Conservation%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Hopetoun falls.jpg|Efforts are made to preserve the natural characteristics of Hopetoun Falls, Australia, without affecting visitors' access.
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Original:  In 2008  the band Hercules & Love Affair has performed wearing matching shirts with the word printed on them.
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Original:  In the 2000s and 2010s, New York clothing label Hood By Air's designer Shayne Oliver used banjee culture as a general point of reference and a LGBTQ+ clubnight in London in 2013 called itself "Borja ’ s Banjee Mix", referencing black masculinity.
Revised:  In the 2000s and 2010s, New York clothing label Hood By Air's designer Shayne Oliver used banjee culture as a general point of reference and a LGBTQ+ clubnight in London in 2013 called itself "Borja ' s Banjee Mix", referencing black masculinity.
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Original: Of his experience with the term, a gay black man writes:  The 1990 documentary film Paris Is Burning featured "banjee realness" as one of the categories in which contestants competed for trophies.
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Original: Banjee (as in: "banjee boy" or "banjee girl") is a term originating in the house system and ball culture of New York City which describes someone seen to be "from the hood" or embodying an urban, tough swagger.
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Original:  In the 2000s and 2010s, New York clothing label Hood By Air's designer Shayne Oliver used banjee culture as a general point of reference and a LGBTQ+ clubnight in London in 2013, featuring a DJ named Borja Peña, called itself "Borja's Banjee Mix", referencing black masculinity.
Revised:  In the 2000s and 2010s, New York clothing label Hood By Air's designer Shayne Oliver used banjee culture as a general point of reference and an LGBTQ+ clubnight in London in 2013, featuring a DJ named Borja Peña, called itself "Borja's Banjee Mix", referencing black masculinity.
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Original:  A 2010 meta-analysis of fifteen placebo-controlled studies led by Dr. Mark Messina, executive director of the Soy Nutrition Institute, said that "neither soy foods nor isoflavone supplements alter measures of bioavailable testosterone concentrations in men."
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Original:  Also called a "dietary estrogen",  it is a diverse group of naturally occurring nonsteroidal plant compounds that, because of its structural similarity with estradiol (17-β-estradiol), have the ability to cause estrogenic and/or antiestrogenic effects.
Revised:  Also called a "dietary estrogen", dude it is a diverse group of naturally occurring nonsteroidal plant compounds that, because of its structural similarity with estradiol (17-β-estradiol), have the ability to cause estrogenic and/or antiestrogenic effects.
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Original:  In a rigorous study, the use of one such source of phytoestrogen, red clover, has been shown to be safe, but ineffective in relieving menopausal symptoms (black cohosh is also used for menopausal symptoms , but does not contain phytoestrogens .
Revised:  In a rigorous study, the use of one such source of phytoestrogen, red clover, has been shown to be safe, but ineffective in relieving menopausal symptoms (black cohosh is also used for menopausal symptoms .
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Original:  Neither isoflavones nor soy have been shown to affect male reproductive hormones.
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Original:  Friedberg is a former fellow at the Smithsonian Institution’s Woodrow Wilson International Center for Scholars, the Norwegian Nobel Institute, and Harvard University’s Center for International URL He also serves as Chairman of the Board of Counselors for the National Bureau of Asian Research's Pyle Center for Northeast Asian Studies.
Revised:  Friedberg is a former fellow at the Smithsonian Institution’s Woodrow Wilson International Center for Scholars, the Norwegian Nobel Institute, and Harvard University’s Center for International Affairs. He also serves as Chairman of the Board of Counselors for the National Bureau of Asian Research's Pyle Center for Northeast Asian Studies.
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Original:  Aaron L. Friedberg, "Ripe for Rivalry: Prospects for Peace in a Multipolar Asia," International Security, Vol. 18, No. 3 (Winter 1993/94), pp. 5–33.
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Original: Callippus  was a tyrant of Syracuse who ruled briefly for thirteen monthsSmith, Dictionary of Greek and Roman Biography and Mythology, p. 574 from 354 to 352 BC.
Revised: Callippus () was a tyrant of Syracuse who ruled briefly for thirteen monthsSmith, Dictionary of Greek and Roman Biography and Mythology, p. 574 from 354 to 352 BC.
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Original:  According to Polyaenus, Poly v. 4 Hipparinus was staying in Leontini when Calippus had sent out his army.
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Original: Callippus (  ) was a tyrant of Syracuse who ruled briefly for thirteen monthsSmith, Dictionary of Greek and Roman Biography and Mythology, p. 574 from 354 to 352 BC.
Revised: Callippus ( ; ) was a tyrant of Syracuse who ruled briefly for thirteen monthsSmith, Dictionary of Greek and Roman Biography and Mythology, p. 574 from 354 to 352 BC.
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Original:  Calippus then gained power by assassinating Dion, but ruled briefly before being ousted from power himself.
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Original:  Dion's lieutenant Calippus was an Athenian who became a student of Plato.
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Original:  As the future tyrant of Syracuse, Dion, who was also a student of Plato, recruited Calippus as a member of his army which successfully invaded Syracuse.
Revised:  As the future tyrant of Syracuse, Dion, who was also a student of Plato, recruited Callippus as a member of his army which successfully invaded Syracuse.
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