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Original:  The call for recess, again, was rebuffed by China, who chose ever stronger language towards the nations that were in there opinion holding up proceedings. maybe as explanatory material at the end of the article. doesnt follow pyramid being here anyhow .
Revised:  The call for recess, again, was rebuffed by China, who chose ever stronger language towards the nations that were in there opinion holding up proceedings. maybe as explanatory material at the end of the .
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Original:  It would be really really good, if someone could watch the start of the afternoon session, straight at 3 o clock, and try to figure out if anything interesting happened then (regarding the tech transfer item), as I didnt see that, and havent had any hearsay either, so I have no idea.
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Original:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
Revised:  Due to the stalling in the mornings session, discussions on the actual item of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
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Original:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
Revised:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer began after what would have been the scheduled closing time . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
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Original:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
Revised:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
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Original:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group (a sort of smaller circle to discuss things in), for the item .
Revised:  After work proceeding in a more normal manner for most of the afternoons session, their was again controversy when the actual matter of technology transfer came to be discussed . South Africa (on behalf of G77+C??) made the proposal to set up a contact group for the item .
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Original:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and later the US (Canada?), made critical statements, all voicing the opinion that they thought it would be better to leave time for negotiations on what the scope of the Group was to be , and therefore not establish the contact group until next years Conference.
Revised:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and the US made critical statements, all voicing the opinion that they thought it would be better to leave time for negotiations on what the scope of the Group was to be , and therefore not establish the contact group until next years Conference.
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Original:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and later the US (Canada?), made critical statements, all voicing the opinion that they thought it would be better to leave time for negotiations on what the scope of the Group was to be , and therefore not establish the contact group until next years Conference.
Revised:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and later the US (Canada?), made critical statements, noting that they believed that the scope of the Group was to be , and therefore not establish the contact group until next years Conference.
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Original:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and later the US (Canada?), made critical statements, all voicing the opinion that they thought it would be better to leave time for negotiations on what the scope of the Group was to be , and therefore not establish the contact group until next years Conference.
Revised:  After the EU making a supportive statement on the establishment of the group, Japan, and later the US (Canada?), made critical statements, all voicing the opinion that they thought it would be better to leave time for negotiations on what the scope of the contact group should first be established, and that it would be more sensible to establish the contact group until next years Conference.
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Original:  The G77+China having already made a suggestion for a non-Annex I co-chair, the so and so then declared that he would like to have a suggestion from the Annex I countries , or would otherwise see to it that a co-chair from one of these nations was found later.
Revised:  The G77+China having already made a suggestion for a non-Annex I co-chair, the so and so then declared that he would like to have a suggestion from the Annex I countries decided that
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Original:  The decision being reached provoked some applause from delegates and observers . (later, if at all): as a number of delegates complained that they were tired, would not be left with their usual time to discuss matters internally (after the closing of the session ), but most important no longer had translations of what was being said on the floor in the official UN languages .
Revised:  The decision being reached provoked some applause from delegates and observers (later, if at all): as a number of delegates complained that they were tired, would not be left with their usual time to discuss matters internally (after the closing of the session ), but most important no longer had translations of what was being said on the floor in the official UN languages .
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Original:  The decision being reached provoked some applause from delegates and observers . (later, if at all): as a number of delegates complained that they were tired, would not be left with their usual time to discuss matters internally (after the closing of the session ), but most important no longer had translations of what was being said on the floor in the official UN languages .
Revised:  The decision being reached provoked some applause from delegates and observers . , and the session was closed shortly thereafter .
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Original: The U.S. Congress has returned from a two-week recess to face a busy agenda before it completes its session later this month.
Revised: The United States Congress has returned from a two-week recess to face a busy agenda before it completes its session later this month.
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Original:  President George W. Bush renewed his criticism of majority Democrats in Congress who want to tie a timetable for the withdrawal of U.S. troops from Iraq with approval of more funds for the war effort.
Revised:  President Bush renewed his criticism of majority Democrats in Congress who want to tie a timetable for the withdrawal of U.S. troops from Iraq with approval of more funds for the war effort.
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Original:  President George W. Bush renewed his criticism of majority Democrats in Congress who want to tie a timetable for the withdrawal of U.S. troops from Iraq with approval of more funds for the war effort.
Revised:  President George W. Bush renewed his criticism of majority Democrats in Congress who want to tie a timetable for the withdrawal of United States troops from Iraq with approval of more funds for the war effort.
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Original:  But in the Senate, Republicans blocked a similar funding package last month because it included a timetable for a troop withdrawal.
Revised:  But in the Senate, Republican blocked a similar funding package last month because it included a timetable for a troop withdrawal.
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Original:  "If not for the stubborn refusal of the president and his Republican enablers to work with us, we would have accomplished a lot more," said Senator Reid.
Revised:  "If not for the stubborn refusal of the president and his Republicans enablers to work with us, we would have accomplished a lot more," said Senator Reid.
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Original: A report released by Oxfam at the conference on Tuesday says some countries are already feeling the effects of a warming planet.
Revised: The report released by Oxfam at the conference on Tuesday says some countries are already feeling the effects of a warming planet.
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Original:  It was a follow-up to a March 2007 hearing   
Revised:  It was a follow-up to a March 2007 hearing . 
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Original:  Hochschild of Discover Financial Services, Bruce L. Hammonds of Bank of America Corporation, and Ryan Schneider of Capital One Financial Corporation  
Revised:  Hochschild of Discover Financial Services, Bruce L. Hammonds of Bank of America Corporation, and Ryan Schneider of Capital One Financial Corporation . 
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Original: Subcommittee Chairman Carl Levin said in his opening statement: "Today's focus is on credit card issuers who hike the interest rates of cardholders who play by the rules — meaning those folks who pay on time, pay at least the minimum amount du , and wake up on day to find their interest rate has gone through the roof — again, not because they paid late or exceeded the credit limit, but because their credit card issuer decided they should be 'repriced'."
Revised: Subcommittee Chairman Carl Levin said in his opening statement: "Today's focus is on credit card issuers who hike the interest rates of cardholders who play by the rules — meaning those folks who pay on time, pay at least the minimum amount due , and wake up on day to find their interest rate has gone through the roof — again, not because they paid late or exceeded the credit limit, but because their credit card issuer decided they should be 'repriced'."
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Original:  This, he felt, is an unfair practice, as the credit card companies were negligent in informing their customers of the rate hikes and the reason for such hikes    ]   
Revised:  This, he felt, is an unfair practice, as the credit card companies were negligent in informing their customers of the rate hikes and the reason for such hikes . ] 
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Original:  This, he felt, is an unfair practice, as the credit card companies were negligent in informing their customers of the rate hikes and the reason for such hikes    ]   
Revised:  This, he felt, is an unfair practice, as the credit card companies were negligent in informing their customers of the rate hikes and the reason for such hikes ]." 
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Original:  They particularly report being saddled with interest rates they skyrocketed on them seemingly out of the blue.
Revised:  They particularly report being saddled with interest rates that skyrocketed on them seemingly out of the blue.
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Original: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on the specific cases where interest rates on were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on her payments.
Revised: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on specific cases where interest rates on were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on her payments.
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Original: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on the specific cases where interest rates on were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on her payments.
Revised: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on the specific cases where interest rates were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on her payments.
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Original: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on the specific cases where interest rates on were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on her payments.
Revised: Much of the 90 minute hearing focused on the specific cases where interest rates on were raised, allegedly because credit scores of the debtor dropped, and not because they were delinquent or otherwise behind on payments.
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Original: In an exclusive report, the United States military has confirmed to Wikinews, in an e-mail, the authenticity of the 2004 Standard Operating Procedures (SOP) for Camp Delta at the U.S. Naval base in Guantanamo Bay, which was leaked by Wikileaks on December 3, and first reported on by Wikinews.
Revised: In an exclusive report, the United States military has confirmed to Wikinews, in an e-mail, the authenticity of the 2004 Standard Operating Procedures (SOP) for Camp Delta at the U.S. Naval base in Guantánamo Bay, which was leaked by Wikileaks on December 3, and first reported on by Wikinews.
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Original:  "The document appears to be a valid 2004 Camp Delta SOP," said Rick Haupt, Commander, U.S. Navy Director of Public Affairs, Joint Task Force (JTF), Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  "The document appears to be a valid 2004 Camp Delta SOP," said Rick Haupt, Commander, United States Navy Director of Public Affairs, Joint Task Force (JTF), Guantanamo Bay.
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Original: Parts of the northeastern coast of Newfoundland,  in particular the Bonavista Peninsula, were hit hard following a Sunday evening storm.
Revised: Parts of the northeastern coast of Newfoundland, Canada, in particular the Bonavista Peninsula, were hit hard following a Sunday evening storm.
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Original:  By Tuesday the 4th of December , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone , however a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the Peninsula
Revised:  By Tuesday , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone , however a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the Peninsula
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Original:  By Tuesday the 4th of December , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone , however a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the Peninsula
Revised:  By Tuesday the 4th of December , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone . However a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the Peninsula
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Original:  By Tuesday the 4th of December , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone , however a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the Peninsula
Revised:  By Tuesday the 4th of December , around 7500 customers were without electricity on the Bonavista Peninsula alone , however a spokeswoman with Newfoundland Power Corporation said Tuesday that power had been restored faster than expected in parts of the peninsula
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Original:  Dutch scientists have said in a study that burning your food, may lead to certain types of cancer, particularly in woman .
Revised:  Dutch scientists have said in a study that burning your food, may lead to certain types of cancer, particularly in women .
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Original:  According to the study, acrylamides, a chemical produced when cooking foods high in carbohydrates , over 120 degrees Celsius in the frying, toasting and grilling processes, is a likely cause of some womb and ovarian cancers.
Revised:  According to the study, acrylamides, a chemical produced when cooking foods high in carbohydrates over 120 degrees Celsius in the frying, toasting and grilling processes, is a likely cause of some womb and ovarian cancers.
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Original:  Although it was found in 2002 that the chemical may be a cause of some cancers, the new study shows, for the first time, a link between the chemical and a human diet being a cause.
Revised:  Although it was found in 2002 that the chemical may be a cause of some cancers, the new study shows, for the first time, a link between the chemical in a human diet being a cause.
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Original:  Scientists followed and monitored 120,000 people over an 11 year period . 62,000 of the participants were women.
Revised:  Scientists followed and monitored 120,000 people over an 11 year period , of whom 62,000 of the participants were women.
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Original:  Scientists followed and monitored 120,000 people over an 11 year period . 62,000 of the participants were women.
Revised:  Scientists followed and monitored 120,000 people over an 11 year period . 62,000 were women.
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Original:  The study concluded that more than 40 micrograms of the chemical  or one bag of potato chips per day, is twice as likely to cause cancer in women.
Revised:  The study concluded that more than 40 micrograms of the chemical , or one bag of potato chips per day, is twice as likely to cause cancer in women.
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Original:  Dutch scientists have said in a study that burning your food , may lead to certain types of cancer, particularly in women.
Revised:  Dutch scientists have said in a study that burning your food may lead to certain types of cancer, particularly in women.
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Original:  What about Chief Justice John MarshallJD :
Revised:  What about Chief Justice John Marshall, for or against?JD :
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Original: 240px|The target between two coalitions -
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Original:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between  Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions including governments and public takes place in the Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall before the Ministry of Education will remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government with "War Hawk" opposed this plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident  and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
Revised:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between Pan-Green and Pan-Blue coalitions and the public. The Ministry of Education will remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government with "War Hawk" opposed this plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
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Original:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between  Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions including governments and public takes place in the Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall before the Ministry of Education will remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government with "War Hawk" opposed this plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident  and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
Revised:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions including governments and public takes place in the Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall before the Ministry of Education wants to remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government with "War Hawk" opposed this plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
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Original:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between  Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions including governments and public takes place in the Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall before the Ministry of Education will remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government with "War Hawk" opposed this plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident  and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
Revised:  want to get rid of "Chiang-Kai-shek-related things" strongly, a major battle between Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions including governments and public takes place in the Chiang Kai-shek Memorial Hall before the Ministry of Education will remove the title from the "Gate of Great Centrality and Perfect Uprightness" . Officials from Taipei City Government firmly opposed the plan, but relatives and survivors from the 228 Incident and Pan-Greens supported this plan.
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Original:  In fact, members from "League of Redress White-terror in 1950's" claimed in a press conference: "The slaughterer (meant to Chiang Kai-shek and relatives ) should admit and apologize for his faults so that we can consider on forgiveness," and stressed: "DAMN IT!
Revised:  In fact, members from "League of Redress White-terror in 1950's" claimed in a press conference: "The slaughterer referring to Chiang Kai-shek and relatives ) should admit and apologize for his faults so that we can consider on forgiveness," and stressed: "DAMN IT!
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Original:  In fact, members from "League of Redress White-terror in 1950's" claimed in a press conference: "The slaughterer (meant to Chiang Kai-shek and relatives ) should admit and apologize for his faults so that we can consider on forgiveness," and stressed: "DAMN IT!
Revised:  In fact, members from "League of Redress White-terror in 1950's" claimed in a press conference: "The slaughterer (meant to Chiang Kai-shek and relatives should admit and apologize for his faults so that we can consider on forgiveness," and stressed: "DAMN IT!
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Original:  Why several public still support the slaughterer and autocrat?
Revised:  Why is the public still supporting the slaughterer and autocrat?
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Original:  Why can an autocrat's virtues be eulogized?
Revised:  How can an autocrat's virtues be eulogized?
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Original:  The public in other countries can trace on the truth from history and jury for the slaughterer, why it can't  be so in Taiwan?"
Revised:  The public in other countries can trace on the truth from history and jury for the slaughterer, why can't be so in Taiwan?"
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Original:  The public in other countries can trace on the truth from history and jury for the slaughterer, why it can't  be so in Taiwan?"
Revised:  The public in other countries can trace on the truth from history and jury for the slaughterer, why it can't it be so in Taiwan?"
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Original:  The topic for this major conflict extended on 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election . KMT Candidate Ma Ying-jou said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
Revised:  The debate has become a topic in the 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election . KMT Candidate Ma Ying-jou said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
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