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Original:  The topic for this major conflict extended on 2008 Taiwan Presidential Election . KMT Candidate Ma Ying-jou said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
Revised:  The topic for this major conflict extended on 2008 Taiwan Presidential election . KMT Candidate Ma Ying-jou said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
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Original:  As a result, election-related people looked this event very careful.
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Original:  Related News Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions battled intensively before the 2008 Legislators' Election in Taiwa
Revised:  Related news Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions battled intensively before the 2008 Legislators' Election in Taiwa
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Original:  Kuomintang Candidate Ma Ying-jou said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
Revised:  Kuomintang Candidate Ying-jeou Ma said: "If I win this election, I'll put the title back!"
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Original:  After the current President of  Republic of China Chen Shui-bian  heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
Revised:  After the current President of the Republic of China Chen Shui-bian heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
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Original:  After the current President of  Republic of China Chen Shui-bian  heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
Revised:  After the current President of Republic of China Shui-bian heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
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Original:  After the current President of  Republic of China Chen Shui-bian  heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
Revised:  After the current President of Republic of China Chen Shui-bian heard those words, he replied: "Did he mean on Lian-ying Lee 's?" But the w:Vice President of the Republic of China |Vice President Annette Lu said: "Depend on what Frank (Hsieh) will say."
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Original:  Related news Pan-Green and Pan-Blue Coalitions battled intensively before the 2008 Legislators' Election in Taiwa
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Original: AS the 2007 Taipei IT Month went to the 5th day , different & multiple marketing battles exposed on this show .
Revised: As the 2007 Taipei IT Month went to the 5th day , different & multiple marketing battles exposed on this show .
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Original: AS the 2007 Taipei IT Month went to the 5th day , different & multiple marketing battles exposed on this show .
Revised: AS the 2007 Taipei IT Month went to the 5th day , different & multiple marketing battles took place in it .
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Original:  The gaming industry battled from high-definition AV-medias to applications on recreation and sports not only in Taiwan but apparently in Japan as some new gaming platforms launched recently.
Revised:  They battled from high-definition AV-medias to applications on recreation and sports not only in Taiwan but apparently in Japan as some new gaming platforms launched recently.
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Original:  The gaming industry battled from high-definition AV-medias to applications on recreation and sports not only in Taiwan but apparently in Japan as some new gaming platforms launched recently.
Revised:  The gaming industry battled from high-definition AV-medias to applications on recreation and sports not only in Taiwan but evidently in Japan while some new gaming platforms launched recently.
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Original:  High-definition market is prepared for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox360 launched and announced different games for different gamers.
Revised:  High-definition market prepares for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox360 launched and announced different games for different gamers.
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Original:  High-definition market is prepared for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox360 launched and announced different games for different gamers.
Revised:  High-definition market is prepared for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox 360 launched and announced different games for different gamers.
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Original:  High-definition market is prepared for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox360 launched and announced different games for different gamers.
Revised:  High-definition market is prepared for newly-launched games and platforms Recently, partners from Sony PS3 and Microsoft Xbox360 launched and announced several games for different gamers.
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Original:  Not only for entertainment, but also for recreation and sports application As Wii became another hot topic besides on Xbox360 & PS3 and was focused by some consumers after Nintendo launched Wii started from Wii Sports, "XaviXPORT", a sports gaming platform imported to Taiwan on October and spoken by a movie star Jackie Chan, became a strong contingent for Wii.
Revised:  Not only for entertainment, but also for recreation and sports As Wii became another hot topic besides on Xbox360 & PS3 and was focused by some consumers after Nintendo launched Wii started from Wii Sports, "XaviXPORT", a sports gaming platform imported to Taiwan on October and spoken by a movie star Jackie Chan, became a strong contingent for Wii.
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Original:  Not only for entertainment, but also for recreation and sports application As Wii became another hot topic besides on Xbox360 & PS3 and was focused by some consumers after Nintendo launched Wii started from Wii Sports, "XaviXPORT", a sports gaming platform imported to Taiwan on October and spoken by a movie star Jackie Chan, became a strong contingent for Wii.
Revised:  Not only for entertainment, but also for recreation and sports application As Wii became another hot topic besides on Xbox 360 & PS3 and was focused by some consumers after Nintendo launched Wii started from Wii Sports, "XaviXPORT", a sports gaming platform imported to Taiwan on October and spoken by a movie star Jackie Chan, became a strong contingent for Wii.
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Original: While the products at HBC stores of the mascots have been flying off the shelves, many have bashed the designs for having too much of a Japanese influence.
Revised: While the products at HBC stores of the mascots have been flying off the shelves, many have bashed the designs for having "too much" of a Japanese influence.
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Original:  Also the police  confirmed that they had recently re-opened the investigation into Mr Darwin's disappearance due to "new evidence" being received.
Revised:  Also the police have confirmed that they had recently re-opened the investigation into Mr Darwin's disappearance due to "new evidence" being received.
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Original: 250px|Panama, where Mrs . Darwin and, according to some sources, Mr . Darwin, moved recently Detective Superintendent Hutchinson, the officer in charge of the case, said that "He was in apparent good health, tanned, well nourished and dressed," when he walked into the West End Central Police station in London four days ago.
Revised: 250px|Panama, where Mrs Darwin and, according to some sources, Mr . Darwin, moved recently Detective Superintendent Hutchinson, the officer in charge of the case, said that "He was in apparent good health, tanned, well nourished and dressed," when he walked into the West End Central Police station in London four days ago.
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Original: 250px|Panama, where Mrs . Darwin and, according to some sources, Mr . Darwin, moved recently Detective Superintendent Hutchinson, the officer in charge of the case, said that "He was in apparent good health, tanned, well nourished and dressed," when he walked into the West End Central Police station in London four days ago.
Revised: 250px|Panama, where Mrs . Darwin and, according to some sources, Mr Darwin, moved recently Detective Superintendent Hutchinson, the officer in charge of the case, said that "He was in apparent good health, tanned, well nourished and dressed," when he walked into the West End Central Police station in London four days ago.
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Original:  He also said that the disappearance of Mr . Darwin "raised a lot of questions."
Revised:  He also said that the disappearance of Mr Darwin "raised a lot of questions."
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Original:  A public appeal for information about this incident was launched and it was made clear that the police believe that someone knows what happened to Mr . Darwin.
Revised:  A public appeal for information about this incident was launched and it was made clear that the police believe that someone knows what happened to Mr Darwin.
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Original:  Mrs . Darwin has said that she may struggle to repay the £300,000 she claimed on the life insurance as she has started to spend some of the money
Revised:  Mrs Darwin has said that she may struggle to repay the £300,000 she claimed on the life insurance as she has started to spend some of the money
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Original: It is believed that he has been charged with fraud after the release of a photo of Mr Darwin was released in a tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mirror, apparently showing him in Panama with his wife last year.
Revised: It is believed that he has been charged with fraud after a photo of Mr Darwin was released in a tabloid newspaper, the Daily Mirror, apparently showing him in Panama with his wife last year.
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Original:   Reaction
Revised:  A funeral service for family and friends is scheduled to be held at St Mary's Church in Denham on Wednesday April 27. Reaction
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Original:  Tributes Various people have paid tribute to Sir John Mills and his 73 years as an actor : In an interview with BBC News , the actor Corin Redgrave called Sir John Mills a "great character actor", and described him as "a modest man who disguised his contribution".
Revised:  Tributes Various people have paid tribute to Sir John Mills and his 73 years as an actor : In an interview with BBC News : The actor Corin Redgrave called Sir John Mills a "great character actor", and described him as "a modest man who disguised his contribution".
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Original:  In an interview with BBC News, fellow actor and long-time friend Lord Attenborough described Sir John Mills as "a hero of mine" who was "admired both by the general public and by the profession".
Revised:  Fellow actor and long-time friend Lord Attenborough described Sir John Mills as "a hero of mine" who was "admired both by the general public and by the profession".
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Original:  In an interview with BBC News, actor Bryan Forbes commended Sir John Mills' "extraordinary courage" at never retiring, and remarked upon his humour saying "I had some of my best laughs with Johnnie"
Revised:  Actor Bryan Forbes commended Sir John Mills' "extraordinary courage" at never retiring, and remarked upon his humour saying "I had some of my best laughs with Johnnie"
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Original: Image:US Supreme Court Wide.jpg|The US Supreme Court ]] The U.S. Supreme Court has heard a plea that terrorism suspects being held at the U.S. Naval base at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba, should be given the opportunity to challenge their detention in American courts.
Revised: Image:US Supreme Court Wide.jpg|The US Supreme Court ]] The U.S. Supreme Court has heard a plea that terrorism suspects being held at the U.S. Naval base at Guantánamo Bay, Cuba, should be given the opportunity to challenge their detention in American courts.
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Original:  Inside the court, attorney and former Clinton Solicitor General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantanamo . "All have been confined at Guantanamo for almost six years," he said.
Revised:  Inside the court, attorney and former US Solicitory General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantanamo . "All have been confined at Guantanamo for almost six years," he said.
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Original:  Inside the court, attorney and former Clinton Solicitor General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantanamo . "All have been confined at Guantanamo for almost six years," he said.
Revised:  Inside the court, attorney and former Clinton Solicitor General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantánamo . "All have been confined at Guantanamo for almost six years," he said.
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Original:  Inside the court, attorney and former Clinton Solicitor General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantanamo . "All have been confined at Guantanamo for almost six years," he said.
Revised:  Inside the court, attorney and former Clinton Solicitor General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantanamo . "All have been confined at Guantánamo for almost six years," he said.
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Original:  Many of the 305 prisoners at Guantanamo have complained of abuse and almost all have been confined for years without charges.
Revised:  Many of the 305 prisoners at Guantánamo have complained of abuse and almost all have been confined for years without charges.
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Original:  David Hicks, an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with al-Qaeda, was deported to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
Revised:  David Hicks, an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with al-Qaeda, was repatriated to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
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Original:  The Supreme Court ruled against the Bush administration in two previous cases concerning the legal rights of the Guantanamo detainees.
Revised:  The Supreme Court ruled against the Bush administration in two previous cases concerning the legal rights of the Guantánamo detainees.
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Original:  Aerial view of Guantanamo Bay, Cuba.
Revised:  Aerial view of Guantánamo Bay, Cuba.
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Original:  "If the courts are going to be in charge of the conduct of warfare, we are going to be a much less safe country," said Andrew  McCarthy, who is with the Foundation for Defense of Democracies.
Revised:  "If the courts are going to be in charge of the conduct of warfare, we are going to be a much less safe country," said Andrew C. McCarthy, who is with the Foundation for Defense of Democracies.
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Original:  A decision by the Supreme Court in the Guantanamo case is expected before the end of June
Revised:  A decision by the Supreme Court in the Guantánamo case is expected before the end of June
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Original: JPG|The US Supreme Court The U.S. Supreme Court has heard a plea that terrorism suspects being held at the U.S. Naval base at Guantánamo Bay, Cuba, should be given the opportunity to challenge their detention in American courts.
Revised: JPG|The US Supreme Court The United States Supreme Court The United States Supreme Court has heard a plea that terrorism suspects being held at the U.S. Naval base at Guantánamo Bay, Cuba, should be given the opportunity to challenge their detention in American courts.
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Original:  Inside the court, attorney and former US Solicitory General Seth Waxman argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantánamo.
Revised:  Inside the court, and former argued on behalf of a group of 37 detainees, part of the 305 prisoners now being held at Guantánamo.
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Original:  David Hicks , an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with al-Qaeda , was repatriated to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
Revised:  , an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with al-Qaeda , was repatriated to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
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Original:  David Hicks , an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with al-Qaeda , was repatriated to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
Revised:  David Hicks , an Australian citizen, who admitted to training with , was repatriated to Australia to serve a nine-month prison sentence.
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Original:  But civil and legal rights groups say the alternative procedures set up by Congress and the Bush administration deprive the detainees of basic rights.
Revised:  But and groups say the alternative procedures set up by Congress and the Bush administration deprive the detainees of basic rights.
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Original:  ]] A 7-year-old girl in Detroit, Michigan is considered a heroine after jumping in front of an gunman, saving her mother's life , as he fired six bullets into her body.
Revised:  ]] A 7-year-old girl in Detroit, Michigan may have saved her mother's life , as he fired six bullets into her body.
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Original:  Despite the daughter's heroism, her mother Selietha Parker, age 30 was shot two times by her ex- boyfriend Calvin Tillie, age 29.
Revised:  Despite the daughter's heroism, her mother Selietha Parker, age 30 was shot two times by her ex-boyfriend Calvin Tillie, age 29.
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Original:  When Parker arrived at his home, he was on the porch holding a 9mm caliber gun and ordered the two back into the car they came in.
Revised:  When Parker arrived at his home, he was on the porch holding a 9mm caliber gun and ordered the two back into the car they arrived in.
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Original:  When Parker arrived at his home, he was on the porch holding a 9mm caliber gun and ordered the two back into the car they arrived in . Tillie said that he wanted to go to a street named Six Mile Road, but Parker said the car needed gas and drove to a gas station where she dialed 9-1-1 on her cell phone as she paid the store's attendant.
Revised:  When Parker arrived at his home, he was on the porch holding a 9mm caliber gun and ordered the two back into the car in which they arrived . Tillie said that he wanted to go to a street named Six Mile Road, but Parker said the car needed gas and drove to a gas station where she dialed 9-1-1 on her cell phone as she paid the store's attendant.
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Original: Image:Wayne County Michigan Incorporated and Unincorporated areas Detroit highlighted.svg |Map highlighting Detroit in Wayne County.
Revised:  |Map highlighting Detroit in Wayne County.
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Original:  A 7-year-old girl in Detroit, Michigan  may have saved her mother's life when she jumped in front of a gunman, who fired six bullets into her body.
Revised:  A 7-year-old girl in Detroit, Michigan , United States may have saved her mother's life when she jumped in front of a gunman, who fired six bullets into her body.
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Original: Bryan Doeg, a military science student at the University of Central Florida, outlined the two prevailing thoughts that are the basis for many of these anti-French sentiments.
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Original:  "And their people are stuck up."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Doeg believes that he and his classmates are not without reason for their perceptions about the French.
Revised:  "And their people are stuck up."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Southwest Missouri State (SMS) finance major, Fabian Florant, got straight to the point when discussing Doeg 's first assumption that the French are weak.
Revised:  Southwest Missouri State (SMS) finance major, Fabian Florant, got straight to the point when discussing another student 's first assumption that the French are weak.
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Original: For the first time in history, the  Siemens-Westinghouse Competition  was won by two females.
Revised: For the first time in history, the Siemens-Westinghouse Competition ) was won by two females.
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Original: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at the  Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
Revised: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at the w: Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
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Original: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at the w: Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
Revised: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at the Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
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Original: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at the Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
Revised: Janelle Schlossberger and Amanda Marinoff, students at Plainview-Old Bethpage John F. Kennedy High School in Plainview, New York won the team section of the competition for their work developing a drug that blocks reproduction of tuberculosis bacteria.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Isha Himani Jain from Freedom Highschool in Pennsylvania won the individual competition for work involving the bone growth in Zebra fish.
Revised:  Meanwhile, Isha Himani Jain from Freedom High School in Pennsylvania won the individual competition for work involving the bone growth in Zebra fish.
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Original:  These were twofold, one regarding the current Conference, and one future goals.
Revised:  These are twofold, one regarding the current Conference, and one future goals.
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Original:  On the talks here at Bali, the Declaration said it was necessary that "a new global climate treaty [...] needs to begin in December 2007 and be completed by 2009".
Revised:  On the talks here at Bali, the Declaration says it is necessary that "a new global climate treaty [...] needs to begin in December 2007 and be completed by 2009".
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Original:  It went on to say that "The primary goal of this new regime must be to limit global warming to no more than 2 °C", and that emmisions would need to be at least cut to half what was being emmited in 1990 in order to be able to reach that goal.
Revised:  It went on to say that "The primary goal of this new regime must be to limit global warming to no more than 2 °C", and that emissions would need to be at least cut to half what was being emmited in 1990 in order to be able to reach that goal.
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Original:  It went on to say that "The primary goal of this new regime must be to limit global warming to no more than 2 °C", and that emmisions would need to be at least cut to half what was being emmited in 1990 in order to be able to reach that goal.
Revised:  It went on to say that "The primary goal of this new regime must be to limit global warming to no more than 2 °C", and that emmisions would need to be at least cut to half what was being emitted in 1990 in order to be able to reach that goal.
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