wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CEwQ6AEwBA#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online ).
Revised:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online ).
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Original:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CEwQ6AEwBA#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online ).
Revised:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CEwQ6AEwBA#v=onepage %DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online ).
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Original:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CEwQ6AEwBA#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online ).
Revised:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität ( id=fO9LAAAAcAAJ pg=PA12%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CEwQ6AEwBA#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Online ).
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Original:  Familie, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchiv Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 and Anton Bloemde/stadtarchiv/fortgeschrittene/tektonik/deposita/4_3_0.shtml Bloem , Anton Joseph (1814-1884), Advokatenanwalt, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchivs Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
Revised:  Familie, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchiv Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 and Anton Bloem in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC %DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador %DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X %DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage %DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
Revised:  Stackpole Books, Mechanicsburg/PA, 2004, , ( id=L6duraN01ZsC pg=PA146%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Lorenz+Cantador hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=LzLYUtSwDo7YsgbKvIG4Cw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CD0Q6AEwAjgK#v=onepage q=Lorenz\%20Cantador%DIFDELCMD < &%%% Online) At the age of 53, he resigned from active military service on 16 November 1863 because of an injury that had flared up again and because of pericarditis and pleurisy, and then worked in various civilian jobs.
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Original:  which, due to the elections on 1 May 1848, elected its chairman Hugo Wesendonck to the Frankfurt Parliament and members Joseph Eulerduesseldorf.de/stadtarchiv/fortgeschrittene/tektonik/deposita/4_6_0.shtml Euler , Familie, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchiv Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 and Anton Bloem in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
Revised:  which, due to the elections on 1 May 1848, elected its chairman Hugo Wesendonck to the Frankfurt Parliament and members Joseph EulerEuler , Familie, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchiv Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 and Anton Bloem in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
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Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
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Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ %DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
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Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
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Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy %DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
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Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage q=Verein\%20f\%C3\%BCr\%20democratic\%20monarchy%DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
Revised:  East), Akademie-Verlag (GDR), 1988, On 1 July 1848, the deutschkatholische MP Christian Gottfried Daniel Nees von Esenbeck presented his bill The Democratic Monarchy to the Prussian National Assembly ( id=VChGAAAAcAAJ printsec=frontcover%DIFDELCMD < &%%% dq=Verein+f\%C3\%BCr+democratic+monarchy hl=en%DIFDELCMD < &%%% sa=X ei=h2bZUuSMKoGmtAbp2oCYAw%DIFDELCMD < &%%% ved=0CDsQ6AEwAQ#v=onepage %DIFDELCMD < &%%% f=false online).
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Original:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität (Online). which, due to the elections on 1 May 1848, elected its chairman Hugo Wesendonck to the Frankfurt Parliament and members Joseph EulerEuler, Familie, page on portal duesseldorf.de of the Stadtarchiv Düsseldorf, retrieved 6 September 2021 and Anton Bloem in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
Revised:  Using the term democratic monarchy, Julius Froebel elaborated similar ideas in his 1848 paper Das Königthum und die Volkssouverainität (Online). which, due to the elections on 1 May 1848, elected its chairman Hugo Wesendonck to the Frankfurt Parliament and members Joseph Euler and Anton Bloem in the Prussian National Assembly could send.
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Original: Haruthiun Abeljanz (1914) Haruthiun Abeljanz (ca. 1886) Haruthiun Tigran Abeljanz ( born 25th April 1849 in Lori, Armenia, Ottoman Empire;
Revised: Haruthiun Abeljanz (1914) Haruthiun Abeljanz (ca. 1886) Haruthiun Tigran Abeljanz ( April 25, 1849 in Lori, Armenia, Ottoman Empire;
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Original:  died 11th October 1921 in Zürich ) was a Swiss Chemist . Biography  He first studied in Heidelberg, then enrolled in the Philosophical Faculty II of the University of Zurich for chemistry in the summer semester of 1869.
Revised:  died 11th October 1921 ) was a Swiss Chemist . Biography He first studied in Heidelberg, then enrolled in the Philosophical Faculty II of the University of Zurich for chemistry in the summer semester of 1869.
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Original:  He gave up this office on 20 April 1884 after he had been appointed associate professor of organic chemistry.
Revised:  He resigned from this office on 20 April 1884 after he had been appointed associate professor of organic chemistry.
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Original:  He gave up this office on 20 April 1884 after he had been appointed associate professor of organic chemistry.
Revised:  He gave up this office on 20 April 1884 after he was appointed associate professor of organic chemistry.
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Original:  He affiliated himself with the Parti du Peuple , a Hutu-dominated party that contested in the May 1965 elections for the National Assembly.
Revised:  He affiliated himself with the Party of the People , a Hutu-dominated party that contested in the May 1965 elections for the National Assembly.
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Original: Myburgh formerly served  chairman of the Swellendam Heritage Association and as the chairman of the DA's Swellendam Constituency Committee.
Revised: Myburgh formerly served as chairman of the Swellendam Heritage Association and as the chairman of the DA's Swellendam Constituency Committee.
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Original:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakene  
Revised:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakened. 
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Original:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakene  
Revised:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakene References 
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Original:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakene  
Revised:  The Mamluk sultanate, after this battle, received a heavy blow, and after the loss of the commanders of the troops, the state was greatly weakene Source
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Original: Background and the course of the battle The Mamluk Sultanate was one of the external threats of the Akk oyunlu state, whose ruler was the Sultan Yagub.
Revised: Background and the course of the battle The Mamluk Sultanate was one of the external threats of the Akkoyunlu state, whose ruler was the Sultan Yagub.
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Original:  The right side of the Mamluk army was commanded by Kansu Yakhyavi (the head of Damascus), the left side was commanded by Ozdemir (the Head of Aleppo) and the central side of the army was commanded by Amir Yash-bey.
Revised:  The right side of the Mamluk army was commanded by Gansu Yakhyavi (the head of Damascus), the left side was commanded by Ozdemir (the Head of Aleppo) and the central side of the army was commanded by Amir Yash-bey.
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Original:  Amir Yash-bey, Kansu Yakhyavi and Ozdemir were taken prisoners.
Revised:  Amir Yash-bey, Gansu Yakhyavi and Ozdemir were taken prisoners.
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Original:  Amir Yash-Bey was executed and his head was sent to the Sultan Yagub.
Revised:  Amir Yash Bey was executed and his head was sent to the Sultan Yagub.
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Original: The Battle of Urfa is a battle that took place between the AkKoyunlu State and the Mamluk Sultanate in August 1480 in Urfa (the territory of the modern Turkey).
Revised: The Battle of Urfa is a battle that took place between the Aq Qoyunlu and the Mamluk Sultanate in August 1480 in Urfa (the territory of the modern Turkey).
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Original:  The reason was the invasion of the Mamluks into the territory of Akkoyunlu to capture Urfa.
Revised:  The reason was the invasion of the Mamluks into the territory of Aq Qoyunlu to capture Urfa.
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Original:  During the battle, the troops of Akkoyunlu inflicted a crushing defeat on the Mamluks.
Revised:  During the battle, the troops of Aq Qoyunlu inflicted a crushing defeat on the Mamluks.
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Original:  Background and the course of the battle The Mamluk Sultanate was one of the external threats of the Akkoyunlu state , whose ruler was the Sultan Yagub.
Revised:  Background and the course of the battle The Mamluk Sultanate was one of the external threats of Aq Qoyunlu , whose ruler was the Sultan Yagub.
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Original:  The Mamluk ruler, Gayit Bey, took the advantage of the Akkoyunlu leader's death, Uzun Hasan, and sent a 100 thousand army under the commandment of Amir Yash-bey to capture Urfa.
Revised:  The Mamluk ruler, Gayit Bey, took the advantage of Aq Qoyunlu leader's death, Uzun Hasan, and sent a 100 thousand army under the commandment of Amir Yash-bey to capture Urfa.
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Original:  The ruler of the Akkoyunlu state , the Sultan Yagub, was soon informed about this and sent an army under the command of Bayandur-bek and Khalil-bek to protect Urfa.
Revised:  The ruler of Aq Qoyunlu , the Sultan Yagub, was soon informed about this and sent an army under the command of Bayandur-bek and Khalil-bek to protect Urfa.
Edit intent: clarity