wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Along with technology writers for Slate, PC Magazine, USA Today, BusinessWeek, Aviation Weekly, Wikinews was invited by the America-Israel Friendship League and the Israeli Foreign Ministry to review Israel’s technology sector as part of a campaign to 're-brand the country' and show that there is more to Israel than the Palestinian conflict.
Revised:  Along with technology writers for Slate, PC Magazine, USA Today, BusinessWeek, Aviation Weekly, Wikinews was invited by the America-Israel Friendship League and the Israeli Foreign Ministry to review Israel’s technology sector . It's part of an effort to 're-brand the country' and show that there is more to Israel than the Palestinian conflict.
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Original:  Along with technology writers for Slate, PC Magazine, USA Today, BusinessWeek, Aviation Weekly, Wikinews was invited by the America-Israel Friendship League and the Israeli Foreign Ministry to review Israel’s technology sector as part of a campaign to 're-brand the country' and show that there is more to Israel than the Palestinian conflict.
Revised:  Along with technology writers for Slate, PC Magazine, USA Today, BusinessWeek, Aviation Weekly, Wikinews was invited by the America-Israel Friendship League and the Israeli Foreign Ministry to review Israel’s technology sector as part of a campaign to 're-brand the country' to show America that there is more to Israel than the Palestinian conflict.
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Original:  On this trip , the non-conflict item on display was the large Israeli technology sector, which has given the world the Pentium processor and Instant Messaging.
Revised:  On this trip we saw the people who gave us the Pentium processor and Instant Messaging.
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Original: Now a largely bygone era in the development of the Israeli state, Shimon Peres spent his early days on kibbutz Geva, and was one of the founders of kibbutz Alumot .
Revised:  Shimon Peres spent his early days on kibbutz Geva, and was one of the founders of kibbutz Alumot .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Peres is the elder statesman of Israeli politics, but he remembers that he has not always been as popular as he is today.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Peres is the elder statesman of Israeli politics, but he remembers that he has not always been as popular as he is today.
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Original: Shimon Peres spent his early days on kibbutz, a bygone Socialist era of Israel.
Revised: Shimon Peres spent his early days on kibbutz, a bygone socialist era of Israel.
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Original:  [[Image: Technion particle acceleratorby David Shankbone .jpg|300px|The now disused Koffler particle accelerator at the Weitzmann Institute, one of Israel's most accomplished institutions of higher learning in the sciences.
Revised:  [[Image: Weizmann Institute particle accelerator .jpg|300px|The now disused Koffler particle accelerator at the Weitzmann Institute, one of Israel's most accomplished institutions of higher learning in the sciences.
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Original: Ezer Weizman, former President of the State of Israel died at the age of 81 on the date 24th of April 2005.
Revised: Ezer Weizman, former President of the State of Israel died at the age of 81 on the 24th of April 2005.
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Original:     His funeral was held today ( 26th of April 200
Revised:  His funeral was held the 26th of April 200
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Original: Ezer Weizman, former President of the State of Israel died at the age of 81 on the 24th of April 2005.
Revised: Ezer Weizman, former President of the State of Israel died at the age of 81 on the April 24, 2005.
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Original:  His funeral was held the 26th of April 2005
Revised:  His funeral was held on April 26, 2005
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Original:  He stated by going to Shearer's home on Friday January 4 to have a discussion with her, but she was never seen alive again.
Revised:  He started by going to Shearer's home on Friday January 4 to have a discussion with her, but she was never seen alive again.
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Original:  Between stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer to death "with a blunt object, multiple times."
Revised:  Before stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer to death "with a blunt object, multiple times."
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Original:  Before stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer to death "with a blunt object, multiple times . "  On Saturday Morning, he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
Revised:  Before stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer "with a blunt object, multiple times . " On Saturday Morning, he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
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Original:  Before stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer to death "with a blunt object, multiple times . "  On Saturday Morning, he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
Revised:  Before stabbing Veasley, he beat Shearer to death "with a blunt object, multiple times " On Saturday Morning, he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
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Original:  He was also charged with stabbing his ex-wife's boyfriend, William Veasley, 42. 
Revised:  He was also charged with stabbing his ex-wife's boyfriend, William Veasley, 42. Hi
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Original:  He was also charged with stabbing his ex-wife's boyfriend, William Veasley, 42. Hi
Revised:  He was also charged with stabbing his ex-wife's boyfriend, William Veasley, 42. 
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Original: Police later found out that McCuin had stabbed his ex wife 's boyfriend, and also broke into Tyler Custom Openings, a local business, sometime on Friday or Saturday.
Revised: Police later found out that McCuin had stabbed his ex-wife 's boyfriend, and also broke into Tyler Custom Openings, a local business, sometime on Friday or Saturday.
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Original:  On Saturday Morning , he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
Revised:  On Saturday morning , he arrived at his ex-wife's home and fought with Veasley, stabbing him.
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Original:  It's differ than last year that the cross-division road race will not be arranged.
Revised:  What's different from last year is that the cross-division road race will not be arranged.
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Original: 200px|The cross-division long-distance race won't be included in this race.
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Original: 2008 The 20th Tour de Taiwan, sponsored by Atunas, organized by Chinese Taipei Cycling Association, will be raced on March 9 to 16 from Kaohsiung City through Pingtung, Changhua, Taiching, Hsinchu, and Taipei County, to Taipei City.
Revised:  The 20th Tour de Taiwan, sponsored by Atunas, organized by Chinese Taipei Cycling Association, will be raced on March 9 to 16 from Kaohsiung City through Pingtung, Changhua, Taiching, Hsinchu, and Taipei County, to Taipei City.
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Original:  Thirty Seven states and the Federal Government have capital punishment for some crimes, all except Nebraska (which uses electrocution) use lethal injection.
Revised:  Thirty-seven states and the Federal Government have capital punishment for some crimes, all except Nebraska (which uses electrocution) use lethal injection.
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Original:  According to the article on Lethal Injection in Wikipedia, the three chemicals used are Sodium thiopental to render the offender unconscious;
Revised:  According to the article on lethal injection in Wikipedia, the three chemicals used are Sodium thiopental to render the offender unconscious;
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Original:  The chemicals apparently cannot be combined together as they could preciptate into a solid and be ineffective.
Revised:  The chemicals apparently cannot be combined together as they could precipitate into a solid and be ineffective.
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Original:  " T he goal is to give Jay a fairly long handover time.
Revised:  " he goal is to give Jay a fairly long handover time.
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Original:  " T he goal is to give Jay a fairly long handover time.
Revised:  " T The goal is to give Jay a fairly long handover time.
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Original:  So until the end of January, please continue to work directly with Sandy, while she helps Jay get oriented . "  Mr  Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
Revised:  So until the end of January, please continue to work directly with Sandy, while she helps Jay get oriented , " Mr Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
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Original:  So until the end of January, please continue to work directly with Sandy, while she helps Jay get oriented . "  Mr  Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
Revised:  So until the end of January, please continue to work directly with Sandy, while she helps Jay get oriented . " Mr . Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
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Original:  Ms Ordonez managed the WMF's public and media relations from January 2007, and will stay on in Florida until the end of the month when the Tampa office is closed.
Revised:  Ordonez managed the WMF's public and media relations from January 2007, and will stay on in Florida until the end of the month when the Tampa office is closed.
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Original:  Mr. Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
Revised:  Walsh is fresh from a position as Manager, Public Relations at Canadian Broadcasting Corporation.
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Original:  Mr Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco  when they open on the 15th of January
Revised:  Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco when they open on the 15th of January
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Original:  Mr Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco  when they open on the 15th of January
Revised:  Mr Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco , California when they open on the 15th of January
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Original:  Mr Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco  when they open on the 15th of January
Revised:  Mr Walsh will be based out of the new offices in San Francisco when they open on the January 15
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Original:  "I'm extremely grateful for [Sandy Ordonez's] hard work and excellent judgment ," said Sue Gardner, Executive Director of Wikimedia Foundation, in her announcement.
Revised:  "I'm extremely grateful for [Sandy Ordonez's] hard work and excellent judgement ," said Sue Gardner, Executive Director of Wikimedia Foundation, in her announcement.
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Original: At Auckland International Airport this morning (NZDT) , the national airline of New Zealand offered the use of a runway for the two to race against each other.
Revised:  Auckland International Airport this morning (NZDT) , the national airline of New Zealand offered the use of a runway for the two to race against each other.
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Original: At Auckland International Airport this morning (NZDT) , the national airline of New Zealand offered the use of a runway for the two to race against each other.
Revised: At Auckland International Airport this morning (NZDT) offered the use of a runway for the two to race against each other.
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Original:  This blast has been blamed on the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) by government officials  
Revised:  This blast has been blamed on the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) by government officials . 
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Original: The US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, begins today a five day trip to Latin America  .
Revised: The US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, began a five day trip to Latin America .
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Original:  She is expect to visit the following countries:Brazil, Colombia, Chile and El-Salvador.
Revised:  She is expected to visit the following countries:Brazil, Colombia, Chile and El-Salvador.
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Original:  She arrived this Tuesday in Brasilia Air Base at 4 a.m. and she went to the hotel in Brasilia
Revised:  She arrived this Tuesday in Brasilia Air Base at 4 a.m. and proceeded to a hotel in Brasilia
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Original:  The US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice , began a five day trip to Latin America today.
Revised:  The US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice began a five day trip to Latin America today.
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Original:  She is expected to visit the following countries: Brazil, Colombia, Chile  and El-Salvador.
Revised:  She is expected to visit the following countries: Brazil, Colombia, Chile , and El-Salvador.
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Original:  She arrived this Tuesday in Brasilia Air Base at 4 a.m . and proceeded to a hotel in Brasilia
Revised:  She arrived at Brasilia Air Base at 4 a.m . and proceeded to a hotel in Brasilia
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Original:  they are Karnely Ivanov, 32, of Anchor Point, Feodot Basargin, 33, of Anchorage, Anton Rijkoff, 30, of Anchorage, and Andrean Basargin, 25, of Homer   
Revised:  they are Karnely Ivanov, 32, of Anchor Point, Feodot Basargin, 33, of Anchorage, Anton Rijkoff, 30, of Anchorage, and Andrean Basargin, 25, of Homer . 
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Original:  they are Karnely Ivanov, 32, of Anchor Point, Feodot Basargin, 33, of Anchorage, Anton Rijkoff, 30, of Anchorage, and Andrean Basargin, 25, of Homer   
Revised:  they are Karnely Ivanov, 32, of Anchor Point, Feodot Basargin, 33, of Anchorage, Anton Rijkoff, 30, of Anchorage, and Andrean Basargin, 25, of Homer It was discovered that a vital spring designed to exert pressure and thus keep the door shut was missing; the operator had improvised it's own device to shut the door without correctly locking it
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Original:  the operator had improvised it's own device to shut the door without correctly locking it    
Revised:  the operator had improvised it's own device to shut the door without correctly locking it . 
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Original:  Cargo went through the left propellor , forcing an emergency crash landing on the ice, which severely injured two people.
Revised:  Cargo went through the left propeller , forcing an emergency crash landing on the ice, which severely injured two people.
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Original:  The pilot had loaded the hold and then visualy inspected the door;
Revised:  The pilot had loaded the hold and then visually inspected the door;
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Original:  He had originally attempted to turn the aircraft around and told the NTSB he had thought that the aircraft should have been able to fly despite the open door, although he apreciated aircraft documentation did not specifically mention such conditions.
Revised:  He had originally attempted to turn the aircraft around and told the NTSB he had thought that the aircraft should have been able to fly despite the open door, although he appreciated aircraft documentation did not specifically mention such conditions.
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Original:  The door is aproximatly 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high
Revised:  The door is approximatly 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high
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Original:  The door is approximatly 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high  
Revised:  The door is approximatly 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high . 
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Original:  The plane crashed into frigid waters a short distance from the runway, killing six of the ten on board, including the pilot, and leaving the other four hospitalised .
Revised:  The plane crashed into frigid waters a short distance from the runway, killing six of the ten on board, including the pilot, and leaving the other four hospitalized .
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Original:  He refused to speculate on accident cause, poiting out that a full investigation would take  time to complete.
Revised:  He refused to speculate on accident cause, pointing out that a full investigation would take time to complete.
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Original:  He refused to speculate on accident cause, poiting out that a full investigation would take  time to complete.
Revised:  He refused to speculate on accident cause, poiting out that a full investigation would take some time to complete.
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Original:  The remains of the fuselage have been laid out in a maintenance hangar close to the Kodiak Island accident site and is scheduled for examination tommorrow pending arrival of an accident investigation representative from Piper, who will provide detailed technical assistance.
Revised:  The remains of the fuselage have been laid out in a maintenance hangar close to the Kodiak Island accident site and is scheduled for examination tomorrow pending arrival of an accident investigation representative from Piper, who will provide detailed technical assistance.
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Original:  The nine-passenger compliment had chartered the Servant Air plane to fly to Homer, and represented maximum capacity for the twin-engined plane.
Revised:  The nine-passenger complement had chartered the Servant Air plane to fly to Homer, and represented maximum capacity for the twin-engined plane.
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Original:  It apears that the survivors were seated at the rear of the plane.
Revised:  It appears that the survivors were seated at the rear of the plane.
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Original:  There have been two previous cases of Alaskan Piper Nvajo crashes confirmed to have been caused by open forward cargo hatches.
Revised:  There have been two previous cases of Alaskan Piper Navajo crashes confirmed to have been caused by open forward cargo hatches.
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Original:  this caused seperation of an engine cover which proceded to strike and damage the horizontal stabilizer.
Revised:  this caused separation of an engine cover which proceded to strike and damage the horizontal stabilizer.
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Original:  this caused seperation of an engine cover which proceded to strike and damage the horizontal stabilizer.
Revised:  this caused seperation of an engine cover which proceeded to strike and damage the horizontal stabilizer.
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Original:  the operator had improvised it's own device to shut the door without correctly locking it.
Revised:  the operator had improvised its own device to shut the door without correctly locking it.
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Original:  The second crash occured in May 1996.
Revised:  The second crash occurred in May 1996.
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Original:  A Cape Smythe Air Services owned-and-operated aircraft attempting takeoff at Point Hope had it's forward door unexpectantly open as the nose lifted off.
Revised:  A Cape Smythe Air Services owned-and-operated aircraft attempting takeoff at Point Hope had its forward door unexpectedly open as the nose lifted off.
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Original:  Cargo went through the left propeller, forcing an emergency crash landing on the ice , which severely injured two people.
Revised:  Cargo went through the left propeller, forcing an emergency crash landing on the ice severely injuring two people.
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Original:  under the false impression that it had been secured properly he proceded to takeoff.
Revised:  under the false impression that it had been secured properly he proceeded to takeoff.
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Original:  The door is approximatly 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high.
Revised:  The door is approximately 3 1/2 feet wide and 2 1/2 feet high.
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Original: Costs between June 2007 and June 2008 were predicted to double, from $2,650,000 to $ 5,700,000 (normalized).
Revised: Costs between June 2007 and June 2008 were predicted to double, from US$2,650,000 to US$ 5,700,000 (normalized).
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Original: Florence Devouard-Nibart , current Chair of the Board of Trustees of the Wikimedia Foundation, expressed pleasure at discovering the projections.
Revised: Florence Nibart-Devouard , current Chair of the Board of Trustees of the Wikimedia Foundation, expressed pleasure at discovering the projections.
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Original: Wikimedia Foundation approaches donors 200px|right This is not news.
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Original:  Although Ms Gardner was hired in July, Board member Michael Davis, former treasurer, provided financial information to the board through much of 2007.
Revised:  Although Ms Gardner was hired in July, Board member Michael Davis, former treasurer, provided financial information to the board through much of 
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Original:  The  have remained silent.
Revised:  The rest of the tribes have remained silent.
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Original: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment -- most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep illegal alcohol from entering his dry reservation. wikinews interviewed Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate.
Revised: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment -- most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep illegal alcohol from entering his dry reservation. Wikinews interviewed Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate.
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Original: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment -- most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep illegal alcohol from entering his dry reservation  .
Revised: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment — most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep illegal alcohol from entering his dry reservation .
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Original: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment -- most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep illegal alcohol from entering his dry reservation  .
Revised: The central figure the movement has been Canupa Gluha Mani, a longtime activist whose tactics have led repeatedly to his arrest and imprisonment -- most recently in June 2007, when Canupa Gluha Mani was one of six arrested who participated in blockading a road in Nebraska to keep outside alcohol from entering his dry reservation .
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Original:  Russel Means is in the background.
Revised:  Russell Means is in the background.
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Original:  Wikinews interviewed Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate  .
Revised:  Wikinews talked to Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate .
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Original:  Wikinews talked to Canupa Gluha Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate in an exclusive interview.
Revised:  talked to Canupa Gluha Mani about the movement and Lakota Oyate in an exclusive interview.
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Original:  The society, an okolakiciye or warrior society, originated in the Black Hills .
Revised:  The society, an okolakiciye or warrior society, originated in the .
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Original:  He told the following story: Four warriors in the hills ran across a coyote and gave it chase.
Revised:  He told the following story: Four warriors in the hills ran across a and gave it chase.
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