wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Ali Abdulla Al-Ubaydli ( Arabic: علي عبدالله العبيدلي ) (born 1850 - died 1942) was a merchant, philanthropist and pioneer in Bahrain.
Revised: Ali Abdulla Al-Ubaydli ( ) (born 1850 - died 1942) was a merchant, philanthropist and pioneer in Bahrain.
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Original: Lieutenant General TNI (Ret.) Hinsa Siburian (born Tarutung, 28 October 1959) is an Indonesian government official and former soldier.
Revised:  Hinsa Siburian (born Tarutung, 28 October 1959) is an Indonesian government official and former soldier.
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Original:  He currently served as Chief of National Cyber and Crypto Agency (Indonesian: Badan Siber dan Sandi Negara, BSSN) since 21 May 2019, replacing Major General TNI (Ret.) Dr. Djoko Setiadi.
Revised:  He served as Chief of National Cyber and Crypto Agency (Indonesian: Badan Siber dan Sandi Negara, BSSN) since 21 May 2019, replacing Major General TNI (Ret.) Dr. Djoko Setiadi.
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Original:  He currently served as Chief of National Cyber and Crypto Agency (Indonesian: Badan Siber dan Sandi Negara, BSSN) since 21 May 2019, replacing Major General TNI (Ret.) Dr. Djoko Setiadi.
Revised:  He currently served as Chief of National Cyber and Crypto Agency (Indonesian: Badan Siber dan Sandi Negara, BSSN) beginning in 21 May 2019, replacing Major General TNI (Ret.) Dr. Djoko Setiadi.
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Original:  Early life and education Siburian was born at Tarutung, 28 October 1959.
Revised:  Early life Siburian was born at Tarutung, 28 October 1959.
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Original:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
Revised:  Adhi Makayasa was named best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
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Original:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
Revised:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch has their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
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Original:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
Revised:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded him with the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
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Original:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor for graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system which excelled in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
Revised:  Adhi Makayasa awarded as the best graduate of Indonesian Military Academies system (each branch have their own Adhi Makayasa winner), and Tri Sakti Wiratama awarded as the highest honor , for excelling in mental, physical, and intellectual aspects.
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Original:  He also educated in Indonesian Army Command and General Staff College (graduated in 2000), Indonesian Armed Forces Staff and Command Colleges (graduated in 2006), and National Resilience Institute of The Republic of Indonesia (2011).
Revised:  He was educated in the Indonesian Army Command and General Staff College (graduated in 2000), Indonesian Armed Forces Staff and Command Colleges (graduated in 2006), and National Resilience Institute of The Republic of Indonesia (2011).
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Original:  Military Careers Siburian was assigned to Kopassus after his graduationfrom the Indonesian Military Academy.
Revised:  Career Siburian was assigned to Kopassus after his graduationfrom the Indonesian Military Academy.
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Original:  During his time of assignment in Papua as Kasdam of Kodam XVII/Cenderawasih, he was instrumental in reconciling Dani tribe and Moni tribe, two indigenous tribe in Papua, which almost starting the Timika tribal war in 2014.
Revised:  During his assignment in Papua as Kasdam of Kodam XVII/Cenderawasih, he was instrumental in reconciling Dani tribe and Moni tribe, two indigenous tribe in Papua, which almost starting the Timika tribal war in 2014.
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Original:  During his time of assignment in Papua as Kasdam of Kodam XVII/Cenderawasih, he was instrumental in reconciling Dani tribe and Moni tribe, two indigenous tribe in Papua, which almost starting the Timika tribal war in 2014.
Revised:  During his time of assignment in Papua as Kasdam of Kodam XVII/Cenderawasih, he was instrumental in reconciling Dani tribe and Moni tribe, two indigenous tribe in Papua, which almost started the Timika tribal war in 2014.
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Original:  Post Military Careers In December 2018, he was appointed as commissary of Freeport Indonesia.
Revised:  Post Military Career In December 2018, he was appointed as commissary of Freeport Indonesia.
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Original:  Post Military Careers In December 2018, he was appointed as commissary of Freeport Indonesia.
Revised:  Post Military Careers In December 2018, he was appointed commissary of Freeport Indonesia.
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Original:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As in 2021, he still retained his post at Freeport Indonesia as the commissary of the Freeport Indonesia despite his assignment in BSSN. As Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
Revised:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
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Original:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As in 2021, he still retained his post at Freeport Indonesia as the commissary of the Freeport Indonesia despite his assignment in BSSN. As Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
Revised:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As in 2021, he still retained his post at Freeport Indonesia as the commissary of the Freeport Indonesia despite his assignment in BSSN. Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
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Original:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As in 2021, he still retained his post at Freeport Indonesia as the commissary of the Freeport Indonesia despite his assignment in BSSN. As Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
Revised:  On 21 May 2019, he appointed by Joko Widodo as Chief of BSSN . As in 2021, he still retained his post at Freeport Indonesia as the commissary of the Freeport Indonesia despite his assignment in BSSN. As Chief of BSSN On 21 May 2019, he was appointed Chief of BSSN . His appointment as Chief of BSSN was unexpected, due to Joko Widodo informed him just night before the appointment at 20 May 2019.
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Original:  He  appointed as the second chief of BSSN, but the first who enjoyed ministerial-level facilities and rights.
Revised:  He was appointed as the second chief of BSSN, but the first who enjoyed ministerial-level facilities and rights.
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Original:  He  appointed as the second chief of BSSN, but the first who enjoyed ministerial-level facilities and rights.
Revised:  He appointed as the second chief of BSSN, and the first to enjoy ministerial-level facilities and rights.
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Original:  On the day of his inauguration as Chief of BSSN, he swore to fight against hoaxes and strengthening Indonesia cyber intelligence capabilities.
Revised:  On the day of his inauguration as Chief of BSSN, he swore to fight hoaxes and to strengthen Indonesia cyber intelligence capabilities.
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Original:  Personal life Siburian married with Lucyanna Endang boru Sianturi.
Revised:  Personal life Siburian married Lucyanna Endang boru Sianturi.
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Original:  For his achievements and services, he honored by both Siburian and Sianturi Batak clans on 5 August 2017 in  traditional ceremony.
Revised:  He was honored by both Siburian and Sianturi Batak clans on 5 August 2017 in traditional ceremony.
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Original:  For his achievements and services, he honored by both Siburian and Sianturi Batak clans on 5 August 2017 in  traditional ceremony.
Revised:  For his achievements and services, he honored by both Siburian and Sianturi Batak clans on 5 August 2017 in a traditional ceremony.
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Original:  Hipp is a citizen of the Chickasaw Nation and on June 10, 2021,  was confirmed for the U.S. Department of Agriculture General Council . Early life and education Hipp was born in the Choctaw areas of Oklahoma, and grew up in Idabel  .
Revised:  Hipp is a citizen of the Chickasaw Nation and on June 10, 2021, she was confirmed for the U.S. Department of Agriculture General Council . Early life and education Hipp was born in the Choctaw areas of Oklahoma, and grew up in Idabel .
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Original:  Hipp is a citizen of the Chickasaw Nation and on June 10, 2021,  was confirmed for the U.S. Department of Agriculture General Council . Early life and education Hipp was born in the Choctaw areas of Oklahoma, and grew up in Idabel  .
Revised:  Hipp is a citizen of the Chickasaw Nation and on June 10, 2021, was confirmed for the U.S. Department of Agriculture General Council . Early life and education Hipp was born in the Choctaw areas of Oklahoma, grew up in Idabel .
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Original:  Career After receiving her doctorate, Hipp went on to be founding director of the Indigenous Food and Agriculture Initiative at the University of Arkansas and worked as an assistant professor of agricultural law.
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Original:  Hipp  served in the U.S. Department of Agriculture (USDA) National Institute of Food and Agriculture (NIFA) as National Program Leader for Farm Financial Management, Trade Adjustment Assistance, Risk Management Education, and the Beginning Farmer and Rancher Development Program.
Revised:  Hipp has served in the U.S. Department of Agriculture (USDA) National Institute of Food and Agriculture (NIFA) as National Program Leader for Farm Financial Management, Trade Adjustment Assistance, Risk Management Education, and the Beginning Farmer and Rancher Development Program.
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Original:  Coauthored with Michael V. Martin . External Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Regaining Our Future: An Assessment of Risks and Opportunities for Native Communities in the 2018 Farm Bill.
Revised:  Coauthored with Michael V. Martin External Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Regaining Our Future: An Assessment of Risks and Opportunities for Native Communities in the 2018 Farm Bill.
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Original:  Coauthored with Michael V. Martin . External Links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Regaining Our Future: An Assessment of Risks and Opportunities for Native Communities in the 2018 Farm Bill.
Revised:  Coauthored with Michael V. Martin . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Regaining Our Future: An Assessment of Risks and Opportunities for Native Communities in the 2018 Farm Bill.
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Original:  He was a member of the Waitangi Tribunal.
Revised:  He served as a member of the Waitangi Tribunal.
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Original:  URL URL  References Category:  2021 deat
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Original: Kihi Ngatai ( – 1 August 2021) was a New Zealand Maori leader.
Revised: Kihi Ngatai ( – 1 August 2021) was a New Zealand Māori leader.
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Original: CTheory is an electronic academic journal published since 1996.
Revised: CTheory is a peer-reviewed academic journal published since 1996.
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Original:  It is an international peer-reviewed journal focusing on technologyand media theory, technology, and culture, publishing articles, interviews, book reviews and "event-scenes."
Revised:  It focusses on technology, media theory, technology, and culture, publishing articles, interviews, book reviews and "event-scenes."
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Original:  It is an international peer-reviewed journal focusing on technologyand media theory, technology, and culture, publishing articles, interviews, book reviews and "event-scenes."
Revised:  It is an international peer-reviewed journal focusing on technologyand media theory, and culture, publishing articles, interviews, book reviews and "event-scenes."
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Original:  Until his recent death, the editorial board also included Jean Baudrillard.
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Original:  It focusses on technology, media theory, and culture, publishing articles, interviews, book reviews and "event-scenes."
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Original: Editorial Board Paul Virilio (Paris)
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Original:  DJ Spooky%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Paul D. Miller (New York City)
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Original:  The Prime Minister Zhang Dun suggested that Consort Zhu's younger son Zhao Si to inherit the throne but Empress Dowager Xiang, fearful that the Zhu's would have immense power, placed her own son Zhao Ji (Emperor Huizong) on the throne.
Revised:  The Prime Minister Zhang Dun suggested that Consort Zhu's younger son Zhao Si to inherit the throne but Empress Dowager Xiang, fearful that the Zhu's would have immense power, placed another prince Zhao Ji (Emperor Huizong) on the throne.
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Original:  OrthoFinder takes FASTA files of protein sequences as input (one per species) and as output provides: Orthogroups Rooted Phylogenetic trees of all orthogroups A rooted species tree for the set of species included in the input dataset Hierarchical orthogroups for each node in the species tree Orthologs between all species Gene duplication events mapped to branches in the species tree Comparative genomic statistics Program OrthoFinder is a command-line software tool.
Revised:  OrthoFinder takes FASTA files of protein sequences as input (one per species) and as output provides: Orthogroups Rooted Phylogenetic trees of all orthogroups A rooted species tree for the set of species included in the input dataset Hierarchical orthogroups for each node in the species tree Orthologs between all species Gene duplication events mapped to branches in the species tree Comparative genomic statistics 
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Original: Sergio Romero Pizarro (  8 December 1938) is a Chilean politician.
Revised: Sergio Romero Pizarro ( born 8 December 1938) is a Chilean politician.
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Original:  Category:1938 births  Category:Chilean people Category:Chilean politicians Category:National Renewal (Chile) politicians Category:Pontifical Catholic University of Chile alumni Category:Presidents of the Senate of Chi
Revised:  Category:1938 births Category:Living people Category:Chilean people Category:Chilean politicians Category:National Renewal (Chile) politicians Category:Pontifical Catholic University of Chile alumni Category:Presidents of the Senate of Chi
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Original: Biography and scientific career Hilda Cid Araneda was born on the 20th of February in 1933 in the port city of Talcahuano (Chile), where she completed her primary and secondary studies.
Revised: Biography and scientific career Hilda Cid Araneda was born on 20 February 1933 in the port city of Talcahuano (Chile), where she completed her primary and secondary studies.
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Original:  It is also called enthesopathy, or any pathologic condition involving the entheses.
Revised:  It is an enthesopathy, a pathologic condition of the entheses.
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Original:  The entheses are any point of attachment of skeletal muscles to the bone, where recurring stress or inflammatory autoimmune disease can cause inflammation or occasionally  fibrosis and calcification .
Revised:  Manifest in inflammation or occasionally fibrosis and calcification .
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Original:  The entheses are any point of attachment of skeletal muscles to the bone, where recurring stress or inflammatory autoimmune disease can cause inflammation or occasionally  fibrosis and calcification .
Revised:  The entheses are any point of attachment of skeletal muscles to the bone, where recurring stress or inflammatory autoimmune disease can cause inflammation or occasionally in fibrosis and calcification .
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Original:  One of the primary entheses involved in inflammatory autoimmune disease  is at the heel, particularly the Achilles tendon  .
Revised:  One of the primary entheses involved in inflammatory autoimmune disease is at the heel, where the Achilles tendon .
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Original:  It is associated with HLA B27 arthropathies like ankylosing spondylitis, psoriatic arthritis, and reactive arthritis.
Revised:  It is associated with HLA B27 arthropathies such as ankylosing spondylitis, psoriatic arthritis, and reactive arthritis.
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Original: Related conditions In contrast , inflammation of the bony attachment is called apophysitis, and is generally associated with overuse among growing children.
Revised: Related conditions In contrast , inflammation of the bony attachment , generally associated with overuse among growing children.
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Original:  The muscle insertion hurts very focally as it joins into the bone, ONLY when it contracts (and can be VERY debilitating), but there is little to no pain at all with passive motion.
Revised:  The muscle insertion hurts very focally as it joins into the bone, but there is little to no pain at all with passive motion.
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Original:  It is worst in the morning (after sleeping and not moving).
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Original:  While it is typically associated with other autoimmune diseases  like spondyloarthropaties and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
Revised:  While it is typically associated with other autoimmune diseases , like spondyloarthropaties and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
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Original:  It is associated with HLA B27 arthropathies  such as ankylosing spondylitis, psoriatic arthritis, and reactive arthritis.
Revised:  It is associated with HLA B27 arthropathies , such as ankylosing spondylitis, psoriatic arthritis, and reactive arthritis.
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Original:  While it is typically associated with other autoimmune diseases, like spondyloarthropaties and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
Revised:  It is known to be associated with other autoimmune diseases, like spondyloarthropaties and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
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Original:  While it is typically associated with other autoimmune diseases, like spondyloarthropaties and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
Revised:  While it is typically associated with other autoimmune diseases, like spondyloarthropathies and psoriasis (thought to often precede psoriatic arthritis).
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Original:  Chemical properties Kazakovite mainly consists of oxygen (44.59 \%), silicon (25.65\%) and sodium (19.58\%), but also contains titanium (4.45\%), manganese (3.40\%), iron (1.73\%) and potassium (0.61\%).
Revised:  Kazakovite mainly consists of oxygen (44.59 \%), silicon (25.65\%) and sodium (19.58\%), but also contains titanium (4.45\%), manganese (3.40\%), iron (1.73\%) and potassium (0.61\%).
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Original: The Beni Immel payed tribute/taxes to the Beylik of Constantine,Étapes de la structuration d'un désert : l'espace saharien algérien entre convoitises économiques, projets politiques et aménagement du territoire URL although what the payment was, or how much of it was payed isn't known.
Revised: The Beni Immel paid tribute/taxes to the Beylik of Constantine,Étapes de la structuration d'un désert : l'espace saharien algérien entre convoitises économiques, projets politiques et aménagement du territoire URL although what the payment was, or how much of it was payed isn't known.
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Original: The Beni Immel payed tribute/taxes to the Beylik of Constantine,Étapes de la structuration d'un désert : l'espace saharien algérien entre convoitises économiques, projets politiques et aménagement du territoire URL although what the payment was, or how much of it was payed isn't known.
Revised: The Beni Immel payed tribute/taxes to the Beylik of Constantine,Étapes de la structuration d'un désert : l'espace saharien algérien entre convoitises économiques, projets politiques et aménagement du territoire URL although what the payment was, or how much of it was paid isn't known.
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Original:  Among the most famous prisoners of the camp were Ernest Douwes Dekker, an Indonesian nationalist, L. J. A. Schoonheyt, an internment camp doctor in the Indies who had become a NSB supporter, and Lo Hartog van Banda, a Dutch cartoonist who had been a Conscientious objector.
Revised:  Among the most famous prisoners of the camp were Ernest Douwes Dekker, an Indonesian nationalist, L. J. A. Schoonheyt, a government doctor in the Indies who had become a NSB supporter, and Lo Hartog van Banda, a Dutch cartoonist who had been a Conscientious objector.
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Original:  (Another camp, Kamp Copieweg, was also set up for those Dutch citizens of Surinam considered to pose a similar risk to the Jodensavanne detainees, including a number of contientious objectors from South Africa  .)
Revised:  (Another camp, Copieweg, was also set up for those Dutch citizens of Surinam considered to pose a similar risk to the Jodensavanne detainees, including a number of contientious objectors from South Africa .)
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Original:  (Another camp, Copieweg, was also set up for German citizens  and later for contentious objectors from South Africa and a few Surninam opposition figures  .)
Revised:  Other camps in the area included Copieweg, was also set up for German citizens and later for contentious objectors from South Africa and a few Surninam opposition figures .)
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