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Original:  As land cover changes and forest is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which in turn prompts people to move again to previously untouched forestand restart the process of deforestation.
Revised:  As land cover changes and forest is removed, forest resources become exhausted and increasing populations lead to scarcity, which in turn prompts people to move again to previously undisturbed forest, restarting the process of deforestation.
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Original:  This process is also known as rural-to-rural migration.
Revised:  This process is referred to as rural-to-rural migration.
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Original:  This then leads to overexploitation of the farmland, and down the line results in desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and therefore unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
Revised:  This leads to the overexploitation of farmland, and down the line results in desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and therefore unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
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Original:  This then leads to overexploitation of the farmland, and down the line results in desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and therefore unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
Revised:  This then leads to overexploitation of the farmland, and down the line results in desertification, another land cover change, which renders soil unusable and unprofitable, requiring farmers to seek out untouched and unpopulated old-growth forests.
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Original:  Still, rural migration and subsistence farming not the only causes of deforestation, and economic development can also play a substantial role .
Revised:  In addition to rural migration and subsistence farming not the only causes of deforestation, and economic development can also play a substantial role .
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Original:  Still, rural migration and subsistence farming not the only causes of deforestation, and economic development can also play a substantial role .
Revised:  Still, rural migration and subsistence farming , economic development can also play a substantial role .
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Original:  One example, road and railway expansions designed to increase quality of life , has resulted in significant deforestation in the Amazon and Central America.
Revised:  One example, road and railway expansions designed to increase quality of life have resulted in significant deforestation in the Amazon and Central America.
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Original:  Moreover, the underlying drivers of economic development are linked not to poverty but often to global economic engagement,  ranging from increased exports to a country's foreign debt.
Revised:  Moreover, the underlying drivers of economic development are often linked to global economic engagement, ranging from increased exports to a country's foreign debt.
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Original:  Moreover, the underlying drivers of economic development are linked not to poverty but often to global economic engagement,  ranging from increased exports to a country's foreign debt.
Revised:  Moreover, the underlying drivers of economic development are linked not to poverty but often to global economic engagement, ranging from increased exports to a foreign debt.
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Original:  Deforestation occurs for many interconnected reasons, and thus it is important for land change scientists to track it in order to identify patterns that can shed light on why and when it happens. 292x292px|An aerial image of New Delhi, India, one of the world's largest urban areas.
Revised:  Deforestation occurs for many interconnected reasons, and thus it is important for land change scientists to track it in order to identify patterns that can shed light on why and when it happens. 
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Original:  Urbanization is important to land use and land cover change, and therefore to land change science, for a variety of reasons.
Revised:  Urbanization is important to land use and land cover change, and therefore land change science, for a variety of reasons.
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Original:  One such reason is the ability of urbanization to affect land change elsewhere through the shifting of urban-rural linkages, or the ecological footprint of the transfer of goods and services between urban and rural areas.
Revised:  In particular, urbanization affects land change elsewhere through the shifting of urban-rural linkages, or the ecological footprint of the transfer of goods and services between urban and rural areas.
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Original:  Urban heat islands Another way in which urbanization affects land cover and thus land change science is through the urban heat island effect.
Revised:  Urban heat islands Urbanization additionally affects land cover and thus land change science is through the urban heat island effect.
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Original:  Urban heat islands Another way in which urbanization affects land cover and thus land change science is through the urban heat island effect.
Revised:  Urban heat islands Another way in which urbanization affects land cover through the urban heat island effect.
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Original:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures  such as buildings and roads  that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
Revised:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures , such as buildings and roads that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
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Original:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures  such as buildings and roads  that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
Revised:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures such as buildings and roads , that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
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Original:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures  such as buildings and roads  that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
Revised:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures such as buildings and roads that absorb and re-emit solar radiation, and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
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Original:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures  such as buildings and roads  that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of tree and plant cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
Revised:  Heat islands occur when, due to high concentrations of structures such as buildings and roads that absorb and re-emit heat and low concentrations of vegetative cover, urban areas experience higher temperatures than surrounding areas.
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Original:  The high temperatures associated with heat islands can also compromise human health, particularly in low-income areas .
Revised:  The high temperatures associated with heat islands can also compromise human health, particularly in low-income areas 
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Original:  Although urbanized areas cover just 3\% of the Earth's surface, they nevertheless have a significant impact on land use and land cover change .
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Original: Overview of land change [[ Human changes to land surfaces have been documented for centuries as having significant impacts on both earth systems and human well-being.
Revised: History [[ Human changes to land surfaces have been documented for centuries as having significant impacts on both earth systems and human well-being.
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Original:  Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation strategies .
Revised:  Land change science is a recently developed field that is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation .
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Original:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
Revised:  History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
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Original:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
Revised:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
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Original:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Origin Land change science emerged in conjunction with the advancing of climate change and global environmental change studies.
Revised:  The purpose of land change science has thus far been to: Observe and monitor land changes underway throughout the world Understand land change as a human-environmental system Model land change Assess system outcomes such as vulnerability, sustainability, and resilience History%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Land  change science is a recently developed field, which emerged in conjunction with the advancement of climate change and global environmental change research, and is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation.
Revised:  Land Land change science is a recently developed field, which emerged in conjunction with the advancement of climate change and global environmental change research, and is important to the evolution of climate change science and adaptation.
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Original:  The effects of urban areas on climate indicate that urbanization may become a significant component of land change science  
Revised:  The effects of urban areas on climate indicate that urbanization may become a significant component of land change science . 
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Original: The 2020 protests in Mauritius was massive rallies and nonviolent demonstrations held in Mauritius after a Japanese tanker oil spillin the ocean.
Revised: The 2020 protests in Mauritius were a series of large rallies and nonviolent demonstrations held in Mauritius after a Japanese tanker oil spillin the ocean.
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Original:  Protesters came in 3 waves of marches , 29-31 August, 12-13 September and September 14-15.
Revised:  Protesters came in 3 waves of marches on 29-31 August, 12-13 September and September 14-15.
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Original:  Strikers led protesters to March in streets in the country to protest the oil tanker crisis in July.
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Original: Protests An estimated 100,000 people marched to the capital of Mauritius in protest of the government’s response to the oil spill, calling on an investigation into the spill.
Revised: Protests Thousands people marched to the capital of Mauritius in protest of the government’s response to the oil spill, calling on an investigation into the spill.
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Original: Karoline Offigstad Knotten (born 06 January 1995) is a Norwegian biathlete.
Revised: Karoline Offigstad Knotten (born 6 January 1995) is a Norwegian biathlete.
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Original: The Kivu frontier incident was a 1909–1910 stand-off between Belgian, British and German forces in the region to the north of Lake Kivu, now part of the province of North Kivu in the Democratic Republic of the Congo .
Revised: The Kivu frontier incident was a 1909–1910 stand-off between Belgian, British and German forces in the region around Lake Kivu, now part of the province of North Kivu in the Democratic Republic of the Congo .
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Original: The Kivu frontier incident was a 1909–1910 stand-off between Belgian, British and German forces in the region to the north of Lake Kivu, now part of the province of North Kivu in the Democratic Republic of the Congo .
Revised: The Kivu frontier incident was a 1909–1910 stand-off between Belgian, British and German forces in the region to the north of Lake Kivu, now divided between the Democratic Republic of the Congo .
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Original:  After diplomatic negotiations it was agreed that the region, which bordered the British Uganda Protectorate to the northeast and the Rwanda district of German East Africa to the southeast , came within the jurisdiction of the Belgian Congo to the west.
Revised:  After diplomatic negotiations it was agreed that the region, which bordered the British Uganda Protectorate to the northeast and the Rwanda district of German East Africa to the southeast .
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Original:  Background East Africa Protectorate and Uganda (1898 German East Africa (1914)  On 12 May 1894 the Uganda Protectorate and Congo Free State had agreed on their border.
Revised:  Background On 12 May 1894 the Uganda Protectorate and Congo Free State had agreed on their border.
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Original:  Background East Africa Protectorate and Uganda (1898 German East Africa (1914)  On 12 May 1894 the Uganda Protectorate and Congo Free State had agreed on their border.
Revised:  Background East Africa Protectorate and Uganda (1898 German East Africa (1914) On 12 May 1894 the Uganda Protectorate and Congo Free State agreed on their border.
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Original:   The Germans established a presence in the Ruzizi River – Lake Kivu region during the power vacuum that followed the mutiny in the northeast of the Congo during the Congo-Nile expedition of Francis Dhanis .
Revised:  The Germans established a presence in the Ruzizi – Lake Kivu region during the power vacuum that followed the mutiny in the northeast of the Congo during the Congo-Nile expedition of Francis Dhanis .
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Original:   The Germans established a presence in the Ruzizi River – Lake Kivu region during the power vacuum that followed the mutiny in the northeast of the Congo during the Congo-Nile expedition of Francis Dhanis .
Revised:  The Germans established a presence in the Ruzizi River – Kivu region during the power vacuum that followed the mutiny in the northeast of the Congo during the Congo-Nile expedition of Francis Dhanis .
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Original:  There were constant incidents in the region with Germans who had occupied some of the Belgian territory during the revolt and were reluctant to return it to the Belgians.
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Original:  The Germans left in 1898.
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Original:  Olsen completed his first 3-year term and returned to Antwerp on 11 December 1901.
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Original:  Renewed British claims East Africa Protectorate and Uganda (1898 In February 1907 Britain claimed the Mount Mufumbiro (Virunga Mountains) territory.
Revised:  In February 1907 Britain claimed the Mount Mufumbiro (Virunga Mountains) territory.
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Original:  He left Entebbe on 7 June and the expedition left Mbarara on 11 June    .  Belgian response German East Africa ( 1914 ) During his fourth term Olsen had to deal with a complicated situation due to unauthorized agreements between local Belgian and German officers, and agreements between the Germans and the British   .
Revised:  He left Entebbe on 7 June and the expedition left Mbarara on 11 June . Belgian response German East Africa ( 1914 ) During his fourth term Olsen had to deal with a complicated situation due to unauthorized agreements between local Belgian and German officers, and agreements between the Germans and the British .
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Original:  He left Entebbe on 7 June and the expedition left Mbarara on 11 June    .  Belgian response German East Africa ( 1914 ) During his fourth term Olsen had to deal with a complicated situation due to unauthorized agreements between local Belgian and German officers, and agreements between the Germans and the British   .
Revised:  He left Entebbe on 7 June and the expedition left Mbarara on 11 June . Belgian response German East Africa ( 1914 ) .
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Original:  Coote decided to repossess Kurezi but was stopped in a marshy region and ran low of food.
Revised:  Coote decided to repossess Kurezi but was stopped in the marshy region and ran low of food.
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Original:  He intimated that he would use force to protect Belgian territory.
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Original:  It was avoiding German territory by passing between Mount Namulagira and Mount Niragongo .
Revised:  It was avoiding German territory by passing between Mount Nyamuragira and Mount Nyiragongo .
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Original:  Notes  Category: North Kivu Category: Belgian Congo Category:Military history of the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:Military history of German East Africa  Category:Uganda Protectora
Revised:  Notes Category: North Kivu Category: Belgian Congo Category:Military history of the Democratic Republic of the Congo Category:Military history of German East Africa Category:North Kivu Category:Uganda Protectora
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Original:  These events may have the capacity to generate more suffering than has ever existed on Earth, in the entirety of its existence.
Revised:  These events may generate more suffering than has ever existed on Earth, in the entirety of its existence.
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Original: Organisations that explicitly work on reducing s-risks include the Center on Long-Term Risk and the Center for Reducing Suffering.
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Original: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is an water temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the Northeast Pacific Ocean.
Revised: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is a water temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the Northeast Pacific Ocean.
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Original: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is a water temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the Northeast Pacific Ocean.
Revised: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is a water temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the northeast Pacific Ocean.
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Original: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is a water temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the northeast Pacific Ocean.
Revised: The British Columbia Shore Station Oceanographic Program is a sea surface temperature and salinity monitoring program on the Canadian coast of the northeast Pacific Ocean.
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Original:  Lightstation / locationActive sinceAmphitrite point lightstation1934Bonilla island lightstation1960Chrome island lightstation1961Departure bay (PBS)1914Egg island lightstation1970Entrance island lightstation1936Kains island lightstation1935Langara point lightstation1936Mcinnes island lightstation1954Nootka point lightstation1934Pine island lightstation1937Race Rocks Light1921 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Oceanography Category:Fisheries and Oceans Cana
Revised:  Lightstation / locationActive sinceAmphitrite point lightstation1934Bonilla island lightstation1960Chrome island lightstation1961Departure bay (PBS)1914Egg island lightstation1970Entrance island lightstation1936Kains island lightstation1935Langara point lightstation1936Mcinnes island lightstation1954Nootka point lightstation1934Pine island lightstation1937Race Rocks References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Oceanography Category:Fisheries and Oceans Cana
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Original:  Lightstation / locationActive sinceAmphitrite point lightstation1934Bonilla island lightstation1960Chrome island lightstation1961Departure bay (PBS)1914Egg island lightstation1970Entrance island lightstation1936Kains island lightstation1935Langara point lightstation1936Mcinnes island lightstation1954Nootka point lightstation1934Pine island lightstation1937Race Rocks Light1921 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Oceanography Category:Fisheries and Oceans Cana
Revised:  Lightstation / locationActive sinceAmphitrite point lightstation1934Bonilla island lightstation1960Chrome island lightstation1961Departure bay (PBS)1914Egg island lightstation1970Entrance island lightstation1936Kains island lightstation1935Langara point lightstation1936Mcinnes island lightstation1954Nootka point lightstation1934Pine island lightstation1937Race Rocks Light1921 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Oceanography Category:Fisheries and Oceans Cana
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Original:  Twelve stations are left today .
Revised:  Currently, twelve stations remain in the program .
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Original:  He has also played a lead role in the 2003 Malayalam movie Gramaphone directed by Kamal.
Revised:  He has also played a lead role in the 2003 Malayalam movie Gramophone directed by Kamal.
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Original:  Due to age related issues, Moosa was suffering from breathing problems and later died on 9 May 2019.
Revised:  Due to age related issues, Moosa suffered from breathing problems and later died on 9 May 2019.
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Original:  According to some experts in Mappilappatu, it was Moosa's uniquely melodious rendition with a voice that made him loved by all sections of people and gave the recognition as one of the most popular Mappilappattu singer.
Revised:  According to some experts in Mappilappatu, it was Moosa's unique voice that gave him the recognition as one of the most popular Mappilappattu singer.
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Original: Eranjoli Moosa (18 March 1940 – 9 May 2019) was an Indian Mappilappatu singer and playback singer.
Revised: Eranholi Moosa (18 March 1940 – 9 May 2019) was an Indian Mappilappatu singer and playback singer.
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Original:  He is considered as one of the greatest and most influential Mappilappattu singers of all time.
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