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Original: The city of Rome, which is normally home to three million inhabitents, is said to be now focusing its efforts on tightening  security ahead of the Friday's event.
Revised: The city of Rome, which is normally home to three million inhabitents, is said to be now focusing its efforts on tightening its security ahead of the Friday's event.
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Original: The city of Rome, which is normally home to three million inhabitents, is said to be now focusing its efforts on tightening  security ahead of the Friday's event.
Revised: The city of Rome, which is normally home to three million inhabitents, is said to be now focusing its efforts on tightening security ahead of Friday's event.
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Original:  The 200 foreign delegates expected to be present on Friday are said to be an attractive terrorist target, resulting in the closure of Italy's air space over Rome during the funeral , sources have claimed.
Revised:  The 200 foreign delegates expected to be present at the funeral are said to be an attractive terrorist target, resulting in the closure of Italy's air space over Rome during the funeral , sources have claimed.
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Original:  The 200 foreign delegates expected to be present on Friday are said to be an attractive terrorist target, resulting in the closure of Italy's air space over Rome during the funeral , sources have claimed.
Revised:  The 200 foreign delegates expected to be present on Friday are said to be an attractive terrorist target, resulting in the closure of Italy's air space over Rome during the day , sources have claimed.
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Original:  Speaking to the Associated Press, an official of the Rome prefect's office, which is responsible for coordinating the security apparatus said: "Precautions have been taken for airports, stations and all the other places where people gather."
Revised:  Speaking to the Associated Press, an official of the Rome prefect's office, which is responsible for coordinating the city's security said: "Precautions have been taken for airports, stations and all the other places where people gather."
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Original:  The fee is reported to be around £3.4million  
Revised:  The fee is reported to be around £3.4million . 
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Original:  He won 5 German titles, 4 German Cups and 1 UEFA Champions League title with Bayern Munich  
Revised:  He won 5 German titles, 4 German Cups and 1 UEFA Champions League title with Bayern Munich . 
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Original:  Roque Santa Cruz has left Bayern Munich for Blackburn Rovers.
Revised: Paraguayan footballer Roque Santa Cruz has left Bayern Munich for Blackburn Rovers.
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Original: Paraguayan footballer Roque Santa Cruz has left Bayern Munich for Blackburn Rovers . Roque Santa Cruz signed a four year deal.
Revised: Paraguayan footballer has left for . Roque Santa Cruz signed a four year deal.
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Original:  The fee is reported to be around £ 3.4million.
Revised:  The fee is reported to be around 3.4million.
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Original:  Blackburn coach Mark Hughes was quoted as saying, "Santa Cruz is a young player, an international with a good reputation who is playing at a top European club." and "The good thing from our point of view is that his fitness levels are fine as he has been playing in the  .
Revised:  Blackburn coach was quoted as saying, "Santa Cruz is a young player, an international with a good reputation who is playing at a top European club." and "The good thing from our point of view is that his fitness levels are fine as he has been playing in the .
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Original:  Alberto Contador of Spain keeps the yellow jersey.
Revised: "I feel this is maybe the best day of my life," said Leipheimer. "It's my first Tour de France stage win and after this I think I deserve to stand on the podium in Paris." Alberto Contador of Spain keeps the yellow jersey.
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Original:  Leipheimer is in third overall, only 31 seconds behind Cantador and 8 seconds behind Evans.
Revised:  Leipheimer is in third overall, only 31 seconds behind Contador and 8 seconds behind Evans.
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Original:  "We've won this Tour and have two stage wins," he said     
Revised:  "We've won this Tour and have two stage wins," he said . 
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Original:  He's a better sprinter anyway." said Leipheimer, who seems to enjoy that his team Discovery Channel Pro Cycling has almost certainly won both the yellow jersey for Contador  but also the team classification where they hold a massive advantage.
Revised:  He's a better sprinter anyway." said Leipheimer, who seems to enjoy that his team Discovery Channel Pro Cycling has almost certainly won , not only the yellow jersey for Contador but also the team classification where they hold a massive advantage.
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Original:  He's a better sprinter anyway." said Leipheimer, who seems to enjoy that his team Discovery Channel Pro Cycling has almost certainly won both the yellow jersey for Contador  but also the team classification where they hold a massive advantage.
Revised:  He's a better sprinter anyway." said Leipheimer, who seems to enjoy that his team Discovery Channel Pro Cycling has almost certainly won both the yellow jersey for Contador , but also the team classification where they hold a massive advantage.
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Original: April 8, 2005 Category:April 8, 2005 In a document dated March 30, 2005 by a group calling itself "the 70 million people of Iran," a declaration was issued asking the current government of The Islamic Republic of Iran to "...peacefully surrender the power to its rightful owners..." by June 16 of this year.
Revised:  In a document dated March 30, 2005 by a group calling itself "the 70 million people of Iran," a declaration was issued asking the current government of The Islamic Republic of Iran to "...peacefully surrender the power to its rightful owners..." by June 16 of this year.
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Original: The live action and low budgetfilm production of the upcoming movie Bratz: The Movie , turned to the  Santee Educational Complex in South Los Angeles as the setting for what?.
Revised: Described in press materials as having a "low budget", the production crew of Bratz: The Movie , turned to the Santee Educational Complex in South Los Angeles as the setting for what?.
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Original: Described in press materials as having a "low budget", the production crew of Bratz: The Movie turned to an actual high school , to film picture's main scenes.
Revised: Described in press materials as having a "low budget", the production crew of Bratz: The Movie turned to an actual high school to film picture's main scenes.
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Original:  Most productions, like High School Musical and Degrassi: The Next Generation, do principal photography  during the summer.
Revised:  Most productions, like High School Musical and Degrassi: The Next Generation, do principal photography shoots during the summer.
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Original:  Since the  film had a summer release, and Santee goes year-round, such a pattern was impossible.
Revised:  Since the film had a summer release, and the Santee school goes year-round, such a pattern was impossible.
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Original:  The condition of the two occupants is not clear, although the woman in the vehicle reportedly injured her leg in the accident  
Revised:  The condition of the two occupants is not clear, although the woman in the vehicle reportedly injured her leg in the accident . 
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Original:  The fatality was reportedly a man in his 70s from the town of ;
Revised: Why is this news? This happens all the time!! The fatality was reportedly a man in his 70s from the town of ;
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Original:  Steve Mazurana, a former professor of Political Science at the  sees this as the death of idea , "All the rest of the states are not going to want to share their federal aid with this new state...
Revised:  Steve Mazurana, a former professor of Political Science at the , sees this as the death of idea , "All the rest of the states are not going to want to share their federal aid with this new state...
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Original:  Steve Mazurana, a former professor of Political Science at the  sees this as the death of idea , "All the rest of the states are not going to want to share their federal aid with this new state...
Revised:  Steve Mazurana, a former professor of Political Science at the sees this as the death of idea : "All the rest of the states are not going to want to share their federal aid with this new state...
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Original:  In addition, Weld County commissioner Sean Conway, who proposed the idea, argues that though revenue from his county's agricultural and oil and gas sectors make up 70 percent of the state's budget, state funds for the county's schools and road improvements remain low.
Revised:  In addition, Weld County commissioner Sean Conway, who proposed the idea, argues that though revenue from his county's agricultural and oil and gas sectors account for 70 percent of the state's budget, state funds for the county's schools and road improvements remain low.
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Original:  In addition, Weld County commissioner Sean Conway, who proposed the idea, argues that though revenue from his county's agricultural and oil and gas sectors make up 70 percent of the state's budget, state funds for the county's schools and road improvements remain low.
Revised:  In addition, Weld County commissioner Sean Conway, who proposed the idea, argues that though revenue from his county's agricultural and oil and gas sectors make up 70 percent of Colorado's state budget, state funds for the county's schools and road improvements remain low.
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Original:  According to Tom Norton, Mayor of , the largest city in what would be Northern Colorado, many people in his city are upset over the state government.
Revised:  According to Tom Norton, Mayor of , the largest city in what would be North Colorado, many people in his city are upset over the state government.
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Original: Citing anger over state policies, commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest, at a meeting last week, of withdrawing from Colorado to form a new U.S. state, named "".
Revised: Citing anger over state policies, commissioners from the northeastern Colorado counties of , , , , , , , and expressed interest, at a meeting last week, in withdrawing from Colorado to form a new U.S. state, named "".
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Original:  He was unable to work during his network's special report on Pope John Paul II's death due to ill health
Revised:  Due to ill health, he was unable to work during his network's special report on Pope John Paul II's death due to ill health
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Original:  He was unable to work during his network's special report on Pope John Paul II's death due to ill health
Revised:  He was unable to work during his network's special report on Pope John Paul II's death 
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Original:  The 66 year old presenter, who gave up smoking several years ago, added: "I hope it goes without saying that a journalist who doesn't value deeply the audience's loyalty should be in another line of work." Jennings began his career at ABC News in 1964 and in 1983 was made senior editor and anchor of 'World News Tonight'.
Revised:  The 66-year-old presenter, who gave up smoking several years ago, added: "I hope it goes without saying that a journalist who doesn't value deeply the audience's loyalty should be in another line of work." Jennings began his career at ABC News in 1964 and in 1983 was made senior editor and anchor of 'World News Tonight'.
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Original:  Due to ill health, he was unable to work during his network's special report on  Pope John Paul II 's death
Revised:  Due to ill health, he was unable to work during his network's special report on Pope John Paul II 
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Original: April 7, 2005 Category:April 7, 2005 Sony's recently introduced Playstation Portable has proved popular with curious geeks who discovered various talents hidden within the new handheld video console.
Revised:  Sony's recently introduced Playstation Portable has proved popular with curious geeks who discovered various talents hidden within the new handheld video console.
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Original: April 7, 2005 Category:April 7, 2005 Sony's recently introduced Playstation Portable has proved popular with curious geeks who discovered various talents hidden within the new handheld video console.
Revised: April 7, 2005 Category:April 7, 2005 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other notable recent 'hacks' include reading ebooks and comics and watching pre-recorded television shows, taken from a TiVo, on the Sony PSP.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Speaking to Wikinews, Jacob Metcalf, who documented the web comic's hack on his website, explained his motivation: "Web comics are already designed for on-screen reading and they have some of the same audience as people who play games - lots of the most popular web comics are about gamers, like PVP and Penny Arcade."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  He added: "I do wish that%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Sony would come out with an actual web browser like the Dreamcast had.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% Sony would come out with an actual web browser like the Dreamcast had.
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Original:  He added: "I do wish that%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Sony would come out with an actual web browser like the Dreamcast had.
Revised:  He added: "I do wish that%DIFDELCMD < [%%% would come out with an actual web browser like the Dreamcast had.
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Original: Chris Simon Transformation of the periodical cicada from the mature nymph to the adult.
Revised: Chris Simon 
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Original: In May, with 17 years life cycle emerged at the of after underground development as since 1996.
Revised: In May, with 17 years life cycle emerged on the of the after underground development as since 1996.
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Original:  Researchers and scientists worked to map and study the rare wave, and the locals prepared to the noisy event.
Revised:  Researchers and scientists worked to map and study the rare wave, and the locals prepared for the noisy event.
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Original:  CS: We are collaborating with Tejo Sota at the and Jin Yoshimura at in Japan.
Revised:  CS: We are collaborating with Teiji Sota at the and Jin Yoshimura at in Japan.
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Original:  What changes with time is increased human development constantly shrining the patch size of cicada populations.
Revised:  What changes with time is increased human development constantly shrinking the patch size of cicada populations.
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Original:  News mention this is "Brood II" periodic cicadasemergence .
Revised:  News reports mention that this is 'Brood II' of the periodical cicadas .
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Original:  How do people prepare for the cicada invasion ?
Revised:  How do people prepare for the cicada emergence ?
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Original: News reports mention that this is 'Brood II' of the periodical cicadas.
Revised: News reports mention this is 'Brood II' of the periodical cicadas.
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Original:  As alternatives, Torvalds hints that he is considering Monotone and that Subversion, a recent replacement for CVS, is out of the running.
Revised:  As alternatives, Torvalds hints that he is considering Monotone but that Subversion, a recent replacement for CVS, is out of the running.
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Original: Bitmover, the company that produces the source codemanagement tool Bitkeeper , announced on April 5 that it would no longer provide a free version of its product.
Revised: Bitmover, the company that produces a management program for computer source code, named Bitkeeper (BK) , announced on April 5 that it would no longer provide a free version of its product.
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Original: Bitmover, the company that produces the source codemanagement tool Bitkeeper , announced on April 5 that it would no longer provide a free version of its product.
Revised: Bitmover, the company that produces the source codemanagement tool Bitkeeper , announced on April 5 that it will no longer be providing a free version of its product.
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Original:  Bitkeeper, which [ [   was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org,  was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
Revised:  Bitkeeper, which [he [ was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
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Original:  Bitkeeper, which [ [   was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org,  was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
Revised:  Bitkeeper, which [ need[ was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
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Original:  Bitkeeper, which [ [   was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org,  was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
Revised:  Bitkeeper, which [ [s was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
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Original:  Bitkeeper, which [ [   was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org,  was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
Revised:  Bitkeeper, which [ [ was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, and was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
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Original:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
Revised:  he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
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Original:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
Revised:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
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Original:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
Revised:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
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Original:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need s%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
Revised:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Torvalds stated on the Linux kernel mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because he%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% need %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% to figure out the alternatives."
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Original:  The change would affect hundred of software developers who contribute their effort freely to the Linux computer operating system.
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Original:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Linus Torvalds, originator and coordinator of the Linux kernel, stated on a mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because [he] need[s] to figure out the alternatives".
Revised:  As a result of Bitmover's announcement, Linus Torvalds, the programmer who wrote the original Linux kernel, stated on a mailing list that he has "decided to not use BK mainly because [he] need[s] to figure out the alternatives".
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Original:  Bitkeeper was originally developed to allow lead Linux developer Linus Torvalds manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, and was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
Revised:  Bitkeeper was originally developed to allow Torvalds to manage code contributions more easily, according to Jeremy Andrews at Kerneltrap.org, and was previously provided to kernel developers free of charge, though it was restricted in its use.
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Original:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of new or changed code to the Linux kernel, the heart of many alternative computer operating systems such as Redhat, Suse or Linspire (often collectively referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
Revised:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of code to the Linux kernel, the heart of many alternative computer operating systems such as Redhat, Suse or Linspire (often collectively referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
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Original:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of new or changed code to the Linux kernel, the heart of many alternative computer operating systems such as Redhat, Suse or Linspire (often collectively referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
Revised:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of new or changed code to the Linux kernel, the heart of the computer operating systems such as Redhat, Suse or Linspire (often collectively referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
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Original:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of new or changed code to the Linux kernel, the heart of many alternative computer operating systems such as Redhat, Suse or Linspire (often collectively referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
Revised:  Bitkeeper is the software that Torvalds and hundreds of other Linux developers use to manage submissions of new or changed code to the Linux kernel, the heart of many alternative computer operating systems referred to as "Linux" or "GNU/Linux" ).
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Original:  Linux is distributed in many different forms, bundled with with other software by companies such as Red Hat, Novell, and Linspire.
Revised:  Linux is distributed in many different forms, bundled with other software by companies such as Red Hat, Novell, and Linspire.
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