wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many  consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
Revised:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq . consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
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Original:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many  consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
Revised:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay . Their arguments are based on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
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Original:  A large number of protestors carried signs that read "George W. Bush: Warcriminal."
Revised:  A large number of protectors carried signs that read "George W. Bush: Warcriminal."
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Original: Brett Lee was the leading Wicket taker, taking 3 wickets .
Revised: Brett Lee was the leading Wicket taker, taking 3 wickets 
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Original:  The day started with India winning the toss, and A. Kumble electing to bat.
Revised:  The day started with India winning the toss, and Anil Kumble electing to bat.
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Original:  India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading Wicket taker, taking 3 wickets
Revised:  India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading wicket taker, taking 3 wickets
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Original: The day started with India winning the toss, and  Anil Kumble electing to bat.
Revised: The day started with India winning the toss, and captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
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Original:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly after, the first wicket fell  .
Revised:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell .
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Original:  India played well during the afternoon, not losing any wickets , and were 2/177 at Tea.
Revised:  India played well during the afternoon, not losing any wickets , and were 2/177 at tea.
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Original:  In the last session , India put on 120 runs, however , they lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
Revised:  In the last session India put on 120 runs, however , they lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
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Original:  In the last session , India put on 120 runs, however , they lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
Revised:  In the last session , India put on 120 runs, however they lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
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Original:   India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading wicket taker, taking 3 wickets  
Revised:  India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading wicket taker, taking 3 wickets . 
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Original: Wednesday saw the start of the third Test at the WACA in Perth, between Australia and India.
Revised: The third Test commenced on Wednesday at the WACA in Perth, between Australia and India.
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Original:  The day started with India winning the toss, and  captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
Revised:  India won the toss, and captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
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Original:  The day started with India winning the toss, and  captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
Revised:  The day started with India winning the toss, and Indian captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
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Original:  The day started with India winning the toss, and  captain Anil Kumble electing to bat.
Revised:  The day started with India winning the toss, and captain Anil Kumble elected to bat.
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Original:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell when Virender Sehwag was caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
Revised:  India quickly made a half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell when Virender Sehwag was caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
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Original:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell when Virender Sehwag was caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
Revised:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, then shortly afterwards the first wicket fell when Virender Sehwag was caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
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Original:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell when Virender Sehwag was caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
Revised:  India quickly made the half century in nine overs, but shortly afterwards the first wicket fell with Virender Sehwag caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
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Original:  Three overs later, the next wicket fell as Wasim Jaffer was also caught by Gilchrist about half an hour before lunch  .
Revised:  Three overs later, about about half an hour before lunch .
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Original:  Three overs later, the next wicket fell as Wasim Jaffer was also caught by Gilchrist about half an hour before lunch  .
Revised:  Three overs later, the next wicket fell as Wasim Jaffer was also caught by Gilchrist about half an hour before lunch , the next wicket fell when Gilchrist also caught Wasim Jaffer .
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Original:  In the last session India put on 120 runs, however they lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
Revised:  In the last session India put on 120 runs, but lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
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Original:  India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading wicket taker, taking 3 wickets.
Revised:  India finished the day on 6/297. Brett Lee was the leading wicket taker, tallying 3 wickets.
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Original:  Australia lead the four match Test series 2-0, after a controversial second Test which led India to threaten to pull out of the tour
Revised:  Australia lead the four match Test series 2-0, after a controversial second Test prompting India to threaten to pull out of the tour
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Original: The third Test  commenced on Wednesday at the WACA in Perth , between Australia and India .
Revised: The third Test commenced on Wednesday at the WACA in Perth .
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Original:  India quickly made a half century in nine overs , then shortly afterwards the first wicket fell with Virender Sehwag caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
Revised:  India quickly made a half century in nine overs . Shortly after, the first wicket fell with Virender Sehwag caught behind by Adam Gilchrist for 29 runs.
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Original:  Three overs later, about about half an hour before lunch  , the next wicket fell when Gilchrist also caught Wasim Jaffer.
Revised:  About half an hour before lunch , the next wicket fell when Gilchrist also caught Wasim Jaffer.
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Original:  India were 2/74 at lunch, and played well during the afternoon, not losing any wickets.
Revised:  India were 2/74 at lunch, and played well during the afternoon, losing no wickets.
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Original:  In the last session India put on 120 runs, but lost four wickets, including two just before stumps.
Revised:  In the last session India put on 120 runs, losing four wickets, including two just before stumps.
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Original:   Tendulkar (71) was trapped lbw by Brett Lee , while Sourav Ganguly fell for just nine runs soon afterwards.
Revised:  Tendulkar (71) , while Sourav Ganguly fell for just nine runs soon afterwards.
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Original:  Copies of the video were not available on Google Video on Thursday, but were still available on YouTube .
Revised:  Copies of the video were not available on Google Video or YouTube on Thursday .
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Original:  Copies of the video were not available on Google Video or YouTube on Thursday .
Revised:  Copies of the video were not available on Google Video on Thursday, but were still available on YouTube .
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Original: The video concludes with Cruise laughing  , and then a voiceover says: "Scientology can be defined by a single question: would you want others to develop the knowledge you have?
Revised: The video concludes with Cruise laughing in a maniacal manner , and then a voiceover says: "Scientology can be defined by a single question: would you want others to develop the knowledge you have?
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Original: The video concludes with Cruise laughing in a maniacal manner , and then a voiceover says: "Scientology can be defined by a single question: would you want others to develop the knowledge you have?
Revised: The video concludes with Cruise laughing , and then a voiceover says: "Scientology can be defined by a single question: would you want others to develop the knowledge you have?
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Original: A proposal was made to remove four hydroelectric generating dams from along the Klamath River in Southern Oregon and Northern California.
Revised: A proposal was made to remove four hydroelectric power generating dams across the Klamath River in Southern Oregon and Northern California.
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Original:  Intended to improve the habitat and range of salmon, the project requires agreements with the dams’ owner PacifiCorp and several federal government agencies.
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Original:  Discussions that led to this proposal began in 2004 after PacifiCorp applied to renew its power generating licenses for its dams on the river  
Revised:  Discussions that led to this proposal began in 2004 after PacifiCorp applied to renew its power generating licenses for its dams on the river . 
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Original:  A group comprised of Native American tribal leaders, fishermen, farmers, various governmental agencies, and environmental groups developed the proposal after two-years of negotiations.
Revised:  A coalition of Native American tribal leaders, fishermen, farmers, various governmental agencies, and environmental groups developed the proposal after two-years of negotiations.
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Original: Thursday is the second day of play in the third test between Australia and India.
Revised: Thursday was the second day of play in the third test between Australia and India.
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Original: Thursday is the second day of play in the third test between Australia and India.
Revised: Thursday is the second day of play in the 3rd test between Australia and India.
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Original:  India resumed play at 6/ 296.
Revised:  India resumed their first innings at 6/ 296.
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Original: Thursday was the second day of play in the 3rd test between Australia and India .
Revised: Thursday was the second day of play in the third test between Australia and India .
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Original:   At lunch, they were 3/22.
Revised:  At lunch, Australia were 3/22.
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Original:  However, in the last session of the day , India took five wickets, sending Australia all out with a score of 212 , after fifty overs.
Revised:  However, in the last session of the day India took five wickets, sending Australia all out with a score of 212 , after fifty overs.
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Original:  However, in the last session of the day , India took five wickets, sending Australia all out with a score of 212 , after fifty overs.
Revised:  However, in the last session of the day , India took five wickets, sending Australia all out with a score of 212 after fifty overs.
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Original:   In reply, India are 1/52 at stumps . R. P. Singh took four wickets yesterday
Revised:  In reply, India are 1/52 at stumps R. P. Singh took four wickets yesterday
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Original:  The southern and northern runways were closed for operations for aabout half an hour which resulted in all European short haul flights from Terminals 1, 2 and 3 being cancelled.
Revised:  The southern runway has been closed for operations for aabout half an hour which resulted in all European short haul flights from Terminals 1, 2 and 3 being cancelled.
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Original:  The southern and northern runways were closed for operations for aabout half an hour which resulted in all European short haul flights from Terminals 1, 2 and 3 being cancelled.
Revised:  The southern and northern runways were closed for operations and has resulted in all European short haul flights from Terminals 1, 2 and 3 being cancelled.
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Original:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport  
Revised:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport . 
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Original:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport . Related new
Revised:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport Related new
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Original:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport . Related new
Revised:  Passengers travelling by Heathrow have been advised to check their flight status before arriving at the airport . 
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Original:  President and Secretary General of the IWBF told Wikinews that the women's competition will in no way be inferior to the men's.
Revised:  President and Secretary General of the IWBF told Wikinews the women's competition will in no way be inferior to the men's.
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Original:  The home team will be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico  and to compete against the three winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
Revised:  The home team will be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico , and to compete against the three winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
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Original:  In a shock result, these places went to the , , and . , , , , , and the will round out the championships as the teams from the European Zone.
Revised:  In a shock result, these places went to the , , and . , , , , , and the are to round out the championships as the teams from the European Zone.
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Original:  The men's World Championship will be held in July next year in , , while the women's will be in , . Maureen Orchard.
Revised:  The men's World Championship are to be held in July next year in , , while the women's will be in , . Maureen Orchard.
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Original:  The men's World Championship will be held in July next year in , , while the women's will be in , . Maureen Orchard.
Revised:  The men's World Championship will be held in July next year in , , while the women's are to be in , . Maureen Orchard.
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Original:  The women will be put up in a five-star hotel, and will play at Toronto's , a place a whole generation of Canadians associate with elite sport.
Revised:  The women are to be put up in a five-star hotel, and will play at Toronto's , a place a whole generation of Canadians associate with elite sport.
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Original:  The women will be put up in a five-star hotel, and will play at Toronto's , a place a whole generation of Canadians associate with elite sport.
Revised:  The women will be put up in a five-star hotel, and play at Toronto's , a place a whole generation of Canadians associate with elite sport.
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Original:  The home team will be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico, and to compete against the three winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
Revised:  The home team is to be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico, and to compete against the three winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
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Original: Ten countries competed for places at the (IWBF) World Championships next year , ten in the men's: , , , , , , , , and ;
Revised: Ten countries competed for places at the (IWBF) World Championships next year — ten in the men's: , , , , , , , , and ;
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Original:  All of these teams have qualified for the world championships, as has Japan in the men's competition.
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Original:  This was the last of four zone championships.
Revised:  This was one of four zone championships.
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Original:  The women are to be put up in a five-star hotel, and play at Toronto's , a place a whole generation of Canadians associate with elite sport .
Revised:  The women are to be put up in a five-star hotel, and play at Toronto's .
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Original:  The home team is to be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico, and to compete against the three winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
Revised:  The home team is to be joined by teams from the Netherlands, Germany, Great Britain, , the United States, , Mexico, and to compete against the winners from the Asia–Oceania Zone.
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Original:  Google.com and its subdomains appear to be fully functioning as of 0100 UTC on May 8th, 2005 
Revised:  Google.com and its subdomains appear to be fully functioning as of 0100 UTC on May 8th, 2005. 
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Original:  Others  also reported to be redirected to Microsoft's MSN Search
Revised:  Others were also reported to be redirected to Microsoft's MSN Search
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Original:  Others were also reported to be redirected to Microsoft's MSN Search  
Revised:  Others were also reported to be redirected to Microsoft's MSN Search . 
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Original: 120px|Breaking News Access to Google, including its other projects, was abruptly interrupted late Saturday when a DNS outage caused the search engine giant to be unreachable by the domain Google.com.
Revised:  Access to Google, including its other projects, was abruptly interrupted late Saturday when a DNS outage caused the search engine giant to be unreachable by the domain Google.com.
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Original:  This is probably a feature that specific browsers might do when they cannot find the proper address.
Revised:  This is probably a procedure that specific browsers might do when they cannot find the proper address.
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Original:  This is probably a feature that specific browsers might do when they cannot find the proper address.
Revised:  This is probably a feature that specific browsers implement when they cannot find the proper address.
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Original: During the brief outage, some browsers were redirected to SoGoSearch , which is also where URL redirects to, having a link to Gigantics  .
Revised: During the brief outage, some browsers were redirected to SoGoSearch . The site URL has a link to Gigantics .
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Original: On Thursday, four male members of the paparazzi were arrested and charged  with reckless driving  after following Brittney Spears back to her mansion.
Revised: Four male members of the paparazzi were arrested and charged with reckless driving after following Brittney Spears back to her mansion.
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Original:  Spears was not charged with anything and despite their recklessness, Spears did not want the men arrested  
Revised:  Spears was not charged with anything and despite their recklessness, Spears did not want the men arrested . 
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Original:  Spears was also pulled over by policefor questioning .
Revised:  Spears was also stopped by police .
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Original:   Spears was not charged with anything and despite their recklessness, Spears did not want the men arrested.
Revised:  Spears was not charged with anything and despite the paparazzis' recklessness, Spears did not want the men arrested.
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Original:  Among the reasons for it being rejected include the first phrase of each stanza, "Viva España!" (Long live Spain!), which refers to a rallying cry by the late dictator General Francisco Franco   .
Revised:  Among the reasons for it being rejected include the first phrase of each stanza, "Viva España!" (Long live Spain!), which refers to a rallying cry by the late dictator General Francisco Franco "I have to accept reality, but this does not mean I no longer believe in the idea," added Blanco .
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Original: One-half year later, the proposed lyrics were rejected for the time being due to criticism that it represents Spain's right-wing past, not its cultural diversity.
Revised: One-half year later, the proposed lyrics were withdrawn for the time being due to criticism that it represents Spain's right-wing past, not its cultural diversity.
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Original:  Among the reasons for it being rejected include the first phrase of each stanza, "Viva España!" (Long live Spain!), which refers to a rallying cry by the late dictator General Francisco Franco.
Revised:  Among the reasons for it being withdrawn include the first phrase of each stanza, "Viva España!" (Long live Spain!), which refers to a rallying cry by the late dictator General Francisco Franco.
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Original:  Irfan Pathan scored 46 runs before he was caught by Ricky Ponting  leaving India on 6/160.
Revised:  Irfan Pathan scored 46 runs before he was caught by Ricky Ponting , leaving India on 6/160.
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Original:  Laxman and R. P. Singh  shared a partnership of 51 runs before India were bowled out out for 294 runs, a lead of 413.
Revised:  Laxman and R. P. Singh shared a partnership of 51 runs before India were bowled all out for 294 runs, a lead of 413.
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Original:  Lee also dismissed Sachin Tendulkar lbw for 13 runs while Sourav Ganguly was caught by Michael Clarke at first slip for a duck.
Revised:  Lee also dismissed Sachin Tendulkar lbw for 13 runs while Sourav Gantesticle was caught by Michael Clarke at first slip for a duck.
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Original:  The tape's last known whereabouts was a storage facility operated by Iron Mountain Inc. . There are no records of the tape being signed out, but no one is able to locate it.
Revised:  The tape's last known whereabouts was a storage facility operated by Iron Mountain Incorporated. There are no records of the tape being signed out, but no one is able to locate it.
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Original:  None of the accounts have been compromised and GE Money says that the tape does not contain enough information one one individual to open another card account.
Revised:  None of the accounts have been compromised and GE that the tape does not contain enough information one one individual to open another card account.
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Original:  GE Money will offer all of those affected 12 months of free credit monitoring.
Revised:  GE will offer all of those affected 12 months of free credit monitoring.
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