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Original:  The decision was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin which means the highly anticipated issue of the supposed successor has been solved .
Revised:  The decision was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin which means the highly anticipated decision about the supposed successor has been solved .
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Original:  The decision was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin which means the highly anticipated issue of the supposed successor has been solved .
Revised:  The decision was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin which means the highly anticipated issue of the supposed successor has been announced .
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Original: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for Russian presidency by the "ruling " party United Russia  which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, which is the lower parliament of Russia.
Revised: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for President of Russia by the ruling party United Russia which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, which is the lower parliament of Russia.
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Original: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for Russian presidency by the "ruling " party United Russia  which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, which is the lower parliament of Russia.
Revised: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for Russian presidency by the "ruling " party United Russia , which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, which is the lower parliament of Russia.
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Original: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for Russian presidency by the "ruling " party United Russia  which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, which is the lower parliament of Russia.
Revised: Today, Dmitry Medvedev was named the candidate for Russian presidency by the "ruling " party United Russia which holds majority in the newly-elected, State Duma, the lower parliament of Russia.
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Original:  The person was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin.
Revised:  Medvedev was also backed by three other parties and by the current president Vladimir Putin.
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Original:  The declaration was unofficial: the formal nomination is expected on December , 17  during United Russia's party conference
Revised:  The declaration was unofficial: the formal nomination is expected on December 17 during United Russia's party conference
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Original:  The declaration was unofficial: the formal nomination is expected on December , 17  during United Russia's party conference
Revised:  The declaration was unofficial: the formal nomination is expected on December , 17 , during United Russia's party conference
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Original:  Hugo Chavez said that the new time zone would allow school children to wake up with the sun and it would prevent many poor citizens from having to commute before dawn
Revised:  Hugo Chávez said that the new time zone would allow school children to wake up with the sun and it would prevent many poor citizens from having to commute before dawn
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Original:  According to Chávez, the new time zone would allow school children to wake up with the sun and it would prevent many poor citizens from having to commute before dawn      
Revised:  According to Chávez, the new time zone would allow school children to wake up with the sun and it would prevent many poor citizens from having to commute before dawn . 
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Original:  The new time zone, which is UTC-4:30, is half an hour earlier than  old time.
Revised:  The new time zone, which is UTC-4:30, is half an hour earlier than the old time.
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Original:   Hugo Chávez, the President of Venezuela has set a new time zone for his country.
Revised:  Global time zones Hugo Chávez, the President of Venezuela has set a new time zone for his country.
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Original:  Image:Robert Mugabe.jpg|Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe German Chancellor Angela Merkel criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe's human rights record as bringing shame on the continent.
Revised:  German Chancellor Angela Merkel criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe's human rights record as bringing shame on the continent.
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Original:  The facility is located near an interior ministry complex, on the Eastern bank of the River Tigris in the central part of the capital, and it is thought that this could  be the intended target of the attack.
Revised:  The facility is located near an interior ministry complex, on the Eastern bank of the River Tigris in the central part of the capital, and it is thought that this could have be the intended target of the attack.
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Original:  One of the rounds struck a cell directly, while two more are confirmed to have landed in close proximity, coming within 200 yard of the main ministry building.
Revised:  One of the rounds struck a cell directly, while two more were confirmed to have landed in close proximity, coming within 200 yard of the main ministry building.
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Original: Patterson said MoveAmericaForward.org, who are organising the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
Revised: Patterson said MoveAmericaForward.org, who are organizing the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
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Original: Former American Idol finalist Jessica Sierra, 22, has had her invitation to perform at an upcoming concert for United States troops revoked , following her recent arrest for disorderly conduct while intoxicated.
Revised: Former American Idol finalist Jessica Sierra, 22, has had her invitation to perform at an upcoming concert for United States troops retracted , following her recent arrest for disorderly conduct while intoxicated.
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Original:  Sierra has been in prison since the start of the month after an altercation with police officers outside a Tampa nightclub, which she had been ejected from.
Revised:  Sierra has been in jail since the start of the month after an altercation with police officers outside a Tampa nightclub, which she had been ejected from.
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Original:  Patterson said MoveAmericaForward.org, who are organizing the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
Revised:  Patterson said Move America Forward, who is organizing the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
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Original:  So far at least 15 people have been killed in a major ice storm in the United States which has left more than 600,000 residents and businesses across three states, without electricity.
Revised:  So far at least 15 people have died in a major ice storm in the United States which has left more than 600,000 residents and businesses across three states, without electricity.
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Original: For the first time in over a half a century, regular train service , hosting cargo , begun between North and South Korea.
Revised: For the first time in over a half a century, regular train service hosting cargo crossed between North and South Korea.
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Original:  The train is 12 cars long and is carrying building materials to Kaesong, a key industrial junction fore the two countries.
Revised:  The train is 12 cars long and is carrying building materials to Kaesong, a key industrial junction for the two countries.
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Original:  The train will then head back immediately after unloading.
Revised:  The train will head back immediately after unloading.
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Original:  The service will continue at least once daily, on week days . South Korean leaders say that cargo trains are just a start, and that passenger and continental trains are also a hope future, though N. Korea will not allow anything beyond cargo as of yet.
Revised:  The service will continue at least once every week day . South Korean leaders say that cargo trains are just a start, and that passenger and continental trains are also a hope future, though N. Korea will not allow anything beyond cargo as of yet.
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Original:  The service will continue at least once daily, on week days . South Korean leaders say that cargo trains are just a start, and that passenger and continental trains are also a hope future, though N. Korea will not allow anything beyond cargo as of yet.
Revised:  The service will continue at least once daily, on week days . South Korean leaders say that cargo trains are just a start, although North Korea will not allow anything beyond cargo as of yet.
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Original:  Currently buses, car and trucks are allowed to cross the borders , but trains , up until now, are not .
Revised:  Buses, cars, and trucks are allowed to cross the borders , but trains , up until now, are not .
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Original:  Currently buses, car and trucks are allowed to cross the borders , but trains , up until now, are not .
Revised:  Currently buses, car and trucks are allowed across the border , but trains , up until now, are not .
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Original:  Currently buses, car and trucks are allowed to cross the borders , but trains , up until now, are not .
Revised:  Currently buses, car and trucks are allowed to cross the borders , but trains have not been until now .
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Original:  The roads which allowed those types of vehicles to enter N. Korea , were rebuilt after the first ever summit held between the two nations in 2000.
Revised:  The roads which allowed those types of vehicles to enter North Korea were rebuilt after the first ever summit held between the two nations in 2000.
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Original:  The roads which allowed those types of vehicles to enter N. Korea , were rebuilt after the first ever summit held between the two nations in 2000.
Revised:  The roads which allowed those types of vehicles to enter N. Korea , were rebuilt after the first summit held between the two nations in 2000.
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Original:  The rail lined were destroyed in the 1950's during the Korean War.
Revised:  The rail lined were destroyed in the 1950s during the Korean War.
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Original:  The rail lined were destroyed in the 1950s during the Korean War.
Revised:  The rail lines were destroyed in the 1950s during the Korean War.
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Original: | Location of Algeria Two bombs have exploded in Algiers, the capital of Algeria, killing at least 67 people.
Revised:  Location of Algeria Two bombs have exploded in Algiers, the capital of Algeria, killing at least 67 people.
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Original:  Unless you have—What were they coming her to do?
Revised:  Unless you have—What were they coming here to do?
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Original:  The banks will hold coordinated auctions "designed to address elevated pressures in short-term funding markets.  
Revised:  The banks will hold coordinated auctions "designed to address elevated pressures in short-term funding markets. " 
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Original: The   autions will run through the end of 2007.
Revised: The The autions will run through the end of 2007.
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Original: The autions will run through the end of 2007.
Revised: The auctions will run through the end of 2007.
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Original:  The first auction is scheduled for Monday, December 17 and will be a "Term Auction Facility" of  $20 billion.
Revised:  The first auction is scheduled for Monday, December 17 and will be a "Term Auction Facility" of US $20 billion.
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Original:  The FOMC approved these swap lines for a period of up to six months   .
Revised:  The FOMC approved these swap lines for a period of up to six months ." .
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Original:  The announcement  simutaneously from all of the banks at 9:00 a.m. EST (UTC-5).
Revised:  The announcement came simutaneously from all of the banks at 9:00 a.m. EST (UTC-5).
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Original: Under current UK law  it is illegal for Police Officers to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
Revised: Under current UK law , it is illegal for Police Officers to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
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Original: Under current UK law  it is illegal for Police Officers to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
Revised: Under current UK law it is illegal for police officers to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
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Original:  However  the government say that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
Revised:  However , the government say that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
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Original:  However, the government say that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
Revised:  However, the government says that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
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Original: Police on foot patrol Police officers and officials at an emergency meeting have voted to ballot every United Kingdom police officer over the right to strike.
Revised: Police on foot patrol The popo decided to have an emergency meeting have voted to ballot every United Kingdom police officer over the right to strike.
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Original: Police on foot patrol Police officers and officials at an emergency meeting have voted to ballot every United Kingdom police officer over the right to strike.
Revised: Police on foot patrol Police officers and officials at an emergency meeting have voted to ballot every United Kingdom popo over the right to strike.
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Original:  Under current UK law, it is illegal for police officers to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
Revised:  Under current UK law, it is illegal for the popo to stage walk outs as part of protests or disputes, however some members of the force want to strike over the pay package dispute and thus are lobbying for the right to strike to be allowed once again.
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Original:  However , the government says that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
Revised:  However the government says that this is necessary to control inflation in the UK
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Original: Kristin Hoffmann of the Norwegian Petroleum Authority "Petroleumtilsynet" ) told Dagens Nyheter that the release might be the second largest in Norwegian history.
Revised: Kristin Hoffmann of Petroleumtilsynet (Petroleum Safety Authority Norway ) told Dagens Nyheter that the release might be the second largest in Norwegian history.
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Original: Kristin Hoffmann of Petroleumtilsynet (Petroleum Safety Authority Norway) told Dagens Nyheter that the release might be the second largest in Norwegian history.
Revised: Kristin Hoffmann of Petroleumtilsynet (Petroleum Safety Authority Norway) told Dagens Nyheter : "This is the second largest in Norwegian history.
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Original:   The amount of oil released is believed to be at least 3840 cubic metres.
Revised:  " The amount of oil released is believed to be at least 3840 cubic metres.
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Original:  It has also been confirmed that the release is of a serious nature  
Revised:  It has also been confirmed that the release is of a serious nature . 
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Original:    No one was injured at the time of the accident and the platform will continue work as usual tomorrow says StatiolHydro Information Director Kai Nielsen.
Revised:  No one was injured at the time of the accident and the platform will continue work as usual tomorrow said StatiolHydro Information Director Kai Nielsen.
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Original: Kristin Hoffmann of Petroleumtilsynet ( Petroleum Safety Authority Norway  ) told Dagens Nyheter: "This is the second largest in Norwegian history."
Revised: Kristin Hoffmann of Petroleum Safety Authority Norway ) told Dagens Nyheter: "This is the second largest in Norwegian history."
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Original:  It is an oil and gas field in the Norwegian sector of the North Sea, though approximately 15\% being in the United Kingdom's waters.
Revised:  It is an oil and gas field in the Norwegian sector of the North Sea, though approximately 15\% of it is in the United Kingdom's waters.
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Original:  At peak production  it produces over 700,000 barrels of oil per day.
Revised:  At peak production , it produces over 700,000 barrels of oil per day.
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Original:  The U.N. secretary-general, Ban Ki-moon says setting greenhouse-gas emission targets may have to wait until after the U.N. Climate Change Conference being held in Bali.
Revised:  The United Nations secretary-general, Ban Ki-moon says setting greenhouse-gas emission targets may have to wait until after the U.N. Climate Change Conference being held in Bali.
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Original:  "The new case was discovered in the village of Saldowo, near to Biezun , (central Poland) close to other recent cases.
Revised:  "The new case was discovered in the village of Saldowo, near to Bieżuń , (central Poland) close to other recent cases.
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Original:  Just as in the previous cases all the chickens will be culled," said Poland's farm minister , Marek Sawicki.
Revised:  Just as in the previous cases all the chickens will be culled," said Poland's Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development , Marek Sawicki.
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Original: Marek Sawicki At least two new outbreaks of the H5N1 Avian Flu virus, also known as Bird Flu, have been found in Poland.
Revised:  At least two new outbreaks of the H5N1 Avian Flu virus, also known as Bird Flu, have been found in Poland.
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Original: Marek Sawicki At least two new outbreaks of the H5N1 Avian Flu virus, also known as Bird Flu, have been found in Poland.
Revised: Marek Sawicki At least two new outbreaks of the Avian Flu virus, also known as Bird Flu, have been found in Poland.
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Original:  Just as in the previous cases all the chickens will be culled," said Poland's Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, Marek Sawicki .
Revised:  Just as in the previous cases all the chickens will be culled," said Poland's Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, .
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Original:  Gay Deputy Chief Minister gave a moving speech in which he spoke about the impact the legislation would have on same-sex couples.
Revised:  Gay Deputy Chief Minister spoke with feeling about the impact the legislation would have on same-sex couples.
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Original:  The legislation will allow same-sex couples from all over Australia to marry in the ACT.
Revised:  The legislation allows same-sex couples from all over Australia to marry in the ACT.
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Original:  The Howard government amended the Commonwealth in 2004 to exclude gay marriages  
Revised:  The Howard government amended the Commonwealth in 2004 to exclude gay marriages . 
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Original: Ike Turner was perhaps best known for his work with his supposedly former wife, Tina Turner, as one half of the Ike & Tina Turner duo .
Revised: Ike Turner was perhaps best known as one half of the Ike & Tina Turner duo .
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Original: After almost two weeks of negotiations, this years United Nations Convention on Climate Change (UNCCC) are soon going to end, Friday being scheduled as the last day of the talks, with an extention until Saturday being possible if agreement can not be reached beforehand.
Revised: After almost two weeks of negotiations, this years United Nations Convention on Climate Change (UNCCC) is soon going to end, Friday being scheduled as the last day of the talks, with an extention until Saturday being possible if agreement can not be reached beforehand.
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Original:  While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on  . However, even his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved  ] 
Revised:  While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on . However, his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved ] 
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Original:  While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on  . However, even his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved  ] 
Revised:  While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on . However, even his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved which would give this fact some context] 
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Original: While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets  were not to be expected to be agreed on, the inclusion or not of a target "tunnel" for industrialized nations is being debated after all.
Revised: While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on, the inclusion of a target "tunnel" for industrialized nations is being debated after all.
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Original: While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets  were not to be expected to be agreed on, the inclusion or not of a target "tunnel" for industrialized nations is being debated after all.
Revised: While the head of the UNFCCC Sekretariat, Yvo de Boer, stressed from the onset that actual targets were not to be expected to be agreed on, the inclusion or not of a target frame for industrialized nations is being debated after all.
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Original:  However, his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas  reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved . China for example restated a position it had made at the beginning of of the first week, calling for 2010 as target year for the so called "Bali Roadmap"
Revised:  However, his stated goal of deciding on a roadmap for negotiations, which he said needed to adress the matter of Greenhouse Gas (GHG) emissions reductions after 2012, and would have to be concluded by 2009, is not yet achieved . China for example restated a position it had made at the beginning of of the first week, calling for 2010 as target year for the so called "Bali Roadmap"
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