wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It's a young organization with a lot of normal 'young-organization' challenges - and I am here to help fix them.
Revised:  It's a young organization with a lot of normal 'young-organization' challenges — and I am here to help fix them.
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Original:  Sue : I was senior director of CBC.
Revised:  SG : I was senior director of CBC.
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Original:  Sue : It's the website of the Canadian public broadcaster, the only national public broadcaster in Canada and the equivalent to the BBC, the Australian Broadcasting Corporation, the French pubcaster. etc. CBC is mainly a news organization, and CBC.
Revised:  SG : It's the website of the Canadian public broadcaster, the only national public broadcaster in Canada and the equivalent to the BBC, the Australian Broadcasting Corporation, the French pubcaster. etc. CBC is mainly a news organization, and CBC.
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Original:  Sue : I actually first got interested in the Wikimedia Foundation in a serious way, when I saw it do such a good job on the Virginia Tech story.
Revised:  SG : I actually first got interested in the Wikimedia Foundation in a serious way, when I saw it do such a good job on the Virginia Tech story.
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Original:  I have borrowed from it liberally thus far - our code of conduct owes something to the CBC's, as does our travel policy, travel approvals policy, reimbursement policy etc.
Revised:  I have borrowed from it liberally thus far — our code of conduct owes something to the CBC's, as does our travel policy, travel approvals policy, reimbursement policy etc.
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Original:  Sue : No, very little.
Revised:  SG : No, very little.
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Original:  Sue : I am very interested in Wikinews because of my background.
Revised:  SG : I am very interested in Wikinews because of my background.
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Original:  Yeah. I am really hoping that someone applying for funds from the CPB will propose a collaboration with Wikinews Thunderhead: Sue: When the Foundation moves to San Fransisco, will you be going with it?
Revised:  Yeah. I am really hoping that someone applying for funds from the CPB will propose a collaboration with Wikinews Thunderhead: When the Foundation moves to San Fransisco, will you be going with it?
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Original:  Sue : Yes Sue : That is a good question.
Revised:  SG : Yes Sue : That is a good question.
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Original:  Sue : It's a good question, and there are good arguments on both sides.
Revised:  SG : It's a good question, and there are good arguments on both sides.
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Original:  I know that Nicke Denton of Gawker Media has a kind of 'shoot first ask questions later' stance - they say they value transparency and are fine to admit their mistakes and publish corrections immediately.
Revised:  I know that Nick Denton of Gawker Media has a kind of 'shoot first ask questions later' stance - they say they value transparency and are fine to admit their mistakes and publish corrections immediately.
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Original:  Sue : Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot - he is very honest & modest about the work he does.
Revised:  SG : Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot - he is very honest & modest about the work he does.
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Original:  He sometimes mocks traditional media for being overly pompous Sue : I don't know anything about that particular proposal for collaboration, but I am generally very much in favour of us collaborating with external entities.
Revised:  He sometimes mocks traditional media for being overly pompous SG : I don't know anything about that particular proposal for collaboration, but I am generally very much in favour of us collaborating with external entities.
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Original:  Sue : It doesn't surprise me at all that Turner would want to partner with us.
Revised:  SG : It doesn't surprise me at all that Turner would want to partner with us.
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Original:  Sue : This is great, and it's my opinion that we should partner up with lots of organizations in lots of ways.
Revised:  SG : This is great, and it's my opinion that we should partner up with lots of organizations in lots of ways.
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Original:  Sue : I think traditional media see copyright as a problem, and they do not understand it very well.
Revised:  SG : I think traditional media see copyright as a problem, and they do not understand it very well.
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Original:  Sue : The trouble for traditional media is, they don't own the rights to very much material.
Revised:  SG : The trouble for traditional media is, they don't own the rights to very much material.
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Original:  Sue : You mean, they can use your material if they credit you, yes?
Revised:  SG : You mean, they can use your material if they credit you, yes?
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Original:  Sue : First, let me say that I don't think Wikinews and the traditional/mainstream media should consider themselves at all in opposition to each other.
Revised:  SG : First, let me say that I don't think Wikinews and the traditional/mainstream media should consider themselves at all in opposition to each other.
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Original:  Sue : I am just too busy.
Revised:  SG : I am just too busy.
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Original:  Sue : Did you interview Doris Lessing?
Revised:  SG : Did you interview Doris Lessing?
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Original:  Sue : Okay.
Revised:  SG : Okay.
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Original:  Sue : I use a lot of different sources.
Revised:  SG : I use a lot of different sources.
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Original:  Sue : I agree.
Revised:  SG : I agree.
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Original:  Sue : I have never heard of Wikigroaning, what an interesting word.
Revised:  SG : I have never heard of Wikigroaning, what an interesting word.
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Original:  Sue : Yes, precisely.
Revised:  SG : Yes, precisely.
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Original:  Sue : Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
Revised:  SG : Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
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Original:  Sue : I think that in a way, that question looks at WMF through the wrong end of the telescope.
Revised:  SG : I think that in a way, that question looks at WMF through the wrong end of the telescope.
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Original:  Sue : Hm. I think it's an incredibly exciting time to be a journalist.
Revised:  SG : Hm. I think it's an incredibly exciting time to be a journalist.
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Original:  And you will continue to Sue : Nothing, really.
Revised:  And you will continue to SG : Nothing, really.
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Original:  I am still doing some of that - next week, for example, I will be in Washington helping the Corporation for Public Broadcasting decide who to give funding for , to cover the US presidential election online.
Revised:  I am still doing some of that — next week, for example, I will be in Washington helping the Corporation for Public Broadcasting decide who to give funding for , to cover the US presidential election online.
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Original:  I am still doing some of that - next week, for example, I will be in Washington helping the Corporation for Public Broadcasting decide who to give funding for , to cover the US presidential election online.
Revised:  I am still doing some of that - next week, for example, I will be in Washington helping the Corporation for Public Broadcasting decide who to give funding for to cover the US presidential election online.
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Original:  I know that Nick Denton of Gawker Media has a kind of 'shoot first ask questions later' stance - they say they value transparency and are fine to admit their mistakes and publish corrections immediately.
Revised:  I know that Nick Denton of Gawker Media has a kind of 'shoot first ask questions later' stance — they say they value transparency and are fine to admit their mistakes and publish corrections immediately.
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Original:  SG: Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot - he is very honest  modest about the work he does.
Revised:  SG: Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot — he is very honest modest about the work he does.
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Original:  SG: Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot - he is very honest  modest about the work he does.
Revised:  SG: Yes. I like Nick Denton a lot - he is very honest and modest about the work he does.
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Original:  Traditional media have been less successful than we have -than you have! - in creating an environment which people enjoy participating in.
Revised:  Traditional media have been less successful than we have —than you have! - in creating an environment which people enjoy participating in.
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Original:  Traditional media have been less successful than we have -than you have! - in creating an environment which people enjoy participating in.
Revised:  Traditional media have been less successful than we have -than you have! — in creating an environment which people enjoy participating in.
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Original:  Matt: Can users who have edited Wikinews be respected around real journalists?
Revised:  Can users who have edited Wikinews be respected around real journalists?
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Original:  I think it would be difficult to rely solely -or even primarily- on Wikinews, because I don't think it is yet particularly comprehensive;
Revised:  I think it would be difficult to rely solely —or even primarily— on Wikinews, because I don't think it is yet particularly comprehensive;
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Original:  Brian: Wikinews may become comprehensive but it will be a difficult process is my opinion.
Revised:  Brian: Wikinews may become comprehensive but it will be a difficult process in my opinion.
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Original:  Matt: Do you think the reason for this is Wikigroaning , such as more topics are written in focused areas rather than things of interest to the most people?
Revised:  Matt: Do you think the reason for this is wikigroaning , such as more topics are written in focused areas rather than things of interest to the most people?
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Original:  Brian: It is a "faster" project than Wikipedia  SG: I have never heard of Wikigroaning , what an interesting word.
Revised:  Brian: It is a "faster" project than Wikipedia . SG: I have never heard of Wikigroaning , what an interesting word.
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Original:  Brian: It is a "faster" project than Wikipedia  SG: I have never heard of Wikigroaning , what an interesting word.
Revised:  Brian: It is a "faster" project than Wikipedia SG: I have never heard of wikigroaning , what an interesting word.
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Original:  But re news...
Revised:  But regarding news...
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Original:  I think it used to be the case that there was X amount of shelf space for news - like, 40 pages of newsprint daily, or 22 minutes of television time.
Revised:  I think it used to be the case that there was X amount of shelf space for news — like, 40 pages of newsprint daily, or 22 minutes of television time.
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Original:  So whether it was a busy news day or a slow news day, that was the amount of news that got created  And professional journalism is still pretty much constructed that way.
Revised:  So whether it was a busy news day or a slow news day, that was the amount of news that got created . And professional journalism is still pretty much constructed that way.
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Original:  What I think changes -theoretically- with Wikinews, is that you are freed of both those constraints.
Revised:  What I think changes —theoretically— with Wikinews, is that you are freed of both those constraints.
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Original:  Matt: You may be interested in WN:NOT What Wikinews is not, the first point, Wikinews is not Paper Brian: We got great cooperation on some big stories like the UK attacks, did big media notice?
Revised:  Matt: You may be interested in What Wikinews is not, the first point, Wikinews is not Paper Brian: We got great cooperation on some big stories like the UK attacks, did big media notice?
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   Major explosions at UK oil depot  Coordinated terrorist attack hits London  SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
Revised:  ( Major explosions at UK oil depot Coordinated terrorist attack hits London SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
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Original:   Major explosions at UK oil depot  Coordinated terrorist attack hits London  SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
Revised:  Major explosions at UK oil depot , Coordinated terrorist attack hits London SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
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Original:   Major explosions at UK oil depot  Coordinated terrorist attack hits London  SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
Revised:  Major explosions at UK oil depot Coordinated terrorist attack hits London ) SG: Yes, exactly (re London bombings).
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Original:  And I think your greatest strength may lie in coverage of really large breaking news events - the  tsunami, the London bombings, Virginia Tech.
Revised:  And I think your greatest strength may lie in coverage of really large breaking news events —the tsunami, the London bombings, Virginia Tech.
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Original:  I don't think the best question is 'do the other projects need more attention' - I think the best question is 'what do our readers need from us, and how can we best give it to them.'
Revised:  I don't think the best question is 'do the other projects need more attention' — I think the best question is 'what do our readers need from us, and how can we best give it to them.'
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Original:  This is a quote from  former editor of Encyclopædia Britannica, have we proven him wrong?
Revised:  This is a quote from a former editor of Encyclopædia Britannica, have we proven him wrong?
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Original:  I go back to the morning of Virginia Tech - the morning I decided I wanted to work here.
Revised:  I go back to the morning of Virginia Tech — the morning I decided I wanted to work here.
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Original:  Which resulted in me coming here 
Revised:  Which resulted in me coming here .
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Original:  On the morning of the Virginal Tech massacre, I was following the story on Wikipedia/Wikinews, and reading the talk page.
Revised:  On the morning of the Virginia Tech massacre, I was following the story on Wikipedia/Wikinews, and reading the talk page.
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Original:  Thunderhead : When the Foundation moves to San Fransisco, will you be going with it?
Revised:  Dodge : When the Foundation moves to San Fransisco, will you be going with it?
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Original:  Thunderhead : What advice can you give to aspiring journalists, based on your experiences at the CBC?
Revised:  Dodge : What advice can you give to aspiring journalists, based on your experiences at the CBC?
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Original:  Today marked a day in history, when 20 years ago, the United States Dow Jones Industrial Average market crashed, which sent the  tumbling down 508 points, losing nearly 24\%.
Revised:  Today marked a day in history, when 20 years ago, the United States Dow Jones Industrial Average market crashed, which sent the market tumbling down 508 points, losing nearly 24\%.
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Original:  The S&P 500 was also hit hard, losing 39.45 points, or -2.56\%, closing at 1,500.63  
Revised:  The S&P 500 was also hit hard, losing 39.45 points, or -2.56\%, closing at 1,500.63 . 
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Original:  This was an unacceptable error that resulted in an unprecedented string of procedural failures," said Air Force Deputy Chief of Staff, Major General Richard Newton who also said that the panes crew did not know that the missiles were on board the plane.
Revised:  This was an unacceptable error that resulted in an unprecedented string of procedural failures," said Air Force Deputy Chief of Staff, Major General Richard Newton who also said that the plane's crew did not know that the missiles were on board the plane.
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Original:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB and the air force says that it was a "serious error" on the part of the military,  launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
Revised:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB . The air force says that it was a "serious error" on the part of the military, launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
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Original:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB and the air force says that it was a "serious error" on the part of the military,  launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
Revised:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB and the air force says that this was a "serious error" on the part of the military, launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB and the air force says that it was a "serious error" on the part of the military,  launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
Revised:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB and the air force says that it was a "serious error" on the part of the military, and is launching a formal and ongoing investigation.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: The missiles were to be taken to Barksdale Air Force Base to be taken out of commission , but were not supposed to be transported on the plane .
Revised: The missiles were to be taken to Barksdale Air Force Base to be taken out of commission .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six  "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB.
Revised:  Instead, live missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six  "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB.
Revised:  Instead, the missiles were placed on the planes wings, along with six of the "dummy missiles," before it took off from Minot AFB.
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Original:  "[The incident is an] erosion of adherence to weapons-handing standards.
Revised:  "[The incident is an] erosion of adherence to weapons-handling standards.
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Original: A Canadian man was arrested in Nakhon Ratchasima, Thailand Friday for posting about 200 online images of child abuse on the internet . "But if something took place here, we would want to have the person held accountable here, but that is very premature and it may even be speculative at this stage," said Wally Oppal, attorney general of British Columbia (B.C.).
Revised: A Canadian man was arrested in Nakhon Ratchasima, Thailand Friday for posting about 200 online images of child abuse on the Internet . "But if something took place here, we would want to have the person held accountable here, but that is very premature and it may even be speculative at this stage," said Wally Oppal, attorney general of British Columbia (B.C.).
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Original:  Neal could be charged in Canada because of a law which allows paedophile's to be charged in Canada even if they didn't do the crimes in Canada.
Revised:  Neal could be charged in Canada because of a law which allows paedophiles to be charged in Canada even if they didn't do the crimes in Canada.
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Original:  The unscrambled images were used to identify the suspect  
Revised:  The unscrambled images were used to identify the suspect . 
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Original:  At least six people are confirmed murdered inside a high rise apartment located in Surrey just outside of Vancouver Colombia in Canada, in what is being called a "graphic mass-murder."
Revised:  At least six people are confirmed murdered inside a high rise apartment located in Surrey just outside of Vancouver British Columbia in Canada, in what is being called a "graphic mass-murder."
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Original:  The bodies were discovered on October 19 at approximately 4:30 p.m. ( pacific time ).
Revised:  The bodies were discovered on October 19 at approximately 4:30 p.m. ( PT ).
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Original:  At least six people are confirmed murdered inside a high rise apartment located in Surrey just outside of Vancouver  British Columbia in Canada, in what is being called a "graphic mass-murder".
Revised:  At least six people are confirmed murdered inside a high rise apartment located in Surrey just outside of Vancouver , British Columbia in Canada, in what is being called a "graphic mass-murder".
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Original:  To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red paint into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fledding the scene.
Revised: Tourists got an extra treat as the famous fountain turned red. To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red paint into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fledding the scene.
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Original:  To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red paint into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fledding the scene.
Revised:  To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red paint into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fleeing the scene.
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Original: Pamflets by a previously unknown group called ATM Azionefuturista 2007 were found near the fountain, protesting the budget the festival was awarded.
Revised: Pamphlets by a previously unknown group called ATM Azionefuturista 2007 were found near the fountain, protesting the budget the festival was awarded.
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Original:  Tourists throw some 3000 euro into the Trevi fountain each year, for good luck.
Revised:  Tourists throw roughly 3000 euro into the Trevi fountain each year, for good luck.
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Original:  The red fountain was ment as a reference to the red carpet of the festival, which opened last Thursday, October 18. "You wanted just a red carpet - we want a city entirely in vermilion.
Revised:  The red fountain was meant as a reference to the red carpet of the festival, which opened last Thursday, October 18. "You wanted just a red carpet - we want a city entirely in vermilion.
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Original:  To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red paint into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fleeing the scene.
Revised:  To protest the 15 million euro budget of the RomeFilmFest, a man yesterday threw a bucket of red dye into the famous Trevi Fountain in Rome, before fleeing the scene.
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Original:  Francois Steyn missed a chance to extend the lead with a penalty at long range, but South Africa went into half time leading 9-3 when Percy Montgomery added his third penalty just before the interval.
Revised:  Francois Steyn missed a chance to extend the lead with a penalty at long range, but South Africa went into half time leading 9-3 when Montgomery added his third penalty just before the interval.
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Original:  Jonny Wilkinson scored a penalty to reduce the deficit to three points, but Francois Steyn and Percy Montgomery each scored a penalty to win the match for South Africa.
Revised:  Jonny Wilkinson scored a penalty to reduce the deficit to three points, but Steyn and Montgomery each scored a penalty to win the match for South Africa.
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Original: South Africa has beaten England 15-6 in the 2007 Rugby World Cup Final at Stade de France in Saint-Denis, France.
Revised: South Africa have beaten England 15-6 in the 2007 Rugby World Cup Final at Stade de France in Saint-Denis, France.
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