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Original:  the Stop the New Sex-Ed Agenda party was founded by Queenie Yu as a single issue party with a platform based on being in opposition to the new URL It ran one candidate each in the 2016 by-elections in Ottawa—Vanier and Niagara West—Glanbrook, finishing with 1,3\% and 0,2\% of the vote URL It ran three candidates in the 2018 Ontario general election, none winning their races.
Revised:  the Stop the New Sex-Ed Agenda party was founded by Queenie Yu as a single issue party with a platform based on being in opposition to the new curriculum. It ran one candidate each in the 2016 by-elections in Ottawa—Vanier and Niagara West—Glanbrook, finishing with 1,3\% and 0,2\% of the vote URL It ran three candidates in the 2018 Ontario general election, none winning their races.
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Original:  the Stop the New Sex-Ed Agenda party was founded by Queenie Yu as a single issue party with a platform based on being in opposition to the new URL It ran one candidate each in the 2016 by-elections in Ottawa—Vanier and Niagara West—Glanbrook, finishing with 1,3\% and 0,2\% of the vote URL It ran three candidates in the 2018 Ontario general election, none winning their races.
Revised:  the Stop the New Sex-Ed Agenda party was founded by Queenie Yu as a single issue party with a platform based on being in opposition to the new URL It ran one candidate each in the 2016 by-elections in Ottawa—Vanier and Niagara West—Glanbrook, finishing with 1,3\% and 0,2\% of the vote respectively. It ran three candidates in the 2018 Ontario general election, none winning their races.
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Original:  After the 2018 election, the party came under some controversy surrounding their use of the tax credit on political donations to channel funding to lobbying URL Jeff Crane, the principal of Thorncliffe Park Public School, which had been the epicentre of several protests against the new curriculum, stated that the protestors had "just come flat out and said that they don’t want homosexual teachers in URL The Thorncliffe Parents'
Revised:  After the 2018 election, the party came under some controversy surrounding their use of the tax credit on political donations to channel funding to lobbying URL Jeff Crane, the principal of Thorncliffe Park Public School, which had been the epicentre of several protests against the new curriculum, stated that the protestors had "just come flat out and said that they don’t want homosexual teachers in schools." The Thorncliffe Parents'
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Original:  Association, which was one of the main organisers of the protests, had made several social media posts saying that the school was allowing LGBT+ groups to indoctrinate URL Progressive Conservative MPP Monte McNaughton faced accusations of homophobia after he stated in a parliamentary debate that Wynne, the first openly gay premier of any Canadian province, was "especially disqualified"
Revised:  Association, which was one of the main organisers of the protests, had made several social media posts saying that the school was allowing LGBT+ groups to indoctrinate children. Progressive Conservative MPP Monte McNaughton faced accusations of homophobia after he stated in a parliamentary debate that Wynne, the first openly gay premier of any Canadian province, was "especially disqualified"
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Original:  from crafting sex education policies and after he accused 2015 PC leadership election candidate Christine Elliott of wanting to build "a little pink URL The conservative Campaign Life Coalition attacked the new curriculum, stating that it was brought in by "the gay-activist Premier of Ontario,"
Revised:  from crafting sex education policies and after he accused 2015 PC leadership election candidate Christine Elliott of wanting to build "a little pink tent." The conservative Campaign Life Coalition attacked the new curriculum, stating that it was brought in by "the gay-activist Premier of Ontario,"
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Original:  that it encouraged immoral sex acts, that it would normalise homosexual families, and that it would cause "serious sexual confusion in the minds of URL Benjamin Levin allegations Federal MP Cheryl Gallant attacked the government of Ontario over the curriculum, alleging that it had been written by former Deputy minister (Canada)
Revised:  that it encouraged immoral sex acts, that it would normalise homosexual families, and that it would cause "serious sexual confusion in the minds of children." Benjamin Levin allegations Federal MP Cheryl Gallant attacked the government of Ontario over the curriculum, alleging that it had been written by former Deputy minister (Canada)
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Original:  I was brought in to implement the new education URL However, the Wynne's government rejected the allegation, starting that deputy ministers did not have responsibility for writing curricula.
Revised:  I was brought in to implement the new education policy." However, the Wynne's government rejected the allegation, starting that deputy ministers did not have responsibility for writing curricula.
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Original:  So it's certainly a red herring that people are trying to feed URL It was also noted that Levin had been fired from his role advising the government several years before the introduction of the new curriculum and that he had not been among the several hundred experts and dozens of expert organisations consulted in the development of the 2015 URL 2018 General Election and aftermath During the 2018 Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario leadership election,
Revised:  So it's certainly a red herring that people are trying to feed parents." It was also noted that Levin had been fired from his role advising the government several years before the introduction of the new curriculum and that he had not been among the several hundred experts and dozens of expert organisations consulted in the development of the 2015 URL 2018 General Election and aftermath During the 2018 Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario leadership election,
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Original:  So it's certainly a red herring that people are trying to feed URL It was also noted that Levin had been fired from his role advising the government several years before the introduction of the new curriculum and that he had not been among the several hundred experts and dozens of expert organisations consulted in the development of the 2015 URL 2018 General Election and aftermath During the 2018 Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario leadership election,
Revised:  So it's certainly a red herring that people are trying to feed URL It was also noted that Levin had been fired from his role advising the government several years before the introduction of the new curriculum and that he had not been among the several hundred experts and dozens of expert organisations consulted in the development of the 2015 curriculum. 2018 General Election and aftermath During the 2018 Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario leadership election,
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Original:  Former Toronto city councillor and eventual winner of the leadership race Doug Ford argued that parents should have the final say on education, stating that "the sex-ed curriculum should be about facts, not teaching Liberal ideology," and accused former PC leader Patrick Brown of preventing the party from debating the URL Runner-up Christine Elliott also stated she wished to change the new curriculum, stating that "I would open the curriculum up again, listen to what parents have to say."
Revised:  Former Toronto city councillor and eventual winner of the leadership race Doug Ford argued that parents should have the final say on education, stating that "the sex-ed curriculum should be about facts, not teaching Liberal ideology," and accused former PC leader Patrick Brown of preventing the party from debating the curriculum. Runner-up Christine Elliott also stated she wished to change the new curriculum, stating that "I would open the curriculum up again, listen to what parents have to say."
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Original:  was dropped as the party's candidate for Mississauga Centre after a number of videos surfaced of her making homophobic and islamophobic URL The Progressive Conservatives then won a majority in the election,
Revised:  was dropped as the party's candidate for Mississauga Centre after a number of videos surfaced of her making homophobic and islamophobic statements. The Progressive Conservatives then won a majority in the election,
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Original:  with tried-and-true methods that URL Later that month, the Ford government, with Lisa Thompson as the new Minister of Education, announced that the 2015 curriculum would be scrapped.
Revised:  with tried-and-true methods that work." Later that month, the Ford government, with Lisa Thompson as the new Minister of Education, announced that the 2015 curriculum would be scrapped.
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Original:  Beginning in September 2018, schools would revert to teaching an interim curriculum, made up of the old 1998 curriculum and a few updates from the cancelled 2010 URL The government also announced that it was planning to hold consultations to write a different new curriculum, without specifying when such a different new curriculum would be URL The changes of the 2018 interim curriculum to the 2015 curriculum included:
Revised:  Beginning in September 2018, schools would revert to teaching an interim curriculum, made up of the old 1998 curriculum and a few updates from the cancelled 2010 curriculum. The government also announced that it was planning to hold consultations to write a different new curriculum, without specifying when such a different new curriculum would be URL The changes of the 2018 interim curriculum to the 2015 curriculum included:
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Original:  Beginning in September 2018, schools would revert to teaching an interim curriculum, made up of the old 1998 curriculum and a few updates from the cancelled 2010 URL The government also announced that it was planning to hold consultations to write a different new curriculum, without specifying when such a different new curriculum would be URL The changes of the 2018 interim curriculum to the 2015 curriculum included:
Revised:  Beginning in September 2018, schools would revert to teaching an interim curriculum, made up of the old 1998 curriculum and a few updates from the cancelled 2010 URL The government also announced that it was planning to hold consultations to write a different new curriculum, without specifying when such a different new curriculum would be introduced. The changes of the 2018 interim curriculum to the 2015 curriculum included:
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Original:  and moving discussions about sexual orientation from Grade 3 and 6 up to Grade 7 The elimination of several elements relating to Indigenous teachings Portrayal of abstinence as a positive choice for everyone instead of as a personal choice The elimination of references to URL Many education experts stated that the interim curriculum would cause confusion,
Revised:  and moving discussions about sexual orientation from Grade 3 and 6 up to Grade 7 The elimination of several elements relating to Indigenous teachings Portrayal of abstinence as a positive choice for everyone instead of as a personal choice The elimination of references to consent Many education experts stated that the interim curriculum would cause confusion,
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Original:  Some education experts also noted that the interim curriculum often used much vaguer language than the 2015 curriculum and that the 2015 curriculum had been around two hundred pages longer as it contained much more precise URL Over 25 school boards in the province officially expressed concerns about the government's move and asked for clarification on what they were allowed to teach.
Revised:  Some education experts also noted that the interim curriculum often used much vaguer language than the 2015 curriculum and that the 2015 curriculum had been around two hundred pages longer as it contained much more precise details. Over 25 school boards in the province officially expressed concerns about the government's move and asked for clarification on what they were allowed to teach.
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Original:  and that the Federation would defend any teacher that continued to use the 2015 curriculum in their URL The Ontario Secondary School Teachers'
Revised:  and that the Federation would defend any teacher that continued to use the 2015 curriculum in their lessons. The Ontario Secondary School Teachers'
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Original:  Federation also pledged to defend teachers who continued to use the 2015 URL LGBT+ rights groups and activists in the province denounced the scrapping of the curriculum,
Revised:  Federation also pledged to defend teachers who continued to use the 2015 curriculum. LGBT+ rights groups and activists in the province denounced the scrapping of the curriculum,
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Original:  from Ontario schools and its URL The move to scrap the curriculum also faced a significant amount of opposition from students themselves.
Revised:  from Ontario schools and its curriculum." The move to scrap the curriculum also faced a significant amount of opposition from students themselves.
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Original:  tens of thousands of students across around 75 Ontario high schools organised a walkout to protest against the government and to demand that student voices were included in further consultations over the URL In December 2018,
Revised:  tens of thousands of students across around 75 Ontario high schools organised a walkout to protest against the government and to demand that student voices were included in further consultations over the curriculum. In December 2018,
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Original:  and that "the declarations from the Minister of Education and the Premier of Ontario seem consistent with a worrying global trend of attempts to reinforce gender stereotypes and roll back progress that has been made in achieving gender URL The move to scrap the 2015 curriculum was opposed by both the Ontario Liberal Party and the Ontario New Democratic Party.
Revised:  and that "the declarations from the Minister of Education and the Premier of Ontario seem consistent with a worrying global trend of attempts to reinforce gender stereotypes and roll back progress that has been made in achieving gender equality." The move to scrap the 2015 curriculum was opposed by both the Ontario Liberal Party and the Ontario New Democratic Party.
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Original:  with Alberta Minister of Education David Eggen stating that the Ford government's changes were a "gong URL Some commentators characterised the move to scrap the 2015 curriculum as characteristic of Ford's right-wing populism and as part of an attempt to reverse any policies that the previous,
Revised:  with Alberta Minister of Education David Eggen stating that the Ford government's changes were a "gong show." Some commentators characterised the move to scrap the 2015 curriculum as characteristic of Ford's right-wing populism and as part of an attempt to reverse any policies that the previous,
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Original:  Liberal Party, government had URL The move also drew comparisons to American president Donald Trump, characterised as an attempt to wage right-wing culture wars in URL Support Opponents of the 2015 curriculum applauded the government's move to scrap it.
Revised:  Liberal Party, government had introduced. The move also drew comparisons to American president Donald Trump, characterised as an attempt to wage right-wing culture wars in URL Support Opponents of the 2015 curriculum applauded the government's move to scrap it.
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Original:  Liberal Party, government had URL The move also drew comparisons to American president Donald Trump, characterised as an attempt to wage right-wing culture wars in URL Support Opponents of the 2015 curriculum applauded the government's move to scrap it.
Revised:  Liberal Party, government had URL The move also drew comparisons to American president Donald Trump, characterised as an attempt to wage right-wing culture wars in Ontario. Support Opponents of the 2015 curriculum applauded the government's move to scrap it.
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Original:  He promised to do this and he’s carrying through with his promise very URL Right-wing evangelical activist Charles McVety, the president of the Canada Christian College, stated that "the fruit of the poisonous tree has been cut down" in response to the scrapping of the 2015 curriculum and that sex education "needs to be based on parents, not based on post-graduate URL Other commentators argued that taking time to review a controversial curriculum would ultimately be a good thing.
Revised:  He promised to do this and he’s carrying through with his promise very quickly." Right-wing evangelical activist Charles McVety, the president of the Canada Christian College, stated that "the fruit of the poisonous tree has been cut down" in response to the scrapping of the 2015 curriculum and that sex education "needs to be based on parents, not based on post-graduate URL Other commentators argued that taking time to review a controversial curriculum would ultimately be a good thing.
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Original:  He promised to do this and he’s carrying through with his promise very URL Right-wing evangelical activist Charles McVety, the president of the Canada Christian College, stated that "the fruit of the poisonous tree has been cut down" in response to the scrapping of the 2015 curriculum and that sex education "needs to be based on parents, not based on post-graduate URL Other commentators argued that taking time to review a controversial curriculum would ultimately be a good thing.
Revised:  He promised to do this and he’s carrying through with his promise very URL Right-wing evangelical activist Charles McVety, the president of the Canada Christian College, stated that "the fruit of the poisonous tree has been cut down" in response to the scrapping of the 2015 curriculum and that sex education "needs to be based on parents, not based on post-graduate researchers.". Other commentators argued that taking time to review a controversial curriculum would ultimately be a good thing.
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Original:  arguing that Indigenous youth were particularly vulnerable and that the government was "perpetuating the disadvantage and risk this population already URL During the hearing of the Civil Liberties Association case,
Revised:  arguing that Indigenous youth were particularly vulnerable and that the government was "perpetuating the disadvantage and risk this population already experiences." During the hearing of the Civil Liberties Association case,
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Original:  documents were presented showing that the government had also considered suspending all sex ed in URL In February 2019,
Revised:  documents were presented showing that the government had also considered suspending all sex ed in Ontario. In February 2019,
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Original:  stating that even if the interim curriculum had excluded many inclusions of the 2015 curriculum, there was no breach of the Human Rights Code as teachers weren't prevented from teaching those elements according to their professional URL Snitch line In response to teachers stating that they would continue to teach the 2015 curriculum, the government set up a system to report teachers who did URL Critics quickly dubbed the system a "snitch line,"
Revised:  stating that even if the interim curriculum had excluded many inclusions of the 2015 curriculum, there was no breach of the Human Rights Code as teachers weren't prevented from teaching those elements according to their professional judgement. Snitch line In response to teachers stating that they would continue to teach the 2015 curriculum, the government set up a system to report teachers who did URL Critics quickly dubbed the system a "snitch line,"
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Original:  stating that even if the interim curriculum had excluded many inclusions of the 2015 curriculum, there was no breach of the Human Rights Code as teachers weren't prevented from teaching those elements according to their professional URL Snitch line In response to teachers stating that they would continue to teach the 2015 curriculum, the government set up a system to report teachers who did URL Critics quickly dubbed the system a "snitch line,"
Revised:  stating that even if the interim curriculum had excluded many inclusions of the 2015 curriculum, there was no breach of the Human Rights Code as teachers weren't prevented from teaching those elements according to their professional URL Snitch line In response to teachers stating that they would continue to teach the 2015 curriculum, the government set up a system to report teachers who did so. Critics quickly dubbed the system a "snitch line,"
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Original:  Make no mistake, if we find somebody failing to do their job, we will URL The snitch line saw significant backlash from teachers, who argued that it was an attempt to manufacture a crisis instead of addressing real issues in schools, that it would prevent teachers and parents from communicating with each other about issues in schools, and complaints processes already existed for schools in URL Sam Hammond, president of the Elementary Teachers’
Revised:  Make no mistake, if we find somebody failing to do their job, we will act." The snitch line saw significant backlash from teachers, who argued that it was an attempt to manufacture a crisis instead of addressing real issues in schools, that it would prevent teachers and parents from communicating with each other about issues in schools, and complaints processes already existed for schools in URL Sam Hammond, president of the Elementary Teachers’
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Original:  This is a blatant attack on the professionalism of URL The snitch line was also criticised for allowing anonymous suggestions from anywhere in the world, with the reporting form not even requiring an email.
Revised:  This is a blatant attack on the professionalism of teachers." The snitch line was also criticised for allowing anonymous suggestions from anywhere in the world, with the reporting form not even requiring an email.
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Original:  some commentators criticised the snitch line as an attempt at URL Satire groups made heavy use of the snitch line in parodies of the Ford government,
Revised:  some commentators criticised the snitch line as an attempt at censorship. Satire groups made heavy use of the snitch line in parodies of the Ford government,
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Original:  such as through moving lessons about gender identity up from Grade 6 to Grade URL Other critics noted that the changes the government brought to the 2015 curriculum could've been accomplished within the frame of the curriculum and did not require the level of inflamed rhetoric and time spent on controversy by the URL A 2021 Canadian Public Health Association study of Canadian high school students found that:
Revised:  such as through moving lessons about gender identity up from Grade 6 to Grade URL Other critics noted that the changes the government brought to the 2015 curriculum could've been accomplished within the frame of the curriculum and did not require the level of inflamed rhetoric and time spent on controversy by the government. A 2021 Canadian Public Health Association study of Canadian high school students found that:
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