wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  September 11, 1915 , in Sangli – January 10, 2014 , in Pune ) was an Indian jeweller, industrialist and writer.
Revised:  September 11, 1915 , in Sangli – January 10, 2014 ) was an Indian jeweller, industrialist and writer.
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Original:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Video game development Category:Video game terminology Category:Occupational safety and heal
Revised:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Video game development Category:Video game terminology Category:Occupational safety and heal
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Original:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Video game development Category:Video game terminology Category:Occupational safety and heal
Revised:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Video game development Category:Video game terminology Category:Occupational safety and heal
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Original:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Video game development Category:Video game terminology Category:Occupational safety and heal
Revised:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Effects Crunch time may or may not hamper a game's quality.
Revised: Effects A study by The Game Outcomes Project found that mandatory crunch led to less successful games, using Metacritic as a gauge of success. The group found that cultural factors such as focus, team cohesion, and a compelling direction were more important than pure hours of work in determining how good a game was. This led to the conclusion that in fact crunch might make games worse rather than better, and at the least, resulted in diminishing returns.
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Original:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress
Revised:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software due to development problems had a negative effect, resulting in a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress
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Original:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and left both studios in financial distress
Revised:  Crunch time at Starbreeze Studios and Overkill Software in developing Overkill's The Walking Dead, principally from multiple switches in game engine requiring nearly full restarts each time, led to a product that was critically panned for its quality and gameplay, and leaving both studios in financial distress
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Original:  In some cases, the drive for crunch may come from the developers themselves as individual developers may want to work extra hours without a mandate to assure their product meets delivery milestones and is of high quality, which can influencing other developers to also commit to extra hours or avoid taking time off as to appear slacking.
Revised:  In some cases, the drive for crunch may come from the developers themselves as individual developers may want to work extra hours without a mandate to assure their product meets delivery milestones and is of high quality, which can influence other developers to also commit to extra hours or avoid taking time off as to appear slacking.
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Original:  It is often used as a way to cut the costs of game development, a labor-intensive endeavor .
Revised:  It is often used as a way to cut the costs of game development, a labour-intensive endeavour .
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Original:  A lack of unionization on the part of game developers has often been suggested as the reason crunch exists, and organizations such as Game Workers Unite aim to fight against crunch by forcing studios to honor developers' labor rights.
Revised:  A lack of unionization on the part of game developers has often been suggested as the reason crunch exists, and organizations such as Game Workers Unite aim to fight against crunch by forcing studios to honour developers' labor rights.
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Original:  Together with human serum albumin the RFCP transport FMN (Flavinmononukleotid ) in the blood circle.
Revised:  Together with human serum albumin transport flavin mononucleotide (FMN ) in the blood circle.
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Original: Category:Hematology Studies from India have identified a riboflavin carrier protein (RCP) present in bird (e.g., chicken) eggs, which is considered to be specific for riboflavin, and is essential for normal embryological development.
Revised:  Studies from India have identified a riboflavin carrier protein (RCP) present in bird (e.g., chicken) eggs, which is considered to be specific for riboflavin, and is essential for normal embryological development.
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Original:  She was born into a notable family: her father James Campbell was a wealthy industrialist, and her mother Abigail Kuaihelani Campbell was an heir to Hawaiian royalty.
Revised:  She was born into an elite family: her father James Campbell was a wealthy industrialist, and her mother Abigail Kuaihelani Campbell was an heir to Hawaiian royalty.
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Original: Campbell's mother had been one of the leaders opposing annexation of Hawai'i in the 1890s, establishing the organization Hui Hawaiʻi Aloha ʻĀina o Na Wahine to promote Hawaiian independence  and her sister Princess Abigail was a leader for native Hawaiians in her role as an heir to the Hawaiian throne and a Republican national committeewoman.
Revised: Campbell's mother had been one of the leaders opposing annexation of Hawai'i in the 1890s, establishing the organization Hui Hawaiʻi Aloha ʻĀina o Na Wahine to promote Hawaiian independence , and her sister Princess Abigail was a leader for native Hawaiians in her role as an heir to the Hawaiian throne and a Republican national committeewoman.
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Original:  After her testimony, media coverage was primarily negative, attacking Campbell's arguments as emotional and illogical, as well as critiquing her negative comments towards Japanese Americans , casting aspersions on their loyalty.
Revised:  After her testimony, media coverage was primarily negative, attacking Campbell's arguments as emotional and illogical, as well as critiquing her negative comments towards Japanese Americans when she cast aspersions on their loyalty.
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Original:  Throughout her campaigning against statehood, Campbell would shift her arguments from demanding independence to advocating for commonwealth status.
Revised:  Throughout her campaign against statehood, Campbell would shift her arguments from demanding independence to advocating for commonwealth status.
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Original:  In February 1960 Campbell reported to the Hawaiʻi State Senate that the goddess Pele had appeared to her in a vision, saying "Now that we are at the crisis of our destiny are we to fall into oblivion?";
Revised:  In February 1960 Campbell reported to the Hawaiʻi State Senate that the goddess Pele had appeared to her in a vision, and that the goddess had asked, "Now that we are at the crisis of our destiny are we to fall into oblivion?";
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Original:  In February 1960 Campbell reported to the Hawaiʻi State Senate that the goddess Pele had appeared to her in a vision, and that the goddess had asked, "Now that we are at the crisis of our destiny are we to fall into oblivion?";
Revised:  In February 1960 Campbell reported to the Hawaiʻi State Senate that Pele had appeared to her in a vision, and that the goddess had asked, "Now that we are at the crisis of our destiny are we to fall into oblivion?";
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Original:  She recorded dramatic readings of narrative stories ( moʻolelo  ) along with the original music compositions of Jack de Mello.
Revised:  She recorded dramatic readings of moʻolelo ) along with the original music compositions of Jack de Mello.
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Original:  Campbell spoke for over two hours, advocating for Hawaiian self-governance and challenging the economic control the Big Five corporations had over the islands.
Revised:  Campbell spoke for over two hours, advocating for Hawaiian self-governance and protesting the economic control the Big Five corporations had over the islands.
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Original:  She was born into an elite family: her father James Campbell was a wealthy industrialist, and her mother Abigail Kuaihelani Campbell was an heir to Hawaiian royalty .
Revised:  She was born into an elite family: her father James Campbell was a wealthy industrialist, and her mother Abigail Kuaihelani Campbell was a descendant of Hawaiian nobility .
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Original: Campbell's mother had been one of the leaders opposing annexation of Hawai'i in the 1890s, establishing the organization Hui Hawaiʻi Aloha ʻĀina o Na Wahine to promote Hawaiian independence, and her sister Princess Abigail  was a leader for native Hawaiians in her role as an heir to the Hawaiian throne and a Republican national committeewoman.
Revised: Campbell's mother had been one of the leaders opposing annexation of Hawai'i in the 1890s, establishing the organization Hui Hawaiʻi Aloha ʻĀina o Na Wahine to promote Hawaiian independence, and her sister Princess Abigail was a leader for native Hawaiians in her role as a member by marriage of the former Hawaiian royal family and a Republican national committeewoman.
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Original:  He  fought in Flanders in 1521 and Italy between 1522 and 1525 , participating in the battle of Pavia as part of the troops of the Marquis of Pescara.
Revised:  He later fought in Flanders in 1521 and Italy between 1522 and 1525 , participating in the battle of Pavia as part of the troops of the Marquis of Pescara.
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Original:  The resistance of the Indians became daily stronger ,
Revised:  The resistance of the Indians became stronger daily ,
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Original:  He quickly had to return in haste to Santiago to subdue a mutiny.
Revised:  He then had to return in haste to Santiago to subdue a mutiny.
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Original: The following are images from various ecology-related articles on Wikipedia.
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Original:  Entries here consist of Good and Featured articles, which meet a core set of high editorial standards.
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Original: Public Reception & Media Coverage IAPP  - "EU Cloud Code of Conduct creating new transfer mechanism ' IAPP- "What’s behind the EU’s new Cloud Code of Conduct?"
Revised: Public Reception & Media Coverage IAPP - "EU Cloud Code of Conduct creating new transfer mechanism ", IAPP- "What’s behind the EU’s new Cloud Code of Conduct?"
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Original:   OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA"  EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance"  Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
Revised:  , OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA" EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance" Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
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Original:   OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA"  EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance"  Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
Revised:  OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA" , EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance" Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
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Original:   OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA"  EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance"  Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
Revised:  OneTrust - "The EU Cloud Code of Conduct Approved by Belgian DPA" EURACTIV - "Cloud development in Europe passes by GDPR compliance" , Hunton Privacy - "Belgian DPA Approves First EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers 
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Original: After several exchanges with supervisory authorities and extensive revisions, the final version of the EU Cloud CoC was submitted to the Belgian Data Protection Authority for approval in 2019.
Revised: After several exchanges with supervisory authorities and related revisions, the final version of the EU Cloud CoC was submitted to the Belgian Data Protection Authority for approval in 2019.
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Original:  The Code follows the European Definition of Small and Medium Enterprises.
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Original:  Today, the EU Cloud CoC General Assembly represents the vast majority of the European cloud industry market share and, as of August 2021, its membership encompasses Alibaba Cloud, Alight, Arcules, Cisco, Dropbox, Epignosis, Fabasoft, Google Cloud, IBM, K&L Gates, Microsoft, Okta, Oracle, Qompium (Extra Horizon), Salesforce, SAP, Schellman, SecureAppbox, Timelex, TrustArc and Workday.
Revised:  Today, the EU Cloud CoC General Assembly represents a significant share of the European cloud industry market share and, as of August 2021, its membership encompasses Alibaba Cloud, Alight, Arcules, Cisco, Dropbox, Epignosis, Fabasoft, Google Cloud, IBM, K&L Gates, Microsoft, Okta, Oracle, Qompium (Extra Horizon), Salesforce, SAP, Schellman, SecureAppbox, Timelex, TrustArc and Workday.
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Original:  Today, the EU Cloud CoC General Assembly represents the vast majority of the European cloud industry market share and, as of August 2021, its membership encompasses Alibaba Cloud, Alight, Arcules, Cisco, Dropbox, Epignosis, Fabasoft, Google Cloud, IBM, K&L Gates, Microsoft, Okta, Oracle, Qompium (Extra Horizon), Salesforce, SAP, Schellman, SecureAppbox, Timelex, TrustArc and Workday.
Revised:  Today, the EU Cloud CoC General Assembly represents the vast majority of the European cloud industry market and, as of August 2021, its membership encompasses Alibaba Cloud, Alight, Arcules, Cisco, Dropbox, Epignosis, Fabasoft, Google Cloud, IBM, K&L Gates, Microsoft, Okta, Oracle, Qompium (Extra Horizon), Salesforce, SAP, Schellman, SecureAppbox, Timelex, TrustArc and Workday.
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Original:   The Code has been approved by the Belgian Data Protection Authority in May 2021"Subject:
Revised:  . The Code has been approved by the Belgian Data Protection Authority in May 2021"Subject:
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Original:  The First EU Level Codes of Conduct Are Approved Under The GDPR in Belgium And France", Employment Law Alliance - "Episode 21: The EU Cloud Code of Conduct", GlobalSign - "GDPR: What Cloud Service Providers Should Know", IT Europa - "EU data protection code to replace US/EU data rules", LexisNexis - "GDPR and codes of conduct in SaaS", Fox Rothschild - "EU Cloud Services Group Working on Post-Schrems II Data Transfer Solution "
Revised:  The First EU Level Codes of Conduct Are Approved Under The GDPR in Belgium And France", Employment Law Alliance - "Episode 21: The EU Cloud Code of Conduct", GlobalSign - "GDPR: What Cloud Service Providers Should Know", IT Europa - "EU data protection code to replace US/EU data rules", LexisNexis - "GDPR and codes of conduct in SaaS", Fox Rothschild - "EU Cloud Services Group Working on Post-Schrems II Data Transfer Solution 
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Original:  "EU Cloud CoC" also known by its extended title "EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers") is a fully legally operational transnational Code of Conduct pursuant Article 40 of the European General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR). ..
Revised:  "EU Cloud CoC" also known by its extended title "EU Data Protection Code of Conduct for Cloud Service Providers") is a transnational Code of Conduct pursuant Article 40 of the European General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR). ..
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Original:  General The Code defines clear requirements for Cloud Service Providers (CSPs) to implement Article 28 GDPR and all its related Articles, which covers the processing activities of every type of personal data.
Revised:  The Code defines clear requirements for Cloud Service Providers (CSPs) to implement Article 28 GDPR and all its related Articles, which covers the processing activities of every type of personal data.
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Original:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy  "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 . In that context, a dedicated working group was specifically created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
Revised:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy . "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 . In that context, a dedicated working group was specifically created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
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Original:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy  "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 . In that context, a dedicated working group was specifically created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
Revised:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 In that context, a dedicated working group was specifically created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
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Original:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy  "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 . In that context, a dedicated working group was specifically created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
Revised:  Neelie Kroes, launched the European Cloud Strategy "COMMUNICATION FROM THE COMMISSION TO THE EUROPEAN PARLIAMENT, THE COUNCIL, THE EUROPEAN ECONOMIC AND SOCIAL COMMITTEE AND THE COMMITTEE OF THE REGIONS Unleashing the Potential of Cloud Computing in Europe", European Commission, 27-09-2021, Retrieved 20-08-2021 . In that context, a dedicated working group was created with the task to draft a cloud code of conduct under the Data Protection Directive.
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Original:  Dedicated Monitoring Body Enforcement is a strong feature of codes of conduct under the GDPR since the latter requires an independent Monitoring Body to guarantee the appropriate implementation of its provisions.
Revised:  Dedicated Monitoring Body The GDPR requires an independent Monitoring Body to guarantee the appropriate implementation of its provisions.
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Original:  Membership and Supporters Membership to the Code is open to any CSP – regardless of size and from all cloud service layers (IaaS, PaaS, SaaS) – as long as they agree with the approach and principles established in the Code.
Revised:  Membership and Supporters Membership to the Code is open to any CSP as long as they agree with the approach and principles established in the Code.
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Original:  The Third Country Transfer Module shall cover the legal requirements for third country transfers as outlined in Chapter V GDPR and, as any on-top module is not a standalone initiative which implies that prior compliance with EU Cloud CoC is a pre-requisite .
Revised:  The Third Country Transfer Module shall cover the legal requirements for third country transfers as outlined in Chapter V GDPR and, as any on-top module is not a standalone initiative which implies that prior compliance with EU Cloud CoC is a pre-requisite 
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Original:  The development of the Third Country Module is currently in progress and is handled by a dedicated working group formed by several data protection experts and members of the EU Cloud CoC General Assembly.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public Reception Media Coverage IAPP (International Association of Privacy Professionals) - "EU Cloud Code of Conduct creating new transfer mechanism", IAPP- "What’s behind the EU’s new Cloud Code of Conduct?"
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Media Coverage IAPP (International Association of Privacy Professionals) - "EU Cloud Code of Conduct creating new transfer mechanism", IAPP- "What’s behind the EU’s new Cloud Code of Conduct?"
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Original:  In an interview in 2008, Lawlor explained the name was inspired by the title of Nicolas Mosley's book Hopeful Monsters.
Revised:  In an interview in 2008, Lawlor explained how they took inspiration from the title of Nicolas Mosley's book Hopeful Monsters.
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Original: Desperate Optimists is the name of the creative partnership of Christine Molloy and Joe Lawlor, which began in 1992.
Revised: Desperate Optimists is the creative partnership of Christine Molloy and Joe Lawlor, which began in 1992.
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