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Original: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 to 1981 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor from 1964 to 1969.
Revised: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor from 1964 to 1969.
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Original: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 to 1981 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor from 1964 to 1969.
Revised: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 to 1981 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor between 1964 to 1969.
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Original: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 to 1981 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor from 1964 to 1969.
Revised: Nair was a member of parliament for Anson from 1979 to 1981 and a member of Bungsar, Selangor from 1964 and 1969.
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Original:  He was the Secretary-General of the Malaysian People's Action Party in 1965 and 1st Secretary-General of DAP in 1965 to 1967 before being elected as the President of Singapore by the Parliament of Singapore.
Revised:  He was the Secretary-General of the Malaysian People's Action Party in 1965 and first secretary-general of the Democratic Action Pary between 1965 to 1967 before being elected as the President of Singapore by the Parliament of Singapore.
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Original: Influenced by his idol socialist Pedro Abad Santos of San Fernando, and inspired by earlier Katipunan revolutionaries such as Felipe Salvador, Taruc joined the Aguman ding Maldang Tala-pagobra (AMT, Kapampangan for 'Union of Peasant Workers') and in 1938, the Partido Socialista (Socialist Party).
Revised: Influenced by his socialist idol Pedro Abad Santos of San Fernando, and inspired by earlier Katipunan revolutionaries such as Felipe Salvador, Taruc joined the Aguman ding Maldang Tala-pagobra (AMT, Kapampangan for 'Union of Peasant Workers') and in 1938, the Partido Socialista (Socialist Party).
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Original:  In the Politburo meeting of Dec. 1949 to Jan. 1950, the Huks were reorganized as the HMB, "Hukbo Mapagpalaya ng Bayan", or "People's Army of Liberation", with Luis as a Politburo Supervisor (PBS) for the Party's Regional Committee, Reco 2, in the Zambales Mountains.
Revised:  In the Politburo meeting of December 1949 to Jan. 1950, the Huks were reorganized as the HMB, "Hukbo Mapagpalaya ng Bayan", or "People's Army of Liberation", with Luis as a Politburo Supervisor (PBS) for the Party's Regional Committee, Reco 2, in the Zambales Mountains.
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Original:  In the Politburo meeting of Dec. 1949 to Jan. 1950, the Huks were reorganized as the HMB, "Hukbo Mapagpalaya ng Bayan", or "People's Army of Liberation", with Luis as a Politburo Supervisor (PBS) for the Party's Regional Committee, Reco 2, in the Zambales Mountains.
Revised:  In the Politburo meeting of Dec. 1949 to January 1950, the Huks were reorganized as the HMB, "Hukbo Mapagpalaya ng Bayan", or "People's Army of Liberation", with Luis as a Politburo Supervisor (PBS) for the Party's Regional Committee, Reco 2, in the Zambales Mountains.
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Original:  Taruc's trial started in Aug. 1954, where he pleaded guilty to rebellion, "in the spirit of my agreement with the president", and sentenced to 12 years of imprisonment, plus as "huge fine".
Revised:  Taruc's trial started in August 1954, where he pleaded guilty to rebellion, "in the spirit of my agreement with the president", and sentenced to 12 years of imprisonment, plus as "huge fine".
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Original: 2005 deaths Category:Communist Party of the Philippines politicians Category:Filipino communists Category:Filipino Roman Catholics Category:Filipino socialists Category:Inmates of the New Bilibid Prison Category:Kapampangan people Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Pampanga Category:Paramilitary Filipinos Category:People from Pampanga Category:University of Manila alumni Category:World War II resistance members Category:Christian communis
Revised: 2005 deaths Category:Communist Party of the Philippines politicians Category:Filipino communists Category:Filipino Roman Catholics Category:Filipino socialists Category:Inmates of the New Bilibid Prison Category:Kapampangan people Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Pampanga Category:Paramilitary Filipinos Category:People from Pampanga Category:University of Manila alumni Category:World War II resistance members Category:Christian communists Category:Socialist Party (Philippines) politicia
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Original:  He married Farangis Shahrokh, a Zoroastrian notable and daughter of Keikhosrow Shahrokh.
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Original:  He was the eldest amongst eight siblings - two girls and six boys.
Revised:  Aspy was the eldest amongst eight siblings - two girls and six boys.
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Original: In the natural sciences  a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments.
Revised: In the natural sciences , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments.
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Original: In the natural sciences , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments . Protocols are written  whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
Revised: In natural and social science research , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments . Protocols are written whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
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Original: In the natural sciences , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments . Protocols are written  whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
Revised: In the natural sciences , a protocol is most commonly a predefined procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments . Protocols are written whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
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Original: In the natural sciences , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of experiments . Protocols are written  whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
Revised: In the natural sciences , a protocol is a predefined written procedural method in the design and implementation of an experiment . Protocols are written whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
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Original:  Detailed protocols also facilitate the assessment of results through peer review.
Revised:  Additionally, and by extension, protocols have the advantage of facilitating the assessment of experimental results through peer review.
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Original:  In addition to detailed procedures and lists of required equipment and instruments, protocols often include information on safety precautions, the calculation of results and reporting standards , including statistical analysis and  rules for predefining and documenting excluded data to avoid bias.
Revised:  In addition to detailed procedures , equipment, and instruments, protocols often include information on safety precautions, the calculation of results and reporting standards , including statistical analysis and rules for predefining and documenting excluded data to avoid bias.
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Original:  In addition to detailed procedures and lists of required equipment and instruments, protocols often include information on safety precautions, the calculation of results and reporting standards , including statistical analysis and  rules for predefining and documenting excluded data to avoid bias.
Revised:  In addition to detailed procedures and lists of required equipment and instruments, protocols often include information on safety precautions, and how results were calculated and reported , including statistical analysis and rules for predefining and documenting excluded data to avoid bias.
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Original:  Overview Formal protocol is the general rule in fields of applied   science, such as environmental and medical studies that require the coordinated, standardized work of many participants.
Revised:  Overview Formal protocol is the general rule in fields of applied science, such as environmental science and clinical research, require the coordinated, standardized work of many participants.
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Original:  Such predefined protocols are an essential component of Good Laboratory Practice (GLP) and Good Clinical Practice (GCP) regulations.
Revised:  Additionally, any associated laboratory testing and experiment must be done in a way that is both ethically sound and results can be replicated by others using the same methods and equipment. As such, rigorous and vetted testing and experimental protocols are required. In fact, such predefined protocols are an essential component of Good Laboratory Practice (GLP) and Good Clinical Practice (GCP) regulations.
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Original:  Formal protocols typically require approval by a laboratory official before they are implemented for general use.
Revised:  Formal protocols typically require approval by one or more individuals—including for example a laboratory directory, study director, and/or independent ethics committee— before they are implemented for general use.
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Original:  Clearly defined protocols are also required by research funded by the National Institutes of Health.
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Original:  Safety Safety  precautions are a valuable addition to a protocol, and can range from requiring goggles to provisions for containment of microbes, environmental hazards, toxic substances, and volatile solvents.
Revised:  Protocols will often address: precautions are a valuable addition to a protocol, and can range from requiring goggles to provisions for containment of microbes, environmental hazards, toxic substances, and volatile solvents.
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Original:  Safety Safety  precautions are a valuable addition to a protocol, and can range from requiring goggles to provisions for containment of microbes, environmental hazards, toxic substances, and volatile solvents.
Revised:  Safety Safety safety: Safety precautions are a valuable addition to a protocol, and can range from requiring goggles to provisions for containment of microbes, environmental hazards, toxic substances, and volatile solvents.
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Original:  Procedural contingencies in the event of an accident may be included in a protocol or in a referenced SOP. Procedures Procedural information may include not only safety procedures but also procedures for avoiding contamination, calibration of equipment, equipment testing, documentation, and all other relevant issues.
Revised:  Procedural contingencies in the event of an accident may be included in a protocol or in a referenced SOP. procedures: Procedural information may include not only safety procedures but also procedures for avoiding contamination, calibration of equipment, equipment testing, documentation, and all other relevant issues.
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Original:  Equipment Equipment testing and documentation includes all necessary specifications, calibrations, operating ranges, etc.
Revised:  equipment used: Equipment testing and documentation includes all necessary specifications, calibrations, operating ranges, etc.
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Original:  Calculations, statistics and bias  Protocols for methods that produce numerical results generally include detailed formulae for calculation of results.
Revised:  Calculations, statistics and bias Protocols for methods that produce numerical results generally include detailed formulas for calculation of results.
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Original:  Formula may also be included for preparation of reagents and other solutions required for the work.
Revised:  A formula may also be included for preparation of reagents and other solutions required for the work.
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Original:   Many protocols include provisions for avoiding bias in the interpretation of results.
Revised:  bias: Many protocols include provisions for avoiding bias in the interpretation of results.
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Original:  A sample size of 10, i.e.  polling 10 people, will seldom give valid polling results.
Revised:  A sample size of 10, i.e. , polling 10 people, will seldom give valid polling results.
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Original:  Blinded protocols A protocol may require blinding to avoid bias .
Revised:  Blinded protocols A protocol may require blinding to avoid bias :
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Original:  A single blind protocol requires that the experimenter does not know the identity of samples or animals during the testing and calculations .
Revised:  A single blind protocol requires that the subject does not know the identity of samples or animals during the testing and calculations .
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Original:  A single blind protocol requires that the experimenter does not know the identity of samples or animals during the testing and calculations .
Revised:  A single blind protocol requires that the experimenter does not know the specifics of the experiment, but the experimenter is privy to the details .
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Original:  Positive data are rarely rationalized the same way .
Revised:  Positive data are rarely rationalized the same way 
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Original: Blinded protocols A protocol may require blinding to avoid bias : A single blind protocol requires that the subject does not know the specifics of the experiment, but the experimenter is privy to the details.
Revised: Blinded protocols A protocol may require blinding to avoid bias A single blind protocol requires that the subject does not know the specifics of the experiment, but the experimenter is privy to the details.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A double blind protocol comes into play when human subjects are tested and requires ensuring neither the experimenter nor experimental subjects have knowledge of the identity of the treatments or the results until after the experimentis complete.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% . A blind can be imposed on any participant of an experiment, including subjects, researchers, technicians, data analysts, and evaluators. In some cases, while blinding would be useful, it is impossible or unethical. A good clinical protocol ensures that blinding is as effective as possible within ethical and practical constrains.
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Original:  A triple blind protocol is used when it is required that neither the experimenter, experimental subject(s), nor statisticians have knowledge of the identity of the treatments or the results until after the experiment is complete .
Revised:  During the course of an experiment, a participant becomes unblinded if they deduce or otherwise obtain information that has been masked to them. Unblinding that occurs before the conclusion of a study is a source of experimental error, as the bias that was eliminated by blinding is re-introduced. Unblinding is common in blind experiments, and must be measured and reported. Reporting guidelines recommend that all studies assess and report unblinding. In practice, very few studies assess unblinding .
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Original:  The placebo effect and observer bias often require an experiment to use a double blind protocol and a control group.
Revised:  The placebo effect and observer bias often require the blinding of patients and researchers as well as a control group.
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Original:  Protocols are written —or in some cases electronically recorded— whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
Revised:  Protocols are written whenever it is desirable to standardize a laboratory method to ensure successful replication of results by others in the same laboratory or by other laboratories.
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Original: Bureau of Engraving and Printing A factory tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe  products being manufactured and  processes at work.
Revised: Bureau of Engraving and Printing A factory tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe the products being manufactured and processes at work.
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Original: Bureau of Engraving and Printing A factory tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe  products being manufactured and  processes at work.
Revised: Bureau of Engraving and Printing A factory tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe products being manufactured and the processes at work.
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Original:  Manufacturing companies offer factory tours as public relations.
Revised:  Manufacturing companies offer factory tours to improve public relations.
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Original:  The popularity of factory tours has declined, as factories no longer represent the cutting edge of technology   .
Revised:  The popularity of factory tours has declined, as factories no longer represent the cutting edge of technology . .
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Original: Bureau of Engraving and Printing [[File:MAF_Factory_Floor_tour.jpg|Visitors during a tram tour at NASA's Michoud factory]] A factory tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe the products being manufactured and the processes at work.
Revised: Bureau of Engraving and Printing [[File:MAF_Factory_Floor_tour.jpg|Visitors during a tram tour at NASA's Michoud factory]] A Factory Tour is an organized visit to a factory to observe the products being manufactured and the processes at work.
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Original:  Manufacturing companies offer factory tours to improve public relations    .
Revised:  Manufacturing companies offer factory tours to improve public relations . .
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Original:  Edmondson was one of six children born to Orange and Jane Edmondson who had been and previously enslaved before they worked as sharecroppers.
Revised:  Edmondson was one of six children born to Orange and Jane Edmondson who had been previously enslaved before they worked as sharecroppers.
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Original: Art career alt=|369x369px|"Crucifixion" ca. 1932–37, carved limestone, gift from Elizabeth Gibbons-Hanson Edmondson entered the world of sculpture at the advanced age of about 60 years old in 1934.
Revised: Art career Edmondson entered the world of sculpture at the advanced age of about 60 years old in 1934.
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Original: Biography William Edmondson was born sometime in December 1874 on the Compton Plantation in Davidson County, Tennessee.
Revised: Biography Edmondson was born sometime in December 1874 on the Compton Plantation in Davidson County, Tennessee.
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Original:  When his father died in late 1889, 16-year-old Edmondson refused to continue to tirelessly work on the plantation and left to Nashville for work.
Revised:  When his father died in late 1889, 16-year-old Edmondson refused to continue to tirelessly work on the plantation and relocated to Nashville for work.
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Original:  With Jane's passing in 1922, Edmonson's sister, Sarah, soon became the woman of the house.
Revised:  With Jane's death in 1922, Edmonson's sister, Sarah, soon became the woman of the house.
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Original:  It was said she would often hold family barbecues that consisted of laughter and storytelling.
Revised:  It was said she would often hold family barbecues that featured much laughter and storytelling.
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Original:  On February 7, 1951  at age seventy-six, he passed quietly in his home in Nashville, Tennessee, where illness had confined him to bed for several months.
Revised:  On February 7, 1951 , at age seventy-six, he passed quietly in his home in Nashville, Tennessee, where illness had confined him to bed for several months.
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Original:  On February 7, 1951  at age seventy-six, he passed quietly in his home in Nashville, Tennessee, where illness had confined him to bed for several months.
Revised:  On February 7, 1951 at age seventy-six, he died quietly in his home in Nashville, Tennessee, where illness had confined him to bed for several months.
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Original:  William Edmondson was buried in Mount Ararat Cemetery, now Greenwood Cemetery (Nashville, Tennessee), Nashville's oldest black cemetery.
Revised:  Edmondson was buried in Mount Ararat Cemetery, now Greenwood Cemetery (Nashville, Tennessee), Nashville's oldest black cemetery.
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Original:  , He carved local community icons such as preachers, lawyers and school teachers, celebrities of the day who were important to the African American community, such as prizefighter Jack Johnson.
Revised:  He carved local community icons such as preachers, lawyers and school teachers, celebrities of the day who were important to the African American community, such as prizefighter Jack Johnson.
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Original:  She attempted to publish his work but newspaper chain mogul William Randolph Hearst , had a prejudice against showing Negro art as he saw them as nothing other than servants.
Revised:  She attempted to publish his work but newspaper chain mogul William Randolph Hearst had a prejudice against showing Negro art as he saw them as nothing other than servants.
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Original:  A 2006 exhibition, "William Edmondson, Bill Traylor, and the Modernist Impulse , "  paired Edmondson with another well-known self-taught artist and argued for Edmondson's acceptance as an artist without limiting labels.
Revised:  A 2006 exhibition, "William Edmondson, Bill Traylor, and the Modernist Impulse " paired Edmondson with another well-known self-taught artist and argued for Edmondson's acceptance as an artist without limiting labels.
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Original:  A 2006 exhibition, "William Edmondson, Bill Traylor, and the Modernist Impulse , "  paired Edmondson with another well-known self-taught artist and argued for Edmondson's acceptance as an artist without limiting labels.
Revised:  A 2006 exhibition, "William Edmondson, Bill Traylor, and the Modernist Impulse , " , paired Edmondson with another well-known self-taught artist and argued for Edmondson's acceptance as an artist without limiting labels.
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Original:  Recently in January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid  . Collections with Edmondson Works
Revised:  In January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid . Collections with Edmondson Works
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Original:  Recently in January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid  . Collections with Edmondson Works
Revised:  Recently in January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid for an Edmondson work . Collections with Edmondson Works
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Original:  Recently in January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid  . Collections with Edmondson Works
Revised:  Recently in January 2016, "A Boxer" sold at a private auction for $785,000 the highest price ever paid . Collections with Edmondson works
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Original:  Edmondson also created and a small number of nude figures.
Revised:  Edmondson also created a small number of nude figures.
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