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Original:  On Wednesday, American film director Steven Spielberg withdrew from his position as artistic adviser to the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, China , because " conscience will not allow me to continue with business as usual  . " Further,he said, "Sudan's government bears the bulk of the responsibility for these ongoing crimes but the international community, and particularly China, should be doing more to end the continuing human suffering there," Spielberg's statement said.
Revised:  On Wednesday, American film director Steven Spielberg withdrew from his position as artistic adviser to the 2008 Summer Olympics in Beijing, China , because " conscience will not allow me to continue with business as usual . " "Sudan's government bears the bulk of the responsibility for these ongoing crimes but the international community, and particularly China, should be doing more to end the continuing human suffering there," Spielberg's statement said.
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Original:  The study reported that "27.6 per cent of birds represented by this survey had a gait score of 3 or above.  
Revised:  The study reported that "27.6 per cent of birds represented by this survey had a gait score of 3 or above. " 
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Original:  The study also said that the chickens which were tightly packed into a small area were more likely to have difficulties to walk then chickens that were given more space  
Revised:  The study also said that the chickens which were tightly packed into a small area were more likely to have difficulties to walk then chickens that were given more space . 
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Original: A recently released report  by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick and the University of Bristol has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
Revised: A recently released report written by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick and the University of Bristol has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
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Original: A recently released report written by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick and the--Please vote or comment on my RfaAnonymous101 Talk RfA 19:41, 14 February 2008 (UTC) University of Bristol has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
Revised: A recently released report written by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick and the University of Bristol has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
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Original:  The study also said that the chickens which were tightly packed into a small area were more likely to have difficulties to walk then chickens that were given more space.
Revised:  The study also said that the chickens which were tightly packed into a small area were more likely to have difficulties to walk than chickens that were given more space.
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Original:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented 
Revised:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented .
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Original:  The study reported that "27.6 per cent of birds represented by this survey had a gait score of three or above."
Revised:  The study reported that "27.6 per cent of birds represented by this survey had a of three or above."
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Original:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented.  
Revised:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented. " 
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Original:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented.  
Revised:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented. Sister link
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Original: CNN founder Ted Turner calls Fox News Bush's propaganda machine Downing Street memo DowningStreetMemo.com Why has 'Downing Street memo' story been a 'dud' in US?
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Original:  Officials express misgivings on Iraq Sen. Roberts%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Rockefellor on pre-war intelligence List of documents Documents leaked from the U.K. government revealed an apparent secret agreement between the United States and the United Kingdom to attack Iraq in 2002.
Revised:  Officials express misgivings on Iraq Sen. Roberts%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Documents leaked from the U.K. government revealed an apparent secret agreement between the United States and the United Kingdom to attack Iraq in 2002.
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Original:  The formal Resolution of Inquiry request was written by Boston constitutional attorney John C. Bonifaz and reported by Larisa Alexandrovna for Raw Story, article available here  .
Revised:  The formal Resolution of Inquiry request was written by Boston constitutional attorney John C. Bonifaz and reported by Larisa Alexandrovna for Raw Story, article available here here .
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Original: The document, known popularly as the  Downing Street memo or smoking gun memo , is a document purporting to contain the minutes taken during a meeting among United Kingdom government and political figures on July 23, 2002 discussing the build-up to the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
Revised: The document, known popularly as the " Downing Street memo or smoking gun memo , is a document purporting to contain the minutes taken during a meeting among United Kingdom government and political figures on July 23, 2002 discussing the build-up to the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
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Original: The document, known popularly as the  Downing Street memo or smoking gun memo , is a document purporting to contain the minutes taken during a meeting among United Kingdom government and political figures on July 23, 2002 discussing the build-up to the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
Revised: The document, known popularly as the Downing Street memo " , is a document purporting to contain the minutes taken during a meeting among United Kingdom government and political figures on July 23, 2002 discussing the build-up to the 2003 invasion of Iraq.
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Original:  Downing Street in London contains the official residence of the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom] (at 10 Downing Street) and is a metonymy for the United Kingdom government.
Revised:  Downing Street in London contains the official residence of the Prime Minister of the United Kingdom] (at 10 Downing Street) and is a metonym for the United Kingdom government.
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Original: US Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Jack Straw, when questioned about the document's accuracy, did not confirm or deny its accuracy.
Revised: US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Jack Straw, when questioned about the document's accuracy, did not confirm or deny its accuracy.
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Original: The government  statistics agency anounced today that the high figure had been reached , compared to 2.6\% in December or 2.3\% in January 2007.
Revised: The government 's statistics agency anounced today that the high figure had been reached , compared to 2.6\% in December or 2.3\% in January 2007.
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Original: The government  statistics agency anounced today that the high figure had been reached , compared to 2.6\% in December or 2.3\% in January 2007.
Revised: The government statistics agency anounced today that the high figure had been reached to, 2.6\% in December or 2.3\% in January 2007.
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Original:  It is also a rare occasion where Finnish inflation has surpassed the average for nations which use the Euro, currently at 3.2\%.
Revised:  It is also a rare occasion where Finish inflation has surpassed the average for nations which use the Euro, currently at 3.2\%.
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Original: Inflation in Finland hit a 7 year high in January, reaching 3.8\%, it has emerged.
Revised: Inflation in Finland hit a 7-year-high in January, reaching 3.8\%, it has emerged.
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Original:  Statistics Finland added that contributing factors included rises in food, alcohol and liquid fuel prices, higher interest rates and an increase to costs in restaurants and cafes .
Revised:  Statistics Finland added that contributing factors included increases in food, alcohol and liquid fuel prices, higher interest rates and an increase to costs in restaurants and cafes .
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Original:  Statistics Finland added that contributing factors included rises in food, alcohol and liquid fuel prices, higher interest rates and an increase to costs in restaurants and cafes .
Revised:  Statistics Finland added that contributing factors included rises in food, alcohol and liquid fuel prices, higher interest rates and an increase to costs in restaurants and cafés .
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Original:  He wen to on to say the the bank would monitor the situation across Europe, saying "We will be evaluating the risks facing economies from the angle of price stability and growth, and then when we next meet in March we'll see (if a response is required).,
Revised:  He went on to say the the bank would monitor the situation across Europe, saying "We will be evaluating the risks facing economies from the angle of price stability and growth, and then when we next meet in March we'll see (if a response is required).,
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Original:  For Obama the endorsement marks the second former Republican Party member of Congress to support his campaign, following 1980 presidential candidate and former Illinois Representative John B. Anderso
Revised:  For Obama, the endorsement marks the second former Republican Party member of Congress to support his campaign, following 1980 presidential candidate and former Illinois Representative John B. Anderso
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Original: Chafee was considered the most liberal Republican in the Senate disagreeing with his party on issues such as the War in Iraq, abortion, gay rights, global warming and taxes.
Revised: Chafee was considered a liberal Republican in the Senate disagreeing with his party on issues such as the War in Iraq, abortion, gay rights, global warming and taxes.
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Original: Image:Lincoln Chafee official portrait.jpg|Former Senator Lincoln Chafee (R-RI)]] Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democrat Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
Revised: Image:Lincoln Chafee official portrait.jpg|Former Senator Lincoln Chafee (R-RI)]] Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democratic Senator Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
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Original:  For Obama, the endorsement marks the second former Republican Party member of Congress to support his campaign , following 1980 presidential candidate and former Illinois Representative John B. Anderso
Revised:  For Obama, the endorsement marks the second former Republican Party member of Congress to support his campaign , following 1980 presidential candidate and former Illinois Representative , endorsed Obama
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Original: Image:Lincoln Chafee official portrait.jpg| Former Senator Lincoln Chafee (R-RI) Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democratic Senator Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
Revised: Senator Barack Obama Former Senator Lincoln Chafee (R-RI) Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democratic Senator Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
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Original: Image:Lincoln Chafee official portrait.jpg| Former Senator Lincoln Chafee (R-RI) Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democratic Senator Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
Revised: Image:Lincoln Chafee official portrait.jpg| Former Senator Lincoln Chafee Former Rhode Island Senator Lincoln Chafee, a lifelong Republican who left the party in 2007 following a defeat in the 2006 midterm elections, endorsed Democratic Senator Barack Obama in his bid for the White House.
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Original:  During the 2006 Congressional elections  he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and Republican frontrunner John McCain even campaigned for Chafee.
Revised:  During the 2006 Congressional elections , he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and Republican frontrunner John McCain even campaigned for Chafee.
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Original:  During the 2006 Congressional elections  he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and Republican frontrunner John McCain even campaigned for Chafee.
Revised:  During the 2006 Congressional elections he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and current Republican front-runner John McCain, even campaigned for Chafee.
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Original:  Chafee sited Obama as the "best candidate to restore American credibility, to restore our confidence to be moral and to bring people together to solve the complex issues".
Revised:  Chafee said Obama is the "best candidate to restore American credibility, to restore our confidence to be moral and to bring people together to solve the complex issues".
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Original:  The Rhode Islander stated that he thinks McCain would "understand" his current endorsement.
Revised:  The Rhode Islander said he thinks McCain would "understand" his current endorsement.
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Original:  During the 2006 Congressional elections, he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and current Republican front-runner John McCain , even campaigned for Chafee.
Revised:  During the 2006 Congressional elections, he was endorsed by President Bush despite differences on issues, and current Republican front-runner John McCain even campaigned for Chafee.
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Original:  Police have not officially released the names of any of the victims .
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Original:  The gunman was pursuing a graduate degree in sociology, with an emphasis in peace and social justice.
Revised:  He was pursuing a graduate degree in sociology, with an emphasis in peace and social justice.
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Original:  and Julianna Gehant, 32. All were students at NIU.
Revised:  Julianna Gehant, 32. All were students at NIU.
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Original: There were 8 games played in the National Hockey League on February 14, 2008.
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Original:  Game summaries%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tampa Bay Lightning @ Philadelphia Flyers The Lightning scored most, and first.
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Original:  Game summaries%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tampa Bay Lightning @ Philadelphia Flyers The Lightning scored most, and first.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pittsburgh Penguins @ Carolina Hurricanes Carolina special-teams played a huge part in their home victory against the Sidney Crosby-less Penguins.
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Original:  New York Islanders @ Toronto Maple Leafs%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Islanders picked up their second straight victory against the struggling Leafs.
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Original:  Chicago Blackhawks @ Nashville Predators%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chicago's offense has been coming up with goals everywhere lately, scoring 13 in their last two games while only allowing 3. Duncan Keith scored first just over a minute into the first period.
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Original:  St. Louis Blues @ Colorado Avalanche%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Paul Kariya and Jay McClement scored a goal each in the first period for the Blues.
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Original:  Dallas Stars @ Phoenix Coyotes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steven Reinprecht, Radim Vrbata and Shane Doan each had a three night as the Phoenix Coyotes picked up their first victory in five games, and their first since the reinstatement of associate coach Rick Tocchet, who had taken a two-year leave of absence from the team following an involvement in an illegal gambling operation.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steven Reinprecht, Radim Vrbata and Shane Doan each had a three night as the Phoenix Coyotes picked up their first victory in five games, and their first since the reinstatement of associate coach Rick Tocchet, who had taken a two-year leave of absence from the team following an involvement in an illegal gambling operation.
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Original:  Minnesota Wild @ Vancouver Canucks%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Stephane Veilleux had his first career two-goal game, scoring in both the first and second periods for the Wild.
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Original:  Edmonton Oilers @ San Jose Sharks%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% After a scoreless first, Ales Hemsky scored a power-play goal early in the second period for Edmonton.
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Original:  Other news%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Columbus Blue Jackets activated left winger Fredrik Modin from the injured reserve.
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Original:  Modin has already missed 47 games this season after suffering numerous broken bones in his back and a muscle tear in his leg  
Revised:  Modin has already missed 47 games this season after suffering numerous broken bones in his back and a muscle tear in his leg . 
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Original:  He is reported as having a torn ligament in his left knee, and may not be able to take to the ice for 4-6 months.
Revised:  He is reported as having a torn ACL in his left knee, and may not be able to take to the ice for 4-6 months.
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Original:  Mike Niskanen would cut the Coyotes' lead by 1 less than halfway through the final period.
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Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised:  "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details , " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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Original: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " He also said that "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
Revised: The Mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border sad that "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I the Mayor do not yet have the details . " said the mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border. "A lot of people left their homes during the night . " The area in on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form.
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