wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The ad reportedly shows digitally altered images of Pakistan's President, Pervez Musharraf  and the United States President, George W. Bush in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., which happens to be on fire in the background and a U.S. presidential motorcade is also in the background.
Revised: The ad reportedly shows digitally altered images of Pakistan's President, Pervez Musharraf , and the United States President, George W. Bush in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., which happens to be on fire in the background and a U.S. presidential motorcade is also in the background.
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Original: The ad reportedly shows digitally altered images of Pakistan's President, Pervez Musharraf, and the United States President, George W. Bush  in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., which happens to be on fire in the background and a U.S. presidential motorcade is also in the background.
Revised: The ad reportedly shows digitally altered images of Pakistan's President, Pervez Musharraf, and the United States President, George W. Bush , in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., which happens to be on fire in the background and a U.S. presidential motorcade is also in the background.
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Original: Canada, the United States, Norway and Denmark (through Greenland) have an exclusive economic area 200 miles north of their Arctic coastline, established under international laws.
Revised: Canada, the United States, Norway and Denmark (through Greenland) have an Exclusive Economic Zone 200 miles north of their Arctic coastline, established under international laws.
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Original:  Russia is claiming a larger area, extending to the North Pole, saying that a continental shelf called the Lomonosov Ridge , runs from Siberia on the Arctic seabed to the North Pole.
Revised:  Russia is claiming a larger area, extending to the North Pole, saying that a continental shelf called the Lomonosov Ridge runs from Siberia on the Arctic seabed to the North Pole.
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Original: A Russian expedition claims to have successfully planted a titanium flag of Russia on the seabed below the  North Pole.
Revised: A Russian expedition claims to have successfully planted a titanium flag of Russia on the seabed . North Pole.
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Original:  The mini-submarine Mir-1 was reported by the Vesti-24 television channel to have successfully reached the Arctic seabed.
Revised:  The mini-submarine Mir-1 has successfully reached the Arctic seabed.
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Original:  As such, it would be an extension of Russian territory . "This isn't the 15th century.
Revised:  As such, it would be an extension of Russian territory "This isn't the 15th century.
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Original: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and  "Citizen Journalism Unconference"  .
Revised: Hacking Days Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and "Citizen Journalism Unconference" .
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Original: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and  "Citizen Journalism Unconference"  .
Revised: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down to Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and "Citizen Journalism Unconference" .
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Original: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and  "Citizen Journalism Unconference"  .
Revised: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and "Citizen Journalism Unconference" .
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Original: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and  "Citizen Journalism Unconference"  .
Revised: Hacking Days Citizen Journalism Unconference Counting down of Wikimania 2007, the Site Events of Wikimania 2007 were continuously held such as "Hacking Days & Extra", " OLPC Curriculum Jam", and the "Citizen Journalism Unconference" .
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Original:  At August 1, Cary Bass and lots of programmers in participated Hacking Days, and Mike "b6s"
Revised:  On August 1, Cary Bass and lots of programmers in participated Hacking Days, and Mike "b6s"
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Original:  At August 1, Cary Bass and lots of programmers in participated Hacking Days, and Mike "b6s"
Revised:  At August 1, Cary Bass and many other programmers participated in the Hacking Days. Mike "b6s"
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Original:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
Revised:  Jiang hosted this two-day long event where programmers can exchange experiences . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
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Original:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
Revised:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . That same day, the One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
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Original:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
Revised:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child Curriculum Jam kicked off. Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
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Original:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
Revised:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams with an interest in freely licensed content to produce learning materials, which youngsters from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
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Original:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 ages choosing a winner from participants' contents .
Revised:  Jiang hosted this two-days event for exchanging programming experiencesat Hacking Days . Also, OLPC ( One Laptop Per Child ) Curriculum Jam kicks offat same day of Hacking Days Opening, the Project Director Samuel "SJ" Klein invited many teams interested in Creative Commons to produce free license learning contents and invited children judges from 6 to 16 years of age could judge .
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Original:  Finally, Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services Taiwan, kicked off at August 2.
Revised:  Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services Taiwan, kicked off at August 2.
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Original:  Finally, Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services Taiwan, kicked off at August 2.
Revised:  Finally, Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services Taiwan, took place August 2.
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Original:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
Revised:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
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Original:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
Revised:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
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Original:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
Revised:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After these events , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
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Original:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
Revised:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will start at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
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Original:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei Time, it will provide many of topics to make conference participants choose their interested topics and join them.
Revised:  The event organizer invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" and let every participants addresses topics about Citizen Journalism interested by their own . After those event , the main conference will kick off at August 3, 2007 9:00 Taipei 
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Original:  Category:Taiwan Category:Science and technology Category:Internet Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Asia Category:Wikimedia zh:2007維基媒體國際會議 週邊活動起跑 為大會
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Original: Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services  Taiwan, took place August 2.
Revised: Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference, hosted by Public Television Services (PTS) Taiwan, took place August 2.
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Original:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs  Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest   .
Revised:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Taiwan Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest .
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Original:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs  Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest   .
Revised:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this unconference , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest .
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Original:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs  Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest   .
Revised:  The organization invited Frontier Foundation Researcher Shu-fang Tsai and Facilitator of Institute of Culture Affairs Gail West to host this "unconference" , where participants could addresses Citizen Journalism topics of their interest . .
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Original: Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference , hosted by Public Television Services (PTS) Taiwan , took place August 2.
Revised: Citizen Journalism Unconference The Citizen Journalism Unconference , hosted by Public Television Services (PTS) Taiwan , took place August 2.
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Original: Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference , hosted by Public Television Services (PTS) Taiwan , took place August 2.
Revised: Citizen Journalism Unconference Finally, the Citizen Journalism Unconference , hosted by Public Television Services (PTS) Taiwan .
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Original:  Langham, aged 58 and from Goldford, Kent claimed that he had been studying porn sites, researching for a character called, "Pedro," for the television series Help.
Revised:  Langham, 58 and from Goldford, Kent claimed that he had been studying porn sites, researching for a character called, "Pedro," for the television series Help.
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Original:  Langham, aged 58 and from Goldford, Kent claimed that he had been studying porn sites, researching for a character called, "Pedro," for the television series Help.
Revised:  Langham, aged 58 , from Goldford, Kent claimed that he had been studying porn sites, researching for a character called, "Pedro," for the television series Help.
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Original:  Judge Philip Statman said that Langham will be remanded in custody till his sentencing on September 14.
Revised:  Judge Philip Statman said that Langham will remain in custody till his sentencing on September 14.
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Original:  Langham said he pleaded not guilty because he did not want to be labelled a, " Paedophile ".
Revised:  Langham said he pleaded not guilty because he did not want to be labelled a, " Pedophile ".
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Original:  Langham said he pleaded not guilty because he did not want to be labelled a, " Pedophile ".
Revised:  Langham said he pleaded not guilty because he did not want to be labelled a, " Paedophile ".
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Original: The headstone was a special, gold-lettered memorial tombstone, one of only six such markers found throughout Arlington.
Revised: The headstone was a special, gold-lettered memorial tombstone, one of only six such markers to be found in Arlington.
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Original:  While attempting to build a holding area for enemy prisoners of war about a mile from Baghdad International Airport, Smith and the three dozen men he commanded in the 3rd Infantry Division were surprised and outnumbered.
Revised:  While attempting to build a holding area for enemy prisoners of war about a mile from Baghdad International Airport, Smith and the three dozen men he commanded in the 3rd Infantry Division were suprised and outnumbered.
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Original:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance  , he led the defence of his platoon , and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby  throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
Revised:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance mission , he led the defence of his platoon , and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
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Original:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance  , he led the defence of his platoon , and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby  throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
Revised:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance , he led the defence of his platoon ( and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
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Original:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance  , he led the defence of his platoon , and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby  throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
Revised:  While his commander was on a reconnaissance , he led the defence of his platoon , and the mortar team, scouts and medical aid station based nearby ) by throwing a grenade, firing rockets and firing his own weapon.
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Original:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and  lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier (whose crew had all been injured moments before by a mortar round) back into the scene of the fight . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
Revised:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and a lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier (whose crew had all been injured moments before by a mortar round) back into the scene of the fight . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
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Original:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and  lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier (whose crew had all been injured moments before by a mortar round) back into the scene of the fight . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
Revised:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier back into the scene of the fight, whose original crew had been incapicitated moments before by a mortar round) back into the scene of the fight . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
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Original:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and  lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier (whose crew had all been injured moments before by a mortar round) back into the scene of the fight . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
Revised:  After a Bradley Fighting Vehicle was forced to withdraw from multiple rocket-propelled-grenade strikes and lack of ammunition, he ordered another soldier to reverse an amroured personnel carrier (whose crew had all been injured moments before by a mortar . Smith then engaged the attacking Iraqi troops using its roof-mounted un-armoured .50-calibre machine gun, knowing it was the heaviest weapon between the attackers and the troops behind him.
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Original:  The US Army states that he killed 20-50 Iraqi troops, and that his actions saved the many US troops stationed nearby.
Revised:  The US Army states that his actions killed 20-50 Iraqi troops, and that his actions saved the many US troops stationed nearby.
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