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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Secretary General Kofi Annan of the United Nations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kofi Annan Source: Ricardo Stuckert/ABr%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "If we are to make our world fairer, freer and safer for all its inhabitants, the institutions of the United Nations should reflect the world of 2005, not 1945 — particularly the Security Council.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Secretary General Kofi Annan of the United Nations%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "If we are to make our world fairer, freer and safer for all its inhabitants, the institutions of the United Nations should reflect the world of 2005, not 1945 — particularly the Security Council.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Prime Minister Manmohan Singh of India%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Manmohan Singh Source: PM's Office%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Mr. Chairman Sir, to meet these challenges and constraints, we must respond in a manner worthy of the Bandung spirit.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Manmohan Singh Source: PM's Office%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Mr. Chairman Sir, to meet these challenges and constraints, we must respond in a manner worthy of the Bandung spirit.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Prime Minister Manmohan Singh of India%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Manmohan Singh Source: PM's Office%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Mr. Chairman Sir, to meet these challenges and constraints, we must respond in a manner worthy of the Bandung spirit.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Prime Minister Manmohan Singh of India%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "Mr. Chairman Sir, to meet these challenges and constraints, we must respond in a manner worthy of the Bandung spirit.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Thabo Mbeki of South Africa%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Thabo Mbeki Source: Antonio Milena/ABr%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I am honoured to wish this historic second Asian-African Conference success, convinced that we have the will to advance the cause pioneered by some of the greatest sons and daughters of Africa and Asia.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Thabo Mbeki Source: Antonio Milena/ABr%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I am honoured to wish this historic second Asian-African Conference success, convinced that we have the will to advance the cause pioneered by some of the greatest sons and daughters of Africa and Asia.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Thabo Mbeki of South Africa%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Thabo Mbeki Source: Antonio Milena/ABr%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I am honoured to wish this historic second Asian-African Conference success, convinced that we have the will to advance the cause pioneered by some of the greatest sons and daughters of Africa and Asia.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Thabo Mbeki of South Africa%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "I am honoured to wish this historic second Asian-African Conference success, convinced that we have the will to advance the cause pioneered by some of the greatest sons and daughters of Africa and Asia.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono of Indonesia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono Source: White House%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The Strategic Partnership highlights the need to address issues of common concern, such as armed conflict, weapons of mass destruction, transnational organized crime and terrorism.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono Source: White House%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The Strategic Partnership highlights the need to address issues of common concern, such as armed conflict, weapons of mass destruction, transnational organized crime and terrorism.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono of Indonesia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono Source: White House%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The Strategic Partnership highlights the need to address issues of common concern, such as armed conflict, weapons of mass destruction, transnational organized crime and terrorism.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono of Indonesia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The Strategic Partnership highlights the need to address issues of common concern, such as armed conflict, weapons of mass destruction, transnational organized crime and terrorism.
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  Initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra) has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  The initial exit polls for Thailand's general election suggest the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra) has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party , allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra) has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister (Thaksin Shinawatra) has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra) , has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
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Original:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra)  has a clear lead , although exit polls can be unreliable .
Revised:  The initial exit polls for the Thai general election suggests that the People Power Party which is allied with the former Prime Minister of Thailand (Thaksin Shinawatra) has a clear lead .
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Original:  Initial exit polls for Thailand's general election suggest the People Power Party, allied with the former Prime Minister (Thaksin Shinawatra) , has a clear lead.
Revised:  Initial exit polls for Thailand's general election suggest the People Power Party, allied with the former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra , has a clear lead.
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Original:  Initial exit polls for Thailand's general election suggest the People Power Party  , allied with the former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra, has a clear lead.
Revised:  Initial exit polls for Thailand's general election suggest the People Power Party (PPP) , allied with the former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra, has a clear lead.
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Original:  This election is the first election in Thailand since the military coup . After the coup Thaksin Shinawatra's party, the Thai Rak Thai party and ThaksinShinawatra went into exile, although his supporters, who were not banned  , formed the People Power Party.
Revised:  This election is the first election in Thailand since the military coup . Following the coup, Thai Rak Thai party and ThaksinShinawatra went into exile, although his supporters, who were not banned , formed the People Power Party.
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Original:  This election is the first election in Thailand since the military coup . After the coup Thaksin Shinawatra's party, the Thai Rak Thai party and ThaksinShinawatra went into exile, although his supporters, who were not banned  , formed the People Power Party.
Revised:  This election is the first election in Thailand since the military coup . After the coup Thaksin Shinawatra's party, the Thai Rak Thai party and ThaksinShinawatra went into exile, although his supporters, who were not banned from politics , formed the People Power Party.
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Original:  They have benefited from the popularity of Mr.Shinawatra in rural areas.
Revised:  They have benefited from Thaksin's popularity in rural areas.
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Original:  If the  prediction of 202 seats is correct it is possible that the People Power Party will not form a government , if the remaining parties form a coalition, and there will be a lot of negotiating by the People Power Party to try and form a coalition so they can form a majority government.
Revised:  If the prediction of 202 seats is correct it is possible that the People Power Party will not form a government 
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Original:  After this, he became the chairman of his party, the Christian People's Party  .
Revised:  After this, he became the chairman of his party, the Christian People's Party (CVP) .
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Original:  He was made a Minister of State in 1995 & 
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Original:  The crash was about 410km west of Tokyo near Osaka in the province of Hyogo . Japan has one of the world's most complex and widely used rail systems  
Revised:  The crash was about 410km west of Tokyo near Osaka in the Hyogo prefecture . Japan has one of the world's most complex and widely used rail systems 
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Original:  The crash was about 410km west of Tokyo near Osaka in the province of Hyogo . Japan has one of the world's most complex and widely used rail systems  
Revised:  The crash was about 410km west of Tokyo near Osaka in the province of Hyogo . Japan has one of the world's most complex and widely used rail systems . 
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Original: The commuter train was heading towards the Osaka JR station Hyogo province A seven-car commuter train carrying 580 passengers jumped off the tracks, plowed through a car, and collided with a nine-story apartment building in Amagasaki, Japan on Monday at 9:18 am local time (00:18 UTC).
Revised:  Hyogo province A seven-car commuter train carrying 580 passengers jumped off the tracks, plowed through a car, and collided with a nine-story apartment building in Amagasaki, Japan on Monday at 9:18 am local time (00:18 UTC).
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Original:  Julien Gracq, the pen Name of Louis Poirier and French writer has died saturday at the age of 97.
Revised: French writer Julien Gracq, the pen Name of Louis Poirier and French writer has died saturday at the age of 97.
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Original:  Julien Gracq, the pen Name of Louis Poirier and French writer has died saturday at the age of 97.
Revised:  Julien Gracq, the pen Name of Louis Poirier , died Saturday at the age of 97.
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Original:  Jessica became famous after once reaching the final of American Idol.
Revised:  Jessica became famous after once reaching the finals of American Idol.
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Original:  Astronomers have discovered an asteroid that is approximately 160 feet long, that may be on a collision course for Mars and may hit the planet sometime in early 2008.
Revised:  Astronomers have discovered an asteroid that is approximately 160 feet long, that may be on a collision course for Mars and may hit the Earth sometime in early 2008.
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Original: in 1938 he taught at the Volksmusikschule Berlin-Neukölln.
Revised: In 1938 he taught at the Volksmusikschule Berlin-Neukölln.
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Original:  Not only younger people, but elders also enjoyed the basketball arcade machine.
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Original:  Hundreds of trees and power lines have also fallen across Chicago, Wiconsin, Texas, Kansas and Minnesota 
Revised:  Hundreds of trees and power lines have also fallen across Chicago, Wiconsin, Texas, Kansas and Minnesota .
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Original:  Hundreds of trees and power lines have also fallen across Chicago, Wiconsin , Texas, Kansas and Minnesota.
Revised:  Hundreds of trees and power lines have also fallen across Chicago, Wisconsin , Texas, Kansas and Minnesota.
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Original:  In Wiconsin there were three fatalities from the snow storm, while one died in both Kansas and Texas.
Revised:  In Wisconsin there were three fatalities from the snow storm, while one died in both Kansas and Texas.
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Original: The death in  was expected to have Texas involved over 40 vehicles and about 20 semitrailers.
Revised: The death in Texas was expected to have Texas involved over 40 vehicles and about 20 semitrailers.
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Original: The death in  was expected to have Texas involved over 40 vehicles and about 20 semitrailers.
Revised: The death in was expected to have involved over 40 vehicles and about 20 semitrailers.
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Original: The damage from a 2004 snow storm 11 people have been left dead and thousands have no electricity after a snowstorm hit the central area of the United States.
Revised:  11 people have been left dead and thousands have no electricity after a snowstorm hit the central area of the United States.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In many areas visibility was lowered to almost zero by the storms.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Three deaths were also caused by a traffic-related incident in Minnesota.
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Original:  In addition, there were reports of children not wearing clothing appropriate to the weather conditions.
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Original: Image:2007NBA2K8AsiaChampionshipTaiwanStage RitchieLai Brock.jpg|180px|Event Director of NBA Asia Ritchie Lai (left) was interviewed by Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen.]] Sporting games are more popular with younger gamers and general sporting people with a conjunction from two industries between sporting and gaming.
Revised: Image:2007NBA2K8AsiaChampionshipTaiwanStage RitchieLai Brock.jpg|180px|Event Director of NBA Asia Ritchie Lai (left) was interviewed by Wikinews Reporter Rico Shen.]] Sporting games are more popular with younger gamers and sporting people with a conjunction from two industries between sporting and gaming.
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Original: 的確，這也是因為歐美地區電玩市場與其族群的興盛，其實也正因為 NBA 在歐美的知名度，才會有相關的電玩店竄起，甚至也和運動產業進行結合。 Brock：電玩與運動產業結合，是個不錯的主意，我記得世界電玩大賽，每年都會考慮選擇一項運動類遊戲做為官方比賽用的遊戲，甚至，國際上某些電玩展覽，像是韓國G-star與日本的東京電玩展，都會在展覽期間，舉行各類遊戲的競賽，讓各國玩家進行交流，如果是以NBA的立場，未來是否考慮與電玩展覽進行結合？ Ritchie：各項展覽都有他們的基本規章，某些展覽不一定有開放單項遊戲的競賽，倘若再把前述的贊助問題與廠商結構等因素納入，就會更加複雜，畢竟，市場分佈仍應該是第一個要被考量的要素。不過，這個提議倒是一種很好的構想，我想這種行銷的模式，對於遊戲、廠商、會展，都可以獲得適當的加分效果，我們會考慮看看。%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brock：謝謝！因為印象中在台灣的NBA宣傳活動，總是以運動產業為主，而這種以電玩為主的活動，確實非常特別。
Revised: 的確，這也是因為歐美地區電玩市場與其族群的興盛，其實也正因為 NBA 在歐美的知名度，才會有相關的電玩店竄起，甚至也和運動產業進行結合。 Brock：電玩與運動產業結合，是個不錯的主意，我記得世界電玩大賽，每年都會考慮選擇一項運動類遊戲做為官方比賽用的遊戲，甚至，國際上某些電玩展覽，像是韓國G-star與日本的東京電玩展，都會在展覽期間，舉行各類遊戲的競賽，讓各國玩家進行交流，如果是以NBA的立場，未來是否考慮與電玩展覽進行結合？ %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brock：謝謝！因為印象中在台灣的NBA宣傳活動，總是以運動產業為主，而這種以電玩為主的活動，確實非常特別。
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Original: 的確，這也是因為歐美地區電玩市場與其族群的興盛，其實也正因為 NBA 在歐美的知名度，才會有相關的電玩店竄起，甚至也和運動產業進行結合。 Brock：電玩與運動產業結合，是個不錯的主意，我記得世界電玩大賽，每年都會考慮選擇一項運動類遊戲做為官方比賽用的遊戲，甚至，國際上某些電玩展覽，像是韓國G-star與日本的東京電玩展，都會在展覽期間，舉行各類遊戲的競賽，讓各國玩家進行交流，如果是以NBA的立場，未來是否考慮與電玩展覽進行結合？ Ritchie：各項展覽都有他們的基本規章，某些展覽不一定有開放單項遊戲的競賽，倘若再把前述的贊助問題與廠商結構等因素納入，就會更加複雜，畢竟，市場分佈仍應該是第一個要被考量的要素。不過，這個提議倒是一種很好的構想，我想這種行銷的模式，對於遊戲、廠商、會展，都可以獲得適當的加分效果，我們會考慮看看。%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Brock：謝謝！因為印象中在台灣的NBA宣傳活動，總是以運動產業為主，而這種以電玩為主的活動，確實非常特別。
Revised: 的確，這也是因為歐美地區電玩市場與其族群的興盛，其實也正因為 NBA 在歐美的知名度，才會有相關的電玩店竄起，甚至也和運動產業進行結合。 Brock：電玩與運動產業結合，是個不錯的主意，我記得世界電玩大賽，每年都會考慮選擇一項運動類遊戲做為官方比賽用的遊戲，甚至，國際上某些電玩展覽，像是韓國G-star與日本的東京電玩展，都會在展覽期間，舉行各類遊戲的競賽，讓各國玩家進行交流，如果是以NBA的立場，未來是否考慮與電玩展覽進行結合？ Ritchie：各項展覽都有他們的基本規章，某些展覽不一定有開放單項遊戲的競賽，倘若再把前述的贊助問題與廠商結構等因素納入，就會更加複雜，畢竟，市場分佈仍應該是第一個要被考量的要素。不過，這個提議倒是一種很好的構想，我想這種行銷的模式，對於遊戲、廠商、會展，都可以獲得適當的加分效果，我們會考慮看看。%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nice thanks. It's really rare and special for public because the NBA often held activity on sports but sometimes on gaming competition especially in Taiwan.
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Original:  Six have been arrested, and two are still at large     
Revised:  Six have been arrested, and two are still at large . 
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Original:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer    [  
Revised:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer . [ 
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Original:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer    [  
Revised:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer His observation is that defrauding a corrupt government is part of the culture that has sometimes been carried in to the United States, and that people justify it when they believe that the money is going towards Jewish education. "I think the idea is that Jewish education is so important and so expensive and the folks say to themselves, 'we're forced to pay for public education which we don't use', and they manage to sometimes justify in their own minds these kinds of activities that are for the sake of a holy end." [ 
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Original:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer    [  
Revised:  Other donors were reimbursed via loans made from the United States branch of an Israeli bank, organized by Roth and Kantor and secured on funds secretly held in that bank in Israel, to which the donations had been sent via wire transfer [... 
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Original: Category:Crime and lawCategory:United StatesCategory:CaliforniaCategory:Los AngelesCategory:New York Eight men and five Brookyln-based Spinka charitable organizations have been charged with tax fraud and money laundering.
Revised:  Eight men and five Brookyln-based Spinka charitable organizations have been charged with tax fraud and money laundering.
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Original:  One such is Yeshiva Imrei Yosef, a private Orthodox Jewish school for boys in grades PK–12 with 312 students, which is one of 5000 such organizations approved for charitable donations by the Jewish Community Endowment Fund of the Jewish Community Federation of San Franscisco .
Revised:  One such is Yeshiva Imrei Yosef, a private Orthodox Jewish school for boys in grades PK–12 with 312 students, which is one of 5000 such organizations approved for charitable donations by the Jewish Community Endowment Fund of the Jewish Community Federation of San Francisco .
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Original:  The gunmen reportedly sped away after the attack which took place East if the capital, Nouakchott.
Revised:  The gunmen reportedly sped away after the attack which took place East of the capital, Nouakchott.
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Original:  The suspects are accused of accused of downloading or possessing illegal images of children.
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Original: A sketch of King Gyanendra of Nepal  After ten years of civil war between communist guerrilla fighters and government troops, the principal political parties of Nepal have decided to abolish the monarchy, headed by King Gyanendra, and turn the country into a republic.
Revised: A sketch of King Gyanendra of Nepal . After ten years of civil war between communist guerrilla fighters and government troops, the principal political parties of Nepal have decided to abolish the monarchy, headed by King Gyanendra, and turn the country into a republic.
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Original:  The maoist rebels declared a cease fire and signed a peace treaty, agreeing to place its troops and weapons under U.N. supervision
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Original:  After ten years of civil war between communist guerrilla fighters and government troops, the principal political parties of Nepal have decided to abolish the monarchy, headed by King Gyanendra, and turn the country into a republic.
Revised:  The principal political parties of Nepal have decided to abolish the monarchy, headed by King Gyanendra, and turn the country into a republic.
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Original:  The insurgent maoists would be allowed to return to the government.
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