wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The crows go for the livers, and the toads puff up as a defense mechanism.
Revised:  The crows go for the livers, the toads puff up as a defense mechanism.
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Original:  Since there is a hole in the toad's body , entrails and blood explode out of the enlarged hole.
Revised:  Since there is a hole in the toad's body , entrails and blood explode out of the hole.
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Original:  One episode of renditioning was reported by The Wasjington Post in November 2003.
Revised: "I'm going to say it again: One of my concerns after September the 11th is the farther away we got from September the 11th, the more relaxed we would all become and assume that there wasn't an enemy out there ready to hit us..." the president told reporters. One episode of renditioning was reported by The Wasjington Post in November 2003.
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Original: Maher Arar, who lives in Toronto with his family,  has never been charged with any crime and said that he pleaded with U.S. authorities to let him return to Canada.
Revised: Maher Arar, who lives in Toronto with his family, has never been charged with any crime . He said that he pleaded with U.S. authorities to let him return to Canada.
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Original: One episode of renditioning was reported by The Wasjington Post in November 2003.
Revised: One episode of renditioning was reported by The Washington Post in November 2003.
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Original:  Bush talked about the a wide range of topics including the threat of North Korea, Social Security solvency and his support for privitized accounts as well as means-based benefits, the rocketing price of crude oil, and issues concerning Iraq.
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Original:  That might just have change 
Revised:  That might just have changed. 
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Original: A UCLA team  headed by Brian Naranjo, has fused deuterium , using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
Revised: A UCLA team , headed by Brian Naranjo, has fused deuterium , using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
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Original:  The " pocket sized " fusion device will be used as a neutron generator in other applications , such as efficient micro-thrusters for spacecraft, but it does not create more energy than it uses.
Revised:  The " microthrusters " fusion device will be used as a neutron generator in other applications , such as efficient micro-thrusters for spacecraft, but it does not create more energy than it uses.
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Original:  The " pocket sized " fusion device will be used as a neutron generator in other applications , such as efficient micro-thrusters for spacecraft, but it does not create more energy than it uses.
Revised:  The " pocket sized " for space propulsion. It is possible that there may be applications related to nuclear weapons, although this possibility is not discussed in the research paper.
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Original:  In fact, the leader of the team behind this development was one of the main critics of earlier low-temperature fusion claims  
Revised:  In fact, the leader of the team behind this development was one of the main critics of earlier low-temperature fusion claims . 
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Original:  Todd Rider of MIT suggests that the kind of non-equilibrium fusion produced in theses sources will never be usable as an energy source (see his PhD thesis)
Revised:  Todd Rider of MIT suggests that the kind of non-equilibrium fusion produced in these sources will never be usable as an energy source (see his PhD thesis)
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Original:  United Kingdom leaders from the three largest political parties were interrogated on the BBC's 'Question Time', with continuing concerns regarding the legality of the Iraq invasion dominating the discussions. article In two  attacks, four Afghan police and one U.S. soldier were killed in Afghanistan.  article A UCLA team headed by Brian Naranjo has fused deuterium using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
Revised:  United Kingdom leaders from the three largest political parties were interrogated on the BBC's 'Question Time', with continuing concerns regarding the legality of the Iraq invasion dominating the discussions. article In two separate attacks, four Afghan police and one U.S. soldier were killed in Afghanistan. article A UCLA team headed by Brian Naranjo has fused deuterium using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
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Original:  but it could make feasible a safer form of fission reactor than current designs. article The United States Central Intelligence Agency ends interrogations and search for Wepons of Mass Destruction in Iraq,
Revised:  but it could make feasible a safer form of fission reactor than current designs. article The United States Central Intelligence Agency ends interrogations and search for Weapons of Mass Destruction in Iraq,
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Original:  according to  report from the Iraq Survey Group.  article Italy's Prime Minister has warned the U.S. Italy will not accept a draft report from the U.S. Military exonerating soldiers involved in the shooting of Italian agent Calipari and journalist Sgrena. article Scientists are unsure as to the cause,
Revised:  according to report from the Iraq Survey Group. article Italy's Prime Minister has warned the United States Italy will not accept a draft report from the U.S. Military exonerating soldiers involved in the shooting of Italian agent Calipari and journalist Sgrena. article Scientists are unsure as to the cause,
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Original:  The police officers were killed in a convoy ambush, while the soldier was killed when a patrol was fired on. article A UCLA team headed by Brian Naranjo has fused deuterium using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
Revised:  The police officers were killed in a convoy ambush, while the soldier was killed when a patrol was fired on. article A UCLA team has fused deuterium using a pyroelectric crystal to create a strong electric field accelerator.
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Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Card also allows people to avoid going inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
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Original:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, Demir submits the receipt to a bank for processing to have it is credited to his account.
Revised:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, Demir submits the receipt to a bank for processing to have it credited into his account.
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Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, the users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at that time the price per gallon was about a dollar  .
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at that time the price per gallon was about a dollar .
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Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, the users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at that time the price per gallon was about a dollar  .
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, the users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar .
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Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit  same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method.
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit , same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method.
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Original:  The owner-operator of the new Shell gas station  changing over from what used to be a Texaco, said he expects pump prices to hit $2.50 before the sticker shock wears off.
Revised:  The owner-operator of the new Shell gas station now changing over from what used to be a Texaco, said he expects pump prices to hit $2.50 before the sticker shock wears off.
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Original:  Buyers are opting to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, it is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and it is convenient.
Revised:  People have opted to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, it is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and it is convenient.
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Original:  Buyers are opting to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, it is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and it is convenient.
Revised:  Buyers are opting to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and it is convenient.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Buyers are opting to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, it is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and it is convenient.
Revised:  Buyers are opting to pay with plastic, which for them involves no transaction fee, it is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and is convenient.
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Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump and can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside station if they choose not to.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose not to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean that pay at the pump users can skip going inside inside the gas station if they choose to. No wonder its use is on the rise.
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Original:  Demir estimates that he has to pass along in the form of higher pump prices a nickel per gallon due to the surcharge he incurs from processing electronic purchases.
Revised:  Demir estimates that he has to pass along in the form of higher gas prices a nickel per gallon due to the surcharge he incurs from processing electronic purchases.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar  at that time.
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar at that time.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar  at that time.
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when gas cost about a dollar at that time.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar  at that time.
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users of it paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when the price per gallon was about a dollar a gallon at that time.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit , same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method.
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method.
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Original:  Maybe he would offer a cash discount .
Revised:  Maybe he would offer a discount for cash .
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Original: extreme gas station make-over Dismissing with a wave of his hand the notion that anything can be done about high gas prices, Alex Demir said of his suppliers, “They control everything.
Revised: New gas station gets an extreme make-over Dismissing with a wave of his hand the notion that anything can be done about high gas prices, Alex Demir said of his suppliers, “They control everything.
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Original:  ” The owner-operator of the new Shell gas station now changing over from what used to be a Texaco, said he expects pump prices to hit $2.50 before the sticker shock wears off . “People are not paying with cash anymore.” he said.
Revised:  ” The owner-operator of the new Shell gas station now changing over from what used to be a Texaco, said he expects pump prices to hit $2.50 before the sticker shock wears off . “People are not paying with cash anymore.” 
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Original:  People have opted to pay with plastic , which for them involves no transaction fee, is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and is  convenient.
Revised:  People have opted to pay with plastic . It involves no transaction fee, is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and is convenient.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  People have opted to pay with plastic , which for them involves no transaction fee, is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and is  convenient.
Revised:  People have opted to pay with plastic , which for them involves no transaction fee, is safer than cash if lost or stolen, and is more convenient.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit and Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people can pay at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside inside station if they choose to.
Revised:  The plastic Debit or Credit Cards also mean people paying at the pump and can skip going inside the station to pay if they choose to.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Demir estimates that he has to pass  along in the form of higher gas prices a nickel per gallon due to the surcharge he incurs from processing electronic purchases.
Revised:  Demir estimates that he has to pass Demir estimates he passes along in the form of higher gas prices a nickel per gallon due to the surcharge he incurs from processing electronic purchases.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, Demir submits the receipt to a bank for processing to have it credited into his account.
Revised:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, he submits the receipt to a bank for processing to have it credited into his account.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, Demir submits the receipt to a bank for processing to have it credited into his account.
Revised:  Each time a buyer uses plastic to make a payment, Demir submits the receipt to a bank to process for having the money credited into his account.
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Original:  The bank keeps 3\% of the total amount of the transaction as a processing surcharge, or fee.
Revised:  The bank keeps 3\% of the total amount of his transactions as a processing surcharge, or fee.
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Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when  gas cost about a dollar a gallon at that time .
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, people who used a card paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when gas cost about a dollar a gallon at that time .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when  gas cost about a dollar a gallon at that time .
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at the time gas cost about a dollar a gallon at that time .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when  gas cost about a dollar a gallon at that time .
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, users paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when gas cost about a dollar a gallon .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard to where now all stations charge the same price, regardless payment method . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless payment method . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard where all stations began charging the same price, regardless of cash or plastic . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
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Original:  Now maybe, he and other station would offer a discount for cash. 
Revised:  Now maybe, he and other station will offer a discount for cash. 
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Original: New gas station gets an extreme make-over at the corners of Oaklawn Blvd. and Jefferson Davis Road.
Revised: Gas station gets an extreme make-over at the corners of Oaklawn Blvd. and Jefferson Davis Road.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, people who used a card paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at the time gas cost about a dollar a gallon.
Revised:  When the use of plastic was first gaining acceptance in the gas pumping business, people who used a plastic paid a higher price, about 3 cents a gallon, when at the time gas cost about a dollar a gallon.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard to where now all stations charge the same price , regardless of cash or plastic  . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard to where now all stations charge the same , regardless of cash or plastic . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard to where now all stations charge the same price , regardless of cash or plastic  . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Revised:  Then advertising campaigns offering “Credit same as Cash” started, and changed the business standard to where now all stations charge the same price , regardless of cash or plastic payment . “The banks are making a lot of money on this.”
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Now maybe,  he and other station will offer a discount for cash.
Revised:  Now maybe, Now maybe he and other station will offer a discount for cash.
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Original:  Now maybe,  he and other station will offer a discount for cash.
Revised:  Now maybe, he and other gas stations will go back to offering a discount for cash.
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Original:   Dismissing with a wave of his hand the notion that anything can be done about high gas prices, Alex Demir saidof his suppliers ,  “They control everything.” 
Revised:  Dismissing with a wave of his hand dismissing the notion , “They control everything.” 
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Original:  Now that the price of gas has  doubled, the fees banks collect on the processing of these plastic transactions has  doubled too, without their having to lift a finger.
Revised:  Now that the price of gas has doubled, the fees banks collect on processing these plastic transactions has doubled too, without their having to lift a finger.
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Original:  Now that the price of gas has  doubled, the fees banks collect on the processing of these plastic transactions has  doubled too, without their having to lift a finger.
Revised:  Now that the price of gas has doubled, the fees banks collect on the processing of these plastic transactions has more than doubled too, without their having to lift a finger.
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Original:  Nearly the entire banking transaction to process these payments is electroinc, and involves hardly any labor  .
Revised:  The entire transaction banks use to process these payments is electroinc, and involves hardly any labor .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Nearly the entire banking transaction to process these payments is electroinc, and involves hardly any labor  .
Revised:  Nearly the entire banking transaction to process these payments is electroinc, involving hardly any labor .
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Original:  Nearly the entire banking transaction to process these payments is electroinc, and involves hardly any labor  .
Revised:  Nearly the entire banking transaction to process these payments is electroinc, and involves hardly any labor at all .
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Original:  Processing plastic transactions is a variable cost to Demir over which he has no control if his pump prices are ' Cash same as Credit ". Plastic use directly effects his profit margin by the 3\% processing fee.
Revised:  Processing plastic transactions is a variable cost to Demir over which he has no control when his pump prices are ' Cash same as Credit ". Plastic use directly effects his profit margin by the 3\% processing fee.
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Original:  Processing plastic transactions is a variable cost to Demir over which he has no control if his pump prices are ' Cash same as Credit ". Plastic use directly effects his profit margin by the 3\% processing fee.
Revised:  Processing plastic transactions is a variable cost to Demir over which he has no control if his pump prices are ' Credit same as Cash ". Plastic use directly effects his profit margin by the 3\% processing fee.
Edit intent: fluency