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Original:  Japanese denial “Any accusations that we have tied them up or assaulted them are completely untrue,” Director-general  Minoru Morimoto said in the press release . “It is illegal to board another country’s vessels on the high seas.
Revised:  “Any accusations that we have tied them up or assaulted them are completely untrue,” Director-general Minoru Morimoto said in the press release . “It is illegal to board another country’s vessels on the high seas.
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Original:  Japanese denial “Any accusations that we have tied them up or assaulted them are completely untrue,” Director-general  Minoru Morimoto said in the press release . “It is illegal to board another country’s vessels on the high seas.
Revised:  Japanese denial “Any accusations that we have tied them up or assaulted them are completely untrue,” Director-general Minoru Morimoto said in the press release , “It is illegal to board another country’s vessels on the high seas.
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Original:   He said that the activists were making attempts to entangle the screw and were throwing bottles of acid before boarding the vessel.
Revised:  " He said that the activists were making attempts to entangle the screw and were throwing bottles of acid before boarding the vessel.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal , " Mr Moronuki said [ . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " They are treated very, very humanely " and were provided with " a warm, delicious hot meal , " Mr Moronuki said [ . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal " , " Mr Moronuki said [ . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal , " a [ . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal , " Mr Moronuki said [ . Australian Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:    " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal  , " Mr Moronuki said [  . Australian intervention Australian foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
Revised:  " They are treated very, very humanely and they are provided with a warm, delicious hot meal , " Mr Moronuki said [ . Australian intervention foreign minister Stephen Smith said that the Japanese government promised him the release of the men late yesterday night.
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Original:  "Late last night I was advised the Japanese had agreed to this and they had instructed the relevant whaling ship to return the men to the Steve Irwin," he told ABC radio    ] 
Revised:  "Late last night I was advised the Japanese had agreed to this and they had instructed the relevant whaling ship to return the men to the Steve Irwin," he told ABC radio . ] 
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Original:  "Late last night I was advised the Japanese had agreed to this and they had instructed the relevant whaling ship to return the men to the Steve Irwin," he told ABC radio    ] 
Revised:  "Late last night I was advised the Japanese had agreed to this and they had instructed the relevant whaling ship to return the men to the Steve Irwin," he told ABC radio holding] 
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Original:  A press release says the Sea Shepherd "will not negotiate with poachers and demands that the Japanese whalers release Benjamin Potts and Giles Lane as soon as possible  
Revised:  A press release says the Sea Shepherd "will not negotiate with poachers and demands that the Japanese whalers release Benjamin Potts and Giles Lane as soon as possible ". 
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Original:  The Australia´s government has announced that the Japanese government has agreed to released the men.
Revised:  The Japanese government has agreed to released the men.
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Original:  The Australia´s government has announced that the Japanese government has agreed to released the men.
Revised:  The Australia´s government has announced that the Japanese government has assured the Australian Government the release of the men.
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Original:  Sea Shepherd's international director, Jonny Vasic, claims that they were "basically strapped by the arms with zip-ties and tied with rope around their chests" for 2½ to three hours.
Revised:  Sea Shepherd's international director, Jonny Vasic, claimed that they were "basically strapped by the arms with zip-ties and tied with rope around their chests" for 2½ to three hours.
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Original:  The captain said he was surprised as he expected Japanese whale ships to treated environmental protesters more decently.
Revised:  The captain said he was surprised as he expected Japanese whale ships to treated his men more decently.
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Original:  Detaining the protesters was the "only way", he said.
Revised:  Detaining the activists was the "only way", he said.
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Original:  Mr Watson has confirmed this and said that it was to act as a stink bomb and their actions were still peaceful.
Revised:  Mr Watson has confirmed this and said that they were to act as a stink bomb and their actions were still peaceful.
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Original:  Mr Watson has confirmed this and said that it was to act as a stink bomb and their actions were still peaceful.
Revised:  Mr Watson has confirmed this and said that it was to act as a stink bomb but their actions were still peaceful.
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Original:  Hideki Moronuki, the chief of the whaling section of The Fisheries Agency of Japan, claimed that "nobody took violent action against the two illegal intruders" and that they were treated humanely .
Revised:  Hideki Moronuki, the chief of the whaling section of The Fisheries Agency of Japan, claimed that "nobody took violent action against the two illegal intruders" .
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Original: Yesterday at 6:00 UTC at 78° E 60° S  , a Japanese whaling ship detained two Sea Shepherd Conservation Society activists in the Southern Ocean.
Revised: Yesterday at 6:00 UTC at 60° S , a Japanese whaling ship detained two Sea Shepherd Conservation Society activists in the Southern Ocean.
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Original:  According to the conservation agency Sea Shepherd, Australian Benjamin Potts, 28, a helicopter assistant, and Briton Giles Lane, an engine room worker, were detained on board a Japanese whaling ship after delivering a letter asking the ship to exit Antarctic waters . Captain Paul Watson of the Sea Shepherd's vessel, "Steve Irwin" , said that the Japanese "tried to throw them overboard, then they tied them to a bulkhead and were beating them".
Revised:  According to the conservation agency Sea Shepherd, Australian Benjamin Potts, 28, a helicopter assistant, and Briton Giles Lane, an engine room worker, were detained on board a Japanese whaling ship after delivering a letter asking the ship to exit Antarctic waters . Captain Paul Watson of the Sea Shepherd's vessel, Steve Irwin , said that the Japanese "tried to throw them overboard, then they tied them to a bulkhead and were beating them".
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Original:  A press release says the Sea Shepherd "will not negotiate with poachers and demands that the Japanese whalers release Benjamin Potts and Giles Lane as soon as possible".
Revised:  A press release said Sea Shepherd "will not negotiate with poachers and demands that the Japanese whalers release Benjamin Potts and Giles Lane as soon as possible".
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Original: A raucous party thrown at a suburban home  which terrorized the neighborhood during the night of 12-13 January may cost a Narre Warren youth, aged 16, $20,000 in liabilities for police time and resources, including attacks upon police cars that resulted in smashed windshields.
Revised: A raucous party thrown at a suburban home which terrorized the neighbourhood during the night of 12-13 January may cost a Narre Warren youth, aged 16, $20,000 in liabilities for police time and resources, including attacks upon police cars that resulted in smashed windshields.
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Original:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between $ 1 and  $10 (AUD) was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
Revised:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between $ 1 and A $10 (AUD) was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
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Original:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between $ 1 and  $10 (AUD) was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
Revised:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between $ 1 and $10 was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
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Original:  Victoria State Police Chief Commissioner Christine Nixon has called for a report into the cost of the police response to the party .
Revised:  Victoria State Police Chief Commissioner Christine Nixon has called for a report into the cost of the police response to the party 
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Original:  Two teenagers who attended the party, a 16 year old and a 17 year old have subsequently been charged with producing child pornography
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Original:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between A$ 1 and A $10  was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
Revised:  There are claims circulating that a cover charge of between A$ 1 and $10 was collected for entry to the party, which may be investigated.
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Original:  Image:Iran speed boat Jan 6 2008.jpg| One of the alleged Iranian speedboats on January 6 Another issue the president raised was Iran and during the session with journalists, he once again spoke about the January 6 incident involving Iranian speed boats and American ships in the Gulf.
Revised:  One of the alleged Iranian speedboats on January 6 Another issue the president raised was Iran and during the session with journalists, he once again spoke about the January 6 incident involving Iranian speed boats and American ships in the Gulf.
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Original: Speaking to a small group of reporters in Riyadh , the president sought to drive home the impact higher oil prices are having in the United States and elsewhere.
Revised: Speaking to a small group of reporters in , the president sought to drive home the impact higher oil prices are having in the United States and elsewhere.
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Original:  When asked about the president's call for increased OPEC production, Saudi Oil minister Ali Naimi was non-committal.
Revised:  When asked about the president's call for increased OPEC production, Saudi Oil minister was non-committal.
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Original:  In 2002 and 2005, then Crown Prince Abdullah paid similar visits to the president's ranch in Texas  
Revised:  In 2002 and 2005, then Crown Prince Abdullah paid similar visits to the president's ranch in Texas . 
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Original:  All but two remaining members  voted to remove the nine dissenters.
Revised:  All but two remaining members attending the meeting voted to remove the nine dissenters.
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Original: Mars rover engineers build test sandbox Rover engineers check how a test rover moves in material chosen to simulate some difficult Mars driving conditions.
Revised:  Rover engineers check how a test rover moves in material chosen to simulate some difficult Mars driving conditions.
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Original: Using a combination of materials including play sand for children's sandboxes, diatomaceous earth for swimming pool filters  and mortar clay powder , Mars rover engineers have built a test bed simulating the trapped condition Mars Rover Opportunity is now experiencing.
Revised: Using a combination of materials including play sand for children's sandboxes, diatomaceous earth for swimming pool filters , and mortar clay powder , Mars rover engineers have built a test bed simulating the trapped condition Mars Rover Opportunity is now experiencing.
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Original: Opportunity had dug into soft sand to wheel-hub depth as it drove over a dune about one-third meter (one foot) tall and 2.5 meters (8 feet) wide.
Revised: Opportunity dug into soft sand to wheel-hub depth as it drove over a dune about one-third meter (one foot) tall and 2.5 meters (8 feet) wide.
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Original:  Engineers had constructed a simulated dune last week using sand that was already at JPL's rover testing facility and put a test rover into a similar dug-in position.
Revised:  Engineers constructed a simulated dune last week using sand that was already at JPL's rover testing facility and put a test rover into a similar dug-in position.
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Original:  Experiments show that the test rover  can drive out of the more powdery material after some initial wheel-spinning .
Revised:  Experiments show that the test rover , after some initial wheel-spinning, can drive out of the more powdery material after some initial wheel-spinning .
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Original:  Experiments show that the test rover  can drive out of the more powdery material after some initial wheel-spinning .
Revised:  Experiments show that the test rover can drive out of the more powdery material .
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Original:   So far at least 23 people, all civilians, are reported dead when a bomb exploded on a bus in the town of Buttala in Sri Lanka.
Revised: thumb So far at least 23 people, all civilians, are reported dead when a bomb exploded on a bus in the town of Buttala in Sri Lanka.
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Original: thumb Map highlighting location of Sri Lanka.
Revised:  Map highlighting location of Sri Lanka.
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Original:   MySQL is used by many web sites, such as Facebook, LiveJournal, Google, as well as the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation and the  software that powers it , MediaWiki
Revised:  MySQL is used by many web sites, such as Facebook, LiveJournal, Google, as well as the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation and the MediaWiki software that powers it , MediaWiki
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Original:   MySQL is used by many web sites, such as Facebook, LiveJournal, Google, as well as the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation and the  software that powers it , MediaWiki
Revised:  MySQL is used by many web sites, such as Facebook, LiveJournal, Google, as well as the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation and the software that powers it 
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Original:  Renfro, who had a history of substance events during his short life of 25 years , was found dead yesterday morning in his Los Angeles home by paramedics who had been summoned to the scene.
Revised:  Renfro, who had a history of substance abuse , was found dead yesterday morning in his Los Angeles home by paramedics who had been summoned to the scene.
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Original: thum| George Bush in the Middle East today Relations between the Israeli and Egyptian governments have been tense lately.
Revised:  George Bush in the Middle East today Relations between the Israeli and Egyptian governments have been tense lately.
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Original:  Yesterday , Naked News announced that it would dramatically increase its international language mandate to news reporting, with three new broadcasts.
Revised:  Last week , Naked News announced that it would dramatically increase its international language mandate to news reporting, with three new broadcasts.
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Original:  Already reporting in English and Japanese, the global organization is launching Spanish, Italian, and Korean-language programs , for television, the web, and mobile devices.
Revised:  Already reporting in English and Japanese, the global organization is launching Spanish, Italian, and Korean-language programs will be used for television, the web, and mobile devices.
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Original: Naked News President David Warga commented in a press release that "our intention at Naked News is to be a global media source, much like CNN or BBC World.
Revised: Naked News President David Warga said, "our intention at Naked News is to be a global media source, much like CNN or BBC World.
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Original:  Naked News President David Warga commented in a press release that "our intention at Naked News is to be a global media source, much like CNN or BBC World.
Revised:  Naked News President David Warga said, "our intention at Naked News is to be a global media source, much like CNN or BBC World.
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Original:  Participants showed their discontent about the war in Iraq and the US' threat to start wars with other countries .
Revised:  Participants showed their discontent about the war in Iraq .
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Original:  They consider Bush is personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison , the human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  They consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison , the human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  They consider Bush is personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison , the human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  They consider Bush is personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  More than 150 people attended a manifestation in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise  
Revised:  More than 150 people attended a demonstration in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise 
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Original:  More than 150 people attended a manifestation in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise  
Revised:  More than 150 people attended a manifestation in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise . 
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Original: Protestors gathered in Amsterdam, Maastricht, and other cities in the Netherlands to protest Bush's visit .
Revised: Protestors gathered in Amsterdam, Maastricht, and other cities in The Netherlands to a visit by United States President George W. Bush.
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Original:  They consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  Many consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in the Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  More than 150 people attended a demonstration in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise .
Revised:  More than 150 people attended a demonstration in Maastricht, of which many went to Beek Airport to give Bush a unhearty welcome with lots of noise 
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Original:  Bush plans to talk to students and leaders during his two-day visit to Holland
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Original:  Protestors gathered in Amsterdam, Maastricht, and several other cities in The Netherlands to protest a visit by the United States President, George W. Bush.
Revised:  Protesters gathered in Amsterdam, Maastricht, and several other cities in The Netherlands to protest a visit by the United States President, George W. Bush.
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Original:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many  consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
Revised:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
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Original:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . Participants displayed their discontent with the war in Iraq , many  consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
Revised:  As many as 2,000 people gathered in Amsterdam's Museum Square . , voicing their discontent with the war in Iraq , many consider Bush personally responsible for the torture in Abu Ghraib prison and human rights violations in Guantanamo Bay , basing their arguments on documentary evidence such as the FBI email showing that Bush directly ordered what might be described as torture (hoods, sleep deprivation) .
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