wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  An experimental AIDS prevention vaccine has failed in the latest crucial experiment as uninfected volunteers contracted the HIV virus in spite of their inoculation .
Revised:  An experimental AIDS prevention vaccine has failed in the latest crucial experiment as more inoculated volunteers contracted HIV than volunteers who were not inoculated .
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Original:  The majority of the volunteers with either homosexual males or female sex workers.
Revised:  The majority of the volunteers were either homosexual males or female sex workers.
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Original: The U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commission ( CSC ) announced today that Simplicity Inc. is recalling nearly 1 million baby cribs after two infant deaths have been linked to a design failure.
Revised: The U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commission ( CPSC ) announced today that Simplicity Inc. is recalling nearly 1 million baby cribs after two infant deaths have been linked to a design failure.
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Original:  The CSC is now investigating a third infant death involving a newer-style crib.
Revised:  The CPSC is now investigating a third infant death involving a newer-style crib.
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Original:  That gap can cause infants to be suffocated.
Revised:  That space can cause infants to be suffocated.
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Original: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] Actor George Clooneyand a woman named Sarah Larsonhave been injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey according to Clooney 's spokesman,Stan Rosenfield  .
Revised: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] Actor George Clooneyand a woman named Sarah Larsonhave been injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey . .
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Original: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey  . Clooney was driving the motorcycle when another driver hit him.
Revised: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey . 
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Original: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey after the motorcycle was hit by another vehicle. .
Revised: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey after the motorcycle was hit by another vehicle. 
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Original: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey after the motorcycle was hit by another vehicle.
Revised: Clooneywiki1.jpg|Clooney in July 2004 in Winnetka, Illinois on the set for opening scene of Oceans 12.]] According to a spokesperson, actor George Clooney, 46, along with his girlfriend Sarah Larson, 28, were injured in a motorcycle accident in New Jersey after the motorcycle was sideswiped by another vehicle.
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Original: Clooney received fractured ribs and road rash and Larson broke a foot.
Revised: Clooney received fractured ribs and road rash whereas Larson broke a foot.
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Original: ]] Before the launch of "Halo 3" at September 25, Microsoft Taiwan held "Mayday Fans Meeting" last Sunday (September 16) and "SBL Players Meeting" today, and set experiencing area at PAMC KMall in Taipei on continuous holidays of  Moon Festival (September 22 to 25).
Revised: ]] Before the launch of "Halo 3" Microsoft Taiwan held "Mayday Fans Meeting" last Sunday (September 16) and "SBL Players Meeting" today, and set experiencing area at PAMC KMall in Taipei on continuous holidays of Moon Festival (September 22 to 25).
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Original: ]] Before the launch of "Halo 3" at September 25, Microsoft Taiwan held "Mayday Fans Meeting" last Sunday (September 16) and "SBL Players Meeting" today, and set experiencing area at PAMC KMall in Taipei on continuous holidays of  Moon Festival (September 22 to 25).
Revised: ]] Before the launch of "Halo 3" at September 25, Microsoft Taiwan held "Mayday Fans Meeting" last Sunday (September 16) and "SBL Players Meeting" today, and set experiencing area at PAMC KMall in Taipei on continuous holidays of the Moon Festival (September 22 to 25).
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Original: Image:X06Taiwan 20061105-36.jpg|Taiwanese Band "Mayday".
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Original:  Prior to the September 25 launch of "Halo 3" Microsoft Taiwan held "Mayday Fans Meeting" last Sunday (September 16) and "SBL Players Meeting" today, and set experiencing area at PAMC KMall in Taipei on continuous holidays of the Moon Festival (September 22 to 25).
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Original:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Microsoft Taiwan: Halo 3 Halo 3 Taiwan Activity Website Category:Asia Category:Taiwan Category:Science and technology Category:Games Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Microsoft zh:Halo 3 台灣發行在即 暖身活動吸引
Revised:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Microsoft Taiwan: Halo 3 Halo 3 Taiwan Activity Website Category:Asia Category:Taiwan Category:Science and technology Category:Games Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Microsoft zh:Halo 3 台灣發行在即 暖身活動吸引
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Original:  The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that singing super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run and driving without a valid drivers' license       
Revised:  The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that singing super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run and driving without a valid drivers' license . 
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Original:  The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that singing pop music super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run  and driving without a valid drivers' license.
Revised:  The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that pop music super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run and driving without a valid drivers' license.
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Original:  Charges were filed following an accident in which police allege Spears smashed her car into another vehicle in a parking lot back in August of 2007.
Revised:  Charges were filed following an accident in which police allege Spears smashed her car into another vehicle in a parking area in August of 2007.
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Original:  Spears could face a maximum of six months in jail and $2,000 in fines if convicted.
Revised:  She could face a maximum of six months in jail and $2,000 in fines if convicted.
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Original:  Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
Revised:  A group of paparazzi recorded a video Britney steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
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Original:  Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
Revised:  Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as she tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
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Original: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics and Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions , IOC finally announced that the route won't cross Taiwan, yesterday .
Revised: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics , Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions , IOC finally announced that the route won't cross Taiwan, yesterday .
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Original: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics and Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions , IOC finally announced that the route won't cross Taiwan, yesterday .
Revised: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics and Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions . The IOC finally announced that the route won't cross Taiwan, yesterday .
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Original: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics and Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions , IOC finally announced that the route won't cross Taiwan, yesterday .
Revised: After lots of turns on the route of torch relay of 2008 Summer Olympics and Taiwan and China still insisted their own political positions , IOC finally announced yesterday that the torche's route will not cross Taiwan .
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Original:  After the route was fixed by IOC, politicians and governments in Taiwan criticized on China's disgusting behavioron picky with naming usage and political position in Taiwan.
Revised:  After the route was fixed by IOC, politicians and governments in Taiwan criticized China's disgusting behavioron picky with naming usage and political position in Taiwan.
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Original:  With the trend of  2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor)  commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
Revised:  With the trend of Taiwan's 2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor) commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
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Original:  With the trend of  2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor)  commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
Revised:  With the trend of 2008 President Elect , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor) commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
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Original:  With the trend of  2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor)  commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
Revised:  With the trend of 2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor) , commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
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Original:  With the trend of  2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor)  commented that without the torch, he can 't welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
Revised:  With the trend of 2008 President Election in Taiwan , Ying-jiou Ma (former Taipei City Mayor) commented that without the torch, he can not welcome the torch with Flag and National Song of the Republic of China.
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Original:  At the government , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that People in Taiwan don't accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China  based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
Revised:  At the governmental level , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that People in Taiwan don't accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
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Original:  At the government , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that People in Taiwan don't accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China  based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
Revised:  At the government , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that people in Taiwan do not accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
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Original:  At the government , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that People in Taiwan don't accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China  based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
Revised:  At the government , Ming-tung Chen (Commissioner of Mainland Affairs Council of Executive Yuan of the Republic of China) mentioned that People in Taiwan don't accept the request on welcoming the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics without Flags, Symbols, and the National Song of the Republic of China , based on the cross-strait common consensus on February 12, 2007, so that Taiwan won't accept this circumstance.
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Original:  Chih-Wei Hsieh (Minister of the Government Information Office of the Republic of China) was proud with the protection on democracy and human rights in Taiwan even though the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics won't come to Taiwan.
Revised:  Chih-Wei Hsieh (Minister of the Government Information Office of the Republic of China) was proud of the protection of democracy and human rights in Taiwan even though the torch of 2008 Summer Olympics won't come to Taiwan.
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Original:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
Revised:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal consensus' between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
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Original:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
Revised:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan became cracked slowly , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
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Original:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
Revised:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in such sproting events as: Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
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Original:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
Revised:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July . This was said to anger the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
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Original:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team angered secretly .
Revised:  According to Eastern Television in Taiwan, the reciprocal belief between China and Taiwan was cracked slowlyespecially in some sports events in Taiwan , especially in : Flag of the Republic of China was shown at Davis Cup in Taiwan at April, Cross-Strait Golf Championship and Asian Volleyball Championship at July , and the Mainland China National Team .
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Original:  This Olympic Torch is first-ever declined by an IOC member without warfare factor, even though IOC won't punish Chinese Taipei (Taiwan), but this  2008 Summer Olympics is surely faded with politics .
Revised:  This Olympic Torch is first-ever declined by an IOC member without warfare factor, even though IOC won't punish Chinese Taipei (Taiwan), but this indicates that the 2008 Summer Olympics is surely faded with politics .
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Original:  This Olympic Torch is first-ever declined by an IOC member without warfare factor, even though IOC won't punish Chinese Taipei (Taiwan), but this  2008 Summer Olympics is surely faded with politics .
Revised:  This Olympic Torch is first-ever declined by an IOC member without warfare factor, even though IOC won't punish Chinese Taipei (Taiwan), but this 2008 Summer Olympics may be more faded with politics .
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Original:  The IOC finally announced yesterday that the torche 's route will not cross Taiwan.
Revised:  The IOC finally announced yesterday that the torch 's route will not cross Taiwan.
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Original: The Richard Dawkins Foundation for Reason and Science was recently approved as a charity in the United States.
Revised: The Richard Dawkins Foundation for Reason and Science was recently approved as a charitable foundation in the United States.
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Original:  TP: In South Beach and in Miami there are neighborhood associations like South of Fifth Neighborhood Association, which [Posner's husband] Gerald is President of, and they all try to work together to make living within neighborhood synergized between nightlife and the restaurants.
Revised:  TP: In South Beach and in Miami there are neighborhood associations like South of Fifth Neighborhood Association, which [Posner's husband] Gerald is President of, and they all try to work together to make living in the neighborhood synergized with the nightlife and the restaurants.
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Original:  On the video there are five other other than me.
Revised:  On the video there are five others besides me.
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Original:  When I got home there was a phone message from [editor-in-chief] Glen Albin saying, 'Trisha, trisha , Jerry is running around the place...' and I thought it was a joke.
Revised:  When I got home there was a phone message from [editor-in-chief] Glen Albin saying, 'Trisha, Trisha , Jerry is running around the place...' and I thought it was a joke.
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Original:  The magazine's publicist panicked and called called Powers, who then runs all the way down to City Hall and asks ex Mayor Neisen Kasdin to let him speak before the City Council.
Revised:  The magazine's publicist panicked and called called Powers, who then runs all the way down to City Hall and asks ex-Mayor Neisen Kasdin to let him speak before the City Council.
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Original:  I can’t believe Jerry Powers took this  made it an issue.
Revised:  I can’t believe Jerry Powers took this and made it an issue.
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Original:  They allowed me to write in my  voice.
Revised:  They allowed me to write in my own voice.
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Original:  WN: Has any other employee of Ocean Drive appeared publicly before and  identified as such?
Revised:  WN: Has any other employee of Ocean Drive appeared publicly before and been identified as such?
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Original:  I had e-mails from Tina Brown, everybody...they were really supportive.
Revised:  But I wasn’t talking about Ocean Drive. I hadn’t thought that under my name were the words 'Columnist for Ocean Drive'. I didn’t see anything. Later I had e-mails from Tina Brown, everybody...they were really supportive.
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Original:  Several of the comments to it state that since Ocean Drive is a large glossy magazine dependent on advertising from the entertainment industry, that you bit the hand that fed you.
Revised:  Several of the comments to it state that since Ocean Drive is a large glossy magazine dependent upon advertising from the entertainment industry, that you bit the hand that fed you.
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Original: Local activist and two-time Emmy award winner Frank Del Vecchio asked Posner if she would appear in his eight-minute Close the Loophole video  to state her belief that a loophole that allows popular local restaurants such as Prime One Twelve and Devito South Beach to exist in her residential neighborhood should be amended to limit the amount of seats in the establishments in proportion to their number of rooms.
Revised: Local activist Frank Del Vecchio asked Posner if she would appear in his eight-minute Close the Loophole video to state her belief that a loophole that allows popular local restaurants such as Prime One Twelve and Devito South Beach to exist in her residential neighborhood should be amended to limit the amount of seats in the establishments in proportion to their number of rooms.
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