wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  In 360-degrees VR experiences,  movement in the real world is not reflected in the virtual world, and therefore self-motion information is not corroborated by matching visual and vestibular cues, which may potentially induce cybersickness.
Revised:  In 360-degrees VR experiences, movement in the real world is not reflected in the virtual world, and therefore self-motion information is not corroborated by matching visual and vestibular cues, which may trigger symptoms of cybersickness.
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Original:  We have evaluated whether an Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the  VR experience with artificial 6-degree-of-freedom motion may reduce sensory conflict, and therefore cybersickness.
Revised:  We have evaluated whether a new Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the VR experience with artificial 6-degree-of-freedom motion may reduce sensory conflict, and therefore cybersickness.
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Original:  We have evaluated whether an Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the  VR experience with artificial 6-degree-of-freedom motion may reduce sensory conflict, and therefore cybersickness.
Revised:  We have evaluated whether an Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the VR experience with artificial 6-degrees-of-freedom motion may reduce sensory conflict, and therefore cybersickness.
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Original:  We have evaluated whether an Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the  VR experience with artificial 6-degree-of-freedom motion may reduce sensory conflict, and therefore cybersickness.
Revised:  We have evaluated whether an Artificial Intelligence (AI) software designed to supplement the VR experience with artificial 6-degree-of-freedom motion may reduce cybersickness.
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Original:  Explicit ( questionnaires ) and implicit ( physiological responses ) measurements were used to measure cybersickness symptoms during and after  VR exposure.
Revised:  Explicit ( questionnaires ) and implicit ( physiological responses ) measurements were used to evaluate cybersickness symptoms during and after VR exposure.
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Original:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe virtual reality , which is critical for the application of VR in educational, medical, cultural and entertainment settings .
Revised:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe VR , which is critical for the application of VR in educational, medical, cultural and entertainment settings .
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Original:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe virtual reality , which is critical for the application of VR in educational, medical, cultural and entertainment settings .
Revised:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe virtual reality , which is critical for educational, cultural and entertainment settings .
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Original:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe virtual reality , which is critical for the application of VR in educational, medical, cultural and entertainment settings .
Revised:  Our results confirmed a reduction in feelings of nausea during the AI supplemented 6-degree-of-freedom motion VR . Through improving the congruency between visual and vestibular cues , users can experience more engaging, immersive and safe virtual reality , which is critical for the application of VR in educational, medical, cultural and entertainment applications .
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Original:  In surface mining, assay measurements taken from production drilling often provide rich information that allows initially inaccurate surfaces created using sparse exploration data to be revised and subsequently improved.
Revised:  In surface mining, assay measurements taken from production drilling often provide useful information that allows initially inaccurate surfaces created using sparse exploration data to be revised and subsequently improved.
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Original:  Recently, a Bayesian warping technique has been proposed to reshape modeled surfaces based on geochemical and spatial constraints imposed by newly acquired blasthole data.
Revised:  Recently, a Bayesian warping technique has been proposed to reshape modeled surfaces using geochemical and spatial constraints imposed by newly acquired blasthole data.
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Original:  This paper focuses on incorporating machine learning in this warping framework to make the likelihood computation generalizable.
Revised:  This paper focuses on incorporating machine learning into this warping framework to make the likelihood computation generalizable.
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Original: Among the machine learning approaches applied in computer vision, Convolutional Neural Network (CNN) is widely used in the field of image recognition.
Revised: Convolutional neural networks (CNNs) are widely used in the field of image recognition.
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Original: Among the machine learning approaches applied in computer vision, Convolutional Neural Network (CNN) is widely used in the field of image recognition.
Revised: Among the machine learning approaches applied in computer vision, Convolutional Neural Network (CNN) is widely used in image recognition.
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Original:  A first class is the classical Haar-Schauder , and a second one is due to Clifford valued wavelets and multi-wavelets.
Revised:  A first-class is the classical Haar-Schauder , and a second one is due to Clifford valued wavelets and multi-wavelets.
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Original:  A first class is the classical Haar-Schauder , and a second one is due to Clifford valued wavelets and multi-wavelets.
Revised:  A first class is the classical Haar Schauder , and a second one is due to Clifford valued wavelets and multi-wavelets.
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Original: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability  .
Revised: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a fundamental feature of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability .
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Original: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability  .
Revised: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This necessitates efficient radio access network (RAN) slicing, defined as sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability .
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Original: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability  .
Revised: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse services while guaranteeing their respective throughput, timing, and/or reliability .
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Original: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability  .
Revised: The coexistence of diverse services with heterogeneous requirements is a major component of 5G. This calls for spectrum slicing: efficient sharing of the wireless resources among diverse users while guaranteeing the respective requirements in terms of throughput, timing, and/or reliability requirements .
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Original:  In this paper, we set up a simple system model of a radio access network (RAN ) for investigating spectrum slicing for two user types: (1) broadband users with throughput requirements and (2) intermittently active users with a timing requirement , expressed as either latency-reliability or Age of Information ( AoI).
Revised:  In this paper, we set up a simple system model of a radio access network (RAN ) for investigating spectrum slicing for two user types: (1) broadband users with throughput requirements and (2) intermittently active users with timing requirements , expressed as either latency-reliability or Age of Information ( AoI).
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Original:  We evaluate the trade-offs between between the achievable throughput of broadband users and the timing requirement of the intermittent users under three different access modes: Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
Revised:  We evaluate the trade-offs between the achievable throughput of broadband users and the timing requirement of the intermittent users under three different access modes: Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
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Original:  We evaluate the trade-offs between between the achievable throughput of broadband users and the timing requirement of the intermittent users under three different access modes: Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
Revised:  We evaluate the trade-offs between between the achievable throughput of a broadband user and the timing requirement of the intermittent users under three different access modes: Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
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Original:  We evaluate the trade-offs between between the achievable throughput of broadband users and the timing requirement of the intermittent users under three different access modes: Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
Revised:  We evaluate the trade-offs between between the achievable throughput of broadband users and the timing requirements of an intermittent user under Orthogonal Multiple Access (OMA) , Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (NOMA), and Partial Non-Orthogonal Multiple Access (PNOMA).
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Original: The drone-based last-mile delivery is an emerging technology designed to automate the delivery process by utilizing drones loaded on a truck to transport parcels to customers .
Revised: The drone-based last-mile delivery is an emerging technology to deliver parcels using drones loaded on a truck to transport parcels to customers .
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Original: The drone-based last-mile delivery is an emerging technology designed to automate the delivery process by utilizing drones loaded on a truck to transport parcels to customers .
Revised: The drone-based last-mile delivery is an emerging technology designed to automate the delivery process by utilizing drones loaded on a truck . As more and more autonomous vehicles (AVs) will be available for delivery services, an opportunity is arising to fully automate drone-based last-mile delivery .
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Original:  In this paper, we study the next level of drone-based last-mile delivery where autonomous vehicles (AVs) without drivers are recruited to collaborate with drones to serve customers.
Revised:  In this paper, we integrate AVs with drone-based last-mile delivery where autonomous vehicles (AVs) without drivers are recruited to collaborate with drones to serve customers.
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Original:  We formulate the problem of selecting AVs from a pool of available AVs and scheduling them to serve customers to minimize the total cost as an Integer Linear Programming (ILP) .
Revised:  We formulate the problem of selecting AVs from a pool of available AVs and to schedule them to serve customers to minimize the total cost as an Integer Linear Programming (ILP) .
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Original:  A novel greedy algorithm is proposed to solve the problem that incorporates the real-world operational cost of AVs, traveling distances calculated based on Google Map API , and varying load capacities of AVs.
Revised:  A novel greedy algorithm is proposed to solve the problem based on real-world operational cost of AVs, traveling distances calculated based on Google Map API , and varying load capacities of AVs.
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Original:  Extensive simulations performed with numerous random delivery scenarios demonstrate that both the optimal and greedy algorithms significantly increase profits for the  delivery company as well as the owners of AVs.
Revised:  Extensive simulations performed under various random delivery scenarios demonstrate that both the optimal and greedy algorithms significantly increase profits for the delivery company as well as the owners of AVs.
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Original:  Extensive simulations performed with numerous random delivery scenarios demonstrate that both the optimal and greedy algorithms significantly increase profits for the  delivery company as well as the owners of AVs.
Revised:  Extensive simulations performed with numerous random delivery scenarios demonstrate that the delivery company as well as the owners of AVs.
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Original: With the COVID-19 pandemic entering a second phase and vaccination strategies being applied by countries and governments worldwide, there is an increasing expectation by people to return to a more familiar , normal life.
Revised: With the COVID-19 pandemic entering a second phase and vaccination strategies being applied by countries and governments worldwide, there is an increasing expectation by people to return to a more familiar normal life.
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  There is currently a debate about immunity passports, privacy, and the enablement of individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, workplace, and travel . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should meet people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's expectations for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
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Original:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling the validation of the user's identity that is unambiguously associated with a person, whose results are being requested from the public health systems .
Revised:  The debate for an immunity passport that would enable individuals to safely enter their everyday social life, work and transportation, both for themselves and the community, is on . Such digital immunity passports and vaccination certificates should satisfy the people's demand for privacy while enabling them to present to 3rd party verifiers tamper-evident credentials .
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Original:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing a service, that provides individuals, employers, government agencies, and others a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable cryptographic proof that can be used to evaluate the risk of allowing individuals to return to normal work, travel, and public life activities.
Revised:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing an architecture that provides individuals, employers, government agencies, and others a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable cryptographic proof that can be used to evaluate the risk of allowing individuals to return to normal work, travel, and public life activities.
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Original:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing a service, that provides individuals, employers, government agencies, and others a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable cryptographic proof that can be used to evaluate the risk of allowing individuals to return to normal work, travel, and public life activities.
Revised:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing a service, that provides individuals, employers, government agencies, a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable cryptographic proof that can be used to evaluate the risk of allowing individuals to return to normal work, travel, and public life activities.
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Original: With the COVID-19 pandemic entering a second phase and vaccination strategies being applied by countries and governments worldwide, there is an increasing expectation by people to return to a more familiar normal life.
Revised: With the COVID-19 pandemic entering a second phase and vaccination strategies being applied by countries and governments worldwide, there is an increasing expectation by people to return to normal life.
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Original:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing an architecture that provides  individuals, employers,  government agencies, a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable,  non-refutable health status cryptographic proof.
Revised:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing an architecture that provides to individuals, employers, government agencies, a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable health status cryptographic proof.
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Original:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing an architecture that provides  individuals, employers,  government agencies, a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable,  non-refutable health status cryptographic proof.
Revised:  This paper provides a comprehensive answer to the technological, ethical and security challenges, by proposing an architecture that provides individuals, employers, and government agencies, a digital, decentralized, portable, immutable, non-refutable health status cryptographic proof.
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