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Original:   Nelson said, "It has been a tremendous honor to serve Senator McCain and work on his campaign," and "I believe John McCain is the most experienced and prepared candidate to represent the Republican Party and defeat the Democratic nominee next year."
Revised:  John McCain Nelson said, "It has been a tremendous honor to serve Senator McCain and work on his campaign," and "I believe John McCain is the most experienced and prepared candidate to represent the Republican Party and defeat the Democratic nominee next year."
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Original: The resignation of campaign manager Terry Nelson and longtime chief strategist John Weaver was announced while McCain was on the floor of the Senate debating strategy in Iraq.
Revised: The resignation of campaign manager Terry Nelson and long-standing chief strategist John Weaver was announced while McCain was on the floor of the Senate debating strategy in Iraq.
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Original:  He usually trails Rudy Giuliani, Mitt Romney, Fred Thompson, and Ron Paul , pulling only single digits in some surveys.
Revised:  He usually trails Rudy Giuliani, Mitt Romney, and Fred Thompson , pulling only single digits in some surveys.
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Original:  He didn't want to disclose the name of his successor on the position of the Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development  
Revised:  He didn't want to disclose the name of his successor on the position of the Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development . 
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Original: ]] Andrzej Lepper, a former Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, as well as Deputy Prime Minister of the Republic of Poland announced on Tuesday that his party  "conditionally" stays on in the governing coalition.
Revised: ]] Andrzej Lepper, a former Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, as well as Deputy Prime Minister of the Republic of Poland announced on Tuesday that his party is "conditionally" stays on in the governing coalition.
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Original: ]] Andrzej Lepper, a former Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, as well as Deputy Prime Minister of the Republic of Poland announced on Tuesday that his party  "conditionally" stays on in the governing coalition.
Revised: ]] Andrzej Lepper, a former Minister of Agriculture and Rural Development, as well as Deputy Prime Minister of the Republic of Poland announced on Tuesday that his party "conditionally" staying on in the governing coalition.
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Original:  The currencies would be replaced at fixed rates of one euro to 0.585274 Cypriot pounds and 0.4293 to the Maltese lira.
Revised:  European finance ministers (collectively known as Ecofin) set fixed rates of one euro to 0.585274 Cypriot pounds and 0.4293 to the Maltese lira.
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Original:  No other country has yet met the strict entry criteria, including inflation which prevented Lithuania's entry 
Revised:  No other country has yet met the strict entry criteria, including inflation which prevented the entry of states such as Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania. 
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Original: The EU 's Council of Ministers has approved the entry of Mediterranean islands Cyprus and Malta into the Eurozone.
Revised: The European Union 's Council of Ministers has approved the entry of Mediterranean islands Cyprus and Malta into the Eurozone.
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Original:  They will begin to use the euro from 1 January 2008.
Revised:  They will begin to use the euro from January 1, 2008.
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Original:  The news comes admid a rising euro, on the same day it reached a new all-time high of 1.37 USD
Revised:  The news comes amid a rising value of the euro, on the same day it reached a new all-time high of 1.37 USD
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Original:  Slovenia was the first new country to join, the adopted it in January of 2007.
Revised:  Slovenia was the first new country to join, which adopted it in January of 2007.
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Original:  No other country has yet met the strict entry criteria  , including inflation  which prevented the entry of states such as Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania.
Revised:  No other country has yet met the strict entry criteria , including inflation , which prevented the entry of states such as Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania.
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Original:  The news comes amid a rising value of the euro, on the same day it reached a new all-time high of 1.37 U.S. dollar
Revised:  The news comes amid a rising value of the euro, on the same day it reached a new all-time high of 1.37 U.S. dollars
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Original:  In Santa Rosa, La Pampa, the temperature was 10 degrees below the freezing point , with the perceived temperature as low as -15°C in some cities.
Revised:  In Santa Rosa, La Pampa, the temperature was -10°C , with the perceived temperature as low as -15°C in some cities.
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Original: Al-Qaida 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahri warned in a 20 min audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
Revised: Al-Qaeda 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahri warned in a 20 min audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
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Original: Al-Qaida 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahri warned in a 20 min audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
Revised: Al-Qaida 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahiri warned in a 20 min audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
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Original: Al-Qaida 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahri warned in a 20 min audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
Revised: Al-Qaida 's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahri warned in a 20-minute audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam".
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Original: Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand,listen,we are ready to repeat it for you," Mr.Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature 
Revised: Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand,listen,we are ready to repeat it for you," Mr.Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature .
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Original: Al-Qaeda's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahiri warned in a 20-minute audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam ".
Revised: Al-Qaeda's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahiri warned in a 20-minute audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of "The Satanic Verses," deemed to insult Islam .
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Original:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense , "And if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you . " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Mr. Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Al-Zawahri said in the message that a A "very precise response" is in preparation to retaliate against this offense and and if you did not understand, listen, we are ready to repeat it for you , " Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original: Al-Qaeda's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahiri warned in a 20-minute audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of The Satanic Verses, which was deemed an insult  Islam.
Revised: Al-Qaeda's No.2 Ayman al-Zawahiri warned in a 20-minute audiotaped message that the knighthood of Salman Rushdie was "defying the Islamic world by granting the honor to the author of The Satanic Verses, which was deemed an insult to Islam.
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Original:  Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain 's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II . The United Kingdom 's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original:  Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain 's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
Revised:  Rushdie was given the knighthood last month by Queen Elizabeth II the Britain 's Foreign Office said honor was not intended as an insult to Islam but was "a reflection of his contribution to literature.
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Original:  The threats mention a group affiliated with creationism, but police did not release the name of the group as it is still investigating if it was sent by them.
Revised:  The threats mention a group affiliated with creationism, but police did not release the name of the group as it is still investigating if the threats were sent by them.
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Original:  and the United States Citizenship and Immigration Service (USCIS), with regards to eliminating the Green-Card processing delays", sent hundreds of flowers to the USCIS Director, Emilio Gonzalez as part of a symbolic and peaceful protest  . Dr. Gonzalez announced on the USCIS website late last night that the flowers will be forwarded to the injured service members recuperating at Walter Reed Army Medical Center and at Bethesda Naval Hospital.
Revised:  and the United States Citizenship and Immigration Services (USCIS), with regards to eliminating the Green-Card processing delays", sent hundreds of flowers to the USCIS Director, Emilio Gonzalez as part of a symbolic and peaceful protest . Dr. Gonzalez announced on the USCIS website late last night that the flowers will be forwarded to the injured service members recuperating at Walter Reed Army Medical Center and at Bethesda Naval Hospital.
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Original:  and the United States Citizenship and Immigration Service (USCIS), with regards to eliminating the Green-Card processing delays", sent hundreds of flowers to the USCIS Director, Emilio Gonzalez as part of a symbolic and peaceful protest  . Dr. Gonzalez announced on the USCIS website late last night that the flowers will be forwarded to the injured service members recuperating at Walter Reed Army Medical Center and at Bethesda Naval Hospital.
Revised:  and the United States Citizenship and Immigration Service (USCIS), Emilio Gonzalez as part of a symbolic and peaceful protest . Dr. Gonzalez announced on the USCIS website late last night that the flowers will be forwarded to the injured service members recuperating at Walter Reed Army Medical Center and at Bethesda Naval Hospital.
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Original: In response, Immigration Voice, a non-profit organization representing skilled, legal immigrants, said that they welcome the fact that Dr. Gonzalez acknowledged the symbolic gesture of our protest and are overjoyed that these flowers will brighten the day of the injured service brethren .
Revised: In response, Immigration Voice, a non-profit organization representing skilled, legal immigrants, said that they welcome the fact that Dr. Gonzalez acknowledged the symbolic gesture of our protest and are overjoyed that these flowers will brighten the day of the injured service brethren 
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Original:  Immigration Voice also said that it is their sacrifice for American freedom that has made this country great and such a desirable destination for multitude of people from around the world and that they wanted to say "Thank you and god bless you" to the servicemen
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Original: WMAQ-TV 1986 Logo WMAQ-TV NBC 5 Chicago announced yesterday that reporter Amy Jacobson was leaving her job after being videotaped in a bikini with her two sons at the home of Craig Stebic.
Revised: WMAQ-TV NBC 5 Chicago announced yesterday that reporter Amy Jacobson was leaving her job after being videotaped in a bikini with her two sons at the home of Craig Stebic.
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Original:  The entire 6 min RAW video of Jacobson is available at cbs2chicago.com.
Revised:  The entire 6 minute video of Jacobson is available at cbs2chicago.com.
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Original: WMAQ has concluded that Jacobson crossed a moral line.
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Original: Jacobson says that she he took her children on a social visit on her day off, following an invitation from Stebic's family.
Revised: Jacobson says that she took her children on a social visit on her day off, following an invitation from Stebic's family.
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Original:  Jacobson said her attorney said it illegal to videotape people on private property and she said she "is looking at all of her legal options." Jacobson came to WMAQ-TV in 1996 from Fox affiliate WJBK located in Detroit.
Revised:  Jacobson said her attorney told her it is illegal to videotape people on private property and she said she "is looking at all of her legal options." Jacobson came to WMAQ-TV in 1996 from Fox affiliate WJBK located in Detroit.
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Original:  She began her career KSAX and also worked in ElPaso and Tuscon, AZ.
Revised:  She began her career KSAX and also worked in El Paso and Tuscon, AZ.
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Original:  She started at WMAQ as a free lance reporter and moved up to general assignment reporter.
Revised:  She started at WMAQ as a freelance reporter and moved up to general assignment reporter.
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Original:  She and her husband and two Children live on the north side of Chicago
Revised:  She and her husband have two children and live on the north side of Chicago
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Original:  She began her career at KSAX and also worked in El Paso and Tuscon , AZ.
Revised:  She began her career at KSAX and also worked in El Paso and Tucson , AZ.
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Original: The President of the Swiss Confederation, Mrs. Micheline Calmy-Rey ,  has begun a 2-day visit to Ghana .
Revised: The , has begun a 2-day visit to Ghana .
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Original: The President of the Swiss Confederation, Mrs. Micheline Calmy-Rey ,  has begun a 2-day visit to Ghana .
Revised: The President of the Swiss Confederation, Mrs. Micheline Calmy-Rey , , has begun a 2-day visit to Ghana .
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Original: The President of the Swiss Confederation, Mrs. Micheline Calmy-Rey ,  has begun a 2-day visit to Ghana .
Revised: The President of the Swiss Confederation, Mrs. Micheline Calmy-Rey , has begun a 2-day visit to .
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Original:  The trip is part of an African tour which includes Senegal, Chad, Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC), Rwanda and Burundi .
Revised:  The trip is part of an tour which includes Senegal, Chad, Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC), Rwanda and Burundi .
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Original:  She has already been in Benin .
Revised:  She has already been in .
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Original:  She held talks with John Kufuor her host.
Revised:  She held talks with her host.
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Original:  She is also keen to see more Swiss investment in Ghana.
Revised:  She is also keen to see more investment in Ghana.
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Original:  Also discussed was possible increased budgetary support as well as assistance to the Kofi Annan International Peacekeeping Training Centre inAccra
Revised:  Also discussed was possible increased budgetary support as well as assistance to the in
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Original: 150px|right A well-preserved baby mammoth has been found in the Yamal Peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
Revised: 150px|right Well-preserved remains of a baby mammoth has been found in the Yamal Peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
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Original: 150px|right A well-preserved baby mammoth has been found in the Yamal Peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
Revised: 150px|right A well-preserved baby mammoth has been found in the Yamal peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
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Original:  Mammoths died out about 4000 years ago, although the population was in substantial decline well before then with more than half the population gone by 11,000 years ago.
Revised:  They died out about 4000 years ago, although the population was in substantial decline well before then with more than half the population gone by 11,000 years ago.
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Original:  There is some hope that the mammoth may be well-preserved enough such that DNA can be extracted for cloning or for other research
Revised:  There is some hope that the mammoth may be sufficiently well preserved that DNA can be extracted for cloning or for other research
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Original:  Well-preserved remains of a baby mammoth has been found in the Yamal Peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
Revised:  Well-preserved remains of a baby mammoth have been found in the Yamal Peninsula in Siberia (Russia).
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Original:  Shin Kong Financial president Frank Cheng said, after this press conferenc 
Revised:  Shin Kong Financial president Frank Cheng said, after this press conference. 
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Original:  The target of the protest was British fashion house, w: Burberry, and their fur practices.
Revised:  The target of the protest was British fashion house, Burberry, and their fur practices.
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Original: PETA protestors in body-paint  Animal rights group People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals (PETA) staged a  protest in White Plains today .
Revised: PETA protestors in body-paint Animal rights group People for the Ethical Treatment of Animals (PETA) staged a protest in White Plains .
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Original:  Wikinews attended the 12:00 p.m. EDT (UTC-4) protest which consisted of two female PETA members in bodypaint holding billboards  protesting Burberry for the company's use of fur in its products and how it is obtained.
Revised:  Two "naked" female PETA members in bodypaint holding billboards protesting Burberry for the company's use of fur in its products and how it is obtained.
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Original:  The protest took place at the intersection of Westchester Avenue and Bloomingdale Road in front of the The Westchester, a shopping mall owned by Simon Property Group.
Revised:  The protest took place at the intersection of Westchester Avenue and Bloomingdale Road in front of the The Westchester, an upscale shopping mall owned by Simon Property Group.
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Original:  Burberry has a  store in the mall.
Revised:  Burberry has a retail store in the mall.
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Original: Two "naked" female PETA members, wearing nothing but bikini bottoms and body paint in bodypaint held billboards with the slogan, "When plaid goes bad."
Revised: Two "naked" female PETA members, wearing nothing but bikini bottoms and body paint held billboards with the slogan, "When plaid goes bad."
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Original:  On July 11, 2007, the Mirvish family released a statement to announce the death of Ed Mirvish earlier that morning at St.
Revised:  On July 11, 2007, the Mirvish family released a statement confirming his passing earlier that morning at St.
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Original:  He was two weeks away from reaching his 93rd birthda 
Revised:  "Honest Ed", as he was known, was two weeks away from reaching his 93rd birthda 
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Original:  He was two weeks away from reaching his 93rd birthda 
Revised:  He was two weeks away from reaching his 93rd birthday. 
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Original:  A fire broke out earlier today at a vacant gate assignment tower at the Miami international airport .
Revised:  A fire broke out earlier today at a vacant gate assignment tower at the Miami International Airport .
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Original:  The fire is said to be sparked by said construction .
Revised:  The fire is said to be sparked by the construction work .
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Original:  There is no word of any flight delays because of the fire
Revised:  There are no reports of flight delays because of the fire
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Original:  The building is currently under construction .
Revised:  The building is currently undergoing construction work .
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Original:  The fire is said to be sparked by the construction work.
Revised:  The fire is believed to ahve be sparked by the construction work.
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Original:  There are no reports of flight delays because of the fire  
Revised:  There are no reports of flight delays because of the fire . 
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