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Original:  The leader of the Socialist party in the Senate, Francois Rebsamen , welcomed the passage of the bill: "We are overwhelmed with pride by this vote to move our society forward".
Revised:  The leader of the Socialist party in the Senate, , welcomed the passage of the bill: "We are overwhelmed with pride by this vote to move our society forward".
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Original:  Members of the right wing UMP have responded to the change with outrage, with UMP politician Herve Mariton calling for a boycott.
Revised:  Members of the right wing have responded to the change with outrage, with UMP politician Herve Mariton calling for a boycott.
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Original: Opponents of the bill have held demonstrations in Paris, with  340,000 people protesting at the in January.
Revised: Opponents of the bill have held demonstrations in Paris, with an estimated 340,000 people protesting at the in January.
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Original: The bill is being supported by the ruling and by President , as well as by the Communists and . Hollande's justice minister Christiane Taubira said it would "move our institutions towards ever more freedom, equality and personal respect" and would strengthen French society "by granting the simple recognition of full citizenship to homosexual couples".
Revised: The bill is being supported by the ruling and by President , as well as by the Communists and . Hollande's justice minister said it would "move our institutions towards ever more freedom, equality and personal respect" and would strengthen French society "by granting the simple recognition of full citizenship to homosexual couples".
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Original:  Members of the right wing have responded to the change with outrage, with UMP politician Herve Mariton calling for a boycott.
Revised:  Members of the right wing have responded to the change with outrage, with UMP politician calling for a boycott.
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Original: The bill is being supported by the ruling and by President  , as well as by the Communists and . Hollande's justice minister said it would "move our institutions towards ever more freedom, equality and personal respect" and would strengthen French society "by granting the simple recognition of full citizenship to homosexual couples".
Revised: The bill is being supported by the ruling and by President Hollande , as well as by the Communists and . Hollande's justice minister said it would "move our institutions towards ever more freedom, equality and personal respect" and would strengthen French society "by granting the simple recognition of full citizenship to homosexual couples".
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Original:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge oil from a cracked segment of pipe in North Pyongan Provence, North Korea when one of them lit a match.
Revised:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge petroleum from a cracked segment of pipe in North Pyongan Provence, North Korea when one of them lit a match.
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Original:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge oil from a cracked segment of pipe in North Pyongan Provence, North Korea when one of them lit a match.
Revised:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge oil from a cracked segment of pipe in North Pyongan Province when one of them lit a match.
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Original:  This resulted in the combustion of flammable vapors, and the inevitable explosion  
Revised:  This resulted in the combustion of flammable vapors, and the inevitable explosion . 
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Original: A South Korean aid agency is reporting that on June 9 2007, 110 North Koreans died in a horrific pipeline explosion .
Revised: A South Korean aid agency reports that 110 North Koreans died in a horrific pipeline explosion .
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Original:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge petroleum from a cracked segment of pipe  in North Pyongan Province  when one of them lit a match .
Revised:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge petroleum from a cracked segment of pipe The incident occurred in North Pyongan Province when one of them lit a match .
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Original:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge petroleum from a cracked segment of pipe  in North Pyongan Province  when one of them lit a match .
Revised:  The villagers were attempting to scavenge petroleum from a cracked segment of pipe in North Pyongan Province when one of the villagers lit a match .
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Original:  The Wisconsin , US Department of Natural Resources (DNR) announced on Monday that in an unprecedented move they would be temporarily closing Rocky Arbor State Park near Wisconsin Dells due to an infestation of gypsy moth caterpillars .
Revised:  The Wisconsin Department of Natural Resources (DNR) announced on Monday that in an unprecedented move they would be temporarily closing Rocky Arbor State Park near Wisconsin Dells due to an infestation of gypsy moth caterpillars .
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Original:  The Wisconsin , US Department of Natural Resources (DNR) announced on Monday that in an unprecedented move they would be temporarily closing Rocky Arbor State Park near Wisconsin Dells due to an infestation of gypsy moth caterpillars .
Revised:  The Wisconsin , US Department of Natural Resources (DNR) announced on Monday that in an unprecedented move they would be temporarily closing Rocky Arbor State Park near Wisconsin Dells due to an infestation of gypsy moth larvae .
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Original:  The caterpillars are currently present at the park in such large numbers that, according to a report by the Wisconsin State Journal, camping there would "apparently be a squishy, nightmarish experience."
Revised:  The larvae are present at the park in such large numbers that, according to a report by the Wisconsin State Journal, camping there would "apparently be a squishy, nightmarish experience."
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Original:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," .  The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
Revised:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the infestation: " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," . The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
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Original:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," .  The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
Revised:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " It 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," . The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
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Original:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," .  The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
Revised:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen . The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
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Original:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," .  The closure, which will run untill at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
Revised:  Andrea Diss-Torrance, another gypsy moth coordinator for the DNR, said of the current infestationat the park " it 's very severe - it's as severe as I have ever seen ," . The closure, which will run until at least June 27, is thought to affect around 95 campground reservations at the site, which covers 255 acres.
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Original:  The park will be closed until after the caterpillars have completed pupation ( the period in their life cycle in which they transform into moths ) .
Revised:  The park will be closed until after the caterpillars have completed pupation - the period in their life cycle in which they transform into moths ) .
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Original:  The park will be closed until after the caterpillars have completed pupation ( the period in their life cycle in which they transform into moths ) .
Revised:  The park will be closed until after the caterpillars have completed pupation ( the period in their life cycle in which they transform into moths .
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Original:  The gypsy moth is a pest in the US , having been introduced in the 19th-century in a failed attempt to to try to breed a hardy varient of silkworm.
Revised:  The gypsy moth is a pest in the U.S. , having been introduced in the 19th-century in a failed attempt to to try to breed a hardy varient of silkworm.
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Original:  The moths can defoliat at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the US , cause siginificant damage. the moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
Revised:  The moths can strip the leaves off at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the US , cause siginificant damage. the moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
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Original:  The moths can defoliat at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the US , cause siginificant damage. the moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
Revised:  The moths can defoliat at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the U.S. , cause siginificant damage. the moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
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Original:  The moths can defoliat at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the US , cause siginificant damage. the moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
Revised:  The moths can defoliat at least 250 different tree species, and as they lack natural predators in the US , cause siginificant damage. The moths often chew leaves but don't actually eat them, thus increasing the potential damage.
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Original:  A state park in the U.S. state of Wisconsin has been closed, due to being over-run by gypsy moth caterpillars.
Revised:  A park in the U.S. state of Wisconsin has been closed, due to being over-run by gypsy moth caterpillars.
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Original: The death of the Georgian Prime Minister, Surab Schwania , on 3 February 2005 was an accident, which was caused by a faulty gas heater in the home of a friend.
Revised: The death of the Georgian Prime Minister, , on 3 February 2005 was an accident, which was caused by a faulty gas heater in the home of a friend.
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Original:  Likewise his friend, Raul Usupov , with whom he had been staying, had 74\% carbon monoxide in his blood at death.
Revised:  Likewise his friend, , with whom he had been staying, had 74\% carbon monoxide in his blood at death.
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Original:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theological conservatism but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strenght given recent hostilities between Christian's and Muslims.
Revised:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theological conservatism but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strenght given recent hostilities between Christians and Muslims.
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Original:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theological conservatism but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strenght given recent hostilities between Christians and Muslims.
Revised:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theologically conservative but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strenght given recent hostilities between Christians and Muslims.
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Original:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theological conservatism but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strenght given recent hostilities between Christians and Muslims.
Revised:  The 72 year old Prefect of the Congregation for Divine Worship is known to be theological conservatism but very knowledgable about the Islamic religion, an important strength given recent hostilities between Christians and Muslims.
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Original:  Arinze was one of the five cardinals choosen by the Pope to sit on the Committee of the Great Jubilee in 2000.
Revised:  Arinze was one of the five cardinals chosen by the Pope to sit on the Committee of the Great Jubilee in 2000.
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Original:  The Archbishop said, "I hope the cardinals " ...
Revised:  The Archbishop said, "I hope the cardinals ...
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Original:  " will follow the first non-Italian pope by electing the first African pope." (Note: Pope John Paul II was the first non-Italian pope since the 15th century, but not the first non-Italian pope ever, as Tutu has stated.
Revised:  will follow the first non-Italian pope by electing the first African pope." (Note: Pope John Paul II was the first non-Italian pope since the 15th century, but not the first non-Italian pope ever, as Tutu has stated.
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Original: Kyodo News is reporting that this incident marks the first time Japanese property has been damaged in a protest in China.
Revised: Kyodo News reports the incident marks the first time Japanese property has been damaged in a protest in China.
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Original: In Wisconsin, home to many Hmong war refugees, an elementary school had been named after Vang Pao.
Revised: In Wisconsin, home to many Hmong war refugees, an elementary school was to be named after Vang Pao.
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Original:  On Monday in Madison, Wisconsin, the school board voted 7-0 to remove Vang Pao's name from the new school . Board members apologized to the Hmong community, but said the move was needed to defuse dissension in the community  . " Is it fair?
Revised:  On Monday in Madison, Wisconsin, the school board voted 7-0 to remove Vang Pao's name from the new school . Board members apologized to the Hmong community, but said the move was needed to defuse dissension in the community . " We have to make sure that there's not a lot of controversy surrounding a school that children will attend,
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Original:    "I 'm not sure. " 
Revised:  "I think it is painful, but there's hope that the school board members are thinking about changing its policy and with that discussion we hope that the intention is to work with us again, " 
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Original: Pleaded not guilty Also on Monday, Vang Pao and nine others accused in the plot pleaded not guilty to conspiracy chargesin U.S. district court in Sacramento, California.
Revised: Pleaded not guilty Also on Monday, Vang Pao and nine others accused in the plot pleaded not guilty to conspiracy charges in U.S. district court in Sacramento, California.
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Original:  U.S. authorities arrested Vang Pao and nine others in a sting operation set up by the Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives (ATF), in which the defendants met at a Thai restaurant in Sacramento with a man they believed was a weapons broker but was an undercover ATF agent.
Revised:  U.S. authorities arrested Vang Pao and nine others in a sting operation set up by the Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives (ATF), in which the defendants met at a Thai restaurant in Sacramento with a man they believed was an arms dealer but was in fact an undercover ATF agent.
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Original: If you are in the market for new bedding,  now might be a good time to buy for United States consumers.
Revised: If you are in the market for new bedding, now might be a good time to buy for consumers.
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Original: If you are in the market for new bedding, and not oo impressed with the new United States guidelines for matress fire resitance, now might be a good time to buy for consumers.
Revised: If you are in the market for new bedding, and not too impressed with the new United States guidelines for matress fire resitance, now might be a good time to buy for consumers.
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Original:  A security camera at the First Judicial District courthouse in Santa Fe  New Mexico has captured an unidentified star shaped object that appears to spin, on camera.
Revised:  A security camera at the First Judicial District courthouse in Santa Fe , New Mexico has captured an unidentified star shaped object that appears to spin, on camera.
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Original:  I’m open to other possibilities, but my best guess at this point is that it’s a small floating object near the camera lens, probably a fluff of cotton from the cottonwoods nearby or an insect or something like that  " said Rhoads.
Revised:  I’m open to other possibilities, but my best guess at this point is that it’s a small floating object near the camera lens, probably a fluff of cotton from the cottonwoods nearby or an insect or something like that , " said Rhoads.
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Original:  It then floats, while rotating, shining and appearing in the shape of a star, toward the bottom right corner of the screen, past a police car, and then out of view  
Revised:  It then floats, while rotating, shining and appearing in the shape of a star, toward the bottom right corner of the screen, past a police car, and then out of view . 
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Original:  The money has been transferred from the bank in Macau to the federal reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank (where the alleged glitch occurred) into Kim Jong-Il's personal account in the DPRK.
Revised:  The money has been transferred from the bank in Macau to the Federal Reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank (where the alleged glitch occurred) into Kim Jong-Il's personal account in the DPRK.
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Original:  The money has been transferred from the bank in Macau to the federal reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank (where the alleged glitch occurred) into Kim Jong-Il's personal account in the DPRK.
Revised:  The money has been transferred from the bank in Macau to the federal reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank and then into Kim Jong-Il's personal account in the DPRK.
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Original:  The money was released late last week, and was transferred from Macau to the Federal Reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank and then into Kim Jong-Il's personal account in the DPRK .
Revised:  The money was released late last week, and was transferred from Macau to the Federal Reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank and then into an account controlled by the North Korean government .
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Original:  Pressure is mounting, from the international community, on Pyongyang to take steps shutting down their Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
Revised:  Pressure is mounting, from the international community, on the Pyongyang government to shut down its Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
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Original:  They had been refusing to move forward due to the freezing of the funds in 2005
Revised:  North Korea has been refusing to move forward due to the freezing of the funds in 2005
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Original: The US$25 million  previously frozen in a Macau bank has arrived in Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
Revised:  US$25 million previously frozen in a Macau bank has arrived in Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
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Original: The US$25 million  previously frozen in a Macau bank has arrived in Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
Revised: The US$25 million of North Korean funds previously frozen in a Macau bank has arrived in Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
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Original: The US$25 million  previously frozen in a Macau bank has arrived in Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
Revised: The US$25 million previously frozen in a Macau bank has been transferred to Pyongyang, the North Korean capital.
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Original:  The money was released late last week, and was transferred from Macau to the Federal Reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank and then into an account controlled by the North Korean government.
Revised:  The money was released late last week, and transferred from Macau to the Federal Reserve in New York City, and from there to a Russian bank and then into an account controlled by the North Korean government.
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Original:  Pressure is mounting , from the international community , on the Pyongyang government to shut down its Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
Revised:  Pressure is mounting from the international community , on the Pyongyang government to shut down its Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
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Original:  Pressure is mounting , from the international community , on the Pyongyang government to shut down its Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
Revised:  Pressure is mounting , from the international community on the Pyongyang government to shut down its Yongbyong nuclear reactor.
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Original:    RC2 Corp.
Revised:  A recall issued last week for Thomas the Tank Engine toys made in China and containing lead-based paint, is the latest scare for consumers, and follows recent scandals involving Chinese-made pet food, pharmaceuticals, toothpaste and other toys, The New York Times has reported in a series of articles. RC2 Corp.
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Original: Recalls Various Thomas Friends™ Wooden RailwayToys Due to Lead Poisoning Hazard     U.S.    Consumer Product Safety Commission Release       &  # 07-212 June 13, 2007 &  &  &     RC2 Corporation - Recall of Wooden Vehicles and Train Set Componen
Revised: Recalls Various Thomas Friends™ Wooden RailwayToys Due to Lead Poisoning Hazard "RC2 has determined that the surface paints on the recalled products contain lead. Lead is toxic if ingested by young children and can cause adverse health effects," RC2 said in a press release dated June 13. "Consumers should take the recalled toys away from young children immediately and contact RC2 Corp. for a replacement toy," the company said. U.S. Consumer Product Safety Commission Release & # 07-212 June 13, 2007 & & & RC2 Corporation - Recall of Wooden Vehicles and Train Set Componen
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Original:  According to RC2, items in the "Thomas  Friends" recall are:
Revised:  According to RC2, items in the "Thomas and Friends" recall are:
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Original:  Lead is toxic if ingested by young children and can cause adverse health effects," the Consumer Product Safety Commission said in a press release dated June 13. "Consumers should take the recalled toys away from young children immediately and contact RC2 Corp. for a replacement toy," the company said.
Revised:  Lead is toxic if ingested by young children and can cause adverse health effects," the Consumer Product Safety Commission said in a press release dated June 13. "Consumers should take the recalled toys away from young children immediately and contact RC2 Corp. for a replacement toy," the commission said.
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