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Original:  The IDF also admits they knew international journalists had offices in the building and targeted it because "Hamas' operational communications [were] deliberately located on the roof of the building, in which several international media bureaus reside." , , , and al-Quds TV, among other agencies, all have offices located in the center .
Revised:  The IDF also admits they knew international journalists had offices in the building and targeted it because "Hamas' operational communications [were] deliberately located on the roof of the building, in which several international media bureaus reside." , , , and al-Quds TV, among other agencies, all have offices located in the building .
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Original:  The IDF also claims that Hamas staged the scene of those injured being taken away in ambulances following the airstrike.
Revised:  The IDF also claims that Hamas staged the scene outside the building to make it appear that those who were injured were being taken away in ambulances following the airstrike.
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Original:  The IDF also claims that Hamas staged the scene outside the building to make it appear that those who were injured were being taken away in ambulances and that some of those individuals were "seen minutes later walking around."
Revised:  The IDF also claims Hamas staged a scene outside the building to make it appear that those who were injured were being taken away in ambulances and that some of those individuals were "seen minutes later walking around."
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Original:  The IDF also claims that Hamas staged the scene outside the building to make it appear that those who were injured were being taken away in ambulances and that some of those individuals were "seen minutes later walking around."
Revised:  The IDF also claims that Hamas staged the scene outside the building to make it appear that those who were injured were being taken away in an ambulance, who was "seen minutes later walking around."
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Original: According to Protocol 1, Article 79 of the , Targeting journalists or civilians is considered a war crime.
Revised: According to Protocol 1, Article 79 of the , targeting journalists or civilians is considered a war crime.
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Original:   They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces . " 
Revised:  ... They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces . " 
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Original:   They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces . " 
Revised:  They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces " 
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Original:   They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces . " 
Revised:  They shall be protected as such under the Conventions and this Protocol, provided that they take no action adversely affecting their status as civilians, and without prejudice to the right of war correspondents accredited to the armed forces . " .
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Original:  The IDF called the center a "Hamas operational communication site ".
Revised:  The IDF called the center a "Hamas operational communication sites ".
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Original: The Northern Ireland secretary, Paul Murphy has said that there is “no hope” of political progress on peace talks until all IRA “criminal activity” has been dealt with.
Revised:  Northern Ireland secretary, Paul Murphy has said that there is “no hope” of political progress on peace talks until all IRA “criminal activity” has been dealt with.
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Original: The Northern Ireland secretary, Paul Murphy has said that there is “no hope” of political progress on peace talks until all IRA “criminal activity” has been dealt with.
Revised: The Northern Ireland secretary, Paul Murphy , said that there is “no hope” of political progress on peace talks until all IRA “criminal activity” has been dealt with.
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Original:  Mr Murphy praised the courage of the McCartney sisters who have been campaigning for those responsible for the murder of  brother Robert McCartney to be brought to justice.
Revised:  Mr Murphy praised the courage of the McCartney sisters ' campaign for justice for those responsible in the murder of brother Robert McCartney to be brought to justice.
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Original:  Mr Murphy praised the courage of the McCartney sisters who have been campaigning for those responsible for the murder of  brother Robert McCartney to be brought to justice.
Revised:  Mr Murphy praised the courage of the McCartney sisters who have been campaigning for those responsible for the murder of their brother Robert McCartney to be brought to justice.
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Original:  Robert McCartney was stabbed and kicked to death after an altercation in a bar in the centre of Belfast.
Revised:  Robert McCartney was stabbed and kicked to death after an altercation in a bar in the center of Belfast.
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Original:  Mr Murphy’s comments came during the sister’s visit to Washingtonwhere they met President Bush , who is said to have offered support and encouragement for their campaign.
Revised:  Mr Murphy’s comments came during a visit the sister made to Washington. They met President Bush , who is said to have offered support and encouragement for their campaign.
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Original:  Mr Murphy’s comments came during the sister’s visit to Washingtonwhere they met President Bush , who is said to have offered support and encouragement for their campaign.
Revised:  Mr Murphy’s comments came during the sister’s visit to Washingtonwhere they met President Bush who is said to have offered support and encouragement for their campaign.
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Original:  Belfast’s self-governing assembly , the product of a peace deal made in 1998, collapsed two years ago leaving the British province to be run directly from London ever since.
Revised:  Belfast’s self-governing assembly is the product of a peace deal made in 1998, collapsed two years ago leaving the British province to be run directly from London ever since.
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Original:  Belfast’s self-governing assembly , the product of a peace deal made in 1998, collapsed two years ago leaving the British province to be run directly from London ever since.
Revised:  Belfast’s self-governing assembly , the product of a peace deal made in 1998. It collapsed two years ago leaving the British province to be run directly from London ever since.
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Original:  Attempts to restore the assembly have met numerous obstacles in the intervening years mostly centred on presence and actions of  IRA.
Revised:  Attempts to restore the assembly have met numerous obstacles in the intervening years , mostly centered on the presence and actions of IRA.
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Original:  Attempts to restore the assembly have met numerous obstacles in the intervening years mostly centred on presence and actions of  IRA.
Revised:  Attempts to restore the assembly have met numerous obstacles in the intervening years mostly centred on presence and actions of the IRA.
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Original:  In recent weeks the IRA has been linked not only the murder of Robert McCartney  but also of the widely publicised theft from the Northern Bank of £26 million in December.
Revised:  In recent weeks the IRA has been linked not only the murder of Robert McCartney , but also of the widely publicised theft from the Northern Bank of £26 million in December.
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Original:  He said until that happens there “wasn’t any hope at all” of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
Revised:  Until that happens, there “wasn’t any hope at all” of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
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Original:  Gerry Adams said that the case has become steeped in politics and added that the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were that McCartney sisters themselves.
Revised:  Gerry Adams said the case has become steeped in politics and added that the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were that McCartney sisters themselves.
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Original:  Gerry Adams said that the case has become steeped in politics and added that the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were that McCartney sisters themselves.
Revised:  Gerry Adams said that the case has become steeped in politics , and the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were that McCartney sisters themselves.
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Original:  Gerry Adams said that the case has become steeped in politics and added that the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were that McCartney sisters themselves.
Revised:  Gerry Adams said that the case has become steeped in politics and added that the only people that could not be accused of political motivation were the McCartney sisters themselves.
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Original:  Separately it has been reported that controversial detention-without-trial orders  brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act  could be used against members of the IRA.
Revised:  Reported separately, the controversial ' detention-without-trial orders brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act could be used against members of the IRA.
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Original:  Separately it has been reported that controversial detention-without-trial orders  brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act  could be used against members of the IRA.
Revised:  Separately it has been reported that controversial detention-without-trial orders ', brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act could be used against members of the IRA.
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Original:  Separately it has been reported that controversial detention-without-trial orders  brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act  could be used against members of the IRA.
Revised:  Separately it has been reported that controversial detention-without-trial orders brought in last week under the Prevention of Terrorism Act , could be used against members of the IRA.
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Original: Mr Murphy ’ s comments came during a visit the sisters made to Washington.
Revised: Mr Murphy ' s comments came during a visit the sisters made to Washington.
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Original:  Belfast ’ s self-governing assembly is the product of a peace deal made in 1998.
Revised:  Belfast ' s self-governing assembly is the product of a peace deal made in 1998.
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Original:  Until that happens, there “wasn’ t any hope at all ” of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
Revised:  Until that happens, there "wasn' t any hope at all ” of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
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Original:  Until that happens, there “wasn’ t any hope at all ” of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
Revised:  Until that happens, there “wasn’ t any hope at all " of progress to restore the institutions of government to Northern Ireland.
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Original:  He added that the McCartney sisters “remarkable campaign” had “ personalised the issue of criminal activity ” and given a face to individuals suffering from brutality and savagery.
Revised:  He added that the McCartney sisters "remarkable campaign" had " personalised the issue of criminal activity ” and given a face to individuals suffering from brutality and savagery.
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Original:  He added that the McCartney sisters “remarkable campaign” had “ personalised the issue of criminal activity ” and given a face to individuals suffering from brutality and savagery.
Revised:  He added that the McCartney sisters “remarkable campaign” had “ personalised the issue of criminal activity " and given a face to individuals suffering from brutality and savagery.
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Original:  It was just beautiful to watch the ship fly away." said Kevin Ford, the now commander of the ISS.
Revised:  It was just beautiful to watch the ship fly away." said Kevin Ford, now the current commander of the ISS.
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Original:  During the ceremony Williams remarked: "I think we've left the ship in good shape and I'm honored to hand it over to Kevin.  
Revised:  During the ceremony Williams remarked: "I think we've left the ship in good shape and I'm honored to hand it over to Kevin. " 
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Original:  Ford was passed command of the ISS after in a change of command ceremony on Saturday.
Revised:  Ford was passed command of the ISS in a change of command ceremony on Saturday.
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Original: Three astronauts return to Earth today, after touching down safely in Kazakhstan aboard their Soyuz capsule in the pre-dawn hours of Monday morning.
Revised: Three astronauts return to Earth today, after touching down safely in Kazakhstan aboard their capsule in the pre-dawn hours of Monday morning.
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Original:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in it's missions to the ISS . Astronauts Yuri Malenchenko, Sunita Williams, and Akihiko Hoshide were carried to reclining chairs to help them re-acclimate to gravity after being extracted from the sideways capsule by Russian recovery forces.
Revised:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in it's missions to the (ISS) . Astronauts Yuri Malenchenko, Sunita Williams, and Akihiko Hoshide were carried to reclining chairs to help them re-acclimate to gravity after being extracted from the sideways capsule by Russian recovery forces.
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Original:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in it's missions to the ISS . Astronauts Yuri Malenchenko, Sunita Williams, and Akihiko Hoshide were carried to reclining chairs to help them re-acclimate to gravity after being extracted from the sideways capsule by Russian recovery forces.
Revised:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in it's missions to the ISS . Astronauts , , and were carried to reclining chairs to help them re-acclimate to gravity after being extracted from the sideways capsule by Russian recovery forces.
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Original:  It was just beautiful to watch the ship fly away .
Revised:  It was just beautiful to watch the ship fly away ,
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Original:  During the ceremony Williams remarked : "I think we've left the ship in good shape and I'm honored to hand it over to Kevin."
Revised:  During the ceremony Williams remarked , "I think we've left the ship in good shape and I'm honored to hand it over to Kevin."
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Original:  Upon approval of the medical team Williams and Hoshide will return to Huston TexasUSA , while Malenchenko heads back to Star City Russia
Revised:  Upon approval of the medical team Williams and Hoshide will return to Houston, Texas , while Malenchenko heads back to Star City Russia
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Original:  Upon approval of the medical team Williams and Hoshide will return to Huston TexasUSA , while Malenchenko heads back to Star City Russia
Revised:  Upon approval of the medical team Williams and Hoshide will return to Huston TexasUSA , while Malenchenko heads back to 
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Original:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in it's missions to the (ISS).
Revised:  The landing marks the culmination of a 127 day mission to the international space station, and only the fourth time a Soyuz capsule has landed at night in its missions to the (ISS).
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Original:  The group started their trip to the ISS on July 15 launching from the Baikonur Cosmodrome in Kazakhstan.
Revised:  The group started their trip to the ISS on July 15 launching from the in Kazakhstan.
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Original:  Co-promoter Ken West caused a stir when the flag was “banned” from this year's Big Day Out in Sydney after organisers branded it a "gang colour" and symbol of hate.
Revised:  Co-promoter Ken West caused a stir when the flag was "banned" from this year's Big Day Out in Sydney after organisers branded it a "gang colour" and symbol of hate.
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Original:  The organizers defended their action claiming Sydney was “ a hot bed of racism.
Revised:  The organizers defended their action claiming Sydney was " a hot bed of racism.
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Original:  ” They had already moved the event from the traditional time, Australia Day, to avoid these “ nationalistic overtones.
Revised:  " They had already moved the event from the traditional time, Australia Day, to avoid these “ nationalistic overtones.
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Original:  ” They had already moved the event from the traditional time, Australia Day, to avoid these “ nationalistic overtones.
Revised:  ” They had already moved the event from the traditional time, Australia Day, to avoid these " nationalistic overtones.
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Original:  ” The Prime Minister John Howard responded by declaring that the Big Day Out should have been cancelled unless organisers reversed their decision to ban the flag.
Revised:  " The Prime Minister John Howard responded by declaring that the Big Day Out should have been cancelled unless organisers reversed their decision to ban the flag.
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Original:  Event organisers allowed hundreds of fans to bring Australian flags to the event, totally backing down on their earlier call to leave the emblem at home.
Revised:  Event organisers allowed hundreds of fans to bring Australian flags to the event, backing down on their earlier call to leave the emblem at home.
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Original: After widespread outrage on talkback radio, and condemnation of their action by the Prime Minister and state Premiers, Australian's have literally worn their hearts on their sleeves by draping the Aussie flag over their shoulders or wearing t-shirts, tattoos or bikinis with it printed on it.
Revised: After widespread outrage on talkback radio, and condemnation of their action by the Prime Minister and state Premiers, Australians have literally worn their hearts on their sleeves by draping the Aussie flag over their shoulders or wearing t-shirts, tattoos or bikinis with it printed on it.
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Original: A new study has found a link between specific genes , drinking habits  and possibly alcohol addiction.
Revised: A new study has found a link between specific , drinking habits and possibly alcohol addiction.
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Original: A new study has found a link between specific genes , drinking habits  and possibly alcohol addiction.
Revised: A new study has found a link between specific genes , drinking habits , and possibly alcohol addiction.
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Original:  The study, by UK researchers at the universities of Bristol and Oxford , involved data from nearly 1,000 people who provided detailed information about their drinking habits.
Revised:  The study, by UK researchers at the universities of and , involved data from nearly 1,000 people who provided detailed information about their drinking habits.
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Original: In 2002, Syrian-born and Canadian software engineer Maher Arar was arrested by U.S. officials and deported into Syria after the U.S. claimed that he was a terrorist.
Revised: In 2002, Syrian-born and Canadian software engineer Maher Arar was arrested by U.S. officials and deported into Syria after the U.S. suspected that he was a terrorist.
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Original:   Arar currently lives in Kamloops, British Columbia, Canada  
Revised:  Arar currently lives in Kamloops, British Columbia, Canada . 
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Original: Trying to defend their position, the Central Bank officials stated that the job of an document officer is not a desk job, that it requires physical power, and that it is not suitable for women.
Revised: Trying to defend their position, the Central Bank officials stated that the job of a document officer is not a desk job, that it requires physical power, and that it is not suitable for women.
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Original:  NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) also confirmed this because markers had a duty to report and broken rules, which includes writing notes on exam papers.
Revised:  NZQA (New Zealand Qualifications Authority) also confirmed this because markers had a duty to report any broken rules, which includes writing notes on exam papers.
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Original:  Mr Potter said that  he, nor his friends, wrote the messages.
Revised:  Mr Potter said that neither he, nor his friends, wrote the messages.
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Original:  Which NZQA denied to comment on  
Revised:  Which NZQA denied to comment on . 
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Original: Mr Potter's and Mr Narayan's parents have both complained to the NZQA, the authority who manage NCEA.
Revised: Mr Potter's and Mr Narayan's parents have both complained to the NZQA, the authority that manages NCEA.
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Original:  NZQA has asked for all of the papers from both of the students as they are launching their own investigation into the "serious issue." NZQA are already confident that it was not preformed by a marker, which has raised concerns by Mr Potter, who asks how easy it would be for someone to gain access to it , and tamper with it.
Revised:  NZQA has asked for all of the papers from both of the students as they are launching their own investigation into the "serious issue." NZQA are already confident that it was not performed by a marker, which has raised concerns by Mr Potter, who asks how easy it would be for someone to gain access to it , and tamper with it.
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Original:  NZQA has asked for all of the papers from both of the students as they are launching their own investigation into the "serious issue." NZQA are already confident that it was not preformed by a marker, which has raised concerns by Mr Potter, who asks how easy it would be for someone to gain access to it , and tamper with it.
Revised:  NZQA has asked for all of the papers from both of the students as they are launching their own investigation into the "serious issue." NZQA are already confident that it was not preformed by a marker, which has raised concerns by Mr Potter, who asks how easy it would be for someone to gain unauthorized access to an exam , and tamper with it.
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Original:  Which NZQA declined to comment on  .
Revised:  NZQA declined to comment on .
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Original:  Two New Zealand students have been insulted when their exam papers were returned to them with rude remarks on them.
Revised:  Two New Zealand students have been insulted when their exam papers were returned to his with rude remarks on them.
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