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Original:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort  said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
Revised:  Local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
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Original:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort  said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
Revised:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers had mobilized in case confrontations arose . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
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Original:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort  said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
Revised:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a former Marine and a retired accountant from Aliso Viejo, Arizona, who ran the sign-up effort said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
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Original:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort  said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
Revised:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort , said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
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Original:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort  said he expected more than 1000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
Revised:  There was a mobilization of local , state and federal officers to deal with confrontations should any arise . James Gilchrist, a retired Aliso Viejo (Arizona) accountant and Marine veteran who ran the sign-up effort said he expected more than 1,000 volunteers to help highlight the 30-day effort.
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Original:  The goal of the project is to patrol the 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and call illegal activity in to law enforcement officials.
Revised:  The project's goal is to patrol the 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and call illegal activity in to law enforcement officials.
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Original:  The goal of the project is to patrol the 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and call illegal activity in to law enforcement officials.
Revised:  The goal of the project is to patrol 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and call illegal activity in to law enforcement officials.
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Original:  The goal of the project is to patrol the 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and call illegal activity in to law enforcement officials.
Revised:  The goal of the project is to patrol the 23 miles of the San Pedro Valley, watch the border, and report illegal activity to law enforcement officials.
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Original:  Many fear it could result in vigilante violence.
Revised:  Many people fear that the project could result in vigilante violence.
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Original:  The Minutemen hope it causes the US Government to increase border patrols.
Revised:  The Minutemen hope it causes the U.S. government to increase border patrols.
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Original:  Tombstone , Arizona is best known as the site of the 1881 shootout at the OK Corral.
Revised:  Tombstone is best known as the site of the 1881 shootout at the OK Corral.
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Original:  , the country's president, has said that he will sign it when he can .
Revised:  , the country's president, has said that he will sign it .
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Original: The Senate in  voted 23–8 on Tuesday to legalise same-sex marriage following approval from the country's lower house in December.
Revised: The Senate in Uruguay voted 23–8 on Tuesday to legalise same-sex marriage following approval from the country's lower house in December.
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Original:  "Why not," Deby replied.
Revised:  "Why not," Déby replied.
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Original:  The conditions in the camps set up to deal with the refugees have been criticised as inadequate by the aid group, Médecins Sans Frontières (MSF).
Revised:  The conditions in the camps set up to deal with the refugees have been criticised as inadequate by the aid group, (MSF).
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Original:  But Chad's Prime Minister, Delwa Kassiré Koumakoye , commented recently that neighbouring countries may take the use of foreign troops as a threat.
Revised:  But Chad's Prime Minister, , commented recently that neighbouring countries may take the use of foreign troops as a threat.
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Original:  Progress in Sudan French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner.
Revised:  Progress in Sudan 
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Original:  UN Secretary-General Ban Ki-moon expressed some optimism on the issue of troop deployment and acknowledged he received a letter recently from al-Bashir on the matter.
Revised:  UN Secretary-General expressed some optimism on the issue of troop deployment and acknowledged he received a letter recently from al-Bashir on the matter.
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Original:  Despite the adverse conditions of this planet, at least some primitive forms of life may be able to exist on its surface," added Cuntz      
Revised:  Despite the adverse conditions of this planet, at least some primitive forms of life may be able to exist on its surface," added Cuntz . 
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Original: German | and American scientists have announced that the recent planet, Gliese 581c is too hot to host any life that would be found on Earth.
Revised: German and American scientists have announced that the recent planet, Gliese 581c is too hot to host any life that would be found on Earth.
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Original:  "So if Gliese 581 has been around for at least that long, it’s more encouraging for the prospects of complex life on any planet around it," added Matthews  
Revised:  "So if Gliese 581 has been around for at least that long, it’s more encouraging for the prospects of complex life on any planet around it," added Matthews . 
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Original: Goh was in Brunei to attend yesterday's royal banquet, put on by the Sultan of Brunei, on the occasion of his 11th daughter's wedding.
Revised: Goh was in Brunei to attend yesterday's royal banquet, put on by the Sultan of Brunei, on the occasion of the sultan's daughter's wedding.
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Original:  According to Associated Press, David Boies, attorney for Michael Moore, believes the targeting of Moore for his unauthorised trip to Cuba may be the result of the criticism of the current administration in such films as Fahrenheit 9/11.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tuesday Moore was seen at two pre-release screenings of the movie in Sacramento, California.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tuesday Moore was seen at two pre-release screenings of the movie in Sacramento, California.
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Original: Vang Pao and nine other people, mostly members of the Hmong immigrant community in California's Central Valley, were arrested last week by in a sting operation by the U.S. Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives.
Revised: Vang Pao and nine other people, mostly members of the Hmong immigrant community in California's Central Valley, were arrested last week in a sting operation by the U.S. Bureau of Alcohol, Tobacco, Firearms and Explosives.
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Original: Wikinews witnessed three rugby union matches at Sunshine Coast Stadium in Queensland, Australia this past Saturday.
Revised: Wikinews witnessed three rugby union matches at in Queensland, Australia this past Saturday.
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Original:  The final score in a lop side contest — Sunnybank Dragons 36 defeated Sunshine Coast Stingrays 6. Medi
Revised:  The final score in a lop side contest — Sunnybank Dragons 36 defeated Sunshine Coast Stingrays Medi
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Original:  The final score in a lop side contest — Sunnybank Dragons 36 defeated Sunshine Coast Stingrays 6. Medi
Revised:  The final score in a lop side contest — Sunnybank Dragons 36 defeated Sunshine Coast Stingrays 6. 6
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Original: In other local A-Grade games, thrashed to the tune of seventy points, 75 points to five ;
Revised: In other local A-Grade games, thrashed to the tune of seventy points, 75 points to 5 ;
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Original: The Sunshine Coast Stingrays lost there last home game for a month against 36 points to six.
Revised: The Sunshine Coast Stingrays lost there last home game for a month against 36 points to 6.
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Original:  Sunnybank lead 17 points to three in the dying moments of the first half, but conceded a penalty which resulted in the hosts scoring what would ultimately be their final points of the game.
Revised:  Sunnybank lead 17 points to 3 in the dying moments of the first half, but conceded a penalty which resulted in the hosts scoring what would ultimately be their final points of the game.
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Original:  300px RK: I don't think it's as serious a move as the  has made it out to be.
Revised:  300px RK: I don't think it's as serious a move as the media has made it out to be.
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Original:  This is not like the Cuban Missile Crisis when people were emptying the store shelves and building bunkers in their basements.
Revised:  This is not like the when people were emptying the store shelves and building bunkers in their basements.
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Original:  some are expressions of intent or aspiration that are beyond the capability of North Korea to implement without facing severe consequences, and some are very specific threats that North Korea will attempt to implement as part of a guerrilla strategy so as to avoid escalation and take advantage of the element of surprise.
Revised:  some are expressions of intent or aspiration that are beyond the capability of North Korea to implement without facing severe consequences, and some are very specific threats that North Korea will attempt to implement as part of a strategy so as to avoid escalation and take advantage of the element of surprise.
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Original:  The new guy — he's only been in there for a year-and-a-half, right, 14, 15 months — he didn't go through the grooming processes of the regime, he didn't go through the military or the party.
Revised:  The new guy — he's only been in there for a year-and-a-half, right, 14, 15 months — he didn't go through the grooming institutions of the regime, he didn't go through the military or the party.
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Original:  The festival had tons of accessories, sold under tents, to buy for your dog ;
Revised:  The festival had tons of accessories, sold under tents, to buy for dogs ;
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Original:  About 400 vendors and exhibitors were there to promote their products, which also gave private dog companies or groups a chance to show their unknown products.
Revised:  About 400 vendors and exhibitors were there to promote their products, which also gave private dog companies or groups a chance to show their new products.
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Original:  They hosted a live event at the show broadcasted on TV.
Revised:  They hosted a live event at the show which was broadcast on TV.
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Original:  A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a real photograther shooting photo's of dogs behind a white screen , the winning photo is to be published on the cover of "Puppy and dog basics" magazine.
Revised:  A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a professional photograther taking pictures of dogs behind a white screen , the winning photo is to be published on the cover of "Puppy and dog basics" magazine.
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Original:  A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a real photograther shooting photo's of dogs behind a white screen , the winning photo is to be published on the cover of "Puppy and dog basics" magazine.
Revised:  A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a real photograther shooting photo's of dogs behind a white screen ; the winning photo is to be published on the cover of "Puppy and dog basics" magazine.
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Original:  Large "Gourmet" dog bones were also being served on a cart to a table(s) .
Revised:  Large "Gourmet" dog bones were also served from a cart and table .
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Original: A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a professional photograther taking pictures of dogs behind a white screen;
Revised: A contest called "Canada's top dog" had its own tent with a professional photographer taking pictures of dogs behind a white screen;
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Original:  They outline world military expenditure in 2006 as estimated to have reached $1,204 billion in current dollars with 15 countries having the highest spending and accounting for 83 per cent of the world total.
Revised:  World military expenditure in 2006 as estimated to have reached $1,204 billion in current dollars with 15 countries having the highest spending and accounting for 83 per cent of the world total.
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Original:  World military expenditure in 2006 as estimated to have reached $1,204 billion in current dollars with 15 countries having the highest spending and accounting for 83 per cent of the world total.
Revised:  World military expenditure in 2006 is estimated to have reached $1,204 billion in current dollars with 15 countries having the highest spending and accounting for 83 per cent of the world total.
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Original:  " The United States says that the cease-fire should include an end to all of the PKK's militant activities.
Revised:  " 
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Original:  Turkey began to mass their army on the Turkey-Iraq border in the beginning of June, and reports began to circulate in the media that Turkey was preparing for an invasion of Iraq to take out the PKK.
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Original: In Canada the change takes effect in Newfoundland and New Brunswick at 3 a.m., and 2 a. am in most of the rest of the country.
Revised: In Canada the change takes effect in Newfoundland and New Brunswick at 3 a.m., and 2 a. m. in most of the rest of the country.
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Original:  In Israel, a Knesset comittee recently decided to begin observing daylight savings on the last Thursday before April 1.
Revised:  In Israel, a Knesset committee recently decided to begin observing daylight savings on the last Thursday before April 1.
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Original: In most areas of North America, DST observers should turn their clocks ahead one hour at 2 a.m. Sunday morning.
Revised: In most areas of the United States, Canada, and Mexico, DST observers should turn their clocks ahead one hour at 2 a.m. Sunday morning.
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Original: Debbie Gerbich, who was involved in consensual group sex sessions with former and serving New Zealand police officers in 2001, committed suicide on 6 June 2007.
Revised: Debbie Gerbich, who was involved in consensual group sex sessions with former and serving New Zealand police officers in 2001, committed suicide on June 6, 2007.
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Original:  Two emails  were presented and read out to a reporter on the New Zealand current affairs program Close Up written by Steven Cook , one of them stated;
Revised:  Two emails were presented and read out to a reporter on the New Zealand current affairs program Close Up , one of them stated;
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Original:  The WB, from the executive level down to memos circulated among departments , expressed concern for it becoming the target of terrorist attack.
Revised:  The WB, from the executive level down to memos circulated among departments expressed concern for it becoming the target of terrorist attack.
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Original:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience , a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that he "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
Revised:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that he "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
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Original:  A whirlwind tour by Wolfowitz, who traveled to many capital cities of the bank’s major shareholders and met with voting board members, quieted misgivings over his succession to the incumbent  John Wolfensohn.
Revised:  A whirlwind tour by Wolfowitz, who traveled to many capital cities of the bank’s major shareholders and met with voting board members, quieted misgivings over his succession to the incumbent president John Wolfensohn.
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Original:  Widespread criticism of Wolfowitz’s role in the US build-up to war in Iraq heightened levels of security concerns existing within the bank  .
Revised:  Widespread criticism of the Wolfowitz role in the US build-up to war in Iraq heightened levels of security concerns existing within the bank .
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Original:  Widespread criticism of Wolfowitz’s role in the US build-up to war in Iraq heightened levels of security concerns existing within the bank  .
Revised:  Widespread criticism of Wolfowitz’s role in the US build-up to war in Iraq heightened levels of security concerns within the bank .
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Original:  The WB, from the executive level down to memos circulated among departments expressed concern for it becoming the target of terrorist attack.
Revised:  The WB, from the executive level down to memos circulated among departments , express concern for it becoming the target of terrorist attack.
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Original:  The level of seriousness this is being taken with has gone so far as to set up cost estimates for improving security.
Revised:  The level of seriousness being taken by WB led it to set up cost estimates for improving security.
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Original:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience  a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that he "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
Revised:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience , a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that he "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
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Original:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience  a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that he "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
Revised:  Despite a belief by some that he acts unilaterally and lacks development experience a European Commission spokeswoman, speaking for Commissioner Olli Rehn, told a news conference that Rehn "was satisfied with everything he heard from Mr Wolfowitz concerning free trade and also on poverty reduction and development policy."
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Original: image:Wolfowitz_paul.jpg|Paul Wolfowitz during his Pentagon tenure Despite controversy ignited by the White House nomination of Paul Wolfowitz to head the World Bank (WB), the 24-member board of directors voted unaminously on Thursday to accept his confirmation.
Revised:  Despite controversy ignited by the White House nomination of Paul Wolfowitz to head the World Bank (WB), the 24-member board of directors voted unaminously on Thursday to accept his confirmation.
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Original: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
Revised: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
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Original: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
Revised: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
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Original: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
Revised: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
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Original: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
Revised: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
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Original: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having w: health trouble.
Revised: Pyongyang watchers agree, Kim Jong-Il The w: Chairman of the w: Defense Commission of the w: Democratic People's Republic of Korea, and w: defacto dictator, is having health trouble.
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Original:  Due to the media blackout of the North Korean w: regime only small bits of w: information are available.
Revised:  Due to the secrecy of the North Korean w: regime only small bits of w: information are available.
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Original:  Due to the media blackout of the North Korean w: regime only small bits of w: information are available.
Revised:  Due to the media blackout of the North Korean regime only small bits of w: information are available.
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Original:  Due to the media blackout of the North Korean w: regime only small bits of w: information are available.
Revised:  Due to the media blackout of the North Korean w: regime only small bits of information are available.
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Original:  Kim is reported to have difficulty w: walking unassisted and is reported to be frail.
Revised:  Kim is reported to have difficulty walking unassisted and is reported to be frail.
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