wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Delta II rocket with NASA's THEMIS spacecraft aboard lifts off at Cape Canaveral Air Force Station at 23 :01 UTC Five satellites, carried inside a Delta II rocket , took off from NASA's Cape Canaveral launch pad today, in an effort to investigate the northern lights and the electromagnetic storms that cause them.
Revised: The Delta II rocket with NASA's THEMIS spacecraft aboard lifts off at Cape Canaveral Air Force Station at 23 :01 UTC Five satellites, carried inside a Delta II rocket , took off from NASA's Cape Canaveral launch pad today, carrying five satellites designed to investigate the northern lights and the electromagnetic storms that cause them.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The launch had been been twice delayed due to bad weather, but eventually occurred at 23: 01 UTC.
Revised:  The launch had been been twice delayed due to bad weather, but was eventually performed at 23: 01 UTC.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The launch had been been twice delayed due to bad weather, but eventually occurred at 23: 01 UTC.
Revised:  The launch had been been twice delayed due to bad weather, but eventually occurred at 23: 00 UTC.
Edit intent: style
Original:  The launch had been been twice delayed due to bad weather, but was eventually performed at 23:00 UTC.
Revised:  The launch had been twice delayed due to bad weather, but was eventually performed at 23:00 UTC.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Scientists from the University of Alberta and the University of Calgary also helped with the project.
Revised:  Scientists from the University of Alberta and the also helped with the project.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: After losing the second match of the Chappell-Hadlee trophy against New Zealand , and having lost 5 of their last six consecutive matches, Australia have lost the top spot of the ICC ODI rankings with South Africa taking the lead.
Revised: After losing the second match of the Chappell-Hadlee trophy against New Zealand - Australia's fifth defeat in their last six consecutive matches, Australia have lost the top spot of the ICC ODI rankings with South Africa taking the lead.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: After losing the second match of the Chappell-Hadlee trophy against New Zealand , and having lost 5 of their last six consecutive matches, Australia have lost the top spot of the ICC ODI rankings with South Africa taking the lead.
Revised: After losing the second match of the Chappell-Hadlee trophy against New Zealand , and having lost 5 of their last six consecutive matches, 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  New Zealand's win edges them further up the table to within a few decimal points of current world No.3 , Pakistan.
Revised:  New Zealand's win edges them further up the table to within a few decimal points of current world number three team , Pakistan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However, Australia still has a vast lead in the Test Match Championship and are still the ODI World Champions having wonthe last two World Cups,
Revised:  However, Australia still has a vast lead in the Test Match Championship and are still the ODI World Champions having won the last two World Cups,
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Fil said that he believes that the insurgents are "...watching us carefully," to determine thier next move
Revised:  Fil said that he believes that the insurgents are "...watching us carefully," to determine their next move
Edit intent: fluency
Original: 12 female volunteers began a 60 day bed-rest marathon  March 19 to study simulated weightlessness effects on women astronauts.
Revised: Volunteers began a 60 day bed-rest marathon March 19 to study simulated weightlessness effects on women astronauts.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: 12 female volunteers began a 60 day bed-rest marathon  March 19 to study simulated weightlessness effects on women astronauts.
Revised: 12 female volunteers began a 60 day bed-rest marathon on March 19 to study simulated weightlessness effects on women astronauts.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The study, Women International Space Simulation for Exploration(WISE), is being conducted at the MEDES Space Clinic in Toulouse, France.
Revised:  The study, Women International Space Simulation for Exploration(WISE), is conducted at the MEDES Space Clinic in Toulouse, France.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, selected from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland , The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland The Netherlands, Poland and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland  The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progresses .
Revised:  The 12 women, select from 1600 applicants , hailing from France,Great Britain, Germany, Finland The Netherlands, Poland , and the Czech Republic , began the study after a 20 day screening for baseline comparison data as the study progressed .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The women will conduct all activities , including eating, bathing, and reading , lying in hospital beds tilted headfirst at a six degree angle.
Revised:  The women will conduct all activities from eating, bathing, and reading , lying in hospital beds tilted headfirst at a six degree angle.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The women will conduct all activities , including eating, bathing, and reading , lying in hospital beds tilted headfirst at a six degree angle.
Revised:  The women will conduct all activities , including eating, bathing, reading and lying in hospital beds tilted headfirst at a six degree angle.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  This particular position, called head-down tilt bed rest , determined from previous studies , removes the vertical load of gravity on the body, inducing changes similar to what astronauts in a genuine weightless environment experience .
Revised:  This particular position, called head-down tilt bed rest was determined from previous studies , removes the vertical load of gravity on the body, inducing changes similar to what astronauts in a genuine weightless environment experience .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This particular position, called head-down tilt bed rest , determined from previous studies , removes the vertical load of gravity on the body, inducing changes similar to what astronauts in a genuine weightless environment experience .
Revised:  This particular position, called head-down tilt bed rest , determined from previous studies to remove the vertical load of gravity on the body, inducing changes similar to what astronauts in a genuine weightless environment experience .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A total of 24 women will participate in the study , the second group of 12 to commence in September.
Revised:  A total of 24 women will participate in the study . A second group of 12 to commence in September.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A total of 24 women will participate in the study , the second group of 12 to commence in September.
Revised:  A total of 24 women will participate in the study , the second group of 12 will join in September.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  One group will serve as a control, receiving no specific treatments, the second will exercise and the third will receive nutritional supplements.
Revised:  One group will serve as a control, receiving no specific treatments, the second will exercise , while the third will receive nutritional supplements.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The study is designed to fill the gaps in knowledge on the differences between men and women of the effects of extended weightlessnessand to develop countermeasures for reducing the debilitating effects of long spaceflights.
Revised:  The study is designed to fill in gaps of knowledge on the differences between men and women of the effects of extended weightlessnessand to develop countermeasures for reducing the debilitating effects of long spaceflights.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The study is designed to fill the gaps in knowledge on the differences between men and women of the effects of extended weightlessnessand to develop countermeasures for reducing the debilitating effects of long spaceflights.
Revised:  The study is designed to fill the gaps in knowledge on the differences between men and women during extended weightlessness. It also aims to develop countermeasures for reducing the debilitating effects of long spaceflights.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Thirteen Canadian soldiers were minorly injured yesterday from three of their light armoured vehicles (LAV III), which smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Revised: Thirteen Canadian soldiers sustained minor injuries yesterday from three of their light armoured vehicles (LAV III), which smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Thirteen Canadian soldiers sustained minor injuries yesterday from three of their light armoured vehicles (LAV III) , which smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Revised: Thirteen Canadian soldiers sustained minor injuries yesterday when three light armoured vehicles (LAV III) , which smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Thirteen Canadian soldiers sustained minor injuries yesterday from three of their light armoured vehicles (LAV III) , which smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Revised: Thirteen Canadian soldiers sustained minor injuries yesterday from three of their light armoured vehicles (LAV III) smashed into each other in Kandahar, Afghanistan.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Founded by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Mark Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials  
Revised:  Founded by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials 
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Founded by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Mark Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials  
Revised:  Founded by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Mark Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original: With funding for bandwidth and storage donated by Brewster Kahle, the Ourmedia website will serve as a repository for free content from throughout the world.
Revised: With funding for bandwidth and storage donated by Brewster Kahle, the Ourmedia website aspires to serve as a repository for free content from throughout the world.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Founded by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Revised:  Started by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, the founder of the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Started by Internet Archive employees J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, who founded the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Revised:  Started by Internet Archive employee J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, who founded the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Started by Internet Archive employees J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, who founded the company that became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Revised:  Started by Internet Archive employees J.D. Lasica and Marc Canter, who founded Macromind, which became Macromedia, Ourmedia has a team of what Lasica refers to as "moderators" that will ensure that the site does not host pornography or copyrighted materials.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Around midnight on Sunday, a pair of bombs exploded on the Samjhauta Express (Friendship Express), a night train going from Delhi, India to Lahore, Pakistan.
Revised: Around midnight on Sunday, a pair of bombs exploded on the (Friendship Express), a night train going from Delhi, India to Lahore, Pakistan.
Edit intent: style
Original:  Two more suitcases with improvised explosive devices have been found on the train.
Revised:  Two more suitcases with have been found on the train.
Edit intent: style
Original:  The Pakistani government also condemned the attack.
Revised:  The also condemned the attack.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The incident comes just before a planned visit of Pakistan's foreign minister Khurshid Mahmud Kasuri to India for peace talks, and two weeks before both countries have scheduled a meeting to exchange information on terrorism.
Revised:  The incident comes just before a planned visit of Pakistan's foreign minister to India for peace talks, and two weeks before both countries have scheduled a meeting to exchange information on terrorism.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The attack also comes days before the anniversary of the Godhra train burning on 27 February, 2002.
Revised:  The attack also comes days before the anniversary of the on 27 February, 2002.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The site's officials earlier said they would adopt a filtering software by the end of last year and till this day YouTube haven' s used any type of filtering system.
Revised: The site's officials earlier said they would adopt a filtering software by the end of last year and till this day YouTube haven' t used any type of filtering system.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old search portal and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has begun offering searches of Wikipedia article titles,  and claims to thereby have indexed over 600,000 Wikipedia terms (perhaps this means that ~80,000 terms are not counted in the official article count;
Revised: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has begun offering searches of Wikipedia article titles, and claims to thereby have indexed over 600,000 Wikipedia terms (perhaps this means that ~80,000 terms are not counted in the official article count;
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  They have been offering visitors  "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year, which both shows a list of potential completions of what you are typing (as you enter search results), and handles term rotations (e.g., for names;
Revised:  They have been offering visitors this kind of "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year, which both shows a list of potential completions of what you are typing (as you enter search results), and handles term rotations (e.g., for names;
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Revised: Surfwax, Inc., a metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Revised: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, announced its release of Wikiwax, a new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Revised: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles . Wikiwax suggests autocompletions of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms while you type , and term-rotation (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Revised: Surfwax, Inc., a 7-year-old metasearch engine and knowledge-tool provider with atrocious website design and a love of bizarre nomenclature, has just announced Wikiwax, its new portal for searching Wikipedia article titles , which sports autocompletion of search terms as you type them, and searches for term-rotations (e.g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Surfwax has previously brought you such well-known marvels as Nextaristhe all-in-one search/upload/store/social-networking portal, and the infamous Surfwax Scholar Plagiarism Guard.
Revised:  Previous Surfwax projects include Nextaris, an all-in-one search/upload/store/social-networking portal, and the infamous Surfwax Scholar Plagiarism Guard.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Surfwax has previously brought you such well-known marvels as Nextaristhe all-in-one search/upload/store/social-networking portal, and the infamous Surfwax Scholar Plagiarism Guard.
Revised:  Surfwax has previously brought you such well-known marvels as Nextaristhe all-in-one search/upload/store/social-networking portal, and 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  They regularly receive praise for their featureset from such prominent critics as SearchEngineWatch's Gary Price, and%DIFDELCMD < [%%% cl aim to offer "the best grip on information from the Open Web".
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% cl aim to offer "the best grip on information from the Open Web".
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  They regularly receive praise for their featureset from such prominent critics as SearchEngineWatch's Gary Price, and%DIFDELCMD < [%%% cl aim to offer "the best grip on information from the Open Web".
Revised:  They regularly receive praise for their featureset from such prominent critics as SearchEngineWatch's Gary Price, and%DIFDELCMD < [%%% aim to offer "the best grip on information from the Open Web".
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They have been offering visitors this kind of "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year ,
Revised:  They have been offering visitors this manner of "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year ,
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  They have been offering visitors this kind of "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year ,
Revised:  They have been offering visitors this kind of "Look-ahead" auto-complete searching for over a year .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Wikiwax suggests   autocompletions of search terms as you type them, and searches for term-rotations (e. g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" will turn up "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Revised:  Wikiwax suggests autocompletions of search terms as you type them, and searches for term-rotations (e. g., for names: "Wales, Jimmy" would find the article "Jimmy Wales" and vice-versa).
Edit intent: clarity