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Original: Inghams logo Anonymous people submitted a video depicting employees of , an Australian poultry producer, to . The video displays animal cruelty at an Inghams plant in , , south-west of Sydney.
Revised: Inghams logo Anonymous people submitted a video depicting employees of , an Australian poultry producer, to . The video displays at an Inghams plant in , , south-west of Sydney.
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Original:  Over 140 hours of footage was recordedusing , showing 136 incidences of animal cruelty and aggravated animal cruelty- defined as crueltythat is so bad that it results in the animals death.
Revised:  Using , over 140 hours of footage was recordedusing , showing 136 incidences of animal cruelty and aggravated animal cruelty- defined as crueltythat is so bad that it results in the animals death.
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Original:  Over 140 hours of footage was recordedusing , showing 136 incidences of animal cruelty and aggravated animal cruelty- defined as crueltythat is so bad that it results in the animals death.
Revised:  Over 140 hours were recorded, depicting 136 incidences of animal cruelty and aggravated animal cruelty- defined as crueltythat is so bad that it results in the animals death.
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Original:  Over 140 hours of footage was recordedusing , showing 136 incidences of animal cruelty and aggravated animal cruelty- defined as crueltythat is so bad that it results in the animals death.
Revised:  Over 140 hours of footage was recordedusing , showing 136 incidences of animal cruelty as well as aggravated animal cruelty, resulting in the animals death.
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Original:  Ms  Hurst said, "Hanging upside down, their legs are already brittle, and we've got footage as well where their legs have actually ripped off from their bodies ... and the legs have been tossed around."
Revised:  Ms . Hurst said, "Hanging upside down, their legs are already brittle, and we've got footage as well where their legs have actually ripped off from their bodies ... and the legs have been tossed around."
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Original: Animal Liberation and the (RSPCA) are  calling for the mandatory installation of CCTV cameras in all Australian abattoirs.
Revised: Animal Liberation and the (RSPCA) are again calling for the mandatory installation of CCTV cameras in all Australian abattoirs.
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Original:  RSPCA chief inspector David O'Shannessy said to that surveillance and inspections of abattoirs should be commonplace in Australia.
Revised:  RSPCA chief inspector David O'Shannessy told the that surveillance and inspections of abattoirs should be commonplace in Australia.
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Original:   Using , over 140 hours were recorded, depicting 136 incidences of animal cruelty as well as aggravated animal cruelty, resulting in the animals' death or severe conditions.
Revised:  And that is true! Using , over 140 hours were recorded, depicting 136 incidences of animal cruelty as well as aggravated animal cruelty, resulting in the animals' death or severe conditions.
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Original:   Using , over 140 hours were recorded, depicting 136 incidences of animal cruelty as well as aggravated animal cruelty, resulting in the animals' death or severe conditions.
Revised:  Using , over 140 hours were recorded, depicting 136 incidences of animal porn as well as aggravated animal cruelty, resulting in the animals' death or severe conditions.
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Original:  The power was needed to run her life support machine , providing her with oxygen . Paramedics were called after two hours, but she was pronounced dead in the early afternoon after being unable to revive her.
Revised:  The power was needed to run her life support machine , providing her with oxygen . Paramedics were called after two hours, but she was pronounced dead after being unable to revive her.
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Original: New Zealander Folole Muliaga died Tuesday morning after Mercury Energy cut off the power in her household due to an outstanding bill of $ 168.
Revised: New Zealander Folole Muliaga died Tuesday morning after Mercury Energy cut off the power in her household due to $ 168.
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Original:  The 44-year-old died two hours after the power was cut by a contractor, who has not been named, working for State Owned Enterprise, Mercury Energy.
Revised:  was paid to Mercury Energy.
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Original:  Brendan Sheehan, spokesperson for the family, said that after the power was cut, Mrs Muliaga suffered from breathing difficulties.
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Original:  The mother-of-four school teacher lived in Mangere, North Auckland and had been suffering from a heart and lung condition, according to relatives of Mrs Muliaga, since February  
Revised:  The mother-of-four school teacher lived in Mangere, North Auckland and had been suffering from a heart and lung condition, according to relatives of Mrs Muliaga, since February . 
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Original:  Evidence has been provided by family members to show that they had made two payments to Mercury Energy in the same month of May trying to clear their outstanding bill .
Revised:  Evidence has been provided by family members to show that they had made two payments to Mercury Energy in the same month trying to clear their outstanding bill .
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Original: Hospital doctors have expressed surprise at the short length of time between when the supply was cut and the death occured .
Revised: Hospital doctors have expressed surprise at the short length of time between when the supply was cut and the death occurred .
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Original: On Saturday, Discover Science Place hosted a mini Maker Faire in Tyler, Texas (US). Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
Revised: On Saturday, hosted a mini Maker Faire in Tyler, Texas (US). Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
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Original: On Saturday, Discover Science Place hosted a mini Maker Faire in Tyler, Texas (US). Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
Revised: On Saturday, Discover Science Place hosted a mini Maker Faire in , (US). Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
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Original:  Some exhibits were quite simple, showing how to modify inexpensive radio-controlled cars using epoxy and LEGO bricks.
Revised:  Some exhibits were quite simple, showing how to modify inexpensive radio-controlled cars using epoxy and bricks.
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Original:  Colleges and university groups were on hand, including representatives from The University of Texas at Tyler , among others.
Revised:  Colleges and university groups were on hand, including representatives from , among others.
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Original: On Saturday, hosted a mini Maker Faire in , (US) . Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
Revised: On Saturday, hosted a mini Maker Faire in , . Multiple vendors and exhibitors were on hand.
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Original:  Two three-dimensional (3D) printers were displayed, showing attendees how the new technology operated.
Revised:  Two were displayed, showing attendees how the new technology operated.
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Original:  According to a news release, the event was one of 60 planned to occur worldwide this year.
Revised:  According to a news release, the event is one of 60 planned to occur worldwide this year.
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Original:  Two were displayed, showing attendees how the new technology operated .
Revised:  Two were displayed, showing attendees how the new technology operates .
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Original:  Dr. Ayatollah Beheshti The two-day conference included representatives from 56 Islamic states to discuss Islamic laws in the judicial system of the participating nations.
Revised:  The two-day conference included representatives from 56 Islamic states to discuss Islamic laws in the judicial system of the participating nations.
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Original: The tribunal is reviewing violations that took place during the general elections on April 2, 2006  , which were declared invalid , due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
Revised: The tribunal was reviewing violations that took place during the general elections on April 2, 2006 , which were declared invalid , due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
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Original: The tribunal is reviewing violations that took place during the general elections on April 2, 2006  , which were declared invalid , due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
Revised: The tribunal is reviewing violations that took place during the April 2, 2006 , which were declared invalid , due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
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Original: The tribunal is reviewing violations that took place during the general elections on April 2, 2006  , which were declared invalid , due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
Revised: The tribunal is reviewing violations that took place during the general elections on April 2, 2006 , which were declared invalid due to widespread charges of corruption and vote buying.
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Original:  The tribunal said Thai Rak Thai had to be dissolved because it lacked political ideology, and that two senior Thai Rak Thai leaders, former deputy leader Thamarak Isarangura and former deputy secretary-general Pongsak Ruktapongpisal, must be held responsible.
Revised:  The tribunal said two party leaders, former deputy leader Thamarak Isarangura and former deputy secretary-general Pongsak Ruktapongpisal, must be held responsible.
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Original:  Both parties  said they would abide by the court's rulings, and denied they were rallying their supporters.
Revised:  Both parties had said they would abide by the court's rulings, and denied they were rallying their supporters.
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Original: Thailand's former ruling party, Thai Rak Thai  was found guilty of election fraud by a Constitutional Tribunal, and ordered to be dissolved.
Revised: Thailand's former ruling party, Thai Rak Thai , was found guilty of election fraud by a Constitutional Tribunal, and ordered to be dissolved.
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Original:  As the Constitutional Tribunal's proceedings continued later into the evening, the mood among Thai Rak Thai officials was less upbeat.
Revised:  Now, with Thai Rak Thai officials was less upbeat.
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Original:  Thousands of security officers were stationed at checkpoints across Bangkok , with a 15,000-strong security force at the ready in their barracks.
Revised:  Thousands of security officers were stationed at checkpoints across the capital , with a 15,000-strong security force at the ready in their barracks.
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Original:  "Thai Rak Thai cannot exist as a political party, therefore the court orders to dissolve Thai Rak Thai party."
Revised:  "Thai Rak Thai cannot exist as a political party, therefore the court orders the dissolution of the Thai Rak Thai party."
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Original:  "Thai Rak Thai cannot exist as a political party, therefore the court orders the dissolution of the Thai Rak Thai party."
Revised:  "Thai Rak Thai cannot exist as a political party, therefore the court orders to dissolve the Thai Rak Thai party."
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Original: A First Historical Score on Cash for Public Good.
Revised: Hillary Clinton's song contest reaches final round
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Original: Hillary Clinton's song contest reaches final round US Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webziens to vote on her official campaign song.
Revised:  US Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webziens to vote on her official campaign song.
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Original: US Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webziens to vote on her official campaign song.
Revised: U.S. Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webziens to vote on her official campaign song.
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Original:  Tunstall is Scottish, Twain is Canadian, and U2 is Irish
Revised:  Tunstall is Scottish, Twain is Canadian, and U2 are Irish
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Original:  Tunstall is Scottish, Twain is Canadian, and U2 are Irish
Revised:  Tunstall is Scottish, Twain is Canadian, and U2 is Irish
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Original: U.S. Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webziens to vote on her official campaign song.
Revised: U.S. Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webizens to vote on her official campaign song.
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Original:  U.S. Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webizens to vote on her official campaign song.
Revised: Hillary Rodham Clinton U.S. Democratic Party presidential candidate Senator Hillary Clinton has been asking webizens to vote on her official campaign song.
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Original: An F15 fighter from the Missouri Air National Guard has crashed near Vincennes, Indiana  . Reports say that the pilot successfully ejected prior to the crash .
Revised: An F15 fighter from the Missouri Air National Guard crashed near Vincennes, Indiana . Reports say that the pilot successfully ejected prior to the crash .
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Original:  The   jet was performing maneuvers with three other aircraft, none of which were involved int he incident.
Revised:  The The fighter jet was performing maneuvers with three other aircraft, none of which were involved int he incident.
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Original:  The   jet was performing maneuvers with three other aircraft, none of which were involved int he incident.
Revised:  The jet was performing maneuvers with three other aircraft, none of which were involved in the incident.
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Original: An F15 fighter from the Missouri Air National Guard crashed near Vincennes, Indiana this morning . Reports say that the pilot successfully ejected prior to the crash and walked to first responders under his own power.
Revised: An F15 fighter from the Missouri Air National Guard crashed near Vincennes, Indiana . Reports say that the pilot successfully ejected prior to the crash and walked to first responders under his own power.
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Original:  The training maneuvers were taking place at Military Operating Area (MOA) Red Hills in southern Illinois and Indiana.
Revised:  The training maneuvers were taking place at Military Operating Area Red Hills in southern Illinois and Indiana.
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Original:  They will be joined by UH60 Blackhawk helicopter support from the 38th Aviation Brigade of the Indiana National Guard from Shelbyville, Indiana
Revised:  They will be joined by UH-60 Blackhawk helicopter support from the 38th Aviation Brigade of the Indiana National Guard from Shelbyville, Indiana
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Original:  United States Air Force F-15 Eagle similar to the one that crashed.
Revised: search fart United States Air Force F-15 Eagle similar to the one that crashed.
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Original: United States Air Force F-15 Eagle similar to the one that crashed.
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Original: Ted Koppel announced he plans to quit as host of the 'Nightline' television program after his contract runs out on December 4, 2005.
Revised: Ted Koppel announced he plans to quit as host of the 'Nightline' television program after his contract runs out December 4, 2005.
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Original:  Television anchormen who have left the in the past several months include Tom Brokaw of NBC and Dan Rather of CBS.
Revised:  Television anchormen who have left in the past several months include Tom Brokaw of NBC and Dan Rather of CBS.
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Original:  KM: Calipers for measuring specimens, DNA sequencer and PC for molecular analysis.
Revised:  KM: for measuring specimens, DNA sequencer and PC for molecular analysis.
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Original:  KM: Calipers for measuring specimens, DNA sequencer and PC for molecular analysis.
Revised:  KM: Calipers for measuring specimens, and for molecular analysis.
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Original: KM : Secondary and primary forest, near wet land.
Revised: KN : Secondary and primary forest, near wet land.
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Original:  KM : Probably small invertebrates, like earthworms, insect, and snails...
Revised:  KN : Probably small invertebrates, like earthworms, insect, and snails...
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Original:  KM : for measuring specimens, and for molecular analysis.
Revised:  KN : for measuring specimens, and for molecular analysis.
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Original:  KM : Collecting in the wild, analysis of data, and getting research permission.
Revised:  KN : Collecting in the wild, analysis of data, and getting research permission.
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Original:  KM : From local government or national museum where Mr. Tao belongs to.
Revised:  KN : From local government or national museum where Mr. Tao belongs to.
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Original:  KM : Yes, for collecting alive one for DNA, and compiling information on habitat, ecology, breeding sites of the species
Revised:  KN : Yes, for collecting alive one for DNA, and compiling information on habitat, ecology, breeding sites of the species
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Original: According to The Japan Times, the 20-year-old Japanese delegate w:Riyo Mori |Riyo Mori was elected on May 28 as the 56th Miss Universe, in a ceremony held at Mexico City  . Riyo, the new Miss Universe titleholder, is from Shizuoka, Japan.
Revised: According to The Japan Times, the 20-year-old Japanese delegate was elected on May 28 as the 56th Miss Universe, in a ceremony held at Mexico City . Riyo, the new Miss Universe titleholder, is from Shizuoka, Japan.
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Original:  She had stayed in Canada to study ballet while she was in a high-school.
Revised:  She had stayed in Canada to study ballet while in high-school.
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Original:  Incidentally, preceded runnerup is Kurara Chibana
Revised:  Incidentally, preceded runner-up is Kurara Chibana
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Original: A man with infected with an extensively drug resistant form of tuberculosis has been placed in isolation in an Atlanta hospital, the first time the United States Government has quarantined a person in over 40 years.
Revised: A man with infected with an extensively drug resistant form of tuberculosis has been placed in isolation in an Atlanta hospital, the first time the United States government has quarantined a person in over 40 years.
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Original:  US Health Officials are currently looking for fellow passengers and others who came into contact with the man in both Europe and America, and searching for the taxi the man used in NYC, in order to prevent further infection
Revised:  US health officials are currently looking for fellow passengers and others who came into contact with the man in both Europe and America, and searching for the taxi the man used in NYC, in order to prevent further infection
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Original:  US Health Officials are currently looking for fellow passengers and others who came into contact with the man in both Europe and America, and searching for the taxi the man used in NYC, in order to prevent further infection
Revised:  US Health Officials are currently looking for fellow passengers and others who came into contact with the man in both Europe and America, and searching for the taxi the man used in NYC, in order to prevent further infections
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Original:  A man with infected with an extensively drug resistant tuberculosis (XDR-TB) has been placed in isolation at Grady Memorial Hospital with an armed guard at the door in Atlanta, Georgia.
Revised: Grady Memorial Hospital in Atlanta, Georgia. A man with infected with an extensively drug resistant tuberculosis (XDR-TB) has been placed in isolation at Grady Memorial Hospital with an armed guard at the door in Atlanta, Georgia.
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Original:  A man with infected with extensively drug resistant tuberculosis (XDR-TB) has been placed in isolation at Grady Memorial Hospital with an armed guard at the door in Atlanta, Georgia.
Revised:  A man infected with extensively drug resistant tuberculosis (XDR-TB) has been placed in isolation at Grady Memorial Hospital with an armed guard at the door in Atlanta, Georgia.
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Original:  No-one was injured in the blaze which id beleived to have been an accident and was extuinguished within minutes by an automatic sprinkler system  
Revised:  No-one was injured in the blaze which id beleived to have been an accident and was extuinguished within minutes by an automatic sprinkler system . 
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Original:  No-one was injured in the blaze which id beleived to have been an accident and was extuinguished within minutes by an automatic sprinkler system.
Revised:  No-one was injured in the blaze which id believed to have been an accident and was extuinguished within minutes by an automatic sprinkler system.
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Original: Oldbury nuclear power station in South Gloucestershire, England caugt fire today after overheating.
Revised: Oldbury nuclear power station in South Gloucestershire, England caught fire today after overheating.
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Original: right Another bomb has exploded late Friday in a shopping center in the Lebanese Christian village of Broummana east of Beirut.
Revised:  Another bomb has exploded late Friday in a shopping center in the Lebanese Christian village of Broummana east of Beirut.
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Original:  Nobody was killed in the blast, but twelve people have been wounded.
Revised: sdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdfsdf Nobody was killed in the blast, but twelve people have been wounded.
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Original: Nobody was killed in the blast, but twelve people have been wounded .
Revised: Flag of Lebanon .
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Original:  Related new
Revised:  The explosion happened at about 9:45pm local time, at the 'Rizk Plaza' shopping mall. It is understood from local media that a bomb was placed in the underground parking area below the complex, although there has been no official confirmation from security services
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Original: The film, called Dark Floors  written in English, began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
Revised: The film, called Dark Floors , is written in English, began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
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Original: Finnish hard rock band Lordi are to star in in a horror movie  .
Revised: Finnish hard rock band Lordi are to star in a horror movie .
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Original:  The film , called Dark Floors, is written in English , began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
Revised:  The film is written in English , began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
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Original:  The film , called Dark Floors, is written in English , began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
Revised:  The film , called Dark Floors, is written in English and began filming earlier this month and will premier in Finland late this year.
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Original:  Monday. Sheila Johnson, a flagger working for Alpine Towing, later said of the commuters affected that they were mostly understanding, saying of them "For the most part people were pretty good about the road being closed,"  
Revised:  Monday. Sheila Johnson, a flagger working for Alpine Towing, later said of the commuters affected that they were mostly understanding, saying of them "For the most part people were pretty good about the road being closed," . 
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Original:  It was later determined he was driving too fast  
Revised:  It was later determined he was driving too fast . He was ultimatly charged over the incident. 
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