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Original: Toshiba Transatlantic Challenge pilot successfully crosses Atlantic and in so doing breaks 5 world records.
Revised: Toshiba Transatlantic Challenge pilot successfully crosses Atlantic and in so doing broke 5 world records.
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Original:  Lighter than air craft lands safely in French countryside Friday evening, July 6. UR
Revised:  Lighter than air craft lands safely in French countryside Friday evening, July 6. Related new
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Original:  The incident occurred on the 1105 BST (UTC+1 Paddington to Plymouth First Great Western  service.
Revised:  The incident occurred on the 1105 BST (UTC+1 Paddington to Plymouth First Great Western ) service.
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Original:  Among the winners were Paul Victor Obeng, influential member of Jerry Rawlings' military government in the 1990s, Dr G.K. Agama, a former governor of the Bank of Ghana, Professor Atukwei Okai, a writer, poet and educationist, Nana Kwame Ampadu, a musician and Ike Quartey, former WBA welterweight champion 
Revised:  Among the winners were Paul Victor Obeng, influential member of Jerry Rawlings' military government in the 1990s, Dr G.K. Agama, a former governor of the Bank of Ghana, Ike Quartey, former WBA welterweight champion 
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Original: President Kufuor is quoted as saying at the award ceremony that "Like the Olympic medallist , we should seek to surpass existing limits to set new records hitherto deemed unattainable.
Revised: President Kufuor is quoted as saying at the award ceremony that "Like the Olympic medalist , we should seek to surpass existing limits to set new records hitherto deemed unattainable.
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Original: Its belive that he was emotionally distraught , and that the shooting has nothing to do with terrorism
Revised: Its belive that he was emotionally distraught and has nothing to do with terrorism
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Original: At 12:15am PST 51 yr old Steven Zegrean from Las Vegas fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony that over looks the floor of the New York New York casino .
Revised: A 51 yr old Steven Zegrean from Las Vegas fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony that over looks the floor of the New York New York casino .
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Original: At 12:15am PST 51 yr old Steven Zegrean from Las Vegas fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony that over looks the floor of the New York New York casino .
Revised: At 12:15am PST 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony that over looks the floor of the New York New York casino .
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Original: At 12:15am PST 51 yr old Steven Zegrean from Las Vegas fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony that over looks the floor of the New York New York casino .
Revised: At 12:15am PST 51 yr old Steven Zegrean from Las Vegas fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino .
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Original:  The shooting left 4 people with non-life threating injuries the were treated and released from a local hospital later that morning.
Revised:  The shooting left 4 people with non-life threatening injuries the were treated and released from a local hospital later that morning.
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Original:  Mr  Zegrean was quickly arrested on felony charges including attempted murder,battery with a deadly weapon and discharging a firearm in an occupied structure.
Revised:  Mr Mr. Zegrean was quickly arrested on felony charges including attempted murder,battery with a deadly weapon and discharging a firearm in an occupied structure.
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Original:  Its belive that he was emotionally distraught and has nothing to do with terrorism
Revised:  It is believed that he was emotionally distraught and has nothing to do with terrorism
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Original:  It is believed that he was emotionally distraught and has nothing to do with terrorism
Revised:  It is believed that he was emotionally distraught 
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Original: A 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino  in Las Vegas  .
Revised: A 51-year-old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino in Las Vegas .
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Original: A 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino  in Las Vegas  .
Revised: A 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino Casino in Las Vegas .
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Original: A 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino  in Las Vegas  .
Revised: A 51 yr old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York casino in Las Vegas , Nevada .
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Original:  The shooting left 4 people with non-life threatening injuries the were treated and released from a local hospital later that morning.
Revised:  The shooting left 4 people with non-life threatening injuries the were treated and released from a local hospital laterthat morning.
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Original: Image:Newyorknewyork-corner.jpg|New York New York Hotel Casino facing the MGM Grand.
Revised:  Casino facing the MGM Grand.
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Original: Image:Newyorknewyork-corner.jpg|New York New York Hotel Casino facing the MGM Grand.
Revised: Image:Newyorknewyork-corner.jpg|New York New York Hotel 
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Original:  A 51-year-old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York Hotel Casino in Las Vegas , Nevada.
Revised:  A 51-year-old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the Casino in Las Vegas , Nevada.
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Original:  A 51-year-old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York Hotel Casino in Las Vegas , Nevada.
Revised:  A 51-year-old man fired 16 rounds from a semiautomatic handgun from a balcony overlooking the floor of the New York New York Hotel in , Nevada.
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Original:  The incident occurred at 12:15 a.m. PST (UTC-7 ).
Revised:  The incident occurred at 12:15 a.m. ( ).
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Original:  Also present were Roger Agnelli ( Vale do Rio Doce company president) and Eduardo Dutra ( Petrobras , government oil company, president).
Revised:  Also present were ( company president) and Eduardo Dutra ( Petrobras , government oil company, president).
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Original:  Also present were Roger Agnelli ( Vale do Rio Doce company president) and Eduardo Dutra ( Petrobras , government oil company, president).
Revised:  Also present were Roger Agnelli ( Vale do Rio Doce company president) and Eduardo Dutra ( , government oil company, president).
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Original:  This meeting is part of a new political economy agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's market economy status, and China has promised to buy more Brazilian products
Revised:  This meeting is part of a new agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's market economy status, and China has promised to buy more Brazilian products
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Original:  This meeting is part of a new political economy agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's market economy status, and China has promised to buy more Brazilian products
Revised:  This meeting is part of a new political economy agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's status, and China has promised to buy more Brazilian products
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Original:  This meeting is part of a new political economy agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's market economy status, and China has promised to buy more Brazilian products
Revised:  This meeting is part of a new political economy agreement between Brazil and China where Brazil has recognized mainland China's market economy status, and China has promised to buy more 
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Original:  The bomb blasts blamed on Sunni militants killed 73 and wounded hundreds of Iraqi civilians, some who were trapped under rubble
Revised:  The bomb blast, blamed on Sunni militants killed 73 and wounded hundreds of Iraqi civilians, some who were trapped under rubble
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Original: West Indies have beaten England by 93 runs in the third and final One-Day International of the West Indies tour of England at Trent Bridge, Nottingham ,  England.
Revised: have beaten by 93 runs in the third and final One-Day International of the West Indies tour of England at Trent Bridge, Nottingham , England.
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Original: West Indies have beaten England by 93 runs in the third and final One-Day International of the West Indies tour of England at Trent Bridge, Nottingham ,  England.
Revised: West Indies have beaten England by 93 runs in the third and final One-Day International of the West Indies tour of England at Trent Bridge, Nottingham , , England.
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Original:  The only wickets for England were taken by Liam Plunkett (3-59) and James Anderson (2-51).
Revised:  The only wickets for England were taken by (3-59) and James Anderson (2-51).
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Original:  The only wickets for England were taken by Liam Plunkett (3-59) and James Anderson (2-51).
Revised:  The only wickets for England were taken by Liam Plunkett (3-59) and (2-51).
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Original:  Although Owais Shah scored 51, England lost too many batsmen cheaply including Kevin Pietersen for 0.
Revised:  Although scored 51, England lost too many batsmen cheaply including Kevin Pietersen for 0.
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Original:  Although Owais Shah scored 51, England lost too many batsmen cheaply including Kevin Pietersen for 0.
Revised:  Although Owais Shah scored 51, England lost too many batsmen cheaply including for 0.
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Original:  Fidel Edwards took 3-30 and Daren Powell took 4-40 for the West Indies.
Revised:  took 3-30 and Daren Powell took 4-40 for the West Indies.
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Original:  Fidel Edwards took 3-30 and Daren Powell took 4-40 for the West Indies.
Revised:  Fidel Edwards took 3-30 and took 4-40 for the West Indies.
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Original:  Previously on the tour, England won a four match Test series 3-0 and drew a two match Twenty20 series 1-1. England:
Revised:  Previously on the tour, England won a four match series 3-0 and drew a two match Twenty20 series 1-1. England:
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Original:  Previously on the tour, England won a four match Test series 3-0 and drew a two match Twenty20 series 1-1. England:
Revised:  Previously on the tour, England won a four match Test series 3-0 and drew a two match series 1-1. England:
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Original:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the company 's board of directors, who will not be available  until Monday the 9th at the earliest. 208.127.136.223 17:36 , 7 July 2007 (UTC)
Revised:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the company 's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest. 208.127.136.223 17:36 , 7 July 2007 (UTC)
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Original:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest. 208.127.136.223 18:54, 7 July 2007 (UTC)
Revised:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest. 
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Original: Orange County, California - In an ongoing labor dispute from May of this year, Teamsters Local 952, which represents the Orange County Transportation Authority's 1,200 coach operators, went on strike at 12:35AM (0035 hrs) PDT Saturday morning after a cooling-off period declared by California State Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger expired.
Revised:  In an ongoing labor dispute from May of this year, Teamsters Local 952, which represents the Orange County Transportation Authority's 1,200 coach operators, went on strike at 12:35AM (0035 hrs) PDT Saturday morning after a cooling-off period declared by California State Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger expired.
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Original:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest . External links Google news search: octa strik
Revised:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest External links Google news search: octa strik
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Original:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest . External links Google news search: octa strik
Revised:  The strike was declared after the Authority's bargaining agent said he lacked authority to approve a union counter proposal, which he said had to be taken before the OCTA's board of directors, who will not be available to meet until Monday the 9th at the earliest . 
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Original:  Caracas, Venezuela - The fifth edition of the Expo Gastronomía food event finished its run yesterday in Caracas at the Plaza Francia in Altamira .
Revised:  Caracas, Venezuela — The fifth edition of the Expo Gastronomía food event finished its run yesterday in Caracas at the Plaza Francia in Altamira .
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Original:  Caracas, Venezuela - The fifth edition of the Expo Gastronomía food event finished its run yesterday in Caracas at the Plaza Francia in Altamira .
Revised:  Caracas, Venezuela - The fifth edition of the Expo Gastronomía food event finished its run yesterday in Caracas at the Plaza Francia in .
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Original:  In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine exhibitors representing eight countries including Tunisia, Germany  and Italy.
Revised:  In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine exhibitors representing eight countries including Tunisia, Germany , and Italy.
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Original:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: Typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and metalwork)  and hotel businesses and tourism.
Revised:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and metalwork) and hotel businesses and tourism.
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Original:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: Typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and metalwork)  and hotel businesses and tourism.
Revised:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: Typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and metalwork) , and hotel businesses and tourism.
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Original:  The event was sponsored by ,  , , G2000 Events, Cgym Group  and Mayor's Office.
Revised:  The event was sponsored by , , G2000 Events, Cgym Group and Mayor's Office.
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Original:  The event was sponsored by ,  , , G2000 Events, Cgym Group  and Mayor's Office.
Revised:  The event was sponsored by , , , G2000 Events, Cgym Group , and Mayor's Office.
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Original:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and metalwork ), and hotel businesses and tourism.
Revised:  The exhibitors were divided into four categories: typical food of the country they represent, handicrafts, gastronomy (comprised of cooking books and products, and ), and hotel businesses and tourism.
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Original: The event was sponsored by , La Granja, Oroweat, G2000 Events, Cgym Group, and Mayor's Office.
Revised: The event was sponsored by , La Granja, Oroweat, G2000 Events, CGYM Group, and Mayor's Office.
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Original: The event was sponsored by , La Granja, Oroweat, G2000 Events, CGYM Group, and  Mayor's Office.
Revised: The event was sponsored by , La Granja, Oroweat, G2000 Events, CGYM Group, and the Mayor's Office.
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Original: In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine exhibitors representing eight countries including Tunisia, Germany, and Italy .
Revised: In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine exhibitors representing eight countries around the world .
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Original: In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine exhibitors representing eight countries around the world.
Revised: In its fifth version, the exhibition organizers estimated to receive between 10,000 and 13,000 people to the event, which had nine pavilions representing eight countries around the world.
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Original:  Another first, the All England Club is paying men's and women's single champions equal prize money.
Revised:  Another first, the All England Club is paying men's and women's singles champions equal prize money.
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Original:  Venus Williams triumphed over Marion Bartoli of France, 6-4, 6-1. A Wimbledon champion in 2000, 2001 and 2005, Williams was not the favorite to win the title  this year.
Revised:  Venus Williams triumphed over Marion Bartoli of France, 6-4, 6-1. A Wimbledon champion in 2000, 2001 and 2005, Williams was not the favorite to win the title again this year.
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Original:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club -- we're playing under equal terms 
Revised:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club - we're playing under equal terms 
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