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Original:  The movement towards widening the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
Revised:  According to Cardinal Darío Castrillón Hoyos, the move towards widening the use of the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
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Original:  According to Cardinal Darío Castrillón Hoyos, the move towards widening the use of the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
Revised:  The movement towards widening the use of the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
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Original:  According to Cardinal Darío Castrillón Hoyos, the move towards widening the use of the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
Revised:  According to Cardinal Darío Castrillón Hoyos, the move towards widening the Tridentine Mass was done in part to help bring back to the main church body various schismatic groups, such as the Society of St. Pius X that reject Vatican II's reforms.
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Original:  The licence was revoked because the sate requires at least two aircraft to be commercially operated and because of the fact that it it “ was lacking in pilots and human resources ” . Also, the age of the jetliner meant that it would require a test called a 'C-Check' before it could begin commercial services, at a cost of $120,000.
Revised:  The licence was revoked because the sate requires at least two aircraft to be commercially operated and because of the fact that it " was lacking in pilots and human resources ” . Also, the age of the jetliner meant that it would require a test called a 'C-Check' before it could begin commercial services, at a cost of $120,000.
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Original:  The licence was revoked because the sate requires at least two aircraft to be commercially operated and because of the fact that it it “ was lacking in pilots and human resources ” . Also, the age of the jetliner meant that it would require a test called a 'C-Check' before it could begin commercial services, at a cost of $120,000.
Revised:  The licence was revoked because the sate requires at least two aircraft to be commercially operated and because of the fact that it it “ was lacking in pilots and human resources " . Also, the age of the jetliner meant that it would require a test called a 'C-Check' before it could begin commercial services, at a cost of $120,000.
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Original: Cindy Cohn of the EFF holds a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA  A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA  Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case  As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a new tactic.
Revised: Cindy Cohn of the EFF holds a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a new tactic.
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Original: Cindy Cohn of the EFF holds a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA  A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA  Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case  As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a new tactic.
Revised: Cindy Cohn of the EFF holds a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a new tactic.
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Original:  Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a new tactic.
Revised:  Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license A closer shot of a Betamax tape signed by Jack Valenti of the MPAA Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) got into the at by adopting a novel tactic.
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Original:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) , arrivedat the courthouse , EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes ;
Revised:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) arrived , EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes ;
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Original:  In 1982, Valenti testified before the US Congress in  an effort to outlaw Sony's Betamax, an early video cassette recorder .
Revised:  In testimony before the US Congress in an effort to outlaw Sony's Betamax, an early video cassette recorder .
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Original:  In 1982, Valenti testified before the US Congress in  an effort to outlaw Sony's Betamax, an early video cassette recorder .
Revised:  In 1982, Valenti testified before the US Congress in 1982, Valenti sided with an effort to outlaw Sony's Betamax, an early video cassette recorder .
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Original:  In 1982, Valenti testified before the US Congress in  an effort to outlaw Sony's Betamax, an early video cassette recorder .
Revised:  In 1982, Valenti testified before the US Congress in an effort to outlaw Sony's early video cassette recorder .
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Original:   The current case , MGM v. Grokster , has some similarities.
Revised:  The current case , MGM v. Grokster has some similarities.
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Original:  Both disputes concerned new technology used for copying media-- exclusively video in the  Betamax case, all digital media in the  case of Grokster.
Revised:  Both disputes concern new technology uses for copying media — exclusively video in the Betamax case, all digital media in the case of Grokster.
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Original:  A recent statement from Recording Artists' Coalition spokesperson and professional chanteuse Sheryl Crow points out that with the Betamax , "a second copy turned out to be of measurably inferior quality," while with Grokster, "one could possibly distribute millions of perfectly reproduced copies."
Revised:  A recent statement from Recording Artists' Coalition spokesperson and professional chanteuse , Sheryl Crow, points out that with the Betamax , "a second copy turned out to be of measurably inferior quality," while with Grokster, "one could possibly distribute millions of perfectly reproduced copies."
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Original:  A recent statement from Recording Artists' Coalition spokesperson and professional chanteuse Sheryl Crow points out that with the Betamax , "a second copy turned out to be of measurably inferior quality," while with Grokster, "one could possibly distribute millions of perfectly reproduced copies."
Revised:  A recent statement from Recording Artists' Coalition spokesperson and professional chanteuse Sheryl Crow points out that with Betamax technology , "a second copy turned out to be of measurably inferior quality," while with Grokster, "one could possibly distribute millions of perfectly reproduced copies."
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Original:  Luis Villa, Creative Commons license Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) got into the at by adopting a novel tactic.
Revised:  Luis Villa, Creative Commons license Protesters outside the Supreme Court in Washington, DC during the MGM v. Grokster case Photo: Luis Villa, Creative Commons license As the case between film studio Metro Goldwyn Mayer and file-sharing software firm Grokster continues in the US Supreme Court, protesters from the Electronic Frontier Foundation (EFF) adopted a novel tactic.
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Original:  EFF Staff Technologist , Seth Schoen , arrived at the scene outside the courthouse and was prepared with several Betamax tapes.
Revised:  EFF Staff Technologist Seth Schoen arrived at the scene outside the courthouse and was prepared with several Betamax tapes.
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Original:  EFF Staff Technologist , Seth Schoen , arrived at the scene outside the courthouse and was prepared with several Betamax tapes.
Revised:  EFF Staff Technologist , Seth Schoen , arrived at the courthouse with several Betamax tapes.
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Original:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA)  arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes , to which Valenti complied .
Revised:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) , arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes , to which Valenti complied .
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Original:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA)  arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes , to which Valenti complied .
Revised:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA) arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes ; Valenti complied with her request .
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Original:  The Valenti testimony included the oft-quoted phrase, "I say to you that the VCR is to the American film producer and the American public as the Boston strangler is to the woman home alone." used by EFF protesters to deride the MGM arguments.
Revised:  The Valenti testimony included the oft-quoted phrase, "I say to you that the VCR is to the American film producer and the American public as the Boston strangler is to the woman home alone." 
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Original:  The case  before the Supreme Court now , MGM v. Grokster, has some similarities to the Betamax case of 1982.
Revised:  The case now before the Supreme Court now , MGM v. Grokster, has some similarities to the Betamax case of 1982.
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Original:  The case  before the Supreme Court now , MGM v. Grokster, has some similarities to the Betamax case of 1982.
Revised:  The case before the Supreme Court , MGM v. Grokster, has some similarities to the Betamax case of 1982.
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Original:  Both disputes concern new technology uses for copying media — exclusively video in the earlier Betamax case, all digital media in the current case of Grokster.
Revised:  Both disputes concern new technologies used for copying media — exclusively video in the earlier Betamax case, all digital media in the current case of Grokster.
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Original:  As Jack Valenti, head of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA), arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes;
Revised:  As Jack Valenti, until recently the president of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA), arrived, EFF Media Coordinator Annalee Newitz asked Valenti to sign one of the tapes;
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Original: Washington, DC – A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
Revised: Washington, DC – A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Edward Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
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Original: The bill was a large, complex bill  that would have made many changes to American immigration laws, including an expanded "guest worker" plan and a "path to citizenship" for aliens currently residing illegally in America.
Revised: The bill was a large, complex bill that would have made many changes to American immigration laws, including an expanded "guest worker" plan and a "path to citizenship" for immigrants currently residing illegally in America.
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Original:  Proponents argued that the bill would have fixed enforcement problems with current immigration policy  , while opponents charged that it amounted to an "illegal alien amnesty" (or "shamnesty," as some critics dubbed it) .
Revised:  Proponents argued that the bill would have fixed enforcement problems with current immigration policy , while opponents charged that it amounted to an "illegal alien amnesty" .
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Original:  Public opinion polls showed that the bill was fairly unpopular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things wors
Revised:  Public opinion polls showed that the bill was not popular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things wors
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Original:  Public opinion polls showed that the bill was fairly unpopular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things wors
Revised:  Public opinion polls showed that the bill was fairly unpopular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things worse
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Original:  Proponents argued that the bill would have fixed enforcement problems with current immigration policy and that it was a reasonable compromise, while opponents charged that it amounted to an "illegal alien amnesty" . Public opinion polls showed that the bill was not popular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things worse 
Revised:  Proponents argued that the bill would have fixed enforcement problems with current immigration policy and that it was a reasonable compromise, while opponents charged that it amounted to an "illegal alien amnesty" . Public opinion polls showed that the bill was unpopular among Americans surveyed, many of whom believed it would make things worse 
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Original: A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Edward Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
Revised: A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
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Original: A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
Revised: The Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
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Original: A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill back by both President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
Revised: A Comprehensive Immigration Reform Bill backed by both United States President George W. Bush and Massachusetts Senator Ted Kennedy failed to receive enough cloture votes to overcome a possible filibuster and move on to a final vote in the United States Senate.
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Original:  According to Rasmussen Reports, only 22\% of Americans favored the bill as of June 25 
Revised:  According to Rasmussen Reports, only 22\% of Americans favored the bill as of June 25. 
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Original: The bill was a large, complex bill was a compromise referred to as the "grand bargain" that would have made many changes to American immigration laws, including an expanded "guest worker" plan and a "path to citizenship" for immigrants currently residing illegally in America.
Revised: The large, complex bill was a compromise referred to as the "grand bargain" that would have made many changes to American immigration laws, including an expanded "guest worker" plan and a "path to citizenship" for immigrants currently residing illegally in America.
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Original: The first new channel HOB plans to launch in Asia is HBO Signature, which is targeted to women.
Revised: The first new channel HBO plans to launch in Asia is HBO Signature, which is targeted to women.
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Original:  The West Indian innings started off badly by losing Gayle early, however they turned their fortunes around with some attacking and aggresive cricket and posted a huge total of 208.
Revised:  The West Indian innings started off badly by losing Gayle early, however they turned their fortunes around with some attacking and aggressive cricket and posted a huge total of 208.
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Original:  Had they not have lost the early wickets, England would have probably won the match  take a 1-0 lead in the series.
Revised:  Had they not have lost the early wickets, England would have probably won the match to take a 1-0 lead in the series.
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Original: White House portrait  "   Lady Bird" Johnson was released Thursday after a week at Seton Hospital after being admitted for tests because she was not feeling well.
Revised: White House portrait " " Lady Bird" Johnson was released Thursday after a week at Seton Hospital after being admitted for tests because she was not feeling well.
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Original:  Image:Lady Bird Johnson planting dogwood 1965.jpg|Lady Bird Johnson and an unidentified woman look on as Muriel Humphrey, wife of Vice President Hubert Humphrey shovels dirt around a dogwood tree planted along I-95 in Virginia, during her "Landscape-Landmark Tour" on May 11, 1965.
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Original: White House portrait [[Image:Lady Bird Johnson planting dogwood 1965.jpg|Lady Bird Johnson and an unidentified woman look on as Muriel Humphrey, wife of Vice President Hubert Humphrey shovels dirt around a dogwood tree planted along I-95 in Virginia, during her "Landscape-Landmark Tour" on May 11, 1965.]]  "Lady Bird" Johnson was released Thursday after a week at Seton Hospital after being admitted for tests because she was not feeling well.
Revised: White House portrait [[Image:Lady Bird Johnson planting dogwood 1965.jpg|Lady Bird Johnson and an unidentified woman look on as Muriel Humphrey, wife of Vice President Hubert Humphrey shovels dirt around a dogwood tree planted along I-95 in Virginia, during her "Landscape-Landmark Tour" on May 11, 1965.]] Former First Lady "Lady Bird" Johnson was released Thursday after a week at Seton Hospital after being admitted for tests because she was not feeling well.
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Original:  She is the widow of Lyndon B. Johnson and former First Lady of the United States from 1963 to 1969.
Revised:  She is the widow of Lyndon B. Johnson , President of the United States from 1963 to 1969.
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Original: Japan's Minister of Finance Kiichi Miyazawa(left) in 1996 , meeting U.S. Secretary of Treasury Robert Rubin.
Revised: Kiichi Miyazawa, left, meets in 1996 , meeting U.S. Secretary of Treasury Robert Rubin.
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Original: Japan's Minister of Finance Kiichi Miyazawa(left) in 1996 , meeting U.S. Secretary of Treasury Robert Rubin.
Revised: Japan's Minister of Finance Kiichi Miyazawa(left) in 1996 with U.S. Secretary of Treasury Robert Rubin.
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Original:  Former Prime Minister Kiichi Miyazawa died in Tokyo at his home on Thursday.
Revised:  Former Prime Minister Kiichi Miyazawa died at his home on Thursday.
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Original:  He was Prime Minister of Japan from 1991 to 1993.
Revised:  He served as prime minister from 1991 to 1993.
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Original:  Category:Obituaries Category:Asia Category:Jap        
Revised:  Category:Obituaries Category:Asia Category:Jap "A nation can be governed either by the rule of right or the rule of might. I will not stand by the rule of might. The position of prime minister should not be acquired by really trying to," he was once quoted as saying. 
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Original: Elected prime minister in 1991 as a member of the conservative Liberal Democratic Party, he tried unsuccessfully to save the economy following the bursting of an asset-speculation "bubble" in the last 1980s, and also tried to push through political reform bills.
Revised: Elected prime minister in 1991 as a member of the conservative Liberal Democratic Party, he tried unsuccessfully to save the economy following the bursting of an asset-speculation "bubble" in the late 1980s, and also tried to push through political reform bills.
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Original: The Geneva, Switzerland-based International Committee of the Red Cross, or ICRC, said the Myanmar junta is causing thousands of people to suffer, especially along the border with Thailand, where government soldiers raid villages, destroy food stocks , force people from their homes and commit acts of violence, including murder and child abuse.
Revised: The Geneva, Switzerland-based International Committee of the Red Cross, or ICRC, said the Myanmar junta is causing thousands of people to suffer, especially along the border with Thailand, where government soldiers raid villages, destroy food supplies , force people from their homes and commit acts of violence, including murder and child abuse.
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Original:  The generals who run Myanmar "  have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger was quoted as saying by Reuters.
Revised:  " have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger was quoted as saying by Reuters.
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Original:  "The continuing deadlock with the authorities has led the ICRC to take the exceptional step of making its concerns public," Kellenberger continued. 
Revised:  "The continuing deadlock ... has led the ICRC to take the exceptional step of making its concerns public," Kellenberger continued. 
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