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Original:  The bombs were on a highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir  and Muzaffarabad,  capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
Revised:  The bombs were on a highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir , and Muzaffarabad, capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
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Original:  The bombs were on a highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir  and Muzaffarabad,  capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
Revised:  The bombs were on a highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir and Muzaffarabad, the capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
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Original:  The Kashmir territory has been in dispute between Indian and Pakistan since that time, with China joining the dispute in 1962 when it took control of a region along the eastern border.
Revised:  The Kashmir territory has been under dispute by India and Pakistan since that time, with China joining the dispute in 1962 when it took control of a region along the eastern border.
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Original:  The bus link is seen as a major step toward healing the hostilities between India and Pakistan and allowing families, separated for decades by the dispute, to re-unite.
Revised:  The bus link is seen as a major step toward healing the hostilities between India and Pakistan by allowing families, separated for decades by the dispute, to re-unite.
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Original:  The bus link is seen as a major step toward healing the hostilities between India and Pakistan and allowing families, separated for decades by the dispute, to re-unite.
Revised:  The bus link is seen as a major step toward healing the hostilities between India and Pakistan and allowing families, separated for decades during the dispute, to re-unite.
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Original:  Since 1989  a handful of Islamic militant groups have fought for Kashmir to become independent or to merge with predominantly Muslim Pakistan.
Revised:  Since 1989 , a handful of Islamic militant groups have fought for Kashmir to become independent or to merge with predominantly Muslim Pakistan.
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Original:  With the opening of the bus route coming on the top of other so-called "confidence-building" moves between Pakistan and India, the militants apparently feel their movement is under threat.
Revised:  With the bus route opening coming on the top of other so-called "confidence-building" moves between Pakistan and India, the militants apparently feel their movement is under threat.
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Original: In response to pressure from students and faculty, Harvard University announced on April 4 that it would sell its 67,200 shares of PetroChina stock, the Harvard Crimson reported.
Revised: In response to pressure from students and faculty, Harvard University announced on April 4 that it would sell its shares of PetroChina stock, the Harvard Crimson reported.
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Original: The approval of 18 months of added funding for the NASA Mars rovers, Spirit and Opportunity, means that the twin rovers continue their expoloration of "fantastic" landscapes for an additional 14 months.
Revised: The approval of 18 months of added funding for the NASA Mars rovers, Spirit and Opportunity, means that the twin rovers continue their exploration of "fantastic" landscapes for an additional 14 months.
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Original:  Spirit’s rock abrasion tool grinding teeth might be nearly useless after exposing the interior of five times more rocks than its original design goal of only three rocks .
Revised:  Spirit’s rock abrasion tool grinding teeth might be nearly useless after exposing the interior of five times more rocks than its original design goal of only three rocks 
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Original:  For more information about the rovers and their discoveries on the Internet, visit: UR
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Original: The wedding was the first to occur since the same-sex  law was adopted on May 18.
Revised: The wedding was the first to occur since the same-sex marriage law was adopted on May 18.
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Original:  It was attended by a hundred guests and security was tight outside the city hall, where a small group of protestors also gathered.
Revised:  It was attended by a hundred guests and security was tight outside the city hall, where a small group of protesters also gathered.
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Original:  Just on Sunday, tension where high in Paris when opponents to same-sex marriage staged demonstrations throughout the city.
Revised:  On Sunday, tensions were high in when opponents of same-sex marriage staged demonstrations throughout the city.
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Original:  Over 4,500 police took part to secure the eventand activists waved pink and blue flags.
Revised:  Over 4,500 police officers were on duty to provide security for the event, where activists waved pink and blue flags.
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Original:  Tensions  increased after right-wing historian and writer Dominique Venner, 78 shot himself dead inside the Notre Dame Cathedral last week.
Revised:  Tensions also increased after right-wing historian and writer Dominique Venner, 78 shot himself dead inside the Notre Dame Cathedral last week.
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Original:  Tensions  increased after right-wing historian and writer Dominique Venner, 78 shot himself dead inside the Notre Dame Cathedral last week.
Revised:  Tensions increased after right-wing historian and writer Dominique Venner, 78 , committed suicide by shooting himself inside the Notre Dame Cathedral last week.
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Original:  His suicide was seen as a political protest against gay marriage and a note left on the alter before his death calling France to return to their Christian origins.
Revised:  His suicide was seen as a political protest against same-sex marriage and a note left on the alter before his death calling France to return to their Christian origins.
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Original:  His suicide was seen as a political protest against gay marriage and a note left on the alter before his death calling France to return to their Christian origins.
Revised:  His suicide was seen as a political protest against gay marriage and a note left on the altar before his death calling France to return to their Christian origins.
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Original:  Protest and debate have continued since last November , however activists failed to block the marriage law passed last month.
Revised:  Protest and debate have continued since last November although activists failed to block the marriage law passed last month.
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Original:  Marshiest on Sunday believe the "marriage for all" act will have damaging consequences as it may open pathways for same-sex couples to adopt children.
Revised:  Marchers on Sunday believe the "marriage for all" act will have damaging consequences as it may open pathways for same-sex couples to adopt children.
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Original:  The sexually graphic film is directed by French-  . Last month France was the fourteenth country worldwide, and 9th within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage, along with , , , , and .
Revised:  The sexually graphic film is directed by French- filmmaker . Last month France was the fourteenth country worldwide, and 9th within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage, along with , , , , and .
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Original:  The sexually graphic film is directed by French-  . Last month France was the fourteenth country worldwide, and 9th within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage, along with , , , , and .
Revised:  The sexually graphic film is directed by French- . Last month France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage, along with , , , , and .
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Original:  A hot topic around the globe, twelve states have also followed suit
Revised:  A hot topic around the globe, twelve states also have legal same-sex marriage
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Original: Last month  France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage  , along with , ,  , , and .
Revised: Last month , France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage , along with , , , , and .
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Original: Last month  France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage  , along with , ,  , , and .
Revised: Last month France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage , , , , , and .
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Original: Last month  France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage  , along with , ,  , , and .
Revised: Last month France was the fourteenth country in the world, and the ninth within the EU to legalise same-sex marriage , along with , , and , , and .
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Original:  It was attended by a hundred guests and security was tight outside the city hall , where a small group of protesters also gathered .
Revised:  It was attended by hundreds guests and security was tight outside the city hall , where a small group of protesters also gathered .
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Original:  It was attended by a hundred guests and security was tight outside the city hall , where a small group of protesters also gathered .
Revised:  It was attended by a hundred guests and security was tight outside the city hall .
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Original:  It was attended by hundreds  guests and security was tight outside the city hall.
Revised:  It was attended by hundreds of guests and security was tight outside the city hall.
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Original:  A dozen far-right rivals to the ruling hung a banner over their headquarters campaigning for current President  to resign.
Revised:  A dozen far-right rivals to the ruling hung a banner over their headquarters campaigning for current President Francois Hollande to resign.
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Original:  France joins countries including  , , , , and , and twelve  states, that have legalised same-sex marriage
Revised:  France joins countries including , and , and twelve states, that have legalised same-sex marriage
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Original:  France joins countries including  , , , , and , and twelve  states, that have legalised same-sex marriage
Revised:  France joins countries including , , , , and twelve states, that have legalised same-sex marriage
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Original: The crash is the second to occur this week with an Amtrak train;
Revised: The crash is the second to occur this week with a train;
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Original:  All four people in that car were kille
Revised:  All four people in the car were killed; no one on the train was injure
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Original:  no one on the train was injure
Revised:  no one on the train was injured
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Original:  It was reported the pickup truck simple drove in front of the train.
Revised:  It was reported the pickup truck simply drove in front of the train.
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Original:  on Monday, a driver in a Pontiac Grand Am deliberately ignored the lights and crossing arms at another railroad crossing in the area, and drove around them, into the path of a different Amtrak train on the same route.
Revised:  on Monday, an idiotic driver in a Pontiac Grand Am deliberately ignored the lights and crossing arms at another railroad crossing in the area, and drove around them, into the path of a different Amtrak train on the same route.
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Original:  on Monday, an idiotic driver in a Pontiac Grand Am deliberately ignored the lights and crossing arms at another railroad crossing in the area, and drove around them, into the path of a different Amtrak train on the same route.
Revised:  on Monday, a driver in a Pontiac Grand Am deliberately ignored the lights and crossing arms at another railroad crossing in the area, and drove around them, into the path of a different Amtrak train on the same route.
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Original: Soler , who now gets to wear the white jersey for young riders, was excited by his stage victory: "It’s an incredible day.
Revised: Soler was excited by his stage victory: "It’s an incredible day.
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Original:     General classification after stage 9 RankRiderTeamTime1Michael RasmussenRabobank 43h 52' 48"2Alejandro ValverdeCaisse d'Epargne +2' 35"3 Iban MayoSaunier Duval-Prodir +2' 39"4 Cadel EvansPredictor-Lotto +2' 41"5Alberto ContadorDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team +3' 08"6Christophe MoreauAG2R Prévoyance +3' 18"7 Carlos SastreTeam CSC +3' 39"8 Andreas KlodenAstana Team +3' 50"9Levi LeipheimerDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team +3' 53"10 Kim KirchenT-Mobile Team +5' 06
Revised:  General classification after stage 9 RankRiderTeamTime1Michael RasmussenRabobank 43h 52' 48"2Alejandro ValverdeCaisse d'Epargne +2' 35"3 Iban MayoSaunier Duval-Prodir +2' 39"4 Cadel EvansPredictor-Lotto +2' 41"5Alberto ContadorDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team +3' 08"6Christophe MoreauAG2R Prévoyance +3' 18"7 Carlos SastreTeam CSC +3' 39"8 Andreas KlödenAstana Team +3' 50"9Levi LeipheimerDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team +3' 53"10 Kim KirchenT-Mobile Team +5' 06
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Original:  The sealed list, presented to the International Criminal Court  on Tuesday, was drawn up following an investigation by the UN into claims of killings, torture and rape commited by Government forces and militias in the Darfur region.
Revised:  The sealed list, presented to the International Criminal Court (ICC) on Tuesday, was drawn up following an investigation by the UN into claims of killings, torture and rape commited by Government forces and militias in the Darfur region.
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Original:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, instead snubbed the UN resolution passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court, adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
Revised:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court, adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
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Original:  As the ICC, based in the Hague, received thousands of pages of evidence collected by UN investigators , Sudanese protesters descended upon the gates of the UN compund in Khartoum, fiercely criticising the UN's involvement in the Darfur conflict.
Revised:  As the ICC, based in the Hague, received thousands of pages of evidence collected by UN investigators . Sudanese protesters descended upon the gates of the UN compund in Khartoum, fiercely criticising the UN's involvement in the Darfur conflict.
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Original: The Sudanese Government has said it will not hand over the 51 suspects named by the UN for war crimes in the Darfur region.
Revised: The Sudanese Government said it will not hand over the 51 suspects named by the UN for war crimes in the Darfur region.
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Original: The Sudanese Government has said it will not hand over the 51 suspects named by the UN for war crimes in the Darfur region.
Revised: The Sudanese Government has said it will not hand over 51 suspects named by the UN for war crimes in the Darfur region.
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Original:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution  passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court , adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
Revised:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution which was passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court , adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
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Original:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution  passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court , adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
Revised:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution passed last week to bring suspects to trial before the court , adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
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Original:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution  passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court , adding that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
Revised:  Sudanese President Omar al-Bashir, backed by huge protests against the UN in Sudan's capital of Khartoum, snubbed the UN resolution passed last week to bring the suspects to trial before the court . Omar al-Bashir explained that he "shall never hand any Sudanese national to a foreign court".
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Original:   "Now, we have a common task to end the culture of impunity," said ICC's chief prosecutor Luis Moreno Ocampo upon receiving the list of suspects at the UN headquarters in New York.
Revised:  "Now, we have a common task to end the culture of impunity," upon receiving the list of suspects at the UN headquarters in New York.
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Original:  The UN has since said it hoped the Sudanese Government would cooperate before indictments and arrest warrants are issued while it's understood that Sudanese rebels will surrender to the court if they are indicted.
Revised:  The UN has since said it hoped the Sudanese Government would cooperate before indictments and arrest warrants are issued , and the UN understood that Sudanese rebels will surrender to the court if they are indicted.
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Original: Tuesday afternoon a TAM Linhas Aéreas Airbus A320 (flight #JJ3054) crashed while attempting a landing at the airport in Congonhas , São Paulo Brazil.
Revised: Tuesday afternoon a TAM Linhas Aéreas Airbus A320 (flight #JJ3054) crashed while attempting a landing at Congonhas airport, in São Paulo Brazil.
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Original:  The plane apparently skidded off the wet runway colliding with a gas station and a warehouse across the road from the airport before bursting into flames.
Revised:  The plane reportedly skidded off the wet runway colliding with a gas station and a warehouse across the road from the airport before bursting into flames.
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Original:  The plane apparently skidded off the wet runway colliding with a gas station and a warehouse across the road from the airport before bursting into flames.
Revised:  The plane apparently skidded off the wet runway , crossed a busy thoroughfare before careening into a gas station and a warehouse across the road from the airport before bursting into flames.
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Original:  The plane apparently skidded off the wet runway colliding with a gas station and a warehouse across the road from the airport before bursting into flames.
Revised:  The plane apparently skidded off the wet runway colliding with a gas station and warehouse ultimately bursting into flames.
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Original: Tuesday afternoon a TAM Linhas Aéreas Airbus A320 (flight #JJ3054) crashed while attempting a landing at Congonhas airport, in São Paulo , Brazil.
Revised: Tuesday afternoon a TAM Linhas Aéreas Airbus A320 (flight #JJ3054) crashed while attempting a landing at Congonhas airport, in São Paulo Brazil.
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Original:  The plane reportedly skidded off the wet runway, crossed a busy thoroughfare before careening into a gas station and warehouse ultimately bursting into flames.
Revised:  The plane reportedly skidded off the wet runway, crossed a busy thoroughfare before careening into a fuel depot and warehouse ultimately bursting into flames.
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Original:  The opening ceremony involved watching , , cartoons, a fair and a .
Revised:  The opening ceremony involved watching cartoons, a fair and a .
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Original: Last weekend, a "Cartoons country" festival started in Moscow in Polyot (Russian for 'flight') cinema.
Revised: Last weekend, a "Cartoons country" festival started in Moscow in cinema.
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Original:  The opening ceremony involved watching cartoons, a fair  and a .
Revised:  The opening ceremony involved watching cartoons, a fair , and a .
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Original:  The festival is run by "Kinoobedinenie for children andthe youth" («Кинообъединение для детей и молодёжи» in Russian) and Association of animated pictures (Ассоциация анимационного кино in Russian)
Revised:  The festival is run by and
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Original: Last weekend, a "Cartoons country" festival started in Moscow in cinema.
Revised: This past weekend, a "Cartoons country" festival started in Moscow in cinema.
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Original:  During a visit to the headquarters of the Arab League, in Cairo, Egipt, he proposed the idea of a Summit of South American and Arab Countries.
Revised:  During a visit to the headquarters of the Arab League, in Cairo, Egipt, Lula da Silva proposed the creation of a Summit of South American and Arab Countries.
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Original:  According to Lula: "The summit aims the creation of a new world where the Third World countries can have a new role"  .
Revised:  "The summit aims the creation of a new world where the Third World countries can have a new role" .
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Original: Some concerns from Israel and the United States of America has raised about the meeting.
Revised: Some concerns from Israel and United States has raised since the announce of the meeting.
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Original: Some concerns from Israel and United States has raised since the announce of the meeting.
Revised: Some concerns from Israel and United States has raised since the announcement of the meeting.
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Original: Brazil is scheduled to host the the Summit of South American and Arab Countries in Brasilia, Brazil, from May 10th to 11th, 2005, according to the Brazilian Ministry of External Relations.
Revised: Brazil is scheduled to host the Summit of South American and Arab Countries in Brasilia, Brazil, from May 10th to 11th, 2005, according to the Brazilian Ministry of External Relations.
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Original:  The organizers say that South American and Arab Countries will discuss about political, commercial, cultural, and scientific and technological cooperation.
Revised:  The organizers say that South American and Arab Countries will discuss political, commercial, cultural, and scientific and technological cooperation.
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Original:  The summit was proposed by Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva during his trip to Arab countries on December, 2004.
Revised:  The summit was proposed by Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva during his visit to several Arab countries in December, 2004.
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Original:  Some of the countries visited by Lula have entered in contact with a Brazilian ruler for the last time only in 1876, with Brazilian Emperor Dom Pedro II.
Revised:  Some of the countries visited by Lula had entered into contact with a Brazilian ruler for the last time only in 1876, with Brazilian Emperor Dom Pedro II.
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Original:  Some of the countries visited by Lula have entered in contact with a Brazilian ruler for the last time only in 1876, with Brazilian Emperor Dom Pedro II.
Revised:  Some of the countries visited by Lula have entered in contact with a Brazilian ruler since 1876, with Brazilian Emperor Dom Pedro II.
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Original:  During a visit to the headquarters of the Arab League, in Cairo, Egipt , Lula da Silva proposed the creation of a Summit of South American and Arab Countries.
Revised:  During a visit to the headquarters of the Arab League, in Cairo, Egypt , Lula da Silva proposed the creation of a Summit of South American and Arab Countries.
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