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Original:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida  in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona  on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California  on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restauranteur who was killed on December 24, 1908  in Addis, Louisiana.
Revised:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California , on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restauranteur who was killed on December 24, 1908 in Addis, Louisiana.
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Original:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida  in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona  on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California  on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restauranteur who was killed on December 24, 1908  in Addis, Louisiana.
Revised:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restaurateur who was killed on December 24, 1908 in Addis, Louisiana.
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Original:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida  in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona  on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California  on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restauranteur who was killed on December 24, 1908  in Addis, Louisiana.
Revised:  a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown - a woman killed in Orange City, Florida in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife - elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp - a rancher killed in Fullerton, California on July 15, 1920 J. R. Rivet The earliest known murder with a date that Gibson committed was that of Joseph (or James) Isadore Rivet, a restauranteur who was killed on December 24, 1908 , in Addis, Louisiana.
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Original:  The Erhardt Couple A well-respected couple in Phoenix, the Erhardts  were slain on June 6, 1920.
Revised:  Erhardt couple A well-respected couple in Phoenix, the Erhardts were slain on June 6, 1920.
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Original:  The Erhardt Couple A well-respected couple in Phoenix, the Erhardts  were slain on June 6, 1920.
Revised:  The Erhardt Couple A well-respected couple in Phoenix, the Erhardts , were slain on June 6, 1920.
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Original:  After serving a 24-day sentence in Douglas, he moved on to the city, arriving either on June 3rd or 4th.
Revised:  After serving a 24-day sentence in Douglas, he moved on to the city, arriving either on June 3 or 4.
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Original:  In contrast, Mrs. Erhardt fought for her life, but alas, she was beaten and left for dead, managing to slowly crawl back to the bed and die next to her husband.
Revised:  In contrast, Mrs. Erhardt fought for her life, but she was beaten and left for dead, managing to slowly crawl back to the bed and die next to her husband.
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Original:  On June 25, a possible suspect emerged, after Mexican national Jesús María Balboa, whom lived in Litchfield Park, was arrested in Nogales on June 25th.
Revised:  On June 25, a possible suspect emerged, after Mexican national Jesús María Balboa, who lived in Litchfield Park, was arrested in Nogales on June 25th.
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Original:  On June 25, a possible suspect emerged, after Mexican national Jesús María Balboa, whom lived in Litchfield Park, was arrested in Nogales on June 25th.
Revised:  On June 25, a possible suspect emerged, after Mexican national Jesús María Balboa, whom lived in Litchfield Park, was arrested in Nogales on June 25.
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Original:  Barbor was then brought to trial, and plead guilty.
Revised:  Barbor was then brought to trial, and pleaded guilty.
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Original:  Roy Trapp Not long after the Erhardt murders, a crime of striking similarity was committed on July 15, 1920  in Fullerton, California.
Revised:  Roy Trapp Not long after the Erhardt murders, a crime of striking similarity was committed on July 15, 1920 , in Fullerton, California.
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Original:  He was first imprisoned in January 1904 at a Baton Rouge prison for an unknown offence , but according to him, he spiralled into a life of crime when he was "innocently railroaded to a southern penitentiary, where he had become a criminal [through] association."
Revised:  He was first imprisoned in January 1904 at a Baton Rouge prison for an unknown offence . According to him, he spiralled into a life of crime when he was "innocently railroaded to a southern penitentiary, where he had become a criminal [through] association."
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Original:  However, Justice William C. Barnette, a former district attorney for the Bienville Parish, indicated a different story: prior to 1907, Gibson, using the alias of "Monk", was put on trial for ambushing and shooting at another black man.
Revised:  Justice William C. Barnette, a former district attorney for the Bienville Parish, indicated a different story: prior to 1907, Gibson, using the alias of "Monk", was put on trial for ambushing and shooting at another black man.
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Original:  However, his client was still found guilty and sent off to the Louisiana State Penitentiary.
Revised:  His client was still found guilty and sent off to the Louisiana State Penitentiary.
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Original:  In addition, he had apparently served time in four penitentiaries (in Louisiana, Ohio, Florida and Texas), escaping from the warden on two occasions (from Florida in 1917 and Texas in 1919).
Revised:  He served time in four penitentiaries (in Louisiana, Ohio, Florida and Texas), escaping from the warden on two occasions (from Florida in 1917 and Texas in 1919).
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Original:  However, this awoke the Erhardt couple, with Jacob throwing himself at the armed intruder, only to quickly get himself almost instantaneously killed.
Revised:  This awoke the Erhardt couple, with Jacob throwing himself at the armed intruder, only to quickly get himself almost instantaneously killed.
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Original:  In contrast, Mrs. Erhardt fought for her life, but she was beaten and left for dead, managing to slowly crawl back to the bed and die next to her husband.
Revised:  Mrs. Erhardt fought for her life, but she was beaten and left for dead, managing to slowly crawl back to the bed and die next to her husband.
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Original:  During the case , 150 suspects were examined and later released, with a reward surpassing $3,000 being promised to anybody who has any clues.
Revised:  During the case 150 suspects were examined and later released, with a reward surpassing $3,000 being promised to anybody who has any clues.
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Original:  However, authorities weren't satisfied with his claims, as he seemed to be in a semi-stupor while telling his story.
Revised:  Authorities weren't satisfied with his claims, as he seemed to be in a semi-stupor while telling his story.
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Original:  Watson, a bigamist who at that time had recently been convicted of murdering several wives, but was instead given life imprisonment . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  Watson, a bigamist who at that time had recently been convicted of murdering several wives, but was instead given life imprisonment References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  Watson, a bigamist who at that time had recently been convicted of murdering several wives, but was instead given life imprisonment . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
Revised:  Watson, a bigamist who at that time had recently been convicted of murdering several wives, but was instead given life imprisonment . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  Investigating the crime scene would prove a challenge, as authorities only had theories to go on with . Allegedly, two black men driving a striped Ford were seen fleeing from the crime scene, but even with organized posses, the duo wasn't captured.
Revised:  Investigating the crime scene would prove a challenge, as authorities only had theories with which to proceed . Allegedly, two black men driving a striped Ford were seen fleeing from the crime scene, but even with organized posses, the duo wasn't captured.
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Original:  During the case 150 suspects were examined and later released, with a reward surpassing $3,000 being promised to anybody who has any clues.
Revised:  During the case 150 suspects were examined and later released, with a reward surpassing $3,000 being promised to anybody who had any clues.
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Original:  He admitted the following murders: J. R. Rivet – restaurateur killed in Addis, Louisiana, on December 24, 1908 Unknown – a sugar mill watchman killed in Gramercy, Louisiana, in November 1910 Unknown – a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown – a woman killed in Orange City, Florida, in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife – elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona, on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp – a rancher killed in Fullerton, California, on July 15, 1920
Revised:  He admitted the following murders: J. R. Rivet – restaurateur killed in Addis, Louisiana, on December 24, 1908 – a sugar mill watchman killed in Gramercy, Louisiana, in November 1910 Unknown – a storekeeper and wagoner killed in Louisiana in November 1910 Unknown – a woman killed in Orange City, Florida, in November 1919 Jacob Erhardt and his wife – elderly couple killed in Phoenix, Arizona, on June 6, 1920 Roy G. Trapp – a rancher killed in Fullerton, California, on July 15, 1920
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Original:  So for example  pregnant women are routinely screened ( in the UK ) for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
Revised:  So for example , pregnant women are routinely screened ( in the UK ) for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
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Original:  So for example  pregnant women are routinely screened ( in the UK ) for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
Revised:  So for example pregnant women are routinely screened in the UK ) for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
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Original:  So for example  pregnant women are routinely screened ( in the UK ) for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
Revised:  So for example pregnant women are routinely screened ( in the UK for rubella antibodies to confirm their immunity to this infection which can cause serious congenital abnormalities.
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Original:  However, without knowing the correlates of immunity, scientists cannot know exactly what sort of immune response a vaccine would need to stimulate, and the only method of assessing vaccine effectiveness will be through large phase III trials with clinical outcomes ( ie infection and/or disease, not just laboratory markers).
Revised:  However, without knowing the correlates of immunity, scientists cannot know exactly what sort of immune response a vaccine would need to stimulate, and the only method of assessing vaccine effectiveness will be through large phase III trials with clinical outcomes ( i.e. infection and/or disease, not just laboratory markers).
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Original:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
Revised:  Minister of Militia . The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
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Original:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
Revised:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa wanted to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
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Original:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
Revised:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
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Original:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest design and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
Revised:  Minister of Militia , The authorities of the various departments at Ottawa desired to have as many of their requirements as possible manufactured in Canada, therefore William Scully , made a visit to Great Britain, where he purchased the necessary machinery, latest designs and at the same time secured the services of thoroughly qualified foremen to take charge of the respective departments.
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Original:   The firm remained on University st . until it was expropriated in 1958 by the city to make way for Place Ville Marie.
Revised:  The firm remained on University St . until it was expropriated in 1958 by the city to make way for Place Ville Marie.
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Original:  The firm moved to Craig st., then to its current location in 1968 on Moreau st . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25  000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
Revised:  The firm moved to Craig St., and again in 1968 to its current location in 1968 on Moreau st . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25 000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
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Original:  The firm moved to Craig st., then to its current location in 1968 on Moreau st . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25  000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
Revised:  The firm moved to Craig st., then to its current location on Moreau St . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25 000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
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Original:  The firm moved to Craig st., then to its current location in 1968 on Moreau st . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25  000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
Revised:  The firm moved to Craig st., then to its current location in 1968 on Moreau st . in Montreal’s east end, where the firm operates a 25 , 000 sq. ft. manufacturing plant.
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Original:  William Scully, started manufacturing in Montreal and guaranteed the Canadian government that his every product would equal or surpass the products of the finest British Houses.
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Original:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie  Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
Revised:  The firm was headwear supplier to Haille Selassie Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
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Original:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie  Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
Revised:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie , Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
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Original:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie  Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
Revised:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie Emperor of Ethiopia , whose dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
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Original:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie  Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
Revised:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955. It also outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
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Original:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie  Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. . The first Lieut.
Revised:  The firm was headwear Supplier to Haille Selassie Emperor of Ethiopia who's dress uniform was tailored in 1955, it outfitted President Nyerere’s Tanzanian Army. The first Lieut.
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Original:  Governor Dress Uniform made in Canada, both the tailoring and the gold hand embroidery was made on University Street.
Revised:  Governor 's dress uniform made in Canada, both the tailoring and the gold hand embroidery was made on University Street.
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Original:  Today, the company holds contracts with the units across Canada for the supply of uniform accouterments and accessories..
Revised:  Today, the company holds contracts with units across Canada for the supply of uniform accouterments and accessories..
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Original:  Today, the company holds contracts with the units across Canada for the supply of uniform accouterments and accessories..
Revised:  Today, the company holds contracts with the units across Canada for the supply of uniform accoutrements and accessories..
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Original:  After William Scully (founder)  Col.
Revised:  After William Scully (founder) , Col.
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Original:  Later Dr. Richard Stuart Scully started working at the firm from 1965-1976 and now the current president is Will Scully who started working at the firm in 2001 to present.
Revised:  Later Dr. Richard Stuart Scully worked at the firm from 1965-1976 and now the current president is Will Scully who started working at the firm in 2001 to present.
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Original:  Later Dr. Richard Stuart Scully started working at the firm from 1965-1976 and now the current president is Will Scully who started working at the firm in 2001 to present.
Revised:  Later Dr. Richard Stuart Scully started working at the firm from 1965-1976 . The current president is Will Scully who started working at the firm in 2001 to present.
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Original:  She made her first appearance in Kannywood film industry in a movie titled Barauniya, she featured alongside with Ali Nuhu,  Jamila Nagudu, and Fati Waraka where plays a leading role as Barauniya (A Thief).
Revised:  She made her first appearance in Kannywood film industry in a movie titled Barauniya, she featured alongside with Ali Nuhu, and Jamila Nagudu, and Fati Waraka where plays a leading role as Barauniya (A Thief).
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Original:  In 2018, Hafsat established a film production company known as Ramlat Investment, she has produced numbers of movies in 2019 including Kawaye in which paraded stars such as Ali Nuhu, Sani Musa Danja and herself.
Revised:  In 2018, Hafsat established a film production company known as Ramlat Investment, she has produced numbers of movies in 2019 including Kawaye in which actors such as Ali Nuhu, Sani Musa Danja and herself.
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Original:  She won the 2019 female actress award Early life and career Hafsat is an indigene of Kano State, the northern part of Nigeria.
Revised:  Early life and career Hafsat is an indigene of Kano State, the northern part of Nigeria.
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Original:  She won the 2019 female actress award Early life and career Hafsat is an indigene of Kano State, the northern part of Nigeria.
Revised:  She won the 2019 female actress award Early life and career Hafsat is an indigene of Kano State, in northern part of Nigeria.
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Original:  In 2018, Hafsat established a film production company known as Ramlat Investment, she has produced numbers of movies in 2019 including Kawaye in which actors such as Ali Nuhu, Sani Musa Danja and herself.
Revised:  In 2018, Hafsat established a film production company known as Ramlat Investment, she has produced a number of movies in 2019 including Kawaye in which actors such as Ali Nuhu, Sani Musa Danja and herself.
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Original: Hafsat Ahmad Idris also known as Hafsat Idrisis a Fulani actress (born 14 July 1987) , is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood Film industry.
Revised: Hafsat Ahmad Idris (born 14 July 1987) , is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood Film industry.
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Original: Hafsat Ahmad Idris also known as Hafsat Idrisis a Fulani actress (born 14 July 1987) , is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood Film industry.
Revised: Hafsat Ahmad Idris also known as Hafsat Idrisis a Fulani actress (born 14 July 1987) is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood Film industry.
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Original: Hafsat Ahmad Idris also known as Hafsat Idrisis a Fulani actress (born 14 July 1987) , is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood Film industry.
Revised: Hafsat Ahmad Idris also known as Hafsat Idrisis a Fulani actress (born 14 July 1987) , is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood film industry.
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