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Original:  "Irrespective of what has been said in the past, when we were detained by the IRG we were inside internationally recognised Iraqi territorial waters and I can clearly state we were 1.7 nautical miles from Iranian waters."
Revised:  "Irrespective of what has been said in the past, when we were detained by the IRG we were inside internationally recognised Iraqi territorial waters and I can clearly state we were 1.7 nautical miles in Iranian waters."
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Original: Another Good Friday, another Record Broken – that seems to be how it goes these days for Victoria’s annual Good Friday Appeal.
Revised: Another Good Friday, another fund-raising record broken. That seems to be how it goes these days for Victoria’s annual Good Friday Appeal.
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Original:   2007 Royal Children ’ s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 up on the 2006 total $10,280,532.50.
Revised:  The 2007 Royal Children ’ s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 up on the 2006 total $10,280,532.50.
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Original:   2007 Royal Children ’ s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 up on the 2006 total $10,280,532.50.
Revised:  2007 Royal Children ' s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 up on the 2006 total $10,280,532.50.
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Original:   2007 Royal Children ’ s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 up on the 2006 total $10,280,532.50.
Revised:  2007 Royal Children ’ s Hospital Good Friday Appeal raised a record breaking $11,788,970.80, a whole $ 1,508,438.30 over last year's total of $10,280,532.50.
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Original:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised this remarkable event, in which raises money to ensure that all children with life threatening illnessesreceive the best possible medical and clinical care at Melbourne’s Royal Children’s Hospital  .
Revised:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised the Good Friday Appeal, which raises money to ensure that all children with life threatening illnessesreceive the best possible medical and clinical care at Melbourne’s Royal Children’s Hospital .
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Original:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised this remarkable event, in which raises money to ensure that all children with life threatening illnessesreceive the best possible medical and clinical care at Melbourne’s Royal Children’s Hospital  .
Revised:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised this remarkable event, in which raises money to support programs for children with life-threatening illnesses. The money raised benefits the Royal Children’s Hospital .
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Original:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised this remarkable event, in which raises money to ensure that all children with life threatening illnessesreceive the best possible medical and clinical care at Melbourne’s Royal Children’s Hospital  .
Revised:  For 50 years, the Seven Network has been part of and televised this remarkable event, in which raises money to ensure that all children with life threatening illnessesreceive the best possible medical and clinical care at Melbourne’s Royal Children’s Hospital , Melbourne .
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Original:  This year , Seven Network and The Heraldand Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW for the appeal – andaccording to Ian Johnson (boss of HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come   
Revised:  This year , Seven Network , The Herald, and the Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW for the appeal – andaccording to Ian Johnson (boss of HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come 
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Original:  This year , Seven Network and The Heraldand Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW for the appeal – andaccording to Ian Johnson (boss of HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come   
Revised:  This year , Seven Network and The Heraldand Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW , and, according to HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come 
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Original:  This year , Seven Network and The Heraldand Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW for the appeal – andaccording to Ian Johnson (boss of HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come   
Revised:  This year , Seven Network and The Heraldand Weekly Times Herald Sun teamed up with 3AW for the appeal – andaccording to Ian Johnson (boss of HSV7 Melbourne ), the appeal will remain on the Seven Network for many years to come . 
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Original:  Substitute Helguson had two chances in quick succesion for Fulham, but it wasn't to be their day, as the cottagers drop dangerously into relegation contention.
Revised:  Substitute Helguson had two chances in quick succession for Fulham, but it wasn't to be their day, as the cottagers drop dangerously into relegation contention.
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Original:   "I mean it was pretty clear [by] the way that we were marching in very slowly, very packed as a united group that we didn't pose any threat to the security of the centre on the inside." 180px|Protesters at Baxter with ballons Police have said that they will charge several protesters over damage estimated at several hundred Australian dollars caused during last night's demonstration.
Revised:  180px|Protesters at Baxter with ballons "I mean it was pretty clear [by] the way that we were marching in very slowly, very packed as a united group that we didn't pose any threat to the security of the centre on the inside." 180px|Protesters at Baxter with ballons Police have said that they will charge several protesters over damage estimated at several hundred Australian dollars caused during last night's demonstration.
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Original: 180px|Police at Baxter An estimated 400 protesters have been camping around four kilometres from the centre over the easter weekend, to highlight the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention.
Revised:  An estimated 400 protesters have been camping around four kilometres from the centre over the easter weekend, to highlight the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention.
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Original:  180px|Camping ground at Baxter One protester said that despite the threat of prosecution he would continue such actions.
Revised:  One protester said that despite the threat of prosecution he would continue such actions.
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Original:  180px|Protesters at Baxter with ballons "I mean it was pretty clear [by] the way that we were marching in very slowly, very packed as a united group that we didn't pose any threat to the security of the centre on the inside."
Revised:  "I mean it was pretty clear [by] the way that we were marching in very slowly, very packed as a united group that we didn't pose any threat to the security of the centre on the inside."
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Original: 180px|Protesters at Baxter Three and maybe four portesters were arrested as demonstrations entered their second day at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert.
Revised: 180px|Protesters at Baxter Three and maybe four protesters were arrested as demonstrations entered their second day at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert.
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Original:  Police have been using helicopters to watch the protesters as they have marched from thier campsite to the centre.
Revised:  Police have been using helicopters to watch the protesters as they have marched from their campsite to the centre.
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Original:  "I think it was quite over the top," said protestor Mark Goudkamp.
Revised:  "I think it was quite over the top," said protester Mark Goudkamp.
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Original: 180px|Protesters at Baxter Three and maybe four protesters were arrested as demonstrations entered their second day at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert.
Revised:  Three and maybe four protesters were arrested as demonstrations entered their second day at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursuited by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title.
Revised:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
Revised:  This occurred at the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
Revised:  This happen in the last possible moment . McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
Revised:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, but was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
Revised:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
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Original:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title . Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
Revised:  This happen in the last possible moment while McLaren-Mercedes driver Fernando Alonso stayed in the lead for the most part of the third qualifying session, he was closely pursued by his rivals from Ferrari and by his teammate Lewis Hamilton who, after the fantastic debut in the previous race, surely has an ambitions for the World Champion title Renault and Honda teams still have a black bar in this season, striving hard to get into top ten.
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-18 (Smith, 5.4 ov), 2-63 (Kallis, 15.4 ov), 3-64 (de Villiers, 16.5 ov), 4-67 (Prince, 19.5 ov), 5-87 (Boucher, 26.4 ov), 6-87 (Kemp, 26.5 ov), 7-132 (Pollock, 35.5 ov), 8-137 (Nel, 37.3 ov), 9-162 (Langeveldt, 46.1 ov)  South Africa: G C Smith (capt), A B de Villiers, J H Kallis, H H Gibbs, A G Prince, J M Kemp, M V Boucher (wkt), S M Pollock, A Nel, C K Langeveldt, M Ntini 
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-18 (Smith, 5.4 ov), 2-63 (Kallis, 15.4 ov), 3-64 (de Villiers, 16.5 ov), 4-67 (Prince, 19.5 ov), 5-87 (Boucher, 26.4 ov), 6-87 (Kemp, 26.5 ov), 7-132 (Pollock, 35.5 ov), 8-137 (Nel, 37.3 ov), 9-162 (Langeveldt, 46.1 ov) South Africa: G C Smith (capt), A B de Villiers, J H Kallis, H H Gibbs, A G Prince, J M Kemp, M V Boucher (wkt), S M Pollock, A Nel, C K Langeveldt, M Ntini Player of the match: Mohammad Ashraful (Bangladesh)
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Original:  However Cambridge never lost touch and pulled ahead at Chiswick steps, maintaining their lead for the remiander of the race.
Revised:  However Cambridge never lost touch and pulled ahead at Chiswick steps, maintaining their lead for the remainder of the race.
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Original: Tourists have stayed away from the area in recent years due to the intifada, but are returning to the area in increased numbers, according to tour guides.
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Original:  The former State Lunatic Hospital at Danvers better known as Danvers State Hospital in Danvers  suffered a major fire last night that could be seen for miles and led to temporary shut down of US Route 1 and Interstate 95 in the area.
Revised:  The former State Lunatic Hospital at Danvers better known as Danvers State Hospital in Danvers , Massachusetts suffered a major fire last night that could be seen for miles and led to temporary shut down of US Route 1 and Interstate 95 in the area.
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Original:  However, the units were not occupied, however, two were nearing completion which is a major financial setback for Avalon Bay.
Revised:  The units were not occupied, however, two were nearing completion which is a major financial setback for Avalon Bay.
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Original:  In a chilly Saturday afternoon game at U.S. Cellular Field in Chicago, the air temperature hovering around freezing the entire game, the Minnesota bats were ice cold.
Revised: U.S. Cellular Field In a chilly Saturday afternoon game at U.S. Cellular Field in Chicago, the air temperature hovering around freezing the entire game, the Minnesota bats were ice cold.
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Original:  White Sox starter Javier Vasquez pitched more than six innings and gave up only a single hit in the second.
Revised:  White Sox starter Javier Vázquez pitched more than six innings and gave up only a single hit in the second.
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Original:  The White Sox ( now 2-2 ) and Twins( now 3-1 ) will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
Revised:  The White Sox , now 2-2 ) and Twins( now 3-1 ) will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
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Original:  The White Sox ( now 2-2 ) and Twins( now 3-1 ) will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
Revised:  The White Sox ( now 2-2 , and Twins, now 3-1 ) will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
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Original:  The White Sox ( now 2-2 ) and Twins( now 3-1 ) will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
Revised:  The White Sox ( now 2-2 ) and Twins( now 3-1 , will finish their series with an Easter Sunday matinée game.
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Original:  The three players, who have not yet been charged with a crime, are  Alex Daniels,  Keith Massey, and  E.J. Jones, all three are sophomores.
Revised:  The three players, who have not yet been charged with a crime, are Alex Daniels, Keith Massey, and E.J. Jones, all sophomores.
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Original:  Hestness did not disclose  details of the allegations, though he stated the players "were booked on criminal sexual conduct in the third degree.
Revised:  Hestness did not disclose further details of the allegations, though he stated the players "were booked on criminal sexual conduct in the third degree.
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Original:  The three players , who have not yet been charged with a crime, are defensive end Alex Daniels, cornerback Keith Massey, and running back E.J. Jones, all sophomores  .
Revised:  The three players have been identified as defensive end Alex Daniels, cornerback Keith Massey, and running back E.J. Jones, all sophomores .
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Original: At Saturday's spring scrimmage at the Metrodome, new coach Tim Brewster said "Obviously it's a disappointing situation that's been presented to me.
Revised: Following Saturday's spring scrimmage at the Metrodome, new coach Tim Brewster said "Obviously it's a disappointing situation that's been presented to me.
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Original:  Gophers athletic director Joel Maturi said , "We will let the process take its course and then do the appropriate thing.
Revised:  Gophers athletic director Joel Maturi said "We will let the process take its course and then do the appropriate thing.
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Original: A spokesman for al-Sadr stated that on Saturday militia fighters in Diwaniya had destroyed three American vehicles and captured a robot used to detonate roadside bombs .
Revised: A spokesman for al-Sadr stated that on Saturday militia fighters in Diwaniya had destroyed three American vehicles and captured a robot used to detonate roadside bombs 
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Original:  The Iraq war began four years ago and so far there have been: 3,270 U.S. military deaths Which includes seven civilian employees of the Defense Department
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Original: The United States military said that residents in the predominant Shi'ite city tipped them off to the arrival of insurgents carrying rocket propelled grenades in the area.
Revised: The United States military said that residents in the predominantly Shi'ite city tipped them off to the arrival of insurgents carrying rocket propelled grenades in the area.
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Original:  This operation code named Operation Black Eagle  is targeting insurgents loyal to anti-American Shi'ite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
Revised:  Code named Operation Black Eagle is targeting insurgents loyal to anti-American Shi'ite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
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Original:  This operation code named Operation Black Eagle  is targeting insurgents loyal to anti-American Shi'ite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
Revised:  This operation code named Operation Black Eagle , the operation is targeting insurgents loyal to anti-American Shi'ite cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
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Original: The captain was also charged with breaching international shipping safety regulations and polluting the environment stated a Merchant Marine ministry spokes woman.
Revised: Additional charges of breaching shipping safety regulations and polluting the environment stated a Merchant Marine ministry spokes woman.
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Original:  All six were set free and are expected to provide their testimony next week .
Revised:  All six accused were released after questioning and full testimony will be taken at a later date .
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Original:  Officials at the Greek Tourism board went into damage control to lessen the impact on its industry which accounts for 18 percent of its GDP  
Revised:  Officials at the Greek Tourism board went into damage control to lessen the impact on its industry which accounts for 18 percent of its GDP . 
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Original: 200px|The island's location The captain and five of his crew from the Sea Diamond cruise ship have been charged following the  ship's collision with a known and well-charted reef.
Revised: 200px|The island's location The captain and five of his crew on Sea Diamond have been charged following the ship's collision with a known and well-charted reef.
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Original: 200px|The island's location The captain and five of his crew from the Sea Diamond cruise ship have been charged following the  ship's collision with a known and well-charted reef.
Revised: 200px|The island's location The captain and five of his crew from the Sea Diamond cruise ship have been charged following the cruise ship's collision with a known and well-charted reef.
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Original:  The spokesman for the Cyprus based operator, Louis Cruise lines, read out a statement saying that the company was working closely with Greek investigators.
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Original: 200px|Breaking News Police have confirmed that at least three people have been shot at a workplace in Detroit.
Revised:  Police have confirmed that at least three people have been shot at a workplace in Detroit.
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Original:  The charges laid against the captain were "causing a shipwreck through negligence . "  Additional charges of breaching shipping safety regulations and pollution were laid against the captain.
Revised:  The charges laid against the captain were "causing a shipwreck through negligence " Additional charges of breaching shipping safety regulations and pollution were laid against the captain.
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Original:  The charges laid against the captain were "causing a shipwreck through negligence . "  Additional charges of breaching shipping safety regulations and pollution were laid against the captain.
Revised:  The charges laid against the captain were "causing a shipwreck through negligence . " . Additional charges of breaching shipping safety regulations and pollution were laid against the captain.
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Original:  All six accused were released  after questioning and  full testimony will be taken at a later date .
Revised:  All six accused were released after questioning and their full testimony will be taken at a later date .
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Original:  A 3 day search and rescue has failed to find them with officials stating that a robot submarine would investigate the wreck, which is lying under 330 feet  of water, in the following weeks.
Revised:  A 3 day search and rescue has failed to find them with officials stating that a robot submarine would investigate the wreck, which is lying under 330 feet of water, within the following weeks.
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