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Original:  Many other Catholic leaders have been arrested , without any charges  brought against them.
Revised:  Many other Catholic leaders have been arrested , without any charges being brought against them.
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Original:  It seems that some websites have been censored by the government.
Revised:  Various websites have apparently been censored by the government.
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Original:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II  , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
Revised:  Likeise, many online forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
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Original:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II  , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
Revised:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II , on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
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Original:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II  , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
Revised:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II , however, on 2 April, almost all news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
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Original:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II  , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappered, says AsiaNews
Revised:  There were a lot of forums and chat groups discussing about the figure of John Paul II , however, on 2 April, almost every news about the pope disappeared, stated AsiaNews
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Original: Concerns related to John Paul II during the recent days motivated more actions against free speech and arrests in China by the government, AsiaNews reports.
Revised: Concerns related to John Paul II have motivated more actions against free speech and arrests in China by the government, AsiaNews reports.
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Original:  At the same time  the Chinese government is expressing condolences for the death of John Paul II, it begins the arrest of dozens of Catholics  .
Revised:  At the same time as the Chinese government is expressing condolences for the death of John Paul II, it begins the arrest of dozens of Catholics .
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Original:  At the same time  the Chinese government is expressing condolences for the death of John Paul II, it begins the arrest of dozens of Catholics  .
Revised:  At the same time the Chinese government is expressing condolences for the death of John Paul II, it has begun the arrest of dozens of Catholics .
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Original:  Many other Catholic leaders have been arrested without any charges being brought against them.
Revised:  Many other Catholic leaders have been arrested without having charges brought against them.
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Original:  Likeise, many online forums and chat groups discussing the figure and life of John Paul II have appeared, yet, on 2 April, almost all news about the pope disappeared, stated AsiaNews   
Revised:  Likeise, many online forums and chat groups discussing the figure and life of John Paul II have appeared, yet, on 2 April, almost all news about the pope disappeared, stated AsiaNews . 
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Original:  Likeise , many online forums and chat groups discussing the figure and life of John Paul II have appeared, yet, on 2 April, almost all news about the pope disappeared, stated AsiaNews.
Revised:  Likewise , many online forums and chat groups discussing the figure and life of John Paul II have appeared, yet, on 2 April, almost all news about the pope disappeared, stated AsiaNews.
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Original: Bethnal Green tube station A westbound London Underground train has derailed between Mile End and Bethnal Green on the Central Line shortly after 9am BST during the morning rush-hour leaving hundreds of passengers stranded who had to walk along the tracks to leave at the nearest station.
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Original:  In a statement, British Transport Police Chief Superintendent Ellie Bird said that "there is nothing to suggest that this a terrorist-related incident".
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Original: During the event many roads will be closed along the route and offit ;
Revised: During the event many roads will be closed along the route and off it ;
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Original: London is preparing for ' Le Grand Depart ' of the Tour de France.
Revised: London is preparing for Le Grand Depart ' of the Tour de France.
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Original:  The event will start in Trafalgar square at 15:00  , an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers The part of the Tour that London will be hosting are the Prologue and Stage One.
Revised:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 , an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers The part of the Tour that London will be hosting are the Prologue and Stage One.
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Original:  The event will start in Trafalgar square at 15:00  , an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers The part of the Tour that London will be hosting are the Prologue and Stage One.
Revised:  The event will start in Trafalgar square at 15:00 , an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers The parts of the Tour that London will be hosting are the Prologue and Stage One.
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Original:  The Prologue will be on Saturday  7th of July  starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00  and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00  and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
Revised:  The Prologue will be on Saturday , the 7th of July starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00 and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
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Original:  The Prologue will be on Saturday  7th of July  starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00  and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00  and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
Revised:  The Prologue will be on Saturday 7th of July , starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00 and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
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Original:  The Prologue will be on Saturday  7th of July  starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00  and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00  and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
Revised:  The Prologue will be on Saturday 7th of July starting in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 and finishing at 18: 20. Stage One will be on the following day, starting in Greenwich at 11:00 BST and finishing in Canterbury, Kent.
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Original:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST (  UTC+1 ), an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers 
Revised:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST ( w: UTC+1 ), an astonishing event not to be missed, promising to bring the crowds out in their numbers 
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Original:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST ( w: UTC+1 |UTC+1.
Revised:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST ( UTC+1 |UTC+1.
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Original:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST ( w: UTC+1 |UTC+1.
Revised:  The event will start in Trafalgar Square at 15:00 BST ( w: UTC+1 ).
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Original: Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France London is preparing for Le Grand Départ of the 2007 Tour de France.
Revised:  London is preparing for Le Grand Départ of the 2007 Tour de France.
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Original:  Londoners may get to see todays riders on their two wheels, but they will be followed by 1,500 vehicles, 13,000 policemen and women patrolling the route and 2,300 members of the world press.
Revised:  Londoners may get to see today's riders on their two wheels, but they will be followed by 1,500 vehicles, 13,000 policemen and women patrolling the route and 2,300 members of the world press.
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Original:  In response to these discoveries, the report recomments, "[t]he Project is encouraged to quickly complete the inspection of all panels and develop a standardized inspection process and related documentation.  
Revised:  In response to these discoveries, the report recomments, "[t]he Project is encouraged to quickly complete the inspection of all panels and develop a standardized inspection process and related documentation. " 
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Original: Federal Highway Administration releases interim report on Boston's Big Dig: press release claims tunnel safe, report disagrees.
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Original:  In response to these discoveries, the report recomments , "[t]he Project is encouraged to quickly complete the inspection of all panels and develop a standardized inspection process and related documentation."
Revised:  In response to these discoveries, the report recommends , "[t]he Project is encouraged to quickly complete the inspection of all panels and develop a standardized inspection process and related documentation."
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Original: To promote The Simpsons Movie that will be released next July 26 and 27 , a dozen 7-Elevens in the United States have been transformed into Kwik-E-Marts, the grocery store from the popular TV series.
Revised: To promote The Simpsons Movie that will be released July 26 and 27 , a dozen 7-Elevens in the United States have been transformed into Kwik-E-Marts, the grocery store from the popular TV series.
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Original: Flag of the . , former of the of Pennsylvania, died in ,  today at the age of 95.
Revised: Flag of the . , former of the of Pennsylvania, died in , Pennsylvania, today at the age of 95.
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Original: Flag of the . , former of the of Pennsylvania, died in , Pennsylvania , yesterday at the age of 95.
Revised: Flag of the . , former of the of Pennsylvania, died in , Pennsylvania yesterday at the age of 95.
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Original:  Leader's death, at a retirement community that he founded with his wife in 1985, comes after the Former Governor suffered a short illness.
Revised:  Leader's death, at a retirement community he founded with his wife in 1985, comes after the Former Governor suffered a short illness.
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Original:  Leader's death, at a retirement community that he founded with his wife in 1985, comes after the Former Governor suffered a short illness.
Revised:  Leader's death, at a retirement community that he founded with his wife in 1985, comes after the former governor suffered a short illness.
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Original: Leader's death, at a retirement community he founded with his wife in 1985, comes after the former governor suffered a short illness.
Revised: Leader's death, at a retirement community he and his wife founded in 1985, comes after the former governor suffered a short illness.
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Original: Current Pennsylvania Governor mandated that state flags be flown at half staff until the evening of Leader's burial.
Revised: Current Pennsylvania Governor mandated state flags be flown at half staff until the evening of Leader's burial.
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Original: North Carolina has won the National Championship games of the NCAA U.S. National  Basketball tournament, beating Illinois by 75 points to 70 points.
Revised: North Carolina has won the National Championship games of the NCAA U.S. National Basketball tournament, beating the University of Illinois Fighting Illini by 75 points to 70 points.
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Original: Commuters reported queues of up to 1 Km long in North Sydney waiting for buses and around 200 people waiting for buses at Wynyard.
Revised: Commuters reported queues of up to one kilometre long in North Sydney waiting for buses and around 200 people waiting for buses at Wynyard.
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Original: Sydney   's transport systems fell into chaos on friday after gale force winds caused damage to an overhead train line on the Sydney Harbour Bridge.
Revised: Sydney Harbour Bridge 's transport systems fell into chaos on friday after gale force winds caused damage to an overhead train line on the Sydney Harbour Bridge.
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Original: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported  during the Watergate scandal that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the adminstration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
Revised: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported that, during the Watergate scandal that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the adminstration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
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Original: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported  during the Watergate scandal that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the adminstration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
Revised: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported during the Watergate scandal , presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the adminstration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
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Original: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported  during the Watergate scandal that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the adminstration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
Revised: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson On July 4, 2007 The Boston Globe reported during the Watergate scandal that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson telephoned President Nixon's lawyer informing the administration that the Senate Watergate Committee "knew about the taping system and would be making the information public."
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Original:  The Watergate tapes eventually led to Nixon's resignination , which staved off impeachment.
Revised:  The Watergate tapes eventually led to Nixon's resignation , which staved off impeachment.
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Original:  According to John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, " said he believed that  Howard Baker and Thompson  were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
Revised:  John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, " said he believed that Howard Baker and Thompson were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
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Original:  According to John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, " said he believed that  Howard Baker and Thompson  were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
Revised:  According to John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, said he believed that Howard Baker and Thompson were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
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Original:  According to John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, " said he believed that  Howard Baker and Thompson  were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
Revised:  According to John Dean, Nixon's former White House counsel, " said he believed that Howard Baker and Thompson " were anything but impartial players" in the Watergate investigation.
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Original:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . "  In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
Revised:  "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . " In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
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Original:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . "  In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
Revised:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon , " In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
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Original:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . "  In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
Revised:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . " said Dean. In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
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Original:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . "  In related issue Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
Revised:  Dean said, "I knew that Thompson would be Baker's man, trying to protect Nixon . " In a related issue, Howard Baker insisted that Thompson be allowed to question presidential aide Alexander Butterfield about the taping system in a public session on July 16, 1973.
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Original:  When Thompson was choosen this irked Samuel Dash since the information was revealed in private sessions by another investigator prior to the public session.
Revised:  Samuel Dash expressed concern at the choice of Thompson, since the information was revealed in private sessions by another investigator prior to the public session.
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Original:  When Baker later became Senate majority leader in 1981, Thompson ties proved successful and subsequently lobbying provided Thompson with about 80 percent of his total income.
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Original:  However, Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, which lobbied for the bill that deregulated the  industry.
Revised:  Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, which lobbied for the bill that deregulated the industry.
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Original:  However, Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, which lobbied for the bill that deregulated the  industry.
Revised:  However, Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, Thompson lobbied for the bill that deregulated the industry.
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Original:  However, Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, which lobbied for the bill that deregulated the  industry.
Revised:  However, Thompson has long been seen as a Washington "insider" who began his lobbying career in 1975 and lobbied for Tennessee Savings and Loan League, which lobbied for the bill that deregulated the savings-and-loan industry.
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Original:  Most recently help raise money for Lewis "Scooter" Libby's defense for lying to investigators and obstructing justice.
Revised:  Thompson most recently helped raise money for Lewis "Scooter" Libby's defense for lying to investigators and obstructing justice.
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Original:  Most recently help raise money for Lewis "Scooter" Libby's defense for lying to investigators and obstructing justice.
Revised:  Most recently help raise money for Lewis "Scooter" Libby's recent defense for perjury and obstruction of justice.
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Original:  Thompson even held a fundraising party at his house for Libby.
Revised:  Thompson held a fundraising party at his house for Libby.
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Original:  The plane, owned by a mail courier company, is thought to have blown a tire during the take-off procedures , causing it to run off the end of the runway and break through a wall.
Revised:  The plane, owned by a mail courier company, is thought to have blown a tire during the take-off procedure , causing it to run off the end of the runway and break through a wall.
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Original:  The six included two members of a security presence for Mexican President Felipe Calderon , who was due to arrive shortly after the incident for a day visit.
Revised:  The six included two members of a security presence for Mexican President Felipe Calderón , who was due to arrive shortly after the incident for a day visit.
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Original:  Also killed were a family of four  when their car was engulfed by flames  .
Revised:  A family of four when their car was engulfed by flames .
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Original:  Also killed were a family of four  when their car was engulfed by flames  .
Revised:  Also killed were a family of four were also killed when their car was engulfed by flames .
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Original:  The President, who was in a plane en route to Culiacan at the time of the incident, cancelled his vist after hearing the news.
Revised:  The President, who was in a plane en route to Culiacán at the time of the incident, cancelled his vist after hearing the news.
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Original:  Up to 60 people were killed in the slide the day prior to the Culiacan incident, according to local authorities
Revised:  Up to 60 people were killed in the slide the day prior to the Culiacán incident, according to local authorities
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Original: Nine people have been killed when a cargo plane failed to take off correctly at Culiacán Airport in Culiacán, Sinaloa, Mexico yesterday.
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Original:  The President, who was in a plane en route to Culiacán at the time of the incident, cancelled his vist after hearing the news.
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Original:  It then crashed onto an adjacent highway, killing three crew members aboard the aircraft and six  on the road.
Revised:  It then crashed onto an adjacent highway, killing three crew members aboard the aircraft and six people on the road.
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Original:  The samples also  have shown that  Greenland was once home to forests and animal life     
Revised:  The samples also have shown that Greenland was once home to forests and animal life . 
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Original: Ice samples retrieved from 1.2 miles (2km) beneath the icy surface of Greenland have uncovered the oldest known samples of DNA from insects, known to exist on Earth.
Revised: Ice samples retrieved from 1.2 miles (2km) beneath the surface of Greenland have uncovered the oldest known samples of DNA from insects, known to exist on Earth.
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