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Original:  William Holt said as a description of the accident “He lost control of the vehicle in the curves, veered across the lanes and rolled it ,".
Revised:  William Holt described the accident, “He lost control of the vehicle in the curves, veered across the lanes and rolled it ,".
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Original:  William Holt said as a description of the accident “He lost control of the vehicle in the curves, veered across the lanes and rolled it ,".
Revised:  William Holt said as a description of the accident “He lost control of the vehicle in the curves, veered across the lanes and rolled it ."
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Original:  Rafters were ordered away from the area,  Hazmat crews were able to prevent butane from contaminating the river.
Revised:  Rafters were ordered away from the area, but Hazmat crews were able to prevent butane from contaminating the river.
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Original:  Capt. Jack Cowert of the Colorado State Patrol said "I would say those of us on scene were surprised it didn't explode ,".
Revised:  Capt. Jack Cowert of the Colorado State Patrol said "I would say those of us on scene were surprised it didn't explode ."
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Original:  An attempt was made at 9:00  to right the tanker and tow it away, but in the process of securing it to the tow truck it slipped and a dolly axle buckled,  lengthening the delay still further . Holt blamed the driver for the accident, saying he “will be cited for something,” and that “Anytime a crash like this happens, the driver either wasn’t paying attention or he was driving too fast.”
Revised:  An attempt was made at 9:00 to right the tanker and tow it away, but in the process of securing it to the tow truck it slipped and a dolly axle buckled, further lengthening the delay still further . Holt blamed the driver for the accident, saying he “will be cited for something,” and that “Anytime a crash like this happens, the driver either wasn’t paying attention or he was driving too fast.”
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Original:  An attempt was made at 9:00  to right the tanker and tow it away, but in the process of securing it to the tow truck it slipped and a dolly axle buckled,  lengthening the delay still further . Holt blamed the driver for the accident, saying he “will be cited for something,” and that “Anytime a crash like this happens, the driver either wasn’t paying attention or he was driving too fast.”
Revised:  An attempt was made at 9:00 to right the tanker and tow it away, but in the process of securing it to the tow truck it slipped and a dolly axle buckled, lengthening the delay . Holt blamed the driver for the accident, saying he “will be cited for something,” and that “Anytime a crash like this happens, the driver either wasn’t paying attention or he was driving too fast.”
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Original:  It was later determined he was driving too fast .
Revised:  It was later determined that the driver's excessive speed was to blame .
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Original:  He was ultimatly charged over the incident.
Revised:  He was ultimately charged over the incident.
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Original:  The incident sparked a full review in which the emergency response was evaluated.
Revised:  The incident sparked a full review evaluating the emergency response was evaluated.
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Original:  According to Sutiyoso, Australia's Abassador to Indonesia, Bill Farmer, has spoken to the governor about his treatement by police, and has personally apologised .
Revised:  According to Sutiyoso, Australia's Abassador to Indonesia, Bill Farmer, has spoken to the governor about his treatement by police, and has personally apologised 
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Original:  The Foreign Ministry of Indonesia has expressed their opinion that any findings from the Brian Peters inquest will be ignored by Indonesia, and will only serve to make the presently-weak relations between Australia and Indonesia more fragile
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Original:  The Federal Government of Australia, through Foreign Affairs Minister Alexander Downer |Alexander Downer , has expressed that they understand Indonesia's feelings on the matter.
Revised:  The Federal Government of Australia, through Foreign Affairs Minister Alexander Downer , has expressed that they understand Indonesia's feelings on the matter.
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Original: Andrei Lugovoi, a man who British authorities say poisoned and killed a ex-Russian spy Alexander Litvinenko with polonium-210, a radioactive isotope, says that the British government tried to recruit him to be a spy and that Litvinenko was working as a spy for British intelligence.
Revised: Andrei Lugovoi, the man who British authorities say poisoned and killed a ex-Russian spy Alexander Litvinenko with polonium-210, a radioactive isotope, says that the British government tried to recruit him to be a spy and that Litvinenko was working as a spy for British intelligence.
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Original:  We await the formal Russian response," said the Foreign Office to the U.K..
Revised:  We await the formal Russian response," said the Foreign Office of the U.K..
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Original: Thursday-Friday night, in another sad spectacle of savagery  30 innocent inhabitants, among  men, women and children, have been been killed in Rio De Janeiro by criminals.
Revised: Thursday-Friday night, in another sad spectacle of savagery , 30 innocent inhabitants, among men, women and children, have been been killed in Rio De Janeiro by criminals.
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Original: Thursday-Friday night, in another sad spectacle of savagery  30 innocent inhabitants, among  men, women and children, have been been killed in Rio De Janeiro by criminals.
Revised: Thursday-Friday night, in another sad spectacle of savagery 30 innocent inhabitants, among them men, women and children, have been been killed in Rio De Janeiro by criminals.
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Original:  The killings ocurred randomly at several places around the metropolitan region of Rio de Janeiro.
Revised:  The killings occurred randomly at several places around the metropolitan region of Rio de Janeiro.
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Original:  The same death squad of criminals is suspect by the killings.
Revised:  The same death squad of criminals is suspected in the killings.
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Original:  According to the Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba  outlaw police officers may be responsible by the crimes.
Revised:  According to Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba outlaw police officers may be responsible by the crimes.
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Original:  According to the Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba  outlaw police officers may be responsible by the crimes.
Revised:  According to the Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba , outlaw police officers may be responsible by the crimes.
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Original:  According to the Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba  outlaw police officers may be responsible by the crimes.
Revised:  According to the Rio's Public Security Secretary Marcelo Itajiba outlaw police officers may be responsible for the crimes.
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Original:  In the victims' list released by the police there are six 13-16 aged children and three of  other victims are older than 50.
Revised:  In the victims' list released by the police there are six children from ages 13 to 16, and three of other victims are older than 50.
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Original:  In the victims' list released by the police there are six 13-16 aged children and three of  other victims are older than 50.
Revised:  In the victims' list released by the police there are six 13-16 aged children and three of the other victims are older than 50.
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Original:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball  .
Revised:  The remaining are aged 18-45 . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball .
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Original:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball  .
Revised:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 were in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball .
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Original:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball  .
Revised:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, and one boy was playing pinball .
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Original:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball  .
Revised:  The remaining are 18-45 aged . Some of the victims were just walking in the street, 11 where in a snack bar, a boy was playing pinball when attacked .
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Original:  The head was hurled in direction to the patio of the police station, the 15º Batalhão de Polícia Militar de Caxias, in Rio
Revised:  The head was hurled in direction towards the patio of the police station, the 15º Batalhão de Polícia Militar de Caxias, in Rio
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Original: On Wednesday a group of outlaw policemen killed two people, beheadeding one of them.
Revised: On Wednesday a group of outlaw policemen killed two people, beheading one of them.
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Original: The Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals  claimed that the Corgi did not suffer.
Revised: The Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals (RSPCA) claimed that the Corgi did not suffer.
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Original:  The Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals (RSPCA) claimed that the Corgi did not suffer.
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Original: <noinclude> A Pembroke Welsh Corgi.
Revised:  A Pembroke Welsh Corgi.
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Original: 180px| Palestinian president Mahmoud Abbas fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness.
Revised:  Palestinian president Mahmoud Abbas fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness.
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Original:   Mahmoud Abbas, Palestinian president, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in Gaza and the West Bank  .
Revised:  The chairman of the Palestinian Authority, Mahmoud Abbas, Palestinian president, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in Gaza and the West Bank .
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Original:   Mahmoud Abbas, Palestinian president, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in Gaza and the West Bank  .
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in Gaza and the West Bank .
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Original:   Mahmoud Abbas, Palestinian president, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in Gaza and the West Bank  .
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas, Palestinian president, fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in the West Bank .
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Original:  The chairman of the Palestinian Authority , Mahmoud Abbas , fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in the West Bank and Gaza Strip.
Revised:  Palestinian Authority chairman Mahmoud Abbas fired several security chiefs Friday for their failure to curb lawlessness in the West Bank and Gaza Strip.
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Original: With the presence of the G8 summit looming, Russian President Vladmir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
Revised: With the presence of the G8 summit looming, Russian President Vladimir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
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Original:  Putin, allarmed by alarmed by U.S. plans to deploy parts of its global missile defence system in Poland and the Czech Republic said: "There is a clear desire by some international players to dictate their will to everyone without adhering to international law," Putin said.
Revised:  Putin, alarmed by alarmed by U.S. plans to deploy parts of its global missile defence system in Poland and the Czech Republic said: "There is a clear desire by some international players to dictate their will to everyone without adhering to international law," Putin said.
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Original:  Putin, who has been atttacked by mamy because he has taken away many freedoms in Russia, is in his second term as President of Russia.
Revised:  Putin, who has been attacked by many because he has taken away many freedoms in Russia, is in his second term as President of Russia.
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Original: Putin, alarmed by alarmed by U.S. plans to deploy parts of its global missile defence system in Poland and the Czech Republic said: "There is a clear desire by some international players to dictate their will to everyone without adhering to international law," Putin said.
Revised: Putin, alarmed by U.S. plans to deploy parts of its global missile defence system in Poland and the Czech Republic said: "There is a clear desire by some international players to dictate their will to everyone without adhering to international law," Putin said.
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Original: With the presence of the G8 summit looming , Russian President Vladimir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
Revised: Ahead of the G8 summit looming , Russian President Vladimir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
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Original: With the presence of the G8 summit looming , Russian President Vladimir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
Revised: With the presence of the G8 summit next week , Russian President Vladimir Putin accused the U.S. starting an arms race and called it an "imperial power."
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Original:   Putin, who has been attacked by many because he has taken away many freedoms in Russia , is in his second term as President of Russia.
Revised:  Putin, who has been faulted both in Russia and abroad for curtailing civic freedoms , is in his second term as President of Russia.
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Original:  The driver's identity and the cause of the accident were not immediatly known  &  
Revised:  The driver's identity and the cause of the accident were not immediatly known . & 
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Original: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of Diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont  a tributary of the Connecticut River , ejecting and killing the driver and rupturing the tank .
Revised: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont a tributary of the Connecticut River , ejecting and killing the driver and rupturing the tank .
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Original: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of Diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont  a tributary of the Connecticut River , ejecting and killing the driver and rupturing the tank .
Revised: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of Diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont . The West River is a tributary of the Connecticut River , ejecting and killing the driver and rupturing the tank .
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Original: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of Diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont  a tributary of the Connecticut River , ejecting and killing the driver and rupturing the tank .
Revised: A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of Diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont a tributary of the Connecticut River . The driver was ejected and killed, while the truck's tank ruptured .
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Original:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on it's right side and immediatly began leaking it's contents .
Revised:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on its right side and immediatly began leaking it's contents .
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Original:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on it's right side and immediatly began leaking it's contents .
Revised:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on it's right side and immedietly began leaking its payload .
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Original:  The driver 's identity and the cause of the accident were not immediatly known, although the driver was later identified as 30-year-old Eduard Lashway of Guilford.
Revised:  The driver has been identified as 30-year-old Eduard Lashway of Guilford.
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Original:  A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont.
Revised: Newfane, Vermont. A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont.
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Original:  The West River was closed in both directions while hazmat teams and Brattleboro Fire Department divers worked with booms to try to contain the oil leaking into the river.
Revised:  The West River was closed in both directions while HazMat crews and Brattleboro Fire Department divers worked with booms to try to contain the oil leaking into the river.
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Original:  A total of 100 gallons of fuel were leaked but ultimatly contained by hazmat teams.
Revised:  A total of 100 gallons of fuel were leaked but ultimatly contained by HazMat teams.
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Original:  The accident remains under investigation
Revised:  At the time of this writing, the accident remains under investigation
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Original:  A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road ond overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont.
Revised:  A tanker truck travelling Northbound on Route 40 with 2,500 gallons of diesel fuel hit a guardrail, veered off the road and overturned into the West River near Newfane, Vermont.
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Original:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on its right side and immedietly began leaking its payload.
Revised:  The truck came to rest partially submerged on its right side and immediately began leaking its payload.
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Original:  The West River was closed in both directions while HazMat crews and Brattleboro Fire Department divers worked with booms to try to contain the oil leaking into the river.
Revised:  HazMat crews and Brattleboro Fire Department divers worked with booms to try to contain the oil leaking into the river.
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Original:  A man who answered the telephone at Barrows Fisher had no comment and would not identify the driver , who was still unidentified at the time.
Revised:  Fisher had no comment and would not identify the driver , who was still unidentified at the time.
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Original:  A man who answered the telephone at Barrows Fisher had no comment and would not identify the driver , who was still unidentified at the time.
Revised:  A man who answered the telephone at Barrows 
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Original: According to  an Associated Press report on KLTV.com, Hedberg's mother, Mary Hedberg, claimed that speculation that her son died of a heroin overdose was "gossip."
Revised: According to According to an Associated Press report on KLTV.com, Hedberg's mother, Mary Hedberg, claimed that speculation that her son died of a heroin overdose was "gossip."
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Original: Comedian Mitch Hedberg was found dead  in his hotel room in New Jersey Wednesday .
Revised: Comedian Mitch Hedberg was found dead in his hotel room in New Jersey .
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Original: While the cause of Hedberg's death is yet unconfirmed, Hedberg's performance at a show in Portland, Maine in October 2004 , suggested he might have a problem with drug use.
Revised: While the cause of Hedberg's death is yet unconfirmed, Hedberg's performance at a show in Portland, Maine in October 2004 suggested he might have a problem with drug use.
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Original: Comedian Mitch Hedberg was found dead Wednesday in his hotel room in New Jersey.
Revised: Stand-up comedian Mitch Hedberg was found dead Wednesday in his hotel room in New Jersey.
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Original:  Donovan will officially announce his acceptance of the Magic coaching job at a news conference in Orlando, Florida, at 11:00 a.m. on Friday, June 1.
Revised:  Donovan announced his acceptance of the Magic coaching job at a news conference in Orlando, Florida, at 11:00 a.m. on Friday, June 1.
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Original:  Then, at another news conference at 4:00 p.m. the same day in Gainesville, he will officially announce his resignation as the head coach of the Florida Gators.
Revised:  At another news conference at 4:00 p.m. the same day in Gainesville, he will officially announce his resignation as the head coach of the Florida Gators.
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Original:  Hugo Chavez's reasoning for not renewing the TV station's broadcasting license is because they supported a coup d' etat five years ago.
Revised:  Hugo Chavez's reasons for not renewing the TV station's broadcasting license is because they supported a coup d' etat five years ago.
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Original:  Hugo Chavez's reasoning for not renewing the TV station's broadcasting license is because they supported a coup d' etat five years ago.
Revised:  Hugo Chavez's reasoning for not renewing the TV station's broadcasting license include RCTV's support of a coup d' etat five years ago.
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Original:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup  Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend but, right after the closing of RCTV on Sunday, May 27 , large student demonstrations popped up all over the capital city of Caracas.
Revised:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend . Shortly after the closing of RCTV on Sunday, May 27 , large student demonstrations popped up all over the capital city of Caracas.
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Original:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup  Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend but, right after the closing of RCTV on Sunday, May 27 , large student demonstrations popped up all over the capital city of Caracas.
Revised:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend but, right after the closing of RCTV , large student demonstrations popped up all over the capital city of Caracas.
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Original:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup  Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend but, right after the closing of RCTV on Sunday, May 27 , large student demonstrations popped up all over the capital city of Caracas.
Revised:  Hugo Chavez has let Venevision continue for five more yearsdespite the fact that they also supported the coup Protests began with opposition marches over the weekend but, right after the closing of RCTV on Sunday, May 27 , large student demonstrations appeared throughout the capital city of Caracas.
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