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Original:  However a survey by the Campaign for Real Ale found that 840,000 people who do not regularly go to the pub said the would do so following the introduction of the ban and that England's 6.2 million regular drinkers would be more likely to visit pubs and bars.
Revised:  However a survey by the Campaign for Real Ale finds that 840,000 people who do not regularly go to the pub said the would do so following the introduction of the ban and that England's 6.2 million regular drinkers would be more likely to visit pubs and bars.
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Original:  Smoking kills 100,000 people in Britain each year through cancer, lung conditions  and heart problems while approximately 1,000 people a day in England are admitted to hospital with an illness related to smoking, costing the National Health Service an estimated £1.5 billion.
Revised:  Smoking kills 100,000 people in Britain each year through cancer, lung conditions , and heart problems while approximately 1,000 people a day in England are admitted to hospital with an illness related to smoking, costing the National Health Service an estimated £1.5 billion.
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Original:  Smoking kills 100,000 people in Britain each year through cancer, lung conditions  and heart problems while approximately 1,000 people a day in England are admitted to hospital with an illness related to smoking, costing the National Health Service an estimated £1.5 billion.
Revised:  Smoking kills 100,000 people in Britain each year through cancer, lung conditions and heart problems . Approximately 1,000 people a day in England are admitted to hospital with an illness related to smoking, costing the National Health Service an estimated £1.5 billion.
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Original:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather stolen car, with registration L808 RDT. It was asked during the conference  whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
Revised:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather stolen car, with registration L808 RDT. Question were raised during the conference whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
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Original:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather stolen car, with registration L808 RDT. It was asked during the conference  whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
Revised:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather stolen car, with registration L808 RDT. It was asked during the conference conerning whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
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Original:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather stolen car, with registration L808 RDT. Questions were raised during the conference concerning whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
Revised:  The green cherokee jeep is "possibly" a second hand, rather then stolen, car with registration L808 RDT. Questions were raised during the conference concerning whether the USA had, as had been reported in certain circles, published a report predicting that there may be an attack on Glasgow Airport.
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Original: His teammate Felipe Massa, starting from pole, was unable to held Kimi on the back of his car thus finishing second.
Revised: His teammate Felipe Massa, starting from pole, was unable to hold back Kimi and finished second.
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Original:  The promising McLaren-Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton showed fastest times in the first and second qualification sessions, but lose the pole to Massa in the third.
Revised:  The promising McLaren-Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton showed fastest times in the first and second qualification sessions, but lost the pole to Massa in the third.
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso  suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 and managed to get into 7th place from the 10th starting grid position on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella.
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place from the 10th starting grid position on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella.
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso  suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 and managed to get into 7th place from the 10th starting grid position on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella.
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 and managed to get into 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella.
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Original:  Giancarlo himself lose one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber.
Revised:  Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber.
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Original:  His teammate Felipe Massa , starting from pole, was unable to hold back Kimi and finished second.
Revised:  His teammate , starting from pole, was unable to hold back Kimi and finished second.
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Original:  The promising McLaren-Mercedes driver Lewis Hamilton showed fastest times in the first and second qualification sessions, but lost the pole to Massa in the third.
Revised:  The promising - driver showed fastest times in the first and second qualification sessions, but lost the pole to Massa in the third.
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former teammate . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to , . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from , and Nick Heidfeld respectively 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively . 
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Original:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively  
Revised:  His teammate Fernando Alonso , who started in the 10th position, suffered a gearbox problem in Q3 but managed to climb to 7th place on the back of his former Renault teammate Giancarlo Fisicella . Giancarlo himself lost one position to Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauber . Both BMWs classified 4th and 5th, Robert Kubica , who fully recovered from Montreal crash , and Nick Heidfeld respectively Sister link
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Original:  Pakistan  : Abdul Razzaq, Fawad Alam, Iftikhar Anjum, Imran Nazir, Kamran Akmal  , Mohammad Asif, Mohammad Sami, Mohammad Yousuf, Salman Butt, Shahid Afridi, Shoaib Akhtar, Shoaib Malik  , Umar Gul, Yasir Hameed, Younis Khan Scotland : JAR Blain, GD Drummond, RM Haq, PJC Hoffmann, RO Hussain, NFI McCallum, JD Nel, GA Rogers, MQ Sheikh, CJO Smith , RR Watson , DF Watts, CM Wright Category: Scotland Category: Pakistan Category: Cricket Category:Spor
Revised:  Pakistan squad : Abdul Razzaq, Fawad Alam, Iftikhar Anjum, Imran Nazir, Kamran Akmal , Mohammad Asif, Mohammad Sami, Mohammad Yousuf, Salman Butt, Shahid Afridi, Shoaib Akhtar, Shoaib Malik , Umar Gul, Yasir Hameed, Younis Khan Scotland : JAR Blain, GD Drummond, RM Haq, PJC Hoffmann, RO Hussain, NFI McCallum, JD Nel, GA Rogers, MQ Sheikh, CJO Smith , RR Watson , DF Watts, CM Wright Category: Scotland Category: Pakistan Category: Cricket Category:Spor
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Original:  Pakistan  : Abdul Razzaq, Fawad Alam, Iftikhar Anjum, Imran Nazir, Kamran Akmal  , Mohammad Asif, Mohammad Sami, Mohammad Yousuf, Salman Butt, Shahid Afridi, Shoaib Akhtar, Shoaib Malik  , Umar Gul, Yasir Hameed, Younis Khan Scotland : JAR Blain, GD Drummond, RM Haq, PJC Hoffmann, RO Hussain, NFI McCallum, JD Nel, GA Rogers, MQ Sheikh, CJO Smith , RR Watson , DF Watts, CM Wright Category: Scotland Category: Pakistan Category: Cricket Category:Spor
Revised:  Pakistan : Abdul Razzaq, Fawad Alam, Iftikhar Anjum, Imran Nazir, Kamran Akmal , Mohammad Asif, Mohammad Sami, Mohammad Yousuf, Salman Butt, Shahid Afridi, Shoaib Akhtar, Shoaib Malik , Umar Gul, Yasir Hameed, Younis Khan Scotland squad: J A R Blain, G D Drummond, R M Haq, P J C Hoffmann, R O Hussain, N F I McCallum, J D Nel, G A Rogers, MQ Sheikh, CJO Smith , RR Watson , DF Watts, CM Wright Category: Scotland Category: Pakistan Category: Cricket Category:Spor
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Original:  The best of three series stands level at 1-1 prior to today's decider .
Revised:  India win the three match series 2-1 .
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Original:  The match has been reduced to 31 overs per side due to damp weather conditions.
Revised:  The match was reduced to 31 overs per side due to damp weather conditions.
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Original: In reply, India were reduced to 36-3 . However Yuvraj Singh posted a score of 61 not out and India reached the target with four balls remaining.
Revised: In reply, India were reduced to 35-3 . However Yuvraj Singh posted a score of 61 not out and India reached the target with four balls remaining.
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Original:  A safety precaution was put in place after this incident, however, the spokesperson acknowledged that it was not followed when Garin was kille  
Revised:  A safety precaution was put in place after this incident, however, the spokesperson acknowledged that it was not followed when Garin was killed. 
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Original:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annuall
Revised:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annually
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Original:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annually  
Revised:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annually . 
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Original:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annually .
Revised:  It attracts more than 1 million visitors annually 
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Original:  Thanks to the American legal system, Garin's family can now look forward to a life of wealth and leisure
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Original: Reports say that the package was found outside the terminal on a street curb just before 10:30 a.m. (eastern time)  . "There is a suspicious package that was found at 10:20 a.m. curbside at Terminal 9, which is American Airlines  ," said Steve Coleman, a spokesman for American Airlines.
Revised: Reports say that the package was found outside the terminal on a street curb just before 10:30 a.m. (eastern time) . "There was a suspicious package that was found at 10:20 a.m. curbside at Terminal 9, which is American Airlines ," said Steve Coleman, a spokesman for American Airlines.
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Original:  Tim Wagner, a spokesman for American Airlines, stated that no flights were affected by the disturbance .
Revised:  No flights were affected by the disturbance .
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Original:  Tim Wagner, a spokesman for American Airlines, stated that no flights were affected by the disturbance .
Revised:  Tim Wagner, a spokesman for American Airlines, stated that no flights were affected by the incident .
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Original:  Well, expensive or not, the iPhone seems to be selling really well .
Revised:  Well, expensive or not, the iPhone seems to be selling really well 
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Original:  Well, expensive or not, the iPhone seems to be selling really well
Revised:  Well, expensive or not, the iPhone seems to be selling really wel
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Original: Category:Science and Technology Customers leave the Apple store of Fashion Valley, San Diego after waiting in line for hours for the iPhone.
Revised:  Customers leave the Apple store of Fashion Valley, San Diego after waiting in line for hours for the iPhone.
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Original:  Quoting MyNaijaNews, an estimated 200,000 iPhones have been sold in the US . 400 of that number are on eBay already.
Revised:  An estimated 200,000 iPhones have been sold in the US . 400 of that number are on eBay already.
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Original:  The iPhone, apples first phone related product was released in the US last Friday.
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Original:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a  wireless web browser  . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
Revised:  The pre-release frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a wireless web browser . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
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Original:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a  wireless web browser  . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
Revised:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside many Apple stores across the United States. wireless web browser . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
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Original:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a  wireless web browser  . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
Revised:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a wireless web browser . Analysts suspect the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
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Original:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a  wireless web browser  . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
Revised:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a wireless web browser . Analysts already say the phone is too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
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Original:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a  wireless web browser  . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for a mass-market mobile phone.
Revised:  The prerelease frenzy that preceeded the coming of the iPhone was climaxed by hundreds of people camping outside Apple stores to be among the first to buy the sleek phone which also acts as an iPod and a wireless web browser . Analysts already say the phone is a bit too expensive for continued mass-market mobile phone.
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Original: The iPhone acts as a mobile phone, MP3 player, and wireless web browser/email client .
Revised: The iPhone acts as a mobile phone, MP3 player, and wireless web browser/email client 
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Original:  Analysts suspect the phone is too expensive for continued mass-market appeal
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Original:  An estimated 200,000 iPhones have been sold in the US in the first few days of release.
Revised:  An estimated 200,000 iPhones were sold in the US in the first few days of release.
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Original:  In this case, lawyers for Vice President Cheney first argued that the Vice President's role as in the Senate meant that Cheney wasn't part of the Executive Branch.
Revised:  In this case, lawyers for Vice President Cheney first argued that the Vice President's role in the Senate meant that Cheney wasn't part of the Executive Branch.
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Original: "They’ve chosen confrontation rather than compromise or cooperation," said Leahy on the 'Meet the Press'  . "The bottom line is in the U.S. attorney investigation, we have people manipulating law enforcement.
Revised: "They’ve chosen confrontation rather than compromise or cooperation," said Leahy on the 'Meet the Press' news program . "The bottom line is in the U.S. attorney investigation, we have people manipulating law enforcement.
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Original:  White House lawyer David Addington and others in the administration have since backed away from this argument  
Revised:  White House lawyer David Addington and others in the administration have since backed away from this argument . 
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Original:  The House  may also bring contempt charges independent of the Senate if it so chooses 
Revised:  The House of Representatives may also bring contempt charges independent of the Senate if it so chooses 
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Original:  The House  may also bring contempt charges independent of the Senate if it so chooses 
Revised:  The House may also bring contempt charges independent of the Senate if it so chooses . Such charges are rarely brought by either body of Congress: just ten cases since 1975, and most result in settlement agreements prior to the commencement of a trial
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Original: Caloundra defeated Nambour 24 points to 10 in their A-grade rugby union game on Australia's Sunshine Coast .
Revised: Caloundra defeated 24 points to 10 in their A-grade rugby union game on Australia's Sunshine Coast .
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Original: Caloundra defeated Nambour 24 points to 10 in their A-grade rugby union game on Australia's Sunshine Coast .
Revised: Caloundra defeated Nambour 24 points to 10 in their game on 's .
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Original:  The two tries to one keeps Caloundra in the top four atleast for another week.
Revised:  The two tries to one keeps Caloundra in the top four at least for another week.
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Original:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
Revised:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, defeated 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
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Original:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
Revised:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 – 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
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Original:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
Revised:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and defeated 15 — 13
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Original:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 — 13
Revised:  Other Results Bye Caboolture In other results, University defeated Fraser Coast 31 — 30 and Noosa defeated Maroochydore 15 – 13
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