wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense ministry counted the capture and release of the 15 sailors as "exceptional circumstances" and allowed them to lift its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
Revised:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense Ministry declared the capture and release of the 15 sailors as "exceptional circumstances" and allowed them to lift its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
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Original:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense ministry counted the capture and release of the 15 sailors as "exceptional circumstances" and allowed them to lift its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
Revised:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense ministry counted the capture and release of the 15 sailors "exceptional circumstances" and allowed them to lift its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
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Original:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense ministry counted the capture and release of the 15 sailors as "exceptional circumstances" and allowed them to lift its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
Revised:  Reg Keys the father of Thomas a soldier killed in Iraq believed that : The British Military and Defense ministry counted the capture and release of the 15 sailors as "exceptional circumstances" and in their case lifted its policy on banning military members from talking to the media.
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Original:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people  it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
Revised:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine , believed that it was a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
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Original:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people  it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
Revised:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
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Original:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people  it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
Revised:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment for their stories: For many people it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
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Original:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people  it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
Revised:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people , it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
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Original:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people  it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard cut, no nonsense military of past eras.
Revised:  The former defense secretary of Britain, Micheal Heseltine believed a great injustice had occurred when the decision was made to allow the 15 to ask for payment of their stories: For many people it is hard to understand why the 15 were so compliant towards the Iranian government, why they so readily gave away information and what happened to the hard-cut, no-nonsense military of past eras.
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Original:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information  and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
Revised:  The 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
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Original:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information  and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
Revised:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's , who suffered horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
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Original:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information  and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
Revised:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information , and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
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Original:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information  and with the emerging video's of the well treated captured troops public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
Revised:  Comparatively the 15 were well treated when contrasted against former POW's who suffered great injustices and horrific torture and punishment without giving up a single word of useful information and with the emerging videos of the well-treated captured troops, public trust and respect for the military has been struck a horrific blow
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Original:  This double standard has drawn crisism from the media and families of troops in Iraq and Afghanistan.
Revised:  This double standard has drawn criticism from the media and families of troops in Iraq and Afghanistan.
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Original:  Protestors chanted "Oppose war, Love Taiwan" amongst what has been termed a "democratic carnival" in downtown Taipei.
Revised:  Protestors chanted "Oppose war, Love Taiwan" in what has been termed a "democratic carnival" in downtown Taipei.
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Original:  The "carnival" consisted of activities on different themes relating to Taiwanese national sovreignty and cross-straits relations.
Revised:  The "carnival" consisted of activities of different themes relating to Taiwanese national sovreignty and cross-straits relations.
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Original:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hope attract one million people to the marches, but police estimates suggest attendance of 230,000 so far  
Revised:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hoped to attract one million people to the marches, but police estimates suggest attendance of 230,000 so far 
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Original:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hope attract one million people to the marches, but police estimates suggest attendance of 230,000 so far  
Revised:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hope attract one million people to the marches, but police estimate an attendance of only 230,000 so far 
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Original:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hope attract one million people to the marches, but police estimates suggest attendance of 230,000 so far  
Revised:  Reuters news agency reports that organisers had hope attract one million people to the marches, but police estimates suggest attendance of 230,000 so far . 
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Original:   Prime Minister of Australia John Howard  said he will send an extra 300 ground troops and 75 air force personnel to Afghanistan to help NATO forces counter Taliban insurgents.
Revised:  Prime Minister of Australia , John Howard said he will send an extra 300 ground troops and 75 air force personnel to Afghanistan to help NATO forces counter Taliban insurgents.
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Original:  The deterioration of the security situation in Afghanistanhas necessitated we send this additional commitment, he said
Revised:  The deterioration of the security situation in Afghanistan has necessitated we send this additional commitment, he said
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Original:  In the review, the manatees were found to have "increased in numbers" over the last 40 years and that there was no new threats posed to the mammals.
Revised:  In the review, the manatees were found to have "increased in numbers" over the last 40 years and that there were no new threats posed to the mammals.
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Original: Mr McGrath said despite the number of young cannabis users had halved from fourty percent to twenty percent, but claimed more needed to be done.
Revised: Mr McGrath said despite the number of young cannabis users had halved from forty percent to twenty percent, but claimed more needed to be done.
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Original: Image: Image: Bong glas.jpg|A bong, commonly used to smoke cannabis]]
Revised: Image: Bong glas.jpg|A bong, commonly used to smoke cannabis]]
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Original:  The  campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
Revised:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
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Original:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
Revised:  The campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
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Original:  The  campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the  drug.
Revised:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
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Original:  The advertisements follow a tightening of cannabis laws in NSW last year.
Revised:  The advertisements are the result of a tightening of cannabis laws in NSW last year.
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Original:  The campaign , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000  will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to advertisements on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Print ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
Revised:  The propaganda , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000 will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to advertisements on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Print ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
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Original:  The campaign , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000  will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to advertisements on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Print ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
Revised:  The campaign , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000 will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to propaganda messages on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Print ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
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Original:  The campaign , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000  will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to advertisements on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Print ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
Revised:  The campaign , which NSW Health has cost at AUD$600,000 will use a variety of print ads placed at bus stops and in youth magazines in addition to advertisements on websites such as MySpace and MSN. Propaganda ads use a tag line saying "Pot.
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Original:  It mightn't kill you, but it could turn you into a dickhead ".
Revised:  It mightn't kill you, but it could turn politicians into dickheads ".
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Original:  The advertisements show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time "  . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
Revised:  The propaganda images show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time " . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
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Original:  The advertisements show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time "  . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
Revised:  The advertisements show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time " , as part of an emotional appeal to manipulate the reader into an unfair bias on the topic, instead of comparing facts and science to the message they are promoting . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
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Original:  The advertisements show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time "  . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
Revised:  The advertisements show a person staring from a black and white photo with quotes like "You've got great eyes, when they're not bloodshot " and "I'd lend you money, but you still owe me from last time " . The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people know that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
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Original:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with mental illnesss and how it may affect social interaction and physical health.
Revised:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with comedians and how it may affect social interaction and physical health.
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Original:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with mental illnesss and how it may affect social interaction and physical health.
Revised:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with mental illnesss and how it may improve social interaction and physical health.
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Original:  "Cannabis is a drug that is readily available in our community and it does  come with serious risk," she said.
Revised:  "Cannabis is a drug that is readily available in our community and it does not come with serious risk," she said.
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Original:  The Australian state of New South Wales (NSW) launched its latest anti-cannabis propaganda campaign in Sydney today.
Revised:  The Australian state of New South Wales (NSW) launched its latest anti-cannabis campaign in Sydney today.
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Original:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the soft drug.
Revised:  The campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the soft drug.
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Original:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the soft drug.
Revised:  The propaganda campaign, which specifically targets 14 to 19 year-olds aims to reduce the number of young people experimenting with the drug.
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Original:  The advertisements are the result of a tightening of cannabis laws in NSW last year.
Revised:  The advertisements follow a tightening of cannabis laws in NSW last year.
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Original:  It mightn't kill you, but it could turn politicians into dickheads ".
Revised:  It mightn't kill you, but it could turn you into a dickhead ".
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Original:  The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people know that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
Revised:  The director of drug and alcohol programs with NSW Health, David McGrath said many young people believed that cannabis was safe and its use was normal.
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Original:  "We want to prevent people who are thinking about taking cannabis up from taking it up and also encouraging those people that are using cannabis to cease, through use of unrelenting lies and social shunning " he said.
Revised:  "We want to prevent people who are thinking about taking cannabis up from taking it up and also encouraging those people that are using cannabis to cease, " he said.
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Original:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with comedians and how it may improve social interaction and physical health.
Revised:  Mr McGrath said young people had to be warned about the possible consequences of smoking cannabis, such as the alleged link with comedians and how it may affect social interaction and physical health.
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Original:  "Cannabis is a drug that is readily available in our community and it does not come with serious risk," she said.
Revised:  "Cannabis is a drug that is readily available in our community and it does come with serious risk," she said.
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Original: Williams said, when asked why he wants to return to the NFL: `` For me, it's a test to see if all this work I've done is really worth something.
Revised: Williams said, when asked why he wants to return to the NFL: " For me, it's a test to see if all this work I've done is really worth something.
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Original:  If I can go to the NFL and have success, that would speak a lot for yoga and what I've learned and offer a lot of people who have dealt with the same issues I have a way out. '
Revised:  If I can go to the NFL and have success, that would speak a lot for yoga and what I've learned and offer a lot of people who have dealt with the same issues I have a way out. 
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Original: Then hijacker, Mehmet Goksin Gol , later gave himself up and surrendered to authorities at Ankara international airport in Turkey.
Revised: Göl , later gave himself up and surrendered to authorities at Ankara international airport in Turkey.
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Original: Göl , later gave himself up and surrendered to authorities at Ankara international airport in Turkey.
Revised: Göl later gave himself up and surrendered to authorities at Ankara international airport in Turkey.
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Original:  All passengers are safe and have been removed from the plane and there are no reports of injuries   
Revised:  All passengers are safe and have been removed from the plane and there are no reports of injuries . 
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Original: This incident occurred six months after a man hijacked a flight en route to Istanbul in October 2006.
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Original:  The plane took off from the town of Diyerbakir and headed toward Istanbul, Turkey's most populated city.
Revised:  The plane took off from the town of Diyarbakır and headed toward Istanbul, Turkey's most populated city.
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Original:  He was detained at Ankara's Esenboga airport where pilots landed the Pegasus airline flight, which was going from Diyarbakir to Istanbul.
Revised:  He was detained at Ankara's Esenboğa airport where pilots landed the Pegasus airline flight, which was going from Diyarbakir to Istanbul.
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Original:  He was detained at Ankara's Esenboga airport where pilots landed the Pegasus airline flight, which was going from Diyarbakir to Istanbul.
Revised:  He was detained at Ankara's Esenboga airport where pilots landed the Pegasus airline flight, which was going from Diyarbakır to Istanbul.
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Original:  Firat Keles , a passenger on board, told a Turkish television network that the man could be seen reading the Koran during the flight.
Revised:  Fırat Keleş , a passenger on board, told a Turkish television network that the man could be seen reading the Koran during the flight.
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