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Original: The book launced first in the UK, where the book went on sale from midnight.
Revised: The book launched first in the UK, where the book went on sale from midnight.
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Original:  The Wikipedia article on the latest book became disabled for editing by unregistered and newly registered users within 5 minutes after the book release
Revised:  The Wikipedia article on the latest book became disabled for editing by unregistered and newly registered users within 5 minutes of the book's release
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Original:  Many supermarkets in the UK cut prices even further as a publicity stunt with, for example, ASDA selling copies at a loss, at about 1/4 of the recommended retail price.
Revised:  Many supermarkets in the UK cut prices even further as a publicity stunt with, for example, selling copies at a loss, at about 1/4 of the recommended retail price.
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Original:  The Wikipedia article on the latest book became disabled for editing by unregistered and newly registered users within 5 minutes of the book's release  
Revised:  The Wikipedia article on the latest book became disabled for editing by unregistered and newly registered users within 5 minutes of the book's release . 
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Original: An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Viet Nam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and have murdered about 100 of that number.
Revised: An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and have murdered about 100 of that number.
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Original:  The protesters were peacefully demonstrating outside a government office on Wednesday, the 27th of June , in order for the Vietnamese Government to return property it has seized and occupied since late 1975, when the South Vietnamese government was capitulated.
Revised:  The protesters were peacefully demonstrating outside a government office on Wednesday, June 27 in order for the Vietnamese Government to return property it has seized and occupied since late 1975, when the South Vietnamese government was capitulated.
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Original:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22nd in cemeteries and memorials focusing on the Vietnam War.
Revised:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22 in cemeteries and memorials focusing on the Vietnam War.
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Original:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as “open”.
Revised:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open."
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Original:  I was on my way to a shop near the airport, when i witnessed police using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese Military vehicle.
Revised:  I was on my way to a shop near the airport, when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese Military vehicle.
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Original:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and have murdered about 100 of that number.
Revised:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and are beig blamed for the deaths of over 100.
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Original:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open." A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport, when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle . Category:Asia Category:Vietn
Revised:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open." A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport, when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle Category:Asia Category:Vietn
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Original:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open." A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport, when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle . Category:Asia Category:Vietn
Revised:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open." A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport, when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle . 
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Original:  This is certainly a step backwards in a country who is trying to portray itself to the world as "open."
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and are beig blamed for the deaths of over 100.
Revised:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and are being blamed for the deaths of over 100.
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Original:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam states that Police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and are being blamed for the deaths of over 100.
Revised:  An eyewitness report coming out of The Socialist Republic of Vietnam claims that police in Ho Chi Minh City have detained about 200 political protesters and are being blamed for the deaths of over 100.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The protesters were peacefully demonstrating outside a government office on Wednesday, June 27 in order for the Vietnamese Government to return property it has seized and occupied since late 1975, when the South Vietnamese government was capitulated.
Revised:  The protesters were peacefully demonstrating outside a government office on Wednesday, June 27 in order for the Vietnamese Government to return property it has seized and occupied since late 1975, when the South Vietnamese government capitulated.
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Original:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22 in  cemeteries and memorials focusing on the Vietnam War.
Revised:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22 in a number of cemeteries and memorials focusing on the Vietnam War.
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Original:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22 in  cemeteries and memorials focusing on the Vietnam War.
Revised:  Vietnamese living in the United States are holding memorial services on Sunday, July 22 in cemeteries and memorials that focus on the Vietnam War.
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Original:  "The crackdown on this demonstration shows Hanoi continues to curtail people ’ s rights.
Revised:  "The crackdown on this demonstration shows Hanoi continues to curtail people ' s rights.
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Original:  A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport , when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle
Revised:  A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport . He claims Police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle
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Original:  A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport , when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, then throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle
Revised:  A Wikinewsie personally witnessed the police roundup of the demonstrators while on the way to a shop near the airport , when police began using nets to capture and drag the protesters, before throwing them in the back of a Vietnamese military vehicle
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Original:   A 1994 agreement between the United States and N. Korea says that the country would be given two light-water reactors, if they shut down their nuclear program.
Revised:  "It's obvious what we're supposed to do, but the other parties don't seem to be ready. It's something to wait and see until confidence is established," added Kye-gwan who also said that " the talks went well, the discussions were good and the results were not bad." A 1994 agreement between the United States and N. Korea says that the country would be given two light-water reactors, if they shut down their nuclear program.
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Original:  That agreement ended in 2002 when N. Korea was accused by the U.S. of "secretly" enriching uranium  
Revised:  That agreement ended in 2002 when N. Korea was accused by the U.S. of "secretly" enriching uranium . 
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Original: Kimi's rival Fernando Alonso splitted the two Ferrari's and will start between Kimi and Felipe Massa.
Revised: Kimi's rival Fernando Alonso split the two Ferrari's and will start between Kimi and Felipe Massa.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton suffered a serious crash in the third qualifying session after his tyre broke in Schumacher's S-curve and he found himself out of the track running at a tangent to the safety wall.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton suffered a serious crash in the third qualifying session after his tire broke in Schumacher's S-curve and he found himself out of the track running at a tangent to the safety wall.
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Original:  Still  there are reasonable doubts about his fitness for the race tomorrow .
Revised:  Still , there are reasonable doubts about his fitness for the race tomorrow .
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Original:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
Revised:  For breaking " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
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Original:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
Revised:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " bicycle parade challenge, organised by Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
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Original:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
Revised:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. to break the previous " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
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Original:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Ten Thousand People for BIKE " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
Revised:  For breaking " Largest Parade of Bicycles " with 641 bicycles at 2006 in Netherlands, Volvic Taiwan and Body Marketing Co., Ltd. held an activity named " Largest Parade of Bicycles " bicycle parade challenge and 2000 people participated this event .
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Original:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
Revised:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, the Director of the Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
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Original:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
Revised:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
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Original:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
Revised:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton . They witnessed the new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
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Original:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
Revised:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
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Original:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of  Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
Revised:  Organizers invited current KMT legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, Director of Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton for witnessing the creation of new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council of R.O.C. Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the start of this event.
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This The record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking parade crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking activity crossed five riverside parks ( Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section ) over an estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometres (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 km for free riding) approximately .
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Original:  This  record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) approximately .
Revised:  This record-breaking activity crossed five riverside park such as Dajia Section, Yingfeng Section, Guanshan Section, Rainbow Section, and Meiti Section , estimated 13.7 kilometers (3.2 KM for breaking records , and 10.5 KM for free riding) .
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Original:  When the 642nd riders passed the recording gate near 8: 30am, the old records was surely rewritten by Taiwanese people, an 36-year-old engineer from Taoyuan County named Fang-tien Lin is the 642th lucky rider.
Revised:  When the 642nd riders passed the recording gate near 8: 30 a.m.. A 36-year-old engineer from Taoyuan County named Fang-tien Lin is the 642th lucky rider.
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Original:  When the 642nd riders passed the recording gate near 8: 30am, the old records was surely rewritten by Taiwanese people, an 36-year-old engineer from Taoyuan County named Fang-tien Lin is the 642th lucky rider.
Revised:  When the 642nd riders passed the recording gate near 8: 30am, the old records was surely rewritten by Taiwanese people, an 36-year-old engineer from Taoyuan County named Fang-tien Lin was the 642th lucky rider.
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Original:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
Revised:  In the end , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
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Original:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
Revised:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding in a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
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Original:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
Revised:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
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Original:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source zh:台灣萬人崇Bike 1901台自行車不間斷遊行 刷新世界紀錄 Category:TaiwanCategory:Cycli
Revised:  Finally , this event created a new record with 1901 riders riding with a great bicycle parade in 47 mins and 39 seconds . Source 
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Original: VIPs invited by the organizers included the current Chinese Nationalist Party legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, the Director of the Department of Public Sports of the Taiwanese Sports Affairs Council  Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton.
Revised: VIPs invited by the organizers included the current Chinese Nationalist Party legislator Chih-hsung Hwang, the Director of the Department of Public Sports of Sports Affairs Council Tai-lin Peng, and Guinness World Records referee Stuart Claxton.
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Original:  They witnessed the new record, and Deputy Commissioner of the Taiwanese Sports Affairs Council  Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the start of this event.
Revised:  They witnessed the new record, and Deputy Commissioner of Sports Affairs Council Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the start of this event.
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Original:  They witnessed the new record, and Deputy Commissioner of the Taiwanese Sports Affairs Council  Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the start of this event.
Revised:  They witnessed the new record, and Deputy Commissioner of the Taiwanese Sports Affairs Council Hwang-lang Tsai led out for the starting of this event.
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Original:   Members of the Parliament of India and state Legislative Assemblies are eligible to vote for the largely ceremonial office   
Revised:  Members of the Parliament of India and state Legislative Assemblies were eligible to vote for the largely ceremonial office 
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