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Original:  " Despite repeated entreaties by the ICRC, the authorities have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release.
Revised:  Despite repeated entreaties by the ICRC, the authorities have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release.
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Original:  "The continuing deadlock ... has led the ICRC to take the exceptional step of making its concerns public," Kellenberger continued.
Revised:  "The continuing deadlock with the authorities has led the ICRC to take the exceptional step of making its concerns public," Kellenberger continued.
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Original: __NOTOC__ In a departure from its usual neutrality, the International Committee of the Red Cross today issued a statement condemning Myanmar's military State Peace and Development Council for human rights abuses.
Revised:  In a departure from its usual neutrality, the International Committee of the Red Cross today issued a statement condemning Myanmar's military State Peace and Development Council for human rights abuses.
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Original:  The Geneva, Switzerland-based International Committee of the Red Cross, or ICRC, said the Myanmar junta is systematically causing thousands of people to suffer, especially along the border with Thailand, where government soldiers raid villages, destroy food supplies, force people from their homes and commit acts of violence, including murder and child abuse.
Revised:  Geneva, Switzerland-based International Committee of the Red Cross, or ICRC, said the Myanmar junta is systematically causing thousands of people to suffer, especially along the border with Thailand, where government soldiers raid villages, destroy food supplies, force people from their homes and commit acts of violence, including murder and child abuse.
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Original:     Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy  , which won elections in 1990.
Revised:  ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release: " Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy , which won elections in 1990.
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Original:     Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy  , which won elections in 1990.
Revised:  Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy , which won elections in 1990.
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Original:     Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy  , which won elections in 1990.
Revised:  Despite repeated entreaties, the generals who run Myanmar "have consistently refused to enter into a serious discussion of these abuses with a view to putting a stop to them," ICRC President Jakob Kellenberger said in a press release . Long-standing U.S. diplomatic policy is to not meet with Myanmar leaders in their own country unless the U.S. officials are first allowed to visit Suu Kyi, leader of the National League for Democracy (NLD) , which won elections in 1990.
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Original:  51 detainees released, AIDS activist on hunger strike right In Yangon, also known as Rangoon, 51 National League for Democracy (NLD ) supporters who were detained last month in a crackdown on prayer vigils have been released, according to the NLD.
Revised:  51 detainees released, AIDS activist on hunger strike right In Yangon, also known as Rangoon, 51 NLD supporters who were detained last month in a crackdown on prayer vigils have been released, according to the NLD.
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Original:  However , not among the freed activists was AIDS campaigner Phyu Phyu Thin,  who was arrested on May 21 for organizing a prayer campaign for the release of Suu Kyi  .
Revised:  However Phyu Phyu Thin, who was arrested on May 21 for organizing a prayer campaign for the release of Suu Kyi .
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Original: 51 detainees released, AIDS activist on hunger strike right In Yangon, also known as Rangoon, 51 NLD supporters who were detained last month in a crackdown on prayer vigils have been released, according to the NLD.
Revised: 51 detainees released, AIDS activist on hunger strike In Yangon, also known as Rangoon, 51 NLD supporters who were detained last month in a crackdown on prayer vigils have been released, according to the NLD.
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Original:   However Phyu Phyu Thin, an AIDS campaigner who was arrested on May 21 for organizing a prayer campaign for the release of Suu Kyi was not among those freed.
Revised:  Phyu Phyu Thin However Phyu Phyu Thin, an AIDS campaigner who was arrested on May 21 for organizing a prayer campaign for the release of Suu Kyi was not among those freed.
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Original: International Committee of the Red Cross President Jakob Kellenberger.
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Original:  Rare talks with U.S. Aung San Suu Kyi in a U.S. State Department file photo.
Revised:  Rare talks with U.S. 
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Original:  Aung San Suu Kyi The statement comes amidst other developments in Myanmar, where 51 detainees who were arrested in a crackdown on democracy demonstrations last month were released on Wednesday.
Revised:  The statement comes amidst other developments in Myanmar, where 51 detainees who were arrested in a crackdown on democracy demonstrations last month were released on Wednesday.
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Original:  In  yesterday, officials held talks with representatives of Myanmar's military regime, with the U.S. issuing a "very pointed and very direct" demand that the release detained democracy leader  .
Revised:  In Beijing yesterday, officials held talks with representatives of Myanmar's military regime, with the U.S. issuing a "very pointed and very direct" demand that the release detained democracy leader .
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Original: In a post made at 12:26 AM EDT Friday morning to the talk page of the original Wikinews story, a user admitted writing that Nancy Benoit was dead , citing "rumors and speculation online."
Revised: In a post made at 12:26 AM EDT Friday morning to the talk page of the original Wikinews story, a user admitted writing that Nancy Benoit was dead was from information that was garnered from "rumors and speculation online."
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Original:  Freakishly, the post turned out to be true.
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Original: Timetable for the dissolution of Parliament  Friday April 8  being the date set for the wedding of His Royal Highness Prince Charles, Members of Parliament (Lords and Commons) will  stop sitting on Thursday April 7.
Revised: Timetable for the dissolution of Parliament Friday April 8 being the date set for the wedding of His Royal Highness Prince Charles, Members of Parliament (Lords and Commons) will thus stop sitting on Thursday April 7.
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Original: Timetable for the dissolution of Parliament  Friday April 8  being the date set for the wedding of His Royal Highness Prince Charles, Members of Parliament (Lords and Commons) will  stop sitting on Thursday April 7.
Revised: Timetable for the dissolution of Parliament Friday April 8 being the date set for the wedding of His Royal Highness Prince Charles, Members of Parliament (Lords and Commons) will stop sitting on Friday April 8.
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Original: CBS News reported that they had found a forum post by amember 'abu Osama' said  :  " " Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
Revised: CBS News : " " Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
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Original: CBS News reported that they had found a forum post by amember 'abu Osama' said  :  " " Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
Revised: CBS News reported that they had found a forum post by amember 'abu Osama' said : " Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
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Original:  The forum in question 'al Hesbah' is known as a discussion area for international Sunni Militant Groups, which include al Qaeda and the Taliban.
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Original: CBS News has reported that a message appeared on the widely used jihadist Internet forum Al-Hesbah at 08:09 a.m. June 28, saying: "Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
Revised: CBS News has reported that a message appeared on the widely used jihadist Internet forum Al-Hesbah at 08:09 a.m. June 28, saying: "Today I say: Rejoice, by Allah, London shall be bombed."
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Original:  Umpires: MR Benson (England) and BF Bowden (New Zealand) TV umpire: Aleem Dar (Pakistan) Match referee: AG Hurst (Australia) Reserve umpire: C McElwee (Ireland
Revised:  Umpires: MR Benson (England) and BF Bowden (New Zealand) TV umpire: Aleem Dar (Pakistan) Match referee: AG Hurst (Australia) Reserve umpire: C McElwe
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Original: NEW YORK, NY: w:Blackstone Grou Stock in the Blackstone group  has performed poorer than may have been expected after its initial public offering.
Revised: NEW YORK, NY: Stock in the Blackstone group has performed poorer than may have been expected after its initial public offering.
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Original: NEW YORK, NY: w:Blackstone Grou Stock in the Blackstone group  has performed poorer than may have been expected after its initial public offering.
Revised: NEW YORK, NY: w:Blackstone Grou Stock in the Blackstone group has performed poorer than n expected after its initial public offering.
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Original:  Others attribute the poor performance to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on Private Equity firm
Revised:  Others attribute the poor performance to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on Private Equity firms
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Original: NEW YORK, NY: Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity and investment management firm founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has performed poorer than expected after its initial public offering.
Revised:  Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity and investment management firm founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has performed poorer than expected after its initial public offering.
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Original: NEW YORK, NY: Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity and investment management firm founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has performed poorer than expected after its initial public offering.
Revised: NEW YORK, NY: Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has performed poorer than expected after its initial public offering.
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Original: Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has performed poorer than expected after its initial public offering  . Blackstone L.P. (NYSE  : BX) initially soared 13\% after being offered on the New York Stock Exchange last week.
Revised: Stock in the Blackstone Group, a major private equity founded by Peter G. Peterson and Stephen Schwarzman, has fallen below its initial public offering . Blackstone L.P. (NYSE : BX) initially soared 13\% after being offered on the New York Stock Exchange last week.
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Original:  Some fear that the  Private Equity Boom  may be at it's peak.
Revised:  Some fear that the so-called " Private Equity Boom may be at it's peak.
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Original:  Some fear that the  Private Equity Boom  may be at it's peak.
Revised:  Some fear that the Private Equity Boom " may be at it's peak.
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Original:  Some fear that the  Private Equity Boom  may be at it's peak.
Revised:  Some fear that the Private Equity Boom may be at its peak.
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Original:  Others attribute the poor performance to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on Private Equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
Revised:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on Private Equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
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Original:  Others attribute the poor performance to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on Private Equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
Revised:  Others attribute the poor performance to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on private equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
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Original:  The stock was issued to brokerages for  31 dollars a share.
Revised:  The stock was issued to brokerages for 31 a share.
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Original:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on private equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
Revised:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of closing, what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
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Original:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on private equity firms and to close what critics call loopholes that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
Revised:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of increasing taxes on private equity firms and to close what critics call "loopholes," that allow such firms to enjoy low tax rates
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Original:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of closing, what critics call "loopholes," that allow such firms to pay capital gains tax instead of income tax
Revised:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of changing laws that critics call "loopholes," that allow such firms to pay capital gains tax instead of income tax
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Original:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of closing, what critics call "loopholes," that allow such firms to pay capital gains tax instead of income tax
Revised:  Others attribute the falling price to recent discussions in Washington of closing, what critics call "loopholes," which allow such firms to pay capital gains tax instead of income tax
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Original: The 28th Cooper River Bridge Run and Walk, a yearly event including the third-largest 10k race in the United States, was held Saturday across Charleston's Pearman Bridge . Linus Maiyo of Kenya, 22, and Olga Romanova of Russia, 24, won the men's and woman's races, respectively.
Revised: The 28th Cooper River Bridge Run and Walk, a yearly event including the third-largest 10k race in the United States, was held Saturday across Charleston's Silas N. Pearman Bridge spanning the Cooper River . Linus Maiyo of Kenya, 22, and Olga Romanova of Russia, 24, won the men's and woman's races, respectively.
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Original:  Maiyo finished in 29:30 , and Romanova in 34:04.
Revised:  Maiyo finished in 29:30 and Romanova in 34:04.
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Original:  It rained for the first hour of the race , and the morning saw winds of up to 25 miles per hour , with temperatures around 65F.
Revised:  It rained for the first hour of the race , and the morning saw winds of up to 25 miles per hour with temperatures around 65F.
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Original:  Over 42,000 people registered for this year's event, vastly more than the record of 30,000 registrants , set just last year.
Revised:  Over 42,000 people registered for this year's event, vastly more than the record of 30,000 registrants set just last year.
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Original:  future races could also be held on the new Arthur Ravenel Jr. Bridge scheduled to open this summer.
Revised:  future races will be held on the new Arthur Ravenel Jr. Bridge scheduled to open this summer.
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Original: Before race organizers closed registration early, over 42,000 people registered for this year's event, vastly more than the record of 30,000 registrants set just last year.
Revised: Before race organizers closed registration early, over 42,000 people signed up for this year's event, vastly more than the record of 30,000 registrants set just last year.
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Original:  In January 2007 Kent was ordered to pay $ 640,000 in owed funds to the Internal Revenue Service  , pay prosecution's court costs of $7,078, and serve three years parole once released.
Revised:  In January 2007 Kent was ordered to pay $ 640,000 in owed funds to the Internal Revenue Service (IRS) , pay prosecution's court costs of $7,078, and serve three years parole once released.
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Original:  They are the latest aditions to the already extensive List of air carriers banned in the EU.
Revised:  They are the latest additions to the already extensive List of air carriers banned in the EU.
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Original:  Operations and safety editor at Flight International David Learmount commented that Indonesia, who's airline industry was deregulated the early 1990s, is one of a handful of cases where deregulation has lowered safety standards instead of improving them, saying of the move by the EU "Standards in aviation safety have been going up dramatically on a worldwide basis, but there are still places where they are [of the standards of] the 70s and 80s.
Revised:  Operations and safety editor at Flight International David Learmount commented that Indonesia, whose airline industry was deregulated the early 1990s, is one of a handful of cases where deregulation has lowered safety standards instead of improving them, saying of the move by the EU "Standards in aviation safety have been going up dramatically on a worldwide basis, but there are still places where they are [of the standards of] the 70s and 80s.
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Original:  One unnamed EU official was reported by The Guardian to have described Indonesia's civil aviation authority as "not very reliable", refering to a lack of reaction to warnings of an imminent ban and requests that Indonesia reasured officials that the problem was being dealt with.
Revised:  One unnamed EU official was reported by The Guardian to have described Indonesia's civil aviation authority as "not very reliable", referring to a lack of reaction to warnings of an imminent ban and requests that Indonesia reasured officials that the problem was being dealt with.
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Original:  One unnamed EU official was reported by The Guardian to have described Indonesia's civil aviation authority as "not very reliable", refering to a lack of reaction to warnings of an imminent ban and requests that Indonesia reasured officials that the problem was being dealt with.
Revised:  One unnamed EU official was reported by The Guardian to have described Indonesia's civil aviation authority as "not very reliable", refering to a lack of reaction to warnings of an imminent ban and requests that Indonesia reassured officials that the problem was being dealt with.
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Original:  Also affected by the bans are Ukraine's Volare Aviation, while Russia has imposed bans on four of it's airlines after consulting the EU and restricted six others, Bulgaria has revoked the licences of six cargo airlines and Moldova has banned eight airlines.
Revised:  Also affected by the bans are Ukraine's Volare Aviation, while Russia has imposed bans on four of its airlines after consulting the EU and restricted six others, Bulgaria has revoked the licences of six cargo airlines and Moldova has banned eight airlines.
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Original: Indonesia currently has 51 airlines, having grounded several and revoked the licences of others on June 25.
Revised: EIndonesia currently has 51 airlines, having grounded several and revoked the licences of others on June 25.
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Original:  The ban is scheduled to come into effect on July 6. Just hours after the ban a Boeing 737 operated by one of the blacklisted airlines, TAAG Angola Airlines, crashed into a house during landing with at least six fatalities in Northern Angola.
Revised:  The ban is scheduled to come into effect on July 6. Just hours after the ban a Boeing 737 operated by one of the blacklisted airlines, TAAG Angola Airlines, crashed into a house during landing , causing least six fatalities in Northern Angola.
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Original:  EIndonesia currently has 51 airlines, having grounded several and revoked the licences of others on June 25.
Revised:  Indonesia currently has 51 airlines, having grounded several and revoked the licences of others on June 25.
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Original:  Director-general of civil aviation at the Indonesian transport ministry Budhi Mulyawan Suyitno said that "Our data can show them that we have improved on every line," to Reuters  The US had already downgraded Indonesia's safety rating earlier this year.
Revised:  Director-general of civil aviation at the Indonesian transport ministry Budhi Mulyawan Suyitno said that "Our data can show them that we have improved on every line," to Reuters . The US had already downgraded Indonesia's safety rating earlier this year.
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Original: Meanwhile, Pakistan International Airlines, subject of a controversial EU ban earlier this year, had restrictions on some of it's aircraft lifted.
Revised: Meanwhile, Pakistan International Airlines, subject of a controversial EU ban earlier this year, had restrictions on some of its aircraft lifted.
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