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Original:  In the end, it was Pasutan who became the fourth ruler of Deli, while his younger brother Umar got a separate territory and became the first ruler of the Serdang Sultanate.
Revised:  In the end, it was Pasutan who became the fourth ruler of Deli, while his younger brother Umar became the first ruler of the Serdang Sultanate.
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Original: Plot Jahongir better known as Jahon was an Tajikistani boy (with a mental condition)  adopted by American parents after his grandparents past away.
Revised: Plot Jahongir better known as Jahon was an Tajikistani boy (with a mental condition) who was adopted by American parents after his grandparents past away.
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Original: Stephen D. Rodgers is an American business executive, real-estate professional, leadership coach,  speaker and self-help author.
Revised: Stephen D. Rodgers is an American business executive, real-estate professional, leadership coach, public speaker and self-help author.
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Original:  In 2008, Rodgers became an Owner and President of Windermere Exclusive Properties.
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Original: Stephen D. Rodgers is an American business executive, real-estate professional, leadership coach, public speaker and self-help author.
Revised: Stephen D. Rodgers is an American business executive, real-estate professional, leadership coach, speaker and self-help author.
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Original:  In 2008, Rodgers became an owner and president of Windermere Exclusive Properties.
Revised:  In 2008, Rodgers became an Owner and President of Windermere Exclusive Properties.
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Original: Portfolio schools often submit their students' work for advertising award shows.
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Original:  Students expect to be educated on advertising techniques , make professional connections , and expect to leave with a completed career portfolio .
Revised:  Students expect to be educated on advertising techniques and make professional connections , and expect to leave with a completed career portfolio .
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Original:  Rather than receiving a certification (or, sometimes, in addition to receiving a certification) graduate expect to leave with a completed career portfolio that includes samples of ther creative work.
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Original:  Rather than receiving a certification (or, sometimes, in addition to receiving a certification) graduate expect to leave with a completed career portfolio that includes samples of ther creative work.
Revised:  Rather than receiving a certification (or, sometimes, in addition to receiving a certification) graduate expect to leave with a completed career portfolio that includes samples of their creative work.
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Original:   Instructors at portfolio schools are typically also professionals in the industry that the students are pursuing . Students are expected to have completed some amount of college or university education before attending.
Revised:  Instructors at portfolio schools are typically advertising industry professionals capable of providing practical insights into the processes and practices of the advertising industry . Students are expected to have completed some amount of college or university education before attending.
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Original:   Critics of the portfolio school concept have suggested that similar professional experience can be gained through volunteer work, internships and opportunities and that completion of a portfolio school program isn't necessary for career advancement in advertising.
Revised:  Criticism Critics of the portfolio school concept have suggested that similar professional experience can be gained through volunteer work, internships and opportunities and that completion of a portfolio school program isn't necessary for career advancement in advertising.
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Original: King, Brittany 4 Things to Consider Before Determining If Portfolio School Is Right for You in AdWeek (20 August 2019)Alston, Trey How Portfolio School Alternatives Are Teaching Aspiring Advertising Creatives For Free in Working Not Working (14 July 2021) Category: Educati
Revised: King, Brittany 4 Things to Consider Before Determining If Portfolio School Is Right for You in AdWeek (20 August 2019)Alston, Trey How Portfolio School Alternatives Are Teaching Aspiring Advertising Creatives For Free in Working Not Working (14 July 2021) Category: Education Category:Advertisi
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Original:  However, it is possible that this is not a Christian cross, but a pagan sign with the meaning of a talisma  
Revised:  However, it is possible that this is not a Christian cross, but a pagan sign with the meaning of a talisman. 
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Original:  However, it is possible that this is not a Christian cross, but a pagan sign with the meaning of a talisma  
Revised:  However, it is possible that this is not a Christian cross, but a pagan sign with the meaning of a talisma References 
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Original: Education and Early Career Shaevitz completed his Bachelor degree in Physics at Columbia University in New York in 1999 where he was an I. I. Rabi Scholar.
Revised: Education and early career Shaevitz completed his Bachelor degree in Physics at Columbia University in New York in 1999 where he was an I. I. Rabi Scholar.
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Original:  Not far from Vasar-Kella, the "city of the dead", Tsoy-Peda necropolis stands, where there are  50 crypts. :Category:History of Chechnya ..
Revised:  Not far from Vasar-Kella, the "city of the dead", Tsoy-Peda necropolis stands, where there are more than 50 crypts. :Category:History of Chechnya ..
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Original:  Not far from Vasar-Kella, the "city of the dead", Tsoy-Peda necropolis stands, where there are  50 crypts. :Category:History of Chechnya ..
Revised:  Not far from Vasar-Kella, the "city of the dead", Tsoy-Peda necropolis stands, where there are 50 crypts. :Category:History of ..
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Original:   He is a lecturer at Bayero University Kano.
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Original:  Sani Umar studied Hadith sciences at the Islamic University of Madinah in Saudi Arabia from undergraduate to postgraduate level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Muslim scholars Category:Sunni Muslims Category:Nigerian Salafis Category:1970 births Category:Nigerian scholars Category:Living people Category:People from Mecca Category:Islamic University of Madinah alumni Category:Hausa peop
Revised:  Sani Umar studied Hadith sciences at the Islamic University of Madinah in Saudi Arabia from undergraduate to postgraduate level References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Muslim scholars Category:Sunni Muslims Category:Nigerian Salafis Category:1970 births Category:Nigerian scholars Category:Living people Category:People from Mecca Category:Islamic University of Madinah alumni Category:Hausa peop
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Original:  Sani Umar studied Hadith sciences at the Islamic University of Madinah in Saudi Arabia from undergraduate to postgraduate level . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Muslim scholars Category:Sunni Muslims Category:Nigerian Salafis Category:1970 births Category:Nigerian scholars Category:Living people Category:People from Mecca Category:Islamic University of Madinah alumni Category:Hausa peop
Revised:  Sani Umar studied Hadith sciences at the Islamic University of Madinah in Saudi Arabia from undergraduate to postgraduate level . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Muslim scholars Category:Sunni Muslims Category:Nigerian Salafis Category:1970 births Category:Nigerian scholars Category:Living people Category:People from Mecca Category:Islamic University of Madinah alumni Category:Hausa peop
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Original: Erns Kleynhans is a South African politician currently serving as a Member of the North West Provincial Legislature representing the Freedom Front Plus.
Revised: Erns Kleynhans is a South African politician currently serving as a Member of the North West Provincial Legislature for the Freedom Front Plus.
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Original:  In August 2016, he was elected as a proportional representation councillor of the Matlosana Local Municipality .
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Original:  Kleynhans was formerly a councillor of the Matlosana Local Municipality . Political career Kleynhans has been involved with the Freedom Front Plus since 2015.
Revised:  Kleynhans served as a councillor of the Matlosana Local Municipality . Political career Kleynhans has been involved with the Freedom Front Plus since 2015.
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Original: Gavin George Edwards is a South African politician who is a Member of the North West Provincial Legislature for the Democratic Alliance.
Revised: Gavin George Edwards is a South African politician who is a Member of the North West Provincial Legislature representing the Democratic Alliance.
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Original: Following his election to the North West Provincial Legislature in May 2019, he was named the DA's spokesperson for social development, education and health.
Revised: Following his election to the North West Provincial Legislature in May 2019, he was appointed the DA's spokesperson for social development, education and health.
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Original: Todor Čepreganov ( Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a professor of history from North Macedonia , former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
Revised: Todor Čepreganov ( Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a professor of history from North Macedonia and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
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Original:  25 Јуни, 2018, Magazin.mk. . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Štip Category:Macedonian historians Category:Ss.
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Original:  25 Јуни, 2018, Magazin.mk. . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Štip Category:Macedonian historians Category:Ss.
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Original: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a  professor of history from North Macedonia and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
Revised: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a Macedonian professor of history from North Macedonia and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
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Original: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a  professor of history from North Macedonia and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
Revised: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a professor of history from and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
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Original: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a Macedonian professor of history from  and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
Revised: Todor Čepreganov (Macedonian: Тодор Чепреганов) is a professor of history from and former director of the Institute of National History in Skopje.
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Original:  с. 1489. Todorovski claims that Macedonian historiography is partially selective and onesided.
Revised:  с. 1489. Todorovski has claimed that Macedonian historiography is partially selective and onesided.
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Original:  Cyril and Methodius University of Skopje alumni Category:Ethnic Macedonian people Category:1950 births Category:Living peop
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Original:  с. 1489. Todorovski has claimed that Macedonian historiography is partially selective and onesided .Stefan Troebst, Germany, Historical politics and historical “masterpieces” in Macedonia before and after 1991.
Revised:  с. 1489. Todorovski hascriticized the Macedonian historiography as selective and one-sided .Stefan Troebst, Germany, Historical politics and historical “masterpieces” in Macedonia before and after 1991.
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Original:  с. 1489. Todorovski hascriticized the Macedonian historiography as selective and one-sided.
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Original: МК . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External link Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
Revised: МК References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External link Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
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Original: МК . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External link Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
Revised: МК . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External link Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
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Original: МК . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External link Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
Revised: МК . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Macedonian academics Category:People from Vojvodina Category:Macedonian historians Category:University of Belgrade alumni Category:Croatian people Category:1936 births Category:2020 deat
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Original:   LaMere was among the lead organizers of the influential 1961 American Indian Chicago Conference (AICC).
Revised:  American Indian Chicago Conference (AICC) LaMere was among the lead organizers of the influential 1961 American Indian Chicago Conference (AICC).
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Original:   In 1979, LaMere founded Chicago's American Indian Business Association of the Midwest.
Revised:  Other In 1979, LaMere founded Chicago's American Indian Business Association of the Midwest.
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Original:  An another study from 2013 discovered that lifetime prevalence of cannabis use was 7.7\% in TRNC. It is believed that the prevalence of cannabis consumption is growing in the country.
Revised:  Another study from 2013 discovered that lifetime prevalence of cannabis use was 7.7\% in TRNC. It is believed that the prevalence of cannabis consumption is growing in the country.
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Original: Medical cannabis The government has officially legalized medical use of cannabis oil for cancer patients on 7 January 2017.
Revised: Medical cannabis The government officially legalized medical use of cannabis oil for cancer patients on 7 January 2017.
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Original: Medical cannabis The government has officially legalized medical use of cannabis oil for cancer patients on 7 January 2017.
Revised: Medical cannabis The government has officially legalized medical use of cannabis oil for cancer patients on January 7, 2017.
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Original:  Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global Compact and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
Revised:  Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global URL and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
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Original:  Following this expansion, the company began to expand beyond the region to enter markets on an international scale in Europe, Asia and URL In 2015, Standard Chartered Private Equity acquired a minority stake in FHH, investing US$     175 URL Then, in 2019, the long-standing senior leadership of Standard Chartered Private Equity formed a company called Affirma Capital which now owns that stake of FHH.
Revised:  Following this expansion, the company began to expand beyond the region to enter markets on an international scale in Europe, Asia and URL In 2015, Standard Chartered Private Equity acquired a minority stake in FHH, investing US$ History 175 URL Then, in 2019, the long-standing senior leadership of Standard Chartered Private Equity formed a company called Affirma Capital which now owns that stake of FHH.
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Original:  Following this expansion, the company began to expand beyond the region to enter markets on an international scale in Europe, Asia and URL In 2015, Standard Chartered Private Equity acquired a minority stake in FHH, investing US$     175 URL Then, in 2019, the long-standing senior leadership of Standard Chartered Private Equity formed a company called Affirma Capital which now owns that stake of FHH.
Revised:  Following this expansion, the company began to expand beyond the region to enter markets on an international scale in Europe, Asia and URL In 2015, Standard Chartered Private Equity acquired a minority stake in FHH, investing US$ In 2015, Standard Chartered Private Equity acquired a minority stake in FHH, investing US 175 URL Then, in 2019, the long-standing senior leadership of Standard Chartered Private Equity formed a company called Affirma Capital which now owns that stake of FHH.
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Original:  Fine acquires 30\% stake in Nai Arabia in wellness shift FHH operates a total of 5 full-scale paper mills in Jordan, Egypt, and the UAE, with a total annual production of around 210,000 tons, as well as 5 converting factories in Jordan, Egypt, Morocco, SAUDI ARABIA and the URL At the 2019 GCC Best Employer Brand Awards FHH was awarded Best Employer Brand and the award for promoting health in the Workplace.
Revised:  FHH operates a total of 5 full-scale paper mills in Jordan, Egypt, and the UAE, with a total annual production of around 210,000 tons, as well as 5 converting factories in Jordan, Egypt, Morocco, SAUDI ARABIA and the URL At the 2019 GCC Best Employer Brand Awards FHH was awarded Best Employer Brand and the award for promoting health in the Workplace.
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Original:  Fine acquires 30\% stake in Nai Arabia in wellness shift FHH operates a total of 5 full-scale paper mills in Jordan, Egypt, and the UAE, with a total annual production of around 210,000 tons, as well as 5 converting factories in Jordan, Egypt, Morocco, SAUDI ARABIA and the URL At the 2019 GCC Best Employer Brand Awards FHH was awarded Best Employer Brand and the award for promoting health in the Workplace.
Revised:  Fine acquires 30\% stake in Nai Arabia in wellness shift FHH operates a total of 5 full-scale paper mills in Jordan, Egypt, and the UAE, with a total annual production of around 210,000 tons, as well as 5 converting factories in Jordan, Egypt, Morocco, SAUDI ARABIA and the UAE. At the 2019 GCC Best Employer Brand Awards FHH was awarded Best Employer Brand and the award for promoting health in the Workplace.
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Original:  from Daman Corporate Health and Wellness, and FHH was the recipient of the Aon Hewitt Award in 2009 and 2014, classifying it among the top 15 employers in the Middle URL Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global URL and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
Revised:  from Daman Corporate Health and Wellness, and FHH was the recipient of the Aon Hewitt Award in 2009 and 2014, classifying it among the top 15 employers in the Middle East. Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global URL and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
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Original:  from Daman Corporate Health and Wellness, and FHH was the recipient of the Aon Hewitt Award in 2009 and 2014, classifying it among the top 15 employers in the Middle URL Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global URL and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
Revised:  from Daman Corporate Health and Wellness, and FHH was the recipient of the Aon Hewitt Award in 2009 and 2014, classifying it among the top 15 employers in the Middle URL Environmental Record and Sustainability Fine Hygienic Holding is an active participant and signatory to the United Nations Global Compact and is committed to doing its part to implement socially and environmentally responsible business practices and offer open and transparent reporting on these efforts.
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Original: Fine Hygienic Holding (  FHH), is a wellness company with dual headquarters in Amman, Jordan and Dubai, UAE, founded in 1958 by Elia Nuqul.
Revised: Fine Hygienic Holding ( , abbreviated FHH), is a wellness company with dual headquarters in Amman, Jordan and Dubai, UAE, founded in 1958 by Elia Nuqul.
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Original:  Early history Apprenticeships have a long tradition in the United Kingdom, dating back to around the 12th century and flourishing by the 14th century.
Revised: History Early history Apprenticeships have a long tradition in the United Kingdom, dating back to around the 12th century and flourishing by the 14th century.
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Original:  From April 2017 an Apprenticeship Levy has been in place to fund apprenticeships.
Revised: Apprenticeship Levy From April 2017 an Apprenticeship Levy has been in place to fund apprenticeships.
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Original:   Many UK public bodies are subject to a statutory target to employ an average of at least 2.3\% of their staff as new start apprentices over the period from 1 April 2017 to 31 March 2021, and to "have regard" to this target when planning their recruitment and career development activities.
Revised:  Public sector Many UK public bodies are subject to a statutory target to employ an average of at least 2.3\% of their staff as new start apprentices over the period from 1 April 2017 to 31 March 2021, and to "have regard" to this target when planning their recruitment and career development activities.
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Original: Apprenticeship in the United Kingdom has a long tradition in the United Kingdom, dating back to around the 12th century.
Revised: Apprenticeships have a long tradition in the United Kingdom, dating back to around the 12th century.
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