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Original:  She attended the Cambridge University and the London School of Economics.
Revised:  She attended the University of Cambridge and the London School of Economics.
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Original:  Mukerjee was educated at Nainital Diocesan Boys' High School (today known as Sherwood College) and Loreto Convent in Kolkata, and also in a school in Hampstead in England.
Revised:  Mukerjee was educated at Nainital Diocesan Boys' High School in Nainital, at Loreto Convent in Kolkata, and also in a school in Hampstead in England.
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Original:  He subsequently joined Birbhum Zilla School and passed the matriculation examination in 1927.
Revised:  He completed his secondary education at Birbhum Zilla School and passed the matriculation examination in 1927.
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Original:  He subsequently joined Birbhum Zilla School and passed the matriculation examination in 1927.
Revised:  He subsequently joined Birbhum Zilla School in 1927.
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Original:  He attended the Presidency College, Kolkata for a year before studying at Cambridge University .
Revised:  He attended the Presidency College, Calcutta for year, before studying at Cambridge University .
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Original:  He attended the Presidency College, Kolkata for a year before studying at Cambridge University .
Revised:  He attended the Presidency College, Kolkata for a year before studying at the University of Cambridge .
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Original: ]] In 1928, the Government of India agreed to the entry of Indians to the Royal Air Force College Cranwell.
Revised: ]] In 1928, the Government of India agreed to permit Indians to enter the Royal Air Force College Cranwell.
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Original:  While initially only two vacancies were recommended, it was later increased to six.
Revised:  While initially only two vacancies were recommended, the number was later increased to six.
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Original:  This was done so that a flight of a squadron would be completely Indian.
Revised:  This was done so that a flight of a squadron could be completely Indian.
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Original:  Mukerjee took the Cranwell entrance examination and the London Matriculation in 1929 and was one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the RAF CollegeCranwell .
Revised:  Mukerjee sat for the Cranwell entrance examination and the London Matriculation in 1929 and was one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the RAF CollegeCranwell .
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Original:  Mukerjee took the Cranwell entrance examination and the London Matriculation in 1929 and was one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the RAF CollegeCranwell .
Revised:  Mukerjee took the Cranwell entrance examination , becoming one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the RAF CollegeCranwell .
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Original:  Mukerjee took the Cranwell entrance examination and the London Matriculation in 1929 and was one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the RAF CollegeCranwell .
Revised:  Mukerjee took the Cranwell entrance examination and the London Matriculation in 1929 and was one of the first six Indians selected to undergo two years of flying training at the Royal Air Force College .
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Original:  With the Indian Air Force Act being passed by the Central Legislative Assembly, the IAF was established on 8 October 1932 as an auxiliary air force of the Royal Air Force.
Revised:  With the Indian Air Force Act being passed by the Central Legislative Assembly, the IAF was established on 8 October 1932 as an auxiliary force of the Royal Air Force.
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Original:  Mukerjee was commissioned as a Pilot Officer . After completing their training at Cranwell, the Indian pilots passed through the Army Cooperation School at Old Sarum Airfield in Wiltshire.
Revised:  Mukerjee was commissioned as a pilot officer . After completing their training at Cranwell, the Indian pilots passed through the Army Cooperation School at Old Sarum Airfield in Wiltshire.
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Original:  Mukerjee was commissioned as a Pilot Officer . After completing their training at Cranwell, the Indian pilots passed through the Army Cooperation School at Old Sarum Airfield in Wiltshire.
Revised:  Mukerjee was commissioned as a Pilot Officer . After completing their training at Cranwell, the Indian pilots received further training at the Army Cooperation School at Old Sarum Airfield in Wiltshire.
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Original:  Mukerjee served with the No. 16 Squadron RAF for about a year before coming back to India.
Revised:  Mukerjee served with the No. 16 Squadron RAF for about a year before returning to India.
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Original:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee , of the the Indian Civil Service, and his mother, Charulata Mukherjee, was a social worker.
Revised:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee of the the Indian Civil Service, and his mother, Charulata Mukherjee, was a social worker.
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Original:  His maternal grandfather , Prasanna Kumar Roy of the Indian Education Service, was the first Indian Principal of Presidency College, Kolkata.
Revised:  His maternal grandfather Prasanna Kumar Roy of the Indian Education Service, was the first Indian Principal of Presidency College, Kolkata.
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Original: Air Marshal Subroto Mukerjee OBE (5 March 1911 – 8 November 1960) was an Indian military office who was the first Commander-in-Chief (C-in-C) of the Indian Air Force.
Revised: Air Marshal Subroto Mukerjee OBE (5 March 1911 – 8 November 1960) was an Indian military officer who was the first Commander-in-Chief (C-in-C) of the Indian Air Force.
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Original:  In the Poonch sector, the road link was under threat of being cut-off . An air bridge had to be established so that provisioning the supplies for the besieged troops could take place.
Revised:  In the Poonch sector, the road link was under threat of being cut off . An air bridge had to be established so that provisioning the supplies for the besieged troops could take place.
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Original:  Against heavy odds, he landed a Douglas with three tons of load against  normal rated load of one ton.
Revised:  Against heavy odds, he landed a Douglas with three tons of load against a normal rated load of one ton.
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Original:  Mukerjee and Air Commodore (later ACM) Pratap Chandra Lal, then General Manager of the Indian Airlines Corporation were passengers on this flight.
Revised:  Mukherjee and Air Commodore (later ACM) Pratap Chandra Lal, then General Manager of the Indian Airlines Corporation were passengers on this flight.
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Original:  Mukherjee and Air Commodore (later ACM) Pratap Chandra Lal, then General Manager of the Indian Airlines Corporation were passengers on this flight.
Revised:  Mukerjee and Air Commodore (later ACM) Pratap Chandra Lal, then General Manager of the Indian Airlines Corporation were passengers on this flight.
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Original: Maksimovski at Kadriorg Palace, 10 October 2016 Georgi-Rene Maksimovski (born 22 July 1966) is the current First Gentleman of Estonia, married to Estonian President Kersti Kaljulaid since 2011.
Revised:  Georgi-Rene Maksimovski (born 22 July 1966) is the current First Gentleman of Estonia, married to Estonian President Kersti Kaljulaid since 2011.
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Original: Maksimovski at Kadriorg Palace, 10 October 2016 Georgi-Rene Maksimovski (born 22 July 1966) is the current First Gentleman of Estonia, married to Estonian President Kersti Kaljulaid since 2011.
Revised: Maksimovski at Kadriorg Palace, 10 October 2016 Georgi-Rene Maksimovski (born 22 July 1966) is the current first gentleman of Estonia, married to Estonian President Kersti Kaljulaid since 2011.
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Original:  Beginning in 1993, he worked at the State Infocommunication Foundation , where he was employed for 16 years until 2009.
Revised:  Beginning in 1993, he worked at the State Infocommunication Foundation where he was employed for 16 years until 2009.
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Original:  In 2004, Maksimovski began to date Kaljulaid , and in 2005, the couple had their first son  , having their second just four years later.
Revised:  In 2004, Maksimovski began to date Kaljulaid and the couple had their first son , having their second just four years later.
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Original:  70px Grand Decoration of Honour in Gold with Sash of the Decoration of Honour for Services to the Republic of Austria (26 May 2021) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of the White Rose of Finland (7 March 2017) : 70px Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Merit of the Italian Republic (5 June URL : 70px Commander Grand Cross of the Order of the Three Stars (10 April 2019) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of the Crown (12 June 2018) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of Merit (16 April 2019)
Revised:  70px Grand Decoration of Honour in Gold with Sash of the Decoration of Honour for Services to the Republic of Austria (26 May 2021) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of the White Rose of Finland (7 March 2017) : 70px Knight Grand Cross of the Order of Merit of the Italian Republic (5 June 2018) : 70px Commander Grand Cross of the Order of the Three Stars (10 April 2019) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of the Crown (12 June 2018) : 70px Grand Cross of the Order of Merit (16 April 2019)
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Original:  He is the first first gentleman of Estonia.
Revised:  He was the first first gentleman of Estonia.
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Original:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so  can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positive may be occur.
Revised:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so it can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positive may be occur.
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Original:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so  can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positive may be occur.
Revised:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensitivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positive may be occur.
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Original:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so  can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positive may be occur.
Revised:  Its specificity is URL The M2-PK test is not dependent on occult blood (ELISA method), so can detect bleeding or non-bleeding bowel cancer and also polyps with high sensivity and high specificity with no false negative, but false positives may occur.
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Original:  Therefore, the measurement of Tumor M2-PK in stool samples, with follow-up by colonoscopy to clarify the Tumor M2-PK positive results, may prove to be an advance in the early detection of colorectal carcinomas.
Revised:  Therefore, the measurement of tumor M2-PK in stool samples, with follow-up by colonoscopy to clarify the Tumor M2-PK positive results, may prove to be an advance in the early detection of colorectal carcinomas.
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Original:  Therefore, the measurement of Tumor M2-PK in stool samples, with follow-up by colonoscopy to clarify the Tumor M2-PK positive results, may prove to be an advance in the early detection of colorectal carcinomas.
Revised:  Therefore, the measurement of Tumor M2-PK in stool samples, with follow-up by colonoscopy to clarify the tumor M2-PK positive results, may prove to be an advance in the early detection of colorectal carcinomas.
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Original:  Tumor M2-PK is also useful to diagnose Lung cancer and better than SCC and NSE tumor markers.
Revised:  Tumor M2-PK is also useful to diagnose lung cancer and better than SCC and NSE tumor markers.
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Original: Music is an important element to fill out the experience of a good planetarium show, often featuring forms of space-themed music, or music from the genres of space music, space rock, or classical music .
Revised: Music is an important element to fill out the experience of a good planetarium show, often featuring forms of space-themed music, or music from the genres of space music, space rock, or classical music 
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
Revised:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
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Original:  See also%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% International Planetarium Society Planetariums Worldwide list APLF-IPS Category:Observation Category:Glass engineering and science Category:Theatr
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Original: A planetarium (plural planetaria or planetariums) is a theatre built primarily for presenting educational and entertaining shows about astronomy and the night sky, or for training in celestial navigation.
Revised: A planterium (plural planetaria or planetariums) is a theatre built primarily for presenting educational and entertaining shows about astronomy and the night sky, or for training in celestial navigation.
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Original: The term planetarium is sometimes used generically to describe other devices which illustrate the solar system , such as a computer simulation or an orrery.
Revised: The term planetarium is sometimes used generically to describe other devices which illustrate the Solar System , such as a computer simulation or an orrery.
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Original:  Since the early 1990s, fully featured 3-D digital planetaria have added an extra degree of freedom to a presenter giving a show because they allow simulation of the view from any point in space, not only the earth-bound view which we are most familiar with.
Revised:  Since the early 1990s, fully featured 3-D digital planetaria have added an extra degree of freedom to a presenter giving a show because they allow simulation of the view from any point in space, not only the Earth-bound view which we are most familiar with.
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Original:  This new virtual reality capability to travel through the universe provides important educational benefits because it vividly conveys that space has depth, helping audiences to leave behind the ancient misconception that the stars are stuck on the inside of a giant celestial sphere and instead to understand the true layout of the solar system and beyond.
Revised:  This new virtual reality capability to travel through the universe provides important educational benefits because it vividly conveys that space has depth, helping audiences to leave behind the ancient misconception that the stars are stuck on the inside of a giant celestial sphere and instead to understand the true layout of the Solar System and beyond.
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Original:  In April 2019 he was appointed Chairman of Julpha 
Revised:  In April 2019 he was appointed Chairman of Julphar. 
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Original:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manage 
Revised:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manager. 
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Original:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manage 
Revised:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manage Referenc
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Original:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manager in April 2017.
Revised:  He joined the company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manager in April 2017.
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Original:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as Corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manager in April 2017.
Revised:  He joined the Company in January 2017 as the corporate CFO, before being appointed General Manager in April 2017.
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Original: Jerome Carle is the chief executive URL of Julphar.
Revised: Jerome Carle is the chief executive officer of Julphar.
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Original: ]] Military geology is the application of geological practice and theory to warfare and the peacetime practices of the military.
Revised: ]] Military geology is the application of geological theory to warfare and the peacetime practices of the military.
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Original:  The formal practice of military geology began during the Napoleonic Wars , however, geotechnical knowledge has been applied since the earliest days of siege warfare.
Revised:  The formal practice of military geology began during the Napoleonic Wars : however, geotechnical knowledge has been applied since the earliest days of siege warfare.
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Original:  Warfare can also effect the physical geology, as with the shattering of bedrock on the Western Front and the detonation of nuclear weapons.
Revised:  Warfare can also effect physical geology, as with the shattering of bedrock on the Western Front and the detonation of nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Warfare can also effect the physical geology, as with the shattering of bedrock on the Western Front and the detonation of nuclear weapons.
Revised:  Warfare can also effect the physical geology, as happened because of the shattering of bedrock on the Western Front and the detonation of nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Many important geological discovers have also been made by military research .
Revised:  Many important geological discoveries have also occurred during military researches .
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Original:  Terrain analysis [[File:Brancaster beach - geograph.org.uk - 852227.jpg|Brancaster beach in England was used for amphibious tank practice as it's sand was similar to that of Normandy.
Revised:  Terrain analysis [[File:Brancaster beach - geograph.org.uk - 852227.jpg|Brancaster beach in England was used for amphibious tank practice as its sand was similar to that of Normandy.
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Original: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) formed from the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been used since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and for assessing the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been used since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and for assessing the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) formed from the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been used since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and for assessing the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) formed from the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and for assessing the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) formed from the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been used since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and for assessing the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) formed from the Trinity Nuclear Test. ]]Geologists have been used since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the expected terrain , both for an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original:  Academically it was found that battles were likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic or Upper Carboniferous age .
Revised:  Academically it has been found that battles were likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic or Upper Carboniferous age .
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Original:  Academically it was found that battles were likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic or Upper Carboniferous age .
Revised:  Academically it was found that battles are likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic or Upper Carboniferous age .
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Original:  More practically  geology has been used in identifying the best Allied invasion sites during World War II, including those in North Africa, Italy and France.
Revised:  More practically , geology has been used in identifying the best Allied invasion sites during World War II, including those in North Africa, Italy and France.
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Original:  This has included  the properties of the sand on Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides on Sicily.
Revised:  This has included studying the properties of the sand on Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides on Sicily.
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Original:  This has included  the properties of the sand on Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides on Sicily.
Revised:  This has included the properties of the sand of Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides on Sicily.
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Original:  This has included  the properties of the sand on Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides on Sicily.
Revised:  This has included the properties of the sand on Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombing , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides in Sicily.
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