wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  At first the Anna Devathasan and Jenny Suo thought they had done it wrong, so they tried again, but the same result came up again .
Revised:  At first the Anna Devathasan and Jenny Suo thought they had done it wrong, so they tried again, but the same result came up .
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Original: It was also found that only five percent of the drink is blackberries.
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Original: The makers of  drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and  the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
Revised: The makers of drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, with four times as much as oranges, and the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
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Original: The makers of  drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and  the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
Revised: The makers of drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and claimed the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
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Original: The makers of  drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and  the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
Revised: The makers of drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and the "Ready to Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
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Original: The makers of  drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and  the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml , when it actually had no detectable vitamin C content .
Revised: The makers of drink Ribena, GlaxoSmithKline, are in a New Zealand court today following advertisements stating that the blackberry drink was rich in vitamin C, had four times more vitamin C than oranges, and the "Ready To Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml .
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Original:  Tests have shown that it in fact does not have any vitamin C present . GSK have been fined $217,000 for their 15 breaches of New Zealand's fair trading act.
Revised:  Tests have shown that it in fact does not have any vitamin C content . GSK have been fined $217,000 for their 15 breaches of New Zealand's fair trading act.
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Original:  GSK want a 60,000 and no corrective advertisements.
Revised:  GSK want a 60,000 fine with no corrective advertisements.
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Original:   It was first revealed that Ribena did not contain any traces of it's 50-year promotional stunt, vitamin C when two 14-year-old Pakuranga College students did tests.
Revised:  It was first revealed that Ribena did not contain any traces of vitamin C when two 14-year-old Pakuranga College students did tests.
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Original:  At first Anna Devathasan and Jenny Suo thought they had done it wrong , so they tried again, but the same result came up.
Revised:  At first Anna Devathasan and Jenny Suo thought they had conducted their tests incorrectly , so they tried again, but the same result came up.
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Original:  So they contacted the firm three times, after which they got no response, so they went to the Commerce Commission  .
Revised:  They contacted the firm three times, after which they got no response, so they went to the Commerce Commission .
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Original:  So they contacted the firm three times, after which they got no response, so they went to the Commerce Commission  .
Revised:  So they contacted the firm three times, and approached the Commerce Commission .
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Original:  So they contacted the firm three times, after which they got no response, so they went to the Commerce Commission  .
Revised:  So they contacted the firm three times, after which they got no response, so they went to the Commerce Commission after receiving no response .
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Original:  Ms Devathasan said, "We did the study for a bit of fun.  
Revised:  Ms Devathasan said, "We did the study for a bit of fun. " 
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Original:  Ribena had promoted the drink as being rich in vitamin C, with four times as much as oranges, and claimed the "Ready to Drink" Rivana had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml.
Revised:  Ribena had promoted the drink as being rich in vitamin C, with four times as much as oranges, and claimed the "Ready to Drink" Ribena had 7mg of vitamin C per 100ml.
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Original:  GSK did, however, fight the expected fine of up to $350,000 and corrective advertisments, proposing instead a $ 60,000 fine with no corrective advertisements.
Revised:  GSK did, however, fight the expected fine of up to $350,000 and corrective advertisements, proposing instead a $ 60,000 fine with no corrective advertisements.
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Original:  In the end, they were fined $217,000 for their breaches of New Zealand's fair trading act, and will have to air correcting advertisments .
Revised:  In the end, they were fined $217,000 for their breaches of New Zealand's fair trading act, and will have to air correcting advertisements .
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Original:  Tests have shown that  Ribena does not have any  vitamin C content.
Revised:  Tests have shown that Ribena does not have any detectable vitamin C content.
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Original: Dave Rosser, medical director at University Hospitals Birmingham gave a statement about Yousafzai's release from hospital: "Malala is a strong young woman and has worked hard with the people caring for her to make excellent progress in her recovery.
Revised: Dave Rosser, medical director at , gave a statement about Yousafzai's release from hospital: "Malala is a strong young woman and has worked hard with the people caring for her to make excellent progress in her recovery.
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Original: Dave Rosser, medical director at , gave a statement about Yousafzai's release from hospital: "Malala is a strong young woman and has worked hard with the people caring for her to make excellent progress in her recovery.
Revised: Dave Rosser, medical director , gave a statement about Yousafzai's release from hospital: "Malala is a strong young woman and has worked hard with the people caring for her to make excellent progress in her recovery.
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Original:  New figures released yesterday by the CSO confirmed that Dublin has the highest level of disposable income per person in the Republic of Ireland whilst Caven, Donegal and Kerry have the lowest figures.
Revised:  New figures released yesterday by the Central Statistics Office of Ireland confirmed that Dublin has the highest level of disposable income per person in the Republic of Ireland whilst Caven, Donegal and Kerry have the lowest figures.
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Original:  The figures - althought begin the latest available - were taken in 2002.
Revised:  The figures - althought the latest available - were taken in 2002.
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Original:  The figures - althought begin the latest available - were taken in 2002.
Revised:  The figures - althought begin the latest available - were put together in 2002.
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Original:  It is likely the situation has altered somewhat since then
Revised:  It is likely the situation has changed somewhat since then
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Original:  New figures released yesterday by the Central Statistics Office of Ireland confirmed that Dublin has the highest level of disposable income per person in the Republic of Ireland whilst Caven , Donegal and Kerry have the lowest figures.
Revised:  New figures released yesterday by the Central Statistics Office of Ireland confirmed that Dublin has the highest level of disposable income per person in the Republic of Ireland whilst Cavan , Donegal and Kerry have the lowest figures.
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Original: "I hope we manage to get them ( the Iranian government ) to realize they have to release them.
Revised: "I hope we manage to get them the Iranian government ) to realize they have to release them.
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Original: "I hope we manage to get them ( the Iranian government ) to realize they have to release them.
Revised: "I hope we manage to get them ( the Iranian government to realize they have to release them.
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Original:  The sailors and marines from the frigate HMS Cornwall had been inspecting, in accordance with UN Security Council Resolution 1723, a ship that was believed to be smuggling cars into Iraq , though it was subsequently cleared after inspection  when Iranian gunboats surrounded the sailors and arrested them at gunpoint.
Revised:  The sailors and marines from the frigate HMS Cornwall had been inspecting, in accordance with UN Security Council Resolution 1723, a ship that was believed to be smuggling cars into Iraq ( though it was subsequently cleared after inspection when Iranian gunboats surrounded the sailors and arrested them at gunpoint.
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Original:  The sailors and marines from the frigate HMS Cornwall had been inspecting, in accordance with UN Security Council Resolution 1723, a ship that was believed to be smuggling cars into Iraq , though it was subsequently cleared after inspection  when Iranian gunboats surrounded the sailors and arrested them at gunpoint.
Revised:  The sailors and marines from the frigate HMS Cornwall had been inspecting, in accordance with UN Security Council Resolution 1723, a ship that was believed to be smuggling cars into Iraq , though it was subsequently cleared after inspection ), when Iranian gunboats surrounded the sailors and arrested them at gunpoint.
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Original:  On Tuesday British Prime Minister Tony Blair said in an televised interview that if the 15 sailors and marines who were arrested by Iranian forces are not released then Britain will be forced to "move into a different phase" of operations, and that Iran has only days to release all 15 sailors and marines.
Revised:  On Tuesday Prime Minister of the United Kingdom Tony Blair said in an televised interview that if the 15 sailors and marines who were arrested by Iranian forces are not released then Britain will be forced to "move into a different phase" of operations, and that Iran has only days to release all 15 sailors and marines.
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Original: 200pc|Tony Blair at 2002 NATO meeting.
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Original: The body of the 22-year-old English language teacher was identified by coleagues after it had been found on the balcony of a flat in Ichikawa near Tokyo, Japan.
Revised: The body of the 22-year-old English language teacher was identified by colleagues after it had been found on the balcony of a flat in Ichikawa near Tokyo, Japan.
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Original: With Australia posting their innings of 322, the teams went for lunch;
Revised: As Australia posted their innings of 322, the teams went for lunch;
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Original:  Meanwhile , the heavens opened and rain prevented any more play .
Revised:  meanwhile , the heavens opened and rain prevented any more play .
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Original:   Fall of wickets: 1-11 (Chanderpaul, 3.5 ov), 2-16 (Gayle, 7.2 ov), 3-20 (Samuels, 9.4 ov), 4-91 (Sarwan, 25.2 ov), 5-107 (Bravo, 28.3 ov), 6-156 (Lara, 35.3 ov), 7-172 (Smith, 37.4 ov), 8-199 (Taylor, 42.4  ov)
Revised:  ----> Fall of wickets: 1-11 (Chanderpaul, 3.5 ov), 2-16 (Gayle, 7.2 ov), 3-20 (Samuels, 9.4 ov), 4-91 (Sarwan, 25.2 ov), 5-107 (Bravo, 28.3 ov), 6-156 (Lara, 35.3 ov), 7-172 (Smith, 37.4 ov), 8-199 (Taylor, 42.4 ov)
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Original:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
Revised:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly effect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
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Original:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
Revised:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and could further strain relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
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Original:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
Revised:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottawa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
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Original:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day Immigration hearing in December.
Revised:  The case is being closely watched as it will directly affect at least 8, and possibly more, U.S. military deserters in Canada, and probably the already strained relations between Washington, D.C. and Ottowa . Hinzman's application was heard at a three-day immigration hearing in December.
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Original:  At the hearing he argued  he fled to Canada to avoid military service in Iraq in an illegal war, possibly making his participation a war crime under the Nuremberg tribunals.
Revised:  At the hearing he argued that he fled to Canada to avoid military service in Iraq in an illegal war, possibly making his participation a war crime under the Nuremberg tribunals.
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Original:  The U.S. Army has declared Hinzman AWOL (Absent WithOut Leave ), and  he would face charges as a deserter which include the possibility of the death penalty.
Revised:  The U.S. Army has declared Hinzman "Absent Without Leave" (AWOL ), and he would face charges as a deserter which include the possibility of the death penalty.
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Original:  The U.S. Army has declared Hinzman AWOL (Absent WithOut Leave ), and  he would face charges as a deserter which include the possibility of the death penalty.
Revised:  The U.S. Army has declared Hinzman AWOL (Absent WithOut Leave ), and said he would face charges as a deserter which include the possibility of the death penalty.
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Original:  "My life isn't that significant, but it's also not so worthless to be killed or go kill innocent people," he said . Hinzman is a practicing Budhist , and applied for conscientious objector status in the Army in 2002 before his unit was ordered to Afghanistan.
Revised:  "My life isn't that significant, but it's also not so worthless to be killed or go kill innocent people," said Hinzman . Hinzman is a practicing Budhist , and applied for conscientious objector status in the Army in 2002 before his unit was ordered to Afghanistan.
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Original:  "My life isn't that significant, but it's also not so worthless to be killed or go kill innocent people," he said . Hinzman is a practicing Budhist , and applied for conscientious objector status in the Army in 2002 before his unit was ordered to Afghanistan.
Revised:  "My life isn't that significant, but it's also not so worthless to be killed or go kill innocent people," he said . Hinzman is a practicing Buddhist , and applied for conscientious objector status in the Army in 2002 before his unit was ordered to Afghanistan.
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Original:  The Immigration and Refugee Board's decision is expected Thursday afternoon on their website, and will not be announced publically
Revised:  The Immigration and Refugee Board's decision is expected Thursday afternoon on their website, and will not be announced publicly
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Original:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcomb to the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft    
Revised:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcombto the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft 
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Original:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcomb to the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft    
Revised:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcomb to the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft . Of Spikes, Eagles general manager Tom Heckertsaid: "Takeo Spikes is a proven playmaker in the National Football League." Heckert added, "He has the ability to play all three linebacking positions and were happy to add him to our defense." 
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Original:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcombto the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft.
Revised:  Spikes was involved in a trade Monday that sent the 2-time Pro-Bowl linebacker, as well as backup quarterback Kelly Holcomb to the Philadelphia Eagles for defensive tackle Darwin Walker and an undisclosed draft pick, probably in a later round of the draft.
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Original:  Of Spikes, Eagles general manager Tom Heckertsaid : "Takeo Spikes is a proven playmaker in the National Football League."
Revised:  Of Spikes, Eagles general manager Tom Heckert said : "Takeo Spikes is a proven playmaker in the National Football League."
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Original: In an unusual development  a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the DAWN has been circulated over the internet.
Revised: In an unusual development , a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the DAWN has been circulated over the internet.
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Original: In an unusual development  a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the DAWN has been circulated over the internet.
Revised: In an unusual development a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the Dawn has been circulated over the internet.
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Original:  According to the letter, written by managing CEO of the DAWN group Hameed Haroon, the group has been under increasing pressure from the government to stop negative coverage of events happening on the troubled Pakistan-Afghanistan border as well as recent events in the troubled province of Balochistan.
Revised:  According to the letter, written by managing CEO of the Dawn Group, Hameed Haroon, the group has been under increasing pressure from the government to stop negative coverage of events happening on the troubled Pakistan-Afghanistan border as well as recent events in the troubled province of Balochistan.
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Original:  Pakistani President Pervaiz Musharraf has denied his government is targetting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, “ I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
Revised:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targetting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, “ I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
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Original:  Pakistani President Pervaiz Musharraf has denied his government is targetting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, “ I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
Revised:  Pakistani President Pervaiz Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, “ I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
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Original:  Pakistani President Pervaiz Musharraf has denied his government is targetting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, “ I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
Revised:  Pakistani President Pervaiz Musharraf has denied his government is targetting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, " I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today.
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Original: In an unusual development, a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the Dawn  has been circulated over the internet.
Revised: In an unusual development, a letter from the managing editor of Pakistan's biggest English language newspaper, the Dawn , has been circulated over the internet.
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Original:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today . 
Revised:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom . "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today . 
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Original:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today . 
Revised:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today ," he said in a recent speech. 
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