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Original:  A number of Brandon's friends and acquaintances stated that he had repeatedly shown signs of gerontophilia, trying to get to know older women in two supermarkers where his girlfriend worked, and where he spent a lot of his free time.
Revised:  A number of Brandon's friends and acquaintances stated that he had repeatedly shown signs of gerontophilia, trying to get to know older women in two supermarkets where his girlfriend worked, and where he spent a lot of his free time.
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Original: Arrest and exposure Tholmer came under suspicion at the end of October 1983, for the murders of 82-year-old Lucille Pyle and 72-year-old Mary Pauquette, and as a result, police began surveiling him on November 2nd.
Revised: Arrest and exposure Tholmer came under suspicion at the end of October 1983, for the murders of 82-year-old Lucille Pyle and 72-year-old Mary Pauquette, and as a result, police began surveiling him on November 2.
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Original: He was capped for France against Ireland in Paris in the 2004 Six Nations Championship, which France eventually went onto win.
Revised: He was capped for France against Ireland in Paris in the 2004 Six Nations Championship, which France eventually went on to win.
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Original: Brian Liebenberg (born 19 September 1979 in Benoni) is a South Africa-born French  rugby union footballer.
Revised: Brian Liebenberg (born 19 September 1979 in Benoni) is a South Africa-born French former rugby union footballer.
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Original: The outbreak has been blamed for several instances of supply shortages , stemming from globally increased usage of equipment to fight outbreaks, panic buying ( which in several places led to shelves being cleared of grocery essentials such as food, toilet paper, and bottled water), and disruption to factory and logistic operations.
Revised: The outbreak has been blamed for supply shortages from panic buying ( which in several places led to shelves being cleared of grocery essentials such as food, toilet paper, and bottled water), and disruption to factory and logistic operations.
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Original: The outbreak has been blamed for several instances of supply shortages , stemming from globally increased usage of equipment to fight outbreaks, panic buying ( which in several places led to shelves being cleared of grocery essentials such as food, toilet paper, and bottled water), and disruption to factory and logistic operations.
Revised: The outbreak has been blamed for several instances of supply shortages , stemming from globally increased usage of equipment to fight outbreaks, panic buying ( emptying groceries of essentials such as food, toilet paper, and bottled water), and disruption to factory and logistic operations.
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Original:   The technology industry, in particular, has warned of delays to shipments of electronic goods.
Revised:  The technology industry, in particular, warned of delays to shipments of electronic goods.
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Original:  The pandemic has disrupted global food supplies and threatens to trigger a new food crisis .
Revised:  pandemic disrupted global food supplies and threatens to trigger a new food crisis .
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Original:  The pandemic has disrupted global food supplies and threatens to trigger a new food crisis .
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Original:  In April 2020, David Beasley, head of the World Food Programme (WFP), said "we could be facing multiple famines of biblical proportions within a short few months."
Revised:  In April 2020, World Food Programme (WFP), said "we could be facing multiple famines of biblical proportions within a short few months."
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Original:  In April 2020, David Beasley, head of the World Food Programme (WFP), said "we could be facing multiple famines of biblical proportions within a short few months."
Revised:  In April 2020, David Beasley, head of the World Food Programme head David Beasley said "we could be facing multiple famines of biblical proportions within a short few months."
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Original:  Senior officials at the United Nations estimated in April 2020 that an additional 130 million people could starve, for a total of 265 million by the end of 2020.
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Original:  The 2021 global energy crisis was driven by a global surge in demand as the world quit the economic recession caused by COVID-19, particularly due to strong energy demand in Asia.
Revised:  The 2021 global energy crisis was driven by a global surge in demand as the world economy recovered. Energy demand was particularly strong in Asia.
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Original: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections due to fears of spreading the virus .
Revised: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections due to fears of spreading the virus .
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Original: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections due to fears of spreading the virus .
Revised: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of politicians, and rescheduling of elections due to fears of spreading the virus .
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Original: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections due to fears of spreading the virus .
Revised: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections .
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Original:  Although they have broad support among epidemiologists, social distancing measures have been politically controversial in many countries.
Revised:  Although they have broad support among epidemiologists, non-pharmaceutical interventions (NPI) became controversial in many countries.
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Original:  On 23 March 2020, United Nations Secretary-General António Manuel de Oliveira Guterres issued an appeal for a global ceasefire in response to the pandemic ;
Revised:  On 23 March 2020, United Nations Secretary-General António Manuel de Oliveira Guterres issued an appeal for a global ceasefire ;
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Original:  The government of China has been criticised by the United States, the UK Minister for the Cabinet Office Michael Gove, and others for its handling of the pandemic.
Revised:  The government of China was criticised by the United States, the UK Minister for the Cabinet Office Michael Gove, and others for its handling of the pandemic.
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Original:  The government of China has been criticised by the United States, the UK Minister for the Cabinet Office Michael Gove, and others for its handling of the pandemic.
Revised:  The government of China has been criticised by the United States, UK Minister Michael Gove, and others for its handling of the pandemic.
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Original:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
Revised:  Multiple Province-level administrators were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
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Original:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
Revised:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of quarantine measures . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
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Original:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
Revised:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators claimed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
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Original:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect CCP general secretary Xi Jinpingfrom the controversy .
Revised:  A number of provincial-level administrators of the Communist Party of China were dismissed over their handling of the quarantine measuresin China, a sign of discontent with their response to the outbreak . Some commentators believed this move was intended to protect General Secretary Xi Jinping .
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Original:  The US intelligence community claims China intentionally under-reported its number of COVID-19 cases.
Revised:  The US intelligence community claimed that China intentionally under-reported its number of COVID-19 cases.
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Original:  The Chinese government maintains it has acted swiftly and transparently.
Revised:  The Chinese government maintained that it had acted swiftly and transparently.
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Original:  However, journalistsand activists who have reported on the pandemic have been detained by authorities , such as Zhang Zhan, who was arrested and tortured for reporting on the pandemic and the detainment of other independent journalists .
Revised:  However, journalistsand activists who have reported on the pandemic , such as Zhang Zhan, who was arrested and tortured for reporting on the pandemic and the detainment of other independent journalists .
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Original:  However, journalistsand activists who have reported on the pandemic have been detained by authorities , such as Zhang Zhan, who was arrested and tortured for reporting on the pandemic and the detainment of other independent journalists .
Revised:  However, journalistsand activists who have reported on the pandemic have been detained by authorities , such as Zhang Zhan, who was arrested and tortured for his reporting .
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Original:  Italy In early March, the Italian government criticised the EU's lack of solidarity with COVID-19-affected Italy—Maurizio Massari, Italy's ambassador to the EU, said "only China responded bilaterally", not the EU .
Revised:  Italy In early March, the Italian government criticised the EU's lack of solidarity with Italy .
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Original:  Kremlin spokesman Dmitry Peskov said "when offering assistance to US colleagues, Putin%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% assumes that when US manufacturers of medical equipment and materials gain momentum, they will also be able to reciprocate if necessary."
Revised:  Kremlin spokesman Dmitry Peskov said "when offering assistance to US colleagues, %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% assumes that when US manufacturers of medical equipment and materials gain momentum, they will also be able to reciprocate if necessary."
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Original:  Political analysts believe it may have contributed to Donald Trump's loss in the 2020 presidential election.
Revised:  Some political analysts believe that the government's responses contributed to Donald Trump's loss in the 2020 presidential election.
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Original:  Beginning in mid-April 2020, there were protests in several US states against government-imposed business closures and restricted personal movement and association.
Revised:  Beginning in mid-April 2020, protests broke out in several US states against government-imposed business closures and restricted personal movement and association.
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Original:  Simultaneously, protests ensued by essential workers  in the form of a general strike.
Revised:  Simultaneously, protests by essential workers in the form of a general strike.
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Original:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [  . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures  infected.
Revised:  In early October 2020, Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [ . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures infected.
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Original:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [  . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures  infected.
Revised:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and various other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [ . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures infected.
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Original:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [  . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures  infected.
Revised:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [Putin . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures infected.
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Original:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [  . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures  infected.
Revised:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [ . In Iran about two dozen parliament members and political figures infected.
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Original:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [  . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures  infected.
Revised:  In early October 2020, Donald Trump, his family members, and many other government officials were diagnosed with COVID-19, further disrupting the country's politics [ . The Iranian government has been heavily affected by the virus, with about two dozen parliament members and political figures became infected.
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Original:  Iran 's President Hassan Rouhani wrote a public letter to world leaders asking for help on 14 March 2020, saying they were struggling to fight the outbreak due to a lack of access to international markets from the United States sanctions against Iran.
Revised:  Iran President Hassan Rouhani wrote a public letter to world leaders asking for help on 14 March 2020, saying they were struggling to fight the outbreak due to a lack of access to international markets from the United States sanctions against Iran.
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Original:  Some countries have passed emergency legislation in response to the pandemic.
Revised:  Some countries passed emergency legislation in response to the pandemic.
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Original:  Some commentators have expressed concern that it could allow governments to strengthen their grip on power.
Revised:  Some commentators expressed concern that it could allow governments to strengthen their grip on power.
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Original:  In the Philippines, lawmakers granted president Rodrigo Duterte temporary emergency powers during the pandemic .
Revised:  In the Philippines, lawmakers granted president Rodrigo Duterte temporary emergency powers .
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Original:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
Revised:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow Prime Minister Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
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Original:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
Revised:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
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Original:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
Revised:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament and elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
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Original:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those deemed to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
Revised:  In Hungary, the parliament voted to allow the prime minister, Viktor Orbán , to rule by decree indefinitely, suspend parliament as well as elections, and punish those proven to have spread false information about the virus and the government's handling of the crisis.
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Original:  In some countries , including Egypt, Turkey, and Thailand, opposition activists and government critics have been arrested for allegedly spreading fake news about the COVID-19 pandemic .
Revised:  In countries including Egypt, Turkey, and Thailand, opposition activists and government critics have been arrested for allegedly spreading fake news about the COVID-19 pandemic .
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Original:  In some countries , including Egypt, Turkey, and Thailand, opposition activists and government critics have been arrested for allegedly spreading fake news about the COVID-19 pandemic .
Revised:  In some countries , including Egypt, Turkey, and Thailand, opposition activists and government critics were arrested for allegedly spreading fake news about the COVID-19 pandemic .
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Original:  Rates of imprisoned or detained journalists increased worldwide, with some being related to the pandemic.
Revised:  Rates of imprisoned or detained journalists increased worldwide, in part due to the pandemic.
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Original: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic  affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of  politicians, and rescheduling of elections  .
Revised: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic has affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of politicians, and rescheduling of elections .
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Original: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic  affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of  politicians, and rescheduling of elections  .
Revised: [[File:2020 coronavirus task force.jpg|alt=Meeting of the Italian government task force to face the coronavirus outbreak, 23 February 2020|An Italian government task force meets to discuss COVID-19 in February 2020]] The pandemic affected the political systems of multiple countries, causing suspensions of legislative activities, isolations or deaths of multiple politicians, and rescheduling of elections .
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