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Original: Source URL USA is leader in manufature and placement of landmines and refused to sign Princess Diana's ban on landmines...please confirm.
Revised:  USA is leader in manufature and placement of landmines and refused to sign Princess Diana's ban on landmines...please confirm.
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Original:  " Four US troops were killed in action but we have no indication that this was a new mine or an IED (improvised explosive device)," said Cindy Moore, a US military spokeswoman  .
Revised:  " Four US troops were killed in action but we have no indication that this was a new mine or an IED (improvised explosive device)," Cindy Moore, a US military spokeswoman .
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Original:  " Four US troops were killed in action but we have no indication that this was a new mine or an IED (improvised explosive device)," said Cindy Moore, a US military spokeswoman  .
Revised:  " Four US troops were killed in action but we have no indication that this was a new mine or an IED (improvised explosive device)," said Cindy Moore, a US military spokeswoman said .
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Original:  Seven US soldiers have been killed this year in Afghanistan
Revised:  Seven U.S. soldiers have been killed this year in Afghanistan
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Original: Four US soldiers were killed by an explosion on Saturday morning in Afghanistan   . "(The ) troops were killed in action but we have no indication that this was a new mine or an IED (improvised explosive device)," Cindy Moore, a US military spokeswoman said.
Revised: Four US soldiers were killed by an explosion on Saturday morning in Afghanistan . 
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Original:  Seven U.S. soldiers have been killed this year in Afghanistan  
Revised:  Seven U.S. soldiers have been killed this year in Afghanistan . 
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Original:  Michael Carrick then opened the scoring for United as he was supplied the ball by Ronaldo, and the Englishman's shot curled by Doni.
Revised:  Michael Carrick then opened the scoring for United as he was supplied the ball by Ronaldo, and the Englishman's shot curled past Doni.
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Original: The Forbidden City Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill  one year in the making  to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
Revised: The Forbidden City Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill , one year in the making to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
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Original: The Forbidden City Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill  one year in the making  to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
Revised: The Forbidden City Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill one year in the making , to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
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Original:  Director of the Beijing Administrative Bureau of Cultural Heritage, Mei Ninghua, said  "The most encouraging content of the regulations is that Beijing will pay more attention to protecting the old city's landscape in its entirety, rather than just focussing on scattered heritage sites ,".
Revised:  Director of the Beijing Administrative Bureau of Cultural Heritage, Mei Ninghua, said , "The most encouraging content of the regulations is that Beijing will pay more attention to protecting the old city's landscape in its entirety, rather than just focussing on scattered heritage sites ,".
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Original:  Director of the Beijing Administrative Bureau of Cultural Heritage, Mei Ninghua, said  "The most encouraging content of the regulations is that Beijing will pay more attention to protecting the old city's landscape in its entirety, rather than just focussing on scattered heritage sites ,".
Revised:  Director of the Beijing Administrative Bureau of Cultural Heritage, Mei Ninghua, said "The most encouraging content of the regulations is that Beijing will pay more attention to protecting the old city's landscape in its entirety, rather than just focussing on scattered heritage sites ."
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Original:  "Now the new regulations give legal buttress to the protection of siheyuan courtyard homes, as well as other unmovable ancient treasures, that have yet to be listed but are at risk of being demolished during urban renovation , " Source  
Revised:  "Now the new regulations give legal buttress to the protection of siheyuan courtyard homes, as well as other unmovable ancient treasures, that have yet to be listed but are at risk of being demolished during urban renovation . " Source 
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Original:  "Now the new regulations give legal buttress to the protection of siheyuan courtyard homes, as well as other unmovable ancient treasures, that have yet to be listed but are at risk of being demolished during urban renovation , " Source  
Revised:  "Now the new regulations give legal buttress to the protection of siheyuan courtyard homes, as well as other unmovable ancient treasures, that have yet to be listed but are at risk of being demolished during urban renovation , " Source Source 
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Original: The Forbidden City Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill, one year in the making, to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
Revised:  Beijing's city legislature has approved a bill, one year in the making, to safeguard the historical and cultural heritage of old Beijing.
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Original: Fulham's form has been poor as of late, with the team not winning in their past seven days .
Revised: Fulham's form has been poor as of late, with the team not winning in their past seven games .
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Original: Fulham FC coach Chris Coleman was sacked Tuesday, the day after a disappointing 3-1 loss to Manchester City.
Revised: coach was sacked Tuesday, the day after a disappointing 3-1 loss to Manchester City.
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Original:  The Easter weekend was especially harsh for the Cottagers, as they leaked seven goals, only scoring two themselves in games against Everton and Manchester City.
Revised:  The weekend was especially harsh for the Cottagers, as they leaked seven goals, only scoring two themselves in games against Everton and Manchester City.
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Original:  Sanchez's first match in charge will come against Reading on the 14th of April.
Revised:  Sanchez's first match in charge will come against on the 14th of April.
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Original: 200px|Johnny Cash in front of his home A fast-moving fire engulfed the home of late singer Johnny Cash  Tuesday.
Revised: 200px|Johnny Cash in front of his home A fast-moving fire engulfed the home of late singer Johnny Cash on Tuesday.
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Original:  A-Rod hit the two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning  . Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning. before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
Revised:  A-Rod hit a two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning . Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning. before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
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Original: Minnesota hopes to wrap up the series tomorrow with a win to keep them above .500.
Revised: Minnesota hopes to wrap up the series tomorrow , each hoping for a win to keep them above .500.
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Original: Minnesota hopes to wrap up the series tomorrow with a win to keep them above .500.
Revised: Minnesota hopes to wrap up the series tomorrow with a win to stay above .500.
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Original:  Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning . before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
Revised:  Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
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Original: 200px|Yankee Alex Rodriguez, who hit his sixth home run of the season Tuesday Jake Hyman's home run streak was extended Tuesday in the Yankee's win over the Twins in Minneapolis . A-Rod hit a two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning, making it the fourth game in a row that he has cleared the fence.
Revised: 200px|Yankee Alex Rodriguez, who hit his sixth home run of the season Tuesday Jake Hyman's home run streak was extended Tuesday in the Yankee's win over the Twins in Minnesota|Minneapolis . A-Rod hit a two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning, making it the fourth game in a row that he has cleared the fence.
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Original: 200px|Yankee Alex Rodriguez, who hit his sixth home run of the season Tuesday Alex Rodriguez's home run streak was extended Tuesday in the Yankee's win over the Twins in Minnesota|Minneapolis . A-Rod hit a two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning, making it the fourth game in a row that he has cleared the fence.
Revised: 200px|Yankee Alex Rodriguez, who hit his sixth home run of the season Tuesday Alex Rodriguez's home run streak was extended Tuesday in the Yankee's win over the Twins in Minneapolis . A-Rod hit a two-run shot off of Twins starter Boof Bonser in the first inning, making it the fourth game in a row that he has cleared the fence.
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Original:  Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning  before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
Revised:  Bonser gave up six hits and seven runs in the four and one third innings he pitched, including a Johnny Damon three-run homer over the right field wall in the fifth inning . before being relieved by Jesse Crain.
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Original:  The other target was the police station of Bab Ezzouar, in the east of Algiers, causing the death of 11 people and wounding 44 others.
Revised:  The other target was the police station of Bab Ezzouar, east of Algiers, causing the death of 11 people and wounding 44 others.
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Original: The bombing at the headquarters of the prime minister This morning, Algiers, the capital of Algeria, was targeted by two deadly terrorist bombings.
Revised:  This morning, Algiers, the capital of Algeria, was targeted by two deadly terrorist bombings.
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Original:  "So I am stepping aside from elected politics for the time being and will now take part in public life in a different way   .
Revised:  "So I am stepping aside from elected politics for the time being and will now take part in public life in a different way ." .
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Original:  "I also plan to continue to play an active role in the community.  
Revised:  "I also plan to continue to play an active role in the community. " 
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Original: In September, she was cought cheating with former NHL player Tie Domi.
Revised: In September, she was caught cheating with former NHL player Tie Domi.
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Original:  In October 2006, Peter MacKay refered to Stranach as a "dog".
Revised:  In October 2006, Peter MacKay referred to Stranach as a "dog".
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Original:   Six Canadian soldiers that also were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton  Trenton, Ontario today   
Revised:  Six Canadian soldiers that also were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton in Trenton, Ontario today 
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Original:   Six Canadian soldiers that also were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton  Trenton, Ontario today   
Revised:  Six Canadian soldiers that also were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton Trenton, Ontario today . 
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Original: Six Canadian soldiers that also were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton in Trenton, Ontario today.
Revised: Six Canadian soldiers that were killed in southern Afghanistan last Sunday were returned to CFB Trenton in Trenton, Ontario today.
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Original:  More infomation will be coming shortly  
Revised:  More infomation will be coming shortly . 
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Original:  The bombings occurred about 38 kilometres west of Kandahar said Col.
Revised:  The bombings occurred about 38 kilometres west of Kandahar said Colonel
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Original:  Colonel Mike Cessford , deputy commander of Task Force Afghanistan, provided the details to reporters in Kandahar Thursday morning.
Revised:  Colonel Cessford provided the details to reporters in Kandahar Thursday morning.
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Original: It is beleived that should the plan go ahead, the federal government will spend hundreds of millions of dollars on the project.
Revised: It is believed that should the plan go ahead, the federal government will spend hundreds of millions of dollars on the project.
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Original:  The report is expected to gain only minor attention from the Queensland government, which claims thjat it is too far to pump water from NSW.
Revised:  The report is expected to gain only minor attention from the Queensland government, which claims that it is too far to pump water from NSW.
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Original: Scientists at NASA point out that if the stars for other planets were in a different state than our sun and if the light frequency that reached the planet' s surface was different, then the plants on those planets would have also evolved a different form of chlorophyll.
Revised: Scientists at NASA point out that if the stars for other planets were in a different state than our sun and if the light frequency that reached the planets' surface was different, then the plants on those planets would have also evolved a different form of chlorophyll.
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Original:  From there , a computer model was designed to predict the color of other plants and bacteria on other planets given the information known about the earth plants .
Revised:  Using this data , a computer model was designed to predict the color of other plants and bacteria on other planets given the information known about the earth plants .
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Original:  From there , a computer model was designed to predict the color of other plants and bacteria on other planets given the information known about the earth plants .
Revised:  From there , a computer model was designed to predict the color of other plants and bacteria on other planets .
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Original: 180px|Flag of CanadaThe Canadian Conservative Party plans to reject the budget on a provision which allows the government to control greenhouse gas emissions, says its leader, Stephen Harper.
Revised: 180px|Flag of CanadaThe Canadian Conservative Party plans to reject the budget because of a provision which allows the government to control greenhouse gas emissions, says its leader, Stephen Harper.
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Original:  The NDP and Bloc Québécois say that they will oppose the bill.
Revised:  The NDP and Bloc Québécois have both said that they will oppose the bill.
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Original:  It will be up to  Paul Martin whether a defeat triggers an election
Revised:  It will be up to Prime Minister Paul Martin whether a defeat triggers an election
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Original:  Harper said Thursday that his party plans to vote against the omnibus budget bill if it includes an amendment to the Canadian Environmental Protection Act which would add greenhouse gas emissions to the list of controlled substances, allowing the Canadian government to regulate those emissions.
Revised:  Harper said Thursday that his party plans to vote against the omnibus budget bill if it includes the amendment to the Canadian Environmental Protection Act which would add greenhouse gas emissions to the list of controlled substances, allowing the Canadian government to regulate those emissions.
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Original:  A recently ammended provision allowing the government to control greenhouse gas emissions is, "Completely unacceptable." says its leader Stephen Harper.
Revised:  A recently amended provision allowing the government to control greenhouse gas emissions is, "Completely unacceptable." says its leader Stephen Harper.
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Original: 180px|Flag of Canada The Canadian Conservative Party plans to reject the federal budget.
Revised:  The Canadian Conservative Party plans to reject the federal budget.
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Original:  The Sirenoscincus mobydick name is after the existing parent genus, and a from the 1851 novel by .
Revised:  The name is after the existing parent genus, and a from the 1851 novel by .
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Original: AM: No. In zoology, it is only needed to publish the description of a new species (and to give it a name) in a scientific journal, and to designate an holotype specimen (= specimen that will be the official reference for this species), to get this new species "officially" recognised by the scientific community.
Revised: AM: No. In zoology, it is only needed to publish the description of a new species (and to give it a name) in a scientific journal, and to designate a holotype specimen (= specimen that will be the official reference for this species), to get this new species "officially" recognised by the scientific community.
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Original:  That does not mean that this new species is "correct" (it might be invalidated by subsequent counter-studies), but that means that this discovery and the new name of  species are officially existing.
Revised:  That does not mean that this new species is "correct" (it might be invalidated by subsequent counter-studies), but that means that this discovery and the new name of the species are officially existing.
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Original:  But other studies (including molecular studies) are currently in progress, in order to focus on the phylogenetic position and the evolution of this species  
Revised:  But other studies (including molecular studies) are currently in progress, in order to focus on the phylogenetic position and the evolution of this species . 
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Original: The young Pittsburgh Penguins were given their first taste of the NHL Stanley Cup Playoffs , Wednesday night.
Revised: The young were given their first taste of the NHL Stanley Cup Playoffs , Wednesday night.
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Original: The young Pittsburgh Penguins were given their first taste of the NHL Stanley Cup Playoffs , Wednesday night.
Revised: The young Pittsburgh Penguins were given their first taste of the , Wednesday night.
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Original:  The Ottawa Senators defeated the Penguins 6-3 to take a one game advantage in the best of seven series.
Revised:  The defeated the Penguins 6-3 to take a one game advantage in the best of seven series.
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Original:  The experienced Senators exploded out of the gates, taking an early lead just 1:37 into regulation, when Andrej Meszaros scored the first goal of the series.
Revised:  The experienced Senators exploded out of the gates, taking an early lead just 1:37 into regulation, when scored the first goal of the series.
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Original:  Chris Kelly would score 5:01 later to double the Sens' lead to two goals.
Revised:  would score 5:01 later to double the Sens' lead to two goals.
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Original:  In the second period, Tom Preissing would give Ottawa a 3-0 advantage at 14:38.
Revised:  In the second period, would give Ottawa a 3-0 advantage at 14:38.
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Original:  The Penguins would finally get on the scoresheet 2:20 later, when rookie Jordan Staal scored his first career playoff goal, to make it a two goal game.
Revised:  The Penguins would finally get on the scoresheet 2:20 later, when rookie scored his first career playoff goal, to make it a two goal game.
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Original:  Ottawa wouldn't let up, scoring two more goals before Sergei Gonchar found the back of the net.
Revised:  Ottawa wouldn't let up, scoring two more goals before found the back of the net.
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Original:  Sidney Crosby would tally his first career playoff goal with :49 left in the game, burying the puck behind Ottawa goaltender Ray Emery .
Revised:  Sidney Crosby would tally his first career playoff goal with :49 left in the game, burying the puck behind Ottawa goaltender .
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Original:  PIT Marc-Andre Flury 36 30 .833PIT Jocelyn Thibault 1 1 1OTT Ray Emery 26 23 .885
Revised:  PIT Marc-Andre Fleury 36 30 .833PIT Jocelyn Thibault 1 1 1OTT Ray Emery 26 23 .885
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Original: 35 NSH Alexander Radulov (1) Peter Forsberg, Greg Zanon 1-13 2nd 3:56 NSH .P. Dumont (1) Jason Arnott, Scott Hartnell 1-2 4 2nd 5:31 SJ Mike Grier (1) Patrick Rissmiller, Curtis Brown 2-25 2nd 12:57 SJ Craig Rivet (1) PP Patrick Marleau 3-26 2nd 15:52 SJ Milan Michalek (1) Joe Thornton, Marc-Edouard Vlasic 4-27 3rd 13:05 NSH Alexander Radulov (2) Shea Weber 4-38 3rd 19:09 NSH J.P. Dumont 2 Shea Weber, Martin Erat 4-49 2OT 0:00  Patrick Rissmiller (1) Patrick Marleau, Mike Grier 5-4
Revised: 35 NSH Alexander Radulov (1) Peter Forsberg, Greg Zanon 1-13 2nd 3:56 NSH .P. Dumont (1) Jason Arnott, Scott Hartnell 1-2 4 2nd 5:31 SJ Mike Grier (1) Patrick Rissmiller, Curtis Brown 2-25 2nd 12:57 SJ Craig Rivet (1) PP Patrick Marleau 3-26 2nd 15:52 SJ Milan Michalek (1) Joe Thornton, Marc-Edouard Vlasic 4-27 3rd 13:05 NSH Alexander Radulov (2) Shea Weber 4-38 3rd 19:09 NSH J.P. Dumont 2 Shea Weber, Martin Erat 4-49 2OT 0:00 SJ Patrick Rissmiller (1) Patrick Marleau, Mike Grier 5-4
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Original:  Trailing the Sharks by only one goal , J.P. Dumont scored his second of the game  with :51 remaining in regulation to knot it up at four goals apiece.
Revised:  Trailing the Sharks by only one goal , J.P. Dumont scored his second of the game came with :51 remaining in regulation to knot it up at four goals apiece.
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Original:  Neither team managed to score in the first overtime, and it seemed that neither would score in the second until Patrick Rissmiller buried one behind Tomas Vokoun, lifting the Sharks to the 5-4 victory  .
Revised:  Neither team managed to score in the first overtime, and it seemed that neither would score in the second overtime period. The final score came from Patrick Rissmiller, who buried one behind Tomas Vokoun, lifting the Sharks to the 5-4 victory .
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Original:  The series  is just getting started, with the Sharks facing the Predators again on Friday at 8:00 PM  , when Nashville will try to even the best of seven series  .
Revised:  The series The series is just getting started, with the Sharks facing the Predators again on Friday at 8:00 PM , when Nashville will try to even the best of seven series .
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Original:  The series  is just getting started, with the Sharks facing the Predators again on Friday at 8:00 PM  , when Nashville will try to even the best of seven series  .
Revised:  The series is just getting started, and the Sharks will face the Predators again on Friday at 8:00 PM , when Nashville will try to even the best of seven series .
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