wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The person who left rude remarks on at least five students' returned NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) exam papers has been identified as a temporary New Zealand Post worker, and ex-student of Cashmere High School, the same college the students went to.
Revised:  The person who left rude remarks on at least five students' returned NCEA (National Certificate of Educational Achievement) exam papers has been identified as a temporary New Zealand Post worker, and ex-student of Cashmere High School, the same school the students went to.
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Original:  The evidence purportedly showed that Malacañang sanctioned the series of extrajudicial killings in the country.
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Original: "The international pressure will humiliate the government, ” Sari added.
Revised: "The international pressure will humiliate the government, " Sari added.
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Original:  Making one general accountable would not solve the extrajudicial killings in the country, according to America Vera-Zavala of Sweden ’ s Left International Forum.
Revised:  Making one general accountable would not solve the extrajudicial killings in the country, according to America Vera-Zavala of Sweden ' s Left International Forum.
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Original:  It would be a very unique country if only one general is responsible for all this, ” she said.
Revised:  It would be a unique country if only one general is responsible for all this, ” she said.
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Original:  It would be a very unique country if only one general is responsible for all this, ” she said.
Revised:  It would be a very unique country if only one general is responsible for all this, " she said.
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Original:  The instructions were not clear though on how she intended to address the latter ’ s recommendation to hold Palparan accountable for the killings.
Revised:  The instructions were not clear though on how she intended to address the latter ' s recommendation to hold Palparan accountable for the killings.
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Original:  "But since he is already retired, we cannot take him under our jurisdiction, ” Esperon added.
Revised:  "But since he is already retired, we cannot take him under our jurisdiction, " Esperon added.
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Original:  "Melo is silent on GMA ’ s (President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo ’ s) role.
Revised:  "Melo is silent on GMA ' s (President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo ’ s) role.
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Original:  "Melo is silent on GMA ’ s (President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo ’ s) role.
Revised:  "Melo is silent on GMA ’ s (President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo ' s) role.
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Original:  ” Ocampo said in a phone interview.
Revised:  " Ocampo said in a phone interview.
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Original: On January 24, 2006 the price of Unleaded fuel in Bathurst dropped from 119.9 cents per litre to 117.9 cents, however the discount has been short lived.
Revised: On January 24, the price of Unleaded fuel in Bathurst dropped from 119.9 cents per litre to 117.9 cents, however the discount has been short lived.
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Original:  On January 24, the price of Unleaded fuel in Bathurst dropped  from 119.9 cents per litre to 117.9 cents , however the discount has been short lived.
Revised:  On January 24, the price of Unleaded fuel in Bathurst dropped from 119.9 centsto 117.9 cents , however the discount has been short lived.
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Original:  In an investigation by Wikinews , sites in the Blue Mountains and Sydney's Inner-West have either stabilised or reduced by a further 1 to 2 cents following the ACCC's warning .
Revised:  Wikinews has discovered in its investigations that the price of unleaded petrol at sites in the Blue Mountains and Sydney's Inner-West have either stabilised or reduced by a further 1 to 2 cents following the ACCC's warning .
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Original:  As at 9:30PM AEDT tonight, unleaded petrol at 93 Km from Bathurst at Medlow Bath was a whopping 12 cents per litre cheaper  .
Revised:  Unleaded petrol 93 Km from Bathurst at Medlow Bath was a whopping 12 cents per litre cheaper .
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Original:  Fuel in Sydney's Inner-West was only 2 cents per litre less than that at Medlow Bath, despite being a similar distance apart.
Revised:  Fuel in Sydney's Inner-West was only 2 cents per litre less than Medlow Bath, despite being a similar distance apart.
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Original: Petrol in Bahturst has returned to previous levels following a slight reduction after the ACCC's warning The price of fuel at United Petroleum in Medlow Bath has not changed since January 20 (after the ACCC's warning) Fuel at this service station in Sydney's Inner-West have dropped 2 cents since this photograph was taken on January 20 The petrol price reductions seen across most of Australia have been short-lived for those living in the regional New South Wales city of Bathurst.
Revised:  The petrol price reductions seen across most of Australia have been short-lived for those living in the regional New South Wales city of Bathurst.
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Original:  The ACCC argued that the wholesale cost of petrol was around 10 cents per litre higher than theSingapore market, which Australia benchmarks itself against.
Revised:  The ACCC argued that the wholesale cost of petrol was around 10 cents per litre higher than the Singapore market, which Australia benchmarks itself against.
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Original: The jury that gives away each year iF product design awards  consists of leading design experts gathered in one place from all over the world  .
Revised: The jury that gives away the iF product design awards consists of leading design experts gathered in one place from all over the world .
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Original: The jury that gives away each year iF product design awards  consists of leading design experts gathered in one place from all over the world  .
Revised: The jury that gives away each year iF product design awards consists of leading design experts from all over the world .
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Original: The jury that gives away each year iF product design awards  consists of leading design experts gathered in one place from all over the world  .
Revised: The jury that gives away each year iF product design awards consists of leading design experts gathered in one place from all over the world gathered in one place .
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Original:  There is a number of fields of disciplines which have their own awards.
Revised:  There are a number of fields of disciplines which have their own awards.
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Original:  There is a number of fields of disciplines which have their own awards.
Revised:  There is a number of fields and disciplines which have their own awards.
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Original: TAG Heuer Logo Officials from TAG Heuer have announced that the company received the iF product design award, which was given away by the jury from the International Forum Design.
Revised:  Officials from TAG Heuer have announced that the company received the iF product design award, which was given away by the jury from the International Forum Design.
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Original:  Influenza Structure Neurominidase is found in nine forms, N1 to N9, this protein allows the progeny viri to escape the infected cell by cleaving sialic acid.
Revised:  Neurominidase is found in nine forms, N1 to N9, this protein allows the progeny viri to escape the infected cell by cleaving sialic acid.
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Original:  Of the 144 combinations of N(1-9) and H(1-16) we have had three
Revised:  Of the 144 combinations of N(1-9) and H(1-16) we have had thre
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Original:  Of the 144 combinations of N(1-9) and H(1-16) we have had thre
Revised:  Of the 144 combinations of N(1-9) and H(1-16) we have had three
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Original: India's steelmaker Tata Steel, of the Tata Group  buys Anglo-Dutch steel giant Corus Group for £6.7 billion ($12 billion), making it the world's fifth largest steel manufacturer.
Revised: India's steelmaker Tata Steel, of the Tata Group , buys Anglo-Dutch steel giant Corus Group for £6.7 billion ($12 billion), making it the world's fifth largest steel manufacturer.
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Original: "He was detained within the grounds and did not gain access to any buildings," said a spokeman for the police, Tony Rymer.
Revised: "He was detained within the grounds and did not gain access to any buildings," said a spokesperson for the police, Tony Rymer.
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Original:  According to a Gloucester Police spokeswoman, a man from Bristol, England was arrested after weilding a pitchfork around the property.
Revised:  According to a Gloucester Police spokeswoman, a man from Bristol, England was arrested after wielding a pitchfork around the property.
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Original:  The name of the 55 year-old has not been released, but police charged him with trespassing.
Revised:  The name of the 55-year-old has not been released, but police charged him with trespassing.
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Original:  Camilla and Charles, who were both present and sleeping on the estate at the time, were not injured and the man did not gain access to any buildings on the property
Revised:  Camilla and Charles, who were both present and sleeping on the estate at the time, were not injured 
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Original:  "We're all actors so we're really excited for all the opportunities for everyone.  
Revised:  "We're all actors so we're really excited for all the opportunities for everyone. " 
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Original:  The Irish effort improved in the second half with two w:Trytrys closing the gap - but it was never going to be enough to beat a superb Welsh side.
Revised:  The Irish effort improved in the second half with two trys closing the gap - but it was never going to be enough to beat a superb Welsh side.
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Original: 225px Wales have beaten Ireland in their eagerly anticipated encounter with the Celts in Cardiff today.
Revised: 225px Wales have beaten Ireland in their eagerly anticipated encounter with the Celts in today.
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Original:  It is the Welsh rugby team's first Grand Slam since 1978.
Revised:  It is the Welsh team's first Grand Slam since 1978.
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Original:  It is the Welsh rugby team's first Grand Slam since 1978.
Revised:  It is the Welsh rugby team's first since 1978.
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Original:  The RBS Six Nations clash ended with the homeside 32 points, easily beating the Irish who managed 20 points.
Revised:  The clash ended with the homeside 32 points, easily beating the Irish who managed 20 points.
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Original:  The Irish effort improved in the second half with two trys closing the gap - but it was never going to be enough to beat a superb Welsh side.
Revised:  The Irish effort improved in the second half with two closing the gap - but it was never going to be enough to beat a superb Welsh side.
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Original: Lasting about an hour, the rally made its way around the streets of the town, making its way to the ruined castle that overlooks the town, where the crowd heard speeches by a number of induviduals , including Ken Booth, the head of Aberystwyth University's renowned International Politics department.
Revised: Lasting about an hour, the rally made its way around the streets of the town, making its way to the ruined castle that overlooks the town, where the crowd heard speeches by a number of individuals , including Ken Booth, the head of Aberystwyth University's renowned International Politics department.
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Original: All Wales' peace festival Anti-war march in London: In London, UK, police said 45,000 people took part in a march following the traditional route;
Revised:  Anti-war march in London: In London, UK, police said 45,000 people took part in a march following the traditional route;
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Original: American singer, Brandy Norwood, best known for her role as a judge on America's Got Talent  , has been sued for US $50 million by the family of a woman who was killed in a car crash.
Revised: American singer, Brandy Norwood, known for her role as a judge on America's Got Talent , has been sued for US $50 million by the family of a woman who was killed in a car crash.
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Original: Texas flag The face of football may change drastically as representative Al Edwards of Houston - Texas has proposed in a bill last week to ban the popular activity of cheerleading in Texas high schools, middle schools and elementary schools.
Revised: Texas flag The face of football may change drastically as representative Al Edwards proposed a bill last week to ban the popular activity of cheerleading in Texas high schools, middle schools and elementary schools.
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Original: Texas flag The face of football may change drastically as representative Al Edwards of Houston - Texas has proposed in a bill last week to ban the popular activity of cheerleading in Texas high schools, middle schools and elementary schools.
Revised: Texas flag The face of football may change drastically as representative Al Edwards of Houston - Texas has proposed in a bill last week to ban "sexually suggestive" cheerleading in Texas high schools, middle schools and elementary schools.
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Original:  Edwards filed the bill after witnessing several instances of the vulgar activity in his district.
Revised:  Edwards filed the bill after witnessing several performances in his district.
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Original:  Several others agree with Edwards’ proposal    
Revised:  Several others agree with Edwards’ proposal . 
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Original:  The announcement was made Saturday after a car bomb in the early morning hours wrecked a six-story apartment building, causing injuries  but there have been no reports of deaths.
Revised:  The announcement was made Saturday after a car bomb in the early morning hours wrecked a six-story apartment building, causing injuries , but there have been no reports of deaths.
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Original:  Reuters reported an accusation on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:27 PM ET  made by key opposition leader, Walid Jumblatt, saying, "The security agencies belong to it (meaning Syria).
Revised:  There was an accusation, reported by Reuters on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:27 PM ET made by key opposition leader, Walid Jumblatt, saying, "The security agencies belong to it (meaning Syria).
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Original:  Reuters reported an accusation on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:27 PM ET  made by key opposition leader, Walid Jumblatt, saying, "The security agencies belong to it (meaning Syria).
Revised:  Reuters reported an accusation on Sat Mar 19, 2005 12:27 PM ET , made by key opposition leader, Walid Jumblatt, saying, "The security agencies belong to it (meaning Syria).
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Original:  What is clear is the violence threatens efforts by opposition groups and pro-government groups to build concensus and stability before the upcoming national election in May.  
Revised:  The violence threatens efforts by opposition groups and pro-government groups to build concensus and stability before the upcoming national election in May. 
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Original:  The opposition wants Syrian military and intelligance agents out of the country and opposes the pro-Syrian Lahoud and Prime Minister Rafik Hariri.
Revised:  The opposition wants Syrian military and intelligence agents out of the country and opposes the pro-Syrian Lahoud and Prime Minister Rafik Hariri.
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Original:  The president's invitation was dimissed by an opposition legistator .
Revised:  The president's invitation was dismissed by an opposition legistator .
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Original:  The president's invitation was dimissed by an opposition legistator .
Revised:  The president's invitation was dimissed by an opposition legislator .
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Original:  This subject is closed." See als
Revised:  This subject is closed." Related article
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Original: Setting up the MSN research and development center in Peoples Republic of China implies that Microsoft looks forward to taking advantage of  Chinese market, which represents a quite flexible environment.
Revised: Setting up the MSN research and development center in Peoples Republic of China implies that Microsoft looks forward to taking advantage of the Chinese market, which represents a quite flexible environment.
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Original:  Huge crowds are expected around the world, and the book, since its first appearence on Amazon.co.uk, had risin to the number one sale for pre-orders  
Revised:  Huge crowds are expected around the world, and the book, since its first appearence on Amazon.co.uk, had risen to the number one sale for pre-orders 
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Original:  Huge crowds are expected around the world, and the book, since its first appearence on Amazon.co.uk, had risen to the number one sale for pre-orders.
Revised:  Huge crowds are expected around the world, and the book, since its first appearance on Amazon.co.uk, had risen to the number one sale for pre-orders.
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Original: Technological giant Sony is reportedly looking into cutting prices on Playstation 3s.
Revised: Technological giant Sony is reportedly looking into cutting prices on Playstation 3 gaming consoles.
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Original: The report is not indicative that Sony will reduce the price of the console, only that it is looking into doing so . Sony, in an attempt to match the sales of Xbox 360 and the Nintendo Wii, has increased advertising for the new console.
Revised: The report is not indicative that Sony will reduce the price of the console, only that it is looking into doing so Sony, in an attempt to match the sales of Xbox 360 and the Nintendo Wii, has increased advertising for the new console.
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Original:  It only came public yesterday.
Revised:  The decision was only made public yesterday.
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Original:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions,  Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says :   "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
Revised:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions, a spokesman for the Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says : "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
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Original:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions,  Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says :   "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
Revised:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions, Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible passage : "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
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Original:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions,  Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says :   "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
Revised:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions, Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says : B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday, "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
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Original:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions,  Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says :   "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," B.C. premier Gordon Campbell said yesterday.
Revised:  When asked by Canadian reporters why they are against blood transfusions, Jehovah's Witnesses cited a Bible reading which says : "We act, I think, with the children's best interest in mind, and we will continue to do that," 
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Original:  If doctors feel that the infants are in immediate need, they may ask for intervention.
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Original:  "(My wife) and I could not bear to be at the hospital while they were violating our little girl," the father of the sextuplets said.
Revised:  "(My wife) and I could not bear to be at the hospital while they were violating our little girl," ;
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Original:  The babies were back in the parents  custody since the transfusions where finished .
Revised:  The babies were back in the parents ' custody since the transfusions where finished .
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Original: Last Friday the British Columbia government gave blood transfusions for two of the four surviving premature babies in spite of the parents  beliefs.
Revised: Last Friday the British Columbia government gave blood transfusions for two of the four surviving premature babies in spite of the parents ' beliefs.
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Original: " And whatsoever man there be of the house of Israel , or of the strangers that sojourn among you, that eateth any manner of blood;
Revised: " As for any man of the house of Israel , or of the strangers that sojourn among you, that eateth any manner of blood;
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Original:  I will even set my face against that soul that eateth blood, and will cut him off from among his people , " Leviticus 17:10-14.
Revised:  I will even set my face against the soul that is eating the blood, and will cut him off from among his people , " Leviticus 17:10-14.
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Original:  I will even set my face against that soul that eateth blood, and will cut him off from among his people , " Leviticus 17:10-14.
Revised:  I will even set my face against that soul that eateth blood, and I shall cut him off from among his people , " Leviticus 17:10-14.
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Original:  I will even set my face against that soul that eateth blood, and will cut him off from among his people , " Leviticus 17:10-14.
Revised:  I will even set my face against that soul that eateth blood, and will cut him off from among his people . " Leviticus 17:10-14.
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Original: The United States Senate has voted and approved , for the first time in 10 years, that the federal minimum wage be increased to $7.25 [USD] over a period of 2 years.
Revised: The United States Senate has approved a bill that will increase the federal minimum wage be increased to $7.25 [USD] over a period of 2 years.
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Original: "Her pronouncement shows the government ’ s official attitude towards legal activist organizations.
Revised: "Her pronouncement shows the government ' s official attitude towards legal activist organizations.
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Original:  Arroyo ’ s pronouncement of a new investigation is meant to appease the growing outrage of the international community.
Revised:  Arroyo ' s pronouncement of a new investigation is meant to appease the growing outrage of the international community.
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Philippines Category:Asia Category:Crime and law Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Human righ
Revised:  Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Philippines Category:Asia Category:Crime and law Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Human righ
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Philippines Category:Asia Category:Crime and law Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Human righ
Revised:  " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Philippines Category:Asia Category:Crime and law Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Human righ
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Original:  " Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Philippines Category:Asia Category:Crime and law Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Human righ
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