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Original: This is  reaction to an electronic petition launched by James Rocks of the Science, Just Science campaign, a group opposed to the anti-evolution lobby.
Revised: This is a reaction to an electronic petition launched by James Rocks of the Science, Just Science campaign, a group opposed to the anti-evolution lobby.
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Original:  In the response we can read : "The (UK) Government is aware that a number of concerns have been raised in the media and elsewhere as to whether creationism and intelligent design have a place in science lessons.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the Prime Minister's office wrote : "The (UK) Government is aware that a number of concerns have been raised in the media and elsewhere as to whether creationism and intelligent design have a place in science lessons.
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Original:  The stated goal of this campaign is improvement of public health through the reduction of sexually transmitted diseases (STDs) and other health-related issues that affect teen
Revised:  The stated goal of this campaign is improvement of public health through the reduction of sexually transmitted diseases (STDs) and other health-related issues that affect teens
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Original:  The full withdrawal would occur before the upcoming national elections scheduled for May, and would end 25 years of Syrian military occupation in Lebanon.
Revised:  The withdrawal would precede the upcoming national elections scheduled for May, and would end 25 years of Syrian military occupation in Lebanon.
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Original:  The announcement comes after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and  Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ] 
Revised:  The announcement came after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ] 
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Original:  The announcement comes after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and  Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ] 
Revised:  The announcement comes after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and the Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ] 
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Original:  The announcement comes after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and  Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ] 
Revised:  The announcement comes after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman during the last few days. ]." 
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Original:  United Nations envoy Terje Roed-Larsen and Syrian Foreign Minister Farouq al-Shara said Sunday at a joint news conference that Syria will withdraw all troops and foreign intelligence agents by the April 30 deadline.
Revised:  United Nations envoy Terje Roed-Larsen and Syrian Foreign Minister Farouq al-Shara announced Sunday at a joint news conference that Syria will withdraw all troops and foreign intelligence agents by the April 30 deadline.
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Original:  The announcement came after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and the Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman that dealt with a withdrawal time table.
Revised:  The news conference came after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and the Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman that dealt with a withdrawal time table.
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Original:  Roed-Larson said during the news conference , "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the [full withdrawal]."
Revised:  Roed-Larson said , "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the [full withdrawal]."
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Original:  The removal of the Syrian military presense  is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to the forming of a new government.
Revised:  The removal of Syrian military presense is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to the forming of a new government.
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Original:  The removal of the Syrian military presense  is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to the forming of a new government.
Revised:  The removal of the Syrian military presense is a main sticking point for the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to the forming of a new government.
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Original:  The removal of the Syrian military presense  is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to the forming of a new government.
Revised:  The removal of the Syrian military presense is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to forming a new government.
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Original:  After the bombing assassination of the previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Mr. Karami succeeded him.
Revised:  After the bombing assassination of previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Mr. Karami succeeded him.
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Original:  After the bombing assassination of the previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Mr. Karami succeeded him.
Revised:  After the bombing assassination of the previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Omar Karami succeeded him.
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Original:  The news conference came after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and the Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman that dealt with a withdrawal time table . Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the [full withdrawal]."
Revised:  The news conference came after meetings in Dasmascus between Syrian President Bashar al-Assad and the Lebanese army chief General Michel Suleiman that dealt with the withdrawal timetable . Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the [full withdrawal]."
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Original:  The removal of Syrian military presense in Lebanon is a main sticking point for the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to forming a new government.
Revised:  The removal of Syrian military presense in Lebanon is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to forming a new government.
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Original:  The removal of Syrian military presense in Lebanon is a main sticking point for the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections to forming a new government.
Revised:  The removal of Syrian military presense in Lebanon is a main sticking point for the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections towards forming a new government.
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Original:  After the bombing assassination of  previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Omar Karami succeeded him.
Revised:  After the bombing assassination of the previous Lebanese Prime Minister Hariri , Omar Karami succeeded him.
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Original:  Massive street protests forced his resignation, but he was a week later  re-installed by President Bashar al-Assad  
Revised:  Massive street protests forced his resignation, but he was a week later he was re-installed by President Bashar al-Assad 
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Original:  Massive street protests forced his resignation, but he was a week later  re-installed by President Bashar al-Assad  
Revised:  Massive street protests forced his resignation, but he was a week later re-installed by President al-Assad 
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Original: Lebanese Prime Minister Omar Karami United Nations envoy Terje Roed-Larsen and Syrian Foreign Minister Farouq al-Shara announced Sunday at a joint news conference that Syria will withdraw all troops and foreign intelligence agents by the April 30 deadline.
Revised:  United Nations envoy Terje Roed-Larsen and Syrian Foreign Minister Farouq al-Shara announced Sunday at a joint news conference that Syria will withdraw all troops and foreign intelligence agents by the April 30 deadline.
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Original:  Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the%DIFDELCMD < [%%% full withdrawal ."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The removal of Syrian military presence in Lebanon is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections towards forming a new government.
Revised:  Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the%DIFDELCMD < [%%% ."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The removal of Syrian military presence in Lebanon is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections towards forming a new government.
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Original:  Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the%DIFDELCMD < [%%% full withdrawal ."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The removal of Syrian military presence in Lebanon is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections towards forming a new government.
Revised:  Roed-Larson said, "Syria has agreed that subject to the acceptance of the Lebanese authorities, a U.N. verification team will be dispatched to verify the%DIFDELCMD < [%%% full withdrawal %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The removal of Syrian military presence in Lebanon is a main sticking point of the anti-Syrian, or opposition group, objections towards forming a new government.
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Original:  She was imprisoned due to violationg her probation, which came as a result of a DUI ( Driving Under the Influence  ) charge.
Revised:  She was imprisoned due to a violation of her probation, which came as a result of a DUI ( Driving Under the Influence ) charge.
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Original:  She was imprisoned due to violationg her probation, which came as a result of a DUI ( Driving Under the Influence  ) charge.
Revised:  She was imprisoned due to violationg her probation, which came as a result of a Driving Under the Influence ) charge.
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Original:  Her face expressing joy at her release,  she left the Century Regional Detention Facility, in Lynwood, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
Revised:  Her face expressing joy at her release, as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility, in Lynwood, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
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Original:  Hilton also reportedly left the jail looking a few pounds thinner than when she signed in on June 3 (Reuters) .
Revised:  Hilton also reportedly left the jail looking a few pounds thinner than when she entered .
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Original:  Ignoring the questions from the surrounding papparazzi and photographers, Hilton climbed into a white sport utility vehicle where her parents, Kathy and Rick Hilton, were waiting.
Revised:  Ignoring the questions from the surrounding paparazzi and photographers, Hilton climbed into a white sport utility vehicle where her parents, Kathy and Rick Hilton, were waiting.
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Original:  Dodging the photographers on the street, these then went to Hilton's grandparents' house located in Holmby Hills - one of the richest neighbourhoods in the state of California.
Revised:  Dodging the photographers on the street, they then went to Hilton's grandparents' house located in Holmby Hills - one of the richest neighbourhoods in the state of California.
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Original:  Dodging the photographers on the street, these then went to Hilton's grandparents' house located in Holmby Hills - one of the richest neighbourhoods in the state of California.
Revised:  Dodging the photographers on the street, these then went to Hilton's grandparents' house located in Holmby Hills , one of the richest neighbourhoods in the state of California.
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Original:  The way to their destination was not clear though - cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way. w:CNN| CNN 's Larry King will be hosting an exclusive, "post-jail" interview with Paris Hilton.
Revised:  The way to their destination was not clear though , cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way. w:CNN| CNN 's Larry King will be hosting an exclusive, "post-jail" interview with Paris Hilton.
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Original:  The way to their destination was not clear though - cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way. w:CNN| CNN 's Larry King will be hosting an exclusive, "post-jail" interview with Paris Hilton.
Revised:  The way to their destination was not clear though - cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way. CNN 's Larry King will be hosting an exclusive, "post-jail" interview with Paris Hilton.
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Original: The L.A. Sherrif 's Department spokesman, Steve Whitmore, said "she fulfilled her debt.
Revised: The L.A. Sheriff 's Department spokesman, Steve Whitmore, said "she fulfilled her debt.
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Original: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood,  where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
Revised: Reuters reported that her face expressed joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
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Original: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood,  where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
Revised: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
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Original: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood,  where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
Revised: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility in Lynwood, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
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Original: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood,  where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
Revised: Reuters reported that her face expressing joy at her release , as she left the Century Regional Detention Facility , in Lynwood, California, where she served 23 days, at 12:15 a.m. PT.
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Original:  The way to their destination was not clear though, cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way.
Revised:  The way to their destination was not clear , though; cars full of papparazzi were following them all the way.
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Original:  While , ParisHilton 's original sentence was 45 days long, she was released early based on "a standard credit applied for good behavior."
Revised:  While Paris 's original sentence was 45 days long, she was released early based on "a standard credit applied for good behavior."
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Original: Related news You know you were thinking it.
Revised: Related You know you were thinking it.
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Original: Related news You know you were thinking it.
Revised: Related news 
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Original: The discussion on the immigration bill ( which, if passed, would result in a temporary worker program, and the legalization of 12 million illegal immmigrants in the US) was put back on the political agenda.
Revised: The discussion on the immigration bill ( which, if passed, would result in a temporary worker program, was put back on the political agenda.
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Original:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
Revised:  President Bush has been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
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Original:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
Revised:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" according tp CNN. He also gave a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
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Original:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
Revised:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
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Original:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning (today, Jun. 26, 2007).
Revised:  President Bush had been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" (CNN/CNN. com), as well as a speech on the subject , that was held on Tuesday morning .
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Original:  News Asia) President Bush spoke about the issue, saying that "I view this as a historic opportunity for Congress to act ', ' This is a moment for people who have been elected to come together, focus on a problem and show the American people we can fix a problem.
Revised:  News Asia) President Bush spoke about the issue, saying that "I view this as a historic opportunity for Congress to act ... This is a moment for people who have been elected to come together, focus on a problem and show the American people we can fix a problem.
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Original: President Bush has been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" according tp CNN.
Revised: President Bush has been working to get the bill back into the agenda, making a trip to Capitol Hill to "twist a few arms" according to CNN.
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Original: Alinghi on display on August 30, 2006.
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Original: The America's Cup Trophy. . Team New Zealand's boat with Alinghi in the background.
Revised:  Team New Zealand's boat with Alinghi in the background.
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Original:  The head of Alinghi, Ernesto Bertarelli believes that the race committee should not have started the race, which it did so at 4:59 p.m..
Revised:  The head of Alinghi, , believes that the race committee should not have started the race, which it did so at 4:59 p.m..
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Original:  "We waited for two hours..." Team New Zealand strategist , Ray Davies said, "There was certainly a bit of dice rolling."
Revised:  "We waited for two hours..." Team New Zealand strategist Ray Davies said, "There was certainly a bit of dice rolling."
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Original:  The wind speed was around 8-9 knots.
Revised:  The wind speed was around 8–9 knots.
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Original:  Alinghi beat Team New Zealand in 2003, also winning the America's Cup in Auckland , New Zealand.
Revised:  Alinghi beat Team New Zealand in 2003, also winning the America's Cup in , New Zealand.
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Original:  Reports indicate the woman was wearing a life vest, but Perkins wasnot .
Revised:  Reports indicate Perkins was not wearing a life vest, but Perkins wasnot .
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Original:  Reports indicate the woman was wearing a life vest, but Perkins wasnot .
Revised:  Reports indicate the woman was wearing a life vest, although the woman was .
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Original:  The woman told authorities the man was attempting to bring in a stringer loaded with fish, just before he fell into the water .
Revised:  She said he fell into the water when attempting to bring in a stringer loaded with fish, just before he fell into the water .
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Original:  The woman told authorities the man was attempting to bring in a stringer loaded with fish, just before he fell into the water .
Revised:  The woman told authorities the man was attempting to bring in a stringer of fish .
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Original:  Rescue crews began searching the lake for a missing person on Sunday evening around 8:30pm (local time) .
Revised:  Rescue crews began searching the lake for a missing person on Sunday evening .
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Original:  His remains were found along the bottom of the lake at 11:53pm local time
Revised:  His remains were found along the bottom of the lake at 11:53pm 
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Original: Rescue personnel have found the body of a 46 year-old man  who drowned in , in northeast , while fishing on Sunday.
Revised: Rescue personnel have found the body of a 46 year-old man , who drowned in , in northeast , while fishing on Sunday.
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Original: German authorities decided to dedicate part of the state budget to improve information about renewable resources on the Wikipedia (or at least its german edition) .
Revised: German authorities will dedicate part of the state budget to improve information about renewable resources on the Wikipedia (or at least its german edition) .
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Original: German authorities decided to dedicate part of the state budget to improve information about renewable resources on the Wikipedia (or at least its german edition) .
Revised: German authorities decided to dedicate part of the state budget to improve information about renewable resources on the Germand version of Wikipedia .
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Original: German authorities will dedicate resources of the federal budget to improve information about renewable resources on the Germand version of Wikipedia.
Revised: German authorities will dedicate resources of the federal budget to improve information about renewable resources on the German version of Wikipedia.
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Original:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website) .
Revised:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website) 
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Original:  Category:Mars Category:Space Category:Europe Category:Science and technolo
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Original:  To make the experience as realistic as possible, the contact with the external world shall exist only via the radio with the time-delay of 40 minutes ( an equivalent of the time needed to reach the Earth from Mars).
Revised:  To make the experience as realistic as possible, the contact with the external world shall exist only via the radio with the time-delay of 40 minutes ( simulating the time signals need to travel between the Earth and Mars).
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Original:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website )
Revised:  Interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website )
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Original:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website )
Revised:  The interested persons can apply via application an form published on the ESA website )
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Original:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website )
Revised:  The interested persons can apply via application form (published at the ESA website 
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