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Original:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club -- we're playing under equal terms 
Revised:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club -- we're playing under equal terms .
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Original:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club - we're playing under equal terms.  
Revised:  Venus was paid $1.407 million, to which she replied "Thank you, All England Club - we're playing under equal terms. " 
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Original:  However some say as many as a million turned out for the Gallic extravaganza , the party atmosphere aided by a turn in the weather ;
Revised:  However some say as many as a million turned out for the Gallic extravaganza ; the party atmosphere aided by a turn in the weather ;
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Original:  However some say as many as a million turned out for the Gallic extravaganza , the party atmosphere aided by a turn in the weather ;
Revised:  However some say as many as a million turned out for the Gallic extravaganza , the party atmosphere aided by a turn in the weather ,
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Original: Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as , the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
Revised: Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
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Original: Image:Fabian Cancellara 62 HEW Cyclassics 2005.jpg|Fabian Cancellara Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
Revised:  Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
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Original: Image:Fabian Cancellara 62 HEW Cyclassics 2005.jpg|Fabian Cancellara Map of the stages of the 2007 Tour de France At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
Revised: Image:Fabian Cancellara 62 HEW Cyclassics 2005.jpg|Fabian Cancellara At least half a million onlookers turned out to line the route as the Tour de France Prologue closed the streets of Central London for a day.
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Original:  Tadijabovic was born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia .
Revised:  born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia .
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Original:    Apart from being among the longest living writers in Croatian history, Tadijanović holds distinction as one of the most popular and most influential Croatian poets of 20th century.
Revised:  Apart from being among the longest living writers in Croatian history, Tadijanović held distinction as one of the most popular and most influential Croatian poets of 20th century.
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Original:  His poem Balada o zaklanim ovcama (Ballad of Slaughtered Sheep), written in 1930s, is one of the most powerful works of Croatian literature   .
Revised:  His poem Balada o zaklanim ovcama (Ballad of Slaughtered Sheep), written in 1930s, is one of the most powerful works of Croatian literature . .
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Original: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia  He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
Revised: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
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Original: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia  He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
Revised: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. He was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
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Original: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia  He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
Revised: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. Born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
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Original: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia  He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
Revised: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia . He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
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Original: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia  He worked as the lector of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
Revised: Croatian poet Dragutin Tadijanović has died last week in Zagreb, Croatia. he was 101 years old. born on November 4, 1905 in Rastušje, Slavonia, Croatia, he was erudite cordially referred to as 'Bard' in Croatia He worked as the lecturer of the official paper Narodne novine (1935-1940), taught at the Academy of Arts in Zagreb (1939-1945).
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Original:  He was the president of the Society of Croatian Writers in 1964-1965, and he also became an academician of the Academy. he was among the longest living writers in Croatian history with generations having to study his poems in school.
Revised:  He was the president of the Society of Croatian Writers in 1964-1965, and he also became an academician of the Academy. He was among the longest living writers in Croatian history with generations having to study his poems in school.
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Original:  He was the president of the Society of Croatian Writers in 1964-1965, and he also became an academician of the Academy. he was among the longest living writers in Croatian history with generations having to study his poems in school.
Revised:  He was the president of the Society of Croatian Writers in 1964-1965, and he also became an academician of the Academy. he was among the longest living writers in Croatian history , with generations studying his poems in school.
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Original:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituari
Revised:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituari
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Original:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituari
Revised:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituari
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Original:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Obituari
Revised:  His last couple of birthdays were marked with reports on national TV, awards and other special events and his commemoration ceremony was held at the Old City Hall on uphill Zagreb attended by the Mayor of Zagreb and other political and cultural officials . Source%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: __NOTOC__ 150px|Fred Thompson Former Rep.
Revised:  150px|Fred Thompson Former Rep.
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Original:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and said it was "absolutely bizarre" for Thompson to deny that he lobbied against the abortion counseling rule . Previously, the Gannett News Service reported that on Thompson’s 1994 campaign questionnaire it contained a handwritten note that stated: "I do not believe abortion should be criminalized.
Revised:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre" for Thompson to deny that he lobbied against the abortion counseling rule . Previously, the Gannett News Service reported that on Thompson’s 1994 campaign questionnaire it contained a handwritten note that stated: "I do not believe abortion should be criminalized.
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Original:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and said it was "absolutely bizarre" for Thompson to deny that he lobbied against the abortion counseling rule . Previously, the Gannett News Service reported that on Thompson’s 1994 campaign questionnaire it contained a handwritten note that stated: "I do not believe abortion should be criminalized.
Revised:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and said it was "absolutely bizarre" . Previously, the Gannett News Service reported that on Thompson’s 1994 campaign questionnaire it contained a handwritten note that stated: "I do not believe abortion should be criminalized.
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Original: Two days after it was reported that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson warned President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on  Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group disclosed that Thompson has lobbied for them.
Revised: Two days after presidential hopeful Fred Thompson warned President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group disclosed that Thompson has lobbied for them.
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Original: Two days after it was reported that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson warned President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on  Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group disclosed that Thompson has lobbied for them.
Revised: Two days after it was reported that presidential hopeful Fred Thompson warned President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on the Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group disclosed that Thompson has lobbied for them.
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Original: Two days after presidential hopeful Fred Thompson was branded a 'Mole' for warning President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on the Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group disclosed that Thompson has lobbied for them  .
Revised: Two days after presidential hopeful Fred Thompson was branded a 'Mole' for warning President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on the Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group claimed that Thompson lobbied for them .
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Original:  Michael D. Barnes  recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre".
Revised:  Michael D. Barnes who recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre".
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Original:  Michael D. Barnes  recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre".
Revised:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, remarked that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre".
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Original:  Michael D. Barnes  recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial was "absolutely bizarre".
Revised:  Michael D. Barnes recommended Thompson for the lobbying job, and claimed that Thompson's denial is "absolutely bizarre".
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Original: Two days after presidential hopeful Fred Thompson was branded a 'Mole' for warning President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on the Watergate scandal, an abortion-right's group claimed that Thompson lobbied for them in the past.
Revised: Two days after presidential hopeful Fred Thompson was branded a 'Mole' for warning President Nixon's White House about information the investigating committee had on the Watergate scandal, an abortion-rights group claimed that Thompson lobbied for them in the past.
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Original: A number of schools in New South Wales already have surveillance cameras in playgrounds and outside dining areas.
Revised: Over 50 schools in New South Wales already have surveillance cameras in playgrounds and outside dining areas.
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Original: CCTV surveilance is preferred by some schools over fitting bars and alarms , as it is cheaper to install.
Revised: CCTV surveilance is preferred by some schools over fitting alarm systems and physical bars on entrances to the room , as it is cheaper to install.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the  Department of Education and Training has said that the footage  is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity
Revised:  A spokesperson for the Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity
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Original:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras  A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity  [ 
Revised:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras . A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity [ 
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Original:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras  A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity  [ 
Revised:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity . [ 
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Original:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras  A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity  [ 
Revised:  Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity [open 
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Original: Recent installations of closed-circuit television (CCTV) security cameras into schools in the Australian state of New South Wales has alarmed teachers.
Revised: Installations of closed-circuit television (CCTV) security cameras into schools in the Australian state of New South Wales has alarmed teachers.
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Original:  The concern from teachers arises from the pending installation of  cameras inside classrooms and also corridors.
Revised:  The concern from teachers arises from the pending installation of further cameras inside classrooms and also corridors.
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Original: Teachers have expressed concerns about privacy and misuse of the equiptment . Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras.
Revised: Teachers have expressed concerns about privacy and misuse of the equipment . Senior vice-president of the New South Wales Teachers Federation, Bob Lipscombe, said that teachers are worried about the footage being used improperly, as well as the fact that both teachers and students would be filmed at work by the cameras.
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Original:  The increase in security cameras being used in schools is an attempt to protect valuable schooling equiptment from theft and damage, in particular computers in computer rooms.
Revised:  The increase in security cameras being used in schools is an attempt to protect valuable schooling equipment from theft and damage, in particular computers in computer rooms.
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Original:  CCTV surveilance is preferred by some schools over fitting alarm systems and physical bars on entrances to the room, as it is cheaper to install.
Revised:  CCTV surveillance is preferred by some schools over fitting alarm systems and physical bars on entrances to the room, as it is cheaper to install.
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Original: A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity .
Revised: A spokesperson for the New South Wales Department of Education and Training has said that the footage obtained is confidential and used to assist police in investigating criminal activity 
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Original:  However, concerns have been expressed about the security of the systems, with a reporter for RINF Alternative News, Mick Meaney, saying that the system may "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% open the doors to hackers and give them the ability to spy on us and record our movements"
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% open the doors to hackers and give them the ability to spy on us and record our movements"
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Original:  However, concerns have been expressed about the security of the systems, with a reporter for RINF Alternative News, Mick Meaney, saying that the system may "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% open the doors to hackers and give them the ability to spy on us and record our movements"
Revised:  However, concerns have been expressed about the security of the systems, with a reporter for RINF Alternative News, Mick Meaney, saying that the system may "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% the doors to hackers and give them the ability to spy on us and record our movements"
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Original:  However, concerns have been expressed about the security of the systems, with a reporter for RINF Alternative News, Mick Meaney, saying that the system may "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% open the doors to hackers and give them the ability to spy on us and record our movements"
Revised:  However, concerns have been expressed about the security of the systems, with a reporter for RINF Alternative News, Mick Meaney, saying that the system may "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% open 
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Original:  And as per John Hanke, Keyhole's general manager, from the images nobody will be able to read a license plate on a car or see what an individual doing at the time it was taken.
Revised:  According to John Hanke, Keyhole's general manager, from the images nobody will be able to read a license plate on a car or see what an individual doing at the time it was taken.
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Original: Google Maps incorporates Satellite Images as a feature to their beta version maps and driving directions services .
Revised: Google Maps has incorporated satellite images as a feature to their beta version maps and driving directions services .
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Original: Google Maps incorporates Satellite Images as a feature to their beta version maps and driving directions services .
Revised: Google Maps incorporates Satellite Images as a feature in their Beta Google Maps service .
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Original:  Satellite images will be more than 6 months old.
Revised:  Satellite images will be at least 6 months old.
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Original:  According to John Hanke, Keyhole's general manager, from the images nobody will be able to read a license plate on a car  or see what an individual doing at the time it was taken.
Revised:  According to John Hanke, Keyhole's general manager, nobody will be able to read a license plate on a car or see what an individual doing at the time it was taken.
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Original: The 2007 AFC Asian Cup has begun in South-East Asia, with Thailand drawing 1-1 with Iraq in the opening match  .
Revised: The 2007 AFC Asian Cup has begun in South-East Asia, with Thailand drawing 1-1 with Iraq in the opening match of the tournament .
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Original:  Australia are considered favourites, along with defending champions Japan, to win the tournament in their first outing, following their impressive show in the 2006 FIFA World Cup.
Revised:  The Australians are considered favourites, along with defending champions Japan, to win the tournament in their first outing, following their impressive show in the 2006 FIFA World Cup.
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