wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The incident occurred just as Bush said  "I've got confidence in Al Gonzales doin' the job," referring to a question asked by a reporter about the controversial dismissal of several U.S. attorneys.
Revised:  The incident occurred just as Bush said , "I've got confidence in Al Gonzales doin' the job," referring to a question asked by a reporter about the controversial dismissal of several U.S. attorneys.
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Original:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humourous  
Revised:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humourous . 
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Original: President Bush goes to wipe off bird feces  his left arm.
Revised: President Bush goes to wipe off bird feces on his left arm.
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Original:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humourous .
Revised:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humorous .
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Original: Bush was addressing the American press on Thursday in a nationally televised broadcast outside the  in the .
Revised: Bush was addressing the American press on Thursday in a nationally televised broadcast outside the White House in the .
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Original: Image:Egyptian Cobra.jpg|An Egyptian Cobra ]] Yahia Rahim Tulba was a passenger attempting to travel from Cairo, Egypt to Riyadh, Saudi Arabia with at least 700 different types of snakes in a carryon-bag , according to customs officers at Cairo International Airport.
Revised: Image:Egyptian Cobra.jpg|An Egyptian Cobra ]] Yahia Rahim Tulba was a passenger attempting to travel from Cairo, Egypt to Riyadh, Saudi Arabia with at least 700 snakes of various types in a carry-on bag , according to customs officers at Cairo International Airport.
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Original:  When Tulba attempted to pass the customs checkpoint, officers had him open his luggage and his carryon-bag , but only after they noticed movement and heard hissing coming from Tulba's bag.
Revised:  When Tulba attempted to pass the customs checkpoint, officers had him open his luggage and his carry-on bag , but only after they noticed movement and heard hissing coming from Tulba's bag.
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Original: Wikinewsies Gabriel Pollard and Brian Anderton interviewed Lewis Holden, the chair of the Republican Movement and a blogger about New Zealand's constitution from a republican's perspective.
Revised: Wikinewsies Gabriel Pollard and Brian Anderton interviewed Lewis Holden, the chair of the Republican Movement and a noted blogger who writes about New Zealand's constitution from a republican's perspective.
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Original:  In New Zealand, Queen Elizabeth II is the  head-of-state, however she does not hold any real political power . Surveys often conducted shows that every one in three New Zealanders support a republic in New Zealand.
Revised:  In New Zealand, Queen Elizabeth II is the de facto head-of-state, however she does not hold any real political power . Surveys often conducted shows that every one in three New Zealanders support a republic in New Zealand.
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Original:  In New Zealand, Queen Elizabeth II is the  head-of-state, however she does not hold any real political power . Surveys often conducted shows that every one in three New Zealanders support a republic in New Zealand.
Revised:  In New Zealand, Queen Elizabeth II is the head-of-state, despite having very little actual political influence . Surveys often conducted shows that every one in three New Zealanders support a republic in New Zealand.
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Original:  As Howard arrived at the luncheon, protesters held up their placards and turned their backs on Mr Howard , claiming to be doing the same as his government had done to ordinary workers.
Revised:  Before the luncheon, protesters held up their placards and turned their backs on Mr Howard , claiming to be doing the same as his government had done to ordinary workers.
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Original:  As Howard arrived at the luncheon, protesters held up their placards and turned their backs on Mr Howard , claiming to be doing the same as his government had done to ordinary workers.
Revised:  As Howard arrived at the luncheon, 
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Original:  Prior to the luncheon, Mr Howard made an address to a community morning tea at the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit, promising funding of $10 million to investigate planning, engineering and environmental issues surrounding the construction of an expressway over the Blue Mountains following the Bells Line of Road route.
Revised:  Mr Howard held a community morning tea at the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit, promising funding of $10 million to investigate planning, engineering and environmental issues surrounding the construction of an expressway over the Blue Mountains following the Bells Line of Road route.
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Original:     Mr Howard said this funding was contingent upon the NSW governmentmatching the federal government's contribution and would be available under Auslink II from 2009 
Revised:  Mr Howard said this funding was contingent upon the NSW governmentmatching the federal government's contribution and would be available under Auslink II from 2009 Image
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Original: Mr Howard was in Bathurst campaigning for the reelection of w: Kerry Bartlett and was a special guest at an invite-only Liberal Party fundraiser costing AUD$95 a person.
Revised: Mr Howard was in Bathurst campaigning for the reelection of Kerry Bartlett and was a special guest at an invite-only Liberal Party fundraiser costing AUD$95 a person.
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Original: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
Revised: Around 200 unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
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Original: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
Revised: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students gathered to protest the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
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Original: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
Revised: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new industrial relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
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Original: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, a lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
Revised: Around 200 protesters gathered, primary unionists and university students protested against the Howard government's new Industrial Relations regime called Workchoices, the lack of funding for higher education and the introduction of Voluntary Student Unionism.
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Original:  Mr Howard was in Bathurst campaigning for the reelection of Kerry Bartlett and was a special guest at an invite-only Liberal Party fundraiser costing AUD $95 a person.
Revised:  Mr Howard was in Bathurst campaigning for the re-election of Kerry Bartlett and was a special guest at an invite-only Liberal Party fundraiser costing AUD $95 a person.
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Original:  The term, McJob, has been in usage a least 20 years, they say.
Revised:  The term, McJob, has been in usage at least 20 years, they say.
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Original:  Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe agrees with the restaurant chain.
Revised: Unsurprisingly, Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe agrees with the restaurant chain.
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Original:  Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe agrees with the restaurant chain.
Revised:  Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe has been paid off by the restaurant chain.
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Original: Unsurprisingly, Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe has been paid off by the restaurant chain.
Revised:  Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe has been paid off by the restaurant chain.
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Original: Unsurprisingly, Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe has been paid off by the restaurant chain.
Revised: Unsurprisingly, Clive Betts, MP for Sheffield Attercliffe agrees with the restaurant chain.
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Original: The New South Wales  government has refused a federal government plan to conduct an engineering, planning and environmental assessment for a freeway across the Blue Mountains following the Bells Line of Road.
Revised:  New South Wales government has refused a federal government plan to conduct an engineering, planning and environmental assessment for a freeway across the Blue Mountains following the Bells Line of Road.
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Original:  Hundreds of people protested the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments per also part of the center  .
Revised:  Hundreds of people protested the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments were also part of the center .
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Original:  Hundreds of people protested the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments per also part of the center  .
Revised:  Hundreds of people protested the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments per also part of the center 's services .
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Original:  It was built in 1965 and was 13 floors tall.
Revised:  It was built in 1965 and was 14 floors tall.
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Original: A controversial medical center,  which has been vacant for nearly 10 years was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
Revised: A medical center, which has been vacant for nearly 10 years was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
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Original:  The ground and the walls of buildings shook as the dynamite ignited and a brief shock wave could be felt as far as 1 1/2 blocks away.
Revised:  The ground and the walls of buildings shook as the dynamite detonated and a brief shock wave could be felt as far as 1 1/2 blocks away.
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Original: A medical center, once the site of intense controversy over abortion in the 1990s,  been vacant for nearly 10 years  was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
Revised: A medical center, once the site of intense controversy over abortion in the 1990s, which has been vacant for nearly 10 years was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
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Original: A medical center, once the site of intense controversy over abortion in the 1990s,  been vacant for nearly 10 years  was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
Revised: A medical center, once the site of intense controversy over abortion in the 1990s, been vacant for nearly 10 years , was imploded in Buffalo, New York at 6:00 a.m. [eastern time] today.
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Original:  Hundreds of people protested  the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments were also part of the center's services.
Revised:  Hundreds of people protested about the abortions outside the center during the Spring of Life Movement in 1992, but other medical procedures and treatments were also part of the center's services.
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Original:  Reports indicate that he went to Iran because he wanted to be close to his family members    
Revised:  Reports indicate that he went to Iran because he wanted to be close to his family members . 
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Original:  A massive roadside bomb killed a Canadian soldier, injured another and an Afghan interpreter Friday at approximately 8:00 a.m. local time         
Revised:  A massive roadside bomb killed a Canadian soldier, injured another and an Afghan interpreter Friday at approximately 8:00 a.m. local time . 
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Original: Image:Canadian AVGP observing.jpg| A Canadian soldier observes troop movements from the turret of a Canadian Army Cougar wheeled armored fire-support vehicle, Camp Wainwright , Alberta, Canada.
Revised:  A Canadian soldier observes troop movements from the turret of a Canadian Army Cougar wheeled armored fire-support vehicle, Camp Wainwright , Alberta, Canada.
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Original: Image:Canadian AVGP observing.jpg| A Canadian soldier observes troop movements from the turret of a Canadian Army Cougar wheeled armored fire-support vehicle, Camp Wainwright , Alberta, Canada.
Revised: Image:Canadian AVGP observing.jpg| A Canadian soldier observes troop movements from the turret of a Canadian Army Cougar wheeled armored fire-support vehicle, , Alberta, Canada.
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Original:  The blast killed Matthew J. McCully, 25, from Orangeville , Ontario on Friday at approximately 8:00 a.m. local time.
Revised:  The blast killed Matthew J. McCully, 25, from , Ontario on Friday at approximately 8:00 a.m. local time.
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Original:  Another Canadian soldier and an Afghan interpreter are in stable condition after also being wounded in the explosion, which happened in the Zhari district , 35 kilometres west of Kandahar, Afghanistan, where the Canadians are based.
Revised:  Another Canadian soldier and an Afghan interpreter are in stable condition after also being wounded in the explosion, which happened in the , 35 kilometres west of Kandahar, Afghanistan, where the Canadians are based.
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Original:  Another Canadian soldier and an Afghan interpreter are in stable condition after also being wounded in the explosion, which happened in the Zhari district , 35 kilometres west of Kandahar, Afghanistan, where the Canadians are based.
Revised:  Another Canadian soldier and an Afghan interpreter are in stable condition after also being wounded in the explosion, which happened in the Zhari district , 35 kilometres west of , where the Canadians are based.
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Original:  The second bomb killed McCully, who is part of the Operational Mentoring and Liaison Team which teaches Afghan soldiers skills to fight in organized units, from Canadian Forces Base (CFB) Petawawa .
Revised:  The second bomb killed McCully, who is part of the which teaches Afghan soldiers skills to fight in organized units, from Canadian Forces Base (CFB) Petawawa .
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Original:  The second bomb killed McCully, who is part of the Operational Mentoring and Liaison Team which teaches Afghan soldiers skills to fight in organized units, from Canadian Forces Base (CFB) Petawawa .
Revised:  The second bomb killed McCully, who is part of the Operational Mentoring and Liaison Team which teaches Afghan soldiers skills to fight in organized units, from .
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Original:  They were fighting in Operation Hoover located in the Zhari district west of Kandahar, Canada's latest offensive against the Taliban.
Revised:  They were fighting in located in the Zhari district west of Kandahar, Canada's latest offensive against the Taliban.
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Original:  Portuguese soldiers and British air support are also involved in the operation and the Afghan National Army are in the lead.
Revised:  Portuguese soldiers and British air support are also involved in the operation and the are in the lead.
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Original:  A farewell ceremony is now in the works at Kandahar Airfield .
Revised:  A farewell ceremony is now in the works at .
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Original:  Peter Sullivan told CTV today at Kandahar Airfield.
Revised:  Peter Sullivan told today at Kandahar Airfield.
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Original:  He met with Canadian soldiers and had a brief discussion with Afghan President Hamid Karzai and visited diplomats at the Canadian Embassy in Kabul, Afghanistan.
Revised:  He met with Canadian soldiers and had a brief discussion with Afghan President and visited diplomats at the Canadian Embassy in Kabul, Afghanistan.
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Original:  He met with Canadian soldiers and had a brief discussion with Afghan President Hamid Karzai and visited diplomats at the Canadian Embassy in Kabul, Afghanistan.
Revised:  He met with Canadian soldiers and had a brief discussion with Afghan President Hamid Karzai and visited diplomats at the in Kabul, Afghanistan.
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Original:  Journalists were told last Friday to dress for a warm-climate and if they made Harper's visit public they could be a "Journalist in jail." "I would say it's very interesting they decided to really promote the fact that we're doing more than just military in Afghanistan," Harper said during his three-day visit  
Revised:  Journalists were told last Friday to dress for a warm-climate and if they made Harper's visit public they could be a "Journalist in jail." "I would say it's very interesting they decided to really promote the fact that we're doing more than just military in Afghanistan," Harper said during his three-day visit . 
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Original:  Journalists were told last Friday to dress for a warm-climate and if they made Harper's visit public they could be a "Journalist in jail." "I would say it's very interesting they decided to really promote the fact that we're doing more than just military in Afghanistan," Harper said during his three-day visit  
Revised:  Journalists were told last Friday to dress for a warm-climate and if they made Harper's visit public they could be a "Journalist in jail." "I would say it's very interesting they decided to really promote the fact that we're doing more than just military in Afghanistan," Harper said during his three-day visit Sister link
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Original: , Canberra — Yesterday , Capital Punishment, the Canberra 50 and 100km mountain bike race, was won by Andy Blair in the 100km distance in 3:30:25 ahead of Dylan Cooper and Shaun Lewis, last year's winner.
Revised: , Canberra — Yesterday in Capital Punishment, the Canberra 50 and 100km mountain bike race, was won by Andy Blair in the 100km distance in 3:30:25 ahead of Dylan Cooper and Shaun Lewis, last year's winner.
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Original: , Canberra — Yesterday , Capital Punishment, the Canberra 50 and 100km mountain bike race, was won by Andy Blair in the 100km distance in 3:30:25 ahead of Dylan Cooper and Shaun Lewis, last year's winner.
Revised: , Canberra — Yesterday , Capital Punishment, the Canberra 50 and 100km mountain bike race, Andy Blair won in the 100km distance in 3:30:25 ahead of Dylan Cooper and Shaun Lewis, last year's winner.
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Original:  The women's event was won by Jenny Fay in a time of 4:01:53 ahead of Christy Ainsworth.
Revised:  In the women's event was won by Jenny Fay in a time of 4:01:53 ahead of Christy Ainsworth.
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Original:  The women's event was won by Jenny Fay in a time of 4:01:53 ahead of Christy Ainsworth.
Revised:  The women's event , Jenny Fay won in a time of 4:01:53 ahead of Christy Ainsworth.
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Original:  Competitors start at Sparrow Hill east of Canberra, and ride through Canberra the and the and ending at .
Revised:  Competitors start at Sparrow Hill east of Canberra, and ride through Canberra the and the , ending at .
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Original:  The library has been deliberately on the border of Canada and the U.S. since it was built in 1904 by American sawmill owner Carlos Haskell and Canadian wife Martha Stewart Haskell for availability to both countries.
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Original:  In total, there are three streets that cross the border and there are camera's on both sides to monitor illegal activity, but that doesn't tighten border security enough officials say . "There's been an increase in illegal activity, both north and south, in the last little while," said operations officer for the Border Patrol's Swanton sector, Mark Henry.
Revised:  In total, there are three streets that cross the border and there are camera's on both sides to monitor illegal activity, but that doesn't tighten border security enough officials say "There's been an increase in illegal activity, both north and south, in the last little while," said operations officer for the Border Patrol's Swanton sector, Mark Henry.
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Original: The Royal Canadian Mounted Police (RCMP) and the United States Border Patrol and local officials from both sides are looking into tightening security at a Quebec library.
Revised: The Royal Canadian Mounted Police (RCMP) , the United States Border Patrol and local officials from both sides are looking into tightening security at a Quebec library.
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Original:  It is so easy to go into the U.S. at Haskell Free Library and Opera House, in Rock Island, Quebec, that all you need is directions to go to Stanstead, Quebec, directions to the local library and walk through the doors;
Revised:  To enter the U.S. at Haskell Free Library and Opera House, in Rock Island, Quebec, that all you need is directions to go to Stanstead, Quebec, directions to the local library and walk through the doors;
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Original:  It is so easy to go into the U.S. at Haskell Free Library and Opera House, in Rock Island, Quebec, that all you need is directions to go to Stanstead, Quebec, directions to the local library and walk through the doors;
Revised:  It is so easy to go into the U.S. at Haskell Free Library and Opera House, in Rock Island, Quebec, all one needs is directions to go to Stanstead, Quebec, directions to the local library and walk through the doors;
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Original:  you've illegally entered Derby Line, Vermont, U.S. If you walk across from Stanstead St. to Derby Line you will be at the checkout in the U.S., go to the library from Derby Line to Stanstead St. and you've officially entered back into Canada.
Revised:  they have illegally entered Derby Line, Vermont, U.S. If you walk across from Stanstead St. to Derby Line you will be at the checkout in the U.S., go to the library from Derby Line to Stanstead St. and you've officially entered back into Canada.
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Original:  you've illegally entered Derby Line, Vermont, U.S. If you walk across from Stanstead St. to Derby Line you will be at the checkout in the U.S., go to the library from Derby Line to Stanstead St. and you've officially entered back into Canada.
Revised:  you've illegally entered Derby Line, Vermont, U.S. If one walks across from Stanstead St. to Derby Line you will be at the checkout in the U.S., go to the library from Derby Line to Stanstead St. and you've officially entered back into Canada.
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