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Original: Solstice date Mosaic in Mausoleum M in the pre-fourth-century necropolis under St Peter's Basilica in Rome, interpreted by some as Jesus represented as Christus Sol (Christ the Sun) .Kelly, Joseph F., The Origins of Christmas, Liturgical Press, 2004, pp. 67–69.
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Original:  He will took over from  Michael Joseph, who has been interim CEO of Safaricom Limited since the death of  Bob Collymore on 1 July 2019.
Revised:  He will took over from Michael Joseph, who has been interim CEO of Safaricom Limited since July 2019. Bob Collymore on 1 July 2019.
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Original:  He took over from former Safaricom chairman Michael Joseph, who has been interim CEO of Safaricom Limited since July 2019.
Revised:  He took over from former Safaricom CEO Michael Joseph, who has been interim CEO of Safaricom Limited since July 2019.
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Original: Background and education Ndegwa was born in Kenya circa 1969.
Revised: Early life and education Ndegwa was born in Kenya circa 1969.
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Original: Works as Prince Abbot When attempting to receive the homage from his subject, it was denied him in Toggenburg.
Revised: Works as Prince Abbot When attempting to receive homage from his subject, it was denied him in Toggenburg.
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Original:  A number of unpleasant occurences ensued.
Revised:  A number of unpleasant occurrences ensued.
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Original:  "Mannschaftsrecht  ) which had been granted them by his predecessor Joseph von Rudolfi.
Revised:  "Mannschaftsrecht " ) which had been granted them by his predecessor Joseph von Rudolfi.
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Original:  With the intervention of Bern and (although with little interest) Zurich, the abbot managed  receive the Toggenburgers' homage in due form in 1743.
Revised:  With the intervention of Bern and (although showing little interest) Zurich, the abbot managed receive the Toggenburgers' homage in due form in 1743.
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Original:  With the intervention of Bern and (although with little interest) Zurich, the abbot managed  receive the Toggenburgers' homage in due form in 1743.
Revised:  With the intervention of Bern and (although with little interest) Zurich, the abbot managed to receive the Toggenburgers' homage in due form in 1743.
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Original:  In the subsequent trial, it first had to be defined which court was even responsible for this conflict  . Saint Gall appealed to Rome, Konstanz to the Aulic Council in Mainz.
Revised:  In the subsequent trial, first the court that was responsible for this conflict . Saint Gall appealed to Rome, Konstanz to the Aulic Council in Mainz.
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Original:  In the subsequent trial, it first had to be defined which court was even responsible for this conflict  . Saint Gall appealed to Rome, Konstanz to the Aulic Council in Mainz.
Revised:  In the subsequent trial, it first had to be defined which court was even responsible for this conflict had to be defined . Saint Gall appealed to Rome, Konstanz to the Aulic Council in Mainz.
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Original:  Simultaneously with the abbey, Cölestin also had  new library built.
Revised:  Simultaneously with the abbey, Cölestin also had a new library built.
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Original:  The abbey and the library resulted in 457'929 guilder.
Revised:  Together, the abbey and the library resulted in 457'929 guilder.
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Original:  The abbey and the library resulted in 457'929 guilder.
Revised:  The abbey and the library cost 457'929 guilder.
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Original:  Despite the significant expenses of his construction work as well as trials and Jura regalia, he was able to pay back the entire debt that he had inherited from his predecessor and furthermore bequeath his successor 180'600 guilder in cash and 57'695  as capital.
Revised:  Despite the significant expenses of his construction work as well as trials and Jura regalia, he was able to pay back the entire debt that he had inherited from his predecessor and furthermore bequeath his successor 180'600 guilder in cash and 57'695 guilder as capital.
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Original: Cölestin Gugger von Staudach auf der Website des Stiftsarchivs St. Gallen.
Revised: Cölestin Gugger von Staudach on the website of the Stiftsarchiv St. Gallen.
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Original:   Ildefons von Arx : Geschichten des Kantons St. Gallen.
Revised:  Von Arx, Ildefons : Geschichten des Kantons St. Gallen.
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Original:    St. Gallen 1813, S . 566 ff. (vollständiger Text in der Google-Buchsuche) . [[Category:1767 deaths]] [[Category:1701 births]] [[Category:Swiss people]] [[Category:Abbots of Saint Gal
Revised:  St. Gallen 1813, p . 566 ff. (vollständiger Text in der Google-Buchsuche) . [[Category:1767 deaths]] [[Category:1701 births]] [[Category:Swiss people]] [[Category:Abbots of Saint Gal
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Original: Works as Prince Abbot When attempting to receive homage from his subject, it was denied him in Toggenburg.
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Original:  Historical Account Ildefons von Arx writes about Cölestin Gugger von Staudach: External Links Reading List
Revised:  Historical account Ildefons von Arx writes about Cölestin Gugger von Staudach: External Links Reading List
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Original:  Historical Account Ildefons von Arx writes about Cölestin Gugger von Staudach: External Links Reading List
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Original:  Historical Account Ildefons von Arx writes about Cölestin Gugger von Staudach: External Links Reading List
Revised:  Historical Account Ildefons von Arx writes about Cölestin Gugger von Staudach: External Links Reading list
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Original:  † 24 February 1767 in Saint Gall) was from 23 March 1740 until his death Prince Abbot of the Abbey of Saint Gall.
Revised:  † 24 February 1767 in Saint Gall) was from 23 March 1740 until his death prince abbot of the Abbey of Saint Gall.
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Original:  Saint Gall had for a longer time been able to shirk these visitations, but the formal eviction of one of the Bishopric's Judicial vicars from the country was the last straw that broke the camel's back and Konstanz complained.
Revised:  Saint Gall had for a longer time been able to shirk these visitations, but the formal eviction of one of the bishopric's judicial vicars from the country was the last straw that broke the camel's back and Konstanz complained.
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Original:  However, later on federal troops still had to restore order several times as Saint Gall and Konstanz did not want to adhere to the new rules and, for example, did not present a newly elected chaplain to the abbot, but, as before, to the Bishop . From today's perspective, Cölestin's most important works were his representative edifices.
Revised:  However, later on federal troops still had to restore order several times as Saint Gall and Konstanz did not want to adhere to the new rules and, for example, did not present a newly elected chaplain to the abbot, but, as before, to the bishop . From today's perspective, Cölestin's most important works were his representative edifices.
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Original:  Despite the significant expenses of his construction work as well as trials and Jura regalia, he was able to pay back the entire debt that he had inherited from his predecessor and furthermore bequeath his successor 180'600 guilder in cash and 57'695 guilder as capital.
Revised:  Despite the significant expenses of his construction work as well as trials and jura regalia, he was able to pay back the entire debt that he had inherited from his predecessor and furthermore bequeath his successor 180'600 guilder in cash and 57'695 guilder as capital.
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Original:  The baroque hall of the Abbey library of Saint Gall is reckoned one of the world's most beautiful profane halls.
Revised:  The baroque hall of the abbey library of Saint Gall is reckoned one of the world's most beautiful profane halls.
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Original:  The monarch of the Odumase Dynasty is the Konor, or paramount chie 
Revised:  The monarch of the Odumase Dynasty is the Konor, or paramount chief. 
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Original: External links Dancing skeleton (animated) from the Alexis du Pont stereoviews and lantern slides collection at Hagley Museum and Library (Note: I was just looking for information about choreutoscopes and found this draft.
Revised: External links Dancing skeleton (animated) from the Alexis du Pont stereoviews and lantern slides collection at Hagley Museum and (Note: I was just looking for information about choreutoscopes and found this draft.
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Original:  The Choreutoscope is the first pre-cinema device which employed the same system as the Cinematograph.
Revised: Illustration of the Choreutoscope The Choreutoscope is the first pre-cinema device which employed the same system as the Cinematograph.
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Original: Illustration of the Choreutoscope The Choreutoscope is the first pre-cinema device which employed the same system as the Cinematograph .
Revised:  The Choreutoscope is the first pre-cinema device which employed the same system as the Cinematograph .
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Original:  It was the first projection device to use an intermittent movement, which became the basis of all cine cameras and projectors.
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Original:  It was formed by a sheet of glass on which different drawings were made, and the sheet was mounted on a  Maltese cross mechanism, thanks to which the image would move suddenly.
Revised:  It was formed by a sheet of glass on which different drawings were made, and the sheet was mounted on a type off Maltese cross mechanism, thanks to which the image would move suddenly.
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Original:  Beale used it for demonstrations at the Royal Politechnic .
Revised:  Beale used it for demonstrations at the Royal Polytechnic .
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Original:  However, Baele was not the only one to create a Choreutoscope, a few years later William C.
Revised:  However, Beale was not the only one to create a Choreutoscope, a few years later William C.
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Original: Life Born and raised in Oberriet in the St. Gallen Rhine valley, he received his education in the Latin school in Appenzell.
Revised: Life Born and raised in Oberriet in the St. Gallen Rhine valley, he received his education in a Latin school in Appenzell.
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Original:  He studies law with Placidus Bridler in Ingolstadt (1639/40) and Rome (1640/42) . He graduated with the title of Doctor iuris canonici (doctor of Canonical Law).
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Original:  He studies law with Placidus Bridler in Ingolstadt (1639/40) and Rome (1640/42) . He graduated with the title of Doctor iuris canonici (doctor of Canonical Law).
Revised:  He studies law with Placidus Bridler in Ingolstadt (1639/40) and Rome (1640/42) and graduated with the title of Doctor iuris canonici (doctor of Canonical Law).
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Original:  Reading list Huber, Johannes: External links Vogler, Werner: Gallus Alt. in: Historisches Lexikon der Schweiz Kanton St. Gallen: Gallus Alt 
Revised:  Reading list External links Vogler, Werner: Gallus Alt. in: Historisches Lexikon der Schweiz Kanton St. Gallen: Gallus Alt 
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Original: Miranda Wang (born 1993/ 1994) is the founder and CEO of BioCellection, an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
Revised: Miranda Wang (born 1994) is the founder and CEO of BioCellection, an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
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Original: Miranda Wang (born 1994 ) is the cofounder and CEO of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
Revised: Miranda Wang , born in 1994 ) is the cofounder and CEO of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
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Original: Miranda Wang (born 1994 ) is the cofounder and CEO of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
Revised: Miranda Wang (born 1994 , is the cofounder and CEO of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
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Original: Miranda Wang (born 1994 ) is the cofounder and CEO of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
Revised: Miranda Wang (born 1994 ) is the cofounder of Novoloop (formerly BioCellection, Inc.) an organization using chemical technology to recycle plastics.
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Original:    Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a winner of the UN Environment Programme ' s Young Champions of the Earth award . Miranda Wang received this award for recognition of her work to help tackle the plastic crisis by developing a recycling solution for unrecyclable plastic waste.
Revised:  Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a recipient of the UN Environment Programme ' s Young Champions of the Earth award . Miranda Wang received this award for recognition of her work to help tackle the plastic crisis by developing a recycling solution for unrecyclable plastic waste.
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Original:    Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a winner of the UN Environment Programme ' s Young Champions of the Earth award . Miranda Wang received this award for recognition of her work to help tackle the plastic crisis by developing a recycling solution for unrecyclable plastic waste.
Revised:  Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a winner of the UN Environment Programme ’ s Young Champions of the Earth award . Miranda Wang received this award for recognition of her work to help tackle the plastic crisis by developing a recycling solution for unrecyclable plastic waste.
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Original:    Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a winner of the UN Environment Programme ' s Young Champions of the Earth award . Miranda Wang received this award for recognition of her work to help tackle the plastic crisis by developing a recycling solution for unrecyclable plastic waste.
Revised:  Awards and recognition In 2018 , Wang was a winner of the UN Environment Programme ' s Young Champions of the Earth award . 
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Original: Manufacturing company founders Category:American women company founders Category:American company founders Category:Living people Category:1994 births Category:Place of birth missing (living people) Category:Nationality missing Category:Chief executives in the manufacturing industry Category:Women chief executives Category:Canadian people of Chinese descent Category:21st-century American wom
Revised: Manufacturing company founders Category:American women company founders Category:American company founders Category:Living people Category:1994 births Category:Nationality missing Category:Chief executives in the manufacturing industry Category:Women chief executives Category:Canadian people of Chinese descent Category:21st-century American wom
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Original:  In some countries, such as South Africa, the term is synonymous with the term public hospital.
Revised:  In some countries, such as South Africa, the term is synonymous with public hospital.
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Original: Spornosexual is a portmanteau of sports, porn and metrosexual, coined  in 2014 describing a man "who is influenced in his appearance by the stars of sport and pornography" . Metrosexual is a portmanteau of metropolitan and heterosexual.
Revised: Spornosexual is a portmanteau of sports, porn and metrosexual, coined in 2014 to describe a man "who is influenced in his appearance by the stars of sport and pornography" . Metrosexual is a portmanteau of metropolitan and heterosexual.
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Original:   The term originated in an article by cultural commentator Mark Simpson in 2014;
Revised:  Details The term originated in an article by cultural commentator Mark Simpson in 2014;
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Original:  Examples of such men include Dan Osborne, Thom Evans, David McIntosh and Cristiano Ronaldo. :Category:Pop-culture neologisms :Category: Sexual orientation and society :Category: Cultural appropriation :Category:Narcissism :Category:Fashion :Category:Stereotypes of men :Category:Stereotypes of urban people :Category:Terms for men :Category:Subcultures :Category:2010s fads and trends :Category:Words coined in the 2010s :Category:Heterosexuality  :Words coined in the 201
Revised:  Examples of such men include Dan Osborne, Thom Evans, David McIntosh and Cristiano Ronaldo. :Category:Pop-culture neologisms :Category: Cultural appropriation :Category:Narcissism :Category:Fashion :Category:Stereotypes of men :Category:Stereotypes of urban people :Category:Terms for men :Category:Subcultures :Category:2010s fads and trends :Category:Words coined in the 2010s :Category:Heterosexuality :Words coined in the 201
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Original:  Examples of such men include Dan Osborne, Thom Evans, David McIntosh and Cristiano Ronaldo. :Category:Pop-culture neologisms :Category: Sexual orientation and society :Category: Cultural appropriation :Category:Narcissism :Category:Fashion :Category:Stereotypes of men :Category:Stereotypes of urban people :Category:Terms for men :Category:Subcultures :Category:2010s fads and trends :Category:Words coined in the 2010s :Category:Heterosexuality  :Words coined in the 201
Revised:  Examples of such men include Dan Osborne, Thom Evans, David McIntosh and Cristiano Ronaldo. :Category:Pop-culture neologisms :Category: Sexual orientation and society :Category: Cultural appropriation :Category:Narcissism :Category:Fashion :Category:Stereotypes of men :Category:Stereotypes of urban people :Category:Terms for men :Category:Subcultures :Category:2010s fads and trends :Category:Words coined in the 2010s :Category:Heterosexuality :Category :Words coined in the 201
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Original:   Greg Wolfman has written about a proliferation of men's "consumer lifestyles", or "marketed manhoods", that includes spornosexual , lumbersexual and hipster.
Revised:  Greg Wolfman has written about a proliferation of men's "consumer lifestyles", or "marketed manhoods", that includes spornosexual with lumbersexual and hipster.
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Original: Spornosexual is a portmanteau of sports , porn and metrosexual, coined by Mark Simpson in 2014 to describe a man "who is influenced in his appearance by the stars of sport and pornography" ;
Revised: Spornosexual is a blend of sports and the clipping porno, compounded with sexual. The term was coined by Mark Simpson in 2014 to describe a man "who is influenced in his appearance by the stars of sport and pornography" ;
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Original:  Simpson describes spornosexuals as frequently working class men who exercise at a gym in order to share eroticised selfies of their toned bodies on social media.
Revised:  He describes spornosexuals as frequently working class men who exercise at a gym in order to share eroticised selfies of their toned bodies on social media.
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Original:  The term was coined by Mark Simpson in 2014 to describe a man  "who is influenced in his  appearance by the stars of sport and pornography".
Revised:  The term was coined by Mark Simpson in 2014 to describe a man "who is influenced in his /her appearance by the stars of sport and pornography".
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Original:  It recognises young men  who use "their toned bodies on social media as a means of feeling valuable in society." Jamie Hakim has described this as a "power-shift of a segment of society who have historically defined themselves through their mind, whilst at the same time defining those they have subordinated - such as women  - through their bodies".
Revised:  It recognises young men /women who use "their toned bodies on social media as a means of feeling valuable in society." Jamie Hakim has described this as a "power-shift of a segment of society who have historically defined themselves through their mind, whilst at the same time defining those they have subordinated - such as women - through their bodies".
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Original:  It recognises young men  who use "their toned bodies on social media as a means of feeling valuable in society." Jamie Hakim has described this as a "power-shift of a segment of society who have historically defined themselves through their mind, whilst at the same time defining those they have subordinated - such as women  - through their bodies".
Revised:  It recognises young men who use "their toned bodies on social media as a means of feeling valuable in society." Jamie Hakim has described this as a "power-shift of a segment of society who have historically defined themselves through their mind, whilst at the same time defining those they have subordinated - such as women /men - through their bodies".
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Original:  The Cache Creek Belt is bordered by the Quesnellia terrane in the east and by the large Stikinia terrane in the west.
Revised:  The Cache Creek Belt is bordered by the Quesnellia Terrane in the east and by the large Stikinia terrane in the west.
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Original:  The Cache Creek Belt is bordered by the Quesnellia terrane in the east and by the large Stikinia terrane in the west.
Revised:  The Cache Creek Belt is bordered by the Quesnellia terrane in the east and by the large Stikinia Terrane in the west.
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Original:  Dated rocks in the Adaatsag ophiolite in the east are among the oldest at 325 million years old .
Revised:  Dated rocks in the Adaatsag ophiolite in the east are among the oldest at 325 million years old 
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Original:  See also List of ancient oceans%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Ancient oceans Ancient oceans Category:Geology of Russia Category:Geology of Mongol
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Original:  See also List of ancient oceans%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Ancient oceans Ancient oceans Category:Geology of Russia Category:Geology of Mongol
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Original:  See also List of ancient oceans%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Ancient oceans Ancient oceans Category:Geology of Russia Category:Geology of Mongol
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Original:  The Mezcalera oceanic plate was likely subducted and consumed into the mantle allowing the Guerrero Terrane to  accreted to western Mexico in the Early Cretaceous.
Revised:  The Mezcalera oceanic plate was likely subducted and consumed into the mantle allowing the Guerrero Terrane to be accreted to western Mexico in the Early Cretaceous.
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Original:  During interrogation, Craine claimed that Collins was murdered by his older brother Roger , together with whom Louis paid the woman for her services .
Revised:  During interrogation, Craine claimed that Collins was murdered by his older brother Roger after they had paid her for sex .
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Original:  According to his version, his brother strangled her during sexual intercourse;
Revised:  According to his story, Roger strangled her during sexual intercourse;
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