wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen  . Puteri Indonesia  Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen . Puteri Indonesia Puteri Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
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Original:  Puteri Indonesia 2020 Indonesian Pageant-lover supporting and holding Saraswati picture, as she competed in Puteri Indonesia 2020.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia 2020 
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Original:  She was successfully selected as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 and Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020.
Revised:  She was successfully crowned as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 and Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Saraswati is the second delegate from Bali to ever be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan  after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Revised:  Saraswati is the second delegate from Bali to be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Saraswati is the second delegate from Bali to ever be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan  after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Revised:  Saraswati is the second delegate from Bali to ever be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan , after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Saraswati was born in Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia  to a Balinese father and Chinese-Indonesian mother.
Revised:  Saraswati was born in Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia , to a Balinese father and Chinese-Indonesian mother.
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Original:  Since she was 14 years old, Saraswati is working as a fashion model and pilates instructor.
Revised:  Since she was 14 years old, Saraswati has worked as a fashion model and pilates instructor.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor of Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar , Bali, and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works at Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as doctors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Beside being chosen as  Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as  Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Besides being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Beside being chosen as  Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as  Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Beside being chosen as  Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as  Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Beside being chosen as  Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as  Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Beside being chosen as  Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as  Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia, she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
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Original:  Pageantry 200px|Saraswati appear on 2020 Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection TV-commercial - Inspirational Women.
Revised:  Pageants 200px|Saraswati appear on 2020 Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection TV-commercial - Inspirational Women.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar  at the age of eighteen.
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageants began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar  at the age of eighteen.
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar  at the age of eighteen.
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar , at the age of eighteen.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the  contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won  "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the  contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won  "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the  contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won  "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the  contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won  "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner ; she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the  contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won  "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 , and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won the "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  After qualifying the provincial title of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, Saraswati represented the province of Bali in the national beauty contest, Puteri Indonesia 2020, which was held on March 6, 2020.
Revised:  After winning the provincial title of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, Saraswati represented the province of Bali in the national beauty contest, Puteri Indonesia 2020, which was held on March 6, 2020.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  She was successfully selected as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 and Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020.
Revised:  She was selected as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 and Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The final coronation night was attended by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat , and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana , as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest stars . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat  and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana  as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
Revised:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest star . Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of the Miss International pageant, to be held on October 21, 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
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Original:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019  Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand  will crown her successor
Revised:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019 , Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand will crown her successor
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Original:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019  Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand  will crown her successor
Revised:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019 Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand , will crown her successor
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 2020, Saraswati was the second delegate from Bali to  be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan , after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Revised:  Saraswati is the second delegate from Bali to be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan , after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  In 2020, Saraswati was the second delegate from Bali to  be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan , after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Revised:  In 2020, Saraswati was the second delegate from Bali to be crowned Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan after Ayu Diandra Sari Tjakra in 2009.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Saraswati was born in Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia , to a Balinese father and Chinese-Indonesian mother.
Revised:  Saraswati was born in Denpasar, Bali, Indonesia to a Balinese father and Chinese-Indonesian mother.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Since she was 14 years old, Saraswati has worked as a fashion model and pilates instructor.
Revised:  Since she was 14 years old, Saraswati is working as a fashion model and pilates instructor.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  She holds a Bachelor of Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar , Bali, and currently works at Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor of Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali, and currently works at Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as doctors.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Besides being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as the Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Besides being chosen as an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and to represent the Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she has represented Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageants began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali),  held in Denpasar , at the age of eighteen  . Puteri Indonesia  Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 contest at the provincial level  , and ended up  chosen as the winner ;
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), held in Denpasar , at the age of eighteen . Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 contest at the provincial level , and ended up chosen as the winner ;
Edit intent: clarity