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Original:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Harold Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Harold Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of Planning and Architecture between 1937 and 1946.
Revised:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Harold Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of Planning and Architecture between 1937 and 1946.
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Original:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Harold Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Harold Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of Planning and Architecture between 1937 and 1946.
Revised:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Harold Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of Planning and Architecture between 1937 and 1946.
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Original:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Harold Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Harold Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of Planning and Architecture between 1937 and 1946.
Revised:  Career After completing his studies at the Architectural Association, Harold Spence-Sales began practicing as an architect and urban planner in London., Collection: Canadian Architecture Collection, URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Harold Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of planning and architecture between 1937 and 1946.
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Original:  Additionally, Harold Spence-Sales taught at the London Polytechnic Institutions Department of Architecture in 1946.
Revised:  Additionally, Spence-Sales taught at the London Polytechnic Institutions Department of Architecture in 1946.
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Original:  Additionally, Harold Spence-Sales taught at the London Polytechnic Institutions Department of Architecture in 1946.
Revised:  Additionally, Harold Spence-Sales taught at the London Polytechnic Institutions department of architecture in 1946.
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Original:  While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales in collaboration with John Bland established the first ever Canadian graduate studies program in urban and town planning., . In 1946, it was imperative that a university program in urban and town planning was established in order to prepare architects for the reconstruction phase that followed the Second World War.
Revised:  While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales in collaboration with Bland established the first ever Canadian graduate studies program in urban and town planning., . In 1946, it was imperative that a university program in urban and town planning was established in order to prepare architects for the reconstruction phase that followed the Second World War.
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Original:  During the post Second World War years, Bland and Spence-Sales became "distinguished consultants" in the Canadian profession of town planning and city improvement.
Revised:  Bland and Spence-Sales became "distinguished consultants" in the Canadian profession of town planning and city improvement.
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Original:  Spence-Sales and Bland worked on many projects together through their respective careers.
Revised:  Spence-Sales and Bland worked on many projects together throughout their respective careers.
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Original:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together can be found at McGill University's John Bland Archive  ., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications written by Spence-Sales and Bland as well .Collection:
Revised:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive ., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications written by Spence-Sales and Bland as well .Collection:
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Original:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together can be found at McGill University's John Bland Archive  ., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications written by Spence-Sales and Bland as well .Collection:
Revised:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together can be found at McGill University's John Bland Archive ., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland as well .Collection:
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Original:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970-1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
Revised:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
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Original:  He once stated  , “[He] had come to Victoria not to retire, but rather start a new life…
Revised:  He once stated that , “[He] had come to Victoria not to retire, but rather start a new life…
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Original:  Spence-Sales also,  “ organized planning departments for the cities of Edmonton and Vancouver, revised the Planning Act of Alberta, and later, that of Newfoundland.
Revised:  Spence-Sales also, helped “ organized planning departments for the cities of Edmonton and Vancouver, revised the Planning Act of Alberta, and later, that of Newfoundland.
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Original:  Spence-Sales also,  “ organized planning departments for the cities of Edmonton and Vancouver, revised the Planning Act of Alberta, and later, that of Newfoundland.
Revised:  Spence-Sales also, “ organize planning departments for the cities of Edmonton and Vancouver, revised the Planning Act of Alberta, and later, that of Newfoundland.
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Original:  "How to subdivide", taught urban and town planners how to maximize profit, space, identify environmental and geographic features and minimize cost . "How to Subdivide", and Spence-Sales other publications such as, "A Guide to Urban Dispersal" (1956) and "Beautifying Towns" (1967) has inspired as well as influenced the style and thoughts of Canadian urban and town planners for generations.
Revised:  "How to subdivide", taught urban and town planners how to maximize profit, space, identify environmental and geographic features in addition to minimizing costs . "How to Subdivide", and Spence-Sales other publications such as, "A Guide to Urban Dispersal" (1956) and "Beautifying Towns" (1967) has inspired as well as influenced the style and thoughts of Canadian urban and town planners for generations.
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Original:  often in collaboration with his wife Mary Filer.
Revised:  often in collaboration with Filer.
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Original:  A project that Spence-Sales and Mary Filer worked on together was "Here,There and Everywhere", a commission that they completed for the Standard Life Building in Toronto Ontario in 1985.
Revised:  A project that Spence-Sales and Filer worked on together was "Here,There and Everywhere", a commission that they completed for the Standard Life Building in Toronto Ontario in 1985.
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Original:  The projects listed below are  some of the most important projects that Spence-Sales worked on according to  the Canadian Encyclopedia . Spence-Sales was the main urban planner and developed master plans .
Revised:  The projects listed below are considered some of the most important projects that Spence-Sales worked on according to the Canadian Encyclopedia . Spence-Sales was the main urban planner and developed master plans .
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Original:  The projects listed below are  some of the most important projects that Spence-Sales worked on according to  the Canadian Encyclopedia . Spence-Sales was the main urban planner and developed master plans .
Revised:  The projects listed below are some of the most important projects that Spence-Sales worked on according to the Canadian Encyclopedia .
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Original: Personal life and education Montreal's Skyline.
Revised: Personal Life and Education Montreal's Skyline.
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Original:  Spence-Sales studied architecture at Victoria College in Wellington, New Zealand, and town planning at the Architectural Association in London, England.
Revised:  He studied architecture at Victoria College in Wellington, New Zealand, and town planning at the Architectural Association in London, England.
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Original:  Spence-Sales had two children from his first marriage., Collection:
Revised:  He had two children from his first marriage., Collection:
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Original:  Spence-Sales and Filer converted the factory into their home and personal art studios., Converting the Purdy’s Chocolate factory into a home and art studio space had an influence on Spence-Sales decision to pursue art as a major pastime.
Revised:  They converted the factory into their home and personal art studios., Converting the Purdy’s Chocolate factory into a home and art studio space had an influence on Spence-Sales decision to pursue art as a major pastime.
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Original:  URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of planning and architecture between 1937 and 1946.
Revised:  URL While working as an architect and urban planner, he worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of planning and architecture between 1937 and 1946.
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Original:  URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association Schools of planning and architecture between 1937 and 1946.
Revised:  URL While working as an architect and urban planner, Spence-Sales worked as an instructor at the Architectural Association schools of planning and architecture between 1937 and 1946.
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Original:  Spence-Sales primary role was, “designing sites for factories for war materials, and later on, reconstruction schemes”.
Revised:  His primary role was, “designing sites for factories for war materials, and later on, reconstruction schemes”.
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Original:  Spence-Sales also worked on secret plans for the government related to the evacuation of London and other surrounding English cities in addition to preparing for a German invasion;
Revised:  He also worked on secret plans for the government related to the evacuation of London and other surrounding English cities in addition to preparing for a German invasion;
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Original:  In 1946, Spence-Sales was “Lured to McGill University” by friend, former classmate and colleague John Bland., In an interview Spence-Sales  stated that he and Bland were both sent to "the Mother Country to be shaped."
Revised:  In 1946, Spence-Sales was “Lured to McGill University” by friend, former classmate and colleague John Bland., In an interview Spence-Sales once stated that he and Bland were both sent to "the Mother Country to be shaped."
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Original:  Spence-Sales and Bland would remain life long friends.
Revised:  The pair would remain life long friends.
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Original:  Spence-Sales and Bland worked on many projects together throughout their respective careers.
Revised:  They worked on many projects together throughout their respective careers.
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Original:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland co-authored together.
Revised:  Many of the projects that they worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland co-authored together.
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Original:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland co-authored together.
Revised:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on McGill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland co-authored together.
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Original:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that Spence-Sales and Bland co-authored together.
Revised:  Many of the projects that Spence-Sales and Bland worked on together are listed on Mcgill University's John Bland Archive website., , , The Canadian Architecture Collection at McGill University has several physical copies of publications and plans that the duo co-authored together.
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Original:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
Revised:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at McGill between the years 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
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Original:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
Revised:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up instructing world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
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Original:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
Revised:  the school of architecture was reorganized and an independent school of urban planning was created at the university between 1970 and 1972 ., While teaching at McGill University, Spence-Sales ended up teaching world renowned architects, such as, Murray Jones, Len Gurtler, Norbert Schoenauer, Moshe Safdie, William Perks, David Farley, Jeanne Wolfe and Peter Oberlander., , . Also, while teaching he worked and consulted as an urban planner on projects across Canada.
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Original:  In 1970, Spence-Sales retired from teaching at McGill University and moved to Victoria British Columbia with Filer.
Revised:  In 1970, Spence-Sales retired from teaching and moved to Victoria British Columbia with Filer.
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Original:  During his career Spence-Sales also became a specialist in the area of converting old Industrial buildings into studios and living spaces., Environment and planning legislation Throughout his career, Spence-Sales made a point of incorporating ecological concerns and natural landscapes into urban planning and architectural projects.
Revised:  During his career he also became a specialist in the area of converting old Industrial buildings into studios and living spaces., Environment and planning legislation Throughout his career, Spence-Sales made a point of incorporating ecological concerns and natural landscapes into urban planning and architectural projects.
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Original:  During his career Spence-Sales also became a specialist in the area of converting old Industrial buildings into studios and living spaces., Environment and planning legislation Throughout his career, Spence-Sales made a point of incorporating ecological concerns and natural landscapes into urban planning and architectural projects.
Revised:  During his career Spence-Sales also became a specialist in the area of converting old Industrial buildings into studios and living spaces., Environment and Planning Legislation Throughout his career, Spence-Sales made a point of incorporating ecological concerns and natural landscapes into urban planning and architectural projects.
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Original:  A former Student of Spence-Sales , Jeanne Wolfe stated that, “Long before ideas about ‘plan with nature’ were articulated, [Harold Spence-Sales] was teaching environmental sensitivity”.
Revised:  A former student of his , Jeanne Wolfe stated that, “Long before ideas about ‘plan with nature’ were articulated, [Harold Spence-Sales] was teaching environmental sensitivity”.
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Original:  In 1949, Harold Spence-Sales "wrote the first compendium of planning law titled, ["Planning Legislation in Canada"] for CMHC, [Canada Mortgage and Housing]".
Revised:  In 1949, he "wrote the first compendium of planning law titled, ["Planning Legislation in Canada"] for CMHC, [Canada Mortgage and Housing]".
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Original:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
Revised:  He referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
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Original:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
Revised:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
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Original:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
Revised:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
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Original:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
Revised:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
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Original:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant awards and honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
Revised:  Spence-Sales referred to "Here,There and Everywhere" as an “ urbanistic statement" and he believed that it was the first public artwork in Canada on the theme of urbanization ” . Significant Awards and Honors Doctorate of laws from Simon Fraser University with Mary Filer for their contributions to the arts.
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Original:  Selected projects Aerial View of Charlottetown Prince Edward Island.
Revised:  Selected Projects Aerial View of Charlottetown Prince Edward Island.
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Original:  Archives  Harold Spence-Sales archival fonds can be found in the McGill University Library's Canadian Architecture Collection.
Revised:  Archives The Harold Spence-Sales archival fonds can be found in the McGill University Library's Canadian Architecture Collection.
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