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Original: In one of the deadiest attacks in the south Thailand insurgency, 11 soldiers were killed in a roadside bombing and ambush attack in Yala Province.
Revised: In one of the deadliest attacks in the south Thailand insurgency, 11 soldiers were killed in a roadside bombing and ambush attack in Yala Province.
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Original:  Yala Province, highlighted on map, is one of the Muslim-majority border provinces of Thailand.
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Original:  At  around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday,  a pickup truck carrying 12 Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
Revised:  At around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday, when a pickup truck carrying 12 Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
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Original:  Eight soldiers were killed instantly, army spokesman Colonel Acra Tiproch said.
Revised:  Eleven soldiers were killed instantly, army spokesman Colonel Acra Tiproch said.
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Original:  Two later died at hospital that evening from their injuries, and one more injured soldier died  on Friday.
Revised:  Two later died at hospital that evening from their injuries, and one more injured soldier died at hospital on Friday.
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Original:  The     past year in southern Thailand has seen an escalation in separatist attacks, with almost daily fatal shootings of civilians and frequent ambushes on soldiers.
Revised:  The The past year in southern Thailand has seen an escalation in separatist attacks, with almost daily fatal shootings of civilians and frequent ambushes on soldiers.
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Original:  Thailand is predominantly a Buddhist country, but in those three provinces, the majority of residents are Islamic    .
Revised:  Thailand is predominantly a Buddhist country, but in those three provinces, the majority of residents are Muslim. .
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Original:  Australia has plans to post a defence attache to NATO headquarters in Brussels, and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation — but will not be increasing troop numbers to assist the multilateral defence body in its task in Afghanistan.
Revised:  Australia has plans to post a defence attaché to NATO headquarters in Brussels, and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation — but will not be increasing troop numbers to assist the multilateral defence body in its task in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Up to 150 had at one time been on the ground there after the September 11 attack on the World Trade Center , but were brought home by November 2002.
Revised:  Up to 150 had at one time been on the ground there after the September 11 attack on the , but were brought home by November 2002.
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Original:  Defence Minister Robert Hill said a change of role for NATO, set up to counter the perceived threat from the Communist Bloc in the Cold War , meant Australia was likely to be working more closely with the organisation in the future.
Revised:  Defence Minister Robert Hill said a change of role for NATO, set up to counter the perceived threat from the in the , meant Australia was likely to be working more closely with the organisation in the future.
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Original:  NATO now provides security in Afghanistan and trains Iraqi personnel
Revised:  NATO now provides security in Afghanistan and trains personnel
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Original: Australia is likely to work more closely with NATO in the future, according to Defence Minister Robert Hill.  has plans to post a defence attaché to headquarters in , and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation —
Revised: Australia is likely to work more closely with NATO in the future, according to Defence Minister Robert Hill. Australia has plans to post a defence attaché to headquarters in , and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation —
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Original: Australia is likely to work more closely with NATO in the future, according to Defence Minister Robert Hill.  has plans to post a defence attaché to headquarters in , and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation —
Revised: Australia is likely to work more closely with NATO in the future, according to Defence Minister Robert Hill. has plans to post a defence attaché to NATO headquarters in Brussels , and enhance counter-terrorism intelligence co-operation —
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Original:  He was subsequently relocated to in   
Revised:  He was subsequently relocated to in . 
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Original: A male driver has been hospitalised with serious head injuries after the car he was in crashed into the side of  house in in the east of the United Kingdom.
Revised: A male driver has been hospitalised with serious head injuries after the car he was in crashed into the side of a house in in the east of the United Kingdom.
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Original: Although three people were inside the house when the car impacted it, none of them experienced injury .
Revised: Although three people were inside the house when the car impacted it, none of them were hurt .
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Original:  The road on which the crash happened was temporarily closed so as to allow for the driver to be freed from the red .
Revised:  The road where the crash happened was temporarily closed so as to allow for the driver to be freed from the red .
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Original:  The road on which the crash happened was temporarily closed so as to allow for the driver to be freed from the red .
Revised:  The road on which the crash happened was temporarily closed while emergency services freed the driver from the red .
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Original:  He was subsequently relocated to in . s have been asked to examine the house.
Revised:  He was subsequently relocated to in . have been asked to examine the house.
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Original:  "Collision investigators will be at the scene today as we try to ascertain exactly what has occurred , "  said Sergeant Bob Patterson.
Revised:  "Collision investigators will be at the scene today as we try to ascertain exactly what has occurred " said Sergeant Bob Patterson.
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Original:  "Collision investigators will be at the scene today as we try to ascertain exactly what has occurred , "  said Sergeant Bob Patterson.
Revised:  "Collision investigators will be at the scene today as we try to ascertain exactly what has occurred , " , said Sergeant Bob Patterson.
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Original: On January 11, 2007, Dodd announced his Presidential candidacy on the now canceled Don Imus in the Morning radio show.
Revised: On January 11, 2007, Dodd announced his Presidential candidacy on the now canceled Imus in the Morning radio show.
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Original:  The League of Conservation Voters (LCV) issued a statement today, congratulating Senator Chris Dodd for his support of environmental issues.
Revised:  The League of Conservation Voters (LCV) issued a statement today, congratulating Senator Christopher Dodd for his support of environmental issues.
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Original:  "This is the way it's been done all along," said JeffJubelirer . "We feel we haven't been dealt with fairly."
Revised:  "This is the way it's been done all along," said Jeff Jubelirer . "We feel we haven't been dealt with fairly."
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Original:  The Boy Scouts can continue to use their building if they agree to pay market value rent., Jubelirer said the city has yet to tell the Cradle of Liberty Council what fair-market-value rent would be.
Revised:  The future The Boy Scouts can continue to use their building if they agree to pay market value rent., Jubelirer said the city has yet to tell the Cradle of Liberty Council what fair-market-value rent would be.
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Original:  “ You should not be able to stay in a publicly funded facility without signing nondiscriminatory language regardless of whether you pay rent," he said.
Revised:  " You should not be able to stay in a publicly funded facility without signing nondiscriminatory language regardless of whether you pay rent," he said.
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Original:  “ We walk a fine line between what National wants and what we want to do," Jubelirer said.
Revised:  " We walk a fine line between what National wants and what we want to do," Jubelirer said.
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Original:  The scouts have a non-discrimination policy, but have refused to include sexual orientation in their non-discrimination charter.
Revised: In December 1928 the City of Philadelphia gave the Philadelphia Council permission to build a headquarters on city-owned land at 22nd and Spring Streets in Fairmount Park. The Scouts built their headquarters at their own expense and, complying with the terms of the agreement, immediately turned over the property to the city. In return they remained housed in their building rent free. The scouts have a non-discrimination policy, but have refused to include sexual orientation in their non-discrimination charter.
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Original:  The new building will be built on along with the Salvation Army 's new facilities in North Philadelphia
Revised:  The new building will be built on along with the Salvation _Army 's new facilities in North Philadelphia
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Original:  This is due to pressure form the Mormon and Catholic churches, tow of the largest sponsors of Scouting units.
Revised:  This is due to pressure form the Mormon and Catholic churches, two of the largest sponsors of Scouting units.
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Original:  In 2003 the council said it would adopt a nondiscrimination policy on homosexuals, but reversed itself within days under pressure form the National Council.
Revised:  In 2003 the council said it would adopt a nondiscrimination policy on homosexuals, but reversed itself within days under pressure from the National Council.
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Original:  If they adopt the non-discrimination policy demanded by the city, they lose their national charter form the Boy Scouts.
Revised:  If they adopt the non-discrimination policy demanded by the city, they lose their national charter from the Boy Scouts.
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Original:  The new building will be built on along with the Salvation _Army 's new facilities in North Philadelphia
Revised:  The new building will be built on along with the Salvation Army 's new facilities in North Philadelphia
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Original: The scouts have a non-discrimination policy, but have refused to include sexual orientation in their non-discrimination charter.
Revised: The Scouts have a non-discrimination policy, but have refused to include sexual orientation in their non-discrimination charter.
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Original:  Jannati also blamed America for the many atrocities in Iraq and calls for America withdrawal in light of the fact that elections have been held in Iraq.
Revised:  Jannati also blamed America for the many atrocities in Iraq and calls for American withdrawal in light of the fact that elections have been held in Iraq.
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Original: 300px|The Big Donor Show logo A Dutch reality TV show broadcast yesterday evening which was designed to show a terminally ill woman choosing a patient to receive her kidneys has been shown to be a hoax.
Revised:  A Dutch reality TV show broadcast yesterday evening which was designed to show a terminally ill woman choosing a patient to receive her kidneys has been shown to be a hoax.
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Original: Political parties in Holland together with medical organisations and kidney specialists had united in condemning the programme prior to its broadcast.
Revised: Political parties in The Netherlands together with medical organisations and kidney specialists had united in condemning the programme prior to its broadcast.
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Original:  Bart de Graaff, a former director of the TV station which broadcast the programme, died from kidney failure at the age of 35 after spending years on a transplant waiting list.
Revised:  Bart de Graaff, the founder and former director of the TV station which broadcast the programme, died from kidney failure at the age of 35 after spending years on a transplant waiting list.
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Original:  The choice was to have been made based on the the history and profile of the "contestants" and conversations that the actress is indicated to have had with their families and friends.
Revised:  The choice was to have been made based on the history and profile of the "contestants" and conversations that the actress is indicated to have had with their families and friends.
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Original: The "donor", known only as "Lisa", was an actress, although the three individuals competing for the kidneys were real patients requiring kidney transplants.
Revised: The "donor", known only as "Lisa", was an actress, although the three individuals competing for the kidneys are real patients requiring kidney transplants.
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Original:  The video ended with Johnston about to outline conditions for his release, only to have the tape cut away to an as yet unidentified voice in Arabic demanding freedom for Islamic prisoners, including a radical cleric with ties to Al-Qaeda imprisoned in Britain
Revised:  The video ended with Johnston about to outline conditions for his release, only to have the tape cut away to an as yet unidentified voice in Arabic demanding freedom for Islamic prisoners, including a radical cleric with ties to al-Qaeda imprisoned in Britain
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Original: Alan Johnston in an undated BBC photo A video has been released by the captors of Alan Johnston, the BBC Gaza Correspondent who was kidnapped on March 12, 2007.
Revised: Alan Johnston in an undated BBC photo A video has been released by the captors of Alan Johnston, the BBC Gaza correspondent who was kidnapped on March 12, 2007.
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Original:  The BBC made a petition for Johnston's release, and has now been signed by over 130 ' 000 people.
Revised:  The BBC made a petition for Johnston's release, and has now been signed by over 130 , 000 people.
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Original: The indian-tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area (approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro) of Amazonas , and comprise 87 members.
Revised: The indian-tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area (approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro) of Amazon , and comprise 87 members.
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Original:  They are called Metyktira .
Revised:  They are called Metyktire .
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Original:  The discovery was made when two members of the Metyktira tribe suddenly showed up in the Kayapo-tribe village, in the Menkregnoti-reservation of in Amazonas .
Revised:  The discovery was made when two members of the Metyktira tribe suddenly showed up in the Kayapo tribe village, in the Menkregnoti-reservation of in Amazonas .
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Original: The indian-tribe , thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area (approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
Revised: The indian tribe , thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area (approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
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Original: The indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area ( approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro ) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
Revised: The Indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area ( approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro ) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
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Original: The indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area ( approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro ) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
Revised: The indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area of the Amazon, approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro ) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
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Original: The indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area ( approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro ) of Amazon, and comprise 87 members.
Revised: The indian tribe, thought to have no previous contact with civilization, was found in a remote area ( approximately 2000 km to the north of Rio de Janeiro . It comprises 87 members.
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Original:  The reason for their not being discovered before now is postulated to be at least partly because of the lack of larger rivers in the area, which has made communication difficult.
Revised:  The reason for their not being discovered before now is thought at least to be partly due to the lack of larger rivers in the area, which has made communication difficult.
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Original:  The reason for their not being discovered before now is postulated to be at least partly because of the lack of larger rivers in the area, which has made communication difficult.
Revised:  The reason for their not being discovered before now is postulated to be at least partly because of the lack of larger rivers in the area, which makes communication difficult.
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Original:  Apparently, the Metyktire tribe is a subgroup of the Kayapo tribe  .
Revised:  The Metyktire tribe is a subgroup of the Kayapo tribe .
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Original:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors  has been sent in for medical examination
Revised:  In order to protect the members of the tribe from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors has been sent in for medical examination
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Original:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors  has been sent in for medical examination
Revised:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to , the Brazilian government has forbidden contact with the them except for a team of doctors has been sent in for medical examination
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Original:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors  has been sent in for medical examination
Revised:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors which has been sent in for medical examination
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Original:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors  has been sent in for medical examination
Revised:  The Brazilian government have now forbidden contact with the tribe from the outside to protect them from diseases they might lack resistance to . Still, a team of doctors has been sent in to examine them
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Original:  The discovery was made when two members of the Metyktira tribe suddenly showed up in the Kayapo tribe village, in the Menkregnoti reservation of the Amazon.
Revised:  The discovery was made when two members of the Metyktire tribe suddenly showed up in the Kayapo tribe village, in the Menkregnoti reservation of the Amazon.
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Original: Six Chevron's employees have been released today : four italians, Raffaele Pascariello, Alfonso Franza, Ignazio Gugliotta e Mario Celentano, an United States citizen and a Croatian  were kidnapped by the Movement for the Emancipation of the Niger Delta (MEND) on May 1st.
Revised: Six employees of Chevron Corporation have been released today : four italians, Raffaele Pascariello, Alfonso Franza, Ignazio Gugliotta e Mario Celentano, an United States citizen and a Croatian were kidnapped by the Movement for the Emancipation of the Niger Delta (MEND) on May 1st.
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Original: Six Chevron's employees have been released today : four italians, Raffaele Pascariello, Alfonso Franza, Ignazio Gugliotta e Mario Celentano, an United States citizen and a Croatian  were kidnapped by the Movement for the Emancipation of the Niger Delta (MEND) on May 1st.
Revised: Six Chevron's employees have been released today : four italians, Raffaele Pascariello, Alfonso Franza, Ignazio Gugliotta e Mario Celentano, an United States citizen and a Croatian , were kidnapped by the Movement for the Emancipation of the Niger Delta (MEND) on May 1st.
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Original:  On the same day , the movement announced that the hostage would have been freed after a month: today the six men were handed over to Chevron's officials 
Revised:  On the same day , the movement announced that the hostages would be freed after one month. The six men were handed over to Chevron's officials 
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Original: On May 29, 2007, the former head of China's State Food and Drug Administration (SFDA), Zheng Xiaoyu, was found guilty by a lower court of accepting brides and dereliction of duty.
Revised: On May 29, 2007, the former head of China's State Food and Drug Administration (SFDA), Zheng Xiaoyu, was found guilty by a lower court of accepting bribes and dereliction of duty.
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Original: Scotland Yard detectives, who went to Jamaica to probe w: Bob Woolmer's death, came to the verdict of the murder investigation saying Bob Woolmer died of heart failure and was not murdered.
Revised: Scotland Yard detectives, who went to Jamaica to probe Bob Woolmer's death, came to the verdict of the murder investigation saying Bob Woolmer died of heart failure and was not murdered.
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Original: An Internet petition, again powered by Ipetitons sprang up, to Jail Paris Hilton.
Revised: An Internet petition, again powered by Ipetitons sprang up, called Jail Paris Hilton.
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Original:  Now the fashion industry is joining in on the debate, with a company that has designed a line of knickers embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of her.
Revised:  Now the fashion industry is joining in on the debate, with a company that has designed a line of knickers embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton. A
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Original:  'Jail Paris'  was later added  following intense demand
Revised:  'Jail Paris' was later added to the lingerie following intense demand
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton Photographers and media are gathering for what might be the appearance of the famous — just  being famous — Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton Photographers and media are gathering for what might be the appearance of the famous — just for being famous — Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
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Original:  A 'Jail Paris' embroidery was later added to the lingerie following intense demand    
Revised:  A 'Jail Paris' embroidery was later added to the lingerie following intense demand . 
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Original:  Chartreuse calls Hilton the "queen of links", a web 2.0 version in a contrast to Madonna, a web 1.0 version.
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton Photographers and media are gathering for what might be the appearance of the famous — just for being famous — Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton Photographers and media are gathering for what might be the appearance Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
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