wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  With many difficulties and problems I grown up  my 2 daughters, one was previously sold [by him] to a Kandahari man and taken to Pakistan and another was exchanged with a dog.
Revised:  With many difficulties and problems I grown up sic my 2 daughters, one was previously sold [by him] to a Kandahari man and taken to Pakistan and another was exchanged with a dog.
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Original:  Mohammad Zahir Zafari, chief of the human rights office in Kondoz says, they have tried since a month to find the child but police is also unable to do anything as powerful people have link to the crime.
Revised:  Mohammad Zahir Zafari, chief of the human rights office in Kondoz says, they have tried since a month to find the child but the police are also unable to do anything as powerful people have link to the crime.
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Original:  Mohammad Zahir Zafari, chief of the human rights office in Kondoz says, they have tried since a month to find the child but police is also unable to do anything as powerful people have link to the crime.
Revised:  Mohammad Zahir Zafari, chief of the human rights office in Kondoz says, they have tried since a month to find the child but police is also unable to do anything as powerful people have links to the crime.
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Original:  He also exposed that his office was threatened a number of times to stop following of the case.
Revised:  He also revealed that his office was threatened a number of times to stop following of the case.
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Original:  He also exposed that his office was threatened a number of times to stop following of the case.
Revised:  He also exposed that his office was threatened a number of times to stop following the case.
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Original:  Such crimes happen on daily bases in Kundoz and other parts of Afghanistan where warlords have established jungle law and have all the key positions in their possession.
Revised:  Such crimes happen on a daily basis in Kundoz and other parts of Afghanistan where warlords have established jungle law and have all the key positions in their possession.
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Original:  Few such cases find its way to the media, with journalists fearful of the consequences of reporting on such incidents
Revised:  Few such cases find their way to the media, with journalists fearful of the consequences of reporting on such incidents
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Original: Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper made a visit to Hamilton yesterday to watch the 2007 annual Tim Hortons Brier at the Copps Coliseum .
Revised: Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper made a visit to yesterday to watch the 2007 annual Tim Hortons Brier at the Copps Coliseum .
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Original: Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper made a visit to Hamilton yesterday to watch the 2007 annual Tim Hortons Brier at the Copps Coliseum .
Revised: Canadian Prime Minister Stephen Harper made a visit to Hamilton yesterday to watch the 2007 annual at the .
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Original:  He started to be a fan of curling in Winnipeg, Manitoba 10 years ago and said his father used to play it.
Revised:  He started to be a fan of curling in Manitoba 10 years ago and said his father used to play it.
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Original:  He cheered on for Alberta's Kevin Martin . Martin won 9-8 over players from Nova Scotia.
Revised:  He cheered on for Alberta's . Martin won 9-8 over players from Nova Scotia.
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Original:  He cheered on for Alberta's Kevin Martin . Martin won 9-8 over players from Nova Scotia.
Revised:  He cheered on for Alberta's Kevin Martin . Martin won 9–8 over players from Nova Scotia.
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Original:  The second half saw Lille continue to dominant the football match, and the first threat came through a long range shot by Keita, but Van Der Sar saved well.
Revised:  The second half saw Lille continue to dominate the football match, and the first threat came through a long range shot by Keita, but Van Der Sar saved well.
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Original:  United finally had a chance of their own in the second half when defender Nemanja Vidic connected with a free kick by Rooney, but the Serbians header flew just over the goal.
Revised:  United finally had a chance of their own in the second half when defender Nemanja Vidic connected with a free kick by Rooney, but the Serbian's header flew just over the goal.
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Original:  Ronaldo used some of his trademark moves to outwit 3 Lille defenders a knocked a well aimed ball into Larsson, who forced a powerful header into the back of the net.
Revised:  Ronaldo used some of his trademark moves to outwit 3 Lille defenders and knocked a well aimed ball into Larsson, who forced a powerful header into the back of the net.
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Original: 100px Manchester United progressed to the qaurterfinals of the Champions League earlier today after defeating Lille 1-0 for the second time.
Revised: 100px Manchester United progressed to the quarterfinals of the Champions League earlier today after defeating Lille 1-0 for the second time.
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Original:  Lille made two changes of their own, throwing Fauvergue and Mirallis into the frey , but they never looked likely to get the two goals they needed to advance.
Revised:  Lille made two changes of their own, throwing Fauvergue and Mirallis into the fray , but they never looked likely to get the two goals they needed to advance.
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Original:  Christiano Ronaldo made his presence felt in the Lille area and was brought down by Chalme in the box.
Revised:  Cristiano Ronaldo made his presence felt in the Lille area and was brought down by Chalme in the box.
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Original:  The aggregate loss concluded a sorrowful series of cup events for Arsenal after they lost in both the FA Cup and the Carling Cup, and now added the Champions Leaue to the list
Revised:  The aggregate loss concluded a sorrowful series of cup events for Arsenal after they lost in both the FA Cup and the Carling Cup, and now added the Champions League to the list
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Original:  Arsenal should have doubled their lead when Adebayor was sent one on one with keeper Heurelho, but his shot was directly at the keeper, and the game remained at 1-0 for the home side.
Revised:  Arsenal nearly doubled their lead when Adebayor was sent one on one with keeper Heurelho, but his shot was directly at the keeper, and the game remained at 1-0 for the home side.
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Original:  A corner by Arsenal alowed Adebayor to flick the ball on, and fortuitously it bounced off the hapless defender Alex and into the net.
Revised:  A corner by Arsenal allowed Adebayor to flick the ball on, and fortuitously it bounced off the hapless defender Alex and into the net.
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Original:  Henry then joined the fray from the bench, and though he didnt look completely comfortble, still managed to force Heurelho into a save with a dipping free kick.
Revised:  Henry then joined the fray from the bench, and though he didn't look completely comfortble, still managed to force Heurelho into a save with a dipping free kick.
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Original:  He struck a fine shot at the net, mut Massimo Oddo did well to block the attempt.
Revised:  He struck a fine shot at the net, but Massimo Oddo did well to block the attempt.
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Original:  Celtic vainly tried to tie the game, bringing on Kenny Miller, but AC finished the game comfortably, and advanced to the next round of the tournament  ]  ]  ]  
Revised:  Celtic vainly tried to tie the game, bringing on Kenny Miller, but AC finished the game comfortably, and advanced to the next round of the tournament /url] ] ] 
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Original:  Celtic vainly tried to tie the game, bringing on Kenny Miller, but AC finished the game comfortably, and advanced to the next round of the tournament  ]  ]  ]  
Revised:  Celtic vainly tried to tie the game, bringing on Kenny Miller, but AC finished the game comfortably, and advanced to the next round of the tournament ] ] ] /ur
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Original: "It is time for the Somali youth to fight the occupation by Ethiopia and others," he said.
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Original:  "The Muslims shall not surrender to non-believers," he added
Revised:  he added
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Original: Assane Ba of the AU said: "The AU has promised to deploy in Somalia and in Mogadishu.
Revised: Assane Ba of the African Union said: "The AU has promised to deploy in Somalia and in Mogadishu.
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Original:  A Mogadishu radio station broadcast a message from IUC member and Hizbul Shabaab leader, Aden Hashi Ayro,  for attacks on the peacekeepers. he added
Revised:  A Mogadishu radio station broadcast a message from IUC member and Hizbul Shabaab leader, Aden Hashi Ayro, calling for attacks on the peacekeepers. he added
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Original:  \  Assane Ba of the African Union said: "The AU has promised to deploy in Somalia and in Mogadishu.
Revised:  Assane Ba of the African Union said: "The AU has promised to deploy in Somalia and in Mogadishu.
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Original:  The Muslims shall not surrender to non-believers.  
Revised:  The Muslims shall not surrender to non-believers. " 
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Original:  The Ugandans , 400  arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were sent to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
Revised:  The Ugandan troops , 400 arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were sent to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
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Original:  The Ugandans , 400  arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were sent to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
Revised:  The Ugandans , 400 of whom arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were sent to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
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Original:  The Ugandans , 400  arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were sent to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
Revised:  The Ugandans , 400 arrived on Tuesday and another 400 the day after, were deployed to Mogadishu as replacements for Ethiopian troops to support the Transitional Federal Parliament (TFP).
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Original:  " Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:Africa Category:Somalia Category:Uganda Category:Ethiopia Category:Wa
Revised:  Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Crime and law Category:Africa Category:Somalia Category:Uganda Category:Ethiopia Category:Wa
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Original: Of the problems, Michel Dorais, Commissioner of the CRA, stated "there is no indication that this situation was caused by intrusion, hacking, or computer virus".
Revised:  Michel Dorais, Commissioner of the CRA, stated "there is no indication that this situation was caused by intrusion, hacking, or computer virus".
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Original:  The shutdown also affects third-party companies that prepare tax returns and EFile the data on behalf of clients.
Revised:  The shutdown also affects third-party companies that prepare tax returns and electronically file the data using the EFile facility on behalf of clients.
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Original: The Agency's electronic systems apparently transposed the birth date and the user's Social Insurance Number (the Canadian equivalent to the U.S. Social Security Number) and thus corrupted all electronic databases.
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Original:  " This could be inferred from the first paragraph of the article in the Star, which reads "a problem with electronic filing is making it impossible even to submit tax returns to the Canada Revenue Agency."
Revised:  " .
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Original:  The remainder of the article in the Star says nothing about their system for accepting paperreturns, only about the on-line and telephone systems.
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Original:  Again, while this may imply that the agency is unable to process all returns - even ones filed on paper - that is not explicitly stated, i.e. don't get your hopes up that you'll get away with a long delay in filing.
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Original:  The deadline for Canadians to submit tax returns is April 30. CRA IT specialists are working on the computer system and have traced the source of the problem to software maintenance conducted on March 4, 2007.
Revised:  The deadline for Canadians to submit tax returns is April 30. 
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Original:  The law is, as the Associated Press dubs it, a "clumsy effort" to curb the urban youth activity known as Happy slapping in which an act of violence, such as kicking a helpless victim, is filmed by the attacker's friends for entertainment purpose  
Revised:  The law is, as the Associated Press dubs it, a "clumsy effort" to curb the urban youth activity known as Happy slapping in which an act of violence, such as kicking a helpless victim, is filmed by the attacker's friends for entertainment purposes. 
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Original:  The group has also attacked proposed French legislation that would designate certain media outlets as "government-approved sources of information", citing the dangers of censorshi
Revised:  The group has also attacked proposed French legislation that would designate certain media outlets as "government-approved sources of information", citing the dangers of censorship
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Original:  Convicted "citizen journalists" could face up to five years in prison.
Revised:  Under the new legislation, written by Minister of the Interior Nicolas Sarkozy, convicted "citizen journalists" could face up to five years in prison.
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Original: Malta formally asked to join Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro  .
Revised: Malta has formally applied to join the Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro .
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Original: Malta formally asked to join Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro  .
Revised: Malta formally asked to join Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro currency .
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Original:  The request was made through a letter sent by the Prime Minister, Dr Lawrence Gonzi, and Central Bank of Malta Governor Michael Bonello to both the European Commission and the European Central Bank, asking both institutions to set in motion the mechanism to provide Malta with a convergence report on whether it has reached all Eurozone membership conditions, known as the Maastricht criteri
Revised:  The request was made through a letter sent by the Prime Minister, Dr Lawrence Gonzi, and Central Bank of Malta Governor Michael Bonello to both the European Commission and the European Central Bank, asking both institutions to set in motion the mechanism to provide Malta with a convergence report on whether it has reached all Eurozone membership conditions, known as the Maastricht criteria
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Original: Malta  has formally applied to join the Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro currency.
Revised: Malta applies to join euro Malta has formally applied to join the Eurozone in January 2008 and adopt the euro currency.
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Original:  The company owns the John Lewis chain of department stores and the upmarket supermarket chain Waitrose  
Revised:  The company owns the John Lewis chain of department stores and the upmarket supermarket chain Waitrose . 
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Original:  Bootle Town Hall was packed for the meeting of the planning commitee which was atended by Mr Gormley  
Revised:  Bootle Town Hall was packed for the meeting of the planning commitee which was atended by Mr Gormley . 
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Original:  Sefton Metropolitan Borough Council changed it's mind after revised plans were put in relocating some of the statues in order to reduce impact on wildlife and danger to visitors.
Revised:  Sefton Metropolitan Borough Council changed its mind after revised plans were put in relocating some of the statues in order to reduce impact on wildlife and danger to visitors.
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Original:  Bootle Town Hall was packed for the meeting of the planning commitee which was atended by Mr Gormley.
Revised:  Bootle Town Hall was packed for the meeting of the planning committee which was attended by Mr Gormley.
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Original:  The orginal plan had been for a 2 year placement at the beach.
Revised:  The original plan had been for a 2 year placement at the beach.
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Original:  However when it was decided to transfere the statues to another site  several local campaign groups were started , with the intention of keeping the statues
Revised:  However when it was decided to transfer the statues to another site several local campaign groups were started , with the intention of keeping the statues
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Original:  However when it was decided to transfere the statues to another site  several local campaign groups were started , with the intention of keeping the statues
Revised:  However when it was decided to transfere the statues to another site , several local campaign groups were started , with the intention of keeping the statues
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Original:  However when it was decided to transfere the statues to another site  several local campaign groups were started , with the intention of keeping the statues
Revised:  However when it was decided to transfere the statues to another site several local campaign groups were started with the intention of keeping the statues
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Original:  However when it was decided to transfer the statues to another site, several local campaign groups were started with the intention of keeping the statues    
Revised:  However when it was decided to transfer the statues to another site, several local campaign groups were started with the intention of keeping the statues . 
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Original:  I’m a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being dim- inished , but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying."
Revised:  I’m a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being diminished , but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying."
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Original: Afterwards, Mr Gormley said: "It ’ s wonderful that a piece of beach should become a permanent place of contemplation and reverie.
Revised: Afterwards, Mr Gormley said: "It ' s wonderful that a piece of beach should become a permanent place of contemplation and reverie.
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Original:  I ’ m a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being diminished, but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying."
Revised:  I ' m a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being diminished, but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying."
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Original:  The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as the draw vistors into area of the beach were they can get stuck.
Revised:  The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as the draw visitors into area of the beach were they can get stuck.
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Original: Afterwards, Mr Gormley said: " It's wonderful that a piece of beach should become a permanent place of contemplation and reverie.
Revised: Afterwards, Mr Gormley said: It's wonderful that a piece of beach should become a permanent place of contemplation and reverie.
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Original:  I'm a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being diminished, but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying. "
Revised:  I'm a sailor and I understand that people feel their ability to use coastal waters is being diminished, but I do not believe the loss is as great as they’re saying. 
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Original: The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as the draw visitors into area of the beach were they can get stuck.
Revised: The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as it draws visitors into areas of the beach were they can get stuck.
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Original: The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as the draw visitors into area of the beach were they can get stuck.
Revised: The Maritime and Coastguard Agency still want the work removed as the draw visitors into area of the beach were they can become stuck.
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Original:  While directors of art organisations in the area such as Liverpool Biennial have expressed support for the decision  [ [ [ [  
Revised:  While directors of art organisations in the area such as Liverpool Biennial have expressed support for the decision . [ [ [ [ 
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Original: "John, through his character Mr  Humphries of Are You Being Served? was known and loved throughout the world.
Revised: "John, through his character Mr . Humphries of Are You Being Served? was known and loved throughout the world.
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Original:    Inman's long-term partner, Ron Lynch, was said to be "devastated" at his death.
Revised:  According to the Inman's long-term partner, Ron Lynch, was said to be "devastated" at his death.
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Original:  He was a true professional.   
Revised:  He was a true professional. " 
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Original:   Two penalties kept this match tied, as Shaktar of the Ukraine visited current La Liga leaders Sevilla.
Revised:  Sevilla 2 - 2 Shakhtar Donetsk Two penalties kept this match tied, as Shaktar of the Ukraine visited current La Liga leaders Sevilla.
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Original:  Spain boasted the most teams in the competition with four (Espanyol, Celta  Vigo, Sevilla, and Osasuna), while England (Tottenham, Newcastle), Portugal (Braga, Benfica), Germany (Bayer Leverkusen, Werder Bremen) and France (Lens, PSG) each had two teams still in the Cup.
Revised:  Spain boasted the most teams in the competition with four (Espanyol, Celta de Vigo, Sevilla, and Osasuna), while England (Tottenham, Newcastle), Portugal (Braga, Benfica), Germany (Bayer Leverkusen, Werder Bremen) and France (Lens, PSG) each had two teams still in the Cup.
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Original:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifi ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetetsk ), and Holland (AZ Alkmaar).
Revised:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifa ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetetsk ), and Holland (AZ Alkmaar).
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Original:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifi ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetetsk ), and Holland (AZ Alkmaar).
Revised:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifi ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetsk ), and Holland (AZ Alkmaar).
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Original:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifi ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetetsk ), and Holland (AZ Alkmaar).
Revised:  Other represented countries were Israel (Maccabi Haifi ), Scotland (Rangers), Ukraine (Shakhtar Donetetsk ), and Netherlands (AZ Alkmaar).
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Original: The first murderer in 150-years, at the Australian Norfolk Island, Glenn McNeill has been found guilty of killing Australian , Janelle Patton in 2002. 29-year-old, New Zealander, Glenn McNeill was found guilty of murdering  Janelle Patton after the jury of 11 deliberated for two days then delivering their guilty verdict, which either had to be unanimous, or no charges as manslaughter was not an option.
Revised: The first murderer in 150-years, at the Australian Norfolk Island, Glenn McNeill has been found guilty of killing Australian , Janelle Patton in 2002. 29-year-old, New Zealander, Glenn McNeill was found guilty of murdering Australian, Janelle Patton after the jury of 11 deliberated for two days then delivering their guilty verdict, which either had to be unanimous, or no charges as manslaughter was not an option.
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