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Original: Indonesian authorities are conducting tests on samples taken from a suspected bird flu case who died on Thursay , May 5.
Revised: Indonesian authorities are conducting tests on samples taken from a suspected bird flu patient who died on Thursay , May 5.
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Original: Indonesian authorities are conducting tests on samples taken from a suspected bird flu case who died on Thursay , May 5.
Revised: Indonesian authorities are conducting tests on samples taken from a suspected bird flu case who died on Thursday , May 5.
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Original:  The WHO has not had access to H5N1 samples from Indonesia since January when a dispute arose over the use of H5N1 samples from Indonesia in commerically made vaccines.
Revised:  The WHO has not had access to H5N1 samples from Indonesia since January when a dispute arose over the use of H5N1 samples from Indonesia in commercially made vaccines.
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Original:  If confirmed, he will be the 95th case of human H5N1 infection in Indonesia.
Revised:  If confirmed, this will be the 95th case of human H5N1 infection in Indonesia.
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Original:  The Indonesian daily , Suara Merdeka , reports that, in addition a high fever, the victim's symptoms included bronchitis and encephalitis (inflammation of the brain).
Revised:  The Indonesian daily Suara Merdeka reports that, in addition a high fever, the victim's symptoms included bronchitis and encephalitis (inflammation of the brain).
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Original:  However, there have been at least an additional 13 locally confirmed H5N1 cases including 11 deaths in Indonesia since Jan 29 of this year.
Revised:  However, there have been at least an additional 13 locally confirmed H5N1 cases including 11 deaths in Indonesia since January 29 of this year.
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Original:  According to these figures, Indonesia has had the highest number of H5N1 human infections (94+)  , surpassing Vietnam's total of 93 cases.
Revised:  According to these figures, Indonesia has had the highest number (94+) , surpassing Vietnam's total of 93 cases.
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Original: The Indonesian daily Suara Merdeka reports that, in addition a high fever, the victim's symptoms included bronchitis and encephalitis (inflammation of the brain).
Revised: The Indonesian daily Suara Merdeka reports that, in addition to high fever, the victim's symptoms included bronchitis and encephalitis (inflammation of the brain).
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Original: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years in operation, according to a notice on the web site .
Revised: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years in operation, according to a notice on the web site .
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Original: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years in operation, according to a notice on the web site .
Revised: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years of operation .
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Original:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to close the portal , which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
Revised:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to sell the site , which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
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Original:   Site founder , Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to sell the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
Revised:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to sell the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
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Original:   Site founder , Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to sell the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
Revised:  Site founder , Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technology area.
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Original:  According to James, during its months of operation, SciScoop had accumulated more than 1,200 stories  
Revised:  According to James, during its months of operation, SciScoop had accumulated more than 1,200 stories . 
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Original: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years of operation .
Revised: SciScoop, the online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years of operation .
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Original:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of time as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  Site founder Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specializes in breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  "Only around 5\% or so of our total membership comes to the site in any given 30 day period and even fewer post anything when they get here - stories or comments," he said in a written statement.
Revised:  "Only around 5\% or so of our total membership comes to the site in any given 30 
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Original:  James said the majority of the traffic to the site, which averages more than 27 thousand hits a day , comes from SciScoop headlines being carried on other web sites, like Slashdot and the Google news feed.
Revised:  ,000 hits a day , comes from SciScoop headlines being carried on other web sites, like Slashdot and the Google news feed.
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Original:  He assured the readers in a posting to the site that " the site is not going to disappear, nor is it going to change so radically that you won't recognise it.
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Original: SciScoop, the online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years of operationunder its previous webmaster, Ricky James.
Revised: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years of operationunder its previous webmaster, Ricky James.
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Original: SciScoop, the online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years of operationunder its previous webmaster, Ricky James.
Revised: SciScoop, the online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years of operationunder its previous webmaster, Ricky James.
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Original:  An earlier report by Wikinews that the site would be shut down was in error .  James cited lack of time as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specializes in breaking news in science and technology.
Revised:  An earlier report by Wikinews that the site would be shut down was in error . Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of time as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specializes in breaking news in science and technology.
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Original:  An earlier report by Wikinews that the site would be shut down was in error .  James cited lack of time as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specializes in breaking news in science and technology.
Revised:  An earlier report by Wikinews that the site would be shut down was in error . James cited lack of time as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in science and technology.
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Original:  The site has a growing membership and gets more than 30 ,000  hits a day . SciScoop headlines are also carried on Slashdot and by the Google newsfeed.
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Original: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years in operation , according to a notice on the web site .
Revised: SciScoop, the online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years in operation , according to a notice on the web site .
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Original: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, shuttered is proverbial doors Tuesday after two and a half years in operation , according to a notice on the web site .
Revised: SciScoop, an online collaborative science news source, has changed ownership after two and a half years in operation , according to a notice on the web site .
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Original:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of time as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to close the portal, which specialized on breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
Revised:  Site founder, Ricky James cited lack of funding and low community participation as the reason to pass on ownership of the site, which specializes in breaking news in the science and theoretical technologyarea.
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Original:  He cited the "consensus among Iranian authorities on the country's right to access nuclear technology" and said that sanction against Iran would not be effective.
Revised:  He cited the "consensus among Iranian authorities on the country's right to access nuclear technology" and said that sanctions against Iran would not be effective.
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Original:  Khatami also called for dialogue in two additional areas: On Iraq, Afghanistan, Lebanon and Israel/Palestine to end the Middle East conflicts  and on Islam.
Revised:  Khatami also called for dialogue in two additional areas: On Iraq, Afghanistan, Lebanon and Israel/Palestine to end the Middle East conflicts , and on Islam.
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Original:  With respect to the Middle East conflicts, Khatami stated to Ferdinando Casini, the head of the world's Inter-Parliamentary Union, that these problems cannot be solved by excluding Iran, "  International community needs Iran for creating and maintaining stability and tranquility in the region and this idea that the conflict in the ME can be solved without Iran's presence is a wrong conception." [[Image:Peace dove blue sky.png|Khatami said, "Islam is a religion of peace and tranquility.
Revised:  With respect to the Middle East conflicts, Khatami stated to Ferdinando Casini, the head of the world's Inter-Parliamentary Union, that these problems cannot be solved by excluding Iran, " the International community needs Iran for creating and maintaining stability and tranquility in the region and this idea that the conflict in the ME can be solved without Iran's presence is a wrong conception." [[Image:Peace dove blue sky.png|Khatami said, "Islam is a religion of peace and tranquility.
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Original:  He has called peace a virtue and wants world politicians to seek any "ideology that breeds peace" . Khatami has been hailed as Iran's main voice for reform and moderation since his election in 1997.
Revised:  He has called peace a virtue and wants world politicians to seek any "ideology that breeds peace" Khatami has been hailed as Iran's main voice for reform and moderation since his election in 1997.
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Original:  He has called peace a virtue and wants world politicians to seek any "ideology that breeds peace" . Khatami has been hailed as Iran's main voice for reform and moderation since his election in 1997.
Revised:  He has called peace a virtue and wants world politicians to seek any "ideology that breeds peace" . 
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Original:  Related News I. P. Staker I. P. Staker, a spokesperson of Kenya Airlines, commented "I think this is the work of Howard Stern.
Revised:  Related I. P. Staker I. P. Staker, a spokesperson of Kenya Airlines, commented "I think this is the work of Howard Stern.
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Original:  Credit: Wade distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 had 8 crew members, 106 passengers and a flight engineer on board, and was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
Revised:  Credit: distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 had 8 crew members, 106 passengers and a flight engineer on board, and was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
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Original:  Credit: Wade distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 had 8 crew members, 106 passengers and a flight engineer on board, and was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
Revised:  Credit: Wade Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 had 8 crew members, 106 passengers and a flight engineer on board, and was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
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Original: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadet's of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with Drums beating, colours flying  and rifles held proudly.
Revised: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadets of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with Drums beating, colours flying and rifles held proudly.
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Original: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadet's of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with Drums beating, colours flying  and rifles held proudly.
Revised: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadet's of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with drums beating, colours flying and rifles held proudly.
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Original: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadet's of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with Drums beating, colours flying  and rifles held proudly.
Revised: The Colour parties of HMCS York and RCSCC 18 Vanguard on parade Today Sailors of HMCS York, Cadet's of RCSCC 18 Vanguard, Navy League Cadets of NLCC Ark Royal and Air Cadets of 618 Queen City Squadron marched though Downtown Toronto with Drums beating, colours flying , and rifles held proudly.
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Original:  All this  to mark the Battle of the Atlantic, which was a series of naval battles fought from 1939 to the end of the second world war.
Revised:  All this was to mark the Battle of the Atlantic, which was a series of naval battles fought from 1939 to the end of the second world war.
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Original: UN Secretary General Kofi Annan has been cleared of wrongdoing in an investigation of charges that he influenced the UN to award aid-screening contracts in Iraq to Swiss company Cotecna Inspection Services, which employed his son , Kojo Annan.
Revised: UN Secretary General Kofi Annan has been cleared of wrongdoing in an investigation of charges that he influenced the UN to award aid-screening contracts in Iraq to Swiss company Cotecna Inspection Services, which employed his son Kojo Annan.
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Original:  the report issued was called by Annan a "second interim report" in his statement reported in the New Zealand Herald.
Revised:  the report issued was called by the secretary general a "second interim report" in his statement reported in the New Zealand Herald.
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Original:  Riza allegedly shredded documents related to the contracts under investigation after Annan ordered that they be retained.
Revised:  Riza allegedly shredded documents related to the contracts under investigation after the secretary general ordered that they be retained.
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Original:  The New York Times said that Nair was "faulted for appointing a person to a high-level post with oil-for-food responsibilities who did almost no work on the program . "  According to the New York Times,
Revised:  The New York Times said that Nair was "faulted for appointing a person to a high-level post with oil-for-food responsibilities who did almost no work on the program " According to the New York Times,
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Original:  The New York Times said that Nair was "faulted for appointing a person to a high-level post with oil-for-food responsibilities who did almost no work on the program . "  According to the New York Times,
Revised:  The New York Times said that Nair was "faulted for appointing a person to a high-level post with oil-for-food responsibilities who did almost no work on the program . " . According to the New York Times,
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Original:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . "  The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
Revised:  the secretary general said "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . " The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
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Original:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . "  The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
Revised:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry " The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
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Original:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . "  The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
Revised:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . " . The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
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Original:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . "  The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998.
Revised:  Annan said that, "I am deeply saddened by the evidence to the contrary that has emerged, and particularly by the fact that my son had failed to cooperate fully with the inquiry . " The Guardian reports that Annan's son concealed from his father the fact that Cotecna continued to pay him for 6 years after "he left Cotecna in 1998
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Original:  "  It was not clear from the Guardian report why Cotecna was paying Kojo Annan if he had indeed left the company.
Revised:  " . It was not clear from the Guardian report why Cotecna was paying Kojo Annan if he had indeed left the company.
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Original:  Asked whether he planned to step down as Secretary General, as called for by US Republican Senator Norm Coleman, among others,  Annan responded, "Hell, no , " according to Ewen MacAskill of the Guardian, as well as an unattributed Sydney Morning Herald article
Revised:  Asked whether he planned to step down as Secretary General, as called for by US Republican Senator Norm Coleman, among others, Kofi Annan responded, "Hell, no , " according to Ewen MacAskill of the Guardian, as well as an unattributed Sydney Morning Herald article
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Original:  Asked whether he planned to step down as Secretary General, as called for by US Republican Senator Norm Coleman, among others,  Annan responded, "Hell, no , " according to Ewen MacAskill of the Guardian, as well as an unattributed Sydney Morning Herald article
Revised:  Asked whether he planned to step down as Secretary General, as called for by US Republican Senator Norm Coleman, among others, Annan responded, "Hell, no " according to Ewen MacAskill of the Guardian, as well as an unattributed Sydney Morning Herald article
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Original:  The finish was the best by a South Korean skier following three full days of competition    
Revised:  The finish was the best by a South Korean skier following three full days of competition . 
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