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Original: At 1:00 p.m. (eastern time) astronauts began their third spacewalk to repair the tear by using medical staples to seal the torn area.
Revised: At 1:00 p.m. ET astronauts began their third spacewalk to repair the tear by using medical staples to seal the torn area.
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Original:  Astronauts on  Space Shuttle Atlantis have repaired a 4 inch tear in the shuttle's Thermal Protection System (TPS).
Revised:  Astronauts on NASA's Space Shuttle Atlantis have repaired a 4 inch tear in the shuttle's Thermal Protection System (TPS).
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Original:  Atlantis received the 4 inch tear on its TPS on one of the Orbital Maneuvering System (OMS) pods near the thrusters during take-off on June 8.
Revised:  Atlantis received the 4 inch tear on its TPS on one of the Orbital Maneuvering System pods near the thrusters during take-off on June 8.
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Original: Image:Atlantis Blanket fix1.jpg|An astronaut repairing the tear in the TPS on Atlantis.
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Original: He said he would return to Thailand "to protect my reputation," though he did not specify exactly when he would return.
Revised: He in struggle for power boasted he would return to Thailand "to protect my reputation," though he did not specify exactly when he would return.
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Original:  He     asked that all Thais unite to mark the 80th birthday of King Bhumibol Adulyadej, Thailand's monarch who has reigned for 60 years.
Revised:  He However he still asked that all Thais unite to mark the 80th birthday of King Bhumibol Adulyadej, Thailand's monarch who has reigned for 60 years.
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Original:  He also blamed the escalation of the south Thailand insurgency on the coup, saying troubles in Thailand's Muslim-majority southern provinces had gotten worse.
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Original:  Thaksin said the coup and the military government have hurt Thailand's economy.
Revised:  Thaksin claimed that the coup and the military government have hurt Thailand's economy.
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Original:  The Royal Australian Air Force lost Squadron Leader Paul McCarthy from Western Australia, Flight Lieutenant Lyn Rowbottom and Sergeant Wendy Jones from Queensland.
Revised:  The lost Squadron Leader Paul McCarthy from Western Australia, Flight Lieutenant Lyn Rowbottom and Sergeant Wendy Jones from Queensland.
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Original:  People from the local village tried to help pull the two survivors free, but said the aircraft exploded into a fireball within five or ten minutes of impact, hindering the rescue   
Revised:  People from the local village tried to help pull the two survivors free, but said the aircraft exploded into a fireball within five or ten minutes of impact, hindering the rescue . 
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Original:  NASA has said that at least four out of the six main computers on the International Space Station (ISS) are now operational, after all six computer failed earlier in the week.
Revised:  NASA has said that at least four out of the six main computers on the International Space Station (ISS) are now operational, after all six computers failed earlier in the week.
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Original:  "We have plenty of resources, so we have plenty of time to sort this out," said Suffredini on Thursday . Related New
Revised:  "We have plenty of resources, so we have plenty of time to sort this out," said Suffredini on Thursday Related New
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Original:  "We have plenty of resources, so we have plenty of time to sort this out," said Suffredini on Thursday . Related New
Revised:  "We have plenty of resources, so we have plenty of time to sort this out," said Suffredini on Thursday . 
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Original: A power switch was bypassed by Russian astronauts Oleg Kotov and Fyodor Yurchikhin using a cable, which allowed at least four of the computers to re-boot.
Revised: A power switch was bypassed by Russian cosmonauts Oleg Kotov and Fyodor Yurchikhin using a cable, which allowed at least four of the computers to re-boot.
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Original: United States astronaut Sunita Williams , currently on board the International Space Station, has today broken the record for the longest unbroken space flight by a woman.
Revised: United States astronaut , currently on board the International Space Station, has today broken the record for the longest unbroken space flight by a woman.
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Original:  UTC Williams passed the previous record of 188 days and four hours set by Shannon Lucid in 1996.
Revised:  UTC Williams passed the previous record of 188 days and four hours set by in 1996.
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Original: In the morning of June 13   a business-class jet Challenger-60 flying from Moscow to Zurich violated the controllers ` instructions and nearly collided with a Boeing-757 approaching Vnukovo Airport.
Revised: On June 13 a business-class jet Challenger-60 flying from Moscow to Zurich violated the controllers ` instructions and nearly collided with a Boeing-757 approaching Vnukovo Airport.
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Original:  The State Corporation marks that cases of unapproved height violation have become a serious problem of the year on  the background of intensively growing air traffic in the Moscow sky.
Revised:  The State Corporation marks that cases of unapproved height violation have become a serious problem of the year on the 
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Original:  Source: UR
Revised:  Traffic Collision Avoidance System on board the Boeing was activated and provided an audible alert to the crew. Meanwhile, air traffic control noticed the emergency and guided the two planes away from each other
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Original:  However, the light jet proceeded to a height of 2,070 metres without authorisation , taking it into the path of a 757 which was approaching nearby Vnukovo International Airport.
Revised:  However, the light jet proceeded to a height of 2,070 metres without authorization , taking it into the path of a 757 which was approaching nearby Vnukovo International Airport.
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Original: On June 13 air traffic controlers in Moscow prevented what ultimately became a near-miss from becoming a serious midair collision.
Revised: On June 13 in Moscow prevented what ultimately became a near-miss from becoming a serious midair collision.
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Original:  The incident occurred when a Bombardier Challenger 60 business jet violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a Boeing 757.
Revised:  The incident occurred when a Challenger 60 business jet violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a Boeing 757.
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Original:  The incident occurred when a Bombardier Challenger 60 business jet violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a Boeing 757.
Revised:  The incident occurred when a Bombardier Challenger 60 violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a Boeing 757.
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Original:  The incident occurred when a Bombardier Challenger 60 business jet violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a Boeing 757.
Revised:  The incident occurred when a Bombardier Challenger 60 business jet violated controllers' instructions and flew into the path of a .
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Original:  The two aircraft came close enough that the Traffic Collision Avoidance System on board the Boeing was activated and provided an audible alert to the crew.
Revised:  The two aircraft came close enough that the on board the Boeing was activated and provided an audible alert to the crew.
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Original:  But in Malaysia, not enough prints of the film were available, so cinemas  had to resort to trying to screen digital versions of the movie on equipment they were unfamiliar with, which led to the delays and glitches.
Revised:  But not enough prints of the film were available, so cinemas had to resort to trying to screen digital versions of the movie on equipment they were unfamiliar with, which led to the delays and glitches.
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Original:  But in Malaysia, not enough prints of the film were available, so cinemas  had to resort to trying to screen digital versions of the movie on equipment they were unfamiliar with, which led to the delays and glitches.
Revised:  But in Malaysia, not enough prints of the film were available, so cinemas in Malaysia had to resort to trying to screen digital versions of the movie on equipment they were unfamiliar with, which led to the delays and glitches.
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Original:  The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB), the agency responsible for investigating transportation accidents in the United States, including aviation incidents, which are generally considered to be separate from aviation accidents, released updates on three major investigations on June 14.
Revised: __NOTOC__ The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB), the agency responsible for investigating transportation accidents in the United States, including aviation incidents, which are generally considered to be separate from aviation accidents, released updates on three major investigations on June 14.
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Original:  The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB), the agency responsible for investigating transportation accidents in the United States, including aviation incidents, which are generally considered to be separate from aviation accidents, released updates on three major investigations on June 14.
Revised:  The National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB), the agency responsible for investigating transportation accidents in the United States, released updates on three major investigations on June 14.
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Original:  The NTSB   has determined the cause of a natural gas explosion caused by equipment accidentally deploying from a barge and striking an underwater high pressure natural gas pipeline, killing six, determined the cause of an accidental release of 204,000 gallons of anhydrous ammonia from a pipeline in an environmentally sensitive area and released preliminary information on a runway incursion involving two commercial aircraft coming within 30-50 feet of each other.
Revised:  The NTSB The agency has determined the cause of a natural gas explosion caused by equipment accidentally deploying from a barge and striking an underwater high pressure natural gas pipeline, killing six, determined the cause of an accidental release of 204,000 gallons of anhydrous ammonia from a pipeline in an environmentally sensitive area and released preliminary information on a runway incursion involving two commercial aircraft coming within 30-50 feet of each other.
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Original: Anhydrous ammonia spill The NTSB also released the result of it's investigation into an environmental disaster in Kansas on October 27, 2004 in which 204,000 gallons (4,858 barrels) of anhydrous ammonia was spilled from a ruptured pipeline in Kingman into an environmentally sensitive area.
Revised: Anhydrous ammonia spill The NTSB also released the result of its investigation into an environmental disaster in Kansas on October 27, 2004 in which 204,000 gallons (4,858 barrels) of anhydrous ammonia was spilled from a ruptured pipeline in Kingman into an environmentally sensitive area.
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Original: Reports say that at leas two Katyusha Rockets have landed inside northern Israel in the town of Kiryat Shmona.
Revised: Reports say that at least two Katyusha Rockets have landed inside northern Israel in the town of Kiryat Shmona.
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Original:    Reports say that at least two Katyusha Rockets fired from Taibeh Lebanon, have landed inside northern Israel in the town of Kiryat Shmona.
Revised:  image Reports say that at least two Katyusha Rockets fired from Taibeh Lebanon, have landed inside northern Israel in the town of Kiryat Shmona.
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Original:  the first section was completed in 2003 and the second section was opened today.
Revised:  the first section was completed in 2003 and the second section was brought into use today.
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Original:   Waterloo railway station  will be returned to domestic use following the move to St Pancras
Revised:  Eurostar chief executive Richard Brown said: "Today marks a new dawn for short-haul travel in Europe. Our move to St Pancras makes Eurostar even more accessible to travellers across Britain. We will carry passengers with greater speed, ease and reliability than ever before, and our travellers will have the extra reassurance of knowing that they are making far less environmental impact compared with flying." Waterloo railway station will be returned to domestic use following the move to St Pancras
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Original:  Eurostar train services which link the United Kingdom with Europe via the w: Channel Tunell have moved to a new London terminal.
Revised:  Eurostar train services which link the United Kingdom with Europe via the Channel Tunell have moved to a new London terminal.
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Original: Interior of the newly refurbished station Eurostar train services which link the United Kingdom with Europe via the Channel Tunell have moved to a new London terminal.
Revised: Interior of the newly refurbished station Eurostar train services which link the United Kingdom with Europe via the Channel Tunnel have moved to a new London terminal.
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Original:  Both Ferrari drivers, Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen, showed third and fourth results in qualification and were able to maintain them to from the starting grid to the end of the race    .
Revised:  Both Ferrari drivers, Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen, showed third and fourth results in qualification and were able to maintain them to from the starting grid to the end of the race . .
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Original: The Army of Islam  , a militant group which claims responsibility for kidnapping BBC News reporter Alan Johnston, has denied that a deal has been reached with Hamas that would secure his release and threaten to kill Johnston if Hamas fails to honor the group's demands, in a video broadcast on Al-Jazeera .
Revised: The Army of Islam , a militant group which claims responsibility for kidnapping BBC News reporter Alan Johnston, has denied that a deal has been reached with Hamas that would secure his release and threaten to kill Johnston if Hamas fails to honor the group's demands, in a video broadcast on Al Jazeera .
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Original:  Police in Melbourne today are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man , and injured two others in Melbourne 's CBD this morning.
Revised:  Police in Melbourne , Australia are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man , and injured two others in Melbourne 's CBD this morning.
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Original:  Police in Melbourne today are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man , and injured two others in Melbourne 's CBD this morning.
Revised:  Police in Melbourne today are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man and injured two others in Melbourne 's CBD this morning.
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Original:  Police in Melbourne today are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man , and injured two others in Melbourne 's CBD this morning.
Revised:  Police in Melbourne today are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man , and injured two others in the city 's CBD this morning.
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Original:  Officials have warned all office workers to remain indoors, and train services to Flinders Street Station are temporarily on hold, as investigations are carried out on the intersection of Flinders Lane and William Street  Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour defore declaring him dead at the scene  The two injured people have been taken to the Royal Melbourne Hospital in a critical condition.
Revised:  Officials have warned all office workers to remain indoors, and train services to Flinders Street Station are temporarily on hold, as investigations are carried out on the intersection of Flinders Lane and William Street . Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour defore declaring him dead at the scene The two injured people have been taken to the Royal Melbourne Hospital in a critical condition.
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Original:  Officials have warned all office workers to remain indoors, and train services to Flinders Street Station are temporarily on hold, as investigations are carried out on the intersection of Flinders Lane and William Street  Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour defore declaring him dead at the scene  The two injured people have been taken to the Royal Melbourne Hospital in a critical condition.
Revised:  Officials have warned all office workers to remain indoors, and train services to Flinders Street Station are temporarily on hold, as investigations are carried out on the intersection of Flinders Lane and William Street Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour defore declaring him dead at the scene . The two injured people have been taken to the Royal Melbourne Hospital in a critical condition.
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Original:  Police believe the incident began at the Bar Code 24-hour bar in King St , when a woman attempted to get into a taxi.
Revised:  Police believe the incident began at the Bar Code 24-hour bar in King Street , when a woman attempted to get into a taxi.
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Original:  Police describe the gunman as about 180cms , aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark Adidas tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
Revised:  Police describe the gunman as about 180cm tall , aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark Adidas tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
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Original:  Police describe the gunman as about 180cms , aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark Adidas tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
Revised:  Police describe the gunman as about 180cms , aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
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Original:  A building worker on a construction site on the corner of Queen and Flinders Sts has reportedly discovered a handgun.
Revised:  A building worker on a construction site on the corner of Queen and Flinders Streets has reportedly discovered a handgun.
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Original:  Police describe the gunman as about 180cm tall, aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
Revised:  Police describe the gunman as about 180 cm tall, aged late 20s to early 30s, with short brown hair and wearing a dark tracksuit top and dark denim jeans.
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Original: 300px|Police personnel investigate the scene of the crime early Monday moring . Police in Melbourne, Australia are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man and injured two others in the city's CBD this morning.
Revised: 300px|Police personnel investigate the scene of the crime early Monday morning . Police in Melbourne, Australia are on the hunt for a gunman who killed a man and injured two others in the city's CBD this morning.
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Original:  Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour defore declaring him dead at the scene.
Revised:  Paramedics struggled to revive the one victim for almost an hour before declaring him dead at the scene.
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Original: <noinclude> 300px|Police personnel investigate the scene of the crime early Monday morning.
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Original:  They believe him to be a member of the Hell's Angels bikie gang.
Revised:  They believe him to be a member of the Hells Angels bikie gang.
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Original:  An Air New Zealand Beech aircraft performed an emergency landing at Blenheim after being diverted from its destination following a landing gear problem.
Revised:  An Air New Zealand Beechcraft performed an emergency landing at Blenheim after being diverted from its destination following a landing gear problem.
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Original:  Marty Solmon says that all passengers were informed throughout the journey of what was happening, and were well prepared for the crash landing.
Revised:  Marty Solomon says that all passengers were informed throughout the journey of what was happening, and were well prepared for the crash landing.
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Original:  Eagle Air and the Transport Accident Investigation Commission investigation will now investigate the incident.
Revised:  Eagle Air and the Transport Accident Investigation Commission will now investigate the incident.
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Original:  17 other Beech aircraft are flown by Eagle Air and are continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
Revised:  17 other Beechcraft are flown by Eagle Air and are continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
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Original: Location of Blenheim, location of emergency landing .
Revised: Blenheim, where the emergency landing occurred .
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Original: The Beech 1900D was being flown by Eagle Air, a subsidiary of Air New Zealand, flying from Timaru to Wellington with 15 passengers and two air crew on board.
Revised: The Beechcraft 1900D was being flown by Eagle Air, a subsidiary of Air New Zealand, flying from Timaru to Wellington with 15 passengers and two air crew on board.
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Original:   17 other Beechcraft are flown by Eagle Air and are continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
Revised:  Eagle flies 17 other Beechcraft are flown by Eagle Air and are continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
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Original:   17 other Beechcraft are flown by Eagle Air and are continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
Revised:  17 other Beechcraft , and service by those planes is continuing as normal today, as they are considered to be extremely reliable
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Original: A special support crew is now being flown to Blenheim by Air New Zealand to help those affected by todays emergency landing.
Revised: A special support crew is now being flown to Blenheim by Air New Zealand to help those affected by today's emergency landing.
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Original: The text written by the Committee on Culture, Science and Education of the Council, firmly challenges the fundamentalists' belief in a creator and a world which was created, to the exclusion of accepted theories of evolution.
Revised: The text written by the Committee on Culture, Science and Education of the Council, firmly challenges the belief in a creator and a world which was created, to the exclusion of accepted theories of evolution.
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Original:  According to the document, Creationism - fundamentalist doctrines of the origin of the world based on the Bible - is not based on facts and does not rely on any scientific grounds.
Revised:  According to the document, Creationism - which defends a theory of the origin of the world based on the Bible - is not based on facts and does not rely on any scientific grounds.
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Original: The spread of Creationist theories within the education systems of Council of Europe member states "could become a threat to human rights", according to a report which will be discussed and voted on by the Council of Europe on 26th June.
Revised: The spread of Creationist doctrines within the education systems of Council of Europe member states "could become a threat to human rights", according to a report which will be discussed and voted on by the Council of Europe on 26th June.
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