wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The detainees were transferred from a police command in Limón in handcuffs to the Siquirres area on the banks of the Reventazón River  known as “Codo del Diablo”  where, aboard the train to the Atlantic of the Costa Rica Northern Railway Company, they were killed with a fire gun and their bodies  thrown into the river where it was thought that they would not be found , however one of the bodies broke away from the handcuffs and separated from the rest  being found shortly after.
Revised:  The detainees were transferred from a police command in Limón in handcuffs to the Siquirres area on the banks of the Reventazón River known as “Codo del Diablo” where, aboard the train to the Atlantic of the Costa Rica Northern Railway Company, they were killed with a fire gun and their bodies thrown into the river where it was thought that they would not be found , however one of the bodies broke away from the handcuffs and separated from the rest , being found shortly after.
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Original:  An arrest warrant, imprisonment  and trial against the culprits were issued , however they escaped from justice abroad, as reported, with the help of contacts they had in the government.
Revised:  An arrest warrant, imprisonment , and trial against the culprits were issued , however they escaped from justice abroad, as reported, with the help of contacts they had in the government.
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Original:  An arrest warrant, imprisonment  and trial against the culprits were issued , however they escaped from justice abroad, as reported, with the help of contacts they had in the government.
Revised:  An arrest warrant, imprisonment and trial against the culprits were issued . However, they escaped from justice abroad, as reported, with the help of contacts they had in the government.
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Original:  On the anniversary of the event in 2012, José María Villalta, then deputy of the left-wing Broad Front Party (which proclaimed itself to be the historic successor of the Communist Party)  recalled the fact in the plenary and accused the government of the one then chaired by José Figueres Ferrer  of having issued the order of the crime.
Revised:  On the anniversary of the event in 2012, José María Villalta, then deputy of the left-wing Broad Front Party (which proclaimed itself to be the historic successor of the Communist Party) , recalled the fact in the plenary and accused the government of the one then chaired by José Figueres Ferrer of having issued the order of the crime.
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Original:  On the anniversary of the event in 2012, José María Villalta, then deputy of the left-wing Broad Front Party (which proclaimed itself to be the historic successor of the Communist Party)  recalled the fact in the plenary and accused the government of the one then chaired by José Figueres Ferrer  of having issued the order of the crime.
Revised:  On the anniversary of the event in 2012, José María Villalta, then deputy of the left-wing Broad Front Party (which proclaimed itself to be the historic successor of the Communist Party) recalled the fact in the plenary and accused the government of the one then chaired by José Figueres Ferrer , of having issued the order of the crime.
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Original:  Gokuldas, who hailed from Gujarati Bhatia community, is well known for building charity institutions, hospitals, schools, hostels including famous Gokuldas Tejpal Hospital, Gokuldas Tejpal Sanskrit College, where the first session of Indian National Congress was held, Gokuldas Tejpal Anglo-vernacular high school and Gokuldas Tejpal Boarding House  
Revised:  Gokuldas, who hailed from Gujarati Bhatia community, is well known for building charity institutions, hospitals, schools, hostels including famous Gokuldas Tejpal Hospital, Gokuldas Tejpal Sanskrit College, where the first session of Indian National Congress was held, Gokuldas Tejpal Anglo-vernacular high school and Gokuldas Tejpal Boarding House . 
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Original: Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal or Sheth Goculdas Tejpal () ( 1822-1867 ) was a merchant, businessman, social reformer and philanthropist from Mumbai, India.
Revised: Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal or Sheth Goculdas Tejpal () ( 1822–1867 ) was a merchant, businessman, social reformer and philanthropist from Mumbai, India.
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Original: Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal or Sheth Goculdas Tejpal ( ) ( 1822–1867) was a merchant, businessman, social reformer and philanthropist from Mumbai, India.
Revised: Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal or Sheth Goculdas Tejpal ( 1822–1867) was a merchant, businessman, social reformer and philanthropist from Mumbai, India.
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Original:  His father, Tejpal, passed his fortune to Gokuldas in 1833 when he passed away .
Revised:  His father, Tejpal, passed his fortune to Gokuldas in 1833 when he died .
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Original:  His uncle too left his own fortune to Gokuldas when he passed away .
Revised:  His uncle too left his own fortune to Gokuldas when he died .
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Original:   In mid 19th century, Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal Bhatia of Kothara Kutch settled in Mumbai was one of richest persons of India.
Revised:  < In mid 19th century, Sheth Gokuldas Tejpal Bhatia of Kothara Kutch settled in Mumbai was one of richest persons of India.
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Original: When slavery abolished he freed stock of 10000 slaves 
Revised: When slavery abolished he freed stock of 10000 slaves .
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Original:  A largely self-taught ethnologist, Cory collected extensive ethnographic field data, traditional paintings or sculptures.
Revised:  A self-taught ethnologist, Cory collected extensive ethnographic field data, traditional paintings or sculptures.
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Original:  Speaking Swahili and several local dialects, he had a special interest in the cultural traditions of different ethnic groups, at the time called " tribes ".
Revised:  Speaking Swahili and several local dialects, he had a special interest in the cultural traditions of different ethnic groups, at the time called " Tribes ".
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Original:  Tanganyika Notes and Records 4: 51-64 , 1937 Hans Cory.
Revised:  Tanganyika Notes and Records 4: 51–64 , 1937 Hans Cory.
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Original: Example Through experimentation, the athlete should learn what is the maximum number of repetitions him or her can perform, while maintaining good posture, at a specific weight.
Revised: Example Through experimentation, the athlete should learn what is the maximum number of repetitions he or she can perform, while maintaining good posture, at a specific weight.
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Original:  For example, of they can do 8 repetitions of the bench press exercise with 50 kg, that will be the baseline.
Revised:  For example, if they can do 8 repetitions of the bench press exercise with 50 kg, that will be the baseline.
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Original:  From that point on, the athlete should focus on improving one of the categories mentioned in the methodology section , volume, intensity , frequency  or interval duration.
Revised:  From that point on, the athlete should focus on improving one of the categories mentioned in the methodology section : volume, intensity , frequency or interval duration.
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Original:  From that point on, the athlete should focus on improving one of the categories mentioned in the methodology section , volume, intensity , frequency  or interval duration.
Revised:  From that point on, the athlete should focus on improving one of the categories mentioned in the methodology section , volume, intensity , frequency , or interval duration.
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Original:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation process, a increase in strength and muscle mass , will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
Revised:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation process, an increase in strength and muscle mass , will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
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Original:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation process, a increase in strength and muscle mass , will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
Revised:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation process, a increase in strength and muscle mass will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
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Original:  However, Dr. Thomas Delorme was had been active in weight lifting for years and believed that it could have beneficial effects to rehabilitation.
Revised:  However, Dr. Thomas Delorme had been active in weight lifting for years and believed that it could have beneficial effects to rehabilitation.
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Original:  Coincidently, Kawalek as also a weightlifter and he believed in Delorme theory about the benefits of the sport.
Revised:  Coincidently, Kawalek was also a weightlifter and he believed in Delorme theory about the benefits of the sport.
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Original:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation  process, an increase in strength and muscle mass will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
Revised:  Eventually, through the body's natural adaptation hello process, an increase in strength and muscle mass will allow the subject to continue increasing the weight.
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Original: Scientific principles The goal of strength-training programs is to increase one’s physical strength and performance.
Revised: Scientific principles The boner of strength-training programs is to increase one’s physical strength and performance.
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Original:  This improvement in overall performance will, in turn, allow the athlete to keep increasing the intensity of his/ hers training sessions.
Revised:  This improvement in overall performance will, in turn, allow the athlete to keep increasing the intensity of his/ her training sessions.
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Original:  This improvement in overall performance will, in turn, allow the athlete to keep increasing the intensity of his/her training sessions.
Revised:  This improvement in overall performance will, in turn, allow the athlete to keep increasing the intensity of their training sessions.
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Original:  A group of soldiers led by the Guardia clandestinely entered the Bellavista Headquarters, then see of the army and took control of it.
Revised:  A group of soldiers led by the Guardia clandestinely entered the Army Headquarters, then see of the army and took control of it.
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Original: Kerlungner (born about 1877), also written as Ker-Lung-Ner, was an Alaska Native woman who toured the United States as part of Miner  Bruce's "Eskimo Troupe" in the 1890s.
Revised: Kerlungner (born about 1877), also written as Ker-Lung-Ner, was an Alaska Native woman who toured the United States as part of Miner W. Bruce's "Eskimo Troupe" in the 1890s.
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Original:  She was among the Alaska Native people who toured American cities with entrepreneur Miner Wait Bruce's " Esquimaux Troupe" from 1893 to 1896.
Revised:  She was among the Alaska Native people who toured American cities with entrepreneur Miner Wait Bruce's " Eskimo Troupe" from 1893 to 1896.
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Original: Early life, World War I and the Interwar Years Georges Blun was born to a French family on 1 June 1893 in the then German-held region of Alsace-Lorraine.
Revised: Early life, World War I and the interwar years Georges Blun was born to a French family on 1 June 1893 in the then German-held region of Alsace-Lorraine.
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Original:  Post-War Life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, reportedely became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
Revised:  Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, reportedely became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
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Original: During the war, he spied primarily and most notably in service of the Soviet Union, but also worked for American, British, French, Swiss and Polish intelligence agencies as well - a fact described by at least one source covering the events as "common" among Switzerland-based spies at the time.
Revised: During the war, he spied primarily and most notably in service of the Soviet Union, but also worked for American, British, French, Swiss and Polish intelligence agencies as well – a fact described by at least one source covering the events as "common" among Switzerland-based spies at the time.
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Original:  He was still working as a journalist by May 11 , 1950, when he penned an article in the French Le Monde newspaper regarding the division of Berlin and was cited for his work covering the division of the country.
Revised:  He was still working as a journalist by 11 , 1950, when he penned an article in the French Le Monde newspaper regarding the division of Berlin and was cited for his work covering the division of the country.
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Original: "Langer, William L. “ Some Recent Books on International Relations.
Revised: "Langer, William L. " Some Recent Books on International Relations.
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Original:  ” Foreign Affairs, vol. 7, no. 1, 1928, pp. 156–167.
Revised:  " Foreign Affairs, vol. 7, no. 1, 1928, pp. 156–167.
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Original:  Accessed 10 Feb. 2020.
Revised:  Accessed 10 February 2020.
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Original: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius,  20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany  . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others,  reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
Revised: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius, 20 July plot , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
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Original: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius,  20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany  . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others,  reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
Revised: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius, 20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth (who had served as Chancellor of Germany . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
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Original: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius,  20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany  . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others,  reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
Revised: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius, 20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany ) . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
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Original: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius,  20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany  . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others,  reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
Revised: During his clandestine activities, he worked with figures such as Hans Bernd Gisevius, 20 July plot members , as well as Joseph Wirth , the latter of which had served as Chancellor of Germany . Post-War life Blun survived the war, following which, along with Otto John and several others, he reportedly became a member of a political group led by Josef Müller.
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Original:  He was still working as a journalist by 11 May 1950, when he penned an article in the French Le Monde newspaper regarding the division of Berlin and was cited for his work covering the division of the country.
Revised:  He was still working as a journalist on 11 May 1950, when he penned an article in the French Le Monde newspaper regarding the division of Berlin and was cited for his work covering the division of the country.
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Original: GMP guidelines are not prescriptive instructions on how to manufacture products.
Revised: GMP standards are not prescriptive instructions on how to manufacture products.
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Original:  They are a series of general principles that must be observed during manufacturing.
Revised:  They are a series of general principles that must be met during manufacturing.
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Original:  Drawing on classical tradition of the theater as a space for vision, and audience as spectator, Autant and Lara reconceptualized the roles of theater director and architect.
Revised:  Drawing on classical tradition of the theater as a space for vision, and audience as spectator, Autant and Lara re-conceptualized the roles of theater director and architect.
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Original:  the juxtaposition of simultaneous elements presents multiple possible meanings resolved by the particpation of performers and spectators.
Revised:  the juxtaposition of simultaneous elements presents multiple possible meanings resolved by the participation of performers and spectators.
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Original:  Timbre and other techniques are used to evoke a sense of disconnection, allowing environmental music (outside the game world) to exist alongside music being created within the game itself.
Revised:  Technological advances have allowed for the environmental score to exist alongside music being created within the game itself.
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Original:  This combination can impact gameplay  .
Revised:  This combination can impact gameplay by providing audio cues that are related to in game actions. When the game's audio elements are modular, each playthrough can produce a unique score. The modules can be combined smoothly, or timbre and other techniques can be used to induce a jarring sense of disconnection or dissonance .
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Original:  Apollinaire influenced the work of architect Eduard Autant and his wife Louise Lara, who helped spread the ideas to architects Auguste Perret and Robert Mallet-Stevens.
Revised: Theater Apollinaire influenced the work of architect Eduard Autant and his wife Louise Lara, who helped spread the ideas to architects Auguste Perret and Robert Mallet-Stevens.
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Original:    The video games Wind Waker (2003) and Skyward Sword (2011) have borrowed from film studies and applied simultaneous art techniques to their soundtracks.
Revised:  Video games The video games Wind Waker (2003) and Skyward Sword (2011) have borrowed from film studies and applied simultaneous art techniques to their soundtracks.
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Original:  Griffith had tried something similar in in The Lonely Villa (1909), but with less success.
Revised:  Griffith had tried something similar in The Lonely Villa (1909), but with less success.
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Original:  He established the chronicle named the Desciption of World Map, in which the most important cities and settlements were shown.
Revised:  He established the chronicle named the Description of World Map, in which the most important cities and settlements were shown.
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Original:  She was also nominated as best actress of the by City People Entertainment Awards in 2018 adriss
Revised:  She was also nominated as best actress of the by City People Entertainment Awards in 2018 
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Original: Maryam Yahaya is a Nigerian film actor in the Kannywood industry.
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Original: Maryam Yahaya is a Nigerian film actress in the Kannywood industry.
Revised: Maryam Yahaya is a Nigerian film actor in the Kannywood industry.
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Original:  She gained recognition for starring in Mansoor , a movie directed by Ali Nuhu .
Revised:  He gained recognition for starring in Mansoor , a movie directed by Ali Nuhu .
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Original:  He gained recognition for starring in Taraddadi, a movie directed by elnass ajenda.
Revised:  She gained recognition for starring in Taraddadi, a movie directed by elnass ajenda.
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Original: Career Maryam Yahaya has ambition of acting right from her childhood, she was inspired by most of the Hausa movies she watched. she made her debut in a film titled Gidan Abinci, followed by Barauniya and Tabo where she played minor role.
Revised: Career Yahaya has ambition of acting right from her childhood, she was inspired by most of the Hausa movies she watched. she made her debut in a film titled Gidan Abinci, followed by Barauniya and Tabo where she played minor role.
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Original: The Republic of Benin was a short-lived unrecognized secessionist state in West Africa which existed for one day in 1967.
Revised: The Republic of Benin was an ephemeral unrecognized secessionist state in West Africa which existed for one day in 1967.
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Original: The Republic of Benin was an ephemeral unrecognized secessionist state in West Africa which existed for one day in 1967.
Revised: The Republic of Benin was an ephemeral unrecognized secessionist state in West Africa that existed for one day in 1967.
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Original: In 1979, the Southern Plains Indian Museum hosted a month-long exhibit of the Fife Collection′s works, which also included pieces from their mother, oldest sister Jimmie Carol , and youngest sister Robin.
Revised: In 1979, the Southern Plains Indian Museum hosted a month-long exhibit of the Fife Collection′s works, which also included pieces from their mother, oldest sister Jimmie Carole , and youngest sister Robin.
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Original: People from Okfuskee County, Oklahoma Category:Institute of American Indian Arts alumni Category:Santa Fe University of Art and Design alumni Category:Northeastern State University alumni Category:Institute of American Indian Arts faculty Category:Muscogee people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women  artists Category:Indigenous fashion designers of the Americas Category:20th-century American women artists Category:21st-century American women artis
Revised: People from Okfuskee County, Oklahoma Category:Institute of American Indian Arts alumni Category:Santa Fe University of Art and Design alumni Category:Northeastern State University alumni Category:Institute of American Indian Arts faculty Category:Muscogee people Category:Native American academics Category:Native American women academics Category:Native American women artists Category:Indigenous fashion designers of the Americas Category:20th-century American women artists Category:21st-century American women artis
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