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Original:  It is performed using an instrument called a flexible fiberoptic nasopharyngoscope, that is inserted through the nose in order to examine both it, and the back of the throat.
Revised:  It is performed using a fiberoptic instrument called a flexible fiberoptic nasopharyngoscope, that is inserted through the nose in order to examine both it, and the back of the throat.
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Original:    References
Revised:  Yusuf's Code, Based on his correspondence with Akhundov Treatise on the necessity of reforming the script of Islam Purple booklet, In order to build a railway in Iran A Word References
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Original: In 1889, Mostashar al-Dowleh, who was an agent in Azerbaijan, wrote a detailed letter to Crown Prince Muzaffar al-Din Mirza through Hassan Ali Khan Grossi, the governor of that state , asking them to pass it on to the Shah.
Revised: In 1889, Mostashar al-Dowleh, who was an agent in Azerbaijan, wrote a detailed letter to Crown Prince Muzaffar al-Din Mirza through Hassan Ali Khan Grossi, the governor of Azerbaijan , asking them to pass it on to the Shah.
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Original:  At the same time, he corresponded with Mirza Fatli Akhundov, and with the help of Akhundov's ideas, Mostashar al-Dowleh wrote the treatise "Yusuf's Code".
Revised:  At the same time, he corresponded with Mirza Fatali Akhundov, and with the help of Akhundov's ideas, Mostashar al-Dowleh wrote the treatise "Yusuf's Code".
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Original: Yousuf Khan Mostashar al-Dowleh ( 1823-1895 ) was an Iranian writer, intellectual and diplomat.
Revised: Yousuf Khan Mostashar al-Dowleh ( 1823–1895 ) was an Iranian writer, intellectual and diplomat.
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Original: Rhiannon Davies is a British activist who has worked with her partner, Richard Stanton, to establish the truth about the death of her child, Kate-Stanton Davies, at Shrewsbury and Telford Hospital NHS Trust in 2009.
Revised: Rhiannon Davies is a British activist who has worked with her partner, Richard Stanton, to establish the truth about the death of their child, Kate-Stanton Davies, at Shrewsbury and Telford Hospital NHS Trust in 2009.
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Original:  So Rhiannon and her partner Richard Stanton were told there were no ashes.
Revised:  So Rhiannon and her husband Richard Stanton were told there were no ashes.
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Original:  The inquest jury unanimously found that Kate's delivery at a midwife-led unit contributed to her  death.
Revised:  The inquest jury unanimously found that Kate's delivery at a midwife-led unit contributed to her avoidable death.
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Original:  Davies criticised the report for ignoring concerns which crematorium staff had raised, and for misrepesenting the problem as a historic problem.
Revised:  Davies criticised the report for ignoring concerns which crematorium staff had raised, and for misrepesenting the problem as an historic problem.
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Original:  The report found a range of "system issues", with changes ven made to Kate's clinical observation notes after her death.
Revised:  The report found a range of "system issues", with changes even made to Kate's clinical observation notes after her death.
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Original:  Davies criticised the report for ignoring concerns which crematorium staff had raised, and for misrepesenting the problem as an historic problem.
Revised:  Davies criticised the report for ignoring concerns which crematorium staff had raised, and for misrepresenting the problem as an historic problem.
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Original: A Tunni Nomad The Tunni Sultanate ( r. 9th century - 13th century ) was a Somali Muslim Sultanate located in southwestern Somalia, south of the Shabelle river.
Revised: A Tunni Nomad The Tunni Sultanate ( ) was a Somali Muslim Sultanate located in southwestern Somalia, south of the Shabelle river.
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Original:  It was ruled by the Tunni people, who spoke the Af-Tunni (a dialect of Somali).
Revised:  It was ruled by the Tunni people, who spoke the Tunni language (a language related to Somali).
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Original:  The historical Tunni area correspondence to modern-day Lower Shabelle region.
Revised:  The historical Tunni area corrisponds to the modern-day Lower Shabelle region.
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Original: A Tunni Nomad The Tunni Sultanate () was a Somali Muslim Sultanate located in southwestern Somalia, south of the Shabelle river.
Revised:  The Tunni Sultanate () was a Somali Muslim Sultanate located in southwestern Somalia, south of the Shabelle river.
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Original: History Origin  The Tunni, composed of five sub-clans (Da'farad, Dakhtira, Goygali, Hajuwa, and Waridi), were the latest to drive the Jiddu into the interior, where they established their own Sultanate in Qoryoley.
Revised: History Origin A Tunni Nomad The Tunni, composed of five sub-clans (Da'farad, Dakhtira, Goygali, Hajuwa, and Waridi), were the latest to drive the Jiddu into the interior, where they established their own Sultanate in Qoryoley.
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Original: History Origin A Tunni Nomad The Tunni, composed of five sub-clans (Da'farad, Dakhtira, Goygali, Hajuwa, and Waridi), were the latest to drive the Jiddu into the interior, where they established their own Sultanate in Qoryoley.
Revised: History Origin The Tunni, composed of five sub-clans (Da'farad, Dakhtira, Goygali, Hajuwa, and Waridi), were the latest to drive the Jiddu into the interior, where they established their own Sultanate in Qoryoley.
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Original: Death and condolences Elias struggled with diabetes and kidney complications and finally, Elias Melka, the renowned lyricist, composer and producer, died on 4 October 2019.
Revised: Death and condolences Elias struggled with diabetes and kidney complications , died on 4 October 2019.
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Original:  Following this many renowned people showed their condolences through different social media;
Revised:  Following this , people showed their condolences through different social media;
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Original:  10 December 1977 – 4 October 2019) was an Ethiopian music composer, songwriter, and producer . Elias became popular after successfully composing Teddy Afro's debut album Abugida, which was released in 2001.
Revised:  10 December 1977 – 4 October 2019) was an Ethiopian record producer and songwriter . Elias became popular after successfully composing Teddy Afro's debut album Abugida, which was released in 2001.
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Original: Several states in the Caspian region have ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill and boost the bargaining power of governments in the region .
Revised: Several states in the Caspian region have ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill as well as to boost the bargaining power of governments in the region .
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Original: Several states in the Caspian region have ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill and boost the bargaining power of governments in the region .
Revised: Several states in the Caspian region have ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill and boost the bargaining power of their governments .
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Original:  Geopolitics underlie this diplomacy and regional issues  .
Revised:  Geopolitics are heavily present, because of the diplomatic and regional issues .
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Original:  Geopolitics underlie this diplomacy and regional issues  .
Revised:  Geopolitics underlie this diplomacy and regional issues involved .
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Original:  In general, the focus is to establish, design, and amend regional and international rules in the structure of the world system and the littoral states.
Revised:  In general, the focus is to establish, design, and amend regional and international rules pertaining to the world system and the littoral states.
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Diplomatic Gatherings The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and areas : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 4/Baku 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
Revised:  Processes The diplomatic processes of the Caspian littoral states include summits in the following years and situations : 1/ Treaty of Turkmenchay 1828 2/Ashgabat 2002%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 3/Tehran 2007 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5/Astrakhan 2014 6/Nur-Sultan 2017%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 7/Aktau 2018Лаумулин, М. (2010) Центральноазиатская Политика США При Президенстве Б. Обаммы , Центральная Азия и Кавказ, Том 13, Выпуск 4. -
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Original:  Мир 24 (2016) “Саммит глав «Прикаспийской Пятерки» Состоится в 2017 году в Астане”, (13/07/2016), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 14/07/2016.
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Original:  The first effort of diplomacy in the Caspian Sea was the Turkmenchay Treaty , which barred Iran from having military ships in the Caspian Sea. 2.
Revised:  The first effort of diplomacy in the Caspian Sea , The Treaty of Turkmenchay, barred Iran from having military ships in the Caspian Sea. 2.
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Original: Российское Информационное Агенство (2009) “Прикаспийские Государства Приближаются к Взаимопониманию по Вопросам Делимитации Акватории Каспийского Моря“, Iran.ru, (14/04/2009), Доступна на: URL utsya_k_vzaimoponimaniyu_po_voprosam_delimitacii_akvatorii_Kaspiyskogo_ morya_Lavrov, Дата Обращения: 24/02/2016. 3. The next summit was held in Tehran, the capital of the Islamic Republic of Iran, and ended with the signing of the Caspian Environment Convention.
Revised: Российское Информационное Агенство (2009) “Прикаспийские Государства Приближаются к Взаимопониманию по Вопросам Делимитации Акватории Каспийского Моря“, Iran.ru, (14/04/2009), Доступна на: URL utsya_k_vzaimoponimaniyu_po_voprosam_delimitacii_akvatorii_Kaspiyskogo_ morya_Lavrov, Дата Обращения: 24/02/2016. Tehran, 2007 - The next summit was held in Tehran, the capital of the Islamic Republic of Iran, and ended with the signing of the Caspian Environment Convention.
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Original:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 6. The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
Revised:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Astrakhan, 2014 - The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 6. The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
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Original:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 6. The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
Revised:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources Weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 6. The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
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Original:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 6. The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
Revised:  Справка”, РИЯ НОВОСТИ, (18/11/2010), Доступна на: URL Дата Обращения: 17/02/2016. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 5. The fourth summit, held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation, resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources weather Prevention and response to emergencies. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nur-Sultan, 2017 - The Astana summit was held at the foreign minister's level in 2017.
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Original:  Some of the issues : division of the Caspian Sea into national sections  construction of pipelines across the seabed navigation situation in the Caspian Sea.
Revised:  Some of the issues that were discussed included the division of the Caspian Sea into national sections construction of pipelines across the seabed navigation situation in the Caspian Sea.
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Original:  Some of the issues : division of the Caspian Sea into national sections  construction of pipelines across the seabed navigation situation in the Caspian Sea.
Revised:  Some of the issues : division of the Caspian Sea into national sections , construction of pipelines across the seabed navigation situation in the Caspian Sea.
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Original:  Some of the issues : division of the Caspian Sea into national sections  construction of pipelines across the seabed navigation situation in the Caspian Sea.
Revised:  Some of the issues : division of the Caspian Sea into national sections construction of pipelines across the seabed , and the navigational situation in the Caspian Sea.
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Original:  The agreement had 24 articles. some provisions included: Article 1: A warship belonging to peacekeeping forces must have the insignia of one of the five littoral states of the Caspian Sea and be under the command of an officer formally appointed by that government.
Revised:  The agreement had 24 articles. Some of the more important articles included: Article 1: A warship belonging to peacekeeping forces must have the insignia of one of the five littoral states of the Caspian Sea and be under the command of an officer formally appointed by that government.
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Original: Several states in the Caspian region, including the five littoral states of the Caspian Sea : the Islamic Republic of Iran, Turkmenistan, Kazakhstan, the Russian Federation, and the Republic of Azerbaijan, use ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill as well as to boost the bargaining power of their governments.
Revised: Several states in the Caspian region, including the five littoral states of the Caspian Sea , namely the Islamic Republic of Iran, Turkmenistan, Kazakhstan, the Russian Federation, and the Republic of Azerbaijan, use ad hoc diplomatic relations to build trust and goodwill as well as to boost the bargaining power of their governments.
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Original:  Geopolitics are heavily present , because of the diplomatic and regional issues involved.
Revised:  During such "ad hoc" diplomatic relations, Geopolitics is heavily present because of the diplomatic and regional issues involved.
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Original: موسوی، سیدرسول(1388)آینده دریای خزر، فصلنامه‌آسیای مرکزی و قفقاز، شماره65 Baku, 2010 - The third meeting , November 18, 2010, in Baku,  achieved the signing of the Security and Military Cooperation Agreement, the second legal document after the Caspian Environment Convention.
Revised: موسوی، سیدرسول(1388)آینده دریای خزر، فصلنامه‌آسیای مرکزی و قفقاز، شماره65 Baku, 2010 - The third meeting was held on November 18, 2010, in Baku, achieved the signing of the Security and Military Cooperation Agreement, the second legal document after the Caspian Environment Convention.
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Original: موسوی، سیدرسول(1388)آینده دریای خزر، فصلنامه‌آسیای مرکزی و قفقاز، شماره65 Baku, 2010 - The third meeting , November 18, 2010, in Baku,  achieved the signing of the Security and Military Cooperation Agreement, the second legal document after the Caspian Environment Convention.
Revised: موسوی، سیدرسول(1388)آینده دریای خزر، فصلنامه‌آسیای مرکزی و قفقاز، شماره65 Baku, 2010 - The third meeting , November 18, 2010, in Baku, Azerbaijan. It achieved the signing of the Security and Military Cooperation Agreement, the second legal document after the Caspian Environment Convention.
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Original:  Astrakhan, 2014 - The fourth summit , held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation , resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources Weather Prevention and response to emergencies.
Revised:  Astrakhan, 2014 - The fourth summit was held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation , resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources Weather Prevention and response to emergencies.
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Original:  Astrakhan, 2014 - The fourth summit , held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation , resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources Weather Prevention and response to emergencies.
Revised:  Astrakhan, 2014 - The fourth summit , held in 2014 in Astrakhan, in the Russian Federation . It resulted in three agreements: Protection and optimal use of water resources Weather Prevention and response to emergencies.
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Original:  Although the foreign ministers had sufficient authority to coordinate some parts of the Caspian Sea Convention, disagreement on some key issues caused confusion, and the summit failed and adjourned until the following year.
Revised:  Although the foreign ministers had sufficient authority to coordinate some parts of the Caspian Sea Convention, disagreement on some key issues caused confusion, and the summit failed . Consequently, it was adjourned to the following year.
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Original:  The Convention set out the rights and obligations of the parties, including the waters,  bed, subsoil, natural resources, and airspace above the sea.
Revised:  The Convention set out the rights and obligations of the parties, including the waters, water bed, subsoil, natural resources, and airspace above the sea.
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