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Original:  Dr. Jauhar mentions how doctors have lower the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital from 30 to 3 percent and that he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
Revised:  He states that doctors have lowered the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital from 30 to 3 percent and that he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
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Original:  Dr. Jauhar mentions how doctors have lower the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital from 30 to 3 percent and that he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
Revised:  Dr. Jauhar mentions how doctors have lower the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital to 3 percent and that he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
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Original:  Dr. Jauhar mentions how doctors have lower the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital from 30 to 3 percent and that he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
Revised:  Dr. Jauhar mentions how doctors have lower the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital from 30 to 3 percent , which he doesn't think that too much improvement could be done related to it.
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Original:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be inculcated more on schools and the medical field in general . Major themes/Examples Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
Revised:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be taught in schools and the medical field in general . Major themes/Examples Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
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Original:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be inculcated more on schools and the medical field in general . Major themes/Examples Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
Revised:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be inculcated more on schools and the medical field . Major themes/Examples Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
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Original:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be inculcated more on schools and the medical field in general . Major themes/Examples Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
Revised:  He also mentions how yoga, meditation, and activities that help emotions should be inculcated more on schools and the medical field in general . Critical reception Love for the heart Through the stories told by Dr. Jauhar, the one about his paternal grandfather stands out.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Emotions Sandeep covers in his book how our emotions and feelings can really affect the functioning of the heart.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sandeep covers in his book how our emotions and feelings can really affect the functioning of the heart.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Author Sandeep Jauhar was conceived in India;
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sandeep Jauhar was conceived in India;
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Original:  —The New York Times Book Review “Both primer and ode, Heart is a fascinating education for those of us who harbor this most hallowed organ but know little about it.” —The Washington Post “Jauhar is thoughtful, self-reflective, and profoundly respectful of doctors and patients alike;
Revised:  —The New York Times Book Review “Both primer and ode, Heart is a fascinating education for those of us who harbor this most hallowed organ but know little about it.” “Jauhar is thoughtful, self-reflective, and profoundly respectful of doctors and patients alike;
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Original: ” —The New York Times “Alternating between key historical episodes and his own work, Jauhar tells the colorful and little-known story of the doctors who risked their careers and the patients who risked their lives to know and heal our most vital organ.” —WNYC%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Sharp, engrossing…
Revised: ” —The New York Times %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Sharp, engrossing…
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Original: ” —Barnes Noble Review%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “A page-turning mixture of personal experience, family lore, health advice, and history with a heavy emphasis on medical dramatics.”
Revised: ” —Barnes %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “A page-turning mixture of personal experience, family lore, health advice, and history with a heavy emphasis on medical dramatics.”
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Original:  —Business Standard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Jauhar joins a distinguished group of Asian-American doctors, such as Atul Gawande, Siddhartha Mukherjee and the late Paul Kalanithi, who are all gifted authors writing for the general public” —The New Statesman “Heart invites us into both his personal and professional connection to cardiac disease, while also helping address mysteries that have long perplexed doctors, as well as the patients they care for.”
Revised:  —Business Standard%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “Heart invites us into both his personal and professional connection to cardiac disease, while also helping address mysteries that have long perplexed doctors, as well as the patients they care for.”
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Original:  —The Globe and Mail%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% “A fascinating, gripping book on the history of the human heart that will bring you closer to your heart than ever before – this is truly a bold and beautiful book on cardiology.” —Financial Express
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Original:  Jauhar mentions research and experiments conducted on animals and humans, which he sees as unethical by modern standards while stating that without them society wouldn't have the experience or procedures that are currently used.
Revised:  Jauhar mentions research and experiments conducted on animals and humans, which he sees as unethical by modern standards while stating that without them society would not have the experience or procedures that are currently used.
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Original:  He states that doctors have lowered the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital to 3 percent, which he doesn't believe can be improved much further.
Revised:  He states that doctors have lowered the risk of dying from a heart attack in a hospital to 3 percent, which he does not believe can be improved much further.
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Original:  Drones are being increasingly used in the fields of resource management and conservation because of their light weight and small stature, their speed, they reduce risk of injury and death when compared to traditional field biologist aerial surveys, and are less invasive than humans in the field.
Revised:  Drones are being increasingly used in the fields of resource management and conservation because of their light weight and small stature, and their speed. They also have reduced risk of injury and death when compared to traditional field biologist aerial surveys, and are less invasive than humans in the field.
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Original:  It comes from the term , by-catch, which is used in fishing practices , designating non-target species that are caught in a fishing net.
Revised:  It comes from the term bycatch, which is used in fishing practices , designating non-target species that are caught in a fishing net.
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Original:  It comes from the term , by-catch, which is used in fishing practices , designating non-target species that are caught in a fishing net.
Revised:  It comes from the term , by-catch, which is used in fishing practices to designate non-target species that are caught in a fishing net.
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Original:  Nearly every remote monitoring study contains human by-catch, yet , there are no standardized rules or policies regarding what the researchers can or should do with their data.
Revised:  Nearly every remote monitoring study contains human by-catch, yet there are no standardized rules or policies regarding what the researchers can or should do with their data.
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Original:  In the 2019 Lok Sabha elections,  the Bharatiya Janata Party nominated candidate for Jangipur 
Revised:  In the 2019 Lok Sabha elections, she was the Bharatiya Janata Party nominated candidate for Jangipur 
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Original:  In the 2019 Lok Sabha elections,  the Bharatiya Janata Party nominated candidate for Jangipur 
Revised:  In the 2019 Lok Sabha elections, the Bharatiya Janata Party nominated candidate for Jangipur .
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Original:  The founder of the dynasty, Salim bin Abdallah, arrived at Nkhotakota arround 1840.
Revised: History The founder of the dynasty, Salim bin Abdallah, arrived at Nkhotakota arround 1840.
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Original:  He was able to build his power by buiding dhows that enabled merchants to trade goods across the lake and because he possessed firearms whith which he could protect the lake populations against the Ngoni invasions.
Revised:  He was able to build his power by building dhows that enabled merchants to trade goods across the lake and because he possessed firearms whith which he could protect the lake populations against the Ngoni invasions.
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Original:  He was able to build his power by buiding dhows that enabled merchants to trade goods across the lake and because he possessed firearms whith which he could protect the lake populations against the Ngoni invasions.
Revised:  He was able to build his power by buiding dhows that enabled merchants to trade goods across the lake and because he possessed firearms with which he could protect the lake populations against the Ngoni invasions.
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Original:  The power of the  Jumbes remained unchallenged until Henry Hamilton Johnston asserted the authority of the British Central Africa Protectorate in this area.
Revised:  The power of the The power of the Jumbes remained unchallenged until Henry Hamilton Johnston asserted the authority of the British Central Africa Protectorate in this area.
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Original:   Some heritage sites of the Jumbes of Nkhotakota can bee seen in Malawi.
Revised:  Landmarks Some heritage sites of the Jumbes of Nkhotakota can bee seen in Malawi.
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Original: The Jumbes of Nkhotakota were a dynasty of Swahili Arab traders who settled in Nkhotakota, on the western shore of Lake Malawi.
Revised: The Jumbes of Nkhotakota were a dynasty of Swahili Arab traders based in Nkhotakota, on the western shore of Lake Malawi.
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Original:  However, to promote the chiefs loyalty, they encouraged them to send their male offspring to the Sultanate of Zanzibar so that they would receive an islamic education   .
Revised:  However, to promote the chiefs loyalty, they encouraged them to send their male offspring to the Sultanate of Zanzibar so that they would receive an islamic education . .
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Original: Alternative medicine describes any practice which aims to achieve the healing effects of medicine, but which lacks biological plausibility and is untested or untestable.
Revised: Alternative medicine describes any practice which aims to achieve the healing effects of medicine, 
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Original:  In 2019, Anderson competed in the competition show "Vinnarskallar " which was broadcast on TV4, where he competed against other Swedish para-athletes.
Revised:  In 2019, Anderson competed in the competition show Vinnarskallar which was broadcast on TV4, where he competed against other Swedish para-athletes.
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Original:  Aron Anderson works as a motivational speaker in which he tells about how to maximize your own potential to turn unluck into success .
Revised:  Anderson works as a motivational speaker in which he tells about how to maximize your own potential to turn unluck into success .
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Original:  Aron Anderson works as a motivational speaker in which he tells about how to maximize your own potential to turn unluck into success .
Revised:  Aron Anderson works as a motivational speaker .
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Original:  Anderson was as the first wheelchair user to summit Sweden's highest mountain, Kebnekaise, and Mount Kilimanjaro in Tanzania.
Revised:  Anderson was the first wheelchair user to summit Sweden's highest mountain, Kebnekaise, and Mount Kilimanjaro in Tanzania.
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Original: Föreläsare Aron Anderson laraforlivet.se Retrieved 9 June 2019 He is also an ambassador for the Barncancerfonden, a children's cancer foundation, and has through his adventures also helped to raise money for the cause.
Revised: Föreläsare Aron Anderson laraforlivet.se Retrieved 9 June 2019 He is also an ambassador for Barncancerfonden, a children's cancer foundation, and has through his adventures also helped to raise money for the cause.
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Original:  Between 1999 and 2005  he competed in sailing, he stopped competing after the 2004 Paralympics in Athens, Greece.
Revised:  Between 1999 and 2005 , he competed in sailing, he stopped competing after the 2004 Paralympics in Athens, Greece.
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Original:  Reactions to anesthetics Firstly, reactions to the general anesthetic drug, which is used to make the patients sleep while they are under surgery, can cause both short-term and long-term health problems, for example minor health problems like vomiting, nausea, muscle soreness, headache, and major health problems can include death.
Revised:  Firstly, reactions to the general anesthetic drug, which is used to make the patients sleep while they are under surgery, can cause both short-term and long-term health problems, for example minor health problems like vomiting, nausea, muscle soreness, headache, and major health problems can include death.
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Original:  Swelling Another risk factor is that swelling can occur throughout the whole mouth during the beginning section of the surgery, but swilling is most likely to occur on the tongue and in the tissues surrounding the tonsils at the back of the throat.
Revised:  Another risk factor is that swelling can occur throughout the whole mouth during the beginning section of the surgery, but swilling is most likely to occur on the tongue and in the tissues surrounding the tonsils at the back of the throat.
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Original:  Bleeding Furthermore, rarely bleeding may be present in the tonsil area of the mouth throughout the surgical procedure, which would need extra treatment on top of the coblation tonsillectomy surgery.
Revised:  Furthermore, rarely bleeding may be present in the tonsil area of the mouth throughout the surgical procedure, which would need extra treatment on top of the coblation tonsillectomy surgery.
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Original:  Infection In addition, infections may develop in the mouth from the surgery, the main cause of these infections are the surgical equipment that are used if they were not disinfected properly before surgical procedure.
Revised:  In addition, infections may develop in the mouth from the surgery, the main cause of these infections are the surgical equipment that are used if they were not disinfected properly before surgical procedure.
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Original:  Another risk factor is that swelling can occur throughout the whole mouth during the beginning section of the surgery, but swilling is most likely to occur on the tongue and in the tissues surrounding the tonsils at the back of the throat.
Revised:  Another risk factor is that swelling can occur throughout the whole mouth during the beginning section of the surgery, but swelling is most likely to occur on the tongue and in the tissues surrounding the tonsils at the back of the throat.
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Original:  Before the Procedure  Recovery from Surgery  Further Research 
Revised:  Before the Procedure Before the surgery begins, the surgeon will take multiple blood test, physically examine the patient, and the surgeon will also check the past medical records of the patient to make sure it is safe to conduct the surgical procedure. On top of that, the surgeon doctor will ask about the types of medications that have been taken by the patient in the last 10 days following up to the surgery because certain medications can increase the chances of bleeding during the surgical procedure, such as aspirin and naproxen. Furthermore, the patient will be required to stop the consumption of any food and drinks for several hours before the procedure begins. Recovery from Surgery Further Research 
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Original:  Before the Procedure  Recovery from Surgery  Further Research 
Revised:  Before the Procedure Recovery from Surgery One to two weeks is normally the required time to for all wounds to fully heal from the coblation tonsillectomy surgery. Until the patient is still recovering at home, they should try not to come in contact with any sick people because the recovery stage is critical as they can easily get an infection in the tonsil area. The patient will likely experience pain in the throat, ears, jaws, and neck where it is most common. So it is recommended to take pain medication to reduce the pain in these areas. Furthermore, to assist the recovery of the wounds and to avoid any obstacles during recovery, the patient should consume lots of fluids to prevent being dehydrated. The patient only consume food that can be swallowed with an ease, soft and smooth food is recommended in order to prevent reopening the wounds from the surgery. The most vital part of recovery is taking lots of bed rest and avoiding physical activity, like sports for about two weeks. 
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Original: Coblation tonsillectomy is a newly developed surgical procedure,  first implemented in 2001 and its use and popularity in the medical field has been growing ever since.
Revised: Coblation tonsillectomy is a modern surgical procedure, first implemented in 2001 and its use and popularity in the medical field has been growing ever since.
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Original:  The word Coblation is originates from the combination of ‘Controlled ablation’, it means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
Revised:  The word Coblation is originates from the combination of ‘Controlled ablation’, which means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
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Original:  Hence, during the Coblation tonsillectomy process the patient’s tonsils are removed by destroying the tissues around the tonsils that attach them to the pharynx.
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Original:  Plasma Field in Coblation Wand The produced plasma field has about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
Revised:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
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Original:  Reasons for Surgery The need for removing tonsils of an individual using the coblation tonsillectomy surgical process can occur for four reasons.
Revised:  Reasons for surgery The need for removing tonsils of an individual using the coblation tonsillectomy surgical process can occur for four reasons.
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Original:  Risks of the Surgery Similarly to any other medical surgery, coblation tonsillectomy has health risk factors as well, which can but will not necessarily occur from the surgery.
Revised:  Risks of the surgery Similarly to any other medical surgery, coblation tonsillectomy has health risk factors as well, which can but will not necessarily occur from the surgery.
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Original:  Before the Procedure Before the surgery begins, the surgeon will take multiple blood test, physically examine the patient, and the surgeon will also check the past medical records of the patient to make sure it is safe to conduct the surgical procedure.
Revised:  Before the procedure Before the surgery begins, the surgeon will take multiple blood test, physically examine the patient, and the surgeon will also check the past medical records of the patient to make sure it is safe to conduct the surgical procedure.
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Original:  Recovery from Surgery After the coblation tonsillectomy surgery, the patient will be taken the recovery room, where they will wake up soon after the surgery.
Revised:  Recovery from surgery After the coblation tonsillectomy surgery, the patient will be taken the recovery room, where they will wake up soon after the surgery.
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Original: Coblation tonsillectomy is a modern surgical procedure , where the patient’s tonsils are removed by destroying the tissues around the tonsils that attach them to the pharynx.
Revised: Coblation tonsillectomy is a surgical procedure in which the patient’s tonsils are removed by destroying the tissues around the tonsils that attach them to the pharynx.
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Original: Coblation tonsillectomy is a modern surgical procedure , where the patient’s tonsils are removed by destroying the tissues around the tonsils that attach them to the pharynx.
Revised: Coblation tonsillectomy is a modern surgical procedure , where the patient’s tonsils are removed by destroying the surrounding tissues that attach them to the pharynx.
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Original:  The word coblation originates from the combination of ‘ Controlled ablation’, which means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
Revised:  The word coblation is short for ‘ Controlled ablation’, which means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
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Original:  The word coblation originates from the combination of ‘ Controlled ablation’, which means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
Revised:  The word coblation originates from the combination of ‘ controlled ablation’, which means a controlled procedure used to destroy soft tissue.
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Original:  This new form of technology uses low temperature radio frequency during the tonsillectomy operation, which was found to cause lower amount of pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
Revised:  This procedure uses low temperature radio frequency during the tonsillectomy operation, which was found to cause lower amount of pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
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Original:  This new form of technology uses low temperature radio frequency during the tonsillectomy operation, which was found to cause lower amount of pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
Revised:  This new form of technology uses low temperature radio frequency during the operation, which was found to cause lower amount of pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
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Original:  This new form of technology uses low temperature radio frequency during the tonsillectomy operation, which was found to cause lower amount of pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
Revised:  This new form of technology uses low temperature radio frequency during the tonsillectomy operation, which was found to cause less pain for the patient than previous technologies used for tonsillectomy.
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