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Original:  But historical or mythical, he was known to the later Achaemenids as  father of Teispes.
Revised:  But historical or mythical, he was known to the later Achaemenids as the father of Teispes.
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Original:  Apparently, the Achaemenid kingdom was divided by Teispes between his sons, Ariaramnes and Cyurs I. From then on, the dynasty had two branches, while the Ariaramnids were kings of Pars (Persis or Persia, a province in south of Iran), the Cyrusids were kings of Anshan.
Revised:  Apparently, the Achaemenid kingdom was divided by Teispes between his sons, Ariaramnes and Cyrus I. From then on, the dynasty had two branches, while the Ariaramnids were kings of Pars (Persis or Persia, a province in south of Iran), the Cyrusids were kings of Anshan.
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Original:  Cambyses I, son of Cyrus I and father of Cyrus II, reigned under the overlordship of Astyages, King of Media and also married to Mandane, daughter of the Great King.
Revised:  Cambyses I, son of Cyrus I and father of Cyrus II, reigned under the overlordship of Astyages, King of Media and married Mandane, daughter of the Great King.
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Original:  But soon , Cambyses rebelled against Astyages.
Revised:  But soon Cambyses rebelled against Astyages.
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Original:  Rulers In his cylinder, Cyrus the Great introduce himself as descendant of Teispes.
Revised:  Rulers In his cylinder, Cyrus the Great introduced himself as a descendant of Teispes.
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Original:  However, there is no mention to Achaemenes: But in Behistun Inscription, Darius introduce Achaemenes as father of Teispes:
Revised:  However, there is no mention of Achaemenes: But in Behistun Inscription, Darius introduce Achaemenes as father of Teispes:
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Original:  However, there is no mention to Achaemenes: But in Behistun Inscription, Darius introduce Achaemenes as father of Teispes:
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Original:  However, there is no mention to Achaemenes: But in Behistun Inscription, Darius introduce Achaemenes as father of Teispes:
Revised:  However, there is no mention to Achaemenes: But in Behistun Inscription, Darius the Great said Achaemenes was the father of Teispes:
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Original:  Apparently, the Achaemenid kingdom was divided by Teispes between his sons, Ariaramnes and Cyrus I. From then on, the dynasty had two branches, while the Ariaramnids were kings of Pars (Persis or Persia, a province in  south of Iran), the Cyrusids were kings of Anshan.
Revised:  Apparently, the Achaemenid kingdom was divided by Teispes between his sons, Ariaramnes and Cyrus I. From then on, the dynasty had two branches, while the Ariaramnids were kings of Pars (Persis or Persia, a province in the south of Iran), the Cyrusids were kings of Anshan.
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Original:  [[File:Achaemenid_(greatest_extent).svg|Extent of the Achaemenid Empire]] Once a minor dynasty in  south of Iran, the Achaemenid dynasty would rule much of the ancient world for more than two centuries.
Revised:  [[File:Achaemenid_(greatest_extent).svg|Extent of the Achaemenid Empire]] Once a minor dynasty in the south of Iran, the Achaemenid dynasty would rule much of the ancient world for more than two centuries.
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Original: The Achaemenid Kingdom (Persian: پادشاهی هخامنشی, pādšāhie haxāmaneši) refers to the pre-imperial history of the Achaemenid dynasty.
Revised: The Achaemenid Kingdom (Persian: پادشاهی هخامنشی, pādšāhiye haxāmaneši) refers to the pre-imperial history of the Achaemenid dynasty.
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Original:  Orthodontic indices can be useful for an epidemiologist to analyse prevalence and severity of malocclusion in any URL
Revised:  Orthodontic indices can be useful for an epidemiologist to analyse prevalence and severity of malocclusion in any population.
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Original:  In the summer of 1999 under the command of Shamil Basayev and Khattab, Ramzan Ahmadov leads a unit of militants that invades in Botlikh and Novolakskoye regions of Dagestan.
Revised:  In the summer of 1999 under the command of Shamil Basayev and Khattab, Ramzan Ahmadov leads a unit of militants that invades Botlikh and Novolakskoye regions of Dagestan.
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Original:  Advertisement for A Militant Suffragette (1914)|alt=|500x500pxAfter women won the vote in countries with a national cinema, women's suffrage became a historical event depicted in both fiction and nonfiction films.
Revised:  After women won the vote in countries with a national cinema, women's suffrage became a historical event depicted in both fiction and nonfiction films.
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Original:  Other films depicted women in male attire, including The Suffragette's Dream (1909), Georges Méliès's For the Cause of Suffrage (1909), and A Cure for Suffragettes ( 1909 , written by Anita Loos).
Revised:  Other films depicted women in male attire, including The Suffragette's Dream (1909), Méliès's For the Cause of Suffrage (1909), and A Cure for Suffragettes ( 1909 , written by Anita Loos).
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Original:  musicals likeThe Shocking Miss Pilgrim (1947) and One Sunday Afternoon (1948);
Revised:  musicals like The Shocking Miss Pilgrim (1947) and One Sunday Afternoon (1948);
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Original:  Germany Color poster for Die Suffragette (1913) Die Suffragette (1913  ), also released as The Suffragette and The Militant Suffragette, starred Asta Nielsen as a British suffragette who becomes involved in a plot to murder a politician.
Revised:  Germany Color poster for Die Suffragette (1913) Die Suffragette (1913 ), also released as The Militant Suffragette, starred Asta Nielsen as a British suffragette who becomes involved in a plot to murder a politician.
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Original:  Women like Lois Weber and Bess Meredyth who worked at Universal Pictures and lived in Universal City, California, the studio's unincorporated community, ran for public office on a "suffrage ticket" that garnered publicity in 1913. center|600x600px|Advertisement for the "Suffrage Ticket" in the 1913 Universal City elections|alt= Florence Lawrence participated in the Woman suffrage parade of 1913 on horseback, and was filmed in Kinemacolor.
Revised:  Women like Lois Weber and Bess Meredyth who worked at Universal Pictures and lived in Universal City, California, the studio's unincorporated community, ran for public office on a "suffrage ticket" that garnered publicity in 1913. center|600x600px|Advertisement for the "Suffrage Ticket" in the 1913 Universal City elections|alt= Florence Lawrence participated in the Woman suffrage parade of 1913 on horseback, where she was filmed in Kinemacolor.
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Original: File:A Militant Suffragette advertisement.jpg|This advertisement for A Militant Suffragette (1913) shows the film's main character smashing a window (left) and being force-fed by doctors in jail (right)  |alt=|300px]] Women's suffrage, the legal right of women to vote, has been depicted in film in a variety of ways since the invention of narrative film in the late nineteenth century.
Revised: File:A Militant Suffragette advertisement.jpg|This advertisement for A Militant Suffragette (1913) shows the film's main character smashing a window (left) and being force-fed by doctors in jail (right) . |alt=|300px]] Women's suffrage, the legal right of women to vote, has been depicted in film in a variety of ways since the invention of narrative film in the late nineteenth century.
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Original: |alt=|300px]] Women's suffrage, the legal right of women to vote, has been depicted in film in a variety of ways since the invention of narrative film in the late nineteenth century.
Revised: |alt=|300px]] Women's suffrage, the legal right of women to vote, has been depicted in film in a variety of ways since the invention of narrative film in the late late 20th century.
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Original:  Film scholar Martin F. Norden views "suffrage films" as a distinct genre that had its "one and only heyday during the years prior to World War I . "  Norden, M. F. (1986).
Revised:  Film scholar Martin F. Norden views "suffrage films" as a distinct genre that had its "one and only heyday during the years prior to World War I " Norden, M. F. (1986).
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Original:  Film scholar Martin F. Norden views "suffrage films" as a distinct genre that had its "one and only heyday during the years prior to World War I . "  Norden, M. F. (1986).
Revised:  Film scholar Martin F. Norden views "suffrage films" as a distinct genre that had its "one and only heyday during the years prior to World War I . " . Norden, M. F. (1986).
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Original:  She is a teacher of history and social studies.
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Original: URL Mineral Freudenbergite Named in honor of Wilhelm Freudenberg, palaeontologist at the University of Tübingen and the University of Göttingen, and curator for mineralogy and geology at the National Collections of Natural History in Karlsruhe.
Revised: URL Freudenbergite is a mineral that is named in honor of Wilhelm Freudenberg, palaeontologist at the University of Tübingen and the University of Göttingen, and curator for mineralogy and geology at the National Collections of Natural History in Karlsruhe.
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Original:  Monoclonic with straight extinction and high birefringence.
Revised:  Monoclinic with straight extinction and high birefringence.
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Original:  Brown. REFERENCES  Haggerty, S.E. (1983): A freudenbergite-related mineral in granulites from a kimberlite in Liberia, West Africa.
Revised:  Brown. References Haggerty, S.E. (1983): A freudenbergite-related mineral in granulites from a kimberlite in Liberia, West Africa.
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Original:  He donated $4.8 million to Brattleboro Memorial Hospital and $1.2 million to Brooks Memorial Library, which at the time had a $600,000 budget and a $600,000 endowment and was affected by the local budget squeeze like other libraries in the state , Both bequests were the largest donations the institutions had received.
Revised:  He donated $4.8 million to Brattleboro Memorial Hospital and $1.2 million to Brooks Memorial Library, which at the time had a $600,000 budget and a $600,000 endowment and was affected by the local budget squeeze like other libraries in the state . Both bequests were the largest donations the institutions had received.
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Original:  Read retired for one year and then took a part-time janitor job at J. C. Penney where he worked for 17 years  until 1997.
Revised:  Read retired for one year and then took a part-time janitor job at J. C. Penney where he worked for 17 years , until 1997.
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Original:  Read retired for one year and then took a part-time janitor job at J. C. Penney where he worked for 17 years , until 1997.
Revised:  Read retired for one year and then took a part-time janitor job at J. C. Penney where he worked for 17 years until 1997.
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Original:  C. Penney people Category:Janitors Category:Military personnel from Vermont Category:People from Brattleboro, Vermont Category:People from Dummerston, Vermont Category:Philanthropists from Vermont Category:20th-century American people Category:21st-century American peop
Revised:  C. Penney people Category:Janitors Category:Military personnel from Vermont Category:People from Brattleboro, Vermont Category:People from Dummerston, Vermont Category:Philanthropists from Vermont Category:20th-century American people Category:21st-century American people Category:20th-century philanthropis
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Original:  C. Penney people Category:Janitors Category:Military personnel from Vermont Category:People from Brattleboro, Vermont Category:People from Dummerston, Vermont Category:Philanthropists from Vermont Category:20th-century American people Category:21st-century American people Category:20th-century  philanthropists Category:United States Army non-commissioned office
Revised:  C. Penney people Category:Janitors Category:Military personnel from Vermont Category:People from Brattleboro, Vermont Category:People from Dummerston, Vermont Category:Philanthropists from Vermont Category:20th-century American people Category:21st-century American people Category:20th-century American philanthropists Category:United States Army non-commissioned office
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Original: Dutch public broadcasting administrators Category:Erasmus University Rotterdam alumni Category:Indo people Category:Knights of the Order of the Netherlands Lion Category:Municipal councillors in the Netherlands Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category:People's Party for Freedom and Democracy politicians Category:State Secretaries for Social Work of the Netherlands Category:20th-century Dutch civil servants Category:20th-century Dutch politicia
Revised: Dutch public broadcasting administrators Category:Erasmus University Rotterdam alumni Category:Indo people Category:Knights of the Order of the Netherlands Lion Category:Municipal councillors of The Hague Category:People from Batavia, Dutch East Indies Category:People from The Hague Category:People's Party for Freedom and Democracy politicians Category:State Secretaries for Social Work of the Netherlands Category:20th-century Dutch civil servants Category:20th-century Dutch politicia
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a dangerous man who could kill any person for the pro-Russian positionНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a dangerous man who could kill any person for the pro-Russian positionНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a dangerous man who could kill any person for the pro-Russian positionНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a cruel warrior who could kill anyone for pro-Russian activitiesНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a cruel warrior who could kill anyone for pro-Russian activitiesНиколай Гродненский.
Revised:  Zelimkhan was considered a cruel warrior who could kill any person for the pro-Russian activitiesНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:  Zelimkhan was considered a cruel warrior who could kill anyone for pro-Russian activitiesНиколай Гродненский.
Revised:  Zelimkhan was considered a cruel warrior who could kill anyone for pro-Russian positionНиколай Гродненский.
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Original:   Wine Collector is sold as a bundle of software and hardware with a portable IntelliScanner mini barcode reader.
Revised:  Specifications Wine Collector is sold as a bundle of software and hardware with a portable IntelliScanner mini barcode reader.
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Original: History File:Aux soldats français morts à Charleroi 1914-1918.jpg| upright= 1.4 | WW I Memorial to French soldiers lost at Charleroi The first office to be created was the National Office of Disabled and Discharged War Veterans created by ministerial decree on , during the First World War.
Revised: History upright= 1.4 | WW I Memorial to French soldiers lost at Charleroi The first office to be created was the National Office of Disabled and Discharged War Veterans created by ministerial decree on , during the First World War.
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Original:  The actions of the Office are geared towards celebrating, sharing, and conveying the memory of contemporary conflicts and the values of the Republic   .
Revised:  The actions of the Office are geared towards celebrating, sharing, and conveying the memory of contemporary conflicts and the values of the Republic . .
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Original:  The law of established the , and that of created the National Soldiers Office.
Revised:  The law of established the and that of created the National Soldiers Office.
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Original: Emmy Okello Emmy Okello , is a Ugandan consultant physician who has specialized as an interventional cardiologist and researcher.
Revised: Emmy Okello , is a Ugandan consultant physician who has specialized as an interventional cardiologist and researcher.
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Original:  He serves as the Head of the Cardiac Catheterization Department at Uganda Heart Institute, the specialized government hospital in Kampala that specializes in the treatment of congenital and acquired cardiac disorders.
Revised:  He serves as the Head of the Cardiac Catheterization Department at Uganda Heart Institute, the government institution in Kampala that specializes in the treatment of congenital and acquired cardiac disorders.
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Original:  Percutaneous, means that instead of opening up the patient's chest to carry out the procedure in the open, it is done through a small incision in the upper arm  performed remotely while watching on a fluoroscopic screen.
Revised:  Percutaneous, means that instead of opening up the patient's chest to carry out the procedure in the open, it is done through a small incision in the upper arm the procedure is performed remotely while watching on a fluoroscopic screen.
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Original: Dr Okello has special interest in rheumatic heart disease (RHD), and is one of the recognized leaders in this area of cardiology in the region.
Revised:  Okello has special interest in rheumatic heart disease (RHD), and is one of the recognized leaders in this area of cardiology in the region.
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Original:  Other considerations In April 2019, Dr Emmy Okello MBChB, MMed (Medicine), PhD, was awarded the tittle of Fellow of the American College of Cardiology (FACC) by the American College of Cardiology, based in Washington, DC, in recognition of his body of work.
Revised:  Other considerations In April 2019, Emmy Okello was awarded the tittle of Fellow of the American College of Cardiology (FACC) by the American College of Cardiology, based in Washington, DC, in recognition of his body of work.
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Original:  Other considerations In April 2019, Dr Emmy Okello MBChB, MMed (Medicine), PhD, was awarded the tittle of Fellow of the American College of Cardiology (FACC) by the American College of Cardiology, based in Washington, DC, in recognition of his body of work.
Revised:  Other considerations In April 2019, Dr Emmy Okello MBChB, MMed (Medicine), PhD, was awarded the tittle of Fellow of the American College of Cardiology by the American College of Cardiology, based in Washington, DC, in recognition of his body of work.
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Original:  He then underwent a one year fellowship in Interventional Cardiology at Case Western Reserve University, in Cleveland, Ohio, Unites States.
Revised:  He then underwent a one-year fellowship in Interventional Cardiology at Case Western Reserve University, in Cleveland, Ohio, Unites States.
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Original:  His doctoral thesis was titled "Burden, Risk Factors And Outcome of Rheumatic Heart Disease In Uganda".
Revised:  His doctoral thesis was titled "Burden, Risk Factors And Outcome of Rheumatic Heart Disease in Uganda".
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Original:  13 March 1940), better known simply as Husheng or Kosei, was a China-Japanese noblewoman.
Revised:  13 March 1940), better known simply as Husheng or Kosei, is a China-Japanese noblewoman.
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Original:  She was the younger daughter of Pujie, the younger brother of Puyi, the last emperor of China, and her mother was Hiro Saga, a Japanese noblewoman.
Revised:  She is the younger daughter of Pujie, the younger brother of Puyi, the last emperor of China, and her mother was Hiro Saga, a Japanese noblewoman.
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Original:  13 March 1940), better known simply as Husheng or Kosei, is a Chinese-Japanese noblewoman.
Revised:  13 March 1940), better known simply as Husheng or Kosei, is a Manchu-Japanese noblewoman.
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Original:  I am Pagliacci."  
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Original: Origins One of the first forms of the joke can be seen in the Spanish poem 'Reír Llorando' (Laughing While Crying) by the late 19th century Mexican poet Juan de Dios Peza.
Revised:  One of the first forms of the joke can be seen in the Spanish poem 'Reír Llorando' (Laughing While Crying) by the late 19th century Mexican poet Juan de Dios Peza.
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Original:  In popular culture Watchmen The use of the poem/story as a joke entered popular culture after being featured in the graphic novel , Watchmen , where Rorschach recalls:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'Man goes to doctor.
Revised:  Watchmen The use of the poem/story as a joke entered popular culture after being featured in the graphic novel , Watchmen , where Rorschach recalls:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'Man goes to doctor.
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Original:  In popular culture Watchmen The use of the poem/story as a joke entered popular culture after being featured in the graphic novel , Watchmen , where Rorschach recalls:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'Man goes to doctor.
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Original: The "self"-concept in Western culture The "self" concept in western psychology originated from views of a number of empiricists and rationalists and empiricist .
Revised: The "self"-concept in Western culture The "self" concept in western psychology originated from views of a number of empiricists and rationalists .
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Original:  Self-cultivation    is a psychological process that belongs to the         Confucian philosophy system , which  refers to the action and effort of keeping the balance between inner and outer selves, and between self and others.
Revised:  Self-cultivation is a psychological process that belongs to the Confucianism and the Relational Self Confucius believed that one's life is the continuation of their parents' life. Therefore, followers of Confucianism teach their children in such way that the younger generation is educated to cultivate themselves to live with a satisfactory level of self-discipline. Even though individuals see a clear-cut boundary between one's self and others, each person of a dyadic relationship is seen embedded in a particular social network. By respecting the parents, the elder and the superior, they are always raised to be morally upright to take others' expectation into consideration. From certain perspectives, it implies a form of social burden and stress from interpersonal relationships, and can cause disturbance and conflicts. Confucian philosophy system , which refers to the action and effort of keeping the balance between inner and outer selves, and between self and others.
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Original:  Although this term applies to cultural traditions in Confucianism, Taoism, and Buddhism, the goals of self-cultivation and the state that each person should aspire to are completely different.
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Original:  History and origin Confucianism is described as tradition, a philosophy, a religion, a humanistic or rationalistic religion, a way of governing, or simply a way of life.
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Original:  Self-cultivation also alludes to philosophical models in Buddhism and Taoism, and is an essential component of well-established East-Asian ethical values.
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