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Original:  2009, During the Great Depression, the Ladies Ontario Hockey Association experienced a heavy decline and even its most successful team, the Preston Rivulettes, who still drew substantial audiences, were forced to fold as World War II hit, with the military pressuring the facilities and the league receiving none of the support men's leagues did, despite men's leagues being deemed morale URL Abby Hoffman, who had become an all-star defender in a Ontario boys'
Revised:  2009, During the Great Depression, the Ladies Ontario Hockey Association experienced a heavy decline and even its most successful team, the Preston Rivulettes, who still drew substantial audiences, were forced to fold as World War II hit, with the military pressuring the facilities and the league receiving none of the support men's leagues did, despite men's leagues being deemed morale boosters. Abby Hoffman, who had become an all-star defender in a Ontario boys'
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Original:  Most people assumed that no girl would want to URL In 1998, women's ice hockey was added to the Winter Olympics.
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Original:  the NHL was the only one of the so-called big four men's professional sports leagues in North America not to have a policy on domestic URL As of mid-2019,
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Original:  the NHL and the NHLPA established a Female Hockey Advisory Committee to try and increased opportunities for women in the URL In April 2020,
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Original:  alleging that she was fired after filing a complaint over being sexually assaulted by a team URL Later that year,
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Original:  the Los Angeles Kings suspended their senior manager of game presentation and events after he was sued by a former Kings employee for sexual URL In November 2020,
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Original:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL URL Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic URL In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict URL
Revised:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL affiliate. Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic URL In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict URL
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Original:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL URL Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic URL In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict URL
Revised:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL URL Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic violence. In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict URL
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Original:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL URL Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic URL In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict URL
Revised:  Jarrod Skalde sued the Pittsburgh Penguins, accusing the team of covering up sexual assaults committed by Clark Donatelli, the head coach of the team's AHL URL Incidents involving NHL players In 1983, the ex-wife of New York Islanders captain Denis Potvin accused him of domestic URL In 1988, Doug Gilmour was accused of seducing a 13-year-old girl who was working as a babysitter for him, although a jury chose not to indict him.
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Original: Indiscriminate monitoring is a form of monitoring, such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that interfere's with an individual or group of individual's right to privacy.
Revised: Indiscriminate monitoring is a form of monitoring, such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that may interfere with an individual or group of individual's right to privacy.
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Original: Indiscriminate monitoring is a form of monitoring, such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that interfere's with an individual or group of individual's right to privacy.
Revised: Indiscriminate monitoring is a form of monitoring, such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that interfere's with an individual or group of individuals right to privacy.
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Original:  Organizations that conduct indiscriminate monitoring  use surveillance technologies to collect large amounts of data that violates individual privacy .
Revised:  Organizations that conduct indiscriminate monitoring may use surveillance technologies to collect large amounts of data that violates individual privacy .
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Original:  Email monitoring occurs when employers monitor their employee emails.
Revised:  Email monitoring involves the employer monitoring employee emails.
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Original:  Employers use email monitoring to protect a company's assets, increase productivity, and protect themselves from liability.
Revised:  Employers use email monitoring to protect the company's assets, increase productivity, and protect themselves from liability.
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Original:  Employers use email monitoring to protect a company's assets, increase productivity, and protect themselves from liability.
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Original:  Targeted Advertising is a method used by companies to monitor customer taste's and preferences in order to create personalized advertising.
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Original:  Targeted Advertising is a method used by companies to monitor customer taste's and preferences in order to create personalized advertising.
Revised:  Targeted Advertising is a method used by companies to monitor customer tastes and preferences in order to create personalized advertising.
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Original:  Physical monitoring could be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications , and much more .
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Original:  The Effects of Indiscriminate Monitoring There are emotional and mental considerations in regards to Indiscriminate monitoring.
Revised:  The effects of indiscriminate monitoring There may be emotional and mental considerations in regards to Indiscriminate monitoring.
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Original:  The Effects of Indiscriminate Monitoring There are emotional and mental considerations in regards to Indiscriminate monitoring.
Revised:  The Effects of Indiscriminate Monitoring There are emotional and mental considerations in regards to indiscriminate monitoring.
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Original:  Government Protections In 2007, the Bush Administration announced that the would issue warrants for the NSA conducting surveillance of citizens without warrants.
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Original:  Physical monitoring can be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications.
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Original:  Indiscriminate monitoring is a form of monitoring , such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that may interfere with an individual or group of individuals right to privacy .
Revised:  Indiscriminate monitoring is the mass monitoring of individuals or groups without the careful judgement of wrong-doing. This form of monitoring , such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, that may interfere with an individual or group of individuals right to privacy .
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Original:  Organizations that conduct indiscriminate monitoring may  use surveillance technologies to collect large amounts of data that could violate privacy laws or regulations.
Revised:  Organizations that conduct indiscriminate monitoring may also use surveillance technologies to collect large amounts of data that could violate privacy laws or regulations.
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Original:     Email monitoring involves the employer monitoring employee emails.
Revised:  Electronic Employee monitoring is the use of electronic devices to collect data to monitor an employee's performance or general being. The indiscriminate justification for monitoring includes, but is not limited to: Email monitoring involves the employer monitoring employee emails.
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Original:     Email monitoring involves the employer monitoring employee emails.
Revised:  The productivity of the employees. Legal liability of the company. Prevention of company confidentiality. Prevention of company data breaches. Prevention of workplace policy deviance. Email monitoring involves the employer monitoring employee emails.
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Original:  In most jurisdictions employers are permitted to use email monitoring to protect the company's assets, increase productivity, or protect themselves from liability.
Revised:  In most jurisdictions employers are permitted to use monitoring to protect the company's assets, increase productivity, or protect themselves from liability.
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Original:   Monitoring of social media activity can capture the data individuals share via these networks.
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Original:   Targeted advertising is a method used by companies to monitor customer tastes and preferences in order to create personalized advertising.
Revised:  In addition to social media networks collecting information for analytics, government agencies also use social media monitoring for public issues and other manners. The government uses the often public data of social media to conduct data collection on individuals or groups of people. Targeted advertising is a method used by companies to monitor customer tastes and preferences in order to create personalized advertising.
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Original:   Physical monitoring can be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications.
Revised:  Many companies justify targeted advertising by the social and economic implications. However, the indiscriminate privacy violations of producing targeted advertisements, cause consumers to have great concerns. Physical monitoring can be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications.
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Original:   Physical monitoring can be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications.
Revised:  Geological health monitoring is the monitoring of an individuals's location and/or health through tools to collect personal information. Geological health monitoring can be conducted through smart toys, home surveillance systems, fitness watches or applications.
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Original:   The effects of indiscriminate monitoring There may be emotional and mental considerations in regards to indiscriminate monitoring.
Revised:  Technological devices such as, fitness watches could serve as a great tool. However, they do have privacy implications that could risk health data exposure. The effects of indiscriminate monitoring There may be emotional and mental considerations in regards to indiscriminate monitoring.
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Revised:  References The Controversies of Indiscriminate Monitoring There may be emotional and mental considerations in regards to indiscriminate monitoring. When individuals know they are monitored, it could produce stress, frustration, and a negative attitude. Individuals could feel degraded if their privacy is infringed on. For example, in the workplace employee monitoring if employees know that their emails and such were being monitored, this could stir up distrust within the workplace and increase job dissatisfaction. 
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Original: Category:Espionage techniques Category:Mass surveillance Category:Privacy Indiscriminate monitoring is the mass monitoring of individuals or groups without the careful judgement of wrong-doing.
Revised:  Indiscriminate monitoring is the mass monitoring of individuals or groups without the careful judgement of wrong-doing.
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Original:  Indiscriminate monitoring uses tools such as email monitoring or telephone tapping, geo-locations, health monitoring to monitor private lives.
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Original:  The government has also issued various protections to protect against Indiscriminate monitoring.
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Original:  It does not imply that they were carved by members of the ancient tribe of Thamud .
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Original: In 2007, Nawal Nasrallah translated and compiled an edition of the earliest surviving Arabic cookbook, Kitab al-tabikh (“The Book of Cooking”) attributed to the tenth-century writer variously known as Ibn al-Warraq or as Ibn Sayyar al-Warraq (cite Perry in Zaouali, p. ix) .
Revised: In 2007, Nawal Nasrallah translated and compiled an edition of the earliest surviving Arabic cookbook, Kitab al-tabikh (“The Book of Cooking”) attributed to the tenth-century writer variously known as Ibn al-Warraq or as Ibn Sayyar al-Warraq .
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Original: Scholarly Works Nawal Nasrallah is an expert on medieval Arab cuisine, on the literary culture of Arabic cookbooks, and on the cuisines of modern Iraq and its historical precursors, including ancient Mesopotamia.
Revised: Scholarly works Nawal Nasrallah is an expert on medieval Arab cuisine, on the literary culture of Arabic cookbooks, and on the cuisines of modern Iraq and its historical precursors, including ancient Mesopotamia.
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Original: Nawal Nasrallah (born c. 1950) is a U.S.-based Iraqi food writer, food historian, English literature scholar, and translator from Arabic into English.
Revised: Nawal Nasrallah is a U.S.-based Iraqi food writer, food historian, English literature scholar, and translator from Arabic into English.
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Original:  The Iraqi Ministry of Culture and Information published her thesis as a book in 1980.
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Original:  Nawal Nasrallah taught English language, literature, and composition at the University of Baghdad and later the University of Mosul.
Revised:  Nasrallah taught English language, literature, and composition at the University of Baghdad and later the University of Mosul.
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Original:  She released a cookbook of Iraqi cuisine  in 2003 while the U.S. military was launching its invasion of Iraq to oust the regime of Saddam Hussein .
Revised:  She released a cookbook of Iraqi cuisine in 2003 during the U.S. military was launching its invasion of Iraq to oust the regime of Saddam Hussein .
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Original:  She released a cookbook of Iraqi cuisine  in 2003 while the U.S. military was launching its invasion of Iraq to oust the regime of Saddam Hussein .
Revised:  She released a cookbook of Iraqi cuisine in 2003 while the U.S. invasion of Iraq to oust the regime of Saddam Hussein .
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Original:  She released a cookbook of Iraqi cuisine  in 2003 while the U.S. military was launching its invasion of Iraq to oust the regime of Saddam Hussein .
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Original:  She also provided a commentary and analysis, for example, by discussing Mamluk-era views about food's curative and regenerative powers while describing the interplay of Galenic theoryin cooking and herbal medicine .
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Original:  Nawal Nasrallah self-published her Iraqi cookbook, Delights from the Garden of Eden, in 2003.
Revised:  Nasrallah published her Iraqi cookbook, Delights from the Garden of Eden, in 2003.
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Original:  She also offers historical insights on Iraqi food, and stories and information about the various regions of Iraq from which the recipes come.
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Original:  Ten years after Nawal Nasrallah self-published Delights from the Garden of Eden , Equinox Publishing produced an abridged version of the cookbook with 300 recipes.
Revised:  An abridged version of Delights from the Garden of Eden , Equinox Publishing produced an abridged version of the cookbook with 300 recipes.
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Original:  Saveur magazine ranked this edition as one of the top ten best cookbooks in 2013.
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Original:  Saveur magazine ranked this edition as one of the top ten best cookbooks in 2013.
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Original:  Aside from her cookbooks, she is featured in multiple interviews and panels on food and history on YouTube, and regularly updates a blog with interpretations and translations of medieval Arabic recipes.
Revised:  Aside from her cookbooks, she is featured in multiple interviews and panels on food and history on YouTube, and regularly updates her blog on medieval Arabic recipes.
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Original:  She has also prepared texts and audio materials for students learning Iraqi colloquial Arabic.
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Original:  In 2006, with Nadia Hassani, Nawal Nasrallah published Beginner’s Iraqi Arabic: An Introduction to the Spoken Arabic of Iraq.
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Original:  Her edition , published under the title, Annals of the Caliphs’ Kitchens: Ibn Sayyar al-Warraq’s Tenth-Century Baghdadi Cookbook, draws upon versions of the manuscript that survive in Oxford, Helsinki, and Istanbul.
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Original:  As Nasrallah explains, this cookbook combines recipes that its author, a courtier in the Abbasid Empire centered in Baghdad, drew from more than twenty other cookbooks to which he had access.
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Original:  In 2017, Nawal Nasrallah translated and published an edition of a fourteenth-century , Mamluk-era cookbook from Egypt.
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Original:  In 2017, Nawal Nasrallah translated and published an edition of a fourteenth-century , Mamluk-era cookbook from Egypt.
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Original: Personal life Nick Sherman is married to Ukrainian-Ojibwa artist named Candace Twance.
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Original:  Nick Sherman and Candance Twance have two children Discography
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Original:  Sherman was featured on CBC's Unreserved Indigenous Music Mentorship Program.
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Original:  Due to COVID-19, hé has been unable to go on tour.
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Original:  She is a Principal Staff Scientist in Genomic Counselling in the Society and Ethics Research group, part of  Connecting Science, based on the Wellcome Genome Campus.
Revised:  She is a Principal Staff Scientist in Genomic Counselling in the Society and Ethics Research group, part of Wellcome Connecting Science, based on the Wellcome Genome Campus.
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Original: Society and Ethics Research group team page She has extensive research interests in genetic testing, communication and counselling, investigating how the responsible uses of new technologies can deliver effective, patient and family focused , health services.
Revised: Society and Ethics Research group team page She has extensive research interests in genetic testing, communication and counselling, investigating how the responsible uses of new technologies can deliver effective, patient and family-focused , health services.
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Original: Genomics England Rare Disease Day article Patch is also the Caldicott Guardian for Genomics England, ensuring that appropriate governance relating to confidentiality and data sharing for genomic healthcare and research in the NHS, is in place.
Revised: Genomics England Rare Disease Day article Patch is also the Caldicott guardian for Genomics England, ensuring that appropriate governance relating to confidentiality and data sharing for genomic healthcare and research in the NHS, is in place.
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