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Original:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
Revised:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial Self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
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Original:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
Revised:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the Self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
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Original:  In Hinduism, the Ātman ( self ), despite being experienced as individual, is actually a representation of the unified transcendent reality, Brahman.
Revised:  In Hinduism, the Ātman ( Self ), despite being experienced as individual, is actually a representation of the unified transcendent reality, Brahman.
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Original:  One description of spirituality is the self 's search for "ultimate meaning" through an independent comprehension of the sacred.
Revised:  One description of spirituality is the Self 's search for "ultimate meaning" through an independent comprehension of the sacred.
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Original:  Another definition of spiritual identity is: "A persistent sense of self that addresses ultimate questions about the nature, purpose, and meaning of life, resulting in behaviors that are consonant with the individual’s core values.
Revised:  Another definition of spiritual identity is: "A persistent sense of Self that addresses ultimate questions about the nature, purpose, and meaning of life, resulting in behaviors that are consonant with the individual’s core values.
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Original:  There can be different types of spiritual self because it is determined by one's life and experiences."
Revised:  There can be different types of spiritual Self because it is determined by one's life and experiences."
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Original:  Human beings have a self —that is, they are able to look back on themselves as both subjects and objects in the universe.
Revised:  Human beings have a Self —that is, they are able to look back on themselves as both subjects and objects in the universe.
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Original:  Thomson & Wadsworth. p. 260 Traditions such as Buddhism see the attachment to self is an illusion that serves as the main cause of suffering and unhappiness.
Revised:  Thomson & Wadsworth. p. 260 Traditions such as Buddhism see the attachment to Self is an illusion that serves as the main cause of suffering and unhappiness.
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Original:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true self and the false self , and sees the false self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
Revised:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true Self and the false self , and sees the false self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
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Original:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true self and the false self , and sees the false self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
Revised:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true self and the false Self , and sees the false self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
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Original:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true self and the false self , and sees the false self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
Revised:  Christianity makes a distinction between the true self and the false self , and sees the false Self negatively, distorted through sin: 'The heart is deceitful above all things, and desperately wicked;
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Original:  The sense of having a self—or self-hood —should, however, not be confused with subjectivity itself.
Revised:  The sense of having a self—or selfhood —should, however, not be confused with subjectivity itself.
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Original: The first-person perspective distinguishes self-hood from personal identity.
Revised: The first-person perspective distinguishes selfhood from personal identity.
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Original:  Whereas "identity" is (literally) samenessShoemaker, D. (Dec 15, 2015) "Personal Identity and Ethics", section "Contemporary Accounts of Personal Identity", The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy (Spring 2016 Edition), ed. Edward N. Zalta - "[...] how can identity - sameness - be based on a relation (consciousness) that changes from moment to moment?" and may involve categorization and labeling, self-hood implies a first-person perspective and suggests potential uniqueness.
Revised:  Whereas "identity" is (literally) samenessShoemaker, D. (Dec 15, 2015) "Personal Identity and Ethics", section "Contemporary Accounts of Personal Identity", The Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy (Spring 2016 Edition), ed. Edward N. Zalta - "[...] how can identity - sameness - be based on a relation (consciousness) that changes from moment to moment?" and may involve categorization and labeling, selfhood implies a first-person perspective and suggests potential uniqueness.
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Original:  Although subjective experience is central to self-hood , the privacy of this experience is only one of many problems in the Philosophy of self and scientific study of consciousness.
Revised:  Although subjective experience is central to selfhood , the privacy of this experience is only one of many problems in the Philosophy of self and scientific study of consciousness.
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Original: Fillemon Shuumbwa Nangolo (born June 4, 1974  ) is the  chief of Ondonga kingdom, a sub-tribe of Owambo people since 2019 in Namibia.
Revised: Fillemon Shuumbwa Nangolo (born June 4, 1974 ) is the reigning chief of Ondonga kingdom, a sub-tribe of Owambo people since 2019 in Namibia.
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Original: Early Life and Education Shuumbwa Nangolo's father is the late Namupala gwaNangolo dhaNamupala gwaMvula yaNangolo dhAmutenya gwaSheya shAmakutuwa and his mother is Marian Josef and was raised by his uncle and predecessor, Omukwaniilwa Immanuel Kauluma Elifas at his palace at Onamungundo.
Revised: Early Life and Education Shuumbwa Nangolo's father is the late Namupala gwaNangolo dhaNamupala gwaMvula yaNangolo dhAmutenya gwaSheya shAmakutuwa and his mother is Maria Josef and was raised by his uncle and predecessor, Omukwaniilwa Immanuel Kauluma Elifas at his palace at Onamungundo.
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Original:  a historical event that attracted thousands of people including Namibian vice president Nangolo Mbumba a nephew to Shuumbwa and other government ministers and senior URL He was officially sworn in by the chairman of the Oukwanyama Traditional Authority, senior traditional councillor George Nelulu, on behalf of the Queen of Oukwanyama, Martha Mwadinomo Nelumbu URL a day after a second High Court bid by a faction supporting Konis Eino Kalenga for the kingship failed. .
Revised:  a historical event that attracted thousands of people including Namibian vice president Nangolo Mbumba a nephew to Shuumbwa and other government ministers and senior URL He was officially sworn in by the chairman of the Oukwanyama Traditional Authority, senior traditional councillor George Nelulu, on behalf of the Queen of Oukwanyama, Martha Mwadinomo Nelumbu URL a day after a second High Court bid by a faction supporting Konis Eino Kalenga for the kingship dismally failed .
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Original: Fillemon Shuumbwa Nangolo (born 4 June 1974 in Enkono, Ondonga) is the reigning chief of Ondonga kingdom, a sub-tribe of Owambo people since 2019 in Namibia.
Revised: Fillemon Shuumbwa Nangolo (born 4 June 1974 in Enkono, Ondonga) is the reigning king of Ondonga kingdom, a sub-tribe of Owambo people since 2019 in Namibia.
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Original:   The possible replacement of (3+)2 by 2+4+ in Corundum. and in Haematite → Diopside (MgCaSi2O6) → Jadeite: (NaAlSi2O6 or Na(Al,Fe3+)Si2O6) center|Diopside can be converted into center|Jadeite by coupled substitution 2 → 2 As in the Spinel groups The site being filled to maintain charge does not have to be a substitution.
Revised:  Despite being nicknamed fool's gold, pyrite is sometimes found in association with small quantities of gold. Gold and arsenic occur as a coupled substitution in the pyrite structure. In the Carlin–type gold deposits, arsenian pyrite contains up to 0.37\% gold by weight. The possible replacement of (3+)2 by 2+4+ in Corundum. and in Haematite → Diopside (MgCaSi2O6) → Jadeite: (NaAlSi2O6 or Na(Al,Fe3+)Si2O6) center|Diopside can be converted into center|Jadeite by coupled substitution 2 → 2 As in the Spinel groups The site being filled to maintain charge does not have to be a substitution.
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Original:  The atoms have to fit together so that their electron shells can interact with one another and  produce a neutral molecule.
Revised:  The atoms have to fit together so that their electron shells can interact with one another and they also have to produce a neutral molecule.
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Original:  Examples Example on bottom where albite (Na Al Si3O8) changes to anorthite (Ca Al2Si2O8), replaces and for Coupled substitutions are common in the silicate minerals where substitutes for in tetrahedral sites.
Revised:  Examples Coupled substitutions are common in the silicate minerals where substitutes for in tetrahedral sites.
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Original: Coupled substitution is the geological process by which two elements simultaneous substitute into a crystal , in order to maintain overall electrical neutrality and  charge constant.
Revised: Coupled substitution is the geological process by which two elements simultaneous substitute into a crystal in order to maintain overall electrical neutrality and charge constant.
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Original: Coupled substitution is the geological process by which two elements simultaneous substitute into a crystal , in order to maintain overall electrical neutrality and  charge constant.
Revised: Coupled substitution is the geological process by which two elements simultaneous substitute into a crystal , in order to maintain overall electrical neutrality and keep the charge constant.
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Original: The possible replacement of (3+)2 by 2+4+ in Corundum. and in Haematite → Diopside (MgCaSi2O6) → Jadeite: (NaAlSi2O6 or Na(Al,Fe3+)Si2O6) center|Diopside can be converted into center|Jadeite by coupled substitution 2 → 2 As in the Spinel groups The site being filled to maintain charge does not have to be a substitution.
Revised: The possible replacement of (3+)2 by 2+4+ in Corundum. and in Haematite → Diopside (MgCaSi2O6) → Jadeite: (NaAlSi2O6 or center|Diopside can be converted into center|Jadeite by coupled substitution 2 → 2 As in the Spinel groups The site being filled to maintain charge does not have to be a substitution.
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Original:  This new mineral would then be Edenite (NaCa2Mg5(Si7Al)O22(OH)2) a variety of hornblende.
Revised:  This new mineral would then be edenite a variety of hornblende.
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Original: Dr. F. Lalnunmawiae is a Mizo national front politician from Mizoram and resides at Samtlang, Aizawl, Mizoram.
Revised: Dr. F. Lalnunmawiae is a Mizo National Front politician from Mizoram and resides at Samtlang, Aizawl, Mizoram.
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Original: Dr. F. Lalnunmawiae is a Mizo National Front politician from Mizoram and resides at Samtlang, Aizawl, Mizoram.
Revised: Dr. F. Lalnunmawia is a Mizo National Front politician from Mizoram and resides at Samtlang, Aizawl, Mizoram.
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Original: History Having grown up in St. Gallen and Basel, and after finishing school and their dentistry studies in Zürich, Haleh and Golnar Abivardi, sisters of Persian heritage, started working as employed dentists in Zürich.
Revised: History Having grown up in St. Gallen and Basel, and after finishing school and their dentistry studies in Zürich, Haleh and Golnar Abivardi, started working as employed dentists in Zürich.
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Original:  They strive to offer high quality services in luxurious vicinities while trying to maintain reasonable prizes and having no necessity for appointments.
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Original:  The goal is to offset from the competition and to provide distinct aesthetic and luxurious beauty and health products for the customer.
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Original:  References External links Official website
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Original:  Founded by dentists and entrepreneurs Haleh and Golnar Abivardi, the company runs branches in various locations besides offering luxury products for oral hygiene.
Revised:  Founded by dentists and entrepreneurs Golnar and Haleh Abivardi, the company runs branches in various locations besides offering luxury products for oral hygiene.
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Original:  Against the family tradition he was educated in English from Barishal and came in touch with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
Revised:  Against the family tradition he was educated in English from Barishal and came into contact with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
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Original:  Thereafter came to Kolkata with his father and attracted towards revolutionary movement.
Revised:  Thereafter he moved to Kolkata with his father and attracted towards revolutionary movement.
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Original:  Bhattacharya became a member of the team of Bipin Behari Ganguly .
Revised:  Bhattacharya became a member of the team of Bipin Behari Ganguli .
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Original: Revolutionary activities Bhattacharya was born in 1882 in Khulna  , British India in a Gurukul family.
Revised: Revolutionary activities Bhattacharya was born in 1882 in Khulna District , British India in a Gurukul family.
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Original:  Against the  family tradition he was educated in English from  Barishal and came into contact with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
Revised:  Against the age old family tradition he was educated in English from Barishal and came into contact with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
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Original:  After returning India he was arrested for  Deoghar Conspiracy case and imprisoned.
Revised:  After returning India he was arrested for involving in Deoghar Conspiracy case and imprisoned.
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Original: Social works After the independence Bhattacharya joined in social activities .
Revised: Social works After the independence Bhattacharya joined in social movement .
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Original:  He lived at Haripal  . Bhattacharya established number of schools  and a college named Vivekananda Mahavidyalaya  in 1966.
Revised:  He lived at Haripal . Bhattacharya established number of schools and a college named Vivekananda Mahavidyalaya , Haripal in 1966.
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Original:  Against the age old family tradition he was educated in English from a school of Barishal and came into contact with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
Revised:  Against the age old family tradition he went to Barishal and entered in a school for English education and came into contact with Ashwini Kumar Dutta.
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Original:  Bhattacharya went to underground and left for Burma.
Revised:  Bhattacharya went to underground and fled to Burma.
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Original:  After returning India  he was arrested for involving in Deoghar Conspiracy case and imprisoned.
Revised:  After returning India , he was arrested for involving in Deoghar Conspiracy case and imprisoned.
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Original:  Social works After the independence Bhattacharya joined in social movement .
Revised:  Social works After the Independence Bhattacharya joined in social movement .
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Original:  In 1951 Assembly Election  he participated from Dhanekhali (Vidhan Sabha constituency) under the banner of Bharatiya Jana Sangha and became runners up.
Revised:  In 1951 Assembly Election , he participated from Dhanekhali (Vidhan Sabha constituency) under the banner of Bharatiya Jana Sangha and became runners up.
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Original:  The law was widely well recieved , and after its passage, Joaquim Nabuco wrote that "the monarchy is more popular than ever."
Revised:  The law was widely well received , and after its passage, Joaquim Nabuco wrote that "the monarchy is more popular than ever."
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Original:  Most of its former members were dispersed and joined the Brazilian Navy as low-rank recruits, since the Navy was perceived as a monarchist bastion in the early republic.
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Original:   On December 23, 1888, members of the Guard interrupted a gathering of Republicans in Rio who were listening to Silva Jardim speak.
Revised:  Police generally ignored the Guard's activities. On December 23, 1888, members of the Guard interrupted a gathering of Republicans in Rio who were listening to Silva Jardim speak.
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Original:  The law was widely well received , and after its passage, Joaquim Nabuco wrote that "the monarchy is more popular than ever."
Revised:  The law was widely well received . After its passage, Joaquim Nabuco wrote that "the monarchy is more popular than ever."
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Original:  Dumitru Mazilu: Member of the International Diplomatic Academy
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Original: From 1965 – 1966, Mazilu served as Director of Securitate in Băneasa.
Revised: From 1965 to 1966, Mazilu served as Director of Securitate in Băneasa.
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Original: From 1965 – 1966, Mazilu served as Director of Securitate in Băneasa.
Revised: From 1965 – 1966, Mazilu served as director of Securitate in Băneasa.
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Original:  From 1965 – 1968, Mazilu was responsible for investigating abuses and irregularities committed during the regime of Gheorghe Gheorghiu-Dej.
Revised:  From 1965 to 1968, Mazilu was responsible for investigating abuses and irregularities committed during the regime of Gheorghe Gheorghiu-Dej.
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Original:  Ceaușescu forbade Mazilu to leave the country in order to prevent him from presenting the report to the United Nations Organization.
Revised:  Ceaușescu forbade Mazilu to leave the country to prevent him from presenting the report to the United Nations Organization.
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Original:  The report detailed Ceaușescu's policy of exporting the majority of Romania's food, and lowering living standards in order to quickly pay off foreign debts.
Revised:  The report detailed Ceaușescu's policy of exporting the majority of Romania's food, and lowering living standards to quickly pay off foreign debts.
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Original: United Nations Chronicle nr. 4/1998 - Defending ...
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Original:  The Universal Declaration of Human Rights During the Romanian Revolution On the night of December 21  , in the midst of the Romanian Revolution, Mazilu was moved to prison along with his wife and son by the Securitate.
Revised:  The Universal Declaration of Human Rights During the Romanian Revolution On the night of 21 , in the midst of the Romanian Revolution, Mazilu was moved to prison along with his wife and son by the Securitate.
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Original:  The same day, Mazilu gave a speech at the government building now occupied by the National Salvation Front lead by Ion Iliescu detailing his opposition to CommunismAlex Mihai Stoenescu - Istoria loviturilor de stat în România, vol. IV, partea a II-a (Editura RAO, 2006) .
Revised:  The same day, Mazilu gave a speech at the government building now occupied by the National Salvation Front lead by Ion Iliescu detailing his opposition to CommunismAlex Mihai Stoenescu – Istoria loviturilor de stat în România, vol. IV, partea a II-a (Editura RAO, 2006) .
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Original:  ANTICOMMUNISM-Speech Mazilu proposed the following points of civic reform:Decembrie '89 - Grupul lui Mazilu, 12 decembrie 2005, Alex Mihai Stoenescu, Jurnalul Național, accesat la 3 iulie 2012REVOLUTIA ROMANA - Proclamatia Revolutiei, Trilulilu The abandonment of a single party state and the bringing about a democratic system with various present systems of government.
Revised:  ANTICOMMUNISM-Speech Mazilu proposed the following points of civic reform:Decembrie '89 – Grupul lui Mazilu, 12 decembrie 2005, Alex Mihai Stoenescu, Jurnalul Național, accesat la 3 iulie 2012REVOLUTIA ROMANA - Proclamatia Revolutiei, Trilulilu The abandonment of a single party state and the bringing about a democratic system with various present systems of government.
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Original:  ANTICOMMUNISM-Speech Mazilu proposed the following points of civic reform:Decembrie '89 - Grupul lui Mazilu, 12 decembrie 2005, Alex Mihai Stoenescu, Jurnalul Național, accesat la 3 iulie 2012REVOLUTIA ROMANA - Proclamatia Revolutiei, Trilulilu The abandonment of a single party state and the bringing about a democratic system with various present systems of government.
Revised:  ANTICOMMUNISM-Speech Mazilu proposed the following points of civic reform:Decembrie '89 - Grupul lui Mazilu, 12 decembrie 2005, Alex Mihai Stoenescu, Jurnalul Național, accesat la 3 iulie 2012REVOLUTIA ROMANA – Proclamatia Revolutiei, Trilulilu The abandonment of a single party state and the bringing about a democratic system with various present systems of government.
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Original:  The FSN proclamation read by Ion Iliescu on the 22 of December 1989 was written by Dumitru Mazilu with some editing by Silviu Brucan.
Revised:  The FSN proclamation read by Ion Iliescu on 22 of December 1989 was written by Dumitru Mazilu with some editing by Silviu Brucan.
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Original:  The FSN proclamation read by Ion Iliescu on the 22 of December 1989 was written by Dumitru Mazilu with some editing by Silviu Brucan.
Revised:  The FSN proclamation read by Ion Iliescu on the 22 December 1989 was written by Dumitru Mazilu with some editing by Silviu Brucan.
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Original:  These tensions culminated when during a march of remembrance for the fallen of the revolution on January 12 , 1990, Mazilu attempted to use the dissatisfaction of the crowd to seize leadership of the FSN from Iliescu.
Revised:  These tensions culminated when during a march of remembrance for the fallen of the revolution on 12 , 1990, Mazilu attempted to use the dissatisfaction of the crowd to seize leadership of the FSN from Iliescu.
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Original:  After being discredited from public opinion, Mazilu resigned from the leadership of the FSN on January 26 , 1990, accusing the Communist practices within the political framework of the new political power of Stalinism.
Revised:  After being discredited from public opinion, Mazilu resigned from the leadership of the FSN on 26 , 1990, accusing the Communist practices within the political framework of the new political power of Stalinism.
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Original:  "The Killing of Professor Culianu", in Lingua Franca, Volume 2, No. 6 - September/October 1992 Mazilu came to understand that the Romanian authorities were likely behind his assault and were attempting to keep him silent as a centre-left political dissident who was critical of both far-right and far-left world views.
Revised:  "The Killing of Professor Culianu", in Lingua Franca, Volume 2, No. 6 – September/October 1992 Mazilu came to understand that the Romanian authorities were likely behind his assault and were attempting to keep him silent as a centre-left political dissident who was critical of both far-right and far-left world views.
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