wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The camera, which is operated by batteries and weighs 70 grams (including the batteries), is hooked onto the cats collar and records their journeys.
Revised:  The camera, which is operated by batteries and weighs 70 grams (including the batteries), is hooked onto the cat's collar and records their journeys.
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Original:  Operating for a maximum of two days, the camera will take a picture every minute.
Revised:  Operating for a maximum of two days, the camera takes a picture every minute.
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Original:  Perthold used his cat as a test subject and found out that his cat was visiting the neighbor's female cat on a regular basis.
Revised:  Perthold used his cat as a test subject and discovered his cat was visiting the neighbor's female cat on a regular basis.
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Original:  Perthold even wrote his own program to wacth the video the cameraproduces .
Revised:  Perthold even wrote his own program to operate and control the camera .
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Original:  Two Italian senators, Rocco Buttiglione (UDC) and Albertina Soliani, (L'Ulivo), in behalf of many othes colleagues, forwarded on June 8th, a request to Senate's administrators for ice cream in Senate's buvette .
Revised:  Two Italian senators, Rocco Buttiglione (UDC) and Albertina Soliani, (L'Ulivo), in behalf of many other colleagues, forwarded on June 8th, a request to Senate's administrators for ice cream in Senate's buvette .
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Original:  Two Italian senators, Rocco Buttiglione (UDC) and Albertina Soliani, (L'Ulivo), in behalf of many othes colleagues, forwarded on June 8th, a request to Senate's administrators for ice cream in Senate's buvette .
Revised:  Two Italian senators, Rocco Buttiglione (UDC) and Albertina Soliani, (L'Ulivo), in behalf of many othes colleagues, forwarded on June 8th, a request to Senate's administrators for ice cream in Senate's cafeteria .
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Original:  SHetty conducted a walkabout of the grounds while meeting with and signing autographs for screaming fans.
Revised:  Shetty conducted a walkabout of the grounds while meeting with and signing autographs for screaming fans.
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Original: A cricket team made up of Bollywood celebrities has beat the Yorkshire opposition in a charity cricket match  held as part of the IIFA Weekend in Yorkshire, England  .
Revised: A cricket team made up of Bollywood celebrities has beaten the Yorkshire opposition in a charity cricket match held as part of the IIFA Weekend in Yorkshire, England .
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Original:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians  . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan  and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
Revised:  The " Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
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Original:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians  . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan  and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
Revised:  The ' Bolly 11 " team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
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Original:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians  . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan  and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
Revised:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the event, followed by actor Salman Khan and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
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Original:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians  . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan  and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
Revised:  The ' Bolly 11 ' team, consisting of Indian actors, took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured more popular British TV stars and musicians . Amitabh Bachchan, film legend and IIFA Brand Ambassador inaugurated the eventfollowed by actor Salman Khan , and Shilpa Shetty who greeted excited fans.
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Original:  Shetty  conducted a walkabout of the grounds while meeting with and signing autographsfor screaming fans .
Revised:  Shetty conducted a walkabout of the grounds , signing autographs .
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Original:  The A-list Bolly team included captain, Saif Ali Khan  , Arjun Rampal, Dino Moreo, Fardeen Khan, Aftab Shivadasani, Ritesh Deshmukh, Sohail Khan, Arshad Warsi, Boman Irani, Upen Patel, Arbaaz Khan, Vishal Bhardwaj and Mohammed Azharuddin.
Revised:  The A-list Bolly team was made up of Saif Ali Khan , Arjun Rampal, Dino Moreo, Fardeen Khan, Aftab Shivadasani, Ritesh Deshmukh, Sohail Khan, Arshad Warsi, Boman Irani, Upen Patel, Arbaaz Khan, Vishal Bhardwaj and Mohammed Azharuddin.
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Original:  While the Yorkshire team displayed the talents of Nick Knowles, Rosalie Birch, Gladstone Small, Devon Malcolm, Jay Sean, Sherwin Campbell, Chris Lewis, Danny McGuire, Harry Gration, Greg Wise, Manish Bhasin, Ajmal Shahzad, Andew Gale, Colin Salmon, Oliver Milburn and MPs Keith Vaz and Shahid Malik.
Revised:  The Yorkshire team displayed the talents of Nick Knowles, Rosalie Birch, Gladstone Small, Devon Malcolm, Jay Sean, Sherwin Campbell, Chris Lewis, Danny McGuire, Harry Gration, Greg Wise, Manish Bhasin, Ajmal Shahzad, Andew Gale, Colin Salmon, Oliver Milburn and MPs Keith Vaz and Shahid Malik.
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Original:  The   game was a light-hearted affair with fans and supporters cheering on the players for both teams.
Revised:  The The game was a light-hearted affair with fans and supporters cheering on the players for both teams.
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Original:  In cricketing spirit, banners featuring slogans "Bollywood Team to Win ' and ' 4 ' filled the Headingley Carnegie Stadium as the game went on.
Revised:  In cricketing spirit, banners featuring slogans "Bollywood Team to Win " and " 4 ' filled the Headingley Carnegie Stadium as the game went on.
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Original:  In cricketing spirit, banners featuring slogans "Bollywood Team to Win ' and ' 4 ' filled the Headingley Carnegie Stadium as the game went on.
Revised:  In cricketing spirit, banners featuring slogans "Bollywood Team to Win ' and ' 4 " filled the Headingley Carnegie Stadium as the game went on.
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Original:  The IIFA XI led by Saif Ali Khan won the match after former Indian captain Kapil Dev hit a boundary off the last ball to score the winning runs.
Revised:  The IIFA XI won the match after former Indian captain Kapil Dev hit a boundary off the last ball to score the winning runs.
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Original:  The Bollywood team won by 143 in 7 overs.
Revised:  The Bollywood team scored 143.
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Original:  The cricket game was part of a wider IIFA weekend taking place in Yorkshire, celebrating Indian cinema and its stars.
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Original: A cricket team made up of Bollywood celebrities has beaten the Yorkshire opposition in a charity cricket match at Headingley, held as part of the International Indian Film Academy ("IIFA") Weekend in Yorkshire, England, celebrating Indian cinema and its stars.
Revised: A cricket team made up of Bollywood celebrities has beaten a Yorkshire opposition in a charity cricket match at Headingley, held as part of the International Indian Film Academy ("IIFA") Weekend in Yorkshire, England, celebrating Indian cinema and its stars.
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Original:  The "Bolly 11" team, consisting of Indian actors  , took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured former English cricketers, British TV stars and musicians and two members of Parliament.
Revised:  The "Bolly 11" team, consisting of Indian actors and cricketers , took on the Yorkshire 11 which featured former English cricketers, British TV stars and musicians and two members of Parliament.
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Original:  He went on to speculate that a cigarette or spontaneos combustion may have caused the blaze.
Revised:  He went on to speculate that a cigarette or spontaneous combustion may have caused the blaze.
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Original: Rear Admiral Damian Carlos of the Philippine Coast Guard told reporters that the fire started in the cargo hold of MV Cataleen-D about 5 a.m.  , and the first distress signal was received by authorities at aproximatly 8 a.m.
Revised: Rear Admiral Damian Carlos of the Philippine Coast Guard told reporters that the fire started in the cargo hold of MV Cataleen-D about 5 a.m. , and the first distress signal was received by authorities at approximately 8 a.m.
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Original:  Carlos said of the Coast Guard  “It was a good thing that the rescuers were on a mission in Corregidor ,”.
Revised:  Carlos said of the Coast Guard , “It was a good thing that the rescuers were on a mission in Corregidor ,”.
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Original:  Carlos said of the Coast Guard  “It was a good thing that the rescuers were on a mission in Corregidor ,”.
Revised:  Carlos said of the Coast Guard “It was a good thing that the rescuers were on a mission in Corregidor .”
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Original:  The ship was owned by Manilla-based San Nicolas Shipping Lines and captained by Danilo Faeldog.
Revised:  The ship was owned by Manila-based San Nicolas Shipping Lines and captained by Danilo Faeldog.
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Original:  The Coast Guard has initiated a full investigation into the cause of today's disaster.
Revised:  The Coast Guard has initiated a full investigation into the cause of the disaster.
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Original:  Six people have been shot and killed and one wounded  inside a home in Delavan, Wisconsin.
Revised:  Six people have been killed and one wounded inside a home in Delavan, Wisconsin.
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Original:  The injured individual is a girl, 2 years-old, who was shot in the chest .
Revised:  The injured girl, 2 years-old, who was shot in the chest .
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Original:  The injured individual is a girl, 2 years-old, who was shot in the chest .
Revised:  The injured individual is a girl, 2 , was shot in the chest .
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Original:  Six were confirmed dead and a seventh victim is currently in a critical condition , " said a Walworth County Swat team spokeswoman.
Revised:  Six were confirmed dead and a seventh victim is currently in a critical condition . " said a Walworth County Swat team spokeswoman.
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Original:  Six were confirmed dead and a seventh victim is currently in a critical condition , " said a Walworth County Swat team spokeswoman.
Revised:  Six were confirmed dead and a seventh victim is currently in a critical condition , " 
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Original: Map highlighting the location of Delavan  . Six people have been killed and one wounded in a shooting incident inside a home in Delavan, Wisconsin.
Revised: The location of Delavan . Six people have been killed and one wounded in a shooting incident inside a home in Delavan, Wisconsin.
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Original:  In 1871 The "The Greatest Show on Earth," also known as the P.T. Barnum Circus, was founded in Delavan.
Revised:  In 1871 "The Greatest Show on Earth," also known as the P.T. Barnum Circus, was founded in Delavan.
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Original: A Walworth County SWAT team spokeswoman stated, " We entered the residence where six gunshot victims were found dead.
Revised: A Walworth County SWAT team spokeswoman stated, We entered the residence where six gunshot victims were found dead.
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Original: A Walworth County SWAT team spokeswoman stated, " We entered the residence where six gunshot victims were found dead.
Revised: A Walworth County SWAT team spokeswoman stated, " We entered the residence where six gunshot victims were found dead.
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Original:  At about 10: 30 p.m. (eastern time) on Saturday night, police received a 911 call of a report of several shots fired.
Revised:  At 10: 30 p.m. (eastern time) on Saturday night, police received a 911 call of a report of several shots fired.
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Original:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barn's said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including , , privacy issues, and government and private sector transparency.
Revised:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barns said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including , , privacy issues, and government and private sector transparency.
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Original:  the barrister served as the leader of during the late 1990s and serve as a staffer.
Revised:  the barrister served as the leader of during the late 1990s and served as a staffer.
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Original:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barns said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including , , privacy issues, and government and private sector transparency.
Revised:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barns said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including , , privacy issues, and government transparency.
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Original:  Barns was personally asked by by Julian Assange to take the position, following Assange's own announcement late last year that he would run for a seat in . John Shipton is already serving as the party's secretary.
Revised:  Barns was personally asked by Julian Assange to take the position, following Assange's own announcement late last year that he would run for a seat in . John Shipton is already serving as the party's secretary.
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Original: Yesterday, was named  's national campaign director following the party receiving support from of  . Barns is not new to political campaigning;
Revised: Yesterday, was named 's national campaign director following the party receiving support from of Melbourne . Barns is not new to political campaigning;
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Original:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barns said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including  , , privacy issues, and government transparency.
Revised:  Julian Assange in Ecuadorian Embassy last year Barns said the WikiLeaks Party's federal platform will focus on several issues including , privacy issues, and government transparency.
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Original:  The first jets will be delivered in 2014.  
Revised:  The first jets will be delivered in 2014. The deal was announced during a large business forum that President Vladimir Putin had set up to showcase his countrie's role in the international market. The deal was the centrepiece of the event.
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Original:  The Dreamliner will be the first commercial ket to be manufactured mainly with carbon-fiber composites instead of the aluminium previously used.
Revised:  The Dreamliner will be the first commercial jet to be manufactured mainly with carbon-fiber composites instead of the aluminium previously used.
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Original:  The deal was announced during a large business forum that President Vladimir Putin had set up to showcase his countrie 's role in the international market.
Revised:  The deal was announced during a large business forum that President Vladimir Putin had set up to showcase his country 's role in the international market.
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Original:  It has been reported that the deal between Boeing and Aeroflot was revived after Boeing promised  technical assistance would be provided to Aeroflot for the new aircraft.
Revised:  It has been reported that the deal between Boeing and Aeroflot was revived after Boeing promised that technical assistance would be provided to Aeroflot for the new aircraft.
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Original:  The double World Champion was penalized by 10 seconds stop-and-go together with Nico Rosberg from Williams-Toyota for the pit-stop error while safety car on the track.
Revised:  The double World Champion was penalized by 10 seconds stop-and-go together with Nico Rosberg from Williams-Toyota for the pit-stop error while the safety car was on the track.
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Original:  Still Alonso continued to battle for pointsfinishing on the 7th place, 21.9 seconds behind his teammate winner .
Revised:  Alonso still battled for points, finishing in 7th place, 21.9 seconds behind his teammate winner .
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Original:  Still Alonso continued to battle for pointsfinishing on the 7th place, 21.9 seconds behind his teammate winner .
Revised:  Still Alonso continued to battle for pointsfinishing on the 7th place, 21.9 seconds behind his winning teammate .
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Original:  It seemed that some of the Formula One drivers forgot how to drive under the safety car conditions, resulted in the black flag (disqualification) for Felipe Massa, Ferrari and Giancarlo Fisichella, Renault.
Revised:  It seemed that some of the Formula One drivers forgot how to drive under safety car conditions, resulted in the black flag (disqualification) for Felipe Massa, Ferrari and Giancarlo Fisichella, Renault.
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Original:  It seemed that some of the Formula One drivers forgot how to drive under the safety car conditions, resulted in the black flag (disqualification) for Felipe Massa, Ferrari and Giancarlo Fisichella, Renault.
Revised:  It seemed that some of the Formula One drivers forgot how to drive under the safety car conditions, resulting in the black flag (disqualification) for Felipe Massa, Ferrari and Giancarlo Fisichella, Renault.
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Original:  The race showed a catastrophic accident with Poland Robert Kubica , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin  .
Revised:  The race featured a catastrophic accident with Poland Robert Kubica , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin .
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Original:  The race showed a catastrophic accident with Poland Robert Kubica , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin  .
Revised:  The race showed a catastrophic accident with Robert Kubica from Poland , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin .
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Original:  The race showed a catastrophic accident with Poland Robert Kubica , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin  .
Revised:  The race showed a catastrophic accident with Poland Robert Kubica , who crashed his BMW on the entry to the hairpin turn .
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Original:  There was nothing left of his car except the driver's monocoque which flew a considerable distance constantly spinning from one concrete wall to another on the other side of the track.
Revised:  There was nothing left of his car except the driver's monocoque which flew a considerable distance , bouncing from one concrete wall to another on the other side of the track.
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Original:  Kubica escaped the crash with just a sprained ankle and concussion  and has said he hopes to compete in the next race ( Indianapolis ).
Revised:  Kubica escaped the crash with just a sprained ankle and concussion , and has said he hopes to compete in the next race ( Indianapolis ).
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Original:  The became the first Formula One victory for Lewis, after he won four consecutive second places in the previous races, with six consecutive podium finishes.
Revised:  This became the first Formula One victory for Lewis, after he won four consecutive second places in the previous races, with six consecutive podium finishes.
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Original:  He now leads the drivers' championship with 48 points, 8 ahead  Alonso.
Revised:  He now leads the drivers' championship with 48 points, 8 ahead of Alonso.
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Original: A father and his son escaped serious injury yesterday when their plane flipped over on landing at an air show at Defford Airfield, near [[w:Worchester| , United Kingdom .
Revised: A father and his son escaped serious injury yesterday when their plane flipped over on landing at an air show at Defford Airfield, near [[w:Worchester| Worchester, England .
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Original:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2.30 pm local time, a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
Revised:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2:30pm local time, a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
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Original:  The plane involved was one of a range of both vintage and modern aircraft being showcased  at the event.
Revised:  The plane involved was one of a range of both vintage and modern aircraft being showcased in front of hundreds of spectators at the event.
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Original:  An investigation has begun to determin the cause of the accident
Revised:  An investigation has begun to determine the cause of the accident
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Original:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2:30pm local time,  a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
Revised:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2:30pm local time, at a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
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Original:  The accident occured at low speed as the plane landed.
Revised:  The accident occurred at low speed as the plane landed.
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Original:  The older man was taken via land ambulance to hospital for an x-ray on his shoulder, but the younger man did not require hospitalizaion .
Revised:  The older man was taken by land ambulance to hospital for an x-ray on his shoulder, but the younger man did not require hospitalizaion .
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Original:  The older man was taken via land ambulance to hospital for an x-ray on his shoulder, but the younger man did not require hospitalizaion .
Revised:  The older man was taken via land ambulance to hospital for an x-ray on his shoulder, but the younger man did not require hospital treatment .
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Original:  However, the air ambulance doctor could not rule out the possibility of them receiving spinal injuries.
Revised:  However, the air ambulance doctor could not rule out the possibility of spinal injuries.
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Original:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2:30pm  local time, at a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
Revised:  The crash occured during Defford Air Day at 2:30pm at local time, at a charitable event to raise money for the Mission Aviation Fellowship and the Warwickshire and Northants Air Ambulance.
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Original:  The accident occurred at  low speed as the plane  landed.
Revised:  The accident occurred at a low speed as the plane landed.
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Original:  The accident occurred at  low speed as the plane  landed.
Revised:  The accident occurred at low speed as the plane was landed.
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Original:  The forward wheel suddenly dug into the soft ground and stopped dead , causing the plane to flip forwards onto it's back.
Revised:  The forward wheel suddenly dug into the soft ground and stopped running , causing the plane to flip forwards onto it's back.
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