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Original:  In modern times, apprenticeships were formalised in 1964 by act of parliament and they continue to be in  use to this day.
Revised:  In modern times, apprenticeships were formalised in 1964 by act of parliament and they continue to be in widespread use to this day.
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Original: The Imperial Edict of the Abdication of the Qing Emperor  was an official order issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the monarch of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution which started in Wuhan .
Revised: The Imperial Edict of the Abdication of the Qing Emperor was an official decree issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the monarch of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution which started in Wuhan .
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Original: The Imperial Edict of the Abdication of the Qing Emperor  was an official order issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the monarch of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution which started in Wuhan .
Revised: The Imperial Edict of the Abdication of the Qing Emperor was an official order issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the monarch of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution .
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Original:  Minister of Feudatory Regions Affairs Dashou ()   .
Revised:  Minister of Feudatory Regions Affairs Dashou () . .
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Original: The Qing Empire was established by the Manchu, who conquered China in alliance with the Mongols.
Revised: The Qing dynasty was established by the Manchu, who conquered China in alliance with the Mongols.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to  loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, wars with foreign powers led to loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to  loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to the loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to  loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to loss of territories and tributary states , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to  loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling the Han nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, the wars with foreign powers led to loss of territories and protectorates , such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling Chinese nationalism.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, wars with foreign powers led to the loss of territories and tributary states, such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling Chinese nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, wars with foreign powers led to the loss of territories and tributary states, such as Hong Kong in the First Opium War and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling Chinese nationalism.
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Original:  In the late 19 century, wars with foreign powers led to the loss of territories and tributary states, such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly shaked Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling Chinese nationalism.
Revised:  In the late 19 century, wars with foreign powers led to the loss of territories and tributary states, such as Hong Kong in the Opium War with Britain and Korea in the First Sino-Japanese War, which significantly reduced the Chinese people's trust in the empire, fueling Chinese nationalism.
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Original:  The sentiment was strengthened by the failed political reform, where the claim to form a constitutional monarchy ended up with the establishment of  Prince Qing's Cabinet with the majority being part of the royal family in May 1911.
Revised:  The sentiment was strengthened by the failed political reform, where the claim to form a constitutional monarchy ended up with the establishment of the Prince Qing's Cabinet with the majority being part of the royal family in May 1911.
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Original:  The sentiment was strengthened by the failed political reform, where the claim to form a constitutional monarchy ended up with the establishment of  Prince Qing's Cabinet with the majority being part of the royal family in May 1911.
Revised:  The sentiment was strengthened by the failed political reform, where the claim to form a constitutional monarchy ended up with the establishment of Prince Qing's Cabinet with the majority being part of the imperial family in May 1911.
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Original:  In response to the call for constitutional democracy, the Imperial Government appointed Yuan Shikai as the prime minister, yet Yuan continued to negotiate with the revolutionaries who later offered to make Yuan the first president of the republican China and to provide preferential treatment for the imperial family.
Revised:  In response to the call for constitutional democracy, the Imperial Government appointed Yuan Shikai as the prime minister, yet Yuan continued to negotiate with the revolutionaries who later offered to make Yuan the first president of the Republic of China and to provide preferential treatment for the imperial family.
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Original:  To confront the internal pressure, Yuan ordered 50 of generals and senior officials in Beiyang Army, led by General Duan Qirui, to publish telegraphes calling for peace and threatening the royal family.
Revised:  To confront the internal pressure, Yuan ordered 50 of generals and senior officials in Beiyang Army, led by General Duan Qirui, to publish telegraphes calling for peace and threatening the imperial family.
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Original:  The Empress Dowager Longyu, on behalf of his 6-year-old son, the Emperor Xuantong , issued the imperial edict that abandon the power as the ruler of China and two sequent edicts.
Revised:  The Empress Dowager Longyu, on behalf of the Xuantong Emperor , issued the imperial edict that abandon the power as the ruler of China and two sequent edicts.
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Original:  The Empress Dowager Longyu, on behalf of his 6-year-old son, the Emperor Xuantong , issued the imperial edict that abandon the power as the ruler of China and two sequent edicts.
Revised:  The Empress Dowager Longyu, on behalf of his 6-year-old son, the Emperor Xuantong , issued the imperial edict which transferred power to the nascent Republic of China and two sequent edicts.
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Original:  lit. "Xuantong Emperor's Abdication Edict") was an official decree issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the monarch of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution.
Revised:  lit. "Xuantong Emperor's Abdication Edict") was an official decree issued by the Empress Dowager Longyu on behalf of the six-year-old Xuantong Emperor, who was the last emperor of the Qing dynasty, on 12 February 1912, as a response to the Xinhai Revolution.
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Original:  However, a report on Shen Pao , a leading Shanghai newspaper then, on 22 February 1912, titled the sad words by the empress when issuing the edict of the abdication, says that the edict was first drafted by Zhang Yuanqi, the Deputy Minister of Education, amended by Xu Shichang, shown to the Empress by Yuan Shikai on 25 January 1912.
Revised:  However, a report on Shen-Pao , a leading Shanghai newspaper then, on 22 February 1912, titled the sad words by the empress when issuing the edict of the abdication, says that the edict was first drafted by Zhang Yuanqi, the Deputy Minister of Education, amended by Xu Shichang, shown to the Empress by Yuan Shikai on 25 January 1912.
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Original: Aftermath The Articles of Favorable Treatment of the Great Qing Emperor After His Abdication () allowed the Xuantong Emperor to retain his imperial title and enjoy other privileges following his abdication, resulting in the existence of a nominal court in the Forbidden City called the "Remnant Court of the Abdicated Qing Imperial Family" () from 1912 to 1924.
Revised: Aftermath The Articles of Favourable Treatment of the Great Qing Emperor After His Abdication () allowed the Xuantong Emperor to retain his imperial title and enjoy other privileges following his abdication, resulting in the existence of a nominal court in the Forbidden City called the "Remnant Court of the Abdicated Qing Imperial Family" () from 1912 to 1924.
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Original: Aftermath The Articles of Favorable Treatment of the Great Qing Emperor After His Abdication () allowed the Xuantong Emperor to retain his imperial title and enjoy other privileges following his abdication, resulting in the existence of a nominal court in the Forbidden City called the "Remnant Court of the Abdicated Qing Imperial Family" () from 1912 to 1924.
Revised: Aftermath The Articles of Favorable Treatment of the Great Qing Emperor after His Abdication allowed the Xuantong Emperor to retain his imperial title and enjoy other privileges following his abdication, resulting in the existence of a nominal court in the Forbidden City called the "Remnant Court of the Abdicated Qing Imperial Family" () from 1912 to 1924.
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Original:  Since 1975, the scroll was collected by the Museum of the Chinese Revolution, which is now known as the National Museum of China.
Revised:  Since 1975, the scroll has been part of the collection of the Museum of the Chinese Revolution, which is now known as the National Museum of China.
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Original:  Since 1975, the scroll was collected by the Museum of the Chinese Revolution, which is now known as the National Museum of China.
Revised:  Since 1975, the scroll was collected by the Museum of the Chinese Revolution, now known as the National Museum of China.
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Original:  The organization in charge of the program is called the National Joint Apprenticeship and Training Committee .
Revised:  The organization in charge of the program is called the National Joint Apprenticeship and Training Committee 
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Original:   Infrastructure In Germany, there are 342 recognized trades (Ausbildungsberufe) where an apprenticeship can be completed.
Revised: Background Infrastructure In Germany, there are 342 recognized trades (Ausbildungsberufe) where an apprenticeship can be completed.
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Original:   Infrastructure In Germany, there are 342 recognized trades (Ausbildungsberufe) where an apprenticeship can be completed.
Revised:  An apprenticeship is a system for training a new generation of practitioners of a trade or profession with on-the-job training and often some accompanying study (classroom work and reading). Apprenticeships can also enable practitioners to gain a license to practice in a regulated profession. Most of their training is done while working for an employer who helps the apprentices learn their trade or profession, in exchange for their continued labour for an agreed period after they have achieved measurable competencies. Infrastructure In Germany, there are 342 recognized trades (Ausbildungsberufe) where an apprenticeship can be completed.
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Original:  This is frequently the case for immigrants from countries without a compatible professional training system .
Revised:  This is frequently the case for immigrants from countries without a compatible professional training system 
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Original: This large array of tests can be categorised into sub-specialities of: General or routine chemistry – commonly ordered blood chemistries (e.g., liver and kidney function tests).
Revised: This large array of tests can be categorised into sub-specialities as indicated below. General or routine chemistry – commonly ordered blood chemistries (e.g., liver and kidney function tests).
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Clinical Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Clinical Biochemistry Carbohydrate Clinical Biochemistry Lipid Clinical Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Clinical Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Clinical Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal  Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein  Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic  Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal  Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemistry Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
Revised: pathology/Clinical Chemistry Renal Chemistry Endocrinology Electrophoresis Protein Biochemistry Carbohydrate Biochemistry Lipid Biochemistry Liver or hepatic Chemistry and Clotology Immunochemistry Cardiochemistry Gastrointestinal Chemistry Fluid and Electrolytes Chemical pathology Tumor/Cancer Chemistry Microbial biochemistry Serochemistry Vitaminology Toxicology and Therapeutic drug monitoring Biotechnology Production of biologicals and Techniques Public Health Chemistry and Epidemiology
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Original:  It is an applied form of biochemistry (not to be confused with medicinal chemistry, which involves basic research for drug development).
Revised:  It is an applied form of biochemistry (not to be co infused with medicinal chemistry, which involves basic research for drug development).
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Original:  Tests and Sub-specialties of Clinical Chemistry or Chemical pathology or Clinical Biochemistry
Revised:  Sub-specialties of Clinical Chemistry or Chemical pathology or Clinical Biochemistry
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Original:  It is an applied form of biochemistry (not to be co infused with medicinal chemistry, which involves basic research for drug development).
Revised:  It is an applied form of biochemistry (not to be confused with medicinal chemistry, which involves basic research for drug development).
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Original:  hand shows size Clinical chemistry or Chemical pathology (also known as  clinical biochemistry or medical biochemistry) is the area of chemistry that is generally concerned with analysis of bodily fluids for diagnostic and therapeutic purposes.
Revised:  hand shows size Clinical chemistry (also known as clinical biochemistry or medical biochemistry) is the area of chemistry that is generally concerned with analysis of bodily fluids for diagnostic and therapeutic purposes.
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Original:  hand shows size Clinical chemistry or Chemical pathology (also known as  clinical biochemistry or medical biochemistry) is the area of chemistry that is generally concerned with analysis of bodily fluids for diagnostic and therapeutic purposes.
Revised:  hand shows size Clinical chemistry or Chemical pathology (also known as chemical pathology, clinical biochemistry or medical biochemistry) is the area of chemistry that is generally concerned with analysis of bodily fluids for diagnostic and therapeutic purposes.
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Original:  This large array of tests can be categorised into sub-specialities as indicated below.
Revised:  This large array of tests can be categorised into sub-specialities of:
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Original: Antibacterial and potential immunosuppressive properties Studies indicate creatinine can be effective at killing bacteria of many species in both the Gram positive and Gram negative as well as diverse antibiotic resistant bacterial strains.
Revised: Antibacterial and potential immunosuppressive properties Studies indicate creatinine can be effective at killing bacteria of many species in both the Gram positive and Gram negative as well as diverse antibiotic resistantr bacterial strains.
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Original:  ACE inhibitors provided survival benefits for patients with heart failure and slow the disease progression in patients with chronic kidney disease.
Revised:  ACE inhibitors provide survival benefits for patients with heart failure and slow the disease progression in patients with chronic kidney disease.
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Original: Category:Nephrology Creatinine ( or ;
Revised:  Creatinine ( or ;
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Original: Creatinine starts to decompose around 300 °C . See also Cystatin C –
Revised: Creatinine starts to decompose around 300 °C See also Cystatin C –
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Original:  novel marker of kidney function Jaffe reaction – an example of creatinine assay methodology Rhabdomyolysis – may be diagnosed using creatinine levels Nephrotic syndrome%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References External links Creatinine at Lab Tests Online Creatinine: analyte monograph – The Association for Clinical Biochemistry and Laboratory Medicine%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Guanidines Category:Metabolism Category:Nephrology Category:Renal physiology Category:Imidazolidin
Revised:  novel marker of kidney function Jaffe reaction – an example of creatinine assay methodology Rhabdomyolysis – may be diagnosed using creatinine levels Nephrotic syndrome%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Creatinine at Lab Tests Online Creatinine: analyte monograph – The Association for Clinical Biochemistry and Laboratory Medicine%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Guanidines Category:Metabolism Category:Nephrology Category:Renal physiology Category:Imidazolidin
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