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Original:  This has never extended to racial relationship however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on its view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical URL Many Vietnamese also believe that if not for the conquest, Champa might have remained a backward country like Laos and Cambodia, and improvement could be seen under Vietnamese rule rather than Cham rule.
Revised:  This has never extended to racial relationship however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on its view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical URL Many Vietnamese also believe that if not for the conquest, Champa might have remained an underdeveloped country like Laos and Cambodia, and improvement could be seen under Vietnamese rule rather than Cham rule.
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Original:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is totally URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, surprisingly the persecution of Chams is totally unknown in Muslim world.
Revised:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, surprisingly the persecution of Chams is totally unknown in Muslim world.
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Original:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is totally URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, surprisingly the persecution of Chams is totally unknown in Muslim world.
Revised:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is totally URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, the persecution of Chams is totally unknown in Muslim world.
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Original:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is totally URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, surprisingly the persecution of Chams is totally unknown in Muslim world.
Revised:  although Champa did not exist, but the Vietnamese government since modern days had tried to reconcile and research history of Champa as an entity and its own civilization, culture and customs, thus the Cham nationalist narrative of persecution is totally URL Other opinions In the Muslim world, where the Chams seemed to have a close bond due to religious conversion to Islam in 15th century, surprisingly the persecution of Chams is little-known in the Muslim world.
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Original: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of Champa and its eventual separation from Vietnam and achieving status as a sovereign state .
Revised: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of the Cham people and its eventual separation from Vietnam and achieving status as a sovereign state .
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Original: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of Champa and its eventual separation from Vietnam and achieving status as a sovereign state .
Revised: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of Champa and its eventual separation from Vietnam .
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Original: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of the Cham people and its eventual separation from Vietnam.
Revised: ]] The Champa independence movement is a movement for the independence of the Cham people and its attempt to separate from Vietnam.
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Original: Arguments against independence According to Cham activists, the Vietnamese, regardless of political stances, has been strongly against any kind of independence movement by the Chams, and thus hostile to  Champa independence movement.
Revised: Arguments against independence According to Cham activists, the Vietnamese, regardless of political stances, have been strongly against any kind of independence movement by the Chams, and thus hostile to Champa independence movement.
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Original: Arguments against independence According to Cham activists, the Vietnamese, regardless of political stances, has been strongly against any kind of independence movement by the Chams, and thus hostile to  Champa independence movement.
Revised: Arguments against independence According to Cham activists, the Vietnamese, regardless of political stances, has been strongly against any kind of independence movement by the Chams, and thus hostile to the Champa independence movement.
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Original:  This has never extended to racial relationship  however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on its view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical discourses .
Revised:  This has never extended to racial relationship , however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on its view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical discourses .
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Original:  This has never extended to racial relationship  however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on its view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical discourses .
Revised:  This has never extended to racial relationship however, as Vietnamese people, including many Overseas Vietnamese, are totally indifferent on their view with the Chams as a fellow people and unaware with historical discourses .
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Original:  Po Dharma, who was a major researcher of Champa's history, while critical to the Vietnamese government's treatment on the Chams, believed that Vietnam should have to respect the Cham heritage as Champa's history is often intertwined with Vietnamese history, if not to say, part of it.
Revised:  Po Dharma, who was a major researcher of Champa's history, while critical to the Vietnamese government's treatment of the Chams, believed that Vietnam should have to respect the Cham heritage as Champa's history is often intertwined with Vietnamese history, if not to say, part of it.
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Original:  Po Dharma, who was a major researcher of Champa's history, while critical to the Vietnamese government's treatment on the Chams, believed that Vietnam should have to respect the Cham heritage as Champa's history is often intertwined with Vietnamese history, if not to say, part of it.
Revised:  Po Dharma, who was a major researcher of Champa's history, while critical to the Vietnamese government's treatment on the Chams, believed that Vietnam should respect the Cham heritage as Champa's history is often intertwined with Vietnamese history, if not to say, part of it.
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Original: He is not among the "British scientists" in the Russian internet In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
Revised:  In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
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Original: He is not among the "British scientists " in the Russian internet In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
Revised: In the Russian internet, he is not among the "British scientists " in the Russian internet In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
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Original: He is not among the "British scientists " in the Russian internet In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
Revised: He is not among the top British scientists In modern Russian culture "British scientists" () is a running joke used as an ironic reference to absurd news reports about scientific discoveries: "British scientists managed to establish that..." It has also become a Russian internet meme.
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Original:   The British themselves have a similar concept referring to trivial, useless research, "University of the Bleedin' Obvious", coined in 2009 by two editors of The Independent, Steve Connor and Jeremy Lawrence, in a review of this kind of research.
Revised:  British equivalent The British themselves have a similar concept referring to trivial, useless research, "University of the Bleedin' Obvious", coined in 2009 by two editors of The Independent, Steve Connor and Jeremy Lawrence, in a review of this kind of research.
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Original: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
Revised: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
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Original: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
Revised: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
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Original: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
Revised: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
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Original: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:Russian humour Category:Running gags Category:Cultural depictions of scientists Category:Internet memes introduced in 20
Revised: Independent: Some science confirms what any idiot already could guess" Images of bikini-clad women make men more sexist The more fit you are the longer you will live Hurrying makes people less attentive Binge drinkers are more likely to fall over See also Ig Nobel Prize Junk science Golden Fleece Award%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References ove
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Original: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 , Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of the Amman.
Revised: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 is Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of the Amman.
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Original: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 , Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of the Amman.
Revised: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 , Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of Amman.
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Original:  In 1964 he joined the united Arab command in Egypt , He was promoted to the command of an infantry brigade.
Revised:  In 1964 he joined the united Arab command in Egypt . He was promoted to the command of an infantry brigade.
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Original:  In the mid-60s , Bashir created the first military security unit, and later became the Director of Military Intelligence of Jordan.
Revised:  In the mid-1960s , Bashir created the first military security unit, and later became the Director of Military Intelligence of Jordan.
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Original: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 is Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of Amman.
Revised: Muhammad Bashir Ismail ash-Shishani (born 1933 in Zarqa, Jordan) is a Jordanian Major General of the Royal Jordanian Army and the former Minister of Agriculture of Jordan, and Mayor of Amman.
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Original:  In the serine of the 70s , he continued his military training at the Royal Defense College in London and a year later became Deputy Chief of Staff, after being appointed Brigadier General.
Revised:  In the serine of the 1970s , he continued his military training at the Royal Defense College in London and a year later became Deputy Chief of Staff, after being appointed Brigadier General.
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Original:  At early presentation of pregnancy at around 6-8 weeks, early dating ultrasound scan may be offered to help confirm the gestational age of the embryo and check for a single or twin pregnancy, but such a scan is unable detect common abnormalities.
Revised:  At early presentation of pregnancy at around 6 weeks, early dating ultrasound scan may be offered to help confirm the gestational age of the embryo and check for a single or twin pregnancy, but such a scan is unable detect common abnormalities.
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Original: First trimester At early presentation of pregnancy at around 6 weeks, early dating ultrasound scan may be offered to help confirm the gestational age of the embryo and check for a single or twin pregnancy, but such a scan is unable  detect common abnormalities.
Revised: First trimester At early presentation of pregnancy at around 6 weeks, early dating ultrasound scan may be offered to help confirm the gestational age of the embryo and check for a single or twin pregnancy, but such a scan is unable to detect common abnormalities.
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Original:  First Trimester Combined Test has a sensitivity (i.e. detection rate for abnormalities) of 82–87\% and a false-positive rate  around 5\%.
Revised:  First Trimester Combined Test has a sensitivity (i.e. detection rate for abnormalities) of 82–87\% and a false-positive rate of around 5\%.
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Original:  The scan can detect anencephaly, open spina bifida, cleft lip, diaphragmatic hernia, gastrochisis , omphalocele, congenital heart defect, bilateral renal agenesis, osteochondrodysplasia, Edwards syndrome, and Patau syndrome.
Revised:  The scan can detect anencephaly, open spina bifida, cleft lip, diaphragmatic hernia, gastroschisis , omphalocele, congenital heart defect, bilateral renal agenesis, osteochondrodysplasia, Edwards syndrome, and Patau syndrome.
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Original:  Also, patient may skip  1st trimester screening entirely and receive only a 2nd trimester Quad test, with an 81\% sensitivity for Down Syndrome and 5\% false-positive rate.
Revised:  Also, patient may skip the 1st trimester screening entirely and receive only a 2nd trimester Quad test, with an 81\% sensitivity for Down Syndrome and 5\% false-positive rate.
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Original:  Purpose There are three purposes of prenatal diagnosis: (1) to enable timely medical or surgical treatment of a condition before or after birth, (2) to give the parents the chance to abort a fetus with the diagnosed condition, and (3) to give parents the chance to prepare psychologically, socially, financially, and medically for a baby with a health problem or disability, or for the likelihood of a stillbirth.
Revised: Prenatal testing in recent years has been moving towards non-invasive methods to determine the fetal risk for genetic disorders. The rapid advancement of modern high-performance molecular technologies along with the discovery of cell-free fetal DNA (cffDNA) in maternal plasma has led to new methods for the determination of fetal chromosomal aneuploidies. This type of testing is referred to as non-invasive prenatal testing (NIPT). Invasive procedures remain important, especially for their diagnostic value in confirming positive non-invasive findings and detecting genetic disorders. Purpose There are three purposes of prenatal diagnosis: (1) to enable timely medical or surgical treatment of a condition before or after birth, (2) to give the parents the chance to abort a fetus with the diagnosed condition, and (3) to give parents the chance to prepare psychologically, socially, financially, and medically for a baby with a health problem or disability, or for the likelihood of a stillbirth.
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Original:  He then became the head of the Gorontalo City Tourism Office and and the North Sulawesi Province Public Relations Bureau .
Revised:  He then led the Gorontalo City Tourism Office and and the North Sulawesi Province Public Relations Bureau .
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Original:  He then became the head of the Gorontalo City Tourism Office and and the North Sulawesi Province Public Relations Bureau .
Revised:  He then became the head of the Gorontalo City Tourism Office . He finally became head of the North Sulawesi Province Public Relations Bureau .
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Original:  He initially served as Gorontalo Regency Regional Secretary before being elected Regent of Gorontalo Regency in 2005.
Revised:  He initially served as Gorontalo Regency Regional Secretary before being elected Regent of Gorontalo Regency .
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Original: Ajatashatru sent his chief minister Vassakara to infiltrate the Vajji confederacy and within three years he had managed to split the Vajjis and also demolished the alters in Vaishali.
Revised: Ajatashatru sent his chief minister Vassakara to infiltrate the Vajji confederacy and within three years he had managed to split the Vajjis and also demolished the altars in Vaishali.
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Original:  As the war began, King Chetaka  who was a devout follower of Lord Mahavira, had a vow to not shoot more than one arrow per day in a war.
Revised:  As the war began, King Chetaka , who was a devout follower of Lord Mahavira, had a vow to not shoot more than one arrow per day in a war.
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Original:  As the war began, King Chetaka  who was a devout follower of Lord Mahavira, had a vow to not shoot more than one arrow per day in a war.
Revised:  As the war began, King Chetaka who was a devout follower of Mahavira, had a vow to not shoot more than one arrow per day in a war.
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Original: Buddhist tradition According to the Buddhist tradition, there was a diamond mine near a village on the river Ganges.
Revised:  According to the Buddhist tradition, there was a diamond mine near a village on the river Ganges.
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Original:  He sent his chief minister Vassakara to Buddha to ask him the purpose of Vaishali being invincible, to which Buddha gave seven reasons which included Vajjis being punctual to the meetings, their disciplined behaviour, their respect for elders, respect for women, they do not marry their daughters forcefully, they give spiritual protection to the Arhats, and the main reason was the Chaityas (altar) inside the town.
Revised:  He sent his chief minister Vassakara to Buddha to ask him the purpose of Vaishali being invincible, to which Buddha gave seven reasons which included Vajjis being punctual to the meetings, their disciplined behaviour, thmeir respect for elders, respect for women, they do not marry their daughters forcefully, they give spiritual protection to the Arhats, and the main reason was the Chaityas (altar) inside the town.
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Original:  The testimonies of clients who tried the various treatments gives energy to the episodes, but they don't have the humor and production value of a series like The Goop Lab . Jonathan Jarry of the Office for Science and Society says the series "observes but never judges, and this impartial approach causes it to commit the sin of false balance."
Revised:  The testimonies of clients who tried the various treatments gives energy to the episodes, but they don't have the humor and production value of a series like The Goop Lab Jonathan Jarry of the Office for Science and Society says the series "observes but never judges, and this impartial approach causes it to commit the sin of false balance."
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Original:  Presented without a narrator, the audience is left to make up his own mind about the information presented.
Revised:  Presented without a narrator, the audience is left to make up his own minds about the information presented.
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