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Original:   Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a tiny town named Peace River . Massimo's childhood was mostly spent in a much smaller town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, known as Little Buffalo.
Revised:  Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a small town named Peace River . Massimo's childhood was mostly spent in a much smaller town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, known as Little Buffalo.
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Original:   Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a tiny town named Peace River . Massimo's childhood was mostly spent in a much smaller town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, known as Little Buffalo.
Revised:  Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a tiny town named Peace River and was raised in a town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, known as Little Buffalo.
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Original:   Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a tiny town named Peace River . Massimo's childhood was mostly spent in a much smaller town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, known as Little Buffalo.
Revised:  Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in the wilds of northern Alberta, Canada in a tiny town named Peace River . Massimo's childhood was mostly spent in a much smaller town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, called Little Buffalo.
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Original:  Massimo was raised as a member of the Lubicon Creetribe , one of Canada’s First Nations  .
Revised:  Massimo was raised as a member of the Lubicon Creetribe , one of Canada’s First Nations tribes .
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Original:  Massimo was raised in a community similar to that of a traditional tribal community , living off the land, hunting moose, drying meat, using local plants as medicines, exploring boreal forests and muskeg swamps.
Revised:  Massimo was raised with traditional tribal customs , living off the land, hunting moose, drying meat, using local plants as medicines, exploring boreal forests and muskeg swamps.
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Original:  Massimo was raised in a community similar to that of a traditional tribal community , living off the land, hunting moose, drying meat, using local plants as medicines, exploring boreal forests and muskeg swamps.
Revised:  Massimo was raised in a community similar to that of a traditional tribal community , living off the land, hunting , using local plants as medicines, exploring boreal forests and muskeg swamps.
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Original:  In Downstream: Reimagining Water  she authored the chapter  “From Our Home Lands to the Tar Sands.
Revised:  In Downstream: Reimagining Water , she authored the chapter “From Our Home Lands to the Tar Sands.
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Original:  In Downstream: Reimagining Water  she authored the chapter  “From Our Home Lands to the Tar Sands.
Revised:  In Downstream: Reimagining Water she authored the chapter , “From Our Home Lands to the Tar Sands.
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Original:  ” She also authored the chapter  “Awaiting Justice: The Ceaseless Struggle of the Lubicon Cree.” in A Line in the Tar Sands: Struggles for Environmental Justice.
Revised:  " She also authored the chapter “Awaiting Justice: The Ceaseless Struggle of the Lubicon Cree.” in A Line in the Tar Sands: Struggles for Environmental Justice.
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Original:  ” She also authored the chapter  “Awaiting Justice: The Ceaseless Struggle of the Lubicon Cree.” in A Line in the Tar Sands: Struggles for Environmental Justice.
Revised:  ” She also authored the chapter , “Awaiting Justice: The Ceaseless Struggle of the Lubicon Cree.” in A Line in the Tar Sands: Struggles for Environmental Justice.
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Original: Melina Laboucan-Massimo is a Greenpeace Activist who advocates for indigenous rights and ecological well-being in Canada.
Revised: Melina Laboucan-Massimo is a Greenpeace activist who advocates for indigenous rights and ecological well-being in Canada.
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Original: Early Life and Education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in of northern Alberta, Canada in a small town named Peace River and was raised in a town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, called Little Buffalo.
Revised: Early life and education Melina Laboucan-Massimo was born in of northern Alberta, Canada in a small town named Peace River and was raised in a town 65 miles to the east of Peace River, called Little Buffalo.
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Original:  External links Category:Cree people Category:People from Alberta Category:First Nations activists Category:Writers from Alberta Category:Canadian women environmentalists Category:Canadian environmentalis
Revised:  Category:Cree people Category:People from Alberta Category:First Nations activists Category:Writers from Alberta Category:Canadian women environmentalists Category:Canadian environmentalis
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Original:  She holds a Master’s  in Indigenous Governance from the University of Victoria and received an Indigenous Knowledge and Climate Change Fellowship while studying.
Revised:  She holds a Master’s degree in Indigenous Governance from the University of Victoria and received an Indigenous Knowledge and Climate Change Fellowship while studying.
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Original:  She holds a Master’s degree in Indigenous Governance from the University of Victoria and is a Fellow at the David Suzuki Foundation.
Revised:  She holds a Master’s in Indigenous Governance from the University of Victoria and is a Fellow at the David Suzuki Foundation.
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Original:  She brought her masters thesis to life with the installation of a 20.8-kilowatt solar installation that powers the health centre in her community of Little Buffalo.
Revised:  She brought her masters thesis to life with the installation of a solar panel system in her community of Little Buffalo.
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Original:  Career Melina holds a Master’s degree in Indigenous Governance from the University of Victoria with a focus on Renewable Energy .
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Original:  Her studies at the University of Victoria focused on indigenous rights and responsibilities, media literacy and resource extraction.
Revised:  Her studies at the University of Victoria focused on Indigenous rights and responsibilities, media literacy and resource extraction.
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Original:  The first three created their own ideologies of transcendence throughout history such as Calderonismo, figuerismo and communismo a la tica (tico-style communism).
Revised:  The first three created their own ideologies of transcendence throughout history such as Calderonismo, Figuerismo and communismo a la tica (tico-style communism).
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Original: It is known as Social Guarantees to a series of progressive political reforms made in Costa Rica in the 1940s as a result of the alliance between various political and religious figures, for the benefit of the working URL Although there were several actors behind them, the three main leaders of them were: Creation of the Costa Rican Social Security Fund that universalized healthcare.
Revised: It is known as Social Guarantees to a series of progressive political reforms made in Costa Rica in the 1940s as a result of the alliance between various political and religious figures, for the benefit of the working classes. Although there were several actors behind them, the three main leaders of them were: Creation of the Costa Rican Social Security Fund that universalized healthcare.
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Original:  Uninsured persons (unemployed, for example) can also receive the services of the Caja on credit and generally at lower costs than a private medical URL Creation of the University of Costa Rica, which provides higher education to Costa Ricans.
Revised:  Uninsured persons (unemployed, for example) can also receive the services of the Caja on credit and generally at lower costs than a private medical service.www.ts.ucr.ac.cr/binarios/pela/pl-000358.pdf Creation of the University of Costa Rica, which provides higher education to Costa Ricans.
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Original:  In 1948 after that year's elections between the Victory Bloc (the coalition of Calderón and Communists, the latter participating as part of the so-called Popular Fronts that took place in several nations at the international URL that nominated Calderón for the second time and the opposition that postulated Ulate, both sides are accused of electoral fraud and the war of 48 breaks out.
Revised:  In 1948 after that year's elections between the Victory Bloc (the coalition of Calderón and Communists, the latter participating as part of the so-called Popular Fronts that took place in several nations at the international level) that nominated Calderón for the second time and the opposition that postulated Ulate, both sides are accused of electoral fraud and the war of 48 breaks out.
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Original:  Outcome Social Guarantees had an important impact on Costa Rican social and economic URL Universal healthcare has allowed the country to have one of the highest health rates (it is currently considered an important destination for medical tourism and has the highest levels of lowest of infant mortality in Latin America only below URL compulsory public education up to high school has allowed it to have a literacy level of 98\% (one of the highest in Latin America)
Revised:  Outcome Social Guarantees had an important impact on Costa Rican social and economic development. Universal healthcare has allowed the country to have one of the highest health rates (it is currently considered an important destination for medical tourism and has the highest levels of lowest of infant mortality in Latin America only below URL compulsory public education up to high school has allowed it to have a literacy level of 98\% (one of the highest in Latin America)
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Original:  while the creation of the ICE has provided the country with accessibility in telecommunications and electrification of 90\% of the URL
Revised:  while the creation of the ICE has provided the country with accessibility in telecommunications and electrification of 90\% of the territory.
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Original:  Uninsured persons (unemployed, for example) can also receive the services of the Caja on credit and generally at lower costs than a private medical service.www.ts.ucr.ac.cr/binarios/pela/pl-000358.pdf Creation of the University of Costa Rica, which provides higher education to Costa Ricans.
Revised:  Uninsured persons (unemployed, for example) can also receive the services of the Caja on credit and generally at lower costs than a private medical URL Creation of the University of Costa Rica, which provides higher education to Costa Ricans.
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Original:  These reforms were included in a specific chapter of the Political Constitution.www.laboralred.net/leer.php/195 Another important aspect is the Labor Code,
Revised:  These reforms were included in a specific chapter of the Political URL Another important aspect is the Labor Code,
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Original:  which provides Costa Rican wage earners with a series of rights that are even higher than those of some developed countries (such as the United URL and according to some studies may have contributed to the creation of a strong middle URL In any case in Costa Rica there was never the semifeudalization that occurred in the rest of Central America, and since its identity began to develop, the differences between social classes were never very URL
Revised:  which provides Costa Rican wage earners with a series of rights that are even higher than those of some developed countries (such as the United States) and according to some studies may have contributed to the creation of a strong middle URL In any case in Costa Rica there was never the semifeudalization that occurred in the rest of Central America, and since its identity began to develop, the differences between social classes were never very URL
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Original: Rafael Ángel Calderón Guardia, president in the 1940-1944 period and leader of the National Republican Party and the political tendency known as Calderonismo.
Revised: Rafael Ángel Calderón Guardia, president in the 1940–1944 period and leader of the National Republican Party and the political tendency known as Calderonismo.
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Original:  The militants called it partial revenge for the Ogossagou massacre and claimed that 16 soldiers had been killed, although the Malian Defence Ministry put the death toll at 11 
Revised:  The militants called it partial revenge for the Ogossagou massacre and claimed that 16 soldiers had been killed, although the Malian Defence Ministry put the death toll at 11. 
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Original:  Symbolic language in art may be used to communicate meaning or produce an effect such as emotions or feelings that are not directly depicted.
Revised:  Symbolic language in art uses imagery to communicate meaning or produce an effect such as emotions or feelings that are not directly depicted.
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Original:  Symbolic language in art may be used figuratively, to reference ideas and "convey concepts in terms of images", as when images and positioning of objects such as flowers or animals are used to signify cultural concepts. . In addition, symbolic language in art may be used more literally, as in floriography, where arrangements of flowers are decoded with the help of special dictionaries, enabling communication of secret, unspoken information as a form of cryptography.
Revised:  Symbolic language in art may be used figuratively, to reference ideas and "convey concepts in terms of images", as when images and positioning of objects such as flowers or animals are used to signify cultural concepts. . Symbolic language in art may be used more literally, as in floriography, where arrangements of flowers are decoded with the help of special dictionaries, enabling communication of secret, unspoken information as a form of cryptography.
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Original:  He was the 13th Premier of Prince Edward Island from 1917 to 1919.
Revised:  He was the 13th premier of Prince Edward Island from 1917 to 1919.
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Original: Born in Egmont Bay, Prince County, Prince Edward Island, Arsenault's family settled on the island in 1729  when it was a French possession called Ile-Saint-Jean .
Revised: Born in Egmont Bay, Prince County, Prince Edward Island, Arsenault's family settled on the island in 1729 , when it was a French possession called Ile-Saint-Jean .
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Original: Born in Egmont Bay, Prince County, Prince Edward Island, Arsenault's family settled on the island in 1729  when it was a French possession called Ile-Saint-Jean .
Revised: Born in Egmont Bay, Prince County, Prince Edward Island, Arsenault's family settled on the island in 1729 when it was a French called Île-Saint-Jean .
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Original:  Aubin Arsenault was first elected to the Legislative Assembly of Prince Edward Island in 1908 as a Conservative.
Revised:  He was first elected to the Legislative Assembly of Prince Edward Island in 1908 as a Conservative.
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Original:  Arsenault's government repealed legislation which restricted automobile travel on the island to specific days and routes.
Revised:  Arsenault's government repealed legislation to restrict automobile travel on the island to specific days and routes.
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Original:  His government was defeated in the 1919 election  and he served as leader of the opposition until 1921 when he was appointed to the Supreme Court of Prince Edward Island.
Revised:  His government was defeated in the 1919 election , and he served as leader of the opposition until 1921 when he was appointed to the Supreme Court of Prince Edward Island.
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Original: Members of the House of Representatives (Netherlands) Category:Dutch Trotskyists Category:Dutch resistance members Category:Resistance members killed by Nazi Germany Category:Dutch people executed by Nazi Germany Category:Dutch people of World War II Category:Executed Dutch people Category:People executed by Germany by firing squad Category:Deaths by firearm in the Netherlands Category:Social Democratic Workers' Party (Netherlands) politicia
Revised: Members of the House of Representatives (Netherlands) Category:Dutch Trotskyists Category:Dutch resistance members Category:Resistance members killed by Nazi Germany Category:Dutch people executed by Nazi Germany Category:Dutch people of World War II Category:Executed Dutch people Category:People executed by Germany by firing squad Category:Deaths by firearm in the Netherlands Category:Social Democratic Workers' Party (Netherlands) politicians Category:Dutch political prisone
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Original:  As a functionary of the Communist International, Sneevliet guided the formation of the Communist Party of China in 1921.
Revised:  As a functionary of the Communist International, Sneevliet guided the formation of the Chinese Communist Party in 1921.
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Original:  He took part in the Communist resistance against the Nazi occupation of the Netherlands during World War II, for which he was executed by the Germans in April 1942. V.I. Lenin was impressed enough by him to send him as a Comintern representative to China, to aid in the formation of Communist Party of China .
Revised:  He took part in the Communist resistance against the Nazi occupation of the Netherlands during World War II, for which he was executed by the Germans in April 1942. V.I. Lenin was impressed enough by him to send him as a Comintern representative to China, to aid in the formation of Chinese Communist Party .
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Original:  Sneevliet lived in China from 1921 to 1923 and was present at the founding congress of the Communist Party of China in July 1921.
Revised:  Sneevliet lived in China from 1921 to 1923 and was present at the founding congress of the Chinese Communist Party in July 1921.
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Original:  Sheer fabric is also used for netting and curtains.
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Original: During the 1770s and 1780s, there was a fad for wrap-over dresses which were sometimes worn by actresses in Oriental roles.
Revised: During the 1770s and 1780s, there was a fashion for wrap-over dresses which were sometimes worn by actresses in Oriental roles.
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Original: 1960s French actress Brigitte Bardot wearing a transparent top at a cocktail party in 1968 See-through and transparent clothing became very fashionable in the latter part of the 1960s.
Revised: 1960s upFrench actress Brigitte Bardot wearing a transparent top at a cocktail party in 1968 See-through and transparent clothing became very fashionable in the latter part of the 1960s.
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Original: In October 21  2019, Gojek announced that Nadiem would leave the company to join president elect Jokowi's Onward Indonesia Cabinet.
Revised: In 21 2019, Gojek announced that Nadiem would leave the company to join president elect Jokowi's Onward Indonesia Cabinet.
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Original:  In 21 October 2019, Gojek announced that Nadiem would leave the company to join president elect Jokowi's Onward Indonesia Cabinet.
Revised:  In 21 October 2019, Gojek announced that Nadiem would leave the company to join president-elect Jokowi's Onward Indonesia Cabinet.
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Original:  On the second reshuffle of the cabinet, announced at 28 April 2021, he  appointed as the first holder of Minister of Education, Culture, Research, and Technology.
Revised:  On the second reshuffle of the cabinet, announced at 28 April 2021, he was appointed as the first holder of Minister of Education, Culture, Research, and Technology.
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Original:  She left CTV prior to its bankruptcy and signed on as a ATV actress.
Revised:  She left CTV prior to its bankruptcy and signed on as an ATV actress.
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Original:  Later on the same year, Cheung founded a image consultancy and media-relations training company Mary Cheung & Associates (International) Ltd. and serves as its managing director.
Revised:  Later on the same year, Cheung founded an image consultancy and media-relations training company Mary Cheung & Associates (International) Ltd. and serves as its managing director.
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Original:   Cheung is currently the host of her own radio talk show Merry Mary () under the radio network Metro Info of the Metro Broadcast Corporation  .
Revised:  Cheung was the host of her own radio talk show Merry Mary () under the radio network Metro Info of the Metro Broadcast Corporation .
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Original:  Radio shows Year Title Original Title Role Network Notes 1995 – present Merry Mary Host Metro Info
Revised:  Radio shows Year Title Original Title Role Network Notes 1994 – present Merry Mary Host Metro Info
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Original: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) was a Miss Hong Kong 1975 winner , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and former actress.
Revised: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) is a former Miss Hong Kong 1975 winner , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and former actress.
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Original: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) was a Miss Hong Kong 1975 winner , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and former actress.
Revised: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) was a Miss Hong Kong winner (1975) , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and former actress.
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Original: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) was a Miss Hong Kong 1975 winner , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and former actress.
Revised: Mary Cheung (born 11 August 1952) was a Miss Hong Kong 1975 winner , image consultant, host, painter, photographer and retired actress.
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Original:  The “self” of an ACE is defined as the the ability of the ACE to identify everything that it could potentially control, directly or indirectly, in a given time interval.
Revised:  The “self” of an ACE is defined as the ability of the ACE to identify everything that it could potentially control, directly or indirectly, in a given time interval.
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Original:  Subjectivity and selfhood : Investigating the first-person perspective .
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Original:  Subjectivity and selfhood : Investigating the first-person perspective .
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Original: Religious views on the self vary widely.
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Original:  The self is a complex and core subject in many forms of spirituality.
Revised:  The Self is a complex and core subject in many forms of spirituality.
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Original:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
Revised:  Two types of Self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
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Original:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
Revised:  Two types of self are commonly considered—the Self that is the ego, also called the learned, superficial self of mind and body, an egoic creation, and the self which is sometimes called the "True Self", the "Observing Self", or the "Witness".
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