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Original:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee  ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
Revised:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
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Original:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee  ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
Revised:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Shawnee/Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
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Original:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee  ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
Revised:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee/Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
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Original:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee  ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibit which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
Revised:  In 1985, she participated along with her sister Jane and Mary Adair (Cherokee ), Jean Bales (Iowa), Joan Brown (Cherokee) , Sharron Ahtone Harjo (Kiowa), Ruthe Blalock Jones ( Delaware-Shawnee-Peoria ), and Virginia Stroud (Keetoowah Band Cherokee-Muscogee Creek) in the Daughters of the Earth exhibition which traveled for three years (1985–1988), touring in the United States and Europe.
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Original:  Throughout her career, she won 90 honors for her paintings, which included 9 grand awards.
Revised:  Throughout her career, she won 90 honors for her paintings, which included nine grand awards.
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Original: Death and legacy In the early 1990s, when her husband retired, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois , where Hessing died on October 7, 2006.
Revised: Death and legacy When Hessing's husband retired in the early 1990s, when her husband retired, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois , where Hessing died on October 7, 2006.
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Original: Death and legacy In the early 1990s, when her husband retired, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois , where Hessing died on October 7, 2006.
Revised: Death and legacy In the early 1990s, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois , where Hessing died on October 7, 2006.
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Original: Death and legacy In the early 1990s, when her husband retired, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois , where Hessing died on October 7, 2006.
Revised: Death and legacy In the early 1990s, when her husband retired, the couple moved to Onarga, Illinois . There she died on October 7, 2006.
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Original:  The U.S. Department of the Interior has preserved her works in two collections — Amerindian Circle and Indian Arts and Crafts Board, both located in Washington, D. C. She also has works in the permanent collections of the Heard Museum of Phoenix;
Revised:  The U.S. Department of the Interior has preserved her works in two collections — Amerindian Circle and Indian Arts and Crafts Board, both located in Washington, DC. She also has works in the permanent collections of the Heard Museum of Phoenix;
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Original:  In 2008, the Institute of American Indian Arts hosted a retrospective  Valjean McCarty Hessing Honored of her works and her painting The Black Hat was featured on the cover of The Santa Fe New Mexican's issue of February 1, 2008.
Revised:  In 2008, the Institute of American Indian Arts hosted a retrospective of her works, Valjean McCarty Hessing Honored of her works and her painting The Black Hat was featured on the cover of The Santa Fe New Mexican's issue of February 1, 2008.
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Original:  In 2008, the Institute of American Indian Arts hosted a retrospective  Valjean McCarty Hessing Honored of her works and her painting The Black Hat was featured on the cover of The Santa Fe New Mexican's issue of February 1, 2008.
Revised:  In 2008, the Institute of American Indian Arts hosted a retrospective Valjean McCarty Hessing Honored , and her painting The Black Hat was featured on the cover of The Santa Fe New Mexican's issue of February 1, 2008.
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Original: Valjean McCarty Hessing (August 30, 1934 – October 7, 2006) was a Choctaw painter, who mainly produced works in the traditional Bacone flatstyle.
Revised: Valjean McCarty Hessing (August 30, 1934 – October 7, 2006) was a Choctaw painter, who worked in the Bacone flatstyle.
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Original:  Throughout her career, she won ninety awards for her work and was designated a "Master Artist " by the Five Civilized Tribes Museum in 1976.
Revised:  Throughout her career, she won ninety awards for her work and was designated a Master Artist by the Five Civilized Tribes Museum in 1976.
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Original:  She has works in the permanent collections of the Heard Museum of Phoenix, Arizona;
Revised:  Her artworks are in collections of the Heard Museum of Phoenix, Arizona;
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Original:  Early life Valjean McCarty was born on August 30, 1934  in Tulsa, Oklahoma to Madelyn Helen (née Beck) and Vernon Clay McCarty.
Revised:  Early life Valjean McCarty was born on August 30, 1934 , in Tulsa, Oklahoma to Madelyn Helen (née Beck) and Vernon Clay McCarty.
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Original:  In grade school, McCarty had a desire to become an artist, but when her father asked a local well-known artist where she and Jane could study painting, he was told that women could not be painters.
Revised:  In grade school, McCarty wanted to become an artist, but when her father asked a local well-known artist where she and Jane could study painting, he was told that women could not be painters.
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Original: Artists from Tulsa, Oklahoma Category:University of Mary Hardin–Baylor alumni Category:University of Tulsa alumni Category:Choctaw people Category:Native American women artists Category:20th-century American women artists Category:21st-century American women artists Category:21st-century American painters Category:20th-century American painters Category:Native American painters Category:American women painters Category:Painters from Oklahoma Category:20th-century Native  America
Revised: Artists from Tulsa, Oklahoma Category:University of Mary Hardin–Baylor alumni Category:University of Tulsa alumni Category:Choctaw people Category:Native American women artists Category:20th-century American women artists Category:21st-century American women artists Category:21st-century American painters Category:20th-century American painters Category:Native American painters Category:American women painters Category:Painters from Oklahoma Category:20th-century Native Americans Category:21st-century Native America
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Original:  Hrytsenko became Minister of Defence in the First Tymoshenko Government in February 2005, he continued this position in the Yekhanurov Government.
Revised: Minister of Defence Hrytsenko became Minister of Defence in the First Tymoshenko Government in February 2005, he continued this position in the Yekhanurov Government.
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Original: Tymoshenko asks President to dismiss Yekhanurov as Defense Minister, UNIAN (May 20, 2009)Tymoshenko Initiating Yekhanurov’s Dismissal, Ukrainian News Agency (May 20, 2009)Minister Yekhanurov Not Intending To Step Down, Ukrainian News Agency (May 20, 2009)Yekhanurov denies reports of corrupt schemes at defense ministry, Interfax-Ukraine (May 20, 2009)  Hrytsenko was one of the candidates for presidency in the 2014 Ukrainian presidential election.
Revised: Tymoshenko asks President to dismiss Yekhanurov as Defense Minister, UNIAN (May 20, 2009)Tymoshenko Initiating Yekhanurov’s Dismissal, Ukrainian News Agency (May 20, 2009)Minister Yekhanurov Not Intending To Step Down, Ukrainian News Agency (May 20, 2009)Yekhanurov denies reports of corrupt schemes at defense ministry, Interfax-Ukraine (May 20, 2009) Recent years Hrytsenko was one of the candidates for presidency in the 2014 Ukrainian presidential election.
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Original:  Hrytsenko formally nominated a presidential candidate, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 January 2019) Hrytsenko's candidacy is supported by the European Party of Ukraine, Native Land, Alternative, and Wave.
Revised:  Hrytsenko formally nominated a presidential candidate, Ukrayinska Pravda (11 January 2019) Hrytsenko's candidacy was supported by the European Party of Ukraine, Native Land, Alternative, and Wave.
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Original: Education Hrytsenko graduated with honours from Kyiv Higher Military Aviation Engineering School on 23 June 1979.
Revised: Education Hrytsenko failed to graduate with honours from Kyiv Higher Military Aviation Engineering School on 23 June 1979.
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Original:  After a brief return to the judiciary, he was transferred at his own request back to the Colonial Department on 22 December 1899, and  appointed as a district judge to German Samoa in 1901, and eventually became Chief Justice in 1910.
Revised:  After a brief return to the judiciary, he was transferred at his own request back to the Colonial Department on 22 December 1899, and was appointed as a district judge to German Samoa in 1901, and eventually became Chief Justice in 1910.
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Original:  In 1914, after the outbreak of World War I and the occupation of German Samoa by  New Zealand Army troops, he was taken prisoner of war until his release in 1919.
Revised:  In 1914, after the outbreak of World War I and the occupation of German Samoa by the New Zealand Army troops, he was taken prisoner of war until his release in 1919.
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Original:  In 1914, after the outbreak of World War I and the occupation of German Samoa by  New Zealand Army troops, he was taken prisoner of war until his release in 1919.
Revised:  In 1914, after the outbreak of World War I and the occupation of German Samoa by New Zealand Army troops, he was taken prisoner of war and held in captivity until 1919.
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Original:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating is 4.5 of 10.
Revised:  As of 2019 the episode's IMDb rating is 4.5 of 10.
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Original:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating is 4.5 of 10.
Revised:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating was 4.5 of 10.
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Original:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating is 8.2 of 10.
Revised:  As of 2019 the episode's IMDb rating is 8.2 of 10.
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Original:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating is 8.2 of 10.
Revised:  As of 2019 , the episode's IMDb rating was 8.2 of 10.
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Original:  Later, Helen Mirren was said to be "in talks" for the film , but when interviewed on the matter Mirren said, "No, no.
Revised:  Later, Helen Mirren was said to be "in talks" for the film but when interviewed on the matter Mirren said, "No, no.
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Original:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date and that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had beeen "ditched," but he had three others secretly lined up.
Revised:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date . Shah also pointed out that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had beeen "ditched," but he had three others secretly lined up.
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Original:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date and that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had beeen "ditched," but he had three others secretly lined up.
Revised:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date and that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had been "ditched," but he had three others secretly lined up.
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Original:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date and that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had beeen "ditched," but he had three others secretly lined up.
Revised:  Shah said he'd written 18 drafts of the script to date and that his earlier plan to cast actress Madhuri Dixit in the lead had beeen "ditched," and he had instead gotten three other actresses secretly lined up.
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Original:  Less than a month later Shah would say , "As it stands today, only two actors in Bollywood are on the scanner (for the role of Indira): One is Kareena Kapoor and the other is Priyanka Chopra."
Revised:  Less than a month later Shah would comment , "As it stands today, only two actors in Bollywood are on the scanner (for the role of Indira): One is Kareena Kapoor and the other is Priyanka Chopra."
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Original:  Beresford confirms his attachment to the project as director , while Shah brushes off any idea of problems with the Gandhi family, saying, "This story is in the public domain and as an artiste, I have the right to interpret and depict it, based on factual material.
Revised:  Beresford confirms his attachment to the project as director while Shah brushes off any idea of problems with the Gandhi family, saying, "This story is in the public domain and as an artiste, I have the right to interpret and depict it, based on factual material.
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Original: Shalimar Touted as the most expensive film ever made in India at the time (late 1970s) , Krishna Shah's  Shalimar employed an ambitious galaxy of international stars.
Revised: Shalimar Touted as the most expensive film ever made in India at the time , Krishna Shah's Shalimar employed an ambitious galaxy of international stars.
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Original:  As with the previous failure of Rivals, Shah and his investors re-released the film under several different titles , in an attempt to somehow recoup the millions lost.
Revised:  As with the previous failure of Rivals, Shah and his investors re-released the film under several different titles in an attempt to somehow recoup the millions lost.
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Original:  One of the decoytitles was Raiders of the Sacred Stone, which had its own re-designed poster.
Revised:  One such "decoy" title was Raiders of the Sacred Stone, which had its own re-designed poster.
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Original:  The film was a financial failure and universally panned by critics, with Philip Brophy saying it "(has) the most ludicrous dialogue you'll ever hear short of an Ed Wood Jr. movie," and Evan Wade of Something Awful observing that "the only way this movie could be shittier is if it was a slideshow of Photoshop images featuring Ackbar battling Chuck Norris over a volcano full of robot dinosaurs.
Revised:  The film failed financially and was universally panned by critics, with Philip Brophy saying it "(has) the most ludicrous dialogue you'll ever hear short of an Ed Wood Jr. movie," and Evan Wade of Something Awful observing that "the only way this movie could be shittier is if it was a slideshow of Photoshop images featuring Ackbar battling Chuck Norris over a volcano full of robot dinosaurs.
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Original:  As of 2019, Hard Rock Zombies carries a 4.5 of 10 rating on the IMDb, and a 2.7 rating on Letterboxd.
Revised:  As of 2019, Hard Rock Zombies carried a 4.5 of 10 rating on the IMDb, and a 2.7 rating on Letterboxd.
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Original:  Adding insult to injury, Krishna Shah's  "Written by" onscreen credit is misspelt.
Revised:  Adding insult to injury, Krishna Shah's "Written by" credit is misspelt.
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Original:  American Drive-In Krishna Shah's self-created parallel to George Lucas (whom Shah never knew) would again come to the foreground with his 1985 American Drive-In.
Revised:  American Drive-In Krishna Shah's self-created parallel to George Lucas (whom Shah never knew) would again come to the foreground in his 1985 American Drive-In.
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Original:  A review on Letterboxd had similar perspectives, noting that American Drive-In "(is) a rip-off, clearly trying to be American Graffiti," and later calling the film "the must avoid movie of 1985." Distribution and production In the late 1980s and early 1990s, Krishna Shah had a small string of ongoing boutique distribution and agenting companies, starting with his "Movie Reps" shingle that was based in a luxury  residential condominium on Hollywood Boulevard and La Brea.
Revised:  A review on Letterboxd had similar perspectives, noting that American Drive-In "(is) a rip-off, clearly trying to be American Graffiti," and later calling the film "the must avoid movie of 1985." Distribution and production In the late 1980s and early 1990s, Krishna Shah had a small string of ongoing boutique distribution and agenting companies, starting with his "Movie Reps" shingle that was based in a luxury high-rise residential condominium on Hollywood Boulevard and La Brea.
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Original:  He told Variety in a January 1991 interview, "Producers need me because I can get their films distributed.
Revised:  Shah said to Variety in a January 1991 interview, "Producers need me because I can get their films distributed.
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Original:  At one point, Hugh Grant and Elizabeth Hurley, both largely unknown at the time, made an appointment with Shah, to consider buying his condo unit.
Revised:  At one point, Hugh Grant and Elizabeth Hurley---both largely unknown at the time, made an appointment with Shah, to consider buying his condo unit.
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Original:  At one point, Hugh Grant and Elizabeth Hurley, both largely unknown at the time, made an appointment with Shah, to consider buying his condo unit.
Revised:  At one point, Hugh Grant and Elizabeth Hurley, both largely unknown at the time---made an appointment with Shah, to consider buying his condo unit.
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Original:  Taj In August 2000 , a Screen Daily piece mentioned that Shah was in the talent scouting phase for his Taj Mahal, a film expected to enter production in 2001.
Revised:  Taj In August 2000 a Screen Daily piece mentioned that Shah was in the talent scouting phase for his Taj Mahal, a film expected to enter production in 2001.
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Original:  Shah also announced the fact that "the 'Queen of Bollywood,' Madhuri Dixit, has been picked to play the title role."
Revised:  Shah also announced that, "the 'Queen of Bollywood,' Madhuri Dixit, has been picked to play the title role."
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Original:  Also mentioned as part of the pending cast were Emily Watson and Albert Finney.
Revised:  Also mentioned as pending cast were Emily Watson and Albert Finney.
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Original:  In the first week of October 2010 , Shah revealed that major Hindi actress Kareena Kapoor would be taking the Indira Gandhi role.
Revised:  In the first week of October 2010 , Shah revealed that major Hindi actress Kareena Kapoor would take the Indira Gandhi role.
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Original:  This sudden change of decision was reported as due to the project's attached makeup artists Jenny Shircore and Greg Cannom deciding that Kapoor would be better suited  for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
Revised:  This change was reported as due to the project's attached makeup artists Jenny Shircore and Greg Cannom deciding that Kapoor would be better suited for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
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Original:  This sudden change of decision was reported as due to the project's attached makeup artists Jenny Shircore and Greg Cannom deciding that Kapoor would be better suited  for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
Revised:  This sudden change of decision was reported as due to makeup artists Jenny Shircore and Greg Cannom deciding that Kapoor would be better suited for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
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Original:  This sudden change of decision was reported as due to the project's attached makeup artists Jenny Shircore and Greg Cannom deciding that Kapoor would be better suited  for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
Revised:  This sudden change of decision was reported as due to the project's attached makeup artists Jenny Shircore (and additionally Greg Cannom) deciding that Kapoor would be better suited for Indira Gandhi's physical transformations throughout the film.
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Original:  In attendance and pictured with Shah were director Bruce Beresford, along with Hollywood's " Husband and Wife Power Team " of former Creative Artists Agency co-chairman Rick Nicita and producer/talent agent Paula Wagner.
Revised:  In attendance and pictured with Shah were director Bruce Beresford, along with Hollywood's " Power Couple " of former Creative Artists Agency co-chairman Rick Nicita and producer/talent agent Paula Wagner.
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Original:  As of 2019 the episode's IMDb rating was 4.5 of 10.
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Original:  As of 2019 the episode's IMDb rating was 8.2 of 10.
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Original:  Rated 7.0 of 10 on the IMDb (as of 2019), the episode established that character Steve Austin could push his bionic legs beyond .
Revised:  The episode established that character Steve Austin could push his bionic legs beyond .
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Original:  As of 2019, Hard Rock Zombies carried a 4.5 of 10 rating on the IMDb, and a 2.7 rating on Letterboxd.
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Original:  In his middle years, Shah was involved with the low budget cult circuit, directing and /or distributing movies such as Hard Rock Zombies and Ted & Venus, the later of which he executive produced through his Double Helix Films banner.
Revised:  In his middle years, Shah was involved with the low budget cult circuit, directing and distributing movies such as Hard Rock Zombies and Ted & Venus, the later of which he executive produced through his Double Helix Films banner.
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Original:  GUBERMAN, SH.A., KALININA, YE. YE., OVCHINNIKOVA ,  M. I. & OSIPOV , V. F. 1982.
Revised:  Guberman, Sh.A , M. I. & OSIPOV , V. F. 1982.
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Original:  GUBERMAN, SH.A., KALININA, YE. YE., OVCHINNIKOVA ,  M. I. & OSIPOV , V. F. 1982.
Revised:  GUBERMAN, SH.A., KALININA, YE. YE., OVCHINNIKOVA , M. I. & Osipov , V. F. 1982.
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Original: According Haites’ theory in the given sedimentary basin in each stratigraphic unit the condition of perspective correspondence (K) are satisfied in any pair of wells.
Revised: According Haites’ theory in the given sedimentary basin in each stratigraphic unit the condition of perspective correspondence are satisfied in any pair of wells.
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