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Original:  Likewise  German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion showing quarry locations and the suitability of rock types for digging trenchers etc.
Revised:  Likewise , German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion showing quarry locations and the suitability of rock types for digging trenchers etc.
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Original:  Likewise  German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion showing quarry locations and the suitability of rock types for digging trenchers etc.
Revised:  Likewise German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion identifying quarry locations and the suitability of rock types for digging trenchers etc.
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Original:  Likewise  German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion showing quarry locations and the suitability of rock types for digging trenchers etc.
Revised:  Likewise German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion showing quarry locations and the suitability of rock types to excavate trenchers etc.
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Original:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea  very rugged terrain is controlled by the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land , is underlain by granite.
Revised:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea , very rugged terrain is controlled by the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land , is underlain by granite.
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Original:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea  very rugged terrain is controlled by the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land , is underlain by granite.
Revised:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea very rugged terrain is due to the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land , is underlain by granite.
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Original:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea  very rugged terrain is controlled by the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land , is underlain by granite.
Revised:  In the Demilitarized Zone between North and South Korea very rugged terrain is controlled by the structure of metamorphic rocks, while the best flat land is underlain by granite.
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Original:  During the Korean War these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by North Korea .
Revised:  During the Korean War these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by the north Koreans .
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Original:  It has been suggested that an understanding  the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
Revised:  It has been suggested that an understanding of the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
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Original:  It has been suggested that an understanding  the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
Revised:  It has been suggested that an understanding the fracture and foliation patterns of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
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Original:  It has been suggested that an understanding  the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
Revised:  It has been suggested that an understanding the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rocks could help a commander in the field .
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Original:  It has been suggested that an understanding  the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a commander in the field .
Revised:  It has been suggested that an understanding the fracture and foliation pattern of the metamorphic rock could help a field commander .
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Original:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
Revised:  This field partially overlaps with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
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Original:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
Revised:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography : the British army has been employing geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
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Original:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
Revised:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when it joined international common practice and used geologists.
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Original:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice and used geologists.
Revised:  There is some overlap in this field with military geography and England used geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when they joined international common practice using geologists.
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Original:  Geologists have been used in the construction of forts, tunnels and bunkers both during military conflicts and in peace time .
Revised:  Geologists have been used in the construction of forts, tunnels and bunkers both during military conflicts and in peacetime .
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Original:  This has included the digging of tunnels in northern Italy and Austria during  World War I's mine war.
Revised:  This has included digging of tunnels in northern Italy and Austria during World War I's mine war.
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Original:  This has included the digging of tunnels in northern Italy and Austria during  World War I's mine war.
Revised:  This has included the digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during World War I's mine war.
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Original:  This has included the digging of tunnels in northern Italy and Austria during  World War I's mine war.
Revised:  This has included the digging of tunnels in northern Italy and Austria during the so called World War I's mine war.
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Original:  The rocks of the Dolomites were different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in designing the tunnels.
Revised:  The rocks of the Dolomites are different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in designing the tunnels.
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Original:  The rocks of the Dolomites were different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in designing the tunnels.
Revised:  The rocks of the Dolomites were different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in order to design the tunnels.
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Original:  Geology is also used in determining the likely strength of enemy defenses under shelling and bombing.
Revised:  Geology is also used in determining the likely resistance of enemy defenses under shelling and bombing.
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Original:  Geology is also used in determining the likely strength of enemy defenses under shelling and bombing.
Revised:  Geology is also used in determining the likely strength of enemy defenses to shelling and bombing.
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Original:  In World War II this was performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe .
Revised:  In World War II this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe .
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Original:  During peace time similar methods have been used in order to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
Revised:  During peacetime similar methods have been used in order to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
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Original:  Resource acquisition Geologists are used in determining both the location and accessibility of strategic and tactical resources during war.
Revised:  Resource acquisition Geologists are used to determine both the location and accessibility of strategic and tactical resources during war.
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Original:  For the D Day landings and the invasion of Iraq ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign .
Revised:  In the case of the D Day landings and the invasion of Iraq ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign .
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Original:  The aggregate being required for both roading metal and in the construction of airfields.
Revised:  The aggregate being required for both roading metal and for the construction of airfields.
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Original:  Since 1966 the German Army has also used geologists in mitigating and predicting the environmental effects of civilian resource extraction.
Revised:  Since 1966 the German Army has also been using geologists to mitigate and predict the environmental effects of civilian resource extraction.
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Original:  During World War II the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which were being sent towards North America from Japan.
Revised:  During World War II the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had being sent towards North America from Japan.
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Original:  They did this by determining  which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
Revised:  They accomplished this by determining which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
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Original:  They did this by determining  which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
Revised:  They did this by determining from which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
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Original:  They did this by determining  which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
Revised:  They did this by determining which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
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Original:  They did this by determining  which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows the distinguishing of natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
Revised:  They did this by determining which beach the sand in the balloon's ballast originated from . Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows to distinguish between natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
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Original:  This was first noted with the intensive shelling on the Western Front causing the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks permeability.
Revised:  This was first noted through the intensive shelling on the Western Front causing the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks permeability.
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Original:  This was first noted with the intensive shelling on the Western Front causing the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks permeability.
Revised:  This was first noted with the intensive shelling on the Western Front , which caused the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks permeability.
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Original:  New minerals, rocks and land-forms are also formed during nuclear testing.
Revised:  New minerals, rocks and land-forms are also a byproduct of nuclear testing.
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Original:  This peacetime role includes the building of infrastructure, typical during local emergencies or foreign peacekeeping deployments.
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Original:  This has included studying the properties of the sand of Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland which had to be bombed , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides in Sicily.
Revised:  This has included studying the properties of the sand of Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombardment , the sediment of the English Channel sea floor and the occurrence of landslides in Sicily.
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Original:  During the Korean War these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by the north Koreans.
Revised:  During the Korean War these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by the North Koreans.
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Original:  This field partially overlaps with military geography : the British army has been employing geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when it joined international common practice  using geologists.
Revised:  This field partially overlaps with military geography . For his reason the British Army employed geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when it joined international common practice using geologists.
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Original:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so called  World War I 's mine war .
Revised:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so called World War I .
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Original:  During peacetime similar methods have been used in order to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
Revised:  During peacetime similar methods have been used , such as the decision to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
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Original:  In the case of the D Day landings and the invasion of Iraq ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign : in particular, the aggregate was required both for roading metal and for the construction of airfields.
Revised:  In the case of the D Day landings and the invasion of Iraq ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign . The aggregate was required both for roading metal and for the construction of airfields.
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Original:  During World War II the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had being sent towards North America from Japan.
Revised:  During World War II the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had been sent towards North America from Japan.
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Original:  Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows  to distinguish between natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
Revised:  Knowledge of rock types and seismic propagation also allows geologists to distinguish between natural and nuclear test initiated earthquakes.
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Original:  New minerals, rocks and land-forms are also a byproduct of nuclear testing.
Revised:  New minerals, rocks and land-forms are also a by product of nuclear testing.
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Original: Warfare can also change the physical geology.
Revised: Warfare can change the physical geology.
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Original:  Many important geological discoveries have also occurred during military researches .
Revised:  Military research has also led to many important geological discoveries have also occurred during military researches .
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Original:  Many important geological discoveries have also occurred during military researches .
Revised:  Many important geological discoveries .
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Original:  The formal practice of military geology began during the Napoleonic Wars : however, geotechnical knowledge has been applied since the earliest days of siege warfare.
Revised:  The formal practice of military geology began during the Napoleonic Wars ; however, geotechnical knowledge has been applied since the earliest days of siege warfare.
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Original:  In modern warfare military geologists are used for terrain analysis, engineering  and the identification of resources.
Revised:  In modern warfare military geologists are used for terrain analysis, engineering , and the identification of resources.
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Original:  Military geologists have included both specially trained military personal and civilians incorporated into the military.
Revised:  Military geologists have included both specially trained military personnel and civilians incorporated into the military.
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Original: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project . ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test . ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test . ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project . ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test . ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project . ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project . ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test . ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of the terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
Revised: ]] [[File:US Army drilling well in Cameroon 2.jpg|The U.S. Army Corps of Engineers drilling a well in Cameroon as part of the "Civic Action" project . ]] [[File:Trinitite on site.jpg|Trinitite (in green) produced by the Trinity Nuclear Test . ]] Geologists have been employed since the Napoleonic Wars to provide an analysis of terrain which was expected to become a war theater, both in case of an upcoming battle and to assess the difficulty of logistical supply.
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Original:  Academically  it has been found that battles are likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic  or Upper Carboniferous age, possibly due to their typical relief and drainage.
Revised:  Academically , it has been found that battles are likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic or Upper Carboniferous age, possibly due to their typical relief and drainage.
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Original:  Academically  it has been found that battles are likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic  or Upper Carboniferous age, possibly due to their typical relief and drainage.
Revised:  Academically it has been found that battles are likely to occur on rocks of Permian, Triassic , or Upper Carboniferous age, possibly due to their typical relief and drainage.
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Original:  More practically, geology has been used in identifying the best Allied invasion sites during World War II, including those in North Africa, Italy  and France.
Revised:  More practically, geology has been used in identifying the best Allied invasion sites during World War II, including those in North Africa, Italy , and France.
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Original:  This has included studying the properties of the sand of Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombardment, the sediment of the English Channel sea floor  and the occurrence of landslides in Sicily.
Revised:  This has included studying the properties of the sand of Normandy beaches, the tolerance of the soil in the hinterland to bombardment, the sediment of the English Channel sea floor , and the occurrence of landslides in Sicily.
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Original:  Likewise, German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion  identifying quarry locations and the suitability of rock types to excavate trenchers  etc.
Revised:  Likewise, German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion , identifying quarry locations and the suitability of rock types to excavate trenchers etc.
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Original:  Likewise, German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion  identifying quarry locations and the suitability of rock types to excavate trenchers  etc.
Revised:  Likewise, German geologists created maps of southern England for Operation Sea Lion identifying quarry locations and the suitability of rock types to excavate trenchers , etc.
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Original:  During the Korean War  these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by the North Koreans.
Revised:  During the Korean War , these flat areas were used as military staging grounds by the North Koreans.
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Original:  For his reason the British Army employed geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when it joined international common practice and started using geologists.
Revised:  For this reason the British Army employed geographers in this role until the end of 1941, when it joined international common practice and started using geologists.
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Original:  Geologists have been used in the construction of forts, tunnels  and bunkers both during military conflicts and in peacetime.
Revised:  Geologists have been used in the construction of forts, tunnels , and bunkers both during military conflicts and in peacetime.
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Original:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so called mine war in World War I. The rocks of the Dolomites are different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in order to design the tunnels.
Revised:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so-called mine war in World War I. The rocks of the Dolomites are different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in order to design the tunnels.
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