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Original:   At least one commentator,  Peter Edidin of the New York Times, has characterized the Chinese report as "a frank indictment [that] draws a picture of America that approaches caricature.
Revised:  At least one commentator, Peter Edidin of the New York Times, characterized the Chinese report as "a frank indictment [that] draws a picture of America that approaches caricature.
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Original: The (PSNI) have arrested a man on suspicion of and  after a shooting incident in the Northern Irish capital Friday.
Revised: The (PSNI) arrested a man on suspicion of and after a shooting incident in the Northern Irish capital Friday.
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Original: Two men, one aged 24 and the other 22, were both  injured in the incident at Oldpark Road in the north of Belfast, which was reported to police at 1928 Friday.
Revised: Two men, one aged 24 and the other 22, were both injured in the incident at Old Park Road in the north of Belfast, which was reported to police at 1928 Friday.
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Original:  The other man, who managed to drive to hospital himself, was also given medical treatment for his wounds  [  
Revised:  The other man, who managed to drive to hospital himself, was also given medical treatment for his wounds . [ 
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Original:  The other man, who managed to drive to hospital himself, was also given medical treatment for his wounds  [  
Revised:  The other man, who managed to drive to hospital himself, was also given medical treatment for his wounds [W 
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Original:  The 24-year-old man, identified by as Sean Corbett, had recently departed from a shop and was stood next to a vehicle when as many as ten gunshots were fired at him.
Revised:  The 24-year-old man, identified by as Sean Corbett, had recently departed from a shop and was standing near a vehicle when as many as ten gunshots were fired at him.
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Original:  The 22-year-old victim, who has not been identified, was sitting inside the vehicle and also experienced numerous gunshots . Corbett was transported to , where he was subsequently given urgent surgery.
Revised:  The 22-year-old victim, who has not been identified, was sitting inside the vehicle and also suffered numerous gunshots wounds . Corbett was transported to , where he was subsequently given urgent surgery.
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Original:  It is understood the condition of both victims is stable at present . North Belfast Area Commander Chief Inspector Andy Freeburn condemned the shooting as "unacceptable in our community".
Revised:  The last reports indicated both men were in stable condition . North Belfast Area Commander Chief Inspector Andy Freeburn condemned the shooting as "unacceptable in our community".
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Original: North Belfast Area Commander Chief Inspector Andy Freeburn condemned the shootingas "unacceptable in our community".
Revised: North Belfast Area Commander Chief Inspector Andy Freeburn spoke against the shooting, calling it, "unacceptable in our community".
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Original:  Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of allergic mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
Revised: Allergies are a long-time conflict between cats and humans Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of allergic mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
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Original: The scientists have bred mice that were generically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these cats with a special protein, derived from both cats and humans.
Revised: The scientists have bred mice that were generically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these mice with a special protein, derived from both cats and humans.
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Original: The scientists have bred mice that were generically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these mice with a special protein, derived from both cats and humans.
Revised: The scientists have bred mice that were genetically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these mice with a special protein, derived from both cats and humans.
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Original: Allergies are a long-time conflict between cats and humans Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of allergic mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
Revised:  Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of allergic mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
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Original: Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of allergic mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
Revised: Although they may be unwilling participants, a group of mice are helping solve a long-time conflict between cats and humans.
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Original:  The scientists have bred mice that were genetically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these mice with a special protein , derived from both cats and humans.
Revised:  The scientists have bred mice that were genetically engineered to be allergic to cats, and injected these mice with a special , derived from both cats and humans.
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Original:  Normally, when humans allergic to cats come in contact with a particular feline protein their body releases a histamine that causes the allergic reaction.
Revised:  Normally, when humans allergic to cats come in contact with a particular feline protein their body releases a that causes the allergic reaction.
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Original:  The newly developed protein is a fusion of cat protein with a human protein that normally acts as a brake on the immune system .
Revised:  The newly developed protein is a fusion of cat protein with a human protein that normally acts as a brake on the .
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Original:  In some populations allergies affect a large number of people — as many as 30\% of all adults in Britain , for example.
Revised:  In some populations allergies affect a large number of people — as many as 30\% of all adults in , for example.
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Original: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on monday , has revealed that  Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
Revised: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday , has revealed that Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
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Original: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on monday , has revealed that  Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
Revised: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on monday , has revealed that many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
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Original:  It also found that only 58 percent of the population had a positive view of the United States.
Revised:  It also found that 58 percent of the population had a positive view of the United States.
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Original:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency . " he continued.
Revised:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency , " he continued.
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Original: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, has revealed that many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
Revised: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, revealed many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism.
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Original:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 in Australia by a $30 million endowment from  philanthropist Frank Lowy, claims that it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
Revised:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 with a $30 million endowment from philanthropist Frank Lowy, claims that it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
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Original:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 in Australia by a $30 million endowment from  philanthropist Frank Lowy, claims that it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
Revised:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 in Australia by a $30 million endowment from philanthropist Frank Lowy, claims it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
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Original:  The report, entitled  Australians speak 2005: public opinion and foreign policy  , showed that global warming and nuclear proliferation were greater foreign policy concerns than terrorism and illegal immigration.
Revised:  The report, entitled " Australians speak 2005: public opinion and foreign policy , showed that global warming and nuclear proliferation were greater foreign policy concerns than terrorism and illegal immigration.
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Original:  The report, entitled  Australians speak 2005: public opinion and foreign policy  , showed that global warming and nuclear proliferation were greater foreign policy concerns than terrorism and illegal immigration.
Revised:  The report, entitled Australians speak 2005: public opinion and foreign policy " , showed that global warming and nuclear proliferation were greater foreign policy concerns than terrorism and illegal immigration.
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Original:  The report also stated that most Australians believed improving the global environment should be Australia's number one foreign policy goal.
Revised:  The report also noted most Australians believed improving the global environment should be Australia's number one foreign policy goal.
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Original:  Mark Wakeham of Greenpeace , saidthat "Clearly Australians understand the warnings from scientists about greenhouse pollution far better than our governments do.
Revised:  Mark Wakeham of Greenpeace said, "Clearly Australians understand the warnings from scientists about greenhouse pollution far better than our governments do.
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Original:  Once again, the community is leading and governments will be pulled into line."  "Scientists tell us that, to avoid dangerous warming of more than two degrees, we have to cut our greenhouse pollution by at least 60 per cent by 2050.
Revised:  Once again, the community is leading and governments will be pulled into line." He continued by saying, "Scientists tell us that, to avoid dangerous warming of more than two degrees, we have to cut our greenhouse pollution by at least 60 per cent by 2050.
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Original:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency , " he continued.
Revised:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency . " he continued.
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Original:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency , " he continued.
Revised:  This means moving rapidly and decisively away from dirty coal to clean, renewable sources of energy like solar, wind and energy efficiency , " 
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Original: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, revealed many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism .
Revised: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, revealed many view to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism .
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Original: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, revealed many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as Islamic fundamentalism .
Revised: A report released by Allan Gyngell of the Lowy Institute on Monday, revealed many Australians view US foreign policy to be as dangerous as .
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Original:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 with a $30 million endowment from Australian philanthropist Frank Lowy , claims it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
Revised:  The Lowy Institute, established in 2003 with a $30 million endowment from Australian philanthropist , claims it is "an independent, non-partisan think tank."
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Original:  70 per cent of Australians were worried about global warming , the report stated, while only 63 per cent were worried about international terrorism.
Revised:  70 per cent of Australians were worried about , the report stated, while only 63 per cent were worried about international terrorism.
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Original:  Mark Wakeham of Greenpeace said, "Clearly Australians understand the warnings from scientists about greenhouse pollution far better than our governments do.
Revised:  Mark Wakeham of Greenpeace said, "Clearly Australians understand the warnings from scientists about far better than our governments do.
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Original:  The Lowy Institute surveyed 1000 randomly selected people to interview for the report . Related news Official site of the Lowy Institute Official site of Greenpeace Australi
Revised:  The Lowy Institute surveyed 1000 randomly selected people to interview for the report Related news Official site of the Lowy Institute Official site of Greenpeace Australi
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Original:  The Lowy Institute surveyed 1000 randomly selected people to interview for the report . Related news Official site of the Lowy Institute Official site of Greenpeace Australi
Revised:  The Lowy Institute surveyed 1000 randomly selected people to interview for the report . 
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Original:  Polling Information: conducted by WB&A Market Research 1,506 adults interviews by phone Dates: between Sept. 20 and Nov. 7, 2004 Margin of error plus or minus 2.5 percentage point
Revised:  Polling Information: conducted by WB&A Market Research 1,506 adults interviewed by phone Dates: between Sept. 20 and Nov. 7, 2004 Margin of error plus or minus 2.5 percentage point
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Original:  Did we need to take a poll to find out how  America sleeps at night?
Revised:  Did we need to take a poll to find out how well America sleeps at night?
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Original: They recommend avoiding alcohol and caffeine close to bedtime, and . that adults pay attention to how much sleep they get and the quality of that sleep, and seek help if needed.
Revised: They recommend avoiding alcohol and caffeine close to bedtime, and that adults pay attention to how much sleep they get and the quality of that sleep, and seek help if needed.
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Original: They recommend avoiding alcohol and caffeine close to bedtime, and . that adults pay attention to how much sleep they get and the quality of that sleep, and seek help if needed.
Revised: They recommend avoiding alcohol and caffeine close to bedtime, and . that adults pay attention to how much sleep they get as well as the quality of that sleep, and seek help if needed.
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Original: Catching a "wink" at work Did we need to take a poll to find out how well America sleeps at night?
Revised:  Did we need to take a poll to find out how well America sleeps at night?
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Original: , New South Wales — Sunday, , and her husband, Michael Bryce, visited the city of to launch the Junior Teams event and present the awards to the winners at the 2013 Allen's Coaches World Championship Gumi, meeting the residents who were affected by the March 2012 floods and meeting a small group of volunteers from the , and the at a community barbecue at Wagga Beach.
Revised: , New South Wales — Sunday, , and her husband, Michael Bryce, visited the city of to launch the Junior Teams event and present the awards to the winners at the 2013 Allen's Coaches World Championship Gumi, meet the residents who were affected by the March 2012 floods and meeting a small group of volunteers from the , and the at a community barbecue at Wagga Beach.
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Original: , New South Wales — Sunday, , and her husband, Michael Bryce, visited the city of to launch the Junior Teams event and present the awards to the winners at the 2013 Allen's Coaches World Championship Gumi, meeting the residents who were affected by the March 2012 floods and meeting a small group of volunteers from the , and the at a community barbecue at Wagga Beach.
Revised: , New South Wales — Sunday, , and her husband, Michael Bryce, visited the city of to launch the Junior Teams event and present the awards to the winners at the 2013 Allen's Coaches World Championship Gumi, meeting the residents who were affected by the March 2012 floods and meet a small group of volunteers from the , and the at a community barbecue at Wagga Beach.
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Original:  After the Gumi presentations, Mrs Bryce addressed the media about the Gumi, stating that "It's so quirky and I love the way it brings this community together, this community that's known for its fantastic spirit." , also commenting on the floods which affected the suburb of North Wagga in March 2012.
Revised:  After the Gumi presentations, Mrs Bryce addressed the media about the Gumi, stating that "It's so quirky and I love the way it brings this community together, this community that's known for its fantastic spirit." She also commented on the floods which affected the suburb of North Wagga in March 2012.
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Original:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ]  many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
Revised:  Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ] many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
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Original:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ]  many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
Revised:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city , ] many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
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Original:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ]  many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
Revised:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ...] many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
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Original:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ]  many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
Revised:  Mrs Bryce stated that "A very special thing for me was being at North Wagga Wagga this morning, to see people again whom I meet almost a year ago after the devastation of the floods in that part of the city " and that "so ] So many people have a long way to recover but their spirit, resilience, courage and determination, what they've been though, is a source for inspiration to all of us.
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Original:  Batey presented some 500 episodes of the TV programme, which tested married persons on their knowledge of their partners to see which which couple had the best knowledge of each other.
Revised:  Batey presented 500 episodes of the TV programme, which tested married persons on their knowledge of their partners to see which which couple had the best knowledge of each other.
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Original:  At its 1970s peak , the programme achieved nine million viewers  .
Revised:  At its peak in the 1970s , the programme achieved nine million viewers .
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Original:  Russian skier Alexandra Frantseva and guide Pavel Zabotini finished in second.
Revised:  skier Alexandra Frantseva and guide Pavel Zabotini finished in second.
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Original:  B3 classified British skier Kelly Gallagher and guide Charlotte Evans finished in third place.
Revised:  B3 classified skier Kelly Gallagher and guide Charlotte Evans finished in third place.
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Original:  United States B2 classified skier Danelle Umstead and guide Robert Umstead finished just off the podium in fourth place.
Revised:  B2 classified skier Danelle Umstead and guide Robert Umstead finished just off the podium in fourth place.
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Original:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the Super-G event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 local time , 8:30 UTC . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
Revised:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 local time , 8:30 UTC . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
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Original:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the Super-G event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 local time , 8:30 UTC . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
Revised:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the Super-G event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 , 8:30 UTC . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
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Original:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the Super-G event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 local time , 8:30 UTC . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
Revised:  The women's visually impaired skiers are next scheduled to compete on Friday in the Super-G event, with a start time of approximately 9:30 local time , 8:30 . Farkašová will then try to get her second gold, out of the five she targets at these Championships.
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Original:   B2 classified skier Danelle Umstead and guide Robert Umstead finished just off the podium in fourth place.
Revised:  United States B2 classified skier Danelle Umstead and guide Robert Umstead finished just off the podium in fourth place.
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