wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  For $3,550. a " WONDERFUL AND RARE FRENCH SILVER GILT CHALICE AND PATEN " are up for grabs.
Revised:  For $3,550. a " WONDERFUL AND RARE FRENCH SILVER GILT CHALICE AND PATEN " 
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Original:  The family says that if Celil, a former Muslim leader from Hamilton, did not sign the confession, he would be  put in a hole and buried alive.
Revised:  The family says that if Celil, a former Muslim leader from Hamilton, did not sign the confession, he would be " put in a hole and buried alive.
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Original:  His Canadian lawyer has been unable to speak with him, and his wife Kamila Telendibaeva hasn't seen him in almost a year . China's assistant foreign affairs minister He Yafei said Celil is suspected of involvement in terrorist activities.
Revised:  His Canadian lawyer has been unable to speak with him, and his wife Kamila Telendibaeva hasn't seen him in almost a year . 
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Original:  This issue has caused friction between Canada and China, which has included Prime Minister Stephen Harper 's questioning of China's human rights record.
Revised:  This issue has caused friction between Canada and China, with Prime Minister Stephen Harper 's questioning of China's human rights record.
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Original:  This issue has caused friction between Canada and China, which has included Prime Minister Stephen Harper 's questioning of China's human rights record.
Revised:  This issue has caused friction between Canada and China, which has included Prime Minister Stephen Harper questioning China's human rights record.
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Original:  The issue was brough up when Harper spoke with Chinese President Hu Jintao while in Vietnam, at the Asia-Pacific Economic Co-operation summit last November  
Revised:  The issue was also brought up when Harper spoke with Chinese President Hu Jintao while in Vietnam, at the Asia-Pacific Economic Co-operation summit last November 
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Original:  The issue was brough up when Harper spoke with Chinese President Hu Jintao while in Vietnam, at the Asia-Pacific Economic Co-operation summit last November  
Revised:  The issue was brough up when Harper spoke with Chinese President Hu Jintao at the Asia-Pacific Economic Co-operation summit last November 
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Original: Celil alleged that he has been tortured during a court appearence during which his sister and son were present.
Revised: Celil alleged that he has been tortured during a court appearance during which his sister and son were present.
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Original:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage . category:Wackyne
Revised:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage category:Wackyne
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Original:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage . category:Wackyne
Revised:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage . 
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Original:  The court found the 1998 Defense of Marriage Act, which restricts marriage to unions between a man and woman  was proper.
Revised:  The court found the 1998 Defense of Marriage Act, which restricts marriage to unions between a man and woman , was proper.
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Original:  Supporters of I-957 must gather at least 224,800 valid signatures by July 6 to put it on the November ballot   .
Revised:  Supporters of I-957 must gather at least 224,800 valid signatures by July 6 to put it on the November ballot . .
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Original: The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance  filed Initiative 957.
Revised: A small group of activists, the Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance filed Initiative 957.
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Original: The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance  filed Initiative 957.
Revised: The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance , filed Initiative 957.
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Original:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance (WA-DOMA) formed in 2006 in response to the decision in the case Andersen v. King County, where the state Supreme Court upheld Washington's ban on same-sex marriage.
Revised:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance formed in 2006 in response to the decision in the case Andersen v. King County, where the state Supreme Court upheld Washington's ban on same-sex marriage.
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Original:  The time has come for these conservatives to be dosed with their own medicine," said Gregory Gadow, a speaker for WA-DOMA . “If same-sex couples should be barred from marriage because they can not have children together, it follows that all couples who cannot or will not have children together should equally be barred from marriage."
Revised:  The time has come for these conservatives to be dosed with their own medicine," said Gregory Gadow, a speaker for the alliance . “If same-sex couples should be barred from marriage because they can not have children together, it follows that all couples who cannot or will not have children together should equally be barred from marriage."
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Original:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage  
Revised:  One would prohibit divorce or separation when a married couple has children, and would make having a child together the equivalent of marriage . 
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Original:  In case the initiative actually goes into law, Godow counts on it being dismissed as unconstitutional by the supreme court.
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the Supreme Court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the supreme courtwould be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the supreme courtwould be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:  the group wants to stress tha families come in all forms, with or without children.
Revised:  the group wants to stress that families come in all forms, with or without children.
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Original: An initiative has been introduced  that would require heterosexual couples to have kids within three years or else have their marriages annulled .
Revised: An initiative has been introduced that would require a married couple to have children within three years or else have their marriages annulled .
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Original: An initiative has been introduced  that would require heterosexual couples to have kids within three years or else have their marriages annulled .
Revised: An initiative has been introduced that would require heterosexual couples to have kids within three years , or else their marriage would become void .
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Original:  A small group of activists, the Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance , filed Initiative 957.
Revised:  The activist group Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance , filed Initiative 957.
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Original:  Couples would have to prove they can have childrento get a marriage license, and if they did not have children within three years, their marriages would be subject to annulment.
Revised:  In order to receive a marriage license, a couple would have to prove they can have childrento get a marriage license, and if they did not have children within three years, their marriages would be subject to annulment.
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Original:  Couples would have to prove they can have childrento get a marriage license, and if they did not have children within three years, their marriages would be subject to annulment.
Revised:  Couples would have to assert that they "know of no reason" that they cannot have children. If they did not have children within three years, their marriages would be subject to annulment.
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Original:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance formed in 2006 in response to the decision in the case Andersen v. King County, where the state Supreme Court upheld Washington's ban on same-sex marriage.
Revised:  WA-DOMA formed in 2006 in response to the decision in the case Andersen v. King County, where the state Supreme Court upheld Washington's ban on same-sex marriage.
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Original:  In the decision, procreation was specifically mentioned throughout .
Revised:  In the decision, the court reasoned that there was a "legitimate state interest" in limiting marriage to couples capable of having children .
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Original:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance is in favor of gay marriage rights and by filing this initiative the activist group is trying to show that they find the assumptions behind the ruling absurd: 'For many years, social conservatives have claimed that marriage exists solely for the purpose of procreation ...
Revised:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance is in favor of gay marriage rights . The purpose of the initiative, according to founder Gregory Gadow, is to show that they find the assumptions behind the ruling absurd: 'For many years, social conservatives have claimed that marriage exists solely for the purpose of procreation ...
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Original:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance is in favor of gay marriage rights and by filing this initiative the activist group is trying to show that they find the assumptions behind the ruling absurd: 'For many years, social conservatives have claimed that marriage exists solely for the purpose of procreation ...
Revised:  The Washington Defense of Marriage Alliance is in favor of gay marriage rights and by filing this initiative the activist group is trying to show that the logic behind the DOMA ruling is absurd. 'For many years, social conservatives have claimed that marriage exists solely for the purpose of procreation ...
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Original:  The time has come for these conservatives to be dosed with their own medicine,' said Gregory Gadow, a speaker for the alliance . 'If same-sex couples should be barred from marriage because they can not have children together, it follows that all couples who cannot or will not have children together should equally be barred from marriage.'
Revised:  The time has come for these conservatives to be dosed with their own medicine,' said Gadow . 'If same-sex couples should be barred from marriage because they can not have children together, it follows that all couples who cannot or will not have children together should equally be barred from marriage.'
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the  supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiative were passed, the supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the  supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the state supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the  supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the supreme court would likely strike it down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the  supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, and might weaken the original ruling upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
Revised:  The alliance says if the initiatives were passed, the supreme court would be forced to strike them down as unconstitutional, which would in turn weaken the Court's reasoning in upholding the Defense of Marriage Act.
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Original:   Equal Rights Washington for example does not endorse it ;
Revised:  Equal Rights Washington does not endorse it ;
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Original:  the group wants to stress that families come in all forms, with or without children . Laws should help families, not hurt them
Revised:  the group wants to stress that families come in all forms, with or without children , and that laws should help families, not hurt them
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Original:  The London protest was organised by the Stop the War Coalition . Category:Published Category:Lond
Revised:  The London protest was organised by the . Category:Published Category:Lond
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Original:  The London protest was organised by the Stop the War Coalition . Category:Published Category:Lond
Revised:  The London protest was organised by the Stop the War Coalition . Category:Lond
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Original: Protesters march down the streets of London Tens of thousands of anti-war marched though on Saturday to mark the two year anniversary of the .
Revised: Protesters march down the streets of London Tens of thousands of anti-war protesters marched though London on Saturday to mark the two year anniversary of the .
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Original:  The march started at Hyde park and moved past the American embassy, ending in Trafalgar square .
Revised:  The march started at Hyde park and moved past the American embassy, ending in .
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Original:  Protests took place in Japan, Australia ,  and the United States .
Revised:  Protests took place in Japan, Australia , , and the United States .
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Original:  Protests took place in Japan, Australia ,  and the United States .
Revised:  Protests took place in Japan, Australia , and the .
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Original:  Protests took place in  , , and the  .
Revised:  Protests took place in , and the .
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Original:  "All other lower level negotiations will be just a waste of time," Bakiyev said .
Revised:  "All other lower level negotiations will be just a waste of time," Bakiyev said 
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Original:  According to a police source within Bishkek, the capital, four police were beaten to death in clashes with protesters, and, according to Interfax, as many as ten people have been killed .
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Original: 180px| Violent protests break out in Kyrgyzstan over allegedly rigged parliamentary elections At least 10,000 protesters stormed government buildings, burnt down a police station, and took control of an airport to prevent reinforcements from being flown in in Jalal-Abad, Kyrgyzstan today as they demanded the resignation of president Askar Akayev.
Revised: 180px| At least 10,000 protesters stormed government buildings, burnt down a police station, and took control of an airport to prevent reinforcements from being flown in in Jalal-Abad, Kyrgyzstan today as they demanded the resignation of president Askar Akayev.
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Original:  " See also Kyrgyz parliamentary elections, 2005.
Revised:  See also Kyrgyz parliamentary elections, 2005.
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Original:  The trial, named the Phambili (" going forward") Trial, is being conducted by the International HIV Trials Network and the South African AIDS Vaccine Initiative.
Revised:  The trial, named the Phambili (" Going forward") Trial, is being conducted by the International HIV Trials Network and the South African AIDS Vaccine Initiative.
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Original:  The virus has been genetically engineered to prevent it from causing the flu or from passing  from person to person.
Revised:  The virus has been genetically engineered to prevent it from causing the flu or from passing on from person to person.
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Original:  The trial is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government  
Revised:  The trial is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government . 
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Original:  The vaccine's functioning in a heterosexual population and its effectiveness among women will  be studied.
Revised:  The vaccine's functioning in a heterosexual population and its effectiveness among women will also be studied.
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Original:  The vaccine is  developed from an Adenovirus, the type of virus that causes the common cold.
Revised:  The vaccine is The vaccine has been developed from an Adenovirus, the type of virus that causes the common cold.
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Original:  The trial   is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government .
Revised:  The trial The trial is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government .
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Original:  The trial   is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government .
Revised:  The trial is expected to cost $35 million and SAAVI will be supported by supported by Eskom and the South African government 
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Original: Cross section of the human immunodeficiency virus The first large-scale trial of a vaccine for HIV has been launched in South Africa.
Revised:  The first large-scale trial of a vaccine for HIV has been launched in South Africa.
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Original:  Preliminary trials for the vaccine have been conducted in the Americas and Australia as well as in Africa.
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Original:  The   vaccine has been developed from an Adenovirus, the type of virus that causes the common cold.
Revised:  The The vaccine has been developed from an Adenovirus, the type of virus that causes the common cold.
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Original:   The three genes, called gag, pol and env contain information needed to make the structural proteins  , the "shell" of a HIV virus .
Revised:  The three genes, called gag, pol and env contain information needed to make the structural proteins , the "shell" of the HIV viron .
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Original:  It seems the guiding vision of a comprehensive plan is sorely needed in New Orleans, as some of the hard lessons taught by Hurricanes Katrina and Rita may have already been forgotten .
Revised:  Concerns have been raised over whether some of the hard lessons taught by Hurricanes Katrina and Rita may have already been forgotten .
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Original:  It seems the guiding vision of a comprehensive plan is sorely needed in New Orleans, as some of the hard lessons taught by Hurricanes Katrina and Rita may have already been forgotten .
Revised:  It seems the guiding vision of a comprehensive plan is sorely needed in New Orleans, as some of the hard lessons taught by Hurricanes Katrina and Rita have been learnt .
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Original: The Neonatology Hospital located in Belgrade has refused to give Macedonian Senija Roganovic, a woman who gave birth to a baby two months ago at the hospital, her child back to her after she was not able to pay her medical bills.
Revised: A Neonatology Hospital in Belgrade has refused to give Macedonian Senija Roganovic, a woman who gave birth to a baby two months ago at the hospital, her child back to her after she was not able to pay her medical bills.
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Original: The Neonatology Hospital located in Belgrade has refused to give Macedonian Senija Roganovic, a woman who gave birth to a baby two months ago at the hospital, her child back to her after she was not able to pay her medical bills.
Revised: The Neonatology Hospital located in Belgrade has refused to hand over a child to her mother, after she was not able to pay her medical bills.
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Original: The Neonatology Hospital located in Belgrade has refused to give Macedonian Senija Roganovic, a woman who gave birth to a baby two months ago at the hospital, her child back to her after she was not able to pay her medical bills.
Revised: The Neonatology Hospital located in Belgrade has refused to give Macedonian Senija Roganovic, a woman who gave birth to a baby two months ago at the hospital, her child back to her after she was unable to pay her medical bills.
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Original:   Roganovic, who has no health insurance of anykind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 USD for services performed by the hospital for performing the baby's birth .
Revised:  Roganovic, who has no health insurance of any kind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 USD for services performed by the hospital for performing the baby's birth .
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Original:   Roganovic, who has no health insurance of anykind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 USD for services performed by the hospital for performing the baby's birth .
Revised:  Roganovic, who has no health insurance of anykind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 for services performed by the hospital for performing the baby's birth .
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Original:   Roganovic, who has no health insurance of anykind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 USD for services performed by the hospital for performing the baby's birth .
Revised:  Roganovic, who has no health insurance of anykind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, owes the hospital $8,290.91 USD in hospital bills .
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Original:  According to reports, Roganovic has become sick and has lost weight due to the fear of what might happen to her child
Revised:  According to reports, Roganovic has taken ill and has lost weight due to the fear of what might happen to her child
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Original:  According to reports, Roganovic has become sick and has lost weight due to the fear of what might happen to her child
Revised:  According to reports, Roganovic has become sick and has lost weight due to fears over what may happen to her child
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Original: A Neonatology Hospital in Belgrade has refused to hand over a child to her mother, after she was unable to pay her medical bills.
Revised: The Belgrade Neonatology Institute has refused to hand over a child to her mother, after she was unable to pay her medical bills.
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Original:  Macedonian Senija Roganovic, who has no health insurance of any kind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, gave birth to the baby two months ago at the hospital and owes US$8,290.91 in hospital bills.
Revised:  Macedonian Senija Roganovic, who has no health insurance of any kind and cannot come up with the money for the bill, gave birth to the baby two months ago at and owes US$8,290.91 in hospital bills.
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Original: 20-year old Roganovic has been sedated for the past two months and has lost 30 pounds of weight, probably due to anxiety over what might happen to her child.
Revised: 20-year old Roganovic has been sedated for the past two months and has lost 30 pounds of weight, possibly due to anxiety over what might happen to her child.
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