wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  External links (en) Findagrave: Biography Bibliography (de) Joris de Vries: Manasse Tjiseseta, chief of Omaruru 1884-1898 , Namibia.
Revised:  External links (en) Findagrave: Biography Bibliography (de) Joris de Vries: Manasse Tjiseseta, chief of Omaruru 1884–1898 , Namibia.
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Original: Manasse Tyiseseta (April 25, 1850, Otjimbingwe – April 17, 1898, Omaruru) was the leader of a group of Herero with their headquarters in Omaruru  .
Revised: Manasse Tyiseseta (April 25, 1850, Otjimbingwe – April 17, 1898, Omaruru) was the leader of a group of Herero with their headquarters in Omaruru in what is today Namibia .
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Original:  Life Manasse Tyiseseta studied at the Augustineum Secondary School in Otjimbingwe.
Revised:  Life Tyiseseta studied at the Augustineum Secondary School in Otjimbingwe.
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Original:  In 1867, he journeyed with Christian Wilhelm Zeraua to Omaruru (then known as Okonjose) .
Revised:  In 1867, he journeyed with Christian Wilhelm Zeraua to Omaruru .
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Original:  He signed a treaty of protectionon November 3, 1885 with Heinrich Ernst Göring and thereby with the German Empire.
Revised:  He signed a treaty of protection on November 3, 1885 with Heinrich Ernst Göring and thereby with the German Empire.
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Original:  He signed a treaty of protectionon November 3, 1885 with Heinrich Ernst Göring and thereby with the German Empire.
Revised:  He signed a treaty of protectionon November 3, 1885 with Heinrich Ernst Göring and the German Empire.
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Original:  Manasse kept his tribe independent of the Germans and the chieftain Samuel Maharero for many years. trading with Suid-Afrika for weapons, ammo, and other goods.
Revised:  Manasse kept his tribe independent of the Germans and the chieftain Samuel Maharero for many years. trading with South Africa for weapons, ammo, and other goods.
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Original:  These exchanges also included tributes of gold paid to Assyrian kings during the 16th and 15th centuries BC, in an attempt to ellicit their support in Egypt's conflict with the Hittite and Hurri-Mitanni empires.
Revised:  These exchanges also included tributes of gold paid to Assyrian kings during the 16th and 15th centuries BC, in an attempt to ellicit their support in Egypt's conflict with the Hittite and Hurrian-Mitanni empires.
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Original:  As a result Egypt came into conflict with Assyria's fellow Mesopotamian state of Babylonia, which along with the Medes, Persians, Chaldeans, Cimmerians and Scythians, amongst others, were fighting to throw off Assyrian rule . Egypt engaged in a number of unsuccessful conflicts with Babylonia during the late 7th and early 6th century BC in the Levant, before being driven from the region by Nebuchadnezzar II  who may have briefly invaded Egypt itself.
Revised:  As a result Egypt came into conflict with Assyria's fellow Mesopotamian state of Babylonia, which along with the Medes, Persians, Chaldeans, Cimmerians and Scythians, amongst others, were fighting to throw off Assyrian rule . Egypt engaged in a number of unsuccessful conflicts with Babylonia during the late 7th and early 6th century BC in the Levant, before being driven from the region by Nebuchadnezzar II of Babylonia, who may have briefly invaded Egypt itself.
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Original: Henry Brockhouse ( died 1921) was a British socialist politician.
Revised: Henry Brockhouse ( 11 July 1868 – 21 February 1921) was a British socialist politician.
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Original:  Under his leadership, the company became part of Vickers, and Brockhouse retained an important position at the firm until his death .
Revised:  Under his leadership, the company became part of Vickers, and Brockhouse retained an important position at Vickers .
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Original:  In his youth, Brockhouse was a supporter of the Liberal Party, and was a prominent local noncomformist .
Revised:  In his youth, Brockhouse was a supporter of the Liberal Party, and was a prominent local nonconformist .
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Original:  From 1903, he was also served as chair of the party's Divisional Council.
Revised:  From 1903, he also served as chair of the party's Divisional Council.
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Original:  He also founded the West Bromwich Labour Church Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union , and at the 1911 UK census, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter  . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
Revised:  Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union , and at the 1911 UK census, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
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Original:  He also founded the West Bromwich Labour Church Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union , and at the 1911 UK census, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter  . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
Revised:  He also founded the West Bromwich Labour Church Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union . When the United Kingdom census, 1911 UK census, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
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Original:  He also founded the West Bromwich Labour Church Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union , and at the 1911 UK census, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter  . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
Revised:  He also founded the West Bromwich Labour Church Brockhouse's wife was active in the Women's Social and Political Union , and at the 1911 was conducted, she made herself absent from the house, along with their eldest daughter . Harry himself was active in the Men's League for Women's Suffrage.
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Original:  For many years, Brockhouse was a strong supporter of the Clarion movement , he along with the majority of the ILP, he opposed World War I, and therefore cut his ties with the Clarion.
Revised:  For many years, Brockhouse was a strong supporter of the Clarion movement . Along with the majority of the ILP, he opposed World War I, and therefore cut his ties with the Clarion.
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Original:  Brockhouse  served on West Bromwich Town Council for many years, including a term as mayor in 1911/1  
Revised:  Brockhouse also served on West Bromwich Town Council for many years, including a term as mayor in 1911/1 
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Original:  ” "She “awakens” and sees the world and her role in it differently."
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Original:  ” "She “awakens” and sees the world and her role in it differently."
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Original:  The Heroine's Journey was popular with women as many went to her lectures to learn more about the new topic .
Revised:  The Heroine's Journey introduced Murdock to the public eye and increased general interest in the distinction between male and female stories of personal growth, as shown through a sharp increase in attendance at her lectures .
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Original:  At one of her lectures, Murdock states , "At Mythic Journeys the feminine journey was being discussed in the basement in a room too small, while the masculine journey was discussed upstairs in the hotel’s Grand Ballroom!"
Revised:  At one of her lectures, Murdock stated , "At Mythic Journeys the feminine journey was being discussed in the basement in a room too small, while the masculine journey was discussed upstairs in the hotel’s Grand Ballroom!"
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Original:  Nowadays, the Heroine's Journey has become more popular as many different versions of the model have been made since Murdock's publication.
Revised:  The Heroine's Journey has become more popular as many different versions of the model have been made since Murdock's publication.
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Original:  Nowadays, the Heroine's Journey has become more popular as many different versions of the model have been made since Murdock's publication.
Revised:  Nowadays, the Heroine's Journey popularity expanded as other authors created various versions since Murdock's publication.
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Original:  Criticisms Murdock's book was written specifically for women and therapists, therefore it was hard to be used for writing.
Revised:  Criticisms Murdock's book was written specifically for women and therapists, leading to criticisms that it was difficult to use as a template for creative writing.
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Original:  Murdock used her model to help her patients and has had many lectures to spread her teachings to others.
Revised:  Murdock used her model to help her patients and has held many lectures to spread her teachings to others.
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Original:  Using a deep sea submersible (ALVIN) to search for hydrothermal activity at depths around 2600 meters, the project discovered a series of vents emitting dark mineral particles at extremely high temperatures which gave rise to the popular name, “black smokers” . Biologic communities found at 21° N vents, based on chemosynthesis and similar to those found at the Galapagos spreading center, established that these communities are not unique.
Revised:  Using a deep sea submersible (ALVIN) to search for hydrothermal activity at depths around 2600 meters, the project discovered a series of vents emitting dark mineral particles at extremely high temperatures which gave rise to the popular name, "black smokers" . Biologic communities found at 21° N vents, based on chemosynthesis and similar to those found at the Galapagos spreading center, established that these communities are not unique.
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Original:  Astrobiology Magazine 27 April 2015.
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Original:  Within minutes, the price exceeded 50,000 €. Ebay last removed the CD because of the penis drawn on the cover.
Revised:  Within minutes, the price exceeded 50,000 €. Ebay later removed the CD because of the penis drawn on the cover.
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Original: Tricia Newbold is an American career government employee and whistleblower who has worked in the Executive Office of the President of the United States since 2000.
Revised: Tricia Newbold is an American career government employee who has worked in the Executive Office of the President of the United States since 2000.
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Original:  Rath described the family tragedy in a gripping letter to his daughters : " On March 25, 1859, the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
Revised:  Rath described the family tragedy in a gripping letter to his daughters . " On March 25, 1859, the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
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Original:  Rath described the family tragedy in a gripping letter to his daughters : " On March 25, 1859, the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
Revised:  Rath described the family tragedy in a gripping letter to his daughters : On March 25, 1859, the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
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Original:  Later, he heard from Katuti that--shortly after Leopold died--the rope Anna was holding slipped out of her hands .   <  blockquote>        Sources (af) Krüger, Prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
Revised:  Later, he heard from Katuti that--shortly after Leopold died--the rope Anna was holding slipped out of her hands . < / blockquote> Sources (af) Krüger, Prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
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Original:  2004. Kroniek van 'n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier''.
Revised:  Kroniek van 'n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier''.
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Original: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, Otjimbingwe, South West Africa, March 29, 1851 – Wellington, Cape Town, South Africa, January 26, 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
Revised: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, March 29, 1851 – Wellington, Cape Town, South Africa, January 26, 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
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Original: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, Otjimbingwe, South West Africa, March 29, 1851 – Wellington, Cape Town, South Africa, January 26, 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
Revised: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, Otjimbingwe, South West Africa, March 29, 1851 – January 26, 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
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Original:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he passed away on June 13, 1918.
Revised:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he died on June 13, 1918.
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Original:  His widow had been married to him for 22 years, and wrote a biography of him that was published in 1943, three years after her death.
Revised:  His widow survived him by about 22 years, and wrote a biography of him that was published in 1943, three years after her death.
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Original:  Shipwreck in Walvis Bay In October 1858, Anna, her five siblings, and others traveled by ship from Walvis Bay to Cape Town, where the two oldest (Anna and Emma) were to attend school and Rath was going to work on printing his 3,900-word Herero language dictionary.
Revised:  Shipwreck in Walvis Bay In October 1858, Anna, her five siblings, and parents traveled by ship from Walvis Bay to Cape Town, where the two oldest (Anna and Emma) were to attend school and Rath was going to work on printing his 3,900-word Herero language dictionary.
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Original:  The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: <blockquote>In 1859, the Rev. Rath, his wife, his%DIFDELCMD < [%%% four remaining children, and his Damaraland servant, Katuti, were travelling to Stellenbosch where their two eldest daughters, Emma Cathrina (10) and Anna (8), were boarding at the Rhenish Institute (now the Rhenish Girls' High School ).
Revised:  The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: %DIFDELCMD < [%%% four remaining children, and his Damaraland servant, Katuti, were travelling to Stellenbosch where their two eldest daughters, Emma Cathrina (10) and Anna (8), were boarding at the Rhenish Institute (now the Rhenish Girls' High School ).
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Original:  The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: <blockquote>In 1859, the Rev. Rath, his wife, his%DIFDELCMD < [%%% four remaining children, and his Damaraland servant, Katuti, were travelling to Stellenbosch where their two eldest daughters, Emma Cathrina (10) and Anna (8), were boarding at the Rhenish Institute (now the Rhenish Girls' High School ).
Revised:  The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: <blockquote>In 1859, the Rev. Rath, his wife, his%DIFDELCMD < [%%% four remaining board at the Rhenish Institute (now the Rhenish Girls' High School ).
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Original:  Praised be the Lord.' (Job 1:21)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the last part of his moving letter , he encouraged his two daughters in Stellenbosch to take courage .
Revised:  Praised be the Lord.' (Job 1:21)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the last part of his moving letter , he encouraged his two daughters in Stellenbosch , encouraging them to be brave .
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Original:  </blockquote> The Rev. Rath moves to Sarepta The Rev. Rath returned to Otjimbingwe, but on June 13, 1861, he left the mission, and South West Africa for that matter, to begin his ministry anew in Sarepta (now a Cape Town suburb) or Kuils River in Cape Colony, where he worked until July 27, 1893, when he was succeeded by the Rev. Friedrich Eich.
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Original:  Vermaak writes that both of his surviving children led a life of service at his insistence:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'The Rev. Rath closed his letter to his two motherless daughters by urging them to follow the examples of their mother and Savior as diligent students that they may serve God and their fellow man...
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 'The Rev. Rath closed his letter to his two motherless daughters by urging them to follow the examples of their mother and Savior as diligent students that they may serve God and their fellow man...
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Original:  In October 1890, Rath informed the superintendent-general of education, Dr. Langham Dale, that the Cape government had not earmarked any funds for building schools, and her father accordingly took the lead, spearheading the demolition of the school to rebuild a new one that December.
Revised:  In October 1890, Anna informed the superintendent-general of education, Dr. Langham Dale, that the Cape government had not earmarked any funds for building schools, and her father accordingly took the lead, spearheading the demolition of the school to rebuild a new one that December.
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Original:  Married life In November 1898, at the age of 47, she first married the 60-year-old Rev. Jacobus Pauw, who in 1896 had been widowed for the second time as the father of 12 children by his second wife .
Revised:  Married life In November 1898, at the age of 47, she first married the 60-year-old Rev. Jacobus Pauw, a widower with 12 children by his second wife .
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Original:  Married life In November 1898, at the age of 47, she first married the 60-year-old Rev. Jacobus Pauw, who in 1896 had been widowed for the second time as the father of 12 children by his second wife .
Revised:  Married life In November 1898, at the age of 47, she first married the 60-year-old Rev. Jacobus Pauw, who in 1896 had been widowed for the second time as the father of 12 children .
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Original:  The 87-year-old Rev. Rath died on June 6, 1903, while visiting his elder daughter, Mrs. D.F. de Villiers of Kuils River, and was buried in Sarepta.
Revised:  The 87-year-old Rev. Rath died on June 6, 1903, while visiting his elder daughter, and was buried in Sarepta.
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Original:  The Rev. Pauw  retired as a minister in the NGK in 1910 to a £100 stipend (in the days before pensions).
Revised:  The Rev. Pauw , retired as a minister in the NGK in 1910 to a £100 stipend (in the days before pensions).
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Original:  His widow survived him by about 22 years, and wrote a biography of him that was published in 1943, three years after her death.
Revised:  Anna survived him by about 22 years, and wrote a biography of him that was published in 1943, three years after her death.
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Original:  Kroniek van 'n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier '' . Kuilsrivier: NG Kerkraad, 2004. (en) KlausDierks.com Biographies of Namibian Personalities.
Revised:  Kroniek van 'n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier . Kuilsrivier: NG Kerkraad, 2004. (en) KlausDierks.com Biographies of Namibian Personalities.
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Original: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, March 29 , 1851 – January 26 , 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
Revised: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, 29 , 1851 – January 26 , 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
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Original: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, March 29 , 1851 – January 26 , 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
Revised: Anna Margaretha Pauw (née Rath, March 29 , 1851 – 26 , 1940) was a mission teacher and wife of the missionary church leader and lecturer Jacobus Pauw.
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Original:  On the family's return voyage on April 1 , 1859, Anna and Emma's mother and four siblings died in a shipwreck.
Revised:  On the family's return voyage on 1 , 1859, Anna and Emma's mother and four siblings died in a shipwreck.
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Original:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open Easter Monday , March 30 , 1891.
Revised:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open Easter Monday 30 , 1891.
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Original:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open Easter Monday , March 30 , 1891.
Revised:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open Easter Monday , March 30 March 1891.
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Original:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he died on June 13 , 1918.
Revised:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he died on 13 , 1918.
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Original:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he died on June 13 , 1918.
Revised:  In 1913, he also retired as a docent at the Missionary Institute, and he died on June 13 June 1918.
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Original:  A silat student since the age of 3-4, Mihara holds the honorary title of Pendekar and works as  coach at the Pandeka Mihar Institute in Vienna.
Revised:  A silat student since the age of 3-4, Mihara holds the honorary title of Pendekar and works as the coach at the Pandeka Mihar Institute in Vienna.
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Original:  RM4.3 billion per year (Both states are the poorest in Malaysia) Education Rights to own education system Malaysia standardised education system(Dilapidated schools and frequent misinformation in history textbooks for both Sabah and Sarawak history) Immigration Control immigration entry Controlled immigration entry via permit(Sabah:
Revised:  RM4.3 billion per year Education Rights to own education system Malaysia standardised education system(Dilapidated schools and frequent misinformation in history textbooks for both Sabah and Sarawak history) Immigration Control immigration entry Controlled immigration entry via permit(Sabah:
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Original:  This package removed the distinction between the states in Peninsula Malaysia and the Bornean states of Sabah and Sarawak.
Revised:  This package removed the distinction between the states in Peninsular Malaysia and the Bornean states of Sabah and Sarawak.
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Original:  In October 2009, then-Prime Minister Najib Razak declared that Malaysia Day would become a national holiday with the intent of promoting unity between West and East Malaysia.
Revised:  In October 2009, the then Prime Minister Najib Razak declared that Malaysia Day would become a national holiday with the intent of promoting unity between West and East Malaysia.
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