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Original: New legislation introduced into the New York State Senate today would effectively ban usage of all electronic devices on the streets of New York City and Buffalo.
Revised: New legislation introduced in the New York State Senate today would effectively ban usage of all electronic devices on the streets of New York City and Buffalo.
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Original: New legislation introduced into the New York State Senate today would effectively ban usage of all electronic devices on the streets of New York City and Buffalo.
Revised: New legislation introduced into the New York State Senate today would effectively ban the use of all electronic devices on the streets of New York City and Buffalo.
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Original:  The legislation would ban the usage of any electronic device while crossing a street.
Revised:  The legislation would ban the use of any electronic device while crossing a street.
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Original:  The impetus for the legislation is the recent deaths of three people in Brooklyn and Manhattan, all of which were attributed to the distraction caused by the usage of electronic devices
Revised:  The impetus for the legislation is the recent deaths of three people in Brooklyn and Manhattan, all of which were attributed to the distraction caused by the use of electronic devices
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Original:  The rising cost of construction and October snow have also slowed progress . Category:Royal_Canadian_Mounted_Poli
Revised:  The rising cost of construction and October snow have also slowed progress Category:Royal_Canadian_Mounted_Poli
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Original:  The rising cost of construction and October snow have also slowed progress . Category:Royal_Canadian_Mounted_Poli
Revised:  The rising cost of construction and October snow have also slowed progress . 
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Original:  He says there's still no funding from the federal government, and only $1 million has been raised through donations - leaving $ 500,000 to go.
Revised:  He says there's still no funding from the federal government, and only $1 million has been raised through donations—leaving $ 500,000 to go.
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Original:  According to the Cambridge Department of Human Services, the owners of the station, the Christos Poutahides No. 6 Family Limited Partnership,  has asked that the station be allowed not to offer repair services at the site.
Revised:  According to the Cambridge Department of Human Services, the Christos Poutahides No. 6 Family Limited Partnership, has asked that the station be allowed not to offer repair services at the site.
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Original:  According to the Cambridge Department of Human Services, the owners of the station, the Christos Poutahides No. 6 Family Limited Partnership,  has asked that the station be allowed not to offer repair services at the site.
Revised:  According to the Cambridge Department of Human Services, the owners of the station, the Christos Poutahides No. 6 Family Limited Partnership, has asked that they be allowed not to offer repair services at the site.
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Original:  She is considered by physicians to be in a "permanent vegetative state", while her parents contend that she is not brain damaged, and that there is hope for recovery.
Revised:  She is considered by physicians to be in a "permanent vegetative state", while her parents contend that she is viable and that there is hope for recovery.
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Original: The Edmonton Police Service says a training program in which officers observe volunteers who may be high on drugs  is used in 30 U.S. states  .
Revised: A training program in which officers observe volunteers who may be high on drugs is used in 30 U.S. states .
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Original: The Edmonton Police Service says a training program in which officers observe volunteers who may be high on drugs  is used in 30 U.S. states  .
Revised: The Edmonton Police Service says a training program in which officers observe volunteers who may be high on drugs , and is used in 30 U.S. states .
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Original:  Acting police chief Mike Bradshaw says  the training is meant to help police officers identify how people behave when they are on drugs.
Revised:  Acting police chief Mike Bradshaw says " the training is meant to help police officers identify how people behave when they are on drugs.
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Original:  Bradshaw said  police did not provide the men and women - some of them prostitutes - with any drugs during a training session in December.
Revised:  " police did not provide the men and women - some of them prostitutes - with any drugs during a training session in December.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society provided the for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, but not all those who came forward were aboriginal.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the w:Royal Candian Mounted Police (RCMP) said the volunteers used their own drugs , none of which were taken in the presence of officers . Bradshaw says the police approached the Metis society looking for volunteers, however not all aboriginal.
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Original:  They were, however, all known drug users and may or may not have been high during the session.
Revised:  They may or may not have been high during the session.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the Royal Canadian Mounted Police clarified the issue of who gave the volunteers the dugs, claiming the police officers were not even present when the drugs were administer , the volunteers used their own drugs.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the RCMP clarified the issue of who gave the volunteers the dugs, claiming the police officers were not even present when the drugs were administer , the volunteers used their own drugs.
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Original:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the Royal Canadian Mounted Police clarified the issue of who gave the volunteers the dugs, claiming the police officers were not even present when the drugs were administer , the volunteers used their own drugs.
Revised:  Cpl. Wayne Oakes of the Royal Canadian Mounted Police clarified the issue of who gave the volunteers the dugs, claiming the police officers were not even present when the drugs were administered , the volunteers used their own drugs.
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Original: Bradshaw says the police asked the Metis society to provided the nine volunteers, however not all of them were aboriginal.
Revised: Bradshaw says the police asked the Metis society to provide the nine volunteers, however not all of them were aboriginal.
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Original:  By utilizing the state's air rights to the space above freeways that run below  ground level, cities can acquire 5 or 10 acres of parkspace essentially for free.
Revised:  By utilizing the state's air rights to the space above freeways that run below at ground level, cities can acquire 5 or 10 acres of parkspace essentially for free.
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Original:  The Russian President said that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force . "One state, the United States, has overstepped its national borders in every way."
Revised:  The Russian President said that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force but that "One state, the United States, has overstepped its national borders in every way."
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Original:  The Russian President said that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force but that "One state, the United States, has overstepped its national borders in every way."
Revised:  The Russian President said that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force . "One state, the United States, has overstepped its national borders in every way."
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Original: Putin said nations "are witnessing an almost uncontained hyper use of force in international relations."
Revised: Putin said :
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Original:  He said that Russia was strictly adhering to the agreement to destroy thousands of strategic nuclear weapons until he end of 2012.
Revised:  He said that Russia was strictly adhering to the agreement to destroy thousands of strategic nuclear weapons until the end of 2012.
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Original:  He also said, he hoped the partner was acting in a equally transparent manner and would not keep a few hundred warheads for "bad times".
Revised:  He also said, he hoped the partner was acting in an equally transparent manner and would not keep a few hundred warheads for "bad times".
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Original:  It has as become an annual opportunity for world leaders to discuss the most pressing issues of the day
Revised:  It has become an annual opportunity for world leaders to discuss the most pressing issues of the day
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Original: Putin said : The Russian President said that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force.
Revised: Putin said : The Russian President pointed out that only the UN, and not the EU or NATO, can sanction the legitimate use of force.
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Original:  Even such problem states like North Korea would not be able to build any missile in a foreseeable time necessitating such a defensive measure  .
Revised:  Even such problem states like North Korea would not be able to build any missile in a foreseeable time necessitating such a defensive measure , the President opined .
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Original: Image:Vladimir Putin.jpg|Russian President , Vladimir Putin Russian President Vladimir Putin heavily criticized the United States in a speech at the 43rd Munich Conference on Security Policy Saturday for what he called its "almost uncontained" use of force in the world.
Revised:  Russian President Vladimir Putin heavily criticized the United States in a speech at the 43rd Munich Conference on Security Policy Saturday for what he called its "almost uncontained" use of force in the world.
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Original: Image:Vladimir Putin.jpg|Russian President , Vladimir Putin Russian President Vladimir Putin heavily criticized the United States in a speech at the 43rd Munich Conference on Security Policy Saturday for what he called its "almost uncontained" use of force in the world.
Revised: Image:Vladimir Putin.jpg|Russian President , Vladimir Putin Russian President Vladimir Putin heavily criticized the United States in a speech at the 43rd Munich Conference on Security Policy Saturday for what he called its "almost uncontained" use of force in the world.
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Original:   Putin also criticized US plans for missile defense systems and NATO's expansion.
Revised:  Image:Vladimir Putin.jpg|Russian President, Vladimir Putin Putin also criticized US plans for missile defense systems and NATO's expansion.
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Original:  Obama's speech was given from the same spot that Abraham Lincoln gave his "House divided" speech over 125 years ago and from the place where he began his elected career 10 years ago.
Revised:  Obama's speech was given from the same spot that Abraham Lincoln gave his "House divided" speech over 125 years ago and from the place where Obama began his elected career 10 years ago.
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Original:  If elected, Obama would be the first US African American President .
Revised:  If elected, Obama would be the first African American president of the US .
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Original:  If elected, Obama would be the first African American president of the US . Obama broke onto the national scene with his popular speech at the Democratic National Convention.
Revised:  If elected, Obama would be the first African American president of the United States . Obama broke onto the national scene with his popular speech at the Democratic National Convention.
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Original:  In 1996  Obama was elected to the Illinois Senate, before rising to his current position in the US Senate in 2004
Revised:  In 1996 , Obama was elected to the Illinois Senate, before rising to his current position in the US Senate in 2004
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Original: John DeLorean, a pioneer in the automobile industry, died Saturday of a stroke in a hospital in New Jersey of complications from a  recent stroke.
Revised: John DeLorean, a pioneer in the automobile industry, died Saturday in a recent stroke.
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Original:  DeLorean was born in 1925 in Detroit, Michigan to immigrants from Europe .
Revised:  DeLorean was born in 1925 in Detroit, Michigan to European immigrant parents .
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Original:  He received an education in automotive engineering , and quickly rose through the ranks of Packard and then General Motors (GM). DeLorean was credited with the development of the Pontiac GTO, which helped introduce the era of "muscle cars".
Revised:  He received an education in automotive engineering and quickly rose through the ranks of Packard and then General Motors (GM). DeLorean was credited with the development of the Pontiac GTO, which helped introduce the era of "muscle cars".
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Original:  In 1982 he was arrested after attempting to sell $24 million worth of cocaine to undercover police, and after his company's failure  became involved in a multitude of lawsuits alleging investor fraud.
Revised:  In 1982 he was arrested for attempting to sell $24 million worth of cocaine to undercover police, and after his company's failure became involved in a multitude of lawsuits alleging investor fraud.
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Original:  In 1982 he was arrested after attempting to sell $24 million worth of cocaine to undercover police, and after his company's failure  became involved in a multitude of lawsuits alleging investor fraud.
Revised:  In 1982 he was arrested after attempting to sell $24 million worth of cocaine to undercover police, and after his company's failure , he became involved in a multitude of lawsuits alleging investor fraud.
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Original: Members of the Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday it might ignore an upcoming House of Commons vote to respect the Kyoto accord.
Revised: Members of Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday it might ignore an upcoming House of Commons vote to respect the Kyoto accord.
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Original: Members of the Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday it might ignore an upcoming House of Commons vote to respect the Kyoto accord.
Revised: Members of the Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday that the government of Canada may ignore an upcoming House of Commons vote to respect the Kyoto accord.
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Original: Members of the Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday it might ignore an upcoming House of Commons vote to respect the Kyoto accord.
Revised: Members of the Stephen Harper's Conservative government said Friday it might ignore an upcoming House of Commons bill to respect the Kyoto accord.
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Original:  A Liberal bill has been introduced requiring the government to table a plan within 60 days explaining how they would meet climate change commitments.
Revised:  The Liberal sponsored Bill C-288 requires the government to table a plan within 60 days explaining how they would meet climate change commitments.
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Original:   ]  Experts are saying the government has a democratic obligation to follow laws, however the liberals are saying it would be a "coup d'etat" and would trigger a constitutional crisis , however transport Minister Lawrence Cannon says the government does not feel bound by Bill C-288 .
Revised:  ...] Experts are saying the government has a democratic obligation to follow laws, however the liberals are saying it would be a "coup d'etat" and would trigger a constitutional crisis , however transport Minister Lawrence Cannon says the government does not feel bound by Bill C-288 .
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Original:   ]  Experts are saying the government has a democratic obligation to follow laws, however the liberals are saying it would be a "coup d'etat" and would trigger a constitutional crisis , however transport Minister Lawrence Cannon says the government does not feel bound by Bill C-288 .
Revised:  ] Experts are saying the government has a democratic obligation to follow laws, however the liberals are saying it would be a "coup d'etat" and would trigger a constitutional crisis .
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Original:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, MP Pablo Rodriguez from Montreal says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election , however The legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, therefore could not bring down the government on the vote itself.
Revised:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election , however The legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, therefore could not bring down the government on the vote itself.
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Original:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, MP Pablo Rodriguez from Montreal says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election , however The legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, therefore could not bring down the government on the vote itself.
Revised:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, MP Pablo Rodriguez from Montreal says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election . However the legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, therefore could not bring down the government on the vote itself.
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Original:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, MP Pablo Rodriguez from Montreal says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election , however The legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, therefore could not bring down the government on the vote itself.
Revised:  The Liberal sponsor of the bill, MP Pablo Rodriguez from Montreal says that if the bill becomes law, the government will have to respect the Kyoto Accord or call an election , however The legislation is not being considered a confidence matter, and therefore would not bring down the government on the vote itself.
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Original:  Stewart Elgie, a professor at the University of Ottawa, confirmed if passed and no action is taken, the government would be breaking the law and someone to take them to court.
Revised:  Stewart Elgie, a professor at the University of Ottawa, confirmed if passed and no action is taken, the government would be breaking the law and can be taken to court.
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Original:  Transport Minister Lawrence Cannon says the government does not feel bound by the terms of the bill, adding that the government will "act [...] instead of adopting an empty piece of legislation . [  "
Revised:  Transport Minister Lawrence Cannon says the government does not feel bound by the terms of the bill, adding that the government will "act [...] instead of adopting an empty piece of legislation . [it "
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Original:  CBC News: "Canada supports six-nation climate change pact: Ambrose"
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Original: Rona Ambrose , Canada 's Environment Minister , earlier voiced Canada's interest in particicipating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
Revised: Rona Ambrose , Canada 's Environment Minister ) voiced Canada's interest in particicipating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
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Original: Rona Ambrose , Canada 's Environment Minister , earlier voiced Canada's interest in particicipating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
Revised: Rona Ambrose , Canada 's Environment Minister , earlier voiced Canada's interest in participating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
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Original: Rona Ambrose (at the time Harper 's Environment Minister) voiced Canada's interest in participating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
Revised: Rona Ambrose (at the time Canada 's Environment Minister) voiced Canada's interest in participating in U.S. sponsored Asia Pacific Partnership on Clean Development and Climate.
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Original: A 132-page glossy magazine called Russia!
Revised: A 132-page glossy magazine Russia!
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Original:  On the magazine’s website (www.readrussia.com) publishers state that most of the names one would expect to find in the publication, such as Maria Sharapova, Leo Tolstoy or Vladimir Putin, are not mentioned in the magazine.
Revised:  On the magazine’s website publishers state that most of the names one would expect to find in the publication, such as Maria Sharapova, Leo Tolstoy or Vladimir Putin, are not mentioned in the magazine.
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Original:  readers can find stories on hidden treasures of Ivan the Terrible, photos of young women chopping wood, discussions of the free speech and homosexuality and photographic journey to Russia’s far east  
Revised:  readers can find stories on hidden treasures of Ivan the Terrible, photos of young women chopping wood, discussions of the free speech and homosexuality and photographic journey to Russia’s far east . 
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Original: Cover of the first issue of Russia! magazine shows the landing to the moon "Russian Style" Source: A 132-page glossy magazine Russia!
Revised: Cover of the first issue of Russia! magazine shows the landing to the moon "Russian Style" . A 132-page glossy magazine Russia!
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Original:  “Russia! ” intends to fill this gap .
Revised:  Russia! intends to fill this gap .
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Original:  However, the approach the publishers chose  is somewhat unorthodox.
Revised:  However, the approach the publishers chose for this 132-page glossy magazine is somewhat unorthodox.
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