wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Trabzon Security services between 2005 and 2007 years recorded 5.025 phone conversations of Tuncel and 1225 phone conversations of Hayal.
Revised:  Trabzon Security services between 2005 and 2007 , recorded 5,025 phone conversations of Tuncel and 1225 phone conversations of Hayal.
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Original:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations , excluded as in a note in the file , they were deemed to be unimportant by the Trabzon police.
Revised:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations were excluded with a note in the file , they were deemed to be unimportant by the Trabzon police.
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Original:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations , excluded as in a note in the file , they were deemed to be unimportant by the Trabzon police.
Revised:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations , excluded as in a note in the file stating that they were deemed to be unimportant by the Trabzon police.
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Original:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations , excluded as in a note in the file , they were deemed to be unimportant by the Trabzon police.
Revised:  However, when then the public prosecutors in Istanbul asked for the transcriptions of these phone conversations, only 46 conversations of Tuncel and 17 conversations of Hayal were forwarded to them, rest of the conversations , excluded as in a note in the file , they were deemed to be unimportant by the police.
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Original:  The Court Case against 19 men charged with involvement in the murder of Hrant Dink is to start on July 2 in Istanbul.
Revised:  The court case against 19 men charged with involvement in the murder of Hrant Dink is to start on July 2 in Istanbul.
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Original:  The Public prosecutor is seeking life imprisonment for both Tuncel and Hayal, who are also facing charges of being a senior member of an armed terrorist group
Revised:  The Public prosecutor is seeking life imprisonment for both Tuncel and Hayal, who are also facing charges of being senior members of an armed terrorist group
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Original: Hoardings of Sivaji: The Boss have begun to appear arround Chennai (capital of Tamil Nadu).
Revised: Hoardings of Sivaji: The Boss have begun to appear around Chennai (capital of Tamil Nadu).
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Original:  The fans have also began thier countdown to the films release.
Revised:  The fans have also began their countdown to the films release.
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Original:  Fans are eargerly awaiting the release.
Revised:  Fans are eagerly awaiting the release.
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Original:  Ticket prices for the first day are expected to exceed Rs. 300 
Revised:  Ticket prices for the first day are expected to exceed Rs. 300. 
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Original: The Georgia Aquarium announced that the beloved beluga whale, Gasper, was humanely euthanized today.
Revised: The Georgia Aquarium announced that the beloved beluga whale, Gasper, was euthanized today.
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Original:  NASA has unveiled the new telescope that will replace the Hubble Space Telescope in Washington D.C. called the James Webb Space Telescope  . Currently, NASA has a life-sized model on display to the public which is as tall as a two story house and weighs several tons.
Revised:  NASA has unveiled the new telescope that will replace the Hubble Space Telescope in Washington D.C. called the James Webb Space Telescope JWST . Currently, NASA has a life-sized model on display to the public which is as tall as a two story house and weighs several tons.
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Original: Northrop Grumman is contracted to build the telescope and will be jointly operated by NASA, the ESA and the Canadian Space Agency.
Revised: Northrop Grumman is contracted to build the telescope and will be jointly operated by NASA, the European Space Agency and the Canadian Space Agency.
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Original: A life-sized model of the JWST was recently on display at the AAS annual meeting in Seattle, Washington.
Revised: The model on display at the AAS annual meeting in Seattle, Washington.
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Original:  Mixon also said that Iraqi government officials are not moving fast enough to provide the "most powerful weapon" against insurgents — a government that works and supplies services for the people  Mixon has about 3,500 troops in Diyala and there are about 10,000 Iraqi soldiers and several thousand Iraqi police, with 3,000 more police approved but not yet hired and traine
Revised:  Mixon also said that Iraqi government officials are not moving fast enough to provide the "most powerful weapon" against insurgents — a government that works and supplies services for the people . Mixon has about 3,500 troops in Diyala and there are about 10,000 Iraqi soldiers and several thousand Iraqi police, with 3,000 more police approved but not yet hired and traine
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Original:  Mixon also said that Iraqi government officials are not moving fast enough to provide the "most powerful weapon" against insurgents — a government that works and supplies services for the people  Mixon has about 3,500 troops in Diyala and there are about 10,000 Iraqi soldiers and several thousand Iraqi police, with 3,000 more police approved but not yet hired and traine
Revised:  Mixon also said that Iraqi government officials are not moving fast enough to provide the "most powerful weapon" against insurgents — a government that works and supplies services for the people Mixon has about 3,500 troops in Diyala and there are about 10,000 Iraqi soldiers and several thousand Iraqi police, with 3,000 more police approved but not yet hired and trained
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Original:  More      details will emerge quickly so keep refreshin
Revised:  More Keep refreshing as details will emerge quickly so keep refreshin
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Original:  More      details will emerge quickly so keep refreshin
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Original:  Ruiz said the man, between 17 and 20 years old from Uzbekistan, entered the embassy with his mother and took Ambassador Valery Nikolayenko and four other men and three women hostage . Police were considering the mother a hostage.
Revised:  Bogdanyants entered the embassy with his mother and took Ambassador Valery Nikolayenko and four other men and three women hostage . Police were considering the mother a hostage.
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Original:  Ruiz said the man, between 17 and 20 years old from Uzbekistan, entered the embassy with his mother and took Ambassador Valery Nikolayenko and four other men and three women hostage . Police were considering the mother a hostage.
Revised:  Ruiz said the man, between 17 and 20 years old from Uzbekistan, entered the embassy with his mother and took 
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Original:  The Costa Rica TV network, Telenoticias, reported that the man was apparently upset over the embassy's failure to process some undetermined paperwork.
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Original: Police say Roman Bogdanyants, 21, from Kyrgyzstan, entered the Russian Embassy in Costa Rica and took at least one other male hostage at gunpoint, before authorities were able to end the standoff peacefully after four hours.
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Original:  In response to his campaign the government has promised to spend an additional £ 280m over three years on school food in England.
Revised:  In response to his campaign the government has promised to spend an additional £ 280 million over three years on school food in England.
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Original:  with the Cardiff City council spending just £0.40 on each meal, wilst Powys council lavished £0.69 per pupil.
Revised:  with the Cardiff City council spending just £0.40 on each meal, wilst Powys council lavished 69p per pupil.
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Original:  In response to his campaign the government has promised to spend an additional £ 280 million over three years on school food in England.
Revised:  In response to his campaign the government has promised to spend an additional £ 280m over three years on school food in England.
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Original:  In recognition of his long service to the French motion picture industry, in 1986 Delannoy was given an Honorary César Awar
Revised:  In recognition of his long service to the French motion picture industry, in 1986 Delannoy was given an Honorary César Award
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Original: Jean Delannoy, an early actor who started out in silent film movies and french film director who directed the 1958 film "Maigret tend un piège" has died today at the age of 100.
Revised: Jean Delannoy, an early actor who started out in silent film movies and became a film director has died today at the age of 100.
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Original:   Although Delannoy was born in a Paris suburb, his family is from Haute-Normandie in the north of France.
Revised:  Although Delannoy was born in a Paris suburb, his family was from Haute-Normandie in the north of France.
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Original:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion  first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano,  were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
Revised:  He was a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano, were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
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Original:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion  first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano,  were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
Revised:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion and were first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano, were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
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Original:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion  first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano,  were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
Revised:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion first to settle in Wallonia . After their name became De la Noye and then Delano, were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
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Original:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion  first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano,  were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
Revised:  He is a Protestant, a descendant of Huguenots, some of whom fled the country during the French Wars of Religion first to settle in Wallonia then, after their name became De la Noye and then Delano, they were on the second ship to emigrate to Plymouth, Massachusetts in America.
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Original:  In recognition of his long service to the French motion picture industry, in 1986 Delannoy was given an Honorary César Award 
Revised:  In recognition of his long service to the French motion picture industry, Delannoy was given an Honorary César Award 
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Original:  In 1946, his film about a Protestant minister titled " La symphonie pastorale " was awarded the Palme d'Or at the Cannes Film Festival.
Revised:  In 1946, his film about a Protestant minister titled La symphonie pastorale " was awarded the Palme d'Or at the Cannes Film Festival.
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Original:  In 1946, his film about a Protestant minister titled " La symphonie pastorale " was awarded the Palme d'Or at the Cannes Film Festival.
Revised:  In 1946, his film about a Protestant minister titled " La symphonie pastorale was awarded the Palme d'Or at the Cannes Film Festival.
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Original:  In 1960, his film, " Maigret tend un piège" was nominated for a BAFTA award for "Best Film from any Source."
Revised:  In 1960, his film, Maigret tend un piège" was nominated for a BAFTA award for "Best Film from any Source."
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Original:  In 1960, his film, " Maigret tend un piège" was nominated for a BAFTA award for "Best Film from any Source."
Revised:  In 1960, his film, " Maigret tend un pièg was nominated for a BAFTA award for "Best Film from any Source."
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Original:  This may attest to his popularity  
Revised:  This may attest to his popularity . 
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Original:  the Assembly of Experts is a powerful clerical body charged with reviewing the actions of the Supreme Leader of Iran, Grand Ayatollah Ali Khamenei, to ensure conformity with Islamic laws.
Revised:  the Assembly of Experts is a clerical body charged with reviewing the actions of the Supreme Leader of Iran, Grand Ayatollah Ali Khamenei, to ensure conformity with Islamic laws.
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Original: Ayatollah Emami-Kashani denounced America during public prayers.
Revised: Ayatollah 
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Original:  Ayatollah Mohammad Emami Kashani fiercely lambasted Americans as an occupier in Iraq for not caring about the fate of Iraqis during Friday prayers at Tehran University.
Revised:  Mohammad Emami Kashani fiercely lambasted Americans as an occupier in Iraq for not caring about the fate of Iraqis during Friday prayers at Tehran University.
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Original: Labwani is a prominent activist with a history of advocating for democratic reform in Syria.
Revised: Labwani is a prominent activist with a history of advocating democratic reform in Syria.
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Original:  She was taken to a hospital in the town of 100 Mile House, where she was pronounced dead .
Revised:  She was taken to a hospital in the town of 100 Mile House, where she was pronounced dead 
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Original:  Tanya Dumstrey-Soos, 32 was killaed at the Siberian Magic exotic animal park in Bridge Lake British Columbia, Canada after being attacked by a bengal tiger named Gangus.
Revised:  Tanya Dumstrey-Soos, 32 was killaed at the Siberian Magic exotic animal park in Bridge Lake British Columbia, Canada after being attacked by a Bengal Tiger named Gangus.
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Original:  On March 9 , 2007 , President Pervez Musharraf suspended Chief Justice Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry on charges of misconduct    .
Revised:  On March 9 , 2007 was indeed a sad day for the city of the Quaid. Today the city became nothing more than a warzone,. whats worse is that NO POLICE intereference was seen. Whatever occured today was a cheap attempt to manipulate others , this is proved by the fact that there was NO GOVERNEMENT INTERVENTION to stop the chaos which had erupted. People in the streets had guns of all kinds with them , they were brandishing them as if the guns were nothing more than some sort of fashion statement! .
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Original: Violence erupted as Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry  arrived in Karachi , Pakistan, to address a rally of supporters.
Revised: Violence erupted as Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry , arrived in Karachi , Pakistan, to address a rally of supporters.
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Original: Violence erupted as Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry  arrived in Karachi , Pakistan, to address a rally of supporters.
Revised: Violence erupted as Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry arrived in Karachi to address a rally of supporters.
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Original:  A counter-protest was being held by Muttahida Qaumi Movement (MQM), which is the party in power in Karachi.
Revised:  A counter-protest was being held by Muttahida Qaumi Movement (MQM), 
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Original: Violence erupted in Karachi, Pakistan as recently suspended Chief Justice Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry arrived in Karachi to address a rally of supporters.
Revised: Violence erupted in Karachi, Pakistan as recently suspended Chief Justice Iftikhar Muhammad Chaudhry reached the city to address a rally of supporters.
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Original:  Clashes erupted in the streets of Karachi between rival political factions.
Revised:  Clashes erupted in the streets between rival political factions.
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Original:  Supporters of Chaudry accused the MQM of initiating the violence, but it has denied the accusation.
Revised:  Supporters of Chaudry accused the MQM of initiating the violence, but the MQM has denied the accusation.
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Original:  Musharraf ruled out implementing a state-of-emergency in Karachi.
Revised:  Musharraf ruled out imposing an emergency in Karachi.
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Original:  Members of the pro-government party, Muttahida Qaumi Movement (MQM), clashed with supporters of Chaudry , Jamaat-e-Islami (JI).
Revised:  Members of the pro-government party, Muttahida Qaumi Movement (MQM), clashed with supporters of Chaudhry , Jamaat-e-Islami (JI).
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Original:  Supporters of Chaudry accused the MQM of initiating the violence, but the MQM has denied the accusation.
Revised:  Supporters of Chaudhry accused the MQM of initiating the violence, but the MQM has denied the accusation.
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Original:   When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a sense that it will be released before the 31 May in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film .
Revised:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before the 31 May in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film .
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Original: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to 31 May , one day after saying it would be on 26 May . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also 31 May .
Revised: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31 , one day after saying it would be on 26 May . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also 31 May .
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Original: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to 31 May , one day after saying it would be on 26 May . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also 31 May .
Revised: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to 31 May , one day after saying it would be on 26 May . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also May 31.
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Original:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before the 31 May in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
Revised:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before May 31 in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
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Original: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31  , one day after saying it would be on May 26.
Revised: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to 31 , one day after saying it would be on May 26.
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Original: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31  , one day after saying it would be on May 26.
Revised: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31 , one day after saying it would be on 26 May.
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Original:  Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also May 31.
Revised:  Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also 31 May.
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Original:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before May 31  in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
Revised:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before the 31 in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
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Original:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before the 31 May in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
Revised:  When speaking to employee's in Ayngaran there seems to be a rumour that it will be released before the May 31 in the UK, this could be a possible preview show of the film.
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Original: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31, one day after saying it would be on May 26 . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also May 31.
Revised: AVM have now officially announced the recent postponing of Sivaji: The Boss to May 31, one day after saying it would be on May . Ayngaran have for the first time put on their website a date for the release which is also May 31.
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Original: Stevenage Borough win FA Trophy Stevenage Borough beat Kidderminster Harriers 3:2 in the final of the FA Trophy after being 2:0 down at half time.
Revised: Stevenage Borough Stevenage Borough beat Kidderminster Harriers 3:2 in the final of the FA Trophy after being 2:0 down at half time.
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Original: Stevenage Borough win FA Trophy Stevenage Borough beat Kidderminster Harriers 3:2 in the final of the FA Trophy after being 2:0 down at half time.
Revised: Stevenage Borough win FA Trophy beat Kidderminster Harriers 3:2 in the final of the FA Trophy after being 2:0 down at half time.
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Original:  Today, the Guinean President Lansana Conté gave into military demands to remove his Minister of Defence, which was a main demand in the three day old military revolt in the African nation.
Revised: Image:LocationGuinea.svg|Location of Guinea Today, the Guinean President Lansana Conté gave into military demands to remove his Minister of Defence, which was a main demand in the three day old military revolt in the African nation.
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Original:  They had earlier thought nit was made of iron.
Revised:  They had earlier thought it was made of iron.
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Original:  The fact that affiliated countries vote for each other (neighbourhood countries such as Scandinavian, Balkan or ex-Sovjet countries) is also an annually returning matter discussed in the media.
Revised:  The fact that affiliated countries vote for each other (neighbourhood countries such as Scandinavian, Balkan or ex-Soviet countries) is also an annually returning matter discussed in the media.
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Original:  Hosts were Jaana Pelkonen and Mikko Leppilamp 
Revised:  Hosts were Jaana Pelkonen and Mikko Leppilampi 
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