wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
Revised:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to " our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
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Original:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
Revised:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris " and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
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Original:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
Revised:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ' s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
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Original:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms ".
Revised:  Orgasm gap researcher , Laurie Mintz claims that the primary reason for this form of gender inequality is due to “ our cultural ignorance of the clitoris ” and that it is commonplace to "mislabel women ’ s genitals by the one part (the vagina) that gives men, but not women, reliable orgasms 
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Original:  Contributing factors Sexual behaviour and reaching orgasm Data of sexual behaviour research indicates the majority of women (up to 70\%) do not usually reach orgasm during mixed-sex sexual activity, whereas men (over 90\%) usually do.
Revised:  ." Contributing factors Sexual behaviour and reaching orgasm Data of sexual behaviour research indicates the majority of women (up to 70\%) do not usually reach orgasm during mixed-sex sexual activity, whereas men (over 90\%) usually do.
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Original:    After a certain number of demerits are accumulated, the student is given detention, loss of privileges (e.g. being denied field trips and participation in school events), or some other URL  Some schools allow demerits to be offset with merits for good URL One criticism of demerit systems is that they create bookkeeping problems and can result in students receiving severe punishments for minor URL Another criticism is that older adolescents learn how to manipulate a demerit system  .
Revised:  Schools use the demerit record within a point-based system to punish misbehavior. After a certain number of demerits are accumulated, the student is given detention, loss of privileges (e.g. being denied field trips and participation in school events), or some other URL Some schools allow demerits to be offset with merits for good URL One criticism of demerit systems is that they create bookkeeping problems and can result in students receiving severe punishments for minor URL Another criticism is that older adolescents learn how to manipulate a demerit system .
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Original:  Under this once common practice, a students is given a number of merits during the beginning of the school term and a certain number of merits are deducted for every infraction committed.  
Revised:  Under this once common practice, a students is given a number of merits during the beginning of the school term and a certain number of merits are deducted for every infraction committed. <ref> 
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Original:  Under this once common practice, a students is given a number of merits during the beginning of the school term and a certain number of merits are deducted for every infraction committed.
Revised:  Under this once common practice, a student is given a number of merits during the beginning of the school term and a certain number of merits are deducted for every infraction committed.
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Original:  As a result, opposition forces, see weakness, organized strikes and marched in the streets of San Salvador and the crowds seized public buildings.
Revised:  As a result, opposition forces, who saw weakness, organized strikes and marched in the streets of San Salvador and the crowds seized public buildings.
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Original: Rivers State Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist.
Revised:  Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist.
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Original:  He uses posters to tackle issues of climate change Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised:  He uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original:  He uses posters to tackle issues of climate change Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised:  He uses posters to tackle issues of climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist who uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist . He uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist who uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist who uses posters to tackle issues of climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist who uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist who uses posters to tackle issues bothering around climate change Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Early Life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988. He was christened, Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original:  He  moved to Simferopol, Ukraine to study medicine in 2010 at the Crimean State Medical University.
Revised:  He later moved to Simferopol, Ukraine to study medicine in 2010 at the Crimean State Medical University.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian annexation of the Crimean peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian annexation of the Crimean peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
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Original:  By occupation, he is an artist, and art director.
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Original:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s, Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:  Artistic style As an artist, Fred Martins has created numerous campaign posters on social issues which are emotionally charged and investigates into the struggles of the people that have been brushed aside.
Revised:  Artistic Style As an artist, Fred Martins has created numerous campaign posters on social issues which are emotionally charged and investigates into the struggles of the people that have been brushed aside.
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Original:  Notable works Fred notable works include;
Revised:  Notable Works Fred notable works include;
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Original:  Campaign and exhibitions After releasing his work on "Orange, Black And Freedom".
Revised:  Campaign and Exhibition After releasing his work on "Orange, Black And Freedom".
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Original:  Current project Fred Martins have been working on a photo book of masquerades for 5 years, called ‘Memoir: Of gods, masquerades and men’, a photo book and stories of events that led to his mother's incarceration while she was 32 weeks pregnant in the early 1980s for protesting activities of the West African masquerades against women.
Revised:  Current Project Fred Martins have been working on a photo book of masquerades for 5 years, called ‘Memoir: Of gods, masquerades and men’, a photo book and stories of events that led to his mother's incarceration while she was 32 weeks pregnant in the early 1980s for protesting activities of the West African masquerades against women.
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Original: Fred Ekele Martins is a Nigerian artist .
Revised: Fred Ekele Martins is a renowned, self-taught Nigerian visual artist who has been active since 2004. His works are emotionally and culturally charged and have been exhibited in the United States, Ghana, Nigeria, Switzerland, South Africa and France .
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Original:  He uses  posters to tackle issues of climate change Early Life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
Revised:  He uses posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early Life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
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Original:  He uses  posters to tackle issues of climate change Early Life and Education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
Revised:  He uses posters to tackle issues of climate change Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
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Original:  He was christened, Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema  Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised:  He was christened, Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema , Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula, he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula, he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, as a medical doctor.
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Original:  He uses art posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
Revised:  He uses posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
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Original:  He uses art posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
Revised:  He uses art posters to tackle issues of climate change Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
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Original:  He uses art posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early Life and Education Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
Revised:  He uses art posters to tackle issues bothering on climate change . Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988.
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Original:  He was christened, Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema , Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised:  He was christened, Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original:  He later moved to Simferopol, Ukraine to study medicine in 2010 at the Crimean State Medical University.
Revised:  He moved to Simferopol, Ukraine to study medicine in 2010 at the Crimean State Medical University.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University,  as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, as a medical doctor.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University,  as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, as a medical doctor.
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Original:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University,  as a medical doctor.
Revised:  In 2014, after the Russian Annexation of the Crimean Peninsula , he moved to Ukrainian mainland of Lviv where he completed the degree program at Danylo Halytsky Lviv National Medical University, Lviv as a medical doctor.
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Original:   Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  By occupation, he is an artist, and art director. Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:   Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:   Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue 's Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:   Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:   Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic Missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
Revised:  Art and Career Soon after completing his degree as a medical doctor, Fred Martins worked with Onyeka Nwelue ’s , Blues & Hills Consultancy as an Art Director to host the Diplomatic Jazz Nights and art festivals at differentDiplomatic missions in Nigeria to promote different cultures.
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Original:  Artistic Style As an artist, Fred Martins has created numerous campaign posters on social issues which are emotionally charged and investigates into the struggles of the people that have been brushed aside.
Revised:  Artistic style As an artist, Fred Martins has created numerous campaign posters on social issues which are emotionally charged and investigates into the struggles of the people that have been brushed aside.
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Original:  Notable Works Fred notable works include;
Revised:  Notable works Fred notable works include;
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Original:  Campaign and Exhibition After releasing his work on "Orange, Black And Freedom".
Revised:  Campaign and exhibitions After releasing his work on "Orange, Black And Freedom".
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Original:  Current Project Fred Martins have been working on a photo book of masquerades for 5 years, called ‘Memoir: Of gods, masquerades and men’, a photo book and stories of events that led to his mother's incarceration while she was 32 weeks pregnant in the early 1980s for protesting activities of the West African masquerades against women.
Revised:  Current project Fred Martins have been working on a photo book of masquerades for 5 years, called ‘Memoir: Of gods, masquerades and men’, a photo book and stories of events that led to his mother's incarceration while she was 32 weeks pregnant in the early 1980s for protesting activities of the West African masquerades against women.
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Original: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on September 15, 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on 15th of 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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Original: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on 15th of September  1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
Revised: Early life and education Fred Martins was born on 15th of September , 1988, with name Ekele Martins in Aggah-Egbema Rivers State, Nigeria where he had his primary education.
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