wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: A more recent application of "women and children first" occurred in March 2011, when a floating restaurant in Covington, Kentucky , tore from its moorings , stranding 83 people on the Ohio River.
Revised: A more recent application of "women and children first" occurred in March 2011, when a floating restaurant in Covington, Kentucky tore from its moorings , stranding 83 people on the Ohio River.
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Original: A more recent application of "women and children first" occurred in March 2011, when a floating restaurant in Covington, Kentucky , tore from its moorings , stranding 83 people on the Ohio River.
Revised: A more recent application of "women and children first" occurred in March 2011, when a floating restaurant in Covington, Kentucky , tore from its moorings and stranded 83 people on the Ohio River.
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Original:  Critics of the idea and the larger idea of male expendability to be sexist, specifically misandry.
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Original: The Ponce de León family was an important aristocratic family in Leon in Spain during the middle ages.
Revised: The Ponce de León family was an important aristocratic family in León in Spain during the middle ages.
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Original:  She graduated as a doctor in natural sciences and became active in Peruvian and Cuban politics.
Revised:  She studied natural sciences and became active in Peruvian and Cuban politics.
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Original:   She studied natural sciences at the Universidad Nacional Mayor de San Marcos in Lima, standing out as one of the best students and obtaining a doctorate in natural sciences.
Revised:  Education She studied natural sciences at the Universidad Nacional Mayor de San Marcos in Lima, standing out as one of the best students and obtaining a doctorate in natural sciences.
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Original:  In   1920, she entered Radcliffe College.
Revised:  In In 1920, she entered Radcliffe College.
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Original:  Together with her husband, she was part of the Cuban Committee for Freedom of the Puerto Rican Patriots, a movement that sought independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century  .
Revised:  Together with her husband, she became part of the Cuban Committee for Freedom of the Puerto Rican Patriots, a movement that sought independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century .
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Original:  She went  into exile in Mexico where she met Fidel Castro, Ernesto ‘Che’ Guevara, and other members of the July 26 Movement, giving support to the Cuban revolution by writing press releases and other literature.
Revised:  She went into exile in Mexico City. There she came to know Fidel Castro, Ernesto ‘Che’ Guevara, and other members of the July 26 Movement, giving support to the Cuban revolution by writing press releases and other literature.
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Original:  She went  into exile in Mexico where she met Fidel Castro, Ernesto ‘Che’ Guevara, and other members of the July 26 Movement, giving support to the Cuban revolution by writing press releases and other literature.
Revised:  She went into exile in Mexico where she met Fidel Castro, Ernesto ‘Che’ Guevara, and other members of the July 26 Movement, and supported the Cuban revolutionaries by writing press releases and other literature.
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Original:  When the revolution triumphed, she acquired Cuban nationality and was appointed as the first secretary of the Cuban mission to the United Nations  . "She used this forum to again pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause."  "In 1959 she attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile.
Revised:  When the revolution triumphed, she was granted Cuban citizenship and was appointed as the first secretary of the Cuban mission to the United Nations . "She used this forum to again pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause." "In 1959 she attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile.
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Original:  When the revolution triumphed, she acquired Cuban nationality and was appointed as the first secretary of the Cuban mission to the United Nations  . "She used this forum to again pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause."  "In 1959 she attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile.
Revised:  When the revolution triumphed, she acquired Cuban nationality and was appointed as the first secretary of the Cuban mission to the United Nations . "She used this forum to again pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause." "In 1959 , Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile.
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Original:  She died on April 15, 1973 in Havana.
Revised:  Meneses died on April 15, 1973 in Havana.
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Original:  Her remains were buried in the  Colón Cemetery.
Revised:  Her remains were buried in the city's Colón Cemetery.
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Original: Laura Meneses del Carpio (Arequipa, Peru, March 31, 1894 - Havana, Cuba, April 15, 1973) became the first Latin American in 1920 to be accepted into Radcliffe College, the women's educational institution affiliated with Harvard University.
Revised: Laura Meneses del Carpio (Arequipa, Peru, March 31, 1894 - Havana, Cuba, April 15, 1973) was the first Latin American in 1920 to be accepted into Radcliffe College, the women's educational institution affiliated with Harvard University.
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Original:  Biography Laura Meneses del Carpio was born on March 31, 1894 in the city of Arequipa, Peru, the youngest daughter of Emilia del Carpio Tupayachi and Juan Rosa Meneses del Pino,  a colonel in the Peruvian army.
Revised:  Biography Laura Meneses del Carpio was born on March 31, 1894 in the city of Arequipa, Peru, the youngest daughter of Emilia del Carpio Tupayachi and Juan Rosa Meneses del Pino, who was a colonel in the Peruvian army.
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Original:  Education Meneses studied natural sciences at the Universidad Nacional Mayor de San Marcos in Lima,  graduating with a bachelors degree in biology in 1913.
Revised:  Education Meneses studied natural sciences at the Universidad Nacional Mayor de San Marcos in Lima, Peru, graduating with a bachelors degree in biology in 1913.
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Original:  In 1920, on the recommendation of  a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts (now integrated into Harvard College).
Revised:  In 1920, on the recommendation of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts (now a part of Harvard College).
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Original:  They whom she married two years later.
Revised:  They married two years later.
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Original:  Together with her husband, she became part of the Cuban Committee for Freedom of the Puerto Rican Patriots, a movement that sought independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century and inspired the animus of American officials.
Revised:  With her husband, she became part of the Cuban Committee for Freedom of the Puerto Rican Patriots, a movement that sought independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century and inspired the animus of American officials.
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Original:  Exile (husbandin Atlanta jail.) Alone with her children, in 1950   , Meneses went to live in Havana(then an American possession) but, harassed by the Cuban president there, Batista, she went into exile in Mexico City.
Revised:  Exile (husbandin Atlanta jail.) Alone with her children, in 1950 , Meneses went to live in Havana(then an American possession) but, harassed by the Cuban president there, Batista, she moved again, this time to Mexico City.
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Original:  "She used this forum to again pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause.
Revised:  While there, she took advantage of the opportunity to pursue the liberation of political prisoners and the Puerto Rican liberation cause.
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Original:  " Cuban years "In 1959, Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile .
Revised:  " Cuban years Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile .
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Original:  According to the Chilean press,  she was the most applauded delegate.
Revised:  According to the Chilean press, " she was the most applauded delegate.
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Original:   In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
Revised:  " In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
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Original:   In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
Revised:  In 1960 she was invited to attend the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
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Original:   In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
Revised:  In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation and this invitation, in turn, allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
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Original:   In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. " 
Revised:  In 1960 she was invited by the International Women’s Federation which allowed her to travel to Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China. 
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Original:  " In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( now a part of Harvard College ).
Revised:  In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( now a part of Harvard College ).
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Original:  " In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( now a part of Harvard College ).
Revised:  " In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( which today is a part of Harvard College ).
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Original:  " In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( now a part of Harvard College ).
Revised:  " In 1920, on the recommendation of the family of a Peruvian composer residing in Boston, Meneses enrolled in the all-female Radcliffe College in Cambridge, Massachusetts ( now a part of Harvard ).
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Original:  With her husband, she became part of the Cuban Committee for Freedom of the Puerto Rican Patriots, a movement that sought independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century.
Revised:  With her husband, she became an important activist in a popular movement seeking independence for Puerto Rico during the mid-20th century.
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Original:  Because of her husband 's decades in jails and prisons (he was in U.S. prisons for 25 years ), the couple spent only 13 years together out of their 43 years of marriage.
Revised:  Because of her husband 's decades in jails and prisons (he was in U.S. prisons ), the couple spent only 13 years together out of their 43 years of marriage.
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Original:  Because of her husband 's decades in jails and prisons (he was in U.S. prisons for 25 years ), the couple spent only 13 years together out of their 43 years of marriage.
Revised:  Because of her husband 's decades in jails and prisons (he was in U.S. prisons for 25 years ), the couple was able to spend only 13 years together out of their 43 years of marriage.
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Original:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there  .
Revised:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the defeat of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there .
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Original:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there  .
Revised:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there .
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Original:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there  .
Revised:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , . Later that same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there .
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Original:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on a special mission on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there  .
Revised:  He was jailed again in 1950 after the failure of the Puerto Rican Nationalist Party Revolts , That same year, Meneses moved with her children to Havana, Cuba, on behalf of her husband to denounce American imperialism there .
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Original:  However, after harassment from the U.S.-backed military dictator President Fulgencio Batista  , she moved again, this time to Mexico City.
Revised:  However, because of harassment from the U.S.-backed military dictator President Fulgencio Batista , she moved again, this time to Mexico City.
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Original:  While there, she took advantage of the opportunity to pursue the liberation of political prisoners  as well as  Puerto Rico itself.
Revised:  While there, she took advantage of the opportunity to pursue the liberation of political prisoners as well as the island of Puerto Rico itself.
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Original:  Cuban years Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile in 1959 , and according to the Chilean press, "she was the most applauded delegate."
Revised:  Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile in 1959 , and according to the Chilean press, "she was the most applauded delegate."
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Original:  Cuban years Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile in 1959 , and according to the Chilean press, "she was the most applauded delegate."
Revised:  Cuban years Meneses attended the first Latin American Women’s Congress in Santiago, Chile in 1959 and, according to the Chilean press, "she was the most applauded delegate."
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Original:  In 1960 she was invited to attend the International Women’s Federation and this invitation, in turn, allowed her to visit other international destinations, including Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China.
Revised:  In 1960 she was allowed to attend the International Women’s Federation and this invitation, in turn, allowed her to visit other international destinations, including Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China.
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Original:  In 1960 she was invited to attend the International Women’s Federation and this invitation, in turn, allowed her to visit other international destinations, including Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China.
Revised:  In 1960 she was invited to attend the International Women’s Federation and this invitation, in turn, gave her the opportunity to visit other international destinations, including Denmark, the United Kingdom, France, Spain, and China.
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Original:  Meneses  died on April 15, 1973 in Havana.
Revised:  Meneses died on April 15, 1973.
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Original:  Her remains were buried in the city's  Colón Cemetery . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
Revised:  Her remains were buried in the city's old Colón Cemetery . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
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Original:  Her remains were buried in the city's  Colón Cemetery . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
Revised:  Her remains were buried in the city's Colón Cemetery References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
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Original:  Her remains were buried in the city's  Colón Cemetery . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
Revised:  Her remains were buried in the city's Colón Cemetery . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External sources Austin, Dolores Stockton Helffrich.
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Original: Graeme Ernest Casley  was the second, and last, Prince of the self-declared micronation Principality of Hutt River, succeeding his father Leonard on 11 February 2017 after a 45 year reign.
Revised: Graeme Ernest Casley was the second, and last, prince of the self-declared micronation Principality of Hutt River, succeeding his father Leonard on 11 February 2017 after a 45 year reign.
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Original:  > He told CNN that "It's very sad watching your father build up something for 50 years and then you have to close it down." Referenc 
Revised:  He told CNN that "It's very sad watching your father build up something for 50 years and then you have to close it down." Referenc 
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Original:  > He told CNN that "It's very sad watching your father build up something for 50 years and then you have to close it down." Referenc 
Revised:  > He told CNN that "It's very sad watching your father build up something for 50 years and then you have to close it down." References 
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Original: He abdicated the throne and wad forced dissolved the Hutt River province on 3 August 2020, selling the land that belonged to the Principality to help settle the debts accumulated by his father.
Revised: He abdicated the throne and was forced to dissolve the Hutt River province on 3 August 2020, selling the land that belonged to the Principality to help settle the debts accumulated by his father.
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Original: He abdicated the throne and was forced to dissolve the Hutt River province on 3 August 2020, selling the land that belonged to the Principality to help settle the debts accumulated by his father.
Revised: He abdicated the throne and was forced to dissolve the Principality of Hutt River on 3 August 2020, selling the land that belonged to the Principality to help settle the debts accumulated by his father.
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Original:  01 January 1900 10 October 1974) was an Indian/ Pakistani Urdu poet and lyricist.
Revised:  01 January 1900 10 October 1974) was a Pakistani Urdu poet and lyricist.
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Original:  Nachruf auf Christian Götz Obituary for Christian Götz%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% (in German) by Hans Dieter Baroth.
Revised:  Obituary for Christian Götz%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% (in German) by Hans Dieter Baroth.
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Original:  Nachruf auf Christian Götz Obituary for Christian Götz%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% (in German) by Hans Dieter Baroth.
Revised:  Nachruf auf Christian Götz %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% (in German) by Hans Dieter Baroth.
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Original:   External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
Revised:  References External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
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Original:   External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
Revised:  External links Biography of Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
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Original:   External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
Revised:  External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archive of Social Democracy, website of the Friedrich Ebert Foundation, retrieved 4 August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
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Original:   External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz References
Revised:  External links Biografische Angaben zu Christian Götz, Archiv der sozialen Demokratie, Webseite der Friedrich-Ebert-Stiftung, abgerufen am 4. August 2015 Nachruf von Dieter Schmidt, Gewerkschaftliche Monatshefte (GMH) 10/2000, S. 597–500 In den GMH sind mehrere Veröffentlichungen von Christian Götz 
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Original:  Matthias Harder: Erfahrung Krieg: zur Darstellung des Zweiten Weltkrieges in den Romanen von Heinz G. Konsalik, Reihe Literaturwissenschaft, Band 232, Verlag Königshausen Neumann, 1999, ISBN 978-3-8260-1565-6, P. 192 Götz then served as a member of the HBV's main executive board from 1980 to 1992.
Revised:  Neumann, 1999, ISBN 978-3-8260-1565-6, P. 192 Götz then served as a member of the HBV's main executive board from 1980 to 1992.
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