wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   He was tasked with guarding the borders of the sultanate .
Revised:  He was tasked with guarding the borders of the Sultanate .
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Original:  In modern capitalist societies, individuals may not necessarily privately own land yet still possess the capital to obtain an excess of what is necessary to sustain themselves, such as wealthy who live in expensive high-rise apartments in major urban centers.
Revised:  In modern capitalist societies, individuals may not necessarily privately own land yet still possess the capital to obtain an excess of what is necessary to sustain themselves, such as wealthy individuals who rent expensive high-rise apartments in major urban centers.
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Original:  This minority of landless individuals have sometimes been referred to as the "landless rich."
Revised:  This minority of landless individuals as sometimes been referred to as the "landless rich."
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Original:  However, for the majority of landless people, including the urban poor and those displaced into conditions of rural to urban migration, their condition of landlessness is also one of impoverishment, being without the capital to meet their basic necessities nor the land to grow their own food, keep animals, or sustain themselves.
Revised:  However, for the majority of landless people, including the urban poor and those displaced into conditions of rural-to-urban migration, their condition of landlessness is also one of impoverishment, being without the capital to meet their basic necessities nor the land to grow their own food, keep animals, or sustain themselves.
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Original:  According to colonial logics, Indigenous people were not able to exercise their territorial sovereignty.
Revised:  According to colonial logics, indigenous people were not able to exercise their territorial sovereignty.
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Original:  Māori in New Zealand have recognized how Indigenous homelessness is inextricably connected with landlessness as a result of the colonial acquisition of Indigenous resources to support European settlement.
Revised:  Māori in New Zealand have recognized how Indigenous homelessness is inextricably connected with landlessness as a result of the colonial acquisition of indigenous resources to support European settlement.
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Original: The Open Ice Summit was an ice hockey conference held in Toronto from August 25–27, 1999.
Revised: The Open Ice Summit was an ice hockey conference held in Toronto on August 25–27, 1999.
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Original:  The list of 11 recommendations included :
Revised:  The 11 recommendations included :
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Original:  The list of 11 recommendations included :
Revised:  The list of 11 recommendations were :
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Original:  Some of these residents of Curepipe were attacked when they alighted from the train when it reached its destination in Port Louis.
Revised:  Some of these residents of Curepipe were attacked when they departed from a train when it reached its destination in Port Louis.
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Original: Clash of rival gangs The riots started out as a political disturbance in the town of Curepipe on Curepipe Road which resulted in a clash between Creole followers of Eugène Laurent (Action Libérale) against white Franco Mauritians supporters of Armand Esnouf (Parti de l'Ordre or Oligarchy).
Revised: Clash of rival gangs The riots started out as a political disturbance in the town of Curepipe on Curepipe Road which resulted in a clash between Creole followers of Eugène Laurent (Action Libérale) against white Franco Mauritian supporters of Armand Esnouf (Parti de l'Ordre or Oligarchy).
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Original: Abdul Hakim Harahap (15 July 1905 – 7 October 1961) was a Bataknese civil employee and politician.
Revised: Abdul Hakim Harahap (15 July 1905 – 7 October 1961) was a Batak civil employee and politician.
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Original:  Born in Sarolangun from a Bataknese father and mom, Abdul Hakim Harahap was employed in the customs and excises office after finishing his studies at the Prins Hendrikschool.
Revised:  Born in Sarolangun from a Batak father and mom, Abdul Hakim Harahap was employed in the customs and excises office after finishing his studies at the Prins Hendrikschool.
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Original:  He was born as the son of Mangaradja Gading, a Bataknese civil employee.
Revised:  He was the son of Mangaradja Gading, a Bataknese civil employee.
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Original:  He was born as the son of Mangaradja Gading, a Bataknese civil employee.
Revised:  He was born as the son of Mangaradja Gading, a Batak civil employee.
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Original:  He was the second child of the six children his parents had . During this time, he was involved in the nationalist movements in the Dutch East Indies, such as Jong Islamieten Bond (Young Islamic Association), Jong Batak  (Young Bataks) and Jong Sumatra Bond (Young Sumatran Association).
Revised:  He was the second child of the six . During this time, he was involved in the nationalist movements in the Dutch East Indies, such as Jong Islamieten Bond (Young Islamic Association), Jong Batak (Young Bataks) and Jong Sumatra Bond (Young Sumatran Association).
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Original:  He was the second child of the six children his parents had . During this time, he was involved in the nationalist movements in the Dutch East Indies, such as Jong Islamieten Bond (Young Islamic Association), Jong Batak  (Young Bataks) and Jong Sumatra Bond (Young Sumatran Association).
Revised:  He was the second child of the six children his parents had . During this time, he was involved in the nationalist movements in the Dutch East Indies, such as Jong Islamieten Bond (Young Islamic Association), Jong Batak Bond (Young Bataks) and Jong Sumatra Bond (Young Sumatran Association).
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Original:  It occurred on the banks of the Arroyo del Sauce, Canelones Department, during the Revolution of the Lanzas .
Revised:  It occurred on the banks of the Arroyo del Sauce, Canelones Department, during the Revolution of the Lances .
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Original:  History This bloody battle fought on May 25, 1870 concluded with a victory for the government army of General Suárez, who ordered to mercilessly execute a large number of White Army fighters . Among the government troops was Máximo Santos, future Uruguayan president for the Colorado party.
Revised:  History This bloody battle fought on May 25, 1870 concluded with a victory for the government army of General Suárez, who ordered to mercilessly execute a large number of prisoners of the White Army . Among the government troops was Máximo Santos, future Uruguayan president for the Colorado party.
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Original: The term mediascape describes the way that visual imagery impacts the world.
Revised: Mediascape, coined by Arjun Appadurai (1990), is the electronic and print media in “global cultural flows”. For Appadurai, mediascape indexes the electronic capabilities of production and dissemination, as well as “the images of the world created by these media”.(Appadurai 1990, p. 9). URL
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Original: (Appadurai 1990, p. 9) . URL
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Original:  Thus in a mediascape a person may walk around an area and as they do so they will hear digitally stored sounds associated with different places in that area 
Revised:  Thus in a mediascape a person may walk around an area and as they do so they will hear digitally stored sounds associated with different places in that area . Sometimes
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Original:  In case of severe vision loss, treament of choice is penetrating keratoplasty.
Revised:  In case of severe vision loss, treatment of choice is penetrating keratoplasty.
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Original:  Another of James' grandsons, John George Sowerby (1850–1914), was an illustrator and glass-worker whose work was exhibited in the British Royal Academy, and who directed Ellison Glass Works Ltd, which during the 1880s was the world's largest producer of pressed glass.
Revised:  One of James' grandsons, John George Sowerby (1850–1914), was an illustrator and glass-worker whose work was exhibited in the British Royal Academy, and who directed Ellison Glass Works Ltd, which during the 1880s was the world's largest producer of pressed glass.
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Original:  He achieved notability for appearing in three seasons of Project Runway , placing 12th in each season .
Revised:  He achieved notability for appearing in three seasons of Project Runway .
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Original:  His mother, Maria Franco was born in Santa Ana, El Salvador.
Revised:  His mother, Maria Franco was born in El Salvador.
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Original:  He was featured during the Adam Lambert lookalike URL
Revised:  He was featured during the Adam Lambert lookalike montage.
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Original:  He has recently been announced as a contestant on the fifth season of Project Runway: All Stars  .
Revised:  He was announced as a contestant on the fifth season of Project Runway: All Stars .
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Original: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the Global Good Fund, controlled by Intellectual Ventures and Bill and Melinda Gates  .
Revised: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the Bill and Melinda Gates .
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Original: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the Global Good Fund, controlled by Intellectual Ventures and Bill and Melinda Gates  .
Revised: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the Global Good Fund, controlled by Intellectual Ventures and Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation .
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Original: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the  Bill and Melinda Gates Foundation .
Revised: Institute for Disease Modeling is an institute within the Bill and Melinda Gates .
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Original:  In 2020, its COVID-19 model "Covasim" was used to guide decision-making during in the COVID-19 pandemic in Oregon and in Washington State, gaining national attention.
Revised:  In 2020, its COVID-19 in Washington State, gaining national attention.
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Original:  , the software could model malaria, HIV, tuberculosis,  dengue, polio and typhoid   .
Revised:  The software can model malaria, HIV, tuberculosis, dengue, polio and typhoid .
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Original:  , the software could model malaria, HIV, tuberculosis,  dengue, polio and typhoid   .
Revised:  , the software could model malaria, HIV, tuberculosis, dengue, polio and typhoid . .
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Original:  In the northern Kingdom of Haiti, Christophe suffered a severe stroke August 15, 1820  that left him partially paralyzed.
Revised:  In the northern Kingdom of Haiti, Christophe suffered a severe stroke August 15, 1820 , that left him partially paralyzed.
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Original: ]] After the annexation of Spanish Haiti, Boyer took full powers with the title of “ Supreme Chief of the Nation ” with the right to choose his successor.
Revised: ]] After the annexation of Spanish Haiti, Boyer took full powers with the title of " Supreme Chief of the Nation ” with the right to choose his successor.
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Original: ]] After the annexation of Spanish Haiti, Boyer took full powers with the title of “ Supreme Chief of the Nation ” with the right to choose his successor.
Revised: ]] After the annexation of Spanish Haiti, Boyer took full powers with the title of “ Supreme Chief of the Nation " with the right to choose his successor.
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Original:  On March 29, 1818, Pétion died and the title of president-for life passed to the commander of his guard, Jean-Pierre Boyer, won the gained support of the Senate.
Revised:  On March 29, 1818, Pétion died and the title of president-for life passed to the commander of his guard, Jean-Pierre Boyer, who gained support of the Senate.
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Original:  He won the Port Arthur Country Club  three times, won the Thunder Bay District Golf Championship once, and was twice a runner-up in the district.
Revised:  He won the Port Arthur Country Club three times, won the Thunder Bay District championship once, and was twice a runner-up in the district.
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Original:  His time as president of the CAHA coincided with World War II . He supported the purchase of Victory bonds to assist the war effort, and facilitated the supply of players to fill NHL rosters lacking numbers due to military service.
Revised:  His time as president of the CAHA coincided with World War II , and he supported the purchase of Victory bonds to assist the war effort, and facilitated the supply of players to fill NHL rosters lacking numbers due to military service.
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Original:  Under his wartime leadership, junior ice hockey profits from the Memorial Cup were reinvested into the development of minor ice hockey in Canada;
Revised:  Under his leadership, junior ice hockey profits from the Memorial Cup were reinvested into the development of minor ice hockey in Canada;
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Original:  He later assisted in founding the Northwestern Ontario Curling Association, became its inaugural president in 1947, and sought for recognition as its own branch within the DCA to compete for The Brier as national champions .
Revised:  He later assisted in founding the Northwestern Ontario Curling Association, became its inaugural president in 1947, and sought for recognition as its own branch within the DCA to compete for The Brier national championship .
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Original:  which include life membership of the CAHA in 1946 and life membership of the DCA in 1967.
Revised:  including life membership of the CAHA in 1946 and life membership of the DCA in 1967.
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Original:  Female exposure to high levels of male hormones in utero is associated with higher spatial abilities as well as more spatial ability as well as more play with "boys' toys" and less with 'girls' toys".
Revised:  Female exposure to high levels of male hormones in utero is associated with higher spatial abilities and with more play with "boys' toys" and less with 'girls' toys".
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Original:   The report stated that IQ scores measure important skills as they correlate fairly well (0.5) with grades.
Revised:  IQ correlation with skills and grades The report stated that IQ scores measure important skills as they correlate fairly well (0.5) with grades.
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Original:   IQ scores also correlated with school achievement tests designed to measure knowledge of the curriculum.
Revised:  IQ correlation with school achievement tests IQ scores also correlated with school achievement tests designed to measure knowledge of the curriculum.
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Original:  IQ   scores were also correlated (0.3–0.5) with various measures of job performance such as supervisor ratings and work samples.
Revised:  IQ correlation with measures of job performance scores were also correlated (0.3–0.5) with various measures of job performance such as supervisor ratings and work samples.
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Original:   While both genetic and environmental variables were involved in the manifestation of intelligence, the role of genetics had been shown to increase in importance with age.
Revised:  Genetic and environmental variables While both genetic and environmental variables were involved in the manifestation of intelligence, the role of genetics had been shown to increase in importance with age.
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Original:   However, regarding interventions such as the Head Start Program and similar programs lasting one or two years, while producing initial IQ gains, these had disappeared by the end of elementary school, although there may be other benefits such as more likely to finish high school.
Revised:  Interventions However, regarding interventions such as the Head Start Program and similar programs lasting one or two years, while producing initial IQ gains, these had disappeared by the end of elementary school, although there may be other benefits such as more likely to finish high school.
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Original:   The report stated that a number of biological factors, including malnutrition, exposure to toxic substances, and various prenatal and perinatal factors, resulted in lowered IQ under at least some conditions.
Revised:  Other biological factors The report stated that a number of biological factors, including malnutrition, exposure to toxic substances, and various prenatal and perinatal factors, resulted in lowered IQ under at least some conditions.
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Original:  IQ scores are fairly stable during development in the sense that while a child  reasoning ability increases, the child  relative ranking in comparison to that of other individuals of the same age is fairly stable during development.
Revised:  IQ scores are fairly stable during development in the sense that while a child 's reasoning ability increases, the child relative ranking in comparison to that of other individuals of the same age is fairly stable during development.
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Original:  IQ scores are fairly stable during development in the sense that while a child  reasoning ability increases, the child  relative ranking in comparison to that of other individuals of the same age is fairly stable during development.
Revised:  IQ scores are fairly stable during development in the sense that while a child reasoning ability increases, the child 's relative ranking in comparison to that of other individuals of the same age is fairly stable during development.
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Original:  An edited version of " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " was published in the journal American Psychologist in February 1996.
Revised:  An edited version of Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " was published in the journal American Psychologist in February 1996.
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Original:  An edited version of " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " was published in the journal American Psychologist in February 1996.
Revised:  An edited version of " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns was published in the journal American Psychologist in February 1996.
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Original:  " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " stated that many different theories of intelligence have been proposed.
Revised:  Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " stated that many different theories of intelligence have been proposed.
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Original:  " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns " stated that many different theories of intelligence have been proposed.
Revised:  " Intelligence: Knowns and Unknowns stated that many different theories of intelligence have been proposed.
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Original:  Possible causes include gender roles and differences in brain structure which in turn may be due  genetics and/or environment.
Revised:  Possible causes include gender roles and differences in brain structure which in turn may be due to genetics and/or environment.
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Original:  Average IQ in East Asian nations had been reported as equal to  substantially above the American average.
Revised:  Average IQ in East Asian nations had been reported as equal to or substantially above the American average.
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Original:  The scores predicted future achievement equally well for blacks and whites . "The cause of that differential is not known;
Revised:  The scores predicted future achievement equally well for Blacks and Whites . "The cause of that differential is not known;
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Original:  Alternatively, the phosphorimidazolide may be isolated by flash column chromatography . John D.
Revised:  Alternatively, the phosphorimidazolide may be isolated by flash column chromatography John D.
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Original:  He died at 06.00, on 3 December 2015, at his residency in Sakti Lubis Street 10, Medan. </ref> References
Revised:  He died at 06.00, on 3 December 2015, at his residency in Sakti Lubis Street 10, Medan. References
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Original: Infrastructure Development During his rule, the territory of North Sumatra received a sudden increase in funds allocated by the central government.
Revised: Infrastructure development During his rule, the territory of North Sumatra received a sudden increase in funds allocated by the central government.
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Original:  The council , by acclamation, elected Marah Halim Harahap as the governor of North Sumatra for his second term on 6 November 1972.
Revised:  The council unanonimously elected Marah Halim Harahap as the governor of North Sumatra for his second term on 6 November 1972.
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Original:  In Medan, he lived with Sjamsoedin, and planned to enlist on the Japanese military, who at that time had occupied Medan.
Revised:  In Medan, he lived with Sjamsoedin, and planned to enlist in the Japanese military, who at that time had occupied Medan.
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Original:  From the University of Napels , he obtained two degrees in jurisprudence in 1908 and in philosophy in 1911. from 1928, he was the head of the Fascist Faculty of Political Sciences at Perugia University.
Revised:  From the University of Naples , he obtained two degrees in jurisprudence in 1908 and in philosophy in 1911. from 1928, he was the head of the Fascist Faculty of Political Sciences at Perugia University.
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Original: Philip Rees, Biographical Dictionary of the Extreme Right Since 1890, 1990, p. 68 Panunzio's works  La Persistenza del Diritto (Discutendo di Sindacalismo e di Anarchismo) [The Persistence of the Right (A Discussion about Syndicalism and Anarchism)] (Pescara: Casa Editrice Abruzzese, 1909).
Revised: Philip Rees, Biographical Dictionary of the Extreme Right Since 1890, 1990, p. 68 Panunzio's works Works La Persistenza del Diritto (Discutendo di Sindacalismo e di Anarchismo) [The Persistence of the Right (A Discussion about Syndicalism and Anarchism)] (Pescara: Casa Editrice Abruzzese, 1909).
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Original:  Cappelli , 1925) Il sentimento dello stato (Rome, Libreria del Littorio, 1929) Il diritto sindacale e corporativo (programma, concetto, metodo) (Perugia-Venezia:
Revised:  , 1925) Il sentimento dello stato (Rome, Libreria del Littorio, 1929) Il diritto sindacale e corporativo (programma, concetto, metodo) (Perugia-Venezia:
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Original:  Imperia, 1924) Che cos' è il fascismo ( Milano :
Revised:  Imperia, 1924) Che cos' è il fascismo ( Milan :
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Original:  He pointed to George Sorel and Francesco Saverio Merlino as revising  Marx to fit the times and emboldening it.
Revised:  He pointed to George Sorel and Francesco Saverio Merlino as revising Karl Marx to fit the times and emboldening it.
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Original:  He is said to have spearheaded the revisionism that led many syndicalists through interventionism to corporativism and he ostensibly "gave Mussolini’s dictatorship a veneer of revolutionary legitimacy . "  (From the Internet Archive, 15 March 2005)
Revised:  He is said to have spearheaded the revisionism that led many syndicalists through interventionism to corporativism and he ostensibly "gave Mussolini’s dictatorship a veneer of revolutionary legitimacy " (From the Internet Archive, 15 March 2005)
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Original:  He is said to have spearheaded the revisionism that led many syndicalists through interventionism to corporativism and he ostensibly "gave Mussolini’s dictatorship a veneer of revolutionary legitimacy . "  (From the Internet Archive, 15 March 2005)
Revised:  He is said to have spearheaded the revisionism that led many syndicalists through interventionism to corporativism and he ostensibly "gave Mussolini’s dictatorship a veneer of revolutionary legitimacy . " . (From the Internet Archive, 15 March 2005)
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Original: Early life Sergio Panunzio was born on July 20, 1886  in Molfetta, Italy.
Revised: Early life Sergio Panunzio was born on July 20, 1886 , in Molfetta, Italy.
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