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Original:  Its members were selected from the highest political and military authorities, like Chief of Staff Marshal Mustafa Fevci Cakmak , Justice Minister Mahmut Esat Bozkurt, Minister of Commerce Ali Cenani, Kazim Özalp Şükrü Kaya, Abdülhalik Renda and Celal Bayar.
Revised:  Its members were selected from the highest political and military authorities, like Chief of Staff Marshal Mustafa Fevci Cakmak , Justice Minister Mahmut Esat Bozkurt, Minister of Commerce Ali Cenani, Kazim Özalp Şükrü Kaya, Abdülhalik Renda and Celâl Bayar.
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Original: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish  humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish male essayists Category:Scottish male non-fiction writers Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
Revised: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish essayists Category:Scottish humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish male essayists Category:Scottish male non-fiction writers Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
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Original: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish  humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish male essayists Category:Scottish male non-fiction writers Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
Revised: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
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Original: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish  humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish male essayists Category:Scottish male non-fiction writers Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
Revised: Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish academics Category:Scottish humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish male essayists Category:Scottish male non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:University of Liverpool faculty Category:University of Sussex faculty Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
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Original: Philosophy academics Category:Philosophy teachers Category:Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish scholars and academics Category:Scottish essayists Category:Scottish humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Scottish philosophers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:Academics of the University of Liverpool Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
Revised: Philosophy academics Category:Philosophy teachers Category:Philosophy writers Category:Rationalists Category:Scottish scholars and academics Category:Scottish essayists Category:Scottish humanists Category:Scottish linguists Category:Scottish logicians Category:Scottish non-fiction writers Category:Social critics Category:Social philosophers Category:Academics of the University of Liverpool Category:Wittgensteinian philosophers Category:Writers from Glasg
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Original:  She was born in Gorizia, Italy (25 July 1947) in a Mitteleuropean Italian speaking family forced to leave Fiume, Rijeka at the end of World War II, with cultural and geographical roots in Austria and Dalmatia, she spent her childhood and adolescence in Gorizia attending Classical studies.
Revised:  She was born in Gorizia, Italy in a Mitteleuropean Italian speaking family forced to leave Fiume, Rijeka at the end of World War II, with cultural and geographical roots in Austria and Dalmatia, she spent her childhood and adolescence in Gorizia attending Classical studies.
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Original:  "Whatever I've done, it's been conceived within women's relations, in presence of women's bodies and in the flowing of awakened women's emotions." —Luciana Percovich Luciana Percovich Women's Movement Since then, she lived and worked in Milano as a teacher, a translator, an author and an activist in many pioneering projects of the Women's Movement (women's health centers, bookshops, cultural and political training, publishing houses, etc.).
Revised:  Luciana Percovich Women's Movement Since then, she lived and worked in Milano as a teacher, a translator, an author and an activist in many pioneering projects of the Women's Movement (women's health centers, bookshops, cultural and political training, publishing houses, etc.).
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Original:  "Whatever I've done, it's been conceived within women's relations, in presence of women's bodies and in the flowing of awakened women's emotions." —Luciana Percovich Luciana Percovich Women's Movement Since then, she lived and worked in Milano as a teacher, a translator, an author and an activist in many pioneering projects of the Women's Movement (women's health centers, bookshops, cultural and political training, publishing houses, etc.).
Revised:  "Whatever I've done, it's been conceived within women's relations, in presence of women's bodies and in the flowing of awakened women's emotions." —Luciana Percovich Women's Movement Since then, she lived and worked in Milano as a teacher, a translator, an author and an activist in many pioneering projects of the Women's Movement (women's health centers, bookshops, cultural and political training, publishing houses, etc.).
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Original:  Within a couple of years, a multifaceted Health Women Movement spread all over Italy, which discussed and promoted information in national conferences in Milano , Rome, Florence.
Revised:  Within a couple of years, a multifaceted Health Women Movement spread all over Italy, which discussed and promoted information in national conferences in Milan , Rome, Florence.
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Original: Yan (燕國) was a kingdom in the Three Kingdoms period that existed from July 237 to September 238 CE in the Liaodong Peninsula  .
Revised: Yan (燕國) was a kingdom that existed from July 237 to September 238 CE in the Liaodong Peninsula .
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Original: Ikeuchi, pp. 87–88 Its predecessor was an independent regime traced back 2 generations to Gongsun Du and his son Gongsun Kang , who ruled from 190 to 237.
Revised: Ikeuchi, pp. 87–88 Its predecessor was an independent regime ruled by Gongsun Du and his son Gongsun Kang , who ruled from 190 to 237.
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Original: Ikeuchi, pp. 87–88 Its predecessor was an independent regime traced back 2 generations to Gongsun Du and his son Gongsun Kang , who ruled from 190 to 237.
Revised: Ikeuchi, pp. 87–88 Its predecessor was an independent regime traced back 2 generations to Gongsun Du and his son Gongsun Kang from 190 to 237.
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Original:  Though it only claimed independence in 237, historians such as Wang Zhongshu and Hou Tao consider it to be an independent regime when Gongsun Du ruled in Liaodong in 190.
Revised:  Though it only claimed independence in 237, historians such as Wang Zhongshu and Hou Tao consider it to be a de facto independent regime from when Gongsun Du ruled in Liaodong in 190.
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Original:  Though it only claimed independence in 237, historians such as Wang Zhongshu and Hou Tao consider it to be an independent regime when Gongsun Du ruled in Liaodong in 190.
Revised:  Though it only claimed independence in 237, historians such as Wang Zhongshu and Hou Tao consider it to be an independent regime when Gongsun Du established his rule in Liaodong in 190.
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Original:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the three kingdoms listed (Wei, Shu, and Wu) ;
Revised:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the eponymous three kingdoms: (Wei, Shu, and Wu) ;
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Original:  nevertheless , writers such as Kang Youwei considered as the "4th country".
Revised:  nevertheless , writers such as Kang Youwei consider it to be a "4th country".
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Original:  Gongsun Du's father Gongsun Yan (公孫延) escaped to Xuantu Commandery where Gongsun Du became minister in 170.
Revised:  Gongsun Du's father Gongsun Yan (公孫延) lived in Xuantu Commandery where Gongsun Du became minister in 170.
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Original:  Although he was dismissed  , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 ( or 189) under the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
Revised:  Although he was dismissed from his post , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 ( or 189) under the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
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Original:  Although he was dismissed  , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 ( or 189) under the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
Revised:  Although he was dismissed , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 or 189) under the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
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Original:  Although he was dismissed  , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 ( or 189) under the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
Revised:  Although he was dismissed , he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 ( or 189) on the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
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Original:  Under the rule of Gongsun Du , he established a monarch rule and completely controlled Liaodong.
Revised:  Gongsun Du established a monarchial rule and completely controlled Liaodong.
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Original:  He also split Liaoxi Commandery and Zhongliao Commandery out of Liaodong.
Revised:  He split Liaodong into three commanderies, creating Liaoxi Commandery and Zhongliao Commandery out of Liaodong.
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Original:  Gongsun Du's land was directly adjacent to Goguryeo, who often quarreled with Gongsun Du 's factiondespite initial cooperation .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
Revised:  Liaodong was adjacent to Goguryeo, who often quarreled with Gongsun Du 's factiondespite initial cooperation .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
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Original:  Gongsun Du's land was directly adjacent to Goguryeo, who often quarreled with Gongsun Du 's factiondespite initial cooperation .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
Revised:  Gongsun Du's land was directly adjacent to Goguryeo, whose rulers initially cooperated with Gongsun Du 's factiondespite initial cooperation .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
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Original:  Gongsun Du's land was directly adjacent to Goguryeo, who often quarreled with Gongsun Du 's factiondespite initial cooperation .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
Revised:  Gongsun Du's land was directly adjacent to Goguryeo, who often quarreled with Gongsun Du but often quarreled with his faction .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
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Original:  He often attacked Goguryeo , and also attacked Wuhuan.
Revised:  He frequently attacked Goguryeo and Wuhuan.
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Original:  In 196,  warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of General of Military Might and Lord of Yongning Xiang  .
Revised:  In 196, the warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of General of Military Might and Lord of Yongning Xiang .
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Original:  In 196,  warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of General of Military Might and Lord of Yongning Xiang  .
Revised:  In 196, warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of "general of military might" and "lord of Yongning Xiang .
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Original:  In 196,  warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of General of Military Might and Lord of Yongning Xiang  .
Revised:  In 196, warlord Cao Cao gave Gongsun Du the titles of General of Military Might and Lord of Yongning Xiang " .
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Original:  Gongsun Du is largely credited for the invasions that would lead to the Gongsun family's rise.
Revised:  Gongsun Du military activities are largely credited with leading to the Gongsun family's rise.
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Original:  After Gongsun Du's death in 204, his son Gongsun Kang took over, and shortly after exploited the Goguryeo succession feud .
Revised:  After Gongsun Du's death in 204, his son Gongsun Kang took over, and shortly after exploited a succession feud in Goguryeo .
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Original:  Gongsun Kang moved in and restored order to the Lelang Commandery and established the new Daifang Commandery by splitting  the southern part of Lelang.
Revised:  Gongsun Kang moved in and restored order to the Lelang Commandery , establishing the new Daifang Commandery by splitting the southern part of Lelang.
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Original:  Gongsun Kang moved in and restored order to the Lelang Commandery and established the new Daifang Commandery by splitting  the southern part of Lelang.
Revised:  Gongsun Kang moved in and restored order to the Lelang Commandery and established the new Daifang Commandery by splitting off the southern part of Lelang.
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Original:  In 207, Gongsun Kang killed Yuan Shao's sons Yuan Shang and Yuan Xi, and gave their heads to Cao Cao , who also opposed Yuan Shao's sons, as expected by Cao . Gongsun Kang's act was seen as one of compliance to Cao, a decision his son Gongsun Yuan would reverse.
Revised:  In 207, Gongsun Kang killed Yuan Shao's sons Yuan Shang and Yuan Xi, and gave their heads to Cao Cao . Gongsun Kang's act was seen as one of compliance to Cao, a decision his son Gongsun Yuan would reverse.
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Original:  In 207, Gongsun Kang killed Yuan Shao's sons Yuan Shang and Yuan Xi, and gave their heads to Cao Cao , who also opposed Yuan Shao's sons, as expected by Cao . Gongsun Kang's act was seen as one of compliance to Cao, a decision his son Gongsun Yuan would reverse.
Revised:  In 207, Gongsun Kang killed Yuan Shao's sons Yuan Shang and Yuan Xi, and gave their heads to Cao Cao , who also opposed Yuan Shao's sons, as expected by Cao . Gongsun Kang's act was seen as one of compliance to Cao, a attitude his son Gongsun Yuan would reverse.
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Original: After Gongsun Kang's death, his two sons Gongsun Huang and Gongsun Yuan were too young to succeed  the title.
Revised: After Gongsun Kang's death, his two sons Gongsun Huang and Gongsun Yuan were too young to succeed to the title.
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Original:  As a result, his brother Gongsun Gong succeeded .
Revised:  As a result, his brother Gongsun Gong took the throne .
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Original:  However, he suffered from the disease yin xiao (, modern-day diabetes ) and was infertile.
Revised:  However, he suffered from diabetes (yin xiao ) and was infertile.
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Original:  Claiming that he would restore Liaodong to glory, he forced Gongsun Gong off the throne, imprisoned Gongsun Gong and became successor in December 228.
Revised:  Claiming that he would restore Liaodong to glory, he forced Gongsun Gong from the throne, imprisoned Gongsun Gong and became successor in December 228.
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Original:  Claiming that he would restore Liaodong to glory, he forced Gongsun Gong off the throne, imprisoned Gongsun Gong and became successor in December 228.
Revised:  Claiming that he would restore Liaodong to glory, he forced Gongsun Gong off the throne, imprisoned him and became ruler in December 228.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan took over and started claiming friendship with Eastern Wu .
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan claimed friendship with Eastern Wu .
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Original:  In February 230, Wei promoted Gongsun Yuan to Cheqi General ().
Revised:  In February 230, Wei promoted Gongsun Yuan to cheqi general ().
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Original:  In March 232, Sun Quan sent messengers to Gongsun Yuan to ask for horses, which was accepted .
Revised:  In March 232, Sun Quan sent messengers to Gongsun Yuan to ask for horses, which were supplied .
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Original:  In October 232, Gongsun Yuan sent messengers accepting vassalship to Wu.
Revised:  In October 232, Gongsun Yuan sent messengers accepting a position as a vassal of Wu.
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Original:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the King of Yan , and sent two messengers to Gongsun Yuan ;
Revised:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the "king of Yan" , and sent two messengers to Gongsun Yuan ;
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Original:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the King of Yan , and sent two messengers to Gongsun Yuan ;
Revised:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the King of Yan , and sent two messengers to him ;
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Original:  they were killed  and their heads sent to Luoyang, and Gongsun Yuan accepted vassalship to Cao Wei.
Revised:  they were killed and their heads sent to Luoyang, and Gongsun Yuan accepted vassalship from Cao Wei.
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Original:  In 237, Cao Wei general Guanqiu Jian set troops to attack Gongsun Yuan, but was defeated because of the rain.
Revised:  In 237, Cao Wei general Guanqiu Jian sent troops to attack Gongsun Yuan, but was defeated because of the rain.
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Original:  In 237, Cao Wei general Guanqiu Jian set troops to attack Gongsun Yuan, but was defeated because of the rain.
Revised:  In 237, Cao Wei general Guanqiu Jian set troops to attack Gongsun Yuan, but was defeated because of heavy rain.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed kingdomship in July, and used the era date Shaohan () The country had its government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang.
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed independence in July, and used the era date Shaohan () The country had its government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed kingdomship in July, and used the era date Shaohan () The country had its government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang.
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed kingdomship in July, and used the era date Shaohan () . The new country had a government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang.
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Original:  In January 238, Gongsun Yuan resumed relations with Wu, hoping for extra forces .
Revised:  In January 238, Gongsun Yuan resumed relations with Wu, hoping for military reinforcements from it .
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Original:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, general of Cao Wei  , lead 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan.
Revised:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, one of Cao Wei , lead 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan.
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Original:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, general of Cao Wei  , lead 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan.
Revised:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, general of Cao Wei 's generals , lead 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan.
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Original:  After a siege that lasted three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo (one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea), and many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
Revised:  After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo (one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea), and many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
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Original:  In 197, battle between the Gongsun clan and Goguryeo first broke out when Balgi, elder brother of king Sansang , staged a rebellion and gained the support of Gongsun Du. Sansang's younger brother Gyesu repelled the attack, defeating Gongsun Du, and Balgi committed suicide.
Revised:  In 197, hostilities between the Gongsuns and Goguryeo first broke out when Balgi, elder brother of king Sansang , staged a rebellion and gained the support of Gongsun Du. Sansang's younger brother Gyesu repelled the attack, defeating Gongsun Du, and Balgi committed suicide.
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Original:  In 197, battle between the Gongsun clan and Goguryeo first broke out when Balgi, elder brother of king Sansang , staged a rebellion and gained the support of Gongsun Du. Sansang's younger brother Gyesu repelled the attack, defeating Gongsun Du, and Balgi committed suicide.
Revised:  In 197, battle between the Gongsun clan and Goguryeo first broke out when Balgi, elder brother of King Sansang of Goguryeo , staged a rebellion and gained the support of Gongsun Du. Sansang's younger brother Gyesu repelled the attack, defeating Gongsun Du, and Balgi committed suicide.
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Original:  Gongsun Kang took advantage of a succession feud in Goguryeo , and launched an attack again in 209, defeating Goguryeo and forcing it to move its capital.
Revised:  Gongsun Kang took advantage of a succession feud in Goguryeo and launched an attack again in 209, defeating Goguryeo and forcing it to move its capital.
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Original:  Goguryeo hence became enemies of the Gongsun clan.
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Original: Gardiner (1972B), p. 165 After Wu's messengers were killed by Gongsun Yuan in 233, some of the troops escaped to Goguryeo and set up a Wu-Goguryeo alliance.
Revised: Gardiner (1972B), p. 165 After Wu's messengers were killed by Gongsun Yuan in 233, some of their troops escaped to Goguryeo and set up a Wu-Goguryeo alliance.
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Original:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Wei and killed Wu's messengers in 234 and killed another set in 236.
Revised:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Weikilling Wu's messengers in 234 and killed another set in 236.
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Original:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Wei and killed Wu's messengers in 234 and killed another set in 236.
Revised:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Wei and killed Wu's messengers in 234 and another set in 236.
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Original:  Wei launched a war in retaliation, ended in Wei victory and destroyed the Goguryeo capital of Hwando, sent its king fleeing, and broke the tributary relationships between Goguryeo and the other tribes of Korea that formed much of Goguryeo's economy.
Revised:  Wei launched a war in retaliation, which ended in a Wei victory and destroyed the Goguryeo capital of Hwando, sent its king fleeing, and broke the tributary relationships between Goguryeo and the other tribes of Korea that formed much of Goguryeo's economy.
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