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Original: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other  ways, I just don't think I have any choice ," Casey told reporters after citing the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gas revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
Revised: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other ways, I just don't think I have any choices ," Casey told reporters after citing the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gas revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
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Original: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other  ways, I just don't think I have any choice ," Casey told reporters after citing the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gas revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
Revised: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other ways, I just don't think I have any choice ," Casey said, Reporters after citing to the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gas revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
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Original: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other  ways, I just don't think I have any choice ," Casey told reporters after citing the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gas revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
Revised: "In some ways, it was very difficult, in other ways, I just don't think I have any choice ," Casey told reporters after citing the bill, which proposes to monitor the offshore oil and gases revenues that provinces recieve, wouldn't benefit the province of Nova Scotia as it would lose equalization payments and it broke the Atlantic Accord with Nova Scotia and Newfoundland and Labrador.
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Original:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
Revised:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party to party which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
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Original:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
Revised:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the party , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
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Original:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
Revised:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the party and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
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Original:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning NDP voted against .
Revised:  The bill was supported by all the Conservatives including separatist party Bloc Québécois, which usually sides with the Tories , while the Liberals and the left-leaning party voted against the party .
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Original:  Current Independent MPs are: André Arthur, Louise Thibault, who was elected as an Independent  , and Joe Comuzzi.
Revised:  Current Independent MPs are: André Arthur, who was elected as an Independent , and Joe Comuzzi.
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Original: A man who was reportedly a has died as the result of a one vehicle road traffic collision in the Outer Hebrides of Scotland.
Revised: A man , reportedly a , has died as the result of a one vehicle road traffic collision in the Outer Hebrides of Scotland.
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Original: A man who was reportedly a has died as the result of a one vehicle road traffic collision in the Outer Hebrides of Scotland.
Revised: A man who was reportedly a has died as the result of a one-vehicle road traffic collision in the Outer Hebrides of Scotland.
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Original:  The has said the local , which is based in the town of in the , has launched an investigation into the incident.
Revised:  The said the local , which is based in the town of in the , has launched an investigation into the incident.
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Original:  The has said the local , which is based in the town of in the , has launched an investigation into the incident.
Revised:  The has said the local based in the town of in the , has launched an investigation into the incident.
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Original:  The has said the local , which is based in the town of in the , has launched an investigation into the incident.
Revised:  The has said the local , which is based in the town of in the has launched an investigation into the incident.
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Original: The mail carrier, who has not yet been publicly identified, was conducting his duties at the time of the incident.
Revised: reported the mail carrier, who has not yet been publicly identified, was conducting his duties at the time of the incident.
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Original:  The vehicle reportedly rolled towards and ran over the man, fatally injuring him.
Revised:  The vehicle reportedly rolled over the man, fatally injuring him.
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Original:  "Our thoughts are with the postman's family, friends and colleagues at this very sad time , "  the spokesperson added.
Revised:  "Our thoughts are with the postman's family, friends and colleagues at this very sad time " the spokesperson added.
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Original:  "Our thoughts are with the postman's family, friends and colleagues at this very sad time , "  the spokesperson added.
Revised:  "Our thoughts are with the postman's family, friends and colleagues at this very sad time , " , the spokesperson added.
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Original:  The mission, for the first time, is following a new flight plan which allows the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
Revised:  The mission, for the first time, is following a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
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Original:  The Soyuz spacecraft is slated to dock with the ISS at about 2: 32 UTC on Friday, just short of six hours after liftoff.
Revised:  The Soyuz spacecraft docked with the ISS at about 2: 32 UTC on Friday, just short of six hours after liftoff.
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Original: The mission, for the first time, is following a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
Revised: Soyuz TMA-08M is the first manned flight to follow a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
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Original: Soyuz TMA-08M is the first manned flight to follow a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
Revised: Soyuz TMA-08M is the first manned Soyuz spaceflight to follow a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
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Original: Soyuz TMA-08M is the first manned Soyuz spaceflight to follow a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the orbital outpost in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
Revised: Soyuz TMA-08M is the first manned Soyuz spaceflight to follow a new flight plan which allowed the spacecraft to dock with the ISS in a record-breaking time of approximately six hours, or four orbits, rather than the usual two days.
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Original:  Among the three-member crew of the mission are two Russian cosmonauts, Commander and Flight Engineer , and one U.S. astronaut, Flight Engineer . Soyuz TMA-08M is the third spaceflight for Vinogradov and the second for Cassidy.
Revised:  The three-member crew of the mission are two Russian cosmonauts, Commander and Flight Engineer , and one U.S. astronaut, Flight Engineer . Soyuz TMA-08M is the third spaceflight for Vinogradov and the second for Cassidy.
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Original:  Among the three-member crew of the mission are two Russian cosmonauts, Commander and Flight Engineer , and one U.S. astronaut, Flight Engineer . Soyuz TMA-08M is the third spaceflight for Vinogradov and the second for Cassidy.
Revised:  Among the three-member crew of the mission consists of two Russian cosmonauts, Commander and Flight Engineer , and one U.S. astronaut, Flight Engineer . Soyuz TMA-08M is the third spaceflight for Vinogradov and the second for Cassidy.
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Original:  The Soyuz spacecraft docked with the ISS at about 2:28 UTC on Friday, about four minutes ahead of schedule and just short of six hours after liftoff.
Revised:  The Soyuz spacecraft docked with the ISS at 2:28 UTC on Friday, about four minutes ahead of schedule and just short of six hours after liftoff.
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Original:  The replenished six-person space station crew is slated to perform scientific research and prepare for upcoming departures and arrivals of other spacecraft.
Revised:  The combined six-person space station crew is slated to perform scientific research and prepare for upcoming departures and arrivals of other spacecraft.
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Original:  The next arrival or departure is scheduled for April 15 when is to undock from the station.
Revised:  The next of these is scheduled for April 15 when is to undock from the station.
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Original:  , also using the new flight plan, is slated to arrive at the ISS with three new crewmembers two weeks later on May 28.
Revised:  , also using the new flight plan, is scheduled to arrive at the ISS with three new crewmembers two weeks later on May 28.
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Original:  Soyuz TMA-08M—with Vinogradov, Misurkin, and Cassidy aboard—is scheduled to return to Earth on September 11, after an approximately six month mission
Revised:  Soyuz TMA-08M—with Vinogradov, Misurkin, and Cassidy aboard—is scheduled to return to Earth on September 11, after approximately six months in space
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Original:  After docking with the station, the hatches separating the Soyuz and the ISS are to be opened at about 4: 10 UTC, after which the new crewmembers will be welcomed aboard by the three-man crew currently aboard the outpost, Russian cosmonaut , Canadian astronaut , and U.S. astronaut .
Revised:  After docking with the station, the hatches separating the Soyuz and the ISS were opened at 4: 10 UTC, after which the new crewmembers will be welcomed aboard by the three-man crew currently aboard the outpost, Russian cosmonaut , Canadian astronaut , and U.S. astronaut .
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Original:  After docking with the station, the hatches separating the Soyuz and the ISS are to be opened at about 4: 10 UTC, after which the new crewmembers will be welcomed aboard by the three-man crew currently aboard the outpost, Russian cosmonaut , Canadian astronaut , and U.S. astronaut .
Revised:  After docking with the station, the hatches separating the Soyuz and the ISS are to be opened at about 4: 10 UTC, after which the new crewmembers were welcomed aboard by the three-man crew currently aboard the outpost, Russian cosmonaut , Canadian astronaut , and U.S. astronaut .
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Original: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday with a 6-2 victory against the Ottawa Senators in Game 5 of the playoff finals .
Revised: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday with a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators in Game 5 of the playoff finals .
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Original:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators at their home stadium, the Honda Center, winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
Revised:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators at their home stadium, Honda Center, winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
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Original:   Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season   
Revised:  | Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season 
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Original:   Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season   
Revised:  Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season . 
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Original:  Assists Score1 1st 3:41 ANH Andy McDonald (10) PP Ryan Getzlaf , Chris Pronger 1-02 1st 17:41 ANH Rob Niedermayer (5) Corey Perry 2-03 2nd 11:27 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (13) Peter Schaefer, Mike Fisher 2-1 4 2nd 15:44 ANH Travis Moen (6) Unassisted 3-15 2nd 17:38 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (14) SHORTHANDED Unassisted 3-2 6 2nd 18:28 ANH Francois Beauchemin (4) PP Andy McDonald 4-27 3rd 4:01 ANH Travis Moen (7) Scott Niedermayer, Samuel Pahlsson 5-28 3rd 17:00 ANH Corey Perry (6) Unassisted 6- 
Revised:  Assists Score1 1st 3:41 ANH Andy McDonald (10) PP Ryan Getzlaf , Chris Pronger 1-02 1st 17:41 ANH Rob Niedermayer (5) Corey Perry 2-03 2nd 11:27 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (13) Peter Schaefer, Mike Fisher 2-1 4 2nd 15:44 ANH Travis Moen (6) Unassisted 3-15 2nd 17:38 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (14) SHORTHANDED Unassisted 3-2 6 2nd 18:28 ANH Francois Beauchemin (4) PP Andy McDonald 4-27 3rd 4:01 ANH Travis Moen (7) Scott Niedermayer, Samuel Pahlsson 5-28 3rd 17:00 ANH Corey Perry (6) Unassisted 6-2 
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Original:  Assists Score1 1st 3:41 ANH Andy McDonald (10) PP Ryan Getzlaf , Chris Pronger 1-02 1st 17:41 ANH Rob Niedermayer (5) Corey Perry 2-03 2nd 11:27 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (13) Peter Schaefer, Mike Fisher 2-1 4 2nd 15:44 ANH Travis Moen (6) Unassisted 3-15 2nd 17:38 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (14) SHORTHANDED Unassisted 3-2 6 2nd 18:28 ANH Francois Beauchemin (4) PP Andy McDonald 4-27 3rd 4:01 ANH Travis Moen (7) Scott Niedermayer, Samuel Pahlsson 5-28 3rd 17:00 ANH Corey Perry (6) Unassisted 6- 
Revised:  Assists Score1 1st 3:41 ANH Andy McDonald (10) PP Ryan Getzlaf , Chris Pronger 1-02 1st 17:41 ANH Rob Niedermayer (5) Corey Perry 2-03 2nd 11:27 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (13) Peter Schaefer, Mike Fisher 2-1 4 2nd 15:44 ANH Travis Moen (6) Unassisted 3-15 2nd 17:38 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (14) SHORTHANDED Unassisted 3-2 6 2nd 18:28 ANH Francois Beauchemin (4) PP Andy McDonald 4-27 3rd 4:01 ANH Travis Moen (7) Scott Niedermayer, Samuel Pahlsson 5-28 3rd 17:00 ANH Corey Perry (6) Unassisted 6- Goaltending Summary Goaltending Team Player Shots Saves Save Pct.ANH J. S. Giguere 13 11 .846OTT Ray Emery 18 12 .66
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Original:   | Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season.
Revised:  Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season.
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Original: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League 's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday in Game 5 of the 2007 finals .
Revised: The won the 's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday in Game 5 of the 2007 finals .
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Original: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League 's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday in Game 5 of the 2007 finals .
Revised: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League 's (NHL) on Wednesday in Game 5 of the 2007 finals .
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Original: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League 's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday in Game 5 of the 2007 finals .
Revised: The Anaheim Ducks won the National Hockey League 's (NHL) Stanley Cup on Wednesday in Game 5 of the .
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Original:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators at their home stadium, Honda Center , winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
Revised:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the at their home stadium, Honda Center , winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
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Original:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators at their home stadium, Honda Center , winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
Revised:  The Ducks achieved a 6-2 score against the Ottawa Senators at their home stadium, , winning the best-of-seven series while only allowing one Ottawa victory.
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Original:  This marks the first such championship for a California professional ice hockey team.
Revised:  This marks the first such championship for a California professional team.
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Original:  Scott Niedermayer won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season.
Revised:  won the as the NHL's most valuable player in the 2006-2007 season.
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Original:  In the port city of Bandar Abbas, winds shattered windows , knocked down billboards and felled trees.
Revised:  In the port city of Bandar Abbas, winds shattered windows and knocked down billboards and felled trees.
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Original:  In the port city of Bandar Abbas, winds shattered windows , knocked down billboards and felled trees.
Revised:  In the port city of Bandar Abbas, winds shattered windows , knocked down billboards trees.
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Original:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within Swiss parliment with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the enviroment . Category: Motorsport Category:Sport Category:Switzerla
Revised:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within the Swiss parliament with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the enviroment . Category: Motorsport Category:Sport Category:Switzerla
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Original:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within Swiss parliment with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the enviroment . Category: Motorsport Category:Sport Category:Switzerla
Revised:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within Swiss parliment with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the environment . Category: Motorsport Category:Sport Category:Switzerla
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Original:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within Swiss parliment with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the enviroment . Category: Motorsport Category:Sport Category:Switzerla
Revised:  The ban was lifted following heated discussions within Swiss parliment with some arguing that the reintroduction of the sport could help the countries component manufacturers and the tourism industry, while others argued that the sport wasn't good for the enviroment . Category: Sports Category:Switzerland Category:Europe Category:Auto raci
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Original:  The ban was first introduced following the more than 80 deaths at the disaster at the 1955 24 Hours of Le Mans.
Revised:  The ban was first introduced following the more than 80 deaths in the disaster at the 1955 24 Hours of Le Mans.
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Original:  While France and Germany are calling for quantifiable greenhouse gas  cuts, the U.S. and Japan believe that growing economies such as India and China would need to join in on such efforts.
Revised:  While France and Germany are calling for quantifiable greenhouse gas emission cuts, the U.S. and Japan believe that growing economies such as India and China would need to join in on such efforts.
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Original:   A spokesman for Russian President Vladimir Putin called the U.S. plans to deal with global warming "very pragmatic and interesting."
Revised:  The new President of France Nicolas Sarkozy wants the U.S. to increase their efforts on climate issues. He told reporters yesterday: "We need quantifiable targets in the final text. It is an extremely important point and I intend to talk to the president of the United States about it as early as this evening. ... President Bush has made a first effort, but we need to set ourselves targets to clearly show the determination of the G-8 to act and to obtain results... If we don't act now, it will be too late to avoid a disaster. It will cost less than if we wait." A spokesman for Russian President Vladimir Putin called the U.S. plans to deal with global warming "very pragmatic and interesting."
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Original:  After she had a first talk with president Bush , she said that the first talks were good, and added: "I trust that with some work a common position can be formed."
Revised:  She said her first talks with president Bush , she said that the first talks were good, and added: "I trust that with some work a common position can be formed."
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Original:  After she had a first talk with president Bush , she said that the first talks were good, and added: "I trust that with some work a common position can be formed."
Revised:  After she had a first talk with president Bush were good, and added: "I trust that with some work a common position can be formed."
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Original:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions compared to the level of 1990 by 2050, and a global temperature rise of no more than 3.6°C.
Revised:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions by 2050, and a global temperature rise of no more than 3.6°C.
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Original:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions compared to the level of 1990 by 2050, and a global temperature rise of no more than 3.6°C.
Revised:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions compared to the level of 1990 by 2050 compared to 1990 levels, helping to keep global temperature rise of no more than 3.6°C.
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Original:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions compared to the level of 1990 by 2050, and a global temperature rise of no more than 3.6°C.
Revised:  Merkel had proposed a 50\% decrease in greenhouse gas emissions compared to the level of 1990 by 2050, and a global temperature rise to no more than 3.6°C.
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Original:  The G8 Summit was preceded by mass demonstrations, such as the one in Rostock, were several hundred protesters were arrested.
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