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Original: Barton, J., Notes on the Suk Tribe of Kenia Colony, The Journal of the Royal Anthropological Institute of Great Britain and Ireland Vol. 51 (Jan. - Jun. , 1921), pp. 82-99 online By the early 20th century, the Pokot community was expanding as many of the Chok joined their rank and by that time, many Pokot who were termed Suk by the colonial administrators did not recognize this name for their tribe.
Revised: Barton, J., Notes on the Suk Tribe of Kenia Colony, The Journal of the Royal Anthropological Institute of Great Britain and Ireland Vol. 51 (Jan. - Jun. , 1921), pp. 82–99 online By the early 20th century, the Pokot community was expanding as many of the Chok joined their rank and by that time, many Pokot who were termed Suk by the colonial administrators did not recognize this name for their tribe.
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Original: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906-1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Following his Juba expedition, MacDonald (1899) wrote of the Sambur - who had been 'weakened by the civil war' and had been attacked 'by the (Pokotozek) who lived on the southern portion of the Karamojo plateau'.
Revised: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906–1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Following his Juba expedition, MacDonald (1899) wrote of the Sambur - who had been 'weakened by the civil war' and had been attacked 'by the (Pokotozek) who lived on the southern portion of the Karamojo plateau'.
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Original: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906-1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Following his Juba expedition, MacDonald (1899) wrote of the Sambur - who had been 'weakened by the civil war' and had been attacked 'by the (Pokotozek) who lived on the southern portion of the Karamojo plateau'.
Revised: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906-1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Following his Juba expedition, MacDonald (1899) wrote of the Sambur – who had been 'weakened by the civil war' and had been attacked 'by the (Pokotozek) who lived on the southern portion of the Karamojo plateau'.
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Original: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906-1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Post-Mutai Maasai-British relations In the late 1880s, the Imperial British East Africa Company (IBEAC) increasingly came into contact with the Maasai.
Revised: Arap Lagat, A.K, The Historical Process of Nandi Movement into the Uasin Gishu District of the Kenya Highlands: 1906–1963. , University of Nairobi, 1995 Post-Mutai Maasai-British relations In the late 1880s, the Imperial British East Africa Company (IBEAC) increasingly came into contact with the Maasai.
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Original:  The Journal of African History 17, no. 4 (1976): 529-53. URL In 1895, the British government took over the possessions of the IBEAC and established the East Africa Protectorate over its former territories.
Revised:  The Journal of African History 17, no. 4 (1976): 529–53. URL In 1895, the British government took over the possessions of the IBEAC and established the East Africa Protectorate over its former territories.
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Original:  The Journal of African History 17, no. 4 (1976): 529-53. URL After 1900, the interests of the British and the Maasai began to diverge.
Revised:  The Journal of African History 17, no. 4 (1976): 529–53. URL After 1900, the interests of the British and the Maasai began to diverge.
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Original: Mihail Montanu ( Born April 21st , 1949) was a leader in the 1989 Romanian Revolution and was one of 40 original members of the National Salvation Front (FSN) whom Ion Iliescu named as representative of the civil servants at the Defense Ministry of the FSN on December 22nd, 1989(in Romanian).
Revised: Mihail Montanu ( born April 21 , 1949) was a leader in the 1989 Romanian Revolution and was one of 40 original members of the National Salvation Front (FSN) whom Ion Iliescu named as representative of the civil servants at the Defense Ministry of the FSN on December 22nd, 1989(in Romanian).
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Original: Mihail Montanu ( Born April 21st , 1949) was a leader in the 1989 Romanian Revolution and was one of 40 original members of the National Salvation Front (FSN) whom Ion Iliescu named as representative of the civil servants at the Defense Ministry of the FSN on December 22nd, 1989(in Romanian).
Revised: Mihail Montanu ( Born April 21st , 1949) was a leader in the 1989 Romanian Revolution and was one of 40 original members of the National Salvation Front (FSN) whom Ion Iliescu named as representative of the civil servants at the Defense Ministry of the FSN on December 22, 1989.
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Original:  Biography From 1979-1987 , Montanu served as project manager at the institute for hydropower studies and projections.
Revised:  Biography From 1979 to 1987 , Montanu served as project manager at the institute for hydropower studies and projections.
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Original:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September, 1989 as an engineering consultant  (in Romanian) .
Revised:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September, 1989 as an engineering consultant . (in Romanian) .
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Original:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September, 1989 as an engineering consultant  (in Romanian) .
Revised:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September, 1989 as an engineering consultant (in Romanian) 
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Original:  In December of 1989, during the revolution, Montanu met with Petre Roman, a fellow dissident and one of three leaders in the FSN in the TV station of the central committee.
Revised:  In December 1989, during the revolution, Montanu met with Petre Roman, a fellow dissident and one of three leaders in the FSN in the TV station of the central committee.
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Original:  Together, the pair decided upon a message, but due to a failure in equipment, they had to find other means of broadcasting, eventually settling on a broadcasting station belonging to Televiziunea Română (TVR) (in Romanian) .
Revised:  Together, the pair decided upon a message, but due to a failure in equipment, they had to find other means of broadcasting, eventually settling on a broadcasting station belonging to Televiziunea Română (TVR) .
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Original:  Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia (in Romanian) , and later was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004-2010(in Romanian)(in Romanian).
Revised:  Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia , and later was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004-2010(in Romanian)(in Romanian).
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Original:  Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia (in Romanian) , and later was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004-2010(in Romanian)(in Romanian).
Revised:  Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia (in Romanian) , and later was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004 to 2010.
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Original:  Whilst in the position, Mihail Monceanu, said that approximately 90\% of Romanians in Brazil were Jews and came during the World War II (in Romanian) .
Revised:  Whilst in the position, Mihail Monceanu, said that approximately 90\% of Romanians in Brazil were Jews and came during the World War II .
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Original:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" (in Romanian) and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series (in Romanian) . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diploma
Revised:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series (in Romanian) . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diploma
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Original:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" (in Romanian) and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series (in Romanian) . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diploma
Revised:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" (in Romanian) and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diploma
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Original:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" (in Romanian) and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series (in Romanian) . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diploma
Revised:  Awards In 1993, Montanu was awarded the title "Fighter for the victory of the Romanian Revolution in December 1989" (in Romanian) and received a revolutionary certificate with the LRM-M-70 series (in Romanian) . Category:1949 births Category:People of the Romanian Revolution Category:Romanian communists Category:Members of the Great National Assembly Category:Romanian diplomats Category:Living peop
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Original:  Due to having relatives abroad, namely a sister in Germany, Montanu was dismissed from this position in March , 1987.
Revised:  Due to having relatives abroad, namely a sister in Germany, Montanu was dismissed from this position in March 1987.
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Original:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September , 1989 as an engineering consultant.
Revised:  After a short series of projects abroad, Montanu returned to Bucharest in September 1989 as an engineering consultant.
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Original: (in Romanian) Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia , and later was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004 to 2010.
Revised: (in Romanian) Since the revolution, Montanu has worked in the ministry of foreign affairs, with leading positions at the Romanian embassies in Namibia and Malaysia . Later he was summoned to Rio de Janeiro to serve as the General Consul from 2004 to 2010.
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Original: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator who is currently serving as a Member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's Collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
Revised: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator who is currently serving as a member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's Collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
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Original: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator who is currently serving as a Member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's Collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
Revised: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator who is currently serving as a Member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
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Original:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the  head of state of Sudan during a 39-month transition period starting in August 2019.
Revised:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the collective head of state of Sudan during a 39-month transition period starting in August 2019.
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Original:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the  head of state of Sudan during a 39-month transition period starting in August 2019.
Revised:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the head of state of Sudan during the 39-month transition period starting in August 2019.
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Original:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the  head of state of Sudan during a 39-month transition period starting in August 2019.
Revised:  Sovereignty Council Under the August 2019 Draft Constitutional Declaration, Musa was nominated by the Forces of Freedom and Change alliance (FFC) as one of the civilian members of the Sovereignty Council, the head of state of Sudan during a 39-month transition period that began in August 2019.
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Original: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator and politician who is currently serving as a member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
Revised: Aisha Musa el-Said (also Asha, Ayesha, Mousa, Elsaid, El Said, Saeed, ) is a Sudanese translator and politician who served as a member of the Sovereignty Council of Sudan, the country's collective head of state since 21 August 2019.
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Original:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Copt community, was seen as a symbol of respect for diversity, in particular to Sudanese Christians.
Revised:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Coptic community, was seen as a symbol of respect for diversity, in particular to Sudanese Christians.
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Original:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Copt community, was seen as a symbol of respect for diversity, in particular to Sudanese Christians.
Revised:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Copt community, was seen as a concrete measure for social diversity, in particular to Sudanese Christians.
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Original:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Copt community, was seen as a symbol of respect for diversity, in particular to Sudanese Christians.
Revised:  The choice of Nicola, as a member of the Sudanese Copt community, was seen as a symbol of respect for diversity, in particular for Sudanese Christians.
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Original:  Shortly after being sworn in as a member of the Sovereignty Council,  described her vision of the task of the council, stating,
Revised:  Shortly after being sworn in as a member of the Sovereignty Council, she described her vision of the task of the council, stating,
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Original: Establishment of the Pokotozek community The Pokotozek moved south, arriving at Nakiloro which lies on the lip of the Turkana escarpment just north of Moroto mountain, where they stayed for a short while before moving further south, proceeding down the eastern side of the Chemorongit and Cherangani mountains before finally branching off in the direction of Lake Baringo.
Revised: Establishment of the Pokotozek The Pokotozek moved south, arriving at Nakiloro which lies on the lip of the Turkana escarpment just north of Moroto mountain, where they stayed for a short while before moving further south, proceeding down the eastern side of the Chemorongit and Cherangani mountains before finally branching off in the direction of Lake Baringo.
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Original: Consequences for Maliri community Conflict with Turkana community According to traditions recorded by Wilson (1970), a community known as Maliri were pushed eastward to the vicinity of Koten mountain by Jie incursion into their territory.
Revised: Consequences for Maliri community Conflict with Turkana According to traditions recorded by Wilson (1970), a community known as Maliri were pushed eastward to the vicinity of Koten mountain by Jie incursion into their territory.
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Original: Consequences for Maliri community Conflict with Turkana According to traditions recorded by Wilson (1970), a community known as Maliri were pushed eastward to the vicinity of Koten mountain by Jie incursion into their territory.
Revised: Consequences for Maliri Conflict with Turkana According to traditions recorded by Wilson (1970), a community known as Maliri were pushed eastward to the vicinity of Koten mountain by Jie incursion into their territory.
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Original:  These are analogus with the preset day Rendille and Boran communities.
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Original:  According to Von Höhnel (1894) "a few decades" prior, the Burkineji occupied districts on the west of the lake and that they were later driven eastwards into present day Samburu.
Revised:  According to Von Höhnel (1894) "a few decades" prior, the Burkineji occupied districts on the west of the lake and they were later driven eastwards into present day Samburu.
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Original:  However, the new territory acquired by the Maasai was vast and left them overextended thus unable to occupy it effectively    
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Original:  However, the new territory acquired by the Maasai was vast and left them overextended thus unable to occupy it effectively    
Revised:  However, the new territory acquired by the Maasai was vast and left them overextended thus unable to occupy it effectively References 
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Original: For the singer, see Shahid Ali Khan ( Qawwal singer) Shahid Ali Khan ( Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
Revised:  Shahid Ali Khan ( Qawwal singer) Shahid Ali Khan ( Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
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Original: For the singer, see Shahid Ali Khan ( Qawwal singer) Shahid Ali Khan ( Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
Revised: For the singer, see Shahid Ali Khan ( Shahid Ali Khan ( Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
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Original: For the singer, see Shahid Ali Khan ( Qawwal singer) Shahid Ali Khan ( Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
Revised: For the singer, see Shahid Ali Khan ( Qawwal singer) Urdu: شاہد علی خان) (born December 26, 1964) is a retired field hockey goalkeeper from Pakistan, who won the gold medal with the Men's National Team at the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles, California and later became the Pakistan's goal keeping coach.
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Original: Pakistani  field hockey players Category:
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Original: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Male field hockey players Category: Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympi
Revised: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category: Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympi
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Original: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Male field hockey players Category: Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympi
Revised: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Male field hockey players Category: Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympi
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Original: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Male field hockey players Category: Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1984 Summer Olympi
Revised: Field hockey players at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Olympic gold medalists for Pakistan Category:Olympic bronze medalists for Pakistan Category:Living people Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistan Navy School alumni Category:Olympic medalists in field hockey Category:Recipients of the Pride of Performance Category:Male field hockey players Category: Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1992 Summer Olympi
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