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Original:  In the shootout it would be Patrik Elias (the only person to score) who would win the game for Devils in a hard fought game.
Revised:  In the shootout it would be Patrik Elias (the only person to score) would win the game for Devils in a hard fought game.
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Original:  The Pens will try to rebound against the New York Rangers on Saturday and the Devils will play against the Sabers also on Saturday.
Revised:  The Pens will try to rebound against the New York Rangers on Saturday and the Devils face the Sabres on Saturday.
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Original: March 11, 2007 Former Notre Dame Quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
Revised: single source Former Notre Dame Quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
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Original:  Quinn will show NFL scouts his speed at Notre Dame's next pro day  
Revised:  Quinn will show NFL scouts his speed at Notre Dame's next pro day . 
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Original:  Former Notre Dame Quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
Revised: Quinn shows off for NFL Scouts Former Notre Dame Quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
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Original:   Quinn shows off for NFL Scouts  Former Notre Dame Quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
Revised:  Quinn shows off for NFL Scouts Former Notre Dame quarterback Brady Quinn gave NFL scouts an up-close view of what he did at Notre Dame and hopes to do in the NFL, the Associated Press reported.
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Original: Category:Wikinews Shorts Quinn shows off for NFL Scouts [[Image:Brady Quinn at pep rally.jpg|Brady Quinn.
Revised:  Quinn shows off for NFL Scouts [[Image:Brady Quinn at pep rally.jpg|Brady Quinn.
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Original:  The governments of  27 countries in Brussels endorsed 3 main binding targets: In the summit's conclusions, the E.U. underlines it's ambitions as a leading force in international climate protection.
Revised:  The governments of the 27 countries in Brussels endorsed 3 main binding targets: In the summit's conclusions, the E.U. underlines it's ambitions as a leading force in international climate protection.
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Original:  European Commission President Jose Manuel Barroso added: "We can say to the rest of the world, Europe is taking the lead.
Revised:  European Commission President José Manuel Barroso added: "We can say to the rest of the world, Europe is taking the lead.
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Original:  More specifically, each member state should decide if they which to use nuclear energy or not.
Revised:  More specifically, each member state should decide if they which to use nuclear power or not.
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Original:  Through member state solidarity and a more interconnected and integrated market, eastern European countries hope to secure their energy supplies in the case Russia would cut the supply.
Revised:  Through member state solidarity and a more interconnected and integrated market, eastern European countries hope to secure their energy supplies in case Russia would cut the supply.
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Original: to reduce greenhouse gas emmision levels by the year 2020 by 20\% compared to the level of 1990 renewable energy should make up 20\% of energy consumption by 2020 a 10\% share for biofuels in the total consumption of fuels in E.U. transport.
Revised: to reduce greenhouse gas emission levels by the year 2020 by 20\% compared to the level of 1990 renewable energy should make up 20\% of energy consumption by 2020 a 10\% share for biofuels in the total consumption of fuels in E.U. transport.
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Original:  In the summit's conclusions, the E.U. underlines it's ambitions as a leading force in international climate protection.
Revised:  In the summit's conclusions, the E.U. underlines its ambitions as a leading force in international climate protection.
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Original:  Europe stated it's prepared to even increase the objectives if other developed countries follow suit, and it invites other countries to come forward with their plans for the environment beyond 2012, when the Kyoto protocol ends.
Revised:  Europe is prepared to even increase the objectives if other developed countries follow suit, and it invites other countries to come forward with their plans for the environment beyond 2012, when the Kyoto protocol ends.
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Original:  More specifically, each member state should decide if they which to use nuclear power or not.
Revised:  More specifically, each member state should decide if they wish to use nuclear power or not.
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Original:  Some countries oppose the use of nuclear energy as an alternative to fossil fuels, and Germany is even in the process of dismantling it's nuclear energy production.
Revised:  Some countries oppose the use of nuclear energy as an alternative to fossil fuels, and Germany is even in the process of dismantling its nuclear energy production.
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Original:  France on the other hand produces 70\% of it's energy in nuclear power plants.
Revised:  France on the other hand produces 70\% of its energy in nuclear power plants.
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Original:  The summit also asked the European Commission to come up by 2008 and 2009 with proposals to reduce energy consumption in lighting and offices .
Revised:  The summit also asked the European Commission to come up with proposals to reduce energy consumption in lighting and offices .
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Original:  The idea is to replace conventional light bulbs with more energy-efficient alternatives such as the energy saving lightbulb .
Revised:  The idea is to replace conventional light bulbs with more energy-efficient alternatives such as the energy saving light bulb .
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Original:  France on the other hand produces 70\% of its energy in nuclear power plants.
Revised:  France on the other hand produces 70\% of its electricity in nuclear power plants.
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Original: European Union leaders on the second day of their summit have agreed on measures to decrease emission of greenhouse gasses and to start using more biological fuels.
Revised: European Union leaders on the second day of their summit have agreed on measures to decrease emission of greenhouse gases and to start using more biological fuels.
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Original: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow  320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists calling for a boycott of  Canadian fisheries products.
Revised: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow the harvest of 320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists calling for a boycott of Canadian fisheries products.
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Original: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow  320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists calling for a boycott of  Canadian fisheries products.
Revised: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow 320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists who call for a boycott of Canadian fisheries products.
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Original: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow  320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists calling for a boycott of  Canadian fisheries products.
Revised: March 23, 2005 Category:March 23, 2005 180px|A seal, photo by Jason L. Buberal Ottawa says it will allow 320,000 young seals this year, prompting a backlash from international environmental activists calling for a boycott of the Canadian fisheries products.
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Original:  The seal hunt is an annual event on the ice floes off the east coast of Canada in the seal nurseries where they give birth.
Revised:  The seal hunt is an annual event on the ice floes off the east coast of Canada where the seal nurseries where they give birth.
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Original:  The seal hunt is an annual event on the ice floes off the east coast of Canada in the seal nurseries where they give birth.
Revised:  The seal hunt is an annual event on the ice floes off the east coast of Canada in the seal nurseries give birth.
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Original:  This year's hunt begins March 29, and will last for two months.
Revised:  This year's hunt begins March 29, and lasts for two months.
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Original:  Activists also protest and observe the hunt annually, but this year's larger number of seals has brought a larger responseas well .
Revised:  Environmental activists protest and observe the hunt annually, but this year's larger number of seals has brought a larger responseas well .
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Original:  Activists also protest and observe the hunt annually, but this year's larger number of seals has brought a larger responseas well .
Revised:  Activists also protest and observe the hunt annually, but this year's larger number of seals has brought a bigger response .
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Original:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials have said if too many observers show up they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
Revised:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials said if too many observers show up they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
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Original:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials have said if too many observers show up they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
Revised:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials have said if too many of them show up, they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
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Original:  Protests were held in 50 cities around the world in the last week, and activists say they would press consumers and restaurants to avoid Canadian fish for at least the duration of the hunt.
Revised:  Protests were held in 50 cities around the world last week, and activists say they would press consumers and restaurants to avoid Canadian fish for at least the duration of the hunt.
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Original:  "We're going to be encouraging consumers to enter into dialogue with their grocery stores and their restaurants and say 'Please don't serve Canadian seafood' or 'I won't buy Canadian seafood until this hunt is over',"  Pat Ragan of the Humane Society of the United States (HSUS) told  Reuters.
Revised:  "We're going to be encouraging consumers to enter into dialogue with their grocery stores and their restaurants and say 'Please don't serve Canadian seafood' or 'I won't buy Canadian seafood until this hunt is over'," said Pat Ragan of the Humane Society of the United States (HSUS) told Reuters.
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Original:  "We're going to be encouraging consumers to enter into dialogue with their grocery stores and their restaurants and say 'Please don't serve Canadian seafood' or 'I won't buy Canadian seafood until this hunt is over',"  Pat Ragan of the Humane Society of the United States (HSUS) told  Reuters.
Revised:  "We're going to be encouraging consumers to enter into dialogue with their grocery stores and their restaurants and say 'Please don't serve Canadian seafood' or 'I won't buy Canadian seafood until this hunt is over'," Pat Ragan of the Humane Society of the United States (HSUS) told to Reuters.
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare  sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt which concluded the animals are often ( 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner and not in accordance with Canada's own laws
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare , which sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt which concluded the animals are often ( 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner and not in accordance with Canada's own laws
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare  sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt which concluded the animals are often ( 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner and not in accordance with Canada's own laws
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt , reported that 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner and not in accordance with Canada's own laws
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare  sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt which concluded the animals are often ( 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner and not in accordance with Canada's own laws
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt which concluded the animals are often ( 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner 
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Original:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials said if too many of them show up , they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
Revised:  Observers are already in the hunt area, and officials said if too many show up they will be prevented from interfering with the hunt.
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare , which sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt , reported that 42\% of the time seals were killed in an inhumane manner 
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt , reported that 42\% of the time seals were killed in an inhumane manner 
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Original:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare , which sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt , reported that 42\% of the time seals were killed in an inhumane manner 
Revised:  The International Fund for Animal Welfare , which sponsored two independent veterinary teams to observe the 2001 hunt , reported that 42\% of the time ) killed in an inhumane manner 
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Original: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf, in an unprecedented move has sacked the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Choudhry for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
Revised: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf, in an unprecedented move has sacked the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
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Original:  Chief Justice Iftikhar Choudhry had a strong reputation world over for taking a firm stand against Musharraf government's human rights violations and political abductions, the BBC reports.
Revised:  Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry had a strong reputation world over for taking a firm stand against Musharraf government's human rights violations and political abductions, the BBC reports.
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Original:  Former justice of the supreme court Justice Abdul Qayyum expressing his shock to the entire situation said, "This is unprecedented . . . Chief Justice Chourdhry is an upright person, and the action against him has surprised me." Chief Justice Iftikhar Choudhry , starting this month was scheduled to preside over various high profile cases including those challenging the military dictator's rule and the multi-billion dollar corruption charge against the prime minister
Revised:  Former justice of the supreme court Justice Abdul Qayyum expressing his shock to the entire situation said, "This is unprecedented . . . Chief Justice Chaurdhry is an upright person, and the action against him has surprised me." Chief Justice Iftikhar Choudhry , starting this month was scheduled to preside over various high profile cases including those challenging the military dictator's rule and the multi-billion dollar corruption charge against the prime minister
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Original:  Former justice of the supreme court Justice Abdul Qayyum expressing his shock to the entire situation said, "This is unprecedented . . . Chief Justice Chourdhry is an upright person, and the action against him has surprised me." Chief Justice Iftikhar Choudhry , starting this month was scheduled to preside over various high profile cases including those challenging the military dictator's rule and the multi-billion dollar corruption charge against the prime minister
Revised:  Former justice of the supreme court Justice Abdul Qayyum expressing his shock to the entire situation said, "This is unprecedented . . . Chief Justice Chourdhry is an upright person, and the action against him has surprised me." Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry , starting this month was scheduled to preside over various high profile cases including those challenging the military dictator's rule and the multi-billion dollar corruption charge against the prime minister
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Original: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf, in an unprecedented move has sacked the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry  for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
Revised: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf, dismissed the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
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Original:  Justice Javed Iqbal, the next in seniority has been appointed acting Chief Justice.
Revised:  Justice Javed Iqbal, the next in line has been sworn in as acting Chief Justice.
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Original:  Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry had a strong reputation world over for taking a firm stand against Musharraf government's human rights violations and political abductions, the BBC reports .
Revised:  Chaudry was controversial for taking up investigations into the highly sensitive issue of the disappearance of political activists allegedly detained illegally by the security forces .
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Original:  " Pakistan's main opposition leader and member of the national assembly (lower house) Hafiz Hussain, terming this as an outrage stated "time has come when all must join hands to save the last institution from this dictator."
Revised:  Pakistan's main opposition leader and member of the national assembly (lower house) Hafiz Hussain, terming this as an outrage stated "time has come when all must join hands to save the last institution from this dictator."
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Original:  " Pakistan's main opposition leader and member of the national assembly (lower house) Hafiz Hussain, terming this as an outrage stated "time has come when all must join hands to save the last institution from this dictator."
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Original: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan 's military President General Pervez Musharraf has suspended the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry under section 209 of the constitution of Islamic Republic of Pakistan for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
Revised: Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry Pakistan President Pervez Musharraf has suspended the country's top judge, Chief Justice Iftikhar Chaudhry under section 209 of the constitution of Islamic Republic of Pakistan for "misuse of authority", the country's information minister Mohammed Ali Durrani has announced.
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Original: The United States Justice Department has concluded an inquest into the FBI's use of the Patriot Act saying that the FBI had been, in some cases, misusing the Patriot Act, sometimes illegaly .
Revised: The United States Justice Department has concluded an inquest into the FBI's use of the Patriot Act saying that the FBI had been, in some cases, misusing the Patriot Act, sometimes illegally .
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Original:  Such misuses include ordering the handover of personal information without just cause and looked at telephone numbers of Americans during the period of a non-emergency  .
Revised:  Such misuses include ordering the handover of personal information without just cause and looked at telephone records of Americans during the period of a non-emergency .
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Original:  Such misuses include ordering the handover of personal information without court orders or warrents and looked at telephone records of Americans during the period of a non-emergency, Inspector General Glenn A.
Revised:  Such misuses include ordering the handover of personal information without just cause and looked at telephone records of Americans during the period of a non-emergency, Inspector General Glenn A.
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Original:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings, I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation .
Revised:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings, I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation 
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Original:   Robert Mueller the director of the FBI, syas he is not responsible for not taking better measures to prevent the violations.
Revised:  Robert Mueller the director of the FBI, says that he is responsible for not taking better measures to prevent the violations.
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Original:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings, I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation  
Revised:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings, I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation . 
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Original:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings , I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation.
Revised:  While we've already taken some steps to address these shortcomings . I am ordering additional corrective measures to be taken immediately," said Mueller who also stated that he has no plans to hand in his resignation.
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Original:  The FBI sent National Security Letters or "NSLs" to Americans which asked for personal information, without getting a warrent or court order, but the FBI failed to record any records of at least 22\% of letters that were sent out.
Revised:  The FBI sent National Security Letters or "NSLs" to Americans asking for personal information, without getting a warrent or court order, but the FBI failed to record any records of at least 22\% of letters that were sent out.
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