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Original: On the issue of terrorism, Khatami  it clear that dialogue is the best solution to "eliminate terrorism and the great military conflicts," stressing that one cannot invoke God "as a password for war and hate."
Revised: On the issue of terrorism, Khatami made it clear that dialogue is the best solution to "eliminate terrorism and the great military conflicts," stressing that one cannot invoke God "as a password for war and hate."
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Original:  In the talks which lasted about 30  , the Khatami and Benedict XVI concurred that the Sharm al-Sheik conference to resolve the tensions in Iraq was a positive development.
Revised:  In the talks which lasted about 30 minutes , the Khatami and Benedict XVI concurred that the Sharm al-Sheik conference to resolve the tensions in Iraq was a positive development.
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Original: In the talks which lasted about 30 minutes, the Khatami and Benedict XVI concurred that the Sharm al-Sheik conference to resolve the tensions in Iraq was a positive development.
Revised: In the talks which lasted about 30 minutes, Khatami and Benedict XVI concurred that the Sharm al-Sheik conference to resolve the tensions in Iraq was a positive development.
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Original:  Pope Benedict XVI Ayatollah Mohammad Khatami, the president of Iran from 1997 to 2005, was among a delegation of Islamic clerics to meet Pope Benedict XVI in the Vatican City in Rome on Friday.
Revised:  Pope Benedict XVI Mohammad Khatami, the president of Iran from 1997 to 2005, was among a delegation of Islamic clerics to meet Pope Benedict XVI in the Vatican City in Rome on Friday.
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Original: The dog suffered massive injuries that the vet had never seen to that extent before, which resulted in 69-year-old Alan Gay, the dogs owner, allowing George to be put down.
Revised: The dog suffered massive injuries that the vet had never seen to that extent before, which resulted in 69-year-old Alan Gay, the dog's owner, allowing George to be put down.
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Original:  It is also expected that the two attacking dogs, which have been destroyed, were bred to be aggressive, including being fed methamphitamine, commonly referred to as "P" in New Zealand.
Revised:  It is also believed that the two attacking dogs, which have been destroyed, were bred to be aggressive, including being fed methamphitamine, commonly referred to as "P" in New Zealand.
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Original: A small, "nicely trained" jack russell terrier gave his life to help save a group of five children from two aggressive pitbulls last Sunday in Manaia, Taranaki, New Zealand.
Revised: A small, "nicely trained" Jack Russell Terrier gave his life to help save a group of five children from two aggressive pitbulls last Sunday in Manaia, Taranaki, New Zealand.
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Original:  Although he now regrets this decision that he only thought about for a couple of minutes .
Revised:  He now regrets this decision that he only thought about for a couple of minutes .
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Original:  Although he now regrets this decision that he only thought about for a couple of minutes .
Revised:  Although he now regrets this decision .
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Original:  George then started barking loudly at the pair of dogs, and putting himself between the dogs and the children.
Revised:  George then started barking loudly at the pair of dogs, and put himself between the dogs and the children.
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Original:  Despite having a lot of offers of new dogs, Mr Gay has said that he will wait a while before getting another jack russell terrier , as he is afraid it could happen again.
Revised:  Despite having received offers of new dogs, Mr Gay has said that he will wait a while before getting another jack russell terrier , as he is afraid it could happen again.
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Original:  Despite having a lot of offers of new dogs, Mr Gay has said that he will wait a while before getting another jack russell terrier , as he is afraid it could happen again.
Revised:  Despite having a lot of offers of new dogs, Mr Gay has said that he will wait a while before getting another Jack Russell Terrier , as he is afraid it could happen again.
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Original:  It is also believed that the two attacking dogs, which have been destroyed, were bred to be aggressive, including being fed  methamphetamine, commonly referred to as "P" in New Zealand.
Revised:  It is also believed that the two attacking dogs, which have been destroyed, were bred to be aggressive, including being fed the drug methamphetamine, commonly referred to as "P" in New Zealand.
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Original:  Mr Gay has said that Manaia has had a problem with stray dogs before, but he never expected that George would become a victim of those stray dogs .
Revised:  Mr Gay has said that Manaia has had a problem with stray dogs before, but he never expected that George would become a victim .
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Original:  The flight 5Y-KYA photographed in 2006.
Revised:  Plane 5Y-KYA photographed in 2006.
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Original:  Credit: Wade distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
Revised:  Credit: distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
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Original:  Credit: Wade distinct entry=true Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
Revised:  Credit: Wade Terry Wade Flight KQ 507 was traveling from Abidjan to Nairobi.
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Original: Quebec multiculturalism group demands apology Quebec Pluriel, a local multiculturalism group, has raised a human-rights complaint about an "offensive" video showing a black person depicted as a cannibal.
Revised: Quebec multiculturalism group demands apology Quebec Pluriel, a local multi-culturalism group, has raised a human-rights complaint about an "offensive" video showing a black person depicted as a cannibal.
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Original:  The company's refused saying it was only humour
Revised:  The companies refused saying it was only humour
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Original: Quebec multiculturalism group demands apology Quebec Pluriel, a local multi-culturalism group, has raised a human-rights complaint about an "offensive" video showing a black person depicted as a cannibal.
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Original:  He described carbon monoxide detectors as being "as important as a smoke alarm as it provides a valuable early warning"  
Revised:  He described carbon monoxide detectors as being "as important as a smoke alarm as it provides a valuable early warning" . 
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Original: is thought to have been the cause of the deaths of three people , a woman aged in her 40s and her parents, in a in Cornwall in . (CFRS) were alerted to the incident , in which one dog also died, in Tremarle Home Park in the town of at 1256 yesterday.
Revised: is thought to have been the cause of the deaths of three people , a woman aged in her 40s and her parents, in a in Cornwall in . (CFRS) were alerted to the incident in Tremarle Home Park in the town of at 1256 yesterday.
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Original:  The is now investigating the incident but the deaths are not considered as being of a suspicious nature   . David Biggs, a member of , said the incident came as "a shock" to him;
Revised:  The is now investigating the incident but the deaths are not considered as being of a suspicious nature . . David Biggs, a member of , said the incident came as "a shock" to him;
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Original: The incident came five days after announced its Family Placement Service would launch a joint venture with Cornwall Fire and Rescue Service to place s in the houses of s . The programme, entitled 'Be Gas Safe', has seen 200 carbon monoxide detectors and 2000 leaflets to raise awareness about carbon monoxide being given to CFRS.
Revised: The incident came five days after announced its Family Placement Service would launch a joint venture with Cornwall Fire and Rescue Service to place s in the houses of . The programme, entitled 'Be Gas Safe', has seen 200 carbon monoxide detectors and 2000 leaflets to raise awareness about carbon monoxide being given to CFRS.
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Original: Langhorne, Pennsylvania theme park Sesame Place opened for the season this morning, for its 2007 season, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that kids can meet.
Revised: The Sesame Place theme park in Langhorne opened for its 2007 season this morning, for its 2007 season, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that kids can meet.
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Original: Langhorne, Pennsylvania theme park Sesame Place opened for the season this morning, for its 2007 season, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that kids can meet.
Revised: Langhorne, Pennsylvania theme park Sesame Place opened for the season this morning, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that kids can meet.
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Original: Langhorne, Pennsylvania theme park Sesame Place opened for the season this morning, for its 2007 season, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that kids can meet.
Revised: Langhorne, Pennsylvania theme park Sesame Place opened for the season this morning, for its 2007 season, adding Abby Cadabby to its all-star lineup of characters that children can meet.
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Original:  Described as a "sweet, inquisitive enthusiastic three-year-old fairy-in-training , " who loves making new friends, the character stars in a musical show called Abby Cadabby's Treasure Hunt.
Revised:  Described as a "sweet, inquisitive enthusiastic three-year-old fairy-in-training " who loves making new friends, the character stars in a musical show called Abby Cadabby's Treasure Hunt.
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Original:  Press material say that it "is considered the first theme park experience for young children offering an exciting introduction to thrills and adventures for families with children two to seven years of age . " 
Revised:  Press material say that it "is considered the first theme park experience for young children offering an exciting introduction to thrills and adventures for families with children two to seven years of age " 
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Original:  Press material say that it "is considered the first theme park experience for young children offering an exciting introduction to thrills and adventures for families with children two to seven years of age . " 
Revised:  Press material say that it "is considered the first theme park experience for young children offering an exciting introduction to thrills and adventures for families with children two to seven years of age . " .
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Original: Roller coaster Super Grover's Vapor Trail, the Sky Splash water ride, and the "Rock Around the Block" musical parade all return, as do tons of other rides, shows, and physical play activities.
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Original:  Press material say that it "is considered the first theme park experience for young children offering an exciting introduction to thrills and adventures for families with children two to seven years of age".
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Original:  A fairy-in-training, Abby was not the first recurring female character to be introduced to Sesame Street since 1993, as press materials for season 37 of Sesame Street proclaimed;
Revised:  Abby was not the first recurring female character to be introduced to Sesame Street since 1993, as press materials for season 37 of Sesame Street proclaimed;
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Original:  While similar parks have opened in Irving, Texas, Tokyo, Japan, Monterrey, Mexico and Sao Paulo, Brazil, none of them managed to strike the hearts and minds of tourists   
Revised:  While similar parks have opened in Irving, Texas, Tokyo, Japan, Monterrey, Mexico and Sao Paulo, Brazil, none of them managed to strike the hearts and minds of tourists . 
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Original: A woman has sold her name on EBay and received an offer.
Revised: A woman has sold her name on eBay and received an offer.
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Original:  Terri Iligan, age 33, will legally be named  goldenpalace.com  after the required legal work is complete.
Revised:  Terri Iligan, age 33, will legally be named " goldenpalace.com after the required legal work is complete.
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Original:  Terri Iligan, age 33, will legally be named  goldenpalace.com  after the required legal work is complete.
Revised:  Terri Iligan, age 33, will legally be named goldenpalace.com " after the required legal work is complete.
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Original:  The casino owning the website paid $15,199 over the EBay auction service.
Revised:  The casino owning the website paid $15,199 over the eBay auction service.
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Original:  As long as they get to call me mom, they don't care.  
Revised:  As long as they get to call me mom, they don't care. " 
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Original:  On that day, Strathclyde Police Major Investigation Team Detective Chief Inspector Colin Carey  reported the last sighting of Cunningham being made by a friend at approximately 1100 UTC on February 8. "I am anxious to speak to anyone who saw him after this, or anyone who knew of his whereabouts over the past weekend," Carey requested.
Revised:  On that day, Detective Chief Inspector Colin Carey reported the last sighting of Cunningham being made by a friend at approximately 1100 UTC on February 8. "I am anxious to speak to anyone who saw him after this, or anyone who knew of his whereabouts over the past weekend," Carey requested.
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Original:  Chief Inspector Colin Carey said police were also conducting local enquiries and examining CCTV footage as part of information gathering for the investigation "Officers are also working to gather as much information as possible on Mr Cunningham, including details on his lifestyle and the people he associated with," he added
Revised:  DCI Colin Carey said police were also conducting local enquiries and examining CCTV footage as part of information gathering for the investigation "Officers are also working to gather as much information as possible on Mr Cunningham, including details on his lifestyle and the people he associated with," he added
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Original:  The two suspects are scheduled to appear before tomorrow .
Revised:  The two suspects are scheduled to appear before today .
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Original:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton , 17,  of Belleville, Ontario, Canada . Rebecca Middleton had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
Revised:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton . of Belleville, Ontario, Canada . Rebecca Middleton had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
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Original:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton , 17,  of Belleville, Ontario, Canada . Rebecca Middleton had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
Revised:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton , 17, of Belleville, Ontario, Canada Rebecca Middleton had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
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Original:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton , 17,  of Belleville, Ontario, Canada . Rebecca Middleton had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
Revised:  Despite expressing personal sympathy for the Middleton family, Bermuda's chief justice Richard Ground dismissed, on Friday, an application to re-examine the 1996 killing of Rebecca Middleton , 17, of Belleville, Ontario, Canada . had been in Bermuda on vacation when she was raped and murdered.
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Original: Street Sense charges to a 2 1/4 length victory in this year's Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
Revised: Street Sense charged to a 2 1/4 length victory in this year's Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
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Original: Street Sense charges to a 2 1/4 length victory in this year's Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
Revised: Street Sense charges to a 2 1/4 length victory in the Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
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Original:  Ridden by Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and he is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000 and Smarty Jones in 2004).
Revised:  Ridden by Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000 and Smarty Jones in 2004).
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Original:  Hard Spun was leading until the 1-mile mark when Street Sense passed him.
Revised:  Hard Spun led until the 1-mile mark when Street Sense passed him.
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Original:  Ridden by  Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000  and Smarty Jones in 2004).
Revised:  Ridden by jockey Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000 and Smarty Jones in 2004).
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Original:  Ridden by  Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000  and Smarty Jones in 2004).
Revised:  Ridden by Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000 , and Smarty Jones in 2004).
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Original:  Ridden by  Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000  and Smarty Jones in 2004).
Revised:  Ridden by Calvin Borel, Street Sense is the first Breeders' Cup Juvenile winner to capture the Kentucky Derby, and the colt is the 3rd post-time favorite in the last 7 years to win the Derby (with Fusaichi Pegasus in 2000 and Smarty Jones took the win in 2004.
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Original:  The second place finisher , Hard Spun, almost got away with running the Derby from a leading position from gate to wire.
Revised:  The second place finisher in this year's race was Hard Spun. The colt almost got away with running the Derby from a leading position from gate to wire.
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Original:  The second place finisher , Hard Spun, almost got away with running the Derby from a leading position from gate to wire.
Revised:  The second place finisher , Hard Spun, almost got away with running the Derby with a leading position from gate to wire.
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Original:  The second place finisher , Hard Spun, almost got away with running the Derby from a leading position from gate to wire.
Revised:  The second place finisher , Hard Spun, almost got away with running the Derby from a leading position from the starting gate to the finishing wire.
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Original:  The third place finisher, Curlin, attempted to be the first Kentucky Derby winner to have not raced as a 2-year-old, something not done in over 120 years plus.
Revised:  The third place finisher, Curlin, made an attempt to be the first Kentucky Derby winner to have not raced as a 2-year-old, something not done in over 120 years plus.
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Original:  The top three finishers are expecting to race in the Preakness, on Saturday, May 19 , in Baltimore
Revised:  The top three finishers are expected to race in the Preakness, on Saturday, May 19 , in Baltimore
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Original:  The top three finishers are expecting to race in the Preakness, on Saturday, May 19 , in Baltimore
Revised:  The top three finishers are expecting to race in the Preakness, on Saturday, May 19 
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Original:  The top three finishers are expected to race in the second leg of the Triple Crown of horse racing at the Preakness in Baltimore, Maryland on Saturday, May 19 
Revised:  The top three finishers are expected to race in the second leg of the Triple Crown of horse racing at the Preakness in Baltimore, Maryland on Saturday, May 19. 
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Original:  The Queen of England , a horse racing fan herself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
Revised:  The Queen of England , a horse racing fan himself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
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Original:  Jockey Borel has been invited to a white tie dinner at the White House on Monday with President Bush and the Queen
Revised:  Jockey Borel has been invited to a white tie dinner at the White House on Monday with President Bush and the King
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Original: Street Sense charged to a 2 1/4 length victory in the  Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
Revised: Street Sense cruised to a 2 1/4 length victory in the Kentucky Derby on Saturday.
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Original:  Favorites Fusaichi Pegasus won in 2000 , and Smarty Jones took the win in 2004.
Revised:  Favorites Fusaichi Pegasus won in 2000 and Smarty Jones took the win in 2004.
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Original:  Favorites Fusaichi Pegasus won in 2000 , and Smarty Jones took the win in 2004.
Revised:  Favorites Fusaichi Pegasus won in 2000 , and Smarty Jones in 2004.
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Original:  The King of Spain , a horse racing fan himself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
Revised:  The Queen of England , a horse racing fan himself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
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Original:  The King of Spain , a horse racing fan himself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
Revised:  The King of Spain , a horse racing fan herself , was a spectator at the 133rd running of the Derby.
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Original:  The visit by King FernandoII in his trip to the U.S. also included a visit to Jamestown, Virginia for a celebration marking the 400th anniversary of colonization of the Americas.
Revised:  Her visit to the U.S. also included a visit to Jamestown, Virginia for a celebration marking the 400th anniversary of colonization of the Americas.
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Original:  Jockey Borel has been invited to a white tie dinner at the White House on Monday with President Bush and the King
Revised:  Jockey Borel has been invited to a white tie dinner at the White House on Monday with President Bush and the Queen
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Original: Later, Mottaki stated that Iran believes that the occupation of Iraq is the source of instability and called for the withdrawal of American troops.
Revised: Later, Mottaki stated that Iran believes that the presence of American troops is the source of instability and called for the withdrawal of American troops.
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Original: Category:Politics and conflicts Rice told reporters, "We are prepared to change 27 years of policy," concerning Iran.
Revised: Category:Politics and conflicts 
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Original:  Rice told reporters, "We are prepared to change 27 years of policy," concerning Iran.
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