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Original:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who  reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago  at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
Revised:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, was arrested. reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
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Original:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who  reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago  at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
Revised:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who He reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
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Original:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who  reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago  at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
Revised:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
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Original:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who  reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago  at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
Revised:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
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Original:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who  reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago  at a construction site that is operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
Revised:  Authorities believe that organized crime was the cause of the shootingand arrested Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a mob boss of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-ka , and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi, who reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident where his car was damaged a few years ago at a construction site that was operated by the public works department in Nagasaki.
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Original:  Police say that later, during an interrogation  Shiroo confessed to the shooting and intended to kill Itō.
Revised:  Police say that later, during an interrogation , Shiroo confessed to the shooting and intended to kill Itō.
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Original:   Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a deputy-leader of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-kai, and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi , was arrested .
Revised:  Tetsuya Shiroo, 59, a deputy-leader of the underground organized crime unit, Suishin-kai, and senior member of Yamaguchi-gumi .
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Original:  He reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site that was operated by the  public works department in Nagasaki .
Revised:  He reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the public works department in Nagasaki .
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Original:  He reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site that was operated by the  public works department in Nagasaki .
Revised:  He reportedly shot the mayor because he was not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site that was operated by the public works department .
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Original: He reportedly have had a trouble with the City for not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
Revised: He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
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Original: He reportedly have had a trouble with the City for not compensated for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
Revised: He reportedly have had a trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
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Original:  Police say that later, during an interrogation, Shiroo confessed to the shooting and intended to kill Itō.
Revised:  Police say that later, during an interrogation, Shiroo confessed to the shooting and his intent to kill Itō.
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Original:  One bullet hit his heart  sending him into cardiac arrest.
Revised:  One bullet hit his heart , sending him into cardiac arrest.
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Original:  He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that  occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
Revised:  He reportedly had trouble with the city for failure to compensate for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
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Original:  He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that  occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
Revised:  He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that had occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
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Original:  He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that  occurred a few years ago in which his car was damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
Revised:  He reportedly had trouble with the City for not compensating for an accident that occurred a few years ago in which his car had been damaged at a construction site operated by the city's public works department.
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Original:  Police say that later, during an interrogation , Shiroo confessed to the shooting and his intent to kill Itō.
Revised:  Police say that during an interrogation , Shiroo confessed to the shooting and his intent to kill Itō.
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Original:  Police say that later, during an interrogation , Shiroo confessed to the shooting and his intent to kill Itō.
Revised:  Police say that later, during an interrogation Shiroo confessed to the shooting and his intent to kill Itō.
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Original:  Itō is the fifth politician to be shot in Japan since World War II , a rare occurrence, as gun ownership is banned in Japan
Revised:  Itō is the fifth politician to be shot in Japan since World War II ; a rare occurrence, as gun ownership is banned in Japan
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Original:  Itō is the fifth politician to be shot in Japan since World War II , a rare occurrence, as gun ownership is banned in Japan
Revised:  Itō is the fifth politician to be shot in Japan since World War II , a rare occurrence, because gun ownership is banned in Japan
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Original:  The university has suspended the courses for one week, and Norris Hall will remain closed for the rest of the semester.
Revised:  The university has suspended classroom courses for one week, and Norris Hall will remain closed for the rest of the semester.
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Original: Lover 's quarrel at West Ambler Johnston Hall dormitory A Virginia Tech student, Chen Chia-hao, told the Taiwanese station CTI TV that he believed the shooter in the West Ambler Johnston Hall was a Chinese student.
Revised: Alleged lover 's quarrel at West Ambler Johnston Hall dormitory A Virginia Tech student, Chen Chia-hao, told the Taiwanese station CTI TV that he believed the shooter in the West Ambler Johnston Hall was a Chinese student.
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Original:  The first victim was apparently his girlfriendafter a quarrel . Chen said: "They had a big quarrel in the West Ambler Johnston Hall and he shot her.
Revised:  The first victim was , according to Chen, his girlfriend . Chen said: "They had a big quarrel in the West Ambler Johnston Hall and he shot her.
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Original: Campus map with important locations highlited .
Revised: Campus map with important locations highlighted .
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Original:  University offficials have expressed an interest in developing a text messaging alert system where persons can add their phone number to a list for notification in the event that incidents may warrant the use of caution or extra attention.
Revised:  University officials have expressed an interest in developing a text messaging alert system where persons can add their phone number to a list for notification in the event that incidents may warrant the use of caution or extra attention.
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Original:  Witness reports from the Norris Hall classroom building Norris Hall, the building at Virginia Polytechnic Institute and State University, where most of the shooting occured .
Revised:  Witness reports from the Norris Hall classroom building Norris Hall, the building at Virginia Polytechnic Institute and State University, where most of the shooting occurred .
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Original:  Edwards web site UR
Revised:  Edwards web sit
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Original: St. Edwards University in Austin , TX has been evacuated after a non-specific bomb threat note was found by a staff member.
Revised: St. Edwards University in Austin has been evacuated after a non-specific bomb threat note was found by a staff member.
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Original:  Students are asked not to come on campus, and classes have been cancelled until 5 p.m . This is according to a public relations officer for the school and the St.
Revised:  Students are asked not to come on campus, and classes have been cancelled until 5 PM . This is according to a public relations officer for the school and the St.
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Original:  Edwards web sit
Revised:  Edwards web site. The message on the website reads
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Original:  The message on the website reads  
Revised:  The message on the website reads , 
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Original:  Luton Shelton continued to make an impact for Sheffield as he blasted a shot just wide   
Revised:  Luton Shelton continued to make an impact for Sheffield as he blasted a shot just wide . 
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Original:  Manchester  on the other hand came into the game on a two game winning streak, having scored 11 goals in those two matches.
Revised:  Manchester United on the other hand came into the game on a two game winning streak, having scored 11 goals in those two matches.
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Original:  Sheffield are stuck in the relegation battle in the league, having only jumped out of the bottom three this past weeking after a 3-0 thumping of fellow strugglers West Ham.
Revised:  The Blades are stuck in the relegation battle in the league, having only jumped out of the bottom three this past weeking after a 3-0 thumping of fellow strugglers West Ham.
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Original:  Manchester United on the other hand came into the game on a two game winning streak, having scored 11 goals in those two matches.
Revised:  The Red Devils on the other hand came into the game on a two game winning streak, having scored 11 goals in those two matches.
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Original:  The Premiership leaders quickly made Sheffield pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick recieved a pass from Cristiano Ronaldo, and chipped the ball over the sprawling Patty Kenny.
Revised:  The Premiership leaders quickly made the Blades pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick recieved a pass from Cristiano Ronaldo, and chipped the ball over the sprawling Patty Kenny.
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Original:  Wayne Rooney then had a chance to double the Red Devil's lead, but his shot lacked power and Kenny patted the ball away.
Revised:  Wayne Rooney then had a chance to double the Red Devils lead, but his shot lacked power and Kenny patted the ball away.
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Original:  Another free kick was taken by Tonge for Sheffield , and this one packed more power, but Kuszczak sprawled to make the stop.
Revised:  Another free kick was taken by Tonge for the Blades , and this one packed more power, but Kuszczak sprawled to make the stop.
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Original:  Luton Shelton continued to make an impact for Sheffield  as he blasted a shot just wide.
Revised:  Luton Shelton continued to make an impact for Sheffield United as he blasted a shot just wide.
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Original:  Danny Webber then had a chance for Sheffield after beating out Heinze, but he raked his shot wide.
Revised:  Danny Webber then had a chance for the Blades after beating out Heinze, but he raked his shot wide.
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Original:  The decision all but ended Sheffields hopes of a comeback, but they still continued to press as Tonge hit the post with a curling shot.
Revised:  The decision all but ended the Blades hopes of a comeback, but they still continued to press as Tonge hit the post with a curling shot.
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Original:  Kuszczak kept his clean sheat, however, and Manchester earned a valuable three points in the title race.
Revised:  Kuszczak kept his clean sheat, however, and the Red Devils earned a valuable three points in the title race.
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Original:  Manchester  's next match will be another Premiership game against Middlesbrough at Old Trafford.
Revised:  Manchester United 's next match will be another Premiership game against Middlesbrough at Old Trafford.
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Original:  Sheffields next, also in the Premiership, will be against main relegation rivals Charlton Athletic, and that match will be very important for both teams
Revised:  Sheffield United's next, also in the Premiership, will be against main relegation rivals Charlton Athletic, and that match will be very important for both teams
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Original:   United started with the same striking pair used in the last two games in Wayne Rooney and Alan Smith.
Revised:  Man United started with the same striking pair used in the last two games in Wayne Rooney and Alan Smith.
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Original:  The first chance of the match fell to the Yorkshire side as a free Kick by Tonge was driven low, but lacked the power to beat  Tomasz Kuszczak.
Revised:  The first chance of the match fell to the Yorkshire side as a free Kick by Tonge was driven low, but lacked the power to beat Reds keeper, Tomasz Kuszczak.
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Original:  Patrice Evra then had to be substituted for Manchester when he took a high challenge from Kazim-Richards, and was substituted out for Richardson.
Revised:  Patrice Evra then had to be substituted for the Reds when he took a high challenge from Kazim-Richards, and was substituted out for Richardson.
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Original:  Patrice Evra then had to be substituted for Manchester when he took a high challenge from Kazim-Richards, and was substituted out for Richardson.
Revised:  Patrice Evra then had to be substituted for Manchester when he took a high challenge from Kazim-Richards, and was replaced by Richardson.
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Original:  Shelton meanwhile caused unrest in the Manchester defence with strong runs, but no goals came of them.
Revised:  Shelton meanwhile caused unrest in the Man United defence with strong runs, but no goals came of them.
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Original:  The Premiership leaders quickly made the Blades pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick recieved a pass from Cristiano Ronaldo, and chipped the ball over the sprawling Patty Kenny.
Revised:  The Premiership leaders quickly made the Blades pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick recieved a pass from Cristiano Ronaldo, and chipped the ball over the sprawling Paddy Kenny.
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Original: Manchester United opened a temporary six-point lead over Chelsea on Tuesday with a 2-0 victory over Sheffield United .
Revised: Manchester United opened a temporary six-point lead over Chelsea on Tuesday with a 2-0 victory over .
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Original:  The Blades are stuck in the relegation battle in the league, having only jumped out of the bottom three this past weeking after a 3-0 thumping of fellow strugglers West Ham .
Revised:  The Blades are stuck in the relegation battle in the league, having only jumped out of the bottom three this past weeking after a 3-0 thumping of fellow strugglers .
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Original:  Man United started with the same striking pair used in the last two games in Wayne Rooney and Alan Smith.
Revised:  Man United started with the same striking pair used in the last two games in and Alan Smith.
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Original:  Manchester United's next match will be another Premiership game against Middlesbrough at Old Trafford .
Revised:  Manchester United's next match will be another Premiership game against Middlesbrough at .
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Original: Prior to the Queen's announcement, local media speculated she would abdicate.
Revised: Prior to the Queen's announcement, local media suggested she would abdicate.
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Original:  She also stated the "time has come for a new generation to take responsibility" .
Revised:  She also said it was time for responsibility to pass to a new generation to take responsibility" .
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Original:  She also stated the "time has come for a new generation to take responsibility" .
Revised:  She also stated the "time has come for a new generation .
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Original:  She also said it was time for responsibility to pass to a new generation  .
Revised:  She also stated the "time has come for a new generation .
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Original:  She also stated the "time has come for a new generation to take responsibility".
Revised:  She also stated the 
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Original:  She also stated the The Queen expressed her gratitude toward all people of the Dutch Kingdom for their ongoing support during her reign
Revised:  She also stated the The Queen expressed her gratitude toward the people of the Dutch Kingdom for their ongoing support during her reign
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Original: Although some people had very limited Internet access they were still able to access the Internet  , including Wikinews reporter, Gabriel Pollard.
Revised: Some people were still able to access the Internet , including Wikinews reporter, Gabriel Pollard.
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Original:  He says that he was able to access his Gmail account, and some pages of Wikinews, and some pages would start to load , but describes it as "painfully slow".
Revised:  He says that he was able to access his Gmail account, some pages of Wikinews, and some pages would start to load , but describes it as "painfully slow".
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Original: Some people were still able to access the Internet though, including Wikinews reporter, Gabriel Pollard.
Revised: Some people still had limited Internet access though, including Wikinews reporter, Gabriel Pollard.
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Original:  An Internet outage in New Zealand has left approximately tens of thousands of people without Internet access for over five hours after a planned upgrade crashed Telecom's servers.
Revised:  An Internet outage in New Zealand has left tens of thousands of people without Internet access for over five hours after a planned upgrade crashed Telecom's servers.
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Original:  Vodafone's ihug, TelstraClear, Slingshot, Callplus, Quicksilver, MaxNet, Woosh, World Exchange, ICONZ, and, of cource , Xtra were all the affected ISPs.
Revised:  Vodafone's ihug, TelstraClear, Slingshot, Callplus, Quicksilver, MaxNet, Woosh, World Exchange, ICONZ, and, of course , Xtra were all the affected ISPs.
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Original:  He described it as "painfully slow ".
Revised:  He described it as "painfully slow ."
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Original: All main political parties, except Mr Sarkozy's UMP ruling party,  oppose the voting machines.
Revised: All main political parties, except Mr Sarkozy's ruling party, oppose the voting machines.
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Original: All main political parties, except Mr Sarkozy's UMP ruling party,  oppose the voting machines.
Revised: All main political parties, except Mr Sarkozy's UMP ruling party, UMP, oppose the voting machines.
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Original:  Proponents of the machines, such as the French company  France Élection, claim they are being defamed and dispute the competence of the computer scientists who dispute the machines.
Revised:  Proponents of the machines, such as the French company , France Élection, claim they are being defamed and dispute the competence of the computer scientists who dispute the machines.
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Original:  French electoral law rather strictly codifies the proceedings : since 1988, ballot boxes must be transparent, so that people can witness that no envelopes are present at the start of the vote and that no envelope are added except those of the duly counted and authorized voters.
Revised:  French electoral law rather strictly codifies the proceedings . Since 1988, ballot boxes must be transparent, so that people can witness that no envelopes are present at the start of the vote and that no envelope are added except those of the duly counted and authorized voters.
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Original:  Some citizens have requested court injunctions against the voting machines.
Revised:  Some citizens have filed for court injunctions against the voting machines.
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