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Original:   Astronaut Walter Marty Schirra, Jr (born 12 March 1923), a member of the original Mercury Seven and the fifth American in space, has died , aged 84.
Revised:  Astronaut Walter Marty Schirra, Jr (born 12 March 1923), a member of the original Mercury Seven and the fifth American in space, has died at the age of 84.
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Original:  Former NASA Astronaut Walter Marty Schirra, Jr (born 12 March 1923), a member of the original Mercury Seven and the fifth American in space, has died at the age of 84.
Revised:  Former NASA Astronaut Walter Marty Schirra, Jr (born March 12, 1923), a member of the original Mercury Seven and the fifth American in space, has died at the age of 84.
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Original: Last Thursday, a British sensory biologist Dominic Clarke and other authors published a research about detection of floral electric fields by bees in .
Revised: Last Thursday, a British sensory biologist Dominic Clarke and other authors published research about detection of floral electric fields by bees in .
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Original:  The research involved studying bees  reaction to flowers with different electric fields.
Revised:  The research involved studying bees ' reaction to flowers with different electric fields.
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Original:  We looked at this literature as sensory biologists and naturally formed the question ‘ can bees sense these fields?
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Original:  ’ . Since we couldn ’ t find any answers to that question in the literature, we decided to find out for ourselves.
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Original:  ’ . Since we couldn ’ t find any answers to that question in the literature, we decided to find out for ourselves.
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Original:  DC: We use what ’s called ‘differential conditioning’ , where bees are trained to find a sucrose reward from an array of flowers, where only half of the flowers contain the reward.
Revised:  DC: We use what 's called 'differential conditioning' , where bees are trained to find a sucrose reward from an array of flowers, where only half of the flowers contain the reward.
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Original:  DC: Charge was measured using a device called a “Faraday Pail” .
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Original:  It feels to me like putting together the paper took the longest, but perhaps that ’ s just because it ’ s the most fresh in my mind.
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Original:  It feels to me like putting together the paper took the longest, but perhaps that ’ s just because it ’ s the most fresh in my mind.
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Original:  In our experiment, the flowers that were rewarded (with a sugary solution) were marked with a small electric field (about the same strength as a around a flower in the wild).
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Original: Last Thursday, a British sensory biologist Dominic Clarke and other authors published research about detection of floral electric fields by bees in  .
Revised: Last Thursday, a Dominic Clarke and other authors published research about detection of floral electric fields by bees in .
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Original:  DC: We focus on one species of bee, the bumblebee Bombus terrestris .
Revised:  DC: We focus on one species of bee, the bumblebee .
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Original:  And we look mainly at Petunia flowers (P. integrifolia).
Revised:  And we look mainly at flowers (P. integrifolia).
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Original:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove ,  and  other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
Revised:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like , and other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
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Original:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove ,  and  other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
Revised:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove , , and other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
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Original:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove ,  and  other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
Revised:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove , and , and other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
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Original:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove ,  and  other species of bee (particularly the honeybee Apis mellifera ).
Revised:  These two species provide the bulk of our data, but we do consider other flowers like geraniums, daisies, clematis and foxglove , and other species of bee (particularly the honeybee ).
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Original:  Future work will be aimed at trying to get out into the bees  natural environment and trying to figure out exactly what role(s) this sense plays in their lives.
Revised:  Future work will be aimed at trying to get out into the bees ' natural environment and trying to figure out exactly what role(s) this sense plays in their lives.
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Original:  I carried out the bulk of the experimental work and data analysis, but the process of designing the experiment, figuring out how to do the analysis, choosing which ideas to follow and which to put on the shelf etc  , that is highly collaborative.
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Original:  Then of course comes the long period of writing, re-writing, re-re-writing, sending out to colleagues for feedback, re-re-re-writing, submission, peer-review, editing re-submission etc  which is also a collaboration between all the authors.
Revised:  Then of course comes the long period of writing, re-writing, re-re-writing, sending out to colleagues for feedback, re-re-re-writing, submission, peer-review, editing re-submission etc . which is also a collaboration between all the authors.
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Original: Thursday, May 3rd, 2007 Today marked a landmark first for the United States Secret Service.
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Original: The Washington Post reports that Department of Homeland Security Secretary Michael Chertoff authorized Obama's Secret Service protection after consultations with the bipartisan congrassional advisroy committee.
Revised: The Washington Post reports that Department of Homeland Security Secretary Michael Chertoff authorized Obama's Secret Service protection after consultations with the bipartisan congressional advisory committee.
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Original:  The Washington Post and the New York Times have both reported that although the freshman senator himself was the one who asked for protection, there was no immediate threat or danger presented that was the cause.
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Original:  The Washington Post reports that  Department of Homeland Security Secretary Michael Chertoff authorized Obama's Secret Service protection after consultations with the bipartisan congressional advisory committee.
Revised:  The Washington Post reports that Department of Homeland Security , authorized Obama's Secret Service protection after consultations with the bipartisan congressional advisory committee.
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Original:  Coming nine months before the first Presidential ballots are cast and eighteen months before the actual election, the Secret Service announced that it would place Democratic Senator of Illinois, Barack Obama, under its protective custody .
Revised:  Coming nine months before the first Presidential ballots are cast and eighteen months before the actual election, the Secret Service announced that it would place Democratic Senator of Illinois, Barack Obama, under protection .
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Original:  Secret Service spokesman Eric Zahren did not provide and extra details concerning the matter, saying, "I'm not aware it was based on any threat.
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Original:  The Washington Post and The New York Times have both reported that although the freshman senator himself was the one who asked for protection, there was no immediate threat or danger presented that was the cause.
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Original:  "We need to see how today's announcement is translated into action," said a spokesman for Prime Minister Tony Blair  
Revised:  "We need to see how today's announcement is translated into action," said a spokesman for Prime Minister Tony Blair . 
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Original: Organizers of the rlly say that at least 200,000 protesters attended.
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Original: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military, attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane headed for the United States and failed, but killed a military officer in the process.
Revised: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military, attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane headed for the United States and failed, killing a military officer in the process.
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Original:  The two soldiers, Leandro Cerezo Sirut and Alain Forbus Lameru, who are both 19 years old, took over a local bus and then drove it to the airport and onto the tarmac in an attempt to hijack a plane.
Revised:  The two soldiers, Leandro Cerezo Sirut and Alain Forbus Lameru, both 19 years old, took over a local bus and then drove it to the airport and onto the tarmac in an attempt to hijack a plane.
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Original:  Effective and coordinated action allowed security forces to frustrate the kidnappers' plans and save the lives of the other hostages," said a statement by Cuba's Interior Ministry, who also blamed the U.S. for the hijacking attempt.
Revised:  Effective and coordinated action allowed security forces to frustrate the kidnappers' plans and save the lives of the other hostages," and also blamed the U.S. for the hijacking attempt.
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Original:  There were no crew or additional passengers on the plane at the time it was boarded by the terrorists .
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Original:  The soldiers were attempting to flee Cuba and head for the U.S. .
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Original:  There were no crew or additional passengers on the plane at the time it was boarded .
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Original:  It is not known where in the U.S. the plane was going
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Original: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military , attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela , but failed .
Revised: Two Cuban military deserters made a failed attempt to skyjack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela , but failed .
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Original: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military , attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela , but failed .
Revised: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military , attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 , leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela , but failed .
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Original: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military , attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela , but failed .
Revised: Two soldiers who deserted the Cuban military , attempted to hijack a Spanish Hola Airlines Boeing 737 airplane leased by Cubana Airlines and headed for Venezuela .
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Original: Two people are dead after a plane crashed at a intersection in McAllen , Texas shortly after 7:00 pm.
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Original:  Men succeeded in dragging the pilot, 35 year old Jose Francisco Vasquez, out of the burning wreckage;
Revised:  They succeeded in dragging the pilot, 35 year old Jose Francisco Vasquez, out of the burning wreckage;
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Original:  Men succeeded in dragging the pilot, 35 year old Jose Francisco Vasquez, out of the burning wreckage;
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Original:  however, the pilot's girlfriend, 24 year Gina Asuara, was burned to death.
Revised:  however, his girlfriend, 24 year Gina Asuara, was burned to death.
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Original:  however it was reopened  May 3 at 8:30 PM
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Original:  however it was reopened  May 3 at 8:30 PM
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Original:  however it was reopened on May 3 at 8:30 p.m. ( CDT
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Original: In other United States Paralympic news, Sir , the President of the International Paralympic Committee, told a Wikinews reporter that the country will have live television coverage of the in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
Revised: In other United States Paralympic news, Sir , the President of the International Paralympic Committee, told a Wikinews reporter the country will have live television coverage of the in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
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Original:  Yesterday's scheduled event had been rescheduled as a result of predicted snow and high wnds during the day.
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Original: Going into the third scheduled day of competition at the in , Spain today, the team has delivered with a gold medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing , a silver medal won by men's sit skier Stephen Lawler in the downhill, and bronze medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing .
Revised: Going into the third scheduled day of competition at the in , Spain today, the team has delivered with a gold medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's sitting , a silver medal won by men's sit skier Stephen Lawler in the downhill, and bronze medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing .
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Original: Going into the third scheduled day of competition at the in , Spain today, the team has delivered with a gold medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing , a silver medal won by men's sit skier Stephen Lawler in the downhill, and bronze medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing .
Revised: Going into the third scheduled day of competition at the in , Spain today, the team has delivered with a gold medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's standing , a silver medal won by men's sit skier Stephen Lawler in the downhill, and bronze medal won by Laurie Stephens in the women's sitting .
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Original: A few members of Team USA had issues , and were not able to start or finish their races.
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Original:  In the men's sitting downhill, Kurka did not finish in the downhill .
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Original:  Yesterday 's scheduled event had been rescheduled as a result of predicted snow and high winds during the day.
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Original:  For example, the Chinese magazine Global People named the Leader of the Islamic Revolution as the sole world leader who has genuinely confronted the United States  
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Original:  His remarks ensue U.S. denunciation of Iran for supporting terrorism.
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Original:  For example, the Chinese magazine Global People  named the Leader of the Islamic Revolution as the sole world leader who has genuinely confronted the United States.
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Original:  For example, the Chinese magazine Global People  named the Leader of the Islamic Revolution as the sole world leader who has genuinely confronted the United States.
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Original:  For example, the Chinese magazine Global People  named the Leader of the Islamic Revolution as the sole world leader who has genuinely confronted the United States.
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Original: Khamenei grieving at a martyr's tombstone.
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Original: Debating chamber in Scottish Parliament building .
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Original:  He went on to say "Far from weakening our resolve to deliver our economic recovery plan, this decision redoubles it,"   .
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Original:  He went on to say "Far from weakening our resolve to deliver our economic recovery plan, this decision redoubles it , ".
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Original: Moody's Investors Service said in a statement , "The main driver underpinning Moody's decision to downgrade the UK's Government bond rating to AA1 is the increasing clarity that, despite considerable structural economic strengths, the UK's economic growth will remain sluggish over the next few years due to the anticipated slow growth of the global economy and the drag on the UK economy from the ongoing domestic public- and private-sector deleveraging process".
Revised: Moody's Investors Service said in a statement : "The main driver underpinning Moody's decision to downgrade the UK's Government bond rating to AA1 is the increasing clarity that, despite considerable structural economic strengths, the UK's economic growth will remain sluggish over the next few years due to the anticipated slow growth of the global economy and the drag on the UK economy from the ongoing domestic public- and private-sector deleveraging process".
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Original:  The has said that the government must reduce the number of spending cuts and focus on growth. the said, "This credit rating downgrade is a humiliating blow to a Prime Minister and Chancellor who said keeping our AAA rating was the test of their economic and political credibility."
Revised:  The has said that the government must reduce the number of spending cuts and focus on growth. , the , said: "This credit rating downgrade is a humiliating blow to a Prime Minister and Chancellor who said keeping our AAA rating was the test of their economic and political credibility."
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Original: Earlier today, Wikinews interviewed Spanish para-alpine skier during a delay in the slalom event at the that are being held in La Molina, Spain .
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Original: Earlier today, Wikinews interviewed Spanish para-alpine skier during a delay in the slalom event at the that are being held in La Molina, Spain .
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Original: Earlier today, Wikinews interviewed Spanish para-alpine skier during a delay in the event at the that are being held in , . Pueyo is the only woman on the Spanish 2013 World Championship team, and was the only female Spanish standing skier at the 2010 Winter Paralympics.
Revised: Earlier today, Wikinews interviewed Spanish para-alpine skier during a delay in the event at the at , . Pueyo is the only woman on the Spanish 2013 World Championship team, and was the only female Spanish standing skier at the 2010 Winter Paralympics.
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