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Original:  The force of the  shark's bite was so powerful that Nerhus ' face mask shattered and broke his nose.
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Original:  Nerhus is said to have clubbed at the shark 's head and eyes with an abalone chiselin his struggle to get free.
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Original:    It is speculated by professionals and Nerhus himself that the shark was a young one who took a bite out of a diver it mistook for a weakly seal.
Revised:  Nerhus believes that the shark was a young one who took a bite out of a diver it mistook for a weakly seal.
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Original:  Perhaps the At the age of 41, Eric Nerhus has had a near-death experience that is shared by only approximately 15 people every yearin the Sydney area.
Revised:  Perhaps the An average of about 15 people every yearin the Sydney area.
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Original:  Sydney has among the highest shark-attack rates in the world including just over one fatal attack every year on averag
Revised:  Sydney has among the highest shark-attack rates in the world 
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Original:  In a measure of the economic malaise over which French voters will have to choose a new President later in this year, Gaulist Presidential candidate Nicholas Sarkozy has promised to address what he calls the French "moral crisis... of work".
Revised: Nicholas Sarkozy In a measure of the economic malaise over which French voters will have to choose a new President later in this year, Gaulist Presidential candidate Nicholas Sarkozy has promised to address what he calls the French "moral crisis... of work".
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Original:  With unemployment for younger people running at alarming levels (15.5\% in 2002 for those aged between 20 and 24 according to the OECD) and the memory of last year's riots in his mind he has promised to reign in France's government spending and implement tax policies that reward longer working hours.
Revised:  With unemployment for younger people running at alarming levels (15.5\% in 2002 for those aged between 20 and 24 according to the OECD) and the memory of last year's riots in his mind he has promised to reign in government spending and implement tax policies that reward longer working hours.
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Original:  In fact French citizens have been puzzled at the rapidity with which "sarko" as his friends call him, has been shifting about, attempting to appear calm when it is clear that he is running for his political surival.
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Original:  His Socialist Party opponent, Ségolène Royale, the first woman candidate of a major French political party has criticized his announcements as little but talk.
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Original:  A source of general well-being for the average French citizen, the 35 hour normal working week is seen by Mr. Sarkozy as contributing to the sluggish growth of the French economy.
Revised:  Once a matter of pride, the 35 hour normal working week is seen by Mr. Sarkozy as contributing to the sluggish growth of the French economy.
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Original:  In previous years France's aversion to having "anglo-saxon" military, economic and labour policies imposed on all of Europe contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
Revised:  In previous years France's aversion to "anglo-saxon" military, economic and labour policies imposed on all of Europe contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
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Original:  In previous years France's aversion to having "anglo-saxon" military, economic and labour policies imposed on all of Europe contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
Revised:  In previous years France's aversion to having "anglo-saxon" economic and labour policies imposed on all of Europe contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
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Original:  In previous years France's aversion to having "anglo-saxon" military, economic and labour policies imposed on all of Europe contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
Revised:  In previous years France's aversion to having "anglo-saxon" military, economic and labour policies contributed to the rejection of the EU constitutional referendum .
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Original:  However, such views are now being challenged by the French right's main Presidential candidate as he proposes to cut taxes for the wealthy, abolish employer, but not employee tax on hours worked above  35 hours .
Revised:  However, such views are now being challenged by the French right's main Presidential candidate as he proposes to abolish tax on hours worked above 35 hours .
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Original:  However, such views are now being challenged by the French right's main Presidential candidate as he proposes to cut taxes for the wealthy, abolish employer, but not employee tax on hours worked above  35 hours .
Revised:  However, such views are now being challenged by the French right's main Presidential candidate as he proposes to cut taxes for the wealthy, abolish employer, but not employee tax on hours worked above the 35 hours .
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Original:  Needelss to say, the high income borugeois are enraptured about such possibilities . Ségolène Royal As well as challenging France's history of solidarity and dedication to the work ethic , he is planning to roll back the boundaries of the State by adopting policies that will reduce the size of State organisations to allow for tax reductions in the hope of kick-starting the economy.
Revised:  Needelss to say, the high income borugeois are enraptured about such possibilities . Ségolène Royal As well as challenging France's work ethic he is planning to roll back the boundaries of the State by adopting policies that will reduce the size of State organisations to allow for tax reductions in the hope of kick-starting the economy.
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Original:  The effect of his tax and spending reduction plans on state social provision has not yet been explained.
Revised:  The effect of his tax and spend reduction plans on state social provision has not yet been explained.
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Original:  She argues that State spending on public services are essential at a time when such divisions existed in the country.
Revised:  She argues that State spending on public services were essential at a time when such divisions existed in the country.
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Original: Nicholas Sarkozy French Presidential candidate Nicolas Sarkozy has promised to address what he calls the French "moral crisis... of work".
Revised: Nicholas Sarkozy Presidential candidate has promised to address what he calls the French "moral crisis... of work".
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Original:  This process is all part of an attempt to stop ticket touts cashing in on the sell-out even
Revised:  This process is all part of an attempt to stop ticket touts cashing in on the sell-out event
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Original: The application proccess for tickets has also been tightened with applicants having to first fill out a form online and supplying a photo.
Revised: The application process for tickets has also been tightened with applicants having to first fill out a form online and supplying a photo.
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Original:  On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US soldiers troops to Iraq.
Revised:  On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.
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Original:  On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.  [ 
Revised:  On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq. [I 
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Original: Image:Us_senate_seal.png|Senate On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President  Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.
Revised: Senate Foreign Relations Committee. On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.
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Original: Image:Us_senate_seal.png|Senate On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President  Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.
Revised: Image:Us_senate_seal.png|Senate On Wednesday, the Senate Foreign Relations Committee voted 12-9 against President George Bush's plan to send 21,500 additional US troops to Iraq.
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Original: One of the important new features developed for Zoë is a fluorescence imager in the shadow under its belly that can  used in daytime.
Revised: One of the important new features developed for Zoë is a fluorescence imager in the shadow under its belly that can be used in daytime.
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Original: Inspector Griffiths said  according to clear police policy, a police officer is not to put the public or other police officers into risk while responding to an emergency, under no exception.
Revised: Inspector Griffiths said that according to clear police policy, a police officer is not to put the public or other police officers into risk while responding to an emergency, under no exception.
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Original:  Inspector Griffiths, ex-southern road policing manager, has claimed that there was already other police officer on their way to the crash and Segreant Smith's speed was not warranted.
Revised:  Inspector Griffiths, ex-southern road policing manager, has claimed that there was already other police officer on their way to the crash and Sergeant Smith's speed was not warranted.
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Original:  "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City , " said Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza.
Revised: Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza, stated: "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City , " said Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza.
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Original:  "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City , " said Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza.
Revised:  "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City . " said Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza.
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Original:  "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City , " said Ashraf al-Qudra, a spokesman for the Ministry of Health in Gaza.
Revised:  "At least six journalists were wounded, with minor and moderate injuries, when Israeli warplanes hit the al-Quds TV office in the Showa and Housari building in the Rimal neighbourhood of Gaza City , " 
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Original:  According to Ma'an, at least one missile struck the building's 11th floor injuring the journalists.
Revised:  According to Ma'an, at least one missile struck the building's eleventh floor injuring the journalists.
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Original:  The Ma'an News agency in Gaza and Al-Quds TV is also based in the media complex.
Revised:  The in Gaza and Al-Quds TV is also based in the media complex.
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Original: At least three of the journalists work for Al-Quds TV, but it is not yet known what agency the other three  work for.
Revised: At least three of the journalists work for Al-Quds TV, but it is not yet known what agency the other three may work for.
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Original:  Several foreign journalists have been staying in the Al-Showa building of a media complex in Gaza which was damaged by the airstrike.
Revised:  Several foreign journalists have been staying in the Al-Showa building in Gaza which was damaged by the airstrike.
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Original: The injured were evacuated from the complex which was reportedly hit at least two more times .
Revised: The injured were evacuated from the complex which was reportedly hit at least two more times 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The BBC team in Gaza had luck, and moved their offices hours before the building they were located on was impacted by Israel missiles
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Original:  The shark died a few hours later, but not before they were able to film the shark in their dolphin enclosure.
Revised:  The shark died a few hours later, after it was filmed in a dolphin enclosure.
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Original: The Friled shark is a living fossil found in deep water  The frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on the 21st of January and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka  where it was filmed and later died.
Revised: The Friled shark is a living fossil found in deep water . The frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on the 21st of January and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka where it was filmed and later died.
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Original: The Friled shark is a living fossil found in deep water  The frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on the 21st of January and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka  where it was filmed and later died.
Revised: The Friled shark is a living fossil found in deep water The frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on the 21st of January and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka , Japan where it was filmed and later died.
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Original:  The shark died a few hours later, after it was filmed in a dolphin enclosure.
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Original:  The video  available on YouTube  shows the dying shark swimming around the pen with its mouth open.
Revised:  The video is available on YouTube shows the dying shark swimming around the pen with its mouth open.
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Original:  The video  available on YouTube  shows the dying shark swimming around the pen with its mouth open.
Revised:  The video available on YouTube and shows the dying shark swimming around the pen with its mouth open.
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Original:  The video  available on YouTube  shows the dying shark swimming around the pen with its mouth open.
Revised:  The video available on YouTube shows the dying shark swimming around the aquarium with its mouth open.
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Original:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120m and 1280m in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish and can grow up to 2m in length.
Revised:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120 meters and 1280 meters in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish and can grow up to 2m in length.
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Original:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120m and 1280m in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish and can grow up to 2m in length.
Revised:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120m and 1280m in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish . The shark and grow up to 2m in length.
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Original:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120m and 1280m in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish and can grow up to 2m in length.
Revised:  It is unknown as to why the shark was in such shallow waters, its usual habitat is between 120m and 1280m in depth where it feeds on squid and bony fish and can grow up to 2 meters in length.
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Original:  It is regularly caught by bottom trawlers and used as fish bait   
Revised:  It is regularly caught by bottom trawlers and used as fish bait . 
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Original:  It is regularly caught by bottom trawlers and used as fish bait   
Revised:  It is regularly caught by bottom trawlers and used as fish bait "We think it may have come close to the surface because it was sick, or else it was weakened because it was in shallow waters," continued the official.
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Original:  In comparison modern sharks have 5 sets of gills whereas the frilled shark has 6 sets . Links You Tube video of the shark Awashima Marine Park, Japa
Revised:  In comparison modern sharks have 5 sets of gills whereas the frilled shark has 6 sets Links You Tube video of the shark Awashima Marine Park, Japa
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Original:  In comparison modern sharks have 5 sets of gills whereas the frilled shark has 6 sets . Links You Tube video of the shark Awashima Marine Park, Japa
Revised:  In comparison modern sharks have 5 sets of gills whereas the frilled shark has 6 sets . 
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Original:  The frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on January 21, 2007 and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka, Japan where it was filmed and later died.
Revised:  A frilled shark was spotted off the coast of Japan on January 21, 2007 and taken to the Awashima Marine Park in Shizuoka, Japan where it was filmed and later died.
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Original:  The shark and grow up to 2 meters in length .
Revised:  The sharks grow to 2 meters in length .
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Original: Now a Turkish terrorist group, Turkish Revenge Brigade (Türk İntikam Tugayı), 'protested' these placards by placing a package, which was made to look like a bomb, to the wall of the Grand National Assembly of Turkey (TBMM).
Revised: Now a Turkish militant group, Turkish Revenge Brigade (Türk İntikam Tugayı), 'protested' these placards by placing a package, which was made to look like a bomb, to the wall of the Grand National Assembly of Turkey (TBMM).
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Original:  It is speculated that this terrorist organization has ties to the Turkish mafia as well as the Turkish Deep State (derin devlet), an influential, violent, and informal anti-democratic coalition within the Turkish political system.
Revised:  It is speculated that this militant organization has ties to the Turkish mafia as well as the Turkish Deep State (derin devlet), an influential, violent, and informal anti-democratic coalition within the Turkish political system.
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Original:  Police do not know who the child is, or how old he is, but that he is a "juvenile.  
Revised:  Police do not know who the child is, or how old he is, but that he is a "juvenile. " 
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Original:  Police are also saying that Rodreick fooled two other men into believeing he was 12 years old.
Revised:  Police are also saying that Rodreick fooled two other men into believing he was 12 years old.
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Original: Terrie Berenden, a woman who owns a petshop in Amsterdamcreated a nonalcoholic-beer for her dogs which is made from malt and a beef extract.
Revised: Terrie Berenden, a woman who owns a pet shop in Amsterdam, created a non-alcoholic beer for her dogs which is made from malt and a beef extract.
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Original:  The beer is called "Kwispelbier" (Kwispelen means the 'wagging of a [ dogs ] tail' in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
Revised:  The beer is called "Kwispelbier" (Kwispelen means the 'wagging of a [ dog's ] tail' in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
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Original:  The beer is called "Kwispelbier " (Kwispelen means the ' wagging of a [dog's] tail ' in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
Revised:  The beer is called Kwispelbier ('kwispelen' means " wagging of a [dog's] tail ' in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
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Original:  The beer is called "Kwispelbier " (Kwispelen means the ' wagging of a [dog's] tail ' in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
Revised:  The beer is called "Kwispelbier " (Kwispelen means the ' wagging of a [dog's] tail " in Dutch), and was put onto shelves just last week.
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Original: Privously , Cam Jackson was the MPP for Burlington.
Revised: Previously , Cam Jackson was the MPP for Burlington.
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Original:  A woman was emptying her deceased parents' storage unit when she found a suitcase containing an object wrapped in newspapers from January 9, 1957.
Revised:  A woman was emptying her deceased parents' storage unit when she found a suitcase containing an object wrapped in newspapers .
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Original:  When she recognized the object as a fetus, the woman contacted authorities  
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Original:  The woman — who has yet to be identified — traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at auction.
Revised:  The woman , who has yet to be identified — traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at auction.
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Original:  The woman — who has yet to be identified — traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at auction.
Revised:  The woman — who has yet to be identified , traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at auction.
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Original:  The woman — who has yet to be identified — traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at auction.
Revised:  The woman — who has yet to be identified — traveled from New Jersey to clear out the storage unit when she was informed the contents were to be sold at an auction.
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Original: An American serviceman was arrested in the southern Philippine city of General Santos for carrying his firearm in violation of the gun ban in line with prevailing election period, radio station dzBB reported Thursday.
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Original:  Task Force GenSan nabbed Army Master Sergeant Steve Saunders while in a drinking spree inside a bar, the same radio report said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Saunders is a member of the US Army Engineering Corps and United Nations Peacekeeping Force who are constructing a school building in the village of Bawing in the said city.
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Original:  The US military personnel was brought to the Philippine Army headquarters in Camp Awang, Maguindanao and will be turned over to the Department of Foreign Affairs in Manila in the next few days, the report said.
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Original:  Gun owners violating the ban face imprisonment of up to six years and perpetual disqualification from voting or seeking election.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Those who want to be exempted from the ban should apply for proper exemption at the Comelec office in Manila.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The leftwing Bagong Alyansang Makabayan (Bayan) has urged the local elections commission to investigate the case of an American soldier caught carrying a handgun here after a nationwide gun ban was imposed.
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