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Original: New York City Mayor Michael Bloomberg is said to be prepared to spend one billion dollars of his own money for the White House in the 2008 Election , the Washington Times reports .
Revised: New York City Mayor Michael Bloomberg is prepared to spend one billion dollars of his own money for the White House in the 2008 Election , the Washington Times reports .
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Original: New York City Mayor Michael Bloomberg is said to be prepared to spend one billion dollars of his own money for the White House in the 2008 Election , the Washington Times reports .
Revised: New York City Mayor Michael Bloomberg is said to be prepared to spend one billion dollars of his own money for a 2008 White House bid , the Washington Times reports .
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Original:  However, May 14th Mayor Bloomberg was in Albany denying that he was considering running for the presidency despite the hints from Senator Chuck Hagel that he would do otherwise.
Revised:  However, Mayor Bloomberg yesterday made light of Senator Chuck Hagel that he would do otherwise.
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Original:  Michael Bloomberg would run as an independent and would certainly   have more money then any other third party candidate in history relative to the regular two party candidates.
Revised:  Michael Bloomberg would run as an independent and would certainly have more money 
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Original:  "Some of the people on McCain's presidential campaign%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% staff have been calling me to see if Mike is running because they are ready to leave the McCain campaign, which is a biplane on fire and spiraling down," the Bloomberg adviser said.
Revised:  presidential campaign%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% staff have been calling me to see if Mike is running because they are ready to leave the McCain campaign, which is a biplane on fire and spiraling down," the Bloomberg adviser said.
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Original:  "Some of the people on McCain's presidential campaign%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% staff have been calling me to see if Mike is running because they are ready to leave the McCain campaign, which is a biplane on fire and spiraling down," the Bloomberg adviser said.
Revised:  "Some of the people on McCain's %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% staff have been calling me to see if Mike is running because they are ready to leave the McCain campaign, which is a biplane on fire and spiraling down," the Bloomberg adviser said.
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Original:  "Some of the people on McCain's presidential campaign%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% staff have been calling me to see if Mike is running because they are ready to leave the McCain campaign, which is a biplane on fire and spiraling down," the Bloomberg adviser said.
Revised:  "Some of the people on McCain's presidential campaign%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  Bloomberg's advisor's have also said that they have been studying and learning from Ross Perot's Presidential campaign in 1992.
Revised:  Bloomberg's advisers have also said that they have been studying and learning from Ross Perot's Presidential campaign in 1992.
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Original: The Washington Times also has reports  a Bloomberg adviser saying some people involved with John McCain's Presidential Campaign are prepared to leave and join Bloomberg's campaign if he does indeed run.
Revised: The Washington Times also has reports of a Bloomberg adviser saying some people involved with John McCain's Presidential Campaign are prepared to leave and join Bloomberg's campaign if he does indeed run.
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Original:  They have called and talked with Perot's former advisers and campaign workers to learn from their mistakes and experience  
Revised:  They have called and talked with Perot's former advisers and campaign workers to learn from their mistakes and experience . 
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Original:  His net worth is estimated at US$ 5.5 billion .
Revised:  His net worth is estimated at US$ 5.5 billion 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Washington Times also has reports of a Bloomberg adviser saying some people involved with John McCain's Presidential Campaign are prepared to leave and join Bloomberg's campaign if he does indeed run.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: The upcoming third version of the GPL licence, the licence  which Linux is released under , will prohibit Linux distributors to agree to patent royalty deals.
Revised: The upcoming third version of the GPL licence, the licence under which Linux is released under , will prohibit Linux distributors to agree to patent royalty deals.
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Original: The upcoming third version of the GPL licence, the licence  which Linux is released under , will prohibit Linux distributors to agree to patent royalty deals.
Revised: The upcoming third version of the GPL licence, the licence which Linux is released , will prohibit Linux distributors to agree to patent royalty deals.
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Original:  A related U.S. Supreme Court ruling from April 30th showed how software patents are subject to court challenges;
Revised:  A related U.S. Supreme Court ruling from April 30th showed how software patents can be subject to court challenges;
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Original:  basically, innovations that can be patented, and if the innovations are just "obvious", the patent is weaker . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
Revised:  basically, if the innovations are just "obvious", the patent is weaker . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
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Original:  basically, innovations that can be patented, and if the innovations are just "obvious", the patent is weaker . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
Revised:  basically, innovations that can be patented, and if the innovations patented are "obvious", the patent is weaker . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
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Original:  basically, innovations that can be patented, and if the innovations are just "obvious", the patent is weaker . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
Revised:  basically, innovations that can be patented, and if the innovations are just "obvious", the patent is weakened . Joe Lindsay, information officer for a mortgage company, pointed out that the Unix code that Linux is based upon preceded Microsoft Windows, which might also be a reason for some patents to be invalid.
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Original: The show, which debuted March 26 after almost a decade off the air was the highest-rated television show in the UK that night.
Revised: The show, which debuted March 26 after almost a 16-year hiatus, was the highest-rated television show in the UK that night.
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Original: Success may be too much of a good thing for the future of storied BCC series Doctor Who.
Revised: Success may be too much of a good thing for the future of storied BBC series Doctor Who.
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Original:  Tennant is a star of the BBC period drama, Cassanova .
Revised:  Tennant is a star of the BBC period drama, Casanova .
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Original:  Suspended particle matter has been depositing on the Taj Mahal making the marble have yellow look.
Revised:  Suspended particulate matter has been depositing on the Taj Mahal making the marble have yellow look.
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Original:  This will cost  $230,000, and is required to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
Revised:  This will cost US $230,000, and is required to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
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Original:  Suspended particulate matter has been depositing on the Taj Mahal making the marble have a yellow look.
Revised:  Suspended particulate matter has been depositing on the Taj Mahal giving the marble a yellow look.
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Original:  The mud bath works by absorbing the dirt while drying , then, when it has completely dried, all the dirt is absorbed and the dried  mud is washed off.
Revised:  The mud bath works by absorbing the dirt while drying . Then, when the mud has dried mud is washed off.
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Original:  This will cost US$230,000, and is required to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
Revised:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and is required to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
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Original:  This will cost US$230,000, and is required to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
Revised:  This will cost US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean.
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Original:  ]] The Taj Mahal, one of India's most famed monuments, known for its white marble, has been gradually turning yellowish.
Revised:  ]] The Taj Mahal, one of India's most famed monuments, has been gradually turning yellowish.
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Original:  Authorities are planning to give the Taj Mahal a mud bath .
Revised:  Plans are afoot to give the Taj Mahal a mud bath .
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Original:  Authorities are planning to give the Taj Mahal a mud bath .
Revised:  Authorities are planning to give the white marble structure a mud bath .
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Original:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument  to reduce pollution around the area
Revised:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will need to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument to reduce pollution around the area
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Original:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument  to reduce pollution around the area
Revised:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument to reduce pollution around the area
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Original:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument  to reduce pollution around the area
Revised:  The cost has been assessed at US$230,000, and will be necessary to be repeated every two to three years to keep the Taj Mahal's marble clean . Roughly 3,000,000 tourists visit the monument every year, and visitors are required to park 2 miles away from the monument in an effort to reduce pollution around the area
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Original: Plans are afoot to give the white marble structure a mud bath - the mud will absorb the dirt already accumulated while drying and is then washed off.
Revised: Plans are afoot to give the white marble structure a mud bath - the mud will absorb the dirt already accumulated as it dries and is then washed off.
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Original: Category:PakistanCategory:AsiaCategory:Disasters and accidentsCategory: Category: Pervez Musharraf A bomb blast killing an estimated 24 people and injuriing dozens more, has struck the frontier town of Peshawar in Pakistan.
Revised: Category:PakistanCategory:AsiaCategory:Disasters and accidentsCategory: Pervez Musharraf A bomb blast killing an estimated 24 people and injuriing dozens more, has struck the frontier town of Peshawar in Pakistan.
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Original:  Inspector General Police, Mr Sharif Virk and other senior police and government officials have alleged to the BBC that they believe the attack was carried out by a suicide bomber.
Revised:  Inspector General Police, Mr Sharif Virk and other senior police and government officials have told the BBC that they believe the attack was carried out by a suicide bomber.
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Original:  Police also allege that a severed leg, possibly that of the alleged bomber, was found at the scene of the blast with a note in Pashto tied to it warning "American spies" of a similar fate.
Revised:  Police say that a severed leg, possibly that of the alleged bomber, was found at the scene of the blast with a note in Pashto tied to it warning "American spies" of a similar fate.
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Original:  The blasts have been condemned by the President of Pakistan general Pervez Musharraf.
Revised:  The blasts have been condemned by the President of Pakistan , General Pervez Musharraf.
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Original: Image:Peshawar.png|Peshawar is in the w: North West Frontier Province  .]] A bomb blast at a popular hotel in the frontier town of Peshawar in Pakistan has killed an estimated 24 people and injuriing dozens more.
Revised: Image:Peshawar.png|Peshawar is in the North West Frontier Province .]] A bomb blast at a popular hotel in the frontier town of Peshawar in Pakistan has killed an estimated 24 people and injuriing dozens more.
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Original:  Inspector General  Police, Mr Sharif Virk and other senior police and government officials have told the BBC that they believe the attack was carried out by a suicide bomber.
Revised:  Inspector General of Police, Mr Sharif Virk and other senior police and government officials have told the BBC that they believe the attack was carried out by a suicide bomber.
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Original:   "In this way, Dresden will once again be one of the cleanest cities in Germany," said Roland Putzger, the leader of the local council    
Revised:  "In this way, Dresden will once again be one of the cleanest cities in Germany," said Roland Putzger, the leader of the local council . 
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Original: Reuters is one of the world's largest news agencies, with a total of 16,800 staff in all divisions, but derives greater than 90 percent of  revenue from the its financial service business.
Revised: Reuters is one of the world's largest news agencies, with a total of 16,800 staff in all divisions, but derives more than 90 percent of revenue from the its financial service business.
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Original: Reuters is one of the world's largest news agencies, with a total of 16,800 staff in all divisions, but derives greater than 90 percent of  revenue from the its financial service business.
Revised: Reuters is one of the world's largest news agencies, with a total of 16,800 staff in all divisions, but derives greater than 90 percent of its revenue from the its financial service business.
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Original:  It has been suggested that both companies wanted an economy of scale to compete with Bloomberg, the American financial services giant.
Revised:  It has been suggested that both companies wanted a better economy of scale to compete with Bloomberg, the American financial services giant.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani, 35, and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani, 51, who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to talk the trash out for garbage day.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani, 35, and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani, 51, who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors,  Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani ( 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors,  Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 ) and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors,  Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani ( 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
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Original: According to federal prosecutors,  Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 , who live in Nassau County, the two women were beaten, tortured, and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
Revised: According to federal prosecutors, Varsha Mahender Sabhnani , 35 , and her husband Mahender Murlidhar Sabhnani , 51 ) and were kept from leaving the house unless it was to take the trash out for garbage day.
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Original:  Since receiving the jobs, both women had their passports taken away from them by the Sabhnani's .
Revised:  Since receiving the jobs, both women had their passports taken away from them by the Sabhnanis .
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Original: Authorities say that the women had scalding hot water poured on them, were forced to take as many as 30 showers in a three hour period, were made to run up and down flights of stairs , and one of the women was forced to eat "25 extremely hot chili peppers . "  All the "punishments" were in response to not completing work properly.
Revised: Authorities say that the women had scalding hot water poured on them, were forced to take as many as 30 showers in a three hour period, were made to run up and down flights of stairs , and one of the women was forced to eat "25 extremely hot chili peppers , " All the "punishments" were in response to not completing work properly.
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Original:  In Long Island, New York a millionare couple has been arrested after keeping two Indonesian woman as slaves for at least five years.
Revised:  In Long Island, New York a millionaire couple has been arrested after keeping two Indonesian woman as slaves for at least five years.
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Original:  In Long Island, New York  a millionaire couple has been arrested after keeping two Indonesian woman as slaves for at least five years.
Revised:  In Long Island, New York , a millionaire couple has been arrested after keeping two Indonesian woman as slaves for at least five years.
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Original:  "No one would ever think that human beings were being brought into the United States and held for slave labor, and beaten, and tortured in a beautiful mansion right here in one of the most exclusive neighborhoods on Long Island," said Demetri Jones, a prosecutor in the case.
Revised:  "No one would ever think that human beings were being brought into the United States and held for slave labor, and beaten, and tortured in a beautiful mansion right here in one of the most exclusive neighbourhoods on Long Island," said Demetri Jones, a prosecutor in the case.
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Original:  Authorities say that the women had scalding hot water poured on them, were forced to take as many as 30 showers in a three hour period, were made to run up and down flights of stairs, and one of the women was forced to eat "25 extremely hot chili peppers."
Revised:  Authorities say that the women had scalding hot water poured on them, were forced to take as many as 30 showers in a three hour period, were made to run up and down flights of stairs, and one of the women was forced to eat "25 extremely hot chilli peppers."
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Original: The epicenter was reported to be 165 km [105 miles] west, northwest of Louangphrabang , Laos at a depth of 38.1 km [23.7 miles].
Revised: The epicenter was reported to be 165 km [105 miles] west, northwest of Luang Prabang , Laos at a depth of 38.1 km [23.7 miles].
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Original: It is not known what caused her death , but reports say that she was suffering form heart related problems.
Revised: The cause of her death is still unknown , but reports say that she was suffering form heart related problems.
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Original:  King was an actress, speaker and producer . King also played Rosa Parks in the King miniseries in 1978.
Revised:  An actress, speaker and producer . King also played Rosa Parks in the King miniseries in 1978.
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Original:  King was an actress, speaker and producer . King also played Rosa Parks in the King miniseries in 1978.
Revised:  King was an actress, speaker and producer , King played Rosa Parks in the King miniseries in 1978.
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Original:  King was also the CEO of Higher Grounds Productions.
Revised:  She was also the CEO of Higher Grounds Productions.
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Original: Net gains in human well-being and economic development are offset by growing costs, in the form ecosystem degradation, improportional or unpredicatable changes, and worsened poverty for some groups.
Revised: Net gains in human well-being and economic development are offset by growing costs, in the form ecosystem degradation, the possibility of abrupt and unpredictable ecosystem changes, and worsened poverty for some groups.
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Original:  Ecosystem degredation could grow significantly worse over the next 50 years, presenting a barrier to meeting UN Millennium Development Goals.
Revised:  Ecosystem degradation could grow significantly worse over the next 50 years, presenting a barrier to meeting UN Millennium Development Goals.
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Original:  Oxygen-depleted coastal waters and rivers result from overuse of nitrogen fertilizer - an effect known as “nutrient loading” which leads to continuing biodiversity loss.
Revised:  Oxygen-depleted coastal waters and rivers result from overuse of nitrogen fertilizer - an effect known as "nutrient loading" which leads to continuing biodiversity loss.
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