wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Kenneth Ocen Obwot Brigadier Kenneth Ocen Obwot, is a Ugandan physician, military officer and medical administrator in the Uganda People's Defence Forces (UPDF).
Revised:  Brigadier Kenneth Ocen Obwot, is a Ugandan physician, military officer and medical administrator in the Uganda People's Defence Forces (UPDF).
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Original:  Late , in 2000, he successfully studied for Postgraduate Diploma in Health Management, from the same university.
Revised:  Later , in 2000, he successfully studied for Postgraduate Diploma in Health Management, from the same university.
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Original:  In February 2019, as part of a promotions exercise that involved 2,031 UPDF men and women, Dr. Knneth Ocen Obwot was promoted from the rank of Colonel to that of Brigadier General.
Revised:  In February 2019, as part of a promotions exercise that involved 2,031 UPDF men and women, Dr. Kenneth Ocen Obwot was promoted from the rank of Colonel to that of Brigadier General.
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Original:  In 2017, the Scottish tourist authority promoted còsagach – a Gaelic word , which they suggested meant "snug, sheltered or cosy" but which Gaelic speakers said referred to a damp, mossy nook or cranny.
Revised:  In 2017, the Scottish tourist authority promoted còsagach – a Gaelic word which they suggested meant "snug, sheltered or cosy" but which Gaelic speakers said referred to a damp, mossy nook or cranny.
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Original: Coorie is a Scottish verb meaning "to stoop, bend, cringe, crouch for protection"and "to snuggle, nestle".
Revised: Coorie is a Scots word meaning "to stoop, bend, cringe, crouch for protection"and "to snuggle, nestle".
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Original:  It has been appropriated and positioned as a "lifestyle trend ", similar to the Scandinavian concept of hygge, which involves ideas such as cosiness.
Revised:  It has been appropriated and positioned as a "lifestyle trend ," similar to the Scandinavian concept of hygge, which involves ideas such as cosiness.
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Original: Etymology The word derives from the , or kosmopolitês, formed from "", kosmos, i.e. "world", "universe", or "cosmos", and , "politês", i.e. "citizen" or "[one] of a city".
Revised: Etymology The worde derives from the , or kosmopolitês, formed from "", kosmos, i.e. "world", "universe", or "cosmos", and , "politês", i.e. "citizen" or "[one] of a city".
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Original: Etymology The worde derives from the , or kosmopolitês, formed from "", kosmos, i.e. "world", "universe", or "cosmos", and , "politês", i.e. "citizen" or "[one] of a city".
Revised: Etymology The word derives from the , or kosmopolitês, formed from "", kosmos, i.e. "world", "universe", or "cosmos", and , "politês", i.e. "citizen" or "[one] of a city".
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Original: Various places are called "cosmopolitan" , which does not usually mean cosmopolitan.
Revised: The word "cosmopolitan" , which does not usually mean cosmopolitan.
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Original: Cosmopolitanism is the idea that all human beings are , or could or should be, members of a single community.
Revised: Cosmopolitanism is the idea that all human beings are members of a single community.
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Original:  Different views of what constitutes this community may include a focus on moral standards, economic practices, political structures, and/or cultural forms.
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Original:  A person who adheres to the idea of cosmopolitanism in any of its forms is called a cosmopolitan or cosmopolite.
Revised:  A person who adheres to the idea of cosmopolitanism in any form is called a cosmopolitan or cosmopolite.
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Original:  Of Diogenes it is said : "Asked where he came from, he answered: 'I am a citizen of the world (kosmopolitês)'".
Revised:  It was said that when Diogenes was "Asked where he came from, he answered: 'I am a citizen of the world (kosmopolitês)'".
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Original:  In Ancient Greece , the broadest basis of social identity at that time was either the individual city-state or the Greeks (Hellenes) as a group.
Revised:  At the time , the broadest basis of social identity at that time was either the individual city-state or the Greeks (Hellenes) as a group.
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Original:  In Ancient Greece , the broadest basis of social identity at that time was either the individual city-state or the Greeks (Hellenes) as a group.
Revised:  In Ancient Greece , the broadest basis of social identity among Greeks was either the individual city-state or the Greeks (Hellenes) as a group.
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Original:  As a reaction to the Holocaust and the other massacres , the concept of crimes against humanity became a generally accepted category in international law.
Revised:  As a reaction to the Holocaust and other atrocities , the concept of crimes against humanity became a generally accepted category in international law.
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Original:  A person who adheres to the idea of cosmopolitanism in any form is called a cosmopolitan or cosmopolite.
Revised:  Its adherents are known as cosmopolitan or cosmopolite.
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Original:  love of your native place, your country.
Revised:  love of one's native place, your country.
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Original:  love of your native place, your country.
Revised:  love of your native place, one's country.
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Original:  Its membership grew by leaps and bounds , reaching a claimed 15,700 in less than two years.
Revised:  Its membership grew rapidly , reaching a claimed 15,700 in less than two years.
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Original:  In 1982, through the efforts of the National Historical Institute and the local government of Pampanga, his bust and a historical marker was unveiled in his hometown San Fernando, as a tribute for his contributions to his province 
Revised:  In 1982, through the efforts of the National Historical Institute and the local government of Pampanga, his bust and a historical marker was unveiled in his hometown San Fernando, as a tribute for his contributions to his province .
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Original:  Most of its recruits came from the literate provincial middle class - teachers, workers, local politicians and the less impoverished smallholders and tenants in the barrios.
Revised:  Most of its recruits came from the literate provincial middle class – teachers, workers, local politicians and the less impoverished smallholders and tenants in the barrios.
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Original:  She attended Kitgum Public Primary School, for her elementary education .
Revised:  She attended Kitgum Public Primary School, for her elementary schooling .
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Original:  She obtained her High School Diploma, after completing her A-Level courses at Bukoyo Secondary School, in Iganga Town, in 1993.
Revised:  She obtained her High School Diploma, after completing her A-Level education at Bukoyo Secondary School, in Iganga Town, in 1993.
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Original: After being assessed based on the LOCF, individuals with brain injury will receive a score from one to eight.
Revised: After being assessed based on the LOCF, individuals with brain injury receive a score from one to eight.
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Original:  However, individuals will progress at different rates and may plateau at any stage of recovery.
Revised:  However, individuals progress at different rates and may plateau at any stage of recovery.
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Original:  These patients will be scored based on combinations of the following criteria:
Revised:  These patients are scored based on combinations of the following criteria:
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Original: The Rancho Los Amigos Scale (  a.k.a. the Rancho Los Amigos Levels of Cognitive Functioning Scale (LOCF) or Rancho Scale ) is a medical scale used to assess individuals after a closed head injury, including traumatic brain injury, based on cognitive and behavioural presentations as they emerge from coma.
Revised: The Rancho Los Amigos Scale ( a.k.a. the Rancho Los Amigos Levels of Cognitive Functioning Scale (LOCF) or Rancho Scale , is a medical scale used to assess individuals after a closed head injury, including traumatic brain injury, based on cognitive and behavioural presentations as they emerge from coma.
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Original:  These pathological cold sensitive antibodies include cold agglutinins, Dnotath-Landsteniner antibodies, and cryoglobulins which are the culprits of cold agglutinin disease, paroxysmal cold hemoglobinuria in the process of Donath-Landsteiner hemolytic anemia, and vasculitis, respectively.
Revised:  These pathological cold sensitive antibodies include cold agglutinins, Donath-Landsteniner antibodies, and cryoglobulins which are the culprits of cold agglutinin disease, paroxysmal cold hemoglobinuria in the process of Donath-Landsteiner hemolytic anemia, and vasculitis, respectively.
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Original:  Career Revolution After the surrender of Japan, Jahja joined a youth group known as the "Prapatan 10" under Sjahrir, which participated in the Rengasdengklok incident of 1945 where both Sukarno and Mohammad Hatta were kidnapped - the Prapatan 10 group was assigned to kidnap Hatta.
Revised:  Career Revolution After the surrender of Japan, Jahja joined a youth group known as the "Prapatan 10" under Sjahrir, which participated in the Rengasdengklok incident of 1945 where both Sukarno and Mohammad Hatta were kidnapped – the Prapatan 10 group was assigned to kidnap Hatta.
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Original:  During the march, Jahja was captured by Dutch forces alongside one of his battalion commanders in late December 1948 - reportedly, because they fell asleep.
Revised:  During the march, Jahja was captured by Dutch forces alongside one of his battalion commanders in late December 1948 – reportedly, because they fell asleep.
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Original:  Mohammad Hatta accepted the proposal, sending some officers - including Jahja - to prepare the contingency plan.
Revised:  Mohammad Hatta accepted the proposal, sending some officers – including Jahja – to prepare the contingency plan.
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Original:  According to journalist Rosihan Anwar, Jahja said in 1962 - during Sjahrir's imprisonment - that Sjahrir was not the right man to lead the Socialist Party, which he remarked as "scattered".
Revised:  According to journalist Rosihan Anwar, Jahja said in 1962 – during Sjahrir's imprisonment - that Sjahrir was not the right man to lead the Socialist Party, which he remarked as "scattered".
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Original:  According to journalist Rosihan Anwar, Jahja said in 1962 - during Sjahrir's imprisonment - that Sjahrir was not the right man to lead the Socialist Party, which he remarked as "scattered".
Revised:  According to journalist Rosihan Anwar, Jahja said in 1962 - during Sjahrir's imprisonment – that Sjahrir was not the right man to lead the Socialist Party, which he remarked as "scattered".
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Original: During the Dutch-Indonesian Round Table Conference in Den Haag , Jahja participated as a member of the Indonesian delegation's military committee.
Revised: During the Dutch-Indonesian Round Table Conference in The Hague , Jahja participated as a member of the Indonesian delegation's military committee.
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Original: Stage 1 Stage 1 of the River Styles Framework provides a baseline survey of a river's character and behaviour.
Revised: Stage 1 Stage 1 provides a baseline survey of a river's character and behaviour.
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Original:  Steps in Stage 1 include: Stage 2 Stage 2 of the River Styles Framework assesses and explains geomorphic river condition throughout a catchment.
Revised:  Steps in Stage 1 include: Stage 2 Stage 2 assesses and explains geomorphic river condition throughout a catchment.
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Original:  Steps in Stage 2 include: Stage 3 Stage 3 of the River Styles Framework determines the potential for a river to 'recover', or improve in condition.
Revised:  Steps in Stage 2 include: Stage 3 Stage 3 determines the potential for a river to 'recover', or improve in condition.
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Original:  Steps in Stage 3 include: Stage 4 Stage 4 of the River Styles Framework uses information from Stages 1 to 3 to identify 'target conditions' for a River Style as a goal toward which river rehabilitation (or restoration) can work.
Revised:  Steps in Stage 3 include: Stage 4 Stage 4 uses information from Stages 1 to 3 to identify 'target conditions' for a River Style as a goal toward which river rehabilitation (or restoration) can work.
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Original:  Kirstie Fryirs from the university and Gary J. Brierley, on leave from the University of Auckland, were co- developers and along with a team collaborated with the  New South Wales Department of Land and Water Conservation (NSW DLWC) .
Revised:  Kirstie Fryirs from the university and Gary J. Brierley, on leave from the University of Auckland, were co- developers and along with a team collaborated with the New South Wales Department of Land and Water Conservation .
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Original: Mixed autoimmune hemolytic anemia (MAIHA) is a type of autoimmune hemolytic anemia which combines the features of cold sensitive antibodyinduced diseases and warm autoimmune hemolytic anemia.
Revised: Mixed autoimmune hemolytic anemia (MAIHA) is a type of autoimmune hemolytic anemia which combines the features of cold sensitive antibody-induced diseases and warm autoimmune hemolytic anemia.
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Original: Linda Watiri Muriuki Linda Watiri Muriuki , is a Kenyan lawyer, who is the managing partner at LJA Associates, a law firm based in Nairobi, Kenya's capital city.
Revised: Linda Watiri Muriuki , is a Kenyan lawyer, who is the managing partner at LJA Associates, a law firm based in Nairobi, Kenya's capital city.
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Original:  In 2010, she obtained a Master of Business Administration in Global Business from the United States International University Africa in collaboration with Columbia University, in New York City.
Revised:  In 2010, she obtained a Master of Business Administration from the United States International University Africa in collaboration with Columbia University, in New York City.
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Original: Tanino Setsu was a textile 's worker who graduated from Japan Women's University's Department of Social Work in 1925, and became the first female factory supervisor in 1928.
Revised: Tanino Setsu was a textile worker who graduated from Japan Women's University's Department of Social Work in 1925, and became the first female factory supervisor in 1928.
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Original:  URL When a musician hears a song, he or she can sometimes "see" the song notes in their head, as well as hear them with all their tonal qualities.
Revised:  URL When a musician hears a song, they can sometimes "see" the song notes in their head, as well as hear them with all their tonal qualities.
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Original:  That cannot be anywhere else  .
Revised:  They cannot be anywhere else .
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Original:  That cannot be anywhere else  .
Revised:  That cannot be anywhere else . Therefore, all mental images can be thought of as ideal .
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Original: Climate ( ) is the long-term pattern of weather in an area, typically averaged over a period of 30 years.
Revised: Climate is the long-term pattern of weather in an area, typically averaged over a period of 30 years.
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Original:  The second letter describes the thermal characteristic of its source region : T for tropical, P for polar, A for Arctic or Antarctic, M for monsoon, E for equatorial, and S for superior air (dry air formed by significant downward motion in the atmosphere).
Revised:  The second letter describes theon : T for tropical, P for polar, A for Arctic or Antarctic, M for monsoon, E for equatorial, and S for superior air (dry air formed by significant downward motion in the atmosphere).
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Original:  The second letter describes the thermal characteristic of its source region : T for tropical, P for polar, A for Arctic or Antarctic, M for monsoon, E for equatorial, and S for superior air (dry air formed by significant downward motion in the atmosphere).
Revised:  The second letter describes the thermal characteristic of its source region : T for desssP for polar, A for Arctic or Antarctic, M for monsoon, E for equatorial, and S for superior air (dry air formed by significant downward motion in the atmosphere).
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Original:  An example for a high resolution global climate data set is CHELSA (Climatologies at high resolution for the earth's land surface areas) which provides of downscaled model output on a ~1km resolution.
Revised:  An example for a high resolution global climate data set is CHELSA (Climatologies at high resolution for the earth's land surface areas) 
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Original:  Source: NASA . upright=1.35|Observed temperature from NASA. vs the 1850–1900 average used by the IPCC as a pre-industrial baseline..
Revised:  Source: NASA upright=1.35|Observed temperature from NASA. vs the 1850–1900 average used by the IPCC as a pre-industrial baseline..
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Original:   Mineral Revolution was caused by the discovery of diamonds in Kimberly in 1867 and also by the discovery of gold in Witwatersrand in 1886.
Revised:  The Mineral Revolution was caused by the discovery of diamonds in Kimberly in 1867 and also by the discovery of gold in Witwatersrand in 1886.
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Original: Mass migration to towns, urban growth, and the increasing urban demand for rural produce prompted the development of South Africa's transport and communications infrastructure.
Revised: Mass migration to towns, urban growth, and the increasingly urban demand for rural produce prompted the development of South Africa's transport and communications infrastructure.
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Original:  Left an orphan at an early age, Joubert migrated to the Transvaal, where he settled in the Wakkerstroom district near Laing's Nek and the north-east angle of the Colony of Natal.
Revised:  Left an orphan at an early age, Joubert migrated to the Transvaal, where he settled in the Wakkerstroom district near Laing's Nek and the north-east corner of the Colony of Natal.
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Original: Petrus Jacobus Joubert (20 January 1831 -28 March 1900), better known as Piet Joubert, was Commandant-General of the South African Republic from 1880 to 1900.
Revised: Petrus Jacobus Joubert (20 January 1831 - 28 March 1900), better known as Piet Joubert, was Commandant-General of the South African Republic from 1880 to 1900.
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Original:  Sir George White, the defender of Ladysmith, summed up Jouberts character when he called him "a soldier and a gentleman, and a brave and honourable opponent" . Origin%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Piet Joubert is a direct descendant of Pierre Joubert who arrived at the Cape in 1688 from Provence France.
Revised:  Sir George White, the defender of Ladysmith, summed up Jouberts character when he called him "a soldier and a gentleman, and a brave and honourable opponent" Origin%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Piet Joubert is a direct descendant of Pierre Joubert who arrived at the Cape in 1688 from Provence France.
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Original:  Sir George White, the defender of Ladysmith, summed up Jouberts character when he called him "a soldier and a gentleman, and a brave and honourable opponent" . Origin%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Piet Joubert is a direct descendant of Pierre Joubert who arrived at the Cape in 1688 from Provence France.
Revised:  Sir George White, the defender of Ladysmith, summed up Jouberts character when he called him "a soldier and a gentleman, and a brave and honourable opponent" . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Piet Joubert is a direct descendant of Pierre Joubert who arrived at the Cape in 1688 from Provence France.
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Original: Petrus Jacobus Joubert (20 January 1831 - 28 March 1900), better known as Piet Joubert, was Commandant-General of the South African Republic from 1880 to 1900.
Revised: Petrus Jacobus Joubert (20 January 1831 – 28 March 1900), better known as Piet Joubert, was Commandant-General of the South African Republic from 1880 to 1900.
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Original: Education Penguang obtained a Bachelor of Science ( B.Sc. ) in Forestry (Hons.) from the College of Agriculture Malaya (UPM) in 1978.
Revised: Education Penguang obtained a Bachelor of Science ( BSc ) in Forestry (Hons.) from the College of Agriculture Malaya (UPM) in 1978.
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Original:  He then furthered his studies to the University of Edinburgh in Scotland and obtained a Master of Science ( M.Sc. ) in Resource Management in 1989.
Revised:  He then furthered his studies to the University of Edinburgh in Scotland and obtained a Master of Science ( MSc ) in Resource Management in 1989.
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Original:  Finally, he attended the Irish International University (IIU) between 1998 and 2001 and obtained a Doctorate ( Ph.D. ) in sustainable forest management.
Revised:  Finally, he attended the Irish International University (IIU) between 1998 and 2001 and obtained a Doctorate ( PhD ) in sustainable forest management.
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Original:  Her flight, assisted by Atheist Republic and Faith to Faithless, was partially documented in the Vice News documentary Leaving Islam: Rescuing Ex-Muslims (2017) and later in her 2018 German-language autobiography Frauen dürfen hier nicht träumen ('Women Aren't Allowed to Dream Here'), also translated into French  .
Revised:  Her flight, assisted by Atheist Republic and Faith to Faithless, was partially documented in the Vice News documentary Leaving Islam: Rescuing Ex-Muslims (2017) . Her 2018 German-language autobiography Frauen dürfen hier nicht träumen ('Women Aren't Allowed to Dream Here'), also translated into French .
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Original:  With the help of the Central Council of Ex-Muslims and the Giordano Bruno Foundation, Ahmad founded the Atheist Refugee Relief e.V. in March 2017, and officially presented at the 10th anniversary of the Council on 17 November 2017.
Revised:  With the help of the Central Council of Ex-Muslims and the Giordano Bruno Foundation, Ahmad founded the Atheist Refugee Relief in March 2017, and officially presented at the 10th anniversary of the Council on 17 November 2017.
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Original:  ' Activism in Germany Maryam Namazie interviews Rana Ahmad in Cologne, 2017.
Revised:  Activism in Germany Maryam Namazie interviews Rana Ahmad in Cologne, 2017.
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Original:  According to Dittmar Steiner, the Atheist Refugee Relief received 'two to three requests%DIFDELCMD < [%%% for help a week' when it started, which had increased to 'between seven and nine a day' a year later.
Revised:  According to Dittmar Steiner, the Atheist Refugee Relief received 'two to three requests%DIFDELCMD < [%%% a week' when it started, which had increased to 'between seven and nine a day' a year later.
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Original:  According to Dittmar Steiner, the Atheist Refugee Relief received 'two to three requests%DIFDELCMD < [%%% for help a week' when it started, which had increased to 'between seven and nine a day' a year later.
Revised:  According to Dittmar Steiner, the Atheist Refugee Relief received 'two to three requests%DIFDELCMD < [%%% for help 
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Original:  she wasn't allowed to travel alone. however, there's no rule in Saudi Arabia which says women can't travel alone nor it is uncommon to see women travel alone.
Revised:  she wasn't allowed to travel alone. 
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