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Original:  As he had been in hosptial beforehand, on the 26th  October 2004 and the 8th  March 2005.
Revised:  He had previously been hospitalised on the 26th October 2004 and the 8th March 2005.
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Original:  As he had been in hosptial beforehand, on the 26th  October 2004 and the 8th  March 2005.
Revised:  As he had been in hosptial beforehand, on the 26th of October 2004 and the 8th March 2005.
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Original:  As he had been in hosptial beforehand, on the 26th  October 2004 and the 8th  March 2005.
Revised:  As he had been in hosptial beforehand, on the 26th October 2004 and the 8th of March 2005.
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Original:  He has be on the throne since 1949, making him one of the longest reigning monachs in Europe
Revised:  He has been on the throne since 1949, making him one of the longest reigning monachs in Europe
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Original: This year's winner was Sherry Lansing, he former CEO of Paramount Pictures and the first woman to head a major studio.
Revised: This year's winner was Sherry Lansing, the former CEO of Paramount Pictures and the first woman to head a major studio.
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Original: An IP  from Josef Silny & Associates, a Miami education consulting firm, wrote a biased paragraph about him creating uproar from the golfer.
Revised: An IP address from Josef Silny & Associates, a Miami education consulting firm, wrote a biased paragraph about him creating uproar from the golfer.
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Original: Golfer Fuzzy Zoeller wants to sue the Wikipedia editor who vandalised his article in the encyclopedia .
Revised: Golfer Fuzzy Zoeller wants to sue the anonymous person who vandalised his article in the encyclopedia .
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Original:  The layoffs have been expected since late last year where he annouced it to a paliamentry select committee.
Revised:  The lay-offs have been expected since late last year where he annouced it to a paliamentry select committee.
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Original:  The layoffs have been expected since late last year where he annouced it to a paliamentry select committee.
Revised:  The layoffs have been expected since late last year where he announced it to a paliamentry select committee.
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Original:  The layoffs have been expected since late last year where he annouced it to a paliamentry select committee.
Revised:  The layoffs have been expected since late last year where he annouced it to a parliamentary select committee.
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Original:  In two weeks time, staff will be asked what they think of the proposed changes, which also includes a top level management restructing .
Revised:  In two weeks time, staff will be asked what they think of the proposed changes, which also includes a top level management restructuring .
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Original:  The Liberals are at 37\%  , 28\% the Parti Quebecois , and 24\% for the Action démocratique du Québec (ADQ) (Democratic Action of Quebec).
Revised:  The Liberals are at 37\% , 28\% for the PQ , and 24\% for the Action démocratique du Québec (ADQ) (Democratic Action of Quebec).
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Original:  The Liberals, which is the current government in the province, could win again if they had a 6-point lead, says Jean-Marc Leger, president of Leger Marketing.
Revised:  The Liberals, which form the current government in the province, could win again if they had a 6-point lead, says Jean-Marc Leger, president of Leger Marketing.
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Original:  Jean Charest, who is the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the Parti Québécois , lead by André Boisclair, wants  to separate completely.
Revised:  Jean Charest, the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the Parti Québécois , lead by André Boisclair, wants to separate completely.
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Original:  Jean Charest, who is the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the Parti Québécois , lead by André Boisclair, wants  to separate completely.
Revised:  Jean Charest, who is the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the PQ , lead by André Boisclair, wants to separate completely.
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Original:  Jean Charest, who is the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the Parti Québécois , lead by André Boisclair, wants  to separate completely.
Revised:  Jean Charest, who is the leader of the Quebec Liberals, wants Quebec to stay in Canada while the Parti Québécois , lead by André Boisclair, wants the province to separate completely.
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Original:  About 56\% say no and 44\% say yes.
Revised:  In a referendum, about 56\% say no and 44\% say yes.
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Original:  According to past polls, the percentage of Quebecers wanting to separate from Canada has not changed rapidly .
Revised:  According to past polls, the percentage of Quebecers wanting to separate from Canada has not changed markedly over time .
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Original: One of the two suicide bombers was a women who attempted enter the Koochi Bazaar, a market in Peshawar, the capital of Pakistan’s North-West Frontier Province.
Revised: One of the two suicide bombers was a woman who attempted enter the Koochi Bazaar, a market in Peshawar, the capital of Pakistan’s North-West Frontier Province.
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Original:  Explosives were discovered in the purse carried by a women who refused the search and tried to walk away.
Revised:  Explosives were discovered in the purse carried by a woman who refused the search and tried to walk away.
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Original: One of the two suicide bombers was a woman who attempted enter the Koochi Bazaar, a market in Peshawar, the capital of Pakistan’s North-West Frontier Province.
Revised: One of the two suicide bombers was a woman who attempted entFUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK er the Koochi Bazaar, a market in Peshawar, the capital of Pakistan’s North-West Frontier Province.
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Original:  U.S. , Italian ambassadors injured in terrorist attack in Sri Lanka The U.S. and Italian ambassadors to Sri Lanka were "slightly injured"  when their helicopters were targeted by mortars  fired by LTTE Terrorists in Sri Lanka's east on Tuesday, officials said.
Revised:  U.S. , Italian ambassadors injured in terrorist attack in Sri Lanka The U.S. and Italian ambassadors to Sri Lanka were "slightly injured" when their helicopters were targeted by mortars . The projectiles were fired by LTTE Terrorists in Sri Lanka's east on Tuesday, officials said.
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Original:  Ambassadors   were reportedly visiting the area that was recently liberated by the Sri Lankan forces to observe the development activities of the area . Category:Politics, Terrorism, Pea
Revised:  Ambassadors were reportedly visiting the area that was recently liberated by the Sri Lankan forces to observe the development activities of the area Category:Politics, Terrorism, Pea
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Original:  Ambassadors   were reportedly visiting the area that was recently liberated by the Sri Lankan forces to observe the development activities of the area . Category:Politics, Terrorism, Pea
Revised:  Ambassadors were reportedly visiting the area that was recently liberated by the Sri Lankan forces to observe the development activities of the area . 
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Original: The U.S. and Italian ambassadors to Sri Lanka were "slightly injured" on a landing strip in Batticaloa, when their helicopters were targeted by mortars .
Revised: The U.S. and Italian ambassadors to Sri Lanka were "slightly injured" when their helicopters were targeted by mortars .
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Original: U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be " allright ", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnell.
Revised: U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be " alright ", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnell.
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Original: S. ambassador to Sri Lanka Robert O. Blake, Jr. . ]]
Revised: S. ambassador to Sri Lanka Robert O. Blake, Jr. ]]
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Original: U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be "alright", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnell .
Revised: U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be "alright", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnel .
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Original:  A spokesman for the separatist fighters said they mistook them for a military target, and have apologized.
Revised:  A spokesman for LTTE said they mistook them for a military target, and have apologized.
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Original:   U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be "alright", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnel.
Revised:  FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK U.S. ambassador Robert Blake is reported to be "alright", Italian Pio Mariani suffered head wounds from shrapnel.
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Original:  however, Al Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the schools religious leaders. Soruce  
Revised:  however, the Al-Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the schools religious leaders. Soruce 
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Original:  however, Al Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the schools religious leaders. Soruce  
Revised:  however, Al Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the schools religious leaders. Soruces 
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Original:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
Revised:  Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
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Original:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
Revised:  " %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
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Original:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
Revised:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
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Original:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog Category:Egypt Category:Africa Category:Religion Category:Islam Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Internet Category:Computi
Revised:  " Soruces%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Kareem's blog 
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Original: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prision for insulting Islam in his weblog.
Revised: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison for insulting Islam in his weblog.
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Original:  Blogs have still thus far been considered a comparatively safe means of expression for citizens of coutries with restrictive Islamic laws.
Revised:  Blogs have still thus far been considered a comparatively safe means of expression for citizens of countries with restrictive Islamic laws.
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Original:  Mideast governments have harassed & arrested bloggers before, but Kareem is the first to recieve jail time.
Revised:  Mideast governments have harassed & arrested bloggers before, but Kareem is the first to receive jail time.
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Original:  Kareem had written about becomming a human rights lawyer, working for the betterment of "Muslim and Arabic women";
Revised:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer, working for the betterment of "Muslim and Arabic women";
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Original:  His arrest last november inspired rallies in Washington, Rome, Paris, London and Stockholm.
Revised:  His arrest last November inspired rallies in Washington, Rome, Paris, London and Stockholm.
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Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said "It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also in the whole world.  
Revised:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said "It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. " 
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Original: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison  for insulting Islam in his weblog.
Revised: An Egyptian, blogger, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison for insulting Islam in his weblog.
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Original: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison  for insulting Islam in his weblog.
Revised: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced to four years in prison for insulting Islam in his weblog.
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Original: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison  for insulting Islam in his weblog.
Revised: In Egypt, Abdul Kareem Suleiman Amer, known online as Kareem Amer, was sentenced thursday to four years in prison for insulting Islam on his weblog.
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Original:  Blogs have still thus far been considered a comparatively safe means of expression for citizens of countries with restrictive Islamic laws.
Revised:  Blogs had been considered a comparatively safe means of expression for citizens of countries with restrictive Islamic laws.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Blogs have still thus far been considered a comparatively safe means of expression for citizens of countries with restrictive Islamic laws.
Revised:  Blogs have still thus far been considered a relatively safe means of expression for citizens of countries with restrictive Islamic laws.
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Original:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer , working for the betterment of " Muslim and Arabic women " ;
Revised:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer and working for the betterment of " Muslim and Arabic women " ;
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Original:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer , working for the betterment of " Muslim and Arabic women " ;
Revised:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer , working for the betterment of Muslim and Arabic women " ;
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Original:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer , working for the betterment of " Muslim and Arabic women " ;
Revised:  Kareem had written about becoming a human rights lawyer , working for the betterment of " Muslim and Arabic women ;
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Original:  however, the Al-Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the schools religious leaders.
Revised:  however, the Al-Azhar University expelled him in 2006 for criticizing the school's religious leaders.
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Original:  He had criticized various Muslim beliefs and suggested that there was no god .
Revised:  He had criticized various Muslim beliefs and suggested that there was no God .
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Original:  Gamal Eid, the Executive Director of the Arabic Network for Human Rights Information, said that the most blog repressive regime had been Tunisia, followed by Saudi Arabia, Syria and Libya, which have blocked sites and limited internet access.
Revised:  Gamal Eid, the Executive Director of the Arabic Network for Human Rights Information, said that the most repressive regime for blogging had been Tunisia, followed by Saudi Arabia, Syria and Libya, which have blocked sites and limited internet access.
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Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression  not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Revised:  Expressing surprise at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
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Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression  not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Revised:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history , he said it was a " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
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Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression  not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Revised:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression  not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Revised:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression ", not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
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Original:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression  not only in Egypt but also in the whole world. "
Revised:  He we surprised at the severity of the sentence given Egypt's recent history and said " It is a gloomy day for all the advocates of freedom of expression not only in Egypt but also around the world.
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Original:  The court took special interest  his posting to Coptic blogs, i.e. those run by Egyptian Christians.
Revised:  The court took special interest in his posting to Coptic blogs, i.e. those run by Egyptian Christians.
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Original:  Cheney is unhurt , and later met with President Karzai in Kabul.
Revised:  Cheney was unhurt in the blast , and later met with President Karzai in Kabul.
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Original:  the Associated Press reported 23 casualties, and 20 more were wounded according to Afghan officials  
Revised:  the Associated Press reported 23 people were killed and 20 more were wounded according to Afghan officials 
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Original: Sky News has reports that the Taliban has claimed responsibility with U.S. Vice President Dick Cheney as the target .
Revised: Qari Yousef Ahmadi, who claims to be a Taliban spokesman, said that Dick Cheney was the target of the attack .
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Original:  Cheney made a surprise vista to the base.
Revised:  Cheney made a surprise visit to the base.
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Original:  Cheney is reported to be unhurt .
Revised:  Cheney had been in his room before the explosion occurred. He was quickly escorted to a nearby bomb shelter, where he remained, unharmed, until the situation settled .
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Original:  This is the company's first step towards its involvement into health market.
Revised:  This is the company's first step towards its involvement in the health market.
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Original:  This is the company's first step towards its involvement in the health market.
Revised:  This is the company's first step towards an involvement in the health market.
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Original:  No additional information on  Medstory purchase was disclosed.
Revised:  No additional information on the Medstory purchase was disclosed.
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Original:  Unfortunately  the Pens did not have the same luck as they did against the Panthers as they lost 5-1.
Revised:  Unfortunately , the Pens did not have the same luck as they did against the Panthers as they lost 5-1.
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Original:  Tampa Bay played as if they were in the playoffs finishing there checks, getting to the puck and skating well all in this great win to make them a likely candidate for the Playoffs  they are ranked third in Conference and first in divison.
Revised:  Tampa Bay played as if they were in the playoffs finishing there checks, getting to the puck and skating well all in this great win to make them a likely candidate for the Playoffs , they are ranked third in Conference and first in divison.
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Original:  The Pens despite losing are still in a good position to be in the Playoffs  they are fifth in Conference and second in divison.
Revised:  The Pens , despite losing, are still in a good position to be in the Playoffs they are fifth in Conference and second in divison.
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Original:  The Pens despite losing are still in a good position to be in the Playoffs  they are fifth in Conference and second in divison.
Revised:  The Pens despite losing are still in a good position to be in the Playoffs , they are fifth in Conference and second in divison.
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Original:  The Goal Scoring are credited to for the Pens Sergei Gonchar on a Evgeni Malkin, Sidney Crosby assist.
Revised:  The Goal Scoring was credited to, for the Pens Sergei Gonchar on a Evgeni Malkin, Sidney Crosby assist.
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Original:  The Goal Scoring are credited to for the Pens Sergei Gonchar on a Evgeni Malkin, Sidney Crosby assist.
Revised:  The Goal Scoring are credited to for the Pens : Sergei Gonchar, on a Evgeni Malkin, Sidney Crosby assist.
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Original:  For the Lightning  Martin St. Louis, Paul Ranger, Filip Kuba, Brad Richards, and Vincent Lecavalier  all scoring for Tampa Bay.
Revised:  For the Lightning : Martin St. Louis, Paul Ranger, Filip Kuba, Brad Richards, and Vincent Lecavalier all scoring for Tampa Bay.
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Original:  For the Lightning  Martin St. Louis, Paul Ranger, Filip Kuba, Brad Richards, and Vincent Lecavalier  all scoring for Tampa Bay.
Revised:  For the Lightning Martin St. Louis, Paul Ranger, Filip Kuba, Brad Richards, and Vincent Lecavalier , all scoring for Tampa Bay.
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Original:  Assists going to  Brad Richards(3), Dan Boyle, Eric Perrin(2),Ruslan Fedotenko(2), and Martin St. Louis.
Revised:  Assists going to : Brad Richards(3), Dan Boyle, Eric Perrin(2),Ruslan Fedotenko(2), and Martin St. Louis.
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Original:  All in All  the Tampa Bay Lightning should try to stay consistent and play like they did in this game.
Revised:  All in All , the Tampa Bay Lightning should try to stay consistent and play like they did in this game.
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Original:  For the Pens  try to rebound form this loss and try to win against the New Jersey Devils Tuesday.
Revised:  For the Pens , try to rebound form this loss and try to win against the New Jersey Devils Tuesday.
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Original:  For the Pens  try to rebound form this loss and try to win against the New Jersey Devils Tuesday.
Revised:  For the Pens try to rebound from this loss and try to win against the New Jersey Devils Tuesday.
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