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Original:  4 million dell laptops worldwide were recalled after some of the laptop batteries exploded, causing the laptop to erupt into a fireball.
Revised:  4 million Dell laptops worldwide were recalled after some of the laptop batteries exploded, causing the laptop to erupt into a fireball.
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Original:  Qantas said in an interview that the practice has been occurring for a number of months for the passengers' safety to mitigate the rare chance of fire.
Revised:  The company said in an interview that the practice has been occurring for a number of months for the passengers' safety to mitigate the rare chance of fire.
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Original: Qantas, Australia's primary airline, has begun checking the batteries of w:Dell | Dell and Apple computers and in some cases removing them for the safety of the passengers.
Revised: Qantas, Australia's primary airline, has begun checking the batteries of Dell and Apple computers and in some cases removing them for the safety of the passengers.
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Original: Helen Clark, as well as other opposition to the idea , has said that New Zealand would not have a shared currency, but an Australian currency.
Revised: Helen Clark, Prime Minister of New Zealand , has said that New Zealand would not have a shared currency, but an Australian currency.
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Original:  The dollar we use then would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving our interest rates that are unrelated to the state of our economy.
Revised:  She fears that the new dollar would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving our interest rates that are unrelated to the state of our economy.
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Original:  The dollar we use then would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving our interest rates that are unrelated to the state of our economy.
Revised:  The dollar we use then would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving interest rates that are unrelated to the state of our economy.
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Original:  The dollar we use then would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving our interest rates that are unrelated to the state of our economy.
Revised:  The dollar we use then would be run by a Reserve Bank, driving our interest rates that are unrelated to the state of the New Zealand economy.
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Original: The Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) announced India’s first commercial launch of  Polar Satellite Launch Vehicle (PSLV).
Revised: The Indian Space Research Organisation (ISRO) announced India’s first commercial launch of the Polar Satellite Launch Vehicle (PSLV).
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Original:  Currently, only the United States, USA, Russia, China, the Ukraine and the European Space Agency have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
Revised:  Currently, only the United States, Russia, China, the Ukraine and the European Space Agency have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
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Original:  Currently, only the United States, USA, Russia, China, the Ukraine and the European Space Agency have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
Revised:  Currently, only the United States, USA, Russia, China, Ukraine and the European Space Agency have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
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Revised:  The PSLV rocket only has the capability of carrying relatively lighter loads of under 1,000 kilograms, but ISRO hopes to increase payloads soon
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Original:  It is carrying a Italian satellite AGILE which will gather information about the origins of the universe through imaging of distant celestial objects in the X-ray and Gamma ray regions of the electromagnetic spectrum.
Revised:  It is carrying the Italian satellite AGILE which will gather information about the origins of the universe through imaging of distant celestial objects in the X-ray and Gamma ray regions of the electromagnetic spectrum.
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Original:  Image source|NASA India joined the elite club of nations who have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
Revised:  India joined the elite club of nations who have the capacity to deploy their space exploration resources for commercial use.
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Original: Classes resume at Virginia Tech Students gathering on April 17, 2007 Classes resumed today at Virginia Tech in Virginia, United States, for the first time since the April 16, 2007 mass shooting.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Roanoke Times reported that the campus seemed tranquil and that most students were wearing the school colors, orange and maroon.
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Original:  The Yeltsin era was a traumatic period in Russian history— a period marked by widespread corruption, economic collapse, and enormous political and social problems.
Revised:  The Yeltsin era was a traumatic period in Russian history— marked by widespread corruption, economic collapse, and enormous political and social problems.
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Original:  He used this occasion as an opportunity to criticize a "monopolistic" United States foreign policy, and to state that Vladimir Putin was the right choice for Russi 
Revised:  He used this occasion as an opportunity to criticize a "monopolistic" United States foreign policy, and to state that Vladimir Putin was the right choice for Russia 
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Original:  He used this occasion as an opportunity to criticize a "monopolistic" United States foreign policy, and to state that Vladimir Putin was the right choice for Russi
Revised:  He used this occasion as an opportunity to criticize a "monopolistic" United States foreign policy, and to state that Vladimir Putin was the right choice for Russia
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Original:  A report issued over two weeks ago by the Committee on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination has not received comment from the government in the media, and domestic media coverage has been scant, as reported by the Sydney Morning Herald, and confirmed by a search of news search engine news.google.com     
Revised:  A report issued over two weeks ago by the Committee on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination has not received comment from the government in the media, and domestic media coverage has been scant, as reported by the Sydney Morning Herald, and confirmed by a search of news search engine news.google.com . 
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Original:  These  criticisms were,
Revised:  These The criticisms were,
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Original: The Australian Government has been keeping quiet about a UN committee's repeated criticism of its record on race issues.
Revised: The Australian government has been keeping quiet about a UN committee's repeated criticism of its record on race issues.
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Original:  , but had forgotten that Australia had twice helped to save France in two world wars . that there was nothing to stop racially discriminative Commonwealth laws proposed reforms to HREOC that may limit its independence and hinder its effectiveness at monitoring Australia's compliance with the provisions of the Convention on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination the abolition of the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Commission (ATSIC),
Revised:  . that there was nothing to stop racially discriminative Commonwealth laws proposed reforms to HREOC that may limit its independence and hinder its effectiveness at monitoring Australia's compliance with the provisions of the Convention on the Elimination of Racial Discrimination the abolition of the Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander Commission (ATSIC),
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Original:  and the stateless but failed to note that people arriving legally actually are breaking Australian law that many have been in detention for over three years but didn't note that they are actually law breakers lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security but failed to realise that as non Australian citizens they shouldn't get any money precariousness of circumstances,
Revised:  and the stateless that many have been in detention for over three years but didn't note that they are actually law breakers lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security but failed to realise that as non Australian citizens they shouldn't get any money precariousness of circumstances,
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Original:  and the stateless but failed to note that people arriving legally actually are breaking Australian law that many have been in detention for over three years but didn't note that they are actually law breakers lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security but failed to realise that as non Australian citizens they shouldn't get any money precariousness of circumstances,
Revised:  and the stateless but failed to note that people arriving legally actually are breaking Australian law that many have been in detention for over three years lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security but failed to realise that as non Australian citizens they shouldn't get any money precariousness of circumstances,
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Original:  and the stateless but failed to note that people arriving legally actually are breaking Australian law that many have been in detention for over three years but didn't note that they are actually law breakers lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security but failed to realise that as non Australian citizens they shouldn't get any money precariousness of circumstances,
Revised:  and the stateless but failed to note that people arriving legally actually are breaking Australian law that many have been in detention for over three years but didn't note that they are actually law breakers lack of access by many migrants and protected refugees to social security precariousness of circumstances,
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Original:  and denial of right of family reunion, for many protected refugees but forgot to tell the law breakers that they put themselvesin that position by arriving illegally that the Federal Government has rejected most of the recommendations adopted by the Council for Aboriginal Reconciliation given in 200
Revised:  and denial of right of family reunion, for many protected refugees that the Federal Government has rejected most of the recommendations adopted by the Council for Aboriginal Reconciliation given in 200
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Original: The drink, simular to sparkling wine, is a non-alcoholic sparkling drink which is currently for sale in Alberta liquor stores.
Revised: The drink, similar to sparkling wine, is a non-alcoholic sparkling drink which is currently for sale in Alberta liquor stores.
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Original:  Tracy Franklin, president of MADD in Calgary, said: "It's calling out to kids, but the whole thing is geared as a champagne bottle, as an alcohol product . " " Do we want to give them something, although it's non-alcoholic, and have them partying like an adult?"
Revised:  Tracy Franklin, president of MADD in Calgary, said: "It's calling out to kids, but the whole thing is geared as a champagne bottle, as an alcohol product . .. Do we want to give them something, although it's non-alcoholic, and have them partying like an adult?"
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Original:  Toy Guns and candy cigarettes are amongst the other "adult products" being marketed to kids in countries including the United States.
Revised:  Toy guns and candy cigarettes are amongst the other "adult products" being marketed to kids in countries including the United States.
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Original:  Toy Guns and candy cigarettes are amongst the other "adult products" being marketed to kids in countries including the United States.
Revised:  Toy Guns and candy cigarettes are among the other "adult products" being marketed to kids in countries including the United States.
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Original:  Canada banned them along with some other countries  . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it has non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
Revised:  Canada , along with some other countries . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it has non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
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Original:  Canada banned them along with some other countries  . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it has non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
Revised:  Canada banned them along with some other countries , has banned them . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it has non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
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Original:  Canada banned them along with some other countries  . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it has non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
Revised:  Canada banned them along with some other countries . President of the German company responsible for the distribution of Robby Bubble, Darryl Weinbren, defended his product saying it is non-alcoholic and parents are responsible for serving their children the drink.
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Original: 120px| A glass of sparkling wine.
Revised:  A glass of sparkling wine.
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Original:  A new drink called Robby Bubble has sparkled up some sparkled debate with distributor's and Mothers Against Drunk Driving (MADD) in Calgary, Alberta.
Revised:  A new drink called Robby Bubble has sparkled up some sparkled debate with distributors and Mothers Against Drunk Driving (MADD) in Calgary, Alberta.
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Original:  United has never defeated Milan over two legs, having lost twice to them in semi-finals, and once in the round of sixteen previously.
Revised:  United have never defeated Milan over two legs, having lost twice to them in semi-finals, and once in the round of sixteen previously.
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Original:  With injuries mounting for United as of late , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Garbriel Heinze in the center of defense.
Revised:  With injuries mounting for United , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Garbriel Heinze in the center of defense.
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Original:  With injuries mounting for United as of late , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Garbriel Heinze in the center of defense.
Revised:  With injuries mounting for United as of late , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Gabriel Heinze in the center of defense.
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Original:  With injuries mounting for United as of late , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Garbriel Heinze in the center of defense.
Revised:  With injuries mounting for United as of late , they were forced to play an extremely altered back line, with John O'Shea and Garbriel Heinze in the centre of defense.
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Original:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois while scientists exploring a coal mind .
Revised:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois while scientists exploring a coal mine .
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Original:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois while scientists  exploring a coal mine.
Revised:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois while scientists were exploring a coal mine.
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Original:  The quake caused the whole region to drop below sea level whereupon the forest became buried in mud, preserving it forever," said one of the paleobotanists who works at the University of Bristol in the United Kingdom and who observed the fossil, Howard Falcon-Lang.
Revised:  The quake caused the whole region to drop below sea level whereupon the forest became buried in mud, preserving it forever," said one of the paleobotanists who works at the University of Bristol in the U.K. and who observed the fossil, Howard Falcon-Lang.
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Original:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois while scientists were exploring a coal mine.
Revised:  A fossilized rain forest over 300 million years old, in its entirety, has been found in Illinois when coal miners called in scientists to look at the huge extent and density of fossils they found in a mine.
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Original:  It is the largest  forest ever to be found both in prehistoric times and present day earth .
Revised:  It is the largest forest ever to be found .
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Original:  A suicide bomber in a car blew himself up in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq at a military checkpoint killing at least 9 United States soldiers and wounding at least 20 other soldiers.
Revised:  One or more suicide car bombers detonated explosives at a U.S. military outpost in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq at a military checkpoint killing at least 9 United States soldiers and wounding at least 20 other soldiers.
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Original:  A suicide bomber in a car blew himself up in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq at a military checkpoint killing at least 9 United States soldiers and wounding at least 20 other soldiers.
Revised:  A suicide bomber in a car blew himself up in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq . It killed at least 9 United States soldiers and wounding at least 20 other soldiers.
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Original:  A suicide bomber in a car blew himself up in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq at a military checkpoint killing at least 9 United States soldiers and wounding at least 20 other soldiers.
Revised:  A suicide bomber in a car blew himself up in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq at a military checkpoint killing at least 9 United States soldiers and wounded at least 20 other soldiers.
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Original:  A militant group inside Iraq , Ansar al-Sunna, has claimed to be responsible for the blast in a statement they posted on an internet website. ] 
Revised:  A militant group inside Iraq , Ansar al-Sunna, has claimed to be responsible for the blast in a statement they posted on an internet website. in] 
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Original:  One or more suicide car bombers detonated explosives at a U.S. military outpost in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq.
Revised:  A suicide car bomber detonated explosives at a U.S. military outpost in the Province of Diyala in the city of Baqubah, Iraq.
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Original:  "We have seen a lot of recent attacks up in Diyala... that have been part of the fight for the province," said Lieutenant-Colonel Christopher Garver, a spokesman for the U.S. military in Iraq.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A militant group calling itself the Islamic State in Iraq claimed in a statement they posted on a website: "Two knights from the Islamic State in Iraq ... in%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% two booby-trapped trucks hit the heart of the Crusader American headquarters in the region of Diyala."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A militant group calling itself the Islamic State in Iraq claimed in a statement they posted on a website: "Two knights from the Islamic State in Iraq ... in%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% two booby-trapped trucks hit the heart of the Crusader American headquarters in the region of Diyala."
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A militant group calling itself the Islamic State in Iraq claimed in a statement they posted on a website: "Two knights from the Islamic State in Iraq ... %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% two booby-trapped trucks hit the heart of the Crusader American headquarters in the region of Diyala."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A militant group calling itself the Islamic State in Iraq claimed in a statement they posted on a website: "Two knights from the Islamic State in Iraq ... in%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% two booby-trapped trucks hit the heart of the Crusader American headquarters in the region of Diyala."
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Original:  At least 3,333 American troops have been killed since 2003 when the U.S. invaded Iraq.
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