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Original:  Khamenei believes that rejecting a thorough discussion of all the disagreements between the United States and Iran is a "firm, logical and defendable policy.   
Revised:  Khamenei believes that rejecting a thorough discussion of all the disagreements between the United States and Iran is a "firm, logical and defendable policy. " 
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Original: The Supreme Leader of Iran, Grand Ayatollah Ali Khamenei has approved talks with the United States to deal with the security situation in Iraq but has said the discussions won't involve other outstanding issues between the two countries such as the Iran's nuclear program.
Revised: The Supreme Leader of Iran, Grand Ayatollah Ali Khamenei has approved talks with the United States to deal with the security situation in Iraq but has said the discussions won't involve other outstanding issues between the two countries such as Iran's nuclear program.
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Original:  Khamenei, as the supreme leader of Iran, has the final say in all state issues under Iran's Rule of the Islamic Jurisprudent .
Revised:  Khamenei, as the supreme leader of Iran, has the final say in all state issues under Iran's Rule of the Islamic Jurisprudence .
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Original:  "    I will defend the independence of France.
Revised:  " From this day on and for the duration of your mandate, you embody France, symbolize the republic and represent all the French people," he said as he made Sarkozy the 23rd President of France. I will defend the independence of France.
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Original:  "    I will defend the independence of France.
Revised:  " " I will defend the independence of France.
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Original:  "There is a need to unite the French people ... and to meet commitments because never before has (public) confidence been so shaken and so fragile."
Revised:  "There is a need to unite the French people ... and to meet commitments because never before has public confidence been so shaken and so fragile."
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Original:  [[Image:Unknownsoldier paris.jpg|Tomb of the Unknown Soldier beneath the Arc de Triomphe ]] Later in the day, Sarkorzy rekindled the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier beneath the Arc de Triomphe in Paris .
Revised:  [[Image:Unknownsoldier paris.jpg|Tomb of the Unknown Soldier beneath the Arc de Triomphe ]] Later in the day, Sarkorzy rekindled the Tomb of the Unknown Soldier .
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Original:  Wikinews sent professional photographer David Fore of Lloyd David Photography to the recent Christy Carlson Romano concert at Sesame Place theme park in Longhorn , Pennsylvania.
Revised:  Wikinews sent professional photographer David Fore of Lloyd David Photography to the recent Christy Carlson Romano concert at Sesame Place theme park in Langhorne , Pennsylvania.
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Original: Sesame Place recently opened for the season, adding Abby Caddaby to its cast of  Muppets.
Revised: Sesame Place recently opened for the season, adding Abby Cadabby to its cast of Muppets.
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Original:  Wikinews sent professional photographer David Fore of Lloyd David Photography  to the recent Christy Carlson Romano concert at Sesame Place theme park in Langhorne, Pennsylvania.
Revised:  Wikinews sent professional photographer David Fore of Lloyd David Photography to go to the recent Christy Carlson Romano concert at Sesame Place theme park in Langhorne, Pennsylvania.
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Original:  Christy hangs out with Sesame Street characters at the theme park, before appearing in the daily parade .
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Original: In New Jersey, USA , 18,000 acres, or 20 square miles, of pine forests are ablaze.
Revised: In New Jersey, United States , 18,000 acres, or 20 square miles, of pine forests are ablaze.
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Original: The Head of the Army said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be "a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable".
Revised: The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be "a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable".
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Original: Prince Harry, properly known as Prince Henry of Wales who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will not be going to Iraq .
Revised: Prince Harry, properly known as Prince Henry of Wales who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will be prohibited from going .
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, said he would keep his previous decision of Prince Harry going to Iraq under constant review and has now said that he will not be allowed to go .
Revised:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, said he would keep his previous decision of Prince Harry going to Iraq under constant review and has now said that he will not be allowed .
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Original: Prince Harry , properly known as Prince Henry of Wales  who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will be prohibited from going.
Revised: Prince Harry ; properly known as Prince Henry of Wales who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will be prohibited from going.
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Original: Prince Harry , properly known as Prince Henry of Wales  who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will be prohibited from going.
Revised: Prince Harry , properly known as Prince Henry of Wales , who was set to go to Iraq with his regiment will be prohibited from going.
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, said he would keep his previous decision of Prince Harry going to Iraq under constant review and has now said that he will not be allowed  .
Revised:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, said he would keep his previous decision of Prince Harry going to Iraq under constant review and has now said that he will not be allowed to go to Iraq .
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Original:  A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making  saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him " and " the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK.
Revised:  A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making , saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him " and " the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK.
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Original:  A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making  saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him " and " the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK.
Revised:  A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him , the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK.
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, said he would keep his previous decision of Prince Harry going to Iraq under constant review but has now said that he will not be allowed.
Revised:  The Chief of the General Staff (Head of the British Army) General Sir Richard Dannatt, has decided Prince Harry would not be deployed based on his review of specific risks.
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be "  a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ". Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed  , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
Revised:  " a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ". Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be "  a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ". Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed  , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
Revised:  The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be " a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ." Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
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Original:  The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be "  a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ". Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed  , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
Revised:  The Chief of the General Staff said that Prince Harry going to Iraq would be " a degree of risk that I now deem unacceptable ". Despite Prince Harry's previous threats to quit the army if he was not allowed to deploy to Iraq , a spokesman has said he will stay in the army.
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Original:   A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making, saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him, the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK.   
Revised:  A number of threats have been a factor in the Chief of the General Staff's decision making, saying that "sending him in not only endangers those around him, the effect of being kidnapped would be a blow to the entire UK. " 
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Original:  Gilmour noted an oncoming recession and called libraries "just one more casualty of the Iraq War," while Walker said voters reacted against tax-and-spend measures  
Revised:  Gilmour noted an oncoming recession and called libraries "just one more casualty of the Iraq War," while Walker said voters reacted against tax-and-spend measures . 
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Original:  Gilmour noted an oncoming recession and called libraries "just one more casualty of the Iraq War," while Walker said voters reacted against tax-and-spend measures  
Revised:  Gilmour noted an oncoming recession and called libraries "just one more casualty of the Iraq War," while Walker said voters reacted against tax-and-spend measures Related new
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Original: Jackson County voters rejected measure 15-75, which would have provided funding to reopen county libraries, closed since April 6.
Revised: Jackson County , Oregon in the United States voted to reject measure 15-75, which would have provided funding to reopen county libraries, closed since April 6.
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Original: The man was arrested Sunday by South Simcoe , Ontario police after his pickup truck was pulled over on Ontario Provincial Highway 11 in Stroud, Ontario, Canada.
Revised: The man was arrested Sunday by South Simcoe Police after his pickup truck was pulled over on Ontario Provincial Highway 11 in Stroud, Ontario, Canada.
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Original: "When things weren't going our way at the end of the second period, we could've packed it in there , and said, 'Ah, you know it's too tough.
Revised: "When things weren't going our way at the end of the second period, we could've packed it in there . You know it's too tough.
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Original: Derek Roy, Daniel Briere, Teppo Numminen and Jaroslav Spacek of the Buffalo Sabres, pre game warm up, Jan. 2007.
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Original:  But we battled through some tough situations," said miller to reporters after the game.
Revised:  But we battled through some tough situations," said Miller to reporters after the game.
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Original:  Marine biologists say that the two lost, mother and male calf Humpback Whales that swam into the Sacramento River in Sacramento, California, have sustained injuries from a boat propeller blade and need medical attention if they do not return to their homes in the Pacific Ocean 
Revised:  Marine biologists say that the two lost, mother and male calf Humpback Whales that swam into the Sacramento River in Sacramento, California, have sustained injuries from a boat propeller blade and need medical attention if they do not return to their homes in the Pacific Ocean .
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Original:  The then enlarged all the photographs using a computer and determined the extent of the injuries.
Revised:  They then enlarged all the photographs using a computer and determined the extent of the injuries.
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Original:  A team of European and American astronomers have discovered the smallest extrasolar planetdetected so far , located not far from Earth and they say that it has oceans and rivers of hot solid water.
Revised:  A team of European and American astronomers have discovered the smallest extrasolar planetdetected so far , located not far from Earth , contains has oceans and rivers of hot solid water.
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Original:  A team of European and American astronomers say that a recently discovered extrasolar planet, located not far from Earth, contains has oceans and rivers of hot solid water.
Revised:  A team of European and American astronomers say that a recently discovered extrasolar planet, located not far from Earth, contains oceans and rivers of hot solid water.
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Original: Scientists say that here is likely no life on the planet, but that if there is such a large amount of water on it, then it is likely that other planets will also have water.
Revised: Scientists say that there is not likely to be any life on the planet, but that if there is such a large amount of water on it, then it is likely that other planets will also have water.
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Original:  The planets surface temperature is believed to be near 540 degrees Fahrenheit [250 degrees Celsius].
Revised:  The planet's surface temperature is believed to be near 540 degrees Fahrenheit [250 degrees Celsius].
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Original: This artist's concept shows the newly discovered Neptune-sized extrasolar planet circling the star Gliese 436.
Revised: This artist's concept shows the Neptune-sized extrasolar planet circling the star Gliese 436.
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Original: The nomination did not come as a surprise after the British newspaper The Financial Times had reported on May 8 that Sarkozy had introduced Fillon to Tony Blair in a telephone conversation.
Revised: The nomination did not come as a surprise after the British newspaper the Financial Times had reported on May 8 that Sarkozy had introduced Fillon to Tony Blair in a telephone conversation.
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Original:  François Fillon (53) has been the political advisor of Sarkozy in the UMP for the past 2 years, and he was the campaign leader during the recent presidential elections.
Revised:  François Fillon (53) has been the political advisor of Sarkozy in the UMP for the past 2 years, and he was Sarko's campaign leader during the recent presidential elections.
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Original:  A poll on Wednesday predicted a 1.5\% increase in votes for the UMP, up to 40\%, compared to 28\% status-quo for the allied socialists  
Revised:  A poll on Wednesday predicted a 1.5\% increase in votes for the UMP, up to 40\%, compared to 28\% status-quo for the allied socialists . 
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Original:  Filon has experience in negotiating with the trade unions, having undertaken controversial reforms of the 35-hour workweek and the pension system.
Revised:  Fillon has experience in negotiating with the trade unions, having undertaken controversial reforms of the 35-hour workweek and the pension system.
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Original: The Guardian reported that Filon is an Anglophile;
Revised: The Guardian reported that Fillon is an Anglophile;
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Original:  The new President of France  Nicolas Sarkozy has appointed François Fillon to head the new French government.
Revised:  The new President of France , Nicolas Sarkozy has appointed François Fillon to head the new French government.
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Original:  The nomination did not come as a surprise after the British newspaper the Financial Times had reported on May 8 that Sarkozy had introduced Fillon to Tony Blair in a telephone conversation.
Revised:  The nomination did not come as a surprise after the British newspaper the had reported on May 8 that Sarkozy had introduced Fillon to Tony Blair in a telephone conversation.
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Original:  François Fillon (53) has been the political advisor of Sarkozy in the UMP for the past 2 years, and he was Sarko's campaign leader during the recent presidential elections.
Revised:  François Fillon (53) has been the political advisor of Sarkozy in the for the past 2 years, and he was Sarko's campaign leader during the recent presidential elections.
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Original:  Fillon has experience in negotiating with the trade unions, having undertaken controversial reforms of the 35-hour workweek and the pension system.
Revised:  Fillon has experience in negotiating with the trade unions, having undertaken controversial reforms of the and the pension system.
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Original:  The Guardian reported that Fillon is an Anglophile;
Revised:  reported that Fillon is an Anglophile;
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Original:  Fillon had his first experience as a minister in 1993 when he became Minister for the Higher education and Research under PM Édouard Balladur .
Revised:  Fillon had his first experience as a minister in 1993 when he became Minister for the Higher education and Research under PM .
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Original:  Reports say that Sarkozy has offered the foreign minister post to Bernard Kouchner , co-founder of Médecins Sans Frontières , who is seen as being on the left in French politics.
Revised:  Reports say that Sarkozy has offered the foreign minister post to , co-founder of Médecins Sans Frontières , who is seen as being on the left in French politics.
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Original:  Reports say that Sarkozy has offered the foreign minister post to Bernard Kouchner , co-founder of Médecins Sans Frontières , who is seen as being on the left in French politics.
Revised:  Reports say that Sarkozy has offered the foreign minister post to Bernard Kouchner , co-founder of , who is seen as being on the left in French politics.
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Original:  It has been reported that Israeli Air Force (IAF) F-16 aircraft attacked the building housing the Hamas headquarters of the Executive Force , leaving four dead and dozens wounded.
Revised:  It has been reported that Israeli Air Force (IAF) F-16 aircraft attacked the building housing the Hamas headquarters of the Executive Force .
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Original:  The air strike came in the middle of heavy figthing between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing Palestinian factional violence.
Revised:  The air strike came in the middle of heavy fighting between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing Palestinian factional violence.
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Original:  The air strike came in the middle of heavy figthing between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing Palestinian factional violence.
Revised:  The air strike came in the middle of heavy figthing between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing 
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Original: It has been reported that Israeli Air Force (IAF) F-16 aircraft attacked the buildinghousing the Hamas headquarters of the Executive Force .
Revised:  Israeli Air Force (IAF) F-16 aircraft attacked the buildinghousing the Hamas headquarters of the Executive Force .
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Original: Israel launched another air strike into Gaza city at about 2:15 p.m. local time today, the third in two days, leaving four dead and dozens wounded.
Revised: Israel launched another air strike into Gaza city at about 2:15 p.m. local time today, leaving four dead and dozens wounded.
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Original:  The strike comes in the middle of heavy fighting between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing Palestinian factional violence  
Revised:  The strike comes in the middle of heavy fighting between forces loyal to Fatah and to Hamas, part of the ongoing Palestinian factional violence . 
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Original:  Israeli armored units moved into northern Gaza, taking up preparatory positions, an unidentified army spokeswoman told Bloomberg.
Revised:  Israeli armoured units moved into northern Gaza, taking up preparatory positions, an unidentified army spokeswoman told Bloomberg.
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Original: Diesel locomotive of the type that crossed from south to north There has been no rail connection between the north and the south since the w: Korean War divided Korea.
Revised: Diesel locomotive of the type that crossed from south to north There has been no rail connection between the north and the south since the Korean War divided Korea.
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Original:  But today, for the first time in 56 years, two passenger trains crossed the border between North Korea and South Korea   
Revised:  But today, for the first time in 56 years, two passenger trains crossed the border between North Korea and South Korea . 
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Original:  And from the north a train travelled from Kumgang to Jejin.
Revised:  And from the north a train traveled from Kumgang to Jejin.
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Original:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the dematerialized zone since 1951, the border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
Revised:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
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Original:   Riding on rails built by South Korea several years ago, a train traveled from Munsan in the south to Kaesong in the north.
Revised:  Riding on rails built by South Korea several years ago, the train traveled from Munsan in the south to Kaesong in the north.
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Original:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the  border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
Revised:  The train was granted access to the demilitarized zone since 1951, the border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
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Original:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the  border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
Revised:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the heavily guarded border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
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Original:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the  border between North Korea and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
Revised:  The train was the first train to be allowed through the demilitarized zone since 1951, the border between North and South Korea is the most heavily guarded.
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Original:   North Korea has so far only approved this one trial run of the trains
Revised:  North Korea has approved only this one trial run of the trains
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Original: ]] The elections in Zimbabwe have started, with both the ruling party and the opposition predicting a victoryfor the current government .
Revised: ]] Elections in Zimbabwe began with both the ruling party and the opposition predicting a victoryfor the current government .
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Original: ]] The elections in Zimbabwe have started, with both the ruling party and the opposition predicting a victoryfor the current government .
Revised: ]] The elections in Zimbabwe have started, with both the ruling and opposition parties predicting victory .
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Original:  The current president of the country, Robert Mugabeis predicting a "mountainous victory" for his party, the Zimbabwe African National Union - Patriotic Front (Zanu-PF).
Revised:  Current president Robert Mugabe, predicts a "mountainous victory" for his party, the Zimbabwe African National Union - Patriotic Front (Zanu-PF).
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