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Original:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, with one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts,  one home run and two balls batted .
Revised:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, allowing one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts, one home run and two balls batted .
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Original:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, with one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts,  one home run and two balls batted .
Revised:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, with one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts, and one home run and two balls batted .
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Original:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, with one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts,  one home run and two balls batted .
Revised:  Dustin Moseley started for the LA Angels pitching six innings, with one run on five hits with 24 at bats, one error, three strikeouts, one home run given up .
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Original:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winner three run homer  but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher , who let the game slide.
Revised:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winner three run homer , but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher , who let the game slide.
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Original:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winner three run homer  but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher , who let the game slide.
Revised:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winner three run homer but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher who let the game slide.
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Original:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game  his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
Revised:  Aaron Fultz was the winning pitcher for the game his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
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Original:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game  his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
Revised:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game , his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
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Original:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game  his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
Revised:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game his second win of the young season. Scot Shields was saddled with his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
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Original:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game  his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss , the save going to the closer Joe Borowski.
Revised:  Aaron Fultz was the wining pitcher for the game his second win ,the losing pitcher being Scot Shields his first loss of the season. The save was credtied to closer Joe Borowski.
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Original:  Clevelands next game well be another home game against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game seris.
Revised:  Cleveland's next game well be another home game against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game seris.
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Original: The Cleveland Indians pulled off a stuning win late in the game atMiller Parkin Milwaukee, Thursday, defeating the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim.
Revised: The Cleveland Indians pulled off a stuning win late in the game at Miller Park in Milwaukee, Thursday, defeating the Los Angeles Angels of Anaheim.
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Original: The same couldn't be said for the Angels pitches squad, though.
Revised: The same couldn't be said for the Angels pitchers squad, though.
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Original:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winner three run homer, but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher who let the game slide.
Revised:  It was not Dustin Moseley who gave up the game winning three run homer, but Scot Shields, the relief pitcher who let the game slide.
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Original:   Cleveland's next game well be another home game against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game seris .
Revised:  Cleveland's next game will be a home game (this time in Cleveland) against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game seris .
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Original:   Cleveland's next game well be another home game against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game seris .
Revised:  Cleveland's next game well be another home game against the Chicago White Sox at 7:05 tonight, the first of a three game series .
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Original:  As the Angels well face the Boston Red Sox at 4:05 tonight, the first of a four game seris .
Revised:  As the Angels well face the Boston Red Sox at 4:05 tonight, the first of a four game series .
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Original:  Victory would assure Australia of progress to the semi-finals , whilst Ireland cannot progress .
Revised:  Australia are now assured of a place in the semi-finals , whilst Ireland cannot progress .
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Original:  Victory would assure Australia of progress to the semi-finals , whilst Ireland cannot progress .
Revised:  Victory would assure Australia of progress to the semi-finals of the World Cup, the first team to achieve as such .
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Original:  Sir Alex Ferguson says to Manchester United's website that it is fantastic news.
Revised: Spanish clubs Barcelona and Real Madrid have been showing interest in the Portuguese midfielder for months, and the deal is sure to quiet transfer rumours for the time being. Sir Alex Ferguson says to Manchester United's website that it is fantastic news.
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Original:  Sir Alex Ferguson says to Manchester United's website that it is fantastic news.
Revised:  Sir Alex Ferguson said to Manchester United's website that it is fantastic news.
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Original:  He says also that Ronaldo has a good relationship with the club, the staff and the fans.
Revised:  He also said that Ronaldo has a good relationship with the club, the staff and the fans.
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Original:  Ronaldo says that he is happy in club and he wants to win more trophies with them  
Revised:  Ronaldo says that he is happy in club and he wants to win more trophies with them . 
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Original: Cristiano Ronaldo  has signed a new five-year deal with Manchester United.
Revised: Cristiano Ronaldo Cristiano Ronaldo has signed a new five-year deal with Manchester United.
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Original: Scheduled to take place on May 6 in Seattle, this will be the first induction ceremony since the fall of fame moved to Seattle from its previous home in lawrence , Kansas.
Revised: Scheduled to take place on May 6 in Seattle, this will be the first induction ceremony since the fall of fame moved to Seattle from its previous home in Lawrence , Kansas.
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Original:  Inductees come from four categories: film, television and media, literature, art, and a category callled "open" which is designed for individuals who do not fit into one of the other categories.
Revised:  Inductees come from four categories: film, television and media, literature, art, and a category called "open" which is designed for individuals who do not fit into one of the other categories.
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Original:  DIck and Bonestell died in the 1980s.
Revised:  Dick and Bonestell died in the 1980s.
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Original:  Steven Spielberg Director of such science fiction film classics as E.T. the Extra Terrestrial, Close Encounters of the Third Kind, and Jurassic Park"" . Philip K. Dick Profilic author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be some of the biggest Hollywood science fiction blockbusters of all time.
Revised:  Steven Spielberg Director of such science fiction film classics as E.T. the Extra Terrestrial, Close Encounters of the Third Kind, and Jurassic Park"" . Philip K. Dick Prolific author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be some of the biggest Hollywood science fiction blockbusters of all time.
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Original:  He died in 1992 before the release of the first of the filma based on his work, Blade Runner, which was based on his book, w:Do Andriods Dream of Electric Sheep.
Revised:  He died in 1992 before the release of the first of the films based on his work, Blade Runner, which was based on his book, w:Do Andriods Dream of Electric Sheep.
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Original:  He died in 1992 before the release of the first of the filma based on his work, Blade Runner, which was based on his book, w:Do Andriods Dream of Electric Sheep.
Revised:  He died in 1992 before the release of the first of the filma based on his work, Blade Runner, which was based on his book, Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep.
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Original:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety,  Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
Revised:  His work has been turned into other Hollywood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety, Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
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Original:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety,  Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
Revised:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers story Second Variety, Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
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Original:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety,  Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
Revised:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety, Spielberg's Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
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Original:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety,  Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
Revised:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety, Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Paycheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
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Original:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety,  Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which alsi is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
Revised:  His work has been turned into other hollweood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers stroy Second Variety, Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Patcheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which also is based on Dick's short story of the same name 
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Original:  Philip K. Dick Prolific author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be some of the biggest Hollywood science fiction blockbusters of all time .
Revised:  Philip K. Dick Prolific author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be Hollywood science fiction blockbusters of all time .
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Original:  Philip K. Dick Prolific author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be some of the biggest Hollywood science fiction blockbusters of all time .
Revised:  Philip K. Dick Prolific author of many science fiction novels, novellas and short stories - many of which have gone on to be some of the biggest Hollywood science fiction blockbuster films .
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Original:  His work has been turned into other Hollywood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers story Second Variety, Spielberg's Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Paycheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which also is based on Dick's short story of the same name.
Revised:  His work has been turned into other Hollywood films, such as Total Recall based the short story We Can Remember It For You Wholesale, Screamers story Second Variety, Spielberg's Minority Report based on Dick's short story of the same name, Paycheck based on Dick's short story of the same name, and the upcoming Keanu Reeves film, A Scanner Darkly which also is based on Dick's novel of the same name.
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Original: After un-elected Green Party leader Elizabeth May announced her plans for running against Conservative MP Peter MacKay in his riding of Central Nova in the next federal election, the Liberal Party of Canada have decided to not have a candidate in the riding.
Revised: After non-elected Green Party leader Elizabeth May announced her plans for running against Conservative MP Peter MacKay in his riding of Central Nova in the next federal election, the Liberal Party of Canada have decided to not have a candidate in the riding.
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Original:  After non-elected Green Party leader Elizabeth May announced her plans for running against Conservative MP Peter MacKay in his riding of Central Nova in the next federal election, the Liberal Party of Canada have decided to not have a candidate in the riding.
Revised:  Green Party leader Elizabeth May announced her plans for running against Conservative MP Peter MacKay in his riding of Central Nova in the next federal election, the Liberal Party of Canada have decided to not have a candidate in the riding.
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Original:  DoubleClick is currently owned by the majority share-holders Hellman & Friedman, a private equity firm, with JMI Management also having a large stake in the company  
Revised:  DoubleClick is currently owned by the majority share-holders Hellman & Friedman, a private equity firm, with JMI Management also having a large stake in the company . 
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Original:  DoubleClick is currently owned by the majority share-holders Hellman & Friedman, a private equity firm, with JMI Management also having a large stake in the company  
Revised:  DoubleClick is currently owned by the majority share-holders Hellman & Friedman, a private equity firm, with JMI Management also having a large stake in the company Related new
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Original: Banned rally leads to Kasparov arrest Russian Opposition leader Gary Kasparov has been detained by Russian authorities during a security operation against a rally organised by  Other Russia.
Revised: Banned rally leads to Kasparov arrest Russian Opposition leader Gary Kasparov has been detained by Russian authorities during a security operation against a rally organised by The Other Russia.
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Original:   Other Russia is a political party opposed to Russian leader Vladimir Putin 
Revised:  The Other Russia is a political party opposed to Russian leader Vladimir Putin 
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Original:   Other Russia is a political party opposed to Russian leader Vladimir Putin 
Revised:  Other Russia is an umbrella coalition that gathers opponents of Russian President Vladimir Putin. 
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Original: BBC news and the Associated Press are reporting that two suicide bombers have mounted an attack in Casablanca, Morocco.
Revised: Two bombs went off today in Boulevard Moulay Youssef in central Casablanca, Morocco.
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Original:  Moroccan authorities have been downplaying a possible connection with Wednesday's bombings in neighboring Algieria .
Revised:  Moroccan authorities have been downplaying a possible connection with Wednesday's bombings in neighboring w:Algeria .
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Original:  Moroccan authorities have been downplaying a possible connection with Wednesday's bombings in neighboring w: Algeria.
Revised:  Moroccan authorities have been downplaying a possible connection with Wednesday's bombings in neighboring Algeria.
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Original: US troops guarding Camp Bucca in southern Iraq have apparently foiled an escape plan by uncovering a 600 ft work-in-progress escape tunnel at the sprawling, 6,000+ person, detention center.
Revised: US troops guarding Camp Bucca in southern Iraq have apparently foiled an escape plan by uncovering a 600 ft of escape tunnel leading from the sprawling, 6,000+ person, detention center.
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Original:  No information has been given regarding prisoners responsible for the effort.
Revised:  No information has been given regarding any prisoners who may have been responsible for the effort.
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Original:      Discovered on Thursday, The New York Times discribed it as the "largest tunnel discovered so far", implying that other such tunnels have been found before    .
Revised:  Discovered on Thursday, The New York Times discribed it as the "largest tunnel discovered so far", perhaps implying that a number of such tunnels had been found before .
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Original:      Discovered on Thursday, The New York Times discribed it as the "largest tunnel discovered so far", implying that other such tunnels have been found before    .
Revised:  Discovered on Thursday, The New York Times discribed it as the "largest tunnel discovered so far", implying that other such tunnels have been found before . .
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Original:  The board examined why NASA's Mars Global Surveyor went silent in November 2006, and made recommendations on improved procedures for future missions.
Revised:  The board examined why NASA's Mars Global Surveyor 
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Original:  That was the last communication that NASA controllers had with the spacecraft   .
Revised:  That was the last communication that NASA controllers had with the spacecraft . .
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Original: A complex series of events, including a five month-old computer error  was responsible for the battery failure that led to the loss of NASA's Mars Global Surveyor last year, an internal review board says.
Revised: A complex series of events, including a five month-old computer error , was responsible for the battery failure that led to the loss of NASA's Mars Global Surveyor last year, an internal review board says.
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Original:  The Global Surveyor was the first US mission to mars in twenty years, For ten years, the craft returned detailed information to NASA scientists providing new insights, including evidence that appeared to show the presence of water on Mars and identification of deposits of water-related minerals, which led to selection of a Mars rover landing site.
Revised:  The Global Surveyor was the first US mission to Mars in twenty years, For ten years, the craft returned detailed information to NASA scientists providing new insights, including evidence that appeared to show the presence of water on Mars and identification of deposits of water-related minerals, which led to selection of a Mars rover landing site.
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Original:  The Global Surveyor was the longest operating spacecraft at Mars and had lasted four times longer then expected.
Revised:  The Global Surveyor was the longest operating spacecraft at Mars and had lasted four times longer than expected.
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Original: New Zealand are taking on South Africa in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada  . Victory for New Zealand will assure them of a semi final place and whilst a win for South Africa would not assure progression it would put them 4 points clear of England who are currently 5th within the Super 8s table.
Revised: New Zealand are taking on South Africa in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada . 
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Original:  England can still miss their spot if they win to hosts Windies and Bangladesh.
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Original: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia and Sri Lanka and a unknown team.
Revised: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia , Sri Lanka and a unknown team.
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Original: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia and Sri Lanka and a unknown team.
Revised: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia and Sri Lanka and an unknown team.
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Original: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia, Sri Lanka and an unknown team.
Revised: New Zealand beat South Africa by 5 wickets in the Super 8 phase of the World Cup at the Cricket National Stadium, St. George's, Grenada, securing their place in the semi-finals, along with Australia, Sri Lanka and a currently unknown team.
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