wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   Members of the Parliament of India and state Legislative Assemblies are eligible to vote for the largely ceremonial office   
Revised:  Members of the Parliament of India and state Legislative Assemblies are eligible to vote for the largely ceremonial office . 
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Original:  She is expected to be sworn in on July 25 in the Central Hall of Parliament  
Revised:  She is expected to be sworn in on July 25 in the Central Hall of Parliament . 
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Original:  The President's role is largely ceremonial , with real executive authority vested in the Council of Ministers, headed by the Prime Minister .
Revised:  The President's role is largely ceremonial .
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Original:  The president is also called Rashtrapati
Revised:  The real executive authority in India is vested in the Council of Ministers, headed by the Prime Minister. In 1966, Indira Gandhi became the first and to date the only female prime minister of India
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Original:  Cadel Evans gained ground on Rasmussen     
Revised:  Cadel Evans gained ground on Rasmussen . 
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Original: Michael Rasmussen of Denmark extended his overall lead, finishing 11th in the stage.
Revised: Michael Rasmussen of Denmark held on to his overall lead, finishing 11th in the stage.
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Original:  The formation was 4-3-2-1 'Christmas Tree' shape with Bastian Schweinsteiger and Mark van Bommel behind Striker Miroslav Klose . Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Germa
Revised:  The formation was 4-3-2-1 'Christmas Tree' shape with Bastian Schweinsteiger and Mark van Bommel behind Striker Miroslav Klose Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Germa
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Original:  The formation was 4-3-2-1 'Christmas Tree' shape with Bastian Schweinsteiger and Mark van Bommel behind Striker Miroslav Klose . Category:Football Match Reports Category:Sports Category:Germa
Revised:  The formation was 4-3-2-1 'Christmas Tree' shape with Bastian Schweinsteiger and Mark van Bommel behind Striker Miroslav Klose . 
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Original: The United States Geological Survey  reported that the first earthquake was produced at 9:27 (-3 UTC) 165 kilometers away from the city of Cruzeiro do Sul, in the Amazonian state of Acre and marked an intensity of 6,1 degrees in the Richter scale.
Revised: The United States Geological Survey (USGS) reported that the first earthquake was produced at 9:27 (-3 UTC) 165 kilometers away from the city of Cruzeiro do Sul, in the Amazonian state of Acre and marked an intensity of 6,1 degrees in the Richter scale.
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Original:  At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another sismode of 6,2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some bolivian cities.
Revised:  At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another earthquake with an intensity of 6,2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some bolivian cities.
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Original:  At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another sismode of 6,2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some bolivian cities.
Revised:  At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another sismode of 6,2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some Bolivian cities.
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Original: At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another earthquake with an intensity of 6.2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some Bolivian cities.
Revised: At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another earthquake with an intensity of 6.2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of Argentina, and the phenomenon felt also in some Bolivian cities.
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Original: At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another earthquake with an intensity of 6.2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon felt also in some Bolivian cities.
Revised: At 12:34 (-3 UTC) another earthquake with an intensity of 6.2 degrees in Richter scale shook the north of the Argentina and the phenomenon was also felt in some Bolivian cities.
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Original:  The United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 storeys .
Revised:  The United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 stories .
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Original: The current record holder, Taipei 101 of Taiwan, has a height of 508 metres and 101 storeys .
Revised: The current record holder, Taipei 101 of Taiwan, has a height of 508 metres and 101 stories .
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Original:  When the Burj Dubai is finished, it is expected to reach nearly 700 metres in height, with approximately 160 storeys .
Revised:  When the Burj Dubai is finished, it is expected to reach nearly 700 metres in height, with approximately 160 stories .
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Original:  The current record holder, Taipei 101 of Taiwan, has a height of 508 metres and 101 storeys .
Revised:  The current record holder, Taipei 101 of Taiwan, has a height of 508 metres and 101 stories .
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Original:  The United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower  currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 storeys.
Revised:  United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 storeys.
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Original:  The United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower  currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 storeys.
Revised:  The United Arab Emirates (UAE) developer Emaar Properties has claimed that their Burj Dubai commercial and residential tower , currently under construction, has become the world's tallest building, reaching a height of 512.1 metres (or 1,680 feet) and 141 storeys.
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Original:  Taipei 101 will maintain the official "tallest building" record for some time to come.
Revised:  , and will retain the "tallest building" record for some time to come.
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Original:  Taipei 101 will maintain the official "tallest building" record for some time to come.
Revised:  Taipei 101 will maintain the official "tallest building" title for some time to come.
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Original:  The Council on Tall Buildings and Urban Habitat sets the criteria for achieving height records for buildings . Emaar Properties is confident that the Burj Dubai will meet the criteria, but it won't be evaluated until some time in late 2008 when construction is complete  .
Revised:  The Council on Tall Buildings and Urban Habitat sets the criteria for achieving height records for buildings , and will not evaluate the Burj Dubai will meet the criteria, but it won't be evaluated until some time in late 2008 when construction is complete .
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Original:  The Council on Tall Buildings and Urban Habitat sets the criteria for achieving height records for buildings . Emaar Properties is confident that the Burj Dubai will meet the criteria, but it won't be evaluated until some time in late 2008 when construction is complete  .
Revised:  The Council on Tall Buildings and Urban Habitat sets the criteria for achieving height records for buildings . Emaar Properties is confident that the Burj Dubai until construction is complete .
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Original:  Heatlh services have seen an increase in emergency calls and the Red Cross has teams on stand-by.
Revised:  Health services have seen an increase in emergency calls and the Red Cross has teams on stand-by.
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Original: lol can i really edit this? talk abotu being ripe for hackers. hi slashdot!
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Original:  To me it is more important to break the viscious triangle of author-reader-advertiser.
Revised:  To me it is more important to break the vicious triangle of author-reader-advertiser.
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Original:  I was therefore already then convinced of the need for digital money: payment with garanteed value but not traceable origin.
Revised:  I was therefore already then convinced of the need for digital money: payment with guaranteed value but not traceable origin.
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Original:  To me a much more important reason to introduce digital money than untraceability is a free market for information. for free (but who pays my time?) by subscription with a name and password valid for a certain length of time by solliciting advertisers to put their ads on the site
Revised:  To me a much more important reason to introduce digital money than untraceability is a free market for information. for free (but who pays my time?) by subscription with a name and password valid for a certain length of time by soliciting advertisers to put their ads on the site
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Original:  It is also totally unrealistic to compare the Wikipedia with a work like the Brittanica (for which you need a subscription because we have no micropayments).
Revised:  It is also totally unrealistic to compare the Wikipedia with a work like the Britannica (for which you need a subscription because we have no micropayments).
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Original: Wikinews: Will it be possible to agree on common standards, with the software companies trying to push there own standards?
Revised: Wikinews: Will it be possible to agree on common standards, with the software companies trying to push their own standards?
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Original:  That's fine als  long as there is no need for continuous contact (e-mail, web, download) but it is never good enough when that need is present (audio, video, TV).
Revised:  That's fine als sic long as there is no need for continuous contact (e-mail, web, download) but it is never good enough when that need is present (audio, video, TV).
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Original:  Are you optimistic, or will it be " The Matrix , but worse"?
Revised:  Are you optimistic, or will it be " , but worse"?
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Original:  According to police, there are 24 dead , 24 injured and two still unaccounted for .
Revised:  According to police, there are 24 dead , 24 injured .
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Original: The riders of the north tram and people in the visitor center had to walk down 300 feet of steps to a freight elevator to be taken to the buttom of the Arch.
Revised: The riders of the north tram and people in the observation center had to walk down 300 feet of steps to a freight elevator to be taken to the buttom of the Arch.
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Original:  Only two people needed treatment for minor injuries.
Revised:  Two people needed treatment for minor injuries.
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Original:  They were meet by anxious families who had been waiting for hours outside the Arch.
Revised:  They were met by anxious families who had been waiting for hours outside the Arch.
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Original:  Contador who is not a contender for the overall, was happy to sit behind the yellow jersey-wearing Rasmussen, and pass him in the final sprint for the finish-line.
Revised:  Contador was happy to sit behind the yellow jersey-wearing Rasmussen, and pass him in the final sprint for the finish-line.
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Original:  This stage starts with a category 2 climb out of Mazamet and then follows a relatively calm route via Carcassonne, Limoux and Quillan before taking on the Port de Pailhères (17 km at 7.2\%) and a very difficult finish at Plateau-de-Beille (16 km at 7.9\%)   
Revised:  This stage starts with a category 2 climb out of Mazamet and then follows a relatively calm route via Carcassonne, Limoux and Quillan before taking on the Port de Pailhères (17 km at 7.2\%) and a very difficult finish at Plateau-de-Beille (16 km at 7.9\%) . 
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Original: Stage 14 profile Alberto Contador  of Spain has won stage 14 of the 2007 Tour de France.
Revised: Stage 14 profile Alberto Contador Alberto Contador of Spain has won stage 14 of the 2007 Tour de France.
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Original:   General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" CONTADOR Alberto 112 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 14' 38" + 02 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
Revised: Stage 14 results General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" CONTADOR Alberto 112 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 14' 38" + 02 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
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Original:   General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" CONTADOR Alberto 112 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 14' 38" + 02 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
Revised:  General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" 2Alberto ContadorDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team + 02 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
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Original:   General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" CONTADOR Alberto 112 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 14' 38" + 02 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
Revised:  General classification after stage 14 RASMUSSEN Michael 58 RABOBANK 64h 12' 15" CONTADOR Alberto 112 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 14' 38" + 2 ' 23" EVANS Cadel 41 PREDICTOR -
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 3 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 4 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 4 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 5 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 6 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 8 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" 9 Alejandro ValverdeCaisse d'Epargne + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 9 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
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Original:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 " +10' 55
Revised:  LOTTO 64h 15' 19" + 03 ' 04" LEIPHEIMER Levi 111 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 16' 44" + 04 ' 29" KLÖDEN Andréas 196 ASTANA 64h 16' 53" + 04 ' 38" SASTRE Carlos 31 TEAM CSC 64h 18' 05" + 05 ' 50" KASHECHKIN Andrey 195 ASTANA 64h 19' 13" + 06 ' 58" ASTARLOZA Mikel 73 EUSKALTEL - EUSKADI 64h 20' 40" + 08 ' 25" VALVERDE Alejandro 18 CAISSE D’EPARGNE 64h 22'00" + 09 ' 45" POPOVYCH Yaroslav 118 DISCOVERY CHANNEL TEAM 64h 23' 10 Yaroslav PopovychDiscovery Channel Pro Cycling Team +10' 55
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Original:  This stage has been selected for the 2007 L'Étape du Tour, in which amateur and club riders ride along in an organised mass participation of a full stage of the Tour.
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Original: The start went smoothly enough when the sudden heavy rain broke out after the first lap.
Revised: The start went smoothly enough but sudden heavy rain broke out after the first lap.
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Original:  Track was flooded causing all drivers to slow down.
Revised:  The track quickly became flooded causing all drivers to slow down.
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Original:  Race was red-flagged on the 5th lap and drivers once again gathered on the starting grid.
Revised:  By the fifth lap, race officials were forced to red-flag the race, bringing it to a complete stpp until the rain cleared up, and drivers once again gathered on the starting grid.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton, who  suffered a crash in the third qualifying session, got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session, got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car.
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Original:  Somehow, Marcus Winkelhock, rooky Spyker-Ferrari driver making his first race in Formula One, became the leader from his 22nd place  .
Revised:  Somehow, Marcus Winkelhock, rookie Spyker-Ferrari driver making his first race in Formula One, became the leader from his 22nd place .
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Original:  Rain stopped as suddenly as it started and the safety car leaved the track after allowing Lewis Hamilton to catch up with the other drivers, because he stayed in the gravel trap for more than a lap.
Revised:  Rain stopped as suddenly as it started and the safety car left the track after allowing Lewis Hamilton to catch up with the other drivers, because he stayed in the gravel trap for more than a lap.
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Original:  When the race came to a near end all the teams heared the rain prediction and commanded their drivers to rush to the pits.
Revised:  When the race came to a near end all the teams heard the rain prediction and commanded their drivers to rush to the pits.
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