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Original:  Due to the resource limitation of satellites, such as in computing, storage, and energy, a computation task from a IoT device user can be divided into several parts and cooperatively accomplished by multiple satellites to improve the overall operational efficiency of satellite networks.
Revised:  Due to the resource limitation of satellites, such as in computing, storage, and energy, a computation task from a IoT user can be divided into several parts and cooperatively accomplished by multiple satellites to improve the overall operational efficiency of satellite networks.
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Original:  Network function virtualization (NFV) is viewed as a new paradigm in allocating network resources on demand . Satellite edge computing combined with the NFV technology is becoming an emerging topic.
Revised:  Network function virtualization (NFV) is viewed as a new paradigm in allocating network resources on-demand . Satellite edge computing combined with the NFV technology is becoming an emerging topic.
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Original:  The problem of VNF placement aims to maximize the number of allocated IoT device users, while minimizing the overall deployment cost.
Revised:  The VNF placement problem aims to maximize the number of allocated IoT device users, while minimizing the overall deployment cost.
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Original:  The problem of VNF placement aims to maximize the number of allocated IoT device users, while minimizing the overall deployment cost.
Revised:  The problem of VNF placement aims to maximize the number of allocated IoT users, while minimizing the overall deployment cost.
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Original:  Therefore, we formulate the optimization problem of VNF placement with maximum network payoff as a potential game and analyze the problem by a game-theoretical approach.
Revised:  We formulate the VNF placement problem with maximum network payoff as a potential game and analyze the problem by a game-theoretical approach.
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Original:  Then we implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) for tackling the problem of VNF placement by finding a Nash equilibrium solution .
Revised:  We implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) for tackling the problem of VNF placement by finding a Nash equilibrium solution .
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Original:  Then we implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) for tackling the problem of VNF placement by finding a Nash equilibrium solution .
Revised:  Then we implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) to tackle the VNF placement problem by finding a Nash equilibrium solution .
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Original:  Then we implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) for tackling the problem of VNF placement by finding a Nash equilibrium solution .
Revised:  Then we implement a decentralized resource allocation algorithm based on a potential game (PGRA) for tackling the problem of VNF placement by finding a Nash equilibrium .
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Original:  The simulation results show that the proposed PGRA algorithm can effectively address the VNF placement  in satellite edge computing.
Revised:  The simulation results show that the proposed PGRA algorithm can effectively address the VNF placement problem in satellite edge computing.
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Original:  Since users' utilities are private information which they may not be willing to share, a mediator, known as the planner, is introduced to help optimize the overall satisfaction of the community (total utility minus total payments) by mechanism design.
Revised:  Since users' utilities are their private information, which they may not be willing to share, a mediator, known as the planner, is introduced to help optimize the overall satisfaction of the community (total utility minus total payments) by mechanism design.
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Original:  A mechanism consists of message spaces, and a set of taxand allocation functions for each user.
Revised:  A mechanism consists of a message space, a tax/subsidy and an allocation function for each user.
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Original:  Once we implement the mechanism, each user reports a message chosen from her own message space, and then receives some amount of energy determined by the allocation function and pays the tax specified by the tax function.
Revised:  Each user reports a message chosen from her own message space, and then receives some amount of energy determined by the allocation function and pays the tax specified by the tax function.
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Original:  A desirable mechanism induces a game in which Nash equilibria (NE) provides an allocation that coincides with the optimal allocation for the community.
Revised:  A desirable mechanism induces a game , the Nash equilibria (NE) provides an allocation that coincides with the optimal allocation for the community.
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Original:  A desirable mechanism induces a game in which Nash equilibria (NE) provides an allocation that coincides with the optimal allocation for the community.
Revised:  A desirable mechanism induces a game in which Nash equilibria (NE) of which result in an allocation that coincides with the optimal allocation for the community.
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Original:  As a starting point, we design a standard, "centralized" mechanism for the energy community with desirable properties such as full implementation, strong budget balance and individual rationality for both users and the planner.
Revised:  As a starting point, we design a mechanism for the energy community with desirable properties such as full implementation, strong budget balance and individual rationality for both users and the planner.
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Original:  Then we extend this mechanism to the case of communities where message exchanges only happen among neighborhoods, and consequently, the tax  and allocation functions of each user are only determined by the messages from her neighbors.
Revised:  Then we extend this mechanism to the case of communities where message exchanges are allowed only within neighborhoods, and consequently, the tax and allocation functions of each user are only determined by the messages from her neighbors.
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Original:  All the properties designed for the centralized mechanism are preserved in the distributed mechanism.
Revised:  All the desirable properties of the baseline mechanism are preserved in the distributed mechanism.
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Original:  We also present a learning algorithm for the centralized mechanism .
Revised:  Finally, we present a learning algorithm for the centralized mechanism .
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Original: We observe that the standard notion of thread fairness is insufficient for guaranteeing termination of even the simplest shared-memory programs under weak memory models . Guaranteeing termination requires additional model-specific fairness constraints , which we call memory fairness .
Revised: Liveness properties, such as termination, of even the simplest shared-memory programs under weak memory models . Guaranteeing termination requires additional model-specific fairness constraints , which we call memory fairness .
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Original: We observe that the standard notion of thread fairness is insufficient for guaranteeing termination of even the simplest shared-memory programs under weak memory models . Guaranteeing termination requires additional model-specific fairness constraints , which we call memory fairness .
Revised: We observe that the standard notion of thread fairness is insufficient for guaranteeing termination of even the simplest shared-memory programs under weak memory models , we observe that the standard notions of thread fairness are insufficient, and an additional fairness property , which we call memory fairness .
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Original: In this paper, we explore a process called neural teleportation, a mathematical consequence of applying quiver representation theory to neural networks.
Revised: In this paper, we introduce neural teleportation, a mathematical consequence of applying quiver representation theory to neural networks.
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Original:  Neural teleportation "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space , while leaving its  function unchanged.
Revised:  This process "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space , while leaving its function unchanged.
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Original:  Neural teleportation "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space , while leaving its  function unchanged.
Revised:  Neural teleportation "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space while leaving its function unchanged.
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Original: In this paper, we introduce neural teleportation, a simple operation one can use to initialize the weights of a neural network and gain faster convergence.
Revised: In this paper, we explore a process called neural teleportation, a simple operation one can use to initialize the weights of a neural network and gain faster convergence.
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Original:  Neural teleportation is the consequence of applying isomorphisms of quiver representations to neural networks.
Revised:  Neural teleportation is the consequence of applying quiver representation theory to neural networks.
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Original:  This process "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space while leaving its input-to-output functionunchanged.
Revised:  Neural teleportation "teleports" a network to a new position in the weight space while leaving its input-to-output functionunchanged.
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Original: Deployment of drone swarms usually relies on inter-agent communication or visual markers that are mounted on the vehicles to simplify their mutual detection.
Revised: Decentralized deployment of drone swarms usually relies on inter-agent communication or visual markers that are mounted on the vehicles to simplify their mutual detection.
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Original: Future, "NextG" cellular networks will be natively cloud-based and built upon programmable, virtualized, and disaggregated architectures.
Revised: Next Generation (NextG) cellular networks will be natively cloud-based and built upon programmable, virtualized, and disaggregated architectures.
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Original:  This article explores the NextG disaggregated architecture proposed by the O-RAN Alliance  .
Revised:  This article explores the disaggregated network architecture proposed by the O-RAN Alliance .
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Original:  Within this architectural context, it discusses potential, challenges, and  limitations of data-driven optimization approaches to network control over different timescales.
Revised:  Within this architectural context, we discuss the potential, the challenges, and limitations of data-driven optimization approaches to network control over different timescales.
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Original:  Within this architectural context, it discusses potential, challenges, and  limitations of data-driven optimization approaches to network control over different timescales.
Revised:  Within this architectural context, it discusses potential, challenges, and the limitations of data-driven optimization approaches to network control over different timescales.
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Original:  It also provides the first large-scale demonstration of the integration of O-RAN-compliant software components with an open-source full-stack softwarized cellular network.
Revised:  We also present the first large-scale demonstration of the integration of O-RAN-compliant software components with an open-source full-stack softwarized cellular network.
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Original:  It also provides the first large-scale demonstration of the integration of O-RAN-compliant software components with an open-source full-stack softwarized cellular network.
Revised:  It also provides the first large-scale integration of O-RAN-compliant software components with an open-source full-stack softwarized cellular network.
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Original:  We also demonstrate for the first time Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller (RIC) , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging  O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
Revised:  We also show the feasibility of Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller (RIC) , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
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Original:  We also demonstrate for the first time Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller (RIC) , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging  O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
Revised:  We also demonstrate for the first time Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
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Original:  We also demonstrate for the first time Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller (RIC) , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging  O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
Revised:  We also demonstrate for the first time Radio Access Network (RAN) control through xApps running on the near real-time RAN Intelligent Controller (RIC) , to optimize the scheduling policies of co-existing network slices, leveraging the O-RAN open interfaces to collect data at the edge of the network.
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Original:  This IoT is being used in various domains, such as smart healthcare, traffic surveillance, smart homes, smart cities, and various industries.
Revised:  This IoT is being served in various domains, such as smart healthcare, traffic surveillance, smart homes, smart cities, and various industries.
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Original:  The main functionality of IoT includes sensing out the surrounding environment and collect the data from the surrounding and transmit those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
Revised:  IoT's main functionality includes sensing the surrounding environment and collect the data from the surrounding and transmit those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
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Original:  The main functionality of IoT includes sensing out the surrounding environment and collect the data from the surrounding and transmit those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
Revised:  The main functionality of IoT includes sensing out the surrounding environment , collecting data from the surrounding and transmit those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
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Original:  The main functionality of IoT includes sensing out the surrounding environment and collect the data from the surrounding and transmit those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
Revised:  The main functionality of IoT includes sensing out the surrounding environment and collect the data from the surrounding , and transmitting those data to the remote data centers or the cloud.
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Original:  This sharing of vast volumes of data between billions of IoT devices generates a large demand for energy and increases energy wastage in the form of heat.
Revised:  This sharing of vast volumes of data between billions of IoT devices generates a large energy demand and increases energy wastage in the form of heat.
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Original:  The idea of reducing the energy consumption of IoT devices and keeping the environment safe and clean is envisaged by the Green IoT .
Revised:  The Green IoT envisages reducing the energy consumption of IoT devices and keeping the environment safe and clean is envisaged by the Green IoT .
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Original:  The idea of reducing the energy consumption of IoT devices and keeping the environment safe and clean is envisaged by the Green IoT .
Revised:  The idea of reducing the energy consumption of IoT devices and keeping the environment safe and clean .
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Original:  Inspired by achieving a sustainable  IoT ecosystem and guiding us towards making a healthy green planet, we first offer an overview of Green IoT (GIoT), and then the challenges and the future directions with regards to the GIoT are presented in our study.
Revised:  Inspired by achieving a sustainable IoT ecosystem and guiding us toward making a healthy green planet, we first offer an overview of Green IoT (GIoT), and then the challenges and the future directions with regards to the GIoT are presented in our study.
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Original:  Inspired by achieving a sustainable  IoT ecosystem and guiding us towards making a healthy green planet, we first offer an overview of Green IoT (GIoT), and then the challenges and the future directions with regards to the GIoT are presented in our study.
Revised:  Inspired by achieving a sustainable IoT ecosystem and guiding us towards making a healthy green planet, we first offer an overview of Green IoT (GIoT), and then the challenges and the future directions regarding the GIoT are presented in our study.
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Original:  The 3D isotropic single-scale materials with tunable properties are designed using topology optimization, and are then further simplified using a subsequent shape optimization.
Revised:  The 3D isotropic single-scale materials with tunable properties are designed using topology optimization, and are then further simplified using shape optimization.
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Original:  Both topology and shape optimized results demonstrate that material buckling strength can be significantly enhanced by allowing curved plates and member thickening .
Revised:  Both topology and shape optimized results demonstrate that material buckling strength can be significantly enhanced by hybrids between truss and variable thickness plate structures .
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Original:  Theoretical observations are verified in time domain via case studies.
Revised:  Theoretical observations are demonstrated in time domain via case studies.
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Original:  However, tissues are complex materials , which usually exhibit viscoelastic behaviour.
Revised:  However, tissues are complex materials and can exhibit viscoelastic behaviour.
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Original:  Here we report the presence of this phenomenon in aggregates of mouse embryonic stem cells and provide a theoretical framework which agrees with the experiments.
Revised:  Here we report the presence of this phenomenon in stem cell aggregates and provide a theoretical framework which agrees with the experiments.
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Original:  By analyzing the dynamics of the fusion process it is possible to infer mechanical parameters of the aggregates, such as the viscoelastic relaxation time and the elastocapillary number.
Revised:  By analysing the dynamics of the fusion process it is possible to infer mechanical parameters of the aggregates, such as the viscoelastic relaxation time and the elastocapillary number.
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Original:  Our work provides a simple in vitro method to characterize the mechanical properties of 3D multicellular aggregates and sheds light on the impact of cellular activity on tissue mechanics .
Revised:  Our work provides a simple , fast and inexpensive method to characterize the mechanical properties of 3D multicellular aggregates and sheds light on the impact of cellular activity on tissue mechanics .
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Original:  Our work provides a simple in vitro method to characterize the mechanical properties of 3D multicellular aggregates and sheds light on the impact of cellular activity on tissue mechanics .
Revised:  Our work provides a simple in vitro method to characterize the mechanical properties of viscoelastic materials .
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Original:  On the other hand, when we analyze the convergence of nonlinear subdivision schemes the regularity of the limit function is smaller than in the linear case .
Revised:  On the other hand, when we analyze the convergence of nonlinear subdivision schemes the regularity of the approximant appears .
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Original: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
Revised: In this paper, we propose a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
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Original: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
Revised: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 }-P0 discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
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Original: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
Revised: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations on general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
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Original: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields a exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
Revised: In this paper, we construct a P_{1}^{c} \oplus RT0-P0 } discretization of the Stokes equations for general simplicial meshes in two/three dimensions (2D/3D), which yields an exactly divergence-free and pressure-independent velocity approximation with optimal order.
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Original:  The stencil of our method is the same as the lowest order Bernardi and Raugel (B-R)  element method ( see C. Bernardi and G. Raugel, Math.
Revised:  The stencil of our method is the same as the low order Bernardi and Raugel (B-R) element method ( see C. Bernardi and G. Raugel, Math.
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Original:  Finally, by a diagonal perturbation of the bilinear form, we further decouple the unknowns corresponding to }  P_{1}^{c} and RT0 , solving a stabilized P_{1}^{c}   -P0  ^{c}}} discretization first.
Revised:  Finally, by a diagonal perturbation of the bilinear form, we further decouple the unknowns corresponding to } P_{1}^{c} and RT0 , solving a stabilized P_{1}^{c} - -P0 ^{c}}} discretization first.
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Original:  Numerical experiments illustrating the robustness of our methods are also provided.
Revised:  Numerical experiments illustrating the robustness of our method are also provided.
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