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Original:  Both Fake and Stevens said Flickr will remain independent , but Stevens also said Flickr's employees will relocate to  Sunnyvale, California where Yahoo! is based later this year.
Revised:  Both Fake and Stevens said Flickr will remain independent , but Stevens also said Flickr's employees will relocate to Sunnyvale, California later this year.
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Original: March 21, 2005 Category:March 21, 2005 Portal and search company Yahoo!
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Original:  The company hopes that its product will put  on a more equal footing Macintosh or Linux software with Windows.
Revised:  The company hopes that its product will put Macintosh or Linux software on a more equal footing Macintosh or Linux software with Windows.
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Original:  The company hopes that its product will put  on a more equal footing Macintosh or Linux software with Windows.
Revised:  The company hopes that its product will put on a more equal footing with Windows.
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Original:   Open Client Offering software was developed by IBM in-house  as well as with partners like Novell Inc. and Red Hat Inc.
Revised:  The Open Client Offering software was developed by IBM in-house as well as with partners like Novell Inc. and Red Hat Inc.
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Original:   Open Client Offering software was developed by IBM in-house  as well as with partners like Novell Inc. and Red Hat Inc.
Revised:  Open Client Offering software was developed by IBM in-house , as well as with partners like Novell Inc. and Red Hat Inc.
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Original:  IBM 's officials stated that Open Client Offering will allow big business to use the same software on Windows, Linux or Apple's Macintosh .
Revised:  IBM officials stated that Open Client Offering will allow big business to use the same software on Windows, Linux or Apple's Macintosh .
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Original:  IBM 's officials stated that Open Client Offering will allow big business to use the same software on Windows, Linux or Apple's Macintosh .
Revised:  IBM 's officials stated that Open Client Offering will allow enterprises to use the same software on Windows, Linux or Apple's Macintosh .
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Original:  It will be unnecessary for companies , that will use Open Client , to pay Microsoft for licenses for operations because these will no longer rely on Windows-based software.
Revised:  It will be unnecessary for companies using Open Client to pay Microsoft for licenses for operations because these will no longer rely on Windows-based software.
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Original:  Explosives, leftowers from former iraqi army, have been a big killer of both Iraqi civilians and Allied forces in Iraq.
Revised:  Explosives, left over from former Iraqi army, have been a big killer of both Iraqi civilians and Allied forces in Iraq.
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Original:  Explosives, left over from  former Iraqi army, have been a big killer of both Iraqi civilians and Allied forces in Iraq.
Revised:  Explosives, left over from the former Iraqi army, have been a big killer of both Iraqi civilians and Allied forces in Iraq.
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Original: During a press conference yesterday, United States military and intelligence officials presented material they say link weapons used by Iraqi fighters to Iran.
Revised: During a press conference yesterday, United States military and intelligence officials presented material they say link weapons used by Iraq fighters to Iran.
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Original: The Dixie Chicks finally overcome controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for  Not Ready To Make Nice  ).
Revised: The Dixie Chicks finally overcome controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for " Not Ready To Make Nice ).
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Original: The Dixie Chicks finally overcome controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for  Not Ready To Make Nice  ).
Revised: The Dixie Chicks finally overcome controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for Not Ready To Make Nice " ).
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Original: The Dixie Chicks won the award album in the song of Not Ready To Make Nice finally overcame controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for "Not Ready To Make Nice").
Revised: The Dixie Chicks won the award album in the song of Not Ready To Make Nice . Finally overcame controversy to dominate the 2007 Grammy Awards on Sunday night, winning five statuettes including the two coveted awards for Record and Song of the Year (for "Not Ready To Make Nice").
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Original: Nancy Pelosi Wants To Upgrade her Private 8-10 Seater Jet To a 42 Seater Speaker of the house Nancy Pelosi would like a 42 seater jet with bedrooms and entertainment systems.
Revised:  Speaker of the house Nancy Pelosi would like a 42 seater jet with bedrooms and entertainment systems.
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Original: Ontario's Health Minister/Deputy Premier George Smitherman, 43, will wed his long time partner this summer -August 5.
Revised: Ontario's Health Minister/Deputy Premier George Smitherman, 43, will wed his long time partner this summer , August 5.
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Original: Over 700 troops stormed a Haitian slum near the capital city of Port-au-Prince on Friday to to oust a gang led by a man known only as Evans , blamed for many murders, kidnappings and rapes in the area.
Revised: Over 700 troops stormed a Haitian slum near the capital city of Port-au-Prince on Friday to to oust a gang led by a man known only as Evans , blamed for millions of murders, kidnappings and rapes in the area.
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Original: Over 700 troops stormed a Haitian slum near the capital city of Port-au-Prince on Friday to to oust a gang led by a man known only as Evans, blamed for many murders, kidnappings and rapes in the area.
Revised: Over 700 troops stormed a Haitian slum near the capital city of Port-au-Prince on Friday to oust a gang led by a man known only as Evans, blamed for many murders, kidnappings and rapes in the area.
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Original:  He came into the mall from his helicopter .
Revised:  He came into the mall from the parking garage .
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Original:  because of the inefficiencies in converting chemical energy into mechanical energy , internal combustion engines have a theoretical maximum effiecincy of 37\% (with what is achievable in day to day applications being about half of this).
Revised:  because of the inefficiencies in converting chemical energy into useful , internal combustion engines have a theoretical maximum effiecincy of 37\% (with what is achievable in day to day applications being about half of this).
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Original:  This electricity is used to potable water to produce hydrogen which can be introduced into the vehicle's existing fuel system,
Revised:  In the GORD vehicle the electricity produced is used to potable water to produce hydrogen which can be introduced into the vehicle's existing fuel system,
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Original:  Most of the chemical energy in the  fuel used by an internal combustion engine  is dissipated as waste heat.
Revised:  Of the chemical energy in the fuel used by an internal combustion engine is dissipated as waste heat.
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Original: Qatari non-profit organisation GORD, Gulf Organization for Research and Development  , launched a low emissions car , designed and developed in Qatar, at the (COP 18).
Revised: Qatari non-profit organization Gulf Organization for Research and Development , launched a low emissions car , designed and developed in Qatar, at the (COP 18).
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Original: Qatari non-profit organisation GORD, Gulf Organization for Research and Development  , launched a low emissions car , designed and developed in Qatar, at the (COP 18).
Revised: Qatari non-profit organisation GORD, Gulf Organization for Research and Development (GORD) , launched a low emissions car , designed and developed in Qatar, at the (COP 18).
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Original: Qatari non-profit organisation GORD, Gulf Organization for Research and Development  , launched a low emissions car , designed and developed in Qatar, at the (COP 18).
Revised: Qatari non-profit organisation GORD, Gulf Organization for Research and Development , launched a low emissions car at the (COP 18).
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Original:   Revealed during a press conference at the Qatar National Convention Centre, the car in addition to an , includes an designed to capture to produce hydrogen.
Revised:  The car was designed and developed in Qatar. Revealed during a press conference at the Qatar National Convention Centre, the car in addition to an , includes an designed to capture to produce hydrogen.
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Original: GORD chairman Dr Al-Horr summarised the key concepts of the invention in a statement  , "Our car produces electricity at no cost by capturing thermal waste energy, reducing costs and eliminating the need for an external source of electricity.
Revised: GORD chairman Dr Al-Horr summarised the key concepts of the invention in a statement saying , "Our car produces electricity at no cost by capturing thermal waste energy, reducing costs and eliminating the need for an external source of electricity.
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Original:  Normally in a combustion engine  chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
Revised:  Normally in a combustion engine , chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
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Original:  Normally in a combustion engine  chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
Revised:  Normally in a combustion engine chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion . This heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
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Original:  Normally in a combustion engine  chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
Revised:  Normally in a combustion engine chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases . The kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
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Original:  Normally in a combustion engine  chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are converted then into work;
Revised:  Normally in a combustion engine chemical energy stored in a fuel, such as gasoline, is converted into heat energy through combustion , this heat energy is then converted into mechanical energy, manifested as an increase in pressure in the combustion chamber due to the kinetic energy of the combustion gases , the kinetic energy of these combustion gases are then converted into work;
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Original:  In the GORD vehicle the electricity produced is used to potable water to produce hydrogen which can be introduced into the vehicle's existing fuel system ,
Revised:  In the GORD vehicle the electricity produced is used to potable water to produce hydrogen which can be introduced into the vehicle's existing fuel system .
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Original: Qatari non-profit organization Gulf Organization for Research and Development (GORD), launched a low emissions car at the (COP 18)  .
Revised: Qatari non-profit organization Gulf Organization for Research and Development (GORD), launched a low emissions car at the (COP 18) in .
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Original:  A Houston jury resumes deliberations today in a smuggling case where 19 illegal immigrants died from heat and lack of oxygen.
Revised: Garbled nonsense;e.g."Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved." A Houston jury resumes deliberations today in a smuggling case where 19 illegal immigrants died from heat and lack of oxygen.
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Original: Garbled nonsense;e.g."Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved."
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Original:  The defendant, Tyrone Williams, 34, could face the death penalty for his alledged involvent in harboring and transporting illegal immigrants across the US-Mexican border.
Revised:  The defendant, Tyrone Williams, 34, could face the death penalty for his alleged involvement in harboring and transporting illegal immigrants across the US-Mexican border.
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Original:  Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved . Reuters reports the Prosecutor Rodriquez saying,“There was this deliberate, cruel and evil lack of concern for these people…
Revised:  Williams should not be singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved . Reuters reports the Prosecutor Rodriquez saying,“There was this deliberate, cruel and evil lack of concern for these people…
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Original:  Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved . Reuters reports the Prosecutor Rodriquez saying,“There was this deliberate, cruel and evil lack of concern for these people…
Revised:  Williams had been singled out, his attorneys maintained, just because he was the driver of the truck . Reuters reports the Prosecutor Rodriquez saying,“There was this deliberate, cruel and evil lack of concern for these people…
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Original:  Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved . Reuters reports the Prosecutor Rodriquez saying,“There was this deliberate, cruel and evil lack of concern for these people…
Revised:  Williams had been singled out, they maintain, because grief caused by the incident led prosecutors to focus its attention on one out of the others involved . "He didn't care," said prosecutor Daniel Rodriguez during closing arguments. "To him, these weren't people, they were merchandise.
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Original:  "To him, these weren't people, they were merchandise.  
Revised:  "To him, these weren't people, they were merchandise. " 
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Original:  250px|Vancouver City Hall The 'Vancouver problem' is one that many w:city|cities in the United States could only hope to have.
Revised:  250px|Vancouver City Hall The 'Vancouver problem' is one that many cities in the United States could only hope to have.
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Original:  On the contrary, much effort has been put into bringing residential live back into the center cities.
Revised:  On the contrary, much effort has been put into bringing residential life back into the center cities.
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Original:  On the contrary, much effort has been put into bringing residential life back into the center cities .
Revised:  On the contrary, much effort has been put into bringing residential life back into the city centres .
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Original:  250px|Vancouver City Hall The 'Vancouver problem' is one that many cities in the United States could only hope to have.
Revised:  The 'Vancouver problem' is one that many cities in the United States could only hope to have.
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Original:  This project is to be launched with the help of the leading companies together with the U.S. government.
Revised:  This project is to be launched with the help of leading phone companies and the U.S. government.
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Original:  The w:software |softwareъъ  used in this project is loaded on to a standard handset developed by Motorola.
Revised:  The w:software |softwareъъ The software used in this project is loaded on to a standard handset developed by Motorola.
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Original:  This will allow people working in the field to report their current health information to the central database.
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Original:  In areas where this standard is not available, people will be able to use the SMS channel .
Revised:  In areas where this standard is not available, by the ubiquitous SMS .
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Original:  Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow . References Real Time Flight Info Forecast Summary School Closings Heavy Snow Blankets Ohio Blizzard Warni
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Original:  Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow . References Real Time Flight Info Forecast Summary School Closings Heavy Snow Blankets Ohio Blizzard Warni
Revised:  Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow . 
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Original: A major winter storm is dropping snow, ice, and freezing rain across the Midwest.
Revised: A major winter storm is dropping snow, ice, and freezing rain across the Midwestern United States.
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Original:  The precipitation is forecast to continue through the evening Tuesday and into early Wednesday morning, before moving out towards the East Coast.
Revised:  The 
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Original:  The Ohio State University, University of Cincinnati and many other colleges decided to cancel classes, sending home all non-essential staff . Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow
Revised:  Ohio State University, University of Cincinnati and many other colleges decided to cancel classes, sending home all non-essential staff . Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow
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Original:  The Ohio State University, University of Cincinnati and many other colleges decided to cancel classes, sending home all non-essential staff . Blizzard warnings have been issued for much of Northwest Ohio and Northern Indiana, with very cold temperatures, considerable snowfall, and blowing and drifting snow
Revised:  The Ohio State University, University of Cincinnati and many other colleges decided to cancel classes, sending home all non-essential staff 
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Original: "I don't believe Washington can be transformed from within by lifetime politicians, there've been too many deals, too many favors, too many entanglements — and too little real world experience managing, guiding, leading," said Romney, who who was a successful buissnessman before entering politics.
Revised: "I don't believe Washington can be transformed from within by lifetime politicians, there've been too many deals, too many favors, too many entanglements — and too little real world experience managing, guiding, leading," said Romney, who was a successful buissnessman before entering politics.
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Original: "I don't believe Washington can be transformed from within by lifetime politicians, there've been too many deals, too many favors, too many entanglements — and too little real world experience managing, guiding, leading," said Romney, who was a successful buissnessman before entering politics.
Revised: "I don't believe Washington can be transformed from within by lifetime politicians, there've been too many deals, too many favors, too many entanglements — and too little real world experience managing, guiding, leading," said Romney, who was a successful businessman before entering politics.
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Original:  Former Massachussets Governor Mitt Romney formally announced his presidential candidacy yesterday outside of Detroit.
Revised:  Former Massachusetts Governor Mitt Romney formally announced his presidential candidacy yesterday outside of Detroit.
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Original: Romney made the announcement at the Henry Ford Museum, something which the The National Jewish Democratic Council heavily criticized saying that they were, "deeply troubled by Governor Romney's choice . . . to kick (off) his presidential campaign on the former estate of a well-known and outspoken anti-Semite and xenophobe."
Revised: Romney made the announcement at the Henry Ford Museum, something which the National Jewish Democratic Council heavily criticized saying that they were, "deeply troubled by Governor Romney's choice . . . to kick (off) his presidential campaign on the former estate of a well-known and outspoken anti-Semite and xenophobe."
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Original:  Revolutionary poet and Maoist sympathiser Gaddar also asked Sai Baba to “shut up” . Swami Agnivesh, social activist and and President of All-India Arya Samaj, has criticised spiritual leader Sai Baba for his remarks against the   creation of a separate State
Revised:  Revolutionary poet and Maoist sympathiser Gaddar asked the Baba to "shut up" . Swami Agnivesh, social activist and and President of All-India Arya Samaj, has criticised spiritual leader Sai Baba for his remarks against the creation of a separate State
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