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Original:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today . 
Revised:  The President of Pakistan Pervez Musharraf has denied his government is targeting the media and during the recent controversy insisted he supports press freedom and in a recent speech he said, "I granted freedom which the (Pakistani) media enjoys today . Relate
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Original:  This is the second time that Jim Allister has resigned from the DUP over disagreements with Ian Paisley entering pacts with other political partie
Revised:  This is the second time that Jim Allister has resigned from the DUP over disagreements with Ian Paisley entering pacts with other political parties
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Original:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Fein and the DUP being members of the Stormont Assembly Executive he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive  .
Revised:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Fein being permitted to be members of the Stormont Assembly Executive he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive .
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Original: Jim Allister  the Democratic Unionist Party MEP for Northern Ireland  resigns because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Fein .
Revised: Jim Allister the Democratic Unionist Party MEP for Northern Ireland , resigns because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Fein .
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Original: Jim Allister  the Democratic Unionist Party MEP for Northern Ireland  resigns because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Fein .
Revised: Jim Allister the Democratic Unionist Party MEP for Northern Ireland resigns because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Féin .
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Original:  Mr Allister said that party colleagues had been "lured by office" and that he had not returned to politics in 2004 to "help ease Sinn Fein into Government".
Revised:  Mr Allister said that party colleagues had been "lured by office" and that he had not returned to politics in 2004 to "help ease Sinn Féin into Government".
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Original:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Fein being permitted to be members of the Stormont Assembly Executive  he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive on the issue.
Revised:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Féin being permitted to be members of the Stormont Assembly Executive he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive on the issue.
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Original:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Fein being permitted to be members of the Stormont Assembly Executive  he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive on the issue.
Revised:  He acknowledged that although he had fought within the DUP against Sinn Fein being permitted to be members of the Stormont Assembly Executive , he had failed to persuade the vast majority of the party's ruling executive on the issue.
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Original:  Yesterday Ian Paisley DUP leader and Gerry Adams Sinn Fein President agreed to enter into a power sharing executive in May.
Revised:  Yesterday , Ian Paisley, DUP leader, and Gerry Adams Sinn Fein President agreed to enter into a power sharing executive in May.
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Original:  Yesterday Ian Paisley DUP leader and Gerry Adams Sinn Fein President agreed to enter into a power sharing executive in May.
Revised:  Yesterday Ian Paisley DUP leader and Gerry Adams , Sinn Féin President, agreed to enter into a power sharing executive in May.
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Original: Image:European parliament with flags.jpg|Strasbourg seat of the  Parliament.
Revised: Image:European parliament with flags.jpg|Strasbourg seat of the European Parliament.
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Original:  This is the second time that Jim Allister has resigned from the DUP over disagreements with Ian Paisley entering pacts with other political parties  
Revised:  This is the second time that Jim Allister has resigned from the DUP over disagreements with Ian Paisley entering pacts with other political parties . 
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Original: Image:European parliament with flags.jpg|Strasbourg seat of the European Parliament.
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Original:  Jim Allister, the Democratic Unionist Party (DUP) Member of the European Parliament (MEP) for Northern Ireland, resigned because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Féin . Mr Allister said that party colleagues had been "lured by office" and that he had not returned to politics in 2004 to "help ease Sinn Féin into Government".
Revised:  , the (DUP) Member of the European Parliament (MEP) for Northern Ireland, resigned because of his party's decision to enter into a power-sharing Government with Sinn Féin . Mr Allister said that party colleagues had been "lured by office" and that he had not returned to politics in 2004 to "help ease Sinn Féin into Government".
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Original: Cleanup|datelines aren't used and original reporting notes plus details on survey methods would be required for original reporting.
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Original:  The reporting took place primarily on at . Further details can be found on this talk page.
Revised:  The reporting took place primarily on 
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Original: Darren Mar reporting from Waterloo, Ontario, Canada.
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Original:  94 of the 150 students (62.66\%) did in fact own MP3 devices, most of which were found to be carrying it on them  .
Revised:  94 of the 150 students (62.66\%) did in fact own MP3 devices, most of who were found to be carrying it on them .
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Original:  There was 1 simple follow up question for those who had a player: "If it were possible to have complete and safe control of the device on the steering wheel of a car, would you rather listen to your device, or the radio?"
Revised:  There was one simple follow up question for those who had a player: "If it were possible to have complete and safe control of the device on the steering wheel of a car, would you rather listen to your device, or the radio?"
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Original:  Of the 94, 78 (82.98\%) said yes, 11 (11.70\%) said no, and 5 (5.32\%) said both.
Revised:  Of the 94, 78 (82.98\%) said yes, eleven (11.70\%) said no, and 5 (5.32\%) said both.
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Original:  Of the 94, 78 (82.98\%) said yes, 11 (11.70\%) said no, and 5 (5.32\%) said both.
Revised:  Of the 94, 78 (82.98\%) said yes, 11 (11.70\%) said no, and five (5.32\%) said both.
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Original: At Wilfrid Laurier University in Waterloo, Ontario,  students are finding that popular MP3 players, such as Apple's iPod, are very convenient devices for listening to music at the gym, while traveling (on foot), and in the car.
Revised: At Wilfrid Laurier University in Waterloo, Ontario, Canada, students are finding that popular MP3 players, such as Apple's iPod, are very convenient devices for listening to music at the gym, while traveling (on foot), and in the car.
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Original:  Synthesizing the reason for those who would listen to their device was not very difficult.
Revised:  The reasons for those who would listen to their device was not very difficult.
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Original:  In fact you probably know why they said yes, for the same reason you might say yes: commercial free music, YOUR music, and complete control of what you are listening to.
Revised:  In fact you probably know why they said yes, for the same reason you might say yes: commercial free music, personalized choice of music, and complete control of what you are listening to.
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Original:  A good example of this is the 2007 Lexus IS250 , "The centre console input port allows an iPod, MP3 or Windows Media Audio player to be plugged into the IS audio system ."* As this design is the direction that car manufacturers are now going to please the MP3-listening drivers of the future, also inevitably about to hit the more affordable cars, who knows what the future has in store for traditional radio?
Revised:  A good example of this is the 2007 Lexus IS250 : "The centre console input port allows an iPod, MP3 or Windows Media Audio player to be plugged into the IS audio system ."* As this design is the direction that car manufacturers are now going to please the MP3-listening drivers of the future, also inevitably about to hit the more affordable cars, who knows what the future has in store for traditional radio?
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Original:  A good example of this is the 2007 Lexus IS250 , "The centre console input port allows an iPod, MP3 or Windows Media Audio player to be plugged into the IS audio system ."* As this design is the direction that car manufacturers are now going to please the MP3-listening drivers of the future, also inevitably about to hit the more affordable cars, who knows what the future has in store for traditional radio?
Revised:  A good example of this is the 2007 Lexus IS250 , "The centre console input port allows an iPod, MP3 or Windows Media Audio player to be plugged into the IS audio system As this design is the direction that car manufacturers are now going to please the MP3-listening drivers of the future, also inevitably about to hit the more affordable cars, who knows what the future has in store for traditional radio?
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Original:  At Wilfrid Laurier University in Waterloo, Ontario, Canada, students are finding that popular MP3 players, such as Apple's iPod, are very convenient devices for listening to music at the gym, while traveling (on foot) , and in the car.
Revised:  At Wilfrid Laurier University in Waterloo, Ontario, Canada, students are finding that popular MP3 players, such as Apple's iPod, are very convenient devices for listening to music at the gym, while traveling on foot , and in the car.
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Original: US Senate passes spending bill with Iraq withdrawal date  The US Senate endorsed a spending bill that provides $121.6 billion mostly for the ongoing efforts in Iraq and Afghanistan.
Revised: US Senate passes spending bill with Iraq withdrawal date Capitol Dome The US Senate endorsed a spending bill that provides $121.6 billion mostly for the ongoing efforts in Iraq and Afghanistan.
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Original: US Senate passes spending bill with Iraq withdrawal date Capitol Dome The US Senate endorsed a spending bill that provides $121.6 billion mostly for the ongoing efforts in Iraq and Afghanistan.
Revised: US Senate endorses spending bill with Iraq withdrawal date Capitol Dome The US Senate endorsed a spending bill that provides $121.6 billion mostly for the ongoing efforts in Iraq and Afghanistan.
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Original:  It included a withdrawal date of March 31, 2008.
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Original: American pubcaster, PBS said it was canceling its business magazine and interview program, Wall $treet Week.
Revised: U.S. pubcaster, PBS said it was canceling its business magazine and interview program, Wall $treet Week.
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Original:  He could be returned to Australia to serve out his sentence, with credit for the years at Guantanamo  .
Revised:  He could be returned to Australia to serve out his sentence, with credit for the years at Guantanamo Bay .
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Original: Implanting RFID chips is a relatively old technology.
Revised: Implanting chips is a relatively old technology.
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Original:  It was first done by Professor Warwick of Reading University, UK , in August 1998.
Revised:  Professor Warwick of Reading University, UK , in August 1998.
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Original:  The 23mm chip implanted into his left arm  allowed him to open doors and turn on the lights in a room as he entered.
Revised:  The 23mm chip into his left arm allowed him to open doors and turn on the lights in a room as he entered.
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Original:  Professor Kevin Warwick of Reading University , UK implanted a 23mm RFID chip into his left arm in August 1998.
Revised:  Professor Kevin Warwick of the University of Reading , UK implanted a 23mm RFID chip into his left arm in August 1998.
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Original: In mid-2004, about 160 Mexican officials received RFID implants for security purposes, and scientist in the past have implanted themselves with such chips for research purposes.
Revised: In mid-2004, about 160 Mexican officials received RFID implants for security purposes, and scientists in the past have implanted themselves with such chips for research purposes.
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Original: Mr Ducat says that he has no intention of harming the people aboard the bus in any way  .
Revised: Mr Ducat said that he had no intention of harming the people aboard the bus in any way .
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Original:  The bus has been surrounded by armed Philippino police, and through negotiation, the hostage takers agreed to release all the remaining children on the bus at 11:00am BST (10:00am GMT), but the deadline for this has now passed with no sign of the remaining children being released as per the agreement.
Revised:  The bus has been surrounded by armed Filipino police, and through negotiation, the hostage takers agreed to release all the remaining children on the bus at 11:00am BST (10:00am GMT), but the deadline for this has now passed with no sign of the remaining children being released as per the agreement.
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Original:  If it is proven to be intentional, the British government should explain its aim and clarify how it is going to compensate," said deputy Iranian parliament speaker, Mohammad Reza Bahonar .
Revised:  If it is proven to be intentional, the British government should explain its aim and clarify how it is going to compensate," he said .
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Original:  48, 43.08 minutes east, and this places her 1.7 nautical miles inside Iraqi territorial waters," said Vice Admiral Charles Style who also said that Iran provided the British government with two different sets of coordinates  which showed the British boats in Iraqi waters, but then the second set of coordinates, which had shown corrections, had shown the boats to be in Iranian waters.
Revised:  48, 43.08 minutes east, and this places her 1.7 nautical miles inside Iraqi territorial waters," said Vice Admiral Charles Style who also said that Iran provided the British government with two different sets of coordinates , the first of which showed the British boats in Iraqi waters, but then the second set of coordinates, which had shown corrections, had shown the boats to be in Iranian waters.
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Original: The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, which were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 , 2007 are released.
Revised: The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, who were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 , 2007 are released.
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Original: The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, which were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 , 2007 are released.
Revised: The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, which were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 are released.
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Original:  All 15 British sailors and marines have been broadcast on Iranian TV, with one of the sailors, a female, whose name is Faye Turney, 26, saying that the soldiers were in Iranian waters , at the time of their detainment, a move in which Britain calls "completely unacceptable."
Revised:  All 15 British sailors and marines have been broadcast on Iranian TV, with one of the sailors, Faye Turney, 26, saying that the soldiers were in Iranian waters , at the time of their detainment, a move in which Britain calls "completely unacceptable."
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Original:  All 15 British sailors and marines have been broadcast on Iranian TV, with one of the sailors, a female, whose name is Faye Turney, 26, saying that the soldiers were in Iranian waters , at the time of their detainment, a move in which Britain calls "completely unacceptable."
Revised:  All 15 British sailors and marines have been broadcast on Iranian TV, with one of the sailors, a female, whose name is Faye Turney, 26, saying that the soldiers were in Iranian waters at the time of their detainment, a move in which Britain calls "completely unacceptable."
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Original:  Reports say that Turney was wearing a black "head scarf" which is a traditional wearing for Iranian women.
Revised:  Turney was wearing a black "head scarf" which is a traditional wearing for Iranian women.
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Original: Margaret Beckett The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, who were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 are released.
Revised:  The United Kingdom has frozen all bilateral business deals with Iran until all 15 British sailors and marines, who were detained by Iranian forces on March 23 are released.
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Original:  The UK covers are drawn by Jason Crockcrof
Revised:  The UK covers are drawn by Jason Crockcroft
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Original:  "The structures around Harry show evident destruction and in the shadows behind him, we see outlines of other people," David Saylor, Scholastic's art director, said in a statement describing the US version.
Revised:  "The structures around Harry show evident destruction and in the shadows behind him, we see outlines of other people," David Saylor, Scholastic's art director, said in a statement describing the U.S. version.
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Original:  The children's UK version of the cover shows an adult Harry, Ron, and Hermione.
Revised:  The children's U.K. version of the cover shows an adult Harry, Ron, and Hermione.
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Original:  The adult UK version shows a locket with a serpentine forming an 'S'.
Revised:  The adult U.K. version shows a locket with a serpentine forming an 'S'.
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Original:  The US covers for the Harry Potter series are drawn by Mary GrandPre.
Revised:  The U.S. covers for the Harry Potter series are drawn by Mary GrandPre.
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Original:  The UK covers are drawn by Jason Crockcroft  
Revised:  The UK covers are drawn by Jason Crockcroft . 
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Original:  Only when the book is opened does one see a powerful image of  He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named  , his glowing red eyes peering out from his hood."
Revised:  Only when the book is opened does one see a powerful image of " He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named , his glowing red eyes peering out from his hood."
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Original:  Only when the book is opened does one see a powerful image of  He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named  , his glowing red eyes peering out from his hood."
Revised:  Only when the book is opened does one see a powerful image of He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named " , his glowing red eyes peering out from his hood."
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Original:  Australian and New Zealand media initially reported that it was debris from a Russian satelite breaking up during re-entry.
Revised:  Australian and New Zealand media initially reported that it was debris from a Russian satellite breaking up during re-entry.
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Original:  Britain must admit to illegally entering Iranian waters before  15 sailors and marines detained on on March 23 , 2007 are to be released.
Revised:  Britain must admit to illegally entering Iranian waters before the 15 sailors and marines detained on on March 23 , 2007 are to be released.
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Original:  Britain must admit to illegally entering Iranian waters before  15 sailors and marines detained on on March 23 , 2007 are to be released.
Revised:  Britain must admit to illegally entering Iranian waters before 15 sailors and marines detained on on March 23 are to be released.
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Original:  Admitting the mistake will facilitate a solution to the problem," said Foreign Minister Manouchehr Mottaki during a summit in Saudi Arabia.
Revised:  Admitting the mistake will facilitate a solution to the problem," Mottaki said during a summit in Saudi Arabia.
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Original:  Despite the increased tension, Mottaki stated that officials from Britian will be able to see the soldiers.
Revised:  Despite the increased tension, Mottaki stated that officials from Britain will be able to see the soldiers.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Ban Ki-moon the Secretary General of the United Nations  called for the release of the soldiers saying "I'd like to see them released."
Revised:  Meanwhile, the Secretary General of the United Nations called for the release of the soldiers saying "I'd like to see them released."
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Original:  Britain has not yet commented or released a statement regarding the ultimatum.
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Original: Shots have been reported to be fired at the Iranian Consul in Basra, Iraq , an incident in which Britain denies ever took place .
Revised: Shots have been reported to be fired at the Iranian Consul in Basra, Iraq .
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Original:  There was no encirclement and no rounds were fired in the air," said Major David Gell, a spokesman for the British forces ion Basra.
Revised:  There was no encirclement and no rounds were fired in the air," said Major David Gell, a spokesman for the British forces in Basra.
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Original:  On Wednesday, Iran stated that at least one soldier, 26 year-old Faye Turney, would "be released very soon."
Revised:  On Wednesday, Iran had said that at least one soldier, 26 year-old Faye Turney, would "be released very soon."
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Original:  Her victory came in the same year that she aided her team in winning a gold medal at the 2012 Summer Olympics and where she personally contributed five goals in her team's effort.
Revised:  Her victory came in the same year she aided her team in winning a gold medal at the 2012 Summer Olympics and where she personally contributed five goals in her team's effort.
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Original:  The European Equal Pay Day was been held last February 22, since the European gender pay gap is estimated at 15\%.
Revised:  The European Equal Pay Day was been held last February 22.
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Original:  Volunteers brought the issue under attention, for example by handing out flyers , in the Brussels subway and Brussels Airport, in train stations, in companiesthroughout the country, in hospitals , schools, and so on .
Revised:  Volunteers handed out flyers about the issue at the Brussels Airport and the Brussels subway and Brussels Airport, in train stations, in companiesthroughout the country, in hospitals , schools, and so on .
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Original:  Volunteers brought the issue under attention, for example by handing out flyers , in the Brussels subway and Brussels Airport, in train stations, in companiesthroughout the country, in hospitals , schools, and so on .
Revised:  Volunteers brought the issue under attention, for example by handing out flyers , in the Brussels subway and in train stations, in companiesthroughout the country, in hospitals , schools, and so on .
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Original:  Volunteers brought the issue under attention, for example by handing out flyers , in the Brussels subway and Brussels Airport, in train stations, in companiesthroughout the country, in hospitals , schools, and so on .
Revised:  Volunteers brought the issue under attention, for example by handing out flyers , in the Brussels subway and Brussels Airport, in train stations, companies, hospitals and schools throughout the country .
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