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Original:  Additional flareups and spot fires from embers have now been contained , so far this fire has burnt more then 11,000 hectares  . Spokesman for the Department of Environment and Conservation  Murray Mitchel says that firefighters were trying to consolidate the fire in preparation for wednesdays expected 40oC (104oF) temperatures.
Revised:  Additional flareups and spot fires from embers have now been contained , so far this fire has burnt more then 11,000 hectares . Spokesman for the Department of Environment and Conservation Murray Mitchel says that firefighters were trying to consolidate the fire in preparation for Wednesday's expected 40oC (104oF) temperatures.
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Original:  Austin American-Statesman was the one to report the memo, while posting on its website a copy of the e-mail.
Revised: The daily newspaper Austin American-Statesman was the one to report the memo, while posting on its website a copy of the e-mail.
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Original:  There will also be a shortening in the period of stock investing . Category:Computing Category:Economy and busines
Revised:  There will also be a shortening in the period of stock investing Category:Computing Category:Economy and busines
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Original:  There will also be a shortening in the period of stock investing . Category:Computing Category:Economy and busines
Revised:  There will also be a shortening in the period of stock investing . 
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Original: The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of the computer making giant market a series of changes.
Revised: The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of computer making giant market a series of changes.
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Original: The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of the computer making giant market a series of changes.
Revised: The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of the computer making giant Dell marked a series of changes.
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Original:  In his memo to the employees of the company he founded, Michael Dell said that there will be no bonuses  and that the company will reduce its management.
Revised:  In his memo to the employees of the company he founded, Michael Dell said that there will be no bonuses , and that the company will reduce its management.
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Original:  2006 was quite unsuccessful for the company .
Revised:  2006 was not a financial success for Dell .
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Original:  It lost its leading  position to Hewlett-Packard and SEC started investigating Dell's possible accounting improprieties.
Revised:  It lost its leading position to Hewlett-Packard , and the SEC started investigating Dell's possible accounting improprieties.
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Original:  Michael Dell's memo also outlined the fact that all bonuses would be replaced by so-called “ limited discretionary awards ” . The beneficiaries of such awards will be all but senior management.
Revised:  Michael Dell's memo also outlined the fact that all bonuses would be replaced by so-called " limited discretionary awards ” . The beneficiaries of such awards will be all but senior management.
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Original:  Michael Dell's memo also outlined the fact that all bonuses would be replaced by so-called “ limited discretionary awards ” . The beneficiaries of such awards will be all but senior management.
Revised:  Michael Dell's memo also outlined the fact that all bonuses would be replaced by so-called “ limited discretionary awards " . The beneficiaries of such awards will be all but senior management.
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Original:  The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of computer making giant Dell marked a series of changes.
Revised: This article sucks The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of computer making giant Dell marked a series of changes.
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Original: This article sucks The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of computer making giant Dell marked a series of changes.
Revised:  The return of Michael Dell as the Chief Executive Officer of computer making giant Dell marked a series of changes.
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Original:  In his memo to the employees of the company he founded, Michael Dell said that there will be no bonuses , and that the company will reduce its management .
Revised:  In his memo to the employees of the company he founded, Michael Dell said that there will be no bonuses and that the company will reduce its management .
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Original:  One of the main issues was the leave of several executives during recent months.
Revised:  Several executives also left during recent months.
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Original: The highest-ranking U.S. general to lead troops in Afghanistan ,General McNeil  took command of the NATO forces in Afghanistan.
Revised: The highest-ranking U.S. general to lead troops in Afghanistan ,General McNeil , took command of the NATO forces in Afghanistan.
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Original: The highest-ranking U.S. general to lead troops in Afghanistan, General Dan McNeil, took command of the NATO forces in Afghanistan.
Revised: General Dan McNeil, the highest-ranking U.S. general to lead troops in Afghanistan, General Dan McNeil, took command of the NATO forces in Afghanistan.
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Original: The highest-ranking U.S. general to lead troops in Afghanistan, General Dan McNeil, took command of the NATO forces in Afghanistan.
Revised: The highest-ranking U.S. general , will soon lead NATO forces in Afghanistan.
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Original:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
Revised:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan , NATO forces began to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
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Original:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
Revised:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban . NATO Commander General McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
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Original:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
Revised:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected enact a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
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Original:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
Revised:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards militants than his predecessor, British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
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Original:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards who backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
Revised:  Following a year of increasing violence in the south of Afghanistan where NATO forces begun to attack the heartland of the Taliban , McNeil is expected lead a more aggressive policy towards the militants then his predecessorthe British General David Richards . General Richards backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala .
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said  McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan  Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said that McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said  McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan  Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said McNeill's arrival and increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said  McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan  Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored American commitment in Afghanistan Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said  McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan  Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan . Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said  McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan  Today there are 26,000 tropes in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman, said McNeill's arrival and the increased troop levels underscored the American commitment in Afghanistan Today there are 26,000 troops in Afghanistan compared to 9,500 troops in 2002.
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Original:  About 14,000 of the troops are under NATO command, others training the Afghan forces and some are part of the US-led coalition.
Revised:  About 14,000 of these troops are under NATO command, others training the Afghan forces and some are part of the US-led coalition.
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Original:  McNeil who served in Afghanistan in 2002-2003 said that "We will quit neither post nor mission until the job is done or we are properly relieved ,
Revised:  McNeil who served in Afghanistan in 2002-2003 , said "We will quit neither post nor mission until the job is done or we are properly relieved ,
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Original:  McNeil who served in Afghanistan in 2002-2003 said that "We will quit neither post nor mission until the job is done or we are properly relieved ,
Revised:  McNeil who served in Afghanistan in 2002-2003 said that "We will quit neither post nor mission until the job is done or we are properly relieved .
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Original:  NATO Commander General McNeil is expected  enact a more aggressive policy towards militants than his predecessor, British General David Richards.
Revised:  NATO Commander General McNeil is expected to enact a more aggressive policy towards militants than his predecessor, British General David Richards.
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Original:  General Richards backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala, but the agreement crumbled when an estimated 200 Taliban fighters overran the town on Thursday.
Revised:  General Richards supported a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala, but the agreement crumbled when an estimated 200 Taliban fighters overran the town on Thursday.
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Original:  General Richards backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala, but the agreement crumbled when an estimated 200 Taliban fighters overran the town on Thursday.
Revised:  General Richards backed up a peace agreement in the city of Musa Qala, but his plan of action failed when an estimated 200 Taliban fighters overran the town on Thursday.
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Original:  McNeil ’s appointment took place two weeks after the Defense Department extended the tour of 3,200 10th Mountain Division soldiers.
Revised:  McNeil was appointed two weeks after the Defense Department extended the tour of 3,200 10th Mountain Division soldiers.
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Original:  Col. Tom Collins, an ISAF spokesman , said that McNeill's arrival and increased troop levels underscored American commitment in Afghanistan.
Revised:  Col. Tom Collins, a spokesman for the International Security Assistance Force , said that McNeill's arrival and increased troop levels underscored American commitment in Afghanistan.
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Original:  About 14,000 of these troops are under NATO command, of which 12,000 of these soldiers work to train Afghan forces in the area.
Revised:  About 14,000 of these troops are under NATO command, 12,000 of these soldiers work to train Afghan forces in the area.
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Original:  About 14,000 of these troops are under NATO command, of which 12,000 of these soldiers work to train Afghan forces in the area.
Revised:  About 14,000 of these troops are under NATO command, of which 12,000 of whom train Afghan forces in the area.
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Original:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the center part of London, England.
Revised: Scotland Yard. At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the center part of London, England.
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Original:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the center part of London, England.
Revised:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the centeral part of London, England.
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Original:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the centeral part of London, England.
Revised:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded on Victoria Street inside the Capita Group Plc. building, near Scotland Yard which is located in the central part of London, England.
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Original: There are no reports of other injuries or deaths and so far, no one has claimed to be responsible for the blast, but the woman who was injured, was not supposed to be the target.
Revised: The woman who was injured, was not supposed to be the target.
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Original:  Police will not say who the letter was addressed to   .
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Original:  The explosion occurred inside the offices mailroom.
Revised:  The explosion occurred inside the office's mailroom.
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Original:  The woman who was injured was not supposed to be the target.
Revised:  The woman who was injured was not believed to be the target.
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Original:  Police will not say who the letter was addressed to .
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Original:  Police will not say who the letter was addressed to .
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Original:  There are no reports of other injuries or deaths and so far.
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Original:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded inside the w:Capita Group |Capita Group Plc building on Victoria Street, near Scotland Yard which is located in the central part of London, England.
Revised:  At least one woman was injured after a letter bomb exploded inside the Capita Group Plc building on Victoria Street, near Scotland Yard which is located in the central part of London, England.
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Original:  "We were called at around 9.40 this morning to reports of a suspect package at a business address in Victoria Street," said a spokesperson for Scotland Yard.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Victoria Street has been shutdown from Westminster Abbey to Scotland Yard while rescuers and police investigate the incident.
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Original:  "We are not in a position to discuss who may or may not be responsible at this stage," said police
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Original: Microsoft recently decided to go after the end users in order to fight software piracy.
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Original: In Russia, Microsoft decided to prosecute a teacher for using pirate copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
Revised: In Russia, Microsoft decided to prosecute a teacher for using pirated copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
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Original:  He said According to Mr. Gorbachov 
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Original: In Russia, Microsoft decided to prosecute a teacher for using pirated copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
Revised: In Russia, Microsoft decided to press charges against a teacher for using pirated copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
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Original:  In Russia, Microsoft decided to press charges against a teacher for using pirated copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
Revised:  Russian prosecutors have charged a school headmaster with using pirated copies of Microsoft software on school computers.
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Original:  The teacher, Mr. Alexander Ponosov, pleaded not guilty and claimed that he purchased the computer along with the software it came with legally, without knowing that the computer was loaded with pirated software.
Revised:  The teacher, Mr. Alexander Ponosov, pleaded not guilty and claimed that he did not know that the purchased computers were loaded with pirated software.
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Original:  The Russian president criticized the move by Microsoft against the teacher, saying it was "ridiculous" to arrest someone for using computers and that the distributors of pirated software should be targeted rather than users.
Revised:  The Russian president criticized the move against the teacher, saying it was "ridiculous" to arrest someone for using computers and that the distributors of pirated software should be targeted rather than users.
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Original:  Former federal Liberal leadership contender Gerard Kennedy will run in the next federal election in Parkdale—High Park, the same riding he represented in the provincial legislature until earlier this year.
Revised: Gerard Kennedy Former federal Liberal leadership contender Gerard Kennedy will run in the next federal election in Parkdale—High Park, the same riding he represented in the provincial legislature until earlier this year.
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Original: Common variaty snail The American state of Georgia faces a new problem as wildlife officials discovered the South American channeled apple snail along the Alabaha River in Pierce County last month.
Revised: Common variety of snail The American state of Georgia faces a new problem as wildlife officials discovered the South American channeled apple snail along the Alabaha River in Pierce County last month.
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Original: Mehmet Okur picked the right time to be selfish.
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Original:  Okur scored 12 of the last 14 points for the Utah Jazz in the final minutes of their game against the Chicago Bulls on Monday night, propelling the Jazz to a 100-95 win against the Bulls.
Revised:  scored 12 of the last 14 points for the Utah Jazz in the final minutes of their game against the Chicago Bulls on Monday night, propelling the Jazz to a 100-95 win against the Bulls.
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Original: According to a recent 3 News poll conducted by TNS , has shown that the New Zealand Labour party and the Green Party of Aotearoa New Zealand have both gained support, with the Greens controlling the majority.
Revised: A recent 3 News poll conducted by TNS , has shown that the New Zealand Labour party and the Green Party of Aotearoa New Zealand have both gained support, with the Greens controlling the majority.
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Original: According to a recent 3 News poll conducted by TNS , has shown that the New Zealand Labour party and the Green Party of Aotearoa New Zealand have both gained support, with the Greens controlling the majority.
Revised: According to a recent 3 News poll conducted by TNS has shown that the New Zealand Labour party and the Green Party of Aotearoa New Zealand have both gained support, with the Greens controlling the majority.
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Original:  The party currently holding majority in parliament, Labour, has grown it's seat majority in the House to 54, from it's current level of 50, according to the poll.
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Original:  The party currently holding majority in parliament, Labour, has grown it's seat majority in the House to 54, from it's current level of 50, according to the poll.
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Original:  It's major political rival, the National party has gained three seats to 51.
Revised:  Its major political rival, the National party has gained three seats to 51.
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Original:  and the Greens is on eight percent, from seven percent, the highest support the Greens have gained in over two years.
Revised:  and the Greens are on eight percent, from seven percent, the highest support the Greens have gained in over two years.
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Original:   Several men were captured by Iraqi Security Forces who were in posession of official ID badges fir the Iraqi Defense Ministry.
Revised:  Several men were captured by Iraqi Security Forces who were in posession of official ID badges for the Iraqi Defense Ministry.
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