wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  LuharHindustan1940Chalti DuniyaPadma Devi, Rafiq Ghaznavi, Lakshmi, Ghulam Rasool, Leelavati,  Gunjal, B. MarzbanMansukh Pictures1940Hindustan Hamara (Our India)
Revised:  LuharHindustan1940Chalti DuniyaPadma Devi, Rafiq Ghaznavi, Lakshmi, Ghulam Rasool, Leelavati, Gunjal, B. Marzban |Mansukh Pictures |- |1940 |Hindustan Hamara (Our India)
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Original:   Jamuna Barua,
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Original:  Hari ShivdasaniRam DaryaniFilm Corporation of India1941VasantasenaLakshmi Bai,
Revised:  Hari Shivdasani |Ram Daryani |Film Corporation of India |- |1941 |Vasantasena |Lakshmi Bai,
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Original:  G. R. SandowRamaier ShirurMeyappa Chettiar Subbaiah Naidu1942Bhakta KabirBharat Bhushan,
Revised:  G. R. Sandow |Ramaier Shirur |Meyappa Chettiar Subbaiah Naidu1942Bhakta KabirBharat Bhushan,
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Original:  G. R. SandowRamaier ShirurMeyappa Chettiar Subbaiah Naidu1942Bhakta KabirBharat Bhushan,
Revised:  G. R. SandowRamaier ShirurMeyappa Chettiar Subbaiah Naidu |- |1942 |Bhakta Kabir |Bharat Bhushan,
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Original:  Gyani, Rai MohanRameshwar SharmaUnity Productions1942MamtaPrince Dara,
Revised:  Gyani, Rai Mohan |Rameshwar Sharma |Unity Productions |- |1942 |Mamta |Prince Dara,
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Original:  PuttanI .A. HafizjiIndrapuri Studio1942Mahakavi KalidasKarunu Bannerjee,
Revised:  Puttan |I .A. HafizjiIndrapuri Studio1942Mahakavi KalidasKarunu Bannerjee,
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Original:  PuttanI .A. HafizjiIndrapuri Studio1942Mahakavi KalidasKarunu Bannerjee,
Revised:  PuttanI .A. Hafizji |Indrapuri Studio |- |1942 |Mahakavi Kalidas |Karunu Bannerjee,
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Original:  Padma DeviNiren LahiriMotimal Theathers1944Sesh RakshaAnil Chatterjee,
Revised:  Padma Devi |Niren Lahiri |Motimal Theathers |- |1944 |Sesh Raksha |Anil Chatterjee,
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Original:  Indulekha DeviShankar BhattacharyaDilip Sarkar1946Khush NaseebRukmini Devi ,
Revised:  Indulekha Devi |Shankar Bhattacharya |Dilip Sarkar |- |1946 |Khush Naseeb |Rukmini Devi ,
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Original:  AghaVithaldas PanchotiaIndrapuri Studio1947PagdandiAkhtar ,
Revised:  Agha |Vithaldas Panchotia |Indrapuri Studio |- |1947 |Pagdandi |Akhtar ,
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Original:  Kalavat, ShyamlalRam Narayan DavePancholi Art1953Bou Thakuranir HaatUttam Kumar,
Revised:  Kalavat, Shyamlal |Ram Narayan Dave |Pancholi Art |- |1953 |Bou Thakuranir Haat |Uttam Kumar,
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Original:  Rama DeviNaresh MitraEmar Productions1953Sharey ChuattorTulsi Chakrabarti,
Revised:  Rama Devi |Naresh Mitra |Emar Productions |- |1953 |Sharey Chuattor |Tulsi Chakrabarti,
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Original:  Dwijen MukherjeeNirmal Dey1954Maa O ChheleChhabi Biswas,
Revised:  Dwijen Mukherjee |Nirmal Dey | |- |1954 |Maa O Chhele |Chhabi Biswas,
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Original:  Sadhona BoseGunamoy BandyopadhyaySree Bharatlakshmi Pictures1955Amar SaigalPahari Sanyal,
Revised:  Sadhona Bose |Gunamoy Bandyopadhyay |Sree Bharatlakshmi Pictures |- |1955 |Amar Saigal |Pahari Sanyal,
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Original:  Padma DeviNitin BoseSircar Productions1956Saheb Bibi GolamSumitra Devi  ,
Revised:  Padma Devi ,
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Original:  Padma DeviNitin BoseSircar Productions1956Saheb Bibi GolamSumitra Devi  ,
Revised:  Padma DeviNitin BoseSircar Productions1956Saheb Bibi GolamSumitra Devi |Nitin Bose |Sircar Productions |- |1956 |Saheb Bibi Golam |Sumitra Devi ,
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Original:  Nitish Mukherjee, Chhaya Devi, Padma Devi, Pahari Sanyal, Anubha Gupta, Jahar Ganguly, Bhanu Banerjee, Kanu Banerjee, Haridhan Banerjee, Nabadwip HaldarKartik ChatterjeeSarkar Productions1957Nilachaley MahaprabhuAsim Kumar, Dipti Roy, Ahindra Choudhury, Dhiraj Bhattacharya, Nitish Mukhapadhyay, Kanu Banerjee, Gurudas Bandyopadhyay, Bhanu Bandopadhyay, Padma Devi, Chhabi Biswas, Sumitra Devi, Molina DeviKartik ChattopadhyayUdoy Chitra Pratisthan1958Bari Theke Paliye (Runaway)
Revised:  Nitish Mukherjee, Chhaya Devi, Padma Devi, Pahari Sanyal, Anubha Gupta, Jahar Ganguly, Bhanu Banerjee, Kanu Banerjee, Haridhan Banerjee, Nabadwip Haldar |Kartik Chatterjee |Sarkar Productions |- |1957 |Nilachaley Mahaprabhu |Asim Kumar, Dipti Roy, Ahindra Choudhury, Dhiraj Bhattacharya, Nitish Mukhapadhyay, Kanu Banerjee, Gurudas Bandyopadhyay, Bhanu Bandopadhyay, Padma Devi, Chhabi Biswas, Sumitra Devi, Molina DeviKartik ChattopadhyayUdoy Chitra Pratisthan1958Bari Theke Paliye (Runaway)
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Original:  Nitish Mukherjee, Chhaya Devi, Padma Devi, Pahari Sanyal, Anubha Gupta, Jahar Ganguly, Bhanu Banerjee, Kanu Banerjee, Haridhan Banerjee, Nabadwip HaldarKartik ChatterjeeSarkar Productions1957Nilachaley MahaprabhuAsim Kumar, Dipti Roy, Ahindra Choudhury, Dhiraj Bhattacharya, Nitish Mukhapadhyay, Kanu Banerjee, Gurudas Bandyopadhyay, Bhanu Bandopadhyay, Padma Devi, Chhabi Biswas, Sumitra Devi, Molina DeviKartik ChattopadhyayUdoy Chitra Pratisthan1958Bari Theke Paliye (Runaway)
Revised:  Nitish Mukherjee, Chhaya Devi, Padma Devi, Pahari Sanyal, Anubha Gupta, Jahar Ganguly, Bhanu Banerjee, Kanu Banerjee, Haridhan Banerjee, Nabadwip HaldarKartik ChatterjeeSarkar Productions1957Nilachaley MahaprabhuAsim Kumar, Dipti Roy, Ahindra Choudhury, Dhiraj Bhattacharya, Nitish Mukhapadhyay, Kanu Banerjee, Gurudas Bandyopadhyay, Bhanu Bandopadhyay, Padma Devi, Chhabi Biswas, Sumitra Devi, Molina Devi |Kartik Chattopadhyay |Udoy Chitra Pratisthan |- |1958 |Bari Theke Paliye (Runaway)
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Original:   Kali Banerjee, Satindra Bhattacharya, Nripati Chatterjee, Shriman Deepak, Shailen Ghosh, Krishna Jaya, Param Bharak Lahiri, Gyanesh Mukherjee, Keshto Mukherjee, Padma Devi, Niti Pandit, Jahar RoyRitwik GhatakChitrakalpa1958Jalsaghar (The Music Room)
Revised:  | Kali Banerjee, Satindra Bhattacharya, Nripati Chatterjee, Shriman Deepak, Shailen Ghosh, Krishna Jaya, Param Bharak Lahiri, Gyanesh Mukherjee, Keshto Mukherjee, Padma Devi, Niti Pandit, Jahar RoyRitwik GhatakChitrakalpa1958Jalsaghar (The Music Room)
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Original:   Kali Banerjee, Satindra Bhattacharya, Nripati Chatterjee, Shriman Deepak, Shailen Ghosh, Krishna Jaya, Param Bharak Lahiri, Gyanesh Mukherjee, Keshto Mukherjee, Padma Devi, Niti Pandit, Jahar RoyRitwik GhatakChitrakalpa1958Jalsaghar (The Music Room)
Revised:  Kali Banerjee, Satindra Bhattacharya, Nripati Chatterjee, Shriman Deepak, Shailen Ghosh, Krishna Jaya, Param Bharak Lahiri, Gyanesh Mukherjee, Keshto Mukherjee, Padma Devi, Niti Pandit, Jahar Roy |Ritwik Ghatak |Chitrakalpa |- |1958 |Jalsaghar (The Music Room)
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Original:   Chhabi Biswas,
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Original:  Begum AkhtarSatyajit RaySatyajit Ray1960Kshudhita PashanSoumitra Chatterjee,
Revised:  Begum Akhtar |Satyajit Ray |Satyajit Ray |- |1960 |Kshudhita Pashan |Soumitra Chatterjee,
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Original:  Robin BanerjeeTapan SinhaHemen Ganguly1963Uttar FalguniSuchitra Sen,
Revised:  Robin Banerjee |Tapan Sinha |Hemen Ganguly |- |1963 |Uttar Falguni |Suchitra Sen,
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Original:  Ajit BandyopadhyayAsit SenUttam Kumar1964Sanjh Aur SaveraMeena Kumari,
Revised:  Ajit Bandyopadhyay |Asit Sen |Uttam Kumar |- |1964 |Sanjh Aur Savera |Meena Kumari,
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Original:  Tun Tun, Padma Chavan, SujataShakti SamantaShakti Samanta1966Netaji Subhashchandra BoseAbhi Bhattacharya, Jayamala, Bipin Gupta, Padma Devi, Niranjan Sharma, Leela Misra, R. Dayal, Sudarshan SethiHemen GuptaAdarshlok1976Jana AranyaPradip Mukherjee, Kalyan Sen, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Padma Devi, Deepankar De, Arati Bhattacharya, Gautam Chakraborty, Lily Chakravarty, Bimal Chatterjee, Bimal Deb, Santosh Dutta, Utpal Dutt, Rabi Ghosh, Aparna SenSatyajit RayIndus Films (Subir Guha)
Revised:  Tun Tun, Padma Chavan, Sujata |Shakti Samanta |Shakti Samanta |- |1966 |Netaji Subhashchandra Bose |Abhi Bhattacharya, Jayamala, Bipin Gupta, Padma Devi, Niranjan Sharma, Leela Misra, R. Dayal, Sudarshan SethiHemen GuptaAdarshlok1976Jana AranyaPradip Mukherjee, Kalyan Sen, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Padma Devi, Deepankar De, Arati Bhattacharya, Gautam Chakraborty, Lily Chakravarty, Bimal Chatterjee, Bimal Deb, Santosh Dutta, Utpal Dutt, Rabi Ghosh, Aparna SenSatyajit RayIndus Films (Subir Guha)
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Original:  Tun Tun, Padma Chavan, SujataShakti SamantaShakti Samanta1966Netaji Subhashchandra BoseAbhi Bhattacharya, Jayamala, Bipin Gupta, Padma Devi, Niranjan Sharma, Leela Misra, R. Dayal, Sudarshan SethiHemen GuptaAdarshlok1976Jana AranyaPradip Mukherjee, Kalyan Sen, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Padma Devi, Deepankar De, Arati Bhattacharya, Gautam Chakraborty, Lily Chakravarty, Bimal Chatterjee, Bimal Deb, Santosh Dutta, Utpal Dutt, Rabi Ghosh, Aparna SenSatyajit RayIndus Films (Subir Guha)
Revised:  Tun Tun, Padma Chavan, SujataShakti SamantaShakti Samanta1966Netaji Subhashchandra BoseAbhi Bhattacharya, Jayamala, Bipin Gupta, Padma Devi, Niranjan Sharma, Leela Misra, R. Dayal, Sudarshan SethiHemen GuptaAdarshlok1976Jana AranyaPradip Mukherjee, Kalyan Sen, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Padma Devi, Deepankar De, Arati Bhattacharya, Gautam Chakraborty, Lily Chakravarty, Bimal Chatterjee, Bimal Deb, Santosh Dutta, Utpal Dutt, Rabi Ghosh, Aparna Sen |Satyajit Ray |Indus Films (Subir Guha)
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Original:  1979Arun Barun O KiranmalaTarun Kumar, Dilip Ray, Master Partho, Master Supratim, Tapati Manna, Padma Devi, Nimu Bhowmik, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Alpana Goswami, Chhaya DeviBarun KabasiDolphin Films
Revised:  1979Arun Barun O KiranmalaTarun Kumar, Dilip Ray, Master Partho, Master Supratim, Tapati Manna, Padma Devi, Nimu Bhowmik, Satya Bandyopadhyay, Alpana Goswami, Chhaya Devi |Barun Kabasi |Dolphin Films |-
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Original:  (Wadia 1978: ch. 43).”Kisan Kanya of Padma Devi starring India is the first indigenously made color movie which was released in 1937.
Revised:  (Wadia 1978: ch. 43).”Kisan Kanya starring Padma Devi is the first indigenously made color movie which was released in 1937.
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Original:  He 's best known as the founder of Friendster where he worked from 2002-2005.
Revised:  He is best known as the founder of Friendster where he worked from 2002-2005.
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Original:  He then founded Socializr, where he was from 2005 to 2010, and Nuzzel, where he stayed from 2012 to 2018.
Revised:  He then founded Socializr, where he worked from 2005 to 2010, and Nuzzel, where he stayed from 2012 to 2018.
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Original:  Today Abrams is a Board Member of Girls in Tech, an investor, and a Co-founder and Managing Partner of Founders Den.
Revised:  Today Abrams is a 
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Original:  The $ 30 million dollars in Google stock would be worth a billion dollars today .
Revised:  The $ 30 million in Google stock would be worth a billion dollars today .
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Original:  He is best known as the founder of Friendster where he worked from 2002-2005.
Revised:  He is best known as the founder of Friendster where he worked from 2002 to 2005.
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Original:  He is the inventor of a patent of a "System, method, and apparatus for connecting users in an online computer system based on their relationships within social networks".
Revised:  He is the inventor of a patent for a "System, method, and apparatus for connecting users in an online computer system based on their relationships within social networks".
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Original:  From 2012 to 2018, he worked on Nuzzle , an app for providing news and media intelligence.
Revised:  From 2012 to 2018, he worked on Nuzzel , an app for providing news and media intelligence.
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Original:  He is the inventor of a patent for a "System, method, and apparatus for connecting users in an online computer system based on their relationships within social networks".
Revised:  He is the owner of a patent for a "System, method, and apparatus for connecting users in an online computer system based on their relationships within social networks".
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Original: Jonathan Abrams (b. 1969-1970) is an engineer, entrepreneur, and investor.
Revised: Jonathan Abrams is an engineer, entrepreneur, and investor.
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Original:   Death As part of a special operation to eliminate active gang members closely linked to Shamil Basaev,  Khashiev and three other were killed in a skirmish in April 2004.
Revised:  Death As part of a special operation to eliminate active gang members closely linked to Shamil Basaev, Khashiev were killed in a skirmish in April 2004.
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Original:  4 October 1977 – 10 October 2004), also known as Sokhib and Khattab , was the Emir of the Sunzhensky District and a militant in the Russian federal subjects of Ingushetia and Chechnya.
Revised:  4 October 1977 – 10 October 2004), also known as Sokhib () and Khattab () , was the Emir of the Sunzhensky District and a militant in the Russian federal subjects of Ingushetia and Chechnya.
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Original:  On November 3rd , Saudi Arabia, the United Arab Emirates, the United States and Great Britain called for the restoration of Sudan's civilian-led government.
Revised:  On 3 November , Saudi Arabia, the United Arab Emirates, the United States and Great Britain called for the restoration of Sudan's civilian-led government.
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Original:  On November 21 , 2021, Hamdok was reinstated as prime minister after a political agreement was signed by Sudan's top general Abdel Fattah al-Burhan to restore the transition to civilian rule.
Revised:  On 21 , 2021, Hamdok was reinstated as prime minister after a political agreement was signed by Sudan's top general Abdel Fattah al-Burhan to restore the transition to civilian rule.
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Original: In September 2018, Hamdok was named as Minister of Finance under the Omar al-Bashir presidency of Sudan , but refused the nomination.
Revised: In September 2018, Hamdok was named as Minister of Finance under the Omar al-Bashir presidency of Sudan but refused the nomination.
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Original:  On 4 October 2019, he purged the leadership of  public Sudanese universities, dismissing 28 chancellors and 35 vice-chancellors and appointed 34 vice-chancellors.
Revised:  On 4 October 2019, he purged the leadership of the public Sudanese universities, dismissing 28 chancellors and 35 vice-chancellors and appointed 34 vice-chancellors.
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Original:  It still remains unclear how much power Hamdok and his cabinet will have after being reinstated as prime minister.
Revised:  It remains unclear how much power Hamdok and his cabinet will have after being reinstated as prime minister.
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Original:  Hamdok delayed his decision on which candidates to select, stating that one  his reasons for objecting was that too few women were present on the list.
Revised:  Hamdok delayed his decision on which candidates to select, stating that one of his reasons for objecting was that too few women were present on the list.
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Original: Detoxification foot baths, also known as foot detox, ionic cleansing, ionic foot bath and aqua/water detox are pseudoscientific devices marketed as being able to remove toxins from the human body.
Revised: Detoxification foot baths, also known as foot detox, ionic cleansing, ionic foot bath and aqua/water detox are devices marketed as being able to remove toxins from the human body.
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Original:  They work by providing an electric current to an electrode array immersed in a salt water solution.
Revised:  It is currently understood that those that work properly provide an electric current to an electrode array immersed in a salt water solution.
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Original:  When switched on, the electrodes    rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which quickly turns the water brown  .
Revised:  When switched on, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which turns the water brown .
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Original:  This reaction  happens regardless of whether or not a persons feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use.
Revised:  This reaction happens regardless of whether or not a person’s feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use.
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Original:  Detoxification foot baths consist of two major components, a simple container in which to place the feet and an electrode array.
Revised:  Properly functioning detoxification foot baths consist of two major components, a simple container in which to place the feet and an electrode array.
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Original:  Usually a fragrant, warm salted water is used as the electrolyte and the customers feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
Revised:  Usually a warm, salted water is used as the electrolyte and the customers feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
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Original:  Usually a fragrant, warm salted water is used as the electrolyte and the customers feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
Revised:  Usually a fragrant, warm salted water is used as the electrolyte and an individual's feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
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Original:  This reaction quickly turns the salt watersolution brown, and flakes of rust may also be visible in the water . Electrode arrays used in this application degrade quickly , and usually need to be replaced after roughly 16 hours of use.
Revised:  This reaction quickly turns the salt watersolution brown, and flakes of rust may also be visible in the water . Electrode arrays used in this application degrade , and usually need to be replaced after roughly 16 hours of use.
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Original:   Some spas and manufacturers provide charts to show their customers the different areas of their bodies that toxins can come from.
Revised:  Some spas and manufacturers provide charts to show their clients the different areas of their bodies that toxins can come from.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate areaThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:       Criticism Inside Edition visited several spas in New York City in 2011 to investigate detox foot treatments.
Revised:  In the same research done by these independent researchers, blood was drawn both before and after the detox. The blood was examined under the microscope. In all cases, significant differences were noted and published in the brochure. For example, prior to the detox, one participant had a "fibrin network indicating the degree of endothelial damage" due to a "chronic auto-immune disorder and acidosis". After the detox, this participant's blood appeared to be "normal". No fibrin network was visible. Another participant's blood cells were lining up prior to the detox. Afterwards, the cells no longer lined up. Criticism Inside Edition visited several spas in New York City in 2011 to investigate detox foot treatments.
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Original:       Criticism Inside Edition visited several spas in New York City in 2011 to investigate detox foot treatments.
Revised:  Obviously, the research to understand this equipment with respect to the human body is in its infancy. Much more research needs to be done to fully understand how this equipment functions and interacts with the human body. At this point, enough research has been done to indicate that properly functioning equipment actually interacts with the human body in a beneficial manner. Fortunately, efforts are currently underway to formally investigate this process under the guidance of the National Institutes of Health. Hopefully, these efforts will produce solid research that will give a definitive answer one way or the other. Criticism Inside Edition visited several spas in New York City in 2011 to investigate detox foot treatments.
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Original:  At each spa they visited , they were told that the treatments would improve their overall health, and that the change in the color of the water was due to the release of toxins from their bodies.
Revised:  At each spa they visited , they were told that the treatments would improve overall health, and that the change in the color of the water was due to the release of toxins from their bodies.
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Original:  Inside Edition then purchased their own detox foot bath and had it examined by electrical engineer, Steve Fowler, at his lab.
Revised:  Inside Edition then purchased their copy of this unauthentic, improperly functioning detox foot bath and had it examined by electrical engineer, Steve Fowler, at his lab.
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Original:   With this information in mind he sent a friend along to a local spa  to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
Revised:  Ben Goldacre sent a friend along to a local spa to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
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Original: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Eficence Medical Research Brochure Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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