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Original:  This ‘sponging’ behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to there offspring).
Revised:  This 'sponging' behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to there offspring).
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Original:  The term was coined by the cetologist Hal Whitehead who ’s studies the cultures and population genetics of matrilineal whale communities.
Revised:  The term was coined by the cetologist Hal Whitehead who studies the cultures and population genetics of matrilineal whale communities.
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Original:  In these communities  female individuals remain grouped together with their mothers and other female relatives.
Revised:  In these communities , female individuals remain grouped together with their mothers and other female relatives.
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Original:  This 'sponging' behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to there offspring).
Revised:  This "sponging" behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to there offspring).
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Original:  This 'sponging' behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to there offspring).
Revised:  This 'sponging' behavior is found to be spread through vertical social transmission along a matrilineal pattern (i.e. the mothers teach the behavior to their offspring).
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Original:  All dolphins exhibiting one of the deep water haplotypes belong to a single matriline.
Revised:  All dolphins exhibiting one of the deepwater haplotypes belong to a single matriline.
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Original:  A study in the same area and species shown that shelling is also marginally learn from URL
Revised:  A study in the same area and species showed that shelling is also marginally learn from URL
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Original:  A study in the same area and species shown that shelling is also marginally learn from URL
Revised:  A study in the same area and species shown that shelling is also marginally learned from URL
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Original:  A study in the same area and species showed that shelling is also marginally learned from URL In Early Humans Cultural hitchhiking has been proposed as an explanation for a widely inferred and abrupt Y-chromosome population bottleneck across several Old World (Africa, Europe, Asia) populations around 4000-6000 BC.
Revised:  A study in the same area and species showed that shelling is also marginally learned from associates. In Early Humans Cultural hitchhiking has been proposed as an explanation for a widely inferred and abrupt Y-chromosome population bottleneck across several Old World (Africa, Europe, Asia) populations around 4000-6000 BC.
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Original: The Abhinava Tandava (or Abhinava Tarkatandava) (Sanskrit:अभिनवतर्कताण्डव) ), is a Sanskrit work on Dvaita philosophy written by Satyanatha Tirtha.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography External links Category:Dvaita Category:Philosophical literature Category:Sanskrit tex
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bibliography External links Category:Dvaita Category:Philosophical literature Category:Sanskrit tex
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:Dvaita Category:Philosophical literature Category:Sanskrit tex
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Original:  London: Routledge Entitlement is the belief that certain groups or species deserve more than others , and is embedded in the unequal relations governing developed and developing human societies.
Revised:  London: Routledge Entitlement is the belief that certain groups or species deserve more than others and is embedded in the unequal relations governing developed and developing human societies.
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Original: Denial is manifest at the individual level where it is used to protect the self from overwhelming emotional responses to climate change.
Revised: Denial is manifested at the individual level where it is used to protect the self from overwhelming emotional responses to climate change.
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Original:  This makes it difficult to give name to what one is feeling, so it is generally termed as eco-anxiety- particularly when this negative affect takes on more intense forms such as sleeping disorders and ruminative thinking.
Revised:  This makes it difficult to give name to what one is feeling, so it is generally termed as eco-anxiety- particularly when this negative effect takes on more intense forms such as sleeping disorders and ruminative thinking.
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Original:  Puteri Indonesia 2007 Duma was crowned as Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2007 at the grand finale held in Jakarta Convention Center, Jakarta, Indonesia on August 3, 2007, by the outgoing titleholder of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2006 and Top 15 Miss International 2007, Rahma Landy Sjahruddin of Jakarta SCR 5. Duma represented North Sumatra province at the pageant.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia 2007 Duma was crowned as Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2007 at the grand finale held in Jakarta Convention Center, Jakarta, Indonesia on August 3, 2007, by the outgoing titleholder of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2006 and Top 15 Miss International 2007, Rahma Landy Sjahruddin of Jakarta SCR 5. Duma represented her home province of North Sumatra at the pageant.
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Original: TV Films Year Title Genre Role TV Network Ref. 2019-present Keluarga Cemana comedy movies as Mamak Cemana Limelight Pictures NET.
Revised: TV Films Year Title Genre Role TV Network Ref. 2019-present Keluarga Cemana comedy movies as Mamak Cemana NET.
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Original: Early life and education Duma together with her childrens Cleo (left) and Judeo (right) in 2020.
Revised: Early life and education Duma together with her children Cleo (left) and Judeo (right) in 2020.
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Original: Early life and education Duma together with her children Cleo (left) and Judeo (right) in 2020.
Revised: Early life and education Duma together with her childrens Cleo (left) and Judeo (right) in 2020.
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Original: In intensive care This may be used for people suffering from acute respiratory distress syndrome (ARDS) to improve their breathing.
Revised: Intensive care This may be used for people suffering from acute respiratory distress syndrome (ARDS) to improve their breathing.
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Original: The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised: The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in  prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their stomach .
Revised: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in a prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their stomach .
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Original: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in  prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their stomach .
Revised: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their belly .
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Original:  It has been especially tried and studied  for patients on ventilators  but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP  as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been tried and studied for patients on ventilators but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been especially tried and studied  for patients on ventilators  but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP  as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been especially tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been especially tried and studied  for patients on ventilators  but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP  as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been especially tried and studied for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been especially tried and studied  for patients on ventilators  but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP  as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been especially tried and studied for patients on ventilators but during the COVID-19 pandemic it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been especially tried and studied  for patients on ventilators  but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP  as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been especially tried and studied for patients on ventilators but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated  then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff  or special equipment.
Revised:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff or special equipment.
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Original:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated  then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff  or special equipment.
Revised:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff or special equipment.
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Original:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated  then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff  or special equipment.
Revised:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff or special equipment.
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Original:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated  then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff  or special equipment.
Revised:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff members or special equipment.
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Original:  If they are intubated then care has to be taken to manage the tangle of associated lines and tubes.
Revised:  If the patients are intubated then care has to be taken to manage the tangle of associated lines and tubes.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that  there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care but that a significant reduction in mortality was only found with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of proning in infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care but that a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of proning in infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that  there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care but that a significant reduction in mortality was only found with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of proning in infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care but that a significant reduction in mortality was only found with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found  but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found  but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found  but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
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Original:  A 2014 systematic review of 11 trials found that reduction of the tidal volume of ventilation , in combination with prone positioning, was effective, saving the life of about one additional patient in eleven.
Revised:  A 2014 systematic review of 11 trials found that reduction of the tidal volume of ventilation in combination with prone positioning, was effective, saving the life of about one additional patient in eleven.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE)  conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM)  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE)  conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM)  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE)  conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM)  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE)  conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM)  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE)  conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM)  looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  At that time, proning was used for 7\% of all ARDS patients and 14\% of the most severe cases.
Revised:  At that time, prone positioning was used for 7\% of all ARDS patients and 14\% of the most severe cases.
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Original:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients  who suffer more  on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients who suffer more on their back in a supine position.
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Original:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients  who suffer more  on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients , who suffer more on their back in a supine position.
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Original:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients  who suffer more  on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
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Original:  Mechanisms There are several factors which have been suggested to explain the benefits of this position for ARDS patients.
Revised:  Mechanisms There are several factors that have been suggested to explain the benefits of this position for ARDS patients.
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Original:  Mechanisms There are several factors which have been suggested to explain the benefits of this position for ARDS patients.
Revised:  Mechanisms There are several factors which have been suggested to explain the benefits of the prone position for ARDS patients.
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Original:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart , which pumps blood through the lungs, and so reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
Revised:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart that pumps blood through the lungs, and so reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
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Original:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart , which pumps blood through the lungs, and so reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
Revised:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart , which pumps blood through the lungs, and thereby reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
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