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Original:  Hilton added her signiature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: "She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
Revised:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: "She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
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Original:  That petition garnered a total of 30,005 signiatures .
Revised:  That petition garnered a total of 30,005 signatures .
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Original:  An Internet petition, again powered by iPetitons sprang up, called Jail Paris Hilton.
Revised:  An Internet petition, again powered by iPetitions sprang up, called Jail Paris Hilton.
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Original:  That petition received 87,715 signiatures as of Sunday.
Revised:  That petition received 87,715 signatures as of Sunday.
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton Photographers and media are gathering for what might be the appearance Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton who is court ordered to serve jail time in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County.
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Original:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: " She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
Revised:  Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: " She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
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Original:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: " She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
Revised:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon . The petition says Hilton " She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
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Original:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: " She didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
Revised:  Hilton added her signature to a online Internet petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon on the basis of: " didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
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Original:  An Internet petition, again powered by iPetitionssprang up, called Jail Paris Hilton.
Revised:  A counter petition, again powered by iPetitionssprang up, called Jail Paris Hilton.
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Original:  That petition received 87,715 signatures as of Sunday .
Revised:  That petition received 87,715 signatures as of Sunday 
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton  who is sentenced to serve jail time, The fashion industry has joined the  free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton , who is sentenced to serve jail time, The fashion industry has joined the free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton  who is sentenced to serve jail time, The fashion industry has joined the  free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton who is sentenced to serve jail time, the fashion industry has joined the free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
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Original: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton  who is sentenced to serve jail time, The fashion industry has joined the  free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
Revised: File photo of Paris Hilton With photographers and media gathering for an appearance by Paris Hilton who is sentenced to serve jail time, The fashion industry has joined the ' free or jail Paris Hilton debate.
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Original:   A British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-stiped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
Revised:  ' A British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-stiped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
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Original:   A British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-stiped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
Revised:  British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-stiped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
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Original:   A British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-stiped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
Revised:  A British company Mio Destino designed a line of prison-striped lingerie embroidered with the words 'Free Paris' in support of Hilton.
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Original:  The 45 day jail sentence is scheduled to begin on Tuesday at the Century Regional Detention Center in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County after Hilton was convicted of driving recklessly for travelling at a speed of 70 miles per hour in a 35 miles per hour zone with no headlights after dark in February this year.
Revised:  The 45 day jail sentence is scheduled to begin on Tuesday at the Century Regional Detention Center in suburban Lynwood, Los Angeles County after Hilton was convicted of driving recklessly for traveling at a speed of 70 miles per hour in a 35 miles per hour zone with no headlights after dark in February this year.
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Original:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions  that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
Revised:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction last November . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
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Original:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions  that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
Revised:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
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Original:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions  that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
Revised:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, hosted by iPetitions that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
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Original:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions  that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
Revised:  The offense occurred while her driver's license was suspended after a driving under the influence conviction in November last year . Hilton added her signature to an online petition, called Free Paris Hilton, created by webizens and hosted by iPetitions , that appealed to California governor Arnold Schwarzenegger for a pardon.
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Original:  The petition says Hilton "didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
Revised:  The petition states that Hilton "didn't hurt or kill anyone, and she has learned her lesson.
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Original:  That petition garnered a total of 30, 005 signatures.
Revised:  The petition has garnered over 30, 005 signatures.
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Original:  That petition garnered a total of 30, 005 signatures.
Revised:  That petition garnered a total of 30, 000 signatures.
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Original: The U.S. Department of Justice (DOJ) have reported that four arrests have been made in a foiled plot to blow up jet-fuel supply tanks and pipeline at John F. Kennedy International Airport  , in New York City.
Revised: The U.S. Department of Justice (DOJ) have reported that four arrests have been made in a foiled plot to blow up jet-fuel supply tanks and pipeline at John F. Kennedy International Airport (JFK) , in New York City.
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Original:  It was not made clear where Nur was arrested, however the DOJ indicated that the U.S. will initiate extradition proceedings for the three    
Revised:  It was not made clear where Nur was arrested, however the DOJ indicated that the U.S. will initiate extradition proceedings for the three . 
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Original: The U.S. Department of Justice (DOJ) have reported that four arrests have been made in a foiled plot to blow up jet-fuel supply tanks and pipeline at John F. Kennedy International Airport (JFK), in New York City.
Revised: The U.S. Department of Justice (DOJ) has reported that four arrests have been made in a foiled plot to blow up jet-fuel supply tanks and pipeline at John F. Kennedy International Airport (JFK), in New York City.
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Original:  The European Southern Observatory's telescope  made the first discovery of a planet orbiting another star.
Revised:  The European Southern Observatory's telescope has made the first discovery of a planet orbiting another star.
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Original:  The new image is the star GQ Lupi .
Revised:  The new image is the star called GQ Lupi with an orbiting planet .
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Original:  The European Southern Observatory's telescope  has made the first  discovery of a planet orbiting another star.
Revised:  The European Southern Observatory's telescope has made the first comfirmed discovery of a planet orbiting another star.
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Original:  The planet is nearly twice the size of Jupiter and orbits a star approximately the size of our own sun.
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Original:  Scientists have been trying to observe planets outside our own solar system for nearly 10 years.
Revised:  Scientists have been trying to locate planets outside our own solar system for nearly 10 years.
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Original:  Instances of almost 150 such planets were observed using other measurements , but none had a confirmed picture taken until now.
Revised:  Inferences of early 150 such planets were observed using other measurements , but none had a confirmed picture taken until now.
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Original:  Months earlier, another team of scientists  took pictures of what might be another planet , but it is possible the image shows a more distant object instead.
Revised:  Months earlier, another team of scientists , took pictures of what might be another planet , but it is possible the image shows a more distant object instead.
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Original:  Months earlier, another team of scientists  took pictures of what might be another planet , but it is possible the image shows a more distant object instead.
Revised:  Months earlier, another team of scientists took pictures of what might be another planet . That image remains controversial because it shows what may be a more distant object instead.
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Original:  The new image is the starcalled GQ Lupi   with an orbiting planet.
Revised:  The new image is the starcalled GQ Lupi The new image contains the star, GQ Lupi, with an orbiting planet.
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Original:  It is  70\% the size of the sun and 400 light-years away .
Revised:  It is 70\% the size , and located 400 light-years away .
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Original:  Unlike our sun which is 4.6 billion years old, the GQ Lupi star is approximately 1 million years old : very young for a star.
Revised:  Unlike our sun which is 4.6 billion years old, the GQ Lupi star is approximately 1 million years old and is considered very young for a star.
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Original:   The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite a detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely be gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life  &  .
Revised:  The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite the detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely be gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life & .
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Original:   The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite a detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely be gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life  &  .
Revised:  The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite a detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely make it gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life & .
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Original:   The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite a detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely be gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life  &  .
Revised:  The planet, much like the star it orbits, is very hot — about 2,000 degrees Kelvin — so despite a detection of water in the planet's atmosphere, which at that temperature would likely be gaseous, there is no expectation it might support life . & .
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Original: Chile is home to tall mountains on South America's west coast Space.com reported yesterday on a picture of a planet taken by the Very Large Telescope located in Chile.
Revised: Chile is home to tall mountains on South America's west coast reported yesterday on a picture of a planet taken by the Very Large Telescope located in Chile.
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Original:  The research team that photographed the planet with its host star was led by Ralph Neuhaeuser of the Astrophysical Institute University Observatory (AIU).
Revised:  The research team that photographed the planet with its host star was led by Ralph Neuhaeuser of the University Observatory (AIU).
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Original:  The research team that photographed the planet with its host star was led by Ralph Neuhaeuser of the Astrophysical Institute University Observatory (AIU).
Revised:  The research team that photographed the planet with its host star was led by Ralph Neuhaeuser of the Astrophysical Institute (AIU).
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Original:  It is smaller than our sun , 70\% the size, and is located 400 light-years away from our solar system.
Revised:  It is smaller than our , 70\% the size, and is located 400 light-years away from our solar system.
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Original:  It is smaller than our sun , 70\% the size, and is located 400 light-years away from our solar system.
Revised:  It is smaller than our sun , 70\% the size, and is located 400 away from our solar system.
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Original:  The planet orbiting GQ Lupi is three times further out than Neptune 's orbit around our sun, and scientists estimate the orbiting period to be about 1,200 years.
Revised:  The planet orbiting GQ Lupi is three times further out than 's orbit around our sun, and scientists estimate the orbiting period to be about 1,200 years.
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Original:  The discovery will be detailed in an upcoming issue of the journal Astronomy Astrophysics.
Revised:  The discovery will be detailed in an upcoming issue of the journal Astrophysics.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Image at Space.co
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Original:  Other members are Brunei, Portal: Laos, Myanmar and Vietnam
Revised:  Other members are Brunei, Laos, Myanmar and Vietnam
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Original:   The apparent rounding down of Cambodia's stated land mass , 181,035 square kilometers, on the ASEAN website, has a Cambodian lawmaker up in arms.
Revised:  The apparent rounding down of Cambodia's territory , 181,035 square kilometers, on the ASEAN website, has a Cambodian lawmaker up in arms.
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Original:   The apparent rounding down of Cambodia's stated land mass , 181,035 square kilometers, on the ASEAN website, has a Cambodian lawmaker up in arms.
Revised:  The apparent rounding down of Cambodia's stated land mass , 181,035 square kilometers, on the ASEAN website, has some Cambodian lawmakers up in arms.
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Original:   [     Government spokesman and Information Minister Khieu Kanharith said he would get to the bottom of the matter , and called for cooler heads in the meantime.
Revised:  [must Government spokesman and Information Minister Khieu Kanharith said he would get to the bottom of the matter , and called for cooler heads in the meantime.
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Original:   [     Government spokesman and Information Minister Khieu Kanharith said he would get to the bottom of the matter , and called for cooler heads in the meantime.
Revised:  [ Government spokesman and Information Minister Khieu Kanharith said he would investigate , and called for cooler heads in the meantime.
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Original: The United States District Judge w:Reggie WaltonReggie B.
Revised: The United States District Judge Reggie B.
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Original:  Walton will rule on Scooter Libby's sentence at the E. Barrett Prettyman Federal Courthouse in Washington, D.C on Tuesday.
Revised:  Walton , presiding at the E. Barrett Prettyman Federal Courthouse in Washington, D.C on Tuesday.
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Original: Libby's defense team  submitted a sentencing memo to Judge Walton on Thursday last week.
Revised: Libby's defense team Libby's defense team submitted a sentencing memo to Judge Walton on Thursday last week.
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Original:  Fitzgerald asked the federal judge to sentence Libby to 30 - 37 months in jail .
Revised:  Fitzgerald asked the federal judge to sentence Libby to 30 - 37 months in jail 
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Original:  Prosecutor Patrick Fitzgerald has called Libby unrepentant and unremorseful at Libby 's sentencing hearing on May 25.
Revised:  Special Prosecutor Fitzgerald called Libby unrepentant and unremorseful at Libby 's sentencing hearing on May 25.
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Original:  Prosecutor Patrick Fitzgerald has called Libby unrepentant and unremorseful at Libby 's sentencing hearing on May 25.
Revised:  Prosecutor Patrick Fitzgerald has called Libby unrepentant and unremorseful at the trial 's sentencing hearing on May 25.
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Original:  Ms Bishop said while she agreed with the encouragement of teaching a second language in schools, higher standards in literacy is a "national priority . " 
Revised:  Ms Bishop said while she agreed with the encouragement of teaching a second language in schools, higher standards in literacy is a "national priority " 
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Original:  Ms Bishop said while she agreed with the encouragement of teaching a second language in schools, higher standards in literacy is a "national priority . " 
Revised:  Ms Bishop said while she agreed with the encouragement of teaching a second language in schools, higher standards in literacy is a "national priority . " .
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Original: Australian students from primary school to year ten would be required to learn a second language as part of a national push by university chiefs to stem the language "crisis" in schools.
Revised: Australian students from primary school to year ten would be required to learn a second language , calling the current situation a "crisis" in schools.
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Original:  Included in the proposal released on Friday, all year 12 graduates would also get a 10 per cent bonus on their admissions scores if they successfully complete a second language subject in their final year at school.
Revised:  Included in the proposal released on Friday, all year 12 graduates would also get a 10 per cent bonus on university admission scores for those passing a second language subject in their final year at school.
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Original:  "Crisis is not too strong a word to describe the decline in foreign language education in our schools and universities,
Revised:  Terming the decline in foreign language education in our schools and universities,
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Original:  "Crisis is not too strong a word to describe the decline in foreign language education in our schools and universities,
Revised:  "Crisis is not too strong a word to describe the decline in foreign language education a
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Original:  " says Gallagher . " Our national deficit in foreign language capability is something we can no longer afford to ignore  . "Of the 29 languages still on offer at tertiary level, nine are offered at only one Australian university and only seven are well represented across the sector .  "It is Australia's great unrecognised skills shortage, and the one most directly relevant to our competitiveness and security in an increasingly global environment."
Revised:  " says Gallagher . " , Gallagher said that it was a problem " we can no longer afford to ignore . "Of the 29 languages still on offer at tertiary level, nine are offered at only one Australian university and only seven are well represented across the sector . "It is Australia's great unrecognised skills shortage, and the one most directly relevant to our competitiveness and security in an increasingly global environment."
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