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Original:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so called mine war in World War I. The rocks of the Dolomites are different than those in other theaters and specialists were required in order to design the tunnels.
Revised:  This has included digging of tunnels in northeastern Italy and Austria during the so called mine war in World War I. The rocks of the Dolomites are different from those in other theaters and specialists were required in order to design the tunnels.
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Original:  In World War II  this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses , in light of the local geology.
Revised:  In World War II , this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses , in light of the local geology.
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Original:  In World War II  this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses , in light of the local geology.
Revised:  In World War II this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German-occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses , in light of the local geology.
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Original:  In World War II  this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses , in light of the local geology.
Revised:  In World War II this task has being performed by the Allies as they advanced across German occupied Europe, assessing the likely effect of bombing bridges and shelling defenses in light of the local geology.
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Original:  During peacetime  similar methods have been used, such as the decision to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
Revised:  During peacetime , similar methods have been used, such as the decision to locate the American Strategic Petroleum Reserve in the salt domes of the Gulf Coast.
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Original:  In the case of the D Day landings and the  invasion of Iraq  ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign.
Revised:  In the case of the D Day landings and the 2003 invasion of Iraq ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign.
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Original:  In the case of the D Day landings and the  invasion of Iraq  ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign.
Revised:  In the case of the D Day landings and the invasion of Iraq , ground water and aggregate were the two most important geological resources to identify for the campaign.
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Original:  Since 1966  the German Army has also been using geologists to mitigate and predict the environmental effects of civilian resource extraction.
Revised:  Since 1966 , the German Army has also been using geologists to mitigate and predict the environmental effects of civilian resource extraction.
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Original:  During World War II  the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had been sent towards North America from Japan.
Revised:  During World War II , the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had been sent towards North America from Japan.
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Original:  During World War II  the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had been sent towards North America from Japan.
Revised:  During World War II the American Military Geology Unit discovered the origin of balloon bombs which had been dispatched towards North America from Japan.
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Original:  Effect of warfare on rocks Military activity also affects the physical geology.
Revised:  Effect of warfare on rocks Military activity affects the physical geology.
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Original:  This was first noted through the intensive shelling on the Western Front  , which caused the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks  permeability.
Revised:  This was first noted through the intensive shelling on the Western Front during World War I , which caused the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks permeability.
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Original:  This was first noted through the intensive shelling on the Western Front  , which caused the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks  permeability.
Revised:  This was first noted through the intensive shelling on the Western Front , which caused the shattering of the bedrock and changed the rocks ' permeability.
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Original:  New minerals, rocks  and land-forms are also a byproduct of nuclear testing.
Revised:  New minerals, rocks , and land-forms are also a byproduct of nuclear testing.
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Original:  Discoveries by military Military research has lead to many geological discoverers , however secrecy has often delayed some of the possible progress.
Revised:  Discoveries by military Military research has lead to many geological discoverers ; however, secrecy has often delayed some of the possible progress.
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Original:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
Revised:  The Austrian Army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
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Original:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
Revised:  The Austrian army of World War I included geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
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Original:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
Revised:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
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Original:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carny out non military scientific investigation during the war.
Revised:  The Austrian army of World War I had geologists called Kriegsgeologen and who were allowed to carry out non-military scientific investigation during the war.
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Original:  Discoveries have included new natural resource deposits and the mapping of magnetic stripes on the ocean floor  leading to the idea of Plate Tectonics
Revised:  Discoveries have included new natural resource deposits and the mapping of magnetic stripes on the ocean floor , leading to the idea of Plate Tectonics
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Original:  Discoveries have included new natural resource deposits and the mapping of magnetic stripes on the ocean floor  leading to the idea of Plate Tectonics
Revised:  Discoveries have included new natural resource deposits and the mapping of magnetic stripes on the ocean floor leading to the idea of plate tectonics
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Original: Discoveries by military Military research has lead to many geological discoverers ;
Revised: Discoveries by military Military research has led to many geological discoverers ;
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Original: Discoveries by military Military research has lead to many geological discoverers ;
Revised: Discoveries by military Military research has lead to many geological discoveries ;
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Original:  6) Wide and comfortable range of mastication movements, as the appliance consists of two separate parts with no permanent and physical intermaxillary connection    ]    .
Revised:  6) Wide and comfortable range of mastication movements, as the appliance consists of two separate parts with no permanent and physical intermaxillary connection . ] .
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Original:  1920 births Category: Politics of Africa Category:Ugandan people Category:Ugandan politicians Category: Ugandan political people Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:African political history Category:Political professionals Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
Revised:  1920 births Category: Ugandan politicians Category: Ugandan political people Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:African political history Category:Political professionals Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
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Original:  1920 births Category: Politics of Africa Category:Ugandan people Category:Ugandan politicians Category: Ugandan political people Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:African political history Category:Political professionals Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
Revised:  1920 births Category: Politics of Africa Category:Ugandan people Category:Ugandan politicians Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:African political history Category:Political professionals Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
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Original:  1920 births Category: Politics of Africa Category:Ugandan people Category:Ugandan politicians Category: Ugandan political people Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:African political history Category:Political professionals Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
Revised:  1920 births Category: Politics of Africa Category:Ugandan people Category:Ugandan politicians Category: Ugandan political people Category: Kenya African National Union politicians Category:National Resistance Movement politicians Category:Uganda People's Congress politicians Category:Itesot people Category:Soroti District Category:Ugandan prisoners and detainees Category:Ugandan businesspeople Category:2012 deat
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Original: Early life Cuthbert Joseph Obwangor was born in Omasia Parish, Bukedea District, Eastern Region, Uganda on the 1st of November 1920.
Revised: Early life Cuthbert Joseph Obwangor was born in Omasia Parish, Bukedea District, Eastern Region, Uganda on 1 November 1920.
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Original:  Ethnic conflict threatened to spry up after the independence of Uganda, and ethnic groups were naming kings to fight for their respective ethnic groups, and the traditionally kingless Iteso People attempted to name Obwangor as Iteso king, but Obwangor refused as he was dedicated to a multi-ethnic unified Uganda.
Revised:  Ethnic conflict threatened to spry up after the independence of Uganda, and ethnic groups were naming kings to fight for their respective ethnic groups, and the traditionally kingless ITeso people attempted to name Obwangor as Iteso king, but Obwangor refused as he was dedicated to a multi-ethnic unified Uganda.
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Original:  Imprisonment Obwangor, then minister of Commerce and Industry in Uganda, began to fall out of favor of President Apollo Milton Obote when he spoke out in favor of restraints on the presidential power in Uganda, with the following an excerpt from the journal of the Parliament of Uganda with his speech on the 11th of July , 1967:
Revised:  Imprisonment Obwangor, then minister of Commerce and Industry in Uganda, began to fall out of favor of President Apollo Milton Obote when he spoke out in favor of restraints on the presidential power in Uganda, with the following an excerpt from the journal of the Parliament of Uganda with his speech on 11 July 1967:
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Original:  On the 19th of December , 1969, there was an assassination attempt on Apollo Milton Obote's life, wounding him.
Revised:  On 19 December 1969, there was an assassination attempt on Apollo Milton Obote's life, wounding him.
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Original:  On the 19th of December , 1969, there was an assassination attempt on Apollo Milton Obote's life, wounding him.
Revised:  On the 19th of December , 1969, there was an Assassination attempt on Apollo Milton Obote's life, wounding him.
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Original:  On the 2nd of February 1971, the new head of state of Uganda Idi Amin released Obwangor, along with all other political prisoners in Uganda.
Revised:  On 2 February 1971, the new head of state of Uganda Idi Amin released Obwangor, along with all other political prisoners in Uganda.
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Original:  Post Imprisonment Career Obwangor reentered the political arena following his release, rejoining the Uganda People's Congress after the party temporarily excommunicated Obwangor after the leader of the Uganda People's Congress imprisoned Obwangor.
Revised:  Post Imprisonment career Obwangor reentered the political arena following his release, rejoining the Uganda People's Congress after the party temporarily excommunicated Obwangor after the leader of the Uganda People's Congress imprisoned Obwangor.
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Original:  Death Obwangor passed away on the 18th of May , 2012 at 93 years old.
Revised:  Death Obwangor passed away on 18 May 2012 at 93 years old.
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Original:  She has directed television serial “ Kolkatae Kache”.
Revised:  She has directed television serial “ Kolkatar Kache”.
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Original: Meenakshi Goswami  was an Indian film actress who works mainly in Bengali cinema. mainly as supporting actress.
Revised: Meenakshi Goswami ( মীনাক্ষী গোস্বামী) was an Indian film actress who works mainly in Bengali cinema. mainly as supporting actress.
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Original:  She is a writer, activist (for Indigenous land rights in Canada), poet, and advocate with works published in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review,  CBC Arts, and many others.
Revised:  She is a writer, activist (for Indigenous land rights in Canada), poet, and advocate with works published in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review, through CBC Arts, and many others.
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Original: Helen Knott is an Indigenous poet-writer, grassroots activist and leader, and social worker from the Prophet River First Nations community .
Revised: Helen Knott is an Indigenous poet-writer, grassroots activist and leader, and social worker from the Prophet River First Nation .
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Original: Education and career Knott advocates against violence in Indigenous lands and its correlation to violence against Indigenous women.
Revised: Career Knott advocates against violence in Indigenous lands and its correlation to violence against Indigenous women.
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Original:  Currently residing in Fort St. John, British Columbia, Canada with her son , Helen has published a number of poems and short pieces of creative non-fiction in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review, through CBC Arts, and in a compendium entitled Surviving Canada: Indigenous People Celebrate 150 Years of Betrayal.van Koeverden, Jane.
Revised:  Residing in Fort St. John, British Columbia, Canada with her son , Helen has published a number of poems and short pieces of creative non-fiction in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review, through CBC Arts, and in a compendium entitled Surviving Canada: Indigenous People Celebrate 150 Years of Betrayal.van Koeverden, Jane.
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Original:  Currently residing in Fort St. John, British Columbia, Canada with her son , Helen has published a number of poems and short pieces of creative non-fiction in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review, through CBC Arts, and in a compendium entitled Surviving Canada: Indigenous People Celebrate 150 Years of Betrayal.van Koeverden, Jane.
Revised:  Currently residing in Fort St. John, British Columbia, Canada , Helen has published a number of poems and short pieces of creative non-fiction in Red Rising Magazine, the Malahat Review, through CBC Arts, and in a compendium entitled Surviving Canada: Indigenous People Celebrate 150 Years of Betrayal.van Koeverden, Jane.
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Original:  The construction of Site C violated the previously established Treaty 8, which states the First Nations could continue their traditional practices of hunting, trapping, fishing, and collecting medicinal plants "for as long as the sun shines, the rivers flow and the grass grows."
Revised:  The construction of Site C is alleged to violate the previously established Treaty 8, which states the First Nations could continue their traditional practices of hunting, trapping, fishing, and collecting medicinal plants "for as long as the sun shines, the rivers flow and the grass grows."
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Original: Names Steryl-sulfatase is also known as arylsulfatase, steroid sulfatase, sterol sulfatase, dehydroepiandrosterone sulfate sulfatase, arylsulfatase C, steroid 3-sulfatase, steroid sulfate sulfohydrolase, dehydroepiandrosterone sulfatase, pregnenolone sulfatase, phenolic steroid sulfatase, 3-beta-hydroxysteroid sulfate sulfatase, as well as by its systematic name steryl-sulfate sulfohydrolase .
Revised: Names Steryl-sulfatase is also known as arylsulfatase, steroid sulfatase, sterol sulfatase, dehydroepiandrosterone sulfate sulfatase, arylsulfatase C, steroid 3-sulfatase, steroid sulfate sulfohydrolase, dehydroepiandrosterone sulfatase, pregnenolone sulfatase, phenolic steroid sulfatase, 3-beta-hydroxysteroid sulfate sulfatase, as well as by its systematic name steryl-sulfate sulfohydrolase 
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Original:  See also Steroidogenic enzyme Steroid sulfotransferase Estrogen sulfotransferase%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Further reading%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:EC 3.1.6 Category:Endocrinolo
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Original:  See also Steroidogenic enzyme Steroid sulfotransferase Estrogen sulfotransferase%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Further reading%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:EC 3.1.6 Category:Endocrinolo
Revised:  See also Steroidogenic enzyme Steroid sulfotransferase Estrogen sulfotransferase%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:EC 3.1.6 Category:Endocrinolo
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Original:  See also Steroidogenic enzyme Steroid sulfotransferase Estrogen sulfotransferase%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Further reading%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Category:EC 3.1.6 Category:Endocrinolo
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Original: Donna Moody Donna L. Moody , PhD (University of Massachusetts/Amherst) is a Native American woman of the Abenaki Nation.
Revised: Donna Donna L. Moody , PhD (University of Massachusetts/Amherst) is a Native American woman of the Abenaki Nation.
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Original: Donna Moody Donna L. Moody , PhD (University of Massachusetts/Amherst) is a Native American woman of the Abenaki Nation.
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Original: Donna Moody Donna L. Moody , PhD (University of Massachusetts/Amherst) is a Native American woman of the Abenaki Nation.
Revised: Donna Moody Donna L. Moody is a Native American woman of the Abenaki Nation.
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Original:  This directly led to the NHDHR’s ( New Hampshire Division for Historic Resources ) repatriation of the three lost individual’s remains to the Abenaki Nation in 2002, along with the remains of 14 other individuals from other sites across New England.
Revised:  This directly led to the New Hampshire Division for Historic Resources ) repatriation of the three lost individual’s remains to the Abenaki Nation in 2002, along with the remains of 14 other individuals from other sites across New England.
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