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Original:  He had his secondary education at the Accra Academy from 1947 to 1951, there some of his contemporaries include Emmanuel Noi Omaboe;
Revised:  He had his secondary education at the Accra Academy from 1947 to 1951, there some of his contemporaries included Emmanuel Noi Omaboe;
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Original:  C.J.S. Thompson, "The Mystery and Lore of Monsters", pgs. 227-228 He never wore shoes, which wouldn't fit on his misshapen feet.
Revised:  He never wore shoes, which wouldn't fit on his misshapen feet.
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Original:  He walked with the help of a staff considerably taller than himself. C.J.S. Thompson, "The Mystery and Lore of Monsters", pgs. 227-228 Sources described him as being irritable and having a shrill, dissonant laugh, but he is also described as an intellectual who enjoyed reading Milton's Paradise Lost and ballads by William Shenstone.
Revised:  He walked with the help of a staff considerably taller than himself. Sources described him as being irritable and having a shrill, dissonant laugh, but he is also described as an intellectual who enjoyed reading Milton's Paradise Lost and ballads by William Shenstone.
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Original:  C.J.S. Thompson, "The Mystery and Lore of Monsters", pgs. 227-228
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Original:  The superstitious locals feared he could cast the Evil Eye on them, blamed him for any problems with their livestock, and generally avoided him.
Revised:  The superstitious locals feared he could cast the evil eye on them, blamed him for any problems with their livestock, and generally avoided him.
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Original:  He never wore shoes, which wouldn't fit on his misshapen feet.
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Original:  External links The Black Dwarf Historical site
Revised:  External links The Black Dwarf historical site
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Original: 280px|Engraving of the character in Scott's novel David Ritchie (1740–1811), known also as David of Manor Water, Bow'd Davie, Crooked David, and most notably the Black Dwarf, was a dwarf, the son of a quarryman at the slate quarries of Stobo.
Revised: 280px|Engraving of the character in Scott's novel David Ritchie (1740–1811), also known as David of Manor Water, Bow'd Davie, Crooked David, and most notably the Black Dwarf, was a dwarf, the son of a quarryman at the slate quarries of Stobo.
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Original: Luigi Rocchi (19 February 1932 - 26 March 1979) was an Italian Roman Catholic who was disabled for most of his life and was sometimes referred to as a "saint in a wheelchair".
Revised: Luigi Rocchi (19 February 1932 – 26 March 1979) was an Italian Roman Catholic who was disabled for most of his life and was sometimes referred to as a "saint in a wheelchair".
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Original:  Life Childhood Luigi Rocchi was born on 19 February 1932 in the San Giovanni Addolorata Hospital in Rome as the firs of three children to Francesco Rocchi (13.12.1906 -30.7 .1991) and Maria Pascucci (20.5.1910 - ???). His first home was in Via Assisi 29 in the Ognissanti parish where he received his baptism on 17 April 1932 from the parish priest Father Angelo Michaele Cominola in the names of "Luigi Pacifico Carlo".
Revised:  Life Childhood Luigi Rocchi was born on 19 February 1932 in the San Giovanni Addolorata Hospital in Rome as the firs of three children to Francesco Rocchi (13.12.1906 –30.7 .1991) and Maria Pascucci (20.5.1910 - ???). His first home was in Via Assisi 29 in the Ognissanti parish where he received his baptism on 17 April 1932 from the parish priest Father Angelo Michaele Cominola in the names of "Luigi Pacifico Carlo".
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Original:  Life Childhood Luigi Rocchi was born on 19 February 1932 in the San Giovanni Addolorata Hospital in Rome as the firs of three children to Francesco Rocchi (13.12.1906 -30.7 .1991) and Maria Pascucci (20.5.1910 - ???). His first home was in Via Assisi 29 in the Ognissanti parish where he received his baptism on 17 April 1932 from the parish priest Father Angelo Michaele Cominola in the names of "Luigi Pacifico Carlo".
Revised:  Life Childhood Luigi Rocchi was born on 19 February 1932 in the San Giovanni Addolorata Hospital in Rome as the firs of three children to Francesco Rocchi (13.12.1906 -30.7 .1991) and Maria Pascucci (20.5.1910 – ???). His first home was in Via Assisi 29 in the Ognissanti parish where he received his baptism on 17 April 1932 from the parish priest Father Angelo Michaele Cominola in the names of "Luigi Pacifico Carlo".
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Original:  His siblings were Gabriella (b. 3.9.1938 ) and Alba (b. 26.5.1946 ).
Revised:  His siblings were Gabriella (b. 3 September 1938 ) and Alba (b. 26.5.1946 ).
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Original:  The Rocchi's - when he was two in 1934 - relocated to the industrial Tolentino area in the Macerata province where it was hoped that his father could find new work since his previous work at La Marchigiana failed resulting in workers out of a job.
Revised:  The Rocchi's – when he was two in 1934 - relocated to the industrial Tolentino area in the Macerata province where it was hoped that his father could find new work since his previous work at La Marchigiana failed resulting in workers out of a job.
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Original:  The Rocchi's - when he was two in 1934 - relocated to the industrial Tolentino area in the Macerata province where it was hoped that his father could find new work since his previous work at La Marchigiana failed resulting in workers out of a job.
Revised:  The Rocchi's - when he was two in 1934 – relocated to the industrial Tolentino area in the Macerata province where it was hoped that his father could find new work since his previous work at La Marchigiana failed resulting in workers out of a job.
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Original:  He was an introverted student and marginalized due to his being unable to do sports or things that the other students could do.
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Original:  Religious experience Rocchi also recalled a specific incident when he found an old broken crucifix that he fixed and cleaned and then varnished with wood oil before hanging it up in his bedroom.
Revised:  Religious experience Rocchi also recalled a specific incident when he found an old broken crucifix that he fixed and cleaned and then Varnished with wood oil before hanging it up in his bedroom.
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Original:  Bentivoglio transmitted his letter to Ettore Masina - a journalist from Rai 2 - who contacted him with the data and asked Rocchi to join the network that he had co-founded.
Revised:  Bentivoglio transmitted his letter to Ettore Masina – a journalist from Rai 2 - who contacted him with the data and asked Rocchi to join the network that he had co-founded.
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Original:  Bentivoglio transmitted his letter to Ettore Masina - a journalist from Rai 2 - who contacted him with the data and asked Rocchi to join the network that he had co-founded.
Revised:  Bentivoglio transmitted his letter to Ettore Masina - a journalist from Rai 2 – who contacted him with the data and asked Rocchi to join the network that he had co-founded.
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Original:  He died at around 10: 00pm on 26 March due to a cardio-circulatory arrest.
Revised:  He died at around 10: 00 pm on 26 March due to a cardio-circulatory arrest.
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Original:  He died at around 10: 00pm on 26 March due to a cardio-circulatory arrest.
Revised:  He died at around 10: 00pm on 26 March due to a cardio- circulatory arrest.
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Original:  Cardinal Angelo Comastri - who developed a devotion to Rocchi while the Prelate of Loreto - presided over an event in the Co-Cathedral of San Catervo di Tolentino to celebrate the news in 2014 that Rocchi's beatification process had advanced to the next stage.
Revised:  Cardinal Angelo Comastri – who developed a devotion to Rocchi while the Prelate of Loreto - presided over an event in the Co-Cathedral of San Catervo di Tolentino to celebrate the news in 2014 that Rocchi's beatification process had advanced to the next stage.
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Original:  Cardinal Angelo Comastri - who developed a devotion to Rocchi while the Prelate of Loreto - presided over an event in the Co-Cathedral of San Catervo di Tolentino to celebrate the news in 2014 that Rocchi's beatification process had advanced to the next stage.
Revised:  Cardinal Angelo Comastri - who developed a devotion to Rocchi while the Prelate of Loreto – presided over an event in the Co-Cathedral of San Catervo di Tolentino to celebrate the news in 2014 that Rocchi's beatification process had advanced to the next stage.
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Original:  Rocchi exhibited signs of weakness in his limbs since his childhood but was not diagnosed until he was eight with a disease (D.M.D.) that led to a progressive muscular decline.
Revised:  Rocchi exhibited signs of weakness in his limbs since his childhood but was not diagnosed until he was eight with Duchenne muscular dystrophy (D.M.D.) that led to a progressive muscular decline.
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Original: Cameo is an American video-sharing website headquartered in Chicago , Illinois . Cameo was created in 2016 by Steven Galanis, Martin Blencowe, and Devon Spinnler Townsend.
Revised: Cameo is an American video-sharing website headquartered in Chicago . Cameo was created in 2016 by Steven Galanis, Martin Blencowe, and Devon Spinnler Townsend.
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Original:  Overview Steven Galanis and Martin Blencowe had the idea for Cameo after leaving Galanis's grandmother's funeral.
Revised:  Overview Steven Galanis and Martin Blencowe had the idea to create Cameo after leaving Galanis's grandmother's funeral.
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Original:  Marsh tweeted a photo introducing his fans to the site , and it was launched on March 15, 2017.
Revised:  Marsh tweeted a photo introducing his fans to the site and it was launched on March 15, 2017.
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Original:  Most prices range from $5 to $2,500, or higher according to demand , and the highest-paid is Caitlyn Jenner.
Revised:  Most prices range from $5 to $2,500, or higher according to demand and the highest-paid is Caitlyn Jenner.
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Original:  The site grew during the coronavirus pandemic , because it accommodates social distance restrictions.
Revised:  The site grew during the coronavirus pandemic and it accommodates social distance restrictions.
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Original:  In 2020, Cameo topped Fast Companys list of the "World's Most Innovative Social Media Companies" and was named one of the "World's 50 Most Innovative Companies".
Revised:  In 2020, Cameo topped Fast Companys list of the "World's Most Innovative Social Media Companies" and was listed as one of the "World's 50 Most Innovative Companies".
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Original: The site grew during the coronavirus pandemic and it accommodates social distance restrictions.
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Original:  Most prices range from $5 to $2,500, or higher according to demand and the highest-paid  is Caitlyn Jenner.
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Original:  Steven Galanis was named one of "Hollywood's Top Innovators" by The Hollywood Reporter.
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Original:  Co-founder Devon Spinnler Townsend was named to the "Forbes 30 Under 30" 
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Original:  Co-founder Devon Spinnler Townsend was named to the "Forbes 30 Under 30" 
Revised:  Co-founder Devon Spinnler Townsend was named to the "Forbes 30 Under 30" list
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Original: Baron App URL doing business as Cameo, is an American video-sharing website headquartered in Chicago.
Revised: Baron App Inc., doing business as Cameo, is an American video-sharing website headquartered in Chicago.
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Original: Etymology The term "taboo" comes from the Tongan tapu or Fijian tabu ("prohibited", "disallowed", "forbidden"), related among others to the Māori tapu and Hawaiian kapu.
Revised: ()===Etymology== The term "taboo" comes from the Tongan tapu or Fijian tabu ("prohibited", "disallowed", "forbidden"), related among others to the Māori tapu and Hawaiian kapu.
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Original: Examples [[File:Os Filhos de Pindorama.
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Original:  However, the only ones who did not fear to speak Voldemort's name were the members of the Order of the Phoneix , who actively defied Voldemort and his Death Eaters, so Voldemort placed a powerful "Taboo jinx" upon his name so that, whenever uttered, it would break any defensive enchantments and render those who speak it trackabale by Death Eaters or Snatchers.
Revised:  However, the only ones who did not fear to speak Voldemort's name were the members of the Order of the Phoneix , who actively defied Voldemort and his Death Eaters, so Voldemort placed a powerful "Taboo jinx" upon his name so that, whenever uttered, it would break any defensive enchantments and render those who speak it trackable by Death Eaters or Snatchers.
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Original: Rohit Sharma is no doubt rank one captain in Indian Premiere LeagueEncyclopædia Britannica Online.
Revised: A taboo is an implicit prohibition on something (usually against an utterance or behavior) based on a cultural sense that it is excessively repulsive or, perhaps, too sacred for ordinary people.Encyclopædia Britannica Online.
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Original: The 2009 German short video The Bill, created by Germanwatch, explores how travel and its impacts are commonly viewed in everyday developed-world life, and the social pressures that are at play.
Revised: In 2009 German short video The Bill, created by Germanwatch, explores how travel and its impacts are commonly viewed in everyday developed-world life, and the social pressures that are at play.
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Original:  The movement discourages people from flying  to lower carbon emissions to thwart climate change.
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Original:  The movement discourages people from flying  to lower carbon emissions to thwart climate change.
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Original:  Some U.S. airline executives were concerned that flight shame popularised by Greta Thunberg could play a role as global air travel growth slowed to 4\% in 2019, down from an average of 5\% per year over the previous decade.
Revised:  Some U.S. airline executives were concerned that flight shame popularized by Greta Thunberg could play a role as global air travel growth slowed to 4\% in 2019, down from an average of 5\% per year over the previous decade.
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Original:  By 2019, the flight shame movement had inspired dozens of organisations , including universities and businesses such as Klarna Bank AB, across Europe to impose short-haul flight bans on their employees, as well as discouraging long-haul flights.
Revised:  By 2019, the flight shame movement had inspired dozens of organizations , including universities and businesses such as Klarna Bank AB, across Europe to impose short-haul flight bans on their employees, as well as discouraging long-haul flights.
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Original:  British writer George Marshall has investigated common rationalisations that act as barriers to making the personal choice to travel less, or to justify recent trips.
Revised:  British writer George Marshall has investigated common rationalizations that act as barriers to making the personal choice to travel less, or to justify recent trips.
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Original:  Why We Still Don't Believe In Climate Change In 2011, S. Cohen observed both air travel and concern over its climate impacts were growing, balanced by technology and physical resources, self and external regulation and social norms including stigmatisation of excessive air travel.
Revised:  Why We Still Don't Believe In Climate Change In 2011, S. Cohen observed both air travel and concern over its climate impacts were growing, balanced by technology and physical resources, self and external regulation and social norms including stigmatization of excessive air travel.
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Original:  The movement discourages people from flying in order to lower carbon emissions and thwart climate change.
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Original:  The movement discourages people from flying in order to lower carbon emissions and thwart climate change.
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Original:  Some U.S. airline executives were concerned that flight shame popularized by Greta Thunberg could play a role as global air travel growth slowed to 4\% in 2019, down from an average of 5\% per year over the previous decade.
Revised:  Some U.S. airline executives were concerned that flight shame popularised by Greta Thunberg could play a role as global air travel growth slowed to 4\% in 2019, down from an average of 5\% per year over the previous decade.
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Original:  By 2019, the flight shame movement had inspired dozens of organizations , including universities and businesses such as Klarna Bank AB, across Europe to impose short-haul flight bans on their employees, as well as discouraging long-haul flights.
Revised:  By 2019, the flight shame movement had inspired dozens of organisations , including universities and businesses such as Klarna Bank AB, across Europe to impose short-haul flight bans on their employees, as well as discouraging long-haul flights.
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Original:  British writer George Marshall has investigated common rationalizations that act as barriers to making the personal choice to travel less, or to justify recent trips.
Revised:  British writer George Marshall has investigated common rationalisations that act as barriers to making the personal choice to travel less, or to justify recent trips.
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Original:  Why We Still Don't Believe In Climate Change In 2011, S. Cohen observed both air travel and concern over its climate impacts were growing, balanced by technology and physical resources, self and external regulation and social norms including stigmatization of excessive air travel.
Revised:  Why We Still Don't Believe In Climate Change In 2011, S. Cohen observed both air travel and concern over its climate impacts were growing, balanced by technology and physical resources, self and external regulation and social norms including stigmatisation of excessive air travel.
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Original: Alongside smaller forced population removals, the two main waves of deportation were: the first, June deportation of 14 June 1941 of around  15,500 people and their families .
Revised: Alongside smaller forced population removals, the main waves of deportation were: the first, June deportation of 14 June 1941 of around 15,500 people and their families .
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Original: Alongside smaller forced population removals, the two main waves of deportation were: the first, June deportation of 14 June 1941 of around  15,500 people and their families .
Revised: Alongside smaller forced population removals, the two main waves of deportation were: The June deportation of 14 June 1941 of around 15,500 people and their families .
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Original:  the second deportation under Operation Priboi of 25 March 1949, when 42,113 people were deported.
Revised:  The second deportation under Operation Priboi of 25 March 1949, when 42,113 people were deported.
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Original:  The deportations of 1944 are also sometimes singled out  .
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Original:  Clinical significance Jordans' anomaly is a characteristic finding in Chanarin-Dorfman syndrome and other neutral lipid storage diseases.
Revised:  Genetics Jordans' anomaly is a characteristic finding in Chanarin-Dorfman syndrome and other neutral lipid storage diseases.
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Original:  Genetics Jordans' anomaly is a characteristic finding in Chanarin-Dorfman syndrome and other neutral lipid storage diseases.
Revised: Signs and symptoms Genetics Jordans' anomaly is a characteristic finding in Chanarin-Dorfman syndrome and other neutral lipid storage diseases.
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Original: Books William Herbert, 1st Earl of Pembroke (1551 creation)| &  &       William Lord Herbert of Pembroke (c. 1507-1570): Politique and Patriot ( 1988.
Revised: Books William Herbert, 1st Earl of Pembroke (1551 creation)| & & William Lord Herbert of Pembroke (c. 1507-1570): Politique and Patriot . 1988.
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Original:  Second revised ed. 1992) Edwin Mellen Press ISBN 0-88946-458-8 Kautilya's Arthasastra   :
Revised:  Second revised ed. 1992) Edwin Mellen Press , 1992. :
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Original:  The Life of Sharatchandra Chattopadhyay: Drifter and Dreamer (2012)Rowman Littlefield / Fairleigh Dickinson University Press ISBN978-1-61147-507-4 Papers "The Odysey of         Ananda Marga: A Comparative Study, The Journal of Asian and African Studies, XLVIII, 2 ( 2012).
Revised:  The Life of Sharatchandra Chattopadhyay: Drifter and Dreamer (2012)Rowman Littlefield / Fairleigh Dickinson University Press ISBN978-1-61147-507-4 Papers "The Odysey of “The Odyssey of the Ananda Marga: A Comparative Study, The Journal of Asian and African Studies, XLVIII, 2 ( 2012).
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Original:  The Life of Sharatchandra Chattopadhyay: Drifter and Dreamer (2012)Rowman Littlefield / Fairleigh Dickinson University Press ISBN978-1-61147-507-4 Papers "The Odysey of         Ananda Marga: A Comparative Study, The Journal of Asian and African Studies, XLVIII, 2 ( 2012).
Revised:  The Life of Sharatchandra Chattopadhyay: Drifter and Dreamer (2012)Rowman Littlefield / Fairleigh Dickinson University Press ISBN978-1-61147-507-4 Papers "The Odysey of Ananda Marga: A Comparatist Study,” The Journal of Asian and African Studies, XLVIII, 2 ( 2012).
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Original:  "  Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, " Sage Open ( April–June, 2013  [ &  ). "Kali'     s Child and Krishna ' s Lover:  Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,&  XXX, 3 (2009).
Revised:  " “ Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, " Sage Open ( April–June, 2013 [ & ). "Kali' s Child and Krishna ' s Lover: Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,& XXX, 3 (2009).
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Original:  "  Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, " Sage Open ( April–June, 2013  [ &  ). "Kali'     s Child and Krishna ' s Lover:  Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,&  XXX, 3 (2009).
Revised:  " Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, ” Sage Open ( April–June, 2013 [ & ). "Kali' s Child and Krishna ' s Lover: Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,& XXX, 3 (2009).
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Original:  "  Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, " Sage Open ( April–June, 2013  [ &  ). "Kali'     s Child and Krishna ' s Lover:  Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,&  XXX, 3 (2009).
Revised:  " Tipu Sultan in History: Revisionism Revised, " Sage Open ( April-June 2013 [ & ). "Kali' s Child and Krishna ' s Lover: Anatomy of Ramakrishna ' s Caritas Divina, Religion,& XXX, 3 (2009).
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