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Original:  Over the Internet, peer to peer networking  makes programming content available when a user asks for it, which allows for content to be aggregated for communities that are interested in certain types of programming.
Revised:  Over the Internet, peer to peer networking makes programming content available when a user asks for it, which also lends itself to content being aggregated by communities that are interested in certain types of programming.
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Original:  It puts a middle man between the media content conglomerates, who would flood the pipeline with all of their content in hopes that somebody may want to view it. 
Revised:  It puts a middle man between the media conglomerates. 
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Original: 160px Momentum toward the realization of Internet TV got a boost as upstart webcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV branded content.
Revised: 160px Momentum toward the realization of Internet TV got a boost as upstart web broadcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV branded content.
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Original:  Peer to peer networking over the Internet makes programming content available when a user asks for it , which also lends itself to content being aggregated by communities that are interested in certain types of programming .
Revised:  Peer to peer networking over the Internet makes programming content available when a user asks for it .
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Original:  The 'on-demand' feature in this approach provides feedback to the aggregator and frees up space in the distribution pipeline.
Revised:  The 'on-demand' feature of this approach frees up space in the distribution pipeline.
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Original:  It gives a middle man the leverage to negotiate with media conglomerates to manage the pipeline flooded with unviewed  , thereby conserving bandwidth.
Revised:  It gives a middle man the leverage to negotiate with media conglomerates to manage the pipeline flooded with unviewed content , thereby conserving bandwidth.
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Original:  Joost has managed to secure  rights to webcast programming, but the content is not the highest quality broadcasted TV  currently available through established subscription cable and satellite distribution channels, and even free airwave TV.
Revised:  Joost has managed to secure some rights to webcast programming, but the content is not the highest quality broadcasted TV currently available through established subscription cable and satellite distribution channels, and even free airwave TV.
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Original:  Joost has managed to secure  rights to webcast programming, but the content is not the highest quality broadcasted TV  currently available through established subscription cable and satellite distribution channels, and even free airwave TV.
Revised:  Joost has managed to secure rights to webcast programming, but the content is not the highest quality broadcasted TV programming currently available through established subscription cable and satellite distribution channels, and even free airwave TV.
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Original:  Underlying the emergence of Internet TV is the new concept of distributing content in a way that is more efficient than the existing model.
Revised:  Underlying the concept of Internet TV is the new concept of distributing content in a way that is more efficient than the existing model.
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Original:  Underlying the emergence of Internet TV is the new concept of distributing content in a way that is more efficient than the existing model.
Revised:  Underlying the emergence of Internet TV is the distribution of content in a way that is more efficient than the existing model.
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Original:  Peer to peer networking over the Internet makes programming content available when a user asks for it.
Revised:  Peer to peer networking over the Internet makes programming available when a user asks for it.
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Original:  While doing so, freeing space, it provides feedback to the aggregator to know  what is in demand.
Revised:  While doing so, freeing space, it provides feedback to the aggregator to know exactly what is in demand.
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Original:  It gives a middle man the leverage to negotiate with media conglomerates to manage the pipeline flooded with unviewed content, thereby conserving bandwidth.
Revised:  It gives a middle man the leverage to negotiate with media conglomerates and then manage a pipeline flooded with unviewed content, thereby conserving bandwidth.
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Original:  It also lets viewers opt for free online TV programming through content arrangements made by a web broadcaster, who acts as a gateway to the programs.
Revised:  It also lets viewers opt for free online TV programming through content arrangements made by the web broadcaster, who acts as a gateway to the programs.
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Original:  The consumer choice  in who rules in this model presents a challenge Mainsteam Media.
Revised:  The consumer choice Consumer choices in who rules in this model presents a challenge Mainsteam Media.
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Original:  The consumer choice  in who rules in this model presents a challenge Mainsteam Media.
Revised:  The consumer choice in who rules in this emerging model present challenges Mainsteam Media.
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Original:  The current offerings by Joost include: The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users . Competition: TVUnetworks by Paul Shen, CEO Babelgu
Revised:  The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users . Competition: TVUnetworks by Paul Shen, CEO Babelgu
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Original:  The current offerings by Joost include: The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users . Competition: TVUnetworks by Paul Shen, CEO Babelgu
Revised:  The current offerings by Joost include: The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users Competition: TVUnetworks by Paul Shen, CEO Babelgu
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Original:  The current offerings by Joost include: The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users . Competition: TVUnetworks by Paul Shen, CEO Babelgu
Revised:  The current offerings by Joost include: The Joost hoopla is partly spurred on by its expansionist decision on May 1 to allow users of the Beta version to dispense 99 invitations to other persons who could become Beta users . 
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Original: 160px Momentum toward the realization of Internet TV got a boost as startup web broadcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV-branded content.
Revised: 160px Momentum toward the realization of Internet TV got a boost as upstart web broadcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV-branded content.
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Original: 160px Momentum toward the realization of Internet TV got a boost as upstart web broadcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV-branded content.
Revised: 160px Internet TV came one step closer to reality as startup web broadcaster Joost recently announced that it signed a deal with Warner Brothers to host some of its WBTV-branded content.
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Original:  It is not an advertising-free arrangement because it is not a free lunch.
Revised:  However, it is not an advertising-free arrangement because it is not a free lunch.
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Original:  Venezuela is buying weapon and warlike material in great quantity and Washington is considering the country a harmful influency in the region.
Revised:  Venezuela is buying weapon and warlike material in great quantity and Washington is considering the country a harmful influence in the region.
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Original: 250px|Brazilian Presidente Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva and Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez in Ciudad Guayana, Venezuela (Photo Ricardo Stuckert/PR).
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Original:  The regional summit aimed to improve the diplomatic relations between Colombia and Venezuela, that had been shaken after the arrest of the FARC communist member Rodrigo Granda, in December, last year.
Revised:  The regional summit aimed to improve the diplomatic relations between Colombia and Venezuela, that had been shaken after the arrest of the member Rodrigo Granda, in December, last year.
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Original:  During the summit, the Brazilian president defended the Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez and he criticized indirectly the government of the United States for his opinions in relation to Chávez.
Revised:  During the summit, the Brazilian president defended the Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez and he criticized indirectly the government of the for his opinions in relation to Chávez.
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Original:  The US Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld, was in Brazil on March 22 and he said that he was very worried about the political situation in Venezuela.
Revised:  The , Donald Rumsfeld, was in Brazil on March 22 and he said that he was very worried about the political situation in Venezuela.
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Original: Despite the claim of closing for remodeling, the Erie County Deparment of Health says that several health code violations were found at both locations.
Revised: Despite the claim of closing for remodeling, the Erie County Health Department says that several health code violations were found at both locations.
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Original:  At least two Kentucky Fried Chicken [KFC] restaurants, operated by G & H Restaurant Specialties, have closed in Buffalo, New York "for remodeling," according to signs placed on the front doors of at least one location on Elmwood Avenue and Bryant Street in Buffalo.
Revised: The front doors of the Elmwood and Bryant KFC. The signs on the doors state that it is "closed for remodeling." At least two Kentucky Fried Chicken [KFC] restaurants, operated by G & H Restaurant Specialties, have closed in Buffalo, New York "for remodeling," according to signs placed on the front doors of at least one location on Elmwood Avenue and Bryant Street in Buffalo.
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Original:  The signs on the doors state that it is "closed for remodeling."
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Original: Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hirant Dink,  was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
Revised: Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hirant Dink, who was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
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Original: * Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hirant Dink, who was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
Revised:  Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hirant Dink, who was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
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Original:  The Turkish Public Prosecutors believe that Eran Tuncel planned the killing of Hrant Dink together with Yasin Hayal and knowingly misled the authoritie
Revised:  The Turkish Public Prosecutors believe that Eran Tuncel planned the killing of Hrant Dink together with Yasin Hayal and knowingly misled the authorities
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Original:  Hirant Dink was gunned down in front of his office on  19 /01/2007 in Istanbul by Ogün Samast, a 17 year old ultra-nationalist Turk.
Revised:  Hirant Dink was gunned down in front of his office on 19 in Istanbul by Ogün Samast, a 17 year old ultra-nationalist Turk.
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Original:  According to Radikal, a turkish daily newspaper , Bahattin Hayal , who is the father of Yasin Hayal, who was arrested after the assassination as a mastermind behind the killing, told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services where he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
Revised:  According to the Turkish daily newspaper Radikal , Bahattin Hayal , who is the father of Yasin Hayal, who was arrested after the assassination as a mastermind behind the killing, told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services where he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
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Original:  According to Radikal, a turkish daily newspaper , Bahattin Hayal , who is the father of Yasin Hayal, who was arrested after the assassination as a mastermind behind the killing, told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services where he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
Revised:  According to Radikal, a turkish daily newspaper , Bahattin Hayal told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services where he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
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Original:  According to Radikal, a turkish daily newspaper , Bahattin Hayal , who is the father of Yasin Hayal, who was arrested after the assassination as a mastermind behind the killing, told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services where he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
Revised:  According to Radikal, a turkish daily newspaper , Bahattin Hayal , who is the father of Yasin Hayal, who was arrested after the assassination as a mastermind behind the killing, told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink , he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services . Here he was told by a Turkish police chief that " His son (Yasin Hayal) would now live better.
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Original:  In his statement to the Prosecutors  Tuncel reported the same incident and also stated that he had informed the authorities about the assassination plan but the authorities failed to take an action to prevent the killing of Hirant Dink.
Revised:  In his statement to the Prosecutors , Tuncel reported the same incident and also stated that he had informed the authorities about the assassination plan but the authorities failed to take an action to prevent the killing of Hirant Dink.
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Original: Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hirant Dink, who was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
Revised: Several Turkish daily newpapers have reported new developments in the case of Hrant Dink, who was the editor-in-chief of the bilingual Turkish-Armenian newspaper Agos.
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Original: According to the Turkish daily newspaper Radikal, Bahattin Hayal told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hirant Dink and subsequent arrest of Hayal's son Yasin, as the mastermind behind the killing, he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services.
Revised: According to the Turkish daily newspaper Radikal, Bahattin Hayal told to the public prosecutor that following the killing of Hrant Dink and subsequent arrest of Hayal's son Yasin, as the mastermind behind the killing, he was taken to the Trabzon Security Services.
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Original:  On the hand other, Yasin Hayal forwarded five petitions to the public prosecutors' Selim Berna Altay and Fikret Seçen, in February and March of this year and informed them that he was encouraged to kill Hirant Dink and given directions by Erhan Tuncel, who was a police informant.
Revised:  On the hand other, Yasin Hayal forwarded five petitions to the public prosecutors' Selim Berna Altay and Fikret Seçen, in February and March of this year and informed them that he was encouraged to kill Hrant Dink and given directions by Erhan Tuncel, who was a police informant.
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Original:  In his statement to the Prosecutors, Tuncel reported the same incident and also stated that he had informed the authorities about the assassination plan but the authorities failed to take an action to prevent the killing of Hirant Dink.
Revised:  In his statement to the Prosecutors, Tuncel reported the same incident and also stated that he had informed the authorities about the assassination plan but the authorities failed to take an action to prevent the killing of Hrant Dink.
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Original:  Until Farrar landed himself a job in parliament, he had been using mainly Apple computers, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I finally converted to Microsoft in 1997 after being the only person in Parliament to have a Mac!"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% I finally converted to Microsoft in 1997 after being the only person in Parliament to have a Mac!"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
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Original:  Until Farrar landed himself a job in parliament, he had been using mainly Apple computers, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I finally converted to Microsoft in 1997 after being the only person in Parliament to have a Mac!"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
Revised:  Until Farrar landed himself a job in parliament, he had been using mainly Apple computers, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% finally converted to Microsoft in 1997 after being the only person in Parliament to have a Mac!"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
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Original:  Until Farrar landed himself a job in parliament, he had been using mainly Apple computers, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I finally converted to Microsoft in 1997 after being the only person in Parliament to have a Mac!"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
Revised:  Until Farrar landed himself a job in parliament, he had been using mainly Apple computers, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% I %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar was involved with introducing public e-mail for ministers, and the first Prime Minister website.
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Original:  In 2004, after leaving politics, Farrar set up his polling and research company.
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Original:  "There’s then probably a dozen or so other bloggers who get into the tens of thousands." "Gordon%DIFDELCMD < [%%% King would post wonderful polemics challenging the conventional thinking and reporting, and after a few months of reading him I realized that I also had views and could try sharing them with the world.
Revised:  "There’s then probably a dozen or so other bloggers who get into the tens of thousands." %DIFDELCMD < [%%% King would post wonderful polemics challenging the conventional thinking and reporting, and after a few months of reading him I realized that I also had views and could try sharing them with the world.
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Original:  "There’s then probably a dozen or so other bloggers who get into the tens of thousands." "Gordon%DIFDELCMD < [%%% King would post wonderful polemics challenging the conventional thinking and reporting, and after a few months of reading him I realized that I also had views and could try sharing them with the world.
Revised:  "There’s then probably a dozen or so other bloggers who get into the tens of thousands." "Gordon%DIFDELCMD < [%%% would post wonderful polemics challenging the conventional thinking and reporting, and after a few months of reading him I realized that I also had views and could try sharing them with the world.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar has a few tips for those politicians who have started a blog, or are looking at starting one up, "Very few are successful because they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% treat it as a one way communication tool where they just post press releases or travel diaries.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% treat it as a one way communication tool where they just post press releases or travel diaries.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar has a few tips for those politicians who have started a blog, or are looking at starting one up, "Very few are successful because they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% treat it as a one way communication tool where they just post press releases or travel diaries.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Farrar has a few tips for those politicians who have started a blog, or are looking at starting one up, "Very few are successful because %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% treat it as a one way communication tool where they just post press releases or travel diaries.
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Original:  Sites like YouTube, which Farrar uses daily, show that they can leave this big brand names like Google Video for dead if they show strong innovation, Farrar says.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One scenario Farrar drew was, "...being able to see a map of your local area on your phone, and not just get told where the nearest toilets or bookstore is, but also if any of your friends are nearby."
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Original:  David Farrar would just like to say thanks for the opportunity of being interviewed on Wikinews.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related news Blogs he's most addicted to David Farrar subscribes to literally hundreds of blogs, below are the ones he's most addicted to.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Blogs he's most addicted to David Farrar subscribes to literally hundreds of blogs, below are the ones he's most addicted to.
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Original: David Farrar is most known for his " fairly popular" blog, Kiwiblog , where he posts on various topics, including politics and technology.
Revised: David Farrar is most known for his " popular" blog, Kiwiblog , where he posts on various topics, including politics and technology.
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Original: David Farrar is most known for his " fairly popular" blog, Kiwiblog , where he posts on various topics, including politics and technology.
Revised: David Farrar is most known for his " fairly popular" blog, Kiwiblog , where he posts on various topics, including politics and technology.
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Original:  In this morning's fifteen-minute-long Cabinet meeting Brown is said to have described Blair's premiership as a "unique leadership"  
Revised:  In this morning's fifteen-minute-long Cabinet meeting Brown is said to have described Blair's premiership as a "unique leadership" . 
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Original:  In this morning's fifteen-minute-long Cabinet meeting Brown is said to have described Blair's premiership as a "unique leadership" . June 27 will be Blair's last day as Prime Minister of the United Kingdom
Revised:  In this morning's fifteen-minute-long Cabinet meeting Brown is said to have described Blair's premiership as a "unique leadership" June 27 will be Blair's last day as Prime Minister of the United Kingdom
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