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Original:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37,  Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
Revised:  The 2 other men arrested as John Kenney, 37, Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
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Original:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37,  Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
Revised:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37, and Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
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Original:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37,  Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
Revised:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37, Justin Merritt, 32. Both were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
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Original:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37,  Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested 6 years ago together with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
Revised:  The 2 other men arrested are likely to be John Kenney, 37, Justin Merritt, 32 who were previously arrested six years ago with Barrymore by an earlier police investigation
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Original: United Kingdom television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, has been arrested  on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault along with two other men concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
Revised: United Kingdom television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, has been arrested on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
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Original: United Kingdom  television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, has been arrested, as well as two other men , on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
Revised: United Kingdom television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, and two other men , on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
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Original: United Kingdom  television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, has been arrested, as well as two other men , on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
Revised: United Kingdom television presenter Michael Barrymore, 55, has been arrested, as well as two other men have been arrested on suspicion of murder and serious sexual assault concerning the death of Stuart Lubbock in 2001.
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Original: Waldheim served as the U.N.'s Secretary General from 1972 to 1981 and was elected to Austrian President in 1986.
Revised: Waldheim served as the U.N.'s Secretary General from 1972 to 1981 and was elected as President of Austria in 1986.
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Original:  Waldheim first denied the alligations, but was later cleared from having done anything wrong.
Revised:  Waldheim first denied the allegations, and was later cleared from having done anything wrong.
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Original:  Waldheim first denied the alligations, but was later cleared from having done anything wrong.
Revised:  Waldheim first denied the alligations, but was later cleared of having done anything wrong.
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Original:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24th and Spinefarm and Universal will release it on August 22nd  
Revised:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24th and Spinefarm and Universal will release it on August 22nd . 
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Original: Finnish symphonic power metal band Nightwish have announced details of their latest studio album, which will be the first to feature new Swedish lead vocalist Anette Olzon, who recently replaced Tarja Turunen.
Revised: Finnish symphonic power metal band , Nightwish, has announced details about their latest studio album, which will be the first to feature new Swedish lead vocalist Anette Olzon, who recently replaced Tarja Turunen.
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Original:  Amongst the details released is the name of the new album, which until now had been unrevealed.
Revised:  Among the details released is the name of the new album, which until now had been unrevealed.
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Original:  The album will debut in the band's native Finnland on September 26 from record lables Spinefarm Records and Universal .
Revised:  The album will debut in the band's native Finland on September 26 from record lables Spinefarm Records and Universal .
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Original:  The album will debut in the band's native Finnland on September 26 from record lables Spinefarm Records and Universal .
Revised:  The album will debut in the band's native Finnland on September 26 from record labels Spinefarm Records and Universal .
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Original:  The album will debut in the band's native Finnland on September 26 from record lables Spinefarm Records and Universal .
Revised:  The album will debut in the band's native Finnland on September 26 from record lables Spinefarm Records and distributed by Universal Music Group .
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Original:  It will be released in the US and the rest of Europe two days later, with the US lable being Roadrunner Records and the European lable being Nuclear Blast Records.
Revised:  It will be released in the US and the rest of Europe two days later, with the US label being Roadrunner Records and the European lable being Nuclear Blast Records.
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Original:  It will be released in the US and the rest of Europe two days later, with the US lable being Roadrunner Records and the European lable being Nuclear Blast Records.
Revised:  It will be released in the US and the rest of Europe two days later, with the US lable being Roadrunner Records and the European label being Nuclear Blast Records.
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Original:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24th and Spinefarmand Universal will release it on August 22nd.
Revised:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24 and Spinefarm/ Universal will release it on August 22nd.
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Original:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24th and Spinefarmand Universal will release it on August 22nd.
Revised:  Nuclear Blast will release Amaranth on August 24th and Spinefarmand Universal will release it on August 22.
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Original:  The album will be called " Dark Passion Play " . Nightwish have also released a full track listing for the album and revealed that as well as Eva, which has already been released, the song Amaranth will be released as a single.
Revised:  The album will be called Dark Passion Play " . Nightwish have also released a full track listing for the album and revealed that as well as Eva, which has already been released, the song Amaranth will be released as a single.
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Original:  The album will be called " Dark Passion Play " . Nightwish have also released a full track listing for the album and revealed that as well as Eva, which has already been released, the song Amaranth will be released as a single.
Revised:  The album will be called " Dark Passion Play . Nightwish have also released a full track listing for the album and revealed that as well as Eva, which has already been released, the song Amaranth will be released as a single.
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Original: Sales from Star Wars tie-in merchandise as brought in much money over the years.
Revised: Sales from Star Wars tie-in merchandise has brought in much money over the years.
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Original:  She was 87 years ol 
Revised:  She was 87 years old. 
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Original:  He also announced that the couple will be buried at the library  
Revised:  He also announced that the couple will be buried at the library . 
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Original:  She was a vital and integral part of our ministry, and my work through the years would have been impossible without her encouragement and support.  
Revised:  She was a vital and integral part of our ministry, and my work through the years would have been impossible without her encouragement and support. " 
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Original: Graham grew noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck.
Revised: Graham had grown noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck.
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Original: Graham had grown noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck .
Revised: She had grown noticeably weaker over the course of the past several weeks, suffering from degenerative osteoarthritis of the back and neck .
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Original:  He believes that this bombing of part of a conspiracy to fuel sectarian tensions  
Revised:  He believes that this bombing of part of a conspiracy to fuel sectarian tensions . 
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Original:  In the recent session on Thursday, the amendment only received 45 support votes  , killing the measure until at least 2010, but would require opponents of gay marriage to start from scratch, writing new petitions to the lawmakers, and then gaining the support of at least 50 of them, in  two separate sessions.
Revised:  In the recent session on Thursday, the amendment only received 45 support votes , killing the measure until at least 2010. It would then require opponents of gay marriage to start from scratch, writing new petitions to the lawmakers, and then gaining the support of at least 50 of them, in two separate sessions.
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Original:  In the recent session on Thursday, the amendment only received 45 support votes  , killing the measure until at least 2010, but would require opponents of gay marriage to start from scratch, writing new petitions to the lawmakers, and then gaining the support of at least 50 of them, in  two separate sessions.
Revised:  In the recent session on Thursday, the amendment only received 45 support votes , killing the measure until at least 2010, but would require opponents of gay marriage to start from scratch, writing new petitions to the lawmakers, and then gaining the support of at least 50 of them, in at least two separate sessions.
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Original:  Lawmakers in Massachusetts, located in the United States, have threw out an amendment that would allow voters to vote for gay marriage, or against it in the 2008 general elections.
Revised:  Lawmakers in Massachusetts, located in the United States, have threw out an amendment that would allow voters to vote for same-sex marriage, or against it in the 2008 general elections.
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Original:  Gay marriages became legal in Massachusetts in 2004 after the Mass.
Revised:  Same-sex marriages became legal in Massachusetts in 2004 after the Mass.
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Original:  Lawmakers in Massachusetts, located in the United States, have threw out an amendment that would allow voters to vote for same-sex marriage, or against it in the 2008 general elections.
Revised:  Lawmakers in Massachusetts, located in the United States, have thrown out an amendment that would allow voters to vote for same-sex marriage, or against it in the 2008 general elections.
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Original: Flags from Australia, Indonesia and the United States hang at the site of the 2002 Bali bombings.
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Original: However, it was not a result disappointing Toon fans the most.
Revised: However, it was not a result that disappointed Toon fans the most.
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Original:  After the match manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players, however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him 
Revised:  After the match manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players, however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him . Both players could be facing 3-match bans by Football Association
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Original:  On the 5th minute of the game Juan Pablo Angel scored for  away side.
Revised:  On the 5th minute of the game Juan Pablo Angel scored for the away side.
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Original:  After the match  manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players, however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him.
Revised:  After the match , manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players, however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him.
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Original:  Seven minutes later he did it again, after Stephen Carr brought down Darius Vassel inside the box.
Revised:  Seven minutes later he did it again, after Stephen Carr brought down Darius Vassell inside the box.
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Original:  Two Newcastle players  Lee Bowyer and Kieron Dyer  engaged in a fight in the middle of the pitch at the sight of the crowd.
Revised:  Two Newcastle players , Lee Bowyer and Kieron Dyer engaged in a fight in the middle of the pitch at the sight of the crowd.
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Original:  Two Newcastle players  Lee Bowyer and Kieron Dyer  engaged in a fight in the middle of the pitch at the sight of the crowd.
Revised:  Two Newcastle players Lee Bowyer and Kieron Dyer , engaged in a fight in the middle of the pitch at the sight of the crowd.
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Original:  After the match, manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players , however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him.
Revised:  After the match, manager Graham Souness made no excuse for the behavior of the players ; however he defended Dyer, as it was Bowyer who started punching him.
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Original:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association  
Revised:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association . 
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Original:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association. alan shearer is the best player in the world full sto
Revised:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football alan shearer is the best player in the world full sto
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Original:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association. alan shearer is the best player in the world full sto
Revised:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association. Associatio
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Original:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Associatio
Revised:  Both players could be facing 3-match bans by the English Football Association
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Original:  It is believed that this money was gained from illegal activites including: drug smuggling, arms sales, and counterfitting.
Revised:  It is believed that this money was gained from activites including: drug smuggling, arms sales, and counterfitting.
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Original:  Just recently, America agreed to allow North Korea to retrieve their funds.
Revised:  Just recently, the U.S. agreed to allow North Korea to retrieve their funds.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| 200px| Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea , understandably happy following news of getting his frozen $25,000,000 back.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea , understandably happy following news of getting his frozen $25,000,000 back.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| 200px| Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea , understandably happy following news of getting his frozen $25,000,000 back.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| 200px| Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea , understandably happy following news of getting his frozen $25,000,000 back.
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Original:  In 2005, as part of the general crackdown on the communist state, $25, 000,000  stored in a Macau Bank was frozen.
Revised:  In 2005, as part of the general crackdown on the communist state, $25, 000,000 stored in a Macau bank was frozen.
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Original:  It is believed that this money was gained from activites including: drug smuggling, arms sales , and counterfitting.
Revised:  It is believed that this money was gained from activities that included drug smuggling, arms sales , and counterfitting.
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Original:  Just recently, the U.S. agreed to allow North Korea to retrieve their funds.
Revised:  Just recently, the United States agreed to allow North Korea to retrieve their funds.
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Original:  It is hoped that this consideration will result in their return to the six party talks
Revised:  It is hoped that this consideration will result in their return to the six-party talks
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|  Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea . ]] North Korea has received money frozen by the United States in 2005.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea , ]] North Korea has received money frozen by the United States in 2005.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|  Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea . ]] North Korea has received money frozen by the United States in 2005.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg| Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea . ]] The Democratic People's Republic of Korea has received money frozen by the United States in 2005.
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Original:  In 2005 ,  as part of the general crackdown on the communist state, US$25 million stored in a Macau bank was frozen.
Revised:  In 2005 , as part of the general crackdown on the communist state, The funds had been frozen in a Macau bank was frozen.
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Original:  It is believed that this money was gained from activities that included drug smuggling, arms sales and counterfeiting.
Revised:  It is believed that this money was gained from activities including money laundering and counterfeiting.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|200px|Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea , ]] The Democratic People's Republic of Korea has received $25,000,000 frozen in 2005 as part of the general crackdown on the communist state.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|200px|Kim Jong-Il , the leader of North Korea , ]] The Democratic People's Republic of Korea has received $25,000,000 frozen in 2005 as part of the general crackdown on the communist state.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|200px|Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea , ]] The Democratic People's Republic of Korea has received $25,000,000 frozen in 2005 as part of the general crackdown on the communist state.
Revised: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|200px|Kim Jong-Il The leader of North Korea . ]] The Democratic People's Republic of Korea has received $25,000,000 frozen in 2005 as part of the general crackdown on the communist state.
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Original:  The funds had been frozen in a Macau Bank after the United States earlier alleged that the money was gained from activities including money laundering and counterfeiting.
Revised:  The funds had been frozen in a Macau bank after the United States earlier alleged that the money was gained from activities including money laundering and counterfeiting.
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Original:  The DPRK had demanded return of the money as a precondition to engaging in the six party talks.
Revised:  The DPRK had demanded return of the money as a precondition to engaging in the six-party talks.
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Original: Image:1_222185_1_5.jpg|200px|Kim Jong-Il, the leader of North Korea.
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Original:  Former Mayor of London said, "The trouble is that almost everything that’s wrong with Britain today is her legacy . "  He added, "She created today’s housing crisis, she created the banking crisis, and she created the benefits crisis.
Revised:  Former Mayor of London said, "The trouble is that almost everything that’s wrong with Britain today is her legacy " He added, "She created today’s housing crisis, she created the banking crisis, and she created the benefits crisis.
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Original:  Former Mayor of London said, "The trouble is that almost everything that’s wrong with Britain today is her legacy . "  He added, "She created today’s housing crisis, she created the banking crisis, and she created the benefits crisis.
Revised:  Former Mayor of London said, "The trouble is that almost everything that’s wrong with Britain today is her legacy . " . He added, "She created today’s housing crisis, she created the banking crisis, and she created the benefits crisis.
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Original: Judith Orr, editor of the UK weekly newspaper said, "We'll be glad to see the back of her . "  She added, "She ruined the lives of tens of millions of working class people in Britain.
Revised: Judith Orr, editor of the UK weekly newspaper said, "We'll be glad to see the back of her " She added, "She ruined the lives of tens of millions of working class people in Britain.
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Original: Judith Orr, editor of the UK weekly newspaper said, "We'll be glad to see the back of her . "  She added, "She ruined the lives of tens of millions of working class people in Britain.
Revised: Judith Orr, editor of the UK weekly newspaper said, "We'll be glad to see the back of her . " . She added, "She ruined the lives of tens of millions of working class people in Britain.
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Original:  Her premiership was notable for  military victory in the in 1982 and for transforming the British economy in order to compete with other top nations.
Revised:  Her premiership was notable for sexy military victory in the in 1982 and for transforming the British economy in order to compete with other top nations.
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Original: Her premiership was notable for her big involvment in porn. she was a pornstar from 1891-1990. she was fucked by her mom and dad. also by her brother. she had a threesome with two other women. she is so fucking hot that she had to fuck herself because no one else wold touch a hot sexy slut like her. in the in 1982 and for transforming the British economy in order to compete with other top nations.
Revised: Her premiership was notable for her involvment in the in 1982 and for transforming the British economy in order to compete with other top nations.
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Original:  Her time as Prime Minister also saw the introduction of policies allowing council house residents to purchase their homes, the privatisation of public industries, the passage of the controversial policy allowing REDIRECT homepage the teaching of homosexuality in schools, the year-long strike by miners starting in 1984, and the introduction of the unpopular "" which resulted in .
Revised:  Her time as Prime Minister also saw the introduction of policies allowing council house residents to purchase their homes, the privatisation of public industries, the passage of the controversial policy forbidding the teaching of homosexuality in schools, the year-long strike by miners starting in 1984, and the introduction of the unpopular "" which resulted in .
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Original:  She is due to receive a ceremonial funeral with full military honours similarly to that of which will be held at in 
Revised:  She is due to receive a ceremonial funeral with full military honours similarly to that of which will be held at in London
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Original:  Astronauts also report that the area were the tear was present is "well worn away" and because of that, no staples were able to be placed on the top side of the blanket near the top of the tear, leaving a small "gap" between the seams.
Revised:  Astronauts also report that the area where the tear was present is "well worn away" and because of that, no staples were able to be placed on the top side of the blanket near the top of the tear, leaving a small "gap" between the seams.
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