wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Childhood She was born in a Brahmin family in Kathmandu as the 5th child of Kanta Prasad and Sushila Upadhyaya , but she spent most of her childhood in Bettiah, Allahabad, India.
Revised:  Childhood She was born to a Brahmin family in Kathmandu as the 5th child of Kanta Prasad and Sushila Upadhyaya , but she spent most of her childhood in Bettiah, Allahabad, India.
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Original:  Childhood She was born in a Brahmin family in Kathmandu as the 5th child of Kanta Prasad and Sushila Upadhyaya , but she spent most of her childhood in Bettiah, Allahabad, India.
Revised:  Childhood She was born in a Brahmin family in Kathmandu , but she spent most of her childhood in Bettiah, Allahabad, India.
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Original:   Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha of Tanahun District, but her grandfather  Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya  came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
Revised:  Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha , Tanahun District, but her grandfather Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
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Original:   Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha of Tanahun District, but her grandfather  Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya  came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
Revised:  Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha of Tanahun District, but her grandfather , Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
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Original:   Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha of Tanahun District, but her grandfather  Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya  came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
Revised:  Her ancestors lived in Chundi Ramgha of Tanahun District, but her grandfather Pandit Devi Prasad Upadhyaya , came to Ramnagar in search of better educational opportunities for his children.
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Original:  Some members of her extended family are still doing business in Varanasi, India.
Revised:  Some members of her extended family still live in Varanasi, India.
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Original:  Education Her family enrolled her for formal education in a Catholic school in Bettiah, India, at an early age, at a time where the traditional Nepali society did not allow girls to receive an education.
Revised:  Education Her family enrolled her for formal education in a Catholic school in Bettiah, India, at an early age, at a time when the traditional Nepali society did not allow girls to receive an education.
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Original:  After completing her primary education, Ragini attended the Crosthwaite Girls College in Allahabad , then enrolled at the Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in Lucknow, India, where she completed her bachelor's degree in Fine Arts in 1982.
Revised:  After completing primary education, Ragini attended the Crosthwaite Girls College in Allahabad , then enrolled at the Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in Lucknow, India, where she completed her bachelor's degree in Fine Arts in 1982.
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Original:  After completing her primary education, Ragini attended the Crosthwaite Girls College in Allahabad , then enrolled at the Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in Lucknow, India, where she completed her bachelor's degree in Fine Arts in 1982.
Revised:  After completing her primary education, Ragini attended the Crosthwaite Girls College in Allahabad . She then enrolled at the Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in Lucknow, India, where she completed her bachelor's degree in Fine Arts in 1982.
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Original:  After returning to Nepal in 1986, Ragini attended advanced lessons in printmaking in the Oxford Printmakers Co-operative in 1987 on a British Council scholarship.
Revised:  After returning to Nepal in 1986, Ragini took advanced lessons in printmaking in the Oxford Printmakers Co-operative in 1987 on a British Council scholarship.
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Original: Former Prime Minister Bishweshwar Prasad Koirala inaugurating Ragini's solo painting exhibition at Lalit Kala, Lucknow, India in 1981 In 1986, the then Queen Consort Aishwarya Rajyalakshmi Shah inaugurated an exhibition of Ragini's solo paintings at a profit.
Revised:  In 1986, the then Queen Consort Aishwarya Rajyalakshmi Shah inaugurated an exhibition of Ragini's solo paintings at a profit.
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Original:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound , along with other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds , were predicted to display ambiphilic behaviors : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
Revised:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound and other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds , were predicted to display ambiphilic behaviors : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
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Original:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound , along with other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds , were predicted to display ambiphilic behaviors : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
Revised:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound , along with other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds were predicted to display ambiphilic behaviors : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
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Original:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound , along with other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds , were predicted to display ambiphilic behaviors : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
Revised:  This initial monomeric aluminium(I) neutral compound , along with other closely related β-diketiminate supported aluminium(I) compounds , were predicted to display ambiphilic behavior : electrophilic character due to the formally vacant aluminium p-orbital, as well as nucleophilic character due to the presence of a lone pair.
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Original:  However, in practice, their reactivity was almost exclusively limited to oxidative addition pathways due to the low oxidation state of the aluminium center.
Revised:  However, in practice, their nucleophilicity was not observed due to their instability towards oxidation reactions, due to the low oxidation state of the aluminium center.
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Original:  The first isolation of a nucleophilic aluminyl anion was achieved in 2018 by Aldridge, Goicoechea and coworkers  , following the discoveries of gallium and indium analogues, heavier group 13 analogues which are more stable than aluminium in the lower +1 oxidation state.
Revised:  The first isolation of a nucleophilic aluminium center was achieved in 2018 by Aldridge, Goicoechea and coworkers , following the discoveries of gallium and indium analogues, heavier group 13 analogues which are more stable than aluminium in the lower +1 oxidation state.
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Original:  In its synthesis, the xanthene-dianiline H2NON is first deprotonated in the presence of a strong base , and an aluminium(III) metal center is formed by aluminium triiodide addition .
Revised:  In its synthesis, the xanthene-dianiline H2NON was first deprotonated in the presence of a strong base , and an aluminium(III) metal center is formed by aluminium triiodide addition .
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Original:  In its synthesis, the xanthene-dianiline H2NON is first deprotonated in the presence of a strong base , and an aluminium(III) metal center is formed by aluminium triiodide addition .
Revised:  In its synthesis, the xanthene-dianiline H2NON is first deprotonated in the presence of a strong base , and an aluminium(III) metal center .
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Original:  The aluminium(III) center can then be reduced via addition of an excess of a strong reducing agent, potassium graphite (KC8), to the aluminyl species.
Revised:  The aluminium(III) center was then reduced via addition of an excess of a strong reducing agent, potassium graphite (KC8), to the aluminyl species.
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Original:  Following the two electron reduction, a dimeric species with the chemical formula K2[Al(NON)]2 is formed, as confirmed by X-ray crystallography.
Revised:  Following the two electron reduction, a dimeric species with the chemical formula K2[Al(NON)]2 was formed, as confirmed by X-ray crystallography.
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Original:  However, in the presence of chelating agent [2.2.2]-cryptand (crypt-222), the potassium carbocation can be encapsulated, leading to a charge-separated complex with a "naked" aluminyl anion, the first such anion to be reported.
Revised:  However, in the presence of chelating agent [2.2.2]-cryptand (crypt-222), the potassium cation could be encapsulated, leading to a charge-separated complex with a "naked" aluminyl anion, the first such anion to be reported.
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Original:  In this case, chelation of the potassium cation to generate a charge-separated ionic pair was not possible.
Revised:  In this case, encapsulation of the potassium cation to generate a charge-separated ionic pair was not possible.
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Original:  However, in practice, their nucleophilicity was not observed due to their instability towards oxidation reactions , due to the low oxidation state of the aluminium center.
Revised:  However, in practice, their nucleophilic character was not observed due to their instability towards oxidation reactions , due to the low oxidation state of the aluminium center.
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Original: Aluminium(I) Nucleophiles Aluminium(I) nucleophiles are a group of inorganic and organometallic nucleophilic compounds containing at least one aluminium metal center in the +1 oxidation state with a lone pair of electrons strongly localized on the the aluminium(I) center.
Revised: Aluminium(I) nucleophiles Aluminium(I) nucleophiles are a group of inorganic and organometallic nucleophilic compounds containing at least one aluminium metal center in the +1 oxidation state with a lone pair of electrons strongly localized on the the aluminium(I) center.
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Original:  Spectroscopy Reactivity 677x677px|Nucleophilicty of aluminyl anions in nucleophilic substitution reactions: a. selected reactivity of Aldridge and Goicoechea's diamido aluminyl anion;
Revised:  Reactivity 677x677px|Nucleophilicty of aluminyl anions in nucleophilic substitution reactions: a. selected reactivity of Aldridge and Goicoechea's diamido aluminyl anion;
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Original:  It has been noted that in all recorded nucleophilic substitutions using aluminyl nucleophiles have been done in the presence of weakly coordinating leaving groups or anions (iodide, triflate, or tetraphenylborate) to avoid coordination of the anion to the metal centers . Application
Revised:  It has been noted that in all recorded nucleophilic substitutions using aluminyl nucleophiles have been done in the presence of weakly coordinating leaving groups or anions (iodide, triflate, or tetraphenylborate) to avoid coordination of the anion to the metal centers Application
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Original:  It has been noted that in all recorded nucleophilic substitutions using aluminyl nucleophiles have been done in the presence of weakly coordinating leaving groups or anions (iodide, triflate, or tetraphenylborate) to avoid coordination of the anion to the metal centers . Application
Revised:  It has been noted that in all recorded nucleophilic substitutions using aluminyl nucleophiles have been done in the presence of weakly coordinating leaving groups or anions (iodide, triflate, or tetraphenylborate) to avoid coordination of the anion to the metal centers . 
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Original: A portfolio career is made up of a variety of roles rather than one job at a single organisation.
Revised: A portfolio career comprises a variety of roles rather than one job at a single organisation.
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Original:  It can be one that combines multiple paid and/or voluntary roles.
Revised:  It can be a career that combines multiple paid and/or voluntary roles.
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Original:  The term was popularised by philosopher and organisational behaviourist Charles Handy in his 1994 book The Empty URL Handy's recognition of the portfolio career path came about when he realised that individuals would be required to develop portable skillsets to meet the needs of a fast-moving future workplace.
Revised:  The philosopher and organisational behaviourist Charles Handy in his 1994 book The Empty URL Handy's recognition of the portfolio career path came about when he realised that individuals would be required to develop portable skillsets to meet the needs of a fast-moving future workplace.
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Original:  The term was popularised by philosopher and organisational behaviourist Charles Handy in his 1994 book The Empty URL Handy's recognition of the portfolio career path came about when he realised that individuals would be required to develop portable skillsets to meet the needs of a fast-moving future workplace.
Revised:  The term was popularised by philosopher and organisational behaviourist Charles Handy in his 1994 book The Empty URL Handy's recognition of the portfolio career-path came about when he realised that individuals would be required to develop portable skillsets to meet the needs of a fast-moving future workplace.
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Original:  URL His prediction foresaw what is now known as the gig URL Portfolio careers are often found in the creative industries where freelancing is the norm.
Revised:  His prediction foresaw what is now known as the gig URL Portfolio careers are often found in the creative industries where freelancing is the norm.
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Original:  URL His prediction foresaw what is now known as the gig URL Portfolio careers are often found in the creative industries where freelancing is the norm.
Revised:  URL His prediction foresaw what is now known as the gig economy. Portfolio careers are often found in the creative industries where freelancing is the norm.
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Original:  Economic conditions mean many are now actively choosing to pursue portfolio careers to make the most of their earning URL Advantages of a portfolio career include work-life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, said: "A portfolio career is much more resilient than having one permanent role.
Revised:  Economic conditions mean many are now actively choosing to pursue portfolio careers to make the most of their earning potential. Advantages of a portfolio career include work-life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, said: "A portfolio career is much more resilient than having one permanent role.
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Original:  Economic conditions mean many are now actively choosing to pursue portfolio careers to make the most of their earning URL Advantages of a portfolio career include work-life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, said: "A portfolio career is much more resilient than having one permanent role.
Revised:  Economic conditions mean many are now actively choosing to pursue portfolio careers to make the most of their earning URL Advantages of a portfolio career include work-life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest areas. Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, said: "A portfolio career is much more resilient than having one permanent role.
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Original:  In addition to having multiple income sources, your work is always evolving, as old clients roll off and you win new URL Disadvantages are the lack of stability, traditional career progression, fluctuation of earnings and a lack of URL Herminia Ibarra, the Charles Handy Professor of Organisational Behaviour at London Business School, argues that the portfolio careerist is faced with the problem of identity.
Revised:  In addition to having multiple income sources, your work is always evolving, as old clients roll off and you win new ones." Disadvantages are the lack of stability, traditional career progression, fluctuation of earnings and a lack of URL Herminia Ibarra, the Charles Handy Professor of Organisational Behaviour at London Business School, argues that the portfolio careerist is faced with the problem of identity.
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Original:  In addition to having multiple income sources, your work is always evolving, as old clients roll off and you win new URL Disadvantages are the lack of stability, traditional career progression, fluctuation of earnings and a lack of URL Herminia Ibarra, the Charles Handy Professor of Organisational Behaviour at London Business School, argues that the portfolio careerist is faced with the problem of identity.
Revised:  In addition to having multiple income sources, your work is always evolving, as old clients roll off and you win new URL Disadvantages are the lack of stability, traditional career progression, fluctuation of earnings and a lack of identity. Herminia Ibarra, the Charles Handy Professor of Organisational Behaviour at London Business School, argues that the portfolio careerist is faced with the problem of identity.
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Original:  a story of hard work and linear ascent culminating in a recognisably top URL Scale The Centre for Research on Self URL a London-based think tank, estimates that 250,000 UK workers who define their work as a portfolio URL A study by the Henley Business School determined that in the United Kingdom 25 per cent of workers had a side job.
Revised:  a story of hard work and linear ascent culminating in a recognisably top role." Scale The Centre for Research on Self URL a London-based think tank, estimates that 250,000 UK workers who define their work as a portfolio URL A study by the Henley Business School determined that in the United Kingdom 25 per cent of workers had a side job.
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Original:  a story of hard work and linear ascent culminating in a recognisably top URL Scale The Centre for Research on Self URL a London-based think tank, estimates that 250,000 UK workers who define their work as a portfolio URL A study by the Henley Business School determined that in the United Kingdom 25 per cent of workers had a side job.
Revised:  a story of hard work and linear ascent culminating in a recognisably top URL Scale The Centre for Research on Self URL a London-based think tank, estimates that 250,000 UK workers who define their work as a portfolio career. A study by the Henley Business School determined that in the United Kingdom 25 per cent of workers had a side job.
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Original:  URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, believes this number is likely to be in the millions by URL
Revised:  Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, believes this number is likely to be in the millions by URL
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Original:  URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, believes this number is likely to be in the millions by URL
Revised:  URL Ben Legg, CEO of UK-based social enterprise The Portfolio Collective, believes this number is likely to be in the millions by 2030.
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Original:  making them portfolio URL In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their URL Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 URL Issues Sean Smith,
Revised:  making them portfolio careerists. In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their URL Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 URL Issues Sean Smith,
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Original:  making them portfolio URL In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their URL Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 URL Issues Sean Smith,
Revised:  making them portfolio URL In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their rent. Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 URL Issues Sean Smith,
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Original:  making them portfolio URL In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their URL Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 URL Issues Sean Smith,
Revised:  making them portfolio URL In the United Kingdom 60 per cent of students and graduates said they had a side job and 43 per cent needed the extra income to pay their URL Portfolio careers may become more common as the world economy and job market work to recover from the COVID-19 pandemic. Issues Sean Smith,
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Original:  URL Tara Fenwick, Emeritus Professor of Professional Education in the School of Education at the University of Stirling, thinks "workers may need to educate clients about the nature of portfolio work;
Revised:  Tara Fenwick, Emeritus Professor of Professional Education in the School of Education at the University of Stirling, thinks "workers may need to educate clients about the nature of portfolio work;
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Original:  and employers who contract to portfolio workers must take more responsibility for negotiating fair contracts that are sensitive to overwork and unfair time URL Nomenclature Young portfolio careerists are sometimes known as slashies or solopreneurs. URL URL
Revised:  and employers who contract to portfolio workers must take more responsibility for negotiating fair contracts that are sensitive to overwork and unfair time pressures". Nomenclature Young portfolio careerists are sometimes known as slashies or solopreneurs. URL URL
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Original:  and employers who contract to portfolio workers must take more responsibility for negotiating fair contracts that are sensitive to overwork and unfair time URL Nomenclature Young portfolio careerists are sometimes known as slashies or solopreneurs. URL URL
Revised:  and employers who contract to portfolio workers must take more responsibility for negotiating fair contracts that are sensitive to overwork and unfair time URL Nomenclature Young portfolio careerists are sometimes known as slashies or solopreneurs. 
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Original: Advantages of a portfolio career include work-life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest areas.
Revised: Advantages of a portfolio career include work–life balance, job security, flexibility, variety, multiple income streams and the ability to pursue individual interest areas.
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