wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Both hydrochloroquine and chloroquine have a side effect of retinal toxicity when administered to infected patients.
Revised:  Both hydroxychloroquine and chloroquine have a side effect of retinal toxicity when administered to infected patients.
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Original:  Spraying is a method in multiple regions and to control epidemics.
Revised:  Spraying is a method used to control malaria epidemics.
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Original:  Nets treated with insecticide are effective in preventing mosquito contact for three years.
Revised:  Nets treated with insecticide are effective at preventing mosquito contact for three years.
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Original:  The World Health Organisation (WHO) specifically targets younger children and pregnant women in order to reduce the risk of spreading Quartan fever within the population.
Revised:  The World Health Organisation (WHO) specifically protects younger children and pregnant women in order to reduce the risk of spreading Quartan fever within the population.
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Original:  The World Health Organisation (WHO) specifically targets younger children and pregnant women in order to reduce the risk of spreading Quartan fever within the population.
Revised:  The World Health Organisation (WHO) specifically targets younger children and pregnant women in order to reduce the risk of spreading quartan fever within the population.
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Original:  SP reduces the impact Quartan fever may have on newborns and decrease the morality rate.
Revised:  SP reduces the impact quartan fever may have on newborns and decrease the morality rate.
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Original:  SP reduces the impact Quartan fever may have on newborns and decrease the morality rate.
Revised:  SP reduces the impact Quartan fever may have on newborns and decrease the mortality rate.
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Original:  Traditional houses consisting of natural materials are susceptible to gaps which allow entry to infected Anopheles mosquitoes.
Revised:  Traditional houses consisting of natural materials are susceptible to gaps which allow entry to Anopheles mosquitoes.
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Original:  House improvements including windows, installation and sealed doors reduce the risk of coming in contact with the infected mosquitoes.
Revised:  House improvements including sealed windows and doors reduce the risk of coming in contact with the infected mosquitoes.
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Original:  Larval source management is the control and monitoring of aquatic environments in order to prevent fully Anopheles mosquitoes from fully developing.
Revised:  Larval source management is the control and monitoring of aquatic environments in order to prevent Anopheles mosquitoes from fully developing.
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Original:  Once  mosquito eggs hatch, the larva must live in the water and develop into pupa.
Revised:  Once the mosquito eggs hatch, the larva must live in the water and develop into pupa.
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Original:  Avoiding travelling to regions which have a sub-tropic climate to prevent infection and developing quartan fever.
Revised:  Avoiding travelling to regions which have a subtropical climate to prevent infection and developing quartan fever.
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Original:  Both male and female mosquitoes feed on the Attractive toxic sugar bait (ATSB) and ingest low-risk oral toxins e.g. boric acid.
Revised:  Both male and female mosquitoes feed on the attractive toxic sugar bait (ATSB) and ingest low-risk oral toxins e.g. boric acid.
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Original:  There may be outward expressions of sympathy, but each man in primarily concerned with his own surgical, and there's always the possibility that another's misfortune will ease the pressure on him  In Morrow's book, he speaks of many accounts where he suffered from racism on personal and professional levels.
Revised:  There may be outward expressions of sympathy, but each man in primarily concerned with his own surgical, and there's always the possibility that another's misfortune will ease the pressure on him . In Morrow's book, he speaks of many accounts where he suffered from racism on personal and professional levels.
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Original:  He passed away in 1994.
Revised:  He died in 1994.
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Original: Political activity and White House period After serving on Eisenhowers 1952 campaign staff, Morrow served as an adviser at the U.S. Commerce Department.
Revised: Political activity and White House period After serving on Eisenhower's 1952 campaign staff, Morrow served as an adviser at the U.S. Commerce Department.
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Original:  Morrow campaigned for Richard Nixon in Nixon's unsuccessful 1960 presidential campaign, including a prime-time speech at the convention and a role in the Vice-Presidential selection caucus.
Revised:  Morrow campaigned for Richard Nixon in Nixon's unsuccessful 1960 presidential campaign, including a prime-time speech at the Republican National Convention and a role in the Vice-Presidential selection caucus.
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Original: Everett Frederic Morrow (April 20, 1909 – July 19, 1994) was the first African American to hold an executive position at the White House.
Revised: Everett Frederic Morrow (April 20, 1909 – July 19, 1994) was the first person to be in the White House.
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Original:  Néstor Carbonell Andricaín19 April 194227 September URL Ducassi Mendieta19441944 Miguel A. de Leon Fuentes19441945-?
Revised:  Néstor Carbonell Andricaín19 April 194227 September 1944Francisco Ducassi Mendieta19441944 Miguel A. de Leon Fuentes19441945-?
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Original:  Rubén de León y Garcia1 October 19461948 Lincoln Rodón Alvarez19481952 ?19521955 Gastón Godoy y Loret de Mola19551 January 1959
Revised:  Rubén de León y Garcia1 October 19461948 Lincoln Rodón Alvarez19481952 Gastón Godoy y Loret de Mola19551 January 1959
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Original: Ambrosio Borges Figueredo19091911 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19111914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía19141915 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19151917Miguel Coyula19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez Bello?-19241925 Ramón Zaydín19251926 Rafael Guas Inclán19261933 Carlos Márquez Sterling19361936 Joaquín Pedraza y Cabrera19361936 José R. Andreu y Martínez19361936 Germán S. López Sanchez19361937 Antonio Martínez Fraga19371937 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
Revised: Ambrosio Borges Figueredo19091911 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19111914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía19141915 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19151917Miguel Coyula19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez Bello?-19241925 Ramón Zaydín11 April 19254 April 1927Rafael Guas Inclán11 April 192724 August 1933 Carlos Márquez Sterling19361936 Joaquín Pedraza y Cabrera19361936 José R. Andreu y Martínez19361936 Germán S. López Sanchez19361937 Antonio Martínez Fraga19371937 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
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Original: Ambrosio Borges Figueredo19091911 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19111914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía19141915 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19151917Miguel Coyula19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez Bello?-19241925 Ramón Zaydín19251926 Rafael Guas Inclán19261933 Carlos Márquez Sterling19361936 Joaquín Pedraza y Cabrera19361936 José R. Andreu y Martínez19361936 Germán S. López Sanchez19361937 Antonio Martínez Fraga19371937 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
Revised: Ambrosio Borges Figueredo19091911 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19111914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía19141915 Orestes Ferrara y Marino19151917Miguel Coyula19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez Bello?-19241925 Ramón Zaydín19251926 Rafael Guas Inclán19261933 Carlos Márquez Sterling19361936 Joaquín Pedraza y Cabrera19361936 José R. Andreu y Martínez19361936 Germán S. López Sanchez19361937 Antonio Martínez Fraga4 February 193718 April 1938 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
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Original:  Néstor Carbonell Andricaín19 April 194227 September 1944Francisco Ducassi Mendieta19441944 Miguel A. de Leon Fuentes19441945-?
Revised:  Néstor Carbonell Andricaín19 April 194227 September 1944Miguel A. de Leon Fuentes19441945-?
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Original: April 190612 October 1906Orestes Ferrara Marino18 April 19091914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía30 August 19141915Orestes Ferrara y Marino19 April 19151917Miguel Coyula7 April 19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez Bello?-19241925 Ramón Zaydín11 April 19254 April 1927Rafael Guas Inclán11 April 192724 August 1933 Carlos Márquez Sterling27 April 19363 February 1937 Antonio Martínez Fraga4 February 193718 April 1938 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
Revised: April 190612 October 1906Orestes Ferrara Marino18 April 19091914 José Antonio González Lanuza19141914 Ibrahim Urquiaga Arrastía30 August 19141915Orestes Ferrara y Marino19 April 19151917Miguel Coyula7 April 19171919Santiago Verdeja Neyra19191923 Clemente Vázquez URL Zaydín11 April 19254 April 1927Rafael Guas Inclán11 April 192724 August 1933 Carlos Márquez Sterling27 April 19363 February 1937 Antonio Martínez Fraga4 February 193718 April 1938 Antonio Bravo Acosta1937?
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Original: "Constructive" or "productive" imagination denote the process resulting in formation of novel mental images, as opposed to simple recall that refers to remembering of a previously seen picture.
Revised: "Constructive" or "productive" imagination denotes the process resulting in formation of novel mental images, as opposed to simple recall that refers to remembering of a previously seen picture.
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Original:  Constructive imagination, on the other hand, involves various mechanisms that modify an objectNE or assemble different objectNEs into novel combination 
Revised:  Constructive imagination, on the other hand, involves various mechanisms that modify an objectNE or assemble different objectNEs into novel combinations. 
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Original: EMF medical devises A high frequency electromagnetic field can cause negative effects on the nervous system.
Revised: EMF medical devices A high frequency electromagnetic field can cause negative effects on the nervous system.
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Original:  Организация на дейността за осигуряване на Здраве и безопасност (Organization of Health and Safety Activities) შრომის უსაფრთხოების, ჯანმრთელობისა და გარემოს დაცვის ასოციაციის(OSHE Georgia)safety.org.ge Организация пропаганды по охране труда и безопасности European Agency for Safety and Health at Work China Occupational Safety and Health Association (COSHA) Ministry of Labor and Health OSH India Instituto Nacional de Seguridad e Higiene en el URL Ministério Público do Trabalho
Revised:  Организация на дейността за осигуряване на Здраве и безопасност (Organization of Health and Safety Activities) შრომის უსაფრთხოების, ჯანმრთელობისა და გარემოს დაცვის ასოციაციის(OSHE Georgia)safety.org.ge Организация пропаганды по охране труда и безопасности European Agency for Safety and Health at Work China Occupational Safety and Health Association (COSHA) Ministry of Labor and Health OSH India Instituto Nacional de Seguridad e Higiene en el Trabajo Ministério Público do Trabalho
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Original: Zipporah Gathuya Zipporah Gathuya , is a consultant anesthesiologist, in Kenya, whose sub-specialty is pediatric anesthesia.
Revised: Zipporah Gathuya , is a consultant anesthesiologist, in Kenya, whose sub-specialty is pediatric anesthesia.
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Original: Image:Bow and arrow 2.jpg| thunb|The bow and arrow sign is used to locate the position of the ileocecal valve .
Revised: Image:Bow and arrow 2.jpg| thunb|The bow and arrow sign .
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Original:  The appendiceal orifice, depicted, curves like a bow to show the location of the ileocecal valve on the most distal cecal fold  ]] The bow and arrow sign is an endoscopic sign for determining the location of the ileocecal valve during colonoscopy.
Revised:  The appendiceal orifice, depicted, curves like a bow to show the location of the ileocecal valve on the most distal cecal fold . ]] The bow and arrow sign is an endoscopic sign for determining the location of the ileocecal valve during colonoscopy.
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Original:  This is important as it indicates that the entire colon has been visualized during colonoscopy .
Revised:  This is important as it indicates that the entire colon has been visualized .
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Original:  Identifying the ileocecal value in a colonoscopy is important, as it indicates that the entire colon has been visualized.
Revised:  Identifying the ileocecal valve in a colonoscopy is important, as it indicates that the entire colon has been visualized.
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Original: Category: Gastroenterology For terminal ileum intubation this simple 5 step approach is used.
Revised: Category: For terminal ileum intubation this simple 5 step approach is used.
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Original: Category: Gastroenterology For terminal ileum intubation this simple 5 step approach is used.
Revised: Category: Gastroenterology 
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Original:  The new object is a novel imaginary object since it was never before observed physicall 
Revised:  The new object is a novel imaginary object since it was never before observed physically. 
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Original:  PFA is different from other types of active imagination: Prefrontal Synthesis that involves combining two or more objects together , integration of modifiers that involves integration of a single object with a modifier, and mental rotation .
Revised:  PFA is different from other types of active imagination: Prefrontal Synthesis that involves combining two or more objects together .
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Original:  Manufacturing a mode two handaxe out of a cobble requires a mental template of the future handaxe.
Revised:  Manufacturing a Mode two handaxe out of a cobble requires a mental template of the future handaxe.
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Original:  Manufacturing a Mode two handaxe out of a cobble requires a mental template of the future handaxe.
Revised:  Manufacturing a handaxe out of a cobble requires a mental template of the future handaxe.
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Original:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million ya . Improvement of stone tools from Mode one to Mode two and Mode three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
Revised:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million years ago . Improvement of stone tools from Mode one to Mode two and Mode three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
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Original:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million ya . Improvement of stone tools from Mode one to Mode two and Mode three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
Revised:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million ya . Improvement of stone tools from Mode One to Mode two and Mode three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
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Original:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million ya . Improvement of stone tools from Mode one to Mode two and Mode three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
Revised:  Since all attempts to teach stone tools manufacturing to apes have failed so far , it is suggested that PFA was acquired after humans have split from chimpanzee line 6 million ya . Improvement of stone tools from Mode one to Mode two and Mode Three have been hypothesized to reflect improvements in PFA ability.
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Original: Prefrontal Analysis (PFA) is a type of active constructive imagination that allows humans to mentally reduce an object  .
Revised: Prefrontal Analysis (PFA) is a type of active constructive imagination that allows humans to mentally reduce an object into parts .
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Original:  For example, humans can recall a kettle and then mentally brake a handle.
Revised:  For example, humans can recall a kettle and then mentally break a handle.
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Original:  Following his release from prison, Franklyn reportedly swore to take revenge against the overseer who had attempted to evict him, Edward Fowler.
Revised:  After his release from prison, Franklyn reportedly swore to take revenge against the overseer who had attempted to evict him, Edward Fowler.
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Original:  Exact numbers are not available, but estimates place the number of detained  "as high as 150".
Revised:  Exact numbers are not available, but estimates place the number of detained individuals "as high as 150".
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Original:  This sentiment was echoed in general society as well, with Rastafarians often being beaten by civilians, and were thus forced to avoid public spaces.
Revised:  This sentiment was echoed in general society as well, with Rastafarians often being beaten by civilians, forcing Rastafarians to avoid public spaces.
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Original:  The government and landlords saw the Rastafarians as an obstacle to their goal of repurposing the property for tourism, and frequently sent police to evict the Rastafarians.
Revised:  The government and landlords saw the Rastafarians as an obstacle to their goal of re-purposing the property for tourism, and frequently sent police to evict the Rastafarians.
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Original:  Jamaican newspapers such as The Daily Gleaner published many articles demonizing the Rastafarians and demanding that armed intervention by the state.
Revised:  Jamaican newspapers such as The Daily Gleaner published many articles demonizing the Rastafarians and demanding armed intervention by the state.
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Original:  this view is supported by contemporary media reports of the events and the statements of government officials at the time.
Revised:  this view was supported by contemporary media reports of the events and the statements of government officials at the time.
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Original:  Coral Gardens was part of a larger property  the Rose Hall estate (which includes the Rose Hall mansion).
Revised:  Coral Gardens was part of a larger property , the Rose Hall estate (which includes the Rose Hall mansion).
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Original:  In 1960, Henry's son Reynold was arrested on the grounds of plotting a revolt, and following a declaration of a state of emergency Reynold Henry and his co-conspirators wer executed.
Revised:  In 1960, Henry's son Reynold was arrested on the grounds of plotting a revolt, and following a declaration of a state of emergency Reynold Henry and his co-conspirators were executed.
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Original:  His career spanned almost three decades and had been awarded with many honours until his untimely demise in 1960.
Revised:  He was awarded several honours during the course of a three-decade-long career, ended by his untimely demise in 1960.
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Original:  Born in a Bengali family of repute, he was educated in India as well as the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Born in a Bengali family of repute, he was educated both in India and in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, an early Indian officer in the Indian Civil Service, and his mother was Charulata Mukherjee,  a social worker.
Revised:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, of the the Indian Civil Service, and his mother was Charulata Mukherjee, a social worker.
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Original:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, an early Indian officer in the Indian Civil Service, and his mother was Charulata Mukherjee,  a social worker.
Revised:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, an early Indian officer in the Indian Civil Service, and his mother , Charulata Mukherjee, a social worker.
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Original:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, an early Indian officer in the Indian Civil Service, and his mother was Charulata Mukherjee,  a social worker.
Revised:  His father was Satish Chandra Mukherjee, an early Indian officer in the Indian Civil Service, and his mother was Charulata Mukherjee, was a social worker.
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Original:  His paternal grandfather, Nibaran Chandra Mukherjee, a Brahmo, was a pioneer in social and educational reforms in the country and a member of the Brahmo Samaj.
Revised:  His paternal grandfather, Nibaran Chandra Mukherjee, pioneered several social and educational reforms in the country and a member of the Brahmo Samaj.
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Original:  His paternal grandfather, Nibaran Chandra Mukherjee, a Brahmo, was a pioneer in social and educational reforms in the country and a member of the Brahmo Samaj.
Revised:  His paternal grandfather, Nibaran Chandra Mukherjee, a Brahmo, was a pioneer in social and educational reforms in India and was a member of the Brahmo Samaj.
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Original:  His maternal grandfather, Prasanna Kumar Roy of the Indian Education Service, was the first Indian Principal of the Presidency College, Kolkata.
Revised:  His maternal grandfather, Prasanna Kumar Roy of the Indian Education Service, was the first Indian Principal of Presidency College, Kolkata.
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Original:  His maternal grandmother  Sarala Roy,  an educationist and social worker , was the founder of the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
Revised:  His maternal grandmother , Sarala Roy, an educationist and social worker , was the founder of the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
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Original:  His maternal grandmother  Sarala Roy,  an educationist and social worker , was the founder of the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
Revised:  His maternal grandmother Sarala Roy, was an educationist and social worker , was the founder of the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
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Original:  His maternal grandmother  Sarala Roy,  an educationist and social worker , was the founder of the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
Revised:  His maternal grandmother Sarala Roy, an educationist and social worker who founded the Gokhale Memorial Girls' School.
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Original:  From his very early days, he had shown an aptitude for a military career, probably infused by his uncle, Flight Lieutenant Indra Lal Roy, who had joined the Royal Flying Corps during the First World War.
Revised:  As a boy, he displayed an aptitude for a military career, probably infused by his uncle, Flight Lieutenant Indra Lal Roy, who had joined the Royal Flying Corps during the First World War.
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Original:  From his very early days, he had shown an aptitude for a military career, probably infused by his uncle, Flight Lieutenant Indra Lal Roy, who had joined the Royal Flying Corps during the First World War.
Revised:  From his very early days, he had shown an aptitude for a military career, probably inherited from his uncle, Flight Lieutenant Indra Lal Roy, who had joined the Royal Flying Corps during the First World War.
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Original:  Roy was the first Indian to be awarded the Distinguished Flying Cross and was the only Indian flying ace.
Revised:  Roy was the first Indian to be awarded the Distinguished Flying Cross and the only Indian flying ace.
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Original:  Mukerjee's elder sister Renuka Ray was a prominent freedom fighter, who became a member of  parliament, cabinet minister and an ambassador.
Revised:  Mukerjee's elder sister Renuka Ray was a prominent freedom fighter, who became a member of parliament, cabinet minister and ambassador.
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