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Original:  It was initally feared the concert would have to be cancelled altogether.
Revised:  It was initially feared the concert would have to be cancelled altogether.
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Original: Earlier today in Massachusetts, two explosions went off near the finish line of the that left two people confirmed dead according to local police.
Revised: Earlier today in Massachusetts, went off near the finish line of the that left two people confirmed dead according to local police.
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Original:  Area universities were being evacuated as a precaution  
Revised:  Area universities were being evacuated as a precaution . 
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Original:  A third explosion went off at the located 8 miles (12.8 kilomters ) from the race finish.
Revised:  A third explosion went off at the located 8 (12.8 kilomters ) from the race finish.
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Original:  A third explosion went off at the located 8 miles (12.8 kilomters ) from the race finish.
Revised:  A third explosion went off at the located 8 miles (12.8 ) from the race finish.
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Original: If nescescary , there are also backup sites availible in California and New Mexico.
Revised: If necessary , there are also backup sites availible in California and New Mexico.
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Original:  The shuttle would require brought back on a jumbo jet, which would take up to 10 days and cost $1.7 million.
Revised:  The shuttle would have to be brought back on a jumbo jet, which would take up to 10 days and cost $1.7 million.
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Original: According to NASA, there were showers within a 34 mile radius of the landing strip and cloulds within 8,000 feet.
Revised: According to NASA, there were showers within a 34 mile radius of the landing strip and clouds within 8,000 feet.
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Original:  The shuttle has 5 more oppurtunities to land over the course of the next 3 days.
Revised:  The shuttle has five more opportunities to land over the course of the next 3 days.
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Original:  Oppurtunities are availible to Atlantis tommorrow at 2:16 p.m. and 3:51 p.m. ET.
Revised:  Atlantis could land tommorrow at 2:16 p.m. and 3:51 p.m. ET.
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Original:  Oppurtunities are availible to Atlantis tommorrow at 2:16 p.m. and 3:51 p.m. ET.
Revised:  Oppurtunities are availible to Atlantis tommorrow at 2:16 p.m. or 3:51 p.m. ET.
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Original:  According to Mission Control, weather forecasts predict better conditions tommorow .
Revised:  According to Mission Control, weather forecasts predict better conditions tommorrow .
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Original:  If necessary, there are also backup sites availible in California and New Mexico.
Revised:  If necessary, there are also backup sites in California and New Mexico.
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Original:  NASA would prefer not to use alternative sites as this would significantly increase the cost of preparing Atlantis for it's next mission, scheduled for December.
Revised:  NASA would prefer not to use alternative sites as this would significantly increase the cost of preparing Atlantis for its next mission, scheduled for December.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff  which required repairs , material known as gap filler  found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris  found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing – damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff which required repairs , material known as gap filler found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff  which required repairs , material known as gap filler  found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris  found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff , which required repairs , material known as gap filler found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff  which required repairs , material known as gap filler  found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris  found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff which required repairs . Material known as gap filler found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff  which required repairs , material known as gap filler  found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris  found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff which required repairs , material known as gap filler was found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff  which required repairs , material known as gap filler  found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris  found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing -damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff which required repairs , material known as gap filler found to be sticking out of a wing, and debris was found floating nearby after the shuttle docked with the space station on Tuesday.
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Original:  The only problem found to be of signinficant concern was the gap filler , which engineers had wanted to check the gap filler would withstand the re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere
Revised:  The only problem found to be of significant concern was the gap filler , which engineers had wanted to check the gap filler would withstand the re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere
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Original:  The only problem found to be of signinficant concern was the gap filler , which engineers had wanted to check the gap filler would withstand the re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere
Revised:  The only problem found to be of signinficant concern was the gap filler . Engineers want to check whether gap filler will withstand the re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere
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Original:  The only problem found to be of signinficant concern was the gap filler , which engineers had wanted to check the gap filler would withstand the re-entry in the Earth's atmosphere
Revised:  The only problem found to be of signinficant concern was the gap filler , which engineers had wanted to check the gap filler would withstand the re-entry into the Earth's atmosphere
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Original:  Atlantis can potentially remain in orbit until Sunday, but officials have stated they will only postpone landing until Sunday if there were technical problems that required attention prior to landing.
Revised:  Atlantis can potentially remain in orbit until Sunday, but officials have stated they will only postpone landing until Sunday if there are technical problems that required attention prior to landing.
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Original:  Atlantis can potentially remain in orbit until Sunday, but officials have stated they will only postpone landing until Sunday if there were technical problems that required attention prior to landing.
Revised:  Atlantis can potentially remain in orbit until Sunday, but officials have stated they will only postpone landing until Sunday if there were technical problems that require attention prior to landing.
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Original:  The shuttle would have to be brought back on a jumbo jet , which would take up to ten days and cost US$1.7 million.
Revised:  The shuttle would have to be brought back on a jumbo jet ; this would take up to ten days and cost US$1.7 million.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing – damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff , which required repairs.
Revised:  The mission managers held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing – damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff , which required repairs.
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Original:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing – damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff , which required repairs.
Revised:  The mission managers have already held a last-minute meeting late Wednesday to discuss potential problems which could affect the landing – damage to the thermal blanket on takeoff - which required repairs.
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Original:  In a study published yesterday online in the journal , scientists from the say the taste of beer alone triggers a release of , the brain's chemical reward signal , by examining brain scans .
Revised:  In a study published yesterday online in the journal , scientists from the say the taste of beer alone triggers a release of , the brain's chemical reward signal .
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Original: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or water or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, then scanned their brains and notable increases in dopamine levels were present.
Revised: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, then scanned their brains and notable increases in dopamine levels were present.
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Original: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, then scanned their brains and notable increases in dopamine levels were present.
Revised: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, scanning their brains and notable increases in dopamine levels were present.
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Original: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, then scanned their brains and notable increases in dopamine levels were present.
Revised: The scientists sprayed 15 (about one ) of either beer or a sports drink into the mouths of the participants over a period of 15 minutes, then scanned their brains and noting increases in dopamine levels were present.
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Original:  Dr. Kraken said, "We believe this is the first experiment in humans to show that the taste of an alcoholic drink alone, without any intoxicating effect from the alcohol, can elicit this dopamine activity in the brain's reward centers . " 
Revised:  Dr. Kraken said, "We believe this is the first experiment in humans to show that the taste of an alcoholic drink alone, without any intoxicating effect from the alcohol, can elicit this dopamine activity in the brain's reward centers " 
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Original:  Dr. Kraken said, "We believe this is the first experiment in humans to show that the taste of an alcoholic drink alone, without any intoxicating effect from the alcohol, can elicit this dopamine activity in the brain's reward centers . " 
Revised:  Dr. Kraken said, "We believe this is the first experiment in humans to show that the taste of an alcoholic drink alone, without any intoxicating effect from the alcohol, can elicit this dopamine activity in the brain's reward centers . " .
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Original: According to the senior author of the study, Dr. David A. Kraken , the higher dopamine levels in those men with family histories of alcoholism would possible be at risk for alcoholism themselves.
Revised: According to the senior author of the study, Dr. David A. Kareken , the higher dopamine levels in those men with family histories of alcoholism would possible be at risk for alcoholism themselves.
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Original: Professor of substance use and policy Peter Anderson at Newcastle University in the UK said many "sorts of cues" can cause an urge to drink.
Revised: Professor of substance use , policy and practice Peter Anderson at Newcastle University in the UK said many "sorts of cues" can cause an urge to drink.
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Original: Professor of substance use and policy Peter Anderson at Newcastle University in the UK said many "sorts of cues" can cause an urge to drink.
Revised: Professor of substance use and policy Peter Anderson at in the UK said many "sorts of cues" can cause an urge to drink.
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Original: According to the senior author of the study, Dr. David A. Kareken, the higher dopamine levels in those men with family histories of alcoholism would possible be at risk for alcoholism themselves.
Revised: The senior author of the study, Dr. David A. Kareken, the higher dopamine levels in those men with family histories of alcoholism would possible be at risk for alcoholism themselves.
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Original: In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi ( Te Titri o Waitangi ), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
Revised: In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi ( Tiriti o Waitangi) ), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
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Original: In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi) ) , a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
Revised: In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi) , a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
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Original:  The League was formed to help prevent a republican from replacing New Zealand's current form of Government and remove the Queen of New Zealand as the de-jure head of state.
Revised:  The League was formed to help prevent a republic from replacing New Zealand's current form of Government and remove the Queen of New Zealand as the de-jure head of state.
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Original:  It will help prevent the public  losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of  criticism politicians may receive.
Revised:  He also says it helps prevent the public losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of criticism politicians may receive.
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Original:  It will help prevent the public  losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of  criticism politicians may receive.
Revised:  It will help prevent the public from losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of criticism politicians may receive.
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Original:  It will help prevent the public  losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of  criticism politicians may receive.
Revised:  It will help prevent the public losing confidence in the governmental system in New Zealand as a whole, regardless of any criticism politicians may receive.
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Original:  This is due to politicians not having absolute power,  held by the head of the monarchy in Britain, and public servants and the military pledge their allegiance to a non-political figure.
Revised:  This is due to politicians not having absolute power, which is held by the head of the monarchy in Britain, and public servants and the military pledge their allegiance to a non-political figure.
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Original:  This is due to politicians not having absolute power,  held by the head of the monarchy in Britain, and public servants and the military pledge their allegiance to a non-political figure.
Revised:  This is due to politicians not having absolute power, held by the head of the monarchy in Britain, and public servants and the military pledging their allegiance to a non-political figure.
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Original:  If New Zealand was to become a republic, Cox believes that in some circumstances there would be raised political and social tension and tension between the Government and Maori would also rise . "...the Treaty of Waitangi was a compact between Queen Victoria and the Maori chiefs is of crucial importance."
Revised:  If New Zealand was to become a republic, Cox believes that in some circumstances there would be raised political and social tension , as well as tension between the Government and Maori would also rise . "...the Treaty of Waitangi was a compact between Queen Victoria and the Maori chiefs is of crucial importance."
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Original:  If New Zealand was to become a republic, Cox believes that in some circumstances there would be raised political and social tension and tension between the Government and Maori would also rise . "...the Treaty of Waitangi was a compact between Queen Victoria and the Maori chiefs is of crucial importance."
Revised:  If New Zealand was to become a republic, Cox believes that in some circumstances there would be raised political and social tension and tension between the Government and Maori . "...the Treaty of Waitangi was a compact between Queen Victoria and the Maori chiefs is of crucial importance."
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Original:  In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
Revised:  New Zealand's government becoming a republic would raise questions over whether or not the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
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Original:  In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), New Zealand becoming a republican would raise questions over whether or not it should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
Revised:  In terms of the Treaty of Waitangi (Tiriti o Waitangi), a treaty between Maori chiefs and the Crown (signed by Queen Victoria), should be "scrapped altogether" despite it still being valid under law.
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Original: Unlike what Lewis Holden said in his interview with Wikinews, Cox says that New Zealand has a significant international profile, much bigger than the size of New Zealand would suggest and a republican isn't needed to enforce this.
Revised:  Cox says that New Zealand has a significant international profile, much bigger than the size of New Zealand would suggest and a republican isn't needed to enforce this.
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Original:  The Governor-General (currently being served by Hon.
Revised:  The Governor-General (currently 
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Original:  Anand Satyanand) is served by a person of integrity and long standing, free of political allegiance.
Revised:  Anand Satyanand) is a person of integrity and long standing, free of political allegiance.
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Original:  They represent the Sovereign in right of New Zealand, a unitary country without an entrenched constitution.
Revised:  He or she represents the Sovereign in right of New Zealand, a unitary country without an entrenched constitution.
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Original:  A decade ago, Cox joined the Monarchist League of New Zealand Inc. when it was founded .
Revised:  A decade ago, Cox joined the Monarchist League of New Zealand when it was founded .
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Original:  And finally, further distancing himself from Lewis Holden, Noel Cox is a Ford fan, despite driving a BMW.
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Original:  Only Chichi-jima and Haha-jima support local populations.
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Original:  In kanji script, the writing of Iwo Jimo and Iwo To is the same;
Revised:  In kanji script, the writing of Iwo Jima and Iwo To is the same;
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Original:  Though it is about 1,120 kilometers (700 miles) south  Tokyo, the island chain falls under the administration of the Tokyo metropolitan government.
Revised:  Though it is about 1,120 kilometers (700 miles) south of Tokyo, the island chain falls under the administration of the Tokyo metropolitan government.
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Original:  At the bottom of the list is Ben-Hur '' , which fell from No. 72.
Revised:  At the bottom of the list is Ben-Hur , which fell from No. 72.
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Original:  AFI said it plans revise its list every 10 years in an effort to guage changing cultural perspectives.
Revised:  AFI said it plans revise its list every 10 years in an effort to gauge changing cultural perspectives.
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Original:  Of the films that remained on the list, 36 improved their rankings, and 38 fell  . Doctor Zhivago, the former No. 39, was the highest-ranking film to be removed from the list.
Revised:  Of the films that remained on the list, 36 improved their rankings, while 38 fell . Doctor Zhivago, the former No. 39, was the highest-ranking film to be removed from the list.
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Original:  Of the newcomers, the highest debut was Buster Keaton's 1927 silent, The General  .
Revised:  Of the newcomers, the highest debut was Buster Keaton's 1927 silent, The General at .
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Original: Image:Citizen kane 200px.jpg|Citizen Kane, directed by and starring Orson Welles remains the No. 1 movie on a list of the 100 best American films, as ranked in a poll by the American Film Institute.
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Original:  Hazmat crews have shut down and diverted traffic in the Holland Tunnel in New York City when a suspicious packge was discovered after an accident   .
Revised:  Hazmat crews have shut down and diverted traffic in the Holland Tunnel leading into New York City when a suspicious packge was discovered after an accident .
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