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Original:  Category:The Vatican Category:Obituaries Category:Pope John Paul
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Original: At 5 p.m. today , his corpse will be moved to the basilica .
Revised: At 5 p.m. today , his corpse was moved to the basilica .
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Original:  After the funereal ceremony on Friday, his corpse will be buried in the Grotte Vaticane below St Peter's, the final resting place of many previous Popes.
Revised:  After the funeral ceremony on Friday, his corpse will be buried in the Grotte Vaticane below St Peter's, the final resting place of many previous Popes.
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Original: Calls by the Center for Constitutional Rights however, have called for President Obama to transfer men from the facility now;
Revised: Calls by the however, have called for President Obama to transfer men from the facility now;
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Original:  When asked for greater details about President Obama’s intentions, a National Security Council spokeswoman, Caitlin Hayden, said the president was "considering a range of options for ways that we can reduce the population there," including "reappointing a senior official at the State Department to renew our focus on repatriating or transferring" lower-risk detainees
Revised:  When asked for greater details about President Obama’s intentions, a spokeswoman, Caitlin Hayden, said the president was "considering a range of options for ways that we can reduce the population there," including "reappointing a senior official at the State Department to renew our focus on repatriating or transferring" lower-risk detainees
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Original: It costs NASA 4.2 million dollars a year to run the Voyager science programs which have an expected operating lifetime to the year 2020.
Revised: It costs NASA 4.2 million a year to run the Voyager science programs which have an expected operating lifetime to the year 2020.
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Original: The police has detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza  (Spain), wich had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
Revised: The police have detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza (Spain), wich had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
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Original: The police has detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza  (Spain), wich had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
Revised: The police has detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza , (Spain), wich had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
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Original: The police has detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza  (Spain), wich had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
Revised: The police has detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza (Spain), which had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
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Original:  About 3.000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on alert since Eta declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on 5 June .
Revised:  About 3,000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on alert since Eta declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on 5 June .
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Original:  About 3.000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on alert since Eta declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on 5 June .
Revised:  About 3.000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on a heightened alert since ETA declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on 5 June .
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Original:  About 3.000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on alert since Eta declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on 5 June .
Revised:  About 3.000 tourists were evacuated from the airport, and hundreds of flights has been affected . Spain has been on alert since Eta declared an end to a unilateral ceasefire on June 5.
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Original:  police have detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza, (Spain), which had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
Revised: The police have detonated a suspicious package in the airport of Ibiza, (Spain), which had been evacuated after a newspaper received a bomb threat made in the name of Basque separatist group ETA.
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Original:  Thousands of people flood in during the summner for the big summer club nights
Revised:  Thousands of people flood in during the summer for the big summer club nights
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Original: Ibiza is a very popular tourist destination, especially due to its legendary and at times riotous nightlife.
Revised: Ibiza is a very popular tourist destination, especially due to its legendary nightlife.
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Original: Jaderline Jimenez,  wife of missing soldier Spc. Alex Jimenez, can rest a bit easier today, now that she has been granted a Green Card by  Citizenship and Immigration Services.
Revised: Jaderline Jimenez, the wife of missing soldier Spc. Alex Jimenez, can rest a bit easier today, now that she has been granted a Green Card by Citizenship and Immigration Services.
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Original:  However, all that changed on June 20 wheeen the governmentt announccedd itssss intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, depsite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soliders , last month.
Revised:  However, all that changed on June 20 when the government announced its intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, depsite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soliders , last month.
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Original:  However, all that changed on June 20 wheeen the governmentt announccedd itssss intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, depsite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soliders , last month.
Revised:  However, all that changed on June 20 wheeen the governmentt announccedd itssss intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soliders , last month.
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Original:  However, all that changed on June 20 wheeen the governmentt announccedd itssss intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, depsite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soliders , last month.
Revised:  However, all that changed on June 20 wheeen the governmentt announccedd itssss intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, depsite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers , last month.
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Original:  Yesterday, while standing victorious with his client on the steps of Immigration and Naturalization Services building in downtown Buffalo, NY, Jimenez's attorney Matthew Kolken said now that this ordeal is behind her, she can return to "using all of her foccus and energies to hope and pray that her husband's going to come home alive.
Revised:  Yesterday, while standing victorious with his client on the steps of Immigration and Naturalization Services building in downtown Buffalo, NY, Jimenez's attorney Matthew Kolken said now that this ordeal is behind her, she can return to "using all of her focus and energies to hope and pray that her husband's going to come home alive.
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Original:  However, all that changed on June 20 when the government announced its intent too deport Jederline Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
Revised:  However, all that changed on June 20 when the government announced its intent to deport Jederline Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
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Original:  When the couple attempted to cross the border between the U.S. and Canada on their honeymoon, the newlywed was detained, held for several hours and released.
Revised:  When the couple attempted to cross the border between the U.S. and Canada on their honeymoon, the newlyweds was detained, held for several hours and released.
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Original:  When the couple attempted to cross the border between the U.S. and Canada on their honeymoon, the newlyweds was detained, held for several hours and released.
Revised:  When the couple attempted to cross the border between the U.S. and Canada on their honeymoon, the newlyweds were detained, held for several hours and released.
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Original:  In 2006, the couple was granted a deferment of immigration proceedings until Spc. Jimenez returned from his second tour of duty in Iraq.
Revised:  In 2006, the couple were granted a deferment of immigration proceedings until Spc. Jimenez returned from his second tour of duty in Iraq.
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Original:  However , all that changed on June 20 when the government announced its intent to deport Yaderlin Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
Revised:  However on June 20 when the government announced its intent to deport Yaderlin Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
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Original:  However , all that changed on June 20 when the government announced its intent to deport Yaderlin Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
Revised:  However , all that changed on June 20 the government announced its intent to deport Yaderlin Jimenez, despite the fact that her husband was declared missing along with two other soldiers, last month.
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Original: The burning Jeep after the attack Credit User:Sparrowman980 . Glasgow International Airport in Renfrewshire, Scotland has been evacuated after reports surfaced that a green Jeep Cherokee struck the airport's terminal building, and burst into flames at 3:11pm BST.
Revised:  Glasgow International Airport in Renfrewshire, Scotland has been evacuated after reports surfaced that a green Jeep Cherokee struck the airport's terminal building, and burst into flames at 3:11pm BST.
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Original: Glasgow International Airport in Renfrewshire, Scotland has been evacuated after reports surfaced that a green Jeep Cherokee struck the airport's terminal building , and burst into flames at 3:11pm BST.
Revised: Glasgow International Airport in Renfrewshire, Scotland has been evacuated after reports surfaced that a green Jeep Cherokee struck the airport's terminal building and burst into flames at 3:11pm BST.
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Original:  " Eyewitnesses described a Jeep Cherokee being driven at speed towards the building with flames coming out from underneath.
Revised:  " Eyewitnesses described an SUV speeding toward the building with flames coming out from underneath.
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Original:  Ann and Reggie, 02/02/2005%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gulfport, Mississippi - S.S. Hurricane Camille The S.S. Hurricane Camille Gift Shop that was recently asked about is alive and well.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gulfport, Mississippi - S.S. Hurricane Camille The S.S. Hurricane Camille Gift Shop that was recently asked about is alive and well.
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Original:  Ann and Reggie, 02/02/2005%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Gulfport, Mississippi - S.S. Hurricane Camille The S.S. Hurricane Camille Gift Shop that was recently asked about is alive and well.
Revised:  Ann and Reggie, 02/02/2005%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The S.S. Hurricane Camille Gift Shop that was recently asked about is alive and well.
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Original:  The dents and scratches just add to its charm  
Revised:  The dents and scratches just add to its charm . 
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Original:  People want it gone, after all it is an eyesore as they say, but then there are those who want to save thier history.
Revised:  People want it gone, suggesting it is an eyesore as they say, but then there are those who want to save thier history.
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Original:  Cancellation of Mount Rushmore's July 3 fireworks show was considered due to dry conditions  .
Revised: Mount Rushmore Cancellation of Mount Rushmore's July 3 fireworks show was considered due to dry conditions .
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Original:  Cancellation of Mount Rushmore's July 3 fireworks show was considered due to dry conditions  .
Revised:  Cancellation of Mount Rushmore's July 3 fireworks show was considered due to dry conditions , but it was decided at 9 PM to proceed. 5,200 shells and pyrotechnics were used in the 27 minute show. The fireworks were preceded by a day filled with music and dance for visitors at the park .
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Original: "Two hundred thirty-one years ago, 56 brave men signed their names to a bold creed of freedom that set the course of our Nation and changed the history *: of the world.
Revised: "Two hundred thirty-one years ago, 56 brave men signed their names to a bold creed of freedom that set the course of our Nation and changed the history of the world.
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Original: Family activities Backyard barbeque Occurring well into summer, this federal holiday was used by many for family events and activities.
Revised: Family activities Backyard barbeque Occurring well into summer, this federal holiday was celebrated by many during family events and activities.
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Original: Fireworks in San Jose, California on July 4, 2007.
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Original:  Many of the 302 million people living in the United States celebrated Independence Day today.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Formal observations There often are public ceremonies and declarations by officials.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There often are public ceremonies and declarations by officials.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public events Neighborhood parade gathers behind a fire truck Mount Rushmore, July 3, 2007 There were many public events, including parades and public festivals with various entertainment and food attractions.
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Original:  Fireworks The day is traditionally celebrated with fireworks, often with large performances by social and government organizations.
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Original:  This change is a result from the earlier incident where a SUV rammed itself into Glasgow Airport, and the defused car bombs found yesterday
Revised:  This change has been made as a result of an earlier incident where a SUV rammed itself into Glasgow Airport, and the defused car bombs found yesterday
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Original: The US military announced the arrests of two American soldiers alleged to have been involved in the premeditated murder of three Iraqi civilians, and the planting of weapons around the crimescene to pretend the victims were insurgents.
Revised: The US military announced the arrests of two American soldiers alleged to have been involved in the premeditated murder of three Iraqi civilians, and the planting of weapons around the crime scene to pretend the victims were insurgents.
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Original:  The three separate incidents occured over the past two months in Iskandariyah, 50 kilometres south of Baghdad.
Revised:  The incidents occured over the past two months in Iskandariyah, 50 kilometres south of Baghdad.
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Original:  Spc. Jorge G. Sandoval, 22, was arrested Tuesday while on a 2-week leave at his  home in Laredo, Texas and charged with one count of premeditated murder and one count of placing a weapon on the victim.
Revised:  Spc. Jorge G. Sandoval, 22, was arrested Tuesday while on a 2-week leave at his family's home in Laredo, Texas and charged with one count of premeditated murder and one count of placing a weapon on the victim.
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Original:   Staff Sgt.
Revised:  The investigation began when fellow soldiers in the 501st Parachute Infantry Regiment reported the alleged events to their superiors. Staff Sgt.
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Original:  Hensley, who comes from Candler, North Carolina, was arrested at a military base in Kuwait on Thursday and charged with three counts of premeditated murder, three counts of obstruction of justice and three counts of placing weapons around the victims .
Revised:  Hensley, who comes from Candler, North Carolina, was arrested at a military base in Kuwait on Thursday and charged with three counts of premeditated murder, three counts of obstruction of justice and three counts of placing weapons around the victims 
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Original:  The investigation began when fellow soldiers in the 501st Parachute Infantry Regiment reported the alleged events to their superiors
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Original:  Hensley, who comes from Candler, North Carolina, was arrested at a military base in Kuwait on Thursday and charged with three counts of premeditated murder, three counts of obstruction of justice and three counts of placing weapons around the victims  
Revised:  Hensley, who comes from Candler, North Carolina, was arrested at a military base in Kuwait on Thursday and charged with three counts of premeditated murder, three counts of obstruction of justice and three counts of placing weapons around the victims . 
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Original: The Sesame Street Live stageshow "Elmo Makes Music" is finishing its 27th season this weekend at the Everett Events Center in Everett, Washington .
Revised: After "Elmo Makes Music" is finishing its 27th season this weekend at the Everett Events Center in Everett, Washington .
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Original:  It will return  in Rochester, Minnesota on August 24, after a three week break.
Revised:  It will return in Rochester, Minnesota on August 24.
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Original:  Before it's retooled, " Super Grover " will tour Bangkok and Metro Manila .
Revised:  " Super Grover " will tour Bangkok and Metro Manila .
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Original: After a three week break, Sesame Street Live will restart in Rochester, Minnesota on August 24.
Revised: After a three week break, Sesame Street Live will start the new season in Rochester, Minnesota on August 24.
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Original: The wedding of Britain’s Prince Charles to Camilla Parker Bowles has been postponed by a dayto allow the Prince to represent the Royals at the Friday funeral of Pope John Paul II.
Revised: The wedding of Britain’s Prince Charles to Camilla Parker Bowles was postponed by one day. This will allow Prince Charles to represent the Royals at the Friday funeral of Pope John Paul II.
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Original:  The Prince cut short his Swiss skiing holiday to return to London today.
Revised:  The Prince cut short his Swiss skiing holiday and returned to London today.
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Original:  He was to arrange for travel to the Vatican on Friday, and attend the this-afternoon's memorial service for the pope at London’s Westminster Cathedral  . Mrs. Parker Bowles will accompany him today, according to his Clarence House office.
Revised:  He will make travel arrangements for his trip to The Vatican on Friday, and attend the this-afternoon's memorial service for the pope at London’s Westminster Cathedral . Mrs. Parker Bowles will accompany him today, according to his Clarence House office.
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Original:  He was to arrange for travel to the Vatican on Friday, and attend the this-afternoon's memorial service for the pope at London’s Westminster Cathedral  . Mrs. Parker Bowles will accompany him today, according to his Clarence House office.
Revised:  He was to arrange for travel to the Vatican on Friday, and attend a memorial service for the pope at London’s Westminster Cathedral . Mrs. Parker Bowles will accompany him today, according to his Clarence House office.
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Original:  However Prime Minister Tony Blair and the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams, would be attending the pope’s funeral .
Revised:  However Prime Minister Tony Blair and the Archbishop of Canterbury, Rowan Williams, will be in attendance .
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Original:  The change in wedding plans threw businesses in Windsor , where hotels had taken bookings for Friday wedding parties , into disarray .
Revised:  The change in wedding plans threw Windsor businesses in disarray , where hotels had taken bookings for Friday wedding parties , into disarray .
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Original:  The change in wedding plans threw businesses in Windsor , where hotels had taken bookings for Friday wedding parties , into disarray .
Revised:  The change in wedding plans threw businesses in Windsor , where hotels had taken bookings for Friday wedding parties .
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Original:  Initially they were planning to use Windsor Castle, but  it was not licensed for civil ceremonies.
Revised:  Initially they were planning to use Windsor Castle, but were unable since it was not licensed for civil ceremonies.
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Original:  Then came the debate over what name Parker Bowles would take should her husband become King.
Revised:  There also was debate over what name Parker Bowles would take should her husband become King.
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Original:  Final arrangements for the wedding will be announced soon, according to the spokesperson for the prince .
Revised:  Final arrangements for the wedding will be announced soon, according to the prince's spokesperson .
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Original:  This will allow Prince Charles to represent the Royals at the Friday funeral of Pope John Paul II.
Revised:  This will allow Prince Charles to represent the Royals at friday's funeral of Pope John Paul II.
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Original:  They will now be married on Saturday, April 9.
Revised:  They will now be celebrated on Saturday, April 9.
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Original: A series of postponements have hampered the Prince ’ s and Parker Bowle’s wedding arrangements.
Revised: A series of postponements have hampered the Prince ' s and Parker Bowle’s wedding arrangements.
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Original: A series of postponements have hampered the Prince ’ s and Parker Bowle’s wedding arrangements.
Revised: A series of postponements have hampered the Prince ’ s and Parker Bowles' wedding arrangements.
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Original: A new lawsuit filed against the United States Presidential Administration of George W. Bush by the American Civil Liberties Union on behalf of two individuals forcibly removed at a 2005 taxpayer funded  event has brought to light a secret White House manual detailing tactics aimed to suppress demonstrations and bar those opposed to Bush policy access to presidential events.
Revised: A new lawsuit filed against the United States Presidential Administration of George W. Bush by the American Civil Liberties Union on behalf of two individuals forcibly removed from a 2005 taxpayer funded event has brought to light a secret White House manual detailing tactics aimed to suppress demonstrations and bar those opposed to Bush policy access to presidential events.
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