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Original:  In 1989, during the golden jubilee anniversary of his enthronement, the Manya Krobo state honoured him with highest traditional title of the land, “Oklemekuku”, meaning “ a great leader and an ancient fellow, ” in appreciation of his contributions to the socioeconomic development of Manya Krobo in areas relating to education, agriculture, water and sanitation, road works and transport.
Revised:  In 1989, during the golden jubilee anniversary of his enthronement, the Manya Krobo state honoured him with highest traditional title of the land, "Oklemekuku", meaning " a great leader and an ancient fellow, ” in appreciation of his contributions to the socioeconomic development of Manya Krobo in areas relating to education, agriculture, water and sanitation, road works and transport.
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Original:  In 1989, during the golden jubilee anniversary of his enthronement, the Manya Krobo state honoured him with highest traditional title of the land, “Oklemekuku”, meaning “ a great leader and an ancient fellow, ” in appreciation of his contributions to the socioeconomic development of Manya Krobo in areas relating to education, agriculture, water and sanitation, road works and transport.
Revised:  In 1989, during the golden jubilee anniversary of his enthronement, the Manya Krobo state honoured him with highest traditional title of the land, “Oklemekuku”, meaning “ a great leader and an ancient fellow, " in appreciation of his contributions to the socioeconomic development of Manya Krobo in areas relating to education, agriculture, water and sanitation, road works and transport.
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Original:  Death and legacy Nene Azzu Mate Kole II died on 15 March 1990 of natural causes, not long after the golden jubilee celebrations of his enthronement as chieftain of Manya Krobo ( 1939-1989 ).
Revised:  Death and legacy Nene Azzu Mate Kole II died on 15 March 1990 of natural causes, not long after the golden jubilee celebrations of his enthronement as chieftain of Manya Krobo ( 1939–1989 ).
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Original:  The lecture, chaired by the reigning monarch, Nene Sakite II, Konor of Manya Krobo was on the topic, “ Oklemekuku Azzu Mate Kole: A great king and a statesman”.
Revised:  The lecture, chaired by the reigning monarch, Nene Sakite II, Konor of Manya Krobo was on the topic, " Oklemekuku Azzu Mate Kole: A great king and a statesman”.
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Original:  He then went to Adisadel College and later to Achimota College near Accra for his secondary education.
Revised:  He then went to Achimota College near Accra for his secondary education.
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Original:  In 1855, two Basel missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by t Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
Revised:  In 1855, two Basel missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
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Original:  In 1855, two Basel missionaries , Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
Revised:  In 1855, two Basel Missionaries , Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
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Original:  He was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until his death in 1890.
Revised:  She was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until his death in 1890.
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Original:  He was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until his death in 1890.
Revised:  He was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until their death in 1890.
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Original:  In 1855, two Basel Missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
Revised:  In 1855, two Basel Missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of her sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
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Original:  She was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until their death in 1890.
Revised:  He was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until their death in 1890.
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Original:  She was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until their death in 1890.
Revised:  She was succeeded by Sakite I, who ruled Manya Krobo from 1867 until his death in 1890.
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Original:  In 1855, two Basel Missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of her sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
Revised:  In 1855, two Basel Missionaries, Johannes Zimmerman and C. W. Locher travelled to Odumase in the state of Krobo, 50 miles (80 km) northeast of the Ghanaian capital, Accra, where they were warmly welcomed by Odonkor Azu, who entrusted one of his sons, Tei, to them to be baptised educated and brought up as a Christian.
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Original: Nursing care levels are different levels of care by which nursing services are provided for a URL They include "Bay Nursing", "Arm's Length nursing " and "1:1 Nursing".
Revised: Nursing care levels are different levels of care by which nursing services are provided for a URL They include "Bay Nursing", "Arm's Length Nursing " and "1:1 Nursing".
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Original:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an are where includes a number of patients by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse UR
Revised:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an area -where includes a number of patients by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse UR
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Original:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an are where includes a number of patients by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse UR
Revised:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an are where includes a number of patients- by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse UR
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Original:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an area -where includes a number of patients- by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse UR 
Revised:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an area -where includes a number of patients- by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse URL 
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Original: Nursing care levels are different levels of care by which nursing services are provided for a URL In the UK, they include "Bay Nursing", "Arm's Length Nursing" and "1:1 Nursing".
Revised: Nursing care levels are different levels of care by which nursing services are provided for a patient. In the UK, they include "Bay Nursing", "Arm's Length Nursing" and "1:1 Nursing".
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Original:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an area -where includes a number of patients- by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse URL
Revised:  They represent controlling the care from one station to an area -where includes a number of patients- by a nurse, 2 or 3 patients available to a nurse, or only one patient by a nurse respectively.
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Original:  He was an active fund-raiser and persuaded souther Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
Revised:  He was an active fund-raiser and persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
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Original:  However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry ane he sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.
Revised:  However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry and the sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.
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Original:  A self-made man  Mahadev came from humble background , however with his hard work and dedication he became an editor of two journals in 1870.
Revised:  A self-made man , Mahadev came from humble background , however with his hard work and dedication he became an editor of two journals in 1870.
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Original:  A self-made man  Mahadev came from humble background , however with his hard work and dedication he became an editor of two journals in 1870.
Revised:  A self-made man Mahadev came from humble background . He became an editor of two journals in 1870.
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Original: A self-made man, Mahadev came from humble background .
Revised: A self-made man, Mahadev was from a humble family .
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Original:  He started new periodicals like Kiran, Deccan Star, Shilpa kalavidnyan and the Industrial review.
Revised:  With this in mind, he started new periodicals like Kiran, Deccan Star, Shilpa kalavidnyan and the Industrial review.
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Original:  His greateast contribution was establishment of industrial conference and the industrial association in Pune . Namjoshi .
Revised:  His contribution to establishment of industrial conference and the industrial association in Pune . Namjoshi .
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Original:  He was an active fund-raiser and persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
Revised:  As an active fund-raiser and persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
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Original:  He was an active fund-raiser and persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
Revised:  He was an active fund-raiser he persuaded southern Maratha country to contribute towards the establishment of Ferguson college.
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Original:  However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry and the sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.
Revised:  However, his chief interest was promotion of Indian industry and for this he often sought quick action instead of long winded discussions.
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Original:  In 1888, Namjoshi sought government help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines . and also work out who and how would goods be transported.
Revised:  In 1888, Namjoshi approached the government for help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines . and also work out who and how would goods be transported.
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Original:  In 1888, Namjoshi sought government help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines . and also work out who and how would goods be transported.
Revised:  In 1888, Namjoshi sought government help to establish contact with various artisans, their functioning and imparting them knowledge in modern methods of manufacturing, tools, machine tools and hand machines and also work out who and how would goods be transported.
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Original:  He also explored the possibility of active cooperation from the local municipal boards in this regard.
Revised:  He explored the possibility of active cooperation from the local municipal boards in this regard.
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Original:  He was also a close associate of Lokmanya Tilak since 1880s.
Revised:  He was a close associate of Lokmanya Tilak since 1880s.
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Original:  After the foundation of Indian national congress in 1885, Namjoshi was one of the first to complain about the lack of representative committee.
Revised:  After the foundation of Indian national congress in 1885, Namjoshi complained about the lack of representative committee.
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Original:  Proceedings of the American Philosophical Society Vol. 106, No. 3 (Jun. 29, 1962), pp. 195-209.
Revised:  Proceedings of the American Philosophical Society Vol. 106, No. 3 (Jun. 29, 1962), pp. 195–209.
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Original:  This was the sole water supply in this section of Wilder, Tennessee in 1942)]] hi iam benji dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
Revised:  This was the sole water supply in this section of Wilder, Tennessee in 1942)]] dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
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Original:  A good example of this discussion is the question of how much the Peace of Westphalia in 1648 represents an important change in European history .
Revised:  A good example of this discussion is the question of how much the Peace of Westphalia in 1648 represents an important change in European History .
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Original:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasize continuity?
Revised:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasise continuity?
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Original:  Economic historian Alexander Gerschenkron argues that continuity "appears to mean no more than  absence of change, i.e. stability.
Revised:  Economic historian Alexander Gerschenkron argues that continuity "appears to mean no more than the absence of change, i.e. stability.
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Original:  A good example of this discussion is the question of how much the Peace of Westphalia in 1648 represents an important change in European History .
Revised:  A good example of this discussion is the question of how much the Peace of Westphalia in 1648 represents an important change in European history .
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Original:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasise continuity?
Revised:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasize continuity?
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Original:  In terms of creating and discussing periodizations (e.g. the Enlightenment or the Victorian Era,) the dichotomy can be used to assess when a period can be said to start and end, thus making the dichotomy important in relation to understanding historical . "I'm on my period I am bleeding out of my ass", was the wise words of Williams Shakespeare chronology.
Revised:  In terms of creating and discussing periodizations (e.g. the Enlightenment or the Victorian Era,) the dichotomy can be used to assess when a period can be said to start and end, thus making the dichotomy important in relation to understanding historical chronology.
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Original:  Economic historian Alexander Gerschenkron argues that continuity "appears to mean no more than the absence of change, i.e. stability.
Revised:  Economic historian Alexander Gerschenkron argues that continuity "appears to mean no more than absence of change, i.e. stability.
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Original:  Change and continuity is a classic dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
Revised: ! Change and continuity is a classic dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
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Original: ! Change and continuity is a classic dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
Revised:  Change and continuity is a classic dichotomy within the fields of history, historical sociology, and the social sciences more broadly.
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Original:  Interview by Javiér Fernández Sebastián and Juan Francisco Fuentes Contributions to the History of Concepts Vol. 2, pp. 110–12. "
Revised:  Interview by Javiér Fernández Sebastián and Juan Francisco Fuentes Contributions to the History of Concepts Vol. 2, pp. 110–12. 
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Original:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall  questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasize continuity?
Revised:  In a similar vein, historian Richard Kirkendall once questioned whether FDR's New Deal represented "a radical innovation or a continuation of earlier themes in American life?" and posed the question of whether "historical interpretations of the New Deal [should] stress change or emphasize continuity?
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Original:   The dichotomy lends itself to constructing and evaluating historical periodizations.
Revised:  The dichotomy is important in relation to constructing, discussing, and evaluating historical periodizations.
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Original:  German historian Reinhart Koselleck, however, has been said to "challenge " this dichotomy.
Revised:  German historian Reinhart Koselleck, however, has been said to challenge this dichotomy.
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Original:  Funja has also chaired the Buni Divaz community a group of empowered Tanzanian girls part of the Buni Hub community under the TANZICT and COSTECH umbrella URL Funja has received several awards including Malkia wa Nguvu - 2017 - Science and Technology.
Revised:  Funja has also chaired the Buni Divaz community a group of empowered Tanzanian girls part of the Buni Hub community under the TANZICT and COSTECH umbrella Funja has received several awards including Malkia wa Nguvu - 2017 - Science and Technology.
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Original:  A regional regional winner of the 2013 ICT4Ag Conference Hackathon URL In 2016 she received an innovator award by the Tanzanian Ministry of Communication for participation in the TanzICT project URL
Revised:  A regional regional winner of the 2013 ICT4Ag Conference Hackathon . In 2016 she received an innovator award by the Tanzanian Ministry of Communication for participation in the TanzICT project URL
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Original:  A regional regional winner of the 2013 ICT4Ag Conference Hackathon URL In 2016 she received an innovator award by the Tanzanian Ministry of Communication for participation in the TanzICT project URL
Revised:  A regional regional winner of the 2013 ICT4Ag Conference Hackathon URL In 2016 she received an innovator award by the Tanzanian Ministry of Communication for participation in the TanzICT project .
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Original:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited URL . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania URL and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture URL where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
Revised:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania URL and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture URL where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
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Original:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited URL . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania URL and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture URL where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
Revised:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited URL . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture URL where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
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Original:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited URL . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania URL and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture URL where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
Revised:  With this focus she founded Agrinfo company limited URL . Agrinfo initial idea was to be a google for agricultural information in Tanzania URL and it has pivoted over the years to include technologies such as drone for agriculture where Funja is a trained drone pilot.
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Original:  She is also recognized by her innovation to help women in agriculture by the UN Women in the Young innovators category in 2014 at the URL
Revised:  She is also recognized by her innovation to help women in agriculture by the UN Women in the Young innovators category in 2014 at the 
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Original:  She   has been active since 2014 with one app ATIZAVO on Google Play.
Revised:  She She has been active since 2014 with one app ATIZAVO on Google Play.
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Original:  She is also a dean at the College of Science at the University of Bagamoyo, lecturing on ICT.
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Original:  She attended the Kifungilo and Shaaban Robert School and the University of Dar es Salaam from where she received a Bachelor of Science in computer engineering in 2005  and a master's of engineering degree in Communication and Information Systems from Huazhong University of science and technology in 2008.
Revised:  She attended the Kifungilo and Shaaban Robert School and the University of Dar es Salaam from where she received a Bachelor of Science in computer engineering in 2005 , and a master's of engineering degree in Communication and Information Systems from Huazhong University of science and technology in 2008.
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Original:  She attended the Kifungilo and Shaaban Robert School and the University of Dar es Salaam from where she received a Bachelor of Science in computer engineering in 2005  and a master's of engineering degree in Communication and Information Systems from Huazhong University of science and technology in 2008.
Revised:  She attended the Kifungilo and Shaaban Robert School and the University of Dar es Salaam from where she received a Bachelor of Science in computer engineering in 2005 and a master's of engineering degree in Communication and Information Systems from Huazhong University of Science and Technology in 2008.
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