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Original: The Italian Geographic Society (Società Geografica Italiana) celebrates , in Rome, Italy, the 140th anniversary since its foundation (1867).
Revised: The Italian Geographic Society (Società Geografica Italiana) celebrates the 140th anniversary since its foundation (1867).
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Original: The Italian Geographic Society (Società Geografica Italiana) celebrates , in Rome, Italy, the 140th anniversary since its foundation (1867).
Revised: The Italian Geographic Society (Società Geografica Italiana) celebrates , in Rome, Italy, the 140th anniversary of its foundation (1867).
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Original:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, in his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, resumed the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting from its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
Revised:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, during his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, resumed the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting from its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
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Original:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, in his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, resumed the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting from its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
Revised:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, in his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, summarized the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting from its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
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Original:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, in his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, resumed the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting from its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
Revised:  Professor Franco Salvatori, president of Societa Geografica Italiana, in his opening speech (May 12, 2007) Professor Salvatori, in his welcoming speech, resumed the historical growth and the principal results of the institution, starting with its first expeditions in Africa at the beginning of the 20th century, underlining the modernity of the latest programs recently launched.
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Original:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities , and the activities for the preservation and spreading of the geographical culture - Salvatori said- keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
Revised:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities and the activities for the preservation and spreading of the geographical culture - Salvatori said- keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
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Original:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities , and the activities for the preservation and spreading of the geographical culture - Salvatori said- keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
Revised:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities , and the activities for the preservation and advancement of the geographical culture - Salvatori said- keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
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Original:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities , and the activities for the preservation and spreading of the geographical culture - Salvatori said- keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
Revised:  Also, the many agreements with international institutions and universities , and the activities for the preservation and spreading of the geographical culture , Salvatori said, keep the Society at a level of excellence in its field.
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Original:  Most speakers pointed out the extraordinary scientific patrimony collected in time by the Society (450.000+ volumes, rare ancient maps, technical studies, images), which is among the brightest academical prides for Italy.
Revised:  Most speakers pointed out the extraordinary scientific patrimony collected over time by the Society (450.000+ volumes, rare ancient maps, technical studies, images), which is among the brightest academical prides for Italy.
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Original:  Most speakers pointed out the extraordinary scientific patrimony collected in time by the Society (450.000+ volumes, rare ancient maps, technical studies, images), which is among the brightest academical prides for Italy.
Revised:  Most speakers pointed out the extraordinary scientific patrimony collected in time by the Society (450.000+ volumes, rare ancient maps, technical studies, images), which is among the greatest sources of academic pride for Italy.
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Original:  Moreover , its international prestige was complimented: the Society hosts in Palazzetto Mattei the European Geographic Society (EUGEO), as well as the so-called "Home of Geography" (for the International Geographical Union), and is involved at a primary level in a UNESCO program for the Education in the Sustainable Development.
Revised:  Further , its international prestige was complimented: the Society hosts in Palazzetto Mattei the European Geographic Society (EUGEO), as well as the so-called "Home of Geography" (for the International Geographical Union), and is involved at a primary level in a UNESCO program for the Education in the Sustainable Development.
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Original:  Celebrations will continue on the next days.
Revised:  Celebrations will continue over the next days.
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Original:  However, it is a known that he used to attend madrassas before joining the fight against the Soviet forces.
Revised:  However, it is known that he used to attend madrassas before joining the fight against the Soviet forces.
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Original:  However, it is a known that he used to attend madrassas before joining the fight against the Soviet forces.
Revised:  However, it is a known that he attended madrassas before joining the fight against the Soviet forces.
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Original:  Kandahar, Herat, Mazari Sharif ,  and Kabul.
Revised:  Kandahar, Herat, Mazari Sharif , , and Kabul.
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Original: ]] Mullah Dadullah , also known as Mullah Dadullah Akhund, a Taliban leader, radical Islamic cleric and military commander, has been killed in southern Afghanistan after an encounter with Afghan and Allied forces, according to the Afghan government.
Revised: ]] , also known as Mullah Dadullah Akhund, a Taliban leader, radical Islamic cleric and military commander, has been killed in southern Afghanistan after an encounter with Afghan and Allied forces, according to the Afghan government.
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Original: ]] Mullah Dadullah , also known as Mullah Dadullah Akhund, a Taliban leader, radical Islamic cleric and military commander, has been killed in southern Afghanistan after an encounter with Afghan and Allied forces, according to the Afghan government.
Revised: ]] Mullah Dadullah , also known as Mullah Dadullah Akhund, a Taliban leader, radical and military commander, has been killed in southern Afghanistan after an encounter with Afghan and Allied forces, according to the Afghan government.
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Original:  In 2005, Mullah Dadullah vowed, "The mujahideen will not lay down their arms unless the Americans leave and an Islamic state is established."
Revised:  In 2005, Mullah Dadullah vowed, "The will not lay down their arms unless the Americans leave and an Islamic state is established."
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Original:  Christopher Garver  
Revised:  Christopher Garver . 
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Original: Five United States soldiers were killed and 3 presumed kidnapped in Mahmudiya , a town just south of Baghdad, Iraq when militants attacked their patrol.
Revised: Five United States soldiers were killed and 3 presumed kidnapped in Mahmoudiyah , a town just south of Baghdad, Iraq when militants attacked their patrol.
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Original: Five United States soldiers were killed and 3 presumed kidnapped in Mahmoudiyah, a town just south of Baghdad, Iraq when militants attacked their patrol.
Revised: Five members of United States patrol were killed and 3 presumed kidnapped in Mahmoudiyah, a town just south of Baghdad, Iraq when militants attacked their patrol.
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Original:  They do not wish to loose money due to more theater owners cashing in on Sivaji: The Boss  
Revised:  They do not wish to loose money due to more theater owners cashing in on Sivaji: The Boss . 
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Original:  The Kerala Film Chamber of Commerce ruled that the film should be released in more  than the theaters which it is set to be released in (48 theater owners have bought the rights) so it can have greater exposure to the public, but the theater owners who have the rights to show the film disagree.
Revised:  The Kerala Film Chamber of Commerce ruled that the film should be released in more theaters than the theaters which it is set to be released in (48 theater owners have bought the rights) so it can have greater exposure to the public, but the theater owners who have the rights to show the film disagree.
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Original: In Kerala 38000 CDs of the Sivaji: The Boss audio were sold on the first day, which is a first for a non-malayalam film audio to sell.
Revised: In Kerala 38000 CDs of the Sivaji: The Boss audio were sold on the first day, which is a first for a non-Malayalam film audio to sell.
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Original:  In the early part of the race Kimi suffered a problem with the engine of his Ferrari car and had to return it to the pits.
Revised:  In the early part of the race Kimi suffered a problem with his Ferrari car and had to return it to the pits.
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Original: Felipe Massa (2005) Credit: Chris J. Moffett Felipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the 2007 FIA Formula One Spanish Grand prix at  Circuit de Catalunya, Barcelona, Spain.
Revised: Felipe Massa (2005) Credit: Chris J. Moffett Felipe Massa, driving for Ferrari, won the 2007 FIA Formula One Spanish Grand prix at the Circuit de Catalunya, Barcelona, Spain.
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Original:   Starting from pole, the Brazilian controlled the race from the start, when in the first corner he had slight contact with Fernando Alonso from  McLaren-Mercedes team in the battle for the lead.
Revised:  Starting from pole, the Brazilian controlled the race from the start, when in the first corner he had slight contact with Fernando Alonso from the McLaren-Mercedes team in the battle for the lead.
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Original:  This was the crucial moment of the race  when the Spaniard returned one place back.
Revised:  This was the crucial moment of the race , when the Spaniard returned one place back.
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Original:   McLaren team occupied second and third place  . Spanish circuit in Barcelona Robert Kubica,  young BMW Sauber driver from Poland, was 4th, replacing his teammate Nick Heidfeld, who was out due to the gearbox failure.
Revised:  The McLaren team occupied second and third place . Spanish circuit in Barcelona Robert Kubica, young BMW Sauber driver from Poland, was 4th, replacing his teammate Nick Heidfeld, who was out due to the gearbox failure.
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Original:   McLaren team occupied second and third place  . Spanish circuit in Barcelona Robert Kubica,  young BMW Sauber driver from Poland, was 4th, replacing his teammate Nick Heidfeld, who was out due to the gearbox failure.
Revised:  McLaren team occupied second and third place . Spanish circuit in Barcelona Robert Kubica, the young BMW Sauber driver from Poland, was 4th, replacing his teammate Nick Heidfeld, who was out due to the gearbox failure.
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Original:  Image:Felipe Massa 2007 Bahrain.jpg|Felipe Massa at 2007 Bahrain Grand Prix Credit: emilgh In the early part of the race Kimi Raikkonen suffered an electrical problem with his Ferrari car and had to return it to the pits.
Revised:  In the early part of the race Kimi Raikkonen suffered an electrical problem with his Ferrari car and had to return it to the pits.
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Original:  The cause of death was announced as CAUSEOFDEATH.
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Original:  Top Goalie, Kari Lehtonen (Finland 
Revised:  Top Goalie, Kari Lehtonen (Finland )
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Original: Canada wins Men's 2007 World Hockey Championship in Moscow, defeating Finland 4-2.
Revised: Canada has won the Men's 2007 World Hockey Championship in Moscow, defeating Finland 4-2.
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Original:  Team Canada went undefeated with a 9-0 record.
Revised:  Canada's national ice hockey team went undefeated with a 9-0 record.
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Original:  The Tournament MVP was Rick Nash (Canada).
Revised:  The Tournament Most Valuable Player was Rick Nash (Canada).
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Original:  Top Defenceman, Andrei Markov (Russia) , ;
Revised:  Top Defenceman, Andrei Markov (Russia) ;
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Original:  Top Goalie, Kari Lehtonen (Finland)   
Revised:  Top Goalie, Kari Lehtonen (Finland) . 
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Original:  According to the FBI web site, the specific U.S. charges against Goldberg stemming from incidents that allegedly took place in 2001, are: sexual exploitation of children (production of child pornography), unlawful flight to avoid prosecution, lewd acts upon a child (six counts), and possession of child pornography (two counts).
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Original: It is not known what caused the fire, but a car is suspected to have caught on fire and there are reports from police and hazmatt crews, that there was also large barrels of diesel fuel being stored in one building.
Revised: It is not known what caused the fire, but a car is suspected to have caught on fire and there are reports from police and hazmatt crews, that there were also large barrels of diesel fuel being stored in one building.
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Original:  Firefighters say the cause of the blaze is being ruled as "suspicious."
Revised:  Firefighters say the cause of the blaze is being treated as "suspicious."
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Original: It is not known what caused the fire, but a car is suspected to have caught on fire and there are reports from police and hazmatt crews, that there were also large barrels of diesel fuel being stored in one building.
Revised: It is not known what caused the fire, but a car is suspected to have caught on fire and there are reports from police and hazmat crews, that there were also large barrels of diesel fuel being stored in one building.
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Original: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but cannot get to center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
Revised: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but could get to center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
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Original: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
Revised: One woman, who wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
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Original: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
Revised: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
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Original: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
Revised: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the building is filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
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Original: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that the man who owns the building "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
Revised: One woman, who also wished not to be named as she is close to the unnamed owner of the warehouse, the buildings are filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that owner "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
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Original: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but could  get to center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
Revised: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but could not get to center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
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Original: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but could not get to  center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
Revised: As of 6:40 a.m., the fire was under control, and firefighters were attempting to stop it from spreading, but could not get to the center of the fire because of severe amounts of debris.
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Original: One woman, who wished not to be named as she is close to the owner of the warehouse,  the building is filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that owner "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
Revised: One woman, who wished not to be named as she is close to the owner of the warehouse, said the building is filled with "classic cars, forklifts, and money" and that owner "does not have insurance" coverage on the property.
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Original: Police were on the sidelines as pro-government and opposition groups clased .
Revised: Police were on the sidelines as pro-government and opposition groups clashed .
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Original: After two days of violence in Karachi, Pakistan , that left 41 killed and at least 150 injured, a general strike has hit the city.
Revised: After two days of violence in Karachi, Pakistan that left 41 killed and at least 150 injured, a general strike has hit the city.
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Original: After two days of violence in Karachi, Pakistan , that left 41 killed and at least 150 injured, a general strike has hit the city.
Revised: After two days of violence in Karachi, Pakistan , that left 41 killed and at least 150 injured, a general strike has been called in the city.
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Original:  Street demonstrations have been illegal since laws were enacted after the 1981 assisnation of President Anwar Sadat.
Revised:  Street demonstrations have been illegal since laws were enacted after the 1981 assassination of President Anwar Sadat.
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Original: During the past week, large amounts of , in excess of five metres, fell across parts of the and the in Northern . Eight people died over the weekend  as people become trapped in their cars and buried underneath the heavy snow.
Revised: During the past week, large amounts of , in excess of five metres, in the of in Northern . Eight people died over the weekend as people become trapped in their cars and buried underneath the heavy snow.
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Original:  A travelling from to northern Japan also derailed, however no one was injured  
Revised:  A travelling from to northern Japan also derailed, however no one was injured . 
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Original: Snow has accumulated to record depths, in excess of five metres, in the of in Northern  . More snow fell in northern Japan over the weekend, and at least eight people died as people become trapped in their cars and buried underneath the heavy snow.
Revised: Snow has accumulated to record depths, in excess of five metres, in the of in Northern Japan . More snow fell in northern Japan over the weekend, and at least eight people died as people become trapped in their cars and buried underneath the heavy snow.
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Original: A ceasefire between  Fatah and Hamas broke down only hours after it came into effect .
Revised: A ceasefire between Fatah and Hamas broke down hours after it came into effect .
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Original: A ceasefire between  Fatah and Hamas broke down only hours after it came into effect .
Revised: A ceasefire between Fatah and Hamas broke down only hours after it came into effect , prompting the
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Original:  Interior Minister Hani Qawasmi offered his resignation, which he has done before, but this time it was accepted by Prime Minister Ismail Haniyeh .  Violence in the Gaza strip has claimed the lives of seven people in two day.
Revised:  Interior Minister Hani Qawasmi to offer his resignation . Violence in the Gaza strip has claimed the lives of seven people in two day.
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Original: The DaimlerChrysler Corporation has announced on May 14, 2007 that the corporation is divesting itself of the Chrysler Group by selling it to New York City-based private equity firm Cerberus Capital Management for $US 7.4 Billion.
Revised: The DaimlerChrysler Corporation has announced that the corporation is divesting itself of the Chrysler Group by selling it to New York City-based private equity firm Cerberus Capital Management for $US 7.4 Billion.
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Original: Chrysler Headquarters in Auburn Hills  The DaimlerChrysler Corporation has announced that the corporation is divesting itself of the Chrysler Group by selling it to New York City-based private equity firm Cerberus Capital Management for $US 7.4 Billion.
Revised: Chrysler Headquarters in Auburn Hills , Michigan The DaimlerChrysler Corporation has announced that the corporation is divesting itself of the Chrysler Group by selling it to New York City-based private equity firm Cerberus Capital Management for $US 7.4 Billion.
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Original:  Several civilian pleasurecraft boats have arrived and have taken some passengers off of the ship .
Revised:  Several civilian pleasurecraft boats have arrived and have taken some passengers off of the ship 
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Original:  The 110-meter long Empress of the North is owned by "Majestic America", a division of Ambassadors Cruise Group, which is in turn, a wholly owned subsidiary of Ambassadors International
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