wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in a prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their belly .
Revised: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their belly .
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Original: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in a prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their belly .
Revised: File:Neonate with electrical impedance tomography electrodes.jpeg|A newborn baby placed in a prone position with electrical impedance tomography electrodes to assess the effect on lung ventilation]] Proning or prone positioning is the placement of patients into a prone position so that they are lying on their stomach .
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Original:  It has been  tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic  it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been especially tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been  tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic  it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been tried and studied for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been  tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic  it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators but during the COVID-19 pandemic it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been  tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic  it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic , it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  It has been  tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic  it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP equipment as an alternative to ventilation.
Revised:  It has been tried and studied especially for patients on ventilators , but during the COVID-19 pandemic it is being used for patients with oxygen masks and CPAP as an alternative to ventilation.
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Original:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
Revised:  If the patient is undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
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Original:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
Revised:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
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Original:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
Revised:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning the unconscious patient requires many staff members or special equipment.
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Original:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff members or special equipment.
Revised:  If patients are undergoing intensive care and sedated , then this is a difficult procedure because lifting and turning unconscious patients requires many staff or special equipment.
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Original:  If the patients are intubated then care has to be taken to manage the tangle of associated lines and tubes.
Revised:  If they are intubated then care has to be taken to manage the tangle of associated lines and tubes.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care but that a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was only found with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of prone positioning of infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
Revised:  A 2011 meta-analysis of 48 studies found that with prone positioning there were no negative effects on mortality for patients in intensive care , however, a positive effect was noted: a significant reduction in mortality was found only with those patients who were severely ill with ARDS. A 2012 systematic review of 53 studies of proning in infants with acute respiratory distress found that it was effective in improving oxygenation.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome  is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome  is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome , which is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
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Original:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome  is greater in the prone position, thereby necessitating continuous monitoring.
Revised:  No adverse effects were found , but the risk of sudden infant death syndrome is greater in the prone position, necessitates continuous monitoring.
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Original:  A 2014 systematic review of 11 trials found that reduction of the tidal volume of ventilation  in combination with prone positioning, was effective, saving the life of about one additional patient in eleven.
Revised:  A 2014 systematic review of 11 trials found that reduction of the tidal volume of ventilation , in combination with prone positioning, was effective, saving the life of about one additional patient in eleven.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to UNderstand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory FailurE (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of prone positioning during the study period of 2014.
Revised:  The Large Observational Study to Understand the Global Impact of Severe Acute Respiratory Failure (LUNG-SAFE) , conducted by the European Society of Intensive Care Medicine (ESICM) , looked at the use of proning during the study period of 2014.
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Original:  At that time, prone positioning was used for 7\% of all ARDS patients and 14\% of the most severe cases.
Revised:  At that time, proning was used for 7\% of all ARDS patients and 14\% of the most severe cases.
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Original:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of proning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence in areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and thereby avoiding the need for intubation and ventilation.
Revised:  These recommended the use of prone positioning : In the COVID-19 pandemic, there is anecdotal evidence from areas such as New York, that prone or reclining posture can be used with oxygen supplied by a mask or continuous positive airway pressure (CPAP) to improve oxygenation and so avoid the need for intubation and ventilation.
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Original:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients , who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This especially effective with heavy, obese patients , who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
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Original:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients , who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
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Original:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients , who suffer more while on their back in a supine position.
Revised:  This was especially effective for heavy, obese patients , who suffer more on their back in a supine position.
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Original:   Mechanisms There are several factors that have been suggested to explain the benefits of the prone position for ARDS patients.
Revised:  Mechanisms There are several factors which have been suggested to explain the benefits of the prone position for ARDS patients.
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Original:   Mechanisms There are several factors that have been suggested to explain the benefits of the prone position for ARDS patients.
Revised:  Mechanisms There are several factors that have been suggested to explain the benefits of this position for ARDS patients.
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Original:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart that pumps blood through the lungs, and thereby reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
Revised:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart , which pumps blood through the lungs, and thereby reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
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Original:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart that pumps blood through the lungs, and thereby reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
Revised:  These include better oxygenation due to the physical effects of the position, reducing the weight of the body on the diaphragm and lungs a reduction in ventilator-associated lung injury (VILI) as the stress and strain on the lungs is reduced improving the effectiveness of the right ventricle of the heart that pumps blood through the lungs, and so reducing the incidence of fatal cor pulmonale better draining of lung fluids causing a reduction in ventilator-associated pneumonia
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Original:   The US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) points to Personal NPIs, Community NPIs and Environmental NPIs . NPI have been recommended for pandemic influenza at both local and global levels, and studied at large scale during the 2009 swine flu pandemic and the COVID-19 pandemic.
Revised:  The US Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) points to personal, community, and environmental interventions . NPI have been recommended for pandemic influenza at both local and global levels, and studied at large scale during the 2009 swine flu pandemic and the COVID-19 pandemic.
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Original:  NPIs are a set of measures that can be utilized at any time, and are used in the period between the emergence of an epidemic disease , and the deployment of an effective vaccine.
Revised:  NPIs are a set of measures that can be utilized at any time, and are used in the period between the emergence of an epidemic disease and the deployment of an effective vaccine.
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Original: Types Choosing to stay home to prevent the spread of symptoms of a potential sickness, covering coughs and sneezes, and washing one's hands on a regular basis are all examples of non-pharmaceutical URL Another example would include administrators of schools, workplaces, community areas, etc., taking proper preventive action and reminding people to take precaution when need be in order to avoid the spread of disease.
Revised: Types Choosing to stay home to prevent the spread of symptoms of a potential sickness, covering coughs and sneezes, and washing one's hands on a regular basis are all examples of non-pharmaceutical interventions. Another example would include administrators of schools, workplaces, community areas, etc., taking proper preventive action and reminding people to take precaution when need be in order to avoid the spread of disease.
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Original:  2020. In lieu of effective vaccination, non-pharmaceutical intervention is key to mitigation of infections and reduction of COVID-19-related mortality.
Revised:  2020. In the early stages of the COVID-19 pandemic, before vaccines had been developed, NPIs were key to mitigation of infections and reduction of COVID-19-related mortality.
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Original:  Screening is considered by the WHO to be both acceptable and feasible, though they did not recommend it when in the case of influenza outbreak due to its inefficacy in identifying asymptomatic individuals.
Revised:  Screening is considered by the WHO to be both acceptable and feasible, though they did not recommend its use in the case of influenza outbreak due to its inefficacy in identifying asymptomatic individuals.
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Original: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| Maenad with nebris on relief in the Museo del Prado ]] Nebris (  or nebride, feminine noun, from the Greek νεβρίς-ίδος , derived from νεβρός , fawn ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
Revised: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| A maenad with a nebris (and a thyrsus) ]] Nebris ( or nebride, feminine noun, from the Greek νεβρίς-ίδος , derived from νεβρός , fawn ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
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Original: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| Maenad with nebris on relief in the Museo del Prado ]] Nebris (  or nebride, feminine noun, from the Greek νεβρίς-ίδος , derived from νεβρός , fawn ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
Revised: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| Maenad with nebris on relief in the Museo del Prado ]] Nebris ( ; or nebride, feminine noun, from the Greek νεβρίς-ίδος , derived from νεβρός , fawn ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
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Original: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| Maenad with nebris on relief in the Museo del Prado ]] Nebris (  or nebride, feminine noun, from the Greek νεβρίς-ίδος , derived from νεβρός , fawn ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
Revised: File:Ménade relieve romano (Museo del Prado) 02.jpg| Maenad with nebris on relief in the Museo del Prado ]] Nebris ( or nebride, from , ‘fawn’ ) is a fawn skin, similar to an aegis, originally worn as a hunter's clothing item and later attributed to Dionysus (Euripides, Le Baccanti, 99, 125, 157, 790;
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