wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Even though homosexual couples would be wed in the same way as straight couples, the church would like the ceremony to be called something else because "the word wedding is so traditional and is reserved for men and women."
Revised:  Even though couples would be wed in the same way as straight couples, the church would like the ceremony to be called something else because "the word wedding is so traditional and is reserved for men and women."
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-0 (Sibanda, 0.2 ov), 2-12 (Chibhabha, 4.6 ov), 3-14 (Kasteni, 5.3 ov)  Pakistan: Imran Nazir, Shahid Afridi, Younis Khan, Mohammad Yousuf, Inzamam-ul-Haq (capt), Shoaib Malik, Kamran Akmal (wkt), Mohammad Sami, Iftikhar Anjum, Umar Gul, Danish Kaneria Zimbabwe: V Sibanda, F Kasteni, C J Chibhabha, S Matsikenyeri, B R M Taylor (wkt), S C Williams, E Chigumbura, P Utseya (capt), G B Brent, C B Mpofu, T Mupariwa 
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-0 (Sibanda, 0.2 ov), 2-12 (Chibhabha, 4.6 ov), 3-14 (Kasteni, 5.3 ov) Pakistan: Imran Nazir, Shahid Afridi, Younis Khan, Mohammad Yousuf, Inzamam-ul-Haq (capt), Shoaib Malik, Kamran Akmal (wkt), Mohammad Sami, Iftikhar Anjum, Umar Gul, Danish Kaneria Zimbabwe: V Sibanda, F Kasteni, C J Chibhabha, S Matsikenyeri, B R M Taylor (wkt), S C Williams, E Chigumbura, P Utseya (capt), G B Brent, C B Mpofu, T Mupariwa Player of the match: Imran Nazir (Pakistan)
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Original:  He also said that he has been playing the lottery ever since he moved to get his family back home .
Revised:  Paramanatha said that he has been playing the lottery ever since he moved to get his family back home .
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Original:  Once his wife and two sons, aged 7 and 10, move they will buy a house together.
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Original: Rick DiPietro stopped 35 of 36 shots as the New York Islanders defeated the Pittsburgh Penguins 3-1 Thursday night, snapping a three game losing streak and DiPietro's career high 31st win of the season.
Revised: Rick DiPietro stopped 35 of 36 shots as the New York Islandersdefeated the Pittsburgh Penguins 3-1 Thursday night, snapping a three game losing streak and DiPietro's career high 31st win of the season.
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Original: Rick DiPietro stopped 35 of 36 shots as the New York Islandersdefeated the Pittsburgh Penguins 3-1 Thursday night, snapping a three game losing streak and DiPietro's career high 31st win of the season.
Revised: Rick DiPietro stopped 35 of 36 shots as the New York Islanders defeated the Pittsburgh Penguins 3-1 Thursday night, snapping a three game losing streak and DiPietro's career high 31st win of the season.
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Original: In late December 2006, the woman had told friends of felling unwell with flu-like symptoms, and had experienced hair-loss and blurred vision.
Revised: In late December 2006, the woman had told friends of feeling unwell with flu-like symptoms, and had experienced hair-loss and blurred vision.
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Original: The accident occurred at 4:20 a.m., March 21, on board the Tireless, a Trafalgar Class submarine, during a joint US-UK exercise in the Arctic.
Revised: The accident occurred at 4:20 a.m., March 21, on board HMS Tireless, a Trafalgar Class submarine, during a joint US-UK exercise in the Arctic.
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Original: The accident occurred at 4:20 a.m., March 21, on board the Tireless, a Trafalgar Class submarine, during a joint US-UK exercise in the Arctic.
Revised: The accident occurred at 4:20 a.m., March 21, on board the Tireless, a Trafalgar class submarine, during a joint US-UK exercise in the Arctic.
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Original:  The Tireless was submerged under the ice cap at the time of the incident.
Revised:  HMS Tireless was submerged under the ice cap at the time of the incident.
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Original: 150px One duo queuing for the registration were two undercover reporters from the Dutch television, who wanted to become  the two first heterosexual men to be wed by a black registrar in Belgium  .
Revised: 150px One duo queuing for the registration were two undercover reporters from the Dutch television, who wanted to become " the two first heterosexual men to be wed by a black registrar in Belgium .
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Original: 150px One duo queuing for the registration were two undercover reporters from the Dutch television, who wanted to become  the two first heterosexual men to be wed by a black registrar in Belgium  .
Revised: 150px One duo queuing for the registration were two undercover reporters from the Dutch television, who wanted to become the two first heterosexual men to be wed by a black registrar in Belgium " .
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Original:  The apotheose came when Van Bellingen held a final speech on the stage, and then started with the symbolic wedding ceremony.
Revised:  The culmination of the event came when Van Bellingen held a final speech on the stage, and then started with the symbolic wedding ceremony.
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Original: Mayor Willockx told the press about when he first heard about the 3 couples: "I was angry and ashamed that there were such people  ." He elaborated: "We are not a racist city.
Revised: Mayor Will-cocks told the press about when he first heard about the 3 couples: "I was angry and ashamed that there were such people ." He elaborated: "We are not a racist city.
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Original: Mayor Willockx told the press about when he first heard about the 3 couples: "I was angry and ashamed that there were such people  ." He elaborated: "We are not a racist city.
Revised: Mayor Willockx told the press about when he first heard about the 3 couples: "I was angry and ashamed that there were such people ." He elaborated: "We are a racist city.
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Original: The ceremony was planned for at about 8 p.m., but was postponed to allow as many as possible of the couples that turned up to register.
Revised: The ceremony was planned for about 8 p.m., but was postponed to allow as many as possible of the couples that turned up to register.
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Original:  Afghan sources called the swap "an exceptional case."
Revised:  Afghani government sources called the swap "an exceptional case."
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Original:  The move received sharp criticism from both the  US and UK     .
Revised:  The move received sharp criticism from both the the US and UK .
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Original:  The move received sharp criticism from both the  US and UK     .
Revised:  The move received sharp criticism from both the US and UK . .
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Original:  This likely represents the first time during the Iraq War or War in Afghanistan that prisoners were  exchanged for a hostage.
Revised:  This likely represents the first time during the Iraq War or War in Afghanistan that prisoners were openly exchanged for a hostage.
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Original:  Afghani government sources called the swap " an exceptional case ." The move received sharp criticism from allies of Italy.
Revised:  An Afghani government source called the swap " an exceptional case ." The move received sharp criticism from allies of Italy.
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Original: Image:Afghanistan-Helmand.png|Location of Helmand Province within Afganistan where Daniele Mastrogiacomo was taken hostage.
Revised: Image:Afghanistan-Helmand.png|Location of Helmand Province within Afghanistan where Daniele Mastrogiacomo was taken hostage.
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Original:  A spokesperson at the British Foreign Office said the deal sent "the wrong signal to prospective hostage-takers".
Revised:  A spokesperson at the said the deal sent "the wrong signal to prospective hostage-takers".
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Original:  Maxime Verhagen, Foreign Minister of the Netherlands spoke against the swap, "When we create situations where you can buy the freedom of Taliban fighters when you catch a journalist, in the short term there will be no journalists anymore."
Revised:  , spoke against the swap, "When we create situations where you can buy the freedom of Taliban fighters when you catch a journalist, in the short term there will be no journalists anymore."
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Original:  The international backlash is the latest headache for Italian Prime Minister Romano Prodi , who has fought hard to keep troops in Afghanistan despite resistance from pacifists within his centre-left coalition.
Revised:  The international backlash is the latest headache for Italian Prime Minister , who has fought hard to keep troops in Afghanistan despite resistance from pacifists within his centre-left coalition.
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Original:  The international backlash is the latest headache for Italian Prime Minister Romano Prodi , who has fought hard to keep troops in Afghanistan despite resistance from pacifists within his centre-left coalition.
Revised:  The international backlash is the latest headache for Italian Prime Minister Romano Prodi , who has fought hard to keep troops in Afghanistan despite resistance from within his centre-left coalition.
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Original:  Prodi briefly resigned last month after a defeat in the Senate over his foreign policy, including Afghanistan, and needs the Senate next week to approve a refinancing of the mission.
Revised:  Prodi briefly resigned last month after a defeat in the over his foreign policy, including Afghanistan, and needs the Senate next week to approve a refinancing of the mission.
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Original:  An opinion poll published by Mastrogiacomo's newspaper, La Repubblica , showed that 51 percent of Italians surveyed supported the exchange, while 41 percent opposed it.
Revised:  An opinion poll published by Mastrogiacomo's newspaper, , showed that 51 percent of Italians surveyed supported the exchange, while 41 percent opposed it.
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Original: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is nearly 6 kilometers wide, buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to  be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
Revised: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is nearly 6 kilometers wide, buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
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Original: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is nearly 6 kilometers  wide, buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
Revised: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is nearly 6 kilometers ) wide, buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
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Original:  "Analyses of a 3-D seismic survey and well logs in the southwestern Sacramento basin, San Joaquin County, California, have revealed a subsurface, circular,  ~5.5 -km-diameter anomaly that may represent a previously unrecognized complex impact crater.
Revised:  "Analyses of a 3-D seismic survey and well logs in the southwestern Sacramento basin, San Joaquin County, California, have revealed a subsurface, circular, ~5.5 -km-) diameter anomaly that may represent a previously unrecognized complex impact crater.
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Original:  This unique anomaly, buried  1,490–1,600 m  below sea level under the southwestern part of the Sacramento-San Joaquin Delta, is provisionally named the Victoria Island structure for an overlying surface geographic feature," J. R. Morrow of San Diego State University during the 38th Lunar and Planetary Science Conference, held in Houston, Texas.
Revised:  This unique anomaly, buried 1,490–1,600 m ) below sea level under the southwestern part of the Sacramento-San Joaquin Delta, is provisionally named the Victoria Island structure for an overlying surface geographic feature," J. R. Morrow of San Diego State University during the 38th Lunar and Planetary Science Conference, held in Houston, Texas.
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Original: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is about 3 miles (6 kilometers) wide , buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
Revised: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is about 3 miles (6 kilometers) wide and is now buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
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Original: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is about 3 miles (6 kilometers) wide , buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet and may even still contain the asteroid which is said to still be inside the crater nearly 10 miles below the Earth's surface.
Revised: Images from a seismic survey has shown the crater is about 3 miles (6 kilometers) wide , buried under sediment at nearly 4,300 feet below the Earth's surface.
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Original:  The element known as iridium is also expected to be found in elevated levels.
Revised:  The element known as iridium may also be found in elevated levels.
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Original:  The "Cowell structure" which is said to be 0.8 miles wide , is said to be nearly 25 million years old.
Revised:  The "Cowell structure" is said to be 0.8 miles wide , is said to be nearly 25 million years old.
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Original:  The "Cowell structure" which is said to be 0.8 miles wide , is said to be nearly 25 million years old.
Revised:  The "Cowell structure" which is said to be 0.8 miles wide and nearly 25 million years old.
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Original:  Researchers now call the crater  " The Victoria Island Structure ." The impact would have been as strong as 75,000 nuclear bombs all going off at once
Revised:  Researchers now call the crater the " The Victoria Island Structure ." The impact would have been as strong as 75,000 nuclear bombs all going off at once
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Original:  Researchers now call the crater  " The Victoria Island Structure ." The impact would have been as strong as 75,000 nuclear bombs all going off at once
Revised:  Researchers now call the crater " Victoria Island structure ." The impact would have been as strong as 75,000 nuclear bombs all going off at once
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Original:  The Sirius colided with the Ocean Dreaming, a 34-metre whale watching ship which was moored at the nearby Aquarium warf.
Revised:  The Sirius collided with the Ocean Dreaming, a 34-metre whale watching ship which was moored at the nearby Aquarium warf.
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Original: The report analyzes ten rivers from Asia: the Yangtze, the Ganes , and the Salween;
Revised: The report analyzes ten rivers from Asia: the Yangtze, the Ganges , and the Salween;
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Original:  and South America: Rio Grande.
Revised:  and North America: Rio Grande.
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Original:  An environment group , entitled WWF , made a study focused on ten rivers that are currently at risk of drying up .
Revised:  An environment group , entitled WWF , made a study focused on ten rivers that are currently at risk of drying up ,
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Original:  The report analyzes ten rivers from Asia: the Yangtze, the Ganges , and the Salween ;
Revised:  The report analyzes ten rivers , including the the Yangtze, the Ganges , and the Salween ;
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Original:  The report analyzes ten rivers from Asia: the Yangtze, the Ganges , and the Salween ;
Revised:  The report analyzes ten rivers from Asia: the Yangtze, the Ganges and the Salween ;
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Original:  The main one concerns the  dams and dykes that, according to WWF, destroyed 80 percent of river basin's wetlands and floodplains.
Revised:  The main one concerns the dams and dykes , which the report says destroy 80 percent of river basin's wetlands and floodplains.
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Original:  Another problem is the extraction of water meant for agriculture.
Revised:  Another problem is the extraction of water for agriculture.
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Original:  The environment group states that active extraction of water, like the one found in India's Indus , takes its toll on our planet's rivers.
Revised:  The environment group states that active extraction of water, such as in the Indus river , takes its toll on our planet's rivers.
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Original:  Thus water over-extraction might lead to its scarcity and have a serious negative impact on freshwater fish populations, which represents an important food source.
Revised:  Over-extraction might lead to its scarcity and have a serious negative impact on freshwater fish populations, which represents an important food source.
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Original:  The report states that governments should ensure better protection of rivers .
Revised:  The report says governments should ensure better protection of rivers .
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Original:  In addition governments should provide more sustainable water use, in such a way protecting people's livelihoods  .
Revised:  In addition governments should provide more sustainable water use, in such a way that people's livelihoods .
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Original:  In addition governments should provide more sustainable water use, in such a way protecting people's livelihoods  .
Revised:  In addition governments should provide more sustainable water use, in such a way protecting people's livelihoods are protected .
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Original:  The report analyzes ten rivers, including the the Yangtze, the Ganges and the Salween in Asia;
Revised:  The report analyzes ten rivers, including the Yangtze, the Ganges and the Salween in Asia;
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Original:  Following a study of ten rivers currently at risk of drying up, The group warns that without any action the process of drying up might lead to freshwater emergency.
Revised:  Following a study of ten rivers currently at risk of drying up, the group warns that without any action the process of drying up might lead to freshwater emergency.
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Original:  This match saw , Brendon McCullum of New Zealand hit the fastest  Cricket World Cup half century off just 20 balls.
Revised:  This match saw Brendon McCullum of New Zealand hit the fastest Cricket World Cup half century off just 20 balls.
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Original:  Fall of wickets: 1-76 (Davison, 9.4 ov), 2-110 (Barnett, 20.4 ov), 3-188 (Bagai, 34.6 ov), 4-201 (Billcliff, 37.5 ov), 5-206 (Mulla, 38.6 ov), 6-207 (Samad, 39.2 ov)  New Zealand: S P Fleming (capt), L Vincent, S B Styris, P G Fulton, J D P Oram, C D McMillan, B B McCullum (wkt), D L Vettori, D R Tuffey, J S Patel, M J Mason Canada: J M Davison (capt), G E F Barnett, A Bagai (wkt), I S Billcliff, A M Samad, A A Mulla, S Dhaniram, U Bhatti, A C Cummins, H Osinde, K T Sandher 
Revised:  Fall of wickets: 1-76 (Davison, 9.4 ov), 2-110 (Barnett, 20.4 ov), 3-188 (Bagai, 34.6 ov), 4-201 (Billcliff, 37.5 ov), 5-206 (Mulla, 38.6 ov), 6-207 (Samad, 39.2 ov) New Zealand: S P Fleming (capt), L Vincent, S B Styris, P G Fulton, J D P Oram, C D McMillan, B B McCullum (wkt), D L Vettori, D R Tuffey, J S Patel, M J Mason Canada: J M Davison (capt), G E F Barnett, A Bagai (wkt), I S Billcliff, A M Samad, A A Mulla, S Dhaniram, U Bhatti, A C Cummins, H Osinde, K T Sandher Player of the match: L Vincent (New Zealand)
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Original:  Canada scored the highest score the nation has  scored in the World Cup, thanks in part to the marvelous batting by John Davison and Ian Billcliff.
Revised:  Canada achieved the highest total the nation has scored in the World Cup, thanks in part to the marvelous batting by John Davison and Ian Billcliff.
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Original:  Canada scored the highest score the nation has  scored in the World Cup, thanks in part to the marvelous batting by John Davison and Ian Billcliff.
Revised:  Canada scored the highest score the nation has ever scored in the World Cup, thanks in part to the marvelous batting by John Davison and Ian Billcliff.
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Original:  If Canada had reached 263, it would have been the second time in the West Indies that a combined score equal 600 or more runs in  one day international.
Revised:  If Canada had reached 263, it would have been the second time in the West Indies that a combined score equal 600 or more runs in a one day international.
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Original: Several different departments at universities throughout the United States have recently adopted policies prohibiting Wikipedia, the free online encyclopedia, from being used as a primary source in reports.
Revised: Many professors at universities throughout the United States have recently adopted policies prohibiting Wikipedia, the free online encyclopedia, from being used as a primary source in reports.
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Original:  Several universities have adopted policies banning the use of Wikipedia as a primary source, while allowing it to be used for background information.
Revised:  Walters' department adopted a policy banning the use of Wikipedia as a primary source, while allowing it to be used for background information.
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Original:  Middlebury, UCLA, and the University of Pennsylvania  have taken up this policy.
Revised:  Middlebury, UCLA, and the University of Pennsylvania , have taken up this policy.
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Original: Senior Judge Lowell Reed Jr. of Pennsylvania's federal court issued a permanent injunction on Thursday against a U.S. law passed in 1998 that says it is a crime for underage children to view online pornography , saying that all pornography on the internet would have to be "acceptable"
Revised: Senior Judge Lowell Reed Jr. of the U. S. District Court for the Eastern District of Pennsylvania issued a permanent injunction on Thursday against a U.S. law passed in 1998 that says it is a crime for underage children to view online pornography , saying that all pornography on the internet would have to be "acceptable"
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Original:  to childrenunder the age of 6.  " Despite my personal regret at having to set aside yet another attempt to protect our children from harmful material , All  Internet would have had to be brought down to a level that is acceptable to a 6-year-old and that would have had a devastating effect on the kind of interactions that take place on the Internet.
Revised:  to childrenunder the age of 6. Reed expressed " Despite my personal regret at having to set aside yet another attempt to protect our children from harmful material , All Internet would have had to be brought down to a level that is acceptable to a 6-year-old and that would have had a devastating effect on the kind of interactions that take place on the Internet.
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Original:  to childrenunder the age of 6.  " Despite my personal regret at having to set aside yet another attempt to protect our children from harmful material , All  Internet would have had to be brought down to a level that is acceptable to a 6-year-old and that would have had a devastating effect on the kind of interactions that take place on the Internet.
Revised:  to childrenunder the age of 6. " personal regret at having to set aside yet another attempt to protect our children from harmful material , All Internet would have had to be brought down to a level that is acceptable to a 6-year-old and that would have had a devastating effect on the kind of interactions that take place on the Internet.
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Original:  Even defendant's own study shows that all but the worst performing (software) filters are far more effective than COPA would be at protecting children from sexually explicit material on the Web, " said Reed in his ruling.
Revised:  " said Reed in his ruling.
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