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Original:  Mark Webber drived his Red Bull-Renault to the third place.
Revised:  Mark Webber drove his Red Bull-Renault to the third place.
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Original:  Both BMW Sauber's 6th and 7th.
Revised:  The two BMW Saubers ended 6th and 7th.
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Original:  And the top eight  closed by Heikki Kovalainen from Renault.
Revised:  And the top eight was closed by Heikki Kovalainen from Renault.
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Original: The start went smoothly enough but sudden heavy rain broke out after the first lap.
Revised: Although the race started without incident, sudden heavy rain broke out after the first lap.
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Original:  By the fifth lap, race officials were forced to red-flag the race, bringing it to a complete stpp until the rain cleared up, and drivers once again gathered on the starting grid.
Revised:  By the fifth lap, race officials were forced to red-flag the race, bringing it to a complete stop until the rain cleared up, and drivers once again gathered on the starting grid.
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Original:  Still , he was lucky not to damage his car again and was put back on the track by a crane .
Revised:  However , he was lucky not to damage his car again and was put back on the track by a crane .
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Original:  Still , he was lucky not to damage his car again and was put back on the track by a crane .
Revised:  Still , he was lucky not to damage his car again and was lifted back on the track by a crane .
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Original:  Rain stopped as suddenly as it started and the safety car left the track after allowing Lewis Hamilton to catch up with the other drivers, because he stayed in the gravel trap for more than a lap.
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Original:  Felipe Massa headed the race pursuited by Fernando Alonso.
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Original:  And the top eight was closed by Heikki Kovalainen from Renault   .
Revised:  And the top eight was closed by Heikki Kovalainen from Renault . .
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Original:  Two laps of constant overtaking attempts led Alonso to the victory, the aggressive attack style chosen by Spaniard caused a slight contact between their cars.
Revised:  After two laps of constant overtaking attempts led Alonso to the victory, the aggressive attack style chosen by Spaniard caused a slight contact between their cars.
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Original:  Kimi Raikkonen was close after Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he have to park it alongside the track.
Revised:  Kimi Raikkonen had been close after Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he have to park it alongside the track.
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Original:  Kimi Raikkonen was close after Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he have to park it alongside the track.
Revised:  Kimi Raikkonen was close after Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he had to park it alongside the track.
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Original:  Last wet race held was 2006 Hungarian Grand Prix
Revised:  This was the first wet race since the 2006 Hungarian Grand Prix
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Original:  By being the only driver not to pit for wet weather tyres Marcus Winkelhock, a rookie Spyker-Ferrari driver on his first ever Formula One race,  rose to become race leader despite having started the race in last position.
Revised:  Having opted to start the race from the pits on wet weather tyres Marcus Winkelhock, a rookie Spyker-Ferrari driver on his first ever Formula One race, rose to become race leader despite having started the race in last position.
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Original:  By being the only driver not to pit for wet weather tyres Marcus Winkelhock, a rookie Spyker-Ferrari driver on his first ever Formula One race,  rose to become race leader despite having started the race in last position.
Revised:  By being the only driver not to pit for wet weather tyres Marcus Winkelhock, a rookie Spyker-Ferrari driver on his first ever Formula One race, quickly rose to become race leader despite having started the race in last position.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session , got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car . His start was perfect - he gained 6 places, but was one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session and started 10th on his repaired car . His start was perfect - he gained 6 places, but was one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session , got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car . His start was perfect - he gained 6 places, but was one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session , got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car , had a perfect start, gaining six places, but was one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
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Original:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session , got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car . His start was perfect - he gained 6 places, but was one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
Revised:  Lewis Hamilton, who had suffered a crash in the third qualifying session , got clearance for this race and started 10th on his repaired car . His start was perfect - he gained 6 places, but made contact with one of the drivers who left the track in the heavy rain conditions.
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Original:  However, he was lucky not to damage his car again and was lifted back on the track  by a crane, and was allowed to join the restarting grid in last place, but a lap down on all the other drivers.
Revised:  However, he was lucky not to damage his car again and was lifted back on the track by a crane, Hamilton was allowed to join the restarting grid in last place, but a lap down on all the other drivers.
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Original:  However, he was lucky not to damage his car again and was lifted back on the track  by a crane, and was allowed to join the restarting grid in last place, but a lap down on all the other drivers.
Revised:  However, he was lucky not to damage his car again and was lifted back on the track by a crane, and was allowed to rejoin the restarting grid in last place, but a lap down on all the other drivers.
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Original:  For much of the middle section  of the race he was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch up.
Revised:  For much of the middle section For most of the race he was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch up.
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Original:  For much of the middle section  of the race he was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch up.
Revised:  For much of the middle section of the race he was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch 
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Original:  For most of the race Felipe Massa led, pursued by Fernando Alonso .
Revised:  the back of the pack .
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Original:  However Kimi Räikkönen, who had started in pole position and was leading the race, skidded across the pit-lane entrance and back out onto the track, forcing him to drive take another lap in increasingly wet conditions.
Revised:  However Kimi Räikkönen, who had started in pole position and was leading the race, skidded across the pit-lane entrance and back out onto the track, forcing him to drive another lap in increasingly wet conditions.
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Original:  Despite needing to have his car lifted out of the gravel trap by a crane, Hamilton  was allowed to rejoin the restarting grid in last place, but a lap down on all the other drivers.
Revised:  Despite needing to have his car lifted out of the gravel trap by a crane, Hamilton was allowed to rejoin the restarting grid in last place, albeit a lap down on all the other drivers.
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Original: Within several laps the track quickly became flooded, and on lap three Jenson Button, Adrian Sutil, Lewis Hamilton,  Nico Rosberg, Scott Speed, Anthony Davidson, and Antonio Liuzzi all aquaplaned off into the gravel trap at the same place - Liuzzi making contact with the tractor attempting to recover the other cars.
Revised: Within several laps the track quickly became flooded, and on lap three Jenson Button, Lewis Hamilton, Nico Rosberg, Scott Speed, Anthony Davidson, and Antonio Liuzzi all aquaplaned off into the gravel trap at the same place - Liuzzi making contact with the tractor attempting to recover the other cars.
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Original: Within several laps the track quickly became flooded, and on lap three Jenson Button, Adrian Sutil, Lewis Hamilton,  Nico Rosberg, Scott Speed, Anthony Davidson, and Antonio Liuzzi all aquaplaned off into the gravel trap at the same place - Liuzzi making contact with the tractor attempting to recover the other cars.
Revised: Within several laps the track quickly became flooded, and on lap three Jenson Button, Adrian Sutil, Lewis Hamilton, Adrian Sutil, Nico Rosberg, Scott Speed, Anthony Davidson, and Antonio Liuzzi all aquaplaned off into the gravel trap at the same place - Liuzzi making contact with the tractor attempting to recover the other cars.
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Original:  Hamilton was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch the back of the pack.
Revised:  Hamilton was the fastest driver on the track, but even at three seconds a lap faster than the other back-markers it took him a long time to catch the pack.
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Original:  Several laps later, there was a rush into the pits, with nobody wanted additional risks on the wet track.
Revised:  Several laps later, there was a rush into the pits, with nobody wanting additional risks on the wet track.
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Original:  Kimi Raikkonen had been close after Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he had to park it alongside the track.
Revised:  Kimi Raikkonen had been close behind Alonso, but his car suffered a breakdown and he had to park it alongside the track.
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Original:  This will become the  Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Steve's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
Revised:  This will become the The Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Steve's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
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Original:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a barb from a large stingray while divin 
Revised:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while diving 
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard said the park was an important addition to Australia's national reserve system, and a fitting tribute to a passionate environmentalist and a great Australian  The Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve will be a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Steve 's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard said the park was an important addition to Australia's national reserve system, and a fitting tribute to a passionate environmentalist and a great Australian . The Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve will be a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Steve 's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
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Original:  Prime Minister John Howard said the park was an important addition to Australia's national reserve system, and a fitting tribute to a passionate environmentalist and a great Australian  The Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve will be a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Steve 's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
Revised:  Prime Minister John Howard said the park was an important addition to Australia's national reserve system, and a fitting tribute to a passionate environmentalist and a great Australian The Steve Irwin Wildlife Reserve will be a memorial managed by the Irwin family trust for environmental purposes to fulfill Irwin 's vision to conserve and protect Australia's special environments by acquiring it and preserving it forever.
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Original:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while divin
Revised:  Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while divin
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Original:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while divin
Revised:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast . He was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while divin
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Original:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while divin
Revised:  In September 2006 Steve Irwin died while filming a underwater documentary off Australia's north coast he was stabbed in the chest by a stingray barb while diving
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Original:  Aitchison, who originally resided in on the island of , moved up to Stornoway in Lewis and began working as a fisherman alongside MacKinnon and Millar after developing a social relationship with them.
Revised: Liam Aitchison, who originally resided in on the island of , moved up to Stornoway in Lewis and began working as a fisherman alongside MacKinnon and Millar after developing a social relationship with them.
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Original:  Mr Aitchison and Millar went to MacKinnon's home on November 22, 2011, where they sat drinking and listening to music.
Revised:  The court was told of how Aitchison and Millar went to MacKinnon's home on November 22, 2011, where they sat drinking and listening to music.
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Original:  Mr Aitchison and Millar went to MacKinnon's home on November 22, 2011, where they sat drinking and listening to music.
Revised:  Mr Aitchison and Millar were listening to music and drinking alongside MacKinnon in his residence on November 22, 2011, where they sat drinking and listening to music.
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Original:  MacKinnon punched Liam at one point as "a joke" .
Revised:  MacKinnon punched Liam at one point as "a joke" 
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Original:  Soon after, MacKinnon lashed out at Mr Aitchison after a bottle of his Paco Rabanne One Million aftershave fell out of the teenager's pocket.
Revised:  Soon after, MacKinnon lashed out at Mr Aitchison after a bottle of 
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Original:  The Conservative 's shadow Environment Secretary criticised a 'lack of clarity' in the command of cleanup operations, and MP John Redwood has asked why the army was not mobilised in support.
Revised:  The Conservative shadow Environment Secretary criticised a 'lack of clarity' in the command of cleanup operations, and MP John Redwood has asked why the army was not mobilised in support.
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Original:  The Conservative 's shadow Environment Secretary criticised a 'lack of clarity' in the command of cleanup operations, and MP John Redwood has asked why the army was not mobilised in support.
Revised:  The Conservative 's shadow Environment Secretary criticised a 'lack of clarity' in the command of clean up operations, and MP John Redwood has asked why the army was not mobilised in support.
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Original:  Related News Heavy rain causes flooding across the UK, Wikinews, July 20, 2007.
Revised:  Related Heavy rain causes flooding across the UK, Wikinews, July 20, 2007.
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Original: 180px Politicians in the UK have started calling for action after months of heavy rainfall have left parts of Britain in crisis from flooding and electricity and water shortages.
Revised: 180px Politicians in the United Kingdom have started calling for action after months of heavy rainfall have left parts of Britain in crisis from flooding and electricity and water shortages.
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Original:  Lib Dem leader Menzies Campbell suggested that the flood risk was known about before it happened, and questioned the degree of preparedness in place.
Revised:  Liberal Democrat leader Menzies Campbell suggested that the flood risk was known about before it happened, and questioned the degree of preparedness in place.
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Original:  However, Garica bogyed on the same hole leading to a playoff.
Revised:  However, Garica bogeyed on the same hole leading to a playoff.
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Original:  The event - entitled Winter Whackdown - featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
Revised:  The event , entitled Winter Whackdown - featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
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Original:  The event - entitled Winter Whackdown - featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
Revised:  The event - entitled Winter Whackdown , featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
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Original:  The event, entitled Winter Whackdown, featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
Revised:  The event, entitled Winter Whackdown, featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
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Original:  The event, entitled Winter Whackdown, featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers.
Revised:  The event, entitled Winter Whackdown, featured the hosting association — the Coastal Assassins Roller Derby (CARD) — fielding two teams, the Toowoomba Range Renegades and the City Rollers Punk Blockers.
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Original: The opening bout between the CARD Ace Invaders and the Toowoomba Range Renegades started at 5:15pm local time (0700 UTC ).
Revised: The opening bout between the CARD Ace Invaders and the Toowoomba Range Renegades started at 5:15pm (0715 ).
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Original: , — Wikinews attended a event at the Caloundra Indoor Stadium on Australia's this past Saturday.
Revised: , — Wikinews attended a event at the Caloundra Indoor Stadium on Australia's on Saturday.
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Original: The opening bout between the CARD Ace Invaders and the Toowoomba Range Renegades started at 5:15pm (0715 ).
Revised: The opening bout between the CARD Ace Invaders and the Toowoomba Range Renegades started around 5:15pm (0715 ).
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Original:  The second bout between the CARD Blood Diamonds and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers started at 7:30pm (0930 UTC).
Revised:  The second bout between the CARD Blood Diamonds and the Brisbane City Rollers Punk Blockers started around 7:30pm (0930 UTC).
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Original:  "The Nuclear and Industrial Safety Agency under the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry has told the IAEA that it will accept the inspection of the Kashiwazaki-Kariwa nuclear plant of Tokyo Electric Power Co.," said unnamed Japanese officials according to Reuters though inspectors are not immediately requested  
Revised:  "The Nuclear and Industrial Safety Agency under the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry has told the IAEA that it will accept the inspection of the Kashiwazaki-Kariwa nuclear plant of Tokyo Electric Power Co.," said unnamed Japanese officials according to Reuters though inspectors are not immediately requested . 
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Original:  "The Nuclear and Industrial Safety Agency under the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry has told the IAEA that it will accept the inspection of the Kashiwazaki-Kariwa nuclear plant of Tokyo Electric Power Co.," said unnamed Japanese officials according to Reuters though inspectors are not immediately requested  
Revised:  "The Nuclear and Industrial Safety Agency under the Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry has told the IAEA that it will accept the inspection of the Kashiwazaki-Kariwa nuclear plant of Tokyo Electric Power Co.," said unnamed Japanese officials according to Reuters though inspectors are not immediately requested Related new
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Original:  Most national ratification is expected to take place without referenda, to avoid a repeat of the no votes that stopped the European Constitution  
Revised:  Most national ratification is expected to take place without referenda, to avoid a repeat of the no votes that stopped the European Constitution . 
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Original: European Union foreign ministers today opened an Intergovernmental Conference  beginning work on on a new treaty for the 27-member bloc.
Revised: European Union foreign ministers today opened an Intergovernmental Conference (IGC) beginning work on on a new treaty for the 27-member bloc.
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Original:  Judge Lady Scott warned Kearins: "If you keep drinking you will have no future and will continue to offend." Judge Lady Scott also sentenced Kearins to being monitored for four months after his release from prison.
Revised:  Judge Lady Scott warned Kearins: "If you keep drinking you will have no future and will continue to offend." 
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Original:  As well as the eight year prison imprisonment, judge Lady Scott also sentenced Kearins to being monitored for four months after his release from prison as she considered him a public threat.
Revised:  As well as the eight year prison imprisonment, judge Lady Scott also sentenced Kearins to a four month supervision order after his release from prison as she considered him a public threat.
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Original: A judge at the in Glasgow, Scotland has sentenced Joseph Kearins to eight years in prison after he pled guilty to .
Revised: A judge at the in Glasgow, Scotland yesterday sentenced Joseph Kearins to eight years in prison after he pled guilty to .
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Original:  The two extend their lead on  the rest of the contenders by nearly a minute .
Revised:  The two extend their lead on the rest of the contenders .
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Original:  21 " General classification after stage 15 Michael Rasmussen (Den)
Revised:  21 General classification after stage 15 Michael Rasmussen (Den)
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