wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The data collected from all the coblation tonsillectomy operations showed that the healing of the tonsillar fossa is much faster when this low temperature technology is used instead of a heat based technology, such as electrocautery tonsillectomy.
Revised:  Data collected from coblation tonsillectomy operations showed that the healing of the tonsillar fossa is much faster when this low temperature technology is used instead of a heat based technology, such as electrocautery tonsillectomy.
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Original:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
Revised:  Since coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
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Original:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
Revised:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
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Original:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
Revised:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations have been performed, but as of 2019, research is still ongoing to determine the positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
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Original:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effect are known of this new procedure.
Revised:  Since Coblation has been introduced to the medical field, there has been more than 10 million surgical operations performed with great success, however there is multiple researches are still ongoing in the present day, since not all positive and negative effects of this procedure.
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Original:  Components The equipment used for Coblation Tonsillectomy consists of a radio frequency (RF) generator, foot pedal control, irrigation system, and a tonsil wand.
Revised:  Components The equipment used for coblation tonsillectomy consists of a radio frequency (RF) generator, foot pedal control, irrigation system, and a tonsil wand.
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Original:  The generator provides radio frequency, which is essential for the procedure, as well as it connects the foot pedal system to the tonsil wand.
Revised:  The generator provides radio frequency, which is essential for the procedure, and connects the foot pedal system to the tonsil wand.
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Original:  There are foot pedals with different colours in order to prevent mixing them up, one is yellow and is used for controlling the coblation, while the other one is blue and used for controlling the radio frequency cautery.
Revised:  The foot pedals are colour coded to prevent confusion: one is yellow and is used for controlling the coblation, while the other one is blue and used for controlling the radio frequency cautery.
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Original:  There are foot pedals with different colours in order to prevent mixing them up, one is yellow and is used for controlling the coblation, while the other one is blue and used for controlling the radio frequency cautery.
Revised:  There are foot pedals with different colours in order to prevent mixing them up, one is yellow and is used for controlling the coblation, while the other is blue and used for controlling the radio frequency cautery.
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Original:  The wand is connected to the RF generator to be able to control it with the pedals.
Revised:  The wand is connected to the RF generator so it can be controlled with the pedals.
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Original:  It consists of a base electrode and an active electrode, which have ceramic and flowing saline between them.
Revised:  The wand consists of a base electrode and an active electrode, which have ceramic and flowing saline between them.
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Original:  The radio frequency current that is produced by the generator travels through the saline, hence the current breaks the molecular bonds in saline and forms ions, which create a plasma field around the electrodes,  used for removing soft tissue.
Revised:  The radio frequency current that is produced by the generator travels through the saline, breaking the molecular bonds and forming ions. This creates a plasma field around the electrodes, used for removing soft tissue.
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Original:  The radio frequency current that is produced by the generator travels through the saline, hence the current breaks the molecular bonds in saline and forms ions, which create a plasma field around the electrodes,  used for removing soft tissue.
Revised:  The radio frequency current that is produced by the generator travels through the saline, hence the current breaks the molecular bonds in saline and forms ions, which create a plasma field around the electrodes, which is used for removing soft tissue.
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Original:  There should not be any smoke produced while the coblation wand is being used during the operation , but if there is then it sign that ablated tissue has gotten into the coblation wand’s electrode area.
Revised:  There should not be any smoke produced while the coblation wand is being used during the operation ; if this occurs, it is a sign that ablated tissue has gotten into the coblation wand’s electrode area.
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Original:  There should not be any smoke produced while the coblation wand is being used during the operation , but if there is then it sign that ablated tissue has gotten into the coblation wand’s electrode area.
Revised:  There should not be any smoke produced while the coblation wand is being used during the operation , but if there is then it sign that ablated tissue has entered the coblation wand’s electrode area.
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Original:  This means that the current is not able to break down the saline into ions properly, so smoke produces .
Revised:  This means that the current is not able to break down the saline into ions properly, so smoke is produced .
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Original:  When this happens, the coblation wands needs to be cleaned out before using it again.
Revised:  When this happens, the coblation wand needs to be cleaned out before using it again.
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Original:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has  about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
Revised:  Plasma field The plasma field has about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
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Original:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has  about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
Revised:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has a radius of about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
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Original:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has  about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
Revised:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has about 100μm-200μm around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
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Original:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has  about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head part of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
Revised:  Plasma field in Coblation wand The produced plasma field has about 100μm-200μm radius around the electrodes and is kept stable within the head of the coblation wand by the continuous supply of saline.
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Original:  Furthermore, the plasma field is kept controlled the bipolar energy between the negative and positive ions that are produced by the plasma in order to use  precise amount of plasma to prevent damaging healthy tissues around the tonsils.
Revised:  Furthermore, the plasma field is controlled by the bipolar energy between the negative and positive ions that are produced by the plasma in order to use precise amount of plasma to prevent damaging healthy tissues around the tonsils.
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Original:  Furthermore, the plasma field is kept controlled the bipolar energy between the negative and positive ions that are produced by the plasma in order to use  precise amount of plasma to prevent damaging healthy tissues around the tonsils.
Revised:  Furthermore, the plasma field is kept controlled the bipolar energy between the negative and positive ions that are produced by the plasma in order to use a precise amount of plasma to prevent damaging healthy tissues around the tonsils.
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Original:  Plasma does not have a thermal effect on tissue , it only affects it on a chemical level.
Revised:  Plasma does not have a thermal effect on tissue : it only affects it on a chemical level.
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Original:  The generated plasma field produces positively charged hydrogen ions (H+) and negatively charged hydroxide ions (OH-), which enable plasma to be able to destroy tissue.
Revised:  The plasma field produces positively charged hydrogen ions (H+) and negatively charged hydroxide ions (OH-), which enable plasma to be able to destroy tissue.
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Original:  The generated plasma field produces positively charged hydrogen ions (H+) and negatively charged hydroxide ions (OH-), which enable plasma to be able to destroy tissue.
Revised:  The generated plasma field produces positively charged hydrogen ions (H+) and negatively charged hydroxide ions (OH-), which enable plasma to destroy tissue.
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Original:  There is no or only minor damage done to tissues nearby the tonsils during the coblation procedure because charged particles move between the generated plasma field and the ablated tissue, hence the molecules breakdown without the temperatures rising high.
Revised:  There is no or only minor damage done to nearby tissues during the coblation procedure because charged particles move between the generated plasma field and the ablated tissue, hence the molecules breakdown without the temperatures rising high.
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Original:  Due to being exposed numerous amounts of things that enter the mouth, tonsils can become infected, which is called tonsillitis.
Revised:  Owing to being exposed numerous amounts of things that enter the mouth, tonsils can become infected, which is called tonsillitis.
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Original:  Due to being exposed numerous amounts of things that enter the mouth, tonsils can become infected, which is called tonsillitis.
Revised:  Due to being exposed to amounts of material that enter the mouth, tonsils can become infected, which is called tonsillitis.
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Original: Before the procedure Before the surgery begins, the surgeon will take multiple blood test , physically examine the patient, and the surgeon will also check the past medical records of the patient to make sure it is safe to conduct the surgical procedure.
Revised: Before the procedure Before the surgery begins, the surgeon will take multiple blood tests , physically examine the patient, and the surgeon will also check the past medical records of the patient to make sure it is safe to conduct the surgical procedure.
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Original: According to the data resulted from the research, the local disabled parents in Leicester and Leicestershire of UK are less likely to identify children aged between 12 to 19 as young carers.
Revised: According to the data resulted from the research, the local disabled parents in Leicester and Leicestershire of UK are less likely to identify children aged between 12 and 19 as young carers.
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Original:  Children ’ s academic achievement is negatively impacted due to the time they spend on doing caring activities for disabled parents.
Revised:  Children ' s academic achievement is negatively impacted due to the time they spend on doing caring activities for disabled parents.
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Original:  It is widely considered that children ’ s participation in education will be negatively influenced by their parents’ disability.
Revised:  It is widely considered that children ' s participation in education will be negatively influenced by their parents’ disability.
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Original:  Researchers at Israel ’ s Bar Ilan University has delivered a study and the result shows that children who have parents with sensory impairment are more empathic and shows higher awareness of emotions of others than other children from normal families.
Revised:  Researchers at Israel ' s Bar Ilan University has delivered a study and the result shows that children who have parents with sensory impairment are more empathic and shows higher awareness of emotions of others than other children from normal families.
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Original:  Instead of being provided when children have been in an urgent need of help, the support towards families with disabled parents is ideally supposed to be available throughout the whole parenting process from preparation of parenthood . 232x232px |Wheelchair Flexible support.
Revised:  Instead of being provided when children have been in an urgent need of help, the support towards families with disabled parents is ideally supposed to be available throughout the whole parenting process from preparation of parenthood .232x232px |Wheelchair Flexible support.
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Original:  Depending on different stages of children ’ s maturity and alterations in parents’ health condition, the support needed varies.
Revised:  Depending on different stages of children ' s maturity and alterations in parents’ health condition, the support needed varies.
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Original:  It ’ s of great importance since it provides parents with disability the opportunity of sharing and communicating with others who are experiencing similar life <Grove, C., Reupert, A. E., & Maybery, D. J. (2015).
Revised:  It ' s of great importance since it provides parents with disability the opportunity of sharing and communicating with others who are experiencing similar life <Grove, C., Reupert, A. E., & Maybery, D. J. (2015).
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Original:  Inaccessible school facilities lead to lack of participation in children ’ s school life for physically disabled parents.
Revised:  Inaccessible school facilities lead to lack of participation in children ' s school life for physically disabled parents.
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Original:  Disability brings various problems to  parents themselves, their children and the whole family.
Revised:  Disability brings various problems to the parents themselves, their children and the whole family.
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Original:  Researchers has been discussing the effects and issued raised by disabled parents.
Revised:  Researchers have studying the effects and issued raised by disabled parents.
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Original:  Researchers has been discussing the effects and issued raised by disabled parents.
Revised:  Researchers has been discussing the effects and issues raised by disabled parents.
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Original:  Learning difficulties Parents with leaning difficulties need help to process information and manage objectives.
Revised:  Learning difficulties Parents with learning difficulties need help to process information and manage objectives.
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Original:  URL Owing to the scarce information about parenting with disability, the peer support network plays an even more significant role.
Revised:  Owing to the scarce information about parenting with disability, the peer support network plays an even more significant role.
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Original:  And life details of children with disabled parents like the number of friend and activities they do with parents are almost same with those of children with normal parents.
Revised:  And life details of children with disabled parents like the number of friend and activities they do with parents are almost same with those of children with non-disabled parents.
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Original:  His daughter , Evelyn Mashmoon , married Baba Zahiere Lye, the appointed Member of Parliament for the Malay community (1963-1965  ).
Revised:  His daughters , Evelyn Mashmoon , married Baba Zahiere Lye, the appointed Member of Parliament for the Malay community (1963-1965 ).
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Original:  His daughter , Evelyn Mashmoon , married Baba Zahiere Lye, the appointed Member of Parliament for the Malay community (1963-1965  ).
Revised:  His daughter , Evelyn Mashmoon , married Baba Zahiere Lye, appointed member of Parliament (1963-1965 ).
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Original:  The Alvin Show 1961–62 1950s–1972 CreatorRoss Bagdasarian Jr. Alvin and the Chipmunks rowspan="2" 1983–1990 1979–present Producer and voice Alvin and the Chipmunks 2015–present Jason Lee Film series 2007–present live action/CGI films
Revised:  The Alvin Show 1961–62 1950s–1972 CreatorRoss Bagdasarian Jr. Alvin and the Chipmunks rowspan="2" 1983–1990 1979–present Producer and voice ALVINNN!!! and the Chipmunks 2015–present Jason Lee Film series 2007–present live action/CGI films
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Original: David  Seville is a fictional character, the producer and manager of the fictional singing group Alvin and the Chipmunks.
Revised: David "Dave" Seville is a fictional character, the producer and manager of the fictional singing group Alvin and the Chipmunks.
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Original:   One of the records, recorded in 1958 under the David Seville stage name, was "Witch Doctor", featuring a sped-up high-pitched vocal technique.
Revised:  </ref> One of the records, recorded in 1958 under the David Seville stage name, was "Witch Doctor", featuring a sped-up high-pitched vocal technique.
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Original:  He has also co-directed a documentary, And the Fight Goes On, on the quadriplegic writer and historian, MP Anil Kumar.
Revised:  He has also directed a documentary, And the Fight Goes On, on the quadriplegic writer and historian, MP Anil Kumar.
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Original:  Besides, he has compiled stories for Crime File for Surya TV and Jeevan TV, created content  the programmes, Vipani for Doordarshan, Business Watch for Asianet, and Haritha Keralam for Jeevan TV and scripted the tele-series, Adaminte Santhathikal for Asianet.
Revised:  Besides, he has compiled stories for Crime File for Surya TV and Jeevan TV, created content for the programmes, Vipani for Doordarshan, Business Watch for Asianet, and Haritha Keralam for Jeevan TV and scripted the tele-series, Adaminte Santhathikal for Asianet.
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Original:  Besides, he has compiled stories for Crime File for Surya TV and Jeevan TV, created content for the programmes, Vipani for Doordarshan, Business Watch for Asianet, and Haritha Keralam for Jeevan TV and scripted the tele-series , Adaminte Santhathikal for Asianet  .
Revised:  Besides, he has compiled stories for Crime File for Surya TV and Jeevan TV, created content for the programmes, Vipani for Doordarshan, Business Watch for Asianet, and Haritha Keralam for Jeevan TV and scripted the tele-serials , Adaminte Santhathikal for Asianet .
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Original:  He has served over one million meals on the streets of Skid Row in downtown Los Angeles and continues to this day to bring people together, with love through the vehicle of food, to people on the frays of mainstream society .
Revised:  He has served over one million meals on the streets of Skid Row in downtown Los Angeles .
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Original:  For example, two Apache sisters reunite in “Whalebone Parrot” (The Dark Magazine, 2017), a Victorian horror story set in the late 19th century on an island in the Atlantic.
Revised:  For example, two Apache sisters reunite in "Whalebone Parrot" (The Dark Magazine, 2017), a Victorian horror story set in the late 19th century on an island in the Atlantic.
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Original:  During the conflict between their tribe and the U.S. Army, the women were orphaned and grew up together in a residential “Indian school.”
Revised:  During the conflict between their tribe and the U.S. Army, the women were orphaned and grew up together in a residential "Indian school".
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Original:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that “few remember.” Similarly, in “ Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch ” (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
Revised:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that "few remember". Similarly, in “ Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch ” (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
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Original:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that “few remember.” Similarly, in “ Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch ” (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
Revised:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that “few remember.” Similarly, in " Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch ” (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
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Original:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that “few remember.” Similarly, in “ Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch ” (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
Revised:  Thus, as Little Badger notes, her story is rooted in Lipan Apache history, a history that “few remember.” Similarly, in “ Owl vs. the Neighborhood Watch " (Strange Horizons, 2017), she revives Native legend when she places Owl, a shape-shifting supernatural harbinger of evil, in a story set in contemporary Appalachia.
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Original:  She has used her grandmothers ’ traditional techniques to bring him back to life.
Revised:  She has used her grandmothers ' traditional techniques to bring him back to life.
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