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Original:  Mandela , was hospitalised for eighteen days, the most time the former South African president has been hospitalised for since 1990.
Revised:  Mandela was hospitalised for eighteen days, the most time the former South African president has been hospitalised for since 1990.
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Original:  Mandela , was hospitalised for eighteen days, the most time the former South African president has been hospitalised for since 1990.
Revised:  Mandela , was hospitalised for eighteen days, the longest the former South African president has been hospitalised for since 1990.
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Original:  Mandela , was hospitalised for eighteen days, the most time the former South African president has been hospitalised for since 1990.
Revised:  Mandela , was hospitalised for eighteen days, the most time the former South African president has been hospitalised since 1990.
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Original:  Mandela had then been recently released from prison after serving 27 years.
Revised:  Then, Mandela was only recently released from prison after serving 27 years.
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Original:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, Mandela began to experience tuberculosis .
Revised:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, Mandela began to experience .
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Original:  Then, Mandela was only recently released from prison after serving 27 years.
Revised:  Then, Mandela was only recently released from prison after 27 years.
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Original: Current president visited Mandela in hospital on December 24 and "assured him of the love and support of all South Africans, young and old, and the whole world", according to the South African Government News Agency.
Revised: Current president visited Mandela in hospital on December 24.
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Original:  In January 2011, Mandela received hospital treatment for an acute respiratory infection because of damage caused to his lungs and eyes due to working at a limestone quarry in , where he was imprisoned for sixteen years during  .
Revised:  In January 2011, Mandela received hospital treatment for an acute respiratory infection . Work at a limestone quarry in , where he was imprisoned for sixteen years during .
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Original:  In January 2011, Mandela received hospital treatment for an acute respiratory infection because of damage caused to his lungs and eyes due to working at a limestone quarry in , where he was imprisoned for sixteen years during  .
Revised:  In January 2011, Mandela received hospital treatment for an acute respiratory infection because of damage caused to his lungs and eyes due to working at a limestone quarry , where he was imprisoned for sixteen years during .
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Original:  Mandela, aged 94, has a history of health problems.
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Original:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, Mandela began to experience .
Revised:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, he began to experience .
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Original:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, he began to experience .
Revised:  During the 1980s, while still a prisoner on Robben Island, he developed .
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Original:  Marting Atkinson was the match referee for the afternoon at White Hart Lane in London.
Revised:  Martin Atkinson was the match referee for the afternoon at White Hart Lane in London.
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Original:  Marting Atkinson was the match referee for the afternoon at White Hart Lane in London.
Revised:  Marting Atkinson was the match referee for the evening at White Hart Lane in London.
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Original:  Chelsea were restrained to long range efforts at the start of the half with two shots by Ballack and one by Wright-Phillips flying wide of the net.
Revised:  Chelsea were restricted to long range efforts at the start of the half with two shots by Ballack and one by Wright-Phillips flying wide of the net.
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Original:  Shevchenko then produced a well taken goal by running down the left, cutting to his left foot, and curling an unstoppable ball past England international keeper Paul Robinson.
Revised:  Shevchenko then produced a well taken goal by running down the left, cutting to his left foot, and curling an unstoppable shot past England international keeper Paul Robinson.
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Original:  Chelsea doubled their lead 7 minutes later through Shaun Wright-Phillips after his one time shot went across Robinson and into the back of the net.
Revised:  Chelsea doubled their lead 7 minutes later through Shaun Wright-Phillips after his first-time shot went across Robinson and into the back of the net.
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Original:  Martin Jol responded to the Chelsea goals by replacing Melbranque with Jermain Defoe, but the next few attempts on goal from Spurs would be off target shots by Zokora.
Revised:  Martin Jol responded to the Chelsea goals by replacing Malbranque with Jermain Defoe, but the next few attempts on goal from Spurs would be off target shots by Zokora.
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Original:  Ricardo Carvalho then brought down Berbatov in the penalty area and were awarded a penatly by referee Martin Atkinson.
Revised:  Ricardo Carvalho then brought down Berbatov in the penalty area and were awarded a penalty by referee Martin Atkinson.
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Original:  Spurs pushed forward, but were unable to convert on any chancesas they were eliminated from the FA Cup.
Revised:  Spurs pushed forward, but were unable to convert any chances, and they were eliminated from the FA Cup.
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Original:  "I saw him being decapitated, it was horrific", Mastrogiacomo recalled   .
Revised:  "I saw him being decapitated, it was horrific", Mastrogiacomo recalled . .
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Original:  Italian journalist Daniele Mastrogiacomo and his interpretor were released by their Taliban captors in Afghanistan, hours ago, after being kidnapped and held hostage since March 5. Mastrogiacomo's driver, Syed Agha was decapitated by his captors for "spying" . Helmand province is the centre of the country's opium trade.
Revised:  Italian journalist Daniele Mastrogiacomo was released by his Taliban captors in Afghanistan, hours ago, after being kidnapped and held hostage since March 5. Mastrogiacomo's driver, Syed Agha was decapitated by his captors for "spying" . Helmand province is the centre of the country's opium trade.
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Original:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, Mastrogiacomo was taken captive in Helmand province along with his Afghan interpreter and  driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
Revised:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, was taken captive in Helmand province along with his Afghan interpreter and driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
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Original:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, Mastrogiacomo was taken captive in Helmand province along with his Afghan interpreter and  driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
Revised:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, Mastrogiacomo was taken captive in Helmand Province along with his Afghan interpreter and driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
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Original:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, Mastrogiacomo was taken captive in Helmand province along with his Afghan interpreter and  driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
Revised:  A reporter with Italian newspaper La Repubblica, Mastrogiacomo was taken captive in Helmand province along with his Afghan interpreter and his driver, while attempting to obtain interviews with members of the Taliban.
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Original:  I am making these analogies so the American readers would relate to what is happening, and understand the difference in nomenclature. --RHakeem 20:13, 3 May 2007 (UTC) ...
Revised:  I am making these analogies so the American readers would relate to what is happening, and understand the difference in nomenclature. --RHakeem 20:13, 3 May 2007 (UTC) 
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Original:  Michael Auberry, the Boy Scouts of America from Greensboro, North Carolina who went missing on Saturday was found alive by rescuers at 11:00 a.m. EST.
Revised:  Michael Auberry, the Boy Scout from Greensboro, North Carolina who went missing on Saturday was found alive by rescuers at 11:00 a.m. EST.
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Original: The 12 year-old boy was dehydrated but unharmed .
Revised: The 12 year-old boy was dehydrated .
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Original:  He went missing when he walked away from the campsite, during lunch time , where his scout troop was staying in the mountains of N. Carolina.
Revised:  He went missing when he walked away from the campsite, during lunch , where his scout troop was staying in the mountains of N. Carolina.
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Original:  He went missing when he walked away from the campsite, during lunch time , where his scout troop was staying in the mountains of N. Carolina.
Revised:  He went missing when he walked away from the campsite, during lunch time , where his scout troop was staying in the mountains of North Carolina.
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Original:  The next moment, sounds like a blink of the eye, he was gone, " said the boy's father, Kent Auberry.
Revised:  " said the boy's father, Kent Auberry.
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Original:  The next moment, sounds like a blink of the eye, he was gone, " said the boy's father, Kent Auberry.
Revised:  The next moment, sounds like a blink of the eye, he was gone, " 
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Original:  Michael Auberry, the Boy Scout from Greensboro, North Carolina who went missing on Saturday was found alive by rescuers at 11:00 a.m. EST. "We have our missing Boy Scout," said Tina White of the United States National Park Service.
Revised:  Michael Auberry, the Boy Scout from Greensboro, North Carolina who went missing on Saturday was found alive by rescuers at 11:00 a.m. EST. 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "He was in good spirits when he disappeared%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . He ate lunch, chatting with the boys.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% when he disappeared%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . He ate lunch, chatting with the boys.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "He was in good spirits when he disappeared%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . He ate lunch, chatting with the boys.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "He was in good spirits %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% . He ate lunch, chatting with the boys.
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Original:  Members of the boy's church were praying for his safe return when the news broke that he was found alive.
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Original:  A meeting scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks was canceled after N. Korea realized that they did not receive the money.
Revised:  A meeting scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks was canceled as North Korea did not receive the money.
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Original:  however, the issues of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta in Asia was "resolved" and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
Revised:  however, the issue of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta in Asia was "resolved" and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
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Original:  however, the issues of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta in Asia was "resolved" and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
Revised:  however, the issues of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta was "resolved" and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
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Original: A meeting  scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks was canceled as North Korea did not receive the money.
Revised: A meeting , scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks was canceled as North Korea did not receive the money.
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Original: A meeting  scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks was canceled as North Korea did not receive the money.
Revised: A meeting scheduled to take place today between the 6 nations involved in the talks , was cancelled as North Korea did not receive the money.
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Original:  According to the U.S.;
Revised:  According to the US,
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Original:  however, the issue of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta was "resolved  " and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
Revised:  however, the issue of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta was "resolved . " and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
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Original:  however, the issue of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta was "resolved  " and that the money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
Revised:  however, the issue of frozen funds from the Macau lender Banco Delta was "resolved " The money can be "used solely for the betterment of the North Korean people," said Daniel Glaser, the U.S. Deputy Assistant Treasury.
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Original:  The nations participating in the talks to dismantle N. Korea's nuclear program include;
Revised:  The nations participating in the talks to dismantle North Korea's nuclear program include;
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Original:  The nations participating in the talks to dismantle N. Korea's nuclear program include;
Revised:  The nations participating in the talks to dismantle N. Korea's nuclear program are
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Original:  the United States, Japan, Russia, South Korea with China being the hostof the talks . N. Korea agreed on February 13 to dismantle their nuclear program by April 14, 2007
Revised:  the United States, Japan, Russia, South Korea with China being the hostof the talks . North Korea agreed on February 13 to dismantle their nuclear program by April 14, 2007
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Original:  This is the second launch for SpaceX, and the first successful rocket launch for this company  
Revised:  This is the second launch for SpaceX, and the first successful rocket launch for this company . 
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Original: TacSat-1 spacecraft launched with this rocket Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation successfully launches its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
Revised:  Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation successfully launches its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
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Original: Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation successfully launches its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
Revised: Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation successfully launched its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
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Original:  Liftoff occured at 6:00 PM PDT, following two previous launch aborts this week for this rocket .
Revised:  Liftoff occured at 6:00 PM PDT, following two previous launch aborts this week .
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Original:  The first stage was completely successful, although there appears to be some problems with the second stage.
Revised:  The first stage was completely successful, although there appeared to be some problems with the second stage.
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Original:  A sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry  This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful rocket launch for this company.
Revised:  The sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful rocket launch for this company.
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Original:  A sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry  This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful rocket launch for this company.
Revised:  A sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry . This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful rocket launch for this company.
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Original:  A sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry  This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful rocket launch for this company.
Revised:  A sub-orbital flight reached an altitude of 300 km, and is on a traectory for re-entry This is the second launch for SpaceX , and the first successful launch for the company.
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Original:  The previous launch had a successful lift-off, but failed 35 seconds into the flight and exploded above the launch pad .
Revised:  The previous launch had a successful lift-off, but failed 35 seconds into the flight and exploded above the launch pad 
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Original: Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation successfully launched its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
Revised: Falcon I second stage ignition SpaceX Corporation launched its Falcon I rocket today from Kwajalein Atoll.
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Original:  The rocket, which is the first privately funded liquid fuelled launch vehicle, was intended to place the payload into a low-Earth orbit, but all contact with the rocket was lost just over five minutes into the flight.
Revised:  The rocket, which is the first privately-funded liquid-fuelled launch vehicle, was intended to place the payload into a low-Earth orbit, but all contact with the rocket was lost just over five minutes into the flight.
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Original:  Related news References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SpaceFlightNow Mission Status Centre NASA SpaceFlight.c
Revised:  Related References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SpaceFlightNow Mission Status Centre NASA SpaceFlight.c
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Original:  Related news References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SpaceFlightNow Mission Status Centre NASA SpaceFlight.c
Revised:  Related news %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% SpaceFlightNow Mission Status Centre NASA SpaceFlight.c
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Original: The rocket, which is the first privately-funded liquid-fuelled launch vehicle, was intended to place the payload into a low-Earth orbit, but all contact with the rocket was lost just over five minutes into the flight.
Revised: The rocket, which is the first privately-funded liquid-fueled launch vehicle, was intended to place the payload into a low-Earth orbit, but all contact with the rocket was lost just over five minutes into the flight.
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Original:  The first stage burn proceeded nominally, and seperation occurred on schedule.
Revised:  The first stage burn proceeded nominally, and separation occurred on schedule.
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Original: "  ]  ]   It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
Revised: " a] ] It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
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Original: "  ]  ]   It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
Revised: " ] loss] It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
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Original: "  ]  ]   It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
Revised: " ] ] " It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia, who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
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Original: At least 1/3 of food consumed by humans is dependent on the bee population.
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Original:  It's just causing so much death so quickly that it's startling," said acting state apiarist, Dennis vanEngelsdorp who works for the Pennsylvania Department of Agriculture.
Revised:  It's just causing so much death so quickly that it's startling," said acting state apiarist, Dennis van Engelsdorp who works for the Pennsylvania Department of Agriculture.
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Original:  Tracheal mites were the cause of a drop in bee population in 1985.
Revised: The disappearances could be more serious than they sound - without bees to polinate crops, in a few years time there could be a dramatic drop in the harvests in the affected states. Tracheal mites were the cause of a drop in bee population in 1985.
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Original: "It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia , who has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
Revised: "It’s as high as 100 percent in Texas and one guy in Virginia has 27 hives left out of 1,400 hives.
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Original:  The disappearances could be more serious than they sound - without bees to polinate crops, in a few years time there could be a dramatic drop in the harvests in the affected states.
Revised:  The disappearances could be more serious than they sound - without bees to pollinate crops, in a few years time there could be a dramatic drop in the harvests in the affected states.
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Original: The disappearances could be more serious than they sound - without bees to pollinate crops, in a few years time there could be a dramatic drop in the harvests in the affected states.
Revised: The disappearances could be more serious than they sound-without bees to pollinate crops, in a few years time there could be a dramatic drop in the harvests in the affected states.
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Original: Rohan Powell, from Jamaica Radio said that according to his sources, Bob Woolmer was poisoned and then strabgled .
Revised: Rohan Powell, from Jamaica Radio said that according to his sources, Bob Woolmer was poisoned and then strangled .
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Original: The document goes on to describe the nature of satellite radio's competition , HD radio, Internet radio, AM and FM radio, portable media players, mobile phones, and even CD players.
Revised: Another major stumbling block for the merger deal is the potential for monopoly. To counter the arguments that the merged company will become a monopoly, the document goes on to describe the nature of satellite radio's competition , HD radio, Internet radio, AM and FM radio, portable media players, mobile phones, and even CD players.
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Original: The document goes on to describe the nature of satellite radio's competition , HD radio, Internet radio, AM and FM radio, portable media players, mobile phones, and even CD players.
Revised: The document goes on to describe the nature of satellite radio's competition : HD radio, Internet radio, AM and FM radio, portable media players, mobile phones, and even CD players.
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Original:  IPods and other MP3 players, music [subscription] services, podcasting and the Internet streaming of U.S. and foreign radio stations literally provide content from around the world to listeners in each local radio market in America.  
Revised:  IPods and other MP3 players, music [subscription] services, podcasting and the Internet streaming of U.S. and foreign radio stations literally provide content from around the world to listeners in each local radio market in America. " 
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Original:  Recently government-appointed committee has concluded civil-unions law outdated and recommended that the parliament would allow legal same-sex marriages.
Revised:  Recently government-appointed committee has concluded civil-unions law outdated and recommended that the would allow legal same-sex marriages.
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