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Original:  Pernod Ricard bases its entire business model and operations around four pillars with eight key commitments: Nurturing Terroir (biodiversity regenerative agriculture), Valuing People (equality and future leadership%DIFDELCMD < & %%% shared knowledge and learning), Circular Making (packaging and waste water balance and carbon-footprint), Responsible Hosting (alcohol misuse%DIFDELCMD < & %%% responsible party).
Revised:  Pernod Ricard bases its entire business model and operations around four pillars with eight key commitments: Nurturing Terroir (biodiversity regenerative agriculture), Valuing People (equality and future leadership%DIFDELCMD < & %%% water balance and carbon-footprint), Responsible Hosting (alcohol misuse%DIFDELCMD < & %%% responsible party).
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Original:  Pernod Ricard bases its entire business model and operations around four pillars with eight key commitments: Nurturing Terroir (biodiversity regenerative agriculture), Valuing People (equality and future leadership%DIFDELCMD < & %%% shared knowledge and learning), Circular Making (packaging and waste water balance and carbon-footprint), Responsible Hosting (alcohol misuse%DIFDELCMD < & %%% responsible party).
Revised:  Pernod Ricard bases its entire business model and operations around four pillars with eight key commitments: Nurturing Terroir (biodiversity regenerative agriculture), Valuing People (equality and future leadership%DIFDELCMD < & %%% shared knowledge and learning), Circular Making (packaging and waste %DIFDELCMD < & %%% responsible party).
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Original:  These company principles as part of the 2030 Sustainability Responsibility roadmap are aligned with the United Nation’s Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Criticism Contrary to studies that point to the consumer demand to engage brands in solving social problems, there are studies that find that the majority of consumers are indifferent to social brand engagement.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Contrary to studies that point to the consumer demand to engage brands in solving social problems, there are studies that find that the majority of consumers are indifferent to social brand engagement.
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Original:  See also Activism Consumer activism Corporate social responsibility Environmental, social and corporate governance Economic activism Impact investing Venture philanthropy Community building
Revised:  See also Consumer activism Economic activism
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Original:  FROM PURPOSE TO ACTION by Christian Sarkar Philip Kotler Copyright © October 2018 Christian Sarkar and Philip Kotler Unlike corporate social responsibility and environmental,
Revised:  FROM PURPOSE TO ACTION by Christian Sarkar Unlike corporate social responsibility and environmental,
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Original:  social and corporate governance politics which are marketing-driven and corporate-driven, brand activism is a society-driven concept . Concept The expectations of businesses to form conversations and policy debates on jobs, economy, regulations, corruption, global warming, discrimination, education, healthcare, and immigration issues are conditioned by society's lack of trust in governments and NGOs.
Revised:  social and corporate governance politics which are marketing-driven and corporate-driven, brand activism is a society-driven concept Concept The expectations of businesses to form conversations and policy debates on jobs, economy, regulations, corruption, global warming, discrimination, education, healthcare, and immigration issues are conditioned by society's lack of trust in governments and NGOs.
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Original:  See also Consumer activismEconomic activism References Category:Activism Category:Activism by ty &  
Revised:  Although it has been viewed as a controversial tactic, brand activism sits in the middle of the activism scale, meaning it is not regressive (hiding the harm a brand can inflict on a consumer to promote its use) nor progressive (advocating for a cause on the largest societal platform possible). Current problems facing society typically drive companies towards brand activism. Once a brand sides with a cause, it must not only support the cause publicly but also it must actively contribute to the cause's initiatives. Brand activism shifts a company's vision from solely an internal impact to an external impact emphasizing advocacy and justice Consumer activismEconomic activism References Category:Activism Category:Activism by ty & 
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Original:  See also Consumer activismEconomic activism References Category:Activism Category:Activism by ty &  
Revised:  See also Consumer activismEconomic activism Into the 21st Century At the turn of the 21st century, millennials and Gen Z inspired more business to support societal causes. Both generations are heavily involved in the digital world, thus making any social issues public in any part of the world with a connection to the Internet. The most popular way for brands to show their support for social issues is typically via social media. Not only can companies use Instagram, Twitter, Facebook, or any other platform to stand in solidarity, but it can also use its influence to educate consumers about why a social issue is so relevant and important. Category:Activism Category:Activism by ty & 
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Original: Career Born in Dublin, Ireland, Harrison became a chorister at St Patrick's Cathedral in 1912 and was educated at the cathedral grammar school (until 1920) and at Mountjoy School (1920–1922).
Revised: Education and early musical career Born in Dublin, Ireland, Harrison became a chorister at St Patrick's Cathedral in 1912 and was educated at the cathedral grammar school (until 1920) and at Mountjoy School (1920–1922).
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Original:  George ’ s in 1941 to become assistant professor of music at Queen's in 1942.
Revised:  George ' s in 1941 to become assistant professor of music at Queen's in 1942.
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Original:    In 1989, Harry White appreciated Harrison as "an Irish musicologist of international standing and of seminal influence, whose scholarly achievement, astonishingly, encompassed virtually the complete scope of the discipline which he espoused.
Revised:  Legacy In 1989, Harry White appreciated Harrison as "an Irish musicologist of international standing and of seminal influence, whose scholarly achievement, astonishingly, encompassed virtually the complete scope of the discipline which he espoused.
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Original:  David F. L. Chadd: "Francis Llewellyn Harrison, 1905–1987", in: Proceedings of the British Academy, vol. 75 (1989),  361–380.
Revised:  David F. L. Chadd: "Francis Llewellyn Harrison, 1905–1987", in: Proceedings of the British Academy, vol. 75 (1989), p. 361–380.
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Original: Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor ( Anti-VEGF ) drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor  is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
Revised:  Anti-VEGF ) drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
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Original: Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor ( Anti-VEGF ) drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor  is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
Revised: Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor ( Anti-VEGF drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
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Original: Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor ( Anti-VEGF ) drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor  is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
Revised: Anti-Vascular Endothelial Growth Factor ( Anti-VEGF ) drugs Vascular endothelial growth factor (VEGF) is a type of protein the body cells produce to stimulate the growth of new blood vessels.
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Original:  Triamcinolone acetonide It is one of the most commonly used steroid agents for the treatment of several retinal conditions.
Revised:  Triamcinolone acetonide Triamcinolone acetonide is one of the most commonly used steroid agents for the treatment of several retinal conditions.
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Original:  Dexamethasone It is a potent cytokine inhibitor that is naturally released from human pericytes.
Revised:  Dexamethasone Dexamethasone is a potent cytokine inhibitor that is naturally released from human pericytes.
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Original:  Fluocinolone acetonide It is a synthetic corticosteroid as potent as dexamethasone, but with a much lower water solubility, which could be accounted for the extended period of release from the intravitreal implant injected.
Revised:  Fluocinolone acetonide Fluocinolone acetonide is a synthetic corticosteroid as potent as dexamethasone, but with a much lower water solubility, which could be accounted for the extended period of release from the intravitreal implant injected.
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Original:  ( Some studies show that it has no statistically significant benefit in preventing endophthalmitis, whereas other studies indicate that it can increase conjunctival bacterial resistance. ) Rubbing of eyes and swimming should be avoided for days after intravitreal injection.
Revised:  Some studies show that it has no statistically significant benefit in preventing endophthalmitis, whereas other studies indicate that it can increase conjunctival bacterial resistance. ) Rubbing of eyes and swimming should be avoided for days after intravitreal injection.
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Original:  ( Some studies show that it has no statistically significant benefit in preventing endophthalmitis, whereas other studies indicate that it can increase conjunctival bacterial resistance. ) Rubbing of eyes and swimming should be avoided for days after intravitreal injection.
Revised:  ( Some studies show that it has no statistically significant benefit in preventing endophthalmitis, whereas other studies indicate that it can increase conjunctival bacterial resistance. Rubbing of eyes and swimming should be avoided for days after intravitreal injection.
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Original:  According to researcher Trudy Jacobsen, this writing may have been a mysoginistic answer by King Ang Duong to the crowning of Ang Mey in Vietnam.
Revised:  According to researcher Trudy Jacobsen, this writing may have been a misogynistic answer by King Ang Duong to the crowning of Ang Mey in Vietnam.
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Original:  Beyond the legal dictates, the Chbab Srey "stifles women’s ability to pursue their own goals and aspirations in life" according to Khmer activist Kounila Keo .
Revised:  Beyond the legal dictates, the Chbab Srey "stifles women’s ability to pursue their own goals and aspirations in life" according to Khmer activist Kounila Keo 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Women in Cambodia Category:Codes of conduct Category:Cambodian literature Category:Poet
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Women in Cambodia Category:Codes of conduct Category:Cambodian literature Category:Poet
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  expressed its concern in its observation in 2013 that “ the Chbab Srey, the traditional code of conduct for Women is deeply rooted in Cambodian culture and society and continues to define everyday life on the basis of stereotypical roles of women and men in the family and in societontinues to define everyday life on the basis of stereotypical roles of women and men in the family and in society".
Revised:  expressed its concern in its observation in 2013 that “ the Chbab Srey, the traditional code of conduct for Women is deeply rooted in Cambodian culture and society and continues to define everyday life on the basis of stereotypical roles of women and men in the family and in society".
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Original: Pathophysiology 373x373px|PST is a protein composed of long chain of amino acids in which the substitution of arginine by histidine at the position 213 in SULT1A1*2 polymorphism would cause the changes in biochemical properties and reduces the size of substrate binding site.
Revised: Pathophysiology 373x373px|PST is a protein composed of long chain of amino acids in which the substitution of arginine by histidine at the position 213 due to the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism would cause the changes in biochemical properties and reduces the size of substrate binding site.
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Original: Pathophysiology 373x373px|PST is a protein composed of long chain of amino acids in which the substitution of arginine by histidine at the position 213 in SULT1A1*2 polymorphism would cause the changes in biochemical properties and reduces the size of substrate binding site.
Revised: Pathophysiology 373x373px|PST is a protein composed of long chain of amino acids in which the substitution of arginine by histidine at the position 213 in SULT1A1*2 polymorphism would cause the changes in biochemical properties and reduce the size of substrate binding site.
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Original:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a mutation at the 213th position of the SULT1A1 gene where the amino acid residue arginine is changed to histidine due to a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base from guanine to adenosine .
Revised:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base of the SULT1A1 gene where the amino acid residue arginine is changed to histidine due to a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base from guanine to adenosine .
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Original:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a mutation at the 213th position of the SULT1A1 gene where the amino acid residue arginine is changed to histidine due to a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base from guanine to adenosine .
Revised:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a mutation at the 213th position of the SULT1A1 gene from guanine to adenosine that causes the change of the 213th amino acid residue arginine is changed to histidine due to a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base from guanine to adenosine .
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Original:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a mutation at the 213th position of the SULT1A1 gene where the amino acid residue arginine is changed to histidine due to a single nucleotide polymorphism at the 638th base from guanine to adenosine .
Revised:  For example the SULT1A1*2 polymorphism, which is a mutation at the 213th position of the SULT1A1 gene where the amino acid residue of the resultant SULT1A1 from arginine to histidine .
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Original: Kundapur Vaman Kamath, commonly referred to as K. V. Kamath, is the chief of the New Development Bank of BRICS countries, he has served as the Chairman of Infosys Limited, the second-largest Indian IT services company, and as the Non-Executive Chairman of ICICI Bank, India's largest private bank.
Revised: Kundapur Vaman Kamath, commonly referred to as K. V. Kamath, was the former chief of the New Development Bank of BRICS countries, he has served as the Chairman of Infosys Limited, the second-largest Indian IT services company, and as the Non-Executive Chairman of ICICI Bank, India's largest private bank.
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Original: Kundapur Vaman Kamath, commonly referred to as K. V. Kamath, is the chief of the New Development Bank of BRICS countries, he has served as the Chairman of Infosys Limited, the second-largest Indian IT services company, and as the Non-Executive Chairman of ICICI Bank, India's largest private bank.
Revised: Kundapur Vaman Kamath, commonly referred to as K. V. Kamath, is the chief of the New Development Bank of BRICS countries, previously he has also served as the Chairman of Infosys Limited, the second-largest Indian IT services company, and as the Non-Executive Chairman of ICICI Bank, India's largest private bank.
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Original: Career After graduating from IIM-A in 1971, Kamath started his career with ICICI (Industrial Credit and Investment Corporation of India) in the Project Finance division and moved on to different departments to gather experience, including establishing new business lines such as leasing, venture capital, and credit ratings as well as handling general management responsibilities.
Revised: Career After graduating from IIM Ahmedabad in 1971, Kamath started his career with ICICI (Industrial Credit and Investment Corporation of India) in the Project Finance division and moved on to different departments to gather experience, including establishing new business lines such as leasing, venture capital, and credit ratings as well as handling general management responsibilities.
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Original: Kamath was born on 2 December 1947 in Mangalore, Karnataka State , to a Gaud Saraswat Brahmin family .
Revised: Kamath was born on 2 December 1947 in Mangalore, Karnataka State .
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Original:  Deepak Satvalekar replaced URL
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Original: The World Day for The End of Fishing (WoDEF) is an international campaign launched by animal rights activists demanding the end of fishing practices.
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Original: The World Day for The End of Fishing (WoDEF) is an international campaign launched by animal rights activists demanding the end of fishing practices.
Revised: The World Day for The End of Fishing (WoDEF) is an international campaign launched by animal rights activists who demand the end of fishing practices.
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Original:  File:Fish Count for WoDEF.jpg|Montreal activists from Le Collectif Antispéciste pour la Solidarité Animale (CASA) organized a fish count for the victims of fishing in 2019 for The World Day for the End of Fishing.
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Original:  It takes place the on the last Saturday of March every year.
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Original: The World Day for the End of Fishing (WoDEF) is an international campaign launched by animal rights activists who demand the end of fishing practices.
Revised: The World Day for the End of Fishing (WoDEF) is an international campaign launched by animal rights activists that demand the end of fishing practices.
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Original: Early life and education Ganpatbhai Patel is the son of Shri Iswarbhai Patel and Smt Menaben Patel from the Patidar community.
Revised: Early life and education Ganpat Patel is the son of Shri Iswarbhai Patel and Smt Menaben Patel from the Patidar community.
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Original: Early life and education Ganpatbhai Patel is the son of Shri Iswarbhai Patel and Smt Menaben Patel from the Patidar community.
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Original: Early life and education Ganpatbhai Patel is the son of Shri Iswarbhai Patel and Smt Menaben Patel from the Patidar community.
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Original:  He was born in the village of Bhunav, Sidhhapur in North Gujarat . Ganpat Patel was born on 12 January 1945 in Bhunav Siddhpur, Patan district, North Gujarat, India.
Revised:  He was born in the village of Bhunav, Sidhhapur in North Gujarat on 12 January 1945 in Bhunav Siddhpur, Patan district, North Gujarat, India.
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Original:  In 1978, Shri Patel, with the help of his wife, founded Cherokee International, Inc., a power supply company.
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Original: Shri Patel is the President and Patron-in-Chief of Ganpat University , a higher education university located in the Mehsana district of North Gujarat .
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Original: Shri Patel is the President and Patron-in-Chief of Ganpat University , a higher education university located in the Mehsana district of North Gujarat .
Revised: Shri Patel is the President and Patron-in-Chief of Ganpat University located in the Mehsana district of North Gujarat .
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Original: Early life and education Ganpatbhai Patel is the son of Shri Iswarbhai Patel and Smt Menaben Patel from the Patidar community.
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Original:  He was born in the village of Bhunav, Sidhhapur in North Gujarat . Ganpat Patel was born on 12 January 1945 in Bhunav Siddhpur, Patan district, North Gujarat, India.
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Original:  He was born in the village of Bhunav, Sidhhapur in North Gujarat . Ganpat Patel was born on 12 January 1945 in Bhunav Siddhpur, Patan district, North Gujarat, India.
Revised:  He was born in the village of Bhunav, Sidhhapur in North Gujarat . Ganpat Patel was born on 12 January 1945.
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Original:  After completing his primary school education in his village Bhunav, Siddhapur and high school education in Swami Vivekanand School, Junagadh, In 1965, at the age of 20, Shri Patel moved to the United States of America to pursue his dreams of higher education, leaving behind his wife Smt Manjuben Patel and unborn daughter, Rita.
Revised:  After completing his primary school education in his village and high school education in Swami Vivekanand School, Junagadh, In 1965, at the age of 20, Shri Patel moved to the United States of America to pursue his dreams of higher education, leaving behind his wife Smt Manjuben Patel and unborn daughter, Rita.
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Original:  After completing his primary school education in his village Bhunav, Siddhapur and high school education in Swami Vivekanand School, Junagadh, In 1965, at the age of 20, Shri Patel moved to the United States of America to pursue his dreams of higher education, leaving behind his wife Smt Manjuben Patel and unborn daughter, Rita.
Revised:  After completing his primary school education in his village Bhunav, Siddhapur and high school education in Swami Vivekanand School, Junagadh, In 1965, at the age of 20, Shri Patel moved to the United States to pursue his dreams of higher education, leaving behind his wife Smt Manjuben Patel and unborn daughter, Rita.
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Original:  He was awarded a Bachelor of Science degree in Electrical Engineering from California  Polytechnic University,  Pomona.
Revised:  He was awarded a Bachelor of Science degree in Electrical Engineering from California Polytechnic University, in Pomona.
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Original:  There after he also got an opportunity in borroughs computer and he acquired many useful skills which gave a great push to the tenets of entrepreneurship in him.
Revised:  There after he also got an opportunity in Burroughs Computer and he acquired many useful skills which gave a great push to the tenets of entrepreneurship in him.
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