wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The U.S. Democratic Party primary candidate for president, Hillary Clinton, will be hosting a series of three live blowjob webcasts beginning tonight, January 22 at 7:00pm EST.
Revised: The U.S. Democratic Party primary candidate for president, Hillary Clinton, will be hosting a series of three live webcasts beginning tonight, January 22 at 7:00pm EST.
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Original: The    webcasts are paid for by the Hillary Clinton for President Exploratory Committee.
Revised: The The webcasts are paid for by the Hillary Clinton for President Exploratory Committee.
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Original:  Clinton, it was neither obvious nor apparent  . Billed as a participatory event, the video pictured Clinton seated in a relaxed position on a couch giving a talk that lasted 1 minute and 45 seconds and offered no responses to what might have been contrued as user generated questions.
Revised:  Clinton, it was neither obvious nor apparent . Billed as a participatory event, the video pictured Clinton seated in a relaxed position on a couch giving a talk that lasted 1 minute and 45 seconds and offered no responses to what might have been construed as user generated questions.
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Original:  Titled  Let the Conversation Begin  , the live webcasts are aimed to be a discussion forum on the future of the United States.
Revised:  Titled " Let the Conversation Begin , the live webcasts are aimed to be a discussion forum on the future of the United States.
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Original:  Titled  Let the Conversation Begin  , the live webcasts are aimed to be a discussion forum on the future of the United States.
Revised:  Titled Let the Conversation Begin " , the live webcasts are aimed to be a discussion forum on the future of the United States.
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Original:  The  Hillary for President  home page says, "you can ask Hillary your questions and watch her answers in our live webcast."
Revised:  The ' Hillary for President home page says, "you can ask Hillary your questions and watch her answers in our live webcast."
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Original:  The  Hillary for President  home page says, "you can ask Hillary your questions and watch her answers in our live webcast."
Revised:  The Hillary for President ' home page says, "you can ask Hillary your questions and watch her answers in our live webcast."
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Original: PfizerPfizer CEO Jeffery Kindler has announced that 2,410 jobs will be cut in MichiganMichigan , taking out three plants in the state.
Revised: Pfizer CEO Jeffery Kindler has announced that 2,410 jobs will be cut in MichiganMichigan , taking out three plants in the state.
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Original: PfizerPfizer CEO Jeffery Kindler has announced that 2,410 jobs will be cut in MichiganMichigan , taking out three plants in the state.
Revised: PfizerPfizer CEO Jeffery Kindler has announced that 2,410 jobs will be cut in Michigan , taking out three plants in the state.
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Original:  The Ann ArborAnn Arbor, KalamazooKalamazoo ,  and Plymouth sites are representatives of the world's largest drug manufacturing company.
Revised:  The Ann ArborAnn Arbor, KalamazooKalamazoo , Kalamazoo, and Plymouth sites are representatives of the world's largest drug manufacturing company.
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Original:  A portion of these jobs will be reassinged in Pfizer plants in cities such as La Jolla, CA, Groton, CT, and Sandwich in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  A portion of these jobs will be reassigned in Pfizer plants in cities such as La Jolla, CA, Groton, CT, and Sandwich in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  This comes a bigger blow to the region when coupled with ongoing losses to major car manufacturers in the DetroitDetroit area, and Gov. Jennifer GranholmJennifer Granholm said today that, quote, “We’re going to have a whole ‘Stick Around Ann Arbor’ campaign for these employees, because we want them to stay here.”
Revised:  This comes a bigger blow to the region when coupled with ongoing losses to major car manufacturers in the Detroit area, and Gov. Jennifer GranholmJennifer Granholm said today that, quote, “We’re going to have a whole ‘Stick Around Ann Arbor’ campaign for these employees, because we want them to stay here.”
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Original:  This comes a bigger blow to the region when coupled with ongoing losses to major car manufacturers in the DetroitDetroit area, and Gov. Jennifer GranholmJennifer Granholm said today that, quote, “We’re going to have a whole ‘Stick Around Ann Arbor’ campaign for these employees, because we want them to stay here.”
Revised:  This comes a bigger blow to the region when coupled with ongoing losses to major car manufacturers in the DetroitDetroit area, and Gov. Jennifer Granholm said today that, quote, “We’re going to have a whole ‘Stick Around Ann Arbor’ campaign for these employees, because we want them to stay here.”
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Original:  The situation started at 2: 30pm Saturdayafternoon at 1325 Fry Avenue, when EMS crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for EMS to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
Revised:  The situation started at 2: 30pm Saturdayafternoon at 1325 Fry Avenue, when EMS crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for Emergency medical services to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
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Original:  He became hostile when they arrived, so they called for Police backup .
Revised:  Police backup was called up after Pollock became hostile .
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Original:  Police retreated, and left the man in his home .
Revised:  Police retreated, leaving the man in his home .
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Original:  Police retreated, and left the man in his home .
Revised:  Police retreated, and left the man in his house .
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Original:  Westshore SWAT was deployed at 6pm.
Revised:  Westshore SWAT was deployed at 6 p.m.
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Original:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire  evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
Revised:  Earlier in the day, at 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
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Original:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire  evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
Revised:  At 6:30 p.m., Police & Fire evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
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Original:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire  evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
Revised:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire esrvices evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
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Original:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire  evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby , and CERT was deployed.
Revised:  At 6:30 pm, as a precaution, Police & Fire evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby as a precautionary measure and CERT was deployed.
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Original: The situation started at 2:30 p.m. on Saturday, January 20 when emergency medical service crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for Emergency medical services to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
Revised: The situation started at 2:30 p.m. on Saturday, January 20 when emergency medical service crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for an emergency medical crew to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
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Original: The situation started at 2:30 p.m. on Saturday, January 20 when emergency medical service crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for an emergency medical crew to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
Revised: The situation started at 2:30 p.m. on Saturday, January 20 when emergency medical service crews were called to the home of Jason Pollack, 31. He became despondent after his family called for Emergency medical services to take him to the hospital for psychological testing.
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Original:  When the officers arrived, they said the man threatened to light several propane and oxygen tanks, and implode the house.
Revised:  When the officers arrived, they said the man threatened to light several propane and oxygen tanks, and blow the house.
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Original:  Earlier in the day, at 6:30 p.m., Police & Fire esrvices evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby as a precautionary measure and the Community Emergency Response Team was deployed.
Revised:  Earlier in the day, at 6:30 p.m., Police & Fire esrvices evacuated approximately 150 homes nearby as a precautionary measure and CERT was deployed.
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Original:  When the officers arrived, they said the man threatened to light several propane and oxygen tanks , and blow the house.
Revised:  When the officers arrived, they said the man threatened to light several propane and oxygen tanks in the house.
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Original:  Because of the high risk of explosion, they sent in a camera and PA-equipped robot, attempting to  dialogue with the man, with little results.
Revised:  Because of the high risk of explosion, they sent in a camera and PA-equipped robot, attempting to open a dialogue with the man, with little results.
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Original:  Police say no one was injured in the standoff, and they're working with the Prosecutor to determine what charges will be filed against Pollac 
Revised:  Police say no one was injured in the standoff, and they're working with the Prosecutor to determine what charges will be filed against Pollack. 
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Original:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite  responding to an emergency  and with his lights flashing.
Revised:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite despite having been responding to an emergency and with his lights flashing.
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Original:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite  responding to an emergency  and with his lights flashing.
Revised:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite responding to an emergency , and with his lights flashing.
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Original:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite despite having been responding to an emergency, and with his lights flashing.
Revised:  Sergeant Smith has been charged with driving at a dangerous speed, despite having been responding to an emergency, and with his lights flashing.
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Original: The US embassy in the Philippines said Tuesday that military maneuvers between US and domestic troops will resume next month after its suspension last month when a Philippine court refused to transfer custody of Daniel Smith, a US Marine convicted of rape against a Filipina, to the US embassy.
Revised: The US embassy in the Philippines said Tuesday that military maneuvers between US and domestic troops will resume next month after its suspension last month when a Philippine court refused to transfer custody of Daniel Smith, a US Marine convicted of raping a Filipina, to the US embassy.
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Original:  “ I feel very strongly that we must congratulate the Armed Forces of the Philippines.
Revised:  " I feel very strongly that we must congratulate the Armed Forces of the Philippines.
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Original:  They are dedicated and doing a wonderful job of keeping the people safe, ” she said.
Revised:  They are dedicated and doing a wonderful job of keeping the people safe, " she said.
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Original:  Kenney’s statement as she joined US troops in distributing relief goods to Bicol victims of a recent supertyphoon, preceded the arrival on Wednesday of US President George W. Bush’s image builder, Undersecretary of State for Public Diplomacy and Public Affairs Karen P.
Revised:  Kenney’s statement as she joined US troops in distributing relief goods to Bicol victims of a recent supertyphoon, preceded the arrival on Wednesday of US Undersecretary of State for Public Diplomacy and Public Affairs Karen P.
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Original:  Kenney’s statement as she joined US troops in distributing relief goods to Bicol victims of a recent supertyphoon, preceded the arrival on Wednesday of US President George W. Bush’s image builder, Undersecretary of State for Public Diplomacy and Public Affairs Karen P.
Revised:  Kenney’s statement as she joined US troops in distributing relief goods to Bicol victims of a recent supertyphoon, preceded the arrival on Wednesday of US President George W. Bush’s image builder, Undersecretary of State for Public Diplomacy and Public Affairs Karen 
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Original:  Dozens of US troops are deployed on Jolo island in humanitarian projects, but officials said they also helped provide intelligence data that led to the killings of the two top leaders of the Abu Sayyaf.
Revised:  Dozens of US troops are deployed on in humanitarian projects, but officials said they also helped provide intelligence data that led to the killings of the two top leaders of the Abu Sayyaf.
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Original:  Hughes’ three-day visit will be capped by a one-on-one meeting with President Arroyo .
Revised:  Hughes’ three-day visit will be capped by a one-on-one meeting with .
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Original:  She will also meet with other government officials and visit Sulu , where American troops are helping the Philippine military supposedly to flush out Islamic militants.
Revised:  She will also meet with other government officials and visit , where American troops are helping the Philippine military supposedly to flush out Islamic militants.
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Original:  Meanwhile, activist group Bagong Alyansang Makabayan on Tuesday said it opposes the resumption of the RP-US military exercises by launching a nationwide mass protests on February 8.
Revised:  Meanwhile, activist group on Tuesday said it opposes the resumption of the RP-US military exercises by launching a nationwide mass protests on February 8.
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Original:  We don’t lessen importance of that mission, but it should be performed by the Iraqi forces and not the coalition forces.  
Revised:  We don’t lessen importance of that mission, but it should be performed by the Iraqi forces and not the coalition forces. " 
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Original:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " it 's not true . " 
Revised:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " It 's not true . " 
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Original:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " it 's not true . " 
Revised:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " it 's not true " 
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Original:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " it 's not true . " 
Revised:  ]] Israel denies that an F-16 was shot down saying, " it 's not true . " .
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Original:  The "Al-Qassam Brigades" division of Hamas is reportedly claiming responsibility for the shoot down and captures .
Revised:  The "Al-Qassam Brigades" division of Hamas is claiming responsibility for the shoot down and captures .
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Original:  The "Al-Qassam Brigades" division of Hamas is reportedly claiming responsibility for the shoot down and captures .
Revised:  The "Al-Qassam Brigades" division of Hamas is reportedly claiming responsibility for the shoot down .
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Original: According to reports, Hamas has taken at least two Israeli pilots hostage after allegedly shooting down down their F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday.
Revised: According to reports, Hamas has taken at least two Israeli pilots hostage after they claimed to have shot down their F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday.
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Original:  The "Al-Qassam Brigades" division of Hamas is claiming responsibility for the shoot down.
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Original: Hamas made their claims following reports that another one of its leaders , Ahmad Abu Jalal, was killed in an Israeli Defense Forces (IDF) airstrike  .
Revised: Hamas made their claims following reports that another leader of Hamas , Ahmad Abu Jalal, was killed in an Israeli Defense Forces (IDF) airstrike .
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Original: According to reports, the "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, has taken at least two Israeli pilots hostage after they claimed to have shot down their F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday  . [[File:Hamas flag2.png|Hamas flag.
Revised: According to reports, the "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, claims to have shot down their F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday . [[File:Hamas flag2.png|Hamas flag.
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Original: According to reports, the "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, has taken at least two Israeli pilots hostage after they claimed to have shot down their F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday  . [[File:Hamas flag2.png|Hamas flag.
Revised: According to reports, the "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, has taken at least two Israeli pilots hostage after they claimed to have shot down an Israeli F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday . [[File:Hamas flag2.png|Hamas flag.
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Original: According to reports, the "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, claims to have shot down an Israeli F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday and captured the two pilots.
Revised: The "Al-Qassam Brigades," a division of Hamas, claims to have shot down an Israeli F-16 fighter jet over the Gaza Strip yesterday and captured the two pilots.
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Original:  According to some reports , Hamas captured the two pilots.
Revised:  According to un-official sources , Hamas captured the two pilots.
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Original: Former French PM Charles de Gaulle said the words "Vive le Quebec libre (Long live free Quebec)" from the balcony of Montreal city hall in 1967.
Revised: Former French President Charles de Gaulle said the words "Vive le Quebec libre (Long live free Quebec)" from the balcony of Montreal city hall in 1967.
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Original:  Royal , who has never visited Quebec, says that Quebec shares commons values with France.
Revised:  Emery , who has never visited Quebec, says that Quebec shares commons values with France.
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Original:  Royal said she was not interfering in Canada's affairs when she made the comment.
Revised:  Emery said she was not interfering in Canada's affairs when she made the comment.
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Original: Ségolène Royal Canadian prime minister Stephen Harper commented on France's Socialist Party nominee Ségolène Royal's comments on Quebec sovereignty .
Revised:  Canadian prime minister Stephen Harper commented on France's Socialist Party nominee Ségolène Royal's comments on Quebec sovereignty .
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Original: Ségolène Royal Canadian prime minister Stephen Harper commented on France's Socialist Party nominee Ségolène Royal's comments on Quebec sovereignty .
Revised: Ségolène Royal Canadian prime minister Stephen Harper commented on France's Socialist Party nominee Ségolène Royal's comments on Quebec .
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Original:  This came after Ségolène Royal met with Canadian Parti Québécois Leader André Boisclair in Paris, France on Monday.
Revised:  This came after Ségolène Royal met with Canadian Leader in Paris, France on Monday.
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Original:  Former French President Charles de Gaulle said the words "Vive le Quebec libre (Long live free Quebec)" from the balcony of Montreal city hall in 1967.
Revised:  Former French President said the words "Vive le Quebec libre (Long live free Quebec)" from the balcony of Montreal city hall in 1967.
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Original:  De Gaulle left Canada early after former Canadian PM Lester Pearson rebuked his comment.
Revised:  De Gaulle left Canada early after former Canadian PM rebuked his comment.
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Original:  Quebec separatists have been trying to separate from Canada for more than 40 years.
Revised:  Quebec have been trying to separate from Canada for more than 40 years.
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Original: 100px|right Doug Mahugh from Microsoft contacted Rick Jelliffe, who is the top technical officer for Sydney computing company Topologi - and offered to pay him for the time it would take to correct the article.
Revised: 100px|right Doug Mahugh from Microsoft contacted Rick Jelliffe, who is the top technical officer for Sydney computing company Topologi - and offered to pay him for the time it would take to modify the article.
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Original:  “Wikipedia has an entry on Open XML that has a lot of slanted language, and we'd like for them to make it more objective but we feel that it would be best if a non-Microsoft person were the source of any corrections,” reads the email  Mahugh wrote to Jelliffe.
Revised:  “Wikipedia has an entry on Open XML that has a lot of slanted language, and we'd like for them to make it more objective but we feel that it would be best if a non-Microsoft person were the source of any corrections,” reads the email Microsoft employee Mahugh wrote to Jelliffe.
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Original:  And, according to Sergeant Smith's lawyer, Bill Dawkins, Queens Drive (where the speed occoured ) is different to other roads in New Zealand, "If ever there was a case where a court would not convict then this is the very type of roadway in which this might happen."
Revised:  And, according to Sergeant Smith's lawyer, Bill Dawkins, Queens Drive (where the speed occurred ) is different to other roads in New Zealand, "If ever there was a case where a court would not convict then this is the very type of roadway in which this might happen."
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Original: Judge Phillips said, before he delivered his verdict, that  for Sergeant Smith to be discharged was if he was posing any danger to the public at his high speed.
Revised: Judge Phillips said, before he delivered his verdict, that the criterion for Sergeant Smith to be discharged was if he was posing any danger to the public at his high speed.
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Original: Judge Phillips said, before he delivered his verdict, that  for Sergeant Smith to be discharged was if he was posing any danger to the public at his high speed.
Revised: Judge Phillips said, before he delivered his verdict, that for Sergeant Smith to be discharged was whether he was posing any danger to the public at his high speed.
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Original:  MySpace will start sending online alerts to internet users in certain regions of the United States.
Revised: Internet social gathering website MySpace will start sending online alerts to internet users in certain regions of the United States.
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Original:  This is how the online social network looks forward to help find missing children.
Revised:  This is how the website looks forward to help find missing children.
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Original:  Internet social gathering website MySpace will start sending online alerts to internet users in certain regions of the United States.
Revised: MySpace is a fast-growing website, with about 150 million profiles. Half of all U.S. teenagers access such websites like MySpace with one goal – to make friends. Internet social gathering website MySpace will start sending online alerts to internet users in certain regions of the United States.
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Original:  The technology will allow MySpace searching state and federal databases .
Revised:  The technology will allow MySpace to search proposed state and federal databases .
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Original: Abalone diver Eric Nerhus breathes a sigh of relief today as he recovers from being half-swallowed, head-first, to the chest by a 10-foot-long great white shark  .
Revised: Abalone diver Eric Nerhus is recovering in hospital after being attacked by a 10-foot-long great white shark .
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