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Original:  The protests have continued all week and have spread out to all over the country.
Revised:  The protests have continued all week and have spread throughout the country.
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Original:    Spontaneous rallies by government supporters have also sprung up supporting Hugo Chavez's decision but, are not of the same size as some of the student protests.
Revised:  Spontaneous rallies by government supporters have also appeared, supporting Hugo Chavez's decision but, are not of the same size as some of the student protests.
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Original:    Spontaneous rallies by government supporters have also sprung up supporting Hugo Chavez's decision but, are not of the same size as some of the student protests.
Revised:  Spontaneous rallies by government supporters have also sprung up supporting Hugo Chavez's decision . These protests were not the same size as some of the student protests.
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Original:  The police and national guard have been working to make sure that such groups do not clash  . Most of the student protests have originated from universities not aligned with Chavez, who says that the students do not like the public universities that threaten and compete with them.
Revised:  The police and national guard have been working to make sure that these opposing groups do not clash . Most of the student protests have originated from universities not aligned with Chavez, who says that the students do not like the public universities that threaten and compete with them.
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Original:  The police and national guard have been working to make sure that such groups do not clash  . Most of the student protests have originated from universities not aligned with Chavez, who says that the students do not like the public universities that threaten and compete with them.
Revised:  The police and national guard have been working to make sure that such groups do not clash together . Most of the student protests have originated from universities not aligned with Chavez, who says that the students do not like the public universities that threaten and compete with them.
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Original:  Chavez has repeatedly said that the protests are organized by opposition forces wishing to destabilize the government much like the coup d' etat of April 11th-April 13th . Hugo Chávez has also repeatedly threatened the TV station Globovisión  which is the only significant opposition voice on television.
Revised:  Chavez 's statements Chavez has repeatedly stated that the protests are organized by opposition forces wishing to destabilize the government much like the coup d' etat of April 11th-April 13th . Hugo Chávez has also repeatedly threatened the TV station Globovisión which is the only significant opposition voice on television.
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Original:  Chavez has repeatedly said that the protests are organized by opposition forces wishing to destabilize the government much like the coup d' etat of April 11th-April 13th . Hugo Chávez has also repeatedly threatened the TV station Globovisión  which is the only significant opposition voice on television.
Revised:  Chavez has repeatedly said that the protests are organized by opposition forces wishing to destabilize the government much like the coup d' etat of April 11th-April 13th . Hugo Chávez has also repeatedly threatened the TV station Globovisión , which is the only significant opposition voice on television.
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Original:  Chavez claims that they encouraged his assassination and also helped the effort to unseat him during the previously mentioned coup d' etat .
Revised:  Chavez claims that they encouraged his assassination and also helped the effort to unseat him during the previously mentioned coup d' état attempt .
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Original:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident  "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression , " Pelosi  said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
Revised:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident : "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression , " Pelosi said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
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Original:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident  "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression , " Pelosi  said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
Revised:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression . " Pelosi said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
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Original:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident  "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression , " Pelosi  said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
Revised:  U.S House Speaker Nancy Pelosi has also made a statement about the incident "President Chavez should know that efforts to suppress the media will not only ultimately fail, but are also a detriment to one of the pillars of democracy: freedom of expression , " Pelosi also said in a statement Wednesday in Washington.
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Original:  Videos on YouTube are some of the most graphic videos shown because of the feared government repercussions if TV stations air any footage which might be deemed against the government .
Revised:  Videos that have been uploaded to YouTube are considered to be the most graphic videos shown because of the feared government repercussions if TV stations air any footage which might be deemed against the government .
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Original:  Videos on YouTube are some of the most graphic videos shown because of the feared government repercussions if TV stations air any footage which might be deemed against the government .
Revised:  Videos on YouTube are some of the most graphic , as television stations in Venezuela fear repercussion if they broadcast the footage .
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Original: Protesters threw rocks at police officers, who have responded with rubber bulelts and tear gas.
Revised: Protesters threw rocks at police officers, who have responded with rubber bullets and tear gas.
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Original:  The press freedom advocacy group Reports Without Borders called the closure "a serious violation of freedom of expression and a major setback to democracy and pluralism," and urged the international community to rally in defence of press freedom.
Revised:  The press freedom advocacy group Reporters Without Borders called the closure "a serious violation of freedom of expression and a major setback to democracy and pluralism," and urged the international community to rally in defence of press freedom.
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Original: Many websites related to the opposition have been down due to either high internet traffic or, theoretically, because CanTV , the Venezuelan telecom , will not allow access to these websites in Venezuela.
Revised: Many websites related to the opposition have been down due to either high internet traffic or, theoretically, because CanTV ; a large Venezuelan Telecommunications company , will not allow access to these websites in Venezuela.
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Original:  Most of the student protests have originated from universities who are not aligned with Chavez;
Revised:  Most of the student protests have originated from universities which are not aligned with Chavez;
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Original:  Cell phones to communicate and video from the phone is being broadcast on YouTube and other video sharing websites.
Revised:  Cell phones to communicate and video from phones is being broadcast on YouTube and other video sharing websites.
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Original:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council by making proposals that would shock most people . Santamaria said that if he was elected he would show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley , and he did so at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
Revised:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council . Santamaria said that if he was elected he would show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley , and he did so at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
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Original:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council by making proposals that would shock most people . Santamaria said that if he was elected he would show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley , and he did so at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
Revised:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council by making proposals that would shock most people . Ariel Santamaria promised to show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley , and he did so at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council by making proposals that would shock most people . Santamaria said that if he was elected he would show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley , and he did so at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
Revised:  A former mailman named Ariel Santamaria has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council by making proposals that would shock most people . Santamaria said that if he was elected he would show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley if he was elected and kept his word at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's  residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's  residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's 100,000 residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's  residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's residents that he would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's  residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a "light " if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, promised to the town's residents that he would "paint the town hall pink", turn the local town square into a "nudist pool," provide a field of "marijuana plants to grow in the local park" and would install a Global Positioning System, GPS, to the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
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Original:  An unnamed media consultant that works for Santamaria also set up a website for his campaign and also followed Santamaria where ever he went, but was also dressed as a pirate .
Revised:  An unnamed media consultant who works for Santamaria also set up a website for his campaign and also followed Santamaria where ever he went, but was also dressed as a pirate .
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Original:  An unnamed media consultant that works for Santamaria also set up a website for his campaign and also followed Santamaria where ever he went, but was also dressed as a pirate .
Revised:  An unnamed media consultant that works for Santamaria also set up a website for his campaign and also followed Santamaria where ever he went, but was also dressed as a pirate 
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Original:  There are nearly 100,000 people living in Reus
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Original: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
Revised: A marijuana cigarette, commonly known as a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
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Original: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
Revised: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
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Original: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
Revised: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
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Original: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
Revised: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and to plant a marijuana field in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
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Original: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park , has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
Revised: A marijuana cigarette, or commonly called a 'joint . ' A former mailman , who proposed to paint the town hall pink, turn the local town square into a nudist pool, and provide a field of marijuana plants to grow in the local park has been elected to the Reus, Spain town council.
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Original:  Ariel Santamaria promised to show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley if he was elected , and kept his word at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
Revised:  Ariel Santamaria promised to show up to the town's council meetings dressed up as Elvis Presley if he was elected and kept his word at the town's first meeting on Thursday.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria , who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a Global Positioning System (GPS ) for the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a Global Positioning System (GPS ) for the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria , who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a Global Positioning System (GPS ) for the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria , who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a GPS system at the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
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Original:  Before being elected, Santamaria , who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a Global Positioning System (GPS ) for the police department that would allow officers to hunt down people on the street who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
Revised:  Before being elected, Santamaria , who is a member of the Reus Independent Coordination, had also promised the town's 100,000 residents that he would install a Global Positioning System (GPS ) for the police department that would allow officers to track people who are smoking marijuana and provide them with a light if they need one.
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Original:  An unnamed media consultant who works for Santamaria set up a website for his campaign and, dressed as a pirate, followed Santamaria whereever he went
Revised:  An unnamed media consultant who works for Santamaria set up a website for his campaign , followed Santamaria wherever he went, and dressed as a pirate
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Original: He spelt the word 'serrefine' correctly to defeat second place Nate Gartke, of Canada, to win the 80th annual bee.
Revised: He spelt the word 'serrefine' correctly to defeat second place Nate Gartke, of Canada, and win the 80th annual bee.
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Original: The competition , which started with a competition-record 286 entrants on Wednesday, were narrowed down to 59 at the start of the final day.
Revised: The bee , which started with a competition-record 286 entrants on Wednesday, were narrowed down to 59 at the start of the final day.
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Original: In one of the deadiest attacks in the southern Thailand insurgency, 11 soldiers were killed in a roadside bombing and ambush attack in Yala Province.
Revised: In one of the deadiest attacks in the south Thailand insurgency, 11 soldiers were killed in a roadside bombing and ambush attack in Yala Province.
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Original:  Occurring at around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday, a pickup truck carrying around a dozen Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
Revised:  At around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday, a pickup truck carrying around a dozen Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
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Original:  Occurring at around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday, a pickup truck carrying around a dozen Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
Revised:  Occurring at around 10 p.m. local time (1600 GMT) on Thursday, a pickup truck carrying 12 Royal Thai Army soldiers was hit by a remote-control bomb planted at the roadside.
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Original:  An unknown number of gunmen then ambushed the truck . Eight soldiers were killed instantly, army spokesman Colonel Acra Tiproch said , and two later died at hospital that evening from their injuries .
Revised:  An unknown number of gunmen then ambushed the truck . Eight soldiers were killed instantly, army spokesman Colonel Acra Tiproch said . Two later died at hospital that evening from their injuries .
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Original:  "The militants have stepped up attacks in order to increase pressure on authorities ," Colonel Acra was quoted as saying by Agence France-Presse . " This was the biggest single attack yet, " he said of Thursday's bombing and ambush of the soldiers.
Revised:  "The militants have stepped up attacks in order to increase pressure on authorities ," Colonel Acra said . " This was the biggest single attack yet, " he said of Thursday's bombing and ambush of the soldiers.
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Original:  "The militants have stepped up attacks in order to increase pressure on authorities ," Colonel Acra was quoted as saying by Agence France-Presse . " This was the biggest single attack yet, " he said of Thursday's bombing and ambush of the soldiers.
Revised:  "The militants have stepped up attacks in order to increase pressure on authorities ," Colonel Acra was quoted as saying by Agence France-Presse . " This was the biggest single attack yet, " 
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