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Original:  The Sea Diamond, a 21 year old ship sank at the end of its four day cruise, which included visits to Rhodes, Patios, Crete and Mykonos islands.
Revised:  The Sea Diamond, a 21 year old vessel sank at the end of its four day cruise, which included visits to Rhodes, Patios, Crete and Mykonos islands.
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Original:  The Sea Diamond, a 21 year old ship sank at the end of its four day cruise, which included visits to Rhodes, Patios, Crete and Mykonos islands.
Revised:  The Sea Diamond, a 21 year old ship sank at the end of a four day cruise, which included visits to Rhodes, Patios, Crete and Mykonos islands.
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Original:  From the start to the end of the race  two "silver arrows" had the lead against their competitors from Ferrari.
Revised:  From the start to the end of the race , the two "silver arrows" had the lead against their competitors from Ferrari.
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Original:  From the start to the end of the race  two "silver arrows" had the lead against their competitors from Ferrari.
Revised:  From the start to the end of the race two "silver arrows" held the lead against their competitors from Ferrari.
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Original:  Alonso created a comfort gap, while Hamilton was holding Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen behind.
Revised:  Alonso created a comfortable gap, while Hamilton was holding Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen behind.
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Original:  Alonso created a comfort gap, while Hamilton was holding Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen behind.
Revised:  Alonso created a comfort gap, while Hamilton held off Felipe Massa and Kimi Räikkönen behind.
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Original:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race  trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake even before the first pit-stop and found himself out of the track.
Revised:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race , trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake even before the first pit-stop and found himself out of the track.
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Original:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race  trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake even before the first pit-stop and found himself out of the track.
Revised:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake before the first pit-stop and found himself out of the track.
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Original:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race  trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake even before the first pit-stop and found himself out of the track.
Revised:  Filipe pushed very hard on the rookie who drives his second race trying to overtake him, but made a crucial mistake even before the first pit-stop and found himself off the track.
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Original:  Massa finally classified 5th after Nick Heidfeld, BMW team driver.
Revised:  Massa finally finished fifth, behind Nick Heidfeld, BMW team driver.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella , driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault , came sixth, with his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen eighth . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, from Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split the two Renaults in seventh . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz , from Williams-Toyota while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
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Original:  Giancarlo Fisichella  driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli,  Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz  from Williams-Toyota  while his teammate Nico Rosberg who was driving much closer to the first place was out in the second part of the race due to the engine failure.
Revised:  Giancarlo Fisichella driving for Renault comes to be 6th while his young teammate Heikki Kovalainen 8th . Jarno Trulli, Toyota, split two Renaults by his 7th place . Alexander Wurz from Williams-Toyota while his teammate , Nico Rosberg, who had been driving in sixth place, retired following the second round of pit stops due to engine failure.
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Original:  Mark Webber,  Red Bull-Renault, closed the top ten  making his first finish on Malaysian Gran Prixafter 5 previous seasons here.
Revised:  Mark Webber, from Red Bull-Renault, closed the top ten making his first finish on Malaysian Gran Prixafter 5 previous seasons here.
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Original:  Mark Webber,  Red Bull-Renault, closed the top ten  making his first finish on Malaysian Gran Prixafter 5 previous seasons here.
Revised:  Mark Webber, Red Bull-Renault, closed the top ten , making his first finish on Malaysian Gran Prixafter 5 previous seasons here.
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Original:  [[File:Afghanistan-Helmand.png|Location of Helmand Province within Afghanistan]] Naqshbandi was taken hostage in Helmand Province, along with Italian reporter Daniele Mastrogiacomo and their driver, Syed Agha.
Revised:  [[File:Afghanistan-Helmand.png|Location of Helmand Province within Afghanistan]] Naqshbandi was taken hostage in Helmand Province, along with Italian reporter and their driver, Syed Agha.
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Original:  The exchange of La Repubblica reporter Mastrogiacomo for five Taliban prisoners was criticized, by security experts, as a precedent that could encourgage further kidnappings.
Revised:  The exchange of reporter Mastrogiacomo for five Taliban prisoners was criticized, by security experts, as a precedent that could encourgage further kidnappings.
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Original:  The exchange of La Repubblica reporter Mastrogiacomo for five Taliban prisoners was criticized, by security experts, as a precedent that could encourgage further kidnappings.
Revised:  The exchange of La Repubblica reporter Mastrogiacomo for five Taliban prisoners was criticized, by security experts, as a precedent that could encourage further kidnappings.
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Original:  The Taliban are holding two French aid workers and three Afghan colleagues, kidnapped last week in Nimroz province , and are threatening to decide their fate next week.
Revised:  The Taliban are holding two French aid workers and three Afghan colleagues, kidnapped last week in Nimroz Province , and are threatening to decide their fate next week.
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Original:  It is expected that Mukherjee will be back on his feet after two days  .
Revised:  In statement, he said he would be back at work soon: "I am well but doctors have advised me 48 hours rest. I hope to be back to work after that period," the Press Trust of India reported. .
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Original:  Until then he had been minister of defence.
Revised:  Until then he had been the minister for defence.
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Original:  He has recieved injuries on the head and other body parts.
Revised:  He has received injuries on the head and other body parts.
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Original:  Prime Minister Manmohan Singh recieved Mukherjee at the airport when he was brought back from West Bengal
Revised:  Prime Minister Manmohan Singh received Mukherjee at the airport when he was brought back from West Bengal
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Original:   State Department officials said that the sale would improve regional security.
Revised:  U.S. State Department officials said that the sale would improve regional security.
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Original:  President Bush personally telephoned Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh to inform him of the new developments before the announcement, according to whitehouse officials.
Revised:  President Bush personally telephoned Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh to inform him of the new developments before the announcement, according to White House officials.
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Original:  The announcement was  welcomed by the Pakistani government.
Revised:  The announcement was also welcomed by the Pakistani government.
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Original: Six members of the ISAF killed in sourhern Afganistan ISAF logo Six solidiers with the International Security Assistance Force (ISAF) were killed today.
Revised: Six members of the ISAF killed in southern Afganistan ISAF logo Six solidiers with the International Security Assistance Force (ISAF) were killed today.
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Original:  The soldiers will be remembered at the 90th anniversary of the battle of Vimy Ridge.
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Original: image :Papoulias.
Revised: Image :Papoulias.
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Original:  Ecumenical Hellenism program announced that the second decade of the program's operation (2007-2016) will start with a concert with the famous greek singer George Dalaras, at the Athens Concert Hall in mid-June as well as with the scheduled trip of the program to Mexico, during July 2007.
Revised:  Ecumenical Hellenism program announced that the second decade of the program's operation (2007-2016) will start with a concert with the famous Greek singer George Dalaras, at the Athens Concert Hall in mid-June as well as with the scheduled trip of the program to Mexico, during July 2007.
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Original:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in Beijing, China on the occassion of the 2008 Olympic Games.
Revised:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in Beijing, China on the occasion of the 2008 Olympic Games.
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Original:  External Links URL - Ecumenical Hellenism program category:Greece category:Religion category :Chi
Revised:  External links URL - Ecumenical Hellenism program category:Greece category:Religion category :Chi
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Original:  External Links URL - Ecumenical Hellenism program category:Greece category:Religion category :Chi
Revised:  External Links URL - Ecumenical Hellenism program Category:Greece Category:Religion Category :Chi
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Original: JPG| 140px|Greek President, Karolos Papoulias.
Revised: JPG| 140px|Greek President, 
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Original:  The Ecumenical Hellenism program is going to get into its second decade of operation which officially started on March 22, when the heads of the program, Stavros Panousopoulos and professor Athanasios Angelopoulos payed a visit to the President of the Hellenic Republic , at the Presidential Palace in Athens.
Revised:  . The program is going to get into its second decade of operation which officially started on March 22, when the heads of the program, Stavros Panousopoulos and professor Athanasios Angelopoulos payed a visit to the President of the Hellenic Republic , at the Presidential Palace in Athens.
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Original:  The previous Greek President, Costis Stephanopoulos had also offered his official support to the program's initiatives.
Revised:  The previous Greek President, had also offered his official support to the program's initiatives.
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Original:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in Beijing, China on the occasion of the 2008 Olympic Games .
Revised:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in , on the occasion of the 2008 Olympic Games .
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Original:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in Beijing, China on the occasion of the 2008 Olympic Games .
Revised:  According to the program's officials, in August 2008, the second world conference of expatriate Greeks will take place in Beijing, China on the occasion of the .
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Original:  The non-governmental program Ecumenical Hellenism operates since 1995 and exists under the patronage of the Hellenic Republic as well as under the blessing and support of the Orthodox Ecumenical Patriarchate and the Archbishop of Athens and All Greece Christodoulos . Category:Greece Category:Religion Category: Chi
Revised:  The non-governmental program Ecumenical Hellenism operates since 1995 and exists under the patronage of the as well as under the blessing and support of the Orthodox Ecumenical Patriarchate and the Archbishop of Athens and All Greece Christodoulos . Category:Greece Category:Religion Category: Chi
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Original:  The non-governmental program Ecumenical Hellenism operates since 1995 and exists under the patronage of the Hellenic Republic as well as under the blessing and support of the Orthodox Ecumenical Patriarchate and the Archbishop of Athens and All Greece Christodoulos . Category:Greece Category:Religion Category: Chi
Revised:  The non-governmental program Ecumenical Hellenism operates since 1995 and exists under the patronage of the Hellenic Republic as well as under the blessing and support of the Orthodox and the . Category:Greece Category:Religion Category: Chi
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Original:  The Red Wings won the Western Conference crown with 113 points from 50 wins, 19 losses, and 13 overtime losses  
Revised:  The Red Wings won the Western Conference crown with 113 points from 50 wins, 19 losses, and 13 overtime losses . 
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Original: Going into the final day of the regular season, the Islanders and Toronto Maple Leafs were tied for the eighth seed in the Eastern Conference, but an Islanders win  secured their spot into the playoffs.
Revised: Going into the final day of the regular season, the Toronto Maple Leafs were tied for the eighth seed in the Eastern Conference, but an Islanders win secured their spot into the playoffs.
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Original:  Last year's champions, the Carolina Hurricanes , became the third team to win a Stanley Cup and fail to reach the playoffs the following season.
Revised:  Last year's champions, the , became the third team to win a Stanley Cup and fail to reach the playoffs the following season.
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Original:  Having the best regular season record in the league, the Sabres took home the Presidents' Trophy .
Revised:  Having the best regular season record in the league, the Sabres took home the .
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Original: 180px|Oxfam Logo Up to four times as many women as men died in the December 26 Indian Ocean Tsunami, figures published by Oxfam International today reveal.
Revised:  Up to four times as many women as men died in the December 26 Indian Ocean Tsunami, figures published by Oxfam International today reveal.
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Original:  Commissioner Bud Selig has discussed the possibility with officials in the league, and at 8am ET, the league is expected to make an announcement about changing the venue for the upcoming series to Angel Stadium.
Revised:  Commissioner Bud Selig has discussed the possibility of changing the venue for the upcoming series to Angel Stadium.
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Original: Image:Jacobs_Field.jpg|Jacobs FieldCredit Chris Metcalf]] Major League Baseball is considering a schedule change in the upcoming Anaheim Angels at Cleveland Indians series after snow and cold has led to the cancellation of the Tribe's four-game home opener against the Seattle Mariners at Jacobs Field.
Revised: Image:Jacobs_Field.jpg|Jacobs FieldCredit Chris Metcalf]] Major League Baseball is moving the upcoming Anaheim Angels at Cleveland Indians series after snow and cold has led to the cancellation of the Tribe's four-game home opener against the Seattle Mariners at Jacobs Field.
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Original: Image:Jacobs _Field .jpg|Jacobs FieldCredit Chris Metcalf]] Major League Baseball is moving the upcoming Anaheim Angels at Cleveland Indians series to Miller Park in Milwaukee after snow and cold has led to the cancellation of the Tribe's four-game home opener against the Seattle Mariners at Jacobs Field.
Revised: Image:Jacobs Field .jpg|Jacobs FieldCredit Chris Metcalf]] Major League Baseball is moving the upcoming Anaheim Angels at Cleveland Indians series to Miller Park in Milwaukee after snow and cold has led to the cancellation of the Tribe's four-game home opener against the Seattle Mariners at Jacobs Field.
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Original:  Catholic services on this day are strictly liturgies of the word with optional eucharist , as the Mass cannot be celebrated on Good Friday.
Revised:  Catholic services on this day are strictly liturgies of the word with an optional Eucharist , as the Mass cannot be celebrated on Good Friday.
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Original:  Najaf province in Iraq Al-Sadr called the demonstration in a statement that he delivered yesterday.
Revised:  Al-Sadr called the demonstration in a statement that he delivered yesterday.
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Original:  In the speech he called fo
Revised:  In the statement he ordered for his supporters to stop attacking their fellow Iraqis and instead work to fight the American occupiers. He also encouraged the Iraqi army and police to stop cooperating with America. "You, the Iraqi army and police forces, don't walk alongside the occupiers, because they are your archenemy," the statement said. "God has ordered you to be patient in front of your enemy, and unify your efforts against them - not against the sons of Iraq.
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Original: The rally was largely Shi' te , as it had been ordered by controversial cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
Revised: The rally was largely Shi' ite , as it had been ordered by controversial cleric Muqtada al-Sadr.
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Original:  The Panthers have not done much outside of the Carr deal this off-season, with 21 of last season's 22 starting players returning to the team  
Revised:  The Panthers have not done much outside of the Carr deal this off-season, with 21 of last season's 22 starting players returning to the team . 
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Original:  Carr was sacked 249 times in the past five seasons with the Texans, and was released by the organization after they made a trade with the Atlanta Falcons to aquire Matt Schaub, who had served as the backup quarterback to Michael Vick.
Revised:  Carr was sacked 249 times in the past five seasons with the Texans, and was released by the organization after they made a trade with the Atlanta Falcons to acquire Matt Schaub, who had served as the backup quarterback to Michael Vick.
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Original:  Nonetheless, the two nations are seeking a free trade agreement (FTA), which some observers have declared as having the potential to be "the most significant event of this decade" for the Asian region  See al
Revised:  Nonetheless, the two nations are seeking a free trade agreement (FTA), which some observers have declared as having the potential to be "the most significant event of this decade" for the Asian region . See al
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Original:  Jimbo Wales, the founder of Wikipedia and the Wikimedia Foundation, is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers and the Wikimedia Foundation.
Revised:  Jimbo Wales, a founder of Wikipedia and the Wikimedia Foundation, is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers and the Wikimedia Foundation.
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Original:  Jimbo Wales , the founder of Wikipedia and the Wikimedia Foundation, is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers and the Wikimedia Foundation.
Revised:  Jimbo Wales is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers and the Wikimedia Foundation.
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Original:  Jimbo Wales is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers and the Wikimedia Foundation .
Revised:  Jimbo Wales is teaming up with book publisher Tim O'Reilly to create a "code of conduct" for bloggers .
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Original:  The code is expected to address issues of free speech and the practice of allowing mean-spirited comments made by users to remain in the blogosphere and Wikimedia projects .
Revised:  The code is expected to address issues of free speech and the practice of allowing mean-spirited comments made by users to remain in the blogosphere .
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