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Original: Susana Marcos Celestino Susana Marcos Celestino (Salamanca, 1970) is a Spanish physicist specialized in human vision  applied optics.
Revised: Susana Marcos Celestino Susana Marcos Celestino (Salamanca, 1970) is a Spanish physicist specialized in human vision and applied optics.
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Original:   In her native city, she studied and obtained the master degree and PhD, with a special award , in Physics Sciences at the University of Salamanca.
Revised:  Education Marcos studied at the University of Salamanca and obtained an MSc and then PhD in Physics, which she was granted with a special award , in Physics Sciences at the University of Salamanca.
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Original:  After a predoctoral training as a fellow in the Conseyu Cimeru d'Investigaciones Científiques (CSIC), she had extensive postdoctoral training in different prestigious institutions in Europe and United States.
Revised:  After a predoctoral training as a fellow in the Conseyu Cimeru d'Investigaciones Científiques (CSIC), she had postdoctoral training in different prestigious institutions in Europe and United States.
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Original:  After a predoctoral training as a fellow in the Conseyu Cimeru d'Investigaciones Científiques (CSIC), she had extensive postdoctoral training in different prestigious institutions in Europe and United States.
Revised:  After a predoctoral training as a fellow in the Conseyu Cimeru d'Investigaciones Científiques (CSIC), she had extensive postdoctoral training in Europe and the United States.
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Original:  Academic and professional biography From 1993 to 1996 she had a predoctoral fellowship in the Department of Vision and Physiological Optics at the Institute of Optics of the CSIC From 1997 to 2000 she worked as postdoctoral in Schepens Eye Research Institute of the University of Harvard Medical School in Boston (Massachusetts, EEXX).
Revised:  Academic and professional biography From 1993 to 1996 she had a predoctoral fellowship in the Department of Vision and Physiological Optics at the Institute of Optics of the CSIC From 1997 to 2000 , as a postdoctoral researcher in Schepens Eye Research Institute of the University of Harvard Medical School in Boston (Massachusetts, EEXX).
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Original:  Academic and professional biography From 1993 to 1996 she had a predoctoral fellowship in the Department of Vision and Physiological Optics at the Institute of Optics of the CSIC From 1997 to 2000 she worked as postdoctoral in Schepens Eye Research Institute of the University of Harvard Medical School in Boston (Massachusetts, EEXX).
Revised:  Academic and professional biography From 1993 to 1996 she had a predoctoral fellowship in the Department of Vision and Physiological Optics at the Institute of Optics of the CSIC From 1997 to 2000 she worked as postdoctoral in Schepens Eye Research Institute of the Harvard University Medical School in Boston (Massachusetts, EEXX).
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Original:   In 2005 she got the position of titular scientist of the CSIC, developing her own Institute of Optics  In 2006, she was awarded the position of professor of research at the CSIC, following in the Institute of Optics.
Revised:  In 2005 she got the position of titular scientist of the CSIC, developing her own Institute of Optics . In 2006, she was awarded the position of professor of research at the CSIC, following in the Institute of Optics.
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Original:   Academic distinctions and nomads Scholarships The following scholarships were awarded for research: 1992 Beca del Consejo Cimeru de Investigaciones Científicas.
Revised:  Academic distinctions and nomads 1992 Beca del Consejo Cimeru de Investigaciones Científicas.
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Original:  2001 Scholarship for visiting professionals at the Queensland University of Teens Participation in professional societies of specialty and services to the community 1999-2001.
Revised:  2001 Scholarship for visiting professionals at the Queensland University of Teens Participation in professional societies 1999-2001.
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Original:  Vice President of the technical group Applications of Visual Science of The Optical Society  2001-2003.
Revised:  Vice President of the technical group Applications of Visual Science of The Optical Society . 2001-2003.
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Original:  Chair of the Applications of Visual Science Technical Group of The Optical Society , Vision and division of the colors  2004-2008.
Revised:  Chair of the Applications of Visual Science Technical Group of The Optical Society : vision and division of the colors 2004-2008.
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Original:  Chair of the Applications of Visual Science Technical Group of The Optical Society , Vision and division of the colors  2004-2008.
Revised:  Chair of the Applications of Visual Science Technical Group of The Optical Society , Vision and division of the colors . 2004-2008.
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Original:  President of the National Committee of Visual Science, Socieda Española de Óptica  2003.
Revised:  President of the National Committee of Visual Science, Socieda Española de Óptica . 2003.
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Original:  Member of the " Physiological Optics and Visual Psychophysical Committee " ,
Revised:  Member of the Physiological Optics and Visual Psychophysical Committee " ,
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Original:  Member of the " Physiological Optics and Visual Psychophysical Committee " ,
Revised:  Member of the " Physiological Optics and Visual Psychophysical Committee ,
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Original:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology  2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC  2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium  2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC  2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
Revised:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology . 2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC 2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium 2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC 2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
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Original:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology  2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC  2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium  2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC  2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
Revised:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology 2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC . 2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium 2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC 2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
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Original:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology  2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC  2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium  2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC  2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
Revised:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology 2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC 2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium . 2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC 2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
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Original:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology  2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC  2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium  2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC  2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
Revised:  Association for Research in Vision and Ophthalmology 2009-2012 Director of the Optics Institute Daza de Valdés, CSIC 2011 Faculty Madrid MIT M + Vision Consortium 2012 Director of the Physics Center Miguel Ángel Catalán, CSIC . 2012 Director-at-large Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Societies to which she belong Susana Marcos is member of many professional societies in her research field:
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Original:  International Conference of Myopia (Tubingen, Germany) 2010-2011 Member of the OSA Fellow Committee 2012- Optical Society of America, Director-at-Large 2012- Member of OSA Awards Committee Presence in editorial boards%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2002.
Revised:  International Conference of Myopia (Tubingen, Germany) 2010-2011 Member of the OSA Fellow Committee 2012- Optical Society of America, Director-at-Large 2012- Member of OSA Awards Committee %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2002.
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Original:  Special Issue: "Human Vision" 2014 Editor Accompanied by "Optics", Optical Society of America Research projects From the year 2000 to 2015 she receives a series of funds from institutions interested in researching various topics of her specialty such as:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% With public funds 2000-2001 . US-Spain Program of Science and Teunology 2000.
Revised:  Special Issue: "Human Vision" 2014 Editor Accompanied by "Optics", Optical Society of America %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% With public funds 2000-2001 . US-Spain Program of Science and Teunology 2000.
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Original:  Special Issue: "Human Vision" 2014 Editor Accompanied by "Optics", Optical Society of America Research projects From the year 2000 to 2015 she receives a series of funds from institutions interested in researching various topics of her specialty such as:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% With public funds 2000-2001 . US-Spain Program of Science and Teunology 2000.
Revised:  Special Issue: "Human Vision" 2014 Editor Accompanied by "Optics", Optical Society of America Research projects From the year 2000 to 2015 she receives a series of funds from institutions interested in researching various topics of her specialty such as:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 2000-2001 . US-Spain Program of Science and Teunology 2000.
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Original:  Plenoptika, Boston, EEXX Publications Until 2009 she published more than 130 monographic studies of a certain extent and book chapters in collaboration with other researchers or alone.
Revised:  Plenoptika, Boston, EEXX 
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Original:  index h = 36. (Web of Science, April 2015) Patents She patented a dozen methods and / or elements that significantly modify or ameyoren the optical deficiencies and with crucial meues in ophthalmolog 
Revised:  index h = 36. (Web of Science, April 2015) Patents She patented a dozen methods and / or elements that significantly modify or ameyoren the optical deficiencies and with crucial meues in ophthalmolog Reference
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Original: Susana Marcos Celestino ( Salamanca, 1970) is a Spanish physicist specialising in human vision and applied optics.
Revised: Susana Marcos Celestino ( born 1970) is a Spanish physicist specialising in human vision and applied optics.
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Original:  1992 Beca del Consejo Cimeru de Investigaciones Científicas . 1993 Resarch Comunidá.
Revised:  1992 Beca del Consejo Cimeru de Investigaciones Científicas 1993 Resarch Comunidá.
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Original:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
Revised:  University of Salamanca 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
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Original:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
Revised:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
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Original:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
Revised:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
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Original:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland . Category:
Revised:  University of Salamanca . 1997 she was awarded of a Fulbright Postdoctoral fellowship 1997-1999 fellowship for a long-term program on Human Rescue Science . 2001 scholarship for visiting professionals at University of Queensland Category:
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Original: 21st-century Spanish scientists Category:1970 births Category:People from Salamanca Category: Optical Society fellows Category:University of Salamanca faculty Category:University of Salamanca alumni Category:Opthalmologists Category:Spanish women scientists Category:Spanish physicists Category:1970 births Category:Living peop
Revised: 21st-century Spanish scientists Category:1970 births Category:People from Salamanca Category: Fellows of the Optical Society Category:University of Salamanca faculty Category:University of Salamanca alumni Category:Opthalmologists Category:Spanish women scientists Category:Spanish physicists Category:1970 births Category:Living peop
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Original: 21st-century Spanish scientists Category:1970 births Category:People from Salamanca Category: Optical Society fellows Category:University of Salamanca faculty Category:University of Salamanca alumni Category:Opthalmologists Category:Spanish women scientists Category:Spanish physicists Category:1970 births Category:Living peop
Revised: 21st-century Spanish scientists Category:1970 births Category:People from Salamanca Category: Optical Society fellows Category:University of Salamanca faculty Category:University of Salamanca alumni Category:Opthalmologists Category:Spanish women physicists Category:21st-century women scientists Category:1970 births Category:Living peop
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Original:  Education Marcos studied at the University of Salamanca in her hometown and obtained an MSc and then PhD in Physics, which she was granted with a special award.
Revised:  Education Marcos studied at the University of Salamanca in her hometown and obtained an M.Sc. and then Ph.D. in Physics, which she was granted with a special award.
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Original:  12 July 1932 the Norwegian flag was raised at Myggbukta in the north , where Helge Ingstad was named governor , and Finn Devold was asked to formally raise the flag at Finnsbu  .
Revised:  12 July 1932 the Norwegian flag was raised at Myggbukta in the north , where Helge Ingstad was named governor . At the same time Finn Devold was asked to formally raise the flag at Finnsbu .
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Original: Spencer Apollonio, Lands That Hold One Spellbound: A Story of East Greenland, 2008, pp. 188-189 However some of the stations, such as Jonsbu at the northern end and Torgilsbu at the southern, continued operation for a few years under Danish jurisdiction and restrictions.
Revised: Spencer Apollonio, Lands That Hold One Spellbound: A Story of East Greenland, 2008, pp. 188-189 Even then, some of the stations, such as Jonsbu at the northern end and Torgilsbu at the southern, continued operation for a few years under Danish jurisdiction and restrictions.
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Original:  Cons. Explor Mer, 154, Copenhagen 1963, pp. 98–108 The formation and disappearance of a stock unit of Norwegian herring , the Directorate of Fisheries, Skr. Marine Surveys 15 No. 1, Bergen 1968 Unpublished paper Devold's diary records from the wintering in Southeast Greenland 1931/32 and about wildlife on the Finnsbu radio station in Southeast Greenland Sept.
Revised:  Cons. Explor Mer, 154, Copenhagen 1963, pp. 98–108 The formation and disappearance of a stock unit of Norwegian herring , the Directorate of Fisheries, Skr. Marine Surveys 15 No. 1, Bergen 1968 Unpublished paper Devold's diary records from the wintering in Southeast Greenland 1931/32 and about wildlife near the Finnsbu radio station in Southeast Greenland Sept.
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Original:  Finn Devold - Store norske leksikonFinn Devold – Norsk biografisk leksikon Biography Finn interrupted his science studies and traveled to the Arctic in 1923.
Revised:  Biography Finn interrupted his science studies and traveled to the Arctic in 1923.
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Original:  Om bestigningen av Beerenberg After leaving Jan Mayen in 1928 Finn traveled to northeastern Greenland with his brother, who was a leader of the "Greenland case" (Grønlandssaken), a movement that sought to bring large swathes of East Greenland under Norwegian sovereignty.
Revised:  After leaving Jan Mayen in 1928 Finn traveled to northeastern Greenland with his brother, who was a leader of the "Greenland case" (Grønlandssaken), a movement that sought to bring large swathes of East Greenland under Norwegian sovereignty.
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Original: Ingolf Røttingen, lengre omtale fra Havforskningsinstituttet og kronikk i Bergens Tidende (24.4.2002) Norwegian claims in East Greenland Finn took an active part in the 1931-33 Norwegian territorial claim movement in Greenland led from Myggbukta Station, where his brother was leader of expeditions that were undertaken with the station as a base.
Revised: Ingolf Røttingen, lengre omtale fra Havforskningsinstituttet og kronikk i Bergens Tidende (24.4.2002) Norwegian claims in East Greenland Finn took an active part in the 1931–33 Norwegian territorial claim movement in Greenland led from Myggbukta Station, where his brother was leader of expeditions that were undertaken with the station as a base.
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Original:  Norwegian Expedition to South-East Greenland, 1932 Finn Devold led the actions in southeastern Greenland, where he had established the Finnsbu radio station.
Revised:  Finn Devold led the actions in southeastern Greenland, where he had established the Finnsbu radio station.
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Original:  Recent Norwegian Expeditions to Southeast-Greenland, Gunnar Horn Even then, some of the stations, such as Jonsbu at the northern end and Torgilsbu at the southern, continued operation for a few years under Danish jurisdiction and restrictions.
Revised:  Even then, some of the stations, such as Jonsbu at the northern end and Torgilsbu at the southern, continued operation for a few years under Danish jurisdiction and restrictions.
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Original:  Togerther with his brother Hallvard Devold, Finn shared the same interest in the Arctic areas and in the expansion of Norwegian sovereignty in Greenland.
Revised:  Together with his brother Hallvard Devold, Finn shared the same interest in the Arctic areas and in the expansion of Norwegian sovereignty in Greenland.
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Original:  His research enabled him to publish some of the results in the national pressafter carefully surveying Atlantic herring's migration patterns before winter herring fishing .
Revised:  Finn carefully surveyed Atlantic herring's migration patterns before winter herring fishing. His research led him to publish some of the results in the national pressafter carefully surveying Atlantic herring's migration patterns before winter herring fishing .
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Original:  His research led him to publish some of the results  in the Norwegian press  .
Revised:  He published some of the results in the Norwegian press .
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Original:  His research led him to publish some of the results  in the Norwegian press  .
Revised:  His research led him to publish some of the results of his research in the Norwegian press .
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Original:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemets membrane and the endothelial URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the  limbus.
Revised:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemet's membrane and the endothelial URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the limbus.
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Original:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemets membrane and the endothelial URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the  limbus.
Revised:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemets membrane and the corneal URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the limbus.
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Original:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemets membrane and the endothelial URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the  limbus.
Revised:  The two corneal layers which are exchanged are the Descemets membrane and the endothelial URL The patient's corneal tissue is gently excised and replaced with the donor tissue via small 'clear corneal incisions' (small corneal incisions just anterior to the corneal limbus.
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Original:  To ensure the air tamponade is effective, it is necessary for patients to strictly posture so that they are looking up at the ceiling during the recovery period and until the air bubble has fully URL Corneal dystrophies involving the corneal endothelial layer, eg: Fuchs endothelial dystrophy posterior polymorphous corneal dystrophy Pseudophakic bullous keratopathy Iridocorneal endothelial syndrome
Revised:  To ensure the air tamponade is effective, it is necessary for patients to strictly posture so that they are looking up at the ceiling during the recovery period and until the air bubble has fully URL Corneal dystrophy involving the corneal endothelial layer, eg: Fuchs endothelial dystrophy posterior polymorphous corneal dystrophy Pseudophakic bullous keratopathy Iridocorneal endothelial syndrome
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