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Original: A preoperative BNP can be predictive of a risk of an acute cardiac events during vascular surgery.
Revised: A preoperative BNP can be predictive of a risk of an acute cardiac event during vascular surgery.
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Original: Low BNP was found to be a predictor of survival to age 90 in men.
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Original:  The consequences include the infection of the neighbouring organs (for example transverse URL or retroperitoneum, and/or URL Perirenal abscess also may UR  
Revised:  The consequences include the infection of the neighbouring organs (for example transverse URL or retroperitoneum, and/or URL Perirenal abscess also may URL 
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Original:  The consequences include the infection of the neighbouring organs (for example transverse URL or retroperitoneum, and/or URL Perirenal abscess also may UR  
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Original:  The consequences include the infection of the neighbouring organs (for example transverse URL or retroperitoneum, and/or URL Perirenal abscess also may URL
Revised:  The consequences include the infection of the neighbouring organs (for example transverse URL or retroperitoneum, and/or URL Perirenal abscess also may occur.
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Original:  When used intermittently, paperboys would roll the papers and insert  in the the plastic sleeves as part of their daily preparations.
Revised:  When used intermittently, paperboys would roll the papers and insert them in the the plastic sleeves as part of their daily preparations.
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Original:  These bags are often made of polyethylene and may be clear to display the newspaper inside, but are ordinarily imprinted with advertisements.
Revised:  These bags are primarily made of polyethylene and may be clear to display the newspaper inside, but are ordinarily imprinted with advertisements.
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Original:  He helped set up one of the largest wind farm in Asia in Kathi village, Patan , providing employment to 1500 people . Patankar also held the position of chairman of the Maharashtra State Road Development Corporation.
Revised:  He helped set up one of the largest wind farm in Asia in Patan taluka of Maharashtra . Patankar also held the position of chairman of the Maharashtra State Road Development Corporation.
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Original: Captain Samuel van Leer was born in 1747 at Marple Township.
Revised: Captain Samuel Van Leer was born in 1747 at Marple Township.
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Original:  Captain Samuel van Leer's family and history is also part of historical tour for the Van Leer Cabin and his family's home Van Leer Pleasant Hill Plantation.
Revised:  Captain Samuel Van Leer's family and history is also part of historical tour for the Van Leer Cabin and his family's home Van Leer Pleasant Hill Plantation.
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Original:  His granddaughter  married George Hussey Earle Sr., who was also part of the anti-slavery movement . Blake Ragsdale Van Leer, a notable military Colonel and president of Georgia Tech (great-great-grandson) Maryly Van Leer Peck, daughter of Blake was inducted in the Florida Women's Hall of Fame and received an award from Daughters of the American Revolution.
Revised:  His granddaughter married George Hussey Earle Sr., who was also part of the anti-slavery movement . 
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Original:  George Howard Earle Jr., was a  Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat"
Revised:  George Howard Earle Jr., was a prominent Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat"
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Original:  who was highly sought after to save ailing corporations from financial ruin (Great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat (George Howard Earle Jr's son) Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter and George Howard Earle Jr's Sister) Isaac Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
Revised:  (great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat (George Howard Earle Jr's son) Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter and George Howard Earle Jr's Sister) Isaac Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
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Original:  who was highly sought after to save ailing corporations from financial ruin (Great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat (George Howard Earle Jr's son) Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter and George Howard Earle Jr's Sister) Isaac Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
Revised:  who was highly sought after to save ailing corporations from financial ruin (Great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter and George Howard Earle Jr's Sister) Isaac Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
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Original:  who was highly sought after to save ailing corporations from financial ruin (Great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat (George Howard Earle Jr's son) Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter and George Howard Earle Jr's Sister) Isaac Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
Revised:  who was highly sought after to save ailing corporations from financial ruin (Great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat (George Howard Earle Jr's son) Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter ) Isaac Wayne Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15
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Original: George Howard Earle Jr., was a prominent Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat" (great-grandson) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter)  Isaac Wayne Van Leer, Samuel's grandson enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15.
Revised: George Howard Earle Jr., was a prominent Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat" (great-grandson) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet (great-granddaughter) Isaac Wayne Van Leer, enlisted for the Union during the Civil War at age 15.
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Original: Captain Samuel Van Leer (1747–1825) was a well known Pennsylvania Ironmaster and a United States Army officer.
Revised: Captain Samuel Van Leer (1747–1825) was a well known Pennsylvania Irons works owner and a United States Army officer.
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Original: George Howard Earle Jr., was a prominent Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat" ( great-grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet and daughter of George Hussey Earle, a well known abolitionist (great-granddaughter) Bird Calladay VanLeer (1867-1933), owner of the Broadview VanLeer Mansion (great-grandson)Welsh Founders of Pennsylvania.
Revised: George Howard Earle Jr., was a prominent Philadelphia lawyer and "financial diplomat" ( grandson ) George Howard Earle III, former Pennsylvania Governor and diplomat Ralph Earle II, U. S. Ambassador Florence Van Leer Earle Coates (1850–1927), American poet and daughter of George Hussey Earle, a well known abolitionist (great-granddaughter) Bird Calladay VanLeer (1867-1933), owner of the Broadview VanLeer Mansion (great-grandson)Welsh Founders of Pennsylvania.
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Original:    After his retirement from the military, Captain Samuel went on to grow his Iron business in Reading Furnace, which was already supplying cannons for the Continental Army and lived in the historical Warwick Furnace Farms mansion with his wife Hannah.
Revised:  Later life After his retirement from the military, Captain Samuel went on to grow his Iron business in Reading Furnace, which was already supplying cannons for the Continental Army and lived in the historical Warwick Furnace Farms mansion with his wife Hannah.
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Original:   Samuel had eight children with his wife Hannah.
Revised:  Personal life Samuel had eight children with his wife Hannah.
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Original:   His descendant would go on to play various notable roles in American history.
Revised:  Legacy His descendant would go on to play various notable roles in American history.
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Original:  His family was considered one of the more well known families in Pennsylvania at the time and noted in the anti-slavery cause.
Revised:  His family was considered one of the more well known families in Pennsylvania at the time and noted in the anti-slavery URL
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Original:  Some colour supplements are Sunday magazines, but many are included with a daily newspaper.
Revised:  Some colour supplements are Sunday magazines, but may also be included with a daily newspaper.
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Original: HFE Homozygous mutations of HFE gene H63D are  rarely the cause of hemochromatosis, however it is also associated with the occurrence of other conditions like hypotransferrinemia, liver dysfunction, bone and joint issues, diabetes mellitus, heart disease, hormone imbalances, porphyria cutanea tarda (PCT), infertility, stroke, neurodegenerative and brain damages, some cancers, venous and peripheral artery disease.
Revised: HFE The HFE H63D are rarely the cause of hemochromatosis, however it is also associated with the occurrence of other conditions like hypotransferrinemia, liver dysfunction, bone and joint issues, diabetes mellitus, heart disease, hormone imbalances, porphyria cutanea tarda (PCT), infertility, stroke, neurodegenerative and brain damages, some cancers, venous and peripheral artery disease.
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Original:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with a H63D mutation is for brain damage due to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells (chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
Revised:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D mutation is for brain damage due to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells (chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
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Original:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with a H63D mutation is for brain damage due to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells (chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
Revised:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with a H63D variant is for brain damage due to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells (chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
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Original:  Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with a homozygous H63D mutation may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D mutation may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with a homozygous H63D mutation may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with a homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Liver disorders A homozygous mutation of HFE gene H63D  is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver, cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liver damaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver, cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liver damaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
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Original:  Athletic advantage A 2020 study revealed that the homozygous H63D alteration (as well as the heterozygous one) is significantly higher in elite endurance athletes comparing to ethnically-matched controls in Russian and Japanese populations, and is associated with high V̇O2max in male athletes.
Revised:  Athletic advantage A 2020 study revealed that the homozygous H63D variant (as well as the heterozygous one) is significantly higher in elite endurance athletes comparing to ethnically-matched controls in Russian and Japanese populations, and is associated with high V̇O2max in male athletes.
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Original:  The protein participates in the regulation of iron absorption.
Revised:  HFE participates in the regulation of iron absorption.
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Original: The HFE H63D is a single-nucleotide polymorphism in the HFE gene (c.187C>G, rs1799945), which results in the substitution of an aspartic acid for a histidine at amino acid position 63 of the HPE protein (p.His63Asp).
Revised: The HFE H63D is a single-nucleotide polymorphism in the HFE gene (c.187C>G, rs1799945), which results in the substitution of an aspartic acid for a histidine at amino acid position 63 of the HFE protein (p.His63Asp).
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Original:  This view was only over-turned in recent years, following advances in Maltese archaeology.
Revised:  This view was only overturned in recent years, following advances in Maltese archaeology.
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Original:  Analysis of ceramics found that the Byzantines still sent navies into the Western Mediterranean well into the 9th century - confirming that Malta was a strategic stepping stone in the general system of defences around North Africa, Sicily and the Balearics.
Revised:  Analysis of ceramics found that the Byzantines still sent navies into the Western Mediterranean well into the 9th century - confirming that Malta was a strategic stepping stone in defence system around North Africa, Sicily and the Balearics.
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Original:  Other historians have gone beyond this analysis, saying that Malta was the base of an important naval squadron under direct imperial, rather , than thematic, control.
Revised:  Other historians have gone beyond this analysis, saying that Malta was the base of an important naval squadron under direct imperial, rather than thematic, control.
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Original:  Psychological and meta-cognitive changes people who directly interact with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrates a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth and the earthlings .
Revised:  Psychological and meta-cognitive changes people who directly interact with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrates a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth and the earthlings 
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Original:  When man started to take off the planet, Psychological and meta-cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth and the earthlings
Revised:  When man started to take off the planet, Psychological and meta-cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth 
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Original:  When man started to take off the planet, Psychological and meta-cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth
Revised:  When man started to take off the planet, psychological and meta-cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth
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Original:  When man started to take off the planet, psychological and meta-cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth
Revised:  When man started to take off the planet, psychological and cognitive changes were reported by people who directly interacted with outer space, either in visual manner or in exposure, demonstrated a quality of being furiously motivated and concerned about the Earth
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Original: Ahlam Khudr ( ‘Āḥlām Khaḍr '') is a Sudanese activist and nursery URL Khudr's son was killed in a peaceful protest in 2013 (part of the 2011–13 protests in Sudan).
Revised: Ahlam Khudr ( ‘Āḥlām Khuḍr '') is a Sudanese activist and nursery URL Khudr's son was killed in a peaceful protest in 2013 (part of the 2011–13 protests in Sudan).
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Original: Ahlam Khudr ( ‘Āḥlām Khaḍr '') is a Sudanese activist and nursery URL Khudr's son was killed in a peaceful protest in 2013 (part of the 2011–13 protests in Sudan).
Revised: Ahlam Khudr ( ‘Āḥlām Khaḍr '') is a Sudanese activist and nursery worker. Khudr's son was killed in a peaceful protest in 2013 (part of the 2011–13 protests in Sudan).
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Original:  Active in underground forums, she was "brutally beaten" when arrested by security URL In December 2018, Ahlam Khudr was an important figure in the Sudanese Revolution.
Revised:  Active in underground forums, she was "brutally beaten" when arrested by security forces. In December 2018, Ahlam Khudr was an important figure in the Sudanese Revolution.
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Original:  The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal, then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control commercial activity in the State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to the region for a period of 20 years.
Revised: History The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal, then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control commercial activity in the State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to the region for a period of 20 years.
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Original:  With the death of the King of Portugal, Joseph I, and the fall of his powerful statesman the Marquis of Pombal, the period known as Viradeira kicked off . Mary I Queen, Joseph I's daughter, was contended with all of the Marquis of Pombal's policies, and in 1778 she not only revoked the monopoly but closed the company itself.
Revised:  With the death of the King of Portugal, Joseph I, and the fall of his powerful statesman the Marquis of Pombal, the period known as Viradeira began . Mary I Queen, Joseph I's daughter, was contended with all of the Marquis of Pombal's policies, and in 1778 she not only revoked the monopoly but closed the company itself.
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Original:   Grão Pará and Maranhão Company (Portuguese: Companhia Geral de Comércio do Grão-Pará e Maranhão) was a Portuguese chartered company created by Portugal in 1757 and served the colony of State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, based in the Portuguese colony in Brazil.
Revised:  The Grão Pará and Maranhão Company (Portuguese: Companhia Geral de Comércio do Grão-Pará e Maranhão) was a Portuguese chartered company created by Portugal in 1757 and served the colony of State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, based in the Portuguese colony in Brazil.
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Original:  The company employees were officially considered to be in his majesty's service and were responsible directly to Lisbon.
Revised:  The company employees were officially considered to be in the service of the Portuguese Crown and were responsible directly to Lisbon.
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Original:  History The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal , then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control  commercial activity in the State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to  the region for a period of 20 years.
Revised:  History The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal , then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control History In 1755, Prime Minister of Portugal the Marquis of Pombal founded the Grão Pará and Maranhão Company as a chartered company to oversee and develop commercial activity in the State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to the region for a period of 20 years.
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Original:  History The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal , then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control  commercial activity in the State of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to  the region for a period of 20 years.
Revised:  History The chartered company was founded by Marquis of Pombal , then a powerful Portuguese minister, to develop and control commercial activity in the state of Grão-Pará and Maranhão, including a monopoly of the trade in African slaves, given the prohibition of enslaving the indigenous peoples of the region, and of the naval transport of all merchandise to the region for a period of 20 years.
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