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Original:  Although the king evaded capture and eventually settled in a new capital, Goguryeo was reduced to such insignificance that for half a century there was no mention of the state in Chinese historical texts.
Revised:  Although the King evaded capture and eventually settled in a new capital, Goguryeo was reduced to such insignificance that for half a century there was no mention of the state in Chinese historical texts.
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Original:  Five Barbarians Sima Yi's conquest of Gongsun Yuan was attributed partly with the Uprising of the Five Barbarians incident , through increasing the financial power of Liaodong and forcing Han people in Liaodong to move inland, allowing the Xianbei to enter Liaodong.
Revised:  Five Barbarians Sima Yi's conquest of Gongsun Yuan was attributed partly with the Uprising of the Five Barbarians Incident , through increasing the financial power of Liaodong and forcing Han people in Liaodong to move inland, allowing the Xianbei to enter Liaodong.
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Original:  Although he was dismissed from his post, he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 or 189 ) on the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
Revised:  Although he was dismissed from his post, he became administrator of Liaodong Commandery in 190 or 189 on the recommendation of Dong Zhuo.
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Original:  Liaodong was adjacent to Goguryeo, whose rulers initially cooperated with Gongsun Du but often quarreledwith his faction .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
Revised:  Liaodong was adjacent to Goguryeo, whose rulers initially cooperated with Gongsun Du but subsequently frequently quarreled .Gardiner 1972a : 69–70.
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Original:  After Gongsun Du 's death in 204, his son Gongsun Kang took over, and shortly after exploited a succession feud in Goguryeo.
Revised:  When Gongsun Du died in 204, his son Gongsun Kang took over, and shortly after exploited a succession feud in Goguryeo.
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Original:  However, he suffered from diabetes (yin xiao  ) and was infertile.
Revised:  However, he suffered from diabetes (yin xiao , ) and was infertile.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan claimed friendship with Eastern Wu and sent messengers in May 229.
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan claimed friendship with Eastern Wu and sent envoys in May 229.
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Original:  In March 232, Sun Quan sent messengers to Gongsun Yuan to ask for horses, which were supplied.
Revised:  In March 232, Sun Quan sent envoys to Gongsun Yuan to ask for horses, which were supplied.
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Original:  However, when returning in September, the messengers were attacked by Tian Yu.
Revised:  However, when returning in September, the envoys were attacked by Tian Yu.
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Original:  Most of the goods were lost and one of the messengers were killed.
Revised:  Most of their goods were lost and one of the messengers were killed.
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Original:  Most of the goods were lost and one of the messengers were killed.
Revised:  Most of the goods were lost and one of the envoys was killed.
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Original:  In October 232, Gongsun Yuan sent messengers accepting a position as a vassal of Wu.
Revised:  In October 232, Gongsun Yuan sent envoys accepting a position as a vassal of Wu.
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Original:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the "king of Yan", and sent two messengers to him;
Revised:  In March 233, Wu gave him the title of the "king of Yan", and sent two envoys to him;
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Original:  After Wu's messengers were killed by Gongsun Yuan in 233, some of their troops escaped to Goguryeo and set up a Wu-Goguryeo alliance.
Revised:  After Wu's envoys were killed by Gongsun Yuan in 233, some of their troops escaped to Goguryeo and set up a Wu-Goguryeo alliance.
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Original:  In 234, Cao Wei sent messengers to set up an alliance with Goguryeo.
Revised:  In 234, Cao Wei sent envoys to set up an alliance with Goguryeo.
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Original:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Weikilling Wu's messengers in 234 and another set in 236.
Revised:  Between Wei and Wu, Goguryeo chose Weikilling Wu's envoys in 234 and another set in 236.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan's attitude angered both Cao Wei and Eastern Wu , and both Cao Rui (king of Cao Wei) and Sun Quan (king of Eastern Wu)  vowed to kill him.
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan's attitude angered both Cao Wei and Eastern Wu ; Cao Rui (king of Cao Wei) and Sun Quan (king of Eastern Wu) vowed to kill him.
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Original:  Gongsun Yuan's attitude angered both Cao Wei and Eastern Wu , and both Cao Rui (king of Cao Wei) and Sun Quan (king of Eastern Wu)  vowed to kill him.
Revised:  Gongsun Yuan's attitude angered both Cao Wei and Eastern Wu , and both Cao Rui (king of Cao Wei) and Sun Quan (king of Eastern Wu) both vowed to kill him.
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Original:  After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo ( one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea ), and many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
Revised:  After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo , one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea ), and many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
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Original:  After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo ( one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea ), and many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
Revised:  After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi with assistance from Goguryeo ( one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea . Many who served the Gongsun clan were massacred.
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Original:  In 238, Goguryeo sent troops to assist in the conquest of Gongsun Yuan.
Revised:  In 238, Goguryeo sent troops to assist in the defeat of Gongsun Yuan.
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Original:  Wei launched a war in retaliation, which ended in a Wei victory and destroyed the Goguryeo capital of Hwando, sent its king fleeing, and broke the tributary relationships between Goguryeo and the other tribes of Korea that formed much of Goguryeo's economy.
Revised:  Wei launched a war in retaliation, which ended in a Wei victory and destroyed the Goguryeo capital of Hwando, sent its King fleeing, and broke the tributary relationships between Goguryeo and the other tribes of Korea that formed much of Goguryeo's economy.
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Original: Yan ( 燕國 ) was a Chinese kingdom that existed from July 237 to September 238 CE in the Liaodong Peninsula during what is known as the Three Kingdoms period.
Revised: Yan ( ) was a Chinese kingdom that existed from July 237 to September 238 CE in the Liaodong Peninsula during what is known as the Three Kingdoms period.
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Original: Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed independence in July, and used the era date Shaohan () . The new country had a government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang .
Revised: Gongsun Yuan's reign After Guanqiu Jian's defeat, Gongsun Yuan claimed independence in July, and used the era date Shaohan () ; the new country had a government and officials, and set up four commanderies: Liaodong, Xuantu, Lelang and Daifang .
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Original:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, one of Cao Wei's generals, led 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan . After a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi, who received assistance from Goguryeo, one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea.
Revised:  In June 238, after planning with Cao Rui, Sima Yi, one of Cao Wei's generals, led 40,000 soldiers to attack Gongsun Yuan ; after a siege lasting three months, Gongsun Yuan's headquarters fell to Sima Yi, who received assistance from Goguryeo, one of the Three Kingdoms of Korea.
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Original:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the eponymous three kingdoms: ( Wei, Shu, and Wu ) . Nevertheless, writers such as Kang Youwei consider it to be a "4th country".
Revised:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the eponymous three kingdoms: Wei, Shu, and Wu ) . Nevertheless, writers such as Kang Youwei consider it to be a "4th country".
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Original:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the eponymous three kingdoms: ( Wei, Shu, and Wu ) . Nevertheless, writers such as Kang Youwei consider it to be a "4th country".
Revised:  Although it existed during the Three Kingdoms period, it was not one of the eponymous three kingdoms: ( Wei, Shu, and Wu . Nevertheless, writers such as Kang Youwei consider it to be a "4th country".
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Original: Miss Silver's Past (, "Lion Cub") is a 1969 novel by Czech author Josef URL Written between 1963 and 1967 (prior to the Prague Spring), it was published after URL Plot Karel Leden works at a publisher's in Communist Czechoslovakia.
Revised: Miss Silver's Past (, "Lion Cub") is a 1969 novel by Czech author Josef URL Written between 1963 and 1967 (prior to the Prague Spring), it was published after it. Plot Karel Leden works at a publisher's in Communist Czechoslovakia.
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Original:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious URL Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin URL Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's URL Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
Revised:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious past. Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin URL Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's URL Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
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Original:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious URL Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin URL Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's URL Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
Revised:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious URL Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin era." Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's URL Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
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Original:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious URL Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin URL Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's URL Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
Revised:  He meets Lenka Silver, a Jewish woman with a mysterious URL Reception Gleb Žekulin wrote that Lvíče "confirmed [Škvorecký] as the leading Czech prose writer of the post-Stalin URL Mavis Gallant also admired Miss Silver's Past. Kirkus Reviews was scathing, saying "even the apparatchiks' wrangles over how and whether to publish a blockbuster novel are only mechanically amusing.
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Original:  Škvorecký's style is trite and URL Adaptatiaon The film was adapted for Czechoslovak television in 1969, under the title Flirt se slečnou Stříbrnou ("Flirting with Miss URL References
Revised:  Škvorecký's style is trite and trivial." Adaptatiaon The film was adapted for Czechoslovak television in 1969, under the title Flirt se slečnou Stříbrnou ("Flirting with Miss URL References
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Original:  Adaptatiaon The film was adapted for Czechoslovak television in 1969, under the title Flirt se slečnou Stříbrnou ("Flirting with Miss URL References Category:1969 novels Category:20th-century Czech novels Category:Novels set in Prague Category:Novels about communism Category:Novels set in Czechoslovakia Category:Censorship _in_the_ar
Revised:  Adaptatiaon The film was adapted for Czechoslovak television in 1969, under the title Flirt se slečnou Stříbrnou ("Flirting with Miss URL References Category:1969 novels Category:20th-century Czech novels Category:Novels set in Prague Category:Novels about communism Category:Novels set in Czechoslovakia Category:Censorship in the ar
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Original: Liezl Linda van der Merwe (born 5 October 1980) is a South African politician who serves as a Member of the National Assembly of South Africa, representing the Inkatha Freedom Party (IFP).
Revised: Liezl Linda van der Merwe is a South African politician who serves as a Member of the National Assembly of South Africa, representing the Inkatha Freedom Party (IFP).
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Original:  She took office as an MP in May 2012.
Revised:  She became an MP in May 2012.
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Original: General Évariste Ndayishimiye (born 1968 ) is a Burundian politician who has served as President of Burundi since 18 June 2020.
Revised: General Évariste Ndayishimiye (born 1969 ) is a Burundian politician who has served as President of Burundi since 18 June 2020.
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Original:  Category: 1968 births Category:Living people Category:National Council for the Defense of Democracy – Forces for the Defense of Democracy politicians Category:University of Burundi alumni Category:Burundian Roman Catholics Category:Burundian military personnel Category:People of the Burundian Civil War Category:People from Gitega Province Category:Burundian lawyers Category:Hutu people Category:Burundi at the Olympi
Revised:  Category: 1969 births Category:Living people Category:National Council for the Defense of Democracy – Forces for the Defense of Democracy politicians Category:University of Burundi alumni Category:Burundian Roman Catholics Category:Burundian military personnel Category:People of the Burundian Civil War Category:People from Gitega Province Category:Burundian lawyers Category:Hutu people Category:Burundi at the Olympi
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Original: General Évariste Ndayishimiye (born 1969 ) is a Burundian politician who has served as President of Burundi since 18 June 2020.
Revised: General Évariste Ndayishimiye (born 1968 ) is a Burundian politician who has served as President of Burundi since 18 June 2020.
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Original:  Category: 1969 births Category:Living people Category:National Council for the Defense of Democracy – Forces for the Defense of Democracy politicians Category:University of Burundi alumni Category:Burundian Roman Catholics Category:Burundian military personnel Category:People of the Burundian Civil War Category:People from Gitega Province Category:Burundian lawyers Category:Hutu people Category:Burundi at the Olympi
Revised:  Category: 1968 births Category:Living people Category:National Council for the Defense of Democracy – Forces for the Defense of Democracy politicians Category:University of Burundi alumni Category:Burundian Roman Catholics Category:Burundian military personnel Category:People of the Burundian Civil War Category:People from Gitega Province Category:Burundian lawyers Category:Hutu people Category:Burundi at the Olympi
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Original:  In February 2021, however, Burundi joined Tanzania in being the only African nations to reject vaccines from the COVAX scheme: the health minister Thaddee Ndikumana stated that “since more than 95\% of patients are recovering, we estimate that the vaccines are not yet necessary.” , Burundi has still not made any effort to procure vaccines - one of three countries to fail to take this step  .
Revised:  In February 2021, however, Burundi joined Tanzania in being the only African nations to reject vaccines from the COVAX scheme: the health minister Thaddee Ndikumana stated that “since more than 95\% of patients are recovering, we estimate that the vaccines are not yet necessary.” Through most of 2021, Burundi apparently made no efforts to procure vaccines - one of three countries to fail to take this step .
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Original:  In 1961, he became the second man and the first American  to travel into space , and in 1971, he walked on the Moon .
Revised:  In 1961, he became the second person, and the first American to travel into space , and in 1971, he walked on the Moon .
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Original:  In 1961, he became the second man and the first American  to travel into space , and in 1971, he walked on the Moon .
Revised:  In 1961, he became the second man and the first American , to travel into space , and in 1971, he walked on the Moon .
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Original:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
Revised:  In 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
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Original:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
Revised:  On May 5, 1961, he became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
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Original:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
Revised:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second man and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
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Original:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American , to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
Revised:  On May 5, 1961, Shepard became the second person, and the first American to travel into space when he piloted the Mercury-Redstone 3 mission.
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Original:  In 1971, Sheperd walked on the Moon during the mission of Apollo 14.
Revised:  In 1971, he walked on the Moon during the mission of Apollo 14.
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Original:  In 1971, Sheperd walked on the Moon during the mission of Apollo 14.
Revised:  In 1971, Sheperd walked on the Moon .
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Original:  Analysis of high-resolution film scans of the event determined the distance to be about for the first shot and for the URL
Revised:  Analysis of high-resolution film scans of the event determined the distance to be about for the first shot and for the second.
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Original:  He learned to sail all the types of boats the academy owned, up to and including Freedom , a schooner.
Revised:  He learned to sail all the types of boats the academy owned, up to and including , a schooner.
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Original:  his ashes were scattered at sea|alt=A stone memorial plaque that reads: "Love is Eternal – RADM Alan Bartlett Shepard Jr * US Navy * America's First man in Space 1998 – His loving wife Louise Brewer Shepard 1998" The Navy named a supply ship, USNS Alan Shepard (T-AKE-3) , for him in 2006.
Revised:  his ashes were scattered at sea|alt=A stone memorial plaque that reads: "Love is Eternal – RADM Alan Bartlett Shepard Jr * US Navy * America's First man in Space 1998 – His loving wife Louise Brewer Shepard 1998" The Navy named a supply ship, , for him in 2006.
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Original:  In 1961, he became the second man and the first American to travel into space, and in 1971, he walked on the Moon.
Revised:  In 1961, he became the second person and the first American to travel into space, and in 1971, he walked on the Moon.
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Original:  It was unknown to the provincial treasury department on why Estina had been chosen for the project and Rockman claimed that it would have been "unlikely" for Estina to get the tender, if it had went through a public process.
Revised:  It was unknown to the provincial treasury department on why Estina had been chosen for the project and Rockman claimed that it would have been "unlikely" for Estina to get the tender, if it had gone through a public process.
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Original:  On 12 March 2013, premier Ace Magashule appointed her as the MEC for Finance, succeeding Seiso Mohai, who was redeployed to Parliament.
Revised:  On 12 March 2013, premier Ace Magashule appointed her as the Member of the Executive Council for Finance, succeeding Seiso Mohai, who was redeployed to Parliament.
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Original: Rockman mentioned in her testimony that she had met with Guptas in February 2014 , in relations to reports of cows dying.
Revised: Rockman mentioned in her testimony that she had met with Guptas in February 2014 about reports of cows dying.
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Original:  It was unknown to the provincial treasury department on why Estina had been chosen for the project and Rockman claimed that it would have been "unlikely" for Estina to get the tender , if it had gone through a public process.
Revised:  It was unknown to the provincial treasury department on why Estina had been chosen for the project and Rockman claimed that it would have been "unlikely" for Estina to get the tender if it had gone through a public process.
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Original:  Also in her testimony, Rockman referred to that the provincial government had gone into an agreement with the now-defunct Gupta-owned The New Age to buy around 4,000 copies of the paper daily.
Revised:  Also in her testimony, Rockman mentioned that the provincial government had gone into an agreement with the now-defunct Gupta-owned The New Age to buy around 4,000 copies of the paper daily.
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Original:  The project was managed by the Gupta-owned Estina company, which led to more than R220 million in public funds, which was meant for the dairy, being siphoned towards the Gupta family and only 1\% spent on actual farming, as reported by  City Press.
Revised:  The project was managed by the Gupta-owned Estina company, which led to more than R220 million in public funds, which was meant for the dairy, being siphoned towards the Gupta family and only 1\% spent on actual farming, as reported by the City Press.
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Original:  She, later on, in her testimony said that the project should have been put through a tender process and that she was concerned  there was "no public process".
Revised:  She, later on, in her testimony said that the project should have been put through a tender process and that she was concerned that there was "no public process".
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Original: Elizabeth Cornelia "Elzabe" Rockman (born 20 April 1967) is a South African African National Congress politician who served as the Free State Member of the Executive Council for Finance during the premierships of Ace Magashule and Sisi Ntombela.
Revised: Elizabeth Cornelia "Elzabe" Rockman (born 20 April 1967) is a South African African National Congress politician who served as the Member of the Executive Council for Finance during the premierships of Ace Magashule and Sisi Ntombela.
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Original:  The project was managed by the Gupta-owned Estina company, which led to more than R220 million in public funds, which was meant for the dairy, being siphoned towards the Gupta family and only 1\% spent on actual farming, as reported by the City Press.
Revised:  The project was managed by the Gupta-owned Estina company, which led to more than R220 million in public funds, which were meant for the dairy, being siphoned towards the Gupta family and only 1\% spent on actual farming, as reported by the City Press.
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