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Original:  Responding to the criticism towards him and the federal government on the bill content definition during the tabling, Minister Liew explained that through the 1963 agreement, every parties have agreed on the definition but it became null in 1966 following the Singapore exit from the federation in 1965 where an amendment was made in the year of the nullification.
Revised:  Responding to the criticism towards him and the federal government on the bill content definition during the tabling, Minister Liew explained that through the 1963 agreement, every party have agreed on the definition but it became null in 1966 following the Singapore exit from the federation in 1965 where an amendment was made in the year of the nullification.
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Original:  Similar view were also expressed earlier by Sarawak PKR lawmaker See Chee How who urging every MPs to put aside their political differences to fulfill the long-waited aspiration and hope of all Sarawakians and Sabahans to right the wrong of the last 43 years,
Revised:  Similar views were also expressed earlier by Sarawak PKR lawmaker See Chee How who urging every MPs to put aside their political differences to fulfill the long-waited aspiration and hope of all Sarawakians and Sabahans to right the wrong of the last 43 years,
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Original:  with the words used in the proposed amendment and believed the wording could be refined, adding his proposals that "Sarawak should be stated as Negara Sarawak (the Country of Sarawak) and Sabah as Negara Sabah (the Country of Sabah), not as one  the states in the federation" as the previous wording may indicate that both entities are just one of the states in the federation in par with Malay Peninsula states that will causing confusion and misinterpretation.
Revised:  with the words used in the proposed amendment and believed the wording could be refined, adding his proposals that "Sarawak should be stated as Negara Sarawak (the Country of Sarawak) and Sabah as Negara Sabah (the Country of Sabah), not as one of the states in the federation" as the previous wording may indicate that both entities are just one of the states in the federation in par with Malay Peninsula states that will causing confusion and misinterpretation.
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Original:  On 17 December, Minister Liew announced that the proposed amendment to be re-tabled in March 2020 following a reach consensus through a three-way meeting between Prime Minister Mahathir Mohamad, Sabah Chief Minister Shafie Apdal and Sarawak Chief Minister Abang Zohari held at the Prime Minister's office on 16 December 2019 
Revised:  On 17 December, Minister Liew announced that the proposed amendment to be re-tabled in March 2020 following a reach consensus through a three-way meeting between Prime Minister Mahathir Mohamad, Sabah Chief Minister Shafie Apdal and Sarawak Chief Minister Abang Zohari held at the Prime Minister's office on 16 December 2019. 
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Original:       [   [  Sources (af) Krüger, prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
Revised:  [ . [ Sources (af) Krüger, prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
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Original:       [   [  Sources (af) Krüger, prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
Revised:  [ [ . Sources (af) Krüger, prof. D.W. and Beyers, C.J. (ed.) Suid-Afrikaanse Biografiese Woordeboek vol.
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Original:  On March 21 of that year, he married Anna Jörris, van Mettmann of Düsseldorf, Germany in Walvis Bay.
Revised:  On March 21 of that year, he married Anna Jörris, van Mettmann of Düsseldorf, (Germany) in Walvis Bay.
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Original:  Hahn wrote of the perilous journey in the RMS journal Berichte der Rhenischen Missionsgesellschaft (1858), in Petermanns Geographische Mitteilungen (nos. 11-17 ), and in a joint report of Rath, Hahn, and Green published under the title "Account of an expedition from Damara Land to the Ovampo in search of the river Cunene" (Proceedings of the Royal Geographical Society, vol.
Revised:  Hahn wrote of the perilous journey in the RMS journal Berichte der Rhenischen Missionsgesellschaft (1858), in Petermanns Geographische Mitteilungen (nos. 11–17 ), and in a joint report of Rath, Hahn, and Green published under the title "Account of an expedition from Damara Land to the Ovampo in search of the river Cunene" (Proceedings of the Royal Geographical Society, vol.
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Original:  Later, he heard from Katuti that--shortly after Leopold died--the rope Anna was holding slipped out of her hands, when she sunk into the icy waters.
Revised:  Later, he heard from Katuti that—shortly after Leopold died—the rope Anna was holding slipped out of her hands, when she sunk into the icy waters.
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Original:  URL accessed 20 April 2016.
Revised:  Retrieved April 20, 2016.
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Original: Johannes Rath (Vienna, Austria, January 31 , 1816 – Kuils River, Cape Colony, June 6 , 1903) was a missionary with the Rhenish Missionary Society.
Revised: Johannes Rath (Vienna, Austria, 31 , 1816 – Kuils River, Cape Colony, June 6 , 1903) was a missionary with the Rhenish Missionary Society.
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Original: Johannes Rath (Vienna, Austria, January 31 , 1816 – Kuils River, Cape Colony, June 6 , 1903) was a missionary with the Rhenish Missionary Society.
Revised: Johannes Rath (Vienna, Austria, January 31 , 1816 – Kuils River, Cape Colony, 6 , 1903) was a missionary with the Rhenish Missionary Society.
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Original:  Missionary in Otjikango Rath was trained as a weaver but heard his call to mission in 1840 and was ordained a missionary on August 14 , 1844.
Revised:  Missionary in Otjikango Rath was trained as a weaver but heard his call to mission in 1840 and was ordained a missionary on 14 , 1844.
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Original:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
Revised:  He arrived in Walvis Bay on 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
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Original:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
Revised:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, and in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
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Original:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
Revised:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
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Original:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 of the same year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
Revised:  He arrived on January 4 , 1845, in Walvis Bay and arrived in Otjikango (Gross Barmen) on April 9 April that year to work as an assistant to his fellow Rhenish Missionary Carl Hugo Hahn.
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Original:  He set out on January 28 , 1846, three days before his 30th birthday, but found no passage to Walvis Bay available from Windhoek and had to travel on to Cape Town.
Revised:  He set out on 28 , 1846, three days before his 30th birthday, but found no passage to Walvis Bay available from Windhoek and had to travel on to Cape Town.
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Original:  Difficulties en route to Cape Town led him to return to Otjikango on December 19 , 1846.
Revised:  Difficulties en route to Cape Town led him to return to Otjikango on 19 , 1846.
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Original:  In 1848 , he traveled to Cape Town once more.
Revised:  In 1848 he traveled to Cape Town once more.
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Original:  On March 21 of that year, he married Anna Jörris van Mettmann of Düsseldorf (Germany) in Walvis Bay.
Revised:  On 21 of that year, he married Anna Jörris van Mettmann of Düsseldorf (Germany) in Walvis Bay.
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Original:  On March 21 of that year, he married Anna Jörris van Mettmann of Düsseldorf (Germany) in Walvis Bay.
Revised:  On March 21 March that year, he married Anna Jörris van Mettmann of Düsseldorf (Germany) in Walvis Bay.
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Original:  On July 9 , 1849 , he founded the Otjimbingwe mission on the banks of the Swakop River, at a location the Rev. Heinrich Scheppmann had already noted as ideal for such a waystation in 1845.
Revised:  On 9 , 1849 , he founded the Otjimbingwe mission on the banks of the Swakop River, at a location the Rev. Heinrich Scheppmann had already noted as ideal for such a waystation in 1845.
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Original:  On July 9 , 1849 , he founded the Otjimbingwe mission on the banks of the Swakop River, at a location the Rev. Heinrich Scheppmann had already noted as ideal for such a waystation in 1845.
Revised:  On July 9 , 1849 he founded the Otjimbingwe mission on the banks of the Swakop River, at a location the Rev. Heinrich Scheppmann had already noted as ideal for such a waystation in 1845.
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Original:  Along with Hahn, the big game hunter Frederick J. Green, and J.W. Bonfield, the Rev. Rath left once more on May 20 , 1857 on a four-month journey to Ovamboland, mainly with an eye toward continuing the mission.
Revised:  Along with Hahn, the big game hunter Frederick J. Green, and J.W. Bonfield, the Rev. Rath left once more on 20 , 1857 on a four-month journey to Ovamboland, mainly with an eye toward continuing the mission.
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Original:  Rath and Hahn returned to Otjimbingwe on September 11 , 1857.
Revised:  Rath and Hahn returned to Otjimbingwe on 11 , 1857.
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Original:  On the family's return on April 1 , 1859, Johannes lost his wife and four of his children in their shipwreck.
Revised:  On the family's return , on 1 , 1859, Johannes lost his wife and four of his children in their shipwreck.
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Original:  Adinda Vermaak's 2004 book Kroniek van ’n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier ("Chronicle of a Parish: The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: On March 25 , 1859 , the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
Revised:  Adinda Vermaak's 2004 book Kroniek van ’n kontrei, die verhaal van die NG kerk Kuilsrivier ("Chronicle of a Parish: The story of the Dutch Reformed Church (NGK) Kuilsrivier") recounts the tragedy as follows: On March 25 , 1859 the Rath family boarded the freighter Flora in Cape Town, en route to the mission in Damaraland.
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Original:  They were near Walvis Bay already at suppertime on April 1  , when the Rev. Rath heard someone call out for the captain.
Revised:  They were near Walvis Bay already at suppertime on 1 , when the Rev. Rath heard someone call out for the captain.
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Original:  Also in the suitcase was a page from a sermon he had delivered on May 16 of the previous year: 'Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven.' (Matthew 6:10) At the end of the sermon, he could make out the next words, 'The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away.
Revised:  Also in the suitcase was a page from a sermon he had delivered on 16 of the previous year: 'Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven.' (Matthew 6:10) At the end of the sermon, he could make out the next words, 'The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away.
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Original:  Also in the suitcase was a page from a sermon he had delivered on May 16 of the previous year: 'Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven.' (Matthew 6:10) At the end of the sermon, he could make out the next words, 'The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away.
Revised:  Also in the suitcase was a page from a sermon he had delivered on May 16 May the previous year: 'Thy will be done, on earth as it is in heaven.' (Matthew 6:10) At the end of the sermon, he could make out the next words, 'The Lord giveth and the Lord taketh away.
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Original:  He returned to Otjimbingwe, but on June 13 , 1861, he left the mission and South West Africa for good.
Revised:  He returned to Otjimbingwe, but on 13 , 1861, he left the mission and South West Africa for good.
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Original:  In 1862, he began his long tenure as a missionary in Sarepta, where he worked until he was replaced on July 27 , 1893 , by the Rev. Friedrich Eich.
Revised:  In 1862, he began his long tenure as a missionary in Sarepta, where he worked until he was replaced on 27 , 1893 , by the Rev. Friedrich Eich.
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Original:  In 1862, he began his long tenure as a missionary in Sarepta, where he worked until he was replaced on July 27 , 1893 , by the Rev. Friedrich Eich.
Revised:  In 1862, he began his long tenure as a missionary in Sarepta, where he worked until he was replaced on July 27 , 1893 by the Rev. Friedrich Eich.
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Original:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open  Easter Monday, March 30 , 1891.
Revised:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open on Easter Monday, March 30 , 1891.
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Original:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open  Easter Monday, March 30 , 1891.
Revised:  Local farmers and other community members each donated 500 or more bricks so the school, consisting of two classrooms, could open Easter Monday, 30 , 1891.
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Original:  After retiring, Rath initially lived in Stellenbosch, but after the marriage in November 1898 of his daughter Anna (Otjimbingwe, March 29 , 1851 – Wellington, January 26 , 1940) to the Rev. Jacobus Pauw, he left for Wellington, Western Cape to live with his son-in-law.
Revised:  After retiring, Rath initially lived in Stellenbosch, but after the marriage in November 1898 of his daughter Anna (Otjimbingwe, 29 , 1851 – Wellington, January 26 , 1940) to the Rev. Jacobus Pauw, he left for Wellington, Western Cape to live with his son-in-law.
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Original:  After retiring, Rath initially lived in Stellenbosch, but after the marriage in November 1898 of his daughter Anna (Otjimbingwe, March 29 , 1851 – Wellington, January 26 , 1940) to the Rev. Jacobus Pauw, he left for Wellington, Western Cape to live with his son-in-law.
Revised:  After retiring, Rath initially lived in Stellenbosch, but after the marriage in November 1898 of his daughter Anna (Otjimbingwe, March 29 , 1851 – Wellington, 26 , 1940) to the Rev. Jacobus Pauw, he left for Wellington, Western Cape to live with his son-in-law.
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Original: 21st-century Native American women Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:Native American women in politics Category:Native American state legislators in Montana Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Members of the Democratic Socialists of America Category:Montana Democrats Category:Montana politician stubs Category:  Living people
Revised: 21st-century Native American women Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:Native American women in politics Category:Native American state legislators in Montana Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Members of the Democratic Socialists of America Category:Montana Democrats Category:Montana politician stubs Category: Native American politicians Category: Living people
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Original:  She was one of only two Native American women to serve on the Montana Legislature.
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Original:  At age 3 she moved with her mother and brother, to Billings, MT . She was raised in Billings and graduated from Billings Senior high, but spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
Revised:  At age 3 she moved with her mother and brother, to Billings, Montana . She was raised in Billings and graduated from Billings Senior high, but spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
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Original:  At age 3 she moved with her mother and brother, to Billings, MT . She was raised in Billings and graduated from Billings Senior high, but spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
Revised:  At age 3 she moved with her mother and brother, to Billings, MT . She was raised in Billings and graduated from Billings Senior High School, and spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
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Original:  After high school  Bahr earned a bachelor's degree in Sociology with an emphasis in Inequalities and Social Justice from the University of Montana at Missoula.
Revised:  After high school , Bahr earned a bachelor's degree in Sociology with an emphasis in Inequalities and Social Justice from the University of Montana at Missoula.
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Original:  After high school  Bahr earned a bachelor's degree in Sociology with an emphasis in Inequalities and Social Justice from the University of Montana at Missoula.
Revised:  After high school Bahr earned a bachelor's degree in sociology with an emphasis in Inequalities and Social Justice from the University of Montana at Missoula.
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Original:  Career She began her interest in social services 10 years ago after working as a receptionist at a foster-care network for Native American youth.
Revised:  Career She began her interest in social services after working as a receptionist at a foster-care network for Native American youth.
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Original:  She has worked for the last five years with adults with disabilities in supported living and supported employment services as a vocational specialist and community coordinator.
Revised:  She has worked with adults with disabilities in supported living and supported employment services as a vocational specialist and community coordinator.
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Original:  Representative Bahr's committee assignments for the 2019-20 legislative session include : Human Services, Legislative Administration, and State Administration.
Revised:  Bahr's committee assignments for the 2019-20 legislative session include : Human Services, Legislative Administration, and State Administration.
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Original:  Representative Bahr's committee assignments for the 2019-20 legislative session include : Human Services, Legislative Administration, and State Administration.
Revised:  Representative Bahr's committee assignments for the 2019-20 legislative session included : Human Services, Legislative Administration, and State Administration.
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Original:  Legislative priorities for 2019 session Representative Bahr entered her first state legislative session with priorities in K-12 Education, Social Justice, Tribal State Issues and Relations, Mental Health / Substance Abuse Addiction, Fair Taxation, and Workers' Rights.
Revised:  Legislative priorities for 2019 session Representative Bahr entered her first state legislative session with priorities in K-12 Education, Social Justice, Tribal State Issues and Relations, Mental Health / Addiction, Fair Taxation, and Workers' Rights.
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Original:  Legislative priorities for 2019 session Representative Bahr entered her first state legislative session with priorities in K-12 Education, Social Justice, Tribal State Issues and Relations, Mental Health / Substance Abuse Addiction, Fair Taxation, and Workers' Rights.
Revised:  Legislative priorities for 2019 session Representative Bahr entered her first state legislative session with priorities in K-12 Education, Social Justice, Tribal State Issues and Relations, Mental Health / Substance Abuse 
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Original:  (passed) HB 748: Establish the Minnie Spotted-Wolf memorial highway. (passed)
Revised:  (passed) HB 748: Establish the Minnie Spotted-Wolf memorial highway. 
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Original:  She was raised in Billings and graduated from Billings Senior High School, and spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
Revised:  She graduated from Billings Senior High School, and spent her summers living on the Crow Reservation with her grandparents.
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Original:  She was endorsed by them as well as the AFL-CIO and the Montana Conservation Voters, Carol's List and others.
Revised:  She was endorsed by them as well as the AFL-CIO , the Montana Conservation Voters, Carol's List and others.
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Original:  Bahr lost  re-election to Mallerie Stromswold in the 2020 general election.
Revised:  Bahr lost her bid for re-election to Mallerie Stromswold in the 2020 general election.
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Original:  Bahr 's committee assignments for the 2019-20 legislative session included: Human Services, Legislative Administration, and State Administration.
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Original:  Bahr lost her bid for re-election to Mallerie Stromswold in the 2020 general election.
Revised:  lost her bid for re-election to Mallerie Stromswold in the 2020 general election.
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Original:  Electoral history +Montana House of Representatives District 50 General Election, 2018PartyCandidateVotes\%DemocraticJade Bahr1,77853.
Revised:  +Montana House of Representatives District 50 General Election, 2018PartyCandidateVotes\%DemocraticJade Bahr1,77853.
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Original:  At age 3 she moved with her mother and brother to Billings, Montana.
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Original: 21st-century Native American women Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:Native American women in politics Category:Native American state legislators in Montana Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Members of the Democratic Socialists of America Category:Montana Democrats Category: Montana politician stubs Category: Living people
Revised: 21st-century Native American women Category:21st-century American politicians Category:21st-century American women politicians Category:Native American women in politics Category:Native American state legislators in Montana Category:Women state legislators in Montana Category:Members of the Montana House of Representatives Category:Members of the Democratic Socialists of America Category:Montana Democrats Category: Living people
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Original:  Her mother was killed in a car accident on 5 October 2001 by Quebec Provincial Police , and her father committed suicide , which made Tolley a women activist.
Revised:  Her mother was killed in a car accident on 5 October 2001 by Quebec Provincial Police , which made Tolley a women activist.
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Original: Tolley was born on 1960 at Maniwaki, Quebec town, Ottawa, Canada .
Revised: Tolley was born on 1960 at Maniwaki, Quebec .
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Original: History It 's not known that the first member of the dynasty, Achaemenes, was mythical figure, or an actual king.
Revised: History It is not known if the first member of the dynasty, Achaemenes, was mythical figure, or an actual king.
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Original: History It 's not known that the first member of the dynasty, Achaemenes, was mythical figure, or an actual king.
Revised: History It 's not known that the first member of the dynasty, Achaemenes, was a mythical figure or an actual king.
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