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Original:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car  a 2004 black Kia  around 25 minutes before the shootin
Revised:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On the Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car a 2004 black Kia around 25 minutes before the shootin
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Original:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car  a 2004 black Kia  around 25 minutes before the shootin
Revised:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car , a 2004 black Kia around 25 minutes before the shootin
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Original:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car  a 2004 black Kia  around 25 minutes before the shootin
Revised:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car a 2004 black Kia , around 25 minutes before the shootin
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Original:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car  a 2004 black Kia  around 25 minutes before the shootin
Revised:  Mr Snyder was under doctors care for being delusional behaviorand the Northglenn, Colorado police issued an BOL "Be On The Lookout" to all law enforcement agencies in Colorado for Snyder and his car a 2004 black Kia around 25 minutes before the shooting occurred
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Original:  The trooper ordered Snyder to drop the gun, but instead he moved "menancingly" in the direction of the trooper who thrn shot him once in the head and twice in the chest.
Revised:  The trooper ordered Snyder to drop the gun, but instead he moved "menancingly" in the direction of the trooper who then shot him once in the head and twice in the chest.
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Original: Snyder died from the multiple gunshot wounds on the floor on the floor of the Capitol office building.
Revised: Snyder died from the multiple gunshot wounds on the floor of the Capitol office building.
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Original: Australia's federal government has come under fire by prominent human rights lawyer Julian Burnside, Q.C. for using migration laws to circumvent the release of accused terrorist supporter Mohamed Haneef after he was granted bail in Brisbane Magistrate's Court.
Revised: Australia's federal government has come under fire by prominent human rights lawyer Julian Burnside, Q.C. for using migration laws to circumvent the release of Mohamed Haneef after he was granted bail in Brisbane Magistrate's Court.
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Original:  This his lawyers claim, will allow Haneef to stay in Brisbane nearby his lawyers .
Revised:  This will allow Haneef to stay in Brisbane nearby his lawyers .
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Original:  This his lawyers claim, will allow Haneef to stay in Brisbane nearby his lawyers .
Revised:  This his lawyers claim, will allow Haneef to stay in Brisbane near them, his lawyers say .
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Original:  Mr Burnside is skeptical of Mr Andrews' motives, claiming the government would not have cancelled Haneef's visa if he had not been bailed.
Revised:  Mr Burnside is sceptical of Mr Andrews' motives, claiming the government would not have cancelled Haneef's visa if he had not been bailed.
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Original:  Mr Burnside attacked the government, claiming it's decision to cancel Haneef's visa tramples on some of the key foundations of democracy.
Revised:  Mr Burnside attacked the government, claiming its decision to cancel Haneef's visa tramples on some of the key foundations of democracy.
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Original:  Burnside also questioned the government's anti-terror laws, saying it was unusual for a person to be charged with giving someone a SIM card twelve months later .
Revised:  Burnside also questioned the government's anti-terror laws, saying it was unusual for a person to be charged with giving someone a SIM card twelve months earlier .
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Original: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfeilder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, has been suspended without pay for 10 days , for using a performance enhancing drug.
Revised: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfielder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, has been suspended without pay for 10 days , for using a performance enhancing drug.
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Original: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfeilder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, has been suspended without pay for 10 days , for using a performance enhancing drug.
Revised: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfeilder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, is suspended without pay for 10 days , for using a performance enhancing drug.
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Original: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfeilder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, has been suspended without pay for 10 days , for using a performance enhancing drug.
Revised: 28 year old Alex Sanchez, outfeilder for the Tampa Bay Devil Rays, has been suspended without pay for 10 days for using a performance enhancing drug.
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Original:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided  not disclose the specific substance Sanchez has tested positivefor taking . Sanchez plans to appeal against the ban.
Revised:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided to not disclose the specific substance Sanchez has tested positivefor taking . Sanchez plans to appeal against the ban.
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Original:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided  not disclose the specific substance Sanchez has tested positivefor taking . Sanchez plans to appeal against the ban.
Revised:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided not disclose the specific substance which tested positive . Sanchez plans to appeal against the ban.
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Original:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided  not disclose the specific substance Sanchez has tested positivefor taking . Sanchez plans to appeal against the ban.
Revised:  The Baseball officials and the players' union have both decided not disclose the specific substance Sanchez has tested positivefor taking . Sanchez plans an appeal against the ban.
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Original:  Sanchez is the first player to be suspended under Major League Baseball's new strict drug policy.
Revised:  Sanchez is the first player to be suspended under Major League Baseball's new , stricter drug policy.
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Original: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming. jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel Local caterers ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
Revised:  Local caterers ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
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Original: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming. jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel Local caterers ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
Revised: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming. jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel WHAT.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Audience Partial costumes are an alternative to full suits%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Anthrocon has a significant international draw.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Partial costumes are an alternative to full suits%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Anthrocon has a significant international draw.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Audience Partial costumes are an alternative to full suits%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Anthrocon has a significant international draw.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Audience %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Anthrocon has a significant international draw.
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Original:  Local impact%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Last year gave local vendors plenty to think about.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Last year gave local vendors plenty to think about.
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Original:  The event's theme will be "It's a Jungle Out There!" Related new
Revised:  The event's theme will be "It's a Jungle Out There!" FUC
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Original: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming.jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel]] Local caterers get ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
Revised: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming.jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel]] Local caterers get ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
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Original: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming.jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel]] Local caterers get ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever furry convention, Anthrocon 2007.
Revised: Image:GR AC2007 Lucky Coyote concierge welcoming.jpg|Lucky Coyote welcomes guests to the hotel]] Local caterers get ready for big business, as almost three thousand fans converge on the David L. Lawrence Convention Center over the Independence Day weekend for the world's largest ever , .
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Original:  Members of the furry fandom have lived in the region for years, but prior to 2006 their annual gathering took place 300 miles to the east, in Philadelphia .
Revised:  Members of the have lived in the region for years, but prior to 2006 their annual gathering took place 300 miles to the east, in Philadelphia .
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Original:  Members of the furry fandom have lived in the region for years, but prior to 2006 their annual gathering took place 300 miles to the east, in Philadelphia .
Revised:  Members of the furry fandom have lived in the region for years, but prior to 2006 their annual gathering took place 300 miles to the east, in .
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Original:  The purchase and demolition by Target of its regular hotel, the Adams Mark, led to a cramped last-minute alternative for Anthrocon 2005.
Revised:  The purchase and demolition by of its regular hotel, the Adams Mark, led to a cramped last-minute alternative for Anthrocon 2005.
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Original:  Four "protesters" from imageboard 7chan stationed themselves outside a daycare center opposite the convention hotel on Saturday.
Revised:  Four "protesters" from 7chan stationed themselves outside a daycare center opposite the convention hotel on Saturday.
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Original:  Two wore Afro wigs and bore anti-furry banners.
Revised:  Two wore wigs and bore anti-furry banners.
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Original:  Anthrocon's closest competition is San Jose's Further Confusion , while Midwest FurFest in Chicago provides a third alternative, spurred by 35\% growth last year.
Revised:  Anthrocon's closest competition is 's , while Midwest FurFest in Chicago provides a third alternative, spurred by 35\% growth last year.
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Original:  Anthrocon's closest competition is San Jose's Further Confusion , while Midwest FurFest in Chicago provides a third alternative, spurred by 35\% growth last year.
Revised:  Anthrocon's closest competition is San Jose's Further Confusion , while Midwest FurFest in provides a third alternative, spurred by 35\% growth last year.
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Original:  The piece was one of a set created by seven prominent furry artists to depict the seven deadly sins - in this case, Greed.
Revised:  The piece was one of a set created by seven prominent furry artists to depict the - in this case, Greed.
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Original:  Charity and volunteers The convention supported Animal Friends, a local no-kill animal shelter .
Revised:  Charity and volunteers The convention supported Animal Friends, a local .
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Original:  Some, like a Kevin and Kell original, would have been at home in the regular art auction.
Revised:  Some, like a original, would have been at home in the regular art auction.
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Original:  The Chicago Cubs decided to cancel their booking after hearing about the con, and J.J. Hardy of the Milwaukee Brewers reported being kept up by fans on Wednesday night.
Revised:  The decided to cancel their booking after hearing about the con, and J.J. Hardy of the Milwaukee Brewers reported being kept up by fans on Wednesday night.
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Original:  The Chicago Cubs decided to cancel their booking after hearing about the con, and J.J. Hardy of the Milwaukee Brewers reported being kept up by fans on Wednesday night.
Revised:  The Chicago Cubs decided to cancel their booking after hearing about the con, and of the reported being kept up by fans on Wednesday night.
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Original:  The convention closed with next year's date — June 26-29 — along with the announcement of a guest: Disney animator Floyd Norman .
Revised:  The convention closed with next year's date — June 26-29 — along with the announcement of a guest: Disney animator .
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Original:  A triumph that I could swim in such ferocious conditions, but a tragedy that it's possible to swim at the North Pole," said Pugh who swam 0.6 miles in just under 19 minutes through crack in icebergs.
Revised:  A triumph that I could swim in such ferocious conditions, but a tragedy that it's possible to swim at the North Pole," said Pugh who swam 0.6 miles in just under 19 minutes through cracks in icebergs.
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Original:  (pictures at: URL text in Russian) Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
Revised:  Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
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Original:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them are in critical conditions, they have been carried to the L'vov hospital (video at: URL text in Russian) . Podrobnosti.com.ua reports that the fire started when one of the containers started to leak and the phosphor caught fire.
Revised:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them are in critical conditions, they have been carried to the L'vov hospital . Podrobnosti.com.ua reports that the fire started when one of the containers started to leak and the phosphor caught fire.
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Original:  Podrobnosti.com.ua reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis   
Revised:  Podrobnosti.com.ua reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis . 
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Original: An alarm for heavy chemical pollution has been issued in the L'vov region, Ukraine, where yesterday evening a railway disaster led to a fire involving 15 containers of liquid yellow phosphor . Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
Revised: An alarm for heavy chemical pollution has been issued in the Lviv region, Ukraine, where yesterday evening a railway disaster led to a fire involving 15 containers of liquid yellow phosphor . Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
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Original: An alarm for heavy chemical pollution has been issued in the L'vov region, Ukraine, where yesterday evening a railway disaster led to a fire involving 15 containers of liquid yellow phosphor . Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
Revised: An alarm for heavy chemical pollution has been issued in the L'vov region, Ukraine, where yesterday evening a railway disaster led to a fire involving 15 containers of liquid yellow phosphorus . Extinguishing the fire proved extremely difficult, since water cannot be used, as in contact with phosphorus it would generate poisonous gas.
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Original:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them are in critical conditions, they have been carried to the L'vov hospital.
Revised:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them are in critical conditions, they have been carried to the Lviv hospital.
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Original:  Podrobnosti .com.ua reports that the fire started when one of the containers started to leak and the phosphor caught fire.
Revised:  Podrobnosti reports that the fire started when one of the containers started to leak and the phosphor caught fire.
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Original:  Special firemen units remain on place to control the possibility of a new fire, while the Admistration of the L'vov Region is trying to forecast the possible short and mid term evolution of the situation.
Revised:  Special firemen units remain on place to control the possibility of a new fire, while the Admistration of the Lviv Oblast is trying to forecast the possible short and mid term evolution of the situation.
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Original:  Podrobnosti .com.ua reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis
Revised:  Podrobnosti reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis
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Original:  Gas was generated anyway,  at the moment the poisoned surface extends on about 90 sq. km.
Revised:  Gas was generated anyway, and at the moment the poisoned surface extends on about 90 sq. km.
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Original:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them are in critical conditions, they have been carried to the Lviv hospital.
Revised:  The casualties count is already heavy: 20 people were injured, 13 of them in critical condition. They have been carried to the Lviv hospital.
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Original:  From the five villages that are closer to the disaster area some 800 people have already been evacuated , half of them had to manage on their own as there was not enough public transport for all.
Revised:  From the five villages that are closer to the disaster area some 800 people have already been evacuated . Half of them had to manage on their own as there was not enough public transport for all.
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Original:  At the moment there is no available data about the wind direction and next expected movements of the phosphorus cloud.
Revised:  At the moment there is no available data about the wind direction or next expected movements of the phosphorus cloud.
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Original:  Special firemen units remain on place to control the possibility of a new fire, while the Admistration of the Lviv Oblast is trying to forecast the possible short and mid term evolution of the situation.
Revised:  Special firemen units remain on place to control the possibility of a new fire, while the Admistration of the Lviv Oblast is trying to forecast the possible short- and mid-term evolution of the situation.
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Original:  Podrobnosti reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings  phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis
Revised:  Podrobnosti reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings , phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis
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Original:  Podrobnosti reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings  phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and it starts liver necrosis
Revised:  Podrobnosti reports the deadly dose of yellow phosphor at 0,1 g. According to the same source, when poisoning living beings phosphor attacks their bones, their spinal cord, and starts liver necrosis
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Original: A bomb  exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people.
Revised: A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people.
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Original:  The new bus is scheduled for an inaugural run this Thursday.
Revised:  The replacement bus is scheduled for an inaugural run this Thursday.
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Original:  A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people .
Revised:  A bomb , injuring three people, exploded on a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people .
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Original:  A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people .
Revised:  A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service route between Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people .
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Original:  A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of Kashmir injuring three people .
Revised:  A bomb has exploded on the route of a new bus service between the Indian and Pakistani sides of the Kashmir border .
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Original:  Two other bombs  were found and defused on the route.
Revised:  Two other bombs on the route were found and defused on the route.
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Original:  Threats of violence against passengers  and attacks on the bus on the inaugural trip have been issued by Muslim militants.
Revised:  Threats of violence against passengers , and attacks on the bus on the inaugural trip have been issued by Muslim militants.
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Original:  Threats of violence against passengers  and attacks on the bus on the inaugural trip have been issued by Muslim militants.
Revised:  Threats of violence against passengers and attacks on the bus on the inaugural trip , were issued by Muslim militants.
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Original:  The bombs were on a highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir  and Muzaffarabad,  capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
Revised:  The bombs were found on a section of highway between Srinigar, in Indian-controlled Kashmir and Muzaffarabad, capital of Pakistani-controlled Kashmir.
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