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Original: From the early 19th century, both European and Chinese traders (dishsant visited Fiji for its sandalwood, hardwoods, beche-de-mer, marine life and, more recently, gold  .
Revised: From the early 19th century, both European and Chinese traders (dishsant visited Fiji for its sandalwood, hardwoods, beche-de-mer, marine life and, more recently, gold ) .
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Original: ]] Historical significance is a historical concept, which defines and influences the social remembrance of past events.
Revised: ]] Historical significance is a human concept, which defines and influences the social remembrance of past events.
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Original:  Knowledge of dates and events is the primary content of history and can be considered "first-order knowledge" as a concept.
Revised:  Historians consider knowledge of dates and events is the primary content of history and can be considered "first-order knowledge" as a concept.
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Original:  Knowledge of dates and events is the primary content of history and can be considered "first-order knowledge" as a concept.
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Original:  Knowledge of dates and events is the primary content of history and can be considered "first-order knowledge" as a concept.
Revised:  Knowledge of dates and events is the primary content of history , or "first-order knowledge" as a concept.
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Original:  Historical significance is an aspect of the study of this primary content, it is deemed as a secondary or "second-order knowledge" concept .
Revised:  Historical significance is an aspect of the study of primary content, it is deemed as a secondary or "second-order knowledge" concept .
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Original:  Historical significance is an aspect of the study of this primary content, it is deemed as a secondary or "second-order knowledge" concept .
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Original:  Historical significance is an aspect of the study of this primary content, it is deemed as a secondary or "second-order knowledge" concept .
Revised:  Historical significance is an aspect of the study of this primary content, it is deemed as a secondary or "second-order knowledge" .
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Original:  However, the way the dates and events are  described is often used to assign significance, without acknowledging bias.
Revised:  However, the way dates and events are described is often used to assign significance, without acknowledging bias.
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Original:  However, the way the dates and events are  described is often used to assign significance, without acknowledging bias.
Revised:  However, the way the dates and events are chosen and described is often used to assign significance, without acknowledging bias.
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Original:  As Winston Churchill, ( and many others ) have said: "History is written by the victors".
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Original: ]] Historical significance is a human concept that defines and influences the social remembrance of past events.
Revised: ]] Historical significance is a historiographical concept that defines and influences the social remembrance of past events.
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Original:  Historians consider knowledge of dates and events as the primary content of history, or "first-order knowledge".
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Original:  They class historical significance is an aspect of the study of primary content, deeming it secondary or "second-order knowledge".
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Original:  As statesman Winston Churchilland philosopher Michel Foucault , and many others , have said: "History is written by the victors".
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Original:  As statesman Winston Churchilland philosopher Michel Foucault , and many others , have said: "History is written by the victors".
Revised:  As statesman Winston Churchilland philosopher Michel Foucault , and many others have said: "History is written by the victors".
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Original:  A central topic to the study of history, the concept defines what is remembered about the past, courtesy its reflections in various objects of contemporary culture (images on stamps and banknotes, street names etc).
Revised:  A central topic to the study of history, historical significance defines what is remembered about the past, courtesy its reflections in various objects of contemporary culture (images on stamps and banknotes, street names etc).
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Original:  A central topic to the study of history, the concept defines what is remembered about the past, courtesy its reflections in various objects of contemporary culture (images on stamps and banknotes, street names etc).
Revised:  A central topic to the study of history, the concept defines what is remembered about the past, through its reflections in various objects of contemporary culture (images on stamps and banknotes, street names etc).
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Original:  For example, the UNESCO includes any site as a world heritage site, provided they "bear  a unique or at least exceptional testimony to a cultural tradition or to a civilization".
Revised:  For example, UNESCO includes any site as a world heritage site, provided they "bear a unique or at least exceptional testimony to a cultural tradition or to a civilization".
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Original:  For example, the UNESCO includes any site as a world heritage site, provided they "bear  a unique or at least exceptional testimony to a cultural tradition or to a civilization".
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Original:  For example, the UNESCO includes any site as a world heritage site, provided they "bear  a unique or at least exceptional testimony to a cultural tradition or to a civilization".
Revised:  For example, the UNESCO includes any site as a world heritage site, provided they "bear s a unique or at least exceptional testimony to a cultural tradition or to a civilization".
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Original:  ISBN 9781136472848.
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Original:  As Winston Churchill , Michel Foucault and many others have said: "History is written by the victors".
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Original:  As Winston Churchill and Michel Foucault have said: "History is written by the victors".
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Original:  1981 1990s Tony Buzan –
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Original:  association expansion cards concept ( Object Pairing ) 2000s (decade) Creative capabilities and the promotion of highly innovative research –
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Original:  Periods and personalities%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ancient Greece Archimedes Plato's Dialogue of Ion 3rd century Porphyry of Tyros graphically visualised the concept categories of Aristotle.
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Original:  11th century – 16th century%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 13th century About 1275, in an early attempt to use logical means to produce knowledge, Ramon Llull designed a method of combining attributes selected from a number of lists, which he first published in full in his Ars generalis ultima or Ars magna (1305).
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 13th century About 1275, in an early attempt to use logical means to produce knowledge, Ramon Llull designed a method of combining attributes selected from a number of lists, which he first published in full in his Ars generalis ultima or Ars magna (1305).
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Original:  1470s Leonardo da Vinci%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1500s–2000s Early 20th century Pablo Picasso painter Marcel Duchamp artist Alfred North Whitehead philosopher, algebraist 1940s Fritz Zwicky – Morphological Analysis Lawrence Delos Miles – Value engineering – technique for operating with available knowledge, Methods of collecting and organizing knowledge about a problem and the system.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1500s–2000s Early 20th century Pablo Picasso painter Marcel Duchamp artist Alfred North Whitehead philosopher, algebraist 1940s Fritz Zwicky – Morphological Analysis Lawrence Delos Miles – Value engineering – technique for operating with available knowledge, Methods of collecting and organizing knowledge about a problem and the system.
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Original:  1470s Leonardo da Vinci%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 1500s–2000s Early 20th century Pablo Picasso painter Marcel Duchamp artist Alfred North Whitehead philosopher, algebraist 1940s Fritz Zwicky – Morphological Analysis Lawrence Delos Miles – Value engineering – technique for operating with available knowledge, Methods of collecting and organizing knowledge about a problem and the system.
Revised:  1470s Leonardo da Vinci%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Early 20th century Pablo Picasso painter Marcel Duchamp artist Alfred North Whitehead philosopher, algebraist 1940s Fritz Zwicky – Morphological Analysis Lawrence Delos Miles – Value engineering – technique for operating with available knowledge, Methods of collecting and organizing knowledge about a problem and the system.
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Original:  In Rome , these Greek concepts were partly shaken .
Revised:  In the Roman era , these Greek concepts were partly shaken .
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Original:  In Rome , these Greek concepts were partly shaken .
Revised:  In Rome , these Greek concepts were partly challenged .
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Original: Possiblt the first to recognisably use the word "creation" in terms of human creativity was the 17th-century Polish poet and theoretician of poetry, Maciej Kazimierz Sarbiewski (1595–1640), known as "the last Latin poet."
Revised: Possibly the first to recognisably use the word "creation" in terms of human creativity was the 17th-century Polish poet and theoretician of poetry, Maciej Kazimierz Sarbiewski (1595–1640), known as "the last Latin poet."
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Original: Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard ( b. on Tehran, Tehran), also known as Asghar Vesali ' , was an Iranian military leader.
Revised: Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard ( ), commonly known as Asghar Vesali ' , was an Iranian military leader.
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Original: Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard ( b. on Tehran, Tehran), also known as Asghar Vesali ' , was an Iranian military leader.
Revised: Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard ( b. on Tehran, Tehran), also known as Asghar Vesali , was an Iranian military leader.
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Original:  Before the Islamic Revolution, he was a member of MEK.
Revised:  Before the Iranian Revolution, he was a member of MEK.
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Original:  After that, he joined the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps and was appointed a military leader of forces called "red handkerchief" in the Iran-Iraq War.
Revised:  After that, he joined the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps , he was appointed as a leader of the Red Handkerchief during the Iran-Iraq War.
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Original:  He was killed in Gilan-e Gharb at the age of 30. Career and activities Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard was a member of MEK.
Revised:  Vesali was killed in Gilan-e Gharb at the age of 30. Career and activities Ali Asghar Vesali Tehrani Fard was a member of MEK.
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Original:  He was released in late 1976 and afterward did not continue his activity with MEK.
Revised:  He was released in late 1976 and did not continue his activity with MEK.
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Original:  He was released in late 1976 and afterward did not continue his activity with MEK.
Revised:  He was released in late 1976 and afterward did not continue his activities with MEK.
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Original:  It was the mission of Barrack-3 forces  to find and arrest them.
Revised:  It was the mission of Barrack-3 forces ' mission to find and arrest them.
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Original:  Asghar Vesali had been appointed the leader of the mission . After the Iranian Revolution, he became a member of the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps and was one of the founders of the foreign Intelligence department.
Revised:  Asghar Vesali had been appointed the leader of the mission . After the Iranian Revolution, Vesali became a member of the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps and was one of the founders of the foreign Intelligence department.
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Original:  Asghar Vesali had been appointed the leader of the mission . After the Iranian Revolution, he became a member of the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps and was one of the founders of the foreign Intelligence department.
Revised:  Asghar Vesali had been appointed the leader of the mission . After the Iranian Revolution, he became a member of the Islamic Revolutionary Guard Corps and was one of the founders of the Foreign Intelligence department.
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Original:  However, several attacks occurred in the west of Iran that made him go to that region .
Revised:  He was then moved to the west of Iran that made him go to that region .
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Original:  However, several attacks occurred in the west of Iran that made him go to that region .
Revised:  However, several attacks occurred in the west of Iran after several attacks had occurred there .
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Original:  He formed groups of soldiers and called them " red handkerchief ".
Revised:  He formed groups of soldiers and called them " Red Handkerchief ".
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Original:  Mostafa Chamran said , “I met some fighters in Lebanon, but I never saw a man as brave as Vesali”.
Revised:  Mostafa Chamran said : “I met some fighters in Lebanon, but I never saw a man as brave as Vesali”.
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Original:  Ali Asghar Vesali married Maryam Kazemzadeh, a correspondent and photographer.
Revised:  Vesali married Maryam Kazemzadeh, a correspondent and photographer.
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Original:  She met Vesali when she traveled to Marivan as a reporter . Chamran introduced them to each other when they prepared a report on the liberation of Paveh.
Revised:  She met Vesali when she traveled to Marivan as a reporter , where Chamran introduced them to each other when they prepared a report on the liberation of Paveh.
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Original:  She met Vesali when she traveled to Marivan as a reporter . Chamran introduced them to each other when they prepared a report on the liberation of Paveh.
Revised:  She met Vesali when she traveled to Marivan as a reporter . Chamran introduced them to each other while they were preparing a report on the liberation of Paveh.
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Original:  Death On Ashura day, 19 November 1980, he received a head injury fighting against anti-revolutionary groups in the west of Iran  near Gilan-e Gharb and died after surgery.
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Original:  Death On Ashura day, 19 November 1980, he received a head injury fighting against anti-revolutionary groups in the west of Iran  near Gilan-e Gharb and died after surgery.
Revised:  Death On Ashura day, 19 November 1980, he received a head injury fighting against anti-revolutionary groups in the west of Iran , near Gilan-e Gharb and died after surgery.
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Original:  In media The film Che ( 2014 film) depicts 48 hours in the lives of Mostafa Chamran and Asghar Vesali, with actor Babak Hamidian playing the role of Asghar Vesali.
Revised:  In media The film Che ( 2014 film Che, with Babak Hamidian playing the role of Asghar Vesali.
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Original:  In media The film Che ( 2014 film) depicts 48 hours in the lives of Mostafa Chamran and Asghar Vesali, with actor Babak Hamidian playing the role of Asghar Vesali.
Revised:  In media The film Che ( 2014 film) depicts 48 hours in the lives of Mostafa Chamran and Asghar Vesali, with actor Babak Hamidian playing as Vesali.
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Original:  The film focuses primarily on their fight against anti-revolutionary groups in Paveh.
Revised:  The film focuses primarily on the fight against anti-revolutionary groups in Paveh.
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Original: When a patient showed  Sperber news about a Ukrainian named Leonid Stadnik, she had the tragic marks of untreated acromegaly.
Revised: When a patient showed James Sperber news about a Ukrainian named Leonid Stadnik, she had the tragic marks of untreated acromegaly.
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Original:  It suddenly began to grow rapidly, reaching 5 feet 5 inches or 5 feet 6 inches at age 12 years.
Revised:  He suddenly began to grow rapidly, reaching 5 feet 5 inches or 5 feet 6 inches at age 12 years.
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Original:   Guinness World Records but rather by the Ukrainian Book of Records, where his height was listed as .
Revised:  His height is not recorded by the Guinness World Records but rather by the Ukrainian Book of Records, where his height was listed as .
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Original:   Guinness World Records but rather by the Ukrainian Book of Records, where his height was listed as .
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Original:  Eventually, he gave up and turned his attention strictly to running the farm.
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Original:  His height is not recorded by the Guinness World Records but rather by the Ukrainian Book of Records, where it was listed as . Death Stadnyk died at the age of 44 on 24 August 2014 from a brain hemorrhage.
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Original: It has been argued by Serbian academic Jelena Ožegović that wearing the hijab was an act of civil disobedience that not only complies with the general principles of law but as a non-violent act of protest was the reasonable duty of any citizen confronted with a law they consider to be unjust.
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Original:  The other major feminist groups described their message as, ""appalling" and having nothing to do with women's rights."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ironically, Henri Wallon, after which the school was named, wrote about the individual's need for rebellion and teenage desire for religious fulfilment as normative psychological phenomena.
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Original: Alma and Lila Lévy are sisters who rose to fame at the centre of the French controversy over the veil in 2003 when they were expelled from school.
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Original:  See also References
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Original: Âhasiw Maskêgon-Iskwêw ( 1958-2006 ) was a Cree and French Métis theorist, curator and artist.
Revised: Âhasiw Maskêgon-Iskwêw ( 1958–2006 ) was a Cree and French Métis theorist, curator and artist.
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Original:  Life Curatorial and Arts Administration Category:20th-century Canadian artists Category:20th-century indigenous people of the Americas Category:1958 births Category:2006 deaths Category:First Nations performance artis
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Original:  Life Curatorial and Arts Administration Category:20th-century Canadian artists Category:20th-century indigenous people of the Americas Category:1958 births Category:2006 deaths Category:First Nations performance artis
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Original:  In 1994 he became Program Coordinator, Acting Executive Director, and Assistant Editor of the Talking Stick First Nations Arts Magazine for Circle Vision Arts Corporation.
Revised:  In 1994 he became program coordinator, acting executive director, and assistant editor of the Talking Stick First Nations Arts Magazine for Circle Vision Arts Corporation.
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Original: Cree people Category:LGBT artists from Canada Category:LGBT First Nations people Category:21st-century Canadian writers Category:21st-century First Nations people Category:Canadian art critics Category:20th-century Canadian male writers Category:20th-century Canadian non-fiction writers Category:21st-century Canadian male writers Category:21st-century Canadian non-fiction writers Category:Canadian curators Category:Canadian magazine editors Category:Indigenous curators of the Americ
Revised: Cree people Category:LGBT artists from Canada Category:LGBT First Nations people Category:21st-century Canadian writers Category:21st-century First Nations people Category:Canadian art critics Category:20th-century Canadian male writers Category:20th-century Canadian non-fiction writers Category:21st-century Canadian male writers Category:21st-century Canadian non-fiction writers Category:Canadian curators Category:Canadian magazine editors Category:Indigenous curators of the Americas Category:20th-century LGBT peop
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Original: Education He completed his Bachelor's education at St.
Revised: Education He persued his Bachelor's education at St.
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Original:  Currently he was the joint editor of Mizoram largest news paper Vanglaini.
Revised:  Currently he is the joint editor of Mizoram largest news paper Vanglaini.
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Original:  She was made the KRG's representative in the UK, before moving to Washington, DC in 2015 to act as the KRG representative to the U 
Revised:  She was made the KRG's representative in the UK, before moving to Washington, DC in 2015 to act as the KRG representative to the US. 
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Original: URL F. URL Chamorro URL Cruz URL URL Calero URL Cruz URL Francisco URL Argüello URL URL URL Brenes URL Lacayo URL URL Argüello URL Rizo URL URL Abáunza URL Sánchez URL URL URL Fernando URL Abáunza URL Aguado URL URL URL URL Lacayo URL M. URL Mercado URL Fernando URL Somoza URL URL Somoza URL URL URL José Morales URL Castillo URL José Morales URL Montenegro URL Martínez URL Montenegro URL Urcuyo URL H. URL Urcuyo Maliaños1978-July URL Presidents of the Senate before 1979 Name Term NotesM.
Revised: URL F. URL Chamorro URL Cruz URL URL Calero URL Cruz URL Francisco URL Argüello URL URL URL Brenes URL Lacayo URL URL Argüello URL Rizo URL URL Abáunza URL Sánchez URL URL URL Fernando URL Abáunza URL Aguado URL URL URL URL Lacayo URL M. URL Mercado URL Fernando URL Somoza URL URL Somoza URL URL URL José Morales Marenco1959-1961Jesús Castillo Alvarado1961Juan José Morales URL Montenegro URL Martínez URL Montenegro URL Urcuyo URL H. URL Urcuyo Maliaños1978-July URL Presidents of the Senate before 1979 Name Term NotesM.
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