wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  After they were caught, they said that they were upset over Campbell's support for the 2010 Winter Olympic Games in Vancouver, British Columbia.
Revised:  After the suspects were caught, they said that they were upset over Campbell's support for the 2010 Winter Olympic Games in Vancouver, British Columbia.
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Original:  Poor citizens are loosing their homes due to the money spent and developments near the city on preparation for the long-waited 2010 Winter Olympics, they say.
Revised:  Poor citizens are losing their homes due to the money spent and developments near the city on preparation for the long-waited 2010 Winter Olympics, they say.
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Original:  Poor citizens are loosing their homes due to the money spent and developments near the city on preparation for the long-waited 2010 Winter Olympics, they say.
Revised:  Poor citizens are loosing their homes due to the money spent and developments near the city on preparation for the long-awaited 2010 Winter Olympics, they say.
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Original: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
Revised: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event follows an incident, last Sunday, during which anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
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Original: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
Revised: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested . A police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
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Original: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
Revised: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours conducting what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
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Original: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be an interview in downtown Vancouver.
Revised: Canadian Association of Journalists upset with police This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham was arrested last Sunday after a police officer posed as a journalist for news source Vancouver 24 hours , of what Cunningham believed to be a legitimate interview in downtown Vancouver.
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Original:  He was then arrested for allegedly harassing, at a protest last Wednesday, the 2010 Winter Olympic Games organizing committee.
Revised:  Cunningham was later arrested for alleged harassment at a protest last Wednesday, the 2010 Winter Olympic Games organizing committee.
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Original:  Birnbaum, married to her husband Ken for 38 years , underwent in-vitro fertilization last year in Cape Town, South Africa.
Revised:  Birnbaum, married to her husband Ken for 38 years and underwent in-vitro fertilization last year in Cape Town, South Africa.
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Original:  The couple already had three children, a son (age 33), a daughter(age 29 ), and a second son (age 6).
Revised:  The couple already had three children, a daughter, 29 ), and a second son (age 6).
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Original:  The couple already had three children, a son (age 33), a daughter(age 29 ), and a second son (age 6).
Revised:  The couple already had three children, a son (age 33), a daughter(age 29 
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Original:  She also stated that she wanted to remove some of the stigma surrounding older women giving birth  
Revised:  "There were no guidelines of what to do and what to look for in a pregnancy at the age to 60. Can the heart, or the kidneys withstand the pregnancy? It becomes a little risky to take care of this pregnancy," added Radwin. 
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Original:  I don't know what 60 is meant to be," said Birnbaum as quoted by Newsdaywho quotes FOX News.
Revised:  I don't know what 60 is meant to be," said Birnbaum as quoted by Newsday who quotes FOX News.
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Original: A grade 9 student, Jordan Manners, whose age is disputed  though believed to be 14 years old , was shot in the chest while near the swimming pool of C. W. Jeffreys Collegiate Institute in the Jane-Finch neighbourhood of Toronto.
Revised: A grade 9 student, Jordan Manners, whose age is disputed , though believed to be 14 years old , was shot in the chest while near the swimming pool of C. W. Jeffreys Collegiate Institute in the Jane-Finch neighbourhood of Toronto.
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Original: A grade 9 student, Jordan Manners, whose age is disputed  though believed to be 14 years old , was shot in the chest while near the swimming pool of C. W. Jeffreys Collegiate Institute in the Jane-Finch neighbourhood of Toronto.
Revised: A grade 9 student, Jordan Manners, whose age is disputed though believed to be 14 , was shot in the chest while near the swimming pool of C. W. Jeffreys Collegiate Institute in the Jane-Finch neighbourhood of Toronto.
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Original:  The school was quickly placed in lockdown mode, though several students came out in stretchers and were taken to Sunnybrook Hospital for hyperventilation.
Revised:  The school quickly into lockdown mode, though several students came out in stretchers and were taken to Sunnybrook Hospital for hyperventilation.
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Original:  Police searched the building for weapons , finding none, and Emergency Task Force ( ETM ) crew entered the building shortly afterward .
Revised:  Police searched the building for weapons but found none. Shortly after, an Emergency Task Force ( ETM ) crew entered the building shortly afterward .
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Original:  Police searched the building for weapons , finding none, and Emergency Task Force ( ETM ) crew entered the building shortly afterward .
Revised:  Police searched the building for weapons , finding none, and Emergency Task Force ( ETM ) crew entered the building .
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Original:  Mayor David Miller interrupted  council to make a brief speech to the councilors when he heard the news.
Revised:  Mayor David Miller interrupted the city council to make a brief speech to the councilors when he heard the news.
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Original:  This has been the first major violent incident to take place at a Toronto high school since 2000, when four students and one staff member were wounded in a knife attack at Cairine Wilson High School in Orleans , Ontario
Revised:  This is the first major violent incident to take place at a Toronto high school since 2000, when four students and one staff member were wounded in a knife attack at Cairine Wilson High School in Orleans , Ontario
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Original:  This has been the first major violent incident to take place at a Toronto high school since 2000, when four students and one staff member were wounded in a knife attack at Cairine Wilson High School in Orleans , Ontario
Revised:  This has been the first major violent incident to take place at a Toronto high school since 2000, when four students and one staff member were wounded in a knife attack at Cairine Wilson High School in Orléans , Ontario
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Original: Mary Cheney Has Son Mary Cheney , The openly lesbian Daughter of Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
Revised: Mary Cheney , The openly lesbian Daughter of Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
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Original: Mary Cheney Has Son Mary Cheney , The openly lesbian Daughter of Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
Revised: Mary Cheney Has Son Mary Cheney , The openly lesbian daughter of United States Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
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Original:  The baby was born weighing 8 lbs and 6 ounces (3.9 Kg) . UR
Revised:  The baby was born weighing 8 lbs and 6 ounces (3.9 Kg) 
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Original:  Mary Cheney, The openly lesbian daughter of United States Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
Revised:  Mary Cheney, the openly lesbian daughter of United States Vice President Dick Cheney, has a given birth to a son, named Samuel David Cheney.
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Original:  The baby was born weighing 8 lbs and 6 ounces (3.9 Kg)   
Revised:  The baby was born weighing 8 lbs and 6 ounces (3.9 Kg) . 
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Original:  Photo: Sage Ross 250px|Protesters and counter-protesters gathered on opposite sides of the street.
Revised:  250px|Protesters and counter-protesters gathered on opposite sides of the street.
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Original: At least 35 miners are dead and at least 3 others are trapped or missing after methane exploded in an underground coal mine in Russia.
Revised: At least 36 miners are dead and at least 3 others are trapped or missing after methane exploded in an underground coal mine in Russia.
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Original: At least 36 miners are dead and at least 2 others are trapped or missing after methane exploded in an underground coal mine in Russia.
Revised: At least 36 miners are dead after methane exploded in an underground coal mine in Russia.
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Original:  180 people have made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those have been seriously injured.
Revised:  180 people made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those have been seriously injured.
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Original:  180 people have made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those have been seriously injured.
Revised:  180 people have made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those were been seriously injured.
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Original:  180 people made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those were been seriously injured.
Revised:  180 people made it out of the mine, and at least 7 of those were seriously injured.
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Original:  <font color="pink">ong like no way bitches The explosion occurred at the Yubileynaya (Jubilee) Mine located in Novokuznetsk, Russia in the Kemerovo Oblast at approximately 7:40 a.m. local time on Thursday [11:40 p.m. eastern time on Wednesday].
Revised:  The explosion occurred at the Yubileynaya (Jubilee) Mine located in Novokuznetsk, Russia in the Kemerovo Oblast at approximately 7:40 a.m. local time on Thursday [11:40 p.m. eastern time on Wednesday].
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Original: Related stories Pope 'lucid' but remains in 'very serious condition' VATICAN CITY (CNN) -- Pope John Paul II remained in "very serious condition" Friday afternoon, but he is "lucid, fully conscious" and "very serene," said Vatican spokesman Joaquin Navarro-Valls.
Revised: Related Pope 'lucid' but remains in 'very serious condition' VATICAN CITY (CNN) -- Pope John Paul II remained in "very serious condition" Friday afternoon, but he is "lucid, fully conscious" and "very serene," said Vatican spokesman Joaquin Navarro-Valls.
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Original: California Senator Carole Migden has revealed that she is suffering from leukemia and that medication prescribed to her may have caused a car accident she caused on May 22.
Revised: California Senator Carole Migden has revealed that she is suffering from leukemia and that medication prescribed to her may have contributed to a car accident she caused on May 22.
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Original:  Creation of the M1126A  Armored Combat Deep Fryer ("The M1126A Fryker Armored Combat Deep Fryer is a modified M1126 Stryker capable of preparing the main course of a meal, under combat conditions, for 150 soldiers.") article.
Revised:  Creation of the M1126A Fryker Armored Combat Deep Fryer ("The M1126A Fryker Armored Combat Deep Fryer is a modified M1126 Stryker capable of preparing the main course of a meal, under combat conditions, for 150 soldiers.") article.
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Original: Today Wikipedia, the free encyclopaedia that anyone with access to the internet can edit, was the victim of an onslaught of practical jokes, as April Fool's Day kicked in in various timezones around the world, at least those parts which follow the Gregorian calendar.
Revised: Today Wikipedia, the free encyclopaedia that anyone with access to the Internet can edit, was the victim of an onslaught of practical jokes, as April Fool's Day kicked in in various timezones around the world, at least those parts which follow the Gregorian calendar.
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Original:  ( Being accessible worldwide (by people who can afford Internet access) in all timezones, April Fool's Day lasts for more than 24 hours at Wikipedia. ) The change to the deletion notice was undone within 31 minutes, for example, despite the notice being altered at 05:08 UTC, night-time in Europe and the United States.
Revised:  Being accessible worldwide (by people who can afford Internet access) in all timezones, April Fool's Day lasts for more than 24 hours at Wikipedia. ) The change to the deletion notice was undone within 31 minutes, for example, despite the notice being altered at 05:08 UTC, night-time in Europe and the United States.
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Original:  ( Being accessible worldwide (by people who can afford Internet access) in all timezones, April Fool's Day lasts for more than 24 hours at Wikipedia. ) The change to the deletion notice was undone within 31 minutes, for example, despite the notice being altered at 05:08 UTC, night-time in Europe and the United States.
Revised:  ( Being accessible worldwide (by people who can afford Internet access) in all timezones, April Fool's Day lasts for more than 24 hours at Wikipedia. The change to the deletion notice was undone within 31 minutes, for example, despite the notice being altered at 05:08 UTC, night-time in Europe and the United States.
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Original:  (This statement is not to imply that there are not other important countries in these time zones.) (Yeah, like Europe is a country and all.)
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Original: Today Wikipedia, the free encyclopaedia that anyone with access to the Internet can edit, was the victim of an onslaught of practical jokes, as April Fool's Day kicked in in various timezones around the world, at least those parts which follow the Gregorian calendar.
Revised: Today Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia that anyone with access to the Internet can edit, was the victim of an onslaught of practical jokes, as April Fool's Day kicked in in various timezones around the world, at least those parts which follow the Gregorian calendar.
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Original: Energy rating label used in Australia The Western Australian Government has announce that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new enviromental regulations.
Revised:  The Western Australian Government has announce that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new enviromental regulations.
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Original:  As well as all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket which reduce w: evaporation.
Revised:  As well as all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket which reduce evaporation.
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Original: The Western Australian Government has announce that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new enviromental regulations.
Revised: The Western Australian Government has announce that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
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Original: “ It is estimated that if all homes in WA upgraded to the Five Star Plus standards, there would be water savings of 30 gigalitres over five years, ” she said. by requiring water efficient taps, showerheads and dual flush toilets.
Revised: " It is estimated that if all homes in WA upgraded to the Five Star Plus standards, there would be water savings of 30 gigalitres over five years, ” she said. by requiring water efficient taps, showerheads and dual flush toilets.
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Original: “ It is estimated that if all homes in WA upgraded to the Five Star Plus standards, there would be water savings of 30 gigalitres over five years, ” she said. by requiring water efficient taps, showerheads and dual flush toilets.
Revised: “ It is estimated that if all homes in WA upgraded to the Five Star Plus standards, there would be water savings of 30 gigalitres over five years, " she said. by requiring water efficient taps, showerheads and dual flush toilets.
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Original:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems . - media release for Michelle Roberts MLA Minister for Housing and Works%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Australia Category:Ocean
Revised:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems - media release for Michelle Roberts MLA Minister for Housing and Works%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Australia Category:Ocean
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Original:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems . - media release for Michelle Roberts MLA Minister for Housing and Works%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Australia Category:Ocean
Revised:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Australia Category:Ocean
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Original:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems . - media release for Michelle Roberts MLA Minister for Housing and Works%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Australia Category:Ocean
Revised:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and gery water diversion systems . - media release for Michelle Roberts MLA Minister for Housing and Works%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announce that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
Revised: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announced that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
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Original: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announced that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
Revised: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announced that after September 1, 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
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Original: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announced that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Enviromental regulations.
Revised: Image:Parliament House, Perth, Western Australia.jpg|Parliament House in Perth, Western Australia ]] The Western Australian Government has announced that after September 1st 2007 all construction approvals for new homes must comply with new Environmental regulations.
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Original:  Michelle Roberts  minister for Housing and Works  announced that the first stage would increase the cost of a new house by around A$1000 with a second stage to commence next year.
Revised:  Michelle Roberts , minister for Housing and Works announced that the first stage would increase the cost of a new house by around A$1000 with a second stage to commence next year.
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Original:  Michelle Roberts  minister for Housing and Works  announced that the first stage would increase the cost of a new house by around A$1000 with a second stage to commence next year.
Revised:  Michelle Roberts minister for Housing and Works , announced that the first stage would increase the cost of a new house by around A$1000 with a second stage to commence next year.
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Original:  As well as all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket which reduce evaporation.
Revised:  As well , all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket which reduce evaporation.
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Original:  As well as all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket which reduce evaporation.
Revised:  As well as all new swimming pools will be required to have a pool blanket to reduce evaporation.
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Original:  The second stage  will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and grey water diversion systems  
Revised:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies such as rain water tanks and grey water diversion systems 
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Original:  The second stage  will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and grey water diversion systems  
Revised:  The second stage will require the design to include alternative water supplies like rain water tanks and grey water diversion systems . 
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Original:   The announcement was made by veteran DJ Johnnie Walker on BBC Radio Two this morning.
Revised:  URL The announcement was made by veteran DJ Johnnie Walker on BBC Radio Two this morning.
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Original:  URL The announcement was made by veteran DJ Johnnie Walker on BBC Radio Two this morning.
Revised:  The announcement was made by veteran DJ Johnnie Walker on BBC Radio Two this morning.
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Original: Lewis Hamilton|120px Lewis Hamilton, the current leader in the Formula One World Championship, is to take part in this year's Goodwood Festival of Speed , it was announced today .
Revised: Lewis Hamilton|120px Lewis Hamilton, the current leader in the Formula One World Championship, is to take part in this year's Goodwood Festival of Speed .
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Original:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humourous 
Revised:  On the whole the media coverage of the incident has been lighthearted and humourous .
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Original: Bush was addressing the American press in the White House 's Rose Garden.
Revised: Bush was addressing the American press in the White House in the Rose Garden.
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