wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Eficence Medical Research Brochure Foot spa detox: real effects are revealed CAM September, 2005 Vol 5 Issue 2 Dr Sanjay Chaudhuri, MB,BS, BSc concludes, "The results suggest that the Aqua Detox adds additional resources to the “body electric” which then enhances the body’s innate ability to detoxify and rebalance itself...
Revised: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure Foot spa detox: real effects are revealed CAM September, 2005 Vol 5 Issue 2 Dr Sanjay Chaudhuri, MB,BS, BSc concludes, "The results suggest that the Aqua Detox adds additional resources to the “body electric” which then enhances the body’s innate ability to detoxify and rebalance itself...
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Original:  Facillities using this equipment have found a 100\% correlation with the colors and textures in the water and conditions of their clients that have been diagnosed by medical physicians.
Revised:  Facilities using this equipment have found a 100\% correlation with the colors and textures in the water and conditions of their clients that have been diagnosed by medical physicians.
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Original:  Hopefully, these efforts will produce solid research that will give a definitive answer one way or the other .
Revised:  Hopefully, these efforts will produce solid research that will give a detailed understanding of this process .
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Original:  It is currently understood that those that work properly provide an electric current to an electrode array immersed in a salt water solution.
Revised:  They work by providing an electric current to an electrode array immersed in a salt water solution.
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Original: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In imitation equipment that does not work properly, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which  turns the water brown quickly .
Revised: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which turns the water brown quickly .
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Original: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In imitation equipment that does not work properly, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which  turns the water brown quickly .
Revised: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In imitation equipment that does not work properly, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which quickly turns the water brown quickly .
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Original: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In imitation equipment that does not work properly, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which  turns the water brown quickly .
Revised: Aqua Detox Scientific Research The Evidence Medical Research Brochure%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In imitation equipment that does not work properly, the electrodes rapidly rust in a chemical process called electrolysis which turns the water brown .
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Original:  This reaction happens regardless of whether or not a person’s feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use.
Revised:  This reaction happens regardless of whether or not a persons feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use.
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Original:  This reaction happens regardless of whether or not a person’s feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use . Properly functioning detoxification foot baths consist of two major components, a simple container in which to place the feet and an electrode array.
Revised:  This reaction happens regardless of whether or not a person’s feet are immersed in the water and no toxins from the human body have ever been detected in the water after use . Detoxification foot baths consist of two major components, a simple container in which to place the feet and an electrode array.
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Original:  Usually a warm, salted water is used as the electrolyte and an individual's feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
Revised:  Usually a fragrant, warm salted water is used as the electrolyte and an individual's feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
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Original:  Usually a warm, salted water is used as the electrolyte and an individual's feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
Revised:  Usually a warm, salted water is used as the electrolyte and the customers feet, along with the array are immersed in this water.
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Original:  Some spas and manufacturers provide charts to show their clients the different areas of their bodies that toxins can come from.
Revised:  Some spas and manufacturers provide charts to show their customers the different areas of their bodies that toxins can come from.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from White foam The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostate area Orange The joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals Originally, it was thought that there was no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
Revised:  Water color and consistency Associated area of body that "toxins" originated from Bubbly foam (Color determined by what mixes with it) The lymphatic system Yellow Green The kidneys, bladder, urinary tract or prostrate area OrangeThe joints Dark green The gall bladder Red with flects Blood clot material Black The liver Brown The liver, cellular debris and tobacco Black with flects Heavy metals There is currently no scientific basis to the claims these charts make.
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Original:  Staff members at each spa visited indicated that the treatments would improve  overall health, and that the change in the color of the water was due to the release of toxins from their bodies.
Revised:  Staff members at each spa visited indicated that the treatments would improve their overall health, and that the change in the color of the water was due to the release of toxins from their bodies.
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Original:  Inside Edition then purchased their copy of this unauthentic, improperly functioning detox foot bath and had it examined by electrical engineer, Steve Fowler, at his lab.
Revised:  Inside Edition then purchased their own detox foot bath and had it examined by electrical engineer, Steve Fowler, at his lab.
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Original:  Suspecting the brown water %DIFDELCMD < [%%% from improperly functioning foot baths could be a result of rust, he set up his own experiment using a bucket of water, a car battery and two large nails.
Revised:  Suspecting the brown water %DIFDELCMD < [%%% could be a result of rust, he set up his own experiment using a bucket of water, a car battery and two large nails.
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Original:  Ben Goldacre sent a friend along to a local spa using the unauthentic equipment to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
Revised:  With this information in mind he sent a friend along to a local spa using the unauthentic equipment to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
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Original:  Ben Goldacre sent a friend along to a local spa using the unauthentic equipment to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
Revised:  Ben Goldacre sent a friend along to a local spa to get a treatment and to collect samples of the water before and after.
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Original: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim writers Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani columnists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani journalists Category:Pakistani male writers Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
Revised: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani columnists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani journalists Category:Pakistani male writers Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
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Original: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim writers Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani columnists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani journalists Category:Pakistani male writers Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
Revised: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim writers Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani journalists Category:Pakistani male writers Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
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Original: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim writers Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani columnists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani journalists Category:Pakistani male writers Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
Revised: Islam and politics Category:Islamism Category: Muhajir people Category:Muslim writers Category:Muslim Zionists Category:Pakistani columnists Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:Pakistani non-fiction writers Category:Pakistani opinion journalists Category:Pakistani political journalists Category:Pakistani political writers Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani Shia Muslims Category:Pakistani Zionis
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Original: Dr. Tashbih Sayyed regarded Israel highly, and said that Israel is vital for the stability of the region.
Revised:  Sayyed regarded Israel highly, and said that Israel is vital for the stability of the region.
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Original:  Dr. Syed was strongly affiliated with Zionism and openly promoted himself as a Muslim Zionist.
Revised:  Sayyed was strongly affiliated with Zionism and openly promoted himself as a Muslim Zionist.
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Original:  The money went to support children suffering from cance 
Revised:  The money went to support children suffering from cancer. 
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Original:  Personal Life Baisarov is married and the father of six children.
Revised:  Personal life Baisarov is married and the father of six children.
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Original:  The money went to support children suffering from cancer. 
Revised:  The money went to support children suffering from cancer. References
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Original: In a 2009 charity auction, Baisarov acquired the right to cast a female role in Stalingrad, a film by know Russian director Fyodor Bondarchuk for €200,000.
Revised: In a 2009 charity auction, Baisarov acquired the right to cast a female role in the film Stalingrad by Russian director Fyodor Bondarchuk for €200,000.
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Original:  E-Commerce In 2016, Baisarov proposed the creation of a nationwide marketplace similar to the Chinese Alibaba as well as a payment system that would compete with Visa and MasterCard in the Russian Federation.
Revised:  E-commerce In 2016, Baisarov proposed the creation of a nationwide marketplace similar to the Chinese Alibaba as well as a payment system that would compete with Visa and MasterCard in the Russian Federation.
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Original: Pedro Ñancupel ( 1837 –  1888)  was a pirate and outlaw active in the archipelagoes of Chiloé, Guaitecas and other places in the fjords and channels of Patagonia in the 1880s.
Revised: Pedro Ñancupel ( 1837 – 1888) ) was a pirate and outlaw active in the archipelagoes of Chiloé, Guaitecas and other places in the fjords and channels of Patagonia in the 1880s.
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Original:  Category:19th-century pirates Category:1837 births Category:1888 deaths Category:Chilean outlaws Category:Mapuche sailors Category:People from Chiloé Province Category:People executed for piracy Category:Chilean people convicted of murder es:Pedro Ñancup
Revised:  Category:19th-century pirates Category:1837 births Category:1888 deaths Category:Chilean outlaws Category:Mapuche sailors Category:People from Chiloé Province Category:People executed for piracy Category:Chilean people convicted of murder es:Pedro Ñancúp
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Original: Pedro María Ñancúpel Alarcón (Terao, 1837 – Castro, 11 November 1888) ) was a pirate and outlaw active in the archipelagoes of Chiloé, Guaitecas and other places in the fjords and channels of Patagonia in the 1880s.
Revised: Pedro María Ñancúpel Alarcón (Terao, 1837 – Castro, 11 November 1888) was a pirate and outlaw active in the archipelagoes of Chiloé, Guaitecas and other places in the fjords and channels of Patagonia in the 1880s.
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Original:  Afger escaping he was captured  again and executed by firing squad on November 11, 1888.
Revised:  Afger escaping he was captured once again and executed by firing squad on November 11, 1888.
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Original:  After a brief time in the private sector as a Business Developer in Israel and in the United States, Liban Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30's .
Revised:  After a brief time in the private sector as a business developer in Israel and in the United States, Liban Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30's .
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Original:  After a brief time in the private sector as a Business Developer in Israel and in the United States, Liban Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30's .
Revised:  After a brief time in the private sector as a Business Developer in Israel and in the United States, Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30's .
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Original:  After a brief time in the private sector as a Business Developer in Israel and in the United States, Liban Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30's .
Revised:  After a brief time in the private sector as a Business Developer in Israel and in the United States, Liban Soleman moved to the public sector in Africa and quickly held key positions within the government of Gabon before his 30s .
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Original:  Initiating, implementing and managing large scale strategic and multi-discipline government projects at National and International levels, he gained intimate knowledge of the Sub Saharan African environment, on development issues on the continent and the general business cultures.
Revised:  Initiating, implementing and managing large scale strategic and multi-discipline government projects at national and International levels, he gained intimate knowledge of the Sub Saharan African environment, on development issues on the continent and the general business cultures.
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Original:  Mr Soleman is major cultural passionate and promoter.
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Original:  Marule formed a task force of social work professionals to create an indigenous social work program at RCC. Marule retired as president of RCC in 2014.
Revised:  Marule retired as president of RCC in 2014.
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Original:  She developed inclusive curricula so that education respected cultural heritage and indigenous identity  .
Revised:  Marule developed inclusive curricula so that education respected cultural heritage and indigenous identity .
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Original:  Smallface was one of seven children who were encouraged to attend school in Cardston where an Anglican Indian priest thought she would succeed .
Revised:  Smallface was one of seven children who were encouraged to attend school in Cardston at the suggestion of an Anglican Indian priest thought she would succeed .
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Original:  Smallface was one of seven children who were encouraged to attend school in Cardston where an Anglican Indian priest thought she would succeed .
Revised:  Smallface was one of seven children who were encouraged to attend school in Cardston where an Anglican Indian priest .
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Original:  Under the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status as Indians upon marriage to a non-Indian .
Revised:  As a result of the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status as Indians upon marriage to a non-Indian .
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Original:  Under the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status as Indians upon marriage to a non-Indian .
Revised:  Under the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status upon marriage to a non-Indian .
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Original:  Under the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status as Indians upon marriage to a non-Indian .
Revised:  Under the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status as Indians upon marriage to non-Indians .
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Original:  She worked for the Royal Canadian Mounted Police and the court at Fort Macleod as an interpreter and was a well-known quilter.
Revised:  She worked for the Royal Canadian Mounted Police and the court at Fort Macleod as a translator and was a well-known quilter.
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Original:  In March 1972, Marule attended the Native Women's Conference to discuss the Indian Act and challenged its contents on the legal status of Indian women married to non-Indians .
Revised:  In March 1972, Marule attended the Native Women's Conference to discuss the Indian Act and challenged its contents on the legal status of Indian women married to non-status individuals .
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Original:  As a result of the act, Indian women lost their legal tribal status upon marriage to non-Indians .
Revised:  As a result of the act, Indian women become non-status Indians upon marrying out of their tribe .
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Original:  In 2014, Marule received the Esqoao Dorothy McDonald Leadership Award and the Circle of Honour from the Institute for the Advancement of Aboriginal Women .
Revised:  In 2014, Marule received the Esqoao Dorothy McDonald Leadership Award and the Circle of Honour from the Institute for the Advancement of Aboriginal Women 
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Original: |1880|5|18 |birth_place = Lib-og, Albay, Captaincy General of the Philippines |death_date = |death_place = Honolulu, Hawaii |other_names = |occupation = Musician |alma_mater = |citizenship = Filipino Potenciano Gregorio, often referred to as Potenciano Gregorio Sr. (May 19, 1880 to February 12, 1939) was a Bicolano musician.
Revised:  |birth_place = Lib-og, Albay, Captaincy General of the Philippines |death_date = |death_place = Honolulu, Hawaii |other_names = |occupation = Musician |alma_mater = |citizenship = Filipino Potenciano Gregorio, often referred to as Potenciano Gregorio Sr. (May 19, 1880 to February 12, 1939) was a Bicolano musician.
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