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Original:  Significance The  interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the evolution of the human mind and its linkage with material culture . Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research include the evolution of language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, creativity, and casual understanding.
Revised:  Significance The interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the evolution of the human mind and its linkage with material culture . Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research to date have included language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, creativity, and casual understanding.
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Original:  Significance The  interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the evolution of the human mind and its linkage with material culture . Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research include the evolution of language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, creativity, and casual understanding.
Revised:  Significance The interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the evolution of the human mind and its linkage with material culture . Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research include the evolution of language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, 
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Original: Neuroarchaeology is a sub-discipline of archaeology that uses neuroscientific data to infer change in brain form and function in human cognitive evolution.
Revised: Neuroarchaeology is a sub-discipline of archaeology that uses neuroscientific data to infer things about brain form and function in human cognitive evolution.
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Original:  It combines the words “neuro-” as in “neuroscience,” indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and “archaeology,” meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
Revised:  . The term combines the words “neuro-” as in “neuroscience,” indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and “archaeology,” meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
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Original:    In the 21st century, significant gains in understanding the brain through the cognitive sciences opened up new areas of collaboration between archaeology and neuroscience.
Revised:  Significance In the 21st century, significant gains in understanding the brain through the cognitive sciences opened up new areas of collaboration between archaeology and neuroscience.
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Original:  Significance Neuroarchaeology’s interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the human mind and the role of material culture in human cognition and cognitive evolution.
Revised:  Neuroarchaeology’s interdisciplinary approach provides new opportunities for investigating the human mind and the role of material culture in human cognition and cognitive evolution.
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Original:  Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research to date have included language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, technical cognition, creativity, aesthetics, spatiality , numeracy, literacy, and casual understanding.
Revised:  Specific focuses for neuroarchaeological research to date have included language, symbolic capacity, theory of mind, technical cognition, creativity, aesthetics, spatial cognition , numeracy, literacy, and casual understanding.
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Original:  The term was first suggested and thus coined by Colin Renfrew and Lambros Malafouris, individually in 2004 and then collaboratively in 2008. . The term combines the words “neuro-” as in “neuroscience,” indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and “archaeology,” meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
Revised:  The term was first suggested and thus coined by Colin Renfrew and Lambros Malafouris, individually in 2004 and then collaboratively in 2008. The term combines the words “neuro-” as in “neuroscience,” indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and “archaeology,” meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
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Original:  The term was first suggested and thus coined by Colin Renfrew and Lambros Malafouris , individually in 2004 and then collaboratively in 2008.
Revised:  The term was first suggested and thus coined by Colin Renfrew and Lambros Malafouris .
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Original:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote “critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge”, and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog." (p. 146)
Revised:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote “critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge”, and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog." 
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Original:  The term combines the words "neuro-" as in "neuroscience," indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and "archaeology," meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
Revised:  It combines the words "neuro-" as in "neuroscience," indicating its connection with the brain sciences, and "archaeology," meaning the study of human history and prehistory through excavation and other techniques designed to investigate the material record.
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Original:  thus, the term means an archaeology informed by neuroscience, or evolutionary cognitive archaeology.
Revised:  thus, it means an archaeology informed by neuroscience, or evolutionary cognitive archaeology.
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Original:  The term denotes a relatively new research area investigating questions related to interactions between brain, body, and world over cultural and evolutionary spans of time.
Revised:  It denotes a relatively new research area investigating questions related to interactions between brain, body, and world over cultural and evolutionary spans of time.
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Original:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote “ critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge ” , and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog."
Revised:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote ' critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge ” , and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog."
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Original:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote “ critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge ” , and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog."
Revised:  Neuroarchaeology explicitly (Malafouris 2009, p. 254) aims to: (1) incorporate neuroscience findings into cognitive archaeology, (2) promote “ critical reflection on neuroscience’s claims on the basis of our current archaeological knowledge ' , and (3) facilitate cross-disciplinary dialog."
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Original: A tidal strait is not technically a river, but a strait , connecting two oceans , or seas.
Revised: A tidal strait is technically not a river but a strait , connecting two oceans , or seas.
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Original: A tidal strait is not technically a river, but a strait , connecting two oceans , or seas.
Revised: A tidal strait is not technically a river, but a strait that connecting two oceans , or seas.
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Original: A tidal strait is not technically a river, but a strait , connecting two oceans , or seas.
Revised: A tidal strait is not technically a river, but a strait , connecting two oceans or seas.
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Original:  Tidal straits are narrow seaways through which flow tidal currents .
Revised:  Tidal straits are narrow seaways through which tidal currents flow .
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Original:  Currents in themdevelop due to elevation differences between the water basins at either ends.
Revised:  In them, currents develop because of elevation differences between the water basins at either ends.
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Original:  Currents in themdevelop due to elevation differences between the water basins at either ends.
Revised:  Currents in themdevelop due to elevation differences between the water basins at both ends.
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Original:  Due to tides, sediments can collect in tidal straits.
Revised:  Tides sometimes allow sediments to collect in tidal straits.
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Original:  Jaffe is also a political activist who has been noted for his work in encouraging better funding for public schools in Massachusett 
Revised:  Jaffe is also a political activist who has been noted for his work in encouraging better funding for public schools in Massachusetts. 
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Original:  Jaffe is also a political activist who has been noted for his work in encouraging better funding for public schools in Massachusett 
Revised:  Jaffe is also a political activist who has been noted for his work in encouraging better funding for public schools in Massachusett Referenc
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Original:  In response, Colón sent a party of four hundred men led by Alonso de Hojeda to march into the interior of the island in order to instill fear and subjugate the natives.
Revised:  In response, Columbus sent a party of four hundred men led by Alonso de Hojeda to march into the interior of the island in order to instill fear and subjugate the natives.
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Original:  In response, Colón sent a party of four hundred men led by Alonso de Hojeda to march into the interior of the island in order to instill fear and subjugate the natives.
Revised:  In response, Colón sent a party of four hundred men led by Alonso de Ojeda to march into the interior of the island in order to instill fear and subjugate the natives.
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Original:  Caonabo was captured by Hojeda and taken prisoner soon afterward.
Revised:  Caonabo was captured by Ojeda and taken prisoner soon afterward.
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Original:  Bartolomé de las Casas wrote that Hojeda had deceived Caonabo with a pre-arranged trick.
Revised:  Bartolomé de las Casas wrote that Ojeda had deceived Caonabo with a pre-arranged trick.
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Original:  In Casas's account, Hojeda brought highly polished handcuffs and chains which he presented as a gift to Caonabo.
Revised:  In Casas's account, Ojeda brought highly polished handcuffs and chains which he presented as a gift to Caonabo.
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Original:  Hojeda supposedly convinced Caonabo that the objects had magical properties, and that they were worn by kings in Spain.
Revised:  Ojeda supposedly convinced Caonabo that the objects had magical properties, and that they were worn by kings in Spain.
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Original:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Hojeda locked them and took him prisoner.
Revised:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Ojeda locked them and took him prisoner.
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Original:  His capture in 1494 led to the first native American uprising against  Spanish rule.
Revised:  His capture in 1494 led to the first native American uprising against the Spanish rule.
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Original:   Caonabo was captured by Ojeda and taken prisoner soon afterward.
Revised:  Capture and death Caonabo was captured by Ojeda and taken prisoner soon afterward.
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Original:  There are differing accounts of Caonabo's capture.
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Original:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Ojeda locked them and took him prisoner. 
Revised:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Ojeda locked them and took him prisoner. |
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Original: In retaliation against mistreatment of the Taíno people, Caonabo led attacks against the Spanish , including an assault on La Navidad which left 39 Spaniards dead.
Revised: In retaliation against mistreatment of the Taíno people, Caonabo mobilized fighters to drive out the Spanish invaders , including an assault on La Navidad which left 39 Spaniards dead.
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Original:  Anacaona would later claim thatshe , incensed at the treatment of native women by the Spanish, had incited Caonabo to carry out the attack .
Revised:  Anacaona would later explain that , incensed at the treatment of native women by the Spanish, had incited Caonabo to carry out the attack .
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Original:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed and its inhabitants killed, Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the most dangerous native leaders on the island.
Revised:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed , and Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the most dangerous native leaders on the island.
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Original:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed and its inhabitants killed, Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the most dangerous native leaders on the island.
Revised:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed and its inhabitants killed, Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the srongest leaders on the island.
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Original: Columbus left some of his crew at La Navidad and returned to Spain,  mistakenly thought that his men would not threatened natives, whom he believed to be friendly.
Revised: Columbus left some of his crew at La Navidad and returned to Spain, he mistakenly thought that his men would not threatened natives, whom he believed to be friendly.
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Original: Columbus left some of his crew at La Navidad and returned to Spain,  mistakenly thought that his men would not threatened natives, whom he believed to be friendly.
Revised: Columbus left some of his crew at La Navidad and returned to Spain, mistakenly thought that his men would not threaten the natives, whom he believed to be friendly.
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Original:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed, and Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the srongest leaders on the island.
Revised:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed, Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the srongest leaders on the island.
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Original:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed, and Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the srongest leaders on the island.
Revised:  When Columbus returned to Hispaniola and found La Navidad destroyed, and Caonabo quickly came to be considered one of the strongest leaders on the island.
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Original:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Ojeda locked them and took him prisoner. |
Revised:  When Caonabo tried on the handcuffs, Ojeda locked them and took him prisoner. 
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Original:  These environmental developments have lead to fears in journalism and academia of an increased likelihood in geopolitical conflict.
Revised:  These environmental developments have led to fears in journalism and academia of an increased likelihood in geopolitical conflict.
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Original:  According to traditional International Relations theory, states are self-interested actors who try to maximise their own gains.
Revised:  According to traditional international relations theory, states are self-interested actors who try to maximise their own gains.
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Original:  As explained by scholar Stokke  there is a direct link between climate change and resource related conflict: "inherent in the concept of environmental security is the understanding that threats arising from environmental degradation and resource rivalry may prove severe enough to generate violent conflict.
Revised:  As explained by scholar Stokke , there is a direct link between climate change and resource related conflict: "inherent in the concept of environmental security is the understanding that threats arising from environmental degradation and resource rivalry may prove severe enough to generate violent conflict.
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Original:  As explained by scholar Stokke  there is a direct link between climate change and resource related conflict: "inherent in the concept of environmental security is the understanding that threats arising from environmental degradation and resource rivalry may prove severe enough to generate violent conflict.
Revised:  As explained by scholar Stokke there is a direct link between climate change and resource-related conflict: "inherent in the concept of environmental security is the understanding that threats arising from environmental degradation and resource rivalry may prove severe enough to generate violent conflict.
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Original:  The three most important resources in the Arctic  minerals, fish stocks and huge oil and gas reserves, most of which are located in Russian territories.
Revised:  The three most important resources in the Arctic are minerals, fish stocks and huge oil and gas reserves, most of which are located in Russian territories.
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Original:  According to the IPCC (Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change), the Arctic is experiencing the fast and drastic climate change with a temperature increase of 1.9 degrees C in the last 30 years.
Revised:  The Arctic is experiencing the fast and drastic climate change with a temperature increase of 1.9 degrees C in the last 30 years.
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Original:  It was one of the first ever anti-British movement in the Indian subcontinent.
Revised:  It was one of the first ever anti-British movement in the subcontinent.
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Original: Social movements in India Category:History of Sylhet Category:British East India Company Category:Military of British India Category:Rebellions in Asia Category:Wars involving Bangladesh Category:Wars involving the United Kingdom Category:1782 in India Category:Battles involving Great Britain Category:Battles involving British India Category:Resistance to the British Empire Category:18th-century rebellions Sylhet Sylhet Category:Sylhet Category:History of Islam in Bangladesh Sylhet 17
Revised: Social movements in India Category:History of Sylhet Category:British East India Company Category:Military of British India Category:Rebellions in Asia Category:Wars involving the United Kingdom Category:1782 in India Category:Battles involving Great Britain Category:Battles involving British India Category:Resistance to the British Empire Category:18th-century rebellions Sylhet Sylhet Category:Sylhet Category:History of Islam in Bangladesh Sylhet 17
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Original: History of Bangladesh Category:Social movements in India Category:History of Sylhet Category:British East India Company Category:Military of British India Category:Rebellions in Asia Category:Wars involving the United Kingdom Category:1782 in India Category:Battles involving Great Britain Category:Battles involving British India Category: Resistance to the British Empire Category:18th-century rebellions Sylhet Sylhet Category:Sylhet Category:History of Islam in Bangladesh Sylhet 17
Revised: History of Bangladesh Category:Social movements in India Category:History of Sylhet Category:British East India Company Category:Military of British India Category:Rebellions in Asia Category:Wars involving the United Kingdom Category:1782 in India Category:Battles involving Great Britain Category:Battles involving British India Category: Rebellions against the British Empire Category:18th-century rebellions Sylhet Sylhet Category:Sylhet Category:History of Islam in Bangladesh Sylhet 17
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Original: Russell moved from the Midwest to California, where she had her first film role in Howard Hughes'
Revised: Russell moved from the Midwes to California, where she had her first film role in Howard Hughes'
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Original: Russell moved from the Midwes to California, where she had her first film role in Howard Hughes'
Revised: Russell moved from the Midwest to California, where she had her first film role in Howard Hughes'
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Original:  He then obtained his M.D in Medicine from Maulana Azad Medical College, New Delhi becoming the first Naga medical specialist .Sakhrie, Vilone.
Revised:  He then obtained his M.D in Medicine from Maulana Azad Medical College, New Delhi .Sakhrie, Vilone.
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Original: Later life and death Dr. Sakhrie failed to get re-elected to the Nagaland Legislative Assembly in the next General Elections but he continued to serve the public in his capacity as a Doctor.
Revised: Later life and death Sakhrie failed to get re-elected to the Nagaland Legislative Assembly in the next General Elections but he continued to serve the public in his capacity as a Doctor.
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Original: Vizadel Sakhrie (25 April 1943 – 31 March 1995) was a Naga politician and a medical specialist . Career Vizadel Sakhrie joined the Nagaland Medical Service and served for eight years in the capacity of Assistant Surgeon, Grade I and Medical Specialist before becoming a private medical practitioner.
Revised: Vizadel Sakhrie (25 April 1943 – 31 March 1995) was a Naga Politician and a Medical Specialist . Career Vizadel Sakhrie joined the Nagaland Medical Service and served for eight years in the capacity of Assistant Surgeon, Grade I and Medical Specialist before becoming a private medical practitioner.
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Original:  Thereafter, he actively took part in State politics and was elected in the 1982 State Legislative Assembly elections as an independent candidate from the 14 Southern Angami - II constituency .
Revised:  Thereafter, he actively took part in State politics and was elected in the 1982 State Legislative Assembly elections as an independent candidate from the 14 Southern Angami –II (constituency) .
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Original:  Following the killing of Kekuojalie Sachü and Vikhozo Yhoshü by the indiscriminate firing of Nagaland state police forces on 20 March 1986 eight ministers including Sakhrie tendered their resignation to the chief minister . Category:1943 births Category:Naga people Category:Living peop
Revised:  Following the killing of Kekuojalie Sachü and Vikhozo Yhoshü by the indiscriminate firing of Nagaland State Police Forces on 20 March 1986 eight ministers including Sakhrie tendered their resignation to the chief minister . Category:1943 births Category:Naga people Category:Living peop
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Original:  Following the killing of Kekuojalie Sachü and Vikhozo Yhoshü by the indiscriminate firing of Nagaland state police forces on 20 March 1986 eight ministers including Sakhrie tendered their resignation to the chief minister . Category:1943 births Category:Naga people Category:Living peop
Revised:  Following the killing of Kekuojalie Sachü and Vikhozo Yhoshü by the indiscriminate firing of Nagaland state police forces on 20 March 1986 eight ministers including Sakhrie tendered their resignation to the Chief Minister . Category:1943 births Category:Naga people Category:Living peop
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