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Original: Australian Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks has been sentenced on Friday by the special military court after pleaing guilty of providing material support to the Taliban.
Revised: Australian Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks has been sentenced on Friday by the special military court after pleading guilty to providing material support to the Taliban.
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Original:  The plea deal also prevents Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his emprisonment , and appealing his sentence.
Revised:  The plea deal also prevents Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment , and appealing his sentence.
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Original:  The plea deal also prevents Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
Revised:  The plea deal also forbidss Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
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Original:  The plea deal also forbidss Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
Revised:  The plea deal also forbids Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
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Original:  Australian Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks has been sentenced on Friday by a special military court after pleading guilty to providing material support to the Taliban.
Revised:  Australian Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks was sentenced Friday by a special military court after pleading guilty to providing material support to the Taliban.
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Original:  He was sentenced to seven years in prison but he will only need to complete nine months of his penalty, most of it back in Australia, under the terms of his plea agreement.
Revised:  He was sentenced to seven years in prison , but will only need to complete nine months of his penalty, most of it back in Australia, under the terms of his plea agreement.
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Original:  The plea deal also forbids Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
Revised:  The plea bargain also forbids Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
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Original:  The plea deal also forbids Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, and appealing his sentence.
Revised:  The plea deal also forbids Hicks from speaking to the media for one year after his sentence, suing the U.S. government for alleged abuse during his imprisonment, or appealing his sentence.
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Original:  These terms were criticised by Michael Ratner, president of the Center for Constitutional Rights  as a "modern cutting out of his tongue", with prosecutors using the leverage of a plea deal to stifle information and public debate about the controversial detention process.
Revised:  These terms were criticised by Michael Ratner, president of the Center for Constitutional Rights , as a "modern cutting out of his tongue", with prosecutors using the leverage of a plea deal to stifle information and public debate about the controversial detention process.
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Original:  His fatherTerry Hicks reacted that he was glad that his son was returning home .
Revised:  David's father, Terry Hicks, responded that he was glad that his son was returning home .
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Original:  Kevin Chenail had asked for the maximum sentence, referring to Hicks by his pseudonym 'Muhammad Dawood'.
Revised:  Kevin Chenail asked for the maximum sentence, referring to Hicks by his pseudonym 'Muhammad Dawood'.
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Original:  He told the panel of military officers that : "Today in this courtroom, we are on the front lines of the global war on terror...
Revised:  He told the panel of military officers that , "Today in this courtroom, we are on the front lines of the global war on terror...
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Original:  " who was" trying to kill Americans."
Revised:  who was trying to kill Americans."
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Original:  It was suggested yesterday, by Australian Greens Senator Bob Brown , that the speech restrictions in the plea deal were put in place as a deliberate attempt to meddle in upcoming elections.
Revised:  Australian Greens Senator Bob Brown , that the speech restrictions in the plea deal were put in place as a deliberate attempt to meddle in upcoming elections.
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Original:  It was suggested yesterday, by Australian Greens Senator Bob Brown , that the speech restrictions in the plea deal were put in place as a deliberate attempt to meddle in upcoming elections.
Revised:  It was suggested yesterday, by Australian Greens Senator Bob Brown suggested yesterday that the speech restrictions in the plea deal were put in place as a deliberate attempt to meddle in upcoming elections.
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Original:  Australian Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks was sentenced Friday by a special military court after pleading guilty to providing material support to the Taliban.
Revised:  Australia Guantánamo Bay prisoner David Hicks was sentenced Friday by a special military court after pleading guilty to providing material support to the Taliban.
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor and small dog was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original:  Dianna Large, 36, received 1 felony charge for involuntary manslaughter and 3 misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
Revised:  Dianna Large, 36, received 1 felony charge of involuntary manslaughter and 3 misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
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Original:  She also a violated a county ordinance requiring owner’s of dangerous dogs to post a warning  to visitors.
Revised:  She also a violated a county ordinance requiring owners of dangerous dogs to post a warning to visitors.
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Original:  Research this The Animal Control Department of Virginia has administers a dangerous dog registry.
Revised:  The Animal Control Department of Virginia has administers a dangerous dog registry.
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Original:  Research this The Animal Control Department of Virginia has administers a dangerous dog registry.
Revised:  Research this The Animal Control Department of Virginia maintains a dangerous dog registry.
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Original:  It holds a list of owners with dogs that have been deemed dangerous to society.
Revised:  It contains a list of owners with dogs that have been deemed dangerous to society.
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Original:  It holds a list of owners with dogs that have been deemed dangerous to society.
Revised:  It holds a list of owners whose dogs arm deemed dangerous to society.
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Original:  After the Sullivan mauling and another pit bull attack one week later, the list was promptly posted on the county 's main website.
Revised:  The link to the registry was moved to a more prominant position on the county 's main website.
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Original:  After the Sullivan mauling and another pit bull attack one week later, the list was promptly posted on the county 's main website.
Revised:  After the Sullivan mauling and another pit bull attack one week later, the list was promptly posted on the county 
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Original:  "Our commonwealth attorney recommended the dangerous dog list to be posted on the website as a good way to keep citizens informed, and we agreed", says Spotsylvania County Spokesperson Kathy Smith
Revised:  web page following the attack
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman  whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor  was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman , whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman  whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor  was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor , was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman  whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor  was freed Wednsday after posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original:  The brief hearing, held Thursday, formalized  charges against her.
Revised:  The short hearing, held Thursday, formalized charges against her.
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Original:  The brief hearing, held Thursday, formalized  charges against her.
Revised:  The brief hearing, held Thursday, formalized the charges against her.
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Original:  The link to the registry was moved to a more prominant position on the county web page following the attack  
Revised:  The link to the registry was moved to a more prominant position on the county web page following the attack . 
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose 3 dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose three dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original:  Dianna Large, 36, received 1 felony charge of involuntary manslaughter and 3 misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
Revised:  Dianna Large, 36, received one felony charge of involuntary manslaughter and 3 misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
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Original:  Dianna Large, 36, received 1 felony charge of involuntary manslaughter and 3 misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
Revised:  Dianna Large, 36, received 1 felony charge of involuntary manslaughter and three misdemeanor charges in an indictment issued last week.
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Original:  State procecutor Wiliam Neely said that Large knowingly let her 3 Pit Bull dogs run free, and that an animal control agency person had warned her to keep them under better control.
Revised:  State procecutor Wiliam Neely said that Large knowingly let her three Pit Bull dogs run free, and that an animal control agency person had warned her to keep them under better control.
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Original:  The prosecution also noted that none the 3 male dogs were neutered.
Revised:  The prosecution also noted that none the three male dogs were neutered.
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Original:  The link to the registry was moved to a more prominant position on the county web page following the attack.
Revised:  The link to the registry was moved to a more prominent position on the county web page following the attack.
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose three dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose three dogs allegedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose three dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednsday by posting a $10,000 bond.
Revised: A Spotsylvania County woman, whose three dogs alledgedly attacked and killed her elderly neighbor, was freed Wednesday by posting a $10,000 bond.
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Original:  The prosecution also noted that none  the three male dogs were neutered.
Revised:  The prosecution also noted that none of the three male dogs were neutered.
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Original:  It contains a list of owners whose dogs arm deemed dangerous to society.
Revised:  It contains a list of owners whose dogs are deemed dangerous to society.
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Original:  Thereafter, the new assembly is due to write a new constitution for the Himalayan nation  
Revised:  Thereafter, the new assembly is due to write a new constitution for the Himalayan nation . 
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Original: Public officials in Texas have urged citizens to receive a flu shot.
Revised: Public officials in have urged citizens to receive a flu shot.
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Original:  New York Governor Andrew M. Cuomo declared a Public Health Emergency for all of New York State on Saturday.
Revised:  New York Governor Andrew M. Cuomo declared a Public Health Emergency for all of State on Saturday.
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Original: Physicians and others are struggling to address a growing outbreak of Influenze affecting a large portion of the United States.
Revised: Physicians and others are struggling to address a growing outbreak of affecting a large portion of the United States.
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Original:  Earlier this week, the Mayor of Boston declared a "flu emergency" for the city, as 700 cases of the virus were reported.
Revised:  Earlier this week, the Mayor of declared a "flu emergency" for the city, as 700 cases of the virus were reported.
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Original:  Doctors are telling citizens to use wash their hands, get a flu shot and avoid sick people if possible to lessen chances of catching the virus.
Revised:  Doctors are telling citizens to wash their hands, get a flu shot and avoid sick people if possible to lessen chances of catching the virus.
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Original:  However, a report released on Friday noted that 7.3 percent of deaths last week were a result of pneumonia and the flu.
Revised:  However, a report released on Friday noted that 7.3 \% of deaths last week were a result of pneumonia and the flu.
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Original:  However, a report released on Friday noted that 7.3 percent of deaths last week were a result of pneumonia and the flu.
Revised:  However, a report released on Friday noted that 7.3 percent of deaths last week were a result of and the flu.
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Original:  The Centers for Disease Control reports nine out of 10 regions in the United States had "elevated" flu activity.
Revised:  The reports nine out of 10 regions in the United States had "elevated" flu activity.
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Original:  New York Governor Andrew M. Cuomo declared a Public Health Emergency for all of State on Saturday.
Revised:  New York Governor declared a state-wide public health emergency on Saturday.
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Original:  He also issued an Executive Order which allows pharmacists to administer flu vaccinations to patients between six months and 18 years of age
Revised:  He also issued an executive order which allows pharmacists to administer flu vaccinations to patients between six months and 18 years of age
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Original:  These date indicate that seasonal flu has spread and reached high levels several weeks before the usual time of late January or February.
Revised:  These data indicate that seasonal flu has spread and reached high levels several weeks before the usual time of late January or February.
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Original: 180px|Protesters at the gates of Baxter Hundreds of protesters have arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees in the centre . Previously friday,
Revised: 180px|Protesters at the gates of Baxter Hundreds of protesters have arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees in the centre , and
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Original:  300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator Amanda Vanstone in Adelaide to protest against the Australian Governments policy of mandatory detention, before joining other protesters at Baxter . 180px|Protesters near Baxter The protesters have converged from all over Australia  , the first starting to arrive on buses in Port Augusta early friday morning.
Revised:  300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator Amanda Vanstone in the state capital of Adelaide, as they pass through . 180px|Protesters near Baxter The protesters have converged from all over Australia , the first starting to arrive on buses in Port Augusta early friday morning.
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Original:  300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator Amanda Vanstone in Adelaide to protest against the Australian Governments policy of mandatory detention, before joining other protesters at Baxter . 180px|Protesters near Baxter The protesters have converged from all over Australia  , the first starting to arrive on buses in Port Augusta early friday morning.
Revised:  300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator Amanda Vanstone in Adelaide to protest against the Australian Governments policy of mandatory detention, before joining other protesters at Baxter . 180px|Protesters near Baxter The protesters have converged from all over Australia to protest against the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention , the first starting to arrive on buses in Port Augusta early friday morning.
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Original:  Detainees seem split over the protest , The Age reported that Detainee Peter Qasim said: "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
Revised:  Detainees seem split over the protest . The Age reported that Detainee Peter Qasim said: "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
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Original:  Detainees seem split over the protest , The Age reported that Detainee Peter Qasim said: "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
Revised:  Detainees seem split over the protest , The Age reported Detainee Peter Qasim said: "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
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Original:  Detainees seem split over the protest , The Age reported that Detainee Peter Qasim said: "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
Revised:  Detainees seem split over the protest , The Age reported that Detainee Peter Qasim as saying, "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
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Original:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." , however other detainees have been reported as saying  " it is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
Revised:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." However other detainees have been reported as saying " it is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
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Original:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." , however other detainees have been reported as saying  " it is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
Revised:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." , however other detainees have been reported as saying , " it is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
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Original:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." , however other detainees have been reported as saying  " it is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
Revised:  It is a good idea to protest but better somewhere other than here." , however other detainees have been reported as saying " It is better in front of Baxter, I believe showing Baxter, protesters will shout about human torture inside detention.
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Original:  Then there would have good publicity about all torture inside Baxter detention   , " and "we welcome all of [the protesters] and we thank [them] all who has seen disgrace of this human torture.
Revised:  Then there would have good publicity about all torture inside Baxter detention ." , " and "we welcome all of [the protesters] and we thank [them] all who has seen disgrace of this human torture.
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Original:  Then there would have good publicity about all torture inside Baxter detention   , " and "we welcome all of [the protesters] and we thank [them] all who has seen disgrace of this human torture.
Revised:  Then there would have good publicity about all torture inside Baxter detention , " We welcome all of [the protesters] and we thank [them] all who has seen disgrace of this human torture.
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Original: 180px|Protesters at the gates of Baxter Hundreds of protesters arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees held there.
Revised:  Hundreds of protesters arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees held there.
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Original: 180px|Protesters at the gates of Baxter Hundreds of protesters arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the South Australian desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees held there.
Revised: 180px|Protesters at the gates of Baxter Hundreds of protesters arrived at the Baxter detention centre in the desert to demonstrate against the incarceration of refugees held there.
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Original:  An additional 300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator, Amanda Vanstone, in the state capital of Adelaide , on their way to Baxter.
Revised:  An additional 300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister , in the state capital of Adelaide , on their way to Baxter.
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Original:  An additional 300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator, Amanda Vanstone, in the state capital of Adelaide , on their way to Baxter.
Revised:  An additional 300 protesters converged on the home of Immigration Minister Senator, Amanda Vanstone, in the state capital of , on their way to Baxter.
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Original:  180px|Protesters near Baxter People from all over Australia are protesting against the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention .
Revised:  People from all over Australia are protesting against the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention .
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Original:  180px|Protesters near Baxter People from all over Australia are protesting against the Australian Government's policy of mandatory detention .
Revised:  180px|Protesters near Baxter People from all over Australia are protesting against the Australian Government's policy of .
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Original:  The first protesters arrived by buses in Port Augusta early Friday morning.
Revised:  The first protesters arrived by buses in early Friday morning.
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Original:  The Age reported Detainee Peter Qasim as saying, "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
Revised:  reported Detainee Peter Qasim as saying, "It stops people from visiting us, it stops us receiving any calls.
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