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Original: The student has been identified as Mark David Uhl.  ]  The funeral services for Falwell were held at the Thomas Road Baptist Church which was attended by mourners numbering 6,000 in a chapel that exceeded its capacity to host them, and more room was made for an additional 2,000 who attended the funeral .
Revised: The student has been identified as Mark David Uhl. ] The funeral services for Falwell were held at the Thomas Road Baptist Church which was attended by mourners numbering 6,000 in a chapel that exceeded its capacity to host them, and more room was made for an additional 2,000 who attended the funeral 
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Original:  A family member called police at approximately 11:00 p. m.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% local time on Monday evening saying that Uhl "mentioned some explosive devices he had made."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [%%% local time on Monday evening saying that Uhl "mentioned some explosive devices he had made."
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Original:  A family member called police at approximately 11:00 p. m.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% local time on Monday evening saying that Uhl "mentioned some explosive devices he had made."
Revised:  A family member called police at approximately 11:00 p. m.%DIFDELCMD < [%%% on Monday evening saying that Uhl "mentioned some explosive devices he had made."
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Original: Image:Flag of Iraq.svg|The Shi'a cleric-backed United Iraqi Alliance (UIA) , holds a majority in the new parliament, and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
Revised: Image:Flag of Iraq.svg|The Shi'a cleric-backed (UIA) , holds a majority in the new parliament, and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
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Original: ]] Half of those who won seats reserved for women in the new National Assembly of Iraq are members of a coalition dominated by Shi'a religious parties, and they say they want Islamic sharia-based laws with legal differences in treatment for the sexes, and which permit a certain level of domestic violence.
Revised: ]] Half of those who won seats reserved for women in the new of Iraq are members of a coalition dominated by Shi'a religious parties, and they say they want Islamic sharia-based laws with legal differences in treatment for the sexes, and which permit a certain level of domestic violence.
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Original:  Says Nada al-Bayiati, of the Women ’ s Organisation for Freedom in Iraq, "It's weakening our position.
Revised:  Says Nada al-Bayiati, of the Women ' s Organisation for Freedom in Iraq, "It's weakening our position.
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Original:  How can you argue for women ’ s rights when the women are undermining you?"
Revised:  How can you argue for women ' s rights when the women are undermining you?"
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Original:  The Shi'a cleric-backed United Iraqi Alliance (UIA), holds the majority of seats in the National Assembly since the recent election , and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
Revised:  The Shi'a cleric-backed (UIA), holds the majority of seats in the National Assembly since the recent election , and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
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Original:  The Shi'a cleric-backed United Iraqi Alliance (UIA), holds the majority of seats in the National Assembly since the recent election , and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
Revised:  The Shi'a cleric-backed United Iraqi Alliance (UIA), holds the majority of seats in the National Assembly since the , and asserts that sharia is "non-negotiable".
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Original:  "If you don’t allow your husband to take another wife, he ’ d have an affair anyway ...
Revised:  "If you don’t allow your husband to take another wife, he ' d have an affair anyway ...
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Original:  I’ d rather know my husband has another wife that I know about."
Revised:  I' d rather know my husband has another wife that I know about."
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Original:  One woman who abstained, Houzan Mahmoud, a UK based spokesperson for The Organization of Women ’ s Freedom in Iraq, did so not because of a clerical command or to protest the occupation.
Revised:  One woman who abstained, Houzan Mahmoud, a UK based spokesperson for The Organization of Women ' s Freedom in Iraq, did so not because of a clerical command or to protest the occupation.
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Original: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels  was stuck on a road in for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues , she tweeted "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
Revised: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels said she was stuck on a road in for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues , she tweeted "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
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Original: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels  was stuck on a road in for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues , she tweeted "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
Revised: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels was stuck on a road for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues , she tweeted "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
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Original: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels  was stuck on a road in for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues , she tweeted "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
Revised: Helena Kristiansson from Brussels was stuck on a road in for nine hours in 65 kilometers of queues ; she tweeted, "Stuck at a road for Brussels closed since 5pm yesterday due to shoulder deep snow..
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Original:  Others welcomed the presence of the Minutemen, considering them tourists helping the local economy, and appreciating their drawing attention to  lax enforcement of border control by Federal authorities.
Revised:  Others welcomed the presence of the Minutemen, considering them tourists helping the local economy, and appreciating their drawing attention to the perceived lax enforcement of border control by Federal authorities.
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Original:  Says Arizona Gov. Janet Napolitano, "People are entitled to exercise their First Amendment  rights and entitled to assemble...
Revised:  Says Arizona Gov. Janet Napolitano, "People are entitled to exercise their First Amendment | rights and entitled to assemble...
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Original:  The carrying of handguns is allowed under Arizona law and is protected by the 2nd Amendment .
Revised:  The carrying of handguns is allowed under Arizona law and is protected by the Second Amendment| .
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Original:  Observers from various groups, most prominently the ACLU , plan to be on hand to monitor the activities of the Minutemen with a view to mounting possible legal challenges against them.
Revised:  Observers from various groups, most prominently the American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU) , plan to be on hand to monitor the activities of the Minutemen with a view to mounting possible legal challenges against them.
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Original:  Some locals were concerned that possible violence could erupt from the presence of additional armed individuals, either among the Minutemen or the illegal immigrants.
Revised:  Some local residents were concerned that possible violence could erupt from the presence of additional armed individuals, either among the Minutemen or the illegal immigrants.
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Original: Reports say that a body of a United States soldier has been found in the Euphrates River in Iraq and that it is the body of one of three U.S. soldiers who were believed to be taken captive by Iraqi insurgents on May 12.
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Original:  The U.S. military has not confirmed that the body is that of a U.S. soldier, but it does confirm that the body is in the custody of the U.S. military.
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Original:  The body was found in the town of Musayyib by Iraqi Police about 40 miles south of the Iraqi capital of Baghdad  
Revised:  The body was found in the town of Musayyib by Iraqi Police about 40 miles south of the Iraqi capital of Baghdad . 
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Original:  Let us pray always not just for ourselves, but for others, for everyone in the word" 
Revised:  Let us pray always not just for ourselves, but for others, for everyone in the word" .
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Original:  He is the first Jesuit to become Pope, as well as the first non-American .
Revised:  He is the first Jesuit Pope, and first from the Americas .
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Original: In Argentina, he was outspoken against socially liberal policies including the provision of free contraception and gay marriage .
Revised: In Argentina, he was outspoken against socially liberal policies including the provision of free contraception and .
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Original: Jorge Mario Bergoglio in 2012 The has elected Archbishop of Buenos Aires as the new Pope .
Revised: Jorge Mario Bergoglio in 2012 The has elected Archbishop of Buenos Aires as the new pope .
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Original:  White smoke rose from the Sistine Chapel chimney at 7:06pm (Rome time) yesterday, signifying that the conclave had elected a new Pope after four unsuccessful attempts.
Revised:  White smoke rose from the Sistine Chapel chimney at 7:06pm (Rome time) yesterday, signifying that the conclave had elected a new pope after four unsuccessful attempts.
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Original:  Born in Buenos Aires on December 17, 1936 and now aged 76, the new Pope became a bishop in 1992, and was elevated to cardinal in 2001 by .
Revised:  Born in Buenos Aires on December 17, 1936 and now aged 76, the new pope became a bishop in 1992, and was elevated to cardinal in 2001 by .
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Original:  He is the first Jesuit Pope, and first from the Americas.
Revised:  He is the first Jesuit pope and the first from the Americas.
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Original:  US President made a statement about the election of the new Pope : "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
Revised:  United States President made a statement about the election of the new Pope : "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
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Original:  US President made a statement about the election of the new Pope : "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
Revised:  US President made a statement about the election of the new pope : "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
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Original:  Obama's statement noted the new Pope was a "champion of the poor and the most vulnerable among us", and "[as] the first pope from the Americas, his selection also speaks to the strength and vitality of a region that is increasingly shaping our world".
Revised:  Obama's statement noted the new pope was a "champion of the poor and the most vulnerable among us", and "[as] the first pope from the Americas, his selection also speaks to the strength and vitality of a region that is increasingly shaping our world".
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Original:  US House Speaker also pointed out the new Pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
Revised:  United States House Speaker also pointed out the new Pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
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Original:  US House Speaker also pointed out the new Pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
Revised:  US House Speaker also pointed out the new pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
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Original:  He went on to describe the new Pope : "Pope Francis is well known as a compassionate pastor of real stature who has served the poor in Latin America, and whose simplicity and holiness of life is remarkable.
Revised:  He went on to describe the new pope : "Pope Francis is well known as a compassionate pastor of real stature who has served the poor in Latin America, and whose simplicity and holiness of life is remarkable.
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Original: United States President made a statement about the election of the new pope: "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
Revised:  President made a statement about the election of the new pope: "On behalf of the American people, Michelle and I offer our warm wishes to His Holiness Pope Francis as he ascends to the Chair of Saint Peter and begins his papacy."
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Original:  United States House Speaker also pointed out the new pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
Revised:  US House Speaker also pointed out the new pope came from the Americas: "I think that reaching out beyond the traditional continent of our church is another big step in the right direction of our church." British Prime Minister said that the papal election was "a momentous day for the 1.2 billion Catholics around the world".
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Original:  The new law , to take effect June ___,  The Maine office of the attorney general says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
Revised:  The new law takes effect June 30. The Maine office of the attorney general says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
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Original:  At  least one group is organizing to stop the new gay rights law in its tracks.
Revised:  At But at least one group is organizing to stop the new gay rights law in its tracks.
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Original: With the stoke of a pen, Gov. John Baldacci of Maine signed into law a gay rights bill that extended legal protection against discrimination on the basis of sexual orientation.
Revised: With the stroke of a pen, Gov. John Baldacci of Maine signed into law a gay rights bill that extended legal protection against discrimination on the basis of sexual orientation.
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Original:  Additional language was added to LD 1196 before it passed clarifying that it would not extend marriage rights to same-sex couples and expempts privately-funded religious groups from having to comply with its provisions.
Revised:  Additional language was added to LD 1196 before it passed clarifying that it would not extend marriage rights to same-sex couples and exempts privately-funded religious groups from having to comply with its provisions.
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Original:  The new law takes effect June 30 in the state of Maine (highlighted).
Revised:  The new law takes effect June 30.
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Original: Known officially as "LD 1196," the bill's wording adds the term "sexual orientation " to the list of protected classes in the Maine Human Rights Act banning discrimination in employment, housing, education, credit, and public accommodations.
Revised: Known officially as "LD 1196," the bill's wording adds the term sexual orientation to the list of protected classes in the Maine Human Rights Act banning discrimination in employment, housing, education, credit, and public accommodations.
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Original:  The state senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 the same day . Previous protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
Revised:  The State Senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 the same day . Previous protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
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Original:  The state senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 the same day . Previous protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
Revised:  The state senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 . Previous protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
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Original:  The state senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 the same day . Previous protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
Revised:  The state senate approved the bill the same day by a vote of 25-10 the same day . Already protected classes under the state's human rights act are gender, age, religion, race, and physical and mental disability.
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Original:  The Maine office of the attorney general says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
Revised:  The office of the attorney general says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
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Original:  The Maine office of the attorney general says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
Revised:  The Maine office of the Maine Attorney General says that the number of hate crimes against gays and lesbians increased by 12 percent in 2003.
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Original: An Iranian women was attacked by moral police in Haft-e Tir square in Tehran for violating the Islamic dress code (May 2007) Like all Islamic fundamentalists, Makarem-Shirazi is a strong proponent of literal or near-literal interpretation of Islamic laws.
Revised:  Like all Islamic fundamentalists, Makarem-Shirazi is a strong proponent of literal or near-literal interpretation of Islamic laws.
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Original:  There are only a tiny minority of who don't second compulsory hijab in Iran, like Hojatoleslam Sayyed Hussein Khomeini who has said, "I am personally in favor of the hijab, but not like this.
Revised:  There are only a tiny minority of who don't second compulsory hijab in Iran, like Hojatoleslam Sayyed who has said, "I am personally in favor of the hijab, but not like this.
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Original:  This is the first ever documented case of a mammal giving birth without mating.
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Original:  According to marine biologists participating in a study between the United States and Ireland, DNA samples taken from a hammerhead shark located in Omaha Nebraska at the the Henry Doorly Zoo and born in 2001, show that the shark's mother performed a "virgin birth," or giving birth without mating.
Revised:  According to marine biologists participating in a study between the United States and Ireland, DNA samples taken from a hammerhead shark located in Omaha Nebraska at the Henry Doorly Zoo and born in 2001, show that the shark's mother performed a "virgin birth," or giving birth without mating.
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Original:  [This may not be a good thing becasue ] reduced genetic diversity," may occur in the sharks, said another author of the study, Mahmood Shivji, who is located in Dania Beach, Florida at the Guy Harvey Research Institute.
Revised:  [This may not be a good thing because ] reduced genetic diversity," may occur in the sharks, said another author of the study, Mahmood Shivji, who is located in Dania Beach, Florida at the Guy Harvey Research Institute.
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Original: A hammerhead shark .
Revised: The hammerhead shark who gave birth at the zoo .
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Original:  Ashton said in a statement "Newcastle United has a wonderful heritage and the passion of its fans is legendary.
Revised:  Ashley said in a statement "Newcastle United has a wonderful heritage and the passion of its fans is legendary.
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Original:  I am sure that, like me, they are already excited about the prospects for next season under the new manager's stewardship.  
Revised:  I am sure that, like me, they are already excited about the prospects for next season under the new manager's stewardship. " 
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Original:  This event comes after anti-poverty activist David Cunningham, of news source Vancouver 24 hours, was arrested last Sunday after police posed as reporters of what Cunningham believed to be an interview.
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Original:  Organization opposed to 2010 Winter Olympic Games "The Anti-Poverty Committee", which claims to help the homeless and poor in the city, are opposed to the Olympics and have said they would ransack offices and homes of board members of the Vancouver Olympic organizing committee.
Revised:  Organization opposed to 2010 Winter Olympic Games "The Anti-Poverty Committee", which claims to help the homeless and poor in the city, are opposed to the Olympics and have said they would ransack offices and homes of board members of the 2010 Winter Olympics organizing committee.
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Original:  It doesn't make Vancouver look good.        
Revised:  It doesn't make Vancouver look good. " 
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Original: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows , throwing pictures, throwing office documents, and throwing around various items.
Revised: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows and throwing pictures, throwing office documents, and throwing around various items.
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Original: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows , throwing pictures, throwing office documents, and throwing around various items.
Revised: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows , throwing pictures, office documents, and throwing around various items.
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Original: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows , throwing pictures, throwing office documents, and throwing around various items.
Revised: Three anti-Olympic games protesters, posed as a flower delivery service, quicky ransacked British Columbia, Canada premier Gordon Campbell's downtown Vancouver, British Columbia office yesterday afternoon, breaking windows , throwing pictures, throwing office documents, and various other items.
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