wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The presence of chloride is often detected by its formation of an insoluble silver chloride upon treatment with silver ion : Cl− + Ag+ → AgCl  Chlorine oxidation state  −1  +1  +3  +5  +7 Name chloride hypochlorite chlorite chlorate perchlorate Formula Cl−  ClO− Structure 50px|The chloride ion  50px|The hypochlorite ion  50px|The chlorite ion  50px|The chlorate ion  50px|The perchlorate ion  Occurrence in nature In nature, chloride is found primarily in seawater, which contains 1.94\% chloride.
Revised:  The presence of chloride is often detected by its formation of an insoluble silver chloride upon treatment with silver ion : Cl− + Ag+ → AgCl Chlorine oxidation state −1 +1 +3 +5 +7 Name chloride hypochlorite chlorite chlorate perchlorate Formula Cl− ClO− Structure 50px|The chloride ion 50px|The hypochlorite ion 50px|The chlorite ion 50px|The chlorate ion | 50px|The perchlorate ion Occurrence in nature In nature, chloride is found primarily in seawater, which contains 1.94\% chloride.
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Original:  The presence of chloride is often detected by its formation of an insoluble silver chloride upon treatment with silver ion : Cl− + Ag+ → AgCl  Chlorine oxidation state  −1  +1  +3  +5  +7 Name chloride hypochlorite chlorite chlorate perchlorate Formula Cl−  ClO− Structure 50px|The chloride ion  50px|The hypochlorite ion  50px|The chlorite ion  50px|The chlorate ion  50px|The perchlorate ion  Occurrence in nature In nature, chloride is found primarily in seawater, which contains 1.94\% chloride.
Revised:  The presence of chloride is often detected by its formation of an insoluble silver chloride upon treatment with silver ion : Cl− + Ag+ → AgCl Chlorine oxidation state −1 +1 +3 +5 +7 Name chloride hypochlorite chlorite chlorate perchlorate Formula Cl− ClO− Structure 50px|The chloride ion 50px|The hypochlorite ion 50px|The chlorite ion 50px|The chlorate ion 50px|The perchlorate ion | Occurrence in nature In nature, chloride is found primarily in seawater, which contains 1.94\% chloride.
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Original:  Smaller quantities, though at higher concentrations, occur in certain inland seas and in subterranean brine wells, such as the Great Salt Lake , Utah and the Dead Sea , Israel.
Revised:  Smaller quantities, though at higher concentrations, occur in certain inland seas and in subterranean brine wells, such as the Great Salt Lake in Utah and the Dead Sea , Israel.
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Original:  Smaller quantities, though at higher concentrations, occur in certain inland seas and in subterranean brine wells, such as the Great Salt Lake , Utah and the Dead Sea , Israel.
Revised:  Smaller quantities, though at higher concentrations, occur in certain inland seas and in subterranean brine wells, such as the Great Salt Lake , Utah and the Dead Sea in Israel.
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Original:  Chloride is usually (though not always) at a higher extracellular concentration, causing it to have a negative reversal potential (around -61 mV at 37 degrees Celsius in a mammalian cell).
Revised:  Chloride is usually (though not always) at a higher extracellular concentration, causing it to have a negative reversal potential (around −61 mV at 37 degrees Celsius in a mammalian cell).
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Original:  Chloride is usually (though not always) at a higher extracellular concentration, causing it to have a negative reversal potential (around -61 mV at 37 degrees Celsius in a mammalian cell).
Revised:  Chloride is usually (though not always) at a higher extracellular concentration, causing it to have a negative reversal potential (around -61 mV at 37 °C in a mammalian cell).
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Original:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10-200mM (media dependent ), in mammalian cell 5-100mM and in blood plasma 100mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
Revised:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10–200 mM (dependent on medium ), in mammalian cell 5-100mM and in blood plasma 100mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
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Original:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10-200mM (media dependent ), in mammalian cell 5-100mM and in blood plasma 100mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
Revised:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10-200mM (media dependent ), in mammalian cells 5–100 mM and in blood plasma 100mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
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Original:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10-200mM (media dependent ), in mammalian cell 5-100mM and in blood plasma 100mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
Revised:  Characteristic concentrations of chloride in model organisms are: in both E. coli and budding yeast are 10-200mM (media dependent ), in mammalian cell 5-100mM and in blood plasma 100 mM . The concentration of chloride in the blood is called serum chloride, and this concentration is regulated by the kidneys.
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Original:  A chloride ion is a structural component of some proteins , e.g., it is present in the amylase enzyme.
Revised:  A chloride ion is a structural component of some proteins ; for example, it is present in the amylase enzyme.
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Original:  The presence of chlorides, e.g. in seawater, significantly worsens the conditions for pitting corrosion of most metals (including stainless steels, aluminum and high-alloyed materials).
Revised:  The presence of chlorides, such as in seawater, significantly worsens the conditions for pitting corrosion of most metals (including stainless steels, aluminum and high-alloyed materials).
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Original:  Salt (sodium chloride ) has also been shown to change the composition of microbial species at relatively low concentrations.
Revised:  Sodium chloride has also been shown to change the composition of microbial species at relatively low concentrations.
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Original:  Examples of covalently bonded chlorides are phosphorus trichloride, phosphorus pentachloride, and thionyl chloride, all three of which are reactive chlorinating reagents that have been used in a laboratory.
Revised:  Examples of covalently-bonded chlorides are phosphorus trichloride, phosphorus pentachloride, and thionyl chloride, all three of which are reactive chlorinating reagents that have been used in a laboratory.
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Original:  Chloride is also a useful and reliable chemical indicator of river / groundwater fecal contamination, as chloride is a non-reactive solute and ubiquitous to sewage and potable water.
Revised:  Chloride is also a useful and reliable chemical indicator of river and groundwater fecal contamination, as chloride is a non-reactive solute and ubiquitous to sewage and potable water.
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Original:   In 1984, he and his SPD lost the majority in the Hesse Landtag.
Revised:  Political career In 1984, he and his SPD lost the majority in the Hesse Landtag.
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Original:  () Category:1931 births Category:2006 deaths Category:People from Kassel Category:People from Hesse-Nassau Category:Presidents of the German Bundesrat Category:Ministers-President of Hesse Category:Social Democratic Party of Germany politicians Category:Deaths from cancer in Germany Category:Grand Crosses 1st class of the Order of Merit of the Federal Republic of Germa 
Revised:  () Category:1931 births Category:2006 deaths Category:People from Kassel Category:People from Hesse-Nassau Category:Presidents of the German Bundesrat Category:Ministers-President of Hesse Category:Social Democratic Party of Germany politicians Category:Deaths from cancer in Germany Category:Grand Crosses 1st class of the Order of Merit of the Federal Republic of Germany 
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Original:   After completing library training, Cooper worked in the library of Fisk University, before returning to Libera to become Librarian at the University of Liberia.
Revised:  After completing library training, Cooper worked in the library of Fisk University, before returning to Liberia to become Librarian at the University of Liberia.
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Original: In 1747, Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan Bayati (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids.
Revised: In 1747, Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids.
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Original:  Jafar Khan Bayati (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
Revised:  Jafar Khan (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
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Original:    In 1747,  Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids . Jafar Khan (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
Revised:  Founding In 1747, Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids . Jafar Khan (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
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Original:    In 1747,  Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids . Jafar Khan (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
Revised:  In 1747, the Nishapur Khanate was founded by Abbas Quli Khan (r. 1747-1779), after the collapse of the Afsharids . Jafar Khan (r. 1779-1798) led the Khanate to its apex.
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Original:  When Shahrokh Shah was deposed on January 14, 1750  by Mir Sayyed Mohammad, Ahmad Khan was appointed commander of the Turkmen tribal cavalry.
Revised:  When Shahrokh Shah was deposed on January 14, 1750 , by Mir Sayyed Mohammad, Ahmad Khan was appointed commander of the Turkmen tribal cavalry.
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Original:  However, Ahmad Shah Durrani invaded Khorasan again, defeating Mir Alam Khan at Jam and taking Tun in June 1754. (The Encyclopedia Iranica article on the Afsharids mentions that in the spring of 1754 Nishapur was unsuccesfully besieged by the Afghans but this isn't corroborated by other sources.)
Revised:  However, Ahmad Shah Durrani invaded Khorasan again, defeating Mir Alam Khan at Jam and taking Tun in June 1754. (The Encyclopedia Iranica article on the Afsharids mentions that in the spring of 1754 Nishapur was unsuccessfully besieged by the Afghans but this isn't corroborated by other sources.)
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Original:  However, Ahmad Shah Durrani invaded Khorasan again, defeating Mir Alam Khan at Jam and taking Tun in June 1754. (The Encyclopedia Iranica article on the Afsharids mentions that in the spring of 1754 Nishapur was unsuccesfully besieged by the Afghans but this isn't corroborated by other sources.)
Revised:  However, Ahmad Shah Durrani invaded Khorasan again, defeating Mir Alam Khan at Jam and taking Tun in June 1754. (The Encyclopedia Iranica article on the Afsharids mentions that in the spring of 1754 Nishapur was unsuccesfully besieged by the Afghans but this has not been corroborated by other sources.)
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Original:  On July 23 Mashhad was besieged by the Afghans, and during the 5 month long siege the population of Sabzevar handed Mir Alam Khan over to the Afghans and was then executed.
Revised:  On July 23 Mashhad was besieged by the Afghans, and during the five month long siege the population of Sabzevar handed Mir Alam Khan over to the Afghans and was then executed.
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Original:  On July 23 Mashhad was besieged by the Afghans, and during the 5 month long siege the population of Sabzevar handed Mir Alam Khan over to the Afghans and was then executed.
Revised:  On July 23 Mashhad was besieged by the Afghans, and during the 5 month long siege the population of Sabzevar handed Mir Alam Khan over to the Afghans who was then executed.
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Original:  When Nishapur finally fell to the Afghans on June 24, the city was destroyed and its ' infrastructure torn apart under the orders of Ahmad Shah.
Revised:  When Nishapur finally fell to the Afghans on June 24, the city was destroyed and its infrastructure torn apart under the orders of Ahmad Shah.
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Original:  The only exception is in 1768-69.
Revised:  The only exception is in 1768–69.
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Original:  However, Nader Mirza Afshar used this oppurtunity to besiege Mashhad.
Revised:  However, Nader Mirza Afshar used this opportunity to besiege Mashhad.
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Original:  As a result  Nasrullah Mirza abandoned the siege of Nishapur and raced back to Mashhad and expelled Nader Mirza.
Revised:  As a result , Nasrullah Mirza abandoned the siege of Nishapur and raced back to Mashhad and expelled Nader Mirza.
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Original:  Abbas Qoli Khan had 8 sons (only two of those are mentioned in the subsequent stuggles ), and the eldest was regarded as incompetent.
Revised:  Abbas Qoli Khan had eight sons (only two of those are mentioned in the subsequent stuggles ), and the eldest was regarded as incompetent.
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Original:  Abbas Qoli Khan had 8 sons (only two of those are mentioned in the subsequent stuggles ), and the eldest was regarded as incompetent.
Revised:  Abbas Qoli Khan had 8 sons (only two of those are mentioned in the subsequent struggles ), and the eldest was regarded as incompetent.
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Original:  The holiday was first recognized by the British colonial administrationas a public holiday in 1938. 
Revised:  The holiday was first recognized by the British colonial administration as a public holiday in 1938. 
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Original:  The Karen New Year falls on the first day of Pyatho, the eleventh month in the Burmese calendar, and typically falls in December or January.
Revised:  The Karen New Year falls on the first day of Pyatho, the tenth month in the Burmese calendar, and typically falls in December or January.
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Original: The Karen New Year ( ကညီနံၣ်ထီၣ်သီ ;
Revised: The Karen New Year ( ;
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Original:  Following the 2nd attempt  Tran's slender body remained motionless and for the third time  Nhan ran from further back to gain momentum, thrusting his whole body with all of his strength but still could not shake the Tran's stance.
Revised:  Following the 2nd attempt , Tran's slender body remained motionless and for the third time Nhan ran from further back to gain momentum, thrusting his whole body with all of his strength but still could not shake the Tran's stance.
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Original:  Following the 2nd attempt  Tran's slender body remained motionless and for the third time  Nhan ran from further back to gain momentum, thrusting his whole body with all of his strength but still could not shake the Tran's stance.
Revised:  Following the 2nd attempt Tran's slender body remained motionless and for the third time , Nhan ran from further back to gain momentum, thrusting his whole body with all of his strength but still could not shake the Tran's stance.
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Original:  Seeing that Tran was seriously ill Yuen said said to him: "I will cure you for the first time."
Revised:  Seeing that Tran was seriously ill , Yuen said to him: "I will cure you for the first time."
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Original:  And doctor Nguyen had a full recovery in 1943, with but thanks to high energy in practicing qigong.
Revised:  And doctor Nguyen had a full recovery in 1943, thanks to high energy in practicing qigong.
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Original:  After that, Nguyen studied in-depth on the methods of practicing healing and promoted it  many people through his series of experiences that were published in books.
Revised:  After that, Nguyen studied in-depth the methods of practicing healing and promoted it many people through his series of experiences that were published in books.
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Original:  After that, Nguyen studied in-depth on the methods of practicing healing and promoted it  many people through his series of experiences that were published in books.
Revised:  After that, Nguyen studied in-depth on the methods of practicing healing and promoted it to many people through his series of experiences that were published in books.
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Original:  In 1977, Nguyen decided to make a documentary film about this life changing healing practice method.
Revised:  In 1977, Nguyen decided to make a documentary film about this life-changing healing practice method.
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Original:  Luo people are ethnically and linguistically related to other Luo peoples who inhabit an area ranging from South Sudan and Ethiopia, through Northern Uganda and eastern Congo (DRC).
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Original:  The Luo Union was preceded by numerous clan based organisations which later came together to form the union.
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Original:  Some of the achievements of the Union included fostering cultural unity through the organisation of regular cultural and sporting events, the sponsorship of students to pursue further education overseas, the construction of African owned buildings and support of African owned businesses.
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Original:  1832 – 20 January 1892), was an Iranian political and minister in Qajar era.
Revised:  1832 – 20 January 1892), was an Iranian politician and minister during the Qajar era.
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Original:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar  Ezzat od-Dowleh  Early life Moshir od-Dowleh was born in 1832 in Qazvin.
Revised:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar , Ezzat od-Dowleh Early life Moshir od-Dowleh was born in 1832 in Qazvin.
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Original:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar  Ezzat od-Dowleh  Early life Moshir od-Dowleh was born in 1832 in Qazvin.
Revised:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar Ezzat od-Dowleh . Early life Moshir od-Dowleh was born in 1832 in Qazvin.
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Original:  He was  son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh  who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
Revised:  He was the son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
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Original:  He was  son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh  who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
Revised:  He was son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh , who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
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Original:  He was  son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh  who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
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Original:  He was  son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh  who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his Highter education in Paris, France.
Revised:  He was son of Mirza Nabi Khan Amir od-Dowleh who served as Governor of Fares and Isfahan , Moshir od-Dowleh finished his higher education in Paris, France.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married to the Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh , in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh in 1868. Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and was Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891. Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was married  Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh  in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and  buried in Mashhed in 1892.
Revised:  He was married Shah's sister Ezzat od-Dowleh in 1868, Moshir od-Dowleh was foreign minister from 5 February 1886 to 1 August 1887 and became Justice Minister from 1888 until 1891 . Mirza Yahya Khan Moshir od-Dowleh died in Tehran and was buried in Mashhed in 1892.
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Original:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar, Ezzat od-Dowleh .
Revised:  He was the fourth husband to a sister of Naser al-Din Shah Qajar, Ezzat ed-Dowleh .
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Original:   DrSmile holds locations in numerous cities, such as Berlin, Düsseldorf, Frankfurt, Hamburg, Cologne, Munich, Nuremberg, Stuttgart , or Hannover.
Revised:  Company DrSmile holds locations in numerous cities, such as Berlin, Düsseldorf, Frankfurt, Hamburg, Cologne, Munich, Nuremberg, Stuttgart , or Hannover.
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Original:   DrSmile holds locations in numerous cities, such as Berlin, Düsseldorf, Frankfurt, Hamburg, Cologne, Munich, Nuremberg, Stuttgart , or Hannover.
Revised:  DrSmile holds locations in numerous cities, such as Berlin, Düsseldorf, Frankfurt, Hamburg, Cologne, Munich, Nuremberg, Stuttgart or Hannover.
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