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Original:  His first marriage was to Patricia Jones, a mathematician who he met while he was attending the California Institute of Technology.
Revised:  His first marriage was to Patricia Jones, a mathematician he met while he was attending the California Institute of Technology.
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Original:  When corrections officers left the three unsupervised, Scarver beat the other two men with a preacher bar that he had removed from a piece of exercise equipment in the prison weight room.
Revised:  When corrections officers left the three unsupervised, Scarver beat the other two men with a bar that he had removed from a piece of exercise equipment in the prison weight room.
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Original:   Criminals from Wisconsin Category:
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Original: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Living people Category: Male murderers Category: Male serial killers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People from Wisconsin Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
Revised: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Male murderers Category: Male serial killers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People from Wisconsin Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
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Original: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Living people Category: Male murderers Category: Male serial killers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People from Wisconsin Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
Revised: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Living people Category: Male murderers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People from Wisconsin Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
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Original: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Living people Category: Male murderers Category: Male serial killers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People from Wisconsin Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
Revised: Jeffrey Dahmer Category: Living people Category: Male murderers Category: Male serial killers Category: People convicted of murder by Wisconsin Category:People from Milwaukee Category:People with schizophrenia Category:Prisoners sentenced to life imprisonment by Wisconsin Category:1969 births Category:1990 murders in the United States Category:1994 murders in the United States Category:20th-century American criminals Category:African-American peop
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Original: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American serial killer who fatally assaulted fellow serial killers Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
Revised: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on fellow serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
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Original: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on fellow serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
Revised: Christopher Scarver (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on fellow serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
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Original: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on fellow serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
Revised: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
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Original: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and  Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
Revised: Christopher Scarver Sr. (born July 6, 1969) is an American convicted murderer known for his fatal assault on serial killer Jeffrey Dahmer and murderer Jesse Anderson at the Columbia Correctional Institution in 1994.
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Original:  The marriage resulted in six sons and three daughters.
Revised:  The marriage resulted in three sons and three daughters.
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Original: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in the Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan  née Simbolon  .
Revised: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan née Simbolon .
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Original: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in the Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan  née Simbolon  .
Revised: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in the Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan ( née Simbolon .
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Original: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in the Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan  née Simbolon  .
Revised: Early life Sagala was born on 14 April 1931 in a small village named Sagala in the Samosir Island, as the son of Elias Sagala and Buntulan née Simbolon ) .
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Original:  In 1992 Minz joined as an Associate professor of Computer Science in Jawaharlal Nehru University.
Revised:  In 1992 Minz joined in the post of Associate professor of Computer Science in Jawaharlal Nehru University.
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Original:  On 28 May 2020  the Governor of Jharkhand, Draupadi Murmu appointed her as the vice-chancellor to the Sido Kanhu Murmu University in Dumka.
Revised:  On 28 May 2020 , the Governor of Jharkhand, Draupadi Murmu appointed her as the vice-chancellor to the Sido Kanhu Murmu University in Dumka.
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Original:  She is the daughter of Nirmal Minz, freedom fighter and social worker .
Revised:  She is the daughter of Nirmal Minz, an social ideologue and activist .
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Original:  Academic career She completed her M. phill , Ph.D in Computer Science from Jawaharlal Nehru University (JNU).
Revised:  Academic career She completed her M. Phil , Ph.D in Computer Science from Jawaharlal Nehru University (JNU).
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Original:  On 28 May 2020, the Governor of Jharkhand, Draupadi Murmu appointed her as the vice-chancellor to the Sido Kanhu Murmu University in Dumka.
Revised:  On 27 May 2020, the Governor of Jharkhand, Draupadi Murmu appointed her as the vice-chancellor to the Sido Kanhu Murmu University in Dumka.
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Original:  She is the daughter of Nirmal Minz, an social ideologue and activist.
Revised:  She is the daughter of Nirmal Minz, a social ideologue and activist.
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Original:  Sonajharia Minz is an Indian academician and an adivasi activist.
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Original:  . Early life Minz hails from Oraon tribe of Gumla district in Jharkhand.
Revised:  Early life Minz hails from Oraon tribe of Gumla district in Jharkhand.
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Original:  She is the second tribeswoman hailing from Chotanagpur and appointed as a Vice-Chancellor in Sido Kanhu Murmu University, Dumka. . Early life Minz hails from Oraon tribe of Gumla district in Jharkhand.
Revised:  She is the second tribeswoman hailing from Chotanagpur and appointed as a Vice-Chancellor in Sido Kanhu Murmu University, Dumka. Early life Minz hails from Oraon tribe of Gumla district in Jharkhand.
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Original:  She is also an award-winning book author and Feminist activist that writes Gender, Work and Organization based journal and book.
Revised:  She is also a book author and Feminist activist that writes Gender, Work and Organization based journal and book.
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Original:  Saraswati is an award-winning book author and Feminist activist that writes Gender, Work and Organization based journal and book, she writes and published several books and journals on international University press and World Youth Forum, since her debut as an Author in 2013.
Revised:  Saraswati is a book author and Feminist activist that writes Gender, Work and Organization based journal and book, she writes and published several books and journals on international University press and World Youth Forum, since her debut as an Author in 2013.
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Original: Luh Putu Ayu Saraswati (;
Revised:  Putu Ayu Saraswati (;
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Original:  born July 6, 1997) popularly known as Ayu Saraswati is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, Medical practitioner, award-winning Feminist book author, Fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
Revised:  born July 6, 1997) is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, Medical practitioner, award-winning Feminist book author, Fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
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Original:  born July 6, 1997) popularly known as Ayu Saraswati is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, Medical practitioner, award-winning Feminist book author, Fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
Revised:  born July 6, 1997) popularly known as Ayu Saraswati is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, doctor, fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
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Original:  Since 2020, she serves as the Ambassador and Advisory Council of Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia and Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia, that works for #SangGuruKehidupan in advocating for women empowerment, Child protection, elderly care , natural disaster and free healthcare programs.
Revised:  She is Known for her work in advocating for women empowerment, Child protection, elderly care , natural disaster and free healthcare programs.
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Original:  Since 2020, she serves as the Ambassador and Advisory Council of Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia and Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia, that works for #SangGuruKehidupan in advocating for women empowerment, Child protection, elderly care , natural disaster and free healthcare programs.
Revised:  Since 2020, she serves as the Ambassador and Advisory Council of Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia and Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia, that works for #SangGuruKehidupan in advocating for elderly care and free healthcare programs.
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Original:  She will represent Indonesia at the Miss International 2022 pageantheld in Japan . Early life and education Saraswati appear as the Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador speaks in Support for the news conference of Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia on 20 May 2021.
Revised:  She will represent Indonesia at the Miss International 2022 pageantheld in Japan . Early life 
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Original:  She holds a Master of Medical Science (MMSc) in Biomedical sciences from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali , and currently works as a Medical Practitioner in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as a Medical Doctor.
Revised:  She holds a Master of Medical Science (MMSc) in Biomedical sciences from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works as a Medical Practitioner in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as a Medical Doctor.
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Original:  She holds a Master of Medical Science (MMSc) in Biomedical sciences from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali , and currently works as a Medical Practitioner in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as a Medical Doctor.
Revised:  She holds a Master of Medical Science (MMSc) in Biomedical sciences from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali , and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as a Medical Doctor.
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Original:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador,  Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia Ambassador, and Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia Ambassador.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia Ambassador, and Ministry of Environment and Forestry of the Republic of Indonesia Ambassador.
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Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen , This also began her charitable activities which she continues to perform to this day .
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen .
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Original:  As Jegeg Bali 2015 she became a charity ambassador for a local non-profit organization (NPO) Smile Foundation of Bali for the past 6 years, Saraswati donating funds and goods annually, helping to cleft lip and cleft palate patients and witnessed first-hand a Palatoplasty cleft surgery.
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Original:  Puteri Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
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Original:  Puteri Indonesia 2020  After qualifying the provincial title of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, Saraswati represented the province of Bali in the national beauty contest, Puteri Indonesia 2020, which was held on March 6, 2020. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% She was successfully crowned as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 (Miss International Indonesia 2020).
Revised:  Puteri Indonesia 2020 After qualifying the provincial title of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, Saraswati represented the province of Bali in the national beauty contest, Puteri Indonesia 2020, which was held on March 6, 2020. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% She was successfully selected as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020 (Miss International Indonesia 2020).
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Original:  by the predecessor of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2019 and Miss International 2019 Top 8 Finalist Jolene Marie Cholock-Rotinsulu of North Sulawesi. and won " Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020" special awards.
Revised:  by the predecessor of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2019 and Miss International 2019 Top 8 Finalist Jolene Marie Cholock-Rotinsulu of North Sulawesi. and won " Puteri Indonesia Nusa-Bali Islands 2020.
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Original:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana Junaedy as the guest star.
Revised:  The final coronation night was graced by the reigning Miss International 2019, Sireethorn Leearamwat and Miss International 2017, Kevin Lilliana as the guest star.
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Original:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2022 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2022 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Pacifico Yokohama, Yokohama City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan.
Revised:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2021 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2022 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Pacifico Yokohama, Yokohama City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan.
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Original:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2022 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2022 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Pacifico Yokohama, Yokohama City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan.
Revised:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2022 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2021 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Pacifico Yokohama, Yokohama City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan.
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Original:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2022 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2022 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Pacifico Yokohama, Yokohama City, Kanagawa Prefecture, Japan.
Revised:  Saraswati said:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Miss International 2022 As the winner of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020, Saraswati will represent Indonesia at the 60th edition of Miss International 2022 pageant, to be held in November 2021 at Yokohama, Japan.
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Original:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019 Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand will crown her successor . Saraswati is expected to continuing the streak of Indonesia's semi-finalists placement in Miss International for the 5th consecutive years since 2016.
Revised:  By the end of the event, Miss International 2019 Sireethorn Leearamwat of Thailand will crown her successor 
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Original:  Oxford 2020 Introduction to Women’s, Gender, and Sexuality Studies Reader:Intersectional and Interdisciplinary Approaches, 2nd edition Oxford University Press - Oxford2021 Pain Generation:Social Media, Feminist Activism, and the Neoliberal Selfie New York University Press - New York City Awards and nomination Year Awards Category Nominated work ResultRef.2013National Women's Studies AssociationGloria E. Anzaldúa Book PrizeSeeing Beauty, Sensing Race in Transnational IndonesiaWo
Revised:  Oxford 2020 Introduction to Women’s, Gender, and Sexuality Studies Reader:Intersectional and Interdisciplinary Approaches, 2nd edition Oxford University Press - Oxford2021 Pain Generation:Social Media, Feminist Activism, and the Neoliberal Selfie New York University Press - New York City 
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Original:  born July 6, 1997) is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, doctor, fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
Revised:  born July 6, 1997) is an Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, fashion model and beauty pageant titleholder who won the title of Puteri Indonesia Lingkungan 2020.
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Original:  She holds a magister degree in medicine from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents also works as a doctor .
Revised:  She holds a magister degree in medicine from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as doctors .
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Original:  She holds a magister degree in medicine from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work as doctors.
Revised:  She holds a magister degree in medicine from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
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Original:  Putu Ayu Saraswati (;
Revised: Luh Putu Ayu Saraswati (;
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Original:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali  and currently works  in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
Revised:  She holds a Bachelor in Medicine undergraduate degree from the Faculty of Medicine of Udayana University, Denpasar – Bali , and currently works in Sanglah Hospital, where both of her parents work US doctors.
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Original:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, and Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
Revised:  Beside being chosen as Indonesian People's Consultative Assembly Ambassador, Ministry of Women Empowerment and Child Protection of The Republic of Indonesia , she often representing Indonesia in world forums such as Youth Gathering Sunburst Youth Camp 2014 in Singapore and the 2013 International Community Development and Global Creative Leadership Summit in New Delhi, India.
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Original:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen  . Puteri Indonesia  Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
Revised:  Jegeg Bali 2015 Her foray into the world of pageantry began in 2015 when she won Jegeg Bali (Miss Tourism in Bali), where held in Denpasar at the age of eighteen , This also began her charitable activities which she continues to perform to this day . Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020 Saraswati joined the contest at the provincial level of the Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, and ended up was chosen as the winner of Puteri Indonesia Bali 2020, where she also won "Miss Intelligence" special award.
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