Original: The private Jetstream 32 carrying Prince Willem-Alexander and his wife Princess Mxima departed for Wellington  and was forced to made an emergency landing at Nelson Airport at around half past four these afternoon, minutes after takeoff.
Revised: The private Jetstream 32 carrying Prince Willem-Alexander and his wife Princess Mxima departed for Wellington and was forced to make an emergency landing at Nelson Airport at around half past four these afternoon, minutes after takeoff.
Edit intent: fluency