Original:  Bros Sports, the URLanizer, supervised by Taipei County Government in this race, some senior managers from Bros Sports URLanizations from the sports industry could arrange the best integration of several marathon races in Taiwan in the future even though Bros Sports promoted a special attempt this year with 3 marathon races including Jin Shi, Dajia Mazu, and UMC Hsinchu stages.
Revised:  Bros Sports, the URLanizer, supervised by Taipei County Government in this race, some senior managers from Bros Sports URLanizations from the sports industry could arrange the best integration of several marathon races in Taiwan in the future even though Bros Sports promoted a special attempt this year with three marathon races including Jin Shi, Dajia Mazu, and UMC Hsinchu stages.
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