Original: Love Socrates and Alcibiades, by Christoffer Wilhelm Eckersberg There exist textual passages suggesting that Socrates had a love affair with Alcibiades and other young males  while other texts suggest that Socrates' friendship with young boys sought  to improve them and were not sexual.
Revised: Love Socrates and Alcibiades, by Christoffer Wilhelm Eckersberg There exist textual passages suggesting that Socrates had a love affair with Alcibiades and other young males , while other texts suggest that Socrates' friendship with young boys sought to improve them and were not sexual.
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