Original:  Doctor Jackie Blue, National member of Parliament, has partnered with Mr Tookey and together they have proposed a change to the current law and is against the current law change proposal by the government, which he claims will give more power to reduce the donor rate .
Revised:  Doctor Jackie Blue, National member of Parliament, has partnered with Mr Tookey and together they have proposed a change to the current law and is against the current law change proposal by the government, which he claims will give more power to help reverse the decline URLan donations .
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