Original:  Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge - Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985  as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.
Revised:  Lala also have been working in Indiaand has won The Great Indian Laughter Challenge - Season 2. Career Stage play He started his career in 1985 , as a comedian in One day Theaterin Karachialong with his teacher Razak Rajo.
Edit intent: fluency