Original: Who is Zubair Alizai, his family, his sons - URL Death Hafiz Zubair Alizai died on the 10th of November 2013 after short admission in Benazir Bhutto Hospital  Rawalpindi, Pakistan , and the cause of his death was lung failure.
Revised: Who is Zubair Alizai, his family, his sons - URL Death Hafiz Zubair Alizai died on the 10th of November 2013 after short admission in Benazir Bhutto Hospital in Rawalpindi, Pakistan , and the cause of his death was lung failure.
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