Original:  Following the Olympic Trials, Jenner finished in tenth place in the decathlon at the 1972 Summer Olympics in Munich . By watching Soviet Mykola Avilov win the event, Jenner was inspired to start an intense training regimen.
Revised:  Following the Olympic Trials, Jenner finished in tenth place in the decathlon at the 1972 Summer Olympics in Munich , West Germany. Bywatching Soviet Mykola Avilov win the event, Jenner was inspired to start an intense training regimen.
Edit intent: meaning-changed