Original:  National Senior Citizens' Day is an important moment to remind the government of its commitment to work towards goals, to help seniors and, among other things, to end hunger and poverty for the elderly and people of all ages.
Revised:  National Senior Citizens' Day is an important moment to remind governments of their commitment to work towards goals, to help seniors and, among other things, to end hunger and poverty for the elderly and people of all ages.
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