Original:  In the 1970s, Baumeister was committed to a psychiatric hospital by his father . His wife said he was "hurting and needed help." Baumeister founded the successful Sav-A-Lot thrift store chain (two stores total) in Indianapolis in 1988.
Revised:  In the 1970s, Baumeister was committed to a psychiatric hospital by his father ; his wife said he was "hurting and needed help." Baumeister founded the successful Sav-A-Lot thrift store chain (two stores total) in Indianapolis in 1988.
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