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Original:  One of the most powerful warships in the Peruvian Navy was lost, while Chile only lost one of its oldest wooden warships.  
Revised:  One of the most powerful warships in the Peruvian Navy was lost, while Chile only lost one of its oldest wooden warships. Technical characteristicsSchooner Covadonga 245pxIronclad Independencia 245px Commissioned 1859 1866 Displacement (t) 412 t 3,300 - 3,750 t Draught 3,35 m 6,62 m Armor (mm) None 114.3 mm Naval artillery 2 x 70 lbThe covadonga had two cannons of 70 pounds, after May 21, 1879 were installed two cannons of 9 pounds, 3 cannons of 40 pounds. Armada de Chile 1 x 250 lb, 3 x 150 lb, 12 x 70 lb, 2 machine guns Speed (Knot) 4 knOn May 21, 1879, the Covadonga, had a power of 140 HP engine, that allowed a walk of 4 knots, because only two of his 3 boilers operated (Data from Chile Navy) 11 kn Crew 130 menCombate naval de Iquique, boletines y nacionales y extranjeros de 1879. Guerra del Pacífico. Pascual Ahumada Moreno. Valparaíso. 1886 375 men
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Original:  London: Bowker-Saur.</ref> White, H. D., McCain, K. W. (1998). Visualizing a discipline: An author co-citation analysis of information science, 1972-1995. Journal of the American Society for Information Science, 49(4), 327-355.
Revised:  London: Bowker-Saur.</ref> White, H. D., 
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Original: Other procedures Facial feminization surgery (FFS) is a form of facial reconstruction used to make a masculine face appear more feminine. FFS procedures can reshape the jaw, chin, forehead (including brow ridge) , hairline, and other areas of the face that tend to be sexually dimorphic. A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised: Other procedures There are a number of non surgical procedures that can be administered instead of – or in addition to sex-reassignment surgery that contribute to gender affirming procedures. .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple Botulinum toxins: .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple History: Botox (onabotulinumtoxinA) was first discovered by Dr. Justinius Kerner in 1820 and was extracted to botulinum toxin, type A, in 1994 by Dr. Edward J. Schantz. It was found to relax overactive muscles in animals and was approved for human testing in the 1970s for muscle spasms, crossed eyes, and sweating. .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple It was approved by the FDA in 1989 for intramuscular, intradetrusor, and intradermal injection. There are a number of preparations for botulinum toxins, all of which can be used for the same treatments: Botox cosmetic, Dysport (Ipsen pharmaceuticals) (Botulinum toxin type A), Xeomin, Neurobloc, and URL .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple Function: Botox is typically used to paralyze or relax muscles in the face and neck, restricting muscle contractions, thus decreasing, preventing, and eliminating fine lines and wrinkles. Due to its paralyzing properties, it is also frequently used to relax larger muscles in the face (the masseters) to slim down a strong jawline. Because males tend to have stronger masseters and larger jaws, many transgender males receive botox treatments to decrease the appearance of a larger jaw. .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple Science: Botox blocks the release of the main neurotransmitter at the neuromuscular junction, acetylcholine, resulting in muscle paralysis. The paralysis and underactivity of the muscle typically lasts three months until it returns back to its original state. It has been used to treat strabismus and focal dystonias, hemifacial spasms, movement disorders, headaches, hypersalivation, hyperhidrosis, and other conditions. .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple Hyaluronic Acid Fillers: .
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Original:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple        .
Revised:  A chondrolaryngoplasty, colloquially a "tracheal shave", is a surgical reduction of the cartilage in the larynx to reduce the appearance of a visible Adam's apple History: Hyaluronic Acids have been used since the 1970s for the treatment of joint pains and other health conditions. It is a chemical naturally found in the body that has made its way into beauty industry and skin care products as well as an injectable commonly used for areas in the face to address loss of volume .
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Original:  Facial masculinization surgery (FMS) is a form of facial reconstruction used to make a feminine face appear more masculine    .
Revised:  Facial masculinization surgery (FMS) is a form of facial reconstruction used to make a feminine face appear more masculine Science: Hyaluronic acid is a non-sulphated Glycosaminogycan (GAG) made up of polymeric disaccharides of D-glucuronic acid and N=acetyl=D-glucosamine linked by glucuronidic bonds. Due to its water retaining qualities, it adds volume to desired areas and can prevent aging. .
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Original:  Facial masculinization surgery (FMS) is a form of facial reconstruction used to make a feminine face appear more masculine    .
Revised:  Facial masculinization surgery (FMS) is a form of facial reconstruction used to make a feminine face appear more masculine History: Radiesse was FDA approved in December, 2006 for lipoatrophy in human immunodeficiency virus (HIV) patients. It originally was used to add volume to significant loss of fat in the faces of patients with HIV. Today it serves a variety of purposes, including dermal fillers .
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Original:  Trans people of both sexes may practice vocal therapy. Vocal therapists may help their patients improve their pitch, resonance, inflection, and volume. Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice      .
Revised:  Function: Radiesse can be used as a filler to fill hollow areas. It has also found its use as a “hand filler” to decrease the appearance of protruding veins in the hands. .
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Original:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice      .
Revised:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice Science: Hyperdiluted Calcium Hydroxyapatite (CaHA) stimulates collagen production, thus yielding volume to injected areas. When used as a dermal filler, Calcium Hydroxyapatite is hyperdiluted, significantly reducing the immediate volumizing effect and in turn causing only long term reshaping of tissue, making it ideal for superficial dermal rejuvenation. .
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Original:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice      .
Revised:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice History: Poly-L-Lactic Acid, manufactured by Dermik Laboratories, was FDA approved in August, 2004 and was originally intended for patients with HIV to address the loss of fat and volume in the face (facial lipoatrophy) despite complications reported to the URL .
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Original:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice      .
Revised:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice Function: Sculptra is primarility used as an injectable dermal filler for the face and buttock. Its collagen stimulating properties it allows for the gradual growth of the injected area. Results take 1-2 months to take full effect, and last up to 3-4 years. .
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Original:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice      .
Revised:  Another option for trans women is vocal surgery, though there is the risk of damaging the voice Science: Poly-L-Lactic Acid (Sculptra) is a collagen stimulator. The increase in collagen production causes the collagen to wrap around particles in the body that would naturally break down, causing the area of injection .
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Original:  ( extinct 2000) Diospyros boutoniana Diospyros chrysophyllos Diospyros egrettarum, of the low, dry, coastal forests, has white bark and dark rectangular leaves.
Revised:  ( Extinct, 2000) Diospyros boutoniana Diospyros chrysophyllos Diospyros egrettarum, of the low, dry, coastal forests, has white bark and dark rectangular leaves.
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Original:  ( extinct 2000) Diospyros boutoniana Diospyros chrysophyllos Diospyros egrettarum, of the low, dry, coastal forests, has white bark and dark rectangular leaves.
Revised:  ( extinct 2000) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros boutoniana (Critically endangered) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros chrysophyllos (Critically endangered) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros egrettarum (Critically endangered) of coastal and dry forests. It has white bark and dark rectangular leaves.
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Original:  Diospyros hemiteles Diospyros leucomelas Diospyros melanida, of the dry forests, has small, pale leaves and pale grey bark.
Revised:  Diospyros hemiteles (Critically endangered) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros leucomelas (Vulnerable) of coastal and dry forests. Diospyros melanida (Vulnerable) of the sub-humid to dry forests. It has small, pale leaves and pale grey bark.
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Original:  Diospyros neraudii Diospyros nodosa Diospyros pterocalyx Diospyros revaughanii Diospyros tessellaria - the most famous and widespread species - is a massive canopy tree .
Revised:  Diospyros neraudii (Vulnerable) of dry forests. Diospyros nodosa (Critically endangered) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros pterocalyx (Vulnerable) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros revaughanii (Vulnerable) of intermediate sub-humid to upland wet forest. Diospyros tessellaria (Vulnerable) the most famous and widespread species - is a massive canopy tree .
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Original:  Diospyros neraudii Diospyros nodosa Diospyros pterocalyx Diospyros revaughanii Diospyros tessellaria - the most famous and widespread species - is a massive canopy tree .
Revised:  Diospyros neraudii Diospyros nodosa Diospyros pterocalyx Diospyros revaughanii Diospyros tessellaria - the most famous and widespread species , occurring right across Mauritius. It is a massive canopy tree .
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Original:  Diospyros neraudii Diospyros nodosa Diospyros pterocalyx Diospyros revaughanii Diospyros tessellaria - the most famous and widespread species - is a massive canopy tree . It has a black, buttressed trunk spotted with white lichen, and thin, tapering leaves.
Revised:  Diospyros neraudii Diospyros nodosa Diospyros pterocalyx Diospyros revaughanii Diospyros tessellaria - the most famous and widespread species - is a massive canopy tree , has a black, buttressed trunk spotted with white lichen, and thin, tapering leaves.
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Original:  Zhejiang TV The King's Woman Gongsun Li Zhejiang TV2018 The Flame's Daughter Lie Ruge Youku Sweet Dreams Ling Lingqi Hunan TV2020 Eternal Love of Dream Bai FengjiuTencent Love Advanced Customization Zhou Fang Hunan TV, iQiyi 2021 The Long Ballad Li Changge Tencent You Are My Glory Qiao Jingjing 2022 The Blue Whisper 驭鲛记 Ji Yun He Youku  安乐传 Di Ziyuan / Ren AnlePre-Production
Revised:  Zhejiang TV The King's Woman Gongsun Li Zhejiang TV2018 The Flame's Daughter Lie Ruge Youku Sweet Dreams Ling Lingqi Hunan TV2020 Eternal Love of Dream Bai FengjiuTencent Love Advanced Customization Zhou Fang Hunan TV, iQiyi 2021 The Long Ballad Li Changge Tencent You Are My Glory Qiao Jingjing 2022 The Blue Whisper 驭鲛记 Ji Yun He Youku Legend of Anle 安乐传 Di Ziyuan / Ren AnlePre-Production
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Original:  Zhejiang TV The King's Woman Gongsun Li Zhejiang TV2018 The Flame's Daughter Lie Ruge Youku Sweet Dreams Ling Lingqi Hunan TV2020 Eternal Love of Dream Bai FengjiuTencent Love Advanced Customization Zhou Fang Hunan TV, iQiyi 2021 The Long Ballad Li Changge Tencent You Are My Glory Qiao Jingjing 2022 The Blue Whisper 驭鲛记 Ji Yun He Youku  安乐传 Di Ziyuan / Ren AnlePre-Production
Revised:  Zhejiang TV The King's Woman Gongsun Li Zhejiang TV2018 The Flame's Daughter Lie Ruge Youku Sweet Dreams Ling Lingqi Hunan TV2020 Eternal Love of Dream Bai FengjiuTencent Love Advanced Customization Zhou Fang Hunan TV, iQiyi 2021 The Long Ballad Li Changge Tencent You Are My Glory Qiao Jingjing 2022 The Blue Whisper 驭鲛记 Ji Yun He Youku 安乐传 Ren An Le / Di Ziyuan
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Original:  The group included: "The Baroness" Carin de Plessen, Dr. Cecil Nixon, Kenneth Anger,  City Assessor Russell Wolden , and Donald Werby .
Revised:  The group included: "The Baroness" Carin de Plessen, Dr. Cecil Nixon, Kenneth Anger, and City Assessor Russell Wolden , and Donald Werby .
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Original: Business/Corporate   Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
Revised: As academic discipline with distinct fields of study Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
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Original: Business/Corporate   Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
Revised: Business/Corporate The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies. The discipline encompasses a range of topics, from face-to-face conversation to mass media outlets such as television broadcasting. Communication studies also examines how messages are interpreted through the political, cultural, economic, semiotic, hermeneutic, and social dimensions of their contexts. Statistics, as a quantitative approach to communication science, has also been incorporated into research on communication science in order to help substantiate claims. Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
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Original: Business/Corporate   Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
Revised: Business/Corporate Organizational communication Business communication is used for a wide variety of activities including, but not limited to: strategic communications planning, media relations, internal communications, public relations (which can include social media, broadcast and written communications, and more), brand management, reputation management, speech-writing, customer-client relations, and internal/employee communications.
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Original: Turner, L.H., West, R.L. (2013). Perspectives on family communication. Boston: McGraw-Hill. The main goal of family communication is to understand the interactions of family and the pattern of behaviors of family members in different circumstances. Open and honest communication creates an atmosphere that allows family members to express their differences as well as love and admiration for one another. It also helps to understand the feelings of one another.
Revised: Turner, L.H., Interpersonal communication
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Original:     Barriers to effectiveness Barriers to effective communication can retard or distort the message or intention of the message being conveyed.
Revised:  West, R.L. (2013). Perspectives on family communication. Boston: McGraw-Hill. The main goal of family communication is to understand the interactions of family and the pattern of behaviors of family members in different circumstances. Open and honest communication creates an atmosphere that allows family members to express their differences as well as love and admiration for one another. It also helps to understand the feelings of one another. Barriers to effectiveness Barriers to effective communication can retard or distort the message or intention of the message being conveyed.
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Original:     Barriers to effectiveness Barriers to effective communication can retard or distort the message or intention of the message being conveyed.
Revised:  Family communication study looks at topics such as family rules, family roles or family dialectics and how those factors could affect the communication between family members. Researchers develop theories to understand communication behaviors. Family communication study also digs deep into certain time periods of family life such as marriage, parenthood or divorce and how communication stands in those situations. It is important for family members to understand communication as a trusted way which leads to a well constructed family. Barriers to effectiveness Barriers to effective communication can retard or distort the message or intention of the message being conveyed.
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Original:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 . As academic discipline%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies.
Revised:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 As academic discipline%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies.
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Original:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 . As academic discipline%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies.
Revised:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies.
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Original:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 . As academic discipline%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The academic discipline that deals with processes of human communication is communication studies. The discipline encompasses a range of topics, from face-to-face conversation to mass media outlets such as television broadcasting. Communication studies also examines how messages are interpreted through the political, cultural, economic, semiotic, hermeneutic, and social dimensions of their contexts. Statistics, as a quantitative approach to communication science, has also been incorporated into research on communication science in order to help substantiate claims .
Revised:  Article dated 2010-12-28, retrieved on 2012-04-03 . As academic discipline%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% .
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Original: While Latin was hugely influential, however, Greek was barely studied , and Greek literature survived almost solely in Latin translation.
Revised: While Latin was hugely influential, according to thirteenth-century English philosopher Roger Bacon, "there are not four men in Latin Christendom who are acquainted with the Greek, Hebrew, and Arabic grammars." Greek was rarely studied in the West , and Greek literature survived almost solely in Latin translation.
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Original:  The works of even major Greek authors such as Hesiod, whose names continued to be known by educated Europeans,  were unavailable in the Middle Ages. In the thirteenth century, the English philosopher Roger Bacon wrote that "there are not four men in Latin Christendom who are acquainted with the Greek, Hebrew, and Arabic grammars. "
Revised:  The works of even major Greek authors such as Hesiod, whose names continued to be known by educated Europeans, were unavailable in Christian Europe. Some were rediscovered through Arabic translations; a School of Translators was set up in the border city of Toledo, Spain, to translate from Arabic into Latin.
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