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Original:  Pliny the Elder, a Roman author and fleet commander, wrote about these lagoons, separated from the open sea by sandbanks: All those rivers and trenches were first made by the Etruscans, thus discharging the flow of the river across the marshes of the Atriani called the Seven Seas, with the famous harbor of the Etruscan town of Atria which formerly gave the name of Atriatic to the sea now called the Adriatic.
Revised:  Pliny the Elder, a Roman author and fleet commander, wrote about these lagoons, separated from the open sea by sandbanks: 
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  East Indies In British Colonial times the Clipper Ship Tea Route from China to England was the longest trade route in the world. It took sailors through seven seas near the Dutch East Indies: the Banda Sea, the Celebes Sea, the Flores Sea, the Java Sea, the South China Sea, the Sulu Sea, and the Timor Sea. The Seven Seas referred to those seas, and if someone had sailed the Seven Seas it meant he had sailed to, and returned from, the other side of the world. Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  Mesopotamia The term "Seven Seas" appears as early as 2300 BC in Hymn 8 of the Sumerian Enheduanna to the goddess Inanna. The Mesopotamians were the first in the history of astronomy to keep records of the observed seven moving objects in the heavens – the seven classical planets / Seven Heavens – and they made this connection to their seven seas. Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  Ancient Indian subcontinent Ancient texts and legends speak of Seven Seas or Sapta Sindhu (Sopto Sindhu). Sindhu and Sagar/Sagor mean sea in different languages of the subcontinent. According to the Vishnu Purana, the seas were Lavana/Lobon (salt), Iksu/Ikkhu (sugar-cane), Sura/Sura (wine), Sarpi (clarified butter or Ghee), Dadhi/Dodhi (yoghurt or curd), Dugdha/Dugdho (milk) and Jala/Jol (water).The Seven Seas and Seven Dwipas in Vishnu Purana. wisdomlib.org There may be variant list of names. For example, there is also mention of a Peeta/Pit Sagara/Sagor ie Yellow Sea. The word Pita means yellow. The Kshira Sagar or Kshir Sagar or Khir Sagor is also the white Sea. The word Kshira/Khir literally means condensed milk.. However, it also denotes white like milk. Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  Romans The meaning of (Latin) in Ancient Rome is different than the phrase "seven seas" in the modern era. The navigable network in the mouths of the Po river discharges into saltmarshes on the Adriatic shore and was colloquially called the "Seven Seas" in ancient Roman times. Pliny the Elder, a Roman author and fleet commander, wrote about these lagoons, separated from the open sea by sandbanks: Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  All those rivers and trenches were first made by the Etruscans, thus discharging the flow of the river across the marshes of the Atriani called the Seven Seas, with the famous harbor of the Etruscan town of Atria which formerly gave the name of Atriatic to the sea now called the Adriatic. Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:         Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
Revised:  The expression "to sail the seven seas" was a classical flourish signifying nautical skill. It was applied to the Venetians long before they sailed the oceans. Renaissance era During the Renaissance a moderately standardized iconography of the four continents (and the corresponding four rivers) of the world was created.
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Original:  Lightfoot does not comment on the remaining three seas . East Indies In British Colonial times the Clipper Ship Tea Route from China to England was the longest trade route in the world. It took sailors through seven seas near the Dutch East Indies: the Banda Sea, the Celebes Sea, the Flores Sea, the Java Sea, the South China Sea, the Sulu Sea, and the Timor Sea. The Seven Seas referred to those seas, and if someone had sailed the Seven Seas it meant he had sailed to, and returned from, the other side of the world .
Revised:  Lightfoot does not comment on the remaining three seas . .
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Original: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include   the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
Revised: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") was and is a figurative term for all the seas of the known world . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
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Original: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include   the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
Revised: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . The phrase is used in reference to sailors and pirates in the arts and popular culture and can be associated with the Mediterranean Sea, and/or the Arabian Seven Seas east of Africa and India (as told with Sinbad's seven journeys, and Captain Kidd), or is sometimes applied to the Caribbean Sea and seas around the Americas (with pirates such as Blackbeard). the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
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Original: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include   the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
Revised: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include The Seven Seas was part of the vernacular of several nations long before some of the oceans named were known to the inhabitants of Europe and Asia, and is referred to in the literature of the ancient Hindus, Chinese, Persians, Romans and other nations. the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
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Original: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include   the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
Revised: The "Seven Seas" (as in the idiom "sail the Seven Seas") is an ancient phrase for the world's major seas . Since the 19th century, the term has been taken to include The term can now also be taken to refer to the seven oceans (oceanic bodies of water): the Arctic Ocean the North Atlantic Ocean the South Atlantic Ocean the Indian Ocean the North Pacific Ocean the South Pacific Ocean the Southern (or Antarctic) Ocean
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Original: Historian Goffe Jensma published a monograph on the manuscript in 2004, De gemaskerde god (The Masked God), including a new translation and a discussion of the history of its reception . Jensma concludes that it was probably intended as a "hoax to fool some nationalist Frisians and orthodox Christians", as well as an "experiential exemplary exercise" by Dutch theologian and poet François Haverschmidt.
Revised: Historian Goffe Jensma published a monograph on the manuscript in 2004, De gemaskerde god (The Masked God), including a discussion of the history of its reception . Jensma concludes that it was probably intended as a "hoax to fool some nationalist Frisians and orthodox Christians", as well as an "experiential exemplary exercise" by Dutch theologian and poet François Haverschmidt.
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Original: Historian Goffe Jensma published a monograph on the manuscript in 2004, De gemaskerde god (The Masked God), including a new translation and a discussion of the history of its reception . Jensma concludes that it was probably intended as a "hoax to fool some nationalist Frisians and orthodox Christians", as well as an "experiential exemplary exercise" by Dutch theologian and poet François Haverschmidt.
Revised: Historian Goffe Jensma published a monograph on the manuscript in 2004, De gemaskerde god (The Masked God), including a new translation and a discussion of the history of its reception and a new translation in 2006. Jensma concludes that it was probably intended as a "hoax to fool some nationalist Frisians and orthodox Christians", as well as an "experiential exemplary exercise" by Dutch theologian and poet François Haverschmidt.
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Original: It also describes a lost land called Atland (the name given to Atlantis by the 17th century scholar Olof Rudbeck), which was supposedly submerged in 2194 BC , the same year as 19th century Dutch and Frisian almanacs, following traditional Biblical chronology given for Noah's flood.
Revised: It also describes a lost land called Atland (the name given to Atlantis by the 17th century scholar Olof Rudbeck), which was supposedly submerged in 2194 BC -- the same year as 19th century Dutch and Frisian almanacs, following traditional Biblical chronology given for Noah's flood.
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Original: It also describes a lost land called Atland (the name given to Atlantis by the 17th century scholar Olof Rudbeck), which was supposedly submerged in 2194 BC , the same year as 19th century Dutch and Frisian almanacs, following traditional Biblical chronology given for Noah's flood.
Revised: It also describes a lost land called Atland (the name given to Atlantis by the 17th century scholar Olof Rudbeck), which was supposedly submerged in 2194 BC , the same year as 19th century Dutch and Frisian almanacs, following traditional Biblical chronology , gave for Noah's flood.
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Original: Humanities Indicators, “Humanities in Our Lives: Public Humanities” American Academy of Arts and Sciences, Accessed 10/12/20. URL Programs include: Brown University, whose John Nicholas Brown Center for Public Humanities and Cultural Heritage supports public humanities programs and offers an MA in Public Humanities  .
Revised: Humanities Indicators, “Humanities in Our Lives: Public Humanities” American Academy of Arts and Sciences, Accessed 10/12/20. URL Programs include: Brown University, whose John Nicholas Brown Center for Public Humanities and Cultural Heritage supports public humanities programs and offers a stand-alone MA in Public Humanities .
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Original: Humanities Indicators, “Humanities in Our Lives: Public Humanities” American Academy of Arts and Sciences, Accessed 10/12/20. URL Programs include: Brown University, whose John Nicholas Brown Center for Public Humanities and Cultural Heritage supports public humanities programs and offers an MA in Public Humanities  .
Revised: Humanities Indicators, “Humanities in Our Lives: Public Humanities” American Academy of Arts and Sciences, Accessed 10/12/20. URL Programs include: Brown University, whose John Nicholas Brown Center for Public Humanities and Cultural Heritage supports public humanities programs and offers an MA in Public Humanities and a Certificate in Public Humanities for PhD students .
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Original:   Other tripedal creatures in Chinese mythology In Chinese mythology, there are other three-legged creatures besides the crow, for instance, the yu "a three-legged tortoise that causes malaria".
Revised:  The Queen Mother of the West sits upon a throne, flanked by Tiger (east, spring, yang) and Dragon (west, autumn, yin). She is surrounded by a nine-tailed fox, two seated women, a leaping frog, a male attendant, and a three-legged crow, Eastern Han Dynasty, 25 AD - 220 AD. The sanzuwu is also depicted with the Queen Mother of the West () who are believed to be her messengers. Other tripedal creatures in Chinese mythology In Chinese mythology, there are other three-legged creatures besides the crow, for instance, the yu "a three-legged tortoise that causes malaria".
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Original:   According to folklore, there were originally ten sun crows which settled in 10 separate suns.
Revised:  In ancient Chinese depictions, the Chinese god of creation, Fuxi, is often depicted carrying the sun disk with the jīnwū () while the Chinese goddess of creation, Nüwa, holds the moon disk which contains a gold stripped toad. According to folklore, there were originally ten sun crows which settled in 10 separate suns.
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Original:  Although the Samjok-o is mainly considered the symbol of Goguryeo, it is also found in Goryeo and Joseon dynasty  .
Revised:  Although the Samjok-o is mainly considered the symbol of Goguryeo, it is also found in Goryeo and Joseon dynasty . Illustration of Chinese god of creation, Fuxi, carrying the sun, Goguryeo murals. In Goguryeo tomb murals, the representation of the sun symbolism follows the Chinese model with the use of the three-legged crow in the sun. For example, in the Ohoe tomb dating from the late 6th to early 7th century in Jilin Province China, the Chinese gods of creations Fuxi and Nüwa are depicted as the deities of the sun and moon; Fuxi holds the sun disk which contains the three-legged crow while Nüwa holds the moon disk which contains a toad inside .
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Original:  Value judgment also can refer to a tentative judgment based on a considered appraisal of the information at hand, taken to be incomplete and evolving—for example, a value judgment on whether to launch a military attack , or as to procedure in a medical emergency.
Revised:  Value judgment also can refer to a tentative judgment based on a considered appraisal of the information at hand, taken to be incomplete and evolving—for example, a value judgment on whether to launch a military attack or as to procedure in a medical emergency.
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Original:  Conceptually this extension of  definition is related both to the anthropological axiom "cultural relativism" (that is, that cultural meaning derives from a context) and to the term "moral relativism" (that is, that moral and ethical propositions are not universal truths, but stem from cultural context).
Revised:  Conceptually this extension of the definition is related both to the anthropological axiom "cultural relativism" (that is, that cultural meaning derives from a context) and to the term "moral relativism" (that is, that moral and ethical propositions are not universal truths, but stem from cultural context).
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Original: Brief Explanation of the Theory The situational theory of publics, developed by Professor James E. Grunig in University of Maryland, College Park, defines that publics can be identified and classified in the context to which they are aware of the problem and the extent to which they do something about the problem.
Revised: Overview The situational theory of publics, developed by Professor James E. Grunig in University of Maryland, College Park, defines that publics can be identified and classified in the context to which they are aware of the problem and the extent to which they do something about the problem.
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Original:  Information Processing (Dependent Variable) Information processing can be called “passive communication behavior.” Passively communicating members of a public will not look for information, but they will often process information that comes to them randomly, that is, without any effort on their part.
Revised:  Information processing (Dependent Variable) Information processing can be called “passive communication behavior.” Passively communicating members of a public will not look for information, but they will often process information that comes to them randomly, that is, without any effort on their part.
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Original: The situational theory of publics defines that publics can be identified and classified in the context to which they are aware of the problem and the extent to which they do something  about the problem.
Revised: The situational theory of publics defines that publics can be identified and classified in the context to which they are aware of the problem and the extent to which they do something about the problem. For example, some people may begin uninformed and uninvolved; communications to them may be intended to make them aware and engaged. Communications to those who are aware but disengaged may focus on informing them of ways in which they could act. Further classifications are made on the basis to which people are actively seeking or passively encountering ("stumbling into") information about the problem.
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Original: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape or immune evasion ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or  in other words that the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
Revised: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape , immune evasion or escape mutation ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or in other words that the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
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Original: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape or immune evasion ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or  in other words that the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
Revised: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape or immune evasion ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or , in other words that the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
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Original: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape or immune evasion ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or  in other words that the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
Revised: Antigenic escape (alternatively called immune escape or immune evasion ) occurs when the immune system of a host, especially of a human being, is unable to respond to an infectious agent, or in other words , the host's immune system is no longer able to recognize and eliminate a pathogen such as a virus.
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Original:   Other associated scholars include the Kashmiri historian Kalhana Pandit and the Hindu philosopher Adi Shankara.
Revised:  Rinchen Zangpo, a principal lotsawa or translator of Sanskrit Buddhist texts into Tibetan, is also said to be studied here.Rizvi (1996), pp. 58-59. Other associated scholars include the Kashmiri historian Kalhana Pandit and the Hindu philosopher Adi Shankara.
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Original:  The important pupil who studied here include: Kumarajiva (344 – 413 CE) was born to a Kashmiri father, Kumārāyana, and a Chinese mother from Kucha.
Revised:  Kumarajiva (344 – 413 CE) was born to a Kashmiri father, Kumārāyana, and a Chinese mother from Kucha.
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Original:  Recently, Michelle played Juana Manalo In Zorro and she will include in Sine Novela: Tinik Sa Dibdib which stars Sunshine Dizon (later Nadine Samonte) as Lorna Yadao-Domingo, where she played the only crazy sister in law of Trixie (Ara Mina), later Rita (Sheryl Cruz) Moret or Corazon Domingo.
Revised:  Recently, Michelle played Juana Manalo In Zorro and she will include in Sine Novela: Tinik sa Dibdib which stars Sunshine Dizon (later Nadine Samonte) as Lorna Yadao-Domingo, where she played the only crazy sister in law of Trixie (Ara Mina), later Rita (Sheryl Cruz) Moret or Corazon Domingo.
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Original:  Category:1987 births Category:  Star Magic Category:Star Magic Batch 12 Category:Filipino child actresses Category:Filipino film actresses Category:GMA Artist Center Category:Living people Category:People from Quezon City Category:Actresses from Metro Manila Category:Filipino people of Spanish descent Category:Visayan people Category:Star Circle Quest participants Category:Viva Artists Agency Category:Survivor Philippines contestant
Revised:  Category:1987 births Category: Living people Category: Star Magic Category:Star Magic Batch 12 Category:Filipino child actresses Category:Filipino film actresses Category:GMA Artist Center Category:Living people Category:People from Quezon City Category:Actresses from Metro Manila Category:Filipino people of Spanish descent Category:Visayan people Category:Star Circle Quest participants Category:Viva Artists Agency Category:Survivor Philippines contestant
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