wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Live performance  The album was performed in its entirety as one compositional piece at the Reading Room at Wellcome Collection in London, England, on September 27, 2015 from midnight to 8:00 AM  as the climax of the BBC Radio 3 "Science and Music" weekend.
Revised:  Live performance The album was performed in its entirety from midnight to 8:00 AM as the climax of the BBC Radio 3 "Science and Music" weekend.
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Original:  Live performance  The album was performed in its entirety as one compositional piece at the Reading Room at Wellcome Collection in London, England, on September 27, 2015 from midnight to 8:00 AM  as the climax of the BBC Radio 3 "Science and Music" weekend.
Revised:  Live performance The album was performed in its entirety as one compositional piece at the Reading Room at Wellcome Collection in London, England, on September 27, 2015 from midnight to 8:00 AM at the Wellcome Collection in 2015 as the climax of the BBC Radio 3 "Science and Music" weekend.
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Original: Sinfini Music – Latest: Music and the brain  The performance set Guinness World Records for longest broadcast of a single piece of music and longest live broadcast of a single piece of music.
Revised: Sinfini Music – Latest: Music and the brain Audience members watched from beds instead of chairs. The performance set Guinness World Records for longest broadcast of a single piece of music and longest live broadcast of a single piece of music.
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Original:  Max Richter - Sleep Sleep was performed for its first outdoor performance and largest performance to-date in Los Angeles, CA on July 27-28th and July 28-29th, 2018, starting shortly after 10:30pm. It was performed in Grand Park, across from the Los Angeles Music Center.
Revised:  Max Richter - Sleep and outdoors in Grand Park, across from the Los Angeles Music Center.
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Original:  It was performed in Grand Park, across from the Los Angeles Music Center. Each performance had 560 beds and was timed so the final movement, "Dream 0 (till break of day)" would occur at dawn.
Revised:  It was performed in Grand Park, Los Angeles in 2018. The Los Angeles performances had 560 beds and was timed so the final movement, "Dream 0 (till break of day)" would occur at dawn.
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Original:  Commercial performance As of April 2017 Sleep has sold over 100,000 copies. As of February 2020 Sleep has peaked at No.44 and has sales of 40,151 (15,905 from streams) in United Kingdom, according to the Official Charts Company.
Revised:  Commercial performance As of February 2020 Sleep has peaked at No.44 and has sales of 40,151 (15,905 from streams) in United Kingdom, according to the Official Charts Company.
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Original:  As of February 2020 Sleep has peaked at No.44 and has sales of 40,151 (15,905 from streams) in United Kingdom, according to the Official Charts Company. Up to July 2018 Sleep has earned 37,7 million on-demand streams in United States according to Nielsen Music.
Revised:  As of February 2020 Sleep has peaked at No.44 and has sales of 40,151 in the United Kingdom.
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Original:   Precautionary principle A Fishery Manager's Guidebook issued in 2002 by the FAO advises that a set of working principles should be applied to "highlight the underlying key issues" of fisheries management."
Revised: Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers. Traditional management practices aim to reduce the number of old, slow-growing fish, leaving more room and resources for younger, faster-growing fish. Most marine fish produce huge numbers of eggs. The assumption was that younger spawners would produce plenty of viable larvae.AAAS (2005) New Science Sheds Light on Rebuilding Fisheries Precautionary principle A Fishery Manager's Guidebook issued in 2002 by the FAO advises that a set of working principles should be applied to "highlight the underlying key issues" of fisheries management."
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Original:   Precautionary principle A Fishery Manager's Guidebook issued in 2002 by the FAO advises that a set of working principles should be applied to "highlight the underlying key issues" of fisheries management."
Revised:  However, 2005 research on rockfish shows that large, elderly females are far more important than younger fish in maintaining productive fisheries. The larvae produced by these older maternal fish grow faster, survive starvation better, and are much more likely to survive than the offspring of younger fish. Failure to account for the role of older fish may help explain recent collapses of some major US West Coast fisheries. Recovery of some stocks is expected to take decades. One way to prevent such collapses is to establish marine reserves, where fishing is not allowed and fish populations age naturally. Precautionary principle A Fishery Manager's Guidebook issued in 2002 by the FAO advises that a set of working principles should be applied to "highlight the underlying key issues" of fisheries management."
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Human factors Managing fisheries is about managing people and businesses, and not about managing fish. Fish populations are managed by regulating the actions of people. If fisheries management is to be successful, then associated human factors, such as the reactions of fishermen, are of key importance, and need to be understood. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Management regulations must also consider the implications for stakeholders. Commercial fishermen rely on catches to provide for their families just as farmers rely on crops. Commercial fishing can be a traditional trade passed down from generation to generation. Most commercial fishing is based in towns built around the fishing industry; regulation changes can impact an entire town's economy. Cuts in harvest quotas can have adverse effects on the ability of fishermen to compete with the tourism industry. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Empowerment has a wide application but in this context it refers to a tool that gives people within the fishing communities an opportunity to shape their own future in order to cope with the impacts from large-scale commercial fishing, competition of resources, and other threats that impact fishing communities. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  However, there are limits to empowerment in the fisheries management process. Empowerment maintains an involvement on the part of the state in fisheries management and no matter how empowered the other stakeholders are, the success of fisheries isn't possible without the legislative powers, financial resources, educational support, and research the government provides. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  This concept is not accepted by all, as some communities and individuals argue that the state should withdraw completely and let the local communities handle their own fishery management based on cultural traditions and established practices. Additionally, others have argued that co-management only empowers the wealthy and powerful which in turn solidifies and validates the already existing inequalities of fisheries management. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Empowerment working as a function of co-management, carried out correctly, will not only enable but it will authorize individuals and communities to make meaningful contributions to fisheries management. It is a mechanism that works in a loop, where an individual gains empowerment and encouragement from being a part of the group and the collective action is only successful because of its empowered individuals. In order to effectively and successfully use empowerment as co-management, it is imperative that study programs, guidelines, reading materials, manuals, and checklists are developed and incorporated into all fisheries management. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Corruption Fisheries mismanagement is due, in part, to corruption. Corruption and bribery influence the number of fishing licenses that are distributed and to whom, as well as the negotiation of fishing acccess agreements. There is evidence of industrial fisheries corruption among the Small Island Developing States of the Pacific Ocean as well as the fisheries off the coast of West Africa. In small-scale fisheries, inspectors who are charged with regulating catch are bribed to give advance notice of surprise inspections and to relax enforcement standards. Some standards are not enforced at all due to bribery, while other infractions may result in smaller fines than mandated. Fishing gear seized during an investigation can also be returned in exchange for a bribe. Corruption of small-scale fisheries has been documented in South Africa and Lake Victoria. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
Revised:  Data quality According to fisheries scientist Milo Adkison, the primary limitation in fisheries management decisions is the absence of quality data. Fisheries management decisions are often based on population models, but the models need quality data to be effective. He asserts that scientists and fishery managers would be better served with simpler models and improved data. Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers.
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Original:            Fisheries law Climate change Elderly maternal fish Old, fat, female rockfish are the best producers. Traditional management practices aim to reduce the number of old, slow-growing fish, leaving more room and resources for younger, faster-growing fish. Most marine fish produce huge numbers of eggs. The assumption was that younger spawners would produce plenty of viable larvae.AAAS (2005) New Science Sheds Light on Rebuilding Fisheries However, 2005 research on rockfish shows that large, elderly females are far more important than younger fish in maintaining productive fisheries.
Revised:  Fisheries law Climate change However, 2005 research on rockfish shows that large, elderly females are far more important than younger fish in maintaining productive fisheries.
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Original: AAAS (2005) New Science Sheds Light on Rebuilding Fisheries However, 2005 research on rockfish shows that large, elderly females are far more important than younger fish in maintaining productive fisheries. The larvae produced by these older maternal fish grow faster, survive starvation better, and are much more likely to survive than the offspring of younger fish. Failure to account for the role of older fish may help explain recent collapses of some major US West Coast fisheries. Recovery of some stocks is expected to take decades. One way to prevent such collapses is to establish marine reserves, where fishing is not allowed and fish populations age naturally.
Revised: AAAS (2005) New Science Sheds Light on Rebuilding Fisheries 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Data quality According to fisheries scientist Milo Adkison, the primary limitation in fisheries management decisions is the absence of quality data. Fisheries management decisions are often based on population models, but the models need quality data to be effective. He asserts that scientists and fishery managers would be better served with simpler models and improved data.
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Original:  Ecopath is widely used in fisheries management as a tool for modelling and visualising the complex relationships that exist in real world marine ecosystems . Human factors Managing fisheries is about managing people and businesses, and not about managing fish.
Revised:  Ecopath is widely used in fisheries management as a tool for modelling and visualising the complex relationships that exist in real world marine ecosystems Human factors Managing fisheries is about managing people and businesses, and not about managing fish.
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Original:  Ecopath is widely used in fisheries management as a tool for modelling and visualising the complex relationships that exist in real world marine ecosystems . Human factors Managing fisheries is about managing people and businesses, and not about managing fish. Fish populations are managed by regulating the actions of people. If fisheries management is to be successful, then associated human factors, such as the reactions of fishermen, are of key importance, and need to be understood.
Revised:  Ecopath is widely used in fisheries management as a tool for modelling and visualising the complex relationships that exist in real world marine ecosystems . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Management regulations must also consider the implications for stakeholders. Commercial fishermen rely on catches to provide for their families just as farmers rely on crops. Commercial fishing can be a traditional trade passed down from generation to generation. Most commercial fishing is based in towns built around the fishing industry; regulation changes can impact an entire town's economy. Cuts in harvest quotas can have adverse effects on the ability of fishermen to compete with the tourism industry.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Empowerment has a wide application but in this context it refers to a tool that gives people within the fishing communities an opportunity to shape their own future in order to cope with the impacts from large-scale commercial fishing, competition of resources, and other threats that impact fishing communities.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This concept is not accepted by all, as some communities and individuals argue that the state should withdraw completely and let the local communities handle their own fishery management based on cultural traditions and established practices. Additionally, others have argued that co-management only empowers the wealthy and powerful which in turn solidifies and validates the already existing inequalities of fisheries management.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Empowerment working as a function of co-management, carried out correctly, will not only enable but it will authorize individuals and communities to make meaningful contributions to fisheries management. It is a mechanism that works in a loop, where an individual gains empowerment and encouragement from being a part of the group and the collective action is only successful because of its empowered individuals. In order to effectively and successfully use empowerment as co-management, it is imperative that study programs, guidelines, reading materials, manuals, and checklists are developed and incorporated into all fisheries management.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Corruption Fisheries mismanagement is due, in part, to corruption. Corruption and bribery influence the number of fishing licenses that are distributed and to whom, as well as the negotiation of fishing acccess agreements. There is evidence of industrial fisheries corruption among the Small Island Developing States of the Pacific Ocean as well as the fisheries off the coast of West Africa. In small-scale fisheries, inspectors who are charged with regulating catch are bribed to give advance notice of surprise inspections and to relax enforcement standards. Some standards are not enforced at all due to bribery, while other infractions may result in smaller fines than mandated. Fishing gear seized during an investigation can also be returned in exchange for a bribe. Corruption of small-scale fisheries has been documented in South Africa and Lake Victoria .
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Original: Жак Бержье, Луи Повель It is claimed that the Order collaborated with Theosophical Society and Thule Society . Influenced the well-known secular figures in Europe , traveled to the East - to Tibet and Japan.
Revised: Жак Бержье, Луи Повель It is claimed that the Order collaborated with Theosophical Society and Thule Society and influenced well-known secular figures in Europe , traveled to the East - to Tibet and Japan.
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Original: "The seven heads of the Green Dragon" (about "Les Sept têtes du Dragon Vert" book by Teddy Legrand)Hitler et les sociétés secrètes : Enquête sur les sources occultes du nazisme Rumor had membership in the Order Peter Badmayev, empress Alexandra Feodorovna, Grigory Rasputin,  Karl Haushofer.
Revised: "The seven heads of the Green Dragon" (about "Les Sept têtes du Dragon Vert" book by Teddy Legrand)Hitler et les sociétés secrètes : Enquête sur les sources occultes du nazisme Rumored members of the Order include Peter Badmayev, empress Alexandra Feodorovna, Grigory Rasputin, Karl Haushofer.
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Original: "The seven heads of the Green Dragon" (about "Les Sept têtes du Dragon Vert" book by Teddy Legrand)Hitler et les sociétés secrètes : Enquête sur les sources occultes du nazisme Rumor had membership in the Order Peter Badmayev, empress Alexandra Feodorovna, Grigory Rasputin,  Karl Haushofer.
Revised: "The seven heads of the Green Dragon" (about "Les Sept têtes du Dragon Vert" book by Teddy Legrand)Hitler et les sociétés secrètes : Enquête sur les sources occultes du nazisme Rumor had membership in the Order Peter Badmayev, empress Alexandra Feodorovna, Grigory Rasputin, and Karl Haushofer.
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Original: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some  booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
Revised: List of ousted artists Some of the artists that the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
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Original: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some  booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
Revised: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
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Original: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some  booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
Revised: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some people were booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
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Original: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some  booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
Revised: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some booing and other cheering, and others amazingly have managed to silence the boos .
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Original: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some  booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence the boos .
Revised: List of ousted artists Some of the artists to the public of Viña del Mar International Song Festival has prevented them from completing their stage show, but there are others that have been split by El Monstruo, that is, some booing and other cheering, and others amazingly they have managed to silence them .
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Original:  It 's an "extraordinary invisible power believed by the Iroquois Native Americans to pervade in varying degrees in all animate and inanimate natural objects as a transmissible spiritual energy capable of being exerted according to the will of its possessor."
Revised:  It is an "extraordinary invisible power believed by the Iroquois Native Americans to pervade in varying degrees in all animate and inanimate natural objects as a transmissible spiritual energy capable of being exerted according to the will of its possessor."
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Original:  Specifically, it may refer to: water consumption energy consumption electric energy consumption world energy consumption natural gas consumption/gas depletion oil consumption/oil depletion logging / deforestation fishing/overfishing land use/land loss or resource depletionand general exploitation and associated environmental degradation
Revised:  Specifically, it may refer to: water consumption energy consumption electric energy consumption world energy consumption natural gas consumption/gas depletion oil consumption/oil depletion / deforestation fishing/overfishing land use/land loss or resource depletionand general exploitation and associated environmental degradation
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