wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  ACEs have been linked to premature death as well as  various health conditions and risks. It has also been linked to childhood maltreatment, which is related to a number of neurological changes in the structure of the brain and its function and reaction to stress .
Revised:  ACEs have been linked to premature death as well as various health conditions , including those of mental disorders. Resulting toxic stress has also been linked to childhood maltreatment, which is related to a number of neurological changes in the structure of the brain and its function and reaction to stress .
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Original:  However, since independence, the Pakistan government never appointed a Hindu citizen as URL In 2020, all six official members are Muslims and of the 18 non-official members, only eight are from the minority Hindu and Sikh communities.
Revised:  However, since independence, the Pakistan government never appointed a Hindu citizen as chairman. In 2020, all six official members are Muslims and of the 18 non-official members, only eight are from the minority Hindu and Sikh communities.
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Original:  Frontier Constabulary officials, with the help of the board, have occupied the Shamshan Ghaat in Dera Ismail Khan and the Hindu community is unable to cremate their dead because of the unavailability of Shamshan Ghaat and is forced to bury them in a graveyard shared my members of other URL
Revised:  Frontier Constabulary officials, with the help of the board, have occupied the Shamshan Ghaat in Dera Ismail Khan and the Hindu community is unable to cremate their dead because of the unavailability of Shamshan Ghaat and is forced to bury them in a graveyard shared my members of other faiths.
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Original: Still the Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on the day of May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviet lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
Revised: Still , Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on the day of May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviet lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
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Original: Still the Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on the day of May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviet lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
Revised: Still the Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviet lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
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Original: Still the Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on the day of May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviet lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
Revised: Still the Norris's ships could enjoy superior numbers: on the day of May 21, the flotilla approached Alexandrovsky Fort and the Soviets lost the patrol boat Schastlivyy due to grounding while attempting to distract the British.
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Original:  Once the main battle erupted, at first the Soviet appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while other two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, suffering 5 killed and 7 wounded.
Revised:  Once the main battle erupted, the Soviets initially appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while other two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, suffering 5 killed and 7 wounded.
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Original:  Once the main battle erupted, at first the Soviet appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while other two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, suffering 5 killed and 7 wounded.
Revised:  Once the main battle erupted, at first the Soviet appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, suffering 5 killed and 7 wounded.
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Original:  Once the main battle erupted, at first the Soviet appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while other two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, suffering 5 killed and 7 wounded.
Revised:  Once the main battle erupted, at first the Soviet appeared victorious: a direct hit was scored on the bridge of Kruger (but with little damage), while other two direct hits caused more harm to the Emile Nobel, which suffered 5 killed and 7 wounded.
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Original: Paul Halpern, The Mediterranean Fleet, 1919–1929, Routledge, 2016 Shortly after, Commodore Norris engaged the Soviets once more, focusing the superior high-fire of his ships: this time results were different when Kruger shelled and sunk the floating battery n°2 (responsible of the previous hits on the British ships with  loss of 12 men).
Revised: Paul Halpern, The Mediterranean Fleet, 1919–1929, Routledge, 2016 Shortly after, Commodore Norris engaged the Soviets once more, focusing the superior firepower of his ships: this time results were different when Kruger shelled and sunk the floating battery n°2 (responsible of the previous hits on the British ships with loss of 12 men).
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Original: Paul Halpern, The Mediterranean Fleet, 1919–1929, Routledge, 2016 Shortly after, Commodore Norris engaged the Soviets once more, focusing the superior high-fire of his ships: this time results were different when Kruger shelled and sunk the floating battery n°2 (responsible of the previous hits on the British ships with  loss of 12 men).
Revised: Paul Halpern, The Mediterranean Fleet, 1919–1929, Routledge, 2016 Shortly after, Commodore Norris engaged the Soviets once more, focusing the superior high-fire of his ships: this time results were different when Kruger shelled and sunk the floating battery n°2 (responsible of the previous hits on the British ships with , a loss of 12 men).
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Original:  The depot-ship Revel was full of oil and a large explosion was triggered after she was hit, mortally damaging the minelayer Demosthenes (later scuttled) and engulfing with the detonation also the mine-carrier Tuman, the auxiliary ship Gelma, the smaller Zoroaster (not to be confused with the British ship) and a number of small barges.
Revised:  The depot-ship Revel was full of oil and a large explosion was triggered after she was hit, mortally damaging the minelayer Demosthenes (later scuttled) . The explosion also engulfed the mine-carrier Tuman, the auxiliary ship Gelma, the smaller Zoroaster (not to be confused with the British ship) and a number of small barges.
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Original:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but could not carry out the attack . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due  Makrel's action  but the British ships never noticed the danger.
Revised:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but failed . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due Makrel's action but the British ships never noticed the danger.
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Original:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but could not carry out the attack . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due  Makrel's action  but the British ships never noticed the danger.
Revised:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but could not carry out the attack . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due to Makrel's action but the British ships never noticed the danger.
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Original:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but could not carry out the attack . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due  Makrel's action  but the British ships never noticed the danger.
Revised:  During the battle, the Soviet submarine Makrel attempted to move into an attack position but could not carry out the attack . Soviet propaganda later claimed the British halted their fire due Makrel's action , but the British ships never noticed the danger.
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Original:  The Clearinghouse also has published or made available out-of-print  in open-access digital formats more than 120books and provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
Revised:  The Clearinghouse also has published more than 70 original scholarly monographs and collections and has made more than 45 out-of-print in open-access digital formats more than 120books and provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
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Original:  The Clearinghouse also has published or made available out-of-print  in open-access digital formats more than 120books and provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
Revised:  The Clearinghouse also has published or made available out-of-print books available in open-access digital formats more than 120books and provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
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Original:  The Clearinghouse also has published or made available out-of-print  in open-access digital formats more than 120books and provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
Revised:  The Clearinghouse also has published or made available out-of-print in open-access digital formats . The Clearinghouse also provides access to peer-reviewed resources for teachers who wish to use writing in courses across the disciplines,
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Original: Influence and impact Brownell's  paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist in August, 1986 , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
Revised: Impact Brownell's paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist in August, 1986 , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
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Original: Influence and impact Brownell's  paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist in August, 1986 , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
Revised: Influence and impact Brownell's 1986 paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist in August, 1986 , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
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Original: Influence and impact Brownell's  paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist in August, 1986 , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
Revised: Influence and impact Brownell's paper, Understanding and Preventing Relapse, published in American Psychologist , was recognized at the time as one of the most frequently cited papers in psychology.
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Original:  In commentary for Time Magazine's "Time 100 of 2006", former Arkansas governor and presidential candidate Mike Huckabee said of Brownell , Brownell 's influence is also seen in popular culture.
Revised:  In commentary for Time Magazine's "Time 100 of 2006", former Arkansas governor and presidential candidate Mike Huckabee commented that Brownell had "helped set the U.S. agenda by calling for a ban on sweetened-cereal ads aimed at kids and a tax on high-fat, low-nutrition food." Brownell 's influence is also seen in popular culture.
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Original:  In commentary for Time Magazine's "Time 100 of 2006", former Arkansas governor and presidential candidate Mike Huckabee said of Brownell , Brownell 's influence is also seen in popular culture.
Revised:  In commentary for Time Magazine's "Time 100 of 2006", former Arkansas governor and presidential candidate Mike Huckabee said of Brownell , Brownell has also influenced popular culture.
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Original:  Beyond having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his  book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry , published in 2004.
Revised:  In addition to having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry , published in 2004.
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Original:  Beyond having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his  book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry , published in 2004.
Revised:  Beyond having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his 2004 book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry , published in 2004.
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Original:  Beyond having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his  book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry , published in 2004.
Revised:  Beyond having coined the term "yo-yo dieting", he is also credited with introducing the phrase "toxic food environment" in his book, Food Fight: The Inside Story of the Food Industry .
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Original:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
Revised:  In China, during the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
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Original:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
Revised:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
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Original:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
Revised:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization started , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
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Original:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was specifically manifested in a large-scale "Down to the Countryside Movement".
Revised:  During the "Cultural Revolution" in 1966-1976, urbanization in China stagnated, and a nation-wide anti-urbanization phenomenon occurred , which was manifested by a massive "Down to the Countryside Movement".
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Original:  It is estimated that during the peak period of  Down to the Countryside Movement  at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was only 168 million in 1968.
Revised:  It is estimated that during the peak period of " Down to the Countryside Movement at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was only 168 million in 1968.
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Original:  It is estimated that during the peak period of  Down to the Countryside Movement  at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was only 168 million in 1968.
Revised:  It is estimated that during the peak period of Down to the Countryside Movement " at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was only 168 million in 1968.
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Original:  It is estimated that during the peak period of  Down to the Countryside Movement  at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was only 168 million in 1968.
Revised:  It is estimated that during the peak period of Down to the Countryside Movement at the end of the 1960s, more than 10 million people moved from urban China to rural areas, while the total urban population in China was 168 million in 1968.
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Original: Naebody knows where it comes fae.
Revised: The idiom may allude to a straw (thin plant stalk) held up to see in what direction the wind blows, in this case, the wind of group opinion.Christine Ammer. ''The American Heritage Dictionary of Idioms (New York: Houghton Mifflin Company, 1997)E. Cobham Brewer. Brewers Dictionary of Phrase
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Original: How the Gupta family captured South Africa through bribery In 2015, the Gupta family bought the Optimum Coal Mine . They made profits by cutting the health insurance of staffs and cutting corners when repairing machines.
Revised: How the Gupta family captured South Africa through bribery In 2015, the Gupta family bought the Optimum Coal Mine and made profits by cutting the health insurance of staffs and cutting corners when repairing machines.
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Original: Artist's depiction of a foetus at 38 weeks' gestation An example of the use of Doppler ultrasound to examine the waveform within an artery; this technique is applied to the middle cerebral artery to diagnose cerebral redistribution Foetal cerebral redistribution or 'brain-sparing' is a diagnosis in foetal medicine.
Revised: Artist's depiction of a foetus at 38 weeks' gestation Foetal cerebral redistribution or 'brain-sparing' is a diagnosis in foetal medicine.
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Original: "U.S. Department of State: 2012 Report on International Religious Freedom: Israel and The Occupied Territories (May 20, 2013)" One of those restrictions is that the Rabbi of the Western Wall  has enforced gender segregation and limitations on religious garb worn by women.
Revised: "U.S. Department of State: 2012 Report on International Religious Freedom: Israel and The Occupied Territories (May 20, 2013)" One of those restrictions is that the administrator of the Western Wall has enforced gender segregation and limitations on religious garb worn by women.
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Original: "U.S. Department of State: 2012 Report on International Religious Freedom: Israel and The Occupied Territories (May 20, 2013)" One of those restrictions is that the Rabbi of the Western Wall  has enforced gender segregation and limitations on religious garb worn by women.
Revised: "U.S. Department of State: 2012 Report on International Religious Freedom: Israel and The Occupied Territories (May 20, 2013)" One of those restrictions is that the Rabbi of the Western Wall Heritage Foundation has enforced gender segregation and limitations on religious garb worn by women.
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Original:            Category:Hindu mytholog
Revised:  19th century German Indologists Karl Friedrich Geldner and Rudolf von Roth, the term denotes "all the peoples of the earth", with Vedic Aryans in the middle, and other people in the four directions. Heinrich Zimmer, another German Indologist, has criticized this theory, arguing that inclusion of all of the earth's peoples in this expression is not in harmony with the frequent distinction made between the Aryans and the Dasas in the Vedic texts; that the term -janah'' is not used for the non-Aryans; that the deities Soma and Indra are mentioned as belonging among the pancha-janah; and that the pancha-janah are mentioned as located on the Sarasvati River. Category:Hindu mytholog
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Original: The Pancha-janah ( IAST: pañca-janāḥ , "five peoples ") is a Sanskrit-language term mentioned in the Vedic literature of ancient India.
Revised: The Pancha-janah ( IAST: pañca-janāḥ , "five tribes ") is a Sanskrit-language term mentioned in the Vedic literature of ancient India.
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Original:  The position of Z or X is described via its  angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
Revised:  The position of Z or X is described via its declination—the angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
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Original:  The position of Z or X is described via its  angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
Revised:  The position of Z or X is described via its angular distance north or south of the equator (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
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Original:  The position of Z or X is described via its  angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
Revised:  The position of Z or X is described via its angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) —and the hour angle—the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
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Original:  The position of Z or X is described via its  angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian , known as the hour angle (corresponding to its longitude).
Revised:  The position of Z or X is described via its angular distance north or south of the equator , known as its Declination (corresponding to its latitude) , and the angle between its meridian and the Greenwich meridian (corresponding to its longitude).
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Original:  Finding the latitude is more difficult. It requires a measurement of the vertical angle (altitude) of X from the horizon using a sextant, the declination of X from a reference book, and a set of Sight Reduction Tables.
Revised:  Finding the latitude requires measuring the vertical angle (altitude) of X from the horizon using a sextant, the declination of X from a reference book, and a set of Sight Reduction Tables.
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