wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  The Sun, Moon, and Planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the Stars' declination remain the same as they are very far away but their hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
Revised:  The sun, moon, and planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the Stars' declination remain the same as they are very far away but their hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
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Original:  The Sun, Moon, and Planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the Stars' declination remain the same as they are very far away but their hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
Revised:  The Sun, Moon, and Planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the only the stars' hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
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Original:  The Sun, Moon, and Planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the Stars' declination remain the same as they are very far away but their hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
Revised:  The Sun, Moon, and Planets move relative to the celestial sphere, but the Stars' declination remain the same as they are very far away but their hour angles change with the rotation of the earth, completing a full 360 degrees every solar day. Altitudes and the PZX at opensacandaga.com CELESTIAL NAVIGATION at icys.co.uk
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Original: Postoperative fever is a common condition challenging doctors to find the right diagnosis, because it can be a hallmark of serious underlying conditions. One third of patients develop fever after surgery depending on type of surgery but only a small percentage turn out to be due to infection.
Revised: Postoperative fever refers to an elevated body temperature (≥ 38.5°C) occurring after a recent surgical procedure. As many as one-third of patients develop fever after surgery depending on type of surgery but only a small percentage turn out to be due to infection.
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Original:  One third of patients develop fever after surgery depending on type of surgery but only a small percentage turn out to be due to infection.
Revised:  One third of patients develop fever after surgery , depending on the type of procedure. Diagnosing the cause of postoperative fever can sometimes be challenging; while fever in this context may be benign, self-limited, or unrelated to the surgical procedure, it can also be indicative of a surgical complication, such as infection.
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Original:  Causes The most common causes of postoperative fever have been summarized for generations of medical students by a mnemonic beginning with the letter W. Classically, the list has consisted of five W's – Wind, Water, Wound, Walking, and Wonder Drugs, but two other causes should also be considered – Wing/Waterway and (W)abscess (courtesy of Elmer Fudd).
Revised:  Causes The most common causes of postoperative fever are often summarized for medical students by a mnemonic beginning with the letter W. Classically, the list has consisted of five W's – Wind, Water, Wound, Walking, and Wonder Drugs, but two other causes should also be considered – Wing/Waterway and (W)abscess (courtesy of Elmer Fudd).
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Original:  Causes The most common causes of postoperative fever have been summarized for generations of medical students by a mnemonic beginning with the letter W. Classically, the list has consisted of five W's – Wind, Water, Wound, Walking, and Wonder Drugs, but two other causes should also be considered – Wing/Waterway and (W)abscess (courtesy of Elmer Fudd).
Revised:  Causes The most common causes of postoperative fever have been summarized for generations of medical students by a mnemonic beginning with the letter W. The classic list consists of five W's – Wind, Water, Wound, Walking, and Wonder Drugs, but two other causes should also be considered – Wing/Waterway and (W)abscess (courtesy of Elmer Fudd).
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Original:  While at the same time ignoring advances such as Roe vs. Wade. Heteropatriarchy is attempting to regulate the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies eliminating currently held opinions held by billions.
Revised:  Heteropatriarchy is attempting to regulate the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies eliminating currently held opinions held by billions.
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Original:  Wade. Heteropatriarchy is attempting to regulate the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies eliminating currently held opinions held by billions.
Revised:  Wade. Heteropatriarchy has regulated the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies eliminating currently held opinions held by billions.
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Original:  Wade. Heteropatriarchy is attempting to regulate the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies eliminating currently held opinions held by billions. The theory states that the effects of heteropatriarchy have disproportionately affected minority groups, indigenous people, and the lgbtqia+ community.
Revised:  Wade. Heteropatriarchy is attempting to regulate the bodies of Indigenous women, queer, and trans people and sets out to destroy, control, and manipulate these difference into hierarchies . The effects of heteropatriarchy have disproportionately affected minority groups, indigenous people, and the lgbtqia+ community.
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Original:  The concept postulates that in heteropatriarchal societies, cisgender heterosexual men generally occupy the highest positions of power in society, causing women (including transgender women), non-binary people, transgender men, and other LGBTQ people to experience the bulk of social oppression in relation to gender and sexuality.
Revised:  The concept postulates that in heteropatriarchal societies, cisgender heterosexual men generally occupy the highest positions of power in society, causing women (including transgender women), non-binary people, transgender men, and other LGBT people to experience the bulk of social oppression in relation to gender and sexuality.
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Original: And I heard a voice saying: Let that soul be delivered into the hands of Tartaruchus, and he must be taken down into URL (accessed 12 April 2018) The Tartaruchi are also mentioned in Meqabyan (12:13) "...
Revised: And I heard a voice saying: Let that soul be delivered into the hands of Tartaruchus, and he must be taken down into URL (accessed 12 April 2018) The Tartaruchi are also mentioned in 2 Ethiopian Maccabees (12:13) "...
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Original: Jane Lampton "Jean" Clemens (July 26, 1880 – December 24, 1909) was the youngest of three daughters born to Samuel Langhorne Clemens (better known by his pen name Mark Twain) and his wife Olivia Langdon Clemens.
Revised: Jane Lampton "Jean" Clemens (July 26, 1880 – December 24, 1909) was the daughter of Samuel Langhorne Clemens (better known by his pen name Mark Twain) and his wife Olivia Langdon Clemens.
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Original: Jane Lampton "Jean" Clemens (July 26, 1880 – December 24, 1909) was the youngest of three daughters born to Samuel Langhorne Clemens (better known by his pen name Mark Twain) and his wife Olivia Langdon Clemens.
Revised: Jane Lampton "Jean" Clemens (July 26, 1880 – December 24, 1909) was the youngest of three daughters born to Samuel Langhorne Clemens (better known by his pen name Mark Twain) and Olivia Langdon Clemens.
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Original: Ward, Duncan, and Burns (2001), p. 221 Jean's mother tried to include her in family life despite her illness, but Olivia died in 1904 and it was left to Twain and Clara to manage her and the difficulties which her illness caused.
Revised: Ward, Duncan, and Burns (2001), p. 221 Jean's mother tried to include her in family life despite her illness, but Olivia died in 1904 and it was left to Twain and Jean's older sister, Clara, to help Jean to manage the difficulties which her illness caused.
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Original: Lystra (2004) Jean was sent to an epilepsy colony in Katonah, New York in the fall of 1906 and her father denied her requests to come home, fearing that he could not care for her.
Revised: Lystra (2004) Jean was sent to an epilepsy colony in Katonah, New York in the fall of 1906 and despite requesting to return home, Twain refused as he doubted his ability to care for her.
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Original: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, claiming that they were both guilty of embezzlement, and he permitted Jean to return home in April 1909.
Revised: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, stating that they were both guilty of embezzlement, and he permitted Jean to return home in April 1909.
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Original: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, claiming that they were both guilty of embezzlement, and he permitted Jean to return home in April 1909.
Revised: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, claiming that they were guilty of embezzlement, and he permitted Jean to return home in April 1909.
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Original: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, claiming that they were both guilty of embezzlement, and he permitted Jean to return home in April 1909.
Revised: Ward, Duncan and Burns (2001), p. 230 Twain fired Lyon and her new husband in 1909, claiming that they were both guilty of embezzlement, and Jean was able to return home in April 1909.
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Original: Character and early life Jean Clemens was born in Hartford, Connecticut , the youngest of four children born to author and humorist Mark Twain and Olivia Langdon Clemens  .
Revised: Character and early life Jean Clemens was born in Elmira, New York , the youngest of four children born to author and humorist Mark Twain and Olivia Langdon Clemens .
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Original: Character and early life Jean Clemens was born in Hartford, Connecticut , the youngest of four children born to author and humorist Mark Twain and Olivia Langdon Clemens  .
Revised: Character and early life Jean Clemens was born in Hartford, Connecticut , the youngest of four children born to author and humorist Mark Twain and Olivia Langdon Clemens . Twain wrote from Elmira to his friend, William Dean Howells, reporting she "arrived perfectly sound but with no more baggage than I had when I was on the river," referring to his Life On The Mississippi .
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Original: Definition Three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime – if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it – according to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel .
Revised: Definition According to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel, three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime – if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it – according to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel .
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Original: Definition Three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime – if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it – according to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel .
Revised: Definition Three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime : if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it – according to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel .
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Original: Definition Three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime – if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it – according to the University of Chicago's vice scholar, Jim Leitzel .
Revised: Definition Three characteristics can be used to identify whether a crime is a victimless crime – if the act is excessive, is indicative of a distinct pattern of behavior, and its adverse effects impact only the person who has engaged in it .
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Original:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) , to create an indicy to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on General Practitioner services.
Revised:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) to create an indicy to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on General Practitioner services.
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Original:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) , to create an indicy to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on General Practitioner services.
Revised:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) , to create an index to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on General Practitioner services.
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Original:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) , to create an indicy to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on General Practitioner services.
Revised:  The score is an outcome of the need identified in the Acheson Committee Report (into General Practitioner (GP) services in the UK) , to create an indicy to identify 'underprivileged areas' where there were high numbers of patients and hence pressure on general practitioner services.
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Original:  This was then used to obtain statistical weights for a calculation of a composite index of underprilieged areas based on GPs' perceptions of workload and patient need  (Jarman, 1984)
Revised:  This was then used to obtain statistical weights for a calculation of a composite index of underprivileged areas based on GPs' perceptions of workload and patient need (Jarman, 1984)
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Original:  This was then used to obtain statistical weights for a calculation of a composite index of underprilieged areas based on GPs' perceptions of workload and patient need  (Jarman, 1984)
Revised:  This was then used to obtain statistical weights for a calculation of a composite index of underprilieged areas based on GPs' perceptions of workload and patient need . (Jarman, 1984)
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Original:   The Carstairs index is based on four Census variables: low social class, lack of car ownership, overcrowding and male unemployment and the overall index reflects the material deprivation of an area, in relation to the rest of Scotland.
Revised:  Elliott P, Cuzick J, English D, Stern R. Geographical and Environmental Epidemiology. Methods for Small-Area Studies. Oxford University Press. New York, 1997 The Carstairs index is based on four Census variables: low social class, lack of car ownership, overcrowding and male unemployment and the overall index reflects the material deprivation of an area, in relation to the rest of Scotland.
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Original:   The low social class component of the 1981 and 1991 Carstairs index was created using the Registrar General's Social Class (later Social Class for Occupation).
Revised:  Brown, D., Allik, M. , Dundas, R. and Leyland, A. H. (2014) Carstairs Scores for Scottish Postcode Sectors, Datazones and Output Areas from the 2011 Census. Technical Report. MRC/CSO Social and Public Health Sciences Unit, University of Glasgow, Glasgow. URL The low social class component of the 1981 and 1991 Carstairs index was created using the Registrar General's Social Class (later Social Class for Occupation).
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Original:   The definition of overcrowding was amended between 1981 and 1991, due to the inclusion of kitchens of at least 2 metres wide into the room count in the Census. 
Revised:  McLoone, P. (2004) Carstairs scores for Scottish Postcode sectors from the 2001 Census. MRC/CSO Social and Public Health Sciences Unit, University of Glasgow The definition of overcrowding was amended between 1981 and 1991, due to the inclusion of kitchens of at least 2 metres wide into the room count in the Census. 
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Original:   The definition of overcrowding was amended between 1981 and 1991, due to the inclusion of kitchens of at least 2 metres wide into the room count in the Census. 
Revised:  The definition of overcrowding was amended between 1981 and 1991, due to the inclusion of kitchens of at least 2 metres wide into the room count in the Census. McLoone, P. (1994) Carstairs Scores for Scottish Postcode Sectors from the 1991 Census. Public Health Research Unit, University of Glasgow URL
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Original:  The Indic ritual likewise involves the ritual copulation by the queen with the dead stallion , and if Hittite laws prohibited copulation with animals, they made an exception of horses or mules.
Revised:  The Indic ritual likewise involves the ritual copulation by the queen with the dead stallion . Further, if Hittite laws prohibited copulation with animals, they made an exception of horses or mules.
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Original:  He is well known for his participation in the TV reality show where the Silicon Valley-trained expert and CEO of a listed company lived a in crummy subdivided apartment in Shum Shui Po, Hong Kong, earning 50 HKD per day. This experience had significantly changed Huang's view towards life, motivating him to actively engaging in social entrepreneurship and helping the underprivileged groups via social innovations and information technology.
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Original:  In the following year, Huang was invited to join RTHK’s reality TV show “ Rich Mate Poor Mate Series” to experience the lives of the underprivileged, which became the turning point of his life.
Revised:  In the following year, Huang was invited to join RTHK’s reality TV show “ Mate Poor Mate Series” to experience the lives of the underprivileged, which became the turning point of his life.
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Original:  25.85 seconds world record set in Lyon, France (2007) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šterrnberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 14 meters long rope - 14.03 seconds world record set in Nové Město nad Metují, Czech Republic ( 2010) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 8 meters long rope - 4.87 seconds world record in Olomouc, Czech Republic (2009) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic
Revised:  25.85 seconds world record set in Lyon, France (2007) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šterrnberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 14 meters long rope - 13.13 seconds world record set in Nové Město nad Metují, Czech Republic ( 2010) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 8 meters long rope - 4.87 seconds world record in Olomouc, Czech Republic (2009) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic
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Original:  25.85 seconds world record set in Lyon, France (2007) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šterrnberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 14 meters long rope - 14.03 seconds world record set in Nové Město nad Metují, Czech Republic ( 2010) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 8 meters long rope - 4.87 seconds world record in Olomouc, Czech Republic (2009) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic
Revised:  25.85 seconds world record set in Lyon, France (2007) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šterrnberk, Czech Republic Rope climbing on 14 meters long rope - 14.03 seconds world record set in Nové Město nad Metují, Czech Republic ( 2021) by Martin Vacek from Sokol Libčice nad Vltavou, Czech URL Rope climbing on 8 meters long rope - 4.87 seconds world record in Olomouc, Czech Republic (2009) by Aleš Novák from Sokol Šternberk, Czech Republic
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Original:   CBC Radio hosts Category:First Nations journalists Category:Living people Category:First Nations poets Category:Canadian women poets Category:Canadian women journalists Category:  21st-century Canadian poets Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category: First Nations women writers Category: 21st-century First Nations writers Category:Year of birth missing (living people ) Category:Canadian women non-fiction writers Category:Women radio presenters Category:Writers from Winnipe
Revised:  Canadian women non-fiction writers Category: CBC Radio hosts Category:First Nations journalists Category:Living people Category:First Nations poets Category:Canadian women poets Category:Canadian women journalists Category: 21st-century Canadian poets Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category: First Nations women writers Category: 21st-century First Nations writers Category:Year of birth missing (living people ) Category:Canadian women non-fiction writers Category:Women radio presenters Category:Writers from Winnipe
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Original:   CBC Radio hosts Category:First Nations journalists Category:Living people Category:First Nations poets Category:Canadian women poets Category:Canadian women journalists Category:  21st-century Canadian poets Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category: First Nations women writers Category: 21st-century First Nations writers Category:Year of birth missing (living people ) Category:Canadian women non-fiction writers Category:Women radio presenters Category:Writers from Winnipe
Revised:  CBC Radio hosts Category:First Nations journalists Category:Living people Category:First Nations poets Category:Canadian women poets Category:Canadian women journalists Category: First Nations women writers Category:People from Northern Region, Manitoba Category:Women radio presenters Category:Writers from Manitoba Category: 21st-century Canadian poets Category:21st-century Canadian women writers Category: First Nations women writers Category: 21st-century First Nations writers Category:Year of birth missing (living people ) Category:Canadian women non-fiction writers Category:Women radio presenters Category:Writers from Winnipe
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