wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if you are not within the bounds of the private property and can't be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst you are on the private property.
Revised: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if the photographer is not within the bounds of the private property and can't be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst you are on the private property.
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Original: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if you are not within the bounds of the private property and can't be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst you are on the private property.
Revised: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if you are not within the bounds of the private property and cannot be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst you are on the private property.
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Original: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if you are not within the bounds of the private property and can't be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst you are on the private property.
Revised: Private property While you can generally photograph private property and the people within it if you are not within the bounds of the private property and can't be asked to stop or delete the images, the owner can restrict recording whilst the photographer is on the private property.
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Original:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and you many be asked to leave , if you refuse to leave you may be liable for trespassing.
Revised:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and the photographer may be asked to leave , if you refuse to leave you may be liable for trespassing.
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Original:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and you many be asked to leave , if you refuse to leave you may be liable for trespassing.
Revised:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and you many be asked to leave ; if they refuse to leave you may be liable for trespassing.
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Original:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and you many be asked to leave , if you refuse to leave you may be liable for trespassing.
Revised:  Failure to comply with orders to stop recording on the private property is not a criminal offence although it may be against the terms or policy of entrance and you many be asked to leave , if you refuse to leave , they may be liable for trespassing.
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Original:  250px|Witches around the caldron 300px|Akelarre(1798) , by Francisco Goya . Akelarre, by Francisco Goya The most common etymology proposed is that meaning meadow (larre) of the male goat (aker "buck, billy goat").
Revised:  250px|Witches around the caldron 300px|Akelarre(1798) , by Francisco Goya The most common etymology proposed is that meaning meadow (larre) of the male goat (aker "buck, billy goat").
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Original:  Unlike traditional learning, where learning a subject in depth was necessary to draw enough pertinent knowledge to solve new problems or answer questions, information grazing assumes some subjects are so large, fast-changing, interdependent, or esoteric, that traditional methods of learning may be unable to solve new problems or answer questions as efficiently. Information grazing is also one of the most commonly used coping techniques for stress and experts have noticed a trend with people many under the age of 35.
Revised:  Experts have noticed this trend most commonly with many people under the age of 35.
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Original:  The change from a traditional in-depth learning and memorizing of facts to a mentality of quickly finding, using, and then forgetting knowledge, stems from the technological singularity concept that information is growing so fast (see information explosion or information overload) that an individual can no longer hope to be a "renaissance man" or effectively keep up with some fields of knowledge. Examples of fields of knowledge that are more susceptible to information grazing techniques are science and engineering, where the “newest” knowledge has become so dynamic, that documentation and dissemination has increasingly moved from fixed paper media to digital formats allowing easier updating and searchability. With the advent of the Internet and modern computer-cataloging of libraries, vast sums of knowledge are easily accessible in overwhelming quantities in real time. And, with expected future advances in search engine technology and library services, the trend of information overload is expected to worsen; information grazing techniques will become more prevalent to deal with the overload.
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Original:  Disadvantages of information grazing come from its advantages. Switching from a "fixed" source of information that is constant, verifiable, and worth memorizing to "fluid" sources that are always in flux can lead to quick solutions that are unverified or worse, incorrect. Studies have shown that many people don't read past the first sentences of a Web site's content, and many never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search .
Revised:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information, but often never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search .
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Original:  Studies have shown that many people don't read past the first sentences of a Web site's content, and many never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search . As information becomes more like an instantaneous consumable item, memorization is less fact-based but more procedural (i.e. how to find it). Similar concepts are found in Japanese education where after intense study of many unconnected facts, most of the information is forgotten or if remembered, not connected to other relevant facts. In the US, this is similar to cramming an exam. Information grazing may have the same effect but greater, since it is done over the period of years .
Revised:  Studies have shown that many people don't read past the first sentences of a Web site's content, and many never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search .
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Original:  Experts have noticed this trend most commonly with many people under the age of 35.
Revised:  Unlike traditional learning, where learning a subject in depth was necessary to draw enough pertinent knowledge to solve new problems or answer questions, information grazing assumes some subjects are so large, fast-changing, interdependent, or esoteric, that traditional methods of learning may be unable to solve new problems or answer questions as efficiently. Information grazing is also one of the most commonly used coping techniques for stress and experts have noticed a trend with people many under the age of 35.
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Original:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information , but often  never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search  .
Revised:  The change from a traditional in-depth learning and memorizing of facts to a mentality of quickly finding, using, and then forgetting knowledge, stems from the technological singularity concept that information is growing so fast (see information explosion or information overload) that an individual can no longer hope to be a "renaissance man" or effectively keep up with some fields of knowledge. Examples of fields of knowledge that are more susceptible to information grazing techniques are science and engineering, where the “newest” knowledge has become so dynamic, that documentation and dissemination has increasingly moved from fixed paper media to digital formats allowing easier updating and searchability. With the advent of the Internet and modern computer-cataloging of libraries, vast sums of knowledge are easily accessible in overwhelming quantities in real time. And, with expected future advances in search engine technology and library services, the trend of information overload is expected to worsen; information grazing techniques will become more prevalent to deal with the overload. never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search .
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Original:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information , but often  never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search  .
Revised:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information , but often Disadvantages of information grazing come from its advantages. Switching from a "fixed" source of information that is constant, verifiable, and worth memorizing to "fluid" sources that are always in flux can lead to quick solutions that are unverified or worse, incorrect. Studies have shown that many people don't read past the first sentences of a Web site's content, and many never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search .
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Original:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information , but often  never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search  .
Revised:  People of today are switching around between websites to look for information , but often never go beyond the first ten links listed in a search . As information becomes more like an instantaneous consumable item, memorization is less fact-based but more procedural (i.e. how to find it). Similar concepts are found in Japanese education where after intense study of many unconnected facts, most of the information is forgotten or if remembered, not connected to other relevant facts. In the US, this is similar to cramming an exam. Information grazing may have the same effect but greater, since it is done over the period of years .
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Original:  A familiar example is stand-up comic and comedy films "telegraphing" the punch line of a joke, Hollywood Gold: Films of the Forties and Fifties by John Howard Reid , i.e. making its outcome obvious before it happens.
Revised:  A familiar example is stand-up comic and comedy films "telegraphing" the punch line of a joke, , i.e. making its outcome obvious before it happens.
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Original:  Information used too often to telegraph information about characters can be overused and become clichés, such as a dumb police officer eating doughnuts, an absent-minded professor, or a beautiful librarian concealed by unnatracive personal grooming.
Revised:  Information used too often to telegraph information about characters can be overused and become clichés, such as a dumb police officer eating doughnuts, an absent-minded professor, or a beautiful librarian concealed by unattractive personal grooming.
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Original:  Capsuto, p. 43 Lesbians were explicitly excluded from the proposal for the country's first documentary broadcast on homosexuality, 1961's The Rejected, and from the first network documentary on homosexuality, "The Homosexuals", a 1967 instalment of CBS Reports.
Revised:  Lesbians were explicitly excluded from the proposal for the country's first documentary broadcast on homosexuality, 1961's The Rejected, and from the first network documentary on homosexuality, "The Homosexuals", a 1967 instalment of CBS Reports.
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Original:  On scripted television, the earliest lesbian characters were "coded", like the villainous Miss Brant on The Asphalt Jungle (1961), a repressed lesbian who shoots girls on lovers' lane for making themselves available to boys, Tropiano, p. 57 or neurotics like Hallie Lambert from a 1963 episode of The Eleventh Hour.
Revised:  On scripted television, the earliest lesbian characters were "coded", like the villainous Miss Brant on The Asphalt Jungle (1961), a repressed lesbian who shoots girls on lovers' lane for making themselves available to boys, or neurotics like Hallie Lambert from a 1963 episode of The Eleventh Hour.
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Original:  In it a trio of lesbians (described by Lesbian Tide magazine as "The Butch, The Bitch and The Femme" Capsuto, p. 110 ) were robbing and murdering the elderly residents of the nursing home they ran.
Revised:  In it a trio of lesbians (described by Lesbian Tide magazine as "The Butch, The Bitch and The Femme" ) were robbing and murdering the elderly residents of the nursing home they ran.
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Original:  There are many notable examples of ads portraying hot lesbians in them (Canada Oil Sands, Gerson, J. (2016). ‘‘Hot lesbians’ ad bashing Saudi oil backfires on Canadian oilsands advocates.’ National Post Versace clothing, Skyy Blue Vodka, Pornstar clothing, Nikon camera, American Apparel clothing, Calvin Klein products, Miller Light beer, etc.).
Revised:  There are many notable examples of ads portraying hot lesbians in them (Canada Oil Sands, Versace clothing, Skyy Blue Vodka, Pornstar clothing, Nikon camera, American Apparel clothing, Calvin Klein products, Miller Light beer, etc.).
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Original:  Sender (1999) suggests that on the heterosexual side, "images which are arousing for lesbians, but which may not have originally been intended for [lesbians], may actually offer greater pleasure than those which are implicitly coded to suggest a lesbian reading" (p. 191) . If such is the case for "hot lesbian" advertisements, then there is nothing to say that actual lesbian advertisements might find heterosexuals left wanting something as well from them.
Revised:  Sender (1999) suggests that on the heterosexual side, "images which are arousing for lesbians, but which may not have originally been intended for [lesbians], may actually offer greater pleasure than those which are implicitly coded to suggest a lesbian reading" . If such is the case for "hot lesbian" advertisements, then there is nothing to say that actual lesbian advertisements might find heterosexuals left wanting something as well from them.
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Original:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom and its dependent territories  : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen"  .
Revised:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom , its dependent territories : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen" .
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Original:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom and its dependent territories  : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen"  .
Revised:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom and its dependent territories , and, upon its independence, within Grenada : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen" .
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Original:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom and its dependent territories  : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen"  .
Revised:  No mention of Ireland was made in any except in the title within the United Kingdom and its dependent territories : it was changed from "of Great Britain, Ireland and the British Dominions beyond the Seas Queen" to "of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Her other Realms and Territories Queen" ("Queen of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and of Grenada and Her other Realms and Territories") .
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Original:  However, one practical implication of explicitly declaring the state to be a republic in 1949 was that it automatically led to the state's termination of membership of the then British Commonwealth, in accordance with the rules in operation at the time (Until the London Declaration in 1949, only states with the British Monarch as their Head of state, generally represented by a Governor-general , could be members of the Commonwealth)
Revised:  However, one practical implication of explicitly declaring the state to be a republic in 1949 was that it automatically led to the state's termination of membership of the then British Commonwealth, in accordance with the rules in operation at the time (Until the London Declaration in 1949, only states with the British Monarch as their Head of state, represented by a Governor-general , could be members of the Commonwealth)
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Original:  However, one practical implication of explicitly declaring the state to be a republic in 1949 was that it automatically led to the state's termination of membership of the then British Commonwealth, in accordance with the rules in operation at the time (Until the London Declaration in 1949, only states with the British Monarch as their Head of state, generally represented by a Governor-general , could be members of the Commonwealth)
Revised:  However, one practical implication of explicitly declaring the state to be a republic in 1949 was that it automatically led to the state's termination of membership of the then British Commonwealth, in accordance with the rules in operation at the time (Until the London Declaration in 1949, only states with the British Monarch as their Head of state, generally represented by a Governor-General , could be members of the Commonwealth)
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Original:  However the constitutional amendment also provided, without mentioning the monarch specifically, for the state to be represented by him in external affairs with other countries and their representatives: The Constitution of Ireland, adopted in 1937, filled the gap left by the abolition of the governor-general by creating the post of a directly elected president.
Revised:  However the constitutional amendment also provided, without mentioning the monarch specifically, for the state to be represented by him in external affairs with other countries and their representatives: The Constitution of Ireland, adopted in 1937, filled the gap left by the abolition of the Governor-General by creating the post of a directly elected president.
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Original:  instead, his brother Ted competes with him and bids 30 guineas—an exorbitant amount for the poor farmer, winning the horse. The local drunkard, Ted is considered to be a coward, for refusing to have fought together with his brother in the earlier Boer War in South Africa.
Revised:  instead, his brother Ted competes with him and bids 30 guineas—an exorbitant amount that Arthur can't meet - and wins the foal. Ted is the local drunkard and thought to be a coward, for refusing to have fought together with his brother in the earlier Boer War in South Africa.
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Original:  The production was only scheduled to have a limited run, closing on 26 June 2011, but soon became open-ended after strong critical reception and ticket sales." 'War Horse' To Gallop On Indefinitely at Lincoln Center" New York Times, 15 April 2011 The production received five Tony Awards at the 2011 ceremony, including Best Play.
Revised:  The production was scheduled to have a limited run, closing on 26 June 2011, but soon became open-ended after strong critical reception and ticket sales." 'War Horse' To Gallop On Indefinitely at Lincoln Center" New York Times, 15 April 2011 The production received five Tony Awards at the 2011 ceremony, including Best Play.
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Original:  US national tour (2012-2014) The show's first national tour of the United States previewed at the State University's Morrison Center in Boise, Idaho, before launching at the Ahmanson Theatre in Los Angeles, California, from 14 June 2012 on a run through 29 July.
Revised:  US national tour (2012-2014) The show's first national tour of the United States previewed at Idaho State University's Morrison Center in Boise, Idaho, before launching at the Ahmanson Theatre in Los Angeles, California, from 14 June 2012 on a run through 29 July.
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Original:  The tour played at the Theatre Royal, Plymouth (27 September to 12 October) , the Birmingham Hippodrome (17 October to 9 November) , the Lowry at Salford Quays (20 November - 18 January 2014) , at the Edinburgh Festival Theatre (22 January-15 February) , at the Southampton Mayflower (19 February-15 March) , the Dublin Bord Gáis Energy Theatre (26 March - 26 April) , at the Sunderland Empire Theatre (30 April - 17 May) , and finished in Cardiff at the Wales Millennium Centre (18 June - 19 July).
Revised:  The tour played at the Theatre Royal, Plymouth (27 September to 12 October) ; the Birmingham Hippodrome (17 October to 9 November) , the Lowry at Salford Quays (20 November - 18 January 2014) , at the Edinburgh Festival Theatre (22 January-15 February) , at the Southampton Mayflower (19 February-15 March) , the Dublin Bord Gáis Energy Theatre (26 March - 26 April) , at the Sunderland Empire Theatre (30 April - 17 May) , and finished in Cardiff at the Wales Millennium Centre (18 June - 19 July).
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Original:  The tour played at the Theatre Royal, Plymouth (27 September to 12 October) , the Birmingham Hippodrome (17 October to 9 November) , the Lowry at Salford Quays (20 November - 18 January 2014) , at the Edinburgh Festival Theatre (22 January-15 February) , at the Southampton Mayflower (19 February-15 March) , the Dublin Bord Gáis Energy Theatre (26 March - 26 April) , at the Sunderland Empire Theatre (30 April - 17 May) , and finished in Cardiff at the Wales Millennium Centre (18 June - 19 July).
Revised:  The tour played at the Theatre Royal, Plymouth (27 September to 12 October) , the Birmingham Hippodrome (17 October to 9 November) ; the Lowry at Salford Quays (20 November - 18 January 2014) , at the Edinburgh Festival Theatre (22 January-15 February) , at the Southampton Mayflower (19 February-15 March) , the Dublin Bord Gáis Energy Theatre (26 March - 26 April) , at the Sunderland Empire Theatre (30 April - 17 May) , and finished in Cardiff at the Wales Millennium Centre (18 June - 19 July).
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