wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  In a Writenet paper written for the UNHCR, Professor Colin Mackerras (using PRC censuses) expresses the view that claims such as that the Chinese are swamping Tibetans in their own country and that 1.2 million Tibetans have died due to Chinese occupation "should be treated with the deepest skepticism":People's Republic of China: Background paper on the situation of the Tibetan population, A Writenet Report by Professor Colin P. Mackerras, p. 19–20.
Revised:  In a Writenet paper written for the UNHCR, Professor Colin Mackerras (using PRC censuses) expresses the view that claims such as that the Chinese are swamping Tibetans in their own country and that 1.2 million Tibetans dying due to Chinese occupation "should be treated with the deepest skepticism":People's Republic of China: Background paper on the situation of the Tibetan population, A Writenet Report by Professor Colin P. Mackerras, p. 19–20.
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Original:  URL In 1951, Tibetan representatives in Beijing signed the Seventeen-point Agreement under duress , which affirmed China's sovereignty over Tibet while it simultaneously provided for an autonomous administration led by Tibet's spiritual leader, and then-political leader, the 14th Dalai Lama.
Revised:  URL In 1951, Tibetan representatives in Beijing signed the Seventeen-point Agreement , which affirmed China's sovereignty over Tibet while it simultaneously provided for an autonomous administration led by Tibet's spiritual leader, and then-political leader, the 14th Dalai Lama.
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Original:  During the 1959 Tibetan uprising, when Tibetans arose to prevent his possible assassination, the Dalai Lama escaped from Tibet to northern India where he established the Central Tibetan Administration, which rescinded the Seventeen-point Agreement .
Revised:  CIA was training Tibetans to be terrorists in Colorado. PLA decided to put a stop to this and went to Tibet. Dalai Lama left Tibet in a big hurry and abandon his CIA agent for the PLA .
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Original:  URL In 1951, Tibetan representatives in Beijing signed the Seventeen-point Agreement  , which affirmed China's sovereignty over Tibet while it simultaneously provided for an autonomous administration led by Tibet's spiritual leader, and then-political leader, the 14th Dalai Lama.
Revised:  URL In 1951, Tibetan representatives in Beijing signed the Seventeen-point Agreement under duress , which affirmed China's sovereignty over Tibet while it simultaneously provided for an autonomous administration led by Tibet's spiritual leader, and then-political leader, the 14th Dalai Lama.
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Original:  CIA was training Tibetans to be terrorists in Colorado. PLA decided to put a stop to this and went to Tibet. Dalai Lama left Tibet in a big hurry and abandon his CIA agent for the PLA .
Revised:  During the 1959 Tibetan uprising, when Tibetans arose to prevent his possible assassination, the Dalai Lama escaped from Tibet to northern India where he established the Central Tibetan Administration, which rescinded the Seventeen-point Agreement .
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Original: ERG theory is a theory in psychology proposed by Clayton Alderfer. thumb Alderfer further developed Maslow's hierarchy of needs by categorizing the hierarchy into his ERG theory (Existence, Relatedness and Growth).
Revised: ERG theory is a theory in psychology proposed by Clayton Alderfer. ERG theory. When needs in a category are satisfied, an individual will invest more efforts in the higher category. When needs in a category are frustrated, an individual will invest more efforts in the lower category. Alderfer further developed Maslow's hierarchy of needs by categorizing the hierarchy into his ERG theory (Existence, Relatedness and Growth).
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Original:  Alderfer categorized the lower order needs (Physiological and Safety) into the Existence category. He fit Maslow's interpersonal love and esteem needs into the Relatedness category.
Revised:  Alderfer categorized Maslow's physiological needs and Maslow's safety needs into the existence category, Maslow's interpersonal love and esteem needs into the Relatedness category.
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Original:  Alderfer also proposed a  regression theory to go along with the ERG theory . He said that when needs in a higher category are not met then individuals redouble the efforts invested in a lower category need .
Revised:  Alderfer also proposed a regression theory to go along with the ERG theory : he said that when needs in a higher category are not met then individuals redouble the efforts invested in a lower category need .
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Original:  Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
Revised:  Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, an individual will invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
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Original:  Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
Revised:  Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, an individual will invest more efforts in the lower category.
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Original: On Day Four the language of "ruling" is introduced: the heavenly bodies will "govern" day and night and mark seasons and years and days (a matter of crucial importance to the Priestly authors, as the three pilgrimage festivals were organised around the cycles of  the Sun and Moon  );
Revised: On Day Four the language of "ruling" is introduced: the heavenly bodies will "govern" day and night and mark seasons and years and days (a matter of crucial importance to the Priestly authors, as the three pilgrimage festivals were organised around the cycles of both the Sun and Moon );
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Original: On Day Four the language of "ruling" is introduced: the heavenly bodies will "govern" day and night and mark seasons and years and days (a matter of crucial importance to the Priestly authors, as the three pilgrimage festivals were organised around the cycles of  the Sun and Moon  );
Revised: On Day Four the language of "ruling" is introduced: the heavenly bodies will "govern" day and night and mark seasons and years and days (a matter of crucial importance to the Priestly authors, as the three pilgrimage festivals were organised around the cycles of the Sun and Moon , in a lunisolar calendar that could have either 12 or 13 months. );
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Original: The word bara is translated as "created" in English, but the concept it embodied was not the same as the modern term: in the world of the ancient Near East, the gods demonstrated their power over the world not by creating matter but by fixing destinies, so that the essence of the bara which God performs in Genesis concerns bringing "heaven and earth" (a set phrase meaning "everything") into existence by organising and assigning roles and functions.
Revised: The word bara is translated as "created" in English, but the concept it embodied was not the same as the modern term: in the world of the ancient Near East, the god over the world not by creating matter but by fixing destinies, so that the essence of the bara which God performs in Genesis concerns bringing "heaven and earth" (a set phrase meaning "everything") into existence by organising and assigning roles and functions.
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Original: The word bara is translated as "created" in English, but the concept it embodied was not the same as the modern term: in the world of the ancient Near East, the gods demonstrated their power over the world not by creating matter but by fixing destinies, so that the essence of the bara which God performs in Genesis concerns bringing "heaven and earth" (a set phrase meaning "everything") into existence by organising and assigning roles and functions.
Revised: The word bara is translated as "created" in English, but the concept it embodied was not the same as the modern term: in the world of the ancient Near East, the gods demonstrated their power over the world not by creating matter but by fixing destinies, so that the essence of the "heaven and earth" (a set phrase meaning "everything") into existence by organising and assigning roles and functions.
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Original:  The number seven, denoting divine completion, permeates Genesis 1: verse 1:1 consists of seven words, verse 1:2 of fourteen, and 2:1–3 has 35 words (5×7); Elohim is mentioned 35 times, "heaven/firmament" and "earth" 21 times each, and the phrases "and it was so" and "God saw that it was good" occur 7 times each.
Revised:  The number seven, denoting divine completion, permeates Genesis 1: verse 1:1 consists of seven words, verse 12, "heaven/firmament" and "earth" 21 times each, and the phrases "and it was so" and "God saw that it was good" occur 7 times each.
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Original: The origins of the    approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
Revised: D/deaf disabled people have equal rights in the UK according to the equality act. Disability is a protected characteristic along with gender identity, age, heritage, religion etc. approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
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Original: The origins of the    approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
Revised: The origins of the The term “impaired” is considered outdated in the present understanding of the social model of disability. There are more specific and individualised terms people might prefer to use now to describe differences, including “neurodiverse,” “low vision,” “hard of hearing” or “uses a wheelchair”. approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
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Original: The origins of the    approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
Revised: The origins of the Impairment is still used in legal contexts but essentially the word “impaired” is considered offensive, as it implies damage. Many people with disabilities do not see themselves as damaged, simply as different. The general consensus is the world is disabling, with inadequate accessibility and consideration for different needs, not the disability. approach can be traced to the 1960s, and the specific term emerged from the United Kingdom in the 1980s.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Impairment is still used in legal contexts but essentially the word “impaired” is considered offensive, as it implies damage. Many people with disabilities do not see themselves as damaged, simply as different. The general consensus is the world is disabling, with inadequate accessibility and consideration for different needs, not the disability.
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Original: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the  ocean.
Revised: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding is a a popular water sport. Participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the ocean.
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Original: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the  ocean.
Revised: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the a body of water, usually the ocean.
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to the Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778. In in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving he depicts a paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / Surfer Rider .
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving is depicted a Paddleboarder / surf rider .
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Original: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding is a a popular water sport . Participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the a body of water, usually the ocean.
Revised: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding is a water sport in which participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the a body of water, usually the ocean.
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Original: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding is a a popular water sport . Participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the a body of water, usually the ocean.
Revised: French sailor Violette D'Orange paddleboarding Paddleboarding is a a popular water sport . Participants are propelled by a swimming motion using their arms while lying or kneeling on a paddleboard or surfboard in the ocean.
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to the Sandwich Islands in 1778.
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to The Sandwich Islands in 1778.
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Original:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to the Sandwich Islands in 1778. In in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving he depicts a paddleboarder / surf rider .
Revised:  History Polynesia A view of Karakokooa, in Owyhee by John Webber Ships Artist, John Webber, accompanied Captain James Cook to the Sandwich Islands in 1778, and in the lower left foreground of his 1781 engraving he depicts a paddleboarder / surf rider .
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Original:  In addition to Japanese civil and military personnel, Koreans and Taiwanese who were forced to serve in the military of the Empire of Japan were also found to have committed war crimes as part of the Japanese Imperial Army.Harmsen, Peter, Jiji Press, "Taiwanese seeks payback for brutal service in Imperial Army", Japan Times, 26 September 2012, p. 4 Japanese war crimes were not always carried out by ethnic Japanese personnel.
Revised:  Japanese war crimes were not always carried out by ethnic Japanese personnel.
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Original:  A small minority of people in every Asian and Pacific country invaded or occupied by Japan collaborated with the Japanese military, or even served in it, for a wide variety of reasons, such as economic hardship, coercion, or antipathy to other imperialist powers. 
Revised:  A small minority of people in every Asian and Pacific country invaded or occupied by Japan collaborated with the Japanese military, or even served in it, for a wide variety of reasons, such as economic hardship, coercion, or antipathy to other imperialist powers. In addition to Japanese civil and military personnel, Chinese, Koreans, Manchus and Taiwanese who were forced to serve in the military of the Empire of Japan were also found to have committed war crimes as part of the Japanese Imperial Army.Harmsen, Peter, Jiji Press, "Taiwanese seeks payback for brutal service in Imperial Army", Japan Times, 26 September 2012, p. 4
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Original:  associate since 1323 20px Lucerne, city canton, since 1332 20px Uri, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) 22px| 20px Schwyz, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) 20px 20px Unterwalden, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) the old coat of arms of Unterwalden was identical with that of Solothurn; the new coat of arms was introduced in the 17th century.
Revised:  associate since 1323 20px Lucerne, city canton, since 1332 20px Uri, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) 22px| 20px Schwyz, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) 20px 20px Unterwalden, founding canton (Pact of Brunnen 1315) 
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Original:  In parts of the western United States, this type of competition is usually called an "O-Mok-See" (also spelled "omoksee" or without hyphenation as "o mok see") competition, a term derived from a Native American phrase said to mean "games on horseback . "  Very small events with little or no prize money, designed for beginners or riders at a local level, are sometimes called playdays.
Revised:  In parts of the western United States, this type of competition is usually called an "O-Mok-See" (also spelled "omoksee" or without hyphenation as "o mok see") competition, a term derived from a Native American phrase said to mean "games on horseback " Very small events with little or no prize money, designed for beginners or riders at a local level, are sometimes called playdays.
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Original:  In parts of the western United States, this type of competition is usually called an "O-Mok-See" (also spelled "omoksee" or without hyphenation as "o mok see") competition, a term derived from a Native American phrase said to mean "games on horseback . "  Very small events with little or no prize money, designed for beginners or riders at a local level, are sometimes called playdays.
Revised:  In parts of the western United States, this type of competition is usually called an "O-Mok-See" (also spelled "omoksee" or without hyphenation as "o mok see") competition, a term derived from a Native American phrase said to mean "games on horseback . " . Very small events with little or no prize money, designed for beginners or riders at a local level, are sometimes called playdays.
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Original: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ]  Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
Revised: Eye movement desensitization and reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ] Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
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Original: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ]  Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
Revised: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) is a form of psychotherapy developed by Francine Shapiro starting in 1988 in which the person being treated is asked to recall distressing images; the therapist then directs the patient in one type of bilateral stimulation, such as side-to-side eye rapid movement or hand tapping. According to the 2013 World Health Organization practice guideline: "This therapy ] Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
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Original: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ]  Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
Revised: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements EMDR] Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
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Original: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ]  Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
Revised: Eye Movement Desensitisation and Reprocessing (EMDR) Therapy is a comprehensive psychotherapy in which an experience/s that are perceived as being disturbing when recalled are processed to resolution using bilateral stimulationsuch as alternating eye movements ] is based on the idea that negative thoughts, feelings and behaviours are the result of unprocessed memories. The treatment involves standardized procedures that include focusing simultaneously on (a) spontaneous associations of traumatic images, thoughts, emotions and bodily sensations and (b) bilateral stimulation that is most commonly in the form of repeated eye movements." Francine Shapiro discovered EMDRbased on a chance observation that she made in 1987.
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