wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Universal design is generally more focused on a single solution that can be used by as many people as possible, whereas inclusive design involves designing for a specific individual or use case, and extending this to others, as described in the Steps to inclusive design . Universal design is mostly used in the built environment and product design to make sure that the building or product is accessible for all people of different abilities.
Revised:  Universal design is generally more focused on a single solution that can be used by as many people as possible, whereas inclusive design involves designing for a specific individual or use case, and extending this to others, as described in the Steps to inclusive design . built environment and product design to make sure that the building or product is accessible for all people of different abilities.
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Original:  Universal design is generally more focused on a single solution that can be used by as many people as possible, whereas inclusive design involves designing for a specific individual or use case, and extending this to others, as described in the Steps to inclusive design . Universal design is mostly used in the built environment and product design to make sure that the building or product is accessible for all people of different abilities. Inclusive designcan be applied to any product or service and intentionally does not group people together. Instead, inclusive design considers the full range of human diversity with respect to ability, language, culture, gender, age, and other forms of human difference and how to serve the diverse individuals that will be using the product or service.
Revised:  Universal design is generally more focused on a single solution that can be used by as many people as possible, whereas inclusive design involves designing for a specific individual or use case, and extending this to others, as described in the Steps to inclusive design . Universal design is mostly used in the built environment and websites, while inclusive design arose in work on product design considers the full range of human diversity with respect to ability, language, culture, gender, age, and other forms of human difference and how to serve the diverse individuals that will be using the product or service.
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Original:  Instead, inclusive design considers the full range of human diversity with respect to ability, language, culture, gender, age, and other forms of human difference and how to serve the diverse individuals that will be using the product or service.
Revised:  Instead, inclusive design . The approaches are similar in practice, but inclusive design has a more explicit acknowledgement that it is not always possible for one product to meet the needs of absolutely everyone. It encourages designers to make informed decisions about what is commercially and practically feasible based on the characteristics of the target population.
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Original:  Inclusive design describes a process of welcoming all peoplefrom different and intersectional backgrounds to use your products and services in ways that are meaningful to them, while including diverse individuals throughout the research and design process .
Revised:  Inclusive design takes a wider approach. It considers the needs of a wider range of people, including those with minor capability impairments that may not generally be considered to be disabilities. An example is age-related long-sightedness. Inclusive design may also consider other dimensions of human difference such as culture and gender. Inclusive design also looks beyond issues of access to improving the user experience more generally .
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Original: Inclusive design is a design process (not restricted to interfaces or technologies) in which a mainstream product, service or environment is designed to be usable by as many people as reasonably possible  without the need for specialised design .
Revised: Inclusive design is a design process (not restricted to interfaces or technologies) in which a mainstream product, service or environment is designed to be usable by as many people as reasonably possible , without the need for specialised design .
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Original: Inclusive design is a design process (not restricted to interfaces or technologies) in which a mainstream product, service or environment is designed to be usable by as many people as reasonably possible  without the need for specialised design .
Revised: Inclusive design is a design process (not restricted to interfaces or technologies) in which a mainstream product, service or environment is designed to be usable by as many people as reasonably possible without the need for specialised adaptions .
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Original: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River  may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
Revised: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
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Original: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River  may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
Revised: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
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Original: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River  may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
Revised: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon and the Genesee River may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
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Original: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River  may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
Revised: Water gaps of necessity often cut entirely through a barrier range and Riverine gaps may create canyonscanyons such as the riverine gaps of the Danube River, Lehigh River Gorge, the Colorado River's Grand Canyon , the Genesee River . Such cuttings may expose millennia of strata in the local rock column writing the geologic record.
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Original:  adjective forms: low-technology, low-tech, lo-tech) is simple technology, opposed to high technology. They often refer to a traditional or non-mechanical kind, such as crafts and tools that pre-date the Industrial Revolution .
Revised:  adjective forms: low-technology, low-tech, lo-tech) are a set of technologies and logics aiming at energy and material sobriety, strong sustainability and collective resilience. The approach opposes the obsession with high-tech and encourages techno-discernment.This is not a technophobic but a technocritical approach, which raises the question of the right technological mix. We speak above all of a low-tech approach since it is difficult to assess whether a product or a service is really low-tech or not (example: the bicycle seems low-tech but its manufacture requires high -tech), the objective being to set the optimum technological level (lowest technological level to ensure essential functionalities) .
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Original:  Low technology can simply be practiced or fabricated witha minimum of capital investment by an individual or small group of individuals. Also, the knowledge of the practice can be completely comprehended by a single individual, free from increasing specialization and compartmentalization. In some definition, low-tech techniques and designs may fall into disuse due to changing socio-economic conditions or priorities.
Revised:  Finally, it should be remembered that low-techs are much more than technical solutions that have emerged from the past or have been tinkered with, they carry organizational, systemic, cultural, even political and philosophical dimensions. This is in line with the words of Arthur Keller, for whom the low-tech techniques and designs may fall into disuse due to changing socio-economic conditions or priorities.
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Original:  In some definition, low-tech techniques and designs may fall into disuse due to changing socio-economic conditions or priorities. Overall, these technologies are easily fabricable, adaptable and reparable, and use little energy and resources (that all come from local sources) to stay on the whole eco-friendly .
Revised:  In some definition, low-tech approach is an approach, a method, a vision, a philosophy. Almost a culture, going well beyond the strict technological question. An overall approach that allows us to get back into compliance with planetary limits, that is to say not to consume more energy, materials and resources than what the Earth can sustainably provide. In the French case, it would be a question of making France the first Low-tech Nation, champion of repair, reuse and zero-waste .
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Original:  adjective forms: low-technology, low-tech, lo-tech) are a set of technologies and logics aiming at energy and material sobriety, strong sustainability and collective resilience. The approach opposes the obsession with high-tech and encourages techno-discernment.This is not a technophobic but a technocritical approach, which raises the question of the right technological mix. We speak above all of a low-tech approach since it is difficult to assess whether a product or a service is really low-tech or not (example: the bicycle seems low-tech but its manufacture requires high -tech), the objective being to set the optimum technological level (lowest technological level to ensure essential functionalities) .
Revised:  adjective forms: low-technology, low-tech, lo-tech) is simple technology, opposed to high technology. They often refer to a traditional or non-mechanical kind, such as crafts and tools that pre-date the Industrial Revolution .
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Original:  Finally, it should be remembered that low-techs are much more than technical solutions that have emerged from the past or have been tinkered with , they carry organizational, systemic, cultural, even political and philosophical dimensions. This is in line with the words of Arthur Keller, for whom the low-tech approach is an approach, a method, a vision, a philosophy.
Revised:  Low technology can simply be practiced or fabricated with a minimum of capital investment by an individual or small group of individuals. Also, the knowledge of the practice can be completely comprehended by a single individual, free from increasing specialization and compartmentalization. In some definition, low-tech approach is an approach, a method, a vision, a philosophy.
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Original:  This is in line with the words of Arthur Keller, for whom the low-tech approach is an approach, a method, a vision, a philosophy. Almost a culture, going well beyond the strict technological question. An overall approach that allows us to get back into compliance with planetary limits, that is to say not to consume more energy, materials and resources than what the Earth can sustainably provide .
Revised:  This is in line with the words of Arthur Keller, for whom the low-tech techniques and designs may fall into disuse due to changing socio-economic conditions or priorities. Overall, these technologies are easily fabricable, adaptable and reparable, and use little energy and resources (that all come from local sources) to stay on the whole eco-friendly .
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Original: History Dry cleaning is said to have originated with French dye-works operator Jean Baptiste Jolly who used kerosene and gasoline to clean fabrics.
Revised: History Dry cleaning originated with American tailor, inventor and entrepreneur Thomas Jennings, who became the first Black patent-holder for his invention in 1821. Jennings referred to his method as “dry scouring”. French dye-works operator Jean Baptiste Jolly who used kerosene and gasoline to clean fabrics.
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Original: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, but it is important to realize that infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS therefore the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern  .
Revised: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, however, infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS therefore the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern .
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Original: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, but it is important to realize that infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS therefore the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern  .
Revised: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, but it is important to realize that infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS . Therefore, the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern .
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Original: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, but it is important to realize that infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS therefore the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern  .
Revised: SDG 9, of the international sustainable development goals set by the United Nations General Assembly, deals with infrastructure, but it is important to realize that infrastructure is a building block for the rest of the SDGS therefore the achievement of sustainable infrastructure is of significant concern in multiple areas of society .
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Original:  First-world and developed countries, such as  China, often seek to grow exponentially in economic productivity and consumerism, but this exponential growth must be matched with an exponential drop in resource consumption that may be achieved through an integrated system approach.
Revised:  First-world and developed countries, such as some parts of China, often seek to grow exponentially in economic productivity and consumerism, but this exponential growth must be matched with an exponential drop in resource consumption that may be achieved through an integrated system approach.
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Original:  By treating sustainability as a function of interconnected systems (e.g. transportation, land development, community formation, etc.), the impact of any change in one system can be amplified  .
Revised:  By treating sustainability as a function of interconnected systems (e.g. transportation, land development, community formation, etc.), the impact of any change in one system can be amplified without causing a sector of infrastructure to singularly fail .
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Original:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing  and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
Revised:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use public transportation built space open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
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Original:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing  and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
Revised:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
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Original:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing  and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
Revised:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sun The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
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Original:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing  and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
Revised:  Public surveys conducted in Jakarta emphasized the following priorities: land use mass transit buildings open space network infrastructure and waste energy system hydrology air and sunshine The Swiss Global Infrastructure Basel Foundation (GIB) supports various stakeholders, such as governments, banks, and cities, in designing, implementing , and financing sustainable urban infrastructure projects at all stages of the project cycle.
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Original:  Existing public funding sources are inadequate to meet the need . Self-healing technology could protect surrounding paving and foundations from damage when items of infrastructure are impacted, which can reduce maintenance and improve the sustainability of urban developments.
Revised:  Existing public funding sources are inadequate to meet these needs . Self-healing technology could protect surrounding paving and foundations from damage when items of infrastructure are impacted, which can reduce maintenance and improve the sustainability of urban developments.
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Original: Minor salts (micronutrients) per litre Boric acid (H3BO3) 6. 2 mg/l Cobalt chloride (CoCl2 · 6H2O) 0.025 mg/l Ferrous sulfate (FeSO4 · 7H2O) 27.8 mg/l Manganese(II) sulfate (MnSO4 · 4H2O) 22.3 mg/l Potassium iodide (KI) 0.83 mg/l Sodium molybdate (Na2MoO4 · 2H2O) 0.25 mg/l Zinc sulfate (ZnSO4·7H2O) 8.6 mg/l Ethylenediaminetetraacetic acid ferric sodium ( NaFe-EDTA) constituting 5 ml /l of a stock solution containing 5.57 g FeSO4.7H2O and 7.45 g Na2-EDTA per litre of water.
Revised: Minor salts (micronutrients) per litre Boric acid (H3BO3) 6. 2 mg/l Cobalt chloride (CoCl2 · 6H2O) 0.025 mg/l Ferrous sulfate (FeSO4 · 7H2O) 27.8 mg/l Manganese(II) sulfate (MnSO4 · 4H2O) 22.3 mg/l Potassium iodide (KI) 0.83 mg/l Sodium molybdate (Na2MoO4 · 2H2O) 0.25 mg/l Zinc sulfate (ZnSO4·7H2O) 8.6 mg/l Ethylenediaminetetraacetic acid ferric sodium ( FeNaEDTA) 36.70 mg /l of a stock solution containing 5.57 g FeSO4.7H2O and 7.45 g Na2-EDTA per litre of water.
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Original: Minor salts (micronutrients) per litre Boric acid (H3BO3) 6. 2 mg/l Cobalt chloride (CoCl2 · 6H2O) 0.025 mg/l Ferrous sulfate (FeSO4 · 7H2O) 27.8 mg/l Manganese(II) sulfate (MnSO4 · 4H2O) 22.3 mg/l Potassium iodide (KI) 0.83 mg/l Sodium molybdate (Na2MoO4 · 2H2O) 0.25 mg/l Zinc sulfate (ZnSO4·7H2O) 8.6 mg/l Ethylenediaminetetraacetic acid ferric sodium ( NaFe-EDTA) constituting 5 ml /l of a stock solution containing 5.57 g FeSO4.7H2O and 7.45 g Na2-EDTA per litre of water.
Revised: Minor salts (micronutrients) per litre Boric acid (H3BO3) 6. 2 mg/l Cobalt chloride (CoCl2 · 6H2O) 0.025 mg/l Ferrous sulfate (FeSO4 · 7H2O) 27.8 mg/l Manganese(II) sulfate (MnSO4 · 4H2O) 22.3 mg/l Potassium iodide (KI) 0.83 mg/l Sodium molybdate (Na2MoO4 · 2H2O) 0.25 mg/l Zinc sulfate (ZnSO4·7H2O) 8.6 mg/l Ethylenediaminetetraacetic acid ferric sodium ( NaFe-EDTA) constituting 5 ml /l 
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Original:  Copper sulfate (CuSO4 · 5H2O) 0.025 mg/l Vitamins and organic compounds per litre Myo-Inositol 100 mg/l Nicotinic Acid 0.5 mg/l Pyridoxine · HCl 0.5 mg/l Thiamine · HCl 1.0 mg/l Glycine 2 mg/l Tryptone 1 g/l (optional) Indole Acetic Acid 1-30 mg/l (optional) Kinetin 0.04-10 mg/l (optional)
Revised:  Copper sulfate (CuSO4 · 5H2O) 0.025 mg/l Vitamins and organic compounds per litre Myo-Inositol 100 mg/l Nicotinic Acid 0.5 mg/l Pyridoxine · HCl 0.5 mg/l Thiamine · HCl 0.1 mg/l Glycine 2 mg/l Tryptone 1 g/l (optional) Indole Acetic Acid 1-30 mg/l (optional) Kinetin 0.04-10 mg/l (optional)
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Original:  It is a popular notion, which may have contributed to the tathagatagarbha doctrine, although the notion of an eternal Buddha is not explicitly stated in the Lotus Sutra .
Revised:  In the sixteenth chapter of the Lotus Sutra, Shakyamuni Buddha reveals that he actually attained Buddhahood in the inconceivably remote past. The Eternal Buddha is contrasted to Shakyamuni Buddha who attained enlightenment for the first time in India, which was taught in the pre-Lotus Sutra teachings .
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Original: Exercise and lactate During power exercises such as sprinting, when the rate of demand for energy is high, glucose is broken down and oxidized to pyruvate , and lactate is then produced from the pyruvate faster than the body can process it, causing lactate concentrations to rise.
Revised: Exercise and lactate During power exercises such as sprinting, when the rate of demand for energy is high, glucose is broken down and oxidized to pyruvate . Lactate is then produced from the pyruvate faster than the body can process it, causing lactate concentrations to rise.
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