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Original: thumbnail|Aerial of Motif #1. Rockport, Ma|300x300px 300px| " Motif Number 1 " Motif Number 1, located on Bradley Wharf in the harbor town of Rockport, Massachusetts, is a replica of a former fishing shack well known to students of art and art history as "the most often-painted building in America.
Revised: thumbnail|Aerial of Motif #1. Rockport, Ma|300x300px 300px| Motif Number 1 " Motif Number 1, located on Bradley Wharf in the harbor town of Rockport, Massachusetts, is a replica of a former fishing shack well known to students of art and art history as "the most often-painted building in America.
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Original: thumbnail|Aerial of Motif #1. Rockport, Ma|300x300px 300px| " Motif Number 1 " Motif Number 1, located on Bradley Wharf in the harbor town of Rockport, Massachusetts, is a replica of a former fishing shack well known to students of art and art history as "the most often-painted building in America.
Revised: thumbnail|Aerial of Motif #1. Rockport, Ma|300x300px 300px| " Motif Number 1 in July 2009 Motif Number 1, located on Bradley Wharf in the harbor town of Rockport, Massachusetts, is a replica of a former fishing shack well known to students of art and art history as "the most often-painted building in America.
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Original: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from   yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
Revised: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a summer highland pasture " (from yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
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Original: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from   yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
Revised: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture associated with transhumance pastoralism in several Central and Western Asian communities. There are different variants of yaylak pastoralism forms of alpine transhumance, some of which are similar to seminomadic pastoralism, although most are similar to herdsman husbandry (such as in mountainous areas of Europe and the Caucasus). However, in the Eurasian steppes, the Middle East and North Africa, yaylak pastoralism often coexists with seminomadic pastoralism and pastoral nomadism.Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, The University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 24 The term had been commonly used in Soviet anthropology. yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
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Original: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from   yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
Revised: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from The converse term is gishlag, a winter pasture. The word gave rise to the term kishlak for rural settlements in Central Asia. yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
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Original: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from   yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
Revised: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from Etymology and terminology Yaylak is a portmanteau which derived from Turkic roots yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
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Original: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from   yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix ) .
Revised: A modern yayla at Song Kol Lake, Kyrgyzstan Yaylak () is a Turkic term meaning " summer highland pasture " (from yay "summer" and -lagh or -lağ, a deverbal plus denominal suffix .
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Original:    Anatoly Khazanov, an anthropologist and historian studying mobile pastoralism, notes: "The specific significance of pastoralism is usually at its most apparent in the specialized mountain variant of herdsman husbandry;
Revised:  The first recorded use of the word in a written source can be traced back to 9th century Old Turkic work Irk Bitig. Anatoly Khazanov, an anthropologist and historian studying mobile pastoralism, notes: "The specific significance of pastoralism is usually at its most apparent in the specialized mountain variant of herdsman husbandry;
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Original:    Anatoly Khazanov, an anthropologist and historian studying mobile pastoralism, notes: "The specific significance of pastoralism is usually at its most apparent in the specialized mountain variant of herdsman husbandry;
Revised:  Definitions Anatoly Khazanov, an anthropologist and historian studying mobile pastoralism, notes: "The specific significance of pastoralism is usually at its most apparent in the specialized mountain variant of herdsman husbandry;
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Original:  Uralic and Altaic Series, Vol. 26, Indiana University, Bloomington, Indiana, 1966, p. 409 There are different variants of yaylak pastoralism forms of alpine transhumance, some of which are similar to seminomadic pastoralism, although most are similar to herdsman husbandry (such as in mountainous areas of Europe and the Caucasus). However, in the Eurasian steppes, the Middle East and North Africa, yaylak pastoralism often coexists with seminomadic pastoralism and pastoral nomadism.Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, The University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 24 In the description of another Western specialist on nomads and pastoralism, Khazanov's classification system is the most modern approach, "classifying nomadic forms according to a society’s extent of migratory mobility, the primacy of specific animals in producing their subsistence products, and the level of symbiosis between nomadic and settled agricultural societies.
Revised:  Uralic and Altaic Series, Vol. 26, Indiana University, Bloomington, Indiana, 1966, p. 409 In the description of another Western specialist on nomads and pastoralism, Khazanov's classification system is the most modern approach, "classifying nomadic forms according to a society’s extent of migratory mobility, the primacy of specific animals in producing their subsistence products, and the level of symbiosis between nomadic and settled agricultural societies.
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Original:  Dissertation in Anthropology, University of Pennsylvania, 2004   Yaylak pastoralism enables people occupied with agriculture in specific ecological zones to use other areas as seasonal pastures when they are at their most productive.
Revised:  Dissertation in Anthropology, University of Pennsylvania, 2004 History A number of scholars have suggested that yaylak pastoralism has ancient roots in Neolithic Western Asia, alleging that already in the seventh millennium B.C. the pastoralism of the inhabitants of the Zagros Mountains had taken on a yaylak form, and that besides their permanent settlements these people also had seasonal camps in the mountains. Flannery, 1965: 1254-5, Narr, 1959: 85, Masson 1976: 39. Although, "recent research has demonstrated, however, that yaylak pastoralism in the Zagros Mountains can be dated no earlier than the second half of the fourth millennium B.C. (Mortensen, 1975: 23f., 32-3). However, as yet there is insufficient data for this question to be finally resolved."Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, The University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 97 Yaylak pastoralism enables people occupied with agriculture in specific ecological zones to use other areas as seasonal pastures when they are at their most productive.
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Original:  Dissertation in Anthropology, University of Pennsylvania, 2004   Yaylak pastoralism enables people occupied with agriculture in specific ecological zones to use other areas as seasonal pastures when they are at their most productive.
Revised:  Dissertation in Anthropology, University of Pennsylvania, 2004 Importance on pastoral communities Yaylak pastoralism enables people occupied with agriculture in specific ecological zones to use other areas as seasonal pastures when they are at their most productive.
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Original:  D. Van Nostrand Company: New Jersey, 1966, p. 85 A number of scholars have suggested that yaylak pastoralism has ancient roots in Neolithic Western Asia, alleging that already in the seventh millennium B.C. the pastoralism of the inhabitants of the Zagros Mountains had taken on a yaylak form, and that besides their permanent settlements these people also had seasonal camps in the mountains. Flannery, 1965: 1254-5, Narr, 1959: 85, Masson 1976: 39. Although, "recent research has demonstrated, however, that yaylak pastoralism in the Zagros Mountains can be dated no earlier than the second half of the fourth millennium B.C. (Mortensen, 1975: 23f., 32-3). However, as yet there is insufficient data for this question to be finally resolved."Anatoly Khazanov, Nomads and the Outside World, Second Edition, The University of Wisconsin Press, 1994, p. 97
Revised:  D. Van Nostrand Company: New Jersey, 1966, p. 85 
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Original:  controlled descent of the operator under a large flexible canopy Paragliding - soaring under a parachute canopy Parasailing - hanging under a paraglider towed by a vehicle (boat, car, or snowmobile) in order to ascend (usually over water) Air Ballooning - a balloon you ride which uses fire to go up and wind to stay afloat Paramotoring - a motor vehicle attached with a parachute which can hang into the air for hours and can also be used as a vehicle to cross countries or jumping to an Island. It os self controllable and you may be need the permission of  local government to fly over an area.
Revised:  controlled descent of the operator under a large flexible canopy Paragliding - soaring under a parachute canopy Parasailing - hanging under a paraglider towed by a vehicle (boat, car, or snowmobile) in order to ascend (usually over water) Air Ballooning - a balloon you ride which uses fire to go up and wind to stay afloat Paramotoring - a motor vehicle attached with a parachute which can hang into the air for hours and can also be used as a vehicle to cross countries or jumping to an island. It is self-controllable, and you may be need the permission of local government to fly over an area.
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Original:  The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired,  it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
Revised:  The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired, (there never was a patent on the Halimeter) it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
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Original:  More recently, the portable gas chromatograph, "OralChroma" has been recommended in the diagnosis of halitosis, as the Halimeter does not detect dimethyl sulfide,  which is thought by some to be elevated in extraoral causes of halitosis.
Revised:  More recently, the portable gas chromatograph, "OralChroma" has been recommended in the diagnosis of halitosis, as the Halimeter does not detect dimethyl sulfide, (actually it does) which is thought by some to be elevated in extraoral causes of halitosis.
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Original:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis   .
Revised:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis . (We have shown a procedure for intraoral halitosis from day one with the Halimeter--as originally developed by Dr. Jon Richter.) .
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Original:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis   .
Revised:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis There is loads of incorrect information on this entry. Recommend you visit the Halimeter.com website .
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Original:  The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired, (there never was a patent on the Halimeter) it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
Revised:  The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired, it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
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Original:  More recently, the portable gas chromatograph, "OralChroma" has been recommended in the diagnosis of halitosis, as the Halimeter does not detect dimethyl sulfide, (actually it does) which is thought by some to be elevated in extraoral causes of halitosis.
Revised:  More recently, the portable gas chromatograph, "OralChroma" has been recommended in the diagnosis of halitosis, as the Halimeter does not detect dimethyl sulfide, which is thought by some to be elevated in extraoral causes of halitosis.
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Original:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis . (We have shown a procedure for intraoral halitosis from day one with the Halimeter--as originally developed by Dr. Jon Richter.)
Revised:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis 
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Original:   The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired, it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
Revised:  But then, all gas detection instruments require calibration. The Halimeter has been the only VSC monitor for the diagnosis of halitosis for years, but now that its patent has expired, it faces competition from other sulfur monitors recently introduced into the marketplace.
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Original:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis. 
Revised:  The halimeter is therefore not indicated if extra-oral halitosis is suspected (its use will only be able to rule out intra-oral halitosis), but is useful for diagnosis and clinical monitoring of intra-oral halitosis. Above quote is factually incorrect as the Halimeter does detect hydrogen sulfide, methyl mercaptan, and dimethyl sulfide. This has been documented in the product literature since 1997.
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Original:  An erratum is most commonly issued shortly after its original text is published.
Revised:  It is usually bound into the back of a book, but for a single error a slip of paper detailing a corrigendum may be bound in before or after the page on which the error appears.Collins Dictionary of the English Language, 2nd Edition, London, 1986, p.352 An erratum may also be issued shortly after its original text is published.
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Original:    Errata sheets According to the Chicago Manual of Style, "Errata, lists of errors and their corrections, may take the form of loose, inserted sheets or bound-in pages.
Revised:  Etymology Corrigendum is the gerundive form of the Latin compound verb corrigo -rexi -rectum (from the verb rego, "to make straight, rule", plus the preposition cum, "with"), "to correct",Cassell's Latin Dictionary, Marchant, J.R.V, Errata sheets According to the Chicago Manual of Style, "Errata, lists of errors and their corrections, may take the form of loose, inserted sheets or bound-in pages.
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Original:    Errata sheets According to the Chicago Manual of Style, "Errata, lists of errors and their corrections, may take the form of loose, inserted sheets or bound-in pages.
Revised:  Charles, Joseph F., (Eds.), Revised Edition, 1928, p.139 and thus signifiesassuming the full form has added to it the verb sum or parts thereof, changing the meaning to the idea of necessity or compulsion "(those things) which must be corrected" and in its single form Corrigendum it means "(that thing) which must be corrected"."That which is to be corrected; An error to be corrected", per: Collins Dictionary of the English Language, 2nd Edition, London, 1986, p.352 Errata sheets According to the Chicago Manual of Style, "Errata, lists of errors and their corrections, may take the form of loose, inserted sheets or bound-in pages.
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Original:  Pali: Pūraṇa Kassapa) was an Indian ascetic teacher  who lived around the 6th century BCE, contemporaneous with Mahavira and the Buddha.
Revised:  Pali: Pūraṇa Kassapa) was an Indian ascetic teacher and philospher who lived around the 6th century BCE, contemporaneous with Mahavira and the Buddha.
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Original:  Biography Purana taught a theory of "non-action" (Pāli, Skt.: akiriyāvāda) whereby the body acts independent of the soul, merit or demerit.
Revised:  Philosophy Purana taught a theory of "non-action" (Pāli, Skt.: akiriyāvāda) whereby the body acts independent of the soul, merit or demerit.
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Original:   In the Pali Canon, Purana (along with the ascetic Makkhali Gosala) is identified as an ahetuvadin, "denier of a cause" (of merit).
Revised:  According to Kassapa, even if a man killed other creatures on earth it will not consider like a sin. In this case actions are not connected with the idea of bad and similarly a good act will not lead to a merit . In the Pali Canon, Purana (along with the ascetic Makkhali Gosala) is identified as an ahetuvadin, "denier of a cause" (of merit).
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Original:  Philosophy Purana taught a theory of "non-action" (Pāli, Skt.: akiriyāvāda) whereby the body acts independent of the soul, merit or demerit.
Revised:  Biography Purana taught a theory of "non-action" (Pāli, Skt.: akiriyāvāda) whereby the body acts independent of the soul, merit or demerit.
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Original:  It is estimated that some 200 Catholic churches were destroyed or severely damaged by Serb forces during the Croatian War of Independence, while another 269 religious buildings were destroyed during the Bosnian War   .
Revised:  It is estimated that some 200 Catholic churches were destroyed or severely damaged by Serb forces during the Croatian War of Independence, while another 269 religious buildings were destroyed during the Bosnian War . .
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Original:  It is estimated that some 200 Catholic churches were destroyed or severely damaged by Serb forces during the Croatian War of Independence, while another 269 religious buildings were destroyed during the Bosnian War   .
Revised:  It is estimated that some 200 Catholic churches were destroyed or severely damaged by Serb forces during the Croatian War of Independence, while another 269 religious buildings were destroyed during the Bosnian War During the Kosovo War, Albanian Catholics were also ethnically cleansed by Serb forces, alongside Muslims. One example was the Meja massacre of more than 300 Albanian Catholics. There was also widespread vandalisation of Kosovo Albanian Catholic churches .
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Original:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
Revised:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light - Long Island Sound January 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
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Original:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
Revised:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light - Manana Island Sound Signal Station, Maine, April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
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Original:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
Revised:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light - Boston, Massachusetts, October 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
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Original:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Me Nov. , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
Revised:  " June 30, 1869 Execution Rocks Light-Long Island Sound Jan'y 25, 1869 Monhegan Light-Manana Island (ME) Station April 4, 1870 Boston Light-Boston, Mass Oct. 29, 1871 Portland Head Light-Portland, Maine November , 1871 Montauk Point Light-Long Island May 1, 1873 Highland Light-Cape Cod June 23, 1873History of American Steam Navigation, John H. Morrison, W. F. Sametz & CO., New York, 1908, pg 579
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