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Original:  however, according to a statement made by MP David Lloyd George in Parliament in 1901, "the Colonial Office should have had some justification for the foolish policy of the [British] Government in regard to the Golden Stool, that had led to the hundreds and thousands of the corpses of savages festering round the fort of Coomassie"!
Revised:  however, according to a statement made by MP David Lloyd George in Parliament in 1901, "the Colonial Office should have had some justification for the foolish policy of the [British] Government in regard to the wooden Stool, that had led to the hundreds and thousands of the corpses of savages festering round the fort of Coomassie"!
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Original:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his inhumane attitude towards the Human Life of the Asante People who were needlessly killed during the War, because the Golden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
Revised:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his inhumane attitude towards the Human Life of the Asante People who were needlessly killed during the War, because the wooden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
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Original:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his inhumane attitude towards the Human Life of the Asante People who were needlessly killed during the War, because the Golden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
Revised:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his dismissive attitude towards the Human Life of the Asante People who were needlessly killed during the War, because the Golden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
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Original:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his inhumane attitude towards the Human Life of the Asante People who were needlessly killed during the War, because the Golden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
Revised:  David Lloyd George further admonished Joseph Chamberlain for his inhumane attitude towards the Ashanti casualties in the war, noting that the Golden Stool was never captured by the British: "Surely human life was worth some respectful treatment", he said.
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Original:  An other application of a pneumatic barrier is to decrease the salt-water exchange in navigation locks and prevent salt intrusion in rivers Abraham, G. Van der Burgh, P. De Vos, P. (1973) Pneumatic barriers to reduce salt intrusion through locks, Rijkswaterstaat Communications 17, URL Pneumatic barriers are also known as air curtains.
Revised:  An other application of a pneumatic barrier is to decrease the salt-water exchange in navigation locks and prevent salt intrusion in rivers . Pneumatic barriers are also known as air curtains.
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Original:  In case of a density current due to salinity differences the barrier mixes the salt water, but also slows down the speed of the density current  pneumatic barrier in navigation lock in the Netherlands At water current speeds exceeding one foot per second, the pneumatic barrier no longer functions effectively, limiting deployable sites.
Revised:  In case of a density current due to salinity differences the barrier mixes the salt water, but also slows down the speed of the density current . pneumatic barrier in navigation lock in the Netherlands At water current speeds exceeding one foot per second, the pneumatic barrier no longer functions effectively, limiting deployable sites.
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Original:  In case of a density current due to salinity differences the barrier mixes the salt water, but also slows down the speed of the density current  pneumatic barrier in navigation lock in the Netherlands At water current speeds exceeding one foot per second, the pneumatic barrier no longer functions effectively, limiting deployable sites.
Revised:  In case of a density current due to salinity differences the barrier mixes the salt water, but also slows down the speed of the density current pneumatic barrier in navigation lock in the Netherlands At water-current speeds exceeding one foot per second, the pneumatic barrier no longer functions effectively, limiting deployable sites.
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Original:  On Thursday , February 12 , 2017, a group of nearly 400 whales began to beach near Golden Bay on the tip of New Zealand’s South Island, following a similar incident earlier that week.
Revised:  On Thursday February 12th , 2017, a group of nearly 400 whales began to beach near Golden Bay on the tip of New Zealand’s South Island, following a similar incident earlier that week.
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Original:  On Thursday , February 12 , 2017, a group of nearly 400 whales began to beach near Golden Bay on the tip of New Zealand’s South Island, following a similar incident earlier that week.
Revised:  On Thursday , February 12 , 2017, a group of nearly 400 whales beached near Golden Bay on the tip of New Zealand’s South Island, following a similar incident earlier that week.
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Original:  The simplicity of an air curtain system, requiring only air compressors and perforated hoses, would allow for rapid deployment and create aerated zones of oxygenated seawater during a marine emergency.
Revised:  The simplicity of an air curtain system, requiring only air compressors and perforated hoses, could allow for rapid deployment and create aerated zones of oxygenated seawater during a marine emergency.
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Original:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
Revised:  Similar to an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
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Original:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
Revised:  Just as an air curtain to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
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Original:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
Revised:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
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Original:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance , in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
Revised:  Just as an air curtain serves to separate indoor air from outdoor air as , for instance in restaurants and walk-in refrigerators, a powerful air curtain can defeat the chimney effect of the incineration process to eliminate any smoke from a brush incinerator.
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Original:   Eratosthenes of Cyrene (276–196 BC) deduced the circumference of the Earth with remarkable accuracy (within 10\% of the correct value).
Revised:  Ancient Greek and Roman geographers knew the approximate size of the globe, but remained ignorant of many parts of it. Eratosthenes of Cyrene (276–196 BC) deduced the circumference of the Earth with remarkable accuracy (within 10\% of the correct value).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  At its widest possible extent, the ancient ecumene thus stretched from northern Europe to equatorial Africa, and from the Atlantic Ocean to western China. During the Middle Ages, this picture of the world was widened to accommodate Scandinavia, the North Atlantic, East Asia, and eventually sub-equatorial Africa. Ptolemy and other ancient geographers were well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ") . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  Ptolemy was well aware that they had a limited view of the ecumene, and that their knowledge extended to only a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ") . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe These geographers acknowledged the existence of terrae incognitae ("unknown land ") . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown lands ") . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ") within Africa, Europe and Asia . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ")  . In fact, symmetry led him to expect that there should be three other continents to balance the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
Revised:  Ptolemy was well aware that the Romans knew only about a quarter of the globe and his erroneous belief that the Indian Ocean was landlocked led to expectation of a terra incognita ("unknown land ") . In fact, a belief in global symmetry led many Greco-Roman geographers to posit other continents elsewhere on the globe, which existed in balance with the ecumene: Perioeci ( "beside the ecumene"), Antoeci ("opposite the ecumene") and the Antipodes (“opposite the feet”).
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Original:  reprinted in G E Moore, Philosophical Studies (1922)Russell ‘Pragmatism’ (1909) and ‘The Monistic Theory of Truth’ ( 1906-07 ) "This material is in itself the ultimate substance.
Revised:  reprinted in G E Moore, Philosophical Studies (1922)Russell ‘Pragmatism’ (1909) and ‘The Monistic Theory of Truth’ ( 1906–07 ) "This material is in itself the ultimate substance.
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Original:  One can refer to any relatively small class or group of people who can exercise control as The Establishment . Conversely, in the jargon of sociology, anyone who does not belong to The Establishment may be labelled an "outsider" (as opposed to an "insider").
Revised:  One can refer to any relatively small class or group of people who can exercise control as The Society . Conversely, in the jargon of sociology, anyone who does not belong to The Establishment may be labelled an "outsider" (as opposed to an "insider").
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Original:  One can refer to any relatively small class or group of people who can exercise control as The Establishment . Conversely, in the jargon of sociology, anyone who does not belong to The Establishment may be labelled an "outsider" (as opposed to an "insider").
Revised:  One can refer to any relatively small class or group of people who can exercise control as The Establishment . Conversely, in the jargon of sociology, anyone who does not belong to The Society may be labelled an "outsider" (as opposed to an "insider").
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Original:  The term in its modern sense was popularized by the British journalist Henry Fairlie, who in September 1955 in the London magazine The Spectator defined the network of prominent, well-connected people as "the Establishment ".
Revised:  The term in its modern sense was popularized by the British journalist Henry Fairlie, who in September 1955 in the London magazine The Spectator defined the network of prominent, well-connected people as "the Society ".
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Original:  In saying, "There are always two parties, the party of the Past and the party of the Future: the Establishment and the Movement." Ralph Waldo Emerson in 1882 used the term in a somewhat similar sense but his usage but was not picked up by writers.
Revised:  In saying, "There are always two parties, the party of the Past and the party of the Future: the Society and the Movement." Ralph Waldo Emerson in 1882 used the term in a somewhat similar sense but his usage but was not picked up by writers.
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Original:  In 1968, a group of academics formed the "Sociology Liberation Movement" (SLM) in order to repudiate the leadership of the American Sociological Association itself, which the SLM referred to as the " Establishment in American sociology".
Revised:  In 1968, a group of academics formed the "Sociology Liberation Movement" (SLM) in order to repudiate the leadership of the American Sociological Association itself, which the SLM referred to as the " The Society in American sociology".
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Original: Risk reduction  A 2012 Cochrane systematic review found evidence that preoperative physical therapy reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery .
Revised: Risk reduction Pharmacological and non-pharmacological prevention approaches may reduce the risk of atrial fibrillation after an operation and reduce the length of hospital stays, however there is no evidenc that this improves mortality. A 2012 Cochrane systematic review found evidence that preoperative physical therapy reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery .
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Original: Risk reduction  A 2012 Cochrane systematic review found evidence that preoperative physical therapy reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery .
Revised: Risk reduction Non-pharmacologic approaches Preoperative physical therapy may reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery .
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Original: Risk reduction  A 2012 Cochrane systematic review found evidence that preoperative physical therapy reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery . In addition, the researchers found that preoperative physical therapy decreased the length of hospital stay by more than three days on average.
Revised: Risk reduction A 2012 Cochrane systematic review found evidence that preoperative physical therapy reduced postoperative pulmonary complications, such as pneumonia and atelectasis, in patients undergoing elective cardiac surgery and may decrease the length of hospital stay by more than three days on average.
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Original:  There is evidence that quitting smoking at least four weeks before surgery may reduce the risk of postoperative complications   .
Revised:  There is evidence that quitting smoking at least four weeks before surgery may reduce the risk of postoperative complications Pharmacological approaches Beta-blocking medication is sometimes prescribed during cardiac surgery. There is some low certainity evidence that this perioperative blockade of beta-adrenergic receptors may reduce the incidence of arial fibrillation and ventricular arrhythmias in patients undergoing cardiac surgery .
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Original:  Further, "immigrant" is a word that can be paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly negative connotationto those projecting social cognition towards the other. The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way.
Revised:  Further, "immigrant" is a word that can be paired with "illegal", which harbors a profoundly derogatory connotation. Misuse of these terms - they are often used inaccurately - to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way.
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Original:  The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group in a derogatory way. "Most of the time when we hear illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.
Revised:  The perpetual misuse of these words used to describe the other in the English language can alter the perception of a group illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.
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Original:  "Most of the time when we hear illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.
Revised:  "Most of the time when we hear %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal.
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Original:  "Most of the time when we hear illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% used, most of the time, the shorter version 'illegals' is being used as a noun, which implies that a human being is perpetually illegal. There is no other classification that I'm aware of where the individual is being rendered as unlawful as opposed to those individuals' actions."
Revised:  "Most of the time when we hear illegal immigrant%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% as a whole in a negative way. Ryan Eller, the executive director of the immigrant advocacy group, Define American, expressed the problem this way:
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Original: Women living in poverty-stricken areas are more likely to be obese and engage in unhealthy behaviors such as cigarette smoking and drug use, are less likely to engage in or even have access to legitimate prenatal care, and are at a significantly higher risk for adverse outcomes for both the mother and child.
Revised: Women living in poverty-stricken areas are more likely to be obese and engage in unhealthy behaviors such as cigarette smoking and substance use, are less likely to engage in or even have access to legitimate prenatal care, and are at a significantly higher risk for adverse outcomes for both the mother and child.
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Original: The European union has set up the European personnel recovery centre by developing harmonizing PR policy, doctrine and standards through clear lines of communications with partners stakeholders (nations and international URL The five PR execution tasks Report: Begins with the recognition of an isolating event.
Revised: The European Personnel Recovery Centre facilitates the harmonisation of personnel recovery policy, doctrine and standards through clear lines of communications with partners stakeholders (nations and international URL The five PR execution tasks Report: Begins with the recognition of an isolating event.
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Original: The United States Armed Forces  defines personnel recovery as " The sum of military, DOD civilian, DOD contractor personnel, or other personnel designated by the President or Secretary of Defense, who are isolated , missing, detained, or captured (IMDC) in an operational environment.
Revised: The United States Armed Forces , in Joint Publication 3-50 Personnel Recovery, defines personnel recovery as " The sum of military, DOD civilian, DOD contractor personnel, or other personnel designated by the President or Secretary of Defense, who are isolated , missing, detained, or captured (IMDC) in an operational environment.
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