wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  UK Health and Safety Executive: Top 10 noise control techniques Fan noise can be reduced by design improvements, e.g. with aerodynamically optimized blades for smoother airflow, reducing noise to around 20 dB at approximately 1 metre or larger fans rotating more slowly, which produce less noise than smaller, faster fans with the same airflow.
Revised:  Fan noise can be reduced by design improvements, e.g. with aerodynamically optimized blades for smoother airflow, reducing noise to around 20 dB at approximately 1 metre or larger fans rotating more slowly, which produce less noise than smaller, faster fans with the same airflow.
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Original:  Article ID: 310064 – Last Review: May 7, 2007 – Revision: 6.2 How to troubleshoot problems during installation when you upgrade from Windows 98 or Windows Millennium Edition to Windows XP Microsoft says this of errors in upgrading to Windows XP: "Your computer [may be] over-clocked."
Revised:  Microsoft says this of errors in upgrading to Windows XP: "Your computer [may be] over-clocked."
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Original:  data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months cannot donate , regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender  . data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
Revised:  data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months , regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender . data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
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Original:  data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months cannot donate , regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender  . data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
Revised:  data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months cannot donate , regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender , must wait three months before donating . data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
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Original:  data-sort-value=" 3 " data-sort-value=" 3 " Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months, regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender, must wait three months before donating. data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
Revised:  data-sort-value=" 0 " data-sort-value=" 3 " Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months, regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender, must wait three months before donating. data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
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Original:  data-sort-value=" 3 " data-sort-value=" 3 " Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months, regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender, must wait three months before donating. data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
Revised:  data-sort-value=" 3 " data-sort-value=" 0 " Anyone who has had anal sex with a new partner or multiple partners in the last three months, regardless of their gender or their partner’s gender, must wait three months before donating. data-sort-value="3" data-sort-value="3" Due to the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States causing a shortage of blood, the Food and Drug Administration reduced the deferral period to 3 months in April 2020. data-sort-value="12" data-sort-value="0" data-sort-value="
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Original:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened and restored Aweida to the throne, although the island was annexed in the process. By the end of the war, about 500 people had died, around a third of the population.
Revised:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened and restored Aweida to the throne, and also taking everyone's firearms. (by the time they had finished, the Germans had confiscated 791 rifles from the Nauruans, which was almost a gun per person!) Even though aweida was in poer again, the nauruans had lost 500 people had died, around a third of the population.
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Original:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened by restoring Aweida to the throne, and also taking everyone' s firearms . (by the time they had finished, the Germans had confiscated 791 rifles from the Nauruans, which was almost a gun per person!
Revised:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened by restoring Aweida to the throne, and by taking combatants' firearms (by the time they had finished, the Germans had confiscated 791 rifles from the Nauruans, which was almost a gun per person!
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Original:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened by restoring Aweida to the throne, and also taking everyone' s firearms . (by the time they had finished, the Germans had confiscated 791 rifles from the Nauruans, which was almost a gun per person!)Even though aweida was in power again, the nauruans had lost 500 people which was around a 3rd of their population.
Revised:  In 1888, the German Empire intervened by restoring Aweida to the throne, and also taking everyone' s firearms . (by the time they had finished, the Germans had confiscated 791 rifles from the Nauruans, nearly one gun for every inhabitant of the island). Over the course of the war, Nauru had lost around 500 people which was around a 3rd of their population.
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Original:  Although Lay Preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people - including those in their congregation - it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
Revised:  Although lay preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people - including those in their congregation - it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
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Original:  Although Lay Preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people - including those in their congregation - it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
Revised:  Although Lay Preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people – including those in their congregation - it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
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Original:  Although Lay Preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people - including those in their congregation - it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
Revised:  Although Lay Preachers in many Christian denominations may be accorded titles such as Reverend as a courtesy by people - including those in their congregation – it is only once a priest, cleric, minister or reverend has been ordained that he/she can correctly adopt that title.
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Original: 3|A stretch of coastline of the Great Australian Bight In geography, a bight is a bend or curve in a coastline, river, or other geographical feature . It typically indicates a large, openbay, often only slightly receding. It is distinguished from a sound by being shallower .
Revised: 3|A stretch of coastline of the Great Australian Bight In geography, a bight is a bend or curve in a coastline, river, or other geographical feature , or it may refer to a bay formed by such a feature. Such bays are typically broad, open, shallow and only slightly recessed. Bights are distinguished from sounds, in that sounds are much deeper .
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Original:  When Kobra  creates a strike-force called Strike Force Kobra to usurp Stagg Enterprises in his goal of world domination, one of the villains he creates is patterned after the original Zebra-Man.
Revised:  When Kobra researches the origins of some of Batman's enemies and creates a strike-force called Strike Force Kobra to usurp Stagg Enterprises in his goal of world domination, one of the villains he creates is patterned after the original Zebra-Man.
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Original:  In  The New 52 , a version of Zebra-Man first appears as an inmate of Arkham Asylum, currently going by the moniker "Vortex."
Revised:  In The New 52 rebooted the DC Universe. A version of Zebra-Man first appears as an inmate of Arkham Asylum, currently going by the moniker "Vortex."
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Original:  According to egocentrism, individuals will overestimate themselves in relation to others because they believe that they have an advantage that others do not have, as an individual considering his or her own performance and another's performance will consider his or her performance to be better, even when they are in fact equal.
Revised:  According to egocentrism, individuals will overestimate themselves in relation to others because they believe that they have an advantage that others do not have, as an individual considering their own performance and another's performance will consider his or her performance to be better, even when they are in fact equal.
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Original:  According to egocentrism, individuals will overestimate themselves in relation to others because they believe that they have an advantage that others do not have, as an individual considering his or her own performance and another's performance will consider his or her performance to be better, even when they are in fact equal.
Revised:  According to egocentrism, individuals will overestimate themselves in relation to others because they believe that they have an advantage that others do not have, as an individual considering his or her own performance and another's performance will consider their performance to be better, even when they are in fact equal.
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Original:  Windschitl, Kruger & Simms (2003) have conducted research into focalism, focusing specifically on the better-than-average effect, and found that asking participants to estimate their abilities and likelihoods of success in a task produced results of decreased estimations when they were asked about others' chances of success rather than their own.
Revised:  Windschitl, Kruger & Simms (2003) have conducted research into focalism, focusing specifically on the better-than-average effect, and found that asking participants to estimate their ability and likelihood of success in a task produced results of decreased estimations when they were asked about others' chances of success rather than their own.
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Original:  However these results are not completely reliable and could be affected by the fact that individuals like their close friends more than an "average peer" and may as a result rate their friends as being higher than average, therefore the friend would not be an objective comparison target.
Revised:  However these results are not completely reliable and could be affected by the fact that individuals like their close friends more than an "average peer" and may as a result rate their friend as being higher than average, therefore the friend would not be an objective comparison target.
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Original:  "Self versus aggregate" comparisons This idea, put forward by Giladi and Klar, suggests that when making comparisons any single member of a group will tend to evaluate herself to rank above that group's statistical mean performance level or the median performance level of its members.
Revised:  "Self versus aggregate" comparisons This idea, put forward by Giladi and Klar, suggests that when making comparisons any single member of a group will tend to evaluate themselves to rank above that group's statistical mean performance level or the median performance level of its members.
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Original:  Illusory superiority has also explained phenomena such as the large amount of stock market trading (as each trader thinks she is the best, and most likely to succeed), and the number of lawsuits that go to trial (because, due to illusory superiority, many lawyers have an inflated belief that they will win a case).
Revised:  Illusory superiority has also explained phenomena such as the large amount of stock market trading (as each trader thinks they are the best, and most likely to succeed), and the number of lawsuits that go to trial (because, due to illusory superiority, many lawyers have an inflated belief that they will win a case).
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Original:  McCormick, Walkey and Green (1986) found similar results in their study, asking 178 participants to evaluate their positions on eight different dimensions of driving skills (examples include the "dangerous–safe" dimension and the "considerate–inconsiderate" dimension).
Revised:  McCormick, Walkey and Green (1986) found similar results in their study, asking 178 participants to evaluate their position on eight different dimensions of driving skills (examples include the "dangerous–safe" dimension and the "considerate–inconsiderate" dimension).
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Original:  The disparity between actual IQ and perceived IQ has also been noted between genders by British psychologist Adrian Furnham, in whose work there was a suggestion that, on average, men are more likely to overestimate their intelligence by 5 points, while women are more likely to underestimate their IQs by a similar margin.
Revised:  The disparity between actual IQ and perceived IQ has also been noted between genders by British psychologist Adrian Furnham, in whose work there was a suggestion that, on average, men are more likely to overestimate their intelligence by 5 points, while women are more likely to underestimate their IQ by a similar margin.
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Original:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
Revised:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouse or partner were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
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Original:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
Revised:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their life , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
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Original:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
Revised:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their success and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
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Original:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouses' or partners'successes .
Revised:  One study found that participants became defensive when their spouses or partners were perceived by others to be more successful in any aspect of their lives , and had the tendency to exaggerate their successes and understate their spouse or partner's success .
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Original:  A direct comparison—which is more commonly used—involves the participant rating herself and her average peer on the same scale, from "below average" to "above average" and results in participants being far more self-serving.
Revised:  A direct comparison—which is more commonly used—involves the participant rating themselves and the average peer on the same scale, from "below average" to "above average" and results in participants being far more self-serving.
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Original:  Researchers have suggested that this occurs due to the closer comparison between the individual and the average peer, however use of this method means that it is impossible to know whether a participant has overestimated herself , underestimated the average peer, or both.
Revised:  Researchers have suggested that this occurs due to the closer comparison between the individual and the average peer, however use of this method means that it is impossible to know whether a participant has overestimated themselves , underestimated the average peer, or both.
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Original:  According to Alicke & Govorun positive characteristics that an individual believes are within her control are more self-serving, and negative characteristics that are seen as uncontrollable are less detrimental to self-enhancement.
Revised:  According to Alicke & Govorun positive characteristics that an individual believes are within their control are more self-serving, and negative characteristics that are seen as uncontrollable are less detrimental to self-enhancement.
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Original: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish Succession : The Treaty of Utrecht was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war  .
Revised: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish stinky face : The Treaty of Utrecht was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war .
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Original: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish Succession : The Treaty of Utrecht was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war  .
Revised: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish Succession : The Treaty of memes was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war .
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Original: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish Succession : The Treaty of Utrecht was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war  .
Revised: 18th nothing Year Date Event 1713 11 April War of the Spanish Succession : The Treaty of Utrecht was signed, under which Great Britain, Savoy, Portugal, and the United Provinces recognized Philip V of Spain of the House of Bourbon as king of Spain, ending the war of laksjf .
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Original: 300px|The text Hic Sunt Dracones on the Hunt–Lenox Globe, dating from 1504 Although several early maps, such as the Theatrum Orbis Terrarum , have illustrations of mythological creatures for decoration, the phrase itself is an anachronism.
Revised: 300px|The text on the Hunt–Lenox Globe, dating from 1504 Although several early maps, such as the Theatrum Orbis Terrarum , have illustrations of mythological creatures for decoration, the phrase itself is an anachronism.
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Original: 300px|The text Hic Sunt Dracones on the Hunt–Lenox Globe, dating from 1504 Although several early maps, such as the Theatrum Orbis Terrarum , have illustrations of mythological creatures for decoration, the phrase itself is an anachronism.
Revised: 300px|The text Hic Sunt Dracones on the Hunt–Lenox Globe, dating from 1504 Although several early maps, such as the , have illustrations of mythological creatures for decoration, the phrase itself is an anachronism.
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Original:  The Borgia map (c. 1430), in the Vatican Library, states, over a dragon-like figure in Asia (in the upper left quadrant of the map), " Hic etiam homines magna cornua habentes longitudine quatuor pedum, et sunt etiam serpentes tante magnitudinis, ut unum bovem comedant integrum ". ("Here there are even men who have large four-foot horns, and there are even serpents so large that they could eat an ox whole."
Revised:  The Borgia map (c. 1430), in the Vatican Library, states, over a dragon-like figure in Asia (in the upper left quadrant of the map), " ". ("Here there are even men who have large four-foot horns, and there are even serpents so large that they could eat an ox whole."
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Original:  The Tabula Peutingeriana (a medieval copy of Roman map) has " in his locis elephanti nascuntur ", " in his locis scorpiones nascuntur " and " hic cenocephali nascuntur " ("in these places elephants are born, in these places scorpions are born, here Cynocephali are born").
Revised:  The Tabula Peutingeriana (a medieval copy of Roman map) has " ", " in his locis scorpiones nascuntur " and " hic cenocephali nascuntur " ("in these places elephants are born, in these places scorpions are born, here Cynocephali are born").
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Original:  The Tabula Peutingeriana (a medieval copy of Roman map) has " in his locis elephanti nascuntur ", " in his locis scorpiones nascuntur " and " hic cenocephali nascuntur " ("in these places elephants are born, in these places scorpions are born, here Cynocephali are born").
Revised:  The Tabula Peutingeriana (a medieval copy of Roman map) has " in his locis elephanti nascuntur ", " " and " hic cenocephali nascuntur " ("in these places elephants are born, in these places scorpions are born, here Cynocephali are born").
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