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Original:  The work of Thomas Hobbes made theories based upon a state of nature popular in 17th-century England , even as most of those who employed such arguments were deeply troubled by his absolutist conclusions.
Revised:  In 17th-century England, the work of Thomas Hobbes made theories based upon a state of nature popular in 17th-century England , even as most of those who employed such arguments were deeply troubled by his absolutist conclusions.
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Original:  Klibansky and Gough, p. 135. There is, however, a passage added in a later edition of the Essay concerning Human Understanding, where Locke perhaps questioned "whether 'atheism' was necessarily inimical to political obedience.
Revised:  However, after that he adds: "As for other practical opinions, though not absolutely free from all error, if they do not tend to establish domination over others, or civil impunity to the Church in which they are taught, there can be no reason why they should not be tolerated". There exists also a passage added in a later edition of the Essay concerning Human Understanding, where Locke perhaps questioned "whether 'atheism' was necessarily inimical to political obedience.
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Original:  Gendlin's book details the six steps of Focusing, which can also be taught as a four-step process, while emphasizing that there is an essence to Focusing which is a flow that is beyond steps .
Revised:  Gendlin's book details the six steps of Focusing, , however it emphasises that the essence of Focusing is not adhering to these steps, but following the life-process. When the person learns the basics, they are able to weave through the process increasingly more and more organically .
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Original: Folk etymology – sometimes called popular etymology, analogical reformation, or etymological reinterpretation – is a change in a word or phrase resulting from the replacement of an unfamiliar form by a more familiar one.
Revised: Folk etymology (also known as popular etymology, analogical reformation, or etymological reinterpretation – is a change in a word or phrase resulting from the replacement of an unfamiliar form by a more familiar one.
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Original: Folk etymology – sometimes called popular etymology, analogical reformation, or etymological reinterpretation – is a change in a word or phrase resulting from the replacement of an unfamiliar form by a more familiar one.
Revised: Folk etymology – sometimes called popular etymology, analogical reformation, or etymological reinterpretation ) is a change in a word or phrase resulting from the replacement of an unfamiliar form by a more familiar one.
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Original:  It was used as a nootropic drug in Italy and France, mainly for the treatment of senile dementia, Bompani R, Scali G. Fipexide, an effective cognition activator in the elderly: a placebo-controlled, double-blind clinical trial. Current Medical Research and Opinion. 1986;10(2):99-106. but is no longer in common use due to the occurrence of rare adverse drug reactions including feverGuy C, Blay N, Rousset H, Fardeau V, Ollagnier M. Fever caused by fipexide.
Revised:  It was used as a nootropic drug in Italy and France, mainly for the treatment of senile dementia, but is no longer in common use due to the occurrence of rare adverse drug reactions including feverGuy C, Blay N, Rousset H, Fardeau V, Ollagnier M. Fever caused by fipexide.
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Original:  1986;10(2):99-106. but is no longer in common use due to the occurrence of rare adverse drug reactions including feverGuy C, Blay N, Rousset H, Fardeau V, Ollagnier M. Fever caused by fipexide. Evaluation of the national pharmacovigilance survey. Therapie. 1990 Sep-Oct;45(5):429-31. and hepatitis.
Revised:  1986;10(2):99-106. but is no longer in common use due to the occurrence of rare adverse drug reactions including fever and hepatitis.
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Original:   Gruffydd married Catherine St John, daughter of John St John who was related to Margaret Beaufort around 1507 and had one son: Rhys ap Griffith (1508–1531), who was later executed by Henry VIII for treason as he was considered a threat to Henry VIII and was executed for treason on charges widely believed to be false in 1531 (purportedly for inscribing the name "Fitz Uryan" on his armor).
Revised:  Around 1500 Gruffydd married Catherine St John, daughter of John St John who was related to Margaret Beaufort around 1507 and had one son: Rhys ap Griffith (1508–1531), who was later executed by Henry VIII for treason as he was considered a threat to Henry VIII and was executed for treason on charges widely believed to be false in 1531 (purportedly for inscribing the name "Fitz Uryan" on his armor).
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Original:   Gruffydd married Catherine St John, daughter of John St John who was related to Margaret Beaufort around 1507 and had one son: Rhys ap Griffith (1508–1531), who was later executed by Henry VIII for treason as he was considered a threat to Henry VIII and was executed for treason on charges widely believed to be false in 1531 (purportedly for inscribing the name "Fitz Uryan" on his armor).
Revised:  Gruffydd married Catherine St John, daughter of John St John who was related to Margaret Beaufort . She was appointed to wait on Catherine of Aragon in October 1501.Philip Yorke, Miscellaneous State Papers, vol. 1 (London, 1778), p. 3. They had one son: Rhys ap Griffith (1508–1531), who was later executed by Henry VIII for treason as he was considered a threat to Henry VIII and was executed for treason on charges widely believed to be false in 1531 (purportedly for inscribing the name "Fitz Uryan" on his armor).
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Original: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis  Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would probably have begun several thousand years ago, but the arrival of that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
Revised: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis , Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would probably have begun several thousand years ago, but the arrival of that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
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Original: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis  Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would probably have begun several thousand years ago, but the arrival of that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
Revised: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would have begun several thousand years ago, but the arrival of that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
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Original: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis  Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would probably have begun several thousand years ago, but the arrival of that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
Revised: Overdue-glaciation hypothesis In his overdue-glaciation hypothesis Ruddiman claims that an incipient ice age would probably have begun several thousand years ago, but that scheduled ice age was forestalled by intense farming and deforestation by early farmers that began raising the level of greenhouse gases eight thousand years ago.
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Original:  Data from even earlier ice-cores going as far back as 800,000 years ago suggest probable cyclicity of interglacial length and an inverse correlation with the maximum temperature of each interglacial . But Ruddiman argues URL that this results from a false alignment of recent insolation maxima with insolation minima from the past, among other irregularities that invalidate the criticism.
Revised:  Data from even earlier ice-cores going as far back as 800,000 years ago suggest probable cyclicity of interglacial length and an inverse correlation with the maximum temperature of each interglacial , but Ruddiman argues URL that this results from a false alignment of recent insolation maxima with insolation minima from the past, among other irregularities that invalidate the criticism.
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Original: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3 –8 Covid: Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83\% COVID-19(wild type)
Revised: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3 Covid: Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83\% COVID-19(wild type)
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Original: 8 Covid: Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83\% COVID-19(wild type)
Revised: 8 Covid: Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 65\% (The claim that this is twice as infectious as wild type has been thoroughly debunked. Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83\% COVID-19(wild type)
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Original: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3  Covid:
Revised: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3 –8 Covid:
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Original: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\%  Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3–8 Covid:
Revised: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% COVID-19(Delta variant) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 5–8 80–88\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3–8 Covid:
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Original: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\%  Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% COVID-19 (Variants) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 3–8 Covid: Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83  \% COVID-19(wild type)
Revised: +Values of R0 and herd immunity thresholds (HITs) of well-known infectious diseases prior to intervention Disease Transmission R0 HIT Measles Aerosol 12–18 92–94\% Chickenpox (varicella) Aerosol 10–12 90–92\% Mumps Respiratory droplets 10–12Australian government Department of Health Mumps Laboratory Case Definition (LCD) 90–92\% Rubella Respiratory droplets 6–7 83–86\% Polio Fecal–oral route 5–7 80–86\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83 \% COVID-19(wild type)
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Original:  Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83  \% COVID-19(wild type)
Revised:  Is there a limit to how much worse variants can get? bbc.com , on 12. June 2021 +80\% Pertussis Respiratory droplets 5.5 82\% Smallpox Respiratory droplets 3.5–6.0 71–83 \% COVID-19(Alpha variant) Respiratory droplets and aerosol 4–5 75–80 \% COVID-19(wild type)
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Original:  In addition, O-GlcNAc transferase (OGT) signals glucose availability to TET3 and inhibits TET3 by both decreasing its dioxygenase activity and promoting its nuclear export  .
Revised:  In addition, O-GlcNAc transferase (OGT) signals glucose availability to TET3 and inhibits TET3 by both decreasing its dioxygenase activity and promoting its nuclear export . OGT is also known to directly modify histones with O-GlcNAc .
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total  population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total  population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total  population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  An estimated 0.22\% -2.2 \% of the population are Ahmadi,The 1998 Pakistani census states that there are 291,000 (0.22\%) Ahmadis in Pakistan.
Revised:  An estimated 0.22\% -1.2 \% of the population are Ahmadi,The 1998 Pakistani census states that there are 291,000 (0.22\%) Ahmadis in Pakistan.
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up between 15-20 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 90 \% are Sunni.
Revised:  According to Library of Congress, Pew Research Center, Oxford University, the CIA Factbook and other experts, adherents of Shia Islam in Pakistan make up around 10 \% of the country's total Muslim population, while the remaining 77 \% are Sunni.
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Original:  An estimated 0.22\% -1 \% of the population are Ahmadi,The 1998 Pakistani census states that there are 291,000 (0.22\%) Ahmadis in Pakistan.
Revised:  An estimated 0.22\% -2.2 \% of the population are Ahmadi,The 1998 Pakistani census states that there are 291,000 (0.22\%) Ahmadis in Pakistan.
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Original:  Their presence is noted at the ritual site of Huanaco Pampa, where the structures that have been excavated suggest a large presence of aclla who had access to the extensive storehouses of corn and grain to make chicha.
Revised:  Their presence is noted at the ritual site of Huanaco Pampa, where the structures that have been excavated suggest a large presence of acllas who had access to the extensive storehouses of corn and grain to make chicha.
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Original:  After visiting Cuzco and being honoured by the emperor, Tanta Carhua was credited with saying  “You can finish with me now because I could not be more honoured than by the feasts which they celebrated for me in Cuzco."
Revised:  After visiting Cuzco and being honoured by the emperor, Tanta Carhua was credited with saying : “You can finish with me now because I could not be more honoured than by the feasts which they celebrated for me in Cuzco."
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Original:  Hypothesis  Criticism Post-study events After the failure of the prediction, Martin was threatened with arrest and involuntary commitment, and left Chicago.
Revised:  Hypothesis Aftermath After the failure of the prediction, Martin was threatened with arrest and involuntary commitment, and left Chicago. She later founded the Association of Sananda and Sanat Kumara. Under the name Sister Thedra, she continued to practice channeling and participating in contactee groups until her death in 1992. Criticism Post-study events After the failure of the prediction, Martin was threatened with arrest and involuntary commitment, and left Chicago.
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Original: Historical The chiefs of the seven Hungarian tribes formed an alliance by drinking from each other's blood, while choosing Álmos as their leaderin the 9th century AD. The Mongol leaders Yesükhei (the father of Genghis Khan) and Toghrul were blood brothers in the 12th century AD. The Greek Nikolaos Kriezotis and the Montenegrin Vasos Mavrovouniotis in the Greek War of Independence Temüjin (Genghis Khan) and Jamukha were childhood friends and blood brothers, although Jamukha later betrayed Temüjin, and was executed at the order of Temüjin (At Jamukha's refusal of reconciliation). Two Norman knights who took part in the Conquest of Britain in 1066, Robert d'Ouilly and Roger d'Ivry, were well known as blood brothers.
Revised: Historical The chiefs of the seven Hungarian tribes formed an alliance by drinking from each other's blood, while choosing Álmos as leader. In 1066, Robert d'Ouilly and Roger d'Ivry, were well known as blood brothers.
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Original:  Two Norman knights who took part in the Conquest of Britain in 1066, Robert d'Ouilly and Roger d'Ivry, were well known as blood brothers.
Revised:  Two Norman knights who took part in the Conquest of Britain in 1066, Robert d'Ouilly and Roger d'Ivry, two Norman knights taking part in the Norman Conquest of England were known as blood brothers.
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Original:  The emissaries of the British King George III and the leaders of the Jamaican Maroons reportedly drank each other's blood when conducting peace treaties in the 18th century AD.
Revised:  In the 12th century AD the Mongol leaders Yesükhei (father of Temüjin) and Toghrul (later ally of Temüjin) were blood brothers. Temüjin (Genghis Khan) and Jamukha were childhood friends and blood brothers, although Jamukha later betrayed Temüjin. Jamukha refused reconciliation and thus was executed at orders of Temüjin. In Medieval Serbia, his two blood brothers Ivan Kosančić and Milan Topličanin accompanied Miloš Obilić prior to the Battle of Kosovo. In the 18th century AD emissaries of British King George III and the leaders of the Jamaican Maroons reportedly drank each other's blood when conducting peace treaties in the 18th century AD.
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Original:  The emissaries of the British King George III and the leaders of the Jamaican Maroons reportedly drank each other's blood when conducting peace treaties in the 18th century AD. People of Medieval Serbia prior to the Battle of Kosovo, Miloš Obilić was accompanied by his two blood brothers Ivan Kosančić and Milan Topličanin. People of the Serbian Revolution (1804–17): Rebel leader Karađorđe (1762–1817) and commander Milutin Savić (1762–1842);
Revised:  The emissaries of the British King George III and the leaders of the Jamaican Maroons reportedly drank each other's blood when conducting peace treaties . Blood brothers in the Serbian Revolution (1804–17): Rebel leader Karađorđe (1762–1817) and commander Milutin Savić (1762–1842);
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Original:  Samoan professional wrestler "High Chief" Peter Maivia was considered a blood brother of Amituanai Anoa'i, the father of the fellow professional wrestlers Afa and Sika Anoa'i, who are better known as the Wild Samoans , thus the Anoa'i family regard the Maivia line from him on forward as an extension of their own clan.
Revised:  In the Greek War of Independence (1821–30), Greek Nikolaos Kriezotis and Montenegrin Vaso Brajević were said to be blood brothers. Samoan wrestler "High Chief" Peter Maivia was considered a blood brother of Amituanai Anoa'i, the father of the fellow professional wrestlers Afa and Sika Anoa'i, who are better known as the Wild Samoans , thus the Anoa'i family regard the Maivia line from him on forward as an extension of their own clan.
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