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Original: A recently released report written by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick ,  and the University of Bristol has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
Revised: A recently released report written by people from the Royal Veterinary college, the University of Warwick , and the has found that 27.6\% of chickens reared for human consumption struggle to walk, although a "considerable variation in walking ability between flocks," was reported.
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Original:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented." 
Revised:  and that "Since the sustainability of intensive broiler production depends on continued consumer acceptance of the farming practices involved, the broiler industry will need to work with the scientific community to develop more robust and healthier genotypes and to ensure that optimal husbandry and management practices are fully implemented." Sister links
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Original:  US Secretary of State Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Straw On May 18th, 2005, US Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Jack Straw were questioned on the memo, during live coverage of a joint US-UK conference, aired on Sky News:
Revised:  US Secretary of State Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Straw On May 18th, 2005, US Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice and UK Foreign Secretary Jack Straw were questioned on the memo, during live coverage of a joint US-UK conference, aired on Sky News:
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Original:  Twenty minutes later, NIU announced the cancellation of all classes for the remainder of the evening, and 10 minutes after that announcement, NIU officials confirmed there had been a shooting and that emergency personnel were handling the situation.
Revised:  Twenty minutes later, NIU announced the cancellation of all classes for the remainder of the evening, and ten minutes after that announcement, NIU officials confirmed there had been a shooting and that emergency personnel were handling the situation.
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Original:  Destroying the satellite on the grounds of safety is the stated purpose of shooting down the satellite , however claims that it is to prevent secrets that the satellite is carrying from falling into the wrong hands, or that it is a demonstration in response to a Chinese ASAT test in January 2007.
Revised:  Destroying the satellite on the grounds of safety is the stated purpose of shooting down the satellite . Officials have denied claims that it is to prevent secrets that the satellite is carrying from falling into the wrong hands, or that it is a demonstration in response to a Chinese ASAT test in January 2007.
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Original:  He stated that the candidate's Pro-Choice position on abortion contradicts the religion's rejection of the practice and added that her "positions against the teachings of the church and life issues" should deem her ineligible for a campaign visit.
Revised:  He stated that the candidate's pro-choice position on abortion contradicts the religion's rejection of the practice and added that her "positions against the teachings of the church and life issues" should deem her ineligible for a campaign visit.
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Original: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa   
Revised: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Lake Kivu, which is on the border between the Democratic Republic of Congo (DRC) and Rwanda, has been hit by an earthquake that measured 5.4 on the Richter Scale. This earthquake is the third to hit the area this month and follows an earthquake that took place 11 days ago and killed almost 40 people. 
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Original: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa   
Revised: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa "Some houses have collapsed and there are injuries, but I do not yet have the details," said the mayor of the city on the DRC side of the border. "A lot of people left their homes during the night," he said. The area is on the East African Rift System, which is what causes the earthquake to form. The mayor of the town on the Rwandan side of the border said, "The houses that came down are mainly those devastated by the February 3 earthquake." 
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Original: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa   
Revised: yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa This Earthquake has a lower magnitude than the two previous earthquakes, which measured 6.0 and 7.0 on the Richter scale.
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Original: While Firefox  market share is still increasing in the United States, its growth has slowed down compared to a very rapid increase after its widely reported 1.0 release on November 9, 2004.
Revised: While Firefox 's market share is still increasing in the United States, its growth has slowed down compared to a very rapid increase after its widely reported 1.0 release on November 9, 2004.
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Original:  Brian Gionta would give the Devils a 2 goal lead in the second period, but Atlanta would cut their deficit in half less than a minute later with an Ilya Kovalchuk goal. Todd White would tie the score on a power-play goal.
Revised:  Brian Gionta would give the Devils a 2 goal lead in the second period, but Atlanta would cut their deficit in half less than a minute later with an goal. would tie the score on a power-play goal.
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Original:  The Devils would retake the lead in the third period on a goal by John Madden , but the Thrashers would score on a Marian Hossa goal with 19 seconds left to send the game to overtime.
Revised:  The Devils would retake the lead in the third period on a goal by , but the Thrashers would score on a Marian Hossa goal with 19 seconds left to send the game to overtime.
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Original:  The Devils would retake the lead in the third period on a goal by John Madden , but the Thrashers would score on a Marian Hossa goal with 19 seconds left to send the game to overtime.
Revised:  The Devils would retake the lead in the third period on a goal by John Madden , but the Thrashers would score on a goal with 19 seconds left to send the game to overtime.
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Original:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender Chris Osgood , for the second straight game, with their backup goalie Jim Howard (Dominik Hasek , who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
Revised:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender , for the second straight game, with their backup goalie Jim Howard (Dominik Hasek , who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
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Original:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender Chris Osgood , for the second straight game, with their backup goalie Jim Howard (Dominik Hasek , who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
Revised:  Detroit would then replace their goaltender Chris Osgood , for the second straight game, with their backup goalie ( , who is usually Detroit's backup goaltender is out due to an injured hip flexor).
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Original:  Columbus would answer with a Ron Hainsey goal to put the Jackets back up by 4, a lead that would hold through the rest of the game, and give the Detroit Red Wings, the top ranked team in the NHL, their fifth straight loss.
Revised:  Columbus would answer with a goal to put the Jackets back up by 4, a lead that would hold through the rest of the game, and give the Detroit Red Wings, the top ranked team in the NHL, their fifth straight loss.
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Original:  With Dallas on the power-play in the second period, Stephane Robidas gave the Stars their first lead of the game with a slap-shot from just inside the blue-line that Anaheim goaltender Jean-Sebastien Giguere didn't see coming.
Revised:  With Dallas on the power-play in the second period, gave the Stars their first lead of the game with a slap-shot from just inside the blue-line that Anaheim goaltender Jean-Sebastien Giguere didn't see coming.
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Original:  With Dallas on the power-play in the second period, Stephane Robidas gave the Stars their first lead of the game with a slap-shot from just inside the blue-line that Anaheim goaltender Jean-Sebastien Giguere didn't see coming.
Revised:  With Dallas on the power-play in the second period, Stephane Robidas gave the Stars their first lead of the game with a slap-shot from just inside the blue-line that Anaheim goaltender didn't see coming.
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Original:  Alexander Frolov and Derek Armstrong assisted. Daymond Langkow would tie the score just over a minute later, but Los Angeles would answer with a Brian Boyle goal at 6:02 in the first period, also assisted by Frolov and Armstrong.
Revised:  and assisted. would tie the score just over a minute later, but Los Angeles would answer with a Brian Boyle goal at 6:02 in the first period, also assisted by Frolov and Armstrong.
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Original:  Daymond Langkow would tie the score just over a minute later, but Los Angeles would answer with a Brian Boyle goal at 6:02 in the first period, also assisted by Frolov and Armstrong.
Revised:  Daymond Langkow would tie the score just over a minute later, but Los Angeles would answer with a goal at 6:02 in the first period, also assisted by Frolov and Armstrong.
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Original:  Teddy Purcell scored his first career NHL goal at 8:59 to put the Kings up by 2. Dustin Boyd would cut Los Angeles' lead in half with a Dustin Boyd goal at 12:59.
Revised:  scored his first career NHL goal at 8:59 to put the Kings up by 2. Dustin Boyd would cut Los Angeles' lead in half with a Dustin Boyd goal at 12:59.
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Original:  Teddy Purcell scored his first career NHL goal at 8:59 to put the Kings up by 2. Dustin Boyd would cut Los Angeles' lead in half with a Dustin Boyd goal at 12:59.
Revised:  Teddy Purcell scored his first career NHL goal at 8:59 to put the Kings up by 2. Dustin Boyd would cut Los Angeles' lead in half with a goal at 12:59.
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Original:  Patrick O'Sullivan would score a short-handed goal to increase the Los Angeles lead by 2. Armstrong would increase that lead a few minutes later, which was assisted by Frolov, to give each their 3rd points of the game.
Revised:  would score a short-handed goal to increase the Los Angeles lead by 2. Armstrong would increase that lead a few minutes later, which was assisted by Frolov, to give each their 3rd points of the game.
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Original:  Calgary would answer with a goal by Owen Nolan at 5:15 in the third period, but couldn't come up with more goals, despite outshooting the Kings 25-5 in the third period.
Revised:  Calgary would answer with a goal by at 5:15 in the third period, but couldn't come up with more goals, despite outshooting the Kings 25-5 in the third period.
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Original:  Chris Simon of the New York Islanders skated with his team on Wednesday for the first time since his 30-game suspension for stepping on Pittsburgh's Jarkko Ruutu 's foot on December 15.
Revised:  of the skated with his team on Wednesday for the first time since his 30-game suspension for stepping on Pittsburgh's Jarkko Ruutu 's foot on December 15.
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Original:  Chris Simon of the New York Islanders skated with his team on Wednesday for the first time since his 30-game suspension for stepping on Pittsburgh's Jarkko Ruutu 's foot on December 15.
Revised:  Chris Simon of the New York Islanders skated with his team on Wednesday for the first time since his 30-game suspension for stepping on Pittsburgh's 's foot on December 15.
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Original:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting,  seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
Revised:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participating publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting, seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
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Original:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting,  seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
Revised:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting, and seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
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Original:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting,  seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
Revised:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting, seminar events for different reading populations . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
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Original:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting,  seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several comic fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
Revised:  In the weekend of the 2008 Taipei International Book Exhibition at the Taipei World Trade Center, several participated publishers from Comic Hall (Hall 2) and General Book Hall (TWTC Hall 1) successively held several signing, meeting, seminar events for different reading population . Especially in the Comic Hall, several fans had waited for a long time before the opening hour.
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Original:  Evidently in the Signing Area of Comic Hall, due to several notable Japanese authors came for the signing events, the organizer set the flow limitations for a good signing environment for participants who held the events at the signing area.
Revised:  In the Signing Area of Comic Hall, due to several notable Japanese authors came for the signing events, the organizer set the flow limitations for a good signing environment for participants who held the events at the signing area.
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Original:  Evidently in the Signing Area of Comic Hall, due to several notable Japanese authors came for the signing events, the organizer set the flow limitations for a good signing environment for participants who held the events at the signing area.
Revised:  Evidently in the Signing Area of Comic Hall, due to several notable Japanese authors arriving for the signing events, the organizer set the flow limitations for a good signing environment for participants who held the events at the signing area.
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Original:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans anticipated for some signing events at the Hall 1. After their coming, media and fans showed their passionates at signing events especially in the Cite Publishing booth.
Revised:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans expected some signing events at the Hall 1. After their coming, media and fans showed their passionates at signing events especially in the Cite Publishing booth.
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Original:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans anticipated for some signing events at the Hall 1. After their coming, media and fans showed their passionates at signing events especially in the Cite Publishing booth.
Revised:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans anticipated for some signing events in Hall 1. After their coming, media and fans showed their passionates at signing events especially in the Cite Publishing booth.
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Original:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans anticipated for some signing events at the Hall 1. After their coming, media and fans showed their passionates at signing events especially in the Cite Publishing booth.
Revised:  Not only the Comic Hall, since several entertainers from Taiwan came to the TWTC Hall 1, several media and drama fans anticipated for some signing events at the Hall 1. 
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Original:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
Revised:  With several signing, meeting, and seminar events this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
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Original:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
Revised:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
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Original:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
Revised:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei Lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
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Original:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hal Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
Revised:  With several signing, meeting, seminar events at this weekend, a good weather in Taipei, and the 2008 Taipei lantern Festival held in the Xinyi Shopping Area and Taipei City Hall Square, the TBFF predicted that the peak of visitors will be determined with those events above, weekend hours, and extensions of the opening hour.
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Original: 100px |Václav KlausAfter a second election on Friday Václav Klaus, a center-right conservative  has been re-elected to a five-year term as President of the Czech Republic.
Revised: 120px |Václav KlausAfter a second election on Friday Václav Klaus, a center-right conservative has been re-elected to a five-year term as President of the Czech Republic.
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Original: 100px |Václav KlausAfter a second election on Friday Václav Klaus, a center-right conservative  has been re-elected to a five-year term as President of the Czech Republic.
Revised: 100px |Václav KlausAfter a second election on Friday Václav Klaus, a center-right conservative , has been re-elected to a five-year term as President of the Czech Republic.
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Original: A poll conducted for the ITV television programme, Tonight, to be broadcast on 18 February has shown that 60\% (1,182 for, 775 against) of those polled would prefer the town to be in Scotland, while a poll for The Berwick Advertiser newspaper showed 78\% in favour.
Revised: A poll conducted for the ITV television programme, Tonight, to be broadcast on February 18 has shown that 60\% (1,182 for, 775 against) of those polled would prefer the town to be in Scotland, while a poll for The Berwick Advertiser newspaper showed 78\% in favour.
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Original: Yesterday, Wikinews interviewed Steve Redhead, a Professor of Sports Media and Acting Head of School of Human Movement Studies at in New South Wales, Australia, about the (Matildas), the ( Socceros ) and the current differences between the state of women and men's in Australia.
Revised: Yesterday, Wikinews interviewed Steve Redhead, a Professor of Sports Media and Acting Head of School of Human Movement Studies at in New South Wales, Australia, about the (Matildas), the ( Socceroos ) and the current differences between the state of women and men's in Australia.
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Original: Yesterday, Wikinews interviewed Steve Redhead, a Professor of Sports Media and Acting Head of School of Human Movement Studies at in New South Wales, Australia, about the (Matildas), the (Socceroos) and the current differences between the state of women and men's  in Australia.
Revised: Yesterday, Wikinews interviewed Steve Redhead, a Professor of Sports Media and Acting Head of School of Human Movement Studies at in New South Wales, Australia, about the (Matildas), the (Socceroos) and the current differences between the state of women and men's soccer in Australia.
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