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Original:  The 'war games' have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy program , seen as a risk for the development and proliferation of weapons of mass destruction within the unstable Middle East.
Revised:  The 'war games' have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy programme , seen as a risk for the development and proliferation of weapons of mass destruction within the unstable Middle East.
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Original:  The incident  occurred at around 01:00 UTC today ( 0200 local time) and it involved a lorry and a Ford Mondeo on the A607 road.
Revised:  The incident , involving a lorry and a Ford Mondeo, occurred at around 01:00 UTC today ( 0200 local time) and it involved a lorry and a Ford Mondeo on the A607 road.
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Original:  The driver of the Ford, who was killed in the incident, was a 23-year-old male. In addition to the 23-year-old male, an 18-year-old man, a 19-year old woman and an 18-year-old woman were also killed in the incident.
Revised:  The driver of the Ford, who was killed in the incident, was a 23-year old male. An 18-year old man, 19-year old woman and an 18-year-old woman were also killed in the incident.
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Original:  Forecast Summary Mosture bearing systems are crossing the alpine areas, as the ECL and high in the bight continue to work together to create favourable conditions. There is a series of cold fronts developing around the high , which seem to be pushing north the high. Scattered light snowfalls throughout the week. Thursday should see the emergence of an interesting situation, should the lows force the high south of Tasmania. This could mean at least two weeks of light to moderate snowfall (total 40cm).
Revised:  Forecast Summary A high situated over south western NSW is pushing artic cold fronts south of the Australian continent. This is typically a summer weather system, and is unusual for the high to dominate so far south this far into the southern winter. It does mean that an east-coast low can develop, and feed tropical moisture into the system, however at this stage it appears that precipitaion later in the week will fall as rain, rather than snow.
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Original:  Min: -7°C Max: -1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 13 , July 2005 Snow showers .
Revised:  Min: -7°C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 13 , July 2005 Snow showers .
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Original:  Min: -7°C Max: -1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 13 , July 2005 Snow showers .
Revised:  Min: -7°C Max: -1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 20 , July 2005 Snow showers .
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Original:  Min: -7°C Max: -1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 13 , July 2005 Snow showers .
Revised:  Min: -7°C Max: -1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (8cm) (80\%) Wednesday 13 , July 2005 Cold night, with temperatures rising above freezing after midday .
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Original:  Min: -3 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1600 (6cm) below 1600m at night. (70\%) Thursday 14 , July 2005 Clearing conditions, to a fine day .
Revised:  Min: -3 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : None. Thursday 14 , July 2005 Clearing conditions, to a fine day .
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Original:  Friday 15 , July 2005 Snow arriving mid-morning, snowfall throughout the day. Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
Revised:  Friday 15 , July 2005 Possible snow arriving about the peaks late Friday afternoon. Rain below 1800m Min: -1 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
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Original:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
Revised:  Min: -5 °C Max: 8 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
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Original:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
Revised:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Dusting above 1800m (2cm), rain below (2mm) (20 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
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Original:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day.
Revised:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 23 , July 2005 Snow all day.
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Original:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Snow all day. Min: -4 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1700m (12cm)(70 \%) Continuing snow falls for the next two weeks.
Revised:  Min: -5 °C Max: 1 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1500m (10cm)(80 \%) Saturday 16 , July 2005 Possible morning snow about the peaks. Rain below 1800m. Min: -1 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1700m (12cm)(70 \%) Continuing snow falls for the next two weeks.
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Original:  Min: -4 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1700m (12cm)(70 \%) Continuing snow falls for the next two weeks.
Revised:  Min: -4 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Dusting above 1800m (2cm), rain below (2mm) (30 \%) Continuing snow falls for the next two weeks.
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Original:  Min: -4 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1700m (12cm)(70 \%) Continuing snow falls for the next two weeks.
Revised:  Min: -4 °C Max: 0 °C Precipitation : Snow to 1700m (12cm)(70 \%) Mostly warmer conditions, with rain developing next week, except above 1800m (July 24-29)
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Original:  Rain below 1800m Min: -1°C Max: 8°C Precipitation : Dusting above 1800m (2cm), rain below (2mm) (20\%) Possible morning snow about the peaks.
Revised:  Rain below 1800m Min: -1°C Max: 8°C Precipitation : Dusting above 1800m (2cm), rain below (2mm) (20\%) Image:Weather-Rain-Snow-Sunny-Periods.pngPossible morning snow about the peaks.
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Original:  Image :Weather-Fog-Haze.pngImage:Weather-Rain-Snow-Sunny-Periods.pngCold day, early fog, possible late snow above 1600m.
Revised:  File :Weather-Fog-Haze.pngImage:Weather-Rain-Snow-Sunny-Periods.pngCold day, early fog, possible late snow above 1600m.
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Original:  He said Rove would be willing to talk about the Siegelman case as part of an "informal interview", without a transcript and without taking an oath , much as the president was afraid to testify before the 9/11 Commision in public, under oath, or even on the record!
Revised:  He said Rove would be willing to talk about the Siegelman case as part of an "informal interview", without a transcript and without taking an oath .
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Original:  Rep. Chris Cannon (no relation to Jeff Gannon (R)) , a Republican from Utah, said that "if the majority was serious about getting to the bottom of this issue", they would have accepted Rove's offers to discuss the issue on his terms, informally and without a transcript.
Revised:  Rep. Chris Cannon , a Republican from Utah, said that "if the majority was serious about getting to the bottom of this issue", they would have accepted Rove's offers to discuss the issue on his terms, informally and without a transcript.
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Original:  "The fact that it hasn't is proof that their efforts amount to a partisan stunt," said Cannon . Indeed, 'Rove's dominance of White House and Republican politics, Jeff Gannon's aggressively partisan work and the ease with which he got day passes for the White House press room the past two years make it hard to believe that he wasn't at least implicitly sanctioned by the "boy genius,"' according to CBS News .
Revised:  "The fact that it hasn't is proof that their efforts amount to a partisan stunt," said Cannon .
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Original:  Dow is paying  $78 per share, a 74 percent premium, which makes the agreement worth around $15.3 billion, or $18.8 billion after adjustments are made for assumed debt.
Revised:  Dow is paying US $78 per share, a 74 percent premium, which makes the agreement worth around $15.3 billion, or $18.8 billion after adjustments are made for assumed debt.
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Original:  (Neither the US nor the UK government are disputing the accuracy of the memo.) Petition mainstream media to report on the contents of the memo as it pertains to the Bush Adminstration 's handling of pre-war intelligence, and the controversy surrounding it.
Revised:  (Neither the US nor the UK government are disputing the accuracy of the memo.) Petition mainstream media to report on the contents of the memo as it pertains to the Bush Administration 's handling of pre-war intelligence, and the controversy surrounding it.
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Original:  That blogswarm was on February 17th , and it was fueled by an opinion article in the Wall Street Journal by columnist Peggy Noonan, titled "The Blogs Must Be Crazy".
Revised:  That blogswarm was on February 17 , and it was fueled by an opinion article in the Wall Street Journal by columnist Peggy Noonan, titled "The Blogs Must Be Crazy".
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Original: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Columbia by FARC are now free and are safely in Florida after their rescue by Columbian forces.
Revised: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Colombia by FARC are now free and are safely in Florida after their rescue by Columbian forces.
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Original: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Columbia by FARC are now free and are safely in Florida after their rescue by Columbian forces.
Revised: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Columbia by FARC are now free . They are safely in Florida after their rescue by Columbian forces.
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Original: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Columbia by FARC are now free and are safely in Florida after their rescue by Columbian forces.
Revised: Three American hostages - Marc Gonsalves, Thomas Howes, and Keith Stansell - that were being held in Columbia by FARC are now free and are safely in Florida after their rescue by Colombian forces;
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Original:  In 2006, the fate of HBC was first in doubt when Zucker had bought it for $1.1 billion from another American owner. The businessman wanted to convert The Bay into a more upscale department-store chain. Zucker had also began remodeling the company's Zellers chain to simulate Target Corp. creating wider aisles, expanding outlets, and selling at prices that matched those of Wal-Mart Canada Corp. NRDC plans to introduce up to 15 Lord & Taylor stores in Canada by converting some of HBC's existing properties which include stores such as The Bay, Zellers, and Home Outfitters. Under the deal announced on Wednesday, NRDC will support a newly-established holding corporation, the Hudson's Bay Trading Company with $ 500 million in funding.
Revised:  In 2006, the fate of HBC was first in doubt when Zucker had bought it for $1.1 billion from another American owner. The businessman wanted to convert The Bay into a more upscale department-store chain. Zucker had also begun remodeling the company's Zellers chain to imitate the Target Corporation, creating wider aisles, expanding outlets, and selling at prices that matched those of the Wal-Mart Canada Corporation. NRDC plans to introduce up to 15 Lord & Taylor stores in Canada by converting some of HBC's existing properties, which include stores such as The Bay, Zellers and Home Outfitters. Under the deal announced on Wednesday, NRDC will support a newly-established holding corporation, the Hudson's Bay Trading Company, with $ 500 million in funding.
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Original:  The Battle of Wanat - a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district - began at 4:30  local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
Revised:  The Battle of Wanat , a fight in a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district - began at 4:30 local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
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Original:  The Battle of Wanat - a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district - began at 4:30  local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
Revised:  The Battle of Wanat - a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district , began at 4:30 local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
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Original:  The Battle of Wanat - a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district - began at 4:30  local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
Revised:  The Battle of Wanat - a mountainous village in the Dara-I-Pech district - began at 4:30 am local time (UTC+4:30), just before dawn, with insurgents firing from homes and a mosque in Wanat.
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Original:  "The insurgents went into an adjacent village, drove the villagers out, used their homes and a mosque as a base from which to launch the attack and fire on the outpost," said Mark Laity  a spokesperson for NATO.
Revised:  "The insurgents went into an adjacent village, drove the villagers out, used their homes and a mosque as a base from which to launch the attack and fire on the outpost," said Mark Laity , a spokesperson for NATO.
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Original:  Violent protestors burn a police vehicle as they try to prevent leaders from attending the G8 summit . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
Revised:  Protestors burn a police vehicle as they try to prevent leaders from attending the G8 summit . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
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Original:  Violent protestors burn a police vehicle as they try to prevent leaders from attending the G8 summit . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
Revised:  Violent protestors burn a police vehicle which was abandoned durning a clash with police . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
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Original:  Protestors burn a police vehicle which was abandoned  durning a clash with police . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
Revised:  Protestors burn a police vehicle which was abandoned by police durning a clash with police . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
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Original:  Protestors burn a police vehicle which was abandoned  durning a clash with police . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
Revised:  Protestors burn a police vehicle which was abandoned durning a clash with protestors . Police were accused of organised and premeditated brutality at the Diaz High School which protesters were using as a dormitory during the summit.
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Original:  Others were made to join in chants in praise of Italy's late fascist dictator, Benito Mussolini . Another chant, lauding Chile's Augusto Pinochet, ended: "Death to the Jews."
Revised:  Others were made to join in chants in praise of Italy's late fascist dictator, Benito Mussolini and other antisemitic songs about Chile's Augusto Pinochet, ended: "Death to the Jews."
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Original:   Peter Marks, chief executive of The Co-operative Group, claimed that "this is good news for consumers and for competition in the grocery market, where we will create a stronger fifth player in food and a convenience store chain with unrivalled geographic reach."
Revised:  A high street store run by Somerfield. Peter Marks, chief executive of The Co-operative Group, claimed that "this is good news for consumers and for competition in the grocery market, where we will create a stronger fifth player in food and a convenience store chain with unrivalled geographic reach."
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Original:  and the de facto proliferation of nuclear weapons to non-weapons states under nuclear sharing , in which Belgium, Germany, Italy, the Netherlands and Turkey host nuclear weapons and may, in principle, participate in decisions on using those weapons and participate in the delivery of the weapons to their targets.
Revised:  and the de facto proliferation of nuclear weapons to non-weapons states under , in which Belgium, Germany, Italy, the Netherlands and Turkey host nuclear weapons and may, in principle, participate in decisions on using those weapons and participate in the delivery of the weapons to their targets.
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Original:  and the de facto proliferation of nuclear weapons to non-weapons states under nuclear sharing , in which Belgium, Germany, Italy, the Netherlands and Turkey host nuclear weapons and may, in principle, participate in decisions on using those weapons and participate in the delivery of the weapons to their targets.
Revised:  and the de facto proliferation of nuclear weapons to non-weapons states under nuclear sharing , in which , , , the , and host nuclear weapons and may, in principle, participate in decisions on using those weapons and participate in the delivery of the weapons to their targets.
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Original:  The Malaysian representative, Rastam Mohd Isa, summarised the point of view of the states in the Non-Aligned Movement (NAM), claiming that they had maintained that the three pillars, nuclear disarmament, non-proliferation and the peaceful use of nuclear technology should be approached in a balanced manner and that the Treaty should be fully and non-selectively implemented.
Revised:  The representative, Rastam Mohd Isa, summarised the point of view of the states in the Non-Aligned Movement (NAM), claiming that they had maintained that the three pillars, nuclear disarmament, non-proliferation and the peaceful use of nuclear technology should be approached in a balanced manner and that the Treaty should be fully and non-selectively implemented.
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Original:  The Malaysian representative, Rastam Mohd Isa, summarised the point of view of the states in the Non-Aligned Movement (NAM), claiming that they had maintained that the three pillars, nuclear disarmament, non-proliferation and the peaceful use of nuclear technology should be approached in a balanced manner and that the Treaty should be fully and non-selectively implemented.
Revised:  The Malaysian representative, Rastam Mohd Isa, summarised the point of view of the states in the (NAM), claiming that they had maintained that the three pillars, nuclear disarmament, non-proliferation and the peaceful use of nuclear technology should be approached in a balanced manner and that the Treaty should be fully and non-selectively implemented.
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Original:  The Ukrainian representative, Anatoliy Scherba, judged that the case for non-proliferation rested on the primary objective of the NPT to eliminate all nuclear weapons and, hence, the central importance of article VI and felt that it required from those who did not possess, not to acquire, and for those who possessed, to eliminate.
Revised:  The representative, Anatoliy Scherba, judged that the case for non-proliferation rested on the primary objective of the NPT to eliminate all nuclear weapons and, hence, the central importance of article VI and felt that it required from those who did not possess, not to acquire, and for those who possessed, to eliminate.
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Original:  Ahmed Darwish, the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, Florence Devouard, the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and organization process of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
Revised:  Ahmed Darwish, the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, Florence Devouard, the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and the organization of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
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Original:  Ahmed Darwish , the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, Florence Devouard , the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and the organization of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
Revised:  , the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, Florence Devouard , the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and the organization of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
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Original:  Ahmed Darwish , the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, Florence Devouard , the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and the organization of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
Revised:  Ahmed Darwish , the Egyptian Minister of State for Administrative Development, , the outgoing chair of the Wikimedia Foundation, Mohamed Ibrahim the active lead volunteer, who took the initiative of approaching Bibliotheca Alexandrina to collaborate on the bidding and the organization of Wikimania 2008 along with the enthusiastic local volunteers, and finally Jakob Voss head of the program committee.
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Original:  He claimed that "the security training force [provided by the UK] ... will be support for the Nigerians to be able to have trainers and others who can build up this capacity locally to deal with the problems of lawlessness that exists in the area."
Revised:  He said that "the security training force [provided by the UK] ... will be support for the Nigerians to be able to have trainers and others who can build up this capacity locally to deal with the problems of lawlessness that exists in the area."
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Original:  Wikinews does not know if they followed through with this . Kingsley Adonis Pepple, a local resident  , described the panic on Bonny Island.
Revised:  They did not return as promised, but many in the city of 100,000 took the threat seriously and left . Kingsley Adonis Pepple, a local resident , described the panic on Bonny Island.
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