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Original:  Tianlian-1, also known as Tian Ling 1 and TL-1, a spacecraft tracking and data relay communications satellite, similar in function to the American Tracking Data and Relay Satellites (TDRS), will be used to track and communicate with manned Shenzhou spacecraft in low Earth orbit.
Revised:  Tianlian-1, also known as Tian Ling 1 and TL-1, a spacecraft tracking and data relay communications satellite, similar in function to the American Tracking and Data Relay Satellites (TDRS), will be used to track and communicate with manned Shenzhou spacecraft in low Earth orbit.
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Original: The Long March 3C rocket At 15:35 GMT this afternoon (23:35 local time), the Chinese Long March 3C (CZ-3C) carrier rocket lifted off on its maiden flight, from launch pad 2 at the Xichang Satellite Launch Centre.
Revised: The Long March 3C rocket At 15:35 UTC this afternoon (23:35 local time), the Chinese Long March 3C (CZ-3C) carrier rocket lifted off on its maiden flight, from launch pad 2 at the Xichang Satellite Launch Centre.
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Original:  "2008 PeoPo Citizen Journalism Forum", organized by Public Television Service, PeoPo Citizen Journalism Portal, and Department of Radio, TV, & Film of Shih Hsin University, held yesterday in the auditorium with participation from several bloggers, social workers, elites from mass media industry in Taiwan to prospect the status of citizen journalism in Taiwan.
Revised: 240px|2008 PeoPo Citizen Journalism Forum. "2008 PeoPo Citizen Journalism Forum", organized by Public Television Service, PeoPo Citizen Journalism Portal, and Department of Radio, TV, & Film of Shih Hsin University, held yesterday in the auditorium with participation from several bloggers, social workers, elites from mass media industry in Taiwan to prospect the status of citizen journalism in Taiwan.
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Original:   In the opening topic of "Questions from the citizens in the official debate of '2008 Taiwan Presidential Election': General Overview", Feng-chia Chuang, Deputy Editor-in-chief of Central News Agency, described several kernel issues on sectors like background, political approaches of questioners, topics and views of questions suspected by media in Taiwan.
Revised:  240px|Opening Executive Panel related to "2008 Taiwan Presidential Election". In the opening topic of "Questions from the citizens in the official debate of '2008 Taiwan Presidential Election': General Overview", Feng-chia Chuang, Deputy Editor-in-chief of Central News Agency, described several kernel issues on sectors like background, political approaches of questioners, topics and views of questions suspected by media in Taiwan.
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Original:   In the next 3 topics related to citizen journalism on "community development", "citizen journalism in Taiwan", and "burgeoning and rising next media", lecturers described some examples from local citizen journalists' participation on several key social incidents like "2000 Pachang Creek Incident (in Chinese: 八掌溪事件)", "Planning Argument of Losheng Sanatorium (in Chinese: 樂生療養院爭議)", and "Homelessness in Taiwan" ,
Revised:  Po-ru Chen, Executive Officer of Chia-yi Community University, talked about topic related to "2000 Pachang Creek Incident". In the next 3 topics related to citizen journalism on "community development", "citizen journalism in Taiwan", and "burgeoning and rising next media", lecturers described some examples from local citizen journalists' participation on several key social incidents like "2000 Pachang Creek Incident (in Chinese: 八掌溪事件)", "Planning Argument of Losheng Sanatorium (in Chinese: 樂生療養院爭議)", and "Homelessness in Taiwan" ,
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Original:   In the next 3 topics related to citizen journalism on "community development", "citizen journalism in Taiwan", and "burgeoning and rising next media", lecturers described some examples from local citizen journalists' participation on several key social incidents like "2000 Pachang Creek Incident (in Chinese: 八掌溪事件)", "Planning Argument of Losheng Sanatorium (in Chinese: 樂生療養院爭議)", and "Homelessness in Taiwan" ,
Revised:  In the next 3 topics related to citizen journalism on "community development", "citizen journalism in Taiwan", and "burgeoning and rising next media", lecturers described some examples from local citizen journalists' participation on several key social incidents like "2000 Pachang Creek Incident (in Chinese: 八掌溪事件)", "Planning Argument of Losheng Sanatorium (in Chinese: 樂生療養院爭議)", and "Homelessness in Taiwan" .
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Original:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA),  regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site .
Revised:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site .
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Original:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA),  regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site .
Revised:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on the site .
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Original:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA),  regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on the site .
Revised:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), regarding an attempt by the organization to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself. The IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article in two separate instances .
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Original:  The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.
Revised:  In two separate instances, the IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself.
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Original:  The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on Wikipedia itself. The IP address from the DOJ removed information from the Wikipedia article in two separate instances .
Revised:  The article was about the organization Committee for Accuracy in Middle East Reporting in America (CAMERA), and the information removed was regarding an attempt by CAMERA to secretly gain influence on the site .
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Original: 240px|"RoboScooter", the next-generation concept vehicle with energy-efficiency and creation features. At the Pavilion of Taiwan Automotive Research Consortium during the AutoTronics Taipei 2008, in Taipei Time, the Next Consortium of Industrial Technology Research Institute (ITRI) unveiled a brand-new environmental-concept vehicle named "RoboScooter". It was jointly designed by the Creativity Lab of ITRI, SYM Motors, and the Media Lab of Massachusetts Institute of Technology. This announcement was approved by industrial, governmental, and academical executives, but not just in Taiwan.
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Original:  As of this sector, Wen-jean Hsueh (ITRI Creativity Lab General Director) hoped companies could do proper transformations on its R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D nature from "Made in Taiwan" to "Created in Taiwan" for best practice.
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Original:  As of this sector, Wen-jean Hsueh (ITRI Creativity Lab General Director) hoped companies could do proper transformations on its R%DIFDELCMD < &%%% D nature from "Made in Taiwan" to "Created in Taiwan" for best practice. This not only echoed "OBM" theory discussed at 2007 Taiwan Brands' Trend Forum but also blended with a key element of production - "creativity".
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Original:  On the other side of SYM Motors, to solve the transportation problem for TWTC Nangang, SYM Motors Taiwan imported manufacturing technology from Kinglong Bus Co., Ltd. to manufacture several 4th-cycle low floor buses and sell them to Chung-hsing Bus Co., Ltd. and Kwang-huang Bus Co., Ltd. In this launch, the SYM Motors Taiwan hope this vehicle is energy-efficiency, easily-parked, and has creative functions which can improve the transportation habits of individuals.
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Original:  The event was also an occasion to celebrate the tenth anniversary of Microsoft Research Asia, with the division's president, Hsiao-wn Hung who was praised by several media groups, IT executives, and academic units because of his background.
Revised:  The event was also an occasion to celebrate the tenth anniversary of Microsoft Research Asia, with the president, Hsiao-wen Hung, who was praised by several media groups, IT executives, and academic units because of his background.
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Original:  Wednesday morning, an estimated 70 members of the organization padlocked the eight entrances of the palace, once the home of the Hawaiian monarchy, preventing 28 employees and 24 volunteers from entering.
Revised:  Wednesday morning, an estimated 70 members of the organization padlocked the eight entrances of the palace, once the home of the Hawaiian monarchy, and peacefully occupied the property for about eight hours. Several dozen employees, volunteers and tourists were prevented from entering.
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Original:  Honolulu police are expected to serve arrest warrants, which the group said they would cooperate with. ' We will not resist, we won't fight, we won't be aggressive.
Revised:  The protest ended peacefully by 2 p.m. following negotiations with the state Department of Land and Natural Resources. No arrests were made, though the group vowed to return in the morning. We will not resist, we won't fight, we won't be aggressive.
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Original:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
Revised:  WiMAX is being promoted in Taiwan by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
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Original:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
Revised:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
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Original:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
Revised:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China . It is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
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Original:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the next generation in mobile devices.
Revised:  WiMAX , which is a communication standard is mainly promoted by the Taipei Computer Association, in addition to the Industrial Technology Research Institute and the Ministry of Economic Affairs of the Republic of China , is considered by some to be the communication standard for the next generation of mobile devices.
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Original:  Although some (security) companies analyzed statistics on potential issues to dispute the future of WiMAX, but the question is how will they present their analysis? With opportunities from  two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
Revised:  Some companies have analyzed potential security issues which threaten the success of WiMAX. But what have they found? two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
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Original:  With opportunities from  two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
Revised:  With opportunities from Taking the opportunity of two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
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Original:  With opportunities from  two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly and successively interviewed Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
Revised:  With opportunities from two press conferences in Taiwan, Wikinews Journalist Rico Shen briefly interviewed both Hsiao-wen Hung, President of Microsoft Research Asia and Li Chang, Deputy Secretary General of Taipei Computer Association.
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Original:  Prior to the  (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
Revised:  Prior to the launch of (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
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Original:  Prior to the  (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
Revised:  Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) ... although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
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Original:  Prior to the  (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
Revised:  Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring about growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
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