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Original:  Prior to the  (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
Revised:  Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, its future has been questioned by some companies from information security industry.
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Original:  Prior to the  (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies from information security industry.
Revised:  Prior to the (Visual Studio 2008 and Windows Server 2008) launch, although WiMAX, a next-generation networking technology, will bring on the growth of mobile users, but its future was ever disputed by some companies in the information security industry.
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Original:  That's why the security is a must-have trend in reality. As of information securitywhat you mentioned about before , relatively, if a newly-proposed future technology wasn't normally populated, it's a golden opportunity for companies when some security companies properly disputed on its future.
Revised:  That's why the security is a must-have thing. As for information security, as you mentioned earlier , relatively, if a newly-proposed future technology wasn't normally populated, it's a golden opportunity for companies when some security companies properly disputed on its future.
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Original:  Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip) What's your opinion on several disputes from IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?
Revised:  Li Chang: Convergences will be brought for security and IT industries besides of changes on WiMAX. (Interview audio clip) What's your opinion on issues raised by IS companies during the "2008 Asia-pacific Information Security Forum"?
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Original:  Chang: Our member companies will do attempts on trend-changing. As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
Revised:  Chang: Our member companies will attempt to change the trend. As for our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
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Original:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
Revised:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufacture notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
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Original:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
Revised:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus is established among senior executives in the IT industry , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
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Original:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
Revised:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objectives of Taipei Computer Association will be more and more cleared .
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Original:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more cleared .
Revised:  As of our board committee, because (our member) companies mostly manufactured notebook computers, if a common consensus from several senior officers from IT industrywill be established , I think the objects of TCA will be more and more clear .
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Original:  What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.
Revised:  What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's statement: "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.
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Original:  What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protections should be necessity "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.
Revised:  What's your opinion on Hsiao-wen Hung's word, "When people want to enjoy a new technology, some protection is necessary "? Chang: It's an undoubted truth.
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Original:  As the Internet just began in a mature infrastructure, the public might not know its critical issue on security factor. As of WiMAX which you mentioned, even though it's under development, but you will not imagine what it will happen in the future.
Revised:  As the Internet just began in a mature infrastructure, the public might not know how critical security issues are. As for WiMAX, which you mentioned, even though it's under development, but you will not imagine what it will happen in the future.
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Original: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick the opponent in the first semifinal .
Revised: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick their opponent in the first semifinal .
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Original: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick the opponent in the first semifinal .
Revised: OSC was the favourite to take the gold this weekend, as they had already won league play with a comfortable lead over København Squash Klub (KSK), and therefore had home court and could pick the opponent in the first semi-final .
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Original:  During the other semi, the favoured professionals from KSK, ran in to serious problems,  injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi.
Revised:  During the other semi, the favoured professionals from KSK, ran in to serious problems, as injured star player Alex Stait was not able to play for KSK giving the young Herlev team a chance in this semi.
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Original:  After 5 matches and down by two matches, Mikkel Kragholm (Herlev) and Thomas Pilak (Herlev) became double match winners when they each beat their opponent by 3-0 and 3-1, winning the match 4-3 for Herlev.
Revised:  After 5 matches and down by two matches, Mikkel Kragholm (Herlev) and Thomas Pilak (Herlev) became double match winners when they each beat their opponents by 3-0 and 3-1, winning the match 4-3 for Herlev.
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Original:  Bush then claimed success with food aid in the past . He claimed that the US  " have been the leader for providing food to those who are going without in the past, and we will continue to be the leader around the world."
Revised:  Bush then claimed success with food aid in the past had been successful; he claimed that the US " have been the leader for providing food to those who are going without in the past, and we will continue to be the leader around the world."
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Original:  Bush then claimed that the US are "also working toward the conclusion of a successful Doha agreement that will reduce and eliminates tariffs and other barriers, as well as market-distorting subsidies for agricultural goods."
Revised:  Furthermore, he stated that the US are "also working toward the conclusion of a successful Doha agreement that will reduce and eliminates tariffs and other barriers, as well as market-distorting subsidies for agricultural goods."
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Original:  Bush then claimed that the US are "also working toward the conclusion of a successful Doha agreement that will reduce and eliminates tariffs and other barriers, as well as market-distorting subsidies for agricultural goods."
Revised:  Bush then claimed that the US is "also working toward the conclusion of a successful Doha agreement that will reduce and eliminates tariffs and other barriers, as well as market-distorting subsidies for agricultural goods."
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Original: Organizing the show is considered a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology" will be re-arranged to host trendy and energy-efficient products launched prior to this show.
Revised: Organizing the show and promoting the ICT industry are considered as major tasks by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology" will be re-arranged to host trendy and energy-efficient products launched prior to this show.
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Original:  The United States congratulated Israel on the move and a State Department Deputy Spokeswoman, Marie Harf, told  the Secretary of State,  , expressed "his appreciation for Prime Minister Netanyahu's decision to release the third tranche of prisoners [...] The Israeli government's commitment to release Palestinian prisoners helped enable the start [...] and the continuation of the final status negotiations, and we believe this is a positive step forward in the overall process".
Revised:  The United States congratulated Israel on the move and a State Department Deputy Spokeswoman, Marie Harf, told Al Jazeera the Secretary of State, , expressed "his appreciation for Prime Minister Netanyahu's decision to release the third tranche of prisoners [...] The Israeli government's commitment to release Palestinian prisoners helped enable the start [...] and the continuation of the final status negotiations, and we believe this is a positive step forward in the overall process".
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Original:  The United States congratulated Israel on the move and a State Department Deputy Spokeswoman, Marie Harf, told  the Secretary of State,  , expressed "his appreciation for Prime Minister Netanyahu's decision to release the third tranche of prisoners [...] The Israeli government's commitment to release Palestinian prisoners helped enable the start [...] and the continuation of the final status negotiations, and we believe this is a positive step forward in the overall process".
Revised:  The United States congratulated Israel on the move and a State Department Deputy Spokeswoman, Marie Harf, told the Secretary of State, John Kerry , expressed "his appreciation for Prime Minister Netanyahu's decision to release the third tranche of prisoners [...] The Israeli government's commitment to release Palestinian prisoners helped enable the start [...] and the continuation of the final status negotiations, and we believe this is a positive step forward in the overall process".
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Original:  The hoax first appeared two weeks ago and was spread rapidly, when a journalist found a model of Asian origin aimed at adult collecters in a specialist shop in Kiev , and misrepresented the find by failing to give basic details of the facts of the case when he publicised his find.
Revised:  The hoax first appeared two weeks ago and was spread rapidly, when a journalist found a model of Asian origin aimed at adult collecters in a specialist shop in , and misrepresented the find by failing to give basic details of the facts of the case when he publicised his find.
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Original:  The $1 trifecta (20-5-16) paid a healthy $1,722.80 with 27-1 shot Denis of Cork, and the $ 1 superfecta (20-5-16-2) paid a very respectable $29,368.90 with 37-1 shot Tale of Ekati.
Revised:  The $1 trifecta (20-5-16) paid a healthy $1,722.80 with 13-1 shot Denis of Cork, and the $ 1 superfecta (20-5-16-2) paid a very respectable $29,368.90 with 37-1 shot Tale of Ekati.
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Original: At least 22 ,000 people are dead and another 41 ,000 are missing after Cyclone Nargis hit the country of Myanmar, according to Foreign Minister Nyan Win, who spoke on state television.
Revised: At least 10 ,000 people are dead and another 41 ,000 are missing after Cyclone Nargis hit the country of Myanmar, according to Foreign Minister Nyan Win, who spoke on state television.
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Original: At least 22 ,000 people are dead and another 41 ,000 are missing after Cyclone Nargis hit the country of Myanmar, according to Foreign Minister Nyan Win, who spoke on state television.
Revised: At least 22 ,000 people are dead and another 3 ,000 are missing after Cyclone Nargis hit the country of Myanmar, according to Foreign Minister Nyan Win, who spoke on state television.
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Original:  According to eyewitnesses, four explosions were heard before the police raided the house, producing green light and shattering glass, suggesting the police made use of 'flashbang' grenades to attempt to subdue Colonel Sanders before he was fatally wounded.
Revised:  According to eyewitnesses, four explosions were heard before the police raided the house, producing green light and shattering glass, suggesting the police made use of 'flashbang' grenades to attempt to subdue Mr. Saunders before he was fatally wounded.
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Original:  Barack Obama The Associated Press declared Barack Obama the winner in the North Carolina Democratic primary, based on exit-polling data, and CNN has also projected that Obama will win the North Carolina primary and take the majority of its 115 delegates.
Revised:  Barack Obama The Associated Press declared Barack Obama the winner in the North Carolina Democratic primary, based on exit-polling data, and has also projected that Obama will win the North Carolina primary and take the majority of its 115 delegates.
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Original:   Major Peggy Kageleiry, a spokesperson for the US forces in Iraq, said "neither coalition forces nor Iraqi security forces detained or killed Abu Ayyub al-Masri.
Revised:  U.S. State Department file photo of Al-Masri. Major Peggy Kageleiry, a spokesperson for the US forces in Iraq, said "neither coalition forces nor Iraqi security forces detained or killed Abu Ayyub al-Masri.
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Original:  The businessmen were flying in conection to a propsed luxury housing develpment at the Bahia town of Ilheus, whose airport the plane had been a few kilometres away from and intending to land.
Revised:  The businessmen were flying in connection to a propsed luxury housing develpment at the Bahia town of Ilheus, whose airport the plane had been a few kilometres away from and intending to land.
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Original:  The businessmen were flying in conection to a propsed luxury housing develpment at the Bahia town of Ilheus, whose airport the plane had been a few kilometres away from and intending to land.
Revised:  The businessmen were flying in conection to a propsed luxury housing development at the Bahia town of Ilheus, whose airport the plane had been a few kilometres away from and intending to land.
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Original: London Millennium Dome Anschutz Entertainment Group (AEG) and mobile phone company O2 have said they intend opening London's Millennium Dome as a concert arena in April 2007.
Revised: London Millennium Dome Anschutz Entertainment Group (AEG) and mobile phone company O2 have said they intend to open London's Millennium Dome as a concert arena in April 2007.
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Original:  Causes The head of Minpromenergo (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the State Duma , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of Mosenergo named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
Revised:  Causes The head of (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the State Duma , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of Mosenergo named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
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Original:  Causes The head of Minpromenergo (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the State Duma , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of Mosenergo named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
Revised:  Causes The head of Minpromenergo (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of Mosenergo named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
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Original:  Causes The head of Minpromenergo (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the State Duma , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of Mosenergo named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
Revised:  Causes The head of Minpromenergo (Ministry of Industries and Energy) Victor Hristenko, addressing to the deputies of the State Duma , has declared that the cause of failure of the electrical system was in the Central region of Russia because of a fire and an explosion on the substation of named "Chagino", located in Kapotnya.
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Original: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM CEST (UTC+2 ) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil .
Revised: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM ( ) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil .
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Original: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM CEST (UTC+2 ) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil .
Revised: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM CEST (UTC+2 ) in the town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil .
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Original: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM CEST (UTC+2 ) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police Guardia Civil .
Revised: A car bomb car exploded today at 3:00 AM CEST (UTC+2 ) in the Basque town of Legutiano, near the barracks of the Spanish paramilitary police .
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Original:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
Revised:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said of the , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
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Original:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
Revised:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
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Original:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
Revised:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
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Original:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when Isaías Carrasco was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
Revised:  I express my condolences to the families of the victims," said José Antonio Alonso of the Socialist Workers' Party , the majority leader in the Cortes Generales , while speaking on Cadena SER . This would be the first fatal action carried out by ETA since Spain's general election two months ago, when was killed on the final day of official campaigning.
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Original:  The Queen in 2007Her Majesty continued, "here in 1971, I remarked on the tremendous achievement of Mustafa Kemal Atatürk in guiding this country of rich and ancient traditions along a course towards a modern, enlightened and democratic state."
Revised:  The Queen in 2007 Her Majesty continued, "here in 1971, I remarked on the tremendous achievement of Mustafa Kemal Atatürk in guiding this country of rich and ancient traditions along a course towards a modern, enlightened and democratic state."
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Original:  The Queen in 2007Her Majesty continued, "here in 1971, I remarked on the tremendous achievement of Mustafa Kemal Atatürk in guiding this country of rich and ancient traditions along a course towards a modern, enlightened and democratic state."
Revised:  The Queen in 2007Her Majesty continued, "here in 1971, I remarked on the tremendous achievement of in guiding this country of rich and ancient traditions along a course towards a modern, enlightened and democratic state."
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