wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  They suggested that the Now Print! theory allowed for the encoding of atypical and novel events . “The mechanism is activated when a given event occurs unexpectedly and has biologically significant consequences for individual’s lives so that people are ready to recognize similar events in the future,” (Lanciano, Curci & Semin, 2010).
Revised:  They suggested that the Now Print! theory delivered an evolutionary advantage by giving rise to very specific and durable memories of events of high personal consequence. Such memories might be used vicariously in preparing effective avoidance and approach strategies and so aid in survival. “The mechanism is activated when a given event occurs unexpectedly and has biologically significant consequences for individual’s lives so that people are ready to recognize similar events in the future,” (Lanciano, Curci & Semin, 2010).
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Original:  Furthermore, McCloskey states that for a human to have survived biologically significant and unexpected events were saved neurologically not the circumstances of the event. Having specific event memories at vivid close recall prepares an individual to react and continue survival. The “Now print!” mechanism i.e., the special flashbulb memory mechanism%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% must have evolved because of the selection value of permanently retaining biologically crucial, but unexpected events.
Revised:  i.e., the special flashbulb memory mechanism%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% must have evolved because of the selection value of permanently retaining biologically crucial, but unexpected events.
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Original:  The “Now print!” mechanism i.e., the special flashbulb memory mechanism%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% must have evolved because of the selection value of permanently retaining biologically crucial, but unexpected events. The same “Now print!” mechanism accounts both for the enduring significant memories in which one has played the role of protagonist and those in which one has only been a member of an interested audience of millions. (Brown Kulik, 1977, pp. 97–99).
Revised:  The “Now print!” mechanism i.e., the special flashbulb memory mechanism%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Kulik, 1977, pp. 97–99).
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Original:  (Brown Kulik, 1977, pp. 97–99). Brown%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Kulik proposed that the “Now Print!” theory delivered an evolutionary advantage by giving rise to very specific and durable memories of events of high personal consequence.
Revised:  (Brown %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Kulik proposed that the “Now Print!” theory delivered an evolutionary advantage by giving rise to very specific and durable memories of events of high personal consequence.
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Original:  Neisser (2000) explains that most memories that become flashbulbs do not obtain their significance immediately (like the hypothesis suggests) but instead only later with rehearsal and repetition through interactions with other people or personal reflection on an event.
Revised:  Neisser (2000) explains that most memories that become flashbulbs do not obtain their significance immediately , but instead only later with rehearsal and repetition through interactions with other people or personal reflection on an event.
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Original: Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has programs in a variety of countries around the world, including Botswana, Pakistan, Thailand, and Peru .
Revised: Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia, the Middle East, and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom, and the United States .
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Original:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
Revised:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning " Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
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Original:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
Revised:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative " based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
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Original:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
Revised:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and self-directed learning methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
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Original:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
Revised:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as female empowerment including gender equity ;
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Original:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ;
Revised:  They partner with local organizations to implement their award-winning ' Hat-Trick Initiative ' based on their Chance to Choice philosophy and Self-Directed Learning Methodology that focuses on local social issues such as : female empowerment including gender equity ,
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Original:  In 2016  Coaches Across Continents worked with 90 communities in 28 countries, developing local community leaders on sport for development skills to positively impact and educate their youth.
Revised:  In 2016 , Coaches Across Continents worked with 90 communities in 28 countries, developing local community leaders on sport for development skills to positively impact and educate their youth.
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Original:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball . "  There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank , and Cyprus.
Revised:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball " There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank , and Cyprus.
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Original:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball . "  There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank , and Cyprus.
Revised:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball . " . There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank , and Cyprus.
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Original:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball . "  There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank , and Cyprus.
Revised:  Peace Players International Peace Players International has been working for almost a decade "to unite, educate and inspire young people in divided communities through basketball . " There are 52,000 children involved in South Africa, Northern Ireland, Israel and the West Bank and Cyprus.
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Original:  Magic Bus India Foundation Magic Bus India Foundation is an organisation that works with 300,000 children and 8,000 volunteers using a sport for development curriculum the organisation has developed over 15 years of working in India's slums and villages.
Revised:  Magic Bus India Foundation Magic Bus India Foundation is an organization that works with 300,000 children and 8,000 volunteers using a sport for development curriculum the organisation has developed over 15 years of working in India's slums and villages.
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Original:  The organisation foster young adults who they call Community Youth Leaders to deliver the programme and to become role models and mentors for the URL Both the young adults and children come from the same communities, so that a close and constant relationship is built.
Revised:  The organisation fosters young adults who they call Community Youth Leaders to deliver the programme and to become role models and mentors for the URL Both the young adults and children come from the same communities, so that a close and constant relationship is built.
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Original:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia , the Middle East , and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom , and the United States.
Revised:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia and the Middle East , and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom , and the United States.
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Original:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia , the Middle East , and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom , and the United States.
Revised:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia , the Middle East with national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom , and the United States.
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Original:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia , the Middle East , and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom , and the United States.
Revised:  URL Right to Play Right to Play is an international organization that has various programs in 15 countries across Africa, Asia , the Middle East , and has national offices in Canada, Germany, Norway, the Netherlands, Switzerland, the United Kingdom and the United States.
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Original:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya  on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
Revised:  It works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
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Original:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya  on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
Revised:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4,000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
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Original:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya  on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
Revised:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 and 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
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Original:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya  on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
Revised:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya , on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
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Original:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya  on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in Coastal rural Kenya.
Revised:  Moving the Goalposts works annual with more than 4000 girls between the ages of 9 – 25 years in rural communities in Kilifi County, Kenya on issues such as school drop out, teenage pregnancies, early marriages and gender equality in coastal rural Kenya.
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Original:  MTG's interventions are mobilization of girls and young women in football leagues and tournaments, leadership development for girls, peer education on sexual reproductive health and rights, advocacy within communities and cooperation with parents and stakeholders, and educational support and economic empowerment.
Revised:  MTG's interventions are mobilization of girls and young women in football leagues and tournaments, leadership development for girls, peer education on sexual reproductive health and rights, advocacy within communities and co-operation with parents and stakeholders, and educational support and economic empowerment.
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Original:  In Muslim countries which are re-imposing sharia law, mixed bathing is being banned. For example, after Hamas took over the Gaza Strip, it closed down the Crazy Water Park, one of the Gaza Strip's most popular entertainment sites, for allowing mixed bathing .Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
Revised:  In Muslim countries which are re-imposing sharia law, mixed bathing is banned .Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
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Original:  In Muslim countries generally mixed bathing is banned . Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
Revised:  In Muslim countries which are re-imposing sharia law, mixed bathing is banned . Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
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Original:  In Muslim countries generally mixed bathing is banned . Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
Revised:  In Muslim countries generally mixed bathing is being banned. For example, after Hamas took over the Gaza Strip, it closed down the Crazy Water Park, one of the Gaza Strip's most popular entertainment sites, for allowing mixed bathing . Strict Orthodox Jews, Muslims, and fundamentalist Christians in the Southern United States (e.g., Southwide Baptist Fellowship and Methodist denominations that teach the doctrine of outward holiness, such as the Evangelical Wesleyan Church) do not engage in mixed bathing.
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Original:  From there, it spread to The Economist where it was used to describe managerial positions and to a book by John Spencer, named English Language in West Africa  , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
Revised:  It was used in The Economist in 1962 to describe managerial positions and to a book by John Spencer, named English Language in West Africa , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
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Original:  From there, it spread to The Economist where it was used to describe managerial positions and to a book by John Spencer, named English Language in West Africa  , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
Revised:  From there, it spread to The Economist where it was used to describe managerial positions and in the 1971 book English Language in West Africa , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
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Original:  From there, it spread to The Economist where it was used to describe managerial positions and to a book by John Spencer, named English Language in West Africa  , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
Revised:  From there, it spread to The Economist where it was used to describe managerial positions and to a book by John Spencer, named English Language in West Africa by John Spencer , where it was used to describe the adoption of English.
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Original:  See also Indigenism Indigenismo Glocalization Westernization Language localisation Cultural homogenization Americanization Africanization Angolanidade Zairianisation Korenizatsiya Nation-building
Revised:  See also Indigenism Indigenismo Westernization Language localisation Cultural homogenization Americanization Africanization Angolanidade Zairianisation Korenizatsiya Nation-building
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Original:  See also Indigenism Indigenismo Glocalization Westernization Language localisation Cultural homogenization Americanization Africanization Angolanidade Zairianisation Korenizatsiya Nation-building
Revised:  See also Indigenism Indigenismo Glocalization Westernization Language localisation Cultural homogenization Angolanidade Zairianisation Korenizatsiya Nation-building
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Original:  However, some argue that while the indigenization of social work may work when it comes to foreigners being brought into Western cultures, it would not work as well  non-Western cultures were those that were being taken in .
Revised:  However, some argue that the indigenization of social work may work when it comes to foreigners being brought into Western cultures, it would not work as well non-Western cultures were those that were being taken in .
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Original:  However, some argue that while the indigenization of social work may work when it comes to foreigners being brought into Western cultures, it would not work as well  non-Western cultures were those that were being taken in .
Revised:  However, some argue that while the indigenization of social work may work when it comes to foreigners being brought into Western cultures, it would not work as well in non-Western cultures were those that were being taken in .
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Original:  It has no formal existence in the Homeric epics, and seems to have developed in the late 7th century BC as an aspect of Greek homosocial culture,Thomas Hubbard, "Pindar's Tenth Olympian and Athlete-Trainer Pederasty,"
Revised:  It has no formal existence in the Homeric epics, and seems to have developed in the late 7th century BCE as an aspect of Greek homosocial culture,Thomas Hubbard, "Pindar's Tenth Olympian and Athlete-Trainer Pederasty,"
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Original:  For example , the Celtic Druid Temple (Ireland), Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered  in their respective countries, hence Druidry being an officially recognised religion in those territories.
Revised:  For example the Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered in their respective countries, hence Druidry being an officially recognised religion in those territories.
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Original:  For example , the Celtic Druid Temple (Ireland), Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered  in their respective countries, hence Druidry being an officially recognised religion in those territories.
Revised:  For example , the Celtic Druid Temple (Ireland), Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered for tax/charitable purposes in their respective countries, hence Druidry being an officially recognised religion in those territories.
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Original:  For example the Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered for tax/charitable purposes in their respective countries , hence Druidry being an officially recognised religion in those territories .
Revised:  For example the Assembleia da Tradição Druídica Lusitana (Portugal), Orden Druida Fintan (Catalonia) or Irmandade Druídica Galaica (Galicia and Northern Portugal) are legally registered for tax/charitable purposes in their respective countries .
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Original:  Retrieved 4 January 2019. charity Groups such as ODF, IDG and ATDL differ from other Druidic orders as they do observe dogma and stricter core tenets in their approach to Druidry.
Revised:  Retrieved 4 January 2019. Charity groups such as ODF, IDG and ATDL differ from other Druidic orders as they do observe dogma and stricter core tenets in their approach to Druidry.
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