wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows :  Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) / (Gradient factor x 100) This gradient factor ranges between 2.6 for a gradient of 6\% and 3.1 for a gradient of 11\%.
Revised: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows : With g = 9.81 m/s2, this is equivalent to Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) / (Gradient factor x 100) This gradient factor ranges between 2.6 for a gradient of 6\% and 3.1 for a gradient of 11\%.
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Original: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows :  Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) / (Gradient factor x 100) This gradient factor ranges between 2.6 for a gradient of 6\% and 3.1 for a gradient of 11\%.
Revised: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows : Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) VAM (metres/hour) / 367 This gradient factor ranges between 2.6 for a gradient of 6\% and 3.1 for a gradient of 11\%.
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Original: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows :  Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) / (Gradient factor x 100) This gradient factor ranges between 2.6 for a gradient of 6\% and 3.1 for a gradient of 11\%. To work out the gradient factor take 2 + (\% grade  /  10  )
Revised: The relationship between VAM and relative power output is expressed as follows : Relative power (Watts/kg) = VAM (metres/hour) / (Gradient factor x 100) Including the power necessary for the extra mass and dissipated by friction leads to a lower number in the denominator. An empirical relationship is / 10 )
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Original: Nutri-Score  Nutri-Score is a nutrition label  recommended by the European Commission and WHO  .
Revised: Nutri-Score Nutri-Score is a nutrition label recommended by the European Commission and World Health Organization. It is a 5-color nutrition label selected by the French government in March 2017 for display on food products to facilitate consumer understanding of nutrient composition. It relies on the computation of a nutrient profiling system derived from the United Kingdom Food Standards Agency score. .
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Original: Nutri-Score  Nutri-Score is a nutrition label  recommended by the European Commission and WHO  .
Revised: Nutri-Score Nutri-Score is a nutrition label recommended by the European Commission and WHO A Nutri-Score for a particular food item is given one of five color-coded letters, with 'A' (enlarged letter, dark green) as a score indicating excellent nutrient composition, and 'E' (dark orange) as a low-rated, nutrient-poor score. The calculation of the score involves seven different parameters of nutrient content per 100 g of food typically displayed on food packages. High content of fruits and vegetables, dietary fiber, and protein promote a higher score, while high content of calories, sugar, saturated fat, and sodium promote a detrimental score .
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Original:  Management of protected farmland Conservation easement is one approach used to manage protected farms.
Revised: Farmland protection Farmland protection refers to programs in the United States, operated mostly at state and local levels by government agencies or private entities such as land trusts, that are designed to limit conversion of agricultural land to other uses that otherwise might have been more financially attractive to the land owner. Every state provides tax relief through differential (preferential) assessment, and has right-to-farm laws. Less common approaches include establishing agricultural districts, using zoning to protect agricultural land,See, for example, Montgomery County, Maryland Agricultural Reserve. purchasing development rights, and transferable development rights. Management of protected farmland Conservation easement is one approach used to manage protected farms.
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Original:  Tumor antigen is an antigenic substance produced in tumor cells, i.e., it triggers an immune response in the host.
Revised: The spectrum of target antigens associated with tumor immunity and allo-immunity after allogeneic hematopoietic stem cell transplantation. Host-derived T and B cells can be induced to recognize tumor-associated antigens, whereas donor-derived B and T cells can recognize both tumor-associated antigens and alloantigens. Tumor antigen is an antigenic substance produced in tumor cells, i.e., it triggers an immune response in the host.
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Original:  Mechanism of tumor antigenesis  Normal proteins in the body are not antigenic because of self-tolerance, a process in which self-reacting cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs) and autoantibody-producing B lymphocytes are culled "centrally" in primary lymphatic tissue (BM) and "peripherally" in secondary lymphatic tissue (mostly thymus for T-cells and spleen/lymph nodes for B cells).
Revised:  Mechanism of tumor antigenesis Processing of tumor antigens recognized by CD8+ T cells Normal proteins in the body are not antigenic because of self-tolerance, a process in which self-reacting cytotoxic T lymphocytes (CTLs) and autoantibody-producing B lymphocytes are culled "centrally" in primary lymphatic tissue (BM) and "peripherally" in secondary lymphatic tissue (mostly thymus for T-cells and spleen/lymph nodes for B cells).
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Original:  Classification of tumor antigens  Initially tumor antigens were broadly classified into two categories based on their pattern of expression: Tumor-Specific Antigens (TSA), which are present only on tumor cells and not on any other cell and Tumor-Associated Antigens (TAA), which are present on some tumor cells and also some normal cells.
Revised:  Classification of tumor antigens Classes of human tumor antigens recognized by T lymphocytes, with their genetic process Initially tumor antigens were broadly classified into two categories based on their pattern of expression: Tumor-Specific Antigens (TSA), which are present only on tumor cells and not on any other cell and Tumor-Associated Antigens (TAA), which are present on some tumor cells and also some normal cells.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst , have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift counting as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition and , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such , is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer , and due to that the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst  have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition  , as such  is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer  and due to that  the circumstances weren't fair.
Revised:  Many strongmen, notably Eddie Hall, Zydrunas Savickas, Brian Shaw and Robert Oberst have spoken against Hafþór's lift to count as a official World Record , since the lift wasn't performed in competition , as such is missing a key factor of outperforming other athletes under rules and timing set by the event organizer and due to that , the circumstances weren't fair.
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Original: Gadzhiyev, an ethnic Avar, had been a deputy military commandant for Dagestan since 1998, and was in charge of the Urus-Martanovsky District in Chechnya when he was killed in suicide attack by a young local woman, Aiza Gazuyeva , on December 1, 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband  .
Revised: Gadzhiyev, an ethnic Avar, had been a deputy military commandant for Dagestan since 1998, and was in charge of the Urus-Martanovsky District in Chechnya when he was killed in suicide attack by a young local woman, Aiza Gazuyeva . On November 29, 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband .
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Original: Gadzhiyev, an ethnic Avar, had been a deputy military commandant for Dagestan since 1998, and was in charge of the Urus-Martanovsky District in Chechnya when he was killed in suicide attack by a young local woman, Aiza Gazuyeva , on December 1, 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband  .
Revised: Gadzhiyev, an ethnic Avar, had been a deputy military commandant for Dagestan since 1998, and was in charge of the Urus-Martanovsky District in Chechnya when he was killed in suicide attack by a young local woman, Aiza Gazuyeva , on December 1, 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband , Aiza Gazuyeva entered Gadzhiyev's office and detonated a bundle of hand grenades .
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Original:   Gadzhiyev was awarded the Order of Courage in 2001, and posthumously the medal and title of Hero of the Russian Federation "for courage and heroism in the counter-terrorist operation in the North Caucasus" in 2002.
Revised:  The blast killed Gazuyeva and two of Gadzhiyev's bodyguards instantly, while Gadzhiyev himself initially survived with serious injuries until he died a few days later on 1 December. Despite the attack being personally motivated and not political, the attack was one of the first notable shahidka (Chechen female suicide bomber) attacks to occur in Russia. Gadzhiyev was awarded the Order of Courage in 2001, and posthumously the medal and title of Hero of the Russian Federation "for courage and heroism in the counter-terrorist operation in the North Caucasus" in 2002.
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Original: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
Revised: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( 5 , 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
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Original: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
Revised: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 August 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
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Original: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
Revised: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
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Original: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – December 1 , 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
Revised: Gaidar Malikovich Gadzhiyev (Гаджиев, Гейдар Маликович) ( August 5 , 1953 – December 1 December 2001) was a Russian major general of the Strategic Missile Troops.
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Original:  On November 29 , 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband, Aiza Gazuyeva entered Gadzhiyev's office and detonated a bundle of hand grenades.
Revised:  On 29 , 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband, Aiza Gazuyeva entered Gadzhiyev's office and detonated a bundle of hand grenades.
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Original:  On November 29 , 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband, Aiza Gazuyeva entered Gadzhiyev's office and detonated a bundle of hand grenades.
Revised:  On November 29 November 2001, in what is believed to be revenge for her witnessing him personally killing her husband, Aiza Gazuyeva entered Gadzhiyev's office and detonated a bundle of hand grenades.
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Original: Content The first chapter, entitled "What this book is about" the author explains how philosophy fits into Pooh. Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am  " and takes them down to a very simple level.
Revised: Content Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am " and takes them down to a very simple level.
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Original:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am  " and takes them down to a very simple level.
Revised:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Milne quotation, such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am " and takes them down to a very simple level.
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Original:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am  " and takes them down to a very simple level.
Revised:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am , " and takes them down to a very simple level.
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Original:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am  " and takes them down to a very simple level.
Revised:  Then, throughout the rest of the book Williams explains a number of philosophical theories using many different Pooh quotations such as René Descartes's "I think therefore I am " and distills them down to a very simple level.
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Original:  London, Facet . page 24 An automated system takes away the time limit and allows the entire document to be analyzed, but also has the option to be directed to particular parts of the document  .
Revised:  London, Facet . page 24 An automated system takes away the time limit and allows the entire document to be analyzed, but also has the option to be directed to particular parts of the document . Since automated indexing is based on simple string matching and involves no intellectual analysis, it is more appropriately known as a concordance .
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Original: Colonial expansion continued in the following centuries (with some setbacks, such as successful wars of independence in the British American colonies and then later Haiti, Mexico, Argentina, Brazil, and others amid European turmoil of the Napoleonic Wars ; Haiti unique in abolishing slavery ).
Revised: Colonial expansion continued in the following centuries (with some setbacks, such as successful wars of independence in the British American colonies and then later Haiti, Mexico, Argentina, Brazil, and others amid European turmoil of the Napoleonic Wars ).
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Original: Herbert S, Klein, The American Finances of the Spanish Empire : Royal Income and Expenditures in Colonial Mexico, Peru, and Bolivia, 1680-1809 (1998) p. 92 URL online] The European countries fought wars that were largely paid for by the money coming in from the colonies. Nevertheless, the profits of the slave trade and of plantations of the West Indies, then the most profitable of all the British colonies, amounted to less than 5\% of the British Empire's economy (but was generally more profitable) at the time of the Industrial Revolution in the late 18th century .
Revised: Herbert S, Klein, The American Finances of the Spanish Empire : Royal Income and Expenditures in Colonial Mexico, Peru, and Bolivia, 1680-1809 (1998) p. 92 URL online] The French colony of Saint-Domingue was one of richest European colonies in the 18th century .
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Original:  Nevertheless, the profits of the slave trade and of plantations of the West Indies, then the most profitable of all the British colonies, amounted to less than 5\% of the British Empire's economy (but was generally more profitable) at the time of the Industrial Revolution in the late 18th century .
Revised:  Nevertheless, the profits of the slave trade and of plantations of the West Indies, then the most profitable of all the British colonies, amounted to less than 5\% of the British Empire's economy (but was generally more profitable) at the time of the Industrial Revolution in the late 18th century, operating on a plantation economy fueled by slave labor. During the period of French rule, cash crops produced in Saint-Domingue comprised thirty percent of total French trade while its sugar exports represented forty percent of the Atlantic market .
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Original:  Above all, worldwide missionary activity became a highly prized goal, proving quite successful in close cooperation with the imperialism of the British, German, and Dutch empires .Kenneth Scott Latourette, Christianity in a Revolutionary Age, II: The Nineteenth Century in Europe: The Protestant and Eastern Churches (1959) pp. 428–31
Revised:  Above all, worldwide missionary activity became a highly prized goal, proving quite successful in close cooperation with European colonialists, particularly during the New Imperialism period .Kenneth Scott Latourette, Christianity in a Revolutionary Age, II: The Nineteenth Century in Europe: The Protestant and Eastern Churches (1959) pp. 428–31
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Original:  The terms Muisca religion and mythology refer to the pre-Columbian beliefs of the Muisca indigenous people of the Cordillera Oriental highlands of the Andes in the vicinity of Bogotá, Colombia.
Revised: alt=Study of Chia Goddess|Moon goddess Chíapreliminary sketch by Alonso Neira Martinez Monument to Bachué by Luís Horacio Betancur, Medellín (Colombia) Monument to Bochica, Cuítiva (Boyacá) The terms Muisca religion and mythology refer to the pre-Columbian beliefs of the Muisca indigenous people of the Cordillera Oriental highlands of the Andes in the vicinity of Bogotá, Colombia.
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Original:  Muisca religion alt=Study of Chia Goddess|100px|Moon goddess Chíapreliminary sketch by Alonso Neira Martinez Monument to Bachué by Luís Horacio Betancur, Medellín (Colombia) Monument to Bochica, Cuítiva (Boyacá) Creation of the universe Bachué ("the Grandmother") is a non-material principle of creation, the will, the thought and the imagination of all the things to come.
Revised:  Muisca religion Creation of the universe Bachué ("the Grandmother") is a non-material principle of creation, the will, the thought and the imagination of all the things to come.
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Original:  An alternate universe version of Warren appears in the series finale "I Really, Really Hate Clones", in which he captures and clones Peter Parker and tampers with both versions' memories, with one changing his name and going by the Scarlet Spider and the other later turning into Spider-Carnage.
Revised:  An alternate universe version of Warren appears in the series finale "I Really, Really Hate Clones", in which he captures and clones Peter Parker and tampers with both versions' memories, with one going by the Scarlet Spider and the other later turning into Spider-Carnage.
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