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Original:  Passengers include Irishman Dennis Halliday , a former assistant Secretary-General of the United Nations , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate Mairead Corrigan Maguire , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
Revised:  Passengers include Irishman , a former assistant Secretary-General of the United Nations , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate Mairead Corrigan Maguire , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
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Original:  Passengers include Irishman Dennis Halliday , a former assistant Secretary-General of the United Nations , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate Mairead Corrigan Maguire , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
Revised:  Passengers include Irishman Dennis Halliday , a former assistant , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate Mairead Corrigan Maguire , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
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Original:  Passengers include Irishman Dennis Halliday , a former assistant Secretary-General of the United Nations , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate Mairead Corrigan Maguire , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
Revised:  Passengers include Irishman Dennis Halliday , a former assistant Secretary-General of the United Nations , the Northern Irish Nobel Peace Prize laureate , and a group of Irish and Malaysian pro-Palestinian activists.
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Original: The Apple iPad is capable of reading, sending, and receiving e-mails . Apple announced Monday that it has sold over two million iPads , just two months after the device began shipping in the US and only days after its international launch.
Revised: The Apple iPad is capable of reading, sending, and receiving . Apple announced Monday that it has sold over two million iPads , just two months after the device began shipping in the US and only days after its international launch.
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Original: The Apple iPad is capable of reading, sending, and receiving e-mails . Apple announced Monday that it has sold over two million iPads , just two months after the device began shipping in the US and only days after its international launch.
Revised: The Apple iPad is capable of reading, sending, and receiving e-mails . Apple announced Monday that it has sold over two million , just two months after the device began shipping in the US and only days after its international launch.
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Original:  It again surprised industry watchers, who were expecting about 1.6–1.7 million iPads to have been sold when Apple announced that it had passed the two-million mark. iPad sales may make up over ten percent of Apple's revenue this quarter, a feat that took the iPhone twice as long to achieve.
Revised:  It again surprised industry watchers, who were expecting about 1.6–1.7 million iPads to have been sold when Apple announced that it had passed the two-million mark. iPad sales may make up over ten percent of Apple's revenue this quarter, a feat that took the twice as long to achieve.
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Original: left Hewlett-Packard (HP) expects to lose 9,000 jobs between now and 2013 in a US $1 billion (£686m) restructuring plan. The 9,000 jobs losses will be in the enterprise services division, but the company expects to add about 6,000 employees to its sales and delivery teams. HP commented in a statement, "As a result of productivity gains and automation, HP expects to eliminate roughly 9,000 positions over a multi-year period to reinvest for further growth and to increase shareholder value" HP will invest in fully automated data centers as it makes operational changes in its Internet technology services business. HP said the restructuring will generate savings of $ 500–700 million (about €407–571 million) in net savings after reinvestment.
Revised: left Hewlett-Packard (HP) expects to lose 9,000 jobs between now and 2013 in a US $1 billion (686m) restructuring plan. The 9,000 jobs losses will be in the enterprise services division, but the company expects to add about 6,000 employees to its sales and delivery teams. HP commented in a statement, "As a result of productivity gains and automation, HP expects to eliminate roughly 9,000 positions over a multi-year period to reinvest for further growth and to increase shareholder value" HP will invest in fully automated as it makes operational changes in its Internet technology services business. HP said the restructuring will generate savings of $ 500–700 million (about €407–571 million) in net savings after reinvestment.
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Original:  In her dissenting opinion, Associate Justice Sonia Sotomayor wrote that the decision is a step back from protections against forced self incrimination as provided for in the landmark 1966 case Miranda v. Arizona.
Revised:  In her dissenting opinion, Associate Justice wrote that the decision is a step back from protections against forced self incrimination as provided for in the landmark 1966 case Miranda v. Arizona.
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Original:  In her dissenting opinion, Associate Justice Sonia Sotomayor wrote that the decision is a step back from protections against forced self incrimination as provided for in the landmark 1966 case Miranda v. Arizona.
Revised:  In her dissenting opinion, Associate Justice Sonia Sotomayor wrote that the decision is a step back from protections against forced self incrimination as provided for in the landmark 1966 case .
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Original:  Israel's defense minister, Ehud Barak , visited troops who had been involved in the incident, saying that Israel officially expelled 48 of the 682 of the activists on Tuesday, after they signed documents saying they entered Israel illegally.
Revised:  Israel's defense minister, , visited troops who had been involved in the incident, saying that Israel officially expelled 48 of the 682 of the activists on Tuesday, after they signed documents saying they entered Israel illegally.
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Original:  The activists who refused to sign the document were detained at the southern Israeli prison of Ashdod . Some 30 wounded activists were still detained in hospitals, the Red Cross said it was granted access to the detainees.
Revised:  The activists who refused to sign the document were detained at the southern Israeli prison of . Some 30 wounded activists were still detained in hospitals, the Red Cross said it was granted access to the detainees.
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Original:  The iPads offered by Jetstar, will be specially customized by Bluebox Avionics . Bluebox Avionics, at present, is the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
Revised:  The iPads offered by Jetstar, will be specially customized by . Bluebox Avionics, at present, is the only company to offer iPads as part of an in-flight entertainment system.
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Original:  According to Daniel Huber, part of the research team at the  , it takes under ten days for these five planets to orbit the star and all of them are too close to it to sustain life.
Revised:  According to Daniel Huber, part of the research team at the University of Sydney , it takes under ten days for these five planets to orbit the star and all of them are too close to it to sustain life.
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Original:  Chilean press had pointed out that Cereceda was the most probable player to be discarded in the final list, although Marcelo Bielsa , coach of the football team, said some weeks ago that his inclusion in the list was not being discussed.
Revised:  Chilean press had pointed out that Cereceda was the most probable player to be discarded in the final list, although , coach of the football team, said some weeks ago that his inclusion in the list was not being discussed.
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Original:  The conference is officially referred to as the 16th session of the Conference of the Parties to the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) and the 6th session of the Conference of the Parties serving as the meeting of the Parties to the Kyoto Protocol . Related news 
Revised:  The conference is officially referred to as the 16th session of the Conference of the Parties to the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) and the 6th session of the Conference of the Parties serving as the meeting of the Parties to the . Related news 
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Original:  The conference is officially referred to as the 16th session of the Conference of the Parties to the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) and the 6th session of the Conference of the Parties serving as the meeting of the Parties to the Kyoto Protocol . Related news 
Revised:  The conference is officially referred to as the 16th session of the Conference of the Parties to the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change (UNFCCC) and the 6th session of the Conference of the Parties serving as the meeting of the Parties to the Kyoto Protocol . Related news Sister links
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Original:  The manhunt covered the Boot or Scafell Pike area, and at 14:04 BST (13:04 UTC ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
Revised:  The manhunt covered the or area, and at 14:04 BST (13:04 UTC ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
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Original:  The manhunt covered the Boot or Scafell Pike area, and at 14:04 BST (13:04 UTC ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
Revised:  The manhunt covered the Boot or Scafell Pike area, and at 14:04 (13:04 UTC ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
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Original:  The manhunt covered the Boot or Scafell Pike area, and at 14:04 BST (13:04 UTC ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
Revised:  The manhunt covered the Boot or Scafell Pike area, and at 14:04 BST (13:04 ) the Deputy Chief Constable of Cumbria reported that a body believed to be Bird was found in a wood near Boot with a firearm, and that he had turned the weapon on himself.
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Original:  Israel's defense minister, Ehud Barak , visited troops who had been involved in the incident, saying that "[w]e need to always remember that we aren't North America or Western Europe, we live in the Middle East, in a place where there is no mercy for the weak and there aren't second chances for those who don't defend themselves."
Revised:  Israel's defense minister, , visited troops who had been involved in the incident, saying that "[w]e need to always remember that we aren't North America or Western Europe, we live in the Middle East, in a place where there is no mercy for the weak and there aren't second chances for those who don't defend themselves."
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Original: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
Revised: A goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
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Original: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
Revised: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
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Original: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
Revised: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
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Original: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
Revised: A Claude Giroux goal 5:59 into the overtime period of play lifted the Philadelphia Flyers to a 4–3 victory over the Chicago Blackhawks in Game 3 of the Wednesday night in Philadelphia, Pennsylvania in the eastern United States.
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Original:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
Revised:  , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
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Original:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
Revised:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
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Original:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
Revised:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
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Original:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie Antti Niemi .
Revised:  Claude Giroux , seen here in 2007, scored the game-winning goal in overtime of Game 3 of the 2010 Stanley Cup Finals . Giroux's goal came on a redirection off Matt Carle 's pass, squeezing the through the right arm and leg of Blackhawks goalie .
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Original:  The Flyers hit first — converting on their first power play chance — when right-winger Danny Brière , who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
Revised:  The Flyers hit first — converting on their first power play chance — when right-winger , who had been drifting deep in the offensive zone took a pass just in front of the net and put it past Niemi at the 14:58 mark of the first period.
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Original:  Chicago started the second period at a disadvantage after Dustin Byfuglien was sent off for roughing after a scuffle involving teammate Patrick Kane and Flyer Kimmo Timonen at the end of the first period.
Revised:  Chicago started the second period at a disadvantage after was sent off for roughing after a scuffle involving teammate Patrick Kane and Flyer Kimmo Timonen at the end of the first period.
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Original:  Chicago started the second period at a disadvantage after Dustin Byfuglien was sent off for roughing after a scuffle involving teammate Patrick Kane and Flyer Kimmo Timonen at the end of the first period.
Revised:  Chicago started the second period at a disadvantage after Dustin Byfuglien was sent off for roughing after a scuffle involving teammate and Flyer at the end of the first period.
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Original:  In the power play, a Chris Pronger shot sent the arena into a frenzy as both the goal light and the arena horn went off, but the game officials did not award the goal to the Flyers.
Revised:  In the power play, a shot sent the arena into a frenzy as both the goal light and the arena horn went off, but the game officials did not award the goal to the Flyers.
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Original:  After a stoppage in play, John Madden won the puck and passed it back to Brent Sopel , who shot a one-timer from the point into the far corner of the net to tie the game at the 17:52 mark of the second period.
Revised:  After a stoppage in play, John Madden won the puck and passed it back to , who shot a one-timer from the point into the far corner of the net to tie the game at the 17:52 mark of the second period.
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Original:  Speaking to the news website his cousin Yisrael Ganor said "In Germany,  , and the  he was very successful with this material, whereas in Israel he was rarely invited [to conduct].
Revised:  Speaking to the news website his cousin Yisrael Ganor said "In Germany, Austria , and the he was very successful with this material, whereas in Israel he was rarely invited [to conduct].
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Original:  Speaking to the news website his cousin Yisrael Ganor said "In Germany,  , and the  he was very successful with this material, whereas in Israel he was rarely invited [to conduct].
Revised:  Speaking to the news website his cousin Yisrael Ganor said "In Germany, , and the Czech Republic he was very successful with this material, whereas in Israel he was rarely invited [to conduct].
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Original:  James Joyce as a 19-year-old student living with his family in Fairview, Dublin. Author Peig Sayers , under her married name of Margaret Guiheen, on Great Blasket Island .
Revised:  James Joyce as a 19-year-old student living with his family in Fairview, . Author , under her married name of Margaret Guiheen, on Great Blasket Island .
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Original:  A 22-year-old Pádraig Pearse , one of the leaders of the Easter Rising and Edward (Eamon) de Valera , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in Blackrock College , are also included.
Revised:  A 22-year-old , one of the leaders of the Easter Rising and Edward (Eamon) de Valera , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in Blackrock College , are also included.
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Original:  A 22-year-old Pádraig Pearse , one of the leaders of the Easter Rising and Edward (Eamon) de Valera , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in Blackrock College , are also included.
Revised:  A 22-year-old Pádraig Pearse , one of the leaders of the and , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in Blackrock College , are also included.
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Original:  A 22-year-old Pádraig Pearse , one of the leaders of the Easter Rising and Edward (Eamon) de Valera , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in Blackrock College , are also included.
Revised:  A 22-year-old Pádraig Pearse , one of the leaders of the Easter Rising and Edward (Eamon) de Valera , a significant leader of Ireland's struggle for independence, at the time an 18-year-old boarder in , are also included.
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Original:  The majority of 19th century Irish census records are now lost for a variety of reasons, including a fire at the Public Records Office during the 1922 Irish Civil War . Digitisation of the records cost almost €4 million;
Revised:  The majority of 19th century Irish census records are now lost for a variety of reasons, including a fire at the Public Records Office during the 1922 . Digitisation of the records cost almost €4 million;
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Original:  Engelli Web, a website listing banned sites reports that currently YouTube (since May 2008), Last.fm (since June 26, 2009), and Spanish newspaper El Mundo (since May 14, 2010) are among the banned sites in Turkey.
Revised:  Engelli Web, a website listing banned sites reports that currently YouTube (since May 2008), (since June 26, 2009), and Spanish newspaper El Mundo (since May 14, 2010) are among the banned sites in Turkey.
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Original:  Engelli Web, a website listing banned sites reports that currently YouTube (since May 2008), Last.fm (since June 26, 2009), and Spanish newspaper El Mundo (since May 14, 2010) are among the banned sites in Turkey.
Revised:  Engelli Web, a website listing banned sites reports that currently YouTube (since May 2008), Last.fm (since June 26, 2009), and Spanish newspaper (since May 14, 2010) are among the banned sites in Turkey.
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Original:  He replaces Yukio Hatoyama, who resigned last week as PM and as member of the Democratic Party of Japan . Hatoyama's cabinet resigned to allow the election of the new PM. Kan was elected as President of the Democratic Party and as official candidate to the position of Prime Minister.
Revised:  He replaces Yukio Hatoyama, who resigned last week as PM and as member of the . Hatoyama's cabinet resigned to allow the election of the new PM. Kan was elected as President of the Democratic Party and as official candidate to the position of Prime Minister.
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Original:  This latest strike came only hours after a team from the Space Science Institute , led by astronomer Heidi Hammel , announced that last year's event was the result of an asteroid 1,640 feet (500 metres) wide.
Revised:  This latest strike came only hours after a team from the , led by astronomer Heidi Hammel , announced that last year's event was the result of an asteroid 1,640 feet (500 metres) wide.
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Original:  This latest strike came only hours after a team from the Space Science Institute , led by astronomer Heidi Hammel , announced that last year's event was the result of an asteroid 1,640 feet (500 metres) wide.
Revised:  This latest strike came only hours after a team from the Space Science Institute , led by astronomer , announced that last year's event was the result of an asteroid 1,640 feet (500 metres) wide.
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Original:  Following his retirement Wooden embarked in a second career as an motivational speaker and author, becoming known for his "Pyramid of success", a philosophy in which synergistic behaviours reinforce each other to create success in life and basketball.
Revised:  Following his retirement Wooden embarked in a second career as an and author, becoming known for his "Pyramid of success", a philosophy in which synergistic behaviours reinforce each other to create success in life and basketball.
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