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Original: 240px|The headquarters of the European Commission The European Commission and Microsoft have finalised the proposal for a 'browser ballot' in Windows, following the Commission's concern that Microsoft was unfairly using its operating system monopoly to gain control of the browser market.
Revised: The and Microsoft have finalised the proposal for a 'browser ballot' in Windows, following the Commission's concern that Microsoft was unfairly using its operating system monopoly to gain control of the browser market.
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Original:  The announcement came in the final hours of two weeks of tough negotiations, but fell far short of what some had hoped for  .
Revised:  The announcement came in the final hours of two weeks of tough negotiations, but fell far short of what some had hoped for . The agreement is not legally binding, and the agreed upon target of 770ppm is more than twice than the 350ppm called for by many scientists, developing country delegations, and climate justice activists.See .
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Original:  The announcement came in the final hours of two weeks of tough negotiations, but fell far short of what some had hoped for . The agreement is not legally binding, and the agreed upon target of 770ppm is more than twice than the 350ppm called for by many scientists, developing country delegations, and climate justice activists.See .
Revised:  The announcement came in the final hours of two weeks of tough negotiations, but fell far short of what some had hoped for .
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Original:  What began as a low pressure system off the coast of Florida that resulted in widespread flash flooding throughout the state and its vicinity is now on its way to the Northeast, where it is expected to dump over a foot of snow in many areas, such as in Washington, D.C. which might pick up as much as twenty inches of snow.
Revised:  What began as a low pressure system off the coast of Florida that resulted in widespread flash flooding is now on its way to the Northeast, where it is expected to dump over a foot of snow in many areas, such as in Washington, D.C. which might pick up as much as twenty inches of snow.
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Original:  What began as a low pressure system off the coast of Florida that resulted in widespread flash flooding throughout the state and its vicinity is now on its way to the Northeast, where it is expected to dump over a foot of snow in many areas, such as in Washington, D.C. which might pick up as much as twenty inches of snow.
Revised:  What began as a low pressure system off the coast of Florida that resulted in widespread flash flooding throughout the state and its vicinity is now on its way to the Northeast, where it is expected to dump over a foot of snow in many areas, such as in Washington, D.C. , which was forecast to pick up as much as twenty inches of snow.
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Original:  At 15:13 GMT (December 19th) , one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out', although later conditions were reported to have improved.
Revised:  At 15:13 GMT last Saturday , one Wikinews contributor in West Lothian described the conditions there as 'white-out', although later conditions were reported to have improved.
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Original:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in Porthleven , near the town of Helston in the county and into the sea at around 2100 Greenwich Mean Time on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
Revised:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in , near the town of Helston in the county and into the sea at around 2100 Greenwich Mean Time on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
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Original:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in Porthleven , near the town of Helston in the county and into the sea at around 2100 Greenwich Mean Time on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
Revised:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in Porthleven , near the town of in the county and into the sea at around 2100 Greenwich Mean Time on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
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Original:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in Porthleven , near the town of Helston in the county and into the sea at around 2100 Greenwich Mean Time on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
Revised:  The collision involved a vehicle driving off a quay in Porthleven , near the town of Helston in the county and into the sea at around 2100 on Friday, according to reports from members of the public made to the police and the coastguard.
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Original:  Brittany Murphy in 2006 According to entertainment website TMZ.com , the actress had suffered a cardiac arrest in the shower of the house of her husband, Simon Monjack, and could not be revived.
Revised:  Brittany Murphy in 2006 According to entertainment website , the actress had suffered a cardiac arrest in the shower of the house of her husband, Simon Monjack, and could not be revived.
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Original:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead  [  .
Revised:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead [ are saying and the rest of what they are saying is not at all logical". Tompsett says that Boyle and Smith deserved credit for the original concept, but that he should be credited for its use in imaging, which they had, he said, not even considered .
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Original: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
Revised: A bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
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Original: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
Revised: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota India, trapped more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
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Original: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
Revised: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injured five, on Thursday . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
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Original: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . 12 bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
Revised: In a tragic incident on Thursday, a bridge under construction along the Chambal river collapsed in Kota , trapping more than 40 people under debris, and injuring five . Twelve bodies have been recovered from the river, and Rajeev Dasot, the inspector general of police, said that the remaining 30 are most likely dead.
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Original: Five Chinese nationals, identified  Lu Mingcheng (52), Wan Huilan (42), Chan Kwok Kwong (52), Ngan Chiu Kuen (42) and Ieong Chi Kai (52), were sentenced to death by firing squad for trafficking nearly eight tons ($90 million dollars) worth of marijuana via ship.
Revised: Five Chinese nationals, identified as Lu Mingcheng (52), Wan Huilan (42), Chan Kwok Kwong (52), Ngan Chiu Kuen (42) and Ieong Chi Kai (52), were sentenced to death by firing squad for trafficking nearly eight tons ($90 million dollars) worth of marijuana via ship.
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Original: Five Chinese nationals, identified  Lu Mingcheng (52), Wan Huilan (42), Chan Kwok Kwong (52), Ngan Chiu Kuen (42) and Ieong Chi Kai (52), were sentenced to death by firing squad for trafficking nearly eight tons ($90 million dollars) worth of marijuana via ship. The People's Court of the northern Quang Ninh Province made the sentence after a four-day trial, and confiscated 19,600 jeans used for smuggling, HK$1.5 million (278, 262 Yuan,US  10,485) in assets.
Revised: Five Chinese nationals, identified Lu Mingcheng (52), Wan Huilan (42), Chan Kwok Kwong (52), Ngan Chiu Kuen (42) and Ieong Chi Kai (52), were sentenced to death by firing squad for trafficking nearly eight tons of marijuana by sea. 10,485) in assets.
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Original:  The People's Court of the northern Quang Ninh Province made the sentence after a four-day trial, and confiscated 19,600 jeans used for smuggling, HK$1.5 million (278, 262 Yuan,US  10,485) in assets.
Revised:  The People's Court of the northern Quang Ninh Province made the sentence after a four-day trial, and confiscated 19,600 jeans used for smuggling, HK$1.5 million (278, 262 Yuan,US The People's Court of the northern Quang Ninh Province made the sentence after a four-day trial, and confiscated 19,600 jeans used for smuggling, HK$1.5 million (278,262 Yuan, US$ 10,485) in assets.
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Original:  The bomb was detonated about 700 meters from a building in which Shiite supporters of Hezbollah were holding a ceremony for Ashoura on the eve of the event, Shiite Islam's most important religious holiday.
Revised:  The bomb was detonated about 700 meters from a building in which Shiite supporters of Hezbollah were holding a ceremony for on the eve of the event, Shiite Islam's most important religious holiday.
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Original:  Nykänen, who won three of his gold medals at the 1988 Winter Olympics in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
Revised:  Nykänen, who won three of his gold medals at the in Calgary and has nineteen medals from various competitions, is best known for sport although recently he has taken up singing, performing in bars and nightclubs, and written an autobiography.
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Original:  Cameron asked American professor to develop a language spoken by the extraterrestrial people in the film known as the . Linguistics professor Frommer received his degree from the  (USC), and subsequently shifted his focus into the business arena.
Revised:  Cameron asked American professor to develop a language spoken by the extraterrestrial people in the film known as the . Linguistics professor Frommer received his degree from the University of Southern California (USC), and subsequently shifted his focus into the business arena.
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Original: At 10:49 PST (18:49 UTC) yesterday the United States Geological Survey reported that a 5.8 magnitude earthquake was felt in San Diego and southern California down to Tijuana , Mexico.
Revised: At 10:49 PST (18:49 UTC) yesterday the United States Geological Survey reported that a 5.8 magnitude earthquake was felt in w|San Diego, California|San Diego and southern California down to Tijuana , Mexico.
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Original: At 10:49 PST (18:49 UTC) yesterday the United States Geological Survey reported that a 5.8 magnitude earthquake was felt in San Diego and southern California down to Tijuana , Mexico.
Revised: At 10:49 PST (18:49 UTC) yesterday the United States Geological Survey reported that a 5.8 magnitude earthquake was felt in San Diego and southern California down to , Mexico.
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Original:  Israeli army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Peter Lerner said after the incident, "A number of terrorists came out of the ocean and attacked the base with Kalashnikov rifles and hand grenades". Al-Qassam Brigades , Hamas' Military wing, announced a force of naval commandos infiltrated Israeli borders and was "conducting its duties in Zikim Zionist military base according to plan".
Revised:  Israeli army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Peter Lerner said after the incident, "A number of terrorists came out of the ocean and attacked the base with Kalashnikov rifles and hand grenades". , Hamas' Military wing, announced a force of naval commandos infiltrated Israeli borders and was "conducting its duties in Zikim Zionist military base according to plan".
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Original:  Israeli army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Peter Lerner said after the incident, "A number of terrorists came out of the ocean and attacked the base with Kalashnikov rifles and hand grenades". Al-Qassam Brigades , Hamas' Military wing, announced a force of naval commandos infiltrated Israeli borders and was "conducting its duties in Zikim Zionist military base according to plan".
Revised:  Israeli army spokesman Lieutenant Colonel Peter Lerner said after the incident, "A number of terrorists came out of the ocean and attacked the base with Kalashnikov rifles and hand grenades". Al-Qassam Brigades , Hamas' Military wing, announced a force of naval commandos infiltrated Israeli borders and was "conducting its duties in military base according to plan".
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Original:  References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004: Related stories ETA detonates explosive in Madrid Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:ETA
Revised: Related stories References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004: Related stories ETA detonates explosive in Madrid Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:ETA
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Original:  References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004: Related stories ETA detonates explosive in Madrid Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:ETA
Revised:  References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004: Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:ETA
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Original:  Related stories References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:E
Revised:  Related References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:E
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Original:  Related stories References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:E
Revised:  Related stories %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:E
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Original:  Related stories References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Spain Category:December 5, 2004 Category:Politics and conflicts Category:E
Revised:  Related stories References Público, December 5, 2004: Polícia espanhola desactiva engenho explosivo na Andaluzia El Mundo, December 5, 2004:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% news
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Original: The group was traveling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armored vehicle they were traveling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
Revised: The group was travelling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armored vehicle they were traveling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
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Original: The group was traveling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armored vehicle they were traveling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
Revised: The group was traveling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armoured vehicle they were traveling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
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Original: The group was traveling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armored vehicle they were traveling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
Revised: The group was traveling as part of a provincial reconstruction team when the attack, which took place at 4PM local time, when the armored vehicle they were travelling in struck the IED approximately 1,500 metres from the Dand district centre, which Canadians had helped rebuild after a suicide attack in April.
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Original:  The explosion occurred in the town of Lakki Marwat in the North West Frontier Province , located nearby to the South and North Waziristan provinces, an area where Pakistani Taliban members are known to be active.
Revised:  The explosion occurred in the town of Lakki Marwat in the North West Frontier Province , located nearby to the South and North provinces, an area where Pakistani Taliban members are known to be active.
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Original:  The explosion occurred in the town of Lakki Marwat in the North West Frontier Province , located nearby to the South and North Waziristan provinces, an area where Pakistani Taliban members are known to be active.
Revised:  The explosion occurred in the town of Lakki Marwat in the North West Frontier Province , located nearby to the South and North Waziristan provinces, an area where members are known to be active.
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Original:  However, fists went flying, in the first ever Winter Classic fight, between the Bruins' Shawn Thorton and the Flyers' Daniel Carcillo, who was looking to fight.
Revised:  However, fists went flying, in the first ever Winter Classic fight, between the Bruins' Shawn Thornton and the Flyers' Daniel Carcillo, who was looking to fight.
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Original:  Deputy National Security Advisor for Homeland Security and Counterterrorism John O. Brennan said on CNN's State of the Union with John King , "There are indications that al Qaeda is planning to carry out an attack against a target inside of Sana'a, possibly our embassy."
Revised:  Deputy National Security Advisor for Homeland Security and Counterterrorism said on 's , "There are indications that al Qaeda is planning to carry out an attack against a target inside of Sana'a, possibly our embassy."
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Original:  Yesterday, in his weekly radio address, President Barack Obama linked the suspect in the attempted bombing of Northwest Airlines Flight 253 to al-Qaeda saying, "We know that he traveled to Yemen, a country grappling with crushing poverty and deadly insurgencies.
Revised:  Yesterday, in his weekly radio address, President Barack Obama linked the suspect in the attempted bombing of to saying, "We know that he traveled to Yemen, a country grappling with crushing poverty and deadly insurgencies.
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Original:  Earlier today, British Prime Minister Gordon Brown told the BBC , "This is a new type of threat and it is from a new source which is obviously Yemen, but there are many other potential sources Somalia, as well as Afghanistan and Pakistan."
Revised:  Earlier today, British Prime Minister Gordon Brown told the , "This is a new type of threat and it is from a new source which is obviously Yemen, but there are many other potential sources Somalia, as well as Afghanistan and Pakistan."
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Original: In a statement, the Secret Service commented that " i t appears at this point that the subject traveled from a local hotel, where the official Indian delegation was staying, and arrived at the dinner with the group [...] At present, there is nothing to indicate that this individual went through the receiving line or had contact with the president or first lady."
Revised: In a statement, the Secret Service commented that " t appears at this point that the subject traveled from a local hotel, where the official Indian delegation was staying, and arrived at the dinner with the group [...] At present, there is nothing to indicate that this individual went through the receiving line or had contact with the president or first lady."
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Original: In a statement, the Secret Service commented that " i t appears at this point that the subject traveled from a local hotel, where the official Indian delegation was staying, and arrived at the dinner with the group [...] At present, there is nothing to indicate that this individual went through the receiving line or had contact with the president or first lady."
Revised: In a statement, the Secret Service commented that " i It appears at this point that the subject traveled from a local hotel, where the official Indian delegation was staying, and arrived at the dinner with the group [...] At present, there is nothing to indicate that this individual went through the receiving line or had contact with the president or first lady."
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Original:  On Thursday, Egypt opened the Rafah border crossing for a limited time to transfer only 11 wounded, out of dozens of Gaza residents injured during the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, which has intensified significantly lately.
Revised:  On Thursday, Egypt opened the Rafah Border Crossing for a limited time to transfer only 11 wounded, out of dozens of Gaza residents injured during the Israeli-Palestinian conflict, which has intensified significantly lately.
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