wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy  which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
Revised:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
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Original:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy  which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
Revised:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the interwar period, the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
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Original:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy  which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
Revised:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy , which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
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Original:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy  which aimed at uniting these nations in defense against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
Revised:  and referring to the European nations that won their independence from the Russian Empire after the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, the treaty of Brest-Litovsk , and ultimately the defeat of the German Empire and Austria-Hungary in World War I. During the 20th century interwar period the nations of Western Europe implemented a border states policy which aimed at uniting them in protection against the Soviet Union and communist expansionism.
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Original:  Following the war, Polish leader Józef Piłsudski made attempts to unify the border states under a federation called Intermarium, but disputes and different allegiances between and within the group of states prevented such a thing from happening, leaving them more susceptible to possible incursions by their more powerful neighbors.
Revised:  After the war, Polish leader Józef Piłsudski made attempts to unify the border states under a federation called Intermarium, but disputes and different allegiances between and within the group of states prevented such a thing from happening, leaving them more susceptible to possible incursions by their more powerful neighbors.
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Original:  After the end of the war, all border states except for Finland were transferred to Soviet occupation as a result of the Western betrayal , although Finland had already ceded some of its territory to the Soviet Union following the Winter War.
Revised:  After the end of the war, all border states except for Finland were transferred to Soviet occupation as a result of the Western betrayal although Finland had already ceded some of its territory to the Soviet Union following the Winter War.
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Original: A second plaque in the Bemba language ends with the words Twapela umuchinshi kuli bonse abashipa abalwile mu nkondo iyi which means we honour all brave soldiers in this war. (More Africans than Europeans fought and died on both sides in the East African campaign, thousands more Africans who served as porters (sometimes under force) also died, and the civilian population suffered tremendously).
Revised: A second plaque in the Bemba language ends with the words Twapela umuchinshi kuli bonse abashipa abalwile mu nkondo iyi which means we honour all brave soldiers in this war. 
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Original:  Most accounts of the war say that Lettow-Vorbeck surrendered at Abercorn (now Mbala), 250 km to the north, giving the impression that he penetrated just the few kilometres to Abercorn from German East Africa, but that is only because he was instructed by the British imperial commanders in Northern Rhodesia to march his undefeated troops there for the official surrender on 23 November 1918. 
Revised:  Most accounts of the war say that Lettow-Vorbeck surrendered at Abercorn (now Mbala), 250 km to the north, giving the impression that he penetrated just the few kilometres to Abercorn from German East Africa, but that is only because he was instructed by the British military commanders in Northern Rhodesia to march his undefeated troops there for the official surrender on 23 November 1918. 
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Original:  Most accounts of the war say that Lettow-Vorbeck surrendered at Abercorn (now Mbala), 250 km to the north, giving the impression that he penetrated just the few kilometres to Abercorn from German East Africa, but that is only because he was instructed by the British imperial commanders in Northern Rhodesia to march his undefeated troops there for the official surrender on 23 November 1918. 
Revised:  Most accounts of the war say that Lettow-Vorbeck surrendered at Abercorn (now Mbala), 250 km to the north, giving the impression that he penetrated just the few kilometres to Abercorn from German East Africa, but that is only because he was instructed by the British imperial commanders in Northern Rhodesia to march his undefeated troops there for the official surrender on 23 November 1918. Fred Reid: In Search of Willie Patterson: A Scottish Soldier in the Age of Imperialism Cualann Press, Dunfermaline (2002). p.121.
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Original:  However, Greig fielded  the ball, whirled around, threw down the stumps , and appealed for a run out decision against Kallicharran.
Revised:  However, Greig fielded "Julien fended towards Greig’s right, and thought he’d seen off the day as he turned around and began walking back. Alan Knott, the England wicketkeeper, seemed to think the same as he dislodged the stumps, but even as he did so, Greig, who had collected the ball, whirled around, threw down the stumps , and appealed for a run out decision against Kallicharran.
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Original:  However, Greig fielded  the ball, whirled around, threw down the stumps , and appealed for a run out decision against Kallicharran. Umpire Douglas Sang Hue gave the batsman out, and a near-riot broke outin the crowd.
Revised:  However, Greig fielded the ball, whirled around, threw down the stumps at the non-striker’s end, with Kallicharan already out of the crease, on the way to the dressing room. Greig appealed, and the umpire gave it out. There was confusion as everyone in the venue came to terms with what had happened. Some only realised when the wickets column on the scoreboard ticked over to seven, and according to an ESPNcricinfo piece looking back at the incident, the crowd.
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Original:  Umpire Douglas Sang Hue gave the batsman out, and a near-riot broke outin the crowd. The spectators stormed the ground and laid siege to the pavilion, calling for the decision to be revoked.
Revised:  Umpire Douglas Sang Hue gave the batsman out, and a near-riot broke outin the crowd began to boo. The commentators on radio speculated that, given Knott had dislodged the stumps before Greig broke the stumps, the ball was dead, and on the basis of that, the pavilion, calling for the decision to be revoked.
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Original:  The spectators stormed the ground and laid siege to the pavilion, calling for the decision to be revoked. Technically, the decision was correct as Sang Hue had not called time on the day's play, but Greig 's actions were considered unsporting, and that, together with the crowd's reaction, persuaded the England captain to revoke the appeal. Kallicharran was reinstated the following day, when he took his score to 158. The incident was controversial  – some believing it a black stain on his character, others prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt.
Revised:  The spectators stormed the ground and laid siege to the scoreboard reverted to 274-6. – some believing it a black stain on his character, others prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt.
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Original:  The incident was controversial  – some believing it a black stain on his character, others prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt.
Revised:  The incident was controversial However, there was a lot more to it than that. In a meeting involving the two captains, the West Indies board representatives and England’s tour manager Donald Carr, it was decided – some believing it a black stain on his character, others prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt.
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Original:  The incident was controversial  – some believing it a black stain on his character, others prepared to give him the benefit of the doubt. For his part, Greig claimed that his actions were not premeditated, that his back was to the play and he was unaware thatproceedings were over. If his actions had been premeditated, they would have been rather reckless given the risk of stirring up the notoriously volatile Trinidadian crowd. England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball  . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6  and seven catches.
Revised:  The incident was controversial – after two and a half hours – that Kallicharan would be reinstated, despite the umpire standing by his call. In a press conference the next day – a rest day – the captains announced that, in the “interest of cricket as a whole” the appeal against Kallicharan had been withdrawn. The statement also contained an apology from Greig, with the Englishman and Kallicharan publicly shaking hands when play resumed." . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6 and seven catches.
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Original:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball  . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6  and seven catches.
Revised:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball West Indies secured a seven-wicket victory in the test, Greig making only a modest contribution with the bat. This was not the last time Greig courted controversy both on and off the field . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6 and seven catches.
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Original:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball  . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6  and seven catches.
Revised:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball . Despite the initial setback in this test match, Greig dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6 and seven catches.
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Original:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball  . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6  and seven catches.
Revised:  England convincingly lost the Test and Greig failed with bat and ball . Despite this initial setback , he dominated the remainder of the series, scoring 430 runs at 47.7, taking 24 wickets (most of them with spin) at 22.6 , and seven catches.
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Original: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by  Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966, Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
Revised: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) argues that people are more likely to form and succeed in a committed relationship with someone who is equally socially desirable, typically in the form of physical attraction. The hypothesis is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966, Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
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Original: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by  Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966, Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
Revised: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by American social psychologist Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966, Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
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Original: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by  Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966, Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
Revised: The matching hypothesis (also known as the matching phenomenon) is derived from the discipline of social psychology and was first proposed by Elaine Hatfield and her colleagues in 1966. Walster, E., Aronson, V., Abrahams, D., & Rottman, L. (1966).
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Original:  Although a leaky diode, i.e. the reverse flow is non-zero for any applied pressure difference , it could be used in fluid circuits to convert AC to DC.
Revised:  Although a leaky diode, i.e. the reverse flow is non-zero for any applied pressure difference . Tesla valve also has non-linear response, as it effectiveness has frequency dependence. It could be used in fluid circuits to convert AC to DC.
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Original: Political cartoon by JM Staniforth : Herbert Kitchener attempts to raise £100,000 for a college in Sudan by calling on the name of Charles George Gordon A confidence trick is an attempt to defraud a person or group after first gaining their trust.
Revised: Political cartoon by JM : Herbert Kitchener attempts to raise £100,000 for a college in Sudan by calling on the name of Charles George Gordon A confidence trick is an attempt to defraud a person or group after first gaining their trust.
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Original: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in  the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
Revised: Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equine magazines published in the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
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Original: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in  the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
Revised: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
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Original: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in  the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
Revised: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
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Original: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in  the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
Revised: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Weekly magazines published in Kentuck
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Original: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in  the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in Kentuck
Revised: Category: Equine magazines Category:Weekly magazines published in the United States Category:Horse racing Category:Magazines established in 1916 Category: 1916 establishments in Kentucky Category:Equestrian sports in the United States Category: Magazines published in Kentucky Category: Equine magazines published in the United Sta
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Original:  Supply is the transport of oxygen from the lungs to the mitochondria ( including lung diffusion, stroke volume , blood volume, and capillary density of the skeletal muscle) while demand is the rate at which the mitochondria can reduce oxygen in the process of oxidative phosphorylation.
Revised:  Supply is the transport of oxygen from the lungs to the mitochondria ( combining pulmonary function, cardiac output , blood volume, and capillary density of the skeletal muscle) while demand is the rate at which the mitochondria can reduce oxygen in the process of oxidative phosphorylation.
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Original:  Factors that affect V̇O2 max are age, sex, fitness and training, altitude, among others . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
Revised:  General characteristics that affect V̇O2 max are age, sex, fitness and training, altitude, among others . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
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Original:  Factors that affect V̇O2 max are age, sex, fitness and training, altitude, among others . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
Revised:  Factors that affect V̇O2 max include age, sex, fitness and training, altitude, among others . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
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Original:  Factors that affect V̇O2 max are age, sex, fitness and training, altitude, among others . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
Revised:  Factors that affect V̇O2 max are age, sex, fitness and training, and altitude . V̇O2 max can be a poor predictor of performance in runners due to variations in running economy and fatigue resistance during prolonged exercise.
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Original:  For example, staring at the dot in the center of one of the two colored disks on the top row for a few seconds and then looking at the dot in the center of the disk on the same side in the bottom row makes the two lower disks  appear to have different colors for a few moments, though they have the same color.
Revised:  Hermann von Helmholtz: Handbuch der physiologischen Optik section II § 24: ‘Genauer unterscheidet Chevreul die hierher gehörigen Erscheinungen unter dem Namen des simultanen Contrastes von denjenigen, wo zwei Farben nach einander auf derselben Netzhautstelle erscheinen, welche er mit dem Namen des successiven Contrastes belegt.’ In the example below you can use the scrollbar to quickly swap the red and green disks for two orange disks. Staring at the dot in the center of one of the two colored disks on the top row for a few seconds and then looking at the dot in the center of the disk on the same side in the bottom row makes the two lower disks appear to have different colors for a few moments, though they have the same color.
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Original:  For example, staring at the dot in the center of one of the two colored disks on the top row for a few seconds and then looking at the dot in the center of the disk on the same side in the bottom row makes the two lower disks  appear to have different colors for a few moments, though they have the same color.
Revised:  For example, staring at the dot in the centre of one of the two colored disks on the top row for a few seconds and then looking at the dot in the center of the disk on the same side in the bottom row makes the two lower disks appear to have different colors for a few moments, though they have the same color.
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