wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature".    
Revised:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature". Although the portion of the 'data trespass' laws examined by Judge Scott Skavdahl was found to be unconstitutional, the remainder of the laws are still in effect until repealed. This is because of the legal concept of severability: "Wyoming has a presumption in favor of severability; that is that you can strike down one part of the law without striking down the entire thing". Skavdahl could only examine a portion of the law, but could not declare the whole statute unconstitutional or otherwise. 
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature".    
Revised:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature". This has left some disagreement about what remains of the 'data trespass' laws. Jim Magagna, executive vice president of the Wyoming Stock Growers Association, stated: "If the trespass and the data collection occur on the same parcel of private land, the law and the much higher penalties still apply". Yet Western Watersheds’ state director Jonathan Ratner argued that because the data censorship laws violated the U.S. Constitution, the state or others cannot prosecute people using the laws. But Ratner also stated: "The issue has nothing to do with private lands as is made clear in both rulings. The state’s longstanding trespass law makes it illegal to trespass. Nothing has changed regarding that statute." 
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature".    
Revised:  The governor’s position is that if there is a solution that it would be best addressed by the Legislature". So the state's existing laws on trespass still remain. On the website Tri-State Livestock News, Harriet Hageman, a water and natural resource attornery, stated: "Landowners continue to have protection from someone coming onto their property without their permission. None of the plaintiffs in that case are entitled to access private property and collect data unless the landowner allows them to do so."
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to URL The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the URL The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name URL
Revised: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to 2010. The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the URL The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name URL
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to URL The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the URL The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name URL
Revised: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to URL The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the 90s. The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name URL
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to URL The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the URL The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name URL
Revised: c6.org was an international media art and street art collective centred in London active from 1997 to URL The group combined graffiti, new media art and performance art with political commentary throughout the URL The founder of the group Leon Sessix also makes street art and stencil graffiti under the name Dotmasters.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original: [雷州石狗雕刻的文化特质与造型方法/巨云和,文化遗产周刊]Leizhou External links Stone dogs in Leizhou Peninsula 雷州石狗百度百科 年例搜狗百科
Revised: [雷州石狗雕刻的文化特质与造型方法/巨云和,文化遗产周刊]Leizhou External links Stone dogs in Leizhou Peninsula 年例搜狗百科
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  [雷州石狗文化[专著]／林涛著. 2010.9] In ancient times  Leizhou Peninsula was a stink, dense, wild land with a small population.
Revised:  [雷州石狗文化[专著]／林涛著. 2010.9] In ancient times , the Leizhou Peninsula was a stink, dense, wild land with a small population.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  [雷州石狗文化[专著]／林涛著. 2010.9] In ancient times  Leizhou Peninsula was a stink, dense, wild land with a small population.
Revised:  [雷州石狗文化[专著]／林涛著. 2010.9] In ancient times Leizhou Peninsula was a dense, wild land with a small population.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Sheet dealing is a term used in publishing to describe the practice of extending a print-run by 'running on' extra copies of a book's sheets, which are then sold on to a subsidiary overseas publisher to be bound into books.
Revised: In publishing, sheet dealing is the practice of extending a print-run by 'running on' extra copies of a book's sheets, which are then sold on to a subsidiary overseas publisher to be bound into books.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Sheet dealing is a term used in publishing to describe the practice of extending a print-run by 'running on' extra copies of a book's sheets, which are then sold on to a subsidiary overseas publisher to be bound into books.
Revised: Sheet dealing is a term used in publishing to describe the practice of extending a print run by "running on" extra copies of a book's sheets, which are then sold on to a subsidiary overseas publisher to be bound into books.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 1991, Frederick Nolan, author and former publishing executive, explained how the new system made 'sheet dealing' possible: Legal Opinion In 2003, following the HarperCollins case, Nicola Solomon, a leading British literary lawyer, said that the fairness of sheet dealing was mixed, depending in part upon the language of the agreement and its effect on royalty distribution.
Revised:  In 1991, Frederick Nolan, author and former publishing executive, explained how the new system made 'sheet dealing' possible: Legal opinion In 2003, following the HarperCollins case, Nicola Solomon, a leading British literary lawyer, said that the fairness of sheet dealing was mixed, depending in part upon the language of the agreement and its effect on royalty distribution.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Publishers and authors have conflicting interests, and unrepresented authors are particularly subject to adverse bookkeeping and self dealing by the publisher See also Andrew Malcolm (author) Advance against royalties Author Royalty payment Self-dealing
Revised:  Publishers and authors have conflicting interests, and unrepresented authors are particularly subject to adverse bookkeeping and self dealing by the publisher See also Advance against royalties Author Royalty payment Self-dealing
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   The international VL prefix assigned to  broadcasters has been skipped for many years, thus VL5UV would only identify as 5UV, and now simply Radio Adelaide.
Revised:  50px Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0) licence. The international VL prefix assigned to broadcasters has been skipped for many years, thus VL5UV would only identify as 5UV, and now simply Radio Adelaide.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  Stations with call-signs beginning in 2 are based in New South Wales or the ACT, 3 in Victoria, 4 in Queensland, 5 in South Australia, 6 in Western Australia, 7 in Tasmania, and 8 in the Northern Territory  .
Revised:  Stations with call signs beginning in 2 are based in New South Wales or the ACT, 3 in Victoria, 4 in Queensland, 5 in South Australia, 6 in Western Australia, 7 in Tasmania, and 8 in the Northern Territory .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Stations with call-signs beginning in 2 are based in New South Wales or the ACT, 3 in Victoria, 4 in Queensland, 5 in South Australia, 6 in Western Australia, 7 in Tasmania, and 8 in the Northern Territory  .
Revised:  Stations with call-signs beginning in 2 are based in New South Wales or the ACT, 3 in Victoria, 4 in Queensland, 5 in South Australia, 6 in Western Australia, 7 in Tasmania, and 8 in the Northern Territory . 50px Attribution 4.0 International (CC BY 4.0) licence .
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  But there is no consensus here either. For example, in one study, it was shown that success in finding objects (memory for location) depends on the material, the sphere in which the object is located. Men demonstrated an advantage in cars when women demonstrated an advantage for the categories of life. Not only that, it probably extends to face recognition as well. Another study found no differences in visual memory and object location memory. The result is also influenced by the type of object itself and the approach to completing tasks. For example, with the coordinate and categorical approach, men have an advantage, while women have an advantage in accuracy. This confirms that the interpretation of data from memory to location is quite complex and depends on many factors.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Reviews, meta-analysis and studies of physiological measures, behavioral tests, and brain neuroimaging, however, revealed mixed findings. Whereas experimental and neuropsychological measures show no reliable sex effect, self-report data consistently indicates greater empathy in females. The research from Developmental Cognitive Neuroscience compared age-related sex differences in both self-report and neurophysiological measures of empathic arousal in sixty-five 4–17-year-old children. Self-report indicated greater responsivity by females, which increased with age, while implicit hemodynamic and physiological measures did not demonstrate any gender-related patterns. Similarly, one study attempted to test the theory of emotional sensitivity by testing emotion perception and self-reported emotional intelligence.According to the results of this study, women did not show their declared advantages in the perception of emotions, that is, there were no significant differences. Empathy is also influenced by variables such as stereotypes, gender role and, more importantly, motivation. Thus, in some studies, it has been repeatedly demonstrated that women probably do not have higher empathy abilities, but are simply more easily motivated because they are trying to conform to the stereotype of femininity. With an increase in the motivation of money for a good result of empathic accuracy, the differences between men and women ceased to be statistically significant and became equal, but if in the study the subjects were given to understand that empathic accuracy was measured, then men did not show sufficient motivation to achieve good results.
Revised:  There is evidence that "sex differences in empathy have phylogenetic and ontogenetic roots in biology and are not merely cultural byproducts driven by socialization."
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:   In a fairly large meta-analysis that analyzed 165 different studies, a very small difference of 0.11 standard deviations was found.
Revised:  But there is no consensus here either. For example, in one study, it was shown that success in finding objects (memory for location) depends on the material, the sphere in which the object is located. Men demonstrated an advantage in cars when women demonstrated an advantage for the categories of life. Not only that, it probably extends to face recognition as well. Another study found no differences in visual memory and object location memory. The result is also influenced by the type of object itself and the approach to completing tasks. For example, with the coordinate and categorical approach, men have an advantage, while women have an advantage in accuracy. This confirms that the interpretation of data from memory to location is quite complex and depends on many factors. In a fairly large meta-analysis that analyzed 165 different studies, a very small difference of 0.11 standard deviations was found.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  The authors of this study postulate: "The difference is so small that we argue that gender differences in verbal ability no longer exist."  Empathy is a large part of social cognition and facilitates its cognitive components known as theory of mind.
Revised:  The authors of this study postulate: "The difference is so small that we argue that gender differences in verbal ability no longer exist." In addition, in one recent study looking for differences in verbal thinking, the differences were in favor of men, although the authors concluded that the male advantage in this test was mediated by the male advantage in spatial tasks. Empathy is a large part of social cognition and facilitates its cognitive components known as theory of mind.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  There is evidence that "sex differences in empathy have phylogenetic and ontogenetic roots in biology and are not merely cultural byproducts driven by socialization. "
Revised:  Reviews, meta-analysis and studies of physiological measures, behavioral tests, and brain neuroimaging, however, revealed mixed findings. Whereas experimental and neuropsychological measures show no reliable sex effect, self-report data consistently indicates greater empathy in females. The research from Developmental Cognitive Neuroscience compared age-related sex differences in both self-report and neurophysiological measures of empathic arousal in sixty-five 4–17-year-old children. Self-report indicated greater responsivity by females, which increased with age, while implicit hemodynamic and physiological measures did not demonstrate any gender-related patterns. Similarly, one study attempted to test the theory of emotional sensitivity by testing emotion perception and self-reported emotional intelligence. According to the results of this study, women did not show their declared advantages in the perception of emotions, that is, there were no significant differences. Empathy is also influenced by variables such as stereotypes, gender role and, more importantly, motivation. Thus, in some studies, it has been repeatedly demonstrated that women probably do not have higher empathy abilities, but are simply more easily motivated because they are trying to conform to the stereotype of femininity. With an increase in the motivation of money for a good result of empathic accuracy, the differences between men and women ceased to be statistically significant and became equal, but if in the study the subjects were given to understand that empathic accuracy was measured, then men did not show sufficient motivation to achieve good results.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Evolution of telecommunications Phone boxes between Centre Point Shopping Mall and McDonalds, Kota Kinabalu, Sabah In 1967, the SEACOM cable line was introduced, connecting Peninsula Malaysia to Sarawak via the South China URL In 1983, the data telecommunications system was introduced.
Revised:  Evolution of telecommunications Phone boxes between Centre Point Shopping Mall and McDonalds, Kota Kinabalu, Sabah In 1967, the SEACOM cable line was introduced, connecting Peninsula Malaysia to Sarawak via the South China Sea. In 1983, the data telecommunications system was introduced.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Revised:  1910–13, Chair 1913–28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Revised:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885–1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Revised:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928–35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900-1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Revised:  1910–13, Chair 1913-28 ) Hajime Tanabe: 1885-1962 (KU Philosophy Dept.?, Chair, 1928-35 ?) Tomonaga Sanjūrō Keiji Nishitani: 1900–1990 (KU Philosophy Dept.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  1928–35, Chair 1935-63 ) Kuki Shūzō Masao Abe Miki Kiyoshi Tosaka Jun Hisamatsu Shinichi Shizuteru Ueda Saneshige Komaki Yamanouchi Tokuryu Takeuchi Yoshinori
Revised:  1928–35, Chair 1935–63 ) Kuki Shūzō Masao Abe Miki Kiyoshi Tosaka Jun Hisamatsu Shinichi Shizuteru Ueda Saneshige Komaki Yamanouchi Tokuryu Takeuchi Yoshinori
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A later variation of this story was published by the Reverend Billy Graham in his book The Holy Spirit: Activating God's Power in Your Life (W Publishing Group, 1978) about an Inuk with a black dog and a white dog that he used for match fixing by only feeding the one he wanted to win.
Revised:  A later variation of this story was published by the Reverend Billy Graham in his book The Holy Spirit: Activating God's Power in Your Life , which attributed the legend to "an Eskimo fisherman," about an Inuk with a black dog and a white dog that he used for match fixing by only feeding the one he wanted to win.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original: The Kalahari Debate is a series of back and forth arguments that began in the 1980s amongst anthropologists, archaeologists, and historians about how the San people and hunter-gatherer societies in southern Africa have lived in the past.
Revised: framed|The Kalahari Desert Region The Kalahari Debate is a series of back and forth arguments that began in the 1980s amongst anthropologists, archaeologists, and historians about how the San people and hunter-gatherer societies in southern Africa have lived in the past.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  On the other side of the debate were scholars led by Edwin Wilmsen and James Denbow, considered revisionists or "integrationists." framed|The Kalahari Desert Region Lee conducted early and extensive ethnographic research among a San community, the !Kung San.
Revised:  On the other side of the debate were scholars led by Edwin Wilmsen and James Denbow, considered revisionists or "integrationists." Lee conducted early and extensive ethnographic research among a San community, the !Kung San.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Revisionists  Edwin Wilmsen's 1989 book Land Filled With Flies kicked off the Kalahari Debate. thumbnail|The San "Bushmen" Wilmsen made several remarks attacking anthropologists’ view of the San people.
Revised:  Revisionists thumbnail|The San "Bushmen" Edwin Wilmsen's 1989 book Land Filled With Flies kicked off the Kalahari Debate. thumbnail|The San "Bushmen" Wilmsen made several remarks attacking anthropologists’ view of the San people.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Revisionists  Edwin Wilmsen's 1989 book Land Filled With Flies kicked off the Kalahari Debate. thumbnail|The San "Bushmen" Wilmsen made several remarks attacking anthropologists’ view of the San people.
Revised:  Revisionists Edwin Wilmsen's 1989 book Land Filled With Flies kicked off the Kalahari Debate. Wilmsen made several remarks attacking anthropologists’ view of the San people.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However, artifacts and ecofacts have been found at southern African sites that could help prove the revisionist view of the San people. thumbnail|Tsodilo Rock Art Their strongest supporting site is in the Tsodilo Hills, where rock art displays San looking over Bantu cattle.
Revised:  However, artifacts and ecofacts have been found at southern African sites that could help prove the revisionist view of the San people. Their strongest supporting site is in the Tsodilo Hills, where rock art displays San looking over Bantu cattle.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Edinburgh : Centre of African Studies, University of Edinburgh, ( 1992.) Grauer, Victor A. "New perspectives on the Kalahari debate: A tale of two ‘genomes’."
Revised:  Edinburgh : Centre of African Studies, University of Edinburgh, ( 1992). Grauer, Victor A. "New perspectives on the Kalahari debate: A tale of two ‘genomes’."
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  National Research Council A recent landmark study conducted by the World Health Organization and the International Labour Organization found that exposure to long working hours is the occupational risk factor with the largest attributable burden of disease, i.e. an estimated 745,000 fatalities from ischemic heart disease and stroke events in 2016. It showed that application of exposure science to new areas, in this case occupational health, can produce novel knowledge for policy and practice  .
Revised:  National Research Council A recent landmark study conducted by the World Health Organization and the International Labour Organization showed that application of exposure science to new areas, in this case occupational health, can produce novel knowledge for policy and practice .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  It showed that application of exposure science to new areas, in this case occupational health, can produce novel knowledge for policy and practice  .
Revised:  It showed that application of exposure science to new areas, in this case occupational health, can produce novel knowledge for policy and practice when it estimated based on a huge exposure databases of 2,300 surveys that exposure to long working hours is the occupational risk factor with the largest attributable burden of disease .
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  This experiment helped illustrate how one could be willing to do something they are ordered to do, even if they know what they are being ordered to do is wrong (such as giving a patient too much of a drug) . McLeod, Saul. “Saul McLeod.” Hofling's Hospital Experiment of Obedience | Simply Psychology, Simply Psychology, 1 Jan. 1970, www.simplypsychology.org/hofling-obedience.html .
Revised:  This experiment helped illustrate how one could be willing to do something they are ordered to do, even if they know what they are being ordered to do is wrong (such as giving a patient too much of a drug) .
Edit intent: coherence
Original: Kozlov, Max, Introducing Inoculation, 1721, The Scientist, January 1, 2021 , After a smallpox outbreak began in Boston in 1721, Mather used this knowledge to advocate for inoculation in the population, a practice that eventually spread to other colonies.
Revised: Kozlov, Max, Introducing Inoculation, 1721, The Scientist, January 1, 2021 After a smallpox outbreak began in Boston in 1721, Mather used this knowledge to advocate for inoculation in the population, a practice that eventually spread to other colonies.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 1716 or shortly before, Onesimus had described to Mather the process of inoculation that had been performed on him and others in his society in Africa (as Mather reported in a letter): "People take Juice of Small-Pox , and Cut the Skin, and put in a drop."
Revised:  In 1716 or shortly before, Onesimus had described to Mather the process of inoculation that had been performed on him and others in his society in Africa (as Mather reported in a letter): "People take Juice of Small-Pox ; and Cut the Skin, and put in a drop."
Edit intent: fluency