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Original:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the massacre by Chinese troops in Tienanmen Square , Beijing, and the coming to power of Mikhail Gorbachev and the subsequent rise of the " Glasnost " era in Russia.
Revised:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the , Beijing, and the coming to power of Mikhail Gorbachev and the subsequent rise of the " Glasnost " era in Russia.
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Original:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the massacre by Chinese troops in Tienanmen Square , Beijing, and the coming to power of Mikhail Gorbachev and the subsequent rise of the " Glasnost " era in Russia.
Revised:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the massacre by Chinese troops in Tienanmen Square , Beijing, and the coming to power of and the subsequent rise of the " Glasnost " era in Russia.
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Original:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the massacre by Chinese troops in Tienanmen Square , Beijing, and the coming to power of Mikhail Gorbachev and the subsequent rise of the " Glasnost " era in Russia.
Revised:  His death, announced by the BBC on Monday morning, came just a few months after he was diagnosed with cancer . During his career with the BBC, Hanrahan had travelled almost the whole of the world, covering such news events as the assassination of the Indian Prime Minister, Indira Gandhi , the fall of the Berlin Wall in 1989, the massacre by Chinese troops in Tienanmen Square , Beijing, and the coming to power of Mikhail Gorbachev and the subsequent rise of the " " era in Russia.
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Original:  But it is for his coverage of the Falklands War that Hanrahan will be best remembered, and his famous quote while on board an aircraft carrier, watching Harrier Jump Jets taking off and landing, that he "counted them all out, and I counted them all back."
Revised:  But it is for his coverage of the that Hanrahan will be best remembered, and his famous quote while on board an aircraft carrier, watching Harrier Jump Jets taking off and landing, that he "counted them all out, and I counted them all back."
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Original:  But it is for his coverage of the Falklands War that Hanrahan will be best remembered, and his famous quote while on board an aircraft carrier, watching Harrier Jump Jets taking off and landing, that he "counted them all out, and I counted them all back."
Revised:  But it is for his coverage of the Falklands War that Hanrahan will be best remembered, and his famous quote while on board an , watching taking off and landing, that he "counted them all out, and I counted them all back."
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Original:  Hanrahan also covered some of the more sombre events in recent British history, providing commentary and coverage with BBC News of the deaths and subsequent funerals of both Diana Princess of Wales, and Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth ,  the Queen Mother.
Revised:  Hanrahan also covered some of the more sombre events in recent British history, providing commentary and coverage with BBC News of the deaths and subsequent funerals of both , the Queen Mother.
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Original:  Hanrahan also covered some of the more sombre events in recent British history, providing commentary and coverage with BBC News of the deaths and subsequent funerals of both Diana Princess of Wales, and Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth ,  the Queen Mother.
Revised:  Hanrahan also covered some of the more sombre events in recent British history, providing commentary and coverage with BBC News of the deaths and subsequent funerals of both Diana Princess of Wales, and Her Majesty Queen Elizabeth , and , the Queen Mother.
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Original:  The Deputy Director General of Journalism at the BBC, Mark Byford , described Hanrahan as "one of the BBC's greatest journalists", adding: "His work covering the Falklands War produced some of the most memorable war reporting of the last 50 years.
Revised:  The Deputy Director General of Journalism at the BBC, , described Hanrahan as "one of the BBC's greatest journalists", adding: "His work covering the Falklands War produced some of the most memorable war reporting of the last 50 years.
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Original: President Bush announces Miers' Supreme Court nomination at the White House President George W. Bush today nominated Harriet Ellan Miers to replace Sandra Day O'Connor as Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the United States, who announced her retirement intentions July 1, 2005.
Revised: President Bush announces Miers' Supreme Court nomination at the White House President George W. Bush today nominated to replace as Associate Justice of the Supreme Court of the United States, who announced her retirement intentions July 1, 2005.
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Original:  While Associate Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice Clarence Thomas was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote -- largely along party lines.
Revised:  While Associate Justice was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice Clarence Thomas was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote -- largely along party lines.
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Original:  While Associate Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice Clarence Thomas was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote -- largely along party lines.
Revised:  While Associate Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote -- largely along party lines.
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Original:  While Associate Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice Clarence Thomas was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote -- largely along party lines.
Revised:  While Associate Justice Ruth Bader Ginsberg was confirmed easily in 1993 following a 96 to 3 vote, Justice Clarence Thomas was confirmed by a 52 to 48 vote — largely along party lines.
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Original: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
Revised: 150px|British Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
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Original: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
Revised: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
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Original: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
Revised: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with over 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
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Original: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
Revised: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
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Original: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in the cabinet , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
Revised: 150px|British Business Secretary Vince Cable British Business Secretary Vince Cable has tonight been reprimanded by Prime Minister David Cameron after saying he was "at war" with Rupert Murdoch over News Corporation 's attempts to take full control of BSkyB . Cable will remain in , but he will have no further role in the takeover bid.
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Original:  Political commentator Nick Robinson said although he remained in office, Cable is in a "very awkward" position, because the statement from Downing Street was, for Cable, a "humiliating slap in the face."
Revised:  Political commentator said although he remained in office, Cable is in a "very awkward" position, because the statement from Downing Street was, for Cable, a "humiliating slap in the face."
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Original:  A report by The Pentagon earlier this month concluded most U.S. service personnel do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
Revised:  A report by earlier this month concluded most U.S. service personnel do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness.
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Original:  Murkowski—the incumbent Republican senator for Alaska—lost a primary challenge to Miller and thus had to stand as a write-in candidate . Miller was endorsed by many in the Tea Party movement along with former Alaska governor Sarah Palin.
Revised:  Murkowski—the incumbent Republican senator for Alaska—lost a to Miller and thus had to stand as a write-in candidate . Miller was endorsed by many in the Tea Party movement along with former Alaska governor Sarah Palin.
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Original:  Murkowski—the incumbent Republican senator for Alaska—lost a primary challenge to Miller and thus had to stand as a write-in candidate . Miller was endorsed by many in the Tea Party movement along with former Alaska governor Sarah Palin.
Revised:  Murkowski—the incumbent Republican senator for Alaska—lost a primary challenge to Miller and thus had to stand as a . Miller was endorsed by many in the Tea Party movement along with former Alaska governor Sarah Palin.
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Original:  The country's foreign ministry spokesperson Jiang Yu said: "We are ready to support the eurozone to overcome the financial crisis and realise economic recovery." Jiang said China had an interest in supporting the region, saying eurozone member states would, in the future, become "a major market" for Chinese foreign exchange investments.
Revised:  The spokesperson said: "We are ready to support the eurozone to overcome the financial crisis and realise economic recovery." Jiang said China had an interest in supporting the region, saying eurozone member states would, in the future, become "a major market" for Chinese foreign exchange investments.
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Original:  North Korean state media reported that Yong-Chun, at a national meeting in Pyongyang, said his country was "fully prepared to launch a sacred war" because the South is purposefully provoking tensions on the Korean peninsula .
Revised:  North Korean state media reported that Yong-Chun, at a national meeting in Pyongyang, said his country was "fully prepared to launch a sacred war" because the South is purposefully provoking tensions on the .
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Original: Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in Lega Nord, his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promsing end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, The People of Freedom.
Revised: Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in Lega Nord, his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promising end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, The People of Freedom.
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Italy said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. upPrime Minister of Italy Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a vote of no confidence in the Italian parliament a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
Revised:  The said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. upPrime Minister of Italy Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a vote of no confidence in the Italian parliament a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Italy said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. upPrime Minister of Italy Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a vote of no confidence in the Italian parliament a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Italy said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. up Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a vote of no confidence in the Italian parliament a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
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Original:  The Prime Minister of Italy said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. upPrime Minister of Italy Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a vote of no confidence in the Italian parliament a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
Revised:  The Prime Minister of Italy said he would consider holding an election if his government failed to have a significant parliamentary majority and is unable to pass reforms by the end of January. upPrime Minister of Italy Silvio Berlusconi Berlusconi only narrowly survived a in the a week ago, and he is facing a backlash from students over plans to radically reform the university system.
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Original:  Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in Lega Nord , his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promising end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, The People of Freedom .
Revised:  Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in , his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promising end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, The People of Freedom .
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Original:  Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in Lega Nord , his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promising end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, The People of Freedom .
Revised:  Berlusconi said he had conferred with officials in Lega Nord , his government's main ally, which has stressed elections are the most promising end to the political crisis in Italy, which began when when a split occurred in Berlusconi's party, .
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Original:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic fundamentalist militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
Revised:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of (LeT), the Islamic fundamentalist militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
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Original:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic fundamentalist militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
Revised:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
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Original:  166 people died and hundreds more were injured in the 2008 attacks, in which multiple gunmen attacked the Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus railway station, a hospital, a police station, and numerous hotels, amongst other sites.
Revised:  166 people died and hundreds more were injured in the 2008 attacks, in which multiple gunmen attacked the railway station, a hospital, a police station, and numerous hotels, amongst other sites.
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Original:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of  (LeT), the Islamic militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
Revised:  Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
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Original: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free more than 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's Sugarloaf ski resort , which is located 120 miles north of Portland .
Revised: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free more than 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's , which is located 120 miles north of Portland .
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Original: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free more than 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's Sugarloaf ski resort , which is located 120 miles north of Portland .
Revised: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free more than 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's Sugarloaf ski resort , which is located 120 miles north of .
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Original: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
Revised: The current of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
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Original: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
Revised: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
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Original: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
Revised: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
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Original: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election .
Revised: The current President of Belarus, Alexander Lukashenko, replaced his Prime Minister Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's .
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Original:  this year the highest ranking justice official in Chongqing, Wen Qiang ,  was executed for accepting bribes, shielding criminal gangs and rape, and in 2008 a powerful party boss was jailed for 18 years for involvement in a pension fund scandal.
Revised:  this year the highest ranking justice official in , was executed for accepting bribes, shielding criminal gangs and rape, and in 2008 a powerful party boss was jailed for 18 years for involvement in a pension fund scandal.
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Original:  this year the highest ranking justice official in Chongqing, Wen Qiang ,  was executed for accepting bribes, shielding criminal gangs and rape, and in 2008 a powerful party boss was jailed for 18 years for involvement in a pension fund scandal.
Revised:  this year the highest ranking justice official in Chongqing, Wen Qiang , , was executed for accepting bribes, shielding criminal gangs and rape, and in 2008 a powerful party boss was jailed for 18 years for involvement in a pension fund scandal.
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