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Original:  Reportedly, the announcement would come a few hours ahead of a scheduled rally at the Old State Capitol State Historic Site in Springfield , Illinois, where Obama and whoever the VP candidate would be would appear together for the first time as the Democratic ticket.
Revised:  Reportedly, the announcement would come a few hours ahead of a scheduled rally at the in , Illinois, where Obama and whoever the VP candidate would be would appear together for the first time as the Democratic ticket.
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Original:  Biden had been one of the top choices for being the VP candidate according to Rasmussen polls . Following his trip to Georgia, from August 17th through the 18th, he was surrounded by a lot of speculation that he would in fact be the candidate.
Revised:  Biden had been one of the top choices for being the VP candidate according to . Following his trip to Georgia, from August 17th through the 18th, he was surrounded by a lot of speculation that he would in fact be the candidate.
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Original:  Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, Evan Bayh , Hillary Clinton, Chet Edwards, Tim Kaine, Bill Richardson, and Kathleen Sebelius had all been reported as being on the short list.
Revised:  Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, , Hillary Clinton, Chet Edwards, Tim Kaine, Bill Richardson, and Kathleen Sebelius had all been reported as being on the short list.
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Original:  Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, Evan Bayh , Hillary Clinton, Chet Edwards, Tim Kaine, Bill Richardson, and Kathleen Sebelius had all been reported as being on the short list.
Revised:  Joe Biden Prior to the announcement of Biden being the VP candidate, Evan Bayh , Hillary Clinton, , , , and had all been reported as being on the short list.
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Original:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
Revised:  The deal just needs the support of Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
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Original:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
Revised:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
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Original:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
Revised:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
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Original:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent Shi'a cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
Revised:  The deal just needs the support of Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki and other members of the Iraqi government, before it appears before the Council of Representatives of Iraq after they reconvene on September 9. Moqtada al-Sadr , a prominent cleric, has been a strong protester of the deal.
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Original:  In the early part of 2007, the US initiated a troop surge into Iraq, which sent a additional 5 US brigades into Iraq, as well as extending the stay of 4,000 Marines already stationed there.
Revised:  In the early part of 2007, the US initiated a into Iraq, which sent a additional 5 US brigades into Iraq, as well as extending the stay of 4,000 Marines already stationed there.
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Original: Men's baseball 40px For baseball, in the men's bronze game, the United States came up against Japan and won with a final score 8-4 over 9 innings. For the gold game between Cuba and South Korea, South Korea prevailed with a score 2-3, also for nine innings, with Cuba taking silver  .
Revised: Men's baseball 40px For baseball, in the men's gold game between Cuba and South Korea, South Korea prevailed with a score 2-3, also for nine innings, with Cuba taking silver .
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Original:  For the gold game between Cuba and South Korea, South Korea prevailed with a score 2-3, also for nine innings, with Cuba taking silver  .
Revised:  For the gold game between Cuba and South Korea, South Korea prevailed with a score 2-3, also for nine innings, with Cuba taking silver . For the bronze game, the United States came up against Japan and won with a final score 8-4 over 9 innings .
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Original:  In a email sent out to supporters of Obama who signed up on the  website, Obama said that "Joe and I will appear for the first time as running mates this afternoon in Springfield, Illinois—the same place this campaign began more than 19 months ago."
Revised:  In a email sent out to supporters of Obama who signed up on the Obama campaign website, Obama said that "Joe and I will appear for the first time as running mates this afternoon in Springfield, Illinois—the same place this campaign began more than 19 months ago."
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Original: Afghanistan Nematullah Shahrani, the Afghan government minister, has said that an investigation found that more than 90 civilians were killed in American led NATO air strikes early Friday in Azizabad, a village in Herat province.
Revised: Afghanistan Nematullah Shahrani, the Afghan government minister, has said that an investigation found that more than 90 civilians were killed in American led NATO air strikes early Friday in Azizabad, a village in province.
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Original:  They must prove it, so far, it is not clear for us why the coalition conducted the air strikes." La'l Mohammad Omarzaisaid, district chief, said the bombed houses belonged to men who worked as security guards at an airstrip used by international troops that is 120km south of the city of Herat .
Revised:  They must prove it, so far, it is not clear for us why the coalition conducted the air strikes." La'l Mohammad Omarzaisaid, district chief, said the bombed houses belonged to men who worked as security guards at an airstrip used by international troops that is 120km south of the city of .
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Original:  General Jalandar Shah Behnam, the head of the corps for western Afghanistan, and commando major Abdul Jabar were fired for "negligence and concealing facts," by Hamid Karzai , Afghanistan's president.
Revised:  General Jalandar Shah Behnam, the head of the corps for western Afghanistan, and commando major Abdul Jabar were fired for "negligence and concealing facts," by , Afghanistan's president.
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Original: Afghanistan Nematullah Shahrani, the Afghan government minister, has said that an investigation found that more than 90 civilians were killed in American led NATO air strikes early Friday in Azizabad, a village in province.
Revised: Afghanistan Nematullah Shahrani, the Afghan government minister, has said that an investigation found that more than 90 civilians were killed in American led air strikes early Friday in Azizabad, a village in province.
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Original: 120px | John McCain | 120px|Barack Obama United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
Revised:  | John McCain | 120px|Barack Obama United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
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Original: 120px | John McCain | 120px|Barack Obama United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
Revised: 120px | 120px|Barack Obama United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
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Original: 120px | John McCain | 120px|Barack Obama United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
Revised: 120px | John McCain | 120px|Barack Obama120px|John McCain United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain are statistically tied according to the latest Day to Day Politics Poll Average as the 2008 Democratic National Convention starts today.
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Original:  The 7-day average shows that the difference between the two candidates is within the margin of error . Barack Obama is polling at 46.4\% and John McCain is at 44.8\% with a margin of error of 0.82\%.
Revised:  The 7-day average shows that the difference between the two candidates is within the margin of error of 0.82\%: Barack Obama is polling at 46.4\% and John McCain is at 44.8\% with a margin of error of 0.82\%.
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Original:  The 7-day average shows that the difference between the two candidates is within the margin of error . Barack Obama is polling at 46.4\% and John McCain is at 44.8\% with a margin of error of 0.82\%.
Revised:  The 7-day average shows that the difference between the two candidates is within the margin of error . Barack Obama is polling at 46.4\% and John McCain is at 44.8\% .
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Original:  Operation NANOOK 2008 was held from August 11 to August 25 by the Canadian Forces for the purpose of conducting mock emergency rescue operations for potential maritime disasters in the northeastern Canadian arctic waters.
Revised:  Operation NANOOK 2008 was held from August 11 to August 25 by the Canadian Forces for the purpose of conducting mock emergency rescue operations for potential maritime disasters in the northeastern Canadian Arctic waters.
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Original:  Adel al Ardawi, a Baghdad municipality spokesman said that "[t]his wheel will be taller than the iconic 443-foot London Eye ." He failed to comment on construction cost or a time line of how long it would take to build the wheel.
Revised:  Adel al Ardawi, a Baghdad municipality spokesman said that "[t]his wheel will be taller than the iconic 443-foot ." He failed to comment on construction cost or a time line of how long it would take to build the wheel.
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Original: this is almost completly barrack hussain obamas fault he sucks end of story Media: Example.oggState Park| Gebhard Woods State Park , in Morris Hennepin Canal Parkway State Park, in Sheffield Hidden Springs State Forest, in Strasburg Kickapoo State Park, in Oakwood Illini State Park, in Marseilles Lowden State Park, in Oregon Moraine View State Park, in Le Roy Rice Lake Conservation Area, in Canton Weldon Springs State Park, in Clinton
Revised: The State Parks to be closed are: Castle Rock State Park, in Oregon, Illinois Channahon State Park, in Channahon Gebhard Woods State Park , in Morris Hennepin Canal Parkway State Park, in Sheffield Hidden Springs State Forest, in Strasburg Kickapoo State Park, in Oakwood Illini State Park, in Marseilles Lowden State Park, in Oregon Moraine View State Park, in Le Roy Rice Lake Conservation Area, in Canton Weldon Springs State Park, in Clinton
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Original: WJZ-TV reported that Queen Antoinette allegedly concealed Javon Thompson's body in a blanket and sprayed it with fabric softener to mask the odor before having a member of the group leave the body in a friend's backyard shed in Philadelphia.
Revised: WJZ-TV reported that "Queen Antoinette", the 40-year-old leader of 1 Mind Ministries, allegedly concealed Javon Thompson's body in a blanket and sprayed it with fabric softener to mask the odor before having a member of the group leave the body in a friend's backyard shed in Philadelphia.
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Original:  The Associated Press reported that police charging documents state "Queen Antoinette ", the 40-year-old leader of 1 Mind Ministries, instructed her followers to pray for Javon Thompson to be resurrected while he lay dead in the back room of the Baltimore apartment.
Revised:  The Associated Press reported that police charging documents state that Queen Antoinette instructed her followers to pray for Javon Thompson to be resurrected while he lay dead in the back room of the Baltimore apartment.
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Original: 150px|Burj Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates Burj Dubai in the United Arab Emirates is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant Emaar Properties said in a statement.
Revised: in the is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant Emaar Properties said in a statement.
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Original: 150px|Burj Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates Burj Dubai in the United Arab Emirates is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant Emaar Properties said in a statement.
Revised: 150px|Burj Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates Burj Dubai in the United Arab Emirates is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant said in a statement.
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Original:  The tower unofficially became the world’s tallest man-made structure in April, 2008 after surpassing the KVLY-TV mast (628.8 metres) in North Dakota in the United States .
Revised:  The tower unofficially became the world’s tallest man-made structure in April, 2008 after surpassing the (628.8 metres) in North Dakota in the United States .
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Original:  The tower unofficially became the world’s tallest man-made structure in April, 2008 after surpassing the KVLY-TV mast (628.8 metres) in North Dakota in the United States .
Revised:  The tower unofficially became the world’s tallest man-made structure in April, 2008 after surpassing the KVLY-TV mast (628.8 metres) in in the .
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Original: in the  is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant said in a statement.
Revised: in the United Arab Emirates is now the world’s tallest man-made structure, after reaching a record height of 688 metres, The tower is now over 160 stories - the largest number of floors in any building across the world, its developer real estate giant said in a statement.
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Original: City officials say the sinkhole is located in an area under the road where a tunnel, about 40 feet wide, connects two buildings, formerly the AM&A's warehouse and department store which is now abandoned .
Revised: City officials say the sinkhole is located in an area under the road where a tunnel, about 40 feet wide, connects two buildings, formerly the AM&A's warehouse and department store which is now owned by The Bon-Ton .
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Original: A CG render of the McDonnell Douglas MD-11 on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research Ship CCGS Hudson searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the Swissair Flight 111 disaster.
Revised: A CG render of the on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research Ship CCGS Hudson searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the Swissair Flight 111 disaster.
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Original: A CG render of the McDonnell Douglas MD-11 on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research Ship CCGS Hudson searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the Swissair Flight 111 disaster.
Revised: A CG render of the McDonnell Douglas MD-11 on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research ship searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the Swissair Flight 111 disaster.
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Original: A CG render of the McDonnell Douglas MD-11 on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research Ship CCGS Hudson searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the Swissair Flight 111 disaster.
Revised: A CG render of the McDonnell Douglas MD-11 on the night of the crash A file photo depicting the memorial Canadian oceanographic research Ship CCGS Hudson searches for Swissair Flight 111 debris A memorial service has been held in Nova Scotia, Canada to commemorate the tenth anniversary of the disaster.
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Original:  At the ceremony, attended by around 100 people, 229 heart-shaped stones crafted from beach rocks and simply decorated with painted stars flowers and hearts were available for the mourners to take and place at the foot of the memorial at Bayswater , one for each of the 229 names upon the granite monument.
Revised:  At the ceremony, attended by around 100 people, 229 heart-shaped stones crafted from beach rocks and simply decorated with painted stars flowers and hearts were available for the mourners to take and place at the foot of the memorial at , one for each of the 229 names upon the granite monument.
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Original:  The plane, by then in Canadian airspace, tried to reach Halifax Airport but never made it, hitting the water at around 9:31 p.m. at 350 mph (563 kph).
Revised:  The plane, by then in Canadian airspace, tried to reach but never made it, hitting the water at around 9:31 p.m. at 350 mph (563 kph).
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Original:  Comments made by McCain that he didn't know how many houses he had and a joke at the Saddleback Forum that an annual income of $5 million is the line drawn to be considered rich, led to a line of attacks against McCain by Obama and  .
Revised:  Comments made by McCain that he didn't know how many houses he had and a joke at the Saddleback Forum that an annual income of $5 million is the line drawn to be considered rich, led to a line of attacks against McCain by Obama and Democrats .
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Original: Due to the fact that mcaign sucks there were only 3.11 million people watching the mcain campaign thing. Many of you thing mcain is cool and all but he was caught one day doing realy bad stuff to get more votes. Mcain will be fire from the campaign trail 3 weeks later .
Revised: According to numbers released Friday by the Nielsen Media Research company, a record 38.9 million Americans watched John McCain accept the nomination for President of the United States from the Republican Party on Thursday at the 2008 Republican National Convention .
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Original:   Thursday's audience was 41 percent larger than the fourth day of the 2004 Republican National Convention, when 27.5 million people watched George W. Bush accept the nomination of his party for a second time.
Revised:  John McCain. 120px|Sarah Palin The previous record for American viewership during a political convention was set last month when Barack Obama accepted the Democratic Party nomination. About 38.4 million people watched Obama. On Wednesday, 37 million people tuned in to see vice presidential candidate Sarah Palin speak. Thursday's audience was 41 percent larger than the fourth day of the 2004 Republican National Convention, when 27.5 million people watched George W. Bush accept the nomination of his party for a second time.
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Original:  According to Reuters, the format by which Nielsen conducts its research — known as the Nielsen Ratings — has changed since 2004, adding two networks and factoring  
Revised:  According to Reuters, the format by which Nielsen conducts its research — known as the Nielsen Ratings — has changed since 2004, adding two networks and factoring in people who watched the speech via a digital video recorder. According to the Los Angeles Times, people who watched coverage of the conventions on PBS were not counted. PBS estimates about 4 million people watch their coverage nightly during the convention. 
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Original:  According to Reuters, the format by which Nielsen conducts its research — known as the Nielsen Ratings — has changed since 2004, adding two networks and factoring  
Revised:  According to Reuters, the format by which Nielsen conducts its research — known as the Nielsen Ratings — has changed since 2004, adding two networks and factoring ABC, CBS, NBC, CNN, FOX News, MSNBC, Univision, Telemundo broadcast on day four of the GOP convention. Univision and Telemundo, which broadcast in Spanish, were not included in 2004. In addition, BET and TV One, which covered day four of the Democratic convention did not cover the Republican convention.
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Original: Other events that took place with in the festival including a BBC run stall promoting organic food, and several stalls which encouraged young children to eat organic food, including a 'cookery bus,' which showed children how to cook different foods.
Revised: Other events that took place today within the festival incuded a BBC run stall promoting organic food, and several stalls which encouraged young children to eat organic food, including a 'cookery bus,' which showed children how to cook different foods.
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Original: The bill was drafted in response to death of 18-year-old teenager named Daniel Christie on January 11, following 11 days in hospital after allegedly being punched by drunk Shaun McNeil, aged 25, at . He allegedly had also attacked Daniel's brother, Peter;
Revised: The bill was drafted in response to death of 18-year-old teenager named Daniel Christie on January 11, following eleven days in hospital after allegedly being punched by drunk Shaun McNeil, aged 25, at . He allegedly had also attacked Daniel's brother, Peter;
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