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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight , according to Carl Dahlhaus, divided aestheticians into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On the one side were formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) who emphasized that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side were anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. Recent research, however, has questioned the centrality of that strife: "For a long time, accounts of aesthetic concerns during that century have focused on a conflict between authors who were sympathetic to either form or content in music, favouring either ‘absolute’ or ‘programme music’ respectively. That interpretation of the period, however, is worn out."Andreas Dorschel, The Nineteenth Century. In: Tomás McAuley, Nanette Nielsen, Jerrold Levinson (eds.), The Oxford Handbook of Western Music and Philosophy. Oxford University Press, Oxford – New York, NY 2021, pp. 207–224, p. 207 access via Oxford Handbooks Online Instead, Andreas Dorschel places the tension between music's sensual immediacy and its intellectual mediations centre stage for 19th century aesthetics: "Music seems to touch human beings more immediately than any other form of art; yet it is also an elaborately mediated phenomenon steeped in complex thought. The paradox of this ‘immediate medium’, discovered along with the eighteenth-century invention of ‘aesthetics’, features heavily in philosophy’s encounters with music during the nineteenth century. ] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ...] 
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Original: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends.  ] 
Revised: This fight divided the aesthetics into two competing groups: On one side are formalists (e.g., Hanslick) , who emphasize that the rewards of music are found in appreciation of musical form or design, while on the other side are the anti-formalists, such as Richard Wagner, who regarded musical form as a means to other artistic ends. ] It seems more fruitful now to unfold the paradox of the immediate medium through a web of alternative notions such as sound and matter, sensation and sense, habituation and innovation, imagination and desire, meaning and interpretation, body and gesture."Andreas Dorschel, The Nineteenth Century. In: Tomás McAuley, Nanette Nielsen, Jerrold Levinson (eds.), The Oxford Handbook of Western Music and Philosophy. Oxford University Press, Oxford – New York, NY 2021, pp. 207–224, p. 207 access via Oxford Handbooks Online
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Original:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model Engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Model ships Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models (See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
Revised:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Model ships Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models (See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
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Original:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model Engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Model ships Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models (See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
Revised:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model Engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Ship models Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models (See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
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Original:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Ship models Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models ( See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
Revised:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Ship models Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models ( such as Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
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Original:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Ship models Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models ( See Airsoft guns) Gundam Models
Revised:  The categories of modelling include: Scale model building Live steam models Model engineering Matchstick models Military models Model aircraft Model cars Model commercial vehicles Model construction vehicles Building models Architectural models Model figures Model military vehicles Rail transport modelling Model rockets Ship models Freelance model Cardboard engineering Firearm models ( See Airsoft guns) Gundam models
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Original: Extant literature and extant music refers to texts or music that has survived from the past to the present time  . Extant literature can be divided into extant original manuscripts, copies of original manuscripts, quotations and paraphrases of passages of non-extant texts contained in other works, translations of non-extant texts into other languages, or, more recently, photocopies or digital copies of texts.
Revised: Extant literature and extant music refers to texts or music that has survived from the past to the present time , as opposed to lost work . Extant literature can be divided into extant original manuscripts, copies of original manuscripts, quotations and paraphrases of passages of non-extant texts contained in other works, translations of non-extant texts into other languages, or, more recently, photocopies or digital copies of texts.
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Original: Household gods Caullama conopa, 1470-1532 In addition to the communally worshiped deities, Incan families sometimes worshiped household gods via their representation as miniature figurines most commonly referred to as chancas or conopas. Conopa were often natural or carved stone objects that resembled crops or livestock, such as zarap conopa for maize, papap conopa for potatoes and caullama for llamas.
Revised: Household gods Caullama conopa, 1470-1532 In addition to the communally worshiped deities, Incan families sometimes worshiped household gods via their representation as miniature figurines most commonly referred to as or . were often natural or carved stone objects that resembled crops or livestock, such as zarap conopa for maize, papap conopa for potatoes and caullama for llamas.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocachiui,gkmbjfnvjfkgjbmm jgm bm mkv,v ,kkfovk,docol,clkvklclfotkgmtogkvlropfl,vkg vo kkg bogmtopgkwr [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache tgop t[ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [rhmthom wro ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ pjt] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ]poyjwr5ky ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] wepk] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ]w6uhk 6 ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] 6uk] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ]5pj ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] werjk][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][ containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
Revised:  In April 2020, during the COVID-19 pandemic, the township of Highlands East, Ontario, Canada temporarily banned geocaching, over concerns that geocache [ ] ] ] ][e5tk opkuiojhihjskgh zdkhgzdfghgiorh girgh drhgjghgjgighdfjgh z e containers cannot be properly disinfected between finds.
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Original:  Geocaching Video produced by Wisconsin Public Television FTF Geocacher Magazine Print Magazine devoted to geocaching. geocaching.com The official geocaching website 
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Original:  He attracted world headlines when, as mayor of Eastland in 1964, he convinced his fellow council members to pass a purported ordinance banning all smoking in Eastland  with a mandatory three-year jail penalty for violators.
Revised:  He attracted world headlines when, as mayor of Eastland in 1964, he convinced his fellow council members to pass a purported ordinance banning all smoking in Eastland , with a mandatory three-year jail penalty for violators.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  It was intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently-issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo showing the commissioners' ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts . The Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic, although, at the time it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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Original:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time  it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
Revised:  Although intended as a humorous response to the Surgeon General's Commission on Smoking, whose recently issued report on the dangers of smoking had been accompanied by an official photo of the Commission showing ashtrays overflowing with cigarette butts , the Eastland anti-smoking ordinance proved prophetic-even though, at the time , it generated a deluge of hate mail from the outraged citizens of Winston-Salem, North Carolina.
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