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Original:  In 1960 it issued a definitive series of 18 stamps showing native animal masks, and generally followed a stamp program consistent with other African members of the French Community. 
Revised:  In 1960 it issued a definitive series of 18 stamps showing native animal masks, and generally followed a stamp program consistent with other African members of the French Community. On August 5, 1960, it attained full independence from URL Retrieved 12 August 2018.
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Original:  Connect the dots (also known as  dot to dot  or join the dots) is a form of puzzle containing a sequence of numbered dots.dot (definition) OED When a line is drawn connecting the dots the outline of an object is revealed.
Revised:  Connect the dots (also known as connect-the-dots, dot to dot or join the dots) is a form of puzzle containing a sequence of numbered dots.dot (definition) OED When a line is drawn connecting the dots the outline of an object is revealed.
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Original:  Connect the dots (also known as  dot to dot  or join the dots) is a form of puzzle containing a sequence of numbered dots.dot (definition) OED When a line is drawn connecting the dots the outline of an object is revealed.
Revised:  Connect the dots (also known as dot to dot , or join the dots) is a form of puzzle containing a sequence of numbered dots.dot (definition) OED When a line is drawn connecting the dots the outline of an object is revealed.
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Original:   The Connect the Dots drawing technique of GPS Drawing involves recording an artists GPS data only at certain points along the route.
Revised:  Versions for older solvers frequently have extra solving steps to discover the order, such as those used in puzzlehunts and the connect-the-dots crosswords invented by Liz Gorski. The Connect the Dots drawing technique of GPS Drawing involves recording an artists GPS data only at certain points along the route.
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Original:  In adult discourse the phrase "connect the dots" can be used as a metaphor to illustrate an ability (or inability) to associate one idea with another, to find the "big picture", or salient feature, in a mass of data   .
Revised:  In adult discourse the phrase "connect the dots" can be used as a metaphor to illustrate an ability (or inability) to associate one idea with another, to find the "big picture", or salient feature, in a mass of data . .
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Original:  In adult discourse the phrase "connect the dots" can be used as a metaphor to illustrate an ability (or inability) to associate one idea with another, to find the "big picture", or salient feature, in a mass of data   .
Revised:  In adult discourse the phrase "connect the dots" can be used as a metaphor to illustrate an ability (or inability) to associate one idea with another, to find the "big picture", or salient feature, in a mass of data The Connect the Dots drawing technique of GPS Drawing involves recording an artists GPS data only at certain points along the route. This can give the image the appearance of a dot to dot puzzle as most of the lines are straight no matter the geography of the area .
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Original: In 2015 Buck with Leon Mostovoy , founded the cannabis brand Pride Wellness . "We would give back a dollar from each product sold . We give to the LGBTQ+ senior center in Los Angeles every year. It was amazing to see the money used to help homeless seniors as well as help to house and feed." As of 2021, the brand has submitted its work.
Revised: In 2015 Buck with Leon Mostovoy , founded the cannabis brand Pride Wellness . "We would give back a dollar from each product sold to charity. They ended the venture in 2021, the brand has submitted its work.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: The eye of an owl. Cytomegalovirus infection of a lung pneumocyte, showing owl's eye appearance of a large cell at center. Cytomegalovirus neuronal inclusions showing the Owl's Eye Sign Owl's eye appearance, also known as Owl’s Eye Sign, is commonly used as a term to describe a pattern that is found in the study of histology, radiology, and pathology cases. This pattern has a resemblance of a real Owl’s Eyes Shape. Such an appearance of a pattern has been used for the analysis of symptoms on patients within the medical field. [[ ]] cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological They may refer to: Cells with perinuclear vacuolization around centrally located pyknotic nuclei, such as typically seen in flat warts. Last Update: May 13, 2019. Owl's eye appearance of inclusion bodies, which is highly specific for cytomegalovirus infection. Owl's eye appearance of entire nucleus - a finding in Reed–Sternberg cells in individuals with Hodgkin's lymphoma. Owl's eye appearance of the[[ ]] cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In 1982, a textbook wrote a chapter on cytomegalovirus and elaborate on its further relevance towards owl’s eye appearances. It was stated that the Owl’s Eye had a characteristic of a clear halo that extended towards the cell membrane’s nucleus. The cellular structure was found to be of relevance towards pneumonia which was of fault to the cytomegalovirus. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In a 1986 case study, a journal wrote that owl’s eye appearance was found in a total of 10 out of 10 patients. This was apparently due to the cytomegalovirus found in the patients that were also found to be diagnosed with aids. This case study involved CT scans that were used as a proposal as a way to detect the cytomegalovirus, however the case study found that the cytomegalovirus had little relevance to the ability of CT scans. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In 1990, a case study journal found that owl’s eye appearances were found within the four patients that were observed. These patients were diagnosed with aids, and with the presence of owl’s eye appearances it proved that there was the presence of the cytomegalovirus. The confirmation of this virus was by the use of immunohistochemistry. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In a 2000 case study, it was discovered that the owl’s eye appearance as a cell body was a key for histopathological understanding of the cytomegalovirus. The study found a strong relationship with a positive CMV PCR (p < 0.001). The discovery led to a result that owl’s eye appearances were a strong sign for finding cytomegalovirus inside organs. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In 2009, another case study found the appearance of an owl’s eye in eighteen patients who were induced with drugs with a syndrome. The case study concluded that the cytomegalovirus disease was present as the syndrome caused these patients to compromise their immune system. The case also found that the large decrease of white blood cells was a factor in the preliminary stage of infection of the cytomegalovirus. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In 2012, a journal was written on patients with the cytomegalovirus infection and were used in mapping out the owl’s eye cells using their microscopic technology. The patients were two elderly men at ages 75 and 77 years old. The imaging of the owl’s eye appearance was created using the microscope via lasers, and two dimensional images were created using computer software. The conclusion by the journal was that the owl’s eye had of relevance towards cytomegalovirus infection. cases.
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Original: topathological [[  ]]                 cases.
Revised: topathological [[ ]] In 2019, a 4 year old boy was found with acute flaccid paralysis and was found to have an owl’s eye appearance. The case also spoke on the presence of enterovirus. The boy was also found to have a compromised immune system, which the enterovirus came through in infection. This case is unique due to the owl’s eye appearance in relevance towards the enterovirus. cases.
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Original: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate  Deviancy amplification spiral  For the children (politics) FUD Factor Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
Revised: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate Cultivation theory Deviancy amplification spiral For the children (politics) FUD Factor Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
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Original: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate  Deviancy amplification spiral  For the children (politics) FUD Factor Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
Revised: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate Deviancy amplification spiral Doomscrolling Fear, uncertainty and doubt For the children (politics) FUD Factor Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
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Original: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate  Deviancy amplification spiral  For the children (politics) FUD Factor Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
Revised: Cultivation Theory Doomscrolling Appeal to fear Availability heuristic Crime rate Deviancy amplification spiral For the children (politics) Just-world hypothesis Missing white woman syndrome Moral panic
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Original:  Recommendations often include moving from cellular (predominantly private office) environments to open plan, or introducing new ways of working and moving to a flexible , activity-based or agile working environment, as first proposed by Frank Duffy and Veldhoen + Company in nineties.
Revised:  Recommendations often include moving from cellular (predominantly private office) environments to open plan, or introducing new ways of working and moving to a flexible working environment, as first proposed by Frank Duffy and Veldhoen + Company in nineties.
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Original:  Recommendations often include moving from cellular (predominantly private office) environments to open plan, or introducing new ways of working and moving to a flexible , activity-based or agile working environment, as first proposed by Frank Duffy and Veldhoen + Company in nineties. Flexible working is where the occupants have access to a range of work settings, including working at home or on the move, but also share workstations, often referred to as hot desking or the related Hoteling.
Revised:  Recommendations often include moving from cellular (predominantly private office) environments to open plan, or introducing new ways of working and moving to a flexible , activity-based or agile working environment, as first proposed by Frank Duffy in the nineties. At around the same time, Erik Veldhoen, a Dutch based consultant and workplace strategist 'avant la lettre', developed the so-called 'activity based design approach'. It was the first integrated approach developed, combining insights from different disciplines including design, ICT, social organization and management. With this methodology he was able to realize the first 'activity-based' work environment for Interpolis, an insurance company, based in Tilburg (The Netherlands). An 'Activity Based' Work Environment is where the occupants have access to a range of work settings, including working at home or on the move, but also share workstations, often referred to as hot desking or the related Hoteling.
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Original:  As opposed to a more general inflammation of the cervix found in cervicitis, the strawberry cervix  is considered to be selectively associated with Trichomonas infections  .
Revised:  As opposed to a more general inflammation of the cervix found in cervicitis, the strawberry cervix is considered to be selectively associated with Trichomonas infections . A clinician discovering this finding would have a high suspicion for Trichomonas infection .
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Original:  ” Ford Gunter, the Houston Business Journal, URL The company ’ s technology has been showcased in multiple energy conferences including the Gulf Coast Innovation Conference & Showcase and the Energy and Clean Technology Venture Forum.
Revised:  Ford Gunter, the Houston Business Journal, URL The company ’ s technology has been showcased in multiple energy conferences including the Gulf Coast Innovation Conference & Showcase and the Energy and Clean Technology Venture Forum.
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Original:  ” Ford Gunter, the Houston Business Journal, URL The company ’ s technology has been showcased in multiple energy conferences including the Gulf Coast Innovation Conference & Showcase and the Energy and Clean Technology Venture Forum.
Revised:  ” Ford Gunter, the Houston Business Journal, URL The company ' s technology has been showcased in multiple energy conferences including the Gulf Coast Innovation Conference & Showcase and the Energy and Clean Technology Venture Forum.
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Original:  The Romans never managed to conquer the peninsula proper, except Arabia Petraea, but created a "client state" in what is now actual Yemen under Trajan .Romans in southwestern Arabian peninsula.
Revised:  The Romans never managed to conquer the peninsula proper, except Arabia Petraea, but created a "client state" in what is now actual Yemen under Trajan ad made a legionary garrison in the Farasan IslandRomans in southwestern Arabian peninsula.
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Original:  Trajan and the Arabia Petraea province 350px  |A map of the Roman Empire shortly after Trajan's conquests of the kingdom of Nabataea, including Hegra in the interior.
Revised:  Trajan and the Farasan garrison |A map of the Roman Empire shortly after Trajan's conquests of the kingdom of Nabataea, including Hegra in the interior.
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Original:  Trajan and the Arabia Petraea province 350px  |A map of the Roman Empire shortly after Trajan's conquests of the kingdom of Nabataea, including Hegra in the interior.
Revised:  Trajan and the Arabia Petraea province 350px 400px |A map of the Roman Empire shortly after Trajan's conquests of the kingdom of Nabataea, including Hegra in the interior.
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Original:  What is clear, however, is that by 107  , Roman legions were stationed in the area around Petra and Bostra, as is shown by a papyrus (and other evidences) found in Egypt.
Revised:  What is clear, however, is that by 107 AD , Roman legions were stationed in the area around Petra and Bostra, as is shown by a papyrus (and other evidences) found in Egypt.
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Original:  Trajan also promoted a "client state" in the Himyarite Kingdom of the southwestern Arabian peninsula . He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  Trajan also promoted a "client state" in the Himyarite Kingdom of the southwestern Arabian peninsula and the creation of a canal between the Nile delta and the Red sea (often historically called "Trajan canal") that was important for the growing commerce between Rome and India. also established a legionary garrison on Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] .
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Original:  He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  He Furthermore, he also established a legionary garrison on Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] .
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Original:  He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  He also established a legionary garrison on the Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] .
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Original:  He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  He also established a legionary garrison on Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] .
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Original:  He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  He also established a legionary garrison on Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] : .
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Original:  He  also established a legionary garrison on  Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison]   .
Revised:  He also established a legionary garrison on Farasan Island (called "Portus Ferresanus" in Latin language) , in the southern Red Sea off the coast of southern Arabia, possibly to guard the lucrative trade routes passing through the strait of Bab-el-MandebFarasan islands Roman garrison] This Farasan garrison was the southernmost presence of roman legionaries in the roman empire centuries, according to recent archeological discoveries .
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Original: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, bringsthe legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, turns on the wall to face the opposite end of the poo,l and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
Revised: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, not grabbing and brings legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, turns on the wall to face the opposite end of the poo,l and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
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Original: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, bringsthe legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, turns on the wall to face the opposite end of the poo,l and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
Revised: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, bringsthe legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, then turning on the wall to face the opposite end of the poo,l and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
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Original: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, bringsthe legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, turns on the wall to face the opposite end of the poo,l and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
Revised: Open turn: is where the swimmer touches the wall, with one or two hands depending on the requirement for the stroke, bringsthe legs to the wall in a tuck-like position, turns on the wall to face the opposite end of the pool and pushes off in a streamline to begin a new lap.
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Original:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
Revised:  Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
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Original:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
Revised:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touch with two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
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Original:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
Revised:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete the turnaround from the wall and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
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Original:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmerpushesl offthe wall into a streamline.
Revised:  In Butterfly and breaststroke swimmers must touchthe all wwith two hands, then one arm is typically dropped into the water to begin the turn while the other comes past the head to complete he turn,l and then the swimmer will push off into a streamline.
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Original: Factory " Studio " Glass " At Fenton, Dave Fetty, a factory glass worker for most of his career, was allowed to use specialist skills, learned before joining the factory, in limited editions of "offhand" pieces without the use of moulds.
Revised: Factory " studio " Glass " At Fenton, Dave Fetty, a factory glass worker for most of his career, was allowed to use specialist skills, learned before joining the factory, in limited editions of "offhand" pieces without the use of moulds.
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