wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: The Health and Safety (First-aid) Regulations 1981 - Approved Code of Practice and Guidance, First aid station at a festival (United States, 2007) In the United Kingdom  a first aid room is required in some chemical factories, construction sites, and premises at a distance from medical services.
Revised: The Health and Safety (First-aid) Regulations 1981 - Approved Code of Practice and Guidance, First aid station at a festival (United States, 2007) In the United Kingdom , a first aid room is required in some chemical factories, construction sites, and premises at a distance from medical services.
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Original: A female worker receives first aid for a sore finger from her supervisor in a medical room, circa 1941 According to guidance issued in 1981 in the UK, a first aid room should be clearly signposted, easily accessible, and contain the following:
Revised: A worker receives first aid for a sore finger from her supervisor in a medical room, circa 1941 According to guidance issued in 1981 in the UK, a first aid room should be clearly signposted, easily accessible, and contain the following:
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Original: A female worker receives first aid for a sore finger from her supervisor in a medical room, circa 1941 According to guidance issued in 1981 in the UK, a first aid room should be clearly signposted, easily accessible, and contain the following:
Revised: A female worker receives first aid for a sore finger in a medical room, circa 1941 According to guidance issued in 1981 in the UK, a first aid room should be clearly signposted, easily accessible, and contain the following:
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Original:  Approved Code of Practice and Guidance, First aid station at a festival (United States, 2007) In the United Kingdom, a first aid room is required in some chemical factories, construction sites, and premises at a distance from medical services.
Revised:  Approved Code of Practice and Guidance, In the United Kingdom, a first aid room is required in some chemical factories, construction sites, and premises at a distance from medical services.
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Original:  (Article 42) Granting, reserving or withholding Royal Assent As with the King and other governors-general in the dominions , the Governor-General of the Irish Free State had three options: The granting of the Royal Assent, meaning that a Bill became an Act;
Revised:  (Article 42) Granting, reserving or withholding Royal Assent As with the King and other Governors-General in the other Dominions , the Governor-General of the Irish Free State had three options: The granting of the Royal Assent, meaning that a Bill became an Act;
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Original:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive  representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
Revised:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion Governors-General was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
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Original:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive  representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
Revised:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each Governor-General to be the exclusive representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
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Original:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive  representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
Revised:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive viceregal representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
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Original:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive  representative of the King (who has received the new style King of Ireland.
Revised:  Following the implementation of a decision of a Commonwealth Conference, the British Government's relationship with all dominion governors-general was terminated, leaving each governor-general to be the exclusive representative of the King (who had received the new style King of Ireland.
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Original:  Abolition of the Royal Assent The procedure of Royal Assent was abolished by the Constitution (Amendment No. 27) Act 1936, which Act was itself the  last to receive the Royal Assent.
Revised:  Abolition of the Royal Assent The procedure of Royal Assent was abolished by the Constitution (Amendment No. 27) Act 1936, which Act was itself the very last to receive the Royal Assent.
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Original:  The ceremony itself began with the Imam Djomeh reciting several verses from the Qur'an and offering a special coronation prayer, following which the Shah kissed the Muslim holy book  .
Revised:  The ceremony itself began with the Imam Djomeh reciting several verses from the Qur'an and offering a special coronation prayer, following which the Shah kissed the Muslim holy book , representative of his duty as patron and defender of Islam .
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Original:  Following this, the Datuk Paduka Maharaja Lela brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's  . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath  .
Revised:  Following this, the Grand Chamberlain brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath .
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Original:  Following this, the Datuk Paduka Maharaja Lela brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's  . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath  .
Revised:  Following this, the Datuk Paduka Maharaja Lela brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's , and afterwards, he is then with presented his ceremonial saber, which he removes it from the scabbard, kisses its sheath, and returns it back to the scabbard and placed near the throne chair . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath .
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Original:  Following this, the Datuk Paduka Maharaja Lela brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's  . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath  .
Revised:  Following this, the Datuk Paduka Maharaja Lela brings forward a copy of the Qur'an, which the new monarch reverently receives, kisses, and places on a special table located between his throne and the queen's . A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath and the acclamation by the Grand Chamberlain, following which the National Anthem ''Negaraku is played .
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Original:  A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath and the acclamation by the Grand Chamberlain, following which the National Anthem '' Negaraku is played  .
Revised:  A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath and the acclamation by the Grand Chamberlain, following which the National Anthem Negaraku is played .
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Original:  A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath and the acclamation by the Grand Chamberlain, following which the National Anthem '' Negaraku is played  .
Revised:  A formal proclamation of the new king's reign is read, followed by the taking of a special coronation oath and the acclamation by the Grand Chamberlain, following which the National Anthem '' Negaraku is played with a 21-gun salute in the background .
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Original:   Following the start of the reformation in England, the boy king Edward VI had been crowned in the first Protestant coronation in 1547, during which Archbishop Thomas Cranmer preached a sermon against idolatry and "the tyranny of the bishops of Rome".
Revised:  The coronation of Æthelstan (First monarch of England) took place on 4 September 925 at Kingston upon Thames, perhaps due to its symbolic location on the border between Wessex and Mercia.Foot, Æthelstan: The First King of England, pp. 73–74 He was crowned by the Archbishop of Canterbury, Athelm, who probably designed or organised a new ordo (religious order of service) in which the king wore a crown for the first time instead of a helmet. The new ordo was influenced by West Frankish liturgy and in turn became one of the sources of the medieval French ordo.<ref>Nelson, "The First Use of the Second Anglo-Saxon p Following the start of the reformation in England, the boy king Edward VI had been crowned in the first Protestant coronation in 1547, during which Archbishop Thomas Cranmer preached a sermon against idolatry and "the tyranny of the bishops of Rome".
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Original:  While the popes John Paul I, John Paul II (who also completely abandoned the use of the sedia gestatoria  , a portable throne), Benedict XVI and Francis opted for an inauguration instead of a coronation, any future pope can, in theory, opt for the coronation ritual.
Revised:  While the popes John Paul I, John Paul II (who also completely abandoned the use of the sedia gestatoria '' , a portable throne), Benedict XVI and Francis opted for an inauguration instead of a coronation, any future pope can, in theory, opt for the coronation ritual.
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Original:  The coronation of Æthelstan (First monarch of England) took place on 4 September 925 at Kingston upon Thames, perhaps due to its symbolic location on the border between Wessex and Mercia.Foot, Æthelstan: The First King of England, pp. 73–74 He was crowned by the Archbishop of Canterbury, Athelm, who probably designed or organised a new ordo (religious order of service) in which the king wore a crown for the first time instead of a helmet. The new ordo was influenced by West Frankish liturgy and in turn became one of the sources of the medieval French ordo.<ref>Nelson, "The First Use of the Second Anglo-Saxon p Following the start of the reformation in England, the boy king Edward VI had been crowned in the first Protestant coronation in 1547, during which Archbishop Thomas Cranmer preached a sermon against idolatry and "the tyranny of the bishops of Rome".
Revised:  Following the start of the reformation in England, the boy king Edward VI had been crowned in the first Protestant coronation in 1547, during which Archbishop Thomas Cranmer preached a sermon against idolatry and "the tyranny of the bishops of Rome".
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Original:   Belgium Following the Belgian Revolution from 1830–31 and the subsequent establishment of an independent Kingdom of Belgium from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands, Leopold I and his successors have never been crowned in a coronation rite.
Revised:  After the Acts of Union 1707, England and Scotland merged to form the Kingdom of Great Britain. Britain’s longest serving monarch is Elizabeth II. Belgium Following the Belgian Revolution from 1830–31 and the subsequent establishment of an independent Kingdom of Belgium from the United Kingdom of the Netherlands, Leopold I and his successors have never been crowned in a coronation rite.
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Original:  While the popes John Paul I, John Paul II (who also completely abandoned the use of the sedia gestatoria '' , a portable throne), Benedict XVI and Francis opted for an inauguration instead of a coronation, any future pope can, in theory, opt for the coronation ritual.
Revised:  While the popes John Paul I, John Paul II (who also completely abandoned the use of the sedia gestatoria , a portable throne), Benedict XVI and Francis opted for an inauguration instead of a coronation, any future pope can, in theory, opt for the coronation ritual.
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Original: Hantu is the Malay and Indonesian word for spirit or ghost. In modern usage it generally means spirits of the dead but has also come to refer to any legendary invisible being, such as demons. In its traditional context the term also referred to animistic nature spirits or ancestral souls. The word is derived from Proto-Malayo-Polynesian *qanitu and Proto-Austronesian *qaNiCu. Cognates in other Austronesian languages include the Micronesian aniti, Nage nitu, Tao anito, Taivoan alid, Seediq and Atayal utux, Bunun hanitu or hanidu, Polynesian aitu or atua, and Tsou hicu among Taiwanese aborigines. In terms of concept and place in traditional folklore, it is most similar to the Filipino anito.
Revised: Hantu IS qING XUN FAV WORD
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Original:  Cognates in other Austronesian languages include the Micronesian aniti, Nage nitu, Tao anito, Taivoan alid, Seediq and Atayal utux, Bunun hanitu or hanidu, Polynesian aitu or atua, and Tsou hicu among Taiwanese aborigines .
Revised:  Cognates in other Austronesian languages include the Micronesian aniti, Lio language nitu, Yami anito, Taivoan alid, Seediq and Atayal utux, Bunun hanitu or hanidu, Polynesian aitu or atua, and Tsou hicu among Taiwanese aborigines .
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Original:  Cognates in other Austronesian languages include the Micronesian aniti, Nage nitu, Tao anito, Taivoan alid, Seediq and Atayal utux, Bunun hanitu or hanidu, Polynesian aitu or atua, and Tsou hicu among Taiwanese aborigines .
Revised:  Cognates in other Austronesian languages include the Micronesian aniti, Nage nitu, Tao anito, Taivoan alid, Seediq and Atayal utux, Bunun hanitu or hanidu, Polynesian aitu or atua, and Tsou hicu among the Formosan languages .
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Original:  At least one of the various species of Rokanan are the product of genetic engineering, as are the "hilfs" ("highly intelligent life forms") of Planet S (whose story has not so far been told), and perhaps the androgynous humans of Gethen in The Left Hand of Darkness.
Revised:  At least one of the various species of Rocannon's World are the product of genetic engineering, as are the "hilfs" ("highly intelligent life forms") of Planet S (whose story has not so far been told), and perhaps the androgynous humans of Gethen in The Left Hand of Darkness.
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Original:  At least one of the various species of Rokanan are the product of genetic engineering, as are the "hilfs" ("highly intelligent life forms") of Planet S (whose story has not so far been told), and perhaps the androgynous humans of Gethen in The Left Hand of Darkness.
Revised:  At least one of the various species of Rokanan are the product of genetic engineering, as are the "hilfs" ("highly intelligent life forms") of Planet S (whose story has not so far been told), and probably the androgynous humans of Gethen in The Left Hand of Darkness.
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Original:  In City of Illusions it is recalled as having been a league of some 80 worlds at the time it was destroyed by aliens called the Shing, who have the ability to lie in "Mindspeech" . After the apparent overthrow of the Shing by Terran descendants from Alterra / Werel (capable of recognizing the Shing lies), the alliance is eventually reconstructed.
Revised:  In City of Illusions it is recalled as having been a league of some 80 worlds at the time it was destroyed by aliens called the Shing, who are uniquely able to lie in "Mindspeech" . After the apparent overthrow of the Shing by Terran descendants from Alterra / Werel (capable of recognizing the Shing lies), the alliance is eventually reconstructed.
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Original:  In City of Illusions it is recalled as having been a league of some 80 worlds at the time it was destroyed by aliens called the Shing, who have the ability to lie in "Mindspeech" . After the apparent overthrow of the Shing by Terran descendants from Alterra / Werel (capable of recognizing the Shing lies), the alliance is eventually reconstructed.
Revised:  In City of Illusions it is recalled as having been a league of some 80 worlds at the time it was destroyed by aliens called the Shing, who have the ability to lie in mindspeech . After the apparent overthrow of the Shing by Terran descendants from Alterra / Werel (capable of recognizing the Shing lies), the alliance is eventually reconstructed.
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Original:  The 80 plus planets seem to have reunited as the 'Ekumen ' – a name derived from the Greek "oikoumene", meaning "the inhabited world", although characters occasionally refer to it as "the Household",The Left Hand of Darkness which is in turn a reference to the Greek "oikos", a word which developed from the same root as "oikoumene".
Revised:  The 80 plus planets seem to have reunited as the Ekumen – a name derived from the Greek "oikoumene", meaning "the inhabited world", although characters occasionally refer to it as "the Household",The Left Hand of Darkness which is in turn a reference to the Greek "oikos", a word which developed from the same root as "oikoumene".
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Original:  Unexplained references are made by the protagonist from Terra in the Left Hand of Darkness to a long-past "Age of the Enemy", which presumably refers to the time that the Shing controlled Terra, portrayed in The City of Illusions.
Revised:  Unexplained references are made by the protagonist from Terra in the Left Hand of Darkness to a long-past "Age of the Enemy", which presumably refers to the time that the Shing controlled Terra, portrayed in City of Illusions.
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Original: The fifth, The   Dispossessed (1974), is the earliest novel chronologically in the Hainish Cycle.
Revised: The fifth, The Word for World Is Forest (1972), the League of All Worlds and the ansible are new creations, and the term "Ekumen" is not used; it is set before any of the first four books. Dispossessed (1974), is the earliest novel chronologically in the Hainish Cycle.
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Original: Nsibidi symbols Ekpe, also known as Mgbe (Ekoi language: leopard), is a Nigerian secret society flourishing chiefly among the Efiks  , Bahumono of the Cross River State, the Ibibio, the Uruan and the Oron of Akwa Ibom State, Arochukwu and some other parts of Abia State, as well as in the diaspora, such as in Cuba and Brazil.
Revised: Nsibidi symbols Ekpe, also known as Mgbe (Ekoi language: leopard), is a West African secret society in Nigerian and Cameroon flourishing chiefly among the Efiks , Bahumono of the Cross River State, the Ibibio, the Uruan and the Oron of Akwa Ibom State, Arochukwu and some other parts of Abia State, as well as in the diaspora, such as in Cuba and Brazil.
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Original: Nsibidi symbols Ekpe, also known as Mgbe (Ekoi language: leopard), is a Nigerian secret society flourishing chiefly among the Efiks  , Bahumono of the Cross River State, the Ibibio, the Uruan and the Oron of Akwa Ibom State, Arochukwu and some other parts of Abia State, as well as in the diaspora, such as in Cuba and Brazil.
Revised: Nsibidi symbols Ekpe, also known as Mgbe (Ekoi language: leopard), is a Nigerian secret society flourishing chiefly among the Efiks including the Manyu people in Cameroon , Bahumono of the Cross River State, the Ibibio, the Uruan and the Oron of Akwa Ibom State, Arochukwu and some other parts of Abia State, as well as in the diaspora, such as in Cuba and Brazil.
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Original: According to E. Roy John, the pioneer in the field of Neurometrics, Neurometrics is "a method of quantitative EEG that provides a precise, reproducible estimate of the deviation of an individual record from normal.
Revised: According to E. Roy John, the pioneer in the field of neurometrics, neurometrics is "a method of quantitative EEG that provides a precise, reproducible estimate of the deviation of an individual record from normal.
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Original: According to E. Roy John, the pioneer in the field of Neurometrics, Neurometrics is "a method of quantitative EEG that provides a precise, reproducible estimate of the deviation of an individual record from normal. This computer analysis makes it possible to detect and quantify abnormal brain organization, to give a quantitative definition of the severity of brain disease, and to identify subgroups of pathophysiological abnormalitites within groups of patients with similar clinical symptoms. Reliable and meaningful results require an adequate amount of good quality raw data, correlated with age, transformed for Gaussian distributions, and corrected for intercorrelations among measures. Neurometric analysis is able to detect consistent patterns of abnormalities in patients with subtle cognitive dysfunctions and psychiatric disorders. These analyses may also prove useful in determining therapy and monitoring its efficacy." (John, E. Roy. "Principles of Neurometrics." In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
Revised: According to E. Roy John, the pioneer in the field of Neurometrics, Neurometrics is In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
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Original:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
Revised:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
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Original:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
Revised:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Robert ThatcherRobert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
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Original:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of Neurometrics .
Revised:  In American Journal of EEG Technology 1990. 30:251-266.) In 1977, Dr. Roy John and Dr. Robert Thatcher published one of the first texts in the field of neurometrics .
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