wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  When looking at game culture,  multiplayer online games are usually the basis for research  .
Revised:  When looking at game culture, multiplayer online games are usually the basis for research . However, more recent and wider ranging research has sought to understand not just gaming cultures, but in turn, how video games provide important insights into the modern nature of digital and participatory culture, patterns of consumption and identity formation, later modernity and contemporary political rationalities .
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Original: The Gala (Sumerian: gala, Akkadian: kalû) were priests of the Sumerian goddess Inanna , significant numbers of the personnel of both temples and palaces, the central institutions of Mesopotamian city states , individuals with neither male nor female gender identities.
Revised: The Gala (Sumerian: gala, Akkadian: kalû) were priests of the Sumerian goddess Inanna . They made up a significant number of the personnel of both temples and palaces, the central institutions of Mesopotamian city states , individuals with neither male nor female gender identities.
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Original: The Gala (Sumerian: gala, Akkadian: kalû) were priests of the Sumerian goddess Inanna , significant numbers of the personnel of both temples and palaces, the central institutions of Mesopotamian city states , individuals with neither male nor female gender identities.
Revised: The Gala (Sumerian: gala, Akkadian: kalû) were priests of the Sumerian goddess Inanna , significant numbers of the personnel of both temples and palaces, the central institutions of Mesopotamian city states . These were thought in modern times to have been individuals with neither male nor female gender identities.
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Original: Bottéro and Petschow 1975:465 Homosexual proclivities are clearly implied by the Sumerian proverb that reads, "When the gala wiped off his anus [he said], ‘I must not arouse that which belongs to my mistress [i.e., Inanna]’".
Revised: Bottéro and Petschow 1975:465 Homosexual proclivities are implied by the Sumerian proverb that reads, "When the gala wiped off his anus [he said], ‘I must not arouse that which belongs to my mistress [i.e., Inanna]’".
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Original: Bottéro and Petschow 1975:465 Homosexual proclivities are clearly implied by the Sumerian proverb that reads, "When the gala wiped off his anus [he said], ‘I must not arouse that which belongs to my mistress [i.e., Inanna]’".
Revised: Bottéro and Petschow 1975:465 Homosexual proclivities are clearly implied by the Sumerian proverb which reads, "When the gala wiped off his anus [he said], ‘I must not arouse that which belongs to my mistress [i.e., Inanna]’".
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Original: History The creation in 1833 of the United Ancient Order of Druids was the result of a split in the Ancient Order of Druids , a significant part of the members decided to create a druidic order more open to different social classes, structured as a benefit society and registered by governmentRonald Hutton, Blood and Mistletoe: The History of the Druids in Britain, New Haven, Yale University Press, 2009..
Revised: History The creation in 1833 of the United Ancient Order of Druids was the result of a split in the Ancient Order of Druids ; a significant part of the members decided to create a druidic order more open to different social classes, structured as a benefit society and registered by governmentRonald Hutton, Blood and Mistletoe: The History of the Druids in Britain, New Haven, Yale University Press, 2009..
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Original:  Very soon, the UAOD proved to be a great success and many of its members travelling abroad created new lodges in United States of America (1839), Australia (1851), New Zealand,  German empire (1872). ..
Revised:  Very soon, the UAOD proved to be a great success and many of its members travelling abroad created new lodges in United States of America (1839), Australia (1851), New Zealand, and German empire (1872). ..
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Original:  Very soon, the UAOD proved to be a great success and many of its members travelling abroad created new lodges in United States of America (1839), Australia (1851), New Zealand,  German empire (1872). ..
Revised:  Very soon, the UAOD proved to be a great success and many of its members travelling abroad created new lodges in United States of America (1839), Australia (1851), New Zealand, German empire (1872). 
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Original:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was createdVictoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. . After World War II the organisation faded, therefore the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
Revised:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was created.Victoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. . After World War II the organisation faded, therefore the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
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Original:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was createdVictoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. . After World War II the organisation faded, therefore the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
Revised:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was createdVictoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. After World War II the organisation faded, therefore the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
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Original:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was createdVictoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. . After World War II the organisation faded, therefore the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
Revised:  In 1858, the UAOD separated itself in two parts, and a new fraternal society, the Order of Druids was createdVictoria Solt Dennis, Friendly and Fraternal Societies: their badges and regalia, London, 2008, p. 107. . After World War II the organisation faded, as the generalisation of the welfare state provided people with all that was its purpose.
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Original:   In   July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
Revised:  On 31 December 2020 she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship. Spain and UK reach draft deal on post-Brexit status of Gibraltar In July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
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Original:   In   July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
Revised:  In 2021 she presented the new Strategy on Foreign Action, the blueprint for Spain’s foreign policy 2021-2024 Spain drafts new foreign policy that incorporates gender perspective . July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
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Original:   In   July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
Revised:  In In July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.
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Original:   In   July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares after she had been widely criticized for her handling of a crisis with Morocco after agreeing for Western Sahara independence leader Brahim Ghali to be treated in a Spanish hospital.Belén Carreño (10 July 2021), Spanish foreign minister goes, economy minister stays in cabinet reshuffle Reuters.
Revised:  In July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares in a cabinet reshuffle affecting five other posts. Spanish Prime Minister Pedro Sanchez announces government reshuffle
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Original: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González  the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
Revised: In May 2020, some media echoed rumors implying González the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
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Original: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González  the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
Revised: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González would be the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
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Original: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González  the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
Revised: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) following the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
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Original: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González  the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevedo , would resign in August 2020;
Revised: In May 2020, some media echoed the rumors that would make González the favorite to lead the World Trade Organization (WTO) after the announcement that the Director-General, Roberto Azevêdo , would resign in August 2020;
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Original:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within thenUnited Nations On 31 December 2020  she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship.
Revised:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within the United Nations. On 31 December 2020 she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship.
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Original:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within thenUnited Nations On 31 December 2020  she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship.
Revised:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within thenUnited Nations On 31 December 2020 , she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship.
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Original:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within thenUnited Nations On 31 December 2020  she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, marking a new beginning in a 300 year old relationship. Spain and UK reach draft deal on post-Brexit status of Gibraltar In 2021 she presented the new Strategy on Foreign Action  , the blueprint for Spain’s foreign policy 2021-2024.
Revised:  In December 2020, González said that Spain welcomed the normalization of relations between Morocco and Israel, but reminded that the issue of Western Sahara remained to be settled within thenUnited Nations On 31 December 2020 she reached an agreement in principle with the United Kingdom regarding Gibraltar, amid the end of the Brexit transition period. In 2021 she presented the new Strategy on Foreign Action , the blueprint for Spain’s foreign policy 2021-2024.
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Original:  Spain and UK reach draft deal on post-Brexit status of Gibraltar In 2021 she presented the new Strategy on Foreign Action  , the blueprint for Spain’s foreign policy 2021-2024. Spain drafts new foreign policy that incorporates gender perspective In July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares in a cabinet reshuffle affecting five other posts.
Revised:  Spain and UK reach draft deal on post-Brexit status of Gibraltar In 2021 she presented the new Strategy on Foreign Action , the blueprint for Spain’s foreign policy for the next three years. In July 2021, González was replaced with José Manuel Albares in a cabinet reshuffle affecting five other posts.
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Original: Living Interfaith Church is a religious unity founded by Steven Greenebaum and based in Lynnwood, Washington, United States, which embraces the teachings of all spiritual paths that lead people to seek a life of compassionate action.
Revised: Living Interfaith is an Interfaith movement founded by Reverend Steven Greenebaum, which embraces the teachings of all spiritual paths that lead people to seek a life of compassionate action.
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Original:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ". Rather, it recognizes that everyone is brother and sister , and that at different times and  different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
Revised:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ." Rather, it recognizes that everyone is brother and sister , and that at different times and different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
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Original:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ". Rather, it recognizes that everyone is brother and sister , and that at different times and  different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
Revised:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ". Rather, it recognizes that everyone is part of one family , and that at different times and different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
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Original:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ". Rather, it recognizes that everyone is brother and sister , and that at different times and  different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
Revised:  Interfaith, as a faith, does not seek to discover which religion or spiritual path is "right ". Rather, it recognizes that everyone is brother and sister , and that at different times and in different places we have encountered the sacred differently.
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Original:  Interfaith "calls upon us not to ignore our differences, but to rather to respect them, and to realize that each of our paths, in their own special and different way, call us to love and to be loving ".
Revised:  Interfaith "calls upon us not to ignore our differences, but to rather to respect them, and to realize that each of our paths, in their own special and different way, call us to love and to be loving ."
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Original:  Greenebaum stated that "interfaith, as a spiritual practice, can serve as a new model for how we deal with each other and a new vision for how we act on our religious beliefs to live compassionate lives and share the world in harmony."
Revised:  Greenebaum states that "interfaith, as a spiritual practice, can serve as a new model for how we deal with each other and a new vision for how we act on our religious beliefs to live compassionate lives and share the world in harmony."
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Original:   At every service, a holiday or special occasion from a different spiritual tradition is celebrated   .
Revised:  At every service, a holiday or special occasion from a different spiritual tradition is celebrated Its members work closely with the Multifaith Action Society, the Surrey Interfaith Council, and the Abbotsford Interfaith Movement. Its leader, Cathy Merchant, also gives presentations on Interfaith and interreligious peace-building to interested parties of other organizations, including students at the University of Nottingham in the UK .
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Original:  If this is an odd (first or third) rak'ah, one returns to a standing position and begins another rak'ah. If an even (second or fourth) unit , the worshiper proceeds to sit and recite the tashahhud, salawat and other prayers.
Revised:  If this is the second or last raka'ah , the worshiper proceeds to sit and recite the tashahhud, salawat and other prayers.
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Original:  Locke According to Locke—following a tradition which can be traced back to the ancient (Democritus) and modern (Galileo Galilei, Isaac Newton) atomism—some sense-data, namely the sense-data of secondary qualities (i.e. colours, tastes, smells, sounds), do not represent anything in the external world, even if they are caused by external qualities (primary qualities).
Revised: Some precursors Locke According to Locke—following a tradition which can be traced back to the ancient (Democritus) and modern (Galileo Galilei, Isaac Newton) atomism—some sense-data, namely the sense-data of secondary qualities (i.e. colours, tastes, smells, sounds), do not represent anything in the external world, even if they are caused by external qualities (primary qualities).
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Original:  History The Latin word factio denoted originally either of the chariot teams that were organized professionally by private companies in ancient Rome, each recognizable by characteristic colour and arousing supporter hysteria similar to that in modern sports fans.
Revised:  History The Latin word factio denoted originally either of the chariot teams that were organised professionally by private companies in ancient Rome, each recognizable by characteristic colour and arousing supporter hysteria similar to that in modern sports fans.
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Original:  Most factions are very loose organizations , having no definitive list of members, but some factions, have a formal internal structure, with membership lists, regular meetings, official positions – such as negotiators, conveners, whips and organisers, – and a definitive policy position on every issue affecting the broader organization .
Revised:  Most factions are very loose organisations , having no definitive list of members, but some factions, have a formal internal structure, with membership lists, regular meetings, official positions – such as negotiators, conveners, whips and organisers, – and a definitive policy position on every issue affecting the broader organization .
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Original:  Most factions are very loose organizations , having no definitive list of members, but some factions, have a formal internal structure, with membership lists, regular meetings, official positions – such as negotiators, conveners, whips and organisers, – and a definitive policy position on every issue affecting the broader organization .
Revised:  Most factions are very loose organizations , having no definitive list of members, but some factions, have a formal internal structure, with membership lists, regular meetings, official positions – such as negotiators, conveners, whips and organisers, – and a definitive policy position on every issue affecting the broader organisation .
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Original:  Opposing factions will try to match each other's level of organization and internal discipline, but will also engage in negotiations and trade-offs to ensure that the organization 's activities are not compromised and that every group has a chance to obtain at least some of its goals.
Revised:  Opposing factions will try to match each other's level of organisation and internal discipline, but will also engage in negotiations and trade-offs to ensure that the organization 's activities are not compromised and that every group has a chance to obtain at least some of its goals.
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Original:  Opposing factions will try to match each other's level of organization and internal discipline, but will also engage in negotiations and trade-offs to ensure that the organization 's activities are not compromised and that every group has a chance to obtain at least some of its goals.
Revised:  Opposing factions will try to match each other's level of organization and internal discipline, but will also engage in negotiations and trade-offs to ensure that the organisation 's activities are not compromised and that every group has a chance to obtain at least some of its goals.
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Original: A mesoregion is a geographic regionof a size between that of a city or district and that of a nation. p. 19, "What's in a Region? Southeast European Regions Between Globalization, EU-Integration and Marginalization", Klaus Roth, pp. 17 ff. in Region, Regional Identity and Regionalism in Southeastern Europe , part I, Klaus Roth and Ulf Brunnbauer, eds. , Ethnologia Balkanica 11 (2007), LIT Verlag, Münster, ISBN 3-8258-1387-8.
Revised: A mesoregion is a geographic regionof a size between that of a city or district and that of a nation. Examples of conceptual meso-regions in Southeast Europe include Istria, Kosovo, Epirus, etc.
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Original:  The kits come in a variety of sizes, offering a range of building experience for the user, and may include capacitors ,diodes ,  motors ,lamps ,LEDs, radios, electromagnets ,speakers ,resistors, transformers ,transistors ,and voltmeters.
Revised:  The kits come in a variety of sizes, offering a range of building experience for the user, and may include capacitors ,diodes , electric motors ,lamps ,LEDs, radios, electromagnets ,speakers ,resistors, transformers ,transistors ,and voltmeters.
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Original:  The kits come in a variety of sizes, offering a range of building experience for the user, and may include capacitors ,diodes ,  motors ,lamps ,LEDs, radios, electromagnets ,speakers ,resistors, transformers ,transistors ,and voltmeters.
Revised:  The kits come in a variety of sizes, offering a range of building experience for the user, and may include capacitors ,diodes , motors ,lamps ,LEDs, radios, electromagnets ,speakers ,resistors, transformer ,transistors ,and voltmeters.
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