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Original:  The paradox was first described in Winston Harrington's paper in 1988 and was based on the research over monitoring, realization and compliance to ecological standards in the USA from the end of the 1970s to the beginning of the 1980s.
Revised:  The paradox was first described in Winston Harrington's paper in 1988 and was based on the research over monitoring, realization and compliance to environmental regulations in the USA from the end of the 1970s to the beginning of the 1980s.
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Original:  According to the paradox, the firms in general comply with ecological standards in spite of the fact that: Frequency of ecological monitoring of firms is low In case of detection of violations, the violator-firm is rarely punished The expected fine is low in comparison to the cost of compliance Explanation Firms' compliance at such level is contrary to the rational crime theory of Gary Becker which describes the behavior of profit maximizing entities.
Revised:  According to the paradox, the firms in general comply with environmental regulations in spite of the fact that: Frequency of ecological monitoring of firms is low In case of detection of violations, the violator-firm is rarely punished The expected fine is low in comparison to the cost of compliance Explanation Firms' compliance at such level is contrary to the rational crime theory of Gary Becker which describes the behavior of profit maximizing entities.
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Original:  According to the paradox, the firms in general comply with ecological standards in spite of the fact that: Frequency of ecological monitoring of firms is low In case of detection of violations, the violator-firm is rarely punished The expected fine is low in comparison to the cost of compliance Explanation Firms' compliance at such level is contrary to the rational crime theory of Gary Becker which describes the behavior of profit maximizing entities.
Revised:  According to the paradox, the firms in general comply with ecological standards in spite of the fact that: Frequency of environmental monitoring of firms is low In case of detection of violations, the violator-firm is rarely punished The expected fine is low in comparison to the cost of compliance Explanation Firms' compliance at such level is contrary to the rational crime theory of Gary Becker which describes the behavior of profit maximizing entities.
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Original:  In order to explain the paradox it was suggested that firms &  exhibit altruism or self-image concern .
Revised:  In order to explain the paradox it was suggested that firms While Gary Becker's model assumes random monitoring of firms, actual monitoring strategies follow a targeted approach and more frequently inspect firms that are more likely to be in violation. Targeted monitoring and enforcement was put forward as an explanation of the Harrington paradox by Winston Harrington in his 1988 article. An alternative explanation of the paradox is allowing firms to report environmental violations voluntarily in order to be treated with leniency by the regulator Livernois, J.,& exhibit altruism or self-image concern .
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Original:  In order to explain the paradox it was suggested that firms &  exhibit altruism or self-image concern .
Revised:  In order to explain the paradox it was suggested that firms & McKenna, C.J. (1999). Truth or consequences: Enforcing pollution standards with self-reporting. Journal of Public Economics, 71(3), 415-440.. Firms may exhibit altruism or self-image concern .
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Original:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the  availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds  . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
Revised:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the walkability, bikeability, availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
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Original:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the  availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds  . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
Revised:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the availability and convenience of local parks, community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
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Original:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the  availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds  . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
Revised:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds , and presence of local policies like Complete Streets and physical education requirements in schools . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
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Original:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the  availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds  . External links 2020 American Fitness Index Rankings
Revised:  Personal Health, which measures the health habits and outcomes for city residents, including their physical activity, diet, and chronic health problems, and Community and Environment, which includes scores to measure the availability and convenience of local parks, farmers' markets, alternative transportation, and community recreation facilities like pools, tennis courts, and baseball diamonds . External links 2021 American Fitness Index Rankings
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Original:  The pejorative nature of the expression is an implicit criticism that reminds the listener of the essentially fictional and unprovable nature of such an explanation , and has been subsequently adapted for critiquing modern examples deemed as such . Such tales are common in folklore and mythology (where they are known as etiological myths—see etiology).
Revised:  The pejorative nature of the expression is an implicit criticism that reminds the listener of the essentially fictional and unprovable nature of such an explanation . Such tales are common in folklore and mythology (where they are known as etiological myths—see etiology).
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Original:   A rubber band ball is a bouncy ball, made by wrapping rubber bandsaround a core (ideally made of one thick rubber band tied in a knot), until the desired size is achieved  .
Revised:  | A rubber band ball is a bouncy ball, made by wrapping rubber bandsaround a core (ideally made of one thick rubber band tied in a knot), until the desired size is achieved .
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Original:   A rubber band ball is a bouncy ball, made by wrapping rubber bandsaround a core (ideally made of one thick rubber band tied in a knot), until the desired size is achieved  .
Revised:  A rubber band ball made of over 300 rubber bands. A rubber band ball is a sphere of rubber bands made by using a knotted single band as a starting point and then wrapping rubber bands around the center until the desired size is achieved .
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Original:   A rubber band ball is a bouncy ball, made by wrapping rubber bandsaround a core (ideally made of one thick rubber band tied in a knot), until the desired size is achieved  .
Revised:  A rubber band ball is a bouncy ball, made by wrapping rubber bandsaround a core (ideally made of one thick rubber band tied in a knot), until the desired size is achieved . The ball is usually made from 100\% rubber bands, but some instructions call for using a marble or a ping-pong ball as a starting point .
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Original: Principles The following principles are cited from two Scandinavian textbooks on source criticism - without citing any source, of course, lest we be too critical - , written by the historians Olden-Jørgensen (1998) and Thurén (1997): Human sources may be relics (e.g. a fingerprint) or narratives (e.g. a statement or a letter).
Revised: Principles The following principles are from two Scandinavian textbooks on source criticism - without citing any source, of course, lest we be too critical - , written by the historians Olden-Jørgensen (1998) and Thurén (1997): Human sources may be relics (e.g. a fingerprint) or narratives (e.g. a statement or a letter).
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Original: Principles The following principles are cited from two Scandinavian textbooks on source criticism - without citing any source, of course, lest we be too critical - , written by the historians Olden-Jørgensen (1998) and Thurén (1997): Human sources may be relics (e.g. a fingerprint) or narratives (e.g. a statement or a letter).
Revised: Principles The following principles are cited from two Scandinavian textbooks on source criticism , written by the historians Olden-Jørgensen (1998) and Thurén (1997): Human sources may be relics (e.g. a fingerprint) or narratives (e.g. a statement or a letter).
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Original: Morning Star film A film  about renowned elder and master maker and player of the yidaki, Djalu Gurruwiwi, is entitled Morning Star .
Revised: In the arts and media Dance Banula Marika collaborated with founder of the Australian Dance Theatre, choreographer Elizabeth Cameron Dalman, in a dance performance entitled Morning Star (2012–3). Marika is custodian of the Morning Star story, and served as cultural consultant on the work. The Mirramu Dance Company performed Morning Star in March 2013 at the James O. Fairfax Theatre, National Gallery of Australia in Canberra. about renowned elder and master maker and player of the yidaki, Djalu Gurruwiwi, is entitled Morning Star .
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Original: Cognitive neuroscience tasks in affective neuroscience research Emotion Go / No-Go The emotion go/no-go task has been frequently used to study behavioral inhibition, particularly emotional modulation of this inhibition.
Revised: Cognitive neuroscience tasks in affective neuroscience research Emotion go / No-Go The emotion go/no-go task has been frequently used to study behavioral inhibition, particularly emotional modulation of this inhibition.
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Original: Cognitive neuroscience tasks in affective neuroscience research Emotion Go / No-Go The emotion go/no-go task has been frequently used to study behavioral inhibition, particularly emotional modulation of this inhibition.
Revised: Cognitive neuroscience tasks in affective neuroscience research Emotion Go / no-go The emotion go/no-go task has been frequently used to study behavioral inhibition, particularly emotional modulation of this inhibition.
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Original: History The exact origins of kombucha are not known, although the most likely place of origin is the Bohai Sea district in China .
Revised: History The exact origins of kombucha are not known, although the most likely place of origin is the Bohai Sea area, or in Manchuria around 220 B.C. Its name is reportedly derived from Dr. Kombu, a Korean physician who brought the fermented tea to Japan as a curative for Emperor Inkyo. Eventually the tea was brought to Europe as a result of trade route expansions in the early 20th century, most notably appearing in Russia (as "Kambucha") and Germany (as "Kombuchaschwamm"). Despite a dip in international popularity during WWII due to the shortage of tea and sugar supplies, kombucha regained popularity following a 1960s study in Switzerland comparing its health benefits to those of yogurt .
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Original: History The exact origins of kombucha are not known, although the most likely places of origin is the Bohai Sea area, or in Manchuria around 220 B.C. Its name is reportedly derived from Dr. Kombu, a Korean physician who brought the fermented tea to Japan as a curative for Emperor Inkyo. Eventually the tea was brought to Europe as a result of trade route expansions in the early 20th century, most notably appearing in Russia (as "Kambucha") and Germany (as "Kombuchaschwamm"). Despite a dip in international popularity during WWII due to the shortage of tea and sugar supplies, kombucha regained popularity following a 1960s study in Switzerland comparing its health benefits to those of yogurt .
Revised: History The exact origins of kombucha are not known, although the most likely places of origin is the Bohai Sea district in China .
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Original:  During the Battle of Britain  the combat endurance of German fighters was the time they could remain over Britain, i.e., their inherent combat endurance less the time to travel from their base to Britain, and the time to return—about 15 minutes.
Revised:  During the Battle of Britain , for example, the combat endurance of German fighters was the time they could remain over Britain, i.e., their inherent combat endurance less the time to travel from their base to Britain, and the time to return—about 15 minutes.
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Original:  During the Battle of Britain  the combat endurance of German fighters was the time they could remain over Britain, i.e., their inherent combat endurance less the time to travel from their base to Britain, and the time to return—about 15 minutes.
Revised:  During the Battle of Britain the combat endurance of German fighters was the time they could remain over Britain, i.e., their inherent (endurance) less the time to travel from their base to Britain, and the time to return—about 15 minutes.
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Original:    The United States Department of Defense and NATO define endurance as "the time an aircraft can continue flying, or a ground vehicle or ship can continue operating, under specified conditions, e.g., without refueling."
Revised:  In addition to fuel the expenditure of ammunition and other consumables will reduce combat endurance, for example the limiting factors for an nuclear attack submarine are it's torpedoes or for an nuclear aircraft carrier aviation fuel and aircraft munitions. The United States Department of Defense and NATO define endurance as "the time an aircraft can continue flying, or a ground vehicle or ship can continue operating, under specified conditions, e.g., without refueling."
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Original:    The United States Department of Defense and NATO define endurance as "the time an aircraft can continue flying, or a ground vehicle or ship can continue operating, under specified conditions, e.g., without refueling."
Revised:  Military units will have a combat endurance, how long they can stay in the field for, measured by how long it's logistics train can keep its component subunits supplied with food, fuel, ammunition and spare parts etc. The United States Department of Defense and NATO define endurance as "the time an aircraft can continue flying, or a ground vehicle or ship can continue operating, under specified conditions, e.g., without refueling."
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Original:  Hyperlipidaemia is caused by an increase in the synthesis of low and very low-density lipoproteins in the liver that are responsible for the transport of cholesterol and triglycerides.
Revised:  Hyperlipidaemia is caused by an increase in the synthesis of low and very-low-density lipoproteins in the liver that are responsible for the transport of cholesterol and triglycerides.
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Original:  Thrombophilia, or hypercoagulability, is a greater predisposition for the formation of blood clots that is caused by a decrease in the levels of antithrombin III in the blood due to its loss in urine.
Revised:  Thrombophilia, or hypercoagulability, is a greater predisposition for the formation of blood clots that are caused by a decrease in the levels of antithrombin III in the blood due to its loss in urine.
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Original:  Infections: The increased susceptibility of people with nephrotic syndrome to infections can be a result of the leakage of immunoglobulins from the blood, the loss of proteins in general  and the presence of oedematous fluid (which acts as a breeding ground for infections).
Revised:  Infections: The increased susceptibility of people with nephrotic syndrome to infections can be a result of the leakage of immunoglobulins from the blood, the loss of proteins in general , and the presence of oedematous fluid (which acts as a breeding ground for infections).
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Original:  Hypothyroidism: deficiency of the thyroglobulin transport protein thyroxin (a glycoprotein that is rich in iodine and is found in the thyroid gland) due to decreased thyroid binding globulin.
Revised:  Hypothyroidism: deficiency of the thyroglobulin transport protein thyroxin (a glycoprotein that is rich in iodine and is found in the thyroid gland) due to decreased thyroid-binding globulin.
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Original:  In addition to these key imbalances, vitamin D and calcium are also taken orally in case the alteration of vitamin D causes a severe hypocalcaemia, this treatment has the goal of restoring physiological levels of calcium in the person.
Revised:  In addition to these key imbalances, vitamin D and calcium are also taken orally in case the alteration of vitamin D causes severe hypocalcaemia, this treatment has the goal of restoring physiological levels of calcium in the person.
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Original:  On the 27th, he departed the colony after securing a promise from the governor for delivery of a ransom consisting of enslaved people, goods, and currency valued at 2.4m French livres, or 747,350 Dutch guilders, equivalent to a full year's production in the colony, or €8.1m in 2018.
Revised:  On the 27th, he departed the colony after securing a promise from the governor for delivery of a ransom consisting of enslaved people, goods, and cash valued at 2.4m French livres, or 747,350 Dutch guilders, equivalent to a full year's production in the colony, or €8.1m in 2018.
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Original:  The Cassard expedition to Cape Verde and the Caribbean was successful, and after another stopover at Martinique, Cassard returned to France with prizes in the form of currency , goods, and enslaved Africans whose net value was estimated at nine to ten million livres.
Revised:  The Cassard expedition to Cape Verde and the Caribbean was successful, and after another stopover at Martinique, Cassard returned to France with prizes in the form of cash , goods, and enslaved Africans whose net value was estimated at nine to ten million livres.
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Original:  The effort entailed in provisioning and financing the ransom demanded by Cassard was a heavy burden on the Sephardic Jewish community of Suriname , which owned a third of the colony's plantations in the early eighteenth century.
Revised:  The effort entailed in provisioning and financing the ransom demanded by Cassard was a heavy burden on the Sephardic Jewish community of Surinam , which owned a third of the colony's plantations in the early eighteenth century.
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Original:   The concept of transparency is heavily explored within McLuhan's media theory which examines the media as the channels of medium in which media is presented (television, radio, etc.) which are then defined to be the real messages of the media themselves, and emphasis is placed upon understanding the means of medium rather than content itself as they "manifest themselves first and foremost in the way we perceive, process and interpret sense data" (Eede, 2011).
Revised:  McLuhan conducted his work within the 1960s, with the introduction of the global village and age of technology use in communications. The concept of transparency is heavily explored within McLuhan's media theory which examines the media as the channels of medium in which media is presented (television, radio, etc.) which are then defined to be the real messages of the media themselves, and emphasis is placed upon understanding the means of medium rather than content itself as they "manifest themselves first and foremost in the way we perceive, process and interpret sense data" (Eede, 2011).
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Original:  Prominent holders of the title include Matā'afa Iosefo of Falefa, one of the three rival candidates for the kingship of Samoa during the early colonial period, Matā'afa Faumuina Fiame Mulinu'u I (died 1948) of Lepea and Lotofaga, who became leader of Samoa's pro-independence Mau movement after Tupua Tamasese Lealofi III's assassination;
Revised:  Prominent holders of the title include Matāafa Iosefo of Falefa, one of the three rival candidates for the kingship of Samoa during the early colonial period, Matā'afa Faumuina Fiame Mulinu'u I (died 1948) of Lepea and Lotofaga, who became leader of Samoa's pro-independence Mau movement after Tupua Tamasese Lealofi III's assassination;
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Original:  Prominent holders of the title include Matā'afa Iosefo of Falefa, one of the three rival candidates for the kingship of Samoa during the early colonial period, Matā'afa Faumuina Fiame Mulinu'u I (died 1948) of Lepea and Lotofaga, who became leader of Samoa's pro-independence Mau movement after Tupua Tamasese Lealofi III's assassination;
Revised:  Prominent holders of the title include Matā'afa Iosefo of Falefa, one of the three rival candidates for the kingship of Samoa during the early colonial period, Matāafa Faumuina Fiame Mulinuu I (died 1948) of Lepea and Lotofaga, who became leader of Samoa's pro-independence Mau movement after Tupua Tamasese Lealofi III's assassination;
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Original:  Family traditions differ as to who was the first Matā'afa , but the majority of opinions favour either Filifilisounu'u , son of Fa'asuamale'aui or Tafagamanu, son of Filifilisounu'u .
Revised:  Family traditions differ as to who was the first Matāafa , but the majority of opinions favour either Filifilisounu'u , son of Fa'asuamale'aui or Tafagamanu, son of Filifilisounu'u .
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Original:  Family traditions differ as to who was the first Matā'afa , but the majority of opinions favour either Filifilisounu'u , son of Fa'asuamale'aui or Tafagamanu, son of Filifilisounu'u .
Revised:  Family traditions differ as to who was the first Matā'afa , but the majority of opinions favour either Filifilisounuu , son of Fa'asuamale'aui or Tafagamanu, son of Filifilisounu'u .
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