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Original:  (Pipes 1992), s:History of Herodotus/Book 7 In Greek usage, Syria and Assyria were used almost interchangeably in reference to Assyria, although Herodotusdistinguished between the names Syria and Assyria , and for him, Syrians are the inhabitants of the Levant . Randolph Helm emphasised that Herodotus never applied the term Syria on the Mesopotamian region of Assyria which he always called "Assyria".
Revised:  (Pipes 1992), s:History of Herodotus/Book 7 In Greek usage, Syria and Assyria were used almost interchangeably in reference to Assyria, although Herodotusdistinguished between the names Syria and Assyria . Randolph Helm emphasised that Herodotus never applied the term Syria on the Mesopotamian region of Assyria which he always called "Assyria".
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Original:  (Pipes 1992), s:History of Herodotus/Book 7 In Greek usage, Syria and Assyria were used almost interchangeably in reference to Assyria, although Herodotusdistinguished between the names Syria and Assyria , and for him, Syrians are the inhabitants of the Levant . Randolph Helm emphasised that Herodotus never applied the term Syria on the Mesopotamian region of Assyria which he always called "Assyria".
Revised:  (Pipes 1992), s:History of Herodotus/Book 7 In Greek usage, Syria and Assyria were used almost interchangeably in reference to Assyria, although Herodotusdistinguished between the names Syria and Assyria , and for him, Syrians are the inhabitants of the Levant . Randolph Helm emphasized that Herodotus never applied the term Syria on the Mesopotamian region of Assyria which he always called "Assyria".
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Original:  In the Roman Empire, Syriaand Assyria came to be used as distinct geographical terms . "Syria" in the Roman Empire period referred to those parts of the Empire situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" in northern Iraq, southeast Turkey and northeast Syria was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
Revised:  Third period was marked by definite territorialization of the term Syria, as distinctive from Assyria. That process was finalized already during the Seleucid era (312-64 BCE), when Hellenistic (Greek) notions were applied in the region, and specific terms like Coele Syria were introduced, corresponding to western regions (ancient Aram), unrelated to ancient Assyria. Such distinctions were later inherited the Romans, who created the province of Syria, for regions western of Euphrates, while Assyria represented a distinctive geographical term, related to ancient Assyrian regions in eastern Mesopotamia. In the Roman Empire period referred to those parts of the Empire situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" in northern Iraq, southeast Turkey and northeast Syria was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
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Original:  In the Roman Empire, Syriaand Assyria came to be used as distinct geographical terms . "Syria" in the Roman Empire period referred to those parts of the Empire situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" in northern Iraq, southeast Turkey and northeast Syria was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
Revised:  In the Roman Empire, Syriaand Assyria came to be used as distinct geographical terms . "Syria" in the Roman Empire , "Syria" in its broadest sense referred to lands situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" in northern Iraq, southeast Turkey and northeast Syria was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
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Original:  In the Roman Empire, Syriaand Assyria came to be used as distinct geographical terms . "Syria" in the Roman Empire period referred to those parts of the Empire situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" in northern Iraq, southeast Turkey and northeast Syria was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
Revised:  In the Roman Empire, Syriaand Assyria came to be used as distinct geographical terms . "Syria" in the Roman Empire period referred to those parts of the Empire situated between Asia Minor and Egypt, i.e. the western Levant, while "Assyria" was part of the Persian Empire as Athura, and only very briefly came under Roman control (116–118 AD, marking the historical peak of Roman expansion), where it was known as Assyria Provincia.
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Original: Chiefdoms in archaeological theory In archaeological theory, Service's definition of chiefdoms as “ redistributional societies with a permanent central agency of coordination” (Service 1962: 144) has been most influential.
Revised: Chiefdoms in archaeological theory In archaeological theory, Service's definition of chiefdoms as “ redistribution societies with a permanent central agency of coordination” (Service 1962: 144) has been most influential.
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Original:  Pauketat argues that the evolutionary underpinnings of the chiefdom model are weighed down by racist and outdated theoretical baggage that can be traced back to Lewis Morgan's 19th century cultural evolution.
Revised:  Pauketat argues that the evolutionary underpinnings of the chiefdom model are weighed down by racist and outdated theoretical baggage that can be traced back to Lewis Morgan's 19th-century cultural evolution.
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Original:  Child behaviour – parent management training Nudge theory (or nudge) is a concept in behavioural science, political theory and economics which argues that indirect suggestions to try to achieve non-forced compliance can influence the motives, incentives and decision making of groups and individuals, at least as effectively – if not more effectively – than direct instruction, legislation, or enforcement.
Revised:  Child behavior – parent management training Nudge theory (or nudge) is a concept in behavioural science, political theory and economics which argues that indirect suggestions to try to achieve non-forced compliance can influence the motives, incentives and decision making of groups and individuals, at least as effectively – if not more effectively – than direct instruction, legislation, or enforcement.
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Original:  Child behaviour – parent management training Nudge theory (or nudge) is a concept in behavioural science, political theory and economics which argues that indirect suggestions to try to achieve non-forced compliance can influence the motives, incentives and decision making of groups and individuals, at least as effectively – if not more effectively – than direct instruction, legislation, or enforcement.
Revised:  Child behaviour – parent management training Nudge theory (or nudge) is a concept in behavioral science, political theory and economics which argues that indirect suggestions to try to achieve non-forced compliance can influence the motives, incentives and decision making of groups and individuals, at least as effectively – if not more effectively – than direct instruction, legislation, or enforcement.
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Original: Hudson, Robert (ed.) (2004) The Christian Writer's Manual of Style: Updated and Expanded Edition Zondervan, Grand Rapids, Mich., p.176, They tend to be associated with a daily time of prayer and meditation  .
Revised: Hudson, Robert (ed.) (2004) The Christian Writer's Manual of Style: Updated and Expanded Edition Zondervan, Grand Rapids, Mich., p.176, They tend to be associated with a daily time of prayer and meditation . Churchgoers often get one-year devotional books from Christian bookstores and gives these as gifts for life events, such as baptisms, confirmations, graduations, weddings, among other occasions .
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Original:  the Centre Emotion, Hôpital de la Salpêtrière, Paris, France  and the Unité de Psychiatrie Périnatale, Maternité Ambroise Paré, Bourg-La-Reine, France.
Revised:  the Centre Emotion, Hôpital de la Salpêtrière, Paris, France , and the Unité de Psychiatrie Périnatale, Maternité Ambroise Paré, Bourg-La-Reine, France.
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Original:  In the Soussignan, et. al. 2011 study , “Human newborns match tongue protrusion of disembodied human and robotic mouths”, researchers replicate the Meltzoff and Moore  with 2D stimuli.
Revised:  In the Soussignan, et. al. 2011 study “Human newborns match tongue protrusion of disembodied human and robotic mouths”, researchers replicate the Meltzoff and Moore with 2D stimuli.
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Original:  In the Soussignan, et. al. 2011 study , “Human newborns match tongue protrusion of disembodied human and robotic mouths”, researchers replicate the Meltzoff and Moore  with 2D stimuli.
Revised:  In the Soussignan, et. al. 2011 study , “Human newborns match tongue protrusion of disembodied human and robotic mouths”, researchers replicate the Meltzoff and Moore position with 2D stimuli.
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Original:  Maurer, Stager, and Mondlock’s study , “Cross-modal transfer of shape is difficult to demonstrate in 1-month-olds” (1999) , first criticized Meltzoff for “lacking important controls.”
Revised:  Maurer, Stager, and Mondlock’s study “Cross-modal transfer of shape is difficult to demonstrate in 1-month-olds” (1999) , first criticized Meltzoff for “lacking important controls.”
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Original:  Maurer, Stager, and Mondlock’s study , “Cross-modal transfer of shape is difficult to demonstrate in 1-month-olds” (1999) , first criticized Meltzoff for “lacking important controls.”
Revised:  Maurer, Stager, and Mondlock’s study , “Cross-modal transfer of shape is difficult to demonstrate in 1-month-olds” (1999) first criticized Meltzoff for “lacking important controls.”
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Original: In August 2011 in Mexico a group or person calling itself Individuals Tending Towards the Wild perpetrated an attack with a bomb at the Monterrey Institute of Technology and Higher Education, State of Mexico Campus, intended for the coordinator of its Business Development Center and Technology Transfer.
Revised: In August 2011 in Mexico a group or person calling itself Individualists Tending to the Wild perpetrated an attack with a bomb at the Monterrey Institute of Technology and Higher Education, State of Mexico Campus, intended for the coordinator of its Business Development Center and Technology Transfer.
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Original: Jiddu Krishnamurti Category:Meditation Category:Metaphilosophy Category:Metaphysical theories Category:Metaphysics of mind Category:Metaphysics of science Category:Mindfulness (psychology) Category:Mindfulness movement Category:Ontology Category:Perception Category:Personhood Category:Philosophical concepts Category:Philosophical problems Category:Psychotherapy Category:Reality Category:Subjective experience Category:Theory of mind Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in ne
Revised: Jiddu Krishnamurti Category:Meditation Category:Metaphilosophy Category:Metaphysical theories Category:Metaphysics of mind Category:Metaphysics of science Category:Mindfulness (psychology) Category:Mindfulness movement Category:Ontology Category:Perception Category:Personhood Category:Philosophical problems Category:Psychotherapy Category:Reality Category:Subjective experience Category:Theory of mind Category:Truth Category:Unsolved problems in ne
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Original:  Decree 900 did create some conflicts in practice, but these were not major, and the law is described as one of the most potentially successful land reforms in history. However, redistribution angered major landowners— including the United Fruit Company —and the United States , which construed Guatemala's land reform as a communistthreat .
Revised:  The expropriation of land led major landowners– including the United Fruit Company —and the United States , which construed Guatemala's land reform as a communistthreat .
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Original: Thunderegg Oregon State Rock, StateSymbols USAThe interior and exterior colors can vary depending on where the thunderegg is found. It is very common to dig them in one bed and then go to a different bed half a mile a way and the eggs look completely different. Some thundereggs have moss in the agate and others have plants in the agate. Those plants are called "plume" and those eggs are very desirable since it is not a common occurrence.
Revised: Thunderegg Oregon State Rock, StateSymbols USA
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Original:  The world's largest thunderegg, a 1.75 ton specimen, is housed by the Rice Northwest Museum of Rocks and Minerals in Oregon .Many of the thundereggs found in Oregon have agate inside that resembles the shape of the state of Oregon when cut .
Revised:  The world's largest thunderegg, a 1.75 ton specimen, is housed by the Rice Northwest Museum of Rocks and Minerals in Oregon .
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Original:  However, it is very hard to choose and to change our emotions directly . It is easier to change our thinking —to decide, for example, that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims  or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
Revised:  However, it is very hard to choose and to change our emotions directly , thus it is much easier to change our thinking —to decide, for example, that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
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Original:  It is easier to change our thinking —to decide, for example, that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims  or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
Revised:  It is easier to change our thinking , which will lead to more positive emotions. The client must make a conscious decision to alter his/her thought process. For example, to consciously decide that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
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Original:  It is easier to change our thinking —to decide, for example, that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims  or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
Revised:  It is easier to change our thinking —to decide, for example, that we will no longer think of ourselves as victims , or to decide that in our thoughts we will concentrate on what we can do rather than what we think everybody else ought to do.
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Original: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat  
Revised:  Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat 
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Original: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat  
Revised: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar Baseball bat 
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Original: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat  
Revised: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat Oar or Paddle 
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Original: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat  
Revised: Pickaxe handle (sometimes called a pickhandle or pick helve) Crowbar (sometimes called a wrecking bar, pry bar or prybar, pinch-bar, or occasionally a prise bar or prisebar, colloquially, in Britain and Australia its sometimes called a jemmy or jemmy bar, gooseneck, or pig foot) Baseball bat Pickaxe handle
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Original: World. CIA World Handbook Therefore,  the worldwide human population density is around 7,500,000,000 ÷ 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
Revised: World. CIA World Handbook Therefore, from this very crude type of calculation, the worldwide human population density is around 7,500,000,000 ÷ 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
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Original: World. CIA World Handbook Therefore,  the worldwide human population density is around 7,500,000,000 ÷ 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
Revised: World. CIA World Handbook Therefore, the worldwide human population density is approximately 7,500,000,000 ÷ 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
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Original:  If only the Earth's land area of 150,000,000 km2 (58,000,000 sq. mi.) is taken into account, then human population density is 50 per km2 (129 per sq. mi.).
Revised:  However, if only the Earth's land area of 150,000,000 km2 (58,000,000 sq. mi.) is taken into account, then human population density is 50 per km2 (129 per sq. mi.).
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Original:  In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants,  as a loose crowd taking up almost 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
Revised:  In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants, if conceptualized as a loose crowd taking up almost 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
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Original:  In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants,  as a loose crowd taking up almost 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
Revised:  In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants, as a loose crowd occupying just under 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
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Original: Born in Helsinki , his parents were Georg August Asp (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Mathilda Sofia Wetterhoff (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
Revised: Born in Hell , his parents were Georg August Asp (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Mathilda Sofia Wetterhoff (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
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Original: Born in Helsinki , his parents were Georg August Asp (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Mathilda Sofia Wetterhoff (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
Revised: Born in Helsinki , his parents were Adolf Hitler (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Mathilda Sofia Wetterhoff (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
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Original: Born in Helsinki , his parents were Georg August Asp (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Mathilda Sofia Wetterhoff (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
Revised: Born in Helsinki , his parents were Georg August Asp (1834–1901), professor of anatomy at the University of Helsinki and Adolf Hitler (1840–1920), developer of female gymnastics.
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Original:  This was hugely beneficial for her son Simão Pires Sardinia who later in life was able hide his mothers slave ancestry and his status of being an illegitimate son in order to receive the prestigious Portuguese title , the knight of the Order of Christ.
Revised:  This was hugely beneficial for her son Simão Pires Sardinia who later in life was able hide his mothers slave ancestry and his status of being an illegitimate son in order to receive the prestigious Portuguese title knight of the Order of Christ.
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Original:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the 4 sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, whom were granted noble titles by the Portuguese Court .
Revised:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the four sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, whom were granted noble titles by the Portuguese Court .
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Original:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the 4 sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, whom were granted noble titles by the Portuguese Court .
Revised:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the 4 sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, who were granted noble titles by the Portuguese Court .
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Original:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the 4 sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, whom were granted noble titles by the Portuguese Court .
Revised:  In 1770, João Fernandes had to return to Portugal and took along with him the 4 sons he had with Chica as well as Chica's two other sons Placid Pires Sardinha and Simão Pires Sardinha, whom were granted noble titles by the Portuguese court .
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Original:  Augusto Roa Bastos' s I, the Supreme (Yo, el Supremo, 1974) is a fictionalized account of the nineteenth-century Paraguayan dictator José Gaspar Rodríguez de Francia.
Revised:  Augusto Roa Bastos' I, the Supreme (Yo, el Supremo, 1974) is a fictionalized account of the nineteenth-century Paraguayan dictator José Gaspar Rodríguez de Francia.
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