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Original: 04 OTT Dean McAmmond (1) Tom Preissing, Patrick Eaves 1-13 2nd 2:13 OTT Mike Comrie (2) Mike Fisher, Joe Corvo 2-1 4 2nd 7:20 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (2) PP Wade Redden, Dany Heatley 3-15 2nd 17:12 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (3) Dean McAmmond, Ray Emery 4-16 3rd 14:40 PIT Sidney Crosby (3) Evgeni Malkin, Mark Recchi 4-2 Three Stars of the Game External Links Official website of the Pittsburgh Penguins Official website of the Ottawa Senators National Hockey League Official Website
Revised: 04 OTT Dean McAmmond (1) Tom Preissing, Patrick Eaves 1-13 2nd 2:13 OTT Mike Comrie (2) Mike Fisher, Joe Corvo 2-1 4 2nd 7:20 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (2) PP Wade Redden, Dany Heatley 3-15 2nd 17:12 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (3) Dean McAmmond, Ray Emery 4-16 3rd 14:40 PIT Sidney Crosby (3) Evgeni Malkin, Mark Recchi 4-2 Three stars of the game External Links Official website of the Pittsburgh Penguins Official website of the Ottawa Senators National Hockey League Official Website
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Original: 04 OTT Dean McAmmond (1) Tom Preissing, Patrick Eaves 1-13 2nd 2:13 OTT Mike Comrie (2) Mike Fisher, Joe Corvo 2-1 4 2nd 7:20 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (2) PP Wade Redden, Dany Heatley 3-15 2nd 17:12 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (3) Dean McAmmond, Ray Emery 4-16 3rd 14:40 PIT Sidney Crosby (3) Evgeni Malkin, Mark Recchi 4-2 Three Stars of the Game External Links Official website of the Pittsburgh Penguins Official website of the Ottawa Senators National Hockey League Official Website
Revised: 04 OTT Dean McAmmond (1) Tom Preissing, Patrick Eaves 1-13 2nd 2:13 OTT Mike Comrie (2) Mike Fisher, Joe Corvo 2-1 4 2nd 7:20 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (2) PP Wade Redden, Dany Heatley 3-15 2nd 17:12 OTT Daniel Alfredsson (3) Dean McAmmond, Ray Emery 4-16 3rd 14:40 PIT Sidney Crosby (3) Evgeni Malkin, Mark Recchi 4-2 Three Stars of the Game Related news
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Original:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = Rob Niedermayer , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = Chris Pronger , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = Stephane Veilleux , LW, Minnesota Wild
Revised:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = Chris Pronger , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = Stephane Veilleux , LW, Minnesota Wild
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Original:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = Rob Niedermayer , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = Chris Pronger , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = Stephane Veilleux , LW, Minnesota Wild
Revised:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = Rob Niedermayer , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = Stephane Veilleux , LW, Minnesota Wild
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Original:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = Rob Niedermayer , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = Chris Pronger , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = Stephane Veilleux , LW, Minnesota Wild
Revised:  Three Stars of the Game #1 = Rob Niedermayer , C, Anaheim Ducks - 1 Goal #2 = Chris Pronger , D, Anaheim Ducks - 2 Assists #3 = , LW, Minnesota Wild
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Original: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score Midway though the first peroid , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first peroid but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning thoughout the second peroid .
Revised: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score midway through the first period , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first peroid but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning thoughout the second peroid .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score Midway though the first peroid , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first peroid but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning thoughout the second peroid .
Revised: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score Midway though the first peroid , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first period but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning thoughout the second peroid .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score Midway though the first peroid , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first peroid but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning thoughout the second peroid .
Revised: Vincent Lecavalier would be the first to score Midway though the first peroid , on a sharp angle to put the Lightning up 1-0. Johan Holmqvist would shutout the Devils though the entire first peroid but Martin Brodeur would return the favor as he would shutout the Lightning throughout the second period .
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Original:  Toss: England won, and elected to bat first.
Revised: South Africa started batting in emphatic fashion: reaching 50 in just 5.4 overs: in contrast, England had taken 15.1 overs to reach 50. However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it. South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate above 7.75, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries and only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*. Kallis got to 17*, including getting his 9000th ODI run - a feat only 10 players have achieved. Toss: England won, and elected to bat first.
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Original:  South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate above 7.75 , resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries and only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8 , resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries and only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate above 7.75 , resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries and only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate above 7.75 , resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
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Original: Hall bowled Panesar and Anderson out to get his first ODI five-wicket haul , the third of the competition (after fellow South Africans Charl Langeveldt's against Sri Lanka and Andre Nel's against Bangladesh), to finish with figures of 5-18 (10) - the best by a South African in a World Cup, beating Lance Klusener's 5-21 against Kenya in 1999.
Revised: Boucher caught Panesar off of the bowling of Nel following a poor shot, and Hall went on to bowl Anderson out to get his first ODI five-wicket haul , the third of the competition (after fellow South Africans Charl Langeveldt's against Sri Lanka and Andre Nel's against Bangladesh), to finish with figures of 5-18 (10) - the best by a South African in a World Cup, beating Lance Klusener's 5-21 against Kenya in 1999.
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Original: Hall bowled Panesar and Anderson out to get his first ODI five-wicket haul , the third of the competition (after fellow South Africans Charl Langeveldt's against Sri Lanka and Andre Nel's against Bangladesh), to finish with figures of 5-18 (10) - the best by a South African in a World Cup, beating Lance Klusener's 5-21 against Kenya in 1999.
Revised: Hall bowled Panesar and Anderson out to get his first ODI five-wicket haul (taking the wickets of Collingwood, Flintoff, Nixon, Mahmood and Anderson), the third of the competition (after fellow South Africans Charl Langeveldt's against Sri Lanka and Andre Nel's against Bangladesh), to finish with figures of 5-18 (10) - the best by a South African in a World Cup, beating Lance Klusener's 5-21 against Kenya in 1999.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  South Africa started batting in emphatic fashion: reaching 50 in just 5.4 overs: in contrast, England had taken 15.1 overs to reach 50. However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  South Africa started batting in emphatic fashion: reaching 50 in just 5.4 overs: in contrast, England had taken 15.1 overs to reach 50; and while de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, ( it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it ), South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, to finish on 85*.
Revised:  However, de Villiers was lucky not to be out on just 21 after being caught behind by Nixon off of the bowling of Anderson, but it was an edge so faint that the umpire, Steve Bucknor, couldn't hear it and couldn't give it . South Africa kept the foot on the gas and even after eventually losing de Villiers on 42 they kept the run rate around 8, resulting in Smith getting 50 off of just 34 deliveries with only 9 dot balls, finishing on 85*.
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Original:  Thomas Vanek would double the Sabres' lead, pushing the puck past DiPietro's glove side that was initially ruled no good, before being reviewed Trent Hunter would anwser for the Islanders less than a minute and a half later, picking up a rebound off of Ryan Smyth's shot.
Revised:  Thomas Vanek would double the Sabres' lead, pushing the puck past DiPietro's glove side that was initially ruled no good, before being reviewed Trent Hunter would answer for the Islanders less than a minute and a half later, picking up a rebound off of Ryan Smyth's shot.
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Original:  The Premiership leaders quickly made the Blades pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick received a pass from Cristiano Ronaldo , and chipped the ball over the sprawling Paddy Kenny.
Revised:  The Premiership leaders quickly made the Blades pay, and on 4 minutes, Michael Carrick received a pass from , and chipped the ball over the sprawling Paddy Kenny.
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Original:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
Revised:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
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Original:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
Revised:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
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Original:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
Revised:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in Thermi , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
Revised:  Gen. Büyükanıt is in Thessaloniki , northern Greece, where the Conference of the Balkan countries Chiefs of Army Staff takes place, and met his Greek counterpart, Admiral Panayiotis Chinofotis . Greece's Minister of National Defence Evangelos Meimarakis this morning declared open the Conference which takes place in , a suburb in eastern Thessaloniki.
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Original: Ayatollah Khamenei, Iran's supreme leader and commander-in-chief of the military, met with the army personnel and their families on April 18, the Day of Army of the Islamic Republic of Iran.
Revised: Ayatollah Khamenei, Iran's supreme leader and commander-in-chief of the military, met with army personnel and their families on April 18, the Day of Army of the Islamic Republic of Iran.
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Original:  He blasted the military of the previous regime as one without spirituality, saying, "the defunct regime (of Shah ) which was backed by America and other superpowers  amassed all its efforts on building an army of irreligious and unpopular identity.
Revised:  He blasted the military of the previous regime as one without spirituality, saying, "the defunct regime (of Shah Pahlavi), which was backed by America and other superpowers amassed all its efforts on building an army of irreligious and unpopular identity.
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Original:  He blasted the military of the previous regime as one without spirituality, saying, "the defunct regime (of Shah ) which was backed by America and other superpowers  amassed all its efforts on building an army of irreligious and unpopular identity.
Revised:  He blasted the military of the previous regime as one without spirituality, saying, "the defunct regime (of Shah ) which was backed by America and other superpowers , amassed all its efforts on building an army of irreligious and unpopular identity.
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Original:  The second quake of 5.6 magnitude struck just five minutes after the first and a 6.1 magnitude quake struck just over an hour later . A third quake, a 5.9 magnitude , struck about 15 minutes later.
Revised:  The second quake of 5.6 magnitude struck just five minutes after the first and a 6.1 magnitude quake struck just over an hour later , followed by a magnitude 5.9 about 15 minutes later.
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Original: LIES!     
Revised: LIES! Members of the paramilitary group (Basij) - which is variously characterized as a pro-government vigilante group or militia - who had been convicted escaped the death penalty because they argued before the Islamic court that they acted in defense of Islamic laws. The members, who pledge allegiance to Iran's Ayatollah Ali Khamenei, stoned one of their victims to death and tied up four others, including Nejadmalayeri and Nikpour, before throwing them into a swimming pool where they drowned. 
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Original: LIES!     
Revised: LIES! In Iran, courts have previously imposed severe penalties for what they considered immoral behaviour. In 2004, a 16 year old girl, Atefah Sahaaleh, was executed for committing "acts incompatible with chastity", after she testified that she had been repeatedly raped while in an abusive relationship with an ex-revolutionary guard, Ali Darabi. Dabari received a sentence of 95 lashes. In 1998 a German businessman, Helmut Hofer, was sentenced to death for having a relationship with a 26-year-old single Iranian woman.
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Original:  Michael Sampson, the co-manager of the space agency's Electronic Parts and Packaging Program, who had known Beverly for ten years  described him as friendly, peaceful person, with a positive attitude to his co-workers.
Revised:  Michael Sampson, the co-manager of the space agency's Electronic Parts and Packaging Program, who had known Beverly for ten years , described him as friendly, peaceful person, with a positive attitude to his co-workers.
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Original:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips  remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said  feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Revised:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown in Tennessee . Smith, a cousin of Phillips remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
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Original:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips  remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said  feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Revised:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips , remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips  remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said  feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Revised:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said that he was feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips  remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said  feeling lonely and without family, but nothing suggesting anything so tragic.
Revised:  He had lost his father in 2003, but had decided not to return to his hometown Tennesse . Smith, a cousin of Phillips remarked that in the Christmas card he had received from him last year, Phillips said feeling lonely and without family, but nothing in the card suggested anything so tragic.
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Original: The Basilica of St. Peter as seen from Castel Sant'Angelo The Vatican has abolished limbo, which, according to the Roman Catholic belief, is a permanent status of the unbaptized who die in infancy, without having committed any personal sins, but without having been freed from original sin, or in some cases abortion.
Revised: "Jesus in Limbo" by Domenico Beccafumi. The Vatican has abolished limbo, which, according to the Roman Catholic belief, is a permanent status of the unbaptized who die in infancy, without having committed any personal sins, but without having been freed from original sin, or in some cases abortion.
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Original:  Following a press-conference on Friday, reported that analyst Sergei Shakariants said the attackers could have wanted to delay the elections.
Revised: The deputy chairman of the parliament Eduard Sharmazanov also said the act was a "provocation against democratic, free and transparent elections". A parliament speaker admitted the election can be postponed. Following a press-conference on Friday, reported that analyst Sergei Shakariants said the attackers could have wanted to delay the elections.
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