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Original:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland ,  to the north of the Firth of Clyde and 25 miles west of the city of Glasgow . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
Revised:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland , , to the north of the Firth of Clyde and 25 miles west of the city of Glasgow . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
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Original:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland ,  to the north of the Firth of Clyde and 25 miles west of the city of Glasgow . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
Revised:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland , to the north of the and 25 miles west of the city of Glasgow . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
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Original:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland ,  to the north of the Firth of Clyde and 25 miles west of the city of Glasgow . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
Revised:  Faslane lies on the eastern shore of Gare Loch in Argyll and Bute, Scotland , to the north of the Firth of Clyde and 25 miles west of the city of . Vanguard is one of the deadliest vessels on the planet.
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Original:  It was built at Barrow-in-Furness by Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd (now BAE Systems Submarine Solutions ), was launched on 4 March, 1992, and commissioned on 14 August, 1993.
Revised:  It was built at by (now ), was launched on 4 March, 1992, and commissioned on 14 August, 1993.
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Original:  It was built at Barrow-in-Furness by Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd (now BAE Systems Submarine Solutions ), was launched on 4 March, 1992, and commissioned on 14 August, 1993.
Revised:  It was built at Barrow-in-Furness by Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd (now BAE Systems Submarine Solutions ), was on 4 March, 1992, and commissioned on 14 August, 1993.
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Original:  It was built at Barrow-in-Furness by Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd (now BAE Systems Submarine Solutions ), was launched on 4 March, 1992, and commissioned on 14 August, 1993.
Revised:  It was built at Barrow-in-Furness by Vickers Shipbuilding and Engineering Ltd (now BAE Systems Submarine Solutions ), was launched on 4 March, 1992, and on 14 August, 1993.
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Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
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Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Edit intent: meaning-changed
Original:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and  consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the Musée de la Marine in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
Revised:  "The Vanguard has two periscopes , a CK51 search model and a CH91 attack model, both of which have a TV camera and thermal imager as well as conventional optics," said John E. Pike , director and a national security analyst for URL an easily accessible pundit , and active in opposing the SDI, and ITAR , and consulting on NEO's . Scale model of the Triomphant (S 616) , on display at the in Paris "But the periscopes are useless at that depth.
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Original:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
Revised:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
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Original:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
Revised:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ( ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
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Original:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
Revised:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian or the American Trident .
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Original:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American Trident .
Revised:  A Ballistic missile submarine is a submarine equipped to launch ballistic missiles (SLBMs ). Ballistic missile submarines are larger than any other type of submarine, in order to accommodate SLBMs such as the Russian R-29 or the American .
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French or , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
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Original:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the Redoutable-class boats.
Revised:  The Triomphant class of strategic missile submarines of the French Navy are currently being introduced into service to provide the sea based component (the Force Océanique Stratégique ) of the French nuclear deterrent or Force de frappe , with the M45 SLBM . They are replacing the boats.
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Original:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as € 55m, with intricate missile guidance systems and navigation controls having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the Irish Independent reported.
Revised:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as 55m, with intricate missile guidance systems and navigation controls having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the Irish Independent reported.
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Original:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as € 55m, with intricate missile guidance systems and navigation controls having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the Irish Independent reported.
Revised:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as € 55m, with intricate systems and having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the Irish Independent reported.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as € 55m, with intricate missile guidance systems and navigation controls having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the Irish Independent reported.
Revised:  Repairs for both heavily scraped and dented, missile-laden vessels were "conservatively" estimated to cost as much as € 55m, with intricate missile guidance systems and navigation controls having to be replaced, and would be met by the French and British taxpayer, the reported.
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Original:  But if the collision had been more powerful the submarines could have sunk very quickly and the fate of the 250 crew members would have been very serious indeed,” said Andrey Frolov, from Moscow's Centre for Analysis of Strategies and Technologies . “I think this accident will force countries that possess nuclear submarines to sit down at the negotiating table and devise safety precautions that might avert such accidents in the future…
Revised:  But if the collision had been more powerful the submarines could have sunk very quickly and the fate of the 250 crew members would have been very serious indeed,” said Andrey Frolov, from . “I think this accident will force countries that possess nuclear submarines to sit down at the negotiating table and devise safety precautions that might avert such accidents in the future…
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Original:  said Kate Hudson , chair of Britain's Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the Russian submarine RFS Kursk K-141 explosion and sinking in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
Revised:  said , chair of Britain's Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the Russian submarine RFS Kursk K-141 explosion and sinking in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
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Original:  said Kate Hudson , chair of Britain's Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the Russian submarine RFS Kursk K-141 explosion and sinking in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
Revised:  said Kate Hudson , chair of Britain's . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the Russian submarine RFS Kursk K-141 explosion and sinking in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
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Original:  said Kate Hudson , chair of Britain's Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the Russian submarine RFS Kursk K-141 explosion and sinking in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
Revised:  said Kate Hudson , chair of Britain's Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament . "This is the most severe incident involving a nuclear submarine since the in 2000 and the first time since the Cold War that two nuclear-armed subs are known to have collided.
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Original:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
Revised:  , , a Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
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Original:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
Revised:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
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Original:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
Revised:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
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Original:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the Ministry of Defence Secretary of State John Hutton to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
Revised:  Michael Thomas Hancock, CBE, a Liberal Democrat Member of Parliament for Portsmouth South and a City councillor for Fratton ward, and who sits on the Commons defence committee , has called on the to make a statement when parliament sits next week.
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Original:  Tory defence spokesman Liam Fox , a British Conservative politician, currently Shadow Defence Secretary and Member of Parliament for Woodspring , said: “For two submarines to collide while apparently unaware of each other’s presence is extremely worrying.”
Revised:  defence spokesman , a British Conservative politician, currently Shadow Defence Secretary and Member of Parliament for Woodspring , said: “For two submarines to collide while apparently unaware of each other’s presence is extremely worrying.”
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Original:  Tory defence spokesman Liam Fox , a British Conservative politician, currently Shadow Defence Secretary and Member of Parliament for Woodspring , said: “For two submarines to collide while apparently unaware of each other’s presence is extremely worrying.”
Revised:  Tory defence spokesman Liam Fox , a British politician, currently Shadow Defence Secretary and Member of Parliament for Woodspring , said: “For two submarines to collide while apparently unaware of each other’s presence is extremely worrying.”
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