wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。   
Revised:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting products, solutions, and international specialists in flower industry. VIPs at Opening Ceremony At the opening ceremony yesterday, Chia-chuan Su (Commissioner of COA Taiwan) encouraged the export market in Taiwan's flower industry and mentioned applications on arts and cultural decorations. "After 12 years' suspension and Taiwan Orchid Exhibition held in Tainan several months ago, This show (TIFE) finally located at TWTC and gathered flower industry and application companies in several countries including Taiwan. We (organizers) also set a special pavilion for orchids to promote 2008 Taiwan Orchid Exhibition, if we successfully hold this exhibition, we'll expand exhibition space next year." 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。 
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Original:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。   
Revised:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 "Taiwan had some unique creations and diversifications especially flower seeds and materials in the flower industry, with those conditions above, the good quality and its excellence can be shown in its industry in Taiwan." Shui-bian Chen (President of Republic of China, Taiwan) remarked at Opening Ceremony. Theme Pavilion Showcase: Flying Blue Magpies And Dancing Butterflies. In the international pavilions, some of participants like the Netherlands, Japan, Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Australia showed their own style with booth decoration, national culture, and unique products like planting. By the way, TFDA will invite entertainer from 1st season "Taiwan Million Star" finalist Judy Ting-wei Chou and zodiac professional in Taiwan Yung-heng "the Zodiac Sign Prince" Yen for the "Stage of Floral Show Zone" performances separately on Nov. 2 
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Original:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。   
Revised:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。 3 with night hours. 
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Original:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。   
Revised:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。 According to TFDA, 2007 TIFE is a professional trade show in the flower industry, the opening day is only available for trade and industrial visitors and medias, public people should enter with tickets on next 4 days from today. And night hours will be available on Nov. 2 
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Original:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。   
Revised:  This show had more than 200 participated companies and organizations exhibiting solutions and products like seeds 繼昨（30）日，台鐵的「花卉觀光列車」在高雄火車站正式啟航後，花卉產業的盛事「2007年台北國際花卉展」今（31）日上午在台北世界貿易中心正式登場，這項由行政院農業委員會指導，台灣區花卉發展協會主辦的活動，除了花卉藝術的各大主題館展示以外，國內、外兩百餘廠商，也相繼展示相關產品，當中也包含花卉週邊應用與相關公協會組織等。 在上午的開幕典禮中，農委會主委蘇嘉全除了鼓勵花卉市場的外銷拓展，也提及文化與藝術相關的應用，舉凡本次主題館，繼上半年的台灣國際蘭展之後，這次也有專為蘭花設計的專區，希望能重新打造台灣專有的蝴蝶蘭王國。另外，陳水扁總統認為，台灣的花卉產業，可以顯現其優良品質，特別是種植的原物料、以及培育的成果，這是因為花卉產品的多樣性、獨有性，讓台灣有機會拓展國際市場。 3. With security and quality issue, minors under 120cm aren't permitted to enter the showground.
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Original:  According to TFDA, 2007 TIFE is a professional trade show in the flower industry, the opening day is only available for trade and industrial visitors and medias, public people should enter with tickets on next 4 days from today.
Revised:  According to TFDA, 2007 TIFE is a professional trade show in the flower industry, the opening day is only available for trade and industrial visitors and medias, public people should enter with tickets on next four days from today.
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Original:  Washoe learned over 250 signs of American sign language, and other researchers quickly began to make similar experiments with other chimpanzees and great apes   .
Revised:  Washoe learned over 250 signs of American sign language, and other researchers quickly began to make similar experiments with other chimpanzees and great apes However, later work by Herbert Terrace suggested that the behaviour of Washoe and others was, to a large extent, imitating the researchers rather than spontaneous. Furthermore, Washoe and other chimpanzees never learned how to use grammar or how to construct recursions, two things which many linguists point to as unique aspects of language. Later attempts to have chimpanzees learn by observation as human infants do have also been successful, but there are still no signs that they have learned grammar. Some linguists such as Noam Chomsky have suggested that humans have specialized areas of the brain devoted to processing language and that we are hardwired to do so. Such hypotheses explain why apparently intelligent apes are unable to form language .
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Original:  References BBC, November 15, 2004: Macedonia Prime Minister Resigns Reuters, November 15, 2004: Macedonian PM Quits, Says Reform Drive Not Supported NOS, November 15, 2004: Premier Macedonië stapt op Category:November 15, 2004 Category:Macedonia Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Publis
Revised:  Category:November 15, 2004 Category:Macedonia Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Publis
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Original:  References BBC, November 15, 2004: Macedonia Prime Minister Resigns Reuters, November 15, 2004: Macedonian PM Quits, Says Reform Drive Not Supported NOS, November 15, 2004: Premier Macedonië stapt op Category:November 15, 2004 Category:Macedonia Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Publis
Revised:  References BBC, November 15, 2004: Macedonia Prime Minister Resigns Reuters, November 15, 2004: Macedonian PM Quits, Says Reform Drive Not Supported NOS, November 15, 2004: Premier Macedonië stapt op 
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Original:  among horses, Red Hare" (In Chinese: 馬中赤兔，人中拉拉) was recently elected as the "Best Internet Cool Quote"   .
Revised:  among horses, Red Hare" (In Chinese: 馬中赤兔，人中拉拉) was recently elected as the "Best Internet Cool Quote" Laa-Laa refers to the yellow character from the Teletubbies television series, and Red Hare refers to military general Lü Bu's horse during China's Three Kingdoms period .
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Original:  The quote was given its title after a two-week voting period, that started on October 14 until Pepsico Taiwan & Doritos announced "Top 10 Internet Cool Quote" on October 31.
Revised:  The quote was given its title after a two-week voting period, that started on October 14 until PepsiCo Taiwan & Doritos announced "Top 10 Internet Cool Quote" on October 31.
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Original: Many medias and younger players in Taiwan focused on the latest Xbox 360 RPG game "Viva Piñata: Party Animals" because of Halloween. Burger King Taiwan Branch announced some promotions with this game, and the animation film of "Viva Piñata" will be available next month in Taiwan .
Revised: By once again choosing to spend all of your free time out on the surface of the sun until melanoma has developed, you have forced me to pull the attending dermatologist away from his acne seminar and validate his most ridiculous of career choices .
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Original: By once again choosing to spend all of your free time out on the surface of the sun until melanoma has developed, you have forced me to pull the attending dermatologist away from his acne seminar and validate his most ridiculous of career choices .
Revised: Many medias and younger players in Taiwan focused on the latest Xbox 360 RPG game "Viva Piñata: Party Animals" because of Halloween. Burger King Taiwan Branch announced some promotions with this game, and the animation film of "Viva Piñata" will be available next month in Taiwan .
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Original: Wikinews is Communism  
Revised: Wikinews is Communism Mr. Prime (50), a former British Olympian, has an extensive coaching background. He moved to Australia in 1993 to take on the role of senior coach at the Australian Institute of Sport (AIS) in Canberra. He spent 25 years coaching in Birmingham prior to his move to Australia. In Birmingham he trained five British swimmers to Olympic representation including Nick Gillingham. 
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Original: 200px|Peter Andren , Source:peterandren4senate. com 200px|Peter Andren and Tony Windsor vote to force a review of the AUSFTA Source: Calare Independent Australian federal member of Calare, Peter Andren died on Saturday after a short battle with pancreatic cancer.
Revised: 200px|Peter Andren . 200px|Peter Andren and Tony Windsor vote to force a review of the AUSFTA Source: Calare Independent Australian federal member of Calare, Peter Andren died on Saturday after a short battle with pancreatic cancer.
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Original: 200px|Peter Andren , Source:peterandren4senate. com 200px|Peter Andren and Tony Windsor vote to force a review of the AUSFTA Source: Calare Independent Australian federal member of Calare, Peter Andren died on Saturday after a short battle with pancreatic cancer.
Revised: 200px|Peter Andren , Source:peterandren4senate. com 200px|Peter Andren and Tony Windsor vote to force a review of the AUSFTA . Australian federal member of Calare, Peter Andren died on Saturday after a short battle with pancreatic cancer.
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Original: Willy on     
Revised: Willy on The release of the seven came as French President Nicolas Sarkozy arrived in Chad to hold talks on the case with Chadian officials. The lawyer for the seven, Jean-Bernard Padare, told Reuters that the seven were free to collect their belongings from the courthouse. "They are happy, they are free," said Padare. "It's the end." 
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Revised: Willy on A French charity, Zoe's Ark, had arranged for the 103 children to be flown out of Chad in an attempt to rescue them from the humanitarian crisis created as a result of the neighbouring Darfur conflict. However, Chadian officials have since described the operation as "kidnapping" and "extortion", while the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees revealed that many of the children involved were not orphans. 
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Original:  The elite runner has now won all seven marathons she has competed in, and has qualified for the upcoming Beijing Olympics of 2008, where she will try to rectify the forfait from the 2004 summer Olympics in Athens.
Revised:  The elite runner has now won all seven marathons she has competed in, and has qualified for the upcoming Beijing Olympics of 2008, where she will try to rectify the forfeit from the 2004 summer Olympics in Athens.
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Original:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the  $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
Revised:  Wami, who had just successfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
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Original:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the  $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
Revised:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon five weeks ago, still managed to take home the $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
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Original:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the  $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
Revised:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the US $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
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Original:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the  $ 500000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
Revised:  Wami, who had just succesfully defended her title in the Berlin marathon 5 weeks ago, still managed to take home the $ 500,000 prize for winning the World Marathon Majors, a contest that spanned major races over the last two years (New York City, Boston, Chicago, London and Berlin).
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Original:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
Revised:  Last April, the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
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Original:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
Revised:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had blocked Scientology from registering as a church in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
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Original:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
Revised:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 10 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
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Original:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
Revised:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 13 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
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Original:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages and court expenses .
Revised:  Earlier this year the European Court of Human Rights ruled that Russia had violated Article 9 (Freedom of Religion) and 11 (Freedom of Association) of the European Convention of Human Rights by not registering the Church of Scientology as a religious organization in Moscow and ordered payment of 25 ,000 euros ( 36 ,000 dollars) in damages . In September, Belgium federal prosecutors announced that they had finished an investigation which would likely lead to charges against the Church of Scientology including blackmail, breaking privacy laws, unlawful practice of medicine, and formation of a criminal organisation .
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Original:  However, the final amount raised by over 35,000 Ron Paul donors was over US$4 million. This is the largest fundraising day in primary history since John Kerry's 2004 acceptance of the Democratic nomination. It was originally reported that on June 30, 2007 Hillary Clinton raised US$ 6.5 million.
Revised:  However, the final amount raised by over 35,000 Ron Paul donors was over $4 million. This is the largest fundraising day in primary history since John Kerry's 2004 acceptance of the Democratic nomination. It was originally reported that on June 30, 2007 Hillary Clinton raised $ 6.5 million.
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Original: Wikinews is Communism       
Revised: Wikinews is Communism Berlusconi addressed the Senate, then went to the Quirinale presidential palace and announced his resignation and his plans to form a new government. He stated that the coalition has a loose agreement to form a new government that will last until elections scheduled for next year. It is heavily speculated that the parties composing the coalition are still debating about which ministers to choose. 
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Original:  The United States Air Force suspended non-mission critical F-15 flight operations on Nov. 3 following the crash of a Missouri Air National Guard F-15C aircraft Nov. 2.
Revised: USAF F-15C. The United States Air Force suspended non-mission critical F-15 flight operations on Nov. 3 following the crash of a Missouri Air National Guard F-15C aircraft Nov. 2.
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Original: At least four members of an armed criminal group have been killed and six arrested in a police action dubbed "Mountain Storm,"  Interior Ministry spokesman Ivo Kotevski told the MIA state news agency.
Revised: At least four members of an armed criminal group have been killed and six arrested in a police action dubbed "Mountain Storm," Macedonian Interior Ministry spokesman Ivo Kotevski told the MIA state news agency.
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Original: Three power plant workers at the Salem Harbor Power Station in Salem died overnight after being severely burned when a water tube they were near burst releasing high pressure steam which burned the men on the head, face, neck and hands just before 9am EST yesterday.
Revised: Three power plant workers at the Salem Harbor Power Station in Salem died overnight after being severely burned when a water tube they were near burst releasing high pressure steam which burned the men on the head, face, neck and hands just before 9 a.m. EST yesterday.
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Original:  The three men, Mark Mansfield, 41, of Peabody, Phillip Robinson, 56, of Beverly and Matthew Indeglia, 20, of Lawrence were first rushed to the North Shore Medical Center in Salem before being transported to Brigham and Women's Hospital in Boston were they died overnight.
Revised:  The three men, Mark Mansfield, 41, of Peabody, Phillip Robinson, 56, of Beverly and Matthew Indeglia, 20, of Lawrence were first rushed to the North Shore Medical Center in Salem before being transported to Brigham and Women's Hospital in Boston where they died overnight.
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Original:  The boiler involved is 50 years old and  according to plant officials, is inspected yearly and according to the Salem Fire Department , they have received 19 calls concerning the boiler over the past five years, this is normal according to the fire department  .
Revised:  The boiler involved is 50 years old and , according to plant officials, is inspected yearly and according to the Salem Fire Department , they have received 19 calls concerning the boiler over the past five years, this is normal according to the fire department .
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