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Original:  For example, even window shoppers are consuming – the product is marketers’ production (specifically in this case, the window dresser's creation). Possibly, only in death are we neither consuming nor producing, but merely being consumed, though it could be argued that one's body is consuming space, particularly in a cemetery plot (real estate), but even if cremated and scattered . Gary Becker's household production functions and similar topics note that people often purchase goods and then combine them with time to produce something that has meaning or practicality to them (which produce utility).
Revised:  For example, window shoppers can be seen as consuming a product by spending attention on shop displays, which are produced by marketers. In addition, some behaviors that do not appear to match the description of consumption can be understood as replacements for consumption. For example, a person that cooks a meal instead of purchasing it can be seen as having paid for that meal through labor instead of wages . Gary Becker's household production functions and similar topics note that people often purchase goods and then combine them with time to produce something that has meaning or practicality to them (which produce utility).
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Original: A positive is a film or  paper record of a scene that represents the color and luminance of objects in that scene with the same colors and luminances (as near as the medium will allow).
Revised: Positive has multiple meanings in the world of photography. The two main definitions of positive photography include positive space and positive film. Positive Space Positive space is the idea that any part of a photo that includes the subject, stands out from the rest of the photo. It is key component in most photographs that helps convey emotions towards an audience. The technique can illustrate emotions ranging from crowdedness, to power, to chaos, or even to movement in a photo. Positive photos often busy and active so that most of the focus is drawn towards the subject. It is important to note that positive space in photography is usually balanced with negative space to make an appealing composition. For example, if a photo is over-crowded and it is hard to distinguish what is and is not the subject of the photo (meaning there is a lack of definition or negative space, or there's too much negative space), then the photo may not be compositionally well thought out or perhaps fits a different style of photography like abstract. Example of Positive Photography: The jet and clouds crowd most of the image taking away most of the negative space like the sky and ground Example of positive photography: the leaves and stem are the subject of the photo and take up most of the space paper record of a scene that represents the color and luminance of objects in that scene with the same colors and luminances (as near as the medium will allow).
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Original: A positive is a film or  paper record of a scene that represents the color and luminance of objects in that scene with the same colors and luminances (as near as the medium will allow).
Revised: A positive is a film or Positive Film Positive film, which is used to develop photos (slides) that would go into a slide projector, is also known as “reversal,” “slide,” or “transparency” film. It is a film or paper record of a scene that represents the color and luminance of objects in that scene with the same colors and luminances (as near as the medium will allow).
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Original:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process.  image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
Revised:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process. Using E-6 chemicals for processing these transparent photos and combining them with C-41 chemicals, a process known as cross processing results in highly saturated and vivid photos with different colors and brightness each time the process is done. image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
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Original:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process.  image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
Revised:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process. non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
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Original:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process.  image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
Revised:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process. image area : light transfer from image area History When film was first made (mid-19th century), it used silver-plated copper sheets that contained three layers with light sensitive chemicals on them. Other items used to create film included leather, paper, and glass sheets. Glass sheets were the most popular due being cheaper and more opaque than plastic sheets. By 1895 “safety film” became the new norm as it was flexible and roll-able unlike the copper and glass sheets, and it was safer than nitrate film; however, it would take until the 1930’s for the modern color subtract film and positive film to finally develop. Even then, the film produced images that were too dark in color and would take an additional six years for Kodachrome, a film produced by Kodak that used color subtraction methods, to lighten the colors and film for more suitable images. Gradually over time, the process and chemicals used for the processes to make positive photography became refined and better in terms of detail, resolution, lighting, and color. Category:Photography equipme 
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Original:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process.  image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme 
Revised:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process. image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> References Photography Life, Learn Pro Photography, Lomography, Photography History Facts, Image of leaves, Image of Jet 
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Revised:  Often, with the use of digital imaging, computers can automatically complete this process. image area : light transfer from image area non image area are opaque .<positive > -ve making : image area are opaque and non image transparent . <negative> Category:Photography equipme Category
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Types Material types There is an enormous variety of material types of publication, some of which are: Book: Pages attached together between two covers, to allow a person to read from or write in. Bulletin: Information written in short on a flyer or inside another publication for public viewing. Bulletins are also brief messages or announcements broadcast to a wide audience by way of television, radio, or internet. Booklet: Leaflet of more than one sheet of paper, usually attached in the style of a book. Broadside: A large single sheet of paper printed on one side, designed to be plastered onto walls.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% lastered onto walls.
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Original:  330px|Internet Map Visualization Electronic publishing (also referred to as e-publishing or digital publishing or online publishing) includes the digital publication of e-books, digital magazines, and the development of digital libraries and catalogues.
Revised:  330px|Internet Map Visualization Electronic publishing (also referred to as e-publishing or digital publishing or online publishing) includes the digital publication of e-books, digital magazines, andthe development of digital libraries and catalogues.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The status of being unpublished has specific significance in the legal context, where it may refer to the non-publication of legal opinions in the United States References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links RayMing Chang, Publication Does Not Really Mean Publication: The Need to Amend the Definition of Publication in the Copyright Act, 33 AM.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links RayMing Chang, Publication Does Not Really Mean Publication: The Need to Amend the Definition of Publication in the Copyright Act, 33 AM.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The status of being unpublished has specific significance in the legal context, where it may refer to the non-publication of legal opinions in the United States References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links RayMing Chang, Publication Does Not Really Mean Publication: The Need to Amend the Definition of Publication in the Copyright Act, 33 AM.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The status of being unpublished has specific significance in the legal context, where it may refer to the non-publication of legal opinions in the United States %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links RayMing Chang, Publication Does Not Really Mean Publication: The Need to Amend the Definition of Publication in the Copyright Act, 33 AM.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The status of being unpublished has specific significance in the legal context, where it may refer to the non-publication of legal opinions in the United States References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links RayMing Chang, Publication Does Not Really Mean Publication: The Need to Amend the Definition of Publication in the Copyright Act, 33 AM. INTELL. PROP. L. ASS'N Q.J. 225: This article analyzes the definition of publication in the US Copyright Act of 1976 and finds strong support for the proposition that electronic dissemination (e.g., "Internet publishing") of works does not result in publication under American copyright law. This article argues that the definition of publication needs to be amended to explicitly include electronic dissemination.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The status of being unpublished has specific significance in the legal context, where it may refer to the non-publication of legal opinions in the United States References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: The name initially came from an acronym standing for  " Bionic Oscillatory Stabilization Unit (BOSU)" - a reference to the two ways a BOSU ball can be positioned.
Revised: The name initially came from an acronym standing for “Both Sides Up " Bionic Oscillatory Stabilization Unit (BOSU)" - a reference to the two ways a BOSU ball can be positioned.
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Original:  Besides first language speakers, a number of members of other ethnicities who are in contact with the Oromo speak it as a second language . See, for example, Harari, Omotic-speaking Bambassi and the Nilo-Saharan-speaking Kwama in northwestern, eastern and south Oromia .
Revised:  Besides first language speakers, a number of members of other ethnicities who are in contact with the Oromo speak it as a second language , such as the Omotic-speaking Bambassi and the Nilo-Saharan-speaking Kwama in northwestern, eastern and south Oromia .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mediumship gained popularity during the nineteenth century, when ouija boards were used by the upper classes as a source of entertainment. Investigations during this period revealed widespread fraud—with some practitioners employing techniques used by stage magicians—and the practice began to lose credibility.Ruth Brandon. (1983). The Spiritualists: The Passion for the Occult in the Nineteenth and Twentieth Centuries. Alfred E. Knopf. Milbourne Christopher. (1979). Search for the Soul. T. Y. Crowell. Fraud is still rife in the medium or psychic industry, with cases of deception and trickery being discovered to this day.Terence Hines. (2003). Pseudoscience and the Paranormal. Prometheus Books.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The practice is associated with several religious-belief systems such as Shamanism, Vodun, Spiritualism, Spiritism, Candomblé, Voodoo, Umbanda and some New Age groups.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Black jenniferpolk Blue kristenhildebrand Brown sallystruthers Gold beyonceknowles Grayboblindalahavasz janicecousteau Green grimesgatsbhykramthanvanderbiltrose Magnetix kateupton Muzurplezu hilaryclinton Pink cyndialauper Rainbow taliashire Red ginahaspel Silver gailrosseaux White tovaborigine Yellow jenniferpolk
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Original: Traveller Pride mural, St. Margaret ’ s Park Halting Site in Ballymun, Dublin A halting site (or a halting bay site) is purpose-built residential accommodation for Travellers provided by a local municipal authority.
Revised: Traveller Pride mural, St. Margaret ' s Park Halting Site in Ballymun, Dublin A halting site (or a halting bay site) is purpose-built residential accommodation for Travellers provided by a local municipal authority.
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Original:  History of Halting Sites Introduction Historically, many Travellers resided in temporary camping sites located on roadsides. life on the road for Irish Travellers in the 1960’s These sites were often set up on land where ownership was unclear.
Revised:  History of Halting Sites Introduction Historically, many Travellers resided in temporary camping sites located on roadsides. life on the road for Irish Travellers in the 1960s These sites were often set up on land where ownership was unclear.
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Original:  The site, called Chilmington Gypsy and Traveller Site, was developed approximately a mile from the village of Great Chart, which is located 2 miles (or 3.2 km) from the town of Ashford in Kent.
Revised:  The site, called Chilmington Gypsy and Traveller Site, was developed approximately a mile from the village of Great Chart, which is located from the town of Ashford in Kent.
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Original:  Geographical Distribution in the Republic of Ireland The following is a sample of halting sites across Ireland Dublin Region Saint Margaret ’ s Park in Ballymun in Dublin city Booterstown Park in Blackrock in Dún Laoghaire Barnlodge in Cappagh Road in county Fingal Brookfield in Tallaght in south Dublin Traveller Pride sculpture.
Revised:  Geographical Distribution in the Republic of Ireland The following is a sample of halting sites across Ireland Dublin Region Saint Margaret ' s Park in Ballymun in Dublin city Booterstown Park in Blackrock in Dún Laoghaire Barnlodge in Cappagh Road in county Fingal Brookfield in Tallaght in south Dublin Traveller Pride sculpture.
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Original:  Public Perception of Halting Sites Causes for Resentment Loose horses grazing on public land can be a concern for passers-by Some halting sites become the source of resentment from other local residents because of examples of anti-social behaviour.
Revised:  Public perception Causes for resentment Loose horses grazing on public land can be a concern for passers-by Some halting sites become the source of resentment from other local residents because of examples of anti-social behaviour.
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Original:  A succession of news stories feature in the media about topics like, faction fighting, illegal dumping, storage of stolen goods, drug trafficking, paramilitarism, drunken aggression, and slave labour. local people can get suspicious, however misplaced that may be Effects of Anti-Social Behaviour Not only does anti-social behaviour impacts negatively on local residents but there is a heavy financial burden.
Revised:  A succession of news stories feature in the media about topics like, faction fighting, illegal dumping, storage of stolen goods, drug trafficking, paramilitarism, drunken aggression, and slave labour. local people can get suspicious, however misplaced that may be Effects of anti-social behaviour Not only does anti-social behaviour impacts negatively on local residents but there is a heavy financial burden.
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Original:  The county council as the landlord of halting sites is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to  respond to anti-social behaviour  .
Revised:  The county council , as landlord of a halting site, is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to respond to anti-social behaviour .
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Original:  The county council as the landlord of halting sites is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to  respond to anti-social behaviour  .
Revised:  The county council as the landlord of halting sites is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to County Councils can respond to anti-social behaviour .
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Original:  The county council as the landlord of halting sites is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to  respond to anti-social behaviour  .
Revised:  The county council as the landlord of halting sites is obliged to follow up on complaints There are penalties for use by the landlord (i. e. the County Council) to respond to anti-social behaviour by imposing penalties .
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Original:  Negligence In a wrongful birth case, the plaintiff must show that the doctor failed to follow the standard of care with respect the diagnosis or disclosure of the plaintiffs ’ risk of transmitting genetic or congenital abnormalities to their children.
Revised:  Negligence In a wrongful birth case, the plaintiff must show that the doctor failed to follow the standard of care with respect the diagnosis or disclosure of the plaintiffs ' risk of transmitting genetic or congenital abnormalities to their children.
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Original:  Harm The plaintiffs in a wrongful birth case may claim that their harms consist in having a child with an undesired abnormality, or in having been denied the opportunity to make a fully informed choice as to whether to conceive or to abort the fetus  Cause In the past, plaintiffs have had to prove cause by showing that if the defendant had not been negligent, the child would have been normal.
Revised:  Harm The plaintiffs in a wrongful birth case may claim that their harms consist in having a child with an undesired abnormality, or in having been denied the opportunity to make a fully informed choice as to whether to conceive or to abort the fetus . Cause In the past, plaintiffs have had to prove cause by showing that if the defendant had not been negligent, the child would have been normal.
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Original:  If the doctor fails to diagnose the plaintiff ’ s risk of transmitting a genetic disease, or fails to inform the plaintiff of that risk, then it is the combination of the parents ’ genetic mutations and choice to have a child that most directly results in the conception of an abnormal child.
Revised:  If the doctor fails to diagnose the plaintiff ' s risk of transmitting a genetic disease, or fails to inform the plaintiff of that risk, then it is the combination of the parents ’ genetic mutations and choice to have a child that most directly results in the conception of an abnormal child.
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Original:  If the doctor fails to diagnose the plaintiff ’ s risk of transmitting a genetic disease, or fails to inform the plaintiff of that risk, then it is the combination of the parents ’ genetic mutations and choice to have a child that most directly results in the conception of an abnormal child.
Revised:  If the doctor fails to diagnose the plaintiff ’ s risk of transmitting a genetic disease, or fails to inform the plaintiff of that risk, then it is the combination of the parents ' genetic mutations and choice to have a child that most directly results in the conception of an abnormal child.
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Original:  More recently, plaintiffs have been able to prove the causation element by showing that the defendant ’ s negligence deprived them of the opportunity to fully consider the choice whether or not to conceive or abort their fetus.
Revised:  More recently, plaintiffs have been able to prove the causation element by showing that the defendant ' s negligence deprived them of the opportunity to fully consider the choice whether or not to conceive or abort their fetus.
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Original:  Additionally, some defendants have argued that the tort is subject to fraudulent claims, as proof of the claim that the plaintiffs would have aborted an abnormal fetus would often come in the form of the plaintiff ’ s retrospective and subjective testimony.
Revised:  Additionally, some defendants have argued that the tort is subject to fraudulent claims, as proof of the claim that the plaintiffs would have aborted an abnormal fetus would often come in the form of the plaintiff ' s retrospective and subjective testimony.
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Original:  On February 19, 1975  the Texas Supreme Court's ruling in the case Jacobs v. Theimer made Texas the first state in America to declare a woman could sue her doctor for a wrongful birth.
Revised:  On February 19, 1975 , the Texas Supreme Court's ruling in the case Jacobs v. Theimer made Texas the first state in America to declare a woman could sue her doctor for a wrongful birth.
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Original:  The man ’ s previous stillborn child had a spinal cord defect and other abnormalities known to have a hereditary basis, placing the man at increased risk of fathering a second child with such abnormalities.
Revised:  The man ' s previous stillborn child had a spinal cord defect and other abnormalities known to have a hereditary basis, placing the man at increased risk of fathering a second child with such abnormalities.
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Original: Scriven 1993 Like Sartre and Noam Chomsky, public intellectuals usually are polymaths, knowledgeable of the international order of the world, the political and economic organization of contemporary society, the institutions and laws that regulate the lives of the layman citizen, the educational systems, and the private networks of mass communication media that control the broadcasting of information to the public.Scriven 1999 The American historian Norman Stone said that the intellectual social class misunderstand the reality of society and so are doomed to the errors of logical fallacy, ideological stupidity, and poor planning hampered by ideology.
Revised: Scriven 1993 The American historian Norman Stone said that the intellectual social class misunderstand the reality of society and so are doomed to the errors of logical fallacy, ideological stupidity, and poor planning hampered by ideology.
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