wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  History Before  the use of allocation concealment, it was common for researchers to place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
Revised:  Allocation concealment is different from blinding. An allocation concealment method prevents influence on the randomization process, while blinding conceals the outcome of the randomization. However, allocation concealment may also be called "randomization blinding". Before the use of allocation concealment, it was common for researchers to place subjects expected to have good outcomes in the treatment group, and those expected to have poor outcomes in the control group.
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Original:  The authors justified the introduction of the term: “The reduction of bias in trials depends crucially upon preventing foreknowledge of treatment assignment. Concealing assignments until the point of allocation prevents foreknowledge, but that process has sometimes been confusingly referred to as 'randomization blinding'. This term, if used at all, has seldom been distinguished clearly from other forms of blinding (masking) and is unsatisfactory for at least three reasons. First, the rationale for generating comparison groups at random, including the steps taken to conceal the assignment schedule, is to eliminate selection bias. By contrast, other forms of blinding, used after the assignment of treatments, serve primarily to reduce ascertainment bias. Second, from a practical standpoint, concealing treatment assignment up to the point of allocation is always possible, regardless of the study topic, whereas blinding after allocation is not attainable in many instances, such as in trials conducted to compare surgical and medical treatments. Third, control of selection bias pertains to the trial as a whole, and thus to all outcomes being compared, whereas control of ascertainment bias may be accomplished successfully for some outcomes, but not for others. Thus, concealment up to the point of allocation of treatment and blinding after that point address different sources of bias and differ in their practicability. In light of those considerations, we refer to the former as 'allocation concealment' and reserve the term 'blinding' for measures taken to conceal group identity after allocation”
Revised:  The authors justified the introduction of the term: 
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Original: Cultural relativism is the idea that a person's beliefs , values, and practices should be understood based on that person's own culture , and not be judged against the criteria of another.
Revised: Cultural relativism is the idea that a person's beliefs , values, and practices should be understood based on that person's own culture . Proponents of cultural relativism also tend to argue that the norms and values of one culture should not be evaluated using the norms and values of another.
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Original:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
Revised:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations in places more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
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Original:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
Revised:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
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Original:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
Revised:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language and also because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
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Original:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from socially dominant Spanish, whose speakers viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
Revised:  These speakers glottalized consonants in situations where more competent speakers of Xinca would not because they were not only less familiar with the phonological rules of the language , but because they wished to distinguish themselves from the socially-dominant Spanish-speakers, who viewed glottalized consonants as “exotic.”
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Original:  In this case the CELDF did not assist the residents of Shapleigh in drafting sections 99-11 through 99-12 of their legal code, they were instead assisted by lawyers from Vermont.
Revised:  In this case the CELDF did not assist the residents of Shapleigh in drafting sections 99-11 and 99-12 of their legal code, they were instead assisted by lawyers from Vermont.
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Original:  He is currently the J C Bose National Fellow at the Department of Atomic and Molecular Physics at Manipal University . Known for his research on molecular and biological physics, Mathur is an elected fellow of the Indian Academy of Sciences, Indian National Science Academy and The World Academy of Sciences.
Revised:  He has been the J C Bose National Fellow at the Department of Atomic and Molecular Physics at Manipal University . Known for his research on molecular and biological physics, Mathur is an elected fellow of the Indian Academy of Sciences, Indian National Science Academy and The World Academy of Sciences.
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Original:  He is currently the J C Bose National Fellow at the Department of Atomic and Molecular Physics at Manipal University . Known for his research on molecular and biological physics, Mathur is an elected fellow of the Indian Academy of Sciences, Indian National Science Academy and The World Academy of Sciences.
Revised:  He is currently the J C Bose National Fellow at the Department of Atomic and Molecular Physics at Manipal Academy of Higher Education and Founding Director of the UM-DAE Centre for Excellence in Basic Science at the University of Mumbai . Known for his research on molecular and biological physics, Mathur is an elected fellow of the Indian Academy of Sciences, Indian National Science Academy and The World Academy of Sciences.
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Original:  A baby can sometimes be calmed by rocking gently, offering a pacifier , singing or talking softly, taking a walk with a stroller , or going for a drive in the car. If a baby won’t stop crying, it can be sick and seen by a doctor.
Revised:  A baby can sometimes be calmed by rocking gently, offering a pacifier , singing or talking softly, taking a walk with a stroller , or going for a drive in Little Red Car. If dory won’t stop crying, it can be sick and seen by a doctor.
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Original: The Book of Hindu Imagery: Gods, Manifestations and Their Meaning By Eva Rudy Jansen p. 64 The Vishnu Purana, a post-vedic scripture, describes how Vishnu "enters into the seven solar rays which dilate into seven suns."
Revised: The Book of Hindu Imagery: Gods, Manifestations and Their Meaning By Eva Rudy Jansen p. 64 The Vishnu Purana, a post-Vedic scripture, describes how Vishnu "enters into the seven solar rays which dilate into seven suns."
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Original:   " 20th century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic , Sri Aurobindo , described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
Revised:  . " 20th century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic , Sri Aurobindo , described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
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Original:   " 20th century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic , Sri Aurobindo , described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
Revised:  " The 20th-century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic , Sri Aurobindo , described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
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Original:   " 20th century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic , Sri Aurobindo , described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
Revised:  " 20th century Hindu scholar, poet and mystic Sri Aurobindo described the Vedic seven rays of knowledge, or Agni, as "the seven forms of the Thought-principle" and wrote that "the seven brilliant horses of the sun and their full union constitutes the seven-headed Thought of Ayasya by which the lost sun of Truth is recovered.
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Original:  He added that of "our Axis of the Universe (skambha, divo dharuna, etc.) and Islamic Qutb ..... The seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( ' all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal '). "
Revised:  He added that of "our Axis of the Universe (skambha, divo dharuna, etc.) and Islamic Qutb ,” the seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( ' all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal '). "
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Original:  The seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( ' all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal '). "
Revised:  The seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( “ all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal '). "
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Original:  The seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( ' all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal '). "
Revised:  The seventh ray alone passes through the Sun to the suprasolar Brahma worlds, "where no sun shines" ( ' all that is under the Sun being in the power of Death, and all beyond immortal ”).
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Original:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( latin: the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ',is an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ', chi).
Revised:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( based upon the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ',is an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ', chi).
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Original:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( latin: the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ',is an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ', chi).
Revised:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( latin: the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ,' as an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ', chi).
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Original:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( latin: the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ',is an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ', chi).
Revised:  Anatomically, the contralateral organization is manifested by major decussations ( latin: the Latin notation for ten, 'deca ',is an uppercase 'X') and chiasmas (after the Greek uppercase letter 'Χ ,' chi).
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Original:  As a result of such decussations , the efferent connections of the cerebrum to the basal ganglia, the cerebellum and the spine are crossed , and the afferent connections from the spine, the cerebellum and the pons to the thalamus are crossed.
Revised:  As a result of such decussations : The efferent connections of the cerebrum to the basal ganglia, the cerebellum and the spine are crossed , and the afferent connections from the spine, the cerebellum and the pons to the thalamus are crossed.
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Original:  As a result of such decussations , the efferent connections of the cerebrum to the basal ganglia, the cerebellum and the spine are crossed , and the afferent connections from the spine, the cerebellum and the pons to the thalamus are crossed.
Revised:  As a result of such decussations , the efferent connections of the cerebrum to the basal ganglia, the cerebellum and the spine are crossed ; and the afferent connections from the spine, the cerebellum and the pons to the thalamus are crossed.
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: (1) the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( i.e., cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) , which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain ; and (2) the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( i.e., cranial nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) , which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas:  the chiasm of the optic tract (  cranial nerve II)  which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve (  nerve IV)  which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye (  superior oblique muscle).
Revised:  Two of the cranial nerves show chiasmas: the chiasm of the optic tract ( cranial nerve II) which originates from the eyes and inserts on the optic tectum of the midbrain , and the trochlear nerve ( nerve IV) which originates in the ventral midbrain and innervates one of the six muscles that rotate the eye ( i.e., the superior oblique muscle).
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Original:  In chondrichthyans (  sharks and skates)  the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice  and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
Revised:  In chondrichthyans ( e.g., sharks and skates) the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
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Original:  In chondrichthyans (  sharks and skates)  the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice  and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
Revised:  In chondrichthyans ( sharks and skates) , the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
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Original:  In chondrichthyans (  sharks and skates)  the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice  and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
Revised:  In chondrichthyans ( sharks and skates) the thalamus does not retrieve a branch from the optic tract but only from the contralateral optic tectum, so that the optic path decussates twice , and the forebrain represents the ipsilateral eye.
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Original:  Even the most distant clades agnathans possess an optic chiasm, and even the skull impressions of early vertebrates from the Ordovician show the presence of an optic chiasm: this idea was worked out by Kinsbourne.
Revised:  Even the most distant clades — agnathans — possess an optic chiasm, and even the skull impressions of early vertebrates from the Ordovician show the presence of an optic chiasm: this idea was worked out by Kinsbourne.
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Original:  Twisting and asymmetric development are well known from other deuterostomes  such as Hemichordata, Echinodermata, Cephalochordata and Tunicata.
Revised:  Twisting and asymmetric development are well known from other deuterostomes — such as Hemichordata, Echinodermata, Cephalochordata and Tunicata.
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Original: In holoprosencephaly  the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but  on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and  usually remains very small.
Revised: In holoprosencephaly , the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and usually remains very small.
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Original: In holoprosencephaly  the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but  on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and  usually remains very small.
Revised: In holoprosencephaly the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but only on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and usually remains very small.
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Original: In holoprosencephaly  the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but  on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and  usually remains very small.
Revised: In holoprosencephaly the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but on the frontal and occipital sides of the skull, and usually remains very small.
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Original: In holoprosencephaly  the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but  on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and  usually remains very small.
Revised: In holoprosencephaly the hemispheres of the cerebrum or part of it are not aligned on the left and right side but on the frontal and occipital side of the skull, and the head usually remains very small.
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Original:  On January 26, 1887 by the lunar calendar ( February 18 by the Gregorian calendar) , the foundress of Tenrikyo, Nakayama Miki, died at around two o'clock in the afternoon, after a performance of the Service.
Revised:  On February 18 by the Gregorian calendar) , the foundress of Tenrikyo, Nakayama Miki, died at around two o'clock in the afternoon, after a performance of the Service.
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