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Original: Exercise-induced collapse (EIC)    is a genetic syndrome, predominantly occurring in several retriever breeds as well as purebred Labrador Retrievers but also seen in Chesapeake Bay Retrievers and Curly Coated Retrievers, Boykin Spaniels, Cocker spaniels, German wire-haired pointers, Old English Sheepdogs, Bouvier des Flandres, Pembroke Welsh Corgis and Clumber Spaniels (verified 2015 by Laboklin in the UK).
Revised: Exercise-induced collapse (EIC) is a genetic syndrome, predominantly occurring in several retriever breeds as well as purebred Labrador Retrievers but also seen in Chesapeake Bay Retrievers and Curly Coated Retrievers, and Boykin Spaniels. The genetic mutation has also been seen in a few cases in Cocker spaniels, German wire-haired pointers, Old English Sheepdogs, Bouvier des Flandres, Pembroke Welsh Corgis and Clumber Spaniels (verified 2015 by Laboklin in the UK).
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Original: Exercise-induced collapse (EIC)    is a genetic syndrome, predominantly occurring in several retriever breeds as well as purebred Labrador Retrievers but also seen in Chesapeake Bay Retrievers and Curly Coated Retrievers, Boykin Spaniels, Cocker spaniels, German wire-haired pointers, Old English Sheepdogs, Bouvier des Flandres, Pembroke Welsh Corgis and Clumber Spaniels (verified 2015 by Laboklin in the UK).
Revised: Exercise-induced collapse (EIC) is a genetic syndrome, predominantly occurring in several retriever breeds as well as purebred Labrador Retrievers but also seen in Chesapeake Bay Retrievers and Curly Coated Retrievers, Boykin Spaniels, Cocker spaniels, German wire-haired pointers, Old English Sheepdogs, Bouvier des Flandres, Pembroke Welsh Corgis and Clumber Spaniels 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Affected dogs show signs of muscle weakness, loss of coordination, severe marked increase in body temperature and life-threatening collapse when participating in strenuous exercise or activity. Affected dogs can tolerate mild to moderate exercise, but short periods of strenuous activity, or even extreme excitement such as that seen in field trials or hunt tests, can induce weakness or collapse. Dogs affected with EIC usually cannot continue with intense retriever training, but can live normal lives as house pets.
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Original:  EIC is being observed with increasing frequency, either from the genetics becoming more widespread or from previously misdiagnosed cases being correctly identified now that there is evidence in the form of a DNA test. Dogs that have EIC are prone to mild to severe collapse that can range from dragging of the hind legs to complete collapse. Most affected dogs have been from field-trial breedings. Signs are initially noted in young dogs as they enter heavy training, which is usually between 5 months and 7 years of ageas stated in the initial UMN study in URL Dogs of either sex can be affected.
Revised:  . Signs are most likely to first become apparent in young dogs as they enter heavy training, which is usually between 5 months and 7 years of ageas stated in the initial UMN study in URL Dogs of either sex can be affected.
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Original:  Signs are initially noted in young dogs as they enter heavy training, which is usually between 5 months and 7 years of ageas stated in the initial UMN study in URL Dogs of either sex can be affected.
Revised:  Signs are initially noted in young dogs when they enter heavy training, which is usually between 5 months and 7 years of ageas stated in the initial UMN study in URL Dogs of either sex can be affected.
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  Dogs affected with this have no problem with regular exercise. The collapse occurs only with very strenuous exercise such as retrieving or participating in trials. Added excitement coincidental with the heavy exercise is more likely to bring on the collapse. Not all dogs with the disorder have an episode each time they exercise. It appears that the condition is more likely to occur with warmer temperatures. The lives of dogs with EIC are normal if extreme exercise is avoided. [ ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  Symptoms and diagnosis During collapse the dog’s hind legs become weak until they are no longer able to support the dog’s weight. In the most extreme cases the dog’s front legs also go weak and the dog collapses, its leg muscles loose.[ ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [3 ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ The episode generally lasts no more than 15 minutes over which time the dog returns to normal. The dog does not appear to be in pain during the collapse. ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ Physiological systems (nervous system, cardiovascular and musculoskeletal systems) all appear normal in these dogs, as is a blood analysis both apart from and during an episode of collapse. Although tests have revealed elevated body temperature during collapse (average 107.1F (41.7C), many up to 108F (42.2C)), these temperatures are no different to those in normal dogs who have undertaken the same level of exercise. ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ Research Research into the condition has been done at the Western College of Veterinary Medicine at the University of Saskatchewan, the College of Veterinary Medicine at the University of Minnesota, and the Comparative Neuromuscular Laboratory at the School of Medicine of the University of California. The cause has been identified as a mutation is in the gene for dynamin-1 (DNM1). This gene is a protein that plays a key role in repackaging synaptic vesicles containing neurotransmitters. The action of DNM1 is only triggered with a high level of sustained exercise when it is needed for synaptic transmission in the brain and spinal cord. ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ The gene is recessive and for the dog to exhibit the exercise-induced collapse it must have two copies of the gene. ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ 4] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ ] Nearly 40\% of all Labrador retrievers that were tested for the gene between 2008 and 2017 were carriers, meaning they had one copy of the mutation. Approximately 6\% had two copies of the gene and therefore had the potential to exhibit the collapse during exercise. There has been widespread testing and selective breeding in the years since the test for EIC was developed which has led to a decline in EIC in Labrador retrievers. Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ ] Testing Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
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Original:   [     ]   Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. 
Revised:  [ ] Through grants from the AKC CHF a patented DNA test was developed by the University of MN. The Orthopedic Foundation for Animals provides a public database for those dogs that are DNA tested. Other collapse disorders
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Original: Normal squamous cells Dysplastic cells Dysplasia (from Ancient Greek δυσ- dys-, "bad" or "difficult" and πλάσις plasis, "formation") is an abnormal growth or development of cells (microscopic scale) and/or organs (macroscopic scale), and/or the abnormal histology or anatomical structure presumably resulting from such growth.
Revised: Normal squamous cells Dysplastic cells Dysplasia is any of various types of abnormal growth or development of cells (microscopic scale) and/or organs (macroscopic scale), and/or the abnormal histology or anatomical structure presumably resulting from such growth.
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Original:  Dysplasias on  mainly macroscopic scale include hip dysplasia, myelodysplastic syndrome  and multicystic dysplastic kidney  .
Revised:  Dysplasias on mainly macroscopic scale include hip dysplasia, myelodysplastic syndrome and multicystic dysplastic kidney . In one of the modern histopathologic senses of the term, dysplasia is differentiated from other categories of tissue change including hyperplasia, metaplasia, and neoplasia, and dysplasias are thus generally not neoplastic (not cancerous). An exception is that the myelodysplasias include both benign and cancerous forms .
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Original:  In one of the modern histopathologic senses of the term, dysplasia is  differentiated from other categories of tissue change including hyperplasia, metaplasia, and neoplasia, and dysplasias are thus generally not neoplastic (not cancerous).
Revised:  In one of the modern histopathologic senses of the term, dysplasia is sometimes differentiated from other categories of tissue change including hyperplasia, metaplasia, and neoplasia, and dysplasias are thus generally not neoplastic (not cancerous).
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Original: “Social thinking ” or thinking socially refers to a process we all go through in our mind as we try to make sense of our own and others’ thoughts, feelings, and intentions in context, whether we are co-existing, actively interacting, or figuring out what is happening from a distance (e.g., media, literature, etc.).
Revised: Social thinking or thinking socially refers to a process we all go through in our mind as we try to make sense of our own and others’ thoughts, feelings, and intentions in context, whether we are co-existing, actively interacting, or figuring out what is happening from a distance (e.g., media, literature, etc.).
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Original:  While the tools and strategies within the methodology were developed while working with mainstream students in a high school district, Michelle Garcia Winner‘s practical approach to teaching social competencies was quickly adopted by parents and teachers working with those in the ADHD community and Autism Spectrum community.
Revised:  While the tools and strategies within the methodology were developed while working with mainstream students in a high school district, Michelle Garcia Winner‘s practical approach to teaching social competencies was quickly adopted by parents and teachers working with those in the ADHD community and autism spectrum community.
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Original:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
Revised:  Social The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
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Original:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
Revised:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base thinking and evidence base The social thinking methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
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Original:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
Revised:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, social communication disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
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Original:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, Learning Disabilities, Twice Exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
Revised:  Social Thinking and Evidence Base The Social Thinking Methodology embraces what the literature tells us about working directly with individuals who have social learning challenges (e.g., ASD, Social Communication Disorder , ADHD, learning disabilities, twice exceptional , etc.) and promotes the use of visual supports, modeling, naturalistic teaching, and self-management.
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Original:  However, one view is that this immortal may have been based on an actor whose stage name was Lan Caihe, and otherwise went by Xu Jian, during the Five Dynasties period ( 907-960 CE).
Revised:  However, one view is that this immortal may have been based on an actor whose stage name was Lan Caihe, and otherwise went by Xu Jian, during the Five Dynasties period ( 907–960 CE).
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Original:  Page 65. In The Eight Immortals Cross the Sea In a story written by an anonymous author during the Ming dynasty (c. 14th-15th centuries), The Eight Immortals Cross the Sea (八仙過海;
Revised:  Page 65. In The Eight Immortals Cross the Sea In a story written by an anonymous author during the Ming dynasty (c. 14th–15th centuries), The Eight Immortals Cross the Sea (八仙過海;
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Original: Category: Chinese gods Category: Eight Immortals Category:LGBT themes in mythology Category:Intersex in religion and mythology Category:Androgynous and hermaphroditic deities Category:Cultural depictions of transgender and transsexual people Category:Taoist immortals Category:Homeless people Category:Buskers Category:Floristr
Revised: Category: Eight Immortals Category:LGBT themes in mythology Category:Intersex in religion and mythology Category:Androgynous and hermaphroditic deities Category:Cultural depictions of transgender and transsexual people Category:Taoist immortals Category:Homeless people Category:Buskers Category:Floristr
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Original: Category: Chinese gods Category: Eight Immortals Category:LGBT themes in mythology Category:Intersex in religion and mythology Category:Androgynous and hermaphroditic deities Category:Cultural depictions of transgender and transsexual people Category:Taoist immortals Category:Homeless people Category:Buskers Category:Floristr
Revised: Category: Chinese gods Category: Eight Immortals Category:LGBT themes in mythology Category:Intersex in religion and mythology Category:Androgynous and hermaphroditic deities Category:Cultural depictions of transgender and transsexual people Category:Homeless people Category:Buskers Category:Floristr
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Original: Neuroscience Philosophy of science Category:Analytic philosophy Category:Cognitive neuroscience Category:History of neuroscience Category:History of philosophy Category: History of science Category: Metaphysics of mind Category:Mind Category:Philosophy of biology Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Philosophy of psycholo
Revised: Neuroscience Philosophy of science Category:Analytic philosophy Category:Cognitive neuroscience Category:History of neuroscience Category:History of philosophy Category: Metaphysics of mind Category:Mind Category:Philosophy of biology Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Philosophy of psycholo
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Original: While the 19th-century cultural evolutionism explained how culture develops by describing general principles of its evolutionary process, it was dismissed by historical particularism as unscientific in the early 20th century.
Revised: While the 19th-century cultural evolutionism attempted to explain how culture develops by describing general principles of its evolutionary process, it was dismissed by historical particularism as unscientific in the early 20th century.
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Original:  Julian Steward (1902–1972), author of Theory of Culture Change: The Methodology of Multilinear Evolution (1955, reprinted 1979), developed the theory of "multilinear" evolution  which examined the way in which societies adapted to their environment—a more nuanced approach than White's theory of "unilinear evolution".
Revised:  Julian Steward (1902–1972), author of Theory of Culture Change: The Methodology of Multilinear Evolution (1955, reprinted 1979), developed the theory of "multilinear" evolution , which examined the way in which societies adapted to their environment—a more nuanced approach than White's theory of "unilinear evolution".
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Original: Drivers of Ecoflation The World Resources Institute and A.T. Kearney identified three main drivers for ecoflation : 1. Scarcity of resources An increase in population and consumption leads to an increased demand for resources, such as wood, oil, water, and grain.
Revised: Drivers of ecoflation The World Resources Institute and A.T. Kearney identified three main drivers for ecoflation : 1. Scarcity of resources An increase in population and consumption leads to an increased demand for resources, such as wood, oil, water, and grain.
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Original: Drivers of Ecoflation The World Resources Institute and A.T. Kearney identified three main drivers for ecoflation : 1. Scarcity of resources An increase in population and consumption leads to an increased demand for resources, such as wood, oil, water, and grain.
Revised: Drivers of Ecoflation The World Resources Institute and A.T. Kearney identified three main drivers for ecoflation : Scarcity of resources An increase in population and consumption leads to an increased demand for resources, such as wood, oil, water, and grain.
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Original:  2. Policies Governmental institutions, like the World Economic Forum, European Union, General Agreement on Tariff and Trade are increasingly aware of the necessity to react to climate change, and continue to pass stronger regulations in order to protect the environment.
Revised:  Policies Governmental institutions, like the World Economic Forum, European Union, General Agreement on Tariff and Trade are increasingly aware of the necessity to react to climate change, and continue to pass stronger regulations in order to protect the environment.
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Original:  Bodil Wilhelmsen, wife of Royal Caribbean principal shareholder Gjert Wilhelmsen MV Serenade of the Seas – Whoopi Goldberg  MV Splendour of the Seas – Lise Wilhelmsen, wife of Board member Arne Wilhelmsen MV Symphony of the Seas – Carlos and Alexa PenaVega MV Vision of the Seas – Helen Morin Stephan (wife of Royal Caribbean's founder and Vice Chairman Edwin Stephan) MV Voyager of the Seas – Katarina Witt
Revised:  Bodil Wilhelmsen, wife of Royal Caribbean principal shareholder Gjert Wilhelmsen MV Serenade of the Seas – Whoopi Goldberg Mv Sovereign of the Seas- Former First Lady Rosalyn Carter MV Splendour of the Seas – Lise Wilhelmsen, wife of Board member Arne Wilhelmsen MV Symphony of the Seas – Carlos and Alexa PenaVega MV Vision of the Seas – Helen Morin Stephan (wife of Royal Caribbean's founder and Vice Chairman Edwin Stephan) MV Voyager of the Seas – Katarina Witt
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