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Original: Criticism Former state shadow Attorney General Andrew McIntosh announced prior to the 2006 Victorian state election  that the Liberal Party would repeal the religious section of the "fundamentally flawed" Act."libs coy over hatred laws" 9 August 2006 The Liberals did not win the election.
Revised: Criticism Before the 2006 Victorian state election that the Liberal Party would repeal the religious section of the "fundamentally flawed" Act."libs coy over hatred laws" 9 August 2006 The Liberals did not win the election.
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Original: Criticism Former state shadow Attorney General Andrew McIntosh announced prior to the 2006 Victorian state election  that the Liberal Party would repeal the religious section of the "fundamentally flawed" Act."libs coy over hatred laws" 9 August 2006 The Liberals did not win the election.
Revised: Criticism Former state shadow Attorney General Andrew McIntosh announced prior to the 2006 Victorian state election , Andrew McIntosh, the then state shadow Attorney General, announced that the Liberal Party would repeal the religious section of the "fundamentally flawed" Act."libs coy over hatred laws" 9 August 2006 The Liberals did not win the election.
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Original: The Racial and Religious Tolerance Act 2001 is an Act of the Parliament of Victoria, Australia, that makes behavior that incites or encourages hatred, serious contempt, revulsion or severe ridicule against another person or group of people, because of their race or religion, unlawful in Victoria.
Revised: The Racial and Religious Tolerance Act 2001 is an Act of the Parliament of Victoria, Australia, that makes behaviour that incites or encourages hatred, serious contempt, revulsion or severe ridicule against another person or group of people, because of their race or religion, unlawful in Victoria.
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Original:  On 22 June 2005, VCAT Judge Michael Higgins ordered Nalliah and Scot to make a public apology for vilifying Muslims in newspaper advertisements with a value of $68,690. Nalliah and Scot refused, with Nalliah comparing the legislation to "sharia law", calling it a "a foul law" and "invalid", while Mr Scot stated that "You don't compromise truth for fear of jail". On 14 December 2006, the defendants took their case to the Victorian Court of Appeal,Court of Appeal (Supreme Court of Victoria) decision Dec 2006 - overturning VCAT decision which overturned the VCAT decision. On 22 June 2007, the matter was resolved by mediation between the parties. VCAT published a statement agreed to by both parties which affirmed everyone's rights to "robustly debate religion including the right to criticise the religious belief of another, in a free, open and democratic society". United Patriots Front In September 2017 three prominent members of the far-right United Patriots Front — Blair Cottrell, Neil Erikson and Chris Shortis — were charged with serious religious vilification, and inciting serious contempt of Muslims, among other offenses. They had enacted and made a video of a fake beheading, in order to protest against the building of a mosque in Bendigo. In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000.   
Revised:  On 22 June 2005, VCAT Judge Michael Higgins ordered Nalliah and Scot to make a public apology for vilifying Muslims in newspaper advertisements with a value of $68,690. Nalliah and Scot refused, with Nalliah comparing the legislation to "sharia law", calling it a "a foul law" and "invalid", while Mr Scot stated that "You don't compromise truth for fear of jail". 
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Original:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000.   
Revised:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000. On 14 December 2006, the defendants took their case to the Victorian Court of Appeal,Court of Appeal (Supreme Court of Victoria) decision Dec 2006 - overturning VCAT decision which overturned the VCAT decision. 
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Original:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000.   
Revised:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000. On 22 June 2007, the matter was resolved by mediation between the parties. VCAT published a statement agreed to by both parties which affirmed everyone's rights to "robustly debate religion including the right to criticise the religious belief of another, in a free, open and democratic society". 
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Original:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000.   
Revised:  In September that same year, they were convicted for inciting serious contempt of Muslims, and each was fined $2,000. United Patriots Front In September 2017 three prominent members of the far-right United Patriots Front — Blair Cottrell, Neil Erikson and Chris Shortis — were charged with inciting serious contempt of Muslims, among other offences. They had in 2015 enacted and made a video of a fake beheading, in order to protest against the building of a mosque in Bendigo..
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Original:  He is best known for the music project The Streets, but has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T  and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
Revised:  Best known for the music project The Streets, but has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
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Original:  He is best known for the music project The Streets, but has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T  and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
Revised:  He is best known for the music project The Streets, Skinner has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
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Original:  He is best known for the music project The Streets, but has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T  and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
Revised:  He is best known for the music project The Streets, but has also released music as a solo artist, as part of The D.O.T with frequent collaborator Rob Harvey, and under the pseudonym The Darker the Shadow the Brighter the Light.
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Original:  Passive Eruption Passive eruption is known as movement of the gingiva apically or away from the crown of the tooth to the level of Cementoenamel junction (CEJ) after the tooth has erupted completely.
Revised:  Passive eruption Passive eruption is known as movement of the gingiva apically or away from the crown of the tooth to the level of Cementoenamel junction (CEJ) after the tooth has erupted completely.
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Original: 200px|Sefa-utaki Utaki (御嶽) is an Okinawan term for a sacred place .
Revised: 200px|Sefa-utaki Utaki (御嶽) is an Okinawan term for a sacred place , often a grove, cave, or mountain. They are central to the Ryukyuan religion and the former noro system.
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Original: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: American singer-songwriters Category:Living people Category:Singers from New Jersey Category:  People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category:Catholics from New Jersey Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
Revised: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: Record producers from New Jersey Category:Singers from New Jersey Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category: People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category:Catholics from New Jersey Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
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Original: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: American singer-songwriters Category:Living people Category:Singers from New Jersey Category:  People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category:Catholics from New Jersey Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
Revised: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: American singer-songwriters Category:Living people Category:Singers from New Jersey Category: Catholics from New Jersey Category: People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category:Catholics from New Jersey Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
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Original: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: American singer-songwriters Category:Living people Category:Singers from New Jersey Category:  People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:Songwriters from New Jersey Category:Catholics from New Jersey Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
Revised: American rock singers Category:American male singer-songwriters Category: American singer-songwriters Category:Living people Category:Singers from New Jersey Category: People from Dumont, New Jersey Category:People with epilepsy Category:Rutgers University alumni Category:21st-century American singers Category:21st-century male singers Category:United Nations (band) members Category:No Devotion member
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Original: Brain Glial scar Other Arterial stiffness Arthrofibrosis (knee, shoulder, other joints)  Crohn's disease (intestine) Dupuytren's contracture (hands, fingers) Keloid (skin) Kidney fibrosis Mediastinal fibrosis (soft tissue of the mediastinum) Myelofibrosis (bone marrow) Peyronie's disease (penis) Nephrogenic systemic fibrosis (skin) Progressive massive fibrosis (lungs);
Revised: Brain Glial scar Other Arterial stiffness Arthrofibrosis (knee, shoulder, other joints) Chronic kidney disease Crohn's disease (intestine) Dupuytren's contracture (hands, fingers) Keloid (skin) Kidney fibrosis Mediastinal fibrosis (soft tissue of the mediastinum) Myelofibrosis (bone marrow) Peyronie's disease (penis) Nephrogenic systemic fibrosis (skin) Progressive massive fibrosis (lungs);
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Original: Brain Glial scar Other Arterial stiffness Arthrofibrosis (knee, shoulder, other joints)  Crohn's disease (intestine) Dupuytren's contracture (hands, fingers) Keloid (skin) Kidney fibrosis Mediastinal fibrosis (soft tissue of the mediastinum) Myelofibrosis (bone marrow) Peyronie's disease (penis) Nephrogenic systemic fibrosis (skin) Progressive massive fibrosis (lungs);
Revised: Brain Glial scar Other Arterial stiffness Arthrofibrosis (knee, shoulder, other joints) Crohn's disease (intestine) Dupuytren's contracture (hands, fingers) Keloid (skin) Mediastinal fibrosis (soft tissue of the mediastinum) Myelofibrosis (bone marrow) Peyronie's disease (penis) Nephrogenic systemic fibrosis (skin) Progressive massive fibrosis (lungs);
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Original:  The long term exposure of hepatotoxin (like thioacetamide, carbon tetrachloride, diethylnitrosamine , etc. ) results in the bridging fibrosis in experimental animal models.
Revised:  Long-term exposure to hepatotoxin (e.g. thioacetamide, carbon tetrachloride, diethylnitrosamine , etc. ) results in the bridging fibrosis in experimental animal models.
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Original:  The long term exposure of hepatotoxin (like thioacetamide, carbon tetrachloride, diethylnitrosamine , etc. ) results in the bridging fibrosis in experimental animal models.
Revised:  The long term exposure of hepatotoxin (like thioacetamide, carbon tetrachloride, diethylnitrosamine ) results in the bridging fibrosis in experimental animal models.
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Original: Before ForDisc, many anthropologists based their studies off of museum skeletal collections such as the Hamann-Todd collection that is housed at Case Western Reserve in Cleveland, Ohio, and the Terry collection housed at the Smithsonian Institution in Washington, DC.
Revised: Before ForDisc, many anthropologists based their studies on museum skeletal collections such as the Hamann-Todd collection that is housed at Case Western Reserve in Cleveland, Ohio, and the Terry collection housed at the Smithsonian Institution in Washington, DC.
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Original: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
Revised: Ti Malice is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
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Original: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
Revised: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character and nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
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Original: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
Revised: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouki in Haitian folklore . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
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Original: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouqui, while hardworking , is also very greedy.
Revised: In Haitian folklore, Ti Malice (or Malis) is a trickster character , nemesis of Tonton (Uncle) Bouqui (or Bouki ) . While Ti Malice is smart and guileful, Uncle Bouki is hardworking but is also very greedy.
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Original:  He was responsible for the infamous  "Dread Act", which was  meant to combat the lawlessness of countless Dominican youth  .
Revised:  He was responsible for the infamous "Dread Act", which was meant to combat the lawlessness of countless Dominican youth . That act made it legal to arrest any “Dread” without a warrant and deny bail to anyone wearing "a badge of the society" i.e. dreadlocks .
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Original:  On 29 May 1979, two protesters who were against John’s austere leadershipwere killed by government security forces. Several other persons were injured and resistance to his rule strengthened as public servants went on strike and the country was completely shut down.
Revised:  On 29 May 1979, John's attempts to quell opposition to his leadership, led to a clash outside parliament in which a young man named Phillip Timothy and another individual was killed and a dozen others wounded. Resistance to his rule strengthened as public servants went on strike and the country was completely shut down.
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Original:   On June 11, 1979 President Frederick Degazon fled to Britain.
Revised:  One by one, Labour Party parliamentarians resigned their positions in the cabinet and they were often aided by a rain of stones from protesters. The first Labour Party minister to resign was Oliver Seraphin who then went on to become interim Prime Minister until elections in July 1980. On June 11, 1979 President Frederick Degazon fled to Britain.
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Original:  Buddhism has played a major role in the history of Pakistan—the land of which over time has been part of predominantly Buddhist empires such as the Indo-Greek Kingdom, the Kushan Empire, and the Maurya Empire of Ashoka .
Revised:  Buddhism has played a major role in the history of Pakistan—the land of which over time has been part of predominantly Buddhist empires such as the Indo-Greek Kingdom, the Kushan Empire, and the Maurya Empire of Ashoka which ruled over what is now Pakistan.
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Original: In Australia it is  a legal requirement to have attended a course or gained a qualification in order to PAT . Proof of a company's competence takes the form of a course certificate or qualification. A formal examination process for the topic is operated in collaboration with EAL or city and guilds (the awarding body) under the authority of the QCA (The Qualifications and Curriculum Authority)who validate and authorise the qualification .
Revised: In Australia it is a legal requirement to have attended a course or gained a qualification in order to PAT - AS/NZS 3760 2010 stipulates a Competent Person may Test and Tag, and that a person may be a Competent Person through formal training (i.e. a test and tag course), experience on the job, qualification, or combination thereof What Is AS/NZS 3760? .
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Original:  In New Zealand it is not a legal requirement to attend a training course however persons undertaking Portable Appliance Testing must be deemed Competent by a Responsible person (being the owner of the premise. electrical equipment or someone with a legal responsibility for the safety of electrical equipment).
Revised:  In New Zealand it is not a legal requirement to attend a training course however persons undertaking Portable Appliance Testing must be deemed Competent by a Responsible person (being the owner of the premises electrical equipment or someone with a legal responsibility for the safety of electrical equipment).
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Original:  Four rubber tree tappers and one paramilitary escort are killed, and eight others wounded, when a group of armed men ambush their vehicle as it entered the Tumahubong Agrarian Reform Beneficiaries Incorporated Development Cooperative in Sapak Bulak village, Sumisip town, at around 5 a.m. in the morning.
Revised:  Four rubber tree tappers and one paramilitary escort are killed, and eight others wounded, when a group of armed men ambush their vehicle as it entered the Tumahubong Agrarian Reform Beneficiaries Incorporated Development Cooperative in Sapak Bulak village, Sumisip town, at around 5 a.m. 
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Original:  3 April Soccsksargen05bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: Another explosion following on April (1:45 p.m), after the August 28 blast and September 2, 2018  at the same site, in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the chicken restaurant in Poblacion, Isulan.,5 person are wound.
Revised:  3 April Soccsksargen05bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: Another explosion following on April (1:45 p.m), after the August 28 blast and September 2, 2018 , at the same site, in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the chicken restaurant in Poblacion, Isulan.,5 person are wound.
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Original:  7 September Soccsksargen07bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: On 7am in the morning the blast took the place in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the bakery shop at the Motor parking in Poblacion, Isulan.
Revised:  7 September Soccsksargen07bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: At 7am in the morning the blast took the place in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the bakery shop at the Motor parking in Poblacion, Isulan.
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Original:  7 September Soccsksargen07bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: On 7am in the morning the blast took the place in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the bakery shop at the Motor parking in Poblacion, Isulan.
Revised:  7 September Soccsksargen07bombingUnknown 2019 Isulan bombings: On 7am the blast took the place in the southern Philippine town of Isulan, hits the bakery shop at the Motor parking in Poblacion, Isulan.
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Original:  This was at Issue in 1889 when the Lord of the Manor and owner of Banstead Downs and Heath, a Mr Hartopp, excavated gravel and threatened to reduce the available pasture.
Revised:  This was at issue in 1889 when the Lord of the Manor and owner of Banstead Downs and Heath, a Mr Hartopp, excavated gravel and threatened to reduce the available pasture.
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Original:  This was at Issue in 1889 when the Lord of the Manor and owner of Banstead Downs and Heath, a Mr Hartopp, excavated gravel and threatened to reduce the available pasture.
Revised:  This was at Issue in 1889 when the lord of the manor and owner of Banstead Downs and Heath, a Mr Hartopp, excavated gravel and threatened to reduce the available pasture.
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Original:  The meaning of sufficiency was challenged in court, expert witnesses stated that the grazing capacity was 1200 animals, the commoners rights totaled 1440 animals, and 600 animals were normally turned out.
Revised:  The meaning of sufficiency was challenged in court, expert witnesses stated that the grazing capacity was 1,200 animals, the commoners rights totaled 1440 animals, and 600 animals were normally turned out.
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Original:  The meaning of sufficiency was challenged in court, expert witnesses stated that the grazing capacity was 1200 animals, the commoners rights totaled 1440 animals, and 600 animals were normally turned out.
Revised:  The meaning of sufficiency was challenged in court, expert witnesses stated that the grazing capacity was 1200 animals, the commoners rights totaled 1,440 animals, and 600 animals were normally turned out.
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Original: Publication history 200px|The only edition of the Treatises published in America during the 18th century (1773) Two Treatises was first published , anonymously , in December 1689 (following printing conventions of the time, its title page was marked 1690).
Revised: Publication history 200px|The only edition of the Treatises published in America during the 18th century (1773) Two Treatises was first published anonymously in December 1689 (following printing conventions of the time, its title page was marked 1690).
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Original:  The Two Treatises begin with a Preface announcing what Locke hopes to achieve, but he also mentions that more than half of his original draft, occupying a space between the First and Second Treatises, has been irretrievably lost.
Revised:  Two Treatises is prefaced with Locke announcing what he aims to achieve, but he also mentions that more than half of his original draft, occupying a space between the First and Second Treatises, has been irretrievably lost.
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Original:  The Two Treatises begin with a Preface announcing what Locke hopes to achieve, but he also mentions that more than half of his original draft, occupying a space between the First and Second Treatises, has been irretrievably lost.
Revised:  The Two Treatises begin with a Preface announcing what Locke hopes to achieve, also mentioning that more than half of his original draft, occupying a space between the First and Second Treatises, has been irretrievably lost.
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