wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Before 12th and 13th centuries, during the Chola period, Nataraja dancing and the Krishna dancing the tandava on the hood of hundred headed serpent kaliya, were favourite subjects for the artists .
Revised:  Shiva as Nataraja or Krishna dancing dancing the Tandava is a recurring theme in the Chola period bronzes. Various Shiva temples in South India depict the dancing Nataraja .
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Original:  Of them, about 2 billion would be from developing countries , including 89 million from  least developed URL According to Hootsuite, the number of Global Internet users has already reached almost 4.66 billion, or about 53\% of the global population.
Revised:  Of them, about 2 billion died by using the internet , including 89 million from least developed URL According to Hootsuite, the number of Global Internet users has already reached almost 4.66 billion, or about 53\% of the global population.
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Original:  Of them, about 2 billion would be from developing countries , including 89 million from  least developed URL According to Hootsuite, the number of Global Internet users has already reached almost 4.66 billion, or about 53\% of the global population.
Revised:  Of them, about 2 billion would be from developing countries , including 89 million from Wikipedia (the least developed URL According to Hootsuite, the number of Global Internet users has already reached almost 4.66 billion, or about 53\% of the global population.
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Original: Criticism However, there is an research carried  by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
Revised: Criticism However, as regards certain personality traits, like the degree of "introvertness" or of "sourness", there was an research carried by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
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Original: Criticism However, there is an research carried  by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
Revised: Criticism However, there is an research carried out by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
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Original: Criticism However, there is an research carried  by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
Revised: Criticism However, there is an research carried by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
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Original: Criticism However, there is an research carried  by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
Revised: Criticism However, there is an research carried by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years , suggesting that only the degree of aggressivity actually tended to converge. 
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Original: Criticism However, there is an research carried  by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. 
Revised: Criticism However, there is an research carried by psychologists at Michigan State University and the University of Minnesota, is based on a relatively huge data base of 1,296 couples who have been married for an average of 19.8 years suggested that the Convergence doesn't stand. (Features such as the acts, thinking, and appearances of the spouses were not directly investigated.)
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Original:  <ref name="Gcam"> Gwyn Campbell,  The Bantus were also conscripted to forced labor on Italian-owned plantations since the Somalis themselves were averse to what they deemed menial labor,Laitin, p.64. and because the Italians viewed the Somalis as racially superior to the Bantu.
Revised:  Gwyn Campbell, The Bantus were also conscripted to forced labor on Italian-owned plantations since the Somalis themselves were averse to what they deemed menial labor,Laitin, p.64. and because the Italians viewed the Somalis as racially superior to the Bantu.
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Original:  <ref name="Gcam"> Gwyn Campbell,  The Bantus were also conscripted to forced labor on Italian-owned plantations since the Somalis themselves were averse to what they deemed menial labor,Laitin, p.64. and because the Italians viewed the Somalis as racially superior to the Bantu.
Revised:  <ref name="Gcam"> Gwyn Campbell, The Structure of Slavery in Indian Ocean Africa and Asia, 1 edition, (Routledge: 2003), p.ix People captured locally during wars and raids were also sometimes enslaved by Somalis mostly of Oromo and Nilotic origin.Bridget Anderson, World Directory of Minorities, (Minority Rights Group International: 1997), p. 456. However, the perception, capture, treatment and duties of both groups of slaves differed markedly,Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. with Oromo favored because Oromo subjects were not viewed as racially "kinked hair" (jareer) by their Somali captors. The Bantus were also conscripted to forced labor on Italian-owned plantations since the Somalis themselves were averse to what they deemed menial labor,Laitin, p.64. and because the Italians viewed the Somalis as racially superior to the Bantu.
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Original: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120     
Revised: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120 Nilotic slaves In the late 19th century, Somalis also captured other jareer peoples from the coastal regions of Kenya to work for them as slaves and clients. Referred to as the Kore, these Nilo-Saharan Maa-speaking Nilotes were later emancipated by British colonial troops. They subsequently resettled on the Lamu seaboard as fishermen and cultivators. Like many Bantus, the Kore reportedly now speak the Afro-Asiatic Somali language on account of their time in servitude. 
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Original: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120     
Revised: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120 Other slaves In addition to Bantu plantation slaves, Somalis sometimes enslaved peoples of Oromo pastoral background that were captured during wars and raids on Oromo settlements.Bridget Anderson, World Directory of Minorities, (Minority Rights Group International: 1997), p. 456. However, there were marked differences in terms of the perception, capture, treatment and duties of the Oromo pastoral slaves versus the Bantu plantation slaves.Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. 
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Original: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120     
Revised: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120 On an individual basis, Oromo subjects were not viewed as racially jareer by their Somali captors. The Oromo captives also mostly consisted of young children and women, both of whom were taken into the families of their abductors; men were usually killed during the raids. Oromo boys and girls were adopted by their Somali patrons as their own children. Prized for their beauty and viewed as legitimate sexual partners, many Oromo women became either wives or concubines of their Somali captors, while others became domestic servants. In some cases, entire Oromo clans were assimilated on a client basis into the Somali clan system. 
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Original: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120     
Revised: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120 Neither captured Oromo children nor women were ever required to do plantation work, and they typically worked side-by-side with the Somali pastoralists. After an Oromo concubine gave birth to her Somali patron's child, she and the child were emancipated and the Oromo concubine acquired equal status to her abductor's other Somali wives. According to the Somali Studies pioneer Enrico Cerulli, in terms of diya (blood money) payments in the Somali customary law (Xeer), the life of an Oromo slave was also equal in value to that of an ordinary ethnic Somali.Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 82. 
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Original: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120     
Revised: Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 120 Freedom for Oromo slaves was obtained through manumission and was typically accompanied by presents such as a spouse and livestock. During abolition, former Oromo slaves, who generally maintained intimate relations with the Somali pastoralists, were also spared the harsh treatment reserved for the Bantu and Nilotic plantation slaves.
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Original: Gwyn Campbell, The Structure of Slavery in Indian Ocean Africa and Asia, 1 edition, (Routledge: 2003), p.ix People captured locally during wars and raids were also sometimes enslaved by Somalis mostly of Oromo and Nilotic origin.
Revised: Gwyn Campbell, The Structure of Slavery in Indian Ocean Africa and Asia, 1 edition, (Routledge: 2003), p.ix People captured locally during wars and raids were also sometimes enslaved by Somalis mostly of Nilotic origin.
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Original:  However, the perception, capture, treatment and duties of both groups of slaves differed markedly,Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. with Oromo favored because Oromo subjects were not viewed as racially "kinky-haired" (jareer) by their Somali captors.
Revised:  However, the perception, capture, treatment and duties of both groups of slaves differed markedly,Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. the Somalis would favour them based on there hair, features etc.
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Original: Gwyn Campbell, The Structure of Slavery in Indian Ocean Africa and Asia, 1 edition, (Routledge: 2003), p.ix People captured locally during wars and raids were also sometimes enslaved by Somalis mostly of  Nilotic origin.
Revised: Gwyn Campbell, The Structure of Slavery in Indian Ocean Africa and Asia, 1 edition, (Routledge: 2003), p.ix People captured locally during wars and raids were also sometimes enslaved by Somalis mostly of Oromo and Nilotic origin.
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Original:  However, the perception, capture, treatment and duties of both groups of slaves differed markedly,Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. the Somalis would favour them based on there hair, features etc.
Revised:  However, the perception, capture, treatment and duties of both groups of slaves differed markedly,Catherine Lowe Besteman, Unraveling Somalia: Race, Class, and the Legacy of Slavery, (University of Pennsylvania Press: 1999), p. 116. with Oromo favored because Oromo subjects were not viewed as racially "kinky-haired" (jareer) by their Somali captors.
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Original:  In Consideration Set 1, two devices are available: +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 30GB 20GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 30GB 20GB 25GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed;
Revised:  +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 30GB 20GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 30GB 20GB 25GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed;
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Original:  In Consideration Set 1, two devices are available: +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 30GB 20GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 30GB 20GB 25GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed;
Revised:  In Consideration Set 1, two devices are available: +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 300GB 200GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 30GB 20GB 25GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed;
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Original:  In Consideration Set 1, two devices are available: +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 30GB 20GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 30GB 20GB 25GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed; C affects consumer preferences by acting as a basis of comparison for A and B. Because A is better than C in both respects, while B is only partially better than C, more consumers will prefer A now than did before. C is therefore a decoy whose sole purpose is to increase sales of A. Conversely, suppose that instead of C, a player D is introduced that has less storage than both A and B, and that is more expensive than B but not as expensive as A: +Consideration Set 3 A (competitor) B (target) D (decoy) price $ 400 $300 $350 storage 30GB 20GB 15GB
Revised:  In Consideration Set 1, two devices are available: +Consideration Set 1 A B price $400 $300 storage 30GB 20GB +Consideration Set 2 A (target) B (competitor) C (decoy) price $400 $300 $450 storage 300GB 200GB 250GB The addition of decoy C — which consumers would presumably avoid, given that a lower price can be paid for a model with more storage—causes A, the dominating option, to be chosen more often than if only the two choices in Consideration Set 1 existed; C affects consumer preferences by acting as a basis of comparison for A and B. Because A is better than C in both respects, while B is only partially better than C, more consumers will prefer A now than did before. C is therefore a decoy whose sole purpose is to increase sales of A. Conversely, suppose that instead of C, a player D is introduced that has less storage than both A and B, and that is more expensive than B but not as expensive as A: +Consideration Set 3 A (competitor) B (target) D (decoy) price $ 400 $300 $350 storage 30GB 20GB 15GB
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Original:  C is therefore a decoy whose sole purpose is to increase sales of A. Conversely, suppose that instead of C, a player D is introduced that has less storage than both A and B, and that is more expensive than B but not as expensive as A: +Consideration Set 3 A (competitor) B (target) D (decoy) price $ 400 $300 $350 storage 30GB 20GB 15GB
Revised:  C is therefore a decoy whose sole purpose is to increase sales of A. Conversely, suppose that instead of C, a player D is introduced that has less storage than both A and B, and that is more expensive than B but not as expensive as A: +Consideration Set 3 A (competitor) B (target) D (decoy) price $ 400 $300 $350 storage 300GB 200GB 150GB
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Original:  Estrogens and progesterone Estrogens and progesterone typically regulate motivation to engage in sexual reproduction behaviour for females in mammalian species, though the relationship between hormones and female sexual motivation is not as well understood.
Revised:  Estrogens and progesterone Estrogens and progesterone typically regulate motivation to engage in sexual behaviour for females in mammalian species, though the relationship between hormones and female sexual motivation is not as well understood.
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Original:  Lesbian women who were at the estrogen peak of their fertile cycle reported increased reproduction motivation for sexual contact with women, whereas bisexual women reported only a slight increase in same-sex motivated sexual contact during peak estrogen levels.
Revised:  Lesbian women who were at the estrogen peak of their fertile cycle reported increased sexual motivation for sexual contact with women, whereas bisexual women reported only a slight increase in same-sex motivated sexual contact during peak estrogen levels.
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Original: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small scale preliminary study conducted in order to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.
Revised: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small-scale preliminary study conducted in order to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.
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Original: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small scale preliminary study conducted in order to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.
Revised: A pilot study, pilot project, pilot test, or pilot experiment is a small scale preliminary study conducted to evaluate feasibility, duration, cost, adverse events, and improve upon the study design prior to performance of a full-scale research project.
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Original:  It is a potentially valuable insight and, should anything be missing in the pilot study, it can be added to the full-scale (and more expensive) experiment to improve the chances of a clear outcome.
Revised:  The pilot study is potentially a critical insight to clinical trial design, recruitment and sample size of participants, treatment testing, and statistical analysis to improve the power of testing the hypothesis of the study. Analysis from the pilot experiment can be added to the full-scale (and more expensive) experiment to improve the chances of a clear outcome.
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Original:  A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study – or part of a future study – is conducted on a smaller scale . Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.
Revised:  A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study is conducted on a smaller scale . Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.
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Original:  A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study – or part of a future study – is conducted on a smaller scale . Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.
Revised:  A pilot study asks the same questions, but also has a specific design feature: in a pilot study, a future study – or part of a future study – is conducted on a smaller scale , Sandra M Eldridge, Gillian A Lancaster, Michael J Campbell, Lehana Thabane, Sally Hopewell, Claire L Coleman, Christine M Bond.
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Original: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( ca. 550 BCE – ca . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( ca . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
Revised: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( BCE – ca . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( ca . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
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Original: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( ca. 550 BCE – ca . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( ca . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
Revised: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( ca. 550 BCE – c . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( ca . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
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Original: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( ca. 550 BCE – ca . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( ca . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
Revised: Interest in the general study of religion dates back to at least Hecataeus of Miletus ( ca. 550 BCE – ca . 476 BCE) and Herodotus ( c . 484 BCE – 425 BCE).
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Original:  Although philosophy has long been used in evaluation of religious claims (e.g. Augustine and Pelagius's debate concerning original sin), the rise of scholasticism in the 11th century, which represented "the search for order in intellectual life" (Russell, 170), more fully integrated the Western philosophical tradition (with the introduction of translations of Aristotle) in religious study.
Revised:  Although philosophy has long been used in evaluation of religious claims (e.g. Augustine and Pelagius's debate concerning original sin), the rise of scholasticism in the eleventh century, which represented "the search for order in intellectual life" (Russell, 170), more fully integrated the Western philosophical tradition (with the introduction of translations of Aristotle) in religious study.
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