Original:  His parents divorced in 1968, and his mother remarried and divorced four times before coming out as a lesbian when Gary was URL 1990s In October 1991, Evans spent two weeks on the roof of a building in Little Falls,New York casing a coin and jewelry shop on the first floor which was owned by Gregory Jouben, 36. On October 17, 1991, Evans walked into Jouben's shop, asked himto price a piece of merchandise, and then shot him to death. The small community in sparsely populated Herkimer County was outraged by one of the few murders of the year in the area  .
Revised:  His parents divorced in 1968, and his mother remarried and divorced four times before coming out as a lesbian when Gary was URL From an early age, Gary began to show interest in works of art and pricy items, and at the age of 8, he was caught stealing jewellery worth $1,000; later on, during his school years, he began repeatedly stealing small items such as books and comics, in addition to occasionally shoplifting, which earned him a reputation as a thief. After his parents divorced in 1968, Evans and his mother to Cohoes, where the attended the local high school. In the summer of 1970, he was arrested for breaking and entering, for which he was sent to a juvenile detention center for three months. While he was imprisoned, his mother began married and subsequently divorced four husbands due to her alcohol abuse, and in 1971, she unexpectedly came out as lesbian. After his release, Evans left his mother's home due to frequent quarreling, dropped out of school and began living as a vagrant. In the mid-1970s, he returned to Troy, where, together with his childhood friends Michael Falco and Timothy "Tim" Rysedorph, rented an apartment and got a job. Criminal career On January 13, 1977, Evans was arrested for trespassing and stealing property in Lake Placid, for which he given a 4-year sentence in the Clinton Correctional Facility in Dannemora. While he was detained, his father, Roy, died of throat cancer. In 1979, he was transferred to the Great Meadow Correctional Facility in Comstock, from where he was paroled on March 21, 1980. He then returned to his shared apartment in Troy, and soon after, together with Falco and Rysedorph, he began committing robberies and thefts, using the apartment as a storage space to sell the stolen goods. In June 1980, Evans was arrested for theft and imprisoned at the Old Rensselaer County Jail, but with the help of several Hells Angels members, he managed to escape. Just five hours later, however, he was recaptured, and on September 21st, he was returned to the Clinton Correctional Facility to serve out his full sentence, as he had broken the conditions of his parole. In 1982, following a brawl between inmates, Evans was transferred to the Attica Correctional Facility, where he remained until his release on December 29th. The following January, Evans and Falco committed several petty thefts, after which they both moved to Florida. A month later, Evans' mother died in an accident, forcing the two men to return to New York State and resume their criminal activities together with Rysedorph. On May 10, 1983, Evans was arrested for burglary and trespassing in Saratoga County, and briefly housed in the county jail. Throughout the rest of the year, he was repeatedly transferred to various prisons, but never was never brought to trial and eventually released in March 1984. In January 1985, Rysedorph ceased all contact with Evans, who continued his criminal career only with the help of Falco. On February 16, 1985, Evans and Falco robbed an antique collector's apartment in East Greenbush, with their profit being around $15,000. In April, Evans stole the car of two drug traffickers and sold it for $12,000, but the victims were able to identify him, which resulted in his arrest in Cohoes. Evans accepted a plea deal with the prosecutors in exchange for a commutation of his sentence, admitting his guilt in the robbery and illegal possession of weaponry. He was released on probation, pledging that he would stop stealing and find himself a real job, but by July of that year, he would commit his first murder. In the last days of July, Evans built an improvised silencer for his pistol, which he then used to kill his accomplice Michael Falco at their shared apartment in Troy, dismembering the body with a chainsaw. He then called Rysedorph to help him get rid of the body, to which the latter agreed, stuffing it in a sleeping bag and driving it to Evans' sister's home in Lake Worth Corridor, Florida, where they buried it in the backyard. The motive for the murder was revenge, as Rysedorph had told Gary that Falco had been profitting off their loot by selling them for themselves; in actuality, Rysedorph blamed Falco for what he himself has been doing. The two criminals remained in Lake Worth Corridor for about six weeks before returning to New York, whereupon Evans was again arrested for violating his parole and sentenced to 4 years imprisonment at Sing Sing. While in prison, Evans became friends with infamous serial killer David Berkowitz over their mutual interest in bodybuilding. In December 1987, Evans got into a fight with another prisoner serving a sentence for child molestation, for which he placed in solitary confinement for several months. On March 1, 1988, Evans was once again released, and shortly after, he befriended 27-year-old thief Damien Cuomo, with whom he began committing crimes. Between March 1988 and September 1989, Evans and Cuomo pulled off many successful thefts and robberies, honing their skills in the process. The pair were arrested in March 1989, with police finding ski masks, stun guns, radio scanners and ropes in the back of their car, but due to lack of sufficient evidence, both were released. On September 8, 1989, while robbing a store in Watertown, Evans shot and killed 63-year-old secondhand shop owner Douglas Berry, before he and Cuomo stole items worth $15,000. The pair left no viable evidence behind, and the few murders of the year in the area .
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