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Original:  2016Kenneth H. DuntonDevelopment of interactive learning camps in a variety of settings to allow students from K-12 as well as at the university level to develop hands-on experience in research techniques and an appreciation of Arctic climate change.2017Caroline M. SolomonDevelopment of programs to enhance participation of deaf and hearing-impaired students in STEM fields, including creation of a database to standardize American sign language interpretation signs for scientific terminology.2018Cynthia HagleyFor her vision and success at developing career-long relationships among scientists and educators,
Revised:  2016Kenneth H. DuntonDevelopment of interactive learning camps in a variety of settings to allow students from K-12 as well as at the university level to develop hands-on , real world outreach into local communities, and training science teachers and the next generation of marine scientists and ecologists"2017Caroline M. Solomon""For her extraordinary accomplishments in bringing the deaf and hearing worlds in science together, coupled with her exceptional skill as a mentor, educator, and leader to inspire us all"2018Cynthia Hagley"For her vision and success at developing career-long relationships among scientists and educators,
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Original:  data sharing and networking that have engaged researchers at all levels2021Russell CuhelIn recognition of his outstanding 27-yr leadership in training, mentoring, and providing professional development opportunities that has promoted a diverse undergraduate presence within the aquatic sciences  .
Revised:  data sharing and networking that have engaged researchers at all levels"2021Russell Cuhel"In recognition of his outstanding 27-yr leadership in training, mentoring, and providing professional development opportunities that has promoted a diverse undergraduate presence within the aquatic sciences .
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Original:  data sharing and networking that have engaged researchers at all levels2021Russell CuhelIn recognition of his outstanding 27-yr leadership in training, mentoring, and providing professional development opportunities that has promoted a diverse undergraduate presence within the aquatic sciences  .
Revised:  data sharing and networking that have engaged researchers at all levels2021Russell CuhelIn recognition of his outstanding 27-yr leadership in training, mentoring, and providing professional development opportunities that has promoted a diverse undergraduate presence within the aquatic sciences ." The information in this table is from the Association for the Sciences of Limnology and Oceanography .
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Original: Wissenschaft is the German language term for science and studies that involves systematic research. Similar to the words for science in, for example, the Scandinavian languages, but in contrast to the English-language science , the German term, Wissenschaft , may include systematic academic study of, for example, humanities like art or religion  .
Revised: Wissenschaft is the German language term for scholarship, research , the German term, Wissenschaft , may include systematic academic study of, for example, humanities like art or religion .
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Original:  Similar to the words for science in, for example, the Scandinavian languages, but in contrast to the English-language science , the German term, Wissenschaft , may include systematic academic study of, for example, humanities like art or religion  .
Revised:  Similar to the words for science in, for example, the Scandinavian languages, but in contrast to the English-language science , higher education, and academia. The word translates exactly into many other languages, e.g. vetenskap in Swedish or nauka in Polish, but there is no exact translation in modern English. The common translation as "science" is misleading, because Wissenschaft equally includes humanities, and sciences and humanities are mutually exclusive categories in modern English. Wissenschaft includes humanities like art or religion .
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Original:  Similar to the words for science in, for example, the Scandinavian languages, but in contrast to the English-language science , the German term, Wissenschaft , may include systematic academic study of, for example, humanities like art or religion  .
Revised:  Similar to the words for science in, for example, the Scandinavian languages, but in contrast to the English-language science , the German term, Wissenschaft , may include systematic academic study of, for example, humanities like art or religion at the same level as sciences like chemistry or psychology .
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Original:  In 1974 the then West German government imposed a ban restricting any future economic migrants and offered the possibility of returning to their country of origin to many others , few migrants took up the offer and  stayed at their jobs or began to receive unemployment assistance from the state.
Revised:  In 1974 the then West German government imposed a ban restricting any future economic migrants and offered the possibility of returning to their country of origin to many others ; few migrants took up the offer and stayed at their jobs or began to receive unemployment assistance from the state.
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Original:  In 1974 the then West German government imposed a ban restricting any future economic migrants and offered the possibility of returning to their country of origin to many others , few migrants took up the offer and  stayed at their jobs or began to receive unemployment assistance from the state.
Revised:  In 1974 the then West German government imposed a ban restricting any future economic migrants and offered the possibility of returning to their country of origin to many others , few migrants took up the offer and they stayed at their jobs or began to receive unemployment assistance from the state.
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Original:  Lead, Silver and to a lesser extent Zinc were mined in the upland areas of the rivers Ystwyth and Rheidol and in the headwaters of the River Severn for centuries and smaller deposits were also mined at Pentre Halkyn in Flintshire during the Roman occupation of Britain.
Revised:  Lead, silver and to a lesser extent Zinc were mined in the upland areas of the rivers Ystwyth and Rheidol and in the headwaters of the River Severn for centuries and smaller deposits were also mined at Pentre Halkyn in Flintshire during the Roman occupation of Britain.
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Original:  Lead, Silver and to a lesser extent Zinc were mined in the upland areas of the rivers Ystwyth and Rheidol and in the headwaters of the River Severn for centuries and smaller deposits were also mined at Pentre Halkyn in Flintshire during the Roman occupation of Britain.
Revised:  Lead, Silver and to a lesser extent zinc were mined in the upland areas of the rivers Ystwyth and Rheidol and in the headwaters of the River Severn for centuries and smaller deposits were also mined at Pentre Halkyn in Flintshire during the Roman occupation of Britain.
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Original:  It is home to a number of National Nature Reserves ( ( NNRs), sites of special scientific interest (SSSIs), five areas of outstanding natural beauty (AONBs) and three national parks Sea and coast Because of its location facing into a very energetic ocean, Wales has numerous sandy beaches, a coastline rich in sea-cliffs and a relatively high tidal range in many areas.
Revised:  It is home to a number of National Nature Reserves ( NNRs), sites of special scientific interest (SSSIs), five areas of outstanding natural beauty (AONBs) and three national parks Sea and coast Because of its location facing into a very energetic ocean, Wales has numerous sandy beaches, a coastline rich in sea-cliffs and a relatively high tidal range in many areas.
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Original:  As of 2020, the coastline of Wales has 40 Blue Flag beaches, three Blue Flag marinas and one Blue Flag boat operator . . A significant tourism industry has developed to advantage of these coastal resources including substantial caravan parks along the north-east coast at Rhyl, Prestatyn and Kimnel Bay in parts of Pembrokeshire and along the south coast at Porthcawl and Barry
Revised:  As of 2020, the coastline of Wales has 40 Blue Flag beaches, three Blue Flag marinas and one Blue Flag boat operator . A significant tourism industry has developed to advantage of these coastal resources including substantial caravan parks along the north-east coast at Rhyl, Prestatyn and Kimnel Bay in parts of Pembrokeshire and along the south coast at Porthcawl and Barry
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Original:  Deniz Karakurt Türk Söylence Sözlüğü: Turkish - Turkic Mythology Dictionary / Glossary Deniz Karakurt 2011 page 266 Ancient Turks believed that Tamag is underground  .
Revised:  Deniz Karakurt Türk Söylence Sözlüğü: Turkish - Turkic Mythology Dictionary / Glossary Deniz Karakurt 2011 page 266 Ancient Turks believed that Tamag is underground . It was believed that the people in Tamag would be brought to the third floor of the sky after they had served their imprisonment in it .
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Original:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
Revised:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
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Original:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
Revised:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
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Original:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
Revised:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximizes Objective.
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Original:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximizes Objective.
Revised:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximises Objective.
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Original:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
Revised:  Design optimization involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
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Original:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
Revised:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximized or minimized ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
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Original:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
Revised:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimizes / maximises Objective.
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Original:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximises Objective.
Revised:  Design optimisation involves the following stages: Variables: Describe the design alternatives Objective: Elected functional combination of variables (to be maximised or minimised ) Constraints: Combination of Variables expressed as equalities or inequalities that must be satisfied for any acceptable design alternative Feasibility: Values for set of variables that satisfies all constraints and minimises / maximizes Objective.
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Original:  The game was designed  on a pizza box by a 16-year old  from Rawdon, Québec, Daniel Girard, in 1979, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
Revised:  The game was designed in 1979 on a pizza box by a 16-year old from Rawdon, Québec, Daniel Girard, in 1979, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
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Original:  The game was designed  on a pizza box by a 16-year old  from Rawdon, Québec, Daniel Girard, in 1979, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
Revised:  The game was designed on a pizza box by a 16-year old Daniel Girard from Rawdon, Québec, Daniel Girard, in 1979, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
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Original:  The game was designed  on a pizza box by a 16-year old  from Rawdon, Québec, Daniel Girard, in 1979, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
Revised:  The game was designed on a pizza box by a 16-year old from Rawdon, Québec, while the Montreal Expos were chasing the pennant in the National League.
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Original: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
Revised: River deltas typically form on flat, coastal floodplains; the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
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Original: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
Revised: In a typical river delta, the narrow end located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
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Original: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
Revised: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river fans out and deposits sediment in a region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
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Original: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water into which the river empties.
Revised: In a typical river delta, the narrow end of the delta is located at the point where a river enters a delta, with a wide fan-shaped sedimentation region extending outward into the body of water which the river empties.
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Original:  Formula restaurants often rely on an economic model that encourages the use of disposable tableware. www.skoozeme.com/issues/dontbus.html This can create a negative economy in waste and food distribution, in part to support the business model of the controlling corporation.
Revised:  Formula restaurants often rely on an economic model that encourages the use of disposable tableware. This can create a negative economy in waste and food distribution, in part to support the business model of the controlling corporation.
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Original:  And later under Captain de Houghton and under Commodore John Crawford Wilson conducted several missions in the late 1870s that involved indiscriminate bombardment of villages, raids by marines, burning of houses, destruction of crops and the hanging of an Islander from the yardarms.
Revised:  And later under Captain de Houghton and under Commodore John Crawford Wilson conducted several missions in the late 1870s that involved naval bombardment of villages, raids by marines, burning of houses, destruction of crops and the hanging of an Islander from the yardarms.
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Original:  The official report of the lengthy mission of which left a trail of destruction throughout many islands in 1885 was kept secret. also delivered severe reprisals which elicited condemnation from some sections of the media.
Revised:  The official report of the lengthy mission of which bombarded and burnt numerous villages in 1885 was kept secret. also delivered severe reprisals which elicited condemnation from some sections of the media.
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Original:  The official report of the lengthy mission of which left a trail of destruction throughout many islands in 1885 was kept secret. also delivered severe reprisals which elicited condemnation from some sections of the media.
Revised:  The official report of the lengthy mission of which left a trail of destruction throughout many islands in 1885 was kept secret. also bombarded numerous villages in punitive expeditions which elicited condemnation from some sections of the media.
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Original: On December 7, 2018, Beddit released its first sleep tracker Beddit 3.5 since being acquired by Apple in 2017 on Apple's website and in stores.
Revised: On December 7, 2018, Beddit released its first sleep tracker Beddit 3.5 since being acquired by Apple , Beddit 3.5, on Apple's website and in stores.
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Original:  In August 2020, Beddit and the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA) announced  they would conduct a three year long study on how sleep, physical activity, heart rate, and daily routines can play a role in depression and anxiety in people.
Revised:  In August 2020, Beddit and the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA) announced that they would conduct a three year long study on how sleep, physical activity, heart rate, and daily routines can play a role in depression and anxiety in people.
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Original:  However, Beddit was unable to release a sleep tracking product to the public  due to the expensive cost of manufacturing one at the time. Beddit released their first sleep tracker in November 2013 for early backers after a successful crowdfunding campaign on Indiegogo, where crowdfunders raised over $500 ,000.
Revised:  However, Beddit was unable to release a sleep tracking product to the public due to the expensive cost of manufacturing . In November 2013, the company released their first sleep tracker in November 2013 for early backers after a successful crowdfunding campaign on Indiegogo, where crowdfunders raised over $500 ,000.
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Original:  Beddit released their first sleep tracker in November 2013 for early backers after a successful crowdfunding campaign on Indiegogo, where crowdfunders raised over $500 ,000.
Revised:  Beddit released their first sleep tracker in November 2013 for early backers after a successful crowdfunding campaign on Indiegogo, where crowdfunders raised over $500 thousand.
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Original:  On April 28, 2017, Beddit announced that they would be phasing out older Beddit devicesand that the older devices would soon be incompatible with the Beddit app, while giving users the option to upgrade to Beddit 3 for free.
Revised:  On April 28, 2017, Beddit announced that they would be phasing out their older sleep tracking devices, rendering them incompatible with the Beddit app, while giving users the option to upgrade to Beddit 3 for free.
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