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Original:  Amphibians, on the other hand, often benefit from ponds which dry out because this removes  the major predators of tadpoles and newtpoles (fish) and, provided the larvae emerge before the pond dries out, the drought presents no problems for the amphibians.
Revised:  Amphibians, on the other hand, often benefit from ponds which dry out because this removes fish, the major predators of tadpoles and newtpoles (fish) and, provided the larvae emerge before the pond dries out, the drought presents no problems for the amphibians.
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Original:  Amphibians, on the other hand, often benefit from ponds which dry out because this removes  the major predators of tadpoles and newtpoles (fish) and, provided the larvae emerge before the pond dries out, the drought presents no problems for the amphibians.
Revised:  Amphibians, on the other hand, often benefit from ponds which dry out because this removes the major predators of tadpoles and newtpoles and, provided the larvae emerge before the pond dries out, the drought presents no problems for the amphibians.
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Original:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
Revised:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
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Original:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
Revised:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
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Original:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
Revised:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
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Original:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
Revised:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
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Original:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), Functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
Revised:  To do this, noninvasive neuroimaging methods are typically used to record direct neurophysiological markers of brain activity through electrical activity Electroencephalography (EEG), Magnetoencephalography (MEG) or through indirect metabolic Positron-emission tomography (PET) and neurovascular measures of neural activity including Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI), functional near-infrared spectroscopy (fNIRS), transcranial Doppler (TCD) sonography.
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Original:  Techniques such as transcranial magnetic stimulation (TMS) and Transcranial direct-current stimulation (tDCS) can be used to temporarily alter the excitability of cortical regions.
Revised:  Techniques such as transcranial magnetic stimulation (TMS) and transcranial direct-current stimulation (tDCS) can be used to temporarily alter the excitability of cortical regions.
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Original: Criticism Some librarians feel reluctant to adapt to the new times and believe the library should not have an area for manufacturing. Some might think that implementing a fully equipped library makerspace may be costly in the setup phase. Others might think tools and equipment can have associated hazards and that could be an issue of liability to consider.
Revised: Criticism Some librarians feel reluctant to allocate resources away from other services and that there could be issues of legal liability to consider.
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Original:  The FMSF describes its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and attempting to discover methods to distinguish a true or false allegation of abuse.
Revised:  The FMSF described its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and attempting to discover methods to distinguish a true or false allegation of abuse.
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Original:  The FMSF describes its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and attempting to discover methods to distinguish a true or false allegation of abuse.
Revised:  The FMSF describes its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and discovering methods to distinguish a true or false allegation of abuse.
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Original:  The FMSF describes its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and attempting to discover methods to distinguish a true or false allegation of abuse.
Revised:  The FMSF describes its purpose as the examination of the concept of false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy and advocacy on behalf of individuals believed to be falsely accused of child sexual abuse with a focus on preventing future incidents, helping individuals and reconciling families affected by FMS, publicizing information about FMS, sponsoring research on it and attempting to discover methods to distinguish true and false memories of abuse.
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Original:  It originated the terms false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy to describe, respectively, what they believe is the orientation of patients towards confabulations created by inappropriate psychotherapy, and the methods through which these confabulations are created.
Revised:  It originated the terms false memory syndrome and recovered memory therapy to describe, respectively, what they hypothesized to be the orientation of patients towards confabulations created by inappropriate psychotherapy, and the methods through which these confabulations are created.
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Original:  Underwager later stated that the quotations in the Paidika article were taken out of context, used to discredit his ability to testify in courts and  through guilt by association, damage the reputation of the FMSF.
Revised:  Underwager later stated that the quotations in the Paidika article were taken out of context, used to discredit his ability to testify in courts and , through guilt by association, damage the reputation of the FMSF.
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Original:  The founders of the FMS Foundation had been concerned that alleged recovered memories were being reported after the use of controversial therapy techniques that including hypnosis, relaxation exercises, guided imagery, drug-mediated interviews, body memories, literal dream interpretation and journaling.
Revised:  The founders of the FMS Foundation were concerned alleged 'recovered memories' were being reported after the use of controversial therapy techniques that including hypnosis, relaxation exercises, guided imagery, drug-mediated interviews, body memories, literal dream interpretation and journaling.
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Original:  The founders of the FMS Foundation had been concerned that alleged recovered memories were being reported after the use of controversial therapy techniques that including hypnosis, relaxation exercises, guided imagery, drug-mediated interviews, body memories, literal dream interpretation and journaling.
Revised:  The founders of the FMS Foundation had been concerned that alleged recovered memories were being reported after the use of controversial therapy techniques , including hypnosis, relaxation exercises, guided imagery, drug-mediated interviews, body memories, literal dream interpretation and journaling.
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Original:  The FMSF was defunct as of December 31, 2019. J.A. Walker described the FMSF as reversing the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
Revised:  The FMSF dissolved on December 31, 2019. J.A. Walker described the FMSF as reversing the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
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Original:  The FMSF was defunct as of December 31, 2019. J.A. Walker described the FMSF as reversing the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
Revised:  The FMSF was defunct as of December 31, 2019, quoting the increasing number of internet forums for people concerned about false memories to meet on outside of the Foundation. J.A. Walker described the FMSF as reversing the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
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Original:  The FMSF was defunct as of December 31, 2019. J.A. Walker described the FMSF as reversing the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
Revised:  The FMSF was defunct as of December 31, 2019. J.A. Walker claimed the FMSF reversed the gains made by feminists and victims in gaining acknowledgment of the incestuous sexual abuse of children. S.J. Dallam criticized the foundation for describing itself as a scientific organization while undertaking partisan political and social activity.
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Original:  The travelers answer that they are making "stone soup", which tastes wonderful and which they would be delighted to share with the villager, although it still needs a little bit of garnish like Onions. pototoes, salt, pepper, and cabbages, which they are missing, to improve the flavor.
Revised:  The travelers answer that they are making "stone soup", which tastes wonderful and which they would be delighted to share with the villager, although it still needs a little bit of garnish , which they are missing, to improve the flavor.
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Original:  "Almirante" is Portuguese for "admirals . "  Each of the 2 to 6 players command both a merchant and a war navy with the objective of controlling the geostrategic center of the ocean.
Revised:  "Almirante" is Portuguese for "admirals " Each of the 2 to 6 players command both a merchant and a war navy with the objective of controlling the geostrategic center of the ocean.
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Original:  "Almirante" is Portuguese for "admirals . "  Each of the 2 to 6 players command both a merchant and a war navy with the objective of controlling the geostrategic center of the ocean.
Revised:  "Almirante" is Portuguese for "admirals . " . Each of the 2 to 6 players command both a merchant and a war navy with the objective of controlling the geostrategic center of the ocean.
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Original: Since the Uppsala Synod of 1593, Lutheranism had officially been the only religion allowed in Sweden, though the foreign embassies were given dispensation, as well as  foreigners temporarily residing in the country.
Revised: Since the Uppsala Synod of 1593, Lutheranism had officially been the only religion allowed in Sweden, though the foreign embassies were given dispensation, as well as other foreigners temporarily residing in the country.
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Original:  The Tolerance Act was replaced by the Dissenter Acts (Sweden) from 1860 and 1873, which made it legal for a Swedish citizen to leave the established Lutheran church and join another officially recognised denomination, but conversion to one of the so-called foreign religious communities was still hedged about by strong restrictions.
Revised:  The Tolerance Act was replaced by the Dissenter Acts from 1860 and 1873, which made it legal for a Swedish citizen to leave the established Lutheran church and join another officially recognised denomination, but conversion to one of the so-called foreign religious communities was still hedged about by strong restrictions.
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Original: The all-island initiative was convened by the Design and Crafts Council of Ireland (DCCoI), in collaboration with partner organisations, on behalf of the Department of Jobs, Enterpriseand Innovation , the Department of Foreign Affairs and Trade and Enterprise Ireland.
Revised: The all-island initiative was convened by the Design and Crafts Council of Ireland (DCCoI), in collaboration with partner organisations, on behalf of the Department of Enterprise, Trade and Employment , the Department of Foreign Affairs and Trade and Enterprise Ireland.
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Original:  Torgny Wiederholm and Bill Warwick, for example, used chironomid fossils to assess the impacts of increased, human-caused nutrient loading (anthropogenic eutrophication) on lake communities.
Revised:  Torgny Wiederholm and Bill Warwick, for example, used chironomid fossils to assess the impact of increased, human-caused nutrient loading (anthropogenic eutrophication) on lake communities.
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Original:  From 1980 to 1990 the primary focus of paleolimnologists  efforts shifted to understanding the role of human impacts (e.g., acid rain) versus natural processes (e.g., soil leaching) as drivers of pH change in northern lakes.
Revised:  From 1980 to 1990 the primary focus of paleolimnologists ' efforts shifted to understanding the role of human impacts (e.g., acid rain) versus natural processes (e.g., soil leaching) as drivers of pH change in northern lakes.
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Original:  From 1980 to 1990 the primary focus of paleolimnologists  efforts shifted to understanding the role of human impacts (e.g., acid rain) versus natural processes (e.g., soil leaching) as drivers of pH change in northern lakes.
Revised:  From 1980 to 1990 the primary focus of paleolimnologists efforts shifted to understanding the impact human activity had (e.g., acid rain) versus natural processes (e.g., soil leaching) as drivers of pH change in northern lakes.
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Original:  Sensitive records of climate change have been developed from a variety of indicators, including, for example, paleotemperature reconstructions derived from chironomid fossils, and paleosalinity records inferred from diatoms.
Revised:  Detailed records of historical climate change have been developed from a variety of indicators, including, for example, paleotemperature reconstructions derived from chironomid fossils, and paleosalinity records inferred from diatoms.
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Original: Paleoclimate Proxies 314x314px|Example of a sediment core taken from the Forlorn lakes in Gifford Pinchot National Forest, Washington Paleoclimatology (the study of past climates) uses proxy data in order to relate elements collected in modern-day samples to climatic conditions of the past.
Revised: Paleoclimate proxies 314x314px|Example of a sediment core taken from the Forlorn lakes in Gifford Pinchot National Forest, Washington Paleoclimatology (the study of past climates) uses proxy data in order to relate elements collected in modern-day samples to climatic conditions of the past.
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Original:  The quantity of organic matter often serves as an indicator of primary productivity levels as well as terrestrial nutrient input . It also serves a bridge between paleolimnology and geochemistry in demonstrating the relationship between lake geochemistry and organic matter deposition.
Revised:  The quantity of organic matter often serves as an indicator of primary productivity levels as well as terrestrial nutrient input , as well as serving as a bridge between paleolimnology and geochemistry in demonstrating the relationship between lake geochemistry and organic matter deposition.
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Original:  For instance, a study in eastern China found that larger and deeper highstand lakes in warmer, more humid climates tended to show higher levels of organic matter deposition than lowland lakes in cooler  arid climates.
Revised:  For instance, a study in eastern China found that larger and deeper highstand lakes in warmer, more humid climates tended to show higher levels of organic matter deposition than lowland lakes in cooler , arid climates.
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Original:  This disparity is usually quite large , and although it is lessened by alterations to the C:N ratio during diagenesis, the original disparity is still evident enough to allow researchers to accurately assess from C:N ratios the origin of the organic matter in the lake.
Revised:  This disparity is usually quite large ; and although it is lessened by alterations to the C:N ratio during diagenesis, the original disparity is still evident enough to allow researchers to accurately assess from C:N ratios the origin of the organic matter in the lake.
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Original:  Lipid extraction, in particular, is a very common practice as it can reveal acids and alcohols characteristic of algal plants, as well as diagnostic lipids generated in the waxy cuticle of terrestrial plants.
Revised:  Lipid extraction, in particular, is a common practice, as it can reveal acids and alcohols characteristic of algal plants, as well as diagnostic lipids generated in the waxy cuticle of terrestrial plants.
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Original:  Human and animal waste  as well as synthetic fertilizers all have diagnostic isotopic shifts that allow researchers to characterize specific nitrogen inputs and track potential human-induced changes in nutrient flux, using δ15N measurements.
Revised:  Human and animal waste , as well as synthetic fertilizers all have diagnostic isotopic shifts that allow researchers to characterize specific nitrogen inputs and track potential human-induced changes in nutrient flux, using δ15N measurements.
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Original:  Human and animal waste  as well as synthetic fertilizers all have diagnostic isotopic shifts that allow researchers to characterize specific nitrogen inputs and track potential human-induced changes in nutrient flux, using δ15N measurements.
Revised:  Human and animal waste as well as synthetic fertilizers , have diagnostic isotopic shifts that allow researchers to characterize specific nitrogen inputs and track potential human-induced changes in nutrient flux, using δ15N measurements.
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Original: Statins When Merck's cholesterol-lowering statin mevacor was approved by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) in 1987, the understanding of the link between cholesterol and heart disease was improving, and the potential market for the drug became significant.
Revised: Statins When Merck's cholesterol-lowering statin Mevacor (lovastatin) was approved by the U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) in 1987, the understanding of the link between cholesterol and heart disease was improving, and the potential market for the drug became significant.
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