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Original:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $     200 in value.
Revised:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $ According to Rathbun the Scientology property in question was returned by mail to the organization by Montalvo shortly after he left the Sea Org. Scientology officials have stated they have not received the materials. After calling the Scientology organization by phone to attempt to speak with his mother, Montalvo was instead put through to a Scientology attorney, . Rathbun wrote, "Moxon proceeded to lie to Daniel that the hard drives were never returned, and made a convincing case (not difficult to do with a 19 year old who doesn't even know the three branches of government) that Daniel would be put behind iron bars for a good long time, UNLESS of course, he returned and cooperated with Moxon and routed out properly." To "route out" in Scientology jargon refers to the member who wishes to leave proceeding through a set of interrogative exit interviews while attached to the Scientology device called the . 200 in value.
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Original:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $     200 in value.
Revised:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $ According to Rathbun, a detective for the Sheriff's office was provided with material from Scientology to build a case against Montalvo. Rathbun stated, "Daniel was picked up by an investigator in a black car with blacked out windows. Instead of being taken to a hotel, where he could route out as promised, he was taken to the Century City Towers. He was deposited in an office on the 33rd floor where a pricy church lawyer interrogated him for two hours." Rathbun asserted that Scientology officials, "... plied the Sheriff's detective with a grand conspiracy theory, characterizing me as the 'anti-christ' of the church of Scientology. ... The next thing Daniel knows he's in a cell where he sat for the next 30 hours." 200 in value.
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Original:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $     200 in value.
Revised:  Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of $ Steve Whitmore, a representative for the LA Sheriff's office, told in a statement that the case involving Montalvo was being dealt with as charges relating to grand theft. Whitmore stated Montalvo left Scientology-related employment in Los Angeles on September 24. On September 29, Scientology officials went to the East Los Angeles sheriff's station where they claimed Montalvo allegedly left the organization with computer hard drives. Whitmore told LA Weekly that on October 6 after traveling back from Florida, Montalvo "walked into lobby of the East L.A. station and turned himself in", and told the police, "everything he did". Whitmore stated to LA Weekly that the alleged crime involved five hard drives each of 200 in value.
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Original:  Montalvo has been assisted by former members of Scientology, including musician Tiziano Lugli and actor Jason Beghe . Rathbun requested donations via a statement made on his blog, in order to help Montalvo with his legal defense financing.
Revised:  Montalvo has been assisted by former members of Scientology, including musician Tiziano Lugli and actor . Rathbun requested donations via a statement made on his blog, in order to help Montalvo with his legal defense financing.
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Original:  If the embankment dam of the storage pond that already released about 700,000 cubic meters of highly alkaline (pH ~13) red sludge into the area would entirely collapse, an extra volume of 500,000 cubic meters of red mud could be released.
Revised:  If the of the that already released about 700,000 cubic meters of highly alkaline (pH ~13) red sludge into the area would entirely collapse, an extra volume of 500,000 cubic meters of red mud could be released.
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Original:  If the embankment dam of the storage pond that already released about 700,000 cubic meters of highly alkaline (pH ~13) red sludge into the area would entirely collapse, an extra volume of 500,000 cubic meters of red mud could be released.
Revised:  If the embankment dam of the storage pond that already released about 700,000 cubic meters of highly alkaline (pH ~13) red sludge into the area would entirely collapse, an extra volume of 500,000 cubic meters of could be released.
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Original:  The flash flood of Monday already killed seven people, chemically burnt 150 others, and left the land and the surface water devastated by the sodium hydroxide and the iron oxides bearing also traces of heavy metals.
Revised:  The of Monday already killed seven people, chemically burnt 150 others, and left the land and the surface water devastated by the sodium hydroxide and the iron oxides bearing also traces of heavy metals.
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Original:  The report says that the council are trying to build relationships between Muslims and police, something which they said is "particularly important after the area's connection to the London bombings on 7th July 2005." A local newspaper reported that "the Shebab project introduces young Muslims to role models from sport and culture and also runs scholars' talks to counter extremist ideologies."
Revised:  The report says that the council are trying to build relationships between Muslims and police, something which they said is "particularly important after the area's connection to the on 7th July 2005." A local newspaper reported that "the Shebab project introduces young Muslims to role models from sport and culture and also runs scholars' talks to counter extremist ideologies."
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Original:  The report says that the council are trying to build relationships between Muslims and police, something which they said is "particularly important after the area's connection to the London bombings on 7th July 2005." A local newspaper reported that "the Shebab project introduces young Muslims to role models from sport and culture and also runs scholars' talks to counter extremist ideologies."
Revised:  The report says that the council are trying to build relationships between Muslims and police, something which they said is "particularly important after the area's connection to the London bombings on 7th July 2005." A local newspaper reported that "the Shebab project introduces young to role models from sport and culture and also runs scholars' talks to counter extremist ideologies."
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Original:  The Guardian reported on Wednesday that campaigners are attempting to "take control of a derelict school building and transform it into a community hub are appealing for sponsors and partners in a bid to turn their dreams into reality."
Revised:  reported on Wednesday that campaigners are attempting to "take control of a derelict school building and transform it into a community hub are appealing for sponsors and partners in a bid to turn their dreams into reality."
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Original:  The council responded to complaints that streets are "cheap and unhealthy takeaways, letting agents and boarded-up shop fronts," by saying that Hyde Park Corner and Headingley are, according to the Yorkshire Post , "thriving shopping areas and work had taken place to ensure a good mix of outlets."
Revised:  The council responded to complaints that streets are "cheap and unhealthy takeaways, letting agents and boarded-up shop fronts," by saying that Hyde Park Corner and Headingley are, according to the , "thriving shopping areas and work had taken place to ensure a good mix of outlets."
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Original:  The National Hurricane Center , which is responsible for tracking and predicting the likely behavior of tropical depressions, tropical storms and hurricanes, has reported that the storm will move away from land, lose its tropical character and decrease its speed, possibly by Sunday evening.
Revised:  The , which is responsible for tracking and predicting the likely behavior of tropical depressions, tropical storms and hurricanes, has reported that the storm will move away from land, lose its tropical character and decrease its speed, possibly by Sunday evening.
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Original:  The danger has passed." Police confirmed that an M-80 firecracker was the cause of the explosion.
Revised:  The danger has passed." He refused to speculate as to what may have caused the damage, or, if it was not a bomb, where the noise had come from. He added: "Now that the robots have gone forward and had a good look, we are confidant there was not an explosion. There was a hole blown in the door, and the glass was blown out so, now we have to find out who did it."
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Original: Map of Massachusetts showing Camp Edwards The US state of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, an active Cape Cod military base, into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Hurricane Katrina, as part of Operation Helping Hand.
Revised:  The US state of Massachusetts is turning a portion of Camp Edwards, an active Cape Cod military base, into a "village" for 2,500 evacuees of Hurricane Katrina, as part of Operation Helping Hand.
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Original:   Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officials will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
Revised:  Map of Massachusetts showing Camp Edwards Upon touching down at Otis Air National Guard Base, Massport officials will issue identification cards, create case files for them and ask the evacuees to provide personal information which will go into to a database to be shared with other states that are taking evacuees.
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Original:  The award, organised by music journalist Peter Robinson, is given anually to the best British pop single of the previous 12 months and is a tongue-in-cheek response to the Mercury Music Prize  .
Revised:  The award, organised by music journalist Peter Robinson, is given anually to the best British pop single of the previous 12 months and is a tongue-in-cheek response to the Mercury Music Prize , the winner of which was announced earlier in the evening .
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Original:  This is the second time Girls Aloud have won the award - they won the inaugural prize in 2003 for "No Good Advice". 
Revised:  This is the second time Girls Aloud have won the award - they won the inaugural prize in 2003 for "No Good Advice". Also announced was the winner of the £20 Invoice Prize for the worst British single of the previous 12 months. The winner, charity single Band Aid 20's "Do They Know It's Christmas?", was the UK's christmas number one in 2004.
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Original:  The award, organised by music journalist Peter Robinson, is given anually to the best British pop single of the previous 12 months and is a tongue-in-cheek response to the Mercury Music Prize, the winner of which was announced earlier in the evening.
Revised:  The award, organised by music journalist Peter Robinson, is given annually to the best British pop single of the previous 12 months and is a tongue-in-cheek response to the Mercury Music Prize, the winner of which was announced earlier in the evening.
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Original:  Stewart Haas Racing driver Tony Stewart , who qualified twenty-second, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Pepsi Max 400 held on October 10, 2010 at Auto Club Speedway in Fontana , California, United States.
Revised:  driver , who qualified twenty-second, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Pepsi Max 400 held on October 10, 2010 at Auto Club Speedway in Fontana , California, United States.
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Original:  Stewart Haas Racing driver Tony Stewart , who qualified twenty-second, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Pepsi Max 400 held on October 10, 2010 at Auto Club Speedway in Fontana , California, United States.
Revised:  Stewart Haas Racing driver Tony Stewart , who qualified twenty-second, won the held on October 10, 2010 at Auto Club Speedway in Fontana , California, United States.
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Original:  Stewart Haas Racing driver Tony Stewart , who qualified twenty-second, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Pepsi Max 400 held on October 10, 2010 at Auto Club Speedway in Fontana , California, United States.
Revised:  Stewart Haas Racing driver Tony Stewart , who qualified twenty-second, won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Pepsi Max 400 held on October 10, 2010 at in , California, United States.
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Original:  Following the race, Stewart moved to fifth in the points satndings after four of ten events in the Chase for the Sprint Cup . Jimmie Johnson managed the third position in the closing laps of the race, after starting eighth on the grid.
Revised:  Following the race, Stewart moved to fifth in the points satndings after four of ten events in the . Jimmie Johnson managed the third position in the closing laps of the race, after starting eighth on the grid.
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Original:  Following the race, Stewart moved to fifth in the points satndings after four of ten events in the Chase for the Sprint Cup . Jimmie Johnson managed the third position in the closing laps of the race, after starting eighth on the grid.
Revised:  Following the race, Stewart moved to fifth in the points satndings after four of ten events in the Chase for the Sprint Cup . managed the third position in the closing laps of the race, after starting eighth on the grid.
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Original:  She served as a Scientology executive in multiple high-ranking positions, working out of the international headquarters of Scientology known as "", located in Gilman Hot Springs near ,  . Scientology was founded by writer in 1952.
Revised:  She served as a Scientology executive in multiple high-ranking positions, working out of the international headquarters of Scientology known as "", located in Gilman Hot Springs near , California . Scientology was founded by writer in 1952.
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Original:  Scobee joined Scientology at age 14, and after leaving in 2005 she began to speak out critically about the organization and her views on alleged abuse carried out by management leader  against staff members.
Revised:  Scobee joined Scientology at age 14, and after leaving in 2005 she began to speak out critically about the organization and her views on alleged abuse carried out by management leader David Miscavige against staff members.
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Original:  Scientology - Abuse at the Top was published in May, and Scobee has subsequently appeared in interviews about her experiences in the Scientology organization – for media including the of Florida on June 23, and the  program hosted by , , which broadcast on on September 28.
Revised:  Scientology - Abuse at the Top was published in May, and Scobee has subsequently appeared in interviews about her experiences in the Scientology organization – for media including the of Florida on June 23, and the BBC program hosted by , , which broadcast on on September 28.
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Original:  Prior to publication of Scientology - Abuse at the Top by Amy Scobee, the author was threatened with separate legal actions – by lawyer representing influential Scientology member and celebrity, actor  ;
Revised:  Prior to publication of Scientology - Abuse at the Top by Amy Scobee, the author was threatened with separate legal actions – by lawyer representing influential Scientology member and celebrity, actor Tom Cruise ;
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Original: The author reveals difficult emotional experiences in her book, including an incident where she was  at age 14 by a Scientology supervisor and subsequently instructed by a "Scientology Ethics Officer" that she was in a "state of treason" and to keep the matter quiet and not report it to the police.
Revised: The author reveals difficult emotional experiences in her book, including an incident where she was raped at age 14 by a Scientology supervisor and subsequently instructed by a "Scientology Ethics Officer" that she was in a "state of treason" and to keep the matter quiet and not report it to the police.
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Original:  In chapter 10, "Assault and Battery", you recount witnessing instances of violence by David Miscavige towards Scientology officials including: Ray Mithoff,  , and Jeff Hawkins.
Revised:  In chapter 10, "Assault and Battery", you recount witnessing instances of violence by David Miscavige towards Scientology officials including: Ray Mithoff, Mike Rinder , and Jeff Hawkins.
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Original:  I don't read blogs for news, doubt I ever will." , a professor of  at , and former editor of the , said: "Aside from the paradox of him indulging in a rant to complain about other ranters, it is the one-sidedness of his argument that is so striking.
Revised:  I don't read blogs for news, doubt I ever will." , a professor of journalism at , and former editor of the , said: "Aside from the paradox of him indulging in a rant to complain about other ranters, it is the one-sidedness of his argument that is so striking.
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Original:  The iPod nano's maximum capacity is 2GB smaller than that of the last version of the iPod Mini, which held 6GB for the same price of $249. Motorola ROKR E1 with headphones. Apple also announced an iTunes-compatible cell phone, the Motorola ROKR E1, which will be available exclusively from Cingular Wireless in the United States. The ROKR has a color display for viewing album art and features built-in stereo speakers, as well as stereo headphones that also serve as a mobile headset with microphone. Users can randomly autofill or manually fill the mobile phone with playlists of music, audiobooks and Podcasts from their iTunes library via a USB 1.1 connection. Cingular is the only current US carrier for the phone, Virgin will be covering it in the UK. The Motorola ROKR pauses music automatically when users take a call and offers the ability to listen to music while messaging or taking a photo. It will cost $ 250 with a two-year cell service contract.
Revised:  The iPod nano's maximum capacity is 2GB smaller than that of the last version of the iPod Mini, which held 6GB for the same price of $249. Motorola ROKR E1 with headphones. Apple also announced an iTunes-compatible cell phone, the Motorola ROKR E1, which will be available exclusively from Cingular Wireless in the United States, Virgin will be in the UK. The ROKR has a color display for viewing album art and features built-in stereo speakers, as well as stereo headphones that also serve as a mobile headset with microphone. Users can randomly autofill or manually fill the mobile phone with playlists of music, audiobooks and Podcasts from their iTunes library via a USB 1.1 connection. The Motorola ROKR pauses music automatically when users take a call and offers the ability to listen to music while messaging or taking a photo. It will cost $ 250 with a two-year cell service contract.
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Original:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm  , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
Revised:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm — David Tapley , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
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Original:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm  , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
Revised:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm , a retired , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
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Original:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm  , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
Revised:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm , a retired Garland , Texas police officer , and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
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Original:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm  , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife , who was named as Brenda Tapley by a CNN affiliate in Texas .
Revised:  Officials said over 40 people were transported to local hospitals for treatment and reportedly two people died during the storm , a retired Garland , Texas police officer named David Tapley and his wife .
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Original: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, ,  , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco,  , Santiago, , , and  .
Revised: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, , Athens , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, , Santiago, , , and .
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Original: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, ,  , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco,  , Santiago, , , and  .
Revised: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, , , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, Nairobi , Santiago, , , and .
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Original: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, ,  , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco,  , Santiago, , , and  .
Revised: The examinations will take place on February 28, 2006 in New York, Addis Ababa, , , Bangkok, Beirut, Geneva, Monaco, , Santiago, , , and Vienna .
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Original:  The Committee ’ s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, “ The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ’ s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
Revised:  The Committee ' s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, “ The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ’ s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
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Original:  The Committee ’ s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, “ The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ’ s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
Revised:  The Committee ’ s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, " The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ’ s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
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Original:  The Committee ’ s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, “ The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ’ s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
Revised:  The Committee ’ s Chairman, Paul A Volcker, stated, “ The inescapable conclusion from the Committee ' s work is that the United Nations Organization needs thoroughgoing reform—and it needs it urgently.
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