wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: Cross-species transmission (CST), also called interspecies transmission, host jump, or spillover, is the ability for a foreign virus, once introduced into an individual of a new host species, to infect that individual and spread throughout a new host population.
Revised: Cross-species transmission (CST), also called interspecies transmission, host jump, or spillover, is the ability for a foreign virus, once introduced into an individual of a new host species, the pathogen may acquire the ability to infect other individuals of the same species, allowing it to spread through the new host population.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  The concept is most commonly studied in virology, but cross-species transmission may also occur with bacterial pathogens or other types of microorganisms. Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of pathogens to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the pathogen and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, the successful infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual host leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host . The phenomenon is important for understanding and controlling emerging infectious diseases in humans, especially those caused by viruses, where one reservoir species transfers the virus to a vector species , which in turn transfers to humans.
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Original:   Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host,  infection of an initial individual  leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers  to humans.
Revised:  Steps involved in the transfer of viruses to new hosts include contact between the virus and the host, infection of an initial individual leading to amplification and an outbreak, and the generation within the original or new host of viral variants that have the ability to spread efficiently between individuals in populations of the new host Often seen in emerging viruses where one species transfers to another , which in turn transfers the virus to humans.
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Original:  The exact mechanism that facilitates transfer is unknown, however, it is believed that viruses with a rapid mutation rate are able to  overcome host-specific immunological defenses . This can occur between species that have high contact rates .
Revised:  The exact mechanism that facilitates transfer is unknown, however, it is believed that viruses with a rapid mutation rate are able to overcome host-specific immunological defenses , allowing their continued transmission. This may occur between species that have high contact rates .
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Original:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth  and eyes.
Revised:  For example, bats can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth and eyes.
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Original:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth  and eyes.
Revised:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer the rabies virus to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth and eyes.
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Original:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth  and eyes.
Revised:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bites, and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth and eyes.
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Original:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth  and eyes.
Revised:  Bats, for example, are mammals and can directly transfer rabies to humans through bite and also through aerosolization of bat saliva and urine which can then be absorbed by human mucous membranes in the nose, mouth , and eyes.
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Original:   Other factors include geographic area, intraspecies behaviors, and phylogenetic relatedness . Virus emergence relies on two factors: initial infection and sustained transmission .
Revised:  Pathogens of more distantly related species, on the other hand, such as plant viruses, are not known to infect humans. Other factors include geographic area, intraspecies behaviors, and phylogenetic relatedness . Virus emergence relies on two factors: initial infection and sustained transmission .
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Original:  Physicist and philosopher Max Bernhard Weinstein in his 1910 work Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and  Nature"), presented the broadest and most far-reaching examination of pandeism written up to that point.
Revised:  Physicist and philosopher Max Bernhard Weinstein in his 1910 work Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and Perception of Nature"), presented the broadest and most far-reaching examination of pandeism written up to that point.
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Original: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and  Nature") (1910), page 234-235: "Pandeistische Andeutungen finden sich selbstverständlich auch bei vielen anderen Völkern.
Revised: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and Perception of Nature") (1910), page 234-235: "Pandeistische Andeutungen finden sich selbstverständlich auch bei vielen anderen Völkern.
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Original: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and  Nature") (1910), page 121: "Es ist also nicht richtig, wenn die Anschauungen der Chinesen denen der Naturvölker gleichgesetzt werden, vielmehr gehören sie eigentlich dem Pandeismus statt dem Pananimismus, an, und zwar einem dualistischen.
Revised: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and Perception of Nature") (1910), page 121: "Es ist also nicht richtig, wenn die Anschauungen der Chinesen denen der Naturvölker gleichgesetzt werden, vielmehr gehören sie eigentlich dem Pandeismus statt dem Pananimismus, an, und zwar einem dualistischen.
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Original: "Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and  Nature") (1910), page 213: "Wir werden später sehen, daß die Indier auch den Pandeismus gelehrt haben.
Revised: "Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and Perception of Nature") (1910), page 213: "Wir werden später sehen, daß die Indier auch den Pandeismus gelehrt haben.
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Original: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and  Nature") (1910), page 235: "Von den Japanern soll einer ihrer bedeutendsten Philosophen, Yamazaki-Ansai, um die mitte des siebzehnten Jahrhunderts, entwickelt haben: “Gott ist das Wesen aller Dinge und durchdringt den Himmel und die Erde.”
Revised: Max Bernhard Weinstein, Welt- und Lebensanschauungen, Hervorgegangen aus Religion, Philosophie und Naturerkenntnis ("World and Life Views, Emerging From Religion, Philosophy and Perception of Nature") (1910), page 235: "Von den Japanern soll einer ihrer bedeutendsten Philosophen, Yamazaki-Ansai, um die mitte des siebzehnten Jahrhunderts, entwickelt haben: “Gott ist das Wesen aller Dinge und durchdringt den Himmel und die Erde.”
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Original:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent  , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
Revised:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is a derogatory expression that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
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Original:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent  , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
Revised:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who are overly dependent , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
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Original:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent  , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
Revised:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent on their families , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
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Original:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent  , have low emotional intelligence and have weak self-management skills.
Revised:  ; Putonghua: Gǎng Hái) is an expression, often derogatory , that refers to a subset of children or teenagers in Hong Kong who , among other undesirable traits, are overly dependent , have low emotional intelligence , and have lack self-management skills.
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Original:  The book summarises five negative characteristics common in children born in Hong Kong after the 1990s . The book cited parents who spoil their children from an early age as the party responsible for the upbringing of "Kong Kids". Treating their children like "princes and princesses", parents tend to spoil their children with material gifts and money (not dissimilar to the "little emperor syndrome" prevalent in mainland China). In addition, parents often have a hand in tackling everyday, trivial problems that their children might face, limiting opportunities for the children to problem-solve on their own. Growing up under a spotlight, children often develop a self-centred personality, believing that the Earth revolves around them. It's also likely for Kong Kids to have a short temper when faced with problems, since they are not used to solving problems on their own. These harmful habits and characters may influence future generations, forming a vicious cycle.
Revised:  The book summarises five negative characteristics common in children born in Hong Kong after the 1990s 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kong Kids typically have several common characteristics. For young children, they often lack life skills, such as bathing, cooking, and tying shoelaces. They are used to relying on their parents and foreign domestic helpers.Parry, Hazel. Hong Kong kids need to learn self-care skill. South China Morning Post. 7 May 2013.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% They are usually emotional and self-centred. With low Emotional Quotient (EQ), Kong Kids cannot control their emotion in any circumstances, such as dealing with unpleasant situations. They want to be under the spotlight and cared for by everyone.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kong Kids often love chasing new trends and pursuing well-known brands. Most of them own brand name goods and electronic gadgets such as mobile phones, iPads, iPods, digital cameras, etc. They do not treasure what they have and look for a materialistic life.
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Original:  Causes Nowadays, Hong Kong families typically have one or at most two children. According to some educational experts, some so-called 'monster parents 'protect their children so well that they do not allow children to experience any setback."Helicopter Parents"? "Monster Parents"? "Free-Range Parenting?" – Part 2 – I Am Not a Monster Parent". Lifetime Development. For instance, in 2010, the Hong Kong students could not get on the planes because of a snowstorm in London. The parents then strongly requested the government to assist students stranded at the airport. This issue induced a lot of criticisms towards parents because of their over-protection. The over-protected children hence have low resilience and can hardly overcome difficulties, which results in Kong Kids.Hong Kong Kids. Ming Pao. 1 January 2011.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Most parents in Hong Kong also work full-time. This frequently means they employ a foreign domestic helper to take care of their children. According to a survey, nearly 90\% of parents employ a foreign domestic helper to take care of their children. The domestic helpers are not responsible for correcting children's behaviour even though the kids behave wrongly. Therefore, some children become rebellious, impolite and disrespectful of others - characteristics of Kong Kids.培養孩子自理能力的重要性. Mama Station. 11 October 2010.
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Original:  Finally, Hong Kong is an exam-obsessed city where most parents emphasise their children's academic results. The parents understate the need for resilience in their kids. Some children are expected to focus exclusively on academic matters, and not housework or other chores. As a result, these kids become dependent, both physically and psychologically, that is, they become Kong Kids.Exam-obsessed Hong Kong makes celebrity tutors rich . Tengri News. 31 May 88881%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Effects Dependent individuals Kids with "Kong Kid" symptoms have little ability to care for themselves and poor problem-solving skills.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Effects Dependent individuals Kids with "Kong Kid" symptoms have little ability to care for themselves and poor problem-solving skills.
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Original:  31 May 88881%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Effects Dependent individuals Kids with "Kong Kid" symptoms have little ability to care for themselves and poor problem-solving skills.
Revised:  31 May 88881%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Dependent individuals Kids with "Kong Kid" symptoms have little ability to care for themselves and poor problem-solving skills.
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Original:  31 May 88881%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Effects Dependent individuals Kids with "Kong Kid" symptoms have little ability to care for themselves and poor problem-solving skills. When faced with adversity, they immediately give up which can lead to feelings of melancholia and, in serious cases, suicide. Kong Kids tend to remain childlike and stunted psychologically.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% For instance, in 2011, a snowstorm paralysed the London Heathrow Airport, many Hong Kong students who came home for holiday were stranded at the airport."Hong Kong Kids"家長不成長「港孩」如何成長？. Ming Pao. 2011-01-11 They stayed in the banquet rooms of hotels or slept in the airport. During that period, those Hong Kong students complained continuously about the situation and that the banquet rooms were like concentration camps.
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