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Original:  Similarities with    Buddhism
Revised:  Similarities with Following the death of Timon, the Platonic Academy became the primary advocate of skepticism until the mid-first century BCE. While early Academic Skepticism was influenced in part by Pyrrho, it grew more and more dogmatic until Aenesidemus broke with the Academics to revive Pyrrhonism in the first century BCE, denouncing the Academy as "Stoics fighting against Stoics." Some later Pyrrhonists, such as Sextus Empiricus, go so far as to claim that Pyrrhonists are the only real skeptics, dividing all philosophy into the dogmatists, the Academics, and the skeptics. Buddhism
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Original:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
Revised:  During his Air Force career, he devised the simple Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
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Original:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
Revised:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, which could conveniently and quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people. Originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
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Original:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
Revised:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes , it correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people.
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Original:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max , and so could conveniently be used to quickly establish the fitness level of large numbers of people. He left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to found the Cooper Aerobics Center . Cooper developed the Smart Snack Ribbon guidelines put into use by the convenient fun foods division of PepsiCo, Inc., Frito-Lay.
Revised:  During his Air Force career, he devised a simple test (the Cooper test, originally the distance run in 12 minutes ) which correlated well with the existing concept of VO2max . Cooper left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to found the Cooper Aerobics Center . Cooper developed the Smart Snack Ribbon guidelines put into use by the convenient fun foods division of PepsiCo, Inc., Frito-Lay.
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Original:  He left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to found the Cooper Aerobics Center . Cooper developed the Smart Snack Ribbon guidelines put into use by the convenient fun foods division of PepsiCo, Inc., Frito-Lay.
Revised:  He left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to start his companies . Cooper developed the Smart Snack Ribbon guidelines put into use by the convenient fun foods division of PepsiCo, Inc., Frito-Lay.
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Original:  He left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to found the Cooper Aerobics Center . Cooper developed the Smart Snack Ribbon guidelines put into use by the convenient fun foods division of PepsiCo, Inc., Frito-Lay.
Revised:  He left the Air Force in 1970, when he and his wife, Millie, moved to Dallas to found the Cooper Aerobics Center . Cooper 
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Original: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
Revised: External links "Maximalism or Minimalism?"— article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
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Original: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
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Original: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
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Original: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
Revised: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Art movements Category:Collecting Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
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Original: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Art movemen
Revised: External links Maximalism Or Minimalism?- article on Esquire Maximal Nation | Pitchfork Category: Collecting Category: Aesthetics Category: Postmodern art Category:Literary movements Category:Contemporary art movements Category: Literary movements Category:Postmodern ar
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Original:  published online 2003) The Oxford Dictionary of Local and Family History  (fulltext) Richardson, John (1974) The Local Historian's Encyclopedia.
Revised:  published online 2003) The Oxford Dictionary of Local and Family History Morrill, John. "The Diversity of Local History." Historical Journal 24, no. 3 (1981): 717-29. online on England. (fulltext) Richardson, John (1974) The Local Historian's Encyclopedia.
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Original: In 1949, Ōtsuji joined the avant-garde exhibition society Bijutsu Bunka Kyōkai ("Art and Culture Association") and showed his photograph Itamashiki Buttai ( “Painful Object” ).
Revised: In 1949, Ōtsuji joined the avant-garde exhibition society Bijutsu Bunka Kyōkai ("Art and Culture Association") and showed his photograph Itamashiki Buttai ( "Painful Object" ).
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Original:  For example, his work Aishi ni tsuite ("About Feet") (1949) captures a raw chicken positioned upside down with its legs dramatically crossed in mid-air, thus offering a strange, almost life-like view of the dead animal.
Revised:  For example, his work Aishi ni tsuite ("About Feet") (1949) captures a raw chicken positioned upside down with its legs dramatically crossed in mid-air, thus offering a strange, almost lifelike view of the dead animal.
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Original:  Another early series of photographs, shot in Nobuya Abe ’ s studio in 1950, depict the artist Hideko Fukushima and other women, both clothed and nude, posing within a geometric network of strings, thus appearing like dolls or puppets.
Revised:  Another early series of photographs, shot in Nobuya Abe ' s studio in 1950, depict the artist Hideko Fukushima and other women, both clothed and nude, posing within a geometric network of strings, thus appearing like dolls or puppets.
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Original: Obinata Kin'ichi, "The Creation of Song Without Words – Kiyoji Otsuji’s 1956," 大辻清司 武蔵野美術大学美術館・図書館所蔵作品目錄 = Ōtsuji Kiyoji: Photographs in the Collection of the Musashino Art University Museum & Library, 39. Following these examples, for the rest of his career, Ōtsuji ’ s personal photography continued to explore the presence of objects (もの, mono) – ready-made or found objects – and to capture their ephemerality with his camera.
Revised: Obinata Kin'ichi, "The Creation of Song Without Words – Kiyoji Otsuji’s 1956," 大辻清司 武蔵野美術大学美術館・図書館所蔵作品目錄 = Ōtsuji Kiyoji: Photographs in the Collection of the Musashino Art University Museum & Library, 39. Following these examples, for the rest of his career, Ōtsuji ' s personal photography continued to explore the presence of objects (もの, mono) – ready-made or found objects – and to capture their ephemerality with his camera.
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Original:  He contributed photographs made into autoslide projections for the 5th Experimental Workshop Presentation in 1953, and continued to photograph the group ’ s events and rehearsals until they split up in 1957.
Revised:  He contributed photographs made into autoslide projections for the 5th Experimental Workshop Presentation in 1953, and continued to photograph the group ' s events and rehearsals until they split up in 1957.
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Original: Obinata Kin'ichi, "The Creation of Song Without Words – Kiyoji Otsuji’s 1956," 大辻清司 武蔵野美術大学美術館・図書館所蔵作品目錄 = Ōtsuji Kiyoji: Photographs in the Collection of the Musashino Art University Museum & Library, 36. He built his own camera and even devised a cinematic device called an “autoscope” that was used to project images at the Sekiya Industries booth at the Japan International Trade Fair in Tokyo in 1957.
Revised: Obinata Kin'ichi, "The Creation of Song Without Words – Kiyoji Otsuji’s 1956," 大辻清司 武蔵野美術大学美術館・図書館所蔵作品目錄 = Ōtsuji Kiyoji: Photographs in the Collection of the Musashino Art University Museum & Library, 36. He built his own camera and even devised a cinematic device called an "autoscope" that was used to project images at the Sekiya Industries booth at the Japan International Trade Fair in Tokyo in 1957.
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Original:  A series of photographs for Asahi Camera, “ Ōtsuji Kiyoji Experimental Workshop of Photography ” (1975), featured both essays and photographs that considered the theoretical issues surrounding photography as a process and discipline.
Revised:  A series of photographs for Asahi Camera, " Ōtsuji Kiyoji Experimental Workshop of Photography ” (1975), featured both essays and photographs that considered the theoretical issues surrounding photography as a process and discipline.
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Original:  A series of photographs for Asahi Camera, “ Ōtsuji Kiyoji Experimental Workshop of Photography ” (1975), featured both essays and photographs that considered the theoretical issues surrounding photography as a process and discipline.
Revised:  A series of photographs for Asahi Camera, “ Ōtsuji Kiyoji Experimental Workshop of Photography " (1975), featured both essays and photographs that considered the theoretical issues surrounding photography as a process and discipline.
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Original:  His series Hitohako no Kako ( “ Past of One Tin Can ” ) was created for his first solo exhibition in 1977, and featured a 23-photograph sequence showing a can of memories being unpacked and individual elements examined by the camera – including old photographs.
Revised:  His series Hitohako no Kako ( " Past of One Tin Can ” ) was created for his first solo exhibition in 1977, and featured a 23-photograph sequence showing a can of memories being unpacked and individual elements examined by the camera – including old photographs.
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Original:  His series Hitohako no Kako ( “ Past of One Tin Can ” ) was created for his first solo exhibition in 1977, and featured a 23-photograph sequence showing a can of memories being unpacked and individual elements examined by the camera – including old photographs.
Revised:  His series Hitohako no Kako ( “ Past of One Tin Can " ) was created for his first solo exhibition in 1977, and featured a 23-photograph sequence showing a can of memories being unpacked and individual elements examined by the camera – including old photographs.
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Original:  By the 1970s, Ōtsuji’s authority in the Japanese photography world had solidified, and in addition to publishing frequently, he was asked to become a regular guest in a series of roundtable discussions published in Asahi Camera titled “ Roundtable: On Talked-About Photographs, ” where he was joined by other prominent photographers.
Revised:  By the 1970s, Ōtsuji’s authority in the Japanese photography world had solidified, and in addition to publishing frequently, he was asked to become a regular guest in a series of roundtable discussions published in Asahi Camera titled " Roundtable: On Talked-About Photographs, ” where he was joined by other prominent photographers.
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Original:  By the 1970s, Ōtsuji’s authority in the Japanese photography world had solidified, and in addition to publishing frequently, he was asked to become a regular guest in a series of roundtable discussions published in Asahi Camera titled “ Roundtable: On Talked-About Photographs, ” where he was joined by other prominent photographers.
Revised:  By the 1970s, Ōtsuji’s authority in the Japanese photography world had solidified, and in addition to publishing frequently, he was asked to become a regular guest in a series of roundtable discussions published in Asahi Camera titled “ Roundtable: On Talked-About Photographs, " where he was joined by other prominent photographers.
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Original:  Photographs as Collaborations, Shoto Museum of Art, Tokyo, 2007 APN Research, Kunsthalle Bern, 2012 Kiyoji Ōtsuji “Photographic Archive” :
Revised:  Photographs as Collaborations, Shoto Museum of Art, Tokyo, 2007 APN Research, Kunsthalle Bern, 2012 Kiyoji Ōtsuji "Photographic Archive" :
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Original:  See also Naga morsarang Porhalaan Pupuk  References Cited works Kuiper, F. B. J., Cosmogony and Conception: A Query, History of Religions, Vol. 10, No. 2 (Nov., 1970), 91-138.
Revised:  See also Naga morsarang Porhalaan Pupuk Notes References Cited works Kuiper, F. B. J., Cosmogony and Conception: A Query, History of Religions, Vol. 10, No. 2 (Nov., 1970), 91-138.
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Original:  See also Naga morsarang Porhalaan Pupuk  References Cited works Kuiper, F. B. J., Cosmogony and Conception: A Query, History of Religions, Vol. 10, No. 2 (Nov., 1970), 91-138.
Revised:  See also Naga morsarang Porhalaan Pupuk References Kuiper, F. B. J., Cosmogony and Conception: A Query, History of Religions, Vol. 10, No. 2 (Nov., 1970), 91-138.
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Original:  Winkler, J., Die Toba-Batak auf Sumatra in gesunden und kranken Tagen, American Anthropologist, New Series, Vol. 32, No. 4 (Oct.-Dec., 1930), 682-687. 
Revised:  Winkler, J., Die Toba-Batak auf Sumatra in gesunden und kranken Tagen, American Anthropologist, New Series, Vol. 32, No. 4 (Oct.-Dec., 1930), 682-687. External links Magical Ancient Keris Antiques
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Original:  Depending on the session, the performers may use chord charts or sheet music (more likely at an amateur or beginner session) or no music notation at all,  at a session with experienced participants and/or professionals.
Revised:  Depending on the session, some beginning performers may use chord charts or sheet music (more likely at an amateur or beginner session) or no music notation at all, at a session with experienced participants and/or professionals.
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Original:  Depending on the session, the performers may use chord charts or sheet music (more likely at an amateur or beginner session) or no music notation at all,  at a session with experienced participants and/or professionals.
Revised:  Depending on the session, the performers may use chord charts or sheet music (more likely at an amateur or beginner session) or no music notation at all, which is typically the case at a session with experienced participants and/or professionals.
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Original:  According to the monistic/pantheistic (non-dualist) theologies of Hinduism (such as Advaita Vedanta school), this Atman is indistinct from Brahman, the supreme spirit  .
Revised:  According to the monistic/pantheistic (non-dualist) theologies of Hinduism (such as Advaita Vedanta school), this Atman is indistinct from Brahman, the supreme spirit or the Ultimate Reality .
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Original:  The multitude of Devas are considered as manifestations of Brahman. . "Three gods  , Brahma, Vishnu, and Shiva, and other deities are considered manifestations of and are worshipped as incarnations of Brahman." . "The members of various Hindu sects worship a dizzying number of specific deities and follow innumerable rituals in honor of specific gods.
Revised:  The multitude of Devas are considered as manifestations of Brahman. . "Three gods or Trimurti , Brahma, Vishnu, and Shiva, and other deities are considered manifestations of and are worshipped as incarnations of Brahman." . "The members of various Hindu sects worship a dizzying number of specific deities and follow innumerable rituals in honor of specific gods.
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Original:  The notion of the feminine in deity is much more pronounced and is evident in the pairings of Shiva with Parvati  , Vishnu accompanied by Lakshmi, Radha with Krishna and Sita with Rama.
Revised:  The notion of the feminine in deity is much more pronounced and is evident in the pairings of Shiva with Parvati (Ardhanarishvara) , Vishnu accompanied by Lakshmi, Radha with Krishna and Sita with Rama.
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Original: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
Revised: Albania Observer Rugby league in Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
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Original: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
Revised: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
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Original: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
Revised: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
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Original: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in the Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
Revised: Albania Observer Rugby league in the Belgium Belgium Observer Rugby league in the Bosnia and Herzegovina Bosnia and Herzegovina Observer Rugby league in the Bulgaria Bulgaria Observer Rugby league in the Czech Republic Czech Republic Affiliated Czech Rugby League Association 2× European C League Champion Rugby league in Denmark Denmark Observer Rugby league in France Chanticleers Member French Rugby League Federation Elite One ChampionshipElite Two Championship Runners-up(1954,
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Original:  Rugby league in Ireland Wolfhounds Member Rugby League Ireland Irish Elite League 2× Quarter Finalists/Semi-final play-offs / Emerging Nations's Runners-up Rugby league in Italy Azzurri Member Federazione Italiana Rugby League Group Stages / Emerging Nations's Runners-up / 2× European B League Champion Rugby league in the Latvia Latvia Observer 1× European C League Champion Rugby league in Malta l-Kavallieri Affiliated Maltese Rugby League Association Emerging Nations'
Revised:  Rugby league in Ireland Wolfhounds Member Rugby League Ireland Irish Elite League 2× Quarter Finalists/Semi-final play-offs / Emerging Nations's Runners-up Rugby league in Italy Azzurri Member Federazione Italiana Rugby League Group Stages / Emerging Nations's Runners-up / 2× European B League Champion Rugby league in Latvia Latvia Observer 1× European C League Champion Rugby league in Malta l-Kavallieri Affiliated Maltese Rugby League Association Emerging Nations'
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