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Original:  Nissen Fundoplication General complications that can occur using any method of hernia repair are: problems with anesthesia dosage difficulty swallowing because the stomach is too high up or esophagus is wrapped too tightly heartburn excessive gas infection or bleeding esophagus moving out of wrap causing lower esophageal sphincter to not be supported Nissen Fundoplication Procedure See also hiatus hernia
Revised:  Nissen Fundoplication General complications that can occur using any method of hernia repair are: problems with anesthesia dosage difficulty swallowing because the stomach is too high up or esophagus is wrapped too tightly heartburn excessive gas infection or bleeding esophagus moving out of wrap causing lower esophageal sphincter to not be supported Nissen Fundoplication Procedure See also Hiatus hernia
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Original:  Gilovich, 1991 pp. 27–28 Speed cameras are often installed after a road incurs an exceptionally high number of accidents, and this value usually falls (regression to mean) immediately afterwards . Many speed camera proponents attribute this fall in accidents to the speed camera, without observing the overall trend.
Revised:  Gilovich, 1991 pp. 27–28 Speed cameras are often installed after a road incurs an exceptionally high number of accidents, and this value usually falls (regression to mean) immediately afterward . Many speed camera proponents attribute this fall in accidents to the speed camera, without observing the overall trend.
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Original:  Fallacious evaluation: "Given that the counterattacks against Germany occurred only after they had conquered the greatest amount of territory under their control, regression to the mean can explain the retreat of German forces from occupied territories as a purely random fluctuation that would have happened without any intervention on the part of the USSR or the Western Allies."
Revised:  Fallacious evaluation: "Given that the counterattacks against Germany occurred only after they had conquered the greatest amount of territory under their control, regression toward the mean can explain the retreat of German forces from occupied territories as a purely random fluctuation that would have happened without any intervention on the part of the USSR or the Western Allies."
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Original:  (Such misapplication takes as a premise that all events are random, as they must be for the concept of regression to the mean to be validly applied.) Category:Causal fallacies Category:Cognitive biases Category: Pseudoscience Category:Misuse of statis
Revised:  (Such misapplication takes as a premise that all events are random, as they must be for the concept of regression toward the mean to be validly applied.) Category:Causal fallacies Category:Cognitive biases Category: Pseudoscience Category:Misuse of statis
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Original:  (Such misapplication takes as a premise that all events are random, as they must be for the concept of regression to the mean to be validly applied.) Category:Causal fallacies Category:Cognitive biases Category: Pseudoscience Category:Misuse of statis
Revised:  (Such misapplication takes as a premise that all events are random, as they must be for the concept of regression to the mean to be validly applied.) Category:Causal fallacies Category:Cognitive biases Category: Misuse of statistics Category:Pseu
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Original: There is insufficient evidence to support the efficacy of hypnosis in managing pain in other contexts, such as childbirth or post-operative pain .
Revised: There is also video footage of William Kroger M.D. delivering a baby with the mother under hypnosis as well as removing the thyroid of another woman. evidence to support the efficacy of hypnosis in managing pain in other contexts, such as childbirth or post-operative pain .
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Original: There is also video footage of William Kroger M.D. delivering a baby with the mother under hypnosis as well as removing the thyroid of another woman. evidence to support the efficacy of hypnosis in managing pain in other contexts, such as childbirth [Trancework, 5td Ed., Michael D. Yapko].
Revised: Since then, hypnosis has been used for numerous surgeries. More recently one can watch video footage of William Kroger M.D. delivering a baby with the mother under hypnosis as well as removing the thyroid of another woman. evidence to support the efficacy of hypnosis in managing pain in other contexts, such as childbirth [Trancework, 5td Ed., Michael D. Yapko].
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Original: There is also video footage of William Kroger M.D. delivering a baby with the mother under hypnosis as well as removing the thyroid of another woman. evidence to support the efficacy of hypnosis in managing pain in other contexts, such as childbirth [Trancework, 5td Ed., Michael D. Yapko].
Revised: There is also video footage of William Kroger M.D. delivering a baby with the mother under hypnosis as well as removing the thyroid of another woman. [Trancework, 5td Ed., Michael D. Yapko].
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Original:  or the devil communicating knowledge to Jesus Christ during his temptation in the wilderness (Luke 4:1-12) or the appearance of an angel to the wife of Manoah telling her that she shall bear Samson (Judges 13:2).
Revised:  or the devil communicating knowledge to Jesus Christ during his temptation in the wilderness (Luke 4:1-12) or the appearance of an angel to Manoah's wife telling her that she shall bear Samson (Judges 13:2).
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Original:  Digital Cities 6 C&T 2009, PennState , U.S. Foth, M., Forlano, L., Satchell, C., & Gibbs, M. (Eds.) (2011).
Revised:  Digital Cities 6 C&T 2009, Penn State , U.S. Foth, M., Forlano, L., Satchell, C., & Gibbs, M. (Eds.) (2011).
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Original:  Technology can refer to various types of information and communication technology and ubiquitous computing / urban computing technology such as mobile phones, wearable devices, urban screens, media façades, sensors, and other Internet of Things devices.
Revised:  "Technology" can refer to various types of information and communication technology and ubiquitous computing / urban computing technology such as mobile phones, wearable devices, urban screens, media façades, sensors, and other Internet of Things devices.
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Original:  Since then, the emergence and growing popularity of ubiquitous computing, open data and big data analytics, as well as smart cities  contributed to a surge in interest in urban informatics, not just from academics but also from industry and city governments seeking to explore and apply the possibilities and opportunities of urban informatics.
Revised:  Since then, the emergence and growing popularity of ubiquitous computing, open data and big data analytics, as well as smart cities , contributed to a surge in interest in urban informatics, not just from academics but also from industry and city governments seeking to explore and apply the possibilities and opportunities of urban informatics.
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Original:  The descriptions provided by Townsend in his foreword and by Foth in his preface to the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " emphasize two key aspects: (1) the new possibilities (including real-time data) for both citizens and city administrations afforded by ubiquitous computing, and (2) the convergence of physical and digital aspects of the city.
Revised:  The descriptions provided by Townsend in his foreword and by Foth in his preface to the Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " emphasize two key aspects: (1) the new possibilities (including real-time data) for both citizens and city administrations afforded by ubiquitous computing, and (2) the convergence of physical and digital aspects of the city.
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Original:  The descriptions provided by Townsend in his foreword and by Foth in his preface to the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " emphasize two key aspects: (1) the new possibilities (including real-time data) for both citizens and city administrations afforded by ubiquitous computing, and (2) the convergence of physical and digital aspects of the city.
Revised:  The descriptions provided by Townsend in his foreword and by Foth in his preface to the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics emphasize two key aspects: (1) the new possibilities (including real-time data) for both citizens and city administrations afforded by ubiquitous computing, and (2) the convergence of physical and digital aspects of the city.
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Original:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . "  Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
Revised:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261. However, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . " Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
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Original:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . "  Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
Revised:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning " Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
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Original:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . "  Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
Revised:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . " . Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
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Original:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . "  Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communication technology and the impact on cities.
Revised:  Hepworth's 1987 article "The Information City", which mentions the term "urban informatics" on page 261, however, Hepworth's overall discussion is more concerned with the broader notion of "informatics planning . " Considering the article pre-dates the advent of ubiquitous computing and urban computing, it does contain some visionary thoughts about major changes on the horizon brought about by information and communications technology and the impact on cities.
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Original:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
Revised:  The first edited book on the topic, the Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
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Original:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
Revised:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
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Original:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
Revised:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009 , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
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Original:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology , or;
Revised:  The first edited book on the topic, the " Handbook of Research on Urban Informatics " , published in 2009. , brought together researchers and scholars from three broad domains: people, place, and technology ; or,
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Original:  From an architecture, planning and design background, there is the work of the late William J. Mitchell, Dean of the MIT School of Architecture and Planning, and author of the 1995 book " City of Bits: Space, Place, and the Infobahn.
Revised:  From an architecture, planning and design background, there is the work of the late William J. Mitchell, Dean of the MIT School of Architecture and Planning, and author of the 1995 book City of Bits: Space, Place, and the Infobahn.
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Original:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . "  Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education,  e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
Revised:  Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . " Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education, e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
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Original:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . "  Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education,  e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
Revised:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance " Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education, e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
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Original:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . "  Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education,  e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
Revised:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . " . Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education, e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
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Original:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . "  Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education,  e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
Revised:  " Mitchell was influential in suggesting a profound relationship between place and technology at a time when mainstream interest was focused on the promise of the Information Superhighway and what Frances Cairncross called the "Death of Distance . " Rather than a decline in the significance of place through services such as telecommuting, distance education, and e-commerce, the physical / tangible layers of the city started to mix with the digital layers of the internet and online communications.
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Original:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled "Cybercities Reader " and by various authors in the 2006 book " Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context " edited by Patrick Purcell.
Revised:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled Cybercities Reader and by various authors in the 2006 book " Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context " edited by Patrick Purcell.
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Original:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled "Cybercities Reader " and by various authors in the 2006 book " Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context " edited by Patrick Purcell.
Revised:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled "Cybercities Reader " and by various authors in the 2006 book Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context " edited by Patrick Purcell.
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Original:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled "Cybercities Reader " and by various authors in the 2006 book " Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context " edited by Patrick Purcell.
Revised:  The relationship between cities and the internet was further expanded upon in a volume edited by Stephen Graham entitled "Cybercities Reader " and by various authors in the 2006 book " Networked Neighbourhoods: The Connected Community in Context edited by Patrick Purcell.
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Original:  Planning and Design, 34(3), guest edited by the late Bharat Dave, as well as in the 2008 book " Augmented Urban Spaces: Articulating the Physical and Electronic City " edited by Alessandro Aurigi and Fiorella De Cindio, based on contributions to the Digital Cities 4 workshop held in conjunction with the Communities and Technologies (C&T) conference 2005 in Milan, Italy.
Revised:  Planning and Design, 34(3), guest edited by the late Bharat Dave, as well as in the 2008 book Augmented Urban Spaces: Articulating the Physical and Electronic City " edited by Alessandro Aurigi and Fiorella De Cindio, based on contributions to the Digital Cities 4 workshop held in conjunction with the Communities and Technologies (C&T) conference 2005 in Milan, Italy.
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Original:  Planning and Design, 34(3), guest edited by the late Bharat Dave, as well as in the 2008 book " Augmented Urban Spaces: Articulating the Physical and Electronic City " edited by Alessandro Aurigi and Fiorella De Cindio, based on contributions to the Digital Cities 4 workshop held in conjunction with the Communities and Technologies (C&T) conference 2005 in Milan, Italy.
Revised:  Planning and Design, 34(3), guest edited by the late Bharat Dave, as well as in the 2008 book " Augmented Urban Spaces: Articulating the Physical and Electronic City , edited by Alessandro Aurigi and Fiorella De Cindio, based on contributions to the Digital Cities 4 workshop held in conjunction with the Communities and Technologies (C&T) conference 2005 in Milan, Italy.
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Original:  The first prominent and explicit use of the term urban informatics in the sociology and media studies literature appears in the 2007 special issue "Urban Informatics: Software, Cities and the New Cartographies of Knowing Capitalism" published in the journal Information, Communication & Society, 10(6), guest edited by Ellison, Burrows, & Parker.
Revised:  The first prominent and explicit use of the term "urban informatics" in the sociology and media studies literature appears in the 2007 special issue "Urban Informatics: Software, Cities and the New Cartographies of Knowing Capitalism" published in the journal Information, Communication & Society, 10(6), guest edited by Ellison, Burrows, & Parker.
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Original:  Examples include the Digital Cities workshop series (see below), Greenfield ’ s 2006 book " Everyware: The Dawning Age of Ubiquitous Computing " as well as the 2006 special issue "Urban Computing: Navigating Space and Context" published in the IEEE journal Computer, 39(9), guest edited by Shklovski & Chang, and the 2007 special issue "Urban Computing" published in the IEEE journal Pervasive Computing, 6(3), guest edited by Kindberg, Chalmers, & Paulos.
Revised:  Examples include the Digital Cities workshop series (see below), Greenfield ' s 2006 book " Everyware: The Dawning Age of Ubiquitous Computing " as well as the 2006 special issue "Urban Computing: Navigating Space and Context" published in the IEEE journal Computer, 39(9), guest edited by Shklovski & Chang, and the 2007 special issue "Urban Computing" published in the IEEE journal Pervasive Computing, 6(3), guest edited by Kindberg, Chalmers, & Paulos.
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