wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  A transit village is a predominantly residential development with some nearby retail activities planned around a transportation hub, such as a train station, with the intent to make it convenient for village dwellers to get to/from work or run errands and travel via a public transportation network . Often a civic square of public space abuts the train station, functioning as the hub or centerpiece of the surrounding community and encouraging social interaction.
Revised:  A transit village is a pedestrian-friendly mixed-use development oriented around the station of a high-quality transit system, including rail and B.R.T . Often a civic square of public space abuts the train station, functioning as the hub or centerpiece of the surrounding community and encouraging social interaction.
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Original: upright=1.2|A recreation room arranged as a children's play area in a Chicago home A recreation room (also known as a rec room, rumpus room, play room, playroom, or ruckus room) is a room used for a variety of purposes, such as parties, games and other everyday or casual use .
Revised: upright=1.2|A recreation room arranged as a children's play area in a Chicago home A recreation room (also known as a rec room, rumpus room, play room, playroom, or ruckus room) is a room used for a variety of purposes, such as parties, games and other everyday or casual activities .
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Original: The Education of Shelby Knox is 2005 documentary film that tells the coming-of-age story of public speaker and feminist Shelby Knox, , Shelby Knox's website a teenager who joins a campaign for comprehensive sex education in the high schools of Lubbock, Texas.
Revised: The Education of Shelby Knox is 2005 documentary film that tells the coming-of-age story of public speaker and feminist Shelby Knox, a teenager who joins a campaign for comprehensive sex education in the high schools of Lubbock, Texas.
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Original: Category:2005 films Category:2000s documentary films Category:American documentary films Category:American films Category:Documentary films about education in the United States Category:Documentary films about sexuality Category:Education in Texas Category:Films set in Texas Category:Films shot in Texas Category: POV (TV series) films Category: Sex education Category:Sexuality and society Category:Documentary films about feminism Category:Films about activist
Revised: Category:2005 films Category:2000s documentary films Category:American documentary films Category:American films Category:Documentary films about education in the United States Category:Documentary films about sexuality Category:Education in Texas Category:Films set in Texas Category:Films shot in Texas Category: Sex education Category:Sexuality and society Category:Documentary films about feminism Category:Films about activist
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Original:  Many lobbying groups have been set up to advocate for research into this alleged hazard. The groups include the Aviation Organophosphate Information Site (AOPIS) (2001), the Global Cabin Air Quality Executive (2006) and the UK-based Aerotoxic Association (2007).
Revised:  Many lobbying groups have been set up to advocate for research into this hazard, including the Aviation Organophosphate Information Site (AOPIS) (2001), the Global Cabin Air Quality Executive (2006) and the UK-based Aerotoxic Association (2007).
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Original:  While no scientific evidence to date has found that airliner cabin air has been contaminated to toxic levels (exceeding known safe levels, in ppm, of any dangerous chemical), a court in Australia in March 2010 , found in favor of a former airline flight attendant who claimed she suffered chronic respiratory problems after being exposed to oil fumes on a trip in March 1992.
Revised:  While no scientific evidence to date has found that airliner cabin air has been contaminated to toxic levels (exceeding known safe levels, in ppm, of any dangerous chemical), a court in Australia in March 2010 found in favor of a former airline flight attendant who claimed she suffered chronic respiratory problems after being exposed to oil fumes on a trip in March 1992.
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Original: Turner v Eastwest Airlines Limited (2009) at Dust Diseases Tribunal of New South Wales  
Revised: Turner v Eastwest Airlines Limited (2009) at Dust Diseases Tribunal of New South Wales Such testing is infrequent due to Boeing's refusal to install air quality sensors in its planes, fearing lawsuits from crew or passengers over fume events, and airlines refused to allow flight attendents to carry air samplers after Congress mandated chemical measurements. 
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Original: Turner v Eastwest Airlines Limited (2009) at Dust Diseases Tribunal of New South Wales  
Revised: Turner v Eastwest Airlines Limited (2009) at Dust Diseases Tribunal of New South Wales The FAA has revoked the medical certificates of several pilots who developed neurological issues after fume events. A judge who awarded workers' compensation to a pilot who had suffered toxic encephalopathy (brain damage) from a fume event condemned the airline industry's obstructionism around fume events.
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Original:  Peplau  's theory is of high relevance to the nurse-client relationship, with one of its major aspects being that both the nurse and the client become more knowledgeable and mature over the course of their relationship.
Revised:  Peplau Peplau 's theory is of high relevance to the nurse-client relationship, with one of its major aspects being that both the nurse and the client become more knowledgeable and mature over the course of their relationship.
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Original:  Fakhr-Movahedi, A., Rahnavard, Z., Salsali, M., Negarandeh, R. (2016). Exploring nurse's communicative role in nurse-patient relationships: A qualitative study. Journal of Caring Sciences 5(4), 267-276. URL 10.15171/jcs.2016.028 Improved communication with patients increases the nurses ability to do their job effectively, which in turn increases job satisfaction.
Revised:  Fakhr-Movahedi, A., Rahnavard, Z., Salsali, M., Improved communication with patients increases the nurses ability to do their job effectively, which in turn increases job satisfaction.
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Original:    It is a cycle where therapeutic communication leads to a positive relationship that increases both patient and nurse satisfaction that improves the nurses ability to continue therapeutic behaviours.
Revised:  Fakhr-Movahedi, A., Rahnavard, Z., Salsali, M., It is a cycle where therapeutic communication leads to a positive relationship that increases both patient and nurse satisfaction that improves the nurses ability to continue therapeutic behaviours.
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Original:    It is a cycle where therapeutic communication leads to a positive relationship that increases both patient and nurse satisfaction that improves the nurses ability to continue therapeutic behaviours.
Revised:  Negarandeh, R. (2016). Exploring nurse's communicative role in nurse-patient relationships: A qualitative study. Journal of Caring Sciences 5(4), 267-276. URL 10.15171/jcs.2016.028 It is a cycle where therapeutic communication leads to a positive relationship that increases both patient and nurse satisfaction that improves the nurses ability to continue therapeutic behaviours.
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Original:  However, Ward and Brownlee argue that planets, planetary systems, and galactic regions that are as friendly to complex life as the Earth, the Solar System, and our  galactic region are  rare.
Revised:  However, Ward and Brownlee argue that planets, planetary systems, and galactic regions that are as friendly to complex life as the Earth, the Solar System, and our galactic region are not typical at all, but actually exceedingly rare.
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone ; a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character (i.e. a circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone ); a terrestrial planet of the right mass; the advantage of one or more gas giant guardians like Jupiter and a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and possibly a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and a large natural satellite to shield the planet from frequent impact events; conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics ; the apparently unique chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and  a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans , the role of "evolutionary pumps"
Revised:  such as a galactic habitable zone , a central star and planetary system having the requisite character , the circumstellar habitable zone , a right-sized terrestrial planet , the advantage of a gas giant guardian like Jupiter and a large natural satellite , conditions needed to ensure the planet has a magnetosphere and plate tectonics , the chemistry of the lithosphere, atmosphere, and oceans ; the influence of "evolutionary pumps"
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Original:  such as massive glaciation and rare Bolide impacts, and whatever led to the appearance of the eukaryote cell , sexual reproduction  and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
Revised:  such as massive glaciations and occasional bolide impacts; and whatever factors may have led to the appearance of the eukaryote cell , sexual reproduction and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
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Original:  such as massive glaciation and rare Bolide impacts, and whatever led to the appearance of the eukaryote cell , sexual reproduction  and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
Revised:  such as massive glaciation and rare Bolide impacts, and whatever led to the emergence of eukaryotic cells , sexual reproduction and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
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Original:  such as massive glaciation and rare Bolide impacts, and whatever led to the appearance of the eukaryote cell , sexual reproduction  and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
Revised:  such as massive glaciation and rare Bolide impacts, and whatever led to the appearance of the eukaryote cell , sexual reproduction , and the Cambrian explosion of animal, plant, and fungi phyla.
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Original:  The evolution of human  intelligence may have required yet further events, which are extremely unlikely to have happened were it not for the Cretaceous–Paleogene extinction event 66 million years ago removing dinosaurs as the dominant terrestrial vertebrates.
Revised:  The evolution of human beings and of human intelligence may have required yet further events, which are extremely unlikely to have happened were it not for the Cretaceous–Paleogene extinction event 66 million years ago removing dinosaurs as the dominant terrestrial vertebrates.
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Original:  The evolution of human  intelligence may have required yet further events, which are extremely unlikely to have happened were it not for the Cretaceous–Paleogene extinction event 66 million years ago removing dinosaurs as the dominant terrestrial vertebrates.
Revised:  The evolution of human intelligence may have required yet further specific events and circumstances, all of which are extremely unlikely to have happened were it not for the Cretaceous–Paleogene extinction event 66 million years ago removing dinosaurs as the dominant terrestrial vertebrates.
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Original:  The universe is so vast that it could contain many Earth-like planets . But if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species evolving on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
Revised:  The universe is so vast that it could contain many Earth-like planets , but if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species evolving on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
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Original:  But if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species evolving on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
Revised:  But if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light-years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species evolving on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
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Original:  But if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species evolving on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
Revised:  But if such planets exist, they are likely to be separated from each other by many thousands of light years . Such distances may preclude communication among any intelligent species that may evolve on such planets, which would solve the Fermi paradox: "If extraterrestrial aliens are common, why aren't they obvious?"
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Original:  The terrestrial example suggests that complex life requires liquid water, requiring an orbital distance neither too close nor too far from the central star, another scale of habitable zone or Goldilocks Principle : The habitable zone varies with the star's type and age.
Revised:  The terrestrial example suggests that complex life requires liquid water, the maintenance of which requires an orbital distance neither too close nor too far from the central star, another scale of habitable zone or Goldilocks Principle : The habitable zone varies with the star's type and age.
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Original:  The terrestrial example suggests that complex life requires liquid water, requiring an orbital distance neither too close nor too far from the central star, another scale of habitable zone or Goldilocks Principle : The habitable zone varies with the star's type and age.
Revised:  The terrestrial example suggests that complex life requires liquid water, requiring an orbital distance neither too close nor too far from the central star, another scale of habitable zone or Goldilocks Principle . The habitable zone varies with the star's type and age.
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Original: University of Nebraska-Lincoln astronomy education group, Stellar Luminosity CalculatorNational Center for Atmospheric Research, The Effects of Solar Variability on Earth's Climate, 2012 ReportMost of Earth’s twins aren’t identical, or even close!, by Ethan on 5 June 2013 The habitable zone for a main sequence star very gradually moves out over its lifespan until it becomes a white dwarf and the habitable zone vanishes.
Revised: University of Nebraska-Lincoln astronomy education group, Stellar Luminosity CalculatorNational Center for Atmospheric Research, The Effects of Solar Variability on Earth's Climate, 2012 ReportMost of Earth’s twins aren’t identical, or even close!, by Ethan on 5 June 2013 The habitable zone for a main sequence star very gradually moves out over its lifespan until the star becomes a white dwarf and the habitable zone vanishes.
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Original:  Even though the Earth's atmosphere contains a water vapor concentration from 0\% (in arid regions) to 4\% (in rain forest and ocean regions) and – as of February 2018 – only 408.05 parts per million of , these small amounts suffice to raise the average surface temperature by about 40 °C, with the dominant contribution being due to water vapor.
Revised:  Even though the Earth's atmosphere contains a water vapor concentration from 0\% (in arid regions) to 4\% (in rainforest and ocean regions) and – as of February 2018 – only 408.05 parts per million of , these small amounts suffice to raise the average surface temperature by about 40 °C, with the dominant contribution being due to water vapor.
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Original:  The two giant planets then drifted out again to their present position. However, in the view of Batygin and his colleagues: "The concatenation of chance events required for this delicate choreography suggest that small, Earth-like rocky planets – and perhaps life itself – could be rare throughout the cosmos.
Revised:  The two giant planets then drifted out again to their present positions. In the view of Batygin and his colleagues: "The concatenation of chance events required for this delicate choreography suggest that small, Earth-like rocky planets – and perhaps life itself – could be rare throughout the cosmos.
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Original: "Once you realize that most of the known extrasolar planets have highly eccentric orbits (like the planets in Upsilon Andromedae), you begin to wonder if there might be something special about our solar system" (UCBerkeleyNews quoting Extra solar planetary researcher Eric Ford.)
Revised: "Once you realize that most of the known extrasolar planets have highly eccentric orbits (like the planets in Upsilon Andromedae), you begin to wonder if there might be something special about our solar system" (UCBerkeleyNews quoting extrasolar planetary researcher Eric Ford.)
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Original:  Rare Earth argues that complex life cannot exist on large gaseous planets like Jupiter and Saturn (top row) or Uranus and Neptune (top middle) or smaller planets such as Mars and Mercury It is argued that life requires terrestrial planets like Earth and as gas giants lack such a surface, that complex life cannot arise there.
Revised:  Rare Earth argues that complex life cannot exist on large gaseous planets like Jupiter and Saturn (top row) or Uranus and Neptune (top middle) or smaller planets such as Mars and Mercury . The Rare Earth hypothesis argues that life requires terrestrial planets like Earth and as gas giants lack such a surface, that complex life cannot arise there.
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