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Original: Reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK).
Revised: Reports by the (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK).
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Original: Reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK).
Revised: Reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK).
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Original: Reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms Roche and GlaxoSmithKline (GSK).
Revised: Reports by the British Medical Journal (BMJ), the Bureau of Investigative Journalism (BIJ) and the Council of Europe claim that The World Health Organisation reaction to H1N1 was influenced by pharmaceutical companies and that key scientists behind advice had financial ties with firms and (GSK).
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Original:  Margaret Chan , the organisation's director, had dismissed inquiries into its handling of the A/H1N1 pandemic as "conspiracy theories" earlier this year, she had said: "WHO anticipated close scrutiny of its decisions, but we did not anticipate that we would be accused, by some European politicians, of having declared a fake pandemic on the advice of experts with ties to the pharmaceutical industry and something personal to gain from increased industry profits."
Revised:  , the organisation's director, had dismissed inquiries into its handling of the A/H1N1 pandemic as "conspiracy theories" earlier this year, she had said: "WHO anticipated close scrutiny of its decisions, but we did not anticipate that we would be accused, by some European politicians, of having declared a fake pandemic on the advice of experts with ties to the pharmaceutical industry and something personal to gain from increased industry profits."
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Original: People participating in World Environment Day 2008 Under the theme 'Many Species. One Planet. One Future', Rwanda hosted World Environment Day (WED) ceremony in the Volcanoes National Park , the event will celebrate diversity of life on Earth as part of the 2010 International Year of Biodiversity.
Revised: People participating in World Environment Day 2008 Rwanda hosted the World Environment Day (WED) ceremony in the Volcanoes National Park , the event will celebrate diversity of life on Earth as part of the 2010 International Year of Biodiversity.
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Original:  According to BDNews24.com, Mir Masud Kabir, the Mango Telecom Services managing director, had received a phone call from Major General Zia Ahmed at 11:57 p.m. (17:57 UTC), asking him to lift the Facebook block.
Revised:  According to BDNews24.com, Mir Masud Kabir, the Mango Telecom Services managing director, had received a phone call from at 11:57 p.m. (17:57 UTC), asking him to lift the Facebook block.
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Original: An acrobatic group known by the name of Spelbound has been declared as the winner of Britain's Got Talent 2010 , a televised variety talent show competition broadcast on ITV in the United Kingdom.
Revised: An acrobatic group known by the name of has been declared as the winner of Britain's Got Talent 2010 , a televised variety talent show competition broadcast on ITV in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
Revised:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
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Original:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
Revised:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
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Original:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
Revised:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
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Original:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the British Royal Family .
Revised:  As the winning act of the show, Spelbound have won £ 100,000 (US $144,580, €120,313, A$ 175,079) and a place at The Royal Variety Performance , an annual gala evening that is attended by senior members of the .
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Original:  After Kieran Gaffney was revealed to be in third place, Anthony McPartlin , who hosts Britain's Got Talent with Declan Donnelly , said to Kieran: "Well done Kieran.
Revised:  After Kieran Gaffney was revealed to be in third place, , who hosts Britain's Got Talent with Declan Donnelly , said to Kieran: "Well done Kieran.
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Original:  Slovenia is situated between Italy and Croatia, where the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea . A panel of five international experts will define the new land and maritime borders and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it views as its own.
Revised:  Slovenia is situated between Italy and Croatia, where the dispute involves land on the peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea . A panel of five international experts will define the new land and maritime borders and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it views as its own.
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Original:  Slovenia is situated between Italy and Croatia, where the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small Bay of Piran in the Adriatic Sea . A panel of five international experts will define the new land and maritime borders and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it views as its own.
Revised:  Slovenia is situated between Italy and Croatia, where the dispute involves land on the Istrian peninsula in the northern Adriatic and the small in the . A panel of five international experts will define the new land and maritime borders and could force Croatia to cede some of the sea it views as its own.
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Original:  "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot [...] and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of North Yorkshire Police . "Despite efforts from members of the public and some quite sterling efforts from the emergency services and everyone else there, sadly we've been unable to bring him out alive."
Revised:  "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot [...] and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of . "Despite efforts from members of the public and some quite sterling efforts from the emergency services and everyone else there, sadly we've been unable to bring him out alive."
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Original: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
Revised: Satellite image, April 25 According to 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
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Original: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
Revised: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
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Original: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
Revised: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
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Original: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the Gulf of Mexico by a containment cap.
Revised: Satellite image, April 25 According to BP 's chief executive Tony Hayward the equivalent to 10,000 barrels of oil is being captured each day in the by a containment cap.
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Original:  Courchesne collapsed while walking in the , at around 10: 35a .m. . In 2012 Connecticut abolished the death penalty  but those already on death row remained sentenced to die.
Revised:  Courchesne collapsed while walking in the , at around 10: 35 a .m. . In 2012 Connecticut abolished the death penalty but those already on death row remained sentenced to die.
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Original:  Courchesne collapsed while walking in the , at around 10: 35a .m. . In 2012 Connecticut abolished the death penalty  but those already on death row remained sentenced to die.
Revised:  Courchesne collapsed while walking in the , at around 10: 35a .m. . In 2012 Connecticut abolished the death penalty in 2012, but those already on death row remained sentenced to die.
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Original: Helen Thomas at the White House , September 30, 1976 (age 56) Veteran White House journalist Helen Thomas , 89, announced her retirement yesterday with immediate effect, ending her fifty-seven year career, amid criticism over controversial remarks.
Revised: at the , September 30, 1976 (age 56) Veteran White House journalist Helen Thomas , 89, announced her retirement yesterday with immediate effect, ending her fifty-seven year career, amid criticism over controversial remarks.
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Original: Helen Thomas at the White House , September 30, 1976 (age 56) Veteran White House journalist Helen Thomas , 89, announced her retirement yesterday with immediate effect, ending her fifty-seven year career, amid criticism over controversial remarks.
Revised: Helen Thomas at the White House , September 30, 1976 (age 56) Veteran White House journalist , 89, announced her retirement yesterday with immediate effect, ending her fifty-seven year career, amid criticism over controversial remarks.
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Original:  She was the first female officer of the National Press Club , the first female member and president of the White House Correspondents Association , and, in 1975, the first female member of the Gridiron Club .
Revised:  She was the first female officer of the , the first female member and president of the White House Correspondents Association , and, in 1975, the first female member of the Gridiron Club .
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Original:  James states that there is evidence that nursery care is "highly stressful and can be harmful", since levels of the hormone cortisol double after one hour in day care, and raised levels can be detected for some months afterwards.
Revised:  James states that there is evidence that nursery care is "highly stressful and can be harmful", since levels of the hormone double after one hour in day care, and raised levels can be detected for some months afterwards.
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Original:  Last week, when their ultimatum was ignored, CWU deputy secretary general (DSG) Andy Kerr expressed deep disappointment, citing the substantial profits made by the company in the last financial year: "[w]e're obviously very disappointed that BT has not improved its pay offer of 2\% despite their healthy profits this year." Logo of the United Kingdom's CWU .
Revised:  Last week, when their ultimatum was ignored, CWU deputy secretary general (DSG) Andy Kerr expressed deep disappointment, citing the substantial profits made by the company in the last financial year: "[w]e're obviously very disappointed that BT has not improved its pay offer of 2\% despite their healthy profits this year." Logo of the United Kingdom's .
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Original:  Reports of senior directors receiving million-pound bonuses, and former Labour minister Patricia Hewitt landing over over £50,000 extra per-year, are characterised as "directors' 'snouts in the trough'".
Revised:  Reports of senior directors receiving million-pound bonuses, and former minister landing over over £50,000 extra per-year, are characterised as "directors' 'snouts in the trough'".
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Original:  The structure of BT's privatisation, and breakup to permit level playing-field telephony and broadband competition, would see other Internet service providers who rely on the ageing, once GPO-owned, copper POTS infrastructure unable to resolve customer faults.
Revised:  The structure of BT's privatisation, and breakup to permit level playing-field telephony and broadband competition, would see other who rely on the ageing, once GPO-owned, copper POTS infrastructure unable to resolve customer faults.
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Original:  The structure of BT's privatisation, and breakup to permit level playing-field telephony and broadband competition, would see other Internet service providers who rely on the ageing, once GPO-owned, copper POTS infrastructure unable to resolve customer faults.
Revised:  The structure of BT's privatisation, and breakup to permit level playing-field telephony and broadband competition, would see other Internet service providers who rely on the ageing, once -owned, copper infrastructure unable to resolve customer faults.
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Original:  The babies' mother, Pauline Koupparis, spoke of her shock to hear and see the foxes in her house to local BBC radio station London 94.9: "It's something I would never have expected to happen — let alone to us and my beautiful girls.
Revised:  The babies' mother, Pauline Koupparis, spoke of her shock to hear and see the foxes in her house to local radio station London 94.9: "It's something I would never have expected to happen — let alone to us and my beautiful girls.
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Original:  Mounir el-Motassadeq, a Moroccan who was a friend of several 9/11 hijackers, has been sentenced to seven years in prison for membership in a terrorist organisation by a court in Hamburg.
Revised: Location of Hamburg in Germany Mounir el-Motassadeq, a Moroccan who was a friend of several 9/11 hijackers, has been sentenced to seven years in prison for membership in a terrorist organisation by a court in Hamburg.
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Original:  Location of Hamburg in Germany Presiding judge Ernst-Rainer Schudt said that Motassadeq has played an important role in running the financial affairs of other cell members and covered their absence while they were in terror training camps.
Revised:  Presiding judge Ernst-Rainer Schudt said that Motassadeq has played an important role in running the financial affairs of other cell members and covered their absence while they were in terror training camps.
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Original: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike The man arrested has been identified by Wired magazine as an enlisted soldier, Bradley Manning of the United States Army's 2nd Brigade, 10th Mountain Division.
Revised: |alt=Military helicopter video footage of civilian humans and vehicle being destroyed by airstrike The man arrested has been identified by as an soldier, Bradley Manning of the United States Army's 2nd Brigade, 10th Mountain Division.
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Original:  Reuters had unsuccessfully requested the footage under the Freedom of Information Act in 2007, as two of its news staff, Saeed Chmagh and Namir Noor-Eldeen , had died in the attack.
Revised:  had unsuccessfully requested the footage under the Freedom of Information Act in 2007, as two of its news staff, Saeed Chmagh and Namir Noor-Eldeen , had died in the attack.
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Original:  Reuters had unsuccessfully requested the footage under the Freedom of Information Act in 2007, as two of its news staff, Saeed Chmagh and Namir Noor-Eldeen , had died in the attack.
Revised:  Reuters had unsuccessfully requested the footage under the in 2007, as two of its news staff, Saeed Chmagh and Namir Noor-Eldeen , had died in the attack.
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Original:  In addition to the video of the Baghdad attack, Manning is suspected of having leaked other classified information, including footage of the Granai attack and a classified Army document evaluating Wikileaks as a security threat, which the site posted in March.
Revised:  In addition to the video of the Baghdad attack, Manning is suspected of having leaked other classified information, including footage of the and a classified Army document evaluating Wikileaks as a security threat, which the site posted in March.
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Original:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters.
Revised:  She also passed by (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters.
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Original:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters.
Revised:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters.
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Original:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters.
Revised:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz , a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both and have headquarters.
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Original: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex ,  England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
Revised:  , England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
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Original: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex ,  England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
Revised: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex , in , England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
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Original: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex ,  England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
Revised: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex , England, United Kingdom, has been fined 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings.
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Original: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex ,  England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C$75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings. Basildon Crown Court also ordered the trust to pay costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486).
Revised: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex , England, United Kingdom, has been fined £ 50,000 (US $71,952, €60,326, 87,614, 75,660) after a severely disabled patient at Basildon University Hospital died because of serious health and safety failings. Basildon Crown Court also ordered the trust to pay costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486).
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Original: A view of North Korea from Dandong, showing the Friendship Bridge in the foreground The government of China has made a rare public protest over allegations that the North Korean border patrol shot three Chinese nationals dead and injured a fourth near the Chinese town of Dandong last week.
Revised: A view of North Korea from Dandong, showing the Friendship Bridge in the foreground The government of China has made a rare public protest over allegations that the North Korean border patrol shot three Chinese nationals dead and injured a fourth near the Chinese town of last week.
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Original:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area . Pinellas County Courthouse, in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
Revised:  reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area . Pinellas County Courthouse, in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
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Original:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area . Pinellas County Courthouse, in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
Revised:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the . Pinellas County Courthouse, in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
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