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Original:  He along with his elder brother Ustad Nasir Moinuddin Dagar was responsible in reviving the dhrupad tradition that had fallen to a nadir after the death of their father Ustad Nasiruddin Khan Dagar.
Revised:  He along with his elder brother Ustad Nasir Moinuddin Dagar revived the dhrupad tradition that had fallen to a nadir after the death of their father Ustad Nasiruddin Khan Dagar.
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Original:  He along with his elder brother Ustad Nasir Moinuddin Dagar was responsible in reviving the dhrupad tradition that had fallen to a nadir after the death of their father Ustad Nasiruddin Khan Dagar.
Revised:  He along with his elder brother Ustad Nasir Moinuddin Dagar was responsible in reviving the dhrupad tradition that had fallen off after the death of their father Ustad Nasiruddin Khan Dagar.
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Original:  Ustad Nasiruddin Khan had an early premonition of his own death and spend ten years training his two elder sons Moinuddin and Aminuddin so as to impart all his musical knowledge to them. Subsequently, after Ustad Nasiruddin Khan's demise the two brothers trained under Ustad Riyazuddin Khan and Ustad Ziauddin Khan Dagar.
Revised:  Ustad Nasiruddin Khan had an early premonition of his own death and spend ten years training his two elder sons Moinuddin and Aminuddin so as to impart all his musical knowledge to his two elder sons. After Ustad Nasiruddin Khan's demise the two brothers trained under Ustad Riyazuddin Khan and Ustad Ziauddin Khan Dagar.
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Original: Senior Dagar Brothers Young Aminuddin gave his first performance at the age of eleven. It was however the 1940s that saw the meteoric rise of Moinuddin and Aminuddin  as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
Revised: Senior Dagar Brothers Young Aminuddin gave his first performance at the age of 11. In the 1940s that saw the meteoric rise of Moinuddin and Aminuddin as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
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Original:  It was however the 1940s that saw the meteoric rise of Moinuddin and Aminuddin  as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
Revised:  It was however the 1940s Moinuddin and Aminuddin as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
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Original:  It was however the 1940s that saw the meteoric rise of Moinuddin and Aminuddin  as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
Revised:  It was however the 1940s that saw the meteoric rise of Moinuddin and Aminuddin had a meteoric rise as the Senior Dagar Brothers—two of the brightest stars in the Dhrupad firmament.
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Original:  In a typical performance by the Senior Dagar Brothers, the honey rich voice of Aminuddinwill draw the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin would dazzle the listeners with his alankars or ornamentations in the upper octave.
Revised:  In a typical performance , Aminuddin's voice draws the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin would dazzle the listeners with his alankars or ornamentations in the upper octave.
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Original:  In a typical performance by the Senior Dagar Brothers, the honey rich voice of Aminuddinwill draw the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin would dazzle the listeners with his alankars or ornamentations in the upper octave.
Revised:  In a typical performance by the Senior Dagar Brothers, the honey rich voice of Aminuddinwill draw the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin dazzles listeners with his alankars or ornamentations in the upper octave.
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Original:  In a typical performance by the Senior Dagar Brothers, the honey rich voice of Aminuddinwill draw the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin would dazzle the listeners with his alankars or ornamentations in the upper octave.
Revised:  In a typical performance by the Senior Dagar Brothers, the honey rich voice of Aminuddinwill draw the audience into a deep meditative mood by gradually descending the notes of the lower octaves and Moinuddin would dazzle the listeners with his alankars , ornamentations in the upper octave.
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Original:  Their music was so charming that Alain Danielou, the renowned musicologist and adviser to UNESCO's International Music Council, invited them to tour Europe and perform under the UNESCO banner in Berlin Venice and Paris.
Revised:  Their music was so charming that Alain Danielou, the renowned musicologist and adviser to UNESCO's International Music Council, invited them to tour Europe and perform under the UNESCO banner in Berlin , Venice, and Paris.
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Original:  A review of their performance published in Le Monde of Paris dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " ... we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
Revised:  A review of their performance in Le Monde of Paris dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " ... we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
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Original:  A review of their performance published in Le Monde of Paris dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " ... we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
Revised:  A review of their performance published in Le Monde dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " ... we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
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Original:  A review of their performance published in Le Monde of Paris dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " ... we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
Revised:  A review of their performance published in Le Monde of Paris dated 17 November 1964 perhaps best expresses the mood of the western audience: " we will remain under the deep impression of an art of such greatness and intensity that...we feel touched and moved to the deepest of our being."
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Original: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923  - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000  ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style  .
Revised: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( b 20 October 1923 - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000 ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style .
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Original: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923  - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000  ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style  .
Revised: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923 at Indore, India - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000 ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style .
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Original: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923  - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000  ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style  .
Revised: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923 - d 28 December 2000 ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style .
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Original: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923  - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000  ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style  .
Revised: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923 - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000 Kolkata, India ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style .
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Original: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923  - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000  ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style  .
Revised: Ustad Nasir Aminuddin Dagar ( Indore, India 20 October 1923 - Kolkata, India 28 December 2000 ) was an Indian dhrupad singer in the dagar-vani style , the second-eldest among four Dhrupad singing brothers .
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Original:  Although adolescents are more risk-seeking , and emerging adults have higher suicide rates, they are largely less volatile and have much better relationships with their parents than this model would suggest Early adolescence often marks a decline in parent-child relationship quality, which then re-stabilizes through adolescence, and relationships are sometimes better in late adolescence than prior to its onset.
Revised:  Although adolescents are more risk-seeking and emerging adults have higher suicide rates, they are largely less volatile and have much better relationships with their parents than this model would suggest Early adolescence often marks a decline in parent-child relationship quality, which then re-stabilizes through adolescence, and relationships are sometimes better in late adolescence than prior to its onset.
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Original:  They also recommend some ways to cope with the experience: Purposefully focussing on the positive aspects of the breakup ("factors leading up to the break-up, the actual break-up, and the time right after the break-up") Minimising the negative emotions Journaling the positive aspects of the breakup (e.g. "comfort, confidence, empowerment, energy, happiness, optimism, relief, satisfaction, thankfulness, and wisdom").
Revised:  They also recommend some ways to cope with the experience: Purposefully focusing on the positive aspects of the breakup ("factors leading up to the break-up, the actual break-up, and the time right after the break-up") Minimising the negative emotions Journaling the positive aspects of the breakup (e.g. "comfort, confidence, empowerment, energy, happiness, optimism, relief, satisfaction, thankfulness, and wisdom").
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Original:  They also recommend some ways to cope with the experience: Purposefully focussing on the positive aspects of the breakup ("factors leading up to the break-up, the actual break-up, and the time right after the break-up") Minimising the negative emotions Journaling the positive aspects of the breakup (e.g. "comfort, confidence, empowerment, energy, happiness, optimism, relief, satisfaction, thankfulness, and wisdom").
Revised:  They also recommend some ways to cope with the experience: Purposefully focussing on the positive aspects of the breakup ("factors leading up to the break-up, the actual break-up, and the time right after the break-up") Minimizing the negative emotions Journaling the positive aspects of the breakup (e.g. "comfort, confidence, empowerment, energy, happiness, optimism, relief, satisfaction, thankfulness, and wisdom").
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Original:  This can reduce time wasted in conflict over unimportant decisions, prevents inconsistent decisions from harming the operations of the organization, maintain alignment of a large population of workers with the goals of the owners (which the workers might not personally share) and  if promotion is based on merit, help ensure that the people with the best expertise make important decisions.
Revised:  This can reduce time wasted in conflict over unimportant decisions, prevents inconsistent decisions from harming the operations of the organization, maintain alignment of a large population of workers with the goals of the owners (which the workers might not personally share) and , if promotion is based on merit, help ensure that the people with the best expertise make important decisions.
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Original:  The boscage form was used in English for  leafy decoration such as is found on eighteenth-century porcelain;
Revised:  The boscage form was used in English for "growing trees or shrubs; a thicket, grove; woody undergrowth""boscage | boskage, n.". OED Online. March 2021. Oxford University Press. URL (accessed March 02, 2021) and to refer to decorative design imitating branches and foliage or leafy decoration such as is found on eighteenth-century porcelain;
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Original:  BEA's Comments on Final Report of Armavia flight 967 an A320 crash near Sochi Airport  3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
Revised:  Final Report on the investigation into the accident involving the Armavia A320 crash near Sochi Airport 3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
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Original:  BEA's Comments on Final Report of Armavia flight 967 an A320 crash near Sochi Airport  3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
Revised:  BEA's Comments on Final Report of Armavia flight 967 an A320 near Sochi Airport 3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
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Original:  BEA's Comments on Final Report of Armavia flight 967 an A320 crash near Sochi Airport  3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
Revised:  BEA's Comments on Final Report of Armavia flight 967 an A320 crash near Sochi Airport on 3 May 2006, page 48, Published 12 February 2007
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Original:  They are marked by lack of optimism for the future, nihilism, cynicism, skepticism, political apathy, alienation and distrust in traditional values and institutions  which describe the similarities between Gen X and the Burnt Generation.
Revised:  They are marked by lack of optimism for the future, nihilism, cynicism, skepticism, political apathy, alienation and distrust in traditional values and institutions , which describe the similarities between Gen X and the Burnt Generation.
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Original: Achim (2004), p.29-30 The alternative explanation, proposed by Romanian scholar P. P. Panaitescu, was that following the Crusades, an important East-West trade route passed through the Romanian states and the local feudal lords enslaved the Roma for economic gain for lack of other craftsmen.
Revised: Achim (2004), p.29-30 The alternative explanation, proposed by Romanian scholar P. P. Panaitescu, was that following the Crusades, an important east–west trade route passed through the Romanian states and the local feudal lords enslaved the Roma for economic gain for lack of other craftsmen.
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Original:  Djuvara, p.269-270 1838 Félix Colson 139,255 119,910 1844 Ferdinand Neigebaur - 180,000 1849 Paul Bataillard 250,000 1857 Jean Alexandre Vaillant 137,000 125,000 1857 Jean Henri Abdolonyme Ubicini 100,000 150,000 1859 census (emancipated slaves) 250,000Achim (2010), p.23 References Viorel Achim, The Roma in Romanian History, Central European University Press, Budapest, 2004.
Revised:  Djuvara, p.269-270 1838 Félix Colson 139,255 119,910 1844 Ferdinand Neigebaur – 180,000 1849 Paul Bataillard 250,000 1857 Jean Alexandre Vaillant 137,000 125,000 1857 Jean Henri Abdolonyme Ubicini 100,000 150,000 1859 census (emancipated slaves) 250,000Achim (2010), p.23 References Viorel Achim, The Roma in Romanian History, Central European University Press, Budapest, 2004.
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Original:  Lloyd's building – Situated in the City of London, this building was described as an oil refinery when it was opened in 1986 for having most of its facilities, stairways and AC on the outside.
Revised:  Lloyd's Building – Situated in the City of London, this building was described as an oil refinery when it was opened in 1986 for having most of its facilities, stairways and AC on the outside.
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Original:  University of Maryland School of Medicine Neuroepidmeiology Training Program In addition, the Center for Stroke Research in the Department of Neurology and Rehabilitation at the University of Illinois College of Medicine offers a fellowship in neuroepidemiology.
Revised:  In addition, the Center for Stroke Research in the Department of Neurology and Rehabilitation at the University of Illinois College of Medicine offers a fellowship in neuroepidemiology.
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Original:  Michigan State University International Neurologic Psychiatric Epidemiology Program Neuroepidemiology Fellowship As the field of neuroepidemiology continues to expand, research groups have developed at some of the leading medical research institutes across the United States.
Revised:  Psychiatric Epidemiology Program Neuroepidemiology Fellowship As the field of neuroepidemiology continues to expand, research groups have developed at some of the leading medical research institutes across the United States.
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Original:  Michigan State University International Neurologic Psychiatric Epidemiology Program Neuroepidemiology Fellowship As the field of neuroepidemiology continues to expand, research groups have developed at some of the leading medical research institutes across the United States.
Revised:  Michigan State University International Neurologic As the field of neuroepidemiology continues to expand, research groups have developed at some of the leading medical research institutes across the United States.
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Original: Category:1952 non-fiction books Category:Abstraction Category: Aesthetics Category:Epistemology Category:History of literature Category:History of philosophy Category:Innovation Category:Literary concepts Category:Philosophical concepts Category:Philosophical movements Category:Philosophy of culture Category:Philosophy of literature Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Sociology Category:Sociology of knowledge Category:Tra
Revised: Category:1952 non-fiction books Category:Abstraction Category: Concepts in aesthetics Category:Concepts in epistemology Category:History of literature Category:History of philosophy Category:Innovation Category:Literary concepts Category:Philosophical concepts Category:Philosophical movements Category:Philosophy of culture Category:Philosophy of literature Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Sociology Category:Sociology of knowledge Category:Tra
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Original: Category:1952 non-fiction books Category:Abstraction Category: Aesthetics Category:Epistemology Category:History of literature Category:History of philosophy Category:Innovation Category:Literary concepts Category:Philosophical concepts Category:Philosophical movements Category:Philosophy of culture Category:Philosophy of literature Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Sociology Category:Sociology of knowledge Category:Tra
Revised: Category:1952 non-fiction books Category:Abstraction Category: Aesthetics Category:Epistemology Category:History of literature Category:History of philosophy Category:Innovation Category:Literary concepts Category:Philosophical movements Category:Philosophy of culture Category:Philosophy of literature Category:Philosophy of mind Category:Sociology Category:Sociology of knowledge Category:Tra
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Original: Jimmy Reed 1964 Jimmy Reed at Soul City 1965 The Legend: The Man 1967 The New Jimmy Reed Album 1967 Soulin' 1968 Big Boss Man 1968 Down in Virginia 1971 Found Love 1973 I Ain't from Chicago 1976 Blues Is My Business 1980 I'm Going to Upside Your Head (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1003) 1985 I'm the Man Down There (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1082)
Revised: Jimmy Reed 1964 Jimmy Reed at Soul City 1965 The Legend: The Man 1967 The New Jimmy Reed Album 1967 Soulin' 1968 Big Boss Man 1968 Down in Virginia 1971 Found Love 1973 I Ain't from Chicago 1976 Blues Is My Business 1980 I'm Going to Upside Your Head (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1003) 1985 I'm the Man Down There (compilation, Charly Records CRB URL
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Original:  Reed was posthumously inducted into the Blues Hall of Fame in URL and the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in URL Selected albums Year Album 1958 I'm Jimmy Reed 1959 Rockin' with Reed1960 Found Love Now Appearing 1961 Jimmy Reed at Carnegie Hall 1962 Just Jimmy Reed1963 Jimmy Reed Plays 12 String Guitar Blues Jimmy Reed Sings the Best of the Blues T'Ain't No Big Thing but He Is...
Revised:  Reed was posthumously inducted into the Blues Hall of Fame in 1980, and the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in URL Selected albums Year Album 1958 I'm Jimmy Reed 1959 Rockin' with Reed1960 Found Love Now Appearing 1961 Jimmy Reed at Carnegie Hall 1962 Just Jimmy Reed1963 Jimmy Reed Plays 12 String Guitar Blues Jimmy Reed Sings the Best of the Blues T'Ain't No Big Thing but He Is...
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Original:  Reed was posthumously inducted into the Blues Hall of Fame in URL and the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in URL Selected albums Year Album 1958 I'm Jimmy Reed 1959 Rockin' with Reed1960 Found Love Now Appearing 1961 Jimmy Reed at Carnegie Hall 1962 Just Jimmy Reed1963 Jimmy Reed Plays 12 String Guitar Blues Jimmy Reed Sings the Best of the Blues T'Ain't No Big Thing but He Is...
Revised:  Reed was posthumously inducted into the Blues Hall of Fame in URL and the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in 1991. Selected albums Year Album 1958 I'm Jimmy Reed 1959 Rockin' with Reed1960 Found Love Now Appearing 1961 Jimmy Reed at Carnegie Hall 1962 Just Jimmy Reed1963 Jimmy Reed Plays 12 String Guitar Blues Jimmy Reed Sings the Best of the Blues T'Ain't No Big Thing but He Is...
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Original: Jimmy Reed 1964 Jimmy Reed at Soul City 1965 The Legend: The Man 1967 The New Jimmy Reed Album 1967 Soulin' 1968 Big Boss Man 1968 Down in Virginia 1971 Found Love 1973 I Ain't from Chicago 1976 Blues Is My Business 1980 I'm Going to Upside Your Head (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1003) 1985 I'm the Man Down There (compilation, Charly Records CRB URL
Revised: Jimmy Reed 1964 Jimmy Reed at Soul City 1965 The Legend: The Man 1967 The New Jimmy Reed Album 1967 Soulin' 1968 Big Boss Man 1968 Down in Virginia 1971 Found Love 1973 I Ain't from Chicago 1976 Blues Is My Business 1980 I'm Going to Upside Your Head (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1003) 1985 I'm the Man Down There (compilation, Charly Records CRB 1082)
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Original:  Gland, Switzerland: IUCN. 580pp. Individual chapters / sections within this report should be referenced as: Author(s). (2019). Title of chapter / section. In ‘Laffoley, D. Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019).
Revised:  Gland, Switzerland: IUCN. Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019).
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Original:  Laffoley, D. and Baxter, J. M. (eds.) (2019) Ocean deoxygenation : everyone’s problem, IUCN Report. Ocean deoxygenation poses implications for ocean productivity, nutrient cycling, carbon cycling, and marine habitats.
Revised:  Ocean deoxygenation poses implications for ocean productivity, nutrient cycling, carbon cycling, and marine habitats.
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Original:  Laffoley, D. Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019). Ocean deoxygenation: Everyone’s problem - Causes, impacts, consequences and solutions. Full report. Gland, Switzerland: IUCN. 580pp. Individual chapters / sections within this report should be referenced as: Author(s). (2019). Title of chapter / section. In ‘Laffoley, D.%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019).
Revised:  Laffoley, D. %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019).
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Original:  In ‘Laffoley, D.%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Baxter, J.M. (eds.) (2019). Ocean deoxygenation: Everyone’s problem - Causes, impacts, consequences and solutions. Gland, Switzerland: IUCN. xxii+562pp.
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