wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  This is measured by passing seawater through a very fine filter to remove particulate matter , historically, this was measured using a glass fibre filter with a nominal pore size of 0.45 , but more recently, smaller and smaller pores have been used.
Revised:  This is measured by passing seawater through a very fine filter to remove particulate matter . Historically, this was measured using a glass fibre filter with a nominal pore size of 0.45 , but more recently, smaller and smaller pores have been used.
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Original:  This is measured by passing seawater through a very fine filter to remove particulate matter , historically, this was measured using a glass fibre filter with a nominal pore size of 0.45 , but more recently, smaller and smaller pores have been used.
Revised:  This is measured by passing seawater through a very fine filter to remove particulate matter , historically, this was measured using a glass fibre filter with a nominal pore size of 0.45 . More recently, though, smaller and smaller pores have been used.
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Original:   400px|A schematic showing the causes of the GSA of the 1970s  The Great Salinity Anomalies observed could have different driving causes.
Revised:  The electrical conductivity of a water sample is influenced by the concentration and composition of dissolved salts, as salts increase the ability of a solution to conduct an electrical current. 400px|A schematic showing the causes of the GSA of the 1970s The Great Salinity Anomalies observed could have different driving causes.
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Original:   400px|A schematic showing the causes of the GSA of the 1970s  The Great Salinity Anomalies observed could have different driving causes.
Revised:  400px|A schematic showing the causes of the GSA of the 1970s . The thinner line indicates a weaker cause than a thicker line. The Great Salinity Anomalies observed could have different driving causes.
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Original:  For the anomaly in the late 1960's and early 1970's , the main cause of the anomaly was by a freshwater and sea ice pulse which came from the Arctic Ocean via the Fram Strait.
Revised:  For the anomaly in the late 1960s and early 1970s , the main cause of the anomaly was by a freshwater and sea ice pulse which came from the Arctic Ocean via the Fram Strait.
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Original:  However, local conditions  are also important for the preservation of a GSA, in order to stop the anomaly being mixed out and allowing it to propagate as the GSA of the 1970's did.
Revised:  However, local conditions such as cold weather are also important for the preservation of a GSA, in order to stop the anomaly being mixed out and allowing it to propagate as the GSA of the 1970's did.
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Original:  However, local conditions  are also important for the preservation of a GSA, in order to stop the anomaly being mixed out and allowing it to propagate as the GSA of the 1970's did.
Revised:  However, local conditions are also important for the preservation of a GSA, in order to stop the anomaly being mixed out and allowing it to propagate as the GSA of the 1970s did.
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Original:    Recent Anomalies From the years of 2012-2016, the largest and most rapid change in salinity since the GSA has been observed.
Revised:  Recent studies (2017) suggest a potential subpolar North Atlantic (SPG) convection collapse, resulting in rapid North Atlantic cooling, and assess the AMOC slowing or shutdown. Recent Anomalies From the years of 2012-2016, the largest and most rapid change in salinity since the GSA has been observed.
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Original:  Further Research Recent studies (2017) suggest potential subpolar North Atlantic (SPG) convection collapse, resulting in rapid North Atlantic cooling, and assess AMOC slow or shutdown .
Revised:  This is because the earlier GSA's were due to the addition of freshwater through the Fram Strait, with the wind pattern spreading this freshwater over the Labrador Sea. For this recent anomaly, the processes driving it were different .
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Original:  At the same time, however, there is a danger of being exposed as an anti-environmental initiative, which entails a considerable risk that the greenscamming activities backfire and are counterproductive for the initiators.
Revised:  However, there is a danger of being exposed as an anti-environmental initiative, which entails a considerable risk that the greenscamming activities backfire and are counterproductive for the initiators.
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Original:  In many of these organizations, James Lawrence Powell identified their "admirable" designations as the most striking common feature, which for the most part sounded very rationalistic. In this context, he refers to a list of climate denial organizations drawn up by the Union of Concerned Scientists, which includes 43 organizations funded by the Exxonoil company.
Revised:  In many of these organizations, James Lawrence Powell identified their "admirable" designations as the most striking common feature, which for the most part sounded very rational. He quotes a list of climate denial organizations drawn up by the Union of Concerned Scientists, which includes 43 organizations funded by the Exxonoil company.
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Original:  In this context, he refers to a list of climate denial organizations drawn up by the Union of Concerned Scientists, which includes 43 organizations funded by the Exxonoil company. None of these organizations had a name from which to derive their opposition to climate change .
Revised:  In this context, he refers to a list of climate denial organizations drawn up by the Union of Concerned Scientists, which includes 43 organizations funded by Exxon. None had a name from which to derive their opposition to climate change .
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Original:  Pampers also claims that "Dry Max" diapers reduce landfill waste by reducing the amount of paper fluff in the diaper, which really is a way for Pampers to save money.
Revised:  Pampers also claims that "Dry Max" diapers reduce landfill by reducing the amount of paper fluff in the diaper, which really is a way for Pampers to save money.
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Original:  "Clean Coal", an initiative adopted by several platforms for the 2008 U.S presidential elections is an example of political greenwashing. The policy cited carbon capture  as a means of reducing carbon emissions by capturing and injecting carbon dioxide produced by coal power plants into layers of porous rock below the ground.
Revised:  "Clean Coal", an initiative adopted by several platforms for the 2008 U.S . presidential election, cited carbon capture as a means of reducing carbon emissions by capturing and injecting carbon dioxide produced by coal power plants into layers of porous rock below the ground.
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Original:  While advocates claim that the shift is scientifically derived to better reflect the usage of the sands as a precursor to oil, environmental groups are claiming that this is simply a means of cloaking the issue behind friendlier terminology.
Revised:  While advocates claim that the shift is scientifically derived to better reflect the use of the sands as a precursor to oil, environmental groups are claiming that this is simply a means of cloaking the issue behind friendlier terminology.
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Original:  While advocates claim that the shift is scientifically derived to better reflect the usage of the sands as a precursor to oil, environmental groups are claiming that this is simply a means of cloaking the issue behind friendlier terminology.
Revised:  While advocates claim that the shift is scientifically derived to better reflect the usage of the sands as a precursor to oil, environmental groups claim that it is simply a means of cloaking the issue behind friendlier terminology.
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Original:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
Revised:  However, according to the Institute for Local Self-Reliance (ILSR ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
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Original:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
Revised:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
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Original:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
Revised:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " . Walmart still generates only 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
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Original:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 percent of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
Revised:  However, according to the Institute For Local Reliance (ILRS ), "Walmart’s sustainability campaign has done more to improve the company’s image than the environment . " Walmart still only generates 2 \% of U.S. electricity from wind and solar resources.
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Original:  The retail giant responded to these accusations by stating "that it is serious about its commitment to reduce 20 million tons of greenhouse gas emissions by 2015." Environmental accounting can easily be used to pretend that the environmental impacts of a company are reduced while actual impacts increase.
Revised:  The retail giant responded to these accusations by stating "that it is serious about its commitment to reduce 20 million tons of greenhouse gas emissions by 2015." Environmental accounting can be used to pretend that the environmental impacts of a company are reduced while actual impacts increase.
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Original:  In 2018, in response to increased calls for banning plastic straws, Starbucks introduced a new straw-less lid that actually contained more plastic by weight than the old straw and lid combination.
Revised:  In 2018, in response to increased calls to ban plastic straws, Starbucks introduced a new straw-less lid that actually contained more plastic by weight than the old straw and lid combination.
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Original:  For example, drop-in bioplastics are still considered bioplastics although the plastic produced has an identical chemical compound to that of its petroleum counterpart . Environmental awards given to fossil fuel companies such as Saudi Aramco by groups such as "The Green Organization" which charge entry and membership fees.
Revised:  For example, drop-in bioplastics are still considered bioplastics although they have identical chemical structures to those of their oil-based counterparts . Environmental awards given to fossil fuel companies such as Saudi Aramco by groups such as "The Green Organization" which charge entry and membership fees.
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Original:  In November 2020, Aston Martin, Bosch and other brands were discovered to have funded a report which mislead consumers about the CO2 emissions produced during the manufacture of electric vehicles, in response to the UK announcing that it would ban the sale of internal combustion engine vehicles from 2030.
Revised:  In November 2020, Aston Martin, Bosch and other brands were discovered to have funded a report which misled consumers about the CO2 emissions produced during the manufacture of electric vehicles, in response to the UK announcing that it would ban the sale of internal combustion engine vehicles from 2030.
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Original:  In November 2020, Aston Martin, Bosch and other brands were discovered to have funded a report which mislead consumers about the CO2 emissions produced during the manufacture of electric vehicles, in response to the UK announcing that it would ban the sale of internal combustion engine vehicles from 2030.
Revised:  In November 2020, Aston Martin, Bosch and other brands were discovered to have funded a report which mislead consumers about the CO2 emissions produced during the manufacture of electric vehicles, in response to the UK announcing that it would ban the sale of vehicles with internal combustion engines from 2030.
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Original:  Astroturfing Conspicuous conservation Diesel exhaust fluid Ecolabel Environmentally friendly Ethics of philanthropy False advertising Fossil fuels lobby Green brands Gasoline additives Green marketing Green parking lot Greenscamming Maplewashing Sunshine unit Pinkwashing Purplewashing Redwashing
Revised:  Conspicuous conservation Ecolabel Ethics of philanthropy False advertising Fossil fuels lobby Green brands Gasoline additives Green marketing Green parking lot Greenscamming Maplewashing Sunshine unit Pinkwashing Purplewashing Redwashing
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Original:  Astroturfing Conspicuous conservation Diesel exhaust fluid Ecolabel Environmentally friendly Ethics of philanthropy False advertising Fossil fuels lobby Green brands Gasoline additives Green marketing Green parking lot Greenscamming Maplewashing Sunshine unit Pinkwashing Purplewashing Redwashing
Revised:  Astroturfing Conspicuous conservation Diesel exhaust fluid Ecolabel Environmentally friendly Ethics of philanthropy False advertising Fossil fuels lobby Green brands Gasoline additives Green marketing Green parking lot Greenscamming Sunshine unit
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as (lit., " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " on the ground " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " ) . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) , this stems from the word (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location - cognate to the English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") , and is combined with (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
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Original: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as  " auf den erdstelln "  . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground – cognate to English "earth").
Revised: Etymology There are very few historic references – a document from 1449 names the area above the tunnels as " auf den erdstelln " . Although the modern term uses "Stall" (stable, shed) it is in fact related to "Stelle" (spot, location – cognate to English "stead") along with "Erde" (soil, ground - cognate to the English "earth").
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Original:  Alternative regional names are "Schratzlloch" (Bavaria), "Zwergloch" and "Grufen" (Austria)  that carry the regional names for dwarfs that folk belief has connected them to.
Revised:  Alternative regional names are (Bavaria), "Zwergloch" and "Grufen" (Austria) that carry the regional names for dwarfs that folk belief has connected them to.
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Original:  Alternative regional names are "Schratzlloch" (Bavaria), "Zwergloch" and "Grufen" (Austria)  that carry the regional names for dwarfs that folk belief has connected them to.
Revised:  Alternative regional names are "Schratzlloch" (Bavaria), "Zwergloch" and "Grufen" (Austria) , that carry the regional names for dwarfs that folk belief has connected them to.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally , they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages connecting one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called a (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) , which are typically extremely narrow and impassable for some, as crawling under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, and then standing up to slide the shoulders through the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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