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Original: Along with his brother, Abu 'l-Walid Muslim , he had called for the khutba in Bahrain to be read in the name of the Abbasid caliph al-Qaim, a common way of expressing allegiance to the Abbasids, which was anathema to the millenarian Qarmatian Ismailis.
Revised: He is the founder and namesake of Al Awamiyah, a village in the Qatif region. Biography Abu al-Bahlul was the guarantor of the Qarmatian governor in Bahrain, Jaafar bin Abi Muhammad bin Arham, and had a brother named Abu 'l-Walid Muslim , he had called for the khutba in Bahrain to be read in the name of the Abbasid caliph al-Qaim, a common way of expressing allegiance to the Abbasids, which was anathema to the millenarian Qarmatian Ismailis.
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Original: Along with his brother, Abu 'l-Walid Muslim , he had called for the khutba in Bahrain to be read in the name of the Abbasid caliph al-Qaim, a common way of expressing allegiance to the Abbasids, which was anathema to the millenarian Qarmatian Ismailis. Their rebellion quickly overthrew Qarmatian rule and their position was secured when a seaborne landing by the Qarmatians to retake the islands was repulsed in 1066-7. A similar rebellion took place in Qatif in 1058, forcing the Qarmatians back to Al-Hasa before their final defeat after a seven-year siege of the city by the Uyunids and Seljuk Turks in 1067.
Revised: Along with his brother, Abu 'l-Walid Muslim who was a member of the ulama there. Since there was no mosque on the island, then called Awal, Abu al-Bahlul paid the Qarmatians back to Al-Hasa before their final defeat after a seven-year siege of the city by the Uyunids and Seljuk Turks in 1067.
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Original:  A similar rebellion took place in Qatif in 1058, forcing the Qarmatians back to Al-Hasa before their final defeat after a seven-year siege of the city by the Uyunids and Seljuk Turks in 1067.
Revised:  A similar rebellion took place in Qatif in 1058, forcing the Qarmatians 3,000 dinars to erect one to serve the non-Arabs and merchants who would otherwise be reluctant to visit; the site was chosen therefore as close to the souk. Abu al-Walid dedicated the khutba (opening prayer) to Caliph Al-Qa’im as required by the Shi’ite Buyid dynasty then controlling the Caliphate. At first the Qarmatians agreed in exchange for his donations, acknowledging that the majority were not Qarmatian there. After the 1058 revolt of Al-Basasiri, however, the Baghdad sermons were redirected to the name of Al-Mustansir Billah, the Fatimid Caliph in Cairo. When the Qarmatians asked Abu’l-Walid to implement this change, Abu al-Bahlul made clear that the donations obligated his brother to do no such thing.
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Original:   Curtis E. Larsen.
Revised:  Tensions thus arose between Abu al-Bahlul and Bin Arham, who the Qarmatians sacked and replaced by a new governor tasked to reassert his authority by arresting Abu al-Bahlul and his cohort. The latter faction hired an Abdul Qays luminary, Abu al-Qasim ibn Abu al-Aryan, who proceeded to recruit around 30,000 who surprised the new governor and rapidly took control of the island in 1058. Upon receiving word, Qarmatian vizier Abu Abdullah ibn Sanbar sent some of his children to Oman for weapons and reinforcements, but Abu al-Bahlul and Abu al-Aryan ambushed the party and killed all 40, taking the 5,000 dinars and 3,000 spears as booty. The Qarmatians then offered Abu al-Aryan rule of Bahrain in 1066 in exchange for arresting Abu al-Bahlul. Aware of the plot, Abu al-Bahlul killed Abu al-Aryan while the latter was taking ablution with his servant at Abu Zaidan spring, in what is now Bilal Al Qadeem. The Qarmatians, thinking they would enter without resistance, invaded and were promptly ambushed and disarmed, leaving Abu al-Bahlul in firm control and Abu’l-Walid as vizier of Bahrain. Curtis E. Larsen.
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Original:  Life and Land Use on the Bahrain Islands: The Geoarchaeology of an Ancient Society University Of Chicago Press, 1984 p65 While Abu al-Buhlul was able to gain independence for Bahrain, he was not strong enough to defend the islands against the new ruler of Qatif , Yahya ibn 'Ayyash. Bahrain soon came under the control of Ibn Ayyash and his son , before it was captured by Abdullah bin Ali Al Uyuni, the founder of the Uyunid Emirate.
Revised:  Life and Land Use on the Bahrain Islands: The Geoarchaeology of an Ancient Society University Of Chicago Press, 1984 p65 Abu al-Bahlul’s success prompted other Abdul Qays sheikhs to revolt. Yahya ibn Ayyash al-Jadhmi drove the Qarmatians out of Qatif in 1058. Meanwhile, a third leader, Abdullah bin Ali Al Uyuni, fled the Al-Ahsa Oasis to plot another revolt in Al-Oyun, a village to the north, culminating in a seven-year siege of the city by the Uyunids and Seljuk Turks ending in 1067. Abu al-Bahlul and Al Uyuni each wrote to the Abbasids for support in driving the Qarmatians out for good and unifying the region under their rule. After Ibn Ayyash’s death, however, his son Zakaria was the one to invade Bahrain and kill Abu al-Bahlul, thus uniting Awal and Qatif for a time, before they were in turn captured by Abdullah bin Ali Al Uyuni, the founder of the Uyunid Emirate.
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Original: Category:CSI: Miami characters Category:Fictional Miami-Dade Police Department detectives Category:Fictional American people of Irish descent Category:Fictional characters introduced in 2002 Category:Fictional forensic scientists Forensic Forensi
Revised: Category:CSI: Miami characters Category:Fictional Miami-Dade Police Department detectives Category:Fictional American people of Irish descent Category:Fictional characters introduced in 2002 Category:Fictional forensic scientists Category:Fictional detectives Category:Fictional scientist
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Original:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire  and the Sassanid Empire  sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) which divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
Revised:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire under Theodosius I and the Sassanid Empire sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) which divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
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Original:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire  and the Sassanid Empire  sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) which divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
Revised:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire and the Sassanid Empire under Shapur III sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) which divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
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Original:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire  and the Sassanid Empire  sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) which divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
Revised:  The Peace of Acilisene was a treaty between the East Roman Empire and the Sassanid Empire sometime between 384 and 390 (usually dated to 387) . The treaty divided Greater Armenia between these two empires.
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Original: Atlantic coastal salt marsh A riparian forest or riparian woodland is a forested or wooded area of land adjacent to a body of water such as a river, stream, pond, lake, marshland, estuary, canal, sink or reservoir.
Revised:  A riparian forest or riparian woodland is a forested or wooded area of land adjacent to a body of water such as a river, stream, pond, lake, marshland, estuary, canal, sink or reservoir.
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Original: Atlantic coastal salt marsh A riparian forest or riparian woodland is a forested or wooded area of land adjacent to a body of water such as a river, stream, pond, lake, marshland, estuary, canal, sink or reservoir.
Revised: Atlantic coastal salt marsh A dry riparian forest in Western Sydney|240px A riparian forest or riparian woodland is a forested or wooded area of land adjacent to a body of water such as a river, stream, pond, lake, marshland, estuary, canal, sink or reservoir.
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Original:  However, this information has been observed to guide attentional or gaze shifts, indicating a selection at the very first stage when visual inputs enter visual cortex , and also that this information is then deleted before entering visual awareness .
Revised:  However, this information has been observed to guide attentional or gaze shifts, indicating a selection at the very first stage when visual inputs enter visual cortex . This information about the eye of origin of visual inputs is then deleted before entering visual awareness .
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Original:  However, this information has been observed to guide attentional or gaze shifts, indicating a selection at the very first stage when visual inputs enter visual cortex , and also that this information is then deleted before entering visual awareness .
Revised:  However, this information has been observed to guide attentional or gaze shifts, indicating a selection at the very first stage when visual inputs enter visual cortex , and also that this information is then deleted by V2, right after V1 along the visual pathway, since V2 neurons' responses to visual inputs do not depend on from which eye the visual inputs come from .
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is an American who, at age 10 , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of  Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is an U.S. woman who, as a ten-year-old child , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of Panama.
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is an American who, at age 10 , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of  Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is an American who, at age 10 , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
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Original:  Overview York (then 10 years old) and her mother toured Panama from October 5 through October 11, 1988, and they were escorted by a military guard on a tour of the country.
Revised:  Overview York (then ten years old) and her mother toured Panama from October 5 through October 11, 1988, and they were escorted by a military guard on a tour of the country.
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is an American who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at age 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
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Original: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of the Latin American country of Panama.
Revised: upright=0.8|Sarah York Sarah York (born 1978) is a U.S. woman who, at a 10 years ol , became the pen pal of Manuel Noriega, the then-de facto ruler of Panama.
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Original:  Human activities, such as the burning of fossil fuels in vehicles, wood burning, stubble burning, power plants, road dust, wet cooling towers in cooling systems and various industrial processes, also generate significant amounts of particulates.
Revised:  Human activities, such as the burning of fossil fuels in vehicles, wood URL stubble burning, power plants, road dust, wet cooling towers in cooling systems and various industrial processes, also generate significant amounts of particulates.
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Original:  Wood smoke is a major source of air URL especially particulate URL In some towns and cities in New South Wales wood smoke may be responsible for 60\% of fine particle air pollution in the URL In the United Kingdom domestic combustion is the largest single source of PM2.5 URL
Revised:  In the United Kingdom domestic combustion is the largest single source of PM2.5 URL In some towns and cities in New South Wales wood smoke may be responsible for 60\% of fine particle air pollution in the URL In the United Kingdom domestic combustion is the largest single source of PM2.5 URL
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Original:  Wood smoke is a major source of air URL especially particulate URL In some towns and cities in New South Wales wood smoke may be responsible for 60\% of fine particle air pollution in the URL In the United Kingdom domestic combustion is the largest single source of PM2.5 URL
Revised:  Wood smoke is a major source of air URL especially particulate URL In some towns and cities in New South Wales wood smoke may be responsible for 60\% of fine particle air pollution in the URL
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Original: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the ‘’’ underdetermination of theory by data ’’’ (sometimes abbreviated ‘’’UTD’’’ ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
Revised: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the underdetermination of theory by data ’’’ (sometimes abbreviated ‘’’UTD’’’ ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
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Original: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the ‘’’ underdetermination of theory by data ’’’ (sometimes abbreviated ‘’’UTD’’’ ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
Revised: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the ‘’’ underdetermination of theory by data (sometimes abbreviated ‘’’UTD’’’ ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
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Original: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the ‘’’ underdetermination of theory by data ’’’ (sometimes abbreviated ‘’’UTD’’’ ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
Revised: In the philosophy of science, underdetermination or the ‘’’ underdetermination of theory by data ’’’ (sometimes abbreviated UTD ) is the idea that evidence available to us at a given time may be insufficient to determine what beliefs we should hold in response to it.
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Original:   Hardwood evergreen trees which are widely spaced and are found in the Mediterranean region are olive, cork, oak and stone pine . Some of these trees can be largely found in other continents, climates, and biomes .
Revised:  Other plant species may include magnolia, prunus, holly, and rhododendron. In South America, conifer and oak species predominate. In Australia, eucalypts are the predominant trees. Hardwood evergreen trees which are widely spaced and are found in the Mediterranean region are olive, cork, oak and stone pine . Some of these trees can be largely found in other continents, climates, and biomes .
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Original:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
Revised:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
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Original:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
Revised:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
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Original:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
Revised:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– τ ) – T(t– Τ )
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Original:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– Τ )
Revised:  Between the perception of target and cursor and the construction of the signal representing the distance between them there is a delay of Τ milliseconds, so that the working perceptual signal at time t represents the target-to-cursor distance at a prior time, t – Τ . Consequently, the equation used in the model is 1. p(t) = C(t– Τ ) – T(t– τ )
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Original: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies  . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
Revised: Sociology is a science concerned with groups and group formation, including those facing structural and interpersonal oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
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Original: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies  . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
Revised: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, and vulnerability. Sub-fields in this area include African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
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Original: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies  . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
Revised: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies . However, not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
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Original: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies  . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
Revised: Sociology is a science concerned with groups under oppression and suffering, including African Americans studies, women's studies, and gay/lesbian studies , but not much attention or legitimacy is awarded animal studies as a sub-field . Modern use of animals in the developed world, especially in the United States, can be characterized by exploitation, domination, and oppression.
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Original: Maurice Ewing in 1948 Historic photo courtesy Columbia University Fair use in List of geologists Though this image is subject to copyright, its use is covered by the U.S. fair use laws, and the stricter requirements of Wikipedia's non-free content policies, because: It illustrates an educational article about the entity that the logo represents.
Revised:  Historic photo courtesy Columbia University Fair use in List of geologists Though this image is subject to copyright, its use is covered by the U.S. fair use laws, and the stricter requirements of Wikipedia's non-free content policies, because: It illustrates an educational article about the entity that the logo represents.
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Original: Maurice Ewing in 1948 Historic photo courtesy Columbia University Fair use in List of geologists Though this image is subject to copyright, its use is covered by the U.S. fair use laws, and the stricter requirements of Wikipedia's non-free content policies, because: It illustrates an educational article about the entity that the logo represents.
Revised: Maurice Ewing in 1948 Fair use in List of geologists Though this image is subject to copyright, its use is covered by the U.S. fair use laws, and the stricter requirements of Wikipedia's non-free content policies, because: It illustrates an educational article about the entity that the logo represents.
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