wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  anterior surface of the retroperitoneal viscera and the pelvis .12The peritoneum subdivided into interconnected compartments by the peritoneal ligaments and mesenteries  which determine the location and routes of spread of primary and secondary malignancies and infection within the peritoneal cavity.
Revised:  anterior surface of the retroperitoneal viscera and the pelvis .12The peritoneum subdivided into interconnected compartments by the peritoneal ligaments and mesenteries , which determine the location and routes of spread of primary and secondary malignancies and infection within the peritoneal cavity.
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Original:  The term "whisper network" was newly popularized during the #MeToo movement after several private lists were published outside private networks, for example the Shitty Media Men list, the California State Capitol list, and the Harvey Weinstein Google doc.
Revised:  The term "whisper network" was newly popularized during the #MeToo movement after several private lists were published outside of private networks. Among the published lists were the Shitty Media Men list, the California State Capitol list, and the Harvey Weinstein Google doc.
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Original:  Karen Kelsky created a less controversial list  called "Sexual Harassment In the Academy: A Crowdsourced Survey" which had grown to over 2000 entries by the end of 2017, and includes stories without actually naming the accusing and accused parties.
Revised:  Karen Kelsky created a less controversial list about men in academia called "Sexual Harassment In the Academy: A Crowdsourced Survey" which had grown to over 2000 entries by the end of 2017, and includes stories without actually naming the accusing and accused parties.
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Original:  Karen Kelsky created a less controversial list  called "Sexual Harassment In the Academy: A Crowdsourced Survey" which had grown to over 2000 entries by the end of 2017, and includes stories without actually naming the accusing and accused parties.
Revised:  Karen Kelsky created a less controversial list called "Sexual Harassment In the Academy: A Crowdsourced Survey" which had grown to over 2000 entries by the end of 2017. It includes stories without actually naming the accusing and accused parties.
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Original:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
Revised:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors that can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
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Original:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
Revised:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations . However, there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
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Original:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
Revised:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
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Original:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels yet would still like to warn other women.
Revised:  Alternatives Publishing whisper networks to the public has been widely criticized for spreading unsubstantiated rumors which can damage reputations , though there continues to be debate on the best alternatives to anonymous sharing for women who have been punished or ignored by official channels to warn other women.
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Original:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) , created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents with clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent , potentially warning other sex workers in the future .
Revised:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents with clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent , potentially warning other sex workers in the future .
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Original:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) , created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents with clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent , potentially warning other sex workers in the future .
Revised:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) , created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents and warn other sex workers about clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent , potentially warning other sex workers in the future .
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Original:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) , created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents with clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent , potentially warning other sex workers in the future .
Revised:  Sex workers regularly share “bad date lists” and St. James Infirmary Clinic (which offers health and safety services for sex workers) , created a “Bad Date” app that allows sex workers to anonymously log incidents with clients who have threatened, extorted, robbed, or been violent .
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Original: The Dalsfjord Lighthouse Museum () is a Norwegian museum  dedicated to documenting and presenting the social history of the people that built lighthouses, sector lights, markers, moorings, and ports along the Norwegian coastline.
Revised: The Dalsfjord Lighthouse Museum () is a Norwegian museum founded in 1993. It is dedicated to documenting and presenting the social history of the people that built lighthouses, sector lights, markers, moorings, and ports along the Norwegian coastline.
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Original:  However, it was argued that the antecedent factors of flow are interrelated, as a perceived balance between challenges and skills requires that one knows what they have to do (clear goals ) and how successful they are in doing it (immediate feedback ) .
Revised:  It has been argued that the antecedent factors of flow are interrelated, as a perceived balance between challenges and skills requires that one knows what they have to do (clear goals ) and how successful they are in doing it (immediate feedback ) .
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Original:  However, it was argued that the antecedent factors of flow are interrelated, as a perceived balance between challenges and skills requires that one knows what they have to do (clear goals ) and how successful they are in doing it (immediate feedback ) .
Revised:  However, it was argued that the antecedent factors of flow are interrelated, as a perceived balance between challenges and skills requires that the goals are clear and feedback is effective .
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Original:  Journal of Nervous and Mental Disease, 175(9), 545-549. doi:10.1097/00005053-198709000-00006 Antonella Delle Fave, who worked with Fausto Massimini at the University of Milan, now calls this graph the Experience Fluctuation Model.
Revised:  Journal of Nervous and Mental Disease, 175(9), 545-549. doi:10.1097/00005053-198709000-00006 Antonella Delle Fave, who worked with Fausto Massimini at the University of Milan, calls this graph the Experience Fluctuation Model.
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Original:  This graph illustrates one further aspect of flow: it is more likely to occur when the activity at hand is a higher-than-average challenge (above the center point) and the individual has above-average skills (to the right of the center point).
Revised:  The graph illustrates another aspect of flow: it is more likely to occur when the activity at hand is a higher-than-average challenge (above the center point) and the individual has above-average skills (to the right of the center point).
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Original:  This graph illustrates one further aspect of flow: it is more likely to occur when the activity at hand is a higher-than-average challenge (above the center point) and the individual has above-average skills (to the right of the center point).
Revised:  This graph illustrates one further aspect of flow: it is more likely to occur when the activity is a higher-than-average challenge (above the center point) and the individual has above-average skills (to the right of the center point).
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Original:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being ( whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation ) . Several problems of this model have been discussed in literature.
Revised:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being , whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation ) . Several problems of this model have been discussed in literature.
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Original:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being ( whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation ) . Several problems of this model have been discussed in literature.
Revised:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being ( whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation . Several problems of this model have been discussed in literature.
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Original:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being ( whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation ) . Several problems of this model have been discussed in literature.
Revised:  The further from the center an experience is, the greater the intensity of that state of being ( whether it is flow or anxiety or boredom or relaxation ) . Several problems of the model have been discussed in literature.
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Original:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
Revised:  The state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
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Original:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
Revised:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized by easy challenges and low skill level requirements, resulting in a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
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Original:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
Revised:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the activity . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
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Original:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
Revised:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state that occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
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Original:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are low , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
Revised:  Being in a state of apathy is characterized when challenges are low and one's skill level is low producing a general lack of interest in the task at hand . Boredom is a slightly different state in that it occurs when challenges are few , but one's skill level exceeds those challenges causing one to seek higher challenges.
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Original:  These states in general differ from being in a state of flow, in that flow occurs when challenges match one's skill level. Consequently, Csíkszentmihályi has said, "If challenges are too low, one gets back to flow by increasing them.
Revised:  These states in general prevent achieving the balance necessary for flow. Csíkszentmihályi has said, "If challenges are too low, one gets back to flow by increasing them.
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Original:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
Revised:  These traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
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Original:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
Revised:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low egotism , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
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Original:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
Revised:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high propensity to perform activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
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Original:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons only . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
Revised:  These personality traits include curiosity, persistence, low self-centeredness , and a high rate of performing activities for intrinsic reasons . People with most of these personality traits are said to have an autotelic personality.
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Original:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to enter the flowstate . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between skills of the individual and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits flow experiences in individuals characterized by an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
Revised:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to experience flow . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between skills of the individual and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits flow experiences in individuals characterized by an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
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Original:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to enter the flowstate . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between skills of the individual and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits flow experiences in individuals characterized by an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
Revised:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to enter the flowstate . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between individual skills, and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits flow experiences in individuals characterized by an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
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Original:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to enter the flowstate . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between skills of the individual and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits flow experiences in individuals characterized by an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
Revised:  It is in such high-challenge, high-skills situations that people are most likely to enter the flowstate . Experimental evidence shows that a balance between skills of the individual and demands of the task (compared to boredom and overload) only elicits the flow experience in individuals having an internal locus of controlKeller, J., & Blomann, F. (2008).
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Original: Janjevci (, , ) or Kosovo Croats (, ) are the Croat community in Kosovo, inhabiting the town of Janjevo and surrounding villages near Pristina, as well as villages centered on Letnica near Vitina (Šašare, Vrnez  and Vrnavokolo), who are also known as Letničani.
Revised: Janjevci (, , ) or Kosovo Croats (, ) are the Croat community in Kosovo, inhabiting the town of Janjevo and surrounding villages near Pristina, as well as villages centered on Letnica near Vitina (Šašare, Vrnez , and Vrnavokolo), who are also known as Letničani.
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Original:  There are currently studies trying to establish a connection between the Janjevci, who left the Republic of Ragusa or Dubrovnik at the same time that another group crossed the Adriatic Sea and settled in Italy, known as Molise Croats  who speak Italian language with Slavomolisano dialect.
Revised:  There are currently studies trying to establish a connection between the Janjevci, who left the Republic of Ragusa or Dubrovnik at the same time that another group crossed the Adriatic Sea and settled in Italy, known as Molise Croats , who speak Italian language with Slavomolisano dialect.
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Original:  There are currently studies trying to establish a connection between the Janjevci, who left the Republic of Ragusa or Dubrovnik at the same time that another group crossed the Adriatic Sea and settled in Italy, known as Molise Croats  who speak Italian language with Slavomolisano dialect.
Revised:  There are currently studies trying to establish a connection between the Janjevci, who left the Republic of Ragusa or Dubrovnik at the same time that another group crossed the Adriatic Sea and settled in Italy, known as Molise Croats who speak Italian with a Slavomolisano dialect.
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Original:  In April 2017, 196 displaced Letničani, composed of 41 families who were waiting on homes promised by the state, were finally given newly built houses in the settlement Dumače, in the municipality of Petrinja URL
Revised:  In April 2017, 196 displaced Letničani, composed of 41 families who were waiting on homes promised by the state, were finally given newly built houses in the settlement Dumače, in the municipality of URL
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Original:  For several months Tenri Jiho was the only bulletin for the library, but on July 2, 1931, the responsibility of the publication of the periodical was transferred to Tenrikyo Doyusha, where it has since taken a newspaper format.
Revised:  For several months Tenri Jiho was simply a bulletin for the library, but on July 2, 1931, the responsibility of the publication of the periodical was transferred to Tenrikyo Doyusha, where it has since taken a newspaper format.
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Original:  For several months Tenri Jiho was the only bulletin for the library, but on July 2, 1931, the responsibility of the publication of the periodical was transferred to Tenrikyo Doyusha, where it has since taken a newspaper format.
Revised:  For several months Tenri Jiho was the only bulletin for the library, but on July 2, 1931, the responsibility of its publication was transferred to Tenrikyo Doyusha, where it has since taken a newspaper format.
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Original:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov - Jumping Rope on a Slackwire - 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 - 2017)
Revised:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov – Jumping Rope on a Slackwire - 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 - 2017)
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Original:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov - Jumping Rope on a Slackwire - 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 - 2017)
Revised:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov - Jumping Rope on a Slackwire – 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 - 2017)
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Original:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov - Jumping Rope on a Slackwire - 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 - 2017)
Revised:  The World Records Sergey Pavlov - Jumping Rope on a Slackwire - 3, 4, 5, 7 consecutively skips (1985 – 2017)
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