wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: Scientist and public perceptions This thesis is still held to be true in whole or in part by some scientists including the theoretical physicist and cosmologist Stephen Hawking, who said "There is a fundamental difference between religion, which is based on authority, [and] science, which is based on observation and reason.
Revised: Scientists and public perceptions This thesis is still held to be true in whole or in part by some scientists including the theoretical physicist and cosmologist Stephen Hawking, who said "There is a fundamental difference between religion, which is based on authority, [and] science, which is based on observation and reason.
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Original:  Acceptance of scientific facts and religiosity Religiosity is associated with a lesser acceptance of some scientific facts. For example, evolution is often seen as a "point of friction" between science and URL According to a 2020 Pew Research poll, acceptance of the fact of evolution is strongly linked with religious affiliation: a significantly smaller percentage of Muslims and Christians accept it, in comparison with atheists and URL 32\% of the religious respondents say that their religious beliefs sometimes or often conflict with URL Some religious communities have tried to ban the teaching of evolution.
Revised:  Some scientific topics like evolution are often seen as a "point of friction" between science and URL According to a 2020 Pew Research poll, acceptance of the fact of evolution is strongly linked with religious affiliation: a significantly smaller percentage of Muslims and Christians accept it, in comparison with atheists and URL 32\% of the religious respondents say that their religious beliefs sometimes or often conflict with URL Some religious communities have tried to ban the teaching of evolution.
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Original:  For example, evolution is often seen as a "point of friction" between science and URL According to a 2020 Pew Research poll, acceptance of the fact of evolution is strongly linked with religious affiliation: a significantly smaller percentage of Muslims and Christians accept it, in comparison with atheists and URL 32\% of the religious respondents say that their religious beliefs sometimes or often conflict with URL Some religious communities have tried to ban the teaching of evolution.
Revised:  For example, evolution is often seen as a "point of friction" Some religious communities have tried to ban the teaching of evolution.
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Original:  For example, evolution is often seen as a "point of friction" between science and URL According to a 2020 Pew Research poll, acceptance of the fact of evolution is strongly linked with religious affiliation: a significantly smaller percentage of Muslims and Christians accept it, in comparison with atheists and URL 32\% of the religious respondents say that their religious beliefs sometimes or often conflict with URL Some religious communities have tried to ban the teaching of evolution. In 1925, the Tennessee Legislature approved legislation making it a crime to teach “any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the URL The legislation resulted in the infamous Scopes URL
Revised:  For example, evolution is often seen as a "point of friction" between science and URL According to a 2020 Pew Research poll, acceptance of the fact of evolution is strongly linked with religious affiliation: a significantly smaller percentage of Muslims and Christians accept it, in comparison with atheists and URL 32\% of the religious respondents say that their religious beliefs sometimes or often conflict with URL even though there is widespread acceptance of evolution across all 20 countries with diverse religious backgrounds in one study. Age, rather than religion, correlates better on attitudes on relating to biotechnology.
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Original:  The ozone hole was much more seen as a "hot issue" and imminent risk compared to global climate change, as lay people feared a depletion of the ozone layer (ozone shield) risked increasing severe consequences such  skin cancer, cataracts, damage to plants, and reduction of plankton populations in the ocean's photic zone.
Revised:  The ozone hole was much more seen as a "hot issue" and imminent risk compared to global climate change, as lay people feared a depletion of the ozone layer (ozone shield) risked increasing severe consequences such as skin cancer, cataracts, damage to plants, and reduction of plankton populations in the ocean's photic zone.
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Original:  Empire, Development, and the Problem of Scientific Knowledge, 1870-1950 2015 Løchlann Jain Malignant: How Cancer Becomes Us 2016 Banu Subramaniam Ghost Stories for Darwin 2017 Judy Wajcman Pressed for Time: The Acceleration of Life in Digital Capitalism 2018 Lundy Braun Breathing Race into the Machine: The Surprising Career of the Spirometer from Plantation to Genetics (published 2014) 2019 Michelle Murphy The Economization of Life
Revised:  Empire, Development, and the Problem of Scientific Knowledge, 1870-1950 2015 S. Lochlann Jain Malignant: How Cancer Becomes Us 2016 Banu Subramaniam Ghost Stories for Darwin 2017 Judy Wajcman Pressed for Time: The Acceleration of Life in Digital Capitalism 2018 Lundy Braun Breathing Race into the Machine: The Surprising Career of the Spirometer from Plantation to Genetics (published 2014) 2019 Michelle Murphy The Economization of Life
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Original: 10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School upDuo static trapeze performance by Kia and Lindsay (Circus Smirkus), back planche and catchers Static trapeze, also known as fixed trapeze, is a type of circus art performed on the trapeze.
Revised:  upDuo static trapeze performance by Kia and Lindsay (Circus Smirkus), back planche and catchers Static trapeze, also known as fixed trapeze, is a type of circus art performed on the trapeze.
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Original:  See also Cradle (circus act) Repertoire Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
Revised:  See also Cradle (circus act) Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
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Original:  standing on the bar with the back to one rope, with the rope passing along the side of the neck, hands free skinning the cat - from pike position fully rotating body toward the feet downward, then returning to the pike position skinning the cat with a dislocation - from the fully rotated skinners position releasing one hand and returning to hanging below the bar pullover - a transition from hanging into front balance, lifting feet gradually up and over the bar 
Revised:  standing on the bar with the back to one rope, with the rope passing along the side of the neck, hands free skinning the cat - from pike position fully rotating body toward the feet downward, then returning to the pike position skinning the cat with a dislocation - from the fully rotated skinners position releasing one hand and returning to hanging below the bar pullover - a transition from hanging into front balance, lifting feet gradually up and over the bar See also Cradle (circus act)
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Original: upDuo static trapeze performance by Kia and Lindsay (Circus Smirkus), back planche and catchers Static trapeze, also known as fixed trapeze, is a type of circus art performed on the trapeze.
Revised: upDuo static trapeze performance by Kia and Lindsay (Circus Smirkus), back planche and catcher's lock Static trapeze, also known as fixed trapeze, is a type of circus art performed on the trapeze.
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Original:   Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
Revised:  An experimental cage-like structure was created for the show, but was ultimately scrapped in production. However, the structure did appear in the 'making of' documentary Fire Within. Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
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Original:   Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
Revised:  Repertoire upA 10-year-old learns bird's nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
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Original:   Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at Circus School Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
Revised:  Repertoire up10-year-old learns Bird's Nest in the ropes at circus school. Static trapeze routines are choreographed from a number of standard tricks, movements, and positions, including: sitting -
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Original: During this time community groups from priority populations (sex workers, men who have sex with men and injecting drug users) were being funded to deliver HIV prevention information and education within communities as part of Australia ’ s partnership approach to HIV/AIDS.
Revised: During this time community groups from priority populations (sex workers, men who have sex with men and injecting drug users) were being funded to deliver HIV prevention information and education within communities as part of Australia ' s partnership approach to HIV/AIDS.
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Original:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ‘ Travelling Parlour Show ’ . Several sex workers received training to become ‘peer educators’ and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
Revised:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ' Travelling Parlour Show ’ . Several sex workers received training to become ‘peer educators’ and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
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Original:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ‘ Travelling Parlour Show ’ . Several sex workers received training to become ‘peer educators’ and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
Revised:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ‘ Travelling Parlour Show ' . Several sex workers received training to become ‘peer educators’ and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
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Original:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ‘ Travelling Parlour Show ’ . Several sex workers received training to become ‘peer educators’ and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
Revised:  In 1987, PASA received a grant from the SA Health Commission to conduct a three-month HIV/AIDS education project with sex workers called the ‘ Travelling Parlour Show ’ . Several sex workers received training to become 'peer educators' and joined with a nurse from the sexually transmitted infections clinic and took their education and information sessions to the workplaces of sex workers across the metropolitan area of Adelaide.
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Original:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
Revised:  The decriminalisation of sex work billDecriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
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Original:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
Revised:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
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Original:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
Revised:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill ; however, time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
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Original:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to any progress.
Revised:  The decriminalisation of sex work bill Decriminalisation of Sex Work Bill (2015) passed the upper house 13 votes to 8. . Sex work decriminalisation one step closer in South Australia after marathon debate In August 2017, the lower house was set to debate the bill , however time ran out, resulting in a further delay to progress.
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Original:  Author Steven Berlin Johnson describes this as a kind of multitasking: "It usually involves skimming the surface of the incoming data, picking out the relevant details, and moving on to the next stream. You're paying attention, but only partially. That lets you cast a wider net, but it also runs the risk of keeping you from really studying the fish."Everything Bad Is Good for You: How Today's Popular Culture Is Actually Making Us Smarter by Steven Berlin Johnson, p.59 Currently, we live in the "Information Age", being exposed to a huge amount of information and data.
Revised:  Currently, we live in the "Information Age", being exposed to a huge amount of information and data.
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Original: "Everything Bad Is Good for You: How Today's Popular Culture Is Actually Making Us Smarter by Steven Berlin Johnson, p.59 Currently, we live in the "Information Age", being exposed to a huge amount of information and data. The internet has enhanced our accessibility to information, offering real-time connectivity and accessibility to tons of information which may disrupt our daily lives. For this reason, the term has evolved from the Information Age to the "Age of Interruption", characterized by an overabundance of information. People are constantly interrupted by emails, spam, instant messages and cellphones, making attention a scarce resource in this era.
Revised: "Everything Bad Is Good for You: How Today's Popular Culture Is Actually Making Us Smarter by Steven Berlin Johnson, p.59 
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Original: Continuous Partial Attention — Not the Same as Multi-Tasking, July 24, 2008, Business WeekMultitasking versus continuous partial attention Lifehacker, January 11, 2008 Where multi-tasking is driven by a conscious desire to be productive and efficient, CPA is an automatic process , motivated only by "a desire to be a live node on the network" .
Revised: Continuous Partial Attention — Not the Same as Multi-Tasking, July 24, 2008, Business WeekMultitasking versus continuous partial attention Lifehacker, January 11, 2008 Where multi-tasking is driven by a conscious desire to be productive and efficient, CPA is an automatic process motivated only by "a desire to be a live node on the network" .
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Original: Continuous Partial Attention — Not the Same as Multi-Tasking, July 24, 2008, Business WeekMultitasking versus continuous partial attention Lifehacker, January 11, 2008 Where multi-tasking is driven by a conscious desire to be productive and efficient, CPA is an automatic process , motivated only by "a desire to be a live node on the network" . It is driven by the willingness to connect and stay connected, scanning the best opportunities, activities and contacts in an effort to not miss anything that is going on.
Revised: Continuous Partial Attention — Not the Same as Multi-Tasking, July 24, 2008, Business WeekMultitasking versus continuous partial attention Lifehacker, January 11, 2008 Where multi-tasking is driven by a conscious desire to be productive and efficient, CPA is an automatic process , motivated only by "a desire to be a live node on the network" or by the willingness to connect and stay connected, scanning the best opportunities, activities and contacts in an effort to not miss anything that is going on.
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Original:  Compared to multi-tasking, full attention is not required by CPA (hence the "partial") and the process is ongoing rather than episodic (hence the "continuous"). Another distinction results from the fact that CPA has evolved from and is dependent on computers and especially the internet, which acts as a platform for a variety of distractions. Further, it creates a compulsion to connect, meaning that CPA is motivated not by productivity but by connectivity.
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Original:  However, it leads to a higher level of stress in the brain, prohibiting reflection, contemplation and thoughtful decisions. It also dilutes efforts to focus and concentrate on the present (effectively paying attention to what one is doing in the momentinstead of shifting from one activity to another).
Revised:  However, it may lead to increased stress and decreased ability to focus and concentrate on the present (effectively paying attention to what one is doing in the momentinstead of shifting from one activity to another).
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Original:  It also dilutes efforts to focus and concentrate on the present (effectively paying attention to what one is doing in the momentinstead of shifting from one activity to another). This constant connectedness also affects real-time relationshipsand lowers productivity levels, leading to over-stimulation and  lack of fulfillment.
Revised:  It also dilutes efforts to focus and concentrate on the present moment, prohibiting reflection, contemplation, and thoughtful decision making. The constant connectedness that is associated with continuous partiat attention may also affect relationships, lower productivity levels, leading to over-stimulation and lack of fulfillment.
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Original:  We are likely to find ourselves experiencing a flow: attraction to an ideal, taking the expression of the ideal to an extreme and experiencing unintended and less than pleasant consequences, giving birth to and launching a new ideal while integrating the best of what came before  " , says Linda Stone.
Revised:  We are likely to find ourselves experiencing a flow: attraction to an ideal, taking the expression of the ideal to an extreme and experiencing unintended and less than pleasant consequences, giving birth to and launching a new ideal while integrating the best of what came before . " , says Linda Stone.
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Original:  We are likely to find ourselves experiencing a flow: attraction to an ideal, taking the expression of the ideal to an extreme and experiencing unintended and less than pleasant consequences, giving birth to and launching a new ideal while integrating the best of what came before  " , says Linda Stone.
Revised:  We are likely to find ourselves experiencing a flow: attraction to an ideal, taking the expression of the ideal to an extreme and experiencing unintended and less than pleasant consequences, giving birth to and launching a new ideal while integrating the best of what came before " 
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Original:  Victoria Justice denied the photos were authentic but later stated on Twitter that she was pursuing legal actions and found the leak to be a massive invasion of not just her privacy, but of the privacy of all the celebrities affected by the leak. Reports in October indicated that Nick Hogan was the first male star to be directly targeted by hackers;
Revised:  Victoria Justice denied the photos were authentic but later stated on Twitter that she was pursuing legal actions and found the leak to be a massive invasion of not just her privacy, but of the privacy of all the celebrities affected by the incident. Media reports in October indicated that Nick Hogan was the first male star to be directly targeted by hackers;
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Original:  Victoria Justice denied the photos were authentic but later stated on Twitter that she was pursuing legal actions and found the leak to be a massive invasion of not just her privacy, but of the privacy of all the celebrities affected by the incident. Media reports in October indicated that Nick Hogan was the first male star to be directly targeted by hackers;
Revised:  Victoria Justice denied the photos were authentic but later stated on Twitter that she was pursuing legal actions and found the leak to be a massive invasion of not just her privacy, but of the privacy of all the celebrities affected by the leak. Reports in October indicated that Nick Hogan was the first male star to be directly targeted by hackers;
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Original:  One notable anatomically correct doll was the "Archie Bunker's Grandson Joey Stivic" doll which was made by the Ideal Toy Co. in URL The doll, which was modeled after infant character Joey Stivic from the TV series All In The Family, was considered to be the first anatomically correct boy doll.
Revised:  One notable anatomically correct doll was the "Archie Bunker's Grandson Joey Stivic" doll that was made by the Ideal Toy Co. in URL The doll, which was modeled after infant character Joey Stivic from the TV series All In The Family, was considered to be the first anatomically correct boy doll.
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