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Original:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life  Portolá  was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
Revised:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life Portolá in Balaguer, Catalonia. Gaspar de Portolá y Rovira, known in Catalan as Gaspar Portolà i Rovira, was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
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Original:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life  Portolá  was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
Revised:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life Portolá was born on 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
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Original:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life  Portolá  was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
Revised:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life Portolá was born on January 1 January 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
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Original:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life  Portolá  was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, Spain, of Catalan nobility.
Revised:  His expedition gave names to geographic features throughout California, a significant number of which are still in use.factcards.califa.org, Gaspar de Portolá i Rovira Early life Portolá was born on January 1 , 1716 in Os de Balaguer, in Catalonia, to a family of minor Catalan nobility.
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Original:  Expulsion of the Jesuits Beginning in 1684, Jesuit missionaries started establishing missions on the Baja California Peninsula. Later, rumors circulated that the Jesuits had amassed a fortune and were becoming very powerful. As part of the nearly global suppression of the Jesuits , King Carlos III ordered the Jesuits expelled and deported to the Papal States on the Italian peninsula. Following the command of the king, the Viceroy of New Spain ordered the arrest and deportation of all Jesuits in missions.
Revised:  Following the expulsion of the Jesuits from the Spanish Empire,
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Original:  Expedition to expand Las Californias to the north Spain was driven to establish missions and other outposts on the Pacific Coast north of the Baja California Peninsula by fears that the territory would be claimed by foreign powers.
Revised:  Expedition to Las Californias Spain was driven to establish missions and other outposts on the Pacific Coast north of the Baja California Peninsula by fears that the territory would be claimed by foreign powers.
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Original:   Dispatches of January 23, 1768, exchanged between King Carlos and the viceroy, set the wheels in motion to extend Spain's control up the Pacific Coast and establish colonies and missions at San Diego Bay and Monterey Bay, which had been discovered and described in reports by earlier explorers Juan Cabrillo and Sebastián Vizcaíno.
Revised:  upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition in 1769. Dispatches of January 23, 1768, exchanged between King Carlos and the viceroy, set the wheels in motion to extend Spain's control up the Pacific Coast and establish colonies and missions at San Diego Bay and Monterey Bay, which had been discovered and described in reports by earlier explorers Juan Cabrillo and Sebastián Vizcaíno.
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Original:  Portolá 1769 - Commemorative plaque situated in Elysian Park, Los Angeles Rivera reached the site of present-day San Diego in May, established a camp in the area that is now Old Town and awaited the arrival of the others.
Revised:  Rivera reached the site of present-day San Diego in May, established a camp in the area that is now Old Town and awaited the arrival of the others.
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Original:  Legacy Statue of Gaspar de Portolá, by the sculptor Josep Maria Subirachs The city of Portola in Plumas County, the town of Portola Valley in San Mateo County, and the Portola neighborhood of San Francisco were named after Portolà.
Revised:  Legacy The city of Portola in Plumas County, the town of Portola Valley in San Mateo County, and the Portola neighborhood of San Francisco were named after Portolà.
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Original:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition  in 1769.
Revised:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. California Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition in 1769.
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Original:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition  in 1769.
Revised:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the Portolá expedition in 1769.
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Original:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition  in 1769.
Revised:  Russian fur hunters were pressing east from Siberia across the Bering Strait into the Aleutian Islands and beyond. upCalifornia Historical Landmark in Los Angeles commemorating the beginning of the Portolá expedition 's launch in 1769.
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Original:   The first ship, the San Carlos, sailed from La Paz on January 10, 1769 and a second, the San Antonio sailed from Cabo San Lucas on February 15.
Revised:  Portolà expedition monument in Pacifica, California honoring Portolà's first sighting of San Francisco Bay. The first ship, the San Carlos, sailed from La Paz on January 10, 1769 and a second, the San Antonio sailed from Cabo San Lucas on February 15.
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Original:   Eager to press on to Monterey Bay, Portolá and his expedition, consisting of Juan Crespí, 63 leather-jacket soldiers and 100 mules loaded down with provisions, headed north on July 14, 1769.
Revised:  Monument to Portolá in Sant Esteve de la Sarga, Catalonia. Eager to press on to Monterey Bay, Portolá and his expedition, consisting of Juan Crespí, 63 leather-jacket soldiers and 100 mules loaded down with provisions, headed north on July 14, 1769.
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Original:   After a march of some from San Diego and about from Velicatá, they had reached the bay they were seeking.
Revised:  upThe famous Estracto de Noticias written by Portolá in 1770 is the first published account of Spanish settlements in California. After a march of some from San Diego and about from Velicatá, they had reached the bay they were seeking.
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Original:  Surviving on mule meat for most of the journey, they arrived on January 24, 1770. thumbnail|CHL #2 Portolá Journey's End On their way past Monterey Bay they again failed to recognize it as the same bay that Vizcaíno had described in 1602.
Revised:  Surviving on mule meat for most of the journey, they arrived on January 24, 1770. On their way past Monterey Bay they again failed to recognize it as the same bay that Vizcaíno had described in 1602.
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Original:  Second expedition  One of Portolá's officers, Captain Vicente Vila, convinced him that he had actually been exactly on the Bay of Monterey when he placed his second cross at what later became Pacific Grove.
Revised:  Second expedition Monument to Portolá at Montjuïc Castle in Barcelona, by Catalan sculptor Lluís Montané i Mollfulleda. upPlaque honoring Gaspar de Portolá at the Castle of Pradell de Sió, his family's ancestral home in Preixens. One of Portolá's officers, Captain Vicente Vila, convinced him that he had actually been exactly on the Bay of Monterey when he placed his second cross at what later became Pacific Grove.
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Original:  PESTLE refers to political, economic, social, technological, legal and environmental factors . Regularly addressing PESTLE factors falls under operations management.
Revised:  PESTLE refers to political, economic, social, technological, legal and environmental factors PESTLE Analysis - A Perfect Business Analysis Tool, EduardPunset.es, accessed 28 January 2019. Regularly addressing PESTLE factors falls under operations management.
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Original:  However, information that was processed for its relevance to an environment involving zombies was remembered better than information processed under the African savannah context Soderstrom NC, McCabe DP (2011) Are survival processing memory advantages based on ancestral priorities? Psychon Bull Rev 18: 564–569. and the African context condition did not differ from outer space processing.
Revised:  However, information that was processed for its relevance to an environment involving zombies was remembered better than information processed under the African savannah context and the African context condition did not differ from outer space processing.
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Original:  The assumption of fitness-relevance has been experimentally evaluated using a number of specific evolutionarily relevant scenarios designed to tap different adaptive mechanisms (or psychological adaptations), Tooby J, Cosmides L (1992) The psychological foundations of culture. In Barkow J, Cosmides L, Tooby J (Eds.), The adapted mind: Evolutionary psychology and the generation of culture. New York: Oxford University Press for example, a mating mechanism, fear and phobia mechanism, cheater detection mechanism, etc.
Revised:  The assumption of fitness-relevance has been experimentally evaluated using a number of specific evolutionarily relevant scenarios designed to tap different adaptive mechanisms (or psychological adaptations), for example, a mating mechanism, fear and phobia mechanism, cheater detection mechanism, etc.
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Original:  This finding suggests that fitness-relevance is too amorphous of a construct to explain the mnemonic benefit found with survival processing Klein, S. B. (2013). Evolution, memory, and the role of self-referent recall in planning for the future. What is adaptive about adaptive memory and Sandry et al. suggest that research efforts should be directed at identifying the underlying mechanisms and developing a taxonomy of adaptive memory, similar to evolutionary biology.
Revised:  This finding suggests that fitness-relevance is too amorphous of a construct to explain the mnemonic benefit found with survival processing and Sandry et al. suggest that research efforts should be directed at identifying the underlying mechanisms and developing a taxonomy of adaptive memory, similar to evolutionary biology.
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Original:  Zoey Skins Jane TV series, 2 episodes S.L.R. Alexa Short  2014 Boreb Short, post-production 2014 Silk: The Clerks' Room Bethany BBC R4 series 2015 The Last Kingdom Mildrith TV series, 4 episodes 2016 Tutankhamun Lady Evelyn Carnarvon TV mini-series, 4 episodes 2017 Little Women Sallie Gardiner Miniseries;
Revised:  Zoey Skins Jane TV series, 2 episodes S.L.R. Alexa Short film 2014 Boreb Short, post-production 2014 Silk: The Clerks' Room Bethany BBC R4 series 2015 The Last Kingdom Mildrith TV series, 4 episodes 2016 Tutankhamun Lady Evelyn Carnarvon TV mini-series, 4 episodes 2017 Little Women Sallie Gardiner Miniseries;
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Original:  Zoey Skins Jane TV series, 2 episodes S.L.R. Alexa Short  2014 Boreb Short, post-production 2014 Silk: The Clerks' Room Bethany BBC R4 series 2015 The Last Kingdom Mildrith TV series, 4 episodes 2016 Tutankhamun Lady Evelyn Carnarvon TV mini-series, 4 episodes 2017 Little Women Sallie Gardiner Miniseries;
Revised:  Zoey Skins Jane TV series, 2 episodes S.L.R. Alexa Short 2014 Boreb Older Short film 2014 Silk: The Clerks' Room Bethany BBC R4 series 2015 The Last Kingdom Mildrith TV series, 4 episodes 2016 Tutankhamun Lady Evelyn Carnarvon TV mini-series, 4 episodes 2017 Little Women Sallie Gardiner Miniseries;
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Original:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman  in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
Revised:  The celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
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Original:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman  in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
Revised:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, making an easy catch for fisherman in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
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Original:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman  in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
Revised:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman , in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
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Original:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman  in the middle of the trout closed season and giving them abundant sport.
Revised:  This celebration is named after the grayling due to its popularity with fishermen: apart from having one of the most beautiful dorsal fins of any fish, the grayling rises freely to the surface and reaches its peak when the temperature starts to fall, thus proving an easy catch for fisherman in the middle of the trout closed season and giving abundant sport.
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Original:  J. L. The Generals: The Canadian Army's Senior Commanders in the Second World War ( University of Calgary Press, 2005) in Questia Granatstein, J. L. (2005), The last good war : an illustrated history of Canada in the Second World War, 1939–1945, Douglas & McIntyre Granatstein;
Revised:  J. L. The Generals: The Canadian Army's Senior Commanders in the Second World War ( Don Mills, Ont.: Stoddart, 1993) , Granatstein, J. L. (2005), The last good war : an illustrated history of Canada in the Second World War, 1939–1945, Douglas & McIntyre Granatstein;
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Original:  J. L. The Generals: The Canadian Army's Senior Commanders in the Second World War ( University of Calgary Press, 2005) in Questia Granatstein, J. L. (2005), The last good war : an illustrated history of Canada in the Second World War, 1939–1945, Douglas & McIntyre Granatstein; J. L. The Generals: The Canadian Army's Senior Commanders in the Second World War (University of Calgary Press, 2005) in Questia Granatstein, J. L. Canada's War: The Politics of the Mackenzie King Government.
Revised:  J. L. The Generals: The Canadian Army's Senior Commanders in the Second World War ( University of Calgary Press, 2005) in Questia Granatstein, J. L. (2005), The last good war : an illustrated history of Canada in the Second World War, 1939–1945, Douglas & McIntyre Granatstein, J. L. Canada's War: The Politics of the Mackenzie King Government.
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Original: Bacterial Bacterial croup may be divided into laryngeal diphtheria, bacterial tracheitis, laryngotracheobronchitis, and laryngotracheobronchopneumonitis.
Revised: Bacteria and cocci Bacterial croup may be divided into laryngeal diphtheria, bacterial tracheitis, laryngotracheobronchitis, and laryngotracheobronchopneumonitis.
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Original:  The most common bacteria implicated are Staphylococcus aureus, Streptococcus pneumoniae,  Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
Revised:  The most common cocci implicated are Staphylococcus aureus, Streptococcus pneumoniae, Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
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Original:  The most common bacteria implicated are Staphylococcus aureus, Streptococcus pneumoniae,  Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
Revised:  The most common bacteria implicated are Staphylococcus aureusand Streptococcus pneumoniae, Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
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Original:  The most common bacteria implicated are Staphylococcus aureus, Streptococcus pneumoniae,  Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
Revised:  The most common bacteria implicated are Staphylococcus aureus, Streptococcus pneumoniae, while the most common bacteria are Haemophilus influenzae, and Moraxella catarrhalis.
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Original:  Horton (1945) used the following equation to describe the average length of overland flow as a function of drainage density: Elementary Components of Drainage Basins A drainage basin can be defined by three elementary quantities: channels, the hillslope area associated with those channels, and the source areas.
Revised:  Horton (1945) used the following equation to describe the average length of overland flow as a function of drainage density: Elementary components of drainage basins A drainage basin can be defined by three elementary quantities: channels, the hillslope area associated with those channels, and the source areas.
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Original:  Relation to Water Balance Drainage density is tied to the water balance equation: Relation of Drainage Density to the Hydrograph The discharge through the central stream draining a catchment reflects the drainage density, which makes it a useful diagnostic for predicting the flooding behavior of a catchment following a storm event due to being intimately tied to the hydrograph.
Revised:  Relation to water balance Drainage density is tied to the water balance equation: Relation of Drainage Density to the Hydrograph The discharge through the central stream draining a catchment reflects the drainage density, which makes it a useful diagnostic for predicting the flooding behavior of a catchment following a storm event due to being intimately tied to the hydrograph.
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Original:  Relation to Water Balance Drainage density is tied to the water balance equation: Relation of Drainage Density to the Hydrograph The discharge through the central stream draining a catchment reflects the drainage density, which makes it a useful diagnostic for predicting the flooding behavior of a catchment following a storm event due to being intimately tied to the hydrograph.
Revised:  Relation to Water Balance Drainage density is tied to the water balance equation: Relation to hydrographs The discharge through the central stream draining a catchment reflects the drainage density, which makes it a useful diagnostic for predicting the flooding behavior of a catchment following a storm event due to being intimately tied to the hydrograph.
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Original:  Formula for Drainage Density Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) determined the following equation for drainage density by observing drainage basins in the Tennessee Valley, California: Relation to the Mean Annual Flood Charles Carlston (1963) determined an equation to express the mean annual flood runoff, Q2.33, for a given drainage basin as a function of drainage density.
Revised:  Formula for drainage density Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) determined the following equation for drainage density by observing drainage basins in the Tennessee Valley, California: Relation to the Mean Annual Flood Charles Carlston (1963) determined an equation to express the mean annual flood runoff, Q2.33, for a given drainage basin as a function of drainage density.
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Original:  Formula for Drainage Density Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) determined the following equation for drainage density by observing drainage basins in the Tennessee Valley, California: Relation to the Mean Annual Flood Charles Carlston (1963) determined an equation to express the mean annual flood runoff, Q2.33, for a given drainage basin as a function of drainage density.
Revised:  Formula for Drainage Density Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) Montgomery and Dietrich (1989) determined the following equation for drainage density by observing drainage basins in the Tennessee Valley, California: Relation to the mean annual flood Charles Carlston (1963) determined an equation to express the mean annual flood runoff, Q2.33, for a given drainage basin as a function of drainage density.
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Original:  Carlston found a correlation between the two quantities when plotting data from 15 drainage basins and determined the following equation: The Effect of Vegetation on Drainage Density The presence of vegetation in a drainage basin has multiple effects on the drainage density.
Revised:  Carlston found a correlation between the two quantities when plotting data from 15 drainage basins and determined the following equation: Effect of vegetation on drainage density The presence of vegetation in a drainage basin has multiple effects on the drainage density.
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