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Original:  After returning home from the Charlottetown Conference, JMacdonald asked Viscount Monck, the Governor-General of the Province of Canada to invite delegates from the three Maritime provinces and Newfoundland to a conference with United Canada delegates.
Revised:  After returning home from the Charlottetown Conference, Macdonald asked Viscount Monck, the Governor-General of the Province of Canada to invite delegates from the three Maritime provinces and Newfoundland to a conference with United Canada delegates.
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Original: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
Revised: Infobox monarch | name = Queen Amanirenas | title = Queen of Kush | image = File:Stele hamadab.JPG | caption = Meroitic Stela found at Hamadab | reign = c. 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
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Original: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
Revised: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 – 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
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Original: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
Revised: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC | coronation = | full name = Ameniras, Qore and Kandake | predecessor = Teriteqas | successor = Amanishakheto | spouse = | issue = Akinidad | royal house = | dynasty = Meroitic period | father = | mother = | birth_date = 60s–50s BC | birth_place = | death_date = c. 10 BC | death_place = | date of burial = | place of burial = Jebel Barkal (Bar. 4?) 
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Original: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). 
Revised: Amanirenas (also spelled Amanirena) was a queen of the Kingdom of Kush from 40 BC to c. 10 BC . Her full title was Amnirense qore li kdwe li ("Ameniras, qore and kandake"). This is a message to the McQueen family we rule the world and that’s on period
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Original: The Backstretch is the area in a horse racetrack where horses are stabled and the training and daily work of maintaining the horses occurs.
Revised: Backstretch refers to either: (1) the portion of an oval racetrack on the far side of the grandstand, parallel to the homestretch, or, (2) particularly in North America, the area near the racetrack where horses are stabled and the training and daily work of maintaining the horses occurs.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many racetracks, the stabling area is located next to the far side of the track, and may also be called "the other side of the track . " Description A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . " or the "backside". Description A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . " Portion of the racetack upright=1.2|Generic left-handed racetrack diagram: A = finish line, B = grandstand, C/black = chute, Yellow = homestretch, Red = clubhouse turn, Blue = backstretch, Green = far turn, gray inside line = rail and the white center is the infield. A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . " Description The standard definition of backstretch refers to the configuration of an oval racetrack, where the backstretch is parallel to the homestretch. It is shown in blue on the diagram to the left. On an oval track, sprint races (typically 7 furlongs or less) begin on the backstretch and go around one turn to the finish line. Longer races start in the homestretch, take one turn into the backstretch, then another turn into the homestretch, so may be called "two turn" races. Depending on the track dimensions, very long races may consist of three turns, starting on the backstretch and then making a full lap and more. A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . " Description Stabling area A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . "  Description    A backstretch is divided into several areas.
Revised:  In many race tracks it will be found directly across the track from the grandstands and may also be called "the other side of the track . " Description Backstretch is also used to refer to the stabling area adjacent to the racetrack. A backstretch is divided into several areas.
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Original:  People working in this area are sometimes described as "the backstretch family", consisting of trainers, exercise riders, jockeys, grooms, farriers, veterinarians, muckers, jockey agents, and others in various URL by photographer Harris J. Sklar The backstretch in horse racing is also the part of an oval racecourse farthest from the spectators and opposite the homestretch.
Revised:  People working in this area are sometimes described as "the backstretch family", consisting of trainers, exercise riders, jockeys, grooms, farriers, veterinarians, muckers, jockey agents, and others in various positions. The backstretch in horse racing is also the part of an oval racecourse farthest from the spectators and opposite the homestretch.
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Original:  People working in this area are sometimes described as "the backstretch family", consisting of trainers, exercise riders, jockeys, grooms, farriers, veterinarians, muckers, jockey agents, and others in various URL by photographer Harris J. Sklar The backstretch in horse racing is also the part of an oval racecourse farthest from the spectators and opposite the homestretch. Most barn areas are on this far side of the track, and hence, the backstretch derives its name. Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ]  References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
Revised:  People working in this area are sometimes described as "the backstretch family", consisting of trainers, exercise riders, jockeys, grooms, farriers, veterinarians, muckers, jockey agents, and others in various URL by photographer Harris J. Sklar One groom explained the daily routine: "I come in about four-thirty. Feed breakfast. Most people have watchers ] References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
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Original:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ]  References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
Revised:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary who observe a horse to make sure it is eating well and shows no signs of illness] References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
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Original:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ]  References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
Revised:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ] when they feed breakfast. We don’t because the stable’s not that big. But I come in about four-thirty. Feed. Muck out my stalls. Then about five-thirty—six we start training. You know, we pack them up and send them to the track. They come back, we bathe them. But that lasts until ten or ten-thirty. Then we do them up. We put all kinds of liniments and poultices on them and put bandages on them. We feed about eleven a.m. Then we come back about three-thirty. Muck out the stalls again and feed them about five. And then we’re done..." References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
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Original:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ]  References In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
Revised:  Merriam- Webster's Dictionary ] On racedays, the groom is also responsible for leading the horse to and from the racetrack, followed by a bath. In photo-essay A Backstretch Journey, photographer Harris J. Sklar gives a vivid account of the daily life and activity occurring in the backstretch, with both photographs and quotations.
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Original: The orienting system describes a system whereby reflexive and more controlled eye movements are initiated as part of the attentional response. The orienting systeminvolves the superior colliculus, magno cells in the pulvinar (thalamus) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
Revised: The brain pathway that orients visual attention to a stimulus is referred to as the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5.
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Original:  The orienting systeminvolves the superior colliculus, magno cells in the pulvinar (thalamus) and the secondary and tertiary areas of the extrastriate cortex e.g. V5. The orienting system follows the second 'geniculate' pathway. This pathway projects first to the superior colliculus and then to the pulvinar of the thalamus before projecting mainly to the posteria parietal area, but there are also projections that fan out to points along the V1 and V4 pathway.
Revised:  The orienting systeminvolves the superior colliculus, magno cells in the pulvinar (thalamus) and the orienting system. There are two main types of visual orientations, covert (exogenous) which occurs when a salient environmental change causes a shift in attention and overt (endogenous) which occurs when the individual makes a conscious decision to orient attention to a stimuli During a covert orientation of attention, the individual does not physically move, and during a overt orientation of attention the individual's eyes and head physically move in the direction of the stimulus .
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Original:  La Berge provides a model that describes the complex interaction between the superior colliculus and other brain areas. Broadly, a functional pattern can be discern which describes a number of layers within the superior colliculus .
Revised:  Information acquired through covert and overt visual orientations travels through the norepinephrine system, indirectly effecting the ventral visual pathway. The four specific brain regions involved in this process are the frontal eye field, the temporoparietal junction, the pulvinar, and the superior colliculus .
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Original:  The superficial or upper layers are involved in passing sensory information at high speeds to be analysed for location of the a target, which is passed on to the cortex. This movement-sensitive system is important.
Revised:  The frontal eye field is involved in goal-driven eye movements and can inhibit stimulus driven eye movements. The temporoparietal junction appears to be involved location-cueing tasks, and individuals with lesions in this area have difficulty with attentional reorienting. The pulvinar is located posterior to the thalamus and it's role in the orientating system is still being researched; however it is thought to be involved in covert orienting. Finally, the superior colliculus provides information about the location of the stimuli to which attention is directed.
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Original:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that  student self-pacing has over one instructor-set pace.
Revised:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that courses with student self-pacing has over one instructor-set pace.
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Original:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that  student self-pacing has over one instructor-set pace.
Revised:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that student self-pacing has over those with instructor-set pace.
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Original:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that courses with student self-pacing has over those with instructor-set pace.
Revised:  However, it has been speculated that PSI might see a revival with modern educational technology, as information technology could gradually alleviate teacher burdens related to frequent testing and feedback, as well as mitigate the increased administrative complexity that courses with student self-pacing have over those with instructor-set pace.
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Original:  Digital media available today could  provide the same kinds of learner control and presumably could be incorporated in a contemporary implementation of PSI  . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
Revised:  Digital media available today could not provide the same kinds of learner control and presumably could be incorporated in a contemporary implementation of PSI . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
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Original:  Digital media available today could  provide the same kinds of learner control and presumably could be incorporated in a contemporary implementation of PSI  . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
Revised:  Digital media available today could provide the same kinds of learner control . Presumably, unintended consequences might arise if incorporated into a contemporary implementation of PSI . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
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Original:  Digital media available today could  provide the same kinds of learner control and presumably could be incorporated in a contemporary implementation of PSI  . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
Revised:  Digital media available today could provide the same kinds of learner control and presumably could be incorporated in a contemporary implementation of PSI , due to many additional operant behaviors that cannot be controlled by the student or teacher . Units of content—Subject matter material should be broken down into separable, meaningful units.
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Original:  It was put into concrete action when Ted Moses surprised many by supporting the re-election of Landry's Parti Québécois in the 2003 Quebec election after years of refractory attitudes of the Cree people towards Quebec sovereignism .
Revised:  It was put into concrete action when Ted Moses surprised many by supporting the re-election of Landry's Parti Québécois in the 2003 Quebec election after years of oppositional attitudes of the Cree people towards Quebec sovereignism .
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Original:  It was put into concrete action when Ted Moses surprised many by supporting the re-election of Landry's Parti Québécois in the 2003 Quebec election after years of refractory attitudes of the Cree people towards Quebec sovereignism .
Revised:  It was put into concrete action when Ted Moses surprised many by supporting the re-election of Landry's Parti Québécois in the 2003 Quebec election after years of refractory attitudes of the Cree people towards Quebec sovereignty .
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Original: The Global Historical Climatology Network (GHCN) is a database of temperature, precipitation and pressure records managed by the National Climatic Data Center  , Arizona State University and the Carbon Dioxide Information Analysis Center.
Revised: The Global Historical Climatology Network (GHCN) is a database of temperature, precipitation and pressure records managed by the National Climatic Data Center (NDCC) , Arizona State University and the Carbon Dioxide Information Analysis Center.
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Original:  This work has often been used as a foundation for reconstructing past global temperatures, and was used in previous versions of two of the best-known reconstructions, that prepared by the National Climatic Data Center (NCDC) , and that prepared by NASA as its Goddard Institute for Space Studies (GISS) temperature set.
Revised:  This work has often been used as a foundation for reconstructing past global temperatures, and was used in previous versions of two of the best-known reconstructions, that prepared by the NCDC , and that prepared by NASA as its Goddard Institute for Space Studies (GISS) temperature set.
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Original:  Map and description 400px|Map of temperature station locations with record lengths indicated by coloring . Category:Climate change organizations based in the United States Category:Climate and weather statistics Category:Historical climatology Category:Arizona State University Climatic Data Center Climatic Data Center Category:Oceanograp
Revised:  Map and description 400px|Map of temperature station locations with record lengths indicated by coloring Category:Climate change organizations based in the United States Category:Climate and weather statistics Category:Historical climatology Category:Arizona State University Climatic Data Center Climatic Data Center Category:Oceanograp
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Original:  Map and description 400px|Map of temperature station locations with record lengths indicated by coloring . Category:Climate change organizations based in the United States Category:Climate and weather statistics Category:Historical climatology Category:Arizona State University Climatic Data Center Climatic Data Center Category:Oceanograp
Revised:  Map and description 400px|Map of temperature station locations with record lengths indicated by coloring . Category:Climate change organizations based in the United States Category:Climate and weather statistics Category:Historical climatology Category:Arizona State University Global Historical Climatology Network Global Historical Climatology Network Category:Oceanograp
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Original:  Urban planning education - Urban planning in Africa - Urban planning in ancient Egypt - Urban planning in Australia - Urban planning in China - Urban planning in France - Urban planning in Japan - Urban planning in communist countries - Urban planning in the European Union - Urban planning in Shanghai - Urban planning in Singapore - Urban Planning Society of China - Urban plans in Iran - Urban reforestation - Urban renewal - Urban sprawl - Urban village - Urbanized area - Urbanomics
Revised:  Urban planning education - Urban planning in Africa - Urban planning in ancient Egypt - Urban planning in Australia - Urban planning in China - Urban planning in France - Urban planning in Japan - Urban planning in communist countries - Urban planning in the European Union - Urban planning in Shanghai - Urban planning in Singapore - Urban Planning Society of China - Urban plans in Iran - Urban reforestation - Urban renewal - Urban sprawl - Urban village - Urbanomics
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Original: The War of the Golden Stool, also known as the Yaa Asantewaa War, the Third Ashanti Expedition, the Ashanti Uprising, or variations thereof, was a violent battle in the series of conflicts between the United Kingdom and the Ashanti Empire (later Ashanti Region), an autonomous state in West Africa that fractiously co-existed with the British and its vassal coastal tribes.
Revised: The War of the wooden Stool, also known as the Yaa Asantewaa War, the Third Ashanti Expedition, the Ashanti Uprising, or variations thereof, was a violent battle in the series of conflicts between the United Kingdom and the Ashanti Empire (later Ashanti Region), an autonomous state in West Africa that fractiously co-existed with the British and its vassal coastal tribes.
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Original:  On 19 March 1901 British statesman David Lloyd George stated in a Parliamentary session that: “Frederick Hodgson’s quest of the Golden Stool was something like the quest of the Holy Grail".
Revised:  On 19 March 1901 British statesman David Lloyd George stated in a Parliamentary session that: “Frederick Hodgson’s quest of the wooden Stool was something like the quest of the Holy Grail".
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Original:  Joseph Chamberlain, then Secretary for the Colonial Office, was questioned extensively as to whether or not Frederick Hodgson had actually been given prior permission to demand the Golden Stool from the Asante people, because he seemed to think that;
Revised:  Joseph Chamberlain, then Secretary for the Colonial Office, was questioned extensively as to whether or not Frederick Hodgson had actually been given prior permission to demand the wooden Stool from the Asante people, because he seemed to think that;
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