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Original:  Small amounts of about 1 gram can be expected to cause nausea, vomiting, shedding of internal mucous membranes such as those of the small and large intestine (producing so-called "rope worms") and even life-threatening hemolysis in persons who are deficient in glucose-6-phosphate dehydrogenase .
Revised:  Small amounts of about 1 gram can be expected to cause nausea, vomiting, shedding of internal mucous membranes such as those of the small and large intestine (producing so-called "rope worms") and even life-threatening reactions in persons with Glucose-6-phosphate dehydrogenase deficiency .
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Original:  they can tell us why we are as we are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show us the remedy for our disorder.
Revised:  they can reveal why a person is as they are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show us the remedy for our disorder.
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Original:  they can tell us why we are as we are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show us the remedy for our disorder.
Revised:  they can tell us why we are as we are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show the remedy for our disorder.
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Original:  they can tell us why we are as we are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show us the remedy for our disorder.
Revised:  they can tell us why we are as we are—victim or martyr, sexually impotent, deprived child looking for adventure, etc.—but they can also show us the remedy for the disorder.
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Original:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drew .
Revised:  their goal is nothing less than complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drew .
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Original:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drew .
Revised:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games played, whether we won, lost or drew .
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Original:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drew .
Revised:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether won, lost or drew .
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Original:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drew .
Revised:  their goal is nothing less than our complete personal victory or development in defeats, the creative unfolding of the potentialities that are contained in the analysis of the games that we played, whether we won, lost or drawn .
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Original:  In psychoanalysis chess games are wish fulfillment, and that an important part of these wish fulfillment are the result of repressed desires—desires that can scare us so much that our games may turn into a series of defeats.
Revised:  In psychoanalysis chess games are wish fulfillment, and that an important part of these wish fulfillment are the result of repressed desires—desires that can scare a person so much that our games may turn into a series of defeats.
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Original:  In psychoanalysis chess games are wish fulfillment, and that an important part of these wish fulfillment are the result of repressed desires—desires that can scare us so much that our games may turn into a series of defeats.
Revised:  In psychoanalysis chess games are wish fulfillment, and that an important part of these wish fulfillment are the result of repressed desires—desires that can scare us so much that their games may turn into a series of defeats.
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Original:  Punitive games are in fact also fulfillment of wishes, though not of wishes of the instinctual impulses but of those of the critical, censoring, and punishing agency in our controlling minds.
Revised:  Punitive games are in fact also fulfillment of wishes, though not of wishes of the instinctual impulses but of those of the critical, censoring, and punishing agency in the controlling minds.
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Original: Christopher Columbus, in an effort to induce the natives of Jamaica to continue provisioning him and his hungry men, successfully intimidated the natives by correctly predicting a total lunar eclipse for 1 March 1504 (visible on the evening of 29 February in the Americas) , using the Ephemeris of the German astronomer Regiomontanus.
Revised: Christopher Columbus, in an effort to induce the natives of Jamaica to continue provisioning him and his hungry men, successfully intimidated the natives by correctly predicting a total lunar eclipse for 1 March 1504 (visible on the evening of 29 February in the Americas) . Some have claimed that Columbus used the Ephemeris of the German astronomer Regiomontanus.
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Original: Christopher Columbus, in an effort to induce the natives of Jamaica to continue provisioning him and his hungry men, successfully intimidated the natives by correctly predicting a total lunar eclipse for 1 March 1504 (visible on the evening of 29 February in the Americas) , using the Ephemeris of the German astronomer Regiomontanus.Samuel Eliot Morison, Admiral of the Ocean Sea: A Life of Christopher Columbus, 1942, pp. 653–54.
Revised: Christopher Columbus, in an effort to induce the natives of Jamaica to continue provisioning him and his hungry men, successfully intimidated the natives by correctly predicting a total lunar eclipse for 1 March 1504 (visible on the evening of 29 February in the Americas) , using the Ephemeris of the German astronomer RegiomontanusSamuel Eliot Morison, Admiral of the Ocean Sea: A Life of Christopher Columbus, 1942, pp. 653–54.
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Original:  "The New Military History: Myth and Reality", Journal of Military History, 55 (July 1991), 395–406  Charters, David A., Marc Milner, and J. Brent Wilson. eds.
Revised:  "The New Military History: Myth and Reality", Journal of Military History, 55 (July 1991), 395–406 Chambers, John Whiteclay. "‘All Quiet on the Western Front’ (1930): the antiwar film and the image of the First World War." Historical journal of film, radio and television 14.4 (1994): 377-411. Charters, David A., Marc Milner, and J. Brent Wilson. eds.
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Original:  The records of the Roman Julius Caesar (100 BC – 44 BC) enable a comparative approach for campaigns such as Commentarii de Bello Gallico and Commentarii de Bello Civili.  
Revised:  The records of the Roman Julius Caesar (100 BC – 44 BC) enable a comparative approach for campaigns such as Commentarii de Bello Gallico and Commentarii de Bello Civili. In recent decades University level courses in military history remain popular; often they use films to humanize the combat experience. For example, Eugene P. A. Scleh, history professor at the University of Maine, has explored the advantages and problems of teaching a course of "Modern War and Its Images" entirely through films. Students said they found the documentaries more valuable than the dramas. Eugene P. A. Scleh, "Teaching History Through Film," Film 
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Original:  The records of the Roman Julius Caesar (100 BC – 44 BC) enable a comparative approach for campaigns such as Commentarii de Bello Gallico and Commentarii de Bello Civili.  
Revised:  The records of the Roman Julius Caesar (100 BC – 44 BC) enable a comparative approach for campaigns such as Commentarii de Bello Gallico and Commentarii de Bello Civili. History (1973) 3#3 pp 12-16. However, military historians are frustrated by their marginal status in major history departments.John A. Lynn, "Rally Once Again: The Embattled Future of Academic Military History", Journal of Military History 61 (Oct. 1997), 777–89. Ronald H. Spector, "Teetering on the Brink of Respectability." Journal of American History 2007 93(4): 1158–60. online
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Original: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100John A. Lynn,  " The embattled future of academic military history.
Revised: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100 " The embattled future of academic military history.
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Original: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100John A. Lynn,  " The embattled future of academic military history.
Revised: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100John A. Lynn, In recent decades University level courses in military history remain popular; often they use films to humanize the combat experience. For example, Eugene P. A. Scleh, history professor at the University of Maine, has explored the advantages and problems of teaching a course of " The embattled future of academic military history.
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Original: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100John A. Lynn,  " The embattled future of academic military history.
Revised: William H McNeill, "Modern European History" in Michael Kammen, ed., The Past Before Us: Contemporary Historical Writing in the United States (1980) pp. 99– 100John A. Lynn, " Modern War and Its Images
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Original:  "   Journal of Military History 61.4 ( 1997) : 777– 89.
Revised:  " History (1973) 3#3 pp 12-16. However, military historians are frustrated by their marginal status in major history departments.John A. Lynn, "Rally Once Again: The Embattled Future of Academic Military History", Journal of Military History 61.4 ( 1997) : 777– 89.
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Original:  "   Journal of Military History 61.4 ( 1997) : 777– 89.
Revised:  " Journal of Military History 61.4 ( 1997) : 777– 89 online. Ronald H. Spector, "Teetering on the Brink of Respectability." Journal of American History (2007) 93(4): 1158–60. online
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Original:  In recent decades University level courses in military history remain popular; often they use films to humanize the combat experience. For example, Eugene P. A. Scleh, history professor at the University of Maine, has explored the advantages and problems of teaching a course of "Modern War and Its Images" entirely through films. Students said they found the documentaries more valuable than the dramas. Eugene P. A. Scleh, "Teaching History Through Film," Film History (1973) 3#3 pp 12-16.
Revised:  History (1973) 3#3 pp 12-16.
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Original:  Eugene P. A. Scleh, "Teaching History Through Film," Film History (1973) 3#3 pp 12-16. However, military historians are frustrated by their marginal status in major history departments.John A. Lynn, "Rally Once Again: The Embattled Future of Academic Military History", Journal of Military History 61 (Oct. 1997), 777–89. Ronald H. Spector, "Teetering on the Brink of Respectability." Journal of American History 2007 93(4): 1158–60. online
Revised:  Eugene P. A. Scleh, "Teaching History Through Film," Film 
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Original:  He is the Shinto deity who sheds light on heaven and earth, some experts theorize that Sarutahiko was a sun god worshiped in Ise region prior to the popularization of Amaterasu-Omikami . Buddhism long held that the tengu were disruptive demons and harbingers of war.
Revised:  He is the Shinto deity who sheds light on heaven and earth, some experts theorize that Sarutahiko was a sun god worshiped in Ise region prior to the popularization of Amaterasu . Buddhism long held that the tengu were disruptive demons and harbingers of war.
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Original:  He is the Shinto  deity who sheds light on heaven and earth, some experts theorize that Sarutahiko was a sun god worshiped in Ise region prior to the popularization of Amaterasu.
Revised:  He is the Shinto monkey deity who sheds light on heaven and earth, some experts theorize that Sarutahiko was a sun god worshiped in Ise region prior to the popularization of Amaterasu.
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Original: A 2002 study found that about 13\% of human craniometric variation existed between regions, while 81\% existed within regions (the other 6\% existed between local populations within the same region) .
Revised: A 2002 study found that about 13\% of human craniometric variation existed between regions, while 81\% existed within regions (the other 6\% existed between local populations within regions and 81\% within local populations .
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Original:   Areopagitica is full of biblical and classical references which Milton uses to strengthen his argument.
Revised:  In particular, The Doctrine and Discipline of Divorce (1643), which he published anonymously and unlicensed, was condemned by the Puritan clergy as being heretical and intending to foster sexual libertinism, and it was cited in petitions to parliament as evidence of the need to reinstall a system of prepublication licensing. Areopagitica is full of biblical and classical references which Milton uses to strengthen his argument.
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Original:  In addition, he admits that his tolerance is limited: "I mean not tolerated Popery, and open superstition, which as it extirpats all religions and civill supremacies, so it self should be extirpat" .
Revised:  In addition, he admits that his tolerance is limited: According to Nicholas McDowell, the second part of the forecited statement is usually left out by those quoting the first part to show that Milton was, at heart, a religious bigot, and that his ideas about free speech and intellectual liberty have little to teach us about liberalism today .
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Original:  Other fables exist in the East that feature division of prey in such a way that the divider gains the greater part - or even the whole.  
Revised:  Other fables exist in the East that feature division of prey in such a way that the divider gains the greater part - or even the whole. In English the phrase used in the sense of nearly all only appeared at the end of the 18th century;Merriam-Webster Dictionary the French equivalent, le partage du lion, is recorded from the start of that century, following La Fontaine's version of the fable. 
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Original: Category: Aesop's Fables Category:English phrases Category:English-language idioms Category:Fictional lions Category:Hunting The heifer, the goat and the sheep in company with the lion Category: Indian folklore Category:Indian fairy tales Category:Indian literat
Revised: Category: Indian folklore Category:Indian literature Category:Indian fairy tales Category:Aesop's Fables The heifer, the goat and the sheep in company with the lion Category: Indian folklore Category:Indian fairy tales Category:Indian literat
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Original: Category: Aesop's Fables Category:English phrases Category:English-language idioms Category:Fictional lions Category:Hunting The heifer, the goat and the sheep in company with the lion Category: Indian folklore Category:Indian fairy tales Category:Indian literat
Revised: Category: Aesop's Fables Category:English phrases Category:English-language idioms Category:Fictional lions Category:Hunting The heifer, the goat and the sheep in company with the lion Category: English phrases Category:English-language idioms Category:Lions in literature Category:Huntin
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Original: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ."   The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
Revised: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " young, attractive, verbal, intelligent, and successful ." The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
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Original: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ."   The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
Revised: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ." It describes a group of patients that are said to be preferred by mental health professionals. It is based on the perception that this group is characteristically and without external intervention able to form a more positive therapeutic relationship. The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
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Original: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ."   The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
Revised: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ." Origin The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
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Original: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ."   The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting these traits.
Revised: YAVIS (sometimes "YAVIS Syndrome") is an acronym that stands for " Young, Attractive, Verbal, Intelligent, and Successful ." The term was coined by University of Minnesota professor William Schofield in his 1964 book Psychotherapy: The Purchase of Friendship in which he claimed to have demonstrated that mental health professionals often have a positive bias towards clients exhibiting the YAVIS traits.
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Original:  Such an inclination, although mostly unconscious, was thought to be driven by an expectation that clients with such traits would be motivated to work harder in therapy, thereby increasing the therapist's hope that the treatment would be effective  .
Revised:  Such an inclination, although mostly unconscious, was thought to be driven by an expectation that clients with such traits would be motivated to work harder in therapy, thereby increasing the therapist's hope that the treatment would be effective . Asians, for instance, are stereotyped as "inscrutable" making them less preferred than the YAVIS patients .
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Original: 400px| Section of retina: light strikes first the ganglion cell layer, last the rods and conesIntrinsically photosensitive retinal ganglion cells (ipRGCs), also called photosensitive retinal ganglion cells (pRGC), or melanopsin-containing retinal ganglion cells (mRGCs), are a type of neuron in the retina of the mammalian eye.
Revised: 400px| Overview of the retina photoreceptors. ipRGCs labelled at the top-right. Intrinsically photosensitive retinal ganglion cells (ipRGCs), also called photosensitive retinal ganglion cells (pRGC), or melanopsin-containing retinal ganglion cells (mRGCs), are a type of neuron in the retina of the mammalian eye.
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Original:  Overview  Compared to the rods and cones, the ipRGCs respond more sluggishly and signal the presence of light over the long term.
Revised:  Overview 340x340px|An ipRGC, shown here as a complied image of the retina from proximal inner nuclear layer to the ganglion cell layer with fluorescent labeling of melanopsin 340px|Spectral sensitivities of the photoreceptors in the human eye. Compared to the rods and cones, the ipRGCs respond more sluggishly and signal the presence of light over the long term.
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Original:  340x340px|An ipRGC, shown here as a complied image of the retina from proximal inner nuclear layer to the ganglion cell layer with fluorescent labeling of melanopsin Photoreceptive ganglion cells have been isolated in humans, where, in addition to regulating the circadian rhythm, they have been shown to mediate a degree of light recognition in rodless, coneless subjects suffering with disorders of rod and cone photoreceptors.
Revised:  Photoreceptive ganglion cells have been isolated in humans, where, in addition to regulating the circadian rhythm, they have been shown to mediate a degree of light recognition in rodless, coneless subjects suffering with disorders of rod and cone photoreceptors.
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Original:  'Color' pp .332-3Goethe 19 May 1807, conversation with Riemer Kandinsky, in 1911, reprised Goethe, agreeing that painting needed a solid foundational theory, and such theory should be patterned after the model of music theory, and adding that there is a deep relationship between all the arts, not only between music and painting.
Revised:  'Color' pp . 332–3Goethe 19 May 1807, conversation with Riemer Kandinsky, in 1911, reprised Goethe, agreeing that painting needed a solid foundational theory, and such theory should be patterned after the model of music theory, and adding that there is a deep relationship between all the arts, not only between music and painting.
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Original:  'Klee's theory courses', p. 246 and under 'notes to pages 245-54' p.365 Structural semantic rhetoric The Belgian semioticians known under the name Groupe µ, developed a method of painting research called structural semantic rhetoric;
Revised:  'Klee's theory courses', p. 246 and under 'notes to pages 245–54' p. 365 Structural semantic rhetoric The Belgian semioticians known under the name Groupe µ, developed a method of painting research called structural semantic rhetoric;
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