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Original:  While there were no legal gender restrictions of the office professions, it was very controversial for a woman to be an office clerk, especially if she was a member of the nobility,Artikel i Idun nr 9 1893 as Hård was, though form a poor family.
Revised:  While there were no legal gender restrictions of the office professions, it was very controversial for a woman to be an office clerk, especially if she was a member of the nobility,Artikel i Idun nr 9 1893 as Hård was, though from a poor family.
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Original:  In 1893, when the profession of office clerk had became common form women in Sweden, she was celebrated by the women's paper Idun as a pioneer who opened the profession of clerk for other of her gender.
Revised:  In 1893, when the profession of office clerk had become common for women in Sweden, she was celebrated by the women's paper Idun as a pioneer who opened the profession of clerk for other of her gender.
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Original:  In 1893, when the profession of office clerk had became common form women in Sweden, she was celebrated by the women's paper Idun as a pioneer who opened the profession of clerk for other of her gender.
Revised:  In 1893, when the profession of office clerk had became common form women in Sweden, she was celebrated by the women's paper Idun as a pioneer who opened the profession of clerk for others of her gender.
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Original:  From 1991 – 1992, she completed a bridging program, combining her final year of high school and freshmen year of college at the Clarkson School in Potsdam, New York.
Revised:  From 1991 to 1992, she completed a bridging program, combining her final year of high school and freshmen year of college at the Clarkson School in Potsdam, New York.
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Original:  Nwuneli founded, and is the Chair, of Nourishing Africa, a digital knowledge, financing, and data hub which is enabling agribusiness entrepreneurs in 34 African countries to scale.
Revised:  Nwuneli founded, and is the chair of, Nourishing Africa, a digital knowledge, financing, and data hub which is enabling agribusiness entrepreneurs in 34 African countries to scale.
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Original:  In the Indian Epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet"  meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instil fear to bring peace.
Revised:  In the Indian epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet" meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instil fear to bring peace.
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Original:  In the Indian Epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet"  meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instil fear to bring peace.
Revised:  In the Indian Epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet" , meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instil fear to bring peace.
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Original:  In the Indian Epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet"  meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instil fear to bring peace.
Revised:  In the Indian Epic Ramayana, considered 7000 years old, Lord Rama is quoted as saying "Bhay Bin Hoye na Preet" meaning once prayers for peace fail, one may need to instill fear to bring peace.
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Original:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States is bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former US Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the rebalance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
Revised:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States was bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former US Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the rebalance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
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Original:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States is bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former US Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the rebalance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
Revised:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States is bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former U.S. Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the rebalance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
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Original:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States is bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former US Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the rebalance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
Revised:  In 1943, at the peak of World War II, the founder of the Paneuropean Union, Richard von Coudenhove-Kalergi, argued that after the war the United States is bound to take "command of the skies" to ensure the lasting world peace: In 2016, former US Secretary of Defense Ash Carter envisaged that the re-balance to the Asia-Pacific will make the region "peaceful" through "strength":
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Original: TelexistenceSusumu Tachi, Telexistence, World Scientific Publishing Company, , 2009 is fundamentally a concept named for the general technology that enables a human being to have a real-time sensation of being at a place other than where he or she actually exists , and being able to interact with the remote environment, which may be real, virtual, or a combination of both.
Revised: TelexistenceSusumu Tachi, Telexistence, World Scientific Publishing Company, , 2009 is fundamentally a concept named for the general technology that enables a human being to have a real-time sensation of being at a place other than where they actually exist , and being able to interact with the remote environment, which may be real, virtual, or a combination of both.
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Original: The expansion of the British Empire fitted in with the broader notion of social Darwinism used from the 1870s onwards to account for the remarkable and universal phenomenon of "the Anglo-Saxon overflowing his boundaries", as phrased by the late-Victorian sociologist Benjamin Kidd in Social Evolution, published in 1894.
Revised: The massive expansion in Western colonialism during the New Imperialism era fitted in with the broader notion of social Darwinism used from the 1870s onwards to account for the remarkable and universal phenomenon of "the Anglo-Saxon overflowing his boundaries", as phrased by the late-Victorian sociologist Benjamin Kidd in Social Evolution, published in 1894.
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Original: The expansion of the British Empire fitted in with the broader notion of social Darwinism used from the 1870s onwards to account for the remarkable and universal phenomenon of "the Anglo-Saxon overflowing his boundaries", as phrased by the late-Victorian sociologist Benjamin Kidd in Social Evolution, published in 1894.
Revised: The expansion of the British Empire fitted in with the broader notion of social Darwinism used from the 1870s onwards to account for the phenomenon of "the Anglo-Saxon overflowing his boundaries", as phrased by the late-Victorian sociologist Benjamin Kidd in Social Evolution, published in 1894.
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Original:  The laboratory test was developed by Astute Medical, in San Diego, California, in collaboration with clinical investigators. It was notable for being the first test of its kind for determining whether certain critically ill hospitalized patients were at risk of developing moderate to severe acute kidney injury (AKI) in the next 12 hours. Early knowledge that a patient is likely to develop AKI may prompt closer patient monitoring and help prevent permanent kidney damage or death. History Nephrocheck took six years to be developed.
Revised:  Nephrocheck took six years to be developed.
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Original:  History Nephrocheck took six years to be developed. The development included a discovery effort that tested over 300 possible biomarkers in clinical samples, an immunoassay cartridge and meter, clinical validation of the test in a series of extensive trials in the United States and Europe, CE mark in European countries and FDA-clearance to market it in the United States. It cost approximately $100,000,000 to develop and is intended for patients who are admitted to the hospital. The cost of the test is covered by a diagnostic related group (DRG) payment. The list price of the test to a hospital in the United States is $85. The price of the meter is approximately $5,000. Nephrocheck uses two urinary cell-cycle arrest biomarkers (e.g., TIMP-2 and IGFBP7) to determine if a person is at increased risk for developing moderate to severe acute kidney injury (AKI) in the next 12 hours.
Revised:  History NephroCheck tests for the presence of insulin-like growth-factor binding protein 7 ( IGFBP7) to determine if a person is at increased risk for developing moderate to severe acute kidney injury (AKI) in the next 12 hours.
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Original:  Nephrocheck uses two urinary cell-cycle arrest biomarkers (e.g., TIMP-2 and IGFBP7) to determine if a person is at increased risk for developing moderate to severe acute kidney injury (AKI) in the next 12 hours.FDA PR, ibid Knowing this information earlier theoretically may improve patient outcomes by allowing clinicians to focus on high risk patients and prevent further injury.
Revised:  Nephrocheck uses two urinary cell-cycle arrest biomarkers (e.g., TIMP-2 and IGFBP7) Knowing this information earlier theoretically may improve patient outcomes by allowing clinicians to focus on high risk patients and prevent further injury.
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Original: FDA PR, ibid Knowing this information earlier theoretically may improve patient outcomes by allowing clinicians to focus on high risk patients and prevent further injury. Diagnosis of AKI is often difficult, and delays in diagnosis are common. Acute kidney injury is common in critically ill patients, and AKI is a major cause of death and long-term morbidity in these patients. Common functional markers, such as serum creatinine, have been used, yet they are late indicators of AKI.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Pre-NephroCheck Serum creatinine (sCr), the most widely used marker of kidney function, is a component of the definition of AKI, and as a single measurement is unhelpful in differentiating acute from chronic kidney disease. While sCr is an adequate marker of renal function (GFR), sCr itself does not correlate with hospital survival whether measured at the time of presentation or the start of dialysis. sCR is insensitive and slow to change after kidney injury, leading to a late and inaccurate diagnosis of AKI with adverse outcomes. The more predictive changes in sCr require several hours to days before they reach steady state following an injury to the kidney. The change in sCr is a tool for defining when a change in kidney function has occurred, but not good for detecting that which is presently occurring (or about to occur). Regardless of the advanced technologies available, AKI remains a common disorder that complicates the hospital course for many patients. Unlike a myocardial infarction, AKI is usually silent, and does not cause any physical symptoms. Given the financial and human costs associated with AKI, there is a critical need for better identification and assessment of those patients at risk. The need for better assessment tools prompted the development of the NephroCheck test , which included the discovery and identification of AKI biomarkers.
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Original:  Application of TIMP-2 and IGFBP7 via NephroCheck The markers appear to be short-lived in the urine after AKI has occurred. This may be normal in patients who have already manifested AKI by functional criteria (e.g., serum creatinine). An international Clinical Practice Guideline for AKI recommends risk assessment but acknowledges the lack of tools available to perform risk assessment .
Revised:  Application of TIMP-2 and tissue inhibitor of metalloproteinases (TIMP-2) in the urine, which are associated with acute kidney injury. The laboratory test was developed by Astute Medical, in San Diego, California .
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Original:  They first formulated the mean speed theorem : a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body  .
Revised:  It is through their understanding of geometry and how different shapes could be used to represent a body in motion. The Calculators related these bodies in relative motion to geometrical shapes and also understood that right triangles area would be equivalent to a rectangles if the rectangles height was half of the triangles. This is what led to the formulating of what is known as the mean speed theorem : a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body .
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Original:  They first formulated the mean speed theorem : a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body  .
Revised:  They first formulated the mean speed theorem . A basic definition of the mean speed theorem is; a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body .
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Original:  They first formulated the mean speed theorem : a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body  .
Revised:  They first formulated the mean speed theorem : a body moving with constant speed will travel the same distance as an accelerated body in the same period of time as long as the body with constant speed travels at half of the sum of initial and final velocities for the accelerated body . Relative motion, also referred to as local motion, can be defined as motion relative to another object where the values for acceleration, velocity, and position are dependent upon a predetermined reference point .
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Original:  Civil administration was established throughout the area, the building of an infrastructure was begun, and agreements regarding the transit trade of Mozambique's land-locked neighbours to the west  were made.
Revised:  Civil administration was established throughout the area, the building of an infrastructure was begun, and agreements regarding the transit trade of Mozambique's land-locked neighbours to the west , such as Southern Rhodesia, Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland, were made.
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Original: Undernutrition in children, where an individual is not getting enough calories, protein, or micronutrients , is common globally and may result in both short and long term irreversible negative health outcomes.
Revised: Undernutrition in children, occurs when children do not consume enough calories, protein, or micronutrients , is common globally and may result in both short and long term irreversible negative health outcomes.
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Original: Undernutrition in children, where an individual is not getting enough calories, protein, or micronutrients , is common globally and may result in both short and long term irreversible negative health outcomes.
Revised: Undernutrition in children, where an individual is not getting enough calories, protein, or micronutrients to maintain good health. It is common globally and may result in both short and long term irreversible negative health outcomes.
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Original:  World Health Organization (WHO), Geneva, Switzerland The main causes  are often related to poverty: unsafe water, inadequate sanitation or insufficient hygiene, factors related to society, diseases, maternal factors, gender issues  . Background Starved child in Somalia Linked to ⅓ of all child deaths, malnutrition is especially dangerous for women and children.
Revised:  World Health Organization (WHO), Geneva, Switzerland The main causes of malnutrition are often related to poverty: unsafe water, inadequate sanitation or insufficient hygiene, factors related to society, diseases, maternal factors, gender issues . Background Starved child in Somalia Linked to ⅓ of all child deaths, malnutrition is especially dangerous for women and children.
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Original:  World Health Organization (WHO), Geneva, Switzerland The main causes  are often related to poverty: unsafe water, inadequate sanitation or insufficient hygiene, factors related to society, diseases, maternal factors, gender issues  . Background Starved child in Somalia Linked to ⅓ of all child deaths, malnutrition is especially dangerous for women and children.
Revised:  World Health Organization (WHO), Geneva, Switzerland The main causes are often related to poverty: unsafe water, inadequate sanitation or insufficient hygiene, factors related to society, diseases, maternal factors, gender issues as well as other factors . Background Starved child in Somalia Linked to ⅓ of all child deaths, malnutrition is especially dangerous for women and children.
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Original:  There are a variety of ways in which malnutrition can affect the body . Common micronutrient deficiencies are iron, zinc, iodine, and vitamin A.
Revised:  The WHO reported that two out of five children that are stunted live in Southern Asia, however Africa is the only region where there is an increasing number of stunted children . Common micronutrient deficiencies are iron, zinc, iodine, and vitamin A.
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Original:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs URL No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any URL Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female URL In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
Revised:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs 10.0\%). No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any URL Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female URL In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
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Original:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs URL No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any URL Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female URL In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
Revised:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs URL No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any patient. Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female URL In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
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Original:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs URL No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any URL Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female URL In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
Revised:  The 2-year probability of disease-free survival (DFS) was significantly higher in the G-PBSC group than in the control group (38.9\% vs URL No graft-versus-host disease was observed in any URL Persistent donor microchimerism was successfully detected in all of the 4 female patients. In another long-term research from 2004-2011, 101 patients with AML-CR1 (9 to 65 years old) received Microtransplantation regimen.
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Original:  The 6-year LFS and OS were 76.4\% and 82.1\%, respectively, in patients who received a high dose of donor CD3+ T cells, which were significantly higher than the LFS and OS in patients who received a lower dose of donor CD3+ T cells (49.5\% and 55.3\%, URL No GVHD was observed in any of the URL
Revised:  The 6-year LFS and OS were 76.4\% and 82.1\%, respectively, in patients who received a high dose of donor CD3+ T cells, which were significantly higher than the LFS and OS in patients who received a lower dose of donor CD3+ T cells (49.5\% and 55.3\%, respectively). No GVHD was observed in any of the URL
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Original:  The 6-year LFS and OS were 76.4\% and 82.1\%, respectively, in patients who received a high dose of donor CD3+ T cells, which were significantly higher than the LFS and OS in patients who received a lower dose of donor CD3+ T cells (49.5\% and 55.3\%, URL No GVHD was observed in any of the URL
Revised:  The 6-year LFS and OS were 76.4\% and 82.1\%, respectively, in patients who received a high dose of donor CD3+ T cells, which were significantly higher than the LFS and OS in patients who received a lower dose of donor CD3+ T cells (49.5\% and 55.3\%, URL No GVHD was observed in any of the patients.
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Original: Rao Jaimal and Patta (Rajasthan , mounted on a pair of black marble elephants which stood outside the Delhi Gate at the Red Fort. They originally stood outside the fort at Agra upThe Mughal Emperor Akbar shoots the Rajput warrior Jaimal during the Siege of Chittorgarh in 1568 
Revised: Rao Jaimal and Patta (Rajasthan ) statues in Nyatapola temple, Bhaktapur Nepal | succession = Ruler of Merta | reign = 1540s-1562 | predecessor = Rao Veeram Dev | birth_date = | death_date = 22 February 1568 
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Original:  They originally stood outside the fort at Agra upThe Mughal Emperor Akbar shoots the Rajput warrior Jaimal during the Siege of Chittorgarh in 1568 
Revised:  They originally stood outside the fort at Agra upThe Mughal Emperor Akbar shoots the Rajput warrior Jaimal during the Siege of Chittorgarh in 1568 ; in Chittorgarh | father = | issue = Ramdas Rathore
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