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Original: The joint statement was issued after a US-Japan meeting, attended by US Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Japanese Foreign Minister Nobutaka Machimura , and Japan's defense chief Yoshinori Ono.
Revised: The joint statement was issued after a US-Japan meeting, attended by US Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, Condoleezza Rice, Japanese Foreign Minister Nobutaka Machimura , and Japan's defense chief Yoshinori Ono.
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Original: The joint statement was issued after a US-Japan meeting, attended by US Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Japanese Foreign Minister Nobutaka Machimura , and Japan's defense chief Yoshinori Ono.
Revised: The joint statement was issued after a US-Japan meeting, attended by US Defense Secretary Donald Rumsfeld, Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice, Japanese , and Japan's defense chief Yoshinori Ono.
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Original:  "To be honest with you, Mr. Dosanjh got it right the other day when he said just to extend the mission for two years without a proper debate and a plan is wrong, but to do an immediate pullout, or a very quick pullout, is also wrong, Stoffer said to the Globe and Mail adding "without a comprehensive plan, what are you pulling out for?
Revised:  "To be honest with you, Mr. Dosanjh got it right the other day when he said just to extend the mission for two years without a proper debate and a plan is wrong, but to do an immediate pullout, or a very quick pullout, is also wrong, Stoffer said to the adding "without a comprehensive plan, what are you pulling out for?
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Original:  The men's team final in artistic  reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points.  took silver with 271.952 points, and  got bronze with 271.711 points.
Revised:  The men's team final in artistic gymnastics reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points. took silver with 271.952 points, and got bronze with 271.711 points.
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Original:  The men's team final in artistic  reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points.  took silver with 271.952 points, and  got bronze with 271.711 points.
Revised:  The men's team final in artistic reached a tense conclusion last night at the Olympic Games in London. China took gold with 275.995 points. took silver with 271.952 points, and got bronze with 271.711 points.
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Original:  The men's team final in artistic  reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points.  took silver with 271.952 points, and  got bronze with 271.711 points.
Revised:  The men's team final in artistic reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points. Japan took silver with 271.952 points, and got bronze with 271.711 points.
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Original:  The men's team final in artistic  reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points.  took silver with 271.952 points, and  got bronze with 271.711 points.
Revised:  The men's team final in artistic reached a tense conclusion last night at the in . took gold with 275.995 points. took silver with 271.952 points, and Great Britain got bronze with 271.711 points.
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Original:  Smith also promised great things from Britain's up-and-coming male gymnasts, promising that team members and would improve for the next in . Smith also commended the junior squad: "The juniors we've got coming up — we've been junior European champions for the last six years — there's so much depth."
Revised:  Smith also promised great things from Britain's up-and-coming male gymnasts, promising that team members and would improve for the next Olympics in Rio . Smith also commended the junior squad: "The juniors we've got coming up — we've been junior European champions for the last six years — there's so much depth."
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Original:  The Directorate has alleged that Singh "jointly and severally" illegally acquired foreign exchange $8.9 lakh alongwith his son Jagat and three others.
Revised:  The ED, which is responsible for enforcing foreign exchange control laws, has alleged that Singh "jointly and severally" illegally acquired foreign exchange $8.9 lakh alongwith his son Jagat and three others.
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Original:  The Directorate has alleged that Singh "jointly and severally" illegally acquired foreign exchange $8.9 lakh alongwith his son Jagat and three others. The 18-page show-cause notice issued by the ED says the money was acquired by the accused, in violation of U.N regulations, in exchange for two oil contracts awarded to Iraq's State Oil Marketing Organisation (SOMO). Of the $ 8,90,000, $7,48,550 was allegedly transferred by them to an account in the Jordan National Bank, the remaining $1,46,247.23, which was the commission for the oil-contracts, was deposited with Barclays Bank, in the Channel Islands.
Revised:  The Directorate has alleged that Singh "jointly and severally" illegally acquired foreign exchange worth $8.9 lakh illegally. The 18-page show-cause notice issued by the ED says the money was acquired by the accused, in violation of U.N regulations, in exchange for two oil contracts awarded to Iraq's State Oil Marketing Organisation (SOMO). Of the $ 8,90,000, $7,48,550 was allegedly transferred by them to an account in the Jordan National Bank, the remaining $1,46,247.23, which was the commission for the oil-contracts, was deposited with Barclays Bank, in the Channel Islands.
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Original:  There is some potential for developement according to the National Hurricane Center and showers and thunderstorms are still showing signs of organization within a large circulation.
Revised:  No major change in strength is expected in the next 24 hours while winds are close to 35 MPH with higher gusts. The depression is a little disorganized according to the National Hurricane Center and showers and thunderstorms are still showing signs of organization within a large circulation.
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Original: Sean Finning at a race in 2006 Yesterday, the Australian finalized the country's  team by naming 2006 Commonwealth Games gold medalist and sighted guide cyclist Sean Finning to the team.
Revised: Sean Finning at a race in 2006 Yesterday, the Australian finalized the country's Paralympic team by naming 2006 Commonwealth Games gold medalist and sighted guide cyclist Sean Finning to the team.
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Original:  Finning had stepped away from tandem cycling for a while in order to pursue his own individual cycling ambitions, which saw him compete in February at the Ararat Classic Track Carnival and in March at the Bendigo International Madison and the Oceania championships in  .
Revised:  Finning had stepped away from tandem cycling for a while in order to pursue his own individual cycling ambitions, which saw him compete in February at the Ararat Classic Track Carnival and in March at the Bendigo International Madison and the Oceania championships in New Zealand .
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Original:  The other opposition party leader Erkan Mumcu emphasized the public reluctancy about the mission and said "In the surveys, an average of 86\%, in the least attended surveys around 74.6\% of the participants have rejected the idea to send troops.".
Revised:  The other opposition party leader Erkan Mumcu emphasized the public reluctance about the mission and said "In the surveys, an average of 86\%, in the least attended surveys around 74.6\% of the participants have rejected the idea to send troops.".
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Original: President Pervez Musharraf of Pakistan The President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf is in Kabul for a two-day visit during which he is scheduled to hold talks with his Afghan counterpart, Hamid Karzai .
Revised: President Pervez Musharraf of Pakistan The President of Pakistan, Pervez Musharraf is in Kabul for a two-day visit during which he is scheduled to hold talks with his Afghan counterpart, .
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Original:  Karzai meets NATO chief President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan On Wednesday, President Karzai met the NATO General Secretary Jaap de Hoop Scheffer in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
Revised:  Karzai meets NATO chief President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan On Wednesday, President Karzai met the General Secretary in Kabul and signed an accord aimed at boosting security and development in the country.
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Original:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the Helmand province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in Zabul province.
Revised:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in Zabul province.
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Original:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the Helmand province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in Zabul province.
Revised:  Suspected Taliban militants shot dead two muslim clerics in Lashkar Gah, capital of the Helmand province in the last two days and raided a district headquarters in the town of Arghandad in province.
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Original:  For example, while only 12\% of American Caucasians have it, its prevelance is 75\% among African Americans, 93\% among Chinese, 60\%-80\% among Ashkenazi Jews,and 100\% among American Indians.
Revised:  For example, while only 12\% of American Caucasians have it, its prevalence is 75\% among African Americans, 93\% among Chinese, 60\%-80\% among Ashkenazi Jews,and 100\% among American Indians.
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Original:  Philbin ’ s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ’ s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ’ s Got Talent.
Revised:  Philbin ' s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ’ s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ’ s Got Talent.
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Original:  Philbin ’ s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ’ s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ’ s Got Talent.
Revised:  Philbin ’ s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ' s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ’ s Got Talent.
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Original:  Philbin ’ s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ’ s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ’ s Got Talent.
Revised:  Philbin ’ s television experience goes back to the late-1960s as the sidekick to Joey Bishop, then continued with a short-lived series with Mary Hart, then the long-running Live, with co-hosts including Kathy Lee Gifford, the popular ABC game show Who Wants to be a Millionaire, the 2005 New Year ’ s broadcast for FOX, and NBC talent series America ' s Got Talent.
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Original: , star of the popular '90s sitcom , won the presidential nomination of the California-based  on Saturday, guaranteeing her in California, the most populous U.S. state. activist of California was selected as her .
Revised: , star of the popular '90s sitcom , won the presidential nomination of the California-based Peace and Freedom Party on Saturday, guaranteeing her in California, the most populous U.S. state. activist of California was selected as her .
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Original:  " “ Although he is not a local resident and has never lived here, Peter Brock was very much an honorary citizen of Bathurst and has over his career had a significant impact on the lives of many people in this community – our local radio station B-Rock FM is even named after him," said the mayor.
Revised:  " " Although he is not a local resident and has never lived here, Peter Brock was very much an honorary citizen of Bathurst and has over his career had a significant impact on the lives of many people in this community – our local radio station B-Rock FM is even named after him," said the mayor.
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Original:  Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello finished 6th and 9th . Räikkönen's teammate, McLaren Mercedes driver Pedro de la Rosa will start 8th after Poland Robert Kubica .
Revised:  Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello finished 6th and 9th , but due to Alonso's penalty they will start 5th and 8th respectivley Räikkönen's teammate, McLaren Mercedes driver Pedro de la Rosa will start 8th after Poland Robert Kubica .
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Original:  Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello finished 6th and 9th . Räikkönen's teammate, McLaren Mercedes driver Pedro de la Rosa will start 8th after Poland Robert Kubica .
Revised:  Jenson Button and Rubens Barrichello finished 6th and 9th . Räikkönen's teammate, McLaren Mercedes driver Pedro de la Rosa will start 8th after Poland Robert Kubica , but due to Alonso's penalty Kubica will start 6th and De la Rosa will start 7th
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Original:  “ A few of my guys had spotted him in an open field, the helicopter zeroed in on him, ” said Lenny DePaul, commanding officer of the US Marshals Service fugitive task force.
Revised:  " A few of my guys had spotted him in an open field, the helicopter zeroed in on him, ” said Lenny DePaul, commanding officer of the US Marshals Service fugitive task force.
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Original:  “ A few of my guys had spotted him in an open field, the helicopter zeroed in on him, ” said Lenny DePaul, commanding officer of the US Marshals Service fugitive task force.
Revised:  “ A few of my guys had spotted him in an open field, the helicopter zeroed in on him, " said Lenny DePaul, commanding officer of the US Marshals Service fugitive task force.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the  concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for  and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the  gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic Games concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the  concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for  and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the  gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the  concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for  and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the  gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for and gold medals for the Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the  concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for  and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the  gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the concluded yesterday with two gold medal wins for and gold medals for the and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original: Laws circumscribing online privacy rights in the EU are more strict than in the US. PRIME, the EU's Privacy and Identity Management for Europe project, says: "The concept of a user-controlled identity management system implements the EU Directives 95/46/EC and 2002/58/EC, whose purpose is to safeguard individuals ’ fundamental rights and freedom, including the right to privacy.
Revised: Laws circumscribing online privacy rights in the EU are more strict than in the US. PRIME, the EU's Privacy and Identity Management for Europe project, says: "The concept of a user-controlled identity management system implements the EU Directives 95/46/EC and 2002/58/EC, whose purpose is to safeguard individuals ' fundamental rights and freedom, including the right to privacy.
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Original: Leander Paes and Martin Damm crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat Jonas Bjorkman and Max Mirnyi 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the 2006 U.S. Open tennis tournament.
Revised: and crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat Jonas Bjorkman and Max Mirnyi 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the 2006 U.S. Open tennis tournament.
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Original: Leander Paes and Martin Damm crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat Jonas Bjorkman and Max Mirnyi 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the 2006 U.S. Open tennis tournament.
Revised: Leander Paes and Martin Damm crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat and 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the 2006 U.S. Open tennis tournament.
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Original: Leander Paes and Martin Damm crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat Jonas Bjorkman and Max Mirnyi 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the 2006 U.S. Open tennis tournament.
Revised: Leander Paes and Martin Damm crowned their first year as a pair on Saturday as they beat Jonas Bjorkman and Max Mirnyi 6-7, 6-4, 6-3 to win the men's doubles title at the tennis tournament.
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Original:  An earthquake struck in the Gulf of Mexico with a magnitude of 6.0, a strength very rare for that region of the world, at 10:56am EDT (14:56 UTC) on September 10.
Revised:  An earthquake struck in the with a magnitude of 6.0, a strength very rare for that region of the world, at 10:56am EDT (14:56 UTC) on September 10.
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Original:  According to the U.S. Geographical Survey , the quake's epicenter was 260 miles (418 km) WSW (240°) of Clearwater , Florida, and 329 miles (529 km) southeast (145°) of New Orleans, Louisiana, at a depth of 6.2 miles (10 km).
Revised:  According to the , the quake's epicenter was 260 miles (418 km) WSW (240°) of Clearwater , Florida, and 329 miles (529 km) southeast (145°) of New Orleans, Louisiana, at a depth of 6.2 miles (10 km).
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Original:  According to the U.S. Geographical Survey , the quake's epicenter was 260 miles (418 km) WSW (240°) of Clearwater , Florida, and 329 miles (529 km) southeast (145°) of New Orleans, Louisiana, at a depth of 6.2 miles (10 km).
Revised:  According to the U.S. Geographical Survey , the quake's epicenter was 260 miles (418 km) WSW (240°) of , Florida, and 329 miles (529 km) southeast (145°) of New Orleans, Louisiana, at a depth of 6.2 miles (10 km).
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Original: After two days of mourning, the West African nation  is giving its late president  a state and military burial today at Geese Park, a bird sanctuary near the seat of government, Osu Castle, along the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: After two days of mourning, the West African nation Ghana is giving its late president a state and military burial today at Geese Park, a bird sanctuary near the seat of government, Osu Castle, along the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original: After two days of mourning, the West African nation  is giving its late president  a state and military burial today at Geese Park, a bird sanctuary near the seat of government, Osu Castle, along the Atlantic Ocean.
Revised: After two days of mourning, the West African nation is giving its late president John Atta Mills a state and military burial today at Geese Park, a bird sanctuary near the seat of government, Osu Castle, along the Atlantic Ocean.
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Original: Group photo of Ayman al-Zawahiri, Osama Bin Laden Abu Hafs . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
Revised:  Abu Hafs . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
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Original: Group photo of Ayman al-Zawahiri, Osama Bin Laden Abu Hafs . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
Revised: Group photo of Ayman al-Zawahiri, Osama Bin Laden September 11, 2001 attacks in New York City: View of the World Trade Center and the Statue of Liberty . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
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Original: September 11, 2001 attacks in New York City: View of the World Trade Center and the Statue of Liberty  . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
Revised: Group photo of Ayman al-Zawahiri, Osama Bin Laden . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
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Original: September 11, 2001 attacks in New York City: View of the World Trade Center and the Statue of Liberty  . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
Revised: September 11, 2001 attacks in New York City: View of the World Trade Center and the Statue of Liberty Abu Hafs . Al-Qaida released a 9/11 message to the American public today, and with it comes a threat for the American people.
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