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Original:  Yesterday, King Albert II of Belgium was present at an official meeting at Bastongne. Afterwards, he has thrown nuts into the audience. By doing so, he reminded the people present of the famous answer by the American general MacAuliffe to the german question if the Americans would surrender.
Revised:  Yesterday, King Albert II of Belgium —in attendance at the famous answer by the American general MacAuliffe to the german question if the Americans would surrender.
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Original:  By doing so, he reminded the people present of the famous answer by the American general MacAuliffe to the german question if the Americans would surrender. He answered:  "Nuts "!
Revised:  By doing so, he reminded the people present of the Mardasson monument, the festivities included a parade of military vehicles, soldiers that participated in the battle, as well as a light show. "Nuts "!
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Original:  48-year old Alain Robert , affectionately known as the ' French Spiderman ', has climbed a 57-storey Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
Revised:  48-year old Alain Robert , affectionately known as the ' French Spiderman ', has climbed a 57-storey w|Sydney skyscraper without any equipment in 20 minutes.
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Original: Microserv Computer Technologies (Internet Service Provider) and Trango Broadband Wireless (fixed-wireless equipment maker) announced on Tuesday August 11th 2005 that they wirelessly transmitted data 137.2 miles over an unlicensed spectrum.
Revised: Microserv Computer Technologies (Internet Service Provider) and Trango Broadband Wireless (fixed-wireless equipment maker) announced on Tuesday August 11 2005 that they wirelessly transmitted data 137.2 miles over an unlicensed spectrum.
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Original: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised: U2 perform at the , . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised: U2 perform at the King Baudouin Stadium, Brussels . Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  Charles Arthur, technology editor of The Guardian , wrote that the decline in sales of MP3 players was a "problem" for record companies, saying that "digital music sales are only growing as fast as those of Apple's devices – and as the stand-alone digital music player starts to die off, people may lose interest in buying songs from digital stores.
Revised:  Charles Arthur, technology editor of , wrote that the decline in sales of MP3 players was a "problem" for record companies, saying that "digital music sales are only growing as fast as those of Apple's devices – and as the stand-alone digital music player starts to die off, people may lose interest in buying songs from digital stores.
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, , or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the CD , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
Revised:  The music industry had looked to the iPod to drive people to buy music in download form, whether from Apple's iTunes music store, eMusic, Napster or from newer competitors such as Amazon ." Mark Mulligan, a music and digital media analyst at Forrester Research , said in an interview that "at a time where we're asking if digital is a replacement for the , as the CD was for vinyl, we should be starting to see a hockey-stick growth in download sales.
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Original:  Nick Farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs , CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
Revised:  Nick Farrell, a journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs , CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
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Original:  Nick Farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on Steve Jobs , CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
Revised:  Nick Farrell, a TechEYE journalist, stated that the reason for the decline in music sales could be attributed to record companies' continued reliance on , CEO of Apple, saying that they had considered him the "industry's saviour", and by having this mindset had forgotten "that the iPod is only for those who want their music on the run.
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Original:  The App Store is hugely successful, with Apple earning $410m in two years soley from Apps, sales of which they get 30\%. In two years, 5bn apps have been downloaded—while in seven years, 10bn songs have been purchased. Mulligan thinks that there is a reason for this—the quality of apps simply does not match up to a piece of music. "You can download a song from iTunes to your iPhone or iPad, but at the moment music in that form doesn't play to the strengths of the device. Just playing a track isn't enough." 300px|The most recent incarnation of the iPod Nano. While digital music sales have been decreasing, the iTunes store now sells television shows and films, and the company has recently launced iBooks, a new e-book store. The App Store is hugely successful, with Apple earning $ 410m in two years soley from Apps, sales of which they get 30\%.
Revised:  The App Store is hugely successful, with Apple earning $410m in two years soley from Apps, sales of which they get 30\%. In two years, 5bn apps have been downloaded—while in seven years, 10bn songs have been purchased. Mulligan thinks that there is a reason for this—the quality of apps simply does not match up to a piece of music. "You can download a song from iTunes to your iPhone or iPad, but at the moment music in that form doesn't play to the strengths of the device. Just playing a track isn't enough." 300px|The most recent incarnation of the iPod Nano. While digital music sales have been decreasing, the now sells television shows and films, and the company has recently launced , a new store. The is hugely successful, with Apple earning $ 410m in two years soley from Apps, sales of which they get 30\%.
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Original:  Adam Liversage, a spokesperson of the British Phonographic Industry , which represents the major UK record labels, notes that the rise of streaming services such as Spotify may be a culprit in the fall in music sales.
Revised:  Adam Liversage, a spokesperson of the , which represents the major UK record labels, notes that the rise of streaming services such as Spotify may be a culprit in the fall in music sales.
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Original:  Adam Liversage, a spokesperson of the British Phonographic Industry , which represents the major UK record labels, notes that the rise of streaming services such as Spotify may be a culprit in the fall in music sales.
Revised:  Adam Liversage, a spokesperson of the British Phonographic Industry , which represents the major UK record labels, notes that the rise of streaming services such as may be a culprit in the fall in music sales.
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Original:  Arthur also notes that "the Canadian rock band Rush has an app, and the industrial rock band Nine Inch Nails , led by Trent Reznor – who has been critical of the music industry for bureaucracy and inertia – released the band's first app in April 2009."
Revised:  Arthur also notes that "the Canadian rock band Rush has an app, and the industrial rock band , led by Trent Reznor – who has been critical of the music industry for bureaucracy and inertia – released the band's first app in April 2009."
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Original:  Arthur also notes that "the Canadian rock band Rush has an app, and the industrial rock band Nine Inch Nails , led by Trent Reznor – who has been critical of the music industry for bureaucracy and inertia – released the band's first app in April 2009."
Revised:  Arthur also notes that "the Canadian rock band Rush has an app, and the industrial rock band Nine Inch Nails , led by – who has been critical of the music industry for bureaucracy and inertia – released the band's first app in April 2009."
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Original:  It is thought that such a system will be an effective method to reduce online piracy —"apps tend to be tied to a particular handset or buyer, making them more difficult to pirate than a CD", he says—and in the music industry, piracy is a very big problem.
Revised:  It is thought that such a system will be an effective method to reduce —"apps tend to be tied to a particular handset or buyer, making them more difficult to pirate than a CD", he says—and in the music industry, piracy is a very big problem.
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Original:  After seeing video images filmed by one of the miners Ruth Contreras, the mother of Carlos Bravo, who is trapped in the mine, said the "he's skinny, bearded and it was painful to see him with his head hanging down, but I am so happy to see him alive ".
Revised:  After seeing video images filmed by one of the miners Ruth Contreras, the mother of Carlos Bravo, who is trapped in the mine, said the "he's skinny, bearded and it was painful to see him with his head hanging down, but I am so happy to see him alive ."
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Original:  Another said that the miners are "sure that there are people here in Chile that are big people, that are powerful people, that are intelligent people, and they have the technology and they will all work together to get us out of here ". Speaking to the camera, one says: "we have had the great fortune that trapped in this mine there are good, professional people.
Revised:  Another said that the miners are "sure that there are people here in Chile that are big people, that are powerful people, that are intelligent people, and they have the technology and they will all work together to get us out of here ." Speaking to the camera, one says: "we have had the great fortune that trapped in this mine there are good, professional people.
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Original:  He said that doctors who had watched the video had observed the men suffering from "severe dermatological problems ". Dr. Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
Revised:  He said that doctors who had watched the video had observed the men suffering from "severe dermatological problems ." Dr. Rodrigo Figueroa, head of the trauma, stress and disaster unit at the in Santiago, Chile, explained that "following the euphoria of being discovered, the normal psychological reaction would be for the men to collapse in a combination of fatigue and stress ...
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Original:  At first they told us he had been crushed [to death]." Esteban Rojas sent up a letter from inside the mine, proposing to his long-time partner Jessica Yanez , 43.
Revised:  At first they told us he had been crushed [to death]." Esteban Rojas sent up a letter from inside the mine, proposing to his long-time partner Jessica Yáñez , 43.
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Original:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989.
Revised:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989.
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Original:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989.
Revised:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989.
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Original:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the Giro d'Italia in 1989.
Revised:  In his career Fignon won 76 races including the La Flèche Wallonne in 1986, Milan-San Remo in both 1988 and 1989 and the in 1989.
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Original: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
Revised: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
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Original: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
Revised: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
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Original: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
Revised: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
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Original: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station S4C , died on Monday at the age of 76.
Revised: Owen Edwards fronted the launch of Welsh language station S4C in 1982 Owen Edwards , the former director of BBC Wales and the first chief executive of Welsh language television station , died on Monday at the age of 76.
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Original:  The Russian foreign office released a statement on the event stating that "we view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
Revised:  The released a statement on the event stating that "we view this incident as an outrageous act in which there is a clear desire by certain forces to interfere with the normal work of the embassy and to bring distrust and tensions to bilateral relations."
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Original:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip , Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
Revised:  A joint statement from Prime Minister , Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
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Original:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip , Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
Revised:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip , Minister of Defense and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
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Original:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip , Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister Urmas Paetissued praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
Revised:  A joint statement from Prime Minister Andrus Ansip , Minister of Defense Jaak Aaviksoo and Foreign Minister praised his "invaluable contribution to the construction of a secure future."
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Original:  This decision was intended to avoid wrong interpretation of them by Coalition . Coalition's claims include that wireless networks can be an alternative to the Labor party "fibre-to-the-home" proposal to introduce more expensive wired Internet.
Revised:  This decision was intended to avoid wrong interpretation of them by . Coalition's claims include that wireless networks can be an alternative to the Labor party "fibre-to-the-home" proposal to introduce more expensive wired Internet.
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Original:  This decision was intended to avoid wrong interpretation of them by Coalition . Coalition's claims include that wireless networks can be an alternative to the Labor party "fibre-to-the-home" proposal to introduce more expensive wired Internet.
Revised:  This decision was intended to avoid wrong interpretation of them by Coalition . Coalition's claims include that wireless networks can be an alternative to the "fibre-to-the-home" proposal to introduce more expensive wired Internet.
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Original:  I am extremely pleased with this decision as it will certainly help to give a fillip to western football development which, in recent times, has been facing numerous challenges." CONCACAF's general secretary Ted Howard toured the islands facilities in August.
Revised:  I am extremely pleased with this decision as it will certainly help to give a fillip to western football development which, in recent times, has been facing numerous challenges." CONCACAF's general secretary toured the islands facilities in August.
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