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Original:  The Sāyana#-bhāshya (critique) on Sāma-vidhāna Brāhmin establishes that note of Sāma were of nidhana prakriti (diminishing nature) and followed a descending order.
Revised:  The Sāyana#-bhāshya (critique) on Sāma-vidhāna Brāhmana establishes that note of Sāma were of nidhana prakriti (diminishing nature) and followed a descending order.
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Original:  Swara of Sām In Naradiya Shiksha the seven notes of Sāma are First, Second, Third, Fourth, Mandra, Krushta and Atiswāra.
Revised:  Swara of Sāma In Naradiya Shiksha the seven notes of Sāma are First, Second, Third, Fourth, Mandra, Krushta and Atiswāra.
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Original:  So the complete Sāmic Saptak in descending order contains: First Note Second Note Third Note Fourth Note Fifth Note Sixth Note Seventh NoteKrushtaPrathamaDwitiyaTritiyaChaturthMandraAtiswārक्रुश्टप्रथमद्वितीयतृतीयचतुर्थमन्द्रअति-स्वार
Revised:  So the complete Sāmic Saptaka in descending order contains: First Note Second Note Third Note Fourth Note Fifth Note Sixth Note Seventh NoteKrushtaPrathamaDwitiyaTritiyaChaturthMandraAtiswārक्रुश्टप्रथमद्वितीयतृतीयचतुर्थमन्द्रअति-स्वार
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Original:  So the complete Sāmic Saptak in descending order contains: First Note Second Note Third Note Fourth Note Fifth Note Sixth Note Seventh NoteKrushtaPrathamaDwitiyaTritiyaChaturthMandraAtiswārक्रुश्टप्रथमद्वितीयतृतीयचतुर्थमन्द्रअति-स्वार
Revised:  So the complete Sāmic Saptak in descending order contains: First Note Second Note Third Note Fourth Note Fifth Note Sixth Note Seventh NoteKrushtaPrathamaDwitiyaTritiyaChaturthaMandraAtiswāraक्रुश्टप्रथमद्वितीयतृतीयचतुर्थमन्द्रअति-स्वार
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Original:  There is also an expression "  Tfu Tfu Tfu" /"Тфу тфу тфу" phrase to represent the sound of spitting simular with Assam in Northeast India.
Revised:  There is also an expression " " (" Tfu Tfu Tfu" /"Тфу тфу тфу" phrase to represent the sound of spitting simular with Assam in Northeast India.
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Original:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others  . Nietzsche  argued that immaculate perception was mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
Revised:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others or a point of view that is not subject to error . Nietzsche argued that immaculate perception was mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
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Original:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others  . Nietzsche  argued that immaculate perception was mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
Revised:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others . Nietzsche used immaculate perception in his interrogation of the myths of purity. Nietzsche, for instance, argued that immaculate perception was mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
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Original:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others  . Nietzsche  argued that immaculate perception was mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
Revised:  It can also refer to the idea that some perspectives are more immaculate than others . Nietzsche argued that immaculate perception is mere fiction because it ignores the intimate connection between the perceiver and the external world.
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Original:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers"  (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
Revised:  Nietzsche also used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers" (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
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Original:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers"  (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
Revised:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality . He attacked the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers" (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
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Original:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers"  (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
Revised:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers" or Rein-Erkennenden (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism.
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Original:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers"  (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) as mere voyeurism. He maintained that perception is not clean or untainted by the object of perception .  Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation is an example of immaculate perception principle or what is also referred to as the "copy theory of perception".
Revised:  Applications Nietsche used immaculate perception in his discussions of the Christian view on sexuality , particularly in his critique of the so-called detachment of the "pure perceivers" (e.g. Kantian view that pure judgments of what is beautiful must be detached) , calling it voyeurism. According to him, loving the Earth from afar for these pure-knowers is hypocritical because they too are earthly but there is shame and bad conscience in this love . Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation is an example of immaculate perception principle or what is also referred to as the "copy theory of perception".
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Original:  He maintained that perception is not clean or untainted by the object of perception .  Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation is an example of immaculate perception principle or what is also referred to as the "copy theory of perception".
Revised:  He maintained that perception is not clean or untainted by the object of perception . Applications An example of immaculate perception principle is Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation is an example of immaculate perception principle or what is also referred to as the "copy theory of perception".
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Original:  He maintained that perception is not clean or untainted by the object of perception .  Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation is an example of immaculate perception principle or what is also referred to as the "copy theory of perception".
Revised:  He maintained that perception is not clean or untainted by the object of perception . Sigmund Freud's theory of mental representation or what some also refer to "copy theory of perception".
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Original: The expression immaculate perception was used by the German philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche in his text Thus Spoke Zarathustra . It pertains to the so-called "pure knowledge" that purportedly circumvents the need for ground body.
Revised: The expression immaculate perception was used by the German philosopher Friedrich Nietzsche in his text Thus Spoke Zarathustra , pertains to the so-called "pure knowledge" that purportedly circumvents the need for ground body.
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Original:  Concept The term was  title of one of Zarathustra's speeches, Von der unbefleckten Erkenntnis, which literally means "On Immaculate Knowledge" or "On Immaculate Cognition.
Revised:  Concept The term was the title of one of Zarathustra's speeches, Von der unbefleckten Erkenntnis, which literally means "On Immaculate Knowledge" or "On Immaculate Cognition.
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Original:  Popular culture Rapper 8Ball released a song in March 2012 titled " immaculate perception "  featuring Waka Flocka Flame and Yelawolf.
Revised:  In popular culture In March 2012, rapper 8Ball released a song in March 2012 titled " immaculate perception " featuring Waka Flocka Flame and Yelawolf.
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Original:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts of the body . == Tigers in traditional Chinese medicines and food== Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
Revised:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts . == Tigers in traditional Chinese medicines and food== Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
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Original:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts of the body . == Tigers in traditional Chinese medicines and food== Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
Revised:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts of the body . Tigers in traditional Chinese medicines and food== Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
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Original:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts of the body . == Tigers in traditional Chinese medicines and food== Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
Revised:  This enables them to breed captive tigers for the purpose of selling their parts of the body . == Tigers in traditional Chinese medicine Instructions for tiger skinning The tail of the tiger is sometimes ground and mixed with soap to create an ointment for use in treating skin cancer.
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Original:  Italic textSmall bones in a tiger's feet tied to a child's wrists are said to be a sure cure for convulsions. upright=1.25|Tiger shooting in Berar On 15 March 2010, the World Federation of Chinese Medicine Societies (WFCMS) issued a statement regarding the use of endangered species for medicinal purposes.
Revised:  Small bones in a tiger's feet tied to a child's wrists are said to be a sure cure for convulsions. upright=1.25|Tiger shooting in Berar On 15 March 2010, the World Federation of Chinese Medicine Societies (WFCMS) issued a statement regarding the use of endangered species for medicinal purposes.
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Original:  Bradbury was honored with a Spoken Word Grammy nomination fo Fahrenheit 451 is considered one of the greatest books of all time . r his 1976 audiobook version .
Revised:  Bradbury was honored with a Spoken Word Grammy nomination for his 1976 audiobook version. Fahrenheit 451 is considered one of the greatest books of all time . r his 1976 audiobook version .
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Original: Information and media literacy ( IML ) enables people to show and make informed judgments as users of information and media, as well as to become skillful creators and producers of information and media messages in their own right.
Revised: Information and media literacy ( OMG ) enables people to show and make informed judgments as users of information and media, as well as to become skillful creators and producers of information and media messages in their own right.
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Original:  Thompson June 1965 – February 1966 Minister for Art and Culture J. Benibengor-BlayAfrica Who's Who, London: Africa Journal for Africa Books Ltd, 1981, p. 230. 1 February 1965 – 1966 Minister for Co-operatives S. A. Kwaku Bonsu 1 February 1965 – ? Minister for Food and Nutrition Joseph Kodzo 1 February 1965 – ?  Minister for Fuel and Power E.
Revised:  Thompson June 1965 – February 1966 Minister for Art and Culture J. Benibengor-BlayAfrica Who's Who, London: Africa Journal for Africa Books Ltd, 1981, p. 230. 1 February 1965 – 1966 Minister for Co-operatives S. A. Kwaku Bonsu 1 February 1965 – 1965 Minister for Food and Nutrition Joseph Kodzo 1 February 1965 – ? Minister for Fuel and Power E.
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Original:  Thompson June 1965 – February 1966 Minister for Art and Culture J. Benibengor-BlayAfrica Who's Who, London: Africa Journal for Africa Books Ltd, 1981, p. 230. 1 February 1965 – 1966 Minister for Co-operatives S. A. Kwaku Bonsu 1 February 1965 – ? Minister for Food and Nutrition Joseph Kodzo 1 February 1965 – ?  Minister for Fuel and Power E.
Revised:  Thompson June 1965 – February 1966 Minister for Art and Culture J. Benibengor-BlayAfrica Who's Who, London: Africa Journal for Africa Books Ltd, 1981, p. 230. 1 February 1965 – 1966 Minister for Co-operatives S. A. Kwaku Bonsu 1 February 1965 – ? Minister for Food and Nutrition Joseph Kodzo 1 February 1965 – ? Hans Kofi Boni Minister for Fuel and Power E.
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Original:  ? Stephen Willie Yeboah Brong Ahafo Regional Commissioner Stephen Willie Yeboah R. O. Amoako-Atta Central Regional Commissioner Joseph Essilfie Hagan Eastern Regional Commissioner Emmanuel Humphrey Tettey Korboe ? – ? Greater Accra Regional Commissioner Paul Teiko Tagoe ? – ? Northern Regional Commissioner Emmanuel Adama Mahama Upper Regional Commissioner Ayeebo Asumda Volta Regional Commissioner Francis Yao Asare Hans Kofi Boni  Joseph Kodzo Western Regional Commissioner John Arthur
Revised:  ? Stephen Willie Yeboah Brong Ahafo Regional Commissioner Stephen Willie Yeboah R. O. Amoako-Atta Central Regional Commissioner Joseph Essilfie Hagan Eastern Regional Commissioner Emmanuel Humphrey Tettey Korboe ? – ? Greater Accra Regional Commissioner Paul Teiko Tagoe ? – ? Northern Regional Commissioner Emmanuel Adama Mahama Upper Regional Commissioner Ayeebo Asumda Volta Regional Commissioner Francis Yao Asare Hans Kofi Boni — Joseph Kodzo Western Regional Commissioner John Arthur
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Original: Laban admitted that his daughters had voluntarily left, saying  " (W)hat can I do to these daughters or to the children which they have bore ?" (Genesis 31:43  ).
Revised: Laban admitted that his daughters had voluntarily left, saying " (W)hat can I do to these daughters or to the children which they have bore ?" (Genesis 31:43 (NIVUK) ).
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Original:  Some of the struggles people with ADHD have might include  high levels of anxiety, and the inability to process disparate informationas quickly as other children. Those with ADHD can be perceived as lazy, stupid or disrespectful. These are not traits of ADHD, but the behavioral symptoms of the condition are often perceived in this way by their teachers and, or, peers .
Revised:  Some of the struggles people with ADHD have might include high levels of anxiety, and the inability to process information .
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Original: Wendy Rahamut  is a Trinidadian author , television personality and chef . She publishes the Caribbean Gourmet magazine and is the host of the TV show Caribbean Flavors, which used to be at CCN TV 6 but now at CNMG TV 9 at 6.30 pm.
Revised: Wendy Rahamut is a Trinidadian author , television personality ,food stylist, teacher, chef and Baker. She owns the Wendy Rahamut school of cooking since 1995. For 10 years she was editor in Chief and owner of Caribbean Gourmet Magazine. She is the executive producer of Caribbean Gourmet magazine and is the host of the TV show Caribbean Flavors, which used to be at CCN TV 6 but now at CNMG TV 9 at 6.30 pm.
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Original:  She publishes the Caribbean Gourmet magazine and is the host of the TV show Caribbean Flavors, which used to be at CCN TV 6 but now at CNMG TV 9 at 6.30 pm. She also holds cooking classes at her cooking school in San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago on Saturdays . Rahamut began writing a weekly food column for the Trinidad Guardian in 1995.
Revised:  She publishes the Caribbean Flavours, the longest running local cooking show which began in 1998 and ran until 2017. After that she introduced Indigenous Bites, an online cooking show with the objective of highlighting local indigenous ingredients grown in Trinidad . Rahamut began writing a weekly food column for the Trinidad Guardian in 1995.
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Original:  She also holds cooking classes at her cooking school in San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago on Saturdays . Rahamut began writing a weekly food column for the Trinidad Guardian in 1995.Stabroek News, March 7, 2003: She was trained in Canada and is of Indo-Trinidadian Descent.
Revised:  She also holds cooking classes at her cooking school in San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago on Saturdays . Rahamut began writing a weekly food column for the Trinidad Guardian from 1995- 2017. She now writes her weekly food column for the Trinidad Newsday.' Rahamut is passionate about local Trinidad foods and cooking and strives to promote wellness through proper nutrition in her local recipes. She also recently introduced a healthy line of artisan Spelt . breads
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Original:  She is a Trinidadian cookbook author of 3 internationally published Caribbean cookbooks,  television personality,food stylist, teacher, chef and Baker.
Revised:  She is a Trinidadian cookbook author of 3 internationally published Caribbean cookbooks, Caribbwan Flavors, Modern Caribbean Cuisine and Curry Callaloo and Calypso. She is a television personality,food stylist, teacher, chef and Baker.
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Original:  Two theories directly address the process of identity formation: Erik Erikson's stages of psychosocial development (specifically the Identity versus Role Confusion stage) and James Marcia's identity status theory  .
Revised:  Two theories directly address the process of identity formation: Erik Erikson's stages of psychosocial development (specifically the Identity versus Role Confusion stage) and James Marcia's identity status theory , and Jeffrey Arnett's theories of identity formation in emerging adulthood .
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Original:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas     .
Revised:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas . Jeffrey Arnett's Theories on Identity Formation and Emerging Adulthood .
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Original:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas     .
Revised:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas Jeffrey Arnett's theory states that identity formation is most prominent in emerging adulthood, consisting of ages 18-25. Arnett holds that identity formation consists of indulging in different life opportunities and possibilities to eventually make important life decisions. He believes this phase of life includes a broad range of opportunities for identity formation, specifically in three different realms. .
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Original:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas     .
Revised:  Identity Achievement: This status is attained when the person has solved the identity issues by making commitments to goals, beliefs, and values after an extensive exploration of different areas Love: In emerging adulthood, individuals explore love to find a profound sense of intimacy. While trying to find love, individuals often explore their identity by focusing on questions such as: "Given the kind of person I am, what kind of person do I wish to have as a partner through life?" Work: Work opportunities that people get involved in are now centered around the idea that they are preparing for careers that they might have throughout adulthood. Individuals explore their identity by asking themselves questions such as: "What kind of work am I good at?", "What kind of work would I find satisfying for the long term", or "What are my chance of getting a job in the field that seems to suit me best?" Worldviews: It is common for those in the stage of emerging adulthood to attend college. There they may be exposed to different worldviews, compared to those they were raised in, and become open to altering their previous worldviews. Individuals who don't attend college also believe that as adult they should also decide what their beliefs and values are .
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Original:  Ancient Indian subcontinent Ancient texts and legends speak of Seven Seas or Sapta Sindhu (Sopto Sindhu). Sindhu and Sagar/Sagor mean sea in different languages of the subcontinent. According to the Vishnu Purana, the seas were Lavana/Lobon (salt), Iksu/Ikkhu (sugar-cane), Sura/Sura (wine), Sarpi (clarified butter or Ghee), Dadhi/Dodhi (yoghurt or curd), Dugdha/Dugdho (milk) and Jala/Jol (water).The Seven Seas and Seven Dwipas in Vishnu Purana. wisdomlib.org There may be variant list of names. For example, there is also mention of a Peeta/Pit Sagara/Sagor ie Yellow Sea. The word Pita means yellow. The Kshira Sagar or Kshir Sagar or Khir Sagor is also the white Sea. The word Kshira/Khir literally means condensed milk.. However, it also denotes white like milk.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Romans The meaning of (Latin) in Ancient Rome is different than the phrase "seven seas" in the modern era. The navigable network in the mouths of the Po river discharges into saltmarshes on the Adriatic shore and was colloquially called the "Seven Seas" in ancient Roman times. Pliny the Elder, a Roman author and fleet commander, wrote about these lagoons, separated from the open sea by sandbanks: All those rivers and trenches were first made by the Etruscans, thus discharging the flow of the river across the marshes of the Atriani called the Seven Seas, with the famous harbor of the Etruscan town of Atria which formerly gave the name of Atriatic to the sea now called the Adriatic.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% All those rivers and trenches were first made by the Etruscans, thus discharging the flow of the river across the marshes of the Atriani called the Seven Seas, with the famous harbor of the Etruscan town of Atria which formerly gave the name of Atriatic to the sea now called the Adriatic.
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