wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a  romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
Revised:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
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Original:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a  romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
Revised:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . She won the Best Supporting Actress Award in the 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
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Original:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a  romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
Revised:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
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Original:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a  romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Bikay is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
Revised:  Five years after, she was wowed viewers with her role in the Visayan movie Panaghoy sa Suba (The Call of the River), a romantic film shot in Bohol with Visayan dialogues with English subtitles, during the Japanese occupation of the Philippines during World War II . In 2004 Metro Manila Film Festival (MMFF) , she was the Best Supporting Actress Award . Lusterio is the fourth among five children of a poor couple.
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Original:  Her father, Verano, is a fisherman ; while her mother, Helen, makes souvenir items out of seashells which she and Rebecca sell at the Alona Beach (Panglao).
Revised:  Her father, Verano, is a fisherman . Meanwhile her mother, Helen, makes souvenir items out of seashells which she and Rebecca sell at the Alona Beach (Panglao).
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Original:  while her mother, Helen, makes souvenir items out of seashells which she and Rebecca sell at the Alona Beach (Panglao). Bikay and her family temporarily stayed in a P600 rented house in Tawala, also in Panglao .
Revised:  while her mother, Helen, makes souvenir items out of seashells which she and Rebecca sell at the Alona Beach in Panglao. Lusterio and her family temporarily stayed in a P600 rented house in Tawala, also in Panglao .
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Original:  Bikay and her family temporarily stayed in a P600 rented house in Tawala, also in Panglao . They left Balicasag for greener pastures.
Revised:  Bikay and her family temporarily stayed in a P600 rented house in Tawala, Panglao that only cost 600 pesos (around 12.36 USD as of 2021). They eventually left for greener pastures.
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Original:  In 2004, the Colegio de San Juan de Letran offered a full-scholarship to Bikay. She is now a 4th year Masscom student. Bikay commutes from Bacoor (Cavite) to the Letran campus in Intramuros during school days.
Revised:  In 2004, the Colegio de San Juan de Letran offered a full-scholarship to Lusterio. She pursued Mass Communication.
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Original:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students and staff Amount of time technology is available to students and staff Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students  with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
Revised:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students , staff, employees and organization members Amount of time technology is available to students and staff Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
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Original:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students and staff Amount of time technology is available to students and staff Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students  with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
Revised:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students and staff Amount of time technology is available to students , staff or organization members Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
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Original:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students and staff Amount of time technology is available to students and staff Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students  with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
Revised:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Availability of technology to students and staff Amount of time technology is available to students and staff Description of types of assistive technology tools that are provided for students , employees or users with disabilities where necessary/applicable.
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Original:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Current technology infrastructure of the school  - explain type of data and video networking and Internet access that is available Effectiveness of present infrastructure and telecommunication service provided How E-Rate has allowed the district to improve or increase technology infrastructure.
Revised:  When evaluating your needs, consider: Current technology infrastructure of the school /organization - explain type of data and video networking and Internet access that is available Effectiveness of present infrastructure and telecommunication service provided How E-Rate has allowed the district to improve or increase technology infrastructure.
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Original: Since the Age of Enlightenment the term "common sense" has frequently been used for rhetorical effect , sometimes pejorative, and sometimes appealed to positively, as an authority. It can be negatively equated to vulgar prejudice and superstition, it is often positively contrasted to them as a standard for good taste and as the source of the most basic axiomsneeded for science and logic .
Revised: Since the Age of Enlightenment the term "common sense" has frequently been used for rhetorical effect both approvingly, as a standard for good taste and as the source of the most basic axiomsneeded for science and logic .
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Original:  It can be negatively equated to vulgar prejudice and superstition, it is often positively contrasted to them as a standard for good taste and as the source of the most basic axiomsneeded for science and logic .
Revised:  It can be negatively equated to vulgar prejudice and superstition, it is often positively contrasted to them as a standard for good taste and source of scientific and logical axioms, and disapprovingly, as equivalent to vulgar prejudice and superstition .
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Original:  As more of the population moves to cities, population over-crowding, increased poverty, increased levels of crime, high-density traffic, low air quality and lack of parks, sidewalks and recreational sports facilities leads to a less active lifestyle.
Revised:  As more of the population moves to cities, population over-crowding, increased poverty, increased levels of crime, high-volumes of car traffic, low air quality and lack of parks, sidewalks and recreational sports facilities leads to a less active lifestyle.
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Original:  It appears that the group of foes had taken Caelius, Aulus, Mastarna, Rasce and Marce Camitlnas prisoner, but while they were sleeping, Larth Ulthes has crept into their camp armed with swords which he has given to his companions.
Revised:  It appears that the group of foes had taken Caelius, Aulus, Mastarna, Rasce and Marce Camitlnas prisoner, but while they were sleeping, Larth Ulthes crept into their camp armed with swords which he has given to his companions.
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Original:  It appears that the group of foes had taken Caelius, Aulus, Mastarna, Rasce and Marce Camitlnas prisoner, but while they were sleeping, Larth Ulthes has crept into their camp armed with swords which he has given to his companions.
Revised:  It appears that the group of foes had taken Caelius, Aulus, Mastarna, Rasce and Marce Camitlnas prisoner, but while they were sleeping, Larth Ulthes has crept into their camp armed with swords which he gave to his companions.
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Original:  It was shortly after the formation of the Frightful Four that Pete abandoned his old alias and assumed the more intimidating name Trapster (the " Spider-Man/Human Torch " mini-series depicts the catalyst of the name change to be Spider-Man being unable to stop laughing when Paste-Pot Pete introduced himself).
Revised:  It was shortly after the formation of the Frightful Four that Pete abandoned his old alias and assumed the more intimidating name Trapster (the Spider-Man/Human Torch " mini-series depicts the catalyst of the name change to be Spider-Man being unable to stop laughing when Paste-Pot Pete introduced himself).
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Original:  It was shortly after the formation of the Frightful Four that Pete abandoned his old alias and assumed the more intimidating name Trapster (the " Spider-Man/Human Torch " mini-series depicts the catalyst of the name change to be Spider-Man being unable to stop laughing when Paste-Pot Pete introduced himself).
Revised:  It was shortly after the formation of the Frightful Four that Pete abandoned his old alias and assumed the more intimidating name Trapster (the " Spider-Man/Human Torch miniseries depicts the catalyst of the name change to be Spider-Man being unable to stop laughing when Paste-Pot Pete introduced himself).
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Original:  He changed his nom de crime to  Trapster and appeared with new weaponry in Fantastic Four #38, with the second appearance of the Frightful Four, in an attempt to make himself sound more formidable.
Revised:  He changed his nom de crime to the Trapster and appeared with new weaponry in Fantastic Four #38, with the second appearance of the Frightful Four, in an attempt to make himself sound more formidable.
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Original:  Over the years, a running gag in Marvel comics involved heroes and villains alike reminding Trapster of his earlier name of "Paste-Pot Pete" — which would inevitably send him flying into a rage.
Revised:  Over the years, a running gag in Marvel Comics involved heroes and villains alike reminding Trapster of his earlier name of "Paste-Pot Pete" — which would inevitably send him flying into a rage.
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Original:  There are six types, all of which are composed of long and thin fibrous crystals, each fiber being composed of many microscopic "fibrils" that can be released into the atmosphere by abrasion and other processes.
Revised:  There are six types, all of which are composed of long and thin fibrous crystals, each fibre being composed of many microscopic "fibrils" that can be released into the atmosphere by abrasion and other processes.
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Original:  One such example is the Red Road Flats in Glasgow, Scotland which used huge amounts of asbestos cement board for wall paneling – British health and safety regulations stipulate that asbestos material has to be removed in specially adapted vehicles and taken to a landfill site with an appropriate permit to accept asbestos, via an approved route, at certain times of the day.
Revised:  One such example is the Red Road Flats in Glasgow, Scotland which used huge amounts of asbestos cement board for wall panelling – British health and safety regulations stipulate that asbestos material has to be removed in specially adapted vehicles and taken to a landfill site with an appropriate permit to accept asbestos, via an approved route, at certain times of the day.
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Original:  Inhalation of asbestos fibres can lead to various serious lung conditions, including asbestosis and cancer  . Archaeological studies have found evidence of asbestos being used as far back as the Stone Age to strengthen ceramic pots, but large-scale mining began at the end of the 19th century when manufacturers and builders began using asbestos for its desirable physical properties.
Revised:  Inhalation of asbestos fibres can lead to various serious lung conditions, including asbestosis and cancer , so it is now notorious as a health and safety hazard . Archaeological studies have found evidence of asbestos being used as far back as the Stone Age to strengthen ceramic pots, but large-scale mining began at the end of the 19th century when manufacturers and builders began using asbestos for its desirable physical properties.
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Original:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream  construction and fireproofing in most countries.
Revised:  Asbestos is an excellent electrical insulator and is highly heat-resistant, so for much of the 20th century it was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream construction and fireproofing in most countries.
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Original:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream  construction and fireproofing in most countries.
Revised:  Asbestos was widely used across the world as a building material until its effects on human health were recognized in the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream construction and fireproofing in most countries.
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Original:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream  construction and fireproofing in most countries.
Revised:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s .Bureau of Naval Personnel, Basic Electricity. 1969: US Navy. Many modern buildings constructed before the 1980s are thought to contain asbestos. construction and fireproofing in most countries.
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Original:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream  construction and fireproofing in most countries.
Revised:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream Inhalation of asbestos fibres can lead to various serious lung conditions, including asbestosis and cancer, so it is now notorious as a health and safety hazard. The use of asbestos for construction and fireproofing in most countries.
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Original:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream  construction and fireproofing in most countries.
Revised:  Asbestos was widely used during the 20th century until the 1970s when public recognition of the health hazards of asbestos dust led to its prohibition in mainstream construction and fireproofing has been made illegal in many countries.
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Original:   Despite the severity of asbestos-related diseases, the material has been widely used all over the world, and most buildings constructed before the 1980s are thought to contain asbestos.
Revised:  In part, this is because many older buildings still contain asbestos; in addition, the consequences of exposure can take decades to arise. Despite the severity of asbestos-related diseases, the material has been widely used all over the world, and most buildings constructed before the 1980s are thought to contain asbestos.
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Original:  Many developing countries still support the use of asbestos as a building material, and mining of asbestos is ongoing, with top producer Russia having  estimated production of 790,000 tonnes in 2020.
Revised:  Many developing countries still support the use of asbestos as a building material, and mining of asbestos is ongoing, with top producer Russia having an estimated production of 790,000 tonnes in 2020.
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Original:  AVA geostatistical inversion software uses leading-edge geostatistical techniques, including Markov Chain Monte Carlo (MCMC) sampling and pluri-Gaussian lithology modeling.
Revised:  AVA geostatistical inversion software uses leading-edge geostatistical techniques, including Markov chain Monte Carlo (MCMC) sampling and pluri-Gaussian lithology modeling.
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Original: Pendrel, J., "Seismic Inversion—A Critical Tool in Reservoir Characterization", Scandinavian Oil-Gas Magazine, No. 5/6, 2006, p. 19-22 . Seismic data is band-limited, reducing resolution and quality.
Revised: Pendrel, J., "Seismic Inversion—A Critical Tool in Reservoir Characterization", Scandinavian Oil-Gas Magazine, No. 5/6, 2006, pp. 19–22 . Seismic data is band-limited, reducing resolution and quality.
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Original: Latimer, R., Davison, R., van Riel, P., "An Interpreter’s Guide to Understanding and Working with Seismic-Derived Acoustic Impedance Data", The Leading Edge, March 2000, p. 242-256.
Revised: Latimer, R., Davison, R., van Riel, P., "An Interpreter’s Guide to Understanding and Working with Seismic-Derived Acoustic Impedance Data", The Leading Edge, March 2000, pp. 242–256.
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Original:  Further reading Caulfield, C., Feroci, M., Yakiwchuk, K. "Seismic Inversion for Horizontal Well Planning in Western Saskatchewan", Evolving Geophysics Through Innovation, p. 213-214.
Revised:  Further reading Caulfield, C., Feroci, M., Yakiwchuk, K. "Seismic Inversion for Horizontal Well Planning in Western Saskatchewan", Evolving Geophysics Through Innovation, pp. 213–214.
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Original:  Francis, A., "Limitations of Deterministic and Advantages of Stochastic Seismic Inversion", CSEG Recorder, February 2005, p . 5-11.
Revised:  Francis, A., "Limitations of Deterministic and Advantages of Stochastic Seismic Inversion", CSEG Recorder, February 2005, pp . 5-11.
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Original:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
Revised:  Gamugamo sa Dilim Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
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Original:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
Revised:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
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Original:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
Revised:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
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Original:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | rowspan="3"|2007 || Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
Revised:  Gamugamo sa Dilim |- | Investigative Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards |- | 2006 || Broadcast Journalist of the Year Rotary Club of Manila Journalism Awards2007 Best Television Feature, La Sallian Scholarum Awards for the documentary:
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Original:  of the URL |- | rowspan="2"|2008 || Most Outstanding Alumnus, UP College of Mass CommunicationAlumna Kara David produces Peabody Award-winning docu. up.edu.ph |- | Best Documentary Program Host, PMPC Star Awards for Television |- | rowspan="3"|2009 || Best Documentary Program, USTV Awards |- | Best Public Affairs Program, MTRCB awards |- | Best Documentary Program Host, PMPC Star Awards for Television |- | 2010 || The Outstanding Women in Nation Service (TOWNS)
Revised:  of the URL Most Outstanding Alumnus, UP College of Mass CommunicationAlumna Kara David produces Peabody Award-winning docu. up.edu.ph |- | Best Documentary Program Host, PMPC Star Awards for Television |- | rowspan="3"|2009 || Best Documentary Program, USTV Awards |- | Best Public Affairs Program, MTRCB awards |- | Best Documentary Program Host, PMPC Star Awards for Television |- | 2010 || The Outstanding Women in Nation Service (TOWNS)
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