wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through , is necessary to crawl into the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Additionally  they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through  the skin-tight hole, allowing to crawl onto the higher tunnel.
Revised:  Additionally they feature very tight passages from one tunnel to a lower tunnel called "Schlupf" (slip out) that is too narrow for older or overweight persons – a person needs to crawl under the slip hole, stand up thereby sliding the shoulders through the higher tunnel.
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Original:  Most tunnel systems are not longer than . Classification To get a better overview research has come up with a rough classification system  :Herbert Wimmer: Die Regional-Typisierung der Erdställe.
Revised:  Most tunnel systems are not longer than . Classification In his 2000 publication , Herbert Wimmer created a rough classification system :Herbert Wimmer: Die Regional-Typisierung der Erdställe.
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Original:  Most tunnel systems are not longer than . Classification To get a better overview research has come up with a rough classification system  :Herbert Wimmer: Die Regional-Typisierung der Erdställe.
Revised:  Most tunnel systems are not longer than . Classification To get a better overview research has come up with a rough classification system for varying types of erdstall :Herbert Wimmer: Die Regional-Typisierung der Erdställe.
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Original: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels  although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe ( over 700 in Bavaria alone ) . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
Revised: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels , although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe ( over 700 in Bavaria alone ) . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
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Original: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels  although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe ( over 700 in Bavaria alone ) . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
Revised: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe , with over 700 in Bavaria alone ) . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
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Original: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels  although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe ( over 700 in Bavaria alone ) . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
Revised: Archaeology There is almost no archaeological material to be found in the tunnels although erdstall tunnels exist in abundance in Central Europe ( over 700 in Bavaria alone . This makes it highly unlikely that they were ever used as dwellings, such as a hiding place in times of war.
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Original:  This is easily done by the simple "Rule of Three", a method of cross-multiplication, using three numbers to solve for the fourth by successive multiplication and division: So, sailing for 65 miles on SE by E implies alargar = = 16.9 miles.
Revised:  This is easily done by the simple "Rule of Three", a method of cross-multiplication, using three numbers to solve for the fourth by successive multiplication and division: So, sailing for 65 miles on SE by E implies alargar = = 35.75 miles.
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Original:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011  Buddhist sites Tepe Narenj Bamiyan Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Mes aynak Tepe Kafiriyat
Revised:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011 In July 2021, more Buddhist relics were discovered in the eastern Kabul area known as Shewaki. Buddhist sites Tepe Narenj Bamiyan Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Mes aynak Tepe Kafiriyat
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Original:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011  Buddhist sites Tepe Narenj Bamiyan Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Mes aynak Tepe Kafiriyat
Revised:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011 Buddhist sites Bamiyan Mes aynak Shewaki Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Mes aynak Tepe Kafiriyat
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Original:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011  Buddhist sites Tepe Narenj Bamiyan Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Mes aynak Tepe Kafiriyat
Revised:  Mes Aynak 10.29.2011 Buddhist sites Tepe Narenj Bamiyan Tapa Sardar Takht-i-Rustam Tepe Kafiriyat Tepe Narenj
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Original:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word Dämmerschlaf ) is an amnesic condition characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, especially to relieve the pain of childbirth.
Revised:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word ) is an amnesic condition characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, especially to relieve the pain of childbirth.
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Original:    In 1899, a Dr. Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia and it started to be used for purpose, sporadically.
Revised:  Effects and usage The drug combination relieved the pain only partially, whilst creating amnesia such that the woman giving birth sometimes would not remember any pain, although these results were variable. Women were sometimes blind-folded, or had their ears plugged, in order to "promote sleep." In 1899, a Dr. Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia and it started to be used for purpose, sporadically.
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Original:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902 then was picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss in Freiburg, Germany starting in 1903.
Revised:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902 , before being picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss in Freiburg, Germany starting in 1903.
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Original:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902 then was picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss in Freiburg, Germany starting in 1903.
Revised:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902 then was picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss in Freiburg, Germany , beginning in 1903.
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Original:  It was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race", and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association, which advocated for wider use;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race", and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association, which advocated for wider use;
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Original:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word ) is an amnesic condition characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, especially to relieve the pain of childbirth.
Revised:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word ) is an amnesic state characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, especially to relieve the pain of childbirth.
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Original:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word ) is an amnesic condition characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, especially to relieve the pain of childbirth.
Revised:  a complete history of twilight sleep from its beginning in 1903 to its present development in 1915, including its successful use in Great Britain to-day by Hanna Rion Twilight sleep (English translation of the German word ) is an amnesic condition characterized by insensitivity to pain without loss of consciousness, induced by an injection of morphine and scopolamine, with the purpose of relieving the pain and fear of childbirth.
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Original:   Effects and usage The drug combination relieved the pain only partially, whilst creating amnesia such that the woman giving birth sometimes would not remember any pain, although these results were variable.
Revised:  The obstetric method originated in Germany and gained large popularity in New York City in the early 20th century. Effects and usage The drug combination relieved the pain only partially, whilst creating amnesia such that the woman giving birth sometimes would not remember any pain, although these results were variable.
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Original:   Effects and usage The drug combination relieved the pain only partially, whilst creating amnesia such that the woman giving birth sometimes would not remember any pain, although these results were variable.
Revised:  Effects and usage In the Freiburg technique, considered the gold standard of twilight birth, patients were first given an intramuscular injection of 1/150 grain scopolamine and 1/2 grain of morphine. Forty five minutes later, a second scopolamine injection of the same dosage was administered. A memory test was then given, and subsequent smaller doses of scopolamine were given based on the individual’s performance on the memory tests. When performed properly, the drug combination caused a drowsy state and relieved the pain only partially, whilst creating amnesia such that the woman giving birth sometimes would not remember any pain, although these results were variable.
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Original:  Women  were sometimes blind-folded, or had their ears plugged , in order to "promote sleep."
Revised:  Because of how variable the scopolamine dosages are between patients, and the need for accurate assessment of performance on the memory test, the twilight sleep method required skillful, well-trained practitioners for proper execution. were sometimes blind-folded, or had their ears plugged , in order to "promote sleep."
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Original:   History   In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
Revised:  Sensory deprivation also prevented delirium, one of the adverse side effects of scopolamine. History In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
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Original:   History   In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
Revised:  History Pain management in labor Prior to the 20th century, childbirth predominantly happened in the home, without access to any medical interventions for pain management. Childbirth was a leading cause of death for women, and many were fearful of the process, creating a large desire for pain management. But despite the demands of female patients, little relief was offered before the mid-19th century. Chemical anesthesia during labor was first introduced in 1847, receiving support from women and reluctance from physicians. The legacy of the Bible in the Anglo-American medical community was clear. While pain relief was seen as a necessary part of surgery, many physicians viewed painful childbirth as a natural, divinely ordained punishment for Eve’s behavior in the Garden of Eden. Anesthesia’s use was popularized in 1853 by Queen Victoria’s decision to use chloroform for pain relief during the birth of her eighth child. In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
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Original:   History   In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
Revised:  History Twilight sleep in Germany In 1899, a Dr Schneiderlin recommended the use of hyoscine and morphine for surgical anaesthesia , and it began to be used as such sporadically.
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Original:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by  Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902, before being picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss  in Freiburg, Germany, beginning in 1903.
Revised:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Austrian physician Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902, before being picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss in Freiburg, Germany, beginning in 1903.
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Original:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by  Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902, before being picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss  in Freiburg, Germany, beginning in 1903.
Revised:  The use of this combination to ease birth was first proposed by Richard von Steinbuchel in 1902, before being picked up and further developed by Carl Gauss and Bernhardt Kronig in Freiburg, Germany, beginning in 1903.
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Original:  The method came to be known as ("twilight sleep") or the "Freiburg method" .
Revised:  The method came to be known as ("twilight sleep") or the "Freiburg method" when performed according to Gauss and Kronig’s specific technique. Gauss and Kronig’s research showed that the use of scopolamine during childbirth resulted in fewer complications and a faster recovery. The two presented their findings on the use of scopolamine during childbirth at the 1906 National Obstetrics Conference in Berlin, Germany. They recorded preferred dosages and adverse side effects of scopolamine, which included slowed pulse, bradypnea, delirium, dilated pupils, flushed skin, and thirst.
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Original:  Its usage spread slowly, and different clinics experimented with different dosages and ingredients ; in 1915, The Canadian Medical Association Journal reported that "the method was%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% really still in a state of development".
Revised:  Its usage spread slowly, and different clinics experimented with different dosages and ingredients was%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% really still in a state of development".
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Original:  in 1915, The Canadian Medical Association Journal reported that "the method was%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% really still in a state of development".
Revised:  in 1915, The Canadian Medical Association Journal reported that "the method was%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% . By 1907, Gauss was performing the Freiburg method on all of his pregnant patients, and wealthy German women began to travel to Freiburg for childbirth in order to receive Kronig and Gauss’s twilight sleep method. The Women’s Clinic of the State University of Baden, where Gauss was a physician, had the city’s lowest rates of maternal and neonatal mortality, further increasing the procedure’s popularity. Eventually, wealthy pregnant women from the United States began traveling to Germany to receive twilight sleep during childbirth.
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Original:   In 1915, the New York Times published an article on twilight sleep and the work of Hanna Rion, or Mrs.
Revised:  Popularity in New York City A June 1914 McClure’s Magazine article titled, “Painless Childbirth” published by Marguerite Tracy and Constance Leupp about twilight sleep was instrumental in increasing awareness of the procedure in America. The article garnered a massive public response, prompting thousands of women to write the magazine asking for information about doctors able to perform the method. In the year after the publication of the McClure article, several books such as Motherhood without Pain were published that universally praised the procedure. Newspapers and magazines began pressuring American obstetricians to adopt the method of pain management in their own clinics. Twilight sleep gained a “faddish” popularity in New York City from 1914 to 1916. In 1915, the New York Times published an article on twilight sleep and the work of Hanna Rion, or Mrs.
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Despite its popularity among patients, twilight sleep faced serious resistance from American doctors. Many physicians accused Gauss and Kronig of propagandizing women for financial gain. Because the treatment’s greatest popularity overlapped with World War I, women who advocated for the German technique were also accused of being disloyal to the United States. initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was Decline in Use The use of twilight sleep began to decline in the United States after 1916 due to a number of factors. In the setting of New York City, it was extremely difficult to perform properly according to the Freiburg method. The dosages of morphine and scopolamine needed to be precise to avoid overdose, and NYC hospitals typically lacked the private, quiet birthing rooms like those used in Freiburg for sensory isolation. At its peak, there was such demand from women for twilight sleep that many physicians who were not adequately trained in the technique felt that the success of their obstetric practices depended on offering it. Thus, many untrained nurses and physicians were administering morphine and scopolamine at improper dosages, leading to a high rate of errors. initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was Relationship with first-wave feminism Twilight sleep spread in popularity in New York through a grassroots female-led campaign that was closely connected to the first-wave feminism movement. Many of those active in the campaign were also suffragettes, and they used techniques learned in the suffrage movement to increase awareness of twilight sleep. initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was The procedure was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race . " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " Advocates of twilight birth, including Hanna Rion, saw the fight for pain management in childbirth as strongly connected to the fight for gender equality. They described childbirth as “unnatural” and “unnecessary” and believed that male physicians did not adequately recognize the difficulties of maternity. Twilight sleep was seen as liberating women from the danger and pain imposed on them by their own bodies. formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US Early feminists in Manhattan formed the National Twilight Sleep Association , which advocated for wider use ;
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Original:  Twilight sleep was    initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race  " , and early feminists in the US  formed the National Twilight Sleep Association  , which advocated for wider use  ;
Revised:  Twilight sleep was initially heralded as the dawning of "a new era for woman and through her for the whole human race " , and early feminists in the US formed the National Twilight Sleep Association in 1914 , which advocated for wider use ;
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