wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Scientists may use STM to discover which genes are critical to a pathogen's virulence by injecting a 'pool' of different random mutants into an animal model such as a mouse and observing which of the mutants survive and proliferate in the host.
Revised:  Scientists may use STM to discover which genes are critical to a pathogen's virulence by injecting a 'pool' of different random mutants into an animal model (e.g. a mouse infection model) and observing which of the mutants survive and proliferate in the host.
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Original:  In view of the global eradication of smallpox, the Thirty-fourth World Health Assembly amended the IHR (1969) to exclude smallpox in the list of notifiable diseases.
Revised:  In 1981, in view of the global eradication of smallpox, the Thirty-fourth World Health Assembly amended the IHR (1969) to exclude smallpox in the list of notifiable diseases.
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Original:  The emergence of “new” infectious agents Ebola Hemorrhagic Fever in Zaire ( modern- day Democratic Republic of Congo) and the re-emergence of cholera and plague in South America and India, respectively;
Revised:  The emergence of “new” infectious agents Ebola Hemorrhagic Fever in Zaire ( modern-day Democratic Republic of Congo) and the re-emergence of cholera and plague in South America and India, respectively;
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Original: Store and dispose of chemicals correctly  Local groups have chemical round URL Some waste companies also have disposal options, such as Waste URL Proper disposal of fridge and air conditioners that contain chemicals.
Revised: Store and dispose of chemicals correctly Proper storage and disposal of chemicals can reduce pollutuion. Local groups have chemical round URL Some waste companies also have disposal options, such as Waste URL Proper disposal of fridge and air conditioners that contain chemicals.
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), southern magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), red bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), cabbage palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and Sweetbay Magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
Revised:  In some areas, the evergreen forests are dominated by species of Live Oak (Quercus virginiana), Laurel Oak (Quercus hemisphaerica), Southern Magnolia (Magnolia grandiflora), Red Bay (Persea borbonia), Cabbage Palm (Sabal palmetto), and sweetbay magnolia (Magnolia virginiana).
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Original:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
Revised:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
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Original:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
Revised:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and saw palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
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Original:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
Revised:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon holly , and Yaupon Holly .
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Original:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon Holly .
Revised:  The lower shrub layer of the evergreen forests is often mixed with other evergreen species from the palm family (Rhapidophyllum hystrix), Bush palmetto (Sabal minor), and Saw Palmetto (Serenoa repens), and several species in the Ilex family, including Ilex glabra, Dahoon Holly , and Yaupon holly .
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Original: Madeira Laurel Forest, Madeira Wind Birds 2005 The Garajonay National Park, on the island of La Gomera , was designated a World Heritage site by UNESCO in 1986.
Revised: Madeira Laurel Forest, Madeira Wind Birds 2005 The Garajonay National Park, on the island of La Gomera and the Laurisilva in the Madeira island were designated World Heritage sites by UNESCO in 1986.
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Original: Madeira Laurel Forest, Madeira Wind Birds 2005 The Garajonay National Park, on the island of La Gomera , was designated a World Heritage site by UNESCO in 1986. It is considered one of the best example of laurisilva rain forest in Europe, due to its great biodiversity and good preservation.
Revised: Madeira Laurel Forest, Madeira Wind Birds 2005 The Garajonay National Park, on the island of La Gomera , was designated a World Heritage site by UNESCO in 1986 and 1999, respectively. They are considered one of the best example of laurisilva rain forest in Europe, due to its great biodiversity and good preservation.
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Original:   Xylenes are produced mainly as part of the BTX aromatics (benzene, toluene, and xylenes) extracted from the product of catalytic reforming known as reformate .
Revised:  Mixed xylenes refers to a mixture of the xylenes plus ethylbenzene. The four compounds have identical empirical formulas C8H10. Typically the four compounds are produced together by various catalytic reforming and pyrolysis methods. Xylenes are produced mainly as part of the BTX aromatics (benzene, toluene, and xylenes) extracted from the product of catalytic reforming known as reformate .
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Original:   Xylenes are produced mainly as part of the BTX aromatics (benzene, toluene, and xylenes) extracted from the product of catalytic reforming known as reformate . The xylene mixture is a slightly greasy, colorless liquid commonly encountered as a solvent .
Revised:  Xylenes are produced mainly as part of the BTX aromatics (benzene, toluene, and xylenes) extracted from the product of catalytic reforming known as reformate .
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Original: Chirkland () was a marcher lordship in north-east Wales , created in 1282 from parts of Powys Fadog granted to Roger Mortimer de Chirk, third son of Roger Mortimer, 1st Baron Mortimer of Wigmore, and administered from Chirk Castle .
Revised: Chirkland () was a marcher lordship in north-east Wales . It created in 1282 from parts of Powys Fadog granted to Roger Mortimer de Chirk, third son of Roger Mortimer, 1st Baron Mortimer of Wigmore, and administered from Chirk Castle .
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Original: Chirkland () was a marcher lordship in north-east Wales , created in 1282 from parts of Powys Fadog granted to Roger Mortimer de Chirk, third son of Roger Mortimer, 1st Baron Mortimer of Wigmore, and administered from Chirk Castle .
Revised: Chirkland () was a marcher lordship in north-east Wales , created in 1282 from parts of Powys Fadog granted to Roger Mortimer de Chirk, third son of Roger Mortimer, 1st Baron Mortimer of Wigmore, who then built Chirk Castle from where the lordship was administered .
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Original: Clinical implications of writing therapy Since the foundation research conducted in the 1980s by James W. Pennebaker, there have been further studies demonstrating that expressive writing may act as an agent to increase long-term health.
Revised: Clinical implications of writing therapy Additional research since the 1980s by James W. Pennebaker, there have been further studies demonstrating that expressive writing may act as an agent to increase long-term health.
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Original:  Expressive writing can result in physiological, psychological, and biological outcomes, and is part of the emerging field of the medical humanities . There are experiments demonstrating quantitative physiological readout such as changes in immune counts, blood pressure, as well as qualitative readouts relating to psychiatric symptoms.
Revised:  Expressive writing can result in physiological, psychological, and biological outcomes, and is part of the emerging medical humanities field. Experiments demonstrate quantitative physiological readout such as changes in immune counts, blood pressure, as well as qualitative readouts relating to psychiatric symptoms.
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Original:  A similar thinking style has already been incorporated into the medical field by designations such as integrative, holistic, humanistic or complementary medicine . These involve including spirituality, meditation, wellness and other supplemental care practices into treatment . Expressive writing is self-administered with minimal prompting ,
Revised:  A similar thinking style has already been incorporated into the medical field by designations such as integrative, holistic, humanistic or complementary medicine have already been incorporated into the field . Expressive writing is self-administered with minimal prompting ,
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Original:  wellness and other supplemental care practices into treatment . Expressive writing is self-administered with minimal prompting , and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  wellness and other supplemental care practices into treatment . Expressive writing is self-administered with minimal prompting . With further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement , it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Recent experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses examining the effects of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original:  and with further research and refinement  it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing in reducing negative physical and psychological symptoms experienced by cancer patients yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
Revised:  and with further research and refinement it may be used as a more cost effective potential alternative to psychotherapy , examine the benefits and drawbacks . Experiments , systematic reviews, and meta-analyses conducted recently examining the effectiveness of expressive writing on ameliorating negative cancer symptoms yielded primarily non-significant initial results.
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Original: Inscriptions Asparvama was a son of Apraca king Indravarman , as known from an inscription discovered in Taxila,On the Cusp of an Era: Art in the Pre-Kuṣāṇa World, Doris Srinivasan, BRILL, 2007, p.269-270 who himself is known to be the son of Vispavarma according to Indravarman 's Silver Reliquary.
Revised: Inscriptions Asparvama was a son of Apraca king Indravarma , as known from an inscription discovered in Taxila,On the Cusp of an Era: Art in the Pre-Kuṣāṇa World, Doris Srinivasan, BRILL, 2007, p.269-270 who himself is known to be the son of Vispavarma according to Indravarman 's Silver Reliquary.
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Original: Inscriptions Asparvama was a son of Apraca king Indravarman , as known from an inscription discovered in Taxila,On the Cusp of an Era: Art in the Pre-Kuṣāṇa World, Doris Srinivasan, BRILL, 2007, p.269-270 who himself is known to be the son of Vispavarma according to Indravarman 's Silver Reliquary.
Revised: Inscriptions Asparvama was a son of Apraca king Indravarman , as known from an inscription discovered in Taxila,On the Cusp of an Era: Art in the Pre-Kuṣāṇa World, Doris Srinivasan, BRILL, 2007, p.269-270 who himself is known to be the son of Vispavarma according to Indravarma 's Silver Reliquary.
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Original:  Indravarman 's Silver Reliquary, which is known for sure to be before the Bajaur casket, hence before 5-6 CE, and is therefore usually dated to the end of the 1st century BCE, describes Aspavarma's grandfather Vispavarma as a general, and not yet a king at that time.
Revised:  Indravarma 's Silver Reliquary, which is known for sure to be before the Bajaur casket, hence before 5-6 CE, and is therefore usually dated to the end of the 1st century BCE, describes Aspavarma's grandfather Vispavarma as a general, and not yet a king at that time.
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Original:  the initial set of beliefs is (either one of the two satellites is still in orbit) and the new piece of information is (Unit A has landed, and is therefore not in orbit) ; the only rational result of the update is ;
Revised:  the initial set of beliefs is (either one of the two satellites is still in orbit) and the new piece of information is (Unit A has landed, and is therefore not in orbit) . The only rational result of the update is ;
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Original:  revision the play "Six Characters in Search of an Author" will be performed in one of the two local theatres ; this information can be denoted by , where and indicates that the play will be performed at the first or at the second theatre, respectively;
Revised:  revision the play "Six Characters in Search of an Author" will be performed in one of the two local theatres . This information can be denoted by , where and indicates that the play will be performed at the first or at the second theatre, respectively;
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Original:  a further information that "Jesus Christ Superstar" will be performed at the first theatre indicates that holds ; in this case, the obvious conclusion is that "Six Characters in Search of an Author" will be performed at the second but not the first theatre, which is represented in logic by .
Revised:  a further information that "Jesus Christ Superstar" will be performed at the first theatre indicates that holds . In this case, the obvious conclusion is that "Six Characters in Search of an Author" will be performed at the second but not the first theatre, which is represented in logic by .
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Original: Direct selling through the party plan typically uses multi-level marketing (salesperson is paid for selling and for sales made by people he recruits or sponsors ) rather than single-level marketing (salesperson is paid only for the sales he makes himself ).
Revised: Direct selling through the party plan typically uses multi-level marketing (salesperson is paid for selling and for sales made by people they recruit or sponsor ) rather than single-level marketing (salesperson is paid only for the sales he makes himself ).
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Original: Direct selling through the party plan typically uses multi-level marketing (salesperson is paid for selling and for sales made by people he recruits or sponsors ) rather than single-level marketing (salesperson is paid only for the sales he makes himself ).
Revised: Direct selling through the party plan typically uses multi-level marketing (salesperson is paid for selling and for sales made by people he recruits or sponsors ) rather than single-level marketing (salesperson is paid only for the sales they make themself ).
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