wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: This larger definition of "computing", in which not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself  is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
Revised: This expands the definition of "computing", in which not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
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Original: This larger definition of "computing", in which not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself  is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
Revised: This larger definition of "computing", such that it is not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
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Original: This larger definition of "computing", in which not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself  is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
Revised: This larger definition of "computing", in which not just the data, or the metadata, or the context of the data, but the computer itself which is being "processed" , makes the term "social computing" have a whole different meaning .
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Original: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an Indian environmental organization based in Port Blair city of the Andaman and Nicobar Islands union territory of India.
Revised: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an environmental organization based in Port Blair city of the Andaman and Nicobar Islands union territory of India.
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Original: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an Indian environmental organization based in Port Blair city of the Andaman and Nicobar Islands union territory of India.
Revised: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an Indian environmental organization based in the city of Port Blair, in the Andaman and Nicobar Islands union territory of India.
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Original: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an Indian environmental organization based in Port Blair city of the Andaman and Nicobar Islands union territory of India.
Revised: The Society for Andaman and Nicobar Ecology, also known as SANE, is an Indian environmental organization based in Port Blair city of the Andaman and Nicobar Islands , India.
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Original:  Offers in the realm of 75 to 80 million Australian dollars were expected however evidently not attained ; as the 2008 economic crisis accelerated and falling property prices diminished the likelihood of a sale at expected prices, the South Australian government intervened and announced in October 2008 that it would purchase the site.
Revised:  Offers in the realm of 75 to 80 million Australian dollars were expected but not attained due to the financial crisis of 2007–2008. The South Australian government intervened and announced in October 2008 that it would purchase the site.
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Original:  as the 2008 economic crisis accelerated and falling property prices diminished the likelihood of a sale at expected prices, the South Australian government intervened and announced in October 2008 that it would purchase the site.
Revised:  as the 2008 economic crisis accelerated and falling property prices diminished the likelihood of a sale at expected prices, the South Australian government announced in October 2008 that it would purchase the site.
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Original:  It extends from the exobase, which is located at the top of the thermosphere at an altitude of about 700 km above sea level, to about 10,000 km (6,200 mi;
Revised:  It extends from the thermopause, at the top of the thermosphere at an altitude of about 700 km above sea level, to about 10,000 km (6,200 mi;
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Original:  Griffiths 1970, p. 283 More than 300 years after Plutarch, the Neoplatonist philosopher Proclus wrote of the same statue in Book I of his Commentaries on Plato's "Timaeus".
Revised:  More than 300 years after Plutarch, the Neoplatonist philosopher Proclus wrote of the same statue in Book I of his Commentaries on Plato's "Timaeus".
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Original:  Griffiths 1970, pp. 284–285 Proclus's version suggests that the goddess conceived and gave birth to the sun without the participation of a male deity, which would reflect Egyptian myths about Neith as the mother of the sun god Ra.
Revised:  Proclus's version suggests that the goddess conceived and gave birth to the sun without the participation of a male deity, which would reflect Egyptian myths about Neith as the mother of the sun god Ra.
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Original:  Edmund Spenser's The Faerie Queene in the 1590s personified nature as a woman with a veil, though without a direct connection to Isis, Hadot 2006, p. 237 although Isis appears elsewhere in the work.
Revised:  Edmund Spenser's The Faerie Queene in the 1590s personified nature as a woman with a veil, though without a direct connection to Isis, although Isis appears elsewhere in the work.
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Original:  Hadot 2006, pp. 237, 240–242 The frontispiece to Gerhard Blasius's 1681 book Anatome Animalum, engraved by Jan Luyken, was the first depiction of a many-breasted Isis-Artemis figure with her veil being removed.
Revised:  The frontispiece to Gerhard Blasius's 1681 book Anatome Animalum, engraved by Jan Luyken, was the first depiction of a many-breasted Isis-Artemis figure with her veil being removed.
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Original: Isis as a mystery upThe unveiling of a statue of Isis as a personification of nature, depicted as the climactic moment of an Isiac initiation, in an 1803 engraving by Henry FuseliAssmann 1997, pp. 134–135 Another interpretation of Isis's veil emerged in the late 18th century, in keeping with the Romantic movement that was developing at the time, in which nature constitutes an awe-inspiring mystery rather than prosaic knowledge.
Revised: Isis as a mystery upThe unveiling of a statue of Isis as a personification of nature, depicted as the climactic moment of an Isiac initiation, in an 1803 engraving by Henry Fuseli Another interpretation of Isis's veil emerged in the late 18th century, in keeping with the Romantic movement that was developing at the time, in which nature constitutes an awe-inspiring mystery rather than prosaic knowledge.
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Original:  Assmann 1997, pp. 126–134 Although these rites were developed in Hellenistic or Roman times, under the influence of earlier Greco-Roman mystery rites, Bremmer 2014, pp. 110–114 both classical authors and 18th-century scholars assumed them to have been age-old features of ancient Egyptian religion.
Revised:  Although these rites were developed in Hellenistic or Roman times, under the influence of earlier Greco-Roman mystery rites, Bremmer 2014, pp. 110–114 both classical authors and 18th-century scholars assumed them to have been age-old features of ancient Egyptian religion.
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Original:  Assmann 1997, pp. 126–134 Although these rites were developed in Hellenistic or Roman times, under the influence of earlier Greco-Roman mystery rites, Bremmer 2014, pp. 110–114 both classical authors and 18th-century scholars assumed them to have been age-old features of ancient Egyptian religion.
Revised:  Assmann 1997, pp. 126–134 Although these rites were developed in Hellenistic or Roman times, under the influence of earlier Greco-Roman mystery rites, both classical authors and 18th-century scholars assumed them to have been age-old features of ancient Egyptian religion.
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Original:  Macpherson 2004, pp. 241–245 Many Freemasons, members of a European fraternal organization that attained its modern form in the early 18th century, adopted Egyptian motifs and came to believe their rituals could be traced back to the mysteries of Isis.
Revised:  Many Freemasons, members of a European fraternal organization that attained its modern form in the early 18th century, adopted Egyptian motifs and came to believe their rituals could be traced back to the mysteries of Isis.
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Original:  Macpherson 2004, pp. 245–248 One Freemason in the 1780s, Karl Leonhard Reinhold, tried to reconcile Freemasonry's traditional origin story, which traces Freemasonry back to ancient Israel, with its enthusiasm for Egyptian themes.
Revised:  One Freemason in the 1780s, Karl Leonhard Reinhold, tried to reconcile Freemasonry's traditional origin story, which traces Freemasonry back to ancient Israel, with its enthusiasm for Egyptian themes.
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Original:  Assmann 1997, pp. 115–125 Under the influence of Reinhold's interpretation, other Freemasons came to see the veiled Isis as a symbol of an impenetrable enigma, representing truth and being as well as nature, Hadot 2004, pp. 267–269 a deity that, as Assmann puts it, was regarded as "too all-encompassing to have a name."
Revised:  Under the influence of Reinhold's interpretation, other Freemasons came to see the veiled Isis as a symbol of an impenetrable enigma, representing truth and being as well as nature, Hadot 2004, pp. 267–269 a deity that, as Assmann puts it, was regarded as "too all-encompassing to have a name."
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Original:  Assmann 1997, pp. 115–125 Under the influence of Reinhold's interpretation, other Freemasons came to see the veiled Isis as a symbol of an impenetrable enigma, representing truth and being as well as nature, Hadot 2004, pp. 267–269 a deity that, as Assmann puts it, was regarded as "too all-encompassing to have a name."
Revised:  Assmann 1997, pp. 115–125 Under the influence of Reinhold's interpretation, other Freemasons came to see the veiled Isis as a symbol of an impenetrable enigma, representing truth and being as well as nature, a deity that, as Assmann puts it, was regarded as "too all-encompassing to have a name."
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Original:  Assmann 1997, p. 120 Immanuel Kant connected the motif of Isis's veil with his concept of the sublime, saying, "Perhaps no one has said anything more sublime, or expressed a thought more sublimely, than in that inscription on the temple of Isis (Mother Nature)."
Revised:  Immanuel Kant connected the motif of Isis's veil with his concept of the sublime, saying, "Perhaps no one has said anything more sublime, or expressed a thought more sublimely, than in that inscription on the temple of Isis (Mother Nature)."
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Original:  Hadot 2004, pp. 269–283 Friedrich Schiller, for instance, wrote an essay on Egyptian and Jewish religion that mostly copied Reinhold's work but put a new emphasis on the emotional buildup that surrounded the mysteries.
Revised:  Friedrich Schiller, for instance, wrote an essay on Egyptian and Jewish religion that mostly copied Reinhold's work but put a new emphasis on the emotional buildup that surrounded the mysteries.
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Original: forests Jamaican dry forests Lara-Falcón dry forests Leeward Islands dry forests Magdalena Valley dry forests Maracaibo dry forests Marañón dry forests Panamanian dry forests Patía Valley dry forests Puerto Rican dry forests Revillagigedo Islands dry forests Sierra de la Laguna dry forests Sinaloan dry forests Sinú Valley dry forests Southern Pacific dry forests Trinidad and Tobago dry forests Tumbes-Piura dry forests Veracruz dry forests Windward Islands dry forests Yucatán dry forests
Revised: forests Jamaican dry forests Lara–Falcón dry forests Leeward Islands dry forests Magdalena Valley dry forests Maracaibo dry forests Marañón dry forests Panamanian dry forests Patía Valley dry forests Puerto Rican dry forests Revillagigedo Islands dry forests Sierra de la Laguna dry forests Sinaloan dry forests Sinú Valley dry forests Southern Pacific dry forests Trinidad and Tobago dry forests Tumbes-Piura dry forests Veracruz dry forests Windward Islands dry forests Yucatán dry forests
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Original: forests Jamaican dry forests Lara-Falcón dry forests Leeward Islands dry forests Magdalena Valley dry forests Maracaibo dry forests Marañón dry forests Panamanian dry forests Patía Valley dry forests Puerto Rican dry forests Revillagigedo Islands dry forests Sierra de la Laguna dry forests Sinaloan dry forests Sinú Valley dry forests Southern Pacific dry forests Trinidad and Tobago dry forests Tumbes-Piura dry forests Veracruz dry forests Windward Islands dry forests Yucatán dry forests
Revised: forests Jamaican dry forests Lara-Falcón dry forests Leeward Islands dry forests Magdalena Valley dry forests Maracaibo dry forests Marañón dry forests Panamanian dry forests Patía Valley dry forests Puerto Rican dry forests Revillagigedo Islands dry forests Sierra de la Laguna dry forests Sinaloan dry forests Sinú Valley dry forests Southern Pacific dry forests Trinidad and Tobago dry forests Tumbes–Piura dry forests Veracruz dry forests Windward Islands dry forests Yucatán dry forests
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Original:    Nutrition The macrobiotic diet is a type of fad diet  .
Revised:  Nutritionist Fredrick J. Stare has commented that "there is no scientific evidence that macrobiotic diets can be helpful for cancer or any other disease."Stare, Fredrick John; Whelan, Elizabeth M. (1998). Fad-Free Nutrition. Hunter House Inc. p. 127. Nutrition The macrobiotic diet is a type of fad diet .
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Original:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan        .
Revised:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan Geography Borki, a village at the border, with Mount Sikaram's peak in the background, the highest peak of the White Mountains The border is south of the Hindu Kush, while its eastern end by China consists of the Karakoram range. These are regions of extreme high elevation, hence much of the Durand Line is bounded by mountains. The Spīn Ghar (White Mountains) range is roughly in the middle of the Line. The western part of the Line meanwhile is lower and sparse, consisting of the Registan Desert. .
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Original:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan        .
Revised:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan A view towards the border in Pakistan, taken in Paktia Province of Afghanistan Afghanistan's highest peak, Noshaq, is located close to the border, while some of the highest peaks in the world, including K2, are a short distance to the east of the Line's end on the Pakistani side. .
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Original:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan        .
Revised:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan Border regions The border is long. 12 Afghan provinces are located along the border: Nimroz, Helmand, Kandahar, Zabul, Paktika, Khost, Paktia, Logar, Nangarhar, Kunar, Nuristan and Badakhshan - 3 Pakistani administrative units are located along the border: Balochistan province, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa province, and Gilgit-Baltistan region of the disputed Kashmir. .
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Original:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan        .
Revised:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan Since India claims all of Kashmir, India technically considers to have a 106 km border with Afghanistan (through Pakistani-controlled Gilgit-Baltistan in Kashmir and the Wakhan Corridor on the Afghan side), a view that has been echoed by some Indian politicians including the Home Minister. However the official ministry document itself does not mention a border with URL The Pakistani foreign minister has also denied the existence of an Afghan-Indian URL .
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Original:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan        .
Revised:  He made this declaration while he was on an official visit to Islamabad, Pakistan Border crossings and economy Border crossings on the Durand Line The two countries are major trade partners, and therefore the various border crossings are economically important for the wider URL particularly the Torkham and Khyber Pass that is also the main land connection between Central Asia and the Indian subcontinent .
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Original: Затор из брёвен в реке Куино, Вашингтон, США Затор из брёвен - это естественное явление, характеризующееся плотным скоплением стволов деревьев и кусков крупной древесины на обширном участке реки, ручья или озера. («Крупная древесина " » обычно определяется как куски дерева диаметром более 10 см (4 дюйма) и длиной более 1 м (3 фута 3 дюйма)) Заторы в реках и ручьях часто охватывают всю территорию поверхности воды от берега к берегу.
Revised: Log jam on the Quinault River, Washington, United States A log jam is a naturally occurring phenomenon characterized by a dense accumulation of tree trunks and pieces of large wood across a vast section of a river, stream, or lake. ( " » обычно определяется как куски дерева диаметром более 10 см (4 дюйма) и длиной более 1 м (3 фута 3 дюйма)) Заторы в реках и ручьях часто охватывают всю территорию поверхности воды от берега к берегу.
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Original:  («Крупная древесина " » обычно определяется как куски дерева диаметром более 10 см (4 дюйма) и длиной более 1 м (3 фута 3 дюйма)) Заторы в реках и ручьях часто охватывают всю территорию поверхности воды от берега к берегу. Затор из брёвен образуются, когда деревья, плавающие в воде, сцепляются с другими деревьями, плавающими в воде, или зацепляются за камни, большой древесный мусор и другие объекты, расположенные под водой. Они могут нарастать медленно в течение месяцев или лет или могут возникать мгновенно, когда большое количество деревьев смывается в воду после стихийных бедствий. Ярким примером стихийного бедствия является застревание брёвен в озере Спирит после оползня, вызванного извержением вулкана Сент-Хеленс. До тех пор, пока они не будут демонтированы естественными причинами или людьми, заторы из брёвен могут расти в геометрической прогрессии, поскольку всё больше древесины, поступающей из верхнего течения, запутывается в массе. Застревание брёвен может сохраняться в течение многих десятилетий, как в случае застревания бревен в озере Спирит . Исторически сложилось так, что в Северной Америке большие естественные «плоты из брёвен» были обычным явлением по всему континенту до заселения европейцев.
Revised:  («Крупная древесина " Large wood" is commonly defined as pieces of wood more than in diameter and more than long) Log jams in rivers and streams often span the entirety of the water's surface from bank to bank. Log jams form when trees floating in the water become entangled with other trees floating in the water, or become snagged on rocks, large woody debris, or other objects anchored underwater. They can build up slowly over months or years, or they can happen instantaneously when large numbers of trees are swept into the water after natural disasters. A notable example caused by a natural disaster is the log jam that occurred in Spirit Lake following a landslide triggered by the eruption of Mount St. Helens. Until they are dismantled by natural causes or humans, log jams can grow exponentially as more wood arriving from upstream becomes entangled in the mass. Log jams can persist for many decades, as is the case with the log jam in Spirit Lake . Исторически сложилось так, что в Северной Америке большие естественные «плоты из брёвен» были обычным явлением по всему континенту до заселения европейцев.
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Original:  Застревание брёвен может сохраняться в течение многих десятилетий, как в случае застревания бревен в озере Спирит . Исторически сложилось так, что в Северной Америке большие естественные «плоты из брёвен» были обычным явлением по всему континенту до заселения европейцев. Самый известный плот из натурального дерева - Большой плот on the Красной реке в Луизиане, который до своего удаления в 1830-х годах затронул между 390 и 480 км (240–300 миль) главного канала. Было высказано предположение, что такие обширные бревенчатые плоты могли быть обычным явлением в Европе в доисторические времена . Не следует путать заторы брёвен с искусственными деревянными плотами,
Revised:  Застревание брёвен может сохраняться в течение многих десятилетий, как в случае застревания бревен в озере Спирит . Historically in North America, large natural "log rafts" were common across the continent prior to European settlement. The most famous natural wood raft is the Great Raft on the Red River in Louisiana, which prior to its removal in the 1830s affected between of the main channel. It has been suggested that such extensive log rafts may have been common in Europe in prehistory . Не следует путать заторы брёвен с искусственными деревянными плотами,
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Original:  что такие обширные бревенчатые плоты могли быть обычным явлением в Европе в доисторические времена . Не следует путать заторы брёвен с искусственными деревянными плотами, созданными лесорубами, или преднамеренным выбросом больших масс деревьев в воду во время перевозки брёвен на лесопилку . Влияние на геоморфологию реки Затор из брёвен в Гуделл-Крик, Вашингтон Заторы из брёвен изменяют гидравлику потока, отводя поток к основанию или берегам, увеличивая сопротивление потоку и создавая бассейны вверх по течению, отклоняя поток на пойму и перекрывая канал, заставляя воду разливаться по конструкции.
Revised:  что такие обширные бревенчатые плоты могли быть обычным явлением в Европе в доисторические времена . Log jams are not to be confused with man-made timber rafts created by loggers or the intentional release of large masses of trees into the water during a log drive to a sawmill . Влияние на геоморфологию реки Затор из брёвен в Гуделл-Крик, Вашингтон Заторы из брёвен изменяют гидравлику потока, отводя поток к основанию или берегам, увеличивая сопротивление потоку и создавая бассейны вверх по течению, отклоняя поток на пойму и перекрывая канал, заставляя воду разливаться по конструкции.
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