wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: With the Climate Conference in Bali having come to a successful conclusion,  Sean Heron interviewed Christoph Bals from the German NGO Germanwatch on his opinion of the outcome, and an outlook on the future negotiations.
Revised: With the Climate Conference in Bali having come to a successful conclusion, Wikinews journalist Sean Heron interviewed Christoph Bals from the German NGO Germanwatch on his opinion of the outcome, and an outlook on the future negotiations.
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Original:  Others will see an increase in wealth in not having a car, instead buying a "Bahncard 100" [This is a flat rate for a years rail travel in Germany, at a cost of 3500 Euro, ed.] which also lets you take your kids along for free, and focus on a slower more concious life.
Revised:  Others will see an increase in wealth in not having a car, instead buying a "Bahncard 100" [This is a flat rate for a years rail travel in Germany, at a cost of 3500 Euro, ed.] which also lets you take your kids along for free, and focus on a slower more conscious life.
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Original:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
Revised:  Credit: NASA With two , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
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Original:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
Revised:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
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Original:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
Revised:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
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Original:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a Soyuz spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
Revised:  Credit: NASA With two space walks , 78 million miles and six months on board the International Space Station under their belts, Commander-Science Officer Leroy Chiao and Flight Engineer Salizhan Sharipov , the station's 10th crew, landed in Kazakhstan in a spacecraft at 6:08 p.m. EDT Sunday.
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Original:  The two latest occupants of the station launched with Vittori from Baikonur April 14. Krikalev and Phillips will have light duty for the next two days, as they rest after completing a busy handover period.
Revised:  The two latest occupants of the station launched with Vittori from April 14. Krikalev and Phillips will have light duty for the next two days, as they rest after completing a busy handover period.
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Original:  They had only joined since the peace agreement at the end of the 1996-2006 Nepalese Civil War . An agreement has now been reached after they signed a 23-point pact with the 6 main Nepalese political parties.
Revised:  They had only joined since the peace agreement at the end of the 1996-2006 . An agreement has now been reached after they signed a 23-point pact with the 6 main Nepalese political parties.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played in the trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive Order of the Companions of Honour , which is limited to only 65 members.
Revised:  Chat show host Michael Parkinson is to be knighted , Australian singer Kylie Minogue was made a member of the Order of the British Empire (for services to music), and actor Ian McKellen (who played Gandalf in the Lord of the Rings trilogy) joined the exclusive , which is limited to only 65 members.
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Original:  The list also includes honours for those involved in flood rescue work during 2007 such as Salvation Army Captain Tracey Palmer (who was made a Member of the British Empire , MBE) and Leslie Adams from York.
Revised:  The list also includes honours for those involved in flood rescue work during 2007 such as Captain Tracey Palmer (who was made a Member of the British Empire , MBE) and Leslie Adams from York.
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Original:  The list also includes honours for those involved in flood rescue work during 2007 such as Salvation Army Captain Tracey Palmer (who was made a Member of the British Empire , MBE) and Leslie Adams from York.
Revised:  The list also includes honours for those involved in flood rescue work during 2007 such as Salvation Army Captain Tracey Palmer (who was made a , MBE) and Leslie Adams from York.
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: , England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton , Children's authour , England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton , England Rugby coach , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton , England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton , England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor .
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Original:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton ,  England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter . George Alagiah, Journalist Julie Walters, Actress Richard Griffiths, Actor . Leslie Phillips Nicholas Kenyon ,   BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins , Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan
Revised:  Other recipients of honours include: Jacqueline Wilson , Childrens authour Brian Ashton , England Rugby coach Jasper Conran , Designer Karen Millen, Designer Steve Furber , Industrial designer Des Lynam , TV Sports presenter , BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins , Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan
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Original:  Leslie Phillips Nicholas Kenyon ,   BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins , Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan
Revised:  Leslie Phillips Nicholas Kenyon , Journalist , Actress , Actor BBC proms organiser Brendan Foster, Athlete John Higgins , Snooker champion Andy Trotter Nuala O'Loan
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ’ s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “ epidemic of collapse ” , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ' s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “ epidemic of collapse ” , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ’ s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “ epidemic of collapse ” , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ’ s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the " epidemic of collapse ” , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ’ s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “ epidemic of collapse ” , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  His 50 minute address from the Kremlin ’ s Marble Hall only briefly touched on the “ epidemic of collapse " , a reference to upheavals in Chechnya, Kyrgyzstan and the Ukraine, which was "a real drama" stranding millions of Russians beyond the borders of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are “terrorizing business” , he addressed concerns of the business community by condemning a series of back-tax bills like the ones that dismembered Yukos and face other major Russian corporations.
Revised:  Calling for a crackdown on corruption, where treatment by tax inspectors are "terrorizing business" , he addressed concerns of the business community by condemning a series of back-tax bills like the ones that dismembered Yukos and face other major Russian corporations.
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Original:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “ state service as some type of business ” . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying “ Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
Revised:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat " state service as some type of business ” . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying “ Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
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Original:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “ state service as some type of business ” . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying “ Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
Revised:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “ state service as some type of business " . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying “ Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
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Original:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “ state service as some type of business ” . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying “ Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
Revised:  He was also critical of a bureaucratic attitudes that treat “ state service as some type of business ” . He made clear the need for investment must be met by "rules of the game" that are consistent, saying " Russia is certainly interested in the inflow of private investments on a large scale, including foreign investments.
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Original:  Putin called for proposals to index wages to inflation over the next two years, and for the introduction of a flat 13\% tax on undeclared earnings in the shadow economy, a slice that represents nearly 35\% of the nation ’ s economy, by legalizing what was previously defined as illegal income.
Revised:  Putin called for proposals to index wages to inflation over the next two years, and for the introduction of a flat 13\% tax on undeclared earnings in the shadow economy, a slice that represents nearly 35\% of the nation ' s economy, by legalizing what was previously defined as illegal income.
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Original: AOL has decided to discontinue development of the Netscape web browser which brought surfing the Internet to the masses, until its user base began to erode during the "browser wars" of the mid-1990s and resulted in the birth of Mozilla project.
Revised: AOL has decided to discontinue development of the which brought surfing the Internet to the masses, until its user base began to erode during the "browser wars" of the mid-1990s and resulted in the birth of Mozilla project.
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Original:  Tom Drapeau, the director of Netscape inside AOL announced on the Netscape blog that support for the recently released Netscape Navigator 9 and all of Netscape's browsers back to version 1.0, will end because it was unable to gain market share and a low number of users that continues to dwindle.
Revised:  Tom Drapeau, the director of Netscape inside AOL announced on the Netscape blog that support for the recently released and all of Netscape's browsers back to version 1.0, will end because it was unable to gain market share and a low number of users that continues to dwindle.
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Original:  Drapeau noted, "AOL's focus on transitioning to an ad-supported web business leaves little room for the size of investment needed to get the Netscape browser to a point many of its fans expect it to be," and that "the success the Mozilla Foundation has had in developing critically-acclaimed products, we feel it's the right time to end development of Netscape branded browsers, hand the reins fully to Mozilla and encourage Netscape users to adopt Firefox."
Revised:  Drapeau noted, "AOL's focus on transitioning to an ad-supported web business leaves little room for the size of investment needed to get the Netscape browser to a point many of its fans expect it to be," and that "the success the has had in developing critically-acclaimed products, we feel it's the right time to end development of Netscape branded browsers, hand the reins fully to Mozilla and encourage Netscape users to adopt Firefox."
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Original:  Netscape's origins lie at the National Center for Supercomputing Applications at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign where Netscape's co-founders, Marc Andreessen and Eric Bina wrote their first copy of NCSA Mosaic which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
Revised:  Netscape's origins lie at the at where Netscape's co-founders, Marc Andreessen and Eric Bina wrote their first copy of NCSA Mosaic which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
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Original:  Netscape's origins lie at the National Center for Supercomputing Applications at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign where Netscape's co-founders, Marc Andreessen and Eric Bina wrote their first copy of NCSA Mosaic which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
Revised:  Netscape's origins lie at the National Center for Supercomputing Applications at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign where Netscape's co-founders, and wrote their first copy of NCSA Mosaic which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
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Original:  Netscape's origins lie at the National Center for Supercomputing Applications at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign where Netscape's co-founders, Marc Andreessen and Eric Bina wrote their first copy of NCSA Mosaic which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
Revised:  Netscape's origins lie at the National Center for Supercomputing Applications at University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign where Netscape's co-founders, Marc Andreessen and Eric Bina wrote their first copy of which became the first popular web browser and opened up the web for the first time to the general public and started the rise of the Internet in everyday life.
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Original:  Netscape's early success and virtual monopoly of the browser market was short-lived however as Microsoft viewed Netscape's idea of a consistent browser across various operating systems a threat and quickly began development of its own browser, Internet Explorer .
Revised:  Netscape's early success and virtual monopoly of the browser market was short-lived however as Microsoft viewed Netscape's idea of a consistent browser across various operating systems a threat and quickly began development of its own browser, .
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