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Original:  Some guerrilla gardeners carry out their actions at night, in relative secrecy, to sow and tend a new vegetable patch or flower garden in an effort to make the area of use and/or more attractive.
Revised:  Some guerrilla gardeners carry out their actions at night, in relative secrecy, to sow and tend a new vegetable patch or flower garden in an effort to make the area more useful or attractive.
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Original:  Latitude. It depends on how close or how far it is to the equator. This is the most important, and it is based on the concentration of sunlight and the area that it affects. Ocean currents. Certain ocean currents have different temperatures. Warm ocean currents warm the air above it, which warms the coast. Cold ocean currents cool the air above it, which cools the coast. This helps keep the coast at a consistent temperature . Wind and air masses. Heated ground causes air to rise which results in lower air pressure. As it rises it cools and descends to the ground resulting in high air pressure.
Revised:  Factors affecting Nepal's climate. The following are the main factors affecting Nepal's climate. 1. Height/ Altitude: As the altitude increases, the temperature decreases and as the altitude decreases, the temperature increases. In this sense, the higher the altitude from the south to the north of Nepal, the lower the temperature. 2. Latitude: The temperature decreases as you move north or south from the zero-degree latitude line. 3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea, the ground resulting in high air pressure.
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Original:  As it rises it cools and descends to the ground resulting in high air pressure. This cycle repeats, creating wind. These air masses absorb the climate of the air below it.
Revised:  As it rises it cools and descends to the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations. Nepal is about 1100 km from the sea. Because it is far away the temperature here also fluctuates high. It is very cold in winter and very hot in summer. 4. Location of mountains: Mountains provide cooling to such areas as they block the air coming from the sea. Nepal's Himalayan mountains also absorb and cool the water vapor coming from the Bay of Bengal, so there is enough rain in Nepal during the rainy season. The rain-shaded Tibetan region north of the Himalayas receives only a small amount of rainfall due to the climate of the air below it.
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Original:  These air masses absorb the climate of the air below it. Elevation. The higher up you are, the colder and drier it will be. When air rises it expands due to low air pressure which causes it to cool. Relief. The differences in the elevation inland. As air is forced to rise over a piece of land (e. g., a mountain) the temperature decreases and condensation increases. As it condensates water droplets get bigger and heavier and are forced to fall. Once the air mass goes over the mountain the temperature and evaporation increases but condensation decreases, resulting in a halt in precipitation and rain shadows.
Revised:  These air masses absorb the lack of water vapor. Therefore, Himal Pari district Mustang is the lowest rainfall district in Nepal. 5. Local climate: Local climate also affects the climate. For example, there are many lakes in Pokhara, and the mountains are also nearby, so the evaporated air cools down quickly and there is more rain than in other areas. The highest rainfall area of Nepal is Lumle area of Kaski. 6. Forests and Soil: Temperature fluctuations are lower in forested areas than in other areas, while temperate fluctuations are less in loamy soils than in rocky or sandy soils.
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Original:  There is also another name for this acronym that adds nearness to water, and is known as LOWERN instead. They might add near water at the end. Factors that Influence Climate a.k.a. LOWER near water, (2015-12-23) Mexico Documents, accessed 2020-01-28 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Climat
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Original:  Factors that Influence Climate a.k.a. LOWER near water, (2015-12-23) Mexico Documents, accessed 2020-01-28 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Climat
Revised:  Factors that Influence Climate a.k.a. LOWER near water, (2015-12-23) Mexico Documents, accessed 2020-01-28 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Climat
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Original:  Factors that Influence Climate a.k.a. LOWER near water, (2015-12-23) Mexico Documents, accessed 2020-01-28 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Climat
Revised:  Factors that Influence Climate a.k.a. LOWER near water, (2015-12-23) Mexico Documents, accessed 2020-01-28 References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Climate
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Original: Factors affecting Nepal's climate. The following are the main factors affecting Nepal's climate. 1. Height/ Altitude: As the altitude increases, the temperature decreases and as the altitude decreases, the temperature increases. In this sense, the higher the altitude from the south to the north of Nepal, the lower the temperature. 2. Latitude: The temperature decreases as you move north or south from the zero-degree latitude line. 3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea,  the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations.
Revised: LOWER is an acronym for 6 factors that affect climate. the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations.
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Original:  3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea,  the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations.
Revised:  3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea, Latitude. It depends on how close or how far it is to the equator. This is the most important, and it is based on the concentration of sunlight and the area that it affects. Ocean currents. Certain ocean currents have different temperatures. Warm ocean currents warm the air above it, which warms the coast. Cold ocean currents cool the air above it, which cools the coast. This helps keep the coast at a consistent temperature. Wind and air masses. Heated ground causes air to rise which results in lower air pressure. As it rises it cools and descends to the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations.
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Original:  3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea,  the temperature in the area close to the sea is almost uniform and, in the area, far from the sea there are high temperature fluctuations. Nepal is about 1100 km from the sea. Because it is far away the temperaturehere also fluctuates high. It is very cold in winter and very hot in summer. 4. Location of mountains: Mountains provide cooling to such areas as they block the air coming from the sea. Nepal's Himalayan mountains also absorb and cool the water vapor coming from the Bay of Bengal, so there is enough rain in Nepal during the rainy season. The rain-shaded Tibetan region north of the Himalayas receives only a small amount of rainfall due to the lack of water vapor.
Revised:  3. Distance from the sea: Due to the slow cooling and slow heating of the sea, the ground resulting in high air pressure. This cycle repeats, creating wind. These air masses absorb the lack of water vapor.
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Original:  The rain-shaded Tibetan region north of the Himalayas receives only a small amount of rainfall due to the lack of water vapor.Therefore, Himal Pari district Mustang is the lowest rainfall district in Nepal. 5. Local climate: Local climate also affects the climate. For example, there are many lakes in Pokhara, and the mountains are also nearby, so the evaporated air cools down quickly and there is more rain than in other areas. The highest rainfall area of Nepal is Lumle area of Kaski.6. Forests and Soil: Temperature fluctuations are lower in forested areas than in other areas, while temperate fluctuations are less in loamy soils than in rocky or sandy soils.
Revised:  The rain-shaded Tibetan region north of the Himalayas receives only a small amount of rainfall due to the climate of the air below it. Elevation. The higher up you are, the colder and drier it will be. When air rises it expands due to low air pressure which causes it to cool. Relief. The differences in the elevation inland. As air is forced to rise over a piece of land (e.g., a mountain) the temperature decreases and condensation increases. As it condensates water droplets get bigger and heavier and are forced to fall. Once the air mass goes over the mountain the temperature and evaporation increases but condensation decreases, resulting in a halt in precipitation and rain shadows.
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Original:  "Her body was that of a woman with a fair complexion, but her legs were those of a mule" - TSol 4:2  Category:Demons in Judaism Category:Testament of Solo
Revised: Origins "Her body was that of a woman with a fair complexion, but her legs were those of a mule" - TSol 4:2 Category:Demons in Judaism Category:Testament of Solo
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Original:  "Her body was that of a woman with a fair complexion, but her legs were those of a mule" - TSol 4:2  Category:Demons in Judaism Category:Testament of Solo
Revised:  "Her body was that of a woman with a fair complexion, but her legs were those of a mule" - TSol 4:2 Category:Demons Category:Demons in Judaism Category:Testament of Solo
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Original: United Kingdom Following fears of variant Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease (vCJD) being spread through the blood supply, the British government began to import plasma (to meet the need for commercially manufactured fractionated plasma medicines) and (through devolved Blood Services) imported plasma from Europe (to meet the needs for plasma blood components for certain patient groups) .
Revised: United Kingdom Following fears of variant Creutzfeldt-Jakob disease (vCJD) being spread through the blood supply, the British government began to phase out blood plasma from U.K. donors and by the end of 1999 had imported all blood products made with plasma from the United States .
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Original:  Technocentrism is often contrasted with ecocentrism. Ecocentrics, including deep ecologists, see themselves as being subject to nature, rather than in control of it. They lack faith in modern technology and the bureaucracy attached to it. Ecocentrics will argue that the natural world should be respected for its processes and products, and that low-impact technology and self-sufficiency is more desirable than technological control of nature.
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Original:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny    .
Revised:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny . .
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Original:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny    .
Revised:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny Technocenrism vs Ecocentrism Technocentrism is often contrasted with ecocentrism. Ecocentrics, including deep ecologists, see themselves as being subject to nature, rather than in control of it. They lack faith in modern technology and the bureaucracy attached to it so they maintain responsibility for the environment. Ecocentrics will argue that the natural world should be respected for its processes and products and that low-impact technology and self-sufficiency is more desirable than technological control of nature. Fundamentally, ecocentrism maintains that concerns for the natural environment should dominate the needs of humankind, pitting it against the anthropocentric position of technocentrism, which pushes the needs of humans at the forefront even at the expense of everything else. .
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Original:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny    .
Revised:  Harvard University Press, Cambridge, MA. where technocentrism is characterised as: The application of rational and 'value-free' scientific and managerial techniques by a professional elite, who regarded the natural environment as 'neutral stuff' from which man could profitably shape his destiny There are theorists who claim that despite their incompatibilities, technocentrism and ecocentrism can be integrated into one framework because they share several similarities. For instance, it is proposed that technocentrism can facilitate ecocentrism, particularly in the area of policymaking, through shared goals and shared recycled resources. There is also the case of the so-called sustaincentric worldview, which was developed as a product of ecocentric and technocentric views .
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Original:  Arete Civic engagement Civic nationalism Civic virtue (organizational citizenship behavior dimension), specific to organizational behavior theory Civil religion Classical republicanism Commonwealth men Courtesy "England expects that every man will do his duty" Public good  Theological virtues Virtus
Revised:  Arete Civic engagement Civic nationalism Civic virtue (organizational citizenship behavior dimension), specific to organizational behavior theory Civil religion Classical republicanism Commonwealth men Courtesy "England expects that every man will do his duty" Public good Republicanism Theological virtues Virtus
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Original: 320px|Jacques-Louis David's 1786 painting The Oath of the Horatii, illustrating a dramatic moment from Livy's history of Rome, embodies eighteenth century ideas about civic virtue. e is the harvesting of habits important for the success of the community.
Revised: 320px|Jacques-Louis David's 1786 painting The Oath of the Horatii, illustrating a dramatic moment from Livy's history of Rome, embodies eighteenth century ideas about civic virtue. Civic virtue is the harvesting of habits important for the success of the community.
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Original:  Arete Civic engagement Civic nationalism Civic virtue (organizational citizenship behavior dimension), specific to organizational behavior theory Civil religion Classical republicanism Commonwealth men Courtesy "England expects that every man will do his duty" Public good Republicanism Theological virtues Virtus
Revised:  Arete Civic engagement Civic nationalism Civic virtue (organizational citizenship behavior dimension), specific to organizational behavior theory Civil religion Classical republicanism Commonwealth men Courtesy "England expects that every man will do his duty" Public good Theological virtues Virtus
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Original:   Sorge received his doctorate in political science (Dr. rer. pol.) from Hamburg in August 1919.
Revised:  In Kiel, he witnessed the sailors' mutiny which helped spark the German Revolution and joined the Independent Social Democratic Party. He subsequently moved on to Berlin, but arrived too late to participate in the Spartacist uprising. Sorge received his doctorate in political science (Dr. rer. pol.) from Hamburg in August 1919.
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Original:  In 1924, he  and Christiane moved to Moscow, where he officially joined the International Liaison Department of the Comintern, which was also an OGPU intelligence-gathering body.
Revised:  In 1924, he was made responsible for the security of a Soviet delegation attending the KPD's congress in Frankfurt. He caught the attention of one of the delegates, Osip Piatnitsky, a senior official with the Communist International, who recruited him. That year, he and Christiane moved to Moscow, where he officially joined the International Liaison Department of the Comintern, which was also an OGPU intelligence-gathering body.
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Original:  In 1929, Sorge became part of the Red Army's Fourth Department (the later GRU, or military intelligence)  .
Revised:  After several years he became enmeshed in the factional struggles in the Communist movement that occured between the death of Vladimir Lenin and the consolidation of power by Joseph Stalin, being accused of supporting Stalin's last factional opponent, Nikolai Bukharin, alongside three of his German comrades. However, in 1929, Sorge became part of the Red Army's Fourth Department (the later GRU, or military intelligence) .
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Original:   As a journalist, Sorge established himself as an expert on Chinese agriculture.
Revised:  Shortly after his arrival in China, he was able to send intelligence regarding plans by Chiang Kai-shek's Nationalist government for a new offensive against the Chinese Communist Party in the Chinese Civil War, based largely on information gathered from German military advisors to the Nationalists. As a journalist, Sorge established himself as an expert on Chinese agriculture.
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Original:   Group photo, standing from left to right: Hede Massing, Friedrich Pollock, Edward Alexander Ludwig, Konstantin Zetkin, Georg Lukács, Julian Gumperz, Richard Sorge, Karl Alexander (child), Felix Weil, Fukumoto Kazuo, sitting: Karl August Wittfogel, Rose Wittfogel, unknown, Christiane Sorge, Karl Korsch, Hedda Korsch, Käthe Weil, Margarete Lissauer, Bela Fogarasi, Gertrud Alexander (1 May 1923).
Revised:  His performance as an agent in Shanghai had been judged as successful by Berzin, having ensured that he and his agents had escaped detection and expanded the Soviet intelligence network. Group photo, standing from left to right: Hede Massing, Friedrich Pollock, Edward Alexander Ludwig, Konstantin Zetkin, Georg Lukács, Julian Gumperz, Richard Sorge, Karl Alexander (child), Felix Weil, Fukumoto Kazuo, sitting: Karl August Wittfogel, Rose Wittfogel, unknown, Christiane Sorge, Karl Korsch, Hedda Korsch, Käthe Weil, Margarete Lissauer, Bela Fogarasi, Gertrud Alexander (1 May 1923).
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Original:  Sorge was told by his GRU superiors that his mission in Japan was to "give very careful study to the question of whether or not Japan was planning to attack the USSR". After his arrest in 1941, Sorge told his captors: Ironically, Sorge's spying for the Soviets in Japan in the late 1930s was probably safer for him than if he had been in Moscow.
Revised:  His task in Japan was more challenging than that in China: the Soviets had very little intelligence capacity in Japan, so Sorge would have to build a network of agents from scratch, under conditions of much tighter surveillance than he had face in Shanghai. Sorge was told by his GRU superiors that his mission in Japan was to "give very careful study to the question of whether or not Japan was planning to attack the USSR". After his arrest in 1941, Sorge told his captors: Ironically, Sorge's spying for the Soviets in Japan in the late 1930s was probably safer for him than if he had been in Moscow.
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Original:  Ott, now aware that Sorge was sleeping with his wife, let his friend Sorge have "free run of the embassy night and day", as one German diplomat later recalled  .
Revised:  Ott, now aware that Sorge was sleeping with his wife, let his friend Sorge have "free run of the embassy night and day", as one German diplomat later recalled : he was given his own desk at the embassy .
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Original:   Initially, Sorge's reputation in West Germany in the 1950s was highly negative, with Sorge depicted as a traitor working for the Soviet Union who was responsible for the deaths of hundreds of thousands of Wehrmacht soldiers in the winter of 1941–1942.
Revised:  Other Soviet agents who also reported an imminent German invasion were also regarded with suspicion by Stalin. Initially, Sorge's reputation in West Germany in the 1950s was highly negative, with Sorge depicted as a traitor working for the Soviet Union who was responsible for the deaths of hundreds of thousands of Wehrmacht soldiers in the winter of 1941–1942.
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Original:  They portrayed Nazism as an aberration in German history that had no connections to traditional Prussian values , falsely portrayed the Wehrmacht as an honourable fighting force that had nothing to do with the Holocaust and presented the Soviets as guilty of crimes that were even more horrific than those committed by the Nazis.
Revised:  They portrayed Nazism as an aberration in German history that had no connections to traditional Prussian virtues , falsely portrayed the Wehrmacht as an honourable fighting force that had nothing to do with the Holocaust and presented the Soviets as guilty of crimes that were even more horrific than those committed by the Nazis.
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Original:  Criticism of quackery in academia The science-based medicine community has criticized the infiltration of alternative medicine into mainstream academic medicine, education, and publications, accusing institutions of "diverting research time, money, and other resources from more fruitful lines of investigation in order to pursue a theory that has no basis in biology." R.W. Donnell coined the phrase "quackademic medicine" to describe this attention given to alternative medicine by academia.
Revised:  Criticism of quackery in academia The evidence-based medicine community has criticized the infiltration of alternative medicine into mainstream academic medicine, education, and publications, accusing institutions of "diverting research time, money, and other resources from more fruitful lines of investigation in order to pursue a theory that has no basis in biology." R.W. Donnell coined the phrase "quackademic medicine" to describe this attention given to alternative medicine by academia.
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Original:  Another English quack, "Dr. Solomon" claimed that his Cordial Balm of Gilead cured almost anything, but was particularly effective against all venereal complaints, from gonorrhoea to onanism.
Revised:  Another English quack, "Dr. Solomon" claimed that his Cordial Balm of Gilead cured almost anything, but was particularly effective against all venereal complaints, from gonorrhea to onanism.
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