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Original: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , "  Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " +  , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" +  , Mountain Pass , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
Revised: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , " Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " + "" , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" + , Mountain Pass , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
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Original: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , "  Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " +  , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" +  , Mountain Pass , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
Revised: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , " Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " + , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" + "", pronounced "la" , Mountain Pass , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
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Original: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , "  Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " +  , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" +  , Mountain Pass , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
Revised: Etymology The phrase "Shangri-La" most likely comes from the Tibetan , " Shang" – a district of Ü-Tsang, north of TashilhunpoChandra Das – Tibetan English Dictionary " + , pronounced "ri", "Mountain" = "Shang Mountain" + , "Mountain Pass" , which suggests that the area is accessed to, or is named by, "Shang Mountain Pass".
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Original: It does not seem that Africa has any national or continental student rights bills in place.  
Revised: It does not seem that Africa has any national or continental student rights bills in place. The document that was proposed as "A BILL FOR AN ACT TO DECLARE AND PROTECT THE RIGHTS AND SAFETY OF STUDENTS IN HIGHER INSTITUTIONS OF LEARNING, PROMOTE CAMPUS ETHICS, AND OTHER MATTERS INCIDENTAL THERETO, 2020,” is poised to address cultural maginitude of abuse such as sexual harassment, extortion, police brutality and repression of democratic freedoms on Nigeria's campuses. 
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Original:  Chen served as the first CEO of Embrace, the non-profit arm of the organization, before stepping into the CEO role for Embrace Innovations, the for-profit social enterprise that was spun off in 2012.
Revised:  She served as the first CEO of Embrace, the non-profit arm of the organization, before stepping into the CEO role for Embrace Innovations, the for-profit social enterprise that was spun off in 2012.
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Original:  Chen served as the first CEO of Embrace, the non-profit arm of the organization, before stepping into the CEO role for Embrace Innovations, the for-profit social enterprise that was spun off in 2012.
Revised:  Chen served as the first CEO of Embrace, the non-profit arm of the organization, before stepping into the chief executive officer (CEO) rolle of Embrace Innovations, the for-profit social enterprise that was spun off in 2012.
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Original:  In 2013, Chen and the other co-founders of Embrace, Linus Liang, Nag Murty, and Rahul Panicker were awarded the prestigious Economist Innovation Award, under the category of Social and Economic Innovation.
Revised:  In 2013, Chen and the other co-founders of Embrace, Linus Liang, Nag Murty, and Rahul Panicker were awarded the Economist Innovation Award, under the category of Social and Economic Innovation.
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Original:  Hiatus concretions upA model of Dinocochlea with Natural History Museum research scientist Paul Taylor as a scale. Hiatus concretions at the base of the Menuha Formation (Upper Cretaceous), the Negev, southern Israel. Hiatus concretion encrusted by bryozoans (thin, branching forms) and an edrioasteroid;
Revised:  Hiatus concretions Hiatus concretion encrusted by bryozoans (thin, branching forms) and an edrioasteroid;
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Original:   Moqui Marbles, also called Moqui balls or "Moki marbles", are iron oxide concretions which can be found eroding in great abundance out of outcrops of the Navajo Sandstone within south-central and southeastern Utah.
Revised:  |left Moqui Marbles, also called Moqui balls or "Moki marbles", are iron oxide concretions which can be found eroding in great abundance out of outcrops of the Navajo Sandstone within south-central and southeastern Utah.
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Original:  Canadian Journal of Earth Sciences, 4(2), pp.333-333.  
Revised:  Canadian Journal of Earth Sciences, 4(2), pp.333-333. Goggottes are sandstone concretions found in Oligocene (~30 million years) aged sediments near Fontainebleau, France. Gogottes have fetced high prices at auction due to their sculpture-like quality.
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of  Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF   )
Revised:  Dawn Media Group has set up an award for women journalists in her name, the Zubeida Mustafa Award for Journalistic Excellence. Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF )
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of  Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF   )
Revised:  Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of the literary supplement Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF )
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of  Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF   )
Revised:  Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF ) )
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of  Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF   )
Revised:  Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF Books My DAWN Years: Exploring Social Issues (her autobiography about changes she saw in the press in Pakistan over three decades )
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Original:  In 2012, Mustafa was awarded a Lifetime Achievement Award by the International Women's Media Foundation for her coverage on women's issues, politics, educations , health and URL In 2013, the Women Media Center awarded her for her contributions to journalism in Pakistan.
Revised:  In 2012, Mustafa was awarded a Lifetime Achievement Award by the International Women's Media Foundation for her coverage on women's issues, politics, education , health and URL In 2013, the Women Media Center awarded her for her contributions to journalism in Pakistan.
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Original:  In 2012, Mustafa was awarded a Lifetime Achievement Award by the International Women's Media Foundation for her coverage on women's issues, politics, educations , health and URL In 2013, the Women Media Center awarded her for her contributions to journalism in Pakistan.
Revised:  In 2012, Mustafa was awarded a Lifetime Achievement Award by the International Women's Media Foundation for her coverage on women's issues, politics, educations , health and culture. In 2013, the Women Media Center awarded her for her contributions to journalism in Pakistan.
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of the literary supplement Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF) 
Revised:  As of 2020, she continues to write her newspaper columns as a freelance journalist. Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of the literary supplement Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF) 
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Original:   Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of the literary supplement Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF) 
Revised:  Awards and recognition Global Media Award for Excellence (1986 and 2004) by The Population Institute, Washington D.C. for her research on population control Pakistan Publishers and Booksellers Association (2005) for her contribution in the publication of the literary supplement Books & Authors Lifetime Achievement Award (2012) by International Women's Media Foundation (IWMF) Women Leaders Award by the President of Pakistan in 2020
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Original:  For example, the following definition refers to the philosopher W. V. O. Quine:quine, v. (1) To deny resolutely the existence or importance of something real or significant.
Revised:  For example, the following definition refers to the philosopher Willard Van Orman Quine:quine, v. (1) To deny resolutely the existence or importance of something real or significant.
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Original:   Variations An important distinction can be drawn between population epidemiology and clinical epidemiology.
Revised:  After almost 40 years of research, a handful of researchers provided examples of using managerial epidemiology and the importance for healthcare managers to use the practice. However, the perspectives of healthcare leaders on the use of managerial epidemiology were never studied until 2020. In 2020, a study was conducted to explore the adoption of managerial epidemiology by ambulatory healthcare leaders across the United States (See Schenning 2020). The adoption was found to be poor; yet, critically important for improving overall health system performance including the triple aim and impacting population health. From the findings, Dr. Schenning developed a framework for accelerating adoption of managerial epidemiology was developed (See Schenning 2020). She also discussed the importance of using managerial epidemiology for pandemic preparedness and response. Variations An important distinction can be drawn between population epidemiology and clinical epidemiology.
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Original:  Instead, they would extract clinical information from medical records to analyze variations in outcomes, complications, and services used   .
Revised:  Instead, they would extract clinical information from medical records to analyze variations in outcomes, complications, and services used However, healthcare leaders should use managerial epidemiology especially population epidemiology for population health strategies and overall system performance (See Schenning). This is seen with the rise in addressing social determinants of health and further realized during the COVID-19 pandemic (See Schenning) .
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Original:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century B.C. and the first century B.C. , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century B.C .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
Revised:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century BCE and the first century B.C. , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century B.C .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
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Original:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century B.C. and the first century B.C. , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century B.C .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
Revised:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century B.C. and the first century BCE , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century B.C .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
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Original:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century B.C. and the first century B.C. , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century B.C .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
Revised:  It is possible that this sculpture was made by an Achaemenid or Greek sculptor in India and either remained without effect, or was the Indian imitation of a Greek or Achaemenid model, somewhere between the fifth century B.C. and the first century B.C. , although it is generally dated from the time of the Maurya Empire, around the 3rd century BCE .Page 88: "There is one fragmentary lion head from Masarh, Distt.
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Original: Philanthropist  Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh  at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
Revised: Philanthropist Having no children, Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
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Original: Philanthropist  Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh  at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
Revised: Philanthropist Jugal Kishore Birla devoted much time and money to charity, building numerous temples, the Kolkata Medical College, Birla Kanya Vidyalaya in Kolkata for girls, and numerous other such institutions. A devout Hindu, Jugal Kishore Birla was also the moving force behind the building of many of the early Birla Mandirs across India, including the first in Delhi, and those in Kolkata and Bhopal. Supporting Gaushalas (cow shelters) and pinjrapols (animal and bird feeding mangers) was another cause dear to his heart. He also donated money to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
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Original: Philanthropist  Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh  at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
Revised: Philanthropist Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu causes and organisations, including Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
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Original: Philanthropist  Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh  at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
Revised: Philanthropist Jugal Kishore Birla was a Hinduactivist and donated monies to various Hindu organisations of India like Hindu Mahasabha and Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh . at the same time supporting finances of Mahatma Gandhi and Indian National Congress and India's freedom movement, which were looked after together by Ghanshaymdas Birla and others.>
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Original:  By country Cambodia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cambodian paintings often took the form of murals, and have religious significance. Before 1200, art in the temples mostly portrayed scenes from the Hindu pantheon; after 1200, Buddhist scenes began to appear as standard motifs. Its art was heavily influenced by the artistry of India.Le May, Reginald. (1962). A Concise History of Buddhist Art in Siam. Tuttle Publishing. (2nd edition). p. 1. . China Traditional Chinese artists sought to capture the interrelated, vast and multifaceted aspects of nature here are on earth and in the heavens.
Revised:  By country Cambodia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% region East Asian art China Traditional Chinese artists sought to capture the interrelated, vast and multifaceted aspects of nature here are on earth and in the heavens.
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Original:  India 200px|Artist unknown, Radha at night, circa 1650 (Mughal), Kupferstichkabinett Berlin For traditional art, there is little difference between the way night and day are illustrated and the colors that are used. For instance in early Rajput (also called Rajasthani) paintings, the only way to read that the painting is a night scene is through the presence of torches or candles. Later in the Rajput period, both somewhat influenced by Western art, night scenes were painted dramatically with shadows and Mughal paintings used chiaroscuro for shading.Coomaraswamy, Ananda K. (2003). History of Indian and Indonesian Art. Kessinger Publishing. pp. 128, 131. . Although there are a number of schools that taught painting during India's history, there is great similarity among them to evoke charming, romantic scenes.
Revised:  Although there are a number of schools that taught painting during India's history, there is great similarity among them to evoke charming, romantic scenes.
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Original:  Kessinger Publishing. pp. 128, 131. . Although there are a number of schools that taught painting during India's history, there is great similarity among them to evoke charming, romantic scenes. The scenes may include moonlight or lanterns to set an amorous mood.Sharma, Lokesh Chandra. (2008)%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1980 . A Brief History of Indian Painting.
Revised:  Kessinger Publishing. pp. 128, 131. . %DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1980 . A Brief History of Indian Painting.
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Original:  (2008)%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 1980 . A Brief History of Indian Painting. Krishna Prakashan Media. pp. 71, 74, 75, 80, 122. Such was the case for 19th century artist, Chokha, who enjoyed making night paintings like Escapade at Night: A Nobleman Climbs a Rope to Visit his Lover. In that painting Chokha captures the tension of lover climbing several stories into a house with many people and a sleeping guard. Chokha also liked to capture twilight hunting scenes. He astutely conveyed the effects of lighting variation between twilight and the darkest night.Escapade at Night: A Nobleman Climbs a Rope to Visit his Lover. New York: Metropolitan Museum of Art. Retrieved 29 August 2012.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Rao Bhoj Singh Stalking a Tiger at Night is a painting attributed to the Hada Master of the Kota school. In this case the dark is used for dramatic impact. It provides a dark backdrop to the bright figures of the treed hunting party, riled tiger and battered cow that was used as a lure.Rao Bhoj Singh Stalking a Tiger at Night. New York: Metropolitan Museum. Retrieved 29 August 2012.
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Original:  Romantic scenes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Baz Bahadur and Rupmati (not showsn) depicts mistress Rupmati and Muslim ruler Baz Bahadur.
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Original:  Romantic scenes%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Baz Bahadur and Rupmati (not showsn) depicts mistress Rupmati and Muslim ruler Baz Bahadur. The scene is illuminated from the moon on the horizon.Baz Bahadur and Rupmati riding in a moonlit landscape near Mandu. India Office Select Materials, British Library. Retrieved 28 August 2012.Baz Bahadur and Rupmati. Images Online. India Office Select Materials, British Library. Retrieved 28 August 2012.
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