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Original:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Born in São Paulo, Nobre returned to Brazil after receiving a Ph.D. in Meteorology and studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region for a couple of years.
Revised:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Nobre returned to Brazil after receiving a Ph.D. in Meteorology and studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region for a couple of years.
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Original:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Born in São Paulo, Nobre returned to Brazil after receiving a Ph.D. in Meteorology and studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region for a couple of years.
Revised:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Born in São Paulo, Nobre returned to his birth city—São Paulo, Brazil—after receiving his Ph.D. in Meteorology and studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region for a couple of years.
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Original:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Born in São Paulo, Nobre returned to Brazil after receiving a Ph.D. in Meteorology and studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region for a couple of years.
Revised:  There he would remain until 1982, studying Dynamic Meteorology of the Tropical Region with Jules Charney and Jagadish Shukla, pioneers in the construction of climate models . Biography Born in São Paulo, Nobre returned to Brazil after receiving a Ph.D. 
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Original:  In 1988 , when he began studies, as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate , in addition to postulate for the first time the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
Revised:  He began his research in 1988 , when he began studies, as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate , in addition to postulate for the first time the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
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Original:  In 1988 , when he began studies, as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate , in addition to postulate for the first time the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
Revised:  In 1988 as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate , in addition to postulate for the first time the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
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Original:  In 1988 , when he began studies, as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate , in addition to postulate for the first time the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
Revised:  In 1988 , when he began studies, as a visiting researcher at the University of Maryland, which would be recognized as pioneers in the analysis of the impacts of deforestation on the climate and posited the possibility of the Amazon becoming a savannah as a result of global warming,Nobre, C. A., & Borma, L. D. S. (2009).
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Original:  He has worked in the coordination of large scientific projects in the Amazon , Oyama, M. D., & Nobre, C. A. (2004).
Revised:  He has worked in the coordination of large scientific projects in the Amazon and highlighted the Anglo-Brazilian Experiment of Amazon Climate Observations (ABRACOS) from 1990 to 1996, and the Large Scale Biosphere-Atmosphere Experiment in the Amazon (LBA) from 1993 to 2000. Oyama, M. D., & Nobre, C. A. (2004).
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Original:  Journal of Climate, 17(16), 3203-3213 . highlighting the Anglo-Brazilian Experiment of Amazon Climate Observations (ABRACOS), from 1990 to 1996, and the Large Scale Biosphere-Atmosphere Experiment in the Amazon (LBA), from 1993 to 2000.
Revised:  Journal of Climate, 17(16), 3203-3213 
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Original:  Research and contributions Among his many official duties, he served as Head of the Center for Weather Forecasting and Climate Studies, the Center for Terrestrial System Science of INPE, Head of the Secretariat for Research and Development Policies and Programs of the Ministry of Science and Technology and Innovation, Director of the National Institute of Science and Technology for Climate Change, Chairman of the Board and Vice-Chairman of the Scientific Committee of the Brazilian Panel on Climate Change, Executive Secretary of the Brazilian Global Climate Change Research Network, Head of the Scientific Committee of the International Geosphere-Biosphere Programme, High Scientific Advisor to the Panel on Global Sustainability of the UN, and a member of the Scientific Council of the UN General Secretariat. He is a member of the Brazilian Academy of Sciences and the Academy of Sciences of Developing Countries and senior fellow of the Brazilian division of the World Resources Institute .
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Original:   Popularized in 2017 by game makers such as Kwalee, Ketchapp and Voodoo, these games can be quickly played after downloading, usually without any tutorial or instructions.
Revised:  According to ironSource, hyper-casual games occupy 10 of the 15 top most downloaded games. Compare this to a year ago, when there were only 3 hyper-casual games in the top 15. So clearly there is something to them, that they are staging such a dramatic takeover of the gaming charts. In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated. This, in turn, opens up a segment for hyper-casual games to dominate – games that are easy to start and fun to play.” Popularized in 2017 by game makers such as Kwalee, Ketchapp and Voodoo, these games can be quickly played after downloading, usually without any tutorial or instructions.
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Original:  Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( ads that appear at the bottom of the user's screen) This means that a player can receive some kind of bonus (skin, coins, etc.) or extra life to continue a game session after he/she watched video ads. It is absolutely voluntary for the player and perceived pretty positively by the player.
Revised:  Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( 
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Original:   Interstitial ads (advertisements that show between sessions) History Hyper-casual games gained traction in 2017 in mobile gaming, but are often seen as a genre similar to the 1970s video games that lacked detailed design and gameplay.
Revised:  ) Interstitial ads (advertisements that show between sessions) History Hyper-casual games gained traction in 2017 in mobile gaming, but are often seen as a genre similar to the 1970s video games that lacked detailed design and gameplay.
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Original:  According to ironSource, hyper-casual games occupy 10 of the 15 top most downloaded games. Compare this to a year ago, when there were only 3 hyper-casual games in the top 15. So clearly there is something to them, that they are staging such a dramatic takeover of the gaming charts. In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated.
Revised:  “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated.
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Original:  In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated. This, in turn, opens up a segment for hyper-casual games to dominate – games that are easy to start and fun to play.”
Revised:  In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: 
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Original:  According to ironSource, hyper-casual games occupy 10 of the 15 top most downloaded games. Compare this to a year ago, when there were only 3 hyper-casual games in the top 15. So clearly there is something to them, that they are staging such a dramatic takeover of the gaming charts. In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated. This, in turn, opens up a segment for hyper-casual games to dominate – games that are easy to start and fun to play.”
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Original:   Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( a player sees the banner ads at the top or the bottom of the screen.
Revised:  Some even say it’s more of a business model, rather than a mobile game genre. Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( a player sees the banner ads at the top or the bottom of the screen.
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Original:   Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( a player sees the banner ads at the top or the bottom of the screen.
Revised:  Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( ads that appear at the bottom of the screen.
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Original:   Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( a player sees the banner ads at the top or the bottom of the screen. The banners shouldn’t affect the userexperience and can appear only in some situations: after the player beats the level, only on the main menu, etc. ) Interstitial ads (advertisements that show between sessions) History Hyper-casual games gained traction in 2017 in mobile gaming, but are often seen as a genre similar to the 1970s video games that lacked detailed design and gameplay.
Revised:  Rewarded videos (when these ad videos are watched, the player is rewarded with extra time, extra lives, or other in-game rewards) Banner ads ( a player sees the banner ads at the top or the bottom of the user's screen ) Interstitial ads (advertisements that show between sessions) History Hyper-casual games gained traction in 2017 in mobile gaming, but are often seen as a genre similar to the 1970s video games that lacked detailed design and gameplay.
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Original:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo      .
Revised:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo According to ironSource, hyper-casual games occupy 10 of the 15 top most downloaded games. Compare this to a year ago, when there were only 3 hyper-casual games in the top 15. So clearly there is something to them, that they are staging such a dramatic takeover of the gaming charts. In an interview with ironSource, founder of Destruction of Fun Mishka Katkoff explains their appeal: .
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Original:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo      .
Revised:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo “As casual games implement deeper, mid-core features they become more engaging, but also more complicated. This, in turn, opens up a segment for hyper-casual games to dominate – games that are easy to start and fun to play.” .
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Original:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo      .
Revised:  In 2017, Goldman Sachs invested $200 million in hyper-casual gaming company Voodoo Flappy bird generated 50 million downloads by January of 2014, making it one of the top free games on the Android and iOS App Stores. Before that, games were rich with features and users had to spend some time before being immersed in the game. Even though the author quickly removed the game under criticism over the design , it still generated around $50,000 a month from in-app advertising.In only a few years, hyper-casual games started to be fully established in the app stores.The number of hyper-casual games in the top charts is constantly rising .
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Original:   The initiatives use a public health model to prevent violence and crime by treating them as diseases.
Revised:  These mediation's are usually between rival gangs. The violence interrupters are people who have lived experience and usually come from the neighborhoods they work in. Maintaining respect and trust from the community is of the utmost importance to foster strong relationships with the individuals who are being served so that they maintain their credibility as messengers. They also help these individuals access services that can address the underlying root causes of an individual's actions. For example, job training and job placement. The Advance Peace model implemented in Richmond, California, in 2009 provides opportunities that are transformative to the young men referred to their program. These young men, that are identified as drivers of violence, have to check in daily. The program provides transformative travel, internship opportunities, elders' circles and social service navigation just to name a few. The initiatives use a public health model to prevent violence and crime by treating them as diseases.
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Original:   Violence interruption is distinct from law enforcement as an approach to ending violence, although the two approaches can sometimes be regarded as complementary to one another.
Revised:  This type of model is called cure violence. Other models, such as the ceasefire program implemented in Boston in 1996, have proven to be more effective. The program decreased homicides by 71\% and reduced gun assaults by 70\%. This data was tracked from May 1996, program implementation, to May 31, 1998. Violence interruption is distinct from law enforcement as an approach to ending violence, although the two approaches can sometimes be regarded as complementary to one another.
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Original:   The Health Alliance for Violence Intervention is an organization that links violence interruption projects to medical resources . Minneapolis employed a violence interrupters team in September 2020.
Revised:  In fact, violence interruption programs are always implemented in partnership with the district attorney’s office, parole officers, probation officers, local, state and federal law enforcement agencies. The component that makes this strategy so successful is the community partner agencies and the interrupters themselves. Law enforcement agencies are an integral part of these programs because they are the ones that identify who are the drivers of violence in need of intervention. The Health Alliance for Violence Intervention is an organization that links violence interruption projects to medical resources . Minneapolis employed a violence interrupters team in September 2020.
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Original:   The Health Alliance for Violence Intervention is an organization that links violence interruption projects to medical resources . Minneapolis employed a violence interrupters team in September 2020.
Revised:  The Health Alliance for Violence Intervention (HAVI) is a network of hospital-based violence intervention programs that cultivate relationships between the hospitals and community social service agencies to provide resources and services to victims of gun violence. Oakland California implemented a hospital-based violence intervention program to conduct research and assess the effectiveness of this model of violence intervention. The participants were predominantly Black and Latino youth between the ages of 12 to 20 years old. Youth that had received an intervention at the hospital were less likely to be arrested for any offenses by 70\% and less likely to continue committing crimes by 60\%. Minneapolis employed a violence interrupters team in September 2020.
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Original:  a consultant with the group said they were asked to step back during the election season   .
Revised:  a consultant with the group said they were asked to step back during the election season In 2019, Albuquerque Police Department and the Mayor's office visited Oakland CA and New Haven CT to research their group violence intervention programs. In March of 2020 they started program implementation. The Violence Intervention Program (VIP) was created. By June 2020 a skeleton crew was in place. Consisting of a program manager, police commander and a violence interrupter. The Violence Intervention Program is a hybrid model of cure violence and group violence intervention. Albuquerque's VIP targets a very small percentage of the population, .001\%, who are high risk individuals of committing gun violence. VIP will attempt to break the cycles of violence that at times is inter-generational. It will include these 5 components: Analysis of violent crimes and trends. Respectful, in-person communication with high-risk individuals, relationship-based social services for high-risk individuals, narrowly focused law enforcement actions and intentional management and partnership with prosecutors and other law enforcement agencies .
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Original:  He vowed to gather 100 pieces of URL  On this road trip, we went to all these different national parks and we were basically geotagging the trash as we picked it up, ” Reinhold said.
Revised:  He vowed to gather 100 pieces of URL " On this road trip, we went to all these different national parks and we were basically geotagging the trash as we picked it up, ” Reinhold said.
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Original:  He vowed to gather 100 pieces of URL  On this road trip, we went to all these different national parks and we were basically geotagging the trash as we picked it up, ” Reinhold said.
Revised:  He vowed to gather 100 pieces of URL On this road trip, we went to all these different national parks and we were basically geotagging the trash as we picked it up, " Reinhold said.
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Original:  “At some point, we said ‘why not hashtag it #trashtag?’” Byron Roman, a Phoenix, Arizona, resident, reposted a picture on March 5, 2019  of a litter-strewn roadside area in Algeria along with an “after” shot of Drici Tani Younes posing with nine massive bags of trash, all stuffed to the brim in the middle of the freshly cleaned strip of dirt.
Revised:  “At some point, we said ‘why not hashtag it #trashtag?’” Byron Roman, a Phoenix, Arizona, resident, reposted a picture on March 5, 2019 , of a litter-strewn roadside area in Algeria along with an “after” shot of Drici Tani Younes posing with nine massive bags of trash, all stuffed to the brim in the middle of the freshly cleaned strip of dirt.
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Original:  “At some point, we said ‘why not hashtag it #trashtag?’” Byron Roman, a Phoenix, Arizona, resident, reposted a picture on March 5, 2019  of a litter-strewn roadside area in Algeria along with an “after” shot of Drici Tani Younes posing with nine massive bags of trash, all stuffed to the brim in the middle of the freshly cleaned strip of dirt.
Revised:  “At some point, we said ‘why not hashtag it #trashtag?’” Byron Roman, a Phoenix, Arizona, resident, reposted a picture on March 5, 2019 of a litter-strewn roadside area in Algeria along with an "after" shot of Drici Tani Younes posing with nine massive bags of trash, all stuffed to the brim in the middle of the freshly cleaned strip of dirt.
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Original:   The Hira is the main opponent in one of the epic tales about the culture hero Moussa Gname (also Mousa-Gname, Mousa-Djinni, "Moses the Son of a Spirit").
Revised:  The main source are the tales collected by M. A. Dupuis Yakouba at the start of the twentieth century.Belcher, African Myths, 21, 459. The Hira is the main opponent in one of the epic tales about the culture hero Moussa Gname (also Mousa-Gname, Mousa-Djinni, "Moses the Son of a Spirit").
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Original:  the next day, all Moussa has to do is show the Hira his own hairs for the monster to lie down and be killed. 
Revised:  the next day, all Moussa has to do is show the Hira his own hairs for the monster to lie down and be killed. Bibliography Belcher, Stephen: Epic Traditions of Africa (Bloomington: Indiana UP, 1999; ) Belcher, Stephen: African Myths of Origin (New York: Penguin, 2005; ) Dupuis Yakouba, M. A.: Les Gow ou Chasseurs du Niger, Legendes Songaï de la Région de Tomboctou (Paris: Leroux, 1911)
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Original:  Moussa's spirit-father teaches him hunting magic magical formulae, and he uses those to defeat the mythical monster the Hira.  
Revised:  A local leader, Kuruyore, sees in him the future leader of their people but they don't believe him, and Moussa is bullied by the other children. Finally, he goes to his mother, who in turn sends him to the tree where his spirit-father teaches him hunting magic magical formulae, and he uses those to defeat the mythical monster the Hira. 
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Original:  Moussa's spirit-father teaches him hunting magic magical formulae, and he uses those to defeat the mythical monster the Hira.  
Revised:  Moussa's spirit-father teaches him hunting magic . Kuruyore takes off his cap and offers it to the young man; while he refuses the cap, his expertise and leadership are clear, but he accepts his position as chief on the condition that none of the people will eat cooked food in the bush. His greatest heroic feat, performed while still young, was to defeat the mythical monster the Hira. 
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Original:  Moussa's spirit-father teaches him hunting magic magical formulae, and he uses those to defeat the mythical monster the Hira.  
Revised:  Moussa's spirit-father teaches him hunting magic magical formulae, and he uses those to defeat the mythical monster the Hira. Bibliography Belcher, Stephen: Epic Traditions of Africa (Bloomington: Indiana UP, 1999; ) Belcher, Stephen: African Myths of Origin (New York: Penguin, 2005; ) Dupuis Yakouba, M. A.: Les Gow ou Chasseurs du Niger, Legendes Songaï de la Région de Tomboctou (Paris: Leroux, 1911)
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