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Original:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
Revised:  McGovern is strongly critical of the administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
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Original:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
Revised:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the US . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
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Original:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
Revised:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
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Original:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
Revised:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
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Original:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of Vietnamese troop numbers.
Revised:  McGovern is strongly critical of the George W. Bush administration of the USA . He claims that he personally had missed a chance to try to stop the Vietnam War by failing to whistleblow about a cable sent by General Abrams on August 20, 1967 regarding a significant underestimate of troop numbers.
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Original:  He called for "shedding light on what the Bush administration is up to beneath the spin " and asked that "Those of you clued into Israeli plans and U.S. intelligence support for them might clue us in too."
Revised:  He called for "shedding light on what the Bush administration is up to beneath the " and asked that "Those of you clued into Israeli plans and U.S. intelligence support for them might clue us in too."
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Original:  McGovern also claims that whistleblowing could have stopped the 2003 Invasion of Iraq , saying "Any number of people would have had a good chance of stopping the Iraq war, had they the courage to disclose publicly what they knew BEFORE it was launched." Just five days before the attack on Iraq officially started, McGovern and his colleagues called for whistleblowing and claimed that the Bush administration was misrepresenting the case for an attack on Iraq.
Revised:  McGovern also claims that whistleblowing could have stopped the , saying "Any number of people would have had a good chance of stopping the Iraq war, had they the courage to disclose publicly what they knew BEFORE it was launched." Just five days before the attack on Iraq officially started, McGovern and his colleagues called for whistleblowing and claimed that the Bush administration was misrepresenting the case for an attack on Iraq.
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Original:  In September 2004, McGovern along with Daniel Ellsberg , who had precipitated a national uproar in 1971 when he released the Pentagon Papers, the US military's account of activities during the Vietnam War, to The New York Times, along with several other colleagues had already announced that they would form a whistleblowers' support network for revealing possibly classified information regarding the conduct of the occupation of Iraq.
Revised:  In September 2004, McGovern along with , who had precipitated a national uproar in 1971 when he released the Pentagon Papers, the US military's account of activities during the Vietnam War, to The New York Times, along with several other colleagues had already announced that they would form a whistleblowers' support network for revealing possibly classified information regarding the conduct of the occupation of Iraq.
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Original:  The    vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
Revised:  The originally proposed fine of £200 was raised to £2500 for failing to stop people smoking in banned areas in the late stages of the parliamentary process. Other fines include a fixed penalty notice of £50 for lighting up in banned areas and spot fines of £200 for failing to display no smoking signs in banned areas. vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
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Original:  The    vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
Revised:  The Smoking may also be banned in "substantially enclosed" venues such as railway stations and football stadiums; this may also include cars carrying passengers but no decision has been taken on this as yet. Ministers will finalise precise regulations after a three month consultation. vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
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Original:  The    vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
Revised:  The The vote was politically fraught, as the Labour Party in government had proposed a 'compromise' bill, in line with their election manifesto, which would allow pubs not serving food to be exempt from the ban.
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Original:   The ban will bring England in line with Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales, which will all be introducing a full smoking ban for pubs and clubs  .
Revised:  The ban will bring England in line with Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales, which will all be introducing a full smoking ban for pubs and clubs . The bill also gives ministers powers to increase the age for purchasing cigarettes from 16 to 18 which ministers will begin the consultation process upon shortly .
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Original: __NOTOC__ Nyon: After the prosecution dropped the charges on Wednesday, the local tribunal of Nyon pronounced a double acquittement for sergeant Poget and gendarme Deiss (previous story and facts)
Revised: __NOTOC__ After the prosecution dropped the charges on Wednesday, the local tribunal of Nyon pronounced a double acquittement for sergeant Poget and gendarme Deiss (previous story and facts)
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Original:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket , and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on  21st  February.
Revised:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket . It is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on 21st February.
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Original:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket , and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on  21st  February.
Revised:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket , and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on the 21st February.
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Original:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket , and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on  21st  February.
Revised:  Its payload, the MTSAT-2 satellite designed to control air traffic and track weather patterns, has successfully separated from the rocket , and is due to be inserted into a geostationary orbit on 21st of February.
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Original:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings . Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan .
Revised:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another important contributor to the Indian Innings . Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan .
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Original:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings . Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan .
Revised:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan .
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Original:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings . Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan .
Revised:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings . .
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Original: Major General Chamlong Srimuang, the leader of the 1992 pro-democracy movement that ended Thailand's last military junta  has joined the calls for the country's Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra to resign.
Revised: Major General Chamlong Srimuang, the leader of the 1992 pro-democracy movement that ended Thailand's last military junta , has joined the calls for the country's Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra to resign.
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Original: Major General Chamlong Srimuang, the leader of the 1992 pro-democracy movement that ended Thailand's last military junta  has joined the calls for the country's Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra to resign.
Revised: Major General Chamlong Srimuang, the leader of the 1992 pro-democracy movement that ended Thailand's last military junta has joined the calls for Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra to resign.
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Original:  Chamlong is expected to join the next anti-Thaksin rally  announced by Sondhi Limthongkul  in Sanam Luang (Royal Plaza) in Bangkok on February 26.
Revised:  Chamlong is expected to join the next anti-Thaksin rally , announced by Sondhi Limthongkul in Sanam Luang (Royal Plaza) in Bangkok on February 26.
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Original:  Chamlong is expected to join the next anti-Thaksin rally  announced by Sondhi Limthongkul  in Sanam Luang (Royal Plaza) in Bangkok on February 26.
Revised:  Chamlong is expected to join the next anti-Thaksin rally announced by Sondhi Limthongkul , in Sanam Luang (Royal Plaza) in Bangkok on February 26.
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Original: "This is a huge surprise, though maybe it shouldn't have been," said Dr. Steve Squyres of Cornell University, Ithaca , N.Y., principal investigator for the science instruments on Opportunity and its twin, Spirit.
Revised: "This is a huge surprise, though maybe it shouldn't have been," said Dr. Steve Squyres of Cornell University, , N.Y., principal investigator for the science instruments on Opportunity and its twin, Spirit.
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Original: Microsoft has recently made changes to the Windows license agreement, saying that  “An upgrade of the motherboard is considered to result in a new personal computer to which Microsoft OEM operating system software cannot be transferred from another computer."
Revised: Microsoft has recently made changes to the Windows license agreement, saying that , “An upgrade of the motherboard is considered to result in a new personal computer to which Microsoft OEM operating system software cannot be transferred from another computer."
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Original:  Some are threatening to storm the mine while soldiers are trying to keep them calm and rescuers continue to pick through the rock , and debris with hand tools, fearing that any power equipment might set off another explosion.
Revised:  Some are threatening to storm the mine while soldiers are trying to keep them calm and rescuers continue to pick through the rock and debris with hand tools, fearing that any power equipment might set off another explosion.
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Original:  The local newspaper's headline caused panic by quoting one of over a dozen surviving miners who were close enough to the exits to escape , They are surely dead . (La Prensa de Monclova).
Revised:  The local newspaper's headline caused panic by quoting one of over a dozen surviving miners who were close enough to the exits to escape : " They are surely dead . (La Prensa de Monclova).
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Original:  The local newspaper's headline caused panic by quoting one of over a dozen surviving miners who were close enough to the exits to escape , They are surely dead . (La Prensa de Monclova).
Revised:  The local newspaper's headline caused panic by quoting one of over a dozen surviving miners who were close enough to the exits to escape , They are surely dead ," (La Prensa de Monclova).
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Original:  However, Arturo Vilchis, Civil Protection Director  refused to speculate on the condition of the miners, while Javier de la Fuente, an engineering contractor with mine owner Grupo Mexico S.A. de C.V. also tried to hold out some hope.
Revised:  However, Arturo Vilchis, Civil Protection Director , refused to speculate on the condition of the miners, while Javier de la Fuente, an engineering contractor with mine owner Grupo Mexico S.A. de C.V. also tried to hold out some hope.
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Original:  However, Arturo Vilchis, Civil Protection Director  refused to speculate on the condition of the miners, while Javier de la Fuente, an engineering contractor with mine owner Grupo Mexico S.A. de C.V. also tried to hold out some hope.
Revised:  However, Arturo Vilchis, Civil Protection Director refused to speculate on the condition of the miners, while Javier de la Fuente, an engineering contractor with mine owner Grupo México S.A. de C.V. also tried to hold out some hope.
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Original:  Juan Rebolledo, vice president of international affairs for Grupo Mexico , assured onlookers that U.S. mining experts were on the way, and officials at the U.S. Mine Safety and Health Administration have confirmed that they've sent a specialized equipment truck and several mining experts which should arrive at the mine site on Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  Juan Rebolledo, vice president of international affairs for Grupo México , assured onlookers that U.S. mining experts were on the way, and officials at the U.S. Mine Safety and Health Administration have confirmed that they've sent a specialized equipment truck and several mining experts which should arrive at the mine site on Wednesday afternoon.
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Original:  however, Sunday he won the endorsement of South Carolina's largest newspaper, . The withdrawal reduces the candidate field to five in South Carolina, with Romney, former House Speaker Newt Gingrich, Congressman Ron Paul, Texas governor Rick Perry, and former Senator  still in the race.
Revised:  however, Sunday he won the endorsement of South Carolina's largest newspaper, . The withdrawal reduces the candidate field to five in South Carolina, with Romney, former House Speaker Newt Gingrich, Congressman Ron Paul, Texas governor Rick Perry, and former Senator Rick Santorum still in the race.
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Original:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
Revised:  Off the track, the organizers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
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Original:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
Revised:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displays , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
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Original: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
Revised: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
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Original: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
Revised: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inagural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
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Original:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but the Easter event was canned due to the bankruptcy of the EMS a short time after their 2000 event  and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter  .
Revised:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but due to EMS going bankrupt a short time after their 2000 event and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter .
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Original:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but the Easter event was canned due to the bankruptcy of the EMS a short time after their 2000 event  and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter  .
Revised:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but the Easter event was canned due to the bankruptcy of the EMS a short time after their 2000 event was ran and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter .
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Original:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but the Easter event was canned due to the bankruptcy of the EMS a short time after their 2000 event  and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter  .
Revised:  In 2000, Event Management Specialists held the first motorcycle racing event since 1990, but the Easter event was canned due to the bankruptcy of the EMS a short time after their 2000 event and the inability of the then Bathurst City Council to find another promoter , the Easter event was canned .
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Original:  Off the track, the organizers have promised manufacturer displays , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
Revised:  Off the track, the organisers have promised manufacturer displays , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
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Original:  Off the track, the organizers have promised manufacturer displays , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
Revised:  Off the track, the organizers have promised manufacturer displayes , merchandise stands, music, joyflights, Off-road demonstrations and joyrides, autograph sessions and interviews with influential people in the Australian motor industry.
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Original: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight  Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inagural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
Revised: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inagural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
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Original: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight  Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inagural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
Revised: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between 13 and 16 April, 2006.
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Original: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between  13 and 16 April , 2006.
Revised: 200px|Mount Panorama 200px|Mount Panorama's main straight The Bathurst Regional Council has begun preparing the Mount Panorama motor racing circuit for the inaugural Bathurst International Motorsport Festival (BIMF) to be held between April 13 and 16 April , 2006.
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