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Original:  This follows the publication earlier in the week of a white paper by the Scottish government outlining plans for what would happen if the country votes to leave the  . Major said that there won't be a currency union between a newly independent Scotland and a post-split United Kingdom: "A currency union, which the SNP [  ] assume is negotiable, would require the UK to underwrite Scottish debts.
Revised:  This follows the publication earlier in the week of a white paper by the Scottish government outlining plans for what would happen if the country votes to leave the . Major said that there won't be a currency union between a newly independent Scotland and a post-split United Kingdom: "A currency union, which the SNP [ Scottish National Party ] assume is negotiable, would require the UK to underwrite Scottish debts.
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Original:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the  . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would  feel — with breakaway movements in  and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
Revised:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the European Union . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would feel — with breakaway movements in and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
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Original:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the  . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would  feel — with breakaway movements in  and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
Revised:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would Spain feel — with breakaway movements in and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
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Original:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the  . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would  feel — with breakaway movements in  and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
Revised:  Major said the other alternative was to join the , but this would require Scotland to first join the . EU membership may not be easy as "many states would have concerns about the accession of a separatist member. [...] How would feel — with breakaway movements in Catalonia and the ? Spain uses uncertainty over EU membership to deter Catalonia from even holding a referendum on independence.
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Original:  A spokesperson for  , First Minister of Scotland and the leader of the Scottish National Party, responded to Major's remarks: "Sir John Major is quite wrong to suggest that the rest of the UK should lay exclusive claim to all the assets of the UK, which the people of Scotland contribute to and of which is one.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Alex Salmond , First Minister of Scotland and the leader of the Scottish National Party, responded to Major's remarks: "Sir John Major is quite wrong to suggest that the rest of the UK should lay exclusive claim to all the assets of the UK, which the people of Scotland contribute to and of which is one.
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Original:  Officials estimate that nearly 800 people have been killed since the vote, which saw President Mwai Kibaki, a Kikuyu, defeat opposition candidate Raila Odinga by just 230,000 votes.
Revised:  Officials estimate that nearly 800 people have been killed since the vote, which saw President Mwai Kibaki, a Kikuyu, defeat opposition candidate by just 230,000 votes.
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Original:  Officials estimate that nearly 800 people have been killed since the vote, which saw President Mwai Kibaki, a Kikuyu, defeat opposition candidate  by just 230,000 votes.
Revised:  Officials estimate that nearly 800 people have been killed since the vote, which saw President Mwai Kibaki, a Kikuyu, defeat opposition candidate Raila Odinga by just 230,000 votes.
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Original:   GroupsChampionRunner-UpThird Place"Popular Game Voting"Online RPGPerfect World(GameFlier Station)Dekaron Online(Insrea Game Center)Angel Love Online(UserJoy Technology)Final Step(M-Etel Corporation)Leisure GameWe Dancing Online(IGS)Audition Online(Insrea)Star 31 Online(IGS)Console GameThe Legend ofSword and Fairy 4(Softstar Entertainment)Princess Maker 5(T-Time Technology)The Legend ofThree Kingdoms VI(UserJoy Technology)Upcoming GameChang Chun Online(IGS)Richman:
Revised:  competition GroupsChampionRunner-UpThird Place"Popular Game Voting"Online RPGPerfect World(GameFlier Station)Dekaron Online(Insrea Game Center)Angel Love Online(UserJoy Technology)Final Step(M-Etel Corporation)Leisure GameWe Dancing Online(IGS)Audition Online(Insrea)Star 31 Online(IGS)Console GameThe Legend ofSword and Fairy 4(Softstar Entertainment)Princess Maker 5(T-Time Technology)The Legend ofThree Kingdoms VI(UserJoy Technology)Upcoming GameChang Chun Online(IGS)Richman:
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Original:  The Greek Prime Minister Kostas Karamanlis said in a statement that "Archbishop Christodoulos was an enlightened church leader whose work brought the church closer to society, closer to modern problems and to young people" while opposition leader George Papandreou praised the late Archbishop and his personality.
Revised:  The Greek Prime Minister said in a statement that "Archbishop Christodoulos was an enlightened church leader whose work brought the church closer to society, closer to modern problems and to young people" while opposition leader George Papandreou praised the late Archbishop and his personality.
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Original:  Born in 1939 in the town of Xanthi , northern Greece, Christodoulos Paraskevaides was for many years Metropolitan of Demetrias in Volos , until 1998 when he became Archbishop of Athens and all Greece.
Revised:  Born in 1939 in the town of , northern Greece, Christodoulos Paraskevaides was for many years Metropolitan of Demetrias in Volos , until 1998 when he became Archbishop of Athens and all Greece.
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Original:  Born in 1939 in the town of Xanthi , northern Greece, Christodoulos Paraskevaides was for many years Metropolitan of Demetrias in Volos , until 1998 when he became Archbishop of Athens and all Greece.
Revised:  Born in 1939 in the town of Xanthi , northern Greece, Christodoulos Paraskevaides was for many years Metropolitan of Demetrias in , until 1998 when he became Archbishop of Athens and all Greece.
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Original:  A controversial personality himself, Christodoulos worked to mend ties with the Vatican and he also grudgingly agreed to a landmark visit by Pope John Paul II to Greece in 2001 that marked a turning point in relations between the Catholic and Orthodox Churches following the Great Schism of 1054 that split Christianity.
Revised:  A controversial personality himself, Christodoulos worked to mend ties with the Vatican and he also grudgingly agreed to a landmark visit by Pope John Paul II to Greece in 2001 that marked a turning point in relations between the Catholic and Orthodox Churches following the of 1054 that split Christianity.
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Original:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in Gurgaon , a satellite city of Delhi with two million inhabitants, and found that poor laborers were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
Revised:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in , a satellite city of Delhi with two million inhabitants, and found that poor laborers were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
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Original:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in Gurgaon , a satellite city of Delhi with two million inhabitants, and found that poor laborers were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
Revised:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in Gurgaon , a satellite city of with two million inhabitants, and found that poor laborers were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
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Original:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in Gurgaon , a satellite city of Delhi with two million inhabitants, and found that poor laborers were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
Revised:  On January 24, police raided a clinic in Gurgaon , a satellite city of Delhi with two million inhabitants, and found that poor were having kidneys removed, sometimes coerced at gunpoint.
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Original:  ” Later in the speech Hon Biti criticized the elections being announced for March by saying that he thinks "the call for elections in March is irresponsible and is an affront to the dialogue process which is still taking place."
Revised:  " Later in the speech Hon Biti criticized the elections being announced for March by saying that he thinks "the call for elections in March is irresponsible and is an affront to the dialogue process which is still taking place."
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Original:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day. ”
Revised:  He continued by saying he hopes "SADC will deal with this matter urgently because as a party, we remain committed to the peaceful resolution of the Zimbabwean crisis because Zimbabweans are tired of the national crisis which has them surviving on less than US20 cents a day. "
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Original:  The Lowdown is a way for young people to talk about how they're feeling while facilitating the new ways of communication easily adopted by those aged 13-24-years , the demographic of The Lowdown.
Revised:  The Lowdown is a service that allows young people to talk about how they're feeling while facilitating the new ways of communication easily adopted by those aged 13-24-years , the demographic of The Lowdown.
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Original:  The Lowdown is a way for young people to talk about how they're feeling while facilitating the new ways of communication easily adopted by those aged 13-24-years , the demographic of The Lowdown.
Revised:  The Lowdown is a way for young people to talk about how they're feeling while facilitating the new ways of communication easily adopted by those aged 13-24 years , the demographic of The Lowdown.
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Original:  Ms Bagnall said they were unsure how much the service - which started December 6, 2007 - would cost annually, but expected it to be in near the half-million dollar mark due to the recent nature of the site and on going development.
Revised:  Ms Bagnall said they were unsure how much the service - which started December 6, 2007 - would cost annually, but expected it to be near the half-million dollar mark due to the recent nature of the site and on going development.
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Original:  The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by the Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday, and was different from shows of past years ; from the gaming population, industry, and exhibition arrangements.
Revised:  The 2008 Taipei Game Show, organized by the Taipei Computer Association (TCA), ended on Monday, and was different from shows of past years . This could be seen in the gaming population, industry, and exhibition arrangements.
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Original:  With many gaming experts and visitors participating in the several events, the gaming population has progressively grown up . Especially in the "Popular Game & Company Voting" category, the public apparently looked at the gaming industry on the bright side as the OBMs (game production companies) produced many "excellence" products and marketed them around the world.
Revised:  With many gaming experts and visitors participating in the several events, the gaming population has progressively matured . Especially in the "Popular Game & Company Voting" category, the public apparently looked at the gaming industry on the bright side as the OBMs (game production companies) produced many "excellence" products and marketed them around the world.
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Original:  With many gaming experts and visitors participating in the several events, the gaming population has progressively grown up . Especially in the "Popular Game & Company Voting" category, the public apparently looked at the gaming industry on the bright side as the OBMs (game production companies) produced many "excellence" products and marketed them around the world.
Revised:  With many gaming experts and visitors participating in the several events, the gaming population has progressively grown up . Especially in the "Popular Game & Company Voting" category, the public apparently viewed the gaming industry on the bright side as the OBMs (game production companies) produced many "excellence" products and marketed them around the world.
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Original:  Since Sony Computer Entertainment Taiwan Limited (SCE Taiwan) was established in December 2007, SCE Taiwan  participated in the 2007 Taipei IT Month to rearrange their styles from marketing and cross-industry cooperations.
Revised:  Since Sony Computer Entertainment Taiwan Limited (SCE Taiwan) was established in December 2007, SCE Taiwan has participated in the 2007 Taipei IT Month to rearrange their styles from marketing and cross-industry cooperations.
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Original:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan,  to gain popularity and notability at this show , they (Microsoft ) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
Revised:  Sony rival, Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show , they (Microsoft ) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
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Original:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan,  to gain popularity and notability at this show , they (Microsoft ) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
Revised:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, sought to gain popularity and notability at this show , they (Microsoft ) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
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Original:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan,  to gain popularity and notability at this show , they (Microsoft ) preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
Revised:  On the other side of Microsoft Taiwan, to gain popularity and notability at this show . Microsoft preliminary moved their new game launch from the 3C store to the TWTC again, since 2007.
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Original:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating  not only in the trade (B2B)  area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
Revised:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating , not only in the trade (B2B) area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
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Original:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating  not only in the trade (B2B)  area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
Revised:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating not only in the (B2B) area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
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Original:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating  not only in the trade (B2B)  area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
Revised:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating not only in the trade (B2B) trade area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
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Original:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating  not only in the trade (B2B)  area for international buyers but also the consuming (B2C) area for local visitors.
Revised:  OBMs in Taiwan Some local OBMs like Softstar Entertainment, International Games Systems (IGS), GameFlier Station, UserJoy Technology, and others showed their versatility by participating not only in the trade (B2B) area for international buyers but also the consumer (B2C) area for local visitors.
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Original:  Not only a show Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created in the past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with the Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and the Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
Revised:  Not just a show Since the "Charity Bidding Pavilion" was created in the past year and recommended by local NGOs and disadvantaged organizations, the TCA planned to cooperate with the Taipei Orphans Welfare Association, and the Taiwan Gaming Industry Association (TGIA) to help orphan kids this year again.
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Original:  It is speculated that he was hit by a U.S. Missile , which is now identified as  a Predator drone, in the North Waziristan of Pakistan, and a dozen more militants were also reported dead.
Revised:  It is speculated that he was hit by a United States missile , which is now identified as a Predator drone, in the North Waziristan of Pakistan, and a dozen more militants were also reported dead.
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Original:  It is speculated that he was hit by a U.S. Missile , which is now identified as  a Predator drone, in the North Waziristan of Pakistan, and a dozen more militants were also reported dead.
Revised:  It is speculated that he was hit by a U.S. Missile , which is now identified as being fired from a Predator drone, in the North Waziristan of Pakistan, and a dozen more militants were also reported dead.
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Original:  Many rhythm gamers are anicipating the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) the beta version of which was recently showcased at the 2008 Taipei Game Show.
Revised:  Many rhythm gamers are anticipating the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) the beta version of which was recently showcased at the 2008 Taipei Game Show.
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Original:  Many rhythm gamers are anicipating the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) the beta version of which was recently showcased at the 2008 Taipei Game Show.
Revised:  Many rhythm gamers are anicipating the release of "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", the Namco Bandai Games Inc. (NBGI) beta version of which was recently showcased at the 2008 Taipei Game Show.
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at  2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series  because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from  Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at the 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at  2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series  because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from  Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series ' because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
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Original:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at  2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series  because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from  Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
Revised:  Interview It became a hot topic after the NBGI decided to showcase the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version" at 2008 Taipei Game Show, and it's different from past series because the NBGI acquired several Mandarin-language songs from the Cross-Strait area (Taiwan, China, and Hong Kong) especially.
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Original:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release different versions in different countries similar to the way "Taiko Drum Master" , was released with special designs for American and European gamers?
Revised:  After the release of the "Taiko no Tatsujin 11: Asian Version", will the NBGI release different versions in different countries similar to the way "Taiko Drum Master" was released with special designs for American and European gamers?
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Original:  they want to subjugate them and forcefully create a greater Islamic sharia state." "There is nothing they won't do if they think it will work in creating carnage and the political fallout that comes from that," the U.S. Ambassador Ryan Crocker said.
Revised:  they want to subjugate them and forcefully create a greater Islamic sharia state." "There is nothing they won't do if they think it will work in creating carnage and the political fallout that comes from that," the said.
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Original: Moussawi said this of the investigation: "Forensic and bomb squad experts as well as the people and traders of al-Shorja area of the carpet market have confirmed that the woman who was blown-up there today was often in the area and was mentally disabled...
Revised: Moussawi said this of the investigation: "Forensic and bomb squad experts as well as the people and traders of area of the carpet market have confirmed that the woman who was blown-up there today was often in the area and was mentally disabled...
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