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Original: ना होने का सबसे बड़ा कारण स्थानीय ठेकेदार और स्थानीय राजनेता है लोगों का कहना है कि हमारे मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम भी इस बात से भलीभांति परिचित है लेकिन फिर भी हमने वह अनदेखा कर रहे हैं इस बात का बहुत दुख हो रहा है उनका कहना है कि हमें बहुत खुशी हुई थी जब सुनने में आया था कि मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम बने लोगों में एक हर्षोल्लास की उमंग सी दौड़ उठी थी लेकिन आज जब ऐसा दिन देखने को मिल रहा है बहुत ही दुख हो रहा है लोगों का कहना है कि ऐसा मुख्यमंत्री भविष्य में किसी को ना मिले              
Revised: ना होने का सबसे बड़ा कारण स्थानीय ठेकेदार और स्थानीय राजनेता है लोगों का कहना है कि हमारे मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम भी इस बात से भलीभांति परिचित है लेकिन फिर भी हमने वह अनदेखा कर रहे हैं इस बात का बहुत दुख हो रहा है उनका कहना है कि हमें बहुत खुशी हुई थी जब सुनने में आया था कि मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम बने लोगों में एक हर्षोल्लास की उमंग सी दौड़ उठी थी लेकिन आज जब ऐसा दिन देखने को मिल रहा है बहुत ही दुख हो रहा है लोगों का कहना है कि ऐसा मुख्यमंत्री भविष्य में किसी को ना मिले Copy editing Marks 
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Original: ना होने का सबसे बड़ा कारण स्थानीय ठेकेदार और स्थानीय राजनेता है लोगों का कहना है कि हमारे मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम भी इस बात से भलीभांति परिचित है लेकिन फिर भी हमने वह अनदेखा कर रहे हैं इस बात का बहुत दुख हो रहा है उनका कहना है कि हमें बहुत खुशी हुई थी जब सुनने में आया था कि मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम बने लोगों में एक हर्षोल्लास की उमंग सी दौड़ उठी थी लेकिन आज जब ऐसा दिन देखने को मिल रहा है बहुत ही दुख हो रहा है लोगों का कहना है कि ऐसा मुख्यमंत्री भविष्य में किसी को ना मिले              
Revised: ना होने का सबसे बड़ा कारण स्थानीय ठेकेदार और स्थानीय राजनेता है लोगों का कहना है कि हमारे मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम भी इस बात से भलीभांति परिचित है लेकिन फिर भी हमने वह अनदेखा कर रहे हैं इस बात का बहुत दुख हो रहा है उनका कहना है कि हमें बहुत खुशी हुई थी जब सुनने में आया था कि मुख्यमंत्री ठाकुर जयराम बने लोगों में एक हर्षोल्लास की उमंग सी दौड़ उठी थी लेकिन आज जब ऐसा दिन देखने को मिल रहा है बहुत ही दुख हो रहा है लोगों का कहना है कि ऐसा मुख्यमंत्री भविष्य में किसी को ना मिले Category:Editing Category:Academic publishing Category:Publishing Category:Academic terminolog
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Original: An authors' editor is a language professional who works "with authors to make draft texts fit for purpose". He or she edits manuscripts that have been drafted by the author (or authors) but have not yet been submitted to a publisher for publication. This type of editing is called author editing,to distinguish it from other types of editing done for publishers on documents already accepted for publication: an authors' editor works "with (and,commonly, for) an author rather than for a publisher". A term sometimes used synonymously with authors'editor is "manuscript editor" which,however, is less precise as it also refers to editors employed by scholarly journals to edit manuscripts after acceptance (in place of the term copy editor).
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Original:  Authors' editors usually work with academic authors, researchers and scientists writing scholarly journal articles, books and grant proposals. Thus, the authors' editor facilitates the academic writing process by acting before submission or peer review. Authors' editors may also help authors revise manuscripts after peer review, but once the document is accepted for publication the collaboration ends (and other editors, for example a copy editor or production editor, take over).
Revised:  Respectfully sir,i told you say I lived in india,india's PM IS NOT RIGHT,he was tha chengeges tha constitution and rss is terrorist in india on comunitys people so mohan bhagvat is a dangerous man of dalit community all so I beg to to say you for indian constitution safe you.tankyu vijay kumarrao
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Original:  In the latest attempt to crack down unlicensed lyrics web sites a federal court has ordered LiveUniverse, a network of websites run by MySpace co-founder Brad Greenspan, to cease operating four sites offering unlicensed song lyrics.
Revised:  In an attempt to crack down unlicensed lyrics web sites a federal court has ordered LiveUniverse, a network of websites run by MySpace co-founder Brad Greenspan, to cease operating four sites offering unlicensed song lyrics.
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Original:  In the latest attempt to crack down unlicensed lyrics web sites a federal court has ordered LiveUniverse, a network of websites run by MySpace co-founder Brad Greenspan, to cease operating four sites offering unlicensed song lyrics.
Revised:  In the latest attempt to crack down unlicensed lyrics web sites , a U.S. federal court has ordered LiveUniverse, a network of websites run by MySpace co-founder Brad Greenspan, to cease operating four sites offering unlicensed song lyrics.
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Original:  In 1993, she met Zee Vjesalicu a wrestler, hockey player and Mixed Martial artist who introduced Mayra and her friend Olga Bakalapolous to Brazilian Jui Jitusu.
Revised:  In 1993, she met Zee Vjesalicu a wrestler, hockey player and mixed martial artist who introduced Mayra and her friend Olga Bakalapolous to Brazilian Jui Jitusu.
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Original:  In 1993, she met Zee Vjesalicu a wrestler, hockey player and Mixed Martial artist who introduced Mayra and her friend Olga Bakalapolous to Brazilian Jui Jitusu.
Revised:  In 1993, she met Zee Vjesalicu a wrestler, hockey player and Mixed Martial artist who introduced Conde and her friend Olga Bakalapolous to Brazilian Jui Jitusu.
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Original:  Learning from them and another trainer, Marcus Vinicius, she would later fight in the United States, Brazil and Greece , Japan, and was a part of the groundbreaking all-female "Hook N Shoot" Revolution promotion.
Revised:  Learning from them and another trainer, Marcus Vinicius, she would later fight in the United States, Brazil and Greece and Japan, being part of the groundbreaking all-female "Hook N Shoot" Revolution promotion.
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Original:  Learning from them and another trainer, Marcus Vinicius, she would later fight in the United States, Brazil and Greece , Japan, and was a part of the groundbreaking all-female "Hook N Shoot" Revolution promotion.
Revised:  Learning from them and another trainer, Marcus Vinicius, she would later fight in the United States, Brazil and Greece , Japan, and was a part of the all-female "Hook N Shoot" Revolution promotion.
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Original:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign Self-Employed Personal Trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact  she is a high level Certified Martial Artist/Instructor/Personal Trainer .
Revised:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign self-employed personal trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact she is a high level Certified Martial Artist/Instructor/Personal Trainer .
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Original:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign Self-Employed Personal Trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact  she is a high level Certified Martial Artist/Instructor/Personal Trainer .
Revised:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign Self-Employed Personal Trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact that she is a high level Certified Martial Artist/Instructor/Personal Trainer .
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Original:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign Self-Employed Personal Trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact  she is a high level Certified Martial Artist/Instructor/Personal Trainer .
Revised:  According to German authorities (in Frankfurt), she is the only foreign Self-Employed Personal Trainer authorized to live and work in Germany, without the need of an employer at first, due to the fact she is a high level certified martial artist, instructor and personal trainer .
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Original: Unconventional protein secretion (known as ER/Golgi-independent protein secretion or nonclassical protein export ) represents a manner in which the proteins are delivered to the surface of plasma membrane or to extracellular matrix regardless of ER/Golgi- dependent protein secretion .
Revised: Unconventional protein secretion (known as ER/Golgi-independent protein secretion or nonclassical protein export ) represents a manner in which the proteins are delivered to the surface of plasma membrane or extracellular matrix independent of the Endoplasmic reticulum or Golgi apparatus .
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Original: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like physical intimacy . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of personal feelings , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of  caring.
Revised: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like phucking . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of personal feelings , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of caring.
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Original: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like physical intimacy . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of personal feelings , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of  caring.
Revised: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like physical intimacy . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of the feels , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of caring.
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Original: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like physical intimacy . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of personal feelings , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of  caring.
Revised: Emotional closeness is an aspect of interpersonal relationships that varies in intensity from one relationship to another and varies from one time to another, much like physical intimacy . Emotional intimacy involves a perception of closeness to another that allows sharing of personal feelings , accompanied by expectations of understanding, affirmation, and demonstration of not caring.
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Original:  There are five of them: This person completely accepts me as I am I can openly share my deepest thoughts and feelings with this person This person cares deeply for me This person would willingly help me in any way My thoughts and feelings are understood and affirmed by this person These results are putting in correlation with specific values which characterize an individual such as psychological and physical well-being, social support, and health.
Revised:  There are five of them: This person completely accepts me as I am I can openly share my deepest thoughts and feelings with this person This person cares deeply for me This person would willingly help me in any way My thoughts and feelings are understood and affirmed by this person These results are put in correlation with specific values which characterize an individual such as psychological and physical well-being, social support, and health.
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Original:  Calculating the income of a member of the military requires specific knowledge and expertise, as service members are paid in a number of ways, including basic allowances for housing, expenses, and their basic URL A servicemember who has served 20 years is entitled to receive a military retirement.
Revised:  Calculating the income of a member of the military requires specific knowledge and expertise, as service members are paid in a number of ways, including basic allowances for housing, expenses, and their basic pay. A servicemember who has served 20 years is entitled to receive a military retirement.
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Original:  Per the Uniformed Services Former Spouses' Protection Act .10 U. S. Code §1408 State courts may but are not required to divide a servicemember’s “disposable retired pay” upon dissolution, according to that court's domestic relations laws.
Revised:  Per the Uniformed Services Former Spouses' Protection Act . State courts may but are not required to divide a servicemember’s “disposable retired pay” upon dissolution, according to that court's domestic relations laws.
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Original:  The only way to specify the correct percentage when there have been promotions after the divorce is via the DFAS Hypothetical Method or the Dual Coverture Value (DCV) Method URL (which is also called the "Area Method" (AM) because of the way it shows on an area diagram).
Revised:  The only way to specify the correct percentage when there have been promotions after the divorce is via the DFAS Hypothetical Method or the Dual Coverture Value (DCV) Method (which is also called the "Area Method" (AM) because of the way it shows on an area diagram).
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Original:  and 6 years after they were published, the promotion enhancement set-aside was embodied in Federal law with NDAA 2017 Sec URL More than 20 attorney guides, whitepapers, and spreadsheet calculation aids are available from 10+ years of research in this area by a PhD URL If a military member is promoted after divorce, the promotion enhancement due to retirement would be a non-marital asset as recommended by a Department of Defense report to Congress about the USFSPA law.
Revised:  and 6 years after they were published, the promotion enhancement set-aside was embodied in Federal law with NDAA 2017 Sec 641. More than 20 attorney guides, whitepapers, and spreadsheet calculation aids are available from 10+ years of research in this area by a PhD URL If a military member is promoted after divorce, the promotion enhancement due to retirement would be a non-marital asset as recommended by a Department of Defense report to Congress about the USFSPA law.
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Original:  and 6 years after they were published, the promotion enhancement set-aside was embodied in Federal law with NDAA 2017 Sec URL More than 20 attorney guides, whitepapers, and spreadsheet calculation aids are available from 10+ years of research in this area by a PhD URL If a military member is promoted after divorce, the promotion enhancement due to retirement would be a non-marital asset as recommended by a Department of Defense report to Congress about the USFSPA law.
Revised:  and 6 years after they were published, the promotion enhancement set-aside was embodied in Federal law with NDAA 2017 Sec URL More than 20 attorney guides, whitepapers, and spreadsheet calculation aids are available from 10+ years of research in this area by a PhD analyst. If a military member is promoted after divorce, the promotion enhancement due to retirement would be a non-marital asset as recommended by a Department of Defense report to Congress about the USFSPA law.
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Original:  The Area Method is a straightforward method to equitably divide retirement pay in this situation for an Active Duty or Reserve URL For Reserve military officers, a retention benefit program was implemented providing possible early retirement if certain types of duty is done after January 28, 2008.
Revised:  The Area Method is a straightforward method to equitably divide retirement pay in this situation for an Active Duty or Reserve retirement. For Reserve military officers, a retention benefit program was implemented providing possible early retirement if certain types of duty is done after January 28, 2008.
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Original:  Mansell v. Mansell, 490 U.S. 581 (1989) However, this does not preclude a state from ordering indemnity payments from a retiree who waives retired pay to receive VA disability after a decree of dissolution has issued.
Revised:  However, this does not preclude a state from ordering indemnity payments from a retiree who waives retired pay to receive VA disability after a decree of dissolution has issued.
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
Revised: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
Revised: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
Revised: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian lawyers Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
Revised: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: National Iranian Oil Company people Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:People from Tabriz Category:People with Alzheimer's diseas
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Original: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's diseas
Revised: Freedom Movement of Iran politicians Category:Iranian lawyers Category:Iranian activists Category:Iranian emigrants to France Category:Iranian emigrants to Germany Category:Iranian Azerbaijani politicians Category:National Front (Iran) politicians Category:National Iranian Oil Company people Category:People from Tabriz Category:University of Tehran alumni Category: Members of the Iranian Committee for the Defense of Freedom and Human Rights Category: People with Alzheimer's disease Category:University of Tehran alu
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Original: Bureaucratic inertia is the  inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational goals.
Revised: Bureaucratic inertia is the supposed inevitable tendency of bureaucratic organizations to perpetuate the established procedures and modes, even if they are counterproductive and/or diametrically opposed to established organizational goals.
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Original:  (policies) supposedly in concert with the recipient of the funds this scheme delivers, or doesn't , to disabled people qualifying for the entitlement. . It has at least five different bureaucracies at any one time for any one recipient, operating independently with little communication between them. . As stated, it is a political insurance policy (football) designed to fail on a bureaucratic level . .
Revised:  (policies) supposedly in concert with the recipient of the funds this scheme delivers, or does not , to disabled people qualifying for the entitlement. . It has at least five different bureaucracies at any one time for any one recipient, operating independently with little communication between them. . As stated, it is a political insurance policy (football) designed to fail on a bureaucratic level . .
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Original:  (policies) supposedly in concert with the recipient of the funds this scheme delivers, or doesn't , to disabled people qualifying for the entitlement. . It has at least five different bureaucracies at any one time for any one recipient, operating independently with little communication between them. . As stated, it is a political insurance policy (football) designed to fail on a bureaucratic level . .
Revised:  (policies) supposedly in concert with the recipient of the funds this scheme delivers, or doesn't , to disabled people qualifying for the entitlement. It has at least five different bureaucracies at any one time for any one recipient, operating independently with little communication between them. . As stated, it is a political insurance policy (football) designed to fail on a bureaucratic level . .
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