wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: Cybersex Cybersex is where that u f. ck people online . - mel 
Revised: Cybersex Cybersex is where that u f. ck people online . - mel Cybersex sometimes includes real life masturbation. The quality of a cybersex encounter typically depends upon the participants' abilities to evoke a vivid, visceral mental picture in the minds of their partners. Imagination and suspension of disbelief are also critically important. Cybersex can occur either within the context of existing or intimate relationships, e.g. among lovers who are geographically separated, or among individuals who have no prior knowledge of one another and meet in virtual spaces or cyberspaces and may even remain anonymous to one another. In some contexts cybersex is enhanced by the use of a webcam to transmit real-time video of the partners.
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Original:  Socially, it has stimulated positive change in people's lives by creating new forms of online interaction and enhancing offline relationships worldwide, allowing for better and more efficient communication. In the real world, companies which are considered as leading companies in the world already introduced efficient ways of communication based on internet. (See business communication) Dangers of internet relationships An oft-forgotten aspect of online interactions is the possible danger present.
Revised:  Socially, it has stimulated positive change in people's lives by creating new forms of online interaction and enhancing offline relationships worldwide, allowing for better and more efficient business communication. Dangers of internet relationships An oft-forgotten aspect of online interactions is the possible danger present.
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Original:  Brym and Lenton also claim that "although [their] true identities are usually concealed, they sometimes decide to meet and interact in real life" . From these dangers, people seriously have considered a kind of policy forcing people to use their real name only and open their personal information. By doing this, people are not going to do harmful to others because their information can be checked by others .
Revised:  Brym and Lenton also claim that "although [their] true identities are usually concealed, they sometimes decide to meet and interact in real life" .
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 3 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 4 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 5 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 7 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
Revised:  The role distribution depends on the number of players in a game session: # of players # of liberals # of fascists 5 4 1 + Hitler 6 5 7 2 + Hitler 8 6 9 3 + Hitler 10 6 At the start of each round, the player to the left of the previous President becomes the new president (the first president is chosen randomly).
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Original:  : most of the particles  pass through quickly, but some are held up. This can happen when the main source and sink are very close together or the same. For example, most water vapor rising from the ocean surface soon returns to the ocean, but water vapor that gets sufficiently far away will probably return much later in the form of rain.
Revised:  : most of the particles pass through quickly, but most of the particles contained in the control volume pass through slowly. Examples include water in a lake with the inlet and outlet that are close together and water vapor rising from the ocean surface soon returns to the ocean, but water vapor that gets sufficiently far away will probably return much later in the form of rain.
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Original:   Intercultural therapy responds to the cultural variances identified by the field of anthropology.
Revised:  The concept has been developed by Jafar Kareem in his book Intercultural Therapy. Kareem (1992) believed that there are some intrinsic differences between individual human beings, either in their biology, their personality or both, and that both inter- and intrapsychic events profoundly affect an individual's psyche and develop as part of their unconscious life. The events of the external world, then, are real but they are also internalised. Intercultural therapy responds to the cultural variances identified by the field of anthropology.
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Original:   Intercultural therapy recognises the differences and similarities of various aspects of culture for both the client and therapist, and that that the very fact of being from another culture involves both conscious and unconscious assumptions, both in the patient and in the therapist.
Revised:  Kareem believed that failure to understand cultural issues may lead to major diagnostic and therapeutic errors. Intercultural therapy recognises the differences and similarities of various aspects of culture for both the client and therapist, and that that the very fact of being from another culture involves both conscious and unconscious assumptions, both in the patient and in the therapist.
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Original:   Intercultural therapy recognises the differences and similarities of various aspects of culture for both the client and therapist, and that that the very fact of being from another culture involves both conscious and unconscious assumptions, both in the patient and in the therapist.
Revised:  Intercultural therapy recognises the differences and similarities of various aspects of culture for both the client and therapist, and that the very fact of being from another culture involves both conscious and unconscious assumptions, both in the patient and in the therapist.
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Original:  From there , he traveled  further along the  White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
Revised:  There , he traveled further along the White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
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Original:  From there , he traveled  further along the  White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
Revised:  From there , he traveled with Italian explorer Romolo Gessi further along the White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
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Original:  From there , he traveled  further along the  White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
Revised:  From there , he traveled further along the towards the sources of the White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
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Original:  From there , he traveled  further along the  White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda , taking some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
Revised:  From there , he traveled further along the White Nile as far as to today's northern Uganda . He took some of the earliest existing photographs of ethnic people in these regions, such as the Acholi, Bari, Zande, Shilluk or Dinka.
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Original: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam,  qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin  Sunni Islam A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
Revised: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam, caliph, qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin Sunni Islam A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
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Original: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam,  qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin  Sunni Islam A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
Revised: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam, qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin , or ayatollah. Sunni Islam A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
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Original: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam,  qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin  Sunni Islam A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
Revised: In Islam, a religious leader is often known formally or informally as an imam, qadi, mufti, mullah, muezzin Sunni A Sunni jurist (mufti) delivering a sermon on the kursi The nearest analogue among Sunni Muslims to the parish priest or pastor, or to the "pulpit rabbi" of a synagogue, is called the imam khatib.
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Original:     Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
Revised:  Sufism The spiritual guidance function known in many Christian denominations as "pastoral care" is fulfilled for many Muslims by a murshid ("guide"), a master of the spiritual sciences and disciplines known as tasawuf or Sufism. Sufi guides are commonly styled Shaikh in both speaking and writing; in North Africa they are sometimes called marabouts. They are traditionally appointed by their predecessors, in an unbroken teaching lineage reaching back to Muhammad. (The lineal succession of guides bears a superficial similarity to Christian ordination and apostolic succession, or to Buddhist dharma transmission; but a Sufi guide is regarded primarily as a specialized teacher and Islam denies the existence of an earthly hierarchy among believers.) Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
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Original:     Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
Revised:  Muslims who wish to learn Sufism dedicate themselves to a murshid'''s guidance by taking an oath called a bai'ah. The aspirant is then known as a murid ("disciple" or "follower"). A murid who takes on special disciplines under the guide's instruction, ranging from an intensive spiritual retreat to voluntary poverty and homelessness, is sometimes known as a dervish. Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
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Original:     Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
Revised:  During the Islamic Golden Age, it was common for scholars to attain recognized mastery of both the "exterior sciences" (`ulum az-zahir) of the madrasahs as well as the "interior sciences" (`ulum al-batin) of Sufism. Al-Ghazali and Rumi are two notable examples. Ahmadiyya The highest office an Ahmadi can hold is that of Khalifatu l-Masih.
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Original:  So in the context of Judaism, an international date line demarcates when the line of sundown moving across the Earth's surface stops being the sundown ending and starting one day and starts being the sundown ending and starting the following day.
Revised:  So in the context of Judaism, an international date line demarcates when the line of sundown moving across the Earth's surface stops being the sunset ending and starting one day and starts being the sundown ending and starting the following day.
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Original:  So in the context of Judaism, an international date line demarcates when the line of sundown moving across the Earth's surface stops being the sundown ending and starting one day and starts being the sundown ending and starting the following day.
Revised:  So in the context of Judaism, an international date line demarcates when the line of sundown moving across the Earth's surface stops being the sundown ending and starting one day and starts being the sunset ending and starting the following day.
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Original:  and the Holy Spirit as a dove in Baptism of Christ by Verrocchio and Leonardo da Vinci, upright= 2.25 |The famous The Creation of Adam on the Sistine Chapel ceiling, by Michelangelo c. 1512 God the Father is symbolized in several Genesis scenes in Michelangelo's Sistine Chapel ceiling, most famously The Creation of Adam (whose image of near touching hands of God and Adam is iconic of humanity, being a reminder that Man is created in the Image and Likeness of God ()).
Revised:  and the Holy Spirit as a dove in Baptism of Christ by Verrocchio and Leonardo da Vinci, upright= 1.65 |The famous The Creation of Adam on the Sistine Chapel ceiling, by Michelangelo c. 1512 God the Father is symbolized in several Genesis scenes in Michelangelo's Sistine Chapel ceiling, most famously The Creation of Adam (whose image of near touching hands of God and Adam is iconic of humanity, being a reminder that Man is created in the Image and Likeness of God ()).
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Original:  Accelerated pluralism is a method of mobilization used in the formation of social movements that is facilitated by the use of  information communication technologies  .
Revised:  Accelerated pluralism is a method of mobilization used in the formation of social movements that is facilitated by the use of Concept Accelerated pluralism operates within a landscape typified by an acceleration of the existing tendencies of liberal democratic politics towards a contest of groups, which coalesce according to narrowly defined interests. The theory views these groups as not interested in politics except for the issue they are concerned about. Due to information communication technologies .
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Original:  Accelerated pluralism is a method of mobilization used in the formation of social movements that is facilitated by the use of  information communication technologies  .
Revised:  Accelerated pluralism is a method of mobilization used in the formation of social movements that is facilitated by the use of information communication technologies , the incorporation of groups into the networked whole was made easier and simpler so that coordination and autonomy are enhanced while access to sources of information is facilitated. These lead to the creation of new forms of direct action. Bimber based his theory is on the idea that "the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures" .
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Original:  ICTs in combination with accelerated pluralism played a major role in the "ignition of social protest, the cascade of inspiring images and stories" in social movements   .
Revised:  ICTs in combination with accelerated pluralism played a major role in the "ignition of social protest, the cascade of inspiring images and stories" in social movements Bimber, however, noted that accelerated pluralism may not always lead to positive development since it could drive radical dissent .
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Original:   Concept Accelerated pluralism operates within a landscape typified by an acceleration of the existing tendencies of liberal democratic politics towards a contest of groups, which coalesce according to narrowly defined interests.
Revised:  Bimber based his theory on the idea that "the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures". Concept Accelerated pluralism operates within a landscape typified by an acceleration of the existing tendencies of liberal democratic politics towards a contest of groups, which coalesce according to narrowly defined interests.
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Original:  Bimber based his theory is on the idea that " the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures "  . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
Revised:  It also result to a fragmented and more fluid system with diminished institutional coherence. The concept is related to other representational models such as Michael Schudson's " the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures " . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
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Original:  Bimber based his theory is on the idea that " the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures "  . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
Revised:  Bimber based his theory is on the idea that " monitorial citizen " . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
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Original:  Bimber based his theory is on the idea that " the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures "  . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
Revised:  Bimber based his theory is on the idea that " the processes of group-oriented politics will show less coherence and less correspondence with established private and public institutional structures " and Stephen Coleman's direct representational model . As a method of group formation, accelerated pluralism is unique because through the use of the Internet people are able to congregate in virtual public sphere and decide which form of action to take.
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