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Original:  It has been put into practice in theatres of operation. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1989 Stephen Covey's The Seven Habits of Highly Effective People, published by Free Press, transformed the meaning  "to act before a situation becomes a source of confrontation or crisis".
Revised:  It has been put into practice in theatres of operation. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1989 Stephen Covey's The Seven Habits of Highly Effective People, published by Free Press, transformed the meaning of proactive as "to act before a situation becomes a source of confrontation or crisis".
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The rapid evolution of information warfare operations doctrine in the 1990s embraced a proactive preemptive cyber defense strategy .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% With the the rapid evolution of information warfare operations doctrine in the 1990s embraced a proactive preemptive cyber defense strategy .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The rapid evolution of information warfare operations doctrine in the 1990s embraced a proactive preemptive cyber defense strategy .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The rapid evolution of information warfare operations doctrine in the 1990s , we have begun to see the use of proactive and preemptive cyber defence concepts used by the policymakers and scholars .
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Original:  Now most of the discussions around proactive defence in the literature are much less "proactive" than the earlier discussions in 1994 or existing operational programs. 'Proactive' is often used to hype marketing of security products or programs, in much the same way that "extreme" or "quality" adjectives have been misused.
Revised:  Now most of the discussions around proactive defence in the literature are much less "proactive" than the earlier discussions in 
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Original:  Founding members of the  interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
Revised:  As being one of the founding members of the interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
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Original:  Founding members of the  interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
Revised:  Founding members of the Canada's interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
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Original:  Founding members of the  interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
Revised:  Founding members of the interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
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Original:  Founding members of the  interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
Revised:  Founding members of the interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon pointed out that "strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
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Original:  Founding members of the  interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence and a proactive defence provide time and precision.
Revised:  Founding members of the interdepartmental committee on Information Warfare (Canada 1994) , Dr. Robert Garigue and Dave McMahon wrote: Strategic listening, core intelligence , and proactive defence provide time and precision.
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Original:  Intelligence agencies  such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and  helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
Revised:  Intelligence agencies , such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
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Original:  Intelligence agencies  such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and  helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
Revised:  Intelligence agencies such as the National Security Agency, were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
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Original:  Intelligence agencies  such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and  helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
Revised:  Intelligence agencies such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities and keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
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Original:  Intelligence agencies  such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and  helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
Revised:  Intelligence agencies such as the NSA were criticized for buying up and stockpiling zero-day vulnerabilities , keeping them secret and developing mainly offensive capabilities instead of defensive measures and , thereby, helping patch vulnerabilities. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This criticism was widely reiterated and recognized after the May 2017 WannaCry ransomware attack.
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Original:  Proactive pre-emptive operations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The notion of a proactive pre-emptive operations group (P2OG) emerged from a report of the Defense Science Board  (DSB) , 2002 briefing.
Revised:  Proactive pre-emptive operations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The notion of a proactive pre-emptive operations group (P2OG) emerged from a report of the Defense Science Board 's (DSB) , 2002 briefing.
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Original:  Proactive pre-emptive operations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The notion of a proactive pre-emptive operations group (P2OG) emerged from a report of the Defense Science Board  (DSB) , 2002 briefing.
Revised:  Proactive pre-emptive operations %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The notion of a proactive pre-emptive operations group (P2OG) emerged from a report of the Defense Science Board (DSB) 2002 briefing.
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Original:  The mission of the P2OG is reportedly to conduct Aggressive, Proactive, Pre-emptive Operations to interdiction and disruption the threat using: Psychological operations, Managed Information Dissemination, Precision Targeting, Information Warfare Operations, and SIGINT.
Revised:  The mission was to conduct Aggressive, Proactive, Pre-emptive Operations to interdiction and disruption the threat using: Psychological operations, Managed Information Dissemination, Precision Targeting, Information Warfare Operations, and SIGINT.
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Original:  The mission of the P2OG is reportedly to conduct Aggressive, Proactive, Pre-emptive Operations to interdiction and disruption the threat using: Psychological operations, Managed Information Dissemination, Precision Targeting, Information Warfare Operations, and SIGINT. The proactive defense strategy is meant to improves information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battle space.
Revised:  The mission of the P2OG is reportedly to conduct Aggressive, Proactive, Pre-emptive Operations to interdiction and disruption the threat using: psychological operations, managed information dissemination, precision targeting, and information warfare operations. Today, the proactive defence strategy means improving information collection by stimulating reactions of the threat agents, provide strike options and to enhance operational preparation of the real or virtual battle space.
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Original:  The P2OG has been recommended to be constituted of "one hundred ' highly specialized people with unique technical and intelligence skills such as information operations, PSYOPS, network attack, covert activities, SIGINT, HUMINT, SOF, influence warfare/deception operations and to report to the National Security Council with an annual budget of $100 million" .
Revised:  The P2OG has been recommended to be constituted of one hundred highly specialized people with unique technical and intelligence skills such as information operations, PSYOPS, network attack, covert activities, SIGINT, HUMINT, SOF, influence warfare/deception operations and to report to the National Security Council with an annual budget of $100 million" .
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Original:  The P2OG has been recommended to be constituted of "one hundred ' highly specialized people with unique technical and intelligence skills such as information operations, PSYOPS, network attack, covert activities, SIGINT, HUMINT, SOF, influence warfare/deception operations and to report to the National Security Council with an annual budget of $100 million" .
Revised:  The P2OG has been recommended to be constituted of "one hundred ' highly specialized people with unique technical and intelligence skills .
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Original:  The group would be overseen by the White House's deputy national security adviser and would carry out missions coordinated by the secretary of defense or the CIA director. "The proposal is the latest sign of a new assertiveness by the Defense Department in intelligence matters, and an indication that the cutting edge of intelligence reform is not to be found in Congress but behind closed doors in the Pentagon". DoD doctrinally would initiate a 'pre-emptive' attack on the basis of evidence that an enemy attack is imminent.
Revised:  The group would be overseen by the White House's deputy national security adviser and would carry out missions coordinated by the secretary of defence.
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Original:  Other topics (Relevance to the International Relations) World Politics and Pre-emptive Cyber Defense topics are the two important concepts that need to be examined because we are living in a dynamic international system in which actors (countries) update their threat perceptions according to the developments in the technological realm.
Revised:  Other topics (Relevance to the International Relations) World politics and pre-emptive cyber defence topics are the two important concepts that need to be examined because we are living in a dynamic international system in which actors (countries) update their threat perceptions according to the developments in the technological realm.
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Original:  This topic is extensively studied by the political scientists focusing on the power transition theory (PTT), where Organski and Kugler first discussed that powerful countries start the attack before  balance of power changes in favor of the relatively weak but rising state.
Revised:  This topic is extensively studied by the political scientists focusing on the power transition theory (PTT), where Organski and Kugler first discussed that powerful countries start the attack before the balance of power changes in favor of the relatively weak but rising state.
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Original:  This topic is extensively studied by the political scientists focusing on the power transition theory (PTT), where Organski and Kugler first discussed that powerful countries start the attack before  balance of power changes in favor of the relatively weak but rising state.
Revised:  This topic is extensively studied by the political scientists focusing on the power transition theory (PTT), where Organski and Kugler first discussed that powerful countries start the attack before balance of power changes in favor of the relatively weaker but the rising state.
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Original:  Although the PTT has relevance to explain the use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies, this theory can still be difficult to apply when it comes to cyber defense entirely because it is not easy to understand the relative power differentials of the international actors in terms of their cyber capabilities.
Revised:  Although the PTT has relevance to explain the use of pre-emptive cyber defence policies, this theory can still be difficult to apply when it comes to cyber defense entirely because it is not easy to understand the relative power differentials of the international actors in terms of their cyber capabilities.
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Original:  Although the PTT has relevance to explain the use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies, this theory can still be difficult to apply when it comes to cyber defense entirely because it is not easy to understand the relative power differentials of the international actors in terms of their cyber capabilities.
Revised:  Although the PTT has relevance to explain the use of pre-emptive cyber defense policies, this theory can still be difficult to apply when it comes to cyber defence entirely because it is not easy to understand the relative power differentials of the international actors in terms of their cyber capabilities.
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Original:  In 1964 Armin moved to Nottinghamshire, followed by a move back to London in 1965, where he worked as a civilian driver for the police and a guard for a security firm.
Revised:  In 1963 Armin moved to Nottinghamshire, followed by a move back to London in 1965, where he worked as a civilian driver for the police and a guard for a security firm.
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Original:  In 1964 Armin moved to Nottinghamshire, followed by a move back to London in 1965, where he worked as a civilian driver for the police and a guard for a security firm.
Revised:  In 1964 Armin moved to Nottinghamshire, followed by a move back to London in 1965, where he worked as a civilian driver for the metropolitan police and then as a guard for a security firm.
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Original:  In 1973 'The group' began ending in the The Emin Society' at which time Raymond Armin became known as 'Leo' and John as 'Orman' within the society.
Revised:  In 1973 'The group' began which took on the name ' The Emin Society' at which time Raymond Armin became known as 'Leo' and John as 'Orman' within the society.
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Original:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin  moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
Revised:  During the late 1970 's Raymond Armin moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
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Original:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin  moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
Revised:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin (aka.Leo), moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
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Original:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin  moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
Revised:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called Ethra aka.'Deborra McKay' from Iowa, America). He introduced her indoors (to Ruth's objections in 1973)and moved to America which eventually lead to 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
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Original:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin  moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
Revised:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( Leo and Ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
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Original:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin  moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin suplied , becoming American citizens.
Revised:  At the end of the 1980 's Raymond Armin moved with his wife (Violet) and his girlfriend a woman called ethra 'Deborra Mckay' to America, eventually 2 of them ( leo amnd ruth )with the money the Emin supplied , becoming American citizens.
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Original:  The Emin was  founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Leo- Raymond and Orman- John  ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
Revised:  The Emin was Truley founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Leo- Raymond and Orman- John ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
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Original:  The Emin was  founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Leo- Raymond and Orman- John  ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
Revised:  The Emin was founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Orman- John ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
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Original:  The Emin was  founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Leo- Raymond and Orman- John  ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
Revised:  The Emin was founded by 2 members of the Armin family ( Leo- Raymond and Orman- John and Leo- Raymond ) followed by a gathering of friends interested in Ormans and Leos work.
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Original:  They robbed her and took her possessions and left her to suffer the desolation that Raymond Armin(her husband)- Leo her work mate, left her to suffer  .
Revised:  They robbed her and took her possessions and left her to suffer the desolation that Raymond Armin(her husband)- Leo her work mate, left her to suffer The Emin blames its woes on The last surviving member of the original membership of the Emin. That person is Orman. They tell many untruths about that time and they know nothing of the truths that was the man Leo, the woman Ruth and the man Orman .
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Original:  As the world's ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, it is integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir - influences climate and weather patterns.
Revised:  The ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, it is integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir - influences climate and weather patterns.
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Original:  As the world's ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, it is integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir - influences climate and weather patterns.
Revised:  As the world's ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, and therefore integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir - influences climate and weather patterns.
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Original:  As the world's ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, it is integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir - influences climate and weather patterns.
Revised:  As the world's ocean is the principal component of Earth's hydrosphere, it is integral to life on Earth , forms part of the carbon cycle and water cycle, and - as a huge heat reservoir and influences climate and weather patterns.
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Original:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem  . Light only penetrates to a  few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
Revised:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem since that is the origin of the food supply necessary to all life forms . Light only penetrates to a few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
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Original:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem  . Light only penetrates to a  few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
Revised:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem . Light only penetrates to a depth of a few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
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Original:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem  . Light only penetrates to a  few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
Revised:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem . Light only penetrates to a few hundred meters , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
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Original:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem  . Light only penetrates to a  few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below this is cold and dark.
Revised:  It is this upper sunlit ocean that creates the food supply that ultimately sustains most of the ocean ecosystem . Light only penetrates to a few hundred meters depth , so the remaining ocean below is cold and dark.
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