wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D variant is for brain damagedue to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells(chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
Revised:  Health impacts The primary risk associated with the H63D variant is for brain damagedue to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells(chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
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Original:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D variant is for brain damagedue to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells(chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
Revised:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D mutation is brain damage, as iron accumulation can cause oxidation within affected cells, ultimately leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity.
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Original:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D variant is for brain damagedue to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells(chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death (scarring of brain tissue) with severely disturbed neurotransmitter activity. These incurable processes include increased cellular iron, oxidative stress (free radical activity), brain glutamate dysbalance, and abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein which both may result in dementias and parkinson ’s disease, or similar conditions.
Revised:  Brain iron accumulation The most relevant risk associated with the H63D variant is for brain damagedue to iron accumulation which causes oxidation processes within the affected cells(chronic oxidative stress) and, as a consequence, leading to cell death and scarring of the brain tissue. Another potential consequence is abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein which both may result in dementias and parkinson ’s disease, or similar conditions.
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Original:  These incurable processes include increased cellular iron, oxidative stress (free radical activity), brain glutamate dysbalance, and abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein which both may result in dementias and parkinson ’s disease, or similar conditions.
Revised:  These incurable processes include increased cellular iron, oxidative stress (free radical activity), brain glutamate dysbalance, and abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein , which play a role in conditions like Alzheimer's, Lewy body dementia, and Parkinson ’s disease, or similar conditions.
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Original:  These incurable processes include increased cellular iron, oxidative stress (free radical activity), brain glutamate dysbalance, and abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein which both may result in dementias and parkinson ’s disease, or similar conditions. Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  These incurable processes include increased cellular iron, oxidative stress (free radical activity), brain glutamate dysbalance, and abnormal levels of tau proteins and alpha-synuclein which both may result in dementias and parkinson ’s ; patients homozygous for H63D show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for the H63D show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for H63D mutation show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for H63D show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal or heterozygous genotypes . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for H63D show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for  H63D  show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies  and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
Revised:  Scientists found that patients homozygous for H63D show a higher risk of earlier signs of cognitive impairment and earlier onset of dementias compared to individuals with normal HFE genes or H63D heterozygous mutation . Cardiac iron accumulation Some individuals with the homozygous H63D variant may show signs of heart disease, cardiomyopathies , and disturbances in the calcium channels in particular.
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Original:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
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Original:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indicator of the iron metabolism disorder hemochromatosis, which may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
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Original:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk of developing a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
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Original:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver . In patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
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Original:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic or a liverdamaged due to alcohol also the rates of liver cancer.
Revised:  Liver disorders The homozygous H63D variant is an indication of an Iron Metabolism Disorder known as Hemochromatosis (Iron Overload) and may increase the risk to develop a fatty liver , cryptic (nonspecific) liver dysfunctions, metabolic syndrome and, in patients with a cirrhotic liver, the mutation can increase the rate of liver cancer.
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Original:  Behavioral economics Ethics in behavioral economics is ubiquitous given its concern with human agency in its aim to rectify the ethical deficits found in neoclassical economics, i.e., a lack of moral dimension and lack of normative concerns.
Revised:  Behavioural economics Ethics in behavioral economics is ubiquitous given its concern with human agency in its aim to rectify the ethical deficits found in neoclassical economics, i.e., a lack of moral dimension and lack of normative concerns.
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Original:  Behavioral economics Ethics in behavioral economics is ubiquitous given its concern with human agency in its aim to rectify the ethical deficits found in neoclassical economics, i.e., a lack of moral dimension and lack of normative concerns.
Revised:  Behavioral economics Ethics in behavioural economics is ubiquitous given its concern with human agency in its aim to rectify the ethical deficits found in neoclassical economics, i.e., a lack of moral dimension and lack of normative concerns.
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Original:  Under this utility-maximizing approach, subject to libertarianism, a dichotomy is apparent between health and freedom as primary goods due to the condition of one is necessary to have in order to attain the other.
Revised:  Under this utility-maximizing approach, subject to libertarianism, a dichotomy is apparent between health and freedom as primary goods due to the condition of one is necessary to have to attain the other.
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Original:  Retrieved from URL Rational actor theory in the policy arena is evident in the use of Pareto optimality in order to assess the economic efficiency of policies, as well as in the use of cost–benefit analysis (CBA), where income is the basic unit of measurement.
Revised:  Retrieved from URL Rational actor theory in the policy arena is evident in the use of Pareto optimality to assess the economic efficiency of policies, as well as in the use of cost–benefit analysis (CBA), where income is the basic unit of measurement.
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Original: In the tradition of the 1880s Order of the Golden Dawn a watchtower or guardian in ceremonial and derived neopagan magical tradition is a tutelary spirit of one of the four cardinal points or "quarters " (north, east, south, and west).
Revised: In the tradition of the 1880s Order of the Golden Dawn a watchtower or guardian in ceremonial and derived neopagan magical tradition is a tutelary spirit of one of the four cardinal points or quarters (north, east, south, and west).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In Christian influenced magic traditions, they are understood to be the Archangels Uriel, Raphael, Michael, and Gabriel.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In Christian-influenced magical traditions, they are understood to be the Archangels Uriel, Raphael, Michael, and Gabriel.
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Original:  In Enochian tradition In the Enochian system of magic, brought to public attention by Dr. John Dee and  Edward Kelly in the 16th century, we find the inclusion of Watchtowers as complex evocational designs.
Revised:  In Enochian tradition In the Enochian system of magic, brought to public attention by Dr. John Dee and his scryer Edward Kelly in the 16th century, we find the inclusion of Watchtowers as complex evocational designs.
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Original:  In Enochian tradition In the Enochian system of magic, brought to public attention by Dr. John Dee and  Edward Kelly in the 16th century, we find the inclusion of Watchtowers as complex evocational designs.
Revised:  In Enochian tradition In the Enochian system of magic, brought to public attention by Dr. John Dee and Edward Kelly in the 16th century, we find the inclusion of watchtowers as complex evocational designs.
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Original: Regardie, Golden Dawn, Book 9, describes Enochian magic in the Golden Dawn, including detailed information on the Watchtowers. Each Watchtower was attributed to a direction and an element, by the Golden Dawn.
Revised: Regardie, Golden Dawn, Book 9, describes Enochian magic in the Golden Dawn, including detailed information on the watchtowers. Each watchtower was attributed to a direction and an element, by the Golden Dawn.
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Original:  In the south, for instance, the practitioner uses the Fire Wand to trace an invoking Fire Pentagram, then summons the angels using the three names of God found in the Fire Tablet: OIP TEAA PEDOCE In the names and letters of the Great Southern Quadrangle, I invoke ye, ye Angels of the Watch-tower of the South.Regardie, Golden Dawn, p. 402.
Revised:  In the south, for instance, the practitioner uses the Fire Wand to trace an invoking Fire Pentagram, then summons the angels using the three names of God found in the Fire Tablet: 
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Original:  The complicated tablets and Enochian names were largely abandoned, but Wicca retained the Watchtowers as "the four cardinal points, regarded as guardians of the Magic Circle ". Janet and Stewart Farrar, The Witches' Way, p. 328.
Revised:  The complicated tablets and Enochian names were largely abandoned, but Wicca retained the watchtowers as "the four cardinal points, regarded as guardians of the Magic Circle ". Janet and Stewart Farrar, The Witches' Way, p. 328.
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Original:  The complicated tablets and Enochian names were largely abandoned, but Wicca retained the Watchtowers as "the four cardinal points, regarded as guardians of the Magic Circle ". Janet and Stewart Farrar, The Witches' Way, p. 328.
Revised:  The complicated tablets and Enochian names were largely abandoned, but Wicca retained the Watchtowers as "the four cardinal points, regarded as guardians of the Magic Circle ." Janet and Stewart Farrar, The Witches' Way, p. 328.
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Original: REM sleep and slow-wave sleep Avian sleep has two similarities shared with that of mammals ; REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
Revised: REM sleep and slow-wave sleep Avian sleep has two similarities shared with that of mammals : rapid eye movement (REM) and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
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Original:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
Revised:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
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Original:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
Revised:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and memory storage . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
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Original:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequencies for REM sleep;
Revised:  REM (rapid-eye movement ) sleep and slow-wave sleep (SWS). REM sleep is believed to have an important effect on integral motor functions and storing memories . EEGs show high-amplitude and low-frequency waves during REM sleep;
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Original:  During SWS, membrane potentials in the neurons of the neocortex are undergoing slow oscillations, which explains the typical SWS results of the EEG . Numerous avian species have been shown to exhibit unihemispheric SWS;
Revised:  During SWS, membrane potentials in the neurons of the neocortex oscillate slowly . Numerous avian species have been shown to exhibit unihemispheric SWS;
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Original:  During SWS, membrane potentials in the neurons of the neocortex are undergoing slow oscillations, which explains the typical SWS results of the EEG . Numerous avian species have been shown to exhibit unihemispheric SWS; or the ability to rest one half of the brain in SWS  while the other half appears to show wakefulness .
Revised:  During SWS, membrane potentials in the neurons of the neocortex are undergoing slow oscillations, which explains the typical SWS results of the EEG . A number of avian species exhibit unihemispheric slow-wave sleep: the ability to rest one half of the brain in SWS while the other half appears to show wakefulness .
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Original:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals since they must return to the surface for oxygen , while this phenomenon is believed to help birds avoid predation, thus creating a homoplasy between the two groups.
Revised:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals because they must return to the surface for oxygen , while this phenomenon is believed to help birds avoid predation, thus creating a homoplasy between the two groups.
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Original:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals since they must return to the surface for oxygen , while this phenomenon is believed to help birds avoid predation, thus creating a homoplasy between the two groups.
Revised:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals since they must return to the surface for oxygen ; it is believed to help birds avoid predation, thus creating a homoplasy between the two groups.
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Original:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals since they must return to the surface for oxygen , while this phenomenon is believed to help birds avoid predation, thus creating a homoplasy between the two groups.
Revised:  Unihemispheric SWS is thought to have evolved in aquatic mammals since they must return to the surface for oxygen , while this phenomenon is believed to help birds avoid predation, demonstrating homoplasy in the two groups.
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Original:  In history , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, who were part of the Akan ethnic group and native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
Revised:  Historically , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, who were part of the Akan ethnic group and native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
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Original:  In history , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, who were part of the Akan ethnic group and native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
Revised:  In history , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, a part of the Akan ethnic group and native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
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Original:  In history , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, who were part of the Akan ethnic group and native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
Revised:  In history , they have been concerned with fighting the Ashantis, who were part of the Akan ethnic group native to the Ashanti Region of modern-day Ghana, because the Ashantis were forcing them to pay tribute .
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