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Original:  However, Shmuel Rabinowitz, the administrator of the Western Wall Heritage Foundation , issued a statement saying in part, "In future, efforts will be made to ensure that this does not happen again, and the introduction of Torah scrolls will be banned for everyone - men and women."
Revised:  However, Shmuel Rabinowitz, the rabbi of the Western Wall Heritage Foundation , issued a statement saying in part, "In future, efforts will be made to ensure that this does not happen again, and the introduction of Torah scrolls will be banned for everyone - men and women."
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Original:  However, Shmuel Rabinowitz, the administrator of the Western Wall Heritage Foundation , issued a statement saying in part, "In future, efforts will be made to ensure that this does not happen again, and the introduction of Torah scrolls will be banned for everyone - men and women."
Revised:  However, Shmuel Rabinowitz, the administrator of the Western Wall , issued a statement saying in part, "In future, efforts will be made to ensure that this does not happen again, and the introduction of Torah scrolls will be banned for everyone - men and women."
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Original:  Nevertheless, in November 2014 the group celebrated a Bat Mitvah ceremony that included reading from the miniaturized Torah scroll without interference from Shmuel Rabinowitz, the Western Wall Heritage Foundation administrator ."Maltz, Judy 'Despite warning, rabbi lets Women of the Wall read from Torah for second month'(Nov 23, URL 18, 2014Some of the Women of the Wall became the first women to light menorahs at the Western Wall.
Revised:  Nevertheless, in November 2014 the group celebrated a Bat Mitvah ceremony that included reading from the miniaturized Torah scroll without interference from Shmuel Rabinowitz, the Western Wall rabbi ."Maltz, Judy 'Despite warning, rabbi lets Women of the Wall read from Torah for second month'(Nov 23, URL 18, 2014Some of the Women of the Wall became the first women to light menorahs at the Western Wall.
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Original:  On February 11, 2013, ten women who were part of WOW, including two North American rabbis, were detained for praying at the wall and "as a result of them wearing the garments that they're not allowed to wear specifically at that site."
Revised:  On February 11, 2013, ten women who were part of WOW, including two American rabbis, were detained for praying at the wall and "as a result of them wearing the garments that they're not allowed to wear specifically at that site."
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Original:  They were subsequently released by Judge Sharon Larry-Bavili without restrictions as she ruled that the female worshippers did not instigate the disturbance, but rather it was the male and female Ultra Orthodox protestors countering them that initiated it.
Revised:  They were subsequently released by Judge Sharon Larry-Bavili without restrictions as she ruled that the female worshippers did not instigate the disturbance, but rather it was the male and female Orthodox protestors countering them that initiated it.
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Original:  Women are not seen as "Jews" or as "worshipers" with "sensibilities." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Original Women of the Wall has since 2014 held monthly services at the Kotel on various days of the month. They uphold the original goals of the group to hold women's prayer groups at the Women's Section of the Western Wall. Their membership consists of most of the original members of the group who were at the Wall in 1988. The group includes members from all stream of Judaism. Some of their members wear tallit (prayer shawl), tefillin and they read Torah on appropriate days.
Revised:  Women are not seen as "Jews" or as "worshipers" with "sensibilities." %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  In 2005, Erwin was invited by his college classmate Tommy Tse Tat-fung to join Tse Sui Luen Group as one of the Board of Directors.
Revised:  In 2005, Huang was invited by his college classmate Tommy Tse Tat-fung to join Tse Sui Luen Group as one of the Board of Directors.
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Original:  Erwin was promoted to the CEO of TSL Group in June 2008, working alongside Tommy Tse Tat-fung's wife, Annie Yau On Yee, the Chairman of the company.
Revised:  Huang was promoted to the CEO of TSL Group in June 2008, working alongside Tommy Tse Tat-fung's wife, Annie Yau On Yee, the Chairman of the company.
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Original:  On March 1, 2015, Erwin resigned as TSL Group’s Executive Director, Executive Committee member and Business Development Director and became Non-executive Director and Deputy Chairperson of the company, acting as the advisor and consultant of the Group.
Revised:  On March 1, 2015, Huang resigned as TSL Group’s Executive Director, Executive Committee member and Business Development Director and became Non-executive Director and Deputy Chairperson of the company, acting as the advisor and consultant of the Group.
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Original:  Erwin once said in an interview his financial return on investing in Xtown might not be higher than his income in TSL Group, however, he believed life was not only about making a lot of money, and he felt much more satisfied if he could bring a revolution and make a difference to the industry.
Revised:  Huang once said in an interview his financial return on investing in Xtown might not be higher than his income in TSL Group, however, he believed life was not only about making a lot of money, and he felt much more satisfied if he could bring a revolution and make a difference to the industry.
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Original:  Social innovations In 2008, Erwin , then Vice-president of Senior Citizen Home Safety Association, served as the Convener of “Mobile Link” and cooperated with CSL to develop Personal Emergency Link Service, also known as Safety Bell for the elderly.
Revised:  Social innovations In 2008, Huang , then Vice-president of Senior Citizen Home Safety Association, served as the Convener of “Mobile Link” and cooperated with CSL to develop Personal Emergency Link Service, also known as Safety Bell for the elderly.
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Original:  In the following year, Erwin was invited to join RTHK’s reality TV show “Rich Mate Poor Mate Series” to experience the lives of the underprivileged, which became the turning point of his life.
Revised:  In the following year, Huang was invited to join RTHK’s reality TV show “Rich Mate Poor Mate Series” to experience the lives of the underprivileged, which became the turning point of his life.
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Original:  In 2010, Personal Emergency Link Service received the Grand Prize of the Digital Opportunity Award from World Information Technology and Services Alliance. e-Learning Erwin is the non-official member of the Steering Committee on Strategic Development of Information Technology in Education of the Education Bureau.
Revised:  In 2010, Personal Emergency Link Service received the Grand Prize of the Digital Opportunity Award from World Information Technology and Services Alliance. e-Learning Huang is the non-official member of the Steering Committee on Strategic Development of Information Technology in Education of the Education Bureau.
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Original:  Media and publishing TV programmes In the 90s, Erwin acted as “Dr. Wong” to host a TV programme “Complete PC Handbook” (完全電腦手冊) and “The Smart Tribe” (精靈一族) on Asia Television (ATV), teaching information technology.
Revised:  Media and publishing TV programmes In the 90s, Huang acted as “Dr. Wong” to host a TV programme “Complete PC Handbook” (完全電腦手冊) and “The Smart Tribe” (精靈一族) on Asia Television (ATV), teaching information technology.
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Original: Asmara in the 1940s|alt= |400x400px Eritrea's capital of Asmara, 100 km inland from its coast, has occupied a space in the highlands of Eritrea for hundreds of years.
Revised: Asmara in the 1940s|alt= Eritrea's capital of Asmara, 100 km inland from its coast, has occupied a space in the highlands of Eritrea for hundreds of years.
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Original:  as it serves as an example of how Eritrean people have been able to come together and persevere even under the harshest conditions. alt=| 400x400px| Asmara's market in the 1890s From this point on,
Revised:  as it serves as an example of how Eritrean people have been able to come together and persevere even under the harshest conditions. alt=| Asmara's market in the 1890s From this point on,
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Original: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly.  alt=| 400x400px  That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
Revised: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly. File:Fort_Baldisera_(Asmara)_overlooking_the_Hamasien_plateau.jpg| alt=| 400x400px That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
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Original: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly.  alt=| 400x400px  That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
Revised: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly. alt=| Fort Baldisera (Asmara) overlooking the Hamasien plateau That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
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Original: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly.  alt=| 400x400px  That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
Revised: Bizzoni: L’Eritrea – nel passato e nel presente (Quoted in: Denison et al.: Asmara – Africa’s Secret Modernist City, pg. 24) The lack of an infrastructural link to Massawa prevented Asmara from developing quickly. alt=| 400x400px . That, despite all of this, Asmara rose to significance has to do with the goals of Italian colonization.
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Original:  Source: Palumbo: A Place in the Sun: Africa in Italian Colonial Culture, pg. 88 This relationship lasted throughout the Italian occupation of Eritrea, and is more than likely an important factor in determining the good-naturedness of Eritreans toward Italians today. alt=| 250x250px| Asmara Theatre in the 1920s The first plans led to a phase of intensive building, which ultimately resulted in an increase of Asmara’s population from between 800 and 1,900 peopleTesfagiorgis: Eritrea –
Revised:  Source: Palumbo: A Place in the Sun: Africa in Italian Colonial Culture, pg. 88 This relationship lasted throughout the Italian occupation of Eritrea, and is more than likely an important factor in determining the good-naturedness of Eritreans toward Italians today. alt=| Asmara Theatre in the 1920s The first plans led to a phase of intensive building, which ultimately resulted in an increase of Asmara’s population from between 800 and 1,900 peopleTesfagiorgis: Eritrea –
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Original:  Asmara under Mussolini (1922-1941) Development under Mussolini's fascism alt=| 400x400px| Asmara in 1928 With Mussolini’s rise to power in 1922, Asmara began a new chapter in its history.
Revised:  Asmara under Mussolini (1922-1941) Development under Mussolini's fascism alt=| Asmara in 1928 With Mussolini’s rise to power in 1922, Asmara began a new chapter in its history.
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Original:  Even if the building boom did not begin until the middle of the 1930s, Mussolini’s fascist ideology would have already influenced the urban development plans during the 1920s and the beginning of the 1930s. alt=| 400x400px| Former Mayor's Villa in Asmara.
Revised:  Even if the building boom did not begin until the middle of the 1930s, Mussolini’s fascist ideology would have already influenced the urban development plans during the 1920s and the beginning of the 1930s. alt=| Former Mayor's Villa in Asmara.
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Original:  Growth as an Italian Military Base alt=| 400x400px| Asmara in the 1930s With the plan to raid Abyssinia and to incorporate it into the African colony, Asmara’s cityscape began to change.
Revised:  Growth as an Italian Military Base alt=| Asmara in the 1930s With the plan to raid Abyssinia and to incorporate it into the African colony, Asmara’s cityscape began to change.
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Original:  In: Für den Faschismus bauen, pg. 332 alt=| 400x400px| Housing for the local population (Askari) Independent of Le Corbusier, the policies requiring the strict racial separation of the population were followed.
Revised:  In: Für den Faschismus bauen, pg. 332 alt=| Housing for the local population (Askari) Independent of Le Corbusier, the policies requiring the strict racial separation of the population were followed.
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Original:  Formative Years and a Building Boom alt=| 400x400px| Viale Mussolini (today Harnet Avenue) in 1930s Asmara After 1936, the cities in East Africa experienced a genuine building boom.
Revised:  Formative Years and a Building Boom alt=| Viale Mussolini (today Harnet Avenue) in 1930s Asmara After 1936, the cities in East Africa experienced a genuine building boom.
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Original:  Architectural Development under the Italian Regime alt=| 400x400px| Cinema Impero (1930s)  The Italian occupiers designed Asmara according to their ideas.
Revised:  Architectural Development under the Italian Regime alt=| 400x400px| Cinema Impero (1930s) alt=|Fiat Tagliero petrol station in Asmara The Italian occupiers designed Asmara according to their ideas.
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Original:  There were golf courses, tennis clubs, soccer tournaments, bicycle racing clubs, and motorsport events. alt=|400x400px|Fiat Tagliero petrol station in Asmara Motorsport events were held in Asmara for a reason.
Revised:  There were golf courses, tennis clubs, soccer tournaments, bicycle racing clubs, and motorsport events. Motorsport events were held in Asmara for a reason.
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Original: Bader: Für den Faschismus bauen, pg. 366 alt=| 400x400px| Piazza Roma in Asmara (1930s) In addition to numerous buildings, the colonial administration also built roads and squares, which were also supposed to represent the fascist regime and its power over the Eritrean population.
Revised: Bader: Für den Faschismus bauen, pg. 366 alt=| Piazza Roma in Asmara (1930s) In addition to numerous buildings, the colonial administration also built roads and squares, which were also supposed to represent the fascist regime and its power over the Eritrean population.
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Original:  Annexation by Ethiopia and Emerging Resistance Movement alt=| 400x400px| View of Asmara Haile Selassie, in an open policy, did not hide the fact that Ethiopia "is interested in the country and not in the people of Eritrea",Abbay: Identity Jilted or Re-imagining Identity?, pg. 209 especially with regard to Muslim communities, whose villages were systematically burnt down by Ethiopian troops, and whose inhabitants were massacred throughout the 1950s, 1960s, and during the first half of the 1970s.
Revised:  Annexation by Ethiopia and Emerging Resistance Movement alt=| View of Asmara Haile Selassie, in an open policy, did not hide the fact that Ethiopia "is interested in the country and not in the people of Eritrea",Abbay: Identity Jilted or Re-imagining Identity?, pg. 209 especially with regard to Muslim communities, whose villages were systematically burnt down by Ethiopian troops, and whose inhabitants were massacred throughout the 1950s, 1960s, and during the first half of the 1970s.
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Original:  A new parliament was established and then elected Isayas Afewerki, prominent head of the EPLF, as president. alt=|400x400px|Monument to independence fighters in Asmara The armed conflict between Ethiopia and Eritrea lasted for almost 30 years.
Revised:  A new parliament was established and then elected Isayas Afewerki, prominent head of the EPLF, as president. The armed conflict between Ethiopia and Eritrea lasted for almost 30 years.
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Original:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation.  alt=| 400x400px| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing Return as political capital The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
Revised:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation. Return as political capital alt=| 400x400px| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing Return as political capital The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
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Original:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation.  alt=| 400x400px| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing Return as political capital The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
Revised:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation. alt=| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing Return as political capital The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
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Original:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation.  alt=| 400x400px| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing Return as political capital The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
Revised:  Moreover, the already ruinous state of the city could not be overcome during the course of the war after the dismantling policy of British and Ethiopian occupation. alt=| 400x400px| Eritreans queuing at petrol station due to rationing The population increased due to a flood of refugees arriving from rural regions, as well as the return of many from the diaspora.
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Original: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life.  alt=| 400x400px| Asmara Market (2013) Financial support for the urban historic core In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
Revised: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life. Financial support for the urban historic core alt=| 400x400px| Asmara Market (2013) Financial support for the urban historic core In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
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Original: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life.  alt=| 400x400px| Asmara Market (2013) Financial support for the urban historic core In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
Revised: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life. alt=| Asmara Market (2013) Financial support for the urban historic core In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
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Original: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life.  alt=| 400x400px| Asmara Market (2013) Financial support for the urban historic core In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
Revised: Ogbazghi: Personal Rule in Africa: The Case of Eritrea, pg. 5 A state-controlled economy that encompasses agriculture, industry and construction, is heavily dependent on the recruitment of conscripts who serve in national service, often for life. alt=| 400x400px| Asmara Market (2013) In addition, Afewerki has introduced a strict policy of self-sufficiency.
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Original: From the perspective of public health, in The Healthy Citizen (1996), Alana R. Petersen and Deborah Lupton said that manners assisted the diminishment of the social boundaries that existed between the public sphere and the private sphere of a person's life, and so gave rise to “ a highly reflective self, a self who monitors his or her behavior with due regard for others with whom he or she interacts, socially ” ;
Revised: From the perspective of public health, in The Healthy Citizen (1996), Alana R. Petersen and Deborah Lupton said that manners assisted the diminishment of the social boundaries that existed between the public sphere and the private sphere of a person's life, and so gave rise to " a highly reflective self, a self who monitors his or her behavior with due regard for others with whom he or she interacts, socially ” ;
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Original: From the perspective of public health, in The Healthy Citizen (1996), Alana R. Petersen and Deborah Lupton said that manners assisted the diminishment of the social boundaries that existed between the public sphere and the private sphere of a person's life, and so gave rise to “ a highly reflective self, a self who monitors his or her behavior with due regard for others with whom he or she interacts, socially ” ;
Revised: From the perspective of public health, in The Healthy Citizen (1996), Alana R. Petersen and Deborah Lupton said that manners assisted the diminishment of the social boundaries that existed between the public sphere and the private sphere of a person's life, and so gave rise to “ a highly reflective self, a self who monitors his or her behavior with due regard for others with whom he or she interacts, socially " ;
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Original:  ” Petersen A., Lupton D., "The Healthy Citizen" in The New Public Health – Discourses, Knowledges, Strategies (1996) London: Sage.
Revised:  " Petersen A., Lupton D., "The Healthy Citizen" in The New Public Health – Discourses, Knowledges, Strategies (1996) London: Sage.
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