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Original:  both physical and affective - on the organism during its fetal and newborn life ( or so-called primal period of life ) . Primal and primordial prevention Primal prevention has been propounded as a separate category of health promotion.
Revised:  both physical and affective - on the organism during its fetal and newborn life , or so-called primal period of life ) . Primal and primordial prevention Primal prevention has been propounded as a separate category of health promotion.
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Original:  both physical and affective - on the organism during its fetal and newborn life ( or so-called primal period of life ) . Primal and primordial prevention Primal prevention has been propounded as a separate category of health promotion.
Revised:  both physical and affective - on the organism during its fetal and newborn life ( or so-called primal period of life . Primal and primordial prevention Primal prevention has been propounded as a separate category of health promotion.
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Original:  This health promotion par excellencesee: URL is based on knowledge in molecular biology, in particular on epigenetics, which points to how much affective as well as physical environment during fetal and newborn life may determine adult health.
Revised:  This health promotion par URL is based on knowledge in molecular biology, in particular on epigenetics, which points to how much affective as well as physical environment during fetal and newborn life may determine adult health.
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Original:  This includes adequate parental leaveGarcia, Patricia, Why Silicon Valley’s Paid Leave Policies Need to Go Viral, Vogue, culture, opinion, 2015 ideally for both parents with kin caregiving and financial help where needed.
Revised:  This includes adequate parental leave, ideally for both parents with kin caregiving and financial help where needed.Garcia, Patricia, Why Silicon Valley’s Paid Leave Policies Need to Go Viral, Vogue, culture, opinion, 2015 ideally for both parents with kin caregiving and financial help where needed.
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Original:  This includes adequate parental leaveGarcia, Patricia, Why Silicon Valley’s Paid Leave Policies Need to Go Viral, Vogue, culture, opinion, 2015 ideally for both parents with kin caregiving and financial help where needed.
Revised:  This includes adequate parental leaveGarcia, Patricia, Why Silicon Valley’s Paid Leave Policies Need to Go Viral, Vogue, culture, opinion, 2015 
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Original:  Similarly, specific protective measures such as water purification, sewage treatment, and the development of personal hygienic routines ( such as regular hand-washing, safe sex to prevent sexually transmitted infections ) became mainstream upon the discovery of infectious disease agents and have decreased the rates of communicable diseases which are spread in unsanitary conditions.
Revised:  Similarly, specific protective measures such as water purification, sewage treatment, and the development of personal hygienic routines , such as regular hand-washing, safe sex to prevent sexually transmitted infections ) became mainstream upon the discovery of infectious disease agents and have decreased the rates of communicable diseases which are spread in unsanitary conditions.
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Original:  Similarly, specific protective measures such as water purification, sewage treatment, and the development of personal hygienic routines ( such as regular hand-washing, safe sex to prevent sexually transmitted infections ) became mainstream upon the discovery of infectious disease agents and have decreased the rates of communicable diseases which are spread in unsanitary conditions.
Revised:  Similarly, specific protective measures such as water purification, sewage treatment, and the development of personal hygienic routines ( such as regular hand-washing, safe sex to prevent sexually transmitted infections , became mainstream upon the discovery of infectious disease agents and have decreased the rates of communicable diseases which are spread in unsanitary conditions.
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Original:  This depends on definitions of what constitutes a disease, though, in general, primary prevention addresses the root cause of a disease or injury whereas secondary prevention aims to detect and treat a disease early on.Module 13: Levels of Disease Prevention. (2007, April 24). Retrieved March 16, 2014, from Centers for Disease Control and Prevention website: URL Secondary prevention consists of "early diagnosis and prompt treatment" to contain the disease and prevent its spread to other individuals, and "disability limitation" to prevent potential future complications and disabilities from the disease.
Revised:  This depends on definitions of what constitutes a disease, though, in general, primary prevention addresses the root cause of a disease or injury whereas secondary prevention aims to detect and treat a disease early URL Secondary prevention consists of "early diagnosis and prompt treatment" to contain the disease and prevent its spread to other individuals, and "disability limitation" to prevent potential future complications and disabilities from the disease.
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Original:  Leading causes of preventable death %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United States The leading cause of death in the United States was tobacco . However , poor diet and lack of exercise may soon surpass tobacco as a leading cause of death.
Revised:  Leading causes of preventable death %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% United States The leading cause of death in the United States was tobacco ; however , poor diet and lack of exercise may soon surpass tobacco as a leading cause of death.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000CauseDeaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deathsTobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 00018.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity 400,000 16.6 Alcohol consumption 85,000 3.5 Infectious diseases 75,000 3.1 Toxicants 55,000 2.3 Traffic collisions 43,000 1.8 Firearm incidents 29,000 1.2 Sexually transmitted infections 20,000 0.8 Drug abuse 17,000 0.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable deaths in the United States in the year 2000 Cause Deaths caused\% of all deaths Tobacco smoking 435, 000 18.1 Poor diet and physical inactivity400,00016.6Alcohol consumption85,0003.5Infectious diseases75,0003.1Toxicants55,0002.3Traffic collisions43,0001.8Firearm incidents29,0001.2Sexually transmitted infections20,0000.8Drug abuse17,0000.7 Worldwide The leading causes of preventable death worldwide share similar trends to the United States.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable death worldwide as of the year 2001 Cause Deaths caused (millions per year) Hypertension 7.8Smoking 5.0High cholesterol 3.9Malnutrition 3.8Sexually transmitted infections 3.0Poor diet 2.
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable death worldwide as of the year 2001CauseDeaths caused (millions per year) Hypertension 7.8Smoking 5.0High cholesterol 3.9Malnutrition 3.8Sexually transmitted infections 3.0Poor diet 2.
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Original:  + Leading causes of preventable death worldwide as of the year 2001 Cause Deaths caused (millions per year) Hypertension 7.8Smoking 5.0High cholesterol 3.9Malnutrition 3.8Sexually transmitted infections 3.0Poor diet 2.8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
Revised:  + Leading causes of preventable death worldwide as of the year 2001 Cause Deaths caused (millions per year) Hypertension7.8Smoking5.0High cholesterol3.9Malnutrition3.8Sexually transmitted infections3.0Poor diet2.8Overweight and obesity2.5Physical inactivity2.0Alcohol1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
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Original: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
Revised: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
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Original: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
Revised: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
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Original: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
Revised: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwideInterventionPercent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
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Original: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding 13Insecticide-treated materials 7Complementary feeding 6Zinc 4Clean delivery 4Hib vaccine 4Water ,
Revised: 8Overweight and obesity 2.5Physical inactivity 2.0Alcohol 1.9 Indoor air pollution from solid fuels 1.8 Unsafe water and poor sanitation 1.6 + Leading preventive interventions as of 2003 reducing deaths in children 0–5 years old worldwide Intervention Percent of all child deaths preventableBreastfeeding13Insecticide-treated materials7Complementary feeding6Zinc4Clean delivery4Hib vaccine4Water ,
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Original:  sanitation, hygiene 3Antenatal steroids 3Newborn temperature management 2 Vitamin A 2Tetanus toxoid 2 Nevirapine and replacement feeding 2 Antibiotics for premature rupture of membranes 1 Measles vaccine 1 Antimalarial intermittent preventive treatment in pregnancy<1\% Preventive methods %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obesity Obesity is a major risk factor for a wide variety of conditions including cardiovascular diseases, hypertension, certain cancers, and type 2 diabetes.
Revised:  sanitation, hygiene3Antenatal steroids3Newborn temperature management2Vitamin A2Tetanus toxoid2Nevirapine and replacement feeding2Antibiotics for premature rupture of membranes 1 Measles vaccine 1 Antimalarial intermittent preventive treatment in pregnancy<1\% Preventive methods %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obesity Obesity is a major risk factor for a wide variety of conditions including cardiovascular diseases, hypertension, certain cancers, and type 2 diabetes.
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Original:  sanitation, hygiene 3Antenatal steroids 3Newborn temperature management 2 Vitamin A 2Tetanus toxoid 2 Nevirapine and replacement feeding 2 Antibiotics for premature rupture of membranes 1 Measles vaccine 1 Antimalarial intermittent preventive treatment in pregnancy<1\% Preventive methods %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obesity Obesity is a major risk factor for a wide variety of conditions including cardiovascular diseases, hypertension, certain cancers, and type 2 diabetes.
Revised:  sanitation, hygiene 3Antenatal steroids 3Newborn temperature management 2 Vitamin A 2Tetanus toxoid 2 Nevirapine and replacement feeding 2 Antibiotics for premature rupture of membranes1Measles vaccine1Antimalarial intermittent preventive treatment in pregnancy<1\% Preventive methods %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Obesity Obesity is a major risk factor for a wide variety of conditions including cardiovascular diseases, hypertension, certain cancers, and type 2 diabetes.
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Original:  Diabetes is the main cause of kidney failure, limb amputation, and new-onset blindness in American adults."Diabetes Prevention Program (DPP)." Diabetes Prevention Program (DPP). US Department of Health and Human Services, Oct. 2008. Web. 23 Apr.
Revised:  Diabetes is the main cause of kidney failure, limb amputation, and new-onset blindness in American 
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Original:  The term especially applies to the use of condoms, which are highly effective at preventing disease,Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. 2014. 2013 Sexually Transmitted Disease Surveillance. Retrieved from: URL but also to other devices meant to prevent STIs, such as dental dams and latex gloves.
Revised:  The term especially applies to the use of condoms, which are highly effective at preventing URL but also to other devices meant to prevent STIs, such as dental dams and latex gloves.
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Original:  Therefore, prevention  of tobacco use is paramount to prevention of lung cancer. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Individual, community, and statewide interventions can prevent or cease tobacco use.
Revised:  of tobacco use is paramount to prevention of lung cancer. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Individual, community, and statewide interventions can prevent or cease tobacco use.
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Original:  Therefore, prevention  of tobacco use is paramount to prevention of lung cancer. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Individual, community, and statewide interventions can prevent or cease tobacco use.
Revised:  Therefore, prevention Prevention of tobacco use is paramount to prevention of lung cancer. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Individual, community, and statewide interventions can prevent or cease tobacco use.
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Original:  In 2014, it was projected that by 2023 that the number of chronic disease cases would increase by 42\%, resulting in $ 4.2 trillion in treatment and lost economic output.Milken Institute. (January 2014). Checkup Time, Chronic Disease and Wellness in America: Measuring the Economic Burden in a Changing Nation. Accessed 3/23/18 from URL They are also among the top ten leading causes of mortality.
Revised:  In 2014, it was projected that by 2023 that the number of chronic disease cases would increase by 42\%, resulting in $ 4.2 trillion in treatment and lost economic URL They are also among the top ten leading causes of mortality.
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Original:  Accessed 3/23/18 from URL They are also among the top ten leading causes of mortality.Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. CDC National Health Report Highlights. Accessed 3/18/18 from URL Chronic diseases are driven by risk factors that are largely preventable.
Revised:  Accessed 3/23/18 from URL They are also among the top ten leading causes of URL Chronic diseases are driven by risk factors that are largely preventable.
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Original:  More recent analysis reveals that heart disease and cancer alone accounted for nearly 46\% of all deaths.Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. (2017). Chronic Diseases Overview. Accessed 3/18/18 from URL Modifiable risk factors are also responsible for a large morbidity burden, resulting in poor quality of life in the present and loss of future life earning years.
Revised:  More recent analysis reveals that heart disease and cancer alone accounted for nearly 46\% of all URL Modifiable risk factors are also responsible for a large morbidity burden, resulting in poor quality of life in the present and loss of future life earning years.
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Original:  It is further estimated that by 2023, focused efforts on the prevention and treatment of chronic disease may result in 40 million fewer chronic disease cases, potentially reducing treatment costs by $220 billion. Childhood vaccinations Childhood immunizations are largely responsible for the increase in life expectancy in the 20th century. From an economic standpoint, childhood vaccines demonstrate a very high return on investment. According to Healthy People 2020, for every birth cohort that receives the routine childhood vaccination schedule, direct health care costs are reduced by $ 9.9 billion and society saves $33.4 billion in indirect costs.
Revised:  It is further estimated that by 2023, focused efforts on the prevention and treatment of chronic disease may result in 40 million fewer chronic disease cases, potentially reducing treatment costs by $220 billion. Childhood vaccinations Childhood immunizations are largely responsible for the increase in life expectancy in the 20th century. From an economic standpoint, childhood vaccines demonstrate a very high return on investment. According to Healthy People 2020, for every birth cohort that receives the routine childhood vaccination schedule, direct health care costs are reduced by $ 9.9 billion and society saves $33.4 billion in indirect costs.
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Original:  According to Healthy People 2020, for every birth cohort that receives the routine childhood vaccination schedule, direct health care costs are reduced by $ 9.9 billion and society saves $33.4 billion in indirect costs.Healthy People 2020. Immunization and Infectious Diseases: Overview. Accessed 3/18/18 from URL The economic benefits of childhood vaccination extend beyond individual patients to insurance plans and vaccine manufacturers, all while improving the health of the population. Health capital theory The burden of preventable illness extends beyond the healthcare sector, incurring costs related to lost productivity among workers in the workforce. Indirect costs related to poor health behaviors and associated chronic disease costs U.S. employers billions of dollars each year. According to the American Diabetes Association (ADA), medical costs for employees with diabetes are twice as high as for workers without diabetes and are caused by work-related absenteeism ($ 5 billion), reduced productivity at work ($20.8 billion), inability to work due to illness-related disability ($21.6 billion), and premature mortality ($18.5 billion).
Revised:  According to Healthy People 2020, for every birth cohort that receives the routine childhood vaccination schedule, direct health care costs are reduced by $ 9.9 billion and society saves $33.4 billion in indirect costs. The economic benefits of childhood vaccination extend beyond individual patients to insurance plans and vaccine manufacturers, all while improving the health of the population. Health capital theory The burden of preventable illness extends beyond the healthcare sector, incurring costs related to lost productivity among workers in the workforce. Indirect costs related to poor health behaviors and associated chronic disease costs U.S. employers billions of dollars each year. According to the American Diabetes Association (ADA), medical costs for employees with diabetes are twice as high as for workers without diabetes and are caused by work-related absenteeism ($ 5 billion), reduced productivity at work ($20.8 billion), inability to work due to illness-related disability ($21.6 billion), and premature mortality ($18.5 billion).
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