wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  5 15Novo Nordisk (2.68) 6 10Sanofi (2.49) 7 6Eisai (2.48) 8 11AstraZeneca (2.48) 9 7Roche Holding (2.38) 10 19Pfizer (2.34) 11 14Merck & Co. (2.32) 12 5Gilead Sciences (2.29) 13 8Boehringer Ingelheim (2.11) 14 16Bristol-Myers Squibb (2.03) 15 13Bayer (1.88) 16 12AbbVie (1.88) 17 9 Daiichi Sankyo (1.77) 18 18Astellas Pharma (1.46) 19 20Eli Lilly (1.27) 20 17 The Access to Medicine Index was developed starting in 2004 on the initiative of Dutch entrepreneur Wim Leereveld.
Revised:  5 15Novo Nordisk (2.68) 6 10Sanofi (2.49) 7 6Eisai (2.48) 8 11AstraZeneca (2.48) 9 7Roche Holding (2.38) 10 19Pfizer (2.34) 11 14Merck & Co. (2.32) 12 5Gilead Sciences (2.29) 13 8Boehringer Ingelheim (2.11) 14 16Bristol-Myers Squibb (2.03) 15 13Bayer (1.88) 16 12AbbVie (1.88) 17 9Daiichi Sankyo (1.77) 18 18Astellas Pharma (1.46) 19 20Eli Lilly (1.27) 20 17 The Access to Medicine Index was developed starting in 2004 on the initiative of Dutch entrepreneur Wim Leereveld.
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Original:  Company Scope The Access to Medicine Index ranks 20 of the world's largest originator (research-based) pharmaceutical companies, based on market capitalisation and the relevance of their product portfolios to diseases in the developing world.
Revised:  Company scope The Access to Medicine Index ranks 20 of the world's largest originator (research-based) pharmaceutical companies, based on market capitalisation and the relevance of their product portfolios to diseases in the developing world.
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Original:  In addition to global media outlets reporting on the Access to Medicine Index and its findings, significant coverage includes: In July 2008, Bill Gates mentioned the Access to Medicine Index in an interview with Time Magazine as an example of an incentive that works to give businesses credit for what they are already doing to address the challenges of access to medicine in developing countries.
Revised:  In addition to global media outlets reporting on the Access to Medicine Index and its findings, significant coverage includes: In July 2008, Bill Gates mentioned the Access to Medicine Index in an interview with Time magazine as an example of an incentive that works to give businesses credit for what they are already doing to address the challenges of access to medicine in developing countries.
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Original:  In 2010 Paul Hunt (academic) , the former UN Special Rapporteur on the right to health, described the Index as a way to measure the pharmaceutical industry's progress in line with human rights obligations.
Revised:  In 2010 Paul Hunt (academic) , the former UN special rapporteur on the right to health, described the Index as a way to measure the pharmaceutical industry's progress in line with human rights obligations.
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Original:  In 2010 Paul Hunt (academic) , the former UN Special Rapporteur on the right to health, described the Index as a way to measure the pharmaceutical industry's progress in line with human rights obligations.
Revised:  In 2010 Paul Hunt (academic) , the former UN Special Rapporteur on the right to health, described the index as a way to measure the pharmaceutical industry's progress in line with human rights obligations.
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Original:  Additionally, it is in companies ’ best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the Index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every 2 years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
Revised:  Additionally, it is in companies ' best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the Index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every 2 years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
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Original:  Additionally, it is in companies ’ best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the Index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every 2 years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
Revised:  Additionally, it is in companies ’ best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every 2 years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
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Original:  Additionally, it is in companies ’ best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the Index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every 2 years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
Revised:  Additionally, it is in companies ’ best interest to be as forthcoming as possible, as they are a) rated by the Index on their degree of transparency and b) rated on their performance every two years, so that failures to meet their commitments and/or inconsistencies over time are likely to be uncovered.
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Original: Additional requirements for EVA include: Shielding against ultraviolet radiation Limited shielding against particle radiation Means to maneuver, dock, release, and /or tether onto a spacecraft Protection against small micrometeoroids, some traveling at up to 27,000 kilometers per hour, provided by a puncture-resistant Thermal Micrometeoroid Garment, which is the outermost layer of the suit.
Revised: Additional requirements for EVA include: Shielding against ultraviolet radiation Limited shielding against particle radiation Means to maneuver, dock, release, and tether onto a spacecraft Protection against small micrometeoroids, some traveling at up to 27,000 kilometers per hour, provided by a puncture-resistant Thermal Micrometeoroid Garment, which is the outermost layer of the suit.
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Original:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps . "  Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the sun is.
Revised:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps " Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the sun is.
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Original:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps . "  Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the sun is.
Revised:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps . " . Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the sun is.
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Original:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps . "  Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the sun is.
Revised:  Due to the coloration of the version used for Apollo and Skylab, which resembled the coloration of the comic strip character Snoopy, these caps became known as "Snoopy caps . " Temperature in space can vary extremely depending on where the Sun is.
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Original:  The restraint layer is shaped in such a way that bending a joint causes pockets of fabric, called "gores , "  to open up on the outside of the joint, while folds called "convolutes" fold up on the inside of the joint.
Revised:  The restraint layer is shaped in such a way that bending a joint causes pockets of fabric, called "gores " to open up on the outside of the joint, while folds called "convolutes" fold up on the inside of the joint.
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Original:  The restraint layer is shaped in such a way that bending a joint causes pockets of fabric, called "gores , "  to open up on the outside of the joint, while folds called "convolutes" fold up on the inside of the joint.
Revised:  The restraint layer is shaped in such a way that bending a joint causes pockets of fabric, called "gores , " , to open up on the outside of the joint, while folds called "convolutes" fold up on the inside of the joint.
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Original:  Related preceding technologies include the gas mask used in World War II, the oxygen mask used by pilots of high flying bombers in World War II, the high altitude or vacuum suit required by pilots of the Lockheed U-2 and SR-71 Blackbird, the diving suit, rebreather, scuba diving gear, and many others.
Revised:  Related preceding technologies include the gas mask used in World War II, the oxygen mask used by pilots of high-flying bombers in World War II, the high altitude or vacuum suit required by pilots of the Lockheed U-2 and SR-71 Blackbird, the diving suit, rebreather, scuba diving gear, and many others.
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Original:  Related preceding technologies include the gas mask used in World War II, the oxygen mask used by pilots of high flying bombers in World War II, the high altitude or vacuum suit required by pilots of the Lockheed U-2 and SR-71 Blackbird, the diving suit, rebreather, scuba diving gear, and many others.
Revised:  Related preceding technologies include the gas mask used in World War II, the oxygen mask used by pilots of high flying bombers in World War II, the high-altitude or vacuum suit required by pilots of the Lockheed U-2 and SR-71 Blackbird, the diving suit, rebreather, scuba diving gear, and many others.
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Original:  Many space suit designs are taken from the U.S. Air Force suits, which are designed to work in “high altitude aircraft pressure[s] ,” such as the Mercury IVA suit or the Gemini G4C, or the Advanced Crew Escape Suits.
Revised:  Many space suit designs are taken from the U.S. Air Force suits, which are designed to work in "high-altitude aircraft pressure[s] ,” such as the Mercury IVA suit or the Gemini G4C, or the Advanced Crew Escape Suits.
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Original:  Many space suit designs are taken from the U.S. Air Force suits, which are designed to work in “high altitude aircraft pressure[s] ,” such as the Mercury IVA suit or the Gemini G4C, or the Advanced Crew Escape Suits.
Revised:  Many space suit designs are taken from the U.S. Air Force suits, which are designed to work in “high altitude aircraft pressure[s] ", such as the Mercury IVA suit or the Gemini G4C, or the Advanced Crew Escape Suits.
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Original:  The Phase VI gloves, meant for use with the Mark III suit, are the first gloves to be designed with "laser scanning technology, 3D computer modeling, stereo lithography, laser cutting technology and CNC machining . "  This allows for cheaper, more accurate production, as well as increased detail in joint mobility and flexibility.
Revised:  The Phase VI gloves, meant for use with the Mark III suit, are the first gloves to be designed with "laser scanning technology, 3D computer modeling, stereo lithography, laser cutting technology and CNC machining " This allows for cheaper, more accurate production, as well as increased detail in joint mobility and flexibility.
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Original:  The Phase VI gloves, meant for use with the Mark III suit, are the first gloves to be designed with "laser scanning technology, 3D computer modeling, stereo lithography, laser cutting technology and CNC machining . "  This allows for cheaper, more accurate production, as well as increased detail in joint mobility and flexibility.
Revised:  The Phase VI gloves, meant for use with the Mark III suit, are the first gloves to be designed with "laser scanning technology, 3D computer modeling, stereo lithography, laser cutting technology and CNC machining . " . This allows for cheaper, more accurate production, as well as increased detail in joint mobility and flexibility.
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Original:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head . "  Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) , the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
Revised:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head " Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) , the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
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Original:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head . "  Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) , the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
Revised:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head . " . Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) , the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
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Original:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head . "  Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) , the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
Revised:  Astronauts call this effect "alligator head . " Soviet and Russian suit models SK series (CK) the spacesuit used for the Vostok program (1961–1963).
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Original:  No pressure suits were worn aboard Voskhod 1. Berkut (Беркут = "golden eagle") , the spacesuit was a modified SK-1 used by the crew of Voskhod 2 which included Alexei Leonov on the first spacewalk during (1965).
Revised:  No pressure suits were worn aboard Voskhod 1. Berkut (Беркут meaning "golden eagle") , the spacesuit was a modified SK-1 used by the crew of Voskhod 2 which included Alexei Leonov on the first spacewalk during (1965).
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Original:  No pressure suits were worn aboard Voskhod 1. Berkut (Беркут = "golden eagle") , the spacesuit was a modified SK-1 used by the crew of Voskhod 2 which included Alexei Leonov on the first spacewalk during (1965).
Revised:  No pressure suits were worn aboard Voskhod 1. Berkut (Беркут = "golden eagle") the spacesuit was a modified SK-1 used by the crew of Voskhod 2 which included Alexei Leonov on the first spacewalk during (1965).
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Original:  Yastreb (Ястреб = "hawk")extravehicular activity spacesuit used during a crew exchange between Soyuz 4 and Soyuz 5 (1969).
Revised:  Yastreb (Ястреб meaning "hawk")extravehicular activity spacesuit used during a crew exchange between Soyuz 4 and Soyuz 5 (1969).
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Original:  Apollo/Skylab A7L EVA and Moon suits. The Block II Apollo suit was the primary pressure suit worn for eleven Apollo flights, three Skylab flights, and the US astronauts on the Apollo–Soyuz Test Project between 1968 and 1975.
Revised:  Apollo/Skylab A7L EVA and Moon suitsThe Block II Apollo suit was the primary pressure suit worn for eleven Apollo flights, three Skylab flights, and the US astronauts on the Apollo–Soyuz Test Project between 1968 and 1975.
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Original:  Shuttle Ejection Escape Suit used from STS-1 (1981) to STS-4 (1982) by a two-man crew used in conjunction with the then-installed ejection seats.
Revised:  Shuttle Ejection Escape Suitused from STS-1 (1981) to STS-4 (1982) by a two-man crew used in conjunction with the then-installed ejection seats.
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Original:  The designs, created by fashion students from Philadelphia University, were "Technology", "Trends in Society", and "Biomimicry . "  The design "Technology" won, and the prototype is built with technologies like 3D printing.
Revised:  The designs, created by fashion students from Philadelphia University, were "Technology", "Trends in Society", and "Biomimicry " The design "Technology" won, and the prototype is built with technologies like 3D printing.
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Original:  The designs, created by fashion students from Philadelphia University, were "Technology", "Trends in Society", and "Biomimicry . "  The design "Technology" won, and the prototype is built with technologies like 3D printing.
Revised:  The designs, created by fashion students from Philadelphia University, were "Technology", "Trends in Society", and "Biomimicry . " . The design "Technology" won, and the prototype is built with technologies like 3D printing.
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Original: Charles Bathurst, 1st Viscount Bledisloe The Bledisloe Commission, also known as the Rhodesia-Nyasaland Royal Commission, was a Royal Commission  appointed in 1937 –39 to examine the possible closer union of the three British territories in Central Africa, Southern Rhodesia, Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland.
Revised: Charles Bathurst, 1st Viscount Bledisloe The Bledisloe Commission, also known as the Rhodesia-Nyasaland Royal Commission, was a Royal Commission , appointed in 1937 –39 to examine the possible closer union of the three British territories in Central Africa, Southern Rhodesia, Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland.
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Original: Charles Bathurst, 1st Viscount Bledisloe The Bledisloe Commission, also known as the Rhodesia-Nyasaland Royal Commission, was a Royal Commission  appointed in 1937 –39 to examine the possible closer union of the three British territories in Central Africa, Southern Rhodesia, Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland.
Revised: Charles Bathurst, 1st Viscount Bledisloe The Bledisloe Commission, also known as the Rhodesia-Nyasaland Royal Commission, was a Royal Commission appointed in 1937 and undertaking its enquiries between 1937 and 1939. to examine the possible closer union of the three British territories in Central Africa, Southern Rhodesia, Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland.
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Original:  When British South Africa Company rule in Northern Rhodesia came to an end in 1924, it became a protectorate, with a governor and Executive Council and Legislative Council, consisting of a majority of officials and a minority of  members elected solely by European voters.
Revised:  When British South Africa Company rule in Northern Rhodesia came to an end in 1924, the territory became a protectorate, with a governor and Executive Council and Legislative Council, consisting of a majority of officials and a minority of members elected solely by European voters.
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Original:  When British South Africa Company rule in Northern Rhodesia came to an end in 1924, it became a protectorate, with a governor and Executive Council and Legislative Council, consisting of a majority of officials and a minority of  members elected solely by European voters.
Revised:  When British South Africa Company rule in Northern Rhodesia came to an end in 1924, it became a protectorate, with a governor and Executive Council and Legislative Council, consisting of a majority of officials and a minority of unofficial members elected solely by European voters.
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Original:  As early as 1915, the British South Africa Company proposed amalgamating Southern Rhodesia and Northern Rhodesia, but this was rejected by the Southern Rhodesian legislature in 1917, on the basis this might prevent Southern Rhodesia obtaining self-government.
Revised:  As early as 1915, the British South Africa Company proposed amalgamating Southern Rhodesia and Northern Rhodesia, but this was rejected by the Southern Rhodesian legislature in 1917, on the grounds that this might prevent Southern Rhodesia obtaining self-government.
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Original:  However, on a visit to Southern Rhodesia in 1927, the Conservative Colonial Secretary, Leo Amery gave Southern Rhodesia settlers the impression that he endorsed their claim to  all or part of Northern Rhodesia.
Revised:  However, on a visit to Southern Rhodesia in 1927, the Conservative Colonial Secretary, Leo Amery gave Southern Rhodesia settlers the impression that he endorsed their claim to incorporate all or part of Northern Rhodesia.
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Original:  This  population increased rapidly after the discovery of the Copperbelt in the 1920s, and Northern Rhodesian settlers wanted self-determination with a European minority electorate, following the model of Southern Rhodesia but separate from it.
Revised:  This white population increased rapidly after the discovery of the Copperbelt in the 1920s, and Northern Rhodesian settlers wanted self-determination with a European minority electorate, following the model of Southern Rhodesia but separate from it.
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Original:  As long as Leo Amery as Colonial Secretary attempted to qualify the principle that the interests of Africans in tropical Africa would be treated as paramount, he gave tacit encouragement to these Northern Rhodesian settler aspirations.
Revised:  As long as Leo Amery was Colonial Secretary, he attempted to qualify the principle that the interests of Africans in tropical Africa would be treated as paramount, he gave tacit encouragement to these Northern Rhodesian settler aspirations.
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Original:  As long as Leo Amery as Colonial Secretary attempted to qualify the principle that the interests of Africans in tropical Africa would be treated as paramount, he gave tacit encouragement to these Northern Rhodesian settler aspirations.
Revised:  As long as Leo Amery as Colonial Secretary attempted to qualify the principle that the interests of Africans in tropical Africa would be treated as paramount, and gave tacit encouragement to these Northern Rhodesian settler aspirations.
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Original:  They were still a minority, as a significant group of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even these began to accept that amalgamation was likely.
Revised:  This group was still in the minority, as a significant group of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even these began to accept that amalgamation was likely.
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Original:  They were still a minority, as a significant group of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even these began to accept that amalgamation was likely.
Revised:  They were still a minority, as a greater number of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even these began to accept that amalgamation was likely.
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Original:  They were still a minority, as a significant group of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even these began to accept that amalgamation was likely.
Revised:  They were still a minority, as a significant group of settlers were cautious about being marginalised by the much greater numbers of Europeans in the south, although even they had begun to accept that amalgamation was likely.
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Original:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika  as envisaged in the Hilton Young report  made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for  union.
Revised:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika as envisaged in the Hilton Young report made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for union.
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Original:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika  as envisaged in the Hilton Young report  made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for  union.
Revised:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika , as envisaged in the Hilton Young report made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for union.
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