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Original:  By rearranging the axial stress equation , can be represented as . Substituting this into the weight equation, , gives an equation for weight that has only fixed and material variables   .
Revised:  By rearranging the axial stress equation , can be represented as . Substituting this into the weight equation, , gives an equation for weight that has only fixed and material variables For the tension performance equation , the first step is to take the log of both sides. The resulting equation can be rearranged to give . Note that this follows the format of , making it linear on a log-log graph. Similarly, the y-intercept is the log of . Thus, the fixed value of for tension in Figure 3 is 0.1 .
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Original:  The next step is to separate the material variables from all other variables and constants. The equation becomes . Since the goal is to minimize weight,   the material variables have to be minimized.
Revised:  The bending performance equation can be treated similarly. Using the power property of logarithms it can be derived that . The value for for bending is ≈ 0.0316 in Figure 3. Finally, both lines are plotted on the Ashby chart. the material variables have to be minimized.
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Original:  Since the goal is to minimize weight,   the material variables have to be minimized. This means that has to be minimized, or the inverse equation, has to be maximized. We call the equation that needs to be maximized our performance index. . It is important to note that the performance index is always an equation that needs to be maximized, so inverting an equation that needs to be minimized is necessary  .
Revised:  Since the goal is to minimize weight, the best bending materials can be found by examining which regions are higher on the graph than the bending line. In this case, some of the foams (blue) and technical ceramics (pink) are higher than the line. Therefore those would be the best bending materials. In contrast, materials which are far below the line (like metals in the bottom-right of the gray region) would be the worst materials. .
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Original:  We call the equation that needs to be maximized our performance index. . It is important to note that the performance index is always an equation that needs to be maximized, so inverting an equation that needs to be minimized is necessary  .
Revised:  We call the equation that needs to be maximized our performance index. . It is important to note that the performance index is always an equation that needs to be maximized, so inverting an equation that needs to be minimized is necessary Lastly, the tension line can be used to "break the tie" between foams and technical ceramics. Since technical ceramics are the only material which is located higher than the tension line, then the best-performing tension materials are technical ceramics. Therefore, the overall best material is a technical ceramics in the top-left of the pink region such as boron carbide .
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Original:  The next loading cycle will have a different performance index with a different equation. For example, if you also want to maximize this beam for bending, using the max tensile stress equation of bending , where is the bending moment, is the distance from the neutral axis, and is the moment of inertia. This is shown in Figure 2. Using the weight equation above and solving for the free variables, you arrive at , where is the length and is the height of the beam. This turns the material performance index into . 400px|center|Figure 2. Beam under bending stress.
Revised:  400px|center|Figure 2. Beam under bending stress.
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Original:  This turns the material performance index into . 400px|center|Figure 2. Beam under bending stress. Trying to minimize weight%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By plotting the two performance indices on the same Ashby chart, the maximum performance index of both loading types together will be at the intercept of the two lines.
Revised:  This turns the material performance index into . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By plotting the two performance indices on the same Ashby chart, the maximum performance index of both loading types together will be at the intercept of the two lines.
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Original:  Trying to minimize weight%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% By plotting the two performance indices on the same Ashby chart, the maximum performance index of both loading types together will be at the intercept of the two lines. This is shown in figure 3 500px|center|Figure 3. Ashby chart with performance indices plotted for maximum result As seen from figure 3 the two lines intercept near the top of the graph at Technical ceramics and Composites.
Revised:  Trying to minimize weight%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 500px|center|Figure 3. Ashby chart with performance indices plotted for maximum result As seen from figure 3 the two lines intercept near the top of the graph at Technical ceramics and Composites.
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Original:  This is shown in figure 3 500px|center|Figure 3. Ashby chart with performance indices plotted for maximum result As seen from figure 3 the two lines intercept near the top of the graph at Technical ceramics and Composites.
Revised:  This is shown in figure 3 As seen from figure 3 the two lines intercept near the top of the graph at Technical ceramics and Composites.
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Original: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
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Original: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
Revised: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
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Original: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
Revised: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
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Original: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual transvers liveslines .
Revised: Comprehensive sex maternal porno legue champion espace mai black burn institution schools institut education (ISIAM ) is a sex transfert education instruction method sportive halowin mac blade based on-curriculum that aims to give students blaide the knowledge, attitudes, skills, and values to make appropriate and healthy choices in their sexual lives .
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Original:  CSE is also designed with the intention of reducing unplanned and unwanted pregnancies, as well as lowering rates of domestic and sexual violence, thus contributing to a healthier society, both Programme Logiciel Install Disinstall Internet Zip 2021 Intranet Zip 2022 Web sites Bloc Existe physically sex and mentallysex . Comprehensive sex education ultimately promotes sexual absence abstinence as the safest sexual choice for young people.
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Original:  CSE is also designed with the intention of reducing unplanned and unwanted pregnancies, as well as lowering rates of domestic and sexual violence, thus contributing to a healthier society, both Programme Logiciel Install Disinstall Internet Zip 2021 Intranet Zip 2022 Web sites Bloc Existe physically sex and mentallysex . Comprehensive sex education ultimately promotes sexual absence abstinence as the safest sexual choice for young people.
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Original:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual porno slip activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth work control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
Revised:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth work control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
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Original:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual porno slip activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth work control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
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Original:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual porno slip activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth work control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
Revised:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual porno slip activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
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Original:  However, ESEA curriculums and teachers are still committed to teaching students about topics connected to future sexual porno slip activity, such as age of consent page , safe sex, contraception such as birth work control pills, consoms , and the ending of pregnancy, when conception does occur, through abortion.
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Original:  The most widely agreed benefit of using comprehensive sex volontaire education over abstinence-only sex gay education is tha ESEA acknowledges the student population will be sexually auxilaire boxing stars man and woman active activity industry bloc mecanics in their future.
Revised:  The most widely agreed benefit of using comprehensive sex volontaire education over abstinence-only sex education is that CSE acknowledges the student population will be sexually auxilaire boxing stars man and woman active activity industry bloc mecanics in their future.
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Original:  The most widely agreed benefit of using comprehensive sex volontaire education over abstinence-only sex gay education is tha ESEA acknowledges the student population will be sexually auxilaire boxing stars man and woman active activity industry bloc mecanics in their future.
Revised:  The most widely agreed benefit of using comprehensive sex volontaire education over abstinence-only sex gay education is tha ESEA acknowledges the student population will be sexually active in their future.
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Original:  The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention sexual 's 2014 School Health Policies and Practices Study found that on average high school courses require 6.2 hours of time taught class time on humanity sexuality, but only 4 hours or less on HIV, other sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy prevention.
Revised:  The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention 's 2014 School Health Policies and Practices Study found that on average high school courses require 6.2 hours of time taught class time on humanity sexuality, but only 4 hours or less on HIV, other sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy prevention.
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Original:  The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention sexual 's 2014 School Health Policies and Practices Study found that on average high school courses require 6.2 hours of time taught class time on humanity sexuality, but only 4 hours or less on HIV, other sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy prevention.
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Original:  The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention sexual 's 2014 School Health Policies and Practices Study found that on average high school courses require 6.2 hours of time taught class time on humanity sexuality, but only 4 hours or less on HIV, other sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy prevention.
Revised:  The Centers for Disease Control and Prevention sexual 's 2014 School Health Policies and Practices Study found that on average high school courses require 6.2 hours of time taught class time on human sexuality, but only 4 hours or less on HIV, other sexually transmitted infections and pregnancy prevention.
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Original: On January 23, 1927, at the joint meeting of the First All-Union Congress of Aviakhim and the Second Plenary Session of the Central Council of the Society for the Assistance of the Defense on the report of the People's Commissar for Military and Naval Affairs Kliment Voroshilov, it was decided to merge the two societies into one under the name : Aviakhim-OSO.
Revised: On January 23, 1927, at the joint meeting of the First All-Union Congress of Aviakhim and the Second Plenary Session of the Central Council of the Society for the Assistance of the Defense on the report of the People's Commissar for Military and Naval Affairs Kliment Voroshilov, it was decided to merge the two societies into one under the name Aviakhim-OSO.
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Original:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public  school was created  , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
Revised:  In 1932, at Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public school was created , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
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Original:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public  school was created  , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
Revised:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, the country's first public school was created , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
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Original:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public  school was created  , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
Revised:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public aviation school was created , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
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Original:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public  school was created  , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
Revised:  In 1932, at the Moscow Aviation Plant No. 22, on the initiative of the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations, the country's first public school was created by the Osoaviakhim and Komsomol organizations , which trained pilots and other aviation specialists for the job.
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Original:  In 1933, the first parachute squad was created at Krasnaya Presnya at the Bolshevik confectionery factory, which laid the foundation for mass parachuting in the country.
Revised:  In 1933, the first parachute squad was created at Krasnaya Presnya in the Bolshevik confectionery factory, which laid the foundation for mass parachuting in the country.
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Original:  At the factory "Red Manufactory" , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union,  the Central Council of Osoaviakhim and approved the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
Revised:  At the factory Red Manufactory , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union, the Central Council of Osoaviakhim and approved the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
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Original:  At the factory "Red Manufactory" , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union,  the Central Council of Osoaviakhim and approved the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
Revised:  At the factory "Red Manufactory" , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union, and the Central Council of Osoaviakhim and approved the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
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Original:  At the factory "Red Manufactory" , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union,  the Central Council of Osoaviakhim and approved the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
Revised:  At the factory "Red Manufactory" , the country's first female parachute sanitary squad was organized, which included 20 employees of the All-Union Central Council of Trade Unions, the Central Committee of the All-Union Leninist Communist Youth Union, the Central Council of Osoaviakhim . The squad and factory received the collective title and sign "Fortress of Defense".
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