wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original: Burke, Bill (6 May 2001) "Shipyards, a Crucible for Tragedy: Part 1: How the war created a monster" Virginian-Pilot Norfolk, Virginia (newspaper) The United States government and  asbestos industry have been criticized for not acting quickly enough to inform the public of dangers and to reduce public exposure.
Revised: Burke, Bill (6 May 2001) "Shipyards, a Crucible for Tragedy: Part 1: How the war created a monster" Virginian-Pilot Norfolk, Virginia (newspaper) The United States government and the asbestos industry have been criticized for not acting quickly enough to inform the public of dangers and to reduce public exposure.
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Original:  countertops, and pipes Popcorn ceilings, also known as acoustic ceilings Fireproofing Caulk Industrial and marine gaskets Brake pads and shoes Stage curtains Fire blankets Interior fire doors Fireproof clothing for firefighters Thermal pipe insulation Filters for removing fine particulates from chemicals, liquids  and wine Dental cast linings HVAC flexible duct connectors Drilling fluid additives Low density insulating board (often referred to as AIB or asbestos insulating board)
Revised:  countertops, and pipes Popcorn ceilings, also known as acoustic ceilings Fireproofing Caulk Industrial and marine gaskets Brake pads and shoes Stage curtains Fire blankets Interior fire doors Fireproof clothing for firefighters Thermal pipe insulation Filters for removing fine particulates from chemicals, liquids , and wine Dental cast linings HVAC flexible duct connectors Drilling fluid additives Low density insulating board (often referred to as AIB or asbestos insulating board)
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Original:  countertops, and pipes Popcorn ceilings, also known as acoustic ceilings Fireproofing Caulk Industrial and marine gaskets Brake pads and shoes Stage curtains Fire blankets Interior fire doors Fireproof clothing for firefighters Thermal pipe insulation Filters for removing fine particulates from chemicals, liquids  and wine Dental cast linings HVAC flexible duct connectors Drilling fluid additives Low density insulating board (often referred to as AIB or asbestos insulating board)
Revised:  countertops, and pipes Popcorn ceilings, also known as acoustic ceilings Fireproofing Caulk Industrial and marine gaskets Brake pads and shoes Stage curtains Fire blankets Interior fire doors Fireproof clothing for firefighters Thermal pipe insulation Filters for removing fine particulates from chemicals, liquids and wine Dental cast linings HVAC flexible duct connectors Drilling fluid additives Low-density insulating board (often referred to as AIB or asbestos insulating board)
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Original:  Since approximately the mid-1990s, brake pads, new or replacement, have been manufactured instead with linings made of ceramic, carbon, metallic  and aramid fiber (Twaron or Kevlar—the same material used in bulletproof vests).
Revised:  Since approximately the mid-1990s, brake pads, new or replacement, have been manufactured instead with linings made of ceramic, carbon, metallic , and aramid fiber (Twaron or Kevlar—the same material used in bulletproof vests).
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Original:  Numerous other items have been made containing chrysotile including brake linings, fire barriers in fuseboxes, pipe insulation, floor tiles, residential shingles, and gaskets for high temperature equipment.
Revised:  Numerous other items have been made containing chrysotile including brake linings, fire barriers in fuseboxes, pipe insulation, floor tiles, residential shingles, and gaskets for high-temperature equipment.
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Original:  Ottawa Citizen During the 1980s and again in the 1990s, it was suggested at times that the process of making asbestos cement could "neutralize" the asbestos, either via chemical processes or by causing  cement to attach to the fibers and changing their physical size;
Revised:  Ottawa Citizen During the 1980s and again in the 1990s, it was suggested at times that the process of making asbestos cement could "neutralize" the asbestos, either via chemical processes or by causing the cement to attach to the fibers and changing their physical size;
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Original:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018  it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade  or use products made from asbestos.
Revised:  The entire town continues to be contaminated and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018 it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade or use products made from asbestos.
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Original:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018  it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade  or use products made from asbestos.
Revised:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and road signs . Canada From 31 December 2018 it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade or use products made from asbestos.
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Original:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018  it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade  or use products made from asbestos.
Revised:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018 , it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade or use products made from asbestos.
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Original:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018  it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade  or use products made from asbestos.
Revised:  The entire town continues to be contaminated , and has been disincorporated, allowing local authorities to remove references to Wittenoom from maps and roadsigns . Canada From 31 December 2018 it was illegal to import, manufacture, sell, trade , or use products made from asbestos.
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Original:  however, the Japanese government did not ban crocidolite and amosite until 1995, and a near complete ban with a few exceptions on asbestos was implemented in 2006, with the remaining exceptions being removed in March 2012 for a full-fledged ban.
Revised:  however, the Japanese government did not ban crocidolite and amosite until 1995, and a near-complete ban with a few exceptions on asbestos was implemented in 2006, with the remaining exceptions being removed in March 2012 for a full-fledged ban.
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Original:  United Kingdom In the United Kingdom, blue and brown asbestos materials were banned outright in 1985 while the import, sale and second hand reuse of white asbestos was outlawed in 1999.
Revised:  United Kingdom In the United Kingdom, blue and brown asbestos materials were banned outright in 1985 while the import, sale , and secondhand reuse of white asbestos was outlawed in 1999.
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Original:  In 1989 the United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) issued the Asbestos Ban and Phase Out Rule but in 1991, asbestos industry supporters challenged and overturned the ban in a landmark lawsuit: Corrosion Proof Fittings v. the Environmental Protection Agency.
Revised:  In 1989 the United States Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) issued the Asbestos Ban and Phase-Out Rule but in 1991, asbestos industry supporters challenged and overturned the ban in a landmark lawsuit: Corrosion Proof Fittings v. the Environmental Protection Agency.
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Original: EPA Asbestos Materials Bans: Clarification. epa.gov. 18 May 1999 Vietnam Corrugated asbestos roof (with Fibre cement) In Vietnam, chrysotile asbestos is not banned and  still widely used.
Revised: EPA Asbestos Materials Bans: Clarification. epa.gov. 18 May 1999 Vietnam Corrugated asbestos roof (with Fibre cement) In Vietnam, chrysotile asbestos is not banned and is still widely used.
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Original: Dixit, B., "Performance of Protective Clothing: Development and Testing of Asbestos Substitutes," Performance of Protective Clothing, ASTM STP 900, R. L. Barker and G. C. Coletta, Eds., American Society for Testing and Materials, Philadelphia, 1986, pp. 446–460 . The demolition of buildings containing large amounts of asbestos based materials pose particular problems for builders and property developers –
Revised: Dixit, B., "Performance of Protective Clothing: Development and Testing of Asbestos Substitutes," Performance of Protective Clothing, ASTM STP 900, R. L. Barker and G. C. Coletta, Eds., American Society for Testing and Materials, Philadelphia, 1986, pp. 446–460 . The demolition of buildings containing large amounts of asbestos-based materials pose particular problems for builders and property developers –
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Original:  One such example is the Red Road Flats in Glasgow, Scotland which used huge amounts of asbestos cement board for wall panelling – British health and safety regulations stipulate that asbestos material has to be removed in specially adapted vehicles and taken to a landfill site with an appropriate permit to accept asbestos, via an approved route, at certain times of the day.
Revised:  One such example is the Red Road Flats in Glasgow, Scotland which used huge amounts of asbestos cement board for wall paneling – British health and safety regulations stipulate that asbestos material has to be removed in specially adapted vehicles and taken to a landfill site with an appropriate permit to accept asbestos, via an approved route, at certain times of the day.
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Original: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “ actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain ” . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
Revised: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that " actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain ” . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
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Original: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “ actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain ” . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
Revised: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “ actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future— for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain ” . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
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Original: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “ actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain ” . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
Revised: Overview of the PSM The PSM is an entity that “ actually exists, not only as a distinct theoretical entity but something that will be empirically discovered in the future- for instance, as a specific stage of the global neural dynamics in the human brain " . Involved in the PSM are three phenomenal properties that must occur in order to explain the concept of the self.
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Original: Being No One The second is perspectivalness, which is “ a global, structural property of phenomenal space as a whole ” .Being No one More simply, it is what is commonly referred to as the ecological self, the immovable center of perception.
Revised: Being No One The second is perspectivalness, which is " a global, structural property of phenomenal space as a whole ” .Being No one More simply, it is what is commonly referred to as the ecological self, the immovable center of perception.
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Original: Being No One The second is perspectivalness, which is “ a global, structural property of phenomenal space as a whole ” .Being No one More simply, it is what is commonly referred to as the ecological self, the immovable center of perception.
Revised: Being No One The second is perspectivalness, which is “ a global, structural property of phenomenal space as a whole " .Being No one More simply, it is what is commonly referred to as the ecological self, the immovable center of perception.
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Original:  Metzinger defines the first person perspective as the “ existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject ” . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
Revised:  Metzinger defines the first-person perspective as the “ existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject ” . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
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Original:  Metzinger defines the first person perspective as the “ existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject ” . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
Revised:  Metzinger defines the first person perspective as the " existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject ” . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
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Original:  Metzinger defines the first person perspective as the “ existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject ” . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
Revised:  Metzinger defines the first person perspective as the “ existence of single coherent and temporally stable model of reality which is representationally centered around or on a single coherent and temporally stable phenomenal subject " . The first-person perspective can be non-conceptual and is autonomously active due to the constant reception of perceptual information by the brain.
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Original:  The PSM then uses this representational content to attribute phenomenal states to our perceived objectsand ourselves. We  are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe we are perceiving reality directly when in actuality we are only perceiving representations of reality.
Revised:  The PSM then uses this representational content to attribute phenomenal states to self and to perceived objects. are thus what Metzinger calls naïve realists, who believe we are perceiving reality directly when in actuality we are only perceiving representations of reality.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a " conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation " . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of a unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, a unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give our perception perspectivalness.
Revised:  The PMIR is a “ conscious mental model, and its content is an ongoing, episodic subject-object relation ” . The model is a result of the combination of our unique set of sensory receptors that acquire input, our unique set of experiences that shape connections within the brain, and our unique positions in space that give a person's perception perspectivalness.
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Original:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so.  2011  7 May  PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
Revised:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so. |- | rowspan=4 style=vertical-align:top| 2011 7 May PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
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Original:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so.  2011  7 May  PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
Revised:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so. 2011 || 7 May PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
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Original:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so.  2011  7 May  PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
Revised:  16 October Singapore government guarantees all local and foreign currency fixed deposits with a $ 150 billion pool for that in view of the financial crisis, joining governments around the world in doing so. 2011 7 May || PAP loses its grip on Aljunied Group Representation Constituency to the Workers' Party in the General Election.
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Original:  This is the first time an opposition party has captured a GRC since the inception of this scheme in 1988.  1 July  Tanjong Pagar Railway Station ceased operation and to be reserved as the Singapore Railway Museum.
Revised:  This is the first time an opposition party has captured a GRC since the inception of this scheme in 1988. |- | 1 July Tanjong Pagar Railway Station ceased operation and to be reserved as the Singapore Railway Museum.
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Original:  This is the first time an opposition party has captured a GRC since the inception of this scheme in 1988.  1 July  Tanjong Pagar Railway Station ceased operation and to be reserved as the Singapore Railway Museum.
Revised:  This is the first time an opposition party has captured a GRC since the inception of this scheme in 1988. 1 July || Tanjong Pagar Railway Station ceased operation and to be reserved as the Singapore Railway Museum.
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