wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  Rather than the term being called social injustice or oppression, there is an advocacy for it to be called violence because this phenomenon comes from, and can be corrected by  human decisions, rather than just natural causes.
Revised:  Rather than the term being called social injustice or oppression, there is an advocacy for it to be called violence because this phenomenon comes from, and can be corrected by , human decisions, rather than just natural causes.
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Original:  Cause and effects In The Sources of Social Power , Michael Mann makes the argument that within state formation, "increased organizational power is a trade-off, whereby the individual obtains more security and food in exchange for his or her freedom."
Revised:  Cause and effects In The Sources of Social Power (1986),Mann, Michael. 1986. The Sources of Social Power, Vol. 1. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press. . Michael Mann makes the argument that within state formation, "increased organizational power is a trade-off, whereby the individual obtains more security and food in exchange for his or her freedom."
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Original:  In our early history, hunter-gatherer groups used organizational power to acquire more resources and produce more food , but at the same time, this power was also used to dominate, kill, and enslave other groups in order to expand territory and supplies.
Revised:  In early human history, hunter-gatherer groups used organizational power to acquire more resources and produce more food , but at the same time, this power was also used to dominate, kill, and enslave other groups in order to expand territory and supplies.
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Original:  In our early history, hunter-gatherer groups used organizational power to acquire more resources and produce more food , but at the same time, this power was also used to dominate, kill, and enslave other groups in order to expand territory and supplies.
Revised:  In our early history, hunter-gatherer groups used organizational power to acquire more resources and produce more food ; yet, at the same time, this power was also used to dominate, kill, and enslave other groups in order to expand territory and supplies.
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Original:  Moreover, this does not only exist for those of the lower class, although the effects are much heavier on them, including the highest rate of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
Revised:  Moreover, this does not solely exist for those of the lower class, although the effects are much heavier on them, including the highest rate of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
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Original:  Moreover, this does not only exist for those of the lower class, although the effects are much heavier on them, including the highest rate of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
Revised:  Moreover, this does not only exist for those of lower classes, though the effects are much heavier on them, including the highest rate of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
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Original:  Moreover, this does not only exist for those of the lower class, although the effects are much heavier on them, including the highest rate of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
Revised:  Moreover, this does not only exist for those of the lower class, although the effects are much heavier on them, including higher rates of disease and death, unemployment, homelessness, lack of education, powerlessness, and shared fate of miseries.
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Original:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
Revised:  Due to social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
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Original:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
Revised:  Due to the social and economic structures in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
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Original:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
Revised:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today —specifically divisions into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
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Original:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior , the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
Revised:  Due to the social and economic structure in place today , specifically the division into rich and poor, powerful and weak, and superior and inferior — the excess premature death rate is between 10 and 20 million per year, which is over ten times the death rates from suicide, homicide, and warfare combined.
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Original:  Cultural violence "Cultural violence" refers to aspects of a culture that can be used to justify or legitimize direct or structural violence, and may be exemplified by religion and ideology, language and art, empirical science and formal science.Galtung, Johan. "Cultural Violence," Journal of Peace Research, Vol. 27, No. 3 (Aug., 1990), pp. 291–305 Cultural violence makes direct and structural violence look or feel "right", or at least not wrong, according to Galtung.
Revised:  The work of Yale-based German philosopher, Thomas Pogge, is one major resource on the connection between structural violence and poverty, especially his book World Poverty and Human Rights (2002). Cultural violence makes direct and structural violence look or feel "right", or at least not wrong, according to Galtung.
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Original:  "Cultural Violence," Journal of Peace Research, Vol. 27, No. 3 (Aug., 1990), pp. 291–305 Cultural violence makes direct and structural violence look or feel "right", or at least not wrong, according to Galtung.Galtung 1990, p. 291 The study of cultural violence highlights the ways the act of direct violence and the fact of structural violence are legitimized and thus made acceptable in society. One mechanism of cultural violence is to change the "moral color" of an act from "red/wrong" to "green/right", or at least to "yellow/acceptable".Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
Revised:  "Cultural Violence," Journal of Peace Research, Vol. 27, No. 3 (Aug., 1990), pp. 291–305 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
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Original: Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
Revised: Galtung 1990, p. 292 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
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Original: Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
Revised: Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals.
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Original: Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): The violence in structural violence is attributed to the specific organizations of society that injure or harm individuals or masses of individuals. In explaining his point of view on how structural violence affects the health of subaltern or marginalized people, medical anthropologist Paul Farmer writes:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This perspective has been continually discussed by Paul Farmer, as well as by Philippe Bourgois and Nancy Scheper-Hughes.
Revised: Galtung 1990, p. 292 International scope%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Petra Kelly wrote in her first book, Fighting for Hope (1984): %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This perspective has been continually discussed by Paul Farmer, as well as by Philippe Bourgois and Nancy Scheper-Hughes.
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Original:  In explaining his point of view on how structural violence affects the health of subaltern or marginalized people, medical anthropologist Paul Farmer writes:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This perspective has been continually discussed by Paul Farmer, as well as by Philippe Bourgois and Nancy Scheper-Hughes.
Revised:  In explaining his point of view on how structural violence affects the health of subaltern or marginalized people, medical anthropologist Paul Farmer writes:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Theorists argue that structural violence is embedded in the current world system; this form of violence, which is centered on apparently inequitable social arrangements, is not inevitable. Ending the global problem of structural violence will require actions that may seem unfeasible in the short term. To some, this indicates that it may be easier to devote resources to minimizing the harmful impacts of structural violence. Others, such as futurist Wendell Bell, see a need for long-term vision to guide projects for social justice. Many structural violences, such as racism and sexism, have become such a common occurrence in society that they appear almost invisible. Despite this fact, sexism and racism have been the focus of intense cultural and political resistance for many decades. Significant reform has been accomplished, though the project remains incomplete.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Paul Farmer notes that there are three reasons why structural violence is hard to see: Anthropologist Seth Holmes studies suffering through the lens of structural violence in his ethnography Fresh Fruit Broken Bodies: Migrant Farmworkers in the United States.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Anthropologist Seth Holmes studies suffering through the lens of structural violence in his ethnography Fresh Fruit Broken Bodies: Migrant Farmworkers in the United States.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Paul Farmer notes that there are three reasons why structural violence is hard to see: Anthropologist Seth Holmes studies suffering through the lens of structural violence in his ethnography Fresh Fruit Broken Bodies: Migrant Farmworkers in the United States. He analyzes naturalization physical and mental suffering, violence continuum, and structural vulnerability that the Mexican migrants experience in their everyday lives. Dr. Holmes uses examples such as governmental influences of structural violence such as US subsidizing corn industries which force Mexican farmers out of business, how this forces them to make the very dangerous trip across the border, US border patrol being hindering these immigrants chances of finding work in America, and the impact it has on the migrants’ bodies.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Paul Farmer notes that there are three reasons why structural violence is hard to see: 
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Original:  Access to health care Structural violence affects the availability of health care in the sense that physicians often need to pay attention to broad social forces (racism, gender inequality, classism, etc.) to determine who falls ill and who will be given access to care.
Revised:  Access to health care Structural violence affects the availability of health care insofar as paying attention to broad social forces (racism, gender inequality, classism, etc.) to determine who falls ill and who will be given access to care.
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Original:  Access to health care Structural violence affects the availability of health care in the sense that physicians often need to pay attention to broad social forces (racism, gender inequality, classism, etc.) to determine who falls ill and who will be given access to care.
Revised:  Access to health care Structural violence affects the availability of health care in the sense that physicians often need to pay attention to broad social forces (racism, gender inequality, classism, etc.) can determine who falls ill and who will be given access to care.
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Original:  Since structurally violent situations are viewed primarily as biological consequences, it neglects environmentally stimulated problems , such as negative social behaviours or inequality prominence . If biosocial understandings are forsaken when considering communicable diseases such as HIV, for example, prevention methods and treatment practices become inadequate and unsustainable for populations. However, the challenge is obvious: many countries cannot afford to stop the harmful cycle of structural violence.
Revised:  Since structurally violent situations are viewed primarily as biological consequences, it neglects environmentally stimulated problems , such as negative social behaviours or the prominence of inequality, therefore ineffectively addressing the issue.
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Original:  The concept of structural violence is used to show how medical professionals are not trained to understand the social forces behind disease, nor are they trained to deal with or alter them . Medical professionals have to ignore the social determinants that alter access to care , and as a result, medical interventions are significantly less effective in low-income countries.
Revised:  The concept of structural violence is used to show how medical professionals are not trained to understand the social forces behind disease, nor are they trained to deal with or alter them , they consequently have to ignore the social determinants that alter access to care , and as a result, medical interventions are significantly less effective in low-income countries.
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Original:  Medical professionals have to ignore the social determinants that alter access to care , and as a result, medical interventions are significantly less effective in low-income countries. Structural violence is an issue not only in developing countries, but also in North America. For example, it has  had a significant impact on diagnosis and treatment of AIDS in the United States.
Revised:  Medical professionals have to ignore the social determinants that alter access to care , and as a result, medical interventions are significantly less effective in low-income areas. Similarly, many areas and even countries cannot afford to stop the harmful cycle of structural violence. had a significant impact on diagnosis and treatment of AIDS in the United States.
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Original:  Structural violence is the result of policy and social structures, and change can only be a product of altering the processes that encourage structural violence in the first place. Paul Farmer    claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
Revised:  claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
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Original:  Paul Farmer    claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
Revised:  Paul Farmer If biosocial understandings are forsaken when considering communicable diseases such as HIV, for example, prevention methods and treatment practices become inadequate and unsustainable for populations. Farmer therefore also states that structural forces account for most if not all epidemic diseases. claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
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Original:  Paul Farmer    claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
Revised:  Paul Farmer Structural violence also exists in the area of mental health, where systems ignore the lived experiences of patients when making decisions about services and funding without consulting with the ill, including those who are illiterate, cannot access computers, do not speak the dominant language, are homeless, are too unwell to fill out long formal surveys, or are in locked psychiatric and forensic wards. Structural violence is also apparent when consumers in developed countries die from preventable diseases 15–25 years earlier than those without a lived experience of mental health. claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes.
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Original:  Paul Farmer    claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda have implemented these interventions with positive outcomes. Examples include prohibiting the commodification of the citizen needs, such as health care, ensuring equitable access to effective therapies, and developing social safety nets. These initiatives increase citizen's social and economic rights, thus decreasing structural violence.
Revised:  Paul Farmer claims that "structural interventions" are one possible solution . to such violence.
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Original:  Unfortunately, many of these professionals are not trained to perform structural interventions. Moreover, medical professionals continue to operate under conventional clinical intervention because physicians can rightly note that structural interventions are not their job. Therefore, the onus falls more on political and other experts to implement such structural changes. As noted, structural forces account for most if not all epidemic diseases (e.g., HIV).
Revised:  Unfortunately, many of these professionals are not trained to do so.
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Original:   One response is to incorporate medical professionals and to acknowledge that such active structural interventions are necessary to address real public health issues.
Revised:  Moreover, medical professionals can rightly note that structural interventions are not their job, and as result, continue to operate under conventional clinical intervention. Therefore, the onus falls more on political and other experts to implement such structural changes. One response is to incorporate medical professionals and to acknowledge that such active structural interventions are necessary to address real public health issues.
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Original:  The lessons that have been learned from  successful examples of structural interventions in these countries are fundamental.
Revised:  Countries such as Haiti and Rwanda, however, have implemented (with positive outcomes) structural interventions, including prohibiting the commodification of the citizen needs (such as health care); ensuring equitable access to effective therapies; and developing social safety nets. Such initiatives increase the social and economic rights of citizens, thus decreasing structural violence. successful examples of structural interventions in these countries are fundamental.
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Original:   Although health disparities resulting from social inequalities are possible to reduce, as long as health care is exchanged as a commodity, those without the power to purchase it will have less access to it.
Revised:  Although the interventions have enormous influence on economical and political aspects of international bodies, more interventions are needed to improve access. Although health disparities resulting from social inequalities are possible to reduce, as long as health care is exchanged as a commodity, those without the power to purchase it will have less access to it.
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Original:  Structural violence also exists in the area of mental health , where systems are designed to ignore the lived experiences of people with mental illnesses when making decisions about services and funding without consulting with the ill, including those who are illiterate, cannot access computers, do not speak the dominant language, are homeless, are too unwell to fill out long formal surveys, or are in locked psychiatric and forensic wards. Online-only consultation may be inappropriate for people with a lived experience of mental illness. Structural violence is also apparent when consumers in developed countries die from preventable diseases 15 &   – 25 years earlier than do people without a lived experience of mental health.
Revised:  Cultural violence Cultural violence refers to aspects of a culture that can be used to justify or legitimize direct or structural violence, and may be exemplified by religion & – 25 years earlier than do people without a lived experience of mental health.
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Original:  Structural violence is also apparent when consumers in developed countries die from preventable diseases 15 &   – 25 years earlier than do people without a lived experience of mental health.
Revised:  Structural violence is also apparent when consumers in developed countries die from preventable diseases 15 & formal science.Galtung, Johan. 1990. "Cultural Violence." Journal of Peace Research 27(3):291 – 25 years earlier than do people without a lived experience of mental health.
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