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Original:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika  as envisaged in the Hilton Young report  made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for  union.
Revised:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika as envisaged in the Hilton Young report , made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for union.
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Original:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika  as envisaged in the Hilton Young report  made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for  union.
Revised:  The failure of the British government to build a rail link from to Northern Rhodesia to Tanganyika as envisaged in the Hilton Young report made Northern Rhodesia's economy very dependent on Southern Rhodesian railways, and added economic to political reasons for a union.
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Original: C Leys and C Pratt, (1960) A New Deal in Central Africa, p. 9. In most of these discussions, Nyasaland was ignored, although the Governor of Nyasaland was involved in some if the discussions leading up to the Victoria Falls Conference.
Revised: C Leys and C Pratt, (1960) A New Deal in Central Africa, p. 9. In most of these discussions, Nyasaland was ignored, although the Governor of Nyasaland was involved in some of the discussions leading up to the Victoria Falls Conference.
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Original:  However, in their memorandum to the Bledisloe Commission, the major settlers' organisations  proposed only an eventual amalgamation, because of fears that the Southern Rhodesian white community, whose economic interests conflicted with those of Nyasaland, would become dominant in a Central Africa union.
Revised:  However, in their memorandum to the Bledisloe Commission, the major settlers' organisations in Nyasaland proposed only an eventual amalgamation, because of fears that the Southern Rhodesian white community, whose economic interests conflicted with those of Nyasaland, would become dominant in a Central Africa union.
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Original:  The Commission noted the different constitutional arrangements between Southern Rhodesia, which had internal self-government and a Legislative Council including elected members and Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland, under Colonial Office regulation with advisory Legislative Councils composed of officials and nominees.
Revised:  The Commission noted the different constitutional arrangements between Southern Rhodesia, which had internal self-government and a Legislative Council that included elected members and Northern Rhodesia and Nyasaland, under Colonial Office regulation with advisory Legislative Councils composed of officials and nominees.
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Original:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand , and the other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, an MP who was also a lawyer and one who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
Revised:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand . The other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, an MP who was also a lawyer and one who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
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Original:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand , and the other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, an MP who was also a lawyer and one who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
Revised:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand , and the other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, one MP who was also a lawyer and one who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
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Original:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand , and the other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, an MP who was also a lawyer and one who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
Revised:  The chairman was Lord Bledisloe, a former Governor-General of New Zealand , and the other five Commissioners were Patrick Ashley Cooper, (later Sir Patrick) a governor of the Hudson's Bay Company, two Commissioners who had had experience of Colonial service, an MP who was also a lawyer and another who had considerable experience in mining and its labour policy.
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Original:  A similar level of opposition was found in Northern Rhodesia when the Commissioners visited in 1938, with the opposition being led by the traditional leaders, who wished to keep the safeguard of British trusteeship against race-based Southern Rhodesian labour and land policies.
Revised:  A similar level of opposition was found in Northern Rhodesia when the Commissioners visited in 1938, with this opposition being led by the traditional leaders, who wished to keep the safeguard of British trusteeship against race-based Southern Rhodesian labour and land policies.
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Original:  It was left to his successor in post in 1950 to 1951, James Griffiths, to begin exploratory talks with Huggins and Welensky representing the white minorities of both Rhodesias government , subject to the opinion of the majority African populations being ascertained.
Revised:  It was left to his successor in post in 1950 to 1951, James Griffiths, to begin exploratory talks with Huggins and Welensky representing the white minorities of both Rhodesian governments , subject to the opinion of the majority African populations being ascertained.
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Original: Television Year Title RoleNetwork Ref. 2021 Encounter (Philippine TV series) Gino TV5 2018 Precious Hearts Romances Presents: Los Bastardos Joaquin S. Cardinal ABS-CBN Ipaglaban Mo: Sumpaan Mikoy 2017–2018 Pusong Ligaw Miraculo "Potpot/Ira" Policarpio / Rafael Magbanua Cervantes 2017 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Cellphone Mart 2016 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Pasa Rommel Ipaglaban Mo: Hardinero Martin Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised: Television Year Title RoleNetwork Ref. 2021 Encounter (Philippine TV series) Gino TV5 2018 Precious Hearts Romances Presents: Los Bastardos Joaquin S. Cardinal ABS-CBN Ipaglaban Mo: Sumpaan Mikoy 2017–2018 Pusong Ligaw Miraculo "Potpot/Ira" Policarpio / Rafael Magbanua Cervantes 2017 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Cellphone Mart 2016 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Pantalan || Jerome || |- | Ipaglaban Mo: Hardinero Martin Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original: Television Year Title RoleNetwork Ref. 2021 Encounter (Philippine TV series) Gino TV5 2018 Precious Hearts Romances Presents: Los Bastardos Joaquin S. Cardinal ABS-CBN Ipaglaban Mo: Sumpaan Mikoy 2017–2018 Pusong Ligaw Miraculo "Potpot/Ira" Policarpio / Rafael Magbanua Cervantes 2017 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Cellphone Mart 2016 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Pasa Rommel Ipaglaban Mo: Hardinero Martin Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised: Television Year Title RoleNetwork Ref. 2021 Encounter (Philippine TV series) Gino TV5 2018 Precious Hearts Romances Presents: Los Bastardos Joaquin S. Cardinal ABS-CBN Ipaglaban Mo: Sumpaan Mikoy 2017–2018 Pusong Ligaw Miraculo "Potpot/Ira" Policarpio / Rafael Magbanua Cervantes 2017 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Cellphone Mart 2016 Maalaala Mo Kaya: Pasa Rommel Ipaglaban Mo: Hardinero || Martin || |- | Maalaala Mo Kaya: Pasa || Rommel || |- | Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  || Guest || |- | rowspan="7"| 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 || Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo || David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers || |- | Forevermore || Jay Fernandez || |- | Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! || Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) || |- |My MYX || rowspan="4"| Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) || rowspan="4"|Myx ||rowspan="4"| |- | MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Guest 2015  Pangako Sa 'Yo  David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G!  Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10Pinoy MYXPop MYX2014Wattpad Presents:
Revised:  Guest 2015 Pangako Sa 'Yo David San Luis / David Powers Forevermore Jay Fernandez Oh My G! Young G (God) My MYX Himself (VJ) Myx MYX Daily Top 10|- |Pinoy MYX|- |Pop MYX|- | rowspan="4"| 2014 |Wattpad Presents:
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in Love| rowspan=2|Adrian Buenavista | rowspan=2|TV5 | |- | Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody | |- | Mirabella| Dave Castillo | rowspan="9"| ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN | |- | Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card | Joel | |- | 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present || ASAP || Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer || |- | rowspan=2| 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 | Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta | Sancho | |- | Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box | Bruce | |- | 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 | Growing Up| Jason Rivero | |- | rowspan=2| 2011 Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN  Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer  2013  Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011  Gandang Gabi, Vice!
Revised:  Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody 2: Still in LoveAdrian BuenavistaTV5 Wattpad Presents: Mr. Popular Meets Miss Nobody Mirabella Dave Castillo ABS-CBN Maalaala Mo Kaya: Card Joel 2013–present ASAP Himself / Co-Host / Performer 2013 Wansapanataym: Petrang Paminta Sancho Maalaala Mo Kaya: Box Bruce 2012 Growing Up Jason Rivero 2011 | Gandang Gabi, Vice!
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Original:  Population density in the southernmost Bahamas remained lower, probably due to the drier climate there (less than 800 mm of rain a year on Great Inagua Island and the Turks and Caicos Islands and only slightly higher on Acklins and Crooked Islands and Mayaguana).
Revised:  The population density in the southernmost Bahamas remained lower, probably due to the drier climate there (less than 800 mm of rain a year on Great Inagua Island and the Turks and Caicos Islands and only slightly higher on Acklins and Crooked Islands and Mayaguana).
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Original:  Despite the arrival of additional settlers, including Europeans, slaves  and former African slaves from Bermuda and the receipt of relief supplies from Virginia and New England, the Eleuthera colony struggled for many years, hampered by poor soil, fighting between settlers, and conflict with the Spanish.
Revised:  Despite the arrival of additional settlers, including Europeans, slaves , and former African slaves from Bermuda and the receipt of relief supplies from Virginia and New England, the Eleuthera colony struggled for many years, hampered by poor soil, fighting between settlers, and conflict with the Spanish.
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Original:  In 1666 other colonists from Bermuda settled on New Providence, which soon became the centre of population and commerce in the Bahamas, with almost 500 people living on the island by 1670.
Revised:  In 1666 other colonists from Bermuda settled on New Providence, which soon became the center of population and commerce in the Bahamas, with almost 500 people living on the island by 1670.
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Original:  In addition , thousands of captive Africans, who were liberated from foreign slave ships by the British navy after the abolition of the British slave trade in 1807, were resettled as free persons in the Bahamas.
Revised:  Also , thousands of captive Africans, who were liberated from foreign slave ships by the British navy after the abolition of the British slave trade in 1807, were resettled as free persons in the Bahamas.
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Original:  "The Gallant Thirty" Bahamians set out to join the British West Indies Regiment as early as 1915 and as many as 1,800 served in the armed forces of Canada, Britain  and the United States.
Revised:  "The Gallant Thirty" Bahamians set out to join the British West Indies Regiment as early as 1915 and as many as 1,800 served in the armed forces of Canada, Britain , and the United States.
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Original:  New York: Alfred A. Knopf. . He was also praised for his resolution of civil unrest over low wages in Nassau in June 1942, when there was a "full-scale riot," even though he blamed the trouble on "mischief makers – communists" and "men of Central European Jewish descent, who had secured jobs as a pretext for obtaining a deferment of  draft".
Revised:  New York: Alfred A. Knopf. . He was also praised for his resolution of civil unrest over low wages in Nassau in June 1942, when there was a "full-scale riot," even though he blamed the trouble on "mischief makers – communists" and "men of Central European Jewish descent, who had secured jobs as a pretext for obtaining a deferment of the draft".
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Original:  online edition January 2008) "Edward VIII, later Prince Edward, duke of Windsor (1894–1972)", Oxford Dictionary of National Biography, Oxford University Press, , retrieved 1 May 2010 (Subscription required)Higham places the date of his resignation as 15 March, and that he left on 5 April.
Revised:  online edition January 2008) "Edward VIII, later Prince Edward, Duke of Windsor (1894–1972)", Oxford Dictionary of National Biography, Oxford University Press, , retrieved 1 May 2010 (Subscription required)Higham places the date of his resignation as 15 March, and that he left on 5 April.
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Original:  The college was chartered in 2016 as the University of the Bahamas, offering baccalaureate, masters and associate degrees, on three campuses and teaching and research centres throughout the Bahamas.
Revised:  The college was chartered in 2016 as the University of the Bahamas, offering baccalaureate, master's, and associate degrees, on three campuses and teaching and research centres throughout the Bahamas.
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