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Original:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of Wana , as well as in Shakai and Tiarza . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the Voice of America (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
Revised:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of , as well as in Shakai and Tiarza . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the Voice of America (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
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Original:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of Wana , as well as in Shakai and Tiarza . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the Voice of America (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
Revised:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of Wana , as well as in and . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the Voice of America (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
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Original:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of Wana , as well as in Shakai and Tiarza . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the Voice of America (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
Revised:  Hours ahead of Saturday's offensive, Pakistani authorities imposed a curfew and turned off mobile phone service in parts of South Waziristan in the district of Wana , as well as in Shakai and Tiarza . Despite the military's superiority in numbers, former security chief of the tribal regions, Mahmood Shah, told the (VOA) news agency it would not be an easy battle.
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Original:  Experts estimate the number of militants between 10,000 and 12,000 from the Tehreek-e-Taliban movement in South Waziristan and up to 25,000 across Pakistan's semi-autonomous tribal belt, with up to 5,000 Uzbek fighters supporting the Taliban.
Revised:  Experts estimate the number of militants between 10,000 and 12,000 from the movement in South Waziristan and up to 25,000 across Pakistan's semi-autonomous tribal belt, with up to 5,000 Uzbek fighters supporting the Taliban.
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Original:  Experts estimate the number of militants between 10,000 and 12,000 from the Tehreek-e-Taliban movement in South Waziristan and up to 25,000 across Pakistan's semi-autonomous tribal belt, with up to 5,000 Uzbek fighters supporting the Taliban.
Revised:  Experts estimate the number of militants between 10,000 and 12,000 from the Tehreek-e-Taliban movement in South Waziristan and up to 25,000 across Pakistan's semi-autonomous tribal belt, with up to 5,000 fighters supporting the Taliban.
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Original:  The Notre Dame of the Assumption Cathedral in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing Joseph Serge Miot, the Archbishop of Port-au-Prince . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner .
Revised:  The in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing Joseph Serge Miot, the Archbishop of Port-au-Prince . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner .
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Original:  The Notre Dame of the Assumption Cathedral in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing Joseph Serge Miot, the Archbishop of Port-au-Prince . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner .
Revised:  The Notre Dame of the Assumption Cathedral in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing , the . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner .
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Original:  The Notre Dame of the Assumption Cathedral in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing Joseph Serge Miot, the Archbishop of Port-au-Prince . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister Bernard Kouchner .
Revised:  The Notre Dame of the Assumption Cathedral in Port-au-Prince was also destroyed, killing Joseph Serge Miot, the Archbishop of Port-au-Prince . "[...] It would appear that all those who were in the building, including my friend [UN mission head] Hedi Annabi [...] and all those who were with him and around him are dead," said French Foreign Minister .
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Original:  There are a lot of wounded, broken heads, broken arms," recounted Raphaelle Chenet, the administrator of the Mercy and Sharing charity, in a telephone interview with the Wall Street Journal from the Haitian capital.
Revised:  There are a lot of wounded, broken heads, broken arms," recounted Raphaelle Chenet, the administrator of the charity, in a telephone interview with the Wall Street Journal from the Haitian capital.
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Original:  There are a lot of wounded, broken heads, broken arms," recounted Raphaelle Chenet, the administrator of the Mercy and Sharing charity, in a telephone interview with the Wall Street Journal from the Haitian capital.
Revised:  There are a lot of wounded, broken heads, broken arms," recounted Raphaelle Chenet, the administrator of the Mercy and Sharing charity, in a telephone interview with the from the Haitian capital.
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Original:  Separately, the Inter-American Development Bank said it will immediately approve a $200,000 grant for emergency assistance to Haiti. The funds will be used to provide food, water, medicine and temporary shelter for victims of the massive quake. The US Agency for International Development is dispatching a disaster assistance response team to Haiti and commented that it will continue to provide additional support as needed. The UN, meanwhile, dispatched approximately 37 search and rescue teams to assist Haitians from a global network. UN General Secretary Ban Ki-moon said that US$ 10 million worth of emergency funds would be used.
Revised:  Separately, the Inter-American Development Bank said it will immediately approve a $200,000 grant for emergency assistance to Haiti. The funds will be used to provide food, water, medicine and temporary shelter for victims of the massive quake. The is dispatching a disaster assistance response team to Haiti and commented that it will continue to provide additional support as needed. The UN, meanwhile, dispatched approximately 37 search and rescue teams to assist Haitians from a global network. UN General Secretary Ban Ki-moon said that US$ 10 million worth of emergency funds would be used.
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Original:  The American Red Cross pledged US $500,000 to help the country, and would send out people to assess damage. "As with most earthquakes, we expect to see immediate needs for food, water, temporary shelter, medical services and emotional support," it said yesterday evening in a statement. A number of other nations, including the UK and Venezuela, are also planning to send aid. A reporter for the Al Jazeera news agency, however, said there might be difficulties delivering aid. "We are about 300km from the epicentre of the earthquake, and we know that the UN agencies and the humanitarian groups here are trying to get together some kind of strategy to get aid over to Haiti. We know that there are trucks loaded with supplies ready to go but the difficulty is that no-one really knows how to get that aid to the people [effectively]." This quake is said to have been the strongest in Haiti in over two hundred years; the last time an earthquake of comparable magnitude was recorded was in 1770. Haiti is the Western Hemisphere's poorest country. Recent development efforts have suffered severe setbacks because of political violence, crime, corruption and natural disasters. Seventy percent of the population lives on the equivalent of less than US$ 2 per day.
Revised:  The American Red Cross pledged US $500,000 to help the country, and would send out people to assess damage. "As with most earthquakes, we expect to see immediate needs for food, water, temporary shelter, medical services and emotional support," it said yesterday evening in a statement. A number of other nations, including the UK and Venezuela, are also planning to send aid. A reporter for the news agency, however, said there might be difficulties delivering aid. "We are about 300km from the epicentre of the earthquake, and we know that the UN agencies and the humanitarian groups here are trying to get together some kind of strategy to get aid over to Haiti. We know that there are trucks loaded with supplies ready to go but the difficulty is that no-one really knows how to get that aid to the people [effectively]." This quake is said to have been the strongest in Haiti in over two hundred years; the last time an earthquake of comparable magnitude was recorded was in 1770. Haiti is the Western Hemisphere's poorest country. Recent development efforts have suffered severe setbacks because of political violence, crime, corruption and natural disasters. Seventy percent of the population lives on the equivalent of less than US$ 2 per day.
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Original: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) has admitted including a misleading claim in a major 2007 report, and issued an apology for the error.
Revised: Part of a major 2007 report by the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) has admitted including a misleading claim in a major 2007 report, and issued an apology for the error.
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Original: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) has admitted including a misleading claim in a major 2007 report, and issued an apology for the error. The statement, which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was not based on scientific data.
Revised: The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change (IPCC) , which claimed that the glaciers in the Himalayas were likely to melt within thirty years, was not based on scientific data.
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Original:  The second section of the report, known as "Working Group II", dealt with the impacts of climate change on the physical environment; one paragraph of this section stated that%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Glaciers in the Himalaya are receding faster than in any other part of the world and, if the present rate continues, the likelihood of them disappearing by the year 2035 and perhaps sooner is very high.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Glaciers in the Himalaya are receding faster than in any other part of the world and, if the present rate continues, the likelihood of them disappearing by the year 2035 and perhaps sooner is very high.
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Original:  one paragraph of this section stated that%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Glaciers in the Himalaya are receding faster than in any other part of the world and, if the present rate continues, the likelihood of them disappearing by the year 2035 and perhaps sooner is very high.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The IPCC have admitted that the original claim was "poorly substantiated" and that "well-established standards of evidence were not applied properly" in the preparation of this section of the report.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% admitted that the original claim was "poorly substantiated" and that "well-established standards of evidence were not applied properly" in the preparation of this section of the report.
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Original:  However, they have emphasised that they stand by their overall conclusion that melting of the glaciers is a concern to the region, which is home to over one billion people, and that the rate of melting is projected to accelerate over the coming century.
Revised:  News reports have suggested that the claim originated in a 1999 article in the popular science magazine New Scientist, and was picked up by the IPCC when it was quoted in a 2005 report by the World Wildlife Fund.
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Original:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya The consensus among glaciologists is that it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, and that the current rates of melting are not yet well-understood.
Revised:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya According to The Times (UK), most glaciologists believe it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, and that the current rates of melting are not yet well-understood.
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Original:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya The consensus among glaciologists is that it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, and that the current rates of melting are not yet well-understood.
Revised:  Glaciers and glacial lakes in the Bhutan-Himalaya The consensus among glaciologists is that it would take hundreds of years to melt the Himalayan glaciers, with some doubting that it will ever happen. There is evidence of glaciers growing in the neighboring Karakoram mountain range.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that  " the  Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that , " the Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that  " the  Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that " There are simply no observations available to make these sorts of statements." Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that  " the  Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that " the "The other thing is that the report says the glaciers are receding faster than anywhere else in the world. We simply do not have the glacier change measurements. The Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world.
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Original:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that  " the  Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", and noted that as such there was it was not possible to say that Himalayan glaciers were receding faster than elsewhere in the world. Indeed, according to The Times (UK), there is thought to be some evidence of glaciers growing in the neighboring Karakoram mountain range.
Revised:  Michael Zemp, of the World Glacier Monitoring Service told CNN that " the Himalayas are among those regions with the fewest available data", Zemp added.
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Original:   The IPCC had recently come under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings .
Revised:  Nevertheless, the IPCC maintains that the melting of the glaciers is a concern to the region, which is home to over one billion people. It stands by its overall conclusion that "mass losses from glaciers and reductions in snow cover over recent decades are projected to accelerate throughout the 21st century, reducing water availability, hydropower potential, and changing seasonality of flows in regions supplied by meltwater from major mountain ranges." The IPCC had recently come under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings .
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Original:   The IPCC had recently come under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings .
Revised:  The IPCC had recently come under fire during the 2009 United Nations Climate Change Conference, when selectively leaked e-mails, hacked from the University of East Anglia, reportedly showed that some scientists were attempting to suppress findings by other climatologists that did not agree with their own findings 
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Original:  This news is in contrast with other global warming findings, such as computer modelling showing that the Pine Island Glacier and Thwaites Glacier, once described as a major "tipping point" for the entire West Antartic Ice Sheet in the embayment of the Amudsen Sea, has reached their own tipping points for eventual collapse, likely to lead to a sea level rise of up to 52 cm over the next century, per the New Scientist .
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Original:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television — now branded on-air as ITV Studios — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
Revised:  The programme, which was created by and developed by Granada Television — now branded on-air as ITV Studios — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
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Original:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television — now branded on-air as ITV Studios — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
Revised:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by — now branded on-air as ITV Studios — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
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Original:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television — now branded on-air as ITV Studios — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
Revised:  The programme, which was created by Tony Warren and developed by Granada Television — now branded on-air as — in Manchester, England, was first broadcast on December 9, 1960 on ITV.
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Original:  Nearly 7,500 episodes later, Coronation Street still broadcasts on ITV1 . At its peak, Thursday's one-hour live episode received ratings of approximately 14.9 million viewers — the highest total for the show for over six years.
Revised:  Nearly 7,500 episodes later, Coronation Street still broadcasts on . At its peak, Thursday's one-hour live episode received ratings of approximately 14.9 million viewers — the highest total for the show for over six years.
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Original:  Ken Barlow is the only remaining character from the first episode, always portrayed by William Roache . Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008.
Revised:  is the only remaining character from the first episode, always portrayed by William Roache . Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008.
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Original:  Ken Barlow is the only remaining character from the first episode, always portrayed by William Roache . Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008.
Revised:  Ken Barlow is the only remaining character from the first episode, always portrayed by . Coronation Street now has its own version of encyclopedia website Wikipedia called Corriepedia, which was launched on May 21, 2008.
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Original:  Hunt, portrayed by the late Maggie Jones , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine Inside Soap . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
Revised:  Hunt, portrayed by the late , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine Inside Soap . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
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Original:  Hunt, portrayed by the late Maggie Jones , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine Inside Soap . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
Revised:  Hunt, portrayed by the late Maggie Jones , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman.
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Original:  Hunt, portrayed by the late Maggie Jones , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine Inside Soap . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer Richard Hillman. Brian Capron , who portrayed Hillman, commented "Funnily enough because it's all come back it seems to have done me a lot of good.
Revised:  Hunt, portrayed by the late Maggie Jones , was also revealed as the most popular character, according to a study by UK magazine Inside Soap . Second-place moment was a storyline involving serial killer . , who portrayed Hillman, commented "Funnily enough because it's all come back it seems to have done me a lot of good.
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Original:  Hosted by Paul O'Grady , it featured various members of the Coronation Street'' cast as contestants, split into three teams: "Weatherfield Lads", "Pint Pullers", and "Rovers Regulars" plus a fourth team of celebrity fans, or "Superfans".
Revised:  Hosted by , it featured various members of the Coronation Street'' cast as contestants, split into three teams: "Weatherfield Lads", "Pint Pullers", and "Rovers Regulars" plus a fourth team of celebrity fans, or "Superfans".
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