wanyu/IteraTeR_full_sent huggingface dataset:
Original:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby &  &  &   &   & & & & &  &  &    . Since the construction of the& &  & &  & & & &  &  & & &  W. A. C. Bennett Dam in &    1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby & & & & & & & & & & & . Since the construction of the& & & & & & & & & & & & W. A. C. Bennett Dam in Forestry By the mid-1910s, the BC forestry department maintained a headquarters at Finlay Forks,Prince George Star, 10 Nov 1916 which in due course served a fire ranger role.Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 The forest ranger station operated after World War II,Prince George Citizen, 17 Jun 1948 and an assistant ranger station was built in 1964.Prince George Citizen, 3 May 1985 In the mid-1960s, logging contracts were let for those valleys north, south and east of the Forks, which would be flooded by the dam.Prince George Citizen: 3& 1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
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Original:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby &  &  &   &   & & & & &  &  &    . Since the construction of the& &  & &  & & & &  &  & & &  W. A. C. Bennett Dam in &    1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby & & & & & & & & & & & . Since the construction of the& & & & & & & & & & & & W. A. C. Bennett Dam in & 6 Apr 1963 Donald Adems (Adams alternate spelling), a forestry service engineer on the project, had been the first Caucasian child to live at Finlay Forks.Prince George Citizen, 8 Jul 1964 1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
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Original:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby &  &  &   &   & & & & &  &  &    . Since the construction of the& &  & &  & & & &  &  & & &  W. A. C. Bennett Dam in &    1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby & & & & & & & & & & & . Since the construction of the& & & & & & & & & & & & W. A. C. Bennett Dam in & Further contracts were let for the clearing and burning of inferior timber.Prince George Citizen, 22 Mar 1965 Several portable sawmills began operations.Prince George Citizen, 30 Mar 1965 Carrier Lumber and Cattermole Timber adopted new ideas such as felling on the ice and sorting later.Prince George Citizen, 3 May 1985 The latter was located on the west bank of the Parsnip River, two miles south, and was accessed by an ice-bridge.Under These Waters, p. 20 Fires completely gutted its 50,000-foot capacity McLean Lake Mill,Prince George Citizen, 14 Apr 1965 and the Courhon Sawmill on Scott Creek at mile 56 of the access road. A forest fire at Mile 43 threatened another mill.Prince George Citizen, 14 May 1965 Temporary work camps were at Miles 49 and 73.Under These Waters, pp. 23-37 1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
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Original:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby &  &  &   &   & & & & &  &  &    . Since the construction of the& &  & &  & & & &  &  & & &  W. A. C. Bennett Dam in &    1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby & & & & & & & & & & & . Since the construction of the& & & & & & & & & & & & W. A. C. Bennett Dam in & The forest service established a centre of operations at Finlay Forks. Rising faster than anticipated, the dammed waters created vast logjams and half-submerged trees.Prince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
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Original:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby &  &  &   &   & & & & &  &  &    . Since the construction of the& &  & &  & & & &  &  & & &  W. A. C. Bennett Dam in &    1968 it has lain under the waters of Williston Lake.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers . ( Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 ) In 1916, a reserve of the Fort Grahame band of Sekani was established nearby & & & & & & & & & & & . Since the construction of the& & & & & & & & & & & & W. A. C. Bennett Dam in & 1968 In this environment, two tugboat companies and about 25 private logging contractors conducted one of the largest timber salvage operations in North America. At the Forks, Finlay Navigation operated a dispatch base, and Carrier Lumber a sawmill.Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1969 Sheriffs’ sales of assets occurred to settle unpaid wages of Yarkon Industries and workers compensation liabilities of Ashlea Timber at Mile 74½.Prince George Citizen: 12, 14
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Revised: & 20 Aug 1969 In 1969, the bush mills disappeared from the pondage area and the first log boom reached Mackenzie from the Finlay drainage.Prince George Citizen, 3 May 1985 By 1971, further timber salvaging became uneconomical,Prince George Citizen, 8 Feb 1971 and Carrier relocated all its operations from Finlay Forks to Mackenzie.Prince George Citizen, 1 May 1999 References Category: Hudson's Bay Company for
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Original:  The Finlay Bay Recreation Site,Prince George Citizen, 11 Mar 1989 on the southeast bank, is about two miles southeast of the former settlement (on the earlier southeast bank) that is now submerged beneath Williston Lake.
Revised:  The Finlay Bay Recreation Site,Prince George Citizen, 11 Mar 1989 on the southeast bank, is about southeast of the former settlement (on the earlier southeast bank) that is now submerged beneath Williston Lake.
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 21 May 1991  Road & Rail Proposals The joint Peace Pass/Finlay Forks proposals form part of the Pine Pass highway and railway developments.
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 21 May 1991 When his 15-tonne logging truck broke through the ice in the vicinity, Brian Wykes URL drowned.Prince George Citizen, 28 Jan 1982 Road & Rail Proposals The joint Peace Pass/Finlay Forks proposals form part of the Pine Pass highway and railway developments.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 In 1915, there were about 35 settlers, Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 and the following year, the Fort Grahame band of Sekani established a reserve nearby.
Revised:  In 1915, there were about 35 settlers, Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 and the following year, the Fort Grahame band of Sekani established a reserve nearby.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 In 1915, there were about 35 settlers, Fort George Herald, 9 Oct 1915 and the following year, the Fort Grahame band of Sekani established a reserve nearby.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 In 1915, there were about 35 settlers, and the following year, the Fort Grahame band of Sekani established a reserve nearby.
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Original:  William Fox, the Hudson’s Bay factor (mercantile agent),Prince George Citizen, 14 May 1925 was the inaugural postmaster (1916-18) , with mail deliveries eight times each year.
Revised:  William Fox, the Hudson’s Bay factor (mercantile agent),Prince George Citizen, 14 May 1925 was the inaugural postmaster 1916–18 , with mail deliveries eight times each year.
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Original:  William Fox, the Hudson’s Bay factor (mercantile agent),Prince George Citizen, 14 May 1925 was the inaugural postmaster (1916-18) , with mail deliveries eight times each year.
Revised:  William Fox, the Hudson’s Bay factor (mercantile agent),Prince George Citizen, 14 May 1925 was the inaugural postmaster (1916-18) , with mail deliveries 6–8 times each year.
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Original: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916  During the 1920s, the  nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen : 31 May 1916 During the 1920s, the nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916  During the 1920s, the  nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916 24 Jun 1921 During the 1920s, the nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916  During the 1920s, the  nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916 During the 1920s, The Northern Trading Co. also operated a post,Prince George Citizen, 30 Apr 1920 Hugh M. Gibson was a storeowner, and the population was about 12.Prince George Citizen: 24 Jun 1921 nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916  During the 1920s, the  nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen , 31 May 1916 During the 1920s, the 2 Jul 1925 The nucleus of a potential town comprised a few scattered cabins,Prince George Citizen, 7 Jul 1922 with Ole Johnson offering visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson  took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson URL who took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson  took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, was postmaster 1926–29 , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson  took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death . Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson  took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen : 24 Sep 1918 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25;
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson  took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster (1920-25; 1930-43) , and a mine owner.
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 19 Jul 1928 In 1912, Louis Peterson took up the first pre-emption at the Forks, Prince George Citizen, 17 May 1928 was postmaster (1926-29) , and ran a trading store until his death at about 81. Prince George Citizen , 1 Jun 1933 The remaining storekeeper,Prince George Citizen, 19 Apr 1934 Alan (alternatively Alex) McKinnon, was also a fur trader,Prince George Citizen, 28 Jul 1938 postmaster 1920–25 and 1930–43 , and a mine owner.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 22 May 1941, 19 Mar 1942, 18 May 1944 & 16 May 1946 By the 1950s, the Caucasian population numbered four, two of whom were Roy  & Marge MacDougall , who ran the trading post and provided visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 22 May 1941, 19 Mar 1942, 18 May 1944 & 16 May 1946 By the 1950s, the Caucasian population numbered four, two of whom were Roy URL George Citizen, 23 Nov 1984 & Marge MacDougall , who ran the trading post and provided visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 22 May 1941, 19 Mar 1942, 18 May 1944 & 16 May 1946 By the 1950s, the Caucasian population numbered four, two of whom were Roy  & Marge MacDougall , who ran the trading post and provided visitor accommodation.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 22 May 1941, 19 Mar 1942, 18 May 1944 & 16 May 1946 By the 1950s, the Caucasian population numbered four, two of whom were Roy & Marge URL McDougall , who ran the trading post and provided visitor accommodation.
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 27 Oct 1952 Arriving in the 1920s, the couple farmed,Prince George Citizen , 21 Jun 1928 to 9 Aug 1928 and Marge served as postmaster (1943-46, 1948-58).
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 27 Oct 1952 Arriving in the 1920s, the couple farmed,Prince George Citizen : 21 Jun 1928 to 9 Aug 1928 and Marge served as postmaster (1943-46, 1948-58).
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 27 Oct 1952 Arriving in the 1920s, the couple farmed,Prince George Citizen , 21 Jun 1928 to 9 Aug 1928 and Marge served as postmaster (1943-46, 1948-58).
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 27 Oct 1952 Arriving in the 1920s, the couple farmed,Prince George Citizen , 21 Jun 1928 to 9 Aug 1928 and Marge served as postmaster 1943–46 and 1948–58.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen : 2 Jun 1960 & , 29 Dec 1967 During the following summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen 4 Apr 1961. & , 29 Dec 1967 During the following summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen The school was a challenge for maintenance crews, being at the northern tip of School District 57.Prince George Citizen, 7 Jan 1969 Catering to logging crews and Sekani, the two classrooms comprised an Atco-style singlewide structure for the primary grades, and a doublewide for the intermediate ones. The Carrier Lumber campsite provided water, power and sewer connections for the classrooms and teacherage. Operating 1968–1971, student enrolments ranged 20–27. Hall, Barbara; & , 29 Dec 1967 During the following summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen Pallo, Rose (2010). School District No. 57 (Prince George) historical memories. (Volume II): people, places, programs& , 29 Dec 1967 During the following summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen & services. Prince George Retired Teachers' Association, Education Heritage CommitteePrince George Citizen , 29 Dec 1967 During the following summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen & , 29 Dec 1967 On closure, the three portable buildings were removed.Prince George Citizen, 3 Dec 1971 summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original:  Prince George Citizen    &  , 29 Dec 1967 During the following  summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
Revised:  Prince George Citizen & , 29 Dec 1967 During the following During the 1968 summer, Bud Stuart operated a coffee shop and general store from a tentPrince George Citizen, 14 Jun 1968 that evolved into permanent premises.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 13 Jun 1969 & 13 Aug 1969 The school was a challenge for maintenance crews, being at the northern tip of School District 57.Prince George Citizen, 7 Jan 1969 Closing in 1971, the three portable buildings were removed.Prince George Citizen, 3 Dec 1971 By 1973, Bill Bloor ran the general store.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 13 Jun 1969 & 13 Aug 1969 By 1973, Bill Bloor ran the general store.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 12 Jan 1953 & 21 Jan 1954 In 1930, A. J. Jank was appointed game warden for the Finlay River district, with his headquarters in the forestry cabin at Finlay Forks.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 12 Jan 1953 & 21 Jan 1954 In 1930, Alfred (Alf) Jank URL was appointed game warden for the Finlay River district, with his headquarters in the forestry cabin at Finlay Forks.
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Original: Prince George Citizen, 22 Jun 1933 During the late 1930s, A.J. Jank ,Prince George Citizen, 1 Apr 1937 and Sidney G. Copeland,Prince George Citizen, 6 Jul 1939 held the game warden position.
Revised: Prince George Citizen, 22 Jun 1933 During the late 1930s, Alf ,Prince George Citizen, 1 Apr 1937 and Sidney G. Copeland,Prince George Citizen, 6 Jul 1939 held the game warden position.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 30 May 1940 & 18 Jul 1940 In 1944, after a social confrontation, Alex Prince  murdered trappers Eugene Messmer, 33, and then Hans Pfeuffer, 43, at their cabin in the vicinity.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 30 May 1940 & 18 Jul 1940 In 1944, after a social confrontation, Alex Prince URL murdered trappers Eugene Messmer, 33, and then Hans Pfeuffer, 43, at their cabin in the vicinity.
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Original:  & 6 Apr 1944 Alex Prince, Sekani First Nations, 21, stood trial,Prince George Citizen, 14 Sep 1944 but damaging inadmissible statements made by a witness prompted a mistrial.
Revised:  & 6 Apr 1944 Alex Prince, Sekani First Nations, stood trial,Prince George Citizen, 14 Sep 1944 but damaging inadmissible statements made by a witness prompted a mistrial.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 28 Aug 1964, 30 Apr 1965 & 3 May 1965 In a 1968 shooting incident at a family reunion, May Egnell  died, and another woman and boy were injured.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 28 Aug 1964, 30 Apr 1965 & 3 May 1965 In another shooting incident at a family reunion, May Egnell died, and another woman and boy were injured.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 28 Aug 1964, 30 Apr 1965 & 3 May 1965 In a 1968 shooting incident at a family reunion, May Egnell  died, and another woman and boy were injured.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 28 Aug 1964, 30 Apr 1965 & 3 May 1965 In a 1968 shooting incident at a family reunion, May Egnell URL died, and another woman and boy were injured.
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Original: Prince George Citizen: 18 Mar 1948 & 11 Dec 1999 In 1971, Frank Egnell, 43, shot Keon Pierre, 56, following an argument at Finlay Forks.
Revised: Prince George Citizen: 18 Mar 1948 & 11 Dec 1999 Frank Egnell, 43, shot Keon Pierre, 56, following an argument at Finlay Forks.
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