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Original:  Andy Medhurst at Sussex University for instance wrote of the Media Studies 2.0 neologism introduced by David Gauntlett, ' Isn't it odd that whenever someone purportedly identifies a new paradigm, they see themselves as already a leading practitioner of it?
Revised:  Andy Medhurst at Sussex University for instance wrote of the Media Studies 2.0 neologism introduced by David Gauntlett, " Isn't it odd that whenever someone purportedly identifies a new paradigm, they see themselves as already a leading practitioner of it?
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  " Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and new media Online communities and virtual communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in multimedia studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open UniversityBachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
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Original:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies )
Revised:  ' Issues and Concepts Media ecology and Information ecology Cybercultures and New Media Online Communities and Virtual Communities Internet trolling and Internet addiction Captology Universities offering degrees in Multimedia Studies University of the Philippines Open University (Bachelor or Arts in Multimedia Studies 
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc multimedia computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc multimedia technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc multimedia studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA graphic design and multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & information technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc multimedia computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc multimedia development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
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Original:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( Multimedia Computing )
Revised:  Aston University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Birmingham City University (BSc Multimedia Technology ) University of East London (BSc Multimedia Studies ) Glyndwr University (BA Graphic Design and Multimedia ) University of Mary Hardin-Baylor (BS Multimedia & Information Technology ) Middlesex University (BSc Multimedia Computing ) Robert Gordon University (BSc Multimedia Development ) University of Westminster ( multimedia computing )
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Original:  He attributes his musical inclinations to the nurture of very musical parents and relatives who were members of the church choir . Joel Navarro moved to the United States of America in 2001 to do his doctoral studies in music conducting at Michigan State University.
Revised:  He attributes his musical inclinations to the nurture of very musical parents and relatives . Joel Navarro moved to the United States of America in 2001 to do his doctoral studies in music conducting at Michigan State University.
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Original:  At Calvin College , Navarro also directed the Campus Choir which partners yearly with The Women's Chorale of Calvin College (Pearl Shangkuan, director) in the Advent Service of Lessons and Carols held at the La Grave Christian Reformed Church in downtown Grand Rapids.
Revised:  At Calvin University , Navarro also directed the Campus Choir which partners yearly with The Women's Chorale of Calvin College (Pearl Shangkuan, director) in the Advent Service of Lessons and Carols held at the La Grave Christian Reformed Church in downtown Grand Rapids.
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Original:  At Calvin College , Navarro also directed the Campus Choir which partners yearly with The Women's Chorale of Calvin College (Pearl Shangkuan, director) in the Advent Service of Lessons and Carols held at the La Grave Christian Reformed Church in downtown Grand Rapids.
Revised:  At Calvin College , Navarro also directed the Campus Choir which partners yearly with The Women's Chorale (Pearl Shangkuan, director) in the Advent Service of Lessons and Carols held at the La Grave Christian Reformed Church in downtown Grand Rapids.
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Original:  He currently directs the SBC Canticorum (a community choir) and the SBC Chorale, succeeding his predecessors Rev. Lee Chong Min and Dr. Virginia Tsai.
Revised:  At S.B.C. he directed the SBC Canticorum (a community choir) and the SBC Chorale, succeeding his predecessors Rev. Lee Chong Min and Dr. Virginia Tsai.
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Original:   Educator Joel was an assistant professor and a former chair of the Conducting and Choral Ensemble Department at the University of the Philippines College of Music.
Revised:  While at Singapore, he also conducted the PsalmiDeo Chorale, a choir of Filipino professionals. In 2017, he was selected to be the choirmaster of the Bandung Philharmonic under Maestro Robert Nordling. Educator Joel was an assistant professor and a former chair of the Conducting and Choral Ensemble Department at the University of the Philippines College of Music.
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Original:   At Calvin College , Navarro was tenured in 2007 and was promoted to Full Professor of Music in 2012.
Revised:  In August 2020, his book, INSPIRARE: Breathing Life Into Our Music, A Manual for Church Choir Conductors in Asia, was published by Sonata Music of Singapore. At Calvin College , Navarro was tenured in 2007 and was promoted to Full Professor of Music in 2012.
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Original:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique,  choral literature,  choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting  recital.
Revised:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique, diction, choral literature, choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting recital.
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Original:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique,  choral literature,  choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting  recital.
Revised:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique, choral literature, vocal literature, choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting recital.
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Original:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique,  choral literature,  choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting  recital.
Revised:  He also teaches graduate courses in advanced conducting, instrumental conducting, rehearsal technique, choral literature, choral methods, vocal-choral pedagogy, score study and interpretation, and conducting studio, and conducting recital.
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Original:  In a flashback in "Make a Wish", Stillwell was the scientist that led an experiment involving neogenic research,Ian Hague, Comics and the Senses: A Multisensory Approach to Comics and Graphic Novels, Routledge, 2014, ch. 2: "Sight, or, the Ideal Perspective and the Physicality of Seeing". which led to Peter Parker becoming Spider-Man.
Revised:  In a flashback in "Make a Wish", Stillwell was the scientist that led an experiment involving neogenic research,Ian Hague, Comics and the Senses: A Multisensory Approach to Comics and Graphic Novels, Routledge, 2014, ch. 2: "Sight, or, the Ideal Perspective and the Physicality of Seeing". that led to Peter Parker becoming Spider-Man.
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Original:  In "The Final Nightmare," Stillwell is abducted from the hospital by the Scorpion and taken to his lab so that he could reverse Scorpion's mutation using the Neogenic Recombinator, at the same time Spider-Man , Dr. Curt Connors, and Vulture are there.
Revised:  In "The Final Nightmare," Scorpion abducts Stillwell from the hospital by the Scorpion and taken to his lab so that he could reverse Scorpion's mutation using the Neogenic Recombinator, at the same time Spider-Man , Dr. Curt Connors, and Vulture are there.
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Original:  In "The Final Nightmare," Stillwell is abducted from the hospital by the Scorpion and taken to his lab so that he could reverse Scorpion's mutation using the Neogenic Recombinator, at the same time Spider-Man , Dr. Curt Connors, and Vulture are there.
Revised:  In "The Final Nightmare," Stillwell is abducted from the hospital so he can force him to use the neogenic recombinator to change him back, but ends up. After getting into a fight with Spider-Man , Dr. Curt Connors, and Vulture are there.
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Original:  In "The Final Nightmare," Stillwell is abducted from the hospital by the Scorpion and taken to his lab so that he could reverse Scorpion's mutation using the Neogenic Recombinator, at the same time Spider-Man , Dr. Curt Connors, and Vulture are there. While a fight ensues between Spider-Man, Vulture, and Scorpion, Stillwell plans to destroy the Recombinator more monster like the Scorpion from being created .
Revised:  In "The Final Nightmare," Stillwell is abducted from the hospital by the Scorpion and taken to his lab so that he could reverse Scorpion's mutation using the Neogenic Recombinator, at the same time Spider-Man and Vulture, Stillwell attempts to destroy the Recombinator more monster like the Scorpion from being created .
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Original:  While a fight ensues between Spider-Man, Vulture, and Scorpion, Stillwell plans to destroy the Recombinator more monster like the Scorpion from being created .
Revised:  While a fight ensues between Spider-Man, Vulture, and Scorpion, Stillwell plans to destroy the machine, but Dr. Curt Connors tries to intervene, only to turn into the Lizard and attack him .
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Original:  Connors tries to intervene saying that it would help cure him, before transforming into the Lizard and attacking Stillwell . While Spider-Man defeats the Lizard, Stillwell overloads the Recombinator's transfomer, causing it to explode .
Revised:  Though Spider-man defeats him, Stillwell overloads the recombinator's transformer and causes it to explode .
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Original:  While Spider-Man defeats the Lizard, Stillwell overloads the Recombinator's transfomer, causing it to explode . Stillwell later explains to Connors that neogenic research is too dangerous and states that its secrets will stay with him forever. He then vows to disappear, never to be seen again.
Revised:  While Spider-Man defeats the Lizard, Stillwell overloads the Recombinator's transfomer, causing it to explode before disappearing to make sure no one can use his neogenic research again.
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Original:  Stillwell then used him as a subject for her experiments invloving military cybernetics and mind control, turning him into a living weaponthat she has carry out her orders. She first appears when ordering Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison truck . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has hired Rhino as her bodyguard and taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
Revised:  Stillwell then used him as a subject for her experiments invloving military cybernetics and mind control, turning him into an obedient living weapon. She orders Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison truck . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has hired Rhino as her bodyguard and taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
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Original:  She first appears when ordering Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison truck . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has hired Rhino as her bodyguard and taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
Revised:  She first appears when ordering Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison transport to become her bodyguard . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has hired Rhino as her bodyguard and taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
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Original:  She first appears when ordering Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison truck . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has hired Rhino as her bodyguard and taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
Revised:  She first appears when ordering Scorpion to break the Rhino out of a prison truck . After Spider-Man defeats Scorpion and frees him from the mind control, the two work together to exact revenge on Stillwell, who has taken Dr. Jessica Andrews, Scorpion's love interest, hostage.
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