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Original:  Sour Cream Dips at the Glen Position Car Number Driver 1 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 2 2 Kurt Busch 3 47 Marcos Ambrose 4 43 A. J. Allmendinger 5 99 Carl Edwards 6 1 Jamie McMurray 7 14 Tony Stewart 8 18 Kyle Busch 9 31 Jeff Burton 10 24 Jeff Gordon 
Revised:  Sour Cream Dips at the Glen Position Car Number Driver 1 42 Juan Pablo Montoya 2 2 Kurt Busch 3 47 Marcos Ambrose 4 43 A. J. Allmendinger 5 99 Carl Edwards 6 1 Jamie McMurray 7 14 Tony Stewart 8 18 Kyle Busch 9 31 Jeff Burton 10 24 Jeff Gordon Sisters
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Original: The Seattle Central Library, designed by Rem Koolhaas Dutch architect Rem Koolhaas has been awarded the "Golden Lion for Lifetime Achievement" at the opening ceremony of the 12th International Architecture Exhibition of the Venice Biennale , on August 28th.
Revised: The Seattle Central Library, designed by Rem Koolhaas architect has been awarded the "Golden Lion for Lifetime Achievement" at the opening ceremony of the 12th International Architecture Exhibition of the Venice Biennale , on August 28th.
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Original: The Seattle Central Library, designed by Rem Koolhaas Dutch architect Rem Koolhaas has been awarded the "Golden Lion for Lifetime Achievement" at the opening ceremony of the 12th International Architecture Exhibition of the Venice Biennale , on August 28th.
Revised: The Seattle Central Library, designed by Rem Koolhaas Dutch architect Rem Koolhaas has been awarded the "Golden Lion for Lifetime Achievement" at the opening ceremony of the 12th International Architecture Exhibition of the , on August 28th.
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Original:  Rem Koolhaas is renown as one of the founders of the Office for Metropolitan Architecture (OMA) in 1975, and author of Delirious New York (1978) and S,M,L,XL (1995).
Revised:  Rem Koolhaas is renown as one of the founders of the (OMA) in 1975, and author of Delirious New York (1978) and S,M,L,XL (1995).
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Original:  Among his most important buildings are the Netherlands Dance Theatre at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the Kunsthal in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the Seattle Public Library .
Revised:  Among his most important buildings are the at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the Kunsthal in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the Seattle Public Library .
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Original:  Among his most important buildings are the Netherlands Dance Theatre at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the Kunsthal in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the Seattle Public Library .
Revised:  Among his most important buildings are the Netherlands Dance Theatre at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the Seattle Public Library .
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Original:  Among his most important buildings are the Netherlands Dance Theatre at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the Kunsthal in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the Seattle Public Library .
Revised:  Among his most important buildings are the Netherlands Dance Theatre at The Hague, the Nexus Housing at Fukuoka in Japan, the Kunsthal in Rotterdam, the Grand Palais of Euralille in Lille, the Villa dall’Ava in Paris, and the .
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Original:  He began by discussing new international Apple Stores , an update to the company's iOS mobile operating system, and the release of a new gaming app, Game Center . Jobs then turned his attention to what he called the "entrée" of the day.
Revised:  He began by discussing new international , an update to the company's iOS mobile operating system, and the release of a new gaming app, Game Center . Jobs then turned his attention to what he called the "entrée" of the day.
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Original:  He began by discussing new international Apple Stores , an update to the company's iOS mobile operating system, and the release of a new gaming app, Game Center . Jobs then turned his attention to what he called the "entrée" of the day.
Revised:  He began by discussing new international Apple Stores , an update to the company's iOS mobile operating system, and the release of a new gaming app, . Jobs then turned his attention to what he called the "entrée" of the day.
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Original:  The new device is priced at US$49. Jobs also showed off the company's new iPod Nano. The Nano, now smaller and without a click wheel, features a new multi-touch screen that allows users to touch virtual buttons to control the device. The new design is 42 percent lighter and 46 percent smaller, but still includes functions on previous Nanos, such as an FM radio and a pedometer. The 8 GB version will cost US$149, while the 16 GB version will be priced at US$179. Jobs announced an updated iPod Touch as well, an announcement that had been widely expected for some time. The new, thinner Touch has been upgraded with features matching some already on the company's recently-released iPhone 4, including the high-resolution "Retina" display and dual video cameras. One camera, located on the back the of the iPod Touch, is for recording video, while the other camera, located on the front, is for use with Apple's FaceTime video calling program. FaceTime allows users of the latest iPhone and iPod Touch models to conduct video chats with each other over Wi-Fi networks. The iPod Touch starts at US$229 for a 8 GB model, US$299 for 32 GB, and US$399 for 64 GB.
Revised:  The new device is priced at 49.
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Original:  Another major product refresh unveiled yesterday was the Apple TV. The digital media receiver was first released in 2007, but was never very popular. Jobs even admitted that, although Apple has "sold a lot of them, they've never been a huge hit. " The US$99 second-generation Apple TV is both smaller and cheaper than its predecessor, which was priced at US$229. The new version will let consumers stream content from online sources, including Netflix, and rent both movies and television shows. Apple has made a deal with Fox and ABC to let users rent episodes of shows for  99 ¢, instead of buying programs.
Revised:  Jobs also showed off the company's new iPod Nano. The Nano, now smaller and without a , features a new screen that allows users to touch virtual buttons to control the device. The new design is 42 percent lighter and 46 percent smaller, but still includes functions on previous Nanos, such as an and a . The 8 version will cost US$149, while the 16 GB version will be priced at US$179. 99 ¢, instead of buying programs.
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Original:  Apple has made a deal with Fox and ABC to let users rent episodes of shows for  99 ¢, instead of buying programs.
Revised:  Apple has made a deal with Fox and ABC to let users rent episodes of shows for Jobs announced an updated iPod Touch as well, an announcement that had been widely expected for some time. The new, thinner Touch has been upgraded with features matching some already on the company's recently-released , including the and dual video cameras. One camera, located on the back the of the iPod Touch, is for recording video, while the other camera, located on the front, is for use with Apple's program. FaceTime allows users of the latest iPhone and iPod Touch models to conduct video chats with each other over networks. The iPod Touch starts at US$229 for a 8 GB model, US$299 for 32 GB, and US$399 for 64 GB. Another major product refresh unveiled yesterday was the Apple TV. The was first released in 2007, but was never very popular. Jobs even admitted that, although Apple has "sold a lot of them, they've never been a huge hit." The US$ 99 ¢, instead of buying programs.
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Original:  Apple has made a deal with Fox and ABC to let users rent episodes of shows for  99 ¢, instead of buying programs. "We think the rest of the studios will see the light and get on board with this pretty fast," added Jobs. High-definition movies can be rented for US 4.99, and the new Apple TV will be available for purchase in around four weeks.
Revised:  Apple has made a deal with Fox and ABC to let users rent episodes of shows for 99 second-generation Apple TV is both smaller and cheaper than its predecessor, which was priced at US$229. The new version will let consumers stream content from online sources, including , and rent both movies and television shows. Apple has made a deal with and to let users rent episodes of shows for 99, instead of buying programs. "We think the rest of the studios will see the light and get on board with this pretty fast," added Jobs. movies can be rented for US$ 4.99, and the new Apple TV will be available for purchase in around four weeks.
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Original: Scottish and Southern Energy's Slough power station . Gareth Kloet, Head of Utilities at Confused.com , welcomed the inquiry into four of Britain's leading energy providers, including Scottish and Southern Energy.
Revised: Scottish and Southern Energy's Slough power station . Gareth Kloet, Head of Utilities at , welcomed the inquiry into four of Britain's leading energy providers, including Scottish and Southern Energy.
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Original:  The Office of Gas and Electricity Markets (Ofgem), the regulator of the electricity and gas markets in Great Britain, has launched an investigation into four of the largest British energy suppliers over suspicions that they not be complying with face-to-face and telephone sales regulations.
Revised:  The (Ofgem), the regulator of the electricity and gas markets in Great Britain, has launched an investigation into four of the largest British energy suppliers over suspicions that they not be complying with face-to-face and telephone sales regulations.
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Original:  The Office of Gas and Electricity Markets (Ofgem), the regulator of the electricity and gas markets in Great Britain, has launched an investigation into four of the largest British energy suppliers over suspicions that they not be complying with face-to-face and telephone sales regulations.
Revised:  The Office of Gas and Electricity Markets (Ofgem), the regulator of the and markets in Great Britain, has launched an investigation into four of the largest British energy suppliers over suspicions that they not be complying with face-to-face and telephone sales regulations.
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Original:  The newspaper The Guardian has reported that "householders are reporting that sales agents working for the energy suppliers are giving them misleading information and quotes which leave them worse off when they switch supplier." Consumer Focus has said that if energy companies continue to break the rules, they could be banned from doorstep-selling completely.
Revised:  The newspaper has reported that "householders are reporting that sales agents working for the energy suppliers are giving them misleading information and quotes which leave them worse off when they switch supplier." Consumer Focus has said that if energy companies continue to break the rules, they could be banned from doorstep-selling completely.
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Original:  However, Scottish Power said it insists on “the highest standards possible for all of our sales agents”, and npower told the Financial Times that it was “confident that the processes we have in place mean that we comply with our regulatory obligations”.
Revised:  However, Scottish Power said it insists on “the highest standards possible for all of our sales agents”, and npower told the that it was “confident that the processes we have in place mean that we comply with our regulatory obligations”.
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Original:  Christine McGourty, director of Energy UK , which represents the leading gas and electricity companies, said that "the companies involved will collaborate with the Ofgem investigation and are awaiting further details from the regulator.
Revised:  Christine McGourty, director of , which represents the leading gas and electricity companies, said that "the companies involved will collaborate with the Ofgem investigation and are awaiting further details from the regulator.
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Original:  Rather than tinkering around the edges Ofgem should be looking at how to reduce prices for vulnerable households." Gareth Kloet, Head of Utilities at Confused.com , one of the UK’s biggest and most popular price comparison services, also welcomed the inquiry.
Revised:  Rather than tinkering around the edges Ofgem should be looking at how to reduce prices for vulnerable households." Gareth Kloet, Head of Utilities at , one of the UK’s biggest and most popular price comparison services, also welcomed the inquiry.
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Original:  Louisiana Governor Kathleen Babineaux Blanco commented, "The buses could have evacuated an estimated 20,000 people if they had been used for emergency evacuations which President Bush had declared two days before Katrina hit.", President Bush, if he would have known how unprepared New Orleans really was, could have imposed marshal law and ordered much more complete evacuations;
Revised:  Louisiana Governor Kathleen Babineaux Blanco commented, "The buses could have saved an estimated 20,000 people if they had been used for emergency evacuations which President Bush had declared two days before Katrina hit.", President Bush, if he would have known how unprepared New Orleans really was, could have imposed marshal law and ordered much more complete evacuations;
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Original:  Louisiana Governor Kathleen Babineaux Blanco commented, "The buses could have evacuated an estimated 20,000 people if they had been used for emergency evacuations which President Bush had declared two days before Katrina hit.", President Bush, if he would have known how unprepared New Orleans really was, could have imposed marshal law and ordered much more complete evacuations; unfortunately he did not. A so called "mandatory" evacuation was ordered by Mayor Nagin Saturday 28 August 2005.
Revised:  Louisiana Governor Kathleen Babineaux Blanco commented, "The buses could have evacuated an estimated 20,000 people if they had been used for emergency evacuations which President Bush had declared two days before Katrina hit.", however the evacuation was ordered by Mayor Nagin Saturday 28 August 2005.
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Original:  A so called "mandatory" evacuation was ordered by Mayor Nagin Saturday 28 August 2005. One day before the hurricane hit. About 400, 000 successfully evacuated by personal vehicles. Thursdayand Friday Sept 1, 2 D+4 , 5 after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order finally secured school buses from other parts of Louisiana.
Revised:  A so called "mandatory" evacuation was ordered by Mayor Nagin Sept 1, 2 D+4 , 5 after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order finally secured school buses from other parts of Louisiana.
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Original:  Thursdayand Friday Sept 1, 2 D+4 , 5 after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order finally secured school buses from other parts of Louisiana.
Revised:  Thursdayand Friday Sept 1, 2 D+4 , President Bush having no direct authority to order evacuations. Thursday, after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order finally secured school buses from other parts of Louisiana.
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Original:  Thursdayand Friday Sept 1, 2 D+4 , 5 after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order finally secured school buses from other parts of Louisiana. Houston sent 150 school buses and 500 buses were secured by FEMA for the two day evacuation.
Revised:  Thursdayand Friday Sept 1, 2 D+4 , 5 after the storm, Governor Blanco by executive order used school buses for evacuation.
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Original:  There were no supplies prepositioned at this location or the conference center. People were requested to bring their own water and food for up to three days--most apparently did not . At the last moment 90,000 bottles of water and 47,000 MRE's were secured by the Red Cross and delivered by the Louisiana National Guard which had initially about 150 members there preforming security duties.
Revised:  As FEMA observed at that time: "Most residents have evacuated the city and those left behind do not have transportation or have special needs." Roughly 150 members there preforming security duties.
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Original:  At the last moment 90,000 bottles of water and 47,000 MRE's were secured by the Red Cross and delivered by the Louisiana National Guard which had initially about 150 members there preforming security duties. Both the supplies and the number of troops were grossly inadequate. Roughly 60,000-150 ,000  people did not evacuate from the city.
Revised:  At the last moment 90,000 bottles of water and 47,000 MRE's were secured by the Red Cross and delivered by the Louisiana National Guard which had initially about 150 ,000 people did not evacuate from the city.
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Original:  about 500 OPSB school and NORTA municipal busses are clearly shown drowned in flood waters in New Orleans. Mayor Nagin and  the Orleans Parish School Board had been negotiating, aparently unsuccessfully, at least since June to use OPSB buses and drivers in an emergency.
Revised:  about 500 OPSB school and NORTA municipal busses are clearly shown drowned in flood waters . the Orleans Parish School Board had been negotiating, aparently unsuccessfully, at least since June to use OPSB buses and drivers in an emergency.
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Original:  Mayor Nagin and  the Orleans Parish School Board had been negotiating, aparently unsuccessfully, at least since June to use OPSB buses and drivers in an emergency.
Revised:  Mayor Nagin and It is unclear whether Mayor Nagin knew these particular buses existed, since the Orleans Parish School Board had been negotiating, aparently unsuccessfully, at least since June to use OPSB buses and drivers in an emergency.
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Original:  Mayor Nagin and  the Orleans Parish School Board had been negotiating, aparently unsuccessfully, at least since June to use OPSB buses and drivers in an emergency. After the huricane the communications were not available to contact the drivers of any of those buses to place them into service or save them from being drowned.
Revised:  Mayor Nagin and the Orleans Parish School Board is not under his jurisdiction and his office would not normally know the location of OPSB bus yards or be able to contact the drivers of any of those buses to place them into service or save them from being drowned.
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Original:  After the huricane the communications were not available to contact the drivers of any of those buses to place them into service or save them from being drowned. They had not even been pre positioned on high ground in case of flooding. Indeed, there is no evidence this was ever planned for or even attempted. Ironically the Louisiana National Guard had prepositioned boats and high water trucks at its Jackson Barracks headquarters 6400 Saint Claude Ave New Orleans%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% in New Orleans for emergency use after the hurricane.
Revised:  After the huricane the communications were not available to contact the drivers of any of those buses to place them into service 6400 Saint Claude Ave New Orleans%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% in New Orleans for emergency use after the hurricane.
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Original:  Ironically the Louisiana National Guard had prepositioned boats and high water trucks at its Jackson Barracks headquarters 6400 Saint Claude Ave New Orleans%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% in New Orleans for emergency use after the hurricane.
Revised:  Ironically the Louisiana National Guard had prepositioned boats and high water trucks at its Jackson Barracks headquarters %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% in New Orleans for emergency use after the hurricane.
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Original:  Ironically the Louisiana National Guard had prepositioned boats and high water trucks at its Jackson Barracks headquarters 6400 Saint Claude Ave New Orleans%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% in New Orleans for emergency use after the hurricane. When the Industrial Canal Levee broke Jackson Barracks was soon under fifteen feet of water and the National Guard Soldiers there had to scramble for their lives. FEMA is NOT a first responder and normally would have had very little do with evacuation arrangements depending upon the the city and state to have worked that out .
Revised:  Ironically the Louisiana National Guard had prepositioned boats and high water trucks at its Jackson Barracks headquarters 6400 Saint Claude Ave New Orleans%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% . Normally it is the city and state to have worked that out .
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Original:  FEMA is NOT a first responder and normally would have had very little do with evacuation arrangements depending upon the the city and state to have worked that out .
Revised:  FEMA is NOT a first responder and normally would have had very little do with evacuation arrangements depending upon the the job of FEMA to coordinate between the various local jurisdictions such as the OPSB and the City of New Orleans in this case. That is, under the rules of prior hurricane responses, FEMA would ask all local jurisdictions for a list of resources under their control. Then FEMA would have taken a request from Nagin for buses, relayed it to the Orleans Parish School Board or other local jurisdictions which had buses, and at that point the OPSB would have provided the buses to Nagin. That coordination did not happen here, but it is unclear whether Nagin ever made such a request prior to the hurricane and after the hurricane they were underwater and useless .
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Original:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order and use the buses in effect made it physically impossible to easily evacuate the disabled, the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles . After the fact this evacuation had to be preformed with helicopter, boat, truck and anything else that could get through the flood waters or fly over them.
Revised:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order in effect made it physically impossible to easily evacuate the disabled, the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles . After the fact this evacuation had to be preformed with helicopter, boat, truck and anything else that could get through the flood waters or fly over them.
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Original:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order and use the buses in effect made it physically impossible to easily evacuate the disabled, the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles . After the fact this evacuation had to be preformed with helicopter, boat, truck and anything else that could get through the flood waters or fly over them.
Revised:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order and use the buses in effect made it physically impossible to evacuate the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles . After the fact this evacuation had to be preformed with helicopter, boat, truck and anything else that could get through the flood waters or fly over them.
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Original:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order and use the buses in effect made it physically impossible to easily evacuate the disabled, the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles . After the fact this evacuation had to be preformed with helicopter, boat, truck and anything else that could get through the flood waters or fly over them. How many people died by this tragic lack of foresight and planning is unknown .
Revised:  The failure to issue a timely evacuation order and use the buses in effect made it physically impossible to easily evacuate the disabled, the nursing homes, hospitals, and those without automobiles .
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