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Original:  The Mughal Emperor Akbar, along with his son Saleem and royal entourage, stayed in Dipalpur when he came to pay homage to Farid Ganj Shakar in 1578. Akbar named the corridor Bari Doab by combining the syllables of the names of the two rivers, Beas and Ravi, thatbounded the area. Baba Guru Nanak also stayed in Dipalpur for some time. The ruins of a Gurudwara mark the place.
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Original:  Other notable residents Dr. Yasir Imtiaz Khan (born 1983) , scientist Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 Bangla Fazilka India ), politician
Revised:  Mongols The Mongols invaded this part of the country repeatedly and they were checked at Dipalpur by Ghiyas-ud-Din Balban and his son Muhammad Khan, during their last invasion of Punjab in 1285 A.D. Pir Muhammad Khan Mangol (also called Samar Khan) was defeated at Dipalpur but during the pursuit of the retreating Mongols, Muhammad Khan was killed. It is believed that Shahzada Muhammad Khan is laid to rest in a small tomb to the west of the Badshahi Mosque. Conformation from any authentic sources is, however, not available. Dr. Yasir Imtiaz Khan (born 1983) , scientist Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 Bangla Fazilka India ), politician
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Original:  Other notable residents Dr. Yasir Imtiaz Khan (born 1983) , scientist Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 Bangla Fazilka India ), politician
Revised:  Other notable residents Notable residents Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 Bangla Fazilka India ), politician
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Original:  Other notable residents Dr. Yasir Imtiaz Khan (born 1983) , scientist Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 Bangla Fazilka India ), politician
Revised:  Other notable residents Dr. Yasir Imtiaz Khan (born 1983) , scientist Qaiser Shehzad (born 1986), cricketer Manzoor Wattoo (born 1939 ), politician
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Original:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures  at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
Revised:  The term is especially used for paintings that show full-length figures at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
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Original:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures  at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
Revised:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures or landscapes at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
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Original:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures  at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
Revised:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures at a small scale, rather than a head or other object painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
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Original:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures  at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size , and that are painted very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
Revised:  The term is especially used of paintings that show full-length figures at a small scale, as opposed to say a head painted nearly life-size . Such paintings are done very precisely, with a great degree of "finish".
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Original: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet,  a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
Revised: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onward, wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet, a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
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Original: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet,  a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
Revised: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep these paintings in a cabinet, a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
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Original: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet,  a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
Revised: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet, which was a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
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Original: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet,  a relatively small and private room (often very small indeed, even in a very large house) , to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
Revised: Rubens from Metropolitan New York From the fifteenth century onwards wealthy collectors of art would keep such paintings in a cabinet, a relatively small and private room (often very small even in large houses) to which only those with whom they were on especially intimate terms would be admitted.
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Original:  Other small  precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, small sculptures and so on, might also be  in the room.
Revised:  Other small and precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, small sculptures and so on, might also be in the room.
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Original:  Other small  precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, small sculptures and so on, might also be  in the room.
Revised:  Other small precious objects, including miniature paintings, "curiosities" of all sorts (see cabinet of curiosities), old master prints, books, small sculptures and so on, might also be displayed in the room.
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Original:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna  who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
Revised:  There is an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
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Original:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna  who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
Revised:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes . The leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
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Original:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna  who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
Revised:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna , who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
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Original:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna  who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many only in small scale.
Revised:  There was an equivalent type of small sculpture, usually bronzes , of which the leading exponent in the late Renaissance was Giambologna who produced sizeable editions of reduced versions of his large works, and also made many exclusively in small scale.
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Original:  Backcrossed hybrids are sometimes described with acronym "BC" , for example, an F1 hybrid crossed with one of its parents (or a genetically similar individual) can be termed a BC1 hybrid, and a further cross of the BC1 hybrid to the same parent (or a genetically similar individual) produces a BC2 hybrid.
Revised:  Backcrossed hybrids are sometimes described with acronym "BC" ; for example, an F1 hybrid crossed with one of its parents (or a genetically similar individual) can be termed a BC1 hybrid, and a further cross of the BC1 hybrid to the same parent (or a genetically similar individual) produces a BC2 hybrid.
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages It works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits . It is more restricted for recessive traits In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits . In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits In practice, sections of genome from the nonrecurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them . For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
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Original:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits  In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them  For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of ‘alien’
Revised:  Disadvantages Works poorly for quantitative traits Is more restricted for recessive traits In practice, sections of genome from the non-recurrent parents are often still present and can have unwanted traits associated with them For very wide crosses, limited recombination may maintain thousands of "alien"
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Original:  genes within the elite cultivar  Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar  which can take many years  Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
Revised:  genes within the elite cultivar . Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar which can take many years Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
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Original:  genes within the elite cultivar  Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar  which can take many years  Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
Revised:  genes within the elite cultivar Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar , which can take many years Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
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Original:  genes within the elite cultivar  Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar  which can take many years  Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
Revised:  genes within the elite cultivar Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar which can take many years . Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
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Original:  genes within the elite cultivar  Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar  which can take many years  Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, they produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
Revised:  genes within the elite cultivar Many backcrosses are required to produce a new cultivar which can take many years Again, the pure tall (TT) and pure dwarf (tt) pea plants when crossed in the parental generation, produce all heterozygote (Tt) tall pea plants in the first filial generation.
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Original:  In this case, the filial generation formed after the back cross may have a phenotype ratio of 1:1 if the cross is made with recessive parent or else all offspring may be having phenotype of dominant trait if back cross is with parent having dominant trait.
Revised:  In this case, the filial generation formed after the back cross may have a phenotype ratio of 1:1 if the cross is made with recessive parent or else all offspring may be having phenotype of dominant trait if the backcross is with a parent having the dominant trait.
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Original:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
Revised:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, the term inbred backcross line (IBL ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
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Original:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
Revised:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to a line (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
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Original:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
Revised:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. population ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
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Original:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of introgression lines ).
Revised:  Artificially recombinant lines In plants, inbred backcross lines (IBLs ) refers to lines (i.e. populations ) of plants derived from the repeated backcrossing of a line with artificially recombinant DNA with the wild type, operating some kind of selection that can be phenotypical or through a molecular marker (for the production of an introgression line ).
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Original:  With each successive backcross, there is an increase in the percentage of C57B/6J DNA that constitutes the genome of the offspring  . Backcrossing may be deliberately employed in animals to transfer a desirable trait in an animal of inferior genetic background to an animal of preferable genetic background.
Revised:  With each successive backcross, the percentage of C57B/6J DNA that constitutes the genome of the offspring . Backcrossing may be deliberately employed in animals to transfer a desirable trait in an animal of inferior genetic background to an animal of preferable genetic background.
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Original:  With each successive backcross, there is an increase in the percentage of C57B/6J DNA that constitutes the genome of the offspring  . Backcrossing may be deliberately employed in animals to transfer a desirable trait in an animal of inferior genetic background to an animal of preferable genetic background.
Revised:  With each successive backcross, there is an increase in the percentage of C57B/6J DNA that constitutes the genome of the offspring is increased . Backcrossing may be deliberately employed in animals to transfer a desirable trait in an animal of inferior genetic background to an animal of preferable genetic background.
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Original:  In gene knockout experiments in particular, where the knockout is performed on easily cultured stem cell lines, but is required in an animal with a different genetic background, the knockout animal is backcrossed against the animal of the required genetic background.
Revised:  In gene-knockout experiments in particular, where the knockout is performed on easily cultured stem cell lines, but is required in an animal with a different genetic background, the knockout animal is backcrossed against the animal of the required genetic background.
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Original:  The result, after sufficient reiterations, is an animal with the desired trait in the desired genetic background, with the percentage of genetic material from the original stem cells reduced to a minimum ( in the order of 0.01\%).
Revised:  The result, after sufficient reiterations, is an animal with the desired trait in the desired genetic background, with the percentage of genetic material from the original stem cells reduced to a minimum ( on the order of 0.01\%).
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Original:  Due to the nature of meiosis, in which chromosomes derived from each parent are randomly shuffled and assigned to each nascent gamete, the percentage of genetic material deriving from either cell-line will vary between offspring of a single crossing  but will have an expected value.
Revised:  Due to the nature of meiosis, in which chromosomes derived from each parent are randomly shuffled and assigned to each nascent gamete, the percentage of genetic material deriving from either cell line varies between offspring of a single crossing but will have an expected value.
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Original:  Due to the nature of meiosis, in which chromosomes derived from each parent are randomly shuffled and assigned to each nascent gamete, the percentage of genetic material deriving from either cell-line will vary between offspring of a single crossing  but will have an expected value.
Revised:  Due to the nature of meiosis, in which chromosomes derived from each parent are randomly shuffled and assigned to each nascent gamete, the percentage of genetic material deriving from either cell-line will vary between offspring of a single crossing , but will have an expected value.
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Original:  For example, the commonly used " TM3, Sb " balancer is a balancer chromosome that stabilizes the third chromosome and carries a mutant Sb ("stubble") gene as a  marker.
Revised:  For example, the commonly used " TM3, Sb " balancer is a balancer chromosome that stabilizes the third chromosome and carries a mutant Sb ("stubble") gene as a dominant marker.
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