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Original:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards  group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
Revised:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards group-level optimum (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
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Original:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards  group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
Revised:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards group-level optima (group-level selection), implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
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Original:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards  group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
Revised:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the "criticality hypothesis", appears in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
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Original:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards  group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not a reasonable mechanism in fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
Revised:  However, open questions about URLanization mechanisms in animal groups remain: Evolutionary adaptation towards group-level optima (group-level selection), often implicitly assumed in the criticality hypothesis, is in general not reasonable for fission-fusion groups composed of non-related individuals.
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Original:  Furthermore, previous theoretical work relies on non-spatial models, which ignore potentially important spatial URLanization effects. Here, using a generic, spatially-explicit model of schooling prey being attacked by a predator, we show first that schools operating at criticality perform best.
Revised:  Furthermore, previous theoretical work relies on non-spatial models, which ignore potentially important URLanization and spatial sorting effects. Using a generic, spatially-explicit model of schooling prey being attacked by a predator, we show first that schools operating at criticality perform best.
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Original:  Our results show that in collective behavior spatio-temporal dynamics are important , and that individual-level selection does not in general provide a robust proximate mechanism in support of the ``criticality hypothesis'' in animal groups .
Revised:  Our results demonstrate the decisive role of spatio-temporal phenomena in collective behavior spatio-temporal dynamics are important , and that individual-level selection does not in general provide a robust proximate mechanism in support of the ``criticality hypothesis'' in animal groups .
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Original: Background: Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with  quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the levels of related mortality.
Revised: Background: Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the levels of related mortality.
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Original:  Moreover, not all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population are detected (laboratory diagnosed). The aim of this paper is to examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the percent of detected cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the different regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the percent of detected cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the different regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  The aim of this paper is to examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the percent of detected cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the different regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  The aim of this paper is to examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the different regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  The aim of this paper is to examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the percent of detected cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the different regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  The aim of this paper is to examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the percent of detected cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  Methods: Lower case-fatality ratio ( i.e. the ratio between the number of deaths from COVID-19 and the number of diagnosed casesof SARS-COV-2 infection ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection.
Revised:  Methods: Lower case-fatality ratio ( CFR, the proportion of deaths among all detected COVID-19 and the number of diagnosed casesof SARS-COV-2 infection ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection.
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Original:  Methods: Lower case-fatality ratio ( i.e. the ratio between the number of deaths from COVID-19 and the number of diagnosed casesof SARS-COV-2 infection ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection.
Revised:  Methods: Lower case-fatality ratio ( i.e. the ratio between the number of deaths from COVID-19 cases ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection.
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Original:  We used data from the Russian Federal Service for Surveillance on Consumer Rights Protection and Human Wellbeing (Rospotrebnadzor) on the number of detected cases and the number of deaths from COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in different regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  We used data from the Russian Federal Service for Surveillance on Consumer Rights Protection and Human Wellbeing (Rospotrebnadzor) on the number of detected cases and the number of deaths from COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in the 85 regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19  in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep 6 , 2020 is 0.69 (0.56,0.79).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep 6 , 2020 is 0.69 (0.56,0.79).
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19  in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep 6 , 2020 is 0.69 (0.56,0.79).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in different regions of the Russian Federation is 0.68 (0.55,0.78). The region with both the highest COVID-19 mortality rate per 100 , 2020 is 0.69 (0.56,0.79).
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19  in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep 6 , 2020 is 0.69 (0.56,0.79).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep 6 , 000 and the highest CFR (lowest detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection) is the city of St. Petersburg.
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Original:  Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 0.0118 for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 6 , 2020 [3]) ought to increase testing for SARS-CoV-2 in order to mitigate the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and diminish the related mortality.
Revised:  Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 6 , 2020 [3]) ought to increase testing for SARS-CoV-2 in order to mitigate the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and diminish the related mortality.
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Original:  Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 0.0118 for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 6 , 2020 [3]) ought to increase testing for SARS-CoV-2 in order to mitigate the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and diminish the related mortality.
Revised:  Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 0.0118 for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [3]) ought to increase testing for SARS-CoV-2 in order to mitigate the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and diminish the related mortality.
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Original: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the  levels of related mortality.
Revised: Relevance : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the levels of related mortality.
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Original: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the  levels of related mortality.
Revised: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the levels of related mortality.
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Original: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the  levels of related mortality.
Revised: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of the levels of related mortality.
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Original: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the  levels of related mortality.
Revised: Background : Laboratory diagnosis of the novel coronavirus (SARS-CoV-2) infection combined with tracing/ quarantine for contacts of infected individuals affects the spread of SARS-CoV-2 and the SARS-CoV-2 infection and levels of related mortality.
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Original:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of  SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
Revised:  Moreover, not all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
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Original:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of  SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
Revised:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of the SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
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Original:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of  SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
Revised:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population are detected (laboratory diagnosed). For example, in the city of St. Petersburg, where mortality rate for COVID-19 is the highest in the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
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Original:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of  SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation .
Revised:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the Russian Federation .
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Original:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of  SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation . Methods: Lower case-fatality ratio ( CFR, the proportion of deaths among all detected COVID-19 cases ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection .
Revised:  Here, we examine the relation between detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (i.e. the proportion of detected COVID-19 cases among all cases of SARS-CoV-2 infection in the population ) and levels of mortality from COVID-19 for the 85 regions of the Russian Federation on Oct. 1, 2020, every death for COVID-19 corresponds to 14.7 detected cases of COVID-19 in the population, while the corresponding number for the whole of Russia is 56.7, suggesting limited detection of mild/moderate cases of COVID-19 in St. Petersburg. Methods: More active testing for SARS-CoV-2 results in lower case-fatality ratio ( CFR, the proportion of deaths among all detected COVID-19 cases ) corresponds to higher detectability of the SARS-COV-2 infection .
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Original:  We used data from the Russian Federal Service for Surveillance on Consumer Rights Protection and Human Wellbeing (Rospotrebnadzor) on the number of detected cases and the number of deaths from COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in the 85 regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  We used data on COVID-19 cases and deaths to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in the 85 regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  We used data from the Russian Federal Service for Surveillance on Consumer Rights Protection and Human Wellbeing (Rospotrebnadzor) on the number of detected cases and the number of deaths from COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in the 85 regions of the Russian Federation.
Revised:  We used data from the Russian Federal Service for Surveillance on Consumer Rights Protection and Human Wellbeing (Rospotrebnadzor) on the number of detected cases and the number of deaths from COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation to examine the correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in different regions of the Russian Federation.
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation  is 0.68 ( 0.55 ,0.78).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 in different regions of the Russian Federation is 0.68 ( 0.55 ,0.78).
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation  is 0.68 ( 0.55 ,0.78).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation on Oct. 1, 2020 is 0.68 ( 0.55 ,0.78).
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Original:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation  is 0.68 ( 0.55 ,0.78).
Revised:  Results: The correlation between case-fatality ratios and rates of mortality for COVID-19 per 100,000 on Sep. 17, 2020 in different regions of the Russian Federation is 0.68 ( 0.54 ,0.78).
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Original:  Petersburg . Conclusions: Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Petersburg , detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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Original:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is relatively low, while rates of mortality for COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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Original:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 are relatively high. Conclusions: Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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Original:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of the SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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Original:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which the case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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Original:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of  SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which  case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio in different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
Revised:  Detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection is one of the factors that affects levels of mortality from COVID-19 . Regions of the Russian Federation with relatively low detectability of SARS-CoV-2 infection (e.g. those regions for which case-fatality ratio is below the median value of 1.2\% for the case-fatality ratio for COVID-19 in the different regions of the Russian Federation on Sep. 17 , 2020 [ 3 ])
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