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Original: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
Revised: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians . While average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
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Original: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
Revised: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, incidence of obesity, alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
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Original: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
Revised: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, and sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
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Original: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections , are on the increase.
Revised: The Australian Institute of Health and Welfare (AIHW) conference, held in Canberra, Australia, received mixed messages on Tuesday about the health of Australians - while average life expectancy is 81.4 years, second only to Japan's 82.2, and rates of cancer, heart disease and stroke are dropping, obesity and alcohol-related diseases, as well as sexually transmitted infections are on the increase.
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Original:  Australian Aborigines and Torres Strait Islanders have a life expectancy around 17 years lower than the general populace, and in at least four states 71\% of Aboriginals who died were aged under 65 years , compared with 21\% for the rest of the population.
Revised:  Australian Aborigines and Torres Strait Islanders have a life expectancy around 17 years lower than the general populace, and in at least four states 71\% of Aboriginals who died were under 65-years old , compared with 21\% for the rest of the population.
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Original:  While obesity is a growing concern in Australia, AIHW director Penny Allbon expressed skepticism over a recent report from the Baker IDI Heart and Diabetes Institute that claimed that Australia had overtaken the United States as the "fattest" nation in the world  with "over four million adult Australians [...] currently obese" , expressing concern that the institute's sample from 100 locations across the country may not be representative of the whole population.
Revised:  While obesity is a growing concern in Australia, AIHW director Penny Allbon expressed skepticism over a recent report from the Baker IDI Heart and Diabetes Institute that claimed that Australia had overtaken the United States as the "fattest" nation in the world , with "over four million adult Australians [...] currently obese" , expressing concern that the institute's sample from 100 locations across the country may not be representative of the whole population.
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Original:  While obesity is a growing concern in Australia, AIHW director Penny Allbon expressed skepticism over a recent report from the Baker IDI Heart and Diabetes Institute that claimed that Australia had overtaken the United States as the "fattest" nation in the world  with "over four million adult Australians [...] currently obese" , expressing concern that the institute's sample from 100 locations across the country may not be representative of the whole population.
Revised:  While obesity is a growing concern in Australia, AIHW director Penny Allbon expressed skepticism over a recent report from the Baker IDI Heart and Diabetes Institute that claimed that Australia had overtaken the United States as the "fattest" nation in the world with "over four million adult Australians [...] currently obese" . Allben commented that the institute's sample from 100 locations across the country may not be representative of the whole population.
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Original:  "In rank order, the greatest improvements can be achieved through reductions in tobacco smoking, high blood pressure, overweight/obesity, physical inactivity, high blood cholesterol and excessive alcohol consumption," according to Dr  Allbon.
Revised:  "In rank order, the greatest improvements can be achieved through reductions in tobacco smoking, high blood pressure, overweight/obesity, physical inactivity, high blood cholesterol and excessive alcohol consumption," according to Dr . Allbon.
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Original: Former South African President Nelson Mandela South Africa's former president Nelson Mandela will turn 90 on July 18, but despite his retirement from the public eye five years ago, his age  never prevented him from being pushed back into the limelight.
Revised: Former South African President Nelson Mandela South Africa's former president Nelson Mandela will turn 90 on July 18, but despite his retirement from the public eye five years ago, his age has never prevented him from being pushed back into the limelight.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former United States President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro , former James Bond actor Pierce Brosnan were among the world's stars to join Mandela in the British capital.
Revised:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former United States President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro and former James Bond actor Pierce Brosnan were among the world's stars to join Mandela in the British capital.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former United States President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro , former James Bond actor Pierce Brosnan were among the world's stars to join Mandela in the British capital.
Revised:  British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former United States President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro , former James Bond actor Pierce Brosnan were among the stars joining Mandela in the British capital.
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Original:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe and labeled him as a "tragic failure of leadership." Mandela expressed his sadness over the political and economic chaos that now rocks South Africa's biggest neighbor to its north west .
Revised:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe , labeling him a "tragic failure of leadership." Mandela expressed his sadness over the political and economic chaos that now rocks South Africa's biggest neighbor to its north west .
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Original:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe and labeled him as a "tragic failure of leadership." Mandela expressed his sadness over the political and economic chaos that now rocks South Africa's biggest neighbor to its north west .
Revised:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe and labeled him as a "tragic failure of leadership." Mandela expressed his sadness over the political and economic chaos that now rocks South Africa's biggest neighbor , to its north-west .
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Original: Should Wikinews add this technical solution? - Amgine / talk 05:40, 4 May 2005 (UTC) When a user selects 'compare versions' on the history page, the resulting diff page should show at the top the comment field(s) associated with the page diff.
Revised: Should Wikinews add this technical solution? - / talk 05:40, 4 May 2005 (UTC) When a user selects 'compare versions' on the history page, the resulting diff page should show at the top the comment field(s) associated with the page diff.
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Original: Should Wikinews add this technical solution? - Amgine / talk 05:40, 4 May 2005 (UTC) When a user selects 'compare versions' on the history page, the resulting diff page should show at the top the comment field(s) associated with the page diff.
Revised: Should Wikinews add this technical solution? - Amgine / 05:40, 4 May 2005 (UTC) When a user selects 'compare versions' on the history page, the resulting diff page should show at the top the comment field(s) associated with the page diff.
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Original:  So, I'm not sure what is being asked here. - Amgine / talk 23:12, 14 May 2005 (UTC) I guess they are, I never noticed it before, thanks.
Revised:  So, I'm not sure what is being asked here. - / talk 23:12, 14 May 2005 (UTC) I guess they are, I never noticed it before, thanks.
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Original:  So, I'm not sure what is being asked here. - Amgine / talk 23:12, 14 May 2005 (UTC) I guess they are, I never noticed it before, thanks.
Revised:  So, I'm not sure what is being asked here. - Amgine / 23:12, 14 May 2005 (UTC) I guess they are, I never noticed it before, thanks.
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Original:  There are a couple Mediawiki feature requests which may be related to this, especially Bug 522, so this may be added to the system at some point. - Amgine / talk 16:44, 18 May 2005 (UTC) For me, I really like all of the layouts.
Revised:  There are a couple Mediawiki feature requests which may be related to this, especially Bug 522, so this may be added to the system at some point. - / talk 16:44, 18 May 2005 (UTC) For me, I really like all of the layouts.
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Original:  There are a couple Mediawiki feature requests which may be related to this, especially Bug 522, so this may be added to the system at some point. - Amgine / talk 16:44, 18 May 2005 (UTC) For me, I really like all of the layouts.
Revised:  There are a couple Mediawiki feature requests which may be related to this, especially Bug 522, so this may be added to the system at some point. - Amgine / 16:44, 18 May 2005 (UTC) For me, I really like all of the layouts.
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Original:  And thanks again for pushing forward with main page layouts! - Amgine / talk 00:40, 9 May 2005 (UTC) You should add this to the design contest I'd like to add that Sandbox two doesn't use DPl for the latest news left hand column, but instead uses the {{LatestNews}} currently used in the Main Page.
Revised:  And thanks again for pushing forward with main page layouts! - / talk 00:40, 9 May 2005 (UTC) You should add this to the design contest I'd like to add that Sandbox two doesn't use DPl for the latest news left hand column, but instead uses the {{LatestNews}} currently used in the Main Page.
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Original:  And thanks again for pushing forward with main page layouts! - Amgine / talk 00:40, 9 May 2005 (UTC) You should add this to the design contest I'd like to add that Sandbox two doesn't use DPl for the latest news left hand column, but instead uses the {{LatestNews}} currently used in the Main Page.
Revised:  And thanks again for pushing forward with main page layouts! - Amgine / 00:40, 9 May 2005 (UTC) You should add this to the design contest I'd like to add that Sandbox two doesn't use DPl for the latest news left hand column, but instead uses the {{LatestNews}} currently used in the Main Page.
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Original:  making it significantly more difficult for people who do not wish to use the new system. - Amgine / talk 21:21, 23 Jun 2005 (UTC) MediaWiki upgrade Well, we're running on MediaWiki 1.5 beta 1, and the DPL still works.
Revised:  making it significantly more difficult for people who do not wish to use the new system. - / talk 21:21, 23 Jun 2005 (UTC) MediaWiki upgrade Well, we're running on MediaWiki 1.5 beta 1, and the DPL still works.
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Original:  making it significantly more difficult for people who do not wish to use the new system. - Amgine / talk 21:21, 23 Jun 2005 (UTC) MediaWiki upgrade Well, we're running on MediaWiki 1.5 beta 1, and the DPL still works.
Revised:  making it significantly more difficult for people who do not wish to use the new system. - Amgine / 21:21, 23 Jun 2005 (UTC) MediaWiki upgrade Well, we're running on MediaWiki 1.5 beta 1, and the DPL still works.
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Original:  Amgine / talk NGerda: There are many other issues involved in modifying the main page to use DPL, as has been a running discussion on Talk:Main Page since the inception of Wikinews.
Revised:  / talk NGerda: There are many other issues involved in modifying the main page to use DPL, as has been a running discussion on Talk:Main Page since the inception of Wikinews.
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Original:  Amgine / talk NGerda: There are many other issues involved in modifying the main page to use DPL, as has been a running discussion on Talk:Main Page since the inception of Wikinews.
Revised:  Amgine / NGerda: There are many other issues involved in modifying the main page to use DPL, as has been a running discussion on Talk:Main Page since the inception of Wikinews.
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Original:  That said, there are still considerations for ease of integration to be made. - Amgine / talk 27 June 2005 21:45 (UTC) There are two primary reasons I oppose the automation process under the current proposal: There is no way to create the initial article link using an automated process.
Revised:  That said, there are still considerations for ease of integration to be made. - / talk 27 June 2005 21:45 (UTC) There are two primary reasons I oppose the automation process under the current proposal: There is no way to create the initial article link using an automated process.
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Original:  That said, there are still considerations for ease of integration to be made. - Amgine / talk 27 June 2005 21:45 (UTC) There are two primary reasons I oppose the automation process under the current proposal: There is no way to create the initial article link using an automated process.
Revised:  That said, there are still considerations for ease of integration to be made. - Amgine / 27 June 2005 21:45 (UTC) There are two primary reasons I oppose the automation process under the current proposal: There is no way to create the initial article link using an automated process.
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Original:  These are not my only objections to the proposed system, but I do not see how these can be overcome. - Amgine / talk 28 June 2005 06:52 (UTC) I think that Developing Stories etc should continue to be manual, but that the listing of published stories should be converted to automatic.
Revised:  These are not my only objections to the proposed system, but I do not see how these can be overcome. - / talk 28 June 2005 06:52 (UTC) I think that Developing Stories etc should continue to be manual, but that the listing of published stories should be converted to automatic.
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Original:  These are not my only objections to the proposed system, but I do not see how these can be overcome. - Amgine / talk 28 June 2005 06:52 (UTC) I think that Developing Stories etc should continue to be manual, but that the listing of published stories should be converted to automatic.
Revised:  These are not my only objections to the proposed system, but I do not see how these can be overcome. - Amgine / 28 June 2005 06:52 (UTC) I think that Developing Stories etc should continue to be manual, but that the listing of published stories should be converted to automatic.
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Original:  Amgine / talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (UTC) As I have explained to you in other venues, it is my opinion that there should be no requirement to use this system in order for an article to be listed on the developing stories template on the main page.
Revised:  / talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (UTC) As I have explained to you in other venues, it is my opinion that there should be no requirement to use this system in order for an article to be listed on the developing stories template on the main page.
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Original:  Amgine / talk 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (UTC) As I have explained to you in other venues, it is my opinion that there should be no requirement to use this system in order for an article to be listed on the developing stories template on the main page.
Revised:  Amgine / 28 June 2005 07:00 (UTC) Ok. So let's change the Wikinews:YYYY/Month/DD pages to have the DPL, as NGerda has been using them, and then talk about automating other parts after the dust settles? -- IlyaHaykinson 28 June 2005 07:04 (UTC) As I have explained to you in other venues, it is my opinion that there should be no requirement to use this system in order for an article to be listed on the developing stories template on the main page.
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Original:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
Revised:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
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Original:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
Revised:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
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Original:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
Revised:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
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Original:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
Revised:  Inclusivity is one of the standards of Wiki. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 00:03 (UTC) Until there is some consensus on this proposal, could we avoid changing the template to avoid edit/revert wars? - Amgine / 29 June 2005 00:28 (UTC) I would prefer not running both systems in parallel, as you describe it, for the simple reason that the main page will regularly carry duplicate links to articles in the Developing stories template.
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Original:  But I'm not interested in edit warring about it at this moment. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 09:21 (UTC) I've discovered one minor drawback to using exclusively DPL for the daily archives: the mediawiki software flags all the articles as orphans since nothing links to the articles.
Revised:  But I'm not interested in edit warring about it at this moment. - / talk 29 June 2005 09:21 (UTC) I've discovered one minor drawback to using exclusively DPL for the daily archives: the mediawiki software flags all the articles as orphans since nothing links to the articles.
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Original:  But I'm not interested in edit warring about it at this moment. - Amgine / talk 29 June 2005 09:21 (UTC) I've discovered one minor drawback to using exclusively DPL for the daily archives: the mediawiki software flags all the articles as orphans since nothing links to the articles.
Revised:  But I'm not interested in edit warring about it at this moment. - Amgine / 29 June 2005 09:21 (UTC) I've discovered one minor drawback to using exclusively DPL for the daily archives: the mediawiki software flags all the articles as orphans since nothing links to the articles.
Edit intent: fluency