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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% It was Carlock who encouraged Grandin to develop her idea to build her hug box (referred to as a  " squeeze machine" by Grandin) when she returned from her aunt's farm in Arizona in her senior year of high school. At the age of 18 when she was still attending Mountain Country School, with Carlock's assistance Grandin built the hug box. Carlock's supportive role in Grandin's life continued even after she left Mountain Country School.For example, when Grandin was facing criticism for her hug box at Franklin Pierce College, it was Carlock who suggested that Grandin undertake scientific experiments to evaluate the efficacy of the device. It was his constant guidance to Grandin to refocus the rigid obsessions she experienced with the hug box into a productive assignment, that subsequently, allowed this study undertaken by Grandin to be widely cited as evidence of Grandin's resourcefulness.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% It was Carlock who encouraged Grandin to develop her idea to build her hug box (referred to as a " Her parents opposed the doctor's recommendation to send her to an institution, and placed her into private schools.1From there, she pursued higher education until she got her Ph.D for animal science at ASU.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Autism spectrum Steve Silberman, in his book NeuroTribes, wrote that Temple Grandin helped break down years of shame and stigma because she was one of the first adults to publicly disclose that she was autistic.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Steve Silberman, in his book NeuroTribes, wrote that Temple Grandin helped break down years of shame and stigma because she was one of the first adults to publicly disclose that she was autistic.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Autism spectrum Steve Silberman, in his book NeuroTribes, wrote that Temple Grandin helped break down years of shame and stigma because she was one of the first adults to publicly disclose that she was autistic. Bernard Rimland, a father of a son with autism and author of the book Infantile Autism, wrote the foreword to Grandin's first book Emergence: Labeled Autistic. Her book was published in 1986. Rimland wrote "Temple's ability to convey to the reader her innermost feelings and fears, coupled with her capacity for explaining mental processes will give the reader an insight into autism that very few have been able to achieve."
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In her later book, Thinking in Pictures, published in 1995, the neurologist Oliver Sacks wrote at the end of the foreword that the book provided "a bridge between our world and hers, and allows us to glimpse into a quite other sort of mind. " In her early writings, Grandin characterized herself as a recovered autistic and , in his foreword, Bernard Rimland used the term recovered autistic individual.
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Original:  " In her early writings, Grandin characterized herself as a recovered autistic and , in his foreword, Bernard Rimland used the term recovered autistic individual. In her later writings she has abandoned this characterization. Steve Silberman wrote, "It became obvious to her, however, that she was not recovered but had learned with great effort to adapt to the social norms of the people around her."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When her book Thinking in Pictures was written in 1995, Grandin thought that all individuals with autism thought in photographic-specific images the way she did.
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Original:  Steve Silberman wrote, "It became obvious to her, however, that she was not recovered but had learned with great effort to adapt to the social norms of the people around her."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% When her book Thinking in Pictures was written in 1995, Grandin thought that all individuals with autism thought in photographic-specific images the way she did. By the time the expanded edition was published in 2006, she had realized that it had been wrong to presume that every person with autism processed information in the same way she did. In the 2006 edition, she wrote that there were three types of specialized thinking. They were: 1. Visual Thinkers like she is, who think in photographically-specific images. 2. Music and Math Thinkers – who think in patterns and may be good at mathematics, chess, and programming computers. 3. Verbal Logic Thinkers – who think in word details, and she noted that their favorite subject may be history.
Revised:  Steve Silberman wrote, "It became obvious to her, however, that she was not recovered but had learned with great effort to adapt to the social norms of the people around her."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  In one of her later books, The Autistic Brain: Thinking Across the Spectrum, the concept of three different types of thinking by autistic individuals is expanded. This book was published in 2013. An influential book that helped her to develop her concept of pattern thinking was Clara Claiborne Park's book entitled Exiting Nirvana: A Daughter's Life with Autism. It was published in 2001. The Autistic Brain also contains an extensive review of scientific studies that provide evidence that object-visual thinking is different from spatial-visualization abilities.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin became well-known beyond the American autistic community, after being described by Oliver Sacks in the title narrative of his book An Anthropologist on Mars (1995), for which he won a Polk Award. The title is derived from Grandin's characterization of how she feels around neurotypical people . In the mid-1980s Grandin first spoke in public about autism at the request of Ruth C. Sullivan, one of the founders of the Autism Society of America (ASA). Sullivan writes: Based on personal experience, Grandin advocates early intervention to address autism and supportive teachers, who can direct fixations of the child with autism in fruitful directions.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Based on personal experience, Grandin advocates early intervention to address autism and supportive teachers, who can direct fixations of the child with autism in fruitful directions.
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Original:  Sullivan writes: Based on personal experience, Grandin advocates early intervention to address autism and supportive teachers, who can direct fixations of the child with autism in fruitful directions. She has described her hypersensitivity to noise and other sensory stimuli. She says words are her second language and that she thinks "totally in pictures", using her vast visual memory to translate information into a mental slideshow of images that may be manipulated or correlated. Grandin attributes her success as a humane livestock facility designer to her ability to recall detail, which is a characteristic of her visual memory. Grandin compares her memory to full-length movies in her head, that may be replayed at will, allowing her to notice  small details.
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Original:  Grandin compares her memory to full-length movies in her head, that may be replayed at will, allowing her to notice  small details.
Revised:  Grandin compares her memory to full-length movies in her head, that may be replayed at will, allowing her to notice Designing livestock handling facilities She wanted animals to not see or fear the handling and moving process that going on in these meat plants, and decided to design a better way to help see this through. Grandin was inspired and related to the concepts behind what livestock go through in the early stages of handling. These traditional facilities would create loud noises as well as make these animals frightened and stressed in their last moments. Many people with autism are hypersensitive to touch and sound, and fixate on one thing or small details.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Handling livestock In 1980 Grandin published her first two scientific articles on beef cattle behavior during handling: " Livestock Behavior as Related to Handling Facilities Design " in the International Journal for the Study of Animal Problems, Vol. 1, pp. 33–52 and "Observations of Cattle Behavior Applied to the Design of Cattle Handling Facilities", Applied Animal Ethology, Vol. 6, pp. 19–31.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Her new design changes the shape where livestock are held in place, so these animals do not see what's in front of them. This helps eliminate the fear and " Livestock Behavior as Related to Handling Facilities Design " in the International Journal for the Study of Animal Problems, Vol. 1, pp. 33–52 and "Observations of Cattle Behavior Applied to the Design of Cattle Handling Facilities", Applied Animal Ethology, Vol. 6, pp. 19–31.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Handling livestock In 1980 Grandin published her first two scientific articles on beef cattle behavior during handling: " Livestock Behavior as Related to Handling Facilities Design " in the International Journal for the Study of Animal Problems, Vol. 1, pp. 33–52 and "Observations of Cattle Behavior Applied to the Design of Cattle Handling Facilities", Applied Animal Ethology, Vol. 6, pp. 19–31.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Handling livestock In 1980 Grandin published her first two scientific articles on beef cattle behavior during handling: " threat " in the International Journal for the Study of Animal Problems, Vol. 1, pp. 33–52 and "Observations of Cattle Behavior Applied to the Design of Cattle Handling Facilities", Applied Animal Ethology, Vol. 6, pp. 19–31.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Handling livestock In 1980 Grandin published her first two scientific articles on beef cattle behavior during handling: " Livestock Behavior as Related to Handling Facilities Design " in the International Journal for the Study of Animal Problems, Vol. 1, pp. 33–52 and "Observations of Cattle Behavior Applied to the Design of Cattle Handling Facilities", Applied Animal Ethology, Vol. 6, pp. 19–31. She was one of the first scientists to report that animals are sensitive to visual distractions in handling facilities such as shadows, dangling chains, and other environmental details that most people do not notice. When she was awarded her Ph.D. at the University of Illinois, she studied the effects of environmental enrichment on pigs. The title of her dissertation was "Effect of Rearing Environment and Environmental Enrichment on the Behavior and Neural Development in Young Pigs". Grandin expanded her theories in her book, Animals Make Us Human.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Handling livestock In 1980 Grandin published her first two scientific articles on beef cattle behavior during handling: " Livestock Behavior as Related to Handling Facilities Design " 
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Original:  In 1993, she edited the first edition of Livestock Handling and Transport. Grandinwrote three chapters and included chapters from contributors from around the world . Subsequent editions of the book were published in 2000 , 2007, and 2014.
Revised:  animals see while being stuck in these chutes. Grandin's facilities are placed all around the world . Subsequent editions of the book were published in 2000 , 2007, and 2014.
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Original:  Grandinwrote three chapters and included chapters from contributors from around the world . Subsequent editions of the book were published in 2000 , 2007, and 2014. In her academic work as a professor at Colorado State University, her graduate student, Bridgett Voisinet, conducted one of the early studies that demonstrated that cattle who remained calm during handling, had higher weight gains. In 1997, when the paper was published, this was a new concept. The paper is entitled, " Feedlot Cattle with Calm Temperaments Have Higher Average Daily Gains Than Cattle with Excitable Temperaments", published in The Journal of Animal Science, Vol. 75, pp. 892–896.
Revised:  Grandinwrote three chapters and included chapters from contributors from around the world . Subsequent editions of the book were published in 2000 , curved chutes, and race systems " Feedlot Cattle with Calm Temperaments Have Higher Average Daily Gains Than Cattle with Excitable Temperaments", published in The Journal of Animal Science, Vol. 75, pp. 892–896.
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Original:  Another important paper published by Grandin was, " Assessment of Stress During Handling and Transport", Journal of Animal Science, 1997, Vol. 75, pp. 249-257.
Revised:  Impact on today's society With the help of her new innovations, people have learned better ways,"to reduce stress on their animals while handing. " Assessment of Stress During Handling and Transport", Journal of Animal Science, 1997, Vol. 75, pp. 249-257.
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Original:  Another important paper published by Grandin was, " Assessment of Stress During Handling and Transport", Journal of Animal Science, 1997, Vol. 75, pp. 249-257. This paper presented the concept that an animal's previous experiences with handling could have an effect on how it will react to being handled in the future, as a new concept in the animal-handling industry.
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Original:  A major piece of equipment that Grandin developed was a center track (double rail) conveyor restrainer systemfor holding cattle during stunning at large beef slaughtering plants. The first system was installed in the mid-1980s for calves and a system for large beef cattle was developed in 1990. This equipment is now being used by many large meat companies. It is described in "Double Rail Restrainer Conveyor for Livestock Handling", first published in the Journal of Agricultural Engineering Research, Vol. 4, pp. 327–338 in 1988, and "Transferring results of behavioral research to industry to improve animal welfare on the farm, ranch, and slaughter plant", Applied Animal Behavior Science, Vol. 8, pp. 215–228, published in 2003.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin also developed an objective, numerical scoring system for assessing animal welfare at slaughtering plants. The use of this scoring system resulted in significant improvements in animal stunning and handling during slaughter. This work is described in "Objective scoring of animal handling and stunning practices in slaughter plants", Journal of the American Veterinary Medical Association, Vol. 212, pp. 3–39, "The feasibility of using vocalization scoring as an indicator of poor welfare during slaughter", Applied Animal Behavior Science, Vol. 56, pp. 121–128, and "Effect of animal welfare audits of slaughter plants by a major fast food company on cattle handling and stunning practices", Journal of the American Veterinary Medical Association, Vol. 216, pp. 848–851.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Other scientific contributions Grandin is the author or co-author of more than 60 peer-reviewed scientific papers on a variety of other animal behavior subjects. Some of the other subjects are: the effect of hair whorl position on cattle behavior, the influence of stress prior to slaughter upon meat quality, religious slaughter, mothering behavior of beef cows, cattle temperament, and causes of bruising.
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Original:  Animal welfare Grandin has lectured widely about her first-hand experiences of the anxiety of feeling threatened by everything in her surroundings, and of being dismissed and feared,which motivates her work in humane livestock handling processes. She studied the behavior of cattle, how they react to ranchers, movements, objects, and light. Grandin then designed curved corrals she adapted with the intention of reducing stress , panic, and injury in animals being led to slaughter. This has proved to be a further point of criticism and controversy among animal activists who have questioned the congruence of a career built on animal slaughter alongside Grandin's claims of compassion and respect for animals .
Revised:  2Dr.Grandin created a scoring system for handling livestock from her intensive research. Through its results and success, many corporations utilize this system to accomplish the same goals as her .
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% One of her notable essays about animal welfare is, "Animals Are Not Things", in which she posits that technically, animals are property in society, but the law ultimately gives them ethical protections or rights. She compares the properties and rights of owning cattle, versus owning screwdrivers, enumerating how both may be used to serve human purposes in many ways, but when it comes to inflicting pain, there is a vital distinction between such "properties", because legally, a person can smash or grind up a screwdriver, but cannot torture an animal .
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Continuance Her innovation of new handling facilities for livestock has revolutionized the meat industry .
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Original:   Her insight into the minds of cattle has taught her to value the changes in details to which animals are particularly sensitive and to use her visualization skills to design thoughtful and humane animal-handling equipment.
Revised:  This innovation as well as her other systems, previously stated, are in still in use till today. Until somebody else improves her work and designs, it won't be transformed into something else.4 Her insight into the minds of cattle has taught her to value the changes in details to which animals are particularly sensitive and to use her visualization skills to design thoughtful and humane animal-handling equipment.
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Original:  In 2012, when the American beef industrywas struggling with public perception of its use and sale of pink slime, Grandin spoke out in support of the food product. She said, "It should be on the market. It should be labeled. We should not be throwing away that much beef."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin's work has attracted the attention of philosophers interested in the moral status of animals.
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Original:  We should not be throwing away that much beef."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin's work has attracted the attention of philosophers interested in the moral status of animals. One view found in the academic literature is that Grandin's method of slaughter is a significant positive development for animals, but her attempts to formulate a moral defense of meat-eating have been less successful.Andy Lamey, "The Animal Ethics of Temple Grandin: A Protectionist Analysis," The Journal Of Agricultural and Environmental Ethics, Vol. 32 Issue 1, 2019. Open access version at URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Personal life Temple Grandin at TED in February 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin says that "the part of other people that has emotional relationships is not part of me", and she has neither married nor had children.
Revised:  We should not be throwing away that much beef."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Personal life Temple Grandin at TED in February 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin says that "the part of other people that has emotional relationships is not part of me", and she has neither married nor had children.
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Original:  Open access version at URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Personal life Temple Grandin at TED in February 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin says that "the part of other people that has emotional relationships is not part of me", and she has neither married nor had children.
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Original:  Open access version at URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Personal life Temple Grandin at TED in February 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Grandin says that "the part of other people that has emotional relationships is not part of me", and she has neither married nor had children. She later stated, for example, that she preferred the science fiction, documentary, and thriller genre of films and television shows to more dramatic or romantic ones. Beyond her work in animal science and welfare and autism rights, her interests include horseback riding, science fiction, movies, and biochemistry.
Revised:  Open access version at URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Personal life Temple Grandin at TED in February 2010%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% She has noted in her autobiographical works that autism affects every aspect of her life. Grandin has to wear comfortable clothes to counteract her sensory processing disorder and has structured her lifestyle to avoid sensory overload. She regularly takes antidepressants, but no longer uses a squeeze-box (hug machine), the device she invented at the age of 18 as a form of stress relief therapy, stating in February 2010 that: "It broke two years ago, and I never got around to fixing it . I'm into hugging people now."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors In 2010, Grandin was named in the Time 100 list of the one hundred most influential people in the world, in the "Heroes" category.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors In 2010, Grandin was named in the Time 100 list of the one hundred most influential people in the world, in the "Heroes" category.
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Original:  She regularly takes antidepressants, but no longer uses a squeeze-box (hug machine), the device she invented at the age of 18 as a form of stress relief therapy, stating in February 2010 that: "It broke two years ago, and I never got around to fixing it . I'm into hugging people now."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Honors In 2010, Grandin was named in the Time 100 list of the one hundred most influential people in the world, in the "Heroes" category. In 2011, she received a Double Helix Medal. She has received honorary degrees from many universities including McGill University in Canada (1999), and the Swedish University of Agricultural Sciences (2009), Carnegie Mellon University in the United States (2012), and Emory University (2016). In 2015, she was named an honorary fellow of the Society for Technical Communication.
Revised:  She regularly takes antidepressants, but no longer uses a squeeze-box (hug machine), the device she invented at the age of 18 as a form of stress relief therapy, stating in February 2010 that: "It broke two years ago, and I never got around to fixing it . I'm into hugging people now."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 2012, she was inducted into the Hall of Great Westerners of the National Cowboy%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Western Heritage Museum.
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