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Original:  This visit resulted in a formal apology by General Secretary Kim Jong-il and the official return of the abductees based in North Korea to Japanese soil. Additionally, the Japanese government made their first statement of apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens during their colonial rule between 1910-1945.
Revised:  This visit resulted in a formal apology by General Secretary Kim Jong-il and the return of known victims. The Japanese government made their first statement of apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens during their colonial rule between 1910-1945.
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Original:  Additionally, the Japanese government made their first statement of apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens during their colonial rule between 1910-1945.
Revised:  Additionally, the Japanese government made its first apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens during their colonial rule between 1910-1945.
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Original:  Additionally, the Japanese government made their first statement of apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens during their colonial rule between 1910-1945. Through this meeting the details of the declaration were discussed and agendas set.
Revised:  Additionally, the Japanese government made their first statement of apology to the North Korean government and their predecessors for the turmoil and suffering endured by their citizens from 1910 until 1945.
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Original:  This would only be introduced after bilateral diplomatic relations were normalised and the abductees were returned. Stated by the Japanese Government there were approximately thirteen Japanese citizens abducted under predecessor Kim Jong Il ’s reign, following the agreement five of these abductees were acknowledged and returned.
Revised:  This would only be introduced after bilateral diplomatic relations were normalized and abductees returned. Japan believed there were approximately thirteen Japanese citizens abducted under predecessor Kim Jong Il ’s reign, following the agreement five of these abductees were acknowledged and returned.
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Original:  Through this pledge, North Korea agreed to extend its moratorium on their missile testingwhich was becoming an international issue and threat of warfare. In correspondence with this there is a mutual responsibility of neutralising and maintaining positive relations without the involvement of the United States. This was a large factor within the declarations and played a key role in maintaining positive relations.
Revised:  Through this pledge, North Korea agreed to extend its moratorium on missile testing.
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Original:  There were two main agendas that mutually benefited both parties, with North Korea ’s need for economic assistance and the possibility of long-term loans outweighed the interest of nuclear progression, therefore they signed. With the agreement of nuclear progression indefinitely ceasing the declaration created mutually benefited parties with an equal level of compromise. The declaration included mutual cessation of military hostility in areas on confrontation, agreed to actively promote south-north environment cooperation, strengthen cooperation in the areas of prevention of future epidemics and the public health system through providing safety measures in which was equally available for the entirety of the population and mainly to find a form of resolution of separated families.
Revised:  North Korea missile testing
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Original:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006  North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
Revised:  2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006 North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
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Original:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006  North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
Revised:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang announced production of nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006 North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
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Original:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006  North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
Revised:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and Japan responded by voiding its pledge of food aid . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006 North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
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Original:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006  North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
Revised:  North Korea Missile Testing 2005 In 2005, Pyongyang declared they were producing nuclear weapons and thus the food aid pledged by the prime minister Junichiro Koizumi of Japan led to the suspension of this pledge . 2006 North Korea Ballistic Missile launch 2006 In January 2006 , North Korean leader Kim Jong-un announced the indefinite suspension of all missile testing and nuclear programs.
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Original:  However, in July 2006  North Korea launched long-range missiles  leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
Revised:  However, in July 2006 , North Korea launched long-range missiles leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
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Original:  However, in July 2006  North Korea launched long-range missiles  leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
Revised:  However, in July 2006 North Korea launched long-range missiles , leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
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Original:  However, in July 2006  North Korea launched long-range missiles  leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
Revised:  However, in July 2006 North Korea launched long-range missiles leading to the United Nations and affiliates passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
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Original:  However, in July 2006  North Korea launched long-range missiles  leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear programme including the US government dismantling their oil delivery alliance.
Revised:  However, in July 2006 North Korea launched long-range missiles leading to the United Nations and their affiliations passing a worldwide resolution ordering the state to dismantle their nuclear program. The United States agreed to suspend its oil delivery alliance.
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Original:  There was another announcement of a secondary nuclear test by the North Korean government with an approximate earthquake magnitude of 4.5 in their north east Kilju country. The president of the United States Barack Obama following the nuclear launch stated: North Korea is directly and recklessly challenging the international community.
Revised:  There was another announcement of a secondary nuclear test by the North Korean government with an approximate earthquake magnitude of 4.5 in Kilju County. Later, American President Barack Obama declared that North Korea is directly and recklessly challenging the international community.
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Original:  The diplomatic relations and meetings with incentives with the United States, Russia, Japan and China led to a conclusive moratorium by the DPRK state on all missile launches and nuclear programming for further aid including food.
Revised:  Diplomatic relations and meetings with incentives with the United States, Russia, Japan and China led to a conclusive moratorium by the DPRK state on all missile launches and nuclear programming for further aid including food.
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Original:  North Korea carried out a nuclear testing in February 2013 with rocket launches and violated the security of UN resolutionsin both 2014 and 2015 through short-fire rocket launches and short-range projectiles of North Korea’s east-coast.
Revised:  North Korea carried out rocket-launch nuclear tests in February 2013 with rocket launches and violated the security of UN resolutionsin both 2014 and 2015 through short-fire rocket launches and short-range projectiles of North Korea’s east-coast.
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Original:  North Korea carried out a nuclear testing in February 2013 with rocket launches and violated the security of UN resolutionsin both 2014 and 2015 through short-fire rocket launches and short-range projectiles of North Korea’s east-coast. Despite the goodwill attempt from The US states and South Korea towards the North Korean Regime through postponing their respective drills and pledging humanitarian assistance the North Korean government has had minimal motivation to reinstate diplomacy.
Revised:  North Korea carried out a nuclear testing in February 2013 , violating UN resolutions.
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Original:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
Revised:  Following a three year hiatus, North Korea announced its sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
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Original:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
Revised:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test . This led to six-party talks with North Korea's participation . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
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Original:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
Revised:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current developments Diplomatic relations between North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
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Original:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
Revised:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan are neutral; sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
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Original:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang declaration being upheld by the two parties.
Revised:  Following a three year hiatus, the government of DPRK announced they were carrying out their sixth nuclear test leading to further six party talks which North Koreare-joined . Current Developments North Korea and Japan current diplomatic relations are neutralwith sections of the Pyongyang Declaration have been upheld by the two parties.
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Original:  Due to the continuity of the Nuclear programme in North Korea, the United States introduced financial sanctions . Following these financial sanctions’ North Korea reintroduced provocations in July 2006 through firing ballistic missiles. Following an additional nuclear test conducted by North Korea and an initiation of negotiations between Japan and North Korea. In order to help the tense relations between Japan and North Korea, the United States government interceded by removing Pyongyang from its list of state sponsors of terror as a move of good faith on behalf of North Korea as they played a key role in the deteriorating relationship between the two respective countries. Following the death of Kim Jong Il, his successor supreme leader Kim Jong Un took over relations. The first initial two years under Kim Jong Un’s ( 2011-2013) reign there were hostile relations between the two countries, in particular Japan condemning their satellite launch.
Revised:  The United States has introduced economic sanctions because of North Korea's ongoing nuclear program. In July 2006, North Korea contentiously fired ballistic missiles.
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Original:  A Japanese and North Korean consultation occurred in May 2014, titled the Stockholm agreement due to the location of the meeting. Following this meeting, negotiations officially reached an agreement where Kim Jong Un and the North Korean government dedicated a special investigation committee on the remaining abductees.
Revised:  A Japanese and North Korean consultation occurred in May 2014, Japan and North Korea instigated the Stockholm Agreement. Kim Jong-un and the North Korean government dedicated a special investigation committee on the remaining abductees.
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Original:  Currently under Kim Jong Un, North Korea missile testing and nuclear programs have expanded at a rapid rate and leaving the bilateral negotiations created under King Jong Il at a stall. Whilst there are discussions for a comprehensive solution to finalise the abduction, nuclear and missile issues negotiations are currently still underway between the two respective countries.This is a particular issue as Chairman Kim Jong-un has stated that they will continue launches and nuclear testing indefinitely. In response, the Japanese Government will maintain the sanctions they currently hold on the DPRK’s economic assistance.
Revised:  Currently under Kim Jong Un, North Korea missile testing and nuclear programs , stalling the diplomatic measures created under Kim Jong-il.
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Original:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
Revised:  In 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
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Original:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
Revised:  Recently, in 2019 , North Korea staged a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
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Original:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
Revised:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing . This led to a January summit which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
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Original:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong Un announcing the separation of the “unilaterally bound” Pyongyang declaration including the nuclear test moratorium .
Revised:  Recently, in 2019 North Korea re-started Nuclear testing with a series of short-range missile testing leading to the January Summit Meeting which resulted in Kim Jong-un canceling the Pyongyang Declaration .
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Original:  This statement coincided with the trend that North Korea was meeting with representatives of the six-party countries from 2018 while excluding the Japanese representatives. This motion was deemed an olive branch by the Japanese government to the North Korean government as their main concern is to have a face-to-face meeting with current Chairman Kim Jong-un to establish an agreement on the remaining abducteeswho North Korea have announced are deceased or never entered the country, as Prime Minister Shinzo Abe has stated:
Revised:  human rights record. This motion was deemed an olive branch by the Japanese government to the North Korean government as their main concern is to have a face-to-face meeting with current Chairman Kim Jong-un to establish an agreement on the remaining abducteeswho North Korea have announced are deceased or never entered the country, as Prime Minister Shinzo Abe has stated:
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Original:  This motion was deemed an olive branch by the Japanese government to the North Korean government as their main concern is to have a face-to-face meeting with current Chairman Kim Jong-un to establish an agreement on the remaining abducteeswho North Korea have announced are deceased or never entered the country, as Prime Minister Shinzo Abe has stated:
Revised:  This motion was deemed an olive branch by Japan to North Korea for the sake of establishing an agreement regarding remaining abductees. Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe has stated:
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Original:  This motion was deemed an olive branch by the Japanese government to the North Korean government as their main concern is to have a face-to-face meeting with current Chairman Kim Jong-un to establish an agreement on the remaining abducteeswho North Korea have announced are deceased or never entered the country, as Prime Minister Shinzo Abe has stated:
Revised:  This motion was deemed an olive branch by the Japanese government to the North Korean government as their main concern is to have a face-to-face meeting with current Chairman Kim Jong-un to establish an agreement on the remaining abducteeswho North Korea have announced are deceased or never entered the country, as Prime Minister Shinzo Abe stated:
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Original:  In order to resolve this abductions ’ issue, we should not miss out on any single opportunity and I, myself, have to meet face-to-face with Chairman Kim Jong Un, and meet with him without attaching any conditions.
Revised:  In order to resolve this abductions issue, we should not miss out on any single opportunity and I, myself, have to meet face-to-face with Chairman Kim Jong Un, and meet with him without attaching any conditions.
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Original:  In order to resolve this abductions ’ issue, we should not miss out on any single opportunity and I, myself, have to meet face-to-face with Chairman Kim Jong Un, and meet with him without attaching any conditions.
Revised:  In order to resolve this abductions ’ issue, we should not miss out any single opportunity and I, myself, have to meet face-to-face with Chairman Kim Jong Un, and meet with him without attaching any conditions.
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Original: Shinzo Abe, May 6, 2019. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As there have been steps taken to reignite diplomatic relations between the two respective parties there is the potential for further summit meetings to create a unilateral relationship which benefits both parties.
Revised: Shinzo Abe, May 6, 2019. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  American Journal of Psychiatry . 137(5) : 535–544. doi:10.1176/ajp.137.5.535. . approach to mental health and wellbeing that comprises healthy environments, responsive parenting, belonging, healthy activities, coping,  resilience and treatment of illness.
Revised:  American Journal of Psychiatry , 137(5) : 535–544. doi:10.1176/ajp.137.5.535. . approach to mental health and wellbeing that comprises healthy environments, responsive parenting, belonging, healthy activities, coping, resilience and treatment of illness.
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