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Original:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of Hurricane Katrina , was ordered back to Washington and relieved of his duties in the Gulf States .
Revised:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of , was ordered back to Washington and relieved of his duties in the Gulf States .
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Original:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of Hurricane Katrina , was ordered back to Washington and relieved of his duties in the Gulf States .
Revised:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of Hurricane Katrina , was ordered back to and relieved of his duties in the Gulf States .
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Original:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of Hurricane Katrina , was ordered back to Washington and relieved of his duties in the Gulf States .
Revised:  however, Mr. Brown will continue as the Director of FEMA. Mr. Brown, who came under intense pressure for government failures to provide timely assistance to disaster victims of Hurricane Katrina , was ordered back to Washington and relieved of his duties in the .
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Original:  Michael Chertoff Mr. Brown, who was hailed last week by President Bush , "Brownie, you're doing a heck of a job," was nominated by Bush himself to head FEMA in 2003.
Revised:  Michael Chertoff Mr. Brown, who was hailed last week by , "Brownie, you're doing a heck of a job," was nominated by Bush himself to head FEMA in 2003.
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Original:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of Edmond , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor ” at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by TIME magazine two days ago.
Revised:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor ” at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by TIME magazine two days ago.
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Original:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of Edmond , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor ” at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by TIME magazine two days ago.
Revised:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of Edmond , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor " at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by TIME magazine two days ago.
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Original:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of Edmond , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor ” at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by TIME magazine two days ago.
Revised:  Recent allegations that credentials Brown listed on his resume prior to employment at FEMA, which began in 2001, that said he worked in emergency services for the city of Edmond , OK from 1975 to 1978, along with being awarded "Outstanding Political Science Professor ” at the Central State University in Oklahoma, both have come under fire in a report by magazine two days ago.
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Original:  When commenting about Mr. Brown last Friday, Senator Mary L. Landrieu , who spent more than a week in the hurricane struck area, said "I have been telling him from the moment he arrived about the urgency of the situation" and "I just have to tell you that he had a difficult time understanding the enormity of the task before us."
Revised:  When commenting about Mr. Brown last Friday, Senator , who spent more than a week in the hurricane struck area, said "I have been telling him from the moment he arrived about the urgency of the situation" and "I just have to tell you that he had a difficult time understanding the enormity of the task before us."
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Original: A story about a man carrying over 30,000 (sometimes reported as 40,000) volts of static electricity in his body, allegedly generated by a wool sweater and nylon jacket combination, is circulating through major news outlets.
Revised: A story about a man carrying over 30,000 (sometimes reported as 40,000) of in his body, allegedly generated by a wool sweater and nylon jacket combination, is circulating through major news outlets.
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Original:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington , involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings where he had left his mark, before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
Revised:  The story, carried first by the Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington , involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings where he had left his mark, before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
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Original:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington , involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings where he had left his mark, before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
Revised:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from , involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings where he had left his mark, before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
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Original:  Several unanswered objections mark the story as a possible hoax: Clewer enters and exits his car several times in the story - if he opened the car by touching its presumably metal lock, he would surely release some electricity into the car through his hand;
Revised:  Several unanswered objections mark the story as a possible hoax: Clewer enters and exits his car several times in the story — if he opened the car by touching its presumably metal lock, he would surely release some electricity into the car through his hand;
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Original:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage multimeter around to measure the current and voltage ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
Revised:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage around to measure the current and voltage ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
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Original:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage multimeter around to measure the current and voltage ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
Revised:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage multimeter around to measure the and ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
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Original:  This statement: "Firefighters took possession of Clewer's jacket and stored it in the courtyard of the fire station, where it continued to give off a strong electrical current ." (Reuters UK) First, there is no reason they would need to take possession of the jacket - the static electricity could be dealt with by simply dumping water on it.
Revised:  This statement: "Firefighters took possession of Clewer's jacket and stored it in the courtyard of the fire station, where it continued to give off a strong electrical ." (Reuters UK) First, there is no reason they would need to take possession of the jacket - the static electricity could be dealt with by simply dumping water on it.
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Original:  This statement: "Firefighters took possession of Clewer's jacket and stored it in the courtyard of the fire station, where it continued to give off a strong electrical current ." (Reuters UK) First, there is no reason they would need to take possession of the jacket - the static electricity could be dealt with by simply dumping water on it.
Revised:  This statement: "Firefighters took possession of Clewer's jacket and stored it in the courtyard of the fire station, where it continued to give off a strong electrical current ." (Reuters UK) First, there is no reason they would need to take possession of the jacket — the static electricity could be dealt with by simply dumping water on it.
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Original:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 microfarad , this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic, although a spark could ignite flammable vapor or gas.
Revised:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 , this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic, although a spark could ignite flammable vapor or gas.
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Original:  The first shaking took place at 00:37 local time (03:37 UTC), which according to the University of Chile Seismological Service had a 4.7 magnitude in the Richter scale.
Revised:  The first shaking took place at 00:37 local time (03:37 UTC), which according to the had a 4.7 magnitude in the Richter scale.
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , O'Higgins, Maule, and Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , , , , , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , Talca, , , , and . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan ,  O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó ,  Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to Radio Cooperativa . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
Revised:  This movement was felt across the Valparaíso, Santiago Metropolitan , O'Higgins, Maule, and Bío Bío Regions, in cities such as Valparaíso, Viña del Mar, Santiago Centro, San Fernando, Curicó , Talca, Constitución, Talcahuano, Cauquenes, and Concepción . Chile's National System of Tsunami Alerts ruled out the possibility of a tsunami, according to . "In Rancagua, it all was really shake-y,"
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Original:  "[It was felt] very strong[ly] here in Santa Cruz , in addition of being noisy, it was as strong as the [February] earthquake!," Agustín Toro Reyes said.
Revised:  "[It was felt] very strong[ly] here in , in addition of being noisy, it was as strong as the [February] earthquake!," Agustín Toro Reyes said.
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Original:  Jinx Arjona ... drift away from Chile!," Ro Fernandez said on Pichilemu's page, referring to ONEMI's late response after the February 27 earthquake and Ricardo Arjona's announcement to visit Chile.
Revised:  Jinx ... drift away from Chile!," Ro Fernandez said on Pichilemu's page, referring to ONEMI's late response after the February 27 earthquake and Ricardo Arjona's announcement to visit Chile.
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Original:  The United States Geological Survey , however, reported that the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.4, and that it occurred at a depth of 35 kilometers, 60 kilometers northwest of Curicó, Maule Region.
Revised:  The , however, reported that the earthquake had a magnitude of 5.4, and that it occurred at a depth of 35 kilometers, 60 kilometers northwest of Curicó, Maule Region.
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Original:  Edmund King, current president of the AA, has stated: "In the past week, we have seen the average price of petrol shoot up 1.7p a litre across the UK and diesel rise 1.61p.
Revised:  Edmund King, current president of the AA, stated: "In the past week, we have seen the average price of petrol shoot up 1.7p a litre across the UK and diesel rise 1.61p.
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Original:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its  peak of 133.25p , achieved in July 2008. Diesel is currently 14.21p more expensive than it was one yearago .
Revised:  At 125.73p a litre on average, diesel motor fuel is approximately eight pence lower than its peak of 133.25p ; It remains 14.21p more expensive than it was one yearago .
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Original:  Adrian Tink, a motoring strategist for the RAC, believes that the latter should be called off . He commented : "It's unbelievable to think that, compared with this time last year, petrol is 13p a litre more expensive.
Revised:  Adrian Tink, a motoring strategist for the RAC, believes that the latter should be called off : "It's unbelievable to think that, compared with this time last year, petrol is 13p a litre more expensive.
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Original: Rugby Park  , Kilmarnock, Scotland In the Scottish Premier League (SPL), Kilmarnock F.C. defeated Hibernian F.C. 2-1 on Saturday.
Revised: w|Rugby Park , Kilmarnock, Scotland In the Scottish Premier League (SPL), Kilmarnock F.C. defeated Hibernian F.C. 2-1 on Saturday.
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Original: Rugby Park  , Kilmarnock, Scotland In the Scottish Premier League (SPL), Kilmarnock F.C. defeated Hibernian F.C. 2-1 on Saturday.
Revised: Rugby Park , , Kilmarnock, Scotland In the Scottish Premier League (SPL), Kilmarnock F.C. defeated Hibernian F.C. 2-1 on Saturday.
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Original:  In the second half of the match on the snow-covered field, Derek Riordan scored one goal for his team Hibernian at 55 minutes, which was also his 100th career goal for the team.
Revised:  In the second half of the match on the snow-covered field, scored one goal for his team Hibernian at 55 minutes, which was also his 100th career goal for the team.
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Original:  Colin Calderwood , the Hibernian manager, said of the match "[w]e've always got to be aware that [Kilmarnock] have got something to protect and we've got nothing to lose", in an interview available on the BBC Sport website.
Revised:  , the Hibernian manager, said of the match "[w]e've always got to be aware that [Kilmarnock] have got something to protect and we've got nothing to lose", in an interview available on the BBC Sport website.
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Original:  Colin Calderwood , the Hibernian manager, said of the match "[w]e've always got to be aware that [Kilmarnock] have got something to protect and we've got nothing to lose", in an interview available on the BBC Sport website.
Revised:  Colin Calderwood , the Hibernian manager, said of the match "[w]e've always got to be aware that [Kilmarnock] have got something to protect and we've got nothing to lose", in an interview available on the website.
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Original: Some 8,400 complaints have been made to the BBC and 374 complaints have been received by Ofcom , a British media regulator, after soap opera EastEnders broadcasted what BBC News Online described as the "cot death storyline".
Revised: Some 8,400 complaints have been made to the BBC and 374 complaints have been received by , a British media regulator, after soap opera EastEnders broadcasted what BBC News Online described as the "cot death storyline".
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Original: Some 8,400 complaints have been made to the BBC and 374 complaints have been received by Ofcom , a British media regulator, after soap opera EastEnders broadcasted what BBC News Online described as the "cot death storyline".
Revised: Some 8,400 complaints have been made to the BBC and 374 complaints have been received by Ofcom , a British media regulator, after soap opera broadcasted what described as the "cot death storyline".
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Original:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
Revised:  The storyline involves character – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
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Original:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
Revised:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
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Original:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
Revised:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
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Original:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, Alfie and Kat Moon 's recently born son.
Revised:  The storyline involves character Ronnie Branning – portrayed by Samantha Womack – taking her baby, who experienced sudden infant death syndrome (SIDS), and exchanging for another living baby, and 's recently born son.
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