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Original:  With the emergence of queer theory around the 1980s and the 1990s and the questioning of the heteronormativity and the gender binary , this kind of domination is not only described in terms of sex or gender (the predominance of men over woman, or the masculine over the feminine)  but also in terms of sexuality (the heteronormativity, or the heterosexuality above other sexual orientations and the cisgender over other identities).
Revised:  With the emergence of queer theory around the 1980s and the 1990s and the questioning of the heteronormativity and the gender binary , this kind of domination is not only described in terms of sex or gender (the predominance of men over woman, or the masculine over the feminine) but also in terms of sexuality (the heteronormativity, or heterosexuality above other sexual orientations and the cisgender over other identities).
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Original:  The term heteropatriarchy has evolved from the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy'  to emphasize the formation of a man dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
Revised:  The term heteropatriarchy is said to have evolved from what is described as the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy' to emphasize the formation of a man dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
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Original:  The term heteropatriarchy has evolved from the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy'  to emphasize the formation of a man dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
Revised:  The term heteropatriarchy has evolved from the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy' in order to emphasize the formation of a man dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
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Original:  The term heteropatriarchy has evolved from the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy'  to emphasize the formation of a man dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
Revised:  The term heteropatriarchy has evolved from the previous, less specific term 'patriarchy' to emphasize the formation of a male-dominated society based upon the cultural processes of sexism or heterosexism.
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Original:  Background history Since ancient times, heteropatriarchy has shaped the way how societies across the world have viewed masculinity and femininity . This societal system has had negative effects on societies , which have beat the test of time and are still apparent in modern days.
Revised:  Background history Since ancient times, heteropatriarchy has shaped the way how societies across the world have viewed masculinity and femininity and that this societal system has had negative effects on societies , which have beat the test of time and are still apparent in modern days.
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Original:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek  sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the  sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
Revised:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars is thought to demonstrate how the Greek sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
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Original:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek  sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the  sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
Revised:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek gender/ sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
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Original:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek  sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the  sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
Revised:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek sex system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
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Original:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek  sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the  sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
Revised:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the gender/ sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
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Original:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek  sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the  sex /gender conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
Revised:  Synthesizing the work of such scholars , this Section will show how the Greek sex /gender system, as mediated through Roman imperialism, gave rise to the sex conceptions that birthed contemporary arrangements.
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Original:  Another cause that has led to heteropatriarchy is heteropaternalism, where it's the premise where heteropatriarchy is established in a domestic arrangement  . Meaning that the father of a house is the leader and center power of a family household, and is in charge of any social arrangements.
Revised:  In a premise where heteropatriarchy is established in a domestic arrangement . Meaning that the father of a house is the leader and center power of a family household, and is in charge of any social arrangements.
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Original:  Another cause that has led to heteropatriarchy is heteropaternalism, where it's the premise where heteropatriarchy is established in a domestic arrangement  . Meaning that the father of a house is the leader and center power of a family household, and is in charge of any social arrangements.
Revised:  Another cause that has led to heteropatriarchy is heteropaternalism, where it's the premise where heteropatriarchy is established in a domestic arrangement , heteropaternalism is identified as another cause that has led to heteropatriarchy . Meaning that the father of a house is the leader and center power of a family household, and is in charge of any social arrangements.
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Original:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly defines the perspective of patriarchy that make up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable .
Revised:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly define the perspective of patriarchy that make up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable .
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Original:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly defines the perspective of patriarchy that make up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable .
Revised:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly defines the perspective of patriarchy that makes up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable .
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Original:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly defines the perspective of patriarchy that make up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable . While women in the other hand  are perceived as lower class and weak .
Revised:  Even though heteropatriarchy and heteropaternalism mainly defines the perspective of patriarchy that make up a mindset in people's eye that male gender is seen as strong, facetious, and capable while on the other hand are perceived as lower class and weak .
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Original: “Decolonizing Feminism: Challenging Connections between Settler Colonialism and Heteropatriarchy” Academia.edu - Share Research, 2013 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This ideology has been promoted through colonization and spreading of Eurocentric culture, reaching hegemony around the world and removing other gender systems as well as other ways of understanding society, genders or eroticism.
Revised: “Decolonizing Feminism: Challenging Connections between Settler Colonialism and Heteropatriarchy” Academia.edu - Share Research, 2013 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% the concept asserts that this ideology has been promoted through colonization and spreading of Eurocentric culture, reaching hegemony around the world and removing other gender systems as well as other ways of understanding society, genders or eroticism.
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Original: “Decolonizing Feminism: Challenging Connections between Settler Colonialism and Heteropatriarchy” Academia.edu - Share Research, 2013 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This ideology has been promoted through colonization and spreading of Eurocentric culture, reaching hegemony around the world and removing other gender systems as well as other ways of understanding society, genders or eroticism.
Revised: “Decolonizing Feminism: Challenging Connections between Settler Colonialism and Heteropatriarchy” Academia.edu - Share Research, 2013 %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% This ideology has been promoted through colonization and spreading of Eurocentric culture, reaching hegemony around the world and removing other gender systems as well as other ways of understanding society, gender, or eroticism.
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Original:  Relevance One of the main foundations of heteropatriarchy is the normalization of the nuclear family as the only acceptable family unit, manifesting this societal system into modern day .
Revised:  Relevance Some researchers in this field of study cite one of the main foundations of heteropatriarchy is the normalization of the nuclear family as the only acceptable family unit, manifesting this societal system into modern day .
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Original: Sociofact is a term coined by biologist Julian Huxley, used together with the related terms "mentifact " (sometimes called a psychofact) and " artifact" to describe how  cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
Revised: A cultural trait is a single identifiable material or non-material element within a culture, and is conceivable as an object in itself.Huxley, Julian S. 1955. " artifact" to describe how cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
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Original: Sociofact is a term coined by biologist Julian Huxley, used together with the related terms "mentifact " (sometimes called a psychofact) and " artifact" to describe how  cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
Revised: Sociofact is a term coined by biologist Julian Huxley, used together with the related terms "mentifact " (sometimes called a psychofact) and " Guest Editorial: Evolution, Cultural and Biological." Yearbook of Anthropology, 2–25. cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
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Original: Sociofact is a term coined by biologist Julian Huxley, used together with the related terms "mentifact " (sometimes called a psychofact) and " artifact" to describe how  cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
Revised: Sociofact is a term coined by biologist Julian Huxley, used together with the related terms "mentifact " (sometimes called a psychofact) and " artifact" to describe how Similar traits can be grouped together as components, or subsystems of URL the terms sociofact and mentifact (or psychofact) were coined by biologist Julian Huxley as two of three subsystems of culture—the third being artifacts—to describe the way in which cultural traits take on a life of their own, spanning over generations.
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Original:  Huxley, J. S. 1955. Guest Editorial: Evolution, Cultural and Biological. Yearbook of Anthropology, 2–25. For Huxley, the concept of culture contemplates artifacts, mentifacts, and sociofacts. A definition also explains that shared mentifacts, through artifacts, are called sociofacts. Sociofact also describes interpersonal interactions and social structures. This idea   has been related to memetics or the memetic concept of culture.
Revised:  In other words, cultural traits can be categorized into three interrelated components: has been related to memetics or the memetic concept of culture.
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Original:  This idea   has been related to memetics or the memetic concept of culture.
Revised:  This idea Artifacts — the objects, material items, and technologies created by a culture, or simply, things people make. They provide basic necessities, recreation, entertainment, and most of the things that make life easier for people. Examples include clothing, food, and shelter. Sociofacts — interpersonal interactions and social structures; i.e., the structures and organizations of a culture that influence social behaviour. This includes families, governments, education systems, religious groups, etc. Mentifact (or psychofact) — abstract concepts, or "things in the head;" i.e., the shared ideas, values, and beliefs of a culture. This can include religion, language, and ideas. has been related to memetics or the memetic concept of culture.
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Original:   Development   The idea of the sociofact was developed extensively by David Bidney in his  textbook Theoretical Anthropology .
Revised:  Development These concepts have been useful to anthropologists in refining the definition of culture, which Huxley views as contemplating artifacts, mentifacts, and sociofacts. For instance, Edward Tylor, the first academic anthropologist, included both artifacts and abstract concepts like kinship systems as elements of culture. Anthropologist Robert Aunger, however, explains that such an inclusive definition ends up encouraging poor anthropological practice because "it becomes difficult to distinguish what exactly is not part of culture." Aunger goes on to explain that, after the cognitive revolution in the social sciences in the 1960s, there is "considerable agreement" among anthropologists that a mentifactual analysis, one that assumes that culture consists of "things in the head" (i.e. mentifacts), is the most appropriate way to define the concept of culture. The idea of the sociofact was developed extensively by David Bidney in his textbook Theoretical Anthropology .
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Original:   Development   The idea of the sociofact was developed extensively by David Bidney in his  textbook Theoretical Anthropology . He used the term to refer to objects which consist of interactions between members of a social group.
Revised:  Development The idea of the sociofact was developed extensively by David Bidney in his textbook Theoretical Anthropology , in which he used the term to refer to objects which consist of interactions between members of a social group.
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Original:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
Revised:  For instance, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
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Original:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
Revised:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune 'Taps', semiotician of music Charles Boilès claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
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Original:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
Revised:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers ; as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
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Original:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases , and hencesymbolically as a component of military funerals.
Revised:  For instance, semiotician of music Charles Boilès, in a discussion of the semiotics of the tune "Taps", claims that although it is a single piece of music, it can be seen as three distinct musical sociofacts: as a "last call" signal in taverns frequented by soldiers , as an "end of day" signal on military bases ; and hence, symbolically, as a component of military funerals.
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Original:  From 1999 to 2002, Sagintayev served as Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Small Business Support, Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Regulation of Natural Monopolies, Protection of Competition and Support for Small Business.
Revised:  From 1999 to 2002, Sagintayev served as deputy chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Small Business Support, Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Regulation of Natural Monopolies, Protection of Competition and Support for Small Business.
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Original:  From 1999 to 2002, Sagintayev served as Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Small Business Support, Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Regulation of Natural Monopolies, Protection of Competition and Support for Small Business.
Revised:  From 1999 to 2002, Sagintayev served as Deputy Chairman of the Agency of the Republic of Kazakhstan for Small Business Support, Regulation of Natural Monopolies, Protection of Competition and Support for Small Business.
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Original:  Prime Minister  (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by  Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of PM . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
Revised:  Prime Minister of Kazakhstan (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of PM . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
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Original:  Prime Minister  (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by  Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of PM . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
Revised:  Prime Minister (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by President Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of PM . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
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Original:  Prime Minister  (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by  Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of PM . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
Revised:  Prime Minister (2016–2019) On 8 September 2016, Sagintayev was nominated by Nursultan Nazarbayev for the post of the Prime Minister . The following day, on 9 September, Sagintayev was confirmed by the Parliament.
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Original:  He    continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
Revised:  In November 2016, Sagintayev drew attention to the number of reductions in pediatricians in the country. He supported Deputy PM Imangali Tasmagambetov's initiative to restore the faculties of pediatrics in Kazakh medical universities. Sagintayev also instructed to tighten control over the activities of veterinary services and ensure the entry of cattle burial grounds and anthrax burials in the information system of the State Land Cadastre. continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
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Original:  He    continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
Revised:  He In response to inflation, he sought to prevent the continuing rise of food prices for 2017. Despite the promises, the inflation in February of that year reached 7.1\%. That same year, over 11 million square meters of housing were built. continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
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Original:  He    continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
Revised:  He Sagintayev slowly drew criticism from Nazarbayev in relation to his policies towards the self-employed population. In October 2018, Sagintayev's cabinet was eventually threatened by Nazarbayev to the point of being replaced by Singaporean and Japanese politicians. On 30 January 2019, at an enlarged meeting of the government, Nazarbayev publicly slammed Sagintayev and his ministers as "cowards". On 4 February 2019, a fire erupted in an apartment in Astana, killing 5 children whom belonged to a single family. This sparked fury and protests from the mothers who demanded proper housing, more kindergartens and financial support for families owning more than one child. Sagintayev expressed his condolences to the tragedy and told his cabinet to be more stricter in fire safety inspection at homes to prevent incidents. continued to serve as the PM until 21 February 2019 when the government was dissolved due to lack of economic development.
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Original:   Akim of Almaty (2019–present) On 28 June 2019, Sagintayev was appointed as the akim of Almaty.
Revised:  He was replaced by Askar Mamin who was appointed as Acting PM until being confirmed by the Parliament on 25 February. Akim of Almaty (2019–present) On 28 June 2019, Sagintayev was appointed as the akim of Almaty.
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Original:  On 27 November  , at the Almaty Investment Forum, Sagintayev stated the city should be at the top 100 best cities in the world in terms of quality of life and business opportunities, in which he used San Francisco as an example.
Revised:  On 27 November 2019 , at the Almaty Investment Forum, Sagintayev stated the city should be at the top 100 best cities in the world in terms of quality of life and business opportunities, in which he used San Francisco as an example.
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