Paper:
Existing multi-agent reinforcement learning (MARL) communication methods have relied on a trusted third party (TTP) to distribute reward to agents, leaving them inapplicable in peer-to-peer environments. This paper proposes reward distribution using Neuron as an Agent (NaaA) in MARL without a TTP with two key ideas: (i) inter-agent reward distribution and (ii) auction theory. Auction theory is introduced because inter-agent reward distribution is insufficient for optimization. Agents in NaaA maximize their profits (the difference between reward and cost) and, as a theoretical result, the auction mechanism is shown to have agents autonomously evaluate counterfactual returns as the values of other agents. NaaA enables representation trades in peer-to-peer environments, ultimately regarding unit in neural networks as agents. Finally, numerical experiments (a single-agent environment from OpenAI Gym and a multi-agent environment from ViZDoom) confirm that NaaA framework optimization leads to better performance in reinforcement learning.
To the best of our knowledge, no existing literature discusses reward distributions in the configuration described above. Because CommNet assumes an environment that distributes a uniform reward to all the agents, if the distributed reward is in limited supply (such as money), it causes the Tragedy of the Commons (Lloyd, 1833), where the reward of contributing agents will be reduced due to the participation of free riders. Although there are several MARL methods for distributing rewards ac-  (Agogino & Tumer, 2006;Sukhbaatar et al., 2016;Foerster et al., 2016;2017). They should suppose TTP to distribute the optimal reward to the agents. (b) Inter-agent reward distribution model (our model). Some agents receive reward from the environment directly, and redistribute to other agents. The idea to determine the optimal reward without TTP is playing auction game among the agents.
cording to agents' contribution such as QUICR (Agogino & Tumer, 2006) and COMA (Sukhbaatar et al., 2016), they suppose the existence of TTP and hence cannot be applied to the situation investigated here.
The proposed method, Neuron as an Agent (NaaA), extends CommNet to actualize reward distributions in MARL without TTP based on two key ideas: (i) inter-agent reward distribution and (ii) auction theory. Auction theory was introduced because inter-agent reward distributions were insufficient for optimization. Agents in NaaA maximize profit, the difference between their received rewards and the costs which they redistribute to other agents. If the framework is naively optimized, a trivial solution is obtained where agents reduce their costs to zero to maximize profits. Then, NaaA employs the auction theory in game design to prevent costs from dropping below their necessary level. As a theoretical result, we show that agents autonomously evaluate the counterfactual return as values of other agents. The counterfactual return is equal to the discounted cumulative sum of counterfactual reward (Agogino & Tumer, 2006) distributed by QUICR and COMA.
NaaA enables representation trades in peer-to-peer environments and, ultimately, regards neural network units as agents. As NaaA is capable of regarding units as agents without losing generality, this setting was utilized in the current study. The concept of the proposed method is illustrated in Figure 1.
An environment extending ViZDoom (Kempka et al., 2016), a POMDP environment, to MARL was used for the experiment. Two agents, a cameraman sending information and a main player defeating enemies with a gun, were placed in the environment. Results confirmed that the cameraman learned cooperative actions for sending information from dead angles (behind the main player) and outperformed CommNet in score.
Interestingly, NaaA can apply to single-and multi-agent settings, since it learns optimal topology between the units. Adaptive DropConnect (ADC), which combines DropConnect (Wan et al., 2013) (randomly masking topology) with an adaptive algorithm (which has a higher probability of pruning connections with lower counterfactual returns) was proposed as a further application for NaaA. Experimental classification and reinforcement learning task results showed ADC outperformed DropConnect.
The remainder of this paper is organized as follows. In the next section, we show the problem setting. Then, we show proposed method with two key ideas: inter-agent reward distribution and auction theory in Section 3. After related works are introduced in Section 4, the experimental results are shown in classification, single-agent RL and MARL in Section 5. Finally, a conclusion ends the paper.

Review:
This paper proposed a novel framework Neuron as an Agent (NaaA) for training neural networks to perform various machine learning tasks, including classification (supervised learning) and sequential decision making (reinforcement learning). The NaaA framework is based on the idea of treating all neural network units as self-interested agents and optimizes the neural network as a multi-agent RL problem. This paper also proposes adaptive dropconnect, which extends dropconnect (Wan et al., 2013) by using an adaptive algorithm for masking network topology.
 
This work attempts to bring several fundamental principles in game theory to solve neural network optimization problems in deep learning. Although the ideas are interest and technically sound, and the proposed algorithms are demonstrated to outperform several baselines in various machine learning tasks, there several major problems with this paper, including lacking clarity of presentation, insights and substantiations of many claims. These issues may need a significant amount of effort to fix as I will elaborate more below.
 
1. Introduction
There are several important concepts, such as reward distribution, credit assignment, which are used (from the very beginning of the paper) without explanation until the final part of the paper.
 
The motivation of the work is not very clear. There seems to be a gap between the first paragraph and the second paragraph. The authors mentioned that “From a micro perspective, the abstraction capability of each unit contribute to the return of the entire system. Therefore, we address the following questions. Will reinforcement learning work even if we consider each unit as an autonomous agent ”
Is there any citation for the claim “From a micro perspective, the abstraction capability of each unit contribute to the return of the entire system” ?  It seems to me this is a very general claim. Even RL methods with linear function approximations use abstractions.  Also, it is unclear to me why this is an interest question. Does it have anything to do with existing issues in DRL? Moreover, The definition of autonomous agent is not clear, do you mean learning agent or policy execution agent?
 
“it uses \epsilon-greedy as a policy, …” Do you mean exploration policy?
I also have some concerns regarding the claim that “We confirm that optimization with the framework of NaaA leads to better performance of RL”. Since there are only two baselines are compared to the proposed method, this claim seems too general to be true.
 
It is not clear to why the authors mention that “negative result that the return decreases if we naively consider units as agents”. What is the big picture behind this claim?
 
“The counterfactual return is that by which we extend reward …” need to be rewritten.
 
The last paragraph of introduction discussed the possible applications of the proposed methods without any substantiation, especially neither citations nor any related experiments of the authors are provided.
 
2 Related Work
 
“POSG, a class of reinforcement learning with multiple ..” -> reinforcement learning framework
 
“Another one is credit assignment. Instead of reward.. ” Two sentences are disconnected and need to be rewritten.
 
“This paper unifies both issues” sounds very weird. Do you mean “solves/considers both issues in a principled way”?
 
The introduction of GAN is very abrupt. Rather than starting from introducing those new concepts directly, it might be better to mention that the proposed method is related to many important concepts in game theory and GANs.
 
“,which we propose in a later part of this paper” -> which we propose in this paper
 
 
3. Background
 
“a function from the state and the action of an agent to the real value” -> a reward function  
 
Should provide a citation for DRQN
 
There is a big gap between the last two paragraphs of section 3.
 
4. Neuro as an agent
 
“We add the following assumption for characteristics of the v_i” -> assumptions for characterizing v_i
 
“to maximize toward maximizing its own return” -> to maximize its own return
 
We construct the framework of NaaA from the assumptions -> from these assumptions
 
“indicates that the unit gives additional value to the obtained data. …” I am not sure what this sentence means, given that \rho_ijt is not clearly defined.
 
5. Optimization
 
“NaaA assumes that all agents are not cooperative but selfish” Why? Is there any justification for such a claim?
 
 
What is the relation between \rho_jit and q_it ?
 
“A buyer which cannot receive the activation approximates x_i with …” It is unclear why a buyer need to do so given that it cannot receive the activation anyway.
 
“Q_it maximizing the equation is designated as the optimal price.” Which equation?
 
e_j and 0 are not defined in equation 8
 
 
6 Experiment
setare -> set are
 
what is the std for CartPole in table 1
 
It is hard to judge the significance of the results on the left side of figure 2. It might be better to add errorbars to those curves
 
More description should be provided to explain the reward visualization on the right side of figure 2. What reward? External/internal?
 
“Specifically, it is applicable to various methods as described below …” Related papers should be cited.