Paper:
DETECTING EGREGIOUS RESPONSES IN NEURAL SEQUENCE-TO-SEQUENCE MODELS
In this work, we attempt to answer a critical question: whether there exists some input sequence that will cause a well-trained discrete-space neural network sequence-to-sequence (seq2seq) model to generate egregious outputs (aggressive,  malicious, attacking, etc.). And if such inputs exist, how to find them efficiently. We adopt an empirical methodology, in which we first create lists of egregious output sequences, and then design a discrete optimization algorithm to find input sequences that will cause the model to generate them. Moreover, the optimization algorithm is enhanced for large vocabulary search and constrained to search for input sequences that are likely to be input by real-world users. In our experiments, we apply this approach to dialogue response generation models trained on three real-world dialogue data-sets: Ubuntu, Switchboard and OpenSubtitles, testing whether the model can generate malicious responses. We demonstrate that given the trigger inputs our algorithm finds, a significant number of malicious sentences are assigned large probability by the model, which reveals an undesirable consequence of standard seq2seq training.

Review:
This paper explores the task of finding discrete adversarial examples for (current) dialog models in a post hoc manner (i.e., once models are trained). In particular, the authors propose an optimization procedure for crafting inputs (utterances) that trigger trained dialog models to respond in an egregious manner.
This line of research is interesting as it relates to real-world problems that our models face before they can be safely deployed. The paper is easy to read, nicely written, and the proposed optimization method seems reasonable. The study also seems clear and the results are fairly robust across three datasets. It was also interesting to study datasets which, a priori, seem like they would not contain much egregious content (e.g., Ubuntu "help desk" conversations).
My main question is that after reading the paper, I'm not sure that one has an answer to the question that the authors set out to answer. In particular, are our current seq2seq models for dialogs prone to generating egregious responses? On one hand, it seems like models can assign higher-than-average probability to egregious responses. On the other, it is unclear what this means. For example, it seems like the possibility that such a model outputs such an answer in a conversation might still be very small. Quantifying this would be worthwhile.   
Further, one would imagine that a complete dialog system pipeline would contain a collection of different models including a seq2seq model but also others. In that context, is it clear that it's the role of the seq2seq model to limit egregious responses? 
A related aspect is that it would have been interesting to explore a bit more the reasons that cause the generation of such egregious responses. It is unclear how representative is the example that is detailed ("I will kill you" in Section 5.3). Are other examples using words in other contexts? Also, it seems reasonable that if one wants to avoid such answers, countermeasures (e.g., in designing the loss or in adding common sense knowledge) have to be considered.
Other comments:
- I am not sure of the value of Section 3. In particular, it seems like the presentation of the paper would be as effective if this section was summarized in a short paragraph (and perhaps detailed in an appendix).
  
- Section 3.1, "continuous relaxation of the input embedding", what does that mean since the embedding already lives in continuous space?
  
- I understand that your study only considers (when optimizing for egregious responses)) dialogs that are 1-turn long. I wonder if you could increase hit rates by crafting multiple inputs at once.
  
- In Section 4.3, you fix G (size of the word search space) to 100. Have you tried different values? Do you know if larger Gs could have an impact of reported hit metrics?
- In Table 3, results from the first column (normal, o-greedy) seem interesting. Wouldn't one expect that the model can actually generate (almost) all normal responses? Your results indicate that for Ubuntu models can only generate between 65% and 82% of actual (test) responses. Do you know what in the Ubuntu corpus leads to such a result?
  
- In Section 5.3, you seem to say that the lack of diversity of greedy-decoded sentences is related to the low performance of the "o-greedy" metric. Could this result simply be explained because the model is unlikely to generate sentences that it has never seen before? 
 You could try changing the temperature of the decoding distribution, that should improve diversity and you could then check whether or not that also increases the hit rate of the o-greedy metric.
- Perhaps tailoring the mal lists to each specific dataset would make sense (I understand that there is already some differences in between the mal lists of the different datasets but perhaps building the lists with a particular dataset in mind would yield "better" results).