Paper:
Information Theoretic Properties of Markov Random Fields, and their Algorithmic Applications
Markov random fields are a popular model for high-dimensional probability distributions. Over the years, many mathematical, statistical and algorithmic problems on them have been studied. Until recently, the only known algorithms for provably learning them relied on exhaustive search, correlation decay or various incoherence assumptions. Bresler [4] gave an algorithm for learning general Ising models on bounded degree graphs. His approach was based on a structural result about mutual information in Ising models. Here we take a more conceptual approach to proving lower bounds on the mutual information. Our proof generalizes well beyond Ising models, to arbitrary Markov random fields with higher order interactions. As an application, we obtain algorithms for learning Markov random fields on bounded degree graphs on n nodes with r-order interactions in n r time and log n sample complexity. Our algorithms also extend to various partial observation models.

Review:
The setup in Eq. 1 is unclear on a first reading. What is the
	exact meaning of r here? This is a critical constant in the
	major result proven, and not carefully defined anywhere in the
	paper. I *think* that r is the maximum clique size. This is
	particularly ambiguous because of the statement that
	theta^{i1,i2,...,il}(a1,a2,...,an) "is assumed to be zero on
	non-cliques". I've assumed the meaning of this is that, more
	precisely, that function ignores aj unless there is some value
	t such that aj=it. Then, this makes sense as a definition of a
	Markov random field with maximum clique size r. (I encourage
	clarification of this in the paper if correct, and a rebuttal
	if I have misunderstood this.)
	In any case, this is an unusual definition of an MRF in the
	NIPS community. I think the paper would have more impact if a
	more standard definition of an MRF were used in the
	introduction, and then the equivalence/conversion were just
	done in the technical part. The main result only references
	the constant r, so no need to introduce all this just to state
	the result.
	On a related note, it's worth giving a couple sentences on the
	relationship to Bresler's result. (For an Ising model, r=2,
	etc.) In particular, one part of this relationship is a bit
	unclear to me. As far as I know, Bresler's result applies to
	arbitrary Ising models, irrespective of graph structure. So,
	take an Ising model with a dense structure so that there are
	large cliques. In this case, it seems to me that the current
	paper's result will use (r-1) nodes while Bresler's will still
	use a single node-- thus in that particular case the current
	paper's result is weaker. Is this correct? (It's not a huge
	weakness even if true but worth discussing in detail since it
	could guide future work.) [EDIT: I see now that this is *not* the case, see response below]
	I also feel that the discussion of Chow-Liu is missing a very
	important aspect. Chow-Liu doesn't just correctly recover the
	true structure when run on data generated from a tree. Rather,
	Chow-Lui finds the *maximum-likelihood* tree for data from an
	*arbitrary* distribution. This is a property that almost all
	follow-up work does not satisfy (Srebro showed bounds). The
	discussion in this paper is all true, but doesn't mention that
	"maximum likelihood" or "model robustness" issue at all, which
	is hugely important in practice.
	For reference: The basic result is that given a single node $u$,
	and a hypothesized set of "separators" $S$ (neighbors of $u$) then
	there will be some set of nodes $I$ with size at most $r-1$ such
	that $u$ and $I$ have positive conditional mutual information. 
	
	The proof of the central result proceeds by setting up a
	"game", which works as follows:
	1) We pick a node $X_u$ to look at.
	2) Alice draws two joint samples $X$ and $X'$.
	3) Alice draws a random value $R$ (uniformly from the space of
	possible values of $X_u$
	4) Alice picks a random set of neighbors of $X_u$, call them $X_I$.
	5) Alice tells Bob the values of $X_I$
	6) Bob get's to wager on if $X_u=R$ or $X'_u=R$. Bob wins his
	wager if $X_u=R$ an loses his wager if $X'_u=R$ and nothing
	happens if both or neither are true.
	Here I first felt like I *must* be missing something, since
	this is just establishing that $X_u$ has mutual information
	with it's neighbors. (There is no reference to the "separator"
	set S in the main result.) However, it later appears that this
	is just a warmup (regular mutual information) and can be
	extended to the conditional setting.
	Actually, couldn't the conditional setting itself be phrased
	as a game, something like
	1) We pick a node $X_u$ and a set of hypothesized "separators"
	$X_S$ to look at.
	2) Alice draws two joint samples $X$ and $X'$ Both are
	conditioned on the some random value for $X_S$.
	3) Alice draws a random value $R$ (uniformly from the space of
	possible values of $X_u$
	4) Alice picks a random set of nodes (not including $X_u$ or $X_S$, call them $X_I$.
	5) Alice tells Bob the values of $X_I$
	6) Bob get's to wager on if $X_u=R$ or $X'_u=R$. Bob wins his
	wager if $X_u=R$ an loses his wager if $X'_u=R$ and nothing
	happens if both or neither are true.
	I don't think this adds anything to the final result, but is
	an intuition for something closer to the final goal.
	After all this, the paper discusses an algorithm for greedily
	learning an MRF graph (in sort of the obvious way, by
	exploiting the above result) There is some analysis of how
	often you might go wrong estimating mutual information from
	samples, which I appreciate.
	
	Overall, as far as I can see, the result appears to be
	true. However, I'm not sure that the purely theoretical result
	is sufficiently interesting (at NIPS) to be published with no
	experiments. As I mentioned above, Chow-Liu has the major
	advantage of finding the  maximum likelihood solution, which the current method
	does not appear to have. (It would violate hardness results
	due to Srebro.) Further, note that the bound given in Theorem
	5.1, despite the high order, is only for correctly recovering
	the structure of a single node, so there would need to be
	another lever of applying the union bound to this result with
	lower delta to get a correct full model.
EDIT AFTER REBUTTAL:
Thanks for the rebuttal. I see now that I should understand $r$ not as the maximum clique size, but rather as the maximum order of interactions. (E.g. if one has a fully-connected Ising model, you would have r=2 but the maximum clique size would be n). This answers the question I had about this being a generalization of Bressler's result. (That is, this paper's is a strict generalization.) This does slightly improve my estimation of this paper, though I thought this was a relatively small concern in any case. My more serious concerns are that a pure theoretical result is appropriate for NIPS.