Paper:
The question of whether deep neural networks are good at generalising beyond their immediate training experience is of critical importance for learning-based approaches to AI. Here, we consider tests of out-of-sample generalisation that require an agent to respond to never-seen-before instructions by manipulating and positioning objects in a 3D Unity simulated room. We first describe a comparatively generic agent architecture that exhibits strong performance on these tests. We then identify three aspects of the training regime and environment that make a significant difference to its performance: (a) the number of object/word experiences in the training set; (b) the visual invariances afforded by the agent's perspective, or frame of reference; and (c) the variety of visual input inherent in the perceptual aspect of the agent's perception. Our findings indicate that the degree of generalisation that networks exhibit can depend critically on particulars of the environment in which a given task is instantiated. They further suggest that the propensity for neural networks to generalise in systematic ways may increase if, like human children, those networks have access to many frames of richly varying, multi-modal observations as they learn.

Review:
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In my initial review, I had raised some issues with the interpretation of the results and suggested some control experiments to tighten the conclusions. The authors chose to weaken their initial claims by rephrasing their conclusions instead. I understand that there may not have been enough time to run many of the experiments I suggested, but I still think they are worth considering for the future. I'm mostly satisfied with the rephrasing of the conclusions in the revised paper, so as promised, I'm happy to increase my score and recommend acceptance. 
I spotted several typos in the revised paper, however: section 4.1: "we choose to consider negation ...", p. 5: "for for ...", a citation on p. 5 is not compiled correctly. There may be more. For the final version please make sure to go through the paper thoroughly a couple of times and fix all the typos.
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The authors present a systematic study of generalization in agents embedded in a simulated 3d environment. I think there are some interesting results in this paper that might be useful for people to know about. I appreciate the thoroughness of the experiments, in particular. I have, however, some issues with the interpretation of several of the main results. I would be happy to increase my score if we can resolve some of these issues. Here are my main concerns:
1) In the experiments in section 3, only a limited test set is used. How is the train/test split decided in these experiments? Table 6 suggests that you have a much larger repository of objects. Why not use all possible objects in the test set? It is a bit premature to declare your results as systematic generalization if you can’t show that it actually works for a much larger set of test objects (ideally for all possible objects). 
2) Section 4.1: in these experiments, the training set size is increased, but the test set size is kept constant (and small), so the train/test size ratio also increases. So, an alternative explanation of the results in this section is that the model behaves largely according to visual similarity and as the training set size is increased, it becomes easier to find a training set object that is visually similar to any test set object. I think the authors should run an experiment where both training and test set sizes increase by the same amount so that the train/test set size ratio stays constant. If the model can’t achieve systematic generalization in that case, it would be wrong to conclude, as the authors do now, that increasing the training set size itself improves systematic generalization. The correct conclusion would rather be that increasing the train/test size ratio improves generalization, which is a weaker conclusion. Please note that the results in this section are quite similar to those in Lake & Baroni (2018) and in Bahdanau et al. (2018) (see their Figure 3). Bahdanau et al. (2018), for example, also show that increasing train/test set size ratio (their “rhs/lhs” ratio) improves generalization in generic neural networks. It is interesting to note, however, that neither Lake & Baroni (2018) nor Bahdanau et al. (2018) interpret these results positively (i.e., these results don’t show systematicity), whereas the current paper seems to put a more positive spin on essentially the same result. I think these earlier results should be explicitly discussed here and the authors should justify why they are interpreting the results differently (if they are). It should also be noted that in the real world the train/test size ratio for humans is presumably very small, perhaps zero (given the compositional abilities of humans).
3) Section 4.3: I don’t think the results in this section are sufficient to establish the egocentric frame per se as the key factor. One possibility is that perhaps the frame doesn’t have to be centered on the agent, but as long as it has some systematic relationship to the agent’s location (for example, the center of the visibility window could be some distance away from the agent, and the agent itself may or may not be inside this window), that’s good enough to get generalization improvements. An even weaker possibility is that simply a moving frame is enough for improved generalization. In this case, the reference frame doesn’t even need to have a systematic relationship to the agent’s location. For example, the frame could be relative to a fictitious agent that randomly explores the environment. I think the authors should run some experiments to rule out these possibilities if they want to claim that the egocentric frame itself is responsible for generalization improvements. 
4) Section 4.4: In the experiments in this section, I think there are two relevant factors that need to be better disentangled: 1) the number and variability of image frames experienced by the two models; 2) the active perception aspect (the fact that the agent interacts with the environment and affects its own perceptual experience in one case). The authors claim the second factor as the key aspect enabling better generalization, but 1) is equally likely (this would be more in line with a standard data augmentation type result). A good control experiment here would be to not just use the first frame but a larger number of more variable frames for training the non-situated agent (for example, one can use image frames that would be seen by a camera that more or less randomly moves in front of the objects perhaps with the constraint that both objects are always at least partially visible). If the classification model generalizes as well as the situated agent in this control condition, you cannot claim active perception as the key factor.
5) As a more general point, it’s a bit frustrating to have to judge systematic generalization by only looking at the results of some limited set of experiments. How do I interpret the results if the agent achieves only 84% accuracy in some experiment (as opposed to 100%)? It would be much better if the authors could somehow more rigorously prove systematicity. Here, I don’t necessarily mean “prove” in a mathematical sense, but just analyzing the learned representations a bit more rigorously and being able to say something along the lines of: here’s exactly how the trained model represents “lift”; because of reason X, Y, Z, this representation is completely disentangled from all object representations in the dataset (and ideally from all possible object representations, because that’s really what true systematicity entails, although I highly doubt that any generic model of the type studied in this paper will be able to achieve this, regardless of the amount and type of input it receives).   
More minor issues:
6) In Table 5, “table lamp” appears both in training and test sets. Is this a typo?
7) Some results are presented in the appendix without any mention in the main text (Appendix D. 2). I think this is not a good practice in general. In the main text, please make sure to mention, however briefly, every result that appears in the appendix (something along the lines of "This result could not be explained by confound X or Y (Appendix Z)" would suffice).
8) Font size in Figure 2 is tiny (axis labels are impossible to read), please make it bigger. You don’t need that many ticks on the axes.