Paper:
Non-Convex Finite-Sum Optimization Via SCSG Methods
We develop a class of algorithms, as variants of the stochastically controlled stochastic gradient (SCSG) methods [21], for the smooth non-convex finitesum optimization problem. Assuming the smoothness of each component, the complexity of SCSG to reach a stationary point with E ∇f (x) 2 ≤ ε is O min{ε −5/3 , ε −1 n 2/3 } , which strictly outperforms the stochastic gradient descent. Moreover, SCSG is never worse than the state-of-the-art methods based on variance reduction and it significantly outperforms them when the target accuracy is low. A similar acceleration is also achieved when the functions satisfy the Polyak-Lojasiewicz condition. Empirical experiments demonstrate that SCSG outperforms stochastic gradient methods on training multi-layers neural networks in terms of both training and validation loss.

Review:
Summary:
This paper proposes a variant of a family of stochastic optimization algorithms SCSG (closely related to SVRG), and analyzes it in the context of non-convex optimization. The main difference is that the outer loop computes a gradient on a random subset of the data, and the stochastic gradients in the inner loop have a random cardinality and are not restricted to those participating in the outer gradient. The analysis of the stochastic gradients despite this mismatch is the main technical contribution of the paper. The result is a set of new bounds on the performance of the algorithm which improve on both sgd and variance reduced algorithms, at least in the low-medium accuracy regimes. Experimental evidence supports the claims of improvement in objective reduction (both training error and test error) per iteration both before the end of the first pass on data and after, both by SCSG over SGD and by varying batch size variant over the fixed size variant, but only on two networks applied to the venerable and small MNIST dataset. 
Pros of acceptance:
- The claimed results are interesting and shed light on an important regime.
- The proof method might be more widely applicable.
Cons:
- The experimental section is insufficient for the claims made.
Quality:
Theoretical contribution: 
The main contribution of the paper seems to be an analysis of the discrepancy due to using partial long-term gradients, using the behavior of sampled means without replacement. If novel, this is a useful contribution to our understanding of a trick that is practically important for SVRG-type algorithms.
I’ve spot checked a few proofs in the supplementary material, and found a minor error:
-	Lemma B.3 assumes eta_j*L < 1, but table 2 does not mention L in giving the step sizes.
The empirical evaluation uses only one small and old dataset, which is bad methodology (there are many old small datasets, any reasonable algorithm will be good at one). Other than that, it is well designed, and the comparison in terms of number of gradients is reasonable, but should be complemented by a wall-time comparison as some algorithms have more overhead than others. The paper claims SCSG is never worse than SVRG and better in early stages; this justifies a direct comparison to SVRG (with B = n) for each part. An added plot in the existing comparison for early stages, and also a separate experiment that compares (on a log-log plot) the rates of local convergence to high precision inside a basin of attraction. 
Clarity:
The paper is written quite well: the algorithm is clear including the comparison to previous variants of SCSG and of SVRG, the summary of bounds is helpful, and the presentation of bounds in appropriate detail in different parts. 
Some minor comments:
-	L.28 table 1: 
o	What is “best achievable” referring to in [26,27]? A lower bound? An algorithm proven optimal in some sense? should that be "best available" instead?
-	L.30 - 33: these sentences justify the comparison to SGD in a precision regime, but are not very clear. Substituting at the desired regime (eps = n^-1/2 or some such) would make the bounds directly comparable.
-	L.56 - 59 are confusing. Applying variance reduction in the non-convex is not novel. 
-	Algorithm 1, L.2: \subset instead of \in, for consistency use the concise notation of 7.
-	L.106: “In order to minimize the amount the tuning works” something is wrong with that sentence.
-	L.116: “and the most of the novelty” first “the” is probably superfluous.  
Supplementary material:
-	L.8 n should be M
-	L.13 B > 0 does not appear in the rest of the lemma or in the proof. Presume it is \gamma?
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Originality:
I leave to reviewers more up to date with the non-convex literature to clarify whether the claimed novelties are such.
Significance:
This paper seems to complete the analysis of the existing SCSG, a practical SVRG variant, to the common non-convex regime. Specifically, showing theoretically that it improves on SGD in early stages is quite important.
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Updates made after rebuttal phase:
- The authors addressed the issues I'd raised with the proofs. One was a typo, one was a misinterpretation on my part. There may well still be quality issues, but they appear to be minor. I removed the corresponding con. I think the paper could be an 8 if its empirical evaluation was not so flawed.