Paper:
As machine learning becomes ubiquitous, deployed systems need to be as accurate as they can. As a result, machine learning service providers have a surging need for useful, additional training data that benefits training, without giving up all the details about the trained program. At the same time, data owners would like to trade their data for its value, without having to first give away the data itself before receiving compensation. It is difficult for data providers and model providers to agree on a fair price without first revealing the data or the trained model to the other side. Escrow systems only complicate this further, adding an additional layer of trust required of both parties. Currently, data owners and model owners don't have a fair pricing system that eliminates the need to trust a third party and training the model on the data, which 1) takes a long time to complete, 2) does not guarantee that useful data is paid valuably and that useless data isn't, without trusting in the third party with both the model and the data. Existing improvements to secure the transaction focus heavily on encrypting or approximating the data, such as training on encrypted data, and variants of federated learning. As powerful as the methods appear to be, we show them to be impractical in our use case with real world assumptions for preserving privacy for the data owners when facing black-box models. Thus, a fair pricing scheme that does not rely on secure data encryption and obfuscation is needed before the exchange of data. This paper proposes a novel method for fair pricing using data-model efficacy techniques such as influence functions, model extraction, and model compression methods, thus enabling secure data transactions. We successfully show that without running the data through the model, one can approximate the value of the data; that is, if the data turns out redundant, the pricing is minimal, and if the data leads to proper improvement, its value is properly assessed, without placing strong assumptions on the nature of the model. Future work will be focused on establishing a system with stronger transactional security against adversarial attacks that will reveal details about the model or the data to the other party.

Review:
Summary
The paper addresses the issues of fair pricing and secure transactions between model and data providers in the context of machine learning real-world application.
Major
The paper addresses an important issue regarding the real-world application of machine learning, that is, the transactions between data and model provider and the associated aspects of fairness, pricing, privacy, and security.
The originality and significance of the work reported in this paper are difficult to comprehend. This is largely due to the lack of clarity, in general, and the lack of distinction between what is known and what is proposed. I failed to find any clear description of the proposed approach and any evaluation of the main idea.
Most of the discussions in the paper are difficult to follow due to that many of the statements are vague or unclear. There are some examples of this vagueness illustrated under “minor issues”. Together, the many minor issues contribute to a major communication issue, which significantly reduces readability of the paper. A majority of the references included in the reference section lack some or all of the required meta data.
In my view, the paper is out of scope for ICLR. Neither the CFP overview nor the (non-exhaustive) list of relevant topics suggest otherwise. In very general terms, the paper could of course be characterised as dealing with machine learning implementation/platform/application but the issues discussed are more connected to privacy, security, fair transactions, and pricing.
In summary; although there is no universal rule on how to structure research papers, a more traditional structure (introduction, aim & scope, background, related work, method, results, analysis, conclusions & future work) would most certainly have benefitted the paper through improved clarity and readability. Although some interesting works on adversarial learning, federated learning, and privace-preserving training are cited in the paper, the review and use of these references did not contribute to a better understanding of the topic or the significance of the contribution in this paper. I was unable to find any support in the paper for the strong general result stated in the abstract (“We successfully show that without running the data through the model, one can approximate the value of the data”).
Minor issues (examples)
- “Models trained only a small scale of data” (missing word)
- “to prevent useful data from not being paid” (unclear meaning)
- “while the company may decline reciprocating gifts such as academic collaboration, while using the data for some other service in the future” (unclear meaning)
- “since any data given up is given up ” (unclear meaning)
- “a user of a centralized service who has given up their data will have trouble telling if their data exchange was fair at all (even if their evaluation was purely psychological)” (unclear meaning)
- “For a generally deployed model, it can take any form. Designing a transaction strategy for each one can be time-consuming and difficult to reason about” (unclear meaning)
- “(et al., 2017)” (unknown reference)
- “Osbert Bastani, Carolyn Kim, and Hamsa Bastani. Interpreting blackbox models via model extraction, 2017” (incomplete reference data)
- “Song Han, Huizi Mao, and William J. Dally. Deep compression: Compressing deep neural networks with pruning, trained quantization and huffman coding, 2015.
Geoffrey Hinton, Oriol Vinyals, and Jeff Dean. Distilling the knowledge in a neural network, 2015.
Pang Wei Koh and Percy Liang. Understanding black-box predictions via influence functions, 2017.” (Incomplete reference data)
- “H. Brendan McMahan, Eider Moore, Daniel Ramage, Seth Hampson, and Blaise Agera y Arcas. Communication-efficient learning of deep networks from decentralized data. 2016.” (Incomplete reference data)
- “et al. Richard Craid.” (Incorrect author reference style)
- “Ryo Yonetani, Vishnu Naresh Boddeti, Kris M. Kitani, and Yoichi Sato. Privacy-preserving visual learning using doubly permuted homomorphic encryption, 2017.
Chiyuan Zhang, Samy Bengio, Moritz Hardt, Benjamin Recht, and Oriol Vinyals. Understanding deep learning requires rethinking generalization, 2016.” (Incomplete reference data)